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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: F-nokbn on September 06, 2012, 03:52:25 PM

Title: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: F-nokbn on September 06, 2012, 03:52:25 PM: Prologue:

1st POV

"I want you to stay, I want you to stay with me forever but you left me... you left me with no word. It hurt me so much that I can't even face you or be with you with our friends. No, I just can't. But one day I saw you... I saw you with both of my eyes, you have someone new, someone who replaced me in your heart..... but why did I feel numb about it. Maybe because... I have found someone who will be there with me forever"

2nd POV

"I want you to stay, I want you to stay with me forever but you didn't... you left me even though I didn't tell you to leave. Please forgive me, I didn't mean to hurt you, I just did the right thing, I just did what others said. I'm sorry if I didn't fight for it, I didn't fight for our love. Its just that... I don't want to hurt you because because of our love for each other. But now I think, maybe the decision that I made is wrong"

3rd POV

"I want you to stay, I want you to stay with me forever so please don't leave me... whatever happen, don't leave me. After so many years that I have waited for you, you finally noticed me and cared for me. I know you were hurt so now... I want to help you, I want to help you move on and start a new life. I know I love you, I know I care for you but why do I get this strange feeling that my love for you is not true"

4th POV

"I want you to stay, I want you to stay with me forever so please don't go... I beg you, don't leave me. I'm sorry if I'm so over protective, I'm sorry if I get jealous easily, I'm sorry if I don't want to share you to anyone. I'm just... I'm just scared that you will leave me because I don't show any affection for you, that's why I'm doing this. Well, it's all your fault, you made me fell in love with you when I refuse to. So... face the consequences"

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TBC

I think.. :sweatdrop: :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: ScarletWings on September 06, 2012, 04:58:42 PM: wow interesting..
can't really tell which pov is whom though... :s

do update soon! ganbatte :cow:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: nori on September 06, 2012, 05:47:49 PM: Wow, looks really complicated since everyone wants the other person to not leave so is this some kind of massive love triangle?

Please update as soon as you can, really looking forward to it. :)
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: Sara-chan on September 06, 2012, 06:33:38 PM: This is interesting :yep:
please update soon :cow:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: chibi_airin on September 07, 2012, 02:53:21 AM: nice start! :glasses:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: Megumi on September 07, 2012, 09:39:04 AM: :bow: Please continue!

:kneelbow:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: yukofan on September 07, 2012, 09:57:14 AM: i want you to update..i want you to update the next chapter.. XD

interesting prologue ^^b
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: Chikane Himemiya on September 08, 2012, 11:44:15 AM: A very intrerseting story!!!
plssssssssss...
Update sooooooooon!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: smarty0821 on September 15, 2012, 02:07:47 PM: Please update :cry: :cry: :cry:
Title: Re: Its Not Always You [AkanexJurinaxRenaxAirin]
Post by: kahem on September 16, 2012, 03:02:05 AM: WOW love square it sounds nice~