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Offline Wmatsui22

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince
« Reply #20 on: July 13, 2012, 01:38:10 PM »
please update soon....
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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince
« Reply #21 on: August 10, 2012, 08:27:16 AM »
Wow! It's been quite a long time that I last updated this... :sweatdrop:
Hope you guys wouldn't blame me.. Hehe~ :nervous
Today, while waiting for the next class I suddenly wanted to update this so here it is~~ :P
Hope you guys will enjoy this chapter and see ya for now, cause I've got to go to class now!!! :panic:

Chapter 3 – Wolf King

Kai continues to excitedly kill the low level monsters.

System: Player Kai has killed a slime and get 10 Exp
Player Kai has killed a slime and get 10 Exp
Player Kai has killed a slime and get 10 Exp
Slime has died and dropped slime liquid

“Eh?! The exp has become only 10?? I guess is because I leveled up… It will take too long if I just keep killing slimes… maybe I should try other higher level monsters” says Kai as he look around if there are any other monsters aside from slimes.
As he look to the North he saw a few little pigs that says Monster Piglet on top Lvl 2.
“Hmm… that should make a good target” says Kai as he slowly approaches the Piglet.
Once he got near enough for him to strike, he immediately without any hesitation slash onto the piglet.

Piglet -20 hp

But the piglet didn’t die yet and it attack Kai back, Kai was expecting a one slash kill so he didn’t expect the piglet to still be alive and was ambushed by the piglet.

Player Kai -6 hp

“Ouch! That damn pig!!!” shouts Kai as he give the piglet one more slash and with that the piglet became a stream of light…

Piglet -20 hp
Piglet is defeated and dropped pig tooth.
Player Kai has defeated Piglet and earned 30 Exp.

“Hahaha~ That’s what you get from hurting me, stupid pig!” Kai laugh victoriously as he continues to find more piglets and manage to lvl up himself a few more levels with killing piglets, minor skeletons, baba sheeps, etc.

Few Hours Later…
“Stats!” Kai shouted

Profile
Player Name: Kai
Level: 10
Gender: Male
Race: Angel
Class: None

Stats
STR: 15+2
INT: 5+1
WIS: 8+1
CON: 8+2
AGI: 10+2


“Yatta!! Finally level 10~~ I can finally go choose a class now~” says Kai happily.
Kai happily skips back to the village with super attractive smile that manages to get all the girls around fainted. After asking a random villager of where the class change place is, Kai immediately dash towards his destination.
The NPC that lets players class change is called Bella and she lives inside a small wooden house at the east of the village.

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In front of Bella’s house…
“Excuse me?? I am here for a class change~!!”
“Come in” says a female voice from the house.
As Kai went in he saw that the female has a long, wavy, red hair with beautiful blue eyes. She is wearing a long, long black robe that covers her foot. The robe is a really simple design. She is considered beautiful to Kai as he is staring at her.
“Oh~~ The Mighty Challenger! You have finally come. This world is full of mysteries for you to explore. Will you be the one who will become the king of this world??? I am here to let you choose your class, so answer me, Challenger. What class do you wish to change into? There’s Warrior, Magician, Archer, Bard, Sorcerer, Priest, Thief, etc.” says Bella
“I’ve already decided that I want to be the Warrior.” Says Kai with fire burning passionately in his eyes.
“Hai, I got it.”
“Faster please~~ I can’t wait to learn new skills!!” says Kai excitedly
“Not so fast, Challenger.” Bella
“??”
“I need some items to change you into a warrior which is 10 Big Wolf Tooth and 1 Wolf King Tooth. Do you have it? If not, go to the North of this village then you will see Wolf packs. There you can see Big Wolf and there should be  a small boss, Wolf King. I will be waiting for your return”
“Eh~~~?!!! Which means I can’t get a class change yet??” complains Kai
“Yes”
“sigh* Fine…” Kai says and leaves.

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On the Way to the North…
“!!!” Kai notices something
“I think that’s the Big Wolf” says Kai softly to himself
“Arg…. It’s level 12!!! And it looks so strong!! I bet the Wolf King is even stronger… I don’t have the confidence to beat it yet….” Kai says dissapointly to himself.
“Hey there!” a sound appear out of nowhere which surprises Kai.
As Kai turn back he sees a girl with long, wavy brown hair and when she smiles you can see her cute canine. She gives off a cool aura. She is one of the most beautiful people Kai has even seen in his life!!!
Kai was hypnotized by her beauty…
“Hello??” the girl repeated
“Ah? Oh Yes?? Is there anything I can help you???” Kai answers nervously
“Pwwt! You’re so funny.” Says the girl laughing
“…” Kai blushes and scratches his head
“Anyway, you’re here to get the Wolf Tooth right??” asks the girl
“Yea, how do you know??” Kai asks surprised
“Because I’m here for it too~ But it seems to be so strong so why don’t we help each other??” the girl suggests in which Kai accepted it immediately
“No problem!”
“So what’s your name??” the girl asks
“Owg, my name is Kai. You??”
“I’m Shibuya” answers the girl

“Team with Kai” says Shibuya
Suddenly a window pops up in front of Kai saying…

Player Shibuya has offer to team up with you.
Do you wish to accept it??
Press one of the following:
Yes or No


Kai press on the Yes icon.
Team formed!
Player Shibuya and Player Kai are now in a Team.
“Okay, now let’s go hunt down those wolfies~” says Shibuya while licking her lower lips which made Kai blush as he thinks that it looks sexy~

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Although it is the first time Kai and Shibuya has cooperated with one another in killing the wolves, their team work was superb!!!
Shibuya will take the initiative and lure in one of the Wolf and since her agility is really high she can get a few slash on the wolf without getting hurt.
And after Shibuya has weakened the Wolf then Kai will give the Wolf its final blow!

Big Wolf dies and dropped 2 Wolf Tooth
Player Shibuya gets 50 Exp
Player Kai gets 50 Exp

They continue the same tactics again and again until they got 10 Wolf Tooth each.
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“Let’s go look for the boss now” says Shibuya
“I think I saw one extremely large one at the right side awhile ago, maybe that’s the Wolf King” says Kai
“Un, let’s go check it out”
At the right side, there was an extremely large Wolf lying on the grass. Seems like it is sleeping.
What made it different from the rest of the wolves is not only its size. It also has some golden furs on it, which made it really beautiful. On the top of its head was ‘Wolf King’.
“That’s the one” says Kai
“Seems like its sleeping, I’ll sneak onto it and we’ll still do the same plan, okay?”
“Count on me” says Kai giving his confidence smile to Shibuya which causes Shibuya to blush a bit.
After that, Shibuya approaches the Wolf King slowly bit by bit. Then when she’s close enough she raise her small dagger and without any further hesitation give the Wolf King a hard slash right on its back.
“ARG!!!” The Wolf King awakens and was really mad and starts to attack Shibuya.
At first, with her speed Shibuya was able to dodge the Wolf King’s attack but slowly the Wolf King’s speed increases and now she’s barely dodging the claws.
“It’s damn fast!!!” says Shibuya in her mind
While Shibuya is thinking of giving the Wolf King one more slash, she didn’t notice the Wolf King’s claw is just inches away from her right side and slash!!!
Wolf King has manages to give her a good hard slash on her right arm.
“Ouch! “ Shibuya cries out.

Player Shibuya -60 hp

Damn! More than half of my hp gone!! One more clean hit and I’m dead!” Shibuya thought to herself
Just when the Wolf King was about to give Shibuya one more blow, Kai who saw it quickly dash and stop the claw with his small sword.
“Are you alright?!” Kai asks worriedly
“Fine but it hurts a lot more than I expected” replies Shibuya
“You rest a bit and think of a way to defeat it, I’ll take care of this stupid Wolf first” says Kai as he lures the Wolf King away from Shibuya.
Kai manages to block each attack with his sword and land some damages on the Wolf King but the hp bar of the Wolf King is still more than half!!!!
What is this wolf’s fur made of?!!! It’s super hard!!!!” exclaims Kai internally.
At first Wolf King and Kai are fighting in the equal level but slowly bit by bit Kai is losing his stamina and is starting to get some damages from the Wolf King, although not getting hit with the big damage skill like Shibuya but still Kai’s hp is starting to lose little by little…
Just when Kai thought that he won’t be able to make it anymore, Shibuya suddenly shouts out…

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #22 on: August 10, 2012, 02:50:58 PM »
NICE! Can't wait to see what happened next =)

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #23 on: August 10, 2012, 03:54:02 PM »
thanks for updating

please update always

more power on your fanfic
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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #24 on: September 07, 2012, 06:19:06 PM »
ahh~ this is good! i can feel like i'm in the game too! it's been a while since i last played MMORPG. u made me wanna play it again. please update moreeee~~  :bow: :bow:
I love FTM. Nuff said.

Offline mayuyuXlyukirinlover13

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #25 on: February 23, 2013, 05:11:49 PM »
Takatomo I sense acchan along the way!

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #26 on: February 23, 2013, 10:27:13 PM »
Tomochin and Kai met up already...Yeah

Great action scene there...

What's going to happen next... can't wait chapter

Anyway, Thank you for the update

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Offline den_takacchan

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #27 on: March 17, 2013, 07:45:15 AM »
waaah . i like this kind of fics. :mon determined: having them on a game ! please update

soon!!!   :mon cute:
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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #28 on: March 17, 2013, 10:03:16 AM »
Oi! Author!

Can you update soon?

I can't wait to know what happened!

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #29 on: May 07, 2013, 04:41:09 PM »
aww, update pls >_<

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #30 on: May 08, 2013, 02:13:45 AM »
Please Update

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #31 on: May 08, 2013, 05:58:50 AM »
This reminds me the game "Fiesta Online" <3 I love that game
Awesome fic <3

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #32 on: June 29, 2013, 06:07:58 PM »
I was looking for a fic to read and saw this. It's really amazing!! Could you please update? Pretty please!!!!!!! I'm dying to know what's going to happen. :inlove:

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #33 on: December 08, 2013, 12:08:58 AM »
Just found this!
Great fic!!!
Please update...and be atsumina onegai~
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #34 on: December 08, 2013, 07:49:46 AM »
TakaTomo www <3
Interesting.
Plz update soon.  :thumbup
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Re: Second Identity - Visual Prince [Chapter 3] FINALLY UPDATED!!! 8/10
« Reply #35 on: December 08, 2013, 11:51:48 PM »
Hmm.. I wonder who is Shibuya in real life?

Fighting Kai and Shibuya

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