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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #20 on: March 13, 2014, 04:10:38 PM »
Kyaaaa~ Cuteness overwhelmed! :heart:
So, it was a Disneyland... Very good!
Tomochin wanted to kiss Chiyuu~ Get going, Tomochin, kiss her! Faito~
And... again SaeYaka :heart:
Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward for the next chapter!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #21 on: March 13, 2014, 11:18:32 PM »
That's so cute! :luvluv1:

Disney is definitely one of the places to go for a date! :on GJ:

Tomochin lied! :shock: tomo is so hurt. :farofflook:

Thanks for the update!! :deco:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #22 on: March 14, 2014, 02:05:19 AM »
*coughs*They did went on a few dates after graduation*coughs* Four dates got caught by public so far or one of them said it in their blogs. (Bieber's concert, Tokyo Disneyland, Korea and the most recent one, LA Disneyland  :wub:)



Ho... :twisted: seems like Chiyuu might remember something.... Will wait for more update.... :twisted:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #23 on: March 14, 2014, 02:35:22 AM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: Yead, their "date" is cute, and the place is disney land that's unexpected  XD XD

I wonder what did Chiyuu want to ask Tomochin  :roll: :roll:?

Although your update is short but you update every day, it's  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #24 on: March 14, 2014, 05:57:47 AM »
THIS
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cute.

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We all needed a little more TomoTomo in our lives. ヽ(  ´◇ `)ノ♪♪~♪♪

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.3 03/13/14 Update!
« Reply #25 on: March 14, 2014, 11:17:51 AM »
thanks again to these people for their wonderful comments!
Lost Heaven, Railgun96, stv_wong, songbac, yuuyu

and to these people who left thanks on my ch 3 post!
Chichay12, Ruka Kikuchi, kristelc, Lost Heaven, songbac, nicole28549, Yuki88, yuuyu, stv_wong

the next one's short.. hope you guys will like it!


The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 4


"Don't you ever get tired, Tomochin?" Sae asked me.

"Ofcourse, I'm tired. Our cafe's been busy today." I answered.

"I mean... Of that smile! You've been smiling all day!" She teased. "And since when did your cellphone become a part of your body? You've been holding that since forever!" She's laughing.

"Sae, let her be.. at least she's not spacing out anymore." Sayaka joined her also teasing me.

I just ignored them, I can't win against those two. I'm blushing again.

Since Tomo and I went to that amusement park, we've continued to see each other more often. We sometimes shop together and even watch movies. We exchange messages on phone everyday. But still, I never heard her mention about what happened that night and that kiss. I guess she really doesn't remember.

I'm sending her a message.

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Tomochin: I'm tired. It's been a busy day for us here.

Tomo: Did Tomochin has lots of customers today? (o^^o)

Tomochin: Yes. Our cakes were almost sold out. Are you already home?

Tomo: Not yet. (ー ー;) I will visit a friend tonight first. (-_^)

-

Why is she visiting someone this late? I thought.

"Sorry Miss, we're already closed." I heard Sae talking to a customer.

"Excuse me but.. is Tomochin there?"
I recognized that voice, so I immediately went out to check.

"Oh! So you're that girl who makes Tomochi..."

"Tomo! What are you doing here?" I interrupted what Sae is about to tell her.

"I just told you I'll visit a friend tonight chiyuu.." She smiled. I might get a heart attack because of this girl.

"Come in!" Did I sound too excited? I noticed Sae and Sayaka smiling at us suspiciously.
"These two tall people here are my friends. The long-haired is Akimoto Sayaka, then the short-haired is Miyazawa Sae." I introduced them to her.

"Nice to meet you!" They both said.

"Kasai Tomomi desu! It's nice to finally meet you both!" She bowed.

"Your name is Tomomi, too? Now I'm seeing double! I smell destiny here.." Sae said grinning.

"What you smell are those unwashed dishes in the kitchen! So go to your destined place right now!" Sayaka pinched Sae's ear while dragging her away. "Please excuse us, Kasai-san."

"Hey slow down! Why do you always drag me to the kitchen with you.." Sae complained as they left us alone.

"You're right chiyuu.. They really look funny together!" She laughed.

"Ne Tomo, please take a seat. Do you want anything to eat?"

"Hmm.. I think I prefer Tomochin's coffee!" She answered.

"You mean that coffee I made you last time? But that's just an instant coffee I got from your kitchen!"

"I still wanted Tomochin's coffee chiyuu.." She pouted.

How can I resist that cute face. "Alright.. one cup of coffee coming up!"
I saw her watching me as I prepare her coffee. But when I looked at her direction, she suddenly looked away.

"Tomochin's cafe is nice." She said looking around the place.

"Thank you." I came back and put the coffee on her table.

"Oh, I missed Tomochin's coffee!" She took a sip.

"So, what brings you here?" I asked.

"I've really wanted to check out your cafe! And also I came here to personally invite you to come to my birthday party at home."

She's inviting me? I'm so happy.
"When's your birthday?" I asked.

"On the 16th! Is Tomochin coming?"

"Ofcourse! I'll be there."


~


"Say Tomochin, have you already thought of what gift you'll give her?" Sayaka asked.

"Not yet. I still don't know her that much. I don't know the things she likes."

"Why don't you make her a personalized birthday cake!" Sae commented.

"Sae! Your brain is functioning sometimes! I'm proud." Sayaka said as she tapped the short-haired girl's head.

"Hey, you're mean Sayaka.." She pouted.

"So did you like Sae's idea, Tomochin?"

"Yeah, I think that would be the perfect gift!" I agreed.

"We'll then help you to prepare! We still have enough time before her birthday."

"Thank you, guys!" I hugged them. I'm blessed to have such wonderful friends.


~


I'm now infront of her apartment, holding the birthday present I made specially for her. I reached for the door bell.
"Happy Birthday, Tomo!" I greeted her as she opened her door.

"Tomochin! You came!" She said excitingly.

Wait... I knew that smell of hers. I looked inside and noticed no one's around.
"Tomo, Where's the party?"

"Right here!"

"But where's everyone else?"

"I only invited you chiyuu!"

Oh no.. this is bad. Should I back out?
I don't really have a right feeling about this.

"Tomochin! Please come in!"

It's just the two of us here... and what's worse? She's drunk.. again!!!

TBC

even i myself is looking forward for the next chapter! XD
it would be a tough time for me though..
thanks for reading!  :)

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #26 on: March 14, 2014, 12:42:35 PM »
Drunk Tomo~mi, huh? That could only means one thing.... Mwahahahaha :twisted: And the Saeyaka... :wub:

Thanks for the update, will looking forwards the next.

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #27 on: March 14, 2014, 03:01:36 PM »
Lol Only 2 ppl for birthday party

Danger, Danger Aleart Tomochin...Kasai eill be drunk again xD

Update soon

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #28 on: March 14, 2014, 03:40:40 PM »
Another short but fast update!

Aww... smiling tomochin is the best! :shy2:

Tomo only invited tomochin and she's drunk.  :shock:

In that drunk state, there will bound to be trouble.  :hehehe: :kekeke:

Waiting for the next update! :on gay:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #29 on: March 14, 2014, 03:42:39 PM »
Eeeh??? Birthday party for the only two of them? Abunai, Tomochin~
Chiyuu is very crafty~ And...She's drunk again! OMG OMG OMG! Double abunai~

Sae and Sayaka teasing each other~ :heart:

Thank you for the update!
I'm waiting new chapter already!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #30 on: March 14, 2014, 06:50:14 PM »
Ah~ the Saeyaka here... :deco: I seriously wanna see some rabu-rabu between them!

I don't care when or how, just MAKE IT HAPPEN! :bow:

I'm sure Lost Heaven will also be greatful for it, as all other Saeyaka shippers like us would. :twothumbs
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #31 on: March 14, 2014, 11:06:56 PM »
Damn it, this just got a lot sweeter and cuter! :shy2:

Drunk Tomo~mi... Good luck Tomochin! :sweat:


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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #32 on: March 15, 2014, 02:13:27 AM »
Lol poor tomochin xD

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #33 on: March 15, 2014, 09:41:20 AM »
LOL! Chiyuu definitely remember something and she is using this opportunity to make sure of it!  :ding: :glasses: Well... I guess she doesn't really have a choice since Tomochin will most definitely not do anything about her feelings!  :frustrated: :pleeease:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.4 03/14/14 Update!
« Reply #34 on: March 16, 2014, 10:10:10 AM »
i've already thought of making a special chapter for Saeyaka couple.
thanks to Ruka Kikuchi for requesting to make it happen!
hope you guys like it especially Lost Heaven  :)

The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 4.5 Saeyaka Special


"Tomochin is really genius in making new cake recipes! A coffee cake is a weird choice for a birthday cake though." Sae said as she finishes cleaning up the kitchen table.

"There must be a reason why she chose this flavor. She spent days and nights perfecting her recipe. Its taste has a unique blend. It's a personalized cake after all." I carefully put the cake inside its box.
"I guess we're done for today."

"Wait, I'll put the cake in the fridge first before we go home." She gets the box and...
"Aaaagghh!" She slipped as she accidentally stepped on some spilled flour on the floor.

"Sae, are you alright?" I immediately checked on her.

"The cake!!!" She shouted.

We opened the box. "Oh no.. This is a disaster!"

"Tomochin will kill me..." Sae cried.

"Remember this whole cake thing was your idea! Crying won't help, you know." I tried to stop her but she continued on crying. This girl is hopeless. I went closer to her.
"Okay, we'll find a way to fix this. Tomorrow is Kasai-san's party already. We can still make it on time if we do this overnight."

"Sayaka!!!" She hugged me. She's big but cries like a baby.

"So, do you remember exactly how Tomochin made this?" I asked.

"I believe so. I was there all the time, watching the measures she used." She answered.

"Then let's start now, we don't have much time left."

I prepared all the needed ingredients Sae instructed. We're lucky that there are lots of spare left.

Tomochin is good in cakes and beverages. Sae can copy her recipes exactly. And I specialize on perfecting the taste. The combination of the three of us is most probably the reason why the cafe is a success.

"Say Sayaka, do you think our Tomochin is in love with the other Tomomi girl?" Sae asked as she preheats the oven.

"Maybe. I've never seen Tomochin smile like that before. I don't think love between two girls is possible though." I answered.

"Oh I see.." Sae responded. She started to mix the ingredients. She stayed silent, maybe she's just focused on what she's doing.

Tomochin never treated us as her employees. She's a great person. Ofcourse we wanted our friend to be happy.

"Sayaka, can you taste this first? I'm not sure if I got it right." She dipped the tip of her forefinger on the cream and reached out to put in my mouth.
"Say ahh.."

I tasted it. This is a normal thing to us. "Hmm almost, a bit sweeter I guess." I commented.

Sae and I were together since highschool. In whatever we do, we always ended up competing each other. We're rivals in all aspects especially in sports. Maybe it's because of our tall height. It's funny how we became friends until now.

"Ne Sayaka.. I just wonder.. is that the reason why you didn't accept my confession before?"

C-Confession? Now that I think of it, it's true that she did confessed her feelings to me wayback in highschool but..
"Hey, stop joking around. I knew you weren't serious that time! How am I supposed to believe that?" I tried to laugh then took a step back.

"Sayaka, watch out!"

I slipped. That was the same spot where Sae slipped earlier.
"Why did we forget to mop the floor first!"

"I-Itai..." I realized that I'm on top of Sae. She caught me, I fell on her.

"Sae, are you okay?" I was about to get off her but she stopped me.

"Wait! Please let's stay like this a bit longer. My back still hurts a little.."

"W-Why? But I'm heavy.." I resisted but she pulled me back softly. She's lying on the floor, my head is on her chest.

"Sayaka." She started to speak again. "That time.. I was being serious." I can hear her heart beating fast.
"Why do you always think that I'm just playing around? Didn't you even notice that I followed you here? You're so dense!" Her voice is shaky. Is she crying again?

I looked up at her. Her right arm covers her eyes but I see her tears flowing down.
"Sae, I'm sorry. I didn't know." I took away her arm to see her face. She's now staring at me.

"Sayaka, am I just a burden to you?" She asked still crying.

I find her cute at that moment, she really cries like a baby. I suddenly kissed her on her lips. It was a quick kiss. Both of us were shocked of what just happened. I stood up fast. I looked away and saw the time.
"It's 2:00 am! The cake! We don't have much time!" I said out loud.

Sae got up too. I tried not to look at her, I pretend to focus on the next procedure. When I took a glance of her, I saw her blushing and smiling at the same time.

Just a few hours later.

"Yatta! We made it on time!" Sae happily said.
"I'm sure Tomochin won't notice."

"The cake is still Tomochin's masterpiece. It's still her own unique recipe especially made for Kasai-san. It's just the procedure we repeated." I said.

"The other Tomomi will surely like this cake! Because it's made of love!"

Does she mean Tomochin's love? Or also...

"Sayaka, this cake's a lot like us you know. Bitter sweet flavor. Just a perfect combination! But ofcourse I'm the sweet one!"

"You're starting off again, Sae! Just finish that already and please be careful this time." I turned away and smiled.

~

"Good morni... Sayaka? Sae? Why are you guys sleeping on the kitchen floor?" Tomochin arrived. I woke up and saw Sae beside me still sleeping. Her head is on my shoulder.

"Tomochin! Sorry, we cleaned up all night, we felt tired and fell asleep." I explained.
"Why are you so early? I thought the party is still in the afternoon?"

"Actually, it's almost noon time." She answered looking at the clock.

"W-What? We haven't open the cafe yet!" Sae woke up.

"Haha, it's okay! Sorry if I left all the cleaning to you guys last night. I just came to get Tomo's birthday cake."
Tomochin walks to the fridge, gets the cake then heads out from the kitchen.
"Hmm, guys?" She came back, maybe she forgot something. "I think both of you should take a shower first. There's lot of flour on your faces." She laughed and left.

We looked at each other and started to laugh too.

"Oh Sayaka! I forgot to ask this last night. What was the message did Tomochin write on the cake?"

"Message? There was no message." I answered.

"Uh-oh.." Sae started to walk away.

"Sae did you write something?!"

She didn't answer. She just disappeared.

"Sae.....?!"

I saw a small piece of paper on the floor. It's Sae's handwriting. It seems like a message draft.

-

Happy Birthday Tomo!
Made with Lots of Love
Tomochin~

-

"Saeee!!! You bakaaaaa!!!"

TBC

chapter 5 is on its way...
thanks for reading!  :)
« Last Edit: March 16, 2014, 11:24:25 AM by ainivel »

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 4.5 Saeyaka Special
« Reply #35 on: March 16, 2014, 10:27:42 AM »
I'm not really a fan of seayaka but this is just so cute! :mon lovelaff:

I hope they can get together as a couple.

Sae is so dead if tomochin saw the messages written on the cake. :sweat:

can't wait for chapter 5! :on gay:


MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 4.5 Saeyaka Special
« Reply #36 on: March 16, 2014, 12:29:04 PM »
Kyaaaaaaa!! Thank you! I hope I get to see some more of that in this fic soon!! :heart:
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 4.5 Saeyaka Special
« Reply #37 on: March 16, 2014, 12:44:47 PM »
OMG OMG OMG :inshock:
I really seeing that? Really? SAEYAKA~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!
Why am I smiling now like very weird baka? Because of your SaeYaka special~
It's soooo damn cuuuute~
So, Sae confessed to Sayaka in high school, but she thought that it was joke... Eh... Poor Sae... She was really serious...
But.... KISS!!! :heart:
I'm dying... :nosebleed:
Thank you for the update!
I'm looking forward to the next!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 4.5 Saeyaka Special
« Reply #38 on: March 16, 2014, 03:07:46 PM »
Oh dear..Sae write it on the cake

I wonder To ochin reaction when she saw the words

Update soon

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 4.5 Saeyaka Special
« Reply #39 on: March 16, 2014, 10:34:32 PM »
Coffee cake, huh...  :whistle:
SaeYaka moment FTW! :ding:
I wonder whose going to have the better reaction, Tomochin or Tomo~mi? :hehehe:

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