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« Reply #40 on: August 10, 2006, 01:31:14 AM »
UWAAAA~

*kisses the ground that len.chan walks on*

I love you so much! This is awesome. My mind is racing with all the possiblilties of who is sleeping with Rika :P

You always have a line that grabs my heart -
This chapter it is - That’s called friendship. That’s the true love

Beauuuuutiful!

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« Reply #41 on: August 10, 2006, 06:19:44 PM »
I really like this! I wanna know what happens next:D
I :heart: YoMiki! And I love Yossi+Miki+Rika actionXD

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« Reply #42 on: August 10, 2006, 08:21:50 PM »
Who's sleeping with Rika! I must know!!! *stares at the screen, waiting for an update*

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« Reply #43 on: August 11, 2006, 01:51:59 AM »
YOMIKI !!!~
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #44 on: August 11, 2006, 07:24:23 AM »
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Who's sleeping with Rika! I must know!!! *stares at the screen, waiting for an update*

you'll have to wait for that.. rika's lover it's a seeecret for now :P
and for chapter 16.. maybe tonight. It's written already but i won't be home 'till evening today.

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UWAAAA~

*kisses the ground that len.chan walks on*

I love you so much! This is awesome. My mind is racing with all the possiblilties of who is sleeping with Rika

You always have a line that grabs my heart -
This chapter it is - That’s called friendship. That’s the true love

Beauuuuutiful!

aah~ thanks Mikan. always glad that you like it^^

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« Reply #45 on: August 11, 2006, 07:27:42 AM »
Damn you len.chan!!!

*sets alarm clock* ....I'll be here for it  ^^


☆ひとみちゃんのためなら バイト バイト バイト!☆

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When Love Hurts 16
« Reply #46 on: August 11, 2006, 10:54:28 PM »
hey, how I've promised, here's part 16.
don't kill me for ending the chapter this way :P


***16***


Aya Matsuura wasn’t exactly the best example of a calm person. She hadn’t sleep in all night and she had spent all day running from side to side of her apartment cleaning, tidying up, and making anything else that could help to forget how stupid she was feeling.

The doorbell rang and she prayed for the person who was there could help her.

“You look horrible” it was the first that Aya heard.
“Thanks Rika-chan, that helps a lot…”
“Sorry. What happened?”
“I kissed her, told her ‘I love you’ and she ran away” Aya sat in the sofa and hold her legs hiding her head behind “I knew I was going to screw up things”

Ishikawa went next to her thinking what she could say to calm down the other girl. The last thing she needed it was an Ayaya out of her mind.

“I’m sure she just freaked out. It’s not easy for her to find out that the one she loved for some many time love her in return.”
“It’s not easy for me either, ok?!” Aya jump of her seat and began to make circles, shacking her arms and talking hysterically “That’s new for me! I just…, I’ve just realized about this… feelings for her and…, and I don’t know how to deal with that! You think it was easy to go and kiss her? My knees were shaking and my heart was going so fast that I almost felt dying. You understand what I’m saying?! It was the first time I touched her that way and she ran away from me!”
“Aya, it’s just a kiss” said Rika taking her hand “And you’re acting like if she’d dumped you after sleeping with you”

Then, Ishikawa felt the hand in her own to turn like ice. Aya’s body had frozen after hearing the ‘sleeping with you’ line. She never, and never is NEVER, though about the possibility of Mikittan and her making… things. And now her mind was filled with the image of Miki’s nude and sweaty body brushing her skin while calling her name.

Aya blushed even more.

“Oh God… Guess we’ll have to work on this, too.”
“What?” said Matsuura who had returned from her shock as she felt Rika’s hands in her waist.
“If you’re afraid of become close to Miki, she’ll be afraid too.”
“And what are you going to do?”

Ishikawa’s body get closer to her.

“Just imagine that I’m Miki, ok?”
“I… I don’t think that’s a… good idea, Rika-chan”
“Shut up and close your eyes”

***


“What?”
“Close your eyes”
“Yocchan, I’m not in the mood for games, ok? I just wanna go home and sleep a whole week.”
“Pleeease” beg Yossi.

Miki couldn’t resist the younger girl’s puppy face. She was adorable acting like this.

“Fine…” said finally closing her eyes.

Hitomi shook her hand in front of Fujimotoi’s eyes to make sure that she wasn’t cheating. Then, placing her hands on Miki’s waist from behind, took her to a near room.

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« Reply #47 on: August 12, 2006, 02:56:46 AM »
ahh the suspense! wats rika thinking ...poor aya is all i can say >.<
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #48 on: August 12, 2006, 03:47:28 AM »
Ah, I can't get enough of this.

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« Reply #49 on: August 12, 2006, 07:14:10 AM »
*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*

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« Reply #50 on: August 12, 2006, 08:27:11 AM »
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*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*


OMG! Cookies! Cookies for len.chan!

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« Reply #51 on: August 12, 2006, 08:56:00 AM »
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*Shock* Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Hey len.chan...do you like cookies? *drags to the perv forum*


XDXD don't know... I was thinking about it but, i'm not good at writing something like this... give me some time ok? :P

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« Reply #52 on: August 12, 2006, 11:06:49 AM »
***17***



“Where are we?”
“It’s a surprise” answered Yossi while she seated Miki, still with her eyes closed, in a bench next to her “I know you’re upset those days for the whole thing with Aya and I feel like I should do something to help you”

Miki can’t help but think about the kiss Aya-chan gave her and felt guilty towards the girl sitting next to her. Yossi was doing everything to make her feel better and the kiss it felt like a betrayal.

“You don’t have to do nothing, Yocchan. Having you by my side is enough for me.”
“I want to do it” said Hitomi placing a kiss on Miki’s cheek “That’s something that helps me when I’m feeling down and I want to share it with you”
“Yocchan…”
“Just stay there and don’t look at me, ok?”

Fujimoto could hear Yossi breathing deeply. She was nervous?

“Why I can’t look at you?” ask with a funny smile.
“Because it’s the first time I’m going to do that for someone and I’m not good at all…Oh, and that’s a secret! Don’t tell anybody.”
“Ok, ok. I’ll keep the secret”

There was a silence after Miki’s words and she heard Hitomi take another deep breath to calm down. Then, there was a sound. A piano’s note out of tone and Yossi’ cursing something in an incomprehensible language.

No way…

She wasn’t going to do what she was thinking right? Miki extended her hand to touch what was in front of her. There was no doubt. That was a piano. But Yossi didn’t know how to play it…, right?

Her question was answered in a few seconds when she heard the first notes of a song and Yossi’s voice flowing with them.

Hitoribocchi de sukoshi
taikutsu na yoru
watashi dake ga samishii no?
Ah~ Uh~


Miki’s heart began to beat faster. She didn’t expect something like this from Hitomi. The way she was singing it seemed something important to her, something intimate, difficult to share, and Yossi was doing it for her. And what an amazing voice. She never heard her singing that way. Her voice sounded more mature, confident and sweet and made Miki’s heart melt hearing it.

One by one, all her doubts were disappearing. With every word, with every note, her feelings were clearer. When Yossi reached the end of the song, she was already sure.

demo egao wa taisetsu ni shitai
aisuru hito no tame ni...


When the piano fell silent, Hitomi felt a hand on her cheek and Miki looking at her with a tear rolling down her face.

“I know I play the piano like a shit but it’s not like crying…”

Fujimoto didn’t say anything at first. She just leaned to kiss Yossi’s lips and it was after that, with Miki’s breath caressing her skin, when the other girl could hear a whisper.

“I want to be with you…”

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« Reply #53 on: August 12, 2006, 04:22:13 PM »
*melts*

I have a soft spot in my heart for piano players :D

Nice choice of song too :D

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« Reply #54 on: August 12, 2006, 05:46:24 PM »
awww yossie is such a sweetheart......:inlove:
how could Miki not fall for someone like that  :heart:

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« Reply #55 on: August 12, 2006, 07:12:06 PM »
This is so... Aaaaa~! I love this!:inlove:   I wanna read more:D

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« Reply #56 on: August 13, 2006, 12:10:35 AM »
ok~ people wants it, people have it XD
I've done what i've could 'cause it was my first time writing stuff like this so don't expect much.. :P
go and read it XDXD
http://forum.jphip.com/showthread.php?p=152069#post152069

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« Reply #57 on: August 13, 2006, 02:36:55 AM »
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***17***
MO-Ehhhhhhhhhhhh!

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« Reply #58 on: August 13, 2006, 06:13:57 PM »
remember, the previous chapter is in the perv! XD


***19***

Maki was in her way to home when someone called her.

“Goto-san, wait!”

She turned to see who was calling her and saw that almost all Morning Musume was running towards her. Just Koharu, Sayumi and Reina were missing.

“Wha..at?!” asked Maki surprised.

Makoto, who seemed to be leading the other girls, approached her and made the big question without hesitation.

“There’s something going on between Yoshizawa-san and Ishikawa-san?”
“Wait, wait… Why are you asking me that?” Maki tried to avoid the question.
“You’re her friend. You should know something” insisted Makoto.
“Mai and Ayaka are her best friends. Why you don’t ask them?” Gottsan tried to hide that she was feeling uncomfortable. How the hell the girls knew about all that? She was sure that Rika did something already…
“We’ve asked them already and they were as surprised as us” answered Risa “But you’re not surprised at all. You seem to be hiding something…”

Maki felt trapped but she still managed to act coldly.

“And why do you want to know it? If she’s doing something it’s her problem.”
“No. It’s our problem too” said Konno “If she’s doing something that can damage the group we should know it”

Well…, that’s fair.

“So, you know something?” demanded Ogawa again.

Seeing how worried the girls were, Maki didn’t know what she should do and she just prayed for something to save her.

“Goto-san, can we talk a moment please?”
“Of course”

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

“But…” Makoto complained.
“Girls, you shouldn’t go home already?”
“Yes, Tsunku-san”

The Morning Musume members left Maki alone with her boss.

“It’s something important?” asked her.
“Hmm.., not really. You weren’t at the music room some minutes ago, didn’t you?”
“No. Why do you ask?
“’Cause I’ve heard an amazing version of I Wish while I was walking near there” said Tsunku fascinated “I’ve never imagine that she could do something like that. But you knew it already, right?
“Yeah” answered Maki with a smile.
Gottsan remembered how she and Yossi learnt that song together in the piano. It was the only song Yocchan could play ‘cause she wasn’t confident to learn another. She just wanted to play that over and over until make it perfect. And looking at Tsunku’s reaction, she did it.

So, that’s the special thing, huh? If you’ve shown that part of you she should be really important.

Maki couldn’t help but feel sad deep in her heart. She wanted Yossi to be happy, even if it was with another girl, but the pain would always be there.

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« Reply #59 on: August 13, 2006, 06:21:44 PM »
Ah, I understand how Maki feels.

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