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Title: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui Reply and Sorry
Post by: Chanaline on November 11, 2012, 03:58:16 PM
Chanaline's fanficition

Hello minna !!!! I am a new writer (but not a new reader XD), it is my first time writing a fanfic...I am so sorry for my weird grammar, my weird sentence and other weird things with my English. I am not very good in English... :nervous
I start to write because cmze-san says that she read my fanfic (even if it is boring, right? Cmze-san? XD I feel I oblige you! :smhid )

Mayuki fanfic!
Yuki: is a man (Danso Yuki :wub: ). He is the grandson of a CEO of a company that earns millions. (At the start Mayu don't know this)

Mayu: is prodigy student and she finish her studies.

I know they do not have a lot of description.

INDEX

Chapter 1
Chapter 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1121717#msg1121717)
Chapter 3 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1123513#msg1123513)
Chapter 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1130028#msg1130028)
Chapter 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1130294#msg1130294)
Chapter 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1139860#msg1139860)
Chapter 7 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1188000#msg1188000)
Chapter 8 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34302.msg1251493#msg1251493)


Married?!

 I am 18 years old, my name is Watanabe Mayu. I am a girl, who is intelligent more than a simple people, it is why I am graduating n on my university right now. Yes you are impressed, I have 18 years old and I finished my studies, that why I say I am clever.

I search a job, but nobody want to hire me because I am too young. Yes, I am young for the job what I want to do. Actually, I don't know what I want to do. I'm sorry!!
My parents it is not here with me, they are in another country in the world. They left me alone with nothing, I live with a friend but it is long time I stay with her. I don't want to bothering her more!

My friend who is really weird wants to put me with a guy... Don't you think she is weird?

Alalalalalala! And now I go to a “date” with a foreign. She know him because she speak with him (in internet) before planning it. She said that she was put herself in my place to respond what I supposedly respond. Is she an idiot? Yes, I think.

I am in front of the cafe... Why accept this plan? Because she said she fired me from her house if I don't go to the date. She is so naughty!
I enter in the cafe and I see him. He is sitting at a table near the window overlooking the road.
He is exactly like what he was in the picture.

He is handsome like ikemen. When I see a picture of him I was loved his face. He have a small face. He have a little cute black eyes and when I look it I see he is gentle I ignore why. He has a long but in the great size nose, a little mouth with a pink lips. His hair is not like what it was in the picture but he look handsome with this too. His black hair is made of wick back up soon at the top of skull, which gave the impression that he was disheveled. He still left fringe which was split into several parts. He certainly tall because he have a long arms and legs.

He sees me and give a sign to join him. I sit and I feel a bit nervous because for me he is just a foreign. We are in the silent for some minutes.
Eventually, he begins a conversation.

“You are really like in the photo” he smile and put my hand. “Introduce ourselves once again because now we meet each other in flesh and bones” I look at him and I though he is really cute. Why?! Why?!
 “I am Kashiwagi Yuki, 21 the man who talk with you in the internet” he grinned and hold my hand.

“I am Watanabe Mayu, 18 who think you are very cute” I reply this without thinking. When I realized what I said I blushed.
“What am I saying?” I thought.
---------------Inner Me------Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Oi! Mayu-san You said that without thinking. Are you an idiot?
Gentle Mayuyu: Don't says she is an idiot! Angry!
Evil Mayuyu: Why? She is!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri~! Oshiri~! :love:
G & E: Stop say it!
Oshriri Mayuyu: Oshiri... (ok...) :(
Master Mayuyu: Can you stop speak please! Yuki are going to speak.
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 I heard him laughed.
“You are cute too you know.” he smile to me I think now I am like a tomato because I feel I flushed a lot.

After our introduction we order what we want to eat. We talk a lot and I have fun with him, my friend was not wrong he is really gentle and funny. However, I believe a weird thing with him but I continue to enjoy the repast.

We finish our meal and it is the time to separation but at moment he told that he want to take me somewhere he loves. I don't know why but I accept.
He takes me in a park, it have a lot of kid and he become to play with them. I says to me to join them. The kids are cute so I join them.

Some time after, the sky is dark and the children are left. We are alone in the park sitting on the bench. I look at him I think he is handsome in the dark. I started smiling. Suddenly he looks at me and stand up. He walk up in front of me and he places his head in front of mine, he puts his arms around my head and his hand puts on the back of the bench. I freeze.

What he want to do? He want kiss me? But it is the first time we meet!
His head is closer, his lips are to an inch of mine.
-------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Just slap him! NOW!! :twisted:
Gentle Mayuyu: No push him gently!!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :yep:
Gentle Mayuyu: *up a thumb* Arigatou Oshiri-chan :)
Evil Mayuyu: Why! Oshiri-kun! :angry: You little b-
Master Mayuyu: Shut up Evil-chan! I am for push him gently Boss
Mayu: Thank you Master Mayuyu! :)
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 Abruptly I push him away and I run. After some meters I stopped and I say
“I don't want to see you anymore! I am not an easy girl so go away”. I run once again.
What the hell! He is an idiot!!! That is why I do not like men! They think we can kiss a girl like that. No! Aaah! It is remember me a bad memory.
I stop run.
“Where I am?” I say. I look at my wristwatch it is around 10pm.

Three guys come to me. The first guy is tall. He has short hair in a brush blond color. His face had a scar on his cheek in the shape of a star. It has small round eyes black. A forked nose with buttons. It looks like a zombie because of its hollow cheek. He wears a gangster is required: black leather jacket, black leather pants, gloves, chains, ear piercings. The other guy look like this too but they have a different hair color and style. I don't love the men like that. I think they don't use the bathroom. Burk!

“Hey! Girl! Are you the Watanabe Kazuki's daughter?” I realized who they are. They are the gangster who seek my parents because my parents have a debt.
I said before that my parents are in the other country it is because of them! But I hate my parents because they left me with them!

I run away. “Hey! Come here little...!” They are after me.
“Why? Why? I have a parent like that!” I shouts because I know now I have not got a hope.
I run in a dead end. I turn around
“What are you going to do with me?” I say
“I don't know” one of guy says smiling “Use you? Sell you? Kill you? I don't know!”
I stiff and I step back but it have a wall. They smile like a crazy man and they move towards me. I close my eyes. It is the end, why I don't let this guy kiss me if I was know today is my last day I let him kiss me. I am such stupid.

Suddenly, I heard screams of pain and when I open my eyes Kashiwagi Yuki was here. He took my hand and we run away. He take me in a car and the chauffeur starts the car. I takes my breath.
“thank you...” I say to him. He look at me.
“Have you got a problem?” he sees me with a dark eyes.
“Y-yes they purchase me because my family have a debt of them” I answer
“Where are your parents” he asks with a worried face
“I don't know...” I murmur.
“I see...” he turn his body toward a window of the car and begins to think.

He turn to me again, take my hand in his hand and he says
“I have a deal”
“Huh?!” What a deal? In this moment?
“Become my wife and I will pay your debt when your mission is clear.”
“What? A mission”
“Yes, I protect you of them and...”
“Wait! Why wife and not girlfriend”
“Because I need a wife” He answer nonchalantly.

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Mayu: Who is this man? He is so weird! He need a wife! He is just 20! So weird! so weird! So weird! So wei-...
Evil Mayuyu: Slap him! :twisted:
Gentle Mayuyu: No! Don't use the violence :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :yep:
Evil Mayuyu: Why? He is is just a sex maniac! :angry:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :shocked
Gentle Mayuyu: He save us! :(
Evil Mayuyu: Then we will give our body for it!?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri...  :O
Gentle Mayuyu: N-no... *ears down like a puppy*
Master Mayu: What do you want to do Boss?
Mayu: I don't know... Ask him a few questions and then we can know what he want to do. And if he is a ma-
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“You have ten minutes to think about” He interrupt my though
“W-wait it is too weird I don't understand and I don't know y-”
“Then it will be how you pay me back to saved earlier.” Oh! No! Now I can't refuse.
“If I don't want-”
“I leave you with these guys” He answer with no emotion. I cry in myself.
“I don't have a choice I accept your deal”
“Great!”
 “But what is the mission?”
“Stay with me until I became the boss of the company my grandfather”
“What? it will take time because you are young”
“No my grandfather was become a boss of the company in 18 years old”.
“Ahh......” I don't have any reply but why he need a wife to become a boss. It is too weird! I don't know how much I said/though “it is weird” today.

“We are here” the mechanic voice says.
 “Ok! Now we are in my home” He says behind a big building”
“What you will not take me to my home?”
“No! Now my house is your house, tomorrow we going to married. But now I am tired so we going to sleep in our bed” He smile to me and go in the building.
“O-our b-bed?!!!!”I shouts, I'm so shocked I could not move. He returns and came to me. I am still shocked. He smile then he takes me with a bridal style and he takes us to the interior of the building.



What do you think?... It is a little( or more) boring.... Sorry! Arg! I think it is boring but I want know what do you think.
And if you get upset because of my grammar errors and other errors PM me :)
Wow My heartbeat is going more faster... I am scared of your opinion... KOWAI! (I am afraid!)
COMMENT PLEASE!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: mo-chan on November 11, 2012, 04:12:02 PM
wow an other Mayuki I'm in haven!!!!  :halo:
hello Chanaline I know you sometimes you comment on my fic  :)
 so en you re not new I say it again welcoooome!!  :welcome
I like your fic very much it's an excelent ;)
it's rare that we find Yuki asd the guy  :nervous but I love this cool Yuki  :inlove: oups if Mayu find I'm in love with she will kill me  :rofl:
okey and about grammar don't worry we are all not that good in english even me it's not my first languge  :catglare:
about my fics are all inspirated by reading cmze-san fics it give ispiration  :cathappy:
PS: I thought you mistzke that cmze-san is a girl  :nervous  so say she not he  :sweatdrop:
oeky I think I have to go now I have a maths exam tomorrow bye good luck in this fic I'm waiting for the next !!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: clubhappy on November 11, 2012, 04:17:27 PM
ANOTHER MAYUKI FIC!!!!  XD XD XD
Wow, thought Yuki is cool almost in every Mayuki fanfic, "he" is even cooler when "he" is a guy (I mean the danso Yuki, I've never seen Yuki danso before except for one CM that some AKB members do the danso). And he needs a wife  :lol: :lol: :lol:
I think it's a great fic. Waiting for the next chapter.
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: sakura_drop_ on November 11, 2012, 04:26:27 PM
This was hilarious to read!! I'm waiting for their night time *wiggles eyebrows*  :rofl: :rofl:

 :welcome and thank you  :bow:


And yes, I loved Oshiri Mayu too XD
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: Sayuki on November 11, 2012, 04:26:45 PM
It's good~ I love the storyline. And I love the chibi Mayu xD Especially Oshiri Mayu <3 It's so cute~

Even though there are some grammar errors but I still understand the main idea. Maybe you should find yourself a beta reader or a co-author, just to make this story epic!!! It's a good storyline, to tell the truth :)

Thanks a lot, Chanaline-san. I"m looking forward to your next chapter
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: yuukimoko on November 11, 2012, 04:53:56 PM
M-mayukiiiiiiii!!!!

This is interesting! mou~ they are already geting married! yeyyyy!

Kissu~kissu~kissu~
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on November 11, 2012, 05:29:36 PM
Woah! Chanaline-san, your fic is awesome!!

This is the kind of plot I've been looking for!

As you're a reader of my fics, I will also be a reader of yours~

Hope you'll update soon! MaYuki madness is coming back to me :3
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: kurogumi on November 11, 2012, 05:45:04 PM
Eh,actualy its really interesting!

I love this kind of story too,The storyline,the character

Well, i love mayuki pairing,so yeah i like it

Hope the next update,and its not boring anyway,thank
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: Amakuchi on November 17, 2012, 02:44:10 AM
Woot! ANOTHER MAYUKI! ME LIKEY! HAHAHAHAHA! I HAD MY ASS LAUGHING AT THE INNER MAYU! XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'LL FOLLOW YOUR THREAD! m(_ _)m
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- The beginning of everythi
Post by: Chanaline on November 19, 2012, 11:26:56 PM
Thank you everyone!!!! A lot of people like Oshiri mayuyu when the idea of Oshiri-chan come, I wasn't think you like her as you like her XD

@mo-chan: Me too... I was in heaven when you wrote your Mayuki fic. English is not my first language too... Cmze-san is really a fantastic writer because she have a lot of idea and she write in a correct English!
I think Mayu, right now, don't care if you love Yuki... (After maybe...) And THANK YOU!

@clubhappy: THANK YOU! Yes, you are right Yuki is cool almost in every Mayuki fanfic... I love it XD ! Yuki danso... When I saw the Yuki's danso in the CM. I think that she was like a intelligent man... (I can not express it in English...)

@sakura_drop_:THANK YOU! Is it really hilarious? Aaaaah... Oshiri  Mayuyu is so cute, right? Night time...

@Sayuki: Oshiri Mayuyu... Why do you love her? Because she is cute? I want to find a beta reader but it is complicated and I want to have an epic story XD. You like the storyline, me too! THANK YOU for your advice! :thumbsup

@yuukimoko: Mayuki!!!! They getting married, yes! Wahahahaha!

@ChuuuPuffss: I was looking for this plot too but nobody write it. So I started to write it! Wakakaka! Mayuki madness!!

@kurogumi: THANK YOU! I love Mayuki pairing too!

@javs: Oshiri Mayuyu is a strange character... Chibi's reunion is funny? THANK YOU! Because when I wrote the Chibi's part I was think that was boring...

@anzai48: THANK YOU! the word "poignant" remember me something (maybe nothing) XD He needs a wife but maybe it hides something! No just kidding!! Wahahahahah!

@Amakuchi: Really? you had your ass laughing at the inner Mayu???? (XD I don't understand what is it mean XD) I understand that you have a fun time when you read my fic so I'm so happy! THANK YOU!






Chapter 2: The Beginning of everything



We are in the elevator. I am still in his arms. I had to put my arms around his neck to not falling. In the trip nobody speak. I feel a bit nervous because it is the first time that I enter in a man's house.
But why? He don't take me to my house... After all we don't know each other. I'm scare because he may be a pervert and do something weird.
The elevator stop at 48th floor.
When the doors opened, a little room is in front of me with a single door on the other side of the room. He moved to the door and opened it. Now I can see a big lounge with a big TV which is against the wall. On the ground it have carpet with a little glass table.
At the right, I can see the kitchen and a long corridor. My eyes finally see the large window where we can see a beautiful view of the city. I stop the description.

He enter in his house, and he go near the lounge. He dropped me off on the couch and he sit next to me. The silence... No noise. Suddenly he broke the silence “I want to finish what I wanted to do before” he murmur but I hear it. I do anything but inner me...

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu:  :shocked Oh my god! Do you hear him?
Gentle Mayuyu: No!
Evil Mayuyu: Don't lie! I know you hear him because I hear it!
Gentle Mayuyu: Yes but why he says it then he can do it without saying anything?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri... 8) *think about something*
Evil Mayuyu: He is an idiot! It is simple! :)
Gentle Mayuyu: See his face.
Evil Mayuyu: **Look at the Yuki's face**  :huhuh He seems hesitate!
Gentle Mayuyu: I think if he was a sex maniac, he do it unscrupulous.
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :w00t: **The other chibi look at her** Oshiriiii. Oshiri. Shiriri. Oshiriririri!  :inlove:
Gentle & Evil: Oh! What are you saying about in this time!?
Master Mayuyu: Oshiri-chan **sigh** Why are you look at the Yuki's butt in this time? And how can you see his butt?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri. :inlove: Oshiri. :love:
Gentle, Evil & Master: Butt maniac! :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri  :wub: **start to make an oshiri form with her hands and jump with a big smile** :D
Mayu: What was that chibi's reunion? :smhid

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I look at my shoes. I don't want to meet his eyes. Why? I don't know! Maybe is because I think about his butt?!
Suddenly, he take my hand. I realize that we are in the dark. He gets up.  He pulls me to him and he hugs me. What? Just weird!
He snapped his fingers and the light will illuminate. I am impress! New technology or not!
He let me go “I go to the bathroom, during this time you can visit the house/apartment.”
Then he entered in a room. This is the bathroom, I think.

I go in the corridor and it have five door.
I opened the first door, it is the bedroom. A long and large bed is in the room. The room is sumptuously decorated. All is in the white, blue and red color.

I go to the next room, it is a workroom with an office with computer. The dominant color is brown.
Why? I visit without fear?

Next room, an another bedroom but it have a single bed.
The next is a fitness room, it have a lot of a fitness machine. Weight. Dumbbells. Cross Trainers. Treadmills. Rowing Machines. Exercise Bikes. Cross Trainers. Weights. Gym Equipment.
It is a gigantic room! He can't use all of fitness machine!

The next room is the most weird. It is the weapons room!?
Yes! A weapons room! Firearm and cold steel decorate the room.
Katana, Submachine gun, AK47, Colt 1911, M16,  AKM-59, HK MP5K, naginata, kunaï, dagger, ammunition, chains with dagger...
What is it?
I panic, who is this men? A terrorist? I don't move. I am here during more than 5 min.

A hand tapped my shoulder. I jump and I freeze. Someone closed the door. He grabbed my waist and turned me around.
I'm scare! Why? Why was there so many weapons?

He laugh “You discover my collection. I love the weapon! My grandpa buy a lot for me and in the other country! I have almost all of world weapon. You can't see that it is really dangerous.” he says smiling.
So he just collects only. I'm reassured.

All of a sudden, I realize he is only dressed in a bathrobe. I look other way. It's so embarrassing.
He puts his hand under my chin and he move my head. Then he look in my eyes. His eyes is black but I can see he is lonely.
 His face approach to mine. There was only one centimeter when a ringing is heard. It is my ringing.

I push him. Saved by the bell. I reach my purse on the couch and I get out my phone.

“Hello?” I say
“Hello? Mayu?” the voice says
“Yes. What do you want? Miichan” I ask
“Where are you?” she asks angry “it is 11pm, do you know?”
“Yes, I'm sorry, I have a little problem, the guy with I have a date took me at his home” I say calmly
“WHAT!?” she shouts on the phone
“He took me at his home” I repeat
“...” The silence is here for a few second. “why did you accept?”
“I hadn’t got a choice. It is your fault! Make me to meet a guy I don't know anything about him!” I shout.

Yuki grab my phone and terminates the call. “You don't know anything about me although I speak a lot with you?”

I gulped “I'm sorry, but it was not me. It was my friend.” I said, trembling.
He scare me! What is it? A black aura!?

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: **Trembling** What is it? :panic:
Gentle Mayuyu: I-I d-don't know!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **big smile** :lol:
Evil Mayuyu: how can you smile? :shocked It is a dangerous situation!
Oshiri Mayuyu: *put a finger on his chin and rocking his head on the side* Oshiri? :?
Gentle Mayuyu: she don't understand!
Oshiri Mayuyu: **sends flying kiss to Yuki** Oshiri!!  :heart:
Gentle Mayuyu: She is crazy! :smhid
Master Mayuyu: I think- ** The other chibi except Oshiri jump and cried in surprise** Sorry... I think it is because she loves his butt.
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri~!  :deco:
Gentle and Evil: What the hell!? :angry:
Mayu: Why don't you search a solution of this problem?

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He advances towards me. “I want something for forgiving you”
“W-what do you want?” I stutter
“Kiss on the lips” he says smiling
What? It is my first kiss! I don't want to let to him my first kiss!
“Is it your first kiss?” he asks. I look other way “I see”
 
He grabbed my shoulders and he smile. He put his lips against mine. I try to remove but it keeps me strong. When he move his lips. He is not aggressive as I thought. He is gentle. He move his lips slowly. My phone is still ringing but I can't move. Sorry Miichan!

When he broke the kiss I feel the warm go away. He takes my phone and he removed the battery.
He smile “We must go to sleep, tomorrow is an important day.”

He takes my hand. I am red I know it. He take us in the room with the big bed. He search something in the closet. He gave me the garment for sleeping.

“I go out and so you can change your clothes when you're done go in the bed and sleep” he says.

I hear him scream in the pain but I don't care he is just a cruel man! He took my first kiss!
I go to the bed, I put myself under the blanket and I start thinking.

I don't forgive him! I don't want!

Meanwhile

Yuki POV

Oh! no! What am I doing? I steal her a kiss! But she was so cute. I couldn't resist.

I walk on a puddle and I slip. The puddle is here because I am still wear bathrobe and earlier I was not dry. I fell hard on the ground and I scream in the pain. My head hit the ground. I grabbed my head in the hope of alleviating pain. I return in the bedroom and I moved into the other half of the bed at a reasonable distance from Mayu.
I don't want her to hate me more!

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Black Yukirin: Wahahahah! it is good she hates you! wahahaha! :twisted:
White Yukirin: Oh no! What are you doing?? :(
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalalala~!  XD Lalaaaaaaaaa~!
Black Yukirin: Ohoh! it is rare that Singer-kun is with me! *High five* :twothumbs
White Yukirin: You, both of us are just idiot! :yawn:
Black Yukirin: ;) Don't be jealous! eheh!
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalaaaalaa!
Master Yukirin: Go to sleep NOW! >:(

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A/N: Boring... The end is bad. I know. Now it is complicated to continue hahahaha! Yuki pov! A big fail with this chapter Aaaah~! I am a so bad writer! Sorry! I feel that everything is zero. Other authors can put feeling but I can not do it ... I need something!

It looks complicated for their future married life. Thank you! COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!

PS:Yuki's chibi is a boy too!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: cmze on November 20, 2012, 12:15:25 AM
Wow! what should i say first?!?  :shocked

I'm loving it man Yukiii is hot!! :w00t:

wait a minute before that "Yes i'm a girl!"  :cathappy: how can u say my englisb is good.. i'm such an english terrorist! :rofl:

<back to the topic>

This is so cool!  :D

Yuki kun needs a wife.. NICEEEEEE!!  :wub:

Oshirii!! they kill me for so much laughing!!!  :rofl:

Omg i can't wait.. That wedding is going to be amazing!!  :wub:

Mayu please don't hate Yuki kun... he thinks ure cuteee!!  XD

Please update soon!!! THIS IS GREAT!!!  :bow:

Btw: i didn't notice the first chapter sorry!! :( but now i'll pay more attention so i can comment in every chapter!!  :nervous

Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic |Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- TBOE
Post by: Chanaline on November 20, 2012, 06:32:05 AM
@cmze: I know that you are a girl!! Sorry for before! :cathappy: The wedding is going... I don't know XD and THANK YOU for your comment! :thumbsup I am really happy! :D And if you are an English terrorist, what am I?
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: yuukimoko on November 20, 2012, 06:45:58 AM
ohhhhh~ Yuki must really marry Mayu!! kyaaaaa!!!


I love them together....*sigh* so perfect.
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- TBOE
Post by: Chanaline on November 20, 2012, 06:52:51 AM
@yuukimoko: ahah! :) you are right! Yuki must marry Mayu!

I have a question: is it normal that when the reader comment the subject return to the name of chapter 1?  :?
How can I change the name of the topic???
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 1-
Post by: yuukimoko on November 20, 2012, 10:01:15 AM
You can change the name from the first.post you made on this topic.

You press to correct the teaser or what was it and were you wrote the title. From thereit changes everywhere.
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- TBOE
Post by: mo-chan on November 22, 2012, 02:56:15 PM
an other chapter  :cow:
it really make me laugh when mayu is confused and she like Yuki's buttb :rofl:
I thought Yuki is cool and sometimes scary  :lol:
but I think now he is kinda cute and stupid  :lol:
Yuki kissed Mayu!!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
I can't wait for the next  :deco:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- TBOE
Post by: saeyu on November 22, 2012, 04:17:20 PM
YukiMAN!! I don't know what to say except..... :fap :fap :fap :fap :fap :fap

The gym and equipment and stuff is a bit intimidating...I wonder if Yuki is super fit or sth, please describe his body...ahaha. Wonder why he wants to get married so desperately.

Thanks!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter 2- TBOE
Post by: 21stMay on November 22, 2012, 06:00:35 PM
This is so cute :P

All the shocking thing for Mayu hehehe :twothumbs

Please continue Chanaline-san :inlove:

Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chapter3-The little Wedding!!
Post by: Chanaline on November 25, 2012, 03:04:29 AM
I am here with an update. I hope you enjoy it!! :)



Chapter 3: The little Wedding!!

Mayu's POV

_|In the morning|_

I slowly wake up. It was a dream right?!
Then I opened my eyes and I see a that this is not my room. It was not a dream...
Yesterday was real! Oh No!! It means that I am going to marry with that guy. Breathe Mayu!!


Seeking the good side:
1- He will pay my debt
2- He is not a rapist (I think)
3- He is not ugly. He is so handsome.
4- Handsome face!
5- He is rich... Is it really good to think about that??
6- He have a beautiful butt!!!!!! <---- It is the better point!!!
7- I think he have got a super fit with the all fitness machine.
8- He is so cute.
9- His smile is just beautiful!
10- He looks gentle... Even if he have stolen my first kiss

And now the bad side:
1- He is weird... He needs a wife! So WEIRD!
2- He have stolen my first kiss!
3- He is dangerous... A lot of weapons **trembling**
4- He... He... He...

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Gentle Mayuyu: Makes you the obvious things Boss! You like him... like now!!! ;)
Evil Mayuyu: Yes, yes, yes for the first time Gentle is right! And the first kiss it means nothing! You are not a kid anymore! 8)
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri!! Oshiri Oshiri Oshiri Oshiririririiiii!!! :shakeit: :love:
Master Mayuyu: But he have stolen the first kiss.  :smhid
Evil Mayuyu: Have you heard me before???   :angry:
Gentle Mayuyu: Eh! Does not she was likes it???  :roll:
Evil Mayuyu: Why? You are so right today Gentle? :twothumbs
Gentle Mayuyu: It is the obvious things!  :D That's why!!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri Oshiri OSHIRI!!!!!!!!!!! :shakeit: :heart:
Gentle Mayuyu: Yes and his Oshiri is perfect...  :thumbup
Evil Mayuyu: Always talking about butt...  XD
Master Master: Then all of us are agree for let Boss with this guy  :?
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! :)
Gentle Mayuyu: Absolutely :yep:
Evil Mayuyu: Yes and Yes!! :peace:
Gentle Mayuyu: ** Today Evil-chan is amiable, don't you think readers?** And if he ever tries something bad we're going to use our special arms!! :twisted:
Master Mayuyu: Then it is okay... But if our special arms becomes uncontrollable it would be your fault! 8)2
Evil Mayuyu: it is Okay for me!! :thumbsup
Gentle Mayuyu: All for us! to be right! ^-^
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! >:(
---------------------------------------------------------------

I see all of my chibi is okay for the wedding.

I sit on the bed and nobody is on the other side of the bed. Where is he?

Whereas I asked that, the door opened. He is here with a tray which it have a breakfast. He smile at me.
He is so cute!!
He comes to me and he files the tray in front of me.
Then he sits in front of me and this man handed me a toast. I take it and I eat it.

_|Some time after|_

We finished eating the breakfast.
“Go get dressed.” He says “We will go to your house and take your belongings”
I nod to say yes.
Then he left the room and I get something to dress (it is my clothes yesterday).

We arrived in front of my friend's house. Suddenly I remember that I haven't said anything to Miichan. She surely going to be angry! I guess.

I knock on his door and a few minutes after the door opened.

“MAYU! Where were you last night??!!!!!” She yells at me.
“She was in my house.” Yuki says behind me. When Miichan sees Yuki, her anger went away very quickly.
“Ohhh! Come in. I'm sorry, Mayu, I was not knew it.” She smiles.
What is the problem with her???? I told her yesterday!!
“Thank you” it is his turn to smile. (Yuki)

“Mayu, Take your things and put it in the moving truck.” Yuki says
“moving truck? what are you talking about?” I say.
“The one in front of the house.”
“Okay” When this moving truck was arrived here????
“Wait!” Miichan intervened “Mayu you're going to move?”
“Yes” Yuki answered “Now, she is going to live with me”
“Huh!! Mayu are you okay with that?”
Miichan I don't have an other option because he will pay my debt and he going to protect me. Oh! And I have debt with him too! I wanted to say that but I don't want her to think that I am a weird person.
“Yes, Miichan it is okay” I smile
“And we're getting married” Yuki says as if it was nothing.
“WHATT!!” Miichan's eyes bugged out.

She grabbed my hand and she takes us in my room.
“What is it?” she whispers
“Not your business” I say impassive.
“You are just 18, you know?”
“Yes, but it is you the one who chose him, I don't think you chose the bad man for me” I explain
“But you don't know anything about him”
“Miichan, stop I don't want to speak more” or else I going to tell you the truth and I don't want it!

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Just say that you got love at first sight! :pirate:
Mayu: This is wrong! :mad:
Gentle Mayuyu: Be honestly!  :-\
Mayu: I am honest, i am not in love!  :angry:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiriiiii...  :shakeit: :?
Mayu: Yes, I like his butt! BUT as I said before I hate him!
Master Mayuyu: Wahahahah she is not honest! :rofl:
Mayu: Why are you all against me? :'(
Evil Mayuyu: Because we are you, in another personality of us. I am more mean than you, she is more gentle than you and Oshiri-chan is more butt maniac than you! And we know what do you think! :D
Mayu: I know that! >:(
Master Mayuyu: **Alone in a corner** And me I m more what?? :cry:? **mumbles**
Gentle Mayuyu: Did you say something? Master? :?
Master Mayuyu: Eh! No nothing! Well stop talking and get back to the story!
**Everyone nods**
---------------------------------------------------------------


_|After some hours|_

I have finished to put my belongings in the moving truck.
Now Yuki and I are in a car with a driver. I don't know where we go.

The car stop in front of a jewelery. We enter.

“You can choose any ring” He says
“What?” I asked. Have I really heard it?
“You can choose any ring” he repeats
“Really?” Ohohoh! You are going regret it!!
“Yes”

I look at the windows looking for what I want.

“Find!” I exclaim
“So, which one?” he asks
“That one” I say as I showed him the ring.
“Hmmm... It coast 500, 000 Yen... It is expansive.”
Wahahaha! If you want to marry me then you will have to spend a little.
This is a rather flashy ring, but it is quite lovely. It have a heart formed with gems.

“I buy it for you” he smile at me. I nod.

Then we go at the till. Here, the cashier smiles at us.
“Hello, can I help you?” he asks
“Yes, I would like to take this ring” Yuki says as he showed the ring.
“Fine” he go to another room behind the counter.
“I'm back” he says with a little box “Please lend me your hand to see if it is your size”
I lend my hand but Yuki stop my hand.
“Sorry can I do that? I wanna be the one who put the ring on my fiancee” he smirk.
“Of course! It is okay.” the cashier declares

Yuki take my hand and he knelt.
“Will you marry me?” He asks and I am freeze now. I was not expect that he going to do that. I hear "awww" around us. What should I do?
Then I see his puppy eyes and I unconsciously say “Yes”.

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Woah Yukiboy you are the best wahahahahaha! Like sadist! :whip:
Gentle Mayuyu: Where do you see the sadist? :smhid He is just so romantic! :roll: :inlove:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiriririr Oshiriri. :heart:
Master Mayuyu: Oshiri-chan, please, stop speak about Yuki's butt :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri **start to hit Master* :bangchair:
Master Mayuyu: I-I-I- Ouch! I-I am Sorry Oshiri-chan!! **begins to leak**
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri!!! **pursues him** :angry:
Master Mayuyu: I am sorrryyyyyy, and why you just hit me while the other two will often say that?
Oshiri Mayuyu: **stop pursues him and return with G&E** Oshiri~! Oshiri~! :love:
Master Mayuyu: Why I feel alone? I haven’t got a friend here. **Start crying** :cry:
**a hand arises on his shoulder**** he looks at the other chibi** :thumbsup Thank you.
---------------------------------------------------------------

He puts the ring on my finger.
When I hear the people around applaud us I blush a lot. A big smile appear on the Yuki's face.
“I buy it” He says while I always frozen. Yuki choose his ring and then the cashier speaks.

“Our boutique offers you a photo couple for only 500 Yen” It is not really offers ahah!
“I want to do that” he exclaims
“Then come with me.” he leads us to a room where there are the photographer equipment.
He puts us in front of the lens.

“Boy,  take your fiancée in your arms from behind and put your head on his shoulder.”
Yuki do that, I feel my heart going faster.
“Smile” the man says.
He take a lots of pictures and each time Yuki changes his pose.

Suddenly the cashier says that we should kiss for the last shot.
Yuki once again took me by the shoulders. I take a step back. He notes it and keeps me harder and kissed me full on the lips. At first I want to break the kiss but as time passes I want more. Without realizing I put my arms around his neck. A flash appear and we break the kiss. It was the camera.

We return in front of the desk and the cashier says at us to wait a few minutes for the pictures.
He buy another ring for the wedding.

We go out and we are going at City Hall. Here, we meet the mayor and he started his crap for marriage. I skip the passages.
“Kashiwagi Yuki do you want to have Watanabe Mayu to be your wife?”
“Yes”
“And you Watanabe Mayu do you want to have Kashiwagi Yuki to be your husband?”
“...” Yuki gives me a shot.
“Y-yes” I stutter.
“According to the law you are married, just sign here, please.”
We sign.

“We go to see my friend, okay?” he asks
“Okay” I answer

_|After a few minutes walking|_

We arrived in front of a law office. It is write “A law office of Matsui”
We enter and we directly going to a room.

Knock-Knock

“Enter!” I hear a masculine voice.
“Ren! how are you?” Yuki asks.
“Fine, and you?”
“Fine” Yuki answer.
“While I owe your visit?”
“I am married” Yuki smirk. Why he smirk?
“OOOHHH! Congratulation!!!” The man, Ren, congratulates us. “And you're the lucky one?” He asks to me.
“Y-yes” I stutter.

They speak more and suddenly someone knocked the door.

“Enter, please!” Ren says
“Ren” A girl voice says “I am here”
“Jurina” Ren says with a big smile “Why did you come?”
“I just want” she respond. Ren approached Jurina. And he strokes her cheek.

Someone grabbed my hand.
“We must go out” Yuki says as he takes us out.

_|On the street|_

“What is their relationship?” I asks
“They are together, but Jurina is just 15”
“WHAT???? So he is-”
“Yes” he sighs “Don't say anything, please. They are really in love.”
“I don't want. Anyway I saw nothing. But she is not look 15, she looks more 17”
“Yes” He smile a little bit. The silence came after that.

_|A few Minutes after|_

“It was just that?” I ask
“What?”
“The wedding”
“No, it is just for being married with the law, but in a few month we going to have a real wedding with families and friends” he explained “Are you disappointed?”
“No, not really”
“Really?”
“Yes”
“Now, I am disappointed. Then from now we have to do couple things!” Why he disappointed? The couple things??
“What do you mean?” I ask
“The couple things!”
Okay, I don't want to know more! What are he talking about? I hope it is not a pervert things!!
“Like go to the cinema, to an amusement park, to a date, playing something together, to know each other and the other thing” he says smiling.
Whew! It was not a pervert thing!

Meanwhile

A man watched the newlyweds away.
“She is here, with her husband.”
“....” on the cell phone (we can't hear it)
“Yes, she enjoy his presence. I saw their kissed before.”
“....”
“Yes, I am sorry.”
“...”
“Ohhh! The mission begins! Wahahahaha!”




@anzai48-san: Thank you for your comment! And maybe it becomes My-Husband-Is-A-Gangster type of story XD... But why ganster, why not soldier or yankee or intelligencer?? XD

@javs-san: Not Yuki inner for this time sorry! Thank you! :(

@mo-san (mo-chan douchi?): Stupid, when are you think that? At the end? :P Yuki  is cool and sometimes scary, right?  :D Wakakakakaka!!

@saeyu-san: I going to describe his body later. Perhaps when they going to beach or pool or onsen or another place hahaha! :lol: You discover why he wants to get married so desperately later too. But now the principal reason is said in Chapter 1 :peace:

@21stMay-san: Thank you for your comment! Poor Mayu, right?! XD :love: :?

Author: I know the end is weird XD! BUT COMMENT PLEASE!!! Oh! And sorry for my weird grammar and the other mistake!!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chap.3- The little Wedding!!
Post by: clubhappy on November 25, 2012, 08:55:11 AM
Thanks for the update Chanaline-san.
Mayu must be falling for Yuki now.   :wub:
So the man took the photos for Mayuki has some secret plan to hurt them????  :?
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chap.3- The little Wedding!!
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on November 25, 2012, 11:34:04 AM
yay mayu is in love yuki now :love:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chap.3- The little Wedding!!
Post by: cisda83 on November 25, 2012, 03:01:08 PM
Yeah Mayu.... falling for Yuki  :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:

Great update Thank you  :twothumbs :theking
Title: Re:Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chap.3- The little Wedding!!
Post by: mo-chan on November 25, 2012, 04:34:31 PM
Mayuki kissed again  :deco:
wow they are married now  :cathappy:
yeah the end is kinda weird  :?
what do they mean " The mission begins "  :roll:
great update thank you Chanaline-san  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki -Chap.3- The little Wedding!!
Post by: cmze on November 25, 2012, 08:21:16 PM
Omg man Yuki is so sweet!!  :wub: :wub:

MaYuki kissed!! again  :inlove: :inlove:

ehhh Ren and Jurina.. okay let's forget about that!  :nervous

MaYuki married  :inlove:

Thanks for the update!!  :grin:

Please update soon!!  :bow:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4-
Post by: Chanaline on December 11, 2012, 11:37:24 PM
Yes, WMastui are in my fic!!!! Because I love them too!!!

 I'm sorry for forgotten a words, a letters and all. For all mistake!



He grabbed my hand “Okay, now we go to restaurant!” he says.

I say nothing but I follow him. It is winter, the atmosphere was cold and the sky is all gray.
The sun was lost on the horizon, giving way to the night. He troll me in the dark streets lit by street lamps which gave us the illusion of the day at night.

I shiver because of the cold, when he notice it, he puts his right arm around my waist to make me closest to him and take my right hand in his large and warm hand. I haven't got gloves
He places my left hand in his right jacket pocket and smiles at me. With his actions I blush and I looked other way so that he does not notice.

   Why is he cute?

We arrive in front of a big restaurant which its name “Perfect world”.

   Wait. “Perfect world”! Isn't it a famous eatery where the celebrity go?!

We enter and Yuki speak with the concierge. He seems know about Yuki because he says something like “always the same place, Kashiwagi-san?”

My husband nodded and then the concierge leads us to the table which he spoke before.
We go upstairs.
The room is wonderfully decorated, the tables have a white table cloth and it decorate with expansive things. Trees are placed here and there.
The piece was illuminated by a little light, leaving the candles of tables to light up the client and get comfortable in a romantic atmosphere.

   It was to be expected! It's not a famous restaurant for nothing!

We sit down and we begin to read menu.
Then we ordered what we wanted.

“Kashiwagi Mayu, it is sounds good, no?” he asks.
“Ummm...” I don't know what answer.
“Ahah! Don't mind! It is okay, if you don't like it!” He laughs. “Tell me about yourself.”
“Eto... I am 18, I was live in my friend house because my parents let me with a gangst-”
“It is not what I mean, I want to know what do you love and hate. Things like this.” He interrupts me.
“Okay... Um... Since I was a kid, I love anime because it is really interesting how the seiyu can make you feel the characters' emotion and it is just a beautiful world, no?”
“Yes” He smirks

Encouraged by this simple words I continue my praise on anime. After a few minutes, I talk about my life and other things that affects my life. Like why I hate big dog, vegetable, and so on...

I don't know why I feel comfortable like this but it been a long time that I spoken much like this. While I speak, he just looks at me, eating and smiling at me.

Before I realize we are in the dessert time. I keep talking. The dinner is end and we leave.

“Ahahah! Now, I know a lot of things about you!” he says “your dream with a monster vegetable was so funny” He begins to imitate the monster “I am broccoli! Wuaaargggg(noise of broccoli monster) Eat me if you want to live!” I flush a lot because it is embarrassing and because he approaches me.
Suddenly he hugs me tight.

   One more time! What is this warm feeling?

“You can live now” he smirks “go to home!”
I nodded. He spent a call and a few minutes later a car arrived.


We arrive to the apartment. When we enter a deep voice can be heard in the apartment in the darkness.
Due that we are on the considerable height, the lights from the windows behind the dark figure seemed to darken the silhouette.

“Where were you? Kashiwagi-san?”the voice says. “You know I wait you since one hour”
“And then?” Yuki says.
“And then? How could you say that?” The man rises his hand which it have something like a gun.
“Hoho! You are serious” Yuki says mocker. I tremble and cling to Yuki.

   Why is he calm? This man have something like a gun pointed at us!

Yuki switch a light and then I can see a man with a gun.
A slender and tall man dressed in a gray tuxedo. He has short blond hair and wears glasses. He sits on an armchair like a boss.

“Mario” Yuki sighs “Why are you here?”
“For my package”
“Oh! That! It is in the weapons room!”
“Ah okay!”

They speak as nothing happened.
Both of them go to the weapons room. I follow them.

“It is your package” Yuki says as he gets a cardboard box. The man who names Mario opened it.
“It's finally here” Mario says as he pointed at me the new weapon. I was never see a weapon like this.
“Don't point it at my wife.” Yuki says with a black aura and turns the gun.
“What? It is your wife” Mario puts down the weapon and approached me. “She is cute, are you do “it”?”
“Eh! No!” Yuki says.
“Then do “it” now, in front of me” the slender man says.
“EH?!” Yuki and I say
“You are marry, right? Then, do “it”!” Mario urged.
“What do you mean with do “it”?” Yuki asks
“What I mean? Um... Two people who are in love, become a single person and express their love in the passion of the act. Now do it!” He explains.
Yuki looked at me. “We can't do “it” in front of someone”
“Of course you can!” After a few minute. Mario started to laugh. “Ah! I understand... You two are really pervert! Ahah! I wasn't mean “it” but “it”! Ahah! And you understand “it” and not “it”! Ahah! Too funny!!”
“What are “it” mean, then?” Yuki says with a glare.
“ahah! I can't stop laugh! It mean kiss... a kiss... just a kiss!” He says “wait!” the taller man says and we startled “I must tell it at everyone” he pulls his mobile phone and he started to write.

Yuki and I just looked at him. When he have finished he says “Do it”.

Yuki grabbed me and I close my eyes but instead of kissing me, Yuki hugged me.

“No. I don't want in front of you... I know that you're a troll and that you certainly in the future troll us.”
“Just an excuse”
“Can you leave? I would like to spending time with my wife.” he says which he still hugs me. And he glare to Mario.
“Okay. I leave! Don't be aggressive”

Then Mario take his package and go away. When the door closed, Yuki pushed me against the door and he kisses me roughly.

   Why did he kiss me now and not before?

----Yuki's POV----

I know I often kiss you but it is the fault of your lips. It taste delicious. It might be your lip gloss. You did not resist my kiss. You like it, right? Wow I speak like a pimp...
It is not just because I need a wife that I marry but more than this.

I continue to kiss you because I love it.

--------------Inner Me------- Chibi's reunion -----------

Both of Chibi: Chuuu! Chuuu! Chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

-------------------------------------------------------------

----Normal POV----

Mario is in the elevator. His phone ring and he responds.

“Hai~!Moshi Moshi!”
“Hey! Mario, what was this text with a lot of words “it”?”
“It mean “it” and “it”! Ren are you an idiot?”
“If I am an idiot, then Yuki too”
“Yes, both of you are idiot! Ah! And you, are you do “it” with the little Jurina?”
“What do you mean when you say “it”?” Ren says with a menacing tone.
“Ohoh! Don't be menacing like that, I mean kiss”
“Err...Okay and yes...”
“Ooooh! Then you slide your tongue in h-”
“No and no! She kisses me! But not in that way we jus-”
“You say it, just because you don't want to be a pedophile!”
“W-What!? Of course, she is underage!”
“You must make your move, in kiss of course, if you want to keep her”

Mario hung up the phone and he received 2 new calls.

-----------Meanwhile---------------

“What is his problem?” Ren wonders.

Someone knocked the door.

“Enter!” Ren says.

“Ren-san~!” a girl voice says “It is me, Jurina!” As Ren sees the girls, he smiles.
“What are you doing, here? It is 7pm” Ren asks “You should go out with your friends”
“But I wanted to spend my time with you” She pouted.
“You already spend a lot of time with me, haven't you a homework?”
“Yes but you can help me” she says smiling as she released her business school.
Ren sighs “Okay”

They begin to do Jurina's homework.
As the time passes, Ren lost himself in his thoughts.
   Why they all think that I love Jurina? Okay, I like her and maybe more but I don't think it is love. When I say that we kisses, it was just on the cheek. And I don't think she loves me, for her I'm just an “old” man who helps and who speaks her, like a brother. So why do they assimilates has love? She is underage! For God's sake! But it is true that sometimes, I happened to feel something other than this brotherhood. Arg!! Why I feel it?? No! I become a pedophile!!

________/Ren's Chibi/___________

Gekikara: Nothing to say...
Amakuchi: But you love her!
Melopan: Melonpan!!
Gekikara: Yes I am hungry too!
_____________________________

“R... Re.... Ren... Ren-san!... REN-SAN!” Jurina shoots. Ren returns to his senses.
“Ah! Sorry, Jurina I was in my thoughts.”
“Mou! Ren-san, it is important I have a test”
“Hai! Hai!”
They re-started to be concentrate on the lesson.

------Meanwhile------

Mayu could not manage more. She moans because she needs to breathe.

--------------Inner Mayu------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Gentle Mayuyu: Woahahahah! A passionate kiss!!!  :inlove:
Evil Mayuyu: Aaaah! Slap him! We are going to suffocate!!
Gentle Mayuyu: Nooooo! The kiss is more important!!! :drool:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiriri Oshiri Oshiri!!!! :shakeit:
Gentle Mayuyu: Yes! Grab his butt now!!! It is your chance! ;)
Evil Mayuyu: Stop! :smhid I suffocate!!! Strangle him!!!
Gentle Mayuyu: Undress him!! :P
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri!!
Mayu: What?! NO! I'm not a pervert :thumbdown:
Evil Mayuyu: Batter him!!! :twisted:
Mayu: Stop it, Evil!!! I can't do anything!!!
---------------------------------------------------------------

_____/Yuki's Chibi/_________________
Black Yukirin: I can see her bad side become scared!! :twisted:
White Yukirin: Woah! Her good side is a pervert!! :lol:
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalala~! Lalalala~!
Black Yukirin: Boss, you are a sadist man! :D Then, kiss her with more passion!!
White Yukirin: I don't see the S thing in it! :huhuh
Black Yukirin: Don't search!! :angry:
White Yukirin: Okay! Don't be angry like that!
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalala! Lalalala! :roll:
Master Yukirin: You should break the kiss...
__________________________________________

Yuki break the kiss and smile.
“You are really cute when you moan” Yuki says as Mayu flushed.

Yuki looked at Mayu into the eyes. Mayu feels her heartbeat became faster as time goes. Yuki's hand went to the Mayu's cheek. He stroked her.

“I have a surprise for you! You gonna discovered it tomorrow.” He whispers in Mayu's ear. Mayu shivered.

After they change their clothes and Mayu went to sleep.
Before going to sleep Yuki went into the armory and he went to sleep.
Mayu can't sleep, she thinks how Yuki steals a lot of kiss of hers.

But then she feel asleep and she fall onto the dreaming world.
During the night, Mayu hugs Yuki like a pillow along the body. Yuki returns her hug even if he is in his dream.

-----One more time meanwhile---

Man:“They just go to a restaurant”
Phone:“I see, keep the observation on them”
Man: “Yes, sir!”
Phone: “We will surely act in a week, is it fine?”
Man: “It is fine”


@clubhappy: Thank you to read my fanfic! Oh! You discovered something !?

@mayuki_daisuki: Ummm... Yes she falls...

@javs: Thank you ro like my fanfic even if it is boring.

@cisda83: Thank you too!

@mo-chan: The end will be developed in the future. Thank you for your comment.

@cmze: Don't forget about Ren and Jurina!! Mayuki..  Yes they are married!! Thank you :)

Why I can't write more?? I know the end is boring... I am really tired right now... go to sleep  :yawn:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4- UPDATE 11/12/12
Post by: clubhappy on December 12, 2012, 04:15:29 AM
Mayuki scene is so... :wub:  :wub:!!! Love it!! Mayu's definitely fallen for Yuki!  XD
Great update!!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4- UPDATE 11/12/12
Post by: Amakuchi on December 12, 2012, 02:40:30 PM
OSHIRI! OSHIRI! OSHIRI! XD
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: Chanaline on December 12, 2012, 08:54:00 PM
For everyone!
I post this chapter just because we are 12/12/12. I wanted to update this in 12:12:12 PM but I could not.
Yes, I know is weird.
I tell you this for apologize bit of the narration. (Even if I think it is better like this, because I am bad in English...).
I did it in 3 hours with lots of breaks, that's why!




Chapter 5: The little boy

Yuki wake up and he sees Mayu hugs him as she sleeps. He smiles because their faces are close.
He slide his hand on Mayu's cheek.

"Ummm... Nooo! Don't touche me! Broccoli monsteeer..."

Yuki giggles.

"I am a broccoli monster?" he thought.

After a few minutes Mayu wakes up.  She blushes when she sees that Yuki looked at her.

"Good sleeping?" he smiles

Mayu nodded.
After that both of them go to changes their cloths.

"Okay, we go to Tokyo Disney Land."

Mayu looked at him with stars in her eyes and a big smile.

"Why are you smile like this?"

"I never went to Disneyland"

"Really? It is cool that you go for the first time with me! Why are you never went to Disneyland?"

"It is not for nothing that my parents have a debt."

They go out and take a car to go to Disneyland.

When they are arrived. Mayu runs.

"Disney land!" Mayu shoots as she raises her arms.

Yuki smiles "she is funny" he thinks.

They enter in an amusement park. Mayu looked like a child. She look excited even if she wanted to hide it.

They do everything that Mayu want.

"Can we have a candy-floss?" she asks

"Of course" Yuki says.

After buy a candy-floss they eat it and they walk in the path searching a shop.

Mayu buy a lot of Disney land’s things.

When they are in the way to return to their home Mayu sees a little boy crying and alone.

Mayu runs toward him.

“Hey... Little boy, why are you crying?” Mayu asks.

The kid stop crying and look at Mayu.

“...” The kid re-started to crying with more noises.

Mayu panicked.

--------------Inner Mayu ----- Chibi's reunion -----------

Evil Mayuyu: Shake him to stop his tears! :banghead:
Gentle Mayuyu: Why? Whenever a child sees boss he cries? :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri!! :(
Evil Mayuyu: Stop him! I don't support this!!! :panic:
Gentle Mayuyu: Oye! He is just a kid! :thumbdown:
Evil Mayuyu: Do you have a better idea?
Master Mayuyu: **sighs**

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Mayu is froze, she don't know how to calm a kid.

As Gentle said, whenever a kid sees Mayu, this child cries.

Mayu did not understand why.

Yuki joined them. He notice that Mayu is panicked. He approached the little boy and he kneels.

“Hey... Boy, What's happened?” Yuki asks as he patted the boy's head.

The little boy stop his tears.

“I lost my balloon... and my mother...” the kid answer.

“Eeeeh! Really?! I can help you and my friend too” Yuki says as he pointed Mayu.

When the kid look at Mayu, his tears came back. So Yuki understood the problem.

He grabbed Mayu's arm and pulled her to kneel too.
Then he puts his arms around Mayu's shoulder.

“She is my friend, don't cry please.” Yuki prayed.

The boy looks Mayu for a while and nothing happens. Then Yuki grabs the little boy's hand and Mayu's hand. He joined them with his hand above.

The boy looks at his hand.
Then he looks at Mayu.
Finally he smiled at Mayu.

“hola! She is gentle, not a monster! Hehe!” Yuki says.

“Un! I lost my Mickey balloon... and my mother.”

“Wait his balloon is more important than his mother, because he speak about his balloon first!” Mayu thinks.

“Okay! I help you to find your mother!! And for the balloon I buy it when we find your mother, okay?” Yuki says.

“Hai!”

Yuki put the boy on his shoulders.

“When you sees your mother tell me”

“Hai! Ano... Onii-chan What is your name?” The boy asks as Yuki started to walk.

“Yuki and my friend is Mayu, why?”

“Yaa! Just want to know!”

Mayu walks with them and could not help but think they look like a father and his son.

They were looking for one hour but no trace.

Then, Mayu decide to write a placard.

“What is your name?” Mayu asks at the little boy.

“Ryo desu!”

“Kawaii~!” Mayu says. Ryo blushes when he heard that.

“Ne... Yuki-nii, I can get down?” Ryo asks

“Of course” Yuki laying Ryo on the floor. Ryo runs toward Mayu and he helps her to write the placard. While they do it, Ryo and Mayu play with the felts.

“Yaaa! Mayu-nee, now I have a lot of colors on my hands and arms.”

“It is your fault Ryo, you started”

“Yes, but I am the kid and you, you are an old woman!” he started to run.

“What? You little!!” She runs after him.

“It is as though she is his mother” Yuki thinks with a smile.

They began again to look for the mother.
But this time, Ryo is with Mayu holding hand. They speak a lot about animé! They laughed and played together.

Suddenly, a woman runs toward us.

“Ryo! Where was you?” the woman says worried.

“He was with us, we were looking for you.” Mayu says.

“Really?! I am really sorry for bothering you!” the woman says.

“Ahh no, it is okay.” Yuki responds.

“Yuki-nii, will you buy my balloon?” Ryo asks

“Of course, I promised, no?”

“You do not need to do that, I'll buy it myself.” the woman says.

“No no no! I promised, so I do it!”

“Yay! I can spend more time with Mayu-nee!” Ryo says happy.

They go to shop to buy a balloon. Yuki and the mother are to the cashier to pay.

Ryo and Mayu are outside the waiting line and are playing.

The mother who is single try to seduce Yuki. Yuki hopes that Mayu gets jealous but nothing. She sometimes looked at them but with a cyborg face.
“She don't care” Yuki thinks.

------------Inner Yuki------- Chibi's reunion -----------

Black: Of course, she don't care! She don't love you after all! :yawn:
White: Don't say it! He will be depressed. :angry:
Singer: lalalalalala! :banghead:
Black: Yes! It is the truth!  That's life, it is filled with challenges! :D
White: Yeah, that's it... :catglare:

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Ryo hugs Mayu who is kneels in front of the little boy. Mayu returns the hug which causes a reddening of the child.

“M-Mayu-nee”
“Ummm...”
“What is your relationship with Yuki-nii?” Ryo asks blushing.
“Umm... What can I say it? We are married...”
“Oooooh...”
“Why?” With that question Ryo get all red.
“Eh! Ryo, you are all red, are you alright?” she says as she puts her forehead on the boy's.
“Y-Y-Yes M-M-Mayu-nee..” he look away.
“Really?”
“Y-Yes...”
“it's cold right now, you must cover yourself better, okay” Mayu says gently.
“Hai...”

Yuki looked at them away and he is jealous of the attention Mayu has for the little boy.
“Oh no... Now I am jealous of a kid” he thinks.

This is the hour of separation. Ryo seems to be so sad that Mayu patted his shoulder.

“Here, if you want you can call me.” Mayu says as she gives a paper to Ryo. Ryo looks at paper and then he smiles.

“Okay!”

Everyone goes home.



Yes, I know... In fact, nothing...

@javs: there will be probably more :D Thank you for your comment :deco:

@Amakuchi: OSHIRI?! XD

@clubhappy: I don't know why but I love you... Maybe it is because you comment... Sorry my question  but are you draw your avatar? :?

Sorry for not WMatsui...

Thank you all!! Even, You! everyone who gives a Thank you... But more who comment (just joking...)

Don't mind! I am weird, it is all... :smhid
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4- UPDATE 11/12/12
Post by: mo-chan on December 12, 2012, 09:33:41 PM
Mayu didn't get jealous of a women and Yuki got jealous for a kid  :lol:
what a twisted couple  :rofl:
when will they confess their they are so danse  XD
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4- UPDATE 11/12/12
Post by: Chanaline on December 12, 2012, 10:23:30 PM
@mo-chan: Thank you for your comment!
Mayu didn't get jealous of a women and Yuki got jealous for a kid  :lol:
what a twisted couple  :rofl:
when will they confess their they are so danse  XD

I wasn't notice that i make it... ( Mayu not jealous but Yuki is...) I'm an idiot... Maybe should I don't say it? Too late... :sweatdrop:

I just want to know: I write in this way (with a bit of narration) or the other way???which do you prefer?
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch4- UPDATE 11/12/12
Post by: mo-chan on December 12, 2012, 10:47:53 PM
I think I prefer the other way  :grin:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: Amakuchi on December 13, 2012, 05:46:10 AM
I'm thinking about their son/daughter's brain if in case they make out...
Will it be...
'OshiriLalalalalala' or something like that? XD
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: qweakb on December 13, 2012, 06:38:30 PM
nice update :)
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: DC2805 on December 14, 2012, 02:51:16 PM
 :D The inner chibi voices are so funny!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: clubhappy on December 20, 2012, 07:48:52 PM
@Chanaline: Yeah I drew my avatar, kinda ugly since it's the first time I've ever use a tablet to draw.
I'm waiting for the next chapter now  :)
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: cmze on December 21, 2012, 04:03:32 PM
I catched up!! :thumbsup

MaYuki kisseeddd :heart:

a brocoly monster :rofl: so funny :lol:

Yuki jealous of a little kid :shakeit: :rofl:

Mayu should get jealous right?  :D

SHE'S KASHIWAGI MAYU!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:



Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch5- UPDATE 12/12/12 YEAH!
Post by: gek geki on December 30, 2012, 05:55:31 AM
KASHIWAGI MAYU I LOVE IT!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: Chanaline on January 04, 2013, 02:25:57 PM
YAY :cow:

I'm here with an update!!!!! This update take me a lots of time... As I'm not English, I must translate all I want to write... Complicated! :nervous
HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!



Chapter6:

Yuki and Mayu arrived at home around 6:00 p.m..
The sun was already on the other side of the Earth because it was winter.
They were exhausted by walking to find the mother.
They took off their shoes and their coat.
As a gentleman Yuki helped Mayu to took off her coat and he put it on the coat rack located on the side.
Mayu saw him with a gentle look and think that he is a perfect man in woman's eyes.
She rejoiced to have found this young man even though she had not really try to get it.

“Aaah... I am tired” Mayu says as she jump on the couch. “It was totally funny!” She murmured cheerfully. “Well I never think that I will spend with someone other than Miichan. And my parents...” She says unconsciously.

Yuki sat down near Mayu and sees her. The word “kawaii” emerged from his mouth without he realizes.

It was the right term to describe Mayu at this time.
She was sitting on the couch with her knees up to her chest.
She was playing with her fingers and was laughing alone.
Yuki wondered why she had fun but he don't want to break her moment so he stayed just staring at her.
She looked like a small and cute puppy.
Suddenly, Mayu stopped her actions and she saw that the man was staring at her with a gentle smile. She had heard what he said before but she didn't say anything because she was embarrassed.
 
“Now. Are going to prepare the dinner!” he declared. The girl look at him with a questioning look. “We can not just sit there and not eat, right? I think we have to start cooking before you starve. To warn you I'm not good at cooking.”  He revealed.

“Me too” She confessed. “But I can do simple thing.”

In the kitchen, the couple slipped on an apron. The ingredients was in the table. It had eggs, flour, meat, rice and another things.

“What can we do with that?” Yuki asked as he looked at her wife.

“I think we can cook the meat and rice” she says.

“Well, you know how can we cook the meat??” He asked.

“Um... Yes” She says as she took the meat “I cut it while you rinse the rice, we can just eat it” she smiled.

 “You're a prodigy, no? You can do it” He said. “

I do not see what you're talking about...” She answers red, the meat were cut into thin slices.

Yuki rinsed the rice but he reversed it a little into the sink.
When he finished it, he went to the cooker but before he accidentally dropped a tray of eggs. All of eggs broke when they touched the ground.

“Aaaaaah!!” Yuki shouted. His jaw dropped and he make a weird face. Mayu saw this.

Mayu POV

     Mayu, don't laugh! Don't laugh! His face... his face... ahahah! Stop!

I looked at him.
He put down the rice bowl and went to the sink for taking a towel to clean the ground.
Suddenly he slipped on the egg and fell on the groud, he tried to catch up to the table but he grabbed a bag of flour which it fell on his head.
His head become all white. It was very funny. I could not hold my laughter.

“Ahahahahahah! What are you doing? Ahahaha!” I laughed.

 His head turned to me, I could not see his look but I know that he was angry.
Suddenly, a smile appeared on his face.
He stood up and walked towards me.
He looked at me for a while and he put flour mixed with egg on my face.
I was shocked and I froze.

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Normal POV

After the school time Jurina was about to return to her house but a handsome guy appeared before her.

“Jurina, I came looking for you” the man said smiling.

“Ah, Ren rea-” Jurina was interrupted by her friends.

“Jurina, is he your brother?” a cute girl said.

“I thought that he is her driver.” a boy said near the cute girl.

“He is not my driver” Jurina contradicted.

“So he is your brother because you are familiar with him” a boy said while he put his arms around Jurina's neck. “Nice to meet you, I am Takayanagi Akikane” the boy with the arms around Jurina's neck said.

“And me it is-” the cute girl tried to said.

“You don't need to present you, he knows everyone since I told him about you showed some pictures.” Jurina said.

“Then why don't we know about him?” Akikane said.

 “Because I didn't want you to know, it's simple. Now, can we go Ren?” Jurina asked.

“Of course. Oh! And I'm Matsui Ren” Ren simply said.

“Let's go!” Jurina said, already inside the car.

On the road Ren finally talk. “I'm not your your brother” he laughed.

 “I know and I'm sorry!” She apologized.

 “You don't need to apologize. Hehe! It is nothing”

“Since I think you're like a big brother to me I do not think it bother you!......... Eh! You've already forgiven me?!” Jurina was surprised at how quickly that she is done forgiven.

“Just a brother, huh?” Ren murmured to himself.

“What? You said something?” Jurina asked.

“Eh no! Nothing!”

“Mou! You and your secrets!” Both of them started laugh.

They are finally in front of Jurina's house. Suddenly the expression on Jurina's face changed.

“Something wrong?” Ren asked.
 
“No, It is okay.” She answered with a smile.

“You lie” That was what Ren wanted to say but Jurina was already knocking the door of her house. Then the man sighed and went away.

Ren was the lawyer of Jurina's family, this is how he met Jurina. He had to take care of her while her parents were going who knows where.
 And yes, he has become over time a sort of babysitter for her. But as he was well paid, he accepted.
This was the case at the beginning of his career, now he spent little time with her.
She would visit him when she had nothing to do. This is what is summed up their relationship.
His friends (as Yuki) for some unknown reason put them together.
 But they did not know this story because Ren, embarrassed by the story of babysitting, had preferred to keep it to himself.

Ren went to do some shopping for his food reserve.

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Mayu POV

“Yuki, you'll regret it!” I said. I put my hand on his face and I grabbed the flour. Then I pulled his shirt to create an opening and releases the flour to the inside of his shirt.
Yuki, during this time, was only watching. When he felt a cold sensation run down his stomach, his mouth opened in surprise.

“Wow! Is it cold?” I said mocking.

After one or two seconds he smiled and hurled a ball of flour on the my shirt.
I got mad because it was my new shirt.
And thus the battle of flour mixed with eggs began.

In no time, we were covered with sticky flour. A smell, which was familiar to me, come to my nostrils.
It was the meat that was grilled. Then we stopped the fight.

“How do we clean up this mess?” I asked while I removed the meat.

“It's okay, the maids will do it.” Yuki answered.

 “So you're using them...” I said with an accusatory tone. He turned to me and I think he saw my cold expression that said that I don't like this because he showed an afraid face.

“Euh... They are paid to do.” he tried.

“But you are paid them just to tidy up the house not to clean up this mess...” I maintained.

--------------Inner Mayu ----- Chibi's reunion -----------

Evil: Go! Go! Go! Mayu-boss!! :thumbsup
Oshiri: Oshiri! Oshiri! Oshiri! Oshiri! :thumbsup
Gentle: Go! Go! Go! Mayu-boss!! :thumbsup
Master: :D Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
E&G: Huh??? :?
Oshiri: Oshiri? :shocked

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He gulped and then he said the sentence that I want, that showed me that I had a bit of power. “I going to pay them more, I promise”

I smiled and then he go out of the kitchen. I thought I heard a word like "scary". I put the rice to cook.

Normal POV

Yuki was going to the armory. “I should add frightening and kind in the list.” He wrote it in a paper.

“Yuki the dinner is ready!” Mayu shouted. Yuki came back to the table and saw the meat half burnt and a black rice. “I don't know why the rice became black” Mayu said and looked in another way.

“Did you tasted it?” Yuki asked.

“Of course not! I'm the woman here! And as men claim to be the stronger sex I do not see why I should.”

------------Inner Yuki------- Chibi's reunion -----------

Black: Woman and her pride... :smhid
White: She is so cute!!! :inlove:
Singer: Lalalalala! Lalala! Lalalala! :wub:
Black: But she is right when she said that the men claim to be the stronger sex! We're the stronger! :twisted:
White: Only force is stronger in men! 8)
Black: What? **angry**
White: Who cleans the house? Who cares for children? Who carries the child in her womb? Who lives the longest? Who work the most?
Black: I disagree with the last argument. 8)
White: Ooooh! The woman work most because she have a lot of thing to do. From the statistics women have less time to rest. :theking
Black: But-
Singer: Lalalalala! Lalalalala!
White: We had read it somewhere, right Singer?
Singer: Lalalalala! Lalala! Lalala! Yeah! :peace:
Black & White: **surprised** You say a new word Singer! :w00t:
Black: Try to repeat!
Singer: Lalalalalala! **sad** Lalala!
Master: He can't... :banghead:

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They are still covered by the sticky flour.
“Okay I'll taste it. But on one condition, kiss me.”

“Eh?”
       Mayu thought! You want to eat this thing or kiss him? This thing? Kiss him?
She approached him and kissed him on the cheek and went away.

“Eh!” Yuki protested.

“You don't say where I had to kiss you.” She replied with a cold voice.

     She is right Yuki. But my heartbeat is faster than before... Why? Maybe it os because it is the first that she kisses me! Yuki thought.

Yuki took a spoonful of rice and put it in her mouth.
“This is not bad! Taste it!” The spoon now traveling towards the Mayu's mouth.
She opened her lips to let the spoon entered and she was surprised, it tasted not so bad.
Then they tried the meat and it tasted really bad.

When they finished the dinner, Yuki proposed something amazing to Mayu.
“We are still covered by the flour, do you want take a shower with me?”

Mayu's eyes widened. “Eh?”

“Come on, it will be funny” Yuki said as he went towards Mayu.

“No!” Mayu crouched in the corner of the room.


--------------Inner Mayu ----- Chibi's reunion -----------

Gentle: Eeeeh! He make his move! :jerk:
Evil: Just what she want! :yep:
Oshiri: **with a placard that says Yes!** Oshiriiiii!! **big smile** :D
Mayu: Oshiri! Stop think about pervert thing!
Oshiri: **looked at Mayu** :love:
Mayu: What?! :?
Oshiri: ** brings up a sword** :) Oshiri! Riririririri! :twisted: **demonic laughter**
Mayu: Evil, Gentle What's happened to Oshiri-chan?
Evil: Eeeh~! :shocked You don't know her? It is your Chibi.
Gentle: :cry: That means she does not know us too! **tears**
Evil: About Oshiri, when you cut in her delirium or dream, she becomes worse than me.
Gentle: I think Evil is not evil... :roll:
Evil: What do you say??? :angry: **Angry**
Mayu: No one help meeeeeeee!!!!!! **Shouts on the bottom of a hole**

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“Come on” he insisted.

“No!” She covered her ears with her hands.

The man thought for a moment and found a solution.
He approached Mayu, put his arms around her waist and lifted her off the ground by behind. Funny way to bring someone.

“Get off me! Hentai!” She wriggled in all directions. “Noooo!”

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Ren had taken an hour to make his purchases. When he returned home, he found a person sitting in front of his door. As he approached he heard sobs, he recognized Jurina. He took her in his arms and carried her to the interior of the house.

"What is happening? That I found outside my house so late at night?"

"My parents threw me out"

"Eeeh, why?"

"Bad mark!"

"Again! They are really weird threw you out just for that, You got what?" He said, giving his clothes to Jurina.

"75/100" She answered as she went in another room to take a shower.

"Bad mark! Do you laugh at me!"

"I think they have me thrown out mainly because they had planned a romantic night together." She said filling the tub.

"They are too weird! They could not just ask you a few days before if you could sleep with a friend? Then find the excuse that you had a bad note your exam."

"It seems they have forgotten." Jurina shouted to cover the noise of the water. The discussion was over.
 
When she leaving the room to show up in shorts and a t-shirt too big for her.

------------Inner Ren------- Chibi's reunion --------------

Gekikara: huhuhu!  :drool: She looks good!
Amakuchi: **gives a punch to Gekikara**  :rock: She is 15!
Gekikara: Come on! I joke! ;)
Melonpan: Melonpan! Melonpaaaan! :catglare:
Gekikara: He need his melonpan!! Our body is hungry! :sweatdrop:
Amakuchi:  :wth Can't you wait a little bit?
Melonpan: **shakes his head** :smhid Melonpan!!
Gekikara: I do not think he can wait. **Starts run**
Melonpan:  :w00t: **Run after Gekikara**
Gekikara: I'm NOT a melonpan! Melonpan-kun! XD
Amakuchi: We haven't got a Master since Melonpan.... :cry:

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“I'm sorry, but to eat, I only have cup noodles.” He showed food.

“It is good for me.” She smiled, she took a cup of noodles.

“Right! Well, let's eat!”

“Okay!”

“Eh... Jurina, can you bear spicy food?” Suddenly, Jurina coughed and pulled out her tongue.
She had already taken a bite. “I see that it is not.”

“Water! Water please!” Ren gave her a glass of water. She drank rapidly and asked several others.

“We exchange? You took this cup without I told you that it was mine...”

“Yes, and I'm sorry.”

“It's okay”

They finished their meal and went to sleep.
Ren and Jurina slept in the same bed because the sofa was very shredded.
We do not know why but there were lots of holes which came the foam filled sofa.
We wonder what Ren had been doing. A hard night waiting for Ren because he slept with Jurina.


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In the bathroom Yuki put down Mayu and locked the door.
As Mayu was still in “I don't wanna hear or see anything”-mode, Yuki hid the key to prevent her from leaving the room.
 Then Yuki patted the Mayu's head, she gasped. Yuki exasperated sighed.

The water filled the tub already. Mayu, still in her corner crouched,  was sprayed by Yuki.
 This action allowed the pieces of flour, on Mayu's head, to leave. Now Mayu and her clothes were all wet.
 When she looked up she saw Yuki shirtless.
It was she believed first but in fact it was the T-shirt worn beige that Yuki was wearing.

“Optical illusion” Said Mayu.

“What?' Yuki asked. Yuki grabbed Mayu by her waist and dragged her near the tub. “Now, Go inside!” Yuki ordered while he gently pushed Mayu.

--------------Inner Mayu ----- Chibi's reunion -----------

Evil: Wahahaha! Now you are the pervert Boss!!! :)
Gentle: Ahahaha! :lol: Yes Evil is right. You thought about pervert things before he said that we go inside with our cloths!!
Oshiri: Oshiri **Sad** :(
Master: Why are you sad Oshiri-kun? :(
Oshiri: **Looked at her** Oshiri Oshiri Oshiriiiiiiiii! :cry: **tears**
Evil:  :? What did she says?
Master: She said “But I wanted him to be naked and then I could see his butt”
Gentle: I understood: “It must be beautiful without clothes especially his butt.”
Evil: All I know is she was talking about butt.
Master & Gentle: You're right! :twothumbs

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Mayu entered in the tub and felt weird because she still had her cloths but then Yuki entered too.

-End of the chapter-



@mo-chan: I come back with a lot of description (for me it's really a lots...).
@Amakuchi: I don't know Amakuchi-san I wasn't think about that...
@qweakb: Thank you!
@DC2805: Really, Thank you!
@clubhappy: I don't think it is ugly
@cmze: Yay Thank you for reading my fanfic!! My friend!! I don't why she is not jealous...
@gek geki: Thank you for loving Kashiwagi Mayu.

Yes I know in my fanfic the parents are bad... But I don't say all of their reasons why they became like that!
So don't be angry, I know that the parents are beautiful in the real life! Like mine!

 
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: clubhappy on January 04, 2013, 04:48:45 PM
The bath scene!!! I NEED THE BATH SCENE!!! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!  XD
Sorry for being so crazy  :P I'm getting crazy these days because there are no new Mayuki fics to read.
Still I want to know if Mayu was jealous back then when Yuki was with the Ryo boy's mother.
Thank you for the update.
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 04, 2013, 06:17:20 PM
i agree there are not enough mayuki fics to read, also love the food fight and bath scene looking forward to next update  :cow: :deco:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: DC2805 on January 06, 2013, 03:47:11 PM
Ren and Jurina seems to have an abnormal relationship...and Jurina's parents are really too much  :angry:

I am still a bit confused of why Yuki needs to get married so soon ... any details?  :?
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: cmze on January 07, 2013, 03:11:51 AM
TUB SCENE  :w00t:

OMG REN!! :O

YUKI AND MAYU :wub: :wub:

THIS IS SO CUTEE!!  :rofl: :rofl:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND BTW JEALOUS MAYU WONT B BAD!   :twisted:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: kurogumi on January 07, 2013, 05:45:36 AM
LOL sure!

They need a time to be the real married couple do!

Yes that stuff!


Its fun chapter LOL

Ren and jurina wow


Thank for the update
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: nik11 on May 09, 2013, 01:28:14 AM
Ahh, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!  :bow:

I want to know what happens next. Such a great story

Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch6- UPDATE 04/01
Post by: Haruto Lee on May 19, 2013, 05:47:10 PM
Like this new update :deco:
Pls update soon
Title: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: Chanaline on May 25, 2013, 11:01:32 PM
Hello!! :D

Well sorry if you don't understand what I said. The debut was made a long ago so I don't really know what I was thinking at this time. For why Yuki wanted to marry Mayu even me I don't know (lol) no just kidding I know but it is not on the debut that I will tell you why!! It will destroy my story!!! Well I wanted to make efforts but it take a lot of time since I'm not English! Please forgive for my laziness... Don't be scared I'm on-going this story but you know I make 1 phrase per day... It is not good...



Chapter7:



 Mayu was at the exact opposite of Yuki in the comfy bathtub. She didn't looked at him and wondered why she was here. It have a simple answer, she was married with the man in front of her.
The man, who was now in the tub, was trying to get Mayu's attention playing with plastic duck he had previously put in. He sighed, seeing that it didn't work. The little one didn't wanted to see him because of something he didn't know.

She wasn't able to do that because she knew if she did it she will have a nosebleed or even worse she will be so disappointed. She imagined a lot of things. Then suddenly she struck her forehead.

   Why I think about it? Why I imagine it? Am I a pervert one? No! It is impossible!

--------------Inner Mayu------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Nyahaha! You are pervert! :D We all know this!
Gentle Mayuyu: **Slap Evil** What are you saying! We are all innocent here! :angry:
Evil Mayuyu: **Whispering**Said the one who have a lot of butt magazine :smhid
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **Agree with Evil**
Gentle Mayuyu: Did you say something? :wth
Evil Mayuyu: Eh! No no no no!
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **nodded**
Gentle Mayuyu: Ah I see!
Evil Mayuyu: Whew... I was scared
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri...
Mayu: Oshiri huh?
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   I want to see his butt now! NOW! It was the words that Mayu's mind said.


   Yuki saws the blow that Mayu was herself inflicted and wondered why she did it. But he soon returned to his first occupation: to draw the attention of the girl. He took a bottle that was in right of him and he poured the contents into his hand. He rubbed the shampoo into his fingers and smiled at what he planned.

    Mayu was looked at her distorted reflection in the water trying to not think about what she was thinking but she raised her head when she felt a great hand on her head. Her vision was captured without her request by Yuki's T-Shirt, it had become transparent due to the water. It was a really good looking. Yuki started to move his hand, the shampoo began to foam and cover the long black hair of the girl.

   Mayu did not protest, she was too embarrassed that she did not even looked to Yuki. She would sometimes looked to the man although she always ended by turn aside. Yuki noticed the discomfort and then he cast a glance at his soaked T-shirt. Seeing it he giggled and grasped Mayu's red head.

“Why are you so embarrassed?”

“...” Mayu did not answer because it was more embarrassing that Yuki find the problem. She tried to looked away but she couldn't do because Yuki grabbed her head.

“Nothing...” she said with an inaudible voice as she looked down. He only smiled.

“Okay...Then...Turn around.” He said. Mayu looked up with a questioning look. “To wash your hair, it is complicated in this position.” She understood and then did what he wanted.

The silence settled between them while Yuki rubbed Mayu's long, silky black hair. This was very relaxing for Mayu.

“Yuki” called Mayu. He made a sound that he listened to. “Why do you need a wife? It is the weirdest thing I never heard.”

The man chortled gently “It have a lot of reason, you'll discover it but the principal is that I like you”

“Eh!? You don't even know me! How can you?”

“I don't know, it is just like that” he smiled widely. “I finished cleaning your hair and it's not for nothing that I wanted to kiss you when we were in the park. You can call that a crush.”

“Bizarre”

An idea popped in Yuki's head. He grabbed Mayu by her waist and pulled her to him.

“It, it is the position of a married couple” The young man said happy. “Even if the couple do naked.” He whispered in Mayu ear which it made Mayu unconsciously shivered.

“Mayu can you...”

Ding Dong

“...Wash my hair?” Yuki finished his question in his head. Yes. It was his “dream”.

--------------Inner Yuki----- Chibi's reunion -----------
Black Yukirin: Wahahahah! What is it with that dream!? :smhid
White Yukirin: Oh no! It is your only dream! :nervous You're not a real man!
Yuki: What!? **Grab Black and White**
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalalala~!   Lalaaaaaaaaa~!
Black & White Yukirin: Ohoh!
Yuki: You, both of yours are just idiot!
Black Yukirin:  He don't have any insult! LOL  :lol:
Singer Yukirin: Lalalalaaaalaa! :thumbsup

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   The door rang for the great displeasure of Yuki. He wanted to spend more time with Mayu because he needed it to create a real connection between them. It was for his goal. What is his purpose? Something really gigantic or not? Only him knew that.

   He went out of the bath and began to take off his wet clothing. Mayu watched the man and when noticed what he was doing she immediately looked at an other way. Yuki for the fun approached Mayu he knew that she was watching him. She had her back in front of Yuki.

“Don't you want to see?” He said near Mayu's face.

   Mayu gave a start and because of that a lot of water flowed the bath. Yuki chortled while she turned around to scold him. But what she saw made her mute. Her mouth opened in surprise. Yuki had an athletic body, you know what had athletic body so you know what Yuki had. He had neither too much nor too little, it was what woman wanted to have when the subject is man. In addition, he was shirtless with only a towel around his waist and then her eyes could see a toned, strapping and muscular body with a four-pack stomach.

Yuki grinned and left the room after patted Mayu's head.

Mayu was froze by what she had saw. Her heartbeat being faster she knew that if he wasn't left now he could see the tomato that was now in the tub.

---------Inner Mayu-------------Chibi's Reunion---------------
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiriiii **Eyes sparkled** :inlove:
Gentle Mayuyu: **Nosebleed* :bleed eyes:*
Evil Mayuyu: Ooooooh! :love:
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Then she realized that it was her chance to wash her alone. She get out the bath and locked the door then she took off her clothing and wash herself.

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   Ren couldn't sleep because it was early and because Jurina had a weird position when she slept. It was like she took all the place on the bed thus Ren was uncomfortably against the wall so Jurina did not touch him more because he didn't know what he will did. One of her leg and arm were on Ren and the other limb were out of the bed, imagine the position. Ren wondered how can she slept like this and sighed when he remembered that she used to sleep like this.

----------Inner Ren------------Chibi's reunion---- --------------
Gekikara: Push her off the bed!! :smhid She take all the place!!
Amakuchi: Bit her arm!! :w00t:
Ren: What?! :shocked
Melonpan: **yawn** Melopannnn
Gekikara: We want to sleep. :yawn:
Amakuchi: Yees!
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   His thought wandered while he kept his eyes on the wall. He remembered the first time that Jurina's parents did something like that. It was when they were sued because supposedly they have committed a fraud. He understood at that time but why did they continued it now.

   He curled up still with Jurina's limb on him. He pulled the blanket trying to not take everything and to leave enough for the girl beside him. He tried to sleep. But to no avail. While he was about to sleep Jurina grabbed him into her arms.

“Why?” He said desperate.

======================================================================

Having finished washing, Mayu, all dressed, joined Yuki in the living room. He was sit in the couch watching a paper, still with only a towel for his cloth. He didn't notice Mayu's presence as she stood in front of him.

“Are you okay?” Mayu asked intrigued by Yuki's behavior but he didn't answer.

As she didn't have an answer Mayu leant to see what Yuki glared. It was an invitation to a party in two days. While Mayu read the invitation Yuki started to whisper “no” several time. Her wife became worried. She put one hand on top of his hand.

“Hey, are you okay?” Yuki only raised his head. He looked at Mayu and a smile took shape on his face.

“That's right!” He said suddenly as he took her hand. “You're here so it will be okay.”

He got up and wrapped Mayu in his arms.

“Mayu, I need your help. This party have an event that I don't like at all. You're not going to do something complicate you are just going to...”

He stopped when he saw that he spoke with an unconscious Mayu. Then he realized that he might had hugged her too tight.

“I am such an idiot!” He struck his forehead.

He noticed, after having placed the woman in bed, that Mayu was red and wondered why. He finished wash himself and went to sleep.

The next day, Mayu woke up and she wondered how she landed on the bed. Then she remembered the night before.

Yuki wrapped her in his arms.

Mayu became directly out of service. The man seemed to have forgotten that he was shirtless and it was very embarrassing for Mayu. She was all red and because of this, too much blood went to her face moved her into another world. The world of unhealthy dreams. For her, at this moment.


As she remembered that, she remembered the soft skin, the muscles dancing so sexy whenever Yuki spoke, his abs against his own belly, the...

“STOP!” Mayu shouted to herself. “I'm not a pervert like this. Right?”

---------Inner Mayu-------------Chibi's Reunion---------------
Angel Mayuyu: Yes you are! :)
Evil Mayuyu: Definitely yes! :yep:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **nodded like crazy** :drool:
Evil Mayuyu: We saw where you go in internet.
Angel Mayuyu: Ahah! You're right!!
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Yuki rushed in the room and seemed really worried.

“Are you okay, Mayu? Why did you shouted?” He said with a concerned tone as he approached.

“It is nothing...” She smiled awkwardly.

“Really? Then okay. Mayu I needed your help for in two day...”

“For the party?”

“Yes, it have an event that I hate. If you're here it must be okay...”

“What kind of event?”

“... But we must to buy you a dress because they are really pay attention to that sort of thing,” he said without answer at Mayu's question, “then I must teach you a few things to know, when you are in this world. And it have that and that...”

Yuki continued his monologue when he pulled out a box from under the bed. He stopped speak and pulled out the object that was in. It was a cell phone. He handed it to Mayu.

“It is your new cellphone,” he said, “you should put your numbers in there.”

“Ehhh... Okay.”

Mayu looked confused at the object but did what Yuki said.

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Ren woke up and nobody was beside him since he was on the ground. It seems that Jurina pushed him of the bed. He got up searching for Jurina and found her in the kitchen cooking. She wore an apron which encircled the waist and could see the slim waist she had. Her hair was tied in a ponytail revealing her beautiful neck.

-------Inner Ren------Chibi's reunion-----------------------------
Amakuchi: **Blush** :wub:
Gekikara: Woaaaaaah!
Melonpan: Melonpan!!
Ren: **Smack all the Chibis** Why are you so perv?! :angry:
All the chibis: because we are you! :D
Ren: All of you shut up ** Real Gekikara appear**
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“What are you doing?” He asked.

“Don't you see? I make a breakfast,” she said sardonic.

“Are you in a bad mood to speak to me like that?”

“Yes, when I woke up, I found you in your corner against the wall leaving me all the place in the bed!” She said mad while keeping cooking.

“Ehh.. But what I needed to do? Throw you out of the bed?”

“No, but say something!”

“Okay! Next time I will try.” He turned is head, “I tried but you didn't woke up...” he mumbled.

“Did you said something?”

“Nothing!”

After eating the breakfast Ren took Jurina to the school.

“Have a nice day!” He said to the young girl she answered with a smile.

Ren went at home and opened his letter box and found a letter that he didn't want to see at all. His heart beat more quickly. He could not breathe properly. The view of the piece of paper prevented proper operation of his body.  An invitation.

)=====================================================================

Around the night, the bell of the Yuki's or should I say Kashiwagi family's apartment rang. It was a friend of the man that live there. He was totally panicking behind the door and waiting for his friend to open. When the door opened a little he was about to jump on the one who had the handle of the door because he was totally terrorized by the letter that he received but when he saw that it was a girl he stopped himself.

“Is Yuki here?” He asked to the girl with overhasty.

“Yes, why?” Mayu asked a little bit curious by the actions of Ren. She wasn't lest him entered for the time being. She was embarrassed.

“I need to talk to him, can you let me enter?”

“No...” She said quietly.

Behind her a sound of a human voice arrived to their ear “Mayu, who is it?” the voice asked.

“It is me! Ren!” Ren answered shooting.

“Then come” the voice answered.

Mayu was forced to open the door wider and then Ren could see the beautiful red dress that she wear. It was really suited for her.

Yuki was lied on the couch. “Yo, Ren!”

“Yo! Yuki. Did you saw the letter of the party?” he said desperate.

“Yes but I don't have any problem with that!”

“What? Why? It is the most, the biggest problem of our life!!”

“It was! Now I have Mayu” Yuki smiled widely and gave a wink to Mayu who just flushed at the action.

“You! Traitor! Wait... But the organization don't know that you're married so you will participate too!” Ren said and made Yuki changed his happy face.

“Yes you're right but then I will tell Mayu what she have to do” Yuki replied with a big smile.

   In the other sight Mayu was all lost by what they said. She wondered what they talk about and wanted to understand because it seemed that they really disliked it. She was about to ask but then Ren sat up and left the couple with no word and an expression that said that he was desperate. At this time Mayu thought that it was weird that he want for just said that.

“What was that?” Mayu asked Yuki.

“Nothing... Really” he answered with a grin.

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   It was the day of the party Mayu and Yuki were in front of the building. When they entered it was almost night but the interior of the building was illuminated as if it were day.

“Did you remember what I said? Mayu?” Yuki asked a little away from her.

---------Inner Yuki-------------Chibi's Reunion---------------
Black Yukirin:  Why are you so away from her!? :smhid
White Yukirin: It is because of the plan! Are you idiot? XD
Black Yukirin: What? :(
Singer Yukirin: Lalalala~!
White Yukirin: Hehehe!
Black Yukirin: You!
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She only nodded and then girl near started to scream impressed by the building in front of her.

“Mayu look at this building! It is amazing!” Miichan said shaking Mayu.

Yuki smiled to Mayu before disappeared in the building accompanied by Ren. When the two girls entered in the building they saw the big room that have a lot of sumptuous table.

“What's your name” said a man.

“Watanabe Mayu and Minegishi Minami” the man was searching their name when another man came and bumped into him.

“Ah sorry” it was a man that seems kindly cute because of his small dimple under his eyes making him look like a little squirrel. “Oshima Yuu, well you already saw me” he smiled and went inside.

“I previously saw this guy, he was in a lingerie shop” Miichan said and walked in the room.

Mayu wondered why she said that but let it down and walked with her friend. A lot of people with elegant tuxedo and dress were there. Then she saw her husband with an old woman. Not really old but compared to Mayu she was. It seemed that they were talking about something important but suddenly she saw the old woman passed her hand over her husband chest and all she could thought that it was disgusting.

   Why is she touching him like this? Mayu wondered and then when the woman went away Yuki she saw his face became a weird mix of disgusting and anger.

=====================================e================================

At the other sight was Ren. He was surrounded by a lot of woman. Like Yuki but more younger. It wasn't because they didn't like him but mostly because of that woman who were with him. She scared all the woman that approached Yuki. Ren was there without his mind but he still spoke with the people around him. After that he saw his friend's wife and went toward her to speak a little.

“Mayu-san are you okay? You seems really worry.” He asked as he let his hand on the girl's shoulder. But no answer came and he became more worry about her. “Mayu-san are you okay?” he asked again.

“Eh! Ah yeah it's okay I just wondered why Yuki had has the weird face that I saw before”

“What are you talking about?”

Mayu then told all she saw and then Ren understood what she was speaking about.

“You should ask him.”

“But he told me to don't go near him because of his plan”

“Don't care! I'm going to introduce you like you don't know him.”

Mayu was not really convinced but even so she followed him and went toward Yuki. At the same time Miichan was around the sideboard to taste all the food they offered.

“Yuki my friend! I want you to know her. She is... hm....”

“Watanabe Mayu” she handed her hand and smiled widely.

“Nice to meet you, Kashiwagi Yuki” He grabbed her hand then he smiled.

Then they talked for a long time and was making funny with Ren before stop because of an old man that went to speak with Yuki. Yuki told Mayu that he was an important person so he should not refused him. Mayu wasn't able to ask Yuki about the woman ans then she felt a little bit annoyed by this. She wanted to rest her so she took a chair and sat on it. Then a woman with a really good dress went towards her and spoke to her.

=====================l=================================================

Ren after speaking with Mayu and Yuki sat on a chair thinking about something. To be exact about someone. This someone was none other than this young girl named Jurina. He was totally submerged in his head by the young face and he couldn't think about anything else since he know now that he might love Jurina. He knew that he couldn't but he couldn't fight against his own feeling.

   “What am I doing here? I love her? Really?” Ren asked himself but no answer came. “Why? Why? Why? Why?” He shouted in his head and messed up his hair.

“I need to calm myself” he whispered and then sat up and wandered in the big room.

He went to the sideboard where the drinks were situated. He took a glass of something and stated to drink a hard liquor yet he could calm himself for few minutes and spoke to the peoples that were engaged a talk with him. Although after this few minutes his brain went again to the girl he like or we should say love. He remembered the guy that was with Jurina when she took her at school and became angry for a reason that he didn't know.

Then he looked to some girl in the reception and some of them were really good looking. He then thought of forget hid problem by make fun with some of them but at the second after he thought it wasn't good to do something like that to innocent girl.

=================l=====================================================

“You know Kashiwagi-san?” The woman asked Mayu with a lot of interest.

“Not really”

“Then I must tell you that. This guy seems really don't like woman since he never went to me.” Mayu looked at the woman with a disgusting eyes because she showed that she was imbued by herself. “I mean is really don't like woman since I never saw him with his girlfriend or something near that. Do you understand what I mean?”

“Not at all.” A simply response with a not interested tone.

“He is gay”

When Mayu heard that three words she widened her eyes and thought that the woman was a little tab crazy. But then two other woman came and confirmed the woman's words. They were totally sure that Yuki was on that way but for Mayu it wasn't the truth at all since she had been kissed by him and other things.

Then a man came and sat next to Mayu, she recognized him he was the man who bumped into the entrance of the building.

   “If I'm right his name is O... something... Yuu” Mayu tried to composed the named she heard before.

“Hey girls are you okay” he said and all girls was now with a big grin on their face.

“Oshima-san!” The all said with an almost harmony. “Are you going to participate to the main event?” One of the woman said while her eyes sparkled.

   “Ah! Right! It was Oshima Yuu then” Mayu smiled, “Is he popular?”

“Of course girls! Will you support me?” He said and flashed a grin to all woman that were around him.

“Yes absolutely!” They said it in a harmony one more time.

   “Absolutely popular,” Mayu started to laugh in her corner.

“Well girls can you leave me and this girl for a moment” he said and pointed his finger on me.

“Eeeeeh Ok!” They said it still in harmony. It was frantically boring.

“So miss what's you name?”

“Watanabe Mayu”

“Aaah Watanabe Mayu! Do you like Yuki?” He asked with a smile plastered on his face. Mayu was surprised by this sudden question and flushed.

“Wh-”

“Can you ask him to go out with you?” He continued without waiting for a reply, “you see this guy, I never heard him speak about him to have a girlfriend and I become worry so please.” He said serious.

Mayu didn't what to answer but she choose to answer by what she will do if someone ask her something like that. It was obvious that someone who heard that will be shocked. Mayu didn't know what answer after all she was already his girlfriend well more than this. She was his wife. Yuu was a little tab weird to to ask something like this to a stranger. For a long time an awkward silence was installed between them before Yuu started to giggle.

“I was joking!” He said mocking, “It will be bizarre that someone ask something like this.” He added and then sat up. “Oh! It is already the time, I go to prepare myself. If you want to know more about me go to my forum Oshiri Wonderland!”

Mayu didn't believed what she just heard.

“Your forum? About Oshiri?” Mayu asked curiously.

Yuu was about to left but when someone asked him something about his forum he couldn't ignore it. “Yes, I'm the ultimate moderator, the creator of it” he said proudly.

“Wait! So you're Oshiriko-sama!?” Mayu suddenly shouted.

---------Inner Mayu-------------Chibi's Reunion---------------
Angel Mayuyu: O-Oshiriko_sama!? :w00t:
Evil Mayuyu: Wooooaaah!! I can't believe that we met her- I mean him! :twothumbs
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri! **nodded like crazy**
Evil Mayuyu: Touch his butt now :twisted:
Mayu: What!?
Angel Mayuyu: She is more perv than Oshiri-chan!!
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“What?! You know me”



“I thought you were a girl...”

“Eheh... I don't know what to answer”

“Yes I know you're Oshiriko-san after all I'm Shiriri!”

“What?! You're Shiriri my right-hand?”

“Yes!! Wait... You're Oshiriko-san... So you saw my!”

“Yes they are terribly nice as I told you before.” He said with his hand in a w-position. “Ah! It almost the time! I need to go!” Then he started to run to a big wooden door and disappeared behind it.

After some minutes the room became dark and then a lots of spotlights illuminated a scene that was at the back of the room. A man appeared and then he said.

“Let's start the main event! Yeahh!!!”






@clubhappy: So Sooooooory for the long time!! It take a lot of time! Hope you like it even if it is boring....
@mayuki_daisuki: Thank you so much! I thought it was not good at all
@DC2805: Maybe soon  XD Sorry. What is complicated between Ren and Jurina? I don't understand...
@cmze: Tank you for reading! I wanted to post it before that!!! Mayu jealous? When I have an idea for that!
@kurogumi: Why did you say "Ren and jurina wow" Is it a good things or not?
@nik11:Thank you!! I update :lol:
@Haruto Lee: Ok Here the update!!

The writer is dead... It is complicated to write a fanfic.... :P Please tell me if it was boring or not!!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on May 26, 2013, 12:03:47 AM
oho evil mayuyu is more of a perv than oshiri mayu :P
aww ren loves jurina :deco:
oshiriko-sama :lol: mayu met oshiriko-sama and shes the right hand lol
thanx for the update  :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: Rena-chan Daisuki on May 26, 2013, 12:29:58 AM
I think i kinda know what kind of event is this
(but it's just a guess, so i keep it a secret)
just hope that Yuki and Ren didn't get any problem
nice update finally
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: clubhappy on May 26, 2013, 03:54:07 AM
Yay!!!  XD An update finally!!!
I already told you that it won't be boring for me  :P
I love Mayuki interaction in this chapter. So cute.
Oshiriko-sama and Shiriri lol so funny
I'm waiting for the next one.
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: cmze on May 26, 2013, 04:12:23 AM
definitely not boring!!  :rofl:

This is cute and Mayu is a pervert!  :grin:

Ren is really charming somehow it gives me that vibe!  :wub:  me weird huh?  :rofl:

This was really fun!  :D

And heartwarming  :peace:



Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: kurogumi on May 26, 2013, 09:56:24 AM
The main event!! Please update soon LOL

Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on May 26, 2013, 05:42:12 PM
Even when working I couldn't stop reading this xD

Update soon I can't wait ;')
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: gek geki on May 31, 2013, 04:01:45 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CANT TAKE ANY LONG HEHE
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: atsuminaFTW on June 23, 2013, 12:40:05 PM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :panic:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Chanaline on January 02, 2014, 11:13:59 PM
Hello! Yes it is an update!!!!!! After more than one year ahahah!  :sweatdrop:
We're now 2014!!!!! Happy new year even if i'm late!!!! :D

But I know people will not read what I wrote! Well I already wrote it then why I don't post it!  :banghead: It is really hard to write something! I really respect other writer! I only can say "Wow! Your amazing! AMAZING!" How can you keep writing!!!!!  :panic:
Well well the chapter. Sorry to  atsuminaFTW, K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS, kurogumi, cmze, clubhappy, Rena-chan Daisuki, and mayuki_daisuki for having comment my lame story! And thank you to all who thank you-ed my story....



Chapter 8:

“Let's start the event!! Yeah” The man said as all the people had clapped for the long-awaited arrival of the event.

“Now you can sit around the stage, Misses!” He said and then a lots of woman ran toward their seat. They all had an etiquette to their assigned seat so it hadn't have any fight to the best seats. But it seemed that they were in a hurry to begin. And when all the woman were sat at their own seat the spotlights were extinguished. The multitude of women started to speak about something that Mayu didn't understand. Mayu cursed around and found Miichan sitting a few chairs away. It had couple but they all were behind all the woman.

“What's going on?” Mayu asked no one especially.

Then suddenly the light returned and lighted the stage.

“Misses! We are here for this event and only this event! We need to start it now!” The man said with some excitement that Mayu didn't understand. “Let's start with the parade”

The audience applauded with great joy after the announcement that has been made​​. Then Mayu heard some name being called in the crowd. She wondered what was that event. Something that excite woman like that couldn't be only a parade. While she was in her thought some man appeared on the stage. They were all with a placard that had number and their name and have different outfit that they had before it started. In fact some of them were wearing something you would wear when you go to the beach. One of them stumble on the scene. Mayu laughed so hard but what she didn't know at the beginning was... She was the only one, with Miichan, who laughed.

She tried to hide herself after that embarrassing exposure. By chance it was the time when a guy entered. He was really popular according to the women who shout his name.

“Ren-sama look at here” a woman said and then Ren turned at her and smiled. A forced smile, Mayu could tell that since she was an expert on it.

Ren stopped at the end of the stage and then with a magic trick he took out a rose. Then he throw it. Women were fighting for that rose and it scared Mayu how they could be that violent.

After that Yuu appeared and he was well welcomed. It seems he was popular amongst the girls. Suddenly he took off his shirt. And all the woman became crazy. You could hear shout and other things. It was really a mess.

“Why is he always doing that?” a woman with a long brown hair seemed ask it to none. She looked really angry. She was near Mayu and Mayu could tell that she was fuming.

It was when Yuki entered in the room. Suddenly the crowd became silent and only the old woman who touched Yuki in a weird manner started to shout his name.

“What the hell? Why is it only her the shout his name? Yuki is way better than the other before.” Mayu said not too loud but the woman beside her heard it.

“It is because she is the witch that have money to have him. If you go against her she will do something bad to you. I already saw something like a woman wanted to go against her and t wasn't something you want to live.” The woman explain.

   What? She is a witch? Whatever... I think it will be okay for me... at last I hope. Mayu thought while she thanked the woman.

When Yuki went ahead Mayu he winked at her with a big smile. The girls around shouted when she that but Mayu got embarrassed and just looked away. While women where crying with joy the “witch” was glaring at all the women but when Yuki was in front of her she couldn't resist to smile and wave at him. Mayu found it totally disgusting. It was when she saw how Yuki was dressed. He was dressed with a shirt that have no buttons.... (Well I don't know how to say it... locked...No weird.....). And then we can see his torso.

--------------Inner Mayu------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Evil Mayuyu: Aaaaaah so sexy~! :bleed eyes:
Angel Mayuyu: Yeah! :inlove:
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri Oshiri! :shakeit:
Angel Mayuyu: Wait other woman can see that too! :huhuh
Mayu: Yeah :tama-mad:
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   Why is he wearing something that provocative? Does he forgot that he is married? Mayu asked herself a bit pissed. Wait, why do I care anyway?

He did his own show and went out of the scene.

“Now that we saw all the men we can start the main event”, he animator said, “we can start with the bid”, he smiled.

   Ah now I see why he told me that I need to have the higher number when it will be his turn.

“Before that, let me tell the rules, one per one please! You all have under your chair a number so please when you want to place a bid raise your number. You all know what you can do with them after. You can do whatever you want. Physical relationship are authorized if the man agrees.”

   What with that precision, Mayu thought

“The limit is one week after you should let him go or if he want you can be together.”

   Okay, it's a weird thing to do to them.

“So now that you know all you need to know. Let's start! The first one is....”

And then one by one the men were going with their “owner for one week”. It was Ren's turn. The room were suddenly silence.

   No one want him? Mayu thought, Then what was before?

Feeling pity Mayu raised her number.

“How much do you offer?”

“Hum...”

   Wait, here is where rich people is so

“10 000 yen?” Then she could sense the woman look at her.

After that offer the amount of money increased. It end with two more zero. People were surprised that it could go that high. Ren was the first shocked but he kept his smile. Then it came to Yuu, the brown hair woman near Mayu was trying her best to have him but unfortunately she didn't have more money so she gave up.

Mayu pov

Finally Yuki's bid. At that moment only the witch were excited. It pissed me off. You didn't know how! She was only disgusting.

“10 Yen!” She said.

--------------Inner Mayu------- Chibi's reunion -----------
Oshiri Mayuyu: Oshiri O-O  :angry:
Angel Mayuyu: Eh! Is she joking? :catglare:
Evil Mayuyu: WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :banghead:
Angel Mayuyu: That witch I will kill her!
Evil Mayuyu: Yuki deserve more than that! Look at his body! Sexy~!
Mayu: Stop it *Embarrassed*
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I couldn't afford that. I raise my hand and then:

“100 000 Yen!” Yes I directly said a high number so she couldn't follow.

As I said that I could hear woman around me whispered.

“Is she insane?”, “Going against the witch?”, “I don't want to be at her place”....

And a lot of this things. Then Mayu could felt someone stared at her and we all know who it was. That old woman who else?

“Then I go with 500 000 Yen” The old disgusting woman said.

“700 000 Yen”

“800 000 Yen”

“900 000 Yen”

“950 000 Yen”

“Okay 1 000 000 Yen” I said and glared at the witch which was doing the same.

But then she didn't say anything. It seemed that she couldn't follow me Bwahahahaha!!! I won Yuki.

“Oh! So it is end up with the same amount as Ren! Well with that we end up with the bid. Girls you can have your price at that big wooden door!” The host said while he pointed at a big wooden door.


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“Hey Yuki”, it was Yuu, “that girl spent a lot of money for you. Isn't she cute?”

Yuki turned to see Yuu and gave him an angry look.

“Don't even dare to look at her with your perverted eye”

“Wow! Wow! Why are you that angry?”

“Eh!? Why! F-For nothing!

"Ahah! You're stutter!"

No! I'm not!"

“Maybe because he is interested by her” Ren said and became embedded in the conversation.

“Tch! Why are you here?” Yuki complaint because he didn't like that Mayu offer something for that man.

“Hey! Why are you like that to me?... Wait is it because she offered something for having me?”

Yuki directly blushed and wanted to punch that face before him but then the host called them to rejoin their “partner”.

“Yuki... I know your relation did you forgot. I wont have interest in her.” Ren whispered to Yuki.

“Yeah! You're right. I know that since you already have someone in your heart”

“Yea-Wait! What?” Ren said but Yuki was already gone.

======================================================================

“That young girl! She will pay for what she did tonight!”




How was it? Boring right? Alalala....

@atsuminaFTW: I update but not as soon as you want :cry: Sorry for that!
@Gek Geki! Sorry you wait a long long time :cry:
@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: Wow I'm so happy that you told me that :D
@kurogumi: Sorry~! :cry:
@czme: :cry: :cry: :cry: You're not here anymore :cry:
@clubhappy: It will (maybe if I continue this fic) have more interaction between them
@Rena-chan Daisuki: Have you got the right idea????
@mayuki_daisuki: yeah I was thinking that it was a funny way to intriduce Yuu.

Boring!!!!!! Maybe I don't need to update anymore because no one need this story!!!! Someone help me!!!!!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch7- Finally
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on January 03, 2014, 12:19:00 AM
It's not lame!!
I missed this fic~ :heart: :yep:
aww poor ren~ mayuyu so kind~ :lol:
the wich shall die!! mayuyu get her!! :angry:  :twisted:
i hope mayuyu will be all right :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Kirozoro on January 03, 2014, 03:12:53 AM
Mayuki and wmatsui so cute

I wonder there will be Kojiyuu

That witch sure is disgusting...she too old for Yuki
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Konoe on January 03, 2014, 11:43:33 AM
Finally you updated!  :mon star: Stop comparing yourself to other writers. Your story is interesting in your own way. ;)

That disgusting old woman. :smhid and 10 yen?! Yuki definitely deserves more. But now that Mayu won the bid, I wonder what sweet bonding moments they will do? :inlove:

Yuki is too possessive toward Mayu and got jealous easily. :wub:

Too bad for Kojiharu, she didn't won Yuu. :(

You better update the next chapter sooner.  :shifty: 
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Senelcar on January 03, 2014, 11:45:37 AM
Finally some update !
I really wanna know how Mayu is gonna pay the 1 000 000 Yen she is supposed to :)
And also who is the witch ( Ohori ??? ), and if she was the one who was making his followed in previous chapters.
Please don't stop writing this fic !

P.S : I need more chibi reunions !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: leEwẬy on January 03, 2014, 04:25:16 PM
I've been your silent reader for a long time :mon ignore:
Finally an update :mon hanky: Such a long time that I almost forget the plot :mon scare:
I must tell you that your fic and the other are very interesting and great :mon thumb:
So don't be so pessimistic and worry about that or whether no one needed this fic :mon determined:
I sure everyone all need it very much :mon innocent: And so, please continue to update :mon runcry:
Anyway, back to the fic, a jealous Yuki, nee :mon evillaff:
Why I so hate that old woman :mon uggh: Wonder what'll she do to Mayu :mon dunno:
However, Mayu won the bid :wahaha: In your face, old woman :mon noprob:
I'm looking forward to seeing your new update, so update ASAP, please :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: RenshuChan on January 04, 2014, 04:34:29 AM
Why don't you believe me that I read your fic too (⌣́_⌣̀)
Well, thanks for the update (∩_∩)
Gotta wait for this sexy yuki-boy on the next chapter ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ update soon !
Title: Re: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Terragen on January 04, 2014, 05:34:04 AM
i want more i want more!

dont stop it!! it was great!

dude...i'm worried about mayu,that's witch woman planing bad thing
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on January 05, 2014, 07:54:20 AM
at last!!

waited this for a long time!!


yuko didn't know yuki and mayu's relationship :shocked :shocked


i imagined that old woman ohori megumi XD XD


haha mayu so tsundere  :hip smile: :hip smile:

oshiri~~~!! :hip smile: :hip smile: :hip smile:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: gek geki on January 13, 2014, 04:57:20 AM
AND........................I WANT CHAP 9 TOOO~~~ HAA
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: DKA48 on January 26, 2014, 10:54:57 AM
Great update :deco:  :w00t:  please!!!! :bow: i can't wait for the next chapter..... thanks!!!!! :thumbsup  update soon.....  :panic: :phttp://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/panic.gifanic: :panic: :panic:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: Ceej!~ on March 31, 2014, 04:31:30 AM
hmm started to read this.. so far I really enjoyed your fanfic   :twothumbs

please do update soon  :wub:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: River1721 on March 31, 2014, 06:22:17 AM
Started reading this fic and might I  say THIS IS PURE AWESOMENESS! :mon XD: :mon star:
The Mayuki couple is just cute!! :luvluv2:

I am starting to think that 'women' is Ohori  :stoned: :on yellcard:

Please update soon! I need to know what the "witch woman's" planning to do with Mayuki! :stuffed: :frustrated: :on gay: :byebye:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: chocholate on March 31, 2014, 08:59:55 AM
being silent reader for a long time.. sorry for it !

update soon please,really miss your update
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Ch8- 02/01/14
Post by: sastio13 on July 08, 2014, 02:40:11 AM
there's no update? i miss this story....
please update chanaline-san, arigatou :bow:
Title: Re: Chanaline's Fanfic | Married!?| Mayuki, WMatsui -Reply and Sorry
Post by: Chanaline on July 10, 2014, 09:26:40 PM
Hello Hello!!! I'm soooooooo sorry minna-sama!!!

I totally lost my inspiration in that story! I can update something but it doesn't make the story move... Soooooooooo.....

I'll reply to your comment then!

Dear Reader!!!!!!!!! You make me all CRY!!!! :on speedy:

You're all too nice to me... It is just I'm too much in lack of idea....

I'll Try my best to update!!! But I don't have ideas!!!!!!!!!!!! :banghead:

mayuki_daisuki: Eh? why poor Ren? I don't understand....
Kirozoro: Maybe Maybe :D
Konoe: Ahhh.. I can't stop comparing myself to other since I read them and they all have a nice writing style and plot... Yuki is so cute right? And Who say it was kojiharu :on hypto: It is not~! You're scaring me but I don't have idea!
Senelcar: Maybe it is her... Well for the chibi's reunion it is complicated to create them for me. Since I want it to be funny but I'm not funny so... complicated for me
leEwẬy: But... But.... Whoa! Silent reader out of his hiding place YEAH! :on gay: All of us are angry against that old woman.
RenshuChan: Because I only write one and never update....
Terragen: Me too what will she doing... So sorry I make you wait...
MayuxMatsuixMusic: GOMENASAI!!!!!!! To make you wait! This is what I love so :D
 gek geki: OKAYYYYYY!!!
DKA48: DOKAYYYYYYYY!!!
Ceej!~: It is nice of you!!! GOOD WRITER DA~~~~~!
River1721: Really? I can't believe it! Yeah so cute :D
chocholate: No problem and sorry I just don't have anymore idea!
sastio13: OMG with you make a reply I remember that I had a story but still where is my inspiration!


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SORRY