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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 2
« Reply #20 on: July 22, 2012, 03:26:34 PM »
Yahooo....

A Supernatural fics.....

Please continued
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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 3
« Reply #21 on: July 22, 2012, 06:59:34 PM »
Once again thank you so much for commenting on my fic you guys. I really means a lot to me when I read them. And don't worry folks, Mayuyu will not fall in love with her own body. The thought of that gave me chills. No no Mariko will have done something by then to the point where Mayuyu would have a body just not hers. Anyways, here's chapter 3. Enjoy!
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Chapter 3

"You're a what?"

"An Inugami!"

"What's that?" Mayuyu asked.

"A dog god." Mariko said.

"Where did you come from?"

"I saw the ears and couldn't help but walk over. So what is an Inugami doing here?"

"I'm here with my master."

"Who is that?" Yukirin asked.

"Sayaka. You see I used to be a puppy and my old master beat me and abandoned me. But then Sayaka found me and resuced me. She did her best to nurse me back to health but it was too late. I didn't want to leave Sayaka so something happened and the next thing I knew I became an Inugami."

"So does Sayaka know you're an Inugami?"

"Yeah. She's known for a while."

"Ok. Are there any other people here that are super naturals like you?" Mayuyu asked.

"Yeah actually there are."

"Who are those people?"

"Well Yuko is a Tanuki and Jurina is a Kitsune. Oh and Haruna is a nekogami. I also know there's one more but I can't out my finger on it right now."

"Wait what's a Tanuki?" Yukirin asked.

"A Tanuki is a raccoon dog. They're known for shap shifting and causing a lot of trouble." Mariko said.

"And what's a Kitsune?" Mayuyu asked.

"A Kitsune is a fox demon. They're known for being good guardians and friends and are very wise. But they can also do some pretty nasty things to you if you tick them off."

"What's a nekogami?"

"A cat god. They're known to bring good luck."

"Why are all of you guys here?"

"This school is a safe place far super naturals like us. We come here to talk and be ourselves." Sae said.

"So almost everyone in the room is a super natural?" Yukirin asked.

"Well the only humans here are Sayaka, Takamina, Rena, and Miichan."

"I see. Well this is very interesting to know." Mariko said.

"Yep. I'm glad I was able to help. Now I have to go. I'll see you later!"

Sae left leaving the three behind.

"Well it's almost lunch time. How about you go get lunch while I look into something. I may have a hunch on the Tanuki."

"Ok we'll see you later."

Yukirin walked out of the room and down to the lunch room.

"What are you going to eat?" Mayuyu asked.

"I made some sandwiches. Oh and here I brought you some jelly beans."

"Yay thanks! You're the best."

While the two were eating, Mariko walked back over.

"Hey can I have one of your sandwiches? I forgot lunch and I'm starving."

"Sure take them."

"Thanks!"

Mariko took almost all of Yukirin's food and left. But then a couple minutes later Mariko came back.

"What do you want now?" Yukirin asked in a angry tone.

"What's with the attitude?" Mariko asked.

"You were here a couple minutes ago and took almost all of Yukirin's food." Mayuyu said.

"No I didn't. I was in the classroom the entire time."

"Then why you were here just minutes ago? I saw you walk that way... LOOK!"

There walking out of the lunch room was Mariko only that Mariko had a raccoon tail sticking out of her butt.

"After her!"

Yukirin and Mariko ran after the fake Mariko into the hall.

"Oi Tanuki stop!"

The fake Mariko saw them and started running.

"Split up."

"Right."

Yukirin made a turn and headed for the other hall. Right as Yukirin was running towards a turn, the fake Mariko came out and rammed into Yukirin. Sandwiches went flying everywhere and Yukirin was on the ground in pain.

"I got you now!"

The real Mariko pulled out a large sythe and positioned it right in front of the fake Mariko. The fake Mariko froze not moving an inch.

"How about you show us your real form?"

There was a puff a smoke and then there was a different person sitting in front of Yukirin. It was Yuko and now she was rubbing her head.

"So you're the Tanuki." 

"Hey I'm sorry. I was just hungry and I forgot my lunch!" Yuko said.

"It's alright. Just don't go around transforming into other people." Yukirin said.

"Ok. By the way, I liked your old body better. That new one doesn't suit you at all."

"Hey that's my body!" Mayuyu said.

"Well I better get going. Nyannyan is waiting for me."

Yuko got up and quickly ran away.

"What a strange girl." Yukirin said.

"Well as long as she's out of my hair I don't care what she does." Mayuyu said.

"Yeah. Now listen you two be very careful around her." Mariko said.

"Tanuki's are known for being very tricky."

"Ok!"

"Good then I'll be going. You two clean up this mess."

With that, Mariko left the area.

"She's no help at all." Mayuyu said.

"Well it can't be helped."

As Yukirin started to pick up the sandwiches, someone ran up from behind her.

"MAYUYU!"

"AHHH!"

Yukirin fell to the ground and hit her head hard.

"Mayuyu I missed you!" the girl said.

"Who are you?" Yukirin asked.

"You don't remember me? Come on Mayuyu it's me Sashi!"

"Who?"

"Sashihara Rino. The one that harasses me." Mayuyu said.

"EHHH?!"

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Well there's chapter 3! The school is full of super naturals. I wonder how Yukirin and Mayuyu will handle it. Please tell me what you think and look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 3
« Reply #22 on: July 22, 2012, 07:29:07 PM »
Woooo~ that was so unexpected!  :w00t:
The whole school filled with supernatural  :w00t: :w00t:
ghost, shinigami, angel, inugami, nekogami, tanuki, and kitsune!! interesting~   :twothumbs :twothumbs
kitsune is really suit for Jurina  :cathappy:
Thanks for update  :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 3
« Reply #23 on: July 22, 2012, 07:40:33 PM »
How mayuyu and yukirin doing their lovey dovey?i mean like kiss or something?

Ah thank for the update...hehe
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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 4
« Reply #24 on: July 22, 2012, 11:18:50 PM »
Here's chapter 4! I hope everyone enjoys it and please vote on the poll I posted. It's going to be very useful in the future.
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Chapter 4

"Mayuyu let me give you a kiss!"

"No get off me!"

Yukirin threw Sasshi off her and backed away.

"Does she do this all the time?" Yukirin asked.

"Yeah." Mayuyu said.

"Mayuyu come on! Just one kiss!" Sasshi said.

"Go away!"

Yukirin started to run away but Sasshi was right behind her.

"Someone help!" Yukirin cried out.

Just then someone grabbed Yukirin and pulled her over to the side. The person put their hand over Yukirin's mouth and told her to be quiet. The two stood there in silence as Sasshi ran down the hall looking for Mayuyu. When she was gone, the person released Yukirin.

"Thanks for helping me." Yukirin said.

"No problem. Now if you excuse me I'll be leaving now."

The girl left before Yukirin could ask for her name. 

"Hey Mayuyu!"

Yukirin looked over and saw Takamina and Acchan walk over.

"You better go change quickly. Gym class is about to start." Takamina said.

"Ahh you're right! Thanks for telling me!"

Yukirin barely made it in time before class started.

"Alright everyone today we are going to play basket ball. But first Watanabe!"

"Hai!"

"Your shorts are on backwards. Go back inside and fix them."

Yukirin started blushing madly as she ran to the locker room. When she got back, everyone had already started to play. It looked like it was team Sayaka versus team Sae. Yukirin had to sit on the benches and wait to be called in. As she was watching the others play, she noticed a girl a bench over not in her gym clothes and reading a book.

"Hey Mayuyu who's that over there?" Yukirin said.

"That's Rena you idiot. You're in the same class as her. She's the one that saved you from earlier when you were being chased by Sasshi." Mayuyu said.

"That is! Gosh I didn't even recgonize her."

"Baka. Hey wait where are you going?!"

Yukirin stood up and walked over to Rena. She sat next to her and sat there quietly.

"Is there something you have to say?" Rena said.

"Well I just wanted to say hi." Yukirin said trying not to sound creepy.

"Well hello." Rena said not taking her eyes off her book.

"Why aren't you playing?"

"Because I have a medical conditioin."

"Oh. So do you like books?"

"Yes I enjoy reading a lot."

"What are you reading now?"

"Medival torture techniques."

Yukirin backed away a little hearing that. Yukirin wondered how such an innocent looking girl can be so dangerous.

"Hey what are you doing to Rena?"

Another girl walked over and stepped in front of Yukirin.

"Jurina calm down. We were only talking." Rena said.

"She's not bothering you?"

"No Jurina. Go back and play with the others."

"Ok."

Yukirin remembered Sae saying how Jurina was a Kitsune.

"She really is scary." Mayuyu said.

"I know right."

"Wait you can hear me?"

"Yeah and I can also see you." Rena said.

"But Sae said you were a human."

"I am. But I've been able to see and hear spirits since I was little."

"What?"

"Watanabe get out here!"

"Coming!" Yukirin said.

"We'll catch up later."

Yukirin walked out onto the court.

"You'll be on Akimoto's team." the teacher said.

"Come on over Mayuyu!" Sayaka said.

Yukirin ran over where Sayaka handed Yukirin the ball.

"Pass it down to me when I get close to the basket." she said.

"What?"

Sayaka started running and soon after everyone started heading towards Yukirin.

"What do I do?"

"Throw it!"

With all her strength, Yukirin threw the ball across the court. It made it far enough where Sayaka was able to catch it and do a lay up.

"Nice one Mayuyu!" Takamina said.

This time it was Sae's ball and she started running towards the basket. She easily made it around Takamina and Acchan like they were nothing. But when she reached Sayaka she had a hard time. Time was running out and as one last attempt, Sae chucked the ball at the basket. It missed and shot off the back board heading straight at Rena.

"Rena look out!" Sayaka shouted.

Rena didn't see it so Yukirin ran in front of her and ended up getting hit right in the head. Yukirin hit the ground hard and within seconds she was out cold. When Yukirin woke up she found herself in the nurses office.

"Oh you're awake." the nurse said.

"What happened?" Yukirin asked.

"You got knocked out so your friends brought you here."

"Oh. Is everyone alright?"

"Yes. That Rena girl you saved right outside waiting for you. Can I let her in?"

"Sure."

When the nurse opened the door, Rena, Jurina, Sayaka, Sae and Mariko all came in.

"Mariko-sensei what are you doing here?" the nurse asked.

"When I heard one of my students were injured I came down to check on her." Mariko said.

"Well can you watch them while I go down to the office and print some papers?"

"Sure."

The nurse left and Mariko shut the door.

"Sae don't you have something to say to Mayuyu?" Sayaka said.

"I'm sorry." Sae said.

"What was that? Say it louder!"

Sayaka grabbed Sae's ear and tugged it.

"Ouch! I'm sorry Mayuyu!"

"That's better."

"It's ok it was just an accident." Yukirin said.

"Yeah Sayaka it was just an accident!"

"Hey I wasn't the one who knocked her out."

"Thank you for protecting me Mayu-san." Rena said.

"Oh it was nothing."

"Thanks for helping her. I probably wouldn't have made it in time if you didn't step in." Jurina said.

"See Jurina? You can trust Mayu-san."

"Yeah I guess I can."

"Now that everyone has said their aplogies, I need to talk to Watanabe-san in private. You can return to your classes." Mariko said as she shoved everyone out.

"Are you really ok?" Mariko said.

"Yeah I'm fine. Where's Mayuyu?"

"Up here."

Yukirin looked up and saw Mayuyu on the ceiling.

"What are you doing up there?"

"I don't know."

"Well get down."

"I can't."

"Here let me help."

Mariko stood on a stool and grabbed Mayuyu.

"Why couldn't you come down?" Yukirin asked. 

"I don't know." Mayuyu said.

"Well you just need to learn how to control your floating abilities. I have an idea. Stay after school today and we'll meet up on the roof." Mariko said.

"Alright sounds fine."

Yukirin left the nurses office shortly after Mariko had left. It was around lunch time so Yukirin decided to go have lunch in the classroom. When she walked in, she noticed a tail moving back and forth from under her desk. When she looked under she saw Haruna.

"What are you doing?"

This spooked Haruna and her tail puffed up.

"AHHH!"

Haruna jumped out from under the desk and landed on top of another one. Yukirin could now see Haruna in her cat form with ears and a tail.

"Mou don't scare me like that." Haruna said.

"What were you doing under my desk?" Yukirin asked.

"Hiding from Yuko. She's been following me all day and it's getting annoying so I took cover here. By the way you're not her are you? I know how she likes to transform and tick me."

"If I was Yuko I probably would've been trying to grab you by now."

"Ok so you're now Yuko."

"Well since you're hear do you want to eat lunch with me?"

"Sure! But can you tell Mayuyu to stop floating. It kind of scares me."

"Ok."

The two girls sat and ate lunch together while Mayuyu ate jelly beans.

"Haruna is that a can of cat food?" Yukirin asked.

"Yeah so what? It's good." Haruna said.

"Ok yeah that's right. You're a cat god so it's normal."

"Yeah. But it's weird seeing a ghost eating."

"Hey it's the only thing I can eat." Mayuyu said.

"That's weird. Oh hey since you're a ghost and stuff can you phase through walls and stuff?" Haruna asked.

"Yeah why?"

"Well you see, there's a fish cat toy I dropped and it fell under the shelf next to your desk. I can't reach it so I was wondering if you could get it for me."

"Sure give me a minute."

Mayuyu shoved half her body through the shelf where only her back side was facing Yukirin.

"There is a lot of junk back here!" Mayuyu said.

"Mayuyu hurry up. I can see your panties." Yukirin said.

"Don't look!"

A couple minutes later, Mayuyu came out with a toy mouse.

"Is this it?"

"Nya!"

Haruna snatched the toy from Mayuyu and started playing with it.

"I'll take that as a yes."

Yukirin watched Haruna play with toy when suddenly Haruna got a weird look on her face. She bent over and started gagging coughing.

"Haruna are you ok?" Yukirin asked.

A couple minutes later Haruna coughed up what looked like a ball.

"Sorry it's a hair ball." Haruna said as she trew it in the trash.

"That's just gross." Mayuyu said.

"Hey it's what I am. I can't help it."

Just then Yuko came in and found Haruna.

"Nyannyan!"

"Go away Yuko!"

Haruna was about to jump out of the window when there was a jingle of a bell.

Yukirin looked over and saw Yuko holding the toy Haruna loved.

"Hey give it back!" Haruna said.

"Catch me if you can!"

Yuko ran out of the room and Haruna was chasing after her on all fours.

"Lunch is almost over. Better finish up."

For the rest of the day, Yukirin was preocupied with staring out the window at the clouds. She wished she could go up there and just float with them. Little did she know that her wish was about to come true. When the school day ended, Yukirin went up to the roof as Mariko told her to.

"Ahh good you've arrived." Mariko said.

"What is it?" Yukirin asked.

"We're going to teach Mayuyu how to fly!"

"What?!"

"Yeah. Once you learn how, you can go anywhere you want as long as Yukirin is with you."

"That sounds great!" Mayuyu said.

"No way!"

The reason why Yukirin was afraid was she was afraid of heights after a cliff diving accident when she was ten.

"Come on Yukirin just give it a chance." Mayuyu pleaded.

"No I'm not flying."

"If you don't then one of these days Mayuyu is just going to take off and drag you along." Mariko said.

"Yeah I could always do that."

"Alright fine."

"Good! Then here's what you need to do. Yukirin take Mayuyu's hand."

As soon as Yukirin touched Mayuyu, she started to float too.

"WAHHH!"

"Calm down! You're only two inches off ground you baby." Mayuyu said.

"Ok now Mayuyu all you have to do is take off." Mariko said.

"How do I do that?"

"Think of something you wanna reach for."

"Like the sun?" Yukirin said.

"No. The sun is too much." Mayuyu said.

"Then how about a manga on the top shelf of a store but you can't reach it."

"I want it!"

Mayuyu took off like a rocket high into the sky with Yukirin clinging to her.

"How do we get down!" Yukirin shouted.

"It's easy! All you have to do is-"

Yukirin couldn't hear Mariko because they had gotten too high.

"Mayuyu I think we should go down. I think I'm going to hurl."

"You better not. Otherwise I'll drop you here."

"Don't you dare!"

The two fly high into the air all the way up to the clouds. The sun was setting making the sky look oragne and giving the clouds a pink tint. The sight was breath taking and was more beautiful than what you'd see in pictures. Yukirin was even daring enough to reach out and run her hand through one of the clouds. Yukirin was amazed how the fluff cloud turned to water in Yukirin's hand.

"This is so cool isn't it?" Mayuyu said.

"Yeah it is!" Yukirin said.

The two kept flying for what seemed like hours. The sun had finally set and now it was dark out.

"Hey Mayuyu I think it's about to go back now." Yukirin said.

"Yeah I think so too." Mayuyu said.

"Let's land somewhere."

"Sure only one problem."

"What?"

"I don't know how to go down."

"WHAT!"

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Well there's chapter 4. What will happen to Yukirin and Mayuyu? Will they be able to make it safely to the ground? Find out next chapter! Please tell me what you think and again, please vote in the poll because it'll be a huge help for me in the future.


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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 4
« Reply #25 on: July 23, 2012, 12:58:06 AM »
Hahaha mayuyu,she can't go down...its so funny...LOL floating ability...

Rena is kind of cold person...but she so lovely with jurina right?
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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 4
« Reply #26 on: July 23, 2012, 02:13:38 AM »
I really love your portrayal of Mayuyu here. She is so freaking adorable! :wub: I want a Mayuyu balloon too! I foresee a lot of baka moments between her and Yukirin. The other characters are just as lovable too, especially Haruna.

Keep up the great work. I will be stalking this thread in Hong Kong (if I can get internet connection) :grin:

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #27 on: July 23, 2012, 06:54:37 AM »
Today we shall continue where I last left off. Mayuyu and Yukirin are stuck high above the ground. How will they get down?! I hope you all enjoy the chapter! Oh and one more thing, so far it looks like you guys are tied between a dog and a hamster. Let's see if we can break the tie!
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Chapter 5

"What do you mean you don't know how to get down?!"

"Mariko never told us how to get down."

"So what are we going to do?"

"I don't know!"

Yukirin and Mayuyu thought long and hard of a solution but still couldn't think of anything. But then suddenly, something big flew in front of Mayuyu.

"Wahhh!"

Mayuyu jerked back almost letting go of Yukirin.

"Hey don't drop me!"

"What is that!"

Mayuyu pointed at the large black figure floating before them. Yukirin couldn't see it because it was dark but she could see the outline of wings.

"What do we do?" Yukirin said.

"I don't know." Mayuyu said.

The black figure didn't say anything. It just floated there staring at the two. Then the figure started to move. There was a break in the clouds and some of the moon light broke through. It revealed a hand. The hand of a human. Yukirin still couldn't see a face but she saw the hand. She wasn't sure if it was an offer of help or a trick.

"You guys seem stuck. Let me take you down." the figure said.

"Really?" Yukirin said.

"I don't trust you." Mayuyu said.

"Relax. I won't hurt you I promise."

"Come on Mayuyu what other optioins do we have?"

"Alright fine."

Yukirin grabbed the hand and the figure pulled them down towards the ground. They landed in front of the school gate. Then the figure left leaving only a black feather behind.

"Oi!"

Yukirin turned around and saw Mariko running towards them.

"Hey Mariko."

"I saw you guys land and came down here. What took you so long?" Mariko said.

"We didn't know how to land. So a weird person came by and helped us." Mayuyu said.

"Who?"

"We don't know. All we have is this black feather."

Yukirin showed Mariko the feather and it looked like Mariko knew what it was.

"A Tengu feather."

"A what?"

"A Tengu is a mountain spirit. It usually looks like a giant crow. I'm suprised to see one so far away from the mountains." Mariko said.

"So you're saying a Tengu helped us get down?" Mayuyu said.

"Yes and you're pretty lucky. Most Tengus are very nasty and mean."

"Well I'm just glad we got down and now we're safe. Can I go home now? I'm really tired and we have school tomorrow." Yukirin said.

"Sure I'll drive you home."

When they got home, Yukirin couldn't help but wonder who the Tengu was. They had a very soft and gentle touch when they held her hand.

"Hey Mayuyu who do you think that Tengu was?" Yukirin asked.

"I don't know but we should thank them next time." Mayuyu said.

"Definitely. But for now let's go to bed. I'm tired."

That night, Yukirin had a strange dream. There was a girl lying in a bed. It looked like she was in a hospital but it wasn't a hospital. The girl was hooked up to all kinds of monitors and IVs. She had an oxygen mask and was covered in bandages making it impossible to recgonize who the girl was. Yukirin stood there staring at the girl feeling sad for her. Something terrible must have happened to her. Yukirin wanted to reach out and touch the girl but then someone called her name.

"Hey Yukirin wake up!" 

Yukirin woke up and saw Mayuyu right in front of her face.

"Ahh!"

Yukirin fell off the bed because Mayuyu scared her.

"Get moving Yukirin you're going to be late for school!" Mayuyu said.

"Yukirin looked at the clock and realized she only had ten minutes to get ready and get to school.

"Ah yabai!"

Yukirin quickly got dressed and ran out the door.

"Yukirin wait!"

"What?!"

"Grab my hand!"

Yukirin grabbed Mayuyu's hand and Mayuyu took off at incredible speed.

"Mayuyu slow down!"

"Well do you want to be late or not!"

Mayuyu managed to make a rough landing right outside the school gates. There Yukirin ran for her life into the classroom. She made it right before Mariko had came in.

"Good morning everyone."

As Mariko started her lesson, Yukirin started to drift off into her own imagination. She still remembered her Tengu encounter from last night and it was on her mind. Then suddenly the bell rang and everyone got up and started to leave. As Yukirin started to pack up, Takamina and Acchan walked over.

"Hey Mayuyu can you help us with something?" Takamina asked.

"What is it?" Yukirin said.

"Something weird has been going on and Acchan and I have been trying to figure it out."

"Figure what out?"

"This morning Acchan and I came in early to get some extra help from Mariko. But on the way, we saw Yukirin going through all the lockers in the girl's locker room. She was going through Haruna's stuff mainly and messing with her gym uniform. Smelling it and stuff."

"What?!"

Yukirin couldn't belive what she was hearing. She would never do something as bad as that. Mayuyu was laughing like crazy to the side.

"I think it's the ghost of Yukirin. I never knew she was that kind of person." Takamina said.

"NO WAY!"

Both Acchan and Takamina were surprised by Yukirin's sudden out burst.

"I mean I knew Yukirin a little and I know there is no way she would do that kind of thing." 

"Well then how about we investigate!" Acchan said.

"Alright then let's go! But first we'll have to grab Haruna."

"Right."

Acchan, Takamina, and Yukirin dragged Haruna down to the girl's locker room.

"Hey what's going on?" Haruna said.

"We're trying to catch Yukirin's ghost." Acchan said.

"Yukirin's ghost?"

"Yeah so just sit here and wait patiently."

"But I hate waiting."

"Here play with this."

Takamina pulled out a small ball and Haruna was immediately distracted by it.

"Ok now let's hide and wait for the ghost to show up."

The three girls hid behind a wall of lockers and waited. Then a couple minutes they saw Yukirin slowly creeping out from the inside of a locker. Right when she was about to pounce on Haruna, Takamina jumped out and grabbed her.

"Got ya!"

"Hold her down!"

The fake Yukirin struggled and bit Takamina forcing her to let go. Then she ran off and disappeared.

"You were so close!" Yukirin said.

"Man that really hurt!" Takamina said staring at the bite mark.

"Come here Takamina. Let me kiss it and make it beter."

Acchan took Takamina's hand and planted a small kiss on it.

"Thanks Acchan. Your kisses make everything better." Takamina said.

"I'm always here to take care of you." Acchan said.

"That's because you're her guardian angel." Mayuyu said.

Luckily Takamina couldn't hear Mayuyu and Acchan just shot her a dirty look.

"So how are we going to catch the ghost now?" Yukirin asked.

"I don't know but it's obvious that they won't fall for the same trick. We'll have to try a different approach."

"Like what?"

"I have an idea!" Acchan said.

After a huge struggle and several cat stratches, they finally got Haruna set up.

"Mou why do I have to wear this!" Haruna shouted.

Haruna was referring to the tight fitting bikini she was wearing.

"Because the ghost will come! Now do something sexy!" 

Haruna just stood there looking akward. Seeing how this wasn't going to help, Yukirin pulled out a small bag of cat treats a lady at a store was passing out. She threw one at Haruna and she started to chase after it. That's when Yukirin came out and was about to grab Haruna.

"Now!"

This time all three girls jumped on top of the fake Yukirin. There was a sturggle and Takamina ended up hitting her head on the locker and passing out. But then Acchan finally got the fake Yukirin to stay down.

"I've got a pretty good idea who it is." Haruna said.

Haruna whacked the fake Yukirin's head and then a puff of smoke appeared. Then Yuko popped out and was looking pretty scared.

"YUKO!"

"Hi Nyannyan."

"Why were you walking around sniffing my gym clothes disguised as Yukirin?" Haruna asked.

"Because if I got caught I'd be in huge trouble. So I took the image of Yukirin." Yuko said.

"You made me look like a pervert!" Yukirin said.

"Sorry. But Nyannyan wasn't letting me touch her and I was getting desperate!"

"Yuko you know you shouldn't use your shape shifting powers at school." Acchan said.

"I know and I'm sorry. I won't do it again."

"Good. Now come with me. I'm going to punish you." Haruna said as she dragged Yuko out.

"Yay finally!"

"So what are you going to do with Takamina?" Mayuyu said.

"When she wakes up I'll tell her it was all fake. But for now I'm going to sit here and watch her sleep. She has the cutest face when she's asleep!"

"Ok have fun with that."

Yukirin and Mayuyu left Acchan with her sleeping beauty. On the way out, they ran into Rena and Jurina.

"Hey we were on our way to go eat lunch. You want to eat with us?" Rena asked.

"Uh sure that sounds great."

"Good then come with me"

Rena took Mayuyu and Yukirin outside behind the school. There was a whole garden back there and in the middle was a little picnic area.

"This place is beautiful." Yukirin said.

"Thank you. Jurina and I made it when we first came here." Rena said.

"You made all this?"

"Yes with teh help of Jurina we were able to make this."

"It must have been hard."

"It was. There were times where I couldn't carry on so Jurina did all the work. I felt so bad."

"It was nothing. In the end it was worth it. I would do anything to see that smiling face of yours." Jurina said.

"Oh you!"

Jurina rested her head on Rena's shoulders and Rena gently stroked her head.

"Oh brother."

"Hey you watch it." Jurina snarled at Mayuyu.

"Hey at least you can touch someone!" Mayuyu protested.

"Ah it must be lonely being a ghost. Not being able to touch the one you love must be painful." Rena said.

"Well I may not be the one you love but you can rest on my lap if you want."

"Really?"

"Sure." Yukirin said.

"Yay!"

Mayuyu walked over and rested her head on Yukirin's lap and within minutes she fell asleep.

"Do you think she wishes she had her body back?" Rena asked.

"She probably wishes it all the time. I feel terrible for taking her body away. I should be in heaven right not but instead I'm here."

"Well maybe God thought you had some unfinished business." Jurina said.

"I still feel really bad though."

"Well maybe I can help." Rena said.

"What do you mean?"

"You see, my mother was a shrine maiden at a temple. She taught her all kinds of things including a stuff like soul transferrs."

"Soul what?"

"Basically I could separate your soul from Mayuyu's body and put her's back in."

"You can really do that?!"

"We can give it a try."

"Really!"

Yukirin couldn't believe what she was hearing. Yukirin finally might be able to go to heaven and give Mayuyu her body back. But then something hit her. Over the amount of time she has spent with Mayuyu, Yukirin realized that she actually has started to like her. She thought that if she left, she wouldn't be able to see Mayuyu anymore. The thought of that left a lonely feeling in Yukirin's heart.

"So do you want me to do it?" Rena asked.

Yukirin thought long and hard about it. Then she finally said,

"No."

"Why not?" Jurina asked.

"Because I don't want to leave Mayuyu just yet. I want to spend a little more time with her."

"I understand. If I was in your situation I wouldn't want to leave Jurina either." Rena said.

"Aww!"

Jurina hugged Rena and cuddled with her.

"So don't tell Mayuyu any of this. Knowing her she'll probably want me out of her body in an instant."

"Understood."

Yukirin looked down at the sleeping ghost who had a very peaceful look on her face. Yukirin leaned in close next to Mayuyu's ear and whispered,

"I'm sorry Mayuyu but I'm going to stay here just a little longer ok?"

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Well there's chapter 5! It looks like Yukirin has finally found a solution to her problem. But yet she rejects it! Is her love for Mayuyu that strong to the point where she doesn't want to leave? What will happen if Mayuyu finds out? I guess we'll never know. For now. Please tell me what you think amd look forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #28 on: July 23, 2012, 08:15:29 AM »
Uh right now,im really sad,the fact that yuki already died is so sad...
Hope something secret pop-up...hehe

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #29 on: July 23, 2012, 01:08:59 PM »
 :OMG: noooooooooo Yukirin is dead  :fainted:
and she fall in love with Mayuu now  :frustrated:
 I want Yukirin back to life  :gyaaah:
I can't wait for the next  :pleeease:

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #30 on: July 23, 2012, 01:27:29 PM »
With the story title being "Second Chance", I guess Yukirin will have another chance at life. How that is going to happen, we will just have to wait and see.

Anyway, nice development in the story. We see Yukirin has taken a liking towards the little cyborg. Aww... :wub: Make sure you don't lose your Mayuyu balloon, Yuki!

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #31 on: July 23, 2012, 03:10:02 PM »
Poor Yukirin T_T
For Mayuyu, I think a mouse should fit her ^^

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #32 on: July 23, 2012, 03:12:42 PM »
hahaha~  :hiakhiakhiak: Mayuyu don't know how to go down~  :kekeke: LOL~  :wahaha:

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #33 on: July 23, 2012, 04:10:29 PM »
yukirin dead?
update soon.. you sure is fast miyu..
i hope you can make an atsumina fic too in the future..

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 5
« Reply #34 on: July 23, 2012, 05:26:19 PM »
Yukirin is starting to like Mayu~ which she doesn't want to leave   :wub: :wub:
lol at Mayuyu ballon  :lol: :lol:
Yuko is so naughty there with her shape shifting powers  :lol: :lol:
Wonder who will be the tengu  :huhuh

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 6
« Reply #35 on: July 23, 2012, 05:51:20 PM »
Minna! Thank you all so much for commenting on my fanfic! I know Yukirin being dead and all is a sad thing but don't worry! Mariko will have a solution in no time. Chapter 8 is when your votes will be counted and who ever is on top I will use. So for now please enjoy this next chapter!
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Chapter 6

After the relaxing lunch break with Rena and Jurina, Yukirin headed back to her class. On the way over, Miichan stopped her and started talking to her.

"Hey Mayuyu can I ask you something?"

"What is it?"

"Well you see, my parents are out of town which means I'm going to be all alone at home tonight. So I was wondering if I could spend the night at your place. Please it'll only be this on time!" Miichan said.

Yukirin could see Mayuyu shaking her head no but Yukirin thought something else.

"Sure you can spend the night. Do you have an overnight bacg?" Yukirin asked.

"Yeah I brought one just in case! Thank you so much Mayuyu! As a thanks, I'll treat you to ice cream tonight."

"That sounds great. "

"Ok then I'll see you after school."

"See you then."

When Miichan left, Mayuyu came over and whacked Yukirin in the head.

"Ow what was that for!"

"I told you no and what do you do? You say yes."

"Come on Mayuyu her parents are out of town." Yukirin said.

"That still doesn't mean you can invite her to my house!" Mayuyu said.

"Oh relax. I'm sure everything will be fine. Now let's get going I don't want to be late for class again."

When Yukirin walked into the classroom, she found a very interesting scene. There with her back arched up and tail puffed up was Haruna and across from her was Sayaka holding back Sae with her ears perked and tail wagging. Haruna was hissing at Sae while Sae was barking at Haruna. It was like a real cat and dog fight.

"What's going on?" Yukirin asked.

"Haruna stepped on Sae's tail so she got mad." Rena said.

"Now Sayaka is holding Sae back so she doesn't maul Haruna." Jurina said.

"Shouldn't we top them?"

"Usually when this happens we just let them play it. Eventually Sayaka calms Sae down and Haruna will follow."

Yukirin stood there watching the two fight and wished she had a camera. But then Mariko came in and when she saw the whole thing she immediately stopped them. Mariko pulled out a squeaky toy and threw it at Sae. Sae calmed down and started playing with the toy. Then Mariko threw a ball of yarn at Haruna and Haruna seemed amused by it.

"Now that every one has calmed down, let's continue with today's lessson."

"She handled it well." Mayuyu said.

"I know. It's amazing." Yukirin said.

"Are you still going to let that Gachapin stay in my house?"

"Yes Mayuyu I am. I'd hate to leave her alone in the house all alone."

"I don't want her anywhere near my house."

"Well too bad because she is and if you keep complaining I'm not going to buy you any jelly beans."

Mayuyu kept quiet for the rest of the day. When school ended, Miichan kept her word and took Yukirin out for ice cream. Then they walked over to Mayuyu's house.

"Wow your house is really nice Mayuyu!" Miichan said.

"Thanks." Yukirin said.

"Ahh and your room is so cute!"

"Thank you. Now how about we go do our homework down stairs. I'll get out some snacks."

"That would be great!"

Mayuyu and Miichan sat at the kitchen table and did their homework. Yukirin was focused on finishing it but Miichan gave up half way.

"Hey Mayuyu where's your bathroom?"

"Down the hall take a left."

"Ok thanks."

Miichan got up and left. While she was gone, Yukirin took a look at the answers Miichan had wrote. They were all wrong and Yukirin being a good person decided to fix the mistakes. Then she put the paper back where she found it. Miichan came back and didn't even notice the changes. After about a half hour the two were finished with their homework. Just then there was a ring at the door bell.

"Coming!"

Yukirin opened the door and there was Mariko holding a bag of groceries.

"Hey! I saw this recipe on a cooking show and I wanted to try it. I bought the ingredients I just need you to cook it." Mariko said.

"That's fine. You really need to learn how to cook though."

"Yeah I will eventually. But for now I'm relying on you for my food."

Mariko came in and saw Miichan sitting at the table.

"Shinoda-sensei what are you doing here?" Miichan asked.

"I came to have dinner." Mariko said.

"What?"

"Shinoda-sensei's kitchen is being redone so she can't cook. So I offered to cook her dinner until it's fixed." Yukirin said.

"Nice excuse." Mayuyu said.

"Oh I see. Well hi!"

"Hello Miichan. I see your doing your homework like a good student."

"Yep!"

"Hey Mariko how about you go into the family room with Miichan and watch some TV."

"TV?"

"Oh good idea! Come on Shinoda-sensei!"

Miichan grabbed Mariko's hand and dragged her into the family room.

"What's a TV?"

"She really is hopeless." Mayuyu said.

"Well this is the first time she's been in the world of living in thousands of years." Yukirin said.

"Still it's pretty sad."

In the other room Yukirin could hear Mariko shouting "wow!" and "incredible!" Yukirin wondered if Mariko would really be alright. Not paying attention, Yukirin cut herself with the knife.

"Stupid. Come here."

Mayuyu took Yukirin's bleeding finger and placed it into her mouth. Yukirin started to blush madly and almost scream inside. Mayuyu's soft lips pressed against her finger was giving Yukirin a whole new sensation. She could feel Mayuyu's small tounge licking off the blood on her finger. They held like that for a little and then Mayuyu let go. 

"Better?"

Yukirin was too shocked to answer.

"Hey Mayuyu is dinner almost ready?" Miichan shouted.

"Oh uh almost!"

Yukirin quickly put a bandage on and went back to cooking. The entire time Yukirin's face was bright red.

"Ok you guys dinner is ready. " Yukirin said

"Finally!"

The two came in and started eating.

"This is really good!" Miichan said.

"Good cooking!"

"Thanks."

"You know I think you'll make a great wife some day." Miichan said.

"Oh please there's no way that is going to happen." Yukirin said.

"I'm serious!"

"I doubt that'll happen."

"You never know."

Once dinner was done, Mariko left and Miichan and Yukirin changed into pajamas. Miichan was sleeping on the bed while Yukirin slept on the floor.

"Good night." Yukirin said.

"Good night."

Yukirin turned out the light and slowly went to sleep. But then she felt something heavy land on top of her. She felt around and realized it was Miichan!

"Mayuyu help!"

"No way this is too funny!"

"Some help you are."

Suddenly Miichan started to nibble on Yukirin's ear.

"I like shrimp." Miichan said.

"Ahh Miichan I'm not shrimp! Wake up!"

Miichan couldn't hear her and continued to knaw on Yukirin's ear.

"Ahh what do I do!"

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Sorry if this chapter seems kind of rushed. I'm leaving on a trip and wanted to put one last chapter in before I left. Also I made a change in the poll where I replaced a cat with a mouse. For those who already voted and want to change just say what you want in the comments. Once again I'm sorry for rushing and I hope I see you guys soon! 



 

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 6
« Reply #36 on: July 23, 2012, 06:09:57 PM »
wow so it's for the Chapter 8 I see  :on cigar:
Mayuyu took Yukirin's bleeding finger and placed it into her mouth. Yukirin started to blush madly and almost scream inside.
 
I like this kind of situation  :on bleed:
why Miichan is sleeping don't interrupt Yukirin and Mayuu  :on redcard:
poor Yukirin how will she escape from Miichan :hiakhiakhiak:


 

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 6
« Reply #37 on: July 23, 2012, 06:34:54 PM »
I like your fast update Miyumi-san~  :heart: :heart:
lol at antique Mariko-sama  :lol: :lol: wonder if Mii-chan feels weird about Mariko excitedly watching TV  :roll:
Poor Yuki, can't get off Mii-chan...
I'm waiting excitedly for chapter 8~ is that Mayu's soul will be trapped into animal body? come to think about it... Yukirin will pet her everyday~  XD XD

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« Reply #38 on: July 25, 2012, 01:00:34 AM »
Minna! I'm back! Sorry I took so long but now I'm back. I've been dying to update so here's chapter 7. I hope you enjoy!
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Chapter 7

"What do I do?"

"I don't know but you better think of something."

"But what?" Yukirin said.

"Try pushing her over." Mayuyu said.

Yukirin tried doing what Mayuyu told her but had no luck. Miichan was too heavy.

"She's too heavy!" Yukirin said.

"Well how about you try shouting her name." Mayuyu said.

"Good idea."

"MIICHAN!"

There was no reponse. Miichan just rolled over to where no her head was right on Yukirin's stomach.

"Well it's better than the last postion."

"But she's still on me!"

"Well crawl your way out."

Yukirin started to wiggle her body and eventually she freed herself.

"Finally!"

"Good now go to sleep."

"Ok."

Yukirin got back under the covers and started to fall asleep again. But once again Miichan made her way back up to Yukirin.

"Mou!"

Yukirin decided to leave her as she was because she was too tired. The next morning, Yukirin woke up to the sudden slap to the face.

"Ouch! What was that?"

Yukirin looked over and saw Mayuyu staring at her with a bright red face.

"What?"

"Look down."

Yukirin looked down and saw how Miichan was gripping to her pajama pants revealing her panties.

"Ahh Miichan!"

Yukirin slapped Miichan which woke her up. She suddenly stood up pulling Yukirin's pants off even more.

"MIICHAN!"

"WAH! Sorry!"

Miichan covered her eyes and tried running out of the room but ended up slamming into the wall. But then she finally felt her way around and out of the room.

"This is so embarrassing!" Yukirin said.

"I can't believe you wore those!" Mayuyu said.

"What these panties?"

"Yes!"

"Why? They're really cute."

"I stopped wearing hello kitty panties two years ago!"

"But they were in your closet."

"I just haven't had the time to throw them out yet." Mayuyu said blushing.

"Right." Yukirin said while roling her eyes.

"Anyways you better hurry up and get ready. You're going to be late."

"Ahh why didn't you tell me sooner!"

Because Miichan was with them, Yukirin couldn't fly to school. Instead they had to sprint all the way to school. Yukirin barely made it in time right before class started. As she sat at her desk panting, she really wished she had something to drink. But then she felt something cool pressed against her face. Yukirin looked over and saw Sayaka holding a bottle of water.

"Thanks." Yukirin said as she took the water and chugged it.

"Were you late coming in?" Sayaka asked.

"Yeah. Miichan spent the night and we ended up waking up late."

"Ah I know what you mean. Whenever Sae comes into my room she won't let me sleep."

"Hey Sayaka can I ask you something?"

"Sure what is it?"

"How do you and Sae get along. You know with Sae being and inugami and all."

"Well I don't really see Sae as an inugami. I just see her as a close friend and treat her like I would with any other person. Sure sometimes she can get annoying because of her dog habits but I still love her."

"I see. It must be nice."

"Yeah. Sae and I get along great."

"I wish I could have a relationship like yours."

"Why? Are you having friend issues?"

"You could say that."

Yukirin looked over and saw Mayuyu going through her bag looking for something.

"What are you looking for?" Yukirin asked.

"I'm looking for some jelly beans." Mayuyu said.

"Oh sorry I left them at home. I left in a hurry so I didn't have time to grab them."

"Well that is just great."

"I'm really sorry. I'll make sure to buy you some on our way home from school."

"You better."

"Mayuyu who are you talking to?" Sayaka asked.

"Oh no one. Just making a note to myself." Yukirin said.

Yukirin wondered if Sayaka knew she was actually Yukirin and not Mayuyu.

"Hey are you free after school?"

"Yeah I think so. Why?"

"Because Sae, Haruna and I were going to go to the pet store to pick out a couple things and thought you might want to come along. The place we go to has got some pretty cute animals." Sayaka said.

"Um sure that sounds great." Yukirin said.

"Great then we'll all meet up after school by the front gate."

"Sounds like a plan."

Just then Yukirin felt a cold grip on her shoulder. She looked over and saw a dark look on Mayuyu's face.

"Don't worry we'll get your jelly beans after we visit the pet store."

When class was over, Yukirin headed to the cafeteria to enjoy a nice lunch. But then she realized that she had forgotten to make one because of Miichan. Yukirin sat at the lunch table playing with her tumbs when Acchan and Takamina came over.

"Hey did you forget to bring a lunch?" Acchan said.

"Yeah I was running late so I forgot to make myself one." Yukirin replied.

"Well if you want you can have mine." Takamina said.

"Really?"

"Yeah. Besides I usually end up sharing with Acchan because Yuko comes over and takes mine."

"Ah thank you so much."

"No fair you get to eat." Mayuyu pouted next to Yukirin.

Acchan smiled and then reached into her bag.

"I got these at the store yesterday and thought they didn't taste good. You can have them."

Acchan handed Yukirin a bag of jelly beans.

"Wow really! Thank you so much!"

Yukirin slipped them into her bag and as soon as she did, Mayuyu took them out and started scarffing them down under the table.

"So Takamina how are things with you?" Yukirin asked.

"Pretty good. Everything is always good when Acchan is around." Takamina said.

"You two must be really close friends."

"Yeah. We've been together since elementary school."

"That long?"

"Yep!"

"I remember when I first met Acchan she was being bullied so I stepped in and protected her."

"Takamina was like my knight and shinging armor." Acchan said.

"And ever since then we've been good friends."

"Ahh that must be nice being such close friends." Yukirin said.

"Don't worry. I'm sure you'll become close friends with someone."

"I hope so too."

Yukirin looked under the table and saw Mayuyu still eating the jelly beans. When lunch was over, Yukirin continued the rest of the day like usual. Then when school was over she went over to the front gate where she promised to meet Sayaka. Everyone was already there waiting for her.

"Let's get going!"

They arrived at the pet store and was amazed at the variety of animals they had. There was everything from dogs, cats, reptiles, fish and even rodents.

"Well Sae and I came to look for a new squeaky toy and some dog treats. Haruna was looking for some cat treats and maybe a new toy as well. We'll be around so you can go visit the different pets if you want." Sayaka said.

"Ok thanks."

"So what do you want to look at first?" Yukirin asked.

"Let's go look at the puppys." Mayuyu said.

They walked over to the puppy section and found three of them in one caged area. One was a Shiba and the other two were toy poodles.

"Ahh they're so cute!"

Yukirin reached out and petted the toy poodle.

"I want to touch it too!"

Mayuyu reached out but as soon as she did, all three of the dogs started barking at her. Yukirin had to run before the store clerk came over.

"How about we go look at the kittens?"

"That sounds good."

Yukirin and Mayuyu walked over to the kitten section and saw four of them. Yukirin liked the black one while Mayuyu liked the fluffy white one. When Yukirin reached out to touch the black one, it hissed at her and tried scratching her.

"Haha the kitten doesn't like you."

Mayuyu tried to touch the kitten but it did the exact same thing as the black one.

"Cats are evil." Mayuyu said.

"How about we check out the bunnies?"

The bunnies were in cages so you couldn't touch them. There was a black one, a brown one and a white one and they all looked like they were still babies. All three of the bunnies were fighting to get to the drinking bottle. The black one pushed the brown one away but the brown one was fighting back. Meanwhile the white one was trying to get in on it but kept being pushed out.

"Ahh poor thing."

Mayuyu reached into the cage and pulled out the bunny from the cage.

"Mayuyu what are you doing!" Yukirin said.

"I wanted to hold it." Mayuyu said.

"Put it back before someone sees us!"

"No way! It's super cute. Plus it's not trying to bite or scratch me."

"Mayuyu seriously put it back."

"It's not gonna hurt me. Here try holding it."

Mayuyu shoved the bunny right in front of Yukirin causing her to fall back. She knocked over some bird cages and the birds escaped. One flew over by Haruna and when Haruna saw it, her ears came out and she started eyeing the bird. Then with one quick swipe Haruna caught the bird and popped it into her mouth.

"Haruna no!"

Yukirin rushed over and slapped Haruna's back making her spit the bird back out. Haruna hissed at Yukirin which made Sae start barking. The barking startled all the animals causing them to panick. The store clerk came out with a very angry look on his face.

"Run!" Sayaks shouted.

All four of them high tailed it out of there before the store clerk could catch them. When they were far enough, they finally stopped to catch their breaths.

"What happened back there?" Sayaka asked.

"One of the birds got lose and flew over by Haruna." Yukirin said.

"She saw it and tried to eat it so I rushed over and slapped her back to make her cough it up."

"That hurt you know!" Haruna said.

"So then she hissed at me which made Sae start barking and her barking freaked out all the other animals."

"Sae why did you do that?"

"You know how I get around cats!" Sae said.

"Well the point is we got out of there without facing any concequences. But next time we may not get lucky." Sayaka said.

"That's for sure."

"Well I have to go home. I'll see you guys tomorrow!" Yukirin said.

"Bye!"

"Uh Yukirin aren't you forgetting something?" Mayuyu said.

"What?"

"Jelly beans."

"Oh right. Sorry."

When Mayuyu and Yukirin got home, they found Mariko watching their TV.

"Mariko what are you doing here?" Mayuyu asked.

"I came to watch TV. I saw this add for a movie called "Twilight" and I had to watch it. I'm about to watch Bella find out Edward is a vampire!" Mariko said.

"How did you get in? I remembered locking the door." Yukirin asked.

"I just walked in. You know go through the door. I'm a shinigami after all."

"Ok. Well I'm going to start dinner."

"That would be great."

Yukirin walked into the kitchen and started a wash her hands. But then she felt something fuzzy brush up against her leg.

"Kya a rat!"

Yukirin kicked it at full force sending it flying across the room. It slammed against the wall and fell to the ground hard. Yukirin rushed over to see if it was dead. That's when she realized it wasn't a rat that she kicked. It was the baby bunny from the pet store that Mayuyu was holding.

"Yukirin!" Mayuyu shouted.

"I'm sorry I thought it was a rat!" Yukirin said.

"How could you! It was still a baby!"

"I'm sorry Mayuyu it was an accident."

"Sure. I'm never talking to you again bunny killer!"

"Mayuyu please!"

"Both of you shut up!" Mariko said.

"What are you two arguing about?"

"Yukirin killed a baby bunny!" Mayuyu said as she held the bunny and showed it to her.

"Jeez Yukirin now that's just cruel."

"It was an accident!"

"Now we're going to have to burry it."

"Maybe that won't be required."

"What do you mean?" Yukirin said.

"Mayuyu, I think Yukirin found you a new body."

"Huh!"

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Well there's chapter 7. Ahh it feels so much better updating. I missed writing. Anyways, what will Mayuyu do? Find out the next chapter! Ahh it's good to be back. Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Second Chance update Chapter 7
« Reply #39 on: July 25, 2012, 02:29:16 AM »
Acchan and Takamina are cute  :nya:
Sae and Haruna always made problems  :on lol:
nooooooooo  :stoned:
really Mayu wont talk to Yuki again  :OMG:
here comes the chapter 8  :on drink:
I wonder how it wil be Mayu a bunny  :whistle:
I can't wait for the next  :hee:

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