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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Sok on December 27, 2011, 05:26:36 AM
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Hey, everyone :mon yoyo: I was re-watching both seasons of Majisuka Gakuen, and some fics. i sort of had a dream, of what if after they graduated. :mon sweat: One was a danso?:mon misch: Will was forced to become a guy? :mon headbang:
Not really sure where I'm going here but whatever. :mon exhaust: Hope you like it. If not i'll stop or delete it. :mon surr:
Table of Contents
Prologue (Below)
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg984395#msg984395)
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg984705#msg984705)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg985422#msg985422)
New Year Special (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg986540#msg986540)
Chapter 4 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg986972#msg986972)
Chapter 4 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg987281#msg987281)
Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg988214#msg988214)
Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg988386#msg988386)
Chapter 7 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg992776#msg992776)
Chapter 8 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1013788#msg1013788)
Chapter 9 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1016548#msg1016548)
Chapter 10 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1046488#msg1046488)
Chapter 11 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1052037#msg1052037)
Chapter 11 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1058212#msg1058212)
Chapter 12 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31489.msg1078584#msg1078584)
Prologue
“Ha~ It’s already been a year.” A tall pale skinned man said.
“Yeah, even though we’ve known each since childhood.” A short female said.
“I still can’t believe that you used to be one of Majisuka Gakuen’s 4 Queens.” Another shorter female said.
“Yeah, the fact that it already been a year since I graduated from there seems surreal, like it still hasn’t set in. You know.” He turns and faces the two short females.
“I know, but what’s more surprising is the change that came after.” The shorter female said taking a sip from her coffee.
“Yeah, I know what you mean, and as having to leave the Rappapa members behind.”
“Well, at least I didn’t fake have to my own death. Like you two.”
“Hey! You helped remember!” Both females yelled.
“Hey! I just did what was asked of me. Besides you won’t stop bugging me with those puppy dog eyes of yours until I agreed to help you.”
“So, have you talked with anyone from Rappapa?”
“No. Not since graduation.”
“Okay, enough of that we need to go to work.”
“What?” the male said.
“But we still got half an hour.”
“Yeah, you do. But I have to go to the police station cuz I’m getting a trainee. And she especially asked to be trainee by me, the young detective.”
“Okay, we’ll see you later.” The man said waving bye to the shortest female.
“So, what do think her new trainee will be?” The female asked the male.
“Female! Definitely female.”
“I totally agree. Anyways, why have you changed so much?”
“What do you mean?”
“Oh come on! You used to be one of the big 4. And you’re like a trained puppy.” The female said in a sad tone.
“I don’t know. Maybe cuz there’s nothing interesting or fighting. Back in school there were fights every single day with other yankee school, but now that we’re adults.”
“Now that we’re adults, we can’t do what we want. Btw you get your inheritance today at 9:30am, right? ” the female said.
“Yeah, well let’s get going. I wanna stop being a guy and go back to being a girl.”
“Yeah, I still can’t believe the condition your family left was for you to become a man for a year.”
“Yeah, but at least it wasn’t something like having to marry some pervert.”
“Hey, was that a gap at me?”
“No. Anyways let’s get going.”
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I want more of it. Post next chpt please. Thanks
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Another multishot fic from you?
You're several times more sophisticated than i7! :w00t: (well... did you catch that?)
Right now I still envy you for that ideas overflowing, though you aren't sure with where this story is going.
About the prologue, still can't comment much of it. Still waiting till another piece of idea is flowed in the next chapter. :D
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Sydney W & aruka Thank you for your comments. I now sort of know where this fic is going.
here's the first Chapter. And I know my mind is sort of 'sophisticated' and sort of twisted, :mon sweat: but that helps alot when it comes to writing. Hope you like it. :mon mischief:
Chapter 1
Aki-p Law office
“Hello, Mr. Aki-p.”
“Hello, Ms. Oshima and Mr. Matsui. I see you’re here to claim your family inheritance.”
“Yes, Mr. Aki-p. I have already completed the condition set by my family.”
“Correct, you have. Now, if you will please read over these papers and sign them after reading them carefully.”
“Yes, thank you.” He began to read the papers of inheritance. “Um, Mr. Aki-p what is this about taking custody of someone?”
“Oh, that. Well the thing is that your parents were taking care of your cousin when her parents died. And since you are now the only family she has, I thought you could take custody of her. Now if you don’t then I can just put her in …” Before he could finish, Ms. Oshima interpreted.
“No! He’ll take custody!”
“What?! Why?!”
“Cuz you’re the only family she has and vice revesa.”
“You’re right, okay I’ll take custody of her. There. All the papers are signed.”
“Great! Now here is the information about your cousin. And now all your family’s inheritance is yours, but you have to stay a man the rest of your life.”
“What?! I thought it was only for a year!”
“No, that was to see if you were capable of being a man and since you are, you get the inheritance. But if you stop and go back to being a girl I’m force to take everything from you. Sorry that’s the condition your family put.”
They left the lawyer’s office.
“Ah, great and here I thought I could finally let my hair down.”
“Yeah, but it seems you can no longer be a girl. So why not just cut it off?”
“Good idea, since I have to live as a man for the rest of my life.”
“Beside, those wigs you use are starting to stink and they look way to fake to be real hair anyways.”
“Yeah, so how about we go to a salon & spa?”
“Yahoo~ Hey, what you waiting for?”
“How the hell can you be so energetic? What are you, the energizer bunny or something?”
“No! Now let’s get that hair of yours cut.”
They enter the salon & spa place.
Police station detective building
“So, Chief? Who’s this trainee I’m suppose to train?”
“Oh! Detective Keibuho.”
“It’s Detective Takahashi Minami, Sir. How can you keep messing up my name?”
“I’m truly sorry, Detective Takahashi.”
“Anyway my new trainee?”
“Oh, yes. She is waiting in your office. I think this will be a pleasant surprise for you since you already know her.”
“Huh?” Minami replied confused.
“You’re dismissed.”
With that Minami leaves the Chief’s office and enters hers. There she see a young female looking at the photos around her office.
“Hello? And you are?” Minami speaks startling the girl.
“Huh? Ah. Ah! Hello Detective Minami. Long time no see.”
“Maeda Atsuko? What are you doing here? And where’s my trainee?” Minami asked confused.
Atsuko giggles at Minami’s questions. “You’re funny Minami.”
“Hey, I’m being serious.”
“Silly, I’m your trainee and new partner. Please take good care of me.”
“EHHH?!” Minami says with her fail expression.
“Hey! You’re supposed to say, Pleasure to be working with you or something nice. Not EHHH?!” Atsuko pouted cutely at Minami.
How the hell did this happen? I thought she was studying to become a nurse not a detective. Wth did I do in my past life? Well I did pretend to die leaving her behind, but she doesn’t know that, does she? Wait! But that’s me current life. Urgh! Ren you idiot! You jinx me. “Sorry it’s just that it surprised me that’s all. I hope we can get along.”
“Great! Now what do we do?”
“Oh, please assist me in reading and looking over these files and afterwards write a report on them.”
“What? No going out and looking of bad guys?”
“Atsuko, you’re in the detective field not the police force. Here we read files, solve them and write reports then read other reports and make sure the case was solved and not just passed over. There are times that we get to go out and search for the criminals but it’s occasionally , but there are time that we must get involved by going undercover and solving them that way, but that’s rare and I mean really rare.”
“How boring.” Atsuko deadpanned sitting on the desk next to Minami’s.
“Then you should have become a nurse or something that dealt with blood or violence.”
“No, this is fine. I like working with you.”
“Then stop complaining and do your job.”
After leaving the Salon & Spa
“Wow, you look hotter with your new hair cut than with those fake wigs.”
“Yeah, but don’t you think I look like a Buddhist priest. Like Ikkyu-san?”
“Naaahhhh~ you’re very handsome. In fact I’m not the only one who thinks that.”
“What? What do you mean, Yuko?”
“Look behind you.”
He turns his head to face where Yuko’s pointing and sees many women staring in his direction. “What are they staring at?”
“You, you idiot. They’re all staring at you and undressing you with their eyes.”
“Oi! I don’t roll that way.”
“Well Ren, too bad since YOU ARE NOW LIVING A MAN’S LIFE. You have to seem and act interested in women, even though you’re really female.”
“Okay, I understand that but I don’t have to do it all the time. Besides I wonder if I can get married and have kids.”
“Well it says here that you can, but if you do get married you have to marry a woman cuz you’re a man.”
“Ah man, can’t I just get the guy to cross-dress and become a cross-dressing couple?”
“No, it says she must be 100% female.” Yuko says showing Ren the bolded and underlined text.
“Ratz! Anyways let’s drop that and go onto my cousin. What’s her name?”
“Matsui Jurina. It says here she attends. OHMYGOSH!”
“What? What’s wrong?”
“Ren, she attends Majisuka Gakuen and is the current President of Rappapa!”
“What? But Center’s the Pers…wait! Let me see her photo.”
Yuko passes him the picture that’s attracted to the file.
“No way~ She’s my cousin? Well that does explain a little of that personality of hers.”
“Wait, you know her?”
“Yeah, she’s the one I told you about.”
“You know the one that broke the door down and challenge Maeda and then wanted to fight with me, but I didn’t see any point in fighting her.”
“That disrespectful runt?”
“Yep, that’s the one.”
“Wow, she’s definitely your relative.”
“Yep, now let’s go pick her up.”
“…Um maybe you should pick her up alone, since you-know.”
“Huh?” Ren said confused. “Oh, I totally forgot about you being dead and all.”
“Yeah, well I’ll see you at home.”
“Okay.”
TBC..... ( if you want me to) :mon bye:
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Wowowow!!!! Yuko and Mianmi are not dead??? And Ren has to be Ren for her whole life????
Awesome continue!!!!!!
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YES! This is the type of after-majisuka fic I wanted to read! And yay~! You're writing it!!! HOORAY!! :twothumbs Please do continue! It's interesting because Yuko and Minami are not dead! And Center as the president! WOAH! I wonder what will happen next?
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Another Majisuka fic?! I'm in!!! :lol:
Lololol! This is so interesting~ I knew from the first sentence of your prologue that it's going to be Rena/Ren.
But wait, childhood friends? So Gekikara, Yuko and Minami had a past together, huh? Really excited to see how the three ended up in that strange predicament as they do now.
And about Ren wanting to get married and having kids... She shouldn't worry about it much. I'm sure it won't be that hard to achieve. In fact, she only needs to look around *cough*Black&herkid*cough*, and she'll get her instant family. :lol:
Update soon!
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Woah! This seems so interesting!!! XD
Minami and Yuko didn't die :) and Ren have to be Ren all his life :lol:
Acchan becoming a detective to work with Minami~ :wub:
I would love to read more of this :D
Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute: And other of your fics too XD
I love them all :inlove: :twothumbs
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@ kahem- Thank you for your comment.
@karomuwi-Thanks. I was also dying to have someone write one, but since It was taking too long and I was inspired by the drama. I just had to do it. Hope I don't fail. :badluck:
@gekikarabuACE- I get what you're saying. *cough*Black&herkid*cough* But I might add a little twist to that. :mon cweepy: Maybe. Not sure yet. But you did read my mind.
@Yagami.Rai- Thank you. I'll try to update all my fics as soon as I can.
Thank you everyone for your comments. You encourage me to continue. I'll update as soon as I finish my work for school. Hopefully, I'll update Chapter 2 by today.
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:panic: This is a must continue! :scolding:
Majisuka Gakuen in a way it should be.... :nya:
Waiting for your next!
:kneelbow: Arígatou!
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WOO~!! Takamina & Yuko didn't die~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/farofflook.gif)
Rena become Ren forever~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_mischief.gif)
Jurina her cousin?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/@_@.gif)
Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_cny2.gif)
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As promised. Chapter 2. Thank you everyone for your comments.
Chapter 2
After separating from Yuko, Ren walked to Majisuka Gakuen. While waiting for Jurina to get out of school. He walked around and noticed many things had changed since his graduation. For example the school was clean and fixed up, it no longer looked the way it looked, and all the students were in their classes not fooling around or anything but studying and paying attention to the teachers. WTH? When did these yankees start wanting to learn? Were Ren’s thoughts as he unintentionally dumped into the principal, Nojima Yuriko.S***! Ren thought to himself.
“Hello, I’m the principal, Nojima Yuriko. And you are?”
“Hello, sorry for the intrusion, I’m Matsui Ren. I was just looking for my cousin Matsui Jurina, she’s known as Center.”
“Oh, so you must be her new guardian.”
“Yes. I’m her new guardian. Btw wasn’t this school supposed to be the strongest & greatest yankee school?”
“Yes, and it is. It’s just that the new Rappapa doesn’t want stupid uneducated students who can’t fight. So they up-graded by making them all attend class, fix the entire school so it look presentable, add fight classes for those who don’t know how to fight and to improve their fighting, and have organized fights within the school.”
“Wow, that’s one hell of an up-grade.”
“I know right? I’m glad Watanabe Mayu, well she’s known as Nezumi convinced me.”
The mouse? Well she was always good at starting things. Well at least she’s using it to for the school instead of against it. “Oh, that’s great. Um, I think I’ll leave now, bye.”
“Wait! Why don’t I take you to Jurina’s class?” Yuriko graded Ren’s right arm and clinged onto him tightly.
Ren’s thoughts: Ah! Gross! She’s pressing my arm against her chest! I feel like puking! She’s like old enough be to be my grandmother! OHGOSH! I wanna puke! No! Ren, man up! You’re a man and man like this, right? But it’s sooo~ gross. OHMYGOSH! I think she has chest hair! Urgh! Her breath stinks! What has she been eating! Need to separate! (note: only 1 min has passed by.) “Um excuse me, but why are you clinging onto me?”
“Oh? Sorry.” Yuriko does a girly embarrassed gesture.
Gross! Can I kill no scratch that I meant beat the hell out of you! You disgusting woman! No wonder it’s an all girl school, the boys wouldn’t want to be sexually harassed by this thing.
“Okay, this is Jurina’s class.” Yuriko said stepping into the class. “Ahem! Ladies, I’ll like to introduce this young man who has come to pick up our Center.” She announced.
Wait! WTH! Why are you making an announcement! I just wanted to take a look at her class not be introduced to it. Damn you! Now I have to walk in and officially introduce myself. *sigh* what a pain in the butt.
“eh?” “Someone came to pick Center up?” was heard from the students inside. “Impossible! I don’t have anyone to pick me up! I live alone!” Jurina yelled getting up from her seat.
“Please come in.” Yuriko said waving her hand for Ren to enter. Once he did all the girls in class were fangirling over him.
“Hello, I’m Matsui Ren and I’m Jurina’s older cousin. Thank you all for taking such good care of her.” Ren bowed towards the class.
“Hey! Who are you! I never met you in my life!”
“OI! That’s true but my parents have been taking care of you since that happened. And now since my parents are gone, I have been given custody over you so you’ll be living with me cuz I don’t feel like sending you money to rent some place.”
“What?! I have to live with you?” Jurina yelled. The girls around her were more than willing to switch with her.
“Yes, little cousin. Now get your things, we got a lot of catching up to do.” Ren said leaving the class with Jurina following closely behind.
They were now out the school gate.
“Hey! Wait up!”
“Oh, so have you calmed down?”
“Yes, I’m sorry for the way I acted back there. It’s just surprised me.”
“Yeah, you’re not the only one.”
“What do you mean?”
“I thought I was the only member of the Matsui family left until I went to receive the inheritance I found out that my parents were supporting you. So I decided to take you in instead of putting you in some awful place.”
“What do you mean the only member of the Matsui family?” Jurina asked confused.
“Jurina, you and I are the only living members of the Matsui family.”
“But what about Aunt and Uncle?”
“Both my parents died two years ago. Our family lawyer was the one supporting me until my gradation and sending you money.”
“but, but” Jurina was starting to tear up. Ren pulled her into a tight hug.
“It’s okay. You still have me. Just let it out. I promise you’ll feel better.” Jurina began to cry onto Ren’s chest, those cries became sobs until she completing let everything out.
“Ren, you were right. I feel much better now.” Jurina smiled at Ren who smiled back.
“Okay, how about we get home.”
“Un. But promise to never come to school like you did today.”
“No need to ask. No way I wanna be harass by that thing again.”
“Thing?”
“Principal Yuriko.”
“hahaha. I feel sorry for you. Haha”
“Hey if you feel sorry then don’t laugh! Haha”
Back at the detective building
Minami and Atsuko are having lunch.
“Hey, Atsuko.”
“Yes, Minami?”
“Um… WHY THE HELL ARE YOU SITTING ON MY LAP!”
“It’s comfy.”
“Oi! I aint a chair! Now get off!” Minami tried pushing Atsuko off but the girl wrapped her arms around Minami’s neck.
“No~” Atsuko replied cutely.
Damn! Her body is pressing onto my body and it feels nice. No! Minami, focus! You can’t turn into a pervert. But it feels sooo~ good. If I were a guy, I would totally….
Her thoughts were interpreted by phone in her office ringing. Of course Atsuko pick it up and answered.
“Hello? Chief? Yes, this is Maeda Atsuko. Yes, I’ll pass you to her.” Atsuko passed Minami the phone.
“Hello, Chief. Yes. Yes. Yes, I understand. I’ll be on my way!” She bolts right up dropping Atsuko in the process. She turned to Atsuko. “I need to handle some business. Please continue with your work and have it completed by the time I return.” She leaves the room.
Atsuko’s thoughts:Damn! I was so close. Damn Chief! But why does she give the same feeling I got with my Minami. Is it possible she’s her lost twin sister? Well they are the same age.
At Ren’s Residence
“Welc…Oh it’s just you Takamina.”
“Hey! Is that the way to treat a long time friend?”
“Oi! We’re like family, so I don’t have to be nice to you and vice versa.”
“True.”
“Anyways, why are you home so early?”
“Oh, I got handed a special case.”
“That’s great what’s it about this time?”
“I have to go undercover. But I need reinforcements.”
“Oh, why not just get your men from the detective unit?”
“I can’t.”
“Why not?”
“There are some that are corrupted; besides I need a special unit.” Minami looks at Yuko with a scheming smile.
“Oi! I don’t like that smile.”
“Yuko! You owe me!”
*sighs* “Fine, I’ll help.”
“Good, I also need you to gather the other Rappapa members.”
“WHAT?!”
“what? I said I needed a special unit. And since the members are all strong and have special abilities that can help me solve this, plus they’re not connected to the police force.”
“HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND! OR HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN THAT I’M PRETENDING TO BE DEAD!”
“What? It’s not a big deal.”
“Oh? So you don’t mind me telling Atsuko that you’re the same Minami from her past. Who’s supposed to be dead?” Yuko retorted.
“Ok, I get your point, but still they’re the only people that can help.”
“No!”
“Okay, how about having Ren smooth them into knowing you’re alive and have him also explain to Atsuko about me.”
“That’d be great if REN WASN’T A MAN NOW! No one knows him.”
“Ratz! I forgot. Maybe he can dress back as Gekikara?” Minami asked hopefully.
“No can do.”
“Why?”
“If he does that, he’ll lose his inheritance. He must live the life of a man for the rest of his life.”
“Oh, that sucks.”
“Yep, anyways let’s get diner ready for our new family member.”
“Huh?”
“Did I forget to tell you. Ren has taken custody of his cousin?”
“Yes, you didn’t tell me.”
“Anyways, let’s get diner started.”
“Okay.”
Minami and Yuko started diner but ended up ruining it due to their argument about which one was taller. The food burned. How this argument began is a mystery. Most likely Yuko was teasing Minami cuz she couldn’t reach the very top drawer but neither can she. They were both rolling on the floor wrestling each other when the door opened.
TBC…. (thank you for reading. Comments are much appreciated.)
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Minami being perv ;D
Yuko and Minami small argument at the end is funny
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Oh Atsuko didn't lose waste time hehe
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An argument about which one is taller? LOL (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/lol.gif)
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Yea!! Update!! XD
LOL Ren being harassed by the principle :lol:
Acchan sitting on Minami's lap :wub:
Takamina and Yuko's argument about who's taller is so amusing :twothumbs
Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
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Wow! This is so interesting~
Happy that Takamina and Yuko didn't die yet :D
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Thank you to MESS, gekikarabuACE, Shiro, kahem, RenaChii, Yagami.Rai, anzai48, caecus for the thanks yous.
Sydney W, kahem, RenaChii, Yagami.Rai, anzai48, & caecus: Thank you for your comments, they encourage me to write.
Hope you enjoy. Sorry if it's too long. forgot to say Happy New Years to all of you.
Chapter 3
Ren and Jurina reach the house and open the door.
“WTH?! YOU’RE DEAD!” Jurina shouted as she spotted Yuko, but stayed quiet once she realized her position.
“Um, we’re sorry for interrupting you. Bye!” Ren said pulling Jurina out the door and closing it behind him and running away.
“Wait! It’s not what you think!” Both midgets yelled.
“Minami! Get the hell off me!” Yuko yelled at Minami who quickly got up and run to the door with Yuko right behind her.
“Ren! Wait, it’s all Yuko’s fault! I swear!” Minami yelled as she chased Ren and Jurina.
“What?! You were the one on top of me! How’s that my fault!” Yuko shouted passing Minami and tackling Ren to the ground.
“You started the fight, squirrel!”
“Midget!” Yuko got up from Ren and charged at Minami.
“You’re a midget too!” Minami said wrestling with Yuko.
“Yeah, but I’m still taller than you.”
Jurina stopped and helped Ren get up, and looks at him confused. He explained everything to her and she agreed to keep quiet about the two midgets, he did not tell her about himself. After a while of watch the two Ren spoke. “I think we should stop this war 0.5.”
“Yeah.” Jurina replied grading Minami to separate them. Ren got bitten by Yuko while separating her from Minami.
“Itai!” He smacked her hard on top of her head. “What was that for?”
“You bite me! Now I got to go get rabies shots cuz of you.” Ren deadpanned making them laugh.
“Okay, I’m sorry I bite you.”
“Good, now no more fighting understood, or else I’ll have to beat some sense into you.”
“Yes, we understand.” All three girls shouted and saluted Ren.
“Okay, let’s go home.”
It’s been a month since then. Minami has been busy doing research for her special case as well as finding the other members of Rappapa with Atsuko’s and Jurina’s help (well the ones that are good fighters). Yuko doesn’t know what Minami is planning and Ren has no idea what’s Minami’s special case is about, but doesn’t care as long as it doesn’t involve him in anyway. He’s too busy working, managing his companies, creating detector programs that warn him when there are illegal actives taking place and watching over Jurina.
“Hey, Ren can I ask you something?”
“Sure, anything little cousin.” Ren said sitting on the sofa next to Jurina.
“Instead of being my cousin, can you be my brother?” Jurina asked a light blush on her cheeks.
“OGMYGOSH! Did you hear that! Jurina wants you as her LOVER!” Yuko exclaimed running into the living room.
“No! You perverted squirrel!” Ren and Jurina yelled.
“She said BROTHER! NOT LOVER! B-R-O-T-H-E-R as in brother!” Minami shouted smacking Yuko on the head.
“Geez, Yuko where did you get lover from?” Jurina asked.
“She has a prevented mind, so don’t pay any attention. Anyways, Jurina I’d love to be your older brother.” Ren smiled at Jurina.
“Yay~” Jurina jumped up and hugged Ren.
“Okay, so let me get this straight. You asked Ren to be your brother instead of cousin. Not lover but brother?” Yuko asked.
“Yes, brother.”
“Okay.” Yuko said disappointed.
They all glared at her and yelled. “Ecchi!” “Hentai!” “Perv!”
“What? That’s my nature.”
They heaved a heavy sigh shaking their heads.
“What’s your nature to beat up people?” Ren asked.
“Anyways Ren, I need your help for my special case. Yuko already agreed to help me, Acchan and Jurina have been helping me find the other members of the team.” Minami said sitting across Ren.
“Sure, I’ll help. Wait, Acchan? As in Maeda Atsuko?”
“Wait! Acchan?! Wait! What do you mean by finding the other members of the team?” Yuko asked.
“Oh yeah Acchan from Rappapa, and to answer Yuko, I found some of the old members of Rappapa and they all agreed to help well except Black.”
“What?!” Ren and Yuko shouted.
“Don’t worry, they all know that Yuko’s alive and I explained why she did it.”
“What? And they aren’t mad?”
“Well Atsuko and Sado are. They’re pissed!”Jurina said.
“haha, too bad for you Yuko.” Ren laughed.
“Oi! You just agreed to help her too.”
“Oh, I changed my mind. I don’t want anything to do with this.”
“too late! You’re helping!” Yuko yelled.
“NO!”
“Anyways it’s not like they’ll recognize you.” Minami said. Jurina is confused to why she said that.
“What do you mean recognize him? Have they met before?”
“Huh? No it’s just that he used to hang with me a lot back then.”
“Oh, well that’s understandable. Sorry but I got to go. See you Ren-nii, Yuko, and Minami!”
“Be careful!” the three shouted.
“Okay, now here’s the information on the team.”
“Hey! I’m not helping!”
“Ren, two words.” Minami said in a calm voice.
“Raw meat.” Yuko deadpanned.
“Fine, I’ll help but no making me do sexual advancements towards anyone.”
“We can’t promise that.” Both Yuko and Minami whispered.
Minami laid out files with the members for the special case.
File #1
Name: Kojima Haruna
a.k.a: Torigoya / Harunyan
Job:Massage parlor. She’s the # 1 Massagist, she’s the only employee that gets both men and women customers.
Skills: Not very athletic, sort of an airhead but very scary when angered. She’s able to look into your past, fears, and desires which she uses to destroy you mentally by saying one simple phrase or word. Great at seducing men.
File #2
Name: Shinoda Mariko
a.k.a: Sado / Marichan
Job:Head nurse; she’s a much respected nurse. She does not like to lazy around like most nurses. She has improved the nurses’ performance since becoming the head nurse. She works in one of the best hospitals in Japan. (note: when stressed, she punches a wall making a hole in it. It scares anyone who’s around.) Her nurses fear her.
Skills: Above average in athletics, she’s a great fight. Never backs down unless your boss tells her (note: her boss is and always will be Yuko).
File #3
Name:: Itano Tomomi
a.k.a: Shibuya / Tomochin
Job: Working as a model for Matsui Fashion magazine. She’s one of their top models. She has learned to work with people. She’s mostly partnered with Kasai who’s also one of their top models.
Skills: Very strong fighter. Strong eyes which can sometime scare others. Loves to fight and design clothes. Not as much a hot head as she used to be, now she’s more understanding.
File #4
Name: Oshima Yuko
a.k.a: Just Yuko
Job:: Personal assistant to Matsui Ren, the owner of the Matsui businesses. She advices him on life, sometimes gives her opinion about business plans and informs him when illegal actions are being done.
Skills: Very fast runner and strong fighter. Good at acting. She may be a member of the flying squirrel family. Loves to fight, but thinks things through before jumping in (Most of the time.)
File #5
Name:Maeda Atsuko
a.k.a: Acchan
Job:Minami’s partner. New detective finds being in doors and reading and writing reports all day long boring.
Skills: Strongest fighter so far. Good at getting Minami into tight spots. She’s somewhat of a tease towards Minami, and great at acting.
“What the hell?” Ren said.
“What’s this about getting you into tight spots?” Yuko asked confused.
“Nothing! Just keep reading!” Minami held back her blush.
File #6
Name: Kasai Tomomi
a.k.a: Ookabuki / Tomomi
Job:Working as a model for Matsui Fashion magazine. She’s one of their top models. She’s cute and sexy at the same time. Tomochin’s partner in modeling.
Skills: Strong fighter, fights with open palms. Good at getting Tomochin into and out of tight spots. She somewhat clings to Tomochin whenever she can. (note: a less perverted and taller version of Minami.)
File #7
Name: Takahashi Minami
a.k.a: Takamina
Job:Youngest Detective to solve many unsolved cases. She is the most trust among all the other detectives. She’s given the hardest cases to solve.
Skills: Strong fighter, very fast and smart. Mistaken as a man sometimes which helps her in her missions. She is Ranked #1among the female detectives and police officers to be the perfect boyfriend. Sort of a big pervert but doesn’t show it as often as Yuko.
File #8
Name:Kashiwagi Yuki
a.k.a: Black
Job:Working mom. She works at a Supermarket as a cashier, takes care of her 2 year old son (Reki).
Skills: Strong fighter, very fast, taking care of her son and smart but she doesn’t like showing it. She has a great body even though she already had a kid. Her movements are like a blur to her opponents. Very quiet and hard working, she like darkness, comes and goes without people noticing her presence, good night vision.
File #9
Name: Matsui Ren
a.k.a: Gekikara
Job:The owner of the Matsui businesses takes care of his younger cousin Matsui Jurina. He sometimes helps Minami in solving cases. He’s very intelligent but would rather but up a dumb and innocent front. He listens to Yuko’s advice sometimes (when it’s not about sexual advancements towards someone), doesn’t like it when people try and do illegal deals under his name or businesses. (Usually beats those people near death.)
Skills: Very good with computers and programming. Prince Charming type: tall, pale skin and dark hair, he’s just missing the horse part. Strongest, most violent and craziest fighter in the group, fast, and take hits very well. Doesn’t care if he gets hurt, but when it’s someone he cares about that gets hurt, he unleashes the nightmare within him (Joker which is way crazier and more violent than his Gekikara form). Loves to fight, used to bit his nails to taste the blood but stopped cuz Yuko and Minami threaten to feed him raw meat for a month.
“Hey, why is Ren’s the longest?” Yuko asked upset.
“I thought you said Black refused.” Ren asked confused.
“She did, but we really need her for this.” Minami said.
TBC….
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This is starting to sound even more and more interesting! And yeah! I really agree that it was such a pain to continue waiting for a fic like this! But thanks to you, I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT ANY LONGER!!!
If Jurina asked Ren (Rena) to be her olde brother, then I won't get my W Matsui~ T^T Or is it that there'll be a GekiBlack? :w00t: I hope that Ren will get either of them!
I just love the midgets' fighting! I could just imagine them and LOL at the misunderstanding!
Thank you for making me laugh! Oh, and Happy New Year! ^^
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Thank you karomuwi. I'm also sad there's no W. Matsui, :banghead: but wouldn't it be a little weird if Ren dates his little sis? :depressed:
And as for GekiBlack, there's a big chance.
And Happy New years to you too. :omamori:
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Rappapa reborn. New mission awaiting them. Wondering what coming up next for them ~
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Ren as Jurina's brother?! No W Matsui?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_wtf.GIF)
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Thank you karomuwi. I'm also sad there's no W. Matsui, :banghead: but wouldn't it be a little weird if Ren dates his little sis? :depressed:
No W Matsui? :depressed: That's such a sad news... And yeah, I have to agree with you that it'll be weird, and it'll become INCEST! :lol:
And as for GekiBlack, there's a big chance.
YES! That's fine with me then. As long as there's someone Geki's with, I'll support you!!! :twothumbs
And Happy New years to you too. :omamori:
ENJOY YOUR NEW YEAR! ^^
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Just got round to reading this story, definaly liking it so far, different from other Majisuka fics, those reports were interesting too! XD
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Lol Acchan is good at getting Takamina in tight spots hahahah
Will Nezumi appear?
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Hey, there! I've been a silent reader for all your fics and decided to post something here. :)
I love the two are still alive in this and I wonder what will be Black's reaction when she meet Ren :inlove:
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karomuwi, Sydney W, RenaChii, oddball, kahem, & Spicy Sapphire- Thank you all for your comments. They really help in getting me into writing the next chapter. :on GJ:
thank you to those who left Thank yous: Yagami.Rai, karomuwi, blughise, RenaChii, kahem, anzai48, Megumi, Spicy Sapphire. :kneelbow:
I'll try to update within this week or so. :mon fu:
Here's a New Years special. Hope you like it. Sorry for misspelling.
New Years special
Five around 6 or 7 yrs old children were playing tag when their parents called them for diner.
“Girls, it’s time for diner.”
“Yes, Mommy.” The five ran into the house and sat down to eat. The shortest of them all asked. “Mommy, are you going to play with fireworks?”
“Um, I don’t think so.” Her mother asked.
“But Auntie, you promised to us that we could play with them after diner.” Three identical girls protested.
“Yeah, I wanna see the pretty colors.” The last and tallest of them said giving her Auntie and the other parents an innocent sweet smile. :gmon bye:
“Aw~ Rena you’re so cute!” Said the mom of the triplets.
“Mommy! Pwease.” The triplets said making puppy dog eyes :mon cute: to the parents.
“Aw~ Yuki, Yuka, Yuko. You three are so cute.” Rena’s mom & dad said.
“Yeah, they all look like chipmunks from that one movie.” Rena remarked making the triplets puff out their cheeks.
“See, Auntie, Uncle. Your daughters look like chipmunks!” Rena said pointing at the three.
“No! WE DON”T!” They shouted pouting cutely. Everyone laughed.
“Mommy, please. I wanna play with fireworks.”
“Ok, Minami. You can play be no fooling around while it’s on.” Minami’s dad said.
“Okay!” All five exclaimed.
“Okay, the firecrackers a…” Before Minami’s mom could finish.
“I found them!” Yuko said jumping up & down in a circle with her sisters.
“Yay!” they screamed running outside.
“Hey, didn’t you put them in the top cabinet in the kitchen?” Rena’s & Yuko’s parents asked.
“Yes.” Minami’s mom answered.
“It’s just cuz your daughter is part ninja or is it squirrel?” Minami’s dad said causing them to laugh.
“I agree their more like squirrels than chipmunks or ninja. haha” The triplets father said.
Rena comes in running. “Rena is there something wrong?”
“No, dad I just need a lighter.”
“Oh, okay here use mine.”
“Thanks, bye.”
“Wait! Why are you taking a balloon?”
“Just in case uncle.”
Outside
“Rena!” Yuka shouted jumping excitedly.
“Yay! Let’s light these up!” Yuki yelled excitedly.
“Yeah, but Minami you can’t.” Yuko said.
“What? My mom bought them for me not you.”
“So? You’re too small the play with them.” The triplets said.
While they were busy arguing about how tall you should be to play with firecharkers. Rena was lighting some and playing with them. “Aww~ Pretty~” She said while watching the colors change. “I wonder? Should I play a trick on them?”
“OI! Rena! Why are you playing with the fireworks by yourself?” The four midgets yelled charging at Rena, who quickly picked up all the firechackers and ran away.
“Hey!” Yuka said throwing her left shoe at Rena.
“Oi! Stop!” Yuki yelled.
“Rena! When we get you, you’re so dead!” Yuko shouted.
Minami Stopped. “Hey, wait up. I got a plan.”
The triplets stop and turn. “What is it?” Minami explained and they all smiled devilishly.
Rena had sensed that the midget force had stop chasing her. “Okay, let’s go back to playing.” She lit up a few more :mon firecrack: until there was only five left. She lights one up but doesn’t start. “hm, maybe I should share.” Rena puts the one that didn’t work into the balloon and blows the balloon. “Maybe I should give them this balloon as an I’m sorry.” She gets up and skips to where the midget force is at.
“Hey girls! Here’s the firecrackers.”
“Hey! There’s only four left!”
“Sorry, they were just so pretty that I couldn’t stop myself. Beside this is better than none right?”
“Get her!” Minami yelled. Before Rena could run, the triplets were already on top of her tickling her. The balloon gently bouncing away. She was laughing so hard that tears were rolling down her cheeks.
“Stop, haha please. Hahaha”
“No!” Yuko and Yuka said tickling her even harder.
“Minami now!” Yuki shouted.
“Okay, here.”
“I’ll do it!” Yuko said taking it from Minami. “Now open her mouth.” Minami did what she was told.
“No! No!” Rena started to panic :mon ref: when she saw the piece of raw meat in Yuko’s hands and her evil smirk.
“This is for not sharing.” Yuko said putting the meat into Rena’s mouth.
Rena started to sob. “I *sob* hate *sob* meat, *sob* especially *sob* raw meat. *sob* I want my mom *sob* Mommy! *sob*” Yuki and Yuka started to feel guilty for doing that.
“We’re sorry, Rena. We didn’t mean to you scar you.” Yuki and Yuka said comforting Rena and hugging her.
“Sorry, Rena it was all my idea.” Minami said starting to cry with Yuki and Yuka.
“We’re sorry.” The three said hugging Rena.
“Well, I aint!.” Yuko shouted.
Her three partners looked at her and glared. “Can’t you see she’s crying?” They yelled.
Yuko picked up the balloon Rena had dropped and started playing with it. “What? It’s her fault. She should learn how to share.” When she said that, the balloon she was playing with popped and startled Yuko. “AH!” She screamed causing the parents to run to them. “Mommy!” Yuko cried which turned into sobs.
“See, I shared my balloon with you.” Rena said smiling at Yuko. Rena’s thoughts: So it wasn’t a dud, it just took it’s time to pop.
"Meanie!" Yuko yelled.
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LOL Minami, Rena and Yuko's childhood :lol:
Thanks for the update :thumbup
Please update soon :mon cute:
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Oh~ so cute~
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Acchan skills ... really is a fact
"Good at getting Minami into tight spots" :P
What is the great mission??
Please update soon *--*
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And thank you: Yagami.Rai, kahem, & Mika ~ for your comments.
Sorry if it's too short but I'll update part 2 when I finish it.
Chapter 4 Part 1
“So, we need to find a way to get Black to agree. And get Ren to do perverted things.” Yuko said.
“Yes, but she won’t join cuz she needs to take care of her son, but I think it’s cuz she doesn’t want to put him in dangers way. And about Ren, do we really need to?” Minami replied. Then both midgets turn their heads towards Ren but find that the person is no longer sitting there and hear the front door close.
“Shoot! He escaped.” Yuko shouted.
Sigh. “Let’s just come up with a plan then put it into action when he comes back.” Minami said while fixing the files.
“Okay. So, first we need to do something about Black’s son.” Yuko thought out loud.
“Yeah, but she also has another problem which still deals with her son.” Minami said worriedly.
“What do you mean?”
“Her son’s father’s sisters want to take him away from her.”
“What?! Why? They never cared about them before. So why now?” Yuko asked mad.
“His sisters didn’t know that Black had a child. And now that he’s dead his sisters want his and Black’s son. They want him, so they’ve been doing everything to take him away from her, well everything that’s illegal. You know how Yakuza families are, they think they’re invisible.”
“Yeah, like sending groups of thugs and whatnots to attack their enemy.”
“Yes, their old man even tried to blackmail her and he’s even making false accusations towards her.”
“Wow, what jerks. Like they say ‘the apple doesn’t fall that far from the tree.’”
“Yeah, but what’s worse is that he and his three daughters are our target for the special mission.” Minami replies.
“Oh, that’s bad.”
“Yeah, well the good thing is that they just know how Black’s son looks like but they don’t know how Black herself looks like.”
“What? And they’re accusing her of stuff?” Yuko replied upset.
“Yeah, they just know her name. When we asked them which one from the five pictures was the suspect, they all pointed to different people. Not one pointed at Yuki’s picture.”
“Wow, that’s really smart on their part.” Yuko sarcastically said.
“Yep.”
“So how are we going to convince her? And Ren, we need him to do sexual advancement towards those three women.” Yuko asked.
"Yuko what's up with you wanting Ren to do sexual advancement towards someone."
"He must learn to be a man."
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I would never thought of an after majisuka gakuen
Rena pretending to be a guy???
Jurina and Rena are cousins?
Yuko still alive but for what reason
Can't wait for the next chapter
Please update soon
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Who is the one who want to take BLACK's son away? come here~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_evil.gif)
I'm really looking forward for Ren's lesson to become a real man~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_mischief.gif)
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Seems as though Black, though not wanting to take part, may be involved in all of this whether she wants to be or not......
And er, Ren needs to learn to be a man.... hmm that could be interesting, not sure if Yuko will be much help however! :lol:
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Oh the father is from a yakuza familly
They can't take her son! The Rappappa have to do something!
Lol Yuko's lame excuse, I'm sure she just wants to see Ren doing perv thing ^^
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why did they want to take Black's son away? :bleed eyes:
Rappappa to the rescue~~ :D
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Thank you @ RJay, RenaChii, oddball, anzai48, kahem, & Spicy Sapphire- For your comments. :mon thumb: Seems that all of you know where this is going. Maybe. :shifty:
Well here's the part 2 like I promised. Hope you like it.
Chapter 4 Part 2
“Well, we need to solve both her problems, first. Then think about Ren.”
“Okay, but I think getting Ren involved would be a good thing since he can use his money and influences to help her out. And for Ren, I think we can help him by you finally admitting you’re a man and guiding him towards manhood.”
“yes, wait! I’m not a man!”
“hai, hai. Whatever you say now let’s get to planning.”
They begin planning.
It’s been two days since Ren ran out the house before Yuko and Minami forced him into something he would not like. He was staying at a hotel. “Man, I’m so glad I finished all my business planning last week. Now I just have to check up on my businesses once in a while.” Ren breathe out. He looked at his watch, 9:50 p.m. “I think I should go back home. Jurina must be worried about me.” He checked out from the Hotel and began to walk home. While he was walking home his stomach groaned. “Ah, now that I think about it, I haven’t eaten anything.” He takes a turn towards a convenience store. When gets near a dark tunnel he hears small cries. “Is that a baby crying? I should check out.” When he enters the dark lit tunnel he notices a group of 8 men surrounding a woman carrying a baby on her back. They begin to advance on her, she doesn’t fight back instead she tights her protection on her child.
“Hey sexy.” Man 1.
“Why don’t you put that kid down?” Man 2 & 3.
“So we can have some fun.” Man 4, 5, & 6.
“You have a nice body, sweetie.” Man 7.
“Let’s have some fun with that body of yours.” Man 8.
They did not notice someone approaching them. Ren graded Man 7 and started beating him; the others were too busy trying to rip the woman’s clothes. After seeing blood gush out of his victim Ren felt the insane feeling he used to feel when he was a part of the big 4. Hearing the sound of his fists hitting flesh and blood over and over again, he smiled that insane smile and began to giggle letting the other men know they were no longer the predictors but the prey.
“Ne…okotte iru? hehe” Ren giggles began to get louder and creepier as he beat each man into the ground leaving them lying in a pool of their own blood. The last guy, he didn’t stop bushing his head onto the ground, until the woman spoke.
“Rena, you need to stop or else you’ll be going to jail this time.” Ren’s thought’s: Eh? Yuki? Why is Yuki here? Don’t tell me she already knows it’s me. Need to play dumb.
“Sorry, but my name is Ren not Rena, Miss.” Ren says letting go of the guy he was bushing to the floor and standing up facing Black.
“Eh? Oh sorry. I thought you were an old friend of mine.” Black said as she noticed the very handsome man before her brings a blush onto her face. Her thought’s: Wow! He’s very attractive. Good thing he can’t see my blush.
“An old friend?”
“Yes, she acts the same way you did just now during fights. That’s why I confused you.”
“Oh, it’s okay. How about I walk you and your baby home? I don’t want you to get jumped on your way.”
“Thank you.”
They walk out the tunnel when Ren notices Black’s appearance. Her pants are torn in parts and only in her black bra while her child is fully clothed. He takes of his jacket and long sleeved shirt, takes the baby away from her and hands her his clothes. He’s left wearing a grey tank, showing off his toned arms, which cause Black to unconsciously lick her lips.
“Here put these on, I’ll hold him so you can put the shirt and jacket on.”
“Thanks.” After she put them on they start walking towards her house, Ren’s still carrying Black’s son.
“So, what’s his name?” Ren asked as he plays with the little boy in his arms.
“Huh? Oh his name is Reki.”
“That’s a nice name.”
“Oh sorry, you’ve been carrying him all this time. Here give him to me.”
“No, it’s fine. I enjoy carrying him. Besides it kinda looks like he likes me.”
“You’re right. It’s strange though. He’s never liked other people touching or carrying him other than me or Rena. He will always cry when they did.”
“Oh. That’s interesting.” In that moment Ren’s stomach groaned making Reki giggle at it.
“Haha. Seems like you’re hungry.”
“Yeah.”
“How about I cook you diner as a thank you?”
“That sounds great. Itai!”
“Huh? What’s wrong?” Yuki asked worriedly.
“Reki is biting my ear. Hehe”
“Eh? That’s new. haha”
“Haha, so what’s your name? Mine’s Matsui Ren.”
“Wow, you have the same name as my friend well except without the a in your first name. hehe. And my name’s Kashiwagi Yuki. But my friends call me Black.”
“Oh, interesting. My friends sometimes call me Gekikara or Joker, but I think Joker sounds cooler.” Ren said giving a dorky smile making both Reki and Yuki to giggle.
Ren’s residence
“Oi! Yuko! Takamina! Where’s Ren? I haven’t seen him since two days ago.” Jurina asked the two midgets.
“Huh?” Yuko said chewing her spaghetti.
“We already told you he’s on a business trip so he’ll be back in a few days.” Minami said slurping up her spaghetti.
“Yeah, besides you have a mother and father figure sitting right in front of you. So don’t worry.”
“Hey! What you mean by mother and father figures?” Takamina shout upset.
“Well obviously I’m the mother figure and you’re the father figure. Now stop eating so loud! You sound like a pig.” Yuko stated making Jurina laugh at the two.
“haha, that’s so true. Yuko’s the mom, you’re the dad and Ren’s the older brother.” Jurina added.
“Hey! Shouldn’t Ren be the dad and I’m the older sister.”
“No.” Jurina and Yuko deadpanned. “You’re more of a father figure than an older sister.” Both said in unison causing Takamina to pout cutely at them which only cased them to laugh more.
“So, anyways why do you want Ren so badly?” Yuko asked.
“Oh its cuz my girlfriend wants to meet him.”
“Oh, she does? Wait! You have a girlfriend?!” Takamina asked shocked.
“Yes, she’s my VP for Rappapa.” Jurina answered pride of the fact.
“Oh nice going, if I’m correct the VP is Nezumi, right?” Yuko said happy. Takamina is still in shock.
“Yep, it took me a long time to get the point that I truly love her across. She would always find ways to use that to her benefit. Now she wants to meet Ren cuz she doesn’t believe that he’s my brother and she thinks something else.”
“What, what she think?”
“Good you finally snapped out of your shock.” Yuko remarked.
“Hey, be quiet. I’m trying to listen.”
“She thinks that Ren is a cover and that I’m cheating on her.”
“Oh.” Both midget say.
“So I want to provide that it’s not true that I’m cheating on her by introducing Ren to her and provide that I only have eyes for her and my heart and love will always be hers.”
“Oh, good thinking.” Yuko said.
“Yup, Ren’s exterior makes you want to trust him.” Takamina added.
“uh hu, as well as thinking that he’s harmless and gives people his trust easily.” Jurina added.
“He does get people’s trust easily.” Takamina said.
“But can become the devil himself.” Yuko added.
“Doesn’t trust people that easily.” Jurina added.
Sigh. “When’s he going to come back? We need him.” The three said.
TBC.....
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Oh yay Black x Gekikara and Center x Nezumi!!!
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I've been waiting for Center x Nezumi and it's finally here! XD
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@anzai48- Thank you. I didn't really check for spelling this time, but thank you for catching that and telling me.
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BlackxGeki, oh yeah! Ahahaha! With the added bonus of CenterxNezumi to boot~
I'm a bit surprised, though. Jurina still hasn't put two and two together. I mean, it's not like Yuko's a total stranger,
being the former head of Rappapa herself. Or maybe Nezumi will realize it first since she's an evil genius after all. :lol:
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BlackGeki!!! :heart: Yuki was sure it was Rena to begin with too, maybe a little dissapointed that it wasnt her but 'Ren' instead, hmm judging from this first chapter I'm not sure that 'Ren' will be able to keep convincing Yuki she's not Rena, maybe it will be little Reki more than anyone who uncovers her...
And Center/Nezumi hints here too along with Yuko and her plan which needs Ren and seems as though it can only go wrong..... :P
Hmm, they all need Ren to come back.... I wonder though if perhpas Rena may want to stay were she is for a while.....
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GekiBlack :heart: :heart: Yuko and Takamina are the mother and father figure and poor Takamina, wanting to be the older sister :roll: Reki is sweet~
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Oooohhhh Ren and Yuki have finally met
Interesting can't wait for the next chapter
Ease update soon
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Hope I didn't fail in this ch. Thank you all for reading. Sorry for any mistakes.
Chapter 5
Near Yuki’s home
“So, Yuki why are you out so late?”
“Oh, I just got off work and went to pick my son up from the baby sitter.”
“Oh.”
“And you Ren?”
“Oh, I was going home to show my little sis that I’m still alive and kickin.”
“Haha. Well anyways my apartment is just down this street.” Yuki said pointed to the apartment complex that was on flames.
“Eh? You mean the one that’s on fire?”
“What?” Yuki turned her head towards the apartment complex after seeing that it was on fire Yuki began to tear up. Ren quickly pulled Yuki into a tight hug with his right arm and held her son in his left. Her son laid his head on Ren’s shoulder. “What are Reki and I going to do now?” Yuki softly cried into Ren’s chest.
“It’s okay Yuki. It’ll all be okay. Don’t worry I’ll take care of you. You and Reki are welcome to stay with me and my family.” Ren gently said to Yuki as she slowly stops crying.
“Thank you, Ren.”
“No prob. was there something important to you in your home?”
“No, I have all that in my locker at work.”
“Good, now let’s get going. I don’t want to gather too much attention.”
“Okay.”
Ren lead Yuki to his house which stunned Yuki.
“This is your home?”
“Yup, it’s all mine, but I live with my lil sis and two close childhood friends, who you already know.”
“What?” Yuki asked confused.
“You’ll see. Just come in.” Ren opened the door to find Minami squirrel hunting while Jurina laughed her head off. “Um, I think we should come back another day.” Ren said to Yuki as he slowly closes the door.
“But why? We’re already here.”
“Ren! You’re here! Finally!” Jurina busted the door open scaring Reki awake making him cry.
“Uh ho. Don’t cry. Shh ssh shh.” Ren was able to calm him down. Jurina’s thoughts: I swear I just saw the baby glare and release some dark aura at me. What’s his problem? Oh yeah, I must’ve woke him up. My bad. Hehe. Now that I think about it he kinda reminded me of Ren. Now that I look at them is it possible that Yuki’s son is Ren’s. Wow they make a great looking family. Oh! Then that means he’s my lil nephew! Yey! I just hope he doesn’t glare at me.
“Oi! He aint my kid!” Ren shouted as he saw Jurina’s face light up. Reki in responds bites Ren’s left ear. “Itai! What’s up with you and biting my ear!”
“Food~” Reki quickly and cutely responds. Both Yuki and Jurina giggle at them.
“Aw~ Then make him your kid! I want a nephew!” Jurina pouted cutely. Their exchange made Yuki blush, especially the part about making her son Ren’s.
Yuki’s thoughts: Why do I feel this way towards Ren? I’ve only felt this with Rena and only her. Not even my son’s father ever made me feel this way. But why do I feel so attracted to him? Is it cuz he resembles her?
“Ahhhhh! Someone help mee~ Takamina wants to skin me alive!” Yuko shouted running towards the door where Yuki, Ren, and Jurina were. “Oh! Cute baby!” Yuko stopped in front of Reki while Takamina ran full force when she saw how cute the baby was she tripped over herself rolling to a stop before them.
“Itai. Oh hey Yuki and Reki.” Minami smiled and waved. Her trip made Reki giggle.
“No way. You live with these two?” Yuki asked calmly but she was really shocked and terrified.
“Yup, they’re my childhood friends. And this is my younger cousin Matsui Jurina also known as Center, but she’s more like a sister to me than a cousin.”
“OH.” Yuki replied in a bored tone.
“So how about we all go in. And Jurina would you mind lending Yuki some of your clothes for tonight?”
“No prob. Let me get them ready.”
“Thank you.” Yuki said.
“Wmidgets is there food?”
“Oi! What’s this W.Midget thing?” Both shouted upset.
“It’s both you combined to make one.” Ren teased showing them a smirk.
“Ren shouldn’t you be nice to them?” Yuki said giggling.
“No.” Ren deadpanned.
“Oi! He learned that from you!” The midgets pointed at each other.
“Hey, you taught him that!” Yuko protested.
“No, you did! In fact I have your tutorial videos!” Minami retorted.
“Hey, can you answer my question? Is there food or not?” Ren asked hungry.
“Yes, in the fridge.” Yuko replied glaring at Minami.
“Yuki, I think we should go eat before the midgets fight.”
“I agree.” Yuki replied giggling, she has never seen Yuko verbally argue with someone, she always saw Yuko argue back by using her fists. They must be really good friends. I’m glad Yuko didn’t die.
“Ma…mama…hehe… food…hehe…. Rena!heh Gekikara! Food!hehe Ren!hehe” Reki giggle and clapped his hands.
“W-what?” Yuki said surprised.
“What did he just say?” The two midgets asked.
“He said food, foodRena,Gekikara,food,Ren, maybe he wants spicy food??” Ren quickly said, shocked to hear his old name. He doesn’t know it’s me, right?
“food! Food hehe. Rena! Ren! Food! Hehe food! Hehe Mama feed me!” Reki said giggling.
“Hey Ren are you sure he aint your son?” Jurina said as she set the clothes for Yuki down on the coffee table.
“Yeah, I’m with Jurina.” Yuko said looking at Reki then at Ren and Yuki. They look perfect together. They can be the royal family of Japan, Ren as the king, Yuki as the Queen and Reki as the little cute prince.
“Yuki, are you sure Ren aint the father of your son?” Minami asked even though she knows Ren is female.
“Yes, I’ve never met Ren before today.”
“Oh, okay.” The three said in that’s-a-shame tone of voice.
“Hey! Are you suggesting something? Or are you just trying to annoy me?” Ren asked feeling very uncomfortable with their questions.
“Depends.” They deadpanned.
Ren looks down; heaves a sigh and shakes his head. Reki imitates him.
“Aw~ Cute~” The four said making Ren shake his head tiredly while Reki giggled cutely.
“Let’s just go eat lil one.” Ren said going into the kitchen.
“Food~ Spicy food~” Reki said cutely.
“Sorry Reki, we didn’t make spicy food.” Jurina shouted. Reki quickly turned and send her a glare. “Whoa tough kid.”
“Well, I’ll go eat too.” Yuki said and joined the two.
“Hey, btw I’ve been wondering why you didn’t recruited Gekikara?” Jurina asked.
“Well, she is helping us. You just didn’t know she was.” Yuko said.
“Yeah, she’s undercover at the moment.”
“You know how she is. Loves to fight, remember she was in a rehab for her bad and dangerous behavior and with a criminal record like hers. I don’t think a private school would want her. You know.” Yuko explained.
“True, I wonder what Gekikara’s real name was.” Jurina asked.
“Who knows?” Minami said finding the floor very interesting.
“We just knew her as Gekikara nothing more.” Yuko said. Before Jurina could speak the phone rang.
*Ring* “Hello? Yes, this is Takahashi Minami.” “…” “Okay, I’ll be there right away.” Hangs up.
“What’s wrong?”
“I have to go back to my office for some paperwork.”
“Ok, bye.”
Detective building
“Chief, let me get this straight you called me back here to help you find the pair of glasses on your head?” Minami asked annoyed.
“Oh! So that’s where they were at. Thanks Minami. You can go now.” He says leaving his office and locking up.
“Yes, sir.” She replies, walking out the building with him. “Bye, sir.” She waves at him until his cars gone. “Now that I’m here might as well take the mission information and spend the whole day tomorrow with Yuki and Reki.” She enters the building again and goes to her office where she spots a sleeping beauty. “Atsuko? Acchan, wake up it’s already late.” She softly says.
“Um.. *yawn* Huh? Minami?” Acchan said as she stretched her body.
“yes, now get ready I’ll take you home.”
“Un, thanks.” She gets her stuff ready while Minami gets all the information about her special mission. “Okay, I’m ready.”
“Good, let’s go.” When she was about to open the door she hear some shuffling noises and talking coming from the other side. “Acchan do you hear that?” She whispered.
“Yeah. Do you think it’s a robbery?”
“We’re the detective unit. We don’t have anything worth stealing.”
“Well, in that case let’s hide.” Acchan said as she pushed Minami under her desk with her on top saddling Minami.
“What are you doing?”
“Shhh, be quiet or else they’ll find us.”
In that moment the door open and two men came in. “Oi! You sure that Minami was the one the Chief gave the mission to?” “Yeah, the Chief thinks that brat’s the only trustworthy detective in this whole unit.” “But don’t you think that he might’ve given it to Atsuko?” “Nah, not a chance since she’s still inexperienced.” “Yeah you’re right.” “Okay, enough talking. Look for the files on the members of the undercover unit, their plans and their information on our boss.”
Meanwhile under Acchan’s desk
Acchan was making herself comfortable on top of Minami while Minami was feeling hot. Seeing Minami’s cheeks slowly turning red gave Acchan an idea. “Hey, Minami wanna do it?” Acchan seductively said into Minami’s ear making her gulp. “Um… no thank you. Can’t you see the situation we’re in?” “Yes, and also the position we’re in too.” Acchan smirked evilly. Before Minami could talk back Acchan sealed her lips with her own. After a few seconds Minami’s hands began to travel all over Acchan’s body, she nibbled on Acchan’s lower lip causing her to moan and open her mouth. Minami took this opportunity to slide her tongue into Acchan’s mouth. When the lack of oxygen forced them to pull away, Minami noticed that the men had already left. “Oh, they left. We better get going too.” Minami said and tried to get out but Acchan didn’t allow it. “Oh no, you don’t. We’ll be finishing what we started.” Acchan said smirking seductively at her. “Uh ho.” Minami replied.
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Thank you so much for the update XD
Yuki and Ren~~ :wub:
LOL Reki glaring at Jurina and biting Ren's ear :lol:
Minami and Acchan's moment are hot!! :inlove:
Go go! Acchan!! :grin:
“Oh no, you don’t. We’ll be finishing what we started.” Acchan said smirking seductively at her. “Uh ho.” Minami replied.
I can't wait to read what's next!!! :thumbup
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:
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yyyyeeeeeeyyyyy !!! ATSUMINA FTW!!!!!
please update soon!!!
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Thank you. It's too bad I can't write any juicy stuff for Atsumina. But you all can imagine what went on.
Don't worry I'm working on the chapter 6 right now. So it will be posted Tomorrow morning.
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Ren and Yuki together with Reki is like a happy family.
Acchan and Minami moment is hot.
Wonder whose the intruders into detective building ??
Please update soon.
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Yagami.Rai, iloveakb48, anzai48, Sydney W- Thank you for your comments and I'm glad you liked the Atsumina moment.
Heres Ch. 6 like I promised.
Chapter6
It’s been 2 weeks since Yuki started living with them. She quit her job at the convenience store and took all her belongings out of her locker (bible, rappapa jacket, and photos) and is now Ren’s personal assistant along with Yuko. Yuko, Minami, and Jurina enjoy playing with Reki and taking care of him, he glares at them when mad. Minami has started going out with Acchan after what happened in their office (Acchan had her take responsibility for what happened, even though it was mostly on Acchan’s part that it occurred). Ren’s the only one stressing over things, such as helping Minami on getting everything ready for the special mission, find someone to take care of Jurina and Reki while they’re gone, keep his secret away from Yuki and Jurina and now the others, meet Jurina’s girlfriend, Yuko’s & Minami’s training on how to flirt and do sexual advancements towards women (he hates Yuko’s teachings, while Minami’s is dead on, on what men do), get the other members fix and clear to go on the mission (he needs to get their bosses’ permission, except TomoTomo since they work for him), and finally in role them all into the same private school as three Yakuza women then have them fall in love with him.
*Sigh* “Why do I have so much work? It’s your special mission Takamidget. Not mine.” Ren said tried.
“Well, it’s putting your charms to the use.” Yuko replied.
“How is talking to their bosses and bribing some of them putting my charms to the use?”
“Well, yeah. That is your charm?” Minami said.
“Anyways when is your meeting with Jurina’s girlfriend?” Yuki said sitting down next to Ren.
“oh, is Reki asleep?” Yuko asked.
“Yeah, he was really tried from playing with Jurina. Anyways back to the question.”
“Well she told me to go pick her up today, she said she’d be in the Rappapa room with Nezumi waiting for me, but…” Ren said worried.
“But you have to pick up the girls and take them to the house we’ll be staying at for our mission. Don’t worry me and Minami will pick them up.” Yuko said.
“Thanks, but that’s not it.” Ren said.
“It’s okay Reki and Jurina will be taken care of by Dance, I mean Kumi. She’s very responsible, you know.” Yuki said reassuming Ren.
“I know but that’s not it.”
“Then what is?” They asked.
“I don’t wanna be sexually harassed by the principal again.” Ren said hugging himself protectively.
“Oh.” They said in an aw voice.
“Then why not take Yuki with you, since everyone knows her there. Besides Black can be your bodyguard and guide since you don’t know where the club room’s located.” Kumi pointed out as she came into the living room with coffees for everyone.
“Thank you.” They all said as they got their cups.
“Kumi has a point. Why don’t I go with you?”
“Yeah that’s great and it’ll make Nezumi think that you’re dating.” Minami said.
“And Jurina’s problem is solved as well as harassment toward you.” Kumi added.
“Okay, btw Yuko when you go to pick them up wear some heavy protection.” Ren said.
“Why?” Yuko asked.
“Marichan & Acchan are pissed that you lied about your death. And Tomochin just wants to join in.” Minami explained.
“Okay, thanks.” Yuko runs upstairs and comes down wearing bagging shorts and a white T-shirt.
“Hey! Didn’t I just tell you to wear some heavy protection?”
“Yes, but I love fighting!” Yuko exclaimed showing her dimples.
“True, but if you end up in a hospital it’s not our fault.” Minami said.
“Besides, knowing Marichan, she might bring out Torigoya just for fun.” Yuki added making Yuko rethink her plan.
“On second thought, I’ll wear some protection. Don’t want Harunyan violent side, Torigoya reading my mind and then using it against me.” Yuko shouted as she ran upstairs again.
“Nice, Yuki.”
“Good thing Yuko does know that Haruna can already control Torigoya now.” Yuki said chuckling.
“Yeah, I was surprised when Marichan told me that Haruna had learned how to control her powers fully.” Minami said.
“Well, it’s better that way. We no longer need to lock her up with chickens.” Ren added.
“Yup, her Torigoya form has always scared me.” Kumi added causing the others to laugh. “Hey! It’s not funny!”
“Yes, it is.” Minami said.
“I think Gekikara was the scariest of all the Queens.” Yuko said entering the living room.
“Hey, why do you look like you’re going to play ice hockey?” Kumi asked.
“It’s protection from Torigoya!” Yuko shouted. They all laughed at Yuko.
“Hey, but I agree.” Minami said.
“Out of all the Queens, Gekikara was the scariest, craziest, and most violent.” Yuko stated looking at Ren with a smile.
“Oh? Really?” Ren smiled.
“Not to me.” Kumi said and everyone looked at her weirdly. “Well, Gekikara was scary but that was only when she fought or was upset.”
“That’s true.” Yuki agreed.
“Yeah, the only time she was scarier than Torigoya was when she would feed me spicy food. And you all know how much I can stand eating spicy food.” Kumi said holding her stomach. They all laughed. They spent the day talking until it was time for them to go.
“Kumi, remember to contact me or any of us if you, Reki or Jurina need anything. Okay.”
“Okay Minami. Btw you’re starting to sound like an over protective father.” Kumi replied.
“Hey!” Minami shouted as Yuko dragged her into the van.
“Well we better get going too.” Yuki said as she entered the passenger side of Ren’s black Ferrari 612 Scaglietti.
Ren's thoughts: I have a bad feeling about this, just hope nothing happens when we get to Majisuka Gakuen.
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Yea!! Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
:lol: Haha.. Acchan made Takamina take responsibility :w00t:
I love it!!! :thumbsup
LOL Yuko and her protection against Torigoya :D
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
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Yay~ GO to Majisuka Gakuen~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_squee.gif)
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Oh yay Atsumina!!!!
I will begin think that Reki is really Ren's son lol
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Funny as hell! Made me laugh out loud so much! I hope you update soon!
BlackGeki & CeNezu = <3
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Kumi baby sitting Reki&Jurina Pfft!
Okay, btw Yuko when you go to pick them up wear some heavy protection.” Ren said.
“Why?” Yuko asked.
“Marichan & Acchan are pissed that you lied about your death. And Tomochin just wants to join in.” Minami explained.
“Okay, thanks.” Yuko runs upstairs and comes down wearing bagging shorts and a white T-shirt.
“Hey! Didn’t I just tell you to wear some heavy protection?”
“Yes, but I love fighting!” Yuko exclaimed showing her dimples.
“True, but if you end up in a hospital it’s not our fault.” Minami said.
“Besides, knowing Marichan, she might bring out Torigoya just for fun.” Yuki added making Yuko rethink her plan.
“On second thought, I’ll wear some protection. Don’t want Harunyan violent side, Torigoya reading my mind and then using it against me.” Yuko shouted as she ran upstairs again.
“Nice, Yuki.”
“Hey, why do you look like you’re going to play ice hockey?” Kumi asked.
“It’s protection from Torigoya!” Yuko shouted. They all laughed at Yuko.
OMG LOLOLOLOL I'm glad Yuko and Minami is alive but hrrm I wonder when will Acchan know that it's the same Minami :dunno:
And I can't wait for Ren and Yuki arriving at Majisuka Gakuen...
Thank you for your update
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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GekiRen/BlackYuki mini-family! You're awesome, author! :twothumbs
lol, I missed the poll! I would have voted for the last option. Let Ren give everyone a nosebleed, either from being too good-looking or from fighting. It wouldn't matter. :lol:
But poor Ren... he's under a lot of stress with all that's going on.
Also, naughty Yuko giving out clues regarding Gekikara, hahaha! I wonder how everyone would react when they eventually find out.
Can't wait for the next update~!
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Thank you who voted.
Also thank you to everyone for your comments and/ or thankyous.
@gekikarabuACE- Don't worry I'll add your vote in.
I'll start working on ch. 7 as soon as I finish my school work.
Thank you for reading.
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Another good chapter, hmm seems as though Yuki still feels in some way that Ren is not all the 'he' shoes himself to be, seems as though Reki has figured it out already though, lets hope he dosn't have to learn how to speak properly before his mum figures it out.......
lol at his death stare btw! XD
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A big thank you to those who comment: Yagami.Rai, RenaChii, kahem, BlackRockAnon, Megumi, gekikarabuACE, oddball. Your comments really help and encourage me to keep writing. :mon yeah: :mon study:
As well as the people who read my fics.
I hope you enjoy this chapter. I tried to put some touching moments but I'm not really good with those. Sorry if it's too long. :mon sweat:
Chapter 7
Ren and Yuki arrive at Majisuka Gakuen.
“Whoa, what happened?” Yuki asked as she got out of the car.
“The new Rappapa.” Ren replied with a smile.
“I can see that.”
“Well we still have 1hr until school ends. How about we walk around and I’ll tell you why there are so many changes.”
“okay.” They walked around and Ren told Yuki everything about the way Center & Nezumi were running the school. They had walked through the whole school without the students noticing them; they’re now in the Rappapa clubroom.
“Black, where’s the male restroom?”
“Oh, it’s in the teachers break room.”
“Okay, I’ll be right back.”
“Do you need me to show you the way?”
“No, it’s okay Black. I’ll be fine.”
“Okay. I’ll stay here. Remember there’s still 40 minutes.”
“Okay I won’t take long.”
20 Minutes later
Yuki was worried if something had happened to Ren so she decided to look for him. In a matter of seconds she was inside the teachers’ break room. “Ren?” no answer. “Ren are you here?” Still no answer.
Ren's POV
Shoot why the hell is there only one male restroom? Plus it had to be near the principal’s office. I hope she doesn’t see me. Gotta hurry.
Hello, Gekikara.”
“Huh? I’m sorry hooded girl but I’m not Gekikara.” Why the hell did Jurina have to date such a smart & annoying girl like Nezumi. Right off the bat she knew it was me, but I can deny it and make her think I’m someone else.
“Don’t play dumb with me. Who else would have two scars above their left eye and light brown eyes? You think I’m stupid or something?”
Maybe lying to her won’t help. Have to find another way. Meanwhile I’ll talk about her father.
“Of course not Mayu, after all you are your father’s daughter. He’s a very smart man and I’d except no less from his daughter. By the way is he still doing illegal actives? Then giving you money from those actives?” Once I said that Mayu had a shock look.
“How? How did you know about my father? Did Jurina tell you?”
“No, I met with your father. He wanted my support for his next campaign. But I didn’t want to help him cuz he tried to cheat me before he even met with me. BTW is he still in the hospital?”
“Un, yeah. He’s still in there.”
“Good, can you give him a message from me?”
“S-sure.”
“Okay, tell him that next time I won’t be as gentle as I was. Hehe” I said smiling.
“You really are Jurina’s cousin.”
“Yup.”
“But you aint fooling me! Even though you’re cross-dressing I know you’re Gekikara! So stopping denying it! No on Earth has that chilly and creepy smile and giggle like yours!”
“Whatever you want to think, but I’m not a girl. I need to go to the restroom now. See you later.”
“Wait! I’m not done!” I left her yelling at me.
How the hell am I going to fool her? Aw, man talking to her took too long now I have to hurry before Ms. Yuriko sees me.
End of Ren's POV
After Ren had gotten into one of the stalls in the restroom. Black had just entered the teacher’s room calling his name. “Ren?” Ren’s thoughts: Oh S***! What do I do? What I do? WhatdoIdo? Wait! I need to my business then I’ll deal with Black. “Ren are you here?” Still no answer. Black was about to enter the men’s restroom when Ren opened the door.
“Hey.”
“Hey, I was calling your name.”
“Sorry, I-I-I-I was…… taking a dump. So I couldn’t hear you?” Ren said embarrassed.
“Really?” Black replied with a giggle as she saw Ren’s embarrassed face. He’s so Cute.
“Yeah.”
“Okay, well let’s get back to the clubroom.”
“Okay, after you.” Ren politely said opening the door for Black.
“Thanks.”
“You’re wel…” Before Ren could finish he heard a voice screaming out his name, sending chills down his spine. He wished the owner of the voice would never find him or get near him.
“REN-SAMA! REN-SAMA!” An older woman screamed running towards Ren.
“Oh no. It’s that thing!” Ren shouted panicking as he saw Principal Yuriko running towards him.
“Huh?” Black asked confused to Ren’s sudden change, but when she saw her old Principal running towards them at full speed. She understood why Ren had changed.
“REN-SAMA! I’m so happy you came to see me.” Yuriko said as she tried to hug and kiss Ren.
“No! Get away from me! Mommy! An old perverted woman wants to rape me!” Ren shouted as he tried to dodge Yuriko’s advancements. (note: Ren is good at taking hits cuz he hates dodging and he has never been good at dodging.)
Yuki just stood there watching Ren run away and dodge Yuriko’s hugs and kisses. She found this part of Ren very cute. I wish I could do that to him and much more. . “Okay, that’s enough.” Black sternly said as she stepped in front of Ren blocking Yuriko in less than a second.
“Black!” Ren happily shouted hugging Black from behind. Good thing Mr. Aki-p created me a chest guard for my breast, so it looks and feels like a man’s chest and also very comfortable and part of my body so I never need to take it off.
Black’s thoughts: Wow, Ren’s hug feels good. I wonder how he looks shirtless.
“Oh, I see. So you and Ren-sama are together.” Ms. Yuriko said in a disappointed and upset. “Well, I have to go make an announcement.”
“Huh?” Ren and Black said confused.
“Hey, Black let’s go.”
“Okay.”
Ren didn’t let go of Black, he keep hugging her from behind while walking. Black didn’t seem to mind in fact she liked their close contact. They were near the stairs that led to the clubroom, until a sudden announcement was made.
“GUD AFERNUN TUDENTS. DIS IS YOR PRINCIPAL SKEAPING.” Yuriko said in weird English. (I misspelled on purpose, Yuriko can’t speak English well). “ATTENTION ALL STUDENTS REN-SAMA IS IN THE SCHOOL. I REPEAT REN-SAMA IS IN THE SCHOOL. TODAY I DECIDED TO HAVE AN EVENT. WHO EVER CATCHES AND BRINGS ME REN-SAMA WILL GET A WEEK PASS TO NOT ATTEND SCHOOL. MEANING YOU WILL GET A WEEK OFF AND STILL GET YOUR CREDIT. I’LL BE IN THE GYM WAITING FOR THE WINNER. THANK YOU.”
After the announcement was made screams of the female students were heard. “Uh ho! This is bad.” Ren said as he broke his hug which caused Black to frown a little. “You’re right.” Female students were already running out of their classes.
“BTW REN-SAMA IS BEING GRAUDED BY NONE OTHER THAN BLACK SO PLEASE FIGHT HER. AND WHOEVER BEATS HER WILL ALSO GET A FREE WEEK PASS. THANK YOU.”
“Witch!” Ren and Black hissed. “We better split up. Don’t want to gather too much attention now do we?” Ren said as he ran towards to roof. “Okay.” Black flashed and was already in the Gym.
“Oh, Black you’re here.” Yuriko said smiling.
“MISS Yuriko.” They were glaring at each other. Students were slowly coming in and surrounding Black. “Black don’t forget, you’re part of the event.” With that the students rushed towards Black who easily without even moving karate chopped them and they’re all unconscious. “Is that all you got?” Black stepped closer to Yuriko and smirked. “No, you’ll regret ever getting closer to my Ren-sama.” “He’s not your Ren-sama. Besides he’s just a friend and Jurina’s big Bro. What’s your problem?” Black said as she dashed forward. (Their fight begins.) Now students were coming in and helping the injured ones take a seat and watch the fight between their idol Black and their old creepy principal. “Oi! My bet’s on Black.” “Nah~ Yuriko.” “No! Black.” “No, no Yuriko.” The students watching were now placing bets on the winner.
Ren
“Damn! How many students are there? I’m starting to get tired.” Ren said as he avoided the students and quickly dashed into a dark room and hid under a table. Outside you could hear screams of girls calling him and yelling what they wanted to do to him. “Being attractive sucks especially when you’re the only young attractive man in an all female school.” Sigh. “Need to get out of this. But how?” Ren asked himself just then the door opened. Oh GOD. I’m dead. If they find me and take me to Yuriko I’ll be eaten and not in a good way. *shivers* “Don’t worry I’m not turning you in.”
“Jurina?” Ren popped his head up to see his lil sis.
“Yup, Onii-chan.” Jurina said smiling her cat smile.
“Jurina! Thank God. I thought I was a goner.”
“It’s cool.” Jurina hugged Ren.
“Oh, btw I met your girlfriend.”
“Really? What she say?”
“Don’t worry. She knows I’m your cousin.”
“Okay that’s great, well let’s go to the Gym.”
“Wait! You’re not going to turn me in are you?” Ren asked worried.
“No, Black’s fighting with Miss Yuriko.”
“Oh. Well in that case let’s go. Black’s the winner.”
“Bet Miss Yuriko’s winning!”
“Deal, loser does whatever the winner wants.” Ren and Jurina shake hands.
Jurina and Ren were getting close to the Gym where they could hear roars from the crowd inside cheering for Black or Miss Yuriko. They entered and everyone went quiet as they saw the two. Yuriko was on top of Black as she took Black’s cross necklace and ripped it. Ren quickly ran to Black and took her necklace back from Yuriko and kick Yuriko off Black sending her 20 ft away from them. Black had her shirt ripped revealing her black bra.
“Ahem. Ladies.” Everyone turned to look at the person standing on stage. “I have an important announcement to make.” Ren’s thoughts: Oh no. She wouldn’t. “Your dear Ren-sama is…” Ren quickly took off his shirt and put it on Black. This being the first time seeing a hot guy shirtless and in real live caused the crowd to fantasies about a certain shirtless guy. Ren’s torso (http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/82755/82755,1197660269,1/stock-photo-naked-torso-of-handsome-muscular-young-man-isolated-on-white-7804999.jpg) is revealed to the whole entire school. Yuriko and the rest of the school have a nosebleed. They have never seen a real life man’s chest before especial one so attractive as Ren.
“Daaaammmmmnnnnnn~” The whole crowd said as they cover their noses.
“Ren! Put a shirt on!” Jurina yelled as she saw her fellow classmates and principal nosebleed.
“Like I was saying Ren is my future hu… I mean brother-in-law.” Mayu quickly said and covered her nose and went with Jurina. Damn! He wasn’t lying! He’s really a man. Wow he’s exactly my kind of guy. Maybe I should have Center cross-dress?
“Ren, let’s go home before the girls here do something to you.” Black said pulling Ren by he’s ear while Jurina kept pushing him from behind and Mayu cleaning her nose. Black’s thoughts: Damn! He’s so fine!
“Finally home!” Ren shouted but then was kicked on his right leg by a little upset person. “WTH!” Ren yelled but was then bitten by that same upset person on the same leg. “Ugh!” Was kicked again. “AH! Who keeps doing that!” Ren yelled upset.
“Put shirt! Mama see only! Nonono put shirt!” Reki shouted as he bite, slapped, and kicked Ren on his right leg again.
“Ah! Okay, okay, okay! I’ll put a shirt.” Ren said rubbing his bitten and kicked right leg.
“Thanx.” Reki said and smiled then handed Ren a dirty shirt.
“No thanks I’ll like to wear a clean one.” Ren said passing Reki but Reki clinged onto his right leg and started biting him. “AH!!!! Okay! Give me the damn shirt!” Ren shouted and took the shirt and put it on.
“Haha, I’m glad I’m not the one he’s hurting.” Jurina said laughing at their little fight.
“Ha-ha, real funny.” Ren said glaring at Jurina.
“Hey, Ren is these kid your son?” Mayu asked pointing at Reki.
“No, he’s Yuki’s son.” Ren said pointing at Black.
“He’s your son?”
“Yes.” Yuki said as she picks up Reki who’s glaring at Ren.
“Oi! Little man! What you glaring at?” Ren asked glaring back at Reki but was smacked by Kumi.
“No glaring at Reki.” Kumi said welcoming Jurina and Mayu.
“So he is your son.” Mayu said.
“No, he aint.” Reki got upset at Ren’s replied and leaned towards Ren and bit his ear. “Agh! Keep that kid away from me!” Ren said as he went to his room.
“Yuki is Ren really not Reki’s dad cuz he looks a lot like him.” Mayu stated which made Reki smile.
“He’s not.” Yuki replied.
“I don’t know but to me it seems like Reki wants Ren as his Dad.” Kumi said.
“What makes you say that?” Mayu and Yuki asked.
“The way he acts when Ren denies being his father.” Jurina said.
“Yupz. I wanna a dad! Rena papa! Rena papa!” Reki screamed excitedly, clapping his hands. Everyone stopped and looked at him.
“Rena? Papa?” They asked confused.
Reki giggled. “Renapapa! Renpapa! Rappapa! Ren papa! hehe” Reki cheered waving his hands up then bent downwards in Yuki’s arms. “Reeeeennnnnn! Carry meee!” Reki said his arms stretched out towards Ren.
“No!”
Reki pouted cutely at him then smiled. “GekiRena RenGeki. Hehehe.”
Ren heaved a defeated sigh. “Okay.”
“Yaaay!” Reki shouted happily. Ren’s thoughts: This kid is dangerous. If I didn’t know better I could swear he was actually my kid. But since I am 100% woman there’s no way. I’m luck no one suspects me of being Rena cuz of his outburst. Good thing Mayu no more suspects. But I need to find a way to keep this kid quiet. Maybe spicy food will keep him quiet? “Ren! Nonono.” Reki whispered to Ren’s ear. Does this kid read minds? Or just mine?
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LOL This chapter is so interesting :lol:
Everyone getting nosebleed from seeing Ren shirt-less XD
I love Reki ♥~ He's just so cute~ :wub:
How Ren and Reki interact are like real son and father :D
And the last part....
But I need to find a way to keep this kid quiet. Maybe spicy food will keep him quiet? “Ren! Nonono.” Reki whispered to Ren’s ear. Does this kid read minds? Or just mine?
:lol: It's the best :thumbsup
Thanks again for the Update :twothumbs
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
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“Put shirt! Mama see only! Nonono put shirt!” Reki shouted as he bite, slapped, and kicked Ren on his right leg again.
I was laughing non-stop reading those sentences........ :peace:
Update the next soon....
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Well it's good that Ren was not er, uncovered after that incident, seems as though little Reki is the only one who has figured that out so far from the people who don't know.....
Mind you even if Reki is not Re/Rena's son he seems to have moddeled alot of himself on his chosen 'father' what with all the biting and all, Can't really believe thats black is not more suspicious of 'Ren' yet, wonder if Reki needs to work a bit harder......
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Rofl!!!! How did she manage to get this torso???? Lol
Reki is like a mix of Rena and Yuki, is he really not Ren's son? Wait he is a woman, ahhh it's hard to think lol!
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Ren & Yuki huh~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_pissed.gif)
Hurry & GET MARRIED YOU TWO~! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lovelaff.gif)
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I only have three things to say.
First, GIVE REN A LONG LOST GEKIKARA TWIN!
Second, HAREM TIIIIIIIME!!!!!!
Lastly, I want a kid of my own now. D:
Thanks for the update! That gave me lots of giggles and shizzles. xD
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:on gay: This chapter was all LoL!
Nezumi is a smart girl but after the shirtless Ren (having a *chestguard?! I think) even she got a nosebleed!
Sorry if it's long but Hilarious moments are something is had to quote:
“Sorry, I-I-I-I was…… taking a dump. So I couldn’t hear you?” Ren said embarrassed.
“Really?” Black replied with a giggle as she saw Ren’s embarrassed face. He’s so Cute.
Pfft! Bwahaha!
“No! Get away from me! Mommy! An old perverted woman wants to rape me!” Ren shouted as he tried to dodge Yuriko’s advancements. (note: Ren is good at taking hits cuz he hates dodging and he has never been good at dodging.)
Yuki just stood there watching Ren run away and dodge Yuriko’s hugs and kisses. She found this part of Ren very cute. I wish I could do that to him and much more. .
Black’s thoughts: Wow, Ren’s hug feels good. I wonder how he looks shirtless.
Black’s thoughts: Damn! He’s so fine!
Black is also a secret perv... but who wouldn't be Ren IS hot
“GUD AFERNUN TUDENTS. DIS IS YOR PRINCIPAL SKEAPING.” Yuriko said in weird English. (I misspelled on purpose, Yuriko can’t speak English well). “ATTENTION ALL STUDENTS REN-SAMA IS IN THE SCHOOL. I REPEAT REN-SAMA IS IN THE SCHOOL. TODAY I DECIDED TO HAVE AN EVENT. WHO EVER CATCHES AND BRINGS ME REN-SAMA WILL GET A WEEK PASS TO NOT ATTEND SCHOOL. MEANING YOU WILL GET A WEEK OFF AND STILL GET YOUR CREDIT. I’LL BE IN THE GYM WAITING FOR THE WINNER. THANK YOU.”
After the announcement was made screams of the female students were heard. “Uh ho! This is bad.” Ren said as he broke his hug which caused Black to frown a little. “You’re right.” Female students were already running out of their classes.
“BTW REN-SAMA IS BEING GRAUDED BY NONE OTHER THAN BLACK SO PLEASE FIGHT HER. AND WHOEVER BEATS HER WILL ALSO GET A FREE WEEK PASS. THANK YOU.”
Hahhaha Evil teacher is evil!
Ren quickly took off his shirt and put it on Black. This being the first time seeing a hot guy shirtless and in real live caused the crowd to fantasies about a certain shirtless guy. Ren’s torso is revealed to the whole entire school. Yuriko and the rest of the school have a nosebleed. They have never seen a real life man’s chest before especial one so attractive as Ren.
:lol:
“Like I was saying Ren is my future hu… I mean brother-in-law.” Mayu quickly said and covered her nose and went with Jurina. Damn! He wasn’t lying! He’s really a man. Wow he’s exactly my kind of guy. Maybe I should have Center cross-dress?
My favourite part was actually this when Mayu/Nezumi was going to reveal Rens secret... :twothumbs
Reki is a clever kid I bet he's got it from Black. He's so cute my favourite character actually *I wan't to pinch his cheek
Thank you for your update! Can't wait for next...waiting for your other fics update too
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
LOVE this fanfic :ptam-ok:
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
very goooooooooooood
update soooooooooooooon
plssssssssssssssss :inlove:
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I finally got around to reading this! LOL!
I LIKE IT! BLACKGEKI / BLACK REN!! sdklfjlasdf♥ YES
Please continue!!! ^^v
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Hey, everyone. Sorry for the long wait. Haven't really gotten any free time lately to update.
I wanna thanks everyone for your comments and thank yous.
Hope you enjoy it. Sorry for any grammar mistakes.
Chapter 8
After Minami and Yuko went to pick the girls up they took them to the house they will all be living in until the mission is completed.
“Yo, Yuko I’m so glad you’re not dead.” Everyone said hugging her.
“Yeah, me too. Wait, you’re not going to kill me, are you?” Yuko asked worried.
“No.”
“Ha, good.”
“Anyways, where’s Black?” Marichan asked.
“Oh, she’s with her son right now.” Yuko replied.
“She’ll be arriving tomorrow with Ren.” Minami added.
“Rena?” They asked.
“No, Ren as in Ren Matsui. He’s our male member for the mission.” Minami explained.
“Oh really?” Haruna asked.
“Yeah.” Yuko said awkwardly.
“Are you sure?” Haruna asked.
“Yes. Why?” Yuko replied.
“I’m just asking, so is he married?” Haruna asked Minami.
“Huh? No, why?”
“Just. He’s very handsome.” Haruna answered back.
“You’ve met him?” The others asked surprised.
“Yea, he came to my job and unintentionally got me fired. So now he has to take responsibility.”
“By what? Marrying you?” Marichan scoffed.
“Maybe.” Haruna jokily replied.
“Anyways, how about Gekikara?” Tomochin asked.
“What you mean?” Yuko asked coolly.
“Well you brought us all together cuz we’re all good at fighting, but Gekikara’s the best to have on your side during a fight. You know that Yuko.” Acchan explained.
“She’ll be helping us in her own way.” Minami answered.
“How?” Haruna smirked. Yuko’s & Minami’s thoughts: Does she know or is she just playing? Either way we have to protect Ren’s secret from her and the others.
“You know with her records and violent nature it would be hard to have her work on the mission since she might just start beating someone. Also the school is for smart students. hehe” Yuko quickly said, laughing awkwardly at the end.
“Oh.” They all assumed she would be beating up people as her way of helping.
“Wait! But what about Haruna? She’s not any smarter than Gekikara.” Chiyuu added.
“Well, I don’t need to be, since I can use my powers to get the answers from people.” Haruna smirked back.
“Not fair~” Chiyuu cutely pouted.
“Anyways, how about we all settle down into our rooms? I’ll brief you all tomorrow about our mission.” Minami asked.
“Oh, I almost forgot. We’re sharing rooms.” Yuko added.
“I get Tomochin!” Tomomi shouted as she grabbed Tomochin’s arm and dragged her into a room with their bags in tow.
“Hey! Why I gotta share with you?” Tomochin protested.
“Minami and I will share a room.” Acchan said.
“Why? I’ll be sharing with Yuko.”
“Yeah, you can share with Sado or Haruna.” Yuko sternly said.
“No, you might cheat on me with her.” Acchan pouted cutely while accusing Yuko.
“What?!” Wmidget yelled.
“Gross!” Yuko shouted.
“Disturbing!” Minami added.
“Why?” The other 3 asked confused.
“We’re cousins!” Wmidget shouted.
“Oh~ that explains the similarities.” Haruna said pointing at the two midgets standing next to each other.
“Okay, so Yuko will be my cousin in-law. Now Takamina stop wasting time and get everything into our room.” Acchan ordered in a serious tone. Minami quickly placed all their bags into a room.
“Happy?” She asked as she went back to the living room.
“No.” Acchan replied while during the unwilling midget into their room.
“Yuko! HELP ME PLEASE!!!” She screamed as Acchan closed the door.
“Sorry, but no can do. I don’t want to be eaten by the lioness Acchan.” Yuko joked.
“Then, that leaves us three.” Marichan said.
“No, Yuko and you will share a room while I share with Ren and Black gets her own room.” Haruna said going into the room.
“Wait, did she just say she’ll be sharing with Ren?” Yuko asked.
“Yes, meaning I’m stock with you as a roommate. I just hope you don’t have any of those perverted dream you usually have.” Sado jokily said and entered their room.
“Hey! That only happens sometimes!” Yuko shouted going to their rooms. I have a bad feeling about this. I hope Haruna doesn’t know about our secret or worse! Tries to seduce Ren then my shipping for BlackGekikara/ RenYuki ....... Wait, calm down Yuko, don’t be so negative! Maybe I’m just over thinking it. There’s no way Ren will fall under Haruna’s seduction cuz Ren is Rena! Duh~ He’s a girl~ I hope. Either way Ren’s really dense when it comes to sexual tense or anything of that nature. Shoot if only he understood Reki’s feelings then Reki would already have a lil bro. Aish that lil boy is something. I swear sometime he scares the pervertness out of me with his outburst about Ren being Rena.
Next Day Early Moring
“Yuki, you ready?”
“Yeah, but weren’t we leaving this evening?”Yuki asked confused.
“Yeah, but something important came up so I have to drop you off right now. Hope you aren’t mad?”
“No, it’s okay. Let me just tell Kumi that we’re leaving.”
“Okay.”
Yuki left to inform Kumi while Ren packed their luggage into his car. He came back in to find a sleepy Reki in pajamas (http://www.momfinds.com/files/2010/09/baby-boys-clothes-green-henley-jumpsuit.jpg) rubbing is his eyes with his right hand cutely while holding a baby blanket (http://www.blanketmybaby.com/images/products/258.jpg) in his left. “Rena papa. Can I go? Pwwweasee~” Reki asked sleepily cutely slightly tilting his head up looking at Ren while still rubbing his eyes. Ren’s thoughts: He’s so cute~ If only he had a little brother to play with. Then he wouldn’t be trying to make me his dad. On the other hand, it’ll be double the trouble if they teamed up.
“Sorry, little guy but I can’t take you. It’ll be dangerous.” Ren said picking up Reki and taking him back into his room.
“hm. Take care of mommy for me.” Reki said yawning cutely while Ren tucked him back into his bed.
“Hai. I’ll take good care of her. Like I’ve always been doing.” Ren leaned forward and gently kissed Reki’s forehead.
“Hai~ Nitenite.” With that he falls back asleep.
Ren leaves the room and closes the door very quietly to not wake him up.
“Hey, Ren did you see Reki? He…”
“Don’t worry he just wanted to see me. I ready put him back to sleep so let’s go.”
“Oh okay.” He wanted to see you? And not me? Strange Reki has never done that to me. He would always want to see me, only when Rena was with me he would go to her. Does Reki know something I don’t? Can Ren be Rena’s brother? Now that I think about it, where is she? I haven’t seen or talk to her since her graduation. I hope she’s staying out of trouble. I wonder if she still has the same number. I’ll call her later.
After an hour or so they arrived at the house. Ren takes out all their luggage’s and settles them down in the empty room. Yuki walked Ren to the door.
“Okay, I’ll be leaving now.”
“When will you be back?” What's this feels like I’m talking to my husband before he goes to work or on a business trip.
“I don’t know when I’ll be back, don’t worry. If you need anything you have my number.” Why do I feel like I’m talking to my wife?
“Okay, be careful.” There’s this awkward silence between them. Without thinking Ren walked up to Yuki, hugged her and kiss her cheek then left leaving a stunned Yuki touching the cheek he kissed.
“Why is he so sweet? Just like her.” Yuki said and walked inside.
Aki-p Law office
“Hello, Mr. Aki-p.”
“Hey, Ren.”
“So what’s this important meeting you wanted me to attend?”
“Oh, first you need to get your monthly check-up. Ms. Airin please come in.”
“Thank you, Mr. Aki-p. And hello Ren.”
“hey, Airin. So I’ll be getting the usual?”
“Yes. Now would you please take off your shirt?”
Ren takes off his shirt. Both Airin and Mr. Aki-p are surprised at how handsome and muscular he is.
“Um, Ren have you been working out?” Mr. Aki-p asked admiring Ren’s torso.
“No. I do the usually. Why?”
“You’re body.”
“Oh about that. Airin I have a question.”
“Yes, Ren?” Airin beings to check him, you know the usual doctor stuff.
“Well the thing is lately, I’ve been getting more manly and masculine.”
“Yes, that’s right. I’ve noticed that as well why is that?” Mr. Aki-p asked.
“Well, it seems that the injections that were issued for you by your parents are casing this.”
“Wait, so the shots you’ve been giving me this whole time were issued by my parents?”
“Yup, I just give you the shots. I don’t know what’s in them.” Airin said giving Ren that very shot.
“What?!”
“Don’t worry knowing your parents; it might be something like steroids and other stuff to make you manlier.” Mr. Aki-p stated.
“Don’t worry Ren that was your last shot, so you no longer need monthly check-ups.” Airin said packing up all her stuff. “Now I’ll be going.”
“Thank you.” Ren said.
“Good bye.”
After she had left Ren turned worried and faced Mr. Aki-p.
“So what happened?” Ren asked.
“They abandoned him.”
“What you mean they abandoned him? Who abandoned him? Who’s him?” Ren asked confused.
“Ren, remember when you beat that man to death?”
“Yeah!” Ren grinned.
“Remember where you were sent after your trail?”
“Yea, that was no fun.” Ren looked down.
“Okay, but remember when they let you out they told you had join and participate in one of those outreach programs.”
“Yeah, now what’s that got to do with anything?” Ren asked more confused.
TBC..............
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AN UPDATE!!!! :yossi: :yossi: :cow: :cow:
Awww, Ren so sweet with "his" child and 'wifey' hehe :wub:
Yuko-sama, you should have protested more firmly and dragged NyanNyan to your room... XD
And AtsuMina so sweet, so fluffy XD
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Aww Poor Yuko not sharing with Haruna, who is infact sharing with Ren?!??! hmm I wonder if Haruna does know something about that whole situation.....
And Acchan concerned about er... cousincest?!?! Oh Acchan! :rofl:
Aww and Rena with Reki so sweet like a real parent and son! :wub: And Yuki is still thinking that Ren is a brother or something :banghead: man surely Yuki is going to join the dots eventually right.......
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Eh?! Rena is really becoming a man?
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“When will you be back?” What's this feels like I’m talking to my husband before he goes to work or on a business trip.
“I don’t know when I’ll be back, don’t worry. If you need anything you have my number.” Why do I feel like I’m talking to my wife?
“Okay, be careful.” There’s this awkward silence between them. Without thinking Ren walked up to Yuki, hugged her and kiss her cheek then left leaving a stunned Yuki touching the cheek he kissed.
“Why is he so sweet? Just like her.” Yuki said and walked inside.
I love this part~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lovelaff.gif)
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Chapter 9
“Yun! Reki! Stop fighting!” Ren yelled at the two.
“NO! Ren’s my papa!” Reki shouted and bite Yun’s shoulder.
“Itai!!!” Yun screamed and punched Reki on the side of head.
“OI! Stop!” Ren shouted trying to separate the two but instead got kicked and bitten by both. Jurina, Mayu, and Kumi came running into the living room when they heard shouting.
“What’s wrong?” Jurina shouted.
“Oh my gosh!” Kumi said.
“Oi! Who’s kid is that?” Mayu asked pointing at Yun.
“He’s my. Now please help me in separating them.” They help to separate the two; Mayu and Jurina holding Reki while Ren and Kumi held Yun.
“Ren, what’s this about This kid being your kid?” Jurina asked.
“His name is Yun Matsui. My son.”
“WHAT?!!” Reki, Mayu and Kumi yelled.
“Papa cheated on mama! HWEEEEEHWEEE!” Reki cried.
“Shhh, don’t cry.” Mayu comforted Reki.
“Reki, I didn’t cheat on your mom. Let me just explain it.” Ren said.
“You better.” Kumi glared at Ren while Reki glared at Yun who glared back.
Flashback
“Ren you remember that you were assigned to mentor a young boy, right?”
“Yeah, what’s wrong?”
“Well it turns out that boy beat the living hell out of three other boys.”
“Really? That’s great!” Ren smiled.
“No, it isn’t!” Aki-p scolded.
“Okay, so what about it?”
“Well, ever since you stopped being his mentor he has become more uncontrollable.”
“Oi! He was already violent even before I became his mentor.”
“True, I saw his record. Anyways the agency can’t handle him anymore.”
“What you mean?” Ren asked confused.
“He’ll …”
“What’s going to happen to him?” Ren interrupted.
“You know that the agency said if he was returned or got into another fight, they were going to sent him to an orphanage.”
“But they’re a foster care agency they can’t just put him in an orphanage. What about his parents?”
“They have both agreed to give him up for adoption. I’m sorry Ren but there’s no way to help this boy, he’s just too out of control for the families that take him in and too troublesome for the agency to handle.”
“Then I’ll take him.”
“What?”
“I’ll adopt him. I’ll take care of him like I’m taking care of Jurina.” Ren stated.
“Ren are you sure. He might cause you a lot of trouble.”
“No, he needs a loving home and I don’t want him to go to an orphanage.”
“Okay, I’ll get the paper work.”
“okay, thank you.”
“Okay, would it be okay if I go?”
“Sure, why?”
“I want to meet this trouble maker that resembles you.” He said and smiled.
“What?” Ren smiled.
“Yeah, if I didn’t know better this boy could really be your brother.” Maybe he could be a distant relative since he resembles both Ren and Jurina.
“Okay. Let’s go.”
10:38 am they arrive at the agency.
“Hello, I’m Ren Matsui.”
“Hello, Mr. Matsui.” The lady at the front desk flirty smiled at Ren.
“Hello. I’m here about Yun.”
“Yes, the director is waiting in his office with all the paper work that was sent over.” She informed rubbing Ren’s upright right arm while biting her bottom lip.
“Thank you.”
“Anything for you, handsome.” She bit her bottom lip seductively at Ren.
“Ren, did you just see that?” Mr. Aki-P asked following Ren to the elevator.
“See, what?” Ren asked confused pushing the very top button.
“That woman was throwing herself at you. Didn’t you notice it?”
“Hm? Really?”
“Boy, you really are as dense as the ocean.”
“Huh? That makes no sense.” Ren said confused thinking about what Mr. Aki- P said. Ren frowned his eye brows while pouting a little. “Sorry, but no matter how much I think about it I don’t understand what you were trying to tell me.”
“Just forget I said anything.” Mr. Aki- P said dejected.
“Okay.” Ren said cheerfully, exiting the elevator and entering the director’s office.
“What?!” Mr. Aki- P shouted when he entered the office and saw a 1 or 2 year old hugging Ren.
“What’s wrong?” Ren asked looking at Mr. Aki- P.
“Is this the boy that’s been giving trouble to so many families?”
“Yes, this is Yun Onshia and he’ll turn 2 this year.” The director introduced.
“Papa! U here to pway with me?” Yun smile brightly at Ren.
“Sorry Yun but I’m not here to play.” Ren said carrying Yun.
“oh~” Yun said in a low soft voice while tearing up.
“Wait! This little kid is the kid that’s been causing so much trouble for families? As in the one who beat up three 7 yr old kids?” Mr. Aki- P asked still surprised to find out that its a little kid.
“Yes.” The director stated while Yun throw his shoe at him.
“Ouch! Oi! That hurt!” Aki-P said rubbing his forehead.
“Hehehe.” Yun giggled into Ren’s neck.
“Yun, that’s not nice.” Ren sternly said.
“I’m sowwy, Papa.” Yun said looking at Ren with puppy eyes.
“And also how do you know Yun?” The director asked.
“Rena!” Yun shouted.
“Yeah, Rena.” Aki-p said.
“Oh, that’s understandable. You must’ve been around when Yun would be with Rena. Are you and Rena twins?”
“Yeah, you can say that.” Ren smiled.
“Rena!!” Yun shouted and hugged Ren.
“Well, since you’re here. Shall we begin?”
“Oh, Yes. And this is my attorney Mr. Aki-P.”
“Hello.” They both said.
“Papa, wat’s on? You’re not goin to leave me? R u?” Yun asked crying.
“No, Yun. Ren’s not going to leave.” The director said comforting the lil boy.
“That’s right! In fact he’s going to be your older brother!” Mr. Aki-P said smiling.
“But he’s already my papa. How can he be my Oniichan?” Yun stated.
“Yeah, but now you’re going to be living with me and officially become my son.” Ren smiled.
“Really?” Yun had a huge grin and clapping his hands excitedly. “I’m Rena’s son! Rena’s son!”
“Rena’s son?” The director asked confused.
“He said Ren’s son. Are you not feeling well?” Mr. Aki-p said.
“Really?”
“Yea! Ren- Papa!” Yun shouted.
“Oh, well he just needs to sign your adoption papers and register you as his son and that’s it no more going and living with different families. Ren will become your father and family, you’ll live with him.” The director stated.
“Yeah~ Ren papa! Hurry~ I wanna go home~” Yun shouted excited.
“Okay.” Ren signs all the papers and leaves with Yun in his arms and Aki-P following him.
“So, I’ll be leaving now bye.” Mr. Aki-P said.
“Bye.”
“Wait!” Yun yelled.
“Yes? Lil Matsui?”
“Lil Matsui?”
“Yea, since you’re my son now.”
“Yay!”
“Now what were you going to say to Mr. Aki-p?” Ren asked.
“Sorry, for throwing my shoe at you.” Yun bowed towards Aki-P.
“It’s ok, and Ren please teach him well.”
“Of course.”
“I mean everything good and that doesn’t include teaching him to beat others.”
“Aw~” Both Yun and Ren whinned.
End of Flashback
“Oh~ so you didn’t cheat on Black.” Kumi said.
“Yeah, wait! What? What’s Black got to do with this? More importantly why would it consider Black if I was with someone else?” Ren asked confused.
“Papa, who’s Black?” Yun asked confused.
“My MAMA!” Reki shouted proudly.
“Black’s got everything to do with this.” Mayu shouted.
“How so?” Ren asked angry.
“Cuz YOU MAKE A GREAT COUPLE!!!” Kumi, Mayu, and Jurina shouted while Reki nodded cutely.
“Who cares!!! Black is nothing of mine. And more Importantly! We’re not a COUPLE!” Ren shouted upset.
“WHO’S BLACK??!!” Yun yelled.
“Here, come.” Reki mention Yun to come closer to him. Yun obeyed. “Look.” Reki showed a picture of Black (http://suzumiyayuki.files.wordpress.com/2010/01/black.png?w=627).
“Wow~ she’s pretty~” Yun said in an aw voice admiring the picture.
“I know.”
“Hey, is that?”
“Yup, wait you know that…”
“Yup.” Yun smiled.
“You thinking what I’m thinking?” Reki asked putting his arm around Yun’s shoulder.
“Yea, I wanna mama.”
“N I wanna papa.” Both kids grinned evilly.
“Oi! Chibis! What you talking about?” Ren asked eyeing the two kids suspiciously.
“Rena! Gekikara! SPICY FOOD~ dadada~ RRREEENNNAAA~ RRRREEEN~ We hungry~” Yun and Reki sang.
“Yun, I have to go Kumi Mayu, and Jurina will be taking care of you and Reki. Bye” Ren said running out the house and into his car. Oh boy, it’s going to be hell. They just had to team up.
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hahaha double teamed, Ren is going to have to deal with another kid that has the same scary aura thing xD
I really wonder how long she/he could keep up with the whole thing though
and I'm so desperate for more Ren(a) x Yuki scenes, how long is it going to take them to be together? There's obvious attraction and they're already like a family since forever.
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Oh god, I'm so glad you updated!!!
Double child team means double trouble... Ren/Rena, ganbatte!!! And now they really need to realize - Yuki and Ren/Rena - that they care about each other more than friends...
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Oh poor Ren(a) seems as though the kindness showed in making Yun his/her son might be slightly backfiring as it seems as an alliance had formed between Reji and Yun in thier mission to get Ren(a) abd Yuki together......
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Oh~ the family becomes bigger~
Can't wait to see what will do the duo Reki/Yun
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Yes!! Their sons will do something~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_evillaff.gif)
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Good For Ren....Teach Both of Them Well :kneelbow:
i Can feel that Something Going to Happen ... :ding:
YUN AND REKI can make a Good Team :stoned:
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:cow: You updated!
Hahah Yun is adopted yes it's make the chance for Black&Ren to be a couple....those kids are evil and smart XD (and cute)
Thank you waiting for your other fics update too!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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oh my....i never thought Geki/Black pairing can be like this :hiakhiakhiak:
and those WMidgets things are hilarious :on lol:
SUGOIII :on GJ:
next update please :kneelbow:
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Hey. I'm back!!! I'll like to thank everyone for your comments. Hope you all enjoy this Chapter. There more RenYuki scenes.
Chapter 10
Ren arrived at the house they’ll be staying at while on the mission. He hurriedly ran to his room pass by the girls and closed his door shut. He let out a sigh of relieve once in.
“Oi, wasn’t that Ren?” Asked Tomomi.
“Yeah, but why was he in a hurry?” Tomochin asked confused.
“Don’t know.” Haruna replied.
“Maybe he couldn’t wait to see Black.” Sado said entering the room.
“Makes sense.” The rest added.
“Oi! Ren’s not like that!” Takamina shouted from hers and Acchan’s room.
“Oh come on~ How can you be so sure Ren’s not into Yuki?” Acchan whined.
“Cuz Ren’s G-”
“Bakamina!!!” Yuko yelled.
“OHGOD! Ren’s gay?!” Acchan, TomoTomo couple and Marichan yelled shocked and surprised. WMidget facepalmed at their outburst, but at least Ren’s secret wasn’t exposed.
“No, he’s not.” Haruna stated in a matter of fact tone.
“And how do you know?” Marichan asked with her right brow raised.
“Well for one he went straight to his and Yuki’s room. And if I remember correctly she’s in there.” Haruna suggestive said.
“Yeah! RenYuki!” Yuko shouted happily jumping up and down.
“What are you talking about?” Everyone except Minami asked confused by Yuko.
“Oh ho~ You’ll know.” Yuko said showing them a perverted smile.
“Ohhh~” Everyone let out while Minami facepalmed at her cousin’s words.
While Ren was catching his breath, he failed to notice someone getting out of the bedroom’s bathroom. When he looked up he was shocked by the view in front of him. Yuki stood there frozen looking at him with only a baby blue towel wrapped around her body.
“Beautiful~” Ren said out loud in a dreamy like voice while staring at Yuki with dreamy eyes and mouth slightly open with a little drool coming out.
Yuki was shocked to find Ren inside their room, but once she saw how he looked at her. She got an idea. She slowly and seductively walked towards Ren and stopped a few inches from him, she then leaned in towards his face. They were now very very close to each other, Yuki’s body slightly pressing into Ren’s tone body. Ren’s breath became heavy and short, heart beating out of control, sweat dropping down his forehead. Yuki smirked seeing him like this. “Honey, you should close your mouth. You’re drooling like a dog.” She whispered into his left ear then went to get her clothes and back inside the bathroom to change. Leaving a panting flustered red as a cherry Ren standing there dumbfound at what just happened.
OHGOD!! I think I might have had a heart. Why, why has this day turned out so troublesome? First the chibis tag-team and now Black, Black, I mean Yuki, Yuki, Yuki being sooo damn sexy. *Sigh* What’s happening to me? Am I losing it? WAIT!! Did I just say Yuki’s SEXY!?!! She’s my friend! I can’t be thinking of her in that way! *long sigh* I think hanging with Wmidget is starting to affect me. Making me a pervert like them. *sigh* Please help in surviving this.
Meanwhile ready near by
“OHMYGOD! Was that all about?” Yuki whispered herself as she put her hands over her heart.
What the hell came over me? I’ve never been comfortable in being anything like that with men. So why, why did my body act on its own? But I didn’t hate it. Instead I really really liked it. *blush* Ren was so cute, the way he was breathing with his mouth slightly open. He looked so….WAIT!!! Yuki, Ren’s your friend he’s helped you a lot. You cannot think of him that way. Now that I think of it, I’ve done this before with Rena. Is the reason why I’m acting like this cuz Ren likes exactly like Rena? Or is it something else? *sigh*
*Knock* *knock*
“Yuki? Are you okay?” Ren asked in a worried voice breaking Yuki’s thoughts. She realized she was still only covered by a towel.
“Yes! I’m just changing. Why? You wanna see more of me?” Yuki teased in a seductive tone.
Why did I say that? Is my Black mode a pervert? (Sorry to say this Yuki. But you and your Black mode are the same person.)
“Um… Um…” Ren couldn’t find any words to reply Yuki’s tease so he shouted the first thing that popped into his mind. “I have a son!”
Once he shouted that the bathroom doors swag open. “What?” Yuki asked shocked, but Ren was more shocked with the sight in front of him.
“Y-Yuki, you’re towel.” Ren stuttered pointing at Yuki before passing out. She furrowed her eyes brows before looking down and seeing that her towel had fallen down.
“Yuki!”
“Black!”
“REN!!!”
“Geki! I mean Joker!!!”
“Is everything okay in there?”
The others shouted from outside the bedroom with worry.
“Don’t bother them; they’re just having some fun.” Yuko stated.
Yuki quickly changed and opened the door. “Ren, faint.” She monotone. Yuko’s face dropped until she smiled a big perverted smile.
“Oh ho~ It was th..” Yuko was cut off by a hard smack to the back of the head.
“Oi! Squirrel! Didn’t hear Ren when he shouted!” Minami shouted at Yuko.
“Yeah, that he has a son.” Yuko said smiling.
“Son?” Everyone asked confused. Meanwhile Haruna helped Ren to come back to his senses.
“Yeah, Reki!” Yuko said smiling ear to ear causing Yuki to blush. Haruna was now helping Ren stand up. Everyone was quite.
*ring* ring*ring*
“Hello?” Ren answered a little out of it still.
“…”
“He did what?!” Ren shouted.
“…”
“Kumi put him on.” Ren said rubbing his temples. Now everyone in the room is looking at him, wondering what was going on.
“Reki? What did you and Yun do? ” Ren said in a calm voice.
“…”
*sigh* “Reki, how did he end up tying you to a bed poll? And how exactly did he over power you? Reki? Reki? Are you still there?” Ren asked in a worried tone.
Until loud yelling and shouted came out of his cell.
“AHH!”
“RUN!!!”
“REN HELP!!!!!!!!”
Ren ended the call and ran to his car with the girls following closing behind, Yuki already waiting inside his car.
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reserved spot for comment...
yuki being naughty on ren :on bleed:
i wonder how yuki and the others will react when they know about Ren's secret :hehehe:...
can't wait to see Reki-Yun TagTeam in action :kekeke:
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Reki getting tied up by yun and everyone thinks ren's son is reki cant wait until they find out about yun and yuki's reaction about it.
Your story is awesome hope you update soon.
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It so funny
PLEASE CONTINUED THE CHAPTER !
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wow wow wow renyuki scene awesome...
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thank you so much for the update i really hope you keep updating it i love this fic and the renyuki scene :inlove: yuki being seductive :drool: i like it :mon evillaff: lol please update soon :cool1: :on gay:
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:luvluv1: :luvluv1: renyuki moment.. pls make this more hahah
:onionwhip: :onionwhip: the trouble maker make the move.. :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
:bow: :bow:please update soon
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im not a big fan of yukixrena,but aftr i read this,im starting to be big fan,tnx to ur amazing fic...
I love the atsumina verY much,i hope u continue to make me smile aftr i read this!!tnx again,and im waiting to ur nxt update!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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WOW Black's sexy momen!!!!
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Oh, I wonder how others will react about Yun being Ren's son :D :D
And BlackRen smexy teasing scene :drool: :drool: :drool:
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:shock: Sok-san updated! YEI! :nya:
:on spit: So much hilariously Yukirin/Black Oh Gosh :on bleed:
Yukirin you teaser no that is definitely not her Black mode hahaha if it was I would think that
she'd punch Ren instead. It's more like a Yuki hentai or seducing mode XD
Ah what is happening to Yukis son hahahaha
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU :kneelbow:
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Wow! I'm really enjoying your fanfic! I love Yun and Reki haha, they could totally be Rena's sons!
Please continue it soon!
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when will everyone find out the Ren is Rena !!!!!!!!?????????
i love this fic espically how Yuko and Takamian are pervs ahahaha
update soon
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I read this Fics All Over again...and Still Excited for the next chapter....
I just Realized that
YUN = Yuki + Ren
REKI = Ren + Yuki
Am I right ???
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Hey! :mon hi: I'm back!! haha. :twisted:
Thank you to everyone who has left thank yous and to those who took the time to write those lovely and encouraging comments. :kneelbow:
And xxx220 you're right about YUN = Yuki + Ren
REKI = Ren + Yuki
I'm also thinking about having Yuki discover that Ren is Rena but I'll make that fun. hehe. :ding: :mon devcandy: Don't know when I'll do it though hehe. Anyways here's the chapter hope you all enjoy it. Sorry if it's too short. :mon sweat:
Chapter 11 Part 1
While Ren and everyone on the way to the house, inside the house.
“Jurina!!! Catch that lil demon!!!”
“I’m trying Mayuyu!!! Kumi!!Reki!!! Get something to tie him up!!”
“Reki, you really are Yuki’s son!!” Kumi cheered when Reki returned pulling a kid wagon with chains inside.
“Thanx.” He smiled.
“hey, he even brought chains to chain Yun.” Mayu said holding the chains up.
“Great! Let’s go!” Jurina said grabbing a chain.
“Wait! Aish can’t she wait until we make a plan?” Mayu said shaking her head.
“No, you know how she is.” Kumi stated. “Let’s go Mayu and Reki, we need to chain that monster before he does anything else.” They started chasing Yun.
So far Reki was the only one who could keep up with him. “Yun! Stop! I won’t hurt you!” Reki shouted while chasing Yun.
“Really?” Yun stopped and looked at Reki.
“Yes, I swear. I’ll only get even with you for tying me up to the bed post.” Reki deadpanned while pouncing on Yun with the chains.
“Oi! Get off me!” Yun shouted struggling under Reki.
“No! You need to be punished!”
“No!”
“Midget stay still!!” Reki shouted trying to chain Yun.
“Who you calling midget?! Lilliputian!” Yun shouted turning the tables on Reki who’s now under him.
“Itsy-bitsy!” Reki shouted rolling over.
“itty-bitty!”
“diminutive!!” Yun shouted.
“Miniature!!!”
“manikin!!” Yun bit Reki ear.
“Small!!!” Reki shouted head butted Yun.
“Immature!!!” Yun shouted taking the chains from Reki.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” Kumi, Mayu, and Jurina shouted. (note: They have been standing there watching the two this whole time.)
While Reki and Yun fought
“Hey, doesn’t this kinda remind you of Yuko and Minami?” Kumi asked.
“Yeah, cuz their both small.” Mayuyu replied.
“But what’s got me more interested is that these two uses such big words against each while Yuko and Minami just use the word midget.” Jurina reasoned.
“True, but where the hell they these two learn such words?” Mayuyu asked.
“no idea.”
“Immature!!” Yun shouted.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” They shouted at Reki last statement.
When they turned they found Yun finishing on tying Reki up to a wooden chair.
“haha, see. As if you could beat me. And what’s up premature?”
“What’s up with immature?”
“Loser.” Yun said before running away from the ‘three babysitters.’
“Hey! Get back here!” they shouted.
“Hahahaha! Catch me if you can! Hahaha!!!.” Yun laughed running around. Kumi had cornered Yun after a while of running and was close to catching him when Yun suddenly charged and tackled Kumi’s right leg which caused her to fall.
Taking this chance to escape Yun ran up the stair towards Ren’s room but made a sudden u-turn towards the stairs when he saw Mayuyu in front of Ren’s room.
Ren, Yuki arrived first followed by the van where the others were in.
“Ren, can you please tell me what’s going on?” Yuki asked with concerned.
“I don’t know.” Ren said walking towards the door.
“Ren, why do we have a bad feeling about this?” Minami and Yuko whispered to Ren on both his sides (Yuko left, Minami right) when he put his hand on the door knob.
“He knows my secret.” He whispered back.
“Oh no.” They both said a little scared. And Ren opened the door.
“PAPA!!!! I want papa!!” Yun yelled running around the house while being chased by both Center and Nezumi.
“This kid is getting on my nerves.” Nezumi hissed while running after Yun.
“I wonder how the hell Ren could keep up with him.” Center said out of breathe while resting on the floor next to Kumi and Nazumi with a still tied up Reki.
“WHAT’S THE MEANING OF THIS!!!!” An angry voice boomed through the entire house. Frightening everyone.
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thankyou so much for the update :twothumbs i wish they would be a little longer tho anyways thankyou :kneelbow: keep up the good work please update soon :onioncheer: and more renyuki please :luvluv1: :luvluv2: im in love with them lol :lol: i love this fic your the best !!! :peace: out !
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KYAAAAAAAA~!!! :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: *TOTALLY in a fangirl mode* Ren must sound soooooo sexy in that mad voice of his/hers :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: And those kids... They are beyond the words AWESOME, though.... Their vocabulary.... :mon nyah:
Anyway, I soooooooooooo will be waiting for your next update!!!!!
Yuki finding out about Ren being Rena? YES, please!! :mon pray2: :mon trannie: :mon dance:
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AWESOME Fics... :on GJ: :on GJ:
Yun is Pretty Naughty :nya:
Poor Reki getting tied up on a Wooden Chair
NOOOO REN WILL BE MAD AT YUN :frustrated:
I think Yun and Reki learn this Word from Yuko and Minami while they babysitting them cause they always Fight :glasses:
“Midget stay still!!” Reki shouted trying to chain Yun.
“Who you calling midget?! Lilliputian!” Yun shouted turning the tables on Reki who’s now under him.
“Itsy-bitsy!” Reki shouted rolling over.
“itty-bitty!”
“diminutive!!” Yun shouted.
“Miniature!!!”
“manikin!!” Yun bit Reki ear.
“Small!!!” Reki shouted head butted Yun.
“Immature!!!” Yun shouted taking the chains from Reki.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
YUN AND REKI ARE AWESOME :shifty:
PLEASE CONTINUED MORE CHAPTER !!! :on lol:
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omg an update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YAYAYAYYYYYYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA HAPPY DANCE :yossi: :cow: :otomerika: AYAYYYYYAYAYAYAYAYAY
fun chapter i need morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol
thanks for the update
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The fight between Reki and Yin is so cute lol
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Sok-san! :w00t:
Hahaahha Yun and Reki equals epic.
Poor Kumi,Mayu and even Jurina with her high stamina couldn't keep up with these kids.
Ah I wonder how Yuki will discover "Rens" secret...hopefully that would be in a amusing way XD
Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU :kneelbow:
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please update soon :cow:
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OH MY GOD!!!
I just found out that There will be a Majisuka Gakuen 3. :mon wtf: :mon crazyinlove:
And it's set in PRISON!!! :mon mad: :mon fyeah: :mon cigar: :mon star:
Which will start to air on July. :mon roll:
WOW~ :mon XD: :mon trudge: :mon beam:
Shows how much I haven't stayed in tune to AKB48 & SKE48 news lately. :mon cry:
But there's no way I will miss that!!! :mon yo:
Sorry, :mon sweat: Just got a little crazy. :mon fu:
Anyways, I'll try and update by this week. Peace!! :mon bye:
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Hey everyone I'm back with another update!! :on lol: Like promised.
Thank you for all your comments and thank yous. I hope Part 2 is long enoungh for you. :nervous
Chapter 11 Part2
“REN-PAPA!!!” Yun ran and hugged Ren’s legs. “Oh! WMidgets!!” Yun waved at Yuko and Minami with a smirk on his cute lil face.
“Oh no.” They both said and looked at Ren. “Please tell us this is a joke.” With a worried face.
“Ren, what’s going on?” Mariko and the rest of the girls asked seeing the lil boy hugging Ren’s legs.
“MAMA!!” Reki voiced.
“OMG! Baby!” In a flash Yuki untied and inspected Reki to see if there were any injuries.
“Mama, that kid*sniff* evil *sniff* waaahaaa!” Reki said while he cried pointing at Yun.
“Papa, he big meanie.” Yun pouted sadly and pointed at Reki.
“Hey! Would anyone care to explain what’s going on here?” Acchan and Tomochin yelled.
“Oh, that kid next to Ren is his son, Yun.” Mayu stated in an angry tone.
“What?!!!” Everyone shouted except Mayu, Jurina and Kumi since they already knew.
“Oh no!” Wmidget said after realizing something.
“What?” Everyone asked confused looking at them.
“Reki’s biting Yun’s ear.” Yuko deadpanned watching the two kids.
“And Yun’s biting Reki’s shoulder.” Minami stated.
“They seem to like each other.” Ren smiled. All the women turned to him with a What-the-hell? Are-you-crazy? Don’t-you-see-they’re-trying-eat-each-other.
Well all except Yuko. “That’s my boy!” Excitedly said with a perverted grin.
“Excuse me.” Minami said and dragged Yuko by her ear to another room. Few second later it’s dead silent.
“Papa!” Two voices called out.
“Yes, Yun? And Reki I’m not your dad.” Reki became sad and hugged Yun bearing his face into his shoulder.
“Papa!” Yun softly spoke.
“Yes, Yun?” Ren softly spoke kneeing down in front of Yun who’s still hugging Reki.
“I want him as a brother.” Yun gently stated turning Reki around so he also faced Ren.
“Yun, I…”
“Please~” He begged giving Ren his cutest puppy eyes along with Reki who cutely pouted with his big whole eyes staring at Ren.
“AW~ CUTE~” All the girls.
All sudden the doors burst. “Yuki can be your mama!” Yuko stated gently grabbing Yun’s shoulder but then tackled to the ground.
“Stop that!” Minami shouted.
“No!!”
“Why not?!” (They were now rolling on the ground. While the others just watched.)
“They’re cute! And they…” SMACK!!!! Yuko landed unconscious on top of Minami.
“That’s enough. Get off MY Minami” Acchan shouted throwing Yuko on the ground and dragging Minami to one of the guest rooms.
“Help! Help! Ren! Help me~” Door slammed closed.
“Papa, she scary.” Yun stated while Reki nodded looking at where Acchan entered with Minami. “I sort of feel bad for Auntie.”
“Ugh~ My head.” Yuko whined rubbing her smacked head.
“Anyways.” Ren said looking around. Wow~ seems like a tornado came in here and destroyed the whole living room. I’m guessing Yun did all this with a little of Reki’s help. *smiles* Reminds me of when I was a little kid. how I used to cause so much trouble for my maids and bulters. *smiles* But I still have to punish him for this. *evil smirk* “Yun, how about we go to the beach?”
“Huh? Beach? What’s that papa?” Yun asked curious.
“Ren-papa what’s a beach?” Reki asked also curious.
Sigh. No matter what I do or say Reki’ll call me papa. Might as well let him don’t want him giving hints to the others, like he's been doing. “Reki, Yun the beach is somewhere where people go to cool off and enjoy themselves.”
“Yeah, families go to the beach to have fun.” Jurina said.
“Families?” Yun and Reki said looking at her.
“Yeah!” Kumi replied.
“Hey how about we all go to the beach tomorrow?” Yuko shouted excited.
“I agree, we don’t start working until Monday. So we have 3 free days.” Acchan said fixing her clothes.
“Where’s Takamina?” Mariko, TomoTomo, Kumi, Mayuyu, Jurina and Yuki asked.
“Sleeping.” Acchan stated with a sweet smile.
“Rrrreeennnn~ Heeeelllllpppp mmeeeee ppppllleeeeaaasssseee~”
“Oh! Seems she’s awake now. So we’ll be going to the beach tomorrow, we’ll leave at 8:45 am. Bye~” Acchan stated closing the door.
“Okay, so that settles that. Let’s go to sleep.” Haruna said dragging Ren to a guest room.
“Hey! Where you taking Papa!” Yun and Reki shouted running after Haruna but were too late since Haruna closed the door on them.
“MAMA!” Reki shouted looking at Yuki with teary eyes.
“What’s wrong sweet?” She asked putting him up.
“Why did she take papa?” Reki asked crying softly.
“I don’t know.”
“Reki?” Yun called out.
“Yes *sniff* Yun?”
“She’s your mama?” Yun said pointing at Yuki.
“Yes.” Reki beamed.
“Beautiful! Can I call you mama?” Yun asked showing Yuki his adorable puppy eyes.
“Y-yes. Sure, why not?” Yuki stuttered blush a little. Why do his eyes look so much like Rena’s?
“Yeah!” Reki jumped down landing on Yun.
“Hey, Ren was right.” Tomochin said.
“They do seem to like each other.” Mariko added.
“Mama~” Two voices called.
“Yes?”
“We sleepy~” the two said rubbing their eyes cutely.
“Okay, let’s tuck you in.” Yuki said walking hand in hand with the two.
“Aw~ don’t they make a cute family?” Yuko said.
“Yeah, I wish I had kids, to” Tomomi said hugging Tomochin and nibbling her neck.
“Why don’t you? You have plenty of attractive male models drooling over you.” Tomochin stated annoyed.
“Aw~ is my Tomochin jealous?” Tomomi cutely whined shaking Tomochin’s arm side to side.
“Ha! As if! you’re nothing to me.” Tomochin stated and walked away. Leaving a teary eyed Tomomi.
“Oh god.” Mariko exclaimed facepalming.
“Shh, it’s okay.”
“Don’t cry Tomomi.”
“Yeah, Tomochin’s not worth it.” The three younger girls said trying to comfort the crying Tomomi.
“Still the same old dense blunt Shibuya.” Yuko exclaimed shaking her head.
“What?” A very red faced Haruna said walking out the room.
“Why is your face red?” Jurina asked.
“Where’s Ren?” Mayu asked.
“I’m here.” Ren stated coming out the room.
Tomomi stopped crying and looking at the two. “What did you two do in there?”
“OMG!!!! Don’t tell me!” Yuko shouted.
“Not what you think.” Ren stated.
“I simply gave him a massage.”
“What?! Wait! Nothing more?! Wait, on second thought. That’s great!” Yuko shouted. For a moment there I was totally forgetting that Ren belongs to Yuki. Damn, I need to keep an eye on Haruna. Mmm~ she looks so cute and yummy when she’s blushing. Wait? What am I thinking? You were thinking Haruna’s cute. What?! No! She’s smexy! YEAH!!! Wait, what? Agh!!! My mind’s playing tricks on me. It’s all Acchan’s fault. Yeah! That’s it! It’s her fault, if she hadn’t hit me on the head I would have never thought of Haruna in that way. Hope I didn't get any brain damage cuz of her.
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Waaaaa~you update yay!! :cow:
AAAAh :angry: What are you doing Haruna with Ren!!
Reki and Yun are so cute . :wub:
Yuki thinks at Rena... kawaiii~. :heart: :heart:
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It's been so long...
Reki and Yun are so adorable. :wriggly:
I wonder what did Atsuko did to Minami and what did Haruna said to Ren. :dunno:
Please update soon!
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Hahaha! chaos! Poor Jurina,Mayu and Kumi taking care of those kids.
Wonder what Acchan did to Takamina and I bet that Haruna was going to gice Ren massage and she touches his abs and blushed :P2
Thank you for your update Sok-san hilariously as always. Waiting for your update of other fics too!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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agg yukirin very good mother..
lol yuko is jealous
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THE KIDS ARE SO KAWAIII!!
And yes, Yuko-sama, have more perverted thoughts about Haruna, so KojiYuu can happen!!!
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is it okay for me to kidnap those kids? they're so kawai..
Yuko..LOL..
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The kids are so cute~
Lol Acchan is scary!
Tomochin how can you make Chiyuu cry?!
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I remember I started reading this a long while ago =O now there is so many more chapters to read XD
I guess there is one good thing about being inactive for a while, but the other is.... I have way to much to catch up on....
Thanks for the story, this so crazy Reki and Yun are awesome! Best little monsters ever!!!
Yes you 2 should go bring Ren and Yuki together :cow:
... not sure if i wanna know what Acchan did....... :panic:
update soon =)
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LOOOOOOOOOOVE~ :on gay:
Oh, those two BuraGeki children. They be doing good playing "cupid". :mon thumb:
I will always... *always*... adore dominant!Acchan. God, this kind of Atsumina makes me wild... LOL.
You're part of the reason why I made a fool of myself in front of my family, unable to stop smiling and fangirling. For that, I give you... ... Quite frankly, I don't know *what* to give. LOL.
BUT. I :mon love: . Imustseethisupdatedoneday. :ding:
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@ Pwety- Thank you for commenting. Yeah, Yuki thinks about Rena a lot. Especially when she’s with Ren.
@ RJay- Yup, been soooo long. Well, knowing Acchan she just wanted her daily “Adult time” with Minami. If you get what I’m writing.
@ Megumi- Yup, pure chaos. After all they’re like minis of Gekikara. Hehe. Acchan just wanted her “adult time” with Takamina. Yup, just by touching and feeling Ren’s yummy abs Haruna had a nosebleed. Too bad she couldn’t handle Ren’s hotness.
@ msst28- Yup. Yuki’s good mother. Now the only thing missing is the good father. *cough* Rena *cough*
@ sakura_drop_- Thanks for commenting. Yup, Yuko will have more perverted thoughts towards Haruna, just wait.
@ yukofan- I’d let you, but I don’t think their parents would like that very much. haha
@ kahem- Yes, they are. You know Tomochin isn’t the type of the person to think things through or consider others feelings. Also the fact she’s dense about Chiyuu’s feelings towards her.
@ immortal_k- Thanks. Yeah, being inactive has its benefits but you end up with lots to catch up.
@Crossing Crossroads- Thank you. The BuraGeki children are the best! Yup, Dominat Acchan is awesome. Thanks, but there’s really nothing to give me. Your comments are enough. ^_^ Hope you join the chapter.
Thank you to all those who left Thank yous.
Chapter 12
Reki’s & Yun’s POV
Yay! We’re going to the beach today!! Yun and I have been wake since I don’t really know how to tell time but the number on the digital clock was 6:06 am. So yeah~ we’ve been up really really early. We’re really excited!!! *Dancing around* *Shaking butt* We’re just playing around in our room and watching TV with the volume to its lowest.
“Reki, let go to the kitchen.”
“Okay, I’m kinda hungry.”
“Oi, you know if Rena-Papa has melon pan?”
“Hehehe, I know where she hides them.” Reki smiled rubbing his hands together.
“Then what are we waiting for?”
“Oi, Reki how come you do baby talk? Instead of talking regularly like we now?”
“Cuz more fun to mess with Rena-papa. Hehe.”
“True. Hehe”
“But I think he already knows we talk better than most 3 yr olds.”
We walked towards Papa’s room, opening the door silently and quickly sneaked in. We were close to the melon pan.
“Yeah, wait you 3 yrs old?” Yun whispered as we got closer to papa’s melon pan.
“Yup, just turned 3.” Reki smiled.
“Me, too.” Yun smiled high fiving Reki.
“Yes, and you 2 are very smart for your age.”
“Yeah, we from our Rena-papa.” We beamed. Wait… (Are lifted into the air.) Uh ho. We’re dead.
Yuki’s POV
I wake up today early in order to get everything ready for our trip to the beach. When I walked out I smelled a rich and sweet aroma coming from the kitchen. Once I got to the kitchen I was surprised to find Rena making hot chocolate.
“Rena? Rena!” I happily shouted jumping into Rena’s arms.
“Y-Yuki? W-what are you doing up?” Rena stuttered as I buried my face deeper into her neck, taking in all her scent.
“Rena.” I whispered hugging her tighter.
“Um, Ren-nii and Yuki. Sorry for interpreting your moment but Nii-chan you’re ruining my hot chocolate.” Jurina spoke. Ren-nii? (looks at the person she’s hugging.) Omg!! It’s Ren!!!
“S-s-s-orry, about that.” I hurriedly separated from Ren hiding my blushing face. Oh my gosh! I can’t believe I did that to Ren. But he looks exactly like Rena and smells like her, too. Why?
No, it’s okay. Yuki.” He stuttered looking down. OMG! He’s so cute~ when he blushes!! Wait, did he always have those 2 scars on top of his left eye? It can’t be can?
“Um, sorry to interpret your cute couple moment but Ren you’re burning my hot chocolate.”
“Oh sorry, here it is.” Ren gave her, her drink.
“Thanks, I’ll be in my room with Mayuyu getting ready.”
“So, um Yuki you mind helping me get everything ready?”
“Sure.”
“Thanks.”
We get the 2 vans ready with our beach supplies; towels, beach chairs, 2 large umbrellas for shade and 2 ice cooler one with lots of drinks inside and the other with veggies and meat inside to grill. While we finished everyone else was already coming down with their bags and getting into the 2 Vans.
“Yo, we’re leaving first. Bye.” We waved and drove off.
“Yuki, I’ll be right back I need to get my bag from my room.”
“Yeah, me too and I’ll get the boys ready.”
Ren’s POV
Okay, that was close.
“Now, to get my stuff.” I got to my room and find my door wide open and 2 lil kids doing soldier crawls towards my melon pan. I stay quiet watching them talk and crawl while sneaking up on them.
“Oi, Reki how come you do baby talk? Instead of talking regularly like we now?”
“Cuz makes more fun to mess with Rena-papa. Hehe.” Reki replied snickering. Oh so they were just playing with me, huh?
“True. Hehe” They really are my sons. (Wipes fake tear)
“But I think she already knows we talk better than most 3 yr olds.” Reki stated. Smart boy, just like his mom.
“Yeah, wait you 3 yrs old?” Yun whispered as they got closer to my melon pan.
“Yup, just turned 3.” Reki smiled.
“Me, too.” Yun smiled high fiving Reki.
“Yes, and you 2 are very smart for your age.” I stated looking down at them.
“Yeah, we from our Rena-papa.” They beamed as they realize that I’m lifting them up glaring at them. I can see that they know they’re in trouble.
“Rena-papa.” They sheepishly said.
“Nah-uh. Not working this time.” I put both onto my lap in spanking position. Once settled I spanked them 3 hard times. “Now, next time I find you in my room without my permission. You’ll receive a worse punishment. Okay.”
“Hai, papa.”
“Good, now go with mama to get ready.”
“Hai.” The 2 walked off with a big smile on their faces and holding their aching butts.
“Those 2 are going to be a handle.” Ren sighs tiredly while getting his bag.
End of Ren’s POV
Yuki was already in the car with the boys waiting for Ren to lock the house and start the car.
“Is everyone ready?” Ren asked as he started up the car.
“Hai.”
“Alright, let’s go to the beach!” Ren shouted while the boys did a happy dance.
“Yay!” Reki and Yun yelled rising their arms and waving them like they just don’t care.
“Mama! Put music!” Yun clapped.
“No~ let’s sing~” Reki whined.
“You 2 do that.” Yuki replied.
“Beach~” Reki started.
“Oh yeah~ the beach~”
“We going to beach~ oh ohoho~”
“yea yea yea~” Ren joined.
“Clear beautiful sea water~ Having fun playing with my boys~” Yuki song.
“YukiMama~ Bikini~ Renapapa~ bikini~” Reki song while clapping his hands.
“Nonononono~ Yukimama~ Picture~ Just picture Renapapa~ Renpapa~ Yukimama just picture RenPapa~ Small tight swimming trunks~ Yukimama~ oh nonono~ Just picture Renpapa in tight small trunk~” Yun song to the max of his voice volume while moving his whole body side-2-side in his safety seat.
“Oh yeah yeah~ skin2skin contact~ Touching yummy places~ oh yeah~ oh yeah~ Sexy and you know it~ Renpapa getting all excited~” Reki song to his max voice volume rocking his body in his kid’s safety seat.
“So~ Excited~~” Both song but were cut off by their doors opening.
“You 2!!! Seems to you didn’t learn your lesion this morning.” Ren scolded grabbing his and the boys bags and taking both boys with him. “We’ll go change! Go look for the others!” Ren shouted as he entered the males changing area. “Now butts out!” He instructed while the boys did so. Once in position Ren spanked each once. “Now go change then go to your mom and no funny business.” Ren sternly stated.
“Hai.” They quickly changed and left Ren alone.
Yuki POV
I looked around the whole beach for the girls but didn’t find them. When I flash back to the car they were barely parking the Vans.
“Hey! What took you so long?” I asked as they get out.
“We were being followed so we had to take the longer route to lose them.” Takamina stated as she, Yuko, Tomochin, and Jurina took everything out the vans and carried them over to a nice spot close to the water and near some restrooms and changing rooms. While the others changed. I quickly helped them unload the vans and grabbed my bag.
“Hey, we’re done. Why don’t you girls go change?” Haruna said as she laid down on the huge large blanket with Acchan and Tomomi on her right side while Mayu and Kumi on her left.
“Mama!!” Reki and Yun came running towards me. “Why you not changed?” They asked eyeing me.
“I’m about to.”
“Hey, Yuki go. I’ll watch over them.” Mariko stated sat down on a beach chair. “Come you 2 let mommy get ready.”
“Hai, Mariko-sama.” The 2 said bowing and settling down next to her. Mariko-sama?
I go to the changing room and open my bag. I was surprised to find not the one piece bikini I packed but a 2 piece one. “What? What happened to my bikini?”
“Yuki!!”
“Are you in here?”
“Yuko? Jurina?” I shouted back.
“She’s over here Yuko.” Jurina said knocking on my door.
“Yuki open up!” Yuko shouted. I quickly let them in.
“Yuko, Jurina I have a big problem.”
“What?” They asked worried.
“This.” I showed them the bikini.
“What? But it’s perfect.” Jurina said.
“Yeah, Ren will love it!” Yuko exclaimed.
“Okay, get out.” They got out, I quickly put it on and see that it’s too revealing but perfect. It’s tight and revealing in all the right places. Omg! How will Ren react when he see me in this? Would he like it?*blush*
Ren’s POV
I walk out and don’t see the girls so I start walking around looking for them. While I was looking for them I wasn’t paying attention to where I was going when I bumped hard into someone.
“Oh, I’m very sorry.” I sincerely apologize quickly helping the young woman up. “Wow, you look beautiful.” My eyes looking over her figure in that sexy bikini. Damn she’s hot.
“T-thanks.” She stuttered hiding her pink blushing cheeks.
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YOU FINALLY UPDATE !!!
THANK YOU
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
THANK YOU
I LIKE YOUR FANFIC
PLEASE MORE SCENE OF ATSUMINA AND BLACKGEKIKARA
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Ah, this update.. :D :D :D
I wonder how many more stories will raise my mood.. :roll: :roll: :roll:
I love those kids to death :deco: :deco: :deco:
And oh I hope Ren/Rena bumped into smexy Yukirin :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
More of this story please!! (and more Yuko-sama!!!)
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Yeah beach and bikini!
I like the 2 chibi hehe
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Sok-san! :on gay:
Those 2 kids are just too adorable!
Oh seems that Yukirin is suspecting that Ren(someone we know) *smirk
And who followed the girls? The bad guys?
It better be Yukrin that Ren bumped into XD
Looking forward to next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Hello! Sok-san!
I started reading this fanfiction!
I really love it! :heart:
I'm looking forward for the next chapter!
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*pokes* its been a while...haven't it.....
Please update soon and I need more MayuJuri D:
And again UPDATE SOON!! *takes out a bomb slowly* *evil smile*
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Hello :lol:
You finaly update! :D
This is a good chapter! :)
Please update always :D
Thank You
I love this fan fiction of yours! :inlove:
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i just found this fic and read it and.... it's awesome!!! :twothumbs
i lik-no no no no, I LOVE IT!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Rena becomes Ren? oh no, oh no, i start to melt... *help :inlove: :inlove: :love:
wmidget, they're so funny & entertaining! lol XD
and yeah acchan, sado, torigoya, shibuya, black, rappappa reunion! kumi! i miss kumi! there's new rappappa too, uuu center & nezumi!
RenYuki GekiBlack is back woohoo! :wub:
Reki & Yun, those 2 kids, really geki's sons i think! they're so close and like each other as brother...
hmm... those 2 kawaiiii! chuuu~ :love:
ok, i know, your last update is almost 2 years ago, but but but, seriously, i really really really love it!
i wonder, don't you want to continue it, Sok? hehehe
pwease~ i beg you, Sok! pwease~ :bow:
good job btw! :twothumbs
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This I such a great story. Pleas keep updating. :twothumbs
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IT'S TWO YEARS AGO??
But, still, it's cute -3-
When will they know Ren is Rena? Kk~
UPDATE IT :deco:
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update please.... :bow: :bow:
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This fic is so good
Pls update it
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Omg i just found out ur fic today and im already finish it XD
Who did Ren bump into?!?
Omg. I want to see Yuki in her swimin suit *imagine* yes!!!
Update soon
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May I translate this novel into Chinese and post it on a Chinese website？I'd appreciate it if I could.
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update please...
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next
Thank you for the story up until now
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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:hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: so Funny I like the 2 little demon very Interesting :kekeke: :shifty: :shifty:
:prayers: :prayers: Waiting For the Update of this story :on gay: :on gay:
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Please update soon! And thanks for the update! :thumbsup
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Update it please :bow: :bow: :kneelbow:
Yun and Reki :cow: (singing) :rofl:
Kojiyuu :luvluv1: :on lol: :on lol: :luvluv1:
Yukirena (Black x Gekikara) :luvluv1: :luvluv1: