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Time is good as gold - CH. 43 (MaYuki) | 24/04/2018
« on: November 04, 2012, 09:22:54 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

Hello everyone.. another fanfic? Yeahh my sister's girlfriend is almost over so i had to make another one! :P

My cyborg:  Feeling happy cause the new story line! :) 

I'm everything you need: Feeling uninspired!x_X;

Wild love: Every chapter gives me headache..because so much ideas on my head!!  ;)

Akb boarding school: keeping it longer cause it's my only fanfic which have my many pairings! xD  (but also think it's time to end)

My sister's girlfriend : Everything good has to end! :D

Kojijuu fanfic: Yep this one has to end too! :P

Loving you: It's to replace my sister girlfriend.. i think hope is going to be good as that one ^^;

Time is good as gold: I wanted to make a sad fanfic so hope you like it.. (MaYuki btw)

                                             CH. 1

So many people around me,touching me and checking my pulse..

"I'm okay as long she's by my side.." i tried to murmure but they didn't hear me cause my voice is not strong

"Doctor her pulse is dropping!" A nurse says worried

"They're carrying me on a stretcher and now i can't hear a thing that they're talking but does it really matter listen to them?"

"No,because i don't wanna hear anyway! i'm happy couse what i got in this short period.. i been in love,i been out of love, i been mad,i been sad,i been hungry"

But those feelins are nothing compare to her smile..

"I'll never forget that smile and also the name of the one who owned it.."

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." I murmure while i look up to the lights of the hospital that are on the ceiling

Many people had the wrong description of her..

*They would say she is strong (i would say she's vulnerable)

*They would say she has everything thag anyone wants ( i would say she's lonely)

The would say she's cruel (i would say she's just a kid)

*They would say she's unpredictable (i would say she's unique)

*They would say she's cold  (i would say she's sweet)

*They would say she's heartless (i would say she has too much love to give)

*They would call her black (i would call her Yukirin)

 The beginning: Before the little pov

In one of the most expensive girls school in Japan..

~Outside the headmaster office~

 "Yuki chan why you insist to not repect our teachers, Look where it got you to the principal office and i think they called your parents!" A handsome tomboy girl says while sits next to her friend

Yuki only looked other way annoyed

"Sae chan maths is about to start,let's go!" A girl says while takes her arm to pull her up

Sae sighs and gets up"Rena chan, i wanna stay here supporting Yuki chan!" she says complaining

"i think Yuki chan want us to go..Now" Rena says while pushes Sae with her

Yuki ignore the two and waited for her parents to come

Soon the headmaster's secretary told her to enter to the office

~Insisde the office~

Yuki sitted in front of the headmaster

"So Kashiwagi san when are you going to stop coming to my office?" The headmaster asked

Yuki ignored her

"i called your parents..*noise of the door opening*

Yuki smirks then turns her head and her smirk fade away when she saw her butler coming closer

"You again!" She shouted mad as she get up

"Kashiwagi san" The butler says shocked

"They are never going to come!" Yuki murmured looking other way

"They're on a business trip!" The butler says as she sits next to Yuki

Yuki runs away from the office pushing away the secretary who was entering to the office bringing coffee

"Get off my way!" Yuki says as she pushes her

"Kashiwagi san!" The headmaster shouted

"don't worry we'll pay for everything.." The butler says moving her head side to side

~Outside in the hall~ was already lunchtime so everyone was on the halls walking or chatting

"Yuki chan.." Someone says and grabs her by her arm

Yuki looked at the girl "let go bitch!" she says as she pushes her to the lockers

"Yuki chan!" Sae says worried but then someone grabbed her hand

"don't.." Rena murmured serious

Everyone looked at the scene

"what's wrong with you?"  Another girl with short hair asked as she helps the first girl to get up

"That's not of yor bussines!" Yuki says mad as she walks away with a black aura

Everyone moving of her way..

"Thanks Jurina!" The girl says

"Don't worry Sasshi!" Jurina replies with a smile then looked at the figure who was already many steps forward and pouted

"That girl.. i wish she'll pay everything she does to anyone in this school!" Jurina murmured

"Her family gives big donations to this school so she's the Queen!" Another girl says as she picks Sasshi's books from the floor

"Yui.." Sasshi says then smiled

~After a few minutes~
Yuki entered to her room still mad and started to destroy everything around

 "who needs you?" she shouted as she throws all the things that was on her desk on the floor then used a bat to destroy the tv

Sae and Rena stood outside hearing her friend shouting and destroying everything inside the room

"what are you looking at?" Sae asked to some girls who were also listening

*The girls walked away*

Soon Yuki got tired of crying and shouting so she throwed herself on bed and fell sleep

*Once Rena and Sae notice that they went to their room*

~After a few hours~

Mayuyu Are you sure about that? A sad mother asks as she watches her doughter putting her clothes inside a bag

"Mom,i'm gonna be fine that's school is amazing and i really wanna study there!" Mayu replies with a smile

"but.. you know.." Mayu's mom says sad

"Mom *sighs* i wanna live as a normal teenege girl before dying.." Mayu says as walks closer and hugs her mom

"You're my special child and you're not going to die!" She says as she kisses Mayu's head

Mayu breaks the hug and closes her bag "Now take me to that school!"

~Inside the car~

"You know i'm really proud of you.." Mayu's dad says with a smile

Mayu smile as she looks through the window

"entering to a rich kids school,it's not an easy thing so good luck!" Mayu's dad says

"Thanks.." Mayu says

"You know Mayu you always been strong,your stupid doctor thought you wouldn't make it to 16 years old but here you are!" Her dad says while drives

*Mayu's mom hit him on his head with a newspaper*

Mayu smiles

They got to the gates

"Those are big gates..." Mayu thought as they passes

(They got to the school)

Mayu's dad got out of the car "This place looks like a castle!" he said stunned and took her bag

"I can do it myself!" Mayu says as she gets out and takes the bag

"You have your pills there honey! right?" her mom asks

"yes!" Mayu replies then she kisses her mom and dad and walks away inside

*The two worried parents entered to the car and left*

Mayu looked amazed everything inside the school "this place is totally different from my other school!" she murmured as she walks the hall and everyone looks at her

"Hello new girl.. i'm Matsui Jurina!" a girl says as she extends her hand

Mayu was shocked first but then shook her hand "i'm Watanabe Mayu!" she replied with a smile
 
"You're pretty" Jurina says smiling

"Oh.. thanks!" Mayu says feeling strange

Jurina let go Mayu's hand  "you have to go to the secretary to tell you where's your room and give you your uniforms and books!"

"okay where she is?" Mayu asked

"In the other building,this is the building of the rooms passing the basketball court and the running track you'll see a big building that one is the classrooms,headmaster and secretary building!" Jurina says as she points to the other building

Mayu sighs "Thanks Jurina!" she says as she walks away

"be carefull with the players there..at this hours Black is running" Jurina murmured

As she walks,she couldn't help admire the big campus the school have

So many girls making sports

Mayu stopped walking and looked at the girls playing basketball "i wish i could do that.." she murmure sad as her right hand reach her chest

"hey!" Someone shouts then pushed Mayu and rolled on the floor with her

"Yuki chan.." Rena says

Mayu was on top of the other girl

Both had eye contact for a moment till the taller girl pushed Mayu off her

"Are you stupid or blind?"The taller girl asked yelling mad as she gets up

"Sorry.." Mayu replied as she gets up

"Yuki chan calm down!" Rena says

Yuki takes Mayu by her arm " Look at my knees i'm bleeding!" she says as she presses tigher on her arm while she looks on Mayu's eyes

"you're hurting me!" Mayu says in pain also looking at Yuki

"hey let go!"  A girl says
 
"Jurina.." Mayu says

Yuki let go Mayu's arm and turned to look at Jurina "you stupid kid again!" she says

"Let's go Mayu.." Jurina says serious

Yuki pouted "just because she's your adopted sister!" she murmured looking at Rena then walked away

Rena looked other way sad then followed her friend

Mayu and Jurina looked at the older girls walking away

what's wrong with her? Mayu asked

what's not wrong with her? Jurina answered

Jurina helped Mayu with everything and even led her to her room which was the same as her

We're roomies! Jurina says smiling and hugging Mayu
while she opens the door

Ta-da! Jurina says showing the room

*It was a cool room a littler,two desks,a tv and many other things*

"My bed is this one!" Jurina says as climbs to her bed

Mayu smiles "okay i'll take the one down.." she says as he puts her bag on it

Jurina gets down "i'll bring some snacks to celebrate wait for me!" she says as she leaves

Mayu nods then starts putting out the things of her bag while she puts her things on her desk she notices a mirror on the wall

She looked herself at it and  fixed her hair then opened a few buttons of her shirt

"It's a new start please don't ruin it!" Mayu says as she sees the scar on her chest then sighs

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!
« Last Edit: April 24, 2018, 11:49:45 AM by sophcaro »

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2012, 09:50:55 AM »
great intro as always cmze-san~  :thumbsup

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2012, 10:15:42 AM »
I LOVE IT...MAYUKI  :wth

Please update asap  :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2012, 10:24:40 AM »
Cmze-saaaaaaaaan!!! I loved it! Love it!!

This brand new story...aaah now im really confusing which one that's may favorite
If my sister girl friend almost end...maybe this new fic its the first on after Loving U and wild love or or maybe...in the future it will be my first one favorite...,cmze-san why you are so good making a good story?

Yeah sad story its a good one more drama more tears...and more love LOL

Thank for this new fic cmze-san...and i'm still waiting for all your fic...ah this one is really get my heart.."Time is good as gold"
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2012, 11:26:21 AM »
Yay new Mayuki fic!!! I love it! But I can guess it would be a sad fic? Hope it'll have a good ending  :)
Thanks a lot cmze-san.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #5 on: November 04, 2012, 12:26:06 PM »
WooooooooooooOOOOOOh  :w00t:

I love it!!!! You have a lot of idea, Where do you find them? :)

MAYUKI!!! Wahahahaha! :heart:
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« Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 06:42:41 PM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 2

Alarm clock ringing!! 

Mayu wakes up fast and turns it off then looks at Jurina who is still sleeping calmly 

"How she can sleep after hearing such a noise?" Mayu wondered while the door slowly opens showing a tall good looking skinny girl 

"who are you?" The girl asked 

"This girl is friend of that Yuki girl.." Mayu thought "this is my room so i make the questions!" she answered 

"your room?" The girl murmured 

"Rena chan!" Jurina says happy 

"weren't you sleeping?" Mayu asked frowning 

"Whatever get ready!" Rena says coldly as she walks away 

Jurina sighed "i guess i can say goodbye to her sweet good mornings"

"How she opened our door?" Mayu wondered 

Jurina goes down "Mayu chan there are so many things you need to learn!" she says as she grabs her towel and her uniform 

Mayu also picks up her things 

~Walking the hall~ 

Rena walks mad the hall "Her room also? what a kid!" she thought 

Sae bumped on Rena who pouted and was ready to kick her butt

 as soon Rena noticed it was Sae she calmed..

 "Rena chan!"  Sae says smirking 

Rena looks at her friend "Sae chan.." she murmured then notice the dorm where she came out 

"To..mo..chin.." Rena whispers and frowns 

"well she's cold but hot!" Sae replied with a smile 

"whatever let's go!" Rena says smirking and pushing Sae with her 

*Once ready they went to the recreation area for breakfast*

"So Rena san it's not really your sister.." Mayu says while eats

"yep.." Jurina replies with a smile 

Mayu frowned "you know most of the people when they find out that they're not blood related with their relatives tend to be sad or depressed. Why are you smiling?"she asked looking at Jurina 

Jurina takes Mayu's hand "That's my secret.." she says with a smile then let go 

Mayu sighs "Okay changing the topic,do they have keys of all the rooms here?"

Jurina got serious"They have access to almost everything so try not to get in trouble or call the attention,it's better for you.. this is school is not good for the persons who entered by scholarships" 

"Why you say that?" Mayu asked 

Jurina sighed "i shouldn't tell you this but i like you.. there's a group in the school "the black queens"  in charge to kick out all the students with schoolarships.They bully them till they decide to go and even they got to the point to make them suicide so be careful!" she in a low tone of voice as she eats

Mayu looks around "what a school!?!" she thought

Everyone stopped talking and stare the three girls entering while they sit 

Mayu looked at Yuki who was with a expresionless face then turned to look at Jurina 

"They say she's the leader while Rena and Sae are her loyal weapons.." Jurina murmures looking with hate at Yuki 

*Soon the bell of the initiation to class rininged*

"c'mon Mayu!" Jurina says as she grabs Mayu's hand and takes her to her classroom 

"what about them?" Mayu asked as they walk through the campus to the other building

"i told you they have preference.." Jurina says as she walks 

Jurina left Mayu on her classroom while hers was next to Mayu's 

The teacher talked to Mayu ..

"I'm Shinoda Mariko.." She says with a smile as she extends her hand 

"Watanabe Mayu.." Mayu replies with a smile 

Now i see you're that girl that really high IQ right? The teacher asked 

Mayu looked down "yep!" she answers a little embarrased

Soon all the students entered to the classroom and Shinoda sensei introduce Mayu to everyone 

Everyone was nice to Mayu...

"This is isn't so bad after all.." She thought while she sits 

"Excuse me Sensei can we get in?" Yuki asked with a smile while Sae and Rena are behind her

"Those empty three seats in the middle.." Mayu thought as she looks at the three girls

"come in.." Shinoda sensei replies with a sigh

The three girls walked to their seats but Rena and Yuki couldn't help to recognize the cyborg girl 

*and for Mayu's bad luck Yuki sitted ahead of her*

Mayu couldn't help to feel a little unease 

"you three haven't miss much we were introduce your new partner Watanabe Mayu.." Shinoda sensei says 

Rena pouted "i can't believe this!" she thought

Yuki smirked then turned her head showing her perfect smile to Mayu 

"Hello Mayu! I'm Yuki.." she says extending her hand 

Rena looked at her friend "what's she planning?" she thought 

"Fresh meat!" Sae says with a smile also looking at Mayu 

~The hours passes fast and soon Mayu was in her room with Jurina trying to catch up everything~ 

"I'll go make some sports,would you be alright?" Jurina asked with a smile 

"yeah don't worry!" Mayu replied as she's catching up 

(Jurina closes the door)

Mayu stopped her writting and then thought of Yuki smiling at her and extending her hand 

"you have such a sweet appearence but you're nothing like that!" She murmured irritated 

~Meanwhile~(At pool side)

Note: The swimmers practice is cancelled cause the cleaning the pool 

"So how is she?" Rena asked a little jealous

"what do you mean? Mayu chan?" Jurina asked with a smile 

Rena just looked other way while Jurina surprised her with a back hug

"well she's cute but i rather you waking me up with your soft voice.." Jurina says with her chin on Rena's shoulder 

Rena looked other way trying to hide her red face

"Rena chan it's cute when she blushes.." Jurina says smiling 

Rena smirks "silly Jurina.." she says as she breaks their hug and hugs her again but this time more serious

After a few seconds Rena breaks their hug 

"i have to go.." Rena says sad 

"but Rena we just got here.." Jurina replies 

"Sorry.." Rena says as she walks away 

Jurina sighs then pouts 

~After a few hours~< Night time>

Jurina entered to her room and saw Mayu already sleeping on her bed still with her uniform on 

"What a girl.." Jurina thought while she was about to climb to her bed but something stopped her *a noise in the hall* 

Jurina opened her door and Yuki pushed her inside the room with a bunch of girls 

"Initiation night!" Yuki says smirking 

what?! Jurina replies

The bunch of girls grabs Mayu by her arms and legs and takes her out the room 

"Let go!" Mayu says as Jurina watches how they take her friend commanded by Yuki 

"oh common is going to be fun!" Yuki says as she puts tape on Mayu's mouth to shout her 

Jurina got out of the room and saw the same situation in other dorms Mayu wasn't the only one kidnapped 

"Rena what's going on?" Jurina asked 

"initiation night.. c'mon Jurina is going to be fun!" Rena says as she takes her hand 

TO BE CONTINUED COMMENT!! 

Btw I'm glad you like it!! where i get inspiration? by songs!! 
If u tell me a good song it helps me to inspire and also depends on the vibe of the song so last night i heard a sad one..
The song that inspire me to write my sister's girlfriend was.. kuchi utsushi no chocolate xD
For Akb borading school was lilwake maybe,Relax,kimishika,everyday
for my cyborg was Megumi hayashibara songs
wild love: Candle no shin
I'm everything you need: French kiss
Loving u: mostly romance privacy plus Akb


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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.1
« Reply #7 on: November 04, 2012, 07:24:50 PM »
Wild love: Every chapter gives me headache..because so much ideas on my head!!  ;)

No wonder it gives you headache. It's a vampire story. So many possibilities of scenario.....

Now onto this new fic!!
I love it!!
Yuki is a mean girl..... XD
They kidnapped Mayu. I wonder what is Yuki going to do to Mayu......
How worst the bullying will be?

Boss, all stories of yours are very good.  :twothumbs
I haven't read My Sister's Girlfriend, and it's almost  finished.

And thanks for putting spaces between the lines.
It helps my eyes.

Please update soon.
And also please update "Loving You".
« Last Edit: November 04, 2012, 07:46:43 PM by anzai48 »

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
« Reply #8 on: November 04, 2012, 11:56:05 PM »
So you find your idea in song... I wanna be like you: writing a good fanfic (With Mayuki of course) but I don't have any inspiration. Aaaah~!

Initiation night... What is it? (I know what it means) But Yuki don't do a very bad thing to Mayu she is weak!

I love Candle no shin

                               
If u tell me a good song it helps me to inspire and also depends on the vibe of the song so last night i heard a sad one..
The song that inspire me to write my sister's girlfriend was.. kuchi utsushi no chocolate xD
For Akb borading school was lilwake maybe,Relax,kimishika,everyday
for my cyborg was Megumi hayashibara songs
wild love: Candle no shin
I'm everything you need: French kiss
Loving u: mostly romance privacy plus Akb



So My sister's girlfriend comes from Kuchi utsushi no chocolate... I saw it in the metro part (I read this fanfic a lot of times... I think I know almost every scene XD)
I'm Everything you need comes from a French Kiss song ;) Aaah~! I wonder if they continue to get  new single even if Akicha go to JKT48 and Yukirin have a solo!

Thank you for all your fanfic I think Mayuki fans  are all spoiled by you!!!!!

PS:Sorry :bow: My comment is always disordered... Sorry! :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
« Reply #9 on: November 05, 2012, 12:10:37 AM »
Thanks!!  :inlove:

i hope you get inspiration eventually and write your own MaYuki fanfic!  :bow:

i would totally read it!  :thumbsup

i hope french kiss still be ongoing!  :smhid

I can't wait for Yukirin  songs come out!  :grin:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
« Reply #10 on: November 05, 2012, 03:40:43 AM »
Thank you for the update!  :cow:
I really love your fix....Mayuki :heart:
Can't wait for the next chapter  :lol:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
« Reply #11 on: November 05, 2012, 03:42:19 PM »
Here I was wanting to read a sad story and I find yours o/ good start *.* just curious about how this is going to develop.

I hope Mayuyu does not have a heart attack with that prank ><

Thank you o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.2
« Reply #12 on: November 06, 2012, 01:36:27 AM »
Waah mayuki! I'm wondering how they will develop their relationship


Initiation night..what will happen with mayu...
Is rena and jurina already date? Rena seem jealous when she's know jurina and mayu are roomate

C'mon mayu! Yuki need to be tamed by you LOL

Thank for the update cmze-san ...
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #13 on: November 06, 2012, 10:17:42 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                             CH. 3

Soon all the girls kidnapped were in the court..

Yuki smirks "get her down!" she says as the leader

The other girls were quietly looking because Mayu was the last one

The girls dropped Mayu who hitted her butt and got fast mad 

"What the hell?" She asked mad but then felt a little intimidated for all Yuki's friends so kept quiet

Yuki smiles "so you might be wondering why you're here? well let me tell you this is your initiation night! it doesn't matter if your normal student or not(schoolarships),you have to get throught this like everyone on this side did!"

"what?no way!" Miyazaki says looking at all the girls on Yuki's side 

Rena smiled while Jurina who was next to her pouted "i can't believe you're actually enjoyinv this!" she murmured looking at her older sister 

"It brings good memories to me.." Rena says with a sweet smile 

Jurina sighed "me too but i'm worried about Mayu.."

Rena pouted and looked at Mayu who pouting while Yuki speaks 

Jurina took Rena's hand and gave a little squeeze "She's my friend.." she whispered 

"Before we start this game there is another thing I must say!" Yuki says as a girl appears from the crowd with a eggs cuvette

Yuki takes one egg and walks to the freshmen.She stands in front of Mayu "Nobody can touch her but me!" she says as she smashes the egg on Mayu's forhead 

Jurina pouted while everyone laughed 

Mayu removed the smashed egg from her hair 

Yuki smiled widely "So now go and hide!" she says still laughing 

All the freshmen started running cause the other girls were following them with eggs, flour,water balloons and those kind of things that are not fun in the middle of the night 

Rena smiles "It started let's go hunting freshmen!" she says as she pulls Jurina with her

(Everyone gone)

Mayu stood there in front of Yuki 

"What are you waiting for? Run!" The taller girl shouted laughing

Mayu rolled her eyes "this is the best you can do?" she asked feeling emotionless

(Note: If she could run,she would but she can't due her illness so she tried to play cool and fool Yuki) 

Yuki smile faded "what? are you saying?" 

Mayu smirks "Yeah, i forgot you're too stupid to speak" she says as she turns around and walks away 

Yuki pouted "hey.." she says mad as she walks mad behind  the younger girl. Unlucky for Yuki she didn't notice that there was leftovers of the egg she broke on Mayu's head on the floor so she end up sleeping and knocking out herself 

Mayu turned around and saw Yuki on the floor "what the.." she says as she walks closer and looks at Yuki 

Mayu smirked "now who's laughing Miss Arrogant?"

Then Mayu decided to take a closer look of Yuki's face "You're cute.." she murmured as her hand takes life on her own and strokes The taller girl's cheek 

Mayu gulped and retreat her hand "you're jerk!" she says to the sleepy Yuki as she gets up 

Mayu scratched her head then noticed he hair is sticky "gross! this is your fault!" she says and then something came to her brain.

Luckyly she was still wearing her uniform.She pulled out a marker from one of her pockets and started drawing on Yuki's face 

Once she ended her painting,she looked at it "you definitely do not look cute! she says smirking 

<Meanwhile WMatsui>

Jurina stopped walking and looked at Rena..

"what's wrong?" the older girl asks

"i just don't understand why you are so good to her,Yuki is mean!" Jurina retored 

Rena looked at the younger girl "She's not mean,you just don't know her!" she replied looking other way 

~Flashback~ Initiation night 3 years ago 

A 14 years old Rena Matsui was running through the room's building hall with her younger sister holding her hand 

"Rena chan what's wrong?" Little Jurina asks 

"don't talk Jurina!" Rena whispered as she touches Jurina's forhead "you're still sick with that cold!" she thought as she tries to open any door 

After trying many doors the Janitor's room was open

"Let's catch  fresh meat and let's have fun!" A good looking girl shouts 

Rena openned the Janitor's closet then pushes Jurina fast inside and closes the door 

"So you're planning to hide inside the janitor's closet,bad luck for you we close all the doors!" The leader of the gang says showing the keys to Rena 

"C'mon Acchan let's use the eggs already on her!" A girl says smiling 

*someone coughed* 

"ehh what was that?" Miichan asked 

"is there anyother girl around?" a tall girl asked 

Rena was nervous 

"Mari chan look around!" Acchan says

"Hey you bunch of idiots!!" A girl shouted from upstairs 

"ehhh Kashiwagi san.." Rena murmured as she looks at Yuki throwing water balloons from upstairs 

what? we're your senpais..you can't do that is your initiation!" Acchan shouted annoyed 

"BITE ME!!" Yuki shouted back and run away 

"Let's go for that one!" Acchan shouted and run after Yuki with all her gang

(Note: Yes,Mari chan is Shinoda Sensei!!)

Jurina opened to Janitor's door "Rena chan get in.." she called 

"i can't.. i have to help Yuki chan!" Rena says 

Jurina pouts while Rena closes the door "don't open this door unless i'll tell you too!" she says as she leaves 

~After a few minutes~ 

Rena founds Yuki eventually in the court all covered with 
flour laying on the floor 

"Kashiwagi san.." Rena called as she cleans Yuki's face 

Yuki shows her best smile and makes a sign of peace and love

Rena hugs Yuki "Thank you!" she whispers 

"just remind me not to mess with our senpais!" Yuki murmures still smiling like a winner 

"what an unique idiot but still.. we can be friends!" Rena thought then smiled 

~ Back to the present.. Next morning~ 

(Note: Mayu hid Yuki behind some bushes)

Yuki opens her eyes slowly and sees the blue sky "ehh!! what the hell?" she murmures as she notices the grass and gets up fast 

"did i sleep here all night?" Yuki thought as she walks to the room's building 

While Yuki walks everyone was looking at her and trying hard to not laugh 

Nobody say anything they just were looking at her while she walks to her room 

Sae gets out of her room and sees Yuki face to face "Ahhh! what the hell? what happened with your pretty face? now you look like Helga G. Pataki (refering to eyebrows!) 

"wha?what? what?" Yuki asked 

Sae politely asks for a mirror to a girl "just for a second is for my ugly friend there!" she says pointing at Yuki

"Give me that!" Yuki says irritated as she snatches the mirror and looks at herself 

"Oh My.." Yuki shouts as she fast goes to her room 

Everyone laughed like crazy 

Mayu and Jurina gave a high give 

~ After half an hour At the classroom~ 

Yuki entered to the classroom..

*nobody mentioned the what happened earlier but they have pictures of it on their phones*

Shinoda sensei ordered Mayu and Yuki to change seats now Mayu is ahear of Yuki..

<The class started>

"what if cut your hair?" Yuki whispered 

Mayu tenses up and puts her hair on her side 

Yuki smirked. She kept all day Mayu worried that she might do something to her

Soom it was time for P.E class..

Everyone changed their clothes fast and run to the basketball court while Mayu didn't change her clothes she just fallowed her partners to the court and sitted on the bench 

P.E teacher aproached to Mayu 

"I know about your condition if you want you can to your room if you want.." He says 

Mayu smiled "don't worry i like to watch!" she answered 

Yuki looked at Mayu smiling to their teacher and pouted *feeling a little jealous ^^*  

After a few minutes they started to play a basketball match 

"Sae is a really good player.." Mayu thought as she looks at them play with a sad luck 

The teacher got a call from the headmaster and left the girls playing 

Mayu was tapping her feet "i wanna play.." she thought 

Yuki grabbed the ball then stopped the game and walked to Mayu 

She putted herself in front of her "what you're too special to play with us?" she asked pouting 

Mayu looked other way 

"Or don't tell me the nerd can't play basketball?" Yuki asked with a smirk

Mayu got up mad " why you bother me so much? what did i do to you?" she asked shouting in front of everyone

"coming to this school!" Yuki replied throwing the ball on Mayu's chest luckily Mayu grabbed it then throwed aside 

Mayu got down from the bleacher and left 

~After the P.E class~ 

Mayu walked around the school with Jurina..

A girl smiles "Finally.. i was waiting all year,now i can buy Sae chan!" 

"And i can buy Tomochin!" Another one says smiling also

Mayu looked at the two girls and frowned 

Jurina smirked "you don't know what are they talking about? don't you?" she asked 

Mayu sighed "no idea" she replied hopeless 

"well this school have a charity event where you can buy popular girls like Sae chan,Tomochin,Kumin,Yuki etc (not Rena chan btw don't buy her!!) for one night..all the freshmen have to participate so prepare yourself if someone wants to buy you!" Jurina replies 

"I doubt somebody wants to buy me,nobody knows me and i'm cool with that!" Mayu says with a smirk 

Jurina smirks also..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!! 

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #14 on: November 06, 2012, 10:51:19 AM »
This is getting interesting~! I've taken a like to this fic! Thanks cmze-san.
So maybe Yukirin will buy Mayu  :D

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #15 on: November 06, 2012, 11:50:21 AM »
It's getting more and more interesting :inlove:
YUKI starting to fall for MAYU !!!  :heart:  :cow:
Thanks for the updae I really enjoy  :mon love: :wriggly:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #16 on: November 06, 2012, 12:21:13 PM »
Time is good as gold !! Is really your golden fic cmze-san!

I loved it...i can't said properly how i felt but its like a spark..firework or maybe a bomb! LOL its chessy of me but..seriously i have laugh a lot when i read this chapter...soo much funny think..

Yuki..she's LOL she's look soo stupid in front of mayu...
i think what yuki's going to do toward mayu's its going to be useless...she's lost her power when its about mayu,well maybe because mayu its too cute~


Lets see what yuki plans~ LOL
Maybe yuki will buy mayu...if that happen...yuki you need to prepare for something,mayu its so surprising person..be carefull or you will be tamed by mayu and became her pet LOL

Cmze-san i know you just update this one,but i already want the next...its too good this fic

Thank for the update
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #17 on: November 06, 2012, 01:01:59 PM »
I love it... :inlove: :heart:

I like Yukirin she is too funny :lol:

Mayu I think Yuki will buy you hahaha

Edit:I forgot to say about the flash-back... Yuki is really cool, she rescue Rena!!! And when
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Yuki shows her best smile and makes a sign of peace and love

I was really happy that Yukirin is not so bad!!

Thank you! I wait for the next!!! :thumbsup
« Last Edit: November 06, 2012, 09:01:13 PM by Chanaline »
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #18 on: November 06, 2012, 06:57:47 PM »
Yeey! Mayuyu didn't have a heart attack \o/ instead she pissed of Yuki huahuahu that was funny^^

I wonder if is Yuki who is going to buy Mayuyu and 'torture' her *.*

Thank you for the update!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.3
« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2012, 07:55:34 PM »
hmmm~ I hit myself so I could comment on this amazing fic.....

It's an honor to comment on one of your fantastic fics Cmze-sama! And Im sorry for being a silent reader....I really admire your work! I am just sad with myself that Im not as good as Cmze-sama.....

Eto, I like this fic very much! the begining was really interesting! Mayu and Yuki have a lot of problems on their own, but they are drawn to each other like magnets!

Oh, about the song thing, if you want I can send you an interesing play-list? you can say the way you want them,sad,happy,romantic, and Ill tell you some! Well In general I am a vocaloid fan so I know a lot of these....




ahh~ its about wanting to leave something behind after you die.Really sad....it has another part but I thought this one worked for the emotions?

Sorry for being boring....really sorry! Please forgive me Cmze-sama! :(

It took me a while to chosse.... :oops:

eto....sorry if my review is boring...ill delete it and write a shorter one if you want..? ....anyway..I love this fic! and all your other ones! XD
« Last Edit: November 08, 2012, 04:26:11 PM by yuukimoko »
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