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« Reply #80 on: August 20, 2006, 12:57:00 PM »
Wow, Ai/Reina ... my secret current line-up OTP!!! Yay! Even though I'm usually cheering for TakaGaki ... this makes it so much harder!!!

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« Reply #81 on: August 20, 2006, 05:37:09 PM »
This is just a pleasure to read. I finished the entire fic so far in one sitting. Great stuff.

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« Reply #82 on: August 20, 2006, 07:11:24 PM »
Wow. Didn't see that coming at all!! Now I have no idea who's gone end up with who. Ah, crazy love triangles!

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« Reply #83 on: August 26, 2006, 12:46:51 AM »
*GASP!* omg..so ....now.... Gaki likes Ai and Reina, and Reina likes Ai, and uhh Ai likes Gaki and Reina? O.O;; wow...thats....complicated. but your fic is great.

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« Reply #84 on: August 26, 2006, 12:56:03 AM »
Triangle..... Hurting.... Brain.... I think I really want to see all three get together and have hot, underage secks.... Yes, secks.

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« Reply #85 on: August 26, 2006, 03:22:50 AM »
I don't think there was anything with Risa and Reina (other than that bit when Reina was in the shower and Risa ran off when it got a little weird). Aichan just got jealous/possessive when she saw Risa walk out of Reina's room after she loaned "Mr. Pookie'. :)

So it's probably more like:

Risa --:heart:--> Aichan

Aichan --:heart:--> Risa

Reina --:heart:--> Aichan

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« Reply #86 on: August 28, 2006, 06:09:34 AM »
Chapter 20


“I’m glad we all came!”



Makoto announced with a huge smile on her face. The weather was wonderful and the amusement park was practically deserted. Just ideal for idols like them to let their hair down and have a little enjoyment.

“Yeah, we can all have some well-deserved fun. Together too!”

Konno agreed wrapping her hands around Makoto’s waist. She loved hugging people and it was great that Makoto didn’t mind being hugged.

In fact, she couldn’t be happier with the hugs Asami showered her.

“It’s the first time we had an outing as a group that wasn’t work isn’t it.”

Reina asked Risa who had her hand slipped comfortably in Ai’s. Swinging their connected hands, Risa looked around and aimed for the newest ride.  

“Yup! Too bad Eri and Sayu decided to stay back and practice.”

“It’s kinda weird really. They were never so hardworking.”

Reina thought aloud recalling the rokkies temple audition where the three of them did the minimal for everything - dance, singing and chores.

“Well, maybe they finally decided to do something about the lazy bones they were born with. Something you should do too Reina.”

Ai never teased Reina like this before and it would have been obvious something was up to anyone who knew them.

However this was neglected by everyone else who were too preoccupied with their own thoughts.



[Dance Studio]

“Eririn, you’re so sweet to stay behind with me.”

Sayumi stole a glance at Eri’s reflection in the full-length mirrors of the studio and smiled when she saw the Kamei scratching her right elbow.

It was no secret Eri had a habit of scratching herself all the time but this only endeared her to Sayumi more. She thought it was cute the way Eri did it subconsciously.  

“Which part do you need help with next?”

Eri asked from a few feet away. She was lying on her tummy on the shiny wooden floors with her head propped on her hands and flipping through her own dog-eared script.

“Before we continue with practice I wanna do something.”

Sayumi crawled over to Eri on her hands and knees and said in the voice she used whenever she acted as the role of the apprentice devil in the Hello Morning Skits.

Before long, the opening notes of Irropoi Jerittai were heard and the lights in the studio dimmed considerably.

“I always wanted to do this with you Eririn. Especially when you looked so sexy with Koharu-chan during the dance sequence at our Rainbow 7 Spring Tour.”

Widening her eyes, Eri was a little taken aback by Sayumi’s bold move. Regaining herself quickly, Eri ran her fingers through Sayumi’s long black hair.

“Is this my reward for staying behind with you?”



Nodding without a word, Sayumi’s heart started beating faster. Is this what doki doki feels like? It was a first for her but it felt really exciting.

“Then I want more… ”


-- Mako-chan graduated. Bye Bye, I'd miss you so much :cry: :cry: :cry:

wordsworth: I think so too. Ai + Reina = HAWT :heart:

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freya86: Looks like Ai + Reina's a popular pairing :P

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YoukaiChica: You'll have to wait and see ;)

SeeYa: Thanks! JFC sumed it up really well :)

rndmnwierd: Your wish might come true sooner than you think XD
« Last Edit: December 16, 2006, 06:42:45 AM by lil_hamz »

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« Reply #87 on: August 28, 2006, 06:34:05 AM »
Yay for rokkies love!!! :yay::yay::yay:

I'd be hardworking too if Eri would stay behind to help me :pen_nod:

Again, nice work lil_hamz :thumbsup

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« Reply #88 on: August 28, 2006, 06:58:55 AM »
Whoa...Sayu? :o

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« Reply #89 on: August 28, 2006, 08:12:49 AM »
Aw. lil_hamz you're such a tease. I want more! I'm so selfish and greedy but with something this good who could blame me?!?!

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« Reply #90 on: August 28, 2006, 08:23:25 AM »
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Whoa...Sayu? :o



Seconded. Who knew Sayu could be sexy?

Secks? Where!?

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« Reply #91 on: August 28, 2006, 12:49:01 PM »
yay~ you're back and with more Kameshige goodness too!  thank you :D

oh btw I watched How Can I Tell Her.  It was really well done! and I think that would be awesome for a story plot :heart: :heart:

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« Reply #92 on: August 28, 2006, 03:52:41 PM »
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yay~ you're back and with more Kameshige goodness too!  thank you :D

oh btw I watched How Can I Tell Her.  It was really well done! and I think that would be awesome for a story plot :heart: :heart:


Ooh you saw it? Yippee! I'm glad someone likes it.
I think it would make a nice story too. Now if only someone would write about KameiShige & KameiMame :P

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« Reply #93 on: August 29, 2006, 06:34:59 PM »
:O I love this fic. I know I'm a bit late, but I just found it/joined today. (Great, admiting I'm a newbie...that's always good. =_=) But I LOVE the Reina x Ai pairing. :D It was totally unexpected and since Reina is my favorite, it just makes me love it more. ^^; Great job.
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« Reply #94 on: August 29, 2006, 08:53:40 PM »
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(Great, admiting I'm a newbie...that's always good. =_=)
The being a newbie part was pretty obvious by the fact that this is your first post here. :P



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« Reply #95 on: August 29, 2006, 09:01:09 PM »
yeah, welcome!
it's good to see that your first post is in the fanfiction zone, even before the introduction threat XDXD

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« Reply #96 on: August 29, 2006, 09:02:51 PM »
Heh heh, yea good point. :sweatdrop: All wells, better new then not join at all. :D


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yeah, welcome!
it's good to see that your first post is in the fanfiction zone, even before the introduction threat XDXD


Yea, well I found this place because of this fanfic so I figured I would post here first. XD
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« Reply #97 on: August 29, 2006, 10:11:51 PM »
This fanfic is the awesomest fanfic of all awesomely awesomeness.
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

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« Reply #98 on: August 29, 2006, 10:30:27 PM »
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Heh heh, yea good point. :sweatdrop: All wells, better new then not join at all. :D

Yea, well I found this place because of this fanfic so I figured I would post here first. XD



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« Reply #99 on: August 29, 2006, 11:33:36 PM »
XD Actually, I am reading it right now as we speak. ^^ Very good fic, I'm going to comment when I finish reading it. -has a long ways to go-
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