DAMN YOU JPHIP FOR MAKING MY RE-UPLOAD THIS!
...JK
But seriously it was annoying... cos i'm a lazy bitch... and I feel weird repeating myself...
Anywho a few quick replies (again)
@Flean: Sorry to make you wait... I'm receiving angry feedback from you in my other fic so... do I get more in this one?
@Turtle: A Katana is quick and fast. Wouldn't you rather that than something slow and painful? Anywho hope you like the update!
@blughise: Hey there bluggy, i'm sure you can write like this as well if you tried. It doesn't take long to type it... just heaps long to get motivated to do it xD
@arisa03: Sorry that it took so long. haha Kai is a cutey but we shall see if he can continue to be this sweet aye.. Btw like your fanfics.
@Kirachan: Lol you like Sae getting bashed? xD Well I'm I can make more for you! Anyway, I'm too unmotivated for this stuff. You can write for me xD
@Bouchan: I have called you a proper name are you happy? haha and yeah im so unmotivated to update. When I come on here and my fanfic is not on the first page I go "Shit.. I have to click an extra button... ok give up" xD and then I don't update for months until I build the effort to click the button...then its not even on the second page! and it starts again for a few more months!
@Kahem ahaha I know right. I did it to a guy when I played soccer and he didn't enjoy it much... it was an accident though!
@hott3stson3: Hehe are you locked up in an asylum? I'm not going to see you reply until you get let out am I... stay safe!
@haruhi16: Sorry I didn't update soon... x[
@skytsuna: Hahaha thank you for loving my fic. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
@Popsicle: As you can see.. When I can seems to be a few months... by then it seems as though people forget about the fic.
@Thank You givers THANK YOU RIGHT BACK AT YA! Thanks for reading and appreciating my fic. It's good to get some feedback.
@Secret readers: Can I get some feedback? Kinda motivates me because when authors don't get feed back... they will stop writing because they believe no one is enjoying their fics.
ANYWHO! CHEESE IS GREAT!
I present to you...
Chapter Four
Fatty and skinny were at it again. Skinny was running on the treadmill and Fatty was attempting, let me repeat that again. ATTEMPTING, to do a push-up. As expected Fatty failed at doing a push-up and instantly found comfort in the crème brulee he had hid in his gym bag. However, such a sugary and salivatingly sweet delicacy could never be unnoticed by “THE INFAMOUS POWERFUL MUSCULAR BLOOD PUMPING BODY SWEATING PROTEIN SATURATED GYM INSTRUCTOR OF DOOM AT GYM-GYM-GYM, AKIMOTO THE SUPER SAIYAN!!!” The crème brulee was snatched from Fatty’s hand and crushed like an insect in the palm of such a powerful gym freak. This earned a chuckle from Skinny who was now casually striding on the treadmill. However upon receiving the slightest glare from the super saiyan, Skinny immediately increased the altitude and speed of the treadmill sprinting endlessly as if the muscular man was chasing him. One thought was going through Skinny’s head.
“Stop and the bastard is gonna skin you alive. Run. Run. RUN!!!”
On the other hand Fatty was sitting on the ground. He, unlike Skinny, was more traumatised about the crushing of the crème brulee than the deathly aura emitted by the super saiyan. Pouting endlessly the young boy finally broke down in tears.
“WHY~~~~.” Sniffling non-stop as booger dangled from his nostril. It was indeed a sad story. You could say it was a shocking life-changing experience. Never has he ever felt the loss of such a delicate dessert. Rummaging around he finally detected the leftovers of the once perfect crème brulee. He instantly began licking up the left over bits of the crème brulee to the Super Saiyan and Skinny’s disgust. Upon finishing he finally leant back against the gym mat, absolutely satisfied of his personal workout. Opening up his eyes he was faced by the glare of the muscular man. He could see steam streaming out from the latter’s flaring nostrils. He immediately flipped over and began to pump out endless amounts of push-ups. The super saiyan walked away leaving the Fatty and Skinny to breathe in a sigh of relief.
However, the opening of the front door, the sound of the Saiyan’s voice, but in particular the calling of a particular name drew their attention.
“RIKU! How are you my young boy!” The Super Saiyan called.
Riku slowly strode into the gym and gave the giant a fist pump.
“Hey Sayaka I’m ready for the next work out.”
“Haha why so keen lately? Picking up a lot of girl’s?”
“You could say that.” Riku grinned towards Sakaya before lifting up his arm and flexing his muscles. “Ever since I came here and began working out I have received endless compliments.”
“Haha is that just on the streets or in bed as well?”
“Wouldn’t you like to know!” Riku chuckled and continued walking into the personal training rooms with Sayaka.
Skinny immediately turned towards Fatty.
“So that’s why Riku is hitting the gym so much… I wonder if he is cheating on Yuko…”
“Mar-kun you know Riku isn’t that type to cheat on Yuko.”
“How would you know Kuu? You’re too busy eating cakes….”
“I trust Riku and I swear he loves Yuko even though he says that she is annoying.”
“Hmm… true… Anyway I’m going to continue working out to spy on him.”
“You mean you are going to try and get fit like him and get yourself some more chicks…”
“Shut up. I have more than you!”
~***~
In the gym room.
“So seriously Riku, how has it been since you started at the gym?” Sayaka asked as Riku continued punching the boxing bags.
“A lot better.” Riku stopped and wiped the sweat off his brow. “I’m finally able to keep up with her. She usually drains me in bed but now I feel as though I’m keeping her excited” He grins gingerly and punches the bag a few more times. “I was so scared she’ll just get over me if I couldn’t perform well in bed. She’s such an energetic bunny…”
“Haha you should bring her in one day.”
“Hell no! What if she works out more! I’ve dead! Or if she falls in love with someone else here!”
“I thought you said she only loves you?”
“Yeah… but I’m still a bit scared… she was speaking really closely with Kai the other day…”
“Really? Well you better watch out then. Kai has been working out like crazy lately. Even though he has his own gym at home he has been running here every day and working out like crazy. I swear his abs will be like razor blades even though he’s so small.”
“WHAT?” Riku immediately lifted up his shirt and looked at his abs. “Is my 6pack better or his?”
Sayaka turned and looked at the anxious boy.
“Sorry to say but I’m sure Kai has a 12pack…”
Riku immediately dropped down and began pumping out crunches.
“Gotta catch up then!!”
Sayaka chuckled and left the room.
“Don’t hurt yourself or you’ll have to sit out and Kai might get ahead of you!”
~***~
Kai casually strolled into the gym. Wearing his token black Jeremy Scott Adidas winged hoodie with matching trackpants he dumps his gym bag onto the ground. Dancing on the spot to the tunes on his iPod he gently stretches his muscles. Smiling to himself he reminisce the events of yesterday.
Flashback
Sprinting after Acchan he dodges the tomatoes flying towards him. However just as though he was about to grab her she pegs a tomato square in his face instantly blinding him. Crashing on top of the younger girl, he opens his eyes only to be faced by the mesmerising brown orbs of the younger girl. Both panting breathlessly he feels her hot breath against his lips. Suddenly he feels a cool sensation as the girl’s delicate hand gently caresses his cheek. Slowly removing the bits of tomato spread across his face. Smiling brightly he allows her to continue her small gestures. His heart was racing and he could feel that hers was beating as madly as his. He looked at her soft lips and unconsciously he began to move down towards them. However before they touched the screaming voice of a child startled them both. Making them instantly move apart.
“JUST DO IT ALREADY!”
Looking up they saw the disappointed face of Nami-chan.
“Aww man are you serious!” The little girl rolled her eyes as the two adults chuckled gently, trying to forget about what nearly happened. Kai turned and smiled as Acchan who blushed furiously. Unexpectedly he felt as a pair of soft lips touched his cheeks. Turning he saw the girl shyly packing up the shopping bags.
“T-t-t-there was tomato on your cheek.”
Grinning like a dork he decided to tease the younger girl.
“There’s some on my lips as well.”
He watched as the girl instantly reddened like a tomato.
“YAH!” She hit his arm before she slowly got up. “Help me up my ankle hurts.” She pouted towards him. He instantly rose up off the ground held onto her waist. Slowly walking her and Nami back home. Upon arriving at her house he noticed the small apartment block that she lived in.
“Do you live here?”
“Yeah.” She smiled brightly. “Do you live near by?”
Kai finally realised that Acchan had no idea who he was and the prestigious background he had. This made him smile instantly. Finally a girl who may actually be down-to-Earth and who would love him for him and not his family’s power. He unconsciously smiled.
“Y-yeah…”
“Maybe you could come over for dinner sometime?”
“Sure, I’d love to.”
Finally he remembered what had been eating at him all day. What was her relationship with Sae? Does she have a boyfriend?
“Um Acchan…”
“Yeah?”
“D-d-do you have a boyfriend? I-I-I saw some guy giving you flowers this morning on my way to Uni…”
“Oh that creeper! No way! He has been pestering since he nearly ran me over at the Uni.”
“HE NEARLY WHAT?”
“It’s okay I’m alright.” She didn’t know why but she instantly held onto his hand.
“Are you sure? I’ll go yell at him!”
“No it’s okay.” She smiled towards him and gently pecked his cheek for the second time. Suddenly she let go of his hand and moved away. She was so in the moment that she had forgotten to ask whether or not Kai had a girlfriend before making a move on him. She began hitting her own head in frustration. Suddenly she felt his hand holding onto hers. Preventing her from hitting herself.
“Are you okay?” Looking up she instantly blurted out an endless sentence of rambles.
“DOYOUHAVEAGIRLFRIEND?LIKEITSOKAYIFYOUDOBUTIJUSTWANTEDTOKNOWINCASEYOUKNOW-”
She was cut off by a pair of lips on hers.
“I’m single unless you want to be my girlfriend.”
She smiled towards him. Absolutely flabbergasted as to what was happening. It was going too fast. Suddenly she was brought back into reality by a squealing voice behind them.
“JUST SAY YES!!!!”
Turning around they looked at a hyperactive Nami-chan jumping on the stool. Turning back around Acchan instantly smiled towards the anxious boy before her.
“I would love to.”
End of Flashback.Here he is now. Still smiling like a fool that he is. A loved up fool. After the confessions and goodnight kiss that followed dinner at the younger girl’s house he hadn’t stopped smiling. He immediately got onto the treadmill and began running. Unknown to him he had finally began to skip for the first time in his life. However this didn’t go unnoticed by three pairs of eyes.
Fatty and Skinny stared in shock. Their jaws touching the ground.
“Oh my fucken god… Did he get laid…” They said in union.
On the other hand, the other boy stood frozen in fear. Here he was thoroughly exhausted from the workout, sweating like a bitch, and breathing like someone having an asthma attack. However, there he saw his greatest gym enemy happily skipping at an incredible pace like it was normal to be happy during such a hard workout.
“FFFFFFFFFFFFFFAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRKKKKKKKKKKKK!”
The entire gym, except for Kai who had his iPod blaring, turned and watched as the young boy collapsed to the ground.
~***~
On the other side of town Sae was busy yet again. He was not giving up on courting “Yuki”. He had on a black tuxedo, a bouquet of roses and a teddy bear in hand. Strutting towards the florist yet again he mentally prepared himself.
“Hey sexy let’s go out! No no… Hey there again let’s have lunch! No… You got a nice smile, so do I, let’s kiss! Nah…. Um… Let’s have sex! Shit she’s not like that…”
Suddenly his attention was diverted towards the direction of the sweet voice he had been waiting for.
“Hey I’m just going to deliver these and pick up Nami okay?”
Suddenly the evil chicken manure throwing testicle crushing girl walked out of the shop following her.
“Okay, travel safely! I’ll see you soon.”
Watching the girl bicycle towards him he immediately stood in front of the younger girl’s bike for the nth time that week.
“What do you want again?” She asked in exasperation. He stared into her beautiful eyes and let the first words slip out of his mouth hoping they would get her attention and they definitely did.
“Let’s have sex.”
She immediately glared at him, he on the other hand hadn’t realised what he had said and waited patiently for the dramatic confession of love from her. Instead he received his second blow to his genitals in two days. Coupling over he watched the departing figure through tear drenched eyes.
“Why~” He wailed with his arm outstretched. The saying “Love Hurts” finally made sense to him because right now it definitely does hurt.
~***~
Back at the gym Riku had finally woken up. He looked around the bright room and spotted two faces he had never expected to see in a gym.
“Mar-kun? Kuu? What the hell are you doing here?”
“You know a ‘hello’ or ‘thank you’ would be greatly appreciated” Mar-kun said as he rolled his eyes.
“Sorry I just never expected you to be here, did Sayaka call you to pick me up?”
“WE WERE WORKING OUT OKAY!”
“No way….” Riku said in disbelief. “Where’s Kai?”
“He is still working out. Something’s wrong though, he was skipping. SKIPPING!!! He can’t skip!! But he was! Something must have happened… Kuu and I think that he got laid.”
Riku’s eyes widened remembering that Yuko had rejected his invitation to go to a conference ball with him last night claiming she had to meet with someone important. In addition, Kai didn’t show up for it either. Piecing one and one together he finally began to fear the worst. Instantly he let out his second scream and like before fainted for the second time that day.
~***~
Kai casually jumped off the treadmill with an extra spring in his step. Walking over to his bag he called up his new girlfriend. Listening to the ring tone he waited patiently for the latter to answer.
“Hello Acchan speaking.”
“Hehe hello Kai speaking.”
“Stop teasing me.”
“I’m not”
“You are~”
“Hehe what are you doing?”
“I’m just delivering some flowers and then going to pick Nami up.”
“Oh okay.”
“What are you doing?”
“Just at the gym.”
“Gym? Isn’t that expensive? Are you flirting with some hot girls?”
“Hehe I’m only flirting with one but she’s too busy delivering flowers.”
“Hehe flirt!”
“Only towards you.”
“I hope so… Oh yeah you know that creeper who was following me.”
Remember Sae the smile immediately disappeared from Kai’s face.
“Yeah…”
“He came up to be today and asked me to have sex with him!”
“WHAT? He asked you for sex?”
“Yeah… Then I kicked him in the baby maker…”
“Hahahahahahaha…. DON’T HURT ME!”
“I would never hurt you like that!”
“OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo so you wanna have sex with me but not him!”
The sound of a male screaming loudly behind Kai was heard before the sound of something dropping loudly on the ground. Shuffling was then heard before mumbling and sighs.
“What was that?”
“I don’t know but I’ll take that as a yes.”
“Argh stop being a pervert or I’ll stop talking to you!”
“Hahaha ok ok I’ll stop you know I’m not after that.”
“How would I know?”
“Because I love you.”
There was silence on the other side of the line. Kai was scared, maybe he had been a bit too upfront and full on a bit too soon. However, he suddenly felt a sigh of relief when he heard four simple words.
“I love you too.”
Smiling widely he continued chatting to his girlfriend as he began packing his belongings and then left the gym.
~***~
“What do you mean Kai has been flirting with someone else?”
“We saw him with some girl in the park yesterday.”
“Yeah, they seemed…” Gulping slowly the girl continued. “Intimate…”
The former immediately threw the closest object on her desk at her mirror. Smashing the glass into multiple pieces the raged girl immediately stood up from her seat.
“Find out who that girl is and make sure she knows where she belongs. No one. And I mean no one can ever take Kai from me.”
“Y-Yes Ray.” The two girls immediately bowed towards Ray before scurrying out the door.
Ray peered out the window from her office. Starring down towards the people who were busily running around for their day-to-day lives she glared towards nothing in particular. She clenched her fist tightly.
“That family ruining bitch will never come in between Kai and I.” Turning around she sat back down at her desk. Grabbing hold of the photo frame on her desk she smiled bitterly. “No one can have your heart but me.
TBCWell that is it! Please provide some feedback peoples! And people who might have given me feedback last time i updated this and it kinda got deleted as the site shut down could you reupdate your feedback please. Oh and I said last time that I am planning to update on a private blog instead of here as it requires less effort than clicking the button... And I actually have an idea if its worth me updating cos I'll know if there are readers xD. What do you guys think about that?
Cheers,
Love you all like I love cheese.
Peace out
Keichan ^_^