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Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on June 30, 2006, 12:45:26 PM
The Pilot

Aya woke up in an unfamiliar room, confused she looked around and to her surprise there lay Yossi.
What she had thought was a wonderful dream was reality; Aya closed her eyes and smiled in complete content.
Memories of the previous day came flooding back and the smile on her face grew…

* * * * *

Aya had been lying in bed all day; her cold would just not seem to leave. If it wasn’t for the doorbell she would have slept for longer. As she dragged herself out of bed to answer the door much to her surprise Yossi stood on the other side of it.

“Oh I’m sorry did I wake you up? Miki called and asked me to check up on you. She was worried because she is out of town to visit her family and you’re sick. I thought I would come see if you were okay and cheer you up”

Yossi handed a bouquet of red roses to Aya.

“Aw that’s so sweet you didn’t have to...”
Aya was surprised, she was really good friends with Yossi but when Aya and Miki were together she would always seem to stay away.

“Are you going to invite me in or are you going to keep me out here all day?” Yossi asked in her usual humorous sarcastic way.

Aya led the way into the kitchen and tried to grab a vase from the top self of the cupboard. Yossi saw her struggle so she came up behind her, took it down and handed it to Aya.

For a second their eyes met. And then it happen, Yossi saw it in Aya’s eyes.
Something that rose up every time Yossi looked into her eyes, the passion, the love, and the lust.

“Erm... Thanks.” Aya looked away before things became too awkward.

“So… Anyway I also came here to ask if you would like to come to lunch with me, if you are feeling up to it”

“Sure... I just have to get dressed.’ As Aya said this she looked down and realised how much of a dork she seemed wearing pink pyjamas with poke-a-dots.

* * * * *

“No, it’s my turn to buy drinks” Yossi stood up and walked towards the counter. Turning back she decided to give Aya a kiss on the cheek as a thank you for buying last round.

Unknowing of her intentions Aya turned to face Yossi. Much to her surprise, as it must have been to Yossi’s their lips softly pressed against each other.

With this, what was meant to be an innocent peck on the cheek turned into something Aya had longed for since the day she laid eyes on Yossi.
Pulling away she looked at her, and saw the look that would always make her turn away, and this was no exception; The look of passion that they shared.

As Aya’s eyes dropped to the floor in embarrassment, she felt Yossi’s hand lift up her chin and kiss her on the lips again, this time much firmer. She then turned and walked away leaving Aya lost and longing for more.

A huge weight was lifted of her shoulders. She could not have bared keeping the truth in anymore. She could not keep wondering whether Yossi saw the same thing in her eyes as Aya did in hers.


* * * * *

Yossi in her sleep wrapped her arms around Aya, knocking her out of her daydream.

Aya lay in bed wondering how she ended up from simply sitting at the café with Yossi to now being together under the bed sheets naked…

Her daydream continues....
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: bluekinoko on June 30, 2006, 12:47:57 PM
Welcome Dj_jo!
Muahhaha I have converted another one of my lackies into fic writers! Muahahah! and now...to watch with baited breath as this mystery we explore!
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: WaffleT on June 30, 2006, 01:07:11 PM
As one of those lackeys i resent that bluekinoko! :P
but well done Dj_jo this is a good fic with alot of thought and emotion in it, ill be looking forward to see peoples comments ^^
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Post by: lil_hamz on June 30, 2006, 07:03:01 PM
Aya, you're cute in pink PJs with polkadots. Don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise :P

All hell'll break lose when the Miki finds out :D

Awesome 1st post dj_jo *pats on the back*
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 02, 2006, 10:11:22 AM
Between the sheets

Exhausted from the night of passion Aya and Yossi cuddled up in bed, unknowing that their peaceful mood would be shattered within seconds they lay in content.

As Aya fumbled for the phone she realised it was Miki calling.

“Hey sleepyhead did I wake you?”

“Erm.. Miki I’m sort of busy right now..” she tried explaining but got cut off

“Busy?! At 6 AM.”

“I’ll talk to you tomorrow night when I pick you up from the airport okay?” Aya felt too awkward being in bed naked with Yossi and talking to her best friend on the phone.

“Actually, I took an early flight. I missed you too much; I just need to be with you right now.”

A pale face Aya stared at Yossi

“Aya? Aya? Are you there? My phone is cutting out; I’ll see you in 10 minutes”

A frantic look appeared on Aya’s face….
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Post by: huggumwuggums on July 02, 2006, 11:41:35 AM
Just thinking about the situation makes me go :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool:

Cool fic dj_jo and thank you bluekinoko for converting another one of your lackies. The more the merrier~
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: bon_change on July 02, 2006, 04:42:52 PM
Aya and Yossi new couple
And now Aya's in troble
Miki will know about them
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 03, 2006, 09:13:48 AM
Welcome home

Whilst getting dressed Yossi looks over at Aya who is writing a note to Miki. Feeling a little hurt with Aya’s decision to leave before Miki arrives, Yossi still manages to give her a quick smile.  

As the two girls rush out the door and jump into Yossi’s car, they see Miki approaching. Yossi hit the accelerator and they were gone without a trace.


Miki enters through the door calling Aya’s name in excitement.

“Aya!”

She searches from room to room. “Ayaaaaaaaaa!” she runs up the stairs and into her bedroom. No sign of Aya. Sighing in disappointment she seats down on her bed and buries her face in her hands.

I was so ready to tell her how I fell…

A yellow piece of paper stuck on Aya’s desk catches her attention. Picking up the note Miki reads quietly to herself.

I’m sorry I couldn’t be home for your arrival. Work calls, an early start. I’ll see you tonight.  

This all seemed strange to Miki, the phone call, the note. Aya busy and going to work at 6 am? Isn’t she supposed to be sick? Something seemed a bit off. Miki picks up her mobile and dials Aya.

“Hey…. You have reached Aya’s mobile. I’m busy right now but leave a message after the tone and I will get back to you”

“Hey Aya… it’s me Miki. What’s going on? Busy working at 6 in the morning? Agh… Just come home for dinner okay? There’s something I want to tell you so please be home…”

Holding in the tears of disappointment Miki hung up and lay in Aya’s bed. This different smell wasn’t comforting.

Aya’s smell was gone and a new scent lingered…
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Post by: freya86 on July 03, 2006, 11:06:42 AM
Wow, now that's a pairing I've never ever thought of before. Very interesting idea, especially with the little twist of Miki thrown in. Me likes :)

Also, it's a really good read. The story flows nicely, which is amazing considering how much you tell in so few words *thumbs up*
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 05, 2006, 01:36:13 AM
Mr Moonlight


Unfamiliar with the direction Yossi was driving Aya curiously asks

“Where are we going?”

“You’ll just have to wait and see. I just want to show you something.”

Agitated Aya shuffled around in her seat

“I don’t like surprises. Pleeeeeeeeease tell me”

“Well I guess that’s going to have to change because surprises is my middle name” Yossi said once again in her usual humorous sarcastic way. Winking at Aya and putting her hand on her knee as reassurance Yossi leaned over to give her a kiss.

The kiss calmed Aya and she eased into her seat enjoying the moment with Yossi. However something else lingered on Aya’s mind. Miki. She couldn’t help but feel guilty for leaving her like that.

Looking at her phone Aya notices a missed call, but before having the chance to listen to the voice message she gets distracted by the car briskly pulling up next to a building.

“Ahhh… is this your new apartment?” Aya asked remembering having discussed how high the prices of apartments have become when Yossi mentioned she was on the hunt for a new place.

“Yeah… but that’s not the surprise.”

“Oh… what’s the surprise then?”

“Patience is a virtue” smirked Yossi as she led the way in, “So you are going to sit here and be patient.”

She walks into the bedroom and Aya is left on the couch wondering what Yossi is up to.

* * * * *

Ten minutes pass and impatience starts to get the best of Aya.

“Yossi? What’s taking so long? What are you doing in there?”

Out walks Yossi, wearing the white suit, red shirt, leopard tie. What to most is recognized as the Mr Moonlight suit.

Gasping Aya, could not believe what she was seeing. Giving out a burst of laughter she covered her mouth in shock.

“This isn’t the original Mr. Moonlight suit that went missing by any chance?” a vivid lively smile was coming onto Aya’s face.

Yossi tapped the side of her nose and winked as in to notion this is our little secret.

“NO WAY!” and the smile grew even further.
Aya’s smile is contagious and Yossi catches it. She turns around and at a touch of a button Mr. Moonlight starts playing in the background.
As Yossi walks over and wraps her arms around Aya’s waist she softly whispers to her…

“Oh! Kokoro ga itamu to iu no kai?
Oh! What’s that? Your heart hurts?

Un, baby, sore wa koi...koi wazurai sa.
Ohhh – baby, that’s love...you’re sick with love.

Kitto, boku to deatta kara...kimi wa koi wo shitan da ne.
It must be because you met me...you’ve fallen in love with me, haven’t you?

Saa, mou daijoubu, boku wa koko ni iru yo
It’s OK, I’m here now

Oide, odorou!
Come on, let’s dance!”


Beginning to blush Aya nervously whispers

“Call me crazy but I’m a little turned on right now” and with this she tugs at Yossi’s tie leading her into the bedroom….
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 05, 2006, 10:40:38 AM
Disappointments and Confessions


“Yossi I really have to go…” Aya whined as she kept kissing her.

“I wish you would stay with me tonight.”

“Yossi you know I want to but Miki will get even more suspicious. You know there’s nowhere I would rather be then here in your arms right?”

“I know…” a disappointed Yossi sighed and pouted

With one last kiss Aya hopped out of Yossi’s car which was parked around the corner from her apartment.

As Aya walked through the lobby she decided to listen to her voice messages.

“Hey Aya… it’s me Miki. What’s going on? Busy working at 6 in the morning? Agh… Just come home for dinner okay? There’s something I want to tell you so please be home…”

“Agh… CRAP!” Aya thought as she dashed through the hallway and fumbled to unlock the door. The house was dark; the dining room was filled with candles, flowers.

“I’m such an asshole” thinking to herself Aya searched for Miki. In Aya’s bedroom Miki stood flicking through their photo albums with tears streaming down her face.

“I’m so sorry.. I didn’t get your message and…” she stopped.
“What did you want to tell me Miki?”

“I only came home early to tell you I love you but that really doesn’t matter does it?” tossing the photo album on the bed Miki walks out the room and down the stairs

Following her Aya was clueless of what she had just heard.

“Listen Miki I love you too but what did you really want to tell me?”

From the bottom of the staircase Miki looked up.

“No Aya.. I mean I really love you.”

Walking out the front door and slamming it behind her causes the house to shake. From inside shattering of glass can be heard. The vase, much like Miki’s heart, falls to the ground and shatters into a million pieces.
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Post by: Aioros on July 05, 2006, 07:48:32 PM
Nicely written! The unusual pairing makes it more interesting and intriguing. I look forward to reading the next chapter. :)
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Post by: WaffleT on July 06, 2006, 05:16:18 AM
*sigh* heartbreak is so hard to read but it comes with many relationships good job with the difficly situation and well written
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Post by: Carmenrous on July 06, 2006, 11:28:39 AM
Nice Fanfic!!its weird to see yossie and aya but it makes it more addictive!!:D:D
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 06, 2006, 01:10:45 PM
Cry your heart out

Walking to the train station Miki gathered her thoughts. Maybe it wasn’t the best idea to tell her that way. Have I ruined our friendship? I love her but have I just tarnished everything we share, our closeness, our connection and the good times we’ve had.

Siting quietly at the train station waiting for the 5 o’clock Yamamote line Miki wondered where she was going.

As she hopped on the train, sitting down she stared out the window. Having fallen so deep into thought Miki went around the Yamamote route over…. and over… and over.

“May I seat here?” a stranger asks, and this is what makes Miki snap out of her deep thoughts.

“Sure.” Looking at her watch and realising that she had been on the train for hours she decides to get of at Ueno and visit Ueno Park. Miki often goes here when she needs to escape from the world and be alone. People don’t tend to notice or care; it is quite often you will see members of Morning Musume there as it is one station away from the studio.

Hopping off the train she walks through the busy crowd. Out of nowhere, once again Miki gets pushed out of her deep thoughts. Getting shoved into a wall by a stranger walking past makes her snap and with one sudden thrust she pushes back, even harder.

 “Watch where you’re FUCKING GOING ASSHOLE!” Miki screaming makes people turn to see the commotion is; they quickly loose interest and go back to rushing to their destination.

“I’m so sorry Miki… I…” fumbling for words the strange who soon revealed to be Eri tries apologising.

“Eri?” realising who it was Miki starts to feel rude.

They interrupt each other with their apologies and laugh awkwardly

“Uh, come get some coffee with me”

Eri about to decline, realises it was more a command then an invitation.


* * * * *


“Why is love so hard Eri? I was so scared to love and when I did… it broke my heart. Knowing the person you love only loves you as a friend makes you feel so utterly hopeless…

Eri felt awkward; never had she seen Miki open up to her in any way or to anyone for that matter. Regardless she had to find a way to comfort her. Moving closer Eri pulled Miki into her arms and said the only thing she knew would help

“Naitesumu nara nakiyagare”
If crying will make it better, cry your heart out…
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Post by: Carmenrous on July 06, 2006, 01:44:43 PM
:( so sad!!im looking forward the next chapter!!:) :)
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 07, 2006, 12:51:23 PM
Caught under the Cherry Blossom Trees

Waiting for Tsunku, Aya was in deep thought. Yossi had been on her mind all morning and she hadn’t had much sleep after Miki walking out on her; naturally she couldn’t wait to finish the recording and get home.
Tsunku is sure taking his time, he is half an hour late.

From the control room she saw Yossi pop her head around the corner.

”Hey gorgeous. Waiting for someone?”

“Yeah. Tsunku, we are meant to run through a new song today. He's running late though. Have you seen him?

“I have a feeling he won’t be showing up” Yossi smirked and Aya knew she was up to something again.  

* * * * *

Rattling could be heard from several rooms away; Tsunku was trying to unlock the door, but his keys were unable to do it from the inside. Locked in one of the unused recoding booths his screaming got muffled by the sound proof windows.

* * * * *

“I’m here to take you out for lunch, got another surprise for you” knowing Aya would hate being surprised Yossi smiled.

“Ohh not again. I hope it’s as good as the last one though” giggling Aya followed Yossi to the car.


* * * * *


Soon they arrived at their destination. This was the nicest park Aya had ever seen. The lake was calm and blue, with the cherry blossom trees surrounding she couldn’t imagine being in a more beautiful place.

Pulling out a picnic basket out of the boot Yossi sets it up under a cherry blossom trees.

“You are so sweet Yo-chan. How did I ever get so lucky to have someone like you?” Aya asked as she stared into Yossi’s eyes.

“I just want you to be happy Aya and I want us to last. But I don’t think it is going to work if we hide it.”

“I just… need some time to tell Miki okay? Then we can tell everyone else before the tour next month.” With these words Aya put Yossi’s mind at rest.

* * * * *

After the two finished their picnic they lay down on the grass hugging, holding hands and with their legs entwined around each others. They lay in peace smiling.

But soon did they know that their peace would be broke by flashing cameras… before the day’s end this would be on the front of every well known magazine cover….
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Post by: katatsumuri on July 07, 2006, 02:36:21 PM
it's a nice story~ got me hooked on reading :)
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Post by: Carmenrous on July 07, 2006, 02:53:26 PM
yossie is so romantic!!your fanfic is too much addictive!congratulations!
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 08, 2006, 10:18:08 AM
Cyclone Miki

Sitting in the kitchen Aya is drinking coffee; the door flies open and once again makes the house shake.
Cyclone Miki has returned.

Marching into the kitchen she throws a magazine towards Aya, it spills her coffee and jumping out of the way she realises it could only be one thing on the cover.

“What’s this all about Aya?”

Picking up the magazines Aya realises her worst fears had come true, she didn’t want Miki to find out this way and she was too scared to tell her right now. Miki was probably hurting and Aya did not want to make it worse.

“What’s what? It’s nothing okay! Just two friends, Miki you of all people should know how the media blows everything out of peroration"

Grunting and rolling her eyes Miki shows disbelief and starts to walk away, Aya grabs her arm.

“Miki we need to talk about last night. I didn’t know how you felt; I didn’t get your message. Please don’t stay angry with me, you’re my best friend and I don’t want to lose that, ever.” Pulling Miki into her arms Aya stroked her hair gently.

“Forget everything I said last night” Miki didn’t mean that, she wanted Aya to love her back.  

“I love you Miki, it might not be the way you need me to but I hope it at least means something that I do.”

Sighing Miki let go of Aya and walked up the stairs.

Picking up the phone she dialled Eri, she didn’t want to be alone…
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Post by: dj_jo on July 08, 2006, 12:23:17 PM
Hey guys...

I was glad and surprised to see that people are reading and getting hooked on my story.
Please feel free to coment, it would be nice to know what you guys think, what you like and I am open to suggestions so don't be shy to comment.

- Jo -
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Post by: Elle_Driver on July 08, 2006, 09:58:32 PM
Nice pairing. Aya seems to be very sensitive at the end. I like that she's worried about their friendship and that she does not want to lose Miki.
I think it would be kinda interesting to see how Miki and Yossi deal with each other on the job.
Title: Crashing and Kissing
Post by: dj_jo on July 09, 2006, 09:49:52 AM
“Hey, it’s Miki. Thanks for this morning, I was a wreck. I wanted to make it up to you so I’m taking you out for drinks tonight at 8.”

Once again this to Eri sounded like a command not an invitation. Feeling not only obligated but realising Miki wouldn’t be the worst person to get to know, she accepted.

“I’m at work right now but if you want you could pick me up in half an hour and we’ll go from there.” For some strange reason Eri was actually looking forward to seeing Miki.

* * * * *

“Hey Mikkity.” Eri hopped in the car, Miki was surprised at her enthusiasm to see her.

“So where are we off to?”

“Well we could go for drinks, then back to my place for dinner. I make the best hamburgers.” suggested Eri as she put on her seatbelt.

* * * * *
 
After a few drinks, the normal chat about work and the upcoming tour, the bar grew to be crowded and loud.

“Should we go back to my place?”

“Yeah sure… I don’t really feel like being bothered by any fanatic fans tonight.” smirked Miki and lead the way.

* * * * *

“You were right, these are great.” Licking her lips Miki grabbed another burger.

“Thanks. So how are you coping with things Miki? I was worried about you today.”

“I don’t know if am coping, I don’t want to be around anyone, but for some strange reason I feel comfortable being around you.”

This was all so strange to Eri; Miki seemed unapproachable, but now here they were talking as if they were close friends.

“You can crash here for the night if you don’t want to go home. I know what it’s like to need space, so you’re more then welcome to stay.”

* * * * *

Only living in a one bedroom apartment Eri only had one bed. Having always shared her bed with friends she didn’t feel uncomfortable sharing it with Miki.

As the two lay in bed completely silent they faced opposite ways.

“Eri?” whispered Miki
“Are you awake?”

“Yeah. Are you okay?”

“Can you hold me?”

Starting to feel a bit uneasy Eri realised that Miki wasn’t ordering her to do this.    

Moving closer Eri pulled Miki into her arms, their bodies were close up against each other.

Closing her eyes and pressing her lips softly up against Eri’s, Miki whispered

“Thankyou…”
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Post by: Sukoshi on July 09, 2006, 10:43:37 AM
Wow first Aya + Yoshi and now Miki + Eri :o   I love how your story has so many surprises!
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Post by: Elle_Driver on July 09, 2006, 02:02:45 PM
Interesting development here. I'm pretty curious about what will happen next.
Your signature is beautiful. :heart:
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Post by: dj_jo on July 10, 2006, 10:12:55 AM
To answer or not to answer

Sleeping Miki looked so peaceful, Eri could not help staring. Never having noticed how beautiful Miki was she couldn’t take her eyes of her. As she breathed her body would slightly move, but besides this she lay in perfect stillness.

Staring at Miki’s body Eri started to feel something strange, something she had never felt before. Feeling awkward she hopped out of bed and decided to prepare breakfast.

* * * *

“Good morning.” Eri walked in with breakfast and placed the tray on Miki’s lap.

Speechless Miki was unsure what to say.

“No ones ever made me breakfast in bed. Thankyou” she smiled

For a split second their eyes met and they both had the same flashbacks.

The kiss.

Placing the tray on the bed side table Miki out of nowhere pulls Eri on top of her. Running her hands gently up her sides they passionately start to kiss.
Miki slowly rolls on top and pins Eri to the bed with one arm, and with the other she runs it softly down her stomach slowly creaping towards her pants.

Eri’s heart starts to now beat faster and she does not retaliate, closing her eyes and letting out a moan of anticipation she feels Miki kiss her even deeper. Her hand creeps lower, to the top of her pants, while slipping her fingers beneath the pant line the phone rings spoiling the moment.

Freezing for a moment Miki leans over to discover that Tsunku is calling. This sent a worried look upon her face.

Tsunku only calls when somethings wrong...

Looking down at Eri, Miki could see that she didn’t want her to answer.

Miki stared into Eri's eyes...

To answer or not to answer…
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Post by: bluekinoko on July 10, 2006, 12:27:19 PM
U ask me to comment, lol. Lets hope no one saw the origanal comment, that stays between us.

Well Im a fan of the Eri and Miki action. Its always nice to see some of that :D
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Post by: dj_jo on July 10, 2006, 02:23:09 PM
(http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/9916/finalcover12sr.png)

Okay so here is an idea for the cover of my story. Nobody knows it Version 1.0

Thought I would post it now to see what people thought and if anyone could come up with a better suggestion. As you can see the photo's in my signature are the same as on my cover. This cover won't be the final one because besides the two characters Reina and Ai that will soon be introduced, I am going to add two or more other characters. Which brings me to this, if anyone despretly wants to see two people get paired, really want to read about them etc. Name them and I will see what I can do.
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Post by: cactus on July 10, 2006, 10:41:18 PM
I like your story very much, Jo.  It's all very...hmm...bittersweet how Miki is not with Aya but then starts something with Eri.  These pairings are quite special and different from other fics.  You are writing them in such a way that they seem really good and intriguing.  I'm enjoying the Miki/Eri scenario a lot, I think it's...umm...can't find the right word to describe it, but it's very, very nice.

Your cover looks pretty cool too with your matching signature banner.  I'm not very good at making suggestions concerning graphics, but it just seems like the empty space around [mainly below] the title of the cover seems a bit too great.

~Great job :D ~
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on July 11, 2006, 06:05:03 AM
Tsunku explodes

Miki and Eri run into the meeting, realising that the reason Tsunku had called was because they were running late.

The fact that she had ignored the call made him even angrier.  

“Not answering phones, not showing up to recordings, LOCKING ME IN THE RECORDING STUDIO!”  The meetings were usually more tranquil but Tsunku was too frustrated to be calm and collected.

“WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO EVERYONE! We have a tour in less then three weeks and we are not ready for it”

Staring at Ai, Reina was a million miles away. The sun was shining on her hair, making it look more beautiful then ever; the way she smiled; the way she looked back into Reina’s eyes was driving her insane. Longing for her, Reina’s was caught up in her own world.

Slamming his fist down in front of Reina, Tsunku was about to explode.

“SNAP OUT OF IT REINA”

He must have had a bad day, he never yells. But he was right; they were not prepared for the upcoming tour. Everyone was unsure how to react; they sat listening without making any comments.

Still unable to concentrate Reina kept staring at Ai and daydreaming. The vibrations from her phone made her jump and hit the table with her knees, sitting down before Tsunku would notice she decided to read the message.

Do you want to come over tonight or are you busy? I have a present for you.
xxx Ai.


Looking over at her Reina nodded and went back to daydreaming…

I wonder what it could be...
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Post by: freya86 on July 11, 2006, 11:22:14 AM
Awwwww, Reina/Ai!!!! Those two are slowly but surely worming their way into my heart ... looking forward to the next installment!!!!
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Post by: lil_hamz on July 11, 2006, 04:52:39 PM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm totally crazy for this fic. :heart:
You have the most surprising pairings but everything is so well written. I especially like Eri x Miki and can't wait to read about Ai x Reina. *Thumbs up* :)
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Post by: cool_kickin_dude on July 11, 2006, 07:44:11 PM
I just finished reading and I'm impressed. Keep it up!
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Post by: dj_jo on July 12, 2006, 06:11:50 AM
Pleasure and Pain

The room was pitch black when Reina entered.

“Keep your eyes closed” whispered Ai.

Taking her by the hand and leading her onto the bed, Ai lays her down. Opening the draw next to the bed she pulls out a set of handcuffs.

Hearing the rattling of the handcuffs makes Reina nervous yet curious.

“What’s that noise?”

Whilst taking Reina’s arms and rasing them above her head Ai handcuffs her to the steal frame of the bed.

Opening her eyes she sees Ai smiling down at her. Knowing she loved being in control, Reina let her have her fun.

Softly starting to kiss down her body made her relax and she closed her eyes in complete content.

She knew no one could ever give her more pleasure…


* * * * *


Staring at Ai, Reina grew to realise as every second passed how beautiful she is.

Laying on Ai’s chest looking up into her eyes she softly whispered

“I love you…”

Ai was afraid that this would happen; she never wanted her to fall in love. To her love wasn’t a subject to be touched on lightly.  

“We’re just friends Takacchi, I love you but not in that way. This is just a fling.”

These words made Reina’s heart sink; turning away from Ai, she closed her eyes while trying to hold in the tears.

I wonder why she’s so afraid to love.
Who broke her heart?
If she knows how much it hurts why does she have to break mine?  
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Post by: falcon7 on July 12, 2006, 06:15:44 AM
....omg Yossiayaya? SO CUTE.
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Post by: dj_jo on July 13, 2006, 06:14:22 AM
The Accident

“Are you ready? I’m on my way.”

Driving towards Aya, Yossi decided to give her a call to make sure she was ready.

“Yeah, almost. Where are you picking me up from?”

“Your place?” this question confused Yossi, then it clicked.

“You haven’t told Miki?”

The silent pause was not reassuring and it sharply shifted the mood.  

“No…”

“She’s our friend Aya. We can’t keep lying to her.”

Guilt ran through Aya.

How can I tell her without hurting her?

“I know…”

Fear hit Yossi

Doesn’t she think we are going to last?

“You’re not sure about us anymore are you?” as much as she wanted to know, she was fearful of Aya’s answer.

“Don’t be stupid Yossi, I love you.”

“Do you?”

Sighing in frustration Aya sat down on her bed; before having the chance to answer all she could hear was tyres screeching and Yossi’s scream…

The phone cut out. With one leap Aya was out the door in desperation to find Yossi.

She can’t be that far away...

As Aya hopped in her car she could hear the siren of an ambulance.  

I can’t lose Yossi… I love her so much…
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Post by: falcon7 on July 13, 2006, 07:45:42 AM
Noooooo! Please let Yossi be okay! ;_; Poor Ayaya!
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Post by: JFC on July 13, 2006, 07:46:49 AM
Oh SHIT!! :shocked:
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Post by: Aioros on July 13, 2006, 09:41:57 AM
Sniff sniff. Poor Reina.:cry:
And poor Tsunku too.
Nice story dj_jo. The pairings were quite unexpected but are growing on me. The cover is also good. Keep it up :thumbsup
I like this particular line.
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“Uh, come get some coffee with me”

Eri about to decline, realises it was more a command then an invitation.

What Miki says, you must obey.
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Post by: dj_jo on July 15, 2006, 05:44:22 AM
If only

Walking through the hospital hallway, Aya felt nothing but guilt.

Seeing Yossi taken away by the ambulance wasn’t easy. The paramedic would not let her go in with Yossi, he told her to follow the ambulance to the hospital.

Trying to find her room, she knew she would never forgive herself is something bad happened to her.

* * * * * *

“You can’t come in right now miss. She needs her rest” the doctor was not being very understanding.

Aya decided to go for a walk to the gift shop and return when the doctor had left.

* * * * * *

Sneaking into Yossi’s room she sat down on the bed next to her. Yossi had her arm in a cast and stiches on her forehead.
Seeing her in this state Aya could not help crying, she felt responsible for the accident.

If only I had told Miki this would have never happened.

“Don’t cry. I’m okay.”

Aya’s face lit up as she heard Yossi’s voice.

Giving her a teddy bear she had bought at the gift shop she apologized

“I’m so sorry…It’s my fault you had this stupid accident.”

Softly pulling Aya into her arms Yossi kisses her lips. This made tears fall down Aya’s cheek, she could not be more relived that Yossi was okay.

Stroking her hair and wiping away the tears she softly whispered

“It wasn’t your fault”

Yossi moved to one side, as to motion for Aya to hop into bed with her.

“I love you” they both whispered.

The two lay in bed, staring into each others eyes until they fell asleep…
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Post by: Mikan on July 16, 2006, 07:23:10 AM
Kowaii yooooooooo!!
Odd couple but it's good (^_^)
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Post by: dj_jo on July 16, 2006, 08:48:12 AM
New couple...

Rika and Sayumi...

COMING SOON!

(http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4828/8ri2.jpg)
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Post by: freya86 on July 16, 2006, 02:19:10 PM
Waaaaiiii, Sayu/Rika!!! Now that's something I really want to see!!!
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Post by: dj_jo on July 17, 2006, 05:13:45 AM
Decisions

Running out of the bedroom and into the bathroom Reina barely managed to make it to the sink.
This was the third day in a row she had woken up vomiting, she could not help worry.

Her period was never late, but it was due a week ago.

Going to the doctor was not an easy decision, but it had to be done before the tour.

Ai was still asleep, she had spent the night. Not wanting her to worry Reina managed to leave undetected. Hoping she would be back before Ai would wake; rushing out the door she caught the first taxi in sight.  

* * * * *

“Just one moment, I will call the nurse to see if the results are in yet”

Time seemed to drag on, and Reina’s heart had never beaten faster.  

Why has this happen to me? What am I going to do?

The room was silent and the mood was melancholy and lonesome. Hanging up the phone, Reina could tell that the doctor did not have good news.

“The tests came back positive”

Unable to hold in the tears she let it all out.

What am I going to do?

Feeling uneasy the doctor suggested what she thought would be best for Reina.

“If you want to have an abortion, it will remain confidential to your file. The procedure only takes 2 hours and it’s safe. Let me know and I can arrange an appointment as soon as possible.”

I can’t keep this baby but am I strong enough to destroy it…?

These thoughts got interrupted by her phone ringing. It was Ai. Not wanting her to know Reina turned of her phone.

“Miss would you like to make an appointment?”

“I….
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Post by: freya86 on July 17, 2006, 10:56:18 AM
She will make an appointment, right? She can't be thinking of keeping that baby.
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Post by: dj_jo on July 19, 2006, 02:52:14 AM
The L Word

Walking into Miki’s trailer Yossi and Aya were ready to confess their love. They were two days away from going on tour and it could not wait any longer.

“Come in guys. I’m glad you’re here’

“We need to talk to you about something Miki.”

“Okay but I need to talk to you guys first. Something happen to Reina, she was rapped. She’s only told Ai, and she thought it would be a smart decision to tell me.”

The two girls stood speechless.


How could someone do something like this to a sweet girl like Reina.


“WHAT?!” about to explode Yossi was pacing the room.
“When did this happen? Do they have the guy?”

“I knew Reina would be going through a lot right now, Ai and me went to the police to report it. They have a guy in custody; three other girls identified him for the same charge. It was in the same location, the chances are it is the same guy.”

Aya stood silent.


You hear about this on the news, but I never thought it would happen to someone I know and care about.


“Yossi, you know Reina better, I was hopping you would come help me get her to go in the station to identify him”


* * * * *


Reina’s apartment door was open; Ai’s car was parked outside. The three girls let themselves in.

“Reina? It’s Miki.” Aya, Yossi and Miki heard voices coming from the bedroom.

As they knocked they heard Ai’s voice.

“Come in”

Sitting on the bed Reina was curled up crying; Ai was holding her close and stroking her hair.

Miki and Aya stood at the doorway. Yossi approached the bed and say down, pulling Reina into her arms and hugging her softly.

“I know you must be hurting, but we really need you to come with us and identify the guy”

Tears fled her.


I don’t ever want to see him again.


“We will all be there for you. Please come, no one wants to see this guy go free.”

Softly lifting her up onto her feet Yossi stepped back. Falling down she winced in pain.

Picking her up again, Yossi was confused why Reina was in pain.

Looking at Ai for help she stood on the floor crying. Moving closer she held her tight.

“Guys it’s not that simple, she needs to rest right now, she just came back from the hospital”

The three girls weren’t sure what had happen, but soon they all realised that Reina had been pregnant, and had an abortion.

Deciding that Ai would be fine taking care of her they said goodbye and gave Reina their best.  

Lying in bed next to Reina, Ai realised how much it hurt to see her suffer. Her heart felt sharp pains and anxiety came over her having not said this to anyone in years…


“I love you…”
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Post by: Mikkii-ism on July 20, 2006, 05:44:24 AM
woww so interesting!
I like this fiction

Miki Reina couple, is it possible ? ^^
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Post by: dj_jo on July 20, 2006, 07:05:52 AM
Sorry if my writing confused you Mikkii-ism::confused:

Miki and Reina arn't a couple
Reina's with Ai. And Miki is with Eri... :yep:

Quote from: Mikkii-ism
woww so interesting!
I like this fiction

Miki Reina couple, is it possible ? ^^
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Post by: Mikkii-ism on July 20, 2006, 07:27:40 PM
no no

it's not like that

i mean i really really like MikiReina
so if there any a little shot of them
i would be glad

sorry if my english confused you ^^
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Post by: Seagull on July 20, 2006, 08:33:28 PM
I really want more of this fan fic, i really love it
Im writing a fan fic myself right now (in swedish, becasue my english kinda bad) It's about Miki and Reina :P
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Post by: Aioros on July 21, 2006, 07:52:06 PM
Reinaaaa!!!!! Why her, why her? :cry:
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Post by: dj_jo on July 22, 2006, 05:11:04 AM
More of this fan fic will come...
Right now my net is down, so I will start posting daily as soon as it is fixed.
This should be in a matter of days...

I am glad people are still reading and not too worry this fic is not finished yet.

I will see what I can do for you Mikkii-ism and other fans of
:heart: MikiReina :heart:  

:heart: Dj_jo
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Post by: Elle_Driver on July 22, 2006, 01:46:06 PM
I'm looking forward to the scene in which Aya and Yossui confess their love and tell Miki everything. :cry:
Going on tour will be really hard for all of them after all these things that happened.
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Post by: littlepink_missy on July 23, 2006, 02:40:22 PM
ahhhh I'm addicted to your story!! normally I don't really read fanfic, but I'm really looking forward to read of this!! you're so good at writing this, the story flows really well
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Post by: Mikkii-ism on July 23, 2006, 03:19:23 PM
actually i also write some fictions
ofcourse, it would me MikiReina ><
but it's in Thai ^^

i'll see if i can try english haha
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Post by: dj_jo on July 24, 2006, 07:25:32 AM
Check me out


Having decided that she had lost touch with the real world Eri decided to get a job as a cashier; this was her last shift before the tour.

The pay was bad, the hours were bad, and the boss was a jerk.

Sighing in content knowing how the rest of the world lived she was happy to be doing something so normal.

Off in her own little world she was deep in thought. Later tonight she had a date with Miki.

This time will have dinner at my place; I’ll see you tonight.

Miki’s words echoed through her head.

Her thoughts were soon interrupted and much to her shock there stood Miki. Winking at Eri, she started putting down her shopping on conveyor belt.

“Common I want to see you check me out”  

This made her blush. Leaning over the counter Miki planted a kiss on Eri’s lips and softly whispered.

“I saw that in a movie once I’ve always wanted to say it.”

Smiling back at her Eri was even more excited about their date.

“I didn’t know you shopped here”

“I don’t but I knew you work here. Not happy to see me?”

The smile on her face grew.

“Of course I am”

The manager walked past, suspiciously looking at the two girls as he entered the staff room.

Leaning over again Miki gave Eri a more passionate kiss, teasingly leaving her wanting more.

“I’ll see you tonight…”
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Post by: lil_hamz on July 24, 2006, 10:12:54 AM
I can't decide which of these pairings I like more. I NEED to read more of every one :D
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Post by: dj_jo on July 27, 2006, 04:49:37 AM
Dessert

Aya was out for the night, so Miki had the house all to herself.

Hearing a knock at the door she wondered who it could be, Eri wasn’t due for another hour and she hadn’t even started preparing dinner.

Hopping out the shower she wrapped a towel around herself and ran down the stairs to answer the door; soon she would find Eri standing on the other side.

“Whaaa? You’re early.” Double checking the clock in the hallway Miki stood confused.

Putting her arms around Miki’s waist Eri pulled her closer, firmly pressing her lips against hers, this caught Miki by surprise.

This is not like Eri

“I just wanted to see you.”

“Dinner isn’t ready…”

The feeling of disappointment showed on Eri’s face.

Isn’t she happy to see me?

Miki could tell what Eri must have been thinking

“I mean… I wanted to see you too…”

This brought a smile back to Eri’s face.

“Let me just get dressed and I’ll start dinner”

As she was about to walk up the stairs Eri pulled her back, kissing her even more passionately then before.

“We can just skip straight to dessert…”

She started leading Miki up the stairs as she winked at her.

The girls two walked up the stairs kissing, eager to reach the bedroom...
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Post by: ChiruChaCha on July 27, 2006, 07:40:44 PM
Quote from: dj_jo
Check me out
“Common I want to see you check me out”  

This made her blush. Leaning over the counter Miki planted a kiss on Eri’s lips and softly whispered.

“I saw that in a movie once I’ve always wanted to say it.”

Smiling back at her Eri was even more excited about their date.

“I didn’t know you shopped here”

“I don’t but I knew you work here. Not happy to see me?”


Did you really see this in a movie? I could swear i've seen it but I can't remember where

Btw, this fic just goes better and better everytime i check it out :)
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Post by: dj_jo on July 27, 2006, 10:08:57 PM
I did see it, not in a movie. In a TV show. 'The L Word' Season 1. Its the best show check it out. :D

My next post will be on monday. I will be gone for the weekend to a friends place so I cant post but more chapters coming soon.

:heart: Dj Jo
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Post by: Carmenrous on July 28, 2006, 02:14:12 AM
miki is so kawaii!!love your fic
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Post by: dj_jo on August 02, 2006, 09:05:19 AM
And in walks Miki

Yossi emerged from under the sheets, kissing up Aya’s body.

"That was amazing" she let out a sigh or relief  

"I try.." Yossi smiled and kissed Aya’s lips softly; the two lay in bed, their naked bodies rubbing up against each other.

Stroking Yossi’s hair Aya looked into her eyes.

"I’m glad our rooms our next to each other. I couldn’t imagine being on tour without being able to be with you."

Whilst embracing each other and kissing, out of nowhere Yossi stoped and looked into Aya’s eyes.

"You do love me right?"

Why would she ever doubt it? Is this about me not telling Miki?

"More then I could ever say, don’t ever doubt how far my love for you will go"

Yossi cuddled up into Aya’s arms, she held in the tears. Tears of joy…

The serene moment was soon shattered and panic ran through the girls, their hearts were in their throat.

"Oh my gah!"

And in walks Miki...
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Post by: Elle_Driver on August 02, 2006, 03:44:08 PM
Yey, I was waiting for this update of your fic and I really like this new chapter. Can't wait to read how this scene continues. It might get really ugly now :D
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Post by: dj_jo on August 05, 2006, 09:10:34 AM
Naked in bed

"What are you doing naked in bed at this hour! It’s 4 pm."

Aya was sure that Miki would find out what was going on. Yossi just managed to fall out of bed and crawl under it; she knew it would be worse hiding if Miki found her.

"I’m erm… not completely naked…" Aya felt Yossi’s hand slip under the quilt and pass her a pair of underwear.

"I just felt a bit sick, so I wanted to take a nap before dinner."

"We really haven’t talked in a while… I wanted to make sure we were all good. We’re still friends right?" Miki sat on the bed.

"Best of friends" with the quilt wrapped around her Aya reached over and hugged Miki.

"Wow.. you’re foreheads on fire are you feeling sick?"

"Nah I was just having bad dreams, tossing and turning in bed. I’m okay."

Yossi realised her clothes were all over the floor, she quickly managed to grab them; accidentally rustling the sheets, Miki had heard the noise.

"Did you hear that?"

Aya’s heart was beating with fear.

Oh my god what am I gonna do if Miki finds out about Yossi?

"It was nothing… probably the wind. That window is open; would you mind if we talked at dinner I’m a bit tired"

Miki was suspicious. Hesitating to leave she looked around the room; seeing the quilt move slightly she plotted.

I’ll get to the bottom of this. The hall ways are under 24 hour surveillance and I know just how to get the tapes

"Okay I’ll see you then" leaving with a devious grin on her face Miki was determined to get to the bottom of this.
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Post by: Elle_Driver on August 06, 2006, 03:58:11 AM
I like how this is developing. Please give us more! I really really wanna see what Miki does when she finally knows the truth...
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Post by: rndmnwierd on August 06, 2006, 06:06:06 AM
Oh what tangled webs we weave. *Still waiting for Rika/Sayu* Let's go Angels! Yay!
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Post by: dj_jo on August 06, 2006, 09:06:56 AM
Yeah the Rika/Sayumi is coming soon. More then likely next chapter if not the one after for sure.

:heart: DJ Jo
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Post by: dj_jo on August 07, 2006, 10:36:37 AM
Hot and Heavy

Sayumi enters Rika’s room and seeing the unexpected she turned to walk back out.

“It’s okay come in” Rika was lying in bed, not wearing anything but a bathrobe that was not tied up. The way it draped of her body made Sayumi feel awkward yet inquisitive.

“I was just wondering if I could borrow your hair dryer”

“Yeah sure, it’s in the side bed next to you.”

As Sayumi reached to open the drawer she felt a pull and out of nowhere she was sitting on top of Rika; her heart started to race.

“I….” Sayumi could not speak; Rika pressed her finger gently up against her lips as if to notion that she didn’t have to say anything.  

While stroking her hair, she pulls her closer pressing her lips against Sayumi’s.

“You’re so beautiful”

The innocence in Sayumi drove Rika insane.  

Running her hands down her body she could feel her shivering...

“I’ve never done this before…”

* * * * *

The room was steaming and dripping with condensation, sweat poured of the two girl’s bodies as their hands continued exploring.

Rika knew Sayumi wanted this by the way she’d press up against her hand even harder.

Rika loved domineering and Sayumi loved being domineered….
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 07, 2006, 01:29:54 PM
You Sir, have just made my day.
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Post by: dj_jo on August 08, 2006, 05:26:44 AM
As you may have noticed I have just created a poll.

I am wondering which couple is most liked and who you the readers would like to see more of.

I have finally introduced the new couple Rika/Sayumi so now I will decide which main couple to focus more closely on by the votes on this poll; so have your say

:panda_love: dj jo
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Post by: JFC on August 08, 2006, 05:38:53 AM
I voted for Yossi/Aya but I want to see more of Aichan/Reina. :p
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Post by: len.chan on August 08, 2006, 06:34:49 AM
i can't help it.. miki and eri are sooo cute XDXD
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 08, 2006, 07:45:55 AM
Rika and Sayu for teh win!
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Post by: lil_hamz on August 08, 2006, 07:21:06 PM
AHHHHHHHHH why did you have to have a poll? I can't choose..... *debates flipping coins*
Aw wth I'll go wiith Ai-chan & Reina :P
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Post by: rndmnwierd on August 08, 2006, 07:21:31 PM
*gapes at Rika/Sayu action* *opens mouth* *closes mouth* *melts into a puddle of 'goo'*

That totally made me shiver, it was just so sudden. Commanding..... Yay! Non-Descriptive Sex!
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 08, 2006, 09:07:41 PM
340 More days :twisted:
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Post by: dj_jo on August 09, 2006, 02:36:46 PM
340 more days untill what? :o

Quote from: huggumwuggums
340 More days :twisted:


:heart: dj_jo
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 09, 2006, 03:43:48 PM
Till we can have descriptive sex that involves Sayumi :lol:
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Post by: rndmnwierd on August 09, 2006, 08:27:53 PM
Didn't she just turn 16?
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 09, 2006, 08:56:15 PM
The agreed legal age of this forum is 18, so..yeah.. XD
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Post by: JFC on August 10, 2006, 12:40:08 AM
/me waits for the slap of the hed signifying a :doh:
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Post by: freya86 on August 10, 2006, 10:36:06 AM
I voted Ai/Reina, but I definitely wanna see more of Rika/Sayu ... such an intriguing pair!!
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Post by: asheravel on August 11, 2006, 02:00:24 AM
i vote for yossie and aya !
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Post by: ChiruChaCha on August 12, 2006, 12:48:27 AM
I voted for Miki/Eri couse even thought it's a weird couple they are sooooo cute, but I think that Sayu/Rika could grow in me more than Miki/Eri if I read more about it...
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Post by: MIKIisLOVE on August 12, 2006, 05:27:13 PM
Miki/Eri all the way......

coz I :heart: Miki

XD
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Post by: stefy on August 15, 2006, 06:31:29 PM
Yossie/Aya...
basically yossie/anyone will do
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Post by: _Hitomi_ on August 17, 2006, 10:23:48 AM
10 days without Nobody knows it... >_<
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Post by: MIKIisLOVE on August 17, 2006, 08:23:18 PM
:o it's been 10 days?

where is dj_jo? :(
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 17, 2006, 08:32:05 PM
I hope I didn't scare him away..
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Post by: dj_jo on August 18, 2006, 06:24:38 AM
No you have not scared HER XD away ;)

Heres the new chapter guys.. enjoy.
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Post by: dj_jo on August 18, 2006, 06:25:27 AM
The secrets of Aya and Yossi

As the bus was slowly driving back to the hotel Miki’s heart felt like it was breaking. Images coming back, images that revealed the secret of Aya and Yossi.

“What’s wrong ? You’ve been very quiet” Asked Eri sitting next to her, the two were coming back from lunch.

Turning to Eri, Miki smiled. It lit up Eri’s face but soon she would see the unexpected once again.

Miki’s eyes flooded with tears, they started streaming down her face like never before. Sobbing her whole body shook, and Eri took her in her arms.

Her face buried in Eri’s shoulders made the words she spoke muffled and barley understood.

“I don’t want to go back... I don’t want to see them again...”

Holding her even closer Eri was clueless in what Miki was talking about, moments ago they were laughing.

She must have been pretending to be okay.

“I don’t want to go back there.. I don’t want to see them again...” Miki cried and sobbed, her sobs kept getting heavier and her breaths were getting cut short.

Trying to calm her down before she had an anxiety attack Eri rocked her in her arms stroking her hair

“I don’t know what’s wrong but If crying will make it better, cry your heart out…
“Naitesumu nara nakiyagare”

Remembering her have said these words before soothed Miki’s heart as she whispered back

“I love you..”
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Post by: JFC on August 18, 2006, 06:37:16 AM
So Miki found her "proof" but we don't get to know the details yet? :crying:
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Post by: Vlad ţepeş on August 18, 2006, 07:03:26 AM
i really like this chapter baby, u can really feel the emotion in it and its well written continue the good work
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Post by: asheravel on August 18, 2006, 07:11:35 AM
tsk tsk aya n yossie made miki cry..good thing eri is there =D
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Post by: huggumwuggums on August 18, 2006, 09:35:07 AM
Quote from: dj_jo
No you have not scared HER XD away ;)

Heres the new chapter guys.. enjoy.


*smacks head* XD
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Post by: dj_jo on August 18, 2006, 10:44:08 AM
hehe huggumwuggums don't feel bad it was a mistake
 i was just clarifing my gender for everyone ;)

:heart: Dj_jo

And a warm welcome to Vlad tepes (my sweetie pie) :heart: :panda_kiss:
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Post by: MIKIisLOVE on August 18, 2006, 09:30:05 PM
Naitesumu nara nakiyagare........:cry:
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Post by: dj_jo on August 22, 2006, 12:54:38 PM
For the R rated version of the chapter "Hot and Heavy" check out the H!P Perv Fourm. It will be under the name "Nobody knows it.."

COMING SOON!!! (Next couple of days)
I'm already finished just in the process of editing.

I have finally become a memeber of it and I thought I would start with what people seemed to be very excited about Sayumi/Rika.

So check it out... its the same with so much more dirty juicy details.

Enjoy :jerk:

:heart: dj_jo
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Post by: dj_jo on August 23, 2006, 11:18:46 AM
Hot and Heavey R+ Version now posted!!!!!!!

Check it out in H!P Perv Section
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Post by: bluekinoko on August 25, 2006, 05:33:48 AM
Ok 'Cause Dj_Jo didnt link the perv I thought I should do the honours -
 
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Hope you enjoy~
 
*Vanishes in a puff of smoke leaving a mysterious box of cookies*
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Post by: lil_hamz on August 25, 2006, 10:05:36 AM
Quote from: bluekinoko
Ok 'Cause Dj_Jo didnt link the perv I thought I should do the honours -
 
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http://forum.jphip.com/showpost.php?p=162512&postcount=1
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Hope you enjoy~
 
*Vanishes in a puff of smoke leaving a mysterious box of cookies*


Oooh thanks. There I go now XD *clicks and I'm gone*
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: rndmnwierd on August 26, 2006, 01:29:24 AM
COOKIES  FOR  YOU!!!


And poor Miki. At least she has Eri to cry on!
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: Saikami on August 30, 2006, 07:49:56 AM
Aww! Poor Miki indeed! Thank gahh Eri is there to help! :heart:
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Post by: Yuuyami on August 31, 2006, 12:04:50 AM
Miki! Don't be sad! Eri's there for yooou! :]! Gahh, you got me into your crackdom pairings XD!!! Rooting for Miki x Eri! And hoping to see Ai x Reina again soooon!

Keep writing or I'ma hunt chu dooown! XD
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on September 02, 2006, 12:09:35 PM
More bad news


Waiting for Makoto to answer the door Yossi can’t stop her heart from racing.

Stumbling down the stairs Makoto trips and Yossi hears a loud thump against the door before it opens and Makoto stands on the other side rubbing her head.

“Agh my head” she groans “What’s going on Yossi its 3 a.m.”
 
The annoyance soon went away when seeing the look on Yossi’s face.

“Come in.. What’s wrong?” stepping inside she leads her very scare looking friend into the living room.

“I … erm… agh…” the words can not come out of her mouth as she herself can not believe what is happening.

Slowly moving closer Makoto offers a warm reassuring hug as if to say
Its okay, you can tell me anything.

Still unable to speak Yossi takes Makoto’s hand and places it on her breast, making her fingers press harder in one spot.

In shock Makoto steps back realising the lump on Yossi’s breast. But as tears start to fall down the scared girl’s face she moves back, hugging her and holding her close.

As tears fall down Yossi’s face her words are muffled by the pain inside…

“I don’t want to die.”

Rocking her back and forth Makoto tries reassuring her by stroking her hair and soothing her heart with kind words but no words in this world could make the pain disappear.

Whilst Makoto is in the kitchen fixing a drink for the two Yossi takes out her phone and messages Aya.

‘I love you Aya, you’re the best thing that’s happen to me. I can’t do this anymore… It’s over… I’m sick of hiding’

Lying to Aya broke her heart, but knowing she probably didn’t have long to live she would have rather Aya think she was a jerk then be put through the pain of losing Yossi…
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: Saikami on September 02, 2006, 03:13:51 PM
O_O WHAT?! Butbutbut... THATS SO SAAAAAAAAD! :cry: :cry: :cry: No, it can't be that...Right? -is over-reacting-
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: GeTaWay on September 02, 2006, 03:15:58 PM
I don't understand what happens to Yossi...
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: _Hitomi_ on September 02, 2006, 03:58:16 PM
She's overdoing it!. Maybe it's not cancer. (I think that she thinks it is). Sometimes those lumps are non-malignant.
(... I hope this is the case...)
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: tanakachi on September 02, 2006, 05:54:05 PM
noooo, yossi..:shocked: :cry: , she will get through it i know it!
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: Yuuyami on September 02, 2006, 09:59:48 PM
O_________O;

[Sticky note pinned to forehead saying "Nice job. You stunned Yuuyami to Time-Freeze. She'll probably move again after the next chapter is written, unless you manage to stun her yet again."]

...O_________O;
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: ChrNo on September 03, 2006, 12:18:29 AM
the title attracted me...i was just curious to read some fanfic and i've chosen yours....and i have to say you are amazing...what a great job you did here ! the couple are kinda weird but yet so cute...i really like the Yossi/aya - Miki/Eri part...really great written and as some said before we can feel the emotions, and i really like the ending of each chapter...keep it up !
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on September 03, 2006, 01:31:49 AM
Quote from: GeTaWay
I don't understand what happens to Yossi...


Yossi has just found a lump on her breast, she is afraid that it may be cancer so to save Aya the pain she decides to leave her.

I was glad to see this chapter get so many comments, I was running low on ideas but now I have the next few chapters lined up.

This chapter is really close to my heart and I am very amazed to see that people are enjoying it.

:heart: Dj_jo
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Post by: Vlad ţepeş on September 03, 2006, 02:42:40 AM
Once again babe u've completely blown me away with ur writing, i absolutly love ur the way u put so much emotion into ur writing.  keep up the brilliant work baby.
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Post by: tanakachi on September 03, 2006, 04:20:51 AM
this is great, i cant wait for the next chapters! keep up the great work!!
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Post by: rndmnwierd on September 03, 2006, 08:03:13 AM
O_O Yossui? No! O_O
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Post by: bluekinoko on September 03, 2006, 03:31:57 PM
XD         Explains why she has smaller breasts than the others

No, seriously breast cancer is a bad thing...I hope you arent intending to kill off Yossui ^^
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Post by: YoukaiChica on September 05, 2006, 12:59:13 AM
Holy crap! No Yossi! NO!!!!
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Post by: ChrNo on September 05, 2006, 01:10:11 AM
come on Dj_jo, everyone is waiting for you XD XD XD

i can't wait longer lol...

sorry><...POST !

XD
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: Tanachan on September 06, 2006, 12:00:05 AM
NO YOSSIE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Post by: stefy on September 10, 2006, 05:36:55 PM
why does bad things happen to yossie? car accident and now this?? nooo... and what happened to Ai and Reina?
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: dj_jo on September 20, 2006, 01:02:39 PM
Aya’s Soliloquy

As I keep reading the words over and over trying to make sense of what is happening and what is going through Yossi’s mind my heart beats faster and harder like it wants to leap out my chest.

‘I love you Aya, you’re the best thing that’s happen to me. I can’t do this anymore… It’s over… I’m sick of hiding’


What have I done? This is all my fault. As my heart beats faster the pain starts to get too much. My body’s punishing me for driving her away and as the pain grows I try to sit up off my bed but I fall back and the tears start and I know they won’t stop until I have her back. I want to know… I need to know what’s going on.

The phone rings out over and over and every time her message bank picks up I listen to her sweet familiar voice until it is too hard to handle and an overwhelming amount of emotion floods over me. Memories, so many memories come back and I know that a life without Yossi is a life not worth living.

The hours seemed to drag on forever but the pain just drowns out everything around me. Soon morning hit and I knew she won’t keep avoiding my calls forever but what if she does? Would I ever see her again? Or would I one day run into her at a concert? God knows when I’ll be touring with them again.

I decided to try one last time before going over to her apartment. The phone rang and my heart was in my throat with anticipation.

“Hello” her voice somewhat soothed me and everything that was breaking inside me but the pain in her voice sent cold shivers up my back. It sounds like she had been crying and I want to ask why? I want to ask her so many questions but I don’t. I can’t speak.

“Hey.. I tried to call you” my voice started to break

“I’m sorry Aya” the tears started to build

“Please don’t leave me” I never thought I’d say those words

“Please don’t leave me…” the tears started running down my face

After a pause that seemed to last forever she spoke again

“I’m so sorry” she whispered and the coldness of her voice hit my heart like a shard of ice, I began to sob in pain.
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: ChrNo on September 20, 2006, 01:19:51 PM
OMG !

dj_jo i was waiting for that !

omg...so great !!...

so sad !!!...:cry:

i'm happy yossi didnt hang up ! or yelled at her...

omg...

great job here !!

keep coming !
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Post by: _Hitomi_ on September 20, 2006, 02:24:13 PM
T_T so saaaaaaaaaaaaaad!
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Post by: Yuuyami on September 20, 2006, 10:06:29 PM
Awww! -wonders when Aya finds out her true reason-

... -puts on hardhat-
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Post by: rndmnwierd on September 20, 2006, 10:45:37 PM
Ah, it was worth the wait! Heart breaking chapter friend. T_T
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Post by: Vlad ţepeş on September 21, 2006, 08:51:58 AM
that was an amazing chapter babe, its very close to my heart.  Keep ur brilliant stories coming baby. ur stories always capture the feelings perfectly, another brilliant piece of writing
Title: Nobody knows it...
Post by: Yuuyami on November 23, 2006, 01:41:10 AM
You know, if you're not going to update the fic, you might as well tell us your excuses of why you are not updating this fic. It's been what, two months now?

I miss reading this ; ;...