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Title: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: anonymousdowner on August 28, 2012, 11:01:22 AM
Forbidden Flower

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Prologue | Camellia


Brightly lit lanterns threaded together filled the night sky and illuminated a radiant glow of apricot over the crowd of pedestrians. Amongst the hoard of bonodori entertainers, the sakura tree lined pathways were brimmed with enticing food stands and variations of game stalls. The echo of laughter and obscure conversations filled the warm evening as people of all ages came together joyously to celebrate another summer festival.

Matsui Rena smiled at the happy children skipping around gleefully with their tiny plastic bags of goldfish. She was cladded in the elegance of a baby blue yukata designed with the delicacy of flowers and held by a lively pink obi. As the warm summer breeze blew by Rena lifted up a hand to fix her fringes, her dark silky hair was pulled back smoothly into a bun and held in place by two artistically refined kanzashi hairpins.

“Rena-Rena, let’s check out that flower place over there~” Her best friend Furukawa Airi suggested as she pointed excitedly.

Interlocking her arm with Rena’s she pulled the girl into the direction of a long table seemingly overflowing and surrounded by a wide collection of exotic plants. Upon arrival an elderly couple with matching outfits greeted them in a friendly fashion.

“It’s nice to see such young women still interested in flowers these days.” The older lady commented flashing them her happy expression.

“Of course, flowers make life that much more beautiful don’t they?” Airi replied returning the kind gesture.

“Might you two be interested in floriagraphy?” The older man asked.

“Floriagraphy?” Rena timidly returned.

“Yes, meaning the language of flowers. Each and every one of them tells a different story while holding their own symbolic meanings.” He defined the word with an aura of someone who was absolutely fascinated by the idea.

Rena just nodded fathoming the fact and smiled at him while Airi’s eyes sparkled, “Eh, is that so?” her friend thought the whole concept was simply amazing.

“Would you guys like to have one?” The older lady offered.

“Can we really?!” Airi beamed cheerfully.

 “Go ahead and choose, simply pluck one from out of its batch.” The man answered the girl in his generous voice.

“Yay, let’s pick one Rena~” Airi clapped her hands together, let go of her friend and proceeded to walk away in search for one perfect to her liking.

Rena quietly scanned over the beautiful cluster of flowers in front of her. Each display had their own differences in color and sizes, and oddly enough no two flowers were ever alike. Nurtured on their own pace by their own compatibility with the environment, plants were more complicated than one would have originally thought.

The pure white petals in contrast to the yellow center of a delicate flower caught Rena’s attention and slowly her soft hands reached for the plant. As her slim fingers came close in mere inches, the gentle touch of someone else’s hand brushed up against her skin.

Rena halted in place and turned to meet the gaze of a fine stranger standing next to her. She blinked up at the person whose face was hidden behind a thin porcelain kitsune mask and dressed most sophisticatedly in a beautiful men’s white yukata with an obi the royal shade of burgundy.

A pink blush crept up to Rena’s cheeks. She and the stranger remained still in place midway in reach for the same flower, until the voice of the same elderly man caught their attention. The two immediately recomposed themselves and gave the man their flustered attention.

“Ahh, it’s the white camellia.” He said before continuing, “Such a simple beauty it whispers the phrase, ‘There’s no doubt to me you’re very lovely.’” The man gave the duo a cheesy look and exaggerates on his voice to some extent before further explaining, “The camellia is a symbol of admiration as well as adoration, but the story behind this flower is sometimes told much tragically.” He nodded with his eyes closed sympathetically.

“Rena, I picked out my flower isn’t it pretty?” Airi interrupted.

Rena observed her friend’s bright yellow flower, “It suits you well.” She smiled.

“You think so?” Airi giggled in an agreement and then asked, “You haven’t found anything?”

Rena bit onto her bottom lip lightly and shook her head no. She then peered over nervously to look at the masked stranger behind her friend's back, but it seemed as though the person was not paying attention. Airi raised a brow in confusion, but shrugged it off a moment later. The duo then both gave a bow to show their gratitude towards the floral couple and decided to move on to the next attraction.

The intriguing sound of taiko drummers and authentic shakuhachi flute players as well as other traditional instruments brought to life their age old customs. The night was going by perfectly.

Rena spotted a man in front of an interesting machine plastered with the bolded letters that read, ‘Men ame’ and fastened her footsteps towards it. With her mouth slightly agape, she knew what it was and it was exactly what she needed the most at the moment. Airi followed the girl shaking her head and laughed at her friend’s silliness.

“One please!” She happily chirped. Rena’s hands were placed together in front of her like a child anxiously awaiting their treat and observed as the smiling man complied with her request. “Ahh, it looks so fluffy~” She said, her eyes following the sweet as it twirled delicately onto a cone.

The man laughed at her expression, “You remind me of my daughter, she’s an elementary kid. Are you a high school student?” He asked.

At his question Airi darted her amused gaze towards Rena and watched as her merry features faltered, “…No, I’m older than that.” Feeling embarrassed she hurriedly paid the man with money from her tiny pouch and excused herself.

Shaking off the awkwardness, Rena shifted her attention back to the fluffy delight in front of her and closed in on the treat. As her lips met the cotton candy, she bit into the confection and let the sugar melt inside of her mouth. An adorable smile graced her lips and she giggled at the satisfaction of enjoying her little snack.

“Can I have some?” Airi asked already ready to take a pinch of the airy treat.

Rena nodded and licked at her lips. An unexpected flood of emotions came over her and suddenly feeling the eyes of someone on her, Rena turned back to look over her shoulder. Her eyes scanned over the crowd of people, until they came to a halt as she locked gazes to a familiar person. The fox masked stranger stared back at her and she felt her ears become warm.

Self-conscious, yet slightly apprehensive she looked away and took another bite of her cotton candy. Rena then pulled on the sleeve of her best friend and dragged the girl to a different location. With each step that she took she glanced to the side and the stranger also followed them from the other side of the wide dirt laden pathway.

The person didn’t even take into measure that hiding was an option and just made it blatantly obvious to the girl. Rena didn’t know what the stranger wanted from her, but she had sensed that it was probably harmless. Airi though had taken notice to her friend’s quirky behavior.

“What’s wrong?” She asked her tone with a hint of concern.

Rena didn’t answer the girl and just sped up the speed at which she was walking and shifted her position to the middle of the road in order to lose the stranger. Unbeknownst to the girls walking, just up ahead near a ramen stand a fight had just broken out.

As two different groups of punks violently retaliated against each other, chaos had begun. Chairs were thrown and stands were trashed as the groups of thugs picked up random objects to use as weapons. Alarmed, the crowed of people fretfully moved out of the way and cleared the pathway. When the losing team began to flee, the merciless group began to chase after them.

“Rena!” Airi called out to her heedless friend and moved away in a haste to the dodging crowd of people packed together on the sidelines.

When Rena had snapped out of her paranoid daze, her eyes widened at the fact that she was the only person standing alone in the middle of the walkway and a group of dangerously looking savages were running right in her direction.

She dropped her treat. Her body immediately stiffened up in fear, but her legs refused to move. She did the only thing her body naturally allowed her to do and in a panic she tightly shut her eyes, awaiting the brutal impact.

In a swift movement, the arms of a person wrapped themselves securely around Rena’s body. With an arm over her shoulder and the other slightly covering her head protectively the stranger pressed their heads down against each other. The action was as if the person was also afraid, but willing to sacrifice for Rena.

Time stood still for the two locked in a tight embrace and miraculously the group of trouble makers charged right pass them. Rena jumped slightly with her shoulders raised when the thunderous sound of fireworks ruptured into the night sky and she gripped onto the clothes of the stranger.

As the sound of fireworks continued to alarm, and no damaging impact was ever made she slowly fluttered her eyes open and gazed up to look at the person. Rena’s breathing hitched in her throat and her heart began to race in her chest as she found herself staring into the passionate gaze of the kitsune masked stranger from before.

The ever changing lights of the fireworks illuminated an indescribable glow over their figures and in that instant an unfamiliar tingle ran down her spine and her breathing quickened. Trying to calm her excited heart, Rena blinked a couple of times and immediately removed herself from the person.

With her cheeks flushed and a million thoughts running through her mind, yet no words to say she looked down abashed and decided to dash away. The second she turned to leave though, a hand grabbed at her wrist and she nervously turned back to gaze into the eyes of the masked stranger.

“…W-what is it?” She stuttered.

The stranger didn’t say anything nor did the person mutter a single word. After an intense moment of silence the taller person merely turned around Rena’s hand and placed something into the soft flesh of her palm.

Rena hesitated before looking at the object. Her eyes widened with a gleam of indescribable emotions when she was met with the sight of a pretty camellia flower and instantly gazed back to look at the stranger who had just let go of her hand.

After her release the stranger took a couple of steps back into the crowd of people who were now resuming onto the pathway to enjoy the view of their celebration and soon disappeared from sight. Rena gripped onto the stem of the flower and brought it up to her chest as she stared into the direction of the person who’s finally hidden.

“Are you okay?!” Airi’s distressed voice interrupted Rena’s stunned figure and she turned to look at her friend with a seemingly unsure nod.

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The summer had already long ended. Dressed in her most professional attire Rena smiled brightly and shook hands with a balding man. Suited up in his usual snappy suit, the principle of Sunshine Sakae Gakuen greeted the young woman most cordially.

“We’re most excited to have such a young and ambitious woman join us for this year’s intern program.” The man said in an attentive fashion.

“Thank you so much for accepting me here.” Rena replied politely.

A gorgeous teacher walked into the office and also shook hands with Rena. She looked up with a questioning gaze towards the professionally assembled man and he explained, “This is Ohori Megumi, she will be supervising your teaching performances for this year while you take over her class.” He smiled at the two.

“Please take good care of me.” Rena bowed respectively to the teacher, but the older woman frankly patted her on the back instead.

“Class will surely commence soon.” The principle looked at his watch. “Ohori-san, why don’t you guide Matsui-san here to the class she will be working with?” He asked and she undoubtedly complied.

Making her way to the class room Rena took a deep breath before stepping inside. Taking notice, Megumi laughed and set a hand on the younger woman’s shoulder, “Don’t be nervous, you’ll be fine.” She assured.

The first year students whispered amongst themselves curiously as Megumi explained to them the new changes with the school’s intern program allowing university students to gain real classroom teaching experience. She then looked to Rena and she without hesitation introduced herself competently.

After the initial information was given out, the student teacher began her official duties. Reading off a list she took roll call. Calling each student one by one who raised their hand and answered her obediently, she stopped for a second when her eyes read the name of a student with her exact surname.

“Matsui Jurina?” She asked looking up from the list to scan over the students.

When no answer was given nor was a hand shown in the air Rena tilted her head and repeated again. “…Matsui Jurina?”

The moment of silence was interrupted rudely as the loud clash of the room’s sliding door snapped open. Stepping inside of the room with her captivating aura and charming smile the teenager answered.

“Matsui Jurina, present.”

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A/N:Hmmmm, what do you guys think? Lol, I’ve been upset…Still trying to get over my lovely Acchan’s graduation. I wasn’t really into this pairing at first, but now that Atsumina makes me undoubtedly depressed…I’ve come to love Wmatsui very much haha. Well first of all there is the real age gap between the two in this fic, therefore if you can’t handle jailbait in such a relationship I’m really sorry haha ^__^” I like it like this, it’s quite nice actually and pfft this is japan age is just a number lol. Well this prologue is short, but when the first chapter is up it’ll be twice as long. I’d like to read everyone’s opinions good and bad accepted. It really motivates me to update, thanks so much for reading! (Please excuse my grammar errors) :heart: Ahhh, and credits to tebasaki-army who created the gif that inspired this fic for me!
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Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Kiri-el on August 28, 2012, 01:01:33 PM
I really love it, this prologue is very interesting!

...and... I like the age gap :)
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: mo-chan on August 28, 2012, 01:21:09 PM
 :luvluv1: :luvluv2: I LOVE it  :shy1: :shy2:
teacher and student  :nya:
 :glasses: it's really interesting  :ding:
I can't wait for the next  :wriggly:
 :onioncheer: :hee: please update the chapter soonn !!!!  :on gay: :whistle:
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: serffix on August 28, 2012, 01:35:34 PM
I normally don't comment much, but your fanfic really deserves praise!
I love your writing style!
The prologue is really interesting and the "mysterious" atmosphere is just great.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
The age gap will just lead to more awesome tension so I'm all for it.
Looking forward to see your version of our cool, pimpy jailbait  :wub:
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Sayuki on August 28, 2012, 02:44:17 PM
I love your previous fics even though i'm not so into Atsumina. Your writing style is awesome <3

Now you make a Wmatsui fic that make me love you more <3

I'm officially your fan now :)

I'll follow your fic 'til the end. Thanks for the hard work.
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: lollita90 on August 28, 2012, 05:51:44 PM
OMG moreeeeeeeeeee!!!

i want moreeeeeeeeeeee~  :OMG: :frustrated: :gyaaah:

the prologue is already interesting, i can't wait for next! more WMatsui love!  :farofflook:

please update soon!
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: kuronekosan on August 28, 2012, 07:57:11 PM
I think it's really good. Such an interesting idea you have here. I'm worried about the camelia's tragic story though. Isn't that the one about it falling(dying) ungracefully?(tragically) It happens to be my cousins middle name.....i wonder if my aunt knew about the meaning when she picked it. :nervous

Despite the obvious rule breaking and hints of tragedy, I'm hoping it'll have a happy ending. We all need that right now.

Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Juribait on August 28, 2012, 08:10:35 PM
I really loved the prologue, is really good write and the ideia is good too  :w00t:
I hope this will not be a tragic fanfic  :lol:
please continue  :on asmo:
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: BbSis on August 29, 2012, 02:10:11 AM
Quite intersting beginning o/ I love student/teacher stories, and age gap ones hauhauhau

I'm worried too with that camelia meaning thing ;p you know, its already tragic a teacher falls for her student.
I hope after all the drama, they end up together o/

Can't wait for the next chapter o/ thaaaanks \o/
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Dreamstalker on August 29, 2012, 07:51:33 AM
 :mon thumb: wh0ow...interesting fic...please. update soon looking forward to it....
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Ryo Hiroshi on August 29, 2012, 08:28:38 AM
You!!! First, you started with an AtsuMina fic, then a MariHaru one and now, a WMatsui one!!!
OMG, all of my OTPs!!!
Are you trying to kill me with your awesome writing skill, sir???
\(>______<)/

I love all of your fics and I'm looking forward to ALL of them. So please update soon!

About this fic, well... OMG this is an age gap and a teacher-student relationship!!! Damn it, I loveeeeeee this kind of story >_____>
I'm glad that you like the age gap between them, I like it too. Although it's hard to write, this age gap makes this couple have many things to write about them ^__^
And, yeah, I'm waiting for chapter 1, because you said that it'll be twice as long as this prologue. Well, I love ittttttt

P/s: My English is bad (actually it's crap, I know it) but I do hope you can understand my fangirling over your fanfics well  :lol: Thank you for your hard work *bow*
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Megumi on August 29, 2012, 12:30:11 PM
 :dizzy: OMG! I'm in lala land  :on BDay:

It's so captivating that I actually slowed my reading to fully taking in every word by word because the prologue was  :panic:

So mysterious! the mysterious person was so cool! (Jurina?) but still the atmosphere everything!
And then mysteriously disappeared (I wonder what could the sad story behind the flower "Camellia" is)

And the Jurina dashing in like that...so uncool!
Like a messy student or something LOL!

But I can't wait for next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: melon-lover on August 29, 2012, 12:53:49 PM
My gosh, this was such a good read!
So well written, and with WMatsui, what is there not to like  XD
And it's just the prologue! With this, I'm definitely expecting this fic to be great!
Thank you so much for this creation  :bow:
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: Wmatsui22 on August 29, 2012, 01:44:59 PM
WOW!!!

WMATSUI, one of my favorite pairing..

anyway..

please update..

thank you..
Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: anonymousdowner on September 08, 2012, 12:36:05 PM
Personal Replies:

Kiri-el: Ahah, thanks so much for commenting! You were the first and that’s always special. I like age gap too of course keke. I appreciate the support, enjoy this read.

Mo-chan: Sorry I took a while to update. Your comment was cute ahah, I like gifs. Yeah, I’m into that kind of thing too hence the story lol. I hope you enjoy this chapter!

Serffix: Wow, I am feeling very honored then that you commented then! I try and improve, but I hope my writing style just doesn’t get too confusing. Hmm, I didn’t notice the mysterious atmosphere until you mentioned it lol. I guess it came out naturally mysterious then haha. Well, I don’t know if this chapter sums up jailbait’s personality though…I just hope you’ll enjoy this update either way. Thanks so much!

Sayuki: You read my previous fics? Haha, that’s soo awesome! This comment made me really happy and motivated. I think you’re my first fan ever. Now I feel the pressure of not wanting to disappoint you... O_O lol, I appreciate the love and support so much. Thanks, I hope you enjoy this first chapter.

Lollita90: Haha, your comment made me laugh! A happy author is a great thing you know. Hmm…Oh yeah, there will be lots of wmatsui love. I’ll make sure it’ll be oozing just that, but of course lots of drama too haha. Thanks for the support and comment!

Kuronekosan: Wow, your username is so awesome when I read it, it automatically comes out with a cool singsong voice lol. I thought I’d share that bit of strange info with you haha. You don’t have to worry about the camellia, the flowers change each chapter and for the camellia’s story it simply means…the moment was short lived. Haha, and your cousin eh? It’s a beautiful name regardless. Thanks for the comment I hope you enjoy this chapter, and don’t worry always a happy ending hehe.

Juribait: Thanks for the comment and support mu fellow Jurina loving fan! I appreciate the opinion and don’t worry it might get angsty, but a happy ending shall follow!

Bbsis: I do too of course haha! Don’t worry about the camellia, the flowers change for every chapter. The camellia’s story only meant the moment was short-lived. There will be lots of drama and surprises, but there will also definitely be a happy ending. Thanks for the support, aha I like your DP it’s cute! I miss that pairing.

Dreamstalker: Sorry for the late update, I will definitely do as you say soon haha! Thanks for the comment and support, I hope you enjoy this chapter too ‘: )

Ryo Hiroshi: Hihihi~ I know you lol. Since we have all the same OTPs…no killing lol, how about an awesome virtual high five instead?! 3…2…1…VIRTUAL HIGHFIVE** I really appreciate you following all my fics you know, it means a lot. The age gap makes it more awesome, because that’s how it is in real life too. It makes it complicated and awkward for Wmatsui lol. && You know what? Your English is great actually so I have no idea what you’re talking about haha. Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy this chapter although it’s a bit draggy.

Megumi: Haha, your comment was wonderful and funny. I’m very flattered you did that now I’m nervous you might get really disappointed since this chapter is kind of draggy. The mysterious person is pretty obvious of course haha. Again like I’ve been telling the others, don’t worry about the camellia’s story. It only meant the moment was short lived and the flower changes for every chapter so yeah lol. Hmm..I wonder how Jurina turned out to be like anyways…I can’t really tell sadly T^T. Trying though, but thanks so much I hope you enjoy the read.

Melon-lover: You know how I tend to ramble when I’m writing to you? ...Yeah well, those tendencies are trying to leak right now too haha. I hope it’s not annoying. I’m sorry for the long wait, but like I said when a great author that I admire such as you go commenting on my work…I get embarrassed, I hope this draggy chapter doesn't fail you. Thanks so much for the comment and support and enjoy the read. It's truly an honor haha. I’m also sooo looking forward to any of your updates too lol.

Wmatsui: Ahah, I like your comments. They’re like “AWESOME” then wam bam update! But when I check it’s like on allmy fanfics so seriously, thanks so much for the love and support. I hope you enjoy this update.

Title: Re: Forbidden Flower | Camellia| WMATSUI
Post by: anonymousdowner on September 08, 2012, 12:36:44 PM
Forbidden Flower

Chapter One | Chrysanthemum


“Matsui Jurina, present.” The teenager replied most suavely.

Light from the beautiful veranda seeped in, casting a radiant glow over the class room’s latest occupant. Girls waved on enthusiastically in turn, and the whole classroom seemingly lit up into smiles. Rena turned, her gaze shifting over to the younger girl who had just answered her so.

“You’re late Jurina-chan.” Megumi voiced out, her expression unexpectedly pleased.

The young girl made her way in with each step clear and conspicuous. “It won’t happen again, Ohori-sensei.” Her composure was calm and collective as she replied.

The student teacher remained quiet. She glanced back and forth awkwardly as Megumi winked at the girl who just paused to give a respectful bow in Rena’s presence. To her surprise however, when Jurina looked up she felt a sudden nostalgia soak throughout her body.

They made eye contact…

In that short moment of silence, Jurina’s eyes glimmered expressively. Confused by such an intense aura, the shorter of the two had to blink a couple of times to compose herself.

Rena couldn’t shake off the feeling as she watched the girl’s pink lips curve into an amused smile. The corners of her mouth igniting into view a set of charming dimples.

Rena looked away clearing her throat, and Jurina proceeded to settle herself down at her assigned seat. Hesitantly, she resumed the roll call duties. As she continued to read out names on the list her eyes slowly, yet curiously traveled to Jurina’s seat. Rena quickly darted her eyes back down regrettably though, when she noticed that the younger girl's eyes had never left hers.

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After the sound of a bell signaling lunch break in session, loud echoes of laughter and lively chatter began to fill the modish school. Jurina watched as the student
teacher made an exit with Megumi out of the room, she had guess that it’d be for the faculty lounge and kept silent.

“Did the new teacher catch your attention or something?” Kimoto Kanon, a classmate asked.

Jurina propped her elbows up onto the desk top and laced her elegant fingers together. She glanced up to look at the younger girl, “Perhaps, it’s something like that.” She replied with a smirk.

The girl suddenly furrowed her eyebrows, “…But, I don’t want that.” She commented with a pout and her index fingers nervously tapped against each other.

Jurina chuckled softly, “She just looks like someone I’ve met before.” With that said she lifted up an arm and ruffled the top of Kanon’s dark brown locks.

At the kind gesture, a smile returned to the girl’s adorable features. “Are you going to eat in the cafeteria with the seniors again?” she asked.

Alluring fingers suddenly slid against Jurina’s desk, “Of course she is.” An upper classmen named Takayanagi Akane or better known as Churi walked over. She sat down on the countertop in a seductive manner, placing a hand on the shoulder of its occupant possessively.

“I wasn’t asking you.” Kanon glared.

Churi shrugged and turned to Jurina, “Let’s share an obento together.” She smiled.

“I’d love to, but unfortunately there’s some things I need to attend today.” Jurina declined politely.

The smile on Churi’s face fell, “Aww, but my friends really wanted to spend some time with you too.” She added.

Kanon removed Churi’s hand from Jurina’s shoulder, “You didn’t hear? Jurina-san definitely said she was busy.” The girl chided.

Churi ignored Kanon and this time grabbed onto Jurina's hand instead.

“Go on ahead without me. I’ll pay a visit to the cafeteria when I’m done.” Jurina said.

“…Okay, I’ll be expecting you then.” Churi looked disappointed, she removed her hand and got off the desk to leave the room in a sulk.

Kanon eyed Jurina’s back as she also stood up and walked towards the exit, but not before patting the girl on the head first.

Jurina walked out of the room and a refreshing breeze blew by. The cool air circulated around her figure as she took in the sunlight. The white corridors of their aesthetic school were an open area and with her high class being on the second floor she had a view of the opposing balcony mirrored by doors to neighboring classes. In between the building down below was a vast courtyard filled with students, beautifully green and flourished by an amazing garden’s worth of extravagant flowers.

The creak of a door opening on the opposite side of the building sounded loudly and Jurina’s attention was turned to look across the canvas. Tilting her head to get a better look as a person closed the door, a smile instantly came to her.

With a water bottle and a book in hand, Jurina watched as Rena tilted to the side to get a better look at the other end. A gentle breeze put a sigh through the older girl’s hair and how she gently brushed back the long silky locks sent a flutter to Jurina’s chest.

…Slowly, a hypnotic rhythm played itself melodically into her heart.

Rena began to walk and diametrically opposed from the young teacher silently, Jurina began to mirror the action. The warm smile she held as she kept her eyes on the woman never once left her features. Just the two of them in importance, the rest of the word seemingly drowned out…

Making her way through the hallway, Rena occasionally stopped to bow respectfully at the teachers who passed by. The captivating glimmer of innocence in Rena’s eyes as she smiled courteously brought the younger girl back to a familiar time and again she recalled the pleasant memory of summer. Jurina also paused from time to time in order to return polite greetings to friends, but never did her gaze on the student teacher ever lose their focus.

Enamored, Jurina continued staring on across the balcony at the unsuspecting person. To the student, with each step her view was simply beautiful. Rena’s attention was suddenly shifted to a couple of wagtail birds previously perched on the railing beside her and with a knuckle under her lips she watched as the two soared away into the mist of their blue haven.

As the birds flew away drifting out of sight and into the clouds, Rena looked down and smiled to herself seemingly enjoying her break. Coming near the end of the hallway Jurina stopped not wanting to expose herself and eyed as Rena made her way down the stairs. The student had a couple seconds to herself, before deciding to head for a nearby railing.

She glanced down at the exquisite view of the building’s front entrance. The yard was a beautiful field lined with pear trees and its flowers, a little pass the prime of their blossom. The dark tree trunks breathtakingly in contrast to the snow white flowers occasionally, drifting to the ground.

Then surely enough Rena came back into Jurina’s line of vision.

Rena made her way under a tree and sat down. Her slim legs were extended out and crossed comfortably on the grass. She wore a stylish white long sleeved blouse and a slick black skirt completely complimentary to the tree and together they painted an exotic portrait of fall.

Jurina gazed as the teacher began to read, but quirked a brow when the young woman stopped to set the book down in her lap and took out something she couldn’t make out. The girl from above squinted her eyes to get a clearer focus and witnessed Rena pop something into her mouth, before drinking liquid down to help her swallow it. 

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Over the next couple of days Jurina observed her young teacher the one who held an innocent gaze, frail and elegant in posture, yet uncharacteristically outspoken and slightly timid in manner.

Jurina gently tapped the end of her pencil on the surface of her desk as she smiled to herself. With her gaze on the text of a passage from her book she couldn’t help it, but to enjoy the sound of her educator’s voice as the woman cracked another unnecessary saying. She was oddly poetic, and to Jurina’s revelation she was also very good at it too.

The class became silent, pondering on the said words and nodded consensually to its deep meaning. Jurina’s eyes lit up as an idea came to her and she raised a hand, gaining much attention.

At the action, Rena walked over to the student and with a small smile she gestured for the girl to speak her mind.

“I’d like to exchange a few lines of poetry with Matsui-sensei.” Jurina’s eyes sought out to stare confidently into her advocate.

Rena blinked in surprise at the unexpected request. She stared on mouth slightly agape, until a full smile graced her delicate features. She nodded in approval and tilted her head a little in amusement, “Theme?” she asked the younger girl.

“Hmm,” Jurina scanned the room until she caught sight of something in the backdrop of their grand veranda. “…Flowers.” She answered, her face showing signs of satisfaction.

Rena licked her lips slightly entertained and watched as Jurina stood up from her seat with the thin textbook still in hand. The young girl cleared her throat and began to walk closer to her teacher who in turn slowly took a few steps back.

“…Following the scent, there is indeed a flower.” Jurina halted in her collective steps and lifted her head up, her eyes gazing intently into the woman before her.

Realizing that she had been backed up into the speech podium, Rena took a few seconds to think of a reply. “Who has heard of a butterfly that shamelessly tramples over a flower?” She questioned in return.

The class remained speechless, just gawking up at the fortuitous debate in front of them. Everyone turned their attention to Jurina who has yet to make another comeback.

“It is natural for a butterfly to light down upon a lovely flower.” Jurina smirked.

Although impressed, Rena remained calm and replied. “It’s not a flower for just anyone to land on...” With that said she began to move from her spot, but again her student followed.

“There is no case where the flower loves the butterfly.” Jurina reasoned with a pleased smiled.

“S-sensei!” Kanon abruptly stood up from her seat.

Jurina turned around to face the afflicted girl, “…Kimoto-san?” Rena questioned.

Kanon flinched at the call of her name and looked down a bit irritated, “I’m sorry to interrupt, but c-can…we get back to reading? …There’s still a lot I don’t understand.” She stuttered out a quick excuse.

At that sentence, Rena shot Jurina a glance and the younger girl merely smiled warmly in return.

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Jurina stared down from the balcony, yet for another day. She carefully jotted something down on a red sheet of paper and folded it into a neat paper airplane. Closing one eye playfully as to aim for the right direction she tossed the folded object off the railing.

In contrast to the blue sky, the crimson colored airplane glided beautifully into the air and landed at the feet of the young teacher down below. Rena looked away from her book, having caught sight of the bright object and reached out for the item.

The corners of Jurina’s mouth quirked up in a delighted grin. When Rena lifted herself up to look in the young girl’s direction though, she quickly duct down in embarrassment. Hidden from view, Jurina thought more clearly about her actions.

“Are you not eating Matsui-san?” Yagami Kumi an acquainted fourth year asked.

Jurina glanced up stoically at the voice and slowly stood back up like she hadn’t been doing anything suspicious and shook her head no. “Are you looking for Kanon?” she guessed.

Kumi’s eyes widened. She looked down at her hands, which she clenched and unclenched nervously, her face deepening to the red shade of someone who’d just came back from a trip to Cancun. At that moment, she looked back up at Jurina and admitted truthfully. “…Y-yeah.” She said.

“She’s kind of upset right now, still in class though.” Jurina answered.

The other girl looked curious, “Why is she upset?” she asked.

“…Something about publically flirting like old people.” Jurina chuckled, her hand behind her neck guiltily.

Kumi nodded, “I see…thanks.” She replied.

Just as the fourth year turned to leave Jurina stopped her, “I was wondering…” she started.

“Hmm?” Kumi returned her gaze.

“…Are you going to eat that?” Jurina gave a shy laugh. She left a hand behind her short raven mane and pointed at the fruit in the grasp of Kumi’s palm.

In response, the shorter girl returned her smile and tossed the fruit over to Jurina who made a perfect catch. “Thanks, I appreciate it!” Jurina beamed. She took a bite out of the apple and made her way down the stairs energetically as Kumi headed off to find Kanon.

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The open field was deserted of anyone else’s presence, except for Rena. Turning a page in her beloved book, the young woman set a small business card in between the compacted seam and set it aside. She picked up the red paper airplane and observed the object. Noticing pen marks, she opened a slick piece that surprisingly led to a poem.

‘As we watch the summer days depart and the natural blossoms of silence fall, little mist of starlight just beyond our reach, a dreamy sadness fills each heart. As the rooted trees stand forsaken, even our garden seems a dreary place, no brilliant flowers in its border grace, save in a sheltered nook apart, where a glee beneath the autumn sun, blooms the longing of our own chrysanthemum.’

Rena’s eyes scanned over each word and she read the small passage two more times, before crossing her arms in thought of what it could mean. “Blooms the longing of our own chrysanthemum…chrysanthemum…chrysanthemum?” She repeated the phrase and thought back to where she’d last heard the familiar word before.

At the sound of calm footsteps, Rena looked up at the shadowy figure that casted towards her. With lips slightly apart she opened her mouth to speak, but the student placed an index finger over her lips and the teacher was suddenly refrained from doing so.

Rena watched silently as Jurina set down her hand and gazed up to admire the falling pear tree blossoms. The teacher followed the action in curiosity, but stopped to look back at the younger girl who had just stuck out her arm.

Letting the tiny flowers drift into her palm, the girl caught a couple and then put her hands behind her back. “Watch carefully…” Jurina’s voice was in a soft whisper as she made her command and Rena waited patiently.

Slowly Jurina undid her hidden arm and extended out a fist towards Rena. With a snap of her fingers, the young girl threw up the once captive blossoms into the air. Rena watched in awe as the snow white buds danced into the air and in one swift swipe, cutting into the artistic display…Jurina held out a single beautifully white chrysanthemum in front of the bewildered woman.

Rena remained still, her heart beating faster bit by bit as she stared wide-eyed at the girl holding a flower out towards her. Not really knowing how to react she hesitantly reached out for the offering and smiled back timidly.

“…Was that a magic trick just now?” Rena asked looking up from the flower that was now in the clasp of her hand.

“Hmm...Maybe.” Jurina hummed a simple reply.

Rena shifted her eyes in thought and then smiled, “Where a glee beneath the autumn sun, blooms the longing of our own chrysanthemum…I suppose you know the meaning to this line?”

For the first time Jurina dropped her gaze, but after a moment of blinking to herself the girl looked back up confidently. “I’m asking for your friendship.” She boldly confessed.

Rena tilted her head, slightly taken aback by yet another unexpected request from the same girl. She thought about it for half a second then let out a small giggle, extending out her hand as she agreed. “Let’s be good friends then Matsui-san.” She smiled.

“…Jurina.” The student corrected her teacher and reached out a hand to return the handshake, her slim fingertips gently grazing over the soft porcelain skin of Rena’s own in the process.

The images of lanterns, flowers, fireworks, and a certain kitsune masked stranger instantly flashed through Rena’s mind. She could hear the distinct sounds of rowdy festival music drum into her ears and as if a match was lit up igniting memories for the woman she immediately glanced up from their linked hands to look at Jurina.

“Rena-chan!” At the call of her name Rena looked away from Jurina and quickly let go of the girl’s hand. From a distance, another young woman stood holding a small box while waving an arm wildly into the air.

A broad smile stretched onto Rena’s face, “Airin!” she waved back.

Jurina turned to look as the outsider made her way to them just slightly out of breath. She quietly observed as Rena welcomes the woman into her arms for a friendly embrace.

“I brought you delicious inarizushi and vegie tempura.” The woman passed the box to Rena who gladly took it in, but not before setting the flower in her hand down first.

Feeling awkward, Jurina bit onto her bottom lip and tapped her shoes against the ground. She halted when a small business card caught her attention and she bent down to pick it up. Rena who had taken notice shifted over.

Jurina scanned over the card and stood back up. It was an informational card for Tokyo Disney with dated events on the back. Jurina furrowed her eyebrows at the item and Rena opened her mouth to speak. “Ah, I must’ve dropped that.” The student teacher claimed and at the said statement, Jurina handed it back over to the woman.

Also taking a glance at the card, “That reminds me! I’m really sorry, but I don’t think I can pick you up after your shift at Disney next Saturday.” Airi apologized using the both of her hands.

“Its fine, I think I can manage.” Rena replied, she set down the box next to her other personal things and placed a hand on the shorter person’s shoulder.

“Are you sure it’ll be okay?” Airi’s voice was full of concern and from their interactions Jurina could tell they were extremely close.

“…Excuse me, Matsui-sensei.” Jurina bowed respectfully after feeling out of place and proceeded to leave, but a voice stopped her.

“I apologize for interrupting you two earlier. You must be a student of Rena-chan right?” Jurina nodded and the woman continued, “I’m Furukawa Airi, it’s nice to meet you.” She beamed.

Jurina glanced from the woman then back to Rena, and Airi took notice of the lingering gaze. “Your sensei is pretty isn’t she?” Airi put an arm over her friend’s shoulder. At this playful remark, Rena turned to the woman and whined.

Jurina made sure to gaze into Rena’s eyes before speaking, “…She’s very lovely.” she answered.

The student backed away after speaking her honest opinion and bowed, then left…Rena’s eyes remained on the girl’s back as she left the scene and felt a distant, yet familiar feeling arise somewhere inside of her.

Slowly Rena brought a hand to her lips and bit onto the nail of her index finger nervously. She couldn’t tell what it was exactly that bothered her, but a nagging sensation kept its probe on the back of her mind anyways…

Seeming in a daze, “Rena-chan…Rena?” Airi called out.

“Hmm?” The taller girl immediately turned to look at her friend.

Airi’s gaze softened and she removed Rena’s hand away from her mouth. “Are you okay? …You didn’t forget to take your medication did you?” She asked the concern was etched deeply into her voice as she makes eye contact with her friend.

Rena’s eyes widened in horror and quickly studied her slightly trembling hands, “…I took it earlier.” She said.

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Jurina made her way back up the stairs, the loud echoing of footsteps clear and evident that she wasn’t alone. Without turning around to check who it was she spoke, “What do you want from me?” she asked competently.

“Are you going to keep on ignoring me forever?” A female voice returned.

Jurina let out a scoff, “You left me remember?” she bitterly replied.

Two slender arms sensually snaked itself around Jurina’s torso, the girl’s smooth fingers slowly fanning out over the fabric covering her midsection. “…You won’t understand.” She spoke, her voice with a hint of agony.

“Exactly, I meant nothing to you that’s why…” Jurina casted her eyes downwards as repressed memories began to resurface.

The girl tightened her hold and pressed up her firm body against Jurina’s back. “…That’s not true.” The girl shook her head. “You have no idea just how much…I miss you.” Her voice slightly cracked and a hot tear slid down her cheek.

Jurina immediately placed her hands over the pair that clasped around her body and broke the hold. She turned around and her eyes hesitantly looked up to gaze into the eyes of the girl she hasn’t been able to face for a while.

“Annin…” Jurina breathed. She reached up a hand to wipe away the girl’s tears and they stared into each other. After a couple of seconds, the taller girl sighed, shook her head, and walked away.

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A/N: Sorry, draggy chapter you guys. I hope it wasn’t all that boring. This chapter took a while to update, because I thought I should update on my other fics first so yeah. Hmm…the ending scene for Rena to this chapter is a strange one don’t you think? Lol, thanks for all the love and support so far just for the prologue ahah! I promise a more delicious update in the future hehe. Then there’s grammar issues -___-“
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Sayuki on September 08, 2012, 01:23:45 PM
... The ending..... I don't really understand that though....  Who did Jurina call "Annin"?..

Wait... What does Annin mean anyways? @_____@;;

Wmatsui intrigues me a lot.

It's a great update. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank for the hard work :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on September 08, 2012, 01:38:26 PM
i love this thankyou its a lovely fanfic the way you write it out is beautiful :) thanks <3
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: nori on September 08, 2012, 02:39:34 PM
Is that a Majisuka 3 refrence at the end of that chapter?  ;)   Really enjoying the story, please keep up the good work :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Kiri-el on September 08, 2012, 02:55:30 PM
It's not boring, it's beautiful! I really love to read this. Flowers and poems... I love the atmosphere in this fic, and I'm very interested the story
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Ryo Hiroshi on September 08, 2012, 07:10:06 PM
Wow... Annin at the end really made me "Wow"  :nervous I don't know what to say anymore  :nervous
You actually did write about Annin x Jurina, didn't you?  :nervous You know, they are just a brand new ship from MJSK3 and... wow you had them in your fic already  :panic: This is so... wow  :panic:
Anyways, despite all the "wow" you made me feel, I love this chapter  XD Or I should say I love everything you write, sir?  :lol: No, no flattering, it's the truth, sir  XD
It's not draggy or boring or anything that you said it was, it's great  XD It's so poetry I should say  XD And beautiful  XD With all the poems and flowers  :lol:
Jurina is always Jurina, huh? So popular and everyone loves her ~  :cathappy:
Oh and Kanon, I guess she has some feelings toward Jurina, doesn't she?  :lol: She's cute when she gets jealous  :lol:
The way you wrote about Churi is quite new and interesting, I like it  :twothumbs Just hope she won't become too b*tchy in the future   :nervous
And Kumi likes Kanon, it's obvious haha ~  :lol: Good luck then, Kumi  :cathappy:

I really like the part in which Jurina was flirting with Rena in front of the whole class with her poems XD Wow, Jurina, calm your hormone  :lol:

Ok, thanks for your hard work and I'm waiting for your next update  :lol: I'm curious about Annin and Jurina's relationship  :lol:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: lollita90 on September 08, 2012, 07:43:13 PM
will jurina do something about rena going to disney?

and who's the last girl?

oh, i can't wait for more! please update more soon!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: melon-lover on September 08, 2012, 08:21:34 PM
Wow, updated as promised lol (and I don't mind the rambling, I like it)
And a great update at that!
Love your descriptive writing and Jurina's reactions to Rena.
As usual Jurina is loved by all XD But why wouldn't they with her being a poet and a magician, I would fall for her too haha.
Oooo Rena taking medication? And has another job at Disney?
Annin...Annin... Iriyama Anna?
But anyways, loved the chapter and waiting for the next update :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Juribait on September 08, 2012, 08:25:18 PM
I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT YOU PUT ANNINXJURINA IN THE END OF THIS CHAPTER!!  :scared:
Is amazing!! I was expect to Jurina have something with Churi in the past but you really surprise me and I loved! :panic:
I'm in love with this fanfic, your writing is beautiful and poetic.
Now I'm curious about the Annin x Jurina past  :panic:

Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Megumi on September 08, 2012, 08:51:27 PM
 KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :bow:
:lol: LoL don't be nervous there seems to be a lot of readers that appreciate your fanfic.
Oh I tough it's gonna be a really sad fic first (please don't make it happen) but I like drama so  XD

What can I say about this update...it's lovely, beautiful I feel like I'm reading from "romantique era" like Brönte sisters or something
the poem battle between "the flower" and "the butterfly"  :inlove:

Oh but Kanon is jealous  :shocked seems like Churi like Jurina too...  :shocked:

Quote
Slowly Rena brought a hand to her lips and bit onto the nail of her index finger nervously. She couldn’t tell what it was exactly that bothered her, but a nagging sensation kept its probe on the back of her mind anyways…
I was like "Gekikara"?  :rofl: I wonder what's her condition because of the pill. (I'm worried)
Rena-chan so you seems to suspect that Jurina is the mysterious person? *smirk  :oops:


So according to me so far the relationship chart is like this:
                                                       Churi (don't really know)
                                                          I
                                                          I
Kumi  :heart: --->Kanon  :heart: ---> Jurina  :heart: --->  Rena  <---  :heart: Airin (suspicious)
                                                          I
                                                          I
                                                      Annin

At the end....Annin? Majisuka? OH MY GOD!  :rofl:
I wonder about their relationship why she dumped Jurina but came back?

I'm heart struck for this WMatsui fanfic.

Thank you for your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:


Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: kahem on September 09, 2012, 12:04:17 AM
Oh Rena sensei and Jurina student~
I like this forbidden love~
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: BbSis on September 10, 2012, 01:57:32 AM
Yeey! Update*.* I love your narrative style \0/ It creates a very nice aurea to your story.

Loved this chapter o/ Jurina seems to be a romantic person.
It's me or Rena have some kind of desease? Hope its not a mortal one ><

Exes making appearance... I sense a lot of drama coming xp

Erhmmm DP? Is that my profile picture? Sorry asking that I'm newbie with that kind of terms >< Supposing its my pic, since you mentioned couple :p well thaanks o/ I drawed it myself ><// Miss that couple too

Keep writing o/ thanks of the update and see ya next chapter *.*
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: Dreamstalker on September 10, 2012, 02:25:40 AM
Thanx for updating. . .! Wh0w about rena in the last scene.,hmm..i sense something strange of what was that medicine is for?. .and jurina x annin scene. . .hahah. .it reminds me of mg3. . .awesome fic! Still waiting for the next!
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: msst28 on September 10, 2012, 06:58:16 AM
aaaa anin x jurina scene...
 :scared:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: mo-chan on September 10, 2012, 12:30:49 PM
first time I read about AnninxJurina interesting  :ding:
wow poor Kumi Kanon has a little crash on Jurina  :fainted:
Jurina said to Kanon that she saw Rena before  :dunno:
I wait for Rena when she will react with Jurina after  :luvluv1: :luvluv2:
anonymous-san your writing is so good are you a writer ?  :on GJ:
I can't wait for the chapter 2  :on gay: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: anonymousdowner on September 17, 2012, 01:40:47 PM
Personal replies:


Sayuki: Annin, is Iriyama Anna from Akb48 Team4 now a member of team A. ‘:) Sorry, you got confused…I’m sorry if you’re gonna get more confused again with this chapter, because there’s a lot of new characters too. I really appreciate the comment and support though. Thanks so much!

Ilovesaeyuki-wmatsui: Haha, your username is awesome. I’m flattered by the compliment. It really motivates me to do even better. Thanks so much for reading and supporting!

Nori: Oh yeah, there is definitely a really huge majisuka influence on this fic of mine haha…I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story. On a random note, Jurina is super adorable in your sig lol. Thanks so much for reading and supporting.

Kiri-el: Ahah, that’s awesome then! I really strive for that you know, but I’m really happy to hear that…I just hope you won’t be disappointed with this chapter. Either way it’s your support that makes me want to do better, thanks so much!

Ryo Hiroshi: I still think your username is cool, I think on tumblr too lol. && I know right?! I can’t believe I just wrote AnninxJurina too ‘XD …I blame whoever the genius on tumblr is for trending the ‘Anninaga eye seks’ thing lolol! I hope all those ‘wows’ are a good thing hehe. On a random note I love how everyone else calls me author-san or something, but you’re like ‘Sir, sir, sir!’ It’s entertaining so I feel loved. All the characters are involved romantically in a triangle somewhere though, so it gets really complicated I say…Then with the part where you said “Jurina calm your hormone.”  I have a feeling you’re gonna be saying that a lot more with this chapter update lolol. You’ll get to see a bit into Anninaga relationship here… Well, thanks so much for reading and commenting! Your support is so appreciated, I hope you enjoy my update.

Lollita90: Jurina will definitely do something about Rena working at Disney for sure, but that should be in the next update not this one. The last girl is Iriyama Anna an Akb girl from team A! I’m really thankful you’re enjoying this story. I really appreciate the support, please have a good read.

Melon-lover: Yes, I don’t like going back on my words lol. I’m glad you like my rambling then, because with you dear favorite author…I’m seriously gonna have to ramble. Okay first, why you no update? I see you reblogging akb/ske/snsd all day everyday on tumblr hahahha! I’m just kidding there’s actually no pressure here, I just wanted to remind you that I love your fics lol. With the story…Yep, Rena has another job at Disney but I’ll get to that later and then with the medication…Hmm, I’ll be hinting what for in this update, so it’s not hard to figure out lol. Ahh, then there is Iriyama Anna. Please enjoy this read! Thanks so much for supporting ‘:)

Juribait: I know haha! I can’t believe it myself why I put Anninaga in this fic lol, it just happened…I guess, it’s because I’ve been going crazy with all the ‘feels’ I have for themin mjsk prison and the damn ‘eye seks’ thing on tumblr LOL You’ll get a little insight on their relationship for this chapter, but more will be revealed later. I hope you enjoy this chapter as much as you did the last! Thanks so much for commenting and supporting, it really motivated me to step it up lol.

Megumi: Out of all these supporters, you were so nice aha! Hmm, I hope this fic is not too random for you then because there will be a lot of drama. I’m really flattered by your insight and opinion, it makes me seriously want to do better just to meet your guys expectations. This update is less poetic and more drama though…You’ll know why when you find out that the relationship chart is going to expand hehe! (You made an awesome one by the way <3) Then where you quoted gekikara…Oh man you have no idea what you just picked up on;) …read and find out. With the Anninaga relationship, you’ll get an insight on it for this chap. Well, thanks so much for reading and supporting my fic! Lots of love here for you’X)

Kahem: Ahah, forbidden love is great when Wmatsui is involved…But it won’t be just as simple as that. My fic will not be like the typical romance plot thingthing hehe. Thanks for the comment and support. I really appreciate it, please enjoy this read!

BbSis: Thankyou! In response I loved your comment, it makes an amateur writer like me very happy. All the characters are complicated so I hope you won’t become confused or anything…and then about Rena’s condition –OH huhu~ it’s much more than that and I’ve hinted it in this update so maybe you’ll figure it out ;) There is less romance and much much more drama in this chapter though. OMG, you changed you display picture heheh it’s MariMii <3That’s so cute!!! Thanks so much for the support and comment, I really appreciate it!

Dreamstalker: Your username O__o it’s sounds so cool hahah! In response oh yeah~ your senses are not wrong buddy, there is a really strange reason behind her medication and I’ve hinted it in the last chapter and perhaps you’ll figure out what it is for in this update lol. I’m also obsessed with mjsk3, so Anninaga couldn’t be avoided lol. Well, thanks so much for the comment I really appreciate it!

Msst28: I know!!!!!!!! That’s what I was like to after I realized what I just wrote hahah. I couldn’t help it after watching mjk3 and have been under the influence of tumblr’s trending anninaga stuff lol. I hope you enjoy this chapter, I really appreciate the support. Your comment made me laugh.

Mo-chan: Oh yes~ AnninxJurina is definitely interesting since they have a lot of tension lol. The characters are all complicated and are all tangled in a triangle here or there. Yep, and in the prologue Jurina definitely met Rena before! I’m really flattered you like my writing, because yes haha I would like to think myself as a writer although I’m still very far behind. Thanks so much for the comment, love, and support! Please, enjoy this update ‘:)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/08/12] Forbidden Flower | Chrysanthemum| WMATSUI
Post by: anonymousdowner on September 17, 2012, 01:41:05 PM
A/N: Italics represent events that have already happened in the past.

I should put up meanings for flowers huh?

Camellia: Loveliness/Admiration

Chrysanthemum: Friendship

Azalea: A first love

Daisy: Innocence/purity

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Forbidden Flower

Chapter Two | Azalea



The smooth blades of grass swayed in the gentle breeze as sunlight glazed beautifully over the peaceful meadow. A harmonious flow of liquid composed symphonically like unwinding music to the ears, while the stream itself shimmered breathtakingly in the nearby distance. Basking under the rays of warmth, the figures of two young lovers sitting down back to back settled amiably.

A pair of flawless lips equivalent to that of an angel curved into a smile. “…You love me,” The girl plucked out a bright yellow petal from the daisy she held in her hand and continued, “You love me not,” the loose curls at the end of her long silky hair shifted slightly as she leaned her head back against her lover. “You love me,” She repeated the phrase again, carefully removing a single petal at a time.

“Annin…” Jurina’s beautiful eyes remained closed and her dark lashes rested cozily against the softness of her cheek as she spoke.

The girl with a daisy paused, her fingers still lightly pinched onto a petal as she turned her head a little bit to the side in question. “Hmm?” Iriyama Anna subtly asked.

Jurina simply smiled as she twirled a different kind of flower in her own hand. She opened her eyes to retake in the glow of light and kept silent, then gradually
shifted her gaze to the side. The other girl merely blinked in response to the pointless call of her name and proceeded to return to her activity.

“Eh, it’s the last petal already… What should I do?” Anna’s voice was gentle, but disappointed as she contemplated whether or not to say the next given line.

Jurina moved to the side and scooted further back to meet her lover’s attractive features. At this, Anna shifted her eyes away from the flower and the two locked gazes. With the affection clear and evident laden in the glitter of their eyes, both girls stared amorously into the depths of each other.

Anna lifted up the single-petal daisy to show the other girl and gave a playful pout. “You love me n—” Her eyes widened as Jurina leaned in to interrupted her sentence midway with a quick peck on the lips.

Pulling away once again, they stared at each other until Jurina decided to tuck the wild Azalea she held on to the girl’s ear. “…I love you Annin.” Jurina removed the daisy from Anna and placed her lover’s hand on the smooth skin of her cheek.

Anna’s eyes softened, “I love you too.” She sincerely returned.

Jurina’s heart picked up in pace. The beautiful sound of Anna’s voice always made it like so…her sweet mellifluous tone similar to that of a smooth flowing river.
Such a precious thing sent tingles of pleasure down the younger girl’s spine and forced her to learn how to breathe.

Jurina shifted onto her knees and crawled inwards for another kiss with her lids gently shut. The innocence confined in their previous contact slowly dispersed and was soon consumed by an unfamiliar passion as Anna wrapped her arms loosely around the girl’s neck.

Feeling herself gradually fall back against the grass…Anna gave a ginger lick to Jurina’s upper lip and the infatuated girl followed her down.

Their legs tangled and their heated bodies pressed up against one another as the comforting winds played with their surroundings. Catching her breath, the girl on top lifted her body up a little and took in the alluring sight of her beloved who had just released her from the hold.

Jurina gulped…

Annin’s hair was sprawled out somewhat erotically as her chest heaved up and down. The outlining of her soft collarbone was exposed from the slip on one side of her strap and her sundress rolled up a little higher than what one would call safe.

Captivated by the girl under her, Jurina intertwined their fingers and dived back in.

Beside the couple, the now petaless daisy from before lied down symbolically against the grassy field and not a moment later its bright yellow petals fluttered away…


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Dawn had barely peaked over the horizon. The sky kept its display stars that were slowly fading into obscurity and a few translucent rays of light escaped across the flourishing landscape. Surprisingly, the morning glow that seeped through the bay window of Jurina’s spacious studio was enough to make her stir.

Rubbing over her closed eyes with the back of her hand the girl let out a tired yawn and stretched. She then reached out towards the night stand beside her and grabbed onto her phone.

Pushing away her comforter, the girl leaned over to the side and unlocked her mobile screen to check the time.

“…Ughh.” It was an hour earlier than the usual.

A dull nagging sensation crept up into the corner of Jurina’s mind. It was a sense of irritation that hadn’t bothered her for a while now, but has somehow returned. She shut her eyes, willing herself to think clearly. And quite out of the blue, she remembered.

She remembered her dream…

The young girl shook her head hoping that it might have the ability to temporally remove the images of her precious, yet seemingly messed up memories. Jurina turned her head to the side, looked over at the nightstand top where two faced down picture frames were situated and took a deep breath.

Jurina reached out for one of the pictures, but stopped herself in a moment of hesitation and got off the bed instead. Adorned in only a loose grey shirt and white shorts, she walked out onto the vast balcony, shivering a bit at the cool morning breeze. Her hands were set on the railing as she overlooked the exotic view of the city down below.

Removing her hands off the railing to cup at the side of her mouth, “Good morning, Nagoyaaa!~” the teen yelled.

Ending the energetic greeting, she hugged herself in an attempt to warm up and hurried back inside to do her business. The studio apartment was designed artistically with an air of posh and sophistication. It was also furnished most beautifully in vintage, but Matsui Jurina lived alone.

Her parents have been separated since she was seven and she remained in guardianship under her father’s name over the years. The successful man lived in a heap of luxury with his new wife, whom Jurina had never seemed to be able to get along with. On the other hand, her biological mother had been lost in contact after the divorce settlements long ago.

Jurina’s living quarters were provided illegally with an agreement from her father who paid all necessary expenses along with the credit cards she was given. She rarely ever saw the man, but he’d occasionally give a call or send a text to check on her wellbeing once every blue moon. The thought of a family has always been one that she’s come to avoid over time though, not wanting to deal with its complexities.

Slipping on a thin hoodie and plugging in a pair of headphones into her mobile device, the girl headed out to a nearby park for her morning routinely jog. It was a fundamental commitment made to herself living alone that she had to keep her body and especially health in great shape.

The exercise was simple and lead to nothing unusual in particular once she had finished. Jurina returned back to her apartment and reentered her home. She headed straight for the refrigerator and took out a lidded glass beaker full of vegetable juice that’s already been premade, setting it out onto the marble-like counter.

Pouring herself a full cup, she chugged down the thick green liquid and tried hard not to grimace at the vile taste. Even after years of taking the daily dosage, she still found it hard to like the supposed benefitting drink.

After cleaning up, she stripped down naked leaving a trail of clothing to the bathroom and prepped herself for another day at school. Once she put on some clothes, the need to reexamine her appearance resurfaced. In the reflection of her grand mirror, Jurina smiled contemptibly as she patted down her navy blue vest.

Grabbing a hold of her satchel, the girl flipped it over her shoulder and left the studio. She took an elevator down the ridiculously abundant amount of floors, before exiting the building. The busy sound of street traffic and city dwellers filled her ears, a completely different atmosphere from just a couple hours earlier.

The girl looked around and hailed a cab for her usual ride to school.

Arriving at her destination the girl proceeded inside. Due to the early arrival, it was a quiet and peaceful morning. There were no other students in sight as Jurina walked through main entrance lined with the same sight of pear trees.

Beyond a set of pillars, she stepped foot into their heavenly courtyard and took in the aromatic scent of fresh flowers. Jurina closed her eyes relishing the moment, but reopened them when her ears perked up to the noise of water drizzling.

Raising a brow, she walked further into the yard and there she saw her…

Under the shine of morning glow, Iriyama Anna was seen knelt down beside the school’s beautiful garden and carefully tending to the plants.

Jurina stopped dead, surprised to see the unexpected girl.

Anna set down the watering can and scooted over to her personal items on the ground. In her aura of serenity, she took out a random strawberry from her tiny lunch container. As she stood up to observe the garden, she took a bite out of the brightly colored fruit…her lips pursing over its juicy sweetness.

Nostalgia leaked into Jurina’s composure and feeling somewhat saddened, she looked away.

“…Jurina?” The same sweet voice that has never once failed to move Jurina whispered eerily from across the courtyard.

The taller girl could feel her heart beat in disbelief at the call of her name, but with her pride she went on puffing out her chest and raising her chin high like she was an indomitable force to be reckoned with.

The tension however, was undeniably felt.

With each other painted perfectly into the eyes of one another, they remained silent and continued to stare on. Anna, who began to bat her eyelashes looked away first and calmly walked back over to her belongings. After picking up another strawberry she stood up with the grace of an innocent smile and extended her arm out towards Jurina.

Inclining her head to the sky, Jurina closed her eyes and took a deep breath as if trying to contain the sensation of something. Shortly thereafter, she tilted her head at the girl and decided to take the offer. Their enthralling eyes locked onto each other as Jurina walked over and was handed the fruit.

Although the scent was strong, the taste was bland. “…It’s not in season.” Jurina carefully chewed on the delight.

“Oh?” Anna’s tone remained as soothing and innocent as it can be. There was adoration in the way she stared at Jurina as she went on. “Then don’t eat it.” She held out her open palm and Jurina returned the half eaten strawberry.

Jurina became sublimely distracted as she watched the other girl take a bite over her own eaten portion.

A nagging question suddenly probed at her, “…Did you really mean it?” Jurina asked.

Anna gently tucked one side of her hair behind her ear. “Did I mean what?” She looked unsure of what was being asked.

Jurina looked a bit bothered, but faked her true self. “About missing me I mean.” She was pretty sure speaking to Anna in the manner that she did would hurt the girl’s ego, but was really caught off guard when she herself couldn’t handle the reaction.

“…I miss you.” Anna’s eyes began to shimmer.

A dam flooded by abstained emotions in Jurina broke free and in an angered haste she tossed her satchel across the grass. Jurina then grabbed onto Anna’s wrist and in a cohesive manner she dragged the girl into the women’s restroom.


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Rena walked through the entrance of Sunshine Sakae and tried to admire the view like how she always did. Lately there had been a lot of things on her mind, but she had already known that her anxiousness was probably due to a dreaded date hastily approaching.

Every year she was afraid of what might happen during this time even though there was assurance that she’d be under control. Still, the nagging of uncertainty continued to hassle her…sometimes she even felt as though it screamed out at her wanting to be more acknowledge.

It was a hard thing to try and explain, let alone understand…For she herself had a hard time dealing with the problem. Rena rubbed at the side of her arm in a comforting manner, for there was simply nothing else more frightening.

Rena would often think that everything will be alright as long as Airi was by her side, but then again there was still that traumatizing doubt... Taking into consideration that there was an appointment she had to attend to after work, Rena quickly made a mental note to seek guidance over the matter with her therapist later on.

Though, along with Furakawa Airi who was always there for her...Somehow, a part of her knew there was also now someone else…

Matsui Jurina had never failed to attract her unwavering attention and though the girl made her anxious, it wasn’t a bad form of anxiousness either. With perfect jet black hair that accentuated every inch of her face, skin smooth as a fine cut diamond, piercing brown orbs that locked Rena in their gaze, and lips that had often distracted her—Rena always felt like she was staring at a model who just stepped out of the pages of those glamorous magazines, but she knew with that opinion alone that she wasn’t the only one who believed it so. The young girl, to the eyes of most people based solely on image probably saw a glorious angel who had been gifted to earth just to show what perfection was meant to look like and Rena acknowledged the warm feelings she’d been receiving was an unusual admiration if anything.

Rena passed by her usual sitting spot and smiled at the thought her student’s action the other day. Holding a binder between her arm and against her side she snapped open a can of coffee, then took a sip. Her hair was wavy and pulled back into a messy bun, while adorned in a slim rhyme stoned headband that glittered under the sun. She wore a cute light green dress accompanied by a pretty white laced collar, thin pink belt, and a darker green cardigan to fit over the top.   

Rena tapped her shoes against the stairs upon reaching the building, but a lingering thought came back to her and she turned to head back down. The young woman slowed her footing and entered the courtyard, her eyes scanning over the garden.

When Rena found what she was looking for her smile brightened and she made her way on over to a batch of white chrysanthemums. “Kyaa~?!” The coffee can in her hand was suddenly thrown up into the air.

Without watching her step, she nearly fell on her face as she stumbled over something on the ground…The object making a noise as it skids away on impact. Rena picked herself back up and realizes something. An expression of absolute horror took over her the look on her face and she looked down on herself to see a big blob of dark coffee stained on the top portion of her dress.

Rena’s eyes widened, “Ahh…noooooo.” she whined.


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Jurina led Anna into a random stall and swung her against the wall. As the shorter girl clashed onto the partition, Jurina quickly hovered over her body and pressed their foreheads together. The two were already panting hard as their hearts raced amongst the hectic pounding in their chest…their eyes desperately searching for answers in each other.

The sweet intoxicating scent of the girl tickled her senses and her heart skipped a beat. After so long, Anna was only inches away, mere inches, and nothing inside of Jurina made her want to back off. Not when she sees the girl catch her bottom lip between her teeth and as far as she's concerned, Jurina knew exactly what that meant.

The dominating girl pulls in a tremulous breath and it escapes her parted lips as the faint echo of a moan; the promise of more to come. Anna looked away unable to match Jurina’s intensive gaze, but the second she did though…

“Mmph?!” Jurina placed her hands on Anna’s face and leaned in for a passionate kiss.

Even with the swift force of Jurina’s lips, there were no real elicit complaints from her companion and this provoked the taller girl into deepening the sensual contact. Should Jurina have needed the girl less, she would have been afraid of her submission.

The odd fear from their escape lingers in her mouth though as she tastes the inviting flavor of strawberries and at this a shadow of adrenaline still spiking in her veins…everything somehow intoxicates over.

The release of bottled emotions spurred Jurina on, made her arrogant, and ravaged her wild. She wasn’t careful or gentle with Anna in the process though, not like she would have been any other time. She felt the shorter girl slightly tremble, but was too consumed with a selfish desire. Jurina pulls on the girl’s hip roughly against her own and Anna’s breathing hitches.

The gasp echoes in the cavernous room surrounding them...

Jurina moves away from Anna’s moist succulent lips to press her ravenous own against the corner of the girl’s mouth and then down the soft flesh of her jaw… Daringly running her fingers through those luscious brown locks she'd always been so envious of.

Jurina felt her breathing momentarily halt when Anna softly pleaded, “Please s-stop…” but despite having heard the request so clearly, she still couldn’t help the need to slide her insatiable hands down.

Jurina breaks the kiss only long enough to grip at Anna’s collar. She held tightly onto the fabric and in a violent manner forcibly rips the blouse apart, baring the pale but flushed skin underneath as the sound of buttons scattering out of place were sounded.

Anna’s eyes snapped open and immediately shoved the girl away. A slap resonated loudly throughout the room, the action causing a rise in mixed emotions from both parties.

Jurina gritted her teeth, bearing the pain as she felt a burning sensation scorch against her reddened cheek. “…Does this make any sense?” She let out shaky laugh. “…Isn’t this all that you wanted anyways?”

Anna looked up to glare at Jurina, but then as anger faded into sadness…She choked out as the tears began to fall. The hand that attacked Jurina cupped over her mouth to hide the escape of a whimper and her shoulders began to shake.

Jurina slowly looked up having the guilt consume over her the moment she’d made such a comment. In truth she hadn’t meant what she said, but somehow in that spur of a moment where all her bad pent up memories had a chance to escape…She had already made a retched mistake and now it was impossible to take it all back.

Anna sniffed as she quickly wiped at her tears, “You’re wrong.” She said. “You’re so wrong about everything…and you’ll never understand why.”

As the girl turns to leave, the taller one grabbed onto her arm and pulled her to a stop. Jurina tightened her hold, “Then…explain it to me!” With desperation for discloser her shoulders began to rise and her breathing fastened. “Just tell me…whatever the reason might be…” Her eyes shifted nervously in thought. “I promise…I’ll try to understand.”

Anna turned around and looked at Jurina with pain filled eyes, her lips trembling as she spoke her final statement. “I wish…” With that said in almost a whisper, she began to back out and Jurina who looked upset turned away. At this Annin left the room.

The moment Anna reached the exit, a teacher entered and blinked up in surprise. Her gaze remained on the girl as she quickly removed herself from the scene.

Rena shrugged off the encounter and proceeded to the sink where she switched on the tap, but looking up into the mirror and seeing an unexpected person she mentally gasped for air at the sight before her.

They made eye contact, the heavy air of awkwardness simply intractable from the duo…

Rena stared at the girl’s reflection the mirror and noticed an uncharacteristic behavior. Usually when the two looked at each other, it had always been Rena who broke away first…But this time Juirna’s eyes began to shift around nervously.

The only sound that could be heard was that of running water, but soon thereafter the student suddenly decided to leave.

Rena couldn’t help it, but to be suspicious of the two girls that previously occupied the restroom. Just from the distressed expressions etched onto their face, she knew something personal had definitely took place.

The curiosity slowly occupied her thoughts as she wet some paper towels and dabbed at the dark mark on her top, but the futile attempt to remove the discoloration seemed hopeless. 

“Rena-sensei…” At the call of her name the teacher turned back around to be met with the same student.

‘Clankkk~’ Rena flinched as the girl tossed a can across the room, triggering a clamorous noise when the metallic object bounced against the wall and dropped into a trash can.

“You spilled coffee all over my bag.” Jurina raised up her sticky satchel, her voice slightly placid.

Confused, “Eh?” the woman made a face.

Jurina sighed and walked up to a spare sink. She accumulated a couple sheets of paper towels and began to wipe away at her bag.

Rena who was quietly inspecting the girl tried to process what she had just said and then, “Ah!” she thought back to how she tripped in the first place. “Why’d you leave your stuff in the middle of a walk way?” she asked.

Jurina didn’t answer nor did she even look up from what she was doing.

“…Are you okay?” Rena’s voice changed into a softer tone and the girl merely nodded.

Jurina finally looked up at the woman, “Are you okay?” she returned the question gesturing towards the coffee stain.

Unconsciously admiring the girl’s beauty, Rena gave a sheepish smile. Feeling the awkwardness casually subside she looked down on herself bashfully, “It’s kind of embarrassing isn’t it?” she returned to making a mess with the wet towel over her top.

Instead of efficiently getting rid of the coffee mark, the dampness Rena used over the stain only made the area spread to greater radius…

Jurina walked up closely to her teacher, “You’re making it worst.” She placed a hand over Rena’s own.

Her heart began to beat relentlessly as she eyed the girl with complete vigilance. “Hmm…” A brooding sigh escaped Jurina’s lips as she observed the mark. Rena internally debated with herself whether or not to protest the sudden invasion of personal space that Jurina had suddenly bequeathed on her, but after a while the taller girl lifted up her eyes and held Rena’s gaze.

Jurina slowly backed away, “Turn around.” She commanded.

“…What?” Rena’s eyes grew wide once she heard the trigger that allotted her the opportunity to snap out of her ridiculous stupor.

Jurina rolled her eyes seemingly annoyed for the first time and turned around instead. Rena nearly lost her composure as she watched the girl begin to lift up her vest, “What are you doing?” she inquired firmly, alertness finally finding its way into her voice.

When an answer wasn’t immediately received, she looked away…

Hearing the sound of clothes rustling, her mind seemed to have stop working as she stood there nervously fidgeting with her fingers. “Here, put this on and wear your cardigan over it.” At the sound of Jurina’s voice, Rena returned her gaze.

The student was wearing her dark navy blue vest, but with nothing under. Her tie hung loosely over her bare shoulder and she held out her white button up shirt to Rena. There was no doubt. It was certainly a dress code violation.

“Matsui-san…” Rena muttered out her name taken aback by the kind, yet again unexpected gesture.

Jurina placed the white top in Rena’s hands. “We’re friends aren’t we?” A slow, adoring smile lined the curves of her lips and the heat that emanated from the girl was simply unbelievable.

Before Rena could reject the offer the student had already left the tiled room. As she exited out through the door though, “Next time, call me by my first name.” she yelled.

Rena glanced down at the shirt and released a sigh. Feeling a tug at the corner of her mouth, she let the strange feelings of gratification soak in and smiled.

To the woman, the usually poetic girl was definitely something else…


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Rena leaned back against the front of her desk and gently patted down her clothes. A small blush crept up her cheeks as she slowly looked up to be met with a certain girl’s smile. Matsui Jurina shifted back into her seat without a care in the world, despite the way she was dressed.

The teacher had undoubtedly overheard many students chitchat over the matter, but they gradually stopped when she as the instructor made no comment upon entering, seeing it, and still proceeding with class.

Rena cleared her throat setting down the attendance sheet and quietly picked up a textbook. “Please, turn to page forty-three in yo—” she was rudely interrupted by the sliding door snapping open against the wall.

A tall girl with a slim figure entered, her face was contorted in fury as she scanned over the room. “Matsuuuuii!” She roared as she found who she was looking for.

Jurina remained calm as the intruder charged at her.

Rena’s eyes widened in shock at the brewing disaster in front of her and nervously called out for the other girl to stop. She had never before in her life, had an easy time dealing with chaotic situations and this time was no different. Despite her bewilderment, she was slightly relieved to see another student make a dash into the room.

A shorter girl quickly held back her fuming friend. “Maria stop, it’s not worth getting suspended over!”

With eyes staring straight into Jurina who remained unfazed, the blasted girl continued to protest. “Haruka let go! I need to…Ughh!!” She was able to successfully budge out of her friends grasp.

Disturbed students stood up from their seats as Abe Maria gripped a fistful of Jurina’s top. “What the hell did you do to ‘my’ Anna-chan?” She hissed.

Among the heavy haze of obscurity in the room Jurina was still able to form an amused smirk, “Your Anna-chan?”

Maria looked down at the Jurina’s clothing in disgust and held up her trembling fist in a rage.

Rena who was by now biting onto her nails out of anxiousness, quickly rushed over and gripped at the student’s fist…silently pleading with her eyes.

Staring at Rena’s expression, Jurina immediately stood up and pushed off her attacker.

Shimada Haruka tugged on the sleeve of her friend, “Let’s just go…Don’t get into any more trouble.” she begged.

Maria stared down on Rena’s student for another minute in utter silence, and then turned her heel to exit. Her friend who was left behind made a bow in apology and eventually left as well.

Rena released a sigh in relief and glanced up at Jurina. The girl who unable to meet her teacher’s gaze bowed her head down and low…


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Rena turned her eyes away from the facility she had just walked out of and felt the bloom of a smile across her face as now she was able to enjoy the relaxation of the night.

Her day at work had long ended on a less troublesome note. She had decided not to report the scene between her student and the other two girls, but the event had still undeniably bothered her so. After the incident, she’d taken notice that Jurina hadn’t come to her usual spot on the balcony area.

Rena had always known the younger girl came to see her there…

As odd as it was, the gaze she’d often receive from Jurina was a presence she had always been able to sense. Rena twirled a withered chrysanthemum in her hand. She had picked it up earlier in the morning, before heading to class in a hope to return the girl’s friendly gesture as a mean of accepting her friendship. But she understood that the girl must’ve had her own predicaments to deal with.

As the memory of all things stressful earlier in the day faded into the backdrop of her mind, so did the once lively block she was walking in to head home.

The further Rena treaded out into the city, the more serene and peaceful the street became as well. The block had gotten quieter, foot traffic had thinned immensely and pretty soon, the street ahead became plain quiet leaving the woman alone with the company of just a few street lamps that illuminated the calm road.

Rena gave a quiet sigh as she tilted her head to gaze up at the night's sky.

With the full moon hovering in view, the stars smiling in unison, and the dim illumination of street lights flickering in the distance—it almost felt as though Rena herself was walking inside a picturesque painting. All dangers aside, there was also something about walking alone at night that she just enjoyed immensely. She could never figure out the reason though…It could easily be the beauty of it or the tranquility it harbors, but regardless Rena always found her mind at peace in such a setting.

“So nice…” Rena stretched.

The peace, however, was short-lived when she felt a wisp of alarmingly cold air suddenly curl around her. Folding her arms to fight against the sudden breeze, she shivered at the feel of the cold air whispering around her bare legs. It was a strange thing because she was getting colder, but felt absolutely no wind whatsoever.

Rena was nearing the apartment complex she shared with her best friend when alarmingly out from the dark shadows a figure suddenly appeared…

“I’ve finally found you…” The unknown person stumbled towards her.

Rena tried so hard not to flinch in fear when she heard another person’s voice. She tried so hard not to appear frightened when she realized that there was another person in her presence and tried so hard to not draw back in a panic when she saw the stranger approach her.

Rena felt her throat grow dry, heart beat elevate, and nerves recoil in fright at the awareness of danger trailing beside her. “W-who are you?” She stammered as her eyes slowly, but vigilantly fell onto the person.

Though she didn’t overtly flinch in fear, Rena knew the stranger caught the uneasiness dancing in her flustered gaze. It took a couple of seconds for her eyes to become acclimated with the darkness that coated over the person.

As her eyes inspected over the unnamed woman’s features which were now visible under the direct glow of the full moon…Rena couldn't help but, despite the arguably dangerous predicament she found herself in, admire the person’s gorgeous features.

Dressed in a black and white sukajan jacket, dark jeans, and black shoes—the person was anything but a bum. If anything, ‘beautiful’ appeared too serene of words to describe her.

With raven black hair and a single lock of bright red hair, the stranger’s eyes locked themselves in a gaze with Rena. “I’ve searched for years…so, why?” The stranger’s mesmerizing eyes glistened as her lips were left parted.

“I…I’m sorry, but do I know you?” Rena managed to muster out. Her voice was composed, but her eyes remained timid as they stared on curiously ahead.

The unknown woman looked a bit stunned, “…You don’t remember me?” her voice was as pained as it was sensual.

Rena shook her head. She had never seen the woman before in her life yet, could feel the fibers of her body come alive just by watching as the person moved her hand to clutch over the cross hanging from her neck.

Rena dropped the flower she was holding. Suddenly, she was feeling hotter than she’s ever felt before and the feverish sensation frightened her. It frightened her so much that it took all her internal strength to back away from the person, a nervous habit immediately taking over her as she moved her hand up to her mouth.

The stranger who seemed momentarily hurt by Rena’s detached action reached out her trembling hand, “It’s me…Black.”

Unbeknownst to her, although she was so sure that name was nowhere near familiar…a tear slid down Rena’s cheek.

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A/N: Whooo, finally got another update out of the way. I hope it’s not too confusing since there are a lot of new characters suddenly popping up all at once, but it’s all for a more chaotic plot so yeah... I’ve dropped hints on Rena’s medical condition if anyone hasn’t figured it out haha. Sorry, there really weren’t many Wmatsui moments in this chapter! I promise although the relationship chart is all crazy, this ‘is’ and ‘will’ end as a Wmatsui fic lol…I just didn’t want the usual normal romantic plot lines…*Prays* I hope I didn’t stray too much off interest…Or that the flow sucks.-__-“

Sorry grammar..I tired.

Thanks for the love and support T^T
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: yuukimoko on September 17, 2012, 01:52:42 PM
Black?!!?!?!?!?!? where is mayu/Nezumi when you need her.....

But I love Yukirin with Rena too!....but I know they wont have a good end...
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: kahem on September 17, 2012, 02:21:33 PM
wow Jurina is agressive!
it's not a simple romance? hehe interesting~
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Sayuki on September 17, 2012, 02:31:52 PM
LOL.... I think I've caught up with the story already... But still quite complicated...

The story is full of dramas @___@;;.... Now there is Black and with Rena's reaction, I bet Black is her ex or something like that.

Maybe Nezumi will show up to?

Anyways, thanks for the hard work <3

I'm looking forward to your next update.
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Dreamstalker on September 17, 2012, 04:23:15 PM
Whew! I like this..!
Jurina's vigorous character...i'm waiting for rena to say 'ne okotteru?' heheh. .just kidding...i want that to happen...yeah, i like stories that have variations
and does not only focus on romantic scenes...\m/
I always stalk at this fic, waiting here in silence. .sugoi!
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: kuronekosan on September 17, 2012, 04:41:18 PM
Wow!! Your work is as impressive and poetic as always anonymousdowner-san! Things are getting more complicated but also more interesting. It definitely has the feel of a Japanese drama or a romantic novel to it.

About Rena's condition.....it's dissotiative identity disorder isn't it?

That makes the most sense at the moment. Rena's fear of losing control, her therapist being mentioned, and the appearance of an unknown character that seems familiar to her.

Assuming Rena had a split personality, it would be Gekikara no? And who else would Gekikara pair with but Black right?

Jurina and Annin's situation has the word misunderstanding written all over it. I'm guessing Jurina found out something that broke her heart, even though Annin denied it. Her being bitter and not understanding the situation in turn broke Annin's heart as well. I can't wait to read what happens next.

And I was surprised at Maria's and Haruka's appearance. To think that Maria would be infatuated with Annin while Haruka clearly shows feelings for her is ironic. I mean in Majisuka Gakuen 3, Tetsuo is the one who is always openly jealous about Uruseeyo. To see the tables being turned here is just......hehe.

I kowtow towards your awesome writing skills anonymousdowner-sama!!
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: BbSis on September 17, 2012, 06:24:43 PM
One more chapter o/

Hmmm so there are still unresolved fellings betwen the girls...

Maybe Rena suffers multple personal desease?  Well, lets see :p

I liked the chapter o/ chapters like this helps to build the characters and the story ^^

Well, I'm not confused (yet? XD) it's nice that every character have their own complication. As I said before, your narrative style helps me reader to build everything. Thats my opinion ^^~

Now everything makes sense DP=display picture *.* hauahuahuha thanks! And thanks for liking my DP's *.*

see ya next chapter o/
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: nori on September 17, 2012, 06:28:35 PM
Thanks for the update!
I loved that chapter :twothumbs like the rest of the chapters the way it flows from scene to the next and poetic references of flowers, its such a joy to read!

Regarding the story, with the appearance of Black/Yukirin we also have Airin and Jurina meaning Rena's spoilt for choice XD and while it's seems obvious what Jurina wants at the moment I can't wait for the moment where Jurina finds out why Anna's acting the way she is and how the impacts Jurina.

Also adding to what kuronekosan said I found myself smiling so much at the complete role reversal between Haruka and Maria, not just from Majisuka 3 but the way they act in real life with Haruka normally being the louder and more of a "Yankee" image (though that is only relative to other members)

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Rena who was by now biting onto her nails out of anxiousness
I'm guessing that's a Gekikara refrence so can I expect an insane Rena moment? (Or is that how they know each other from the past?)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Juribait on September 17, 2012, 07:03:11 PM
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Sorry grammar..I tired.
WHY THE HELL YOU'RE APOLOGIZING??!!!  :temper:
THIS FANFIC, IS ONE OF THE BEST WELL WRITTEN FANFICS THAT I HAVE READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!
This story have the perfect combination: well wrintten, drama and romatic moments in the right measure :ding:
I'm really happy with your choose in not put just romanticism in all the chapters and  with the way that you make the story proceed,this turn her different of the of others fanfics that is usual to see.
And god I'm a Wmatsui shipper but I cannot help but feel sad because of Annin and Jurina, they really was in love with each other but because of misunderstand they both ended with a broken heart.  :cry:
(I identify myself with stories like this  :mon sweat:)
And again you surprise me with Black appearing at the end, serious, can't wait for the next chapters.  :kekeke:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Kiri-el on September 17, 2012, 07:42:13 PM
I'm too tired now to write longer comment, but I was not disappointed in this chapter. Still very interesting and I really like the way you write :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Megumi on September 18, 2012, 10:33:39 AM
 :OMG: OMG! IT's getting more complicated! Waaaaaaaaaa love chart is expanding!

flashback dream? It was beautiful oh so innocent Annin&Jurina.
Jurina live alone she must have felt lonely but what the?
AnninxJurina...Maria?   :tama-slide:

Rena sensei is so clumsy  :tama-piss: and Jurina is a nice delinquent?! student...

Oh hm? Rena-chan have amnesia? or not? or had an accident that made her forgot?
 :tama-uhh: B BB BBBBBLACK????? OH MY GOD! ME approve!  :tama-yeeaah:

More drama!  :tama-music:
Lalala your fic is great! A pro writer I must say.

Looking forward to your update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
 
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Ryo Hiroshi on September 18, 2012, 08:21:23 PM
First of all, I want to thank you for your compliment to my username :P I have the same thought for your usernames, and even your real name  :lol:
Oh, about the whole "Anninaga eyes seks" thing, yeah I remember it :lol: It was quite crazy back then on Tumblr :lol:
And of course all of my "wows" are all because of your goodness, sir  :P
Actually, when I found out that you were male, I was quite surprised  :lol: You know, I rarely see fanboy writing fanfics, so it was very surprising to me  :lol: And I didn't know why, but when I read your fics, saw your writing skills, I had an urge to call you "sir"  :lol: So I decided to go for it in my comment  :P I'm glad that you like it  :P
Oh and I think that you now have Annin in your favorite girls, I guess  :lol:


Ok, enough with our chat, let's back to your fic  :cathappy:
I see you have many complicated relationships here, in your fic  :lol: First is Annin and Jurina, and now is Rena and Black  :lol: Really impressive, I'm looking forward to it  :lol:
Ah hmmm... well... I just wanna say...  :nervous Hmm... well...  :nervous OMG How can you write about Annin and Jurina like that? I mean, beautiful like that!  :panic: God, you make me want to forget about WMatsui and become an Annin x Jurina shipper  :banghead: OMG I did have this thought when I read your Annin x Jurina scenes "Oh please! I don't need Jurina fall in love with Rena anymore, just bring Annin back to her sir! Please, sir!"  :panic: OMG what have you done to me???  :panic:
Oh, and I like your pervert Jurina  :lol: That girl really needs to calm her hormone down  :lol:
And another "wow" you'll receive from me today :lol: Some days ago, one of my friends just told me about how Abe Maria likes Annin, and the next thing I knew is that you did write about Maria wanted to start a fight with Jurina because she did something to her Annin  :nervous
Sir, you're really... :nervous Well... I don't know what to say anymore  :panic:
Oh, and the part in which Jurina gave Rena her shirt  :lol: Just imagine Jurina with only her vest make me  :bleed eyes: I'm pervert, I know that  :P
Just a random thought, but I'm curious about how Non would react when she saw Maria said something like that  :lol: Well... Jurina did something to Annin  :lol: Wow, jealous Non is coming, everybody be aware  XD

OK, that's all for this time  :lol: Thank you for your hard work and please keep working hard  :lol:
Oh and I just wanna say that I miss your other fics too, sir  :lol:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: melon-lover on September 18, 2012, 11:09:23 PM
I'm the same, I hate not doing something I said I will haha. Gosh, every time you say something nice it makes me blush hehe. To be honest, you're probably my recent favourite author since your fic is the only one I've really kept up with XD and LOL! Well someone has been stalking (jokes)
Once again, another lovely read  :D

The beginning with Anna and Jurina, oh the sweetness of it was enough to give me cavities  :lol: Loved it!
But then the sexual tension! I wonder why they broke up....
And then more confrontation with Maria jumping in, dramaaaa~
What is Rena so nervous about I wonder...
And oh my gosh, the end! Black? And the fact Rena had forgotten about her! gasp!

Beautifully written and can't wait for the next update  :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Taivas on September 19, 2012, 11:42:14 AM
Jurina is being a total pimp again. How many of the school's girls did she date already? Probably all of them since she starts seducing teachers now.

...just kidding, we love our little pimp  :lol: Go get your Rena already and don't mess with her like in KataFai

About Rena's condition....nail-biting? Medication and therapy sessions? And now Black is showing up? Could it be...Rena suppressing her Gekikara side?  :lol: Waiting for the epic showdown between Gekikara and Majisuka's Annin.

Looking forward to the next update  :)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: red48 on September 22, 2012, 12:41:51 PM
OMG!! I just found you from tumblr...and I didn't know you are actually one of the author in this site. And this fic is totally lovely. Lots and lots of poetic words. Beautifully written indeed. And the JurinaXAnnin love >.< Gyaaaaa~h. All of my feeling of NobuAnnin"eye seks". I just found out the girly-girl Annin is shippable because of you (I used to see her as the badass "Annin" of Mongoose) Now I feel like drawing a sweet & innocent AnnaXJurina fanart.   
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: mo-chan on September 22, 2012, 01:19:58 PM
I'm waiting for the devloppemnet of Wmatsui's relationship  :cathappy:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 12, 2012, 05:21:39 PM
A/N: Personal Replies


First off, I decided to do a double update! You guys have been showing me so much love and support for this fic it is overwhelming. I hope to show more of my appreciation in the future, thanks so much everyone!


SESE: If you are reading this…GOMEN NASAI! (ノ´д`)Seriously though, I’ve been haunted with Candlelit smile for so long. There is not a day where I don’t wake up traumatized for not being able to update. I did try so many times, but can never get the ending scene right and it’s really frustrating me. Weird to say, but you are on my mind O__O  …A lot. You have been patient and I’ve truly been trying to dedicate the chapter to you. Please forgive me it’s a painful progress.

Yuukimoko: I’ve actually thought about having Center, but I rather save it for a new fanfic idea ahah. BuraGeki is one of my favorite pairings in the world and I would hate for them to have a bad end, because that will be depressing! Can’t be helped though..This is Wmatsui, I’ll try BuraGeki central in a future fic.

Kahem: You are always commenting on my fanfics and I seriously appreciate it so much you know. I hope you’ll find interest again in these two chapters. The relationships will complicate even further lol.

Sayuki: The story will get even more complicated as more drama is revealed in this update, I hope you’ll not abandon me lol. There is not much info on black yet so it will remain a mystery for now. With Nezumi though…As much as I want to add her, I have to save CenNenzu for probably a future fic lol. I really really appreciate your comments and support though. Please, enjoy the read!

Dreamstalker: Ahah, really now?! This update will not fail to disappoint you then kekeke. Rena will be a very chaotic character and variation in this story is a must for me as the writer lol. I’m flattered to hear you stalk my fic haha. Thanks for the great feedback, I’m happy.

Kuronekosan: Saying your username will have it get stuck on my mind and force me to repeat it all day haha catchy I like it! I really enjoyed your feedback. You have awesome insight don’t you? About Rena’s condition you’ll find out very soon what it is in this update, but for now I’m saying you did an excellent job with the reasoning. You’ll also find out more about Annin/Juri’s relationship too. Then with Maria and Haruka’s appearance I’m not sure why I turned the tables like that, I guess the relationship chart expanding was getting out of hand. Then with your heavenly words of flattery, I’m embarrassed! I kowtow to you! It is awesome comments like yours that inspire me to keep on writing.

BbSis:
Thanks for the feedback! It really helps me to see where I should improve and all. Every character in this fic will have a purpose and their own complications that will add to the plot. Then with Rena you will find out in the update hehe. Oh! I forgot to say, you should post up your fanart somewhere for people to see like tumblr or something. If you do, please share it with me~I think your work is kawaii!

Nori: I hope I don’t fail you in how this chapter will flow from scene to scene, but I worked hard and really hope that you will enjoy it too! I think pretty much both Jurina and Rena are spoilt for choice as you have mentioned ‘XD You will find out more info on Juri/Annin’s past in this update so questions should be answered a little better regarding their complicated relationship. Then with Haruka and Maria, I like the role reversal kekeke it adds variation. Haruka isn’t a girly character in my fic though so there isn’t much of a difference once I get into explaining more into her character in the future like how I will with the others. && Hmm..Gekikara reference? Hehe, you will find out with this update.

Juribait: Again, I was laughing like crazy at your comment. It really made me happy and I appreciate the support so much you know! Your feedback seriously helps me to improve and inspires me to keep on writing too so that I can live up to the expectations. I’m really sorry that I made you feel sad with Anninn/Juri though. I hope you feel better and in life things are always sad things happening so that your heart will get hurt, but be strong and smile big! Staying positive is the key to overcome obstacles thrown at you. I hope you’ll be happy with this update of mine, thanks again!

Kiri-el: I’m glad that you weren’t disappointed and I really appreciate your comment, because it gives me encouraging feedback. I hope you enjoy this update too!

Megumi:
OMGawd, your comment LOL. I loved it like always, because you’re funny. In my fic Annin/Juri will have a lot of flashbacks so my readers will get a better understanding of how their complicated relationship came to be. Your insight is good, because with Jurina living alone there is a reason why and it comes into play with how her character developed. She’s very lonely T^T haha. You will find out more about Annin/Juri and Rena’s condition in this update so I seriously hope you’ll have a good read! All your emoticon usage is just loved and I’m flattered. Thanks so much for the support!

Ryo Hiroshi: First of all, do you know how much I love you reader/follower?!!! On here and on tumblr too so you pretty much know what I have been up to with the Annin spams and Jurina craze with me constantly reblogging stuff hahah. You’re always inspiring and commenting and encouraging and reblogging and liking and leaving nothing but good ole “SIR!” goodness that fills me up with so much happiness haha. I’m really glad to know you this way, let’s just be friends ‘XD I know…my friends think I’m odd for being a fanboy so into akbpairings and fanfics, I can’t help it! Girls are amazing, they are where beauty begins in the world. I’m not alone though, I noticed a bunch of other dudes on tumblr too haha…don’t talk to any of them though it’s kind of weird lol. Oh, with your Annin/Juri feels though I can totally relate! They had a very beautiful relationship in my opinion. You will find out more about them in this first chapter and keke there is a smut scene too. Let’s just say that last MJSK one you read was not up to par because I was in a rush…but this one…I believe I did a better job, please enjoy it! I also added an insight on Non in this update too. Well, I will eventually for every character because they are all important. Then with my other fics…I’m stuck -___-“ I hope inspiration drops down from the heavens. Thanks again, please enjoy the read!

Melon-lover:
You make me feel flattered too! I’ve been slow at updating though, but I hope I’ll stay in your list of recent favorite authors with this update. I’m still waiting on your fanfics though, just so you know I always go back and read them a lot hence is why I know what you’re up to on tumblr LOL. It’s not stalking!’XD It’s called ‘Following’ ;) Your fanfic page is always a tab on my iphone, always a good read. Annin/Juri’s relationship should be a bit clearer with this first chapter so you will find out why they broke up and yes the sexual tension is definitely there…you will understand when the pedo bear emoticon shows up. With Rena though, her character is complicated you’ll understand in this update too. Then with black, I won’t get into her character until later in the story. Anyways, thanks for the comment and support! I hope you enjoy this read.

Taivas: Haha, your pimpin’ Jurina comment was great! I had a good laugh’XD She just probably doesn’t care who should and shouldn’t be a potential dating partner. && Katafai…hmmm I can’t guarantee anything since she is more than just a katafai pimp now…Her UZA pimpness was just wow lol. You will find out about Rena more in this update, but with the epic MJSK showdown…I can’t wait for it as well ;) Thanks so much for the feedback and support! Please, enjoy this read.

Red48: Shadyblack is Red48 here haha awesome! I’m really so very happy that it looks like my fic is your first post on jphip ‘XD I just have to say, I love your AnninNaga comics and fanart so much! I really look forward to enjoying more of them. I’m glad I was able to make Hime-Annin shippable for you. You will definitely enjoy the first chapter to this update then, because it focuses on their past. Thanks for the comment and support, I really feel the love.

Mo-chan: I’m sorry I took so long with the update, but with the development in Wmatsui’s relationship it should be the second chapter to this update hehe. I hope you will enjoy the moments they will share together in the upcoming scenes. Thanks again for the comment and support!’

Pink-Wota: Hey, if you are reading this I want you to smile ‘X) I am a day late in updating aren’t I? Because of that you were on my mind haha, and you don’t have to feel like a creeper. I liked the love-letterish conversation we had on tumblr, it made me happy. I’m still looking forward to reading your fanfics, I’m excited about them now you see? Well, I hope you enjoy this update then! It's short even though I thought it was long haha.


To all Thank-you button pressers,  :deco:
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 12, 2012, 05:26:10 PM
A/N: I give you a double update! This first chapter gives deeper meaning to Annin/Juri while the second focuses of Wmatsui’s budding relationship. Please, enjoy the read~ ‘X) Oh, but forgive me for the grammatical errors and choppy scenes.

Italics signify events that have already happened in the past. With the font Itallics are hard to see, so it might get a little confusing.

Flower: Cornflower - A sweet, but sometimes spicy friendship.

Flower: Tulip - A broken heart.

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Forbidden Flower


Chapter Three | Tulip

The sound of chalk tapping against the board sounded dottily into the classroom.

Rena finished the sentence she was projecting and turned around to face her students while they continued to copy down the notes. As she scanned through the group of scribbling novices, a particular person caught her attention…yet again.

Matsui Jurina, who simply sat there staring at her teacher with an unwavering smile, did nothing to follow along with the rest of the crowd and merely tilted her head to the side when the two made eye contact.

Feeling slightly awkward, “Jurina-san, aren’t you going to take down any notes?” Rena asked.

Jurina’s grin vanished temporarily. “I apologize for being unprepared, but it seems that I must’ve misplaced my utensils box.” After a polite nod in reparation, the
small familiar smile returned right away.

Rena blinked at the girl a couple of times and turned away timidly, it was too much of a dubious answer for someone who’s sat there all morning simply smiling.

She picked up a pen on her work desk and proceeded to walk up to the girl. “I can lend you my pen for now.” She placed the item down.

Before Rena could walk away the student spoke up. “Sensei, do you by any chance…Have a pencil instead?”

She stopped. “…I don’t really like to use pencils.” Every time she would try to use a pencil, she'd have to mentally shudder at the odd feeling it gave her.

Kimoto Kanon, who sat at the far end of the classroom rested her head against her extended arm and stared lifelessly at the short exchange between her young teacher and a certain special someone. She had also spent that morning ignoring lecture and silently studied Jurina while the girl merrily watched Rena instead.

Kanon looked away for the first time and buried her face in her arms. A memory of the previous day coming back into memory…

“Where are you going?” Kanon asked.

Jurina who was out in the open walkway slowed her steps. “Nowhere in particular…”

“Can’t you spend some time with me today?” Slowly behind Jurina, Kanon followed.

A small thump sounded as Kanon bumped into Jurina’s back when the taller girl came to a sudden halt with her steps. She turned around and smiled brightly. Without answering, Jurina ruffled her hand through Kanon’s hair.

“You didn’t answer me!” Kanon glared at Jurina and her breathing became more audible.

Remaining silent, the older girl simply shifted her eyes at the people whose curiosity had been gained and suddenly conscious of her outburst, Kanon followed the action. Not long after though as she found herself not being able to contain her emotions, she slipped an arm around Jurina’s and led the way to a secluded place around campus.

As soon as the duo was alone pent up one-sided emotions discharged. “You said I was different from the other girls, you said I was special, but do my feelings even matter at all?” Kanon’s eyes began to shimmer.

Jurina smiled softly as her eyes sympathized with the girl. “Don’t say that.” She placed a hand on the girl’s cheek and rubbed at the smooth skin with her thumb.

Kanon quivered under the comforting touch. “…Are you seeing Iriyama-senpai again?” At the end of her question Jurina stopped her movement and Kanon had to bring her own hands up to cover over the girl’s hand, afraid she’d lose even that small amount of contact.

Jurina shook her head no.

“But Abe-senpai looked so upse-”

Jurina leaned down closer and cut the girl off. “I’m not seeing her.”

Staring into her eyes Kanon couldn’t help, but to become mesmerized. “Then kiss me.” She demanded.

Jurina smirked and Kanon stared deeply into her eyes, before closing her own when Jurina leaned in...

Instead of feeling the touch she so desperately desired though, a peck was made near her cheek and the girl spoke into her ear. “Yagami-san really likes you, you know.” Kanon slipped her hand away and was left not knowing how to reply.


Kanon shook her head to rid herself of the thoughts and sighed as she looked back up to the front of the class.


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As the school bell rang and students began to shuffle out of the exit the teacher had to call out to a student. “Jurina-san, I need a moment with you…after.” Rena said.

Returning the respected bows she received from leaving students, the teacher looked up and found a particular student giving her an unpleasant eye. “…?” She then watched mildly confused as Kimoto Kanon left the room in subtle march.

Jurina packed up her belongings and moved positions to the front of the class obediently, while waiting patiently until everyone has gone out. “Yes?” She asked.

Rena walked calmly over to her bag and pulled out a neatly folded blouse and returned it to the girl. “I didn’t get a chance to thank you for yesterday. I hope to be able to return the kind gesture someday.”  She smiled.

Without replying Jurina simply sniffed at the shirt in her hands and Rena’s face turned beat red. “W-why are you sniffing it, that’s embarrassing!” She bashfully exclaimed.

Jurina chuckled, “You washed it.” She said.

“Of course I did…” Rena answered.

“It smells nice.”

At her good word the atmosphere became a little bit unsettling for the woman. “You…” Rena started.

“I?” Jurina pointed towards herself playfully.

The teacher nodded, “…What are you up to?” she mustered out.

“What do you mean?” The student tilted her head.

“You’re always looking at me…like that.”  Rena spoke what was on her mind.

Jurina feigned innocence. “Like what?”

“At the balcony area too, because if this is a prank…” Rena trailed.

Jurina held her leather satchel firmly in the grip of her hand and bowed in a polite apology. “I’m sorry if I made you uncomfortable in any way, I just… must’ve really wanted to be your friend.” She ran a hand through her hair using the same old excuse and laughed.

Charmed by the flustered way the friendly girl had responded to her suspicious questioning, she bought the answer. Rena smiled as she felt the heavy feelings of uncertainty leave and decided to say something else she had also wanted to tell. “I picked up a chrysanthemum yesterday…” Her eyes shied away, but she continued to speak. “I wanted to present it to you in acceptance to your friendship, but you seemed busy. Not getting into any more trouble are you?”

Jurina took in her bottom lip in thought. “Hmm…Maybe, I’m not really sure.”

“Well, friends or not…I’ll have to punish you according to the school rules next time okay?”

Jurina lifted up her chin in acknowledgement and replied. “Understood.”


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Watching her steps as she took one foot in front of the other a lingering thought came back to Rena...

“It’s me…Black.” The beautiful woman inched forward, but Rena moved back.

In a speed at which the feverish girl couldn’t even come to sense, Black pulled her into a tight hug. Her embrace was heavy hearted, but upon contact the trembling they both felt eased to the point where it seemed as though they’d melt into the hold of each other if prolonged.

Then as the taller woman pulled away and looked at Rena, she took an item and clasped it around the girl’s neck. It was a necklace with the word ‘Rock’ as she felt the surface of it with her fingertips.

“I don’t understand why everything had happened the way it did, but I’ll always be waiting for you…” With that final statement, the stranger stepped back and disappeared into the night.


Feeling an impeding headache at thought of her strange encounter, the girl placed a hand over her closed eyes and suddenly it seemed as though the sun rays had wanted to scorch her in their disdain.

Rena trembled slightly losing control as she dropped her binder. She halted in her steps mildly befuddled as she tried to reach down for it, but ended up in her imbalance swaying to the right instead.

“Rena-sensei!” At the call of Rena’s name, the arms of a person wrapped themselves securely around her fragile body.

Sensing an air of distant familiarity, she looked up and her hazy view gradually refocused until the face of her student drew clearer. “…Jurina-san?”

“Are you okay?” The girl asked.

Jurina’s brown orbs stared into Rena’s with so much intensity the woman had to break contact.

“I’m fine.” Rena answered. She began to walk away in dazed-like state, while tucking away few strands of hair behind her ear. It was only after a couple of steps did she turn back around in a stump. “Wait, what are you doing here?” She asked.

How her student could be beside her thirty minutes into her walk home was simply beyond her…

“I…Umm,” Jurina scratched her cheek with a finger in an antic way. “I forgot to give you your pen back.” The girl chuckled and handed over the item.

“Eh?” Rena’s mouth was left agape as she looked up in disbelief from the pen to the girl standing in front of her. “You could have just given it back to me
tomorrow.”

“There’s no school tomorrow, it’s the weekend.”

“Ah…but still you didn’t have to.” 

“It’s okay. I was on my way home anyways.” Jurina lied.

Rena just stared at the girl with a lost face expression. “You don’t live in this direction…”

This only widened Jurina’s grin. “Wow!” She flashed her dimples. “Did you checkout my student records or something?”

A tint of pink cascaded across Rena’s cheeks, there was no doubt she had been curious…Therefore guilty. “I-I have the right to…I’m your teacher after all.” She admitted.

Jurina placed her hands near her hips and leaned forward. “How’s the academic stand point, my marks are great aren’t they?”
Rena shifted awkwardly in thought, before nodding at the question. “You’re a very bright student.”

“You’re not even hiding the fact that you were curious about me too. Hmm…I’m happy.” Jurina moved back into an upright position and giggled.

“Why should I hide….wait, too?” Rena blinked a couple of times to try and process the thought.

Jurina simply ignored the question. “You seem to live quite a distance away from Sunshine Sakae.”

“…And you’re much more talkative now than how I remember.” Rena said. She placed a hand on her forehead and resumed walking. It wasn’t as though she disliked the girl’s company though, she just wasn’t used to it and her fatigued state didn’t help either.

The student picked up the fallen binder and followed closely by. “I’ve always been a talkative person.”

“Oh?” Rena having remembered her binder turned back around, only to see her belonging clasped in Jurina’s arm.

“I know you don’t feel too well. Let me carry it for you.” Jurina suggested.

Reluctant though, the teacher took it back and returned to looking straight ahead. “I didn’t get enough sleep last night.”

Catching up with Rena, Jurina placed her hands behind her back and faced the woman. “Are we anywhere near your house yet?”

“You’re planning to walk with me all the way there?” The tip of her ears gradually turned into a shade of pink.

“I don’t see why not?” Jurina gave an amused reply.

“I’m not sure if that’s a good idea…”

Jurina slowed down, “Is it because you don’t like-” she didn’t even get to finish was she was saying.

Rena had hurriedly intervened worried that she had said something offensive. “N-no, it’s not that. I like you Jurina-san…It’s just…” Rena looked down trying to sort out her rational thoughts.

“That already sounds like a good enough reason to me.” Jurina halted and leaned in with a big smile.

“…”

“I like you too Rena-sensei.”

Rena froze and her cheeks heated up at the realization of her mistake. Jurina had never suggested what she had slipped. It was Rena’s own embarrassing assumption. She turned away completely awkward in a poor attempt to save herself from the humility and continued on her way, not even waiting for the girl.

Not even once after the mishap did Rena find the strength to turn around and face her student. It had only been after ten more minutes of walking did she finally speak up. “Wouldn’t your parents be worried about where you are right now?”

…She received no answer.

“Jurina-san?”

The sound of street traffic carried on, but still there was nothing.

Rena turned around and found herself to be alone…


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Shimada Haruka walked into a club room carrying a heavy bag of potting soil and set it down against the side of a wall. Standing back up she scanned around the room and groused. “Don’t tell me we lost another member?”

Yagami Kumi looked up from her seat. “I think Kanon already left too…”

“Ehh…but we really needed extra help with the garden today.” Haruka replied.

Kizaki Yuria who was sitting on top of Kumi’s desk crossed her arms and nodded. “We’re back to just our original members now.”

“The only reason our club gained anyone’s attention in the first place was because of Matsui-san, but she stopped attending …” Stating a touchy fact, Ichikawa Miori continued to sort through a pile of floral packages. 

Haruka’s eyes shifted over to look at Abe Maria who remained silent with her head down, but then turned back to the girls in question. “Where’s the club president?”

“Annin-san went out to answer a phone call.” Miori answered.

Iriyama Anna sat alone in the middle of a stairway not too far away from her club room. In the middle of a mobile conversation, her voice echoed throughout the empty area.

“I don’t know if I can join you two for dinner.”

The voice on the other line followed up immediately. “But I miss you dear. My husband also said he’d really like to see you again too. It’s been quite some time now hasn’t it?”

“Okaasan…I’m still busy with school work, maybe another time okay?” Anna’s voice became quieter as she spoke.

“How complicated must it be?” The older woman sighed. “I don’t understand you young people.”

“I’m sorry…” Anna apologized.

“Always apologizing just like your father.” Her mother added. The woman was literally shaking her head through the other line.

Closing her eyes in slight frustration from the comment, Anna clicked on the end button and took in a deep breath. She folded her arms on top of her knees and rested her head down. “…No one understands…They have no idea.” She muttered.

A hot tear slid down her cheek. “Jurina, I need you…”

“I heard your mother is going remarry.” Anna’s father spoke up as he opened and peaked into her room.

Anna who was sitting in a chair at her study table looked up from the book she was reading and answered. “…Yeah, she is.”

“That’s good for her then.” The man commented.

Anna simply nodded feeling a bit awkward at the conversation, but before her father could leave she stopped him. “I’m having dinner with them later. Okaasan wants me to meet him... I already prepared you some food so, please eat without me.” She informed him and he merely acknowledged it as he left.

‘Beep-beep~’ Anna’s mobile phone flashed a new message and she hurriedly picked it up. A beautiful smile immediately gracing her lips as she reads the name of its sender and moves to go lay down on her bed.

Rolling to the side with a strawberry plushy in her grasp, she scanned the text. ‘I need you.’ Her smile leaves immediately at the blunt command.

Then…

‘Beep-beep~’ another message follows. She reads it again, this time with the return of a smile. ‘You were frowning weren’t you? Aheh, I love you Annin~(^з^)- ♡’

She hurriedly replies back. ‘What do you want? (;¬_¬)’

It wasn’t long until a response came. ‘…Come over? Please? (>人<)’

‘I can’t, I have to go somewhere later.’ Anna answered.

This time it took a while to receive a text. ‘But…I really don’t feel good.’

She shifted in her bed to look at the digital clock sitting on her night stand and thought it over. ‘Okay, but just for a bit.’

Anna prepped herself and twirled before her mirror. She wore baby blue shorts, a white polka dotted tee, and over that a knitted pink off the shoulder crop top.
After leaning in closer to fix her bangs for the finishing touches though, she picked up her bag and left her home.

It didn’t take long until she reached the front entrance to Jurina’s studio complex and with her own key to the place she unlocked the door and entered. The girl’s home was clean as always even though Anna knew she made a mess, but money solved everything and from what she figured…Jurina’s family must’ve swam in it.

Anna placed a hand on the wall and took off her shoes, before looking around. “Jurina?” She called out for the girl, but no answer was heard. She walked into the grand room and spotted her girlfriend asleep on the bed. She had no covers on her, but wore a loose white blouse and shorts. Her skin glowed radiantly under the gleam of light transcended from the veranda and to Anna there was simply no one more beautiful.

With a warm smile, she walked over and sat down beside the girl. As soon as the bed shifted though, Jurina wrapped her arms around Anna and nuzzled closer.

“What’s wrong?” Anna softly asked.

The younger of the two didn’t answer as she tightened her hold, she simply remained quiet and kept her eyes closed. Anna figured that something was definitely
bothering Jurina. Whenever her lover was angry she was a force not to be reckoned with, but when it came to sad troublesome thoughts…the girl simply
remained silent, her unyielding exterior completely eradicated and replaced by vulnerability. Almost like a harmless child in need for some tender loving care and attention.

Anna placed her hand on Jurina’s cheek and rubbed against her smooth skin with the pad of her thumb. “Are you hungry?” She knew Jurina would never tell her what was bothering her and so, she tried a different way to cheer the girl up.

Jurina shook her head ‘no’ adorably. “Hmm…want to go somewhere fun?” Again the girl shook her head. Annin sighed. She then thought about it and leaned down to place a peck on the girl’s cheek.

In a swift movement, Jurina gripped tighter and swung the girl over on the bed. Jurina now laid herself out comfortably on top of Annin, her breath tickling against the older girl’s neck. “J-jurina?”


“I just need you…” Jurina said.


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“Don’t ever leave me…”Jurina whispered.

Anna who noticed the loneliness in the girl’s voice turned back around and smiled sadly into her eyes. “I should be the one telling you that...”

They clasped their hands together.

After a while Anna spoke up again, “I have to go soon, may I use your shower?”

“Go ahead, but I have somewhere to go to too.”

“…Where?”

Jurina looked away and played with the girl’s hair with her free hand. “Don’t really want to talk about it.” She stated out flatly.

Anna, who didn’t press further slipped away her hand from the hold to get ready and put on a set of classier clothing. Jurina on the other hand remained in bed facing the other way. She never liked watching her girlfriend leave.

“I’ll be going now!” Anna yelled out, before shutting the door behind her.

After taking a cab the girl arrived in front of her destination. As Anna entered, the melody of classical piano pieces played beautifully and she had to stop and marvel at the elegance of the restaurant.

A hostess guided Annin to her respected table and there she was greeted by the sight of an older gentleman and her mother. She gave them a polite bow and introduced herself to the man at the request of her mother.

“As expected, you’re a very beautiful girl.” The man commented and gestured for her to take a seat.

She sat down and the man continued to smile at her in a friendly manner. “We’ve already placed our orders, I hope you don’t mind.”

Anna replied, “I don’t mind.”

The girl then noticed a single tulip encased in a porcelain vase in the middle of the table, but her mother interrupted. “Why are you so quiet?”

“I heard you’re the top of your class? Any particular subjects you’re interested in?” The man asked.

“I’m very fond of math and science, but I’m not sure if my skills are any good though.” She honestly replied.

“I doubt that, but I have a daughter that goes to your school too by the way. Perhaps you two might know each other?”

“…Eh?” That bit of information caught Anna’s ears.

“Isn’t she a bit late?” Anna’s mother asked.

The man looked at the time on his rolex. “That kid always does whatever she wants.” He shook his head.

“It’s exciting isn’t it? I’m very happy.” Anna’s mother added.

Not feeling too well from an uncomfortable sensation, Anna excused herself to restroom. After coming out of the stall, she washed her hands and stared into the
mirror for quite a while. Upon walking out though a loud shatter rang throughout the place and gained her attention.

Anna took a step out of the hidden section of the hallway she was in and peered out into the opening. At the commotion, heads were turned in the direction of the
table she previously sat and a waiter nearly lost his platting.

Glass were scattered everywhere from the broken vase and the tulip from earlier remained lifelessly on the floor…

“I will not stand for your disrespect any longer!” The man Anna had previously acquainted with yelled out viciously and grabbed onto the wrist of the person he was arguing with.

A familiar voice laughed and Anna’s heart began to drum against her chest. “What good will the respect of a child you’ve cast away do for you in the first place?”

“…I didn’t cast you away.” The man grumbled, but slowly he let go of his hold.

“Whatever, I’m out of here.”

“Jurina!” At the call of her lover’s name, Anna’s heart sank and her hands trembled.

The older man stepped out to follow his daughter and stomped over the tulip in the process. He had given up though as the teenager walked away and as the girl came into Anna’s direction, she placed a hand over her chest and quickly moved into hiding…Jurina walked right pass her and without the slightest clue.

No one had understood. No one even knew that in that exact moment, Anna’s heart had shattered into a million pieces.


“Annin-san?” A voice had suddenly freed Anna out of her trance.

Sniffing away and wiping the last bit of her tears, “Yes?” she answered standing up.

“…Are you okay?” Haruka asked.

“Yeah…”

“Should we start working then?”

Anna nodded and they both began to walk back to their club room. Before they entered though, “Can I ask you a favor?” Haruka asked.

“What is it?”

“Please, don’t be too upset with Maria…She was just worried about you.” Haruka reasoned nervously and Anna acknowledged it with a small smile.


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Jurina stopped a tiny middle school student who looked like he was about to get on a bike. “Hey kid, you want to sell me your bike?”

He looked at her skeptically and replied. “No thanks, my girlfriend bought it for me.”

At this the girl only smirked. “I’ll pay triple in terms of the original price.”

“…” His eyes instantly doubled in size. “Sold!”

Jurina handed him a wad of cash and after handing the contraption over, “Have fun!” He skipped away merrily.

With an equally satisfied grin, she placed her satchel inside the front basket, got on the bike and began to peddle forward. In search for the person she was walking with earlier, people glared at her as she recklessly zipped passed them.

“Rena-sensei~” Jurina called out to the familiar figure ahead.

Rena halted at the call of her name and turned around to face Jurina who stopped the bike with a loud screech of the tires. Her eyes widened. “Where did you get that bike?”

“I bought it just now.” Jurina beamed.

Stunned, “Eh??” she replied.

Jurina then extended her hand out in front of the woman. “You were exhausted weren’t you? Let’s go.” She smiled.

Rena was hesitant at first by yet the unexpected, but took the girl’s hand. Jurina guided her teacher to sit on the metallic seat behind her and spoke. “Where should I go?” She asked.

Feeling a little embarrassed, Rena hugged the binder she was holding to her chest and spoke in a low voice. “Just keep on going straight ahead, and then turn left on the third light…”

As soon as the student felt her teacher’s hand placed gently onto her shoulder, a mischievous idea came over her. “Okay, hold on tight.”

Jurina aligned herself to the bike and began to peddle. As soon as they inched forward though, the girl came to an abrupt halt and Rena who didn’t have a secure enough hold flung forward.

Uncomfortable that she had bumped into her student, the teacher moved away and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. Jurina who held in her laughter only began to move again.

Rena didn’t suspect a thing as she placed her hand back onto the girl’s shoulder. Not a moment longer though with the press of its break, the teacher lost her balance once more.

This time she knew Jurina had been doing the action deliberately to distract her…

Rena stared at her student with a questioning gaze and Jurina smiled. “I told you to hold on tight, it’s not safe.”

Rena blushed at the reason and slowly she slid her arm down to Jurina’s waist. The student however wasn’t satisfied. “Hand me your binder.” She commanded.

Rena did as she was told and Jurina threw the object in the front basket in place along with her satchel. “...Are we going now?” Rena asked.

“Almost,” Jurina then moved her hands back to grab at Rena’s wrist and guided the woman’s arm to wrap securely around her torso. “We’re ready to go now.”
Jurina started out slow and then gradually picked up the speed at which she was biking. The wind caressed through both of their silky locks with sigh as they glided through the walkway and as they rode in silence, the woman tightened her hold.

This gesture did not go unnoticed by Jurina and a happy feeling filled her insides. Jurina then refocused back onto the road and neither one spoke as she followed the directed path. She did as she was told riding pass three stop lights, but as she made the final left turn there were no more guidance to follow.

“Where do I go now from here?” Jurina asked.

“…” It was now her turn for not being able to receive an answer.

“…Rena-sensei?” She called out again.

Rena who had the side of her head pressed up against her student’s back didn’t give a reply. Jurina then slowed down to a stop and glanced back in question, only to find the woman sound asleep.

“You must’ve been exhausted.” Jurina couldn’t help it, but to take in Rena’s beautiful features. Her eyes were gently closed with her eyelashes resting cozily against her soft cheeks, creating alluring shadows.

To Jurina, even the way the woman inhaled and exhaled peacefully seemed pretty. She thought back to the only other time they’d been so close and her beat began to mimic the continual pounding of that night where the taiko drummers played their melody.

Jurina began to peddle to wherever her heart was pleased with. Not wanting to wake up the person in slumber, she simply biked around the block for what seemed like hours….

Then as the sky began to darken, the woman behind her stirred and finally she came to a stop. “Are you awake now?” Jurina asked.

Rena tiredly rubbed at her eyes having come to and lifted herself off of the girl’s back to scan around the area in a daze. Having realized that she had fallen asleep though, the woman immediately jumped off the bike.

“Don’t worry about the drool on my back, I didn’t mind at all.” Jurina joked.

Rena’s face immediately heated up and gradually she lifted up her hands to cup at her mouth in embarrassment. “I’m sorry!” She bowed down.

Jurina waved her hands. “I’m kidding,” She laughed. “…you did say some weird things in your sleep though.”

Rena shifted back up with a questioning gaze and Jurina continued. “Something about melon pan…”

Rena remained still with a look of absolute horror on her face, before tightening her lips and shifting her gaze away at the snagged situation. Unable to take any more embarrassment from the same girl, she closed her eyes and turned around.

When she reopened her eyes though, she was surprised to be standing in front of her apartment complex. “…How?” She spun around to look at Jurina in amazement. “How did you find out where I lived?”

Jurina’s face changed excitedly, “You live here?!” she clapped in amusement.

“You mean it was a coincidence you stopped here?” Rena asked.

The girl nodded, “I actually biked passed here a few times already…”

“Oh…” Rena didn’t know how to reply.

“You can go up now.” Jurina displayed her charming dimples.

Rena couldn’t help it, but to smile back as she suddenly felt an immense amount of appreciation for the girl. “Really…thank you.”

Jurina felt a vibe through the woman’s expressive eyes and returned an equally heartfelt look.

Rena then held her lingering gaze on the girl as she began to back away. When she was about to turn though, “Sensei~” the girl called out.

Jurina unhooked a plastic bag from the handle of her bike and tossed it to the woman who barely managed to catch it. “I got a random kid to buy these for me when you were asleep earlier.”

Rena curiously peeked inside the bag and her lips parted in surprise, “…Melon pan.” She breathed.

“Please, enjoy them~” Jurina gave a bright smile and an enthusiastic wave, before peddling away.

Rena clutched onto the bag as she watched the girl disappear into an intersection and even so remained still just staring out into the direction of the person who had just left.

The scenario had played out much like deja vu to her and even if she was sure it couldn’t have been animatedly the same, the lingering feelings were just as she had felt that summer night…

Hearing the slam of a door and footsteps coming towards her way she turned to face her apartment and was met with the surprised face of her roommate. “Rena-chan!” Airi yelled.

“Airin…”

“I was just on my way out to find you!” The woman hugged her then noticed the bag in her friend’s hands. “…You went to buy melon pans didn’t you?”

At this Rena had to stifle a small giggle and offered the girl one of many.


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A/N:
Next up… Wmatsui at Tokyo Disney!!! Yay~~ Sorry for being choppy for this chap and the next one advance lol.

If you guys see the ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ emoticon, just check out my tumblr under the Fanfics page lol. No more needs to be said.





Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 12, 2012, 05:27:14 PM
A/N: Thanks so much for reading! Apologizing in advance for grammar & lack of detail!

Flower – Cornflower: A sweet, but sometimes spicy friendship.

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Forbidden Flower


Chapter Four | Cornflower


‘It’s a nice day when you wake up in Disneyland.’ Rena wiped at the sweat inching down her forehead and sighed as she read the famous quote plastered on a tall wooden overhead board.

It had actually been a bad morning for the woman.

Rena had started off the day by waking up an hour late and it didn’t help that her workplace had been in another city. She had barely made it in time for the scheduled show at theater Orleans and after two intense consecutive performances in front of wild children…she’d nearly lost it.

Rena had been up all night just tossing around in bed. She had figured that it was probably due to the fact that she had already taken a nap and that in turn had thrown off her circadian rhythm. The consequences led to her being late and therefore she had forgotten to take her daily dose of medication. She knew it wasn’t a big deal if she was to remain calm, but in her current work environment and restless state it wasn’t that simple.

Rena took in a refreshing amount of cool water from a bottle and her manager approached her. “Good work today, your dancing has improved by a lot.” He patted her on the back and she thanked him with a smile.

Although Rena studied to be a teacher…Acting, singing, and performing were her true life aspirations. She pursued it while she can, but she knew it was hard to make a living doing so with the completion in the industry. Therefore it had only become a dream and though she was busy with her studies, working at Tokyo Disney had become a sort of happiness for her…On a voluntary basis and sometimes only on occasions where she felt well enough to undertake the task though.

“I’m very sorry for causing a delay this morning.” She apologized and he waved it off.

“It’s fine, but say…you’re already done with your shift. Would you mind filling in for one of my guys in the sales department?”

Rena gave him her attention and he continued. “The job is simple, just sell balloons. We received a whole stock of them last week and my boss is declaring that something needs to be done to get rid of them. I figured that since your character is popular at our theater, maybe it’ll help?”

“Sell them while I’m dressed in my mascot?” She questioned.

“Yes, it’s just one batch. After that then you’re free for the day.” The man replied.

“I’ll try my best to help you sell them all then.” Rena had been feeling a bit queasy, but agreed eventually.


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Jurina took slow twirled steps through the central plaza upon exiting out of the grand emporium gift store and proceeded to search for her teacher. She had not meant to come and stalk the woman, but last night as she returned home she realized the binder belonging to Rena was still in her possession.

Jurina wore a dark royal blue flannel, jeaned shorts, black leggings, and a pair of classic timberland boots. Behind her back she had also strapped a plush Mickey Mouse backpack and held onto the sides as she walked around.

The teen smiled brightly to no one in particular as the tune of ‘Hip hip Pooh-ray!’ sounded happily and she simply enjoyed to bask herself in the nostalgia of memorable childhood days. Jurina had actually been wandering around the park for quite some time, but it wasn’t an easy task to look for any particular person in such a crowded place.

As she exited out of Cinderella’s castle and headed for the direction of fantasy land which resided in the far most end of the park, something caught her eye. She had to literally back up at the sight of a person in a Minnie mouse mascot watching over a ton of colorful weighted down balloons.

The pink dressed mouse was interacting with a little girl who seemed to have just bought a balloon. The child’s parents were waiting for their kid as she gave a hug to the mouse and in a silent gesture Minnie became embarrassed.

That’s when Jurina knew…

As the mouse’s hands came up to cup at her cheeks, then leaving them clasped near her chest to how her shoulder’s raised up ever so slightly in embarrassment…There was no doubt she’d figure the person under the suit had to be Rena.

Minnie mouse waved goodbye to the little girl she was just with and watched as the family made their leave. Her attention was caught however, as a brochure of the park folded neatly into that of a paper airplane glided by in her line of sight.

Still seemingly in a trance by the object she flinched slightly at the sound of a familiar voice. “How much is the cost of a balloon?”

Turning to the direction in which the airplane had flown from, the mouse was met with the beautiful face of an amused Matsui Jurina. A minute had passed in silence as they simply stared at each other, until the mascot hesitantly held up six fingers.

Jurina’s eyes widened, “That’s way overpriced!”

The mouse stood there for a bit, until she decided to play along. Minnie nodded in agreement then moved her hands up to her cheeks to mimic the crying gesture of someone who was sad.

“You think so too huh?” Jurina said tilting her head to the side. “Would you be done for the day if you sold them all?” The girl asked.

Again, the mouse remained frozen just having been stunned by another unexpected question. Slowly, she responded with another nod and the awaiting girl looked to be in high spirits by the reply.

Jurina took off her Mickey Mouse bag and pulled out two large bills from her wallet then placed the money in Minnie’s hands with a wink. “I’ll take them all Minnie mouse-sensei.”

Rena took off the head piece she was wearing and revealed her bashful features. “J-jurina-san you can’t~ What are you doing here?” She stammered.

Jurina held her wide smile as she ignored the woman and proceeded to gather all the balloons. She then walked into the middle of the path way, set the balloons down and cupped at the sides of her mouth. “Free balloons!!!~” The girl bellowed out enthusiastically.

Not long after a flood of people came by and Rena watched as the girl directed the group to form a line with beaming friendliness. One by one she handed out the balloons to children and adults alike, until there was none left. The last little boy thanked her and she simply leaned down to pat him on the head as he left.

“Jurina-san…” Rena called out.

Jurina stood up, “I haven’t paid my respects yet have I?” she gave a small bow with her neck and chuckled.

“You…” Rena trailed.

Jurina could already tell what the woman must’ve wanted to say by the look on her face and explained herself. “First off, I didn’t mean to come stalk you...” She struggled to hold her serious composure and continued. “To be honest, I came by your apartment this morning to return your binder. I figured that perhaps you would’ve been in need for it with our essays in there, but your roommate said you’ve already left so...I was reminded of how much I missed Disney.” Jurina tried her best not to sound weird as she finished.

Rena remained silent as she kept her look on the girl, but under the gaze Jurina began to feel self-conscious with her lame reasoning. To her surprise though, the woman clasped her hands together and moved it up to her chest and giggled. “You came all the way here all alone?” Her eyes glimmered sweetly even as she spoke.

Jurina’s smile returned and even if she wanted to, it was currently impossible for her to stop smiling…Not with how the woman had responded to her excuse.

She nodded. “I hope…I’m not a bother.”

Rena shook her head no. “I…I love your company.”

Jurina had never felt so accomplished before in her life. “Would you like to enjoy the rest of your day here with me then?”

“I’d love to.”

“That’s great!” Jurina bit onto her bottom lip unable to contain her happiness. “I’m happy…” Her gaze then shifted down and back up to Rena and they simply held their gaze onto each other with smiles.

“I have to change first though.” Rena said. She broke the contact first and began heading for the direction of the theater in which Jurina happily followed.

When they reached the area, the teenager waited outside patiently. She sat on top of a low stone built ledge where on top a small flowery patch was settled. The girl had been able to recognize the plant and smiled. Looking up to check if anyone was looking, she plucked out a bluish purple one and twirled it between two fingers.

Hearing the footsteps of someone approaching though she turned as was met with the shy smile of Rena. The woman was adorned in a plain white shirt with a peachy pink cardigan over it, jeaned shorts with a black belt, and dark boots.

Jurina’s lips parted slightly at the captivating sight of the woman and immediately she hopped down to the ground. “You look…amazing.”

Rena breathed out a small laugh and pushed lightly at the younger girl’s shoulder. “Don’t joke with your teacher.” She replied slightly embarrassed.

Jurina then held out the small cornflower to the woman before her and Rena’s eyebrows rose gently in surprise. “You love giving flowers don’t you?” The teacher asked as she accepted it.

“You don’t like receiving them?” Jurina returned.

Pleased with the counter question, Rena smiled. “I think it’s sweet.”

“…and spicy.” Jurina added.

“Spicy?” Rena tilted her head.

“The flower I mean, they say the cornflower is sweet and spicy at the same time.” The teen informed.

Rena observed the flower in hand then placed it inside the small pocket on her chest. “I love it then, thank you.” She let out a soft chuckle.
Jurina merely nodded.

“You’re quite the expert on flowers, what makes them so special to you?” Rena asked curiously.

Jurina shifted her eyes in thought and turned her back to the woman. “…Because, I can relate to them.”

Rena pursed her lips. “What do you mean?”

“Like how a flower cannot bloom without sunshine, people can’t live without love.” At that Jurina turned back and glanced at Rena who wasn’t expecting that sort of answer.

Their eyes locked on each other for a moment…

“That’s beautiful.” Rena mused. She placed her hands behind her back and walked up to stand beside the girl.

“Since you work here, you should recommend where we should go first!” Jurina beamed.

Rena tensed up and at the silence Jurina raised an eyebrow. “Actually, I’ve never even done anything except perform on the stage here and to be honest…I’m afraid of rides.” The woman admitted.

“Ehhh?! …No way.”

Rena looked away and sighed out. “…This is embarrassing.”

Jurina moved a hand up to her mouth to stifle laughter. “Well, is there anything else you want to do?”

“Umm…” There was a moment of silence as Rena thought about it. She wasn’t even sure if she should have stayed longer at the park in the first place, since she could feel herself become quite jittery from a minor headache and the exhaustion. She knew she didn’t feel too well, but then things changed when she spotted a family in the distance snacking on something she had always loved. Her eyes shimmered immediately. “I would really like some cotton candy.”


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Rena walked out of Main Street daily a confectionary shop holding the third large bag of cotton candy she’s had since she’s last said she wanted to eat some.

Jurina on the other hand merely watched slightly incredulously as Rena hummed ‘Pop! Goes the weasel’ and every time the song came to the ‘Pop!’ part, the woman would take a pinch and pop it into her mouth playfully.

“Sensei…”

Jurina received no answer.

“Hey.” She tried again.

Rena smiled happily. “Hmmm?”

“Are you sure you don’t want something to eat?”

In a tone as sweet as honey the woman answered. “I’ll eat cotton candy.”

“No, I mean real food…Would you like to go get some real food?”

Rena frowned slightly at the thought of eating anything other than candy and shook her head no. “I want sugar.”

Although Jurina had found it odd how all of a sudden the woman had become somewhat more childish she figured that perhaps Rena was getting more comfortable around her and laughed. Her teacher sounded so adamant and Jurina had found it to be cute. It almost sounded like the woman was addicted to the treat or something.

They finished some more sightseeing around Tomorrowland, just until Rena had finished her third bag and during the whole time Jurina had only observed the person beside her. She watched as the woman tossed the remains of her treat into a trash bin and practically skipped on over to a random vender.

Rena picked up a big stripped plastic tube and asked. “What are these?”

“Pixy Stix’s” The man wearing a Mickey Mouse hat replied.

She looked at the tube again and then back to the man. “I do not understand.”

“It’s flavored sugar.” The man elaborated.

Rena’s eyes widened happily. “Oh…” Then she looked back at all the tubes. There must have been at least twenty of them. Some with blue stripes, orange, green, red, purple and yellow each coordinating to its flavor. “I'll take them all.”

“Alright~” The man clapped his hands together and rubbed them together blithely.

Jurina stood dumbfounded as she eyed the woman from the side. Each stick had to be at least a yard long and completely filled with nothing, but sugar. “Rena-sensei, you can't be serious.”

She gathered all of them in her arms and narrowed her eyes dangerously. “I’m as serious as death.”

Now that comment coming from her shy and proper teacher completely threw the teen off. “…What?”

Once the woman had all of the sticks in her possession she began to walk away.

“Hey young lady!” The man called out. “You haven’t paid for those yet!”

Jurina’s jaw just dropped and simultaneously she and the vender turned to look at each other. The student quickly understood the glare he was giving her and she hurriedly paid him, before quickly jogging to catch up with the other.

The teen grabbed at her teacher’s shoulders. “Rena-sensei, are you okay?” Rena looked down avoiding the gaze and her hands trembled slightly. As her eyes shifted down on the ground, her hand came up to her mouth and she muttered something the girl couldn’t make out.

“What?” Jurina, who was now worried leaned in closer.

“I said…you’re doing it again.” Rena whispered louder.

Jurina was confused. “What am I doing again?”

Rena looked up. “You called me Rena-sensei…”

Jurina slowly released her hold at what was said. “Was that what was bothering you?” She begins to feel the pull of a smile. “Then…Rena-chan?” The teen suggested.

Rena looked upset as she glared at Jurina, but the expression only lasted for a few seconds. Her gaze shifted to the side then slowly lowered as she too casted
her hand down. “I shouldn’t get mad!” She turned around and bit onto her bottom lip.

Jurina was afraid that she had somehow offended Rena and reached her hand, placing it on the woman’s shoulder. At the touch, the woman glanced back to give the girl a meaningful look and soon her lips curved into soft awkward smile. “A…Amukuchi.”

“Amukuchi?” Jurina was still confused as she returned the word.

Rena nodded keeping the bright smile on her face.

Jurina blinked. “…So you want more sugar?”


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Rena rocked to the side back and forth sitting crossed legged inside of a large pink teacup bench nearby the ride attraction Alice’s Tea Party and watched as
Jurina shoot water out of a pistol into the mouth of a Disney character. 

‘RRRiiiiiiiinnnggg!!!!’

“We have a winner~!” The vender yelled out.

Jurina fist pumped into the air as she tuned to smile in Rena’s direction and the worker handed the girl her prize.

A young boy sitting in the neighboring seat placed his hands onto his hips and glared at her. “You’re no fair!” He huffed.

Jurina turned to the kid with a raised brow and smirked. “I won fair and square.”

“Yeah, but you’re an adult so that’s cheating!” He was clearly upset over losing.

The teen laughed out loud at his reasoning. “Look kid, I’m probably not even that much older than you.” She taunted him with the prize in her hand. “I do somewhat agree with you though…adults do sometimes like to cheat don’t they?” She smiled sadly as he stared up at her mildly perplexed and not long after she bid him her separate ways.

Jurina walked up to Rena with a smile as she placed a plush Goofy hat onto the woman. “Kawaii~” She marveled.

Rena smiled happily and held out a Pixy Stix to girl. Jurina took the sugar tube, tore it between her teeth and handed it back to the sugar high individual. She understood that Rena wasn’t offering her any of the ‘sugar’ she was simply having difficulty opening it.

Jurina still remained slightly puzzled at how Rena had managed to take in so much sweet without getting sick. She shook her head as the woman downed her last
Pixy Stix.

Rena hummed childishly as she tilted her head way back and filled her mouth with sugar. She held onto the plastic tube with one hand and tapped on it with the other, to ensure not one grain of sugar escaped her mouth. When she had a mouth full of the sweet substance, she leaned her head back and slowly started to swallow. All the while she giggled.

Rena had been acting really silly for the past half hour and Jurina couldn't really understand why. When the woman finished what was in her mouth she sighed blithely and started to blink really, really slowly, before resuming to consume the rest of the sweetness inside the tube.

Every time the woman leaned her head back, Jurina couldn’t tear her eyes away. The sun rays were light as they shined over Rena and the silky slope of her shoulder to the soft column of her elegant neck attracted the younger girl immensely. Jurina was entranced as she watched Rena stick her tongue into the tube, then lap her moist pink flesh around her perfect lips to lick at the corners of her mouth.

Jurina gulped. “Are you sure you’re okay?”

Rena nodded, threw the empty tube on the ground, and giggled. “I’ve never felt better in my entire life!”

The loud outburst caught Jurina completely by surprise. “…Are you really sure?”

“Yep!” Rena quickly stood up and jumped out of the teacup adorably with her open arms wide apart.

Jurina was about to comment, but was interrupted. “Let's go on some rides!”

The teen arched a brow and figured something about the drastic change in her companion’s behavior seemed way off. “I thought you said you were afraid of rides?”

Rena completely ignored Jurina’s question. “Come on you~!” She grabbed onto the girl’s hand and began to dash for Fantasyland.


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The sky was beginning to darken and Rena was still having a ball on the rides, the kiddie rides and refused to go on anything else…

Jurina on the other hand was not having as much fun. After floating around on the Dumbo ride for ages and having only ridden in attractions with safety bars too small to put down without inflicting some kind of pain on her…she’s about had it. She has also concluded that kiddie rides were twice, if not three times as long as adult rides. If it hadn’t been her who insisted they stay and Rena whom she was with, Jurina would’ve ditched for home eons ago.

Jurina exited out of the gate along with a bunch of small children and waited for Rena who had to go pick up her belongings that were set aside before the ride.

On their way through the Plaza before the rides, the woman had suddenly wanted to go shopping and in Jurina’s opinion picked out the weirdest souvenir from the Mary Poppins section of the store.

Rena giggled as she twirled around an umbrella and made her way on over to the girl. Jurina in turn just smiled warmly at how expressive the woman had been all day.

“Can we go on Cinderella’s golden carousel again?”

Jurina made a face as her smile widened, but in truth she was tired. “We went on that ride five times already.” The teen had already begun to dread the boring ride, especially since Rena only liked riding in the carriage. Unlike the horses, the thing didn't even move. She could be sitting out on a bench in the open and wouldn't be able to tell a difference.

Jurina began to walk towards a bench and Rena followed. The woman came behind Jurina and took the girl’s hand, but with the loose hold and Jurina’s fast pace…the contact broke as Rena fell behind.

In that moment, Jurina hesitated. She suddenly felt the return of a cold trauma, but something else slowly embarked from within her as she felt Rena’s warm hand return to reach out and hold onto hers again.

Jurina stopped her tracks and turned to look at the person standing beside her. Rena looked surprise at the sudden serious look she was receiving at first, but a moment later she simply smiled. “…Hey you~” She giggled.

Something aroused from within Jurina, but she looked away without replying and by puerile curiosity began to walk again…as expected the loose hold came undone. What puzzled Jurina though was the fact that Rena had again hurried her footsteps just to link hands with her once more.

There was a sensitive part of Jurina that have always dreaded the feeling of people slipping their hands out of her grasp. So even if Rena’s act had been simple…it had deeply affected her.

Jurina quickly interlaced their fingers.

“D-do you… still want to ride the carousel?” She stammered for the first time.


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Jurina leaned over with her head down and arms stretched out onto the ledge of a ticket booth, the man inside raising a brow at her. As Jurina finished catching her breath, she stood back up and spoke to him. “Can I get two tickets for Nagoya?”

The station clerk narrowed his eyes at her. “The last Shinkansen bullet train for Nagoya has already left.”

“What?!” Jurina glanced over to look at Rena who was currently dozing off at a lone bench and then back to the man.

“You can check the early train schedule and come back tomorrow in the morning.”

“But—” Jurina started, but he cut her off.

“I suggest you go and find someplace to stay, the curfew will be in affect soon.”

Jurina lowered her shoulders. She knew they shouldn’t have attended that last Mystery tour and now they were late. It was honestly not a big deal for her though, for she knew there wasn’t anyone waiting for her to return home…but she wasn’t sure about her companion.

Apparently, in the middle of the boring tour back at Disneyland Rena had suddenly come down crashing from her sugar high. Jurina had mentally cursed herself for not realizing sooner that the woman was indeed seriously affected that badly by all the sugar she had consumed.

“Rena…” Jurina gently shook the woman’s shoulders.

Rena’s eyes slowly crack open. “…?”

“The last train left already…we were late.” She informed.

“…” Rena closed her eyes. The umbrella fell out of her grasp and onto the ground as she shifted her body down to lie on the bench.

Jurina sighed and called for the Tokyo cab line.


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The taxi driver eyed the exhausted duo from his rearview mirror. “You kids shouldn’t have drunk so much. It’s seriously a really bad habit to pick up you know?”

Jurina snickered. “We weren’t drinking.”

“Your friend looks pretty drunk to me.” He laughed as he gradually came to a stop.

“This is the nearest hotel?” Jurina looked outside of the window.

“Yes, it is.” The driver replied.

“How much do I owe you?” After her question she paid the man and stepped out of the vehicle.

“Are you sure you can manage her?”

Jurina took off her Mickey Mouse bag, swung Rena’s arms over her shoulders and boosted the girl on her back as she stood up and answered the man in a slightly strained voice. “Yeah…I got her.”

People eyed the two once they were inside and Jurina just ignored them as she set Rena down in a lounge chair. Rena’s head tilted up and then drooped back down as she settled in with her Goofy hat falling out of place and onto the marbled floor.

“I need a room with two beds.” She was out of breath once more.

“Do you have a reservation Miss?” The desk clerk asked.

“…No.”

“Hmm, that’s really unfortunate—”

Jurina interrupted her as she slid her ‘Black’ credit card across the counter and the woman’s eyes widened upon seeing the prestigious item.

“Let’s just take a moment as I sign you in here...” She changed her tone of voice and began to work at her computer. “May I see an I.D.?”

Jurina took out her other card and handed it to the woman. “Wait a minute, you’re a minor?” The lady asked. “I’m sorry, but it’s hotel policy no—”

Jurina looked annoyed as she slammed down a bill towards the woman and everything fixed itself immediately.

“I’ll just make some adjustments then.” The clerk smiled.

Jurina rolled her eyes.

“Here is your room key. I hope you enjoy your overnight stay~”


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Jurina sat down on the edge and released her hold on Rena. The woman fell gently into the soft comforters of the bed and curled onto her side. She kicked off her shoes and proceeded to take off her teacher’s boots as well.

The day had been exhausting and Jurina was starving, but none the less she admitted to the fun. The teen stood back up, stretched and headed for the shower.

Half an hour later she exited out of the bathroom while drying her dampened hair and sat herself down on the unoccupied bed. She hadn’t put her flannel back on and wore only her white tank top instead.

Captivating light peaked in through the curtains and Rena’s moonlit silhouette was the only thing Jurina kept her gaze on in the dark. The student simply sat there on her side and pondered about the day’s unbelievable events. Rena’s gentle and polite nature had always drawn the girl in, but after a whole day spent with the woman…it had been an even more interesting twist. She was able to witness an awkward, but undeniably adorable side to Rena that she would have never expected to get to know and it left her with a feeling she’s long thought was impossible to experience ever again.

Jurina looked down at her hands, but after while decided to get ready for sleep…

An hour after Jurina had fallen asleep…she felt the edge of her bed shift a bit from an unknown force. Slowly, someone climbed into her bed and carefully maneuvered seductively over her body.

Jurina jolted awake when she felt the weight of someone straddle her waist and in an instinctive fright, flipped the person over…swapping their positions.

Rena giggled.

Jurina froze in place as her cheeks heated up and her heart beat began to escalate at an alarming speed. “R-rena-sensei…?”

Rena wrapped her arms around Jurina’s neck and moved upwards as she pulled the girl down. Her lips made contact with the smooth curve of Jurina’s sweetly scented flesh and…

“Itaaiii!” Jurina closed her eyes and yelped in pain.

The woman under released the girl from her hold and smiled. “Ne, okotteru?” There was a small dab of crimson at the corner of her lips.

There was no answer at first, but at the feel of a water droplet falling to slide down her cheek...Rena tilted her head to get a better look on the girl.

Jurina whimpered. “No…but you bit me, that hurt.”


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A/N:
Yay, I was finally able to finish after all. I hope this chapter wasn’t that confusing…I tried with the whole Disney thing lol. Thanks for reading everyone. I don't know if this way of introducing Rena's character worked though...oh well.
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: nori on October 12, 2012, 06:53:00 PM
Awesome chapters and not only was it a double update there was that bonus scene :drool:  You really do know how to spoil a reader ;)
Poor Non right at the beginning but at least Kumi will be there for her, I hope, that's better than Jurina and Annin are step-sisters  :shocked (Does Jurina know about this?)  :?
Amakuchi forgot to take her medicine so now Jurina has to survive a night with Gekikara, anything can happen now  :w00t:

I really appreciate the personal replies, it means a lot to me, but please can it be in a font colour that I can actually read  XD

Joking aside, I am seriously looking forward to your next update really loving your work anonymousdowner-san  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Kiri-el on October 12, 2012, 07:09:43 PM
Double update, and how many thing happened!! Now I'm understand a little bit what happened between Anna and Jurina, but I'm really curious Rena's past, and what will happen to WMatsui... and so much more thing I want to know. :)

I'm really glad for the double update, thank you for this again!

And Rena-sensei bit her student...  :D
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: red48 on October 12, 2012, 07:39:21 PM
aldsjflaejalkdjfaklsdf... All of my feelings...(;≧皿≦)  Can I just...can I just love you like forever!!!(●´□`)/~♡
The JuriAnnin part...I cried (´Д` ). Seriously...poor Annin baby~ T T she love Jurina that much......why this has to be happen? Aaaw~the angst is killing me...
But seriously though, I love love LOVE your story here (*´▽`*). The way you put the plot... it is so good. All of the characters feels so real and alive to me. You did a very good job! (●´□`)=b
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: red48 on October 12, 2012, 08:04:41 PM
A/N: Personal Replies



Red48: Shadyblack is Red48 here haha awesome! I’m really so very happy that it looks like my fic is your first post on jphip ‘XD I just have to say, I love your AnninNaga comics and fanart so much! I really look forward to enjoying more of them. I’m glad I was able to make Hime-Annin shippable for you. You will definitely enjoy the first chapter to this update then, because it focuses on their past. Thanks for the comment and support, I really feel the love.



Wait...you're right! I think I wouldn't realize it if you didn't tell me. It was indeed my first ever post in jphip XD Hahahha... I remember I made this id just to read some infos of 48's girls, but never felt to drop some comments before. Your fanfic was the one that made me feel that I have to leave some because it's worth lots of lovin' (´ ▽`).。o♡ Just keep writing this good stuff~ It gives me the strength to draw some fanart tooヽ(´ー`)ノ. 
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Juribait on October 12, 2012, 08:40:16 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When I saw that you update I was just like  :panic:
I then I saw that was a DOUBLE update and I start to freak out like :shock: :hiakhiakhiak:
Oh god now I understand what happened with Jurina and Annin, they father and mom married and Jurina discovered about and then she break up with Annin  :cry:
So good and sad that scene between they two  :cry:
And I started to freak out again when Rena turned into Amakuchi, if Jurina don't be careful she will be in dangerous!  :shocked
And in the end when Gekikara come and bite Jurina I was like  :imdead:
SERIOUS! THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING! I'm really happy for has to wait so many days for this chapters, really worth It  :farofflook:
I can't wait to know what will happen between Jurina and Rena in the next chapter  :shocked

PS: I forgot to say this in my other comment about the other chapter, when I read about Jurina just wearing her blue vest I was just like  :drool: this jailbait even in the fanfics is really sexy hahaha XD

PS2: I have fear of what will happen when black appear again XD
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Dreamstalker on October 13, 2012, 01:38:18 AM
It became more interesting as the story goes on. .the story behind annin and jurina, rena's changing moods and jurina being a cool rich kid. . .it excites me really! Thanks for the double update. . .i will read it again from the first chap. . .heheh, i don't know..i just get hook in such a beautiful fic of yours. . .because i like no i love rena's gekikara character. .ever since i've watch MG. She's out! Sweet and spicy. . ..
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: JuRikki on October 13, 2012, 08:44:57 AM
I love your fic! Still confused but I can understand it.

Really interesting :)

Wait for the next update (^^)
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: BbSis on October 13, 2012, 09:14:35 AM
Omg! Double update *.* I'm so slow, it took me ours to finish reading xD

Tulip
Somehow I felt sorry for Annin... She really seemed to like Jurina. Her heart broke because Jurina was her mother's fiancee's daughter or because Jurina didn't notice her, or both? Sorry I couldn't figure it out ><" you will probably answer that on other updates, so I guess I can wait ;p
It was the first time I read hot scenes here(I mean with the 48 family girls ><) o/ I've already read this kind of hot scenes in english before and I really liked yours. It was cute, sensual and full of feelings. They transmited this, at least to me ;D it was well placed and showed one side of Jurina's behavior that she might still hold. My imagination gone wild and I mentally had a hard nosebleedxD

Cornflower
It was a cute one o/ I got really curious about Disney's amusiment park hauhuaha too sad I don't have money to travel abroad xD I guess this chapter turned out well. Jurina's father have too much money! Can someone be that rich? XD Her father must have bunch of money trees xD Must be tiresome to Rena work in two places... It was funny and somehow creepy her behavior change. I still think she has a double personality... (Perdon me, but it was kind of obvious by the end of the chatper ><") Poor Jurina, hope that bite didn't make blood flows... Can't wait to see Rena's reaction *.*

I liked the combo and you keeped up with the narrative style I like so much o/

Thanks for liking my work o/ if you see it larger maybe you would change your mind (yes, I'm a low confidence person...) Anyways, I've been thinking about signin on tumblr o make a blog for that, I don't know what is better ><. I have a DeviantArt account though xD with just a coulpe of draws... My head is full of ideas for fanarts and I've alredy sketched few things.

Sorry, talked too much ^^" waiting anxiously for the next chapter o/
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: pink-wota on October 13, 2012, 07:41:08 PM
Hey! I finally made my JPH!P account. OTL


Not gonna lie, I actually read this last night during work. Sorry for not commenting on this sooner (I was using my phone! ><).

I'll tell you about my night at work while reading this...



WARNING: SPAZZING AHEAD!






OMFG. OKAY. SO last night, I was at work. I work at an amusement park btw and since it's October, all that Halloween scary shit was happening.
4 hours into my work shift, they FREAKIN' moved me to the kids' area (where all the kid rides are and this happened at like 9PM).
So I worked there by myself and it was practically deserted! There was NO kids at all. I don't even know why they would put me there.
BUT ANYWAY, I WAS SCARED. I WAS WORKING BY MYSELF TOO. PLUS, ALL THAT NURSERY KID SONGS THEY WERE PLAYING DIDN'T HELP!!

Aside from being scared out of my mind, I was bored too since like I said, there was no people at all.
So I was like, "Okay, I guess I'll go read some fanfics," and then I went to JPH!P on my phone.


AND THEN I SAW YOUR UPDATE. *GASP* <--- LITERALLY MY REACTION. LOL!
I WAS WAITING FOR YOUR UPDATE TOO!! IT WAS ON MY MIND THE MOMENT YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE GONNA UPDATE THE OTHER DAY.
IT NEVER LEFT MY MIND.

ALRIGHT, SO I GET TO THE LAST PAGE AND I WAS LIKE CRUISIN' DOWN THE PAGE.

THEN I SEE THIS YOUR PERSONAL REPLIES.

I WAS GONNA SKIP IT BUT THEN I SEE THIS:


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Pink-Wota: Hey, if you are reading this I want you to smile ‘X) I am a day late in updating aren’t I? Because of that you were on my mind haha, and you don’t have to feel like a creeper. I liked the love-letterish conversation we had on tumblr, it made me happy. I’m still looking forward to reading your fanfics, I’m excited about them now you see? Well, I hope you enjoy this update then! It's short even though I thought it was long haha.




OMGGGGGG. THE MOMENT I SAW IT, I SMILED. THEN YOU WERE LIKE, "IF YOU ARE READING THIS I WANT YOU TO SMILE."
I'M LIKE, "DA FUQ??!!! YOU CAN READ MY MIND?!!" THEN THE GRIN I HAD LITERALLY GREW WIDER. ASDLFKJSDL;KFS;LDFKJ WHY YOU SO SWEET?!! >.< YOU'RE SO SWEET THAT YOU SHOULD BE ILLEGAL. OMFG. DID I JUST SAY THAT?!! YES I DID. AND I DON'T EVEN CARE.
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUU~





Ok. *cough*


So onto your updates, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <--- That's my comment to your updates. LOL

Annin and Juri R scene HHHHNNNGGGGGGGG!!!! <3

BUT THEN MINUTES LATER, YOU BROKE IT INTO A MILLION PIECES.
WTFFFFFFFFF. I WAS READING THIS LAST NIGHT AND I LITERALLY SCREAMED SILENTLY.
WHYYYYYYYY. FD;LKADJSF;LKDJS;LFKJSA; WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!! ;A;
WHY WOULD YOU MAKE THEM RELATED?!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN IT. I SAID I LOVED YOU BEFORE BUT NOW I DISLIKE YOU. THEN YOU WENT AHEAD AND DO WMATSUI FOR THE NEXT UPDATE?!! I'M LIKE, "OK FINE. MAAAAAAYBE I'LL TAKE YOU BACK. I WILL CONSIDER IT."
THEN RENA AKA GEKIKARA BITES JAILBAIT. I LITERALLY DIED RIGHT THERE. I LOVE YOU AGAIN.
I HATE YOU FOR DOING THIS TO JURIANNIN BUT I LOVE YOU FOR WMATSUI. LOVE/HATE RELATIONSHIP RIGHT THERE.

AND WHY AM I STILL TALKING IN CAPS? I DON'T EVEN KNOW.





Lol, I felt like I ranted so much in this.
Sorry. OTL
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on October 14, 2012, 04:16:28 AM
thankyou!!! so much this is one of the best,nicest fanfics i've ever read :luvluv2: i love this fanfic so much :luvluv1: and thanx for the double update too i love long chapters  :ding: :D im really looking forward to the next chapter :on woohoo: :onioncheer: thanx :heart: and i love the jurianna smexy part to lol
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: crazywota on October 14, 2012, 01:17:06 PM
I just have to leave a review now. For the nth time me saying this, I don't usually leave a comment in any fics i am reading because I am such a lazy ass girl  :nervous and I really don't know how to put my spazz into words. LOL.

okay enough with my nonsense intro XD
... Now how to start... First of all, I don't read wmatsui fics that much. I am not really a fan. Then this thread popped out and I saw that the author was "anonymousdowner" and i was like the author of "candlelit smile huh? why not give it a try" (Btw I am such a big fan of that atsumina fic of yours, and the sidestory mariharu aswell  :heart:) I never thought that I would be this attach and wanted to scream "MOREEEEE" in front of my laptop when every chapter ends. LOL.

..omg how to review properly


.. to cut this nonsense comment short. I just love this fanfic so damn much much much. Let me love you. LOL  :deco:

Thankyou for this masterpiece, can't wait for the next awesome chapter.  :thumbup

Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: kuronekosan on October 14, 2012, 06:09:33 PM
Yay! Double update!! :twothumbs

Haha! I'm glad you like my username. I've been incorporating Neko into my usernames lately. Probably cause my cat is always sleeping nearby....I'm flattered that you think I have "awesome insight". Haha! I wasn't expecting that. Don't be embarassed! Every word of praise was well deserved! Don't kowtow to me! YOU'RE the author of this fic. :bow:

Anyway, on with the fic.
First off, Tulip.

OMGOSH Jurina is SO clearly flirting with Rena! Why is it that it is always blatantly clear to others when people are "subtly" flirting, but you, yourself are blind when it happens to you? Is it because you become shy, or are in denial? And I had to laugh at the part with the pencil. You even managed to add that in! Haha! Gekikara will always have a connection to pencils. I'm surprised no one got her to endorse some yet! Like "Buy___ pencils! Long lasting and resistant to Gekikara!" LOL. Though I don't think anything can resist Gekikara.

Ahhhh...poor Kanon, so infatuated with Jurina. I was kinda mad that Jurina had somehow led her on. Things like this should always be stated clearly no? It just ain't right. But then she redeemed herself by respecting Kumi's feelings. Or is it that she herself didn't want to kiss Kanon. Since she likes someone else.

Hmmmmm....more questions about Black. But I'll keep them to myself for now. I'm sure you'll answer them in your updates. Rena being so frail is always worrying.

The Annin and Jurina scene was so touching. Then came the R scene. WOW...just..WOW. So the misunderstanding is Annin not willing, or not being able to tell Jurina that they're now step-sisters. Understandable, that's one of the worst things that could happen. But then, they're not blood related, so assuming that there's no problem with them both being girls, they could still be lovers right? I mean, it's happened before, but I'm not sure how it's like in Japan.

Haha. Rena's love for melon-pan shone through, and its an amazing coincidence(or is it fate?)that Jurina found Rena's home.

Cornflower

Uh oh.....Jurina definitely has too much money to spend. The way she can just throw it away...If had that sorta wealth, I'd have bought all my favourite artists albums and gone to all their concert! But anyway, Rena not taking medication? Not good. Her staying back? REALLY not good. Jurina popping up? TROUBLE with a capital T. Well, for her anyways. I'm sure the readers went wild at the end. Myself included. XD

That scene with the pixy stix was just so kawaii! There was one part where Rena said that she shouldn't get mad. Somehow, from then on, it seemed as though she was trying to hold Gekikara back by consuming lots of sugar and being Amakuchi? Ahhh...yes. So if I'm right, Jurina's dad not only cast her away, but he cheated on his wife? Seeing as Jurina was cast away, I'm guessing that her mother was the one he cheated on his wife with right? So she'd be a child born out of wedlock. A very tough position for her, making her more vulnerable and dependant on the attention of those she cares about.

Having that much money, definitely helps. At least her father provides for her financially. And yea! Rena bit her! Gekikara is out?! The title matches this chapter 100%.

All in all a great job as always anonymousdowner-san! Such a wonderful read. There's the drama, the poetic vision, the fluff, the touching moments, the kawaii moments, the mystery, the intrigue, the humour, this fic has practically everything! :on woohoo: The double update was definitely well worth the wait. Job well done. :on GJ: Take your time, I'll be waiting here as always.
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Ryo Hiroshi on October 14, 2012, 06:56:15 PM
Hello, sir ~ Sorry for the late comment but I need time to gather my feelings and thoughts  :nervous Your update just made me  :panic:
Thank you for loving me but you know, I also have the same feeling toward you  :wub: I loveeeeeeeeee you too, my sir   :inlove: Thank you for always working hard with all your writing, sir   :twothumbs
And this one thing, sir  8)
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Girls are amazing, they are where beauty begins in the world.
Seriously, I can't believe it  :shocked This is exactly what I have been always thinking, sir  :cathappy: I always think that girls are amazing, and they are the greatest gift that God gave to us  XD
About your other fics, well, it's sad that you're stuck with them but don't worry, my sir  :thumbsup I believe one day your inspiration will be back and I'll wait until then  :fap Please take your time  :cathappy:
 
Now it's time for me spazzing over your DOUBLE UPDATE, sir!!!  XD I love it, sir, seriously love it  :lol: Double update and one R-rated scene  XD I can't expect more, sir  :cathappy: I love you, just love you so much  :deco:
So, with chapter three, you reveal to us that Annin is the president of gardening club, and Jurina had been in that club because of Annin I guess. But after they broke up, Jurina quitted? So, does that mean all the things Jurina knows about flowers is thanks to Annin? Just to think that Jurina now using those knowledge to flirt with Rena makes me  :catglare:  Just kidding  :lol:
But sir, to me, Annin with flowers seriously is the most beautiful combination?  :inlove: Just think about it makes me want to go fangirl already  :nervous
About the R-rated scene, seriously I didn't expect you would put one in this chapter, so I was very surprised  :shocked And you don't know how much I love it, sir  :wub: Well, it's just simply beautiful, sir  :wub:
To think about Annin and Jurina relationship, you made it very adorable, you know?  :wub: I can feel the love between them, it's just so lovely  :wub: They really love each other. The way Jurina needed Annin to comfort her when she felt uneasy, the way Annin would come to Jurina's side when she knew the girl needed her. Let me say this again, sir, it's just simply beautiful  :oops:
Yes, their love is beautiful like that but you, my sir, you don't let them be happy until the end!!! Why? Just why, sir? WHY YOU DO THAT TO THEM? WHY YOU LET ANNIN'S MOTHER GET MARRIED WITH JURINA'S FATHER?? WHY???  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
You made me cry, sir :cry: :cry: :cry:
And now things seem clear to me. Annin knows the truth about their parents, and she doesn't want Jurina to get hurt by knowing the truth. That's why Annin decides to take all the pain to herself and leave Jurina...  :cry: Nooooo, Annin  :cry:
Seriously sir, why you do that to them?  :cry: They are the perfect couple you know!!!  :cry:

Anyways, it's a good and dramatic plot, my sir  :twothumbs I enjoy reading it and I'm eager to know how everything will turn out and how you will solve all the problems  :thumbup Just don't let it be too tragic, sir  :cry: My weak heart can't handle it  :cry:
I, too, wonder what had happened between Rena and Black, and also what was their relationship  :shocked Your fic has so many interesting secrets, sir  :cow:

About Jurina and Rena-sensei's date at Disneyland  :lol: Just so fun and so cute  :lol: Poor Jurina being dragged around by Rena and can't even have a proper meal  :lol: Not mention she also has to take care of her sleeping teacher after her sugar high  :rofl: Poor kid, that's what you get for trying to stalk someone  :lol:
Jurina is such a rich kid  :shocked Just how much money she brings to herself when she goes out?  :shocked
And a student and her teacher in the same room in a hotel, wow  :drool: I don't want to imagine more, sir  :oops: Lol, I'm just kidding  :lol:
But you know, sir  :P The scene in which Rena bites Jurina is just  :panic: I really don't know what to say, but it's just so  :panic: Wow, Gekikara is back  :panic: Hope Jurina will be fine  :nervous But I really don't mind if Rena eats or does something to Jurina, really don't mind  :rofl:

And we have Rena, Amakuchi and Gekikara in the same body  :shocked: It will be interesting I guess  :cathappy:

OK, until next time, my sir  :D Thank you very much for working so hard  :bow: Please take your time  :peace:

Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: half-baka on October 15, 2012, 01:28:49 PM
yay!! an update!! DOUBLE UPDATE  :cathappy: :heart: :bow: :bow:

aksjdkalksdlad;ad OMG Jurina Annin scene  :inlove: , love it
D: nooo so that's why annin left jurina D: holy effff , LOL suddenly character change from rena xDD did she forget to take her medicine or did disney brainwash rena  :? , whoa jurina is seriously rich  :shocked
the last part OMG :w00t: , can't wait for the next update!!!  :deco:
Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Thetroop on October 16, 2012, 04:56:15 PM
wow!!! I love your storyline. really interesting :thumbsup
i want to know what happened between Jurina and Annin. the reason why they broke.
can't wait for your next update!!!!
ano! i know this is WMatsui fanfic but i want more JuriAnnin  :P
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: Megumi on October 27, 2012, 09:39:21 AM
A/N: Personal Replies


Megumi:OMGawd, your comment LOL. I loved it like always, because you’re funny. In my fic Annin/Juri will have a lot of flashbacks so my readers will get a better understanding of how their complicated relationship came to be. Your insight is good, because with Jurina living alone there is a reason why and it comes into play with how her character developed. She’s very lonely T^T haha. You will find out more about Annin/Juri and Rena’s condition in this update so I seriously hope you’ll have a good read! All your emoticon usage is just loved and I’m flattered. Thanks so much for the support!


 :shocked Mr! Your personal replies I see that you took time to reply to everyone it always relieving to read.
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ASDFGHJKL Mr. how do you think I'm suppose to write my review here?
Double update! Mr! Are you trying to kill me? This is....Yabai! Way too many feels! *spazz
I'll go with easy reaction emoticons this time or the review will be super long  XD


Review: Chapter Three | Tulip
Feeling slightly awkward, “Jurina-san, aren’t you going to take down any notes?” Rena asked.
Jurina’s grin vanished temporarily. “I apologize for being unprepared, but it seems that I must’ve misplaced my utensils box.”

:lol: Jurina seriously? Are you smart trying to flirt with Rena-sensei or did you actually forget?  :rofl:

Nonchan?  :shocked  I knew it! Jurina you don't have to do anything and girls are falling for you from left and right.  :lol:
I'm glad that Jurina didn't do anything to Non tough, Kumi would be so devastated if Jurina pimped around.

 :rofl: Jurina sniffing her shirt it's just OMG LOLOLOL that's weird somehow even if it's hers.

Black... I think that she will play an important part somewhere further in the future...

Anna responded to the kiss as she subtly arched up and tilted her head to the side, deepening the sensual contact. As Jurina pulled away they opened their eyes
and stared into the depths of each other. The loose blouse Jurina wore slid down to her shoulders and exposed her pale flawless flesh…

“I just need you…” Jurina said.


------------------------------ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ--------------------------------------------

Pedobear? The fact that they are lolis  just makes me laugh :rofl:


 :banghead: Annins mom and Jurinas dad?  :shocked this is I want to know more!
I want to know if Jurina also knows or that Annin decided to not tell her...
Now I also knows why Jurina knows the meaning of flowers. :thumbsup

Jurina bicycling around with Rena while she sleeping....(my favourite part) I enjoy this scene so much  :)
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Review: Chapter Four | Cornflower

Jurina you're actually stalking Rena-sensei here no need for excuses  :lol:

I'll make it short Rena-sensei in this update is so moe~
From giving out balloons, acting like a kid, to scary gekikara..

Does it have something with her medication?
and why are she on top of Jurina...
asdfghjkl and yes Mr. I'm the hentaipedo on tumblr  XD


Thank you a lot for your update Mr.
I like these kind of long fics.
Can't wait for your next update!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: [DOUBLE UPDATE! 10/12/12] Forbidden Flower | Tulip | Cornflower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 28, 2012, 12:00:12 AM
A/N:

What's up all you precious readers/Wmatsui/Anninaga shippers??!!!  :peace:

According to the new stricter rules, perv talk relating to Jurina/Lolis or going into too much details for example with the kissy scenes in my fic are going too far and even calling her a "Perv angel" for example is forbidden  :bleed eyes: ... My avid readers....You guys know that I can not live without detail or almost details??!!! LOL :rofl: && there has been talk if I can't refrain from details (By "details" I am not talking about what I have added with this guy ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ I'm just talking about the make out scenes or scenes close to that) that the main character should be swapped with an older AKB member lol, but no it will not be the same as Jurijailbait...Unless this turns into a BuraGeki fic. Hmm...this means that Anonymousdowner has literally gone to jail virtually* & the whole fic will have to undergo some major revision and honestly it'll really kill the theme. Seriously I thought it was okay at first since it's fiction lol. Excuses 'XD

I guess tumblr had too much influence on me.  :lol:  As a warning to all Wmatsui writers on JPH!P ahahh we have to stick to protocol. My next update is already 90% done, but because there's some uncomfortableness going on...Sad to say that as much as I love JPH!P, my fic will be on hold. On a brighter note, I've created a blog and will most likely continue my work there. I am also inviting some awesome writers/artists (to promote their limitless imagination/fanart there once everything becomes official. I'll be great if we could gain some supporters ':) 

Thank you all for the extremely long and wonderful comments my fic has received so far...really..really...I am so happy (Y'all have no idea *wipes tears of joy*) and would like to repay the favor, but it'll have to wait until I get to the personal replies. I'll post up a link to my website once it's finished.  :grin:

With lot's of love,

Sir Anonymousdowner  :pimp:


P.S. Thanks to the moderators too for the heads up.  :thumbup
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: nori on October 28, 2012, 02:19:51 AM
That's a shame you can't continue the story here but I will definitely continue reading this on your blog  :thumbup
Only thing is could you post a link to it or is it one of the links in your signature?
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Sieka on October 28, 2012, 02:32:21 AM
That's really sad, and I was hoping for an update since I'm following this (though I've only started to read a little in my spare time). I guess your decision is for the best, I'll wait patiently for your blog, and you do had me thinking too since there are limits to how I can put some fics here (that being mostly my ideas for AnniNaga...Jurina surely makes it hard huh....? Not that I'm complaining since I find amusement in this small complication.)

Anyways, I look forward to seeing your blog up, and yes, hopefully you get some writers to come along. :) And you should try restraining yourself with the details. You just make me curious somehow. :roll:
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 28, 2012, 02:39:48 AM
That's a shame you can't continue the story here but I will definitely continue reading this on your blog  :thumbup
Only thing is could you post a link to it or is it one of the links in your signature?
The site isn't completely finished right now. I still have to rearrange the layout a bit, but when I do soon I'll make sure to notify that the site is up on here and will probably have to link it in my profile or tumblr.  :yep: Ahhh, & thanks so much for supporting!  :deco:

That's really sad, and I was hoping for an update since I'm following this (though I've only started to read a little in my spare time). I guess your decision is for the best, I'll wait patiently for your blog, and you do had me thinking too since there are limits to how I can put some fics here (that being mostly my ideas for AnniNaga...Jurina surely makes it hard huh....? Not that I'm complaining since I find amusement in this small complication.)

Anyways, I look forward to seeing your blog up, and yes, hopefully you get some writers to come along. :) And you should try restraining yourself with the details. You just make me curious somehow. :roll:

Sieka!! I've been a super fan of your work since just a couple hours ago lol. You should come join me, you've got some powerful imagination and your fanart is off the hook! I love it  :inlove: ...trust me I do restrain myself with details, I dislike explicit things tbh. It's just the awesome subtext that brings me down  :rofl:
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: ILOVESAEYUKI-WMATSUI on October 28, 2012, 04:14:09 AM
it's ok i will definitely continue reading this on your blog as im in love with this fanfic :luvluv2: :luvluv1: , im also following you on tumblr my blog's name is foreverloveakbske48 just letting you know lol thanx :heart: :peace:
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Taivas on October 28, 2012, 11:47:15 AM
anonymousdowner-san,

I have to say that I really enjoy this fic a alot, in fact it's probably one of my personal favorites right now because Jurina's pimpness is just making me go ashfjkjashfdkjasdf and I'd like to see where the Gekikara situation is going now  :lol:

I personally hope that you do not let the new jphip rules influence your story writing in any way. I'd totally happy to read it on your blog or on Tumblr or some other site than jphip. (I wonder if ebi48's Artwork section could be an alternative place for fanfic writing, but it's pretty much dead at the moment.) But please don't edit the storyline in any way just to make it comply with the new rules  :lol:

Looking forward to your next update
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Dreamstalker on October 28, 2012, 04:25:08 PM
I am already your follower on tumblr. . . :>
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: JuRikki on October 28, 2012, 07:08:47 PM
It's okay as long as I can continue to read the story on your blog. I really love your fic. This.... Cause I'm WMatsui and AnniNaga shippers..


Thank you very much m(_ _)m
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Juribait on October 29, 2012, 12:06:46 AM
Is sad that you I'll not be able to continue the story here (maybe I'll have to take a better look in my wmatsui fanfic that I post here too, even that I just a sugar and romantic story without hot moments,scenes and kisses, the rule that involve Jurina make me worried too D:).
But I think that is better you post in another place and keep the story essence ^^ (I serious love how this story is in the moment and would be really sad if everything changed because Jhip restricted rules ;_;).
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: dirtydeeds on October 29, 2012, 03:36:10 AM
I've been a silent reader of all your fics and I'm sorry for that  :bow:
its such a shame that you can't continue posting it here but I'm begging you please do not change the format of the story  PLEASEEEEEEEE
you inspired me to write btw and although i really haven't posted anything yet, i will SOON. seriously tho, i have a long ass jurimayu oneshot sitting on my laptop but i still have no clue of where to post it and its really crappy too.

i just wanted say thank you for inspiring me, anonymousdowner. you are one of the best if not the best writer in jphip.

oh and i do follow you on tumblr but i had no clue that it was you different account names and all
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: anonymousdowner on October 29, 2012, 05:54:26 AM
it's ok i will definitely continue reading this on your blog as im in love with this fanfic :luvluv2: :luvluv1: , im also following you on tumblr my blog's name is foreverloveakbske48 just letting you know lol thanx :heart: :peace:

Ahah, I didn't know that was you! I see we're all probably following each other on tumblr and thanks! :deco:

anonymousdowner-san,

I have to say that I really enjoy this fic a alot, in fact it's probably one of my personal favorites right now because Jurina's pimpness is just making me go ashfjkjashfdkjasdf and I'd like to see where the Gekikara situation is going now  :lol:

I personally hope that you do not let the new jphip rules influence your story writing in any way. I'd totally happy to read it on your blog or on Tumblr or some other site than jphip. (I wonder if ebi48's Artwork section could be an alternative place for fanfic writing, but it's pretty much dead at the moment.) But please don't edit the storyline in any way just to make it comply with the new rules  :lol:

Looking forward to your next update
Thanks for the support really! I seriously appreciate it so much you know. Especially now with all the pvs out, it's impossible not to go asdfghjk over jurina or Wmatsui  :inlove: I've never been on ebi48 though and their artwork section does look pretty abandoned like you said, but Im still not sure about their rules either. I couldn't even find it -___-;; & I already had to edit what was already on here. The blog will be up in probably two days, because I'm currently waiting to purchase my domain name for the site first.

I am already your follower on tumblr. . . :>

Ahah, like I said we all are probably following each other on tumblr! *Hugs the fandom!* XD I'd also like to thank you for following all this time ':)

It's okay as long as I can continue to read the story on your blog. I really love your fic. This.... Cause I'm WMatsui and AnniNaga shippers..


Thank you very much m(_ _)m

That means a lot thanks! I'll try to not to make you guys wait too long for my blog. The next chapter has already finished and I'm just waiting for my site domain name change ahah. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it then ':)

Is sad that you I'll not be able to continue the story here (maybe I'll have to take a better look in my wmatsui fanfic that I post here too, even that I just a sugar and romantic story without hot moments,scenes and kisses, the rule that involve Jurina make me worried too D:).
But I think that is better you post in another place and keep the story essence ^^ (I serious love how this story is in the moment and would be really sad if everything changed because Jhip restricted rules ;_;).

I just started reading your W matsui story (Kawaii!  :heart:) and I'll tell you that the Fanvid that inspired you by our awesome Renafangirl...I watch it probably everyday on my iphone LOL!!!! I was suddenly really happy that someone decided to base their fic on it! The last I read it was on mobile so I haven't been able to finish the latest chap, but I hope you'll update soon too then I'll also put in my spazz/input on it 'X)  :thumbup ...but yes be sure to check your story, because this issue is starting to become a little touchy to a lot of users on here from what I have observed. It's just really sweet and innocent so far though  :yep:

I've been a silent reader of all your fics and I'm sorry for that  :bow:
its such a shame that you can't continue posting it here but I'm begging you please do not change the format of the story  PLEASEEEEEEEE
you inspired me to write btw and although i really haven't posted anything yet, i will SOON. seriously tho, i have a long ass jurimayu oneshot sitting on my laptop but i still have no clue of where to post it and its really crappy too.

i just wanted say thank you for inspiring me, anonymousdowner. you are one of the best if not the best writer in jphip.

oh and i do follow you on tumblr but i had no clue that it was you different account names and all

Ahah, no don't apologize! It's fine, because I love and appreciate everyone be it views, silent readers, thank you pressers, & commentators ':) I am also very happy to hear that I was able to inspire you!! BEST?! THAT'S FLATTERING!  :nervous  :bow: I changed a little of what I have on here already, but not in the future updates that won't be on here. You should really post up your work, can't let the awesome imagination our 'Feels' have granted us go to waste! lol and hmm...If you're interested though you can also post your fic on here and on my blog once it is complete (Soon, 80% organized)


TO EVERYONE~!


Although my site is just a little blog...For anyone who would like to post up/link(Not on here if it relates to ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ of course lol)/whatever their AKB/SKE/NMB/HKT/JKT/SNH48 fanfics on there is completely welcome to! I will be creating a main page for "Fanfic Authors" where you can provide me a little intro description of yourself and then under the Fan Fiction menu people can find your name and enjoy your lovely work be it with art or not & I don't know if anyone does this but along time ago i read a fic with ost O__o that's nice isn't it? If you're into that, i think i might embed tracks into our reads lol. Again, I have no confidence in my bad grammar...but I will warmly accept anyone who would also like me to help read/review or just someone to talk to about the matter of your fics. I'm pretty friendly  :thumbsup Feel free to message me here, there(when it is open), or on tumblr if you'd like me to create a category/start a profile entry for you. Hopefully it'll be some fun. ':)
Title: Re: [UPDATE! 9/17/12] Forbidden Flower | Azalea| WMATSUI xAnnin
Post by: melon-lover on October 29, 2012, 01:01:26 PM
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Melon-lover: You make me feel flattered too! I’ve been slow at updating though, but I hope I’ll stay in your list of recent favorite authors with this update. I’m still waiting on your fanfics though, just so you know I always go back and read them a lot hence is why I know what you’re up to on tumblr LOL. It’s not stalking!’XD It’s called ‘Following’ ;) Your fanfic page is always a tab on my iphone, always a good read. Annin/Juri’s relationship should be a bit clearer with this first chapter so you will find out why they broke up and yes the sexual tension is definitely there…you will understand when the pedo bear emoticon shows up. With Rena though, her character is complicated you’ll understand in this update too. Then with black, I won’t get into her character until later in the story. Anyways, thanks for the comment and support! I hope you enjoy this read.

Awww that's nice of you to keep reading them haha. LOL this is true. But I can't help it. I loves me tumblr (and I also have posts on queue) Oh wow, I feel very flattered being on your iphone tab  :w00t: And I did enjoy it so, to the commenting:

Tulip:
Awww bless Kanon, especially when Jurina whispers in her ear. Come on KumiKanon!
I love Anna and Jurina’s past relationship. And then my feels went all over the place at the restaurant. Was that the beginning of the end?
Love the WMatsui interaction, “they make me feel so good~” (ref to ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ   XD )

Cornflower:
A WMatsui date in Disneyland and Rena changing into Amakuchi… what more can I ask more?  :lol:
Except! Then Rena/Amakuchi/Gekikara jumps Jurina in the night and bites her?! Awesome!
I really couldn’t wait for your next update but then… I saw your notice.

I'm sad that your fic is going on hiatus and I don't think you should hold back on detail, but maybe just haze over the more... intense scenes  :P But I understand it is your decision and I will wait patiently for whenever you do decide to update.
And I will also check out your blog when I have time  :)
Title: Re: [Important Author's Note 10/27/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: anonymousdowner on December 02, 2012, 04:33:02 PM
A/N:

Hello everyone, it's been quite awhile hasn't it? Here is a link to my tiny Blog --> http://akblasphemy48.com/ (http://akblasphemy48.com/)

I hope you all will enjoy the read^^

Hmm & to answer some questions...Jurina doesn't know what Annin sadly knows. Then to give it away---Yes, Rena-sensei has dissociative identity disorder lol. Anyways,you guys have been such awesome supporters & y'all should know by now there's lots of love from me to you guys lol. I especially appreciate those of you who always comes back to comment, makes an effort to comment longer, never usually comments but somehow does for my fic, etc. so basically every single one of you haha. It took awhile since I decided to do revisions for all my fics and with this chapter I think it's a little more improved so yay. I am happy to update for you awesome akbskeforumdwellers. ;A;

p.s. If any post in my blog is cutoff that probably means I am re-editing it -___-;;so sorry in advance.




Title: Re: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Sieka on December 02, 2012, 04:47:09 PM
You've finally had it up, I checked through it and you already nailed a few authors...that's nice. ^ ^
Hope to see the blog prosper...I'm still rethinking whether I want to join in...wait, I don't even know how to join in. =))
Ahh, anyhow, I saw that SayaMilky fic you did, I'm hooked. I hope to see more of your fics there or here, anywhere, I'm really looking forward to them. :)
Title: Re: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Ryo Hiroshi on December 02, 2012, 05:50:43 PM
OMG SIR FINALLY  :heart:
 :panic: :panic: :panic:
I have been waiting for you, my sir  :inlove:
Awwwwwwww, many updates I'm dying of happiness here  :wub:
It will take time for me but I'll try my best to read and comment for you  :nervous But maybe sometimes I'm just a lurker 8)2 Please forgive me  :bow:
Thank you for your hard work, sir  :bow: And all of the writers  :bow: Best wishes for you guys  :heart:
Title: Re: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: Dreamstalker on December 02, 2012, 06:15:54 PM
Awesome!...authors like you and the others inspires me. . .i'm not used on reading english etc. before, it's makes me fall asleep. . .hahah sorry...but now i stayed up till midnight just to read all your updates...XD stay cool!
Title: Re: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: nori on December 02, 2012, 09:03:41 PM
I've missed this so much I can't tell you how happy I am write now  :inlove:
That's a nice line up of author's you have there and I will make sure to continue to comment on the new blog  :)
Awesome job and seriously appreciate the effort you and others have put in to this  :thumbup
Title: Re: [Blog Update 12/2/2012] Forbidden Flower | WMATSUI +Annin
Post by: half-baka on December 09, 2012, 05:02:32 AM
hehe ive been staying on your blog reading and re reading stuff  :wub: thanks!!~~  :deco: