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Story Index

[OS] Forever and Ever

[Short Story] I Love You
I Love You (Part 1)
I Love You (Part 2)
I Love You (Part 3)
I Love You (Part 4)
I Love You (Part 5)
I Love You (Part 6 - Final)

[OS] Promise

[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 1)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 2)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 3)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 4)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 5)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 6)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 7)
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 8 )
My Lovely Ojou-sama (Part 9 - Final)

[OS] Perfect Valentine

[OS] Our Love Story

[Short Story] Power of Love
Power of Love (Part 1)
Power of Love (Part 2)
Power of Love (Part 3)
Power of Love (Part 4)
Power of Love (Part 5)
Power of Love (Part 6)
Power of Love (Part 7)
Power of Love (Part 8 )
Power of Love (Part 9)
Power of Love (Part 10)
Power of Love (Part 11)
Power of Love (Part 12)
Power of Love (Part 13)
Power of Love (Part 14)
Power of Love (Part 15 - final)


[Short Story] Escape
Escape (Part 1)
Escape (Part 2)
Escape (Part 3)
Escape (Part 4)
Escape (Part 5)
Escape (Part 6)
Escape (Part 7)
Escape (Part 8 )
Escape (Part 9)
Escape (Part 10)
Escape (Part 11)
Escape (Part 12)
Escape (Part 13)
Escape (Part 14)
Escape (Part 15)
Escape (Part 16)
Escape (Part 17)
Escape (Part 18)
Escape (Part 19)
Escape (Part 20 - Final)

[Short Story] My Feeling for You
My Feeling for You (Part 1)
My Feeling for You (Part 2)
My Feeling for You (Part 3)
My Feeling for You (Part 4)
My Feeling for You (Part 5)
My Feeling for You (Part 6)
My Feeling for You (Part 7)
My Feeling for You (Part 8 )
My Feeling for You (Part 9)
My Feeling for You (Part 10)
My Feeling for You (Part 11)
My Feeling for You (Part 12)
My Feeling for You (Part 13)
My Feeling for You (Part 14)
My Feeling for You (Part 15)
My Feeling for You (Part 16)
My Feeling for You (Part 17)
My Feeling for You (Part 18 - Final)


[OS] Miracle of Christmas


Hello everyone!  :)

This is an OS. I have some free time in fall break, so I wrote this. This is just something comes to my head. Hope you guys like this  :D

Forever and Ever

Minami’s POV


Today is a special day to me. In the next one month, I will stay together with the girl who I secretly in love. She is my childhood friend. Our parents are best friends with each other since like forever. Our house is next to each other. We are together since we were born. We go to school together since kindergarten. She is a very cute and nice girl. I love her from a long time ago. However, I still haven’t confessed my feeling to her yet. I don’t know how, and I’m scared that I can’t be with her anymore.

Right now, I’m waiting for her at the door. we will go to school together.

“Minami” She opens the door and greets me

“Hi Atsuko” I greet and smile at her

She smiles back at me with a bright smile. I can see crinkle on her nose. I love her smile a lot. I wish that she only shows that smile to me not anyone else.

“Minami, what are you thinking? Why are you spacing out like that?” She tilts her head and asks me

“Ah, nothing, nothing at all. Let go to school, Atsuko” I smile and said to her

“Ok” She smiles at me

Then she takes my hand and pulls me to run with her

“Let’s go Minami” She turns around and said to me

Looking at her adorable face, I really want to pull her into my arms and hug her tightly. That smile, that beautiful eyes, and those hands, I want them to be mine only. Those thought makes me want to hold her hand tightly, and I did. Feeling my grip, she stops and turns around. She looks at me with a confused face.

“What happened, Minami?” Atsuko asks me

“No, Nothing. I just want to hold your hand tightly” I smiles at her and said

Suddenly she looks down and quickly turns away.

“Did I say something wrong?” I thought in confuse

Feeling that she is trying to evade my eyes, I ask her in worry tone

“Atsuko, did I say something wrong? What’s wrong?”

“N…No…nothing at all, Minami. We should get going now. The school bell is about to ring” She said and continues holding my hand

We run to school on the street which is filled with a lot of beautiful falling cherry blossom. I feel that she holds my hand tighter.

After a while, we reach the school yard. After putting our stuffs in the locker, we go to our classroom together.

“Look everyone, our class ‘Perfect Couple’ is here” Yuu said and the whole class laughs

“Yuu” I half shout in embarrassment

The truth is I’m very happy when hearing he said that. However, I don’t know what Atsuko is thinking. I turn my head slightly to take a look at her. She just bends down her head and goes to her deck. I can see a slightly pink on her beautiful face

“Is she blushing” I thought 

“Nah, maybe that is my imagination” I thought and go back to my seat

Fortunately, our seat is next to each other. Therefore, I can be near her. I turn to look at her. Suddenly our eyes meet. I smile at her, but she suddenly turns away.

“Huh?” I look at her with confused look

After three class periods, it is time for lunch. I rush to the school cafeteria to buy for me some breads and coke. When I come back, I don’t see Atsuko anywhere. Usually she and I will eat lunch together in class. I come to Yuu’s deck and ask

“Hey Yuu, do you know where Atsuko is?”

“Missing your cute girlfriend already?” he said in teasing tone and laughs

“Yuu, stop joking around. She is not my girlfriend” I raise my voice

Suddenly the class is filled with silent. I look up and see Atsuko is standing in front of me. She looks at me with very sad eyes.

“Atsuko” I call her

“Hi Minami” She smiles and greets me

However, somehow in that smile, I can feel a lot of sadness. We silently look at each other.

“Acchan, Takamina is looking for you” Yuu speaks up breaking the heavy atmosphere around us

“Ah...I just go to buy something to drink. This morning, I forgot to bring mine” she answers

Then she goes back to her seat.

After that, we didn’t talk to each other even a word. I just sit on my seat and secretly look at her. Her expression doesn’t change. Those sad eyes are still there. I wonder what make her look like that.

In the evening, as always we go home together. However, today is a little bit different. Atsuko just stays silent. Usually, she will tell me a lot of different things, what she saw on TV, what movie that she likes, and a lot of different stuffs.

When we reach home, our parents are about to go on their vacation. They got a one month vacation together. However, because we have school, we can’t go with them.

“Atsu, Takamina, you two come back in time. We are about to go to the airport.” Atsuko’s father said

“Papa, Mama, you two are about to go?” Atsuko asks

“Yes, honey. Remember to be good. Don’t disturb Takamina, ok” her mom said to her

“Mama, I’m not a kid. You don’t have to say thing like that.” Atsuko said and pouts

“Plus, I won’t bother him, anyway” She mumbles

Her parent looks at her and smile

“Akiko, don’t worry. Our Minami doesn’t mind being disturbed by Acchan, right Minami?” My father said

“Moreover, I think he enjoys that” My mom adds, and they all laughs

I don’t know what to say. I just look at my feet to hide my embarrassment.

“Takamina, please take care of Atsuko for us, ok” Her mother said

“Yes, I will” I answer

“Honey, you don’t have to say that. Takamina will take good care of our Atsuko anyway, right our future son in law” Her father said and laughs

“Yes, that is so true, Atsushi” my father comments

I can feel my face getting hotter and hotter every second. I can feel that smoke will come out from my ears and head. I look at Atsuko, her eyes still have that sadness. I don’t know why she is sad, but looking at her like that, my heart feels very hurt.

“It is about time, I think we should go now.” my father said

“Uh, the taxi is already waiting for us” her father said

“Bye Atsu, Takamina. Takamina, please take care of Atsu for us” her mother said from inside the taxi

“Yes,” I answer her.

Then the taxis take them to the airport. I turn to the right to look at her. She still stays silent and looking at the taxi.

“Don’t worry Atsuko. You still have me here with you.” I smile and comfort her

“Uh, thank you, Minami” She finally smiles at me

However, that is not her usual smile. I miss that smile already

“Atsuko, can you go back to your house first and wait for me a little. I will go home to take some of my things. Also, my mother cooked something for us. I will bring them over, and we will eat together, ok?” I said to her

“Uh” She nods

I quickly rushes to my house to take my things. I take some necessary things to stay over at her house. I don’t need to take too much stuffs because our house is near each other anyway. After a while I finished preparing my things. I rush to the kitchen to take the food and quickly rush to her house.

I open the door and come in. I come in at the same time with Atsuko stepping down from the stair. She just finished her bath. Her hair is still wet. The smell of her shampoo is very nice. She wears a big white shirt and a short. Looking at her like this, she is so attractive. I stun there and keep looking at her.

“Minami?” she calls me with confused tone

I snap out of my dream.

“Ah...uhm… here, my mother made some of your favorite sushi” I said

Then we go to the kitchen and eat together

After finishing eating, we go to the living room and study together. Outside, rain is very heavy. Inside my head, there is still one thing that I can get over it. That is her sad eyes. I don’t know what made you look sad like that. However, I don’t know how to ask her about that. Suddenly, a lightning flashes making the street light up. After that is a big sound of thunder appear.

While I’m still looking at the window, a nice scent suddenly come to my nose. When I realize what happened, I see Atsuko is hugging me tightly.

"Atsuko" I call her in surprised

"S...so...sorry Minami" Atsuko immediately sits up, parting her arms from me and said

Suddenly another big thunder appears. She shrinks herself and closes her eyes.That is right. She is scared of thunder since she was a kid. I pull her into my arms and pat her back.

"Minami" Atsuko calls in surprise.

"It is ok, Atsuko, I'm here. There is nothing to be scared of." I gently said.

She hug me tighter. After a while, I call her

“Atsuko”

“Huh?” Atsuko is still burying her face on my chest and asks

“This morning and just now, I saw that you look so sad. What happened to you? What made you sad? Just tell me I will do everything to help you” I said to her

“...” She stays silent

“It’s ok, if you don’t want to talk about that. I won’t force you. However, remember this, I will always be by your side no matter what. Next to you will always have me. I will be there to protect and support you whenever you need.” I said while stroking her back

I can feel that she tightens her hug. Then she breaks the hug and sits up. Her eyes are red. I can still see some tear in the corner of her beautiful eyes. I raise my hand and gently wipe her tear

“What made you cry, Atsuko?” I gently ask

“I’m fine Minami don’t worry.” She said and smiles to me

Then there is a silent fill between us

“Minami” Atsuko breaks the silent

“What is it, Atsuko?” I ask her

“The truth is there is a person who I’m in love” Atsuko said with shyly eyes

I can feel my heart is bleeding when hearing those words from her. I really want to cry right now.

“Am I lost my Atsuko now?” I ask myself

“I don’t know if he loves me or just sees me as a friend. That makes me very confused. I want to know his feeling. However, at the same time, I’m scared to know his true feeling” Atsuko said to me

"I'm afraid that he will reject me? That he won't care for me anymore" she continues

Her eyes are filled with tear again. Seeing that my heart feels very tight

“Anyone dares to hurt my Atsuko’s feeling, I will take him down” I thought

“Don’t be sad Atsuko. My heart is in pain when seeing you like this” I wipe her tear and said

“Thank you Minami.” She said to me

“Minami” She calls me again

I look at her

“Should I confess my feeling to him?” She asks me

Although that is a simple question, it has power to kill my heart

“Hurt, hurt, very hurt.” I thought

Her words like a thousand blade pierce into my heart. I don’t want. I don’t want that to happen. I hold her hands tight and pull her to my embrace. I hug her tightly

“Minami” Atsuko calls my name in surprise.

“No, No, I don’t want that” I said firmly

“I don’t want you confess your feeling to anyone else. I want you to be mine and only mine.” I continues

I take a deep breath and said out loud

“I love you, Atsuko.”

“I love you for a very long time. Maybe since we just were born. I’m an idiot that I didn’t confess to you sooner. I’m regret about that, now. I’m too coward. I’m afraid of losing you. However, I’m about to lose you now” I said

“But now I know one thing that I can’t lose you, Atsuko. I love you.” I tighten my hug and said

Atsuko breaks the hug and look directly at my eyes

“I decided. I will confess” She looks at me and happily said

My tear unconsciously rolls down. I really lost my Atsuko, now. I’m really about to lose her forever. I close my eyes and feel the sadness and hopelessness are slowly invading my heart, my soul, and my whole body. I feel like I lost all my life-force. Suddenly a pair of soft hands wipes my tear, and something incredible soft touches my lips. I open my eyes and see that Atsuko is kissing me.

“Atsuko” I thought

The sweetness on her lips makes me lose all my consciousness. I just want to taste her lips more. This is what I’m longing for a long time. I round my arms around her waist and pull her closer to me while hurriedly replies her kiss. I kiss her passionately and wildly. We kiss until we out of air. Then I move my kisses to her neck. I lick it and suck it

"Minami" Atsuko calls me waking me up to my senses

I move back and look at her

“I'm sorry, Atsuko. I can't control myself whenever I'm with you” I said to her while my hand touching her red lips

She smiles at me and holds my hands. I thought she accepted my confession. However,

“The person who I secretly in love, I will confess my love to him, right here.” She said and smiles

“What does she mean? That man will come here? What about that kiss? Is that a goodbye kiss?” I thought in confuse

There is a lot of thought appears in my head. I’m really at lost now. I look at her with a confused look

“You still want to confess to him?” I ask her

“Uh” she smiles and nods

“He will come here?” I ask her

“No, he is already here” She said

Her face stills show that lovely and beautiful smile. I hate it when she talks about him and smiles that smile. I don’t want anyone to see that smile except me.

“He is here? Is he outside? But outside rain is very heavy.” I thought

I look directly at her eyes

“Listen to me Atsuko. Maeda Atsuko, I love you. I won’t give you to anyone else. I will make you fall in love with me for sure. I’m definitely do that” I strongly tell her

“You don’t have to do that” She said to me still smiling like that

“Atsuko, can’t you give me a chance?” I sadly thought

“Don’t you have any feeling for me, Atsuko? Can’t you give me a chance?” I ask her

She shakes her head

“Do you want to know the person who I’m in love? I will say that right now” She said and smiles

“I, Maeda Atsuko, the person who I really love is….”

I just sit still and look at her with a hopeless eyes

“....you, Takahashi Minami. I love you from a long time ago, Minami.” Atsuko smiles and said to me

I stun with her words

“Did she just confess to me? Does she love me? Is the person who she secretly in love is me?” I thought

I can’t believe in my ears. I happily look at her

“The person you love is me?” I ask her in happy tone

“Uh, my baka Minami. I said like that and you still don’t understand” Atsuko said and smiles softly

“I’m really a baka” I smile at her and hug her tightly

“I’m happy Atsuko, really happy. I love you. I love you more than anything” I said to her and buries my face on her neck

“Me too, Minami. I love you. I love you very much, Minami.” She said and buries her face on my chest

“This morning, when I heard you loudly denied what Yuu said, I can feel my heart was broken into thousand pieces.” She said to me

“So that jerk who made her sad is me” I’m tighten my hug

“I’m sorry, Atsuko. I made you sad and cry” I said

“It is ok” She said

“When you hugged me and said that you will always be with me and protect me, I decided to confess to you. I want you to know my real feeling.” Atsuko said

“I think you misunderstood about “the person” who I mentioned that I’m in love. Then you against that and hug me tightly. You told me that you love me and don’t want me to be with anyone else. When I heard you said that, I’m very happy. My heart is jumping in joy. At first, I still have some doubt. However, after that I’m very confident.” Atsuko said to me

I can feel her smile on my chest.

“You made me so worry. I thought I lost you for-real.” I said and pout

“That is your fault. Because you are a baka” She said and laughs

“What did you say? Who is baka?” I ask her in playful tone

“It is you. I said like that and you still didn’t know that is you.” She laughs and said

“I even kissed you. That is my first kiss. If I don’t love you, why should I kiss you” She said

“That is also my first kiss. You stole my first kiss without my permission” I said to her

She breaks the hug and look at me

“So you don’t like that huh?’ She looks at me and pouts

“Yes, I don’t like that” I said to her with serious tone

Her face looks surprise. Then she looks down. I use my hand to lift her face up.

“I don’t like it. However, I love it.” I whisper and kiss her lips

She breaks the kiss and hits my chest lightly

“Minami, you made me worry. I thought you don’t like that” She said and pouts

I catch her hands and hug her

“How can I not like that?” I said

“I love everything about you. Your characteristics, your voice, and...” I pause

“....I love your glutton character” I said and laugh

She hits my chest lightly

“I also love your hair” I said and kiss her hair

“Your forehead” I said and kiss that

“Your big beautiful eyes” I kiss them

“Your cute nose” I kiss it

“Your pink cheeks” I kiss them

“And, I love your lovely lips” I whisper and kiss her lips

I kiss her softly. Atsuko rounds her arms around my neck and replies my kiss. I hug her skinny waist and pull her closer to my chest. Our kiss becomes more passionate and intense. I slip my tongue inside her mouth and explore every part of her mouth making her moan softly. I can feel myself getting hotter. I pushes her down on the floor, and I’m on top of her still kissing. I move my hand down to her beautiful leg

“Uhmmm…” Atsuko moans softly when I stroke and gropes her thigh

Then I use my hand to slowly unbutton her shirt showing her white smooth skin.  Then I change my kiss into her neck and mark it

“You are mine now Atsuko” I smile and said making her blushes

Then I kiss her again while taking off her shirt. Suddenly I break the kiss. She looks at me with confused look. I smile at her. Then I bend down and whisper in her ears

“Shall we continue this in your room?”

She blushes madly. Her face is all red now. So cute. I kiss her again while lifting her up in my arms. I carry her to her room and gently put her down. I move on top of her. I bend down and kiss her lips gently

“Atsuko, I love you” I said softly

“I love you too, Minami” Atsuko said while caressing my face

After that we drown in our own world of love and passion.

In the morning

I slowly open my eyes and see my angel is sleeping soundly in my arms. I stroke her hair and kiss her forehead. Feeling my movement. She snuggles closer to me while hugging me tightly. Her face is burying on my chest. The closeness makes me remember about last night making me blushed. I look at her and smile

“At last, Atsuko is now mine and only mine” I thought while stroking her smooth back

“Why did you smile like that, Minami?” She looks at me with those sleepy eyes and asks

“Because I finally confessed my feeling to you. Because our feeling is mutual, and especially, because you are mine now” I said and peck on her lips

She laughs softly and hugs me.

“Atsuko, from now on, I will always be by your side to protect and love you. I won’t let anything make you cry or sad. I promise” I seriously said to her

"Thank you, Minami” She said to me

Then she moves up and pecks my lips.

“Why don’t you sleep more, Atsuko. This is still early. Today is weekend anyway” I said to her

“Uh” She nods and buries her head on my chest

“A special morning for the beginning of our love.” I thought and smile

Then I hug her and fall in sleep

10 years later

We are standing on the cruise on the Seine river to sightsee.

“Honey, look at that.Those are so beautiful” She happily calls me while pointing around

“Uh, those views are very nice” I smile and said

“However, you are way more beautiful.” I whisper and kiss her lips

“Sweet talker” She said and laugh softly

“So, Mrs. Takahashi, do you like this place. I choose especially for our honeymoon” I hug her from behind and whisper to her ear

Yes, we finally got married yesterday. She finally becomes my wife. Maeda Atsuko is now my wife.

“I love it. Paris is very beautiful, Minami” She turns around and said

“I’m glad you like it, Atsuko” I said to her

“Thank you Minami” She said and pecks my lips

“Everything for my lovely and beautiful wife” I said to her

“I love you, Minami, very much.” She hugs me tightly and said

“I love you, too. Atsuko. More than what you can imagine” I smile and said

Then she rest her head on my chest while I hugging her shoulder.s We silently enjoy the night view while feeling each other presence

I love her very much. I, Takahashi Minami will love her for today, tomorrow, future, and forever and ever. Our love will be forever and ever...

The End

That is the OS. Hope you guys enjoy reading it.  :)
« Last Edit: May 14, 2017, 05:55:43 AM by nguyen23 »
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas

Story
Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Ongoing)

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Re: [OS] Forever and Ever (Atsumina) 13/10/2015
« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2015, 04:44:50 PM »
Thank you author-san for cute OS!  :shy1:
Like you said it - AtsuMina Forever and ever! And nothing can stop that..   :oops: ...[except harsh reality]
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Re: [OS] Forever and Ever (Atsumina) 13/10/2015
« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2015, 04:55:58 PM »
Atsumina definitely end up together forever.
Even in reality. (close friends would do)
Atsu did promise to stay with her in the near future.
Thank you for the OS author-san!  :cathappy:
Discovering the wonders of your vague imagination.
Taeny, Atsumina and SayaMilky <3

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Re: [OS] Forever and Ever (Atsumina) 13/10/2015
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2015, 05:35:40 PM »
Minami is such a baka

Lovely story there...

Atsumina forever

Thank you for the OS

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Re: [OS] Forever and Ever (Atsumina) 13/10/2015
« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2015, 02:29:47 PM »
This is the second time I read this OS :)
The story is so sweet, such a baka Minami and cute Atsuko.
I love the way they are together, and also the happy future
I hoped to see their lovely children, but in this OS, they have just got married haha
Thank you Author-san, AtsuMina forever!!!
~AtsuMina~

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[Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #5 on: November 28, 2015, 07:42:52 PM »
Hello everyone. This is I guess a short story. This is just something pop in my head. Don’t know if it is good or not. I hope you guys enjoy reading it  :)

I Love You

Part 1


Minami's POV

"Maeda Atsuko. I’m in love you. Will you be my girlfriend?"

I stand at the back yard of the school building and confess my love to a girl. Normally, this is the most wonderful thing. However, to me, I hate it because all I said to her is a lie. I just barely knew her. Then why did I do this? The reason is

Flashback

My name is Takahashi Minami, a normal high school student. I live alone. I have no family. My parents died in a car accident 2 years ago. I have no relative. Since that day, I have to work to pay my house expenses and live. Luckily, I got a scholarship for all my high school. I will do my best to get scholarship for a medical university.

Now, I’m on my way to my school. When I reach the school gate, I see a flashy car park in front of my school. Then I see a girl steps out

“Have a nice day, Atsuko-sama” a man bows at her

“Uh,” she nods

“She looks familiar” I thought

Then I hear some whispering

“That is her, Maeda Atsuko, a rich girl. She is second year student. She is a very egoist person.” A girl said

“It is easy to understand, her father is very rich. Also her mother is a well-known doctor in a famous university hospital. There is no reason for her to treat us equally.” Another girl said

“One time, I tried to greet her because we once classmate. She didn't even look at me when I greet her. She is such a little brat” another girl angrily speaks up

“Hush, do you want her to hear our conversation? In this whole school, even the principal, no one dares to do anything that upset her because of her father power.” A girl whispers

I look at her

“That is the personality of all rich girls” I thought and walk into the school

After school, as always, I walk back to my house. Suddenly, two black and expensive looking cars block my way. Then a man steps down.

"Take him into the car" he orders

"What????" I thought in surprise

"Who are you? What do you want from me?" I said in surprise

"Our president wants to talk to you" the man said

Then a group of men pull me into the car. In a flash, a car stops at a big and traditional looking house. They open the door for me and lead me into a big room.

"Sir, we got him here." the man said

"Good. Now leave" he said

Then the man leaves. There is only me and someone behind that chair

"You are Takahashi Minami, right?" a man asks me

"Yes, I'm" I answer

"What do you want from me? And who are you?" I ask

"My name is Maeda Koichiro, president of Maeda's group." he said and turns around to look at me

I widen my eyes in surprise.

"What I want from you is become my daughter’s boyfriend" he said to me

"Eehhhh!!!!" I shout in surprise

"What are you talking about? I don't even know your daughter, why would I date her?" I said

"Don't be so highly mighty. Just thinking about my lovely and precious daughter has a boyfriend, I'm also not happy about that." he said

"Then why did you do that?" I ask him

"Because she loves you. I don't want seeing her sad." he said

I'm shocked again

"How did she know me?" I ask him

"She studies in the same school as you. However she is the second year student. She is younger than you" he said

"Her name is Maeda Atsuko" he continues

“That girl” I thought

Now, I remember what my friends and rumors around the school. She is the top student in second year. She also got second place after me in the whole school test. Her knowledge is compatible with a third year student.

"Now, what do you think?" he asks me

"How did you know that she loves me?" I ask him

"You don’t need to know about that. You just need to know that tomorrow, you will confess to her. Plus keep this as a secret from her" he said

"No, I can't. I don't even know her. How can I be her boyfriend" I said

“I can give you money. How much do you want?” he asks me

“I don’t need your money.” I said

“Do you know what is needed for a love confession?” I ask him

“What is it?” he asks me

“Love. That is love. No matter how much you give me. I won’t do that because I don’t love her” I said

“So after all, you won’t do that even if I give you money, right?” He said to me

His voice is so strange. It is somehow lighter than before

“Yes” I said firmly

"Too bad, you don't have a choice" he said and smirks

"Why?" I ask

“If you don’t want me to talk to you in soft way, then I will treat you in hard way.” he said

“You study in that school because of your scholarship right? I’m Maeda Koichiro. I can do everything, and I always get what I want. You know what I mean, right?” He said and smirks

“You….” I hold my fists tightly

“Decide for yourself. You hold your future in your hand” He said to me slowly

“He has money. He can manipulate everything. If I don’t agree, I lost my future” I thought

"Another thing, your parents owe me. That makes more reason for you to obey me. So answer me, Takahashi Minami” he said to me

“My parents owe him?” I thought in surprise

When I’m about to say something, he said

“Enough of thinking. Agree or not. I’m not a patience person for your information. I think you knew what I can do, right?" he said to me

"Now, answer me Takahashi Minami. Do you want a hard way or smooth way?" he asks me

I hold my hand tightly and sigh

"I agree" I said

"Good. If you say that sooner, I don't have to treat you so cold like that" he said and smiles at me

“I think I start to hate that girl.” I thought

“Now go back to your house and prepare your thing for tomorrow. Don’t disappoint me or you and your scholarship will not last long” he said and smiles at me

Then I leave the house.

End flashback


That is why this morning I called her here and confess to her.

“Maeda Atsuko, will you be my girlfriend?” I ask her

She looks at me with surprise look. Her face turns pink. Somehow she looks so cute. However, I quickly shake that thought out of my head. I hate her. Because of her, I was forced into this situation. Then she smiles at me. A smile which I have never seen before, it is so beautiful. However I still keep my thought of hating her.

“Yes, I will. Thank you, Minami” she answers me softly

Her voice so gentle

“Thank you Maeda-san” I said

“You are my boyfriend now. Just call me Atsuko” she said and smiles at me again

“Ok” I say shortly to her

Then I leave. She catches my hand. Her hand so soft

“Where are you going?” She asks me

“Go back to my class. School didn’t end yet” I said coldly

“I see. Sorry.” She said and looks down

Somehow, I feel guilty for treating her like that, but that is their fault not me. She is also a princess type.

“Let’s me see how long will she endure this” I thought

“Uhm… Minami, are you free after school?” She asks me

“No, I have something to do. I also have to study to keep my scholarship. I don’t have time to play. I’m not rich. I have to do my best for my future. ” I said

“Ok, sorry, never mind” she said and goes back to her class

“Why did my heart hurt when seeing her like that?” I thought

After that, I didn't meet her for the rest of school-time.

At night

I sit on my deck and prepare to study. When I pull out my drawer, I see that again

Flashback

After talking to Maeda Koichiro, I go back to my house. On my way, suddenly a black car blocks me again. Then a man steps down

“What do you want, again? I agreed already” I said coldly

“My boss forgot to tell you one more request” he said

“If I could, I would punch him hard” I angrily thought

Then I follow them into the car.

“My boss wants you to stop working at those constructing job. He said that he can’t let anyone know that his daughter’s boyfriend is working at that kind of place. Your job is study and play with oujosama." the man said

“What? I’m not you people pet. Don’t bossing me around.” I said half shouting

“Don’t forget our deal. Your scholarship, your parents, and your life” he said to me

“Plus, my boss already contact that place. Even you go there, they won’t let you work anymore” he said and laughs

I hold my fists tightly.

“So, if I’m not working, how can I live?” I ask him

“He will give you money.” He said to me

I feel like I'm her toy or something.

“Ok, whatever” I said

“Good, here is your money. Go and play with our oujosama.” He said and gives me an envelope.

I take the envelope. My hand is shaking because of anger. Then I leave the car

End flashback

I look at the envelope in my drawer. I feel my anger every time I see this envelope

“What did I owe her that I have to be like this? My pride is hurt. It was thrown on the ground and step on by her father.” I thought in anger

“I will make her suffer” a thought sudden appears in my head.

I think that I will be happy if seeing her sad. Suddenly her smiling face appears in my head, her innocent face. I feel a little guilty, but that thought didn't last when I look at the envelope in my drawer again.

“He wants me to use that money so that I completely become his toy. No, never. I won't betray my pride and dignity.” I thought

“I still have some saving money. I can live with that until I got a new job” I said

Then I quickly get to bed and sleep trying to forget all those stupid things today.

End Minami’s POV

In Maeda mansion


“He confessed to her” the man said

“He did?” Koichiro asks him

“Yes, he did” the man answers

“Good. He didn't disappointed me” Koichiro said and laughs

“You can leave now” he said

The man bows and leaves

“Now, I have to go and say goodnight to my treasure” she thought and stands up

In Atsuko's room

She is sitting on her deck and looks at an empty bottle of water. She smiles brightly when she looks at it. Suddenly she hears a knocking sound

“Come in” she puts back the bottler and said

“Hello my Atsu. How is your school today?” Koichiro greets his daughter happily

“Papa, you are back” she said and rushes to him

“School is good. Today, I’m very happy.” Atsuko happily said to her father

“Really, can Atsu share with Papa, what make you so happy like that?” He asks her while smiling

Flashback

“I have one request to you.” Minami said

“What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks him

“Keep our relationship as a secret” he said

Atsuko looks down. She feels a little sad

“Ok, I will” she said and smiles at him

End Flashback

“That is Atsu’s secret” she said to him while smiling

He laughs loudly

“Ok, if you say so. Papa will wait until Atsu tells me” he said and pats her head

“Did you talk to Mama?” He asks her

Her mother has an important conference in New York. She will be there for one month

“Yes, I did. She said that she miss us” Atsuko said

“I see. Did you say that we also miss her?” He asks her

“Yes, I did.” She nods

“Ok, it is very late now. Atsu, you should go to sleep” he said

“Uh, I will. Good night Papa” she smiles and said

“Good night Atsu” he said and pats her head

Then he leaves the room

The next morning,

Minami’s POV


I come to school with the same manner. I will meet her at lunch at the back yard. No one knows about our relationship because I told her to keep this as a secret. She agreed with me, and we only meet there.

At lunch

I come to the backyard and see that she already there. She sits under the Sakura tree and reads her book. I come closer to her and sit down. She looks at me and smiles brightly.

“You came, Minami” she said

“Of course, I already said that” I coldly said

“Uh” she nods

Then silent fills between us

“What is your favorite food, Minami?” She suddenly speaks up

“Katsudon” I said shorty

“Ok, I will tell my chief to cook for you” She said to me

“Telling someone to cook for me? Why don’t you cook by yourself? You also have hands don’t you” I said

“I doubt you will.” I thought and smirk in my mind

With a princess character like her, she won’t ever do that

“I...I…” She looks down

Then the whole lunch break is just silent. After awhile, the bell rings. I just stand up and go back to my class without looking at her. Before I go, I stop and ask her

“Yesterday, you ask me if I'm free after school. Today I'm free, what do you want?” I said

I have to do as agreement with her father. Yesterday, I was so frustrated, so I said no to her. Today, if I don't do this, I don't know what her father will to do me

“Nothing. Yesterday I just want to go back home with you. It is fine. You don't have to go anywhere with me today. I'm fine by myself” she said

“Ok, if you say so” I said and leave

TBC

That is part 1. I hope you guys enjoy reading it. Feel free to comment about your opinion.  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas

Story
Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Ongoing)

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #6 on: November 28, 2015, 08:17:01 PM »
another atsumina story!!!!
yey!!!!  :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit:
but why im so sad seeing minami treat atsuko like that?  :on speedy: :on speedy:
i mean,atsuko didnt do anything why minami like that?
he can learn to love atsuko right?  :fainted: :fainted:
please keep updating and make minami love atsuko soon!!!  :mon pray2: :mon pray2:

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #7 on: November 28, 2015, 09:43:36 PM »
Poor Atsuko... Minami is so cold and rude to her

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #8 on: November 29, 2015, 08:56:11 AM »
What's next? So eager to read part 2.
Thank you author-san!
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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2015, 09:45:39 AM »
Ammm.. oh.. that was harsh from Minami..  :huhuh
mmm.. yeah.. hard choice..
Waiting next part..  :)
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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2015, 08:10:22 AM »
wow!!! another atsumina! yes. i been gone from this fanfiction forum almost a year. Now I finish my study i can read fiction moreeeeee! AM SO HAPPY TO SEE AN ATSUMINA STORY. PLS UPDATE AUTHOR SAN! :bow:

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[Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #11 on: December 05, 2015, 12:46:24 AM »
@ryu201, @cisda83, @phoenix0i, @black_maa, @noah minami: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :)

This is part 2

Part 2

The next day


Today, I also go there to meet her. When I sit down, she turns and gives me a lunch box with a big smile.

“I made it. It didn't look good though. I will do my best next time” she said

“She actually did that” I thought in surprise

I see that fingers on her both hands was bandaged. I feel my heart tightens when seeing that.

“She did this for me.” I thought

I take the box and open it. It was a little burn, but it smells good. I take a bite and put down the box

“Too salty. How can it eat this?” I said

“I’m sorry. I will do better next time.” She said

“Water” I said shortly

“I will buy for you” she said and stands up

“She didn’t even get mad at me. Why?” I thought

I feel like I’m a bad person in this whole thing. I look down at the lunch box which she made for me. It is a little salty, but it is good. I take it and eat all of it. At the same time, she comes back with a bottle of water in her hand. She is panting while giving me the bottle.

“Here Minami” she gives me the bottle

“Thank you” I said shortly

Then she looks at the empty lunch box. She smiles brightly.

“Uhm…a little salty but I can eat it” I said and turn away

“Thank you, Minami. I will do my best next time” she happily said

My heart sudden skips a beat when seeing her innocent smile. Then the bell rings. I just stand up and walk back to my class. On my way back to my class, I thought

“Why did I have a feeling that the things I heard about her and the real her is way too different”

Then every day, she will cook for me. Her food is getting more delicious every day. However her fingers still have a lot of bandaged.

Then one day

At lunch


I also come to the school backyard.

“Hello Minami” She smiles brightly at me

“Here is your lunch” she said and gives me the box

I look at her hands. I don’t want her to do this anymore. I feel hurt when seeing her hurt like this. I take the box and put it down. I look at her

“You should stop doing this” I said to her

“You don’t like it?” She asks me sadly

“No, I just don’t want to see your bandaged hands.” I said

“I also can feel your exhausted eyes. I guess you have to wake up earlier than you used to, right?” I continue

“Uh” She nods

“That is why I want you to stop. I don’t want you to get sick” I said

“Minami, you are worry about me. Thank you” she smiles and said

“I’m your boyfriend after all” I said and look away to hide my embarrass

I don’t know why, but I feel like I want to bring that words up. While spacing out, I feeling some soft touch my check

“Atsuko kissed me” I thought

My heart suddenly beats faster again. I can feel my face getting hot. I turn and look at her. My cheek still feel her kiss.

“Thank you, Minami” she smiles brightly at me

This time I can see crinkle on her nose. That is so cute.

“Ah..Uh…n…n..no problem” I can’t say anything

Then the bell rings. She stands up and smiles at her

“Bye Minami, see you tomorrow” She said and goes back to her class

I still stun with what just happened. I touch my cheek where she kissed me while looking at her back.

“This feeling” I thought while touching my chest

After school

I just go back to my house as usual. My mind is filled with her smile. On my way home, I try to look for a job. However, I found none.

“Finding a job is getting harder and harder every day.” I thought and sign

Then I continue walking back to my house. Suddenly I hear a loud horn. I turn and look at the road. I see someone rushing to middle of the road. Then I realize

“Atsuko”

“What is she doing?” I thought

The truck is approaching her with high speed. I quickly rush to her and push her to the other side. She and I both fall on the ground. I sit up and yell at her

“Are you crazy? Why did you rush into the middle of the road and stand there? Do you want to die?”

My heart beats so fast. My hands still shaking

“I’m sorry” she said in broken tone

She sits up and looks down. Then I see a little white puppy in her arms. I realize something.

“Did you just save the little puppy?” I ask her in gentle tone

“Yes, when I was walking, I saw him standing in the middle of the road at lost. I think I should rush to save him before he gets hit by the truck” she answers me in small tone.

I scold myself for being stupid. I want to slap my face right now. Why did I fast judge her? Why did I believe in those rumors? She is a kind-hearted girl. Why did I put her in the same place as her father and hate her.

“I’m sorry for troubling you, Minami” she said and sobs

“It is ok. I’m sorry for yelling at you, Atsuko” I lift her face up and said while wiping her tear.

“Then you are not mad at me right?” She smiles and said

“Uh, I’m not" I said

“That is great.” she happily said

I look at her and smile. She seems to be surprised

“Minami, you are smiling” she said to me

“Uh? What’s wrong?” I ask

“You smile at me?” she asks

“Uh” I nod

“Minami, this is the first time I see you smile at me. Thank you” she happily said

I stun with her words.

“She is happy just because a simple thing” I thought

“What have I done for all those time?” I said to myself

She is so pure and innocent. I hate myself for hating her without any reason. When I look at her, I see she holds the puppy up at her face.

“You are safe now. That is good right” she smiles and said to him

*woof* *woof* *woof*

He barks to thank her. Then he licks her nose. She laughs softly.

“Where is your family, little puppy?” She asks him

Then she looks at his collar. He didn't wear anything which means he doesn't have an owner.

“You don’t have a home huh?” She asks him, and he barks

“How about go home with me? I have a lot of friends. I will introduce you to them.” She smiles and said

I smile when looking at her like this. Suddenly, I notice blood on her arm. I quickly take the little guy from her hands and put on my laps. She looks at me with confused look. Then I take her arm to check

“Ouch” she frowns because of hurt

“My home is near here, let me take you to my house and treat your wound” I said to her

“No, it is fine. I don't want to trouble you. You are also busy, right? I see you go around finding a job" she said

"No, I'm done. Just go to my house." I said and stand up.

I hug the little puppy in my arm. My other hand, I pull her with me. After a while, we reach my house. I open the door for her. She walks in and looks around.

"Come with me" I said and pull her to the bathroom

I turn on the water at the sink. Her arm is still bleeding. I feel sad when seeing her hurt like this.

“It will hurt a little” I said to her

She nods at me

Then I take a cup and pour water on her wound. I do it gently so that she wouldn't feel so hurt. After drying her wound, I take her to my living room. I take the medical box and treat her arm. I clean her wound again by rubbing alcohol. The liquid makes her frown because of hurt. I bend down and blow gently to ease her pain. When I look up, I see a little pink on her cheeks.

"Somehow looking at her like this, she is so cute." I thought and smile in my head.

Then I take the bandage to bandage her arm.

"Done" I said

"Thank you, Minami" she smiles and said to me

“You’re welcome” I said to her

Then I take the medical box and stand up

"Minami, where is your parents?" she asks me

"They were dead in a car accident 2 years ago" I said while putting back the medical box

"I'm sorry" she said in small tone

I turn and look at her. She looks sad

"It is ok. Don't be sad" I said and smile at her

"That must be really hard, right?" she asks me

"Uh. However, I have to do my best no matter what. My dream is to be a doctor. So if I don’t’ do my best, I can’t achieve my dream in the future" I said

"Do your best, Minami. I will always support you. I believe that you can do it. After all you are the top student at school. Also, in my heart, you are the best" she smiles at me and said

My heart once again beats faster. I want to pull her in my embrace.

“Come here little puppy” she calls

Then she picks the puppy up and puts on her laps. She strokes his head and said

"You must be sad. Staying all alone"

"Uh, a little. But I'm used to it" I smile at her

"Minami, do you like him?" she asks me

"Uh, he is cute" I said

"How about he will be your friend here? So that you won’t feel lonely anymore." she said to me and smiles

"But he is your dog" I said

"Just see him as my gift for you." she smiles and gives him to me

*woof* *woof* *woof*

He barks and licks my cheek

"Welcome to my house, buddy" I said and pat his head

"Minami" she calls me

I look up at her. I see that she is looking down

"What is it, Atsuko?" I ask her

"If possible....can I also visit your house?" she said in small tone

I smile and said

"Of course you can"

"Really, thank you" she smiles happily and said

She stays in my house for awhile then I walk her home. She refused, but I insist. After awhile, we reach her house. When we are at the gate, a middle aged woman rushes to her

“Atsuko-sama, where have you been? What took you so long?” she said in worry tone.

“I just came to my boyfriend’s house for awhile. Sorry, I forgot to call you” she said to her

“It is ok. You are safe is all matter.” she said

“Minami let me introduce her. She is my nanny, Eri. She takes care of me since I was born.” Atsuko said to me

“Eri, this is my boyfriend, Minami” she happily introduces me.

“Hello, my name is Takahashi Minami” I greet and bow at her

“Hello Minami-sama. You don’t have to do that” she smiles at me

“Oh my, you got a boyfriend already. That is why you woke up so early every day to….”

“Hush Eri. If you said out loud everyone will hear that. What if they tell Papa and Mama. Also, I told you to keep that as secret between us” Atsuko stops her and said in whisper tone.

However, I heard all of that. I feel sad when she has to do all of that just for my sake. Suddenly her nanny gasps in surprise

“Atsuko-sama, your arm”

“I’m fine. It is just a scratch” she said

“No, you are hurt. I will call your personal doctor to check on you. What if the wound get worse? ” she said in worry tone

“I’m fine, Eri. Minami already treated it. He will be a doctor in the future, so everything will be fine” she smiles brightly and said

I feel embarrassed when she said that. Her nanny looks at her and smiles.

“Atsuko-sama, why don’t you go back into the house and get changed. I will tell the maids to prepare dinner for you and Minami-sama” she said

“No, it’s fine. I will go home now” I said

“Minami, can you stay here? I want to eat dinner with you” she said to me with pleading eyes

Somehow I can’t deny her eyes

“Ok, I will” I said

“That is great. I will be right back” she said and rushes to the house.

Before she goes, she turns around and said

“Eri, can you take Minami to the backyard for me. I want to introduce my friends to him” she continues

“Ok, Atsuko-sama” she said

“Her friends?” I thought

“What should I do? How should I act before them? I guess her friends will be a bunch of rich girls and boys” I thought

Seem to realize my thought, Eri-san said to me

“Don’t worry, Minami-sama. Her friends are very friendly” she said and smiles

Walking for a while, I suddenly hear a lot of barking and meowing sound.

“What is it?” I thought in confuse

Then Eri-san takes me to a big garden. I see a lot of cats and dogs. I look at Eri-san with confused look. She looks at me and smiles.

“They are her friends” she said

“You can say that Atsuko-sama doesn't really have a friend. Except you are her boyfriend now” Eri-san said to me

I widen my eyes in surprise

“Since she was born until now, most of her time she spends is at home. Even studying, she used to only study at home.” Eri-san said

“Why didn’t she go outside?” I ask her

“Her parents won’t allow her.” She said

I’m surprised

“Atsuko-sama is a premature baby. She was born about two months early.” She said

“No wonder she look so fragile and skinny” I thought

“When her father took her mother to the hospital for weekly check, a drunk driver dangerously passed their car and changed the lane. His car hit hard at the top of her parents car. Her father lost control, and their car rushed down into the side of the road and hit a tree.” she said

“Master is ok. However, the impact affected mistress and the baby. Master quickly rushed out of the car and called emergency and police. He tried to take her out of the car, but the door was stuck. After awhile, the ambulance with the police finally came. It took them quite some time to get her out. At that time, she already fainted because of tired” she continues

“Her mother was immediately taken to the biggest hospital. Because of the impact, the doctor had to take Atsuko-sama out early. If not both of them might die. When she was born, she was really weak. At that time, the doctor thought that she couldn’t be alive. She was taken to a very special care for several months. Fortunately, she was alive. Her parents was very happy about that” She told me about the story

“However, because of that, her health is weaker than a normal person. Therefore, her parents take care of her very careful.”

“Also because of that, her parents are very protective over her, and they won’t allow her to do anything or go anywhere.” she said to me

I’m very surprise.

“Because can’t go outside, sometime Atsuko-sama looked very sad whenever her parents weren’t home. Luckily, she didn’t have any allergy with animals. Therefore, her parents bought a lot of pets to play with her. That way she will not feel lonely when they aren’t home.” she said to me

Eri-san’s words remind what Atsuko said to me

“You must be sad. Staying all alone”

“She is just like me. She is always alone. No she must feel lonelier than me” I thought 

Then I look at Eri-san

"Can you tell me more about Atsuko? I want to know about her more" I said

I really want to know more about her, every little thing about her

“Uh, When she was 7, her health suddenly got worse. She has to stay in hospital for one year. Thanks to the advance of medical in French, she is fully recovered.” Eri-san said

“France?” I said in surprise

“Uh, there is one time, she and her parent moved to Paris for Master’s business.” she said

“After that, her health is getting better and better every day. Though her health is better, her parents didn’t let her go to school until two years ago. Because she only studies at home, she doesn’t know how to interact with people. That is why they categorize her as an egoist Ojousama. Although she didn’t say anything, I knew she is really sad” she said in sad tone

I look down when hearing what Eri-san said. I feel guilty because I’m the one who think of her that way, too.

“Thank you Minami-sama” she sudden said to me

I look up in surprise

“Thank you for making her more cheerful. These weeks, Atsuko-sama seems to be very happy. She talks more at home. I knew you are the one who makes her that happy.” she said

“I did” I thought in surprise

“The only thing I did to her is trying to hurt her feeling” I thought

I feel angry at myself

“Though I’m against her wake up so early to cook because of her health. She also has to hide this from her parents because they forbidden her to go to the kitchen. I still teach her to cook because she looks very happy when she is doing that” she said

“I’m not that good. It was me who forced her to cook. It was me who treated her badly. I’m the worst” I thought while holding my fists tightly

“Minami-sama, please love her and take good care of her. I take care of her since she was born. By looking at her, I knew she loves you very much and is happy when you are around” she said

“Uh, I will definitely make her happy with all I got” I said firmly.

“Thank you, Minami-sama” she said

Then I see Atsuko rushes to me

“Minami, let’s go” she holds my hand and pulls me with her

“Have fun, Atsuko-sama, Minami-sama” Eri-san said to us

Then I stay at her house and play with her and her pets. After dinner, I return home

“Bye Minami” Atsuko said

“Uh, bye Atsuko. See you tomorrow” I said to her

Then I leave. Suddenly something flashes on my head. I turn and call her

“Atsuko”

“Huh? What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“What is your favorite food? I will cook for you tomorrow” I said and smile at her

“Really, Minami?” She asks me happily

“Uh” I nod

“Anything, I will eat anything you cook” She happily said

“Ok” I smile and said

Then I leave her house.

“Her smile, just by looking at her happy smile, I feel so great.” I thought and smile

That night I go back to my house and sleep happily with my new doggy friend.

The next day

When I come to the school backyard, I see that she is sleeping soundly. I smile and walk closer to her. I sit down next to her and look at her sleeping face. Her face looks so cute. Because the weather is a little cold, I take out my jacket and carefully put on her. I slowly pull her head down on my shoulder for her to sleep more comfortably. Sitting by her side like this makes me very happy. I slowly lean down and kiss her forehead.

“Looking at you like this, you look so fragile. I want to become a strong person to protect you. I will make this shoulder stronger for you to lean on forever” I stroke her hair and whisper.

Then I take out my book and read. After awhile, I feel her moving her head.

“Uhm” she sits up and rubs her eyes.

Then she yawns. Her action looks very cute

“Hello, Atsuko. Do you get enough of sleep?” I ask her gently

“Uh,” she nods

Then she quickly turns to me

“Minami, you came. Since when?” she said in surprise tone

“Uh, I came here a long time ago. When I came here, I saw my cute little girlfriend is sleeping soundly” I said and pinch her nose

She blushes and looks down shyly

“You are so cute, Atsuko” I said and smile at her

“Are you hungry Atsuko? Here is your lunch” I said and give her the lunch box

“Thank you Minami” She happily said

I sit and nervously waiting for her to eat my cook.

“Delicious Minami. It is very delicious” She happily said

I sigh in relief

“I’m glad you like it” I said

After finishing her food, we sit back and talk

“Minami, how is the little puppy?” She asks me

“Pretty good. I think he like my place” I said

“That is great. I want to meet him” Atsuko happily said

“How about I bring him to your house to see your friends sometime?” I said

“That is great Minami” She said

Then she happily tells me a lot of things about her pets. Looking at her like that, she is very cute. So pure and innocent.

“I finally know the feeling inside me” I thought and smile

“Minami, you know whamhmm…”

Haven’t let her finish her words, I pull her closer to me and kisses her lips gently. I can feel her gasp in surprise. But then she slowly replies my kiss. I pin her on the tree and kiss her more wildly and roughly. She hugs my neck to deepen our kiss. I press my body against her and kiss her more passionate and intense. After awhile, we break the kiss because we need air. Looking at her, her face is all red. That is so cute.

“You are so cute, Atsuko” I said to her while caressing her face and stroking her hair.

She blushes madly at my statement. Then the bell rings

"See you later, Atsuko. Today, let go home together" I said and peck on her lips again

When I’m about to go, she catches my hand. I turn around and look at her with confused look.

"Minami" she calls me softly

"What is it, Atsuko?" I ask her gently

"Do you.....really love me, Minami?" she asks me

TBC

Hope you guys enjoy reading this  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas

Story
Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Ongoing)

Offline Saint0angel

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #12 on: December 05, 2015, 03:20:34 AM »
Yes, yes i love  :love:

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2015, 03:15:47 PM »
Update soon please :D

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #14 on: December 05, 2015, 05:38:32 PM »
Update soon pleasee
Really like your fict

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #15 on: December 05, 2015, 06:45:38 PM »
Well... Minami is starting to have feeling for Atsuko

But what will Minami say to Atsuko's question?

Will Minami tell the truth, at first no but now different?

Can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for the update

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #16 on: December 05, 2015, 07:13:05 PM »
oH OH OH... I think Minami lie that she loves! can't wait to find out what she will do! update as soon as you can!

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #17 on: December 06, 2015, 07:20:21 PM »
Yep... Minami loves her..  :yep: .. but it will make it more complicated all things..
...and there will be day, when Atsuko will know all true aaaand... yeah... or she already have some clue about it.. hmmm..  :roll: :huhuh
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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 1/5 28/11/2015
« Reply #18 on: December 07, 2015, 12:08:02 PM »
another atsumina story!!!!
yey!!!!  :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit: :tama-apeshit:
but why im so sad seeing minami treat atsuko like that?  :on speedy: :on speedy:
i mean,atsuko didnt do anything why minami like that?
he can learn to love atsuko right?  :fainted: :fainted:
please keep updating and make minami love atsuko soon!!!  :mon pray2: :mon pray2:

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] I love you (Atsumina) Part 2/5 05/12/2015
« Reply #19 on: December 09, 2015, 02:53:13 PM »
Thank you for the puppy. It reminds me of Takamina visiting Acchan's dogs.
Atsumina is doing perfectly nowadays.
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