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Title: Facts of Fiction [Note!!! (not an update ^^;; )]
Post by: Saikami on December 23, 2006, 03:22:50 AM
||Ah...I've finally decided to write a fic! :D And I, like m'dear cousin, love fantasy. So, of course, this fic will have a fantasy twist to it. I hope you like it, I'm not that great of a writer, but I try! :sweatdrop:||

[Chapter One - The Shadow's Secrets]

“You mortals can be so stupid…” Maki Goto smirked, licking the blood that trickled down her lips as a young man’s lifeless body hit the cold ground. The night was full of mystery, it always was. Even when the moon shines it’s brightest, secrets still hide in the shadows everywhere. Tokyo streets were rather crowded, but Maki knew all too well that nobody saw what she had done, a simple illusion worked just fine for the many people walking by, few mortals knew it, but most of their life was an illusion. And yet another human had fallen for her simple trick, not that she was complaining about it. Actually, the young vampire found it rather amusing. Leaving the body behind for the birds to clean up her mess, she casually walked from the small gravel path from which she seductively lead her prey to. Now that her bloodlust was satisfied, she could head home.

   Reina stretched at her desk, satisfied with what she produced for the time being. A year had gone by since the idea of writing a vampire story popped into her head, which was now the thing she put so much energy into everyday. Of course, her love for writing was kept secret for many reasons. If anyone was to find out, her main excuse was that it ruined her reputation as a ‘yankii’ (which she still claims that she is not one.) Also the fact that she based her main character off of Maki Goto, the woman Reina idolized most, was reason enough to keep it secret. (She uses the word ‘bases’ but more or less she took Maki Goto, name, looks, and all, turned her into a vampire, and threw her into her story.) After all, if anyone read it they would have all rights to make fun of the teenager. To put things simply, she was afraid of what others would think.

Yet, at the moment, she was less concerned about people finding her secret, and more concerned with her grumbling stomach. Once she started to write, she didn’t stop until she was satisfied with what she had written, she did not stop to pick up the phone, take a break, or even eat until she was happy with it. Also, Reina would not stop until she was at the end of a chapter, the idea of just leaving an unfinished chapter hanging without an ending drove the wonky eyed teen insane.

As she stood up, she stretched and cracked various joints in her body starting with her knuckles. She smiled, and hit the “print” button on her laptop screen, soon causing the printer to spit out many pieces of paper.

“Another chapter down.” Reina smiled, walking over to her small kitchen in the corner of the room and opening the fridge door, “What the…?” she questioned, noticing a white box that she did not recall putting in there. She picked it up, something was scribbled on the top of the box with a sharpie marker.

“Reina, I’ve realized that your fridge is always empty, so I figured that I should give you a little lunch. ^_^  - Eri” Reina read out loud. She couldn’t help but to grin at her friends random act of kindness.
   
Her grin grew twice it’s size once she opened the box, yakiniku, her favorite. “I must remember to thank Turtle-san later.” Reina noted. Lately, the two of them had been getting along rather well, which made Reina happy considering every member of Morning Musume seemed to have a best friend, but her.
   
Reina munched on the yakiniku as she sat down on her couch, and turned on the television. As she surfed though the channels occasionally something would catch her eye and she would watch it for a moment or two. Yet nothing seemed to keep her interested for more than five minutes.
   
An hour of channel flipping had gone by, her yakiniku was eaten, and Reina was getting bored. She stood up and threw the box which once held her beloved yakiniku into the burnable trash bin before deciding to spend her last half hour before dance practice in the shower.
   
Lazily, she stood up and walked into the bathroom. She turned the metal knobs, causing hot water to spray from the shower head. Within minutes, Reina was undressed and in the shower. A relaxing sigh escaped her lips as the hot water ran down her skin.


[Yossie’s Room]

   
“…Yeah, so I suggest that you don’t anger her, she is in one of those moods.” Maki warned.
   
“Ah, I highly doubt she’ll do anything stupid.” Yossie said with a light laugh, “After all, everyone knows to keep away from her when she is pissed. It’s just plain common sense.”
   
“Good point, and she has been better with hiding her anger in public.” The ex-Morning Musume member pointed out, “I just don’t want to see any of the members getting hurt.”
   
Yossie smiled, and ruffled Maki’s hair, “Ah, so nice of you to care, but everyone will be alright. No need to worry m‘dear.”
   
“Must you treat me like a little kid, Yocchan?” Maki whined, fixing her hair, “I mean, after all I was in Morning Musume before you were.”
   
“Yes, but I’m still older.” Yossie pointed out, grinning while giving the tip of Maki’s nose a small tap with her index finger.
   
“You’re so difficult…” Maki groaned, standing up, “But I should get going.”
   
Yossie stood up as well, “Ah, yes. I need to as well, they rescheduled dance practice for us, and it’s my job as leader to inform the other members.”
   
“Waiting till last minute to tell them, I see.”
   
“Of course.” The Morning Musume leader flashed another grin, “Oh, and would you mind telling Reina for me? After all, I think she would appreciate it if her idol stopped by.”
   
“Sure, I haven’t seen her in a while anyway.” Maki smiled, walking out of Yossie’s room. She had always thought it was slightly weird that another member in Hello! Project idolized her, but Maki was nonetheless grateful (and slightly proud) about it. After all, Reina was a great girl who had an amazing voice, who wouldn’t be grateful to be idolized by her?
   
As she walked down the halls, she hummed the LOVE Machine tune, for some reason it was stuck in her head a lot lately, and she could not get it out no matter what she tried. Maki stopped at Reina’s door and knocked lightly with a smile.
   
“The door’s unlocked!” Reina shouted from inside her room. With that said, Maki opened the door and stepped inside.
   
“Tanaka-chan? It’s Maki.” She said, looking around the room to find Reina nowhere in sight.
   
“Oh! Hi Goto Senpai!” Reina yelled from behind the closed bathroom door, “I’ll be right out, I just need to change quickly. Make yourself comfortable.”
   
Maki nodded, then realizing that Reina could not see her nodding said “Okay.” and sat down on the bed. The room was overall kept clean, a few articles of clothes hung across a chair, her bed wasn’t made, but it was pretty orderly. One thing did bug her though: Reina’s desk, it was covered in papers and looked horribly unorganized.
   
Maki stood up, and walked over to the desk, starting to sort the papers by simply putting them in small stacks. It was going to drive the soloist nuts if she didn’t do something about it. She admitted, she did have a slight case of O.C.D. so she started to organize things into small piles. Music sheets and dance steps in one pile, schedules in another, but something caught her attention while making the third pile. It was a name. But not just any name. Her name. Her eyes widened as she read the rest of the paper and her jaw dropped slightly.

“How does she know?”



||Heh, I hoped you all liked it. :]||
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on December 23, 2006, 03:29:21 AM
O.O Definately Shatten's style. Revealing it in the first chapter? Maxi x Reina? Reina NAKED? Yes, definately.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 23, 2006, 05:22:56 AM
I love the last line, it made me lol.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on December 23, 2006, 02:41:52 PM
Quote from: Tanachan;265431
O.O Definately Shatten's style. Revealing it in the first chapter? Maxi x Reina? Reina NAKED? Yes, definately.


We're cousins, what did you expect? XD

Nonetheless, can't wait til I see the future chapters XD

Write more. Or I'll bring weaponry.

Seriously.

Since I know where you live >:]
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on December 24, 2006, 08:08:47 AM
Why doesn't it surprize me that you two are cousins.:-P But I will say the same thing I thought to myself when I read Yuuyami's story: I will read one more chapter before I call it "Kick-Ass!!!".
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Drako60 on December 24, 2006, 09:48:03 AM
ahh interesting story, and i love fanasty this should be very interesting.

  Keep up the good work.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on December 24, 2006, 05:05:11 PM
Ohhhh. Vampires? Maki Goto? AND Reina??? How could this story not be awesome???
Title: Comments from Chapter One:
Post by: Saikami on December 30, 2006, 01:02:36 AM
Tanachan: Well what can you expect?

Rei.rev.07: I'm glad you like it. ^__^ Yes. Reina + Maki = :heart:

rndmnwierd: XD Maki definatly wasn't expecting it.

Yuuyami: Damn, you DO know where I live. >_> And the sad part is...I KNOW you have weaponry. I'll try to write as much as I can. :sweatdrop:

glcorps2002: XD well, here's your chapter

Drako60: Thanks. ^^- Ah, fantasy, doesn't everyone love it?

YoukaiChica: Yay, now my ego went up ten points. ^^;; -pops giant head with a safety pin- XD Thanks though.
Title: Chapter Two: Panicking Never Helps
Post by: Saikami on December 30, 2006, 01:07:06 AM
Maki dropped the papers, causing them to scatter across the desk once again unorganized, and back up. She didn’t know what to think, all she knew was that this was bad.
   
What am I supposed to do? Confront Tanaka-chan about it? Like hell I would do that. Maybe she doesn’t really know…Like she is just making it up and it happens to be real? Yeah right…Nobody just comes up with that! Oh God, I’m panicking now! Calm down!
   
“Sorry I took so long.” Reina’s voice interrupted Maki’s thoughts. Maki jumped slightly at it’s suddenness as she turned around to face a smiling Reina.
   
“O-oh, i-it’s okay.” Maki tried to sound calm, fearing that she showed signs of overreacting, wait…That was Niigaki’s thing. So she had nothing to worry about right?
   
Wrong.
   
“You okay, Goto Senpai?” Reina asked, raising an eyebrow. She had never seen her senior stutter before, and it just didn’t seem like something Maki would do.
   
“Yeah, I’m fine.” Maki said coolly, putting her acting skills to the test. She glanced around the room, and then at Reina.
   
She was wearing a dark purple t-shirt that seemed to have something in English written across it and black track pants while a light blue towel was over her wet hair. She seemed like she was getting ready for dance practice, which then reminded Maki why she was there in the first place. All the internal panicking made the girl forget.
   
“Yocchan wanted me to tell you that dance practice tonight is rescheduled to tomorrow morning at eleven.” Maki said, not realizing that she was speaking extremely fast.
   
Reina blinked for a moment, but nodded. “Okay, figures she would tell us ten minutes before it was rescheduled.”
   
“Heh, yeah. That’s Yocchan for you.” Maki made up her mind, confrontation time. “Erm…That stor--”
   
“Hi Tanaka-chan!” Eri said bubbly as she walked into Reina’s room, “Oh, hi Goto Senpai, I didn’t know you were here.” She glanced at Maki up and down for a moment, still smiling, “And I see your boobs have gotten bigger too.”
   
“Ah, hello Kamei-san,” Maki said after taking a deep breath, “Erm…Thanks? But actually, I was just leaving.”
   
“But Goto Senpai…” Reina stopped Maki from leaving by grabbing her hand, “What were you about to say?” Maki froze at Reina’s words.
   
Damnit, I need to think of something.
   
“Erm…That…Stor…Store down the street.” Maki said, pausing for a moment, “The new restaurant with the store on the second floor. I was wondering if you would maybe like to check it out sometime with me?”
   
Reina formed a rather large smile upon her face, “Of course, Goto Senpai.” she said. Her idol just asked if she wanted to hang out, something which made Reina so happy that as she spoke her accent came out slightly. “So, what time is good?”
   
“This Friday? Eight?” Maki asked, smiling back.
   
“Yeah, that’s cool.” Reina tried to hide her excitement, but of course wasn’t as great as an actor as Maki.
   
“You know you’re still holding her hand, right?” Eri whispered into Reina’s ear, giggling slightly.
   
With that said, Reina immediately let go of her senior’s hand, her face turning slightly pink.
   
Although Maki was panicking internally, she couldn’t help but to grin at the tough yankii of Morning Musume blush over something as simple as that.
   
“Well, I should get going.” Maki finally said with a nod, walking towards the door, “See you then.”
   
“See ya.” Reina said with a nod in return, watching Maki close the door.
   
“Wow.” Eri said, “You got asked out on a date by The Maki Goto!”
   
“Shut-up. It’s not a date.” Reina responded defensively, but still was grinning.
   
“Ah, then why are you grinning like an idiot?” Eri teased, which was replied by a small punch in the arm.


[In the Hallway]


   
Maki practically ran down the halls, and almost passed her destination. With a sudden stop, she knocked on the door, almost too loud and opened it before a chance for the other to answer.
   
“Wake up!” Maki snapped pulling the pillow from under the sleeping girl’s head.
   
“Eh…?” the groggy girl asked, rubbing the new wound from which was caused from hitting her head off the headboard when her pillow suddenly disappeared. “Wha’ was that for…?”
   
“Somebody knows!” Maki said, “What the hell am I supposed to do?”
   
“Hmm? You could get me a drink.” The girl didn’t seem to care at the moment, considering she was half asleep and not listening to the panicking soloist beside her bed.
   
“Fine.” Maki growled, grabbing a bottled water from the fridge. By the time she got back, the other was once again asleep. So what did Maki do?
   
Pour the ice cold water on the girl of course.
   
“Wake up you lazy ass!”
   
BAM
   
Miki Fujimoto head butted Maki’s stomach, she was in a bad enough mood as it was. She didn’t need this to add to it.
   
“At least you’re awake.” Maki said, holding her stomach but was grinning all the same, “Figured you could do better than that, even if you were half asleep.”
   
“Go to hell.” Miki growled, grabbing a towel and started to dry herself off. “So what do you want anyway?”
   
“Tanaka-chan.”
   
“What about her?”
   
“She knows about me.”
   
At that point, Miki started to laugh. “Her?” she asked, “Yeah okay, next time you wake me up it better be a good reason. You should be able to take care of her yourself without any help.”
   
“If she was a normal person, fine. But she is a Japanese idol for God’s sake! I can’t go and drain her and get away with it!”
   
“Ah, I see someone is chicken.” Miki replied flatly, “How did she find out anyway? The girl is barely social with anyone, including you. You must of screwed up pretty badly.”
   
“I didn’t do anything!” Maki snapped, “I was in her room waiting for her to come out of the shower and---”
   
“So she was in the shower when it all happened?” Miki smirked.
   
“Just listen you pervert!” Maki punched Miki’s arm, which was quickly returned twice as hard, “And I noticed that her desk was unorganized so--”
   
“So you, being the OCD freak you are, decided to clean it, right?”
   
“Yes, and yes. I know: I’m gay and anal so everything has to be perfect when it comes to that stuff.”
   
“I love that sentence because you just used the terms gay and anal together without referring to sex.”
   
“Will you stop interrupting me!?”
   
After a few minutes, and much interrupting, Maki finally got the story out. Yet, all that she gained from that was very annoying headache and Miki laughing her ass off.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on December 30, 2006, 01:10:40 AM
-puts sharp objects away-

-DIES of laughter-

God I love Miki here XD~!

I expected a slightly more serious reaction from her, but oh well, Miki is Miki <3~!

Write moooore~! <3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Aioros on December 30, 2006, 01:36:34 AM
Another masterpiece in the making.:bow:

I wanted to drop a comment for this a long time ago but the chappy internet connection prevented me from doing so.

Quote from: Saikami
“I love that sentence because you just used the terms gay and anal without referring to sex.”


Miki at her finest :lol: XD


Keep it up! :thumbsup
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on December 30, 2006, 01:51:09 AM
Quote
“Yes, and yes. I know: I’m gay and anal so everything has to be perfect when it comes to that stuff.”

“I love that sentence because you just used the terms gay and anal without referring to sex.”

“Will you stop interrupting me!?”
HOT DAMN!!! XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on December 30, 2006, 06:49:10 AM
Lolol
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on December 30, 2006, 11:02:43 AM
...  Violent Miki and silly Miki. Ohhh yeaaaah.

The last paragraph and line of the first chapter really got me! I thougth the italic part of the first paragraph was what Maki was really doing and the plot didn't catch me. but after reading onwards, i see something good  comin'!

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on December 30, 2006, 12:49:25 PM
I officially dub this fanfic.... KICK-ASS:ONcool1:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on December 30, 2006, 07:26:55 PM
This story is rad as heck! It's another unique idea just like your cousin's ^.^ Creativity must run in the family. Double radness for vampires...mwhahahahaha. *is a Vampire fan*

Chapter 2 was hilarious...the Maki and Miki scene had me cracking up XD

I want moreeeeee....please...^_^
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on December 30, 2006, 09:26:57 PM
Oh, yum! Vampire Maki! Haha, this reminds me of that movie with Will Ferrel. Except a hell of a whole lot more interesting!

Obligatory Miki love. :heart:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on December 31, 2006, 04:04:02 AM
OMG! LOVE IT! And I know you're gonna smack me for caps, but who cares?

YOU ARE A GODDESS

And the same as everyone else, I love they Gay and Anal moment XDXD

*plops down with popcorn and drink and waits for more*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on December 31, 2006, 07:44:30 PM
This is such an incrediably amazing stroy!! Even if it is only 2 chapters long. But it'll get longer, right?? RIGHT?!?!?! RIGHT!!! Continue please. I BEG OF YOU!!
Title: Comments from Chapter Two
Post by: Saikami on December 31, 2006, 11:08:11 PM
Yuuyami: -brings back to life- XD Yes, Miki is Miki, we never know what to get her.

Wordsworth: Ah thank you. ^__^ Crappy internet connection eh? Hope it gets fixed. :D A lot of people seem to like that line too. XD

JFC: XD Yes indeed.

rndmnwierd: Ah, I have no clue how to reply to that. :sweatdrop:

Owaranai_sLaVe: I'm glad you like it. ^^-

glcorps2002: YAY! XD It's nice to know that my fic is "KICK-ASS"

Rei.rev.07: Yeah, they're kinda like siblings. XD Hate eachother, but are forced to like oneanother.

KrazyForKamei: Vampires = :heart:

black velvet: I have no clue what movie you're talking about but okay! XD Thanks.

Tanachan: -smacks silly- So if I'm a goddess, bow down you mere motal and kiss my feet! XD

YoukaiChica: Yes, more is here! XD Don't have a panic attack please.
Title: Poor, Poor Maki
Post by: Saikami on December 31, 2006, 11:09:52 PM
“That’s the stupidest thing I have ever heard come from your mouth.” Miki said after she finally stopped laughing.

Maki sighed, “It might be stupid, but it’s damn true.”

“Okay, okay.” Miki said, laying down on the dry side of her bed. “Well, I would like to see this story thing of hers…Did she seriously write a fanfic about you?” Miki coughed to hide her laugh.

“Yes, she did.” Maki said, still not sure what to think about that, “And how? Break into her room?”

“Of course.” Miki said as if there was no more explaining to it.

“Are you nuts? Just break into her room, that’s a great idea.” Maki said, a sarcastic tone lingering with her words.

“Tomorrow, while we’re at dance practice. You have the day off, just go in then. She always has her door unlocked, so it shouldn’t be a problem.” Miki said, sitting back up.

[Reina’s Room]

“Are you serious?” Reina asked, her eyes widened slightly, “That’s creepy!”

“Yeah! I swear it’s true!” Eri said, nodding.

“Wow, for now on, I’m locking my door.”

[Miki’s Room]

Maki thought for a moment. “Fine. Sneak in, photocopy the papers, get out.”

“I like it. Simple, easy to remember.” Miki said, quoting her new favorite foreign film.

“Yes, very.” Maki said, standing up and stretching. “And don’t talk to her about it or suck her dry or I’ll kill you.”

“Yup yup. Don’t suck her dry until after your date with her, right?”

Maki rolled her eyes, “It’s not a date. But, I’m out of here before I choose to seriously hurt you.” she said simply and walked out the door.

“You know I could kick your ass!” Miki called out as Maki shut the door.

“Ugh, that girl.” Maki groaned, walking down the hall.

Soon enough, she was out of the Morning Musume apartments and walking through a nearby park, her little shortcut to her own apartment. With dark sunglasses and a hat on, she was glad that nobody would recognize her, the last thing she wanted tonight was attention.

The idea of Reina knowing her secret ruined her appetite for the night, the fresh air was rather nice though.

Your date is in two days, you should go out and buy something sexy.

Maki blinked for a moment, and shook her head.

You know you want to…

Maki rolled her eyes at this.

Get out of my head, you’re bad enough in person, Miki. And why the hell you do want me to buy sexy clothes!?

Miki’s evil little laugh echoed through Maki’s head.

Ah, but you just told me to go away, so sucks for you.

With that, the voice left Maki’s mind, which caused her to curse out loud.

“She is so friggin’ difficult and perverted!” the soloist growled, unlocking her apartment door and walking in. She kicked her shoes off and soon made her way to the couch with a bowl of chocolate ice cream.

[Many Bowls of Ice Cream Later]

Maki felt her eyes grow heavy and she found herself re-reading the same line for the sixth time in the book she had. Yet she didn’t remember any of the things she read thanks to a certain wonky-eyed teenager making Maki worry her head off. Finally, she gave up and decided that sleep was a better option.

She slipped off her jeans and practically collapsed into her bed and pulling the covers over herself.

I should get some sleep, if I lose sleep now I’ll look terrible on Friday for my date-- What the hell!? Damnit Miki! You even got me thinking it’s a date!

After a few minutes of mentally fighting with herself, Maki fell asleep, hoping tomorrow would be a better day.

[The Next Morning]

That buzzing was going to drive her nuts, but Maki was far too tired to move her hand a whole five inches to turn it off.

Buzz. Buzz. Buzz.

“God damnit!” Maki slammed down on the alarm clock, causing it to make a weird noise before complete silence. She sat up, and looked over at what was left of her clock. The red numbers glared “10:55”

Wow, did I really ignore my alarm clock for almost an hour?

She rolled out of bed, and eventually was decent and walking out the door. (More or less, she was running considering she was having a late start for her little “Break into an Idol’s Room” plan.)

Playing a part in Pinch Runner came in handy at times like these, she bolted from her apartment to the Morning Musume apartments in a record time of three minutes, and it was a fifteen minute jog there. Although she was out of breath, Maki was back on schedule.

“You have to be shittin’ me…” Maki said, glaring at the elevator door which had a paper reading “Out of order.” across it. “I just ran the whole friggin’ way here, and now I have to climb four flights of stairs?”

And so Maki climbed the four flights of stairs, complaining the entire time to herself, but she still did it.

“Okay, nothing can go wrong from here.” Maki said, taking in a deep breath as she stopped at Reina’s door. She put her hand on the handle, starting to turn it.

Locked.

“What the hell!?” Maki yelled in frustration, then realizing that she shouldn’t be yelling at a time like this.

She let out a very stressed sigh, “Well, only one thing to do.” she said to herself, walking down the dreaded stairs.

She walked outside and around to the side of the building. “Okay, this shouldn’t be so hard.” She looked up, finding the window that lead to Reina’s room. “Damn…That’s really high.” She climbed up onto the set of emergency stairs and while clinging to the railing for her life, she walked up to Reina’s window and opened it. Yet, for some unknown reason, which Maki believes to be the gods revenging her for stealing lunch money from kids in fourth grade, the window only opened up half way. It wouldn’t budge any more than that.

Maki wanted to yell many things an idol should not yell as she tried to fit through that window, yet her upper body was stuck, thanks to the area many perverts loved on Maki Goto so damn much.

A good ten minutes passed before she managed to squeeze herself through the small window and send herself  face first into the floor.

“Ouch…” Maki groaned as she stood up, rubbing her nose. “At least I got in here…”

She looked around the room, and quickly walked over to Reina’s laptop and desk. “Where did all the papers go?” She sighed, realizing that she did not have enough time to search “It’ll take way too long to find all this, she might not notice if I just print it here, right?”

She opened up Reina’s laptop and turned it on, once the welcome screen popped up, so did a box asking for a password.

“Damnit…” Maki growled, “Hmm…Okay we’ll start off simple: Tanaka Reina.”

Wrong.

“11111989?”

Wrong.

“Why isn’t there a hint box? Erm…Purple Kittens?”

Wrong.

A good forty-five minutes passed before she got it right, which she was amazed enough she did before throwing the computer out the window.

“Of course it was Yakiniku…” Maki mumbled to herself as she opened searched Reina’s computer for the story.

“Okay, search: all files and folders. Keyword: Maki Goto.” Maki said as she typed, for some reason she had a weird knack of saying what she was typing. “Enter.”

“…”

After sorting out what wasn’t the story and just pictures or videos and commenting on Reina’s good taste in what pictures she had of Maki on her computer, she finally found it.

“…”

“Holy hell! Forty-eight chapters!? God…Better start printing now.” She pressed print and papers were starting to print from the small printer on the floor.

Maki sat back in the chair and put her hands behind her head. All was finally starting to work out according to plan.

Ah, just minutes away from everything being printed off and then I can shove the stack of paper up Miki’s ass and prove to her I wasn’t being stupid.

The last paper printed and Maki picked up the stack, “Now just to get out of --”

The door unlocked and someone was coming in.

Oh gahh!  Maki closed the laptop and ran to the closest hiding spot: Reina’s closet. Did two hours seriously pass already!?

Reina walked into her room, “Ugh, I hate dance practices so early…I could still be sleeping.”

She plopped down on her computer chair and opened up her laptop, “Hmm…I thought I shut it down. Wow, shows how much I pay attention.”

Maki shifted so she was now sitting in a more comfortable position, she had a feeling that it would be a while before she had a chance to leave.

An hour passed by, and Reina rested her head on her desk, “I just don’t know what I should put for it…” she mumbled to herself, unaware that Maki was listening. “Just having it be a normal climbing accident would make it seem unreal in her case…But what should I put? Damnit, I hate writers block.”

Maki blinked as she pulled her knees to her chest, recalling that accident. So she was making it all up from her mind…

Reina stood up and walked over to her dresser, pulling out a pair of pajamas. Maki was grateful that Reina didn’t keep her clothes in her closet.

As Reina dressed, Maki turned her head away…But found herself looking through the corner of her eye.

Goto! What the hell are you thinking!?

Maki mentally kicked herself and looked away once again.

A tune started to play from Reina’s jeans on the floor, Maki recognized it as a Flame song, yet she didn’t know which one. Maki looked once again.

Reina picked up the cell phone and placed her pajamas on her bed, “Hello? …What do you want? …Oh just shut-up.” Reina sounded horribly annoyed, “…Fujimoto, I have no clue how you found out about Friday, and if you say the anything on the lines of “Reina, you should go out shopping for something sexy” I’ll kill you.”

Maki made a mental note to smack Miki next time she saw her, but then continued to listen.
Reina paused for a moment, and her free hand was clenched.

Wow, Reina can look like she could kick anyone‘s ass when she is pissed like that…Even if she is in her bra and panties.

“No, I don’t care that you’re my sub-leader!” Reina growled, “…You have no rights to be butting into my personal life!”

Maki nodded even though she knew Reina couldn‘t see her. Miki did sometimes love to place herself into other peoples business.

Apparently Reina and Miki got into some form of an argument about “respecting your superiors” and the phone call lasted a good hour before Reina hung up on the sub-leader.

“That girl is difficult and perverted…” Reina mumbled, starting to change into her pajamas again.

Maki let out a quiet sigh, at this moment, all she wanted to do was get out of here. She rested her head on her knees and closed her eyes.

****************************************************************************

Maki lifted her head, realizing she had fallen asleep.

How long have I been asleep for? Minutes? Hours?

She peered out the closet door, everything was dark. She must of slept a while. Slowly, making sure that she made no noise, she peeked her head out of the door to see Reina’s bed.

A lump was under neither the covers, hopefully asleep. Maki slowly walked out of the closet, making as little noise as possible.

Before she walked out of Reina’s room, she slowly crept over to her bed. For some weird reason, she just wanted to see Reina.

Reina was laying peacefully in bed, her hair was down and slightly messy, she was laying on her side and Maki thought she looked simply beautiful with the moon’s light reflecting on her skin.

Maki set the papers on Reina’s bedside table carefully, and just sat on the edge of the bed. She smiled, the girl looked so peaceful while she was sleeping, it was almost contagious because Maki seemed to grow calm as well. She pushed aside Reina’s bangs and lightly kissed her forehead before starting to get up.

Yet something stopped her.

Maki found herself being held around the waist by Reina, who was still sleeping, as if she was a giant teddy bear. Maki tried to pry herself away, but ended up laying in the bed next to Reina somehow. From that moment on, Maki would never underestimate the strength of a sleeping girl again.

What the hell am I supposed to do?

It was rather comfortable though. Maki figured if she just stayed put for a moment or two, Reina would eventually let go. She closed her eyes for a second before she heard realized that she was pulled slightly closer to Reina.

Maki smiled. I wish I could capture this picture.

“Maki-san…” Reina mumbled lightly in her sleep, which automatically caught Maki’s attention, but before she could think more on the subject she felt Reina’s lips lightly, barely press against her own for just a brief moment.

Maki blushed and felt Reina’s hug loosen, Maki had her chance to leave. Yet, almost had to force herself up. She didn’t want to leave this peaceful zone, something made her want to stay with Reina.

After getting out of the bed, Maki felt rather cold. She quietly grabbed the papers and walked out of the room.

“Sweet dreams.” Maki whispered before closing the door behind her.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on December 31, 2006, 11:14:09 PM
AWWWWWWWWWW~!

The last moment turned my insides into pure sugar <3

Jee, I wonder how Maki's going to feel the next time she sees Reina >:]

Write more m'dear cousin~!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on January 01, 2007, 12:11:25 AM
Ooooo! Sleep Hugging. I remember a good moment of that in my life that made me smack my brother. Freakin' great story. Maki falling asleep everywhere, and beating the crap out of her alarm clock ^^
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Pepto Bismol on January 01, 2007, 01:33:18 AM
This is getting really good, good job
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 01, 2007, 06:16:45 AM
Lol, not many people really know what to say to something like that. Sweet chapter, Maki/Reina grew on me with Yuuyami's fic, you're just elevating it upwards.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Aioros on January 01, 2007, 06:35:14 AM
Miki calling Reina when she was in her undies. Talk about great timing! :ONkekeke:

How does Miki know about Maki's secret? Is she *gasp* one too? :ONstoned:

Quote from: Saikami
Maki set the papers on Reina’s bedside table carefully, and just sat on the edge of the bed. She smiled, the girl looked so peaceful while she was sleeping, it was almost contagious because Maki seemed to grow calm as well. She pushed aside Reina’s bangs and lightly kissed her forehead before starting to get up.

Yet something stopped her.

Maki found herself being held around the waste by Reina, who was still sleeping, as if she was a giant teddy bear. Maki tried to pry herself away, but ended up laying in the bed next to Reina somehow. From that moment on, Maki would never underestimate the strength of a sleeping girl again.

What the hell am I supposed to do?

It was rather comfortable though. Maki figured if she just stayed put for a moment or two, Reina would eventually let go. She closed her eyes for a second before she heard realized that she was pulled slightly closer to Reina.

Maki smiled. I wish I could capture this picture.


SWEET!!!:ONfarofflook:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on January 01, 2007, 08:52:07 AM
Damn, that last bit made me need a dentist. :)

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Maki wanted to yell many things an idol should not yell as she tried to fit through that window, yet her upper body was stuck, thanks to the area many perverts loved on Maki Goto so damn much.
I say again...HOT DAMN! :lol:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on January 01, 2007, 11:09:18 AM
Ok, I'll let myself be sappy now: That description you gave of Reina sleeping was very well done. Very beautiful. Everything after it was both lovely and sexy. Sappy mode off!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on January 01, 2007, 05:33:02 PM
Ah, the movie I was referring to isn't even released yet or anything, but I remember seeing a preview at the theatre a few weeks ago . . . ^^; I can't even remember the name of it, but this woman writes about his real life, and whatever she writes, he has to do it. It sort of reminded me of this, since Reina is writing real events, but is unaware of it. xD

I'm assuming Miki is a vampire, too? Cool! Also, the cuddle scene was excellent!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on January 02, 2007, 05:54:46 PM
That was the best damn chapter ever!!!!! I laughed so hard. I started giggling to myself and my friends thought I was going crazy! I love how it started out and I absolutely LOVE Maki and her adventures. But the last little bit made me melt. So amazing. I'm still in awe and I read a day ago....
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Sukoshi on January 03, 2007, 09:01:09 AM
Quote from: black velvet;272013
Ah, the movie I was referring to isn't even released yet or anything, but I remember seeing a preview at the theatre a few weeks ago . . . ^^; I can't even remember the name of it, but this woman writes about his real life, and whatever she writes, he has to do it. It sort of reminded me of this, since Reina is writing real events, but is unaware of it. xD


Ah I remember seeing the trailer for that movie too!  LOL let's just hope that Reina isn't trying to kill off the main character then XD

and wah Miki's a vamp too!  Maki should have just used her telekinesis powers and asked Miki to cause a diversion so Maki could leave but then again we all know Maki didn't really want to leave ;)

anyways I'm have fun reading this so can't wait for more :D
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on January 04, 2007, 02:25:11 AM
The movie you guys are talking about is "Stranger Than Fiction" ^_^ I wanna see this!

Anyway, I really laughed at Miki being able to use telepathy with MAki... this totally makes me think Miki is a vampire, haha. XD I love Miki's advice... because thats exactly the advice me and my friends use!

Write a chapter soon~ "You know you want to…" :D

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on January 04, 2007, 02:34:56 AM
Were they actually communicating telepathically, or was Maki just doing a "what would Miki say" type thing?
Title: Comments for Chapter Three
Post by: Saikami on January 05, 2007, 01:21:54 AM
Yuuyami: Mmm, sugary insides. Yummy XD

Rei.rev.07: XD Sorry for the long wait!

Tanachan: Yup, gotta love abusing an alarmclock <3

Pepto Bismol: Thank you. ^^-

rndmnwierd: ReinaxMaki = :heart:

wordsworth: It's Miki, of course she has timing like that. XD And yup, Miki's one too. :D

JFC: XD hawt damn it is then. Oh, and Maki and Miki were talking telepathically.

glcorps2002: aww, your sappy mode was nice ^^-

black velvet: I'll have to check out that movie some time ^^;; Ah yes, I loved the cuddle scene too <3

YoukaiChica: I'm really glad you liked it so much. :D

Sukoshi: Ah, another hears about the movie. And of course Maki didn't want her to. ;D But another reason is told in this chapter. :D

Owaranai_sLaVe: Yay -searches for the movie- thanks :D And that's how my friends are too. ^^- basically thats where I get a lot of ideas.
Title: Chapter Four: Preparation
Post by: Saikami on January 05, 2007, 01:25:17 AM
When Maki reached Miki’s room, the Groping Devil was sleeping soundly. Maki didn’t dare wake her up, God forbid waking Miki up twice in the same day. It was suicide. So, Maki simply stuck a pink sticky note to Miki’s forehead, explaining that she was going to stop by Friday morning to tell her everything. (She had work the next day.)

[Friday Morning]

Maki slowly got up and walked into her bathroom, starting to brush her teeth. She looked in the mirror and noticed a small spot of dried blood from the side of her mouth.

“Ah, missed a spot.” she said, wiping it away with a wet cloth, “I guess I was so tired when I got home I barely cared to clean up.”

Just as Maki finished brushing her hair, her cell phone ran. “Most likely Miki wondering where the hell I am…” Maki mumbled, picking up her phone.

“Hello?”

“Hi Goto Senpai. Might I ask, what were you doing two nights ago?” To Maki’s surprise, it wasn’t Miki on the other line, but Eri.

“Erm, just at my apartment. Why? And umm…How’d you get this number?”

“I have everyone’s number in Hello! Project, that’s all.” Eri replied cheerfully, “Well, I was just wondering, because I had this weird dream two nights ago that you snuck into Reina-chan’s room and almost got caught but hid in her closet until she fell asleep. I just figured I should make sure it didn’t really happen or anything. I was going to call yesterday, but you had work.”

Maki’s eyes widened, “Ah…You’re so weird Kamei-san.” Maki laughed nervously, “Why on Earth would I do that?”

“I have no clue actually.” Eri said, “Well, that’s all I really wanted to ask. I have to go now. Bye bye Goto Senpai!”  With that, the random turtle hung up.

Maki let out a sigh, “That was messed up beyond all hell.”

[Miki’s Room Later that Day]

“You were stuck…in her closet?” Miki snorted, “Wow, you have been really pathetic lately. Why didn’t you just make an illusion?”

Damnit…I didn’t think of that.

“I didn’t want to risk it. If she can write all this, then why couldn’t she be able to see through an illusion?” Maki pointed out, trying to avoid more embarrassment. She didn’t even dare tell Miki about the kiss.

Although, it had been on her mind all day. Their lips barely touched, yet Maki was going nuts about it.

“Maki-san…” Reina mumbled lightly in her sleep, which automatically caught Maki’s attention, but before she could think more on the subject she felt Reina’s lips lightly, barely press against her own for just a brief moment.

And Reina also said her name right before they kissed, did that mean she liked her? Maki didn’t know what to think. She didn’t hate the kiss, not in the least bit. But was it only because of the fact that she was so shocked about the whole thing and is now confused and actually thinking that she enjoyed the moment? Maki wasn’t a rare name, Reina could of meant anyone when she said the name, not just her.

“Then why didn’t you contact me telepathically, I could of helped.” Miki pointed out, interrupting Maki’s thoughts.

“Yeah, like you would help me. The most you would do was make fun of me and drive me nuts.” Maki replied flatly.

“So? I would of come to your rescue eventually.” Miki said, scanning over the papers again. “Well, she must know something. Everything here is pretty accurate.”

“Not pretty accurate, completely accurate. Everything there is completely true down to the last hair.” Maki sighed, “Not a bit of false information. And I know she is making it up, or at least thinks she is making it up.”

“So she doesn’t know about us at all? Nor our world?”

“I don’t think so.”

“Well then, we’ll just keep it cool and act like everything is okay unless we find out that she does really know.” Miki said, leaning back on her couch.

“Sounds like a good enough plan.” Maki said, standing up, “Now off to go shopping.”

“Have fun. Don’t suffocate anyone with your boobs. And remember, get something sexy!”

Maki threw one of Miki’s shoes at her on her way out the door.

[Reina’s Room at 7:14 PM]

“It’s a five star restaurant?!” Reina exclaimed, her mouth hung open at her friend’s words.

Figures it would be the new five friggin’ star restaurant that I’ve never heard of!

Eri laughed, and put her hand under Reina’s chin, closing her mouth for her. “What, you didn’t know? It’s just opened about a week ago and it’s really nice!”

By the time Eri finished her sentence, the wonky teen was already searching through her drawers. “What the hell am I supposed to wear then?!” Reina threw every article of clothing she had onto the floor, “I don’t have anything nice enough to wear to a place like that!”

Eri carefully removed a pair of black panties with dark purple skulls on them from her head and dropped them on the floor. “Don’t worry about it--”

“How can I NOT worry!?”

Eri grabbed her backpack that she brought along, “Because I know you too well.” she said with a smile, “And I figured that you wouldn’t have something, so I got a dress for you.” she tossed over a dress.

“Eri-chan, you’re a life saver.” Reina said, looking at the dress with a relieved smile. “I’ll be right back, let me try it on.” She walked into the bathroom, soon returning after a few minutes.

“Wow…This sure is something.” Reina said, looking into the mirror. Dark purple always looked great on Reina, considering she wore it all the time, and the dress fit her perfectly. Held up by the spaghetti straps that hung off her shoulders, the dress lightly flowed down her body, tight at the top, and nicely loose from her waist down. It ended at her shins but had a slit in it on her left side ending at the middle of her thigh. It showed off her bare back and her legs quite a bit, which made Reina wonder if Eri had a secret side of her that was horribly good at choosing sexy clothing.

“Ah, it was nothing.” Eri said with a nod, “It’s what friends are supposed to do.”

“But I don’t have any shoes to go with this…” Reina thought out loud.

“Figured that too.” Eri said with a laugh, holding up a pair of black heels with thin straps that went up the wearer’s legs.

Reina laughed, slightly embarrassed, “Well, you know me too well.” She took the shoes and slipped a foot into one.

Although it took several minutes to get the shoes on correctly, they looked great with the dress. Reina turned around in the mirror, “Should I do something with my hair?”

Eri gave her a grin, “Why should you?” she said, “I thought you said it wasn’t a date.”

“It’s not. But that doesn’t mean I can’t look nice.”

“Okay, okay. Whatever works for you.”  she replied, walking over to the door. “I have to go though, promised I’d hang out with Sayu. Good luck.” Eri gave a thumbs up and walked out.

Reina smiled, and walked into her bathroom. “Okay, a half hour ‘till she gets here.” she said, pulling down her hair down.

Man…I sound like I’m desperate…

That half hour went by rather quickly for Reina. Who simply decided to keep her hair down. She sat on her couch, just waiting for Maki. Each second going dreadfully slow.

Finally, a knock was heard from the door. Reina sat up, and almost ran to the door and opened it.

She looks so…Beautiful.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on January 05, 2007, 01:36:04 AM
"dark black" -giggles-

Anywho, love Reina's franticness, and Eri's secret sense of sexy clothing xD~!

Can't wait to see how this 'date' goes >:]
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Aioros on January 05, 2007, 02:10:05 AM
Eri's a psychic!:ONstoned:

And Maki can make illusions!:ONstoned:

Quote from: Saikami
Eri carefully removed a pair of black panties with dark purple skulls on them from her head and dropped them on the floor. “Don’t worry about it--”

Reina has to wear this on her next PB :w00t:
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Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on January 05, 2007, 03:27:52 AM
Eri is really wierd and suspicious . . . but, I'll forgive her for her cuteness and sexy taste! Rawr! I'm really looking foward to this, er, dinner they're having. (Okay, I'm calling it a date!)

slave: Thanks for clearing up the title! :D Looks like Sukoshi knew what I was talking about as well . . . I didn't know if anyone had heard of it, as I haven't seen a lot of advertising, really.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on January 05, 2007, 03:43:22 AM
Quote
“Then why didn’t you contact me telepathically, I could of helped.” Miki pointed out, interrupting Maki’s thoughts.

“Yeah, like you would help me. The most you would do was make fun of me and drive me nuts.” Maki replied flatly.

“So? I would of come to your rescue eventually.” Miki said
I loved this part. XD XD XD

And wtf Eri's psychic and doesn't realize it? :o
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Snoopy on January 05, 2007, 03:51:25 AM
like the whole vampire plot line
and lmao at the interaction that
maki and miki share
and aww at the sweetness between maki and reina
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 05, 2007, 04:05:13 AM
Eri has erien powers, who knew? Pink sticky note, lol. Continue please.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on January 05, 2007, 11:05:33 AM
Wat is Maki wearing?? I MUST KNOW!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on January 05, 2007, 03:47:41 PM
Hmmmm. What IS Maki wearing?? And how did Eri find out about Maki's little closet experience? So many questions....
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: jafeijai on January 05, 2007, 04:29:55 PM
DAMN~! that description of Reina's dress was sekushi! :D And just like everyone else is wondering, what IS Maki wearing?!

Hmm...Eri with her psychic dreams..maybe she's a vampire but doesn't know it yet? o.O Huge stretch though..unless [gasp] that Eri is a super-entity that has psychic powers and and...[imagination goes wild]!! XD

Anyways, great chapter again..I was lurking before, but couldn't resist not commenting this time. XD
Title: Comments on Chapter Four
Post by: Saikami on January 13, 2007, 04:14:06 PM
Yuuyami: Gimme a break. :sweatdrop: One mistake and you're on it like that. XD Oh well, it's a good thing you point out that stuff to me anyway. :ROFL

Rei.rev.07: Ah thank you. ^__^ Sorry I made you wait so long, I was sick. But I'll try to write the next chapter super quick to make up lost time! XD It took me forever to describe Reina's dress, I'm not the best when it comes to dress terms. :sweatdrop: I got help. But it seems to of turned out nice!

wordsworth: Ah yes, I would love to see her wear those too in her next PB. :drool: :ONsweat: I shouldn't be thinking like that. -thinks like that anyway-

black velvet: Yes, Eri is so cute with her randomness and good choice of sexy clothing. :heart:

JFC: Ah, I loved that part too. :heart: And who knows, maybe she is psychic. :ONkekeke:

Snoopy: Glad you like it. ^^-

rndmnwierd: Sticky notes = <3

Ame-kun: You'll know now. XD

YoukaiChica: Your questions will be answered eventually. XD

jafeijai: Yay! I'm glad you commented. Thank you. ^^-
Title: Chapter Five: Maki's a WHAT!?
Post by: Saikami on January 13, 2007, 04:15:26 PM
[Author's note: Gomen for taking so long on this chapter, I was sick. :ONsad:]




Reina couldn’t keep her eyes off Maki, at least until she realized she wasn’t even blinking.

Maki’s dress was a blood red halter top, the collar was loose and happened to show off her cleavage quite a bit. (Reina happened to notice that first.) It flowed down to her ankles, and like Reina’s dress, had slits in it. But hers were almost up her entire leg. Her heels made her slightly taller, but not much. A small scarf that matched the fabric of her dress was around her neck and fell down to her stomach.

No…More than beautiful, she looks damn sexy!

Reina mentally kicked herself for thinking such ways.

“Hi.” Maki finally spoke, realizing the silence was awkward.

“Hi.” Reina replied, “Umm…So, ready?”

Way awkward…

“Yeah.” Maki said, smiling lightly as she nodded.

“Okay.” Reina closed the door behind her, and the two walked down the hall.

“So…What’ve you been up to lately?” Maki asked, the silence killing her.

“Nothing really,” Reina replied, looking at Maki, “How about you?”

“Ah, same. I’ve had a few difficulties lately on finding out some information, but in the end I got it.” she smiled, opening the door for Reina as they stepped outside.

[In the Restaurant]

“Oh, and no garlic please.” Maki said to the waiter with a smile as he took their orders.

Reina looked around, Italian music played softly in the background and the place was nicely decorated to seem like a real restaurant in Italy.

“I’m glad you like it.” Maki said with a smile as she took a sip of wine.

Reina nodded, “It’s really cool.” she said, looking back at Maki and returning the smile, “Thank you so much for this, it’s amazing.

“It’s no problem.” Maki replied, looking around the room after noticing that Reina was again.

“I love the lighting, with how the room is painted, it almost seems like…An artificial heaven. It seems so real, yet you can‘t reach it…” Reina said.

“Artificial heaven, eh?” Maki asked, raising an eyebrow, “Many things are like that, they seem so close, yet reality is keeping you from them. You know what? You seem like you would be a great writer with a mind like that.”

Reina flustered and panicking internally slightly, “Umm…Really?” she asked, not looking at Maki.

She looks cute when nervous.

Maki nodded, smiling. This was nice, relaxing and she was enjoying herself too. Maki shifted her legs slightly, accidentally brushing Reina’s leg against her own. Her stomach jumped and she blushed, it was the same feeling she got when Reina had kissed her that night. Is this feeling going to happen every time they touch? Maki prayed not, it would drive her insane and she would feel the need to shove Reina against the wall and ravage her.

Maki mentally kicked herself for that thought.

She glanced over at Reina, who was also slightly red.

…It actually didn’t seem like a bad idea.

Another mental kick.

“So, how’s work been?” Reina asked, bringing Maki back to reality from what might of ended up in a perverted fantasy.

“Work is well…Work.” Maki said with a small laugh, “We just got done filming a commercial for Sansa.”

“That’s really cool.” Reina replied, taking a sip of her drink, “All we’ve been doing is getting loaded with dance practices.”

“Ah, those can get tiring.” Maki said, thanking the waiter as he put her plate of spaghetti down in front of her, Reina did the same as he placed  lasagna in front of her. Although they were at a five star restaurant, they both ordered simple meals.

As they ate, they talked about simple things like clothes, work, how they both wanted to smack Miki across the head. Both of them seemed to relax and just be themselves without worrying. They were just being girls and having fun.

“Here’s your check, ma‘am.” The waiter said, placing a check on the table. Both the girls pulled out a purse.

“It’s my treat.” Reina said with a smile.

“No no no.” Maki said, grinning back, “I invited you here, so I pay.”

Reina laughed, taking the check, “Seriously, I got it.”

The two debated for a good five minutes until they agreed to split it. It took them twelve rounds of Rock, Paper, Scissors to decide, each having six wins.

The two walked out of the restaurant, giggling because one of the waiters accidentally dropped fried squid on a very dressed up old lady.

Once they finally stopped laughing, Maki turned to Reina, “I’ll walk you home.” she said with a smile, “After all, there are so many perverts around here.”

Reina smiled, “You don’t have to.” she said, thankful that in the dark Maki couldn’t see her light blush, “I mean, shouldn’t you worry about yourself?”

Maki laughed lightly, starting to walk, Reina at her side, “Ah, I can take care of myself, trust me.” she reassured, taking Reina’s hand in her own, not really knowing why she did so. Neither of them let go.

The two walked in silence for a few minutes, Reina finally broke it. “I really enjoyed tonight.” she said quietly, feeling stupid for feeling so embarrassed.

Maki smiled, “I did too.” she said, seeing the apartments in the distance. “We’ll have to do it again sometime.”

Reina nodded, “Yeah, most defiantly.” she said, frowning slightly when she saw the apartments. She didn’t want Maki to leave, she wanted to be with her more, she wanted to hold her, kiss--

Mental kick.

Maki even walked Reina all the way up to her room door. Once there, their hands finally separated, both not really wanting to.

"I’ll see you around?" Maki said as Reina opened her door.

"Yeah." Reina smiled, "See you around."

Maki nodded, and walked down the hall, eventually out of the apartments.

Reina let out a happy sigh as she fell onto her bed, she felt like a junior high girl getting back from a first date that ended with a kiss, and all they did was hold hands.

Was she overreacting? Just a little bit, but then again who wouldn’t overreact about that?

She kicked off her shoes and walked over to her dresser, changing into track pants and a plain black t-shirt. A nice run would help her clear her mind, the fresh air didn’t sound so bad. Reina closed and locked her door behind her as she pulled on a sweatshirt. She started to hum a little tune that she made up while humming it.

The cool breeze that hit her face felt wonderful, she always did like the air cool. She even made a comment about her air conditioner in an interview once, man does she love her air conditioner.

As she jogged deeper into the park, she came across a small path which she thought seemed to be oddly familiar, but didn’t realize that it was the same path she written about so many times.

Curious to where it leaded, Reina took it. She was pretty far into the path when she slowed down to a stop, seeing two people in the distance. They seemed really close together, most likely a couple.

“Figures it’s a make out spot…” Reina grumbled, starting to turn around. But something caught her eye.

It was Maki.

Reina felt a sudden rage in her body, after all that. A nice dinner, they both agreed it was fun, they even held hands! And now what? She was sucking face with some stupid BOY!?

She clenched her fist, and started running towards them, not really knowing why she was. “Maki!” she yelled, forgetting to use any honorifics, “What the--” Reina stopped once she was close enough to see what was really happening, Maki wasn’t making out with the boy…She was biting into his neck, drinking his blood.

Maki looked up, shocked. How did Reina see through her illusion, if anyone would of come down this path, they wouldn’t of seen anything what so ever, hell they wouldn’t of even seen the path! She dropped the man, who fell to the ground. “Look, I can explain…” she started.

Reina didn’t listen, she just ran as fast as she could.

Maki really is…A vampire?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on January 13, 2007, 04:18:46 PM
Oooh shit, Reina finds now >:]

Wonder how Maki will get out of this mess xD

Wonder how Reina will take it, really O_O;
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Seagull on January 13, 2007, 05:48:13 PM
My first comment on this fan fic.
I LOVE IT
I really love fan fics like this and Maki\Reina is so danm cute, the date was cute.
I wonder what will happen next and what will Maki say to Reina if they meet again.
*waiting for the next chapter*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on January 13, 2007, 07:27:24 PM
Ahhh I've been so behind on this fic. So many things to comment on so forgive me for the longnes...well semi-longness

All the Maki boob jokes XD XD First they get stuck in the window then Miki's comment on suffocating people with them. Oh man, you had me roffling at both of those because I could picture it LOL

Miki. Where to start? She's hilarious! Almost every one of her lines makes me laugh. You captured her perfectly. And now she's a vampire too. That makes me super duper excited! ^_^ I hope we find out more about her too...

Lotsa Eri in this! That makes me happy too. So funny when she called Maki with her psychic prediction lmao. And she's good at picking out sexy clothes. Never woulda expected that from her...but yah never know!

The Maki/Reina is, of course, cuuutteee. I love their date. "No garlic please" XD I was hoping they'd kiss at the end though...oh well...hopefully they will eventuaalllyy

The secret is out! Reina knows now...dun dun dun...wut will this lead to?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: len.chan on January 13, 2007, 07:40:40 PM
Vampire Miki... That's so hot that it hurts to think about it :pen_bleed:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on January 13, 2007, 09:40:24 PM
Oh hell no!! Reina knows!!! I wonder how'll she'll take it? Also, I wonder how Maki will explain it.... My favorite part was when Reina got pissed off when she thought Maki was making out with someone! That was so cute how she acted like the jealous boyfriend. Or whatever. Anyways, I hope you feel better AND update soon. You can't just leave it like it is.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on January 13, 2007, 10:12:04 PM
OOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~ Reina knows~!

This is truely going to get so good! And Reina and Maki dressed up like that...*nosebleed* GJ! *thumbs up*
Title: Comments for Chapter Five
Post by: Saikami on January 14, 2007, 03:06:26 AM
Yuuyami: You'll see here. >:]

shunjunsweden: :D Yes, Reina and Maki = uber cute

KrazyForKamei: Ah, I love Maki's boobs part too, simply because I love Maki's boobs. XD

len.chan: -shoves tampons up your nose- That'll stop the bleeding. XD

Rei.rev.07: Thankies! :D I'm glad I feel better too. Ah, and we all want Maki to ravage Reina, eh?

YoukaiChica: As promised, heres another chapter. :D

Tanachan: -also shoves tampons up your nose- >:]
Title: Chapter Six: Silent Night
Post by: Saikami on January 14, 2007, 03:08:40 AM
One week, six days. Exactly how long it had been since Reina starting avoiding Maki, ever since that day where Reina saw her, she wouldn’t speak to Maki what-so-ever, and seemed to do a very good job at keeping away from her.

It drove the soloist nuts, she had tried multiple times to talk to Reina, who just wouldn’t seem to listen. It’s not like she wanted to kill her or anything, that was the last thing she wanted to do, a simple explanation was all she wanted. She missed Reina, she wanted to be around her more.

She let out a stressed sigh, pinching the area between her eyes. “Damnit…” she growled, “How the hell can I make her listen?!” this was starting to piss her off, and nobody wanted to see Maki Goto pissed off.

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“Damnit!” Maki yelled, hitting a punching bag that was in the weight room, “I need to do something about it soon, any suggestions? I mean, should I just write her a note or try talking to her more? But she wont listen to anything I say, let along read a note…” she turned to look over at Miki, who was bored, hanging upside down from a bar doing sit ups.

“Okay…” Miki said as she got down, “Simple. I’m sick of your stupid little internal fight you seem to be having.” she rolled her eyes, “So, I’ll give you two choices: Kill her, or I will.”

“Like hell!” She snapped, an eye twitching, “I wont kill her, nor will I let you!”

“Spar with me.” Miki said, grabbing her set of sparring gear.

Maki, who was glaring at Miki, agreed. She wanted to hit Miki enough as it was. She grabbed her sparring gear, putting it on.

Soon, the two both had their sparring gear on and were in the correct stances.

“You look hot in sparring gear.” Miki smirked, motioning Maki to start with a simple hand movement.

With that, Maki jumped forward, making an attempt to punch Miki, who simply moved to the left, and moved her hand, grabbing Maki’s ass.

Maki growled, and elbowed Miki in the stomach. Miki took a step back from the blow, but didn’t have a chance to recover, for Maki was throwing punches left and right.

Miki blocked most of them, she was faster than Maki. Maki was half vampire, while Miki was whole, causing Miki to be faster.

“Just kill her off, it’s not that hard. You’ve killed plenty before.” Miki said, still on the defense, “Do it before you get too attached to her. It’s pathetic, makes me sick.”

“Shut-up!” Maki snapped, furious and still throwing punches now with more force, none getting through to actually hit Miki though.

“Falling for a mortal, an ugly one like her at that.”

“I said SHUT-UP!!!” Maki yelled, her fist slamming into Miki’s cheek with full force.

Miki stumbled backwards, shocked that she was hit. Her jaw was easily shattered, but she could feel itself healing instantly.

“You’ll kill her.” Miki said coldly, “Tonight.” With that said, she walked off, taking her bag with her.

Maki sighed, starting to take off her sparring gear. “That bitch…” she mumbled darkly.

[Reina’s Room Later That Night]

Reina sat down on her couch, turning on the television as she put her feet up on the coffee table. She started to flip through the channels, then one caught her eye.

The commercial had just started, and Reina knew the tune all too well. It was Some Boys! Touch, although she had avoided Maki for almost two weeks now, she sat back and watched the commercial.

“…”

Reina never knew commercials could be that hot.

Mental kick.

But who could resist Maki Goto hitting on herself?

Yet another mental kick.

Damnit, all this mental kicking is giving me a headache.

Knock. Knock. Knock.

Reina leaped over her couch and opened the door.

“Just hear me out, please.” Maki said, standing in the door frame.

“W-What do you want?” Reina asked, stepping backward.

“I know I was told to kill you but--”

“You were WHAT!?” Reina continued to walk backwards, her eyes wide. “Get the hell out!”

“I never said I was actually going to kill you!” Maki said, closing the door behind her.

“Like hell I’ll believe that!” Reina snapped, holding her fists up in a ready-for-anything pose.

But she wasn’t ready for what had happened.

Maki was walking towards her, and as Reina stepped backwards, she found that her foot was being restrained by something, she looked down, seeing that her foot was caught up in the wire to her hairdryer. Out of panic, Reina tugged her foot as Maki drew closer, only to lose balance. To keep herself from falling forward, she grabbed the closest thing to her, which happened to be Maki, who wasn’t expecting it and fell to the floor, landing on her back.

Reina opened her eyes, wherever she was, it was dark and…squishy?

Reina lifted her head, supporting herself with her elbows on the floor. Her eyes widened as she looked down to see what she had fallen on.

My face was just in…the Maki Goto’s cleavage!?

Reina’s eyes traveled upward, eventually looking straight into Maki’s eyes, which were looking right back into her own. She seemed to forget that Maki was ever a threat as the two stared into each other eyes for what seemed like hours.

“Maki-san…” Reina mumbled lightly in her sleep, which automatically caught Maki’s attention, but before she could think more on the subject she felt Reina’s lips lightly, barely press against her own for just a brief moment.

Maki was the first to move, she simply brought a hand up, gently pushing Reina’s bangs to the side. Then slowly, she moved her hand behind Reina’s neck, pulling the teen down closer to her own face, bringing Reina’s lips to her own.

Reina’s face grew hot, but she soon found herself kissing Maki back. Both gentle at first, shy, but as seconds went by the kiss grew deeper, more needy, hotter. Maki tongue begged for entrance into Reina’s mouth, who accepted with pleasure.

Both wanting to prove dominance, their tongue’s pushed against one another’s playfully, but neither backing down from the challenge. Reina didn’t understand how Maki did it, but she managed to get Reina flat on her back. Now with the advantage of being on top, Maki’s hands started to wander, one she used to support her weight, the other creeping up under Reina’s shirt.

As her bare hand touched Reina’s stomach, Reina took in a sharp breath. Who knew Maki could turn her on this much with a simple touch? Reina wrapped her arms around Maki’s neck, pulling the two closer. Maki’s hand was slowly creeping upward as Reina started to kiss down Maki’s jaw line, soon reaching her neck.

The door opened, “Hey Reina-cha--” Eri said but suddenly stopped once she saw Reina and Maki, who seemed like two deer in headlights, only difference was that deer don’t lay in awkward positions and have hands to put up shirts (which was where Maki’s hand still was.)

Eri made a weird face that was mixed with shock and embarrassment to see her friend and sempai doing God knows what. She slowly started to back up, then turned around and bolted.

“EWW!!! IF YOU GUYS HAD TO DO THAT, YOU COULD OF DONE IT AT MAKI SENPAI’S PLACE!!! I WOULDN’T OF WALKED IN WITHOUT KNOCKING THERE!!!”

Maki stood up immediately, extremely flustered, and ran out of the room, leaving Reina behind very confused.

Why did I kiss her?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on January 14, 2007, 03:11:57 AM
Because you wanted to ravage her m'dear. Because you wanted to ravage her xD And you came so close too... I wonder why Eri likes to come in at inopportune moments xD~!

Nonetheless, this will be interesting in the future, how will the Reiki shipping view eachother from now on? And will Eri blab? This will definitely be fun in the future >:]
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Sukoshi on January 14, 2007, 04:12:07 AM
wah great updates!  The end of chapter 5 really had me wanting more :o   It was pretty suspenseful!  hehe I was like "NOo~  I want more!" and then there was more :ONding:

lol I love the Eri moment where she walks in on them!  You're really good at comic relief and suspense!

I wonder what's Miki going to do :ONshifty:  :ONsweat:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on January 14, 2007, 04:54:31 AM
Great chapter! Wooo!

Ahh the spar was so great! I was rooting for Miki. Does that make me a bad person? XD

Maki and Reina finally kissed! :D YAY! *happy dance* It was hot too. I loved how you wrote it. I just wonder how Reina's gonna react when she realizes what she did lol

ERI XD XD XD XD Loved that. Vedy vedy hilarious. Musta been quite a shock for her...and Reina and Maki for that matter lol
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on January 14, 2007, 04:55:05 AM
Damn you Eri, DAMN YOU! But like Yuuyami said, it'll be interesting how those two react around each other. I mean, they can't just walk up to each other and say it was great and they want to do it again. Or can they...

Great chapter and so fast! YAY!! But, I want more. Again...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on January 14, 2007, 06:48:08 AM
Quote from: Saikami;282457
Miki, who was bored, hanging upside down from a bar doing sit ups.
Upside-down Miki? That's hot. :jerk:


Quote from: Saikami;282457
With that, Maki jumped forward, making an attempt to punch Miki, who simply moved to the left, and moved her hand, grabbing Maki’s ass.
Even in situations where you wouldn't expect it, Miki ALWAYS gets her grope on! :ONwahaha:


Quote from: Saikami;282457
Reina opened her eyes, wherever she was, it was dark and…squishy?

Reina lifted her head, supporting herself with her elbows on the floor. Her eyes widened as she looked down to see what she had fallen on.

My face was just in…the Maki Goto’s cleavage!?
It's like she's living the dream of many, MANY men (and women too :P) at that point.  SHIZZAM! :boobs:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on January 14, 2007, 12:32:53 PM
Maybe Miki is the one who turned Maki. That's why she bosses her around. And shame on you Eri for
1. Interupting them and
2. Not joining in :drool:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Seagull on January 14, 2007, 12:46:17 PM
HOOOT :drool::heart:

and yaay for mean groping vampire Miki :drool::drool::drool::drool:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on January 14, 2007, 12:54:04 PM
Uspide down Miki made me giggle like mad XD
And damn she's evil :heart:
didn't expect her to order Maki to kill Reina. I first thought she was just making a joke but she means it, grrrr XD

And I wonder if Maki's running away or rather running after Eri to brainwash her or something.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on January 14, 2007, 07:02:00 PM
Dammit~! Why couldn't Eri just act casual? Maybe bring in Sayu, Ai, Risa, maybe have a wild orgy...Wait a minute...I might have to write that...*goes off to write*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on January 14, 2007, 11:22:01 PM
Mmmm, niceness. :D Miki vs. Maki fight = hotness. But, when Miki told her to kill Reina, I was like, "NOOOO!" D: Bad Miki . . .

Haha, Kamei likes seeing her best friend and senpai getting intimate and she knows it. ;)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on January 15, 2007, 01:39:32 AM
ANNOUNCEMENT : Your fanfic has now been PTA-d.
Everyone may now get back to work.

WOW. Well I got the message, so here is a stamp. (http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a72/sLaVeGiRl00/ptacu3PTAstamp.gif)
I lost my official stamp (GYAAARRR! this is the time when I wish I knew how to PS), so the one Mikan made will do for now (I hope you dont mind Mikan!).

I'm an official, so your story didnt have to go through much PTA Approval :) it was pretty damn good. Sucked that I had to catch up on FOUR chapters! But ever since that trip i took , i havnt been keeping up with fanfictions, haha.

When I read that part of Miki reading Reina's story while conversing with Maki, it reminded me of "Interview with the Vampire".

This had plenty of H O T Miki moments. I thought that the though of Miki wearing glasses while reading was hot, but then when you wrote her doing upside down sit ups... :ONshy1:  Sit ups are nothing (hell I do them) but UPSIDE DOWN?!

SHOE THROWING! Reminds me of Windstruck (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Windstruck) (a.k.a. (내 여자친구를 소개합니다 => Nae yeojachingureul sogae habnida)

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: C60533 on January 17, 2007, 03:14:00 AM
WOW! This is a great fic. Vampires:ONding: Psychic Eri:ONxD: Sparring:ONglasses: You gotta keep this up:ONpleeease:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on January 18, 2007, 10:54:16 PM
Both of those chapters were freakin' awesome.
Title: Comments for Chapter 6
Post by: Saikami on January 29, 2007, 01:03:23 AM
Yuuyami: Of course it will be fun in the future. XD Too bad Eri walks in at the wrong moments, eh?

Sukoshi: Well, here is even more. XD What WILL Miki do? She could be making evil plans for all you know. XD You'll have to wait and see.

KrazyForKamei: Rooting for Miki while they spar, eh? Well, she does have mad skills for being able to grope while sparing, so it doesn't make you a bad person. XD

YoukaiChica: More is here. :D Once again, sorry for the wait.

JFC: Yes, Reina is. XD I think we all wanted to be in her shoes at that moment.

Rei.rev.07: Gotta love Eri. XD

glcorps2002: XD Eri had to simply because...well she is Eri.

shunjunsweden: Yes, you gotta love the mean groping vampire. :D

coachie: Brainwash, eh? Nah, don't think vampires can do that. XD

Tanachan: -smacks you back into reality-

black velvet: Who knows, Eri might like that stuff. ;D

Owaranai_sLaVe: WOO! :ONluvluv2: I was bouncing up and down when I read that. ^^;; And of course, I was reading it at school. :sweatdrop: So everyone's like "Wah the hell is PTA?"

C60533: Thank you. :D I'll try to keep it up. :3

Ame-kun: Thanks ^^-
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on January 29, 2007, 01:03:50 AM
-is the wedge- :]
Title: Chapter Seven: Closets Always Make Things Better
Post by: Saikami on January 29, 2007, 01:06:40 AM
Author's Note: Gomen nasai for taking forever again. :ONkneelbow: I had finals last week so I got zero writing time in.








“You kissed her?” Miki sounded disgusted, she even made a face. “And she kissed you back?”

“Will you just shut up already?” Maki told more than asked, running a hand through her hair. It had only been a week since the two kissed, but everyone in Hello! Project had heard about it. Of course the word spread quickly, it happened in an apartment full of teenage girls.

“You went in to kill her, but you came out with a couple hickeys. How pathetic can you get?” Miki laughed lightly, leaning back on her couch.

“Miki, you know very well I’ll make your life hell if you don’t quit.” Maki warned, her eyes like fire.

“I’ve been to hell, they kicked me out.” Miki said, waving her hand dismissively, but changed the subject, “So what are you going to do about it?”

“If she poses as a threat, I’ll act.” she said simply, not wanting to hurt Reina.

“Mmhmm, whatever.” Miki said with a bored tone, “Now get out, I have stuff to do.”

“Yeah, you and your foreign films…” Maki mumbled, leaving the room.

She was glad the halls were empty, for every girl that she had seen within the past week had asked her the same damn question. “Did you and Tanaka-chan really make out?” It was driving the girl nuts.

Maki sighed as she turned a corner. Her eyes were only closed for a second, but that was all that was needed to run into somebody.

Neither of the two were walking fast, so they didn’t fall. Maki blinked a couple times, realizing that the person she bumped into was the last person she wanted to see. A blush grew across her face.

“Umm…Hi.” Reina said with an awkward smile, her face turning red as well.

“Hi…” Maki replied, avoiding eye contact. “Umm…I should get going…”

“Yeah, me too…” Reina replied, but before they had a chance to actually leave, they heard a weird noise coming from down the hall.

“What the?” they both asked in unison, looking towards the direction the noise was coming from, it was getting louder.

“Ahh!!!” Eri yelled, who was zooming down the hall, roller blades her feet. “Help me!!!”

She slammed into the two girls, causing them to stumble back into a nearby closet.

“Ouch…” Eri mumbled, who fell on the floor next to the closet. She blinked a couple times, and then somehow managed to stand up. “I’ll help you guys --”

Before she could finish her sentence, she lost her balance, and fell against the door, shutting it.

“Sorry!” Eri said from outside the closet. Maki and Reina let out stressed sighs.

“Just let us out.” Reina mumbled, thankful it was dark otherwise she knew Maki could see her blush.

“Sure thing.” Eri said, and then she paused for a moment. “Uh oh…”

“What now?”

“…It’s locked.”

“Eri…” Reina and Maki groaned.

“How the hell are we supposed to get out now?” Reina asked.

“Don’t worry!” Eri said cheerfully, “I’ll go find the key!” With that said, she skated off.

“Why was she on roller blades anyway?” Maki asked after a painfully long silence, if she was going to be in a closet with Reina, they might as well talk.

“I have no clue.” Reina said, pulling out her cell phone for a small source of light. She shined it on Maki for a second before she used it to see around the closet. It wasn’t horribly small, actually it was a janitors closet. Reina grabbed two buckets, turning them upside down and sat down on one. She patted the other with her hand, “Have a seat, I have a feeling it’ll be a while before Eri comes back with the key.”

Maki nodded, and took the seat she was offered and smiled slightly.



“I’m sorry about the other day.” the two said in unison to the other.

“Erm…Yeah.” Reina said, blushing madly, “It’s okay…”

“Yeah…” Maki said, also blushing. “I’m glad you forgive me…”

“Me too…”



The silence was killing them both. A good fifteen minutes passed before Reina spoke up, she hated silences like that.

“So…How’ve you been?” she asked, looking in Maki’s direction.

“Pretty good I guess, how about yourself?”

“Pretty good.”

“Cool.”

“Yeah.”

As minutes passed by, the two finally managed to get a casual conversation going, the awkwardness slowly faded away yet Reina had something bugging her for a while.

“Umm…Goto Senpai?”

“You can call me by my first name.” Maki replied with a smile.

“Um, okay. Maki-san?” Reina blushed a bit, but returned the smile.

“Yeah?”

“What’s it like to be a vampire? Can you turn into a bat or anything? Does blood really taste that good?” You could tell that Reina was horribly interested in this, excitement was in her voice.

“If anyone would know, it’d be you.”

Reina gave a puzzled look, “Huh?” she asked.

“The story you write.” Maki explained, “I feel bad about it, but I read it behind your back. Anyway, everything you wrote in there, down to the last detail, is true.”

Reina’s eyes widened, “But…How?” she asked, confused still, “I thought I was making it all up.”

Maki scratched the back of her head, “I don’t know, Tanaka-chan.” she said with a shrug, “But you know things that nobody else does, besides Miki of course.”

“You can call me by my first name too, it’s only fair.” Reina laughed lightly, “But how does Fujimoto-san know?”

“Okay, Reina-chan. And well, she’s one too.”

“Fujimoto’s a vampire too!?” Reina almost jumped with excitement, “That’s so cool! Well, actually that’s kinda scary…I mean, that woman is just pure evil as it is. Now knowing she could suck my blood I’m not going to piss her off anymore.”

Maki laughed, “Yeah, she’s a whole vampire. And as you know, I’m half.”

“Yeah…How does that work?” Reina asked, “I never wrote out the details about your past, so I really don’t know myself.”

“Well, my mother is a vampire, and my father isn’t.” Maki explained simply, “The vampire gene is dominant, so that’s why I need blood to survive but I can do things like walk in the sun without getting hurt.”

“Then how does Fujimoto-san walk in the sun?”

“She uses this sun block stuff, super powerful so she’s perfectly fine in sunlight, totally illegal.”

Reina laughed, “Figures.” she said with a smile, “Umm, so then…I’ve never been able to figure out what to write for it…So I’ve been wondering…”

“Yeah? What is it?”

“What happened to your father?”

Maki looked down to the floor, “I’ve never told anyone.” she said softly, “Maybe…Sometime I’ll tell you when I’m ready.”

Reina simply nodded, “I understand.” she said, putting a hand on Maki’s back  to comfort her slightly, “I’ll wait then.”

Maki looked up with a small smile, “Thank you.” she figured it’d be best to change the subject, “Oh, by the way. You’re an amazing writer.”

Reina felt herself blush once more, “Thanks, but about that…” she paused for a second, “Umm…It’s kinda a secret, would you mind not telling anyone about it? It’s kind of embarrassing for me when people find out that I write.”

Maki couldn’t help but to giggle slightly, but nodded. “Of course, as long as you keep the whole fact of me being a vampire a secret. There’s very few who know about Miki and me. Yocchan is one person that knows.”

Reina nodded, figuring that they told only those who were extremely close to them. Maki most likely told Yossie, after all, the two were really close at one point. And then Miki must of told Aya, those two were impossible to separate these days.

Before either of them had a chance to say more, the door suddenly opened, Eri in the door frame. “Sorry I took so long!” she said with a laugh, “It took me a while, but I managed to find the key.”

Reina rubbed her eyes at the sudden light that had entered the closet, “It’s okay…” she said, “How long did you take anyway? I lost track of time.”

“Yeah, I was wondering the same thing.” Maki said with a small laugh, standing up and then holding out a hand to help Reina up.

“About an hour.” Eri said, moving out of the way so they could get out.

“An hour? Wow.” Reina said, taking Maki’s hand and standing up. Neither of them seemed to let go.

“Seemed sorter than that.” Maki said with a shrug, “But thanks for letting us out, Kamei-chan.”

“No problem.” she said with a smile, “Now I must be off, people are waiting for me.” With that said, she ran off.

“So…You wanna hang out?”
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on January 29, 2007, 01:11:35 AM
"Sure, but first, we should continue where we left off," Reina grinned mischeviously before pulling Maki back into the closet.

Roffle, that's what everyone wishes. xD

Eri's random appearances always jeapordizes those two, roffle. Are you sure it isn't intentional? xD~!

Glad to know that Reina and Maki are good as new again. I'm just a little worried with what Miki might be thinking. :<...

Write more <3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on January 29, 2007, 01:46:56 AM
Eri's a stalker...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on January 29, 2007, 03:21:33 AM
You know, that chapter seemed so long when I first looked at it but then, after reading it, it seemed so short! I suppose that means it was really good chapter. And it was. I was waiting for another chapter and *poof* it appeared. I'm glad I waited. Now, once again, I am going to demand more. So, answer my demands and no one gets hurt...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on January 29, 2007, 03:32:42 AM
Quote from: rndmnwierd;296056
Eri's a stalker...
LOL. Dammit, you beat me to it.

Woohoo! *you were that excited? So happy :ONwhistle: * Nice to know PTA is getting recognition. Spread the love =) School PTA is whack.
Ahhh! <33 you put it in your siggy!!! *cries* damn, I still havnt PTAA-d mine XD

well, reading your story gave me a nice break from World history. Keep writing please~

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on January 29, 2007, 04:24:08 AM
Quote from: Saikami;295997
“I’ve been to hell, they kicked me out.”
Dayum. :o

Eri is too funny! I can actually see her rolling around on skates and running into stuff. xD I don't think this part was intentional. The first time she walked in on them, she broke them up, but now she got them back together. Needless to say, she got them to open up to each other . . .

Okay, maybe it was intentional? D:

Quote from: Yuuyami;296008
"Sure, but first, we should continue where we left off," Reina grinned mischeviously before pulling Maki back into the closet.

Roffle, that's what everyone wishes. xD
*quickly wipes drool*

Nuh-uh! :rolleyes:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on January 29, 2007, 06:57:03 AM
Whenever you need a stoolpigeon to do something cute and/or klutzy to put other characters in odd situations, just call on Eri. :lol:


Quote
“Fujimoto’s a vampire too!?” Reina almost jumped with excitement, “That’s so cool! Well, actually that’s kinda scary…I mean, that woman is just pure evil as it is. Now knowing she could suck my blood I’m not going to piss her off anymore.”
She might be pure evil, but Miki-sama's still righteously hawt! :twisted:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Sukoshi on January 29, 2007, 09:53:32 AM
LOL Eri is too funny in this!  I think she helps in her erien ways ;)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on January 31, 2007, 02:53:34 PM
Super Sunblock FTW!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on February 02, 2007, 01:28:05 AM
Two beautiful women stuck in a closet. I would have imagined something else to happen :damnfunny. Great job!

You get 2 cool points from me!! :ONcool1::ONcool1:
Title: Comment for Chapter Seven
Post by: Saikami on February 05, 2007, 11:32:56 PM
Yuuyami: You don't even know how tempted I was to put that. XD

rndmnwierd: XD Stalker, eh?

Rei.rev.07: Yes she is so strange, but we love her that way. :D

YoukaiChica: Demands answered. XD Ta da.

Owaranai_sLaVe: Yeah, I was that happy. ^^; World history = -.- Glad I could give you a break from it. XD

black velvet: It may or may not of been intentional, you'll never know. >:] Actually, you might know in the future. XD

JFC: Yes, and the fact that Miki is evil just makes her more hawt. :D

Sukoshi: Yes, Eri is helping people one awkward moment at a time <3

Ame-kun: Super sunblock = <3 XD

glcorps2002: I think when someone simply says that there are two beautiful women in a closet, that everyone imagines something different. XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 05, 2007, 11:33:26 PM
Wedge Desu :]
Title: Chapter Eight: Makes You Wonder...
Post by: Saikami on February 05, 2007, 11:46:03 PM
“Hey! Why are you on top?”

“Because I’m older.” Maki smirked.

“No fair…” Reina stuck out her tongue in a pout, but couldn’t help but to grin.

“Ready, and GO!!” The television shouted, the two were in Reina’s room, playing a new racing game on her Nintendo Wii. Maki had the top half of the screen, whereas Reina had the bottom.

The two cars on the screen zoomed off, pretty much tied until Maki managed to find a shortcut, putting her in lead.

“Hey! That’s no fair!” Reina said, pushing Maki lightly with grin. Maki laughed and returned the push with one of her own.

Minutes later they had completely ditched the game and were wrestling on the floor like a couple of children, laughing and fooling around. Pillows soon became part of their mini war, a mess of feathers flying through the air as they attacked one another with the fluffy weapons.

Eventually, the two were completely worn out, watching some random television show that happened to be on TV. Reina’s head laid on Maki’s lap, who gently stroked her hair as they talked. Of course, they both had to continue to mentally remind themselves they were ‘just friends’ throughout the conversation. Friends do that stuff all the time, right?

“…After that we caught them in an office.” Reina laughed lightly, “Pretty much from then on, Gaki-san and Tettekette have been rather open with their relationship.”

“Wow, that’s sure a story to tell. Sounds like something a perverted American fanfic writer would think of.” Maki said, “I mean, Miki told me about the bath thing but wow…I never knew that they would tell others about that, even after Miki and Aya caught them. I‘ll never think of bath jelly the same again.”*

Reina looked up at Maki, “Yeah, and I was told this while eating.” she said, making a face.

Maki laughed, “Well, I thank you for not telling me while I was eating.” she said with a smile, “Now sit up, I want to play around with your hair.”

Reina raised an eyebrow, but did as she was told. Maki then sat on the couch, telling Reina to sit on the floor with her back against the couch. Once again, Reina did as she was told and went to sit down between Maki’s legs, like many girls do when someone played around with their hair. Yet, as she was about to sit, her hand grazed across Maki’s upper thigh on accident, causing both the girls to blush, yet pretend it never happened.

Of all the times for Maki to wear sexy tight jeans, it had to be TODAY!?

Mental kick.

Maki ran her hands through Reina’s hair, thinking of what she could do with it as she spoke. “Ugh…I’m getting fat.” she said, laughing lightly, “Always do during this time of the year.”

Reina laughed, “Yeah, you’re getting real fat.” she said with a sarcastic tone.

“It’s true.” Maki replied, lifting up her shirt slightly and pinching a small amount of flub. “See?”

Reina turned and looked over at the soloist’s stomach.

Damn, she has a nice stomach…

Mental kick.

Reina blushed at the thoughts running through her mind, trying to ignore them.

“Even if you are getting ‘fat’ you still look really good.” she said, praying that it didn’t sound weird.

It was Maki’s turn to blush. “Thank you.” she said with a smile.

Reina nodded, returning the smile with one of her own and faced forward once more so Maki could continue to play with her hair.

They talked about various, random things as Maki gave Reina various, random hairstyles. At one point neither of them knew what was funnier, the idea that Nacchi was secretly seeing Tsunku (they don’t know how they managed to get that conversation going), or the huge bun right on top of Reina’s head. (They had been trying to figure out why the hell Nono seemed to like that hairstyle so much.)

Maki and Reina eventually decided to stick with simple low pigtails that laid over her shoulders.

“Thank you.” Reina said with a grin as she stood up, “Hey, are you hungry at all?”

Maki nodded, “You’re welcome.” her stomach than made a funny growl which caused her to laugh, “Well, apparently I am hungry.”

Reina laughed lightly, walking over to her fridge, “Okay, we have…” she opened it up, “…Nothing.” she scratched the back of her head, “Heh, I completely forgot to go shopping.”

Maki walked over to her, “How about we go to my apartment? I’ll cook us something.”

“Okay, that sounds like a good plan, I’ll help too.”

The two walked down the halls, naming foods they could cook but someone’s voice stopped them. The pair couldn’t help but to wonder who it was, they peeked from around the corner to see Eri coming out from a room, her hair wet.

“I came to watch a movie, ended up taking a shower but didn’t get any cleaner…” Eri mumbled to herself, laughing a little bit.

Maki and Reina exchanged slightly freaked out glances, and decided without words that it’d be best to confront her.

“Hey, Eri-chan, what’ve you been up to?” Maki asked with a raised eyebrow as the two walked up to her.

“Yeah, and who’s room is this?” Reina added.

Eri jumped at the sudden voices, and turned around to face them. Her face was already red, but it seemed to become more flushed as she spoke.

“Nothing! It’s nobody’s room!” the now panicking turtle said a little too loudly to be considered a normal reply. Once she realized that Reina and Maki were going to question her more, she ran off. “I didn’t do anything!”

Reina and Maki looked at one another, confused slightly.

“Was it just me or did it look…” Reina started.

“…Like she had a hickey on her neck?” Maki finished.

“Looked like there was more than one.”

“Yeah, that’s kind of--”

Maki was cut off by another voice behind the door that was now slowly opening.

“Eri! You forgot your pan--” the woman paused, and then leaned against the door frame, looking from Maki to Reina, and then back again.

Both of the girls jaws dropped and their eyes widened at the person.

“Nakazawa-san?”

“That’s me.” Yuko said with a smirk as the girls stood there in shock. “Did you two scare Eri off?”

Before either of them could respond, Yuko pulled out her cell phone and dialed a number and put the phone to her ear.

“Eri, hello…Yeah, I know we just saw each other but you forgot something here…What is it, eh? Well, I’ll give you a hint. They’re light blue with little turtles on them.” Reina could hear Eri give a small squeak from over the phone, which made Yuko smirk even more. “Yup, that’s what you forgot, why don’t you come and pick them up, m’dear?…Yeah, okay. See you soon. Much love.” She then closed to phone and put it into her pocket, looking back over at Reina and Maki.

“I noticed that you two made my little Eri run off.” Yuko said as she stepped closer to the pair, grinning. “I must punish you for that. I mean, fair is fair, correct?”

Before Yuko’s last sentence was finished, Maki and Reina were running out of the Hello! Project apartments.

“Wow…I never saw that coming.” Maki said once they were a good distance from the building and had stopped running.

“Yeah, makes you wonder what happened before and after shootings for Maido Arii.”




*Alludes to Yuuyami's perv fic "Translucent White" which can be read here (http://community.livejournal.com/renairev/46626.html#cutid1).
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 05, 2007, 11:46:30 PM
Oh ho... More mental kicks <3

Reina and Maki's interactions never cease to amuse me <3 always acting so lovey dovey without them even realizing it <3 And I love the reference to my fic too~! Translucent White FOR THE WIN <3

You made my mind reel with Eri x Yuko xD! Are we going to see more of them together? :] ?! Although crackish, I do agree with Reina, what DO they do before and after Maido Arii recordings? I'm sure Yuko can't resist Eri's suits <33333
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: jafeijai on February 06, 2007, 03:17:06 AM
“Eri! You forgot your pan--” the woman paused, and then leaned against the door frame, looking from Maki to Reina, and then back again.

Both of the girls jaws dropped and their eyes widened at the person.

“Nakazawa-san?”

“That’s me.” Yuko said with a smirk as the girls stood there in shock. “Did you two scare Eri off?”

Before either of them could respond, Yuko pulled out her cell phone and dialed a number and put the phone to her ear.

“Eri, hello…Yeah, I know we just saw each other but you forgot something here…What is it, eh? Well, I’ll give you a hint. They’re light blue with little turtles on them.” Reina could hear Eri give a small squeak from over the phone, which made Yuko smirk even more. “Yup, that’s what you forgot, why don’t you come and pick them up, m’dear?…Yeah, okay. See you soon. Much love.” She then closed to phone and put it into her pocket, looking back over at Reina and Maki.

“I noticed that you two made my little Eri run off.” Yuko said as she stepped closer to the pair, grinning. “I must punish you for that. I mean, fair is fair, correct?”


O__________________O [jaw goes through floor]





[picks up jaw] Oh wow...that's certainly unexpected...Saikami, I'm going to need you to pay for my medical bills...I think my jaw shattered..

XD Light blue with little turtles hahaha XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on February 06, 2007, 03:28:53 AM
OMG. Freaky pairings in this chapter!

Nacchi x Tsunku and Eri x Yuko! XD

(The first is more obvious, but THE SECOND? I was expecting Eri to walk out of Sayu's room or something. xD)

But, Yuu's hot TakaGaki bathtub fic has me melting . . . And, you can never go wrong having Maki and Reina cook together. :heart:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on February 06, 2007, 03:40:53 AM
Oh ho ho! You don't let me have fantasies, yet u write Eri x Yuko? Gahhh I'm doing more mental kicks than a flexible midget in a circus!

*kick*

But dayum...I wanna be Reina...Maki playing with hair FTW!!!!! GJ! *thumbs up and cake*

*eri pops up*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on February 06, 2007, 05:13:01 AM
Please, just sLaVe. I like nicknames :), they are short.

Ahh, well that makes me happy that you were excited! I like World history, it's just that this teacher likes to give us... WORK. and a lot of it.

hahah! what typical girl talk. Typical and funny. I guess the secret is known to everyone now on what girls do in their alone time :ONwhistle:
Eri and Yuuko?! well, at least Gotou and Reina know they don't have to hide their relationship to Eri anymore, haha. No wonder Eri didn't freak out about them kissing as..girls.

what I dont get is how none of them is suffering from major "omg we made out earlier and now we're just friends???" syndrome. so are they... officially... together now?

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on February 06, 2007, 07:11:14 AM
The mental kicks are great fun. :lol:

The Yuko/Eri thing was totally out of left field. :shock: I mean, sure I've previously read Translucent White...but still. Not something one would expect.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on February 06, 2007, 06:28:13 PM
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“Wow…I never saw that coming.”


neither did I XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on February 08, 2007, 07:47:13 AM
Ahh. What's there to say that hasn't been said? Like everyone else I have to say "Whaa?? Eri and Yuko?!" And that takes care of that. Let's see, other highlights...

Ha. Maki and Reina reminding themselves mentally that they were just friends: priceless. And the opening! I was so confused why Maki was on top and of what! But, of course, they were up to nothing more than a harmless Wii game.

Like usual, this was an awesome chapter. Good job! You have appeased me!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on February 14, 2007, 04:33:39 AM
:evil: Cuteness factor... seeping in... must fight it. Wrestling is too much for me to handle picturing. xD OH GEEZ I just pictured it while typing that last sentence. *nosebleed*. LOL NINTENDO WII!! They should've been playing Wii Sports boxing or bowling! xD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 14, 2007, 07:29:46 AM
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or the huge bun right on top of Reina’s head. (They had been trying to figure out why the hell Nono seemed to like that hairstyle so much.)


THANK YOU!!!!

Yuko/Eri for the crack pairing win!
Title: Comments for Chapter Eight
Post by: Saikami on February 21, 2007, 03:13:45 AM
Heh, once again. Sorry for taking a while. :ONkneelbow: I got a Nintendo Wii and Twilight Princess a little bit ago, and I've been anti-social.

Yuuyami: XD I'm glad you like le Eri x Yuko, and to your pleasure, they'll be around for a while. ^^-

jafeijai: Heh, like I said above, I just got a Wii. I don't think I can pay for your medical bills. :panda_kiss: Does that make it all better? XD

black velvet: :D Yes, I'm glad nobody seemed to expect Yuko and Eri. XD Maki and Reina cooking = <3

Tanachan: -munches on cake and makes sure you have no perverted fantasies- ¬¬ I'm watching you boy. XD -pats head randomly-

sLaVe: Ah, nicknames are nice. ^^- Ah, there is a bit of suffering from the "omg we made out earlier and now we're just friends???" syndrome XD

JFC: Yes, gotta love le mental kicks XD Left feild seems nice :D

Rei.rev.07: It's Yuko, what can one expect? XD

coachie: Nobody seemed to of saw it coming XD

YoukaiChica: Heh, too bad it was only a harmless Wii game, right? ;D

Ame-kun: -shoves tampons up your nose- :D

rndmnwierd: Crack pairings = <3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 21, 2007, 03:14:45 AM
-wedge- xD
Title: Chapter Nine: Regret
Post by: Saikami on February 21, 2007, 03:16:23 AM
Sunlight shone in the wonky eyed teens face, the brightness causing her to wake up. Her vision was blurry at first, yet after only seconds she had realized exactly where she was.

Face to face with a sleeping Maki Goto.

She blinked a couple times, feeling herself blush. She had completely forgot that she had not gone back to her apartment. The two had agreed that one in the morning was a bit too late to be on the streets, which was the time that Reina figured she should get going. (They had watched movies and chatted the entire night.)

So here she was, in Maki Goto’s bed, cuddling with her.

Reina knew she should get up, yet she was so relaxed…And who could resist cuddling up to Maki while she had that cute smile while sleeping and a small case of bed head which looked anything but bad on the soloist.

She closed her eyes and relaxed once more, yet tensed once her mind started to actually think of the situation.

Just friends, we’re JUST friends…It’s not like I like her or anything, so why am I even thinking this?

She paused her thoughts as she felt Maki move, and kept her eyes shut. Maki had woken up, and Reina could tell by how tense she had become, she had also found it to be slightly awkward.

Maki then turned, sounding as if she was struggling for something. Reina barely opened her wonky eye to see what the other was doing without being caught that she was awake.

The former Morning Musume member had her cell phone in her hand, most likely had checked the time, and was now reaching to put it back on her nightstand, yet many tangled sheets seemed to be restraining her from doing so. Reina closed her eye again, mentally giggling at the struggling girl at her side.

Thump. The cell phone had fell to the floor.

“Shit…” Maki mumbled, propping herself up onto her elbows.

Maki let out a small sigh, and finally managed to get out of the bed. She picked her phone off the floor with one hand while the other scratched the back of her head. As she yawned, she tried to put her cell phone onto the nightstand, and ended up missing it completely, thus causing the phone to hit the floor again with another thump.

Reina couldn’t help but to laugh out loud and open her eyes.

“Gimme a break, it’s early.” Maki said with a small laugh as she looked over at Reina.

Reina sat up and stretched as she spoke, “I’m sorry, it was just amusing.” She said with a smile, “G’morning.”

“Good mornin’.” Maki stood up and picked up her cell phone once again, finally putting it on her nightstand without it falling.

“What time is it?” Reina asked as she crawled out of the bed.

“Eleven.” Maki said with a laugh, “I guess we slept in a bit, eh?”

Reina nodded and laughed lightly. “Apparently.”

“I need to get ready for work though…” Maki mumbled, “But I kinda just want to stay home, which is weird…I normally like work.”

“Well, maybe once you get there you’ll start to enjoy it. I get like that sometimes.” Reina said, looking around for her jeans. (She had borrowed a pair of Maki’s pajamas for the night.) “Actually, I’m not much in the mood to go to work either.” she added with a small laugh.

“Heh, maybe today is just a lazy day.” Maki said as she entered the bathroom and closed the door, but spoke loud enough for Reina to still hear her, “If you give me a few minutes to take a shower and stuff, I could walk you back to the apartments.”

“Ah, it’s okay. I don’t want to trouble you.” Reina said as she picked up her jeans from the back of a chair and started to change. Although she wanted to say yes, she also had to stop off and see Eri, who left a text on her phone saying ‘Stop by my room at 10:30’ meaning she was already late as it was. “Thank you though! And the yakiniku was great!”

“Okay then, I’ll see you around.” Maki said as she turned on the faucets to the shower.

“Yeah, I’ll give you a call sometime.” Reina said as she walked out of Maki’s apartment, and eventually out of the apartment building altogether. She picked up her cell phone and dialed Eri’s number before putting the phone to her ear.

“Hello?” A voice said, yet Reina noticed it wasn’t Eri’s, “Nakazawa Yuko speaking.”

“Nakazawa-san?” Reina gave a small shiver at the thought of what the two could have been doing. For some odd reason or another, whips and handcuffs popped into the wonky eyed teen’s mind. “Umm…Is Eri there?”

“Ah, Tanaka-chan. Yeah, she’s right here.” Yuko said, and then suddenly Eri’s voice was on the line.

“’Ello?”

“I’m sorry I’m late, I just woke up not that long ago.”

“What do you mean?” Eri asked, confused, “What are you late for?”

“You sent me a text telling me to stop by at ten thirty.”

“Eh? I sent you a text saying that like…A week ago, remember? You came over and we had lunch.” Eri laughed lightly.

“Waaah?? You mean I really could of spent more time with Maki-san?”

“So, are you two together yet or what?” Yuko suddenly ask, she could tell by the sound of Eri struggling in the background that Yuko had taken the phone.

“Erm…Uh…Wah?” Reina fumbled with her words, why did it seem so hard to say that they weren’t dating? Why did it make Reina feel as if she was punched in the stomach whenever she was reminded of it?

“So, you are then?” Yuko said happily, “I so knew it, I see you stare at her cleavage from time to time, you little devil.”

“I do not!”

“Don’t lie, m‘dear. Everyone does. You just can’t help it.”

“Some people have self control, Nakazawa-san.” Reina said almost coldly, “And we’re not dating.”

“Aww, that’s a damn shame.” Yuko said, but of course had to add, “Self control, eh? That means you’re saying you want to, but you’re simply stopping yourself from doing so.”

“Ugh! You’re so difficult.” Reina growled, “Just give the phone back to Eri.”

“Have you felt them yet though? Are they real? I think they are, ‘cause I bumped into her the other day and it was like ‘boing~~!’ and I was like ‘whoa!’ Eri agrees too.” Before Reina had a chance to reply, she heard Eri yell in the background “I didn’t say anything on this topic!”

“You’re lucky you’re a Senpai…” Reina mumbled, “Whatever, you two have fun with your S&M stuff.”

And with that, she hung up.

“God, it’s exhausting just talking to Nakazawa-san…It still shocks me how we managed to get through skits together…” Reina mumbled as she started walking through a nearby park, figuring it was a nice day for a stroll.

“You’re stupid for trying to get close to Maki like that.” a cold voice said from behind her. Reina quickly turned around to face the person.

“Matsuura-san?”

Aya walked up to Reina, “I know that you know what she is.” she said calmly, yet it gave Reina a chill up her spine. “So why are you stupid enough to get so close to a devil like her?”

“You make it sound like she doesn’t deserve life.”

“What can you expect, I’m a vampire hunter after all. I’ve tried to kill her plenty of times.”

“What!? Are you nuts?” Reina took a couple steps backwards. “You can’t just go and kill people like that!”

“They do nothing but evil, no vampire deserves to live. Nor do they deserve the right to be called ’human’. Although I‘m unable to harm Goto-san, I‘m not going to watch her tear you apart.”

“You have nothing to warn me about!” Reina snapped, sparks of anger appearing in her eyes. “I don’t care if she’s a vampire or not!”

“No need to yell.” Aya said, still calm, “All vampires are the same, it’s in their nature to sin. They--”

“Oh just shut the hell up with your damn wise talk!” Reina cut her off, fists clenched and her accent being loud and clear, “If all vampires are alike then why are you so close to Fujimoto-san!?”

Aya gave a confused look, and raised an eyebrow, “What do you mean?” she asked, “What does Tan have to do with any of this?”

“Don’t play stupid…” Reina said, trying to remain slightly calm, “If you know Maki-san is a vampire, you  know Fujimoto-san is one too!”

“You’re lying…” Aya said with a low growl.

“Don’t hide from the truth, even if it is becoming more like fiction each day. I wouldn’t lie about something like this. Although you know very little about me, you should know that.”

Aya did not reply, she simply turned around and started walking off towards her own apartment while making a mental list of supplies she would need to get that day.

“Tan…You’ll regret this…”
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 21, 2007, 03:20:55 AM
Eri and Yuko are the new crack for me, WOO!

Reina and Maki are simply cute in this chapter! And I love Yuko's teasing and Reina getting flustered over it <3333

But now, I'm kinda worried of what's going to become of Miki and Aya...

I sense epic fights coming o___o;
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on February 21, 2007, 03:40:00 AM
Quote from: Saikami;313317
“I so knew it, I see you stare at her cleavage from time to time, you little devil.”

.....

“Have you felt them yet though? Are they real? I think they are, ‘cause I bumped into her the other day and it was like ‘boing~~!’ and I was like ‘whoa!’ Eri agrees too.” Before Reina had a chance to reply, she heard Eri yell in the background “I didn’t say anything on this topic!”
Maki boob jokes never get old. :P I lub 'em.

Oh, oh! Aya's a vampire hunter! :heart:

Aya = Buffy?
Miki = Spike/Angel?

XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on February 21, 2007, 06:38:32 AM
shitakemushrooms, I laughed loud with Yuko’s cleavage accusation… oh man, I don’t know how she managed to cover that up… (shoot, I wouldn’t... but that’s another story~). Oh yeah, you got me even harder with Yuko’s explanation of the “real or not” thing… How old is Yuko in this story? xD
Aw shucks. I really thought Reina was going to turn back around and catch Maki out of the shower all wet and fully/half naked or something :)

o_O how the hell can you not figure out someone is vampire. Damn the Wii... my best friend got it and I was almost jealous of it!... Until I start playing...and I dont even like video games!

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on February 21, 2007, 06:50:14 AM
Quote from: Rei.rev.07;313325
Omg, omg...Aya didn't know. She didn't. Ohhh Reina...damn.
What she said. :o
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on February 21, 2007, 05:08:07 PM
Nice one Reina, now Aya's going after Miki. I wonder how the fight will turn out?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on February 21, 2007, 05:53:04 PM
More Yuko X Eri :heart:

Hell Aya, what kind of lousy Vampire Hunter are you? XD
Still a trainee or what? Not being able to take down Maki (and she's only half vampire) and on top of that not realising the person closest to you is one! XD

I love this story :heart:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on February 22, 2007, 01:12:22 AM
Wow, for some reason, I really want Aya to kill Miki. Irony!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on February 22, 2007, 09:59:16 AM
Uh oh... Reina slipped out too much information!! Reina is gonna be in big trouble once Miki finds out she told Aya.

Cool fic btw!! yet another Maki x Reina fic I see.. amazing how cousins can think so much alike, you guys must be really close...
Anyways love this fic!! to be honest I nv really noticed this fic until recently but was too busy to read it.. Finally began reading and I got hooked!!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 22, 2007, 09:50:48 PM
Roffle, sometimes we surprise even ourselves about how often our brain wavelengths seem to match xD But I dive further into fantasy than Sai, I give you that. :]
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Saikami on February 22, 2007, 09:56:23 PM
^ Yeah, she typically likes to dive in to fantasy more than I do, but we are rather similar, it's almost scary. Even if there is a age gap, it's like we're the same age. At times we can finish each others sentences. ^^;; (It's kinda scary.)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on February 23, 2007, 12:05:57 AM
O.O...Aya the Vampire Slayer?

...

...

...

*smacks Aya across the face* *even though she is a girl, she deserves it after trying to kill Maki and now going for Miki*

WHoooo! More Yuko x Eri!

*gets slapped by Saikami twice*

GJ! *cake, cookies, tea, and Godiva chocolates*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on February 23, 2007, 04:07:54 AM
This story never ceases to amaze me ^.^ Yuko/Eri...My brain goes "Wut the heyull?!" but "roffle that's great" at the same time. You must have talent. I demand more random Yuko/Eri!

Aya's a vampire hunter. Oh damn. That can never be good. I couldn't help but think of Buffy here either. Miki needs to show her not all vampires are bad! (even though Miki IS bad) XD

Reina...tisk tisk...she needs to shut her mouth. Or even better..Maki can shut her mouth..with HER mouth or maybe her cleavage lol.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: C60533 on February 23, 2007, 04:14:07 AM
Aya...you're a vampire hunter and yet you can't tell that your best friend whom you hang out with constantly is one. Denial perhaps?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on February 24, 2007, 04:03:05 AM
Quote from: C60533;314933
Aya...you're a vampire hunter and yet you can't tell that your best friend whom you hang out with constantly is one. Denial perhaps?

Well, they do say that love is blind. :)
Title: Comments for Chapter Nine
Post by: Saikami on February 26, 2007, 04:23:32 AM
Yuuyami: Of course an epic fight is coming, it wouldn't be my fanfic without at least one. XD

Rei.rev.07: Everyone's lovin' the Yuko and Eri <3

black velvet: Hmm, Buffy and Angel, eh? Didn't think of that XD Maki's boob jokes are the best too. :D

sLaVe: This fic takes place rather recently. Age doesn't matter though. xD Either way, she's funny as hell.

JFC: Oh damn is right. XD

glcorps2002: Well, you get to see now. :D

coachie: Ah, it's not that Aya couldn't take down Maki. But that's explained later. XD

rndmnwierd: Aww, Miki wasn't THAT mean. Was she?

stefy: Yay! New reader! I'm glad you like it. :D

Tanachan: -slaps you again for slapping Aya- ¬¬ ... -munches on the cookie- No slapping girls :O

KrazyForKamei: I'm glad you're likin' the fic. ^^- Don't worry, more Yuko and Eri are coming sometime! :D Reina being shut up by Maki's cleavage? :panda_kiss: genius

C60533: Ah, once more. That will be explained a bit later. >:3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 26, 2007, 04:23:54 AM
-wedge- <3
Title: Hunter Versus the Vampire
Post by: Saikami on February 26, 2007, 04:27:14 AM
“Thanks again, Toshio-san.” Miki said with a smile as she walked out of a small rental movie store, a bag of foreign films in her hand as she strolled down the dark streets.

“I’m glad they just got in a new stock of movies, I was almost getting sick of watching The Covenant. The Harry Potter line gets me every time though…Heh.” she talked to nobody in particular, considering the streets were empty.

As she passed by a construction site, she noticed that somebody was watching her from the corner of a the street. She couldn’t tell who it was, the shadows caused by the street lamps hid their face.

Hmm…Not a bad time for a snack…

She started to walk towards the person, yet soon realized who it was once she was closer.

“Oh, hi Aya.” Miki said with a smile, glad she didn’t attack from afar.

“Hello, Tan.” Aya said, Miki could swear she could even feel the coldness from it tingle her skin.

BAM.

Miki stumbled backwards, holding her jaw. “What the hell?!”

“Don’t bother acting like that hurt you more than it did.” Aya said, refusing to take her eyes off Miki, “I know you’re little secret, don’t deny it.”

“How’d you find out?!” Miki demanded, wiping the small amount of blood from her lip.

Aya walked towards Miki as she spoke, “Let’s just say a little wonky eyed bird told me.” She threw another punch, this one Miki blocked and grabbed Aya’s wrist.

“Just listen--”

Miki fell silent as heard the click of a gun, which was now pointed straight at her heart with Aya‘s right hand. Yet it was only moments before she spoke again.

"You’re fast, always have been with things."

"Shut up." Aya growled, "You know that I will pull this trigger on any vampire, including you."

"Yup, I know that." For some reason, Miki seemed rather casual, yet quickly grabbed Aya’s other wrist with her free hand, twisting it around until a small crack was heard.

Aya dropped the gun from the sudden pain and Miki kicked the gun away with her foot.

"Don’t worry, I didn’t break it." Miki said before quickly making an attempt to run, yet Aya quickly grabbed the back of Miki’s shirt with her left hand, making an attempt to pull her down backwards. However, Miki caught Aya’s attempt and forcefully rammed backwards into Aya, making her stumble while the vampire tried to make a run for it once again.

As Aya lifted herself from the ground, she noticed that the kicked away gun was right next to her, so she grabbed it and ran after Miki, trying to aim at a good spot to make her stop in her tracks. Aya had one hell of a time aiming though, since her aiming arm had been twisted not so long ago, and the pain throbbed in her wrist. After settling for what she had aimed for before, she fired the gun, and it nailed Miki straight in her left leg, just above her knees.

Miki nearly toppled over with the hit, but caught herself from falling with her hands and turned her head to snarl at the hunter before getting up. That’s smart, using a silencer on the gun to make sure the neighborhood doesn’t eavesdrop… Before she could even think any further, Miki felt her leg pulsate rather painfully, making her realize that the gun was loaded with either cross-bullets, or bullets dabbed in some kind of liquid with garlic. As she stopped briefly to try and shake off the pain, she felt a hard blow connected to the back of her head—Aya had smacked her with the back of the gun.

Miki whirled around and blocked the second smack from her head with her right arm, and then she slapped Aya with the back of her left hand. Aya was stunned momentarily but manage to land a roundhouse kick on Miki’s chest before she could run again. After the kick, Aya did a low sweep kick to knock Miki off her feet, seeing how her left leg was shot. The hit did connect, however, as Miki was tripped, the vampire tilted backwards, her right hand planted on the ground, to perform a back-flip kick. Aya moved her upper body backwards to dodge the kick, and then she swiftly moved in and threw her left arm to punch Miki’s injured leg while she was still doing the backflip.

Miki caught that strategy as well, and wrapped her legs around Aya’s neck, and tried to bring her head into the ground with the force of a boulder. The soloist was definitely not a failure of a hunter, for she realized Miki’s move, and she used her hands against the ground to prevent her head from hitting it. Aya then did a handstand of her own and manage to get her legs wrapped around Miki’s body. Miki definitely had to think quick, because the tides of battle is not liking her one bit. Aya then tried to do the same move that Miki attempted: bashing her head against the ground with her legs. Only this time, Aya’s full body force was behind the attack. Miki automatically stopped her head from getting near the concrete by using a single hand to block the rather strong force. Ignoring the cracks of the bones in her hand, Miki held herself up—with Aya holding on.

“Did the poor vampire get her hand busted?” Aya teased, pressuring Miki’s body so that she heard even more bones crack in the lone right hand initiating the handstand.

Damn…She’s not kidding! What kind of vampire hunter is she?! Sure, I’ve easily handled hunters like her before, but Aya’s a damn power goddess compared to those small fry! She’s even stronger than Maki! Hell, she’s even on par with ME…! I have to be serious or else I’ll seriously be killed by her!

“It’s not over!” Miki replied in a loud grunt before launching both her and Aya into the air by using her very hand as the pinball spring. With that move, I can’t use my right hand anymore… Miki had to form a plan in her head quickly, otherwise, she might as well say goodbye to living. As both women are airborne, Aya aimed her gun and started firing away at Miki. Being a vampire has its advantages though, as if there were invisible walls, Miki bounced off the air, dodging the bullets. Though athletic in the air as she may be, a stray bullet managed to graze against Miki’s right cheek, leaving a small but painful scar.

In revenge of the scar, Miki lunged at the falling hunter in hopes of giving her an identical scar. As she extended her stone-tense hand at blinding speeds capable of inflicting a scar, Aya managed to take hold of the arm and pull herself towards Miki and spin her around in mid-air before throwing her against the ground. Miki hit the ground hard, hard enough to bounce. Aya landed on Miki, straddling her hips, and they both landed on the ground again, Miki taking the severe hit, before Aya jumped off of Miki and into a ready-to-strike pose once the vampire gets up again.

Miki got up slowly as Aya stared on. The scar on Miki’s cheek began to bleed. In fact, the blood was nearly visible on Miki’s pant leg, and her hand was becoming numb.

Alright…Miki thought, my face is scratched, but the pain isn’t as bad as my leg… And my hand is completely pulverized…

“Round two,” Aya said as she charged. Miki stepped to the side and tried to punch with her left hand, her good hand, but Aya blocked with her left hand as well. That contact alone caused painful shivers on Aya’s arm. The hunter then tried hitting Miki in the head with the gun, but Miki blocked that, but her shoulder, since her right arm was bad. Because of the bad blocking move, Miki nearly let out a painful scream as the force sent shockwaves down her spine. The vampire tried to kick Aya in the chest, but the leg ended up being grabbed and thus, Miki was thrown on the ground again. Miki tried to stop herself from landing, but failed as she landed with a thud.

“Is this the first time a hunter gave you so much trouble, Tan?”

Damn it all…My coordination’s shot with my spine like this…

“It was a good fight while it lasted…” Aya said calmly as she walked over to the lying vampire, gun reloaded and ready. Miki was panting heavily, watching her best friend walk over her legs until she was directly above Miki’s knees. “It’s a shame, Tan,” Aya said as she pointed the gun at Miki’s head.

Miki gathered her strength, and spread both of her legs forcefully, causing Aya to do a near split. Then, Miki, despite the pain from her bad arm, did a back-flip kick to Aya’s groin, launching her in the air. The vampire quickly recovered and jumped in the air doing a somersault kick in the air which landed Aya forcefully back on the ground. Miki caught the gun in the air and then she also landed on Aya, with her legs straddling her hips, much like the situation before, and pointed the gun at her head.

Thus, the tides of battle turned.

“As much as I want to shoot you, there’s something I want to take care of first…” and with that, Miki smacked Aya really hard in the head with the gun, thus, knocking her out.

Miki stood up, and brushed herself off quickly before picking up Aya and carrying her wedding-style as she started to walk towards the Hello! Project apartments.

On her way, she walked through the park as a shortcut. “I can’t just drag you along with me.” she spoke to the unconscious Aya in her arms.

Miki looked around, thinking of the many places she could leave Aya. “Hmm…A trashcan wouldn’t be that bad.” she couldn’t help but to laugh lightly at the idea of a little boy running up to his mother saying ‘Mommy! I found Matsuura Aya in a trashcan!’

She shook the thought out of her head and once again searched for a spot to put the soloist. “Well…I could bring her to her apartment…” Miki mumbled to herself, even though Aya had attacked her, she couldn’t bring it to herself to just leave her in some random spot.

Minutes later, Miki walked up the steps to Aya’s apartment room. She set Aya down before lifting up the welcome mat and picking up the silver key which was underneath it.

“Same damn spot for the past three years, you really should change the spot every once and a while.” Miki said as she unlocked and opened Aya’s apartment door. “Why am I talking to you anyway? You’re unconscious.”

Miki once again picked up Aya after placing the key back in it’s lovely home under the welcome mat, bringing her to her bed.

Miki was even nice enough to place a blanket over Aya after removing her shoes and changing her into pajamas.

She then walked into Aya’s kitchen and pulled out aspirin and a bottled water, soon placing them both on Aya’s nightstand with a sticky note reading: ‘Pain killers are your friend.’

“Have lovely dreams of…Not killing me.” Miki said quietly before leaving the apartment, heading towards her own.

***********************************************************************************

“Ugh…She ruined my favorite pair of pants…” Miki mumbled to herself as she inspected the bullet hole in the back of her leg. The wound didn’t heal as fast as a normal wound would for Miki, considering it was specially made to harm vampires, so she wrapped a bandage around it after removing the bullet.

She walked over to her dresser with a sigh and grabbed a new pair of jeans, quickly pulling them on. “Where would she be?” She asked herself while changing into a new shirt as well.

After a few minutes of thinking and preparation, Miki left her room in search of a certain Morning Musume member.

In her room? Nope.

“Damn…I might actually have to try and look for her…” Miki groaned as she exited the Hello! Project apartments for a bit of fresh air to think.

“Oh, Fujimoto-san.” Reina said, walking up to her. “I wanted to talk to you about--”

She couldn’t even finish her sentence before she was shoved up against the building. “You…” Miki growled, fire sparking in her eyes.

“I…I can explain!” Reina managed to say. She was trembling although she was yankii, Reina knew she was out of her league.

“Aya tried to kill me…” Miki spoke, cold as ice, into Reina’s ear. “But I’m not going to be the one dying tonight.”
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on February 26, 2007, 04:36:02 AM
That was a great fight *__________________* The whole backflip thing was a bit confusing until I read word by word though xD! Nonetheless, holy shit at Aya, with power like that, how the hell could she not beat Maki if Miki said that she could? xD

But now... Miki versus Reina... Battle of the Yankii... WHO SHALL WIN O____O; I have the feeling that Miki's definately going beat the living hell out of Reina... -gives her a hardhat, and a special device that calls for Maki's help-

GOOD LUCK REINA O_________O;
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on February 26, 2007, 05:49:02 AM
yikes... Reina is in deeeeeeepp trouble Maki!! save her!!... er can't Reina write her way out of this mess? haha
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: len.chan on February 26, 2007, 06:49:37 AM
uaah, amazing fight. Ayaya sure takes her job seriously XD Let's hope that seeing that Miki didn't kill her she'll think twice before trying again...
Come ooon Maki! Reina needs you! XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on February 27, 2007, 03:02:55 AM
. . . You know, you made me very happy today :) I was mad at all the Aya and Miki stuff I had been seeing the past few days, and this totally tops it... cuz their KICKING EACH OTHERS' ASSES! Wooohoo! *Plus, Miki in the air and doing kicks... that's enough to set anyone off*

Ruined jeans? They have a REAL bullet hole on there, if anything, that made the jeans totally cooler! XD

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on February 27, 2007, 03:56:08 AM
Oh my gah! That fight was so cool. I was so conflicted on who I was rooting for but it was awesome anyway. Miki didn't kill Aya though...that's cute ^.^ I hope Aya learns something from that

I guess I'm the only one who hopes Miki DOES kick Reina's ass? XD....not like serious injuries...just enough to let her know she did a bad thing
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on February 27, 2007, 04:30:25 AM
Oh hell no! Who knew that Aya would kick so much ass?!?! I sure as hell didn't. And how could she do that to her best friend??? I mean, I wanna whack my best friend every once in a while but not beat them bloody.

Ok. That was a lie. Anyways, I hope Maki comes to save her Reina!! She better. Otherwise she won't have a wonky eyed follwer!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: cheesesticks on February 27, 2007, 04:57:59 AM
Damnit - Vampire hate takes priority over friendship. =(
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on February 27, 2007, 06:23:57 PM
wow, what a fight!!! and so detailed written I could picture every move in my head!
good thing Miki didn't kill Aya, wonder what Aya'll do when she wakes up?
considering she didn't even let Miki explain anything she'll probably try to kill her again XD

something I didn't quite get: did Miki already know Aya was a vampire hunter? at one point it sounded like that.

yeah and I too hope Reina gets a little bit slapped around by Miki before Maki intervenes XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: 00HB on February 27, 2007, 06:34:53 PM
WOooooooooooooooooooooooOA!
First time reading this fic and I must say I got it in an AWESOME chapter! O.o
Saikami, this plot line is great... As sLaVe-sama said, it's nice to NOT read miki and Aya being so nice to each other once in a while...
Just one question... If Yossie knows about it all... How can my Goddess be left out of this trouble in such a great fic? >_<
Great work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

[As it's my first post here, so I must say that I laughed my ass out with Maki and reina running on kamei and Yuko. hope to see more of these moments  XD ]
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on February 28, 2007, 12:06:11 AM
lykewoah. :o

Great job on the fight! I was totally into it. >.>;; Oh, and the trashcan part was funny, but I went "Awe" when she just took her to her apartment instead. Still, I wonder how the confrontations will be from now on? And, *gulps* poor Reina! D:

(Yeah, I was a BIG Buffy fan a few years back. xD)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: C60533 on February 28, 2007, 12:41:02 AM
Wow. The fight scene was really detailed and great. And Miki and her fetish with foreign films. Ne, Miki don't kill Reina. It will Aya want to kill you more and neither you nor us want that. Besides, you won't do that, right?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on February 28, 2007, 01:24:34 AM
NO KILL REINA >.< )_( <--angry mark

Holy crap...I saw the full fight in my head. Especially the "Mommy! I found Matsuura Aya!" and the Miki in tight jeans ^^;;;

*anticipates smackage*

-somewhere in Reina's apartment-

Reina: DON'T KILL ME!!!!
Miki: You gon' die BITCH!
Reina: -activates boobophone-
....
-random duplicate of Maki's boobs attacks Miki-

xDDDDDDD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on March 01, 2007, 03:38:06 AM
Yay Miki, I would laugh so hard if she actually killed Reina.
Title: Comments for Chapter Ten
Post by: Saikami on March 06, 2007, 12:52:39 AM
Yuuyami: Ah, the battle of the yankiis is finally here! -plays dramatic music-

Rei.rev.07: Hidden skills? XD Might take more than that to beat Miki.

stefy: Ah, afraid she can't write her way outta this one. XD

len.chan: Yes, Aya does take her job seriously. Maybe to the point where she'll still go after Miki even though she spaired her life? :O

sLaVe: Aya + Miki + kicking eachothers asses  = totally hawt in a very odd way. XD

KrazyForKamei: Well, Reina does need to learn her lesson. I agree although I personally didn't want her ass to be kicked at the same time. o___o;;

YoukaiChica: Everyone wants to beat their best friends bloodly sometimes XD But I think the thing between Miki and Aya is a bit more...dramatic.

cheesesticks: It's her job though :O

coachie: Yeah, Miki knew Aya was a vampire hunter from the fact that Aya and Maki got into a few fights. XD

00HB: Yay! New reader! :panda_kiss: Ah, your Goddess will make an apperance in this chapter!

black velvet: You don't even know how tempted I was to make Miki actually put her in the trashcan. XD

C60533: Miki just loves her foriegn films XD

Tanachan: I don't know if I should hit you or laugh at the boobophone. XD

rndmnwierd: You'd laugh? Wow, harsh. XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 06, 2007, 12:53:16 AM
-wedge- xD <3
Title: Words That Matter
Post by: Saikami on March 06, 2007, 12:57:16 AM
“Umm…Guess Aya got to you first…“ Reina said, and somehow managed to get out of Miki’s grip and distanced herself from the raging vampire.

“Aww, is a yankii like you scared?” Miki teased, leaning up against the wall. “Give me a good reason not to kill you and I might just send flowers to your funeral.”

“Um…” Reina knew she would have to think fast for this one. “Y-you don’t want to get Maki-san mad.”

Miki couldn’t help but to laugh at Reina’s response. “I piss her off everyday as it is.” she said coolly, “She couldn’t do much harm to me anyway.”

“She could, and you know it.” Reina said defensively.

“Pft, she’s pathetic.”

“Shut-up.”

“She’s weak, useless.”

“I said shut-up! She’s better than you’ll ever be!”

“Yeah right.” Miki said, knowing she was getting to Reina, “She doesn’t deserve to be considered a vampire. Hell, I’m starting to think she doesn’t even deserve to be called a pathetic mortal.”

“Take it back!” Reina yelled, fists clenched.

“And with the ways she’s been dressing for her songs and acting around people, especially around you.” Miki smirked, “What a whore.”

“You bitch!” Reina finally snapped, that was the last straw. She lunged at Miki with full force, punching the vampire in the stomach, causing Miki’s back to be crushed against the brick wall she was leaning against.

“You sure are brave…” Miki mumbled as she held her stomach and Reina backed up a few steps. “But you‘re sure as hell gunna regret that…” She then quickly went up to Reina, and grabbed her throat tight enough to stop oxygen from reaching the wonky eyed teen‘s lungs, lifting her off her feet.

Desperate for air, Reina did a rather cheap, yet effective move: She spat in Miki’s face and kicked her in the chest as hard as she could with both of her legs, thus pushing herself out of Miki’s grip and hitting the ground and skidding in a very ungraceful manner.

“So, you wanna play unfair?” Miki growled, wiping the spit from her eye as she walked towards Reina. “I guess I will too.”

Not yet…

Reina slowly started to get up, yet Miki kicked the younger hard in the side, sending her back to the ground once again.

Just a few more moments…

“Get up.” Miki spat, pulling Reina to her feet. “And to think, I’d figure you’d be a bit more of a challenge.” She smirked, showing her fangs. “Oh, and please struggle while I’m draining you, makes it all the more pleasurable.”

The vampire started to lean in towards Reina, ready to suck the girl dry. “I’ll make sure to let Maki know.”

Now!

Reina slammed her head into Miki’s with all the force she could and then punched the vampire in the mouth. Miki had stumbled backwards, holding her head in pain while cursing herself for falling for such a simple trick. Reina even managed to draw blood, Miki’s lip was now bleeding.  In that moment small window of opportunity, Reina charged at Miki.

But Miki was much too clever to fall for that, once Reina was close enough, she grabbed the girl’s arm with one hand, stepped to the side and then after sticking her foot out, gave Reina an extra little push with her free hand. “I’m not going to go so easy on you now.” she said as the teenager hit the ground. “But I’ll have to admit, I did wrong for underestimating you.”

The wonky eyed teen let out a small groan in pain as she started to stand up, keeping her eyes on Miki. Her opponent’s wounds were healing, and Reina was finally starting to feel the pain in her own as she walked towards Miki. Her limbs were covered in new bloody, dirt covered scrapes, and she was already suffering from the bruises that had yet to show. Although she was more or less giving her life to Miki by going on, she couldn’t give up that easily.

Miki smirked, “You stubborn little brat.” she said with a laugh.

“Just shut-up and fight.” Reina growled.

“As you wish.” Miki said once Reina was close enough to her. She grabbed the teen’s shoulders, pulling her closer as she kneed her in the stomach. Reina didn’t even have time to realize what was happening before Miki pulled down on her shoulders, slamming her to the ground on her stomach.

“Ugh…” Reina groaned, spitting up a bit of blood.

“No so tough now, are you?” Miki grabbed Reina by the collar, lifting her to her feet. She leaned in towards Reina once again, knowing that she was much too weak to fight back now.

Reina could feel the vampire’s breath against her skin, and then her fangs against her neck. She tried to push herself away, but it was no use, her limbs seemed to stay frozen where they were.

“It’s a damn shame you got involved…” Miki whispered, causing the younger’s hairs on the back of her neck to stand up, “You were cute too.”

Those were the last words Reina ever heard…

At least, that’s what she thought.

To her surprise, Reina found herself on the ground.

To even more of her surprise, she noticed Miki was on the ground as well. She turned to see Maki, who had slammed into Miki in the last second, walk over to Miki, fire in her eyes.

Miki stood up and was about to charge at Maki before something held her back. Yossie stood behind her, grabbing Miki’s arms and putting them in a lock. “Didn’t I tell you not to hurt Reina?” Yossie said to her, “You never listen.”

“And you haven’t eaten today,” Maki growled, coming closer. “So Yocchan can easily keep you there for as long as I want her to.”

“Remember the deal.” Yossie said, “Only hit her once.”

“Yeah, yeah.” Maki growled before slamming her fist into Miki’s face with full force, making Yossie need to take a few steps back to keep herself balanced. “But that deal was weeks ago.” She added before sending another punch into Miki’s stomach.

“Well, you have a point.” Yossie said, still holding Miki, “But take Reina-chan to your apartment, she should get cleaned up and stay away from Miki for a while.”

Maki nodded, satisfied for now. She’d get a better revenge while Yossie wasn’t around to stop her. She turned to Reina, and walked over to her. “I’m sorry about all this.” She said softly, picking the wonky eyed girl up wedding style.

Reina gave a small smile, “Thank you.” she said with a small nod, “But please don’t be sorry.”

Within minutes, Maki entered her apartment, and set Reina down on the bed.

“I told you that you didn’t have to carry me.” Reina said, but smiled at the fact that Maki still did.

“It was no big deal.” Maki said, returning the smile and walking into her bathroom, quickly returning with a small first aid kit. “Umm…I’ve never really have had to use one of these before.”

They opened it up to find that it had, like Maki said, never been used. She opened up an anti-bacterial product and inspected it, reading the back label to see if it could be put to any use, then pulled out a washcloth, dabbing a bit of the anti-bacterial onto it. “This might sting.”

“After what just happened, I think I can put up with any amount of pain.” Reina laughed lightly, trying to keep the mood light.

“Good point.” Maki gave a small laugh, and started to clean one of Reina’s knees.

It did in fact sting, but did very little use of cleaning the dirt out of the wound. “Well, we should get you cleaned up before we cover you in bandages and this stuff.” she said, putting a cap on the bottle. “Come into the bathroom.”

Reina nodded and stood, following Maki into the bathroom.

Maki turned the metal knobs of her shower, causing water to pour out of the shower head. “Okay, get in.” Maki said, starting to strip down.

Reina blushed but nodded and did as she was told, she also stripped down and entered the shower, Maki soon followed, holding a wash cloth. She couldn’t tell if Maki was also blushing or it was just from the hot water. Her eyes glanced down, yet she quickly looked away.

Maki washed most of Reina’s wounds in silence, neither of them knowing exactly what to say.

“Well, all cleaned up.” Maki finally said, as she turned off the shower and started to get out, grabbing a towel for herself and another for Reina.

“Thank you very much.” Reina said with a smile, taking the towel as she stepped out of the shower and wrapped it around herself.

Maki nodded, forcing herself to look away from Reina as she walked towards her dresser. “I’ll give you some pajamas to wear.” she said while she searched through the drawers.

“Okay,” Reina nodded, starting to dry herself off, “Yeah, I think my clothes will have to be thrown out.” she examined her bloody jeans and shirt. At least her undergarments weren’t ruined. She grabbed a purple thong which laid on the bathroom floor and slipped it on, following with her bra.

Maki dried herself off and then changed into a pair of small gym shorts and a tank top. She walked over to Reina and handed her a pair of pajama bottoms and a tank top.

“Thank you.” Reina said once again, quickly changing into them.

Maki nodded and sat down on the bed, “We should bandage you up first though.” she said, “You don’t have many that need bandages so it wont take long.”

Reina nodded and sat down on the bed, grabbing the first aid kit and pulling out the proper supplies needed to wrap up the wounds. There were only three that were horribly bad, one on her right shoulder, the other on her right knee, and the last on her left arm.

“I’m really sorry about her…“ Maki said as she took some of the bandages and started wrapping Reina’s shoulder after putting more anti-biotical medicine on it. “She had no right to do that, I know she was upset that you had told Aya, but she would of found out about Miki eventually.”

Reina was silent for a few minutes while Maki finished up her should and then her arm as well.

“Well…It wasn’t exactly her who started the fight…” Reina mumbled softly, watching Maki bandage her knee.

“What?” Maki asked, raising an eyebrow, “You mean to say, you started the fight?”

Reina slowly nodded, “Yeah…”

“Why would you do that?” Maki asked, finished wrapping her knee. “You know she can easily kill you if she wanted.”

“It’s just…”

“It’s just what? Why would you put yourself in danger like that?” Maki looked up to be face to face with her, but the teen refused to make eye contact.

“But she had called you a whore…” Reina mumbled, “Is it that bad to try and stop a person for saying such things about the person you love?” She then finally looked Maki in the eyes.

Maki had forgotten whatever it was she was going to say before Reina had said those words. Slowly, she put a hand on Reina’s cheek, her thumb softly brushing across her lips before a smile appeared upon her own. She didn’t respond with words, nor did she need to, Maki leaned forward, and kissed Reina’s lips gently.

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The sunlight managed to wake the wonky eyed teenager up, she stretched slightly before opening her eyes to find herself, once again, cuddling up to Maki. She blinked a couple times but pulled herself closer to the sleeping soloist, while doing so she realized one thing.

Maki wasn’t wearing anything.

Nor was she.

Her eyes widened as she realized exactly what had happened the prior night.

I had…With…? Reina looked at Maki once again, every little detail of what happened flying through her mind. I didn’t even know she was able to do THAT. I mean…That's just plain SKILL.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 06, 2007, 01:00:46 AM
Yankii fight was absolutely awesome *-*;

But damn, if Yossie could hold back Miki like that, does this mean she's stronger than her? o______o...?

OMGOMGOMGOMG REINA AND MAKI FINALLY CONFESSED AND DID IT! WOO~!

But now there's the question of how Reina and Maki will act towards eachother after xD I mean, they seriously can't act all lovey dovey in front of other H!P members, right...? Or could they...? o__o;

Hawt damn, it would be lovely if you wrote a perv (at RenaiRev, not perv section here) for that chapter :]............

:]...

:]...

Write more <3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on March 06, 2007, 01:17:30 AM
Reina standing up and fighting for Maki's honour...dayum cute. :yep:


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Maki nodded, satisfied for now. She’d get a better revenge while Yossie wasn’t around to stop her. She turned to Reina, and walked over to her. “I’m sorry about all this.” She said softly, picking the wonky eyed girl up wedding style.

...

“I told you that you didn’t have to carry me.” Reina said, but smiled at the fact that Maki still did.
Aw. :)


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“It’s just what? Why would you put yourself in danger like that?” Maki looked up to be face to face with her, but the teen refused to make eye contact.

“But she had called you a whore…” Reina mumbled, “Is it that bad to try and stop a person for saying such things about the person you love?” She then finally looked Maki in the eyes.
Awwwww...:baa60776:


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Maki had forgotten whatever it was she was going to say before Reina had said those words. Slowly, she put a hand on Reina’s cheek, her thumb softly brushing across her lips before a smile appeared upon her own. She didn’t respond with words, nor did she need to, Maki leaned forward, and kissed Reina’s lips gently.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! :inlove:


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I had…With…? Reina looked at Maki once again, every little detail of what happened flying through her mind. I didn’t even know she was able to do THAT. I mean…That just plain SKILL.
BOOYAH!!! :ONwahaha:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Estrea on March 06, 2007, 06:11:57 AM
Finally caught up to reading this fic! Totally awesome! Vampires rock. And you kick ass! XD More updating soon~
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on March 06, 2007, 06:40:13 AM
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I had…With…? Reina looked at Maki once again, every little detail of what happened flying through her mind. I didn’t even know she was able to do THAT. I mean…That's just plain SKILL.


I lol'd even though Reina lived.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: len.chan on March 06, 2007, 07:37:28 AM
I'm really interested to know why Yossi can handle Miki and what was that deal with Maki...

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didn’t even know she was able to do THAT. I mean…That's just plain SKILL.

letting fly my imagination... Maki~ :drool:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on March 06, 2007, 06:33:12 PM
again awesome fight scene!

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“So, you wanna play unfair?” Miki growled, wiping the spit from her eye as she walked towards Reina. “I guess I will too.”

Not yet…

Reina slowly started to get up, yet Miki kicked the younger hard in the side, sending her back to the ground once again.

Just a few more moments…

“Get up.” Miki spat, pulling Reina to her feet. “And to think, I’d figure you’d be a bit more of a challenge.” She smirked, showing her fangs. “Oh, and please struggle while I’m draining you, makes it all the more pleasurable.”

The vampire started to lean in towards Reina, ready to suck the girl dry. “I’ll make sure to let Maki know.”

Now!


that part made me think Maki was already watching the fight and waiting for her moment to strike while checking out Reina's fighting skills XD

And Maki X Reina finally SAID IT and DID IT!!! wooohoooo XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 06, 2007, 09:54:59 PM
Don't mind my invasion irrevelant to the story for a second xD

I just realized I spent my 666th post on this thread. Roffle.

With me though, your story won't be jinxed.

Afterall, me of all people performing superstitions is love instead of hate <3

Better write m'dear, or I'll tell Auntie you've given your fans hell of waiting for the next chapter >:C

xD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Amarghetta on March 06, 2007, 09:56:14 PM
Quote from: Saikami;270324

“Yes, and yes. I know: I’m gay and anal so everything has to be perfect when it comes to that stuff.”
   
“I love that sentence because you just used the terms gay and anal together without referring to sex.”
   
“Will you stop interrupting me!?”

Upon reading this I thought "How in the world I managed to miss this fic?" This is priceless, really.

I suspected Miki being a vampire when Maki stormed into her room, but somehow I can't still picture her as one. She's too cool and funny to be one, hehe.

I lol'd big time when Eri caught Maki and Reina, mostly because I pictured her Elizabeth Kyamei style...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: KrazyForKamei on March 07, 2007, 12:23:39 AM
That fight scene was super cool! I'm glad Miki showed her who's boss...until Maki came atleast ^.^;;

The fact that Yossie was able to hold Miki back makes me suspicious...is she a vampire too?? Or...maybe Miki was just really weak from the fight...hmmm

The Maki/Reina-ness was uber adorable. They finally confessed! How cute! They also did the nasty! How cute! <3 XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on March 07, 2007, 01:43:16 AM
Holy Friar Francis! That fight scene had me pulling my hair out. I was totally rooting for Reina, though. Miki, you are so bad! D<

*ahem*

The shower scene was pretty awkward. :o I am glad they finally confessed, though! Yay! :heart:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on March 07, 2007, 04:55:49 PM
Wow. Reina is so brave!! Or silly and blinded by love. Either way, that was sweet how she was risking her life just to get Miki for calling Maki a whore. Aw.

Thank goodness Maki and Yossie came to save her. And the shower scene was very unexpected. But strangely sweet as well.

And the end!! Now things well definitely be more awkward but it was about time they realized their feelings for each other!!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on March 08, 2007, 06:51:35 PM
But I no likey GAM pairings ;_; Oh well, it was still hot.
Even though ass-kicking Miki "should" seem scary or intimidating, it just makes her all the more hotter to me... I don't know why, but does it matter? no.

Purple thong...tee hee.
It seems really stupid, but the last part had me giggling...

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on March 10, 2007, 06:27:29 PM
Wow. I read this chapter twice. And might I add it seems really cool when you have "THe Point of no Return" playing in the background.

And the Phantom's face was revealed as Maki was Kicking Miki's ass...how perfect was that timing?

but DAYUM...I can't make ANY comments on this chapter. Not that it was crappy, I just don't want the living shit slapped out of me by you.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on March 11, 2007, 06:35:12 AM
The fight between Reina and Miki... phew it wasn't as bad as I thought it'll be, Reina really has some guts to attack Miki like that... thank god Maki and Yossi came to her rescue!

Gaahhhhhhhh... What a cute way to confess her feelings! But eh... arn't they rushing their relationship alittle too fast? Reina just confessed and then they had sex...
Title: Comments for Chapter Eleven
Post by: Saikami on March 13, 2007, 11:05:50 PM
Yuuyami: XD I might write a perv on RenaiRev if it's requested enough by le readers. :D Oh, and it was your 666th posts! I think that's considered good luck for vampires, right? :ONwahaha:

Rei.rev.07: XD Spitting in the face is always a good tatic if you're desperate.

JFC: I read this comment at school and roffled. XD

Estrea: Woo! Thank you very much~!

rndmnwierd: You STILL want her dead? :ON@_@:

len.chan: Let your imagination fly as much as you want. XD

coachie: XD Not quite what you expected, right? I was actually thinking of putting Maki there, but decided it'd be cooler if Reina put up more of a fight. She's yankii after all.

Amarghetta: Yay! Thank you for reading. ^^- I'm glad you like it.

KrazyForKamei: Ah, if there is a secret behind Yossie, it will be revealed later. >:3 But there's always the possibility that there is indeed no secret to it and Miki was just weak from le fight and not eating.

black velvet: It wouldn't be my fic without a bit of awkwardness in it. XD

YoukaiChica: Love can cause great blindness, even if your life is in danger.

sLaVe: A pissed Miki is always hawt. <3

Tanachan: You are getting smarter. XD -pats head- Maybe I'll let you post a normal comment without slapping you sometime.

stefy: There was a lot of sexual tension between them, a LOT. XD
Title: Chapter Tweleve - A Day of Filming
Post by: Saikami on March 13, 2007, 11:07:47 PM
Although the memories of the prior night were rather enjoyable, the wonky eyed teen started to mentally panic slightly.

What if this was a one night thing!? What if Tsunku finds out!? What if my mom finds out!? And Yuko wouldn’t let me live it down…And what if that was all a dream? Oh my gahh!!! What if NACCHI finds out!?

Reina felt Maki move slightly, and turned to see if the soloist was awake. As soon as she faced Maki, she was greeted with a kiss and all of Reina’s mental panicking vanished as she kissed the other back.

“G’morning.” Maki said with a smile as she sat up, scanning the room for her clothes, which were scattered across the floor.

“Very good mornin’.” Reina said, returning the smile as she too sat up, both of them blushing horribly.

Damn…This isn’t a time for me to be all shy… The two thought in unison.

Neither of them had much more to think, or say, before that familiar FLAME song started to play from somewhere in the room. “Ugh…” Reina groaned slightly, reaching for her cell phone that was on the floor next to the bed.

“’Ello?” Reina said sleepily into the phone. “What do you mean where am I?” she asked, raising an eyebrow. “What!? We have filming today? Yeah, I’ll be there soon. I’m very sorry.” she hung up the phone, pretty much falling out of the bed while she started to gather her clothes quickly, pulling them on.

Maki also started to get up, grabbing her own clothes and putting them on. “You’re not going in those, are you?” she asked as Reina picked up her bloodstained jeans. “And your shirt is just as bad.”

“Umm…” Reina scratched the back of her head, laughing lightly.

“You can borrow some of my clothes.” Maki said with a small laugh, opening her dresser. “I’m sorry I made you late.”

“It’s not your fault.” Reina said with a smile, “Apparently everyone found out around six this morning. Last minute things, of course.”

Maki nodded, and tossed Reina a t-shirt and jeans. The shirt was a bit baggy on her in certain areas, and the jeans a bit too long on her legs, but overall everything fit okay.

“Thank you very much.” Reina said as she was pulling on her shoes. “I owe you a lot.”

“Don’t worry about it.” Maki smiled, walking over to Reina. “Mind if I walk you there?”

Reina laughed, “It’ll be more like a run, but I‘d be more than happy if you did.”

Maki pulled on her shoes as well, and they started to jog as they talked.

“Umm…So about last night.” Reina finally brought herself to bring up. “Should we keep this whole thing about us a secret?”

Maki thought for a moment, “Well, I personally wouldn’t like to keep it a secret, but we could get into trouble with Tsunku.”

“Yeah, I don’t want to keep it a secret either.” Reina said, “But what if we just make sure Tsunku just doesn’t find out?” she gave a small smirk.

Maki also smirked, “Or the press.” she added.

“Or Nacchi.”

Maki laughed lightly. “Alright, that sounds like a good plan.” she said, “But what does Nacchi have to do with this?”

“I dunno, she just kinda intimidates me a bit I guess.” Reina said, “She thinks kissing between girls is completely wrong.”

“You started a fight with Miki, but you’re intimidated by Nacchi?” Maki gave a small laugh.

“Heh. Weird, ain’t it?” Reina also laughed.

Within minutes, the two reached the filming studio and entered the building. Reina gave Maki a quick kiss before running off to the changing rooms. She had ten minutes to get ready.

“There you are!” Eri said with a laugh as Reina walked into the room. “Where have you been? I was going to call you soon.”

Reina scratched the back of her head, “Well, I was--”

“She was off having sex.” A voice said with a smirk, Reina quickly turned her head to see who it was, not believing her ears.

This was worse than Miki.

Yuko smirked, walking over to the two girls. “And with Maki, I’m guessing.”

Reina felt her face turn red. “Erm…How--”

She was cut off again by Yuko. “How do I know?” she asked, laughing, “It’s obvious, m’dear. Your hair has that ‘I-just-had-sex-and-am-late-for-work’ look, you’re blushing, and lets not forget those hickeys.”

“Wah?!” Reina asked, running over to the mirror. “How do you know what peoples hair looks like after that?”

“I’ve seen that exact look on my little Turtle here after I had a bit of fun with her.” Yuko put an arm around a now horribly blushing Eri.

“Yuuuko!!” Eri said, looking away from the two girls.

Reina had no clue what to say at that moment, so she simply started to try and fix her hair.

“You should cover those up.” Yuko said with a laugh, “Use this.” she tossed a bottle of cover-up makeup to Reina. “It worked well with Eri when she had them.”

“Yuuuko!!” Eri cried again, blushing even more.

“Aww, you’re so cute when you blush.” Yuko said with a grin, kissing Eri quickly before running off to get ready on the set.

Reina took the makeup, and applied it quickly, luckily it did work rather well. Eri sat down, the silence annoyingly awkward.

“So…You two really did it?” Eri asked suddenly.

“Did you?”

“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

“At least we’re legal.”

Before Reina could come up with a response, Yossie walked into the room “You have two minutes to get out here.” she said to the two with a smile, “Glad you made it, Reina-chan.”

Reina nodded to the leader, and stood up, very thankful that she had time to fix herself up. Both Eri and herself grabbed their kindergarten uniform for the World Children’s Games and put them on.

“Why is Nakazawa-san here anyway?” Reina enquired as they walked onto the set.

“Because I’m your teacher today.” Yuko said with a grin.

“Great.” Reina mumbled, “Just great.”

“Aw, come on Reina-chan.” Eri said with a smile, “She’s not as bad as you think.”

“It’s not that.” Reina said, glaring in a certain direction, at a certain vampire who was now chatting with Yossie.

Eri looked from one yankii to the other with slight confusion. “You two get into an argument?”

“Something like that.” Reina said as Miki looked over at the wonky eyed teen, returning the glare with her own.

Reina and Eri sat down, and they started to film. The prize was doughnuts and they looked mighty delicious. Too bad they only got a little bit in the end, but Reina couldn’t help but to smile when she noticed Eri glancing at Yuko throughout the games whenever she spoke. Yet that smile quickly vanished when she noticed Miki’s little grab at Ai. That perverted demon seemed to put Reina in a horrid mood.

Although, throughout filming, she started to feel better. Yuko turned out to be the host for the main segment as well. It was a drawing game, and Reina was rather good at it. She even got sponge cake.

While filming the main segment though, Reina had to be next to Miki. Which almost killed her, and from the looks of it, Miki too. They refused to make eye contact with one another, and the one time their eyes met, it was a death glare from both sides while Yuko danced over to them.

Eri on the other hand, was having a lot of fun as she showed her interesting artwork (which looked very…original compared to the others), sang along with the songs, and the occasional glance at Yuko when the camera wasn’t looking. Reina was shocked that she hadn’t noticed them before, it was almost more than obvious the two had a thing for one another. But what shocked the wonky eyed girl even more was the fact that she started to see Eri and Yuko as a cute couple.

Before Reina had a chance to run off after filming, Eri told her that she should drop by and watch them film the News Segment. The turtle even promised that Reina would enjoy it, especially if she was pissed at Miki. A little amusement never hurt anybody. Plus, Maki was working at that time anyway.

Eri was right. Reina was amused.

Here she was, trying not to laugh while Miki Fujimoto was tied up in a chair, looking rather pathetic and helpless.

Yuko was taking Miki’s place, go figure. Reina personally thought that Yuko did a much better job than the vampire, it was like Maido Arii all over again.

After filming, Eri, Yuko, and Reina chatted before the couple ended up having to run off to do some errands.

Reina was just about to head out herself before a person stepped in front of her. “What are you doing here?” Miki said, trying to keep her tone normal but it ended up as a half growl.

“Eri wanted me to stop by.” Reina said, giving Miki a small glare. “Now let me through.”

“You’re lucky they showed up last night.”

“Damn right I am.” Reina said, pushing Miki aside as she started to walk towards the exit.

“You’re not leaving that easily.” Miki snatched the back of Reina’s shirt and shoved her into an empty room.

“Just because you don’t have Matsuura-san anymore doesn’t mean you have to try and get in my pants.”

Miki growled and shoved Reina against the wall. “I’ll kill you right here and now.”

“You know, you’re not very threatening with those clothes on.” Reina pointed out to Miki, who was still wearing her lolita outfit.

Miki punched the wall, centimeters from the teen’s head.

“Like I said, not so threatening.”

“Where’d you come up with a line like that?” Miki said, smirking. “Some American fan fiction about yourself?”

Reina pushed Miki away, but it caused a small amount of pain in her injured shoulder. She knew she couldn’t fight the vampire, so the best plan was to get away. She headed towards the door.

“Didn’t I tell you you’re not getting away that easily?” Miki stepped in front of the door, the only exit in the room.

“What do you want?” Reina snapped, “Didn’t you have enough fun beating the shit out of me last night, Lolita-chan?”

“Quit it with the nicknames.” Miki spat, twitching slightly.

Reina smirked slightly, she knew Miki hated those outfits. “Why don’t you go off to an anime convention? You’ll fit right in during the cosplay event.”

Before Miki could reply to, or hit, Reina, her cell phone started to ring. She picked it up and leaned against the door, reading the text.

“You’re lucky.” she spat, opening the door and headed for the changing rooms.

“Apparently luck’s on my side today.” Reina said, blinking a couple times as she left the building as quickly as she possibly could.

After a few minutes, Miki had also exited the building, rereading the text she received from Aya:

‘Let’s finish this.’
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 13, 2007, 11:08:56 PM
Dibs on first comment! <3

I love Yuko and Eri's chemistry so much xD So crackalicious, yet they're meant to be *____________* Especially when Yuko openly admitted that she's had fun with Eri and what she looked like afterwards, haha xD Then there's the whole Threatening-Miki-In-Lolita thing which I noticed you alluded to my fic yet again, roffle xD!!!!

Gahh damn I want to see this final fight with Aya and Miki! *________*; I will laugh if she runs out in her lolita costume xD But I doubt that would happen xD Looking forward to the big fight!...And hope Miki doesn't get killed this time o_o;... What's worse, what if it's a repeat and Miki goes after Reina after this again? o___O; I smell another sex scene with Reina and Maki >:] Then again, what kind of author repeats? haha, just the little crazy old man in me xD

I repeat, I look forward to the fight! <3
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Estrea on March 14, 2007, 03:15:04 AM
This chapter cracked me up with all the funny references. XD I'll just name a few, because I don't want to stretch my whole post too much. :P

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“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

Pot-kettle-black. XD

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“Where’d you come up with a line like that?” Miki said, smirking. “Some American fan fiction about yourself?”

THAT cracked me up. Subtle way to break the 4th wall! XD

And anyway, I agree with Yuuyami. Dying to see how the final showdown between Aya and Miki goes. Gonna be seriously hot. XD

*gets down on knees and prays* Let there be GAM, let there be GAM...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on March 14, 2007, 03:45:31 AM
Vampire-Slayer chick fight part 2!!!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on March 14, 2007, 03:54:41 AM
that chapter was gold
YukoXEri :heart: MakiXReina
LoliMiki confronting Reina XD

Ok, everybody's waiting for the BIG EPIC AyaXMiki fight, but I'll predict there won't be one! They gonna settle this somehow but not with a hand to hand fight.
Maybe a pillow fight XD
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on March 14, 2007, 05:31:01 AM
Well dang, what's there to say that hasn't already been touched on?

Yuko/Eri? Check
Maki/Reina? Check-a-roo
Miki in Lolita dress('talking' to Reina)? Uh-huh
Witty Banter? You know it
GAM fight? Yep

Hmm, so what can I say...? Oh, I know!~ Reina in Maki's clothes! Heh heh, that's certainly one way to get into somebody's pants! *crickets chirp*
I need to stop thinking...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on March 15, 2007, 04:32:16 PM
Ahaha. Reina's afraid of Nacchi. Then again, I guess I would be too. My favorite part was her thoughts when she woke up. Amazing. Now a GAM fight is coming up, eh? You know, those two just need to admit that they want to get into each other's pants and be done with it. Maki and Reina did and it wasn't that hard. Then again, Reina and Maki weren't trying to kill each other...
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Estrea on March 15, 2007, 04:34:55 PM
Quote from: YoukaiChica;329889
Then again, Reina and Maki weren't trying to kill each other...


You know, the fact that Aya and Miki are trying to kill each other might make for hotter and rougher action when they finally come to their senses and do it.

...ok I did not just say that. =X
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on March 16, 2007, 01:30:27 AM
Ooh <3 This is looking good

*bleeping himself out for fear of smackage starting now*
*bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on March 17, 2007, 11:36:19 PM
Quote from: rndmnwierd;328841
Heh heh, that's certainly one way to get into somebody's pants! *crickets chirp*
I need to stop thinking...
xD don't worry, I cracked up... but that's only cuz im high up on iced caffine... So I need to stop thinking as well.

Of course those pants are  gonna big on Reina! No one can fill thos hot hips and femine muscle-thighs... <3~
I just can't wait to see GAM fight, it's like the highlight of the day :ONwhistle:

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on March 19, 2007, 12:42:02 AM
Quote
“So…You two really did it?” Eri asked suddenly.

“Did you?”

“Well…Uh, yeah.” Eri said, glancing at Reina. “…But isn’t she like four years older than you?”

“Looks who’s talking, she's sixteen years older than you.”

“At least we’re legal.”
:lol:  Yuko the sugar-momma!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on March 20, 2007, 06:21:25 AM
GUESS WHO'S BACK AND CAUGHT UP!
It's your number one fan who's been too busy to post til now. (Yes even though it was spring break)

Writing the part where Maki and Reina (you know what in bed) was a really bold course of action, especially in a work-safe fanfic part of the forums. But I love it because both girls are sekushi!

I loved the updates, keep writing. ^_^
Sai-chan, may I give you a slice of cake for your hard work and effort? *blush*
I'll continue to read and appreciate this fan-fic as long as there'll be more chapters. *hands out piece of cake*
Title: Comments for Chapter Twelve
Post by: Saikami on March 20, 2007, 08:34:32 PM
Yuuyami: Yes, Eri and Yuko are ment to be. XD Gotta love them! You're beloved fight is here~!

Estrea: -pats head- Let's see if your praying worked. XD

glcorps2002: Nice title for it. XD

coachie: Ah, a pillow fight would of been funny. XD

rndmnwierd: I thought that was a good one joke. :ROFL

YoukaiChica: Ah, Estrea is right on that one. It COULD lead to rougher and hawter action. :ONkekeke:

Tanachan: I could smack you for the sake of what you could be saying. :O

sLaVe: Damn you got me thinking of Maki's hawt hips and femine muscle-thighs. :pen_bleed:

JFC: That's Yuko for ya. XD

Ame-kun: Yay! You're back. :panda_kiss: And you brought cake! <3 -munches on it- Yes, it was a slightly bold move but it's not like I could post in the perv anyway. ^^;;
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 20, 2007, 08:35:52 PM
-wedge- xD
Title: Chapter Thirteen - Nothing More, Nothing Less
Post by: Saikami on March 20, 2007, 08:36:53 PM
Miki already knew where the fight would be, although it was never mentioned in the text she received from Aya. She opened up the large wooden doors to an abandoned building, Aya and her had spent many memories in that building, often going there if they wanted a nice quiet and peaceful place to walk around and just be themselves.

The vampire looked up at a pillar in the ceiling, from which then supported a platform that a person could sit on to get a good view of the place. Aya and Miki had spent hours in that spot talking, relaxing, and sharing secrets. She closed her eyes for a second, watching the memories fly by in her mind but quickly opened them after hearing that voice she knew all too well.

“So, you actually came, eh?” Aya said, leaning against a wall. She had a different look about her than normal, and Miki noticed it immediately.

She’s serious about this…You can see it in her eyes.

The two held gazes for seconds until Miki finally took the first step forward, “My best friend wouldn‘t try to kill me.” she said calmly.

“My best friend wouldn‘t be some monster!” Aya snapped, pulling out a long katana, in which a cross was engraved at the base.

Miki dodged the sword that was jabbed straight for her heart by grabbing the blade with her palms, the tip of the blade just millimeters from the groping devil’s breast.

“You wouldn’t want to ruin those, would you?” Miki said, taking a jump backwards before Aya attempted another attack.

There’s no choice…

After dodging yet another attack, Miki jumped high in the air, doing a front flip, landing behind Aya so the two were back to back. Quickly, Miki elbowed the other in the back before kicking the back of her knee, causing Aya to collapse onto the floor.

Aya gave a low growl, and spun her body, pushing herself up into a handstand while she kicked Miki in the chin and spun herself onto her feet while her opponent stumbled backwards. She took the opportunity vertically swung the sword at Miki.

The vampire once again jumped backwards to avoid the sword but soon found it was now taking a horizontal swing at her. Miki quickly fell on her back to try to dodge the sword but it managed to graze her cheek before she hit the floor.

Aya then made another attempt to slice Miki, who had almost nowhere to run at that moment. The sword came down and such a fast pace, Aya closed her eyes at the last second before it would kill the vampire. After feeling her sword contact, she opened her eyes to find that the sword was pressed into the bottom of Miki’s hooker boots from her lolita outfit.

Aya didn’t know exactly what to think, and Miki took advantage of that moment by kicking her in the ankles, causing her to fall, but the hunter caught herself with her hands to keep from smashing her face into the concrete.

“How dare you try to murder me! After all we've been through?!” Miki yelled as they both got up, wiping the blood away with her hand, the wound would take longer to heal thanks to the engraved cross on the other’s sword.

“The connection between us is dead!”

Aya quickly pulled out a dagger and just as Miki had time to realize what was going on, she sidestepped, and the dagger flew into the wall behind her. It seemed as soon as Miki pulled out the dagger, Aya felt a small sting on her cheek. She ran a finger across it, just a graze, just as Miki had received earlier. After all, an eye for an eye they say.

Now with fire in her eyes, the younger charged at Miki with full force, her katana pointed right at the other. Miki jumped up at the last possible second, holding onto a ceiling pillar while watching Aya, who’s katana was now stuck into the wall much like her dagger was moments ago.

Miki dropped down quickly before Aya had a chance to get her katana and grabbed her shoulder. The other turned to face Miki, making an attempt to punch her but was blocked swiftly and Miki made a jab for her stomach which was blocked as well.

“You’re holding back!” Aya spat as her fist finally made contact with Miki’s shoulder.

Miki punched Aya’s jaw out of reaction from the hit she took, causing Aya to stumble backwards. “And you’re not?! After all, would someone fight their best friend like this!?”

“We’re not best friends!” Aya ripped her sword out of the wall as Miki grabbed the best weapon she could find for her own defense in that time. Which was a crowbar.

Although, one might think it was rather pathetic of her to use a crowbar, it managed to block the katana from carving into Miki’s skin.

Aya attacked with more force, Miki could tell she was really going all out this time and had no choice but to fight back with all she had as well. The metal of their weapons clashed against each other, neither had a half a second to think of anything but of the attacks they were sending or receiving. Finally, Miki kneed Aya in the stomach, sending her backwards.

“Not best friends?! What are we then?! I thought I knew you, Aya!” Miki said, trying to catch her breath as she spoke, or rather yelled.

Aya lunged at Miki, swinging the blade down with all of her might. Though, the vampire raised her crowbar just in time to block the move. In that brief momentum, Miki had enough power to actually push Aya higher into the air with her block. So when Aya was launched, Miki jumped high in attempt to land a good hit on the hunter’s chest. However, Aya managed to block that hit, but accidentally propelled herself even higher into the air with the sheer force.

They both might have fallen from there, but the situation did not call for it. As if there was an invisible ledge, the vampire also launched herself higher in the air by kicking off that invisible ledge, and tried again with the aerial attack, for those kinds of attacks are supposed to be a vampire’s specialty. She made the mistake of thrusting her crowbar instead of swinging it, so Aya winded up dodging it by using her own sword as a counter to move herself away from the attack.

After that, she gained the advantage of gravity as she fell towards the ground, but not without carrying Miki with her. She clung to Miki’s waist and then flipped over so that Miki’s head would be the first to bash into the floor.

At this point in time though, Miki also had the advantage of gravity for she also tried to flip the other as well. Both women were in a twister of flipping as one tried to land the other on their head. Eventually, their cyclone of rolling was so fast that it even made them dizzy. Finally, the fated victim who landed first happened to be Miki. Aya got off of the vampire and held her sword at her side. “You got too laidback into thinking that you knew me…”

Miki got up despite the blood coming from her head. “Well is there anything else I don’t know about you?!” She charged with the crowbar in hand, ready to strike Aya hard in the head. The hunter ducked as the crowbar swung overhead, and then did an uppercut with her fist. The vampire caught Aya’s tactic and moved to the side, letting Aya miss, and then ramming into her full force with the back of her shoulder. The younger was thrown against another pillar. Aya then got up with the support of her sword.

“Oh, here’s a good one! What’s your favorite episode from Dragonball GT?!” Miki swung the crowbar at Aya’s head yet again. Instead of dodging it, Aya used the tip of the hilt of her blade to stop the attack altogether, and disrupted it by swinging her sword from that angle. Miki managed to back away in time, but the sword managed to cut off a lock of hair from her.

“Here’s another! How could you hate me so much?! Is your job more important than your best friend?!” Miki raised the crowbar again, ready to strike the incoming raging woman lunging at her. This time, it seemed like a true sword fight, regardless of the crowbar Miki wielded. Aya was pressing forward the attack, while Miki walked backwards trying to block all of Aya’s frantic hits. There were a few times where Miki had the upper hand and was the one walking forward with Aya blocking, but this battle seemed to favor the younger more than the older.

Miki felt her back press into a wall, nearly tripping if it hadn’t been for Aya’s holy blade causing her to throw out blocking moves every time. Because she didn’t have enough space for her arms to quickly block a move aimed for her chest, Aya managed to knock the crowbar out of Miki’s hands with a swift kick, and during that turn, Miki tried to punch the hunter, but Aya was too cunning for that. She slid against the punch and grabbed that fist. Miki tried throwing the other fist for a second punch but for some reason, Aya managed to pin that one too. Now, Aya was holding both of Miki’s wrists with her left hand, and raised them high over their heads, against the wall, while Aya quickly placed her sword horizontally against Miki’s neck, ready to force it forward in case the vampire tried something.

Miki was trapped.

“For one thing, if you knew me so well you would know that I don’t hate you. We’re not best friends because I thought we were something more than that. The only thing I hate is that you kept it a secret from me…”

Before Miki had a chance to do anything, the katana fell to the floor and she felt Aya’s lips press against her own. The older didn’t reply with words, nor did she need to as she placed her hands on younger’s hips and deepened the kiss.

Their once innocent playful kisses soon became more forceful, each wanting more and more of the other. The groping devil couldn’t resist any longer, her hands started to wander around Aya’s body, making their way up her shirt as she started to kiss down Aya’s jaw line. Just before Miki reached the younger’s collarbone, she started her way back up again to Aya’s cut on her cheek and licked the small amount of blood that trickled from it clean.

A good hour or two later, the two walked out of the building hand in hand. Aya seemed to be blushing rather horribly as she fixed her hair with her free hand, which caused Miki’s smirk to grow.

“A vampire and a hunter, who would of thought?” Miki said with a small laugh.

Aya looked forward to see the sun starting to set in the distance. “We’re not a vampire and a hunter…” she said softly.

“Eh, really?” Miki looked at Aya with a raised eyebrow.

The younger turned to face the other with a kind smile. “We’re simply people. Nothing more, nothing less.”
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on March 20, 2007, 08:38:41 PM
Amazing fight! *_____* The hold Aya had on Miki for the final was kinky and hawt ;] Glad they love eachother... After beating the shit out of eachother, roffle xD

Hopefully, this means Miki won't beat the crap out of Reina anymore :]

-wonders where you're going with the story now xD-
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Estrea on March 20, 2007, 10:43:18 PM
AHA I was right! XD XD XD

I love you for answering my GAM prayer! Hot fight....that last bit when they start kissing...:pen_bleed:

Can I beg for a perv version of their encounter? Pwease? :baa60776:

Love that last line. "We're simply people. Nothing more, nothing less." Amazing what love can do. XD

Can't wait for what happens next!
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on March 20, 2007, 11:08:06 PM
I feel this relationship will not end well, but good luck to those two anyway.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on March 20, 2007, 11:28:38 PM
Omg, I lost all vision from the blood rushing out of my head through my nose.:pen_bleed:
That was extremely sexy, it reminds me of a Kill Bill match.
- 2 hot chicks
- 2 swords (or sword-like weapon that can be used as a sword)
- 1 steamy make-out session (not in Kill Bill but oh the possibilities)

"O the great heavens... sent a poet":ONfarofflook:

I LOVE YOU SAIKAMI!! I'm gonna give you a surprise gift :heart:

Though I dont really have any real talent, this is the best I can do for ya ^_^ (I hate drawing hands)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v32/xxrainxx/FoF.jpg)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: orangesocks on March 21, 2007, 04:44:03 AM
Aww, thank God Aya didn't mean to kill Miki!!! And WOW, your description of the battle was really vivid! :ONluvluv2:
Quote

'The younger turned to face the other with a kind smile. “We’re simply people. Nothing more, nothing less.”'

Horray for Aya's simple logic! After all, love is love! :tfr9a7wg:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on March 21, 2007, 05:34:52 AM
Geez, I was hoping for some angst and crying and melodramatic shit like Miki telling Aya she loves her just as Aya swings the katana for the death blow. :(


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Oh well, what you got is good too. :)

At this point, I can see why Aya initially reacted the way she did (i.e. by freaking out and pursuing Miki like a psycho).  It was never about her feeling betrayed by Miki. It was just the shock and fear of knowing the person she cared about the most was the one thing she was trained to hate and kill without emotion.  Definitely a major emotional struggle on her part.  In the end, she had to see if she was strong enough to risk their friendship against her "job", which obviously, she is. :heart:


Oooooooooooooh can't wait to see how Reina/Maki/Yuko react when they find out about this. :D
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on March 21, 2007, 05:36:34 AM
*drools* Xo
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: ferrar1 on March 21, 2007, 06:50:01 AM
somehow i think there'll be another vampire hunter... right?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: iacus on March 21, 2007, 08:01:40 AM
Quote from: Yuuyami;334264
-wedge- xD


HOW THE HELL DO YOU KEEP DOING THAT!?! It's really starting to creep me out.

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. . .Oh right The fic. I really really like the fact you made Eri and Yuko a couple. I also like how you resolved the whole Miki/Aya situation *cough*and how they had sex*cough*Though I can't really tell where your going with the rest of the plot I'll gladly stay along for the ride. Keep up the good work.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on March 21, 2007, 04:13:42 PM
Whew. I was worried Aya would kill Miki. There were so many close calls and at one point I thought that Miki was just going to see if Aya would really kill her! But I should have known better, shouldn't I? Aya loves her Mikitty even if she is a vampire. And the fight was so amazing. Nicely done, nicely done.
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Saikami on March 21, 2007, 09:36:57 PM
Quote from: Ame-kun;334377
Omg, I lost all vision from the blood rushing out of my head through my nose.:pen_bleed:
That was extremely sexy, it reminds me of a Kill Bill match.
- 2 hot chicks
- 2 swords (or sword-like weapon that can be used as a sword)
- 1 steamy make-out session (not in Kill Bill but oh the possibilities)

"O the great heavens... sent a poet":ONfarofflook:

I LOVE YOU SAIKAMI!! I'm gonna give you a surprise gift :heart:

Though I dont really have any real talent, this is the best I can do for ya ^_^ (I hate drawing hands)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v32/xxrainxx/FoF.jpg)



AWW!! Thank you! :ONluvluv2: It's really cute and good <3 Ah, we all hate drawing hands don't we? But I think it turned out really nice! :D
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: C60533 on March 21, 2007, 11:37:24 PM
GAM love! After an awesome fight. So...now that Miki's a happy vampire...she won't try to kill Reina, right?
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ame-kun on March 22, 2007, 02:13:21 AM
I'm glad you loved my fanart :ONshy1: .
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on March 22, 2007, 05:59:18 AM
Quote from: C60533;335179
GAM love! After an awesome fight. So...now that Miki's a happy vampire...she won't try to kill Reina, right?
Well, the initial reason why Miki wanted to kill Reina was because Reina let it slip to Aya that Miki was a vampire. Now since that issue has been *ahem*, resolved between Miki and Aya Reina should be in the clear.


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Notice I said "SHOULD BE". Knowing Miki she'll probably have some fun at Reina's expense over it.
:ONwahaha:
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: black velvet on March 22, 2007, 03:52:24 PM
I had a feeling that all of this aggressive behavior would lead to something spectacular. ;) I'm pleased that Aya and Miki didn't kill each other, but can a relationship between a hunter and a vampire really last? *thinks back to Buffy*Also, I must say, you should continue writing battle scenes, because they're so awesome and descriptive! I can practically envision everything that happens.

Anywho, wonderful chapter! I'm also wondering where this is going . . .
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on March 22, 2007, 07:32:13 PM
phew, I'm relieved they didn't kill each other
anything else I wanted to say has essentially already been said by my fellowreaders (damn you JFC XD)
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on March 23, 2007, 02:31:28 AM
WAAAAHHHH THE HEEELLL?! *crying* They were supposed to kill each other! What happened?!?!? They made out (and much more)?! *grumble mumble* Ah sigh.... Of course, I mean, who the hell can resist Miki anyway? *mopes*

Of course Gotou is hot.. if you cover up her face, her body is almost the exact replica of BoA! And BoA's always hot :) *although I think she might be a little lighter in complexion than BoA*

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on March 23, 2007, 03:41:57 AM
Quote from: coachie;335664
(damn you JFC XD)
You gotta be faster coachie! :P
Title: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ren on March 23, 2007, 12:52:16 PM
Wah Saikami, I finished reading all of the chapters after I got home from university. :baa60776:

I wonder what kind of things Reina wrote in her 80++ chapters of fanfiction. Does it include her pervy dream/imagination about vamp Maki? :ONwriggly:

The pairing of Nakazawa/Kamei has never cross my head. :ONxD:

During the Aya/Miki fight, I imagined Miki with the lolita dress she used for the catwalk XD, and Aya in her Sukeban Deka tight outfit. HAWT :ONwriggly:

And I love the Reina comment about how Miki is trying to get into her pants because Miki can't get into Aya's anymore. :ONwahaha:

Ame-kun: Cute drawings :baa60776:

When I was reading through the chapters, I thought "Is Saikami = Yuuyami? XD"

Can't wait for the next chapters! :ONkneelbow:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: 00HB on April 02, 2007, 02:16:44 AM
Yo! Back again to reading this post! (now in the new forum xD)
Amazing fight scene! you know... they are called GAM for a reason! ;D
And I lloking forward to see what will happen next!

[Hum.... Maybe Yossie is some kind of sucubu... well... would make scense!]
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on April 02, 2007, 05:09:05 PM
woah... interesting fight.. EVEN more interesting ending!
But while reading I was kinda enticipating that Miki would initiate the first kiss tho... darn Aya got to her first
I wonder when Aya changed her mind to NOT kill miki... or did she not wanna kill her from the very start?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: joyce on April 04, 2007, 01:44:55 AM
omg, love the action in here!  it's really awesome!

reina x maki's love.. . the thoughts inside them are funny!
Title: Comments on Chapter 13
Post by: Saikami on April 13, 2007, 05:29:40 PM
To Everyone: I'm very sorry I haven't posted in forever. X__X;; Between internet problems, my electicity being gone for about two days, and school...I hadn't found time to write or post. ^^;;;




Yuuyami: Ah, I was wondering what I was going to do with the story after this point too for a while XD

Estrea: Ah, gotta love GAM. I might do a perv for it if I'm convinced enough. (Yuu is trying to get me too xD)

glcorps2002: Who says the relationship is gunna end at all? ;D

Ame-kun: I still love that drawing. <3 Thank you. ^^

orangesocks: I'm glad you liked the battle. And gotta love Aya's logic. xD

JFC: You hit Aya's emotions right on the nail. XD

rndmnwierd: -gives you a cup to drool in-

ferrar1: You'll just have to wait and find out. :P

iacus: Yuu just has mad skills like that. XD Ah, but I'm glad you like the fic. ^^

YoukaiChica: Aya would never kill her Mikitty, even how much she denies it. XD

C60533: Ah, well...It really depends on if Reina pisses Miki off or not. XD

black velvet: Thank you. ^^ I really like writing battle scenes. XD Ah, will something get in the way of the GAM relationship? :O Stay tuned to find out. XD (-just wanted to sound like the end of a TV show for some reason-)

coachie: XD I know what that's like, s'all good.

sLaVe: Sorry they didn't kill eachother. XD I couldn't bring myself to do it. (Actually, I never planned for them to kill eachother but yeah. XD)

Ren: I'm glad you like the fic~! :D -is now picturing Miki in lolita outfit and Aya in Sukeban Deka outfit fighting. *__*- xD Ah, by the way...I love your siggy and avvie. *____*

00HB: XD GAM is GAM, you can't have it when one of them is dead.

stefy: It was more that Aya wasn't going to kill her from the start. XD Just mixed emotions

joyce: Thank you. ^__^ I'm glad you like it. <3
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on April 13, 2007, 05:30:38 PM
-wedge- xD! <3
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Cats and Dogs
Post by: Saikami on April 13, 2007, 05:34:01 PM
“I heard it’s this huge ugly creature that’s all hairy with big teeth and big, scary red eyes!”

“What? What are you guys talking about?”

“Didn’t you hear?! This weird thing has been spotted around our apartments lately!”

“I hear it’s a dog woman or something like that from the others!”

“Do you think that it’ll be in the papers? I mean…Then people will come and try to look and then find out where we live.”

Reina raised an eyebrow, what was all this talk of some ‘Dog Woman’ that was wandering around the apartments? It was first mentioned by Risa in the dressing rooms about twenty minutes prior, now it was the talk of the apartments and everyone knew something about it.

But the wonky eyed teen couldn’t deny that she was interested in the topic along with the other girls. After all, within the past two weeks she found out that two members within Hello! Project were vampires, and then another member was a hunter. The idea of a dog woman wasn't very shocking to the girl at this point, but it did catch her interest, what if it was a member within Hello! Project?

After slipping away from the gossiping girls, Reina plopped down on her bed, trying to figure out a way to find out exactly who this dog woman was. She was almost positive it had to be someone in Hello! Project, it’d make the most sense after all.

But who? It was hard to narrow things down, considering her entire investigation would be based on gossip, and gossip coming from Risa no less. Knowing her, she could of seen some little boy dressed up like a dog and over exaggerated about it.

She sat up, shaking the thought of it being made up out of her head. If she were going to look into it, she had to believe it, right? Apparently, sightings of it have been seen for a few weeks now, but why so sudden?

“Mitsui-chan…” Reina mumbled, it made perfect sense. The dog woman started to appear just after Aika had moved into the apartments.

After thinking more on the subject, Reina became determined to prove that the new Morning Musume member was indeed a dog woman. It was just going to bug her if she didn’t do something about it. After all, the young girl is part DOG, how cool is that?

“Hmm…How am I going to do this?” Reina asked herself, scratching the back of her head as her wonky eyes scanned her rather messy room until they landed on a small round object.

“Of course! Dogs love tennis balls.” She smirked, picking up the ball and bouncing it a couple of times. “This will be pretty easy.” Reina put the ball into her sweat jacket’s pocket before walking out of her room in search of Aika.

It took a while for the teen to find Aika, but after searching many hallways she finally got the puppy in sight. “About time…” Reina mumbled, starting to pull the ball out of her pocket but someone quickly pulled her away into a room.

“What the hell!?” Reina snapped, turning to see who had stopped her in the middle of her plan only to find herself face to face with Miki. “Uh…”

Before Reina had a chance to say more, or run, Miki slammed her against the wall, fire in her eyes. “You…” She hissed. “Aya almost killed me last night again. It’s all your fault, and I’ll kill you for it.”

The words repeated over and over again in Reina’s head, she had no where to run, and Miki had her in a death lock and was closing in on her.

“Oh Tan! Be nice!” Aya said with a small laugh as she entered the room, giving Miki’s arm a light tug, causing the vampire to back off.

“You ruin all my fun.” Miki pouted, crossing her arms while she looked over at the wide eyed Reina, who looked as if she had seen death. “Well, at least I got some amusement out of it.” She grinned and sat down on a nearby chair.

“Tanaka-chan, it’s okay.” Aya put a hand on Reina’s shoulder, “I know she seems scary, but deep down inside she is actually a good person. Plus, it‘s my room, she has to follow my rules.”

Reina laughed a bit, trying to hide the fact that she almost had the crap scared out of her. “Yeah, like I really believe that.”

“It’s true.” Aya reassured with a smile, sitting down on the couch, patting the spot next to her for Reina to sit down.

“No, it’s not.” Miki said, stretching slightly. “I’m evil down to the bone, better deal with it.”

“How did you two work things out?” Reina asked, figuring it was best to not continue a conversation which consisted of the two topics of Miki and evil. (It didn’t sound like a good mix.)

“Aya loves me too much.” the vampire said simply. “After all, who would want to kill me?”

“Of course, because nobody wants to kill you.” Reina said with sarcasm as she sat down next to Aya.

“Tough talk for someone who had the shit scared out of them a few minutes ago.” Miki said with a smirk.

Ignoring Miki’s reply, Reina continued. “Is that how you and Maki made up? By deciding it was better to be friends than enemies?”

“Nah.” Aya leaned back. “We just got sick of trying to kill each other.”

Reina’s eyes widened, “Eh?”

“Yeah, we tried to kill each other in Gomattou.”

The door opened, and Maki walked into the room. “Don’t forget all those times in Nochiura Natsumi.”

“Ah, there you are.” Aya said, nodding. “Those were good times, weren’t they?”

Maki took a seat next to Reina, and gave her a kiss before speaking. “Very good times, sometimes I miss them.”

“Yeah, me too.” The hunter laughed.

“You two miss trying to kill each other?” the wonky eyed teen questioned with a raised eyebrow.

“Yeah, it was surprisingly funny.” The two replied at once, grinning like a couple of mischievous children.

“Why do I find that hard to believe?” Reina looked from one to the other.

“It really was funny.” Miki finally spoke since Maki entered the room. “I watched, it was pretty amazing they didn‘t kill themselves on accident in the process.”

“Yeah, but you don’t count.” Reina smirked slightly.

“Why not?” Miki asked, her tone clearly also said ‘I dare you to test me, bitch.’

“Because you think an otter standing up is amazing.”

“At least I know where to find Japan on a damn map…Plus, that otter was pretty damn cool!”

Although Reina was actually going to reply to Miki’s comment, she realized that Maki and Aya were chatting away about the many different attempts at killing the other.

“And that one time where I tried to stab you while you were sleeping on your couch, and you kept moving!”

“Yeah, and I woke up to find my couch with a million holes in it!” Maki laughed, “And that time I tried to drop you while we were a good three hundred yards from the ground and you just clung to my waist.”

“Then you tried to kick me off, but I managed to stay on for the whole two hours until you dropped me in a lake fifteen feet in the air.”

“I remember that.” Miki smirked, “I saw her fall into the lake, and walked her home while she was soaking wet in a white tee shirt.”

Aya threw a pillow at Miki, “And you wouldn’t let me have your jacket.”

“What can I say? It was a nice view, and cold out.” Miki laughed, throwing the pillow back, which ended up hitting Reina instead.

Reina threw the pillow with much force at the sub-leader before speaking, “That sure does sound like Fujimoto-san.” she said with a laugh, “Any other interesting stories of death attempts?”

“Plenty.” Maki grinned, catching the pillow before it slammed into Reina’s face, putting an end to their little war, “One time I tried to suck her dry, didn’t even get to her neck before she sent me flying into a glass case, then covered my wounds in crushed garlic.”

“Don’t you still have the scars from that one?” Aya raised an eyebrow, then nodded after Maki showed her elbow, which had two faint scars on it.

“Tsunku almost had a cow when he saw it.” Maki scratched the back of her head and stretching in her seat slightly.

“Can’t be as bad as the time I threw up for an hour because of those metal shards of a cross I put in your drink.” Aya pointed out, then explained to Reina and Miki. “I took small bits of a cross, after crushing it to a powder form, and put them in her drink, along with some potion I mixed up to make her throw up like crazy before it actually killed her.”

“I get this odd feeling you like torture…” Reina said, scooting towards Maki slightly.

“Nah, that was just when I started to get really annoyed with her not dying.” Aya laughed, “But then someone put more drinks on the table, and I accidentally grabbed the one that Maki was supposed to drink.”

“It was right before a concert too.” Maki nodded, “We thought we might have had to not let her perform.”

“Aya always screwed up while trying to kill Maki.” Miki grinned, “Maki only attempted about two times, or something like that, and just plain stopped figuring Aya wasn’t a threat because her plans never worked out.”

“I was just having a bad day.” Aya stated defensively.

“It went on for about two years.” Maki said with a laugh.

“Two years of bad days, eh? That’s gotta be a new record.” Reina added in, laughing as well. “Maybe you just really screw up a lot.”

“Yeah yeah…” Aya mumbled, “At least I didn’t make out with someone while I was on a mission to kill them.” The statement caused Maki to blush slightly, and then try to laugh it off.

“You did much more than just make out with me.” Miki grinned, “Shall I remind you exactly what happened?”

Reina stood up quickly, not wanting to hear the future topics in which consisted of Aya and Miki doing god knows what. “Well, I’m sorry for having to leave so soon, but I must go. I have some information I need to find out about Mitsui-chan.”

Maki nodded, standing as well. “Actually, I have a meeting I have to go to really soon.”

Both the members of GAM nodded, and Miki moved over to the couch next to Aya. “Good. Leave, I have business to do with Aya.” She gave a smirk to the couple and shooed them out of the room, slamming the door behind them.

“I’m afraid to think of what type of business they’re conducting.” Maki said with her nose slightly scrunched up.

“Agreed, nor do I want to find out.” Reina said with a nod, “What time do you get out of your meeting?”

“About six thirty.” Maki said with a sigh. “Because after one meeting, I have another right after it…” One could tell she was not looking forward to it, considering it was only one o’clock now.

“Sounds…boring.” Reina said, scratching the back of her head. “Well, give me a text if you want me to burst in and kidnap you or something, okay?”

Maki couldn’t help but to smile at the other, “Of course I will.” she said, “Well, I should really get going.”

“Have fun, don’t die of boredom.” Reina said, pulling Maki in for a hug and what was meant to be a quick kiss. (It wasn’t exactly what one could call quick though.)

“Eh hem! What do you think you two are doing?” a voice said from down the hall, causing the two to pull away from each other and looking in the direction from which the voice came from.

“Nacchi-san…” Reina laughed slightly nervously. “Uh…How might you be today?”

“There shouldn’t be kissing between girls!” Nacchi snapped, walking towards the couple, ready to pull their ears off.

“Run for it?”

“Run for it.”

And so, they ran in the opposite direction of the original face of Morning Musume. Although Reina really wasn’t the best runner in H!P, they still managed to escape the grasp of Natsumi, who just figured she’d give them both a lecture later.

“Well, now that we’re away from her, I must get going.” Maki said after kissing Reina quickly before headed towards her destination. “Try go stay away from Nacchi, okay?”

Reina nodded, “Of course.” she said, starting to walk down a different hall, back to searching for Mitsui who was nowhere in sight.

It, once again, took a rather long time for Reina to find the new Morning Musume member talking on the phone cheerfully while leaning against a wall, she ended up being in the hall that Nacchi had scared her and Maki from.

“Figures…” she growled, pulling out the tennis ball while making sure nobody was around watching her or anything creepy like that. Once nobody was in sight, Reina chucked the ball hard in Aika’s direction.

Reina watched the ball whiz past Aika, who didn’t follow it at all. Hell, she didn’t even seem to notice it.

“How can you not notice a tennis ball fly right past your face and hit-” she paused, realizing what she said, and did.

Miki seemed to of been going back to Aya’s room, and the ball hit the sub-leader in the side of the head with quite a bit of force. The groping demon turned around to see Aika walk by being blissfully oblivious to the situation and Reina with an ‘Oh shit, oh shit’ expression on her face.

“Oh, you think that’s funny?” Miki growled, walking towards the teen. “I’ll show you funny.” With that said, Reina bolted in the opposite direction, Miki tailing her.

It wasn’t long before Miki had caught her after all, Reina couldn’t run even if it would save her life, and Miki was sub-captain of the Gatas.

Surprisingly, it ended rather well. No pain whatsoever.

Well, somewhat well.

Reina ended up finding what it was like to be a dog, considering as she was backed up into a corner she tried to explain to Miki why the ball had hit her.

Miki didn’t take it so well, thinking Reina threw the ball because Miki was the dog-woman.

And that would explain why Reina had a leash and collar on, the leash was tied to a railing, and her hands were tied up so she couldn’t unhook the leash. Oh, and lets not forget the duck tape over her mouth.

It almost killed Reina’s dignity when Miyabi had found her there helpless.

“Um…Sempai?” the girl said, stepping closer while trying not to laugh at the former leader of Aa!. “Do you need some help?”

The wonky eyed teen nodded, feeling so…pathetic. At least they weren’t filming this.

“Okay…On three I’m going to take the duck tape off.” Miyabi took a hold an edge of the shiny tape which bound Reina’s mouth shut.

“One…Two.” Miyabi ripped the tape before she even had said three.

“GOD FUCKING DAMNIT THAT HURT!” Reina yelled, her accent coming out clearly (Miyabi didn‘t understand what on Earth the older had been saying, but she still managed to get the point.) Reina quickly put a hand to her mouth, not to muffle her crude words, but to rub the spot in which the tape had been.

Miyabi backed up slightly, not sure if she should be scared or laugh. “I’m sorry, Sempai.” she said, “I heard it was better to do it when the person isn’t expecting it.”

“Yeah yeah…” Reina growled slightly as the younger started to untie her hands and unhook the leash. “Look, you tell nobody of this, okay?”

“Okay.”

“Because if you do, just…Expect a very bad future…With pain, lots of pain.”

The Berryz member’s eyes widened as Reina spoke. “Y-yes, Sempai.”

“Good, now run off and have fun or something.” Reina said, happy that Miyabi actually believed her. (She’d never hurt a little kid.)

Miyabi quite literally ran off, figuring it would be best to put some distance between her and Reina.

As the wonky eyed teen stood, she thought of other plans to catch the little puppy girl. (Dog-woman seemed too…Not Aika-y for Reina’s taste.)

She walked into her room, there had to be something that would bring the puppy out of Aika. “Dogs like…meat. Like hell I’m giving mine up. Hmm…They also like dog treats!”

Reina mentally kicked herself for forgetting about the rather large bag of dog treats in the very back of her cabinets which was given to her when she had to follow that damn dog around while Ai and Risa got good food (even though she ended up getting food as well, but that wasn’t the point.)

“Easy enough,” Reina peeked into the bag, looking at the cookie-looking dog treats, “If she eats them and likes them, then point proven.”

She closed the bag and left her room once again to go find Aika. This time, it was much easier, Aika was in the lunchroom along with many other Hello! Project artists.

“Mitsui-chan.” Reina said with a smile as she walked up to the younger. “Hey, I really don’t like these type of cookies, so I figured you could have them.”

“Thank you, Tanaka-san.” Aika smiled, taking the bag, oblivious to the fact that they were dog biscuits.

“No problem,” Reina said with a nod, watching her open the bag, “So, like it in Morning Musume so far?”

Before Aika had a chance to reply, or eat a cookie, Miki came out from what seemed like nowhere, and snatched the bag. “Thank you Tanaka.” she said with a smug grin, “I was really craving cookies.”

“Oh, Fujimoto-san, if you really want the cookies, I guess you can have them if you really want to.” Aika said, walking off. “But thank you for the thought, Tanaka-san.”

Reina laughed slightly, backing up while Miki shoved a cookie into her mouth, pausing in mid-bite with her eyebrows knitted together in a confused manner. She held up the bag, reading the label, then ran to the nearest trashcan while Reina ran for protection.

After Miki spat out the dog treat, she started to chase Reina again, this time yelling “I’LL SHOVE THESE UP YOUR ASS!”

Luckily, Reina found somebody to hide behind from Miki’s wrath.

Unfortunately, that somebody was Nacchi.

“I’ve been looking for you.” Nacchi said, turning to Reina. “I would like to have a talk with you, Tanaka-chan.”

“Uh…Sorry Nacchi-san but right now isn’t a good time.” Reina said, keeping her eyes on Miki, who was drawing closer. “But remind me to thank you for your help.”

“My help on what?” Nacchi asked, but soon found out as she was shoved into Miki, causing them both to fall to the floor as Reina headed for the nearest exit.

[Later that Night]

Reina groaned slightly, holding her stomach while leaning against the brick wall outside of the apartments. “Ugh…I can’t believe she shoved all those dog treats down my throat…I was crapping on the toilet for hours and my stomach STILL hurts!”

It turned out, Miki still had managed to catch her. Hell, the vampire even pulled out some of her futsal moves on the teen, AKA - Reina got Miki’d. From that moment on, one could simply guess what had happened that caused Reina the pain she is suffering now.

Getting a grip on herself, she picked up a large net. (The same net Yossie and Nono used to capture possible Sempais for Aika.) This plan was much safer: simply wait for Aika to come by at night in her little puppy mode, and catch her in the act.

Reina waited for a few minutes, armed and ready. Luckily it wasn’t too long before she heard footsteps, she was cautious at first, thinking she might catch somebody else on accident, but it wasn’t until she heard the sound of barking that she jumped to catch the fuzzy monster.

Well, she did catch a monster. Just not the one she was looking for.

“Tanaka…” An angry Miki growled, really getting sick of the wonky eyed teen’s little games.

“Shit…” Reina said, starting to back up, but knowing very well that she couldn’t outrun Miki.

The groping demon stepped forward, ready to kill Reina, but ended up falling. Thus, causing Reina to laugh, “At least the net worked.”

Wrong thing to say.

Miki pulled the net off of her, and back Reina into a corner.

“Umm…I can explain?”

Miki didn’t bother to listen, she spun Reina around and slammed her hand hard on the teen’s bottom. “GET LOST!”

Reina didn’t need to be told twice, considering she just got spanked by Miki, and started to run off to her room, cursing the entire time about her ass.

“That’s going to leave a bruise…” Reina mumbled, rubbing the sore spot. This was just not a good day for her, but at least she managed to grab the net before fleeing to her room.

“She’s going to kill me one of these days…” the teen opened up her door, walking into the hallway. Once again, in search for Aika, all while being extra sure she wouldn’t run into Miki.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Saikami on April 13, 2007, 05:35:29 PM
“Gaki-san, have you seen Mitsui-chan at all?” Reina asked, trying to hide the fact that she was limping slightly.

“Uh, yeah. I think she’s in room 221.” Risa replied with a slightly confused smile, “What’s with the net?”

“Oh…Uh, I was told to drop it off somewhere after I tell Mitsui-chan something.” Reina said, trying to sound casual.

Luckily, her excuse worked. “Ah, okay. Well, have fun then.” Risa said, “I need to go find Aichan.” she then started to walk down the hall.

Just then, Reina was reminded of the little story she heard about the two remaining fifth generation members, which gave her slight shudders as she tried to push the thought out of her head.

“Okay…Room 221.” she said, setting her mind to her mission as she walked down the hall. Reina stopped in front of the door number 221. “Kill me quickly if Miki’s in there.” Reina said to herself quietly before tightening her grip on the net and flinging the door open. “AH HA!”

Well…It wasn’t Miki.

But it wasn’t Aika either.

Reina’s jaw fell open as the couple’s heads turned to see who their intruder was. Of course, if it wasn’t Miki, it was Yuko and Eri.

That wasn’t so shocking to find.

What was shocking was that Eri was on top of Yuko, who was laying on a table. Eri’s blouse had been unbuttoned and sliding off her shoulders while Yuko’s shirt was off completely and on the floor. The turtle’s hand had been going up Yuko’s skirt too. And well…Eri looked like she was rather dominant in this situation.

“Uh…Umm…” Reina said, trying to find the words to explain herself.

“Don’t worry hun, I understand.” Yuko said, starting to sit up and put her arms around Eri’s waist.

“Y-you do?” Reina asked, looking confused.

“If you wanted to join in, you could of just asked.”

“No! That’s not it you pervert!” Reina backed up out of the room, slamming the door behind her to leave Yuko and Eri to do god knows what.

Reina, now after being scarred for life, crashed on her bed while mumbling how she was starting to think the gods were against her on trying to prove Aika was indeed the puppy girl.

“That blissfully oblivious brat is going to be the reason for my death…” she groaned into a pillow. There was no time to make other plans, she had a meeting in fifteen minutes, and was dead tired as it was from the days work.

“Why the hell am I doing this anyway?” Reina mumbled to herself, “I don’t even like dogs…”

Her door opened, and Maki poked a head in. “Hey Reina, just figured I’d stop by before you had to go to your meeting.” she said sweetly, kicking off her shoes and sitting on Reina’s bed. “You look…Dead.”

“Ah…Just a tiring day.” Reina said, rolling over onto her stomach. “How was the meetings?”

“Boring as ever.” Maki said with a small laugh, starting to play with the other’s hair.

“Well, that’s how they normally are.” Reina said with a small smile, “At least they’re over with.”

“Mmhmm, but now you have one.”

“Unfortunately.” Reina mumbled, but then sat up so she was (somewhat) eyelevel with the older. “Mind if I come over your place tonight?”

Maki gave a grin. “Of course.”

Reina’s smile grew, and pulled Maki into a hug. “Ugh…I walked in on Yuko and Eri today…”

Maki couldn’t help but to laugh. “You did? Good job there.”

“I didn’t mean to.” Reina laughed slightly too. “It was really…weird.”

“I would imagine, the whole Yuko and Eri thing seems weird as it is.”

“Mmhmm.” Reina pulled back, “I really need to get going though. I can give you a call when I get out.”

Maki nodded, “Yup yup, sounds like a good plan to me.”

[At the Meeting]

This is boring…And it only just started. The wonky eyed teen rested her head on the palm of her hand while she pretended to concentrate and glanced at Aika.

Just then, she remembered that she still had the tennis ball in her sweatshirt pocket. This was her last chance to try and prove herself, so why not?

Reina pulled the ball out of her pocket with her free hand, and bounced it on the table, looking rather bored while doing so. All while doing so, she kept an eye on Aika, who was, of course, blissfully oblivious to the bouncing ball.

Ugh… Just when Reina was about to give up, she caught something out of the corner of her wonky eye. A member, not Aika, seemed to be almost in a trance as her eyes followed the bouncing tennis ball…
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on April 13, 2007, 05:37:06 PM
So hilarious xD Love the significance of the title to the story itself, with Reina trying to do a chase but always failing miserbly and receiving the whips of Miki xD It's like that one Looney Tune cartoon... The one with Roadrunner and Wile E. Coyote xD Aika is so blissfully oblivious, it's so funny XD!!!!! Guess Reina and Aya have more things in common than they imagined xD Screwing up so much, roffle.

Eri's the seme this time? Whoo-BABY O_O;

Who's the dog-woman?! You cut off at the last part you evil woman! But at least we know it's a Morning Musume member :]
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: coachie on April 13, 2007, 08:17:09 PM
Holy shit, I rofl'ed from start to end!!!!
How do you come up with all this, it's damn amazing.

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“Because you think an otter standing up is amazing.”

“At least I know where to find Japan on a damn map…Plus, that otter was pretty damn cool!”

quotet just because

And damn, Eri X Yuko, I'm so getting into this pairing lately.

I won't even start to speculate who's the dog woman, it's probably the most unexpected person.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Owaranai_sLaVe on April 13, 2007, 10:58:32 PM
Yossui = werewolf? Yes, yes I'd like to think so. Then again.... I don't want her to be a hairy beast ;____;... or any of them. "Mmmm hairy like animal" ....wait, actually *thinks*... I don't mind  >:D

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Miki said, stretching slightly. “I’m evil down to the bone, better deal with it.”
^gigglage at Miki's reply
Even more gigglage on the wet t-shirt thing XD
Pfft, Gotou and Reina are liars. Of course they know and wanna know what kind of business Miki speaks of! *or is that just me...? ???*
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"...I was crapping on the toilet for hours and my stomach STILL hurts!"
LOL xD

LMFAO I totally knew Yuko would say something about joining xD

I couldn't stop laughing! Haha, I totally paused my Lee Hyori drama to pause this (which means it was good of course). Meh -_- it wa sorta a given that GAM wouldn't kill each other. Sigh, another time.

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on April 13, 2007, 11:36:20 PM
I need to know who dog lady is!

And H!P has...
3 masochists
1 half vampire
at least 1 vampire
1 woman straight as a stick
2 women disobeying the laws of reasonable age difference
and a 99% pervert rate
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Estrea on April 14, 2007, 12:30:44 AM
I laughed so hard at the whole thing! Aya screwing up her attempts to kill Maki for two years...HAHAHAHAH. How come she managed to go all out at Miki then? XD

And poor Reina. Too curious for her own good. XD Who's the dog-woman? I can imagine her eyes glazing over as she follows the movement of the tennis ball...XD

And blissfully oblivious Aika. XD

Well, WRITE MORE. SOON. No, NOW. :P
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: orangesocks on April 14, 2007, 01:54:42 AM
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Reina’s jaw fell open as the couple’s heads turned to see who their intruder was. Of course, if it wasn’t Miki, it was Yuko and Eri.
...Are you on renairev? I read 'Yuko and Eri' and I was like, "Huh? Didn't someone say something about that pairing...?" Anyway, I like!  :D

Poor Miki, getting caught in Reina's trap everytime... :lol:

and...

Damn it all, Nacchi! Get with the program and get hooked up with Kaorin or something!

The dog-girl...is it Ai-chan? She'd make a cute puppy girl.  :)
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: C60533 on April 14, 2007, 02:26:37 AM
Let's see, Reina isn't fazed much by the news cause she's used to it. So now, we have vampires, hunters, and a werewolf? But, Reina's plans are ending up just like Aya's plans to kill Maki...at least they can relate now. And YukoXEri...words cannot describe the scenes they're in, but they always turn out...interesting. And Nacchi...I refuse to believe she's COMPLETELY straight...she's in the closet..or in serious denial. But...you'll change that, right???
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ren on April 14, 2007, 08:41:07 AM
Ooh long update :heart:

So dog woman is not Aika? The one with the dog ears on Haromoni@ is Yossie, but I doubt its her... Aichan? No way. Kamei? She's a turtle. Sayu? Well she's the hare. So... that leaves... Koharu and Gaki? Somehow I think its Koharu, she just suits it more to be dazzled to a ball, and Gaki was the one who talks about the dog woman...

Animal Musume seems very good :D Imagine if Reina finds out that she is actually a cat girl, and the dog woman always chase after her ;D

Somehow I imagine them to be Bloody Roar... And you know who Sayu will be if you play the game ;D.

Glad you like my avvies and siggies :D!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Sukoshi on April 14, 2007, 09:42:28 AM
I was trying to base my guess from haromoni animals too  :D  I got it down to Yossie and Koharu but yes I too think it's Koharu.  I figured it wouldn't be Kamei cause she already has powers,  Sayu is too bunny like...Risa is the one that started the whole rumor anyways which leaves Yossie, Koharu and Ai chan.  Yossie and Ai chan seem too professional to be seen in daylight  ;)
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: JFC on April 14, 2007, 10:51:16 PM
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/ROTFLMAO.gif) @ Reina's attempts to catch Aika, only to nab Miki-sama instead!  That's just AWESOME! Especially loved the bit where Miki had tied her up and she needed Miyabi to get her loose. :D


So Aika's not the werewolf? (which is basically what a half-dog/half-human would be)

I'm guessing either it's Eri (since we already know she has a dog), or Sayu, since nothing weird has been applied to her (yet). :P
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: joyce on April 15, 2007, 04:12:15 AM
just hilarious!  reina running into miki from each attempt was just toooooooo funny!  i guess she was really bored without maki around and needed some...urm.. .excitement. 

wow, so glad your internet's back~  missed this way too much!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on April 15, 2007, 05:12:07 AM
That was by far.... the most hilarious thing I'v read! Thank god I'm in my room reading this or else I'd probably get lots of pairs of eyes eyeing me. I think this relationship between Reina and Miki will never end, I hope it'll never end! I just LOVVEE Reina in here! She's so cute! Which in turn this is making me like the real Reina more.....

My guess is it's Ai-chan... Since the rumor was coming from Risa, and since they spent so much time together... Maybe Ai-chan didn't tell Risa about it and just wasn't careful with her cover recently?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on April 15, 2007, 02:51:44 PM
AMAZING!!! I laughed so hard my mom thought I was crazy. Or looking up something dirty...

Anyways, I think its Koharu. Yup. Why you ask? Because she's a spazz and I always think of her as some high puppy. That''s my official opinion. This chapter was great and LONG. And trust me, its length made me very happy. Overall, a grand time was had by all! Especially the Aya/Maki trying to kill each other. I'd love to her more of those in full. Oh well.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: rndmnwierd on April 16, 2007, 12:53:42 AM
Who's the dog woman? I must know!!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Amarghetta on April 16, 2007, 06:41:21 PM
For some reason, I think it's Koharu...
Title: IMPORTANT NOTICE!
Post by: Saikami on April 18, 2007, 03:33:31 AM
I'm sorry to say that while trying to fall asleep, I realized how much my life revolves around my computer. Actually, Hello! Project as well. I figured it'd be a good time to try and take a break from both.

Now, don't get me wrong. I'm not ditching my computer nor H!P (I think I'd die) This is just a warning saying I'm planning to decrease my online time dramatically (more than half.) Thus meaning it will take me much longer to write chapters.

I have to pay more attention on my schoolwork and other various things. After all, my computer is not my life. (Believe it or not.)

Nonetheless, I think I will take a good few weeks off from writing. Hopefully while doing so, I will catch up on some of my school work. And also, I will be working on becoming a better writer, hopefully to please the readers, of course.

While on my break, let you know that I will be keeping up on H!P things such as episodes and what not, and I will be lurking around here from time to time on some occasion, but I might not be commenting on other fics until I come back. I haven't chosen if I will or will not yet.


Thank You Very Much
Saikami


PS - I sounded really mature while writing this, didn't I? o_o;; Blame the fact that I'm tired.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: joyce on April 18, 2007, 03:46:31 AM
true~  go get some rest.. . . if u can break out from cpu "life" then it's not a bad thing.  but wow...cutting it by half?!  that's a lot!  well...i'm just imagining me cutting mine's to half...wow...hope you can accomplish good things in other part of your life!  meanwhile...please please don't give this story line up...it's too good to end!  thanks for all the writing!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Ren on April 18, 2007, 02:14:18 PM
Ah I see ^^ Get a good rest :)!

Good luck on your school works and other things! We'll be cheering for you :D!

Actually reading your message makes me realize how much of a geek I am, props to you for being able to control yourself by trying to take a break of computer and Hello! Project :), I don't know what I can do if I want to distance myself from computer, internet, Hello! Project. I can spend a whole week just to do my current hobby of php programming. I need to do something about my school works too :(.

This story is very good and even if you say it'll take longer for the chapters, I will still patiently wait for your continuation of this fic :D. Thanks for this great works of yours :).
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: 00HB on April 21, 2007, 04:28:18 PM
Hey, have a nice and calm break, Saikami...
good time with your shcoolwork
Come back ready and full of energy to tell us who the puppy-girl is!

[Waaaaaaa.... such a giant clifhanger.... Saikami is very mean to us! '_' ]
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: glcorps2002 on April 21, 2007, 04:47:02 PM
Take some time there kid, we can wait for the puppy girl's real ID. But I'm betting it's Ai Takahashi.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tanachan on April 22, 2007, 03:59:30 AM
Good luck Sai!

*runs away as to avoid any possible offense coming out of these 16 words
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Tinnygy on April 22, 2007, 09:36:40 AM
Question for me: Why do you be so blind for not reading this fic at the begining???

Well... answer: I don't know it would be so much fun like that ><

Love this fic, and will keep reading it till the end even if it will take very long time to wait for the every next chapter ^^
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: stefy on April 23, 2007, 02:51:39 PM
awwww no Fact of Fiction for.... a period of time? ok then...
study hard k then come back to continue the fic.. upon saying that, I myself should be studying hard to!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: YoukaiChica on April 23, 2007, 03:13:37 PM
Go and take a break. You deserve it. I understand being attached to the internet and a computer as if it was your life source. I will be watching for you to come back. I won't abandon this AMAZING fic. Never!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: orangesocks on April 24, 2007, 03:42:35 AM
Yeah, nap time! ::Hands you a cup of tea:: It shall refresh you.
Title: Comments for Chapter 14
Post by: Saikami on May 11, 2007, 11:21:34 PM
I'm back~! :D Yeah...I think I was gone for more than a few weeks. o_O I didn't really keep track, but my cousin and Estrea-san kicked my ass into writing again. XD I'm happy to say that I don't think I'll ever be able to give up my computer for that long EVER again. ^^;; And thank you all for understanding my long break of doom. XD I got a lot of schoolwork done.

Yuu: Yes, the dog woman will be introduced in this chapter~! The fact that Seme-Eri is shocking just makes it all the better. ;D

coachie: I'm glad you found it funny, I try. XD

sLaVe: You're guess is as good as mine at who the dog lady is...Actually that is a total lie considering I already wrote who it is. XD Miki is just...Miki. :D Gotta love her evilness

Tanachan: That is just how H!P is. :D Although, I think I have to work on the straight as a stick thing with Abe. XD Maybe, maybe not.

Estrea: Well...I didn't write as soon as you were hoping, but you helpped get a chapter outta me! XD The reasons for Aya being able to go all out on Miki is for any pervert's immagination ;D

orangesocks: Yup, I'm on renairev as Saikami (go figure XD)

C60533: Abe might stay straight, or maybe she is in denial. Either way, she scares Reina. XD

Ren: Ah, I must admit a lot of people are guessing that I based this off of HM@ but I never did. XD

Sukoshi: Never based it off of HM@, once again. XD I'm loving how you guys are guessing at this, I find great amusement. :D

JFC: Ah, I'll tell you right now it's not Sayu. XD I don't really have many plans for her in this fic. (Sad as that might be for some of you.)

joyce: whenever there is a moment with Miki and Reina it's bound to be funny. XD

stefy: I'm glad you found it funny. ^^ and I'm even more glad you're starting to like the Wonky Princess more :D!

YoukaiChica: Ah, this chapter isn't as long but I hope you'll like it nonetheless. :D Wow, everyone thinks it's Koharu. XD

rndmnwierd: Then just read the next chapter. XD

Amarghetta: So does almost everyone else here. XD

00HB: Of course I'll leave on a cliffhanger. XD

glcorps2002: thank you very much. ^^

Tinnygy: yay! new reader. :D
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on May 11, 2007, 11:22:54 PM
-wedge- After so long ;-;
Title: Chapter 15: Who Let the Dogs Out?
Post by: Saikami on May 11, 2007, 11:27:52 PM
Reina gave a small grin, and tucked the ball away into her pocket.

“And you haven’t eaten today,” Maki growled, coming closer. “So Yocchan can easily keep you there for as long as I want her to.”

“Remember the deal.” Yossie said, “Only hit her once.”

That moment flashed into Reina’s memory suddenly, which caused the teen to mentally kick herself.

How could she of been so oblivious? What other reason would there be for Yossie to be possibly stronger than Miki that night? Or even the deal between her and Maki, whatever it may be, Reina was sure it had to do with Yossie's little secret..

Luckily, the meeting seemed to go by rather fast. Although it was now obvious to the dog-woman was, Reina really wanted to throw that ball for her excuse as ‘absolute proof’. More or less, she just wanted to see the leader chase after it like some crazy beast.

All she had to do was find a place where Yossie was, and Miki wasn’t, right? The ‘Perfect Plan‘.

Fortunately, Reina easily found Yossie within the hour, who was simply sitting on a park bench, reading a magazine.

The ‘Perfect Plan’ started to take action….

…Or, the ‘Not-So-Perfect Plan’.

Reina sighed, picking up the ball that she had just thrown across the park. The crazy amusement that the teen expected had never came.

Although the leader almost seemed tempted to go fetch the ball, she managed to ignore it’s purpose and continued reading her magazine on a bench while enjoying the nice day.

“I just have no luck with this…” Reina mumbled, oddly this reminded her of the time during the shooting for a Hello! Morning episode, she was forced to take care of some dog…Oh how she hated that dog. The wonky eyed girl couldn’t even remember how many damn times she had to go fetch that ball herself while the dog just watched amusingly.

“Having fun?” A voice asked, Reina turned to face the person and smiled.

“Kinda.” Reina said with a smile.

“Trying to teach a dog fetch?” the girl asked, laughing slightly. “I recall you don’t like doing that very much.”

“Oh, I’m not doing that, Ishikawa-san.” Reina said, trying to seem as if she wasn’t doing something odd, and there were no dogs around as it was. “Just teaching those kids over there a few games.” she pointed over to a random group of kids playing baseball.

“Ah, I see.” Rika said, looking over there as well.

“Oi! I told you guys to be careful when hitting the ball!” Reina yelled to them, trying to add to the act.

It didn’t help very much, for the kids looked at her as if she were going to kill them, but soon went back to their little game.

Reina gave a nervous laugh, tossing the ball from one hand to the other while trying to keep it cool.

“So, what brings you here?” she asked, figuring it was best to change the subject and dropping the ball while she did so.

“Oh, I’m just taking a walk.” Rika explained, bending down and picking up the tennis ball before starting to toss it in her hands as well. “I have a meeting soon and figured I should get out before it starts.”

“Seems like everyone has a meeting today.” Reina laughed, scratching the back of her head absently.

Suddenly, Mr. Moonlight started to fill the air. Nobody could mistake that corny, but catchy tune. Rika pulled her cell phone out of her purse, opening it and putting it to her ear. “Hello?…What? Seriously?…How the hell did she manage that?…Uh, okay. Don’t panic, I’ll be there soon…Yup, bye.” with that, she hung up.

Reina raised an eyebrow. “Eh?” she asked, catching the tennis ball as Rika passed it to her.

“Yui, somehow, managed to get locked in a bathroom. The door is jammed or something like that.” Rika laughed lightly, “So I have to go save her before Erika has a panic attack. Sorry to run like this!” she said, starting to run towards the apartments.

“That was…Weird.” Reina said, blinking a couple times while watching Rika run off, but she couldn’t help but to laugh lightly.

Shrugging slightly, the wonky eyed teen started to head back to where Yossie was, which seemed to be a lot further than she realized. Stupid tennis balls, always have to keep going in going… Just like that damn pink bunny with the drum.

Figuring she might as well give up on the whole were-Yossie idea for today, she sat down next to the leader. “Hello.” she said with a smile, tossing the ball from one hand to the other like she had been doing previously.

Yossie looked up from her magazine, giving a smile. “Hello, Reina-chan. How‘re you?” she said, but her eyes quickly averted from Reina’s face straight down to the ball.

Reina raised an eyebrow, noticing that this was much different from the time Yossie’s eyes had followed the ball before during the meeting, she was more than just dazed by the object. Of course, once Reina realized this, she had to have a little fun.

“I’m good.” the teen replied, moving the ball back and forth, watching the leader’s head followed without even seeming to think about it first. “And you?”

“I’m…Good.” Yossie said, her head moving in a circular motion as it continued to follow the tennis ball.

A grin formed upon Reina’s lips as she looked around the park, nobody seemed to be around. “Go fetch.” she said, throwing the ball towards a field.

The leader didn’t even think, she bolted across the park in the direction of the ball, on all fours at that! The wonky eyed teen had tears from laughing by the time that Yossie pranced back with the ball in her mouth.

“Thank you Rika.” Reina smirked, taking the ball from Yossie and patted her head. “I guess those rumors were true of you two. And you know her scent! That’s kinda weird.”

A good fifteen minutes passed of Yossie and Reina playing fetch, and the teen still found great amusement out of the whole situation. After throwing the ball again and watching Yossie go after it with the same amount of passion and excitement as the last sixty-seven times Reina had thrown it.

Suddenly, that all too familiar FLAME song started to play out of her pants. Reaching into her pocket, Reina pulled out her cell phone, smiling as she picked up. “Hi Maki.” she said.

“Hey.” Maki replied, “I heard you were having a hard day.”

“Sit.” Reina said, taking the ball from Yossie. Oddly enough, the leader sat down on the bench, still watching the ball as Reina sat next to her.

“What?” Maki asked, confused.

“Oh, uh nothing. I’ll explain later.” she laughed, “But yeah, I was having a hard day at first, but my problem is solved now.”

“Well then, that’s good.” Maki laughed as well, “I’m glad to hear that.”

“Me too.” Reina smiled, “So, what are you doing tonight?”

“Nothing really, you wanna come over?” Although they were talking over the phone, Reina knew that Maki was grinning.

“Of course. When’s a good time?”

“Anytime is good.”

“Okay, I’m on my way then.” Reina smiled, “See you in a few.”

“Sounds good. See you.”

Reina closed her cell phone and put it in her pocket while turning to Yossie. “Sorry, I gotta go.” she said, to which Yossie gave a small pout. She still wanted to play.

“Here, have it as a gift or something.” Reina tossed the ball to Yossie, who caught it with a pleased look.

“Sweet.” she said, finally tearing her eyes away from the ball. “Uh…You’re not going to tell anyone, are you? I mean…That was a rather cheap way for you to find out about the ‘Dog-Woman’, with Rika’s scent and all.”

“So you admit it?” Reina grinned, standing up and stretching slightly.

“Well…There’s no way I can try and talk my way out of it. After all…You managed to get my werewolf side to show.” Yossie gave a sigh, “But I knew you were trying to find out the entire day, Miki was complaining about you.”

“Heh, I thought it was Aika-chan.” Reina laughed, scratching the back of her head.

“You could of just asked Maki, she knows.” Yossie said with a chuckle, standing.

“Yeah I guessed, but I wanted to see you chase after a ball.”

“How nice of you to ruin my dignity like that.”

“I deserve it though, after having a day of hell with running into Miki.” Reina stated, “I needed some form of amusement.”

“WHO LET THE DOGS OUT!? WHO? WHO? WHO?” Reina raised an eyebrow as the rather odd song filled the air, Yossie reached into her pocket and pulled out her cell phone, reading the text she had just received.

“That’s not a very good reason.” Yossie said putting away her cell phone. “I gotta go as well. And remember, don’t tell anyone.”

“Of course.” Reina gave a nod, starting to head towards the direction of Maki’s apartment, giving Yossie grin. “I’ll buy you dog cookie to make you feel better, considerin’ I ruined your dignity and all.”

“Haha. Funny.” Yossie said with sarcasm, but couldn’t help but to smile slightly as she walked off in a different direction. At least Reina didn’t freak out about it.

“Nice ring tone by the way!”

It didn’t take long to reach Maki’s apartment, but by the time she got there and opened the door, she found Maki sound asleep on her couch.

Slipping off her shoes, she quietly walked over to the soloist. It’s hard to believe that she’s a vampire when she looks like an innocent little girl while sleeping.

Not wanting to wake up the older, Reina carefully sat down on the edge of the couch to collect her thoughts of the days events.

It still seemed to shock her that Yossie was indeed a werewolf, although she took it quite well, who wouldn’t be shocked to find that their Sempai is some dark creature of the night? Let alone three of them.

Now that she thought about it, she took all the information rather well, okay maybe with Maki she was a bit freaked out, but if anything Reina was more than accepting with the facts.

But why? Why was she so accepting of these people when she knew that could easily be playing a little game with her, and eventually just kill her or something of the sort.

“Ahh!” Reina snapped out of her thoughts, seeing Maki jump up in the air from the couch, half awake. After realizing what was happening, Maki stuck her hand in her pocket, pulling out her cell phone.

“Stupid thing…I forgot to turn it off of vibrate after the meetings.” she mumbled, opening it to see exactly who‘s call she missed. “Oh well, it was Miki.”

Reina gave a smile, “Have a nice nap?” she asked, giggling slightly at Maki’s bed head.

“I’m sorry.” Maki said, stretching slightly. “I just get really sleepy and stuff when I haven’t eaten in a while.”

“It’s okay, don’t worry about it.” Reina said, “And if you’re hungry, you should eat, right? We don’t want you passing out again.”

“Again?” Maki raised an eyebrow in confusion. “When have I ever passed out around you?”

“Not around me.” Reina said, leaning back, “But you rarely do it, I think the last time was a couple years ago, if my story is correct.”

“Ah, yes.” Maki nodded. “I almost forgot about that. But I’ll most likely go out tonight, can’t during the day. Too dangerous.”

“I see.” Reina said with a nod, starting to think about that story. She had stopped writing it considering the fact that she couldn’t bring herself to write anymore of it. It seemed forced now that she knew she had been literally writing someone’s personal life.

“Anyway.” Maki said, changing the subject, “Why did you insist on pissing of Miki today?” she laughed lightly. “It’s not exactly what one could call the smartest thing to do.”

“I wasn’t trying to piss her off.” Reina gave a sigh, “I just kept running into her at the wrong times. I was trying to prove that Aika-chan is the Dog-Woman everyone was talking about, and Miki kept running into my traps instead. And then I ended up realizing that Aika-chan isn’t a werewolf, but Yossie is.”

Maki couldn’t help but to laugh, “You could of just asked me, I knew.”

“I know, I just wanted to prove it myself.” Reina gave a small grin.

“So yankii of you.” Maki returned the grin, still laughing a little bit.

“I’m not yankii.” Reina said flatly, pulling Maki closer. “If it bothers you so much, then kiss me.” she added, her grin growing.

“That’s something a yankii would say.” Maki smirked, but brought her lips to Reina’s before the yankii in denial could protest.

“But you do know, there is more than one werewolf in Hello! Project.” Maki said as the two pulled apart.

“There is? Who is it?” Reina asked, curious as usual. That and she wanted to see who else she can make play fetch.

“Who acts like a hyper little puppy a lot?” Maki asked, grinning once more.

“Koharu-chan does at times.” Reina said, starting to think. “But I don’t think it’s her…”

“She was Mako-chan’s pet in a skit, but people generally thought she was Nakazawa-san’s pet in really life.” That was more than enough to clearly give it away.

“Mari-san!” Reina gave a good laugh at that, “Are you serious? But it does make sense.”

“Yes, she is more open to her dog-like attitude more than Yocchan.”

“Damn, this is gunna be one helluva time.”
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction
Post by: Yuuyami on May 11, 2007, 11:28:28 PM
Oh Yossie... <3

Since she's a werewolf and all...

Does she drink from the toilet?

Does she lift her leg when she pees? XDDD


Anywho... xD

Yay! Mini IshiYoshi moment that flew by me ! xD Rika seemed to suggest that she already knew of Yossie's doggy condition xD

Reiki is cute as usual <3

Mari being one hyperactive dog... Oh my... xD

One helluva time indeed xD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Tanachan on May 12, 2007, 01:23:22 AM
SAI SAMA!!!!!!!!!

Wow, this'll be fun...Mari and Yossie fight! Kinda like when I throw quarters at recess and watch my friends fight over them xDD But better because it's hawt!

*half-runs because it's ONE of the girls Sai likes who is hawt, not the other one*

Anyways, it's amazing how maddening bathroom doors can be. I once locked myself out of a bathroom for an hour ;_; And I really had to go badly...xD Yui getting locked in cracked me up though. And suddenly I'm always picturing Yossie in Fanfics in her Kanashimi TWILIGHT outfit, which makes it look funny when she's running xD Even funnier on all fours!

Good luck, my dear friend, for you will need it to survive with not-as-much H!P. Here's a basic survival kit...

*throws a box with every PB, CD, and DVD known to H!P, along with concert goods, scarves, cellphone straps, and a Miki-in-a-box with push-up bras and realistic groping action!*
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Estrea on May 12, 2007, 01:24:24 AM
Aha you updated~! XD Glad to know me and Yuu managed to nag you into it. ;)

LOL at Reina and Yossi playing fetch. XDDDD The mental image is burned into my head! And the Ishiyoshi made me very happy. Yui getting locked in a bathroom was funny too. XD Oh and nice Reiki scene. XD Mari as the other doggy! Well, she does have a pug face....XDDDD

Anyway, I'm going to nag the hell out of you to make sure the next chapter doesn't take so long. XD Update soon~
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: glcorps2002 on May 12, 2007, 03:01:56 AM
Yossie and Mari as lycanthropes, kinda hot! I like that she only chased the ball after it had Rika's scent on it, but whose scent would Mari go after?

Vampires, slayers, mind readers, and werewolves! It makes me wonder if there are any mummies, zombies, mermaids, and sirens in there. I mean, Natsume has a demon smile and Yuko seems like a succubus here, so are there?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Amarghetta on May 12, 2007, 03:26:29 AM
It was Yossie? Lol!
Her sudden reaction to a Rika scented ball evoked some interesting mental images, hehe.

Also lol @ Mari being the other werewolf. Maybe that's why she was appointed as Yossie's mentor. :p
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 12, 2007, 04:18:42 AM
Lol at the Biyuuden mishaps.  O0 I don't know.... Uh :pimp:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: stefy on May 12, 2007, 12:44:11 PM
Your backkk... and with yet another chapter which made me litarally laugh out loud! Drats... I guess my prediction about Ai being the werewolve was wronggg. But Yossi being the werewolve makes it 10 times funnier!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Ren on May 12, 2007, 03:48:26 PM
Oh you're back :D!

Did Yossie stick her tongue out while looking at the ball? Since I see a lot of dogs do that :D.

Why didn't Yui call Erika instead? XD And Rika must know about Yossi being the werewolf right?

Yossie and Mari as lycanthropes, kinda hot! I like that she only chased the ball after it had Rika's scent on it, but whose scent would Mari go after?

Vampires, slayers, mind readers, and werewolves! It makes me wonder if there are any mummies, zombies, mermaids, and sirens in there. I mean, Natsume has a demon smile and Yuko seems like a succubus here, so are there?
My mind thinks that Yaguchi will go after Yasuda's scent XD and Yuko is an old witch who cannot age.

I'm now starting to imagine Yagu acting as my dog...
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: JFC on May 12, 2007, 11:36:24 PM
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How could she of been so oblivious? What other reason would there be for Yossie to be possibly stronger than Miki that night? Or even the deal between her and Maki, whatever it may be, Reina was sure it had to do with Yossie's little secret..
Sunnovabitch. That never occured to me.  :dunno:


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Suddenly, Mr. Moonlight started to fill the air. Nobody could mistake that corny, but catchy tune. Rika pulled her cell phone out of her purse, opening it and putting it to her ear.
At first I thought it was a little strange that Rika's ringtone would be this instead of a Viyuden song. Then I remembered the PV...it's ISHIYOSHI rabu-rabu! :heart: 


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“Yui, somehow, managed to get locked in a bathroom. The door is jammed or something like that.” Rika laughed lightly, “So I have to go save her before Erika has a panic attack. Sorry to run like this!” she said, starting to run towards the apartments.
I seriously wanna hear THIS story! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/LOL.gif)


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Figuring she might as well give up on the whole were-Yossie idea for today, she sat down next to the leader. “Hello.” she said with a smile, tossing the ball from one hand to the other like she had been doing previously.

Yossie looked up from her magazine, giving a smile. “Hello, Reina-chan. How‘re you?” she said, but her eyes quickly averted from Reina’s face straight down to the ball.

Reina raised an eyebrow, noticing that this was much different from the time Yossie’s eyes had followed the ball before during the meeting, she was more than just dazed by the object. Of course, once Reina realized this, she had to have a little fun.

“I’m good.” the teen replied, moving the ball back and forth, watching the leader’s head followed without even seeming to think about it first. “And you?”

“I’m…Good.” Yossie said, her head moving in a circular motion as it continued to follow the tennis ball.
  Impersonation of Yossi beings dazed by the ball =  :dizzy:



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A grin formed upon Reina’s lips as she looked around the park, nobody seemed to be around. “Go fetch.” she said, throwing the ball towards a field.

The leader didn’t even think, she bolted across the park in the direction of the ball, on all fours at that! The wonky eyed teen had tears from laughing by the time that Yossie pranced back with the ball in her mouth.
Oh jeez she brought it back in her mouth!!!  :lol:



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“Thank you Rika.” Reina smirked, taking the ball from Yossie and patted her head. “I guess those rumors were true of you two. And you know her scent! That’s kinda weird.”

A good fifteen minutes passed of Yossie and Reina playing fetch, and the teen still found great amusement out of the whole situation. After throwing the ball again and watching Yossie go after it with the same amount of passion and excitement as the last sixty-seven times Reina had thrown it.
This is both funny AND sweet at the same time.  :hee:


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Reina closed her cell phone and put it in her pocket while turning to Yossie. “Sorry, I gotta go.” she said, to which Yossie gave a small pout. She still wanted to play.

“Here, have it as a gift or something.” Reina tossed the ball to Yossie, who caught it with a pleased look.

“Sweet.” she said, finally tearing her eyes away from the ball. “Uh…You’re not going to tell anyone, are you? I mean…That was a rather cheap way for you to find out about the ‘Dog-Woman’, with Rika’s scent and all.”
Awwwwwwwwwwwww that's cute.  :shy1:

And cheap way or not, it worked. ;D


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“WHO LET THE DOGS OUT!? WHO? WHO? WHO?” Reina raised an eyebrow as the rather odd song filled the air, Yossie reached into her pocket and pulled out her cell phone, reading the text she had just received.
  OF COURSE!!! :wahaha: (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/ROTFLMAO.gif) :lol: (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/ROFL.gif) :banana:


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“But you do know, there is more than one werewolf in Hello! Project.” Maki said as the two pulled apart.

...

“She was Mako-chan’s pet in a skit, but people generally thought she was Nakazawa-san’s pet in really life.” That was more than enough to clearly give it away.

“Mari-san!” Reina gave a good laugh at that, “Are you serious? But it does make sense.”

“Yes, she is more open to her dog-like attitude more than Yocchan.”

“Damn, this is gunna be one helluva time.”
Oh shit this is gonna be good! (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/giggle.gif)
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: YoukaiChica on May 13, 2007, 12:24:24 AM
Thank god you're back!!! Don't ever leave again! Ever!!!

I never thought it would have been Yossie but it makes sense now! I'd pay lots of money to see her chase a tennis ball AND bring it back in her mouth. Brilliant!! And the whole Yui and Erika thing was just so random but oh so hilarious. Of course Rika has to step in and handle it being the leader and all. Someone has to be the responsible one after all. That's really all I have to say. It was grand and there better be another chapter soon! I don't think I can wait that long again.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: orangesocks on May 13, 2007, 07:01:07 PM
Horray! This chappie was awesome.  :)
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“Yeah I guessed, but I wanted to see you chase after a ball.”

“How nice of you to ruin my dignity like that.”
:lol: Aw, Yossie! :heart:

 Hum...who else is a creature of the night, I wonder? Kaorin ought to be something crazy, me thinks.  :)
Title: Comments for Chapter 15
Post by: Saikami on May 30, 2007, 07:20:21 PM
Hey everyone! Sorry I took so long, I actually wrote this chapter forever ago but my net died. x__x;; So I finally got around to posting it on a different computer. ^^;; Sorry, but I don't have time for individual comments right now, but I'll edit this later. <3 Hope you guys enjoy.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 30, 2007, 07:36:10 PM
xDDD I was wondering why you weren't on AIM xD
Title: Chapter 16: Envy is a Sin
Post by: Saikami on May 30, 2007, 08:28:43 PM
Reina gave a yawn, pulling out a half gallon of milk from her fridge. Last night was definitely a weird one…

“So we don’t have to go back and forth, we can just sleep over my place.” Reina said with a smile, pulling on her jacket. Because she had gone straight from the park earlier, the teen had not picked up clothes from her own apartment.

“Sounds good to me.” Maki gave a nod, grabbing a bag and started to pack quickly.

Soon, the two were walking in the park hand in hand. The night sky was clear and the temperature was cool, a perfect night for walking in the park.

“Isn’t it a nice night?“ A female voice said sweetly. Apparently, whoever was there thought so too.

“Yeah.” a second voice replied, “It’s been really warm lately, I’m glad it cooled down.”

Reina and Maki exchanged glances, both knowing those pair of voices. They turned down the path to find, as they expected, Yossie and Rika walking together.

What they hadn’t expected was the item around Yossie’s neck, a collar. Hooked onto the collar was a leash, which the end was in Rika’s hand.

What was even more unexpected, at least for Reina, was the pair of pointy chocolate brown dog ears coming from the top of Yossie’s head, and to add to it, a tail wagging happily coming from a hole in the back of her pants.

“Wow…I never knew you were so uke.” Reina snickered as they neared. Maki gave a small cough to try and hide her laugh.

Yossie’s ears perked up slightly at the sudden voice, and looked at the couple with a blush forming on her face.

Rika gave a small laugh, “Well, she is a dog.” Yossie gave a little pout when she looked back to which Rika only gave another laugh and hugged her werewolf. “But she likes it, she just doesn’t want to admit it to people.”

“Don’t worry Yocchan.” Maki said with a small grin, “We love you, even if you are uke.”


That was going to be a night to remember Reina noted, opening up the carton and drinking the milk straight from it. Damn, she was craving milk a lot lately.

Running a hand through her messy morning hair, the teen plopped down on the couch with the carton, looking back at the lump under the covers who was snoring lightly, causing Reina to smile.

Before she had a chance to do anything more, there was a voice that seemed to squeak in surprise of something coming from the other room. Raising an eyebrow, Reina took another sip of milk and figured it was nothing.

“Yuko~!” the voice whined slightly, Reina knew more than better who voice that belonged to.

Our favorite turtle, of course.

Naturally curious, Reina stood up and walked over to the wall, pressing her ear against it. They couldn’t really? So early in the morning? Well it was Yuko…

Whatever was going on in there, the odd couple must of noticed that they had been loud, because Reina could barely hear them.

Giving a sigh, curiosity got the best of her. Stepping out of the room, in nothing but black track pants and a sports bra (considering it was an all girls apartment, it was considered pretty normal to do such things), she walked quietly in front of Eri’s door and pressed her ear against it like she had the wall just moments ago.

What the hell…? Reina’s wonky eye twitched slightly, not sure what to think of the noise coming from the other side of the door. Giggles? Last time I checked, Nakazawa Yuko does NOT giggle.

After a few minutes of nonstop giggling, Reina was positive the two were up to no good. But then, the oddest thing seemed to happen. Everything went quiet.

Now even more curious, Reina pressed her ear up against the door harder in attempt to hear any noise.

BAM!

The next thing Reina knew was that her face was no longer against the door, but on the floor in front of someone’s feet.

“Curiosity killed the cat.” Yuko said flatly, lifting Reina to her feet. “Now, if you really want to join in with us, just ask. I’ve told you this before, Tanaka.”

Reina made an attempt to squirm away, but Yuko had picked up from under her armpits to keep the girl from running. “That wasn’t what I was doing, you two are the ones being perverted so early in the morning!”

Eri walked towards the two. “Uh, we weren’t doing anything bad though. We had gotten into a pillow fight.” Eri explained, laughing slightly.

“So who’s the pervert now?” Yuko grinned, “You’re the one thinking that we’re doing inappropriate things at eleven in the morning.”

“I…Uh…Arg…” Reina mumbled, frustrated as she gave up trying to escape Yuko.

“That’s right, you were a bad girl.” Yuko teased, walking into Reina’s room. “Yo! Gocchin!”

“Wah…?” Maki mumbled, slowly sitting up on the bed, her hair messier than when she goes crazy during concerts.

“Take better watch over your pet.” With that said, she dropped Reina into the bed and headed out the door.

Maki gave a sleepy laugh, “Yes Nakazawa-san.” She said just before Yuko closed the door, then plopped forward, resting her head on Reina’s lap. “What happened?”

“Oh nothing.” Reina said with a small laugh, starting to run her hands through Maki’s hair, “I just thought they were being perverted. I’m sorry to of woken you up.”

“Mm, s’all good.” Maki gave a yawn, “I needed to wake up sometime, don’t wanna waste the whole day just sleepin’. What time is it? Like nine?”

“Eleven.”

“Gahh, I need to work on waking up earlier. Half the day is gone already.” Maki sat up, stretching.

Reina also stood, walking back over to the couch and picking up the milk carton, finishing off the liquid inside.

“Oh! I almost forgot.” Reina turned towards Maki, an eyebrow raised in question. “What’d you almost forget?”

“I have to go wake Yocchan up.” Maki explained, pulling on a pair of jeans, “Well, she is supposed to be awake, but knowing her she’s still asleep. But anyway, you, me, Yocchan, Miki, Aya, and Rika are supposed to have lunch, I asked you about it a few days ago.” the taller girl laughed lightly while Reina started to get changed too, obviously having forgot about the event as well.

Walking down the apartment halls, the two ended up talking about how amusing WereYossie could be in their futures. After all, making fun of Yossie was always a good way to pass time while walking down halls.

“So…Does that mean she lifts her leg when she goes to the bathroom?” Reina questioned, laughing.

“Last time I checked, she was a girl.” Maki grinned, “But in her real wolf form, it wouldn’t be so shocking, considering she is so boyish.”

“Yeah, the idea of her being able to turn into a wolf is really cool.” the younger said, “But it still scares the shit out of me, ugh…Dogs.” she gave a slight shudder.

“Don’t worry, you know she’ll do no harm.” Maki laughed lightly, “Unless you hurt someone she is really close to, of course.”

“Yeah,” Reina nodded, “How’d you find out about her and Yaguchi-san?”

“Well, Mari-san is really puppy like, I have no clue why I didn’t know until I caught Nakazawa-san making her do tricks for dog treats.” Maki said, laughing at the memory. “As for Yocchan, she told me when we were dating.”

“What!?” Reina stopped in her tracks, her wonky eyes wide and staring at the older girl.

“Uh…” Maki gave a small laugh, scratching the back of her head, “Yeah, we dated in the Mr. Moonlight days.”

Reina gave a small pout, but kept all her comments inside her yankii mind, figuring it’d be best to keep them there.

The couple stopped in front of Yossie’s room, “Ten bucks says she forgot about it too.” Maki laughed, opening the door.

They walked in to find yet another odd scene involving Yossie and Rika, for the taller girl was flat on her back, her tail showing and wagging like crazy while her leg twitched slightly as Rika scratched Yossie’s stomach.

“Told you.” Maki grinned, “But I didn’t expect Rika to of forgotten as well.”

Yossie stayed oblivious to the two girls in her door, caught up in her own little doggy world, but Rika looked up, laughing lightly. “Hey guys.”

Even if she wanted to, Reina wouldn’t of been able to stop herself from letting out a laugh. She couldn’t help but to think that when the dog came out of Yossie, that the leader lost all dignity or brain cells, or both. (Considering Reina had never seemed to think a dog was very smart, and the fact that she normally didn’t like them added to it.) Although amusing as hell, Reina still managed to not laugh her ass off and maintained her yankii front, glaring at the lycan.

Yossie finally noticed Maki and Reina (Rika had stopped scratching her stomach), and sat up. “What’re you two doing here?” she asked, an eyebrow raised.

“We had plans for lunch.” Maki said, “Figured I’d remind you, glad I did.”

“Oh yeah…I totally forgot.” Yossie scratched the back of her head.

“Yah…You would…” Reina mumbled, yankii mode turned on full blast, accent and full on death glare towards the leader.

Yossie blinked a couple of times, obviously confused to the sudden death vibes coming from the wonky teen. “Wah?”

In response, Reina hissed. Yes, she literally hissed at Yossie.

Of course, with Yossie still in her doggy mode, she took the hiss as a threat. And she, like any dog would respond to with any threat, growled back baring her slightly pointed teeth while her ears went back and returned the death glare right back at the source of the threat with no clue behind the reason for Reina’s threat. The tension between the two seemed so thick that not even Aya would have been able to cut it with her katana.

“Uh…Reina, we dated a very long time ago.” Maki said, looking from one Morning Musume member to the other.

Being in doggy mode, Yossie didn’t typically think before she spoke. It was more than obvious, because what she said was definitely something she wouldn’t of said if thinking before speaking.

“Yeah, plus Rika’s better in bed anyway.”

Whatever anyone was thinking, their minds suddenly stopped at the werewolf’s words. There was a good moment of silence before someone spoke up.

“I’d beg to differ.”

Everyone looked over to where the voice came from with dropped jaws, of course it could be none other than the famous Miki Fujimoto who had been standing in the door frame for quite some time now with a smug little smirk upon her face.

“Maki is so much bett---”

“Fujimoto!” Maki growled, fists clenched, “What did I say I’d do to you if you ever--”

“You did-- With HER!?” Reina asked, bewildered. “And she liked it!?”

“Yeah!” Yossie turned to Rika, wide eyed.

“I was drunk!” Both the girls defended themselves in unison.

“And Yossie, you shouldn’t be talking.” Miki gave a smirk, “’Cos you weren’t drunk, deary.”

Before anyone could throw in a comment, Miki continued. “And don’t worry Tanaka, I’ll get you sometime soon.”

“Like hell you will!” Maki growled, her eyes narrowing at Miki.

“She’s next on the list.” Miki shrugged, “Considering I just got Eri a good month ago, and I’m not bothering with that annoying Sayu…Hmm…Ah, I could always go for Risa. Last time, she started to panic and Ai came to her rescue.” the groping demon laughed, “A challenge is always fun, I just have to bring duct tape.

“Yeah, but now that Aya has you on such a tight leash your little games are over.” Maki said with a smirk, pulling Reina (who was still in shock) closer.

“Yeah right, nobody can change my ways. Not even Aya.” Miki rolled her eyes. Everyone there knew she was lying. Yeah, the vampire might go and grope other girls but she’ll always go back to Aya.

“What about me, Tan?” Aya poked her head in.

“Oh, it’s nothing.” Miki grinned, wrapping her arms around the slightly taller girl.

“Whatever.” Aya shrugged the topic off, figuring it’d be too much of a pain to get it out of Miki, “And you guys are really slow, we were supposed to meet outside twenty minutes ago, and here you all are chatting.”

“Well if she wasn’t so slow…” Reina finally spoke, her wonky eyes once again glaring at Yossie.

“Reina,” Maki gave a small laugh, “Please try not to hold a grudge against my exes.”

Reina’s eyes looked up at Maki, “That was plural…” she said, “That means there was more than one?”

“Anyway!” Rika said, saving Maki the pain of listing her past girlfriends, “Let’s go already.” she stood up. “Yocchan and I are both ready, considering we did remember this morning but then forgot.” she gave a small laugh. “So, shall we?”

Within only minutes (with the help of constant pushing and shoving) everyone piled into the small car. Aya was driving while Miki took the passenger seat and the other four squeezed into the back.

“Where are we going anyway?” Reina asked, trying to get comfortable between Maki and Rika.

“Dunno,” Rika said, shrugging slightly, “But either way, Miki is paying. She owes Yocchan and me a dinner, so she said she’ll just pay for everyone else too.”

“Yeah yeah…” Miki mumbled, “Turn right here Aya, we’ll go the back way.” she said, pointing down a street. “You know how Yocchan likes taking the back way where nobody can see her.”

Aya turned and Yossie grinned, rolling down the window.

“She isn’t gunna really…?” Reina asked, but her question was soon answered when the leader stuck her head out the window, hair waving in the wind while her tongue stuck out slightly. “…I guess so.” Reina rolled her eyes slightly, still upset with the leader.

As minutes went by, Reina found herself glaring at the werewolf while Maki and Rika chatted about trivial things. She looked from one to the other, seeing that they were preoccupied, then a small grin formed upon the yankii’s lips while her wonky eyes wandered back to Yossie.

Making sure that Rika nor Maki would notice, she tried to look as if she was stretching, while her fingers slowly pressed down on the power window, thus (obviously) causing the window that Yossie’s head was sticking out of to start to roll up.

Yossie wasn’t paying attention, and was completely oblivious to the yankii’s plans. For some reason or another, Maki nor Rika seemed to notice either. Reina gave a smirk, the window finally touching Yossie’s neck, to which the werewolf noticed and immediately tried to stick her head back in, only to have it slam loudly against the glass.

Reina couldn’t help but to laugh at the struggling dog, who was trying to get her head back in the window (and seemed to forget that a button could make the window roll down.)

“Reina, please don’t try and kill her.” Maki said, giving Reina a look, to which she shrugged slightly.

“What did I do?” she played innocent, to which Maki gave her head a small knock while Rika freed her little pet.

Yossie whined slightly, much to Reina’s enjoyment. She was yankii after all.

“And we’re here!” Miki grinned as Aya pulled into a small store’s parking lot. “I’ll be right back.”

Maki gave a sigh as Miki exited the car, “She is so cheap.”

“Mmhmm…” everyone agreed with a mumble.

A few minutes later, Miki came back with four bags, “Here we are.” she grinned, passing out everyone’s lunch.

“Junk food?” Rika raised an eyebrow, pulling out some various unhealthy items. “You are so cheap.”

“Yup.” Miki said, opening up a milk tea box and starting to drink it.

“But milk tea isn’t that bad.” Reina shrugged, starting to drink hers as well.

“At least we don’t have to pay for it.” Yossie shrugged.

“What do you expect, it’s Miki after all.” Aya laughed.

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“Today was fun, I have to admit.” Maki said as the six girls relaxed on the warm grass of the park where people rarely went to.

“Mmhmm.” Reina said, yawning slightly, “But why do we always end up at the park?”

Rika gave a laugh, “Because it’s nice here, and not that many people go in this area, so we’re not bombed with fans.”

“Yeah, you have a point.” Reina gave a nod, smiling at the odd day she spent with the group. After they had eaten (actually it was while they were eating considering they were still in the car) they had drove to a lake where everyone ended up swimming, including an unwilling Reina (she didn’t like water but Miki ended up throwing her in.) Although she hated water, the yankii had to admit she did enjoy herself. After that, they had ended up here, in the park to watch the stars.

“We should get going back though.” Aya said as she sat up and looked at the others, “Tan and I are supposed to meet up with Mari soon, and it’s getting pretty late as it is.”

Reluctantly, everyone agreed and sat up as well. It seemed that everyone did have a good time, even Miki (who refused to admit it.)

Eventually, everyone ended up heading home except for GAM, who was off to greet Mari. Maki and Reina ended up going to their own apartments on account of Maki having practice extremely early and not wanting to wake Reina up when she got ready in the morning.

“G’night.” Reina smiled giving Maki a quick kiss before the two parted.

“Sweet dreams.” Maki smiled and waved as she started to walk towards her apartment.

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What a weird dream…Reina thought as she sat up in bed, blinking a few times for things to come into view.

Wait…She looked around her room once more, slightly more than confused. Why is everything so…Big?

She hopped off of her bed, inspecting the suddenly change in her room over night. As she walked passed her full size mirror, she paused, frozen on the spot.

“WHAT THE HELL!?”
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 15 Up]
Post by: Yuuyami on May 30, 2007, 08:30:45 PM
-Runs to dibs-

I roffled all chapter long xD It was mainly because of Yossie and her dog habits xDDDDDDDD

Sweet Jesus Maki, slept with everyone much? xDDDDDD

What thing I seem to notice is that Reina seems all the more cat-like than usual o_O With the milk and hissing and hating water o-o... And then at the end... o_O She didn't turn into a cute little kitty-cat, did she? xD Reinyan... xD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: len.chan on May 30, 2007, 09:44:44 PM
I'm with Yuu here, love Yossi the Dog :heart: :heart: XDDD
so, Reina's a cat now? XD that'll be fun if Yossi sniffs her  :lol:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Tanachan on May 30, 2007, 11:17:51 PM
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD!

Yossie the dog, funniest thing ever. But what the hell did Reina turn into? Cat or Catlady? Either way, CATFIGHT!

*sprints off*
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: glcorps2002 on May 30, 2007, 11:39:29 PM
Yossi the wolf vs Reina the cat! Who will win? Ok now I'm wondering what the others are: Rika and Risa the banshees, Kaori a sphinx, Takahashi a siren (I would so drown for that girl!), Yui as a mermaid (They can go topless!), and Nacchi as the sexy imp girl! You know she is with that smile.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Estrea on May 31, 2007, 02:02:48 AM
Doggie, uke Yossi. XD "Don't worry, we still love you even if you're uke". XDDDDD

And Maki with her MANY exes! Kinda reminds me of the Maki in my story somehow....XDDDD Reina being all jealous was cute. XD Though Yuu was right...too much cattiness? XD I gather she transformed into something significantly smaller? XD Reina as a kitty cat....nya~ >:3

XD Update soon~
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: orangesocks on May 31, 2007, 02:07:16 AM
Oh snap! So Reina's a cat now?  XD And Miki's gettin' all the ladies' lovin'  :heart: Eri didn't stand a chance. 

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“Don’t worry Yocchan.” Maki said with a small grin, “We love you, even if you are uke.”

...

“And Yossie, you shouldn’t be talking.” Miki gave a smirk, “’Cos you weren’t drunk, deary.”
XD

I love all this YukoxEri! And Miki having a sex!list...haha.

AH! That's right! Was it ever hinted that Risa and Ai were any sort of animal or creature of the night?? After her dream, Reina woke up as a cat, eh?  :lol:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Sakura Momusu on May 31, 2007, 06:14:32 AM
Hmmm...so Reina's a werecat...how'd that happen?

Or did Maki unconsciously turn Reina into one of her familiars... :rofl:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Sukoshi on May 31, 2007, 08:12:44 AM
kyaa Reina cat!! kawaiiI~~  the mental imagine is just too much for me :shy2:  Reina cat must be tiny like a kitten since she's already so small  XD  I always love thinking of Reina as a cat  and now I can happily read about it  :w00t: 
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: stefy on May 31, 2007, 11:23:40 AM
hahaha Reina a cat now? How'd that happen???

And Yossi so CUTEEEE as a wereDog, btw.. does she shrink down to cute lil doggy size or is she like the same human size when she's a wereDog... wolf?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: rndmnwierd on May 31, 2007, 06:27:00 PM
Love doggie Yossui! And Reina as a cat? Fitting. Plus Maki's 'ex' list.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: YoukaiChica on June 07, 2007, 10:18:21 PM
*bump*

I forgot to comment some how. My bad. I loved doggy Yossi. So cute!! And Reina's antics of extracting pain from her were simply amazing. So funny. And now Reina's a cat?!?! At least I think that's what happened. Well that's what happens when you hang out with vampires, werewolves, and Yuko.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: JFC on June 08, 2007, 02:28:31 AM
Shit I never noticed that there was a new chapter here! :o


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“Isn’t it a nice night?“ A female voice said sweetly. Apparently, whoever was there thought so too.

“Yeah.” a second voice replied, “It’s been really warm lately, I’m glad it cooled down.”

Reina and Maki exchanged glances, both knowing those pair of voices. They turned down the path to find, as they expected, Yossie and Rika walking together.

What they hadn’t expected was the item around Yossie’s neck, a collar. Hooked onto the collar was a leash, which the end was in Rika’s hand.

What was even more unexpected, at least for Reina, was the pair of pointy chocolate brown dog ears coming from the top of Yossie’s head, and to add to it, a tail wagging happily coming from a hole in the back of her pants.
So hilarious, and yet SO CUTE!!! :lol:


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That was going to be a night to remember Reina noted, opening up the carton and drinking the milk straight from it. Damn, she was craving milk a lot lately.
Ok, this is just TOO easy to predict, considering the whole "milk" thing. :D


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there was a voice that seemed to squeak in surprise of something coming from the other room. Raising an eyebrow, Reina took another sip of milk and figured it was nothing.

“Yuko~!” the voice whined slightly, Reina knew more than better who voice that belonged to.

Our favorite turtle, of course.
Oh my, Yuko's so frisky.  :pimp:


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Now even more curious, Reina pressed her ear up against the door harder in attempt to hear any noise.

BAM!

The next thing Reina knew was that her face was no longer against the door, but on the floor in front of someone’s feet.
BWAAAAAAH she fell over!!! :k-great:



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But anyway, you, me, Yocchan, Miki, Aya, and Rika are supposed to have lunch, I asked you about it a few days ago.” the taller girl laughed lightly while Reina started to get changed too, obviously having forgot about the event as well.
Awwwwwwwww it's a triple-date! (involving a werewolf, a couple of vampires, a vampire hunter, Rika and Reina) :heart:


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Walking down the apartment halls, the two ended up talking about how amusing WereYossie could be in their futures. After all, making fun of Yossie was always a good way to pass time while walking down halls.

“So…Does that mean she lifts her leg when she goes to the bathroom?” Reina questioned, laughing.
LIFTING HER LEG!!!  XD


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“How’d you find out about her and Yaguchi-san?”

“Well, Mari-san is really puppy like, I have no clue why I didn’t know until I caught Nakazawa-san making her do tricks for dog treats.” Maki said, laughing at the memory.
DOG TREATS!!! :on lol:


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“As for Yocchan, she told me when we were dating.”

“What!?” Reina stopped in her tracks, her wonky eyes wide and staring at the older girl.

“Uh…” Maki gave a small laugh, scratching the back of her head, “Yeah, we dated in the Mr. Moonlight days.”
Ooooh that came as a bit of a shock for Reina. :O


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They walked in to find yet another odd scene involving Yossie and Rika, for the taller girl was flat on her back, her tail showing and wagging like crazy while her leg twitched slightly as Rika scratched Yossie’s stomach.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... :nya:


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“We had plans for lunch.” Maki said, “Figured I’d remind you, glad I did.”

“Oh yeah…I totally forgot.” Yossie scratched the back of her head.

“Yah…You would…” Reina mumbled, yankii mode turned on full blast, accent and full on death glare towards the leader.

Yossie blinked a couple of times, obviously confused to the sudden death vibes coming from the wonky teen. “Wah?”

In response, Reina hissed. Yes, she literally hissed at Yossie.
Uh oh...not good.


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“Uh…Reina, we dated a very long time ago.” Maki said, looking from one Morning Musume member to the other.

Being in doggy mode, Yossie didn’t typically think before she spoke. It was more than obvious, because what she said was definitely something she wouldn’t of said if thinking before speaking.

“Yeah, plus Rika’s better in bed anyway.”
Oh shit...DEFINITELY not good. :o


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“I’d beg to differ.”

Everyone looked over to where the voice came from with dropped jaws, of course it could be none other than the famous Miki Fujimoto who had been standing in the door frame for quite some time now with a smug little smirk upon her face.

“Maki is so much bett---”
We can trust Miki-sama because Miki-sama knows!!! :rockon: :lol:


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“And don’t worry Tanaka, I’ll get you sometime soon.”

“Like hell you will!” Maki growled, her eyes narrowing at Miki.

“She’s next on the list.” Miki shrugged, “Considering I just got Eri a good month ago, and I’m not bothering with that annoying Sayu…Hmm…Ah, I could always go for Risa. Last time, she started to panic and Ai came to her rescue.” the groping demon laughed, “A challenge is always fun, I just have to bring duct tape.
DUCT TAPE!!! This is GREAT!!!  :hiakhiakhiak: :wahaha:


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“Whatever.” Aya shrugged the topic off, figuring it’d be too much of a pain to get it out of Miki, “And you guys are really slow, we were supposed to meet outside twenty minutes ago, and here you all are chatting.”

“Well if she wasn’t so slow…” Reina finally spoke, her wonky eyes once again glaring at Yossie.

“Reina,” Maki gave a small laugh, “Please try not to hold a grudge against my exes.”

Reina’s eyes looked up at Maki, “That was plural…” she said, “That means there was more than one?”
Ah dear, sweet, naive little Reina. How much you need to learn. ;D


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“Turn right here Aya, we’ll go the back way.” she said, pointing down a street. “You know how Yocchan likes taking the back way where nobody can see her.”

Aya turned and Yossie grinned, rolling down the window.
Ok, I realize that has to do with her being a werewolf and all, but it could also be taken another way if your mind is perverted enough.  :twisted:


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Making sure that Rika nor Maki would notice, she tried to look as if she was stretching, while her fingers slowly pressed down on the power window, thus (obviously) causing the window that Yossie’s head was sticking out of to start to roll up.
Oh Reina, you devil you.   :kekeke:


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“And we’re here!” Miki grinned as Aya pulled into a small store’s parking lot. “I’ll be right back.”

Maki gave a sigh as Miki exited the car, “She is so cheap.”

“Mmhmm…” everyone agreed with a mumble.

...


“What do you expect, it’s Miki after all.” Aya laughed.
Miki's buying lunch from a little conbi store?  :rofl: Seems like something she'd do. We still love her anyway.  :wub:


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After they had eaten (actually it was while they were eating considering they were still in the car) they had drove to a lake where everyone ended up swimming, including an unwilling Reina (she didn’t like water but Miki ended up throwing her in.)
So wait, did they bring swimsuits? If not....ooooooooh baby. :jerk:


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Although she hated water, the yankii had to admit she did enjoy herself. After that, they had ended up here, in the park to watch the stars.
Okay, first there's the milk thing, then the seeming hostility at were-Yossi, and now not liking water? C'mon, how obvious is this?   :bigdeal:


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What a weird dream…Reina thought as she sat up in bed, blinking a few times for things to come into view.

Wait…She looked around her room once more, slightly more than confused. Why is everything so…Big?
Meow... :P
Title: Comments for Chapter 16
Post by: Saikami on June 15, 2007, 05:41:52 PM
Yuu: Gotta love WereYossie. :D Reinyan, I like that name. XD

len.chan: Yossie and Reina chemestry is interesting in general. XD Doesn't matter what situation.

Tanachan: I've never seen so many damn XD faces in my life. O_O

glcorps2002: XD You never know in this fic.

Essy-san: Mm, sorry for the wait! ^^;; I always thought Yossie uke would be funny. :D Maki with her exes, now that I think about it, she is kinda like Maki in your fic. XD;;

orangesocks: XD It's Miki, of course she has a sex list.

Sakura Momusu: It'll be explained in a couple of chapters. :3

Sukoshi: Who doesn't love Reinyan? :D

stefy: Yossie is about the size of a large dog when in wolf form. :D

rndmnwierd: I'm glad everyone got a kick outta the ex list. XD

YoukaiChica: A jelous Reina always leads to some form of pain on the other party. ;D

JFC: S'all good, s'long as I get my comment eventually. XD I see you particually liked Miki's sex list. ;]
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Estrea on June 15, 2007, 05:42:17 PM
WEDGE
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Yuuyami on June 15, 2007, 05:42:49 PM
-WEDGES TOO-
Title: Chapter 17 - Nine Lives
Post by: Saikami on June 15, 2007, 05:44:08 PM
Although Reina yelled, it wasn’t actual words that came out of her mouth. Instead, a rather loud “Nyan~!”

This can’t be real! She thought, inspecting the mirror. What she saw wasn’t the small teenager that everyone grew to love, but instead a poofy, small calico furred kitten with large green, wonky eyes.

Practically panicking, Reina looked down to see two fuzzy front paws that were three or four different shades of brown. Oh gahh, oh gahh, oh gahh! I need to get some help! Where’s Maki when I need her!?

Running over to her bed, she jumped up, barely able to reach the top. (Reina had yet to get used to having a completely different body.) From there, she jumped up onto her nightstand, knocking over many things in the process, and started her attempt to open her cell phone, but only ended up failing miserably and sending her alarm clock, cell phone, and herself to the floor. At least she landed on her feet.

Pawing at the flip phone, she finally managed to open it. Ugh…This is annoying.

Reina placed a stubby little paw down on her contacts button, only to have several other buttons be pressed as well. You’re kidding me! She let out a stressed “nyan” which would sound extremely cute to the human ear, that is, if any humans were there to hear it.

Although her paws were small, they were much too big for her cell phone buttons, the kitten still tried to call her girlfriend, desperate for some form of help.

Eventually, after many failures and much stress, Reina managed to come up with an effective plan. By picking up a pen with her mouth, she was able to press the correct buttons needed, and only the correct buttons. After dialing Maki’s number, she pressed speakerphone and dropped the pen.

Who knew the sound of ringing was so heavenly? And when Maki picked up, her simple “Hello?” sounded even better.

“NYAN~! Nyan nyan nya--” she paused. Shit!

“Wah…?” Maki sounded confused, but who wouldn’t if someone called them and starting nyaning? When nobody responded, it only seemed to confuse the soloist more. “Hello?”

“…Nyan…” Reina mentally sighed, picking up the pen when her mouth once more and hanging up.

Ugh…This is no good! How the hell am I supposed to get help if I can’t even get out of my room!?

Collapsing onto her stomach while looking for any way to get out, she let out a big breath, clearly annoyed.

Bingo! Her eyes fell on the window, which was slightly open. Immediately she stood, running over to her computer chair and jumping up on it, then to her desk which was right in front of the window.

Open only a small crack, Reina managed to fit through it. Of course, as soon as she got out and onto the ledge, she regretted her “brilliant” plan.

After all, she was a kitten that was small enough to fit into a sweatshirt pocket on the ledge of an apartment window that was on the third story.

“Nyan…” Reina felt like her eyes were going to pop out of their sockets. Yeah, she has snuck out before though her window, being the yankii she is, but never as a furry little creature ten times smaller than her original size.

Taking a deep breath, she jumped down the few feet onto the fire escape (it was a lot further down that she ever recalled.)

From there she slowly made her way down the stairs, scared as hell. No wonder cats didn’t like being stuck in trees.

In what seemed like hours (which really only took minutes), Reina was on solid pavement, much to her relief.

Now…to find help. Reina started to walk towards the entrance of the apartments, someone in that building had to be of some use at least.

Luckily it wasn’t long before someone opened the door, in this case it happened to be Miyabi in a big poofy vest and baggy clothes underneath. Berryz is so gangsta…it’s kinda weird. But they’re still cute…Which is even weirder.

Reina shrugged it off and quickly snuck into the building, happy that she was off of the streets, after all someone could of picked her up and brought her home with them. Little did she know, she was in a danger zone as soon as she placed a paw in the apartments.

Looking around for someone, or really anyone that could help, she couldn’t help but to see a sign that she never noticed before. “No animals”…Whys that?

Her question was soon answered as she started to walk down the hall and into the main lobby, where many people tended to hang out.

“KITTY~!” One of the Hello! Project girls yelled, Reina didn’t even have time to guess who it was, considering she suddenly had a mob of girls running after her. So, of course, she ran for her life.

Unfortunately, even as a cat, she wasn’t the greatest runner, and was soon caught by a member. And not just any member, possibly the worst member to be caught by.

None other than the childish Koharu Kusumi. Yes, this might not seem so bad, and that was exactly what Reina thought. At least at first.

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What the hell is wrong with this kid!?!? Reina wanted to scream and yell, but in kitty form she could only nyan, and at the moment she was forced to nyan to a certain song. A certain song which Reina suddenly grew a strong hatred towards, at first, she liked the song quite a bit, thinking it was cute. She even did karaoke to it. Now she hated it with a strong passion. After all…It was Balalaika. And nobody could take too much of that song.

So, here she was, nyaning to this horribly annoying song, dressed up in a bright orange poofy dress and hat which was oddly the perfect size for Reina, who had no clue where the hell Koharu had gotten the little outfit in the first place.

Just wait until I get my hands on you…I’ll shove my foot so far up your--

“Bath time~!” Koharu grinned, picking up her new pet to which started squirming immensely and nyaning like crazy.

ANYTHING BUT THAT!!! DAMNIT!!!

Just as she managed to squirm out of Koharu’s grip, she found herself falling into a bathtub of water with a small splash.

Reina’s head poked out of the water, looking utterly pathetic but somehow cute at the same time. This is even worse with fur… She gave a small hiss, clearly showing her dislike for the water and tried to get out, only to be held down by Koharu.

“Don’t even try Mr. Kitty.” She laughed, pulling out some shampoo.

“NYAN!?” Reina cried out, or more hissed out. Mr.!? Oh now you’re in such deep shit when I get to you!

Koharu giggled at the kitten’s response as she started to scrub Reina, who was doing her best at trying to make the job impossible for Koharu while at the same time just trying to get out of the bathtub.

It took a good forty-five minutes, but Koharu managed to scrub Reina clean, although she wasn’t dirty to begin with.

I swallowed soap… Reina felt lifeless, considering that she had fought and tried her best to get out of the clutches of the Miracle Child in Morning Musume for over a half hour nonstop…Who wouldn’t?

Suddenly a fully towel wrapped around her and started to not-so-gently dry her off, in the end causing the kitten to look like a ball of fuzz.

“There you go.” Koharu smiled, picking up Reina and giggling slightly. “You’re so cute~! I think I’ll have to buy you some more outfits!”

Reina mentally groaned, and her ears flopped down as she was put on the bed, and laid down, what else was she supposed to do?

“I’ll fix you a treat, Mr. Kitty!” Koharu smiled after patting down the kitten, causing her fur to actually look normal again.

Stretching out on the bed, Reina started to think of all possible ways to escape this “Hell Hole” as she liked to call it but found her thoughts to be interrupted by a knocking at the door.

“Come in!” Koharu yelled from the kitchen, to which the person, who happened to be Sayu, opened the door.

There was her chance, and (of course) Reina took it as soon as she could. Yet was soon discovered by both Sayu and Koharu, who started to chase her down the halls.

Will this ever stop!? Luckily, it was about to, for Reina ran right into the person of her prayers, Maki.

“Nyan~!” Reina pawed at Maki’s foot, overly enjoyed to find her girlfriend.

“Oh, a kitten!” Maki smiled, picking up the small creature, inspecting her. “You’re cute!”

“There you are Mr. Kitty!” Koharu said, walking up to Maki and Reina.

The soloist must of noticed the look of panic on Reina’s face, for she simply smiled. “I see you met my new kitten.” she laughed, “Miki was watching her for a bit, but she got away.”

“Oh, I see.” Koharu gave a nod, but looked a little upset. “I found him a little bit ago, but at least he found his owner.”

“It’s a she.” Maki laughed, petting a very grateful Reina, “But thank you. You can visit her any time you like.”

“Okay!” That seemed to cheer the Miracle Child up quite a bit, “But I gotta get going, Sayumi-san and I are going to go out for lunch.”

“Well, have fun then.” Maki said, watching Koharu run off. “Heh, I never thought she’d be good with animals.” she looked at the kitten once more. “What do you say? Come home with me?”

Reina answered by a happy nyan, and started to purr when the soloist pet her.

“You know, you have wonky eyes!” Maki pointed out, tapping Reina on the nose. “You actually remind me a lot of Reina.”

YES! She recognizes me! Thank you, gods! I knew you would figure it out, Maki!

“Isn’t that cool?” she gave a small laugh, “Just wait ‘til she sees you, she’ll think you’re cute.” Maki pet Reina again. “Hmm…I should call you Reinyan!”

Reinyan mentally groaned once more. My girlfriend is so oblivious to the point where she can’t recognize me!? What the hell?!?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Estrea on June 15, 2007, 05:45:06 PM
DIBS

(nyahahaha Yuu! XDDD)

REINA IN KITTY MODE~~~~ Nyan~ (just had to say it XD)

XDDDD Figures that the girls in H!P will go crazy over a kitty. XD "No animals allowed indeed". (but hey, ain't Yossi and Mari animals too? *cough* XD)

KOHARU!!! Hahahahahah. Nyaning to Balalaika! Oh, Koharu is surprisingly sadistic! And dressing Reinyan up in costume! Where does she get those? And why did she get those in the first place? Does she like, stock them up for special occasions? XD

Poor Reinyan, swallowing soap in the bath. XD Oh Koharu, Reina is so going to kick your ass once she gets back to her human form. XD

And ohhh Maki. <3 Rescuing your kitty-fied girlfriend, yet still managing to miss out the fact that she IS your girlfriend. Tsk, so oblivious. XD I wonder what else will happen. How long will Reinyan be stuck this way? No matter how cute she is now, she needs to get back to normal....eventually. XD

(*cough* torture her some more! *cough*)
[Reinyan: -_-#### NYAAAAAAAAN!!! --> translation: YOU WANT TO DIE?!)

XDDDDD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 16]
Post by: Yuuyami on June 15, 2007, 05:45:25 PM
DIIIBS

(( You beat me again?! >_____> Oh well, I edited mine with my comment before your's so Nyanya :x))

Anywho xD

Chapter made me laugh a lot xD Poor poor POOR Reinyan xD Going through hell just to find Maki, and on top of all that, have Maki not even recognize her? ROFFLE! POOR HER xDDDDDD

Now the main question is, what will Maki do to her? :0

...And how will Reina transform back? o_O

The image of poofball Reinyan... Oh gahh.... -dead- xDDDDD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: Sukoshi on June 16, 2007, 04:06:31 AM
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ kawaiiiiiii~  :wub:

I was like this  :shy2: the whole time !  I love Reinyan!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: Tanachan on June 16, 2007, 09:29:31 PM
KAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

This was amazingly cute, yet so funny at the same time. And I cannot WAIT until Kusumi gets her ass beaten!

*hands Reina a medival mace and an AK* Here, use this Reinyan!
Reina: *sprints off towards Kusumi, weapons in hand*
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: shindoushiz on June 17, 2007, 01:10:17 AM
heheheh, Reina and her day of torture.  I would totally run from Koharu too if I was a cat, her hyper activity would kill me. x_X

Tsk, for Maki being oblivious. :roll: Reina has to learn how to control her cat form somehow so she won't be helpless all the time.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 17, 2007, 07:25:11 PM
The cuteness kills!  :mon cute: :mon cute: :mon cute: :mon ko:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: JFC on June 18, 2007, 12:45:41 AM
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I see you particually liked Miki's sex list.
I'd like it even more if I was on it myself.   8)


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This can’t be real! [/i]She thought, inspecting the mirror. What she saw wasn’t the small teenager that everyone grew to love, but instead a poofy, small calico furred kitten with large green, wonky eyes.
Awwwwwww KAWAII~!!!  :k-inlove:


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Reina managed to come up with an effective plan. By picking up a pen with her mouth, she was able to press the correct buttons needed, and only the correct buttons. After dialing Maki’s number, she pressed speakerphone and dropped the pen.
That was so smart...AND SO CUTE!!!  :w00t:


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Who knew the sound of ringing was so heavenly? And when Maki picked up, her simple “Hello?” sounded even better.

“NYAN~! Nyan nyan nya--” she paused. Shit!
  XD


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“KITTY~!” One of the Hello! Project girls yelled, Reina didn’t even have time to guess who it was, considering she suddenly had a mob of girls running after her. So, of course, she ran for her life.

Unfortunately, even as a cat, she wasn’t the greatest runner, and was soon caught by a member. And not just any member, possibly the worst member to be caught by.

None other than the childish Koharu Kusumi. Yes, this might not seem so bad, and that was exactly what Reina thought. At least at first.
Koharu's got her??? Oh geez this is gonna be a trip!  :lol:


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It was Balalaika. And nobody could take too much of that song.

So, here she was, nyaning to this horribly annoying song, dressed up in a bright orange poofy dress and hat which was oddly the perfect size for Reina, who had no clue where the hell Koharu had gotten the little outfit in the first place.
A cat, dressed up in Koharu's Balalaika outfit? I totally wanna see that.  :hee:


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Reina’s head poked out of the water, looking utterly pathetic but somehow cute at the same time. This is even worse with fur… She gave a small hiss, clearly showing her dislike for the water and tried to get out, only to be held down by Koharu.

“Don’t even try Mr. Kitty.” She laughed, pulling out some shampoo.

“NYAN!?” Reina cried out, or more hissed out. Mr.!? Oh now you’re in such deep shit when I get to you!
I guess Koharu doesn't know how to tell a boy-cat from a girl-cat, huh?  :mon sweat:


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Suddenly a fully towel wrapped around her and started to not-so-gently dry her off, in the end causing the kitten to look like a ball of fuzz.
I've seen those. They're like walking afros.  O0


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“Oh, a kitten!” Maki smiled, picking up the small creature, inspecting her. “You’re cute!”

“There you are Mr. Kitty!” Koharu said, walking up to Maki and Reina.

The soloist must of noticed the look of panic on Reina’s face, for she simply smiled. “I see you met my new kitten.” she laughed, “Miki was watching her for a bit, but she got away.”

“Oh, I see.” Koharu gave a nod, but looked a little upset. “I found him a little bit ago, but at least he found his owner.”

“It’s a she.” Maki laughed, petting a very grateful Reina, “But thank you. You can visit her any time you like.”
Does Maki know that it's Reina? Do all the "freaks" of H!P have some type of 6th sense for each other?  :O


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“You know, you have wonky eyes!” Maki pointed out, tapping Reina on the nose. “You actually remind me a lot of Reina.”

YES! She recognizes me! Thank you, gods! I knew you would figure it out, Maki!

“Isn’t that cool?” she gave a small laugh, “Just wait ‘til she sees you, she’ll think you’re cute.” Maki pet Reina again. “Hmm…I should call you Reinyan!”

Reinyan mentally groaned once more. My girlfriend is so oblivious to the point where she can’t recognize me!? What the hell?!?
Ummm...maybe not. :err:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: Saikami on June 28, 2007, 09:04:53 PM
>_> -randomly bumps post- :D Heh, I, like my cousin, dislike the fic on the second page. ^^;; I should have a new chapter by...umm...>_>;; -checks busy schedule-...Tuesday night. :D Promise, if not, I give you all permission to kill me. XD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: rndmnwierd on June 29, 2007, 02:15:25 PM
*Gets out plastic utensils* Kill you say?  :twisted:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 17]
Post by: Tanachan on June 30, 2007, 06:50:16 PM
Don't expect a comment from me until Wednesday-Thursday-ish -_- I get no H!P for 4 days, and have to spend time with family I don't even know >.<
Title: Re: Comments for Chapter 17
Post by: Saikami on July 03, 2007, 11:41:25 PM
Ah, please forgive me for taking forever. XD;; Uh...Blame anime conventions, parents, and girlfriend...Not me. XD Anywho, onto comments.

Essy-san: Haha, woot for first dibs. XD Yes, Yossie and Mari can turn into dogs/wolves but they're much sneakier than Reinyan (not really. XD) But Koharu has a mind of her own...I have no clue how or why she gets those things, kinda scary though. XD And don't worry, plenty of evilness in store for Reinyan. >D (Reinyan: O_O;;; MORE!?!?!)

Yuu: Poor, poor Reinyan indeed. XD But we all love it. Maki and her obliviousness, but she sure loves the kitten! :D And nothing too drastic will happen to Reinyan while she's in Maki's cleavage...Erm...hands. :D There are many ways to make Reinyan transform back, but I'll be mean and make you read :P

Sukoshi: Yay, I'm glad you like Reinyan. ^^ She is cute, isn't she?

Tanachan: Don't worry, Reina will get her revenge on Koharu soon enough. :P

shindoushiz: Her day or tourture, eh? Trust me, there is more to come. >D Beause I'm just THAT evil. XD (and the lovely help from Essy-san and Yuu for inspiration...sadly most methods of torture have been placed on me >>) And Maki with her obliviousness. <3 Gotta love it.

rndmnwierd: It's Reinyan, what more is there to say? XD

JFC: Sorry you're not on it, I wouldn't mind being there myself either. ;D Yes, indeed Reinyan is cute (and smart! yay for pens!) XD Reinyan was surely put on a trip (to hell) with Koharu, but there's a worse one comming up. XD Walking afros...I want one. :D Anywho...Nope, Maki is sadly oblivious. (but we love it that way, right? XD)

HA! You guys can't kill me, I made my deadline. XD (barely) And to all those people who didn't comment ;  ;! I know you're there! Stop lurking damnit! XD (Okay...I think you're there. >_>;; )
Title: Re: Chapter Eightteen - Life Lesson Number One: Never Sleep on Fujimoto's Head
Post by: Saikami on July 03, 2007, 11:50:30 PM
Well…At least she was in safe hands. That much Reinyan was grateful for, and not to mention that she was practically snuggling into Maki’s cleavage as she walked down the halls. It even managed to convince the yankii that being a kitten wasn’t half bad, as long as she didn’t get a nosebleed or something of the sort.

Maki stopped in front of a door, not bothering to knock, and just entered. “Miki, you better not be sleeping.”

But, it’s Miki Fujimoto we’re talking about. Of course she was sleeping.

“Ugh…” Maki gave a sigh, “You keep watch on her.” she said, plopping Reinyan down on the bed, right on top of the lump in the covers, which happened to be snoring lightly. “I’ll get something to wake her up.” Maki gave a small grin, headed towards the kitchen.

Reinyan pondered for a moment, and gave a kitty like grin. She’d never hurt a kitten. With that in mind, she started to walk up towards the front of the bed, where Miki’s head poked out of the large comforter.

“Nyan~.” Reinyan said, swatting at the demon’s face a bit, careful not the scratch her (for now.)

No response.

This could be fun. Reinyan then decided to swat a little harder at the vampire, more or less playing with her ear. Hey…It was amusing, but there was barely a response, Miki only moved her head, but it was a rather sudden movement, causing Reinyan to topple over onto the sub-leader’s messy hair.

While she was getting up, she realize how tempting the hair was…She wanted to play with it as if it were a ball of yarn, she was a kitten after all. Pawing at it at first, Reinyan found great amusement out of it, and in the end found herself acting truly like a kitten, getting tangled up in Miki’s hair, who still managed to not wake up.

Soon she found herself bored (she had realized how stupid she felt for playing with someone‘s hair as if it were the best damn thing in the world), wondering when Maki was going to get back from the kitchen. Leaving the hair vampire’s hair a complete mess of tangles, Reinyan  climbed up on the covers, figuring she could take a quick nap or something to pass time, but why nap on a blanket when one could just be evil and nap on Miki’s face? It sounded like a grand idea to Reinyan, who happily curled up into a little ball on Miki’s head, her tail swishing from time to time.

Miki’s nose twitched, feeling something brush against it (of course something as simple as that would wake her up.) Opening an eye, she came face to face with fuzz.

“What the hell?” Miki mumbled, half asleep. She closed her eyes for a second, thinking that she could possibly still be dreaming, but when she opened them again, she found herself looking right into large green eyes.

Startled, Miki quickly sat up, only to cause her pain, for Reinyan made an attempt to keep a hold of Miki so she wouldn’t fly off, of course she did this by digging her nails into Miki’s forehead.

“Gahh damnit!!!” Miki took hold of the kitten and tossed it across the bed, then held onto her forehead in pain while Reinyan jumped down and hid under the bed.

“What’s wrong?” Maki asked, walking into the bedroom after hearing Miki’s screams.

“A monster attacked me!” she practically hissed, “It’s under the bed now!” With that said, Reinyan poked her head out of the bed, climbing up the covers and looking at Miki, if one looked close enough, they could say that the kitten was smirking slightly.

 “Yeah, some monster.” Maki laughed, sitting down on the bed and petting Reinyan. “This is my new kitten, saved her from Koharu-chan.”

Miki growled slightly, “It looked a lot bigger when it was on my face…What the hell are you doing here anyway?” the vampire mumbled, climbing out of bed, while heading to the bathroom to clean up the small scratches on her face.

“I was wondering if you knew were Reina is, I went to her apartment, but nobody answered.” Maki said, “You’re the sub-leader, you should know where she is.”

“No clue.” Miki shrugged, walking out of the bathroom and plopping down on the bed. “Why don’t you just put her in a cage or something. And why don’t you ask Yossie? She’s the leader.”

Reinyan, who was already in a distressed state, glared at Miki, debating whether she should attack again or not while Maki spoke. “She’s off doing something I don’t want to know with Rika.” The two of them gave a sigh. Figures.

“Those two go at it way too much.”

“Like you should be talking, you groping demon.”

“You’re the one dating someone underage.”

“Ugh, Miki just shut up.” She gave a sigh, standing up and ending the conversation. “Will you look over Reinyan for me while I go and look for Reina? And don’t you dare hurt her.”

“Uh…Yeah, whatever.” Miki waved a hand dismissively, “But for it, you better bring back food.”

“Fine.” Maki said, sighing at the stubborn girl. Miki always had to get something out of everything, didn’t she?

“Okay, I suppose we have a deal then.” Miki said, plopping down on the couch, ignoring the kitten. That was what she was going to do the entire time anyway.

“At least give her some attention…” Maki mumbled before exiting the apartment, looking for her girlfriend who just happened to be right in front of her moments ago.

Reinyan, figuring she might as well watch some television as well, jumped up onto the couch, sitting next to Miki.

“What the hell kinda name is Reinyan?” Miki asked, looking at the kitten, who only looked back at her.

“Hey…” Miki raised an eyebrow, picking up Reinyan by the ruff of her neck. “Oooh! Well all be damned, Maki really is dense.”

Reinyan gave a happy “Nyan~!” Finally! Someone figured it out! I love you Miki Fujimoto!

“Heh heh…This should be fun.” Miki gave her well known evil little smirk.

Oh shit…

“This will be our little secret, okay Reina…Or should I say Reinyan?”

Reinyan hissed, attempting to claw Miki’s face again.

“Oh, I wouldn’t do that if I were you.” Miki said, a smug look upon her face. “But I do think it’s time we had some fun.” She stood, still holding Reina, and brought her into the bathroom.

Not another bath!

Nope, not another bath. Worse.

Miki pulled out an electronic razor, to which Reinyan immediately squirmed, desperate to get out of Miki’s grasp. Miki managed adjusted the size of the razor size with one hand. Just as the demon plugged it in, Reinyan bit and scratched Miki, rather hard too, causing the vampire to drop the kitten, “Damnit!”

Of course, Reina took that moment to run like hell, but there wasn’t very many places she could run to, being stuck in an apartment room and all.

She figured the best spot would be under the bed, luckily it was a good choice, for Miki couldn’t find the “little shit” (as Miki liked to call her.)

Minutes passed, and there was no sign of Miki even looking for her anymore. Curious to what Miki was doing, Reinyan made the silly mistake of poking her head out from under the bed, looking around.

“Haha, sucker.” a voice said from above, Reinyan didn’t even bother to look up, she knew the big scary Fujimoto was there, and immediately tried to hide back in her safe spot under the bed next to Miki’s panties where she wouldn‘t be able to be reached, but Miki was far to quick for that, she quickly grabbed the kitten once again by the ruff of the neck, bringing her back into the bathroom.

“First, let’s cut those claws.” she pulled out a pair or nail clippers that were not meant for kittens, but she figured they’d work all the same.

Reinyan once again scratched and bit at Miki, but the sub-leader just started to ignore it, and held one of Reinyan’s fuzzy paws still while she cut the nails. It didn’t take long before all of Reinyan’s nails were clipped, and she could no longer claw at Miki and cause the same pain she did previously.

“Heh heh…Now time for the real fun.” Miki pulled out the electric razor again, keeping a death grip on Reinyan (who was once again struggling for dear life.)

Unfortunately for Reinyan, she did not manage to get loose, and ended up being shaved…Kinda.

“Ta da.” Miki grinned, holding Reinyan in front of the mirror to see her “beautiful” artwork she make on the kitten’s back.

“NYAN!?” Reinyan’s eyes felt as if they were going to pop out of her sockets. You can’t be serious!

Of all things to shave on a yankii kitten’s back…why a heart? Well, simply because Miki could.

“What, don’t like it?” Miki smirked, looking at Reinyan, who only hissed in reply. “Too bad for you, what’s done is done, but I’m not done yet. One more thing to top it off.”

Where does she come up with these ideas? Does she have a handbook on how to torture me or something?!

Miki then pulled out a big pink ribbon, tying it around Reinyan’s neck (almost to a choking point.) “Now, aren’t you cute?” she said with a short laugh. “A lot cuter than the human you at least.”

That got another hiss from the kitten. I’ll kill her!

Of course, killing Miki was only added to her list of things to do once she became human, but that was for later, her main priority was to get out of this apartment, and now…Before Miki actually killed her.

Fortunately, Reinyan noticed something out of the corner of her eye. Miki’s apartment door was slightly ajar…Why hadn’t she noticed this before she had her dignity crushed? Either way, Reinyan was out of Miki’s grasp for the moment, and she wasn’t going to waste it, she headed at full speed to the door.

Just as she was feet away from the door, something made her nose twitch, and the kitten sneeze with a loud POOF!

Reina stopped in her tracks, realizing she was no longer a kitten.

And also realizing she was stuck in an apartment with Miki Fujimoto…Without clothes on.


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HA! I decided to do little notes like Essy-san, but first off I must give credit to someone. XD

The whole "shaving a heart shape on your back" was ALL Essy-san, considering Yuu and her call me SaiPanda and then Essy randomly said "I think we should shave the panda...:D" and they tackled me and she shaved a heart on my back. O_O! Figured it'd be cuter on Reinyan. XD

Me: Hope you liked the chapter! ^^
Reinyan: I didn't...-_-;
Me: Why not? -angelic smile-
Reinyan: YOU SHAVED ME AND THEN POOFED ME BACK TO NORMAL NAKED IN MIKI'S BEDROOM! -hiss-
Me: Uh...well, like I said before, blame Essy-san for that one...and I am related to my cousin...I have to have poofing back naked in here SOMEWHERE. >_>
Reinyan: I thought I was your favorite. ;  ;
Me: You are, that's why I torture you. :D
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Estrea on July 04, 2007, 12:51:24 AM
Aha! Poor Reina! XDDDD

And you seem to adhere to the principle of torturing our favorites. <3333 Good SaiPanda, excellent work! (Reina hisses and tries to cuff me) XDDD

Haha, I'm glad our torture on you bore fruit in your work. XD Reina getting shaved...hehe. Hehehehe. And being naked in Miki's apartment...what will happen when Maki returns to see this? XDDDD Should be fun...

-mentally imaging a naked Reina with a pink bow around her neck- Mm. XD

Update soon~ XD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Kei-Br on July 04, 2007, 02:37:33 AM
ROFL!!!!!! :rofl:



Reina naked at Miki;s bedroom  :drool:


great chap xD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Amarghetta on July 04, 2007, 03:25:17 AM
Lol! And now the real fun starts... Poor Reina. :p
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: shindoushiz on July 04, 2007, 06:13:52 AM
They're all girls in that complex ;), just make your escape from Miki!!  Don't mind the nudity. I wonder if Reina can do anything with her cat form?
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: rndmnwierd on July 04, 2007, 11:22:43 AM
 :lol: :lol: A thousand times :lol:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Yuuyami on July 04, 2007, 02:34:54 PM
I roffled mucho XDDDD

Though mainly at the parts where Reina gets tortured by Miki XD

...Which is mainly the entire fic, but yeah XDDD

But now I'm just wondering what's going to happen now that Reina's naked with a bow on her neck in Miki's bedroom XD;; Miki going to ravage her on the spot? Nah, she's got Aya now, but what Aya doesn't know won't hurt :x... I kid, but it might look bad if Maki walks in in that very moment XD

So Reina transforms back by sneezing? Give her a cold and it's going to be hell for her XDDDD

Anticipating next chapter <3 Ohhhh Reina...
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Tanachan on July 05, 2007, 04:00:42 AM
Ah...I love (and at the same time hate) you so! Laughed pretty hard at this, with Maki's denseness and Miki just being Miki XDD. That's two on Reina's hit list, and I wonder who will be next? And if Reina's cute-as-hell-kitty form has effects on her human form, looks like she'll be wearing a hat for quite some time...Hope there is much more coming, since I love this fic and need more of it ^^ Good luck!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: JFC on July 05, 2007, 04:07:46 PM
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Well…At least she was in safe hands. That much Reinyan was grateful for, and not to mention that she was practically snuggling into Maki’s cleavage as she walked down the halls. It even managed to convince the yankii that being a kitten wasn’t half bad, as long as she didn’t get a nosebleed or something of the sort.
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYUM lucky cat!  :inlove:


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Maki stopped in front of a door, not bothering to knock, and just entered. “Miki, you better not be sleeping.”

But, it’s Miki Fujimoto we’re talking about. Of course she was sleeping.
Would it have been better if she had been doing something a little more...*ahem* "private"?  :twisted:


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“Ugh…” Maki gave a sigh, “You keep watch on her.” she said, plopping Reinyan down on the bed, right on top of the lump in the covers, which happened to be snoring lightly. “I’ll get something to wake her up.” Maki gave a small grin, headed towards the kitchen.
Co :love:ld water? Or wait...considering they're both vampires...garlic?

BTW, snoring Miki...KAWAII!!!   :love:


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Reinyan pondered for a moment, and gave a kitty like grin. She’d never hurt a kitten. With that in mind, she started to walk up towards the front of the bed, where Miki’s head poked out of the large comforter.

“Nyan~.” Reinyan said, swatting at the demon’s face a bit, careful not the scratch her (for now.)

No response.

This could be fun.
Reinyan then decided to swat a little harder at the vampire, more or less playing with her ear. Hey…It was amusing, but there was barely a response, Miki only moved her head, but it was a rather sudden movement, causing Reinyan to topple over onto the sub-leader’s messy hair.
But Miki's a dog person...oh well, Reina-kitty batting at Miki's ears is STILL hella cute!  :heart:


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Reinyan  climbed up on the covers, figuring she could take a quick nap or something to pass time, but why nap on a blanket when one could just be evil and nap on Miki’s face? It sounded like a grand idea to Reinyan, who happily curled up into a little ball on Miki’s head, her tail swishing from time to time.
BUWAAAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAHAHAHAHAAHAAAAHAHAAAAAAAAA!! SO EVIL AND STILL SO CUTE!!!
:wahaha:


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“What’s wrong?” Maki asked, walking into the bedroom after hearing Miki’s screams.

“A monster attacked me!” she practically hissed, “It’s under the bed now!” With that said, Reinyan poked her head out of the bed, climbing up the covers and looking at Miki, if one looked close enough, they could say that the kitten was smirking slightly.
  Score one for Reinyan. :glasses:


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“What the hell kinda name is Reinyan?” Miki asked, looking at the kitten, who only looked back at her.

“Hey…” Miki raised an eyebrow, picking up Reinyan by the ruff of her neck. “Oooh! Well all be damned, Maki really is dense.”

Reinyan gave a happy “Nyan~!” Finally! Someone figured it out! I love you Miki Fujimoto!
Miki-sama figured it out already? Either she's really observant or, as she has said, Maki's just dense.  It's probably a bit of both, with more emphasis on Maki's dense-ness. :lol:


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“Heh heh…This should be fun.” Miki gave her well known evil little smirk.

Oh shit…
Looks like payback time for scaring Miki awake. :P


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She stood, still holding Reina, and brought her into the bathroom.

Not another bath!

Nope, not another bath. Worse.

Miki pulled out an electronic razor, to which Reinyan immediately squirmed, desperate to get out of Miki’s grasp. Miki managed adjusted the size of the razor size with one hand. Just as the demon plugged it in, Reinyan bit and scratched Miki, rather hard too, causing the vampire to drop the kitten, “Damnit!”
I wonder if a shaved-bald Reinyan would revert into shaved-bald Reina?  :?


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Minutes passed, and there was no sign of Miki even looking for her anymore. Curious to what Miki was doing, Reinyan made the silly mistake of poking her head out from under the bed, looking around.

“Haha, sucker.” a voice said from above, Reinyan didn’t even bother to look up, she knew the big scary Fujimoto was there, and immediately tried to hide back in her safe spot under the bed next to Miki’s panties where she wouldn‘t be able to be reached, but Miki was far to quick for that, she quickly grabbed the kitten once again by the ruff of the neck, bringing her back into the bathroom.
(http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c340/J-F-C/doh.gif)


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Unfortunately for Reinyan, she did not manage to get loose, and ended up being shaved…Kinda.

“Ta da.” Miki grinned, holding Reinyan in front of the mirror to see her “beautiful” artwork she make on the kitten’s back.

“NYAN!?” Reinyan’s eyes felt as if they were going to pop out of her sockets. You can’t be serious!

Of all things to shave on a yankii kitten’s back…why a heart? Well, simply because Miki could.

“What, don’t like it?” Miki smirked, looking at Reinyan, who only hissed in reply. “Too bad for you, what’s done is done, but I’m not done yet. One more thing to top it off.”

Where does she come up with these ideas? Does she have a handbook on how to torture me or something?!


Miki then pulled out a big pink ribbon, tying it around Reinyan’s neck (almost to a choking point.) “Now, aren’t you cute?” she said with a short laugh. “A lot cuter than the human you at least.”

That got another hiss from the kitten. I’ll kill her!
:rofl:  So anti-yankii for Reina, so evil by Miki, yet the end result is SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!   :mon cute:


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Miki’s apartment door was slightly ajar…Why hadn’t she noticed this before she had her dignity crushed? Either way, Reinyan was out of Miki’s grasp for the moment, and she wasn’t going to waste it, she headed at full speed to the door.

Just as she was feet away from the door, something made her nose twitch, and the kitten sneeze with a loud POOF!

Reina stopped in her tracks, realizing she was no longer a kitten.
Ok, so something actually triggers her transformations? Or is it just her random sneezing that does it?


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And also realizing she was stuck in an apartment with Miki Fujimoto…Without clothes on.
Now...where's that duct tape?  :hiakhiakhiak:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: orangesocks on July 30, 2007, 06:04:17 AM
Took me a while to catch up, but I'm glad I did!

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“What the hell?” Miki mumbled, half asleep. She closed her eyes for a second, thinking that she could possibly still be dreaming, but when she opened them again, she found herself looking right into large green eyes.

Startled, Miki quickly sat up, only to cause her pain, for Reinyan made an attempt to keep a hold of Miki so she wouldn’t fly off, of course she did this by digging her nails into Miki’s forehead.

“Gahh damnit!!!” Miki took hold of the kitten and tossed it across the bed, then held onto her forehead in pain while Reinyan jumped down and hid under the bed.
:lol: This was funny to imagine.

The bit with Reinyan playing with Miki's hair and then being too cool for it was great too.
Ah, Reina naked with Miki? I think her streaking would be forgiven by the other H!P members. ^^
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Post by: -HB- on August 19, 2007, 04:49:46 PM
Oh god! I don't read for some time and suddenly Reina is naked with Miki!
How better can this become? xD
Also, nice puppy-girl you got in there! My goddess is just perfec for this role!
Again, great fic Saikami! when is the next chapter coming up? ^_^

[Hum.... I wonder what happens when Yossie get really angry..... somehow... this is..... hot O.o ]
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Saikami on August 19, 2007, 05:59:28 PM
Heh, I was shocked to find that I have a comment. XD;; Uh...I haven't posted a chapter for a while because I've been busy -cough-morelikeslacking-cough- I'll be sure to kick myself in the butt to get back to writing soon. ^^;;
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Sancho on August 19, 2007, 10:26:34 PM
I was playing with our kittens when I remembered that I didn't post anything since I finished reading your work 2 weeks ago. my bad :P   

It was really fun reading this one. but my favorite part is Reina turning into a kitten. I feel guilty for not naming our kitten after her.  XD. That part of her being with Miki was so cute. I think it's because seeing Miki in a situation being playful and sweet with kittens, despite of her nature as a vampire was so cute.  :D :D  Please continue on this one. I'm really looking forward on it.  :D
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Post by: g4rfield on August 23, 2007, 05:45:30 PM
Reina~nyan  XD Cho kawaii!!! I love the predicament Reina put herself into. Naked...in Miki's 'the groper' room? You must be kidding me! Reina will not get out of that room an innocent anymore. I feel almost sad for her, but I'm sure the experience will benefited her more for later action with Maki.  :lol:

Dum dum dum.....I wonder what Miki-sama has in her perverted vampire mind.  :w00t:

EDIT: Whoops, should clarify that, I mean Reina could learn a few things from Miki to improve her and Maki's bedroom activity should they need an improvement of course.  Neway, just shoot me if I said it wrong too this time. My brain apparently stopped working today.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Yuuyami on August 23, 2007, 05:54:56 PM
Naw, Maki already stole her 'innocence' a few chapters ago xD.

Unless the 9 lives rule is in effect and Reina has eight more innocences? Hmm xD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: YoukaiChica on August 24, 2007, 02:20:38 AM
Since this has been bumped I'll throw out a comment from what I remember: I loved it. I loved it with all my twisted little heart. It cracks me up how Reina tortures Miki and then Miki realizes its Reina. That's when the fun begins!! I love the last sentence about Reina not having clothes. That made me laugh so hard. Now that all that's been said WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTER?!?! This was easily one of my favorite fics and now I'm left high and dry. I feel so unloved...
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Saikami on August 27, 2007, 03:09:39 AM
I'm sorry. :cry: :cry: :cry:

I PROMISE I'll put up a new chapter soon, really. I'll make sure Yuu get's on my ass about it, heh. I'll try to have one up by Wensday.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: chibilolli on September 01, 2007, 03:03:21 PM
^ Wednesday hey??? Come on hurry up, I want to leave a comment but I'm not going to yet as I said I would on the next chapter (I'm not giving in to you again :lol:)

EDIT: ^ Just realised that sounds kinda dodgy. Oh well *shrugs*
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: ringo-hime on May 01, 2008, 04:46:50 PM
nice story here.
ganbatte!
<3
reina is a cat..lol.

hmmm.
i wonder what would happen to reina..hahha.
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: lonewind on May 02, 2008, 04:43:01 AM
 :wub: love this story please update soon!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: heyyouhiya on May 02, 2008, 06:21:05 AM
This fanfiction is truly brilliant! I love it
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: writerjunkie on August 19, 2008, 06:46:14 PM
This fic is great! It's just so funny it has me cracking up all the time and the end of that chapter lol so funny! I really hope you update soon I want to see what happens next! lol
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: slasha on August 19, 2008, 11:07:56 PM
Oh for a second there I thought there was an update  XD
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Chapter 18 is finally up! XD]
Post by: Saikami on August 22, 2008, 11:03:04 PM
Alright, I must say something here. :sweatdrop: I dunno if I'm ever gunna update FoF, but I'm actually starting to debate if I wanna rewrite it, which would end to an update...in a very long time XD if I rewrite it, it'd have the same general idea, but a lot of things would change.

We'll just have to see. :)
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Note!!! (not an update ^^;; )]
Post by: strawb3rrykream on August 22, 2008, 11:50:55 PM
^
Awww, maybe no updates? :( But that's ok. I don't want to read it if you don't want to write it. Does that mean we could be expecting something new then? I hope so!
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Note!!! (not an update ^^;; )]
Post by: Saikami on August 23, 2008, 05:15:24 AM
Well, I kinda wanna re-write it, so that might happen. XD But I do have some small plan up my sleeve :yep:
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Post by: Kitami on March 16, 2010, 02:13:20 AM
It was so funny. I was laughing so much that I got weird looks.

Sai, may I have a Yossie puppy? And a reinyan, and a horny Eri?  :inlove:

I think my favorite part would have to be the chapter where Reina is trying to figure out who the werewolf is. Especially picturing Reina all tied up like a dog due to Miki's misunderstanding. I also can easily picture me getting stuck into Reina's position... :sweatdrop:

I think you are a really good writer. The first chapter was kinda eh, but as you went on it got better and better  :D  The beginning seemed a bit all over the place, I guess you could say, but I think once you got deeper into the story you were able to organize your thoughts better.
I wish you would write more. I hate that you left it at such a cliff hanger moment!

Well, I suck at comments...and this I think it the longest one I have done XD but here you go Sai~  :heart:
I think you should write more, even if it isn't more of this.  :byebye:
Title: Re: Facts of Fiction [Note!!! (not an update ^^;; )]
Post by: Fushigidane on November 23, 2010, 08:46:52 PM
small plan up your sleeve