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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: fausto on October 24, 2012, 02:45:02 AM
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:nervous It's late and I thought about Atsuko being in N-Y, I'm scared that she could go there for her studies, so I thought about some mails that maybe Minami and Aachan could send to each other... It's a silly idea, but anyway, I put it here just in case... :banghead:
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
New-York is great! But I'm missing you like crazy T-T
General manager...It's so sexy to imagine...o-O Maybe you could
give me some orders...hehe!
And what is this MV, Oteage lullaby??! Are you trying to kill me??
Minami is so kakkoi!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Must be really big and cool! I'm missing you too.
Glad you have so much fan over there. Don't joke me about that, you know it's just a word...
Do you like the MV? I'm not sure it's good...
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
It is but would be better with you...T-T
It's not just a word, you're just after Akimoto-sensei!!
I didn't know but responsabilities are making me excited...!
Mou Minami, do you love me?
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Of course I love you...
When do you come back? I know you're busy but...
Anyway, try to eat and rest enough okay?
Don't want you to be sick.
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
One week!!
I thought that maybe I could come at your appartement...
If you miss me enough to want to see me...
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Baka, of course I want you!
Come!!
From; Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
You want me?!
Minami, this is so sexy!
I can't wait!!
You should talk to me dirty hehe!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Atsuko, you're a teaser!
Talk dirty?! Hazukashii!!
I guess I need to kiss you, touch you, feel you...
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
…o-O
Mi-na-mi...I'm so turned on!!
Can believe we didn't do this before!!
Don't dare forget about me!^^
I'll be here in one week.
Be ready to make me dirty...
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This is so good! :D
so funny! xD
Acchan so cool! <3
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Minami and acchan ..... Instead of just texting why not just call each other and try phone s3x .... :lol:
Omg miss them so much!!!!
:twothumbs
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From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
…o-O
Mi-na-mi...I'm so turned on!!
Can believe we didn't do this before!!
Don't dare forget about me!^^
I'll be here in one week.
Be ready to make me dirty
im excited to this part!!wahahaha :cow:
cant wait!!hohoho :twisted:
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Please
make more.! ;)
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of course this happen... jajajaj maybe perv section?... :D yeah minami every time is getting hotter :D
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This is so CUTE! :heart: Well, it gets hot later, but the idea is so cute. :nervous I want more cute~~~
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Thank you so much for this comment, I wouldn't have think you'd like it, this is so cool!^^
I've plan the pervy section thing, I'm just waiting a little, to tease you guys :nervous Excuse me for this, but teasing in an Atsumina fanfic is so good...Aah I miss them so much!!Anyway, Oteage lullaby is playing right now in my ipod, so this fic will be wilder and wilder^^
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Good Morning!
I dreamed about Minami...
I'm still shaking, you're amazing!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Good morning!
What? What was that dream about?
Miichan says hi!
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Hm...destroyed gakuen
Minami all in black with a scepter...
Rain and your low voice...
A rough kiss in front of everybody...
Something like that!
Hi Miichan!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Sugoi! How were you dressed?
Can't believe you're telling me this in USA...
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
White wetted dress...
You said « This is my territory...
Anyone touching her will be dead... »
Aah so kakkoi!!! I want to sleep again!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Maybe I could buy a scepter for next week...^^
Wetted dress means transparent right? It must be great!
What do you do today?
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
In my dream you looked at my underwear, hentai!!
Dunno yet, maybe shopping or meeting fans.
I'll eat a big burger!!hehe!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Hentai?!No way!!
Oh, great, enjoy!
I have to go, don't eat to much of these things!
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Okay;
Don't worry you could check if my body is
still the same when I get back.
In every angles...>-<!!!
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Thank you! :cathappy:
so funny i always pictured them like that! :grin:
Acchan the pervert and Takamina the calmed one who likes everything this girl so to her! :rofl:
please update soon! :cow:
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LOL, this is so amazing, AtsuMina mails :rofl: :rofl:
And especially the one yet to be posted in the perv section.. :drool:
And I have yet to post my half done AtsuMina smexy OS too... :banghead: :banghead:
I'll be waiting for more AtsuMina mails!! :bow: :bow:
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From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Minami! I miss you!
Are you busy commanding
the AKB48 army?
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Sorry for the late.
Today was UZA rehersal.
How are you?
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content;
Tired...
I want Takapillow T-T
I'm sad because
I want Minami for myself...
From; Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
You should rest.
Me for yourself?^^
You would sleep on me
for two hours!
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
No, I would hug you
and take your lips
for two hours!
Did someone touched
my leader those days?
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Nobody besides Mocchi,
Haruna and Rie I think.
Don't be so sure that I
would let you take my lips...
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Minami!! I hope for
you that it's wrong!
Not so sure?
Did you forget how much
you like my way to kiss you?
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Not really, how could I.
But maybe you won't have
the time to think about it.
Two weeks away from you
make me really...agressive.
So make sure you want this before
knocking at my door.
I won't be able to hold myself...
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Sugoi!!
I love when you talk like that!
Only know can make my horny
so far away from home^^
When I get back I will
go at your flat right away.
You better be agressive!!
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This is way to too funny!! :rofl:
i'm loving this! :inlove:
please update soon! :grin:
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come we need that yuko or maritroll.. appear behind takamina and read one of this comment.. jajaj its gonna be awesome :D
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Hehehe this is great, it's different from any other fic. Please continue :thumbsup
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imagining things again !!!! maritroll , tolling the two again :onionwhip: and :hiakhiakhiak: miichan making fun of atsumina :)
:twothumbs
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Some people are guessing what's next... :banghead: ^^ Anyway, enjoy!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Mariko-sama speaking,
Atsuko you're in big trouble!!
Haha, this is way to funny
You're so agressive!!
From: Aachan
To: Mariko
Content:
Drop this phone!!
You're too curious!!
I'm going to report this to the general
manager!! Watch your back!!
From: Mariko
To: Aachan
Content:
I can't fear you, this
is too funny!! You have to
treat me great food at least
twice if you don't want
everybody to know^^
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
50 pumps for Mari-chan!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Done, but she's laughing anyway.
I think she will be happy for
2 weeks....
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
You should have a special phone
for our conversation. Private number
for private words...^^
From: Mariko
To: Aachan
Content:
You should see GM in
Uza outfit right now,
just to handsome!!
Even Juriboy is trying
to kiss her!
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Are you in Uza outfit
right now?! Don't let
anyone kiss you!!
From: Aachan
To: Mariko
Content:
Send me a picture!!
I'll treat you four time!
From: Mariko
To: Aachan
Content:
pix00987
Minami kakkoi
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
How do you know?!
From: Aachan
To: Minami
Content:
Aaaah sugoi!! You're so
kakkoi!!! You need to be dressed like
that when I'll come in two days!!
From: Minami
To: Aachan
Content:
Stop conspiring with Mari-chan.
I can't take it Atsuko, it's AKB property.
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Oh, Maritroll, trolin' like always XD
And oh, it's AKB property, huh..?
They should meet sooner, we're all waiting here for their meeting :yep: :yep: :twothumbs
Thank you for this update :bow:
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Minami so Kakkoi :hip drool2: :ptam-wub:
Acchan Mariko so CUTE :mon nyah:
me want more :mon devcandy:
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hell yeah ! that happen of course maritroll and acchan are conspiring but in twitter could be more funny!!..
yeah our gm are so sexy.. everyone are sexy but i have my favoritires cof cof yuko cof cof... make more please!!
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This is so.. so... HOT!!!!
Takamina is so BOLD!!!!
Please update SOON!!
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The update is finally here http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34288.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34288.new#new) in pervy section!!!! Enjoy!!! :nervous
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Can you PM me?
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YEah! fanfic rules my life too.. and you samexy fic too :D.. I read it twice :D.. love it but more maritroll... we nned more tease email for yuko and maritroll of course :D..
OMG!! minami.. now she is an adult.. with her words ... love it!! :D
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@sasumiofjp: Apparently I don't have the right to PM those who can't go on the pervy section...I'm sorry for that! :(
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OMG I love this fic!!!!!
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That was so amazing, the update at the perv section!!
Minami was amazing, and so perfect in it!!!
And Acchan, so secy!!!
And Maritroll, trolling as always!!!
Thank you a lot for this wonderful smexy update!! :bow: :bow:
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Mouu I can't see the part 3 D:
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Hey! New update! I'm sorry for the ones who can't see the pervy section... Sorry it's short but I write the next part right after I'll upload this one.
To: Aachan
From: Miichan
Content: Wifu! We need to see you!
Is Minami keeping
you in her house?
I miss you!
To: Miichan
From: Aachan
Content: Miss you too! I'm at Minami's, we
have a lot to discuss!! But I will see
you soon! We could go eat with Haruna
and Mariko. What do you say?
To: Aachan
From: Miichan
Content: Don't be too long
or I'll be jealous :'(
To: Aachan
From: Mariko
Content: Send me a picture
of our general in pyjama! I 'll
have to blackmail her sometime
soon^^
To: Mariko
From: Aachan
Content: How do you know
she's in pyjama?!
To: Aachan
From: Mariko
Content: I'm the
all-seeing-eye! Or
I have the Mousou, like
Juriboy^^
"Atsuko? Where are you?"
"In the kitchen!"
The tall girl watched the leader came into the room, she was in white tank and short, so kakkoi in the morning.
"How are you?" Asked the midget has she took a glass of orange juice in the fridge.
"Good. Ah, I almost forgot! I have a present for you, from NY!!"
"A present?"
"Yes, don't move, I go get it!"
She ran out of the kitchen and searched into her case for the present. She smiled thinking when she had bought it. She had instantly thought that it would look good on Minami.
"Here it is!" She said as she gave it to Minami
It was a black jacket with a really nice cut and a cuff on the sleeve written « General ».
"This is so cool!!" screamed Minami as she tried it.
She was all so excited by the gift, she loved it.
"It looks so good on you! Do you love it?"
"Yes, I love it! This is perfect! I want to wear it everyday!!^^"
Atsuko laughed, this short one was so handsome without even knowing it.
"Thank you so much!! I feel like a fool, I don't even have a gift for you..."
"It's okay, I was the one who was away, so..."
Minami was finishing her orange drink while Atsuko went sitting on the sofa.
"I'll go eat with Miichan tonight, she asked me to met her. I think it will be Haruna and Mariko too."
"Tonight? Already?" Frowned the general as she xame in the living room.
She was vexed that Atsuko was already talking about living her.
"It's just for dinner Minami. I'll come here after if you want too."
Minami spred Atsuko's legs and topped her, looking her right into her eyes.
"Look at my jacket, it says that I'm the general. So you better be here right after your dinner...because I said yesterday that I was gonna fuck you here until I'm too tired to hear you come"
She kissed the Ace roughly, stealing her lips with appetite. Atsuko felt her heart beat very fast, this kiss was turning her one, like Minami's words.
"Minami..."
"Don't discuss, I'm angry, remember?"
She kissed her again, feeling that Atsuko was shivering she felt better.
"Now I have to go work"
Aachan looked at her living the room. Obviously it was a little different, Minami had lots of responsabilities now but she was even sexier, so handsome and a little more confident. It was really sexy, she should thank Akimoto-sensei for this promotion. He had made Minami even more attractive that she was already.
I'll update soon! :nervous
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Ooh, more smexy oncoming, nee? :w00t:
Ah, I love this fierce and cool Minami :wub:
And Maritroll, like always :rofl:
Thank you for this update :bow:
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Takamina so agressive !!
Hahah she's also cool (as always)
Tnx for the update ^^
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More sex scenes coming??? Me gusta!!!
Please update soon!!!
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ok... TOTALLY LOVING THIS FIC!!
Please update soon!!
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I'm totally imagining Takamina wearing that jacket and the word "general" on it going to her head. :lol: Though she's usually pretty humble, so maybe it's just because she's with Acchan that she can act silly like that. XD
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This Mail Talks is so adorable!!! lol and Mariko-sama knows all :twisted:
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Bossy minami is sexy.. hell yeah! :D
jaja Maritroll love you :B.. Ue kara Mariko?!
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Nice one General Midget :lol: :lol:
I can imagine every scene :lol:
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I'm updating soon, actually I really like to write this fic, even it's gonna be a little difficult. If some of you find Minami weird because she's a little aggressive, but she didn't see atsuko in days, and I like to see her like this, I find her sexy... :nervous
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Waiting for new update!
Like it when takamina more aggressive,but like aggressive acchan more! XD
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so cool the idea of messages i love ;)
please update soon :)
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They are really a lovely couple ^^
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Hi, update today!! Sometimes I'm scared that my fanfics make people sad, even if it's atsumina love and that at the moment we read it we fell good and relief, I can't help but think, after it, that I want to see them together so bad, even just in a new picture, now that Atsuko is on twitter, i guess I'm desperatly waiting for a picture with her and Minami or just her saying that she saw the general. I don't want to depress anyone, I guess some of you are feeling the same, it just good to say it sometimes... But I still have faith in them and believe in them. Somehow writing those fics help me waiting for them. Thank you for reading anyway. :thumbup
At Oishi restaurant
"So how was NY?!" Asked Miichan with a big smile.
"Great, actually! It's...different. But good!"
Miichan smiled, she was so happy that her friend was back. She was relief, it was hard to be in AKB without Aachan and knowing that she was in another country was sad.
"Anyway, Atsuko, do you have what I've asked you?"
"No, Mariko, I'm not gonna cooperate with you so you can laugh at your general^^"
"Geez, I knew you wouldn't be able to! So, how was the reunion with mini Akimoto-sensei?"
Atsuko blushed, she was always shy when her friends was asking about their relationship.
"Etoo...good. It was...good to see her..."
"Oh, I see...Takamina possessed you widly, like I imagined it" smiled Mariko with an evil laugh.
"Marichan, you should give Aachan a rest, you sound like Yuko lately..."
"Nyaro, relax, I'm punishing Aachan because she left us to go seduce american people^^"
They all laugh, so happy to be there together, eating and joking.
They were all eating when Kojima's phone rang.
"Ah, it was about time..."sighed Mariko smiling.
"Moshi moshi? Ah Yuko-chan, how are you?"
"Yuko is always stalking Nyaro in case she would be with boys...^^ "said Mariko to Atsuko, winking.
"Ah, I'm with the girls and Aachan, we're eating. Yes, but, you said that you had something to do tonight... Hai! Aachan, Yuko said that you have to be home before 1pm."
"Hm, tell her I can't tonight, I have...something to do" blushed Atsuko.
"No, tell her that Takamina ordered her to be home so they could have sex together" said Mariko.
Kojima ignored her while Atsuko looked at Mariko with a weird face.
"I know that right now you find me scary and well informed...What can I say, it's a innate talent" smiled the trollface.
"Hai Yuko, I will come when we'll finish this, but not so long okay? Hai, see you."
Kojima hang up and started to eat again, before noticing that everyone was looking at her.
"What?!"
"Haruna...?" asked Atsuko smiling.
"What?"
"What is going on with you and Yuko, are you finally together?"
"No!"
"Yes" said Mariko.
"No! Anyway, I'm worried about Takamina, is she allright?"
"Yes... Why? "
"You know, all what's going on those days, her promotion, you leaving... She's stressed and sad... you should take care of her, she needs it..."
"...Nyaro, you're such a good person...you should let Yuko alone and date me, I'm so much better!" Sighed Mariko.
"Marichan! Don't joke with that" blushed Kojima.
Atsuko stood silent, she was thinking about Minami. Kojima was right, she had to take her of her more.
"Guys, I think I'm gonna go home..."
"Home?" Asked Miichan smiling.
"Yeah...sort of...^^" blushed Atsuko.
The girls smiled, they always supported the atsumina couple and they felt relief that they were always so close despite the graduation of the Ace.
"Okay, go! You're free!" Smiled Mariko. "But don't forget us, okay?"
"No way! I talk to you later. And if you don't know where I am or what do I do, ask Mariko, she knows everything...!
Bye!"
Atsuko called a taxi, she wanting to be with Minami as soon as possible. On the way she thought about last night, and how happy she were to be back. She knew that caming back to Japan meant work and be away again, but for now she just wanted to be with her loving general.
When she entered the living room, she saw Minami sitting at the kitchen table, sleeping on some paper sheets. She smiled and slowly caressed her cheek.
"Minami..."
"…"
Atsuko leaned forward until her lips touched Minami's ear.
"Minami...I love you..."she whispered.
"...Eh? Aachan...?"
The litlle leader woke up slowly, blinking because of the light in the room.
"What time is it...?"
"Almost 23pm, you shouldn't be working" she said as she took off her coat.
Minami stood up and stretched her muscles, looking at her girlfriend.
"You're beautiful...Was it fun?"
"Yes, it was good to see them! And I think Haruna might be used to Yuko skinship after all..."
"Yeah, lately she's not so reluctant with the midget."
"What? And you didn't tell me!"
"Atsuko, you're back since few hours, there is so much things I want to tell you, I saw you so little..."
Atsuko smiled and hugged the leader tightly.
"I'm here now, you can do anything you want with my body or my soul..."
"Yes, well, do you want some tea, I'm gonna make one for me. We could talk..."
"Hm...What's up with you beeing a general and angry so you need to satisfy your needs...?"
"Well...It's true but I'm tired and I want to listen to you...know what you've been doing in NY."
"More than have sex with me...?" asked Atsuko before kissing Minami's lips.
"Atsuko...I've missed you so much...I couldn't talk to you as much as I wanted, you were not with me everyday...It was really hard..."
Aachan felt really sad when she understood that Minami was about to cry, she seemed really tired and sad. She thought again about what Haruna had said and decided to stop being selfish and take time.
"Gomen, Minami. You must be really tired, and I've missed you too. Go sit and I'll bring the tea. I'm gonna tell you how was my trip, but you need to tell everything you know about the gossips in AKB!!^^"
Minami smiled, she desperatly needed some talk with Atsuko. It was crazy how much the Ace was missing in AKB rank, and even if she didn't tell anybody, she was suffering everyday, wishing that it was just a dream and that when she woke up, Atsuko would be there, smiling and dancing. It was another step for AKB48 but damn, it was so hard to accept... She was feeling nostalgic all day, even if she wanted to continue, and have faith in new members. Somehow she felt ashamed of feeling sad like this, she didn't have the right to think about Atsuko all day, and cry when she was alone. But it was recent, and she wasn't used to it yet.
They sat on the sofa and talk for three hours, they were both tired but they didn't want to sleep before telling all what they had in mind, the jokes, the stories, the gossips... It was so nice to be like this again, just the two of them laughing and holding hands.
Maybe in a couple of years their life could be like this, but everyday together, as a real couple...Who knows...
Next update will see new events coming, it's gonna be hectic!!
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great thank you for update i hope for the next
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A bit sad but still like it!!
Wait for lovey dovey moment..xD
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she left us to go seduce american people
:lol: oh that was a good one!!
"I know that right now you find me scary and well informed...What can I say, it's a innate talent" smiled the trollface.
Mariko-sama is a boss 8)2
We still gotta believe in our Atsumina!! <3
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Update!!
@Pdpond: did yout hink it was sad? Actually I thought it was a lovey-dovey moment...^^ :nervous Aah I get it; it's because they didn't have sex right?? :twisted:
"Atsuko...?"
"Hm..."
Minami slowly caressed her hair.
"Wake up, my shoulder is numb..."
Atsuko raised her head, gently rubbing his eyes before opening them. Minami looked at her; completely conquered. She lifted the Ace chin with a finger and kissed her gently.
"You know you always look like an angel when you woke up?"
"What time is it...? Did I sleep for a long time?"
"Not so much, an hour, but anyway I had to work on something so it's fine."
"Hmmmm..." she said as she hugged her girlfriend.
Minami felt surprised and happy of this gesture. Suddenly she desperatly needed to kiss her. She did with passion and enthusiasm, like she actually had realized that Atsuko was back.
"Hmmff...Minami..."said the Ace, breathless.
"Your lips are so soft, I could kiss you all day, it feels so great..."whispered the leader against Atsuko's lips, tickling them.
Aachan wasn't totally awake but she shivered, her heart was already beating like crazy, responding fastly to Minami's act. Despite all the desire that she had at this moment qhe coudn't hold a big yawn, right in frint of the midget.
"I really want you right now, but I'm so tired and dirty...can I take a shower please?"
"Sure" smiled Minami, "take your time, there is a big towel on the bathroom, take a bath if you want."
"Thank you Minami, you're so kind to me..."
She stood up and walked slowly toward the bathroom.
"Aachan, can I use your notebook please, I need to send few mails..."
"Sure, take it" she answered before closing the door.
Minami took Aachan's notebook and sat in a comfortable position. She had to send those mails to some teams to inform them of their activiies and schedule an appointment with Akimoto-sensei.
She was writing her first mail when a instant chat window opened. It was the chat that Atsuko was using all the time with friends and collegue, Minami wasn't familiar at all with that but the thing was right in front of her and someone was writing something.
His name was...James... Who was this James, never heard of him. The general didn't want to spy on her girlfriend but soon the words made her froze.
« Hi Aachan!! How are you? Did you get home well? Anyway, I miss you like crazy...:') »
Minami was feeling a bit jealous but thought that it was a new friend of Atsuko, and it was okay to feel that way.
« I hope you will be back in NY soon, I need to talk to you! You know...about that kiss, and what I've said, and done. It's weird not having you here, not talking to you everyday...Please give me news soon, and take care pretty girl, love you <3 »
Minami was not moving at all, she felt like she was falling in a enormous hole. Black hole. Suddenly all was going black, she couldn't think about anything, she wasn't able to move at all. This guy was an american, and he was talking to her Atsuko like he knew him for years, and....a kiss??? What was going on...?! She felt awful in a second, so much questions, so much pain, a rush of pain everywhere in her body...
"Minami? Is it okay if I borrow you some clothes because mine are all dirty and..."
Atsuko saw her girlfriend sat on the sofa with no expression, so pale and tense.
"Minami? What is it? Is it something wrong?" She frowned.
The leader didn't respond to her, it wasn't even sure that she had hear her. Atsuko approached her and threw a glance at the screen. When she red the words she frozed. It was bad, really bad, seeing Minami like this. She began to think about a good explonation and a way to end this quickly when Minami put the notebook on the little table and stood up, without a word.
"Minami, please, let me explain to you...This is not what you think!!!"
The leader stood few seconds like this, unable to know what to do, feeling her heart beating so hard in her head.
"You...You can stay her for the night...I will stay at Yuko's. But please, be away tomorrow when I get back" she said with a voice with no emotion.
"No, no, no, Minami, don't go!!" the Ace started to cry, the tears rolling on her cheeks. "Please, don't go, I want to explain to you!!"
"No need to"
Minami took her coat on and walked toward the entrance door. She looked at Atsuko once again.
"...I really thought you were loving me...Baka..."
The tears were all over her face, but she was crying in silent. She left the house with chaos on her mind. This night was gonna be hard and sleepless. She never had been so sad in her all life.
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No!!!!!! T_T
Takamina let Acchan explain!!!!
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NO!!!
:OMG: :angry1: :badluck: :frustrated: :pleeease:
:gyaaah: :temper: :on cloudeye: :on blackhole:
what just happened???
:banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
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WHAT ? !!! :mon spit: No it's terrible :mon fire: :mon mad:
what that takamina be going to make ??? and acchan :mon dunno:
haste to know the continuation :mon fyeah: great fic :mon thumb:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!! :mon innocent:
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What the heck is going on?!?!?! :OMG:
Atsuko!!! :angry1:
Minami and you, at least let her explain...... :pleeease:
Update SOON!!!!!! :fainted:
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Ah! Somehow I missed update 5, so I was gonna comment on how :heart: it was, but then came update 6 and aaaaah! :panic:
Drama is good in fics, isn't it? XD
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You wanna make me a little bit sad than part 5 huh?
Aghhh!! you made me sick!!
Bakamina lets acchan expain now!
Who the heck Jame?!!!!
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My heart, My Atsumina ..
Noooooo~ :frustrated: :OMG: :err:
I thought of something that might happened between that James and Atsuko ..
since Atsuko said that "it's not what you think" ....
could it be ......
okay, I don't want to ruin the writer's storyline :on lol:
Waiting for an update :mon innocent:
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what!! no way!! atsuko cant betrayed her right?..
oww generalmanager i feelsad for her.. listento atsuko... maybe this guy kiss her suddenly or something..
but atsuko didnt say nothing...
T_T
I love the kojiyuu part..nyanyan we know you love yuuchan..
Jaja i love maritroll :D and her comments
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wait... what!?!?!? who is this James guy??? He needs to disappear! He's getting in the way of my Atsumina!!
Takamina come back and let Acchan explain T.T
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Acchan what have you done?? :banghead: :banghead:
Minami need some time n acchan need some fixing to do
Just go back together again, atsumina forever :D
Thanx for the update ^^
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Bakamina let Acchan explain first :panic: James just had to ruin our lovely Atsumina moment. :thumbdown:
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FAUSTO-SAN!!! WHERE ARE YOU???XD.. :nervous
:banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
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Etoooo... :nervous I'm so sorry, I've been very busy lately and I know I said that I was going to update soon... my bad!! :banghead: Okay I made this fic the priority and it will be update before the end of the week!! :)
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nice fiction,
so takamina is heart broken because of james,
and she didnt even wanted to hear acchan explanation,
Maybe she just havnt calm to hear the explanation,
Acchan give her some times to calm for herself 1st,
Looking forward for the next update.
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I like it please continue. aahh very emotional.
Taka.. please don't be too rude to acchan. we know you want her so bad!!!
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yeah!!
my heart ._.
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Waahh!!! a misunderstanding!!
Acchan and Takamina really need to
work this out
They know they love each other afterall
Nice fic really love it :heart: :heart:
Please continue
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I'm so sad :cry: and angry :angry: how could Atsuko do this to Takamina. :?
But then again it might be so misunderstanding....
Minami should just give Atsuko chance to explain... But then she's very angry and hurtful, she probably would not even listen and take any explanation.
Atsuko should just let her come down a bit then may be there is a probability for Minami to even hear and try to understand whatever the situation is about.
Very good story... giving me lots of things to think about.
I hope it's not going to be one shot... pls continue the story it's very nice plot you have there.
And thank you for the fic.
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :theking
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Hello!!! XD I'm back so I can upload this fanfic, and in a few days it will be " You can't runaway everytime" :thumbup Sorry again for taking all this time, I hope you won't be disappointed :nervous
For those who can't remember the story, Aachan was in a trip to New York after graduating from AKB, and she was mailing Minami and others, and then she came back and went to Minami's place to have a really sweet moment :twisted: But then, Minami borrowed Atsuko's laptop and found a strange conversation between her and a certain James... :smhid She didn't let Aachan explain and left the house.
"Takamina... It's been an hour since you read this book page, don't stay like this and go talk to her... "said Yuko as she sighed, very sad to see her friend like this.
"No..."
"Why don't you let her explain?"
"I don't want to talk about this... I go to bed. See you tomorrow."
Yuko watched her leader leave with a sad face, it was really hard to see her like this. She was always so genkin, positive on everything and smiling to everyone.
From: Atsuko
To: Minami
Content:
Minami...Let me talk to you...
I love you...
Minami dropped her phone on her bed and felt her tears rolling on her cheeks. This was so hard to feel like this...
She never felt like this before, empty and numb.
She didn't want to think but everytime she closed her eyes, she was seeing Atsuko and this message on her computer.
She fell on her bed and before she could realize it, she fell asleep, too tired to resist.
"With time she will listen to you, trust me."
"I don't know Miichan, you should have seen her face, she was like disgusted by me..."
"Takamina loves you with all her heart, she cannot feel disgust toward you Aachan."
"...I don't know what to do. This is so painful, being away from her, knowing that she's angry against me. I need to stay focus on my job, but I can't stop thinking about it..."
Miichan sighed, her friend had called her to take a coffee and talk about her fight with Takamina. It's been one week now and all her friends were very sad of the situation. They were like the perfect couple, the picture of perfect love for everyone. Not to see them happy was a real shock and a deep sorrow. Atsuko had lost all her joy and smiles, Miichan hated this.
From: Atsuko
To: Minami
Content:
I miss you so much.
Don't hate me please.
From: Atsuko
To: Kojima
Content:
Please take care of Minami
for me.
Tell me if something happen.
Thank you.
"Everyone in position! We repeat this a last time an then it's over. Focus!"
Yuko frowned and looked at Kojima.
"Leader is scary, I don't think it's gonna be good for us if she doesn't talk to Aachan."
"Hm, you should see what to do with Aachan tonight. I don't like to see Takamina like this, and I think it's gonna kill her if she doesn't speak about it..."
"You're right but she's stubborn... I don't know why she don't want to listen to Aachan, she's not the kind of person to not listen to an explonation... Maybe she can't see Atsuko for the moment because it's too hard for her to give up on her."
Kojima looked Yuko with eyes wide open.
"What? Did I say something stupid?!"
"No... But it's unusual to see you so serious and you must be right about that. You know, you should be more like this and less pervert. I like you this way."
Despite of the sad situation, Yuko smiled and felt really happy by Haruna's words. She was the best.
Atsuko was alone on her bedroom, tired and desperate. She had sent mails to Minami, asked many news from her friends and try to find a way to speak to her but nothing... She had lost the love of her life.
A little sound disturbed her thoughts, it was her computer again.
« Hey sweetie! How are you today? You were supposed to call me today, did you forget? I need to talk to you. »
Atsuko sighed, it was not the time for this, and it was because of him that she couldn't see Minami.
« Hey James, I'm good. Sorry, I forgot. »
« Okay. Did you red the script I've gave you? »
« I've started two days ago. »
« What do you think? »
« It's...interesting. »
It wasn't. She didn't like it at all, a stupid love story between an american guy and a japonese girl, in Los Angeles, with clichés and big mistakes on japonese culture. But she couldn't say that, or else...
Ten more minutes.
Minami was running for an hour in a large park. It was 07am, her day off and she was running early in the morning. But she needed to evacuate all the stress and she didn't want to think about Atsuko.
She was feeling again and again the same sensation than when she saw the chat talk. Empty, like a knife in her heart. Everyone was begging her to listen to Atsuko, and see what she had to say, but it was too hard. It meant talk about this again, and wait for Atsuko to explain, say something that could erase all the pain in Minami's heart.
Maybe it was silly but the captain was unable to say something wrong or mean to the one they loved, but she was angry against the Ace, hurt and she felt betrayed. So how could she be there, listen to her and not feeling sad and angry... She wanted to protect Atsuko against herself, she didn't want to lose herself just because she was hurt. Yes, it was silly.
She finally decided to stop running, tired and pissed.
She came back to her appartement and took a shower, trying to relax under the hot water. She thought about the first day Atsuko had admit her feelings toward her. It was a winter day, there was snow all over the streets and she was wearing a cute white cap and a large scarf. Minami had decided to take her to the cinema to see an horror movie. Atsuko didn't lose Minami's hand during all the projection because she was too scared, and the captain had really enjoyed that. Then they had take a coffee and walk in a small park, and Atsuko had smiled and said that she was really in love with the midget. It was actually the first time Minami was feeling really alive and complete, maybe it was a little cliché but knowing that such a great girl like Atsuko had chose her and decide to love her more than anyone else was very intense.
She suddenly opened her eyes and realize that she was still in the shower.
It was the time to forget about Atsuko, it was too painful.
"Mariko, don't you think we have to do something about it?"
"I don't know Nyaro, things are always complicated with those two.."
They were both doing shopping together in a big mall and even if they loved this activity, they cannot think about something else than the Atsumina problem.
"Even if Aachan is gone, they're still my model, and Takamina is very important to me, I'm not like Yuko, trying to resolve everyone's issue but here, I don't feel like waiting for them to be good again. "
"Me neither..."sighed Mariko. "Plus, they're baka when it comes to feelings and affection... And I'm sure Atsuko has a good reason for her behavior, I can't understand why Takamina reacted that way..."
"I do" said Kojima while checking if a little dress could match with her. "Minami had always loved Atsuko, she's all she wants and the fact that she's no longer in AKB was really painful, I can't even imagine it... It's hard to accept loving someone and trusting her even if she's away or far all the time. Minami has no confidence on herself, so she's thinking that maybe Atsuko has found someone better than her somewhere else."
"…"
"Don't you think?" Asked Haruna, confused by Maritroll silent.
"Nyaro, why do you have to let this pervert midget have you...? You're far too smart to her!"
"Stop making fun of me Mari-chan^^ And Yuko is not dumb, maybe I'm the only one who knows that she could be sensible and discreet sometimes."
"Hm...^^ So what do we do?"
"Meeting with everyone, they are our priority, or else it gonna take ages...!"
What do you think? :panic:
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Very good update there... Thank You
Minami is insecure about everything... I think that's about right...
She always think Atsuko is lots better than her... so why would Atsuko want to be with Minami?!
Well that makes sense. But honestly Minami is too impulsive and I think she has very bad hypertension (getting angry too quick).
I also think Minami somehow... trying to find a reason to break up with Atsuko 1st.
Better she break up with Atsuko than waiting for Atsuko later in the future to find someone better and then break up with her.
At least if she break up with Atsuko, she can keep her dignity... Probably... it seem to be like that..
Anyhow, Can't wait to see your next update.
:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
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wait worth it
is really good chapter :thumbup
you come back for this fanfic :panic: :D
thanks is really cool and thanks for update :twothumbs :twothumbs
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yeah! you are back!.. well atsuko need to stay out minami´s house and explain everything...
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Yes!!! Update :twothumbs
What so special about james?
I kinda hate it where acchan said "or else"
Why must takamina feel insecure about herself?
Acchan choose her not someone else
Thanx for the update ^^
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You are BACK!!!
I don't get why Minami is feeling insecure.. Atsuko chose her, that means she is special to her.
But I do understand why she doesn't want to see Atsuko. She is too angry now. And if they meet Minami will snap at her.
I really want to now what happen between Atsuko and James....
Update SOON!!!
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Yeah !!! you finally back thank for update :mon firecrack:
This chapter it's so sad for Atsumina :mon cute:
Please update soon :mon pray2:
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nice update,
miss this fic so much,
So Acchan still cant contact Takamina,
so About James is all bout Drama??
OMG!!! Takamina why u have to do something like that,
and now everyone is worry about them.
Looking forward for the next update.
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Takamina stop being stubborn already and let your wife speak! Lol
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:) Thank you everyone for all your comments!! I'm glad to be back and read all your fanfics again :P
"Everyone on set in five minutes!" Shouted the staff guy.
The girls were still preparing, putting some makeup and doing their hair. This was an interview today with the general, and few more girls who had an actuality recently.
"Miichan, you have forget your glasses" said Minami, giving it to the gachapin.
"Oh, thank you Takamina, I'm not very awake this morning."
She smiled and looked at the general, she seemed very tired and sad, but she was like always, perfect in her leader rôle.
"Don't ask me if I'm alright or it would be the third time already" said Minami.
"Don't blame me, I'm worried, like everyone here!"
"I know, but I'm okay. Girls! On set!"
They sat beside the presentator and smiled.
"Hi everyone, we're today with the famous girls of AKB48 for an hour and we have a lot of questions for them!"
It was going well, the girls were funny and the time was passing by. Sometimes Mariko or Haruna was discreetly checking on Takamina to see if she was doing okay, but this one was being professional and was all smiling.
"So, General Manager, tell us how AKB is going now after the shuffle and Maeda Atsuko's graduation. Do you see her now that she is no longer in AKB?"
The all group frozed, they could feel the tension of them all. But Minami smiled and answered properly.
"Well, it was a very big change for the group, we were a little moved by all this but in the end it's still AKB and we have to move on, so much things to do^^ And yes, we still see Aachan when our shedule are okay, she's still part of our team and a great friend to us all so..."
Yes...I did it, it was hard but I'm glad that no one noticed how I felt. I even said her name...Atsuko...
Yuko went home after the reherseal, she was a little tired and starving. She opened the front door and came into the living room. It was all dark in here, the tv was on and she recognize the tokyo dome concert on the screen. More precisely the Atsumina duet part.
She found Atsuko on the sofa, sleeping, with makeup tears on her cheeks. Yuko sighed and turn off the tv, and then crouched next to the Ace.
"Aachan..." she called her softly.
"Hm..."
"Aachan, wake up..."
"Ah, Yuko..."she whispered, opening her eyes slowly.
"Why are you here, you should be in your bed, you're gonna hurt your back like this."
She sat on the couch and took the sleepy Aachan between her legs to massage her back.
"Wow you're so tense... "
"It's because of the drama, we're doing a lot of action scene those days..."
"Be careful, you're fragile so don't hurt yourself!"
She massaged her friend slowly, trying to relax her.
"How is Minami?"
Yuko stopped her hands a second. She was expecting this question but not so fast, and she felt a little uncomfortable.
"Good...Actually she said your name out loud today...without crying."
"Yuko..."
"I'm sorry Aachan, but I don't know what to say...She's bad, but it's Takamina, she's our leader and general so she doesn't show her feelings at work, even when we ask her she deny it. She's bad but she doesn't want to talk about it..."
"…"
"You should talk to her. I know you, you love her, I don't understand why you don't do anything..."
"I can't."
"Why?!"
"I'm ashamed. And scared that she won't love me again."
"Gosh, why do you have to be so dramatic all the time you two... Now go take a shower, I'm gonna cook you something."
Atsuko obeyed and left. Yuko waited for her to be in the shower before taking her phone to make an urgent call.
"Mariko, we have to oraganize one of those trap because those two are not capable to be adultes... Yes, tomorrow. Tell Minami that we need to talk about something for the group, I'm taking care of Aachan, and we meet in a bar, okay?"
She hang up, relief that something will be done for that matter. Now she has to cook something for this baka.
The doorbell rang and the woman came to the door, suprised by this. Who could possibly visiting her at this thime?
"Miichan!" She smiled.
"Mou, don't call me like that Mom, I'm too old for this! Pouted Minami."
She came into her childhood house and smiled, it was good to be home. She had her own appartement for three years now, it was a way to be and feel more adult but sometimes she missed her old bedroom and her mom dishes.
"So, you finally have the time to pass by, it's good" said her mother, sitting at the kitchen table, followed by her daughter.
"I'm sorry, this month had been crazy you know..."
"I know, it's okay, I just wish I'd see you more."
She looked at Minami with really sweet eyes, happy to see her and proud to see how pretty she was. But something was missing, something was wrong.
"I'm gonna make you a big katsudon, but you have to tell me what's wrong with Atsuko, she said, frowning and standing up to cook."
"Mom! How do you know?!"
"I always know! I know your « AKB is tiring » face, your « I'm not a good leader » face and I surely know your « It's not okay with Atsuko » face^^"
Minami sighed. She felt a bit guilty to come here because she was sad and looking for her mom affection and tips, but it was good to see that she knew her so much, and she felt secured.
She waited for her katsudon to tell her mom. It was delicious, as always.
"Atsuko came back from New York and she went at my place. It was really good to see her again, she seemed happy and tired. And then I asked her if I could use her laptop and when I was writing, I was a chat between her and an american guy, it was weird..."
"Weird? Why?"
"Dunno... He was really intimate with her, calling her pretty girl and said something about a kiss..."
"… So you are angry right now? Did you ask her who he was?"
"No, I left. I couldn't face her at the moment, it was so painful Mom! I didn't expect that at all, it was only few hours after she arrived, and then I see that and my brain just stopped... I know I propably should have listen to her, everyone is telling me this since that day, but I'm so afraid that it's because she found someone else or because she wants to go in america! I don't find the courage to face the reality. "
"Miichan... I know you, and I know Aachan, she's a great girl, she loves you. I don't know what's going on, and maybe she did something bad, but you can't stay like this. You have to face the truth."
"I know."
"You're gonna take a bath, relax and then you'll sleep in your old bed, it could be good for you, rest."
"But I have to get up early tomorrow and..."
"I know, I will let you go, just for one night, stay with me and relax, okay?"
"Okay" sighed Minami.
It was good to be home.
From: Mariko
To: Minami
Content:
We need to talk about work tomorrow.
Meet us in « Cafe bar » at 9pm.
Don't say no!
From: Minami
To: Mariko
Content:
I'm in my bath, us who?
Talk about what? Why a
bar?!
From: Mariko
To: Minami
Content:
Enjoy it!
Too many questions leader!
Just come!
From: Mariko
To: Yuko
Content:
Minami is trapped!
Your turn!
Atsuko left the bathroom in a white towel and came in the kitchen, drying her her.
"Ah Aachan" said Yuko "and then she looked at her and smiled. You're lucky I have Nyan-Nyan, isn't your boobs bigger than before?"
"Yuko, you're always such a pervert!"
"Not true! I'm just enjoying the human beauty. Everyone like boobs!"
"Not as much as you^^"
"It's a shame. Girls are perfect, we should look at them and tell them more."
The Ace laughed, it was actually the first time since that day, and it was good.
"Ne, Aachan, me and the team we're going to the « Cafe bar » tomorrow, wanna come?"
"Hm...I don't know, I don't really feel like partying..."
"Come on, we miss you, we just want to be with you again" pouted Yuko.
"Hm...okay!" She smiled. It was good to have all this friends next to her. After all, if she could forget this story for one night, it would be a relief.
She was relaxing in her hot bath, smelling the good sent of perfume and shampoo. It smelled like her childhood, like peace and security. She thought about the time she was a kid, sat in a corner of her room, dreaming all day. It was a nice time of her life, but the happiest was when she had joined AKB48. She was young and a little shy but being in this group had been the best idea she had. It was of course the first time she met everybody of the first generation, and of course, Aachan.
Immediatly she liked everyone in there and wanted to help them all pursuing their dreams. Apparently they liked her too and it was naturally that she slowly took the role of the leader.
She always prefered Atsuko, even if she never said it, of course. They were all her friends but Atsuko was different. She was like a promise to something different, something big and not expected.
She seemed always so lost in her lalaland, dreaming but always serious about work. Minami had wanted to protect her right away, know her and be her friend. And it hab been done quiet naturally, they were always together, in AKB and during their free time, always on the phone or talking by mail. Atsuko never took a decision without consulting Minami, and the leader was always taking care of her. This was friendship until the midget understood that she wanted more than that. She wasn't gay, she just had chosen Atsuko to be the person she wanted to take care of, and love for the rest of her life. In the beginning she was loving her in silent, because it wasn't easy to say and because Aachan was her friend, and she was to afraid to lose her by confessing her love. But then Atsuko had said this the snowing day, and it changed everything. Well, not really, but they were lovers, secretly and it was the most important time of her life, being here, in AKB with Aachan, seeing her everyday... After the graduation it was different but still, they were loving each other more than anything. Well...Maybe now it was a one-side love...
Update soon now that I'm in a story hundred per cent^^ :nervous
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reading two chapters at the same time yay!!
Takamina really should listen to Acchan explain and not be so afraid
Hopefully Mariko and Yuko's plan works
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Well Yuko and Mariko are trying to create chance for them to meet...
So that they can talk to each other about the problem that they are having...
Great thinking there
The fic is getting interesting... Thank you
Can't wait to see the next
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Thank for update :mon fyeah:
Good job Yuko and Mariko :mon thumb:
Can't wait to see the next please udate soon :mon pray2:
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I'm happy, fausto san already update again :wub:
This kind of friends are always the best
I can't wait about what happen in the cafe
Thank you for the update ^^
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I hope acchan can do it in the cafe and talk with her
thanks for update :inlove:
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reading two chapters at the same time yay!!
Takamina really should listen to Acchan explain and not be so afraid
Hopefully Mariko and Yuko's plan works
pf cpurse they are genius.. yuuchan and maritroll :B make atsumina come back please!!
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I hope they can clear their misunderstanding as soon as possible......
I want AtsuMina to be back together.......
Tnx for the update ^-^
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Good job Yuko and Mariko-sama!
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Hey, updating tonight!! :)
Minami as on her way to the bar, she didn't know yet what to think about this evening, it as weird to go on a bar to talk about work but Mariko was weird sometimes... Moreover, the troll asked her in a last mail to « dress cool » tonight, it as very strange, but Minami had followed the rule. She was dressed with black slim and some leather boots, and a white shirt, black tie and fitted jacket. For once, her hair was down, and she had put a little black makeup on her eyes. Honestly she was really beautiful, every man would have admit it.
Anyway, the bar was right in front of her. She had a bad feeling about this, but it was probably silly...
"Hey you!...Yeah, you, pretty lady!" Said the tall man in black at the enter of the bar.
"M...Me?"
"Yes, come in, you're beautiful! And have a nice evening"! He said, smiling kindly.
Minami turned red, she was embarrassed but the man seemed nice and she smiled back at him, coming into the bar.
There was a nice atmosphere in it, nice music and decoration. She glanced overall the crowd to find his friends, they were in a corner, all around a table, laughing and talking. Minami smiled, seeing them all together and happy was a relief. But then she saw her. Next to Miichan and another girl that she didn't know.
Atsuko.
She was here, with a girl. With her friends.
Minami felt her heart accelerated in her chest, she didn't expect it at all, but it was silly. Mariko and Yuko had been plotting this for a while... She should have known this.
Her feet moved alone, talking her body toward their table, she looked at Atsuko, she was moving slowly. She saw Aachan talking to Kojima and then smile to her friend, and then her look went right in front of her, on Minami, who was still moving. She lost her smile, her face was frozen, and Minami understood that the tall girl was not aware of the leader presence tonight. She felt a little relief, so Aachan wasn't a part of the set up. But this sensation was short, she couldn't ignore that Atsuko was astonishing, amazing, really beautiful.
She was wearing a black little dress, simple and a little necklace. The necklace Minami gave her one year ago, as a gift.
Does her heart was still beating...? She couldn't know because she had lost her self control and her faculty to think. The love of her life was here, few feets from her, wonderful and looking at her, and she missed her like crazy. It was so painful that she wanted to cry right here, in front of everybody.
"Wow leader!! You're so kakkoi!!!" yelled Yuko with a big smile on her face.
"Ah Takamina! Come and sit!" Said Mariko with a big smile.
Minami was still looking at the Ace, same for the tall girl. She did a enormous effort to look at the others and try to smile.
"H-Hey everyone. Sorry I'm late..."
She sat next to Mariko ith slow gestures, afraid of falling because she felt so weak.
"How are you captain?" Asked Miichan. None of them seemed embarrassed of setting up her.
"G-Good, thank you."
She was escaping Atsuko's look.
"I was just saying to the others that..."
Minami was already not listening to Miichan, Mariko leaned forward the captain.
"Are you okay?" She whispered.
"I swear I'm gonna kill you! You're suppose to be my friends!"
"Exactly. One day you will thank us for that. Believe me."
She frowned and pretend to listen at Yuko speech.
"And leader, this is Aachan's friend, Nakata."
"Hello, Takahashi-san, I'm very happy to meet you. You-You're really ikemen tonight, and Atsuko told me a lot about you."
Minami looked briefly at Atsuko, surprised, and then looked at Nakata, red as a tomatoe.
"Don't call me that way^^ I'm Takamina, and thank you very much, you're very kind."
Nakata became red as well and Yuko bursted at laught.
"Hahaha, leader, you're her oshimen, you know."
"Ah... Thank you very much for supporting me!"
"Easy cap', don't be such a gentleman, I look like an idiot next to you!" Smiled Yuko.
"Shut up Yuko, you're such a pervert sometimes."
Everyone looked surprised, it was Atsuko's first words since Minami had arrived. She seemed pissed of by Yuko's comment.
"Eeeeh, Nyan Nyan, Aachan is calling me a pervert!" Pouted the silly one.
"It's true, you're such a big mouth all the time, said Haruna lazily.
The girls talked about an hour all together, Minami and Atsuko were rarely participating. Yuko, Mariko and Miichan decided to go dance with the crowd for a while, and Haruna tried to speak with Minami while Kanata was talking to Aachan.
"Takamina, I wanted to say sorry about that, Yuko is such a baka, she always have silly ideas..."
"I know... I can't blame her, but I don't know what she's expecting..."
"How are you?" Asked the beautiful girl kindly.
Haruna was a really great friend, always apologizing about Yuko's behavior and always worried about her friends.
"I'm okay Haruna."
"You look tired, and you are, stop using your free days running and killing yourself okay, rest and rest again! You need it!"
Minami smiled, Haruna always knew everything. The midget noticed that Atsuko was discreetly listening to their conversation. Nakata's phone rang and she red her mail quickly.
"Oh...I have to go, my mom is not well those days and I have to look after her..."
She stood up and smiled, embarrassed.
"I'm really sorry and thank you again for this great evening, Takamina-san, it was an honor to meet you, and all of you, thank you again!"
She ran away, really red. Atsuko looked at her and then stood up, lazily.
"I'm going to get us some drinks."
She passed next to Minami, and this one could smell her scent, it was so good...
"...You know, Yuko forced her to go out with us because she is so sad all the time... But she didn't know you would be set up."
"I know."
"Don't you want...to try to talk to her...?"
"...I can't. I'm afraid I can't. My mom says I'm a coward, but it's hard..."
"I know. It's okay, take your time."
Suddenly Minami heard Atsuko's voice.
"No, I don't want to!"
"Come on girl, I'm a nice guy, it's just a drink!"
"No, I'm with my friends."
She was at the bar and an old guy was harrassing her, talking to her way too close and badly.
"Relax! You Japanese are so shy, you're beautiful and I'm free, drink with me baby" he said, putting his hand on Atsuko's arm.
"BACK OFF!!" yelled Minami, putting away his hand, standing in front of Atsuko, protecting her.
"Wow, who are you? You're so pretty to2, laughed the guy. Obviously he was a little drunk.
"I said back off!! Don't you dare touching her again!! She said no okay, don't you have some respect?!"
"Wow relax girl, I was just talking to her, you're so nervous! Do you want a drink too?^^"
"No, leave us alone. You should be ashame of yourself."
She took Atsuko's hand and guided her at Haruna's table.
"Be careful next time" she said to Atsuko with a serious and irritated voice. "I'm going, goodnight."
Atsuko was frozen, Minami had came for her, to rescue her. She was so cool and strong against this guy, protecting her with her body, talking with a deep voice. And she had held her hand, few seconds. It was so powerful that she was here, her jaw dropped, and her heart beating like crazy.
"Aachan?!"
"W-What?"
"Run after her!!" said Kojima with a smile.
"A-Ah, right!"
She ran as fast as she could to find Minami in the crowd. She went out and saw her walking away in the street.
"Minami!"
Minami heard her calling and she felt like a knife in her heart, it was so good to hear her say her name. But she didn't stop.
"Minami! Minami! Stop, please!"
She did this time.
Atsuko reached her and tried to catch her breath.
"Minami..."
"..."
"You're so beautiful tonight... And thank you very much for earlier, you were really cool..."
"Can I go now?" She asked as she began to left.
"NO!" said the Ace holding her hand."Minami... I don't expect you to love me, you deserve better, you're such a great person..."
She was crying now, big tears were rolling on her cheeks. Minami felt so sad.
"I knew this day would come, and I understand you, but I can't help myself beeing sad."
She smiled in the middle of her tears, a sad smile. Minami had no other thought that hugging her, say that she was loving her. But it wouldn't be fair.
"I'm leaving you in peace Minami... Take care of you, please..."
She turned back and walked away slowly. Minami was crying now.
"Aachan..."
The tall girl looked at her sadly.
"... You are really beautiful tonight. As always. Please be careful about the person you spend time with. I can't be here everytime..."
She left the girl here, and went home, sobbing and feel all the sorrow in her heart, crashing her to the ground.
Tell me what you think please :panic:
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WTH...NO!!!
Atsumina!
Pls dont break them..
As usual..nice update.
I can really imagine how cool mimami in this chapter! XD
Thank u for the update!! :w00t:
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T_T It's sad
don't leave each other please
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WTH...NO!!!
Atsumina!
Pls dont break them..
As usual..nice update.
I can really imagine how cool mimami in this chapter! XD
Thank u for the update!! :w00t:
OMG!! my atsumina´s heart T_T yeah minami is so kakkoi!! but but... -_-
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don't do that
don't break up atsumina. :shocked
but the episode
is really good :twothumbs
thanks for upload.
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Thank for update :mon fyeah:
What the heck with Bakamina :mon mad:
Great chapter :mon thumb:
Please update soon :mon pray2:
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What??? They still break up :angry:
I don't get it, I thought they make up
Why...why...why???
Thanx for the update :)
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Atsumina!!!! :cry: :cry: dun break them :bleed eyes:
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My AtsuMina!!! :tantrum:
Dont break them up!! :scolding:
Please update soon! :prayers:
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Waaah nooo they still broke up but but... :cry:
what's gonna happen now??
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Minami is indeed a bakamina...baka enough to let Aachan go... :cry:
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:angry: Can u two just listen to each then hug , kiss and have sex together I don't freaking care just make up already.... I'm so frustrated with your love life but why do I still love u two WHYY!!! :banghead: Is this what they call if you got into it u can never go back ...
:twothumbs
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Nice Update,
Acchan & Takamina is breaking up?
I think is a good choice,
due after their break up,
u can add more chapter on it,
And Mariko & Yuko nice trap.
This chapters is quite sad,
but sad is set up for the next happiness,
Looking forward for the next update.
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my Atsumina :on blackhole:
how can you break my Atsumina :on speedy:
I cant describe but i feel Takamina just want to break up :on shady:
hope it is not true :on hobo:
waiting for your update
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Oh... why they break up... please put them together...
I like Atsumina the best here... please don't break them up....
anyhow, great sad chapter here.... but Minami is so Kakkoi when she came to the rescue.
can't wait for your next update
Thank you
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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nooooooo!!!
Why they broke up so easily..
For the first time i thought that everything will be back again but why it's turn like thatt ??
Good work, you give me heart attack jajaja
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Hello!! Thank you for all your comments, I knew that some of you wouldn't be so happy because it was a kind of a sad update, but as Moonchild said it, we need to have some drama scene to have more lovey-dovey moments :lol: Enjoy :D
"Takahashi-san, I wanted to see you today to talk about this month."
"Yes..."
Minami was a little tense, sat in front of her boss, alone in her office, early in the morning.
"So as you know it's been a weird periode for AKB since the Tokyo Dome, the shuffle and Maeda-san graduation."
"Yes."
"Now that you are the manager, we have to see what to do in the future, what's wrong and good and handle the situation."
"..."
"I would like to have your impression on the past events since the concert."
Minami was expecting this kind of meeting and question from Akimoto-sensei, and she knew what was the problem.
"It's been a tough moment, all the girls were a little disoriented, the shuffle was changing almost everything, and they are still shocked that At... Maeda-san's graduation. But I try to motive them and we all work hard to be at the top everyday, it's gonna be okay for everyone."
"I see...And you, how do you think you've evolved?"
"...Akimoto-sensei, I know that I wasn't good enough since the concert, that you offered me a great job and I didn't do everything I could to take care of everyone. But I'm asking you to wait just a little bit and I'm gonna be better, work on my mistakes and carry everybody as you wish I do."
Akimoto-san looked at the short girl who was keeping her head down, probably ashamed of herself and red as a tomatoe.
"Takamina... I asked you how you were because I'm worried."
"Eh?" said the midget looking at him with her fail expression.
"You look tired and sick, you are always at the theater looking after everyone, it's great because you have to do it, but I don't need you if you're sick and exhausted. I always saw you as my second, to take care of AKB and bring them to their dream, but you're living an hard moment, and I want you to be careful. I don't want you to lose your passion for this group and just do your job because you feel you have to."
"Y-Yes... Sorry for that."
"You did a great job at the concert and ever since, but today I want you to take care of you a little more okay. Don't be so hard on yourself, AKB is AKB today thanks to you, don't forget it."
"Yes sir."
"You can go now, I will see you soon, I'm thinking of taking some vacation and you'll be part of the adventure, you need some."
Minami thanked her boss and started to leave the room.
"And Takahashi-san?"
"Yes?" She said as she turned back to him.
"Don't be so stubborn with Maeda-san, she always worried about you and loved you, I think you always give second chance to people, don't do an exception here."
Minami was voiceless, how did he know that? He was actually telling her to speak to Atsuko. This man had always know everything. It was so scary sometimes!
From: Minami
To: Miichan
Content:
Akimoto-sensei knows
about me and Atsuko!!
From: Miichan
To: Minami
Content:
Knows about what?
Everyone knows about
the two of you having
a romantic affair :3^^
From: Minami
To: Miichan
Content:
Miichan! I mean that
he knows that we are...
I mean...we don't talk to
each other anymore.
How does he know?!
From: Miichan
To: Minami
Content:
Maybe because you
look tired and sad and
unhappy. Maybe because
Atsuko is tired, sad and
unhappy.
From: Miichan
To: Minami
Content:
Raah... Don't want
to talk about this
anymore. What are
you doing?
From: Miichan
To: Kojima/ Yuko/Mariko
Content:
Akimoto-sensei knows
about Atsumina!! He
probably asked her to
fix the situation!!
From: Miichan
To: Minami
Content:
Preparing to see Yuko,
she's doing a Wii tournament.
From: Yuko
To: Miichan/Kojima/Mariko
Content:
Akimoto-sensei is such an
Atsumina fan! I imagine
our midget face when he said
that^^
Miichan arrived at Yuko's house at 21pm, she was very hungry.
"Gachapin! Nice to see you!" Said Yuko with a big smile.
"Don't call me like that! Are you alone?"
"No, Aachan is in her room, I don't think she's good today..."
Miichan frowned and followed Yuko in the evening.
"But, did you talk to her?"
"Hm no" she said she wanted to rest. "Don't be worried, you'll see your wife later. Come and play!"
"I'm starving" said Miichan sitting in the couch.
"I've order some pizza!"
"Great!"
Aachan was really tired, lying on her bed. Those weeks had been really hard, and she felt terribly weak. Her computer was on and she was watching the latest “Shin Domoto Kyoudai” to see Minami.
“ Aachan baby, I really want you to answer me. You can't ignore me, you know what it means!”
“ Hello James.”
“ What are you doing darling, put your cam on.”
“ I don't feel so good, could we talk later?”
“ Aachan, don't piss me off, I don't have the time to play with you, do you want to have a carrier or do you want to finish in some bad porno like your friends?”
Atsuko felt tears rolling on her cheeks, it was like this since she had came back from NY. This guy seemed nice but he only wanted to abuse her, see her on cam and harass her all the time. She wanted to finish this but he was actually her contact in Ny that could help her with her carrier, and she hadn't left AKB to fail now.
“ Baby, you just have to put your cam on, show me what you got, it's like a training to be a good actress. In America you always have naked and love scene in movies, so you better be used to it.”
“ James, I have to go out buy some food, wait a little longer okay?”
“ Don't try to fuck me bitch, I'm sick of you acting like a child, so you better be here in 30 minutes. I only have to call some people in Tokyo to ruin you!!”
Atsuko tried to stop crying and dressed up to go out, think a little. She had heard that Miichan was downstairs with Yuko and she didn't felt like to see her right now, she was feeling horrible. She put an hold tee-shirt who had belong to Minami and a sweet-shirt with a hood and went out discreetly. The two girls were obviously too busy eating pizza to notice her leaving.
"Miichan, don't eat all of it!! I only ate two pieces, it's your fourth already!!"
"Relax yuko, I've been busy all day, I'm so hungry!"
Yuko pouted and bit in another piece.
"If I win this game you stop eating pizza you midget!" Frowned the pervert.
"Midget? Me? Who says?! By the way, I wonder if Atsuko is hungry, maybe I should give her a piece..."
"Eh?! You deprived me of pizza and you want to give some to Aachan?"
"Stop sulking, I'm going to ask her" smiled Miichan.
"Fine..."pouted Yuko again, taking her wii pad to start a new game.
Miichan climbed the stairs and slowly knocked at Aachan's door.
"Aachan, it's me, we've got some pizza here, do you want some?"
"..."
"I know you're tired but you should eat some, you have to take care of yourself."
"..."
"Enough, I'm coming wifu!!"
Miichan came into the dark room and looked for Aachan.
"Aachan? Aachan?"
Obviously she wasn't here, when did she go...? The room was a little mess, with a lot of dvd, mostly movies and AKB48 lives, and her computer on.
Aachan had been discreet, sad and mysterious lately, and Miichan was reallu curious to see what she was doing on her computer. She sat in front of the laptop and started to read what was on the screen.
It looked like a chat.
Actually Minami had mentioned this guy, James, who was a friend of Atsuko in New-York, and it seemed like they were chating here.
The funny girl red all of the conversation since Atsuko had come back from America, and the more she was reading the more she was scared. This guy was actually harrassing her, asking her to show on camera or he would stop helping her with her carrier...!! Miichan couldn't believe it, Atsuko was a victim of a real pervert, nothing compared to Yuko and her strange ideas.
Wait! It meant that Minami was thinking that Atsuko was cheating on her with that asshole while she was alone trying to fight against this american bastard...?! She had to tell Minami, because Atsuko needed help.
"Yuko!!" she screamed running in the stairs to see her friend. "I need to see Takamina, Aachan is in trouble, I have to go!"
"What?! What's happening?!" Asked Yuko with eyes wide opened.
"Don't have time! But stay here and tell me if Atsuko is coming back!"
"Coming back?! Where is she?!!"
"Dunno!! Later!" Screamed Miichan as she already was out of the house, running to get a taxi.
From: Miichan
To: Kojima/Mariko
Content:
Aachan is in trouble!
Go to Yuko's house!
She was in a taxi on her way to Minami's, trying to figure out which way to help Atsuko but nothing was coming, it was an american man, quiet famous in the artistic buisness apperently and he was in charge of Atsuko's carrier, so what can they do against him...?
From: Mariko
To: Miichan
Content:
On our way but what's
going on?!
What do you want us to
do?
From: Miichan
To: Mariko
Content:
Aachan need our help,
try to call her and tell
her to come back to the
house!
"Miss, we're arrived, said the taxi man."
"Ah thank you!"
She get out of the car, payed the man and ran at the doorbell.
"TAKAMINA!! Takamina!! Come over here!!"
After few seconds, the door opened and Miichan saw an asleep Minami, with a question mark on her face.
"Can't you just ring like everybody...?"
"Don't have the time" said seriously Miichan as she entered the house, followed by the leader.
"What's up with you? It's 23pm! "
Miichan regained her breath and looked to the leader;
"Okay sit, I have to talk to you about Atsuko."
"What?" Sighed the midget. "I have nothing to say, can't you give me a break with this, and it's late..."
"Shut up midget!! Listen to me! I was at yuko's and we were eating pizza, I wanted to give some to my wife and..."
"She's not your wife..."
"Well" smirked Miichan, "it seems like she's not your anymore so... Anyway! I went to her room to give it to her and she was left, I don't know when or how, but she was, and I looked at her laptop, she was chating with this guy, this James again."
"Miichan, do you have to tell me that? Please!"
"Wait! I red the conversation and you're wrong!!"
"I'm wrong? Miichan, it's obvious that there is something between them..."
"This guy is a bastard and an asshole!! I saw the conversation today, he's asking her to show on the cam, he's harrassing her because he knows that she can't complain or else he's gonna destroy her carrier in America!"
Minami dropped her jaw, she wasn't expecting this at all, she had always thought that Aachan had been interested in that guy when she was in NY. It was like she had received a ball on her face, she was feeling angry and so surprised at the same time. So angry against that guy, this duchbag was taking advantage of her Atsuko, asking her some pervert things on the internet, and threating her about her carrier!!! But obviously that was not the only problem, she was so angry against herself... Atsuko had tell her that it wasn't what she thought, she wanted to explain it to her, but Minami didn't want to listen, just because she had felt betrayed. It was so a shame...
"Takamina!!"
"What?"
"What are we gonna do? This guy is a jerk but we can't do anything..."
"Give me five minutes and wait for me in front of the house!!"
She ran into her room, changed quickly her clothes. She chose her black slim jeans and the same jacket she had the night she was in the bar with Atsuko. Quickly she took her bag and decided to take her scooter, she hadn't the time to wait for a taxi.
She met Miichan outside, who opened wide eye when she saw the vehicule.
"Don't tell me we are going with this!"
"Yes I do, move your ass!"
Miichan was barely behind her when Minami started to drive as fastly as she could to go at Yuko's house. Her friend was holding her very tighly because she was really afraid of the midget way of driving.
They arrived at the pervert house 30 minutes later, Miichan was frozen and Minami was very angry now that she had the time to understand what was going on. She was not even thinking that everything was going to be okay with Atsuko, she was to preoccupied by this asshole to think about it.
Minami jumped out of her scooter and without waiting her friend, she ran into the house. Mariko and Kojima were already there, trying to call Aachan with their phone.
"Yuko! Did you call her?"
"Ah Leader!! We did but she's not answering..."
"Yeah, I was expecting that" said Minami.
"Wait, we don't even know what's going on!" Said Kojima frowning.
"Sorry Haruna, thank you for coming, I'm going to find Aachan, Miichan I let you explain. Don't move in case she would come back here before me."
"Roger that! This is our captain!!" screamed Yuko with a big smile.
Minami ran out of the house and jumped on her scooter once again, she knew exactly where to go. Well, she hoped that it was the place Atsuko had chosen to be alone and quiet. The park where the tall girl said that she loved the leader. Minami had been here lately, to think and remember the lovely moments she had shared with her love.
She was driving fast once again, she was really worried about Atsuko, it was freezing out there, and she had been alone too long since she had came back from NY.
The circulation wasn't dense and she could park in 20 minutes later at the enter of the park. She left her helmet on the scooter and ran into the park to see if she could find the girl. It was dark in here but she looked and called as much as she could.
"Atsuko? Atsuko?!!"
She was out of breath, the park was small but there was a lot of vegetation and paths.
"Aachan? Atsuko?!"
She stopped running for a moment and focused on what she could hear. It was barely noticible, but there was someone near, crying slowly. Minami ran faster in the cries direction.
Atsuko was there, sat in a little bench, shaking because of the tears and the cold.
"Aachan!!"
The tall girl turned her head and opened wide eyes when she saw the midget in front of her.
"Minami?"
This was so good to hear Atsuko's voice, saying her name and seeing her right here.
"Minami, What are you..."
"You can't stay here, it's freezing!!" said Minami frowning and taking off her jacket to gave it to the tall girl. "You scared me to death, you have some silly ideas sometimes..."
Realizing that Atsuko was here just because of this guy and because of the selfishness of herself, the leader sighed and looked at Aachan.
"Sorry, it's my fault. Are you okay? Come with me, I'm taking you home" she said with a husky voice as she held the Ace's hand and came back to the scooter.
Atsuko was too shocked to ask anything, Minami was here, speaking to her and asking her if she was alright. She thought she had lost her forever and there she was, acting like an ikemen, apologizing for god knows what.
At the vehicule, Minami gave her helmet to her girlfriend.
"Hold me tight, it's gonna be fast."
They came back home together on this scooter, Minami was focus on the road but Aachan's arms around her were keeping her warm. Nothing could really separate them, all of this have been silly, the midget couldn't live without her, it was her love, her sunshine and the reason she was dancing and singing everyday with a big smile.
Atsuko was really tired and needed some sleep, but knowing that for the first time in months she was alone with Minami, in such an romantic posture was enough to keep her away for hours.
The leader turned off the vehicule in front of the house and held Atsuko's hand again until Yuko's evening. Her friends ran toward her, all with a worried expression on her face.
"Atsuko!" Said Kojima, hugging her. "Where were you?! I was so worried!!"
"Etoo...Gomen..."
"Wifu!! Don't do this to me again!! I thought you were upstairs but you left without saying it!!"
"Stop this!" Said Minami with a loudly voice. "Atsuko is cold and tired, she ran off because she had no one to help her, so even if you were worried, don't be mad at her."
The Ace looked at the leader with a surprised expression.
"Well, well, look who's back, Kakkoi Minami^^" smirked Yuko.
"Pervert midget, you don't have the permission to make fun of me tonight!"
Yuko sulked and hugged Kojima, who wasn't really concerned by the team K member.
"Okay, since you're all here we could figure out how to help Aachan, said Mariko with a serious tone." She was really concerned by this situation, it made her mad and sad.
Everyone calmed down, the euphoria of the Ace come back was over.
"I thought about it since I know and I really don't know how to do it..."
"Guys, it's okay, it will be okay. I just have to be nice with this guy..."
"NO WAY!! I don't want this guy to ask you everything because he's the one in charge of your career. Wait a minute, Aachan, can you explain to us what is really going on with this guy?"
The Ace sat on the couch and sighed, she was ashamed to talk about this but they had the right to know.
"When I was in NY, i met him as my new manager, he seemed nice and easy talking, and because I was sad to be away from you and...Minami" she said becoming red "I was always with him, he was showing me the city and talking about how to be famous in America. But then a night we went out in a chic restorant and after, he forced me to hug him and he kissed me on the lips. I was really shocked but he laughed and said that it was okay in NY..."
Minami was so angry that she was clenching her fists but she didn't say anything.
"And then I went back and since that day he's talking to me everyday, asking me things and if I refuse he says that i can forget my american career."
All her friends didn't know what to say, it looked like a dead end.
Minami looked at everyone and then at Atsuko, in the couch, she was so sad, so beautiful.
"Aachan" she called her with a sweet voice.
The Ace turned her cute face toward the midget with a surprised expression.
"Yes?"
"Can I have your phone please?"
"Erm, yes" she said giving it to her, still surprised by this question.
"Thank you"
Minami was very calm but all her friends knew that it was a bad serenity, the one she had when the pratice was a mess.
The leader was now in the tall girl phone contacts and chose “James”. She was actually calling him, and nobody was moving, they were clueless.
The speakers was on.
"Ah Aachan baby!! I'm so glad you call, I miss you so much! How are you doll?"
"Takahashi Minami desu. I'm the general manager of AKB48 and all the 48 groups."
"What?"
"I'm really close to Akimoto Yasushi, Maeda-san's mentor, and I'm working in the entertainment buisness in Japan and soon in America. I know what you did to Maeda-san, the way you're treating her, harrassing her and threating her with all your words."
"W-What? No! I..."
"I want you to know that I feel really ashamed for you, Maeda-san is a greatest artist and really famous in Japan and the world, I don't think you understand what you are risking for behaving like that. I'm not scared of your threats, we can work without if you're not professional. Talk bad to her again and everybody will know what you are doing to the one you're working for, I guess it's not your first time being a jerk."
"Wait! I'm sorry, we could start all over again, this is silly! I swear..."
"We'll see if your good enough in the future."
"..."
"Oh, and one last word. Don't you dare call Atsuko like this again, she's the most beautiful and smart girl in the world, you don't even deserve to know her. YOU'RE JUST A STUPID BASTARD!! If you do this I will kill you!!!"
She hand up and gave the phone back to Atsuko.
Everyone had her jaw dropped to the floor.
"What? Something at to be done, this guy is an idiot..." pouted Minami, shrugging her shoulders.
"LEADER!!!!" screamed Yuko as she jumped in her arms. "YOU'RE MY HERO!!! That was so cool, you didn't fear the guy and the situation, you were so kakkoi!!!! This is so cool!!! Nyan-Nyan!! This was really cool right??"
"I have to admit that you were really cool, like a real ikemen" she admitted as she was red.
"Haha Haruna is such in love with you know" laughed Maritroll, happy to see that the problem was solved.
"SHUT UP troll!! This is my Nyan-Nyan!!" sulked Yuko.
"Well, I'm proud to have the same name as you, you did a great job" smiled Miichan.
Minami was red now, all those good things that her friends were saying were embarassing. She looked at Atsuko and didn't know what to think, the girl looked really shocked. The leader was scared that the Ace didn't like her action.
"Okay" said Atsuko standing up, "thank you everybody for tonight, this was really sweet of you to help me. Yuko you take your stuff and sleep over to Nyan-Nyan's, and call Harugon, I don't want her here tonight."
"Aaaah Atsuko-the-tsundere is back!!! We have to go Nyan-Nyan, she's so scary!!! Come on guys!!!" she screamed as she pushed everybody outside. "HAVE A GOODNIGHT!!!!"
They left and all of the sudden, the house was very silent.
Minami was very embarrassed now that they were only two left, it was just her second time alone with Atsuko tonight. The tall girl was in front of her, looking at her with no expression.
"Atsuko... I'm sorry if you th..."
She couldn't end her sentence, Atsuko had jumped on her lips and was kissing her roughly.
Next part in the pervy section!!! XD :drool: :panic:
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how dramatic
poor atsuko.
jame is a asshole :mon mad:
Minami so SUPERHERO. :mon star:
Yes atsumina together
and a perv section :mon lovelaff:
Thaaaanks. :mon thumb:
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Thank for update this chapter is awesome :mon lovelaff:
Minami is so cool :mon firecrack:
Next in perv section I looking forward :mon crazyinlove:
Please update soon :mon pray2:
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MINAMI SO COOL!!!
And aki-p is fan of atsumina...well everybody love atsumina..
wait did you say perv sec?
Gtg *dash to perv sec...
Fausto-san thank you for the update....
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Yes!!! Finally they get back together :wub:
Acchan should just told them from the beginning
But I wouldn't see cool takamina if that didn't happen :inlove:
Really a drama :D
Thanx for the update ^^
Please update soon :)
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OMG!! I want a Takaboy in my life please!!
Awww poor atsuko.. gomen ne acchan gomen..
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Wah.... Atsuko is being harass like that... This James is not very professional.
Yeah... Takamina is very Cool.... able to tell off and threat James back for his behavior....
Atsuko is very happy I guess... everything is solved.
Thank you for the interesting update... can't wait to see the next
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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VICTORY!!! MINAMI IS COOL!!!
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HAHAHA love it!! thank you!!! :thumbup :heart: :cathappy: :deco:
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Why didn't Takamina shout to his face that "She's my girlfriend so stop calling her baby, only I can call her that" XD?
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Takamina was so cool!!!!!!!
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Can't believe Acchan was suffering through that alone...
That disgusting pervert :angry:
Minami kakkoi!!
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nice update,
so James is a real bastard there,
and this is Acchan story with James,
Finally Takamina & Acchan prob solve,
what will happen next?
Acchan stay at Japan or going to US?
Looking forward for the next update.
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omg!! Omg!!! Takamina really really kakkoiiii !!!
She makes my heart sream with joy X3
thanks for the cool update, it's really made my day :3
looking forward the next update~
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Chapter 10 of Mail Talks is very great! :D
It’s funny chapter!
Minami is the MAN! Hehe :D
I also like the scary Acchan!
Please Update Fausto-san! :D
Thank You
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this chapter is so GREAT :on woohoo: :on woohoo:
Takamina so kakoii :wriggly: :wriggly:
thanks for the update :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
Uhm.. about the next chap....I haven't had enough post to pervy section... so ..can you PM me this chapter? :on cny2: :on cny2:
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omg minami is so cool
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http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34958.0 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34958.0)
Here to read the pervy update!!! :panic:
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thanks for update :)
but I cant go to pervy section :cry: :cry:
can you tell me how :nervous
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Thank you for update this moment was so hot ;)
Please update soon :)
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Nice update,
Their moment is prefect,
now wondering what will happen next,
Looking forward for the next update.
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Dude I love your fics show and she is very funny .. I loved the last chapter I expected or that side of Ikemen minami so deep .. wish I could read part ta pervert but giving error page or nonexistent for me = (so wanted to read = '(ta continue the great work .. :) :) :) :)
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minami you are so kakkoi.....ikemen... :twothumbs :twothumbs
acchan you are so lucky have takamina..... :heart: :heart:
nice fanfic anyway....
:heart: :heart: :heart:
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very good fanfic!!! Atsumina is so kawaii....
I still can not read chapter 11 :cry: :cry: .......but I think it should be fine. Continue please.
soo please continue the great work... :bow: :bow:
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Fausto-san!!! where's the chapter 11??!!! aaahhhh :banghead:
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woaah cool fic :inlove:
btw fausto-san can you pm me the pervy scene pls ? XD
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Please update
I like this Atsumina fic...
Can't wait to see your next chapter
Thank you for the fic
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Still waiting the update.... :cool1:
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I like this fic
Like atsumina
Thank for update !!!
But I can't read chap 11
Because I am newbie?
:bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
I want more
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UPDATE SOON ONEGAI SHIMASU :kneelbow:
I want to see Minami crushed that little piece of shit James. I want to she her ruin his career for doing that to her Atsuko :kekeke:
I want to see more of the protective side of Minami :shy1:
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Takamina was so kakkoiiìi!!
Update please..
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Minami so cool!!! :3
I really want to join the pervy scene! :banghead: :cry:
fausto-san can you pm me the pervy scene ?? :bow:
:banghead: :cry:
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:catglare: :catglare: :catglare: :catglare:
why?? :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
pervy sec is still not opening doors for me..
am i not hentai enough? :? :?
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I want to get access too.. :on cloudeye:
:flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower: :flower:
(It is automatically you can get access? or you need to request? :mon dive:)
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What have to do for can see the perv version? :? :? :?
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Look into the board, the moderator says that you have to post a little before being able to go to the perv section :thumbup
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Love this fic :)
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I can't read this fanfic, can you tell me how to read this fanfic?
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Perv section😑
How can i read that section?
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Haha! Author-san! This fic is so interesting! :twothumbs :wub:
And takamina being all kakkoii! :heart:
Was that the ending? :?
Anyway, love love your fic! :luvluv1: :ptam-kiss: :gmon heartu: