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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Hikaru on May 03, 2010, 02:00:24 PM
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MAJISUKA?! MENDOL?!
This is a cross-over between Majisuka Gakuen and Mendol in an alternate universe where Gakuran is still trying to get Meada’s Attention and wants to go out with her. Maeda on the other hand is fond of KAI. So the race is on whose gonna take Maeda’s heart Gakuran or KAI.
Lead Characters: Meada Atsuko (sweet girl until someone says ”maji” then she turns Yankee)
Kai/ Nami (takaboy)
Gakuran (Saeman)
Yankee Haruka Nakagawa
Oshima Yuko
Other characters: RAY
The four Queens
Riku
Kuu
Other Yankee Akb48 girls
As well as other girls that I’ll just make up as I go along.
Chapter 1 : The race is on!!!!!!!!!
“Finally!! I was able to get it! Maeda’s gonna be so happy”. It was late at night, the ticket booth was packed. People where pushing and shoving each other off, it didn’t matter who or what you are the only thing that matters to this people is to get a hold of these shiny yellow coloured paper. Clenched in her right hand was a golden ticket. It states “PERSONA LIVE in MAJI HIGH” sponsored by the richest and most powerful yankee in Maji High YUKO OSHIMA.
The next morning.
Sigh, that was the only thing the girl could do.
“ I finally got the ticket but how can I give this to her. It’s not like I can just go and say here take it. You want it or not.” she mustered another sigh.
“Gakuran, whatcha doin?”
“Nothing much.” not even noticing who was right behind her.
“Is that what I think it is?”
The girl snatched it right out of her fingers.
“What the hell? Give that back. That’s not yours.” and with great speed and force grabbed the girl’s collar with the intent to intimidate the snatcher.
The thief was calm and didn’t seemed frightened at all.
“I didn’t know you were a fan too Gakuran?”
And then that’s when Gakuran finally realized who she was threatening.
“Atsu….Atsu..Atsuko.” stumbling with her words
Shocked of the person whose with her Gakuran’s heart was pounding so hard she didn’t even realise she was still holding Atsuko by the collar.
“Umm…..here you can have it back, I’m so jealous of you, I’m really a big fan of PERSONA. I’d do anything just to see them.” holding out the ticket willing to give it back.
“NO! YOU CAN HAVE IT, NEVER LIKED THEM ANYWAY.” Still holding Atsuko by the collar.
“A girl from Yabakune gave them to me. I didn’t want it in the first place so take it.” this time looking away from Atsuko while she blushes from embarrassment.
“REALLY!! Great! So… Gakuran ahhh you mind letting go of me now?” while she gave her the famous ACCHAN sweet head tilted smile.
Gakuran didn’t even notice she was already holding Atsuko 3 cm away from the floor.
“I’m I’m sorrrrryyyyyyyyyy!!.” and ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!! Just like that Gakuran was gone. She run. Run as far as her legs could take her. (With great speed she was able to run from Maji High to Yabakune High in three seconds flat which is by the way 5 km away from each other.)
The day of the Concert
As always the concert hall was packed it was filled with screaming yankee girls,(remember Maji high built by yankees for yankees) everyone was anticipating PERSONA’s arrival. And one of these girls is Meada. When they finally came out the screams only grew louder and louder. The girls were screaming so loud that no one could even hear PERSONA’s introductions. So out came Saeko-P.
“URRRRUUUUSSSAAAAAIIII!!!!!!” ( literally meaning: SHUT THE HELL UP!!!)
Suddenly the concert hall went quiet. Maji Girls turned from excited lollies to super yankee and shouted (and in sync by the way.)
“EEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?????”
Then Saeko-P turned Yankee mode. And with that her presence was recognised, the other yankee girls felt inferior to her and submitted defeat.
With a sly smile she then said. “thank you.” and then left the stage.
Finally everything was set and the show went smoothly. Everyone was having the time of their life. After 2 hours of singing and rocking, the concert was about to come to a close. When Saeko-P suddenly shouted.
“MMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAA!!!!” (minna literally means everyone.)
Everyone’s eyes were now fixed on Saeko-P again. All anticipating her next words.
“Everyone, I have something to announce today one lucky person here in the audience will have the chance to choose between one persona member on a one time only date.”
Now the concert hall was noisy again everyone murmuring to themselves. Wondering to themselves who could it be.
Even KAI, KUU, nor RIKU was not expecting this.
“So, Anyone with the lucky golden ticket can choose between the 3 of them. Please raise you’re golden ticket and shout the name of the person you want to date.”
“KAI!!!!” Maeda shouted out of excitement while holding up a golden ticket.
Now all yankee eyes are now fixed on Meada.
“Heheehhehe, she picked you Kai, well good luck.” Kuu stated patting her in the back.
“Do your best ok.” Riku responded while pushing Kai in front.
Suddenly someone shouted. “ MAJI?” (Seriously?)
This is not good someone has broken the code, Maeda now taking off her glasses.
Responding with… “This is serious alright. You better believe it. “
Tension was flaring around the concert hall. When one girl jumped at Maeda.
“That tickets mine, I want to have a date with Riku.” Her hands where only 2 cm away from the ticket when Maeda threw the paper up in the air.
“You guys want it come and get it.” she gave out the challenge
Now the brawl is on!!!!! Everyone was shouting I want Kuu. I want Riku. I want Kai. It seems for these girls the only way to settle things is through fighting and shouting. These Yankees were throwing punches and kicks, books and even throwing their own teachers. This is a riot.
“Ok, this is not good don’t you think this is getting way out of hand.” Kai questioning Saeko-P.
With her always sly smile Kai, Riku and Kuu realised that she’s up to something,.
“OK, whoever wins this brawl will be the one to get the date of their dreams. Once you’re finish just come by the studio tomorrow with your golden ticket.” she announced.
“See ya.” with spark and smoke she was gone. (note Saeko-P’s a ninja)
“Did she just left us?” Kai asked
“Yep.” Kuu replied
“You wanna make a run for it?” Riku murmured to Kuu and Kai
“Sure.”
None of the yankee girls even realised that PERSONA has already left. After over an hour of brawling and throwing and shouting, all were face flat on the floor except for one. Maeda has won with her hand raised up in the sky she waited till the golden ticket dropped smoothly into her hands. (Man that ticket was floating around that hall all this time.)
The next day in the studio
Maeda with her glasses on was now ready to meet Kai. When two huge janitorial looking guys came up to see her. They asked why such a pretty girl was alone in the waiting room and suggested that they accompany her for the mean time. Responded by saying she was waiting for someone. With their little talk she then found out that these guys have been in the music industry for 10 years and that their just working there part time to get some money while waiting for their much waited debut. When they asked her who she was waiting for, Maeda then proudly showed off her golden ticket. The guy with the Hanamichi Sakuragi (from Slam dunk) hair style swiped the ticket off her hand and tore it apart. Maeda almost in tears asked why they did such a horrible thing. They replied by saying.
“SERIOUSLY, were way better than PERSONA.”
“Seriously?”
“Yeah, were serious”
Maeda was now about to go yankee mode and take off her glasses when an unknown voice shouted.
“Seriously, You guys suck!”
Kai has now appeared.
To be continued.
Hope you guys like it.
PM me who you want Maeda to end up with every week or two i'll try to count all of the votes then that will decide who Maeda will end up with for the that week
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Chapter 2: The first Meeting.
Enter Chokoku. Enter Mystery Yankee
Special guests: Team Hormone
“So you gave it to her already?”
Sigh, “Yeah, I did.” with a sight of discontentment shown in her face.
“You don’t seem to be too happy about it.”
Gakuran then explained what had happened. She also added that she even got a detention from the Principal herself for even stepping foot in YABAKUNE HIGH.
“What the hell?! You did what?!” shocked at what she had discovered.
“BAKA!!!” (literally meaning. “You Damn Ass!!! Or in a simpler meaning IDIOT!!!”) while smacking Gakuran in the back of her head.
Gakuran almost falling off of her chair. “What the hell did you do that for, Chokoku.?”
Both girls were talking in the classroom while their math teacher was babbling about some math’s formulas. ( gotta hand it to Maji High teachers their very dedicated. :thumbsup)
“You waited more than three hours just to get hold of that ticket, And you gave it to her just…… like….. that. You didn’t even ask her for a date.” Chokoku then added. “ That Gakuran, is being an idiot.”
Gakuran glared at Chokoku with frustration and anger she didn’t want to accept such an insult, but deep down she knew Chokoku was right.
“Gakuran, will you please answer this formula right here.” the Sensei interupted.
Gakuran still frustrated and angry shouted. “NANNI??!!!” (meaning “what the f do you want.) Staring at her teacher with the intent to kill. Her Sensei twitched and held his heart as though Gakuran has just thrown a knife at it. He begun stuttering, trying to produce words from his mouth but all he could do was choke on it. Finally his heart couldn’t take it, and he collapse :bleed eyes:(poor Sensei he couldn’t handle a little stare. May he rest in peace.)
The Team Hormone then surrounded their fallen Sensei.
“Hurry, Call BLACK-sama.” Wota commanded
“Is he dead?” Unagi asked
Akicha replied while poking at the Sensei’s nose with a stick. “Nope, He’s still breathin.”
“OH really, that’s a shame.” Bungy claimed looking disappointed at the news.
Wota then added, “Oh, well since our sensei’s out of commission for a while I guess this calls for…”
“RECESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!” exclaimed Mukuchi
And just like that all the students left the room even Chokoku and Gakuran left, leaving their Sensei face flat on the ground. (poor Sensei :cry:)
Meanwhile back at the studio
Maeda was about to go berserk……when Kai appeared. (DUNDUN DUN DUN)
“Kai?!” surprised of the person in front of her. While holding her glasses 4 cm away from her face.
“Why did you just tear this girl’s ticket, huh?” Kai asked
“Shut up Kai!!!” The guy with the Sakuragi hairstyle (guy 1) looked irritated to see her.
“You guys are the reason why were in the state were in now.” and out of the blue he threw a punch at Kai. In an instant Kai was able to block the incoming punch. The guy looked surprised he couldn’t believe Kai would be able to block his punch.
“Just because I’m short and wears platform shoes doesn’t mean I can’t fight.” Kai boast.
The guy’s anger flared, you can almost see his anger, flames of anger was burning around him. (He’s now Super Janitor looking idol). He called for his partner. It was now two against one. The odds were against Kai. Meada was now about to intervene when….Kai started chuckling to herself. After a few seconds of laughing to herself she became quiet, she was now serious. Both guys knew she was ready to fight, they begun to charge…
“Take this!!!!” The guy with sakuragi hairstyle exclaimed.
Kai extended her arms signalling them to stop. So of course both men stopped their attack for now.
“What? You’re not ready yet.” Guy 2 asked
Kai did not answer. Instead she crouched down and begun untying her shoe lases. She removed her shoes and was now on bare feet.
“Now that feels better.” she told herself while stretching both her legs.
“I guess we can start now.” She smiled and in an instant she vanished both men stared on blank space. Kai was gone. They questioned themselves where she was.
“You lookin for me?” There she was crouched down in front of Guy 1 :shocked. Guy 1 looked down however before he could completely look at her. Kai gave out an upper cut ( shoryu-ken?). The guy flew through the air. While he’s airborne Kai quickly attacked Guy 2 elbowing his diaphragm. Guy 2 was on he’s knees both hands holding his stomach screaming in pain. (Man, Kai’s brutal when she’s serious.)
Guy 1 has now landed in the ground (took him long enough). Kai then approached, and crouched down next to him.
“Hope you learned your lesson, and better think twice before you make a girl cry ever again.”
Guy 1 couldn’t respond all he could do was stare at Kai till his vision blurred, and he passed out.
Kai got up and walked slowly towards Maeda( It felt like slow motion for Atsuko by the way). Held out her hand and wiped the drop of tear from Maeda’s eye. “You don’t have to cry now, I’ve taught those guys a valuable lesson they won’t soon forget.”She held Maeda’s hand and gave out a friendly smile. Maeda was now fan-girling :inlove: :inlove: over Kai and gave her the “thousand blink of admiration.” (I swear this girl can blink three thousand times in one second.)
(note: Maeda wasn’t really crying, something just got stuck in her eye. Didn’t wanna spoil the moment, you know. :P)
Meanwhile….
A Mysterious figure has now appeared within Maji High. This figure is standing 157 cm tall, bust 80cm, waist 59cm, hips 84cm (can you guys guess who it is?) wearing a long purple jacket with 仲川遥香 written down in the back. Over her shoulders she was weilding a guandao.
“Finally, I’m here. So this is Maji High. eh?”
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…….To be continued.
Yuko: What!!!!!!!!! that’s it?! http://journal.akb48.org/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/o0800045010521922233.jpg (http://journal.akb48.org/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/o0800045010521922233.jpg) (This is the look on Yuko when she confronted me.)
That’s the end of part 2. How bout me. I thought I was one of the main characters here. I wasn’t even featured in both parts!!!!! And what’s with these new characters Renaboy and Matsui. Damn you, Hikaru-P!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:
Yuko’s out of control she kicked my desk and she’s throwing pens and books at me now. :panic: :panic:
Hikaru-P: Please calm down Yuko.
But she won’t hear any of it.
“I want to fight Maeda, I want to have a love interest too damn it!!!!”
Hikaru-P: Ok ok ok, So who do you want?
And with excitement she said..
Yuko: Haruna’s available.
Hikaru-P: Ehhhhhhhhhhhhh??????? :? :?
And just like that my dear readers is the end of Part 2.
Hope you like it.
And Please don’t forget to vote, vote, vote.
Please watch out for Chapter 3.
Someone unexpected is gonna appear.
Clue: She’s the number one record Diva.
(Picture was taken from AKB Journal THX for the uploader.)
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Great job! I hope you continue writing because JPH!P needs more AKB fanfics :)
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To those who has read my fanfic.
A big :twothumbs Thank you. :twothumbs
I shall now continue writing.
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Chapter 3: Pierce through the frozen spring: Gakuran; Chokoku
With an unwavering WISH Haruka
Special Guest: Sanshou Sisters
Flashback:
Time of death 9:45 pm.
“Minami!!!!!!!!!!”
She called out, however no matter how much she cries and screams her name, Minami would never come back to her....
Present...
The mysterious figure approached Maji High. However, as soon as she reached the gates....
The Sanshou sisters appeared.
“Oiiii!!!, You’re not from our school are ya?” Myao demanded an answer.
She didn’t respond.
The Sanshou sisters moved in closer.
“Oi!! I asked you a question. So ya better talk.” The Myao demanded, wavering around her lollie-brella.
The mystery girl was not impressed and uttered.
“You’re not the one i’m looking for.”
“What?!!! What did you just say?”
She did not respond, and walked through the gang.
“CHOTO MATE YO!!!!!!!!!” the Myao shouted.
But the girl didn’t listen she continued walking.
Lollie-Myao was now pissed. She took out her irons and cuffed the mystery girl.
Lollie Manamana and Lollie Love-tan were hopping around the mystering girl laughing
“hehehehehehehehehehehe, fresh toy.”
They continued laughing “hehehhehehehheheheh.”
Lollie Manamana swang her baton hitting the mystery girl in the guts.
The mystery girl didn’t even flinched. The lollies were in disbelief. Out of frustration. Lollie-Myao pulled the mystery girl’s cuffs and pushed her unto the ground. The sisters yanked out lollie gadgets from their lollie bags;
wires,
another lollie-brella,
gartered socks and even…
lollipops.
They began beating the poor mysterious girl over and over and over again. Until finally got tired. (Lollies need a break toooooo.)
The sanshou sisters were now exhausted.
“Damn she’s not budging” Love-tan protest.
“Myao chan? Why isn’t she doing anything. She’s not screaming in pain. Manamana is bored.” Irritated Manamana declared.
“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH” Lollie Love-tan screamed out of frustration.
“Let’s just take an ‘I’m sorry’ photo already.” taking out a camera from her lollie bag. (how many things can they fit in that bag anyways?)
“SERIOUSLY, you’re no fun. We had more fun when we were beating up MAEDA.” Myao bragged.
In that instant a surge of electricity went through the sisters’ spine.
The three took a step back.
“WHAT WAS THAT?”
“ I can’t move.”
“ MANAMANA’S scared.”
They were now paralysed.
“ Maeda??”
“ You mean Maeda Atsuko?” she mumbled to herself as if she was in a daze.
“ Tell me… Onegai. (please)” She pleaded
“Tell me where I can find her.”
“Why, why should we tell you?” Love-tan’s voice cracked as she spoke those words.
Angered with Love-tan’s response. She dropped her guandao which was occupying her hands and..
“Then you’re…” hit Manamana with a hook punch. (RIGHT in the face. OMG!!!! Not the lollie face.)
“….nothing more…” then an a punch in the gut for Love-tan
“….but useless trash.” and finally she strike Myao with a headbutt.
The sisters were now stained with their own blood.
THE SANSHOU SISTERS WAS NO MORE. ( to put it more simply there dead.)
(Just kidding they’re just sleeping like little lollie babies.)
Then suddenly….
“HOY!!! You got a problem with Maeda then you better talk to me.” Gakuran shouted.
( yup chokuko’s with her too)
“So you know where Maeda is?” The Mysterious individual asked with an angelic face.
“ Don’t you think you’re being rude asking us a question without giving your name first.” Chokoku answered back.
“ Oh I’m sorry, I forgot I haven’t introduced myself yet. I’m Haruka Nakagawa Kawachi.” she answered with an angelic face again full of smiles.
“ I’m the one who’s going to bring down Atsuko Maeda.” Her angelic face turned serious.
Both Chokoku and Gakuran were now on guard.
Gakuran then said. “We’re not gonna tell you where Maeda is.”
Chokoku was now confused. “Hey, Do you even know where Maeda is? Cause I sure don’t.” she whispered to Gakuran
“Nope, I have no idea.”
“Then why did you just..”
“Shssssssssssssh, just go with the flow ok. This psychotic girl is dangerous we can’t let her get near Maeda.”
“Just go with the flow, huh? I guess that’s fine with me as long as I complete my 100 defeated fighter quota. So Gakuran you have a plan in mind?”
“Just charge and attack and hope we don’t scratch our pretty boy faces.” Gakuran charged at Haruka.
“Wait! Don’t go charging in, that’s not a plan.” Chokoku shouted.
(hehehehe too late, Gakuran attacked Haruka.)
A HIT!!!!
However, it wasn’t Haruka’s face that got hit it was Myao’s. Haruka used Myao as a shield. Haruka then pushed the unconscious Myao towards Gakuran. Gakuran is now wide open for Haruka to attack. Before Haruka’s punch could land on Gakuran’s face. Chokoku blocked it for her and countered Haruka’s punch with a side kick. Haruka retreated. She knew without a weapon 2 against 1 would be too much for her. So she ran towards her guandao which was lying together with the sisters. Gakuran knew what the enemy was about to do so she rushed towards her colliding with the unsuspecting Haruka then pushing her unto the fence.
“TELL ME. WHY ARE YOU AFTER MAEDA?” Gakuran asked.
Haruka wanted to get free. However Gakuran’s hold was too strong.
“You wanna know why…. It’s because she stole the heart of the person I admire the most.”
“ Person? Heart? Stole?” Gakuran was now puzzled by what Haruka said.
“What are you talking about?” Gakuran loosen her grip and let her guard down, Haruka then took this opportunity to kick Gakuran away.
“Damn, I shouldn’t have let my guard down.”
“You ok Gakuran?”
Gakuran nodded. Gakuran was still feeling the pain from Haruka’s kick.
Before Gakuran could recover. Haruka rushed towards her.
Hold it!!!!!! A thundering voice called out.
The three fighters were put to a halt.
That voice…it was none other than the great Oshima Yuko together with her body guards. (The Four Queens plus Sado.)
“Oi!!!! Kid” referring to Haruka.
“It’s no doubt you’re strong. However….”
Yuko then stuffed her hands inside Torigoya’s blouse. She moved her hands around Torigoya’s body feeling every inch of her. The only thing Torigoya could do was giggle as her president’s hands run through her body she even looked as if she likes it.
“Ahhhh… Finally I found it.” Yuko exclaimed as she took out a book out of Torigoya’s undergarments.
What’s in her hands was the Great Yankee Rule book.
Yuko then read the first rule.
“Rule one: A Yankee from another school is not allowed to enter enemy territory (meaning school) without each respected Yankee principal’s permission.”
“So you see kid you’re not welcome in our school. You’ll just get hurt if you stay.”
Nonetheless Haruka didn’t listen to any of this. “Who are you kidding? You’re just scared of me.”
Haruka dashed towards Yuko and attacked. Haruka hit a wall; a wall which was protecting Yuko; a wall called Gekikara. Blood was gushing out of Gekikara’s forehead in spite of this, Gekikara begun giggling it started from a small squicky chuckle then it got louder.. she was laughing intensely, creepily, menacingly while biting her fingernails.
“HEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHHEHHEHEHEHHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHHEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHHE.”
“Is that all?” Gekikara asked.
“My turn.” Hysterically laughing Gekikara threw a straight punch. Which propelled Haruka out of Maji gates.
Black begun to say a prayer.
Sado then moved in closer to the injured Haruka yet keeping her distance as well.
“Can you measure the gap between you and me? This is how far apart in strength you are from Yuko-san.”
With those final words Shibuya then shove the gates of Maji close.
Back at the studio
Maeda’s dream date was now about to begin…
As soon as the couple left the studio…..
Saeko-p appeared with Riku and Kuu. ( along with 20 cameramen holding their cameras) making sure that the couple does not see them.
“Ok, this is a documentary of a lifetime. We better capture every moment of this. You got that?” Saeko-p declaired.
“So why are we doing this again?” Riku asked Kuu
“Because it’s looks fun, that’s why. And if anything interesting happen like…”
Kuu then showed a kissy kissy face.
“I can have something to tease Nami, with for the rest of her life.” Kuu producing an evil chuckle.
At a restaurant….. (Saeko-p and others still following Maeda and Kai while hiding behind pillars, walls and even under the table)
“WOW!! Kai and that girl seem to hit it off quite well.” Riku agreeing to herself.
“Yeah, It looks as though both of them knew each other for a very long time.” Kuu added.
“NO! NO! NO!” Saeko-p inserted
“This is boring! Nothing good is happening.”
“Riku. Give me a phone quick.” Saeko-p asked
“Huh? Who are you calling in a time like this?” While handing over her phone.
Saeko-punched in the numbers.
brrrrrrrrrrrrppppppp (ring….ring……ring)
“Ray”
brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrppppppppppp (ring…ring…ring)
“Ahhhh!!!!!! You can’t do that.” trying to steal the phone from Saeko-p’s hands.
brrrrrrrrrrrrrppppppppppp
“Mushi, Mushi?” a voice called out over the phone
It was now “tug and war” neither Saeko-p nor Riku would let go of the phone nor did they hear that someone has already answered the phone. Saeko-p then hinted Kuu to back her up. Following Saeko-p’s orders Kuu held Riku’s arms.
“Kuu, what are you doing this is bad if RAY hear that KAI’S on a date with another girl… You know what will happen… she’ll go psycho.”
“WHAAAAAAAATTTTT!!!!!!” A booming voice screamed at the other end of the phone.
“My KAI with another girl!!!!!!!!!”
“ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHH!!!!!”RAY was screaming hysterically over the phone. Riku and the others could hear her scream even without the phone as if she was outside the restaurant herself.
That’s because she is outside the restaurant.
Once she heard that Kai was with another girl her Kai radar begun to function and she ran with all her might towards the restaurant. She barged inside the restaurant door and headed towards the couple.
“RAY?! What are you doing here?” Kai almost falling over her chair.
“Kai, how could you do this to me? You already have me and now you’re here with another girl.” Holding Kai by the neck swinging her back and forth.
“Why? How? Am I not enough for you?” still swing Kai back and forth
Kai still recovering from her dizziness. Ray then looked at Maeda. Analysing her from head to toe.
“You better leave now little girl.” “SERIOIUSLY, Kai will never have any interest in a flat chested girl like you.”
“What the hell did you just say?” Taking away her glasses.
“I SERIOUSLY have more package than you.” Ray answered back.
“Flat chested huh? I saw one of your commercials and you’re even more flat chested than me.”
“Oh yeah?! Well at least I’m taller than you. Shorty.”
The cat fight continued on and on and on and on…..
“THIS IS EPIC!!!!! The cat fight of the century. Make sure you capture everything.” Saeko-p exclaimed.
The recovered Kai tried to break up the two girls however her effort was in vain. There is just no stopping these two cats.
The fight begun heating up… Maeda had enough she threw a punch at Ray however since Kai was butting in in their fight Maeda accidentally hit Kai instead.
“OH, NO!!! KAI! Are you alright?” Both girls asked at the same time staring down each other.
Kai’s vision blurred out.
Inside KAWACHI Residence
When she came to. She was already in her house, the wig and the suit were now gone and is back to her real girly clothing. At that moment she was no longer Kai but Kawachi Nami.
“Oh…. I’m back home. What a day.” Exhausted Nami uttered.
“What am I supposed to do when I meet those two again.” Worried Nami cried out. “ Argh.. Thinking about those two makes my head hurt.”
While devising a plan the door opened. Nami rushed to the door. Upon seeing Nami, the visitor hurried towards her and gave her a huge hug.
“I can’t believe it you’re back from your trip.” The visitor said crying
“It’s been a long time. Haruka.” Nami embracing her back.
That night both girls talked for hours. Until Nami gave out and fell asleep on the couch. Haruka then covered Nami with a blanket. Haruka then stared at Nami for a second, her face getting closer to Nami’s. She couldn’t hold herself anymore.
“Okairi, (welcome back) Onee-sama.” She whispered into Nami’s ear, and then slowly kissed her on the cheek.
To be continued…
Hope you guys like it.
Please don’t forget to vote.
Watch out for Chapter 4.
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This is hilarious. My favourite sentence is "Man that ticket was floating around that hall all this time." :lol:
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this is too funny.... :thumbup
the golden ticket thing is so LOL....
maeda's fangirling over kai.... maji!!! :lol:
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nice~~ :thumbup
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OMG! I NEED MORE!!!
I love this fanfic!! Its so hilarious xD i just love it!
Some grammatical errors but still so awesome T^T
I demand for more! :heart:
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hope you can update soon.... :D
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Wow :w00t: this is awesome. :inlove:
Hope you can update soon.
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Ooooh~~~ :heart:
I can't wait for what will happen later between Ray and Acchan~~~ :cow:
Hm.. and I wonder what kind of relationship does Haruka have with Nami.. sisters???? :? :? :?
:thumbsup For this Fanfic~!! XD
:bow: :bow: Please update soon~~ :P :P
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OMG! Is this fanfic dead? WHY!!!! =(
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plsssssssssss.
update soooooooooooonnnnnnnn
I LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!!!!!!!!
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Haha. The ticket scene really funny... :lol:
Haruka as nami so sister?
I wanna know wht happen next... :yep:
an update plz. :fap :thumbsup
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update
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I really like this story. It was so funny. Please update :lol:
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OMG! why I found your story so late? Your story is epic!
And Majisuka Mendol Crossover is insanely awesome good! XD
Thx u for the great story!
Unfortunately, I realized Your last update was long ago...
Pls! continue your story. pretty pls! It is too good to abort it.
I hope, someday you get pleasure to write again.
until then!
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Its not Maji its Maji de
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I love your fanfic, its really funny!! Xd
Pleaaase do it Atsumina
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Yeah.... a continuous of the story from Fanfiction.net
Ah... so Minami died or she became Nami Kawachi?
What's going to happen?
Would Kai choose Atsuko or Ray?
What kind of troubles Ray and Atsuko would bring to Kai's life?
What is Haruka trying to do to Atsuko?
What's going to happen next?
Can't wait to find out
Thank you for the update
:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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I like this story MAJIDE hehehe!
so please Update this :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs s