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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #20 on: January 04, 2013, 03:22:43 PM »
And, one more surprise.  :otomerika:  As promised, the anime version of Saeyaka! :love:

Here's the link to the photo:
http://animefann682.deviantart.com/art/Fire-and-Ice-346642501?ga_submit_new=10%253A1357309205 :deco:

See you later! :yossi:

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #21 on: January 04, 2013, 05:12:02 PM »
asdvhgasdkjhsklfhdjk why do I only realize about this now sdhfgaskgfak
The worlds need more TwinTower fanfic *o*

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #22 on: January 04, 2013, 05:33:17 PM »
 :cow:
And, one more surprise.  :otomerika:  As promised, the anime version of Saeyaka! :love:
 
Here's the link to the photo:
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See you later! :yossi:

Yey! an update!  :cathappy:

Sae is such a gentleman  :inlove:

I wonder if Sayaka will remember what happened  :?

Sayaka~ be true to yourself and accept Sae  :banghead:

Nice drawing by the way  :thumbsup
« Last Edit: January 04, 2013, 06:02:34 PM by Archie28 »
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #23 on: January 04, 2013, 05:41:47 PM »
Thank you, thank you very much :yossi: (Elvis impression)

You guys are so sweet!
Thanks to all you who support me. :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 2
« Reply #24 on: January 05, 2013, 04:52:39 AM »
nice story... please continue to update more :)
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AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 3
« Reply #25 on: January 06, 2013, 02:40:10 PM »
Okay, school is coming up soon for me, so it may be a while 'til my next update!
I'll keep working to be able to please all you fans out there! :thumbsup
 :cathappy: Now then, please enjoy! :deco:


AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Chapter 3


Sayaka was fast asleep on her bed. Her savior quickly took her back to her house after she was attacked.

She was slowly breathing in and out, her cheeks still wet from her tears.

And, finally, she started waking up.

She opened her eyes and sat up. She saw her clock, it's already past 3 A.M.

"What the hell happened to me?"

She suddenly felt her eyes, drying them off.

"...So, was it all just a dream?"

Now more tired than ever, she got up and dragged her heavy feet to the window to close the curtains.

Then, out the corner of her eye, she saw the figure of her savior sitting on the balcony.

She slowly walked toward him, to get a better view of him.

"Sae?"

Her sudden voice startled him a bit, but he was glad Sayaka was fine.

"What are you doing here?"

"I ran into Yuko as I was carrying you home. She told me how to get here so I wouldn't get lost."

Sayaka remembered everything.

It wasn't a dream. She was almost harassed, until Sae suddenly stepped in and saved her.

After he arrived, he must have laid her down on the bed and sat outside, waiting for her to wake up.

"Speaking of which, where is Yuko?"

"Mm... She said something about going to a drinking party with her family. 'I'm already 18, so I can drink alcohol if I want,' she said." They started to laugh a little after that.

Sayaka looked up at the stars, some of them shooting down like rockets.

"A meteor shower."

She turned to Sae and saw his eyes were closed.

Either he was asleep or he likes the feel of the breeze.

"It's beautiful out here, isn't it?"

Sae nodded.

"Well, when you were sleeping peacefully on your bed, you looked like Sleeping Beauty."

He slowly brought his hand up and held her cheek.

"No one could compare to you."

Now, Sayaka started blushing a bit.


Sae's POV
After a brief moment, Sayaka walked back into her room.

"What's wrong?"

"Can I... ask you something?"

What could she want? I wonder if I upset her.

She turned to me and I nodded.

"Did I upset you earlier? When I said, 'I'm perfectly fine alone'?"

This made my heart skip a beat. I always worried about her, but now it was the opposite. I got off the balcony and ran up to her side.

"No, of course not."

"You weren't upset?"

I unconsciously bit my lower lip, which only made Sayaka worry more.

"Can I tell you a secret?"

*BA-BUMP*

I heard it loud and clear. Sayaka's heart skipped a beat. Mine did, too.

"... Sure."

I looked at Sayaka and I saw in her eyes she was scared at what I was about to say. Even though she had no idea what it was.
End of Sae's POV


Sayaka's POV
Sae looked like he was about to cry.

But, he took a deep breath and knelt down. He grasped my hand tightly.

"I love you."

*BA-BUMP*

Did he just confess?! But, we've only just met!

... Right?


"I've been searching for you. For a very long time now, I've searched for you. And now, I finally found you."

He lifted my hand and kissed it.

I could feel my body get lighter and my senses go weak.

He looked up, and our eyes met once again.

"Have you really?"

"You probably don't remember. It's been such a long time since I last saw you."

His kind smile brought a tear to my eye.

Maybe we were childhood friends...

I knelt down beside him.

"Miyazawa...-kun, you've been so kind already."

And, his stubborn look came again.

"So, you think I'm lying?"

"No, no. I believe you. It really must have been a long time."

"..."

I felt my hand hold onto his tighter as he started to tighten his grip.

I wonder... just how long it's been...

"Nee... Sae."

He looked up at me, surprised to hear me call him by his first name.

"How long has it been? 5 years? 10?"

There was a long silence. It made my heart beat faster as I waited for an answer.

"... 500 years ago."

*BA-BUMP*

"Eh?"

Did he really just say that? 500 years?!


To be continued...

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 3
« Reply #26 on: January 06, 2013, 02:47:36 PM »
Sorry I didn't comment earlier...

Was busy..

Anyway, all I can say is..

GOOD JOB, I love this!

I'll be waiting for more!
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4
« Reply #27 on: January 12, 2013, 02:59:39 PM »
:banghead: Okay, it's been a LONG update in a while, since I've just started back at school, so I had to work REALLY hard on the next few chapters :temper:
So, please, give me lots of luck and, please, a few nice comments (to help me throughout the day :panic:)

And now, DOUZO! :on gay:


AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Chapter 4


Sayaka's POV
"500 years? We met 500 years ago?"

He looked up at me and smiled. But, it wasn't because he was happy.

He just wanted me to try and remember.

... Or, that's what I thought.

"Hard to believe, I know. But, it's true! We've loved and were loved by each other 500 years ago!"

His hand gripped tighter, but I forced him to let go.

I slowly got up, slowly backing away from him.

500 years? 500 years?!

How could we have met that long ago?

More importantly, how can he know me for that long? Searching for me...

He's been looking for me for 500 years?


"That's IMPOSSIBLE!!!"

I covered my ears. I just couldn't listen to such nonsense anymore.

I suddenly fell backward onto my bed.

Then, Sae suddenly leapt up from his kneeling position, jumped on top of me, and pinned my wrists to the bed.

My heart just wouldn't stop pounding.
End of Sayaka's POV


"Get off me!"

Sae slowly raised his head, facing Sayaka now closer than ever.

This time, after countless squirming and yelling, at one look into his eyes, Sayaka froze instantly.

She untightened the fist she made in her hand.

She was completely mesmerized by his stare. The tantalizing glow went straight through her eyes and turned off all her senses.

Sae leaned in closer to Sayaka's ear.

"Let me prove we have a special connection," he whispered and kissed the lobe of her ear.

Sayaka closed her eyes and let Sae slowly kiss her cheek. His mouth traveled down south her jaw and stopped right at her neck.

He tightened his hold on Sayaka's hands and started breathing heavily, completely captured by her scent.

"Why, this scent... I haven't sensed it in so long..." His fangs slightly drew out, as if he were going to bite her neck.

Sayaka squeezed her eyes tighter, trying to resist his power.

She became scared from the heavy breaths at her neck by Sae. She wanted to wake up, hoping everything that was happening was just a nightmare.

The sniffing stopped after a while, then Sayaka cursed herself in her mind about how she had been taken down so easily.


Sayaka's POV
"... Ugh!"

Sae suddenly grunted and released me.

I opened my eyes and panted harder than ever. I was so overwhelmed from trying to wake up, my feelings were all let out then and there.

I felt how hot my cheeks were, and saw in the mirror that they were blood red.

On the other hand, Sae was blushing, but not as much as me.

"Your face is so red."

"..."

Sae gripped his hand into a fist and bit his lower lip, again, showing immense childness.

He looked back up and said, "How do you feel?"

"... Hot."

Sae twitched suddenly. His face couldn't hide the surpirse he had over what I just said.

Then, he smiled softly.

"Sae... Are you a..?"

He suddenly cut me off.

"Monster? Creature of the night? ...Vampire?"

Vampire sounded ridiculous. But, any way you looked at it, he fitted that description perfectly.

"Yes..."

"Yes."

Wait, you were serious?

Sae took my hand again and softly kissed it. He brought it up to his cheek and gently nuzzled it. Something in my heart tugged a little.

It felt strange.

We've only just met, and yet, I've already started to feel such a strong connection.

I wonder if it was really like this before...

"In your dream, you saw grey flames, didn't you?"

"Y-yes..."

How did he know that?

"Normal flames can burn your skin. Grey flames give off heat, but won't cause pain. That same fire is burning within me. That's why you feel warm to me."

He drew himself in closer. This only made me blush even more.

"This is proof. Even if you don't remember yet, there's a strong feeling that binds us together. Even throughout time."

I removed his hand from mine, slowly removing it from his cheek.

"I-I just... don't know."
End of Sayaka's POV


Sae's POV

I looked down for a bit. Even though she was still holding my hand, she wanted me to give her more proof.

I laughed a little. Only so softly that she couldn't hear it.

"As expected, it's hard to convince you."

There is one more thing I can do...

I reached into my back pocket and pulled out a blue rose.

"What is this," she asked. Obviously, she still had trouble finalizing our last few memories together.

"It's for you."

Sayaka looked up at me, then looked down and kindly took the rose.

"It was one of the first gifts I ever gave you. It's my prized possession. And, I want you to have it."

"What? Why? This is precious to you, right? Your prized possession..."

"It's our prized possession. A sign of our love."

She held the rose in her hand tightly.

I saw in her eyes she wanted me to protect her, but she just wasn't completely sure yet.

So, I brought myself in to kiss her. I slowly went in closer to her lips as she closed her eyes.
End of Sae's POV


"Wait..."

Sayaka suddenly got up and stopped Sae.

"I'm still just not sure..."

Sae bit his lower lip.

"I wish you'd accept me easier." Sae said it softly, but Sayaka could hear it clearly.

"I'm sorry, Sae. Just give me some more time... please..."

After an awkward pause, Sae got up from the bed and walked out to the balcony again. He stopped and turned to Sayaka again, their eyes meeting one more time.

"I'll try my best to explain everything tomorrow. If you will please."

Sayaka waited a bit, then slightly nodded.

Sae smiled and blew an air kiss to her.

"See you tomorrow."

And, in the blink of an eye, he was gone. A slight breeze swept through the room, leaving Sayaka standing in her exact spot.

Staring at the beautiful blue rose.


To be continued...


Whew~! I'm literally working my head AND my butt off to make this the best it can be! :catglare: But, at least I'm getting it done.
What I'll probably do is try and make some cute little side stories. :dozing: But, I'm already REALLY tired from school!
 :otomerika: So, until then, I'll see ya soon!
« Last Edit: January 16, 2013, 02:08:50 AM by TTLuver497 »

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4
« Reply #28 on: January 12, 2013, 03:32:25 PM »
This was so sweet~~ :mon trannie:

Take your time and ganbatte~ :mon yeah:

I'll be waiting for those cute side stories~ :mon fu:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4
« Reply #29 on: January 13, 2013, 07:51:37 AM »
Sae's so sweet  :luvluv1:

great update  :mon fyeah:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4
« Reply #30 on: January 14, 2013, 05:46:19 AM »
I really like how you portray Sayaka in this fic. Not the manly, hotblooded girl, but instead you only use it as her outer appearance and make her actual character as a soft-hearted girl.

This is sooooo romantic  :wub:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4/Side story 1
« Reply #31 on: January 15, 2013, 01:19:33 AM »
:hee: Early update!  :hee:
Sakura-chan: Thanks for your encouraging words. I'll be sure to make the rest of this story good! :cathappy:
Yuki-san: To tell true, if you ask me, Sayaka-chan reminds me of Amu from "Shugo Chara" and Misaki in "Maid-sama!" :heart:
I wanted to show people a side of her that most others barely see (that being her girly side :deco: )
But, enough of that! :on gay: Let's get on with the story, shall we?

AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Side story 1


It was lunch time at school and everyone was gathered around in different groups, having their own conversations.

Sayaka, Sae, and Yuko were eating together.

"Dude, I'm serious!"

"Yuko, please, calm down..."

Yuko cut off Sayaka suddenly after wolfing down her rice.

"Really! You and Sae should TOTALLY hook up!"

"Why," the energetic boy asked, even though, deep down, he wanted that to happen.

"Because, you guys look so sweet together. You will make the perfect couple. 'The lovely gorilla princess and the handsome ghost prince!'"

Sayaka and Sae just dropped their jaws down.

"Who the hell are you callin' 'gorilla princess'?!"

"Uh~, 'ghost prince'?"

Yuko swallowed more of her lunch and let out a huge sigh.

"Your hair is so white, it looks like a ghost!"

Sae just got an awkward expression on his face, while Sayaka snickered a little at his expression.


"Seriously, did you dye it?"

"No."

Nacchi suddenly entered the conversation.

"He was born with that hair. I should know. It's been like that forever."

"Nacchi, were you and Sae friends?"

Nacchi nodded and explain how Sae and her went to the same elementary school, until Sae got transferred to Tokyo.

Suddenly, Yuko pounded the desk and stood up.

"If you really were childhood friends, you'd know EVERYTHING about each other and do EVERYTHING together."

She glanced at Natsuki, then at Sae.

"What was the name of your elementary school?"

"Saitama's Little Ladybug Elementary school," they said sitamiously.

"What clubs did you participate in?"

"Music club, art club, junior soccer team."

Yuko started getting frustrated. Then, it hit her.

"What did you drink for lunch at that school?"

"Tomato juice," they both said, then they fist bumped.

"Wow."


Sae was leaving early, so he decided to walk the through the empty halls before he left.

Sayaka ran up to him, startling him a bit.

"Sae-kun. Since you're a vampire, and, like, over 500 years old, how do you know Natsuki?"

"Oh, Nacchi. Well, it's a long story. Some time ago, about 250 years, I used to work as a bartender."

Sayaka's eyes widened. "Really?"

"My body stopped aging after I turned 18, so I was allowed to work there."

Sayaka laughed, trying to imagine how he would have looked as a bartender.

"But, about 12 years ago, a witch turned me back to the age of 6. Luckily, my mind and all my memories remained in tact."

"That's why you and Natsuki met during elementary school."

Sae nodded, but blushed a little.

"I guess he's a bit embaressed about stuff like that," thought Sayaka, and snickered a little.

"Well, I'm off."

"Wait!"

She suddenly grabbed onto Sae's arm.

"Weren't you going to tell me more? About... our past?"

Sae only smiled and made Sayaka let go.

"I'll tell ya later."

Sae ran down to the other end of the hallway, before turning back and waving goodbye to Sayaka.

She smiled a bit and waved back.

"I just wonder... if he's telling the truth..."

As Sae left, Sayaka knelt to the floor, her back against the wall.

"It just seems... ridiculous..."


:byebye: Bye bye! :heart:

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4/Side story 1
« Reply #32 on: January 15, 2013, 10:42:11 AM »
Yey! Side story  :cow:

Yuko is still Yuko   :mon fu:

now I am even more curious about Sae and Sayaka's past  :mon huh2:

Great update by the way   :on GJ:
« Last Edit: January 15, 2013, 12:31:05 PM by Archie28 »
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 4/Side story 1
« Reply #33 on: January 15, 2013, 12:21:15 PM »
Yuko-sama  :nya: :farofflook:

*spazzes for some time*

*cough*

Anyway, I really love this side story, it shows a nice friendship between them all

And I agree, the two should hook up  :cow:

I'll be waiting for more~  :bow:
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AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5
« Reply #34 on: January 18, 2013, 03:05:44 PM »
Yesterday and today are about three things. :shy2: Snow, vampires, and romance!
I've got so many new story ideas, so, once I finish this, I promise I'll be making a LOT more new stories!
So, keep warm this snowy season and cuddle up in this new update! :deco:

 :on drink: DOUZO!

AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Chapter 5


"Naki naga~ra hohoen de♪ Hitori ni~nareru made wa♪ Koko kara mada ugokenak-"

The beautiful singing coming from Yuko was interrupted by sudden coughing.

A surprised Sayaka looks over to her side.

"You okay?"

*Cough* *Cough* "Yeah, just a little tickle in my throat."

"I wonder if drinking alcohol is affecting her singing voice..."

Sayaka was reasearching her lyrics for a song her and Yuko sings together, while Yuko was practicing a song she wrote on her guitar.

"Hey, Sayaka, where are the others?"

KYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

"There they are."

The door opened to reveal three more members of the Light Music club. Very ikemen students.

The one in the middle had ruby red hair, the right student had golden blonde hair, and the left had midnight blue hair.

"Ah! Kuu-han, Kai-kun, Ricchan!"

Kojima Riku, Takahashi Kai, and Minegishi Kuu were three of the most ikemen students in school. And, three of the most popular members of the club.
... To girls, anyways.

"Sorry we're late. You won't believe how many girls are out there!"

"Oh, I can guess."

The other four started laughing. Then, everyone prepared their instruments.

"Alright! Everyone ready?"

"Hai!"

"Yo~shi! Let's do this!"

A-1, a-2, a-1, 2, 3, 4!!!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!


As they practiced their songs, the fangirls outside were all acting like full on wotas.

Tiger! Fire! Cyber! Fiber! Diver! Viber! JYAA JYAAAA!

"I've never heard a female version of a mix before," was Sayaka's first thought.


After rehersal, Yuko was clinging onto her boyfriend, Riku, while Kai and Kuu were signing autographs for some fans.

Sayaka was packing her stuff up, when she realized her blue rose was in her bag.

She must have unconsciously put it in there this morning.

Sae checked out early after lunch, so he never got to tell Sayaka any more about their past.

Suddenly, one of the schools first-year students, Mayu, came in yelling for Yuko.

Mayu and Yuko were like two little dogs who could play with each other forever. But, they were a strange pair.

"Se~no, Oshiri!"

Everyone else in school found the whole "oshiri" thing cute, but Sayaka just found it annoying.

"Nee, nee, Mayuyu, wanna hang out at my place later."

"Sure!"

Yuko suddenly pulled in the three other guys, too.

"These guys can come, too!"

"Eeeeehhh?!"

"Na~nte ne!" She pushed aside Kai and Kuu, and hugged Riku. "I just want Ricchan!"

You could clearly see sweat drops coming down their faces.

"I just don't get her, Kai..."

"Me neither..."

Mayu saw Sayaka sitting alone, still staring at her blue rose, and walked over to talk to her. She tapped her shoulder, which made Sayaka stand up, hiding
the rose behind her back.

"Nee, Sayaka-san."

"Eh? What?"

"Sayaka-san, do you wanna hang out with me and Yuko?"

"Uhh..."

At this point, Sayaka was slowly backing away and gripping the rose tightly in her hand.

"Sayaka, you okay?"

"I'm not really feeling well. I'm gonna head home."

She walked out the room and ran down the hallway, leaving everyone in shock.

Mayu tried to stop her, but she was too fast.

"I'm gonna go check up on her, okay?"

"Wait, Mayuyu!"

Yuko stopped Mayu and handed her Sayaka's bag.

"Take this."

She nodded, then ran down the same direction as Sayaka.


Mayu, almost completely out of breath, was barely catching up to Sayaka. She wasn't running anymore, but she was still far away from her.

"Sayaka-san!"

She didn't respond to Mayu's call, so she continued to follow her.

Sayaka, as if in a mindless trance, headed down a path in the forest, holding the blue rose out in her hand.

"Sayaka-san!!"

And again, no response.

"Where are you going? The way to your house is completely different from this..."

After a while, Mayu finally caught up to her and stopped her in front of her tracks.

"Sayaka-san, what's wrong?"

She shaked her shoulders to try and get an answer, but she just stared at Mayu blankly and emotionless.

Mayu also noted that her eyes were no longer their regular dark brown, but now glowing a bright blue.

"Sayaka-san!"

Sayaka pushed her out of the way and continued towards a huge mansion in front of them.

Mayu was completely speechless. Who could possibly be living in such a place?

"Ai wo osore~runa~♪ Ushinau mono nado♪ Nani mo nai~♪"

"Eh? Who's that?"

She heard someone singing, but she couldn't tell who.

"Kimi no kao ni~♪ Kimi no subete ga♪ Boku no hikizukete yume wo miseru~♪"

Mayu took in a deep breath and nodded slightly, slowly following Sayaka into the mansion.


Sae's POV
"Kimi wo daite~♪ Kimi to tomo~ ni~♪ Ai no hodou ni moete~♪ Eien no toki wo ikiru~♪"

I was on the edge of the window in my library, feeling the light summer breeze. I couldn't help but sing this calming song.

I always sang it to Sayaka when we were together.

I also changed out of my school uniform and was now wearing my favorite black suit and white tie.

I slowly opened my eyes and heard the footsteps of my two maids, Tanabe and Nakaya.

They were robots created by my father to serve me.

"Sae-sama, we have brought your red wine for you."

"You may drink now, over here."

I nodded and jumped from the edge, landing on my feet and sat down in my couch.

As they poured the wine, I felt the ground with my feet.

She will be here soon...

*RING RING*

The bell in front of the mansion door rang, indicating someone opened it and came in.

"Are? Who could that be?"

Nakaya stopped pouring the wine and got up.

"I will go check."

As she was walking up the stairs, Sayaka walked in. As I expected, she wasn't resisting the hypnosis at all.

"Ano, coming in so freemindedly is very bothersome!"

"It's fine."

The maids bowed down and allowed Sayaka to walk down the stairs.


Tanabe and Nakaya walked closer to each other.

"Perhaps..."

"Could it be...?"

"This girl could be Sae-sama's lover!"

I just ignored the girls. I kept my watch at Sayaka and got up from the chair.

As she stepped down the final step and walked slowly toward me, I walked over to stop her.

I lightly held the blue rose and stared into Sayaka's eyes.

"Sayaka..."

I couldn't help but hear the two maids giggling over the scene.

"Sayaka, you can wake up."

I snapped my fingers and the blue glow in her eyes faded, returning them to their dark brown color again.

She blinked a few times, and the light returned in her eyes.

"Eh? What the-? What the hell am I doing here?!"

Awakening from her trance, she looked around and questioned how she even got here.

"Now then, please sit here."

"No, I'm fine! I was just going home."

She turned and gave me a slight glare.

"Besides, don't you like THOSE kind of women?"

"These girls are only my servants. You don't need to worry."

"I wasn't worried at all!"

I laughed a little, noticing her every little reaction.

"That's fine. Girls, go get her something to drink."

"Yes, sir."

The girls walked up the stairs and left the library, leaving me and Sayaka all alone.

I slowly walked back and sat down, offering her to sit once again.
End of Sae's POV


Sayaka's POV

I look away from Sae for a second, clenching a fist in my hand.

"You didn't have to do that..."

"It was the only thing I could do. You didn't know the way here, so..."

After I glared at him a bit, his voice got silent. The room went completely silent, leaving the both of us in an awkward position.

I guess now's about the time to ask...

"Sae... Are you lying to me?"

Sae suddenly got up from the couch.

"What? Why do you think that?"

"I was talking to Yuko today and she told me, 'Sometimes boys'll try to impress you by making up little stories. They'll usually say something COMPLETELY
ridiculous!'"

And, being a 500-year-old vampire falls into the "ridiculous" category perfectly.

Sae slowly walked toward me, holding onto my hand.

"Sayaka... I wouldn't lie to you. If I was lying, I wouldn't have saved you that night."

Even though his story was hard to believe, he did save me that night.

But, it was too hard. I couldn't understand any of it.

Sae raised my hand and held the blue rose.

"This rose... This rose will never wilt. It will bloom for all eternity."

"Eternity..."

He bit his lower lip again, letting go of the rose.

"There must be a way to make you remember..."

"Sae, I understand you're trying to be nice. But, I'm sorry. Just you talking about such things is too much for me to handle. So-"

Sae suddenly pulled me close, our heads only inches apart. He was holding my head in position and didn't break hold.

"Hey! What the hell are you doing?!"

I tried to make him let go, but he was too strong.

"Let go!"

*BA-BUMP*

Eh? What the-? What's happening?

"S-Sae... W-what are... you doing...?"


My body was no longer struggling. I held on to Sae's arms tightly, my legs going weak.

"Rememberance spell. My sister taught it to me."

I squeezed onto Sae tighter, my head pounding like crazy. I was stuck in my current position, my head cupped in Sae's hands.

"Please, just trust me."

I slowly let my body relax and close my eyes, still holding onto his arms.

Unfamiliar images started filling my head. Ancient memories from an unknown time, with sounds and sights I could no longer remember.

"We grew up here. It's where we met."

My heart starts pounding faster and my eyes squeeze tighter.

"You had a heart of ice and studied different ways to talk to spirits. At night, the black magic would take over."

*BA-BUMP*

My breathing got heavier, and I tightened my grip on Sae.

"I was the only one who could help you. I freed you from the curse."

"...But, there were still others after us."

That wasn't me. That answer wasn't me.

Or, at least, not this me.

It was my past self. She's... awakening?

"Now, the hardest part. The final memory."

*BA-BUMP*

I see... Tokyo, but it was ancient.

And, in ruins.

There was demonic purple fire, burning down everything.


"Now, what do you see?"

"...Hunters. They're after you."

The memories kept piling one after another.

It was too hard to keep up. I didn't want to accept those memories.

Now, I could barely stand up, and I was groaning in pain. I tried to hold on, but it was too intense.

"Just hold on a little longer."

Sae... I'm sorry... I c-can't...

All at once, these painful memories became too vivid. I scream and push Sae away, both of us falling to the ground.
End of Sayaka's POV


The maids come in and rush to Sayaka and Sae's sides. Because of Sayaka's sudden scream, Nakaya drops the tray carrying their tea.

"Sae-sama!"

"Sayaka-san!"

Sae hit his head on the chair after being pushed, while Sayaka was holding onto herself for dear life.

Tanabe trys to calm her down.

"Sayaka-san, are you alright?"

Sayaka's eyes widen with fear and she pushes her arm away.

"No!!!"

"Sayaka!"

Sayaka runs up the stairs and storms out of the house. She keeps her arms crossed around her and tears fall freely from her eyes.

Sae just stands where he is and frowns, watching the love of his life leave his grasp more than ever.

He picks up the blue rose off the ground.

"She dropped it."

"Sae-sama..."

The maids watch Sae as he stares at the rose.

"It might be a little too hasty right now."

He slowly lays the rose down on the table and sits back down on the couch.

"500 years ago, she was your lover, wasn't she, Sae-sama?"

"That's right. I was able to stop the black magic from controlling her."

He slowly lower his head, holding his hands together.

"But, she used a forbidden spell. And for my sake, too... I've waited for so long, and now I've found her."

Sae gained his confidence again and slowly rised.

"This time, I will make sure to protect her. And then, we can be together... Forever..."


To be continued...

:ptam-shit: Work, work, work.
But, because of the snow (You people won't believe how much it snow yesterday!!!), I may have free time for a new update soon.
Until that day comes... :sleep: ...See you soon

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5
« Reply #35 on: January 18, 2013, 04:03:13 PM »
 :tama-laff: :tama-heart: :tama-yeeaah:

Its getting more exciting XD XD

what did Sayaka do in her past life?

Why is there hunters?

Ahh~ so many questions  :mon sweat:

please update soon   :mon cute:
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5
« Reply #36 on: January 18, 2013, 04:05:56 PM »
I'm glad you're excited, all DOKI-DOKI :deco:

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AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5/Side story 2
« Reply #37 on: January 20, 2013, 04:17:23 PM »
:yossi: Early update! :otomerika:
Not just Saeyaka, but now you'll be seeing a LOT of new pair-ups. :roll: I not givin' them away, though!
Please enjoy this cute little update! :usagiii:


AKB Fanfic-Fire and Ice


Side story 2


Mayu was wandering around the mansion, looking for Sayaka.

"KYAAAAA!!!"

"Eh? Sayaka-san?"

As soon as she heard the scream, she hid behind a wall to make sure no one would see her. After a while, she heard someone slam the door shut.

She slowly backed away, and then bumped into someone standing behind her.

She turned around and saw two pitch black eyes staring at her.

"Good evening."

"G-g-good evening..."

A beautiful girl with long, black hair trapped Mayu up against the wall.

"Who are you?"

"Wa-Watanabe Mayu. And, what's your name?"

"Kashiwagi Yuki."

Yuki slowly brought her face closer to Mayu. She turned her head away from her gaze.

"Ka-Kashiwagi...-san. You're t-too close."

She held her chin and turned her face back to have their eyes meet again.

"You're too cute. I want to get a good look at you."

Yuki slowly caressed her cheek, staring deeply into her eyes. She closed her eyes and sniffed her neck.

"You smell good..."

Mayu was completely entranced by Yuki's gaze, unable to think properly.

"Thank you, but..."

"But, she's exactly like a vampire!"

Just as Yuki was about to bite her neck, Mayu suddenly awoke from the trance and pushed Yuki aside.

"What do you think you're doing?!"

"How did she resist?"

Yuki looked down and bit her lower lip.

At that moment, Mayu's eyes widened. She had realized something.

"Are you related to Sae-kun? Miyazawa Sae-kun?"

Yuki looked up, then looked down.

"He's my stepbrother. I was adopted 3 years ago."


Flashback

12 years ago, Yuki was actually a witch. She was in a heated battle to take Sae's immortal soul.

She used a spell to revert him back into a kid, to make him easier to beat.

But, just before, Sae bit her and knocked her to the ground.

Yuki layed there unconscious, the venom coursing throughout her veins.

When she woke up, she was in the hospital. Her partners, Aki and Asuka, must have found her unconscious and rushed her to safety.

"Yukirin?"

The two girls were standing by Yuki's side with worried expressions on their faces.

"Yukirin, are you okay?"

"Yeah... I'm fine."

Asuka walked over and opened the curtains, letting all the light in.

Yuki suddenly hissed, covering herself under the blankets.

"Close them! Close them!"

Asuka closed the curtains and rushed back to Yuki's side.

The skin on her arm was burning, and she now had fangs.

"Yukirin's a..."

Yuki covered her face and cried in front of her friends like it didn't matter anymore. It was too late to save her.

"Leave..."

"What? What the hell you think you're sayin-?"

"Just leave!"

Aki's eyes widened as she slowly backed away. Her and Asuka left, leaving Yuki all alone.

"I've... changed..."

And there was nothing she could do about it. She wanted an immortal soul, but not by becoming such a monster.

She tried to kill herself, but the combination of her powerful black magic and immortal vampire heart didn't allow it and only healed the wounds.


A few years later, she came across a 15-year-old Sae walking to his mansion.

She silently followed him through the forest path, careful not to be seen.

When she reached the mansion, she waited outside.

At that moment, Yuki realized something.

All her life, she lived in the dark. She was locked in her own cage, unable to interact with the outside world. A lifeless doll pretending it's alive.

But, she was given a chance. She didn't know it, but she now had all the time in the world to change her life.

She went up to the mansion door and knocked it gently.

When Sae and his maids opened the door, Yuki wrapped her arms tightly around him.

"Thank you."

At first, Sae was shocked at this kind of reaction.

She begged for all forgivness, and Sae gladly accepted.

That day foward, Yuki was proudly raised as a new part of the Miyazawa family, but kept her family name "Kashiwagi."

End of flashback


"You're really a vampire?"

Yuki backed away from her and turned around, nodding slightly.

"Does that mean Sae's a vampire, too?"

Yuki looked down from the balcony. Sae was putting on his black cloak, holding the blue rose in his hand, and rushed out the door.

She turned back and pushed her farther against the wall.

"If you so think as to tell anyone of this," she said with a snear, "I will suck all the blood from your living body."

"Yuki!"

Yuki suddenly stopped and let go of Mayu.

"I promise. I won't let anyone hurt you."

Yuki looked down from her for a bit.

"Just promise one thing."

Mayu hesitated a bit, but nodded.

"I haven't felt such kindness and warmth from anyone like you."

"Not even Sae?"

Yuki shook her head.

"If you were to, please..."

She slowly brought herself around and hugged Mayu tightly.

"Teach me that feeling. So that I may... continue living happily on this world. I'm still unfamiliar with so many things."

Mayu nodded and returned the hug.


Some moments later...


Master...

Yes, Mayu?

I've received the proper information we needed.

And...

It's true. Miyazawa Sae is a vampire.

Good work, Mayu. You may return to your chamber now.

Yes, master.

*TAT TAT TAT*

Captain...

It's time. We can start preparing it.

The silver stake.



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So many new stories, So many new things to learn...
WHAT WILL HAPPEN?!?!?!?!?!?! :tntrm:
 :cathappy: Stay tuned!
« Last Edit: January 22, 2013, 02:12:56 PM by TTLuver497 »

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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5/Side story 2
« Reply #38 on: January 20, 2013, 04:50:05 PM »
thank you a lot for the side story :yep: :heart:you write a lot better than i do :lol: :bow:cuz you have great imagination
as promised heres my comment   :cathappy:
cant wait for next update
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Re: AKB48(Saeyaka Fanfic)-Fire and Ice Chapter 5/Side story 2
« Reply #39 on: January 20, 2013, 05:40:52 PM »
Thanks for the update...

Ehhh mayuyu is a hunter?!  :O nooo, I hope she will fall for Yukirin and stop the plan of killing Sae... but I have a feeling that Sae will die in the end of story  :(
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