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Title: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 13, 2012, 07:40:07 AM
 Yoh  :hand: I decided to write another fic here!!! And it's takagaki again !!!  :ptam-ok: Let's spread the TakaGaki Love here!!!!!!!!!!! Come on Let's Go!!!!!!!!  :on gay:

 
 CHAPTER 1


 Sitting alone at their garden, Niigaki Risa look up at the night sky and smiled. She's thinking about what happened this whole day. Her small smile changed into a grin. She still remembers how Tanaka Reina, her crush, smiled at her. She blushed thinking that. Then suddenly..

 "Gaki.." There's someone calling her. She turned her head here and there. "Gaki.." She can't find the person calling for her although the voice sounds familiar. "Gaki.." The voice became more gentle. She stood up and walk a little towards their gate..no, the voice was coming from their neighborhood. Then she found the owner of the voice,  standing with her hands on her waist and calling for.. a dog?. Her neighbor smiled when the dog jumped on her. "Good girl Gaki.." Her neighbor chuckled. Then she seemed to notice her and waved at her. "Hey Risa-chan, what are you doing there?" Her neighbor asked innocently. Risa just frowned at her. She knows that it was one of her neighbor's funny actions. "I'm calling for my dog not you.." her neighbor said, suppressing her laughter.

 "Ai-chan.." she said not smiling. "Will you please stop calling your dog Gaki?"

 "Why?"

 "Because that's my name.!" She said stomping her feet.

 "Huh? I thought your name is Risa not Gaki.."

 "That's my nickname!"

 "Eh?But she's my dog, I have all the rights to give her that name."

 "But not my nickname!"

 "Oh sorry.. You can't change it. It was now written on her birth certificate.." Ai shrugged.

 "Birth certificate?!" She yelled.

 "Yupps! So, If you'll excuse me, I need to go.. ja ne!" Then Ai, together with her dog enters their house.

 "Baka!" She yelled again. now, her beautiful day became an unlucky day seeing her.

 It was Ai Takahashi. her classmate since kindergarten, until now that they were in college. And since Middle school, Ai Takahashi never failed to annoyed her. Almost every day, three times a day. And the worst, she's the bestfriend of her Reina. She sighed and she stopped thinking about her neighbor.

 "Just be thankful that you're Reina's bestfriend!!"

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 The next morning, she's getting ready for school. Someone knocked on her door. "Risa-chan..breakfast is ready..come down.. let's eat together with Ai-chan.."

 "Ehh?!" She immediately opened the door. "Ai-chan?"

 "Yes, come on!" Her mom pulled her to the kitchen and there she saw a ever gorgeous Ai Takahashi sitting there and talking with her sister.

 "What are you doing here?" She asked raising her eyebrow.

 "Eating.." Ai simply answered.

 "And why?" She asked again.

 "Risa, her parents are in a vacation now, So I invited Ai-chan here.." It was her Mom.

 "But Mama!" she said "I can't eat properly when she's here! She's a distraction!!"

 "Oh, please don't mind my beauty Risa-chan.." Ai said who earned a glare from her. She only smiled innocently. "Tita, Risa hate me.. i wonder why.. She's my only friend here after all."

 "You're not my friend." She argued.

 "But we're childhood friends ah! I can still remember when you and I made a promise under the moonlight that we will love each other forever.." Ai said smirking at her.

 "How dare you.."

 "Oh that's sweet.."

 "One word from you and -"

 "Is it true Ai-chan? You and onee-chan made a promise?" It was her sister.

 "Yes Erina-chan.." Ai answered not minding the death glare she's giving to her. "We really love each other back then."

 "Okay.. enough with this..!" She said standing up.

 "Hey ! Wait for me Risa-chan!" Ai said taking her own bag. "We're classmates you know.."

 "Ai-chan por favor!" She breathed hard. "Leave me alone!"

 "Huh? I'm not following you.." Ai said.

 "Stop making fun of me! Stop embarrassing me!" Her face turns red from anger.

 Ai only laugh at her. "I'm not making fun of you, I was-"

 "Shut up!" She hissed. "Shut up just once!" She said then she walked away from her.

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 In their University, Risa enters their room and was surprised  when she saw Tanaka Reina  talking with..well Ai Takahashi. She saw Ai look at her then she say something to Reina. Then Reina turned to her. "Yoh Gaki-san!"

 She automatically smiled. "Hi, Tanaka-san.."

 "Aw come on Risa-chan!" It was Ai. "Where's the monster-like Risa before?"

 She gave Ai a glare. "Shut up." She said between her teeth. Then she smiled at Reina again.

 "So, class is starting, See you..!" Reina walked of the room.

 "You really like her huh.." It was Ai again.

 Risa ignore her and she goes to her chair. "But sorry, Reina doesn't like you.."

 The bean try not to yell. She inhaled then exhaled before turning to her. "How do you know that."

 "She's my bestfriend,  I know all about her." Ai shrugged. "She liked cute women and although she's a petite one, she like tall girls, unlike you, you're an ordinary person."

 Risa stood up and walk to Ai with a mad expression and with a super saiyan aura. Ai only looked at her with a slight brightness on her eyes. "You know Ai-chan don't you dare to insult me again-"

 "I'm not insulting you, I'm just telling the truth."

 "You're insulting me!" She said breathlessly trying to be calm.

 "Risa-chan-"

 "Stop calling me Risa you're not my friend!"

 Ai sighed. "Okay.. I'll tell Reina about it then."

 "Tell her what?'

 "That you like her."

 "Oh no you won't do that!"

 "Wanna try me?"

 "Ai-chan!!!"

 "Reina likes someone else.." Ai said,serious. "Give up Risa.."

 "Don't tell me that thing.. you don't know anything."

 "If I were you, I would love someone else. you're pretty,  I'm sure there's someone who will love you, only you, don't focus yourself Reina, she doesn't like you and she'll never will."

 "If you're jealous Ai-chan, tell me, you don't have to say those things."

 "Me?Jealous?" Ai only laugh. "You think I'm jealous because of that? Oh come on!!"

 "Then fine!" Risa said then turned her back and she never saw Ai's bright smile turned into a sad one.

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 "Have you heard the news about Tanaka-san and the mysterious woman?"

 Risa stopped walking when she heard the name. "Yes, is it true?" There are 2 girls gossiping about Reina.

 "They said it's her girlfriend."

 "Really? we need to know all the details!"

 "Okay.. let's ask Takahashi-san!"

 Then she remembers Ai's word. 'Reina likes someone else..' Well she need to know the truth. She continued walking until she reached the rooftop. She knows Ai-chan was here. She opened the door and found Ai humming her head like crazy.

 "Ai-chan.." She called her.

 Ai turned to her then smiled. "Oi funny seeing you here Risa-chan.."

 "No it's not funny.." She said walking towards her.

 "Then, why are you here? do you need something?"

 "Yes, i have something to ask you.."

 "Sure go ahead.." Ai smiled at her.

 "Who's that mysterious girl with Reina?" Ai-chan's smile faded, then she heard her sighed.

 "You don't have to know.."

 "Why?"

 "It's none of your business anymore." Ai turned her back to her. Then she turned again with a mischievous grin. "I will tell you in one condition."

 "Okay.."

 "Just say: ' Ai-chan.. who is that girl? I need to know please?' with a sweet voice."

 "What? you're making fun of me again."

 "Okay.. I won't tell you then." Ai starts walking away.

 "Chotto!" Ai stopped walking. "I'll do that.! Risa said blushing.

 "Go ahead." Ai leaned her back at the door with her arms crossed on her chest.

 "A-ai-chan.. w-who's..t-that girl.. I-i-i need to know..p-please.." She pleaded with a 'sweet'voice.

 "Pft!" Ai covered her mouth. "What's that?" Ai started laughing and it really annoyed her. "Hahahaha!"

 "Stop laughing baka!" She yelled then she kicked Ai's knee.

 "Itai!" Ai kneel down. "what the.."

 "Are you going to tell me or what?!"

 "Don't shout at me!" Ai also yelled. "You were just asking me, you need to kind to me! I changed my mind i won't tell you who's the girl.!" Then Ai walked away from her.

 "What's wrong with her?"...

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 Happy birthday Sayu!!!  :on BDay: hihihihi ja ne!  :nya:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #1, 7-13-12)
Post by: kuro808 on July 13, 2012, 07:42:38 AM
Ai-chan playing games with Risa XD

Nice start to this fic too
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10,11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 14, 2012, 04:58:57 AM
 

  CHAPTER 2

 
 "Risa wake up.." Risa groaned and mumbled some incoherent words. "Risa wake up..!"

 "Let me sleep Mama!!" she whined.

 "Ah ah.. Time for breakfast.. come on! wake up.."

 Risa sighed then she rolled on her bed until she drop down on the floor. "Ahh.."

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 "Finish your breakfast quick Risa." Her mother said.

 "Why?"

 "You need to bring these foods to Ai-chan." Her Mom answered,giving her a plastic container. "She's sick."

 "Eh? Why me?"

 "Because she's your friend."

 "I am not." She pouts.

 "Take a bath first before you to her house."

 "Hmp!!"

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 "Ai-chan..!" Risa called outside, she was now in front of Ai's house. "Yohoo! Ai Takahashi!" She called again. She scratched her head. Then she saw Ai's head.

 "Risa-chan.." A weak voice calling her. "Come here.."

 "Eh?" She opened the front gate then she walked towards the front door and opened it. She stumbled on the clothes and things on the floor. Then she saw Ai sitting on the sofa,wearing a pair of pajama with a messy hair and red face probably because of her fever. "You deserve that Ai-chan..from bullying me." She said. Ai only smiled weakly at her. Her eyes seemed sleepy. "Have you take your medicine?" she asked. Ai only shook her head. The bean sighed. "Here, eat this first." Risa opened the plastic container then she take the chopsticks and get some foods and held it up to Ai's mouth. "Say ahh"

 "A-ah!" She watched Ai chewed the food until she finished eating. "Oishii.."

 "Thank my mother for that."

 "Nee Risa-chan.. are you going to take care of me today?" She asked still in a weak voice.

 "No, I'm here to take revenge.." She joked.

 "Arigato.." Ai said smiling then Ai hugged her. She felt her heart skip a beat because of that. She could heel Ai's hot temperature and her breathe on her neck."

 "Okay..okay.." Risa said stroking Ai's back. They were in that position for a minute so she decided to break the hug Ai's weight constricting her movement. "Ai-chan.." She called her but Ai didn't answer. "Ai-chan.." She gently lifted Ai's shoulder and found that she's now sleeping. "Sleep Well Sleepy head." Risa gently pushed her down on the sofa. She stared at Ai's face for a while. She's really pretty.. She touched Ai's face and stroked it. It;s so hot. It's quite funny to see her in this condition, so vulnerable. The bean stopped stroking Ai's face when she realized that she's blushing. Instead of doing stupid things, The bean decided to clean this house.

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 After an hour...

 "What are you doing here?" The first sentence Ai spoke when she woke up. She saw Risa cleaning her house.

 "Cleaning your house ojou-san.." Risa answered. She touched Ai's forehead then she nodded. "You should thank me.."

 "No need." Ai pushed Risa's hands away.

 "What?"

 "There's something fishy..why are you doing this?" Ai asked narrowing her eyes.

 "Because I'm your friend.." risa answered shrugging.

 "You said I'm not your friend."

 "That was a long time ago, forget about that." Risa smiled.

 "Don't fool me."

 "Okay..I'm doing this for you because I wanted to know something about that girl.. you know.. the mysterious girl with my Reina.." The bean admitted.

 "So, you're using me.." Ai mumbled. "I won't tell you about her, and stop saying 'My Reina' she's not yours." Ai said in a irritated tone. then she stood up and walked to the kitchen. But Risa followed her.

 "Ai-chan please!! Tell me something!!" she whined.

 "No and that's final.. and stop whining you're annoying me."

 "But Ai-chan!!"

 "If you are here just to ask that, then you can leave."

 "No." Risa said firmly.

 "Are you sure.."

 "Yes! I'm not leaving unless you tell me something.."

 "Okay.." Then,Ai, without a word, slowly unbuttoned her pajama top, one by one in a seductive way. Risa's eyes widened in shock. She feels her cheek  blush.

 "W-what are you doing!?" She asked in a panic voice.

 "What do you think?" Ai said.  She can see Ai's collarbone and a bit of her undergarment.

 "I-i.. S-stop stripping!!"

 "Why? this is my house, I can strip everywhere. "Ai said, completely finished on her strip show.

  Risa close her eyes tightly and covered it with her hand. "Pervert!!" She yelled then she quickly run almost bumping on a chair. "Itaii! I really hate you Ai Takahashi!!" And she could still hear Ai's laughter outside the house. She stands still in front of their house for a moment. Then she placed her hand on her left chest. "Stop beating fast.."

 "Risa.." She heard Ai calling her. But she didn't move. "Don't worry I'm wearing a shirt.." Ai chuckled.

 She turned to her finally. "What?"

 "Thank you.." Ai said in a soft voice, staring straight in her eyes. "Very much.."

 Risa cleared her throat. She wanted to say something but she can't because of the fast beating of her heart. So she just nodded her head and she enters their house.

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 Short chapter right.. hihihi  :philippines: :byebye: time to make some spell  :prayers:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #2, 7-14-12)
Post by: kuro808 on July 14, 2012, 06:13:34 AM
that little strip tease opened up a conversation between the two maybe a little more than they expected
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 16, 2012, 05:34:48 AM
 CHAPTER 3


 Silently groaned in frustration, Niigaki Risa drop her head on her laptop. She was doing her thesis. But she's definitely out of her mind. She remembered the fast beating of her heart last night when Ai-chan thanked her. She wasn't supposed to feel that way towards her. And besides, she liked Reina. "What am I thinking?" The bean closed her laptop and decided to to go to the bakeshop located inside in their subdivision. It's just a walking distance from their home. she entered the cute bakeshop owned by Tsuji Nozomi. And she frowned when she saw Ai on the counter talking to Tsuji. And at the same time, her crazy heart beat faster than usual.

 "Yoh Gaki-san!" Tsuji greet her with a smile.

 "Hi Nono.." She smiled then she turned to Ai and frowned again.

 "What are you doing here Risa-chan?" Ai asked. "Don't tell me you're following me here?"

 "Assuming.." She said and gave Ai a dirty look. "I'm here to buy and eat cakes.. it's a bakeshop not a street." She turned to Tsuji. "No offence meant Nono." Tsuji nodded her head. "People are coming here to taste the delicious cakes that Nono made, unlike you, you're just here to gossip."

 "Huh? Actually I was going to order a cake and gave it to you.." Ai said.

 "What?" 'Give me a cake?'

 'Yes.. I know you're in trouble making our thesis." Ai said, shaking her head. "Shocks! Risa-chan, you're hopeless.." She said trying not to laugh.

 Risa gritted her teeth and she clenched her hands into a fist. She thought she's concerned but she's not. "Well, I don't even need your cake, I can buy my own cake."

 "But I already bought your favorite chocolate mousse."

 "That's not my favorite.." She mumbled.

 "Hey Ai-chan.. stop teasing our little brat." Nono said smiling.

 "I'm not tesing her. bu the way, here's your cake. Good luck." Ai said giving her the box of cake then she leave.

 "Don't worry.. She really did buy that." Nono said.

 "I'm going to give it back to her." She said. Then she followed Ai outside. But she stopped on her tracks when she saw her talking with another girl She felt something's squeezing her heart. What's this feeling? Jealousy? No wait.. She's not jealous okay?

 "Ai-chan." She called but she's too busy flirting to that girl. "Ai-chan." She called again a little louder this time.

 "Oh Risa-chan!" Finally Ai turned to her.

 "Here's your cake." She handed her the box.

 "No, that's yours."

 "I said I don't need it."

 "But I bought that for you." Ai pointed the box of cake. Then she continued to chat with the girl again and it really pissed her off!

 "And I said I don't need this!" She said pushing the box  roughly on Ai's chest and she walked away.

 "Hey, lover's quarrel my friend?" A voice from her behind spoke. Risa turned to see Miyabi., she put her arms around the bean's shoulder.

 "Shut up Miya." Ai said takaing away Miya's hand on her shoulder.

 "Ai-chan, if you like her, then tell her." Another voice again It was Fujimoto Miki. "Or else.." Miki lifted her chin with her finger.

 "Don't touch Risa, idiot!" Ai said in a deadly tone before pushing Miki harsly. Then she gave the box to her again. "It's yours.. accept it or I'll throw it."

 "Come on Gaki-san don't accept that.." Sayu playfully said.

 "Shut up.." She glared at Sayu. "Risa.." Ai looked at her with a pleading eyes.

 She sighed. "Thank you.." She mumbled then Ai smile again.

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 "A cake!!" Erina jumped in joy when she saw the cake that she's holding.

 "Yupps! Come here let's eat this.." She smiled. "Where's Mama?" she asked.

 "Supermarket." Erina simply answered.

 Risa opened the box and cut the cake. She gave Erina a plate. "Ai-chan gave it to me."

 "Honto ni? Hmmhmm.." Erina just nodded her head. "She came here an hour ago, she's looking for you but I told her you're busy.."

 "Ahh.."

 "She really likes you onee-chan."

 "Ssh! Of course not! What gave you that idea?" She blushed.

 "Because.." Erina put her finger on her chin as if thinking for something. "She's always making you mad, that's her way of showing her affection."

 "Oh no not true.." She chuckled nervously.

 Erina shrugged. "Well, she told me that before.." Erina mumbled. But Risa didn't hear that.

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  :peace: hihihi ja ne !  :philippines:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: kuro808 on July 16, 2012, 06:38:56 AM
Erina gets cake and Risa still is confused on how to take Ai's affection
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: yellow on July 18, 2012, 01:11:21 PM
how comes i got this feeling that their relationship gonna be twists and turns
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 18, 2012, 01:17:39 PM
 hehe you'll see my friend :)
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: yellow on July 18, 2012, 02:01:19 PM
oh  :lol:
i'll wait to see  :lol: :lol:
can't wait to see your next chapter soon  :lol: :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on July 20, 2012, 10:27:21 PM
Yay, a Takagaki story!  :deco:

Lol, Aichan annoys Gaki-san xD And Gaki-san starts to have feelings towards Aichan  :wub: Or at least I think so.

And I laughed so hard when Ai started to strip in front of Risa xD Great way to scare someone away from you! Though I think later Gaki wont run away. She'll enjoy the show  ;) *Me and my perv mind...* xD

But nice story! =) I hope you will update more soon!
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #3, 7-16-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 25, 2012, 03:35:39 AM

 @ MsSmigge :  :lol: thanks for reading it my  friend.. hehe  and here's the next chapter !  :heart:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 25, 2012, 04:35:06 AM
 CHAPTER 4


  "Hey, this place is cute like me ne, Risa-chan?" Her cousin Sayumi smiled before she took a sip of her juice. Risa just nods her head. They were eating cakes at Tsuji's bakeshop while talking about random stuff.

 "Of course." Risa smiled as well. "It's even more beautiful because of my Reina."

 "Reina again?" Sayu rolled her eyes. "You know I'm starting to hear this name a lot, and its really annoy me."

 "I told you I like her." She pouts.

 "Yeah yeah.." Then they heard the sound of the bell chime at the door indicating that someone entered the bakeshop. "Oh kawaii.."

 Risa turned her head and she found Ai Takahashi there, walking slowly towards them and smiling at her. "Yoh Risa-chan! Nice seeing you here!" Ai said waving her hand then she looked at Sayu. "Hi there Miss?"

 "Sayu, Michishige Sayumi, Risa's cousin." Sayu smiled. "And you are?"

 "Takahashi Ai at your service."

 "Ah you're Risa's girlfriend?"

 Risa choked on her food when she heard that. She looked at Sayu with wide eyes but she just smiled innocently at her. Then she looked at Ai, she has a confused expression at first but eventually she smiled playfully at her. "Ahh.. no?" Ai said.

 "What? You're not? Oh.." Sayu then turned to her. "But she's your special someone right Risa-chan?"

 "Sayu what are you saying?!" She said blushing.

 "I never know you had a hidden desire at me Risa-chan, " Ai said smiling like a devil; herself.

 "Shut up!" she huffed grabbing Sayu's wrist and pulled her out oh that bakeshop. "Sayu are you crazy? Saying those things to that idiot?" She asked, irritation on her voice.

 "Hey, I;m just clearing your messy mind cousin, I know you like her, not that Reina." Sayu crossed her arms on her chest and smiled. " And that idiot there likes you too.."

 "Heh!"

 "Onee-chan!" Suddenly there's a cute little girl who come running to them.

 "Haruka-chan!" Risa smiled.

 "Onee-chan, Next would be my birthday! Please come to my party Onee-chan!" That cute little girl smiled sweetly then she looked at Sayu. "You too please onee-chan."

 "Aww what a sweet girl.. What's your name kid?" Sayu asked.

 "Kudou Haruka" The child answers.

 "Uhm what present do you like" Sayu asked again.

 "It's okay Onee-chan.." The kid shook her head.

 "Hmm what's your parent's name?" Sayu asked again. The kid told them her parent's name in confusion. "Okay because you're a sweet and cute little girl, I will also give your parents a gift." Sayu smiled.

 "H-hai.." Haruka nods her head still confused then she runs away.

 Risa looked at Sayu. "Sayu are you crazy? Why did you tell her that you're giving her parents a gift?"

 "Because she's cute like me!"

 "We all know you are not fond of kids." She frowned.

 "People changed."

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 "Ahh this is life.." Adjusting her black rimmed eyeglasses, Sayu take a sip of her orange juice. She was  at the front yard of her cousin's house, wearing a two piece swimsuit like she was in a beach.

 "Oh my gosh Sayu!!!" Risa immediately walked fast towards her with a wide eyes. "What are you doing?!" Risa asked in horror completely shocked at the scene. Sayu was wearing a swimsuit in their front yard!

 "Sunbathing.." Sayu simply answered.

 "Sunbathing?! In our garden?! Are you out of your mind?! This is not a beach!! My goodness!"

 "Nope, I'm just imagining that I was in a beach ,"

 "OMG Get dress! What if someone see you?!"

 "Why?"

 "We're going to buy a gift remember?"

 "But I'm not in the mood for that." Sayu whines.

 "Sayu you promised the little girl that you're giving her a gift and her parents!"

 "Yes but I'm too lazy to go out. Please buy it for me ?" Sayu looked at her with a cute puppy eyes or rather bunny eyes.

 She sighed. "Okay but please wear a decent dress.."

 "Okay!"

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 Niigaki Risa jumped in shock when someone grabbed her shoulders from behind. She turned around and saw Ai there, smiling from ear to ear. She could have kick her right now if they weren't in a public place. She was walking slowly in a mall buying a gift for Haruka, thanks to Sayumin. "You?"

 "Yes me.." Ai chuckled.

 "What are you doing here?" She asked.

 "Huh? Are you alright?" Ai said chuckling a little. "Shopping of course how about you?"

 She held up the plastic she's carrying. "Shopping also."

 "Let me help you.." Ai took the plastic from her hand. "Woah! Risa-chan what's this? A steel?"

 "No, that's a bowl for Haruka's birthday, Sayu promised her that she would also give her parents a present."

 "Huh? What-"

 "Ai-chan! Gaki-san!" They turned their head and found Tanaka Reina walking towards them.

 "Hey Reina.." Ai smiled.

 "What are you two doing here?" Reina sked. "Don't tell me you're dating?"

 "Ah no-"

 "Yes we're going out." Her words being cut off when Ai the devil spoke. Then Ai's arms snaked around her waist and held it tightly.

 "Oh you two being together are cute!" Reina said smiling. "Take care of my friend ne Gaki-san?"

 "No we are not a-"

 "Oh yes she would don't worry.!" Ai laughed. "In fact-ouch!" Ai silently groaned in pain when she stepped hardly on her feet.

 "Yes Ai-chan?"

 "Aww.. n-nothing.. " Ai said trying her best not to yell in pain.

 "Okay.! I'll leave you two then, enjoy your date!" Reina waved at them then she started walking away.

 "Risa-chan that hurts!" Ai whined!

 "What the hell have you done!!" She pinched Ai's cheek.

 "Aww! Itai! That really hurts!" Risa let go of the cheek. Ai rubbed her red face and looked at her. "Why?"

 "Why? Baka! Why did you tell those things to Reina?!"

 "Okay I'm sorry I-"

 "Shut up go to hell!" She grabbed the plastic on Ai's hand then she kicked ker on her knee and she leave Ai-chan there groaning in pain.

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 hope you liked it   :sweatdrop:  :nervous so see you bye  :philippines:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #4, 7-25-12)
Post by: kuro808 on July 25, 2012, 07:43:57 AM
Sayu :lol:

Risa and Ai are in a battle with each other
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #4, 7-25-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on July 27, 2012, 08:00:10 PM
Aww this chapter was funny as hell!! xD


They were eating cakes at Tsuji's bakeshop while talking about random stuff.


OMGLOL Tsuji's bake shop??!! xD Somehow I could see Tsuji working at bake shop... x)


 "Ah you're Risa's girlfriend?"

 Risa choked on her food when she heard that. She looked at Sayu with wide eyes but she just smiled innocently at her.


Sayu I love you  :luvluv2: Score!  XD


 "Oh my gosh Sayu!!!" Risa immediately walked fast towards her with a wide eyes. "What are you doing?!" Risa asked in horror completely shocked at the scene. Sayu was wearing a swimsuit in their front yard!

 "Sunbathing.." Sayu simply answered.

 "Sunbathing?! In our garden?! Are you out of your mind?! This is not a beach!! My goodness!"

 "Nope, I'm just imagining that I was in a beach ,"

 "OMG Get dress! What if someone see you?!"


Niigaki Risa, the reaction queen <3

 "What are you two doing here?" Reina sked. "Don't tell me you're dating?"

 "Ah no-"

 "Yes we're going out." Her words being cut off when Ai the devil spoke. Then Ai's arms snaked around her waist and held it tightly.

 "Oh you two being together are cute!" Reina said smiling. "Take care of my friend ne Gaki-san?"


You heard that Gaki-san! You two are just too cute together  :luvluv1:

But Risa was evil when she left I in the shop and kicked and yelled at her :cry: Damn it make it up to her!!  :angry:

Nice chapter! Hopefully we will get more soon again  :)
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on July 30, 2012, 06:09:24 AM
 CHAPTER 5


 "Happy Birthday Haruka-chan!" Every one clapped their hands after singing a happy birthday song for the birthday girl Haruka.

 "I'm starting to like this party Risa-chan. They have different kinds of guests here." Sayu told her.

 "What do you mean?"

 "Look at them, there are adults, young, not so young, and young at heart." Sayu chucles.

 "Huh? You're funny." Then she looked on the guests, of course Tsuji Nozomi was here, Fujimoto miki, couple Ishikawa Rika and Yoshizawa hitomi and Takahashi Ai. Reina wasn't here because of her schedule and even Kamei Eri.

 "Hey, I'm going to get some food, how about you.." Sayu asked standing up.

 "Un, go ahead.." She smiled and her simple smile became wider when she saw 2 kids blocked on Sayu's way. Let's see your temper there cousin.. she thought. Then she heard someone who cleared her throat behind her. She turned her head and found a plate full of food in front of her holding by Ai.

 "I saw you not getting any food so as a good friend, I brought you these." Ai smiled. Risa just sighed. Since when did Ai became this beautiful? She took a plate. "thanks.."

 "Aww what a sweet girlfriend you are Ai-chan.." Pretyy-handsome Yoshizawa Hitomi spoke. Beside her was her lover Ishikawa rika.

 "She's not my girlfriend Yossi."

 "Really? Then you should tell her now that you like her-ouch!"

 "Shut your mouth Yocchan! Go get me a cake!" Rika pulled Yossi on her ears away from them. She looked at Ai with a confused expression. She saw Ai's face blushed a little and then she turned to her.

 "Ah I.. I'll get you a cake too Risa-chan!" Ai said quickly walking away from her.

 Did Yossi was trying to say that Ai like her? She secretly smiled and watched Ai-chan's back.

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 Michishige Sayumi slowly walking down the sidewalk of this subdivision. Risa was in school that's why she was going alone to eat cakes. "Anyway, why did I take this fan again?" she asked herself while looking at the fan she was holding , there was a printed face of Reina there. She threw it away out of nowhere and it landed on someone's front yard.

 "Hey! Who the hell threw this damn fan here!"

 Sayu flinched a little then she turned to see a woman standing angrily on her yard holding the poor fan. the woman has a beautiful face, sleepy eyes and a pouty lips she had never seen. Then her gaze moved down on the woman's neckline and saw a necklace. She narrowed her eyes to have a better look at the pendant. She had that kind of pendant too but she gave it to a special friend. She looked up again to the woman's face and realized something. "Eririn!!!" She pointed the woman.The girl looked at her with wide eyes and with a knotted forehead. Sayu called her again. "Eririn!!!"

 "Excuse me do I know you?" the woman asked.

 She smiled and walk towards the girl and hugged her. "It's me! Sayumin! Michishige Sayumi!!"

 The girl broke the hug and looked at her. "Sayumin?"

 "Yes!Remember that pendant? I gave that to you!"

 "I'm sorry but I don't know you.."

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 Sayu again was bored! She was left again alone on their house! She thought Risa would spend a time with her that's why she decided to have a vacation here. it's a good thing saw her childhood friend here. I'ts been ten years since she last saw Eririn. And speaking of her.. The door of the bakeshop suddenly open and her prey enters the shop with a serious face as usual and was carrying a laptop. She sat  on the table away from her. Sayu knew that Eri saw her. So she sat up, with a coffee jelly in hand, and walk towards Eri.

 "Oi Eririn what's up?" But Eri only looked at her then she went back typing again. Then a waitress approach them and ask Eri's order and leave. "It was nice seeing you here Eririn." She smiled.

 "Don't call me Eririn.. I'm not a kid anymore." Finally Eri talked to her.

 "Wooh! You must be a big and pretty woman now but you're still the little Eririn I used to know.. And besides I'm your bestfriend."

 "You're not my besfriend."

 Sayu frowned but she smiled again. "Okay fine, just friends.. so how are you these past 10 years?" She asked.

 "Sayu will you please stop talking to me I'm busy!" Eri said in a irritated tone.

 "Oi your temper Eririn.. I told you too much radiation is bad for your health. You should only look at me.. I'm cute.. so it's healthy.."  She winked.

 "Don't you know you are disturbing me? Can't you see I'm busy?"

 "You should loosen up a bit, come on take a break, look at me I'm too smart to have a grand vacation." Sayu shrugged.

 "That's not a talent.. laziness.."

 "Yes you're right!" She smiled and took a spoonful of coffee jelly but she choked on it. she looked at Eri and make a peace sign.

 Eri just sighed then she move her hands upwards. She brushed  the corner of Sayu's mouth by her thumb. Sayu blushed and felt her heart stop beating for a moment. "I'm not doing this for you.." Eri said still wiping her kips.

 "Okay.." She nodded.

 "Don't assume that I'm concerned."

 "Sure.." Eri sigh then she stood up. "where are you going?"

 "Leave." Then Eri walk out of the shop.

 "You annoyed Eri again huh Shige-san?" Bakeshop owner Tsuji Nozomi approach her.

 "Nah .."

 "I never know she's your friend.."

 "Ah yes.. She's my childhood friend in Yamaguchi.. but she transfered to another school in high school.. I was her saviour there when our classmates bullying her."

 "What? Eri? Being bullied?" Tsuji laughed.

 "Yes.. but I'm glad she's a matured person now. by the way I really love this coffee jelly Tsuji-san.. It was the best coffee jelly!"

 "Really? I'm glad.. I will give you a 30 % discount for that!" Tsuji smiled.

 "Wow! thank you can I kiss you?"

 "That might be a nice idea but I think Eri won't like it." Tsuji pointed the door and saw Eri enters again "Oh Eri did you forgot something?" Tsuji asked.

 "Yes, my ballpen." Eri answered. Then she looked at her. "Are you finish eating that?" She asked her.

 "Huh? Ah yes?"

 "Well then let's go.!" Eri took her hands and hold it then she pulled her out of the bakeshop.

 TO BE CONTINUED.....

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  :dizzy: I hoped you liked it! See you next time!!
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
Post by: kuro808 on July 31, 2012, 07:05:08 AM
30% discount lol
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on August 03, 2012, 07:46:42 PM
Ai-Chan is being cute and serving Gaki-san some food  :wub: Kawaiii!
Gaki should finally realize that she and Ai are meant to be xD Everyone else can see it so why can't those two too?  :roll:

That Eri/Sayu interaction confused me a little bit  :dizzy: But maybe it will comes more clear in the future  ;)

Hopefully you will write more soon and make TakaGaki closer to each others onegai   :luvluv1: :kneelbow:
Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on August 04, 2012, 04:07:06 AM
 ^ of course I would write more Takagaki raburabu here!!!   :glasses:don't worry  :bingo: hihihihi  :ding:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
Post by: yellow on August 04, 2012, 10:54:17 AM
Chapter 4.
it seems like aichan like the bean is an open secret that everyone knows except the bean...
finally.. the bean seems a bit soften on her attitude towards aichan...

Chapter 5.
feel like there is kind of misunderstanding happening between KameShige in the 10 years separation
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #5, 7-30-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on August 04, 2012, 07:16:42 PM
^ of course I would write more Takagaki raburabu here!!!   :glasses:don't worry  :bingo: hihihihi  :ding:

Awwww YES!! :inlove: :inlove: *Can't wait*
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on August 06, 2012, 05:33:47 AM
 CHAPTER 6


 THE CONTINUATION...


 "What's with that look?" Eri asked her still dragging her out of the bakeshop.


 "What look?" Sayu asked back.


 "I saw you talking to Nono and it seems important."


 "Are you jealous?"  Again, Sayu decided to tease her little Eririn.


 "Of course not.." Eri stopped walking and she looked at her. "Why would I?"


 "Yay.. Come on Eririn.." Sayu smiled mischievously. "Don't be shy.. I know you're jealous but don't worry Eririn, you are still my bestfriend!!! "


 "Eri sighed deeply. "I said I'm not jealous!"


 "Then why are you still holding my hands?" Sayu raised her brow.


 "I'm not holding your hand."


 "You are.." Sayu pointed their entwined hands. And only smiled when Eri immediately let go of her hand.


 "Goodbye." Eri said then started walking away.


 "Eririn wait!" Sayu walked faster to chase after Eri. And being an unathletic person, she tripped on her own feet and she fell down on the ground, her knee first. "Itai.!" She yelled in pain.


 Eri stopped walking and turned around only to see Sayumi rubbing her knee. "Aish.." She walked back towarrds her 'bestfriend'. "What happened?


 Sayu looked at her in disbelief. "What do you think?" She asked sarcastically.


 Eri help her to stand up. "Come here let's clean your wound before it get infected." Eri said walking ahead her.


 "Where to?"


 "My house.."

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 "Your house is boring.. lifeless.." Sayu commented after entering Eri's house. "It's like a haunted house." She added.


 "Then leave." Eri said, serious and with a knotted forehead.


 "I'm just saying my opinion.." Sayu pouted.


 "Will you please keep quiet for a while Sayu? And sit down so I can clean your wound! You're not a kid anymore so please don't act like one!" Eri said obviously annoyed.


 "Okay.." She sat on the couch comfortably while Eri sat on the floor to get eye level on her knee. She took out some cotton balls and alcohol on a medicine box.


 "Eririn can I ask you a question?" Sayu asked as she placed her hands under her chin and looked at Eri. She chuckled when she saw Eri's forehead knotted in annoyance.She's very way too different from her Eririn 10 years ago. She still remember the little girl who always crying to her because of their bully classmates. Sayu smiled at the memory. And when they were on their 6th grade, their classmates threw Sayumi's bag on a tree. She feels so helpless back then. But Eri climbed the tree to get her bag. But after graduation, Eri's parents decided to leave Yamaguchi because of their jobs. That's why she gave Eri her necklace as a remembrance.


 "What's funny?" Eri asked.


 Sayu shook her head. "Nothing Eririn"


 "Stop calling me Eririn!"


 "Do you have a lover Eririn?" Sayu asked and smiled when Eri's face turns red.


 "Yes.." Eri simply answered.


 "Ows? Do I know her?" She asked again. Chuckling a little.


 "What's funny?" Eri pressed the cotton hardly on her wound. Sayu yelled in pain. "I'm sorry.." Eri carefully blow air on her knee to reduce the pain. "You alright?" Eri asked worriedly looking at her.


 Sayu blushed so she shifted her gaze on the floor. "Y-yeah.." she answered not looking directly into Eri. She breathed slowly to at least keep her heart from beating fast. "Thank you.." She said standing up. And in her haste, Sayu bumped her injured knee on the couch. "Ouch!!!" She was about to fell down when Eri caught her but because she was more heavier, they both fell down with Sayu hovering Eri.


 "Eri can I-wahh!" The door burst open and they saw Yossi froze in place with her hands covering her eyes. "I'm sorry!" Then she closed the door again.


 Sayu's eyes widened when she realized their position. She quickly stood up  and walked towards the door. She was about to open it but again, it bursted open again hitting her forehead. "I think I'm gonna die.." She whined. She was going to kill that person behind the door but it was her cousin Risa.


 "Oi what happened to your face Sayu?"


 "It's your fault.. by the way what are you doing here?" She asked Risa.


 "Ah Yocchan told me to come here to witnessed the intimate scene you and Eri were doing.." Risa smirked.


 "What?!" She blushed again. She turned to Eri. "Tell her nothing's happened!"


 "Not because no one was looking means nothing's happened." Eri said fixing Sayu's messy hair.


 Risa laughed at her. She couldn't believe it! With her heart pounding faster against her chest and with her face blushing red she hissed. "Tell Risa the truth!"


 "Hmm?"


 "Argh!Baka!" She walk out of the house but she was still on Eri's backyard when she saw Fujimoto Miki, Tsuji Nozomi, Yoshizawa Hitomi. And they are all smirking at her. "What?!"


 Yossi spoke. "How was your 'session' with Kame?"


 "Mou baka!baka!baka!!!!!!

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 yay! next is TakaGaki !  :onioncheer: :glasses: bye..........................
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #6, 8-06-12)
Post by: kuro808 on August 06, 2012, 05:43:43 AM
Poor Eri has to suffer through the Sayu blitz
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #6, 8-06-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on August 06, 2012, 06:12:41 AM
yay, Sayu Eri interaction!  :luvluv2:



 "Ah Yocchan told me to come here to witnessed the intimate scene you and Eri were doing.." Risa smirked.


LOL, surprisingly it was Yossi's idea to do that xD

Next up is TakaGaki?  :luvluv1:  :wub: Oh yes! XD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #6, 8-06-12)
Post by: yellow on August 07, 2012, 04:12:02 AM
 :lol: kameshige interactions :lol:
finally got to see sayu being the person to be teased... it is just one of rarest phenomena to have happened XD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on August 10, 2012, 10:31:43 AM
 CHAPTER 7


 "My gosh Risa! Will you please stop walking?! You make me feel dizzy!"


 Risa stopped wandering around her room and she turned to Sayu who just sigh. But she continued walking again. She heard her cousin groaned. What was she doing anyway? Just in a moment she wanted to go out of her house.


 "Relax Risa what's happening? Why are you so uneasy today?" Sayu asked.


 "Nothing.." She sighed. Then she look outside of her window. Where is she?' She thought.


 "You're looking for Ai-san?" Sayu asked smirking at her.


 "O-of course not!" She denied but deep inside she wanted to see that monkey.


 "Let's go to Tsuji's bakeshop.. I want to eat coffee jelly, Tsuji-san gave me a 30% discount because of my cuteness.." Sayu said standing up from her bed. "And besides it's your sem break so have fun!"


 "Okay.. She smiled.

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 "So. you and Eri are childhood friends? How come I didn't know that?" Risa asked her cousin as she played the straw of her orange juice.


 "Of course, She's my friend from Yamaguchi.. We're bestfriends"


 "Ah.." Risa looked outside of the shop. Her heart beat fast when she saw Ai Takahashi standing meters away from her while eating some street foods. Then Ai seemed to notice her then smiled and waved at her. Then Ai mouthed words she can't understand. But then again one girl approached her so they lost their communication. Risa frowned. "Stupid monkey.." She unconsciously said.


 "Who is the baka?" Sayu also looked outside then she chuckled. "I see.. jealous bean.."

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 "Ohayo Onee-chan!"


 Risa yawned rudely before she smiled to her little sister. "Ohayo Erina.." She rubbed her eyes. Then she turned her gaze to the small figure beside Erina. "Who's that kid?" she asked.


 "Ah! He's Len! Ai-chan's nephew." Erina answered. "He's going to have a vacation here." Erina turned to Len "Ne, Len-kun, introduce yourself to Risa nee-chan.."


 The little boy looked at her. She smiled. Then chuckled when he blushed. Risa bent down and patted the boy's head. "Kawaii"


 "He's my nephew that's why he's cute.."


 Risa looked behind Len, She saw Ai standing comfortably leaning her back on the wall while chewing something. "What are you doing here?" She asked in a rude manner.


 "Hah.. Len and I are going to eat breakfast here." Ai simply answered. "Right Erina-chan?"


 "Yupps!" Erina giggled.


 "How old are you Risa nee-chan?" Len suddenly asked not looking at her.


 "18 years old Len how about you?" She smiled.


 "18? I am 8 years old, When the day comes that I'm already 18, let's get married nee-chan.."


 "Huh?" Risa blinked a couple times before she burst out laughing. But decided to play along with the kid. "Of course Len.. because you're a cute little boy..!" She ruffled the boy's hair.


 "Hey Len! What are you saying!" Ai grabbed Len's wrist. "Stop saying things like that! you're still a kid!" Then Ai turned to her. "And you! Stop spoiling him!" Ai shouted.


 "Don't yell at me!"


 "I'm not yelling at you!"


 "You are!"


 "Excuse me.." It was Sayu still in her pajama. "Ai-san was just jealous.. that's it! Now will you please let me sleep?!"


 "I'm not jealous.." Ai mumbled but with a slight blush on her face. "Let's go Len, let's eat.." Ai walked away.


 "Hai.." Len answered.


 Risa just smiled. " Hey Sayu let's eat.."


 "Let me sleep.." Sayu whined before entering her room again.


 Risa secretly smiled when she saw Ai lightly hit Len's head. "Baka.."

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 "Here Ai-chan.. I know it's your favorite so I cooked it for you.. " Risa's mother happily serving food to their 'visitor'. "And Len-kun too.."


 "Thank you Tita your the best! I love you!" Ai gave her mother a thumbs up. Her mother just smiled sweetly at her. "Can Len and me eat again at lunch here?" Ai asked her mother.


 "Just Len... not you.." Risa said. "Your house was near, so near I could walk in 6 seconds, you don't have to eat here.."


 "Risa that's rude! Don't talk to Ai-chan like that.." Her mother told her with a playful glare. "You know Ai-chan can cook.. And her parents are still in a vacation.."


 "Yupss! Thanks again Tita!" Ai looked at her. "Risa don't be so heartless.. you know I-"


 "Shut up.." She glared at her. "Don't talk to me as if we're close friends.."


 "I'm your bestfriend.." Ai said innocently.. "I still remember when we made a -"


 "Stop remembering something!" She hissed. "Stop talking! Or better, talk to yourself only."


 "I can't.. I mean I love talking to you.." Ai said with a sly smile.


 "Whatever.." She looked at Len. and noticed that he was not eating his food. "Why are you not eating your food?" She asked. Len just shook his head. "Here.." Risa takes a pork from her plate and held it up to Len's mouth. She smiled when Len took a bite on it.


 "Nee-chan let's go the park!" Len said.


 "No." It was Ai. "You're  going to help me arrange your things.."


 "But-"


 "No and that's final.."


 "You're being cruel Ai-chan.." Risa said. "Don't worry Len, I'll go with you to the park after you settle your things okay?"


 "Hai!" Len nodded.


 "Hmp stupid Ai-chan.." She mumbled....

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 I'm sorry it's a short chapter..  :nervous but hope you liked it!! Don't worry I would write more TakaGaki ..  :byebye:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #7, 8-10-12)
Post by: risa_ai on August 10, 2012, 01:49:45 PM
JEALOUSEEEEEEHHHH. xD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #7, 8-10-12)
Post by: yellow on August 10, 2012, 04:14:39 PM
I wonder who will to confess first.... or they just drag on until eternity :lol:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #7, 8-10-12)
Post by: kuro808 on August 10, 2012, 05:58:42 PM
 :lol:  poor Risa has to suffer through that
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #7, 8-10-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on August 12, 2012, 02:37:39 PM
OMG HOW CUTE, Ai-Chan is jealous to her nephew!! XD And I bet Risa noticed that and teases Ai because of that ;) And that's loooooveee XD And Sayu is the only one who notices/admits it. Damn Ai and Risa you're stubborn...

This chapter was quite funny with all the jealousy between Ai and Risa XD Hopefully those two will soon stop being stubborn...

Keep up the good work! We are waiting for more TakaGaki  XD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on September 19, 2012, 04:49:19 AM

 CHAPTER 8


 "Eririn!!!!!!"


 "Damn it !" Kamei Eri muttered those words as she walk faster to prevent the clingy bunny on following her. It's not that she hated her childhood friend, it's just that, Sayumi was really annoying her everytime she's with her.


 "Eririn wait for me mou~~ !" Ichiban kawaii Michishige Sayumi pouted. She was about to go to Tsuji's bakeshop to eat something sweet, but she saw her bestfriend walking on the sidewalk with a serious expression on her face as usual. So, as a cute and concerned citizen of this subdivision, she decided to lighten up the mood of her bestfriend. "Yosh! Gotcha!" Finally she reached Eri's arm.


 "Do you mind?" Eri said, referring her arm she was holding.


 Sayu just grinned innocently. "Nope.. I don't mind at all.. I'm just fine here.."


 "Sayu.."


 "Why?" Her pout grew wider. "I'm just holding your arm you know.. And besides I'm your bestfriend .."


 "You're not going to make me win in this argument, aren't you?" Eri asked, her face showing defeat. Sayu just shook her head like a stubborn kid. Eri just sighed.


 "Ahem! Ahem! Ahem!"


 They turned their head where that voice came. And saw Yoshizawa Hitomi standing behind them, surprisingly she's not with her lover - Ishikawa Rika.. "Hey you Attorney!.. haha! You let this cute bunny win against you? wow! that's new! could it be that..."


 "Shut up Yossi.. What are you doing there?" Eri asked.


 Yossi just shrugged. "Walking?" Yossi answered. "How about the both of you? what are you two doing here? Could it be that......."


 "Could it be that what? Enough with your perverted thoughts.." Eri released her hand from Sayu.


 Yossi laughed then she turned to Sayu. "So, Shige-san, Do you like it here?" She asked.


 "Yes of course! " Sayu answered smiling. "I like the ambiance, the people they're so cute ! I want to live here.."


 "Well then, you like the people here? Do you want to have a lover here? Some of us are still single you know.."


 "Oh really? Who's still available?"


 "Oh, there's Miki, Reina, Nono-"


 "Stop saying nonsensical things to Sayu!.." Eri cut in. She looked at Sayu. "And you.. don't even listen on everything she said okay? Come here!" Eri pulled her away from Yossi.


 "And oh! Ai-chan is single too! But her heart is officially taken by your  cousin!" Yossi shouted. She just waved her hand to her.


 "Where are we going Eririn?" Sayu asked. Eri didn't answer. "Hmm.. are we going to have a date? Aish! why you didn't tell me!"


 Eri stopped walking. And looked at her. Sayu smiled.. her charming smile. "What are you saying? Have you eaten your breakfast?" Eri asked.


 "Huh? Not yet? Aww Eririn~ You're concerned? You're so sweet Eririn~ !" Sayu embraced Eri. "Oi if you like me Eririn, all you have to is tell me!!! "


 "I see.. You're not yet eaten your breakfast that's why you're saying that things. I would tell Gaki-san to make sure that you'd take your meal and medicine in exact time so you won't disturb me.."


 "Mou~" Sayu smiled. "Eririn~~"


 "Stop calling me Eririn!"


 "Okay.. but I'm hungry.." Sayu stroked her stomach.


 "Well then go home and eat !"


 "Hmp! don't want!" Sayu said. "Just let me stay with you Eririn please???"


 "Sayu.." Eri sighed deeply. "I'm busy.. I need to go to Miki to give these paper to her.."


 "Miki? Eririn! could it be that you and Miki are.."


 "No.. You know Miki is the owner of this subdivision right? It was just a business proposal.." Eri seriously said. "You understand now? I'm in a hurry so please don't disturb me.. instead, go home.."


 "Let me go with you! I promised I won't distract you or something!" Sayu insisted using her puppy eyes. Eri think for a moment before she nodded her head. "Yatta!!!"

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 "Ohayo Ai-chaaa~n!!!" Ai Takahashi opened her door and got surprised when a cheerful voice greeted her. It was her pretty neighbor - Niigaki Risa, still in her green pajama and smiling at her like an idiot.


 "Oha..yo?" Ai looked at Risa. "Ah Risa-chan? what are you doing here so early?" She asked.


 Risa pouted but giggled at the same time. "Happy Birthday Ai-chaaaan!!!" Risa suddenly shouted then hugged her so tightly she can't breathe! "Mou Ai-chan you're now 21 year old so stop bullying and teasing me okay? Happy birthday!!!" Risa released the hug and stare at the now widened eyes - Ai. "Don't tell me you forgot your own birthday?"


 "Risa.." Ai whispered. She was so happy she wanted to kiss Risa! But of course she's not that insane to do that. Afterall, Risa treated as a enemy-turned-friend. "Of course not.." She answered. "Thank you.." She smiled.


 "Hmm.. wait here Ai-chan! I will just change my clothes then we'll talk about your party!" Risa said quickly then like a flash she disappeared in Ai's sight.

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 "A birthday Party??? No no no.. " Ai argued. "Gaki-san I'm not a kid anymore to have that kind of party!"


 "I'm not saying that it's a kiddie party with clown you know.." Risa smiled playfully. "But since Len is here by the way.. why not?" She joked.


 "I said no!!!" Ai shakes her head. "Are you going to ruin my day?"


 "Okay.. okay.. how about this.. Let's have a party.. I mean a real party.. You, me, Sayu, Eri, Nono, Miki, Ishiyoshi, Reina..."


 Ai narrowed her eyes. "You're doing this to see Reina.."


 "Hey! I'm doing this for you!" Believe me.."


 "How about Len?"


 "Erina is still a minor so, let her take care of Len.." Risa smiled. Ai smiled too. "What gift do you like Ai-chan?" She asked.


 "Yuo know Risa-chan.." Ai softly said. Moving closer to Risa. "I don't want a party.." She continued. "Or a birthday gift from anyone.." Ai stopped inches away from her face. "All I want is.."


 "What.. Ai-chan? What are you doing?" She asked breathlessly. Her heart beating loudly against her chest.


 "All I want for my birthday .. is you to kiss me.. Risa.." Ai boldly said, her eyes shining playfully. Ai smiled when Risa's eyes open widely. "That was just a simple wish Risa.." She whispered. "Risa.." She moved her head closer to Risa until..


 "Risa nee chan! Ohayo!!!" It was Len who interupted the much awaited kiss. "What are you two doing?" Len asked innocently.


 Risa blinked a couple times before she realized their position. She pushed Ai using her forehead. Ai let out a groan as she glared at Len.


 "Risa nee chan .. are you kissing my Ai nee chan?" Len asked again.


 "Haaah?!" Risa reacted stranding up from her seat. "Of course..not." She looked at Ai." Tell him the truth.." She said between her teeth.


 "The truth?" Ai smiled lazily. "Len, Gaki-san was just giving me a birthday gift.." Ai explained. Risa smiled. "A birthday kiss-itai!"


 "Ai-chan what are you saying?!" Risa blushed.


 "The truth! you don't have to slap me.. you know its my birthday!" Ai pouted. "Besides, you told me to tell him the truth-"


 "Enough!" Risa stomped her feet. "Goodbye! Sayonara!" She said walking to the door. But she turned to Ai before she left."Remember your party.."

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  :nervous hehe it's been a while ne?  :wigglypanda: I'm sorry.. I've been in a semi-dramatic state of lovelife..  :err: hihihi
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #8, 9-19-12)
Post by: risa_ai on September 19, 2012, 10:38:00 AM
OH STOP IT YOU, GAKI. xD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #8, 9-19-12)
Post by: yellow on September 19, 2012, 03:47:55 PM
i can't wait to see surprise in the coming party... best if someone would just confess XD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #8, 9-19-12)
Post by: kuro808 on September 19, 2012, 06:41:23 PM
Welcome back

Well Gaki-san in pajamas is awesome :lol:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #8, 9-19-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on September 19, 2012, 06:46:45 PM
Awww Len why did you do that??!! :angry: Takagaki was goign to share a kiss  :wub:

I so want to see that birthday party and hopefully Ai-chan will get her present from Gaki ;)

Write more soon! :cow:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #8, 9-19-12)
Post by: cmze on September 21, 2012, 11:52:27 PM
Thank you very much!

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!:)

i want also a birthday kiss from Risa! xD

i'm so loving this fic!  :wub: :wub:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on September 22, 2012, 08:09:18 AM

 CHAPTER 9


 "Hmp.. she's teasing me again.." Risa pouted. Walking slowly. "Anyway.. I need to organized that party." She smiled. It's not bad to be kind to her 'bestfriend'.


 "Hi Gaki-san where are you going?" Ishikawa Rika asked her.


 "Ah Rika-chan!" She smiled to her. "You're not with Yossi?" She asked back Rika just giggled. "Ah I almost forgot, please come on Ai-chan's house tonight at 7pm."


 "Tonight? Why?"


 "It's her birthday!" She answered jumping. "Please tell Yossi too."


 "Ah okay.."


 "So I'll see you tonight?" Rika ni=odded. "Ja ne Rika-chan" She waved her hand to Rika. "Okay next destination ! Tsuji's Bakeshop!"

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 Upon arriving in the shop. "Wow bingo!" Tsuji, Yossi, Miki, and Reina are here.. And Sayu and Eri?


 "Oi Gaki-san!" It was Reina.. "Where's Ai-chan?" She asked.


 "Reina don't ask her." Miki said. "Hi Gaki-san you kook lovely today.." She smiled.


 "She's Ai-chan's girlfriend.." Reina said innocently.


 "Ai-chan's girlfriend?!" Nono, Yossi An Miki yelled. Eri was just looking at her while Sayu is smiling.


 "Hey ! Don't look at me like that!" She scolded. She turned to Reina. "Reina-chan, Ai-chan' is not my girlfriend, when you saw us on the mall, what she said was not true." She smiled nervously.


 "Ah.."


 "So, what's your business here Gaki-san? Are you going to buy a cake? I'll gice you 10 percent discount because you're so pretty.." Tsuji said.


 "Since all of you are here anyway.. Please come on Ai-chan's house tonight at 7pm, it's her birthday.."


 "There's a party?" Sayu asked. "Eririn let's go there tonight ne?"


 "No. I'm busy." Eri answered.


 "Acting like a girlfriend huh?" Yossi teased. "That's a nice idea.." She smiled. "It's party party people!"


 "We're bringing alcohol?" Miki said.


 "Hmm okay.. And a cake too Tsuji-san." Tsuji laughed.


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 "HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!"


 "What are you doing here? You're not invited-Aww!" Takahashi Ai placed her palm on the top of her head. "Mou~ Risa that hurts!"


 "They're here to celebrate your birthday baka!" she scolded. "Please come in!"


 "We're just here to eat you know.." Miki joked entering the house and was holding a bottle of hard alcohol. "Because, Nono brought a cake! Yay!"


 "And it's free!" Yossi cut in, together with Rika as usual. "Enjoy the night with free foods!"


 "Ai-chan Happy birthday.." Rika gave Ai a small box. "Don't mind them enjoy the night.." Rika smiled.


 "Thank you.. how about you Yossi? Reina? And Miki?" Ai pointed the three. "Where's my gift?"


 "My girlfriend gave you a gift.. " Yossi reasoned. "Miki?"


 "I have wine.." Miki whistled. "How about you Reina?"


 "Huh? I-I can be your clown tonight.." Reina chuckled nervously. "Is that okay?"


 "Oh that's fine.." Risa said. "So what are we waiting for? Let's start the party.."


 "Where's Eri and Shige?" Tsuji asked.


 "Michishige Sayumi here present!!!" A voice coming from the door shouted. "And Kamei Eririn too!" It was Sayu, all the way dragging Eri.

 
 "Let me go Sayu! I told you I'm BUSY !!!" Eri tried to free herself from Sayu.


 "Hey Relax Eri.." Ai laughed. "Sayu pull her in!!! Enjoy the night  Eri my friend!!!" Ai takes the bottle from Miki and opened it. "Happy birthday to me!"


 And after 30 minutes, the killjoy turtle turned into a clingy turtle, beside her was a blushing bunny probably because of the alcohol. The two of them seemed to have their own little world. While Tsuji, Yossi and Miki battled for the bottle of wine. Ai was just laughing for Reina who's doing her task as a clown. On the other hand Risa was busy serving them foods.


 "Risa-chan! join us here!" Ai said. "Come here take a shot." Ai gave her a glass of wine.


 "Ah no no..I don't drink alcohol ai-chan.." She shakes her head.


 "Gaki-san! just have a taste!" Reina said.


 "Okay..just one okay? because it's your birthday!" Then she drank up that one glass. "Oh not bad at all.." She commented giving the glass back to Ai.


 "Then have another shot." Sayu said. "Ne Eririn?"


 "Un!" Eri just nodded, opening her sleepy eyes, Eri drop her head on Sayu's shoulder. "I'm sleepy Sayumin~!" The turtle whines.


 "Oh Eririn.. You can sleep here in my lap.. here.." Sayu gently lay Eri on her lap and softly tapped her head.


 "What a lucky turtle.." Tsuji frowned. "Hey Gaki-san have another shot. Miki give her more."


 "Sure!" Miki smiled. "Here Gaki-san.. don't be shy to ask me for another okay?" Then she laughed.


 "Oi Risa that's your last shot!" Ai said.


 "Okay.." And then again, she drank all again that shot. But not like the first time, she feels dizzy right now. "Woah."


 "I told you that's enough!" Ai walks towards her. "Are you okay?" She asked. Risa remained silent. "Hey are you okay?" Ai asked again.


 "He he.." Risa chuckled, obviously drunk. "Of coursh.." She hiccuped. "Give me another shot Miki!" Smiling, miki obeyed. "Thanksh!"


 "Hey that's enough!" Rika said. "She's totally drunk now!" Rika stood up and walks to Yossi who's sleeping. "Hey you! wake up Yocchan!" Rika shakes Yossi's body. "Hey we're leaving baka!"


 "Charmy.. let her sleep for a while.." It was Miki. Then she turned again to Risa. "Oi Gaki-san have some more!" Then she laughed again like crazy.


 "I said that's enough!" Ai said obviously annoyed. She tried to get the bottle from Miki but Risa grabbed it first before her. "Hey Risa give it back!"


 "Mou~ Ai-chaaa~n !!!" Risa cooed.


 Ai stepped backward. Surprised from Risa's change of personality. "W-what?" Ai continued to move backward. "Hey Take her away from me ! Reina!" Ai shouted but Reina just laughed at her.


 "Mou~ Aichan don't walk away from me! You said you want a birthday kiss from me." Risa pouted but then again she smiled. "Let me give you the best birthday kiss ever!"


 "Ai-chan you're gross.." Tsuji said. "But I'm so loving this scene."


 "Hey you're drunk!" Ai blushed furiously. "A-and I.. I was just joking when I told you that!" And then she moved backward until her back pressed on the wall. "Don't you dare to come near me!"


 All their audience laughed. well except Eri. "Gotcha! Ai-xhaaa~n !" Risa stopped. "Hmm.."


 "Wait Gaki-san.. don't kiss her yet.." Sayu interjected then she get something in her pocket, it's a cellphone. "Let me take a picture of.. yeah.." Risa giggled.


 "Ai-chaaa~n!" Risa dashed over Ai. "Happy birthday!!!"


 Then without warning she cupped Ai's face and kissed her fully in her lips. Everybody on the room gasped. They never thought that Risa was going to kiss her.! They thought she was just joking.Sayu as well who just have her cellphone hanging on the air. On the other hand Ai's eyes widened. 'She's kissing me for real?' she thought as she closed her eyes. 'The best gift I ever received.' Ai placed her hand on the back of Risa's head and pull her closer, kissing her back deeply she didn't care whether they have audience. 'Just this time.. let me tell you.. I Love You Risa..'
 Risa smiled on the kiss when she felt Ai relaxed. But she's totally feeling dizzy right now. So she reluctantly broke the kiss.


 "Risa.." Ai whispered.


 "Ai-chan.. Goodnight Bye!" Then she dropped her head on Ai's shoulder as Ai caught her.


 "Wow! That was.. wow !!!!!" Rika said standing up. "Be thankful that Yocchan was sleeping.. or else.." Rika chuckled.


 "That was... " Reina shook her head. "Ai-chan..!" Reina laughed. "You're blushing!"


 "Shut up.."


 "Oh no!!! I can't believe I never took that scene!!!" Sayu whined.


 "Well till next time.." Miki cleared her thought. "Woah.. I'll see you tomorrow guys.." Then she quickly run away.


 "How about Eririn?" Sayu asked.


 "Let her sleep here.." Ai said. "It was the best birthday party ever.. Thank you Risa.." She smiled.

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  :nervous hahaha I'm sorry it's a short chapter !!!  :doh:


 @risa_ai : stop what?  :dunno:

 @ yellow: how about someone got kissed?  :cow:


 @ kurosawa87: I'm back !!! from a dark place hahaha  XD

 @ MsSmigge: And Ai-chan got her best gift ever right? :glasses:

 @ cmze: New person! welcome!!!  :otomerika: I'm glad you liked it arigato!!! and here's my update!!! jajaan! :wigglypanda:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on September 22, 2012, 01:14:08 PM
got kissed  XD not bad... since that's the birthdday gift that she wants  XD
really is a waste that sayu didn't capture that scene... even that have no evidence but have witnesses.  XD XD XD
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: kuro808 on September 23, 2012, 07:56:04 AM
The Ai birthday chapter :lol:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: cmze on September 23, 2012, 11:01:06 AM
Thank u! thank u!  :wub: :wub:

that was great!  :inlove:

These girls are so funny the whole chapter is  :rofl:

please update soon!  :cow:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: MsSmigge on September 23, 2012, 05:58:10 PM
THEY KISSED!!!!  :cow:  :luvluv1:

Aww though Gaki was drunk as hell i bet she was serious with that kiss xD

Thouhg....



 CHAPTER 9


 "Ai-chan.. Goodnight Bye!" Then she dropped her head on Ai's shoulder as Ai caught her.



That was kind of a mood killer xDDD

But I got her best gift indeed and hopefully Gaki will remember (I doubt it) it x)

Keep up the good work!  :yossi:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: MisscLumsy26_o24 on November 01, 2012, 06:27:20 AM
 :roll: ooh' ! when would you update this ?? busy writing the devils kiss ??  :hehehe:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 06:49:47 AM
yes busy writing and doing stuff .. like imagining things .. busy with my lovelife and etc ..
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 07:08:37 AM
ahem... yellow also want to read this one... it has been a while you update... yellow want to know what happen next after that birthday kiss
i think you better get it update sooner :P
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mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 07:17:26 AM
when my inspirations came back :) please ? devil's kiss is my focus .. but who knows ? hehe
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 07:22:44 AM
ok.. i think other than this, you still me a shot on riho and ayuyu... i think better don't pressurise you anymore, or else later you gonna give angry with me... anything you write i will read and give you those comments   :thumbsup :grin:
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mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 07:27:20 AM
really ?! thank you ! you sure you want that as a oneshot only ?
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 07:30:19 AM
really ?! thank you ! you sure you want that as a oneshot only ?
anything... as long as you write, be it a shot or fiction  :thumbsup and as long as it's about them. :theking

because yellow want idea on them for my next shot on them :nervous

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mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 07:37:36 AM
hohoho please give me more time to write :)
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 01, 2012, 07:39:51 AM
no worry... you have that one month to write since yellow also a little busy now :nervous
take your time  :grin:

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mahal kita   :love:
i love you   :inlove:
wo ai ni   :heart:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: cmze on November 01, 2012, 08:05:42 AM
Hey i want qn update of this one  :w00t:

sl please.. please me beacuse i spoiled you ToO!!   :shakeit:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 01, 2012, 08:08:20 AM
i'll try okay ?! hehe :))
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 02, 2012, 01:21:08 AM
maikea, don't stop writing... if you ever do so, you are making me super angry >:(
and don't need to feel guilty towards me, it is my own fault. if you ever feel so, you should write more to make up to me  :yep: (you are fully aware that yellow is a total fan to your fics so don't stop writing  :D or else, i will really get angry with you  :angry:)


you know actually i intend to write a shot and get posted up to brighten up the situation. however, after reading this message that you want to stop writing for the time being, my mood was totally damned... now, i have no such mood anymore... :(
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 02, 2012, 02:02:13 AM
oh im sorry ! cheer up ! hehe.. i will give you ahm a good update ?
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
Post by: yellow on November 02, 2012, 02:29:41 AM
ok... but my mood is still quite condemned so i have no mood now to write...
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 09, 2012, 07:28:00 AM



 CHAPTER 10


 "Aww.. My  head  hurts.." Niigaki  Risa  slowly  sat  up  from  her  bed  while  rubbing  her  temple  gently. She  must  be  very  drunk  last  night  to  cause  this  headache. wait.. DRUNK??! She  was  drunk?! She  tried  to  recall  what  happened  last  night.. : Ai-chan's  party, friends  drinking, and.. and.. wait..  Maybe  she  needed  a  cold  shower  right  now.
After  taking  a  shower, she  walked  out  of  her  room  and  headed  to  the  kitchen. She  find  her  Mama, Erina  and  Sayumi  currently  eating  their  breakfast.
"Morning.." She  greeted.



 "Ohayo.." they  greeted  back. Risa  turned  her  gaze  to  Sayu  who  was  smirking  at  her  and  looking  at  her  playfully. "What's  up?" Sayumi  asked.


 "A  little  better  now.." She  answered. "Why  are  you  smirking  at  me  like  that?"


 "Oh  son't  mind  me, cousin.." Sayumi  giggled.


 "how  was  the  party  of  Aichan?" Her  mother  asked.


 "I..?" she  swallows  the  food  in  her  mouth. "I  don't  remember?"


 "Because  you  were  too  drunk  last  night  onee-chan!" Erina  chuckled. "Aichan  had  to  carry  you  all  the  way  here.."


 "Eh? really?"


 "Are  you  sure  you  don't  remember  anything? Everything  about  last  night?" Sayumi  teased. "you  were  so  hyper  to  the  point  that  you.. "sayu  smiled. "That  was  so  funny.."


 "That? I  don't  understand  you, Sayu." She  frowned. "By  the  way, Where's  Aichan  and  Len? They  should  be  here  eating  their  breakfast  too?" She  asked  when  she  noticed  that  her 'bestfriend' wasn't  here  to  eat.


 "She's  taking  Len  back  to  his  parents." Her  mother  answered, standing  up.


 "What? Why? The  vacation  hasn't  ended  yet.."


 "Ne, Gaki-san.." Sayumi  called  her. She  turned  to  her. "You  really  can't  remember  what  happened?  She  asked  again.


 "I  told  you  I  don't  remember..Why  don't  you  tell  me?";


 "It  was  nothing  important.." Sayumi  shrugged. "It's  just  that  you  were  too  hyper  hehe.. I  like  the  way  you  gave  your  birthday  gift  to  Aichan!" Sayumi  sighed  when  she  raised  her  brows. "In  short, you  kissed  her."


 "WHAT???!!!!" Niigaki  Risa, eyes  wide  open  shouted. "EHH??!" She  stood  up, almost  knocking  her  chair  down. "HONTO  NI????!!!"


 Michishige  Sayumi  covered  her  ears. "Goodness, Gaki-san!! I  don't  want  to  be  a  disable  person  because  of  you!" Sayumi  gave  her  a  cute  glare. "Idiot  bean!"


 "I  did  that?! I  really   did  that?!" She  asked, shaking  Sayumi's  body.


 "Stop! You  stop! You  make  me  feel  so  dizzy! Risa  do  you  want  to  kill  me?!" The  injured  bunny  grabs  her  wrist. "Ask  Aichan  if  you  want!" She  pouted. "Such  a  reaction  queen.." The  bunny  mumbled.


 "I  don't  want !" She  blushed. Just  thinking  she  would  ask  that  bully, it  make  her  feel  so  embarrassed.


 "Then  just  pretend  that  you  don't  remember  anything.."

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 Sayumi  smiled  when  she  saw  Eri, standing  in  front  of  her  house. It  seems  that  she's  busy  with  something. "Eririn !!!" She  shouted, hugging  her  from  behind. She  immediately  felt  the  warmth  of  her  back.


 "Sayumi."


 "Why?"


 "Can  you  take  your  arms  off  me  now?"


 "Tsk. Later. I  am  enjoying  the  warmth  of  your  body. Did  anyone  ever  told  you  that  it  is  n ice  to  hug  your  back?" She  asked.


 "No  one. Just  you."


 She  smiled. "So, I'm  the  first  one  who  hug  you?"


 Eri  sighed. "Sayu.."


 "Yes?"


 "I'm  really  busy.. Could  you  let  me  go  now?"


 "You're  always  busy.." She  hugged  her  more  tightly. "Nothing's  new."



 "Sayu!"


 "What?!" She  whined. "Don't  tell  me  you're  going  to  sue  me  for  sexual  harassment?!" She  giggled. "Let  me  hug  you  just  for  one  minute  okay?" Then  Eri  sighed  again. She  touched  her  arms  that  was  hugging  her  waist. It  was  such  a  simple  gesture  she  could  not  help  herself  but  smile.


 "Okay.."


 "Eririn?" Is  it  okay  to  hug  you  like  this?"


 "If  I  tell  you  no, would  you  listen  to  me  and  let  me  go?"


 "Try  that?"


 "Don't  want.. I'm  lazy  now." Sayu  giggled  again. She  loved  teasing  Eri.


 "Ahem ! Public  display  of  affection? Oi.." Sayu  turned  her  head  and  saw  Miki, Tsuji  and  Yossi. She  let  go  of  Eri.


 "What  are  you  three  doing  here?" Eri  asked. Annoyed.


 "Walking.." Miki  answered.


 "Walking? Don't  kid  me  Miki."


 "You're  being  paranoid.." Tsuji  said.


 "Yes.." Yossi  added. "You  think  we're  interrupting  your  loving-loving  with  Shige-san?" She  teased.


 Eri  covered  her  eyes  with  her  hands. "Don't  look  at  them. They're  not  human." Sayu  nodded.


 "Aww.."


 "Yossi.. I  saw  Rika-chan  over  there.." Eri  said.


 "Where? wait ! I  gotta  go ! see  yah !" She said  and  runs  away.


 "Oi, by  the  way  Eri. We  were  going  to  her  bakeshop." Miki  said, turning  to  Tsuji. "Maybe  you  wanna  join? With  Sayumi  of  course.."


 Sayu  smiled. 'You're  a  genius  Mikitty!! I  could  kiss  you!' . Then  she  immediately  turned  her  attention  at  Eri  and  looked  at  her  with  puppy  dog  eyes. She  really  wanted  to  go  out  with  her.


 "No, Thanks. I'm  busy.."


 Sayu:  :on blackhole:

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 hehe  I am very sorry  for the long wait  :kneelbow: i hope you like this chapter.  :temper: hehe  see  yah !
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: kuro808 on November 09, 2012, 07:46:01 AM
That last one was a funny expression
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 09, 2012, 07:55:37 AM
 ^ Sayu on blackhole :) hehehe  :lol:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: yellow on November 09, 2012, 08:27:53 AM
mahal kita   :love:

thanks for the update... you are surprising me as i thought you are doing it this weekend.

i really like sayu being so little devil sometimes   :heart:
 :thumbsup eririn to make sayu into blackhole.

i really wonder how the bean gonna face the monkey after knowing what she have done  XD

mahal kita :love: wo ai ni :heart: i love you :inlove:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: maikeatoot on November 09, 2012, 08:35:49 AM
 i don't know either? maybe .. Argh ! i want to make this story to move faster ! Ai should confess her love !  XD :lol: but first.. kameshige  :shocked:

 hey.. mahal din kita  :heart: i love you too  :wub: and wo ye ai ni  :ptam-kiss:
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: yellow on November 09, 2012, 08:39:52 AM
anything as long as you have the time to  :)

mahal din kita  :heart: i love you too  :wub: and wo ye ai ni  :ptam-kiss:

i also update  XD... sorry in this chapter still no you meeting Ai but i promised soon... very soon, the date of you and Aichan  :P maybe i give it to you straight after my exam... as i won't update anymore until exam is over... i have to restrain myself for the time being  :nervous
Title: Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
Post by: cmze on November 10, 2012, 10:08:25 AM
Sayu and Eri :rofl:

Yossi looking for Rika hahahahhahahahaha! :D

i can't wait for Risa to confront Ai *sighs*  :wub:

Nice update!!  :grin: