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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 6/30 Kamei Eri 16sai
« Reply #160 on: July 01, 2012, 02:17:57 AM »
:) now i undestand this haha!

I don't blame you probably everyone was WTF until now o_O
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 6/30 Kamei Eri 19sai
« Reply #161 on: July 01, 2012, 06:52:45 AM »
Moving on


I miss you Onee-chan

Calling your phone

I receive a message

I can’t seem to find you

You were right

I hate when you’re right

She is bad news

But I still love her

She protected me from the bullies

In the end,

She got attained

Now sitting in a cell

Waiting for my reply

I don’t have money

If you were here,

I would ask you

She is bad news

Why can’t I punish myself then?

Your words supply me with hope

Risa nee-chan

Please help me.

Kamei Eri

Age 19

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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 6/30 Cider Salei
« Reply #162 on: July 01, 2012, 11:18:27 AM »
After realizing that I may be doing something wrong, I wrote this one-shot


Riho had a sparkle in her eyes.

Her dream had come through.  She prayed every day that her favorite store would have a sale on cider.  Her desperation for a sale led her to go to a shrine just to pray for a sale.  Riho finally saw the sale but it was in cases covered with plastic and it required a purchase of five bottles minimum.

She needed people.  Riho called the rest of her kyuukies to the store while holding her position in front of the display.  Fifteen minutes past, with no sign of her fellow group members, but luckily there was a former member walking around with a hand cart.

“Hello Takahashi-san,” she greeted the former leader.

“Riho-chan, what are doing here?”  Ai saw the display behind her and snickered.

“Cider is on sale.”

“I see that but you cannot carry five in your arms,” Ai commented with her hand cart filled up with fresh strawberries and whipped cream.

Riho looked at the carrier and gave her a stare.  “Can… you… help… me?”

Ai looked down at her hand cart before taking out her phone.  She had texted the only person with a car in her possession but a reply back eliminated that possibility.  She looked at her long list of contacts and Eri’s name popped up, so she decided to give her a try.

Success.  She had a turtle coming to help the fellow member with her problem.

Ten minutes later, the eldest of the kyuukies walked in with a small backpack with her eyes concentrating on finding the group member.  She scanned through every aisle until she got a sight of Ai-chan and walked in seeing Riho by the display.

“Cider.  Are you serious?”  Fuku-chan’s expression was genuine for the younger member as her love was sure a pain for everyone else.

“I wanted to buy some but it requires me to buy five at minimum,” Riho explained as she looked over at Ai-chan and her groceries.

“Date with Risa?”

Ai tried to hide the reason but she knew that it wasn’t going to past by Fuku-chan easily but she always wanted to try her limitations.

“I’m making pie, the other ingredients are at home,” the former leader explained with Fuku-chan seemingly to agree with the plan.

“Ohayou.”  A certain turtle walked into the aisle greeting the group as Eri looked up at the display.

“Cider sale,” she said to herself as Riho grabbed two bottles off the display.

“Why not grab the whole case?”  Kamei responded with Ai giving her the stare of death.

“Do you think she can carry that?”  Kamei looked at the feeble girl before giving her usual aho smile to the former leader.

“I guess not,” Kamei utter in a low voice.

The four were in the aisle planning out how to help the fellow member out with her problem and walking in were the new leader and her cohort.  The bunny avoided attention to the aisle of the cider girl but Kamei instantly pointed them out, sucking them into the situation.

“Riho-chan, why are you here?”  The bunny questioned as Reina went next to Ai as her eyes went to the basket.

“Shortcake?”  Reina asked as Ai was now in a rush to check out and left the aisle quietly.

“There is a cider sale and I need people to help me,” Riho explained to them.

Sayu looked beyond the aisle and let Reina handle the situation but the kitty was quick enough to deflect the attention and went back to the leader.  She had a look of disappointment as she glanced back at Riho and grabbed two bottles to head to the check out.  However, Riho decided to get the wrapped case instead of the individual bottle which cost much less per bottle.

Sayu struggled to get it onto her hands and threw it into the shopping cart not realizing Reina had put crackers and it spilt onto the floor.  In her frustration, Reina grabbed the nearby broom to sweep up the crumbs from the floor.  Sayu was oblivious to the accident and dragged her cart away to the checkout stand.

“Riho-chan, there you are,” two of her fellow kyuukies were next to her as they pushed the cart toward the checkout.

Ikuta-san looked to the next checkout stand and waved at the cashier with Ai receiving her change from her.  She waved back cautiously as the other cashier decided to take Riho next in line.  The kyuukies were now in a straight line with the narrow area as Riho took the lead.

Following her was Zukki, who was in the middle of begging for a snack for home but the leader rejected the plea and let her suffer.  Eripon was behind Zukki and exited the line to meet with the other cashier with the sign pointing towards her way.

“Break?”  She asked as the cashier nodded.

“Have a nice one?”  Eripon shouted as she returned to the other end waiting for the purchase.

Riho muscle the case onto the black moving belt and it was scanned by the cashier with the machine calculating the total.  She slid her hand into the pocket and quickly realized that she was missing something else.  Before she realized the purchase, Riho wanted to stop it but now she was in a pickle.

“Your total is 1690 yen, please,” her voice elegantly said the total.

Riho looked around with embarrassment and put her hands together to plead with the others to pay for the drinks.  The three stared at each other as they counted up the loose change from the pocket.  Realizing it wasn’t enough, Sayu paid off the rest for making Riho amazed that she would do a favor for someone.

Riho carried it out of the store with a smile on her face while Sayu was now short for her extravagant trip in the store and left without purchasing anything else from the store leaving the new leader and Reina without any items for a few hours.
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/1 Kudo
« Reply #163 on: July 02, 2012, 10:27:58 AM »
One more time


“Let’s go to the amusement park,” the leader called out as the group pushed themselves into a van.

The gleeful cheer of all the members rocked the car as the driver covered his ears avoiding the screeches of the girls.  As they parked the van, one girl stuck in the corner with a pout on her face as the members leave the vehicle until she leaped out.

She watched the group walked toward the entrance with her legs feeling like rubber.  The sign outside the park scarred her mind like a demon ripping through a dream.  The youngest member was taking a few steps before stopping and broke down on the asphalt.

I can’t admit my feelings to them.  I rather die here.

The youngest of the previous generation came running over to push her towards the entrance.  The resistance was strong with her feet gluing to the ground.  Reina came running over to analyze the situation and dragged her through with the kitty’s scary demeanor.

Sayu passed out the passes to everyone and let them roam around the park trying out the rides.  The youngest looked on from the bench her fears getting the worst of her.  Sayu bit down on her lips as she feared that she wasn’t going to have fun sitting on the bench and walked over to talk to the younger member.

“Kudo~ why are you not having fun with the others?” 

The leader pointed to the rides.

“Haunted house, I don’t like going there,” she replied.

Sayu pushed her toward the roller coaster so sher could keep her mind off the haunted house.  The leader let her sit next to her to calm her nerves but her expression never changed.  Sayu, in frustration, looked around the park for the next ride but the group was touring around quickly so she took her to the food court for ice cream.

Kudo’s sadness was stuck on her face as Sayu couldn’t leave her alone in the park while everyone else would have fun in the haunted house.  She took out her cell phone and dialed the only number she knew.

“Hello Sayu.”

“Hey, are you busy?” 

There was a few seconds pause before she came back to the phone.

“Not really, what do you need?”  She asked.

“Can you come to the amusement park?  I need you to help me out here.”

“As a leader, you need to take control.  If you cannot control everyone…”

“I know that, but I need a personal favor because I cannot leave her alone in the park.”

“Why not take her in blindfolded?” 

Ai began to figure out the problem and Sayu couldn’t be cunning enough to allow the former leader to walk into a trap.  Sayu became desperate and gripped her phone tight.

“I’ll do anything, just please help me out,” The leader pleaded.

“Okay, but you will not force me into your game.” 

She hung up the phone and dialed another number to a kitty, who was spinning from the spin o whirl.  Reina picked up the phone and told the others to go on.

“Sayu, you called Ai-chan?”

“Yes, she will be here soon.”

Reina rolled her eyes at the leader and went back onto her phone.

“Okay, okay, what do you need me to do?”  She asked.

Sayu explained the situation and Reina agreed hesitantly and headed toward the front of the park waiting for the former leader to walk through.  The current leader looked back at Kudo with concern as she hoped Ai would help her rid of the fear or at least calm her nerves.

Half an hour passed by and the group was ready to enter into the haunted house.  Sayu begged for five more minutes but everyone was overanxious to try out the haunted house and went ahead.  The leader waited for the kitty to return with Ai and out of nowhere, the former leader appeared in a t-shirt and shorts smiling with the kitty.

“Sayu, I’m disappointed in you.”  Ai voiced her displeasure being her.

“Yes, I know Ai-chan,” Sayu admitted in a low voice.

Reina wrapped a blindfold around the former leader as Sayu did the same for Kudo and escorted them into the dark room.

“Hey, I told you no games,” Ai howled toward the former leader.

“Just this one thing,” she whispered as the two left the room.

Ai removed the blindfold and removed the one on the younger female.  Kudo panicked being the dark room and pounded the walls screaming her dissatisfaction.  Ai grabbed the girl’s hand and led her through the dark path until something popped out in front of her and a masculine scream came from the elder female.  Kudo screamed at both of them and curled up on the floor.

“Don’t cry, I’m here,” Ai calmly assured her while she tried standing up.

“I hate ghosts, I don’t know why they let me go in here, is it amusing to make me cry?”  She questioned the former leader.

“Well… it is a test.”

“Test?  I’m a member, why do they need to test me?”  She inquired to the leader.

“We all have to face our fears.  Every one of us faced this.  You can cry and run away but if you can scare away the fear.  You shall win over everyone.”

Kudo nodded as she balled up her fist and lead the tour of the haunted house with Ai following closely behind.  Kudo hid her tears as she pushed through not being distracted by the people and props that made it scary while the former leader’s manly shriek was echoing until the end.  Kudo pushed open the doors with all her energy and saw daylight.

“Finally.”  She sighed to the group.

Ai walked out with her eyes bulging out and fell to the ground.  Sayu and Reina picked her up off the ground and took her to the bench.

“You owe me a lot.”  She gasped.

“Usa-chan peace,” Sayu muttered with her pose.

Ai grabbed her and took her to the side to let out her frustrations while the group congratulated the fearful Kudo for making through in one piece.
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/3 Kamei and the Impending Attack
« Reply #164 on: July 04, 2012, 08:21:12 AM »
I really need to pee.

Teacher is talking too much.

Please end this soon….


Her lack of patience forced her to run out of the classroom and into the hallway as she rushed into the bathroom.  Zooming into the stall, the girl took off the pressure from her body, and let out a loud sigh into the bathroom.

“You’re too loud,” the voice scolded her.

“Gomen,” she apologized in a soft voice.

“Stop talking!”  The voice commanded as the girl sat up on the throne.

“Tell me your name.”

“Kamei… Eri… desu.”

“Ms. Kamei, I am Tortoise, call me Toto.”

Eri nodded quickly as she leaned toward the wobbly wall.  The voice was deep for a woman but didn’t question its gender as it kept giving directions.

“First, use the plunger to take down the insurgence.”

“Hai.”

“Flush them out with the water hose.”

“Hai.”

“Toilet paper is your only protection so use it wisely.”

“Hai.”

“Kamei, you shall be ready for the attack, I bid you good luck.” 

The voice softly escaped the room as Kamei finished her duty and grabbed a roll of toilet paper.

I’m ready.

….



“Kamei, wake up.”

“Wake up!”  The voice shouted causing her to wake up and held up her hand.

“What is it, Kamei?”  The teacher asked with her arms crossed.

“Where’s the plunger?”  Kamei innocently blurted out.

“Detention!”  The teacher screeched as the turtle walked out with her head tilted down.

Kamei walked toward the empty room followed by another girl with a mirror in her hand.  Eri looked to her before entering the room and flashed a smile.  She opened the door and left it open for the girl with the mirror.

“Ichiban kawaii,” she announced as she took a seat.

“Why are you in detention?”  The girl asked the turtle.

“You don’t want to know.”

“I’m here because I’m pretty.”

“I’m here because I asked for a plunger.”

The turtle was left alone wondering if anyone had a plunger for the insurgence.
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/5 Reality?
« Reply #165 on: July 06, 2012, 10:56:51 AM »
“I never know you go here,” the voice surprised her as she held up her cup for her friend.

“It’s my first time, I wanted to know how you like this,” the bean smiled as the screens around them show different type of games.

Ai showed her to a special room where she hangs out in secret and invited her inside.  She locked the door behind them and showed her two pods leaning on the walls supported by a metal beams.

“Sugoi!  Can we try?”  The bean asked with enthusiasm.

“Not yet.  I need to load up a program,” Ai opened up her album filled with disks and placed one into the drive.

She waited a few second before letting the bean to step into the pod.  Ai waved to her vigorously as Risa was being set into place.  The bean knocked the glass before going through the setup.

“Aren’t you coming in?”

“I need to run the program.  We cannot both be there because it is risky without any supervision.”  Ai informed her as Risa raised her hand.

“Who was with you then?”  She crossed her arms as Ai giggled nervously.

“A worker friend who developed the program.”  Ai replied.

After she received the answer, Risa was assured that Ai wouldn’t cause her any trouble, lowered the glass over the bean, and then started the program.  Risa closed her eyes as the program took her to a beach.

Sugoi!  This is so cool.

Risa ran up to the shoreline and smelt the salt in the air.  The bean was impressed by the scenery and then she turned right to see a woman in a red polka dot bikini rubbing her hands in the water.  She ran up to introduce her to the beach and then was surprised by the identity.

“Hello Risa, I guess you’re here too.”  Risa scanned her body and grew red.

“I thought you were outside,” She mumbled.

“We are outside.”  She stated as she playfully punched her.

Ai dove into the blue ocean and popped up with her hair dampened from the salt water.  Risa speared through the clear water and saw a few fish before surfacing.  She looked around before hitting the water again blindly.

“Risa-chan, you look so cute when angry.”  Ai joked.

Risa pushed her friend into the ocean and charged out of the water landing the in the sand with Ai grabbing her ankles.  Ai crawled out over the bean and headed toward the towel.  Risa landed softly on the elder woman and rolled onto her side as they locked eyes.  Risa leaned in and was ready to kiss her.

“Gaki-san, wake up.”  Ai knocked on her head.

“What happened?  I was ready to…”

“Kiss me?”  Ai finished her sentence while the bean turned cherry red.

Risa stepped out of the pod and ran to the door trying to force the door open.  Ai came over and turned her around to gain her attention.  She brushed her hair from her face and held the bean in her arms.

“Want to feel the real thing?”  Ai leaned in and touched the bean’s lips before pulling back.

The bean melted and Ai let her fall to the ground as she watched her go through the range of emotions before she pulled back together.  Risa stepped back into the pod and started the program again to get her virtual kiss too
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/7 Friday Afternoon
« Reply #166 on: July 08, 2012, 11:22:37 AM »
Real life event

Friday Afternoon


Sayu was bored.  She was beyond the daily boredom.  She wanted to do something else other than looking at her computer screen change to the next page.  It could only be on a Friday that the computer decides to play its game to prevent her from continuing on with her work.  The bunny turned her chair toward the snack table where her co-workers would drop off snacks for everyone to pick on to hold them over.

Seeing that she had a few hours to kill, Sayu strolled over to get a handful of chips, and stood behind her co-worker while she was pulling her hair.  Hearing a few incoherent words, she walked away back to her desk only to hear another voice spitting out expletives to the computer.

“What’s up, Ai?”  She queried as she popped a few pieces of popcorn into her mouth.

“Yaguchi-san is coming down to view a file.”  She answered rubbing the bridge of her nose and clicked the print icon.

“Gooch is so nice though…”

“You are too naïve, she is a total b…” Ai paused midway through her statement as Nacchi walked by with her iconic, youthful smile.

“Sayu, can you get this file for me?  Gooch is in a hurry.”  Sayu looked at the paper and let out a sigh as she headed into the back.

The area was filled with dusty files and as she read the email, she began to realize that she was looking in the wrong area to begin with and headed to the new documents in front of the room.  She cautiously looked through the pile only to realize that it matched a list of accounts that it had to be distributed into the separate folders.  She showed it to Nacchi and instructed her to put it at the bottom of the pile.

“I looked for it because I want to lecture her about this.”  Nacchi told her.

“Okay.”  Sayu walked back to her computer where she was on the next page.

Sayu started to review the page with precision as a bell rung within the room.  She answered the door to let a short, blonde woman to enter into their area and took the stack of documents to a table searching through the pile.  She return to her workstation to finish up the page and continued to the next page.  Sayu reached out to check on Gooch who was at the end and looked over at Nacchi.

“Is there any other documents?”  She asked as she handed the next pile over to her.

Sayu saw the look on Nacchi’s face as she couldn’t believe that she passed over it.  She kept her attention toward Yaguchi while Sayu was hiding her delight.  Another few minutes past before she gave up on her search and bolted with a look of disgust on her face.

“I wonder if she knows…”  Nacchi threw out the thought to the two others.

They sat in silence to wonder the same thought and with the clock five minutes till end time, they can wait for Monday to have it show up mysteriously
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/9 Spring Weekend
« Reply #167 on: July 10, 2012, 06:15:11 AM »
Spring Weekend

Pairing: Eri/Reina/????

Spring weekend morning

Her heart beats

Walking into unknown territory

Looking at the building

Facing an enemy

That killed her many times before

Walking up those stairs

Heading straight for the table

With the sight of hope

Unloads the needed supplies for battle

Taking a deep breath

Before her surprise comes,

Sitting across of her

Thoughts flying around

Her mind finally focuses on the task

Filled with explanation,

Still sitting in her heart

Those hungry words

Hot breath swallows those syllables

Sends back deeper into the core

A realization came too soon

Luck gave her a chance

Holding an umbrella

The two huddling with a smile on her face

Dying to get those words out

But, too late

Leaving what was needed to say

In a text,

Before turning off the phone

Two days for a reply

Returning to the hell

That started this pain

A reply never answered

But observed

Replaying the scene

Wishing what went wrong

Wishing that she knew then

That it was all for not

Those words now digested

Exited with frustration

Now, face with other options

She waits in the dark
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/9 Spring Weekend
« Reply #168 on: July 10, 2012, 06:39:43 AM »
 it's a poem? how can you manage to write many stories and poems huh?   :drool: haha just curious..

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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/9 Spring Weekend
« Reply #169 on: July 10, 2012, 07:34:44 AM »
it's a poem? how can you manage to write many stories and poems huh?   :drool: haha just curious..

because I'm a terrible writer and everyone around here knows it :lol:

the main reason is because I break too many rules regarding writing in general so it tends to be 10% great compared to the others
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/15 Summer's Not Over
« Reply #170 on: July 16, 2012, 02:25:25 AM »
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Summer's Not Over


Risa was looking forward to summer.

Sun

Beach

Bikinis

Problem was it was fall

The downfall of the warmth

The beauty of the world

The humid fun of eating a watermelon

She counted the months

One month passed

And she became anxious

Tickets came from a friend

As she looked at it,

Her smile became evident and packed up

Flying over the ocean

Landing on the island

Beauty and the elements

She walked around

Feeling the sun to her face

Remembering who gave it to her

Her body started to sweat

Panicking, she went into her nickname

She ran around the crowded streets

And let out a groan

Only to realize

She was carrying her luggage still

And on arrival

A woman was under the sheets

A grin on her face as her head visible

She let out a sigh

And jumped in

Closed her eyes

And spent the next five hours

Sleeping next to her friend
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/26 Mama to the Rescue
« Reply #171 on: July 27, 2012, 08:48:45 AM »
“Ai-chan, are you home?”  Risa called into the empty living room.

Risa had become a constant visitor to Ai’s house especially her little girl who adored Ai-chan and ran upstairs to her room with Ai’s daughter running down with a frown on her face.  The bean kneels down to her height and saw tears rolling down her face.  She calmed her down before letting her speak as her daughter flew down the stairs grabbing her mother.

“Mommy is sick.”  Her daughter wept as she held onto Risa’s hand going up the stairs.

Risa knocked on the open door with the sick woman wrapped in a white blanket holding a thermometer in her mouth.  The mechanism sounded and she took out the thermometer seeing a triple digit number.

“Mou… you have a fever.  I will get you a towel for your head.  Rest Ai-chan.”  She commanded as the woman slithered down into her bed and positioned the blanket over her mouth.

“Mommy, is aunty Ai going to be okay?”

“Aunty Risa is the best at taking care of my mommy.”  Ai’s daughter announced as she held the other girl.

Risa had very little to think about only to get the towel for her head but she was itching to help her beyond her usual means.  She took out the smallest pot she had and took a bowl of cooked white rice to throw into container.  Risa grabbed a kettle and filled it up with green tea leaves and water to put onto the stove with the warm water running over the maroon towel.

After preparing the stove, Risa rang out the towel and ran upstairs to place it on her head with four eyes watching the two women from the doorway.  Ai had an innocent look on her face with her glassy eyes looking up at Risa.  She brushed the bangs away to get full contact of the forehead with the damp towel.

“You look horrible.”  Ai smiled.

“You look the same, children are horrible.”  She whispered getting a chuckle out the younger woman.

“I know… but look at how cute they are, it reminded me of us when we were young.”  Ai nodded in agreement.

“The husbands don’t know we named them after each other.”

Risa giggled at the comment as the whistle from downstairs called her and she ran down to get the hot tea into the pot and mixed it slowly.  The light green color attracted the bean’s eye as she added her seasonings to get it perfect.  She opened the refrigerator to only find the last piece to her dish: umeboshi.

She scooped out a bowl and dropped one piece in the middle of the mush before heading back upstairs.  Risa glanced at the two watching with intent as Ai took the bowl from Risa and placed it on her lap.  Ai took her metal spoon and blew on the food before letting it hit her mouth.  Ai rolled it around for a bit cooling down as the dish was perfect for her taste buds.

“Oishii!”

Risa let out a sigh as the two girls clapped for the bean as she took a bow for them with Ai giggling at Risa for such an act. 

“I guess it was a performance of a lifetime.”  Ai joked.

“That’s mean, I made you food and you still comment that I shouldn’t be overdoing stuff.”  Risa struck back as she let out a smile.

“Well I guess you have to watch the kids as I try to get better.”  Risa grinned as she escorted the two downstairs to play in the living room while Ai took another spoonful to her mouth.

Mama Gaki will always be Mama for everyone.  I wonder if Eri’s child gained her personality….

Dame, dame, dameeeeeeeeee

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« Reply #172 on: July 27, 2012, 09:29:45 AM »
 haha cute! :)

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« Reply #173 on: August 03, 2012, 09:48:04 PM »
Cute Takagaki story with their kids xD For some reason, it didn't surprise me that they named their kids after each others... and naturally, their husbands know nothing about it! xD

Also your other Takagaki stories are nice (and other stories too but I am too bad Takagaki fan, so, I mostly concentrated on them.....  :depressed:). Especially the story where Risa tries the program and ends up in the beach with Ai. It was kinda sweet  :wub:

You have a nice way to write stories and also your stories are good. :) Also you write a lot Takagaki so I like them even more  :inlove: Hopefully, there is more stories about them in here x)

Keep up the good work!  :cow:


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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/26 Mama to the Rescue
« Reply #174 on: August 04, 2012, 07:01:25 AM »
Cute Takagaki story with their kids xD For some reason, it didn't surprise me that they named their kids after each others... and naturally, their husbands know nothing about it! xD

Also your other Takagaki stories are nice (and other stories too but I am too bad Takagaki fan, so, I mostly concentrated on them.....  :depressed:). Especially the story where Risa tries the program and ends up in the beach with Ai. It was kinda sweet  :wub:

You have a nice way to write stories and also your stories are good. :) Also you write a lot Takagaki so I like them even more  :inlove: Hopefully, there is more stories about them in here x)

Keep up the good work!  :cow:

thnx I hope that I write a lot more but because of my random pairing one shots, TakaGaki will be a crapshoot
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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/26 Mama to the Rescue
« Reply #175 on: August 04, 2012, 11:32:00 AM »
i don't quite get it on this last part
I wonder if Eri’s child gained her personality….
but overall, the mama and their kids stuffs is fun and interesting

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« Reply #176 on: August 04, 2012, 11:41:58 AM »
 but it would be more interesting if their parents are papa ai and mama gaki ..hehe

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« Reply #177 on: August 04, 2012, 04:34:55 PM »
but it would be more interesting if their parents are papa ai and mama gaki ..hehe
haha i agree with you but too bad it is not... wow... u have remind me of kawaii's papa ai and mama gaki... i really miss them  XD

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Re: Kuro's Unusually Weird Oneshots 7/26 Mama to the Rescue
« Reply #178 on: August 04, 2012, 08:04:03 PM »
@risa_ai: yellow is right about that, I couldn't really do it that way as kawaii has the original idea so it had to be of friendly/lovers rather than they were a full fledged coupling, and as of right now, I don't have intentions to be borrowing or stealing other ideas so it stays the same throughout

@yellow: that last part should have an explanation by itself like this:

"Where's Kame-chan?"  Risa asked the two who came running with fear in their eyes

"Mama!  We lost Aunty Eri's daughter?"  The two children were on the verge of tears with a girl with shoulder-length black hair appeared from the gap between the wall.

"I'm here."  She said with a grin on her face as her mother knelt down in front of her.

"Reina-chan, where did you go?"  She asked with a calm tone.

"We were playing hide and seek and I saw a jar of umeboshi and I wanted to get it for you but I got stuck in the gap and then when I got out I knocked the jar over and it cracked so I rushed to pick it up but the birds attacked me out of nowhere and I forgot that I was the one who was it."

Risa and Ai looked at each other as Eri's daughter had a big smile on her face while mother grew another white hair because of her mother's obsession.

I just thought if Eri had a daughter she would either be her or more of the opposite but I would love banter about them between their rooms :lol:
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« Reply #179 on: August 05, 2012, 05:30:27 AM »
thanks kuro for your explanation... now i understand :D

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