Author Topic: R I V E R (MaYuki) + Extra chapters (06/07/2013) - FANFIC DELETED (Read 117768 times)

blughise · « **Reply #20 on:** September 12, 2011, 01:38:29 PM »

Yuko really loves to swear huh

Some really nice Atsumina momemt

Damn that Eguchi bitch! I'll hunt her down and slowly torture her to death
Takamina fight-o! Everyone will follow and support you!!! Ganbarre!!!!

kahem · « **Reply #21 on:** September 12, 2011, 05:46:13 PM »

Ahahahahah Yuko curses a lot and Takamina mumbling

Lol Mayuyu on conter strike mode "fire in the hole"

dark-atrox · « **Reply #22 on:** September 13, 2011, 06:44:41 AM »

so far...all i can say is

this is epic

guns plus akb48 chicks were totally

and there's massive pairings too

PS: i hope someone would write a story base
on Flying Get PV

Though i don't like if Yuuchan is the villain

haruhi16 · « **Reply #23 on:** September 13, 2011, 07:03:44 AM »

Hahaha Yuko always swearing and saying bad words every chapters

.. hahaha update soon

immortal_K · « **Reply #24 on:** September 13, 2011, 07:27:47 AM »

This is so good! Please update soon!

I hate that Eguchi >.< hope she accidentally trip and hit her head then die!!!!

Sasshi is so funny over the phone.

Good luck to the 16 members they will kick ass and survive because they have Major Takamina!!!!

GO TEAM!!!!!

MESS · « **Reply #25 on:** September 13, 2011, 08:42:40 PM »

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Miho snickered, “Those two should just find a private cave and go finish their little ‘argument’ together in the dark.”

KAMI-SAMA...KAMI-SAMA...

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“No, no, I’m sure Takamina’s butt is bigger than Miichan’s.”

“No, no, I’m sure that Miichan’s butt is bigger than Takamina’s.”

“No way! Just look at her!” Mayu pointed towards the captain busy stomping ahead of them.

“It only looks that big ‘cause her pants are loose!”

“Hm… you kind of have a point… why are hers so much looser than the rest of ours?”

“Maybe…” An evil grin slowly spread over Yuko’s face. “Maybe she needs looser pants to hide her… manliness, ya know what I mean?” She nudged her sister and winked.

Mayu’s eyes slowly widened before she burst into laughter, “Oh yeah! Takamina probably needs looser pants ‘cause those guns are totally loaded.”

OSHIRI SISTERS...TALKING ABOUT OSHIRIS AND TAKAMINA'S THIRD LEG...

UP-DA-TE SOON

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #26 on:** September 14, 2011, 04:32:27 AM »

Stupid Sexy Acchan and the Stupid Damn Rain

SSA Log #1 – Entered 9/13/11 by Divine Vengeance

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A/N: Yes, that Beginner costume.

Sorry if that was terribly cliche llOTL

As you can see, this is the first entry in a series of shorts that I will be writing to give some background to our favorite major and ace duo. Entries will span across time randomly, so please look forward to seeing more Takahashi Fails!

Thank you to all the wonderful readers. I strongly appreciate your supportive comments ; v ;

Anon out~

immortal_K · « **Reply #27 on:** September 14, 2011, 05:26:21 AM »

A very nicely written short

I can only imagine what runs thru Takamina's mind when her lovely Ace get drenched by rain water wearing "that" set of Beginner uniform.

I hope the bleeding stops or Takamina might start needing some blood transfusion haha

Thank you, Please update soon

Nyanoha · « **Reply #28 on:** September 14, 2011, 06:07:24 AM »

OAMSEKJFHQB ATSUMINA

You are so awesome ZuZu, I cannot wait for mooore ;_____;////

Don't keep us waiting <3

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #29 on:** September 14, 2011, 06:34:56 AM »

lol Now I want to know why Acchan blushed :U

Oh Takamina, it's okay to have "those" kinds of thoughts~

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #30 on:** September 14, 2011, 06:37:58 AM »

Quote from: Kid_Alpha on September 14, 2011, 06:34:56 AM

lol Now I want to know why Acchan blushed :U

@Kid_Alpha: Takamina IS wearing the same thing and IS under the rain too, you know... 8D

Also, thank you for reading ; v ;

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #31 on:** September 14, 2011, 06:45:32 AM »

^Well that's no fun, why'd you have to go and tell me? The mystery of it all was so much more *~interesting~* That was a lie but it's late and I'm trying to be funny. /shrugs

Can't blame Acchan though, wet Takamina in the River PV was hot I mean what?...

cough Please continue writing?

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #32 on:** September 14, 2011, 06:52:30 AM »

^ I'm sorry llOTL

And yes, Takamina was quite the eye candy in that PV xDD

I will update in a few days, no worries :3

haruhi16 · « **Reply #33 on:** September 14, 2011, 08:12:08 AM »

lol takamina

please update soon

kahem · « **Reply #34 on:** September 14, 2011, 08:27:59 AM »

Lol nice rain

Vanui · « **Reply #35 on:** September 14, 2011, 09:46:12 AM »

Oh ho. Those Beginner uniforms... *thinks of Jurina :Q_______________ and Mayuyu :Q__________________________"

That was... really funny LOL Takamina forever fail~

Keep up da comedy and action, Nishi~

aruka · « **Reply #36 on:** September 14, 2011, 12:57:31 PM »

AtsuMina... Beginner uniforms... rain... wet... what the damn hell am I thinking??

The imagination starts running wild inside!

Dangerous!!

Any possibilities you'll write backgrounds of other pairings too? Cause I'm also looking forward to it... (hoping)

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #37 on:** September 14, 2011, 01:00:45 PM »

Quote from: aruka on September 14, 2011, 12:57:31 PM

Any possibilities you'll write backgrounds of other pairings too? Cause I'm also looking forward to it...

@aruka: No guarantees of anything, but I'll see~ To be honest, I'm not that familiar with quite a few pairings >_> Any couples you're looking for in particular? xD
If I do write something extra, it won't be in the SSA section since that's Takamina-reserved 8D

aruka · « **Reply #38 on:** September 14, 2011, 01:42:17 PM »

Quote from: Divine Vengeance on September 14, 2011, 01:00:45 PM

@aruka: No guarantees of anything, but I'll see~ To be honest, I'm not that familiar with quite a few pairings >_> Any couples you're looking for in particular? xD

Well, basically all pairings you've mentioned since the story rolled.

But just write if you feel like it, I won't forcefully push you.

Quote from: Divine Vengeance on September 14, 2011, 01:00:45 PM

If I do write something extra, it won't be in the SSA section since that's Takamina-reserved 8D

Ah, yes. Since SSA = Stupid Sexy Acchan, of course it would be Takamina's. I really understand..

blughise · « **Reply #39 on:** September 14, 2011, 03:07:11 PM »

yes, damn sexy Acchan....My imagination is running wild!!! Damn that Beginner costume! Acchan already look sexy with just that and now you add the rain to increase Acchan uber sexy figure! No wonder Takamina got the nosebleed