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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2012, 11:46:54 AM »
Nice one shot, well I think you better switch over for my new one shot :)
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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2012, 11:50:09 AM »
Nice one shot, well I think you better switch over for my new one shot :)
really? :shy1:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2012, 11:57:06 AM »
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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #4 on: October 27, 2012, 12:50:23 PM »

 yellow !!!!! welcome !!! hohohohoho  :cow: :thumbsup :wigglypanda: :wigglypanda: i want chu chu  :ptam-kiss: :ptam-kill: :ptam-shy: yatta!!! kameshige goodness time !!!!!!!!!!!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #5 on: October 27, 2012, 12:51:41 PM »
how is it? :nervous
if really sucks, i won't write anymore in future :(

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #6 on: October 27, 2012, 01:23:36 PM »
 its cute dont worry !!! hahahahahahaha  :cow: :otomerika: :yossi: :shakeit: i want  moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !! moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! :yep: :heart: :D :bow:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #7 on: October 27, 2012, 01:29:32 PM »
but you have to make me happy first in your fictions... :P

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #8 on: October 27, 2012, 02:14:25 PM »
 yups but like i said before, im sick so i cant update  :fainted: :on roll: for now, i enjoy being a reader of your fic so yeah ? give me more takagaki raburabu okay??    :wub:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - There goes again... [27/10]
« Reply #9 on: October 27, 2012, 02:22:05 PM »
ok... maybe in future... i am now engaged in my revision  :sweatdrop:
actually i don't think i just want to write raburabu on them only... as you know, i am fickle-minded so... :pen_read:
but anyways, because i am quite towards this duo, i might end up writing more on them  :bigdeal:
yups, who knows

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #10 on: October 28, 2012, 03:44:56 AM »
It is a very interesting way of putting the two pieces together as their views reflect their thoughts as a battle
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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #11 on: October 28, 2012, 03:46:49 AM »
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story  :nervous
anyway, hope you like it.  :)

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #12 on: October 28, 2012, 04:25:00 AM »
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story  :nervous
anyway, hope you like it.  :)

I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard :)
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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #13 on: October 28, 2012, 04:27:52 AM »
well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2012, 04:31:37 AM »
because you see i am not a very good writer so i kinda approach the fiction in 2 perspectives of the characters to give the story  :nervous
anyway, hope you like it.  :)

I do like it that way, it is not the best in writing but understanding it is not hard :)
thanks... that's quite an encouraging comment for me.
as what i fear most... is what i have written is beyond comprehension :nervous
i really have a bad shadow when comes to writing... :cry:

thanks for your comments :)

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #15 on: October 28, 2012, 04:34:37 AM »
well that was .. WOW !! !! you are such a very good writer !! whoah !! write more ! this is so interesting !
really :lol:
i'm glad to hear that  :P
i'll write when i have the idea again.... please look forward  :lol:

and thanks once again for not breaking my heart in your newest update in the devil's kiss... i love you maikeatoot :ptam-kiss:

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #16 on: October 28, 2012, 04:37:45 AM »
yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - That dream (2-parts) [27/10]
« Reply #17 on: October 28, 2012, 04:40:27 AM »
yay !! mahal din kita <3 ! hehe that's a filipino word means i love you too ! yay ! update ! update ! go yellow ! how about daishi and riho.
to be frank, i really can't bring myself to have evil thoughts on these kids... please forgive me for that for now :nervous
but i will try if i ever find a good setting to write about them... please look forward...

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #18 on: October 28, 2012, 10:27:45 AM »
alternatively, if you want the access... you can also drop me a message here.

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Re: Yellow's Oneshots - Touch no evil [28/10]
« Reply #19 on: October 28, 2012, 10:44:22 AM »
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