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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 9 update] Mar. 20
« Reply #80 on: March 21, 2012, 01:27:04 PM »
Good For Ren....Teach Both of Them Well  :kneelbow:

i Can feel that Something Going to Happen ... :ding:

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 9 update] Mar. 20
« Reply #81 on: March 22, 2012, 11:27:23 AM »
 :cow: You updated!
Hahah Yun is adopted yes it's make the chance for Black&Ren to be a couple....those kids are evil and smart  XD (and cute)

Thank you waiting for your other fics update too!

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 9 update] Mar. 20
« Reply #82 on: May 17, 2012, 04:05:36 PM »
oh my....i never thought Geki/Black pairing can be like this :hiakhiakhiak:

and those WMidgets things are hilarious :on lol:

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After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 10] May 28
« Reply #83 on: May 28, 2012, 11:15:08 PM »
Hey. I'm back!!! I'll like to thank everyone for your comments. Hope you all enjoy this Chapter. There more RenYuki scenes.

Chapter 10

Ren arrived at the house they’ll be staying at while on the mission. He hurriedly ran to his room pass by the girls and closed his door shut. He let out a sigh of relieve once in.

“Oi, wasn’t that Ren?” Asked Tomomi.
“Yeah, but why was he in a hurry?” Tomochin asked confused.
“Don’t know.” Haruna replied.
“Maybe he couldn’t wait to see Black.” Sado said entering the room.
“Makes sense.” The rest added.
“Oi! Ren’s not like that!” Takamina shouted from hers and Acchan’s room.
“Oh come on~ How can you be so sure Ren’s not into Yuki?” Acchan whined.
“Cuz Ren’s G-”
“Bakamina!!!” Yuko yelled.
“OHGOD! Ren’s gay?!” Acchan, TomoTomo couple and Marichan yelled shocked and surprised. WMidget facepalmed at their outburst, but at least Ren’s secret wasn’t exposed.
“No, he’s not.” Haruna stated in a matter of fact tone.
“And how do you know?” Marichan asked with her right brow raised.
“Well for one he went straight to his and Yuki’s room. And if I remember correctly she’s in there.” Haruna suggestive said.
“Yeah! RenYuki!” Yuko shouted happily jumping up and down.
“What are you talking about?” Everyone except Minami asked confused by Yuko.
“Oh ho~ You’ll know.” Yuko said showing them a perverted smile.
“Ohhh~” Everyone let out while Minami facepalmed at her cousin’s words.

While Ren was catching his breath, he failed to notice someone getting out of the bedroom’s bathroom. When he looked up he was shocked by the view in front of him. Yuki stood there frozen looking at him with only a baby blue towel wrapped around her body.
“Beautiful~” Ren said out loud in a dreamy like voice while staring at Yuki with dreamy eyes and mouth slightly open with a little drool coming out.
Yuki was shocked to find Ren inside their room, but once she saw how he looked at her. She got an idea. She slowly and seductively walked towards Ren and stopped a few inches from him, she then leaned in towards his face. They were now very very close to each other, Yuki’s body slightly pressing into Ren’s tone body. Ren’s breath became heavy and short, heart beating out of control, sweat dropping down his forehead. Yuki smirked seeing him like this. “Honey, you should close your mouth. You’re drooling like a dog.” She whispered into his left ear then went to get her clothes and back inside the bathroom to change. Leaving a panting flustered red as a cherry Ren standing there dumbfound at what just happened.
OHGOD!! I think I might have had a heart. Why, why has this day turned out so troublesome? First the chibis tag-team and now Black, Black, I mean Yuki, Yuki, Yuki being sooo damn sexy. *Sigh* What’s happening to me? Am I losing it? WAIT!! Did I just say Yuki’s SEXY!?!! She’s my friend! I can’t be thinking of her in that way! *long sigh* I think hanging with Wmidget is starting to affect me. Making me a pervert like them. *sigh* Please help in surviving this. 

Meanwhile ready near by
“OHMYGOD! Was that all about?” Yuki whispered herself as she put her hands over her heart. 
What the hell came over me? I’ve never been comfortable in being anything like that with men. So why, why did my body act on its own? But I didn’t hate it. Instead I really really liked it. *blush* Ren was so cute, the way he was breathing with his mouth slightly open. He looked so….WAIT!!! Yuki, Ren’s your friend he’s helped you a lot. You cannot think of him that way. Now that I think of it, I’ve done this before with Rena. Is the reason why I’m acting like this cuz Ren likes exactly like Rena? Or is it something else? *sigh*
*Knock* *knock*

“Yuki? Are you okay?” Ren asked in a worried voice breaking Yuki’s thoughts. She realized she was still only covered by a towel.
“Yes! I’m just changing. Why? You wanna see more of me?” Yuki teased in a seductive tone.
Why did I say that? Is my Black mode a pervert? (Sorry to say this Yuki. But you and your Black mode are the same person.)
“Um… Um…” Ren couldn’t find any words to reply Yuki’s tease so he shouted the first thing that popped into his mind. “I have a son!”
Once he shouted that the bathroom doors swag open. “What?” Yuki asked shocked, but Ren was more shocked with the sight in front of him.
“Y-Yuki, you’re towel.” Ren stuttered pointing at Yuki before passing out. She furrowed her eyes brows before looking down and seeing that her towel had fallen down.
“Yuki!”
“Black!”
“REN!!!”
“Geki! I mean Joker!!!”
“Is everything okay in there?”
The others shouted from outside the bedroom with worry.
“Don’t bother them; they’re just having some fun.” Yuko stated.
Yuki quickly changed and opened the door. “Ren, faint.” She monotone. Yuko’s face dropped until she smiled a big perverted smile.
“Oh ho~ It was th..” Yuko was cut off by a hard smack to the back of the head.
“Oi! Squirrel! Didn’t hear Ren when he shouted!” Minami shouted at Yuko.
“Yeah, that he has a son.” Yuko said smiling.
“Son?” Everyone asked confused. Meanwhile Haruna helped Ren to come back to his senses.
“Yeah, Reki!” Yuko said smiling ear to ear causing Yuki to blush. Haruna was now helping Ren stand up. Everyone was quite.
*ring* ring*ring*
“Hello?” Ren answered a little out of it still.
“…”
“He did what?!” Ren shouted.
“…”
“Kumi put him on.” Ren said rubbing his temples. Now everyone in the room is looking at him, wondering what was going on.
“Reki? What did you and Yun do? ” Ren said in a calm voice.
“…”
*sigh* “Reki, how did he end up tying you to a bed poll? And how exactly did he over power you? Reki? Reki? Are you still there?” Ren asked in a worried tone.
Until loud yelling and shouted came out of his cell.
“AHH!”
“RUN!!!”
“REN HELP!!!!!!!!”

Ren ended the call and ran to his car with the girls following closing behind, Yuki already waiting inside his car.

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #84 on: May 28, 2012, 11:28:06 PM »
reserved spot for comment...

yuki being naughty on ren :on bleed:

i wonder how yuki and the others will react when they know about Ren's secret :hehehe:...

can't wait to see Reki-Yun TagTeam in action :kekeke:
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #85 on: May 28, 2012, 11:41:27 PM »
Reki getting tied up by yun and everyone thinks ren's son is reki cant wait until they find out about yun and yuki's reaction about it.
Your story is awesome hope you update soon.

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #86 on: May 29, 2012, 02:40:18 AM »
It so funny
PLEASE CONTINUED THE CHAPTER !
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #87 on: May 29, 2012, 06:29:34 AM »
wow wow wow renyuki scene awesome...

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #88 on: May 29, 2012, 07:10:13 AM »
thank you so much for the update i really hope you keep updating it i love this fic and the renyuki scene  :inlove: yuki being seductive  :drool: i like it  :mon evillaff: lol please update soon  :cool1:  :on gay:

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #89 on: May 29, 2012, 07:13:42 AM »
 :luvluv1: :luvluv1: renyuki moment.. pls make this more hahah

 :onionwhip: :onionwhip: the trouble maker make the move..  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

 :bow: :bow:please update soon

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #90 on: May 29, 2012, 08:16:51 AM »
im not a big fan of yukixrena,but aftr i read this,im starting to be big fan,tnx to ur amazing fic...
I love the atsumina verY much,i hope u continue to make me smile aftr i read this!!tnx again,and im waiting to ur nxt update!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #91 on: May 29, 2012, 10:04:21 AM »
WOW Black's sexy momen!!!!

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #92 on: May 31, 2012, 07:20:26 PM »
Oh, I wonder how others will react about Yun being Ren's son  :D :D

And BlackRen smexy teasing scene  :drool: :drool: :drool:
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #93 on: June 01, 2012, 11:34:33 PM »
 :shock: Sok-san updated! YEI! :nya:

 :on spit: So much hilariously Yukirin/Black Oh Gosh  :on bleed:

Yukirin you teaser no that is definitely not her Black mode hahaha if it was I would think that
she'd punch Ren instead. It's more like a Yuki hentai or seducing mode  XD


Ah what is happening to Yukis son hahahaha
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #94 on: June 02, 2012, 05:48:05 AM »
Wow! I'm really enjoying your fanfic! I love Yun and Reki haha, they could totally be Rena's sons!

Please continue it soon!
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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #95 on: June 04, 2012, 04:12:56 PM »
when will everyone find out the Ren is Rena !!!!!!!!?????????

i love this fic espically how Yuko and Takamian are pervs ahahaha

update soon

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. !0 Finally update!!!] May 28
« Reply #96 on: June 10, 2012, 05:32:57 PM »
I read this Fics All Over again...and Still Excited for the next chapter....

I just Realized that

YUN = Yuki + Ren

REKI = Ren + Yuki

Am I right ???
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After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part 1 update!!!] June 10
« Reply #97 on: June 11, 2012, 04:05:19 AM »
Hey!  :mon hi: I'm back!! haha.  :twisted:
Thank you to everyone who has left thank yous and to those who took the time to write those lovely and encouraging comments. :kneelbow:
And xxx220 you're right about
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YUN = Yuki + Ren
REKI = Ren + Yuki
 
I'm also thinking about having Yuki discover that Ren is Rena but I'll make that fun. hehe.  :ding: :mon devcandy: Don't know when I'll do it though hehe. Anyways here's the chapter hope you all enjoy it. Sorry if it's too short.  :mon sweat:


Chapter 11 Part 1

While Ren and everyone on the way to the house, inside the house.
“Jurina!!! Catch that lil demon!!!”
“I’m trying Mayuyu!!! Kumi!!Reki!!! Get something to tie him up!!”
“Reki, you really are Yuki’s son!!” Kumi cheered when Reki returned pulling a kid wagon with chains inside.
“Thanx.” He smiled.
“hey, he even brought chains to chain Yun.” Mayu said holding the chains up.
“Great! Let’s go!” Jurina said grabbing a chain.
 “Wait! Aish can’t she wait until we make a plan?” Mayu said shaking her head.
“No, you know how she is.” Kumi stated. “Let’s go Mayu and Reki, we need to chain that monster before he does anything else.” They started chasing Yun.
So far Reki was the only one who could keep up with him. “Yun! Stop! I won’t hurt you!” Reki shouted while chasing Yun.
“Really?” Yun stopped and looked at Reki.
“Yes, I swear. I’ll only get even with you for tying me up to the bed post.” Reki deadpanned while pouncing on Yun with the chains.
“Oi! Get off me!” Yun shouted struggling under Reki.
“No! You need to be punished!”
“No!”
“Midget stay still!!” Reki shouted trying to chain Yun.
“Who you calling midget?! Lilliputian!” Yun shouted turning the tables on Reki who’s now under him.
“Itsy-bitsy!” Reki shouted rolling over.
“itty-bitty!”
“diminutive!!” Yun shouted.
“Miniature!!!”
“manikin!!” Yun bit Reki ear.
“Small!!!” Reki shouted head butted Yun.
“Immature!!!” Yun shouted taking the chains from Reki.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” Kumi, Mayu, and Jurina shouted. (note: They have been standing there watching the two this whole time.)
While Reki and Yun fought
“Hey, doesn’t this kinda remind you of Yuko and Minami?” Kumi asked.
“Yeah, cuz their both small.” Mayuyu replied.
“But what’s got me more interested is that these two uses such big words against each while Yuko and Minami just use the word midget.” Jurina reasoned.
“True, but where the hell they these two learn such words?” Mayuyu asked.
“no idea.”
“Immature!!” Yun shouted.
“Premature!!” Reki shouted.
“Say what?!!!” They shouted at Reki last statement.
 When they turned they found Yun finishing on tying Reki up to a wooden chair.

“haha, see. As if you could beat me. And what’s up premature?”
“What’s up with immature?”
“Loser.” Yun said before running away from the ‘three babysitters.’
“Hey! Get back here!” they shouted.
“Hahahaha! Catch me if you can! Hahaha!!!.” Yun laughed running around. Kumi had cornered Yun after a while of running and was close to catching him when Yun suddenly charged and tackled Kumi’s right leg which caused her to fall.
Taking this chance to escape Yun ran up the stair towards Ren’s room but made a sudden u-turn towards the stairs when he saw Mayuyu in front of Ren’s room.

Ren, Yuki arrived first followed by the van where the others were in.
“Ren, can you please tell me what’s going on?” Yuki asked with concerned.
“I don’t know.” Ren said walking towards the door.
“Ren, why do we have a bad feeling about this?” Minami and Yuko whispered to Ren on both his sides (Yuko left, Minami right) when he put his hand on the door knob.
“He knows my secret.” He whispered back.
“Oh no.” They both said a little scared. And Ren opened the door.

“PAPA!!!! I want papa!!” Yun yelled running around the house while being chased by both Center and Nezumi.
“This kid is getting on my nerves.” Nezumi hissed while running after Yun.
“I wonder how the hell Ren could keep up with him.” Center said out of breathe while resting on the floor next to Kumi and Nazumi with a still tied up Reki.
“WHAT’S THE MEANING OF THIS!!!!” An angry voice boomed through the entire house. Frightening everyone.



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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #98 on: June 11, 2012, 04:34:12 AM »
thankyou so much for the update  :twothumbs i wish they would be a little longer tho anyways thankyou  :kneelbow: keep up the good work please update soon  :onioncheer:  and more renyuki please  :luvluv1:  :luvluv2: im in love with them lol  :lol: i love this fic your the best !!!  :peace: out ! 

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Re: After Majisuka Gakuen [Ch. 11 part update!!!] June 10
« Reply #99 on: June 11, 2012, 10:42:19 AM »
KYAAAAAAAA~!!!  :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: *TOTALLY in a fangirl mode* Ren must sound soooooo sexy in that mad voice of his/hers  :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: And those kids... They are beyond the words AWESOME, though.... Their vocabulary....  :mon nyah:

Anyway, I soooooooooooo will be waiting for your next update!!!!!

Yuki finding out about Ren being Rena? YES, please!!  :mon pray2: :mon trannie: :mon dance:
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