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« Reply #20 on: September 19, 2012, 05:18:32 PM »
                                                                                CHAPTER TWO

We just stand there staring at each other, looking straightly in each other’s eyes. I can feel my heart beat speeding up, like a race car. And if that continues it’s going to stop eventually. I have her to blame for that. I really want to get to know this girl. But I don’t think I have that right. I mean I have a child to look after and I don’t want to give her that burden and I don’t really think she would want to have a child after all she is only 21 years old.

“Acchan?”  I heard Yuko calling my name and realized that I have to look away and break our staring session. And when I’m about to do that she smiles!God, I feel like I’m in heaven. That cute dimples showing when she smiles.

“ACCHAN!” Screams Yuko totally freaking me out.

“What?” I ask sounding a bit irritated.

I was having a great time staring deep into the eyes of my beloved one. And I’m a total pervert because I totally checked out her whole body. Such a nice figure and such a beautiful face! How can you not fall in love with her. Although I like her yankee style too. It suited her perfectly. And she looked really manly and protective. I really want to get to know her.

“Do you know each other?” ask Yuko curiously.

“Eh?” It’s like I can’t even understand what Yuko is saying.

“Do you know her? You just said her name.”

“Ah.. Yeah kind of.” I say as I look at her and smile awkwardly.

Then she smiles back at me. And me, well I’m back in wonderland. I want to kick Yuko out of the picture. Just beat her up and leave her there. Sounds harsh but I really want to be alone with her. She is just like an angel.

An angel that came all the way from heaven to make me fall in love with her! And I can say this for sure – It is working!

“What do you mean kind of? Do you know her or not?”

“Well yesterday I and Ayumu were in the park. And on the way back we… well I bumped into her.” I said as I chuckled, same as her.

“Okay, so this is not going to be as awkward as I imagined it would be knowing you.” Laughed Yuko.

“EHh? What do you mean by “knowing you”? I sad laughing.

“Well you don’t really get along with people.”

“Yuko! You are mean!” I said a little embarrassed while hitting her arm.

“Ouch! Okay, I’m sorry.”

“Ano, Maeda – san?” I turn around and meet her gaze again. So captivating!

“Acchan.” I say as I smile.

“Eh?”

“Call me, Acchan.”

She just blushed and nodded slightly.

“A – Acchan. Then you call me, Takamina. That’s how my friends call me.”

Oh God she stuttered. So cute!! She called me her friend. I can die now!

“So now we are friends, huh.” I asked smiling like I just fulfilled my biggest dream.

“I would be happy if we could be friends.”

“I would be happy, too, Takamina.” I said her name and she blushed sgain!

“So what is it?”

“How is Ayumu – chan?”

She remembers my daughter’s name. This is really kind of her, asking about my daughter. I feel like If I’m with her, I would be the happiest person on this earth.

“She is okay, actually she is in the kindergarten, right now. Thank you for asking!”

“I’m happy.”

And here we go again. Just standing there and staring into each other’s eyes.

“Okay that’s it! Can you stop flirting with each other now?” ask Yuko almost shouting.

Both of us widened our eyes, blushed and looked away. I can’t see her, but me, I’m blushing furiously! Then I imagine her as my girlfriend/boyfriend and my face becomes even redder. I feel like my whole body is burning and I’m about to pass out.

“Mou.. Yuko!!” I said as I hit her again BUT this time HARDER!

“Yuko – san!” she said as she looked down.

“Itai!! Acchan!! What did I do?” said Yuko rubbing her arm.

“You are being a pervert again!”

“Eh? Be careful, will ya? If Haruna hears you she is going to kill me!” she said nervously while me and Takamina just giggled.

“Oh, and Takamina!! I told you to call me just Yuko!” demanded Yuko. They are so much alike.

“Ah, I’m sorry.. Yuko.”

“That’s better. Let’s not waste any more time and get going!” said Yuko wrapping one of her arm around my neck and the other around Takamina’s.

“Where are we going?” I asked curiously.

“At my house!” said Yuko proudly.

“What about Haruna?”

“She has some photo shooting. She said she will be home late tonight.”

 ~~~30 Minutes later At Yuko’s House~~~

“Tadaima!” shouted Yuko to the empty house.

“Sorry for the intruding.” I said and walked in slowly.

“Sorry for the intruding.” Said Takamina walking right behind me.

After eating and chatting for hours we are really friends. She is a nice person just like I thought she would be. She is standing in front of me and Yuko is standing next to my left.

As I was drinking my orange juice and then the glass I was holding slipped and it dropped on the ground. As I freaked out and Yuko panicked, Takamina stayed calm.

“AH!!! I’m so sorry Yuko.”

“It’s okay, Acchan!”

“I’ll take the glass pieces and threw them away!” said Takamina as she got up from her chair.

“NO!!”

I suddenly screamed which startled Takamina and she slipped. I tried to catch her but my body couldn’t hold her weight. And we ended up falling, with me on top of her.

Both of us widened our eyes. I felt something soft and warm on my lips……

WE ARE KISSING!!!

TBC??

АAGH!!!! I'm tired and sleepy, but I can't sleep cuz it's too early. Chapter 2 DOUZO!! Hope you like it!

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #21 on: September 19, 2012, 05:39:42 PM »
my god!!
I really hate the "TBC" part!hoho

Update soon!
Thank you for the update!
waiting to nxt chapter! :thumbsup

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #22 on: September 19, 2012, 06:23:08 PM »
i hope u will keep updating your fic ...'

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #23 on: September 19, 2012, 07:52:17 PM »
Wouhou!!! Kiss!!!!!

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #24 on: September 20, 2012, 04:34:40 AM »
I hope Yuko doesn't interrupt my AtsuMina sweet moment  :heart:

yeah she needs.. jajaj its gonna be funny :D

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #25 on: September 20, 2012, 12:40:32 PM »
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! :D

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN..

I LIKE YOUR STORY..

PLEASE CONTINUE,..

THANK YOU

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #26 on: November 22, 2012, 10:47:38 AM »
Sweet accident  :w00t:  :w00t:
Thanx for the update ^^
Will be waiting the next chapter :D

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #27 on: November 22, 2012, 01:00:42 PM »
Interesting development on atsumina...

Looking forward to the next one :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #28 on: November 22, 2012, 05:54:00 PM »
New fic discovered!!
Great start :)
Please update soon!!!

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #29 on: December 31, 2012, 07:00:12 AM »
Accidentally kiss?? Wow!  :mon lol:
They stared at each other?  *le me imaging* :mon mischief:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #30 on: January 06, 2013, 05:42:40 AM »
woah...woah.... XD first chapter I'm like holy sh** (sorry for my language  :depressed: ) but this is just freakin' awesome!! especially the ending of the chapters! man...u sure know how to keep us hanging...lol (in a good way)  :tantrum: lol  :farofflook:

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #31 on: January 06, 2013, 05:41:49 PM »
*finally got the time to read*

*squealed all the time while reading*

*sparkle eyes*

they k...k..issed?

*squeals again*

sorry, I am a 'lazy' person so I do these script texts *irony*

anyway, god, update~ I wanna see their reaction~~

*happy* *giggles*

I'll be waiting~
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #32 on: January 31, 2013, 06:51:18 PM »
atsumina is so cute  :heart: :heart:

that damn man  :angry:

please update soon  :bow:
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #33 on: February 01, 2013, 04:51:57 PM »
"Then she smiles back at me. And me, well I’m back in wonderland. I want to kick Yuko out of the picture. Just beat her up and leave her there. Sounds harsh but I really want to be alone with her. She is just like an angel."

So bad!!! lol  XD XD XD
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #34 on: February 01, 2013, 05:32:52 PM »
wah.. Acchan you're so violent with Yuko just because you want to be alone with your angel :nervous :nervous
but I like it
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #35 on: February 01, 2013, 06:12:08 PM »
when i know that acchan had a child i was thought that she's minami child too, but when i know acchan get raped, dammit! I want kill those old man!
I like the incident kissu, looking forward for atsumina reaction :3

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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #36 on: March 03, 2013, 02:25:07 AM »
I love this fic  :twothumbs :drool:

please update soon  :cry: :bow:
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #37 on: July 29, 2013, 05:24:57 AM »
HURRY UP AND UPDATE ONEGAI SHIMASU  :kneelbow:

it is sooo good and sooo cute  :luvluv1:

the kiss was just  :nya:
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Re: It Doesn't Matter Because I love You! UPDATED! CH. 2
« Reply #38 on: October 21, 2013, 06:54:17 AM »
Please, it continues the history, do I want him/it to know what it will happen later?

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