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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #80 on: January 26, 2013, 05:02:22 AM »
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                                                           CH.11

Once the show ended Yuki tried to walk her to Mayu but there was so many people on her way, taking pictures,talking

Yuki got frustrated but still went backstage "where's Mayu?" she asked to an assitant

"who's Mayu?" he asked confused

Yuki pouted "you're useless!" she says mad and walks away searching for her  cyborg girl,she looked around there was some models still changing their clothes then she notice a familiar figure talking to a man in a corner "he putted his hand on her shoulder!"

Yuki got close fast and pushed the man aside "Stay away from her you perv!" she shouted clearly mad

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says shocked

"Inner Mayu: When Yuki became strong?"

Many assistants help the guy get up

The man got up finally "uh what did you do to me?" he's asked with a weird manner and wearing a scarf

Yuki was shocked "could it be?" she thought

The staff asked him "if he was okay?"

"This girl! this girl!" The man shouts pulling out his handicraft

Mayu get in the way "Excuse her,she's really protective!" she says with a nervous smile

"What's going on here?" The fashion designer asked then noticed Yuki"Kashiwagi san what are you doing here backstage?" he asked

"She pushed me honey!" The affected man says pointing at Yuki

Yuki moved her head side to side "why i didn't noticed before?" she wondered

"Yuki chan is really sorry!" Mayu says with a smile

Yuki turned to look at Mayu then raised an eyebrow

The fashion designer smiled "okay let's forget it,you help me a lot tonight..Thank you Mayu chan! Kashiwagi san has a great lil sister!" he says as he puts his hand on Yuki's shoulder

Yuki pouted "she's not my sister.." she murmured

(Inner Yuki/Black: Now i feel like an idiot!)

The two girls walked out of the place without saying a word

<DRIVING>

Yuki sighed while Mayu only looked outside her window both withou saying a word about what happened

The radio was on and soon a love song was being played, Yuki inmediately change it

"why you change? i liked the song!" Mayu asked looking at the older girl

"Why you were modeling that tight dress?" Yuki asked irritated and stopped the car hard

Mayu looked at Yuki with a confused "No way,she's jelousy!" she thought "Are you jealousy?" she asked

"WHAT? No..i'm curious!" Yuki says looking other way

(Mayu smirked)

"you know i'm starring a school play..i forgot to tell you!" Mayu says with a smile

(Note: That's a lie)

Yuki sighed "cool!" she says not so happy

Mayu took off her seatbelt "And there is this kiss scene that is giving me trouble!" she says with a little smirk

Yuki looked at the younger girl

"Would you teach me?" Mayu asked

Yuki got all red "what? uhmmm" she was open mouth

"You're my guardian so it will be cool if you show me!" Mayu says in a seductive tone as she gets closer to the older girl

Yuki gulped and tried to stay away but it wasn't possible when Mayu putted her hand behind the older's girl head to pull her closer

Mayu closed her eyes while Yuki had them open seeing how the younger girl's lips were on hers

Mayu slowly stopped the kiss and looked at the older girl and smirked

"Why did you do that? Are you crazy?"Yuki asked all red and nervous as she engines the car and drives fast

(Mayu only smiled)

~ONCE AT HOME~

Mayu sitted on the couch with her bunny to watch a movie while Yuki changes her clothes to pjs in her room

"Why i acted like a jealous boyfriend tonight? what's going on? and why the image of Mayu on that tight dress keep repeating in my head? I can't believe it! Tonight she just kissed me!" Yuki thinks as she puts her pjs on then she peeked out the living room where Mayu was watching a movie

Yuki sighed "i need some rest!" she thought as she walks to her bed and throws herself on it then after a few minutes of thinking she fell sleep

~After a few hours~

"Yuki chan wake up!" Mayu says poking the older girl's shoulder

Yuki opened her eyes "I'm sleeping" she says with her eyes closed

Mayu pouted and pinched Yuki's cheek

"Oucchh!" The older girl reacted and opened her eyes "What's wrong?" she asked then noticed Mayu standing next to her with a big white t-shirt

Yuki gulped

"I'm scared! can i sleep with you tonight?" Mayu asked looking down

"Somehow the temperature increased!" Yuki thought as her heart beats fast

"Yuki chan!" Mayu says waiting for an answer

Yuki blinked a few times "Just for tonight!" she answered

Mayu smiled and layed next to her,Yuki putted a pillow between them which Mayu removed immediately "If i wanted to sleep with a pillow,i would sleep with mine!" she says as puts her head on Yuki's chest

"Wha- what are you doing?" Yuki asked nervous and redder

"you're heart is beating so fast!" Mayu says with a smirk

"What do you expect?nobody ever had slept on my chest!" Yuki says looking away

Mayu smiled then closed her eyes "relax.." she whispered Yuki pouted

After a few minutes both girls fell sleep

TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #81 on: January 26, 2013, 05:17:29 AM »
Well Yuki is Jealous.... pushing someone....

Mayu is quite tricky wanting to kiss but saying need to practice kissing with Yuki.

Yuki is really really in heaven here... being close with Mayu there...

Thank's for the update... Can't wait to see the next

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #82 on: January 26, 2013, 01:15:33 PM »
Waw! It was funny!!

Mayu :rofl:

Yuki jealous... :rofl:

They kissed!! :twothumbs
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #83 on: January 26, 2013, 01:22:52 PM »
Jealous yuki is so cute~
Mayuyu is the first who slept on yuki's chest oh...

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #84 on: January 26, 2013, 02:16:30 PM »
Yuki is jealous~~~~~ hahaha

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #85 on: January 26, 2013, 02:37:58 PM »
 I love this chapter :wriggly:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #86 on: January 26, 2013, 02:47:41 PM »
 :P2 mayu is enjoying teasing Yuki ... and I would like to see more of that!  :twothumbs
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #87 on: January 27, 2013, 06:24:26 AM »
nice update,

Mayuki moment,
Mayu tease Yuki huh~
I think that fashion show was great,
that why Yuki keep thinking Mayu~
What will happen next??
Yuki work issue?? Mayu school issue??
Or Mayuki have a little argue??

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #88 on: January 27, 2013, 01:32:42 PM »
Yuki is too dense here,LOL

I cant wait when they together,yuki is mayu guardian,she must thinking about the relationship between her and mayu

Thank for the update cmze-san
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.11
« Reply #89 on: January 27, 2013, 07:13:08 PM »
Mayuki moment
mayu and yuki sleep together.  :wub:
nice chapter   :inlove:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #90 on: January 30, 2013, 07:01:29 AM »
                                                      *Loving U*
                                                           CH.12

After what happened in the last chapter Yuki is been kinda distant..

(At school)

The class is over so everyone were packing their bags except for one person who was reading over and over again the same message

"Mayu chan i have to work till late again,there's food in the fridge and don't wait up for me!"

Mayu sighed then got up

"Mayu chan do you want come with us?" A girl asked

"No,i'm fine.. thanks!" The cyborg says coldly as she walks away

On her way home Mayu couldn't help to think about certain older girl which causes her to feel several emotions at the same time

"I hate you.." Mayu murmured as she walks

(At work)

Yuki was looking at her phone screen were it was displaying pictures of her and Mayu

Yuki smiled a little "why am i doing?" she whispered then holds back her hair

"Hows everything doing?" Sae says as she enters to the office with a big smile on her face

Yuki putted her phone on her pocket fast "nothing!" she replied fast

Sae frowned "i didn't ask what you were doing?" she says confused

Yuki smiled nervously "how's everything with that straight girl that doesn't like you like.. THAT?" she asked to change the topic

Sae pouted then sat "great..she says i'm a great friend!" she replied still annoyed

Yuki looked down

"What about you and that little punk with great body?" Sae asked

Yuki got up "You what bothers me *Sae looked at her confused* Have you ever liked a guy before?" she asked

Sae was totally clueless "Well i mean i always liked girls and even had a little crush on you in highschool *Yuki reacted* but today there's no chance for us baby!" the tomboy says acting cool

"That wasn't what i meant.. i mean have you ever met someone like..that.. you wanna make happy?" Yuki asked

"What? are you in love Black?" Sae asked shocked

"no.." Yuki answered weakly and looked other way

"Let's go drinking to celebrate and also visiting Sayaka on her workplace!" Sae says smirking as she fast gets up and gets closer to Yuki to put her arm around her neck

Yuki looke at Sae "Are you sure you're not stalking her?" she asked

Sae smirked "it's causality!" she replies careless

"It's the fift time we go to her workplace!" Yuki replied

"shut up smartass!" Sae replied

Both laugh while they walk out of the office

~Meanwhile at home~

Mayu was playing with Mayuki while watches tv, all the sudden the phone rang:

Mayu picked up but this man didn't let her say hi..

"Hello Kashiwagi san good news.. i found a relative of Watanabe san her Grandmother what should i do?!" The man asks

The phone slipped from Mayu's hand tears already to come

"Kashiwagi san! Kashiwagi san!" It's heard from the phone

Mayu grabbed the phone and hang up then sitted on the couch to wait for the older girl

~Hours passed~

Mayu end up falling sleep on the couch, *noise of keys*

Mayu sitted and waited for Yuki to enter to the dept

Yuki turned the lights on "Mayu chan.. *hip* told you to not wait for me!" she says trying to sound as normal as possible

Mayu got up and looked at the older girl without saying a word

"I know i'm drunk *hip* i can't lie to you!" Yuki says with a smile

Mayu got closer and both had eye contact for a second before Mayu slap her

Yuki lost balance and fell on a sitting position "what the.." she murmured then looked at Mayu who had a tears rolling her cheeks

Yuki was shocked with her hand on her cheek just looking at the younger girl

"He called, he found my Grandmother ... i already made my bag!" Mayu says in tears then run away

"Mayu wait up! let me explain!" Yuki shouts as she gets up and run behind her

It was raining so it was More difficult for Yuki to run but fortunately Mayu wasn't good at running so she stopped to catch her breath with her hands on her knees

Yuki found her and stopped at 3 steps behind

"Go away! Mayu says as she catches her breath

"Mayuyu!" Yuki says as she about to touch her but Mayu slapped her hand

"You lie to me.. you said you liked me when all this time you were trying to find ny relatives to leave me!" Mayu says mad and all soaked

"That's not truth.. i'm not good for you!" Yuki says all soaked also

"You're a liar .. you pretend to care about me all this time!" Mayu says sad and crying

Yuki's tears can not be seem cause the rain "i care more than you think.." she thought "let's go you're going to catch a cold!" she replied and takes Mayu's hand hard

"Let go! let go!" Mayu says forcing with Yuki

Mayu ends up pushing Yuki again because she was still a little drunk

"Don't you ever get close to me again!" Mayu shouts

Yuki gets up fast and puts her hands on Mayu's shoulders

"Don't touch me! don't touch! You liar!" Mayu shouts crying forcing with Yuki

Yuki hugged Mayu

"Why?" Mayu murmured crying

"Mayu chan i... *A bus passed*" Yuki whispered still holding Mayu

Mayu hugged Yuki tight "me too.." she whispered and a little smile formed her lips

The two what it seems lovers walked home, Mayu holding Yuki's waist and Yuki with her arm on Mayu's neck

(Once at home)

Yuki grabbed Mayu by her waist to pull her closer to her,Mayu putted her hand on Yuki's cheek.The two looked into each others eyes for a moment

"I'm sorry, i didn't want to slap you!" Mayu finally spoke

Yuki kissed Mayu's hand then looked at her

Mayu kissed Yuki passionately that she even pushed her against the door,Yuki removed Mayu's wet blazer while Mayu unbuttons Yuki's shirt 

The two went to Yuki's room without breaking their kiss and Yuki still holding Mayu's waist ..

Once on bed..

Yuki stopped their kissing session and looked at the younger girl then shook her head

"what?" Mayu asked

Yuki kissed Mayu's forhead "one step at time.." she says before falling sleep

Mayu smiled...

TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #91 on: January 30, 2013, 08:58:47 AM »
In chapter 10, Mayu became a model and Yuki acts like a jealous boyfriend. Priceless!  :lol: and I love the teasing part in chapter 11  :deco: The MaYuki kiss is so cute.  :inlove:

And now on the latest chapter..

Yuki avoids Mayu and then...

 :shocked  :shocked  :shocked

It became djklghdfgjkhdfgkdf   :rofl: OMG! That scene is so!  :panic:  :panic:  :bleed eyes: My mind is running wild.  XD


Thanks for this cmze-san  :cow:


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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #92 on: January 30, 2013, 10:00:26 AM »
Wow am i watch a tv drama? LOL

The part when a bus pass its really...LOL

So they are together now,im wondering what happen after this...

“One step at time”

So what the next step?



Thank for the update cmze-san! Great as always...
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #93 on: January 30, 2013, 10:43:08 AM »
awww mayu and yuki are so cute  XD
but yuki ended being drunk :smhid :lol:
poor mayu doesn't wanna live with her grandma :cry:
sae's stalking sayaka  :P
thanx for the update :deco:
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #94 on: January 30, 2013, 12:26:47 PM »
I love it :D
this fic is my top one now :D

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #95 on: January 30, 2013, 01:12:03 PM »
Getting more and more cute the interaction between Mayu and Yuki....

What's going to happen next.... can't wait....

Thank you for the udpate

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #96 on: January 30, 2013, 02:03:58 PM »
 Mayuki moment!!!! :luvluv1:  :luvluv2:

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #97 on: January 30, 2013, 07:40:20 PM »
i love this fic please update soon  :)
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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #98 on: January 31, 2013, 12:39:11 AM »
soo cute, but
yuki should be sober to do that sort of thing
step by step they are a couple
thanks  for update.
waiting the next chapter.

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Re: *LOVING U* (MaYuki) CH.12
« Reply #99 on: January 31, 2013, 01:04:54 AM »
woohoo!!! Finally!!!!
Poor Sae, she is triying hard to get Sayaka xd

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