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Title: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 23, 2009, 10:14:00 AM

~CONTENTS~
#1   Chapter One: Sudden Collapse
#2  Chapter Two: In Dilemma
#8  Chapter Three:  Velvet Morning
#15 Chapter Four:  A Dim Twilight
#25  Chapter Five:  Untitled yet
#34  Chapter Six: A Coincidence   (as well as the rest part of Chapter Five)
#41  Chapter Six: A Coincidence   (Part II)
#42  Chapter Seven:  My Dream Maker
#48  Chapter Seven:  My Dream Maker (Part II)
#55  Chapter Seven:  My Dream Maker (Part III)
#59  Chapter Seven:  My Dream Maker (Part IV   finished)
#66  Chapter Eight  Uncertain Future (Part I)
#75  Chapter Eight  Uncertain Future (Part II)

Title: Re: Yasha of Tokyo [10-23|Chapter One: Sudden Collapse]
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 23, 2009, 10:14:26 AM

Have you ever been to Tokyo? Gorgeous, crowded, full of chances as well as traps. You can realize your dreams here, and also ruin your purity. And if you’re a helpless little girl, how can you make a living there?
Tokyo…Tokyo…well, I once dreamt of brightening my life there, but I couldn’t make a worse mistake any more…All started here, and all ended here, Tokyo.


Chapter One  Sudden Collapse

I had imagined several time stepping on the land of Tokyo, and breathed its wonderful air. I had worked hard during all my senior school years, and finally succeeded being admitted to Tokyo University, which is the most famous one in Japan.
Even today, I still clearly remember the scene that my mom saw me off in Sinchitose Airport. She tried her best to hold back tears, but in vain. However, I knew she felt more happy than sad, for I was the only girl in my whole family who got into college.
“Fighting~Miki!” she said with the tears of happiness, “We will looked forward to your bright future…” I, at that time, hold the fearless ambition and believed my mom’s wish. I had never thought I would be what I am now.
If my mom knows it, how will she feel… sad or heartbreaking?

“Mikitty~hurry up~or you will be late~” my roommate urged me.
“Well…wait for a minute~I am coming~” I scratched my bag and rushed out.
Her name is Aya, Matsuura Aya. I like calling her Ayaya. My only friend in this unfamiliar city. Her family is in charge of one of the top entertainment agency in Japan.
The best time of a day then was when I walked along the roads in the campus with Ayaya, talking about every interesting topic we could remember.
Having finished the first semester’s class, I returned home and got the shocking news --- My father’s company had been bankrupt. My former warm family suddenly broke down, nothing left, but the loan-sharks which should be paid off within a year. My father seemed more than ten year older than he indeed was, and my mother forced a bitter smile to welcome me home. I had no idea about my next step.
“Miki…” After a long embarrassing silence, my drunk father began to speak in a low and weak voice, “give up your study and come back home…we can’t afford your tuition and living expense any more.”
I had guessed what he would say, but it was another thing when heard the words really spoken out. I kept silent, unable to think anything, but continuing my university.
“I know it is hard for you to make discussion, but Miki, if we had any measures to help you, we would not ask you to do that. But you know…”
“I will not depend on you from now on! I can make money myself.” I said, having no self-confidence inside.
“But what can you do? You’re just a freshman in the university. Do you really believe you have ability to continue your study? You know how much it cost per year, you know it, uh?” My father raised his voice up a little.
“Miki, I knew you had spared no effort to your study, and you realized your dream, but now, everything has been changed, Miki, we have 2 billion yen loan-sharks to pay off…we need you…” My mom said in tears, trying to persuade me.
“If I pay off the loan-sharks within the limited time, will you let me continue my study?” I interrupted her again.
“Miki…” my mother wanted to say something more.
“You stupid chick! 2 billion! Do you know how much is it? What can you do to pay it? We have nothing left now! Nothing.” My father suddenly shouted at me, “are you kidding? You stupid! Stop your study and come back! I had believed it was no use for a girl to study in university. You should meet some proper guys and get married as early as possible. If you married a rich man, this kind of bad luck wouldn't have happened!” he shouted more loudly.
“Anata…” Mom hold his arm, trying to stop him.
“Get out! That’s you! You over spoiled her!” he pushed mom down to the floor, and threw the bottle onto the wall.
“Shut up!” I yelled out, my mood was wild out of control then. “Don't put your fault in me! That’s your fault, not mine!”
I stood up and rushed towards my bedroom. Collect all my belongings into my suitcase and ran to the door. I stood at the door for no more than 3 seconds, and turned around.
“I will pay off the loan-sharks and I will continue my study, too!”  leaving those words, I left.
That was the last time I saw my father.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-23|Chapter One: Sudden Collapse]
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 23, 2009, 03:52:36 PM

Chapter Two  In Dilemma

I returned to the campus just three days after the winter vocation. I wandered along the streets in Shinjuku for the whole afternoon without any rest. I ate nothing, drank nothing and cared about nothing. Wandering and wandering.
In fact, I didn't know anything about how to make large quantities of money in such a short time, and also at the same time, I made out what did 2 billion mean. For a short while, I felt a little regretful, because of my impetuous decision. But I couldn't forgive my father and his words.
When I was in junior school, he kept saying something like “Your duty is to find a rich man and get married. Our family needs more financial support to expand~” I really hated this kind of thoughts! I hated it! Hated it in my whole lifetime! I was arranged to have blind dates with more than ten men in my third year in senior school. I felt disgusted when touched by those mid-aged bare-head men! I wanted to throw up when proposed by those young guys but with each finger a ring on. What was more rediculous, all of them said they fell in love with me at the first sight! Fuck up!! I wanted to escape from my mad family, so I devoted all my time to studying, and eventually, I succeeded in escaping! Why should I get back again? Marry those rich men and save my father’s business? Never!!
“Excuse me, lady…” my thought was interrupted by a low but sexy voice.
“What?”
“Well, I am Makoto.” he introduced himself, handing me a business card, “We are looking for some young and charming ladies to work in our club. This is the name of our club,” he pointed at the bold black letters on the card, “Velvet Morning.”
Night club? You kidding? I pushed him away without saying a word.
Right! I wanna make money, but I didn't want to sell my face!

Not until I got exhausted did I remember to telephone Ayaya.
“What’s wrong?” she sounded much surprised, “I thought you were home now!”
“Er…” I held back the truth I almost spoke out, and made up another explanation, “I wanna do some part-time job, so I get back.”
“Part-time job? You want to make money? You have some financial problems?”
“No…No…No…” I felt quite nervous when telling lies to someone, “just gain some working and social experience, because…because I have never worked before, and I want have a try, and … and … I think there will be a lot chances in Tokyo, so…so I get back.”
Having talked on phone for nearly ten minutes, I hang up and couldn't do anything but sigh.

*************
update 10-24


The next day, Ayaya came to see me, and handed my some newspaper.
“We could find some part-jobs on them, and…” she smiled, like an baby angel, “let’s do them together!”
“Er??” I was quite surprised, for I knew there was no need for her to do any part-time jobs. She would enter her father’s agency and became a singer. I had heard her sing a lot, she got a really nice voice.
“Have fun~just have fun~” she explained, “and, if so, I bet we will spend a great time together and I will not feel so boring during the long vocation~”
I nodded. The moment we met each other, I predicted that she would be my best friend. She was very nice, easy-going, and considerate. I liked her very much.
We telephoned a lot of places for applyment, and the only thing left was to wait the replies.
That night, we walked in the street of Shibuya. She asked me…
“Miki-chan, will you buy my record if I really become a singer?”
“Of course!”
“No~no need to buy them…” she pretended to be sad.
“Why?” I was really confused then.
“Because…” she suddently hit me on the head, and ran away, shouting “I will give them to you for free~~~”

Several days later, we got the reply from a restaurant not far from our university. That was my first real job, but low payment. How to make 2 billion yen, I didn't know, however, it was a start on earth.
We worked together during the whole vocation. She bought me a necklace as Christmas’ gift, but I could only gave her a pair of woolen gloves.
“I am so sorry, just a simple and cheap gift.”
“Never mind, Miki~ I like it so much,” she looked so happy when receiving the woolen gloves, “My family always give me some expensive but useless thing. I don't like them indeed. But I really want to have a pair of warm gloves so that my hand won’t feel cold any more~ thank you, Miki-chan~”
I looked into her twinkling bright eyes, and found her pure soul inside. But even though, I still didn't tell her the truth of my family.
Ayaya spent her first university New Year with me in our dorm. Both of us lay on my bed, covered by the same quilt, watching Kou Haku Uta Gassan.
“Ayaya, one day, will surely stand on the stage, and sing to the whole Japan, won’t you?”
“It’s my dream, and Miki-chan, could you do with me?”
“What?”
“Sing with me!” she spoke out loudly, and held my hands closely. “We can make it, and you’re really a nice singer! Your voice matches mine so smoothly! We can surely make it!!”
“Well…” I was shocked by her proposal, and couldn't speak anything.
“You don't like it…?”
“No…but…” I couldn't tell her the truth that I had to earn 2 billion within a year and I couldn't wait another three years.
“We will stand on the stage, and shout to the audience loudly, Minna san~Nice to meet you all, we’re…” she paused, “what about the name? Our group should have a nice name~Let me have a think of it~~ah~! GAM? How about it?”
“GAM?”
“GAM! Great Aya and Miki! It sounds great, isn’t it?”
I nodded, couldn't help smiling to the day-dreaming girl.

It was time for us to take our salary for this part-time job. The boss handed us the envelopes. It was too thin!
“We should earn more, right?” I got a little angry, “You promised we would have 200 thousand yen! Here is no more than 100 yen!”
“Yep, I had promised, but girls, you broke 17 plates and 24 cups. Many customers complained you were slow-acting. How much did you suppose to get?”
“We didn't do so bad!”
“Take it and go away, I don't need stupid guys.” The boss yelled.
“Your fucking bitch!!” I burst into anger, “You cheated us!! Your fucking bitch!!”

The fact made me understand what the reality really meant. I held 100 thousand yen in my hand. I need 2000 times as much. 2000 times!

Several days after the starting of the second semester, I received a call from my mother. Her voice souded dying.
“Are you OK, mom?”
“Nothing bad, don't worry.”
Silence, a long silence…
“Miki-chan, your father…”
“I will pay off the debt. Though I know 100 thousand yen is not so much, but don't worry, I can make it.”
“But you need tuition and daily expense. What can you do to make it?”
“Mom, I have told you not worry! I have my own way.”
“But…”
“I will never do anything illegal, I promise.” I said, and hung up the phone.

Just when I hung up the phone, Makoto, the man working in a night club again, occurred to me. I didn't know why I recalled this man, but I knew it for sure that working in his club maybe the fastest way to make money. And I met him again in the same street we firstly saw each other.
“How much will you pay?” I asked him directly.
“If you are qualified, you can make 1 million.” Makoto said politely, “Our guests are all from upper class.”
“Work time?”
“From 7 p.m to 2 a.m. and no extra service needed.”
“Extra service?”
“I mean, our guests will not ask you to have sex with them. They just want you to go out with them to attend some parties.”

A week later, I became a new member of the night club “Velvet Morning”.
And, that was the beginning of my falling.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-23|Chapter Two: In Dilemma (unfinished)
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on October 23, 2009, 04:40:29 PM

:mon hanky: poor Mikitty
her dad is a jerk :mon annoy:

:mon cute: please keep posting the next chapters

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-23|Chapter Two: In Dilemma (unfinished)
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 23, 2009, 06:13:36 PM

Interesting, looking forward to more chapters.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-24 updated|Chapter Two: In Dilemma
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 24, 2009, 03:53:48 PM

i've finished chapter 2~~
thank you for your comments, i love them so much~~

to be honest, i look forward to chapter 3 eagerly too~
because a very important character will come up~ :otomerika:

need your more supports~~

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-24 updated|Chapter Two: In Dilemma
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 24, 2009, 08:06:04 PM

At least Miki's not whoring herself out.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-24 updated|Chapter Two: In Dilemma
Post by: kuro808 on October 24, 2009, 08:10:41 PM

GAM idea lol, well that made a good background story to lead to the anticipated chapter

i agree with rndmnwierd she's not whoring herself out which is good :D

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-24 updated|Chapter Two: In Dilemma
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 25, 2009, 09:56:56 AM

Chapter Three   Velvet Morning


(http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx192/7seasnanami/rika-1.jpg)(http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx192/7seasnanami/yui-1.jpg)(http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx192/7seasnanami/erika-1.jpg)


Nice to meet you, everyone. I am Rika. Ishikawa Rika. No.1 hostess in the Velvet Morning, which is one of the most famous night club in Genza. The other two girls are No.2 --- Okada Yui, and No.3 --- Miyoshi Erika.
I took up this job after I finished my senior school, and spent 1 year becoming No.1 girl here. Though it was a night battle where a lot of fights happened, I still made two friends here. Yes, you know them, Yui and Erika.In my deepest heart, there was another person, who was the most important one to me in my lifetime.
That day was a usual day, like any day else. Makoto-san introduced a new face to us.
“I am Miki, Fujimoto Miki. Hajimemashite…” the young girl made a self-introducation, bending to us.
“This is the No.1 hostess here, Ishikawa Rika,” Makoto introduced me to her.
“I am a greenhand, nice to meet you.” She bent again to me.
I just looked on her, saying nothing. I didn't want to say anything to her, but I couldn't tell the reason. I didn't like this girl, for she looked so proud, even if she appeared to be polite. I guessed she might be from a rich ,or at least middle-class, family. Quite different from me. I was born in a poor family, and the only financial supplier in my family was me. My father had been ill for more than five years and my mother couldn't find any job, because nobody wanted to hire a woman whose only living skill was cooking.
“You looked unhappy,” Yui whispered to me in the locker room, “What’s wrong about the girl?”
“Nothing.” I replied.

****

“Rika-chan, Sato-san there is waiting for you.” One of the waiters came to me.
“Excuse me…” I stood up and smiled to the guest and then headed for Sato-san. I saw Fujimoto stood beside the waiter.
“This is a new comer here, Fujimoto Miki.” The waiter introduced her to the man.
That was the third day she worked here. Though she was very polite to me, and never did anything bad to me, I still didn't want to get close to her. Just saying hello.

“ehhhhh….?” Erika shouted out, “you’re from Tokyo University?!”
Fujimoto nodded.
Tokyo University… That was the dream I would never realize.
“University student?” some girl laughed, “you may be eager for money badly~ University student~”
Fujimoto kept silence, but I found her face red.
“Nobody can beat Rika-chan~~~” I heard somebody teasing.
I had never thought that one day I would work here before, or even would become No.1 here. Life was always ridiculous. When I wanted to be No.1 in my senior school’s football team, I broke my knee in an unimportant match, and ended up my career in Grade Two. When I never thought about winning No.1 here, I made it surprisingly easily. Had I got a gift for being a hostess?
“Mind your own business.” Erika said to the other girls, “wish all of you a nice night~”

Erika was always like this. She was tender and considerate, never hurting anybody on purpose. But she was still just, and called a spade a spade. She helped me a lot when I came here. At that time, she and Yui lived in one flat, not very big for them two, but she still offered me to lend a small room for me to live in. I appreciated it very much. Then I discovered they two were lovers. I felt quite amazing that they worked together, and meet different guests together, but still kept a close love between. That was really amazing!!
“Because Erika will never betray me.” Yui said to me proudly and confidently.
Erika just smiled, silent as usual.

“Wow~~~it’s tasty~” Yui’s excited voice interrupted my thoughts, “have a try, Rika~ nice taste~ this sushi~”
I felt comfortable when staying with them, very relaxed. It had been quite a long time since I last saw that guy. What was she doing now? Have she become a top player in her team?

=============================
I told lies to Ayaya that I found a night shift in a net cafe, and had to work till mid-night.
“Is there anything wrong with your financial situation?” Ayaya once asked me.
“Nothing. But I don't want to spend my family’s money. I want to depend on myself.” This was really not a reasonable explanation, but Ayaya, after all, believed it! As expected, she never worried about her finance and future, and trusted that all the people were the same with herself. There was nothing dirty in her eyes, and everybody was a nice guy. I felt a little worried about her. Was she really suitable with this cold and trap-filled world?
“Miki-chan, if you’re tired, you can have a nap in class, and I will keep notes for you. So don't worry~”
Her pure smile made me feel guilty. “I am sorry, Ayaya.” I never spoke these words out.
“One day, we will have GAM famous all over the country~ We’re GAM~~!!” she shouted excitedly. I couldn't break her dream, I couldn't.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-25 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning (
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 25, 2009, 10:00:05 AM

i made some pics to match with the fic~
are they adding any fun to reading? haha~
wish you enjoy them~

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-25 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning (
Post by: badsaints on October 25, 2009, 10:22:02 AM

Rika is the No. 1 in the club? The Ishi-Miki interactions will be interesting, since Rika doesn't have much of good 1st impression of Miki :lol:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-25 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning (
Post by: kuro808 on October 25, 2009, 06:26:53 PM

Very strong reaction to competition interesting good work

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-25 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning (
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 26, 2009, 02:57:32 AM

Ishimoto rivalry from day one? And Biyuuden as girl 1-3.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-26 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning
Post by: blastingcool on October 27, 2009, 09:51:33 AM

i cant wait for yossie's appearance here, i bet she is one of the customers at velvet morning

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-26 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on October 27, 2009, 11:30:28 AM

oh god!! ishiyoshi and ayamiki~~my favourites ~~
please keep on updating!!
i love it~

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-26 updated|Chapter Three: Velvet Morning
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 27, 2009, 02:20:55 PM

Chapter Four  A Dim Twilight

Every day I went back to dorm, I would first had a full shower in the night club. I had to be careful in order to not be suspected. Young as I was, I still felt exhausted every day.
At the end of the first month working there, I got my first real salary. Not so much as expected. Only 30 million yen. I was discouraged. Maybe I was just a boaster. My mother phoned me several times, however, I only talked a few words and hung up in a hurry with “daijobu~”
   My wallet became flat again after I went out of the bank. What I remained was the expense of daily life and, of couse, money for cosmetics and dress.
   I didn't know clearly why I could attract some guests, for I owned no skills in this field. Makoto-san once told me that was due to my silence and pride. Sometimes, the guests want to meet some unique girls who were totally different from those ordinary hostesses. And fortunately, I was suitable for their taste. “Intelligence, beauty and politeness are your advantages.” he said. But, in fact, I was not sure about what he said.
   One day, one of my guests, Nakamura-san --- a saycyou, asked me to attend a commercial evening dinner with him. That was the ENCOUNTER of DESTINY with HER. From then on, my life began running in an unknown direction.
“Nice to meet you, Yoshizawa-san.”
“Oh…Nakamura-san, nice to meet you.” The man said in a loud but nice voice. “Let me give an introduction. This is my daughter, Yoshizawa Hitomi.” How dazzling the girl was, I thought.
“This is Fujimoto Miki.”
“Nice to meet you, Nakamura-san. And nice to meet you, Fujimoto-san.” The boyish girl bowed to both of us in a properly polite way, which indicated her noble family background.
“Wow~Hitomi-chan has grown up. You was so little when I saw you last time. Have you still being playing football?”
“Yes, I have. ”
“Your father told me you were in Tokyo University, right?”
She nodded, keeping smiling.
“Is it hard to study there? ”
“A little bit, but I have learnt to enjoy it, so daijobu~”
Tokyo University?!
“Ano…Excuse me,” I couldn't help asking, “Yoshizawa-san is in Tokyo University’s football team?”
“That’s right.” She smiled to me. I thought she must know my profession, because there were several girls in this dinner the same with me. But I couldn't find any scorn. She treated me like others.
During the whole dinner, I couldn't take my eyes off her for an unclear reason. She was like a sun, sending out light and warmness. And it was just the things that I wanted to obtain. I found my heart beaten fast and violent, as if it would be jump out of my month. Meanwhile, I also felt depressed, strongly depressed, which almost made me choked. We were not in the same class, and never would be, either. I knew it very well, but I couldn't helping diving myself into her light. Maybe, that was the DESTINY.

The next day, I went playgroud to see whether the football team was practising. I had ignored it since I got into the university. All my energies and strength was devoted to my study and job. But now, exactly I knew, I got something else in my life which attracted my attention, and it was Yoshizawa Hitomi who brought me happiness as well as tragedies.

***

updated part on Oct. the 28th

I stood outside the playground for quite a long time, with my eyes fixed on Yoshizawa. She seemed a genius of playing football. During my watching, she shot 6 goals in and made several assistance and nice passing. I didn't realise the training was finished until she came to me, and said “Nice to meet you again, Fujimoto-san.”
I bowed to her, feeling fairly embarrassed.
“It’s amazing. We’re in the same school~really a nice coincidence, right?”
I nodded, noticing some sweat running down her cheeks.
“Well, I guess I must be smelly~”she put up her arm, pretending to smell her armpit, “Oh, my god~ I have to take a shower as fast as possible~” she said and laughed, “then…Ja nei~see you tomorrow.”
I watched her walking away, my heart beating strongly.
======

“You mean Yoshizawa senpei?” I said in a loud voice, “You didn't know her? Mikitty, you’re totally out of date. She is one of the most popular students here. It is said that she is really a nice lady.”
I began to call Miki Mikitty some days after the beginning of the second semester. Now she was asking me some information about Yoshizawa Hitomi.
“Ei~~~? I watched her training today.” She said, some exciting expression appearing on her face.
“And you becomes her fan?” I asked, but felt a little jealous.
“I didn't mean that. ” she answered, looking down at her feet, like….like a…shy little girl!
“Don’t show me that disgusting expression~” I pretended to be joking. And she looked at me, then smiling.
“Go out to find something to eat~let’s go~” she said, pulling me out of the room by the arm.
Every time we walked past the playground in the afternoon, it looked as if she was looking for someone. You got it, right? It was Yoshizawa Hitomi.

I liked Mikitty, and even today, I still like, or to say, love her. Sometimes she napped in class and looked really innocent like a baby, I put down notes carefully in order to make it easy for Mikitty to review. To be honest, I prefer her sleeping than her awake. Because when she slept, the only one who could watch and protect her was me, but when she woke up, I really knew nothing about her thoughts and inner heart, at least, l felt so.
Though she smiled and talked with me every day, I still found no access to her real life. I didn't know it was my misconception or the reality. Between us lay an invisible gap which I didn't and either couldn't come over. I feared if something was uncovered, our relationship would come to an end. Afraid as I was, I still wish that was really my illusion.
She mentioned Yoshizawa more and more in our conversation. I knew, she didn't realise it herself, which made me extremely uncomfortable. At that time, I, the fool, didn't know that kind of feeling was called LOVE.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight (un
Post by: badsaints on October 27, 2009, 04:33:17 PM

Ah so now the story of YoMiki begins....

Will it lead to friendship or even more? Or will trouble arises? Will wait for our writer to update...

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight (un
Post by: rndmnwierd on October 27, 2009, 07:20:18 PM

You have a very interesting way of phrasing things. I like it.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight (un
Post by: kuro808 on October 27, 2009, 07:50:51 PM

I like your flow to the story, it has structure, well YoMiki cheehee

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 28, 2009, 12:44:47 AM

It's so bad that the electricity is cut off because there is a routine check of the whole electric system~I can't update in time~ pity~oh,what a pity!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight (un
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on October 28, 2009, 01:35:03 AM

Ohhhhh....
so now Yossy makes her appearance :heart:
so it was love at first sigh :inlove: for Miki at least aawwww YOMIKI!!! :wub:

waiting for the next chapters! :)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-27updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight (un
Post by: Beecubed on October 28, 2009, 04:13:56 AM

I'm loving it!  :heart:

Your style of writing reminds me of somebody who I used to read fanfiction from all the time. I really like your style  :thumbup Good job with the story plot too. Not entirely original, but that's not always a bad thing. I feel quite captured by what you've written so far.

Funnily enough, I don't mind that most of this seems to be from Miki's POV. She's probably the most likely heroine in a story anyway. Her situation is pitiful, but I hope she realises she and Ayaya are meant to be!!!!

I'm vying for IshiYoshi all the way. I'm sure there will be lots of YoMiki moments too, but I just hope this doesn't become a YoMiki fanfic!!!

Oh, and Rika as No.1 hostess sounds good. Bring on the IshiYoshi moments, onegai! <3  :otomerika: :yossi:

Please update soon.. I'll be waiting!

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Post by: 7Seas。 on October 28, 2009, 02:28:33 PM

i really appreciate all of your comments
they are the motivation for me to move on~
thank you all verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry much!!

all the main characters are on the stage now~
the story will create more and more conflicts.

it seems ayaya and mikitty in my works are always so poor~
i would like to make some happy plots for them, and also for ishiyoshi~
but i just wish i could make it, because...to be honest, most of our works before were sad stories...


well, thank you all  again~~

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-28updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight
Post by: Sancho on October 29, 2009, 02:23:21 AM

This story really hooks me. Maybe because it content the word reality. Life is unfair and the character in the story showed it to us. This is getting interesting. Hoping for more chapter.  :twothumbs

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Post by: Beecubed on October 29, 2009, 07:00:38 AM

Quote from: 7Seas。 on October 28, 2009, 02:28:33 PM

but i just wish i could make it, because...to be honest, most of our works before were sad stories...


well, thank you all  again~~

As long as there's happy times, I'm OK with the sadness. After all, I love angst. <3

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Because when she slept, the only one who could watch and protect her was me, but when she woke up, I really knew nothing about her thoughts and inner heart, at least, l felt so.

My favourite line so far. That's TOOO sweet!!!
ARGH!
Yossie the womaniser, off to a great start by shamelessly smelling her armpit in front of Miki.  :twothumbs

Still waiting for IshiYoshi...

Thanks for the update though! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-28updated|Chapter Four A Dim Twilight
Post by: 7Seas。 on October 29, 2009, 12:51:27 PM

Chapter Five   untitled

“Did you steal Rika-chan’s money?” a girl stood there, glancing at Fujimoto.
“Is there any doubt? It must be her!” another girl went along.
“You’re a disgrace…” the third girl teasing.
My money in the locker was gone. Some girls told me Fujimoto had stolen them, because she looked eager for money. But I didn't believe it. Not because I liked her, but because I found it didn't match her character. If she really needed money so badly, she must please her guests or even used some erotic way, but she never did.
“I didn't do it.” I heard she said in a low but firming voice.
“No thelf will admit any crime!” the first girl laughing.
“That’s it! You were the only one who had time to get into locker room when all of the rest girls were busy.”
“I agree. You were out of the hall for quite a long time.”
“I just went to washroom and have a making-up.” She said, not looking at anyone of them, and putting aside her own things.
“Nonsense!” one of the three girls dragged her by the arm, and pushed her onto the ground.
It was really a common sense in the locker room in any clubs. Jealousy was a kind of spell which could spread faster than anything else among girls. I knew they must be jealous of Fujimoto, juse for her performance got better and better. The competition among night club girls was violent beyond imagination.
“Don't touch me!” Fujimoto yelled and tried to stand up. But the three girls bullied her at the same time. One stretched her hair, one kicked her tummy, and the third one was intending to tear her dress.
“Stop doing that!” Erika shouted and tried to stop them.
“But she stole Rika-chan’s money!” one of them said.
“Erika says STOP IT！！” Yui shouted in a louder voice, which threatening all the three to stop. They stood aside, looking extremely angry. But I still read some hints under their mask.
“Are you OK?” Yui walked towards her and stood Fujimoto up.
“Yes, thanks.”
“Rika-chan will find out who did the stealing.” Erika said to all of them, especially the three.

To be honest, I wanted to say something, but I didn't know clearly what I would say. So I just put aside my belonging, and walked outside.

The three girls would bully her again, I knew.

Just the next day, it happened again. But much worse.
The three girls stood at the door of the locker room and put up a mobilephone. On it was a naked picture of Fujimoto. It was obviously taken when she took a shower bath after work.
“Get away from here, or we will send this picture to all the guests and spread it on the Internet.” They laughed ugly.
“You stupid jerk!!” Fujimoto was enraged, but she couldn't fight against three people at the same time.
Erika wanted to stop, but I stopped her first.
“Rika-chan…”
“Leave it to me.” I said to her, and headed for them.
“Give it to me.” I said the girl holding the cellphone.
She handed it to me with no doubt.
“Fucking bitch!” I whispered.
“What?”
“I say fucking bitch!! All of you! Fucking bitch!!” I shouted out of control and threw the phone on the wall. It was broken when landed on the ground. I picked the pieces up and went to washroom, dropping them into the toilet bowl.
When I came back, I saw the three girl angry with tears in their eyes.

I did it not for saving Fujimoto, just because I hated dirty ways.

Fujimoto said “thank you” to me the next day. But I didn't reply her.


(to be continued)

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Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on October 29, 2009, 03:13:21 PM

wow~~ yui is awesome!! telling the three bitches to stop it!
but rika is super awesome!! throwing the phone on the wall!
rika gone wild!!

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Post by: ayase909 on October 29, 2009, 03:58:25 PM

okaayyyyyyyy! im ur new reader author-san since im a loyal servant of miki-sama!  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol:

im a GAM fanatic but i was craving for some CHARMIKITTY! hehe  :shifty: :shifty: :shifty:

oh, have u seen the pv of hangry and angry, top secret?! that was definitely an ISHIYOSHI!  :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe:

and im gonna say it again here in the forum, haha im not a YOMIKI fan!  :onionwhip:

no offense, YOMIKI fan.... :kneelbow:

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Post by: Beecubed on October 29, 2009, 04:49:23 PM

Ooooo... intense. Rika-chan... ?? Hahhaaa, more like Rika-sama  :bow: she's awesome here. At least she doesn't let her feelings get in the way of her sense of righteousness!

Poor Mikitty!  :( Taking naked pictures of her is a little bit too much I think (hence why Rika's reaction is totally justified  :thumbup). I hope because of this, Rika and Miki can get closer. Rika will take her under her wing, and guide her?

There's still so much to find out... *still waiting for the first IshiYoshi moment*

Good job with the update! Please write more! And more!  :heart:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-29updated|Chapter Five Untitled]
Post by: kuro808 on October 29, 2009, 07:57:58 PM

Wow a lot of strong arming to protect Miki, I guess you protect your own when it comes down to it

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Post by: rndmnwierd on October 30, 2009, 06:24:39 AM

 :on kimbo: Bam bitches!

 :on GJ:

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Post by: badsaints on October 30, 2009, 04:46:50 PM

How dare they touch Miki-sama!!!! :angry: Seems like some people have death wishes or something XD

Ooooooh Rika-sama to the rescue :w00t:

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Post by: kRisZ on October 31, 2009, 02:06:11 PM

Yay!   :w00t:

GAM   :banana:

IshiYoshi   :banana: :banana:

YoMiki   :banana: :banana: :banana:


Interesting  :cow:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[10-29updated|Chapter Five Untitled]
Post by: Sancho on November 01, 2009, 05:14:44 AM

The Intensity made me speechless.  :shocked :shocked :shocked . It's hard to imagine what Rika look like when she's really mad. I mean if it's the real Rika we know, she'll just cry right?. But for Yui, it's not that hard. I don't know. Maybe it's easy especially if you don't know the person that much. Erika is more like a shy type so I think she's fine.  XD. Glad that Fujimoto somehow found an allies. More please.  :cow:

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Post by: 7Seas。 on November 03, 2009, 09:41:41 AM

For the whole week, I treasured this ticket as my most precious thing. Like a little girl waiting for something expected for a long time, I even couldn't stop smiling when I talked with my guests. Makoto-san once said, “Miki-chan likes smiling more than before. There must be something nice happening.”
The three bad girls left the club. I had no friend there as before, but fortunately, nobody bullied me again. Ishikawa-san said nothing about that day’s event. To her, it seemed that nothing had happened. At that time, I guessed she must be nice inside but cold outside.
I got the second month salary, a little bit more than that of the last month. But I still couldn't pay off the debt before the deadline at this speed. 2 billion, it was like a burden heavily loaded on my shoulder, and made me feel exhausted, both body and soul.

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Chapter Six   A coincidence




Even today, I still love you.


I got two home tutor positions from a job-agency, which meant I had to make full use of all my spare time to make money. The children of the two families were sick at home, but wished not to miss any class so that they could pass the university entrance examination. I went to their home on Saturday and Sunday to teach them English, each child two hours from 9 a.m. to 11 a.m. and 1 p.m – 3 p.m.

“Hey~Fujimoto Hime~” I heard a familiar voice behind me, “Genki desu ka?”
I nodded, and bowed to the owner of the voice --- Yoshizawa Hitomi.
“Don't be so formal, lady~” she smiled to me, like sunshine.
I could say anything for the present.
“Ha~~~I am exhausted!” she said, and lay down on the grass beside me, “Next Sunday, we’ll have a match with another team, would you like to come?” she took out a ticket.
“May I ?” I was quite surprised, for I’d never thought she would invited me.
“Of course!”
“What time?” I took the ticket.
“Three o’clock in the Central stadium.”
“I will!” I said overexcitedly. “But I have to be late for the match by 20 minutes or a little longer, because I have to teach a girl English till 3 that day.”
“Daijobu~da~yo~”She closed her eyes, murmuring something like “Sunset is really beautiful…” I just sat beside her, unable to take my eyes away from her face. So silent, so harmonious, so…lovely…with the big Number 10 in the front of her shirt.

I finished my 1-to-3 o’clock tutor and hurried to the bus station, wishing I could get there earlier than I expected. I had to say I was really happy and that was the very emotion in charge of me for the whole week. Thank goodness! I got there at 3:25, so at least, I could enjoy the part of the first half. I saw the enormous electronic bill-board. On that was the present score. Tokyo University was inferior. 1:0. Under the figure 1 was the name of Yoshizawa Hitomi. Thought I felt pitiful not seeing her goal, I still felt excited. I could imagine how excited the supporters would be when she kicked this goal.
She was born to catch people’s eyes. I stood there, deeply attracted by her every action, running, passing, shooting, or even, sweeping sweat.
“Yoshizawa Senpei is soooooooo cool~~~~~~~~”
“She was so perfect!!
“Yoshizawa Senpei~Fight on~!”
I heard the audience of our university talking about her.
“Yoshizawa Senpei Aishiteru~!!” a boy shouted.
“You have no chance~!” another boy said, “she never accepted any boy, at least, in our school.”
“Eh~~you mean she doesn't have boyfriend?” some girls broke into the conversation.
“She has. She said to all of her admirers that she has got her beloved one. But nobody knows who the lucky guy is.” He explained.
“Wow~a secret~!”
“Mystery!!”
“I wonder who is that lucky guy~!!”
She had boyfriend! The reality like a thunder stroke me suddenly. Well, she was so excellent, no wonder so many admirers followed her.
“Yoshizawa Senpei!~!!!!!!” I heard them shouting in a worried voice, and turned my attentions back to the match. She was laying on the ground, very painful and suffering. The blood was running out of her nose.. The team doctor and stuff carrying the stretcher rushed into the ground. They put her on it and took her out of the ground.
MY GOD!!! DAMN IT!!!
I turned back and rush to the locker. My feeling at that time was wild beyond my description! I was worried about her, and even I felt my own body painful at the same time.
I forgot in fact I didn't know where the locker room was. I ran in the stadium like a blind fly. I saw they took her on the  ambulance and drove away through a window.
GOD, I beg you! I beg you! Help her!
I cried alone. ALONE.

(to be continued)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 03, 2009, 09:46:20 AM

I really appreciate all of your comment~
thank you all again~
hope you will enjoy the next chapters~ :heart:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 03, 2009, 10:42:50 AM

Yomiki :cry: Hope Yossui's alright.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: kuro808 on November 03, 2009, 10:47:49 AM

^same here YoMiki ftw

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: Beecubed on November 03, 2009, 11:06:54 AM

Chapter 5 was already finished? I thought you still had to update that... but oh wells.

Hurray for the new chapter!

I can't say yay for YoMiki.. but it's sweet to see how much Miki already cares for Yossie.

Yossie has a 'boyfriend'??? Or... is that 'boyfriend'... *RIKA* xD

I hope Yossie is OK!!! T__T Maybe we'll get to see some IshiYoshi next chapter??? *fingers crossed*

Update soon!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: kRisZ on November 03, 2009, 03:52:57 PM

It feels good reading a story about my first loved pair. Kind of refreshing

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-03updated|Chapter Six Unfinished]
Post by: badsaints on November 03, 2009, 04:15:03 PM

Yossie's got a "beloved one" huh? Maybe she got a crush on Miki? That's why she invited Miki to the match :lol:

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Post by: 7Seas。 on November 04, 2009, 08:22:52 AM

Chapter Six   A Coincidence   (Part II)

I asked for leave from Makoto-san on telephone that night, and went to the hospital by taxi. No time to get my clothes changed, no time to buy some flowers or fruits, even no time to consider my heavy debt. What mattered me most was Yoshizawa.
I ran for her ward along the passage, finally, stopping at the door, out of breath. I counted one, two, three…and knocked the door.
“Come in, please” I heard her answer.
I moved into the ward carefully…I saw her laying on the bed with her left leg shank covered with bandage.
“Hi~Fujimoto-san~” she waved to me, as nothing bad had happened to her.
I replied to her greeting.
“Sit down, please~”
I nodded and sit on the chair next to her bed.
“Is it serious?”
“Nothing serious, I will recover soon. The doctor examined my leg, nothing serious. Just need some treatment and rest.”
“That’s fine.”
A big smile appeared on her face when I asked her why she had invited me to the match.
“I thought you might like it.” She explained, “I saw you several times standing outside the ground and watching our training. So I guessed you might like it.”
I couldn't tell her what attracted me there was not the football itself but her, so I just smiled and looked around the ward. Several bunches of flowers and bags of fruit on the desk. Obviously, someone had come to visit her. She was so popular, no wonder they loved her. But in my hand was nothing.
“Sorry, I was to hurry to buy you some flowers.”
“It doesn't matter. I really appreciate your coming to visit me.”
The door opened, I heard a familiar voice raised behind my back.
“Yossie, here is the medicine for tonight.”
I turned my head back…and I was frozen…

“Ishi…ka…wa….san?!” It took me 3 seconds to make sure it was her, because she looked like an ordinary young girl. She was dressed in a dark one-piece dress with a braided hair down on her chest, which was totally different from what she looked like in the club.
She was also shocked when seeing me, for I noticed her pave paused for a while. Then she nodded to me, and passed by me to the bed.
“acquaintance?”
Ishikawa nodded and smiled to her tenderly.
“In the same club, Fujimoto-san and I.” she explained, putting down the medicine on the desk and then sitting on the edge of the bed.
I had to believe women’s instinct. I was sure at the moment she came in that she was Yoshizawa’s beloved one! Though no hint could be found on their face, but I could strongly felt there was a kind of…I should say…RAPPORT spreading among the air, that was something like an old couple.
“Ano…” I felt embarrassed in this subtle situation with these two, “time for me to leave. I have something else to do next…I will come to see you the other day.” I stood up and hurried out of the ward. My heart was beating violently at that time.
Yoshizawa’s lover was…Ishikawa!!!

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Post by: 7Seas。 on November 04, 2009, 08:23:56 AM

Chapter Seven   My Dream Maker


I’d never thought I would meet Fujimoto in Yossie’s ward, which really shocked me. Yossie told me she’d invited her to the match after she left. I said nothing.
Yossie and I were in the same senior high school. Everyone was busy choosing some communities to join in at the beginning of Grade One. I chose soccer, because that was the only sport I could play. There I met her, who was the leader of the team. She was in Grade Three, the last year of senior school. I heard about that she was from a very rich family and received good education from she was a child. I was told that she was not only good at football, but also very outstanding in study. How to say…She was a real idol, yes, a real idol.
Today, I still remember the first words she said to me, “Ishikawa san is really cute. Welcome here.”
At that time, with my father’s severe illness and my mother’s unemployment, I couldn't afford to wear nice and fashion clothers as the other contemporaries did. I had to make money by doing some part-time jobs, such as delivering newspaper, looking after babies or something like that. But I had to pretend I was not depressed at the reality, and put on smiles when coming back home every day.
I began to be addicted to playing football. During the training, I could spare no effort to attack and defend. There was no time for me to think of the miserable reality, all my attention focused on training itself.
When we won the match, I would find there was still certain feeling called happiness in my heart. When we lost the match, I would cried out all the sadness and depression. Every time I cheered, Yossie would come to me and cheered with me together. Every moment I cried, she just hugged me tightly, patting me on the back tenderly. She never said anything to comfort me, however, when I stayed in her arms, I felt my hurt healed gradually.
My first birthday in senior school was unforgettable. Yossie sent me a gift packed in a delicate box. I opened it. In it were a pink windbreaker, a cotton handkerchief and a small mirror which could be attached to the key ring. I found a small piece of paper on the bottom of box. On the paper read:
“Please sweep your tears away with this handkerchief when I am not by your side. And then look into the mirror to get your charming smile back. Happy birthday, dear Rika-chan.
H. Yoshizawa”


(to be continued)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-04updated|Chapter Seven Unfinished]
Post by: kuro808 on November 04, 2009, 08:33:45 AM

very cute chapters, i like the IshiYoshi moment :heart:

keep up the work

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-04updated|Chapter Seven Unfinished]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 04, 2009, 08:44:17 AM

Ishiyoshi is love. :heart:

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Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on November 04, 2009, 08:52:20 AM

Mikitty :cry:

mmm, this is one of the few times that Ishiyoshi makes me go all aawww :oops:

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Post by: Beecubed on November 04, 2009, 10:04:21 AM

YATTA!! IshiYoshi!  :wub:
They go way back then, hey? Soooo cute  :otomerika: :yossi:
Rika must have been through a lot of hard times back then. Yossie seems to have been a real bright star in Rika's life... she must mean the world to Rika. The way it really is  :w00t:

But Yossie sure is a charmer, ne? It's so nice of her to invite Miki to the match for that reason. Poor Miki, I hope she doesn't take it too hard!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for the sweet updates, and for updating quickly too. Great job!  :twothumbs

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-04updated|Chapter Seven Unfinished]
Post by: kRisZ on November 04, 2009, 02:19:21 PM

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“In the same club, Fujimoto-san and I.” she explained

Oh oww


IshiYoshi  :wub:


Sooner or later Miki will steal Yossie's attention from Rika  :P  I hope   :grin:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-04updated|Chapter Seven Unfinished]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 05, 2009, 12:51:48 PM

To be frank, I was moved by her words so deeply that I couldn't help crying for at least 5 minutes. I determined to wear that pink windbreaker to school and thank her with my sincere heart. However, it was really an expensive gift and I didn't know what gift could I buy for her birthday in return, because when I saw the windbreaker in a luxury shop, and I couldn't even afford a sleeve of it.
“What matters most is you like it!” she said to me, as usual, smiling, when I expressed my thank.
I felt I began to love staying with her. She helped me with my study, and clear up my mess life as well. I couldn't help depending on her, and, absolutely, falling love with her. But I dared not to say that, and tried my best to hide my feelings. Though I fell for her, I knew it clearly that we were not in the same social class.
I repeated to myself over and over again ---- We were totally DIFFERENT.

April came. I had to began preparing her birthday gift. I couldn't make sure whether there would be enough money for me to do that, also, I didn't know what to buy for her. She seemed to have had all she wanted. I wandered in the streets and did a lot of window-shopping. Finally I went home with nothing in hand, and this situation lasted for a week.
Only five days left for me.
When I lay on my bed, I looked around my bedroom, holding my toy bear which was made by my mom. It suddenly reminded me that I could make a gift for her by my own hands. Though I feared she might not like a handmade but cheap gift, I was still excited with this idea.
However, it, at least, was the best one I could come up with. I wished she would like it.
The next day, I went to buy a luck charm for her, and began my handmade gift. It was the same toy bear as mine. In my inner heart, I was eager to have some kinds of connection with her, not only in the soccer field, but also in life. With this determination, I finished the gift the very day before her birthday. This toy bear looked exactly the same with my old one. I surround a necktie around its neck and named it “Positive Yossie”.

We didn't have training that day, so I decided to wait her out at the school gate. I spotted her, but she was surrounded by several students, all of them laughing and talking. I saw a lot bags of luxuries in her hands. I was discouraged by them as well as my own cheap one. I hid myself behind a tree, unable to move a step for quite a long time.
It was so depressing.
I went home in low spirit, and ate nothing for supper. I went to bed much earlier than usual. I hold the cellphone, hesitating whether I should send a message to her to say “Happy Birthday.” Just a second before I made my decision, the screen shining. I got a message from her. On the screen was only a few words:
“Could you come to my home. I need you.”I got up in 1/10 second, asking her address, changing my clothes, and grabbing the toy bear.
I RUSHED OUT IN NO TIME.
She said she needed me.

When I got her home, I was totally out of breath. I had to lean against the wall for several seconds and rang the doorbell.
The moment she opened the door, the smell of wine rushed into my nose. She, I had thought,  was a little bit drunk with her eyes red.
“What’s wrong, Yoshizawa san?” I asked.
She gazed at me for several seconds, and suddenly KISSED me on lips.
The toy bear dropped on the ground, as I stood there, feeling her hot breath, frozen.



(to be continued)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: Beecubed on November 05, 2009, 02:57:35 PM

HOLY CRAP!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

That last part is absolute IshiYoshi love... while Yossie may have been buzzed, I'm sure it allowed her to reveal her true feelings. The fact that she 'needs' Rika xD WOOOOOT!!!  :otomerika: :yossi:

Thanks for the revealing thoughts from Rika's perspective. She admires/loves Yossie so much... *I mean, look how quickly she went off after hearing Yossie needs her!* I hope to read about her confessing such feelings to Yossie one day, who is bound to accept those feelings right away. It already looks like Yossie needs Rika too! <3

The birthday gift thing reminds me of Meteor Garden xD But of course gifts from the heart will always be the winners! Rika and Yossie may be from two different worlds, but they're finding a deep connection here, and it will surely blossom now that they've KISSED.  :wub:

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!

*fangirl screaming*

LOVED this update! Can't wait to read more!  :heart:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: kRisZ on November 05, 2009, 03:50:28 PM

 :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:  IshiYoshi in action   :banana:  :banana:  :banana:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on November 05, 2009, 03:59:35 PM

oh my god! oh i cant breathe! i cant breathe!!
arh!! ishiyoshi :heart:
they both need each other so much~~

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 05, 2009, 03:59:51 PM

Ishiyoshi yay yay! :otomerika: :yossi:

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Post by: Miki IV on November 05, 2009, 04:56:27 PM

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!  :wub:

I Loved this update too!  :heart:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: kuro808 on November 05, 2009, 07:38:46 PM

 :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:

That was instant game winning home run style of action :crowd cheers:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 06, 2009, 02:04:01 AM

Then she gazed me again, and said in a low voice, “Sorry…”
I couldn't make the whole event clear so I just shook my head to express I was not so bothered by her sudden kiss. I touched my lips, hearing my heart beating strongly.
She turned back, appearing so tired. I followed her into the house. Everything coming into my sight was beyond my imagination. I was completely blown away. The living room was as large as my entire house. The furniture was the luxuries which, at least to me, could only be seen in TV drama.
I sat down restrainedly, and found a lot of empty bottles lying on all sides on the ground.
“Is there something wrong?” I asked very carefully.
“Nothing.” I could hear clearly that she had cried a while before.
“Ano…” I ran to the door, and picked up the bear, and then ran back to her, “I couldn't afford to buy you any expensive gift, so I made it by myself. Though I am not good at making toys, I tried my best to do it. You might not like it…”
“I like it.” She interrupted me, and took the bear from my hand, “I like it. I like it most!” she emphasized.
“Thank you,” she came to hug me, “Rika.”
It was the first time that she had called me Rika.
“I received a lot of gifts from others, but my father forgot my birthday. I called him at noon, but he didn't answer it, and his secretary told me he was busy with the negotiation, and had no time to answer any call.” She seated me in sofa, and sat beside me.
“He called me back this afternoon, I thought he must remember the date today, but he just called to tell me he would not come back home today, because he had to fly to New York in emergence. I wanted to receive a happy birthday greeting from him, but I didn't. I knew he was busy doing his own work for me and my family, but sometimes, I felt, to him, work is superior to me.”
“Your mother…”
“Passed away.” She replied, and it made me feel quite sorry for her and my face became hot with shame.
“I am sorry...So you are alone today…?”
“Not only today,” She added, “almost everyday.”
I felt greatly deep sorrow rising from my heart. I’d never thought she was so lonely, because every time I saw her, she was smiling and energetic.
“Thank you for your birthday gift. I really like it.” She turned to me, and said gratefully, “that is the most precious gift I have ever received. After my mother passing away, nobody sent me any handmade gift like this. I will treasure it for my lifetime, I promise.”
I nodded. I touched her heart by accident and it opened a door for me to get into her real world. Though till then, I still couldn't clearly understand what had happened, I couldn't help falling into the uncertain future with her.
“I thought I wouldn't be able to get a gift from you, for you didn't appear the whole day.”
“I was afraid that you wouldn't like it.”
“What matters is not the price of the gift, but the intention in it. I am tired of expensive luxuries. I couldn't feel any warmness from them. But I felt it today from yours.”
“I am glad you like it.” I felt extremely happy to see her smiling again.
Then we came into silence. Neither of us said a word. But I didn't feel embarrassed at all. I liked sitting with her
“I will be with you tonight.” I said and telephone my mother to inform her that I wouldn't come back home that night.
I did all of this before I could think my words and actions over.
“I will be with you!” I said to her again.

(to be continued)




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 I am wondering whether there is anybody willing to see some hots scene of ishiyoshi...
some 18x hot scenes~~(tittering~~~)

I can't stop writing this chapter of Ishiyoshi~I am soooooooooooooooooooo excited when designing and writing it. It's funny~!!!

If you would like to see any hot plots, please tell me   XD :otomerika: :yossi:

I will post another update later today.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven Part III]
Post by: Sancho on November 06, 2009, 03:18:38 AM

Ah sorry for not replying on few chapter (busy week  :P)

I don't why I feel nervous when I'm reading this, specially the last part (Maybe I'm expecting something  :lol:) Rika and Yossie was sooooooo sweet with one another. It's hard to describe. it's like they are born for each other. Poor Miki. if she only knew how strong their bond is. It's a chance for Aya. All she have to do is tell Miki her feeling. What I see is Miki only see her as a friend.

Please continue.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven Part III]
Post by: kRisZ on November 06, 2009, 03:56:09 AM

 :wriggly:  :luvluv1:  :luvluv2:

Quote from: 7Seas。 on November 06, 2009, 02:04:01 AM

 I am wondering whether there is anybody willing to see some hots scene of ishiyoshi...
some 18x hot scenes~~(tittering~~~)

I can't stop writing this chapter of Ishiyoshi~I am soooooooooooooooooooo excited when designing and writing it. It's funny~!!!

If you would like to see any hot plots, please tell me   XD :otomerika: :yossi:

I will post another update later today.

*Raises both hands* :twisted:    Me wants   :mon heh:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven Part III]
Post by: Miki IV on November 06, 2009, 05:00:30 AM

OMG!!!!  :luvluv1:

Ishiyoshi RLZ!!!!!  :otomerika: :yossi:

Thanks for update!!!  :wub:

Quote from: kRisZ on November 06, 2009, 03:56:09 AM

:wriggly:  :luvluv1:  :luvluv2:

Quote from: 7Seas。 on November 06, 2009, 02:04:01 AM

 I am wondering whether there is anybody willing to see some hots scene of ishiyoshi...
some 18x hot scenes~~(tittering~~~)

I can't stop writing this chapter of Ishiyoshi~I am soooooooooooooooooooo excited when designing and writing it. It's funny~!!!

If you would like to see any hot plots, please tell me   XD :otomerika: :yossi:

I will post another update later today.

*Raises both hands* :twisted:    Me wants   :mon heh:

Me too!!!  :roll:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven Part III]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 06, 2009, 06:23:06 AM

We talked a lot that night about our own childhood and funny as well as sad experiences. I told her my poor family situation, and my daily life at home. Before that, I’d never known she would have problems like me, but she did have. She was just an extraordinary girl as I was. Nothing different except for family background.
I found her talkative, maybe due to her drinking alcohol too much. She laughed loudly and behaved like a naughty child.
Time went into deep night. No other sounds could be heard any more. We got exhausted after playing computer and singing karaoke at home. Then she led me to her room, which appeared in my imagination a lot.
It was very clean and everything was in order. There was a big bookshelf at the corner, and a lot of books about different subjects on it. Her bed was a double bed covered by some kind of expensive sheet. A photo frame stood on the night table. In it was a photo of her in football team uniform, smiling widely at the camera and holding a cup in hand.
She picked out several pajamas from her large closet.
“Any one you like?”
I chose a white one, and got changed. She looked at me doing that. I felt a little bit shy and nervous. Though we had seen each other’s naked body a lot in the school’s locker room, yet this time, something in my body seemed to be turned on. Was that because the kiss, I guessed.
We got on the bed, and turned off the light.
I turned my back to her, heart beating quickly. Silent for quite quite a long time.
“Sleeping?” her voice came into my ears whenI thought she’d fallen into sleep.
I shook my head, feeling her arms coming to surround me from behind.
“Rika…” she murmured.
Her soft breath spread around my neck, I felt her warmness deep into my body. I turned to her, gazing at her shining eyes.
“May I ?” she paused and then asked.
I said nothing but nodded. I got the second kiss from Yossie, even today, I still consider it was one of the unforgettable kisses we made. Well, every kiss was unforgettable for me, and for us.
Her arms held me more tightly. Before I could take any action, she moved her lips to my neck and moved on…when I totally made out what had happened, my naked body had been already caught in her eyes.
Her fingers burnt every inch of my body, while her lips moistened my withered heart. I couldn't help moaning excitedly. Her middle finger was ready to explore more of my inner body, and I wanted to turn down her further aggressive action, however, my body was eager for it, I should say.
“A virgin?” she whispered into my ear with her warm breath, and slowed down her exploration, waiting for my response.
“I like this…” I surround my arms around her neck, and said to her, “Please…go on…”
I threw my body, also my soul, to her hands. She made me rise rapidly to the top of the clouds, and every pore was filled with excitement. I didn't know whether a virgin should be like that, but I really was.
When the moment came, I shouted her name out…YOSSIE!

We didn't calmed down until 3 a.m.. Both of us was exhausted and didn't want to move any more. But neither of us wanted to sleep. We lay ourselves as they were on the bed, and she scratched the quilt to cover ourselves.
I didn't want to find out whether it was right or wrong to do such kind of thing with a girl, I just knew I liked it and I loved her.
We got up at 5 o’clock, washing up and getting dressed. And then we went out to have breakfast.
The sun rose from the east, she took my hand, saying nothing. I gazed at the sun, the first time I received the warmness from it.
All the things happening during the night was like a dream. Happiness and nerve filled into my heart. I wished the dream could last for a lifetime…
“Yossie, will you be my dream maker?” I whispered to her.
She smiled to me.
“Yes, I will.”

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 06, 2009, 08:11:29 AM

 :on_hot: Whew, getting a little warm in here. Yay, they get it on!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: kRisZ on November 06, 2009, 01:13:07 PM

 :mon blood:  they've done it  :shakeit:   Me thinks about Miki and Rika's job  :mon huh:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on November 06, 2009, 01:18:29 PM

this is so hot!! :drool:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-05updated|Chapter Seven Part II]
Post by: Beecubed on November 06, 2009, 02:42:28 PM

Quote from: 7Seas。 on November 06, 2009, 02:04:01 AM

I am wondering whether there is anybody willing to see some hots scene of ishiyoshi...
some 18x hot scenes~~(tittering~~~)

I can't stop writing this chapter of Ishiyoshi~I am soooooooooooooooooooo excited when designing and writing it. It's funny~!!!

If you would like to see any hot plots, please tell me   XD :otomerika: :yossi:

I will post another update later today.

HOT scenes are  :heart:

And you're totally right.. writing IshiYoshi is incredibly addictive  :drool: well writing AND reading them.

The scene after the kiss was very sweet. So Yoshi is a lonely soul.. she seemingly has a perfect life - money and riches and the popularity go with it. But her own father doesn't even remember her birthday. Poor Yossie >.< And then begins this engrossing relationship between two struggling souls... love it love it love it!

Another thing... do school students in Japan really change in front of each other?? T__T I thought they'd be even more conservative than Australian norms anyway...

This TOTALLY sounds as if Yossie isn't a virgin xD But that was pretty hot yo.. even though it wasn't very graphic *has imagination to rely on here!* xD

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The sun rose from the east, she took my hand, saying nothing. I gazed at the sun, the first time I received the warmness from it.

Love this. So sweet and romantic, and summarises everything superbly.

Great update... I need more!!!  :wub:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on November 06, 2009, 07:52:49 PM

Wow... too much sugar and honey here XD but
AAWWWWWW :wub: they're so sweet! hehehe

after reading this, Ishiyoshi has won another  :heart: in my list hehehe (although Yomiki is still my #1 :D *insert Boa song No.1*)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: Sancho on November 07, 2009, 03:03:36 AM

Wait a minute....  *** Grabbing tissue from the desk wiped out blood from my nose.***. Continue please.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 07, 2009, 05:54:53 AM

Chapter Eight  Uncertain Future



     Ishikawa didn't appear in the club for more than a week. I thought she must be in the hospital with Yossie. I felt jealous, and was a little bit angry with all the things around me. I’d never realized that I had such a strong feeling towards Yossie. I hated to be like that, but I couldn't help it.

Ayaya brought me some homemade cake one night, which reminded me of my mother. I held the phone all the evening, but still, dialed no number.
“Mikitty looks unhappy these days, what happened?”
“Nothing…Don't worry…” I replied.
She lay down on the bed, said to me softly unlike her usual high tone, “If anything bad, please tell me. I will always be your side and support you.”
That nearly made me cry. I came close to tell her all, but I didn't.
She was so innocent and pure, and she shouldn't be polluted by me and my experience. If she knew I was a hostess, if she knew I had huge debt on shoulder, how would she feel?
At that time, I always doubted whether my decision was right or wrong. Was it really right that I left home and took all the burdens on my own shoulder? Was it really improper that I got married with some rich man to decrease the financial pressure of my family? Was all I did right? Even sometimes, I wanted to give up and returned home. Living with a man…it should be acceptable, if I forced myself to try.

Ishikawa appeared a few days later. She looked wan and drawn with her beautiful eyes inflamed. She went past me to the locker room directly without a word. I saw Yui and Erika exchange glances and following her in.
Several minutes later, the three came back. Ishikawa completely changed into the queen of the night, sexy, charming and wild. Like nothing happened.
Her guests were all excited to see her back, and they ordered a champagne Pagoda for her. She circulated among the guests, like a spirit. Everybody was happy to be with her. Everybody.

“Ano…” I thought for quite a long time and then asked, “Yoshizawa senpei…”
“She is recovering, nothing bad. Don't worry.” She replied me quickly, and headed for the door, then she turned back, “Nearly forget to say…she thanked you for coming to see her match.”
She closed the door, disappearing in the silent street.

I didn't know what had happened, maybe they quarreled, or something else.
I got the truth from the conversation of Yui and Erika when I took shower. They tried to talk in a low voice, but I still caught some key words from the talk.
Yossie’s father didn't like Rika, and he thought she was a dirty lesbian who seduced his noble daughter. Yossie quarreled with her father and her father drove Rika out of the hospital…so…she came back to work……
I felt sorry for Rika, reminded of her pale face and red eyes. I still remembered the light in her eyes when she stayed with Yossie. I could read a lot of happiness and dependence in them. Maybe she really loved her.
Then…what about me?

(to be continued)

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: kRisZ on November 07, 2009, 06:10:59 AM

Aww poor Rika  :cry:

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Then…what about me?

Good question  :D

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 07, 2009, 06:40:48 AM

No room in Ishiyoshi for Miki.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on November 07, 2009, 08:16:16 AM

damn! these dads are really annoying XD poor Rika :(
Come on Miki! talk to Aya :cry: she will understand

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-06updated|Chapter Seven finished]
Post by: Miki IV on November 07, 2009, 04:48:04 PM

Quote from: 7Seas。 on November 07, 2009, 05:54:53 AM

Ishikawa appeared a few days later. She looked wan and drawn with her beautiful eyes inflamed

 :twothumbs yeah! Charmikitty? x3


I loved chapter seven!!!  :heart:
It's very sweet and cute!!!! Really, Ishiyoshi is my favorite pairing!!!

Quote from: Kreuz_Asakura

Come on Miki! talk to Aya  she will understand

I agree!!!  :O Go, Mikitty!!! Go!!!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: kuro808 on November 07, 2009, 06:50:16 PM

Miki has a long road ahead for her hope she can get through it

Rika has to fight for yossie's father and idk how Miki is going to be approached :(

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: Beecubed on November 08, 2009, 08:43:46 AM

Rika, a dirty lesbian?  :angry: HOW DARE somebody call her that!!!!
*sighs*
Why are parents in stories so not understanding. Rika's feelings towards Yossie are 100% sweet and sincere... arghhhh.

There's one thing I can't seem to remember - does Yossie know Rika works at the club? Dunno if it was ever mentioned. Coz it seems to me that Yossie's dad knows about it. If he knows, then Yossie must know too? Oh wells, crappy dads all around. Hope the mums are better!

Definitely no room for Miki in IshiYoshi  XD Miki needs to realise that she has Ayaya. Soon. But I'm sure that won't be happening *sigh* we need a love square, right?

Anyways, nice update   :thumbsup
Waiting for your next one!  :heart:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: blastingcool on November 08, 2009, 08:59:23 AM

oh wat a headache, between ishiyoshi and yomiki, dont know who i should choose? Both Rika and Miki's situations are pitiful.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: badsaints on November 08, 2009, 12:25:11 PM

Gosh this chapter is so sad :cry: Poor Rika, wonder how Yossie is going to fight for her love? Maybe kick the father into the goal post *lame joke applause* :lol:

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Then…what about me?

Calling Ayaya to the rescue! :P

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-07|Chapter Eight Uncertain Future ]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 10, 2009, 01:51:59 PM

I met her father again that day. He rocked me strongly as the first he found our affairs…
I spent one or two days with Yossie every week when his father was away for business. I loved staying with her more and more. I treasured every minute we spent together.
That moring was unfortunate for us. Yossie kissed me at the door of the bedroom as usual. when we heard the yelling---
“What are you doing???”
Her father suddenly appeared with a shocked look on his face. We were shocked, too, because neither of us noticed his coming back at the last midnight.
We three just stood there, for a while, nobody talked. I could even hear the sound of second hand of the clock moving. 
“Get out here!!” he yelled all of a sudden, which, anyway, threatened me a bit. he was totally at a loss, waving his hands crazily.
“Dad…” Yossie couldn't explain.
I couldn't think, and also couldn't move until her father scratched my arm and dragged me towards the door.
“Dad, stop it! Dad!” Yossie came in front of us and tried to hold back her father.
“What were you doing?! My daugther kissed a girl!!! Are you crazy?! I never expected you to be like that!!”
“Dad, please! Let me explain!”
Her father surely wouldn't listen to her, he pushed her away and opened the door, then…he threw me out of the house.
Outside the door stood I with a pale face, I thought. I heard they were quarreling, and also, I heard something broken. I had no courage to knock the door again, so I began to run, run and run. Not until I fell down in a totally unfamiliar street did I noticed my tears had already covered my face. I was frightened, and couldn't help shacking all the way. It was the first time in my life that I had felt fearful inside. However, I, at that time, was not so strong as today. I was just a little girl who needed care and love, who was never prepared for such kind of shock.
I didn't have any strength to stand up…I was frozen from finger to toe.

The next few days, I didn't see her in school. I was worried about her, but I had no dare to call her. Today, I always felt regret having been such a weed. I received warmness and protection from her, but couldn't do anything in return.
One day after school, I was stopped by a black car, in it was her father. He got out of the car, and slowly walked to me. He handed me an envelope and said, “Take it, and leave here.” He found me not move, he frowned, “if there is any difficult I will help you transfer to another school, as long as…” he paused so-called gently, “you leave my daughter.”
“I don't need you money…” I said, still feeling fearful under his staring.
“You don't. But your family need.”
I was shocked! He had looked into my family!
“What did you do to my family!” I couldn't help shouting, “Who needs your money! Take it away!” I threw the envelope onto her stiff suit, and ran away. I heard him saying “You will take it one day.”

I ran back home out of breath, and threw myself into the bedroom. I was trembling, half because of fear, half anger. I was sure Yossie would not tell her father about my miserable family. I trusted that she would always protect me.
My mom sighed more than before, I knew my dad’s health condition got worse and worse. Sometimes I heard her sobbing in her bedroom and she also blamed herself for her inability. She told me more than a thousand times that she felt regret bearing me in such a family. I said never mind to her, but I knew it couldn't work for her.
Several days later, my dad had to been sent to hospital. Yossie’s father appeared there again. I felt he was like a ghost, following me everywhere, without any notice, then appeared all of a sudden.
The same words, exactly the same.
“Take it, and leaver here.”

Should I bend over to the reality…especially at the moment when my dad eagerly needed money.
I sold my soul for the first and the only time in my life. I was beaten and torn into pieces.

I disappeared in Yossie’s life for one year, and my exclusive light in life was swallowed up by the long-lasting freezing night…

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: kuro808 on November 10, 2009, 01:59:40 PM

the father caught them and he just went ballistic, well the IshiYoshi is just hardcore

you are doing some great storytelling with this fic keep up the work

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: 7Seas。 on November 10, 2009, 03:10:42 PM

I'm so glad to see you're loving the fic~
thank you for all of your comments~
rika has to experience many difficulties to grow up to a strong girl ~
I myself am looking forward to ishiyoshi's reunion!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: rndmnwierd on November 10, 2009, 04:05:42 PM

Poor Ishiyoshi, hope it works out for them.

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: ~happyxcharmy~ on November 10, 2009, 04:08:06 PM

how could he do this to rika!! :angry: WTF!
they had been aparted for a year!!oh crap!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: Sancho on November 11, 2009, 02:44:37 AM

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I disappeared in Yossie’s life for one year, and my exclusive light in life was swallowed up by the long-lasting freezing night…

I'd like to ask if Rika's disappearance in Yossie's life happen before Yossie's got injured or after? I'm a bit loss here  :P.  Anyway, the story is good and yossie's father really pissed me off (Way the go dad). Please continue.  :twothumbs

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: Kreuz_Asakura on November 11, 2009, 03:42:40 AM

Holy s$%&!!!! :O
poor Rika-chan :( 

hey Yossy's Dad! you were a big jerk there :thumbdown:

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: Beecubed on November 14, 2009, 11:24:33 AM

Ahhhh... IshiYoshi..  :heart:
I was really sad reading the part where Yossie's ( :angry:) dad tore them apart and threw Rika apart... I guess some parents won't be able to accept that their child is not 'normal'... such stupid, conversative and narrow-minded views of how the world should work. Love is love, and love transcends EVERYTHING. Reading about intolerance towards love just makes me really upset..

Poor Rika.. poor Yossie. The both of them needed to be loved and cared for so much, and just when they'd found that in each other, they're separated. And because of Rika's father's condition, it looks like she had to take the money. And in doing so, she had to be apart from Yossie. For a whole year..  :cry:

I'd love to read about their reunion! I'm sure it will be very touching.

Thank you for the update.. sad, but it really shows us what Rika's been through, how her past has shaped her into the person she is today.

Please update soon!

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: lina_sama on June 26, 2010, 05:42:11 PM

i like your fics ishiyoshi SAIKO!!! :twothumbs you would continue this fics?

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: ishiyoshiftw~^^ on August 19, 2010, 06:48:25 AM

This is a really good fanfic!  :D  :thumbup i really like the ishiyoshiness!!! :inlove:  :otomerika: :yossi: wish you would write more of it!  :cry: and meh stupid miki can just go get married and die or whatever

Title: Re: [Ishiyoshimikiaya] Yasha of Tokyo[11-10|Chapter Eight Part II]
Post by: shainingj on August 31, 2012, 07:28:11 PM

another good fic... left unfinished!!!  :cry: :bleed eyes: