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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 5
« Reply #20 on: December 12, 2016, 06:57:34 AM »
part 5 :cow:

my ikemen mona :farofflook: I thought mona with cuts on her face will make her become more cool and sexier :mon inluv:

I smell the scent of akanen have a feeling towards mona :? well you got me curious :lol:

please update soon author-san :thumbsup

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 5
« Reply #21 on: December 12, 2016, 02:51:44 PM »
nooo..
don't leave berika alone (with kaarage) at her home
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as always thank you for update
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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 5
« Reply #22 on: December 14, 2016, 03:27:50 PM »
Thank you for this fic, Author-san!
I didn't think anyone would make a fic based on Tokuyama Daigoroku dorama.
When I first watched it, I thought it was a weird drama.
(With all those slow motion scenes when the girls were changing or having lunch, couldn't help but thinking that it was... :nervous)
But turned out that it piqued my interest quite well XD
I am really interested in Watanabe Risa x Nagahama Neru back story. Too bad they didn't elaborate on that more.
But, through your fic, you managed to turn my head around to look at Berika and Shida.
Now, I started watching the drama all over again, imagining everything you wrote happened in the background XD

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 5
« Reply #23 on: December 14, 2016, 09:28:32 PM »
This is such a good FanFic :heart: :heart: Keep up the good work!!! I'm very happy that ive read this

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Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #24 on: December 18, 2016, 09:19:02 AM »
@huffhuff : thank you for reading :) haha. don't worry she has mona on her side :cathappy:
@wakasama__ :
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I thought mona with cuts on her face will make her become more cool and sexier
yes, she is :inlove: thank you for your support :cow:
@aergia : thank you for reading too :kneelbow:
@DeNight : thank you for your time DeNight-san^^ i hope you enjoyed this :) Well, RisaNeru already told in drama, so i prefer to make MonaBeri instead XD haha. let's be delusional :mon inluv:
@Berika : thank you for reading^^
to all readers, thank you for reading my fic, i hope you liked and enjoyed it. here's the last part :)


PART 6 / FINAL

24th
Monday
08 : 00 am


There was a change of atmosphere after the incident, especially now that Neru finally attends the class every day and Berika who seems to play together with Yukka’s group, it seems like the whole class started to accept them.

The bell that signs the start of homeroom period rang all over the school. Right after that, the back door abruptly opens, with Akanen entering the class out of breath with Shida following her from behind. It seems that they ran in order not to be late for school. Before the other start to ask Shida about the wound on her cheek, their new homeroom teacher came in, making the whole class rushed to their own seat.

Berika’s POV

   “Are you alright?” I saw Yone-san approaching Shida-san’s seat, then everyone followed her.
   “What happened to your cheek?” Said Kobayashi-san and her friends.
   “Is it true that you got into fight with some yankee?” Asked Suzumoto-san.

At break, everyone started making a circle around Shida-san’s desk and bombarded her with questions. I looked at her admitting Suzumoto-san’s question and tried to reassure the whole class that she was fine.
 
   “Seriously, everyone. It’s just a small injury.” Said Watanabe Risa-san that sat beside me while looking down at her.
   “..Risa!” I can hear Nagahama-san’s whisper trying warn her.

Knowing the real story, I just sat at my seat in silence. Then I took a glance at Shida’s to find she was looking at me showing a little smile. I looked away and lowered my head, feeling guilty. Because of saving me from those men, she got herself injured.

05 : 00 pm

Since my parents are still having a meeting today, I killed my time by playing at the park as usual. But before I can go to my favourite place, a hand dragged me to the nearby tree. Scared of the yesterday incident to repeat, I closed my eyes and tried to scream. But before I opened my mouth, a palm covered it, and I heard a familiar laughter after that. I opened my eyes slowly to find Shida-san was laughing at me.
   
   “...Shida-san?!”
   “Hahaha.. You really have a funny reaction.” She said while taking a breath after laughing.
   “T-That’s not funny.. I.. was really scared back then...” I said while trying to calm myself.
   “...I’m sorry.” Shida-san said looking at me. “Ne, let’s watch the scenery from there.” She pointed to her favourite spot.
   “E-eh? ...How?”
   “Of course, climbing.” She told me as she started to climb at the tree trunk then gave her hand.
   “...Climbing? I can’t climb at all...” I said dumbfounded then looked at Karaage.

After she forced me to take her hand and helped me to get upward, I finally make it to the top of the tree. I’m amazed after realized the scenery from here was really beautiful.

   “...Kirei” I whispered while seeing the scenery from above here.
   “Deshou?” I took a glance at Shida-san who’s smiling at the scenery too.
   “Um... Shida-san?” I tried to call her.
   “Hm? We’ve been a classmates since the past few months yet you still call me that? Just drop the formalities, Berika.” She said while looking at me before averting her gaze to the scenery again.
   “Um..  Okay...”

I played and took a two-shot with Karaage after that. There was a long silence between us; accompanied by the sounds of bird chirping, the wind, and the children playing down there. I took a glance at her again, and looked at her wound. I decided to poke at her injured cheek but her hand stopped me from doing that.

   “Don’t touch.”
   “Does it hurt?”
   “Of course, it is. What do you think of this? A fake wound?” She said while raising one of her eyebrow.
   “N-no.. It just... You looked fine... even though your cheek... is injured.” I looked down.
   “I’m already used to this. It’s just a small bruises.” She praised herself.
   “Um.. Manaka-san.. Thank you... For saving me and Karaage... Yesterday...”
   “Hm. But why were you still out there that late of night? Won’t your parents get worried?”
   “I was buy something and... My parents leave me for 3 days... Because of meeting.”

I felt the loneliness again. I tried to calm myself but failed. Until the person beside me hugged me while wiping my tears, and I apologize her for make her uniform wet with my tears.

   “Oh look! It’s sunset.” She said pointing at scenery.
   “...Beautiful...” I said to her.
   “Indeed. Hey, Let’s take a two-shot!” She grins.
   “E-eh? U-un.”

After I took a two-shot with her, she looked away, blushing. While looked at the sky she spoke,

   “Ne, if you feel lonely you can just come here or oversleep at my place, you know. Let’s watch the sunset again tomorrow, since you can climb now.”

She smirks at her last remark.

   “M-Mou.. That’s because you forced me to climb.”
   “Haha.. Yosh. Let’s go home.” She climbed down the tree.
   “U-un!” I climbed down with her help.
   “Hurry up. I’ll walk you home.” She turned and walked ahead.

Before I could brush any twigs or leaf off myself she was already a few metres away with Karaage in her hand. I realized that and started to run after her.

   “Ah! Matte! Karaage! Manaka-sannn!”


Now I believe..

There is only love in the world..

« Last Edit: March 14, 2017, 12:56:14 PM by ミサキ »
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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #25 on: December 19, 2016, 04:26:18 AM »
It's over :cry:
Thank you for this fic..
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   “Ah! Matte! Karaage! Manaka-sannn!”
Now I believe..
There is only love in the world..

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I ship Berikaxkaraage lol

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #26 on: December 21, 2016, 11:54:27 AM »
Nooooooo......!
Author-saaaaaan! You can't be serious, right? This can't be the last part of the fic!
What was that about Akanen being so worried about Shida's injury and letting her to fall asleep on her lap?
I was kinda hoping there's more to it...
Well... maybe you could try to make another arc as a continuation?
That's if you would like to do so, though. No pressure. Hehe...

Thank you for the fic. I enjoyed it very much  :)

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #27 on: December 21, 2016, 04:58:27 PM »
final? too soonnnnn, i'm not readyyy
 :fainted: :on cloudeye:
well, looking on the bright sight at least it has ending.. haha

i like how you put a tiny bit of risaneru interaction
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thank you for update and hoping for season 2 *cough*
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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #28 on: December 22, 2016, 08:44:35 PM »
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I cant believe it!!! :OMG: Final already???!!! :dizzy:

I loved this fic too much!! :shy1:

*cough* *cough* Hoping for a season 2 *cough cough*  :sweat:

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #29 on: December 22, 2016, 08:51:47 PM »
This is too sad to be true!!
 :badluck: :tantrum: :frustrated:

For such a good FanFic to end!! :shock:

*cough* *cough* Hope season 2 *cough* *cough*

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | PART 6/Final
« Reply #30 on: December 23, 2016, 11:49:42 AM »
so this fic was end..
thanks author-san.. your fic makes me happy :hee:
and I hope you'll make another fiction again especially if about mona XD

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Re: Sekai ni wa Ai shika nai (Keyakizaka46 Fic) | REPLY AND ANNOUNCEMENT
« Reply #31 on: March 11, 2017, 08:19:54 AM »
@huffhuff-san :
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I ship Berikaxkaraage lol
a new ship huh :shocked I think Mona has to work harder to steal Berika from karaage  :lol: Thank you for reading my fic^^

@DeNight-san : Yessssssss.....! I'm serious.. It was the last part :( But don't worry--  XD
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Well... maybe you could try to make another arc as a continuation?
ah.. looks like you already read my mind before  :huhuh
Thank you for your time to read my simple fic :sweatdrop:

@aergia-san ; @Gekikara-chan ;@ Berika-san (wait.. Berika? :shocked ww) : Don't worry, I heard your dearest request about Season 2 XD please wait for it... and thank you for always support my fic~ I'm happy.. :cry:

@wakasama__ : I'm glad that you were happy because of my simple fic.. And don't worry... this ikemen Mona will appear again ;) Thank you for your support!!^^



To my readers (hope there are still) Thank you for reading my fic.. I really appreciate it^^
Sorry... Many things happened before.... And I have to take a break from author's world and going back to reader's world XD XD
I wonder if there's somebody that's still waiting for this simple fic :(  Haha... Like @DeNight-san said before, the story sounds hanging.. It's true.. XD
But after I have gone too long, I started to think about it again....
Should I continue my fic...?
Please give me your answer by vote :bow:
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Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #32 on: March 14, 2017, 12:49:51 PM »
Thank you to who've voted to 1st option....  :cry: :cry:
I didn't expect that there's somebody that's still waiting for my simple fic :cry: :cry:
I'll continue it...!  :) But it might took a long time for the next update since I'm really busy in real life huhu :( :(
But i won't abandoned this fic XD


SO... YEAH!! HERE'S THE CONTINUATION aka SEASON 2  XD XD
Thank you for @Sei (Yuki)-san ; my dai-senpai who willing to be my editor this time XD

Anyway... please give me your thought about my fic :sweatdrop:
ENJOY!! :cathappy: :cathappy:



Te wo Tsunaide Kaerouka...?


PROLOGUE

24th
Monday
06 : 00 pm


Hmm.. I wonder how Mona will react after she finds out that they chose me as the school representative for National Tennis Championship.. Ahh~ Can’t wait to go home and tell her... She’ll be so happy to hear it...

A ponytailed girl thought while, smiling to the world along her way home. Too excited, she even skipped a little, her heart went BUN BUN BUN like she was about to profess her love.


Mona, have you gotten home yet?  I’ve got great news! ^^


Akane typed a message and sent it to her best friend on LINE before continuing home. In her usual Keyakizaka Private School uniform, she also sported her school bag and a larger bag containing her tennis equipment.She quickened her pace, only to suddenly stop in her tracks at the sound of familiar voices. Akane walked around in search of the source and found herself at the family park where her best friend often dozed off.

   “Oh look! It’s sunset.”
   “...Beautiful...”
   “Indeed. Hey, Let’s take a two-shot!”
   “E-eh? U-un.”

Akane spotted her short haired best friend talking with someone else at the top of a tree.While pointing out at the sunset, they took a photo together. Weird.. She thought. She knew that Mona never acted friendly like this to the others; not even with Suzumon, Ozeki or Oda-ni. Curious as to who it was, Akane tiptoed to a nearby tree to get a clearer view.

   “Ne, if you feel lonely you can just come here or sleep over at my place, you know. Let’s watch the sunset again tomorrow, since you can climb now.”
   “M-Mou.. That’s because you forced me to climb.”
   “Haha.. Yosh. Let’s go home.”

As her best friend climbed down, Akane hid herself around the other side of the trunk, hoping that they wouldn’t see her.

   “U-un!”
   “Hurry up. I’ll walk you home.”

Footsteps faded into the distance. The coast was clear so she tried to take a peak. But to her surprise, Akane found Berika still nearby. Her classmate was frantically brushing twigs and leaves off herself.

   "Ah! Matte! Karaage! Manaka-sannn!”

Her phone buzzed and there was a LINE message from her best friend.


Mona, have you gotten home yet?  I’ve got great news! ^^

Ah, I walk Berika to her home and we’re sleeping over at her place.
I already told your parents earlier. You won’t have to wait for me at the door like usual.



Her heart sank along with her smile and she found herself staring to the ground as Berika started to run after her best friend’s silhouette.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2017, 01:52:08 PM by ミサキ »
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #33 on: March 14, 2017, 01:18:24 PM »
Hey, Misaki-san! You're back! :D
Haha.. Seems like I will be on the other side here. I kinda ship Shida and Moriya. Maybe I am one of the few people who ships them. XD
Anyway, I'm looking forward for the next chapter! Thanks for this update!
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #34 on: March 14, 2017, 06:11:11 PM »
The 2nd season is here~!!!

But why so sad when only 1st ep T^T  akanennn.....

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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #35 on: March 15, 2017, 09:51:47 AM »
whatt?? am i dreaming?
season 2 wooooooo....
i actually like berika x akane IRL lol
it's funny, akanen who hates to lose is friending berika who's a ponkotsu
but, whatever, in the end i'm a monarika shipper (or berimona according to manaka)

thank you for season 2!!
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #36 on: March 15, 2017, 10:48:47 AM »
Hiiiii I just read all the chapters of the first season (?) all at once and wow! Thanks for making a continuation~

just like how keyaki irl has love triangles, this love triangle among berika, mona and nen is about to destroy my keyaki OTP list (as if I ever had a fixed OTP in the first place hahaha i ship so many members together gdi...)

Will wait for the next update^^
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #37 on: March 17, 2017, 07:07:37 AM »
aww love triangle for 2nd season?
but haven't we agreed on shida-berika-karaage as the best love triangle out there?

thank you for continuing this..
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #38 on: March 19, 2017, 04:01:43 AM »
is mean Akane love manaka,but manaka love berika?
wow,that triangle is a big trouble :lol:

wait for your update and sorry for my bad english
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Re: Keyakizaka46 Fic | Te wo Tsudaide Kaerouka...? (PROLOGUE)
« Reply #39 on: March 19, 2017, 03:39:28 PM »
I'm glad that you make a continuation!!!  :cow: :cow:

It's already sad at the beginning, but, tbh I ship manakaxberika rather than akanenxmanaka, and I ship akanen more with sugai-sama (YukkaNen FTW!!!, lol, just kidding 😁😁)

Don't be upset tho, it's only my opinion, the fic you decide it
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