Author Topic: R I V E R (MaYuki) + Extra chapters (06/07/2013) - FANFIC DELETED (Read 116544 times)

Vanui · « **Reply #240 on:** November 20, 2011, 05:55:31 PM »

Why you troll so hard, sensei?

That was so hilarious... and I immediately knew that Yuko was going to fall for it LOL
After all, we perverts act much the same sometimes

...and I also have hit a pole before. Goddamn that thing hurts. I'M SUCH A FAIL LIKE TAKAMINA, AREN'T I? OTL

haruhi16 · « **Reply #241 on:** November 21, 2011, 11:07:43 AM »

Oh yeah troll like a boss~

Awww Takamina is so loyal to her Sexy Acchan

she really cared and love her so much Aww

while Yuko in the other hand tsk tsk

Nyan nyan , there's nothing you can do when your beloved squirrel is a pervert, that cute squirrel will be forever a pervert

Hahaha

well, i hope she'll make it up to her Nyan nyan next time around..

Thank you for this, you made my day again you troll ~ Please troll us again- I mean update soon~

Nyanoha · « **Reply #242 on:** November 21, 2011, 06:19:54 PM »

You are such a troll! LOLOL Migawd

First you made my oshi hit a poll (LOLOLOL), then you made Yuko turn around, and then you made it so Tomomi was actually behind her~~

EPIC

When I saw the title, just saying, I thought of it differently and I was like .o. *reads* *reads* *reads* and then, BAM.

Rofl made my day xDD

Anyways, update when you can~~

kahem · « **Reply #243 on:** November 21, 2011, 06:36:13 PM »

It made me grin, I don't know why but it just made me grin lol

Haruko · « **Reply #244 on:** November 22, 2011, 05:09:23 AM »

great job.. jaja takamina you are a perv..

jajaj yuko you are.. jaja we know it.. but love kojiyuu couple

Megumi · « **Reply #245 on:** November 22, 2011, 02:50:32 PM »

Bwahaahaha!
That was hilarious!

"Stupid sexy Accchan" is always making me laugh...

Yagami.Rai · « **Reply #246 on:** November 24, 2011, 06:35:59 AM »

Haha..

The stupid sexy Acchan

Really like this

Thanks for the Update

immortal_K · « **Reply #247 on:** November 24, 2011, 07:24:50 AM »

LOL just got back home and reconnected to my world (internet) was lost without it for a week

I had a very very good laugh while reading this SSA! I can imagine Takamina running after Acchan
when the camera just goes into slow motion while the wind blows Acchan's skirt up just a little so
that Takamina is too focus to see the pole slowing coming in in front keke

And Yuko forever the perv to fall for the friend with bigger assets that she have to turn around to
check for HAHAHA Must be Miichan that came up with all of this to begin with.

At least Acchan wasn't telling a lie and Tomochin was technically standing behind them but they just
forgot why she was there and decided to go for their own little Atsumina jog. Since getting Acchan to
move in is definitely more important for Takamina

I just can't get enough of your SSA's, THANK YOU!!!!!

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #248 on:** November 30, 2011, 02:20:25 AM »

R I V E R

Extra III – [KojiYuu/MaYuki]
(Posted 12/1/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: This update is earlier than I said it would be ‘cause I will be busy in the coming days >_> No, I did not mistake the date = 3=

Anyways, this takes place during SSA Log #6 (This Stupid Air Duct). I’m pretty sure you can guess what this is about by now ;D

Also, no, I have not forgotten about Extra II. I shall continue that when I can OTL

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A/N: For the record, the banging sounds were created by Sae waaaaaay over in another air duct. Yes, she’s that loud.

Thank you guys as always for your constant support. Your comments are much appreciated m(_ _)m I hope you enjoyed this ; v ; b

haruhi16 · « **Reply #249 on:** November 30, 2011, 05:16:08 AM »

OMG this is so hilarious!

Haruna and Yuki are stuck because of their big boobies

and at the Oshiri sisters non-stop laughs at the girls

I can totally imagine it! It's so funny as hell!

Kid_Alpha · « **Reply #250 on:** November 30, 2011, 05:30:49 AM »

Oh so that's how they got stuck. Yeah, I would pay to see that.

Sae is that loud huh? No wonder Sayaka is always on her case. lol

Haruko · « **Reply #251 on:** November 30, 2011, 05:36:41 AM »

jajaja for they bigboobs

Megumi · « **Reply #252 on:** November 30, 2011, 10:52:04 AM »

Bwahahahaha!
When I read "the stupid sexy Acchan" log I couldn't help but wondering how
Yuki& Haruna got stuck....but it's because of their boobies?! OMG LoL

Thank you for your update

immortal_K · « **Reply #253 on:** November 30, 2011, 11:44:59 AM »

YES!
Divine Kira,

You did end up writing about the other team after that SSA log and it is AWESOME! ROFL
I still remember laughing so much after reading that Yuki and Haruna getting stuck in the vents and trying
to picture it.

Standard protocol for switching positions

face up and slide under keke.
and Yuko always crack me up, for once she got the situation perfectly correct even the measurements.
I think Sae really need to learn to keep it down, full win for team K's trio.

Thanks for the update and make sure you get lots of rest don't want you do overwork yourself and getting
sick with you upcoming busy schedules.

~immortal kira

kahem · « **Reply #254 on:** November 30, 2011, 10:59:59 PM »

Hahahah I'm imagining the scene and hahaha I'm grinning wide and almost laughing hahaha I'm trying to control myself because I'm on the metro hahaha!!!
And seriously that quote '80 centimeters plus 75 centimeters for the win!' Was the final, it killed me hahahah

Vanui · « **Reply #255 on:** December 01, 2011, 01:01:33 AM »

Your story just made me feel better ; w ; b

Seigus · « **Reply #256 on:** December 01, 2011, 12:58:51 PM »

Thanks for writing this to complete the air duct incident! Trust the Oshiri Sisters to laugh madly in this situation and not get jealous of their partners engaging in skinship with someone aside from them

But erm... so how did Yukirin and Haruna free themselves? XDD

Divine Vengeance · « **Reply #257 on:** December 02, 2011, 12:26:21 AM »

Thanks to everyone who has read and commented! I'm glad you guys enjoyed this xD

@seigus: ~~THEY DIDN'T~~ The mechanic crew in charge of that stealth course had to take apart the vent to free them >xD And to get the Oshiri Sisters out of the bottom of the vent too LOL

Seigus · « **Reply #258 on:** December 02, 2011, 11:09:18 AM »

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@seigus: THEY DIDN'T The mechanic crew in charge of that stealth course had to take apart the vent to free them >xD And to get the Oshiri Sisters out of the bottom of the vent too LOL

HAHAHAHAHA! That image just killed me! I expect the mechanic crew to be laughing their heads off when they see the ridiculous scene XDD

Nyanoha · « **Reply #259 on:** December 03, 2011, 08:11:35 AM »

LIKE LIKE LIKE *Pushes thank you button to the point of dying*

8D

Stay gold homie, stay freeeesh.