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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: -gibson-mayulover on February 10, 2013, 12:11:11 PM
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hi guys I'm kinda new here and this is my first fanfic and hope you like it heres my prologue
Prologue :huhuh
here I am doing my daily routine wake up, go to school, and go home its always the same. until that day. until I met her she change my life. my blank face gain some expression, shes the only one that can see me smile. My boring life has change thank's to her. now I notice many things thanks to her, I gain friends, trust, respect, and love thanks to her. but I know I can never have her she love someone else. I'm just her friend, my heart break every time I see her cry or with him. I hate that guy. he treat my love just like a toy. he play with other girls, he always cheats with her. I'm ready to sacrifice my friendship with her just to save her from that bastard. I will become the villain in her love story with that guy just to save her. I will use this blank face of mine to hide my true feelings. I know I will get hurt , have a broken heart or cry, but I'm gonna do it just to save you Yukirin.
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Hello :D
Please Continue it :D
I hope there's also WMatsui here in your work :D
GANBATTE ;D
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Mayuki!!!!!!! No Mayu ...
Continue please!
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YO! welcome ~ :DD
waaaaaah.. interesting interesting o:
i hope i see Wmatsui in your work ^__^ hehehe.
please continue ~
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Yay~ MaYuki :3
Update soon! :deco:
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.............Chapter 1 "mayu"
I wake up as the morning sun touch my face. I open my eyes and found myself in unfamiliar place. "oh yeah, this is my new house" I said to myself. and get up from my bed and go to the bathroom and change. and when I'm done I scan again my new house that my father gave me. yeah he gave me a house as a birthday present from last year. Because I'm getting tired to moved every 5 months just because of my mom and dad's work. Their business man and women every year they open a resto in all over Japan that's why they couldn't stay in one place. They maintain our business and make sure that they won't go bankrupt.
Well I don't really understand why they just can't stay in one place. But I don't really care cause I know I will stay here and finish my highschool here. I go to the kitchen to make my breakfast and prepare my first day of school.
As I go in the school gate I search from the board to find my class was, I immediately found my name " Watanabe Mayu Class A-1' I mumured myself. and go to the said class. When I got there, there are many girls " oh yeah dad want me to attend girls school" I said in my mind and take the sit beside the window. " Hi there I'm Matsui Jurina. What's you're name" a girl in front of me said to me. " Mayu, Watanabe Mayu" I said without thinking. She smiled at me and take my hand "nee- you're just new here right??. It's really rare for us to have a transfer student here at Sakura University" said Jurina. I look at her blankly but she still have a smiling face at me. " lets be friend Mayu" said Jurina. Then the door open and our sensei starts the class....
And I didn't notice the time it's already lunch time, I open my manga and start reading it when suddenly someone grab my arm and start pulling me " nee-Mayu lets eat I will introduce you to my friends" said Jurina while she dragged me out of the room. I try to resist her but she is just to strong.
When we reach the cafeteria some girls wave at Jurina. "Juri-na!!! " a girl with short hair smile at us. then Jurina dragged me at their table. "hi minna!!!" said Jurina while smiling. " yo who is this new face " said the short haired girl. "she is Mayu Watanabe" said Jurina. "whaa cute name for a cute girl, by the way my name is Yagami Kumi you can call me Kumin" said the short haired girl. " Mayu these are my friends that girl is Yagami Kumin she's our sempai one year older than us by her side is Kimoto Kanon is in the same year at us she is in class A-2 . the girl with melon pan is Matsui Rena also our sempai. said Jurina. "Matsui?" I said looking at Rena, " well where not blood related where just the same last name that's all" said Jurina.
We eat and chat " well actually they chatted me and ask me so many question" but I don't mind I just answer it with no expression. then Jurina ask Rena "nee- Rena where's the other?" Rena look at Jurina and said "Acchan is with Takamina in the Student Council room they have a meeting, Haruna is in her club looking for new recruit at her game club while Yuki is kinda busy with something and Yuko is I don't know where she is". "Oh I see" said Jurina and continue to eat her meal.
When we finish our lunch we go back at class and continue our boring life as a student. Time went fast and it's already 2:pm
I want to go home but Jurina grabbed again my arm " this girl is really clingy " I said to myself " Mayu want to hangout?" ask Jurina with a catsmile on her face.I stare at her then I said "no" then walk out to the room.
While I'm walking home I see a lover kissing in the park like nobody could see them. I just ignore it and went home to finish my unpacking and tidy my house. I was hungry with all the cleaning that I do so I went outside to buy some food. I passed again the park and I see the boy again but the girl is now gone and he is all alone now he smile at me while I ignore him and go to the store to buy some food. while at the store someone suddenly hug me from the back " Mayu glad to see you here " said Jurina with Rena with her. " Mayu what are you doing here?" ask jurina " just gonna buy some food" I said " Mayu we could eat at this famous Restaurant" Rena said while dragged me and Jurina. I could do nothing but to follow her while Jurina just smile and winks at me.
At the restaurant Rena sit with the table with three other girls I just look at her and Jurina just sit Beside Rena and tap the chair next to her. I sit next to Jurina " Rena, Jurina who is this cutie?" ask the girl with a cute dimple " ahh Yuko she is my new classmate Watanabe Mayu" said Jurina. " ohh The transfer student" said Takamina . " I see that's rare" said Haruna and back palying her PSP vita " umm guys can I ask you why is it you guys always say its rare ? what to be transfer in SAKURA UNIVERSITY??" I ask them. then they look at me " yes" Takamina said " Why" I ask her " because Sakura U. only accept student in pre-school or elementary school so that's why its rare to be able to transfer here in highschool " said Takamina I look at her and gave her a questioning look. " mayu the reason is to keep the student well maintain and know their weakness and improve it" Rena said " You must be really smart to be able to transfer in our school" Jurina said with a catsmile.
We ate and they chatted until I got home. I just go inside my house and said "what a tiring day" then go to the bathroom to take a bath and put my tiny short and a bit shirt then lay on bed and fall asleep.
sorry minna I didn't make yuki appeared in this chapter but she will come soon hehehe
sorry for my grammar error hehehe hope you like it :thumbsup
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.........Chapter 2
I go to school and go to class then sit on my place and look at the window and saw some girls running at the track field. Then suddenly someone hug my back again " Mayu moring" Jurina said with a catsmile face and then look to where I'm looking at " ahhh Mayu are you interested in track and field?" Jurina ask "no" I answer but still staring at the leading girl in the track " hmmm.. Yuki is really fast doen't she?" said Jurina now tighten the hug. Then Kanon came and tap Jurina on the shoulder " sorry if I disturb you're lovely moments but jurina can I have my math notebook now, I need it eh" said Kanon, Jurina just let go and said "okay" while the two get away I just keep staring at the girl named Yuki, Then our sensei came Kanon go back to her class and we start our lesson. I didn't notice the time well I don't the time well I don't listen to the lesson cause I already know it, I just draw some scribble on my notebook. Then It's lunch time. Jurina offered me to have some lunch with her again. But this time I didn't refuse because I know she will just dragged me if I refuse. Again in the same table I saw Kanon, Kumi, Rena plus the addition of Takamina, Yuko, Haruna and plus one more girl that I didn't know. we go to the table and Jurina said " Acchan you haven't met Mayu right?" The girl just nodded " Mayu this is Maeda Atsuko also our student council secretary" said Jurina I just nodded "okay now let's eat I want some ebi zushi" said Jurina. While in the middle of eating a girl came in to the group " sorry minna if I'm late" said the girl. I can't see her face, her hair blocked my view from her face" "It's okay Yukirin here some Dragon Maki" said Rena. But she saw me " nee I see some new face , Hi I'm Kashiwagi Yuki" she said then offered her hand I just stared at her hand but then Jurina hug me then kiss my cheek again "Yuki, Mayu is mine" she said then hug me tighter. Rena tap Jurina on the head " Mayu is not yours and she not you're pet" said Rena with a death glare. Jurina stop hugging me then relese me. then when I raise my hand just to stretch it, Yuki grab my hand and said " Mayu nice to meet you" Jurina just make a puppy look on me.
As usual when we finish our lunch and said where gonna met up in the school gate after school everyone agree and I said nothing. While in the middle of the class the teacher ask me to do some errand so I said to jurina to not wait me up. It's 3pm when I finish those errand and I want to go home to finish my homework and watch some anime but then I saw Yuki run to my direction then grab my arm "mayu want to watch some movie?" she said smiling. "why??" I asked her. " because my friend who is my date in this movie suddenly said he can't go " Yuki said to me with a teary eyes. "she must be sad and lonely to just suddenly ask me out" I think. Then I just nodded and she smile at me. then grabbed my are and link our fingered together.
At the cinema all I see are just lovers. When we enter then then sit I look up and down find myself right we are just the only one here without any lover. Then the movie start but no one is really watching, they are really busy to flirt with each other. Then I look at Yuk, she just stare at the screen no reaction at all. I don't know if she is really watching the movie or not but all I can say that she is sad I know, because i can see it on her eyes. "Yuki are you alright?" I ask her then she smile at me and said "yeah I'm fine"I just stared at her with no emotion on my face. Then she look at me then her phone to see what time it is " ehh it already 11pm sorry Mayu I don't know that movie is so long" Yuki said with apology. " Mayu I will take you home" said Yuki. I look at her then " my house is far from here I don't think that's a good idea" I said to her. "then how about stay at my house, my house is near her we could get there 15 minutes by walking" said Yuki with a smile. then just dragged me. like Jurina she is strong so I couldn't refuse.
Hi guy's hope you like this chapter 2
sorry for my grammar error
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Ah, Mayuki! AWESOME. :thumbsup
I like it so far please continue on
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MaYuki in a very interesting situation :thumbsup
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Interesting! MaYuki~ Wmatsu~
Very good chapter c:
please continue!
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Yes!Yes :P I read this two chapter... it's really good!
Mayuki wouhouuuuuuuu!!!!!
Please continue!! :D
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MaYuki and Wmatsui, I like it! :mon thumb:
Can't wait for your next update :mon star:
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Poor Mayu... She's being dragged everywhere by Jurina and now Yuki :lol:
Rena is jealous :kekeke:
The man Yuki like is absolutely a jerk :angry1:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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............ Chapter 3
We arrive at her house then I scan the place, it's pretty normal. then Yuki open their gate and let me in. she open the door and turn on the lights then she walk straight to the living room. " Mayu are you hungry?" said Yuki "no" I reply her. then I followed her, " Mayu do you want to watch the TV or play games?" Yuki ask me again. then turn on the TV, "Yuki where's your mom and dad?" I ask her " ohh their on vacation, so I'm all alone here so don't be shy Mayu' said Yuki. I look at her then sit to watch the TV. We watch for an hour then she get up and said " Mayu I'm gonna take a bath" then leave me all alone in the Living room. then I turn the channel to watch k-on, " Mayu I'm finish, you can take a bath now" Yuki said, I stared at her in her white nightgown then nodded my head she gave me a pink nightgown " Mayu I will let you borrow my pink nightgown" said Yuki. I take a bath and wear her pink nightgown then go to the living room again and I see Yuki reading a book. Yuki stop reading when she notice me then look at me " look good on you" she said. my cheek turn into pink then she grabbed me at said " let's sleep Mayu". " okay I will sleep on the sofa" I reply her. then she said 'no, you will sleep beside me or I will sleep on the sofa". I only look at her then Yuki grab me and dragged me in her bedroom. we sit in her bed then she chatted me and ask me many question.
until I fall asleep without notice..
I wake up 3 am I look beside me and I see Yuki's back, she still awake doing something in her phone, then I hear a sound. a crying sound " she's crying, but why?" I ask myself then she turn off her phone. when she's about to turn around I close my eyes and pretended to be sleeping. Then I feel my body being hug and something soft hit my face. I slightly open my eyes to peek what it hit me. Yuki's breast hitting my face and hugging me, then I hear her say " I don't want to be alone" she's still crying . I didn't do anything I just let her hug me.
It's now morning and I wake up then I see Yuki still hugging me, I remove her hands and go to the bathroom. I put back my cloths my on and go to the kitchen and makes her some breakfast. then I notice her watching me " Morning" Yuki said I look at her I want to ask her some question like "why are you cyring last night? why you look so sad?' but I can't. Yuki go beside me and said " look's delicious". I look at her " this is for you for letting me sleep here tonight" I said to her. she smile at me "really?? thank you" Yuki said. then place the meal on her table then she eat it up while I wash the dishes. " I need to go, Thank you for letting me sleep here last night" I said to her. she look at me then smile " hey how about let's hangout with Jurina, Rena and the others later?" she asked me I look at her and said " sorry I'm busy but thank you, bye". she only look at me ' okay I understand, Bye bye " Yuki said.
I got home and change my clothes and continue my unpacking " still a lot to unpack" I said to myself. then my phone ring I read the text message .
: mayu do you want to hangout?? I here with Yuki, Rena and others where gonna go to the to the amusement park:
- jurina;
I reply her
: jurina I can't I have to unpack my things here I'm busy
Jurina text me again
: really?? okay I'm gonna help you unpack where's you're house?
-jurina
I reply her
;my address is xxxxxxxxxxxxxx if you're going to help me how about you're plan to go to amusement park?
Jrina text
; don't worry
-jurina
I only sign when I read her message then continue my unpacking.
here's the chapther 3 minna hope you like it
and thank you for you're comments.
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Hehe, I bet thats all Yuki's plan to see Mayu again
Mayu so sweet and innocent and nice
I wonder how shes gonna make Yuki fall for her
Liking your story very much, please update soon :thumbsup
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Yuki gotta stop suffocating Mayu XD
But Yukirin is such a nice person though
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Yuki was crying but she has Mayu beside her :whistle:
Yuki'll meet Mayu at Mayu's house :hehehe:
Mayu is better than that guy, Yuki!! :temper:
Update soon, please :bow:
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Hi guys okay sorry for not updating this fic. i'm kinda busy, thank you for commenting in this fic. Hope you like this chapter.
Chapter 4
After I read Jurina's text I continue my unpacking. There's a lot to unpack because I did bring almost all of my collection of manga, anime DVD, figures, and many more. Then after 45 minutes I hear my doorbell being ringed. I open the door then suddenly Jurina hug me then give me her catsmile. "Mayu I miss you" she said then kiss my cheek. I just look at her. Then Rena hit Jurina and grab her collar " sorry for this Mayu" she said then bow at me. I let them all enter my house. When they see the thing that I need to unpacked they just frost from their position. I think their amaze or thinking what the hell. because all you can see in my living room are just box that needed to unpack.
Then Jurina open one of the box . When she open them her eyes widen " Wow!! you got all the volume in One Piece manga" said Jurina. when Takamina hear that she run close to the said box. " AHH!!!" she scream then grab one manga " I've been searching for this in the past five months" she said then she walk close to me "Mayu can I borrow this" she said with a puppy look in her face. i just nodded I didn't really mind cause I have four copy of that manga two for reading one for display and the last one for my collection. After three hour of unpacking where almost done. Thank's to their help. actually thank's to Acchan, Kanon and Yuki's help. The three of them were the one that actually help me because the other is just playing around. Takamina reads my One Piece manga and check my figures. Jurina also read some of my other manga and play with Rena. Rena browsing around my collection and read some then check my cosplay costume of K-on. while Haruna plays my playstation with Yuko. And Kumi lay down the sofa while reading some manga and playing games on PSP.
After awhile I decided to buy us some snacks. " Guys I'm gonna buy some snacks" I said to them. Then I hear Yuki's voice " wait I'm coming with you" she said. I didn't refuse her. she chatted me until we reach the overpass she just waited for me to go first. then I go. I'm in the middle of the stairs when I suddenly feel a hand grab my butt. I look who is touching my butt to my surprise it's Yuki. my eyes wided. Then she pull me in for a hug still touching my butt and whisper to my ear
"you're skirt is too short. the men below us is trying to peek in your underwear" she smile . My face is now red because of the position were in right now and also because of what she said. We stay in that position until the man below us pass us. Then I look at her and said " Thank You". She just nodded her head and contiune our walk my face is still red. We arrive at the store and I buy a lot of snack and some softdrinks. good thing Yuki is here to help me carry all of this.
When we arrive home they still busy playing and reading manga. Jurina approach us and said "WHoa!! that's a lot Mayu" then look at the wall clock and smile " Okay guys change of plan we gonna cancel our plan to go in the amusement park to a party" she scream and got the attention of the other girls. And they smile and said "Yes"
sorry minna for the gramar error and more..jaa
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Gotta love Yukirin's mama character :D
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Yuki grab Mayu's oshiri just to protect her from that man :hiakhiakhiak:
Wonder what'll happen next :on lol:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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okay guys sorry for the my late update!! hehehe :nervous :nervous
and thank's for the comment
Around 6 PM we started the party, I really don't want a party in my house but I couldn't refuse them. They did help me, Yuki and Rena started preparing the snack while Yuko and Jurina started playing the song and playing with my playstation. We are all having a good time until Yuko said "Yo!!! guys let's play the kings game" Haruna ask "what's that?". "simple look I have ten stick here, one stick have a red mark on the bottom while the other have number one to nine. If you pick the stick with a red mark you'll be the king and you can give any order that they cannot refuse, and choose a number that gonna do that, and if you pick the number that choose by the king you must do the orde. UNDERSTAND" said Yuko, then look at us, we just nodded our head. Then Yuko let us picked our stick, when we all got one I look what I get, and I got the number four. "Okay whose the King??" Yuko ask. Then Kumi raise her hand "okay Kumi give tell us you're order then a number" said Yuko. Kumi started scratching her head and said " ano,, how about number seven pretend to be a dog for the rest of the game". We all look at Kumi and she just smile. " Okay who is number seven?" Yuko ask. Jurina raise her hand while blushing "okay you have to pretend to be a dog by the rest of the game" Yuko said while laughing. "yes! I known that" Jurina said. "Oh!! as far as I remember dogs don't talk" Yuko said with a smirk on her face. "whoff whoff whoff whoff" Jurina bark at Yuko. "easy there, I'm not the one that give that order" Yuko said while pointing at Kumi, and Kumi just look the other way. "okay lets start over" said Yuko, and collect all the stick. And we pick again, now this time I got the number one. Then Haruna said "yes!!! I'm the king" while smiling. "Okay what's you're order my highness" said Yuko, "wait here" said Haruna then walk into the kitchen, we waited for like ten minutes then Haruna brought some chips with melted cheese on top and a bottle of hot sauced in her other hand.
Then she place it on the coffee table the pour all the content of the hot sauce on the chip, we just stare at her. "okay I want number five to finish this chips platter" she said it with a smile on her face. Then suddenly Rena show her stick with number five on the bottom. and eat the said chips. We all look at her with worried look on our face. Then Rena smile and said "hmm.. Yummy" we all look at her with "ehh" expression on our face. "you're lying" Acchan said, then come close to Rena and grab some chips then put some on her mouth. Then less than a second later her face change in red then started crying and saying the word 'Hot" then rust into the kitchen to grab some milk and cold water. The other started laughing at Acchan while Takamina follow her at the kitchen.
After Rena finish her meal we start over again we all picked our stick while Acchan picked her stick with an ice in her left hand and place it in over her mouth. This time I picked number eight. Then Yuko have a smirk on her face then raises her hand and said "Yes!!! I'm the King". Acchan sit on the couch "okay what's you're order" she said. then Yuko started walking and said "hmm.. I don't know?? Let me think" she started walking all over the place, then Jurina started barking at her "whoff whoff" Yuko look at her and said "little impatient are we? Okay I have my order " she said with a grinned on her face "Okay I want number four and number eight to have a french kiss".
My eyes widen when she said that, "okay who are are number four and eight?" Yuko ask. I slowly raise my hand and also Kanon. Then Yuko suddenly grab my arm, then pulled me next to Kanon. "okay you two have to french kiss each other" she said while smiling, then suddenly all the girls where coming closer to us and started locking their eyes on the two of us. Me and Kanon just nodded our heads while blushing. Then I try to look on Kanon's eyes but she just look on the other way. I try my best to have a blank face but inside i'm dying out of embarrassment and we didn't even started yet. "come on girls you can do it" Yuko said with a smile on her face. Then I look at her and swallow my pride and grab Kanon shoulder and coming closer at her, then I look at her lips and lock my lips unto her. I heard some girls said "kya!!" but I ignore them and close my eyes and also Kanon do the same. Then I try to put my tongue into her and she accept it. Our kiss become passionate and we seperate because of lack of air. Me and Kanon are Blushing really hard then I look around and see all the girls were also blushing.
Acchan, Yuko and Jurina are smirking while smiling, while Takamina and Rena were blushing and can't look at us, and Kumin have an uneasy look at her face while looking at Kanon. and Haruna having a airhead moment and Yuki busy with her phone.
"Excuse me" Kanon said then go to the kitchen and Kumi just follow her. Then we hear a ringtone of Heavy Rotation. and Yuki suddenly pick her phone and answer it. Yuko stated collecting all the stick again and arrange them, and said "let's play another round". but Yuki said she can't she need to go. "where?" Yuko ask. "Yoshihiku' said Yuki with a smile on her face. Acchan face suddenly change "Forget about him Yuki, let us play here and have fun" said Acchan. But Yuki said "but he need me now" Acchan glare at Yuki "why?" Acchan ask, But Yuki ignore Acchan Glare and smile " he said he need to go somewhere, and I need to take care of his baby bother" she said. "But that's hes responsibility Yuki not yours" said Takamina. Yuki still smiling and said " But I'm her girlfriend". I sense that there's gonna be a fight so I left and go to the kitchen, but there's Kanon and Kumi.
I try to look at them, and it seems that they didn't notice me. So I just look at them, and by the looks of it look like they are having an argument, so I just listen to them. "Come on Kumi, You know it's just a game" said Kanon while Kumi look the other side "but still she kiss you" said Kumi while pouting. Kanon grab Kumi cheek and makes her face Kanon. "Kumi you know I always love you. and it's just a game, that kissed means nothing, Mayu and I have to follow the order and you know it" she said but Kumi just try to look the other way , but Kanon stop her and kiss her on the cheek and said "Kumi you know I'm yours" and Kumi just smile and kiss Kanon on the lips.
Okay I don't want to disturb them so I got back to the living room. But look like they still fighting and Yuki have a black aura around her. Acchan said "That guy is a Jerk it's better for you to just leave him" but Yuki said "Acchan you don't know him like I do" Acchan try to say something but Takamina stop her "Acchan lets just let her do whatever she want" said Takamina. and Yuki got out Acchan look at Takamina. "how could you, she just gonna be hurt again" said Acchan. "whoff whoff whoff" said Jurina. "yes Jurina is right " Yuko said and give a sad smile "she knows that she gonna be hurt but still ignore it, because she love him" said Yuko, Acchan look down while Takamina grab her hand. Then Kanon and Kumi goes to the living room. Kanon is blushing while Kumi have a hand mark on her face. Then Yuko and Jurina suddenly come close with Kumi and look at her face, Then started laughing " look like you have some fun again Kumi" they said, while Kumi just pout. "okay lets continue our game" Yuko said then tossed the number nine stick.
We continue our party until nine Pm , then they help me clean our mess and finish it around 9:45 pm. "ah!! that was fun" said Jurina "haha!!Yeah, You're right" reply by Yuko. "we should hang out tomorrow" said Jurina but Rena reply her " No you can't we have a lot of homework to do" Jurina just frown and said "ehh?? but it's sunday tomorrow " but Rena ignore her. Acchan and Takamina said that they should go because they still have a lot of paperworks to do. And also the Kuminon pair says their goodbye. while Yuko hug me then grab my butt "bye Mayu and you have a nice butt" she said, then run but Haruna smack her head and said their goodbye. Rena just finish taking out the trash and said also "good night and see you on Monday Mayu" whileJurina just stay with the couch playing some PSP, but Rena suddenly comeback to take her little puppy home. I just smile silently while looking at them. Rena drags Jurina out while Jurina's screaming "bye Mayu!! have a goodnight sleep".
I look around my house and lock the door and go to the bathroom to take a bath and finish my homework then lay on my bed I sign and said " what a tiring day" then a smile curve into my face but suddenly I remember Acchan and Yuki's fightand mumble the word "Yoshihiku" then fell asleep.
okay minna sorry for my grammar mistake and all
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WHO!!!??? WHO THAT DAMN BOY WHO HURT YUKI SAMA???? I WILL KILL HIM!!!
NAH I THNK NO NEED TO DO THAT BECAUSE MAYU'S WILL HEHEHEHE
WANT THE NEXT AND NEXT NEXT NEXT ALREADY~
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To hell with that jerk!
but then, love is blind ... what to do if yuki is blindly in love? need to see what will happen...
by the way it was funny to see Acchan trying out the hot chips, and to see takamina and rena blushed at witnessing the french kiss!
those girls are cute! :lol:
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Kyaaa cant wait the next!
Yeah love is blind,
A bad one would be the best one in your eyes,
It would stop when you fall in love with another person
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Jurina is so funny here
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so much to read in a compact chapter
The game brought out a little more fun fro mthe characters :lol:
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stares....................
well... I love school life fics
but I cant write them too well
epic.........
next time, Im gonna read it on a smaller screen though
Mayuyu~ You are such a nice person this time
a lot of times when she's worried about Yuki, she does something bad
cuz she's NEZUMI
lets hope that Mayuyu doesnt do anything stupid here~
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Great interesting start of a new story...
Can't wait to see the next one
Thank you for the fic
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Haruna's hot chips :mon fyeah: Takamina and Rena blushed after saw Mayu's and Kanon's french kiss :mon lol:
Kumi was jealous :mon nyah:
How Yuko could understand what Jurina said when she was pretending as a dog :mon huh2:
Oh... so Yuki's boyfriend named Yoshihiku :mon cweepy:
All are worried about Yuki but she just ignored it :mon ghost:
Mayu in this fic is so nice :mon hanky:
But hope that someday she'll take Yuki away from that jerk :mon prayer:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
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Chapter 6
It's been two weeks since that party happened, and so far nothing really interesting happened. Well except the fact that since then Yuki don't join the lunch with us anymore.
We just finished our music lesson that day, and it's finally lunch time. Jurina come closer to me, I think she's gonna ask me to come join them, and have lunch together. But I remember Mrs. Kuu (Our homeroom teacher) ask me to bring her some files to her office. So before Jurina could say something I already told her that I need to go to Mrs. Kuu's office. She just smile and said "okay" then ran to the other room, I think she's gonna ask for Kanon's notebook for our History homework because we have the same History teacher, also gonna drag Kanon to have lunch with her.
After I gave Mrs. Kuu some files that she needed, I go to the school's garden. Because I want some quite time. Cafeteria is kinda noisy because of all the student , and also my homeroom because of my classmate. I go there because few student go to the garden. I saw a big sakura tree, and I sit under it. Then read my manga. I really enjoy the place and I love the view. Then I heard a voice. "Wow!! Mayu you really love anime huh?." I look to where that voice came from, then I saw Yuki right beside me. "Hello Mayu long time no see" she said. "ahh" is all that I can say to her.
Yuki smile and sit right beside me "Nee Mayu what are you doing here?" she ask. "I'm reading my manga, that's why I choose this place cause it's quite and few student come here right?" I said to her. "Mayu how's the other doing?" she ask me again. I just look at her then said "Their fine, I guess" Yuki just give me a sad smile. Then I grab my PSP and ask "Do you wanna play?" she just look at me and smile "Thanks" she said and take my PSP and started playing with it. Then after 15 minutes she said "Arrg! I can't take it anymore. I can't beat the boss here!! Mayu" she said then give me a puppy look. I just look at her then grab my PSP do defeat the boss, and she's just watching me play. After I defeat the boss I return it to her. "Wow Mayu you're really good with games. How would you like to join Haruna's game club huh?" she said. "If you want to talk with Acchan and others just do it, and not here" I said to her. Then she stopped playing and look at me with a sad smile on her face. "It's not like that I don't want to talk to them, It's just that I don't know how" she said. I close my manga then look at her in the eye "Just apologize, I know they will understand you" I said to her. "will you come with me?" she ask. I just nodded my head, "Tomorrow I will talk to them, please come with me" she said. Then I continue my manga till I feel my eyes getting heavier until I fell asleep.
I wake up feeling that someone petting me, No playing with my hair. Then I look up it's Yuki, her hands stroking my hair. "Ohh, you're up Mayu" she said with a smile on her face. Then I got up "Crap!! I'm gonna be late for my English class. Yuki what time is it?" I ask her. Then she just chuckles to me "Relax Mayu, remember all the teacher will have some meeting so we still have 30 minutes left before the class start" she said. Then tap her leg, I lay down to her, she just continue playing with my hair. "Mayu you're hair is so soft" she said. I just smile at her, then ask her "Yuki do you mind if I ask you a question?". "yeah sure, what is it Mayu?" she ask me. "Who is Yoshihiku?" I ask her. Then she said "He's my boyfriend for more than a year now, and Acchan and the others doesn't really like him" she look at me in the eye. Her eyes look sad but beautiful, so beautiful that I can't take off my eyes on hers.Then she lean close to me. "What's wrong Mayu? is there something on my face? she ask, but I didn't answer her. Then she lean in even closer, now our nose touch. I can smell her wonderful scent, it's like vanilla and lavender combine. Then she kiss my cheeks. And I instantly blush and try to get up from her lap, but she just stop me and said "Hahaha Mayu you're cute when you're blushing" I look away from her gaze and said "I I'm not". "oh! come on Mayu, why are you blushing? Jurina always kiss you right?" she said while laughing. I try again to get up but she tickle me. I can't hold my laughter anymore so I just laugh, then try to fight back.We tickle each other until I finally got on top of her. She still smiling while laughing, And i'm still trying to catch my breath. Then I look at her, And i'm stunned by her beauty, she look like an angel. I feel a hand on my cheek "Mayu are you okay?" she ask me. Then I get off her and look the other way. And said "yes i'm fine" she just smile at me. "hahaha Mayu you're really cute when you show you're smile" she said.
Then we heard the bell, means we need to go back to our own class, she look at me then grab my hand and started running. As we run I can't help myself to look at her and feel that my heart starting to beat really fast. I grab my shirt above my chest using my free hand, and ask myself what is this feeling?
okay guy's sorry for this boring chapter.
and thank's for the comment
@ gek geki- well mayu starting to feel different maybe she will do someting about it hehehe but who knows what she's gonna do
@DC2805- yeah we can say that Yuki is blindly in love in here. she just need that snapped to wake her up heheh
@kurogumi- yeah love may be blind. and it will only stop if we get hurt really bad or fall to someone else
@ kahem- yeah she is
@kurosawa87-sorry I didn't bring any character in this chapter
@Shinoki- thank's for the comment sorry for my bad writing style it's my first time ehh
@cisda83- Thank You
@leEwẬy- hahaha you're the only one that notice about Yuko. maybe she understand Jurina because she is a squirrel joke
thank's for the comment minna
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Mayuki is so cute together...
Can't wait to see the next chapter
Thank you for the update
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NO ITS NOT BORING!
ITS REFRESHING,ITS EXPLAINED HOW MAYUKI DEVELOP THEIR BOND
ITS A PART WHEN CHARACTER START TO CHANGE
MAYU START TO SMILE,AND YUKI MAYBE START TO LIKE SOMEONE ELSE ALTHOUHT NOW STILL NOT REALIZED,YET
JUST NEED TIME
TIME WILL SHOW YOU
THANK
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The MaYuki interaction :wub:
I don't expect new characters to pop up in every chapter :lol: I just expect new things to happen to the old ones :nervous
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Looks foward to more~~
...that Yoshikiku guy.... yeah, I agree with Acchan and the others, he ain't good.....
He means less Mayuki, though getting rid of him means Mayuki skyrocket!
Though a character like him ain't a bad idea for a story with romance~~
I have no complaints about your writing style to be truthful~~
but I would be a bit happy if you would be clearer about when chapters are released cuz I'm a bit of a clutz, so I can't keep track
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This chapter is nice not boring at all :mon misch:
I totally agree with Acchan and another that this Yoshihiku man isn't a good one :mon thumb:
He has made Yuki cry a lot :mon uggh:
But his personalities and his exist were necessary for Mayuki to develop their feeling toward :mon speechless:
Oh...Mayu began to have feeling toward Yuki :mon squee:
Yuki treats Mayu very gentle :mon inluv:
Wonder if she had feeling with Mayu or not :mon huh2:
Want to know what'll happen next :mon dunno:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
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This is the first MaYuki fic I've read, and I like it! Usually I only read AtsuMina and KojiYuu, but now I think I will try MaYuki too. Please continue :)
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this is not boring! jurina is hilarious i like the way she aproachs mayuyu xDD and yuko understanding her barks ahahaha
i have a good time reading your chapters. mayu is totally in love with yuki, i don't want them to fight TnT but i think its inevitable, ne? u.u
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Can't wait for the next update!
This is not boring and its so hilarious!
Update soon!
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cant wait the next update~
mayuki!
mayuki!
mayuki!
yeah
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I wanna kick his a** this Yoshihiko!! because Yuki is kind !!
yeah she is lonely.and kind with everybody -_-
Poor Mayu she will slowly fall in love with Yuki but Yuki won't notice it :(
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i just read all chapter and woooww its interesting :twothumbs
cant wait for the next chap especially when yuki start to fall for mayu :inlove:
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Update please...
Can't wait to see your next chapter
Thank you, -gibson-mayulover-san
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Chapter 7
It’s been a month since I started to have this feeling, when I look at her I can feel my heart beating much faster than before. Acchan and the others already forgive her from the party that happened to my house. And they already acting like it never happened, sometimes Yuki excuse herself to meet her lover, Acchan and others just let her. Because they know if they try to stop Yuki, they will just end up fighting all over again.
It’s finally time to go home, Jurina just like usual drag me into the school gate along with Kanon on our side. When we reach the school gate we saw Rena, Kumi and Yuki waiting for us. “nee Rena-chan where the others?” Jurina ask, “Acchan and Takamina have some meeting in the student council while Yuko and Kojiharu said that they need to finish their project, so they will be staying late in the library” Rena answered while smiling… “Oh “ Jurina just reply to her.
As they talking to each other while walking, my eyes suddenly daze on her back. Jurina just wave her hand over my face but I didn’t notice it, until she kiss my cheek. “Nee Mayu, Now I finally got you’re attention” Jurina said then place her arm over my shoulder. “huh?” the only thing that I could say to Jurina. But Jurina just chuckled to my reponse.
When it’s time to separate, on our way Jurina just pout and said “Ehh!! I wanna go to Mayu’s house again”. But Rena just drag her away. Kumi and Kanon also bid their goodbye. And now it’s only me and Yuki
As we were walking I didn’t notice that we miss my house. “Eh !!” Is the only thing I could say when I saw where I am. And Yuki just smile at me “mayu you’re spacing out again” she said, I just blush. “why didn’t you tell me, huh” I said to her, while facing the other way and going back to my house. But she grab me and make me face her, “Mayu since were here how about stay at my house for tonight?” she said. I was shock by the sudden invitation but I try to ignore her. But she keep forcing me to go with her. So I ended up being drag again by Yuki.
As we arrive into her house, I notice nothing change, and still quiet. I think her parents are out again that why she drag me again. “Mayu are you hungry?” she ask “A little bit” I reply to her.
then she go to the kitchen and get some cup of noddles and some beverage. “Ehh what’s that” I ask her, she just smile at me and said “food and drinks”. I just stare at her while preparing our so called “meal”. “Is that a cocktail?” I asked her, she just nodded. “Ano I’m underage” I said, but she just still preparing the drinks. I can see a bottle of vodka, milk and Kahlua. “Don’t worry nobody gonna know about this” she said while smile at me.
I gave her some uneasy look, but she just smile at me “Beside don’t you want to experience to drink” Yuki says. I just give up, then she put a ice on the glass and add the vodka and Kahlua and give it to me. “This is Black Russian” Yuki said, then handed me the drink. I sip on it and the first taste that come to my mouth is the flavor of coffee. “Coffee?” I asked her, she just smile at me. “If you want much sweeter you can add some milk” Yuki said, then add some milk on my drink. “Now it’s called white Russian” she said. I try it and it taste much better now..
We drink until she passed out, It made me smile, to think that she’s the one that ask me to drink. I handle alcohol much better than her. As Im cleaning up our mess, I heard her say “I want some strawberry” I just chuckled by her action. And come closer to her, and look at her face. It amaze me, even though she’s asleep she look so beautiful as usual. I come closer to her and brush away her messy bangs. “I think you’re just lonely” I mumble at myself. And come even much closer than her, now I can feel her breath. “I want to stay by you’re side forever” I whisper to her and lock my lips unto her. But I realize of what I I’m doing, and push her away. She’s now lying on the floor still mumbling about something. I just back away by my action, and put my hands over my lips. I can feel that my heartbeat beating like a drum, and my face is redder than usual. “What I’m doing?” I asked myself while looking at her.
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Finally! A kiss :farofflook: :onioncheer:
Just keep going Mayu and Yuki'll be your :on GJ:
Mayu spacing out on the way to go home and end up stay at Yuki's house :on lol:
Yuki seems not as good at drinking alcohol as Mayu :hehehe:
Everything is more and more interesting :kekeke:
Wonder when'll Yuki fall in love with Mayu :on cloudeye:
Too curiuos about what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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The atmosphere between Yuki and Mayu is getting hot...
Can't wait to see more
Thank you for the update
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Mayu getting her alcohol and a kiss :lol:
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1. Being curious more and more.
2. Really like this fic. :D : :O2
and last
3. I really wish you cab update soon or maybe everyday ehehhh :inlove: :twothumbs
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still long time for Yuki to realise that Mayu loves her -_-'
poor Mayu :(
gambare Mayuuuu!!!
PS: by the way the kiss scene made me remember a manga I don't remember the title maybe girlfriends something like that :P
you.must continue this fic or I ll kill you if you don't (I'm kidding XD )
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Waaa.. :P ..I finish it all at once..it's rare for me.. :lol:
Love this story..all couple in this fic is my fav.. XD
n the kiss scene make me remember something.. XD
KEEP IT UP!!!
:thumbsup I vote for continue updating... :twothumbs
:peace:
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Yuki felt lonely,ìts because her boyfriend
C'mon yuki you have mayu,but i guess itp still long time for yuki to notice mayu,hope that time she not to late to get mayu.
Thank for the update
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Chapter 8
After that kiss, I tried to avoid her. I leave when she come to have lunch with us, I stay late at school so I cannot see her, and I tried not to talk to her. I just can’t face her, I’m too embarrass to what I did. Until one day, she got me cornered in the garden, she push me against the tree, I try to look the other way but she touch my cheeks, and make me face her. My heart beating like crazy right now, and I feel really hot.
She look at me with a serious face, then give a sad smile. “Mayu do you hate me?, did I do something wrong?” She asked me, but I just look down. She didn’t do anything wrong, and I didn’t hate her, I don’t know what my feelings for her. “Answer me!!” she said, but I just look at her, I can’t answer her, I just can’t. Then she step back and look at me, she give me a sad smile and said. “okay I understand, if you hate me, I won’t bother you anymore” and she walk away slowly.
When I saw her walk away, my chest hurt, and without thinking I grab her shirt. “I I d-don’t hate you, it just me, I did something wrong to you” I said, and she just look at me. “Mayu” she said while looking at me, then she pulled me in for a hug. “would you mind telling me what did you do, and why are avoiding me?” she whisper to my ear. “I kiss you” I reply to her. Then she just look at me “huh?” she said while giving me a questioning look. “Yuki I said I kiss you, remember last time you invited to you’re house” I said to her while blushing.
Then she smile at me and laugh, “Mayu is that the reason why are you avoiding me?” she asked, and I just l nodded. Then she grab my shoulder and give me a quick peck on the lips. “now were even” she said. And I just froze by her action, “Mayu please don’t avoid me for something like this” she said with a serious face. I just look down and said “Gomen”. “you already French Kanon right? So please don’t be embarrass over something little like this” she said, then give me a re assuring smile. I just look at her “hai” I reply to her.
Then she tap my head “And beside were friends right?” she said, I look at her and just nodded my head. Then her phone rings, and she excuse herself to answer it. I think it’s her lover that calling her. While I’m looking at her I can feel my chest hurt, “yeah were friends” I mumble to myself and walk away from her…
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Yey! Update! :fap
Omygosh! Mayu did not got away from Yuki.. :nervous Mayu told the truth and Yuki gave a quick friendly pecked.. Ouch! Yuki sees Mayu as a friend only.. Yuki why so dense >_<
I wonder what will happen next.. Can't wait.. :thumbsup
Thank you for the latest update :bow:
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poor mayuyu.. :cry:
yuki...mayu is hurt there.. :(
XD thx for the update.. :heart: :cathappy:
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Ouch for Mayu
Alcohol is a bad thing for relationships
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Man,yuki is so dense or blind? Does she know the mean mayu kissed her?
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I really had the feeling that it will turn like this
my heart hurts me so poor.Mayu ;_;
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Ah... They are only friends... REALLY....
I doubt it...
Can't wait to see more Mayuki moment...
Thank you for the update
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Mayu advoid Yuki since the kiss :stoned:
But luckily, they're now back to normal again :on woohoo:
But why Yuki :gyaaah: Why you just see Mayu as a friend :stoned:
It's make Mayu hurt :on shady:
Maybe Yuki's love to that jerk make she blind or become so dense :on voodoo: :on voodoo:
Hope she'll find out Mayu's love soon :prayers:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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WHO'S NAME YUKI BOYFRIEND? I ALREADY FORGOT HIS NAME,AND TOO LAZY TO CHECK IT OUT AGAIN TEHEHEHE
WHATEVER HIS NAME I DONT LIKE HIM,WHAT SO GREAT ABOUT HIM THAT MAKE YUKI BE SO BLIND LIKE THIS...
EVEN MAYUYU KISSING NOT WORKING ON HER
DAMM THAT BOY, WHAT SPELL YOU GAVE ON YUKI!!!???
SHE FEEL LONELY BUT STILL LOVE HIM SO MUCH?
SO FRUSTRATING,I WANNA SLAP YUKI HAHAHA
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awwww mayu
how ccould you yukii you break mayus heart
please update soon
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Chapter 9
Days, weeks, months had passed since that conversation. And by that time I became much closer to her, she became my best friend, she always talk to me, she tell me her secret, but I never told her my true feelings for her. Acchan and others notice our closeness and we often get tease by them. They even called us Mother and daughter, and she spoiled me. But I know that she will never be mine, she love someone else, and it hurt me.
It hurt me when she smile for him, it hurt me when she always excuse herself to answer her phone, it hurt me when she cry because of him, but what it hurts me the most is I can’t do anything about it. I can’t, I’m scared of losing her, I’m scared of being rejected, I’m scared of losing our friendship. So I just pretend that it never hurt me, I use my blank face of mine to hide all of these feelings, that I have for her. I never show my real emotion in front of her, I always smile when I’m with her, I didn’t tell anyone about my feelings for her. Nobody knows my secret, except for me.
Until that one day, that day I received a text message from her, from Yuki she text me to come to her house, she gonna tell me a secret. I reply her that I can’t Yuko and Jurina gonna sleepover to my house. But she insisted, the tell me to come, she really need to see me. I got worried about her, so I go to her house. I’m on their door and about to knock but she suddenly open it and pulled me inside. She hug me tight, and I just let her and return the hug. When she clam down we both sit on the sofa.
After 10 minutes of comforting her, I think it’s finally time to ask her why she called me. “Yuki why did you called me?” I ask her, but she just blush and hug me again, now her head is in my shoulder. “Mayu” she whispered to me. I shivered by her action, but I ask her again “Yes Yuki?” but this time she come closer to me and said “Mayu we finally did it” I just froze. Then smile awkwardly to her “what?” I ask her, then she broke our hug and put both of her hand on her face while blushing. “Mayu we did it” she said, “huh?” I asked her, now I felt my chest hurt. Then she hug me again “Ahh Mayu I want to tell you this, because you’re my closest friend” she said, I froze “At first, it hurt but it felt um… you know” she said to me. I couldn’t look at her, but then she grab my hand and hold it tight. “Mayu you’re the only one that I told this secret, please don’t tell anyone about this” she said, and I just nodded to her weakly.
After that I can’t take it anymore, so I just stand up and go to the door. “Mayu where are you going?” she ask me, “I need to go home, somebody going to visit me” I said while trying not to change my voice. “Mayu can I co…” she said but I didn’t let her finish I run away from her as fast as I can, I want to get away from her, I want to be alone.
When I got home, I let my emotion burst, for the first time I cried, I cried with all my heart contents. I didn’t even notice that Yuko and Jurina come in and saw me cried. Maybe I forgot to lock the door when I entered. But before I could even say something they both hug me. “Mayu” Jurina whispered to me, while Yuko just give me a shoulder to cry on. After that I told them the truth, I told them my all feelings for Yuki. And both seems shock at first but they understand and comfort me….
After that incident both of them became much closer to me, And I’m not the only one that knows my secret………..
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Mayu.. It hurts me to see you're hurting.. :cry:
Still curious what Yuki going to say to Mayu? Is it about the boyfriend? Is it about her feelings toward Mayu? Or something? Oh no! Are they going to avoid each other? My MaYuki feels :cry: </3 Yuki leave your boyfriend and go to me, i mean to Mayu..
What happen next? Can't wait.. :twothumbs
Thank you :bow:
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damn yuki what are you doing to mayu
I cried when I read it it is so sad
I hope she is happy that she made mayu sad with her actions :banghead: :angry:
anyway pleease update more ^^
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Poor Mayu... she was in dilemma ...
She was always worried about her secret being known by others... especially to Yuki....
What's going to happen next
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
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Hurt it hurt
If i was mayu,i totally felt Lost,its over...but just because im loosing doesnt mean im lost...LOL
But really mayu! I think it time to give up,yuki totally in love with that guy,being a third person its painful
Gibson-san after read this i dont think yuki deserved mayu
Thank for the update
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Mayu is lost in her own actions and pondering over what she should do will only force her into tears
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omg happened to me i can feel the pain of Mayu, When the person you love tell you that it's just like your world is falling ._.
Aaah, this is so sad and brings me so many memories ~
Anyway gambatte Mayuyu! Jurina and Yuko take care well of her.
i wanna read your next chapter! How she will face Yuki?
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UPADATE PWIIIIISSS
OMG YUKI,HOW COULD YOU,BUT ITS DOESNT MATTER SHE DOING IT BECAUSE SHE LOVE HIM,WE CANT BLAME HER FOR SOMETHING LIKE THIS,EXCEPT SHE AGAINTS THAT
I WANT MAYUKI TOGETHER!! YEAH BUT WHEN? ITS SO PAINFUL SEEING MAYU LIKE THAT,LUCKILY SHE HAVE YUKO AND JURINA NOW
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argrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhhh :mon headbang:
I hate knowing that Mayu is crying :mon waterworks:
Why Yuki can't see that she is hurting Mayu :mon whine:
What's gonna happen :mon huh:
I wonder if Mayu will continue like nothing happened or ignore Yuki like the other time :mon tantrum:
I can't beer all of this pain :mon runcry:
now that Yuko and Jurina know that Mayu loves Yuki many things will change :mon impatient:
update please I wanna know what is gonna happen :mon whine:
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poor mayu :oops:
i hope you can make yuki realize het feeling towards mayu and make her suffer to chase over mayu ahahaha lol :w00t:
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Chapter 10 part 1
Yuko and Jurina became much closer to me, and they always steal me from Yuki whenever where alone. They never leave me, they even take care of me when I got sick, they always there for me. Yuko become like my older sister that I never have, while Jurina err… just stay like herself, always kiss me and hug me whenever she can.
I act like nothing happened, I act like I’ve never been hurt, who I’m I to be mad at Yuki. Of course it’s bound to happened, she have a lover and I’m just her friend. But it still hurts, I always put a mask when I’m with her, I always smile, I always listened, I always give my shoulder for her to cry on. There once a time that Yuko said to me that I’m a great actress, she wouldn’t thought that I have all these feelings for Yuki. And yet, I can’t keep my acting in front of Yuko, I let her see my real self infront of her.
There ounce a time that Acchan invited all of us to have a summer vacation in her vacation house, All of us accepted the invitation. My mom and dad want me to go home and spend time with me, but I refuse, I can’t let them see me like this. They can I easily read me, After all they are my parents.
When I’m waiting for the others to come at the train station, I saw Yuko and Nyan Nyan. Yuko carrying all the bags, while Nyan nyan just playing her PSP. I help Yuko and take some bag to put it on the side. While I’m putting the bag down I suddenly heard a voice calling me.
“Mayu”
The voice said, when I look where the voice coming from, I saw Yuki holding hands with a boy. She release her hand with the boy and hug me, then she introduce me to the boy.
“Mayu this is Yoshihiku, my boyfriend”
I just nodded my head, while he smile at me. At last I finally saw him the boy take away Yuki’s innocence. Now I can see why Yuki so in love with him, he’s handsome and looks nice. And yet, I felt jealousy towards him, I have these feelings that I can’t trust him, and I feels like that I’ve seen him before, but I can’t remember.
When Acchan arrives with the others, her expression change, she looks pissed. Then turn her phone on and called someone. After that we all go to Acchan’s vacation house, when we got there, there’s a man waiting for us. Then Acchan introduce us with him
“Minna this is Carl, my bodyguard and our guardian for this summer”
Acchan said then we go to her house, after that we decided to choose our rooms, two person per room. Like the last time it’s decided by a game. We all picked a stick and below the stick there’s a color, if you’re color match then that means you’re roommates.
“Ehh!!? Where’s mine?”
Yoshihiku asked, but Acchan just glared at him. Then point at Carl
“You’re staying with Carl”
“Ehh!!?”
“You and Carl are the only two boys here, so you think you can stay with us, you’re wrong. Carl will keep an eye on you, so you can’t do anything funny here in my house”
Acchan said in a cold way, He just nodded. After that I check my stick, And of course, of all the people here, Yuki also picked the same. Acchan partner is Yuko, Takamina’s partner is Nyan Nyan, Rena’s partner is Kanon, Jurina’s partner is Kumi, and last Yoshihiku’s partner is Carl. After that we go to our own room to place our things. It’s already late so we decided to have dinner, and clean our self. Then go to sleep for tomorrow’s activity.
While I’m lying down on the bed, Oh yeah there one only a king size bed on each room, so that means you have to share it with you’re partner. I’m reading my manga while Yuki’s brushing her hair in infront of the mirror. We heard a knock on our door, so Yuki’s opened it. When I glance who is it, I saw it’s her boyfriend, laughing and talking to her. I just put my headphones on and face the other way, so I can’t see her. After some minutes, I felt that someone getting on the bed, but I ignore it. Until someone hug me from behind, and I tickling my neck. When I look it up who is it, It’s Yuki, hugging me and playing with my neck.
I take off her hand on me and get up, then she also got up. I was about to get out from our room when she pulled me in again for a hug. I take off my headphone and ask her “What?” she just look at me then, smile
“Where are you going?”
She asked me. And I answered her “I’m just taking a walk” then go infront of the door and opened it, she was about to say something but I put my headphones on so I can’t hear her. Then walked outside to get some fresh air
While I was walking, I saw the Kuminon pair having a ice cream together. I look at them, they look so sweet and funny. Then out of nowhere Yuko tap my shoulder, and I just look at her
“Yo! Mayu can’t sleep huh?”
I just nodded at her, then she sit beside me and asked why I am watching the pair. I just look at her and said “I envy them” after that she just tap my head. Acchan and Jurina saw us and come closer to us with a plastic bag in their hand.
“Ahh Mayu, Yuko let have some drinks to our room”
Acchan said, I just nodded my head, I little drink wouldn’t hurt right? And beside I don’t wanna go to my room and see her again. After that we prepare our snack and drink in the room, with Acchan, Yuko and Jurina.
“hey lets invite Kumi?” Jurina said
“Ehh!! Are you sure that she wouldn’t tell this to the others?” Yuko asked
“Yes, I’m sure, and beside she’s my roommate” Jurina reply to her
After that Jurina text Kumi to join us. And the party begin with only five of us, and that time I forgot all of my problems. I laugh at Yuko’s stories about her attempt to see Nyan nyan’s naked. I smile at Acchan love story with Takamina, and I just giggle when Jurina told us how Kumi confess her feelings for Kanon, I feel pity for Jurina when Kumi told us the time that Jurina got beaten by Rena, when she accidentally ruin one of her friends artwork in their home town.
That time I feel happy, and sad. Happy because I have friends like them, I’m having fun listening to their story, And yet sad because I don’t have funny stories to tell them.
While drinking Yuko suddenly blurted out my feelings for Yuki, Acchan just laughed because Yuko’s acting while drunk, while Kumi just looking at me.
“Hey is it true?”
Kumi just asked me, while Acchan take off her attention to Yuko and look at me, Of course I denied it
“Really? Because I observe you since you kissed Kanon, I always seen you looking at her, and also you give her that look that I give to my Non-chan” Kumi said
But I just laughed it off, damn Kumi read me. But then I suddenly felt a hug from my back. When I look it up, it’s Jurina……. She then tighten her hug and whisper to me
“Mayu just forget about Yuki, Just love me instead, I won’t hurt you”
I shivered on what she said, but I ignored it, she's drunk and she don’t know what she’s talking about. We just continue our drink until I passed out.
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Mayu feels tortured in this situation and Jurina was probably the last person she would really want in this
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I hate that boyfrien of yuki
maybe mayu knows him because she has a feeling that she knows him
please update more ^^
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It's getting more interesting.. :fap
Yuko and Jurina.such a good friends.. Always on Mayu side.. Whoa! Jurina she seems to be still sober when she said that to Mayu.. :banghead: Alot of people will have a headache when.they wake up! Hang-over! >_<
Oh! What will happen next? Will Yuki find out about Mayu's feelings? Can't wait :thumbsup
Thank you :bow:
Update soon :twothumbs :bow:
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The most important thing now is to find out how yuki reaction when she knows mayu feeling towards her :panic:
ahahahhhaa please i cant wait long anymore to find all those things :inlove:
please update soon as possible :deco: :twothumbs
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I THOUGH JURINA IS WITH RENA
SHE LOVED MAYU?
ISN'T IT WEIRD?WHY THEY DON'T ASK YUKI TOO DRINK TOO?
IT SEEM YUKI IS SO DISTANT
MAYU SEEM KNOW YUKI BOYFRIEND.HOW?
MORE AND MORE INTERESTING,
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Mayu passed out... maybe something no good at all is coming :frustrated:
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Lately I've been shipping JuriMayu so I'm a little bit happy about this XD
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Ah... What's going to happen to Mayu and Yuki next?
How about Rena and Jurina?
Can't wait to see more
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I hate Yuki's boyfriend :on cloudeye:
Mayu has a feeling that she know Yoshihiku (Don't know why but I also hate his name) :wahaha:
Yuko, Acchan, Jurina are really good friends. Mayu's lucky to have them :on drink:
Mayu seems to try to separate her from Yuki but Yuki doesn't know it so she hugs her, plays with her neck, talks to her without knowing anything :on hobo:
Why God??!!?!?? Yuki kick that jerk's *** and get back to Mayu :on speedy:
Jurina loves Mayu? :shock: I thought she and Rena are couple :sweat:
Although I'm not a Jurimayu shipper but if it made Mayu feels better then I'll prefer Jurimayu :on lol:
Mayu passes out... I think something bad will happen with Yuki or Mayu :on polter:
When I read chapter 9, knowing Yuki and that guy, who I don't want to remember had done "it" :on shady:
My feeling is :fainted: :err: :temper: :stoned: :on voodoo: :on kimbo: :on_puddle: :scolding:
Want to know what'll happen next :OMG:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
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yeah me too i though jurina and rena already a couple,but looks like it is not, they had different room...rena with non-chan and jurina with kumi
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Chapter 10 part 2
When I wake up, I suddenly felt my head hurts, it’s like something hitting my head. I try to get up from the bed, and when I did, I saw Acchan’s head on my legs, while Yuko, Kumi and Jurina are lying on the floor. The room is filled with stench of alcohol, and feels uncomfortable, so I decide to continue my sleep in my room. While I was walking I check what time is it, it’s 7:15 am. It’s too early.
When I open the door, I saw Yuki’s sleeping on the bed, I really don’t want to be by her side this time. But I have no choice, I don’t want to get back to Acchan’s room, So I just laid my body on the bed and cover myself on a blanket, I heard Yuki’s voice. I think I wake her up, but I’m too tired to talked to her, so I just ignored her.
It’s 2:28 pm when I woke up, I look around the house but I didn’t see anyone. So I change my clothes and go outside, I saw them in the beach, they are in their swimsuit, playing and having fun. I look to see where Yuko are, and I saw her playing with Nyan Nyan, looks like she didn’t feel the effects of alcohol, while I saw Acchan lying in the chair and sleeping with Kumi. The others playing happily on the water, and I’m just watching them.
After some minutes, I finally saw Yuki, she having a walk with her boyfriend while Carl follows them. I just laugh at Acchan’s plan to not ruin this vacation. Last night she said she called her bodyguard just keep an eye for Yuki’s lover, Yuko and the others didn’t asked why she did that, I know she hated that guy, but I want to know the reason. So I come closer to Acchan and Kumi and wake Acchan’s up. When she woke up, she look at me with a bored expression on her face
“hmmm.. Mayu what do you want?” she said
I just continue to wake her up, and when she finally did, I asked her the question that bugging me for some time now. “Nee Acchan, why do you hate Yoshihiku so much?” after I said that to her, she just give me a irritated expression, then get up and look at me
“simple he is a player, he even tried to flirt to me”
Acchan said with a irritated voice, I just look at her and said “Eh?”
“After I reject him, he called me and Takamina disgusting, so I slap him, I always say’s to Yuki that he’s not good but she always don’t listened to me”
Acchan said, I just stared at her “now I see why always cry to me, but she doesn’t tell me the reason” I just smile bitterly to what I’ve heard. But Acchan notice it
“Why do you asked?”
she said, I just look at her and said “I feel like I’ve seen him before”
“Mayu stay away from that guy, if Yuko said last night were true I think you should find other person that will love you”
I just smile to her, and denied again my feelings for Yuki
“Mayu, Yuki’s blindly in love with that bastard”
My chest hurt when Acchan said that, but I get up and leave her. While I was walking in the shore, I suddenly felt a someone following me, when I look behind I didn’t see anyone, so I was about to ignore it. But
“BOO!!!”
Jurina scream in front of me, I fell down due to shock, but Jurina help me get up. And I hit her “Jurina what was that for?” I asked her, then she smile at me
“Nothing, It just that you look down”
she said, “Don’t scare me like that” I said to her
“Nee Mayu lets go to the park” Jurina said
But then when she said the word “park” I suddenly remembered something. The park near my house, The lover kissing in the park, the one that I saw in my first day of school. I just smile bitterly , and mumble “It’s him” it’s him the boy that smile to me in the park…
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Ah..that guy!! he also try to flirt with Mayu... :angry: ..huh..that guy...somone!!! hit him for me..
:cry: :cry: poor mayu..
:cry: poor yuki...
Yuki already blindly in love with that guy.. :smhid
Why I think Yuki doesn't deserve Mayu love... :(
n Jurina that love Mayu deserve her more.. ;)
Anyway...thanks for update... :cathappy: :deco:
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will kill that bastard :angry: If I could ^^
poor mayu but hey dont give up you will find love in the end :cry: :cry:
yuki why do you keep being with him he is an a**hole
please update more ^^
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The guy will only make trouble although I wonder why acchan allowed him in the first place.
Might end up helping Yuki realize her mistake
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oh man, how can Yuki be in love with such a douche. :thumbdown:
what is Jurina going to do in the park, a confession, maybe? :w00t:
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Yukirin open your eyes please :frustrated:
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Ahh.....*takes out guns and bombs* Where is that bastard!?!?? *shoots everyone*
Here freaking flirted with MY baby! And he is dating many girls at the same time!! D:
Kill him!! >~<
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i vote in the plot that Yuki deserves Mayu's love but now i'm not sure xDD
Now Mayu remember the truth what she will do?? Damn Yuki u.u and that boy!! aggg.
And Jurina confess to mayu in drunk state xDDD aaaaaah what will happen ~
Nice chapters, i'm waiting for the next ones ^^
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If jurina confess,i think mayu should accept...LOL
Maybe just maybe if yuki seeing mayu with someone else,she would realized her feeling toward mayu...and leaving that jerk
I could see,yuki actually having interest in mayu,but because she dating that jerk,she blindly looking it...
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Chapter 11
Time flies so fast, I’m now on my second year of high school, and my sempai including Yuko, Yuki and etc. are in their senior year. Nothing really interesting happened, well nothing for me. Except that, now I know that Yuki is an idiot, did she not know all her boyfriend’s doing? I don’t think so. Our summer vacation is quiet normal I guess, play on the beach, eat some watermelon, watched some firework and many more. Thank’s to Acchan’s plan that boy didn’t even come near to anyone of us, except for Yuki.
When I finally got time to be alone with Yuki, I asked her, I asked her why did she love him? She just smile at me, and said It’s love at first sight and he did save her back then. “Save you?” I asked her, but she didn’t answer me. She change our topic to something else. I’m fine if she didn’t tell me the reason, I just played along with her.
Months past, and like Acchan said that guy is really is a bastard, He tried to flirt with me, and of course I refuse him. He’s really trying to get my attention behind Yuki back. But I didn’t tell it to Yuki, I don’t want us to fight, because I know she won’t listened to me. I always put my mask on Yuki and that guy, I think everyone of my friends can read me now, I can’t hide them my frustration anymore. Acchan and Takamina give me a worried look and even offered me a date with her cousin. But I refuse
But then something pop into my head, I got an idea, but it’s so simple. And I know no matter what the result are I’m gonna be hurt. I got this idea when I remember Yuko said to me that I’m a great actress. I will put on an act that nobody gonna lose except for me. Everybody gonna win, Acchan and the other will have back the old Yuki that they knew, Yuki will wake up from her blindness, and that jerk can’t come to Yuki anymore. And what will be the change for that price, I lose Yuki, Yuki will hate me to the bones, she will hate me, and maybe don’t want me to see her again. But I’m gonna do this just for you, just for this stupid love that I’m feeling for you.
It took me another month before I started this is plan of mine, When that bastard ask me out again, I didn’t refuse him. I just go along with him, we have date and even go to see a movie, behind Yuki’s back.. I thought my plan went perfectly well, but I didn’t notice Yuko and Acchan saw me with that guy and started following me since that date begun. Acchan and Yuko cornered me, ask me so many question like What are doing with that bastard, why are hanging out with him and many more.
So I thought what the hell, Might aswell tell them my plan and let them participate in this great act of mine. I told them call the others, except for Yuki and I will tell them the truth.
When All of my friends come to my house (except for Yuki) I told them my plan. My plan to wake up Yuki from her blindness with that jerk. Of course they disagreed to my plan. But I tell all of us will win in this great plan of mine.
“Mayu, Just forget about her!!”
Yuko shout at me, but I just continue to convince them. Until they finally gave up and join my plan as well. I let them participate in this great act of mine…
But before I continue this plan, I want to see her, I want to ask her. I go to Yuki’s house, and see for the last time, that will be friends. Yuki’s was shock for my sudden visit, but let me in. Yuki even offered me to have lunch with her, but I didn’t waste anytime. I ask her
“Yuki do you love me?”
she seem shock for my sudden question, but then smile to me and hug me tight, and said
“Of course Mayu, I love you, you’re my best friend”
My chest hurt when she said that, so I pinned her down on the sofa, she seem shock for my action.
“Ehh! Mayu what are you doing?”
She asked me, But I didn’t give her any answer, I just kissed her on the forehead. She close her eyes when I kissed her, she looks so clam for what I did, so I just continue my action, I kissed her in the cheek, I kissed her in her nose, I even kissed on the neck, but I don’t have the guts to kissed her on the lips. She just giggled for my action
“Mayu that tickles”
She said while laughing, but I stop my action and get up. And I gave her just one last smile, this smile was not fake, this time it’s real. A real smile from the bottom of my heart. And she just stared at me. Then I go outside and run, run fast to get away from her. And I text the others to tell them we will do our plan tomorrow.
After that my plan begin, I asked Yoshihiku out for a date, while Acchan, Rena and Kumi asked Yuki to go out, me and that bastard go to the museum, park movies and many more. The date went really well and I can see that this bastard enjoying himself. When it’s about time to end this date we cross passed to Yuki. Yuki saw us holding hand while walking, she gave us a dark look and asked us
“What you guys doing?”
You could easily tell that she pissed, but before this bastard could even say something I told yuki
“I’m having a date with my boyfriend”
Yuki’s widen her eyes when I said that, and come run at me and
“PLANK!!”
she slapped me in front of many people Acchan and Rena’s trying to stop Yuki from her rage.
“Why? You’re my bestfriend, why Mayu?”
She said to me, while crying, while Kumi help me stand up I just smirk at her
“You’re an idiot, I never care for you, I just use you, you’re nothing to me”
I said to her, and look at Yoshihiku and smile to him, he looks shock for what was happening. But I pulled him close to mine and kiss him, yeah I kissed him in front of Yuki,
“SHUT UP!! SHUT UP!! SHUT UP!!”
she scream at me and slap me again and hit Yoshihiku and said
“Were over, and I don’t want to see you’re face ever again”
she said and walk out, Rena and Kumi follows her while Acchan come near me and whisper to me
“Are you happy now?”
After that incident my plan works, Yuki woke up from her blindness, And graduate high school without that bastard, I continue to date that Yoshihiku guy until I make sure he won’t bother Yuki ever again. And yeah Yuki didn’t even want to see me or hear my name again.
How did I make sure he won’t bother Yuki ever again? He made a big mistake when he asked me to baby sit his little brother, I didn’t give him any love, I won’t let him touch me, kissed me, hug me or even go to a date with him. When I baby sit his little brother he forgot to lock the door to his room, And I hack to his computer and got all the sex tape that he made with other girls including Yuki’s.
After that I called him and show him the file, He was shock, now he know whose the one that broke his computer and deleted all the files. He asked for forgiveness and trying to explain me something but I said to him
“Give me you’re phone”
he hesitated to give me his phone but I black mailed him, I said to him if he didn’t give me his phone I will give it all the sex tape to all the parents that he slept with, so he finally did and I whisper to him that were over and don’t even think to come near my friends ever again. He just stare at me with fear in his eyes, while I was walking away from him. After that I throw away his phone to the ocean.
Rena and Yuki choose the same course and go to the College branch in our school. I keep contact with my sempai, were still friends. Everybody knows my secret except for Yuki.
Acchan and Takamina choose the same course also did Yuko, Nyan Nyan and, Kumi.
I heard from Jurina, that Rena’s going out now with her childhood friend Airi in her home town. Oh yeah all of my sempai continue to study in the college branch of this school.
Time really flies so fast, I’m near my graduation in high school. And Jurina ask me out again, but this time I reply
“Yes”
I thought this was a happy ending for all of us, me and Jurina going out and committed the sin of love and lust. I stayed friends with all of my sempai except for Yuki, and that bastard never come near us again. But I never been so wrong. It’s just the beginning of all my problems..
.............TBC.........
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Mayu decided to date the guy to only hurt Yuki to show he was hurting her. Blackmailing the guy to the extent to put him into his place
In the end she gets Jurina and a possible payback
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That hurts! A lot?! :cry: Mayu why?!
Poor Mayu.. Poor Yuki.. :cry:
College life will start soon.. And this is just the beginning of drama.. :banghead: Can't wait..
Thank you :bow: :twothumbs
What will happen when Mayu and Yuki meet again? Will Yoshihiku return to take revenge? Update soon :bow:
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you're update was so fast! i'm happy ^^
waaa, the beggining of her problems? what is going to happen now!!
And Yuki is so dumb hahaha Mayu just go on top of her and kiss her in many places and she dind t thank what is happening with her? xD
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Noooooooo mayu why do you keep doing things that will hurt you :cry: :cry: :cry:
I hope yuki did learn her lesson :angry:
Mayu dont give up on your love for yuki ^^
author-san I love your fic please update more ^^
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Mayuyu.. :cry: :cry:..u do a right thing... :(
i'm happy that u protect yuki..BUT u're done enough...
hppe ur secret plan been known by Yuki and Yuki know how much she love u..
thx for the update..
:cathappy: :deco:
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sacrifice of love... well, mayu!! she fight so hard for Yuki :panic:
I hope she can get her return as soon as possible ehehhh :deco:
ganbatte mayu and thank you for the update :inlove:
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Eeeeh!!!?
/£€'$%¥&@±%...mayuyu~
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The begining of all your problems Mayuuu *cry*
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Mayu sacrifced her friendship with Yuki just to protect her :on cloudeye:
Mayu hacked into that jerk computer and black mailed him. You're doing it right, Mayu :on GJ:
But instead of that, Yuki hate her and doesn't want to talk or hear her name :on shady:
Rena's going out with Airin and this time Mayu's going out with Jurina :on gay:
Jurina and Mayu are gonna go to College :on drink:
It's just the beginning of all Mayu's problems? :on kimbo:
Maybe that Yoshihiku will revenge her or something bad happen between her and Yuki :on blackhole:
I'm too curious about what'll happen :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Omg.. What's gonna happen from now on?
So many things had happen and it's only the beginning?
Can't wait to see the rest of the story!
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Two updates since I read last... great
Yuki's boyfriend was such a jerk...
Poor Yuki, she was going to get hurt...
Poor Mayu... she could not do anything about Yuki or her feeling for Yuki
Wah... Mayu was so great... the way she made Yuki broke up with the boyfriend...
Making it believable that Mayu was taking Yuki's boyfriend...
She lost her best friend... and her chance to be with Yuki... for Yuki's own good...
Overall everyone moved on with their lives... and also Mayu..
She went out with Jurina... well even though not her 1st love but someone that had cared for her from the start...
Really more troubles from whom later? Yoshihiku or others?
Can't wait to see the next
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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The beginning of problems? :shocked
Are they gonna be hurt?
Anyway like the new updated
Pls updated soon!!!! :wub:
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Poor Mayuyu, I really feel bad for her T_T
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Chapter 12
Years passed, I’m now 21 years old, I finish my college in peace with Jurina by my side, and also with the help of my friends. So many things happened in the past, like when I confess my parents about my sexuality. Of course they been shock, sad and mad. They even kick me out, but later then accepted me. That’s the first time I saw my father cried, yes, he cried for me. He cried for my forgiveness, he said, “he will never make the same mistake like his father did” yes my father been kick out in his early age, because he got my mother pregnant in the age of 18, After I accepted his apology, he also announce that I’m having a baby brother. Of course I’m happy, I’m having a little brother. Now I’m not the only one that gonna handle all of our family business.
In my second year of college, I finally introduce Jurina to my parents, And they immediate like her, with her charm and charisma. They even joke “when is the wedding?” it made me happy, and proud. Time by time I truly fell in love with Jurina. I take away her innocence, and she also took mine. We drown our self in passion of lust and love.
We face our problems with a smiling face, I help her study, and she also help me. We also go to the same college like our sempai did. But I never saw Yuki, Rena said to me, Yuki found herself a new lover. Miyazawa Sae a varsity player in a different school. I’m happy that she finally moved on, and found herself a new lover. I happy because she’s happy.
Once I finally graduated, my father let me handle some of our family business. I handle 3 restaurant here in Tokyo, two western style and one western-japanese style restaurant. I just need to make sure our business won’t go bankrupt. After that I can do whatever I want. And also when we finish our college, Me and Jurina buy a house and moved in together.
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When I wake up in I saw my girlfriend sleeping beside naked. I rubbed my eyes and do a stretch. But I guess that stretch make her woke up
“Good morning”
she said to me while rubbing her eyes, and hug me. I just look at her and kissed her cheek and replied to “Wake up, or you’re gonna be late for work”
“Tsk.. I don’t wanna go to work today”
she said and now kissing my neck. I push her away and said “Jurina you need to go to work, You’re hotel gonna have an event today”
“Mou I wanna sleep all day, with you Mayu”
I just get up from the bed and whispered to her “come on get up, Let have shower TO-GE-THER” then she immediate get up and drag me to the bathroom.
After that, we prepare our self for work. Jurina handle one of their family business, She manage a five star hotel here in Tokyo. Maybe that one of the reason my parents love her.
“Mayu let’s go on a date later”
she said, I just smile at her and nodded my head
“I gonna picked you up in 8”
she said, then kiss me on the lips, and said her goodbye. After that I also go to my car and drive away from my work.
Everything seems normal, our guest come in and have fun with their family and friends while having a delicious meal from us. My Oshiriko chan even visit me and have lunch with Nyan Nyan. Oh yeah after I go to college Yuko discover my likes for behind. And formed our self a group that we called oshiri sister.
“Nee Mayu-chan you look beautiful as usual, but not as beautiful as my Nyan Nyan “ Yuko said then smile at me
“Yuu-chan stop that” Kojima said, while smacking Yuko’s head from embarrassment
I just laugh at them, they seems happy like usual. But my smile change when I saw a girl come and entered my store. The girl that became my best friend, the girl that cause me pain and made me fall in love. Yuko notice my expression change, and look at the direction that I’m looking. She just smile at me and patted my head.
“Mayu you’re already over her, right?”
she asked me, while Nyan Nyan just looking at me. I just nodded my head and smile at her.
The waiter greeted Yuki and offered her to have a sit. But then she notice Yuko and Nyan Nyan sitting in on the other table. So she came near us. I don’t think she notice me, Well since college my style and look change, I even change my hairstyle. I became more mature.
“Nee Yuko, Nyan Nyan whose this cutie?” Yuki ask
Yuko and Nyan Nyan just widen their eyes and look at me. While I just look the other way, and trying to hide my face.
“Yuki?” Yuko ask, while giving her a awkward look
“yes?” Yuki responds while showing her smile
“You can’t be serious? You know her” Yuko said seriously
Then Yuki look at me closely then widen her eyes when she see me
“Long time no see Yuki” I said to her, while smiling
“You” she said, with a shock expression then run away from our table.
While she running away she bump into a another girl, but the girl grab her
“ahh Yuki you’re already here” she said
“Sae let go of me!!” Yuki scream at her
We stand up from our sit and come closer to them, when then Yuki got away from the other girls grip she run fast, without noticing that she’s near the road and a car heading too fast to her direction
“YUKI!!!”
I run, as fast as I can and push her away to the side. But then I saw a car heading towards me.
“MAYU!!!” I heard Yuko shout
It happened so fast, when I open my eyes I saw Yuki staring at me with a shock expression while sitting in the side. I feel pain all over my body, but this pain is nothing. It’s nothing compare when I first saw Yuki’s video in her ex- boyfriends room. That video crush my heart into million pieces, and I cried all night long just for that..
“MAYU!!!”
I heard Yuko’s voice again, I felt a hand grab me and I shut my eyes due to pain. And cough some blood
“Nyan Nyan call the ambulance fast!!!” Yuko shout again
I trying to stay awake but I can’t, my eyes suddenly getting heavier and heavier, until all I see is all black…. I let the darkness devoured me.
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END OF MAYU’S POV
hope you enjoy my season one minna
I think my season two gonna take a while, and Yeah thank's for all the comments minna
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NO!! Mayu can't die!
Omg! Pls update season 2!
Need to know what happen..
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Ah... so Mayu and Jurina already moved in together...
May be before long they might have gotten married...
Ah... Yuki was still unable to forget the betrayal that Mayu did to her...
Eh... Yuki was with Sae (a girl)?
OMG... Mayu got hit by a car just to save Yuki...
I think Mayu still liked Yuki... maybe even loved her... more than Sae....
Because for Yuki... Mayu dared to rush over to save Yuki....
Ah... Mayu still felt broken heart over the sex video she found in Yuki's ex-boyfriend computer....
What's going to happen to Mayu?
Would she be okay?
Would there be drama between Mayu, Jurina, Yuki and Sae?
What Yuki's reaction about Mayu's heroic act?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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SHOCK :shocked OH MY GOSH~
:banghead: While i was reading a few paragraphs from the start i thought it's going to.be happy ending thank you then the moment Yuki came and recognizes Mayu then ran away and Mayu... she..got...hit...by...a...car..
:shocked :cry: :banghead: CLIFFY~!
Can't wait for season 2.. Take your time Gibson-san.. Will.be waiting for your return.. :thumbsup
Will Mayu survive the.accident? Will everything be okay?
Thank you :twothumbs :bow:
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Hope Mayu survives to lead into the next season
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WHAT JUST HAPPENED!? why would you do that Mayuyuuu :pleeease:
you are so meanie :tantrum:
I hope your next season is comingo soon. I want to continue reading your fic
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It would be nice if season 2 yuki POV
I want to know what yuki think about mayu's here
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omg mayu!! :banghead:
Season 2 where are you??
Pls update soon :on gay:
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Wow. It's rare that I read and actually really like a Mayuki fic, but then again, this has JuriMayu, my OTP beside WMatsui.
For season 2, I'm sensing amnesia. XD
Now the question is will she lose all of her memories or only till her high school years when she's still fully in love in Yukirin and forget her love for J. Well this is just a reader's prediction anyway. XD
Nevertheless, I can only see J's being heartbroken next season unless Rena miraclely break up with Airin. XD
As for Yukirin, I'm sure the rest will tell her the whole story and horribly feel guilty about it.
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So now Mayu and Jurina are living together they also did many couple things :on gay:
Maybe they're gonna get married :on drink:
Although Yuki's having a new lover- Sae but she still doesn't forgive Mayu for betray her :sweat:
OMG!!!! She reaction strongly when seeing Mayu and almost got hit by a car :stoned:
But Mayu has rushed over and save her :on woohoo:
Despite the fact that, Mayu'll gotten hit by a car instead Yuki :on cloudeye:
She thought it doesn't hurt as much as when she saw the video of them making out in that jerk computer :on chew:
NO~~ Mayu don't die :pleeease: Just make her lost all her memories or just her high school's time and the times with Yuki, gibson-san :kekeke:
Can't wait to see season 2 :scared:
Update it soon, please :gyaaah:
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MAYU!!
JURINA WILL BE SAD HERE,WELL NOT JUST HER.
LET SEE,UMM...
EVEN THOUGH MAYU ALREADY MOVE ON,BUT SHE STILL CARE ABOUT YUKI,SHE SACRIFFICE SOO MUCH,HER FRIENDSHIP,AND EVEN RISK HER LIFE
I WOULD BE DISAPPOINTED IF YUKI THREAT HER BAD AFTER WHAT MAYU'S DO FOR HER.
MAYBE ITS TIME FOR YUKI TO KNOWN THE TRUTH.
THATS WHY YUKI POV NEEDED HERE.
BUT I DONT WANT YUKI GET MAYU EASILY,I WANT HER AT LEAST TRYING HARD TO WIN MAYU HEART.
BECAUSE EVEN MAYUYU STILL CARE FOR YUKI,SHE TRULY IN LOVE WITH JURINA TOO,MAYU SPEND MORE QUALITY TIME WITH JURINA ,EVEN LIVING TOGETHER AND ALL STUFF THEY DO.
AND,BESIDE,I THINK JURINA WONT LET YUKI TO CLOSE WITH MAYU ANYMORE,NOT BECAUSE MAYU'S IS JURINA NOW.
I SENSE THAT JURINA WOULD MAD AT YUKI,ITS HER FAULT AT ALL,
YUKO AND THE OTHER WILL SURELY TOLD YUKI THE TRUTH,WELL MAYBE HEHE
ITS WOULD BE SHOCKING NEWS FOR YUKI,
CANT WAIT SEASON 2j
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Mayu has an accident!!!! :shocked
Mayu's parents just had their daughter back but now Mayu got into accident!!!!! She will be useless than before!!!!
Jurina sure will kill Yuki because her action and caused Mayu into an accident!!!!
Anyway thanks for the new updated!!!!
Are u continuing the Royal Academy?
Hope the new season is coming soon!!!!
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well well well so it's the end of the season 1 :glasses: first I want to tell you thank you for this great FanFiction :hee:
even that you played with my emotion so much :fainted: And sorry about the fact I didn't make a proper comment always I don't have really the time :err:
you know I'm really no surprised to see at the end that Mayu jumped to save Yuki's life for the one she loves :farofflook:
Maybe many years passed and many things happened but she couldn't forget Yuki eve, when she tried by going out with Jurina :bigdeal:
I know that in the chapter said tat she is in love with Jurina but... I think that dint the fact to see this person I mean Jurina made her think that she loves her :dunno:
But it not the truth!! Mayu is still madnly in love with Yuki or should I say blindly in love :on thumbb: She is always talking about Yuki even whzn she is with Jurina maybe she doesn't show it to Jurina but still she show to us in her POV :stuffed:
What she did at the end showed me that even she said she loves Jurina still her soul belongs to Yuki. :shy2:
The truth I voted that Yuki deserve Mayu cause when I think about it Mayu suffered too much because of her love for Yuki :smoke: and forgeting Yuki was not really a good solution cause she couldn't even after all these years so I want them to be together even it's not that easy. :bigdeal: I know I like Jurina and she is my ohimen :onioncheer: but for this fic I think Mayu should be with Yuki not with Jurina. :glasses:
Okey that was my point of view :sweat:
I 'll be waiting for your 2nd season! :hehehe:
mo-chan deshita! :on woohoo:
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No, Mayu can't die :panic:
I have a feeling Jurina is gonna get hurt next season, poor Jurina :cry:
Well, Yuki is Mayu's first love after all.
Waiting for season 2 :cow:
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Sorry but I'm like "Pfffff.... It is JuriMayu... Don't want to read...."
But I still read... WHY?!
Your story is really interesting even if it have a pair that I don't really like ^^
Want to cry :cry:
Why Mayu need to have something like this... :cry:
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bruaaaakkkkk :pimp:
I know Jurina is a kind person but,
you and we all know Jurina pair is Rena and Mayu will always belong to Yuki :twothumbs
and I know this fic is mayuki, right?? :deco:
so whatever ur plan, whatever trouble u made between mayu and yuki,
pleaaase make the togetger at the end :inlove: (dont make yuki easy to get mayu back :thumbsup
okay thank for the update...
take ur time (but dont be so long, remember us who waaiting for the continuation) ehehehh
and goodluck for everything ubdo :lol:
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SOME PEOPLE MAY THINK THAT YUKI DOESN'T DESERVED MAYU'S LOVE,WELL ITS TRUE,BUT IN ONE CONDITION
YUKI DON'T DESERVED MAYU IF~ SHE GET ALL MAYUYU LOVE AND ATTENTION EASILY
AFTER ALL,MAYU SUFFERS A LOT BECAUSE OF HER,SO ITS MORE SQUARE IF SHE SUFFERS A LOT TOO,TO GET MAYUYU
MAYBE AFTER THAT ACCIDENT MAYUYU CHANGE...MAYBE BECAME MORE COLD OR WHATEVER YEAH,ABOUT THE AMNESIA THING UH,IF THAT POSSIBLE THEN...IT GOOD IF SHE JUST FORGET ABOUT YUKI AND THE OTHER,EXCEPT JURINA YEAH...TAHT SO DRAMATIC
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nooooooooo mayuuuu what happened
it is so sad she saw the video of yuki with that a**hole
I hope it will be better
I cant wait for the season 2 ^^
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Mayuyu!!!! NO!!!!!! Why does she alway encounter those kind of situation?! Mayuyu!!!
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I can't wait for season 2!!!
I just finished reading everything
-gibson-mayulover-san GOOD JOB!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Prologue
I’m fool, I’m an idiot, I’m stupid, I’m a sinner, and a liar. I lived all my life in this beautiful lies, but once I found out all the truth, it crush my world. And I can’t do anything about it. I hurt all of my friends, I hurt my lover, and I hurt you, Mayuyu.. But I guess, I just have to face it, and accept it, accept this hurtful truth.
(gomen minna i'm still shock about the senbatsu result ehh....)
and thank's for all the comment's
and congratulations Sasshi for being the new center in AKB48 I hope for the best on you
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great prologue ;)
I'm kinda shocked too about the results :shocked
but I'm happy because my oshimen is the 6th :D
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OMG!! Season 2 is coming!!! :w00t:
Is this gonna be Yuki's POV or still Mayu's ? :huhuh
Well, any one of them will do ;) :lol: :twothumbs
Can't wait for Chapter 1 !! :bow: :bow:
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wohoow seanson 2... please please please please update soon :w00t:
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Oh.. Yuki at last she knew the white lies that everyone had been hiding from her these whole time...
What's going to happen to Mayu and Yuki?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Yeah im shock too,but im happy,even though sasshi is not my òshimen,but but its fantastic when sasshi became center,its kind something really new could happen and in a good way!
Ok! Wow season 2 coming soon!
Ah yeah its hurtful yuki
But you have to face it,ganbaree fighthing!! Be strong for mayuyu yeah
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Yeah I'm still upset over Mayu's 3rd rank.
But I hope more MaYuki would help me get over that.
Please don't take too long to update. I know this sounds selfish but your fic would really cheer me up (even though it's not all lovey-dovey) *sighs*
Now I wonder what will happen. It'd be nice to hear from Yuki's POV too.
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SASSHI~
YAY PROLOGUE SEASON II
YUKI SEEM REALLY SHOCK,HER PERFECT WORLD UPSIDE DOWN WHEN SHE KNOW THE TRUTH
WHO TOLD HER? ACCHAN? OR YUKO?
TAKE YOUR TIME TO UPDATE IT,YEAH ITS SHOCKING NEWS,I DONT AGAINST SASSHI WINNING,BUT ITS NEW AND FRESH
AKB ALWAYS MAKE ME SURPRISE,AWESOME.IF MAYU OR YUKO WIN,I THINK THE IMPACT ITS NOT THIS BIG.
SO ITS AWESOME,.
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yes it's okay just take ur time :thumbsup
and not just u i guess everybody was shocked with the result
but at least my love is finally getting a single digit, yosshaaa!
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I'm shocked that Mayu in the 3rd but Yuki in 4th :on cloudeye:
So I'm hope there'll be some Mayuki's moments :prayers:
Sasshi in 1st rank :stoned: She sure has a lot of fans :shock:
She'll be the center of AKB, a new and good way for her :ding:
Season 2 :on gay: Update soon, please :kneelbow:
I wonder what'll happen to Yuki when she knows the truth :on drink:
And also about Mayu after the accident :on cloudeye:
Please update as soon as possible :gyaaah:
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Chapter 1
They said highschool is the best time of your life, well for me, it isn’t. Highschool is the time that I lost my boyfriend and my bestfriend. I saw them cheating on me, behind my back, and it hurt me, it feels like my world is ending right in front of me. But I was wrong, it’s just the beginning, I acted like highschool is the most important time of my life, but in reality, It just the start. I ended my highschool life with a broken heart, that time I felt lost, and lonely. But my friends help me, without them I don’t know where I am today.
When I entered college, It feels like something new. With Rena by my side because we took the same course, we face our college life with a determination for a bright future. But still every night I have a nightmare, a man and a woman holding hands and kissing infront of me, I slap the women but she just smirk at me, and said “You’re an idiot, I never cared for you, I just used you, you’re nothing to me” I cried every single night, just because of that nightmare. But my nightmare stopped when I meet Miyazawa Sae. She’s a varsity player from a different school, I meet her at the cinema, she’s the one that approach me, but of course I ignore her. But she still keep trying, until I finally gave up, she later became my girlfriend. I know, A girl, but why? I want to try something new, and beside Sae does have a charm and kinda cute.
Time flies so fast, now I’m on the age of 23. I’m happy with my life. I have many friends like Acchan, Takamina, Rena and etc. I have a great career, and I have a great lover. I moved in Tokyo when I graduated from college, well nothing really change much. Except that I’m living in a different place now, I found this nice and quite apartment with Rena and Sae’s help. After that, my new life begin.
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“Ahhhh!!!”
I scream when I saw the time on my clock, and to go to the bathroom quickly.
“Crap I’m going to be late !”
I said to myself, while taking a quick bath and rushing to wear my clothes. After that I go to my car and drive away fast to my work places.
“Ohayo!! Yuki-san”
Akicha greeted me, and I look at her and smile
“Oh Aki, I’m not late right?”
I asked her, then she just smiled at me
“No”
she said, I sign in relieve when she said that
“Um, Yuki-san, Sae said she’s gonna talk to you later”
Aki said, then back to her office
Around 10:30 Sae called me, and ask me to have a date with her tomorrow, since we have our day off that day. I just say yes to her, she asked me to wait to this fancy restaurant near her office, she said the food was great and also the ambience is good. I just chuckled when I heard her.
“Okay, I’ll meet you there around 1:00 pm”
I said to her, then she end our call.
After my work finished, I went home and prepare myself for our date. I sleep early because I’m excited for our date tomorrow.
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“Yuki do you love me?”
I just stare at the girl that said that to me, but before I could say anything. I heard a music, right beside me. Then I wake up from my dreams, After that I go to the bathroom and look myself in the mirror.
“Why you suddenly appeared in my dreams?”
I asked myself, and washed my face, and take a bath. After that I prepare myself for my date. Around 11:30 am I drive to the restaurant that Sae told me to meet her up. When I entered the restaurant the waiter approached me
“Welcome maa’m, table for how many?”
he asked me, I just smile at him
“Table for two, please”
I said, then the waiter offered me a, nice seat in middle, but I suddenly saw Yuko and Haruna sitting in the other table, so I came near them.
“Nee Yuko, Nyan Nyan whose this cutie?”
I asked them when I saw that they are not alone
“Yuki?”
Yuko said while giving me an awkward look
“Yes?” I replied to her while show them a smile
“You can’t be serious? You know her”
Yuko said, then look at me seriously, I look closer to the girl beside Haruna and when I saw her face, my eyes widen
“Long time no see Yuki”
she said, then show her smile
“You”
I said, I’m shock to see her, then I remember all her doings, I remember her kiss, her smirk and stare that she gave me back then in highschool. I just want to run as far as away from her. While I was running I bump into someone
“ahh Yuki you’re already here”
she said to, then I look it up to see who did I bump, it’s Sae
“Sae let go of me!!”
I scream at her then release my hand from her grip and run, I run as fast as I can.
“YUKI!!!”
somebody scream my name, when I look it up, I saw a car heading towards me. But I felt my body suddenly stopped working, and I can’t moved. But somebody pushed me to the side and save me
“MAYU!!!”
I heard Yuko shout, then I look at the road and saw Mayu’s body lying there cover with blood. I just stared at her with shock and I can’t process anything. I felt time just stop and I can’t hear anything, it feels like the time is moving much slower. I finally snap out when Sae touched me
“Yuki!! Are you alright?”
She asked me with a worried voice and a teary eyes. I just nodded to her, then I saw An ambulance, taking Mayu’s body. Yuko and Haruna also entered the ambulance, while me and Sae just drive to the hospital with Sae’s motorcycle. After that, the doctors rushed in and take Mayu to the Emergency Room. While were waiting Yuko called all of our friends, and Mayu’s family to tell them what happened. After 15 minutes, Acchan, Takamina and Kumi come in, and asked so many question. They just stopped their assault on Yuko’s and Haruna when they saw me, they didn’t asked for more details they just waited quietly. Then suddenly our 34 minutes of quietness, broke when Jurina entered the hallways.
“You!!!”
she said, while crying and glaring at me. I just stared at her, and I could see all the anger in her eyes. It feels like she want kill me.
“PLANKK!!!”
I fall down when she slapped me, and I just stared at her, when I saw her eyes. For the first time, I felt scared like a prey being hunted by a predator..
……………………….TBC…
oh yeah minna i'm gonna change my lead
it's gonna be Yuki's POV here
and thank you for all the comments
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SOMEHOW I REALLY LOVE IT WHEN JURINA SLAPPED YUKI
AWESOME UPDATE GIBSON SAN!! THANK
AND YUKI POV YEAH ITS GONNE BEEN HURTFUL PAINFUL POV IM GONNA READ MORE THAN MAYU POV HEHE
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short... but thanks anyway!!!
Hope Yuki will know the reason why Mayu did that!!
Jurina slapped Yuki!!?!?!
I'm expecting some dramas...or maybe not
But it's up to you..hope you update!! I love your fics :inlove:
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Ouch! That hurt for sure :O
Yuki's pov neh this is going to be interesting.. :fap Lot of painful thoughts will be reveal..
Now, what will happen to Mayu? Mayu! :bleed eyes: I'm so excited for next update.. Will Mayu survive the accident? What will Yuki feels about why Mayu saved her? Will Yuki finally realize what happened years ago? Yey! :fap Drama~!
Thank you :bow :thumbsup :twothumbs
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SOMEHOW I REALLY LOVE IT WHEN JURINA SLAPPED YUKI
AWESOME UPDATE GIBSON SAN!! THANK
AND YUKI POV YEAH ITS GONNE BEEN HURTFUL PAINFUL POV IM GONNA READ MORE THAN MAYU POV HEHE
Agree somehow im happy that yuki got slapped... XD
I cant wait what is the reaction of yuki if she find out the truth!
update soon :on gay:
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Nice update!
Nice... but sad!!! :cry:
Mayu got hit by a car, Sae appeared and currently dating Yuki
Jurina slapped Yuki.... WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT??? :?
Can't wait for the next update :twothumbs
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I guess the shock of the slap came out but poor Mayu
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yuki~ yukiiii....... who's not gonna mad at you right now, its too much really...too much...for mayuyu LOL :badluck:
why something like this happen to her....its painful...its have been for years already....but mayu still cared for you... :err:
jurina is hurt too...she's mayuyu girlfriend now,but seeing mayu do something like that just for yuki,it hurt...
because jurina would think that mayu still have a feeling for yuki...its still not fade away like a wind...
jurina try to win mayu and love her with all her might and she finally win.
but just simple meeting with yuki,just a moment mayu and yuki meet each other again ,ruin all her happiness...poor jurina :fainted:
what happen next?
well i like it tooo the slapped LOL its minimize my anger for yuki...LOL :wigglypanda:
what yuki respond after that slap? well sae might mad too, someone slap her yuki with no reason (well they had a reason)
acchan,takamina and kumi just silent,maybe they hold their anger at yuki...
they dont have the right to blame her...at least not them...so just wait jurina,she's mayu girlfriend,she had a reason to angered yuki... and bang! she slap her LOL
thank for the update, cant wait wait and wait for the next update...its painful POV!! :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted:
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Yeah... season 2 started now...
And it's in Yuki POV... that's great...
You even put some background on her feeling about the high school and her life before Mayu's accident...
Ah... so Sae asked Yuki to come to the cafe for something... was Sae trying to propose to her?
Yuki was just there and couldn't do anything for Mayu... I think she was still in shock...
I could understand Jurina reaction... because of Yuki.. Mayu needed to be the bad guy and broke her heart in process...
Since there would be no way Yuki would like Mayu after the betrayel that Yuki thought Mayu had done....
Jurina was there always comforting and standing by her side always... waiting for Mayu to like her back...
After so long Jurina able to be with Mayu and also engaged to Mayu...
Now Mayu got hit by car to save Yuki... ALWAYS Yuki...
Poor Jurina... Mayu didn't think of Jurina or what would happen if she got hit by the car... she just wanted to save Yuki...
Jurina gave Yuki look that scared the hell of Yuki... and probably a look that promised world of pains.
What's going to happen to Mayu?
Why Sae could not save Yuki... She was nearer...?
What would Jurina said to Yuki?
What the other friends would say in this situation?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I didn't expect your update so fast, i'm happy >u<
but, goosh this chapter was so sad!! and i was like O.O
and then final! when Jurina came and slaped Yuki omg i'm dying.
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OMG!! Jurina slapped Yuki!! :shocked
so it's Jurina is the one is going to tell her the truth :huhuh
war start between Yuki and Jurina!!! XD
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You update so fast :mon beam:
It's Yuki's POV so I guest there'll be lots of drama :mon star:
She even had a nightmare about Mayu and that guy holding hand and kissing in front of her :mon evillaff:
I'm sure she must be very sad about that :mon noprob:
Oh @@ Jurina slapped Yuki when she knew that Yuki's the reason Mayu got hit by a car :mon thumb:
Although it painful but I love it very much :mon love:
The other just stay silent when she saw Yuki, they must know why Mayu being like that :mon dunno:
But why Sae didn't save her :mon huh2: I thought she was closer to Yuki :mon wtf:
Not sure if Jurina would tell Yuki all :mon whine:
If she did, I really wanted to see her reaction or just her thought about it :mon XD:
I also want know what'll happen to Mayu :mon sweat:
Can't wait to see :mon scare:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
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Whose POV were you gonna write from?
Also gotta love the slap from J. XD
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Oh no, I feel so bad for Jurina :cry:
The second Yuki came back into Mayu's life, Mayu had to get hurt again.
More please :bow:
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WHY IM SO SELFISH,
ALREADY WANT AN UPDATE HAHAHA
ITS BECAUSE TODAY UPDATE IS KIND OF SAME WITH THE LAST UPDATE BEFORE
STILL ABOUT THAT ACCIDENT SCENE
I WANT TO KNOW HOW MAYU CONDITION AND HOW YUKI WHEN SHE KNOWING ALL
BUT STILL THANK FOR THIS UPDATE..
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I haven't checked this fic in a while, and went through everything since page 2! WOW, things are sure getting dramatic.
The plot is getting more and more exciting! Please update soon. This is the first (and so far, only) MaYuki story I'm reading.
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.... More hurt
Nooooo why!! :bleed eyes:
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Chapter 2
Then suddenly our 34 minutes of quietness, broke when Jurina entered the hallways.
“You!!!”
she said, while crying and glaring at me. I just stared at her, and I could see all the anger in her eyes. It feels like she want kill me.
“PLANKK!!!”
I fall down when she slapped me, and I just stared at her, when I saw her eyes. For the first time, I felt scared like a prey being hunted by a predator.
“Hey you, why did you slap my girlfriend?!”
Sae asked, then approach Jurina and grab her collar. But Jurina just gave her a stare, that stare is so scary, if it could kill it will surely would kill me
“Get you’re filthy hand, off me!!!”
Jurina scream at Sae, then pushed Sae back. I just look at them, still processing everything. Jurina was about to attack me, but Kumi grab her, and trying to stop her.
“You, why did you came back?!”
Jurina scream at me while pointing her finger on me, Sae was about to attack Jurina, but Rena suddenly appeared out of nowhere and stop her.
“Hey!! Don’t talk to my girlfriend that way!!”
Sae said, Then continue their trash talk for several minutes. But all stop when, Takamina smack both of their head
“You two, be quiet, where in a hospital!!”
Takamina said, Yuko just sign then come near me.
“We need to talk”
Yuko said, I just nodded my head. Takamina and Kumi come with Jurina to get some fresh and still trying to clamed her down, while Rena talked to Sae. Nyan Nyan stayed near the E.R room just in case if the there’s any news about Mayu, while me, Acchan and Yuko go to the café near the hospital, to talk.
“Yuki, I think it’s about time, that you need to know the truth”
Yuko said, with a serious voice, and Acchan just nodded her head
“Huh?”
I just looked at them, waiting for them to talk
“It’s about Mayu”
Yuko said, then look at me. I just look down and tighten my grip on my skirt
“What about Mayu?”
I asked her, then Yuko looked at Acchan, then they both nodded their head
“I didn’t told anyone that Mayu save you from that accident Yuki, only I, Nyan Nyan, Acchan and Takamina knows it, do you know why?”
Yuko asked me, I just looked down
“Why did she save me? Why won’t you tell the others that I’m the cause of her accident, huh?”
I asked them, They just look at each others, then Acchan grab my hand and made me look at them
“Yuki, please forget the past and forgive Mayu, she only did that to save you”
Acchan said, I look at them, and my chest felt being tighten
“Yes, Mayu save me from that car, but I still can’t forget that she betrayed me”
I said to them, I felt tear drops fall from my eyes
“Yuki, Mayu never betrayed you, it’s just an act”
Yuko said with a serious voice, I look at them with my already swollen eyes
“Act? What do you mean by that?”
I asked them, then Acchan tighten her grip on my hand, And tell me the whole story, how they all act and proceed Mayu’s plan just to save me from my ex. While they telling me their story, all of my memories from highschool suddenly flashes right into my mind, when Mayu come to my house and kissed me and give me that beautiful smile, before she act to stole my boyfriend, all of my happy memories of her, also her beautiful smile that she always give to me. I felt my heart stabbed when they continue their story. I just cry, as I know all the pained that I had cause to Mayu came to me. After they finish telling me their story, I just look at them
“Why? Why Mayu did that?”
I asked them between my sob, Yuko just sign and smile to me
“Because you’re her bestfriend, she said, she wants to protect you”
Yuko said then smile to me
“How could I face Mayu now?”
I said between my sob, but Acchan and Yuko patted my back and my head
“Don’t worry about it, And beside her girlfriend and family doesn’t know that she save you”
Yuko said to me, I whipped my tear and look at her
“Girlfriend?”
I asked them, then Acchan and Yuko smile to me
“Yeah, Jurina is Mayu’s girlfriend, You should apologize to her later”
Acchan said, I just nodded my head, and followed them back to the hospital, But there’s something, I don’t know what, but feels kinda weird inside me
When we came back everybody looks clam, except for Sae and Jurina having a stare fight. When they saw me coming Sae rushed to me and hug me, while Jurina just give me again that scary stare that she give a few hours ago. I just came near Jurina and bow my head
“I’m sorry”
I sad to Jurina, but she just look at me, saying nothing
“Jurina, I told Yuki about Mayu’s secret in highschool”
Yuko said to Jurina, but Jurina just widen her eyes, and emitting a scary aura
“You told her?”
Jurina asked, But Yuko nodded her head and grab her arm and drag her to the corner. After some few minutes, Jurina came closer to me
“I’m sorry about that slap”
Jurina said, I just smile at her and gesture to her that it’s okay. After some few hours of waiting the doctor came out, and we all came to him
“How was she doctor?”
Jurina asked with a worried voice
“She okay now, just minor injury, but she broke her arm, she will just need a good few months of rest then will be fine”
The doctor said, then all of us sign in relieved. And Jurina called Mayu’s family to tell them the news.
Then we all rushed in to see Mayu, she sleeping like an angel, with some few bandage with her and a dextrose attached to her arm.
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After a more than a week she still sleeping, Jurina just get out to buy something while the others have work. Only me, Jurina and Sae come here to stay with Mayu because it’s my day off. I send Sae outside to buy some lunch for the three of us.
“Hmm…”
I heard Mayu, so I came near her and hold her hand and look at her, She’s slowly moving her eyes, until it finally opened
“W- water”
she said weakly, so I give her water and assist her drinking it. After that she look at me
“Yuki”
She said, I just cried and hug her
“Ahhh….”
She said, I let go of the hug because I can see her pain when I hug her, and look at her, crying
“Sorry Mayu, I’m really sorry”
I said between sob, she just touched my face and whipped my tears using her thumbs. I look at her, she just give me a smile, but her eyes looks empty
“It’s okay Yuki”
She said, I grab her hand that touching my face and hold it tight, and kiss it. I kissed it and close my eyes
“No Mayu, since then all I do is cause you pain, and I can’t let that happen again”
I said, she let go her hand and make me face her
“so they already told you?”
I just nodded to her, and stare at her
“Mayu, I’m sorry, I’m really sorry”
I said, while crying, but she smile to me then look at me
“Yuki, I should be the one saying that” she said
“No, Mayu you just save me, and wake me up from my blindness ”
I replied to her, she just give a smile and stare at me, her eyes looks different, it looks empty, and dark, not the one that I remembered back then in highschool
“Yuki, can we still be friends?”
she asked me, I nodded my head
“Of course Mayu, you’re my best friend”
I said, but I heard something dropped, and when I looked it up, it’s Jurina. She looks like she about to cry, and rushed in and give Mayu a bear hug. Mayu eyes soften and hug Jurina’s back
“Mayu, … don’t ever scared me like that ever again”
Jurina said between her sobbed, Mayu just whipped Jurina’s tear and give her that look and smile, that she used to give me back in highschool.
I watched the two love birds reunited, I felt weird watching those two making love in front of me, So I just leave them alone, Then I felt a little pain in my chest when I remember Mayu’s empty stare that she gave me. I really miss Mayu’s smile her real smile, but I didn’t get any. She just gave it all to Jurina.
…………………………….TBC………
(A/N: Yuko didn’t tell Yuki’s about Mayu’s feeling back then in highschool, she just told her that Mayu love her as a friend, and did all that things because Mayu is her best friend)
why?
Of course Yuko wouldn’t tell that, she don’t want to ruin her Little sister love life, and beside She already asked Mayu if she moved on with Yuki, right?
Thank you for all the comments minna
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It took that long to figure the act had ruin their relationship for so long that it had to be told now to mend whatever they could keep together
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so yuki know the truth ^^
awww yuki is jealous of jurina because mayu gives all her attention to jurina
I cant wait how the drama will turn out ^^
author-san thanks for the update ^^
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noooooooooooooooooo :stoned:
Mayu doesn't love Yuki anymore :fainted:
I'm dead I can't wait to read the next :on hobo:
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Yay update!!
I feel bad for Yuki but I'm all JuriMayu now. I hope Mayu's blank stare to Yuki is not just an act :cry: Jurina is just too good for you to throw her away here, Mayu.
Btw, I really like the writing of this chapter. There's more dialogue and less narrative so it feels less rushed than the previous chapters. I wanted to tell you this before but didn't quite know how to say it. The new chapter is just in the right direction. Hope this encourages, and not discourages you :thumbup :fap
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Thank you, thank you. No amnesia! XD I wouldn't want Mayu to forget Jurina. I was reading while praying it won't be happening. I'm glad my prediction is off. >.<
Right now, I'm totally head over JuriMayu in this fic. :heart:
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Thank you! Mayu just got a broken arm! ;)
Ohmygosh! Yuko.and Acchan told everything to Yuki. Yuko such a.good friend and big sister to Mayu. Aww. Now Yuki regret everything! That's right Mayu sacrificed her own happiness, her friendship to you, just to see you alright and she did that because she loves you so much Yuki!
Now, Mayu and Yuki are friends again.. Mayu loved Yuki before.. And Yuki came back.. Oh no! This going to be interesting! Can't wait to see more drama! :fap Even though it hurts me..
Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
SUFFER~ :(
AWESOME UP.. :twothumbs
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thank god it just a broken arm *wipe sweat in my forehead*
yuki knows the truth...
Omg i cant wait to read more!
Thank you for the update :on gay:
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Jurina was so angry with everyone especially to Yuki for being there...
She was scared that Yuki would make Mayu fell for her again after all these time...
Also she was so worried about Mayu that she needed a target to lash out...
Eh... Yuko and Atsuko were telling Yuki the truth about Mayu's betrayal as an act...
How did Yuki feel about it....?
What's the impact in Yuki's life from now on?
Ah... Yuki did not feel nice knowing that Mayu had a girlfriend
Yuki might have feeling for Mayu all this time but she thought it was her love for best friend...
Would Yuki's feeling turn to something more than friendship?
Why did Yuko and others not want Jurina and family to know the truth as to why Mayu got into the accident?
I thought Jurina and family had the right to know the truth...
Would Jurina and family know the truth later?
If known, what Jurina reaction on this matter?
Still wondering as to why Sae was not able to save Yuki... when She was near...?
Luckily Mayu able to come out with only minor injuries...
Ah... Mayu was happy that Yuki would not hate her again... and can be friends again...
But Yuki seem like she wanted more than friendship with Mayu now... why did she suddenly have an interest in Mayu?
Was Yuki always like Mayu back then... or just due to the heroic action... she became attracted to Mayu?
Ah... Jurina and Mayu look so lovey dovey... so cute... staring at each other full of love and tenderness...
What's going to happen next
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
PS: 'those two making love in front of me' I would not have put it as 'making love'
more like 'staring at each other full tenderness' something like that...
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Yuko and Acchan tell Yuki the truth :ding:
but I wonder if Yuko told her that Mayu loves Yuki, what Yuki'll do :on drink:
Now, they're back to be friends again :on gay:
Yuki begin to feel weird or jealous when she see Jurimayu :hehehe:
Mayu now just give Yuki empty, dark eyes and also not the real smile :stoned:
Yuki begin to miss those eyes and the real smile that Mayu gave her in highschool :kekeke:
I'm sure there'll be a lots of drama in the future :nya:
Can't wait to see it :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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well, looks like yuki will suffer from now on...
hmmmmmm soon or later Yuki will realized her feeling, well I just hope this fic is mayuki :)
thx for the update and update soon :D :D :D :twothumbs :thumbup
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YUKI WILL SUFFER FROM JEALOUSY HEHE
SHE MISS MAYU SMILE? ALREADY? NOW?
GEZZ SHE REALLY BLINDLY BACK THEN IN HIGH SCHOOL,
NOT NOTICE HOW ADORABLE WAS MAYUYU
MAYU SHE REALLY MOVED ON,THOSE DIFFERENT EYES
DONT TELL ME NOW MAYU THAT BECOME DENSE
SHE SAVE YUKI ITS INDICATED DEEP INSIDE MAYU HEART,SHE STILL LOVED YUKI
WELL ITS ALREADY TO LONG SHE HURT,
SHE WILL DENIED HER FEELING FOR YUKI,
SHE WONT GET HURT ANYMORE,NOT WHEN JURINA COULD MAKE HER HAPPY
SO INDEED ITS GOING TO HARD FOR YUKI WHEN SHE REALIZED HER FEELING TOWARD MAYU
ABOUT SAE WELL...I DONT WANT TO THINK IT NOW
BUT YUK,IM NOT SURE SHE WILL TRY TO SNACT MAYU FROM JURINA,JURINA IS HER FRIEND SHE WONT BETRAY HER FRIEND,ESPECIALLY RUIN MAYU HAPPINESS.NOT AFTER WHAT MAYU HAVE DONE FOR HER.
BUT YEAH THERE IS A BUT,MAYBE IF SHE KNEW THAT MAYU AT THE FIST PLACE LOVE HER THEN MAYBE SHE WOULD TRY HARD WITH NO MERCY TO SNACT MAYU HEHE BECAUSE SHE THINK MAYU IS HER AT THE FIRST PLACE
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Thanks for the update! I'm glad they finally told Yuki. Although I still wish Mayu stays with Jurina…
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i'm relieved mayu's fine... :cry:
yeah mayu already moved on...she don't have a feeling anymore with yuki...that feeling for yuki buried deep in her heart :P2
would be very difficult for yuki when she realized her feeling toward mayu...it's not she's already too late to get mayu..but its really really difficult now when mayu's not seeing yuki like before...mayu now is so into jurina... :sweatdrop:
want to know if yuki known that back in high school mayu love her...like gek geki-san said, maybe yuki will surely without no doubt snatch mayu..."Blackirin"LOL :rofl:
can't wait the next update... :bow: :bow:
thank for the update :thumbup :thumbup
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^ yeaaah
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Chapter 3
It’s been almost two months since the last time I’ve talked to Mayu, After she woke up from the hospital, I’ve never have a chance to talk to her properly. The last time I saw her is when we held a party for her, when she got out from the hospital. I can’t really talked to her, I felt intimidated when Jurina is near her, and if I got a chance to talked to her, I don’t know what I’m gonna say. So I just let it be, I just continue my life like it used to.
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It’s Friday night when I received a text from Acchan, she invited me to her house to have a party, this Sunday, she also said that I could bring Sae. So I just accepted it, beside I have nothing to do.
Around 7:00 pm, me and Sae go to Acchan’s house and we help her prepare the drinks and snack. One by one our friends come with their partner by their side.
“Ahh Konbanwa”
Yuko said, along side with Haruna when she entered the house
“Ahh, Yuko I thought you will be her with you’re little sis?”
Takamina asked, then she look back to see if there’s a person behind Yuko, but she saw nothing.
“Ahh Mayu-chan will be late, she said she just need to finish something, and she will be picked up by Jurina, after work is finish”
Yuko said then give some drinks to Takamina. Then Rena, Kumi and Kanon entered the house, and greeted us.
“Yuko”
I said then, walked closer to Yuko and drag her outside the house, so we can talk properly
“What is it Yuki?”
She asked, while showing her smile and dimple
“Can I asked you a question?”
I said, she just look at me and nodded her head
“Ano, why didn’t you tell the others about the cause of Mayu’s accident?”
I said, While Yuko just scratch the back of her neck, and look at me then smirk
“Nee, it’s actually Mayu’s wish, When we are in the ambulance back then, Mayu woke up and said don’t tell the others the cause of her accident, then after she said that she passed out again. But she was to late I already called Acchan and told her the real reason of her accident”
Yuko said, then smile at me
“Why?”
I asked her, but she come near me and whisper to me
“Simple, she’s just protecting you from Jurina and her family”
after Yuko said that, I felt a different aura from Yuko, but then gone when she tap my head and pulled me in for a hug
“Nee, it’s cold here, let’s go inside”
She said, then pulled me in to go inside
Around 8:15 we started the party, Takamina and Yuko play some weird games, Acchan and Rena talked in the other table, and Kumi and Kanon flirting in side, while me and Sae talking about some random stuff.
Around 9:25 pm Mayu and Jurina come, Yuko immediately come near Mayu and touched her butt.
“Ahh Shiriri-chan you’re late”
Mayu just laugh it off and also touch Yuko’s butt
“Gomen Oshiriko-chan I’m just busy but Jurina picked me up to early so I’ve finish my work too early”
Mayu said, then look warmly at Jurina
“Ahh well then, Thank you Jurina for taking good care of my Shiriri-chan”
Yuko said, then mess Jurina’s hair
“No problem Yuko”
Jurina said then, drag Mayu to get some food and drinks, Mayu saw me and smile at me
“Shiriri-chan, Oshiriko-chan?”
I said, but Rena heard me and look at me
“ahh that what Mayu and Yuko called each other since college”
Rena said, then take a bite to her melon bread
“ehh?”
I just look at Rena, and give her a questioning look, but Rena just laugh at me
“hahaha Yuki, you distance you’re self too much in college with Mayu. A lot of things change”
She said, but before I got the chance to reply her, Sae called me and give me a glass of wine
“Yuki here”
Sae said, I just take it and took a little sip
“Thank’s, Sae”
I said, she just smile at me and kissed my cheek
“Yuki let’s dance”
Sae drag me to the center and dance, I just go with the flow and dance along with her. Then I felt like there’s someone watching me, so I look around, then I saw Mayu staring at me with her empty eyes while showing her smile. I just look at her while dancing, but Jurina suddenly whisper something to Mayu and made her blush and kiss her on the cheek. Mayu’s attention suddenly change to Jurina, and she also whisper something to Jurina, that make her smile. I shift my attention back to Sae and continue our dance.
After some hours of uncontrollable drinking , playing and dancing Sae’s now dancing weirdly with Yuko and Takamina on the center, while I’ just watched her, I didn’t drink any alcohol except for that glass of wine Sae gave me. I know I’m not good at alcohol so I refuse to drink.
“Yuki”
someone called me, so I look around to look who called, Then I see Mayu just right beside me smiling.
“Ahh!! M-Mayu”
I just smile at her, then she grab my hand
“Let’s talk”
she said, I just look around, to find Jurina. Jurina just talking with Rena and Kumi not noticing our talk, Mayu drag me outside, then look at me
“Yuki do you still hate me?
she asked, I just waved my hands disagreeing to her
“No!! Mayu”
I accidentally scream at her, then she widen her eyes, and chuckle to my respond
“Hahaha you’re funny, Yuki were still friends right?”
she asked, I just nodded my head, and she just smile at me
“Mayu you’re my best friend, and I’m really sorry about the past”
I said to her with my eyes suddenly felt tearing up, then she touched my face, and making me face her
“Yuki don’t cry, I’m the one should be apologizing, about lying to you”
she said, then she kiss my cheek, I felt my heart skip a beat when she kissed me, and she whipped my tears away
“Yuki let’s start again, let’s forget about the past and start a new beginning”
Mayu said, I just nodded my head, and look at her casted arm
“Mayu!!”
We heard a voice and look who was it, and it’s Jurina staring at us, Mayu just stand up
“Yuki, Thanks for everything”
she said then kiss my cheeks again, and run with Jurina and hug and kiss her on the lips, and make her go inside, after that Jurina just gave me those scary stare again. I suddenly felt fear when I saw Jurina and with those eyes, then she entered the house and followed Mayu
“Why Im scared of her?”
I just asked myself and I don’t know why I’m feeling this way.
........................TBC
(A/N: well this is a boring chapter :sweatdrop: hehehee gomen minna)
and thank you for all the comments
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Well they made up but Mayu needed to break Jurina's heart to get back with Yuki
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wow Jurina is being really scary when she sees Mayu with Yuki :shocked
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Jurina is scary,but maybe actually she's the one that scared,
Scared that yuki,again steal mayu from her,even though jurina doesnt know that mayu cause accìdent,it instict.
Mayu and yuki start again their friendship,but now everything change,everyone change.
As for yuki,now she could see everything more clear...not blind like before
We could see that when yuki suddenly get so interest with mayu,now she has a chance to she mayu clearly,and maybe start to fall in love
Thank for the update,its not so bored,its just an normal scene but important to develope some relation,here we could see,how mayu and yuki start their new friendship.and jurina and sae is their new obstacle.
Yuki has sae,who not know anything,i could see yuki just try something new when they start dating
Mayu has jurina,and jurina is possesive person,especially to yuki LOL,whatever yuki and mayu reason she wont like it if yuki get along again with mayu
this is the important detail in this story.
I would like if you add a bonus.LOL im just kidding
Again thank for the update
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no...no...no this fic isn't boring at all :D its really really interesting (y) (y)
im curious about mayuki :D :D
thx for update (y)
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MaYuki starting over again! :fap Aahh! Poor Yuki always receiving a.death glare.from.Jurina.. Thank goodness the glares doesn't kill a person.. :nervous
What will happen next? Will Yuki realize that she loves Mayu? What will Jurina do if MaYuki starting to hang out? Yuko will she able to see through and protect her (oshiri) sister? Mayu, will she be able to look at Yuki like she.used to love her?
Can't wait :fap
Thank you for the.update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
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^YES WANNA MAYUKI HANGOUT TOGETHER! JUST THE TWO! HAHAHA
YAY THEY FRIEND AGAIN,FRIEND TO LOVER? HAHAHA CANT WAIT THE NEXT UPDATE GIBSON SAN
ITS UNBEARABLE KEKEKE
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thank you for the update! like kurogumi said, it's not boring, this chapter was necesary to set the story...
What's wrong with Jurina and her family? they are in the mafia o something like that? xDD I understand Jurina, i think she feels threatened and she don't want to lost Mayu.
I'm waiting for the next chapter :3
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ROCHILU SAN IS RIGHT,
WELL IF JURINA KNOW THE CAUSE MAYU ACCIDENT,ITS JUST MAKE HER MORE AND MORE POSSESIVE
WE COULD SEE,WITHOUT KNOWING THE CAUSES MAYU ACCIDENT SHE ALREADY THEATHENING YUKI WITH SCARY LOOKS.I WONT IMAGINE IF SHE KNOW THE TRUTH,MAYBE HER TRUSH FOR MAYU IS GONE,SHE WILL FELT UNSECURE.
AS FOR MAYU FAMILY WELL ITS FINE I GUESS
ITS NOT GONNA BIG DEAL AS LONG AS YUKI NOT START FALLING IN LOVE WITH MAYU HEHE BUT ITS NOT GONNA INTERESTING IF that WOULDN'T HAPPEN RIGHT?
I THINK THE NEXT CHAPTER WOULD BE INTERESTING
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I don't think this's a boring chapter :on ksweat:
Yay, Mayu and Yuki are best friends again :onioncheer: Hope it'll turn to lover soon :kekeke:
Yuki's heart skipped beat when Mayu kisses her cheek :ding:
I think she begins to have feeling toward Mayu and hope she'll realise and know about that and also about Mayu's feeling in highschool :on speedy:
Jurina gave her a death glare maybe because she scared that Yuki'll steal Mayu away from her :hehehe:
Yuko's a good sister, who always care about Mayu ang her happiness :on gay:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Jurina kowa-i! I would do the same though. Please don't break up Jurimayu! :doh:
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So Mayu was the one that asked Yuko not to tell anyone the cause as to why she was in the accident...
She was always protecting Yuki... now from her family and Jurina
Ah... Yuki and Mayu now were friends... but Jurina seemed unhappy with this new development...
Why was Yuki scared of Jurina...?
Was there going to be something big going on between them later?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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hello im new here,im silent reader before :jphip:
i think it's a good story but sad :cry: :(
hope you update soon :wub: :wub: :puertorico:
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Update soon
Thanks for the ff
i will wait....
^_^
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I think it's interesting now that we don't know what Mayu thinks since we read from Yuki's POV now.
We don't know what's behind Mayu's "blank face" so there might be something behind the scenes with Jurina that made Jurina so possessive of Mayu right now. Though they still seem quite lovey dovey :deco:
More please :bow:
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Ow you right! I just notice,now with yuki pov i could feel mayu blank face more.because yuki dont really get what mayu think
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Chapter 4
“At last work is finish”
Akicha said while flash a smile at me, I just look at her then I felt my phone vibrated, so I look it up
to: Yuki <3
from: Sae
Subject: Yuki T^T
Yuki I need to go out of town, I need to go to this stupid meeting now. I will be gone in three days. Please call me if you got home, or something happen. I love you <3
I just smile at her childish message, but Akicha notice me and ask me
“What was that?”
I just smile, and look at her
“Hmm.. nothing, Sae gonna be gone for a while”
I said, then Akicha calp her hand and smile at me
“Nee Yuki-san, Let go out, let’s have dinner together huh?”
She asked, I just nodded my head as an approval to her, beside I’m not really a good cook myself, Rena or Sae sometimes cooks for me
“Ahh!! Great my friend recommend me to this western-japanese style restaurant near her workplace, let go there “
Akicha said then hop into my car, I just drive to the restaurant and we have a dinner there, Akicha talks to me about some random stuff or sometimes work related stuff. While we were having dinner I saw a girl entered the same restaurant and the staff bow their heads to her. I look closely to the girl and realize it is Mayu, But she wore a glasses and kinda look serious, I think she didn’t notice us. She sat down in one of the chairs that have reserve sign and the Manager of the restaurant also sat down with her. They seems talking about something serious, this is my first time seeing Mayu having that kind of look. She look so serious, and have that kind of bossy type of aura around her.
“Nee Yuki-san are you still listening to me?”
Akicha said while pouting, I just look at her and bow my head
“Gomen hahaha, where are we again?”
I said, then we continue our meal, but then Akicha receive a call from work, she said our boss need her to finish some reports, so we call the waiter and to get the bill, But seems like Mayu notice us and come near us
“Ahh Yuki you’re here”
Mayu said, then show me her new smile to me, I just nodded my head and introduce my friend and co-worker to her
“ahh!!, were about to get the bill, ahh and Mayu this is Akicha my friend and co-worker”
I said, then Mayu bow to Akicha and introduce her herself, also did Akicha. Then the waiter come and show us the bill, but Mayu snatch the bill from us, and smile
“hehehe it’s on the house tonight?”
Mayu said then call the waiter and said something to him
“Ehh!! Really?”
Akicha said, while I just watch “What’s Mayu doing?” I asked myself
“Yep don’t worry about it, It’s on me”
Mayu said, then smile at us, Akicha then get up and say her thank’s to Mayu and leave, for her report, I just look at Mayu
“Mayu I will pay you”
I said, I was about to open my wallet but Mayu stopped me, and smile at me
“Yuki don’t worry about it, it’s nothing”
Mayu said, while smile at me, But I still refuse
“Mayu, please accept this I know how hard to gain money these days, it’s not like you own this place right?”
I said, then get some cash from my wallet and handed it to her, But she just smile at me and return me the money
“Yeah Yuki I own this place, so don’t worry about it”
She said, then smile at me, I just look at her
“Ehh?!”
Is all the word I can say, Mayu just laugh at me, and tap my back
“Yuki you’re reaction are still funny”
She said while laughing, I just pouted at her and give her some money and leave
“Ehh!! Yuki gomen, gomen It’s just you’re funny and here, Like I said you don’t have to worry about it”
Mayu said then trying to return my money again
“Mayu I will pay for my meals”
I said, then look at her, she just removed her glasses and look at me and smile
“Nee Yuki I wont accept this money, but can you do me a favor instead , huh as a payment?”
She said while giving me that smile she used to give me back then in highschool, I just look at her and I felt my heatbeat speed up because of that
“What is it?”
I asked while trying to look away from her, then she smile at me
“Can you accompany me for my shopping?”
She said then bow at me, I just widen my eyes and shock about her request
“EHH!!?”
I said obviously showing my over reaction face, She just smile at me and laugh
“Nee Yuki I just need to buy something, don’t worry it won’t take long”
She said, then we walked to the jewelry shop near the restaurant, we look around for a bit, then she come to the counter and buy something
“Mayu what did you buy?”
I asked her, then she just smile at me and show me the pair of necklace that she just brought, the necklace is a lock and a key, and have a initial of M&J to it , I just smile at her
“Nee Mayu what was that for?”
I asked but Mayu look softly at the pair of necklace and smile
“I order it, I asked them to make this for me, this is my present for Jurina in our anniversary, I hope she will like it”
She said, I felt a little pain in my chest when she said that
“Mayu since when did you and Jurina start dating?”
I asked, she look at me and smile and grab my hand and started to walk
“Hmm before we graduate highschool I guess, After we finish college we moved in together here in Tokyo, but she still never change, she's still like to be by my side”
She said, I felt uneasy now, I don’t know why I’m feeling this way. I’m her friend I should be happy for her, But there’s something inside of me that want her to stop talking.
“I choose this lock and a key, because she is the key to my heart. My heart has been broken back then, so I kept it lock in deep within my heart, but I guess she found me and unlock my broken heart and fix it, I’m happy with her, and I don’t want to lose her”
Mayu said, while looking to the necklace, she gave a small little smile and that look that she used to give me, I felt time just stop when I look at her, she look so beautiful while looking at the necklace, but the same time I felt sad, and I don’t know why
“Yuki do you think she will like it?”
she ask me, I just nodded my head, and she smile at me
“Thank’s Yuki for accompanying me”
she said then kiss my cheek. And wave her hand to say goodbye, and go to her car
“Why I’m feeling this way?”
I asked myself while touching my cheeks and looking at her driving.
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well i'm kinda, let say writers block hehehe :banghead:
I made this chapter since some of you want Mayu and Yuki hangout but I guess I kinda field on that one
Thank you for reading my fiction and for all the comments
and yet another boring chapter :sweatdrop: :doh: sorry minna
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Well Yuki is having guilt over the past and seeing Mayu with another woman kills her a lot more than it actually should :nervous
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No, it's not boring at all. I love seeing bossy Mayu here lol.
And it's nice to know that Mayu really loves and cares about Jurina. She deserves it. I know it will be difficult since we're hearing from Yuki's POV now but I want cute JuriMayu time too :deco:
Tho I feel bad for Yuki now :(
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aww, poor Yuki, but i'm happy for Mayu and Jurina.
at the begining i thank that maybe Mayu really never get over Yuki, but know i think that she did it ~ so lovely with her gift to Juri <3
i0m still curious about Jurina and her family, and how Mayu own a restaurant xDD
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yuki :on cloudeye:
what the hell why Mayu is keeping kissing Yuki on her cheek do someone kiss her friend so much on the cheek :on shady:
don't confuse me with your kisses Mayu!! :on_plug:
I think you should change the name of the fic to "I love you but I can't be with you" :hiakhiakhiak:
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3 DAY FREE FROM SAE!!!
YUKI PLEASAE SPEND YOUR TIME WITH MAYUYU!
AH YUKI STILL DENSE,STILL CONFUSING ABOUT HER FEELING, ITS LOVE YUKI...ITS LOVE WHAT YOU FELT!! HEHEHE
MAYU ITS SO SWEET,SHE SAID JURINA IS HER KEY AWW
MAYU HEART HAD BEEN BROKEN,DOESNT YUKI WANT TO KNOW BROKEN FROM WHO??
HOPE MORE DEVELOPMENT AS SAE GONE KEKEKE MAYBE LIKE YUKI FINALLY REALISE HER FEELING TOWARD MAYUYU AWW THAT WOULD BE A GREAT PAIN FOR HER
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@ rochilu
remember my chapter one
Because I'm getting tired to moved every 5 months just because of my mom and dad's work. Their business man and women every year they open a resto in all over Japan that's why they couldn't stay in one place. They maintain our business and make sure that they won't go bankrupt.
and this
Once I finally graduated, my father let me handle some of our family business. I handle 3 restaurant here in Tokyo, two western style and one western-japanese style restaurant. I just need to make sure our business won’t go bankrupt. After that I can do whatever I want.
well in my fiction Mayuyu is a kinda rich, because of their business hehehe, so basically she's a owns and handle three restaurants hehehehe
@ mo-chan
well great idea but i'm gonna stick with my original title hehehe thank's and about the kiss. I think it's normal for a friend to kiss their cheek, (because I do that in my close friends)
@ gek geki
about the development of my fiction... hmmm it's kinda hard for me... i'm having a writers block? I dunno. I think I'm watching too much SHINGEKI NO KYOJIN :nervous I need to clear my mind about that damn titan.
@jell_o_jello
ohh bossy Mayu I love it :heart:
well yeah she love Jurina and, I hope for a better love story for Mayu.
don't worry about Yuki she have Sae right?
unless she do something stupid
@ kurosawa87
well you're right. simple yet true
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EH YOU WATCH THAT TOO??? SHINGEKI NO KYOJIN??? ME TOO!!! KEKEKEKE
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I'm glad that see Mayu cares about J so much~ ♪( ´▽｀)
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aaah because you do that with your intimate friends :lol: I thought how can I explain this I thought because you are using japanese characters then they will do as what japanese do I don't know If you will understand what I mean if no sorry I confused you :nervous
But reading your Fanfic made me think of a new ver song of taylor swift for mayuki :cathappy:
But theeeeey are never ever will get to be together~ :catglare:
sorry I'm joking :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
by the way I'm watching Shingeki no kyojin too :P
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Mayu was the owner of a nice cafe restaurant...
Mayu bought a lock and a key necklace...
Mayu really really loved Jurina now...
Poor Yuki... she's going to relies her feeling for Mayu soon enough...
But is Yuki really love Mayu or regret for not being with Mayu when she could?
Can't wait to see what's going to happen next?
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Nooo! Mayu is sadistic and evil! I hope Yuki realizes this and stays with Sae. Then we can continue to enjoy JuriMayu. Hehe! :D
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hmm take your time if you feels dont have an idea....yeah sometime that happen....
fighting gibson-san!!!
thank for the update
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YEAH GAMBAREEE GIBSON SAN
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waa thanks! i forget that xDD ah, in my country is common too to give kiss in the cheek.
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Chapter 5
I was sleeping quietly, when my peaceful rest been disturbed, I felt like somebody got beside me and pulled the blanket away from me. And when I looked it up, it’s Mayu and she reeks, the smell of alcohol overwhelmed me. So I got closer to her and ask her “Where were you? Where did you stay?” but when I look it up, looks like you already fall asleep liked a baby.
“m-my chest hurt, please make it stop”
she said, then a see a little tears came out from her eyes. “sleep talking?” I asked myself, and got a little more closer to her. “Yeah she’s asleep” I mumble myself and hug her, I don’t really care if she smell like alcohol, she’s sad, I’m her roommate for this vacation and yet she doesn’t tell her problems. I just hugged her until I fall asleep again.
“Yuki do you love me?”
Mayu asked, I was confused, I’m seeing Mayu and myself talking in my old house. I’m seem shock but then hug her.
“Of course Mayu, I love you, you’re my best friend”
Yuki said, wait I’m talking to like I’m a third person here. But then Mayu suddenly pinned me down on the sofa, I saw my eyes grew bigger. “Is that my reaction looks like?” I asked myself
“Ehh! Mayu what are you doing?”
Yuki asked, but Mayu didn’t answered, she just kissed me all over my face and even my neck, I just blush seeing myself being pinned down by Mayu in the sofa and kissing me. But I just giggled, smile and said
“Mayu that tickles”
Mayu just get up and look at me, my other me. And gave her that smile, that beautiful smile, I remember the first time I saw it. It was back then under the sakura tree in our school garden in highschool, you was just reading a manga when I suddenly disturb you. You were so cold back then, but my image of you change when I saw that smile, It feels warm and honest.
Then I saw you heading for the door, I tried to move my body, but I can’t, my body seems in a frozen state. But my other self suddenly get up and grab Mayu’s arm and pinned her against the wall
“Where are you going?”
I asked, I mean my other self asked. Mayu just widen her eyes and try to say something. But can’t, because I was getting closer to her until our lips meet each other. I just blushed seeing myself and Mayu kissed.
“Riiiing”
I, no I mean my other self lick Mayu’s lips, Mayu showing a expression that I’ve never seen before and her face totally red now. My other self just smile and start to get lower and kissed, lick and bite Mayu’s neck
“Y-Yuki w-what are doing?”
Mayu asked in a rugged voice and still trying to get away, but my other self just tighten her hold on Mayu, and started to roam her hands on Mayu’s body. Mayu just shivered from my other self action and release a small moan
“Riiiiiiiiiiing!!!
I felt really hot watching myself and Mayu making out and felt really embarrass seeing this. But I can’t take my eyes from it. My heartbeats beating like a drum now, I felt my sweat from my face slowly dripping away. But then I felt like something pulling me away
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“RRRiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnngggggg!!!”
I open my eyes and saw my phone ringing beside me, I checked it out and saw Sae’s calling me, so I answer it
“Morning Yuki!!”
she said, I just rubbed my eyes and look at my clock
“Sae it’s 7:30 am it’s too early!!”
I shout at her
“hehehe sorry about that, it just that I missed you so much, and I don’t want you to be late again from work,. Any way I’m coming home tomorrow do you want me to buy you something?”
Sae asked, I just smile at her
“No, you don’t need to buy me anything, I’ll just call you later, I’m going back to sleep” I said
“Hahahaha okay, don’t sleep to much baby or you will be late at work again. Bye I love you”
she said, I just smile
“Hmmm… okay, Bye”
I said, then lay on my bed, But I remember some image or flashes of my dream in my head. I just blush and hug my pillow “What is that dream all about?” I asked myself and close my eyes thinking of Mayu
………………………..TBC
Okay minna I got some few Ideas now but I’m too lazy to write it down hehehehe
anyway Thank you for reading my fic and all the comments
hope you like this chapter hehehehe
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the beggining of this chapter is also a dream, right?
waa Yukiii, if you would have realized before about Mayuyu and her feelings u.u maybe it's too late now? D: She seems so happy with Jurina :/
nice chapter! :3
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Yeah if yuki realize back in high school maybe it wont this difficult
Separated mayu from jurina is cruel and black keke
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Yuki having that flashback is only making her realize her mistake in the past
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Ah... Yuki was remembering her past with Mayu...
And also her desire regarding Mayu...
Wah... Yuki seemed so upset with Sae there....
Here Sae was supposed to be her girlfriend...
Yuki treated Sae badly here....
What's going to happen next
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Eh~ The first part is just the flashback in Yuki's dream :stoned:
OMG, Yuki dreams that she and Mayu are making out :kekeke:
That's suprise me a lots :wahaha:
Now, Yuki has realized her feeling toward Mayu but it's too late :err:
Mayu's now happy with Jurina :on speedy:
Crush you, Sae! Why're you calling for Yuki and disturb her dream :scolding:
Sae's going home soon :shock:
Can't wait to see what'll happen next :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Hum hum hum hum yes its kind of late but not soo late.they still doesn't married you know keke
Yuki still had a chance to steal mayu keke
Let me see how she doing it kekeke
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Yeah!!! U finally updated!!!
It is quite confused actually.... Is that just a dream or flashback?
It felt like real but they didn't make out in the previous chapter.....
Sae is coming back and are u going make Yuki confuse about her feelings?
Hope u can update soon
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Whoa that make out sesion its not happen in first season right,so i guess its just yuki real desire at that time,it just the thing that she should do at that time but it never happen because she idiot to not knowing herself feeling.i dont blame her LOL its normal when you fall in love.
Yeah yuki had a chance,but dont know.its yuki POV now
We dont know what mayu thinking,she a great actress right
I felt her real blank face LOL ,she looks fine and happy but dunno if in the back her blank face is total chaos
Thank for the update
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Ohman! It was just a dream! I thought it was the real thing! :banghead: Well dreams is our subconcious mind and from there where our desires lies. Where our thoughts hide that can't express. Ohwell!
Uwaaa~ Sae's coming back! Oooh! Yuki you better realize your feelings for Mayu quickly or else..
Ohmygosh! I can't wait to witness what's next.. :fap
Thank you for the update :bow: :twothumbs :thumbsup
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Chapter 6
It’s Sunday noon, around 1:48 pm I heard a knock on my door and when I open it, it’s Sae holding some plastic bag.
“Ohh, Sae”
I said, she just smile at my reaction and kiss me on the cheek and give me the plastic bag then she entered in my apartment.
“I’m back!!! Did you miss me?”
she said, I just smile at her and nodded my head. I look up what’s inside the bag and pulled out the contents
“Kani?”
I asked, but she just smiled at me and signal me to come closer to her
“yeah kani, since you didn’t say anything I just buy you a kani. That’s the town specialty”
She said, then I smile at her and clasp my hand
“Hmm I should cook it then?”
I said, Sae just widen her eyes and snatch the bag of kani of me. And make me sit in the living room, while she open the TV and smile at me
“Nee Yuki I think I should cook it since it’s my gift for you ehh”
She said, and go to the kitchen and prepare our meal. I try to enter my kitchen but Sae push me out. I know I’m not a good cook but I can help her out right? I tried to offered her some help but she just kiss me and make me sit on the living room again.
after some minutes, Sae then called me in and show me her dish. It’s looks good and taste good, we talked about her trip and my activity while she’s gone. After our meal, she help out cleaning our mess, while I’m washing the dishes Sae suddenly hug me from behind and started kissing my neck, I giggled from her action
“What’s wrong Sae?”
I asked her but she just kiss my ear and whisper to me
“Yuki I miss you”
I just looked at her, then I saw her eyes, it looks like sad, and lonely. I just give her a reassuring smile
“Sae it’s just three days”
I said, but she hold my chin give me a passionate kiss, I broke our kiss because of lack of air. While I was trying to catch my breath she touch my cheek and make me look at her
“It’s not that, It’s just you been cold to me lately”
she said, while looking down. I smile at her and give her a kiss
“Really?”
I asked, but she grab my arm and started to cry, I panicked when I saw her so I give her a hug
“Sae why are you crying?”
I asked, but she let go of my arm and sit from the ground
“It’s just that, I’m feeling really insecure right now, and I don’t know why. I feel like I’m slowly losing you Yuki, and I don’t want that”
She said while her tears slowly dripping from her face. Then I suddenly remember Kumi. Is Sae feeling what Kumi feels like in Kanon?
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(flash back remember chapter 4)
After I accompany Mayu, I don’t feel like going home so I decided to go to the park, It’s dark I don’t think there’s a lot of people gonna come to the park at night. It’s the perfect place for me to clear my mind, while I was driving to go to the park I saw Rena in the side road talking to her phone, and her expression seems like in trouble. So I park my car and go to her
“Rena”
I said when I approach her, she look at me and give a worried look
“Yuki, I think Kumi’s in trouble”
she said, while still trying to call Kumi
“huh?! What do you mean?”
I asked her, then she showed me her phone,
“Kumi called me earlier and she sound weird and she’s trying say something about Kanon, but when I asked her what’s wrong? I suddenly heard a glass breaking sound and our call had been cut off”
Rena said fast, I almost didn’t understand her. So I offered her a ride in Kumi’s apartment to check on her. When we arrive there, It seems quiet, so Rena tried to knock Kumi’s door, but it suddenly opened allowing us to entered
“Excuse me…ehh!!!””
Rena scream, so I run beside her and look to where she’s looking. The whole room is a mess, broken glass everywhere and you could easily smell the stench of alcohol, broken bottle of vodka, broken vase other things could be seen from the room. And there’s Kumi in the middle crying.
“Kumi”
Rena whisper, then approach the girl in the middle of the room. And hug her, Kumi just continue her cries on Rena’s shoulder
“What happened?”
I said while checking on Kumi if she’s have any injuries
“It’s over”
Kumi said while sobbing, Rena and I look to each other first and nodded our heads
“What’s over Kumi?” Rena ask in a soft voice
“Kanon hates me now”
Kumi said and her cries got more worst, Rena just hug Kumi tight while I just rubbed her shoulder to calm her down
“Ehh why would Kanon hate you? You two are the perfect couple”
I asked, Kumi just look at me with her red and teary eyes
“Were not perfect, since she graduate college, she become cold to me, I always try to brushed it off, but It hurt me. I know she’s tired form work, and a busy with her own career, but she didn’t even call me, like it used to be”
Kumi said, Rena just grab Kumi and let her cry on her shoulder
“H-How??you two have been dating since middle school” Rena asked
“That’s one of the reason, I’m afraid. What if she got bored with me and want to try someone else, what if is fell inlove with some other girls. What if she tried to have sex with a man and actually like it. I could never win against that. I been with her since middle school, I don’t know what to do if I lost her”
Kumi said and wiped her tears, Rena and I just hug her
“What actually happened, why did you fight?” I asked
“I was waiting for Kanon after work, I want to surprised her and pick her up and go watch some movie or something, But to my surprise, when she got out from the building there’s a man resting his arm around Kanon’s shoulder, and smiling at her, I just rust and push the man off Kanon. Then started punching him, Kanon tried to stop me and separated me from the man, when I look at her she have tears in her eyes, I came closer to her but she slapped me and called me “Baka” I just run and drive my way”
Kumi said, I and Rena just looked at each other
“Kumi I think you should talk to Kanon to know what’s going on”
Rena said and I just nodded, Kumi just look at us with anger in her eyes
“No!!”
Kumi shout and get up and started pushing us out of the room
“But Kumi!!”
I said, But Kumi still didn’t listen and finally able to push us out to the room and close the door shut.
“Yuki I’ll just handle this tomorrow, I think It’s just a misunderstanding, Kumi become really insecure and stupid when it comes to Kanon ehh. And she doesn’t even think strait”
Rena said with a smile, I just nodded my head and let Rena handle this
(end of flashback)
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I grab Sae’s arm and make her stand up and brush some of her bangs on her forehead.
“Sae I’m sorry If I make you feel insecure, but you don’t have to worry about that I’m by your side right?”
I asked, and she just nodded and kissed me. But I suddenly remember flash of Mayu’s Image in my brain.
“You’re right Yuki, I don’t have to worry over nothing. And it’s late I need to go home .”
Sae said, then get up and started to leave. I just looked down “Why did I see Mayu’s Image?” I asked my myself. I felt guilt when I look at Sae’s back. I run to her and pulled her in
“Yuki!?”
she said, shock for my sudden action
“Sae please stay the night here”
I said and started kissing her with passion, she just reply my kiss with the same amount and lay me on the sofa and started removing my clothes. “I love Sae, right?” I asked myself, while we continue our action.
…………………………………..TBC
thank’s for reading this fic minna
and thank’s for all the comments
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NO yuki you love mayu and you know it ^^
what happened to my kuminon I hope you have explanations author-san :angry: :angry:
anyway cant wait for the next chapter ^^
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Oh! What happened? Kumin.. I guess she misunderstand the situation.. Hope KumiNon's relationship going to be fine..
Oh Sae about how you're feeling insecure for no reason.. Well instinct girlfriend, you know it, there's something wrong.. Oh well.. I don't want to see anyone who'll going to be broken hearted.. but that just the way it is.. Love, why you so complicated?! :banghead:
Will Yuki able to realize her feelings? What will Mayu do when she found out about Yuki's feelings? Will Yuki be hindrance on JuriMayu's relationship? Will someone freaking realizes their feelings somehow?! :banghead:
This is going to be hard.. My MaYuki feels.. :'(
Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup :twothumbs
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The KumiNon relationship seems strained at the moment and now Yuki and Sae may go into a moment of passion.
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Oh no, what happened to KumiNon?
Poor Sae. Yuki needs to sort out her feelings now.
Thanks for the update!!
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Oh please gibson-san.you make yuki so dense again LOL
Nope yuki you dont love sae that much,you belong to mayu from the first place
Mayuki moment where? I missed it.
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looks like kurogumi-chan didn't give up and she wants for mayuki to be together :)
But I think from the chapter 4 I think I gave up It's really hurts my mayuki~ :cry:
I know I ship other pairing like WMatsui, RenaYuki and JuriMayu but still from the first of the fic I was into mayuki. Maube Mayuki is beast ship that's why :sweatdrop:
but I think about it you didn't put the pairing so we didn't know what is going to be at the end. :nervous
and as I see even for you I think the end is not really clear in your mind or my guessing is wrong :P
I know that I'm writing this comment but you're not going to answer me but I know that you are reading it :grin:
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AH... Poor Sae... her feeling was spot on somehow...
And Yuki was so guilty over what Sae was feeling...
And how about Kumi and Kanon... are they really over?
What's going to happen next between Mayu, Yuki, Jurina and Sae?
Can't wait
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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@mo-chan: actually i already give up on the first season LOL but it's not fair,at least i want they know each other feeling. i want at least yuki know that mayu ever loved her. or mayu know what yuki feeling now for her....LOL....this fic is good right?
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NO~ Yuki! You doesn't love Sae much now :gyaaah: I guess it was transfered to Mayu :wahaha:
What happen to Kuminon in the past :dunno:
I think what Kumi saw is just a mistake :on ksweat:
Now, I slowly start giving up in Mayuki :on cloudeye:
Yuki's back to be dense like the old days :err:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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I think Yuki is confused and not being honest to herself. Hope she figures out what she really wants! Please update soon :)
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IM UPSET WITH YUKI
BUT SHE IN CONFUSED STATE NOW.
MAYU KEEP COMMING IN HER MIND.
SAE FELT LOST YUKI SLOWLY.WONDER IF JURINA TOO.
THESE TWO PERSON (MAYU AND YUKI) IF THEY BEING HONEST AT FIRST THIS NOT GOING HAPPEN TO THEM.
IF MAYU HONEST ABOUT HER FEELING TOWARD YUKI THIS NOT SUPPOSED HAPPEN.
IF YUKI NOT SOOO BLIND,THIS NOT SUPPOSED HAPPEN.
BUT OTHERWISE,IT HAPPEN NOW.
WONDER HOW IT TURN OUT.
IF IT KEEP SAME,WELL JUST ENDED YUKI AND SAE TOGHETHER BUT WITH A LITTLE DOUBT ON YUKI SIDE
AS FOR MAYU,WELL DONT KNOW THEY LOOKS FINE.
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update sooon please why is so good fic
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Chapter 7
Two weeks since that incident, and everything looks normal. Kumi even visit me to my apartment and gave me a chocolate as a thank you gift for comforting her while she’s in that state. Kumi’s blushing while Rena’s laughing while telling me of how silly Kumi looks like while Kanon explaining to her that the man that she’s with, is her cousin. She even said that Kanon make her apologize to her cousin, while Kumi is dying out of embarrassment. Good thing Kanon’s cousin is a gentleman and accept her apology. After that both Kumi and Kanon buy a house, and moved in together so Kumi won’t be jealous anymore. I felt happy for the couple, but deep inside my heart envy them. I envy how they handle their problem so easily, I envy of how they love each other so much that they can easily be jealous. But thanks to their love, they can also easily accept the ones mistake.
Now I remember all the years that I’m dating Sae, in those all years she really is a chick magnet. But I don’t blame them, Sae is good looking enough to attract both male and females, she also good in sport, good cook, smart, lovable and charming. She like a prince, everyday she threat me like a princess. But something still missing, even though a lot of people flirt with her, I never felt jealous. I never felt jealousy towards her, maybe I trust her too much, but that “jealous” thing she felt that to me. So one day I called Rena to asked her what’s bugging me. I asked her to come to a café near my work. After that I prepare myself for the our talk
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I came in 15 minutes early for our talk. But a couple of pedestrian grab my attention, they look like shopping together or something, I don’t know. But they looks really sweet, and when they passed by near the café, I finally saw their face. It’s Mayu and Jurina holding hands while walking, Jurina carrying all the bag while Mayu clings on her smiling and laughing at their own talks, seems like they didn’t notice me, well that’s obvious since they didn’t enter the café, they just passed by. But I felt my chest hurt when I saw them smiling to each other like they have their own world. I started thinking why my chest hurt? Why I’m feel I want them to separated their hands and walk like a normal person. But my self-question broke when someone tap my shoulder to grab my attention
“Yuki, ahhh finally”
Rena said while sit beside me, I just looked at her still thinking about what I just saw
“Yuki, if you space out again, I’ll leave you”
Rena pouted while call the waiter and order her favorite melon bread and a café latte. I looked at her and give her a confuse face
“Huh?”
I looked at her, but she stare at me with a bored expression in her eyes
“Don’t give a huh? You’re the one who called me remember?”
Rena said while looking at me, I just smile to her and I didn’t waste anytime.
“Rena what is jealously? How does it felt like?”
I asked like a clueless child. She stare at me and give me a serious expression
“are you serious?”
Rena ask, while I just nodded
“didn’t you feel jealousy back then in highschool? When Mayu pretended to steal you’re boyfriend, also with Sae doesn’t you feel jealous when other girls flirt with her?
Rena asked, while I scratch my head and looked down
“Well, about highschool I felt more hurt or betrayed by Mayu, while Sae I don’t know?”
I said, while Rena look at me with “are you serious look of hers” good thing the waiter came in and delivered Rena’s order, Rena then grab her drink and have a little sip on it, after that she look at me
“do you love Sae?”
Rena asked, I just nodded my head as an approval
“Rena what does jealousy felt like?”
I asked hoping she can give me one, she just sign and massage her forehead
“well jealousy is a hard word for me, yes I felt jealous before when Airin talk to her co-worker or Airin didn’t called me or something like that? I felt heavy and my chest hurt when someone grab her attention and she doesn’t look at me. But everybody have they owns interpretation to it. Jealousy maybe other word for possessiveness for someone, like you only want them to look at you, see you, and care for you. But like I said everybody have they owns interpretation to it. So I think it’s normal for us to feel jealous for someone we love”
Rena said, I just smile for her wise word and look down
“Y-Yeah you’re right”
I said, she then grab my hand and hold it tight.
“Yuki?”
Rena called my name so I look at her. I just stare at her then she just give me a sad smile
“Yuki if you didn’t felt any jealousy toward Sae maybe you trust her so much or you doesn’t really love her. You two are going out for years, and to think you haven’t even felt just a little bit jealousy towards her is weird, I said weird since Sae is a popular in college and attract more people”
she said and munch her melon bread, while I just think about what she said
“I-I like Sae, but….”
I said while looking myself in the café wall mirror
“But?”
Rena asked, I close my eyes take a deep breath
“I don’t know?”
I said and, Rena just look at me and bit her lower lip
“Yuki” she said and make me look at her
“Hmm…?”
“Yuki, if you don’t have feelings with Sae I think you should break up with her. As you’re bestfriend I advice you to end this up. You will just hurt her more if you stay with her, and also the longer you stay with her the bigger the guilt that you will be feelings afterwards.
Rena said and take her last bite on her bread, I’m just thinking all my memories of Sae. Our first date, our first kiss and many more but the same time I’m also thinking of Mayu with Jurina. It hurt me, I’m I using Sae all this time? If is then I’m a bitch? She doesn’t deserve me she deserve better. I felt heavy thinking of that. I felt my world slowly crushing. If I love Sae then why I’m always dreaming about Mayu, why she suddenly come to my mind. I felt Rena hands touching my face and using her thumb to whipped away my tears, wait I’m crying now? I asked myself and look at Rena.
“Yuki”
she said and hugged me. Then suddenly I can’t control my myself anymore, I cried in her shoulder and let my emotion burst from the sudden realization
“I- I’m so cr-cruel”
I said while Rena comfort me, she tapping my back and whisper to
“Yuki if you don’t love her, just break up with her so you don’t cause her and yourself much more pain”
I myself cried and cried while nodded with Rena. I know this gonna hurt Sae and me but I need to do this. I can’t lie to Sae anymore…….
………………………….TBC
Thank’s minna for reading this and for all the comments
hehehe I didn’t know Yuki’s POV is much harder than Mayu for me to write :OMG: ahhh….
anyway hope you like it
oh yeah @ kurogumi is it that weird when I write a Mayuki in the other section?? hehehe well it's my my little sister/puppy mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 fault she gave me a headstart ehh
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Thanks for the update !!
Finally Yuki realized her feelings towards Mayu.. :)
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Yuki realizes her feelings.. Rena thank you, you're such a good friend.. :oops:
Oh man! This going to be hard for the next.. :banghead:
Be waiting for your next up then :thumbsup
Gambatte ne gibson-san~ :fap
Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup
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Oh so Rena is still with Airin.
Hmm...Yuki's gone mad.
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aww Yuki finally get the thing right... but now what she will do? I dont want anyone to suffer TnT
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This will only set Yuki into trouble later on for her
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Maybe it's difficult because,so much emotion on yuki side.and you put a lot detail.
It's like you make 'yukirin step by step to recognize her feeling toward mayu' on each chapter.LOL but it's great!
But it's not like on mayu pov doesn't have much emotion,it has.but as for mayu she 's already know her feeling,she clearly recognize what she felt for someone.
(just 1 chapter she already know that she loved yuki,so you could easily make develop on what mayu character gonna do in some situation)
Isn't like yuki who need a lot chapter to explain what so wrong with her until rena spoke it.maybe it's more easy when yuki finally make a move on mayu,(maybe) LOL
Yeah yuki is so dense,and it's hurt many person,her friends,sae and mayu.
Wanna know what happen after this,i think i don't want to know the scene yuki break up with sae.just break up and make your desicion yuki.
I want yuki start her movement on mayu LOL
About your mayuki in other section.i like it LOL why you ask me.as a reader we always love it when ther favorit author make an update or make new one LOL
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GEEZ YUKI,
TOTALLY JEALOUS SHE IT.
YUKI WANT WAYU JUST LOOK AT HER,SEE HER,CARE HER,AND MAYBE WANNA MAYU SMILE JUST FOR HER KEKEKE
BUT MAYUYU SEEMS HAPPY WITH JURINA.
HOPEFULY YUKI DONT DO LIKE WHAT MAYU DO.
BACK WHEN YUKI SO IN LOVE WITH THAT JERK YOSHI.MAYU JUST SECRETLY LOVE YUKI AND SACRIFICE HERSELF JUST FOR YUKI.SHE NOT HONEST TO HERSELF AND COFESS HER FEELING TO YUKI.
HOPE YUKI MORE ACTIVE,HOPE SHE BRAVERY SHOW HER FEELING TO MAYU CLEARLY,SO MAYU NOTICE IT.AND IN THE END CONFESS IT.
OH AND BECAUSE YUKI IS DENSE.IT WOULD BE GOOD IF SHE KEEP ASK MORE ADVISE FROM HER FRIENDS,MAYBE TOLD THEM WHAT SHE FELT TOWARD MAYU,THAT WOULD BE THE GREAT SHOCK FOR THEM SINCE THEY KNOW THAT MAYU EVER LOVED YUKI TOO BACK IN HIGH SCHOOL
THANK UPDATE FAST PWIISE KEKE
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Finally Yuki knows her feelings.....
It is going to have a sad scene next chapter.....
I would like to know Mayu feelings too.....
Hope u can update soon
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Yay!! Yuki finally realized her feeling toward Mayu :on woohoo:
I'm so happy now :on gay:
Yuki, you're sure having a very good friend by your side :hee:
She's gonna break up with Sae :on drink:
I'm look forward to the JuriMayuki scenes :wriggly:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Ah so Yuki didn't actually love Sae...
Just like her...And she's going to break up with Sae soon
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank You for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Gibson san I hope u can update very soon :)
I can't wait any longer for this fic :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
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This chapter made me sad. What if Yuki breaks up with Sae and ends up with no one? It will take a lot of courage…
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So Yuki realised her feelings now. So it's been Mayu all along since she was more upset by Mayu than by her ex when they broke up.
Too late now Yuki. Mayu's got Juju now.
Thanks for the update <3
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Please update soon!
Mayuki world!
Sae chan prepared your heart!
Yuki good job!
Rena nice advice!
Mayu stop so lovey dovey with jurina!yuki dont like it!
Jurina get new girl!
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Chapter 8
I’m just staring at the silver bracelet in my hand, and remembering how did I get it. It was Sunday evening and I was about to talk to Sae about my feelings for her and break-up with her, when she suddenly ask me out to have a date. I’m thinking to use this to talk to her, but it backfired me when Sae suddenly blindfolded me and make me come with her. I don’t know what she’s planning but I don’t want to hurt her anymore. I’m determine to break-up with her now. But that change when Sae remove the cloth that covered my eyes. My eyes widen when I saw the room, It was Sae’s room, the room looks stunning, with red rose petal all over the place and have a small table in the center, with a bouquet of flowers in the middle, and a bottle of wine on the side. I was just stunned for what I saw, and couldn’t moved my body.
“Sae what’s this?”
I asked, but she just smile and kiss my lips.
“Hmm… It’s a thank you, for staying with me”
She said, I smile awkwardly to her and look her in the eyes
“What do you mean?”
I ask, but she pulled me in and make me sit, and she then open the bottle of red wine and pour the contents into the two redwine glass, after the she give me the other glass and raise her wineglass.
“It’s for the happy memories you give me, for supporting me, giving me warm, for always there by my side and for choosing me”
She said with a smile, while me, my chest hurt when I heard that.
“How could I break her heart when she’s like this?”
I asked myself while looking at her. But she then signal me to raise my glass for a cheer
“Cheers!!”
She said before taking a sip into the beverage. After that she clapped her hands and reach out for her pocket, and pulled something. It’s a small blue box with red ribbon on it.
“What’s this?”
I asked when she give me the box, but she just smile and signal me to open it. When I open it have a silver bracelet on it. I reach out the bracelet and raise it up
“What’s this for Sae?”
I asked again, but she take the bracelet and make me wear it
“A gift, to remember me”
She say, while giving me some foods
“What do you mean?”
I asked, she’s acting weird, I don’t know but I have the feeling that she hiding something for me
“Actually Yuki, I got a promotion, and they want me to transfer to their international branches”
I was stunned when she said that, then she took my hand and kiss it
“Yuki….. Sorry if I didn’t tell you about this, it’s just that, I want to experience more, I want to develop my skills more, I want to learn the other side of the world”
She said and I just nodded, but then I saw a little frown on her face but replace it immediately with a sweet smile
“Yuki please let’s just spend the moments together before I go”
She says and kiss me.
She’s going away and go to abroad, I can use this, to break-up with her but there’s something inside me, scared of losing her. It’s selfish, I know, and I also know that It’s gonna hunt me in the future but still, I just couldn’t bring myself up do to it, I’m scared of being alone.
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It’s been a week since Sae give me that bracelet and everytime I saw it, my chest hurt for my lies and guilt that I’m feeling. But I know I must to do it, or this guilt that I’m feeling for her will be never gone, if I didn’t tell her. I called her, to come to my house and have a talk. When she arrived, I didn’t waste anytime, I didn’t greet her like I used to, My heart beating so much faster, I felt my sweat all over my body. I'm nervous of how she will react.
“Will she hurt me? Will she beat me up? Will she scream at me? Will she call me a traitor?"
I asked myself, for the possible result of how will she react when I tell her the truth. The truth that I don’t love her, and I never did. All this time my heart belongs to Mayu, even thou she love someone else.
“Yuki what’s wrong?”
Sae ask me, with a worry voice but I just look at her and glup. I looked at her in the eyes and gather all of my courage and said
“S-Sae I want to break up with you”
I close my eyes waiting for a scream or a slap, or asking for question like “Why, or what’s my reason” but I heard nothing but silence, Sae just looked down and slowly lift her face to looked at mine
“Okay”
She said, and she was about to leave. But I stop her, I don’t know why I stop her. But my body move like it owns. At the same time I couldn’t believe myself of how she react. I expected scream, slap or more but I only get is a “Okay”
“Yuki, let go of me”
She said, her eyes is frightening, I’ve never seen her eyes like this before.
“That’s you’re response?”
I asked her, but she just nodded her head
“I know that you’re in love with you’re friend , I know it.”
She said, while her eyes change to frightening to teary
“Huh?”
is the only respond that I gave her.
“Come on Yuki, it’s so obvious. When will were in college you always called her name when you’re asleep but I never saw her, I don’t who she is or what she is in you’re life but you always called her, I know myself that she’s have you’re heart since Rena told me that she’s you’re besfriend and you just hurt for what she did to you. But don’t you think, that’s a bit too much, just for that. That habit of yours stop through the years but when you saw her again you, that habit of yours came back and got a lot worse, that’s why I suddenly cried because I know myself that I can’t have you. Even I thought I said that I’m going to abroad you didn’t get upset, or try to stop me, you just nodded you’re head.”
She said while sobbing and crying, while I felt a knife cut my heart when she said that “Sae knows me, better than my ownself” I thought
“Sae”
“I can have you’re body but I can never have you’re heart. Do you know how much that it hurt me?”
She said and leaves me behind
“Sorry Sae”
I said while crying for my own doings, If only I wasn’t so dense of my own feelings I wouldn’t have hurt Sae now.
hope you like this minna and thank you for the comments
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thank you for the update :twothumbs
well, Sae and Yuki broke up, now Yuki can focus to win Mayu back..
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Still I feel Sae can retaliate at any moment although I wonder how Yuki can protect herself from the situation from exploding :nervous
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Why do I feel like you're going to break up JuriMayu next? = ='
OTP aside, tbh, Sae was a better choice for Yukirin if this is a real life situation. It's easy to find someone you love, but it's hard to find someone who truly love you.
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Sae know...well everyone know it,even jurina maybe deep in her heart sense it that yuki actually loved mayu
Its just mayu and yuki so dense
Mayu dense cause not realìzed that actually yuki heart was belong to her all this time
Pldase be honest with each other
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Anoo.. Gibson san I want Mayuki now 8)2
enough for dishonest feeling :w00t: Mayu and Yuki have the right to know about each other feeling :inlove:
at least let Yuki know about mayu's feeling towards her in the past :thumbup
ehehhe update soon :jphip:
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I agree with momondmozide-san~ I want Mayuki now :ding:
Although Yuki's decision to break up Sae is hurt but it's a right choice for both of them :sweat:
If they were continuing, they'd just hurt each other feeling :bigdeal:
Oh~ Sae knows Yuki better than Yuki does! Not so much surprise :on drink:
Now, Yuki can focus on getting back Mayu's heart , maybe :wahaha:
Can't wait to see how will you do to the Jurimayu :on gay:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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I had more question,
What yuki gonna do after break up with sae?
Is not like her obstacle gone all
Mayu's belong to jurina now.
Maybe scheming a plan to stealing mayu? LOL
Cmon yuki be bold!! Dont be shy LOL
Now im yuki suporter!
Thank for the update
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^What yuki gonna do?
~Hummm if i was yuki,then should i discuss it with my friends? Ask some advise from them is the right thing.maybe rena?or yuko who close with mayu? Oshiri~
~That was if i was yuki,i can't think else,it's not like after being free from sae,yuki just confess her feeling toward mayu,not that easy~
~but it's interesting if when yuki told them about her feeling...how shock rena and the other,like dejavu,but the problem is now mayu not dating a jerk,she's dating jurina,and they looks happy together,trying separated them only hurt their friendship,i mean yuki friendship with yuko,rena,and all~
~wonder when yuki know that mayu originaly loved her...i imagine yuki reaction now hahaha she might get hurt from that news or regret that but she might more entusiasm than before it's like injecting adrenaline~
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I think everyone can tell what is going on except for Yuki and Mayu. I'm glad Sae realized it soon.
Looking forward to your next chapter, but I don't wanna see Jurina sad :(
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JUST DO IT YUKI!!! JUST DO IT!!!
DO WHAT????
I DON'T KNOW EITHER!!! YEAH!!! KEKEKEKEKEKE
UPDATE FAST PLEASE........
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what! so They .. WHAT!! From high school !!? They loved each other from high school and both of them didn't know it :shocked
What the fuck is this :lol: XD They are sooo STUPID :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
Yuki with her denseness she didn't know even about her feelings only when she lost Mayu :smhid
And for Mayu's case too much secrets for little things :banghead:
Maybe even Yuki broke up Sae but that doesn't mean that Mayu will leave Jurina :(
What should I do? :huhuh I can't choose between Yuki and Jurina :cry:
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Somehow I still hope Rena will be with Jurina. :sweatdrop:
And I feel sorry for Yuki.
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Yuki~
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[Blank Face]
~Sorry for very late comment...
~I really like your story from the start, It's just that I don't have time to comment...
~Anyway, Mayu here is so mature and she even sacrifice her own happiness for the sake of Yuki
~Please update soon...
~thank you
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Cheers~ gibson san
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Chapter 9 part 1
Time just passed by so quickly, and now it’s December. After I broke up with Sae I never seen her again, I tried to contact her, but she never answered her phone or never replied to my messages, I want to apologize to her properly, but she never give me a chance, she just cut all of her connection to me. Rena said that I will find someone that I will love, someday. But the problem is, I already know who I love, but she is with someone else.
Those stare she gave with her lover and the look that she gave on me, are totally different, I miss those stare. Back in high school she will always gave me those stare and I love it, but when she doesn’t look at me and talk to our friends, her eyes changes, it looks so empty and I can feel the sadness, but I never really asked her why, I told her all of my secret, and all of what I’m doing, and she just listen to me. She doesn’t complain of my action like Acchan or Rena, she just listened to me and gave her shoulder for me to cry on.
I miss her, but I can’t have her. I let my emotion run through me at that time I saw her with my ex, I felt betrayed by her, and I can’t bring myself to look at her for many years. But when I saw her again, I just let my emotion burst again and run away from her. This stupid action of mine cause her to an accident and by that I found out that she was only doing that just to protect me. She’s always there for me and I felt really stupid for not trusting her. If only I choose her at that time our friendship will never have this wall that I’m feeling right now.
Yes, we become friends again, but this time she change a lot, she not the innocent otaku girl that always listened to me, she changed. Those stares that she gave me is not like, it used to be, we didn’t talk much. I only talk to her when I accidentally see her. And for god sake, if were alone, she always use her phone and talk to her lover. I always felt that there’s a wall between us, and I never felt this in high school
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It’s December 24, my friends asked me to hang out with them this Christmas, in Haruna’s house. I just accepted it, it’s not like I have better plans. I don’t have lover anymore so I just choose to spent my time with my friends.
When I arrive, the first person who greeted me is Rena, and she looks depressed.
“Rena, it’s Christmas eve, smile just little bit”
I said trying to cheer her up, but she just signed
“I miss my Airin, I want to spent my time with her”
“Then, why didn’t you go home with Kumi and Kanon back to you’re home town?”
I asked and she just signed at me again
“What’s the point of coming home, if she’s not there?”
“What do you mean?”
“She in America right now, for her work, she said we can use a Skype later, but I want her now”
She said and I patted her back and lead her to the party, we saw that there’s Acchan and Minami already drinking, while the host of the party Haruna trying to get away from her partner Yuko, I think Yuko’s trying to make Haruna wear that silly but cute Neko ears. When they notice us, Yuko look at her watch and said
“Hmmm… my Shiriri-chan is the last one again, huh?”
“oww come on Yuko, you know those two are in the hotel and restaurant business, of course they are busy, it Christmas eve, and lot of people are staying out of their home right now”
Acchan said while Yuko just signed, and we start the party, Yuko started to play some Christmas song just to feel the mood of Christmas, while Acchan is forcing Takamina to stand under the mistletoe just to kiss her, and Rena just keep herself busy by eating her favorite melon bread. It’s about 11:18 when the two finally arrive, and Yuko greeted them with a smile
“Shiriri-chan I thought you’re not coming, and start to make me worried”
Yuko said and Mayu just bow down her head
“Ahh Sorry, it’s just that there’s a lot of guest coming in late”
“Yeah a lot of them came without any reservation”
Jurina said and hold Mayu’s hand
“Nee we didn’t miss anything yet right?”
Jurina asked and Yuko just smiled at her
“Nope not yet”
Yuko said and run to the other room, I just look at Mayu and our eyes meet, she smiled at me, but her eyes is seems empty, I just look the other way and grab a glass of wine and drink it. Then Yuko came out to the room and make us come near her. She held a few stick with number on the bottom and said
“Nee guys remember this? Let play it again”
“Kings game?”
I mumble to myself, remembering this.
..........................TBC
sorry guys if the update took so long
and thank you for all the comments and for reading this
and by the way my other fic First love will be a long fic from now on
sorry again for not updating this fiction for so long :sweatdrop:
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I almost forget this great fic :mon sweat:
Even Yuki's realized her feeling with Mayu but now Mayu's in love (not so sure) with Jurina :mon noprob:
Oh, Airin is in America :mon evillaff:
King games :mon firecrack:
Something appear on my mind when I read it :kekeke:
Yay! "First love" is now a long fic :mon santa2: :mon santa3: :mon money:
Too happy :mon ignore:
Anyway, I'll wait for your updates :mon corn:
Just update ASAP, please :mon hanky:
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Finally...an update.. :twothumbs
Bakarin must try to win Mayuyu back..
King's game?? Hope something interesting will happen...
Can't wait for the next chapter... :grin:
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Interesting...king's game... What is that?
Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next?
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Hehe I really love this kind of game ^^
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@cisda83 remember chapter 5 in Mayu's POV
Yuko said "Yo!!! guys let's play the kings game" Haruna ask "what's that?". "simple look I have ten stick here, one stick have a red mark on the bottom while the other have number one to nine. If you pick the stick with a red mark you'll be the king and you can give any order that they cannot refuse, and choose a number that gonna do that, and if you pick the number that choose by the king you must do the order. UNDERSTAND" said Yuko
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Blank Face is back !!!
Thank you, gibson!
Wonder what's gonna happen in King's game this time round.
Looking forward to the next chapter :deco:
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Oh! King's game... (did AKB even play it irl?)
But its my fav game in every fanfic
Update soon!
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Ah..seriously? This short? :? :shocked :banghead:
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Wow Yuki is in big pain.
Rena just should forget at Airin.
I just want to know how it will end already. It is so painful.
Please make it happy end. ( this is just my opinion don't care about it )
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Yuki realizes that Mayu was the one but poor Rena...
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Thank you for the update! Yes, please update soon! I really would like to know what's gonna happen next. :yep:
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ooo too short....
Update Soon please
Thanks ^^
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ahhh you're back in this fic!!!! yattaaa :D
i hope that you can update again soon :3
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oh finally you update...
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awww yuki-chan please be patient...mayuyu is yours just yours so don't worry LOL i think i 'm became too much because i missed this update soooooooo much!!! LOL
thank for the update..........
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ME TOOOOOO~
KING GAME MAKE ME REMEMBER MAYU KANON KISSING SCENE~ BUT AT THAT TIME YUKI NOT PAID ANY ATTENTION WITH THAT SCENE BECAUS EOF THAT JERK ....KEKKEKE
IF SOMETHING LIKE THAT HAPPEN AGAIN MAYBE SHE BEGAN SUPER SUPER AND SUPER JEALOUSE KEKEKE
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON GIBSON SAN,MISSED THIS ALREADY SINCE 4 CENTURY AGO KEKEKE AH BUT TAKE YOUR TIME
KING GAME
I LOVED KING GAME
MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER LONG..FULL O F KING GAME AND THE RESULT OF THAT GAME HOPEFULLY YUKI LEARN SOMETHING NEW...LIKE KNOWING MAYU FEELING FOR HER IN HIGH SCHOOL
THANK THANK
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you update this again!! yes!!!
king game!
the game with full of misunderstanding and full of love seed hehe
teh game who make your heart beating faster cause all the possibillity can happen here like...kissed someone you loved
hope mayu and yuki kissed this time or so mayu kissed someone else and this time yuki annoyed with that scene not like before when she not paid much attention with what mayu do
update fast please
thank
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MISSED IT :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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author-san where are you? :cry:
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where are you
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gibson san u shouldn't left this fic like this... please update soon :jphip:
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Where're you, gibson-san !?!?!?!?!?! :pleeease:
I wonder if you were having a writer block :dunno:
But anyway, please don't drop this fic, please :mon pray2:
I'm waiting for your new update and also in other fics :cloudeye:
So please update ASAP, please :kneelbow:
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:OMG: Too many follow up
Sorry it's just that, i'm really really really busy ehh with personal stuff.... and tired ehh...
But when I got the time, I'll update it.. so don't worry
and also some of you will hate me or like me in the result
I apologize for that :err:
maybe I should stop playing ragnarok valkyrie uprising
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I won't hate you pwwooomise :mon hanky:
hoping for the best :mon innocent:
good to know, at least don't leave this fic, i really love it :mon inluv:
okay ill wait for you again at the corner :mon cweepy:
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I'M WAITING FOR YOU... UUUH~
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Ne, Gibson... I'm starting to like this fic.....
Don't put this on Hiatus like you did on my favorite one....
Or else..... :mon zoom: :mon zoom: :mon zoom: :on kimbo: :on kimbo: :on kimbo:
Waiting for your next update....
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THIS THREAD....UNBELIEVABLY DIRTY!!! NEEDING A CLEAN UP!!! TOO MUCH SPIDER WEBS AND DUST *COUGH*
QUOTING~
Too bad,but this fic cut in the best part
King game! Aw
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I should help Tii too (*^*)/
kyaaaaaaaaa SPIDER!!!! *scared*
*rans away*
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i miss this fic too, gibson :bow:
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Ah i already pm ing you long time ago about this,but if you busy its fine
Too bad,but this fic cut in the best part
King game! Aw
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*kicks both imteedee and mo-chan out of the thread*
Well that's better..... :) :) :)
Waiting for your update... XD XD XD
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chapter 9 part 2
“Kings game?”
I mumble to myself, remembering this. The last time we played this, it didn’t end well. I just hope we could have fun. “ahh Yuko, why you always pick this game?” Acchan asked without much enthusiasm, I just looked at them.
“always?” I mumble but it seems like Rena heard me. “yeah, we always played this in collage, and almost all the time Yuko would asked us to kiss her” Rena said while drinking her beverage. Everybody seems to ignore Yuko’s suggestion, and just doing their own stuff. But Yuko’s persistence finally convinced the others to play it as well. Yuko gathered all the stick and let us pick one, after that she asked “okay girls, may I know who’s the king?” I looked all the girls one by one. And when I finally landed my eyes on Mayu I can’t stop staring at her… I’m mesmerized by her beauty.
Why I didn’t notice this before? She turned around and our eyes met, she just smiled at me but stare is cold as ice, I can’t handle this and I looked the other way… “Hey Yuki are you listening?” Yuko tapped my shoulder. I just gave her questioning looked. “I said are you the king, May I see your stick?” she asked, I looked at my hand and yes, I’m the king, I didn’t even notice, I was so distracted by Mayu that I completely ignore the game.
Yuko laughed at me and asked my order. I really can’t think of anything so I just blurted “ Okay I want all of you to drink a shot of tequila in every round of this game” everyone stared at me…and give me an awkward silence. But the silence got broken when Takamina speak out “Oii, I Have a date with Acchan tomorrow, I don’t want to have a freaking headache or a hangover in my date”
“Hahahaha ohh Takamina don’t be a pussy and just obey the order will you, Ohh don’t tell me that you’re actually weak at alcohol? “ Yuko asked, while Takamina defended herself “I am not!!” They continued their argument until Takamina finally obeyed my order… then Yuko gather all the sticks again for another round.
And this time it’s Acchan’s turn to be the king and her order was number six to cook and number three to eat it.. and it turned out that Nyan Nyan is number 6 and Jurina is number 3.. Nyan Nyan happily cooked a meal for Jurina. Jurina seems sweating a lot, and she seems really uncomfortable in the table while staring at her food. By the way the food look like kinda umm, what should I called it?? Poisonous?? I think?? Well it’s color black.
And I came near Yuko and asked her “ Yuko how do eat Nyan Nyan’s cooking” She smiled at me and whispered “I don’t, we just always eat at Mayu’s restaurant” I nodded my head “ohh I see” “I love Nyan Nyan, but I love my life “ Yuko said with a goofy smile.
I looked at Jurina taking a spoon of what Haruna cooked for her. She put that thing on her mouth and spit it out in a sec. she drank the bottle of water beside her and give Nyan Nyan a sad puppy face “Nyan Nyan do you hate?” she asked. Nyan Nyan just tilted her head “huh?” after that all of them drank a shot of tequila. And we restart the game again.
And this round it’s Rena’s turn to be the king. And guest what her order is? Her order is number 2 and number 5 to play the pocky game? I don’t know what that game is, but due to my bad luck I got the number 5 while the one that got number 2 is ……Mayu Yeah Mayu, I really don’t know what the hell is that pocky game?? But Mayu just opened a pocky biscuit and put one in my mouth, I froze when she did that, she came near me and also bite the other side of the biscuit, she’s so close to me that I feel like I’m melting. My heart start beating really fast, were just a centimeter apart when she suddenly broke the biscuit and move away from me… I looked around and saw all the girls are staring at us.. Jurina’s whispering something to Mayu, while Mayu just blushed. What Jurina whispered to her? after that they all drink again a shot of tequila. Takamina looks drunk already, she’s being too clingy on Acchan, while Acchan seems to enjoying it.
Giving her full attention to Takamina. Everybody has drunk 3 or more shot already. While me…. I only got a one glass of wine. The game proceed until, they all pass out, one by one.
It’s 2:15 a.m. already almost all of the girls are passed out on the floor, while Rena is outside chatting with her Airin in her laptop.. looking really busy.. I can’t sleep, I want to sleep, but every time I close my eyes I always see Mayu’s face, her beautiful smile , her tantalizing eyes, her soft looking lips…. Arg!! I get up and go to the bathroom to wash my face.. I want to clear my mind, but then I suddenly feel someone hugged me from behind. And when I looked down to see who is it.
Mayu.
I was shock to see it’s Mayu hugging me from behind. “M-Mayu what are you d-doing?” I asked, but she just tighten her hug from me and lead her head over my shoulder, “ nee you know I always love you, right?” she said, I could feel her breath against my neck “huh??” she licked my neck and started nibbling my ear, “Mayu you’re drunk” I said and tried to push her away,” Mayu please don’t provoke me”. I said to myself. But she didn’t stop, and yet she became much more aggressive . she kissed my lips forcefully. I tried to stop myself from kissing her back but I can’t. My lust for her is too much, all the feelings that I’m hiding suddenly burst out. And make my move on her, I grab her hand and pinned her into the wall and cornered her I kiss her and started removing her clothes, “I know this is wrong, and yet I can’t stop myself” I gave her a passionate kiss and started let my tongue explore her. I could hear her mound and it’s so addicting. I want to hear more so I started to sucking her neck.. and I bite and kiss it, after that I whisper to her “Mayu please say that you love me” she nodded and said “ Yes I love you Jurina”……
“J-Jurina?” I stared at Mayu I felt a sharp pain in my chest. I felt warm liquid rolling down my cheeks . I slowly back away from her.. and get out from bathroom and run away from the house. I just want to be alone… “I’m stupid to think that Mayu loves me”.
ummm... first I would like to thanks TD for forcing me to update this fic and also fixing it
and second I'm really sorry to all of you :sweatdrop: I've been really busy
and I know this is short.... but please don't kill me :bleed eyes:
Thanks for reading
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GIBBY I WUB YOU!!! :heart: thanks for sparing your ever precious day writing this one :bow: Sorry but it has to be done! I want an update! :lol:
and don't worry I won't kill you :P I like the chapter I'm on Team Mayuyu remember?! XD Let's see how Yuki will cope with this, I sense some twist actually XD from now on, I'll bug you everyday! NYAA~!
TD is happy now :deco:
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Finally...an update !!!
Good job, teedee-san :thumbsup
Mayuki kiss, but Mayu thinks Yuki is Jurina :cry:
But, Yuki sort of deserve it.. :nervous
What will happen next??
Update soon, please.. :bow:
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I really did miss your Blank Face updates. I always like it when you post them on Akb48 fanpage :3 Thank you for not leaving this fanfic :on slopkiss:. (Uh.. yeah.. silent reader. gomenasai :bow: )
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:mon cry:
Don't cry Yuki or I will cry too :cry:
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Woah! Tii's blackmail worked!
This was sure a nice update, but a bit sorrowful for Yuki ><
I wonder if Mayu will remember this... thank you for the update o/
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It came out good. Yukirin is still in that phase yet to stay in the battle long term but what can you do?
Good luck to her :nervous
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if someone passed by and saw mayuki on bathroom it will be more interesting fufufufu~~
but still feel sad for Yuki...
Mayu was like robot mecanicly answering XD
I'm sure Mayu is still in love with Yuki DX
I think I only cab dream of wmatsui in this fic DX
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HAHAHAHA i can't help but LOL @mo-chan I thought of that too! TOO BAD UGH! :lol: :lol: :lol:
Yes Mama, It worked, felt sorry for Gibby though, she's all stressed about it, anyway I love Gibby now :deco:
BTW, momo that JuriYuki GIF O_O :wub:
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Oh my god this is painful :cry: :banghead: :banghead: :cry:
I caanot wait what's gonna happen next :? :oops:
Please update soon! :twothumbs oh and thanks for updating this in fact that you're busy :grin: :rofl: :yossi:
You're awesome gibson san! XD
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Mayu is really hard to read. I was happy about Mayuki's kiss but when Mayu mentioned Jurina :stoned:
Ouch for Yuki. :cry:
Why is this fanfic so painful?! :fainted:
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looks!!! it's good!!!
but poor yuki
mayu how dare you,you love jurina but the one who you kissed is yuki
my my my
thank gibson san
sorry but after this update i want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....until the story end
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wow it's like a magic
when i comeback to check this forum,you update this LOL
i got to thank the other too,look like they force you hard to do this update
but gibson-san don't you know that your fic is awesome?you should happy you had a royal reader LOL
i loved this update,yuki i know she deserved this,but somehow now ithink it's already enough torture her,it's time for her to catch mayu heart again
i know yuki will win this battle,even mayu said she love jurina,it's just a word.her soul and body said different,she choose yuki
yuki just need force more,clear thing when mayu sober
thank for the update
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i loved this update,yuki i know she deserved this,but somehow now ithink it's already enough torture her,it's time for her to catch mayu heart again
i know yuki will win this battle,even mayu said she love jurina,it's just a word.her soul and body said different,she choose yuki
yuki just need force more,clear thing when mayu sober
yea I think the same :on drink:
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Thanks for the others to convince author san in updating :D
It was kinda HOT for Mayuki there :on bleed:
I bet Someone(Rena :? ) saw them... That would be more interesting :hip smile:
Please update... :kneelbow: I WILL WAIT :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :prayers: :cool2:
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Ah... an update... Yeah...
Poor Jurina.. for needing to eat Haruna's cooking
Atsuko is so happy for having Minami clingy on her
Poor Yuki for getting heartbroken unintentionally from Mayu's love confession toward Jurina...
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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What's going to happen next? cant wait
feel sorry for yuki... but still ...aaa cant wait for the next update ^_^
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gibby san~ you know i missed you again,this fic
finish it
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subarashii!!!!!
thank you for the update!!
iwant to now the ending of ths sory and he continuation of royal academy xD
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WHERE ARE YOU? :cry: I MISS THIS! UPDATE
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GIBBY!!! I KNOW YOU STILL THERE!! PUHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA
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i miss your update . . .
please update :pleeease:
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please update soon :cry:
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I love this fiction. . . I love how you make another confussing feels of Yuki's mind. . . Please continue. . Onegaishimasu. . .
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update pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Mayu is hard to read, but i like her character.
Yuki fighting!!!
But in ss2 i love Jurimayu more than Mayuki. lol
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its been a long time you havent update this story author-san :'(
well, actually it's really confusing for me whether Mayuki or Jurimayu to choose. Yukirin was such a fool person to not realizing mayu's love for her. and now, Mayu has move on and happy with Jurina. hmm.....
well, I hope you will update this story soon gibson-san ^_^
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I AM OFFICIALLY PULLING YOU OUT OF YOUR ANIME WORLD GIBBY! I'M WARNING YOU I'LL FLOOD YOUR FACEBOOK! COME BACK! O0
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Please pleaseee update 😕😕😕😕😣😣😣😣
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could you update this fanfic author-san? :cry:
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Please update :bow:.
PS:
Your story makes me think about 小幸運 from hebe tian.
Some parts of translation for the song are like this
" When I fell in love with you, I did not understand the feeling.
It is after we’ve parted, I’ve realized how deeply I have been feeling.
How could I fail to realize that our encounter has been the best thing in my life?
Back then, perhaps
I was too occupied with smiling and weeping, and too busy chasing the shooting stars across the sky.
As human, we tend to forget about
The one who has always been waiting for us at the same place, no matter there is gale or rain.
Finally, I've realized you are the fortune (happiness) that I want to grasp,
And how close it was between love and us.
The determination to fight the world for me, and those times you stayed in the pouring rain with me,
Were all proofs of your pure and sincere heart.
It was really fortunate (for me) to meet you，
But I've already lost my rights to shed any tears for you.
Therefore, I hope at a skyline which I can't see, you've spread you wings,
And met your destined one:
How lucky she will be!
"
I can't help but think of this song when i read Yukirin's pov
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your story is interesting author-san :twothumbs thanks for writing... but can you update your fic? you know... we still waiting this fic's ending.. :cry: :cry: :cry: