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Title: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: chemicalstar on December 02, 2012, 04:49:11 AM
CHAPTER 1

*Kai's POV*

"Kaaai!!" as I arrive at home, my little sister run approach and hug me.

I hug her back. I really miss her, it's been three years since we haven't met each other. Then my mom come out from her room smiling.

I break the hug with Mayu my sister then I hug my mom.

"Oh my son. Look at you! You grew up so fast, but... not the height" mom tease me as I pout to her. I heard Mayu giggling behind me.

"Where's dad?" I ask while looking around the house.

"He was back to the hospital an hour ago. There was a call that his patient's condition getting worse suddenly, so he had to go check it" my mom answer.

"Oh, I see..." I smile as I knew that become a doctor is not easy for my dad to do. He have to be ready 7/24 just in case the hospital need him.

"Mom already cooked you Katsudon, now go clean yourself while we prepared it!" said Mayu.

"Wow Katsudon!!" I'm surprised happily. Then I get my briefcase and bag heading to my room on the second floor.

When I open my room, it's just like the same like when I left it three years ago. The bedroom, the baseball posters, the table, everthing... But it's very clean and neat. I guess my mom always clean it everyday in these three years.

I unpack my bags and go to the bathroom and take a shower.

After I took shower, I go out of the bathroom with only wear my short. Still drying my black hair with towel, I open the window's curtain of my room.

It's already dark outside. I look at the clock, it's already 7pm. Then I see the light  of the room of the house next to mine is turned on.

What I remember is three years ago, the next house was empty. That's why I sleep in this room because the view of the this room from window is exactly a room of that empty house. Mayu scared that she always imagine that there was ghost there. So I decided to live in this room since I'm a brave person.

I surprised that there's someone's shadow come into that room as I can see through the windows even it's covered by curtain.

I standing there behind my window just because I'm curious who's the person live next to my house. Then I see the shadow approach the window and open the curtain.

It's just like a slow motion when the person in that room is opening the curtain because... I see a beautiful angel open the curtain.

I stand behind my window and stare at her. For several seconds, I stuck there can't resist my eyes of her. But then, I surprised as she rushing close her curtain again with annoyed look.

I wonder what happen to her. Why does she look at me wity that annoyed face. Do I look like a ghost?

Knock knock..

"Kai!! Are you finished? The dinner is ready and.. Dad's just arrived" I hear Mayu call me in front of my room.

I close the curtain again, get my clothes and wear it. I walk to the downstairs and join my family who's already in the dining room.

"My son!!" dad greet me with a proud hug.

"Dad! I miss you" I hug him back then he break it.

"Kai? Why does your voice's is getting more mature when your height is just like three years ago?" my dad look at my body.

I pout at him. It's actually his fault. Look at himself, he just as midget as me.

"Ah Dad... Come on don't tease me! Even though my height is not growing, but now I have an athletic body. Look at my abs!!" I hurriedly open my shirt just to proove that I am not that bad. Even I'm short, I have a really good body with sexy abs.

"Ahh okay, enough Kai. Yes, my son is sexy. Now sit down, let's get dinner" Mom ordered me.

"So, Kai. With that sexy abs, how many girls have slept with you?" Dad suddenly asking.

I'm surprised with Dad's question, then I'm getting choked by the food.

Mayu giggles a bit then she offer me a glass of water.

"Thanks.." I said after I drank the water. Mayu still giggling, Mom and Dad too.

I don't answer the question. I'm just continue to eat my Katsudon.

Suddenly Mayu say, "Don't tell me that you have no girlfriend, Kai!!"

I glance at her and now she laughing out loud.

"Mayu, don't tease your brother like that" Mom said.

Now Dad is laughing too. I pout while still eating my katsudon.

"I've been living in all boys school for this three years, how can I get a girlfriend..." I said sadly.

Dad clap his han on my shoulder. "Hahaha.. It's okay my son. But now you're going to college, huh?"

I nodded.

"So go get girlfriends!" told my Dad.

"Girlfriends? You mean.. more than one?" I said.

"Yeah, do you think when I was in college, your Mom was my only girlfriend?" Dad said.

"Shut up!" Mom give a sharp glance at Dad.

Then we all laugh. That evening I share my experience about my highschool live.

In my Takahashi family there's a custom that every Tahakashi boy have to go to Brighton High Scool. It's a very famous high class 'all boys' boarding school in Hokkaido. My Dad entered this school when he was young. My family is worried that teenager ages is a very dangerous and sensitive ages for a boy. So they send every Tahakashi boy to Brighton High Scool just to avoid if their son become a bad boy. This custom is very good because all of Takahashi boy become a good, nice, smart, and have a bright future. Just like my Dad, now he's a great doctor.

After I graduated from Brighton High, I choose architecture major to continue my study in college. Fortunately, I pass the test and being accepted in a famous university in my hometown, so now I'm back to Tokyo to go to college.

After the dinner, we went to the living room and sharing our story again. Dad ask me something, "Kai, when your college will started?"

"Hmm.. Next week. Why Dad?

"So you still have a week holiday, right?" Dad hold his chin. I stare at him but he don't continue the conversation.

"Kai, Mayu, it's already late of night. You two better get sleep. Beasides, Kai must be really tired right?" Mom said.

I nodded. "Come on!" I ask Mayu upstairs.
"Goodnight Mom, goodnight Dad".

I clap Mayu's head and she pouting. "Kai, I'm not child anymore," she said when we climb the stairs.

I reach my door, then I stop and ask Mayu who's just about to enter her room. "Sist, who's living in the next house?"

"Oh, they're Maeda family. They moved there about seven months ago."

"Maeda.." I said. "Okay, thanks. Goodnight!" I said as I enter my room.

"Hmm... So who's that  beautiful Maeda girl?" Kai thought and he walk slowly to the window. He open the curtain a little. The room in front of his window is already dark. "She must be sleeping.." Kai thought.

*end of Kai's POV*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 02, 2012, 04:59:03 AM
Well it's my first fic here. I ship atsumina, moreover Kai x Acchan. I really love this cute couple. So.. I just want to wait the comment for this 1st chapter.

If there's a lot people like it, I probably glgoing to continue it.
Happy reading :D
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 02, 2012, 05:10:35 AM
Yatta!!
Atsumina!hahaha
My god!im so bias with this two!XD
Update soon!!  :doh:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hara on December 02, 2012, 05:22:39 AM
chemicalstar-san.. welcome to Jphip  :on cny1:



Kai is so cute... Mayu is cute too..
Great story !

Cant waiting for ur next update  :on gay:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steftakami on December 02, 2012, 05:24:09 AM
omg i like!!!!!  :grin:
please continue!!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: atsuminaFTW on December 02, 2012, 05:29:24 AM
Atsumina neighbors? That's quite interesting, please continue!! :cow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 02, 2012, 05:38:01 AM
Yay! Another Atsumina!  :cow: :cow:

Love between neighbours?  :cathappy: :cathappy:

I'm excited for the next chapter! Please update soon!  :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 02, 2012, 06:23:32 AM
I really like it !!! :heart:

KaiXAcchan FTW

please continue  :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 02, 2012, 09:07:11 AM
Bravo, another Kai x Acchan fic ! Love it very much, please continue to update it constantly.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) CH.1 part 2
Post by: chemicalstar on December 02, 2012, 09:46:47 AM
WOW Thanks guys for your comments. I really glad that there's a lot of people like my story. So as I said, I'm going to continue it.

It may be a long story, so I keep KaixAcchan for the next chapter.






 CHAPTER 1 (part 2)



*Acchan's POV*

It's been a tiring day. This morning I got an email from the Lawson University. It's really hurt when I read the email and there written that I'm not accepted in that university. Last month I submitted an application to Lawson University, a university in New York. But unfortunately, I didn't pass the test. Because of that, I have to choose my 2nd choice, it's an architecture design major in a famous university in Tokyo. This morning I went to the college to register myself. This college is one of the best colleges in Japan, so I don't regret it even I was rejected from Lawson university.

I come home at 7 pm, I go upstairs heading to my room. I open the door and turn on the light. When I put my bag on the table, I see the light of the room next house is turned on. Even though my window is covered by curtain, but I still can see the light. It's really weird. Since I moved here, I never see that room's light is turned on. Because I feel curious, I walked to the window and open the curtain. I saw a guy is drying his hair by towel right there. When I see him, he stares at me. But... he's half naked!!! Omg what a pervert guy! I hurriedly close the curtain. Oh my god! Who's that guy? I've never seen him before. Is he... A ghost?

The next morning, I wake up early. I get up from my bed. And just like usual, I walk to my window and open it to catch some fresh air in the morning. "Ahh.. It's a bright day" I said as I stretch my hands up. And then I heard a knocking door voice. It's from the door of the next house.

Knock knock..

"Kaaaii wake up! The breakfast is ready," I heard Mayu's voice accross the house. Then I remember about the half-naked guy yesterday. I close my window and the curtain again. But I sneak out behind the curtain and I can hear a guy's voice. "Okay okay, Just wait me downstairs, sist!"

Sist? Did he just call Mayu 'Sist'? Who's that guy? Mayu never tell me she has a brother.

GREK! Suddenly his window's opened. I look at him behind my curtain. He stretch his hands up. Oh my god, that pervert guy, he’s shirtless again. Doesn't he has any clothes to wear? I leave the window and take a shower.

*End of Acchan's POV*

“Good morning” greet Kai when he enter the dining room. There are Mayu and his parents ready for breakfast.

While eating breakfast, Dad asks him “So, Kai. What’s your plan for today? Are you going somewhere?”

“I don’t know. I was thinking of meet Riku, but he’s still in Hokkaido. Maybe he will be arrived in Tokyo tomorrow” Kai answers.

“Riku? Oh that kid! He continue to study in Tokyo again?” Mom asks.

Kai nods.

“You two must be a very good friend,” Mom comments.

“So today you’re going nowhere?” Dad asks again.

“I guess so” Kai answers.

“Pity you, Kai” Mayu said as shows her sad face, acting.

Kai ignores her, he just stick out his tongue to her.

“I’ll take you out!” Mayu suddenly offer him with a bright smile. “I’m sure you must be really miss Tokyo. Let’s hang out!”

Kai a little confused about his sister. A second ago she tease him, and now she offering to take him hang out.

“Hmm… that sounds interesting!”

“Yeah, just go out, Kai. You have to know Tokyo more, you left this city three years ago. There’s a lot of changes here” Mom said.

Kai nods. “Okay, so… what time we will go out?”

“Just pick me up after school” Mayu said.

“Oh, okay.”

That morning, Kai just stay at home. He clear up his room, put his clothes into the wardrobe, make his room, and prepare his college books. I the afternoon, Kai go to Mayu’s school to pick her up.

When he arrives there, he sees Mayu standing in front of the gate with her friends. Kai walk approach them and Mayu notice it.

“Ah, that’s my brother!” Mayu said proudly to her friends. “Kai!!” she shout as she wave his hand to Kai.

“Wow, your brother is cute, Mayu!” said Tomomi.

“Yes, he’s handsome!” Rie said.

Between these girls, there’s a boy who is very nervous as Kai walked closer to them. It’s Sae, Mayu’s boyfriend.

“Hai!” greet Kai with smile, his sweetest smile.

Mayu’s friends just keep smiling back as they adores Kai so much.

“Kai, they are my friends. It’s Tomomi and Rie” said Mayu introduce her friends.

“Hi! I’m Takahashi Kai. Nice to meet you” said Kai smiling to them.

“And this is Sae. He is… my boyfriend” said Mayu shyly.

“Eh?” Kai a little surperised. “Boyfriend?”

“I’m Sae, Miyazawa Sae. Nice to meet you” said Sae then he bowed to Kai.

“Oh, so you have boyfriend, huh..” said Kai to Mayu.

Mayu blushed. Her cheek getting red, so about Sae.

“Okay then, shall we go now?” ask Kai.

“Let’s go!” said Mayu, and then Kai follow her.

“Are you serious we invite them to follow us?” Kai whispers to Mayu’s ear.

“Yeah, why not? Problem?”

“Emm.. no! It’s okay” Kai answer.

As they hang around Tokyo, from a plaza to another plaza, Kai walk between Tomomi and Rie while Mayu keep walking together with Sae behind them. Kai feels like he’s been used. He know it’s actually Mayu want to hang out with her boyfriend, and use Kai as alibi. Kai feels uncomfortable with these two friends of Mayu who always clinging to him. They’re really adore Kai so much, but it’s annoying.

“Mayu, are you serious this is gonna be okay?” Sae asked. “I think Kai feel uncomfortable with those two.”

“It’s okay, honey. I know he feel uneasy, but he’s kinda nice person. He will pretend that he’s fine” said Mayu, keep clinging her arm to Sae’s.

When the day turns dark, they back home. Sae offer to accompany Mayu and Kai home, but Kai refuse it.

“Just go home, Sae. Mayu is with her brother now” Kai said and smile to him.

“But, I usually take her home.. ” Sae keep ask him to take Mayu home.

Kai sigh. “It’s okay, I can protect her.”

“Souka..”  Sae pout and look down.
“It’s okay, Sae. I’ll be safe with him. He’s my brother!!” Mayu cheers him up.

Sae smiles even though inside his heart he feel disappointed. “Okay. See you tomorrow! Bye..”

As they separated in the train station and Sae leave, Kai slap Mayu’s head.

“Ouch!” shout Mayu. It’s not really hurt, but it’s quiet surprising her.

“You deceive me!” Kai pout.

Then Mayu giggles, “Gomen Kai.” Now she’s laughing. “Mom and Dad don’t allow me to have a boyfriend. So, I keep our relationship backstreet. But you can keep it secret, right?”

Kai glance at her. He chuckles. “Let’s go home” as he stroke Mayu’s head.

When they arrive at home, Mom and Dad greet them with cheerful face.

“Kai, come here” ask Dad.

Kai follow his Dad who looks like walking to the garage. Mayu and Mom follow them.

“Now close your eyes” Dad commands him as they arrived in front of the door to the garage. “Mayu, close his eyes with your hands. I don’t want him sneaking.”

Mayu nods, she standing behind Kai and cover his eyes with her hands. Dad open the door and then he winked at Mayu, give a code to open Kai’s eyes. Then Mayu slowly open her hands off. Slowly Kai open his eyes.

“Welcome back to Tokyo, son!” said Dad.

He’s shocked and widened his eyes as he see a red sport motorcycle in the garage. It’s a new cool motorcycle.

“Wow, Dad! Is that’s for me?” Kai can’t believe what happen to him. Dad nods and Kai smile widely. He walk approach the motorcycle.
***
The next morning, Kai take his motorcycle out. In the houseyard, he start to turn on the motorcyle just to check how the machine works. At that time, a man come out from the next house.

“Wow, that’s a cool motorcycle!” the man said.

Kai turn his head and face the man. “Haik..” Kai smiles.

“So, you are Tahakashi’s son, right?” the man asks him.

“Yes, I’m Takahashi Kai. Nice to meet you” Kai bowed to the man that looks like the same age as his Dad.

“Ah, Mr. Maeda!” Dad shout as she come out from the house. “You already meet my son.” Dad walk approach them. “Kai, this is Mr. Maeda, he lives in the next house.”

“Yes, we just moved here about seven months ago,” Mr. Maeda added.

Behind the window of Maeda’s house, a shoulder length haired cute girl watching their conversation.

“So, he is Mayu’s brother..” Acchan thought.

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: sofylerry on December 02, 2012, 10:41:46 AM
I really like your fanfic!  :thumbup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steven_0809 on December 02, 2012, 12:11:39 PM
This is a very good story :thumbup :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 02, 2012, 12:24:49 PM
mayu x sae??haha,what a pair!XD
ATSUMINA!!!
Why im so inlab with those two??

Thank u for the update! :doh:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 02, 2012, 12:49:11 PM
OH MY GOD!
MY OTP!!!
I now officially stalking your fic!  :on gay:
You made my Sunday Happpeeee  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: takamae on December 02, 2012, 12:55:16 PM
Wow...kai and acchan, can't wait the next update :D
Sae and mayu backstreet, kai is such a nice brother
Thanx for the update ^^
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Pdpond on December 02, 2012, 05:59:53 PM
Wait for next update :cow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 02, 2012, 08:00:12 PM
This is a good fic!
Please continue :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 03, 2012, 03:26:54 AM
Yeah!! maeda is right.. why he is always shirtless and I can´t see him too sexy...

jeje :B love it!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 03, 2012, 06:36:06 AM
LOVE THIS FANFIC !! THANK YOU !!  :heart: :cathappy: :thumbup :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 03, 2012, 12:15:15 PM
I really like it  :twothumbs

Kai should really think about putting on
clothes before opening the window

Please Continue
Waiting for the next update
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fuu_kun on December 03, 2012, 04:03:39 PM
when i read mayu become kai sister i though that mayuki will be appear again, but..  whats? O _ O
saemayu? its so damn goood XDb *reaction quenn* i miss this pair since dorama sakura kara no tegami~ so rare to find this pair :/ they're cute X3
pleasee continue
thankyuu :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: 21stMay on December 03, 2012, 04:07:45 PM
Like it so much :inlove:

The story is just different than any other story hehehe XD

Please update soon :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 03, 2012, 04:41:51 PM
THANK YOU GUYS FOR THE COMMENTS!!
I'M SO EXCITED AND CAN'T WAIT TO UPDATE IT AGAIN.

By the way, I'M SORRY for the "Kai's shirtless scene". I know you all can't help when you imagine it. I just want to make him looks sexy. But YES INDEED, HE'S DAMN SEXY!!

Now here's the 2nd chapter. Enjoy! :D




 The first day of college, Kai meet Riku. He’s walking with a girl clinging to his arm.

“Oi, Kai!!” greet Riku. They clap their hands. “Oh, let me introduce her. She’s Yuko, my girlfriend.”

“Oshima Yuko, nice to meet you” Yuko said introduce herself.

“Oh, hi Yuko-san. I’m Kai. Takahashi Kai.” Kai greet her.

"Yuko, Kai is my bestfriend since we were in primary school. Even in Hokkaido, he is my roomate" Riku explained.

"Oh.. You two must be very close" Yuko told them.

“So, can we get in now?” Riku ask Kai to get in the class.

Kai nods. Then Yuko takes down her hand off Riku’s arm. “Bye, Rikunyan!!” she waves her hand.

“Eh? She don’t want to join?” Kai asks.

“She’s in different major, Kai! She’s in interior design” Riku answer. “Now let’s go.”

The lesson that day seems not really hard. Almost every lecturer who come to the class only introducing theirselves or just started the class by introducing each other. While lunch time, Kai eating in the canteen with Riku.

Riku looks like really worried as Yuko haven’t come to the canteen yet. Then his phone ringing. It’s Yuko text him.

To: Rikunyaan
From: Yuko
Rikunyaan, I ‘ll come late for lunch. Please wait.
Mmuach..

For several minutes, they wait her without eat anything and Kai’s stomach started to make voice. Kai thought that he can’t stand his hunger, so he decided to order the food first. Just when he stand up from his seat, Riku talks “Ah, there she is! Hey Yuko, here!” Riku shout calling her girlfriend.

Kai sees Yuko saying goodbye to her friend and then ran towards them. The girl that was with Yuko seems familiar to Kai. She's the girl next house, the Maeda girl. She wears yellow jacket and a black shoulder bag.

“Oh my God, is that Maeda girl who lives next to my house? She study in this college? With Yuko?” Kai started to think. He is very grateful by this moment. He hope that the girl next house is really the student of this college too.

***

This is a very long and busy day for the freshman student because there are campus orientation programs. The programs ended in the evening. When Kai come out of the room, he find that it’s already dark outside. Kai drives his motorcycle back home. He drives for 15 minutes, then when he pass through the road, he sees a girl with yellow jacket walking on the sidewalk. Kai really sure that girl is Acchan. It can be seen by her sholder length black hair, and the bag she bring is the same like what he saw at college today. Kai drive slower and closer to her.

While keep walking on that quiet still road, Acchan hear a motorcycle voice come closer to her. She walk a little faster, she‘s afraid of bad boy or criminal wants to bother her.

Realizing that Acchan walk faster, Kai drive again and stop right in front of her. Acchan stops as Kai opens his helmet.

“You are… Maeda-san, right?” Kai ask then give her his sweetest smile.

Acchan nods. “I’m Kai. Takahashi Kai.” He give his hand and Acchan shake his hand.

“Maeda Atsuko- des” Acchan said.

“You live in the next house, right? Get on, let’s go home together.” Kai offer Acchan to take a ride with him.

“Umm.. no, thank you. I can walk” Atsuko said, then she smiles as she don’t want to make Kai disappointed.

Kai look around the street. ”I can’t let a girl walk alone through this quiet road at night. Come on, just take a drive with me.”

Acchan look around. Kai is right. The road seems very quiet and horrible in this late of night. But, it’s not like she want to refuse Kai’s offer.

Kai stares at her angelic face. He wait for Acchan’s answer and now his heart is beating faster.

“Honestly… I’m not really brave enough to ride a motorcycle” Acchan said shyly in a lower tone.

Kai chuckled. “Souka…”

“Sorry…” Acchan said as she look down.

“So, let’s walk together!” Kai said smiles to her.

“Eh?”

“Yeah. However, I can’t let you walk alone”

“But your mot..” before she can finish her sentence, then

“I can take it with me, let’s go”  Kai interrupt her then he walk beside Acchan while he take his motorcycle by dragging it. At first they just keep quiet each other. It makes Kai feels weird.

“I saw you at college today with Yuko” Kai start the conversation. “Which major are you in?”

“Oh, I’m in interior design major. How about you and… how do you know Yuko?”

“I’m in architecture major and… Yuko is my bestfriend’s girlfriend.  I just met her today.” Kai smile. “You know, it’s really good to have a neighbour who study at the same college as mine. And I’m sorry…”

“Eh? Sorry for what?”

“I should acquainted with you earlier. What kind of neighbour am I, just introduce myself after several days… Sorry.”

Acchan chuckled. "Ah, that's okay. It's good enough that you notice me as your neighbour."

"How can't I notice the girl in front of my window?" once again, Kai smiles to her. Acchan blushed. Then they walk without talk anything. Both of them feel uncomfortable with that kind of silence.

"By the way, Mayu never told me that she has a brother" finally Acchan break the silence.

"Really?" Kai surprised. "Hmm.. Maybe I'm not wanted to be her brother" Kai acting show his sad face.

Acchan laughing as she watching his cute face pouting like that. "So where have you been?"

"I'm studying in a boarding school in Hokkaido. I spent three years high school there."

"Souka.. That's why the room in front of mine was empty."

Kai nods.

"It must be hard to be seperated from your family" Acchan added.

"Yeah, but I'm glad that I have a lot of friends there. Especially Riku, you know? Yuko's boyfriend, he is my bestfriend since we were in primary school and in Hokkaido he became my roommate too!"

Then Kai continue "I'm very happy that I'm accepted to study here. At least, I can live together with my family again. How about you?"

"Eh? Me?" Acchan said. "Emm... It was bad because I sent application to a university in New York but I'm not accepted. That's why I'm studying here."

"That's good" Kai whispering.

"Eh? Did you say something?" ask Acchan.

"Oh, no. No, I didn't say anything" Kai lied. He just realized that he said that thing, he used to think that it was only his thought.

"But I heard you said 'it's good that I'm not accepted in New York' right?" Acchan pouting.

"Shit! She noticed it! Ah damn stupid you Kai!" he thought.

"Err I- I mean.. It's good b-because, if you were accepted in New York, that means I will never meet you," Kai blushed, can't believe that he just told her that embarrassing thing.

Acchan's cheek getting red. Then she glare at Kai. Acchan notice that Kai is sweating a lot. She stop walking.

“Eh? Why do you stop? Something wrong?” Kai asks her.

“Kai-kun… I think you should drive your motorcycle home” Acchan ask him.

“Why?” Kai confused.

“You’re sweating” as Acchan said. Kai wipe his fingers on his forehead. He just realized that he’s sweating a lot.

Acchan take a tissue from her bag then she gently wipe his sweat. Kai’s heart beats so fast as Acchan’s hand wipe his forehead… and his neck. Kai stocked still standing there while staring Acchan wiping his sweat.
Notice that Kai stares at her intensely, Acchan hurriedly pull her hand and act nervously. Now they just stand there speechless.

“Thank you” Kai said in a lover tone, nearly whispering.

“Kai-kun, it’s really okay if you drive your motorcycle home” Acchan said.

Kai shook his head. “It’s only 2 blocks more, let’s go.” Then Kai smile to her.


*Acchan’s POV*

What is happening here? Why do I feel nervous beside him? Kai-kun, you’re really nice person. And your smile… that’s sweet.

We walk again heading to our houses. We talk about a lot of things. About the reason why my family moved to Tokyo, about Mayu, our hobbies, anything... He tried to make some jokes too. I think he just want to make me happy even sometime he's failed in his jokes. But that's the point makes me happy, he always try to cheer me.

"Here we are..." Kai said when we arrived in front of our houses.

"Thank you for accompany me home, Kai-Kun" I smile and biwed to him.

"It's okay, Maeda-san. It's nice to have a walk with you" he said.

"Emm.. Just call me Atsuko. Or my friends usually call me Acchan, you can use it too" I said.

He's surprised. "Eh? Is that okay?"

"Yeah, you're my neighbour by the way. Even your sister calls me Acchan too" I replied.

"Oh okay then" he smile. Aww he has a very sweet smile with that dimple in his cheek.

"Good night Kai-kun" I said.

"Kai! Just call me Kai" he replied.

I nod and smile. "Good night Kai."

"Good night Atsuko" he said. "See you upstairs."

"Eh?" I'm a little bit confused. Then I realized that our rooms are facing each other. I chuckled.

"Just kidding. Good night" then he drag his motorcycle towards his house.

From this first conversation, I think I like him.

*End of Acchan’s POV*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fuu_kun on December 03, 2012, 04:53:50 PM
*fangirling*
kai acchan momments its sooo sweet x) drag his big motorbike surely will make him sweat xd acchan afraid of ride motorbike huh? why?

thankyou for the update ~ :bow:
looking forward for the next~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Pdpond on December 03, 2012, 05:10:07 PM
So sweet :heart: :heart: :heart:
I can't wait for your update!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 03, 2012, 06:17:53 PM
Yeah!! updated so fast love it!!!...

jeeje poor kai.. that moto seems so heavy.. but yeah kai and maeda can go in that motorcycle to university.. sound good!!

eh no more shirtless scene.. awww :B
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steftakami on December 03, 2012, 07:00:24 PM
omg!! please continue I like!!!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 03, 2012, 11:53:27 PM
ok thats it!
Im officially in love at ur fic!!
Im on a bus when im reading this,i just can help to smile!
And the other passenger is looking at me!
They thing im crazy!XD

Thank you for update!
And have a nice day.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steven_0809 on December 04, 2012, 07:31:16 AM
men this story is good!!!!!!!!! :thumbup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 04, 2012, 07:53:25 AM
Now that was really sweet  :wub:

Kai and Atsuko are really cute together :heart:

I really love this  :inlove: :inlove:
Please Continue
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 05, 2012, 02:16:58 AM
ok thats it!
Im officially in love at ur fic!!
Im on a bus when im reading this,i just can help to smile!
And the other passenger is looking at me!
They thing im crazy!XD

Thank you for update!
And have a nice day.

Lol. Be careful Chichay12-san people might be thinking that you're really crazy.  :lol:


Thanks all... Can't wait to update it soon :D
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 05, 2012, 02:40:56 AM
(http://i47.tinypic.com/28016k3.jpg)

This is what happened in Acchan's graduation concert. They're kissing in public!!  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on December 05, 2012, 02:50:41 AM
atsumina are the best but... i want my saeyuki..... :) onegai... :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 05, 2012, 03:12:19 AM
i have fallen in love with this fic its too cute :)
please update soon!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATE!!
Post by: chemicalstar on December 05, 2012, 04:37:01 AM
YOSSHH!!! Finally.. here’s the third chapter for you guys! Enjoy :D


CHAPTER 3



*Kai’s POV*

I come into my house and find mayu parents in the living room.

“Kai, we’re sorry for having dinner without you. You’re coming late… Where have you been?” Mom ask him.

“No worries, Mom. I’ll have my dinner by myself. It’s okay. I’m sorry for coming late, it’s been a busy day at college.”

“Go clean yourself before dinner, look at you, how could you sweating like that?”

“Err.. it’s aaa... Nothing. I’m just feel the weather is hot,” I said, then I go upstairs and take a shower. After that, I walk towards my window and sneak a little through the curtain. I see the light of Atsuko’s room is already turned on. Then, I go downstairs to have my dinner.

“Where’s Mayu?” I ask Mom during the dinner.

“In her room of course! She’s been with her laptop since hours ago, I guess her IQ will be raising a lot when she’s done” Mom answered jokingly.

After I finished my dinner, I go upstairs to Mayu’s room and find out she’s behind her laptop. I knock the door even it’s already opened.

“Oh, Kai! Come in” she greet me then close his laptop quickly.

“What are you doing?” I walk towards her and sit on the edge of her bed.

She smiles nervously then whisper to me, “I’m chatting with Sae.Hehe”

“Ah, you know, Mom thought that you’re studying, Sist!” I slap her head a little makes her pout.

“Don’t you ever feel in a relationship, Kai? If you have a girlfriend, you must be miss her and want to be with her everytime, right?”

What Mayu said really makes me think that, yeah.. she’s right. And that’s why I come to her room. I want to ask Atsuko’s number. Yeah, my sister is right, maybe this is what Sae feels now. He want to spend his time with Mayu forever. And I’m feeling it now, Atsuko and I just stay apart for not more than 2 hours, but it feels like I MISS HER ALREADY. Even though, we just know each other and she’s not my girlfriend yet. But I miss her.

“Sist, can you tell me about Atsuko-san?”

“Atsuko-san? Do you mean Acchan? Maeda’s family in the next house?” ask Mayu confused.

“Yes. That Maeda girl!”

“Ahhh!” Mayu’s eyes widened. Then she chuckled. “She’s available, Kai. She’s single.”

“Hey I didn’t ask you about her relationship status!”

“But your eyes did!” Mayu said, now she’s laughing at me.

I quickly turn my face off her. I’m blushing. Then I’m a little laughing too. I guess my sister is knowing me so well.

“We walk home together today. She’s nice, and beautiful.”

“Hahaha… So, my brother now is officially falling in love, huh?” Mayu tease me. Ah that’s annoying. But I think it’s fine, besides, she’s really nice sister. She trust me to keep secret about her backstreet relationship with Sae, so I think I can trust her too.

“Yeah, I guess. Can you help me?”

“Helping what? You have to make her love you by yourself, not me!” she answer.

“I know, I know. But, at least, can you give me her number?”

“Why don’t you ask her by yourself? ”

“Oh, come on, Sist! Please support meee.. or..”

“Or what?”

“Or I’ll tell mom about Sae!”

“Hmm.. so now you’re threatening me, Kai! ”

“It’s not like that. But… ah, come on, just give me her number!” I’m a bit annoyed now. She’s laughing and shout, “Acchaaaaann, Kai wants your number!!!”

I quickly cover her mouth with my hand. Oh damn, that little rat! Urrgghh… I hope her shout can’t be heard to Atsuko’s house or I will be dead in embarrassed.  Finally, Mayu give me Atsuko’s number. I’m very happy, then I ran to my room. But… it’s bad when I find Atsuko’s lamp isturned off. Uhh, I guess she’s sleeping.

That night, I can’t sleep well. I keep thinking about the girl who maybe now is sleeping not far away from me. That girl really drives me crazy.

*End of Kai’s POV*



The next morning, Kai wake up early, just to make sure that he wake up earlier than Acchan. Why? What for? Remember, he’s got her number now. Kai types “Good Morning” so many in many ways like: “Wake up, it’s a beautiful day, just like you”, or “It’s cloudy outside. Wake up, the world needs you to shine the day”, he types it, then feel not confident, so he deletes it, types it again, and finally ended with only a short message like this:

“Good morning
*Kai”


A few minutes later, Kai feels so excied when he get a reply message from Acchan.

“Good morning, Kai! How do you get my number?”

“Last night I dreamed about you giving your number to me” with a smile emoticon Kai send it to Acchan.

“Ah, you’re such a sweet talker. Let me guess, it’s Mayu, right?”

“Hehe. Yes she is. But about the dream, I really dreamed you last night ”

Acchan a little blushed when reading Kai’s message. The she replay: “Really? What’s the dream about?”

“The dream was about ‘we went to campus together’. Would you like to make it real? Please ” Kai try to tease her.

Acchan chuckeld, then she reply it again “Hmm… you got the trick! Okay then, pick me at 8 am.”

That morning, Kai quickly get prepare for college today. He goes without his motorcycle to Acchan’s house. When Kai knocking on the main door, Acchan’s Dad open it.

“Ah, Takahashi! Please come in…” Acchan’s Dad greet him very kindly.

“Can I help you?”

“Errr… no, sir. I’m here to pick Atsuko up. We’re going to campus together” Kai said.

“Oh, souka.. But where’s your coolbike? You know, your motor sport?” he asked.

“Oh, I leave my motorycle at home. ”

“Eh? Why?”

“I think Atsuko more like to go by train or bus” Kai guess.

“Hmm… actually, Acchan told us about you two last night. I’m sorry that you had to walk dragging your bike home last night” Acchan’s Dad talk as they sit in the living room.

“Ah, it’s okay Mr.Maeda. It was actually my decision to do it. It’s not her fault, really” Kai answered.

“She got a trauma” Acchan’s Dad suddenly said.

Kai a bit shocked. “What? Trauma?”

Acchan’s Dad nods. “Acchan has a brother. He is a bikeracer,  he also often accompany Acchan to school by his motorbike and Acchan like it too. They used to ride the motorbike whenever the go hangout together. But, tragicly, he’s got an accident during the race” Acchan’s Dad tell Kai their past.

“Accident? What happened to him?”
“He’s dead at the accident. It makes Acchan really sad and it was really hard for her to accpet this reality. That’s why we moved to Tokyo. We want to start a new day” Acchan’s Dad continues it.

“Oh, so that’s why Atsuko don’t want to ride motorbike again” Kai turn down his head.

“I’m a motorbike lover too, Kai. That’s why I like your cool bike. So many times I told Acchan that the cause of his brother’s death is purely accident. I told her not to get trauma to drive motorbike. But, you see… she’s still afraid until now. That’s why finally I sold my motorbike before we moved to Tokyo.” Acchan’s Dad moves closer to Kai. His hand hold Kai’s and he look at Kai seriously. “Kai, would you liketo help me make my daughter erase her trauma? I want my daughter back like before. Please…”

Kai nods confidently,. “I’ll try, Mr.Maeda. You can count on me.”

“Good morning” suddenly Acchan apprears, she walk downstairs. “Kai, you’re here. It’s not 8 am yet.”

“You ready?” ask Kai.

“Uhn!” Acchan nods.

They say goodbye to Acchan’s parents and go to campus. They walk to the nearest bus stop then take a ride by bus. Acchan sits right beside the window and Kai sits beside her. Along the ride, she keep looking outside the window. It makes Kai staring at her forever looking her cute face.

“Kai…” Acchan call him, she turn her head facing Kai. “Why are you doing this?”

“Eh? Doing what?” Kai surprised as their faces now is close enough.

“Doing it. You leave your motorbike just to go to campus with me. I feel not easy with it. You made a matyr of me, I’m sorry” Acchan looks deep into Kai’s eyes.

Kai smiles. “It’s okay, I think I can do anything to be with you.”

“Sweet talker!” Acchan pout.

“I think it’s not fair for you because I did nothing to you” Acchan look at the back of the seat in front of her.

“Hmm… you can do something. May I ask you to do it?”

“Doing what?”

“Please, take a ride with me this evening to have some coffee, by my bike”  Kai shows his puppy eyes.

Thinking that maybe it would make Kai happy, Acchan finally giving up. “Ok-okay… But jus for tonight and…”

“And?” Kai’s very excited.

“Choose the nearest café to our house” ask Acchan.

“Deal!” Kai said, his heart feels like to explode. “Yosh!!! Having a date tonight! YEEEAAYY!!” Kai thought.


End of Chapter 3.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 05, 2012, 08:27:44 AM
Sweet!!!

Kai is reallly such a sweet talker

Tnx for the update
Please Continue
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 05, 2012, 09:04:17 AM
YAttA!!!
new update!!
 :farofflook: :farofflook:
Lol. Be careful Chichay12-san people might be thinking that you're really crazy.  :lol:


next time..will i try not to smile to wide while im reading this..XD
i hope i can??.. :banghead:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fuu_kun on December 05, 2012, 01:36:47 PM
woow you update soo fast! good job and thankyou :bow:
nice love development between kai n acchan x)
acchan brother is a racer huh? sugoiiii
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 05, 2012, 04:07:18 PM
I'm already dying for too much Atsumina's cuteness  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: 21stMay on December 05, 2012, 04:18:01 PM
Fainting from all the atsumina's hahahaah :inlove:

What a great update chemicalstar-san :twothumbs

Please update the next chapter as soon as possible :bow: Sangkyu XD
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 06, 2012, 04:07:21 AM
awww takaboy you are a sweet talker marry me.. poor acchan -_-
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 06, 2012, 04:18:26 AM
kai is such a sweet boy :)
this fic is so cute
Thx for the update!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 06, 2012, 04:19:48 PM
Yeahh Kai is actually toi cute for a college guy.

I'm glad that you all like my fanfic. Gonna update it ASAP for you all.

THANX
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 06, 2012, 05:54:27 PM
taka so sweet!!
 :heart: :heart: :heart:
ATSUMINANESS!
 :luvluv1:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 07, 2012, 02:23:03 AM
OMGIRL!! So cute!!! >.< atsumina!!! THANKS !!  :heart: :panic: :thumbup :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fuu_kun on December 07, 2012, 05:15:52 AM
yeay please update soon~ :bow:
thanks
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fael_c00l on December 07, 2012, 09:43:21 AM
yo yo yo update soon,, update soon!!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: stepk on December 07, 2012, 06:58:54 PM
So sweet  :inlove:

Kawaii   XD

update soon  :cow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) CHAPTER 4
Post by: chemicalstar on December 09, 2012, 04:28:38 AM
Here's the next chapter for you all who stay reading my fic. thank you




CHAPTER 4


Kai gets his motorbike in front of Acchan's house. He pushes the horn 2 times and then Acchan comes out.

"Wow, you are such an 'on time' person" Acchan said walking towards Kai who's on his motorbike.

"Shall we go now?" Kai asked with smile then he offer a helmet for Acchan.

Acchan stop for a while. She feels unconfident to ride motorbike again for almost 1 year since her brother's death. Kai give his hand to help her get on the motorbike. "Come on, don't be afraid, you can bear it." Acchan take his hand but still doesn't move on to the motorbike.

"Trust me, you'll be fine" Kai smile and hold Acchan's hand. She finally get on the motorbike.


*Kai's POV*

I turn my motorbike on and start to drive. Suddenly, I feel that Atsuko's hands around my waist. I can feel that maybe she's nervous and afraid of riding motorbike again. BUT for me, it feels like there's electricity when she touch her hands on my waist. It makes me nervous because this is the first time there's a girl stay very close to me. Even her chest now is glued to my back. It driving me crazy. It just like Atsuko hugs me from behind.

Oh my God. Kai focus, Kai! FOCUS!

Fortunately, thr cafe is not far away from our house. It only takes 10 minutes driving. We talk about a lot of things. Actually, I want to make us know each other closer. From everything she told me about her life, I think I like her, NO-- I LOVE HER. Oh yeah, she told me about her hobbies and her favorites.

There, in the cafe there's a live music stage. There are 4 guys play acoustic music on stage. I can see that Atsuko looks like love their playing. So I ask her, "Do you love music?"

She turn her face to me," Yes of course! Everybody love music." She smiles.

"I can sing," I suddenly said that thing confidently.

She looks like surprised. "Really?"

I nods. "I joined a band when I was in high school. I play guitar and as a vocalist too."

Now she looks like adores me. I like it when she smirk happily like that. "Umm... Can you wait here for a while?"

She nods without knowing where I am going to. I sat up and walked towards the stage. I approach the band vocalist and whispering something to him.

He smiles and he sat up from his seat. He gives a code to his frienda so we can gather for a while. After a minute of gathering, we seperated. I take the vocalist place.

"Good evening everyone" I start to talk on stage. I feel very nervous. This is not like what I used to when I'm on stage.

"I'm Takahashi Kai. Tonight I want to sing a song that specially sang for the pretty girl who sits at the corner, there." I glare to Atsuko who seems very surprised as the people around look at her. She smiles and that's KILLING ME.

"This song is special for you, Atsuko.." I continued as all the people in the cafe, including the waitress and the cafe owner starts to give me applause.

I take the guitar and starts to play it.

### Edwin McCain - I'll Be ###
*open this link to hear the song:
m.youtube.com/watch?v=rJdiR5muWLU&desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DrJdiR5muWLU


All the people around give me applause. "Thank you.." I said then I puy the guitar and saying thanks to the band. After  I walk towards our table. When I walk, I can hear people talk abou me. Such as:

"Ahh I want to be his girlfriend!"

"Such a romantic guy.."

"The girl is very lucky, I want to be like her"

I'm glad to hear that. It feels like I'm successfully performing the song. I hope Atsuko like it too.

"How was that?" I sit in front of her and drink my coffee again.

"That was beautiful. You have a great voice, Kai" She smirks on me.

"No. Not the song," I said. "I mean... Umm, how do you feel when I sing it for you." I look deep in to her eyes, seriously. My heart starts beating rapidly. Actually it's not easy for me to look into her eyes, but I can't resist it.

She smiles. "I'm drowning" she said in a lower tone. We both blushed and we're facing each other, so we can see our cheeks are getting red.

There's a silence for a while. But she break it and say "Thank you."

My heart's beating so fast again. I still can't believe what I have done. And thanks God, she like it.

*End of Kai's POV'

----–----------------------------------

*Atsuko's POV'

I see something different on his eyes. It feels warm and full of love. The way he holds my hand, the way he looks into my eyes, the way he sings for me, that's just makes my heart melts. He successfully make me fight my fear of riding motorcycle. That's because I feel safe with him. Oh, God. I think I'm in with love this cute guy.

We go home after that romantic night. He stops his bike in front of my house. I take the helmet off and give it to him.

"So, tomorrow we'll go to campus together again?" he shows his puppy eyes again. That makes me giggle. So cute.

"Okay," I smile. He looks like very happy.

"By bus or.. my bike again?"

I think for a while. "Hmm.. Let's try to ride it again." I said as I poke his bike. He smirks.

"That's good. I'm proud of you."

"Thanks for tonight, Kai" I said.

"Good night Atsuko.." he wave his hand then leave.

Tomorrow morning he pick me up to go to campus together.

"Shall I pick you up to go home?" he ask when we arrive at campus, in front of my major building.

"Hmm... I think you don't have to, Kai. I promised to Yuko to buy concert ticket together after class."

"Eh concert? What concert?"

"Kai, I just told you last night that I love 2PM," I said. "Yuko  and I have a a plan to buy it togeher.

"Oh yeah. I got it..." he nods. "Okay then, have a great day Atsuko."

We both seperated. I walk to the class and find out that Yuko is already inside.. with Riku.. kissing.

I pull myself out of the class when I find they're doing 'some love things' but it seems like they're noticing my appearance.

"Atsuko?" Yuko call me. "We're sorry, just come here!"

I walk into the class again and now I find Yuko sits on her chair and Riku sits on the other chair.

"Ohayo" said Riku wave his hand to me.

"Ohayo" I reply. "Sorry to interrupt you two."

"Ah, no it's okay Acchan. It's good that you come. If not, maybe Yuko will ask me for more."

I chuckled. Oh, this pervert couple! But why do I feel myself jealous of those two? I feel like... Oh they're such in love. I want to be in love...

"Riku why are you still here? Kai said that you have a class this morning" I said.

"Uh? Really? Did I forget it?" Riku looks like stupid. "OMG YES I FORGET IT!! Ahh it's because of you, Yuko."

"Eehh?? Why do you blame it on me while you enjoyed it?" Yuko pout.

"Ahaha I'm just kidding," Riku starts to pack his bag and kiss Yuko's forehead. "I'm leaving, see you tonight," he wink to Yuko and she's look like very excited.

Ahh.. This couple, makes me jealous again.

"Bye!!" he wave his hand and go out of the class.

"ACCHAN!!!" Yuko suddenly shout on me.

I'm shocked. "What? Yuko you shocked me!"

"Heeeyy... What happened with you and that Takahashi boy?!" she tease me.

"Eh? Nothing" I reply innocently, hide my blush.

"You just mention his name this morning. When did you meet him eh? You got a date with him?"

"Yuko! He's my neighbour.Of course I met him" I said.

Then suddenly some girls come to the class. "Ah, Acchan!! Who's the cute guy drive you to the campus this morning? Is he your brother?" ask her.

"Yeah. If he's really your brother, then... You can intoduce him to us?" they said.

I feel like I'm burning inside when I hear that some girls adores Kai. Yuko notice it, she know who's the cute guy that they mean.

"Ahh.. That cute guy is Acchan's boyfriend!" suddenly Yuko tell them.

"Boyfriend?" they shocked. "Ah, that's bad. Acchan is very lucky," one of them said. "But you two looks cute together" she continue.

I glare at Yuko who smirks at me.

"Hmm... So that Takahashi boy just drove you to campus, huh?" she tease me again.

I drown my face onto my bag. "But there's nothing with us."

"Nothing? If nothing why does your face is looks like tomato, Acchan?! Hahaha" she laugh, very satisfied of teasing me.

I pout but the she talk again. "I heard a lot about him from Riku. Seems like he's a very nice guy. You have to win him, Acchan!"

"But I don't know if he likes me or not. Maybe I'm not his type..."

"Talking about his type... Riku told me that he never with a girl."

"Eh? Really?" I can't believe that, since Kai is a pro sweet talker and he's good in makes my heart melt.

"But he ever fell in love with a girl when they we're in junior high school."

I don't know why, but Yuko's last sentence is a little make my heart torn. I feel like... I'm jealous.

"Riku said, Kai fell in love with a girl in their school. She's kind of beautiful, rich, and famous girl at school. Kai confessed his feeling to the girl. But you may don't believe. Kai and Riku was a dumb and unfamous when they were in high school. Even you can say that they were freaks and geeks!"

I giggle when I imagine what Kai looks like when he was in junior high school. It must be very different with his appearance now... hot and handsome.

"The girl dumped Kai. Even Kai and the girl looks like beauty and the beast, but I think that's too rude!"

Poor Kai, I don't know that he has a bad experience with girl.

"The girl went abroad after graduation. After that, Kai never seen with a girl anymore. And... Finally, it's you!"

"Ah, so that girl is Kai's first love, huh?" I ask Yuko.

"Hmm... Maybe. But that's not important. Riku said that Kai's already forget about her long time ago."

*End of Atsuko's POV*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: qweakb on December 09, 2012, 10:22:21 AM
nice and sweet chapter...  :)

please continue writing the story and update as fast as possible  XD
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 09, 2012, 10:52:16 AM
Wohooo, Acchan jealous with Kai so called first love. Deep inside her (Acchan) heart, she love Kai already ! Make them together soon !
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on December 09, 2012, 11:21:37 AM
may i suggest ... make that girl who dumped kai to come back and challenge Acchan in winning his heart!  :panic:

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 09, 2012, 12:08:15 PM
Dont tell me that rich girl is.....RAY!?!  :on blackhole:   :mon wtf:

That rich girl might come back!!!!  :frustrated: :pleeease: :mon scare:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 09, 2012, 01:15:26 PM
may i suggest ... make that girl who dumped kai to come back and challenge Acchan in winning his heart!  :panic:

Yes, Sydney-san, I want to make them together soon! But, DC2805-san is right. It's time for acchan to fight for her love!!

 correnereyes-san... I already had the storyline, but stull confused who will be the girl. I thought about Ray to be her. But don't worry... it's a KaixAcchan fic, NOT KaixRay fic!!

I had an exam for next 3 days, so maybe I'll be back after that... o course with the new update. I hope you all can comment anything about this fic so I can extend the story and make it great.

Thank you for reading my fic. I'm glad that you all like it. Keep reading...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 09, 2012, 01:23:35 PM

I had an exam for next 3 days, so maybe I'll be back after that... o course with the new update. I hope you all can comment anything about this fic so I can extend the story and make it great.

Thank you for reading my fic. I'm glad that you all like it. Keep reading...

goodluck with ur exam..and comeback soon!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on December 09, 2012, 02:05:36 PM
 :drool: :drool: :drool: super imagination .... yuko and riku kissing in an empty room... :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:

pls. update more...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Pdpond on December 09, 2012, 03:24:32 PM
Kai so sweet~ :heart:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 10, 2012, 02:39:15 AM
OMG!! Iknow that this girl is ray, right? aww takaboy love it!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 10, 2012, 04:16:49 AM
Oh no I sense that the rich girl is Ray... I feel a disaster coming...
Hope Kai won't be stupid and hope he will stay by Acchan's side
Thank you for the update :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 10, 2012, 07:29:12 AM
Thanks for this !! Atsumina!! :thumbup :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED CHAPTER 5!!
Post by: chemicalstar on December 12, 2012, 03:43:32 PM
I'M BACK!!!
Yeay! Finally finished the exam. As I promised to you that I'll be back after the exam with a new update. Thanks for keep waiting. ENJOY!!




CHAPTER 5

The day is finally coming. The 2PM concert. Since the interior design major has an important seminar today, Acchan and Yuko decide to go to campus first before attending the gig.

"Argghh.. I can't focus!!" Yuko whisper to Accha who sits beside her while the lecturer is speaking in front of the students.

"Yeah.. Can't wait for the gig!" said Acchan. She keep staring at the clock, wishing it could be running faster. Acchan look around the room, she found that the one who feel so bored with the lecturer's speech is not only her. It's everybody. She found some people are falling asleep, texting on their phone, or even a boy in front of her is drawing cartoon on his college book.

Two hours later, the seminar is over. Almost more than a hundreed students in the room rushing to go out of the room. It's very crowded as everyone wanted to be the first to go out.

"Aahh.. ITTAII!!" Acchan felt like she's being pushed and then she fall to the ground.

"Acchan!!" Yuko shouted then grab Acchan out of the crowd. Seems like Acchan can't stand properly, Yuko take Acchan on her shoulder and put her on a seat.

"Are you okay?!" ask Yuko.

"My ankle..." Acchan groans, seems like it's very hurt.

"Oh my god, how could it happen?" Yuko feel so worried about her friend. Then she think that she have to call somebody. She grab her phone and start to call the one whose picture is being her wallpaper, Riku.

"Moshi-Moshi"

"Rikunyaaan!! Are you busy?"

"Eh? No, not really. I'm still in campus, but the class is over. Why so sudden?"

"Err.. Look, would you like to come to the auditorium near the gym please? Acchan is get injured. We need help"

"Majide?!" Riku feel shocked. Kai who is doing his college task beside him look at him.

"What happened?" Kai said to Riku without voice.

"Okay okay! We'll be there in a minute!" said Riku then he close the phone.

"Acchan got injured, they need our help" said Riku to Kai.

"WHAT??!! How could.."

"Let's go!" just when Kai about to finish his sentence, Riku grab him and they ran to the auditorium.

The two hot and young guys enter the auditorium and find Acchan and Yuko sit on the first row seats. Kai quicky run towards Acchan.

"Atsuko! What happened?" Kai ask worriedly.

"It's okay, Kai. Don't be too worried, it's just my ankle getting hurt" Acchan said.

"She was pushed by the crowd and fell down when we try to go out of the room" Yuko added.

Kai touched and caressed Accgan's ankle.

"Arrgh.. it hurts Kai!!" Acchan shouted.

"Oops sorry. I'm sorry" Kai then massaged her ankle more gently.

"Are you sure you can do that, dude?" Riku ask. Looks like he don't believe with Kai.

"Yeah, my dad is a doctor, remember? And I learned a lot of things from him. Even fixing injured ankle like this."

As Kai keep massaging her ankle, Acchan staring on him.

"Why did he look so worried when he came here? And now he look so serious fixing my ankle. You're so kind, Kai" Acchan thought.

After several minutes, Kai finally stop his 'work'. "Nah.. Is it better?" he asked.

Acchan try to move her ankle a little and it feels better. She nodded, "Yeah, it feels better. Thanks Kai."

"Emm.. But I think it's ni fixed properly. We must go to the clinic to make it better," Kai said. "Let's see if you can walk or not". He stood up and give his hand to hold Acchan.

Acchan try to stand up but she failed. It still hurt to stand up and walk.

"See, we should go to the clinic." Kai said.

"Yuko.."

"Eh? Yeah?"

"Just go to the concert without me. You can ask anyone to replace me, I think I can"t go to the concert with this condition" Acchan said.

"Eh?" Yuko still confused.

"It's okay, Yuko. It's a rare occasion to watch 2PM's concert. Just go, I'll be fine"

Yuko thinking for a while, the she glare at Riku. "Woul you like to accompany me?"

"EEEHHH?! Me?! Watching these dancing boyband??!" Riku looks like very shocked.

"Please... " Yuko shows her puppy eyes.

"Shit. Why does she must show that glare. That's killing me!" Riku though.
"O-okay. I'm going with you."

"Jusy go have fun, dude! I'll take care of her" Kai said as he give his motorbike key to Riku.
"What's this?" Riku asked confusedly.

"That's a key!" Kai answered.

"I know, you idiot! I mean what's for?"

"Take my motorbike."

"Oh.. Okay."

Riku and Yuko then leave the two in the auditorium since the time is closer to the concert show. As they leave, Kai move his body closer to Acchan. Acchan's heart is beating faster as Kai's face is inches away from hers. It's like... "Is he going to kiss me?" Acchan thought.

The she feels Kai's arm move around her back and his another arm moves aroun her legs. He lift her up and carry her out of the room.

"Kai.." she said in lower tone, it makes Acchan shocked when he suddenly carried her up.

Kai look at her for a while but did't say anything. He keep walking to the gate if the college gate. Acchan can see the sweats rolling down his forehead. It must be so hard to carry a girl and walking far enough to the gate.

"Kai, you don't have to do this" Acchan said.

"Why? You want me to throw you into that fountain?" Kai said as they across the college fountain. Kai approach the fountain and act like he's about to throw Acchan inside.

Acchan screamed, makes Kai laughing. Then Kai walk and they both laughing again.

"Okay stop. Don't laughing again.. It makes you heavier, you know" Kai teased Acchan and make ker pout. He giggled by looking at Acchan's pouting face. Makes him want to kiss her or something.

They arrived in front of the gate, a taxi stopped and Kai take Acchan in. He came inside and sit beside Acchan. He ordered the driver to drive them to the nearest clinic. As they arrived in the clinic, Kai carried Acchan inside and a doctor staryed to examine her. After it finished, the sat in front of the doctor's table.

"It's just an litte injury. It will be better at least in two days," the doctor said. "But you don't try to move extremely. Juet take a rest until it's better enough to walk, okay?"

"Okay. Thanks, doc!" Acchan said.

"Ahh.. You two remind me of my younger day. Being married in young age is not easy. But people who can do it well is totally great," said the doctor. It makes the two confused. "So, what year is your marriage now?"

"EEHH?!!" both or them very surprised with the doctor question. But beside that, both of the are blushing. Their cheeks are getting red.

"What? You're not married yet?"

"Not yet!" said Kai. Acchan glare at him. He notice it.

"I mean, we're not even a couple.." Kai correct his answer. "...yet" he added. Makes Acchan giggled inside.

"Oh, souka. I'm sorry. Looking at you carry her here, just like a married couple. Hehe" said the doctor.

After finished their adminiatration in the clinic, Kai carry Acchan again to the taxi and they go home. It's almost 11pm and Kai find out that Acchan's lamp still turned on. Then Kai text Acchan as he think that she may not sleeping yet.

"You haven't sleeping yet?" then Kai send it to Acchan.

Acchan who now is laying on her bed feel so happy when she receive a text message from Kai.

"How could I sleep when Yuko is having fun with my idols?! :'( "

"Ah! That dancing boyband. You still thinking about them? LOL"

"Yeah. It's bad that I can't watch their live concert. It'a a rare occasion."

By receiving that message from Acchan, he think to do something.

Acchan still staring at her phone screen, but there's no reply from Kai. Minutes by minutes she wait but there's still no reply. She feel disappointed then decide to sleep.

Not long before she really fell asleep, she heard a sound of guitar from outside. The melody is sounds familiar to her. Acchan try to wake up and crawl to her window. When she open the curtain, she found Kai is sitting on the window, playing guitar and sing one of her favorite song, 2PM-I Can't.

Acchan open the window and can't help to smile watching Kai playing guitar and singing that song. It really makes Acchan's heart melts.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: qweakb on December 12, 2012, 03:57:17 PM
nice update :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 12, 2012, 04:03:33 PM
Such a romantic that Kai sing Acchan favourite 2pm song.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on December 12, 2012, 05:41:19 PM
Wow, Kai is so sweet...yes! please make Acchan yours soon!  8)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 12, 2012, 07:03:38 PM
ZOMG!!
why kai is so sweet??  :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: :wriggly: flail so much in happiness

kai!!! acchan is all yours!  :luvluv1:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 12, 2012, 09:50:41 PM
It's like Acchan is mu sister and I'm like "Kai, take care of my sister!' :D
Please update soon AND KISS!!!! I want A KISS!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 12, 2012, 10:28:29 PM
i love this fic please update soon ;)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 13, 2012, 03:59:18 AM
HAHAH so cute Kai!! forever atsumina!!! thanks !!   :heart: :heart: :deco: :thumbup :cathappy: :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 13, 2012, 04:55:13 AM
It's like Acchan is mu sister and I'm like "Kai, take care of my sister!' :D
Please update soon AND KISS!!!! I want A KISS!!

SOON!! Be patient. haha
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 13, 2012, 06:03:32 AM
omg!1 so sweet kai.. be my boyfriend you are so sweet... love it!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 13, 2012, 02:12:51 PM
That's so sweet  :heart:

Kai is an ideal boyfriend  :inlove: :inlove:

Tnx for the update

Please continue
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 13, 2012, 03:15:07 PM
That's so sweet  :heart:

Kai is an ideal boyfriend  :inlove: :inlove:

Tnx for the update

Please continue
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED CH.6 Pt.1 (KojiYuu scene)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 13, 2012, 05:49:10 PM
Yo fellas... Here's the 6th chapter for you. But sorry there's no atsumina moment inside. It's a special chapter part for KojiYuu.

I divide this chapter into 2 parts, and the last one will be updated soon. This part might be a little hot. Be ready...



CHAPTER 6 Part 1




Dddrrrrdddd dddrrrrrdddd...

Sound of trilling phone on the table beside Yuko's bed. The light is still turned off, but the room is full of red light from the sunlight through the red curtain. It makes the room feel so warm and the two bodies who still laid on the bed feels like don't want to get up.

Dddrrrrrddd ddrrrdddd...

The phone is trilling again.

"Riku.. It's your phone" said Yuko with lazy voice, still closing her eyes.

Riku lazily move Yuko's arm on his body and trying so hard to reach the phone. It's a message from Kai.

"Dude where are you?! Come pick me up. You still take my bike with you, right? Pick me up at home in an hour. Don't be late, we got a mission!"

"Mission?" Riku thought confused.

Riku try to search his pants under the blanket that covering their naked bodies. After searching it for a while, he finally find it. Then he quickly wear it. Feeling that Riku is about to go, Yuko open her eyes.

"Where are you going? It's still early morning.." Yuko said lazily.

"What is early morning? It's already 8am Yuko.."

"But it's Sunday!"

"I got something to do with Kai today," Riku remove the blanket and start to get off of the bed.

Yuko grab his hand before he leave and pull him hard towards her and make the blanket removed from her body. Riku fell down on the bed and looked down as he saw Yuko's uncovered naked body. He gulped inside.

"What time is your appointment with Kai?" Yuko asked looking deep in his eyes. Their face just like inches close to each other.

"It-it's a .. it's 9 am" Riku answered nervously.

Yuko move closer to him and whispering in his ear. "We still have an hour, Kai can wait." Then she pull Riku to her as she start to undo his pants again.

"OMG. She wants it again??!! Oh, it must be make me loose a lot of energy for today!" Riku thought.

Yuko kiss his neck and lick his ear. It makes him shivered. Now Yuko can feel 'his friend' is waking up and getting harder on her thigh. She move her hand and start to rub it.

Riku groans heavily, feeling the sensation in the morning. He move to kiss Yuko's lips deeply. While their tongue start to battle, he move his hands and open Yuko's thighs widely. Yuko deepen their kiss as Riku slide his friend inside her, drown their moans in kisses.



*flashback*

When Riku and Yuko in the queue to the concert, Riku felt so awkward. All people around are women. It made him feels lika a gay.

"OMG. What if someone who knows me find out I'm here, watching the dancing boyband, and... They must be thinking that I'm a gay!" Riku thought.

During the concert. Riku just stand still while Yuko and all the people are cheering up, shouting, even when the boyband open their shirts and show their sixpack bodies Yuko screaming loudly.

"This is crazy. My girlfriend screaming at other guy's body in front of me??!! What does she think about?! Oh, I feel like I'm totally a gay now!" Riku thought.

After the concert, Riku keep silence and that made Yuko feel uneasy.

"Rikunyaan.. Why are you so silent?"

"....."

"Rikuuu... I know you must be hiding something from me. Come on tell me, honey.."

Riku glared at her. "in the concert, you screaming at that dancing boyband like crazy. It was like, you don't love me anymore... I felt like I'm a gay, going to the dancing gays concert" Riku pouted at her.

Yuko giggled. She pinch his cheek wit her hands. "You're jealous!!"

"NO, I'M NOT"

"Hey, look at me" Yuko hold Riku's chin so that he look at Yuko. "By accompanied me to the concert doesn't mean that you're a gay."

Yuko move closer and whisper in his ear, "We can prove it."

Then both of them spend the night at Yuko's house. Yuko enter her room, followed by Riku. She quickly lock the door and push him hard onto the bed. She climbed on the bed and place herself on the top of him.

"Let's prove it." Yuko touch Riku's nose with her finger. She move her hands down to his chin. "My boyfriend..." then she move to his chest. "...is not" then move to his stomach, "..a gay," and she stop on his asset.

"Aahh...Yuuchan!" Riku starts moaning when she touch and rub his friend.

After a couple of minutes, Riku took his revenge. He roll their body so now he's on top of her. He quickly undo her clothes, then his clothes.

Lust is fulfilling in his mind, and he start to make a move, kissing her rough and then every bed scene happened that night.

*End of flashback*



Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 13, 2012, 06:24:26 PM
Wow!! That was HOT!!
Promise to make one of those scenes with Kai and Acchan!!  :hiakhiakhiak: *perv mode ON*
Please update SOON!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 13, 2012, 06:27:38 PM
that was hot i want to know the part 2  please  update soon :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: vPANDAv on December 13, 2012, 06:34:15 PM
YES KOJIYUU!!   :deco: :heart:

yea! you go yuko, get yourself satisfied before riku runs away (lol)  :peace:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 13, 2012, 09:40:32 PM
 :on bleed: :on bleed:  :on bleed:
hot scene on the run
Go Go Go kojiyuu!!!
Yuko always the best!  :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 14, 2012, 02:00:02 AM
Wow!! That was HOT!!
Promise to make one of those scenes with Kai and Acchan!!  :hiakhiakhiak: *perv mode ON*
Please update SOON!!

I will!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 14, 2012, 02:11:46 AM
ahHhHhHh!!!
Super hot!
I want more!!
Looking forward to part 2!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 14, 2012, 02:25:02 AM
Kai is the sweetest guy ever  :wub:
Jealous Riku is funny  :lol:
Thanks for the updates!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 14, 2012, 05:11:02 AM
yeah...kai so sweet...
i hope next chapter has more sweetness between kai and atsuko....  :heart:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 14, 2012, 06:15:32 AM
Wow!! That was HOT!!
Promise to make one of those scenes with Kai and Acchan!!  :hiakhiakhiak: *perv mode ON*
Please update SOON!!

please!!! OMG!! you apologize for kai x atsuko but you give me kojiyuu instead is better for me :B and a smut OMG!! love ya
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 14, 2012, 06:48:21 AM
Wow! It was so hot! *pervert mode ON* :on bleed: :on bleed:

Please update fast!! :on GJ:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Minami-chan on December 14, 2012, 07:10:21 AM
Riku and Yuko are so hot!!
 :deco:
I can't wait that Kai and Atsuko will be togethers too  :inlove: (they can be hot too. like riku&yuko)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED
Post by: chemicalstar on December 15, 2012, 11:37:03 AM
CHAPTER 6 Part 2

Kai put his phone on the bed after sending the message to Riku. He walk to the bathroom and start to undo his clothes. It's actually only his pants because last night the weather was hot and he made himself half naked when he slept.

"Oh God.. This is bad" he said staring at his wet pants. He take a detergent and washed it. "If Mom find it, it's gonna be embarrassing" he thought.

While he washed it, he think about his dream last night, the dream that made his pants dripping wet.

"What I was thinking? How could I dream about that?" he thought.

*flashback*
*Kai's POV*

I go to bed after this tiring day. The weather is so hot, so I undo my shirt and my jeans then I jump onto my bed. I stratch my body before I close my eyes and finally fall asleep.

"Wake up, my prince.." I heard someone whispering very close to my ear. It's so soft and smooth. It's a girl and her voice is so familiar to me.

I can feel a weight on my waist and the touch of a fingertips on my chin, down to my chest.

I slowly open my eyes, it's blurry at first but I can guess exactly who is the girl sitting on my waist. When I can see her clearly, she smiles and she's so beautiful with that purple one piece sexy garment. She move closer to me while her left hand is on my chest.

"I want you.." she whisper on my ear and then kiss my neck. I shivered, then I rub her back by my hand, the other hand rub her thigh. We start kissing passionately. I move my hands upper her body and reach her pants. I slowly undo it from her.

I pull around her so now she's by my side. Her back is infront of me, I hug her from behind. I kiss her neck while pull down my pants. She moans loudly when I do the 'man things' from behind. We enjoy it by doing our movement rhythmically. "I love you, Atsuko..." I whisper to her ear.

We keep doing it for several minutes, all I can hears is our moans and heavy breath.

"Kai, are you hungry or not?" I heard Atsuko said it a bit louder.

"Eh? Yeah, why do you ask me that question?" I keep moving my waist forward and backward, enjoying the moment.

"Wake up. Let's have a breakfast!!" she said.

"Eh, but I still want to continue it...ah..ah.."

"Kai.. Wake up.."

"KAAIII... If you don't wake up, we're going to have breakfast without you!!" I heard someone's shouting outside the door. I open my eyes and find myself hugging a pillow.

"Where's Atsuko?" I thought. "Was I dreaming? Oh my god, it was a dream?!!"

I quickly checked my pants anf find it in dripping wet condition. "Damn!!"

*end of Kai's POV*
*end of flashback*

By that weird hot dream, Kai decide to confess his feeling soon to Atsuko. But he got a problem: HE DON'T KNOW HOW TO DO IT.

It was almost 4 years since the last time he confesa his feeling to a girl, and that last confession was totally REJECTED. It makes him feel paranoid to confess his feeling again to a girl.

So he sent a message to Riku and he will ask him an advice or trick how to do it. He's totally have no idea to say "I LOVE YOU".

After Kai washed his pants, he take a shower and went downstairs to have a breakfast with his family.

***** end of Chapter 6*****


That's all the 6th chapter.

Errr... ACTUALLY I need your comment about. . WHAT WILL RIKU TELL TO KAI ABOUT HOW TO CONFESS HIS FEELING TO ATSUKO.

I have the storyline, but I think it may gorgeous if you can tell yiur idea.

THANK YOU FOR KEEP READING MY STORY
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on December 15, 2012, 11:53:45 AM
Girl Next House- Chapter 05

-This chapter, I really love this :)

-KaiAcchan is very sweet  :heart:


Girl Next House- Chapter 06 Part I

-Wow! this is hot story (Nosebleed)

-I also love this couple (RikuYuko)

-----Thank You




Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 15, 2012, 12:34:51 PM
this part was very short but awesome to read   :mon star:
I hope  the next time that will be a moment not that he but kai and atsuko   :mon inluv:
please update soon with a lot of moments for kojiyuu and kai x atsuko  :mon innocent:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 15, 2012, 12:40:41 PM
This was was very HOT!!
Please update soon!!! *perv mode STILL ON*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 15, 2012, 01:07:40 PM
Quote
"I want you.."
She's all yours!!!

although its a short update
still sweet  :heart:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Pdpond on December 15, 2012, 01:57:29 PM
Don't be afraid kai..
You said "I love you,atsuko" in your 'wet dream' already.
Waiting for new chaper!!!
*Hot hot*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 15, 2012, 03:08:58 PM
Nice and hot update !
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on December 15, 2012, 04:27:54 PM
i got a feeling that Riku might not be of great help, since Yuko is the aggressive one, i bet Yuko is the one who confessed! haha!   ;)

Anyway, Kai can only rely on his own sincerity to win the  :heart: of his beloved Atsuko, find the right time and right place ...perhaps under romantic starry sky?(too cliche?) ... draw a heart on his window? (too cheesy lol) ... announce through PA system in school? (too flashy?)...  and do it with lots of passion!  :inlove:

Gambatte~ Kai~

(On the other hand, I would like to see some obstacles lying before the couple...coz the course of love never did run smooth! *evil*)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 15, 2012, 05:49:20 PM
OMG I got nosebleed  :on bleed:

Maybe a romantic confession from his bedroom? Kai's room is opposite Acchan's room, right?  :on gay:

I'll be waiting for more update  :whistle:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 16, 2012, 01:07:15 AM
Hot update :)
Be brave Kai... just confess and win her over
Riku... is he going to be of any help... I wonder
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 16, 2012, 02:35:04 AM
omg atsumina little smut great!!..

i think that riku can´t help him because yuko confessed riku inthe past.. :B
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 16, 2012, 06:52:43 AM
HAHAHA so funny! thanks!!  :deco: :heart: :thumbup :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: vPANDAv on December 16, 2012, 08:44:36 AM
lol kai is already getting wet dreams of acchan...

just wait till you confess to her kai, she'll eat you up alive (lol)  :cathappy:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 16, 2012, 10:18:18 AM
Kai, you should confess Acchan quickly!!  :banghead:

please update soon!  :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 16, 2012, 05:40:43 PM
GUYS... THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS!!!

You know, your ideas are just the same as mine, Riku won't help anything!!! Hahahaha

Let's see how Kai do it by himself..

and.. about the romance, yes it's not interesting if there's no obstacles of their love. Just keep reading and I will update the next chapter soon.

Don't worry, the war will be began!! just be patient, it's gonna be a long amazing story.

once again THANK YOU.....
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED
Post by: chemicalstar on December 18, 2012, 01:32:49 AM
CHAPTER 7


Two young guys is standing on the edge of the rooftop  of a high enough building in Tokyo.

"Look, I have a problem, dude" Kai start to talk.

"Eh? What problem?" Riku said.

"It's kinda embarrassing, but... I do need your help to do it."

"Yeah yeah.. Doing what?! You can count on me, Riku is the Pro!" he said proudly.

Kai chuckled. "Well it's about.. Atsuko."

"Atsuko?! What's wrong with her?"

"I.. I l-love her" Kai said nervously.

"Yeah, I knew. I can see it. So what's the problem?" Riku answered innocently.

"I don't know how to confess this feeling to her..."

"EEEHH?? MAJIDE??!!" Riku surprised. "I thought you two already together!!"

"You did?"

"Yeah, the way you caring her, and.. everything. You two are just like...couple!"

"Wow! I didn't notice that.."

"Damn you Kai! You should confess to her asap! Before she tired of waiting and finally leave you!" Riku talk spiritfull. "As a man, we have to move fast!"

"But HOW??!!"

Riku standing still staring at Kai, there's silence for a while. Riku remember how he was rejected by a lot of girls before, until one day he met a cheerful girl that he fell in love with. Luckily, the girl was mad in love with him and she confessed it first to him. And the girl is.. Yuko.

"Dude are you okay?" Kai said while he wave her hand in front of Riku's face.

Riku back to reality again. "Ah yeah, I'm okay!" He stratch his hair. "Wait.. YOU TAKE ME TO THE ROOFTOP JUST TO ASK THAT QUESTION?! Why do we have to go to this place? We can talk in your house" Riku said, try to change the topic.

Kai look around the view from the rooftop. There are a lot of high building around. "No, it's not for that," Kai said. "I told you, we got a mission."

"Eh? What mission" ask Riku confused, in other side, he glad that he successfully change the topic.

"You can see the gray building right there?" Kai pointing his index finger to a modern gray high building.

"That sparkling building?"

Kai nods. "That's the building of Majesticio Company. I received an email last night. The company will build and new building, and they invite architechture students to join in the project. Ten choosen students will work with national well-known experienced architectures to design their new building."

"Sugooii!!!" Riku look so amazed.

"Any architechture student can join the test to be the ten choosen students. And the regiastration will be opened next week!" Kai turn tu Riku. "Are you in?" Kai offer his hand.

"Of course dude! It's a big deal, how can I miss it?!" Riku shake his hand, and they clap their hands. "Yeah!!!"

"Dude.. You haven't answer my question" suddenly Kai said, makes Riku feel confused again.

"Eh? About what?" he pretend that he forgot it.

"Atsuko Atsuko! How to tell her my feeling?"

"Aahh!!! Yeah!! Oh, how could I forget bout that.." Riku stratch his head. "Err... Kai. You know that... Yes, I'm good enough in sex, but it doesn't mean that I'm good in feeling confession. I-I mean... it was Yuko who confessed it first."

Kai giggled. "Yuko confessed it first?! Hahaha"

"Shut up! I count it as a fortune..." said Riku and he pout. "But if you want to confess to Atsuko, I guess you don't have to do any special thing."

"Eh? What do you mean?"

"Everything you did to her was expressing your feeling exactly. Now you just have to express it in words."

"I'm not brave enough."

"Then kiss her!!" Riku said, a bit shouting. "You don't have to say it first. Just kiss her in sudden, then if she reply your kiss, tell her that you love her."

"What if she don't reply the kiss?"

"There's only one option: she will slap you. If it happen, just say "I'm sorry" and you don't mean to ruin your friendship."

Kai thinking for a while. "Kiss her?!" he thought.

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The next day, Atsuko is getting better. Now she can walk normally again. She think she has to say thank you to the next house guy who helped her earlier. She decides to make delicious pancakes for him.

"Ohayo Mr.Takahashi" Atsuko bowed  at Kai's father who is wiping his car window in front of the house.

"Ah, Acchan! Ohayo.." he answered kindly.

"I want to meet Kai, is he inside?" Atsuko asked shyly.

Kai's father smitks at her. "Yeah he's inside.." and he act like he please Atsuko to come into the house.

"Excuse me..." the door is opened so Atsuko walk inside the house. She find no one in the living room, but then...

"Acchan!!" Mayu shouting happily as she saw Acchan come in.

"Mayu... " Acchan smirks at her.

"Hey what are you doing? Can I help you?"

"Err... Actually, I want to meet Kai. I want to give it to him"

"Ahh... So now you come to my house not for looking for me but Kai!!" Mayu tease her, make her cheeks getting red. "Come on.. He's in the kitchen with Mom" Mayu take her to the kitchen.

"Kai, I bring an angel for you!" Mayu said when Atsuko and her enter the kitchen.

"Ohayo.." a soft voice of a girl he know exactly suddenly heard. Kai who is taking milk from the fridge turn his body and find Acchan in the kitchen. She smiles at him.

"At..At-Atsuko.." he said nervously. The way she smile is just remind him of his dream last night.

"Ohayo Acchan.." Kai's mother walk approach her. "Why so sudden? You had breakfast? Let's have breakfast with us.."

"Emm.. Thank you Mrs. Takahashi, but I just had breakfast with my parents."

"Sit down please.." Kai's mother offer her a chair. And then they sit in the dining room.

"Here, I made it for you" Acchan give the box that contains pancakes she made this morning.

"F-for me?" Kai take it nervously. He open it and his eyes widened when he find some pancakes inside. "Wooow!! It look delicious. Thank you, Atsuko"

"Wow, my son get a gift in this early morning?" suddenly Kai's father come in and join them.

"You really made it?" Kai asked.

"Of course, you baka! Acchan is good at cooking. We often cook together before you came here!" Mayu quickly answer.

"Hmm.. I'm glad my daughter in law is good in cooking" Kai's father wink at Acchan, make Acchan and Kai blushed at the same time. Looking at this awkward scene, Kai's father laughing out loud, so is Mayu and her Mom.

After finish their breakfast, Kai ask Acchan to go to campus together by riding his motorbike.

"Bye Mom, bye Dad!" Acchan waves her hand to her parents and they leave.

Mr. Maeda look at Kai's houseyard and  Mr. Takahashi is there. They look at each other for seconds an then at the same time, they laugh together. "I smell love!" he shout at Mr. Takahashi.

"Yeah, me too. I see a pink electric spectum between those windows!" Mr. Takahashi pointing at the side of their house where Kai's and Accchan's windows are.

They laugh again. "We should arrange a wedding! Haha"

"And have the same grandchildren! Hahaha"

The two fathers are joking around in the morning. But to see that his Acchan is back just like before his son died, makes Mr.Maeda happy and proud of Kai. "That boy really can changer her mind.." he thought.

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It's in the afternoon when Kai take Acchan somewhere after they finished their class today. After riding his bike for about 30 minutes, they arrive in the lakeside.

"Here we are..." Kai stop his bike.

Acchan get down and walk to the edge of the lake. "It's beautiful!!" she said, look at the beautiful sunset scenery around, make the lake water shining orange sparkle.

Kai walk towards her and stand beside her. "It was my favourite place. It's great" Kai said, looking at the view.

"Thanks for taking me here, Kai. I'm happy to be here" Acchan smile at him.

"Anything for you," he reply her smile.  They look at the scenery again, makes a silence for a while.

"Oh, Atsuko... The cake this morning. Why did you cook it for me? You know, it's such a sudden."

"Oh, the cakes. You still think about that?" Acchan said. "It's just.. I want to say thank you for everything you did to me. I know it's not enough to pay your kindness but.. I just did my best."

Kai smiles and look into her eyes. "No, you don't have to pay it back. I told you, I think I can do anything for you."

By what Kai said, Atsuko standing still while looking deep into his eyes. Now they're staring each other. Kai just can't help her gaze then he remember what Riku told him yesterday. Just try to kiss her...

Kai moves and takes his steps closer to Acchan. Slowly his hand reach her cheek and his face lean close to her until there's no gap between their lips. He kiss her lovingly, and waiting for the answer: she will reply the kiss or she will slap him.

But then Acchan push Kai out. "Arrghh.. Kai your foot!" Acchan look down and look at Kai's foot which is now stepping on her foot.

"Oops!! Gomen ne Atsuko! Gomen!" Kai quickly step backward. "Is it hurt? Oh my God, what did I do? I'm sorry Atsuko." Kai look so panic.

Kai's behaviour is so funny now it makes Acchan giggles. "It's okay Kai. Don't be that panic! It was hurt when you stepped on it.  But now it's fine, really." Acchan try to calm him down.

They look each other's gaze. Kai's face still look so worried and red because of that embarrassing moment. Acchan smirks at him and then move close to him. Kai's heart beating so fast as Acchan move closer and... kiss him.

"Is it the reply kiss? Oh, God, SHE LOVES ME??!! I'm dying!!!" Kai thought. He was surprised at first so hedidn't give respond to Acchan's kiss, but then he realized that this is the "reply kiss". So his hands reach and cup her cheeks again, kiss her passionately.

They finally broke their kiss to catch some air and breath. Kai still cupped her face and he look deep into her eyes, "I love you... Atsuko" he finally said.

Acchan smile softly "I love you too.." then she give him a light kiss on his lips.

-- END OF 7th CHAPTER --


Hmm... Can"t wait to make some 'troubles' in the next chapters. Thank you for keep reading my fic :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 18, 2012, 04:16:13 AM
K-kiss!!! :on slopkiss:
           YATTA!!!
 :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :on lol: :shy2:

ahhh..its official!!!
ATSUMINA!! i mean kai x acchan..XD
WOOHOOO..
nice advice riku  :farofflook:

i want more! :on gay:

thank you for the update!!
 :kneelbow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 18, 2012, 04:56:44 AM
MAJOR BLOOD LOSS  :on bleed:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 18, 2012, 05:32:48 AM
i knew that.. yuko is the best..

eh?1  troubles.. jealousy.. maybe?
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 18, 2012, 07:07:30 AM
yeah !!! kiss  :mon inluv:
please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon star:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 18, 2012, 07:26:20 AM
Awww... So cute!! ATSUMINA!!!  :deco: :heart: :hand: :cathappy:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 18, 2012, 11:22:28 AM
Yes!!!!!!! Kiss! KISS!! KISS!!!
I want more!! Please update soon!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on December 18, 2012, 12:16:08 PM
YESS!!!
THEY ARE TOGETHER NOW !!!
THEY ALSO KISSED :wub: :wub:


That was really sweet  :heart: :heart:

tnx for the update
and please continue

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 18, 2012, 05:00:35 PM
 :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :wriggly: :nya:

Kiss Kiss
Fall in Love!
 :on gay:
a very sweet update!!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 18, 2012, 06:36:37 PM
Kissu ! Yes, that it, Kai x Acchan ! I just love to see their lovely dovey moment.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 18, 2012, 11:03:09 PM
Hahaha Riku and his strange suggestion for confessing :)
It was strange but it was a GOOD advice because they KISSSSSED  :wub:
This is definitely celebration worthy
Finally official  :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on December 19, 2012, 02:29:50 AM
THATS WAT IM TALKNG ABOUT!
YIEEE FINALLY KAIACCHAN *faint*
LOL i want more kissu kisuu
And you know  WHAHAHAH :jerk:
thank you mua mua
ヽ(^。^)ノ
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Pdpond on December 19, 2012, 05:54:26 AM
Yatta~~~ kiss kiss :love:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: atsuminaFTW on December 19, 2012, 06:57:05 AM
Really nice chapter chemicalstar-san, I just love this fic of yours :luvluv2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 19, 2012, 04:46:09 PM
THANK YOU for the comments..
I'm glad you all like the story and I can't wait to post the next chapter.

But since there's a lot of things of 'school-tasks' which have to be done before christmast holiday, I have to work a little hard of doing the tasks. It's gonna be a busy week.

So maybe there will be two or three days hiatus. I hope you all can be patient. Once again, THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED
Post by: chemicalstar on December 21, 2012, 05:41:47 PM
CHAPTER 8
Just back from my daily school business, and as I promised, I will update it. So here the eighth chapter for you… enjoy ;)



An evening in Takahashi residence, the family are having their dinner. It's not usual that the son eating so fast, looks like he'a rushing of something.

"Kai, don't eating too fast! You may get choked!" Mom warn him.

"Yeah, mom is right. Are you going to go somewhere?" Dad asked.

Kai shook his head.

"Or going to do something?" Dad added.

Kai nods.

"Haaa! I know I know!!" Mayu shout happily. "You will have a window date with Acchan, right?!"

"Window date?! What is that?" Mom ask.

Kai didn't respond, he take his food and eat it again.

"Recently I've been catch them dating throuh the windows. You know, they look at each other from their windows while they talk on the phone. I call it window date through the phone!" Mayu explained.

"Date?" Dad chuckled. "So now my son is not a single man?" Dad's eyes widened.

Kai take a glass of water and drink it. "Yes I date her.."

"Yatta..!" Mom, Dad and Mayu shout happily. Dad pat his hand on Kai's head. "You have a good taste of choosing a girlfriend!"

"Yes, and I can't wait for a grandchild!!" Mom look so excited.

Kai widened his eyes by what Mom said. "It it's not because of that, Mom, Dad." Kai clearing his throat. "I registered to Majesticio Corp, if I'm accepted, I will have a half-time working there as an architech assistant."

"Wow that sounds great! Majesticio is a quite big company. I know one of their vice managers, he's my friend."

"I have to study harder to prepare myself for the test, that's why I ate so fast."

"Souka... I'm proud my son is a hardworker. You're just like your father!"

Kai smiles.

"Mayu, look at your brother! He's great huh?" Mom said.

Now Mayu feels uneasy. She hope that she won't we compared with her brother. Kai read this bad aura, he quickly said "Mom Mayu is great too. I heard it from her friends. She's great at school.."

Mom laughing.. "Ahh, my son tried to cover her!"

Mayu looks so confused.

"Look, I don't mean to compare my children. I just haven't finished my words."

"Eh?" Mayu stop eating.

"Mayu can be great too. But in her own way! Anything you interested in, we will support you to be a great one, baby" Mom explained, Mayu smile happily. She was wrong, her parents never compare them each other.

"I'm done!" Kai finished his dinner. "If looking for me, I'm in my room, okay" he quickly run upstairs and enter his room. He grab his phone and find a message.


From: Atsuko
"Going to study again tonight? Ganbatte kudasai!!! I'll make you some cake :)"


Kai can't help but smile as he read the message. He glad that he has a caring girlfriend. Acchan is really nice. He wonders someday if they're married, Acchan will make him cakes while he doing his work too. Then he quickly reply the message.


To: Atsuko
"Okay, thank you honey. You're the best ;)"


Kai take his book and drawing paper and put them on his quite wide table. An architechture student should have a wide table for study. He starts to study, read the book, make some practice, solve the problem, and more. About an hour and half  later, Kai' start to feel so bored and a bit sleepy. He stretched his body to refresh his energy and start to study again.

Dad was helping Mayu doing her Biology homework and Mom was with the laptop when suddenly there's a knock on the main door. Mom stood up and open the door.

"Good evening, Mrs. Takahashi" Acchan smiled and bowed.

"Aahh.. Acchan my daughter!! Please come in"

Acchan's face getting red when she heard Kai’s mother call her daughter, "Daughter? Do they know about us?" Acchan thought.

"Mayuyu!! What are you doing?" Acchan greet Mayu an so Kai’s father "Good evening Mr.Takahashi."

"Yo Acchan... I'm doing my homework, fortunately Dad help me."

"Kai is upstairs, Acchan. Just go ahead he's in his room" Kai's father please her to go upstairs.

Acchan walks upstairs heading to Kai's room. When she's about to knock the door, she find that the door is a bit opened. Maybe it's only an inch opened. She cancelled her willing to knock the door. Slowly she open the door an there she can see Kai's back. He's stydying very seriously, Acchan walk inside slowly so Kai can't hear her footsteps. When she's exactly behind him, she cover Kai's eyes with her hands. Her head move closer beside his ear and she whispers softly "Good evening, professor".

"Atsuko!!" he surprised and try to open Acchan's hands on his eyes. "Gosshh you scared me.."

Acchan laughing, the she sits on a chair next to Kai. "Look what I just made for you!" Acchan open the box she brought.

"CUPCAKES!!" Kai shouts. "Sluurpp... Looks so yummm..."

Acchan giggled. She take a cupcake and fed it to Kai. Kai open his mouth and eat the cakes that Acchan feed him. "Emmmm... It's yummm!!! One more, one more!!"

Kai staring at Acchan, make her blushe and feel uneasy.

Kai raise his hand, move to Acchan forehead and then he pinch her cheek. "Thanks for caring me"

Acchan smiles to him. "I'll always support you, Kai. No matter what..."

"Sometimes I feel guilty that I have no time to spend together with you because of this" Kai glance at all the things on his table.

Acchan reach his hands and squeeze it. "Kai, just continue it and keep focus. I'm proud that you take a great effort to pass the test. I will always be your #1 supporter and I'm proud of you."

Kai doesn't know what to say, this girl had his sympathy. For thousand times he just keep saying thank you.

From the day Kai regiatered as the participant of the competition, Acchan always there by his side. Acchan always make him food to gain his spirit in studying. Even she feed him while he's too busy to go to the dining room for eating. She's the one behind Kai's serious effort to pass the test.

In other place, a sex addict girl named Oshima Yuko, do the same thing to support her boyfriend to past the test, but in the different way...

"God, I'm tired! I want to take a nap..." Riku sigh while he's doing some practices and exercises from the book. He lean her head on the table.

"Rikunyaaan..." Yuko who were there in his room with her laptop all day, come closer to him, hug him from behind. "Hey, wake up.."

"Ahh Yuko I'm tired. My head felt so dizzy," Riku still lean his head on table.

Yuko take the book and check what Riku had been done. "Rikunyaan.. It's just turn 8pm, and look... You just solved only seven problems?!"

Riku don't try to wake up, he just answer wit a Hmm.

"Come on, wake up... I'll give you a gift if you finally done 10 problems of those question."

Riku wake up, "A gift?"

"A hot kiss if you finally got 10 problems solved, and I will stay the night here if you can solve another 10 problems and make it 20," Yuko winked at him.

Riku show his evil smile. His tireness suddenly is gone he take his pen again and starts to solve the problems as much as he can. On 11pm, he walk approach Yuko who still with her laptop near the bed. He suddenly close the laptop, makes Yuko surprised. Yuko turn his head to Riku, she's about to protest but cancel it by seeing Riku's smiling full of excitement.

"What?" Yuko asked confused.

"Here!" Riku give her his book so that she can check what he has done.

"Wow!! You work so hard, Rikunyaan!" Yuko shout amazed as she see that Riku finally finish to solve 23 problems.

"You can stay the night here, and...." Riku said.

"...and what?" Yuko asked seductively.

Riku move closer and kiss her cheek, move to her ear and whisper: "...and be mine." Riku carry Yuko with bridal style and bring her onto the bed. They start their 'action' that night. And that's just what the couple do.

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One shiny day, a young man run accross the college corridor. He run to find his girlfriend. He check her class but no one there. He check the canteen, still.. she's not there. Until he met someone..

"Hey dude, did you seen Atsuko?" Kai ask to a youngman who look has the same age as him.

"Atsuko? Maeda?"

Kai  nods. "Yeah, where is she?"

"I saw her at the library."

"Oh okay, thanks"

Kai run to the library. He search every corridor between the book shelves. There, he found a pretty girl is standing in front of design book shelf.

He walk fast approach her. The girl seems notice someone is walking so fast towards her. When se realize that the man is her boyfriend, he suddenly hug her so tight, lean his head on her shoulder.

"K-kai.. What happened?" Acchan said a bit worried. She keep him in her embrace.

Kai release his body from her embrace "I'm accepted, Atsuko. I'M ACCEPTED!!!!" Kai said it loud and smile.

Acchan smile at him, "You're great!! I'm proud of you!" she hug him again.

"Thank you, Atsuko. Thank you thank you thank you"

"Eh? Why do you thank on me? It's all your effort, Kai.."

"No, you've been caring an supporting me all this time, I should say thank you. And maybe that's not enough..."

"Hmm.. Don't mention it, we did our best"

"Thanks, Atsuko..." he give her a peck on her lips at the same time when a librarian come approach them.

"Ehm ehm.. " he clearing his throath. "Can you keep silent please?"

Acchan bowed and say sorry. Then Kai took her out. "Come on, I'll treat you  for lunch.."

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"What about Riku?" Acchan ask while they're having lunch at a restaurant.

"Oh, great, he's accepted too!"

"Yatta!! You two are so lucky to be  always together.."

"Yeah I don't know that he had studied so hard all this time."

"I'm glad of you two.. So when it will be started?"

"Next monday. I will go to work after class in the afternoon until evening."

By what Kai said, a little voice in Acchan's heart feel a little sad cause it means that they have no more time to spent together. But Acchan is good in acting, she can hide her sadness in front of Kai, and  act like there's nothing to be worried.

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Several days later, in a beautiful bright day in the middle of Tokyo. A girl just arrived in the airport, several tough man walk behind her, looks like they are her bodyguards. This quite beautiful girl take off her sunglasses, she get in the black luxury car where a driver and a woman were waiting for her inside.

“Welcome back in Tokyo, my queen!” the woman who is about 27 years old greet her inside the car.

“Oh, Gosshh!! The weather is so hot. I have to make adaptation again since I leave this city 4 years ago” the girl sigh.

“Your dad is waiting in the office, we better go there before go home” the woman informed her.

The girl take her phone and open a picture of a luxury car, then she show the picture to the woman beside her, “Look, the car is beautiful, right?”

“Wow, that’s amazing! The car must be so expensive!!” the woman look so amazed.

“Hmm.. do you think if I ask dad to buy it for me, he will do it?” the girl asked.

The woman gaze at her, “I’m not sure… We all know your dad. He will facilitate you everything you need, but… I’m not sure if he will give everything you want to have.”

“Geez.. why dad never bought me my own car?!” the girl looks upset. “He rent a big apartment for me, but he never bought me a house. He facilitate me a luxury car, but he never bought me my own car. What does that old man want?!”

The woman pat the girl’s shoulder and try to calm her down. “Come on, just be patient. Your dad just need you to be a real mature woman and take responsibility in everything. He just.. doesn’t trust you yet, but he will…”

“But how long that I’ll be waiting? I’m tired of this… I want my own life.” The girl seems like only rely on her father’s money for everything, that’s why her father only facilitate her any luxurious things, but never bought them for her.

About 20 minuts later, they arrived at a very big modern building. Every employee greets and bows to her when she enter the building. She walks arrogantly heading to the the company owner’s room, her father’s room.

Knock knock

“Come in..” a voice of a man heard from inside the room.

The girl open the door and enter the room, followed by the woman behind her.

“Daddy!!!” the girl walk approach her father and hug him.

“RAY!! My daughter!!” the man seems so happy as her only child has arrived.



*End of CHAPTER 8*

Yooo, the girl has arrived! I can’t wait to update the next chapters of jealousy, betrayal, struggle, sadness, and everything…
Please leave thanks and comments, THANK YOU

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on December 21, 2012, 05:59:16 PM
Kai & Mayu are so fortunate to have such loving parents!

And here comes the "rival"! I bet she'll be hard to handle... haha. looking fwd to the chaos! :cow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 21, 2012, 06:26:13 PM
OMG that bitch RAY?  :angry1:

Please continue and do your best updating this fic!  :onioncheer:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 21, 2012, 06:27:19 PM
Jaja kojiyuu and atsumina couples are so different.. jejej kojiyuu so smexy :B love it..

yeah kai´s parents are the best..

when I read this "A girl just arrived in the airport, several tough man walk behind her, looks like they are her bodyguards."

I know it must be RAY.. OMG!!! be careful acchan..a rival is arrive
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 21, 2012, 06:28:31 PM
R-Ray!?!?   :mon scare:  :mon wtf:
Damn!! Let me kill myself!!!!!  :mon headbang: :mon slapself:
Please update FAST!!  :mon lovelaff: :mon XD:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 21, 2012, 06:31:20 PM
EH?!?! Why RAY!! Why not Tomochin??
Please update SOON!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steftakami on December 21, 2012, 06:43:59 PM
omg please continue!!   :grin:

TakaminaBG is right!! why not Tomochin????
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 21, 2012, 06:50:37 PM
Thank you for update great chapter once again  :mon star:  :mon fyeah:
I love Kai X Atsuko  :mon inluv:
I hate Ray she is going to create confusions in the couple lol  :mon headbang:
Please update soon  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 21, 2012, 08:37:40 PM
this is sweet!  :luvluv2:
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Riku move closer and kiss her cheek, move to her ear and whisper: "...and be mine." Riku carry Yuko with bridal style and bring her onto the bed.

Then here comes Ray
can't blame the author i used Ray too as a villain :nervous
 :cool1: and i know acchan can manage this well
right author san?  :yep:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 22, 2012, 12:00:50 AM
EH?!?! Why RAY!! Why not Tomochin??
Please update SOON!!

Got it! I knew this question wud be appear.

Hmm... sorry but I'm very respect Tomochin as a good girl, so there's no reason for me to make her as an antagonist. Sorry sorry...

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 22, 2012, 01:20:00 AM
boom!!
I can smell trouble...
I want kai parents!can i have them??XD

As usual,i really love ur update chemicalstar!
Woohoo!
I want more!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 22, 2012, 01:54:31 AM
R-R-RAY!!!!
Uh Oh... this can't be good  :smhid
Thanks for the update
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 22, 2012, 02:12:37 AM
So sweet kai x acchan. So smexy riku x yuko. I want the next chapter.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 22, 2012, 07:04:49 AM
OMGIRLSS!! i cant wait for the next chapter X) thank you!!! love  this fanfic!! ATSUMINA!! :heart: :thumbup :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on December 22, 2012, 07:57:01 AM
 :cool2: :cool2: :cool2:
RAY! YEY
A RIVAL HORAY!  :on lol:  :rock:
I DONT WANT MY ACCHAN TO BE HURT *cries*
*sigh*
I want kaiacchan kissu kissu
PLEASEEE :D
thank you thank you
Please update soon
I miss RAY! •﹏•
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 25, 2012, 12:52:11 PM
CHAPTER 9
Merry Christmas everyone, here’s another update for you. There must be a surprising story in this chapter, just keep reading and enjoy it ;)



A man with his daughter are in the car, they went to the project area of a company building. There's a project to build another building for his company.

"Dad, why do you take me here?" his daughter ask.

"I have to. One day you will have my companies, one day you'll become the owner, so I think you should know how the businness going."

The girl suddenly asks. "Dad, you love me , right?" the girl hugs her father .

"Of course I love you, dear.. Since your mom's death, you're the only reason I have to live for"

The girl smiles happily. "Dad, if you love me, then you can give me everything I need, right?

"Of course, everything..."

"Emm.. Dad, you know I want to have my own house, my own car, without your bodyguards around me.."

"Look, baby... I will give everything for you but in the right rime!" her father try to explain.

Ray sigh.. "Right time?! You always say that, when is the right time?! I'm not child anymore, dad!"

"Look at you! You said you're not child anymore, but you are.." her father start to talk seriously. "I can't see that you're ready enough to have my properties.

"So what I have to do? What do you want from me to be ready?"

"Just don't act like a child, spending money for nonsense thing, party, shopping, travelling, and having a no-future guy! That's not what I want. At least, find a man with good future to be your husband, that's when I trust my properties to you."

"Jason has a good future!" Ray try to win her argument.

"Jason? That amateur model? You still have relationship with him?"

Ray doesn't respond. She pouts at her father.

"I know he's handsome, but I can see that he has no future."

"So what kind of man that you think have a good future, dad?" Ray starts to angry.

Her father keep silent for awhile, he look around, then find an architects team are briefing near the building.

"Ray..look at that men"

Ray take a look to the men who are briefing near the building.

"They are the same age as you, but they are very amazing, they can study and work hard to be an architects. They are the men who will have a bright future."

Ray just keep silent while looking at the men out there.

"You want me to marry one of them?" Ray asked.

"Hmm.. Yeah, if you want to. I'm not forcing you..."

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Kai’s activities after working in the Majesticio Corp. is very busy. Everyday he goes to campus for study, after that he hurriedly go to the company for working. It finished in the evening, sometimes he has dinner in the restaurant because too late to get diner at home. His new business really makes him and his family and Acchan stay apart. Kai only meet Acchan every go to campus, after that, they separated and go in their own way activities. In the evening, usually Kai call Acchan by ‘windows date through the phone’. But lately, seems like Kai is more busy with his work, everynight when he come home and want to call Acchan, he saw that Acchan’s room is turned off. 

One day, Kai go to his office after class. He go without Riku because now they’re on the different teamwork. Kai meet his team and have a briefing with them. After that, Kai continue his work, drawing a building design on a very wide paper.

Tap tap tap. Sound of a footstep approaching him.

“Err.. excuse me?” voice of a girl heard. Kai turn his head to the girl who’s standing in front of his table.

It seems like a very high voltage electric shocked him when Kai see the girl’s face. He doesn’t say anything, just stand still like that.

“Hi.. Emm… may I ask your help?” the girl said.

Kai doesn’t respond. He knows exactly who the girl is. He met her long time ago but still he can recognize her face even though now she’s look more beautiful.

“WAIT!” Ray shouted, shocked. “Are you…??” now she look confused. “KAI??!!”

Still, Kai doesn’t respond.

“Takahashi Kai?? Is that you?” Ray try to ensure her vision.

Now Kai realized what happening. He nods. “Yeah, how are you, Ray?” Kai asked with cool face.

Ray smiles wide. “Oh my.. I can’t believe it’s you, Kai!!” Ray look so happy. “You’re so different, you.. you look so handsome and..look at your body, oh my god, is that you Kai??”

Kai laughed awkwardly. “You too, Ray. You’re different now, you look more pretty.”

“Thank you..” Ray blushed. “By the way, are you working here?”

Kai nods. “Uhn.. I’m working here, as architect assistant.”

“Wow that's great!" Ray look so amazed.

"Thank you. And how about you? What are you doing here?"

"Oh, actually… My dad owns this company and I’m here to learn about the business."

"REALLY?" Kai feel shocked as he heard that the owner of the company where he's working is Ray's father.

Ray nods. "It’s such a coincidence to meet you here, you know… it’s been a long time.” Ray try to be nice.

“Yeah, it’s been a long time since that day…” Kai lower his voice.

Now Ray feel uneasy with thie kind of situation. She know what Kai means. The day, the day that she slapped him in front of public.



*flashback*

“Do you think you’re gonna be success to do it?” Riku asked Kai, he hesitate Kai to do that thing.

“I’m not really sure, but I have to. I can’t keep this feeling longer anymore, Riku. I have to confess it to her…” Kai said while prepared a bucket of flowers.

“You sure you won’t think about it again?”

“Yeah, tomorrow is our graduation, I have no time to postpone it before the graduation.”

“You know, Ray is out of our league, but if you still want to do it, it’s okay, as your best friend I will always support you…”

That day, Kai, the freak boy at school came approach Ray who was chating with her friends at school field.

“R-R-Ray-san” Kai spoke nervously.

Ray turned to a boy stand behind her who was bringing a bucket of flowers. “Yes?”

“Ray-san, I have something to tell. Do you have a time for us to talk?” Kai said.

Ray looked at her friends who were laughing at what Kai was doing. She turned again to Kai. “Err.. I have no time. Just say it now..”

Kai looked so surprised. “Do I have to say it now? HERE?” Kai thought.

“Come on, I really have no time. Just say it…”

“Ah, haik..” Kai started to gather his bravery. He cleared his throat. “Emm.. Ray-san, I-I..”

“Yes?” Ray said with annoyed face.

Kai was already prepared words to say when he confess to Ray, but because of the situation was unexpected, he got very nervous and lost of words.

“I-I..” Kai sigh. “I LOVE YOU, RAY-SAN.”

There was a silence. Kai felt so confused and looks like a dumb standing there holding a bucket of flowers in front of people.

“BWAHAHAHAHA” suddenly Ray and her friends laughed. All people around who have heard what Kai said were laughing too.

“You’re dreaming, kid!” a boy said when he walk across the field.

“She’s not your level, Takahashi! Just step out…” one of Ray’s friend said.

This situation really made Kai wanted to kill himself right now.

PLAKK!!

Suddenly Ray slapped him. Kai rubbed his cheek. He turned to Ray with confused face.

“Takahashi, I don’t know what’s on your mind dare yourself to say LOVE to me in front of people. But LOOK AT YOU! Who are you??”

“But Ray-san, I love you…” Kai kept insistent with his feeling. He gave the flowers forward Ray.
Ray take it but then throw it out, “Just take your stupid flowers and go away! I never like you!”

Far away from the school field, a boy named Riku hide behind a window watching the scene. “OMG, Kai.. I told you. She’s not a good girl! Poor you, Kai. What I should do now??”

Ray went away from that place, leaving Kai stand still there. Ray stepped on the flower while she walked away. Kai’s heart was really broke apart. He hope GOD will take his soul right now. Tear drops was rolling on his face, watching the ruined flowers on the ground.

*End of Flashback*



“You were nerd, short, freak, and… looks like an idiot” Ray said jokingly.

Kai smiles awkwardly and chuckled.

“Hey, don’t be mad! Did I just say you’re handsome now?!” Ray pinch Kai’s arm, teased him. “Oh, come on, Kai. It’s been a long time ago, and we’re just… kids! You still mad at me?” Ray laughing, try to calm him.

“Hmm.. not really, I already forget it, by the way. It’s just like, I remember it again when I meet you here.” Kai smiles and try to be nice again.

“Let’s start it again” Ray offer his hand and smile so beautiful, makes Kai can’t resist his eyes of her.

“Sure,” Kai smiles and shake her hand.

“Thank you, Kai.”

“Eh, for what?”

“Forgiving me..”

“Eh? Did you say that was long time ago and that was just stupid things kids do, right?”

“Ah, yeah.. but still, I feel guilty for you” Ray said. “How about I’ll treat you dinner after your work done, you know… just to say thank you or to start a new friendship?”

Kai thinks for a while. “Okay..” he finally said.

Ray looks so happy. “Okay then, see you later…”

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That evening, Ray takes Kai to an expensive restaurant. At first Kai ignored her to have dinner in that restaurant because he doesn’t want to be treated in an expensive restaurant, unless he’s the one who treat her. But then Ray resists him because actually the restaurant’s owner is her uncle. They talk about a lot of things during the dinner. Until Ray finally confesses the truth she hide all this time.

“Kai..”

“Hmm?”

“About that day..”

“Hmm? We promise not to talk about it again, right?”

“Yeah, but…”

“But what?”

“There’s something I hide from you all this time” Ray look down, not brave enough to see Kai’s face.

“What’s that?” now Kai feel so curious about what Ray said.

“Ano… Kai. I regretted about what I did to you that day.”

“What do you mean?” Kai drink the water and then look seriously at Ray.

“Look, I knew that you like me before that day. But my friends keep telling me that you’re not my type, not my level, and you’re nothing for me. Just like, I’m the beauty and you’re the beast.”

“Oh, I accepted that. It’s okay, yes I was like that…” Kai respond it in cool way, just like no matter for him.

“But, Kai. Actually I like you..” Ray look deep inti Kai’s eyes.

DEG. It feels like there’s a ton of sands bear down upon him. Kai doesn’t say anything, he jst keep looking into Ray’s eyes.

“But, all these time my friends keep forcing me and I’m too shy to confess that I like you too. I was thinking that it will be so embarrassing for me as a school queen, likes a freak boy like you. So that day when you confessed to me, I dumped you. I regret myself after that day, and I felt sorry for your feeling. But after the graduation and being separated from my friends, I had no chance to  say sorry to you because I moved abroad.”

“Oh…” that only Kai can say. He can’t say anything and they keep silent after that.

“But it’s okay if you don’t like me anymore, Kai..” Ray try to cheer up again. “You know, it’s been a long time…”

Kai chuckled. “Yeah, why should we think about it, right? We just started a new day!” Kai cheered up again, but still, deep in his heart, he think about what just Raid said about her feeling. “Do you still like me, Ray?” Kai thought.

After dinner, Ray and Kai back to the office to take Kai there because they were driving on Ray’s car, so Kai have to go back to the office to take his motorcycle.

“Thanks for the dinner” then Kai get out from Ray’s car.

“Kai!” Ray call out his name from the car. She opens the car’s window.

“I liked you when you were a freak, and now you’re even getting more better…” Ray said and smile.

Kai still try to understand what Ray just said, but then Ray waved her hand and close the window. “Bye, Kai!”

Ray’s car is out of his sight, he walk inside the office, take his bag and then walk to the parking area to take his motorcycle and go home. Along the road, he keep thinking about what Ray said. “I liked you when you were a freak, and now you’re even getting more better…”

“When I was a freak, Ray liked me. And now… did she say that I’m handsome?” Kai thought. “So… Ray still likes me?”

*End of CHAPTER 9*

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 25, 2012, 01:07:19 PM
Oh no !!! Kai you can't fall for Ray. Acchan is meant for you. Wake up Kai, Ray is using his (Kai) feeling to gain the property from her father. Owhhh ~~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 25, 2012, 01:23:58 PM
NO!!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
kai belong to acchan..
    ACCHAN ONLY.. :wub:

merry christmas chem-san!!
have a nice holiday..
thank you for the update..XD
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 25, 2012, 01:40:21 PM
I can't say I don't like KaixRay but I don't love them, I LOVE AtsuMina!!!
Kai!!! Wake up!! For heaven's sake!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 25, 2012, 03:32:05 PM
Hey you, Kai! You can't fall for Ray!!  :mon mad:
You have girlfriend, right!?!?!?   :on voodoo:
You should wake up for your girlfriend's sake!!    :scolding:
I got a feeling that Ray is lying at you!!   :grr:
Don't let Ray trick you, Kai!!!  :mon yeah:

Please update as soon as possible!!!  :mon lovelaff:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 25, 2012, 03:35:07 PM
NOOOO!!!! Kai!! REMEMBER!!! YOU HAVE ACCHAN!!  :catglare:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: bimbo on December 25, 2012, 03:47:34 PM
Just seeing Ray's name makes my blood boil  :frustrated: Can't we just create another unknown character to replace Ray?  :hee:

btw, I love this! KAI, DON'T YOU DARE CHEAT ON ACCHAN!!  :scolding:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 25, 2012, 04:04:39 PM
Thank you for update  ;)
No way Kai have Atsuko no Ray   :mon fierce: I want Kai X Atsuko  :mon lovelaff:
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 26, 2012, 05:56:15 AM
Thank you for update  ;)
No way Kai have Atsuko no Ray   :mon fierce: I want Kai X Atsuko  :mon lovelaff:
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon pray2:


jejej more troubles i like it
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on December 26, 2012, 09:42:07 AM
HOORAY! RAY! XD
Welcome back you can now go back to abroad
LOLOLOL.

Btw troubles yee i love that too
cant wait for it ヽ(^。^)ノ

Whahaha! Ok im crazyy
Thank youu mua muah
Please update soonn
Meri krisumasu •﹏•

I want kaiacchan.kissu
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 26, 2012, 05:03:46 PM
Hey all!! Err.. To tell the truth, I wanted to make this 10th chapter a bit longer, so I will divide it into several parts. And this is the first part for you, a little about KaixAcchan. Hope you live it. Enjoy ;)




CHAPTER 10 Part 1



It's 11 p.m but Kai just arrived at home. When he enters the house, everyone is sleeping. He go upstairs heading to his room, he put his bag take off his clothes and take a bath. Still only wearing his shorts, Kai get out of the bathroom while drying his hair by towel. He surprised when he find that Acchan's room is stil turne on.

"She's not sleeping yet?" Kai thought. He quicky get his phone abd text Acchan.

To: Atsuko
"Hey, you're not sleeping yet?"

Not longer than one minute, Acchan replies his message.

To: Kai
"Not yet, I'm waiting for you.. :("

He notices that the sutuation is not good, so he quickly call Acchan.

"Yes?"

"Atsuko.."

"You came back late again."

"Uhn.. Sorry, I had a lot of work."

"Why do you say sorry to me?"

"Because.." then Kai stopped, he thinks and finally realize that all this time he has been so busy and have no time for Acchan.

"Kai.." suddenly Acchan talks.

"Hmm?" now Kai feeling guilty.

"I miss you..." now her voice seem like she's so sad and lonely, Kai can feel it.

"Yeah, I miss you too, Atsuko. I really miss you..."

Hearing Kai said 'I really miss you' makes her heart so warm, Acchan who is laying on her bed, get her pillow and hug it tightly, feeling that the pillow is her beloved Kai. She close her eyes, feel the warmth, and open her eyes again. "Kai, I wanna say something, but I'm afraid if you will be mad at me."

"Mad? No way, I'm gonna be mad if you say  that you're cheating on me.." Kai said jokingly.

"Mou.. I'm not cheating on you. It should be me who ask you if you're cheating on me.."

"Eh? How can you think about that?"

"Emm.. I don't know, but I think you've changed. I lost my Kai.."

DEG. Kai really understand what just Acchan said, especially when he remember that the reason he came late tonight was the dinner with Ray. What did he do? His girlfriend feels so lonely and he went out to have dinner with other girl?!! WTF

"I'm sorry..." that's the only Kai can say.

Acchan really want to say that Kai have changed since the day he worked in the company as architect assistant. But she doesn't want to tell it because she know that Kai really wanted this job. She knows how much Kai really worked an study hard to get this opportunity. So she doesn't want Kai thinks that his job bothers their relationship.

"Let's hang out this weekend!" suddenly Kai said, tries to cheer her up.

"Of course, you Baka!!" Acchan answer a little angry.

"Eh?"

"You forgot it? I have a theater show this weekend, and of course you have to attend and watch!" Acchan a bit annoyed with Kai. Acchan joined theater club in her college cause she loves acting. She has send Kai email about the show this weekend because she will become the main actress. But maybe because Kai's business in his work, he forgot about the mail.

"OH YEAHH!! No, Atsuko, I don't forget it. Of course I will come to watch your acting!" Kai said.

"And after the show, would you like to accompany me buying a gift for my mom's birthday?"

"Of course, anything for you, love.."

Acchan smiles, she starts to feel Kai's love is back again.

"Kai..."

"Hmm?" Kai lay on his bed and close his eyes.

"Kai..."

"What?"

"Nothing, just want to call you.."

Kai chuckled. "Atsuko.."

"Hmm?"

"I love you.."

Acchan smiles happily, she hugs her pillow more tight.

"Atsuko.."

"Hmm?"

"I love you.."

Acchan chuckled. "I love you too.."

"Atsuko.."

"Hmm?" Acchan smiles, guessing Kai will say I Love You again.

"Let's sleep.."

Acchan pouts. "Mou.. But I still miss you, Kai"

"But it's late of night, I'm very tired and sleepy" Kai said lazily half sleeping.

"Kai, I haven't slept yet because I was waiting for you, and now you want to sleep? You're so rude" Acchan pout, Kai can hear the disappointment in her voice but he can't stand his eyes, he's too sleepy.

"Tomorrow I have to go earlier, there's a lot of things to do, let's go to sleep, honey..."

By what Kai just said, Acchan think that maybe she's the one who's rude if she keep forcing Kai not to sleep. They're just keep silent for minutes with closed eyes without close the phone. Feels like they're sleeping without break the transmission so they can feel each other sleeping side by side.

"Atsuko.." Kai suddenly said in lower voice, half whispering.

"Hmm? I thought you're sleeping.."

"Where's my goodnight kiss?"

"Kiss your pillow!"

"Mou.. Atsuko..." Kai begging.

"You're so funny, begging for an imaginary kiss fro me."

"Who said it's an imaginary kiss, you're so real, I'm hugging you here."

"Oh, my prince starts to be crazy" Acchan acts, but the fact he's not the only one who's crazy. She hugs her pillow as Kai too, both of them are crazy right now. Yes because of the massive longing.

"I'm hugging you more tight" Kai said. "Mmmwwaahh.. That's a goodnight kiss for you. Now where's mine?"

Acchan a little laughing, but still enjoy it. "Mmmwwaaahh.."

"Deeper!" Kai commands.

"WHAT?!"

"I want a deeper one.. That was make no sense" Kai tease her.

"Okay, I'll kiss you deeper" Acchab said, now she try to imagine that she's kissing Kai deeply.
There's no sound for a while, both if them knows that they imagine the deep kiss so there's no sound for a while. Then suddenly Acchan chuckled. Kai heard it, "You bite my lips?"

"WHAT?" Acchan shocked.

"Hehe.."

"Come here, let me hug you tightly" Kai said.

"Hmmm... Okay Kai, it's enough. Let's sleep"  suddenly Acchan wants to end this crazy conversation, she realizes if they continue it, so it will become a phone sex.

"Good night, Kai.. I love you," Acchan said.

"Good night Atsuko. I love you more..." Kai said. "You're on my embrace right now"

Acchan giggled and close the phone. Now she can sleep properly, so is Kai, hugging their 'beloved pillow' tightly.


*End of Chapter 10 Part 1*


How was that? Hehe
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 26, 2012, 05:32:16 PM
Yay!!   :mon fyeah:

I cant wait for part 2!!!

I wanna know what happen to KaiXAcchan!!  :mon lovelaff:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 26, 2012, 05:47:56 PM
yeahhhh...nice one  :thumbup

hope more sweet moment like this..
although there will be drama climax ..

but hope u will make more sweet moment  :P2
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 26, 2012, 06:09:31 PM
SWEEEEEEET!!!
i need to brush my teeth!!
i have to much cavities..XD

PART 2!!!!
i want more!! :nervous
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 26, 2012, 06:53:00 PM
Thank you for update :)
So sweet Kai and Atsuko ;)
Please update soon the part 2
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 26, 2012, 07:32:01 PM
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

flooding hearts!
popping hearts!
toooo much hearts!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 26, 2012, 07:54:58 PM
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
They are so CUTE!!!!! I want MORE!!!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: FNK23 on December 26, 2012, 08:56:08 PM
aaaah, too much sweettt moment  :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel:
kai, you should not cheating on your beloved acchan for the next time.  :mon evil:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: vPANDAv on December 26, 2012, 11:52:41 PM
aww, takaboy and acchan are so cute  :deco:

that ray better not get involved (lol)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on December 27, 2012, 12:35:20 AM
Kai x Acchan (they) too cheesy but I love it ! :p
Waiting your update on part 2 ~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 27, 2012, 01:31:21 AM
Kai and Acchan's sweet moments  :wub:
KAI you better not cheat on your precious Acchan or else...
Thank you for the update!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on December 27, 2012, 02:54:32 AM
I found this fic last night and I decided to read all the chapters before going to sleep  :lol:
It interests me and specially when I read "RAY"'s name :wub:
I really like their love triangle "RayxKaixAcchan"  :inlove: :twisted:

Go Ray and try to seduce Kai :twisted: make him fall in love with you :twisted: *sadist mode on :lol:*
but of course, I still want KaixAcchan here :wub: :deco:

Waiting for your next update :thumbsup :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 27, 2012, 03:49:54 AM
nono Kai make us a favor.. cross the distance and kiss your woman like a men, ok?
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on December 27, 2012, 03:56:38 AM
LOLOL *roll on bed*
Kaiacchan sooo cutee
Better if its a real kissu XDDD
Part 2 ♥♥♥
Wers ray? WHAHAHAHA
thank yuu


Btw
Go Ray and try to seduce Kai :twisted: make him fall in love with you :twisted: *sadist mode on :lol:*
but of course, I still want KaixAcchan here :wub: :deco:
I LIKE THISS! Whahaha Y(^_^)Y
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 27, 2012, 05:03:13 AM
OMGIRLSS!! SO CUTE!!! :) LOVE IT!!  :cathappy: :deco: :heart: :thumbup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 27, 2012, 04:01:33 PM
THANKS ALL for the comments.. @Raysuke @saeyukilover @Chichay12 @ChuuuPuffss @miayaka @TakaminaBG @KojiYuu44 @karupin12 @Wmatsui22 @yourockme @giakb48ff and everyone, sorry I can't mention all of you  :D


YESSSS IT IS, THEY'RE SO SWEEEEEET and I LIKE IT TOO!!  :luvluv2:
But.. the story is just begun, guys...
Wait. Wait for the next update, okay
I want to make a new world war 3  :wahaha:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on December 27, 2012, 05:03:54 PM
I want to make a new world war 3 

SOUNDS GREAT!
LOLOL SADIST WRITER WILL APPEAR
OMG  :jerk:
Cant wait for it WHAHAHA
but seriously dont break my Acchan's heart and mine also.
IMEANDONTBESOMEAN.
I'LL HUNT YOU. XD
Thank yuu ^O^
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on December 28, 2012, 03:42:48 AM
I want to make a new world war 3  :wahaha:

I'm waiting for that :twisted: :lol:

Go Ray and do something BAD :twisted: :lol:
Title: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) UPDATED Ch.10 Part 2 !!
Post by: chemicalstar on December 28, 2012, 09:37:04 AM
So glad that a lot of people waiting for the Chapter 10 2nd Part. As I said, this Chapter will be longer than others.
So here it is...



CHAPTER 10 Part 2


Who's not excited when it turns Sunday!! Everyone has their day off. Time to sleep a little longer, have a vacation, or hanging out with friends or family.

*Kai's POV*

I finished my shower and wear my best outfit, I look at the mirror and see Edward Cullen with there. Hehe. Yes I have to be look so good today because my girlfriend Atsuko will be the main actress in the drama theater. I'm afraid if I'm not look good, the main actor wil be more handsome than me. No, my Atsuko is only belongs to me.

"Whoa.. My son looks so gorgeous. Where are you going to?" Dad greet me when I walk downstairs.

tap.. tap.. tap..

Mayu walk downstairs followed me.

"And my daughter too! You're so beautiful. Hey hey where are you going?"

"We're going to attend Acchan's drama theater show today!" Mayu answered, she looks so excited. Of course she is, because this morning she begged to me to go to the theater with me and she will ask Sae to join.

"Wow, I don't know Acchan can act. So you 3 will go there together?" Das asked.

"No, Dad. She's already in the theater to prepare the show. I'll go there with Mayu," I answer while wearing my shoes.

Dad looks like thinking of something for a while. Then he talk again. "So, take my car! You have the lisence, right?"

I'm surprised. "Are you sure?"

"Yeah, after the show you must take Acchan home too. It's impossible for 3 peraona to ride a bike."

Wow, dear great Dad. You're the best!
Dad back to his room and take the key. He give me the car key and I take it happily.

"You're going nowhere?" I ask Dad again.

"Nooo.. It's Sunday!" Dad said.

"But what if there's a call from the hospital?" I try to ensure him.

"I can ride your bike! Hahaha" Dad said jokingly.

"Okay then" I giggled. "Let's go, Sist!" I poke Mayu and go to the gagarasirage.

We go to the theater, it takes only 45 minutes driving and we arrived there. There’s a long queue for the tickets. Fortunately, Acchan gave me 2 tickets yesterday. When I parked the car, we see Sae standing in front of the theater building, he wave his hand holding a ticket. Mayu looks so happy to meet him. I parked the car succesfully and we get out of the car.

Suddenly my phone is ringing.

“Moshi moshi..” I hang up the phone call from Mr.Akimoto, the architect.

“Kai! Ah, I’m glad you’re there. Sorry to bother your freeday, but we got a problem” he said.

“Problem? What kind of problem, Sir?” I’m a little bit surprised. I know I am the first person that he will call if there’s a problem because I am the team leader of his architect assistants.

“Err… you know, I got a phone call from the company. They said the chief of the company suddenly wanted the first design finished today.”

“WHAT? But the deadline is next Wednesday, we have 3 days more” I sadi worriedly.

“Yeah, I’m shocked too. But, Kai, can you go to the office now. Help me to finish the design. I’ve called the team to come too. I’m waiting you now, come quickly okay!” then the architect hang off the phone.


“Kai? Any problem?” Mayu asked.

I think for a while. If I leave the theater, Atsuko must be so sad. I promised her to watch her acting. But if I ignore Mr.Akimoto’s command, then it will be a trouble for my job. OMG What I should do??!! The show will be started in 30 minute, I think I can go to the office first to lead the team what they should do, after that I can back to the theater to watch the show. Yes, I think it’s right.

“Err.. Mayu, just go ahead with Sae, I had a problem in the office. I’ll go there for a while, I’ll be back soon, okay!”

I quickly get in the car again and Mayu go inside the theater with Sae. I turn around my car and drive it fast to the office. When I arrived there, my team is already there with the architect.

“Yo, Kai! Finally you arrive!” one of my friend greet me.

“Sir, I need to talk.” I walk approach the architect and explain to him about my condition. “I can’t leave my girlfriend’s show, I promised her.”

The architect who is only 10 years older than me is actually a nice man. He understands my situation but he has no choice. The design is 80% finished but he still need me to help him to give the presentation to the the chief of company. Well I think I have to pass the show, so I take my phone to send an apologize message to Acchan and Mayu. I finally work with the team.

*End of Kai’s POV*

In the theater, Mayu take a seat near Sae. Her phone is ringing, she open a new message. It’s Kai.

From: Kai
“Sist, I have a very bad trouble I have to handle at office. I’m sorry I think I can’t watch the show. Don’t go anywhere after the show, ask Sae to take you home. Tell mom I went to the office if I come back late.”

“Nani..?” Mayu feel confused about Kai. He’s the one who is very excited of the show and now he suddenly cancel it.

BOOM!! A guy shouting from Mayu’s back, makes her surprised. “Mayuyu!!!” Riku greet her and pinch her cheeks.

“Rikunyan!!” Yuko looks jealous when Riku do that to a girl.

“You jealous?” Riku laughed. “It’s Mayu, Kai’s sister!”

“Oh, hello Mayu!” Yuko greet her. “I’m Yuko, his wife” Yuko winked at Mayu while pinch Riku’s cheek. Mayu giggled to see the scene.

“Oi, Kai! You have a plastic surgery?” Riku pokes Sae’s cheek.

Sae pouts, “Nee.. I’m not Kai!”

Riku laughing. “Yeah, I know dude! Kai told me about you, Miyazaki!”

“It’s Miyazawa!!” said Sae.

“Yeah yeah, whatever. So where is Kai?”

“He got a sudden call from the office. He said there’s a problem he has to handle. I don’t know but he look in hurry to go to the office.”

“EH? What problem?” Riku surprised. He’s in the diferent team with Kai so he doesn’t know what the problem exactly is because his own team is going okay since the deadline of the design is still 3 days later.

Riku take his phone and friens a friend in his team. “Hey dude, what happened with Team A? I heard they got a problem.”

“Oh yeah, I heard that they had to finish the design today and give the presentation to the chief,” a guy answered from the other side of the phone call.

“Eh?? But the deadline is on Wednesday, right?”

“Yeah, but I heard the one who ask for the design today is the chief’s daughter. I don’t know what’s the purpose, but they only ask for the Team A’s design. We’re lucky, you know!”

“Oh, okay. Thanks for the information, have a nice day!” then Riku hang off the phone. Riku sigh, “The chief’s daughter, huh?” he thought.



*Acchan’s POV*

I’m so nervous, this is a big show, hundreeds people waiting on the tribune. I wonder how my Kai’s feels when he watching my acting.

“Acchan, it’s your turn. Come on!” one of the staff call me to go onstage. It’s my turn to get in the set.

When I get on stage, I act and do my best. Sometimes, I look at the audience to find Kai. I can see Mayu, Riku and Yuko sit beside her. But where is Kai? No, I think my vision is wrong. I keep focus on my acting, when I get a chance, I look at the audience again. This time I’m really sure that Kai is not there. I feel so sad, but in other side, I keep thinking where is he.

Two hours later, the show is ended. All the audience gave us standing applauses. All the cast bowed on stage to the audience and we say THANK YOU together. I wave my hand to the audience and keep smiling although deep in my heart I want to cry because I can’t see Kai until the end of the show.

After we come back to the backstage, I run into the changing room and get my bag. I check my phone if there is a message or something. Yes, I find a message from Kai. I read it and I feel my hearts a little torn. He didn’t come. I try to calm myself and think that Kai did right, maybe he’s really in trouble. I have to understand him, I can’t be so selfish to him.

“That was awesome, drama queen!!” I heard someone shouting and applause me. I turn around and see Takeru walk towards. He smiles at me.

“Takeru!!” I said, it’s so surprising to see him here, in the backstage. He is my high school friend. He shakes my hand to congrats me. “So now you become an actress, huh?”

I chuckled. “Ah, that was nothing. I’m not that good. By the way, how could you here?”

“Oh, I visit my uncle’s house yesterday, then this morning my cousins ask me to watch a theater show. I don’t know that the actress is you!” he answers. “When I notice that the drama queen is you, so I hurriedly go to the backstage after the show to meet you. I’m so proud of you, Acchan!”

“Thank you… I appreciate that. How long will you be here?”

“About a week. Ah, we haven’t talk in a long time. Can we have a time for coffee or something? Maybe after this?”

“Umm, I can’t, Takeru. I have to go to the shopping center after this, I have to searching for a gift for my mother’s birthday.”

He look disappointed, but then he talk again “Let’s go then, I’ll accompany you. We can talk while looking for the gift.”

I think he’s right, besides, Kai is in the office and I have no one to accompany me. So I said yes. Takeru waits me outside the theater while I change my clothes. After that, we walk to the shopping center together. We talk about a lot of things, especially my college and how did I join the theater club. He’s studying in a univeristy in Fukuoka and now he spending his holiday after the test in his uncle’s house for a week.

*End of Acchan’s POV*

__________________________________________________________________________________

*Kai’s POV*

Several hours later, we finished the design and ready to give the presentation. We prepared the room while waiting for the chief of the company arrives. Fortunately I wear my best outfit so it’s no problem to give the presentation without change my clothes first.

There, I see Ray walk beside her father who is the chief or the company. She smiles to me, my heart skips a beat to see her with a gorgeous look today. It makes me a little nervous to give the presentation in front of the chiefs of the company, and also Ray. But, Thanks GOD, the presentation is going successfully. After the presentation, the chief looks so satisfied and he shake our hands.

“Kai, I don’t know what to say, but THANK YOU VERY MUCH for today. That was a great job!” the architect said. He pat m shoulder and then leave.

I take a look at my watch, it’s already 6 pm. I’m so tired and I think about Atsuko. I know she must be so sad and angry. I have to meet her tonight.

“Kai!” I heard someone’s calling. I turn around and find Ray standing beside the chiefman. I walk towards and bowed him.

“Kai, this is my dad. And Dad, this is Kai. He’s my friend” Ray introduce us each other.

“I’m Takahashi Kai, nice to meet you, Sir” I greet him.

He smiles and he look so kind. “I know, boy. You just introduced yourself in the presentation just now. So how can you being my daughter’s friend?”

“Oh, he’s my friend when we were in junior high school, Dad. It’s such a coincidence to meet him here,” Ray quickly answer her Dad’s question.

“You did a great job, Takahashi. I’m glad that we choose you to be the architect assistant” Ray’s Dad said. “Do you mind if we have a dinner together?”

“Yeah, Dad is right. Come on, Kai. Let’s have dinner with us!” Ray said happily.

Oh, THIS IS BAD. How could I ignore a chiefman’s request. I just can say YES to his invitation for dinner.

“But I have something to do, so I guess we can meet 15 minutes later in the restaurant, okay!” he said, take a look to his expensive watch.

“Dad..” suddenly Ray talk, clinging to her Dad’s arm. “Can I go there with Kai?”

“Yeah, sure!”

“I mean, by Kai’s car!” Ray suddenly said. I’m so surprised by what she said but I can only standing there and smiles. The chiefman look at me.

“You have the license?” he asked.

“Yeah, Sir” I quickly answered.

“Okay, then. Take care, see you there!” then the chiefman leave us.

“Let’s go!” Ray ask me and she clinging in my arm. I feel a bit nervous, but in the other side I feel guilty, considering… I have a girlfriend, I already have my Astuko!

*End of Kai’s POV*



*End of CHAPTER 10 Part 2
Thanks for reading, please leave thanks and comments  :mon pray2:
and... I have a bad news for the next chapter, actually THE WORLD WAR 3  :glasses:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on December 28, 2012, 10:08:08 AM
Uh oh~ Kai needs to Explain this to Acchan in Detail XDD and Sae x Mayuyu hm.. I sense Danger in their relationship if you know what I mean~  :rofl:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 28, 2012, 10:46:22 AM
takeru + ray = trouble...
I want more!! :twisted:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 28, 2012, 11:37:04 AM
Oh S***! Dangerous relationship!!!!  :mon mad:

@chichay12 : oi oi! dont say that! =.= it's me korin.... XD

Please update soon!! I wanna know what happen to Kai x Ray and Acchan x Takeru :mon pissed:

Takeru reminded me again of 'that scandal'!  Let me forget this!! :mon slapself:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on December 28, 2012, 11:47:40 AM
takeru + ray = trouble...
I want more!! :twisted:

WE WANT MORE!! :twisted: :lol:

Thanks for the update chemicalstar-san :twothumbs
waiting for the next one :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: vPANDAv on December 28, 2012, 12:51:59 PM
DRAMA!!!  :cathappy:

this is going to become so complicated, ahh~~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 28, 2012, 01:17:57 PM
Not too much drama, okay? Although I'm fine with drama, as long it's KaixAtsuko in the end!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on December 28, 2012, 01:18:11 PM
i hate it when boys break there promises.....  :frustrated:

kai!!! :scolding: :scolding: :scolding: :scolding:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 28, 2012, 02:09:38 PM
Thank for update  :mon star:
takeru + ray = big troubles. Kai and Atsuko wake up  :mon headbang:
PLease update soon  :mon innocent:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 28, 2012, 05:11:54 PM
lol...wtf..
i think ray dont really like kAI..
she just want to get car , house from her father,, :P

hehehe...
arh... i really want sweet moment more
next chapter be will world war 3?? :twisted:
hahahha... :heart:
i hope it will not take to much time for peaceful agreement  :w00t:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 28, 2012, 05:29:32 PM
Not too much drama, okay? Although I'm fine with drama, as long it's KaixAtsuko in the end!

LOL. It's okay, no worries... It's a KaixAcchan fic by the way.. I just want to test their feeling and know how far they can control their ego of being so selfish.

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on December 28, 2012, 05:35:33 PM
CHAPTER 10 Part 3 (Last Part)
Oi oi, sorry for the troubles I made, but this is the climax of the story. I till postpone the solution for the next chapter.


*Acchan’s POV*

After walk around from a shop to another shop, then I finally find a beautiful wallet for my mother’s birthday. I decided to go home since I already found the gift, so I ask Takeru to go. When we go out of the shopping center building, I find the sun is set. Time flies so fast.

“Ah, what if we have a dinner first before we go home?” Takeru said.

“That’s not a bad idea. Let’s go, I know a good resto with delicious foods!” I said. I just want to be nice with my friend, considering he’s accompanied me to look for my mother’s present, so I guess it’s okay if I take him to have a dinner.

*End of Acchan’s POV*


Kai is driving his car while Ray is sitting in beside him. When the car stopped by the traffic light, Kai take his phone. He’s about to call Acchan, just to ensure her that he’s really sorry for not coming to the show.

Meanwhile, Acchan walk across the road when the traffic is stopped. Takeru hold Acchan’s hand before they cross the road. It seems like Acchan feels familiar with the black SUV that stopped on the road. She glance at the car, and…

“KAI??” she thought.

“ATSUKO?!” Kai thought, when he coincidentally look at the people that walk cross the road and see someone who is he knows exactly, Acchan.

Kai and Atsuko’s eyes met. Acchan walk slower, her hearts feels like breaking down to see Kai in the car with A GIRL BESIDES HIM. Acchan thinks, it’s okay if Kai in a car with a girl if the girl is his friend or maybe cousin, but… “He said he had a job in the office, but why does he’s with a girl? He lied..” Acchan thought.

Kai really want to shout out Acchan’s name when he saw her walked cross the road, but… “WHO’S THE GUY HOLDING HER HAND??” Kai thought. It really made Kai’s heart break apart to see that scene.

They finally just stare each other until Acchan and Takeru reach the sidewalk and the other car behind Kai’s car keep toot the horn because the traffic light is changing and he have to drive his car again.

“Kai? What happen?” Ray asked, she feels something wrong with Kai’s expression lately.

“Nothing..” Kai answered. Now his head is full of question about the last scene when he sae Acchan.

Meanwhile, Takeru feels the same thing because Acchan’s behaviour suddenly changing since they crossed the road. “Acchan, what happened? You seems like not in the mood.”

“Ah, nothing.. I’m just.. I guess I saw someone I know, but maybe I’m wrong” Acchan said.

Then, Kai’s dinner going so boring because all Kai think during the dinner is Acchan. He just talk if Ray or the chiefman ask him something. So about Acchan, she seems to be quiet during the dinner, especially when she stares at the music stage in the café they have dinner now. The stage reminds her of Kai, when he sang a song for her. It was so romantic, but… “WHY,KAI?? WHY?? Are you cheating on me?” Acchan thought.

________________________________________________________________

At night, Kai really got a headache because of today, it’s not only because of the problem with Acchan, but the job today really made him feel so tired. He lay on his bed after took a bath. He takes his phone, type Acchan’s number, but before he dial it he think so hard.
He really want to talk to her, but there’s something bother him that makes him so angry and disappointed with Acchan. “She was with another guy!!”
“Okay, I’ll call her, just to confirm what did she do with that guy on the road. BUT… Oh my GOD, she also saw me with Ray!! Oh, I wonder what she thought about it. She must be feel the same thing. She must be thinking that I’m cheating on her. Yeah.. but she was with another guy holding her hand!! Arrrrggghhhhh GOD HEEEELP!” finally Kai just throw his phone away and drown her face on his pillow. “Why, Acchan… why??!!”

Not more than 15 meters away from his bedroom, a girl hugging her teddy bear—crying. “Kai, you lied to me. If you said that you were in the office, then why did you in the car with a girl? Are you cheating on me? You should explain it to me, Kai!! Why don’t you call me or something? Oh, yeah… maybe you’re afraid that you’ve been caught cheating on me, so you won’t call me to explain anything. BUT… I feel something different with his eyes, the way he looked at me when I saw him on the road. He looks like… sad, shocked, angry…” Acchan thought, tear drops keep rolling on her cheeks. “Takeru… yeah, he saw me with Takeru. Did he angry? Maybe he thought that I’m the one who’s cheating on him. Yeah, I’m sure, that eyes must be said that he’s jealous. BUT HE WAS WITH ANOTHER GIRL!!”

Then after that day, both of them don’t call or greet each other even if they meet in front of their house. Both of them looks like avoiding each other.


*End of CHAPTER 10*

How was that?
Ahahaha.. don't be mad okay, gonna update the next chapter soon for the solution of this world war 3. Calm down, the couple have to be togerther again..
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 28, 2012, 05:48:10 PM
ACCHAN!!!DONT CRY...
kai(chem-san) will explain everything..XD

 i want more trouble...XD
i think i becoming S now.. :doh:
thank you for the update..
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 28, 2012, 05:54:19 PM
Kai and Acchan!!!  :pleeease:
Kai and Acchan, you should explain!!!  :mon mad:
Please update soon, chemicalstar-san!!  :mon whine:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on December 28, 2012, 05:58:42 PM
This chapter makes me so badly for both because of two troubles  :mon mad: lol  I hope that this will improve  :mon innocent:
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon star:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 28, 2012, 06:02:50 PM
lol..kai u should be the man and explain  :angry:
lol..
atsuko dont be sad...
lol...please be lovey2 again :heart:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on December 28, 2012, 06:04:44 PM
and word MISUNDERSTANDING breaks in........ jinx of love....

pls. update more.. :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on December 29, 2012, 04:07:52 AM
Not too much drama, okay? Although I'm fine with drama, as long it's KaixAtsuko in the end!

yeah!! OMG! so much trouble..
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on December 29, 2012, 07:19:58 AM
 :frustrated:
double trouble
Acchan!!! stay strong
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 29, 2012, 08:51:37 AM
Ahhhh!!
Kai and Acchan don't misunderstand   :(
Give each other time to explain...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on December 29, 2012, 07:18:29 PM
 :kekeke: Hi, chemicalstar... Good job! The new couple needs to communicate and express themselves more to build a firmer and better foundation for their relationship! And of course, needs to quickly learn how to ward off these "noises" (ray & takeru) who will be hovering around them like... houseflies? (= irritating)  :wahaha:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on December 31, 2012, 12:17:24 AM
OMGIRLLL!! PLEASE EXPLAIN THAT!!! T^T  :deco: :heart: :peace: :catglare:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 31, 2012, 07:07:04 PM
please update soon
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on December 31, 2012, 08:39:48 PM
I'm about to make the next chapter of their sweet relationship (*maybe a hot one, hehe). Please leave thanks and comments, thank you and.. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Me love this!so much..XD
*Pervert mode on*
Atsumina!!their problem is solved!
Ahhhhh!!!i want more..
And again.thank you for the update ang happy new year..XD
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on December 31, 2012, 08:49:21 PM
Oh..... They are so CUTE!! :mon cute:
A hot scene in the next chapter?!?!?! Wait! It's too early for that!!
Who am I kidding!!!! I want smexy time!!!!!  :mon determined:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on December 31, 2012, 08:55:01 PM
I'm about to make the next chapter of their sweet relationship (*maybe a hot one, hehe). Please leave thanks and comments, thank you and.. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Me love this!so much..XD
*Pervert mode on*
Atsumina!!their problem is solved!
Ahhhhh!!!i want more..
And again.thank you for the update ang happy new year..XD

Happy new year chemicalstar ..
we'll wait for your ' new year smut '  :wahaha: :nya: :shy2: :shifty:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on December 31, 2012, 09:05:03 PM
yeah..nice one  :thumbup

love the sweet moment between them  :inlove:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on December 31, 2012, 09:28:27 PM
I'm about to make the next chapter of their sweet relationship (*maybe a hot one, hehe). Please leave thanks and comments, thank you and.. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Wow! *le me perv mode on* i want smut fanfic!! *imaging something* :mon bleed2:
Please update soon!! I can't wait!!  :mon fyeah:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 01, 2013, 12:31:46 AM
Thank you for update 
I love their moments it's so sweet  :mon lovelaff:
I want more atsukoXkai for 2013 lol  :mon fyeah:
please update soon  :mon innocent:

ps: As in France bonne année ;)  :mon firecrack:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 01, 2013, 01:37:16 AM
I'M SO SORRY GUYS, I ACCIDENTALLY REMOVED THE POST. Here I post again the 11th chapter. Gomen..


CHAPTER 11



Kai never imagined that even his house is next to Acchan's house but it feels like they're stay apart faaaar away. That without her in his life is making him lonely like crazy. Everyday when he wake up, he check his phone but no one messages him, he try to open his window but he found that Acchan is never open her window since that day. When he study and feel bored, there's no Acchan who always gives him support or just makes cookies and cakes for him. "Is this what Acchan felt when she wal lonely because of me?" Kai thought. "Maybe it's all my fault that I let her lonely. It's so normal if she wanted to go out with another guy.." Kai keep thinking about it everynight and day. "Should I apologize first?"



Acchan's POV*

“Acchan, would you help Mom to go to the store? We'll have a little party tomorrow,” Dad said.

“Party? Mom’s birthday party?” I asked in confuse. It’s not usual that Mom’s birthday will be celebrated like that. Usually we just having a dinner together.

“Sure! We’ll have a barbecue party and invite some friends..” Dad said, he’s so excited.

“Oh, that’s great! That will be fun” I said, I’m excited too. Since, it’s the first Mom’s birthday without my brother, so I guess it will be fun if there’s a  lot of people around.

Since this is the first Mom’s birthday without my brother, my parents had an idea to make a little barbecue party to celebrate it. They invited some friends to come. The barbecue party will be held this evening in our backyard. Today I helped my Mom to prepare it, I also called my aunty and my cousin to come. The thing that a little bothering me is… the family who live next house is invited too. Our parents know that we’re dating, so my Dad invited them too.

“Acchaaaaan!!” a voice of a girl shouting at me. When I turn around, there my cousin Mariko-sama is walking towards. Well she’s my cousin lives not far from my old house in Fukuoka. She’s older than me so she’s just like my sister for me. She knows that Kai and I are dating, I used to tell her since I met Kai for the first time. She also  knows about the trouble we’re facing now. She gave me advice to give Kai chance if he's willing to explain and apologize. But since Kai and I haven't talked each other yet, Mariko still have no ither advice for me. She only told me to find another guy if I don't love Kai anymore. But I guess she was just want to test me, because actually I love Kai so much, I'll never let him go.

“How are you?” I hug her.

“Great, just like usual.. Hey, you look so beautiful, better than your appearance when we had a videocall. Hahaha” Mariko is the wise woman, I used to call her if I had trouble sometimes. She’s the one who always try to cheer me up when my brother passed away.

*End of Acchan's POV*


Everyone is coming and greet each other. Kai looking for someone he loves the most but he can't find her.

"Mrs. Takahashi, let me introduce my niece Mariko. Dear, this is Takahashi family, they live next house," Acchan's mother introduce Mariko to Takahashi family.

"Good evening, I am Shinoda Mariko, yoroshiku."

"This is Kai and Mayu," Kai's mother introduce their children.

"Oh, so this is Kai! Acchan's right, you're handsome Kai.."

"Really? Hmm.. So this is right, she is really going crazy on me!" Kai said jokingly and everyone's laughing.

Now everybody is in the backyard, the party is about to begin but Acchan still not come yet.

"Mariko, please call Acchan, we're about to begin it.." Acchan's mom asked Mariko to call Acchan who's still in her room.

Mariko has an idea, then she whispers in Kai's ear.

"Eh? Now?" Kai shocked

Mariko nods and smile. "Be a man, Kai. Everything's started by your faults to make her lonely, you should be the one who apologize first."

Kai doesn't give any respond he's still uncertain to do that because he's still mad of the 'holding hands with another guy' scene.

Mariko notices his situation. "Still jealous with that unknown guy?"

"Eh? How do you know?" Kai surprised. He thinks that the woman in front of him can read other's thought. "Well I'm... Yeah, that's still bothering me. By the way who's that guy?"

"Ask her!"

"What?"

"Why 'what'?" Mariko said. "You're afraid?"

"Nooo.. Takahashi doesn't afraid of anything" Kai chuckled.

"Now go upstairs! Proof me you don't afraid of anything!" Mariko pushes his back to go.

"Okay okay don't push me like that," then Kai walk upstairs slowly. "Mariko is right, the begining of this problems is totally my faults. I let het lonely," he thought while walk heading to Acchan's room.

There's humming voice from a room. It makes Kai pretty sure that the voice is Acchan's. Then he walk approaches the door which is a bit opened. He can see Acchan is sitting on the edge of her bed. He takes a deep breath before knocking her door.

Knock knock..

"Yes, I'm coming. Just a minute, I'm still prepared the gift," Acchan said without knowing who's on the door, she thought that the one who knocked the door is her dad.

"Ehm.." Kai cleared his throat.

Acchan suddelny stop what she's doing when she heard the voice, she easily can recognize Kai's voice. Then she quickly turn around. Their eyes met.

"C-can I come in?" ask Kai nervously.

Acchan doesn't answer, she just nod with the flawless face, she turns around again, ignores him and continue to wrap the gift. She's been so busy to prepare for the party so that she had no time to wrap the gift.

Kai walk slowly approaching her, he stop and knelt down in front of her. As Acchan finished to wrap the gift, Kai take it from her hands and put it on the bed. Then he holds Acchan's hands. Acchan still doesn't look at him, she just looked down, staring at her hands which now are covered by Kai's hand.

"When I woke up this morning, I finally realize that there's something missing in my life for several days ealier," Kai starts to speak up. "There's no one who always cooks me some cakes, there's no one who always gives me a goodnight kiss, there's no 'Good morning' message when I check my phone when I wake up, there's no beautiful princess in front of me when I open my window every morning," he lift her chin so that he can see her pretty face.

"I know that there's something misunderstood between us, and I'm so sorry because I'm pretty sure that this all my faults," Kai said looking deep in her eyes.

"The day that I missed your show, I'm really sorry. I really had a problem in the office that I had to solve. I had to finished the design that day and give the presentation to the chiefman."

Acchan doesn't give any respond. She's just giving Kai chance to explain everything, especially she's actually waiting for his explanation about THAT GIRL.

"And.. I don't want you to be misunderstood of the girl with me that day. She's Ray, my friend when we're in junior high school. This was a quite councidence that we met in the office, I didn't know that she's the chiefman's daughter. After the presentation that day, they invited me to have a dinner. Since I brought the car, Ray used to go to the resto with me. But... for the God sake, Atsuko. There's nothing between us. I never cheated on you." This time Kai is getting more serious. "I'm so sorry for the mistakes I made and.. please don't misunderstood on it."

Acchan still doesn't say anything. But then, suddenly without noticing it, tear drops rolling down in her cheek. Kai feels so worried why does Acchan cry. He quickly wipe her tears with his thumb. "Atsuko please don't cry. I know I did wrong, but please I'm sorry. I can't see you hurt like this, Atsuko."

"I promise, I'll never let you feel lonely again. I-I love you, Atsuko..." Kai try to calm her down. He move closer and glued his forehead on hers. She can smell his scent, the one she missed the most.

"I- hiks hiks.. I-miss you, Kai..." Acchan said still sobbing.

"I miss you more, Atsuko. More than you can imagine. So would you forgive me? Please.."

Acchan nods.

"Thanks.. I love you.." Kai wiped her cheeks again and smiled.

Acchan replied his smile. "Promise me, don't leave me again." She touch his forehead, his eyes, his dimple on his cheek,-- the face she miss so much.

"I promise.." Kai cups her face and moves closer until their lips meet. He kisses her lips deeply and slowly while caressing her cheeks. Kai really enjoys the soft lips he loves the most, the lipgloss flavour he missed for days.

"Ehm ehm.." someone's knocking on the opened door of Acchan's room. Kai and Acchan quickly broke the kiss. "Sorry to interrup you, but.. We're about to start, let's come downstairs! You can continue it later." Acchan's father feel uneasy to interrupt his daughter's sweet moment, so he quickly leave them again. Both of them blushing red when Acchan's father caught them kissing.

Kai kisses her forehead and stands up, leads her to the backyard and join the party with others. There, Mariko who sits next to Mayu smiles widely when Kai and Acchan come to the backyard holding hands together. The party is going so fun and full if happiness. When Acchan roasts the beef, Kai come approaches, his hand holds her waist. "Hmm..smells good! Slruupp.."

"Wait a minute more until it's done. It's your favorite, right?" Acchan said.

"Hm? Who's talking about the beef. I'm talking about you," Kai teases her and peck her on cheek.

"Mou.. Kai, I'm not food," Acchan pouts.

"But you look so delicious and eatable" he smiles.

"I'll eat you first, Kai!" Acchan smirks pointing a knife to him.

Kai's face becomes so pale. "Oh God, this girl is so... Oh, Atsuko" Kai thought. He quickly put her hand down, take the knife and put it away . "Okay okay, you can eat me later," he said and wink at her.

Acchan blushed. She continue to roast, then suddenly Kai asks her. "Ne Atsuko.. Who's that guy, by the way?"

Acchan stopped by his question. "You're jealous?"

"No I'm not," Kai quickly said, hide his true feeling.

"Yes, you are!" Acchan said.

"Who is he?" Kai asked to the point.

"My friend," Acchan answer it shortly.

"College friend?"

"No, old friend."

"His name?"

"Takeru."

"You like him?"

"No."

"Really?"

"Yeah. You don't believe me?"

"No, because he was holding your hands, I guess that's more than friend," Kai pouts.

Acchan chuckled. He's so funny when he pouts like that. "Kai, please don't be misunderstood. We were cross the road, it's normal if he held my hand. Believe me, there's nothing between us."

"I believe in you, but I still can accept it."

"Kai don't be so selfish, I'm yours and you just have to trust me, okay" Acchan hold his cheek and look deep into his eyes. "I love you, no one can replace you from my heart."

Kai never seen Acchan confess her love deeply like this. Now he's glad to be her boyfriend. "Promise me don't go with another guy, Atsuko." Once again, Kai close the gap between them, he softly kiss her on lips.

"Ehm ehm.. Go get a room, guys! Look, your meats are burnt.." Mariko comes and makes them broke the kiss.

"Oops.. Look our beef are burnt Atsuko," Kai quickly take the beef.

"It's your fault, now I can't eat it," Acchan pouts.

"Let's make another one!" Kai calm her down.

"No I don't want to. I'll eat you Kai!!" Acchan smirks at him.


End of CHAPTER 11


Yosshh.. So that's the 11th Chapter.  The couple are together again. Sorry if there's a lot of typo.


 I'm about to make the next chapter of their sweet relationship (*maybe a hot one, hehe). Please leave thanks and comments, thank you and.. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on January 01, 2013, 02:38:17 AM
At last, they (kai x acchan) back together being lovely dovey. All the misunderstanding is clear. So, it time for their smexy scene  :ptam-ok: :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on January 01, 2013, 06:44:44 AM
-Hello.

-chemicalstar-san-

-Nice chapter!

-Thank you for update :)

-Ganbatte

-WMatsui_22-
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 01, 2013, 07:52:33 AM
LOL..

 Looks like you all are waiting for the hot chapter one, huh?! LOL
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on January 01, 2013, 08:53:46 AM
HAHAHA SO CUTE!! thank you ... i love this!!  :heart: :cathappy: :thumbup :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on January 01, 2013, 09:02:56 AM
Great! Their Relationship is progressing  :) :) :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 01, 2013, 09:18:10 AM
Yeah a hot scene please
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 02, 2013, 05:01:39 AM
They apologized... So sweet :)
Please update soon!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on January 02, 2013, 06:50:13 AM
LOL..

 Looks like you all are waiting for the hot chapter one, huh?! LOL

you can know laa~~ what we want  :nya:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on January 02, 2013, 03:03:26 PM
Long time no comment!
since vacation is still up-roaring..
and they're back together!!!
fight-sweet-smexy!
bring out smexy acchan!
lalalalala im excited!
thank your time author san!  :jphip:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 03, 2013, 01:15:24 AM
CHAPTER 12


Now its seems like Kai still can't manage his time, when he has to be focused on college, work, family, and so Acchan. But he always tried to hang out with her every weekend, and sometimes visit her house to have a dinner with her family. But still, he always feel that he's too busy.




*flashback*

"Mom, I'll come back late, don't wait me for dinner" Kai talked to his mother on the phone.

" *sigh.. Mom already cooked your favorite foods.." his Mom's voice sounds like ao disappointed.

"Really? Oh.. I'm sorry mom, but I had a meeting with my team tonight. I'm sorry..."

"Okay then, take care.."

"Bye mom.."

His mother hang off the phone with sad expression. Kai's father noticed it "Where is he?"

"He's still in the office, going to have his dinner there."

Kai's father sigh. "Sometimes... I feel like I lost my son. You know... Since he worked there."

"Yeah, I feel it too." Kai's mother replied. "But it's his choice, we don't have to  forbid it."


*end of flashback*


One day Acchan is about to go to Fukuoka since there's no class for tomorrow. She wants to visit her brother's grave. Her free day tomorrow is coincided perfectly with the day of her brother's death one year ago. Acchan had asked her parents to go there together, but unfortunately they have to go to Osaka for a business trip.

It seems like Acchan has to go there by herself. There's an idea to ask Kai with her there, but yesterday Kai told her that tomorrow will be his busy day and he's about to spend the whole time at office. She wonder why did Kai so prepared for tomorrow. He looks like about doing something important. But it's fair enough because He already gave his whole time for her 2 days ago.



*Next Day*

Kai went to the office this morning. It's so rare that Ray is already there. She greets him with her brightest smile, "Ohayou, Kai.."
"Oh, hi.." Kai smiles and greets her.  "Ohayou.." Then Kai went to his room. He put his bag and take an enveloped letter from the bag. He take a deep breath when holding the letter. "I hope it's the best choice." He give the letter to the chiefman's secretary and after that he continue his work with hus team. He looks like working harder today and force the team to finish their work today.

When the lunch time comes, Kai doen't go to the canteen. He just finished his work, he took deep breath while standing behind the room's big windows. He stares at the view from the windows. Then suddenly his phone 's ringing, Kai received a mail from Acchan.


From: Atsuko
"Kai, today I'm going to Fukuoka. Going to visit my brother's grave. Don't forget to have lunch and have a good day. I love you.."


"Eh? Is she going there by herself?" Kai thought. But then suddenly someone's open his door without knocking it and go inside. Kai turn around and find Ray walking towards him holding a paper.

"What is it mean?" she said with angry look, show him the paper.

Kai take the paper and he recognize it as his letter to the chiefman this morning. The retirement proposal letter.

"You want to retired?" Ray asked. Kai doesn't say anything.

He turn around again to the window, his back facing Ray. "Yeah, I decided to get retired from this job."

Suddenly he feel Ray's hug him from behind, glued her forehead on his back. "Kai, don't leave me..." she said sobbing.

"R-Ray..?" Kai feel nervous and shocked by what Ray did. Her hands around her body, Kai used to put it off but she made it more tight.

"Ray.. look, I'm so sorry but I'm pretty sure with my decision. Sorry.." Kai turn around and find Ray's crying. He wipe her tears with his thumbs. "Don't cry.. It doesn't mean that our friendship is ended too."

"But.. But I.. I like you more than friend, Kai.. I told you I liked you since we're in junior high school. I- I love you.."

DEG. "What is this now? Ray loves me? GOD , don't kidding me! Oh, what I should do?!" Kai thought.

"Please don't leave. I wanna be with you," Ray said, still sobbing.

Now Kai act awkwardly, but he dare himself to tell her the truth. The truth that.. "I'm sorry, Ray. I'm already have a girldriend. And.. to tell the truth, I leave this job to be with her."

Ray get shocked. She never imagine that the one she've been chasing this time is already has a girlfriend. "Damn you Kai!" she thought. Her eyes looks like she's angry plus disappointed. Without no hesitation, Ray quickly steal a kiss on Kai's lips.

Kai can feel her soft lips, for one or two seconds, he enjoy it although he don't reply the kiss. But then he remember about Acchan, he quickly push Ray off. "I-I'm sorry, Ray.. I can't." To avoid another unexpected scene, Kai walk out of the room leaves Ray there alone.

"OMG OMG What did I do?!! I was kissed by a girl when I already have a girlfriend? OMG. Atsuko I'm sorry. You're the one in my heart, no one else. Atsuko Atsuko Atsuko Atsuko..." Kai thought while walked fast to the architect's room. He keep repeat calling Acchan's name in his mind, just to ensure himself that Acchan is the only one in his head.

He meets the architect where he will confirm his retirement. He really want to leave that office now. After had a permiasion from the architect, Kai packed his bag and quickly get his motorbike and go home.

He visits Acchan's house, fortunately when he's about to enter the yard, Acchan's parents are comeing out. Kai asks about Acchan, she's just leaving about an hour ago. Kai decided to follow her. He ask the address and then pack his bag and go to the bus station in hurry.

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In other place where there's only silence and peace, Acchan walks slowly towards her brother's grave holding a bucket of flowers. When she arrives, she stop and knelt down in front of the grave.

"Hey, brother.. How are you?" she said smiling to the grave. "It's been already a year, and I miss you so much. We're so sorry mom and dad can't come here to visit. They have a very important business trip."

"We moved to Tokyo, and now I'm studying in a famous university, I'm happy that I met a lot of people who are so nice to me. And I met someone too, he's so nice and cute. We're dating.. The funny thing is.. He lives next to our new house. He drives a motorbike, just like yours, that reminds me of you. I remember that you always protect me from anything that bothering me. He used to do it too. I wish you could meet him someday. His name is.."

"..Takahashi Kai" suddenly Kai appears behind her. It really makes Acchan shocked. She turn around and find Kai standing there smiling at her. "Nice to meet you, brother" Kai bowed then knelt down beside Acchan. He hold Acchan's hand. "You have a beautiful sister and I love her so much. Let me protect her, I promise I never let her being hurt," then Kai lift Acchan's hand and kiss it. Acchan smiling and blushing of what just Kai said. (A/N Aaah.. This reminds me of the same scene when AcchanxTakamina singing Omoide No Hotondo in Tokyo Dome T_T )

After leaving the grave, Acchan take Kai to a restaurant near her old house.

"Acchan!" the restaurant owner greets her when Acchab and Kai enter the restautant. "God, look at you! You look so beautiful, and who is..." the woman glare at Kai.

"Ah this is Kai, err...my boyfriend," Acchan said shyly.

Kai bowed "Takahashi Kai" then he shake her hand.

"Whoo a Tokyo guy, huh?" the woman winked at her. "So are you going to stay the night here or going back to Tokyo?"

"Emm.. Since it already late, I guess we will spend the night at my old house."

"Oh souka.. Mariko often sleep there too" the woman said while we're walking towards the table.

That night Acchan and Kai have a great dinner. Acchan orders a lot of foods because she's really missed the food. It's about several months that she haven't eat her fave foods in this restaurant.

"Kai, you have't told me how could you come here?" Acchan ask, still eating her foods. "you used to be busy today, huh?"

"Oh, yeah. I'm busy today, to give a proposal of my retirement."

"WHAT? Retirement?" Acchan shocked, she stop eating and stare at Kai.

Kai nods, act like this is not a special thing. "Yeah, I leave the job."

"Why? You wanted this job so much!! You don't remember how you fight to pass the test to get this job?" Acchab asked him.

"Yes, baby.. I know it," Kai pinch Acchan's cheek. "But I keep thinking about it for long time that.. I lost my life since I work there. You know, I was being so busy leaving my family my friends, and especially YOU."

"So you did it for that?"

Kai nods. "Yeah, it's a half time job by the way, and I don't look for the salary, I look for the experience in this job. So there's nothing  regret to leave this job." Kai eat again his foods. "I choose to make a longer time for you and family. I can still look for another not-too busy experience."

"So what about Riku?" Acchan ask.

"Oh, Riku still with the team. But don't worry, his team is not as busy as I was. And he can still manage his time."

And then they eating again in silence. Suddenly Acchan talks.
"Thank you.."

Kai take his drink, "for what?"

"For doing such that thing for me. You know, I'm feeling guilty to make you leave that job."

Kai smiles and hold her hand. "Don't feel guilty, it's all my decision. And.. did I told you that I'm gonna do anything to be with you?"

Acchan nods and smiles, she remember the moment when Kai leave his motorbike and go to campus by bus just to be with her.

"I love you.."

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After finished their dinner, they walk to go to Acchan's old house. Now it's about 10 p.m., too late to go back to Tokyo. Besides, Acchan had prepared to spend the night at her old house.

"I thought your parents had sold the house" Kai said when they pass on the sidewalk.

"No, we have a lot of family in this town, so we didn't sell the house. Sometimes my family go there, Mariko often lives there too.."

"Oh, that's tall woman!" Kai chuckled. "You look so close with her, eh?"

"Yeah, she's just like my sister" Acchan said. "You should thanks her for gave me advice about our relationship."

"Ah so you told her about us?"

Acchan nods.

"Hmm.. So that's why she ask me to apologize to you that night."

"Mariko did that?" Acchan thinks that the apologize that night is Mariko's idea, not Kai's.

"Hurm.. " then Kai realized something. "OH BUT IT'S ME, of course. I was about to apologize and it was coincidence that she asked me to do it too." Kai answeren nervously.

Acchan giggled, it's funny to see Kai nervous like that. She pinch his cheek where his dimple exactly is. "So cute.."

Then, finally they arrived in front of Acchan's house. She still has the key, so even there's no one inside, she can still enter the house.

"So  this is my old house" Acchan said when they arrived in front of a big enough house.
"Come in" Acchan take his hand when she enter the room. It's dark inside. Acchan step back to find the switch and turn the lights on.

Now they can see all over the room. "Make yourself comfort. I'll make some tea" Acchan said and she walk to the kitchen, leaving Kai in the living room. Kai look around and find a big family potrait on the wall. There's Mr&Mrs Maeda there, with two children, a boy and a girl.

The girl on the potrait is looks very familiar to him. Of course because it's Acchan's picture. Buy it's look like when Acchan was child, it's about 5 or 6 years old. And Kai guess the boy is Acchan's brother.

"What are you looking at?" Acchan asked when she come with two cups of tea. She walk to the living room and sit on the couch. Kai walk approach her and sit, Acchan offer the tea and Kai drink it.

"Hmm.. It's very warming. Thank you" Kai said and put the cup on the table.

"She looks so cute" Kai stare at the potrait again.

Acchan blushed and Kai noticed it.

"It's her, not you" Kai added, make Acchan pout. Then she pinch Kai's cheek.

"You're so rude Kai!"

"Hahaha.. Sorry, I'm just kidding. Look, I don't even finished my sentence" Kai said try to calm her down.

"That little girl...is cute" Kai stare at the potrait. Then he turn his face and look at Acchan, his hand move and hold her chin, "and this girl... is the most beautiful ever."

Acchan's cheek is getting red and she can't help to smile, yes she give her angelic smile to Kai. This time, Kai is the one who can't help to kiss that killing smile. He move closer and touch his lips to hers. He kiss her passionately, and Acchan can feel his kiss is full of love. She replied the kiss and make it deeper. After a couple of minutes, they finally broke the kiss to catch a breath.

"I love you" Kai said looking deep in her eyes.

Acchan smiles then she gives a him a peck, "I love you too."

Suddenly Acchan's phone is ringing. Acchan move towards her bag and pick up the phone.

"Mosh mosh"

"Acchan, have you arrived at the house?"

"Ah, mom. Yeah, we just arrived here, don't worry" Acchan said.

Kai grab a photo on the corner table. There's a young man sit on a cool motorcycle and a trophy in his hand.

"Okay mom, bye." Acchan then put her phone on the table. She look at Kai who's staring at the photo.

"That's my brother, with his last trophy," Acchan said.

Kai turns to Acchan. "His last trophy?"

Acchan nods. "Yeah, he was a great racer. He got a lot of trophies. But unfortunately, he didn't finish his last race because of the accident.."

"You must be proud of him. Do you have any photo of him in his race or something?" Kai asked as he hold Acchan's hand.

"Yes of course! We have a lot of his photo album" Acchan answered.

"Really, that sounds interesting. Would you like to show it to me? I want to see it!" Kai looks very excited.

"Sure, let's go!" Acchan grab Kai's hand and they heading to Acchan's old room.

"Is this your room?" Kai asked as they enter a very neat and cute room.

"Yes, it was my room. I live here since I was born until we move to Tokyo and I got a new room in front if yours" Acchan walk towards the bookshelf. "Just take a seat, I'll find the album."

Kai sits on the edge of the bed while looking around the room. So this is his girlfriend's previous room. She must be very nice and neat person, that'a why she was accepted in interior design major at college.

"I found it!" Acchan shouted then walk approach Kai. She sits beside Kai and give him the album.

They start to open the album sheet by sheet. It fulfiled by a lot of photos of Acchan's family in the racing sircuit. Happiness is the only word that can show how the photo is about. Acchan tell Kai each detail of the photos. Kai's look so amazed.

"WHO IS THIS??! HAHAHAHAH!!" Kai laughed out loud while his finger pointed to a photo that show the crying Acchan. In the photo, Acchan looks still young, maybe it was when she's in junior high school. Her face is so funny when she's crying like that.

"Waaaa.. Don't look at that photo!!" Acchan quickly cover the photo with her hand. But it's too late.

Kai can't help to laugh out loud. Acchan pouting at Kai and she starts to hit him.

"Ouch!! Sorry.. Hahaha" Kai succesfully avoiding Acchan's hand. Then he run around the room when Acchan try to catch him.

"You look so funny in that photo! Hahaha" Kai still avoiding Acchan who now is grabbing a pillow and still trying to catch Kai.

The room becomes very messy as Acchan and Kai running and throwing everything to each other.

"Oopps!! Sorry you miss it again!" Kai feel so satisfied as he succesfully avoiding a doll that Acchan threw to him. Now Acchan has no other 'weapon' to throw to Kai. So she run to catch him by herself.

Kai moved quickly try to avoid her but he failed as he step on a lipbalm and make him slipped. Acchan who is successfully catch him, fell down and bumped onto his body.

"Oucchh!!" Kai shout a little as Acchan bumped onto his body. But it's not really hurt because they fell down on the bed.

Both of them is panting and try to catch some air to breath. Acchan pinch Kai's nose so hard, makes Kai shout. "Aaaww!! It hurts!"

"Gotcha!!" Acchan smirked on him and move her body from the top of Kai. She laid herself beside him as she still panting.

There's only silence and their sounds of breath. Both of them look at the ceiling with nothing to say. Then Kai hold Acchan's hand and squeeze it. Acchan turn her head and look at him, the one she love who now is laying on the bed beside her.

Kai look at Acchan, he smiles at her. Slowly he move his head closer to her and kiss her. It's kind of a short kiss. Then Kai caress Acchan's cheek. He moves his body so now he's on the top of Acchan. He slowly locked his lips with hers again. The kiss is full of love and become more passionately. Acchan's hand move around his neck and start to stroke his hair and make it messy.

The kiss become more and more hot as Kai's tongue start to enter Acchan's mouth and explore it. They keep kissing for several minutes until Kai's hand starts to move and gropes on Acchan's thigh make her skirt open up.

"Mmmmhh.." there a sound of moan, Acchan keep squeezing Kai's head while they're kissing.

Now Kai's hand move to Acchan's shirt open it up showing her flat smooth belly. He gropes on it make a soft sound of Acchan moans out from their kiss. He moves again to her thigh, move upper and upper until he touch her panties about to pull it down.

But then he stopped and break the kiss. He look deep into Acchan's eyes who now is confused why did he break the kiss.

"Atsuko,.. i-is it okay?" Kai asked nervously.

Acchan stare at him for a while, she didn't say anything but pull his neck close to her and give him a deep kiss. Kai take it as a 'Yes'. His hand start to move again. Now he try to pull up her shirt, make her only in her bra. He pull Acchan up so he can reach her back and uhook her bra. She's totally naked now. Then it's time for him to undo his clothes. One by one every piece of his clothes was taken off until they totally naked. Kai pull the blanket and cover half of their bodies because outside is raining and the weather is a bit chill.

He stare at her upper naked body, feel amazed of her sexy look. He peck her on lips and then drown his face on her neck. That night, they make their bodies become one, feeling each other's love and lust.

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End of CHAPTER 12.

How was that? LoL
thanks for reading this story please leave thanks and comments :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on January 03, 2013, 02:32:31 AM
Hey ray !! How dare you kiss kai !  :scolding:

It's a perfect idea that Kai leaves his jobs  :wahaha:

and about the smut it's .....  :on GJ:

*but i want more*  :shy2: :shy1: :nya:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on January 03, 2013, 03:13:33 AM
 :on lol: :luvluv1: :whistle:
:on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :mon bleed2:
 :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon fyeah: :mon bleed2:
LOLYIEEEE KAIACCHAN ♥♥♥♥♥↖(^ω^)↗ヽ(^。^)ノ
THANK YOUU
*but i want more*  :shy2: :shy1: :nya:
:gmon bang: :sashiko:

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 03, 2013, 03:28:28 AM
Thank you for update  :mon fyeah:
their moment are so sweet I love  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
why this Ray kiss Kay  :mon headbang: :mon headbang: :mon headbang:
Please update soon I can't wait for the next  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 03, 2013, 05:27:37 AM
:on lol: :luvluv1: :whistle:
:on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :mon bleed2:
 :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon fyeah: :mon bleed2:
LOLYIEEEE KAIACCHAN ♥♥♥♥♥↖(^ω^)↗ヽ(^。^)ノ
THANK YOUU
*but i want more*  :shy2: :shy1: :nya:
:gmon bang: :sashiko:

i think that mariko gonna arrive suddenly...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 03, 2013, 06:18:00 AM
:mon bleed2: Ah i need tissue! Oh not enough? :mon bleed2:
Damn you Ray! Y U Kiss Kai!?!?!?!?!  :mon evil:
And about smut, i love it!!  :mon lovelaff:
I want more smut!! *le me perv mode on*  :mon mischief:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on January 03, 2013, 06:47:14 AM

i think that mariko gonna arrive suddenly...
LOL I WILL CALL KUU ASAP
To not disturb my kaiacchan
 :on voodoo:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on January 03, 2013, 07:06:59 AM
OMGIRL!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! KAI ACCHAN!!! >,,,<  :thumbup  :heart: :heart: :heart: :cathappy: :cathappy: :cathappy: :deco: :deco: :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 03, 2013, 07:16:41 AM

i think that mariko gonna arrive suddenly...
LOL I WILL CALL KUU ASAP
To not disturb my kaiacchan
 :on voodoo:

Yeah Haruko-san is right...did this chapter say that Mariko often lives there?
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: yourockme on January 03, 2013, 08:42:00 AM
Yeah Haruko-san is right...did this chapter say that Mariko often lives there?
Yeah,ok then
 :err:  xD
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 03, 2013, 09:02:17 AM
I knew you must be thinking about that.. but NOOOOO....

This is the best moment of their relationship and I WON'T INTERRUPT THEM. Hehe..

Can't wait to update the next chapter.
Thank you!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 03, 2013, 12:08:37 PM
Ray!!! how dare you kiss Kai :angry:
Kai and Acchan's little smut moment...  :twothumbs
more smut please :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 03, 2013, 01:07:22 PM
RAY!!!!!!! How dare YOU?!?!?! :scolding: :on voodoo:
BUT it's a good thing he pushed her away!!
*reading, scrolling down* Hmmmmm .... SMUT??!! *grins*  :mon star:  :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2:
I want MORE MORE MORE!!!! *perv mode on*
Update SOON!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on January 03, 2013, 03:38:44 PM
 :thumbup nice move quitting that damn job, kai! no point working so hard and neglecting family, friends and girlfriend... and now reward is the hot hot hot night!  :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on January 04, 2013, 04:17:32 PM
Quote
I knew you must be thinking about that.. but NOOOOO....

This is the best moment of their relationship and I WON'T INTERRUPT THEM. Hehe..

Yes, i agree with it ! I want the next update soon too
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) NEW CHAPTER 14
Post by: chemicalstar on January 05, 2013, 07:23:56 PM
Hello, I’m sorry it takes several days to update..




CHAPTER 14




About a week later, since Kai have no business for work, now he can spend extra time for his family, friends, and Acchan. Plus, now he can join the football team of his college. Just to fill his leisure time when Acchan practices at theater.

"Tadaimaaa.." Acchan enters her house followed by Kai. They just back from campus together.

"Oh Acchan, you're back" her father comes and greets them. "Oi, Kai? How's your study?"

"Everything is great, Mr.Maeda Thank you..."

"Oh Kai.. My son" suddenly Acchan's mom comes from the kitchen. Seems like she's cooking something cuz Kai can smell something delicious from the kitchen.

"Good evening, Mrs.Maeda" Kai bows. "Emm, I think I can't be long here I have to go home. Mom must be waiting for me," Kai said.

"Oh come here first, I cooked something..." Acchan's mother takse Kai's hand and drags him to the dining room. Acchan and her father follow them.

"Wow.. It must be so delucious!" Acchan is amazed by the foods' appearance. There's a lot of various cakes and another food. "Kai, you want some?" Acchan offers him to taste the food. "Here... Aaaa..." Acchan feeds him. Acchan’s father glares at them, and then Kai’s cheek is getting red.

"Mmm... Yummm!!" Kai chews the food. "This is delicious, Mrs.Maeda."

"You like it?" Acchan asks.

Kai nods while eating the food.

"You can take them home, Kai. Here, let me wrap it for you to take it home. Mayu must be like it too."

"Ah okay. Thank you.."

"Just choose the food you want to take home and put it on the box" Acchan's mom commands.

"Haik," Then he takes some cakes and another food. "I want this one, this one, and...that one, that one too.. And ... This one.. Errr okay, enough Mrs.Maeda."

"Okay, just put it on the box. Seems like you like it so much."

"Err, may I take it home too, Mrs. Maeda?" Kai is pointing at Acchan who is sitting on the chair. Acchan giggles as she hears what Kai said.

“Yeah, after you two tie the knot, muscular man!” Acchan’s father pats his hand on Kai’s head, a bit laughing. “Now, go home, it’s late of night. Go take some rest, you must be so tired.”

“Thanks, Mrs. Maeda, Mr.Maeda. Good night..” Kai bows then walks to the door, followed by Acchan.

As they arrived in front of the door, Kai stops and turns to Acchan. “Your dad doesn’t let me take you home yet..” he pouts, Acchan laughing. Kai quickly steals a deep kiss before leaves the house, suddenly Acchan’s father comes and clears his throat. “Ehm..ehm..”

They break the kiss and blushed. “Good night, Mr.Maeda… bye Atsuko” Kai bows and leaves the house, heading to his house.


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That night Acchan gets on the toilet, looking up a dipstrip test.

"Negative.." "But why I don't get my period yet? It's been a week late." Acchan thought. "Can be it mistaken?"

Acchan gets on her bed after turns her light off. She doesn't want Kai feels worried that she isn't sleeping yet. She takes her phone and start to types a message.

To: Mariko
"I don't get my period yet, it's been a week. Could it be something?"

Then a minute later, Acchan's phone is ringing. It's Mariko calling. She sigh, she texted Mariko because of afraid to talk by phone, that’s why she choosed to talk by message. But this Mariko-sama calls her..

"Moshi moshi.." Acchan greets her.

"DID YOU DO IT ??!!" suddenly her voice can be heard, so bold, and half shouting.

"Doing what?" Acchan said, a bit surprise of Mariko's shouting so she can't notice what Mariko just meant.

"DOING SEX OF COURSE!! ACCHAN DID YOU DO IT? With that Takahashi boy?!!!" Mariko still shouting.

"Sshhh... Don't talk too loud! Everybody's sleeping!"

Mariko takes a deep breath. "Okay..." she talk in a lower voice. "Acchan are you really had sex with Kai?" now she's whispering.

"Uhn.. " Acchan answers it shortly.

"Oh my... Didn't you two use any safety? Just like.. condom, maybe?"

For  moment Acchan remember about that night again, and she's pretty sure that they did sex without any safety. "Err... No."

“WHAT?” Mariko shouts again. Then she notices that she just shouted again. She calms herself down, take a deep breath. “Oh my, maybe she’s pregnant…” she thought.

“Mariko??” Acchan talks, as she doesn’t hear Mariko’s voice for a while. “Are you still there?”

“Yeah, still here.” Mariko anwers it lazyly. “Still thinking about what it could be..”

“So what do you think it could be?” Acchan asks.

“I don’t know, but… the first thing I can say is…”

“What is it?”

“Errr… maybe you’re pregnant, Acchan..” she asks uncertainly.

“Ah, that one. I knew…” Acchan sighs, “I’ve tested it, but the result is negative.”

“EEH? NEGATIVE?” Mariko is surprised.

“Uhn, I don’t know why. Could it be mistaken?”

“Maybe, somehow it can’t show the 100% perfect result..”

Now it’s Acchan who keeps silent for a while.

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The next day, Acchan asked Kai to go to the place where they kissed for the first time. Acchan told him that she really missed that place and want to go there again with him. Kai agreed, so after the class was over, they went to the lakeside.

Kai and Acchan sit on a wooden bench on the lakeside, Acchan sits beside him on his embrace, she rests her head on his shoulder.

“Kai…” Acchan said, she doesn’t look at Kai, but looks at the view of the lake.

“Hmm?”

“Do you think we will be together forever?”

Kai looks at Acchan, he can see her innocent face but her eyes said that she’s thinking of something. “Yeah, sure. I love you more than my life. Except…” Kai takes a breath. “… except you don’t want to be with me anymore, I can leave you even my hearts won’t. But as I always said, I can do anything for you…”

Acchan blushed, fortunately Kai can’t see it. About what Kai said, actually Acchan has proved it when Kai left his job only to take more time with her. It proved that he loves her more than his favor, his job, and even his life. “I’m glad to have you, Kai…”

“No, I’m the luckiest one to have you, Atsuko…”

“Kai, actually I want to tell you something important. I’m not sure with it, but…”

“but what? Just tell me, don’t worry…” Kai caress her hair.

“… I think I’m pregnant..” Acchan finally said. Kai stops his move to caress Acchan’s hair and Acchan notices it. She knows that Kai must be shocked, he even doesn’t say anything for a moment.

“WHAT?? PREGNANT? How—oh, yeah.. we did it! Oh GOD, what I should do? ” Kai thought. He releases his hand around Acchan’s back and now they’re facing each other. Kai can see her face that full of fears and confuses. He lift her chin so that she can look at him straight.

“You don’t have to worry about anything… whatever will happen, I’ll always be with you..” he said politely.

“I’m not really sure about this, Kai. Because, I didn’t get my period since it was late for a week, but when I test it, the result is negative. You know, the test could be mistaken too. So I’m not really sure..”

“Souka.. But hey, what’s with that face?” Kai tries to cheer her up. “Don’t be sad or afraid of anything. Even if it’s right that you’re pregnant, don’t worry, I’ll be with you, let’s face it together.” Kai holds her hand tightly.

Acchan nods, tears coming from her eyes. Kai knows this situation so well, he quickly hug Acchan tightly. “Gomen ne, but don’t worry, I’ll be responsible of it. Trust me.”

After that moment, Kai can’t stop to think about it. Even they’re not sure about the pregnancy, but still, it keeps around his head. He doesn’t mind if Acchan really pregnant. He can marry her and they will start their life together. But he doesn’t want to ruin Acchan’s study, career, or even he future. Kai’s afraid if because of her pregnancy, Acchan can’t continue her study. So, Kai goes to the officer of the university. He asks them if there is a student gets pregnant, does she still can continue her study or not. The shocking thing is.. the answer is no. The university officer will let the pregnant student to take a gap year until the baby is born, then the student can continue to study again.

Kai thinks about it again, is that’s so, it will hampers Acchan study, besides, after the baby is born, she might be busy with the baby too. But Kai thinks that he has no other option. He doesn’t want Acchan to take an abortion, he doesn’t want to kill the baby. He loves Acchan very much. So he plans to make Acchan keep her pregnancy and they will grow the baby together. The next plan that Kai has to do is to tell his parents.

An evening in Takahashi’s residence.
After dinner, Kai goes to his father’s workplace at home. He knocks the door although it’s a bit opened. “Oh, Kai… come in!” His father is sitting on his chair, reading something.

“Are you busy?” Kai asks.

Kai’s father looks up at him. “No. Why? Want to discus something?”

Kai nods. “Yeah, if you don’t mind to..”
His father actually knows that if Kai comes to his workplace and asks if he’ s busy or not, it means that Kai want to discuss something. It’s kind of his habit when he want to ask his father to help him to do his homework, to explain about something he doesn’t understand, or when Kai wanted something from his father such as a new laptop or else.

Kai walk approach, he looks at some photo frames on his father’s table. He takes one of them, a frame with his photo inside, a photo taken when he was about one or two years old. He looks at the picture.

“You grows well, son” his father said while Kai looking at his childhood photo. “I never imagined that you will grow up this well. A nice, kind, smart, and handsome..”

Kai smiles. “Dad, what did you feel when the first time you know that Mom was pregnant?”

“Huh?” his Dad a bit surprised with Kai’s question but he smiles. “I was happy, of course. The best thing of the relationship when you love someone is when you have something that will make you together forever. This thing is a child. The only thing that can represents the two  of you, the only thing can prove that you two are love each other.”

Kai thinks that what his father said is right. Deep inside his heart, he’s very happy of Acchan’s pregnancy. That will make them together forever.

“How precious is child for you?”

“Too much words to describe how precious ‘Kai and Mayu’ for me. My love for you two is deeper than the ocean, wider than the universe, more than anything. I would do anything to make you happy and safe.”

Kai smiles again and half whispers “Thank you..”

“Why do you ask about that? You know, it’s so sudden…”

“Ano.. Dad, I hope you don’t have any negative thinking, it’s just like.. I feel the same way too. ”

“Same way? What do you mean?”

“Emm… I-I think, I will be a father, Dad…”

“Eh?” Kai’s father chuckles. Kai’s surprised by his father’s respond. “Really? You did it?”

Kai nods, in his innocent face.

“With that..” Kai’s father’s pointing his finger directed to the Acchan’s house.

“Yeah, Maeda’s daughter..” Kai answered.

Kai’s father giggles. “Wow, that was fast! You defeat me, son!” He said, makes Kai chuckles. “Do her parents knows about it?”

“I guess no, not yet” Kai answered.
“Dad..” Kai starts to serious again. “Considering that we’re not married yet, may I marry her soon? You know, I want my child born with parents, real parents, not a lovers couple.”

Kai’s father stands up and hugs Kai. “I’m glad you want to be responsible of it. Of course, I allow you to marry her. But be careful,” he release the hug. He look deep in Kai’s eyes. “It will be not that easy to tell her parents about it. Be a good man, prove it to her parents that you really love her and will be responsible of it. I believe you can do it!”

Kai nods, “Thanks, Dad!” Then he hugs his father again.


End Of CHAPTER 14

Thanks for reading, please leave thanks and comments. Hope you enjoy it. THANK YOU!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 05, 2013, 07:40:28 PM
WOW!! I hope she is REALLY pregnat and they get married!!!
I hope her parents don't take it too bad, but I'm sure they will freak out!
Update SOON!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 05, 2013, 07:47:08 PM
I hope that she don´t.. well a love a atsumina baby but in this fic i prefer that its just a false alarm.. this could be more funny.. and i wanna know about ray, what happend with her?
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 05, 2013, 07:54:57 PM
I am glad you finally update! :gmon flowers:
I freaking hope Acchan is pregnant!! So they will marry and live together fast!!!  :mon fyeah:
And I am glad that Mariko-sama didnt ruin their XXX!  :mon lovelaff:
Please update soon! And dont take it long time :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on January 05, 2013, 07:57:51 PM
Acchan is pregnant?  Kai, you 're the man !
I was wondering what will happened to them when they found out IF Acchan is not pregnant ~ might be false alarm on the pregnancy ~?
Anyway, support your writing  fics up to now! Please continue on writing on next chapter.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 05, 2013, 10:00:24 PM
Thank you for update  :mon fyeah:
Wow Acchan pregnant i love  :mon lovelaff:
please update soon  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: saeyukilover on January 05, 2013, 11:10:14 PM
OMG!!!!! :) so happy you update.. take u so long.....

but i need more of ur update:)

 :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on January 06, 2013, 02:45:38 AM
Yeiii !! Tell her parents kai  :onioncheer:
They will married soon  :whistle:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on January 06, 2013, 02:51:03 AM
OH!!! kai!! FIGHTING!!!  :cathappy: :deco: :deco: :heart: :thumbup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 06, 2013, 10:37:43 AM
Acchan is pregnant?? Great going Kai :)
I absolutely love how supportive Kai's dad is
Hopefully Acchan's parents don't freak out too much
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on January 06, 2013, 02:25:55 PM
 :huhuh The best advice is to see a doc for test, rather than wild guessing... but too bad acchan did not call me for advice! hahaha! :nervous
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 06, 2013, 05:24:34 PM
You all will know soon what will happen. Thanks for your comments by the way, so glad :D

actually I just made an 'awkward' thing but NO ONE NOTICED IT? LOL

Okay, maybe it only takes time..

Thank you
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 07, 2013, 12:15:59 AM
Acchan preggy :nya:
but how about my dear Ray? What happened to her?
I'll wait for her next actions/plan :kekeke:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Keisthename on January 07, 2013, 03:10:03 AM
Oh this is so good! :) I like how the story is proceeding, although it's does not have too much complications as super dramatic and all.. I still really love it. It's so sweet, and the slight jealousy part got me too. Ahhhh...

About Atsuko being pregnant, we still don't know if it's true right? Since the test was still negative. But we'll see if she takes the 'real' test for pregnancy..

Looking forward to your update!!! :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 10, 2013, 04:00:11 AM
I had a very busy week, so I couldn't finish the next chapter early.

But I promise to update 2 chapters next. Sorry for waiting.. thank you :D
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: cisda83 on January 10, 2013, 12:27:15 PM
Eh... just like that Kai is going to ask for Aachan hand in marriage, I mean there is a possibility for her to be pregnant but... that pregnancy test normally only about 70% accurate... Blood test is better.

Anyhow, I like how Kai is very responsible person, normally most guys when they are in this kind of situation, they ran off.

The story is getting more and more interesting. Thank you

Hope to see you next update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 13, 2013, 03:30:41 PM
CHAPTER 15
(part 1)




Sitting on an empty bench, Kai waiting for Acchan who's practicing drama for her next theater. Then his phone's ringing.

New mail!
From: xxxx
Message: "Okay, Kai... We'll start tonight!"


Then Kai quickly reply the message to say thank you. Suddenly someone bumps him from behind.

"Kai!!" from the voice, the scent, and the warmth, Kai knows exactly this is Acchan. "Sorry for waiting." Acchan hugs Kai from behind, rest her chin on his shoulder while Kai writing an email in his phone.

"Naah.. it's okay, I've been here just for a while," Kai quickly send the mail and put his phone in the pocket.

"Kai, you have to attend my next theater show! The fixed date has been announced!"

"Oh sure, honey.. When?" He turns his face and kisses Acchan's cheek.

"Next weekend, that's why I had to practice everyday after class. Sorry..."

"No problem.. I understand. So what's the story about?"

Acchan releases her hug then moves and sits beside him. "The story will be about love. And.. I'll be the main female actress."

"Wow, sounds interesting!"

"Yes, but I hope you won't get jealous with the main actor."

"What? Why should I get jealous? Is there any hot scene? A kiss?"

"No.. There's no kiss, don't worry!"

"I trust you, you're mine..." Kai smiles.

"I love you.." Acchan replies his smile. They stand up and walk to the parking area to take Kai's motorbike and then go home together.

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Kai is preparing himself to go somewhere he had promised with someone, when suddenly his phone is ringing. It's Acchan's photo that appears on his phone screen.

"Yes, honey?"

"Kai.. Would you like to come to my house this evening? Mom and I will cook some foods, if you mind to come and cook together with us.."

"Oh, I-I'm sorry honey, I've got somewhere to go this evening. I think I can't join with you.."

Acchan pouts, "Mou.. Kai, where are you going to? Looks like very important."

"Emm.. I can't tell you, but yes, it's kinda important."

"Eh? You kept a secret from me?" Acchan ask, seems like angry.

"It's not like that, Atsuko.. I'm just..."

"Fine, I'll ask Mayu to come." Then Acchan press the red button. Kai acts strangely. He loves food and never ignore to join her cooking together. But this time.. Acchan feels like there's something wrong. "Is Kai avoiding me? He ran off… because of this pregnancy?" that feeling keeps on her head.

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It's late of night, Kai packs his bag and walk out from a building headin to where he packed his motorbike.

"You did it well, dude!" suddenly a guy taps his shoulder.

Kai turns around and smiles "Ah, yeah.. Thanks for today."

"Let's continue tomorrow evening, okay.. You almost do it well."

Kai nods. "Uhn, see ya!" then Kai wears his helmet and rides homeward.

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*The show day*

"Okay, guys! Let's make it the greatest show ever. Show your talents, and be confident!!" said the leader as all of the theater team are making a circle before the show. "Acchan, you're the main actrees here, you're the center of people's attention. However, we rely on you.. Please make it great okay!!"

"Okay! I'll do my best.." Acchan replies. Then they back to their own job. Bhind the curtain, Acchan look at the audience. There's a lot of people there. All seats are full. There are her friends and her parents too. She's very happy and can't wait to get her turn to show up. "But... Where's Kai?! He's late or..he won't come again?" Acchan thought.

Then Acchan back to the make up room and get her phone. She dials Kai's number but there's no answer. She calls him again but still.. there's no answer. She decides to text him.

To: Kai
"Kai where are you, the show is just begun!!

Acchan check out her appearance in front of the mirror. She's definitely looks like a princess with that glorious gown. Yes, becauae the story is about the kingdom, and she becomes the  princess. She smiles at herself, thinking that Kai would be happy to see her looks beautiful like this. "But where is he? Is he avoiding me? Kai.. don't make me feel like this again..." Acchan thought with teary eyes.

About 15 minutes later, someone knocks on the door, Acchan turns around.

"Yo, Acchan, be ready, it's your turn in 2 minutes!"

"Oh okay!!" Acchan quickly wipes her tears and goes to the backstage, ready to show up.

"Three, two, one.. Go!" one of the theater crew whisper on her, the she get on the stage. She acts well, just like what the director's expected. All of the audience are amazed by her appearance, she looks perfect with that princess gown.



End of CHAPTER 15 Part 1

Sorry it took so long to update. I told you that I will update 2 chapters in a taime but I guess I'll do it next time after this part of chapter 15. Thank you for waiting..
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 13, 2013, 04:07:59 PM
What is Kai doing?!?
I hope he has a big HUGE plan!! And it as to be a hell of a good plan!!
WAIT! Is he.... Is he going to propose!!!!?!?!?!!?
Update SOON!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on January 13, 2013, 04:27:11 PM
ok, I am still pondering over the pregnancy thingy  :huhuh ...if they did it about one week ago and acchan mentioned she had missed her period by one week, then she shouldn't have gotten pregnant right? the timing is like ...not right? ... hmm... :nervous

will see how it goes ... i think whether pregnant or not kai will still propose to her sweetheart!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 13, 2013, 04:54:12 PM
What the heck is Kai doing!?!? :grr:
2 things popped in my brain saying that what is wrong with Kai...

1. Something bad happen to Kai or what should i put? Ah i meant... Hard to explain!!
I dont know why but i do have bad feeling about this after i read that scene which that guy said to him "You did it well dude"
Dont mind me because i know there is no way that it would happen!!

2. Planning to propose her... So awesome....


Please update fast because i wanna know what is wrong with Kai!!! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on January 13, 2013, 05:40:38 PM
I was thinking Kai would be acting together with Acchan at the theater show with the ending Kai propose to Acchan. Hope it will happen to them. I just love to see Kai x Acchan being lovely dovey, that all !
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 13, 2013, 06:50:38 PM
Thank for update I could not wait for the next  :mon innocent:
What the heck is Kai doing ???  :mon huh2: :mon huh:
Please update soon  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on January 13, 2013, 07:09:15 PM
Oh!! i hope kai will be there to watch the showw!!! > .<   :heart: :thumbup :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: cisda83 on January 14, 2013, 03:50:55 AM
Eh... why did Kai seems to always busy to spend time with Atsuko...

I feel bad for Atsuko... to think that Kai is avoiding her...

Anyhow, thank you for the update.... can't wait to see the next

 :wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 14, 2013, 05:06:06 AM
aww kai what are you doing?!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Hii_chan on January 14, 2013, 10:48:47 AM
what is Kai doing :? :?
I have a feeling but it not bad. maybe he is planning to proposal Acchan :w00t: :w00t:
waiting for your update :) :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 14, 2013, 08:18:12 PM
What is Kai up to...
Making Acchan insecure like that :(
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: atsuminaFTW on January 14, 2013, 09:02:01 PM
Ok, so the only thing that comes to my mind about what Kai might or might not be doing is something involved with fighting...  :panic:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 15, 2013, 01:22:58 AM
I was thinking Kai would be acting together with Acchan at the theater show with the ending Kai propose to Acchan. Hope it will happen to them. I just love to see Kai x Acchan being lovely dovey, that all !

Agree with Sydney-san  :D
It's the same that I think when I read the last part ..
he might be practicing on acting so that he will replace the man who was assigned to be Acchan's partner :lol:
Waiting for the next part :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 18, 2013, 06:25:18 AM
Thank you for all the comments. Sorry to take it so long...

When I read your comments about what the story might be, hmm... you're ideas are close to mine. but to see what will happen next, let's see in the next chapter.

Oww... talking about the chapters, HOW COULDN'T YOU NOTICE SOMETHING WRONG??
 There's a missing chapter in this fic!
Where is it? Well, find it out by yourself.. Lol
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: vPANDAv on January 18, 2013, 08:11:27 AM
can't wait for the next update!!

hmmm... is it chapter thirteen that is missing? was it deleted or never posted?  :?
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on January 18, 2013, 09:41:01 AM
hmmm... is it chapter thirteen that is missing? was it deleted or never posted?  :?
I just noticed it too,chapter 13 is missing,i wonder where it go..hmmpp...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on January 18, 2013, 01:54:21 PM
can't wait for the next update!!

hmmm... is it chapter thirteen that is missing? was it deleted or never posted?  :?

try to find it where chap 13  :on gay: :on gay: :on gay:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: steven_0809 on January 18, 2013, 11:36:12 PM
let me guess chapter 13 is in the per section right 8)2
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 18, 2013, 11:39:49 PM
LOL.
I saw that some of you have found where the Chapter 13 is. Congratulations!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 20, 2013, 11:12:25 AM
Thank you for waiting, but I guess you all enjoyed the ‘missing chapter’ that I updated earlier, right? LOL
So, after reading that missing chapter, you probably know what will happen to Acchan.


This is the 2nd part of CHAPTER 15. Happy reading




CHAPTER 15 Part Two


*in a make up room*

There a guy look at the big mirrow in front of him. He wears a prince costume, blonde wig, and a sword.

"That's cool, huh?" anoyher guy stand beside him.

"Yeah, but I'm nervous" that's all he just can say.

"I'm sure you can do it. It's just like when we practiced, but with a lot of people watching you."

"That's the problem. There'a a lot of audience out there." suddenly his phone ringing.


Inbox Message
From: Riku
“Good luck, dude! You’re so lucky, her parents are also here! I’ll pray for you. Hahaha”

-------------------------------------------------------------------
*Kai’s flashback*

Kai kept thinking how to explain everything to Acchan's parents. But then he found out what if he propose Acchan first. Acchan's parents would be surprised and maybe confused about that sudden proposal, but that's the time when he will explain everything. "Yes, propose her first, that will be better," Kai thought.

The next day, Kai calls Riku to meet up. He actually wants to tell Riku about his situation. Riku is his bestfriend, there's no secret between them. Besides, Yuko is Acchan's friend too. So it doesn't matter to tell Riku the truth.

"WHAT??!!" Riku widened his eyes after Kai told him about his situation.
"Oh man, how amateur you are!!

"Shut up. It happened, okay!" Kai a little annoyed. But he understand it. Yes he was a dumb to have sex without any safety.

"So what's your plan?" Riku asked. "You know, you can't ran off. Your house is next to her, your parents know her family so well..." "I think you have to be responsible, dude.. No choice."

Kai nods. "Yeah, I tought about that too. I'll marry her, besides, I want to make her mine forever. But... I still can't imagine that I'm gonna be a father..."

Riku giggles. "I can't imagine that I'" gonna be an uncle too! Haha"

"Hey I'm not joking!" Kai being angry again. But then Riku pat his shoulder to calm him down.

"Dude, I've been your bestfriend since we were in primary school. I know you so well, and I believe that you'll be a good father. What's bothering you?"

"Nothing I'm just thinking that... Wow, I'm a father!! That's just.. Wow!! Ah, I can't express it.."

"Baka! So when you will marry her, eh?"

"Next week, I guess..."

"That's fast!"

"Of course not! I mean, I'll propose her before tell her parents about it."

"Hmm, okay. Should I tell Yuko?"

"NO! Are you idiot?!"

"O-okay.. Don't be mad, dude! Oh man, you become this temperament after doing sex, hahaha" Riku tease him.

“Do you have any idea? Err.. I have no idea how to propose her” said Kai.

Riku widened his eyes. “Damn, you Kai! You asked me how to confess your feeling to Acchan, and now you’re asking me how to propose her?!! Oh man.. don’t tell me that you will ask me about ‘how to ask her for sex’ too!!”

Kai slaps his head. “I’m serious! Come on, propose a girl is not an easy thing! Please help me..”

“Baka-ne” Riku whispers, fortunately Kai can’t hear it.

Riku lays his body on the grass and looks up at the sky, he’s thinking for a while. “At first, you have to buy a ring!”

“I know that!”

“And… hey, maybe you can propose her on stage! Yeah, that would be awesome to propose her in front of people. As I knew, if you propose a girl in front of a lot of people, you’ll very likely to be accepted. And, usually, people around you will support you and force the girl to accept it too!” Riku explains it energetic.

“How do you know?”

“Err.. it’s from a movie, but I think it’s a good idea. You should try!”

“Hmm… okay. But, should I come on stage with ring and flowers, and suddenly I said ‘Atsuko, will you marry me?’ while I knelt down in front of her?”

“Hmm.. that’s too cheesy” Riku said. “Oh, I know! Wait, I’ll call someone.” Riku takes his phone and dials a number. Kai just sits beside him and waits for the results.

“Okay, we’ll meet you there!” Riku said on phone and then close it. “Kai, let’s go to my friend’s place!” Riku stand up and pull Kai up.

“Where will we go?”

“To the prince’s castle!” Riku smirks.

They ride to a house that Kai doesn’t know, Riku knocks the door. Not long after that, a guy opens the door and smiles at them. “Ah, there you are! Come in..”

The guy come inside the house and Riku follows him, but then Kai suddenly pulls his hand and whispers. “Wait, is that Hideki?”

Riku nods. “Yeah, he’s the prince?”

“WHAT?! What are we going to do with him?”

“You’ll know soon, dude. Now, come in, let’s go..”

They finally come inside the house, heading to Hideki’s room. He pleases them to take a seat on a sofa. His room is big enough to have a set of sofa inside.

“Well, sorry guys, my room’s a bit messy” Hideki said then he take a seat in front of them.

“Ahh, it’s okay, don’t worry! My room is even worse than this” Riku said and laughed.

“Sooo.. what’s going on? You said that you got a problem, right? Tell me, maybe I can help.”

Kai just sits there silently, he doesn’t even know what’s Riku’s plan, why did he being dragged here, and why Hideki. So Kai rely on Riku and just wait what he’s about to do with this Hideki who he called as ‘prince’.

“Oh, okay. But before that, let me introduce my friend first, this is Takahashi Kai” Riku said. “Kai, this is Hideki.”

Kai smiles. “Yeah, I knew you. I saw you in Atsuko’s theater club photo collection.”

“I knew you too. The one that always sits on a bench outside theater building, waiting for Acchan finished the practice,” Hideki smiles.

Kai chuckled. “So everyone in the theater notices me there, huh?”

“Haha, not really. But every time the practice over, Acchan always go out in hurry, she said that she doesn’t want to make her boyfriend waiting too long.”

“She really said that?” Kai surprised.

Hideki nods. “Uhn.. everyday.” Kai can see that he’s not lying, he’s like a nice guy. “So what’s going on, by the way?”

“Ah, we.. oh I mean.. Kai needs your help. He wants to propose Acchan to marry him, and I think if he propose her on stage will be great.”

“Marry her? Wow, isn’t that too soon? You’re still studying in college.. That’s rare. Why don’t you wait until graduation?”

“Enough, dude. Too much questions..” Riku quickly cuts Hideki’s respond.

“Err.. actually, I have to marry her because of something important.” Kai quickly added.

Hideki looks at Kai carefully, he looks like thinking of something. “She’s pregnant?” suddenly Hideki said.

Kai and Riku look at each other, the look at Hideki again. Kai nods. “Yeah, would you help me?”

“Hmm… I guess. Helping what?”

“Kai will replace your role on the drama as The Prince. That’s the time when he will propose her,” Riku quickly explains.

Kai, who doesn’t even know what’s the plan about, just stared at Riku with widened eyes. Can’t believe that Riku will make him to be an actor.

Hideki giggles, but then smiles. “That’s romantic. I like it…”

“So?” Kai asked.

“I’ll do it. But, Kai, can you act on the drama?” Hideki asked.

“Err.. I can practice, or if you don’t mind, you can teach me. Hehe” Kai answered.

Hideki doesn’t say anything but smiles. He suddenly stands up, walks towards a bookshelves. He takes a book then back to the sofa, he gives the book to Kai. “That’s the scenario. You can read it first before we start practicing.”

Kai take and open the book. “Hmm, I think I can finish read it in a day.”

“Good, so we can start the practice soon! It’s not easy to act a role on a drama.”

After that conversation, Kai and Hideki agreed to practice the role everynight in theater building. They also tell the theater team and another players about their plan. All of them agreed and they seems so kind to help Kai doing it. Riku also helps Kai to buy a ring, of course that ring is to propose Acchan. Kai know that Riku has a good taste of giving a present to a girl including a ring. He knows what kind of rings that a girl wants.

*End of Kai’s Flashback*
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Kai  put his phone into his bag again.

“Hideki-san.. why did you do it?” he ask the guy who is used to wear the prince costume instead of him.

“Doing what?”

“You know, helping me.” Kai said. “You just let me and teach me to play this role. I know it’s a hard thing to do..”

Hideki smiles at him. “Dude, if I could rewind the time, and back to the moment when I was still a one month-fetus inside my mother’s stomach, I would ask my father to do the same thing as yours.”

Kai widened his eyes. “Eh? You mean that…”

Hideki nodes and smiles. “Uhn. He’s not my real father. I don’t even know who’s my real father. And, to tell the truth, I don’t wanna know about him, the man who left his girlfriend because didn’t want to be responsible of what he have done.”

“Oh..” Kai turn his head down.

“I don’t expecting there will be another ‘me’ in the future, so that’s why I hepled you to do it.”

“Thank you…” Kai hug Hideki.

Hideki pats Kai’s back. “I hope every man in this world is responsible like you. Good luck, dude!”.
He check his hand watch, “Oh, let’s go to the backstage, it’s your turn in minutes…”

They walk out of the make-up room heading to the backstage. There, a lot of staff are already waiting for the new ‘Prince’.

“Wow wow wow!!!” the leader surprised by Kai’s appearance. “Oi, Hideki… he looks even more handsome than you!! Hahaha.”

“Here, look at that..” the leader pull Kai’s wrist  and lead him to a little hole from the backstage so they can see the stage from behind without anyone knowing it.

“She’s beautiful…” Kai said in a soft voice as they can see Acchan is acting on stage.

“It’s not only because she’s beautiful, but my make up team that made her looks gorgeous like that!” said the leader. “Good luck, Kai!!”

Kai close his eyes, lift his hands and pray. He asks God to help him today to do the proposal well.

“Okay! Three… two… one… GO!” the leade commands him, and that’s the time that Kai comes on stage.

“KAI??!!” that’s the first thing on Acchan’s thought when The Prince is coming. “What is he doing here?”

Seeing Kai acts well, Acchan hide her anxious and acts normally. She has to be professional even suddenly The Prince has changed into her boyfriend. The drama is going normally just like nothing was happened.

When The Prince wins the war and finally save The Princess is the end of the drama. Kai hug her tightly, then everyone can hear the noise of cheers because all the audiences give standing applause. Acchan can feel the warmth on his embrace when she closes her eyes, she feels like she want to be like this forever on his embrace. His embrace very comforts her until she doesn’t notice that there’s something wrong with the show: the confetti is not falling down yet.

Acchan open her eyes again when Kai releases his hug. She smiles at him. Now it’s time of the scene that is out of scenario. The scene that purely Kai’s idea, because the real scenario is just ended in that ‘hugging scene’. And Acchan doesn’t know anything about it.

“Princess…” Kai suddenly says. The audiences stop their applause, all of them thought that the show is ended, but then Kai surprised them by speaking again.

“…if I’m not a real prince of a big kingdom, will you still love me?...”

Acchan’s expression changed. “What are you talking about? That’s not in the scenario..” Acchan thought.

Seeing Acchan’s expression, Kai knows that she must be confused, so he continues again “…because I’m not a prince…”

There’s noise from the audiences, the keep talk and asking what the princes mean. But then they become quiet again, to hear what the next words that The Prince will say.

“I’m not a king of war, I’m just an ordinary architecture student.” Kai said firmly. “And I’m not a prince of a big kingdom, I’m just a son of the neighbor who lives next to your house.”

Now the lamps are turned off, there’s only a single light spots at them on stage. The whole theater seems very quiet. All the audiences looks like take their full attention to Kai and Achhan, everyone wants to watch them and hear what Kai said clearly. This situation makes Kai being nervous even more, but he try hard to fight the feeling.

Kai places his hands on her shoulders, looks straight at her seriously.
 “But I promise you, no one will work harder to make you happy or cherish you more than me…”

Hearing that words makes Acchan speechless. She can only stares at his serious face towards her.

“..Because I know my life will never be complete without you beside me to share it, and I know that no one else will hold my heart the way you do..” Kai continued.

Still, Atsuko doesn’t show any expression. She’s just too surprised by what Kai said. So deep and lovely. Kai release his hands off from Acchan’s shoulders, he take something from his pocket, and kneel down. “Me, Takahashi Kai, kneeling in front of you to proof my endless love for you,”

“Maeda Atsuko, will you marry me?” Kai said firmly while offering a beautiful ring to Acchan.

There’s a loud noise again from the audience, but then they stop again in seconds just to know what will Acchan say to answer it. Acchan looks at him who is still keeping his eyes on her. “Is it real? Kai proposes me to marry him?” Acchan thought. Suddenly Acchan remembers something Mariko said a few days ago : “just wait and see what will he do after knowing that you're probably pregnant”.


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* Acchan’s flashback *


"Moshi moshi"

"Mariko it's me!"

"Yeah, Acchan I know that! I'm on my way to your house.." Mariko was on a bus, heading to Acchan's house, she was about to accompany her to the doctor.

"Err.. I think we don't have to examine it to doctor."

"Eeh? Why?? You have to!! We have tp find out are you really pregnant or not!"

"It's definitely NOT. I got my period just now" Acchan answered quickly.

"OH MY... Ahh.. That relieved me! Thanks God.. Now you don't have to be worried, Acchan" Mariko smiled.

"Uhn, but just come to my house, let's have a dinner together."

"Sure, I'll be there in 15minutes."

"Mariko, I'll call you later okay. I'm going to tell Kai about it.."

"DON'T!! I mean.. not now!!"

"EEH?! Why??"

Mariko smirked. "Hmm.. I have a plan. Let's discuss it when I arrived. But promise me don't tell him yet, okay!!"

"O-okay.." Acchan didn't know what Mariko meant, but she just followed her instruction, besides, Acchan trusted her ao much.

When Mariko arrived at Acchan's house, she quickly took Acchan upstairs. Acchan told her the detail how she had found that she was got period. Acchan also asked her why did she didn't allowed to tell Kai about it yet.

"Here.. I trust him a lot. I can see in his eyes. But... I don't know if you agree or not, I want to test him," Mariko said in lower voice.

"Test? What kind of test?" Acchan confused, a bit worried.

"Don't worry, we just wait and see what will he do after knowing that you're probably pregnant. You know, it's rare for a guy to be responsible in this kind of situation. And then we'll find out, what kind of guy Kai is.." Mariko smirked.

To tell the truth, Acchan a bit worried about this idea. She just afraid what if in the end she find that Kai do the things that she didn't expect. Break up, maybe. But then Mariko ensured her that this plan is nothing because she was really sure that Kai would be responsible, she just wanted to know what Kai would do.

*End of Acchan’s Flashback*
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*Acchan’s POV*

“Kai, I’m glad that you responsibles of it. I’m glad that you choose to marry me and keep the pregnancy. And I’m glad that you took a hard effort to do it. But… I’m not pregnant..’” that’s all on Acchan’s thoughts when she looks at a prince kneeling in front of her.

By all the things you did to me, the love that I never imagine, I want to marry you, Kai….
But, what if it’s only because I’m pregnant? I don’t even know if I told you earlier that I’m not pregnant, you still would propose me or not. 

 What will you do if after this, I tell you that I’m not pregnant? Will you still want to marry me?

What I should say? If I say NO… that must be hurt him. He’s proposing me in front on a lot of people, he acts as the prince, oh God, he did a very hard effort. But.. if I say YES, he will be disappointed to accept the truth that I’m not pregnant, may be he will also mad at me because I didn’t tell him about it earlier…

Kai…..



*END OF CHAPTER 15 Part 2*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Archie28 on January 20, 2013, 11:21:47 AM
I was smiling the entire time reading this chapter...  :twothumbs

now Atsuko! just say yes!  :cathappy:

btw, Great chapter  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on January 20, 2013, 11:28:01 AM
say YES!!!!
kaixacchan...the best!!!

ahhh..i want more!!!
update soon...
nice update!!! :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 20, 2013, 11:39:38 AM
Aw Acchan is not pregnant!?  :OMG: She should be pregnant!!  :bored:
Acchan, Please say 'YES' to Kai!!!  :ding:
I love how he propose her  :farofflook:
Please update fast! I wanna know what happen next!  :tantrum: :mon pray2:




PS: Please make another smut story (too much or little is fine) after he propose her!  :mon evillaff:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 20, 2013, 11:52:15 AM
Thank you for update :)
Atsuko just say YES :D
Please update soon ;)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on January 20, 2013, 02:45:45 PM
Ahhh ... Acchan!!! say YES!!! to kai!!! Y.Y  :thumbup :cathappy: :heart: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: takamae on January 20, 2013, 04:38:16 PM
Poor acchan...really difficult situation
But kai will understand (he must!!)

Thanx for the update ^^
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Sydney W on January 20, 2013, 04:59:19 PM
Acchan, just say YES to Kai ! If Kai proposes to Acchan because she is pregnant then just breakup with him. He doesn't truly love Acchan but because of the responsibility. So if Kai is truly a man, it doesn't matter whether Acchan is pregnant or not as long as Kai love Acchan that what matter.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 20, 2013, 11:53:46 PM
I was smiling for the whole time when I read this last night
specially on the last part, then suddenly my sadist mind thought of something :twisted:

Acchan please say Y-Y-Ye ... Nooo~!! :twisted:
So Ray can be on the scene again :twisted: :w00t: :lol:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 21, 2013, 12:41:07 AM
Aw Acchan is not pregnant!?  :OMG: She should be pregnant!!  :bored:
Acchan, Please say 'YES' to Kai!!!  :ding:
I love how he propose her  :farofflook:
Please update fast! I wanna know what happen next!  :tantrum: :mon pray2:




PS: Please make another smut story (too much or little is fine) after he propose her!  :mon evillaff:

yeagh!! second smut part!! :B

Say YES Acchan!! you can say YES but you can married later :B
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 21, 2013, 02:34:00 AM
7 persons say "YES" and one person says "NO"..
Hmm.. should I make a poll what it has to be??  :P

Thanks by the way, I'm happy that you all like this chapter.


I was smiling for the whole time when I read this last night
specially on the last part, then suddenly my sadist mind thought of something :twisted:

Acchan please say Y-Y-Ye ... Nooo~!! :twisted:
So Ray can be on the scene again :twisted: :w00t: :lol:

Wooo... that's rude! But.. I'll think bout that, hehe  :twisted:

@Haruko and @correnereyes : Second smut chapter?? Hmmm... that's a good idea,   :bingo: let me think how to make it included in the next chapter. Just wait  :on asmo:

Acchan, just say YES to Kai ! If Kai proposes to Acchan because she is pregnant then just breakup with him. He doesn't truly love Acchan but because of the responsibility. So if Kai is truly a man, it doesn't matter whether Acchan is pregnant or not as long as Kai love Acchan that what matter.
So let's see, what kind of guy this Takahashi is  :glasses:

Poor acchan...really difficult situation
But kai will understand (he must!!)

Thanx for the update ^^
You know who's the one that should be responsible of this Acchan's difficult situation? It's Mari-chan! Haha

@giakb48ff @mae @Chichay12 @Archie28 Shout louder!! So that Acchan can hear you and say YES to bakamidget!!

Oh, I can't wait to finish the next chapter and let you all know what will happen next.  :wigglypanda: THANK YOU for reading my fic  :ptam-kiss:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: dark48 on January 21, 2013, 11:36:28 AM
Acchan say Yes!!! say yes!!!

Those two are perfect for each other
and if Kai truly loves Acchan
he will understand her

Tnx for the update !!! ^^

Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: hazwani on January 21, 2013, 04:55:42 PM
ACCHAN YOU MUST SAY YES!!!! IF NOT I WILL HELP YOU ANSWER THAT...YES!! hehehe XD

kai so sweet,,
i really hope they will be  married.

i think kai and acchan be married although acchan is not pregnant.

they be sweet married couple  and have  cute children..
so sweet :drool:

hahaha..
please continue and update soon  :inlove:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 21, 2013, 05:28:31 PM
7 persons say "YES" and one person says "NO"..

LOL! I'm the only one who said NO .. HAHA! :lol:
Acchan, say NO or just leave the stage .. :lol: *The other readers might kill me*
Let Ray be on the scene again for some twist :twisted:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 22, 2013, 10:41:48 AM
@karupin12 Damn you Karupin =.= you are really sadist  :grr:


It would be better if Acchan say 'YES' to Kai and more twist problems will come like Ray will do something bad to Acchan :bigdeal:
Chemicalstar-san, dont write like Karupin said!!  :tantrum:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: cisda83 on January 22, 2013, 01:01:11 PM
Hahaha... lots dilemma there...

What's Atsuko answer be.... if she said yes... Kai will not be embarrass coz' he did propose to her in front of audiences.

But if she said No... Kai would think Atsuko doesn't like him and doesn't want to be together with him.

Moreover, Mariko was wrong to want to lie to Kai about this pregnancy... okay testing him is fine... But honestly... how long do you need to lie to him for...?

Well looking forward to the next...

Thank you for this update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 22, 2013, 03:30:39 PM
Hahahaha oh the awkward moment when...
I'm fully enjoying this right now :)
What will Acchan's answer be... I want her to say yes
But what will Kai feel about her not being pregnant???
Hmmm the questions that comes up...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Hii_chan on January 22, 2013, 03:35:24 PM
Acchan! Please say YES! :bow:
Kai will understand you
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 22, 2013, 03:35:45 PM
@karupin12 Damn you Karupin =.= you are really sadist  :grr:


It would be better if Acchan say 'YES' to Kai and more twist problems will come like Ray will do something bad to Acchan :bigdeal:
Chemicalstar-san, dont write like Karupin said!!  :tantrum:

Ahahahah!  :lol:
It'll be a better .... no, GREAT entrance for Ray if Acchan will say "NO" or I'm sorry or whatever .. :lol:
that'll be a heart breaking scene for them, for us ..  :lol:
listen to me chemicalstar-san :on hypto:
it's nice to be a sadist sometimes :kekeke:
don't just make stories full of happy events :kekeke:

I'm on EVIL mode this time. Gomen :on lol:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chichay12 on January 22, 2013, 03:42:46 PM
@karupin12 Damn you Karupin =.= you are really sadist  :grr:


It would be better if Acchan say 'YES' to Kai and more twist problems will come like Ray will do something bad to Acchan :bigdeal:
Chemicalstar-san, dont write like Karupin said!!  :tantrum:

Ahahahah!  :lol:
It'll be a better .... no, GREAT entrance for Ray if Acchan will say "NO" or I'm sorry or whatever .. :lol:
that'll be a heart breaking scene for them, for us ..  :lol:
listen to me chemicalstar-san :on hypto:
it's nice to be a sadist sometimes :kekeke:
don't just make stories full of happy events :kekeke:

I'm on EVIL mode this time. Gomen :on lol:

Oh my god chemicalstar-san,..ignore karu!just continue ur happy story! XD
Acchan say YES!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 22, 2013, 05:10:45 PM
Okay, now I'm terrified, guys!!
Don't get into a fight. Let me think about it...

Hmm.. I guess I will make it..errrr.. make it...okay, let's see. Arrrgghh I'm confused too!

Damn this fic, I made it by myself and I'm confused??!! Whattaworld! Hahahahah

Thanks for your ideas by the way ;)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on January 22, 2013, 08:01:23 PM
acchan say yes now :ding:
i know kai will understand you dear~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on January 23, 2013, 10:03:32 AM
CLIFF HANGER~~~ :hehehe: Acchan MUST say Yes! I mean c'mon~ if she DID say yes THEY WILL have a baby soon~~
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 23, 2013, 01:05:12 PM
Okay, now I'm terrified, guys!!
Don't get into a fight. Let me think about it...

Hmm.. I guess I will make it..errrr.. make it...okay, let's see. Arrrgghh I'm confused too!

Damn this fic, I made it by myself and I'm confused??!! Whattaworld! Hahahahah

Thanks for your ideas by the way ;)

Come on! Chemicalstar-san! Dont follow Karupin's idea!!! DX You better follow our comments!! :scolding:
You better make Acchan say 'YES' to Kai!!   :mon evil:
Karupin is really a sadist... once a sadist, always be a sadist!  :mon pissed:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 23, 2013, 02:53:45 PM
chemicalstar-san! I have another idea that the others will surely agree :w00t:
why don't you make Acchan say YES then make her and Kai do another .....
you know  :kekeke:
they should make sure that they will not fail on making a baby :kekeke: :on bleed:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Tiptip on January 23, 2013, 03:01:46 PM
chemicalstar-san! I have another idea that the others will surely agree :w00t:
why don't you make Acchan say YES then make her and Kai do another .....
you know  :kekeke:
they should make sure that they will not fail on making a baby :kekeke: :on bleed:

I'm agree karupin12san  :hee: :kekeke:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 23, 2013, 03:02:19 PM
CLIFF HANGER~~~ :hehehe: Acchan MUST say Yes! I mean c'mon~ if she DID say yes THEY WILL have a baby soon~~

chemicalstar-san! I have another idea that the others will surely agree :w00t:
why don't you make Acchan say YES then make her and Kai do another .....
you know  :kekeke:
they should make sure that they will not fail on making a baby :kekeke: :on bleed:

Oh.. new ideas of yours!! hmm.. you mean.. another SMUT and a BABY???!!
hmm.. quite interesting!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 23, 2013, 03:13:32 PM
Another smut???
Karupin idea is nice!!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: karupin12 on January 23, 2013, 04:26:40 PM
Oh.. new ideas of yours!! hmm.. you mean.. another SMUT and a BABY???!!
hmm.. quite interesting!

Sorry if I'm ruining your story plan :lol: :sweatdrop:
Yeah! Another SMUT! Hahaha! :lol:

*But I still prefer the first one, the rejection, so that Ray could go on their way :twisted:*
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Hii_chan on January 25, 2013, 07:14:32 AM
Agree with karupin  :yep: :yep:
we need more smut  :drool: :drool:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 31, 2013, 04:52:15 AM
HELLO!!!! I'm sorry it takes so long to update it. Owh, been so busy with school stuff. So, after my confuseness about the story, I've decided....
Here's the CHAPTER 16



*Flashback*

"Oh, God. I'm late!! Totally late!!!"
The girl walked rushingly on the walkside.

"I'm sorry, Miss. The show is already started, err.. it's almost done and we have no vacant seat. All the tickets are sold out," a man stood in front of entrance door to the theatre.

"What?!" the girl took a look at her watch. "Ah, damn!" she thought. "But, can I come in? Please? I'll pay double"

The man chuckled. "Did I say that we have no vacant seat?"

"I don't need seat. All I need is watching my sister's show!"

"Your sister?"

"Yes, Maeda Atsuko! She's my sister!"

"And you are..."

"Shinoda Mariko" she said firlmly.

The man laughed at her. But then a guy with a bit messy hair came approach them from inside the theatre.

"Hey, what's happening here?"

"Oh, Kuu. Look, this girl pretends as our cast's sister. Sister with different last name!" the man laughed. "And she wants to get in even she has to watch it without seat."

Kuu looked at the tall girl in front of them. She looks so worried and he could see that she said "Please" without voice. He remembered that Acchan ever told him about her cousin in her hometown. "Are you Acchan's cousin?"

"Yes! I'm Shinoda Mariko, nice to meet you!" Mariko gave her hand.

"Minegishi, Kuu" he shhake her hand. "I'm the theatre vice manager".

"Cool! So, Minegishi-kun, can I come in. I don't know what will happen if I can't watch Acchan's show but she must be very mad to me. Please..."

Kuu nodded. "Okay, but as he said we have no vacant seat. You have to stand up!"

"No problem!" Mariko said happily. She entered the entrance door.

"Come on, the show is about to finished" suddenly Kuu grabbed her wrist and was half running inside the theatre.

They stopped beside the tribune. There, Mariko and Kuu could see the show even they had no seat.

"Thank you" she smiles to him.

"Oh, it's okay. Anytime" he said. "Thanks god the theatre ia dark so she can't se my red face" he thought. Without his notice, his hand still held her hand.

"Ehm" Mariko cleared her throat and in a second Kuu released his hand off her.

"Sorry" he said in lower tone.

They continued to watch the show. Something caught Mariko's eyes. "Wait, who's that guy?"

"Eh? Where?" Kuu said. "You mean, the prince?"

"Yes! He looks so familiar to me."

Kuu chuckled. "Ah, yes of course. He's Takahashi Kai, our prince today."

"KAI??!!" Mariko widened her eyes. "What's happening here? Why is he becoming the prince"

"Well, a long story. I don't know what happened, but several days ago the leader of the theater group told me that there's a change of the cast." Kuu starts to explain. "That Takahashi guy is about to make a surprise for Acchan. So that's why he became the main actor. It's only Acchan who doesn't know the plan!"

"S-ssurprise? What surprise?" Mariko said, at the same time, the audience cheered up and gave applause as the story was ended.

"Well, let's see!" Kuu winked at her, then he gave applause. Meanwhile, Mariko looks like a dumb, confused of what just happened.

“Princess…if I’m not a real prince of a big kingdom, will you still love me?...”

Acchan’s expression changed. “What are you talking about? That’s not in the scenario..” Acchan thought.

Mariko's hearbeat getting faster as she heard what kai said.

“…because I’m not a prince…”

There’s noise from the audiences, the keep talk and asking what the princes mean. But then they become quiet again, to hear what the next words that The Prince will say.

“I’m not a king of war, I’m just an ordinary architecture student.” Kai said firmly. “And I’m not a prince of a big kingdom, I’m just a son of the neighbor who lives next to your house.”

Now the lamps are turned off, there’s only a single light spots at them on stage. The whole theater seems very quiet. All the audiences looks like take their full attention to Kai and Achhan, everyone wants to watch them and hear what Kai said clearly.

“But I promise you, no one will work harder to make you happy or cherish you more than me…”
“..Because I know my life will never be complete without you beside me to share it, and I know that no one else will hold my heart the way you do..” Kai continued.

"Owh, that's so sweet..." Mariko thought.

“Me, Takahashi Kai, kneeling in front of you to proof my endless love for you, Maeda Atsuko, will you marry me?” Kai said.

"Oh my.." Mariko covered her mouth, surprised of what she just saw.


*End of flashback*



"For God sake, that Takahashi guy is totally great! I'm proud of him! I never imagine that he would do these things" Mariko thought, still covers her mouth. "Acchan, why it takes so long? Just answer him!" then she remembers something.

"Does Acchan confused? Oh yeah, she must be confused!" she thought. "This is my fault. I asked her not to tell Kai yet that she's not pregnant. Oh my, I have to do something!" Mariko thinks hard while other audience keep silent waiting for Acchan's answer.

"SAY YES!! SAY YES!! SAY YES!!" Mariko shouts and claps her hands.

"Eh? What are you doing?" Kuu asks.

"Come on, help me to make the people support them!"

"O-okay!" Kuu said then he starts to shout just like Marikp did. "SAY YES!! SAY YES!! SAY YES!!"

An automatically, all the audience stand up from their seat and follow them to shout "SAY YES!!" while clapping their hands.

Kai's heart beats faster as he hears the audience's shouts. All he thinks that he hope their shouts will help him to be accepted by Acchan. Meanwhile, Acchan feels like all her confuseness is slowly disappearing as she hears the shouts.

Acchan takes a deep breath and say.."Yes.." whil nods and smiles to Kai.

Everone's cheers up as they heard Acchan said YES. Kai widened his eyes and smiles. He place the ring on Acchan's finger and kiss it. The confetti starts to fall down. Kai stands up and look directly into Acchan's eyes. "Thank you.." he said, then he kiss Acchan's forehead and hugs her tight.

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*in the backstage*

All the crew cheers up on Kai and Acchan as the two walk to the backstage holding hands together. In the corner of the room, there is Hideki gives Kai a thumb and smiling. This is one of the best days in Kai's life. Once again, he hugs Acchan tightly when everyone arounds is giving applause for them.

"Kai.. I need to talk" Acchan said as she releases his hug. "Come here!" Acchan grabs his hand and drags him to a vacant dressing room.

"Kai.." Acchan starts to speak. "Thanks before, for all these things you've done. I'm so impressed, and I'm the happiest girl in the world today."

Kai smiles. "Is that what you want to say?" Kai touch her cheek and caress it. "Did I said from the beginning that I can do anything for you?"

Acchan smiles at him but she can't help to cry. Tears rolling down on her face. It makes Kai confused. His face's expression is changed as he saw her crying.

"Atsuko, are you okay? Why are you crying?" Kai wipes her tears, he looks so worried.

"I'm sorry, Kai..." Acchan said looking down and still crying. She’s not brave enough to look Kai’s face.

"Hey, hey, what happened?" Kai asks worriedly, "Why do you say sorry to me? Just tell me, I can't see you crying like this..."

Even though Kai has tried to calm her down, Acchan still crying. Then Kai lift her chin so that she can face him directly. "Okay, whatever happened, I forgive you. But tell me what is this? Please don't cry, baby..."

"I'm…“  Acchan takes a deep breath.
“I'm not pregnant, Kai" Acchan said, sobbing.

BAMMM!!! Kai feels like there's a big stone hits his head as he heard what Acchan said. His expression changed, jaw dropped.

"I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier." Acchan starts to cry again.

"Since when that you've known about it?" Kai asks, all he feel is just 'Why you didn't tell me??!??'

"Several days ago.. I'm sorry, Kai"

Kai stoned in the same position. His hands still on Acchan's cheek. But his eyes are spacing out. Thinking about the same question. "Why you didn't tell me?" he finally asks her.

"Because.. Hiks hiks.. because..."

"Because I asked her!" suddenly Mariko appears near the door. "I asked Acchan not to tell you about it yet."

Kai glares at her. It's confusing for him. Mariko walks approach them while Acchan and Kai face her. Mariko tap her hands on Acchan shoulders and pull Acchan on her embrace.

"Acchan is so precious to me. She's more than a cousin." Mariko said to Kai. "I trust you a lot, but when I heard that Acchan might be pregnant, and then several days later she found that she's not pregnant, I asked her not to tell you."

Still, Kai looks like he can’t get the reason, and the two girl.

"Look, I trust you a lot. But still, I want to see what will you do if Acchan was really pregnant. You know, I'm jusy worried about her. I don't want her choose the wrong man." Mariko explained.

"Oh," Kai answered it shortly. His disappointment slowly dissapear as he finally knew that this is not Acchan's idea. The thing he afraid of is if Acchan doesn't trust him, so she were about to test him. But Mariko just explained that she's the one who planned it. Kai understands this situation when he wonder what will he do to Sae if the same thing happens to Mayu. Even Kai trust Sae, still.. he has to know how far Sae will do to be responsible of Mayu.

"But now, I'm proud of you, Kai" Mariko continued. "Acchan has choosed the right man. You're the best!"

"Thanks.." Kai answered, but his face still not too happy. He just shocked and surprised of what just happened.

“Hey hey, what’s with that face?” Mariko smirks and pinch Kai’s cheek. “Don’t you happy??”

“Ah, it’s not like that..” Kai chuckled, then he look at Acchan. “I’m just can’t believe what’s just happened. But I’m happy, thanks Atsuko, for accepting me to marry you. It’s serious right?”

Acchan smiles and moves closer to him, kisses his cheek. “Of course I’m serious, baby.” Then Acchan peck his lips, “I love you.”

“Ehm, ehm.. ” Mariko clears her throat. “I’m still here by the way!”
“Acchan, I met your parents just now. They said they’ll wait you two to come to this restaurant after changing your costume.” Mariko gives an address of a restaurant in the city. “Looks like they want to discuss something with both of you.”

Kai takes the address and read it. “I know this place. My dad ever took me there.”

“So, go change your costume! You don’t want let her parents waiting too long, right?” Mariko commanded. “Good luck!”

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In the restaurant.


Kai and Acchan arrive in the restaurant and ask the waitress where Mr&Mrs Maeda are. The waitress show them the place, and there they find Acchan’s parents looks like talking about something.

“Mom.. Dad..” Acchan said as they walk approach them.

“Acchan!” her mother said cheerfully. “Kai.. sit there you two..” she’s pointing at seats in front of them.
“Choose the food first. Here…” Acchan’s mom offer a menu book to Kai.

“Thanks, Mr.Maeda” Kai takes it. They choose the food and order it when the waitress come.

 “So… Kai, we need your explanation of what just happened,” Acchan’s father starts to speak. Kai glares at Acchan, his heart beats fast. “I mean… we’re so happy of the proposal. But, we still asking why did you propose my daughter this early? You know, both of you are still studying in college.”

DEG. This is the moment that Kai never imagined about. At first he already prepared the answer and explanation to Acchan’s parents that Acchan is pregnant. But, after the truth has revealed that Acchan is not pregnant, now he has no explanation to tell.

“Should I say that I love her?” Kai thought. “Just love? Is it good enough reason to propose her?” Kai thinks hard what to say.

“Well, Mr. Maeda, as you know that Atsuko and I have been in this relationship for months. I love your daughter so much and I don’t want to be separated by anything from her. I want her to be with me forever,” Kai said honestly.

There’s a silence for a while, then “Acchan, you’re not pregnant, are you?” suddenly Acchan’s dad asks.

DEG. It feels like a heart attack when Kai and Acchan heard it.

“No, I’m not!” Acchan quickly answers and shakes her head. Kai doesn’t say anything.

“Really?” Acchan’s mom asks to ensure.

“Yeah, mom. I’m all okay.” Acchan said, try hard to hide her ‘almost lying’ expression.

Silence again.

“Your parents know about it?” Acchan’s dad asks.

Kai nods, “Yeah, I told them about it. They’re agree.”

Acchan looks at Kai in question. “Do his parents know that I’m pregnant?” she thought.

Looking at Acchan’s face, Kai can see what she’s thinking.  Under the table, Kai holds Acchan hand. “I hope that you allow me to marry your daughter. You can trust me to take care of her,” Kai speaks, try to break the silence. “I love your daughter more than myself.”

Acchan’s parents can see his sincerity on his eyes. They know exactly who Kai is, Kai’s family, Kai’s daily life, and of course Kai’s courage of loving their daughter.

“Ehm..” Acchan’s dad clears his throat. He places his hands on the table and looks directly to Acchan and Kai. “Son, at first… thank you for loving my daughter sincerely. I can see you love my daughter so much, more than everything…  ”

Kai’s heart starts to beat fast. Acchan squeeze his hand to calm him from nervous.

“But we’re decided not to let you get married this early.”

BAAAAMMMM!!!! Once again, Kai’s heart feels like being crashed by a big truck. So is about Acchan, disappointment is showed on he face.

“GOD, tell me what’s my fault! I thought it’s gonna be a glorious day, but… first, Acchan is not pregnant, and now I’m rejected by her parents??!!” Kai thought. Heartbreaks. Disappointment. Failing.



TBC in the next chapter.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on January 31, 2013, 07:52:13 AM
This chapter is awesome thank you   :mon thumb:
You could respond to the desires of everyone it's cool  :mon star:
Atsuko parent's are crual  :mon waterworks:
I really loonking forward for the next  :mon firecrack:
Please update soon  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on January 31, 2013, 08:44:12 AM
awww kai marry me cute couple like always
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Hii_chan on January 31, 2013, 09:27:33 AM
Ahh.. finally youmake Acchan say YES XD XD
but...Acchan's parent..why dont you let they married :angry: :angry:

Waiting for your next update :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on January 31, 2013, 10:06:05 AM
Chemicalstar-san, Y U make Acchan`s parents not allow to marry him?!?!  :on voodoo:
I am glad Acchan say Yes to Kai....  :wriggly:
Lol!! MariKuu... Nice...  :nya:
Please update faster! Faster please!  :tantrum:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on January 31, 2013, 11:35:50 AM
Thanks by the way...

I'm glad that there are still a lot of people read this fic. Err.. about Acchan's parents, haha I know you must be mad. But, keep calm... I've planned another thing in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading and please leave comments so I know what's your opinion about this fic.



Anyway, I'm so sad of Miichan's scandal. Let's pray the best for her. OMG I'm shocked by her shaved hair. Poor Miichan...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 on January 31, 2013, 12:10:50 PM
WTF! why acchan's mom and dad why?!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: TakaminaBG on January 31, 2013, 03:18:09 PM
Well it is pretty early, but COME ON!!!
Let them get marry!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on January 31, 2013, 05:04:23 PM
If i'm acchan's parents I will say NO too! hahaha! Simple reasons: they have just known each other for months and they are still attending colleges. Can wait a little longer to settle down and tie the know... enjoy the fun of dating 1st!!!  :lol:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on January 31, 2013, 08:14:36 PM
Yay!! Acchan said yes :twothumbs
Kai is always so understanding and sweet
As much as I want them to get married...
I can understand where Acchan's parents are coming from
Hopefully everything works out in the end
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: cisda83 on February 01, 2013, 05:14:47 AM
Oh man.... after knowing Atsuko is not pregnant.... although Kai seems to be a bit relive with that revelation but also seems to be disappointed too.

But Atsuko's parents rejection on the marriage...? I do hope it was not the marriage itself more like the timing....

May be after they graduate from Uni or something.... so hopefully that what the parents think, after that they can get married... so postpone the marriage.... until after Uni

Anyhow, great update.... Thank you... can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on February 02, 2013, 01:40:44 AM
OMGIRL!!! ATSUMINA!!!  :thumbup :heart: :cathappy: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: takamae on February 02, 2013, 01:50:18 AM
Yes!!! It's a Yes!!! Nice choice acchan
Kinda feel sorry for kai, got 2 big news but it wasn't so bad
She's not pregnant but they can make it again  :w00t:
And acchan parent accept their plan just delay it
Go..go...go kai and acchan

Thanx for the update ^^
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fael_c00l on February 03, 2013, 08:50:39 AM
Hmm,, that's true if Acchan's parent don't want Kai married Acchan soon,, They must thinking their college first  :grin: :grin:
btw nice update  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KaeKain on February 05, 2013, 02:02:09 AM
Historia very good ... I'm still loving it ... please  :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on February 08, 2013, 09:04:37 AM
Sorry if you wait too long. Been in a busy days earlier.So here's the continuation, I hope you like it.



CHAPTER 17

It’s not only Kai who feels down, but so is Acchan. She feels uneasy that her parents reject his proposal. Acchan’s thumb caressing Kai’s hand, she hopes that Kai ca accept it toughly.

 “But..” Acchan’s dad continues, “…we can still arrange an engagement if you want.”

“Eh?” Kai’s expression changed. “Engagement?” he raises his eyebrows.

“Yeah. It’s not that we’re not trust you, Kai. But you two are still in college, we just want you two finish your study first, after that it’s up to you if you want to get married. Even at the same day with your graduation day.”

Kai chuckled. He tries to calm himself and accept this fact. “Haik, it’s okay. I can understand.” He said, even though his face still in dissapointed mode.

“So, do you agree about the engagement?”

Kai turns to Acchan showing his “How?” expression, then he finds Acchan only smiles and nods.
Kai turns to her parents again “Haik. Thank you Mr. Maeda.”

“It’s dad!”
“And mom!”
Acchan’s parents quickly correcting Kai’s saying. “We’re your parents too, right?”

Kai and Acchan smile widely. “Thank you, Mom..Dad..” Kai bows.

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THE BOYS TALK

*Kai’s POV*

I went to Riku’s house by myself, it was our day off. No class for today so we decided to not going to campus. I skipped footbal club today cause I had something important to discuss with Riku.

“Come in..” he said, leading me inside his room. The same room we always share together when we were still in primary school. I close the door to ensure that we can talk privately, while Riku take two cans of coke from his small fridge.

“So how was the meeting with her parents?” he asked me, throwing a can to me.

I caught it successfully and open it. I drink it a little, “Failed.”

“EH?? So you mean her parents rejected you??!” he widened his eyes.
“Hmm.. let’s say, we postpone it in a long enough time.” I tried to answer calmly.

“Too harsh! That was the greatest marriage proposal I ever knew, how could they reject you?” Riku started to complaining.

“It’s a logic reason, by the way. They trust me, but they thought that we’re still in college, too early to get married.”

“So how about… the baby..” Riku said in a lower voice.

“No baby, no wedding” I said shortly.

“WHAT??!! Wait, I don’t get this. How come??” now he’s panic. But I keep myself calm.

“After the show, Atsuko told me that she’s actually not pregnant. Her cousin Mariko aked her not to tell me about that, they want to see what I will do.”

“Oh, GIRL!! All girls are cruel.” He shouted.

“I was happy that she’s actually not pregnant, because it won’t ruin her study and everything will going to be normal again. But, something that bothered me was… I have proposed her in front of his parents. It was impossible for me to cancel the proposal. So I kept tell them that I want to marry her, without told them the real story behind this.”

"Yeah, that's logic."

“I was so sad and depressed when her parents rejected me. But, in the other way, it’ …” Kai stopped. "...it saved me."

"So the truth is: You don't want to marry her?"

"Yet" Kai quickly added. "I think we have to finish our study first. I was afraid to loose her if I don't marry her. But at least now I can keep her mine as her parents allowed us to engaged."

"That's cool. So you will arrange an engagement party soon?"

"I guess so. Urrmm.. Next week, I guess."

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The next weekend, the 2 neigborhood families arrange a party of their children engagement. There's a lot of people come to the party including the staff and all the theater club members. Most of them only know that the wedding is being postponed, but for some who knew that Acchan was pregnant, Kai told them that in fact Acchan's  not really pregnant. They all having fun for the party.

After the party is ended, all the guests are out, and everyone back to their own place, Acchan's dad has a conversation with Kai in the backyard. It's only the two of them there, Acchan has already sleeping.

"Son... It'a an engagement, not a wedding yet, okay!"

"Yes, dad. "

"So it means that... I don't expect a baby before the wedding. "

"O-okay,dad.. I promise." Kai said.

"Umm.. I mean, not really a baby. But, can you two not to do 'it' and be patient until the wedding?"

"Eh? Oh, you mean.. Oh okay dad, sure we won't. Hehe.." Kai laughs awkwardly.
"We did it, dad" he thought.

"Good, I hope you can do my order. I know you're a good man." Acchan's dad pats his shoulder and starts to walk away.

About a week after the engagement, Acchan's parents asks Kai and Mayu to go with them on a vacation. It's not only a vacation but Acchan's father want to go to his hometown visitting Acchan's grandmother. But since Mayu has a loy of school tasks, it's only Kai who join them. When Kai preparing his bag, Riku comes to his house.

"Dude, come here!" Riku calls Kai. "I have a present for you."
Riku gives a little box with a pink ribbon. Kai takes and shakes it near his ear, try to find out what's inside.

"Just take it. It's an engagement present." Riku winks at him. "Now, go.. Maeda may waiting for you!"

Kai have no idea what is it, but since the gift is small, he take it and put it inside his bag. That morning Kai go with Acchan's family. Acchan's dad allows him to drive. So he and Acchan sit in the front seat. This time Kai learns to know Acchan's family closer. Actually it's Acchan's parents plan so that Kai will know about their family.

Day by day, the relationship between the two is getting better.Even though they found some troubles about trust, jealosy, or misunderstanding. But they can handle it, knowing that they're actually love each other endlessly.

During the study, Kai designed a house, beautiful house for him an Acchan. The good part is Kai get a job, a real job, about  5 months before he's graduated. His parents feel so proud of him. So they decided to make Kai's dream of the house come true. They build the house in the same town, about thirty minutes away from their house.

*** The Graduation Day ***

Kai waiting for Acchan in the parking area. He take off his robe and put it in his bag. There, he can see Acchan is running approach him.

"Hey, sorry for waiting so long. We took a lot of photos." Acchan said. Her expression is so cheerful. Yes, because this is their best day after studying for years in college."So, where are we going to?"

"A special place.." Kai answers shortly and smiles.

"Well, every place is special as far if I'm with you.." Acchan kiss his cheek. "Happy graduation, honey," the she peck on his lips.

"Happy graduation for you too." Kai said. "Let's go."

They go to the place that Acchan doesn't know yet, and arrived at a house.

"Come on," Kai takes Acchan's wrist an walk inside.

"Acchan!!!" a familiar voice of a woman comes. It's Mariko, walks approaching them cheerfully. She wears a beautiful white gown. "Happy graduation!!" she hugs Acchan tightly.

"Thank you.. Hey, Mariko why are you here?" Acchan confused.

Mariko look at Kai. "Err, you will know." she smirks at Acchan.
"Kai, you can go. Let me fix her first."

Kai nods and walk away without telling Acchan anything.

"Wait, Kai, where are you going?" Acchan said in confuse but Mariko drags her inside, while Kai go away by his motorbike.

Acchan is dragged to a room, there are some people there, about three people who greet her kindly.

"Congratulation,honey.. It's gonna be your big day" Mariko said and ahe show her a beautiful white gown. A bride gown.

Walking elegantly with a beautiful gown, Acchan greets her dad who waits for her in front of the house. She finally found out that the owner of the house is a bride make up artist.

"Ready, princess?" her dad greets her and leads her inside the car. They heading to the chruch nit far from the house.

Entering the chruch, which is already decorated beautifully, Acchan's heart beats fast. As the door is opened, she can see his prince is standing inside the chruch wearing tux. He looks even more gorgeous than a prince.

There, the two standing face to face in front of their family and friends, tying the knot and say their love promise, and for the first time.. kissing as husband and wife.





The end?


Yes. END







Thank you for reading my fic from the first chapter until this end. Sorry if some of you maybe disappointed of the ending, but.. I have to end it. Thank you thank you thank you...


Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: korin48 on February 08, 2013, 09:35:28 AM
Kai and Acchan wedding!  :shy1: :shy2:
The End!?!?!   :OMG:
Please make sequel if it is possible!!!  :tantrum:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: atsuminaFTW on February 08, 2013, 09:37:47 AM
Ehh, it's over already?! Well, if you feel like this is it... To be honest, I'm a little disappointed with the rushed ending, but I respect your decision to end it. Overall, the story was good, and I can honestly say I really came to like your fic, chemicalstar-san. Thanks for taking the challenge to write a story of your own, it was very fun and enjoyable to read it. I hope you keep writing in the future.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: takamae on February 08, 2013, 11:18:48 AM
Yeay!!! Happy ending  :wub:
A bit rush but as long as kai and atsuko are together, I love it  :inlove:

Thank you ^^
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: cisda83 on February 08, 2013, 11:29:51 AM
Well at last happy ending for them...

Nothing to say but short of great story... sweet...

Yeah... please make a sequel for this story... like how their marriage life... and children...?

Well anyhow... thank you for finishing the story...

I can't wait to see your story... whether the sequel of this story or some other story...

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: ChuuuPuffss on February 08, 2013, 01:13:48 PM
Ehhhh! Why so soon though? I was enjoying it~

Well, it was truly a well-written story! Thank you for making it~

Ahhhh but I feel like someone I raised graduated as this story ended. It's only a feeling though lol.

I'm looking forward to any of your fan fictions in the future~  :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: mae on February 08, 2013, 03:03:21 PM
Thank you for update  :mon pray2:
It was a little short but it was great YEAH HAPPY ENDING !!!  :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah: :mon firecrack:
Your fic is awesome thank you to have shared  :mon thumb:
For the future maybe another fic ???  :mon innocent:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: DC2805 on February 08, 2013, 03:17:43 PM
 :cow: Yesh! happy ending! but can it not be the final end?  :grin:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: giakb48ff on February 08, 2013, 11:07:02 PM
OHH!! THANK YOU!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC ... ATSUMINA ... HAPPY ENDING!! :)  :thumbup :cathappy: :heart: :cathappy: :deco: :deco: :deco:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: fael_c00l on February 09, 2013, 05:35:46 AM
Hah? The End?   :shocked :shocked
I like the ending,, Kai and Acchan married  :twothumbs :twothumbs
I hope you make another Kai Acchan fics, and more longer than this one,,
Thanks again  :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Wmatsui22 on February 09, 2013, 01:54:05 PM
Hello...

Chemical_star-san..

is your fan fiction (the girl next house is already end?)

I hope there's a sequel :D

I really like this fiction

and I always waiting to update!!!!

Nice work :D
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: chemicalstar on February 09, 2013, 06:32:22 PM
hey all...

I'm so sorry that I have to end the story. I know it'a a bit rushing, but I don't know why, I thought I had to end the story. I'm glad that you all like the ending.

of course I have to make it happy ending because it's a KaixAcchan fic. oh yeah, talking about the sequel, until now I still have no idea if  there wilk be a sequel for this fic or not. but honestly, I already thought about making another KaixAcchan fic with different story..

but since now there are some new other KaixAcchan fic, well I guess I will postpone that plan until these new fic are ended. you know, I guess it will be confusing i there are too much fics with the same cast.

Anyway... THANK YOU FOR READING MY FICTION ALL THIS TIME.
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
THANK YOU
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Haruko on February 09, 2013, 07:03:34 PM
Its ok, great final for a great fic :B
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on February 09, 2013, 07:32:03 PM
A little sudden but it was a good ending for a wonderful story :)
Thanks for writing it!!
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: Hii_chan on February 09, 2013, 07:59:55 PM
Kai and Acchan married?
so fast :shocked
I just hoped to see some smut scene :) :)
can you make sequel chaps? :bow:

Anyway thanks for made a great fic  :welcome
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings)
Post by: miayaka on February 10, 2013, 09:20:06 PM
married!!
as i always wanted  :farofflook:
thank you!  :bow:
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: Shinoki on December 06, 2013, 01:56:04 AM
This was an awesome fic!
...no words, it's just really good.
whew...
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: saiyukire on December 10, 2013, 02:10:42 PM
This is such a good story!!!! thanks so much for writing it! :heart: Atsumina forever :)
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 11:24:23 AM
great fanfic...!!

happy ever after for kai and acchan  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
it's really good.
Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: MayuxMatsuixMusic on April 12, 2014, 11:15:32 PM
Uwahh~~ i hope there is a sequel


Title: Re: The Girl Next House (KaixAcchan and other pairings) COMPLETED
Post by: Dianalrs on January 31, 2015, 06:35:20 AM
Really Good story!!!  :twothumbs