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« Reply #40 on: July 24, 2006, 04:17:58 PM »
Yoshi 01
 
This cannot make it (shake head) this cannot make it (shake head) this also cannot (shake head) That ojichan, dunno what’s on his mind, losing his touch…a bunch of kids, how to talk with them? (sigh) sure have generation gap. Kaorin gonna have big headache.
 
Yossi laughed.
 
Rika: “Ssshhhh.. What’s so funny?”
 
“Oh, I find them cute.”
 
Rika: “nanpa shinaide.”
 
“joking, are you? They are not my type.”
 
Rika: “As long as they are girls, they are your type.”
 
“Ya, ya… Let me tell you something then, you’re definitely not my type, get my meaning?”
 
Rika: “ HIDOI ”
 
Rika slaps Yossi on the arm.
 
Host: “Alright that concludes tonight’s show. TV no mae no minnasan, please give the new members your support. Goodbye.”
 
The show ended amid applause.
 
Rika: “Yossi, leaving so soon? Not staying to chat with them?”
 
“You know, soon you’ll be seeing them everyday.”
 
(And it won’t be a novelty anymore)
 
Rika: “Baka Yossi, can’t you just answer me properly.”
 
Iida: “minna, please stay in the gakuya later.”
 
“You and your big mouth.”
 
*** *** ***
 
Iida: “I’m Iida Kaori (clears throat) Your leader from today onwards. First let me congratulate the three of you for passing the audition and welcome to the big family. Fujimoto-san, you too.”
 
4 members: “hai, yoroshiku onegaishimasu.”
 
Iida: “minna wakai ne~ I believe all of you are still schooling so it’s gonna be tough. Work and school… you know, stuffs like that. However I want you to take this group seriously. Being in momusu isn’t like you’re joining your school’s extra curricular activities…”
 
Iida looks around and continue “If you have that thinking, you’ll be showing disrespect to everyone here, because here, we treat it as our career, we love this job and I’ll not allow anyone to belittle it.”
 
Mari: “Kakke!”
 
Abe: “Well said.”
 
The seniors all nod their heads.
 
(this woman, sometimes she really impresses me.)
 
Iida: “Do I sound fierce? Hope I didn’t scare you.”
 
Iida break into her trademark silly smile “Actually we’re all nice people.”
 
(oh man, she can’t hold her style for long…) Yossi let out a soft chuckle.
 
Rika: “shiiiii..” and elbow Yossi.
 
Iida gives Yossi a look.
 
Fujimoto: “Nope, in fact we’re grateful you are willing to tell us this, we have benefit from this talk, we will work hard. Arigatou gozaimashita.”
 
(wow wow wooow, this Fujimoto is more impressive… not bad. Good talker…eh, good bootlicker? Haha… interesting character.)

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« Reply #41 on: July 25, 2006, 06:49:40 AM »
Yoshi 02

Rika: “Yossi, you read today’s newspaper?”

“Nope, since when you will read the news?”

Rika: “Do you always have to do that?”

Rika give Yossi a pissed look.

“OH~ Rikachan~ what’s today’s big news? Oshiete kudasai yo~”

Rika: “ne, ne, read this.”

Rika pass the newspaper to Yossi.

(Fujimoto Miki joins Morning Musume… ya, what’s the big deal? I know about that weeks ago.)

“So?”

Rika: “ read the fine prints please, oh… let me read to you.” and snatches back the newspaper. “It says, Power up; Fujimoto Miki joins ailing Morning Musume.”

“oh… ailing… They are right, it’s not the same now Gotchan is gone.”

Rika: “Oi~ this time I didn’t mention her name, you said it yourself.”

“Ya.. ya….”  (damn… my mood suddenly sucks…)

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« Reply #42 on: July 25, 2006, 09:04:50 AM »
ahahahhahahah! Nanpa Shinaide? Haha! I like that.

Oh and did Yossui come out of the closet or do people assume she likes girls? Maybe I didnt read it properly..

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« Reply #43 on: July 25, 2006, 10:14:46 AM »
only rika knows and she's been teasing yossi whenever possible.

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« Reply #44 on: July 25, 2006, 02:37:53 PM »
Yoshi 03
 
(shit, I’m gonna be late.) “Hold it please!”
 
Yossi steps into the lift.
 
“Thanks. Oh..Fujimoto-san, ohayou.”
 
Miki: “Ohayou.”
 
Miki smiles, Yossi smiles back, then both turn to face the front.
 
(I’m not gonna talk first.)
 
Yossi glances sideway at Miki. She is chewing gum and looking blankly at the closed lift door. (attitude ya…good… 1…2…3…4th floor. Ita!)
 
“You first.”
 
Miki: “Thanks, together?”
 
“Ok, but I think we better run.”
 
Miki: “Eh! Necessary?”
 
“Come on.”
 
Yossi and Miki step into the dance studio, there is no sight of Mayumi sensei. Miki gives Yossi a funny look, this look says a lot despite no words are exchanged.
 
(ya, I did tell you to run…well it’s always better to be safe than sorry…maa ika…)
 
Yossi returns a silly smile, puts her bag down and joins Kago and Tsuji in their conversation.
 
“What’s new today?”
 
Kago and Tsuji exchange giggles…
 
(these two must be up to no good, better leave before I become victim.)
 
Yossi looks around, everyone is occupied, then her eyes meet Miki’s. There’s something about her glare this time and Yossi cannot help feeling uncomfortable.
 
(damn it… what’s wrong with her?)
 
Rika: “Yossi, you’re drooling.”
 
“what!?”
 
Rika: “You should have seen yourself, you’re staring at people.”
 
“I’m staring, that doesn’t mean I’m drooling.”
 
Rika: “so, she’s your type?”
 
“Busybody…”
 
Rika: “I’ve heard she’s got quite a reputation, you know?”
 
“Oh really? By the way I heard your reputation is quite… too, you know?”
 
Rika: “really? What’s it???”
 
Yossi gestures to Rika to come closer… “HAROPORO gossiper!”
 
Rika: “BAKA!”
 
Yossi earns a well-deserved smack from Rika.
 
Rika: “You’re irritating, do you always have to talk back this way?”
 
“well… I won’t answer back if I’m sleeping.”
 
Rika: “YA, just like how dead men won’t talk, right?”
 
(OUCH! Where she learn that?)
 
Rika walks away, head aloft. Yossi’s eyes wander around then she sees it again, Miki’s eyes are fixed on her, this time with a smirk.


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« Reply #45 on: July 26, 2006, 06:56:21 AM »
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Ahahah, I like how you use the real media files. Thats cool.

But seriously, i think its weird that they go to the toilet together. You can sleep with your friend - that is ok... but...go to the toilet together? It sounds weird. Maybe its ok.


I guess girls find going to the toilet together ok :D

"The path along the canal was quiet as usual, under a dim lamp post, a solitary figure sat on a bench, with tears in her eyes…

(… do we have to wait… till then…)"

I really liked how you wrote the title of the fic into the last line. GJ :)

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« Reply #46 on: July 27, 2006, 03:05:28 PM »
Yoshi 04
 
Yossi slugs comfortably on the sofa and observes her friends. (why it seems I’m always the one idling? Konno… schoolwork…there… fashion talk …eewwk! …here… manga…and manga…ermm, what’s takahashi reading?)
 
“Takahashi-san, what’s reading?”
Ai: “Oh Yoshizawa-san, it’s Takarazuka magazine.”
“Oh, we worked with them before, Mr. Moonlight.”
Ai: “Yeah! I love them, they are so good, singing and dancing…”
 
(ermm… in love with a group of cross-dressers?)
 
Ai: “do you find me weird?”
“Nope… if you think you’re weird wait till you hear this…” Yossi turns to a whisper “Actually I’m in love with Tsunku.”
Ai: “USO!”
“Haha~ of course I lied, you’re funny… well maybe next time you’ll be in Takarazuka.”
Ai: “muri da yo.”
“Why not? After your sotsugyou…”
 
Rika appears out of nowhere and whispers into Yossi’s ears “nanpa shinaide kudasai~” and walks away.
 
 
“You’re such a busybody ne!” Yossi joins Rika on the sofa.
Rika: “That’s because I know you well.”
“jiman dekinai wa. Anyway in my eyes, she’s just a kid.”
Rika: “but her figure says otherwise…”
“not to mention you are the opposite of her, if only your brains are as developed as your…” Yossi points at Rika’s chest.
 
Rika: “YO-SHI-ZA-WA!”

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« Reply #47 on: July 27, 2006, 03:23:46 PM »
Yoshi 05
 
Rika throws herself on the seat in front of Yossi.
 
Rika: “Do you have to do that just now?”
 
“_hat?” Yossi struggles to speak with her mouth full.
 
Rika: “You still hungry after eating those gouhoubi? You’re getting so fat!”
“Hey! What’s wrong? Don’t pick on me just because you feel lousy.”
Rika: “and who’s the one who make it so?”
“kankei nai yo.”
Rika: “Do you have to hug me?”
“Did I?”
Rika: “Just now! From behind! On the set!”
“oh~ ii jyan?”
Rika: “ii janakute!”
“It’s just a hug.”
Rika: “but people gonna talk again…”
 
(pouting lips, stamping feet…here in this crowded canteen…Rikachan,you’re attracting unwanted attention?)
 
“Ya, if you keep kicking up a ruckus, people will think what I have done to you.”
Rika: “when that goes on air, there will be wild guess again!”
 
Rika stamps her feet more.
 
“Cool it, they will cut it.”
Rika: “what if they don’t, and you know… already I get this weird look from Yaguchi, right after the filming!”
“She knows???”
Rika: “look here… it’s the fans I’m worried about… you forgotten what happened to us? Takes a year for it to cool off.”
“You look here, I’m asking you; she knows about us?”
Rika: “There’s nothing between us!”
 
(of course, baka yarou.)
 
“I mean… she knows you know about me and Got_...?”
Rika: “NO! ok… now I’m pissed. First you hug me on the set, and now you suspect I’m big-mouthed, going around telling tales on you!”
 
(woo, she looks really pissed this time…)
 
“I’m sorry… just that I saw you cried… and somehow I feel it’s my responsibility…if only I had use other words to describe Yuuchan… something simple… And the hug…it’s a console, others won’t read too much into it.”
Rika: “and…?”
 
“and… I’m sorry I suspected you.”
 
Rika: “anymore..?”
 
(don’t push it…)
 
“H-A-P-P-Y!” Yossi opens up her arms.
 
(that’s embarrassing!!)
 
Rika: “That’s better.”

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« Reply #48 on: July 28, 2006, 08:02:47 AM »
Yoshi 06
 
(Alright, start of a busy month ahead… at least I won’t have to go to school…A-RE! my seat is taken!)
 
“Konkon~” Yossi places her arms lovingly around Konno’s shoulders.
 
Konno’s face squirm at being touched.
 
“That’s good, there will someone I can talk to throughout the trip.” Yossi gets more touchy.
 
An uneasy Konno immediately stands up and joins Makoto in her double seats. Yossi stretches her leg on the long cushioned seat since she now has the back row all to herself.
 
“You’re such a bully!” Rika turns her back to Yossi.
 
Yossi ignores Rika, puts on her ear-piece and closes her eyes. (4 hours journey… I rather catch some sleep than to bicker with you.)
 
Rika: “hidoi…”
 
Yossi is awaken by the laughter in the mini-bus, it is Kago doing her monomane stints.
 
Yaguchi: “Gorou-san mitai!”
Tsuji: “mitai~ mitai.”
Kago: “Ogawa-san, please~.”
Makoto: “Ok~” She pulls down her eyebrows and goes “fu… fu… ano…”
 
(this Makochan, she’s getting funnier each day. Wonder what brings about the change…)
Kago: “omoshiroi. Now let’s welcome Gorou-san’s girlfriend.”
 
The girls look back at Yossi.
 
(I knew this will be coming.) Yossi closes her eyes and pretends to be asleep.
 
Rika: “Ssshh… she’s sleeping.”
Kei: “Can’t believe she can sleep with all this noise.”
Rika: “She must be tired, she attended school this morning.”
 
(some times she is so understanding, just like… (sigh)… it’s been months, if only I had told her earlier… now we should be the happiest couple around… oh, my life sucks.)

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« Reply #49 on: July 28, 2006, 02:09:54 PM »
aww...sweet!I like the new style! Its cool!
Good work :P

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« Reply #50 on: July 28, 2006, 03:17:48 PM »
Thanks for the comments. I like the way Dokidoki is heading, it's getting funnier with each episode.

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« Reply #51 on: July 29, 2006, 12:35:04 AM »
Yoshi 07

Rika: “What are you looking at?”
“See that cute girl behind the reception counter?”
Rika: “Don’t lie, you’re looking at someone else…”
“No.”
Rika: “You just saw Miki and Ayaya standing there…”

(So?)

Rika: “So…you must be thinking Gotch… no, that person might be staying in this hotel too, right?”

(damn… she really knows me well.)

“No such thing.”
Rika: “She’s not staying here.”
“Eh!”
Rika: “see! Your reaction just gave you away.”
“… …”

Yossi remains quiet. She looks around, all the crew is gathered in the lobby, there’s no sign of Gotchan, looks like Rika is not lying. Then she caught eye of Ayaya and Miki at one corner.

(Miki looks different… She’s smiling. Come to think of it, I never see her smile during dance rehearsals with us, now she’s all smiles with Ayaya…why?)

Rika: “Yossi, look at Miki.”

Yossi’s thoughts are interrupted by Rika’s comments.

“what?”
Rika: “Don’t you think she looks different?”
“just say…”
Rika: “I don’t remember her smiling so much when she’s training with us…”

Yossi steals a look at Rika, it’s funny how sometimes they think about the same things.

Rika: “something fishy about them…”
“They are just very good friends.”
Rika: “no… even good friends don’t smile so much to each other.”
“Ah!!! Now I know why I never smile whenever I’m talking to you.”

Rika gives Yossi a glare.

Rika: “It won’t kill you not to jab me for once, right?”
“I rather be dead… trust me.”

Rika walks away, fuming but not before she had pinched Yossi on the arm.

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« Reply #52 on: July 29, 2006, 07:01:06 PM »
Nice chapter!
I liked how you weaved in the Yossi-Rika rumor and how they suspect that Aya and Miki could be more than just friends.

Oh and I checked my Japanese dictonary to see what the phrases you used meant. I don't get it totally but I kinda get the picture :P

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« Reply #53 on: July 29, 2006, 11:42:06 PM »
Thanks~ more pairings will appear in the coming chapters.

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« Reply #54 on: July 29, 2006, 11:43:01 PM »
Yoshi 08

Yossi pops her head out of her hotel room and looks around. The corridor is quiet. Her secret mission had failed for the past 2 days.

(I’m gonna get the evidence this time.)

She tiptoes to Ayaya’s room, which happens to be just 2 units right from hers, puts her ears to the door and listens. It’s quiet.

(cannot be…)

So Yossi venture further to Miki’s room, which is the 2 units to Ayaya’s right. She listens on room’s door. It’s quiet too…

(Don’t tell me, those two are each sleeping in their room? Can’t be… girls like them like to bunk together and chat till the morning…)

A slight noise of a door knob turning makes Yossi dives into the nearest stairway exit. Through a small gap between the doors, Yossi sees Takahashi walks pass.

(what’s she doing outside at this time?... wait, she is heading back to her room… so that means… Where she is coming from?)

Yossi hears the sound of a door closing and she steps out. She looks at the direction which Takahashi came from. There are only Makoto’s and Risa’s room. Then she notices there is light coming out from under Makoto’s room…


Yossi lies on her bed. She is supposed to be searching for ‘clues’ on AyaMiki but she ended up knowing Takahashi was in Makoto’s room and she left only at 4AM.

(even if they decided to bunk together, there is no need for Aichan to leave… moreover at such an odd hour. It’s just 3 hours away from our morning call… unless she doesn’t want people to know…)

Yossi breaks into a smile, there is something mystique about everyone in the group, everyone seems to be hiding a secret, just like her.

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« Reply #55 on: July 30, 2006, 07:00:11 AM »
Yay! Yay! You update so often. Oooooh, I cant wait to find out the truth of Takahashi's sleep over. Your perception of how Yossui and Morning Musume think and act is great. I love it. Im always happy to read stories written in a new style

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« Reply #56 on: July 30, 2006, 08:35:08 AM »
Wow Ai + Mako? Totally new and unexpected. I can't wait to read what the big secret is about :P

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« Reply #57 on: July 30, 2006, 04:26:07 PM »
Yoshi 09

Today, taking a break from Kei’s graduation concert tour, the girls head back to Tokyo TV station to film for next month’s Hello! Morning.

Rika: “Yossi, follow me.”

Before Yossi knew what is happening, she is in the empty general staff resting room, staring at the screen of a laptop.

Rika: “See what I mean!?”

(Title: Ishiyoshi NETA… oops!)

Rika: “And you said they will cut it.”
“obviously they didn’t heed my advice…”
Rika: “It’s not funny and you read this line…”

(Only Yossui’s hug can …Rika’s sob…Ishiyoshi Saikou… their love is real…)

Rika: “Our love IS REAL?”
“You know it’s not…”
Rika: “But the thing is I know you like girls.”
“Oi~ Rikachan, that doesn’t mean I will like any girl that I meet.”
Rika: “How am I gonna explain to my parents…”
“They won’t know… it’s not in tabloid this time.”
Rika: “It WAS my dad who email me to check out the net.”

Rika looks crossly at Yossi..

“Look! I’m sorry! Ok? I was just sad to see you cry. I know you seldom shed tears so I thought you must be really upset and I just wanna console you, who know it will turn out this way. Since it had happened, we can just handle it like last time. YOU CAN START AVOIDING ME FOR ALL YOU WANT! HAPPY!!”

Yossi storms out of the room and slams the door behind her. She is surprised to see Miki on the corridor but she does not care to greet her friend since she is boiling inside.


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« Reply #58 on: July 30, 2006, 06:18:05 PM »
Ahahahahahahaa! How weird would it be if all your childs life information was on the internet and talked about?

Ishikawa's Dad at work

Tanaka Yuya: Hi Ishikawa, how are you today? Did you hear that you're daughter is a lesbian?

Ishikawa Takamori: Im fine thankyou and no I didnt here that.

Tanaka Yuya: Oh, really? Here borrow my magazine, and here is a website...and look at that TV its there too...oh and some Otaku have written stories about it as well...


Lol. Sorry I couldnt help myself :P

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« Reply #59 on: July 31, 2006, 12:57:08 AM »
hahahaha, that's funny. Looks like a conversation in the subplot.

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