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 Yoh  :hand: I decided to write another fic here!!! And it's takagaki again !!!  :ptam-ok: Let's spread the TakaGaki Love here!!!!!!!!!!! Come on Let's Go!!!!!!!!  :on gay:

 
 CHAPTER 1


 Sitting alone at their garden, Niigaki Risa look up at the night sky and smiled. She's thinking about what happened this whole day. Her small smile changed into a grin. She still remembers how Tanaka Reina, her crush, smiled at her. She blushed thinking that. Then suddenly..

 "Gaki.." There's someone calling her. She turned her head here and there. "Gaki.." She can't find the person calling for her although the voice sounds familiar. "Gaki.." The voice became more gentle. She stood up and walk a little towards their gate..no, the voice was coming from their neighborhood. Then she found the owner of the voice,  standing with her hands on her waist and calling for.. a dog?. Her neighbor smiled when the dog jumped on her. "Good girl Gaki.." Her neighbor chuckled. Then she seemed to notice her and waved at her. "Hey Risa-chan, what are you doing there?" Her neighbor asked innocently. Risa just frowned at her. She knows that it was one of her neighbor's funny actions. "I'm calling for my dog not you.." her neighbor said, suppressing her laughter.

 "Ai-chan.." she said not smiling. "Will you please stop calling your dog Gaki?"

 "Why?"

 "Because that's my name.!" She said stomping her feet.

 "Huh? I thought your name is Risa not Gaki.."

 "That's my nickname!"

 "Eh?But she's my dog, I have all the rights to give her that name."

 "But not my nickname!"

 "Oh sorry.. You can't change it. It was now written on her birth certificate.." Ai shrugged.

 "Birth certificate?!" She yelled.

 "Yupps! So, If you'll excuse me, I need to go.. ja ne!" Then Ai, together with her dog enters their house.

 "Baka!" She yelled again. now, her beautiful day became an unlucky day seeing her.

 It was Ai Takahashi. her classmate since kindergarten, until now that they were in college. And since Middle school, Ai Takahashi never failed to annoyed her. Almost every day, three times a day. And the worst, she's the bestfriend of her Reina. She sighed and she stopped thinking about her neighbor.

 "Just be thankful that you're Reina's bestfriend!!"

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 The next morning, she's getting ready for school. Someone knocked on her door. "Risa-chan..breakfast is ready..come down.. let's eat together with Ai-chan.."

 "Ehh?!" She immediately opened the door. "Ai-chan?"

 "Yes, come on!" Her mom pulled her to the kitchen and there she saw a ever gorgeous Ai Takahashi sitting there and talking with her sister.

 "What are you doing here?" She asked raising her eyebrow.

 "Eating.." Ai simply answered.

 "And why?" She asked again.

 "Risa, her parents are in a vacation now, So I invited Ai-chan here.." It was her Mom.

 "But Mama!" she said "I can't eat properly when she's here! She's a distraction!!"

 "Oh, please don't mind my beauty Risa-chan.." Ai said who earned a glare from her. She only smiled innocently. "Tita, Risa hate me.. i wonder why.. She's my only friend here after all."

 "You're not my friend." She argued.

 "But we're childhood friends ah! I can still remember when you and I made a promise under the moonlight that we will love each other forever.." Ai said smirking at her.

 "How dare you.."

 "Oh that's sweet.."

 "One word from you and -"

 "Is it true Ai-chan? You and onee-chan made a promise?" It was her sister.

 "Yes Erina-chan.." Ai answered not minding the death glare she's giving to her. "We really love each other back then."

 "Okay.. enough with this..!" She said standing up.

 "Hey ! Wait for me Risa-chan!" Ai said taking her own bag. "We're classmates you know.."

 "Ai-chan por favor!" She breathed hard. "Leave me alone!"

 "Huh? I'm not following you.." Ai said.

 "Stop making fun of me! Stop embarrassing me!" Her face turns red from anger.

 Ai only laugh at her. "I'm not making fun of you, I was-"

 "Shut up!" She hissed. "Shut up just once!" She said then she walked away from her.

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 In their University, Risa enters their room and was surprised  when she saw Tanaka Reina  talking with..well Ai Takahashi. She saw Ai look at her then she say something to Reina. Then Reina turned to her. "Yoh Gaki-san!"

 She automatically smiled. "Hi, Tanaka-san.."

 "Aw come on Risa-chan!" It was Ai. "Where's the monster-like Risa before?"

 She gave Ai a glare. "Shut up." She said between her teeth. Then she smiled at Reina again.

 "So, class is starting, See you..!" Reina walked of the room.

 "You really like her huh.." It was Ai again.

 Risa ignore her and she goes to her chair. "But sorry, Reina doesn't like you.."

 The bean try not to yell. She inhaled then exhaled before turning to her. "How do you know that."

 "She's my bestfriend,  I know all about her." Ai shrugged. "She liked cute women and although she's a petite one, she like tall girls, unlike you, you're an ordinary person."

 Risa stood up and walk to Ai with a mad expression and with a super saiyan aura. Ai only looked at her with a slight brightness on her eyes. "You know Ai-chan don't you dare to insult me again-"

 "I'm not insulting you, I'm just telling the truth."

 "You're insulting me!" She said breathlessly trying to be calm.

 "Risa-chan-"

 "Stop calling me Risa you're not my friend!"

 Ai sighed. "Okay.. I'll tell Reina about it then."

 "Tell her what?'

 "That you like her."

 "Oh no you won't do that!"

 "Wanna try me?"

 "Ai-chan!!!"

 "Reina likes someone else.." Ai said,serious. "Give up Risa.."

 "Don't tell me that thing.. you don't know anything."

 "If I were you, I would love someone else. you're pretty,  I'm sure there's someone who will love you, only you, don't focus yourself Reina, she doesn't like you and she'll never will."

 "If you're jealous Ai-chan, tell me, you don't have to say those things."

 "Me?Jealous?" Ai only laugh. "You think I'm jealous because of that? Oh come on!!"

 "Then fine!" Risa said then turned her back and she never saw Ai's bright smile turned into a sad one.

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 "Have you heard the news about Tanaka-san and the mysterious woman?"

 Risa stopped walking when she heard the name. "Yes, is it true?" There are 2 girls gossiping about Reina.

 "They said it's her girlfriend."

 "Really? we need to know all the details!"

 "Okay.. let's ask Takahashi-san!"

 Then she remembers Ai's word. 'Reina likes someone else..' Well she need to know the truth. She continued walking until she reached the rooftop. She knows Ai-chan was here. She opened the door and found Ai humming her head like crazy.

 "Ai-chan.." She called her.

 Ai turned to her then smiled. "Oi funny seeing you here Risa-chan.."

 "No it's not funny.." She said walking towards her.

 "Then, why are you here? do you need something?"

 "Yes, i have something to ask you.."

 "Sure go ahead.." Ai smiled at her.

 "Who's that mysterious girl with Reina?" Ai-chan's smile faded, then she heard her sighed.

 "You don't have to know.."

 "Why?"

 "It's none of your business anymore." Ai turned her back to her. Then she turned again with a mischievous grin. "I will tell you in one condition."

 "Okay.."

 "Just say: ' Ai-chan.. who is that girl? I need to know please?' with a sweet voice."

 "What? you're making fun of me again."

 "Okay.. I won't tell you then." Ai starts walking away.

 "Chotto!" Ai stopped walking. "I'll do that.! Risa said blushing.

 "Go ahead." Ai leaned her back at the door with her arms crossed on her chest.

 "A-ai-chan.. w-who's..t-that girl.. I-i-i need to know..p-please.." She pleaded with a 'sweet'voice.

 "Pft!" Ai covered her mouth. "What's that?" Ai started laughing and it really annoyed her. "Hahahaha!"

 "Stop laughing baka!" She yelled then she kicked Ai's knee.

 "Itai!" Ai kneel down. "what the.."

 "Are you going to tell me or what?!"

 "Don't shout at me!" Ai also yelled. "You were just asking me, you need to kind to me! I changed my mind i won't tell you who's the girl.!" Then Ai walked away from her.

 "What's wrong with her?"...

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 Happy birthday Sayu!!!  :on BDay: hihihihi ja ne!  :nya:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #1, 7-13-12)
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2012, 07:42:38 AM »
Ai-chan playing games with Risa XD

Nice start to this fic too
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10,11-09-12)
« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2012, 04:58:57 AM »
 

  CHAPTER 2

 
 "Risa wake up.." Risa groaned and mumbled some incoherent words. "Risa wake up..!"

 "Let me sleep Mama!!" she whined.

 "Ah ah.. Time for breakfast.. come on! wake up.."

 Risa sighed then she rolled on her bed until she drop down on the floor. "Ahh.."

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 "Finish your breakfast quick Risa." Her mother said.

 "Why?"

 "You need to bring these foods to Ai-chan." Her Mom answered,giving her a plastic container. "She's sick."

 "Eh? Why me?"

 "Because she's your friend."

 "I am not." She pouts.

 "Take a bath first before you to her house."

 "Hmp!!"

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 "Ai-chan..!" Risa called outside, she was now in front of Ai's house. "Yohoo! Ai Takahashi!" She called again. She scratched her head. Then she saw Ai's head.

 "Risa-chan.." A weak voice calling her. "Come here.."

 "Eh?" She opened the front gate then she walked towards the front door and opened it. She stumbled on the clothes and things on the floor. Then she saw Ai sitting on the sofa,wearing a pair of pajama with a messy hair and red face probably because of her fever. "You deserve that Ai-chan..from bullying me." She said. Ai only smiled weakly at her. Her eyes seemed sleepy. "Have you take your medicine?" she asked. Ai only shook her head. The bean sighed. "Here, eat this first." Risa opened the plastic container then she take the chopsticks and get some foods and held it up to Ai's mouth. "Say ahh"

 "A-ah!" She watched Ai chewed the food until she finished eating. "Oishii.."

 "Thank my mother for that."

 "Nee Risa-chan.. are you going to take care of me today?" She asked still in a weak voice.

 "No, I'm here to take revenge.." She joked.

 "Arigato.." Ai said smiling then Ai hugged her. She felt her heart skip a beat because of that. She could heel Ai's hot temperature and her breathe on her neck."

 "Okay..okay.." Risa said stroking Ai's back. They were in that position for a minute so she decided to break the hug Ai's weight constricting her movement. "Ai-chan.." She called her but Ai didn't answer. "Ai-chan.." She gently lifted Ai's shoulder and found that she's now sleeping. "Sleep Well Sleepy head." Risa gently pushed her down on the sofa. She stared at Ai's face for a while. She's really pretty.. She touched Ai's face and stroked it. It;s so hot. It's quite funny to see her in this condition, so vulnerable. The bean stopped stroking Ai's face when she realized that she's blushing. Instead of doing stupid things, The bean decided to clean this house.

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 After an hour...

 "What are you doing here?" The first sentence Ai spoke when she woke up. She saw Risa cleaning her house.

 "Cleaning your house ojou-san.." Risa answered. She touched Ai's forehead then she nodded. "You should thank me.."

 "No need." Ai pushed Risa's hands away.

 "What?"

 "There's something fishy..why are you doing this?" Ai asked narrowing her eyes.

 "Because I'm your friend.." risa answered shrugging.

 "You said I'm not your friend."

 "That was a long time ago, forget about that." Risa smiled.

 "Don't fool me."

 "Okay..I'm doing this for you because I wanted to know something about that girl.. you know.. the mysterious girl with my Reina.." The bean admitted.

 "So, you're using me.." Ai mumbled. "I won't tell you about her, and stop saying 'My Reina' she's not yours." Ai said in a irritated tone. then she stood up and walked to the kitchen. But Risa followed her.

 "Ai-chan please!! Tell me something!!" she whined.

 "No and that's final.. and stop whining you're annoying me."

 "But Ai-chan!!"

 "If you are here just to ask that, then you can leave."

 "No." Risa said firmly.

 "Are you sure.."

 "Yes! I'm not leaving unless you tell me something.."

 "Okay.." Then,Ai, without a word, slowly unbuttoned her pajama top, one by one in a seductive way. Risa's eyes widened in shock. She feels her cheek  blush.

 "W-what are you doing!?" She asked in a panic voice.

 "What do you think?" Ai said.  She can see Ai's collarbone and a bit of her undergarment.

 "I-i.. S-stop stripping!!"

 "Why? this is my house, I can strip everywhere. "Ai said, completely finished on her strip show.

  Risa close her eyes tightly and covered it with her hand. "Pervert!!" She yelled then she quickly run almost bumping on a chair. "Itaii! I really hate you Ai Takahashi!!" And she could still hear Ai's laughter outside the house. She stands still in front of their house for a moment. Then she placed her hand on her left chest. "Stop beating fast.."

 "Risa.." She heard Ai calling her. But she didn't move. "Don't worry I'm wearing a shirt.." Ai chuckled.

 She turned to her finally. "What?"

 "Thank you.." Ai said in a soft voice, staring straight in her eyes. "Very much.."

 Risa cleared her throat. She wanted to say something but she can't because of the fast beating of her heart. So she just nodded her head and she enters their house.

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 Short chapter right.. hihihi  :philippines: :byebye: time to make some spell  :prayers:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #2, 7-14-12)
« Reply #3 on: July 14, 2012, 06:13:34 AM »
that little strip tease opened up a conversation between the two maybe a little more than they expected
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #4 on: July 16, 2012, 05:34:48 AM »
 CHAPTER 3


 Silently groaned in frustration, Niigaki Risa drop her head on her laptop. She was doing her thesis. But she's definitely out of her mind. She remembered the fast beating of her heart last night when Ai-chan thanked her. She wasn't supposed to feel that way towards her. And besides, she liked Reina. "What am I thinking?" The bean closed her laptop and decided to to go to the bakeshop located inside in their subdivision. It's just a walking distance from their home. she entered the cute bakeshop owned by Tsuji Nozomi. And she frowned when she saw Ai on the counter talking to Tsuji. And at the same time, her crazy heart beat faster than usual.

 "Yoh Gaki-san!" Tsuji greet her with a smile.

 "Hi Nono.." She smiled then she turned to Ai and frowned again.

 "What are you doing here Risa-chan?" Ai asked. "Don't tell me you're following me here?"

 "Assuming.." She said and gave Ai a dirty look. "I'm here to buy and eat cakes.. it's a bakeshop not a street." She turned to Tsuji. "No offence meant Nono." Tsuji nodded her head. "People are coming here to taste the delicious cakes that Nono made, unlike you, you're just here to gossip."

 "Huh? Actually I was going to order a cake and gave it to you.." Ai said.

 "What?" 'Give me a cake?'

 'Yes.. I know you're in trouble making our thesis." Ai said, shaking her head. "Shocks! Risa-chan, you're hopeless.." She said trying not to laugh.

 Risa gritted her teeth and she clenched her hands into a fist. She thought she's concerned but she's not. "Well, I don't even need your cake, I can buy my own cake."

 "But I already bought your favorite chocolate mousse."

 "That's not my favorite.." She mumbled.

 "Hey Ai-chan.. stop teasing our little brat." Nono said smiling.

 "I'm not tesing her. bu the way, here's your cake. Good luck." Ai said giving her the box of cake then she leave.

 "Don't worry.. She really did buy that." Nono said.

 "I'm going to give it back to her." She said. Then she followed Ai outside. But she stopped on her tracks when she saw her talking with another girl She felt something's squeezing her heart. What's this feeling? Jealousy? No wait.. She's not jealous okay?

 "Ai-chan." She called but she's too busy flirting to that girl. "Ai-chan." She called again a little louder this time.

 "Oh Risa-chan!" Finally Ai turned to her.

 "Here's your cake." She handed her the box.

 "No, that's yours."

 "I said I don't need it."

 "But I bought that for you." Ai pointed the box of cake. Then she continued to chat with the girl again and it really pissed her off!

 "And I said I don't need this!" She said pushing the box  roughly on Ai's chest and she walked away.

 "Hey, lover's quarrel my friend?" A voice from her behind spoke. Risa turned to see Miyabi., she put her arms around the bean's shoulder.

 "Shut up Miya." Ai said takaing away Miya's hand on her shoulder.

 "Ai-chan, if you like her, then tell her." Another voice again It was Fujimoto Miki. "Or else.." Miki lifted her chin with her finger.

 "Don't touch Risa, idiot!" Ai said in a deadly tone before pushing Miki harsly. Then she gave the box to her again. "It's yours.. accept it or I'll throw it."

 "Come on Gaki-san don't accept that.." Sayu playfully said.

 "Shut up.." She glared at Sayu. "Risa.." Ai looked at her with a pleading eyes.

 She sighed. "Thank you.." She mumbled then Ai smile again.

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 "A cake!!" Erina jumped in joy when she saw the cake that she's holding.

 "Yupps! Come here let's eat this.." She smiled. "Where's Mama?" she asked.

 "Supermarket." Erina simply answered.

 Risa opened the box and cut the cake. She gave Erina a plate. "Ai-chan gave it to me."

 "Honto ni? Hmmhmm.." Erina just nodded her head. "She came here an hour ago, she's looking for you but I told her you're busy.."

 "Ahh.."

 "She really likes you onee-chan."

 "Ssh! Of course not! What gave you that idea?" She blushed.

 "Because.." Erina put her finger on her chin as if thinking for something. "She's always making you mad, that's her way of showing her affection."

 "Oh no not true.." She chuckled nervously.

 Erina shrugged. "Well, she told me that before.." Erina mumbled. But Risa didn't hear that.

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  :peace: hihihi ja ne !  :philippines:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2012, 06:38:56 AM »
Erina gets cake and Risa still is confused on how to take Ai's affection
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2012, 01:11:21 PM »
how comes i got this feeling that their relationship gonna be twists and turns

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2012, 01:17:39 PM »
 hehe you'll see my friend :)

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2012, 02:01:19 PM »
oh  :lol:
i'll wait to see  :lol: :lol:
can't wait to see your next chapter soon  :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #9 on: July 20, 2012, 10:27:21 PM »
Yay, a Takagaki story!  :deco:

Lol, Aichan annoys Gaki-san xD And Gaki-san starts to have feelings towards Aichan  :wub: Or at least I think so.

And I laughed so hard when Ai started to strip in front of Risa xD Great way to scare someone away from you! Though I think later Gaki wont run away. She'll enjoy the show  ;) *Me and my perv mind...* xD

But nice story! =) I hope you will update more soon!


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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
« Reply #10 on: July 25, 2012, 03:35:39 AM »

 @ MsSmigge :  :lol: thanks for reading it my  friend.. hehe  and here's the next chapter !  :heart:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #11 on: July 25, 2012, 04:35:06 AM »
 CHAPTER 4


  "Hey, this place is cute like me ne, Risa-chan?" Her cousin Sayumi smiled before she took a sip of her juice. Risa just nods her head. They were eating cakes at Tsuji's bakeshop while talking about random stuff.

 "Of course." Risa smiled as well. "It's even more beautiful because of my Reina."

 "Reina again?" Sayu rolled her eyes. "You know I'm starting to hear this name a lot, and its really annoy me."

 "I told you I like her." She pouts.

 "Yeah yeah.." Then they heard the sound of the bell chime at the door indicating that someone entered the bakeshop. "Oh kawaii.."

 Risa turned her head and she found Ai Takahashi there, walking slowly towards them and smiling at her. "Yoh Risa-chan! Nice seeing you here!" Ai said waving her hand then she looked at Sayu. "Hi there Miss?"

 "Sayu, Michishige Sayumi, Risa's cousin." Sayu smiled. "And you are?"

 "Takahashi Ai at your service."

 "Ah you're Risa's girlfriend?"

 Risa choked on her food when she heard that. She looked at Sayu with wide eyes but she just smiled innocently at her. Then she looked at Ai, she has a confused expression at first but eventually she smiled playfully at her. "Ahh.. no?" Ai said.

 "What? You're not? Oh.." Sayu then turned to her. "But she's your special someone right Risa-chan?"

 "Sayu what are you saying?!" She said blushing.

 "I never know you had a hidden desire at me Risa-chan, " Ai said smiling like a devil; herself.

 "Shut up!" she huffed grabbing Sayu's wrist and pulled her out oh that bakeshop. "Sayu are you crazy? Saying those things to that idiot?" She asked, irritation on her voice.

 "Hey, I;m just clearing your messy mind cousin, I know you like her, not that Reina." Sayu crossed her arms on her chest and smiled. " And that idiot there likes you too.."

 "Heh!"

 "Onee-chan!" Suddenly there's a cute little girl who come running to them.

 "Haruka-chan!" Risa smiled.

 "Onee-chan, Next would be my birthday! Please come to my party Onee-chan!" That cute little girl smiled sweetly then she looked at Sayu. "You too please onee-chan."

 "Aww what a sweet girl.. What's your name kid?" Sayu asked.

 "Kudou Haruka" The child answers.

 "Uhm what present do you like" Sayu asked again.

 "It's okay Onee-chan.." The kid shook her head.

 "Hmm what's your parent's name?" Sayu asked again. The kid told them her parent's name in confusion. "Okay because you're a sweet and cute little girl, I will also give your parents a gift." Sayu smiled.

 "H-hai.." Haruka nods her head still confused then she runs away.

 Risa looked at Sayu. "Sayu are you crazy? Why did you tell her that you're giving her parents a gift?"

 "Because she's cute like me!"

 "We all know you are not fond of kids." She frowned.

 "People changed."

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 "Ahh this is life.." Adjusting her black rimmed eyeglasses, Sayu take a sip of her orange juice. She was  at the front yard of her cousin's house, wearing a two piece swimsuit like she was in a beach.

 "Oh my gosh Sayu!!!" Risa immediately walked fast towards her with a wide eyes. "What are you doing?!" Risa asked in horror completely shocked at the scene. Sayu was wearing a swimsuit in their front yard!

 "Sunbathing.." Sayu simply answered.

 "Sunbathing?! In our garden?! Are you out of your mind?! This is not a beach!! My goodness!"

 "Nope, I'm just imagining that I was in a beach ,"

 "OMG Get dress! What if someone see you?!"

 "Why?"

 "We're going to buy a gift remember?"

 "But I'm not in the mood for that." Sayu whines.

 "Sayu you promised the little girl that you're giving her a gift and her parents!"

 "Yes but I'm too lazy to go out. Please buy it for me ?" Sayu looked at her with a cute puppy eyes or rather bunny eyes.

 She sighed. "Okay but please wear a decent dress.."

 "Okay!"

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 Niigaki Risa jumped in shock when someone grabbed her shoulders from behind. She turned around and saw Ai there, smiling from ear to ear. She could have kick her right now if they weren't in a public place. She was walking slowly in a mall buying a gift for Haruka, thanks to Sayumin. "You?"

 "Yes me.." Ai chuckled.

 "What are you doing here?" She asked.

 "Huh? Are you alright?" Ai said chuckling a little. "Shopping of course how about you?"

 She held up the plastic she's carrying. "Shopping also."

 "Let me help you.." Ai took the plastic from her hand. "Woah! Risa-chan what's this? A steel?"

 "No, that's a bowl for Haruka's birthday, Sayu promised her that she would also give her parents a present."

 "Huh? What-"

 "Ai-chan! Gaki-san!" They turned their head and found Tanaka Reina walking towards them.

 "Hey Reina.." Ai smiled.

 "What are you two doing here?" Reina sked. "Don't tell me you're dating?"

 "Ah no-"

 "Yes we're going out." Her words being cut off when Ai the devil spoke. Then Ai's arms snaked around her waist and held it tightly.

 "Oh you two being together are cute!" Reina said smiling. "Take care of my friend ne Gaki-san?"

 "No we are not a-"

 "Oh yes she would don't worry.!" Ai laughed. "In fact-ouch!" Ai silently groaned in pain when she stepped hardly on her feet.

 "Yes Ai-chan?"

 "Aww.. n-nothing.. " Ai said trying her best not to yell in pain.

 "Okay.! I'll leave you two then, enjoy your date!" Reina waved at them then she started walking away.

 "Risa-chan that hurts!" Ai whined!

 "What the hell have you done!!" She pinched Ai's cheek.

 "Aww! Itai! That really hurts!" Risa let go of the cheek. Ai rubbed her red face and looked at her. "Why?"

 "Why? Baka! Why did you tell those things to Reina?!"

 "Okay I'm sorry I-"

 "Shut up go to hell!" She grabbed the plastic on Ai's hand then she kicked ker on her knee and she leave Ai-chan there groaning in pain.

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 hope you liked it   :sweatdrop:  :nervous so see you bye  :philippines:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #4, 7-25-12)
« Reply #12 on: July 25, 2012, 07:43:57 AM »
Sayu :lol:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #4, 7-25-12)
« Reply #13 on: July 27, 2012, 08:00:10 PM »
Aww this chapter was funny as hell!! xD


They were eating cakes at Tsuji's bakeshop while talking about random stuff.


OMGLOL Tsuji's bake shop??!! xD Somehow I could see Tsuji working at bake shop... x)


 "Ah you're Risa's girlfriend?"

 Risa choked on her food when she heard that. She looked at Sayu with wide eyes but she just smiled innocently at her.


Sayu I love you  :luvluv2: Score!  XD


 "Oh my gosh Sayu!!!" Risa immediately walked fast towards her with a wide eyes. "What are you doing?!" Risa asked in horror completely shocked at the scene. Sayu was wearing a swimsuit in their front yard!

 "Sunbathing.." Sayu simply answered.

 "Sunbathing?! In our garden?! Are you out of your mind?! This is not a beach!! My goodness!"

 "Nope, I'm just imagining that I was in a beach ,"

 "OMG Get dress! What if someone see you?!"


Niigaki Risa, the reaction queen <3

 "What are you two doing here?" Reina sked. "Don't tell me you're dating?"

 "Ah no-"

 "Yes we're going out." Her words being cut off when Ai the devil spoke. Then Ai's arms snaked around her waist and held it tightly.

 "Oh you two being together are cute!" Reina said smiling. "Take care of my friend ne Gaki-san?"


You heard that Gaki-san! You two are just too cute together  :luvluv1:

But Risa was evil when she left I in the shop and kicked and yelled at her :cry: Damn it make it up to her!!  :angry:

Nice chapter! Hopefully we will get more soon again  :)


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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #14 on: July 30, 2012, 06:09:24 AM »
 CHAPTER 5


 "Happy Birthday Haruka-chan!" Every one clapped their hands after singing a happy birthday song for the birthday girl Haruka.

 "I'm starting to like this party Risa-chan. They have different kinds of guests here." Sayu told her.

 "What do you mean?"

 "Look at them, there are adults, young, not so young, and young at heart." Sayu chucles.

 "Huh? You're funny." Then she looked on the guests, of course Tsuji Nozomi was here, Fujimoto miki, couple Ishikawa Rika and Yoshizawa hitomi and Takahashi Ai. Reina wasn't here because of her schedule and even Kamei Eri.

 "Hey, I'm going to get some food, how about you.." Sayu asked standing up.

 "Un, go ahead.." She smiled and her simple smile became wider when she saw 2 kids blocked on Sayu's way. Let's see your temper there cousin.. she thought. Then she heard someone who cleared her throat behind her. She turned her head and found a plate full of food in front of her holding by Ai.

 "I saw you not getting any food so as a good friend, I brought you these." Ai smiled. Risa just sighed. Since when did Ai became this beautiful? She took a plate. "thanks.."

 "Aww what a sweet girlfriend you are Ai-chan.." Pretyy-handsome Yoshizawa Hitomi spoke. Beside her was her lover Ishikawa rika.

 "She's not my girlfriend Yossi."

 "Really? Then you should tell her now that you like her-ouch!"

 "Shut your mouth Yocchan! Go get me a cake!" Rika pulled Yossi on her ears away from them. She looked at Ai with a confused expression. She saw Ai's face blushed a little and then she turned to her.

 "Ah I.. I'll get you a cake too Risa-chan!" Ai said quickly walking away from her.

 Did Yossi was trying to say that Ai like her? She secretly smiled and watched Ai-chan's back.

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 Michishige Sayumi slowly walking down the sidewalk of this subdivision. Risa was in school that's why she was going alone to eat cakes. "Anyway, why did I take this fan again?" she asked herself while looking at the fan she was holding , there was a printed face of Reina there. She threw it away out of nowhere and it landed on someone's front yard.

 "Hey! Who the hell threw this damn fan here!"

 Sayu flinched a little then she turned to see a woman standing angrily on her yard holding the poor fan. the woman has a beautiful face, sleepy eyes and a pouty lips she had never seen. Then her gaze moved down on the woman's neckline and saw a necklace. She narrowed her eyes to have a better look at the pendant. She had that kind of pendant too but she gave it to a special friend. She looked up again to the woman's face and realized something. "Eririn!!!" She pointed the woman.The girl looked at her with wide eyes and with a knotted forehead. Sayu called her again. "Eririn!!!"

 "Excuse me do I know you?" the woman asked.

 She smiled and walk towards the girl and hugged her. "It's me! Sayumin! Michishige Sayumi!!"

 The girl broke the hug and looked at her. "Sayumin?"

 "Yes!Remember that pendant? I gave that to you!"

 "I'm sorry but I don't know you.."

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 Sayu again was bored! She was left again alone on their house! She thought Risa would spend a time with her that's why she decided to have a vacation here. it's a good thing saw her childhood friend here. I'ts been ten years since she last saw Eririn. And speaking of her.. The door of the bakeshop suddenly open and her prey enters the shop with a serious face as usual and was carrying a laptop. She sat  on the table away from her. Sayu knew that Eri saw her. So she sat up, with a coffee jelly in hand, and walk towards Eri.

 "Oi Eririn what's up?" But Eri only looked at her then she went back typing again. Then a waitress approach them and ask Eri's order and leave. "It was nice seeing you here Eririn." She smiled.

 "Don't call me Eririn.. I'm not a kid anymore." Finally Eri talked to her.

 "Wooh! You must be a big and pretty woman now but you're still the little Eririn I used to know.. And besides I'm your bestfriend."

 "You're not my besfriend."

 Sayu frowned but she smiled again. "Okay fine, just friends.. so how are you these past 10 years?" She asked.

 "Sayu will you please stop talking to me I'm busy!" Eri said in a irritated tone.

 "Oi your temper Eririn.. I told you too much radiation is bad for your health. You should only look at me.. I'm cute.. so it's healthy.."  She winked.

 "Don't you know you are disturbing me? Can't you see I'm busy?"

 "You should loosen up a bit, come on take a break, look at me I'm too smart to have a grand vacation." Sayu shrugged.

 "That's not a talent.. laziness.."

 "Yes you're right!" She smiled and took a spoonful of coffee jelly but she choked on it. she looked at Eri and make a peace sign.

 Eri just sighed then she move her hands upwards. She brushed  the corner of Sayu's mouth by her thumb. Sayu blushed and felt her heart stop beating for a moment. "I'm not doing this for you.." Eri said still wiping her kips.

 "Okay.." She nodded.

 "Don't assume that I'm concerned."

 "Sure.." Eri sigh then she stood up. "where are you going?"

 "Leave." Then Eri walk out of the shop.

 "You annoyed Eri again huh Shige-san?" Bakeshop owner Tsuji Nozomi approach her.

 "Nah .."

 "I never know she's your friend.."

 "Ah yes.. She's my childhood friend in Yamaguchi.. but she transfered to another school in high school.. I was her saviour there when our classmates bullying her."

 "What? Eri? Being bullied?" Tsuji laughed.

 "Yes.. but I'm glad she's a matured person now. by the way I really love this coffee jelly Tsuji-san.. It was the best coffee jelly!"

 "Really? I'm glad.. I will give you a 30 % discount for that!" Tsuji smiled.

 "Wow! thank you can I kiss you?"

 "That might be a nice idea but I think Eri won't like it." Tsuji pointed the door and saw Eri enters again "Oh Eri did you forgot something?" Tsuji asked.

 "Yes, my ballpen." Eri answered. Then she looked at her. "Are you finish eating that?" She asked her.

 "Huh? Ah yes?"

 "Well then let's go.!" Eri took her hands and hold it then she pulled her out of the bakeshop.

 TO BE CONTINUED.....

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  :dizzy: I hoped you liked it! See you next time!!
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
« Reply #15 on: July 31, 2012, 07:05:08 AM »
30% discount lol
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
« Reply #16 on: August 03, 2012, 07:46:42 PM »
Ai-Chan is being cute and serving Gaki-san some food  :wub: Kawaiii!
Gaki should finally realize that she and Ai are meant to be xD Everyone else can see it so why can't those two too?  :roll:

That Eri/Sayu interaction confused me a little bit  :dizzy: But maybe it will comes more clear in the future  ;)

Hopefully you will write more soon and make TakaGaki closer to each others onegai   :luvluv1: :kneelbow:
Keep up the good work!


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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
« Reply #17 on: August 04, 2012, 04:07:06 AM »
 ^ of course I would write more Takagaki raburabu here!!!   :glasses:don't worry  :bingo: hihihihi  :ding:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
« Reply #18 on: August 04, 2012, 10:54:17 AM »
Chapter 4.
it seems like aichan like the bean is an open secret that everyone knows except the bean...
finally.. the bean seems a bit soften on her attitude towards aichan...

Chapter 5.
feel like there is kind of misunderstanding happening between KameShige in the 10 years separation

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
« Reply #19 on: August 04, 2012, 07:16:42 PM »
^ of course I would write more Takagaki raburabu here!!!   :glasses:don't worry  :bingo: hihihihi  :ding:

Awwww YES!! :inlove: :inlove: *Can't wait*


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