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Title: Love in the Fast Lane (multipairing) 24/11/2012 [Will be revamped/continued]
Post by: AFLynx on July 08, 2011, 06:52:42 AM

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INDEX

Prologue (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg913212#msg913212)
Chapter 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg913740#msg913740)
Chapter 2a – Making the Team (Introduction) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg914583#msg914583)
Chapter 2b – Making the Team (First up – Miichan) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg914621#msg914621)
Chapter 2c – Making the Team (Haruna’s Antics) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg914660#msg914660)
Chapter 2d – Making the Team (Takamina the Drifter) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg915851#msg915851)
Chapter 3 – Meet & Greet (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg916702#msg916702)
Chapter 4 – First Encounter (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg918024#msg918024)
Chapter 5 – Staring Contest (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg918462#msg918462)
Chapter 6 – Red Sea (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg918917#msg918917)
Chapter 7 – Welcome Back (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg919256#msg919256)
Chapter 8a – Romeo + Juliet (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg920128#msg920128)
Chapter 8b – Romeo + Juliet (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg920562#msg920562)
Chapter 8c – Romeo + Juliet (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg921008#msg921008)
Chapter 9 – Let’s Dance (Staring Contest II) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg921970#msg921970)
Chapter 10 – Fallin’ (Staring Contest Finale) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg922568#msg922568)
Chapter 11 - There Goes Our Saturday... (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg924176#msg924176)
Chapter 12a - Whole Day Affair Haruna x Yuko (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg925973#msg925973)
Chapter 12b - Whole Day Affair Takamina x Atsuko (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg931256#msg931256)
Chapter 12c - Whole Day Affair Miichan x Mariko (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg938192#msg938192)
Chapter 12d - Whole Day Affair Midnight Snack (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg940417#msg940417)
Chapter 13 - Tie Breaker (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg942755#msg942755)
Chapter 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg944982#msg944982)
Chapter 14b - Two Words (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg946025#msg946025)
Chapter 15 - Enter the Diva (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg949094#msg949094)
Chapter 16 - History Repeats Itself (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg952120#msg952120)
Chapter 17 - Challenge (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg955304#msg955304)
Chapter 18a - Lights... (Acts 1 - 3) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg961151#msg961151)
Chapter 18b.1 - Camera... (Acts 4 - 6) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg966414#msg966414)
Chapter 18b.2 - Camera... (Acts 7-8) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg968776#msg968776)
Chapter 18c - Action! (Acts 9-11) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg977266#msg977266)
CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT! (Acts 12-13) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg992553#msg992553)
CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap... (Act 14) (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg1020042#msg1020042)
CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29893.msg1123440#msg1123440)

Love in the Fast Lane Trailer (http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow) - courtesy of hott3stson3 (thank you!!!)

Hi everyone! I've been having fun reading all the fanfics posted in here that I decided to make one as well.
I hope everyone will enjoy reading this!

On to the story...

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

PROLOGUE - THE PROMISE

10 Years ago...

Three girls are sitting on the swing set in their neighborhood park, enjoying the breezy afternoon.

"Ne, we will always be together, right?"

"I am guessing we will, we are cousins after all." the tallest of the three answered, not taking her eyes off her game console.

"That's not what I meant! I mean, we will always do things together when we grow up right?" The first one answered, slightly rocking her swing.

The last girl of the group jumped from her swing then answered, "I think we might as well do things together since Grandpa always say that we will one day own the business." She made a thinking pose. "Say, what do you want to do when we grow up anyway?"

"I want to study martial arts!" The first one answered enthusiastically.

The two sweatdropped, looked at their cousin who is wearing a pink, frilly dress... She looks too cute to study martial arts!

"I want to learn how to race! Just like what I'm playing right now." The tallest one said, pointing on her PSP.

"Cool! As for me, I want to be a great agent just like Grandpa and our dads... and... and like Detective Conan!"

"He~~ you read too much manga!" The cute cousin joked.

"Let's make a promise then. We will always be together, and we will all do things we want to do when we grow up." proposed the manga loving cousin. The other two looked at each other, smiled and answered at the same time, "Hai!"

"Yosh! We will do our best and we will be the best then!"

"Hai!" They sealed the promise by linking their thumbs and pinkies of their right hand.

"Oh no, it's getting late! Mama will be angry if I'm not home before dinner time." The tallest one said, looking at her watch.

"Auntie will surely call our houses so we might as well go home." The last cousin said as she walked where they parked their bikes.

"We'll see each other at school tomorrow! Ja ne!" The cute cousin said as she rode on to her equally pink bike.

"Ja mata ashita!" The three cousins waved their goodbyes and drove their bikes to their respective homes.

To be continued...

:sweat: There you have it folks - my first fanfic! Can you guess who the three cousins are? I want to know your answers so that I'll know if I was able to establish their characters in some way. :bingo:
I'll be doing some minor research for this fanfic as I write the next chapters. Your feedbacks is most welcomed. :kneelbow:

See you all in the next update! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: luckymmsg on July 08, 2011, 07:00:46 AM

Oh, looking forward to your fic..
Is the tallest one with PSP, haruna?
the others, I can't figure that out.. :smh

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: Flean on July 08, 2011, 07:03:50 AM

Haruna, Takamina and Miichan?? :dunno: looking forward to your next chap~~ :on lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: sorakamiya on July 08, 2011, 07:07:36 AM

owgh.... :shocked :shocked

my guess are sayaka, sae and takamina... :grin: :grin:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: AFLynx on July 08, 2011, 07:22:09 AM

:glasses: I think I'll keep everyone guessing until I post my next chapter. Currently I'm doing some research regarding the plot of the story :on study:

Thank you so much for the feedbacks! I will do my best to write my next chapter. :farofflook:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: yukofan on July 08, 2011, 11:34:51 AM

hi..

let me guess..

the tallest one who played PSP = Haruna
manga lover = Mayu
wanted to study martial art = Takamina

looking forward for your fanfic :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: AAAice on July 08, 2011, 12:07:25 PM

I love the title of your story. :]

Er, yeah about my guess.

Haruna is (obviously) the person who is playing PSP.
Yeah since Mayu is an Otaku I guess I'll pick her.
Takamina the person who want to study martial art. But... pink frilly dress? Miichan? xD IDK.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: TakahashiJ on July 08, 2011, 12:39:26 PM

Haruna is definite .
Lovetan/Mayu/ any otakus in akb LOL.
Acchan ? LOL

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: kahem on July 08, 2011, 01:19:53 PM

Sound interestring ^^
My guess:
Psp girl: Kojiharu
Pink girl: Takamina
Otaku girl: Mayuyu or Miichan for no3b lol

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: jehovachiabi on July 08, 2011, 02:30:09 PM

Wahaha @Kahem: i got the feeling the lolita girl is miichan :P

This is a story i will be looking forward to!!!! Updates soon PWEEAASSEEEEEE :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: khryz0421 on July 08, 2011, 05:11:52 PM

i think it's haruna,takamina and miichan(no3b) :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: AFLynx on July 09, 2011, 10:18:45 AM

Hi minna! I was supposed to write an update right now but somehow, I forgot to set "always logged in" when I signed in. By the time I finished typing, I needed to log back and I have to type the whole chapter all over again :stoned: :temper: :imdead:

I promise I will re-type the story again in a couple of hours. My laptop died on me so I just use the computer in an internet cafe during the weekends, so please bear with me. :kneelbow:

Thanks for those who have guessed who the characters are in the story! I promise to introduce them in a couple of hours :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: Flean on July 09, 2011, 10:27:55 AM

It's okay.. take your time... :bingo: and I feel sorry for what happen... :shock:

Anyway... GANBARE!!!!! :mon yeah: waiting for your update~~~ :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: kahem on July 09, 2011, 02:20:56 PM

You can write on microsfort or something like that before post. Like that you can have a save data.

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1]
Post by: AFLynx on July 09, 2011, 05:05:17 PM

As I promised a couple of hours ago, here is the next chapter of the story. :luvluv2:

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Present Day - Tokyo

Tokyo Special Operatives Agency is said to be the best Undercover Intelligence Agency in Japan, and is owned by one of the wealthiest families in the country. Takahashi Hisao, current owner and Chief of Staff of TSOA is currently inside his office, staring at the clock impatiently.

Those daredevils should better be here in five minutes. He thought as he walked by his office window overlooking the front lawn of the building. Hmmm... I wonder what's the commotion all about down there...

VVVRRRROOOOOMM!!!

Three vehicles zoomed past the security guards as they opened the gates. A red Ferrari 599 GTO, silver Porsche Cayman S, and a black Ducati Superbike 898 EVO parked with ease in front of the main entrance. Employees flocked at the main lobby, wondering who the newcomers were.

Ara, Ara. Right on time. They never cease to surprise me. Hisao then called his secretary to prepare the Board Room.

*****

The owners of the cars stepped out gracefully and glanced at the onlookers inside the building.

"Ma~~, it seemed we have gathered quite a crowd." Minegishi Minami mused.

"So it seems Miichan. Fine morning for a ride, don't you think Takamina?" Kojima Haruna said to the girl stepping off the bike.

Takahashi Minami took off her helmet and flicked her long brown hair. "Un, it was exhilirating and saved us a lot of time."

"Kyaaa~~~~~!" "Sugoi!" "They are so cool!" "Aren't those the Chief's granddaughters?" "I want to be their passenger!" "Are they single? I'm sooo available!" These are some of the comments that can be heard as the trio entered the main lobby.

"I bet you are gloating right now Haruna, especially since you're the one who initiated the race going here." Takamina whispered, noticing how the crowd parted like curtains as they walked by.

"Of course! We have to make a great first impression after all." Haruna said as a-matter-of fact.

"I wonder which floor the cafeteria is. From what I've heard, the food is great, especially the cakes." Miichan wondered.

"We'll definitely find out later, but for now, the Chief is expecting us." Takamina said as she pushed the elevator button going to the top floor.

*****

Once inside the Board Room, the trio saw the Chief already sitting at the head of a big, glass table.

"Good morning Chief! Thank you for having us here." The three bowed in unison.

"Good morning, please have a seat." Hisao greeted back. He then started typing on the virtual keyboard reflecting on the glass table, turning on the glass wall projector behind him, opening up different files in rapid succession.

"Wow... I wonder if we could use that with my Xbox." Haruna whispered.

Hisao cleared his throat. "I would like to congratulate you three for graduating on top of your class and for passing the training and qualification exams for the agency in flying colors. And because of that, I will give you a special mission. Your first undercover mission."

"Undercover mission? FOR REAL?!" Miichan asked excitedly.

"For real." Hisao replied then walked towards the glass projector, tapped the projected files with his fingers and began with the briefing of the mission. "Akimoto Yasushi is a good friend of mine and asked for our help. He is the owner of the AKB48, an all-girls racing team which is popular for participating in different types of racing: city racing, formula1 racing, bike racing and even drag racing, just to name a few. Also, he hosts the Annual AKB City Race wherein the best drivers all over Japan compete, including his team."

"I've heard of that race. Once a year, Tokyo would close the roads at midnight for the race. From what I've heard, they constantly change the course to challenge the participants and to provide alternative routes for the public to use." Takamina interjected.

"That is correct." Hisao commended. "Betting among spectators and participants are also allowed but within a limit. However, Akimoto has been hearing rumors that there are people who use the racing events as means of illegal transactions: drug dealings, selling of illegal firearms, just to name a few. It also came to his attention that there have been frequent "accidents" that have been happening and that the other racing teams were too afraid to investigate." He said with a serious tone.

"So, what are we supposed to do in this mission?" Haruna asked.

Hisao smiled. I bet they will enjoy this mission. "Being the speed demons that you already are, I want all of you to pose as independent racers..."

"Really?! This is our chance Takamina, Haruna!" Miichan interrupted, jumping from her seat.

"Ahem..."

"Sorry Chief, please continue..." Miichan whispered, sinking back to her seat.

"Anyway, Akimoto is currently looking for new drivers since his three best drivers retired recently. He will hold a special race because of that. I want the three of you to get drafted in his team and find out who's behind all these shenanigans. You will also protect his team whenever necessary." He continued, passing file folders to the three.

"Hai." the girls replied.

"All the necessary information are in those files. I decided not to change your names in this mission since you all are relatively new in the business. For the time being though, I strongly advise that you do not use your cars and bikes. The agency will provide you with different models and plates. The address for your apartment for this mission is also noted there. You will be issued with gadgets and your own guns before you leave the building. I also expect updates for every info and leads that you gather. Do you have any questions?"

The three looked at each other. Thinking that they don't have any questions in mind, they all shook their heads.

Hisao smiled. "Excellent. With that taken care of, how about you all give your Grandpa a hug?" he said, opening his arms for the girls.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan beamed, and ran to their grandfather giving him a group hug.

"We missed you Grandpa!" Haruna exclaimed.

"We will do our best for this mission!" Takamina said.

"Mou, Grandpa is such a meanie... being serious and all that when we came in." Miichan pouted, obviously teasing the old man as they went out the board room.

Hisao let out a belly laugh, surprising the employees along the hallway. "Hahahahaha! Convincing isn't it? I'm not the Chief of Staff for nothing!" He joked. "Well, since we finished ahead of time, how about grabbing some lunch at the cafeteria. The cakes they sell are really great. My treat."

"I want katsudon Grandpa!" Takamina requested.

"A big bowl of ramen for me please." Haruna said.

"Can I have 2 cakes for dessert?" Miichan asked.

"Of course! Order anything that you like. Welcome to the team everyone." Hisao replied.

"Arigatou Grandpa!" the three answered.

I think things will be much more lively now that the girls are part of the team. Do your best Takamina, Haruna, Miichan. Hisao thought as they go down the elevator.

To be continued...

:sweat: finally posted this chapter! I know it is kinda long but it is all about their assignment after all. I will work on the next chapter later on tonight. :mon study:

I would like to congratulate those who have guessed right for the main characters in this story. :on GJ: I'm apologize that I don't know Mayu that much and I'm still in the process in getting to know the other members of AKB48 asides from the 3 in the story.

I hope everyone enjoyed this chapter. I'll be introducing the other characters in the next chapter :on crazygran:

Thank you all for your support! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: Flean on July 09, 2011, 05:12:55 PM

Yeay~~~ :onioncheer: I knew it, it was them~~~ :hee:

more action fic!!! yeah!! :on woohoo:

waiting for update~~~ :deco:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 09, 2011, 05:43:42 PM

yey ! no3b da XD

demo 3nin kanojo wa dare :? them ofc :d

ganbare aflynx anata no fic saiko-su! :yep:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: khryz0421 on July 09, 2011, 06:03:20 PM

whoho! nice! more action like daddy said! :) :thumbup

looking forward for next chap! please update!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: AAAice on July 09, 2011, 09:13:59 PM

DAYUMMMM!!! HARUNA, MIICHAN AND TAKAMINA MURDER THEIR BADASS ENTRANCE!!!

ANOTHER DAYUMMM!!! ALL-GIRLS RACING TEAM!!! FREAKING CAN'T WAIT!

I knew this story is about racing and stuffs. Fast Lane.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: kahem on July 09, 2011, 11:25:03 PM

Their entrance was so stylish!!!!

So, there are nob3 but who is who?

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: BlackRockAnon on July 10, 2011, 08:52:15 AM

I came. 8)2

Seriously though, this is a great fic! I love cars and AKB so the two combined is... :inlove:

Thanks for sharing and good luck with your fic! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 10, 2011, 11:45:57 AM

@Flean: thanks Flean! as of now, I'm still writing my draft for the next chapter. I'm hoping I could post it in a day or so.

@anoni2: thank you for leaving a feedback! but... I'm not sure I understood most of what you said... only ganbare and no3b :on speedy:

@khryz0421: thanks! will update as soon as I can. :hee:

@AAAice: I know the title is a dead giveaway. I'm happy to read from you all that I did a good job in writing about their entrance in the chapter. :on gay:

@kahem: :stoned: oh right, I forgot to tell you all about who's who is in the introduction...
girl in the pink dress: Miichan
tallest girl/with PSP: Haruna
otaku girl: Takamina

@BlackRockAnon: I love both as well :luvluv1: I just hope that I would able to keep every chapter as interesting as possible for you all!

Thank you all so much for your feedbacks everyone! I will do my best to finish the next chapter. :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 1] update
Post by: ny37z on July 10, 2011, 04:08:43 PM

just finish watching F1 GP and now reading your fic about racing. perfect eh, now I'm fantasizing them in a race suit. :wub:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM] - Introduction
Post by: AFLynx on July 11, 2011, 09:24:40 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM [introduction]

A few days after the briefing, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan moved in to their apartment. The three huddled in the living room, staring at the in front of them.

"The agency sure has the money. I mean... look at our place, it is really comfortable." Miichan said, plopping on one of the couches.

"It sure is. They even stocked the pantry and our fridge." Haruna said, placing various cakes and tea on the coffee table.

"I bet it's Grandpa's doing. Anyway, I've already checked AKB48's website. They only accept online applications for those who want to join the special race and become a part of the team." Takamina said as she scrolled through the site.

"They sure have a cute website for a racing team." Haruna said. "It says here that they accept applications by groups with 3 members." She continued.

"That's good news, isn't it? That means we don't have to compete with each other. And look, the competition will have 3 categories so we'll definitely have the opportunity to race as individuals." Miichan pointed while eating her cake.

"Cool! The competition will be held a week from now and only have 20 slots available. So far, they already have 15 applicants. We might as well send our form now." Takamina said, clicking the online application form.

After a few cups of tea, several cakes, and constant teasing of the cousins, they were able to finish filling out the form and finally pressed the SEND button.

*****

A week later - Tokyo, AKB48 Racing Circuit

Welcome to the AKB Special Racing Tournament! All qualified applicants, please go to the registration booth to get your group numbers and proceed to your respective booths. Do your best and good luck to all participants! The announcement blared at the speakers.

"Our group number is 007. It looks like some kind of joke, don't you think?" Takamina said after they signed in at the registration booth.

"Haha! It is kinda fitting for us. Anyway, it says in this flyer that we will know which race each of us will participate on once all the groups have registered." Miichan said passing sone copies to her cousins.

"Well then, let's find our booth and prepare our stuff. We might as well get comfortable before the race starts." Haruna said and the three girls walked their way to find their booth.

*****

Meanwhile, inside the AKB48 President's office...

"Uncle, you sent for me?" The tall, short haired model, and general manager of AKB48 team asked as she entered Akimoto Yasushi's office.

"Ah, Mariko-chan! How are you and your sisters?" Akimoto asked.

"You know us, busy as always. As for the two, besides being models for our marketing campaigns, they are busy being one of the Flag Girls for our team and our events." Mariko replied, sitting on one of the chairs in front of her uncle's big oak desk.

"Is that so? I have confidence in you and all the girls in the team." Akimoto smiled. "I have a small favor to ask. I won't be here during the special tournament because I have to attend to our business needs. Please take charge of the competition in my place." He asked.

"Of course Uncle." Mariko said as she stood from her chair. "I'll also ask the help of the Crew Chief just in case." Mariko continued as she hugged her uncle.

"Thank you Mariko-chan. Oh, and please tell all the girls that I said hi." Akimoto said.

"Hai Uncle, I will." Mariko smiled as she closed the door.

*****

Inside Takamina, Haruna and Miichan's booth...

The girls looked at the wide screen at the middle of the race track.

"Wow, the booths are located just below the stands overlooking the track! I hope they announce the categories soon." Miichan said excitedly.

"Wait for it..." Takamina said. The screen suddenly changed from flashing an advertisement to announcing the categories including the list of participants per category.

"I'll participate in the bike race!" Miichan said.

"I'll be in the car racing." Haruna said as she saw her name under the second category.

"I'll compete in the Drifting category!" Takamina exclaimed.

The three became more excited after looking at the wide screen. Because they learned how to ride a bike and drive a car at a young age, they know that they will be one of the top contenders in the competition.

"Akimoto-san sure know what he's looking for in his drivers. He wants a group of drivers who are versatile enough to race using bikes, someone who has speed and who has technique." Takamina said, analyzing the categories that were presented.

"You're right. If I'm the President, I want the best drivers in my team as well." Haruna said.

ALL PARTICIPANTS FOR THE BIKE RACING CATEGORY, PLEASE PROCEED TO THE STARTING LINE IN 30 MINUTES

"That's my cue to leave. I'll see you after the race." Miichan winked as she gathered her gear and proceeded to the common garage where all the vehicles of the participants are parked.

"Do your best!" Takamina and Haruna exclaimed.

To be continued...

While I was writing this chapter, I thought that it'll be a veeeeery long chapter. For everyone's convenience, I decided to divide this chapter into 4 sections. I'll be posting the remaining parts as I go along. I'm already typing the second part. :on cigar:

I hope you'll enjoy this chapter!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM] - Introduction
Post by: Flean on July 11, 2011, 09:32:23 AM

I can't wait for the race!!!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

UPDATE SOON... :mon innocent:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM] - Introduction
Post by: kahem on July 11, 2011, 10:41:04 AM

Mariko yeah!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM] - Introduction
Post by: AAAice on July 11, 2011, 11:18:09 AM

This is just so fierce! I wish I can see Miichan doing a bike race in real life. :banghead:

Cool Mariko!

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2b - MAKING THE TEAM] First up - Miichan
Post by: AFLynx on July 11, 2011, 11:20:20 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 2b - MAKING THE TEAM [First up - Miichan]

Miichan is currently standing beside her Kawazaki ZX-10R at the starting line. She has finished checking her bike and is now wearing her leather black biker suit with their group number taped at the back.

It's a good thing we went here prepared by bringing both our biker and racing outfits." Miichan thought as she adjusted her gloves, then putting on her helmet. Grandpa did thought ahead too, providing us helmets with built-in mics."

"Takamina... Haruna... can you hear me?" Miichan said, testing her mic.

"Loud and clear Miichan!" Takamina replied, both her and Haruna wearing their headsets inside their booth.

"We'll monitor the race on the screen and give you real-time update." Haruna said. "It'll be a 3-lap race so it's gonna be a short race."

RACERS, ON YOUR POSITIONS AND START YOUR ENGINES!

The participants revved up their engines and anxiously stared at the signal lights...

3...
2...
1...

GO!!!

One by one, the bikers sped up from the starting point, leaving an echo of their engines' noise. Miichan had a good lead, smoothly bending her bike along with her body once she approaches the bend of the race track for every lap that she passed on. She then zoomed towards the starting lap, signalling her approach to the final lap.

"One more bend and a few meters left." Miichan thought, feeling the adrenaline rush inside her body.

"Miichan, focus on your lane, there are 2 contenders just right behind you. Don't let them overtake you on your lane." Takamina coached.

Miichan nodded, imagining her cousins is with her thru their support. She then revved up the accelerator to gain speed, and zoomed her way to the finish line where the checkered flag was being waved furiously as all the participants finished the last lap.

THE WINNER: MINEGISHI MINAMI OF THE 007 GROUP!

"Yatta!" Takamina and Haruna cheered as they hugged each other.

*****

After the Bike Racing category, Miichan finally went back to their booth and was congratulated with a group hug from Takamina and Haruna.

"Wa~~ that was fun! I wanna do it again!" Miichan exclaimed, placing her helmet on a table nearby.

"Fun isn't it? We'll all have our chance once we became members of AKB48." Takamina said, handing Miichan a bottled water.

PARTICIPANTS FOR THE CAR RACING CATEGORY, PLEASE ASSEMBLE AT THE STARTING POINT IN AN HOUR.

"They don't waste too much time, do they? Anyway, according to the guidelines, it will be a 5-lap race on the oval circuit." Haruna said as she read the racing guidelines.

"This race will be easy for you Haruna, since you've finished all the Gran Turismo series in our PlayStation." Miichan joked.

"I know it will. It's up to me to add spice to the race." Haruna said cryptically.

"Eh? What does she mean by that?" Takamina asked, Miichan merely shrugged her shoulders.

PARTICIPANTS FOR THE NEXT CATEGORY, YOU MAY START ASSEMBLING AT THE STARTING POINT NOW.

"Oh, is it almost time already? I'll be on my way then. See you later!" Haruna said, picked her stuff and waved at her cousins while jogging her way to the changing rooms.

"O... Oi Haruna! What are you planning to do?!" Takamina yelled at Haruna's retreating form.

To be continued...

:on crazygran:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2a - MAKING THE TEAM] - Introduction
Post by: kahem on July 11, 2011, 11:26:07 AM

Oh Haruna, what did you plan? I guess something cool yeah!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2b - MAKING THE TEAM] First up - Miichan
Post by: Flean on July 11, 2011, 11:33:29 AM

AAHHHH... I wanna know what Haruna plan!!!! :on comhere:

mann... i love this fic... LOL

cant wait for next update!!! HARUNA!!!!!!!!!! :on woohoo:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2b - MAKING THE TEAM] First up - Miichan
Post by: anoni2 on July 11, 2011, 12:51:24 PM

This one is on my list lol!!!!

yay can't w8 for the surprise xD maybe a turn over or something XD

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: AFLynx on July 11, 2011, 01:11:46 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM [Haruna's Antics]

Haruna with her helmet on hand, walked towards her car which is already at the starting line. She gently brushed her fingers on the hood of her black 2011 Cadillac CTS-V Coupe until she reached the door handle, opened the door, put on her helmet and gracefully stepped in her car.

"You'd better not pull a funny on us Haruna! Grandpa will not be pleased if we all don't make it on the team." Takamina reminded.

"Of course I know that, Otou-san! I know what I'm doing, just sit back and watch." Haruna teased.

"Otou-san?! Why I'd oughta..." Takamina was interrupted by the feedback coming from the speakers.

PARTICIPANTS, START YOUR ENGINE!

All the cars at the starting line revved up to life, covering all possible sound except for the noise being emitted by the engines.

3...
2...
1...

GO!!!

Cars began flying from the starting point as the race was signaled to start. Haruna maintained a steady speed, not minding if there are other cars already zooming past her. She then started whistling on her mic as well.

"What the... HARUNAAAAA!!!!!! What are you doing?! This is a race, not a freaking stroll in the park under the moonlight!" Miichan panicked.

"OW! Quit shouting, will you? I'm just saving gas, you know." Haruna teased.

"Saving gas? That's got to be the lamest excuse I've ever heard since we started this mission." Takamina mumbled as she slapped her forehead.

By the time Haruna is at the end of her 3rd lap, she is almost at the last place.

"Well, it's time to get this show on the road." Haruna thought.

With ease, she slowly gained speed as she approached her 4th lap. She then began overtaking some of the participant's lanes, and drifted smoothly at every bend. As she reached the final lap, she was already at 3rd place.

"Ready or not, here I come!" Haruna thought, feeling the thrill of the race.

She then simultaneously switched gears as she continues to gain speed, and finally stepped on the gas as she neared the finish line. Takamina and Miichan held their breaths as Haruna and 2 other racers began zooming their way to the checkered flag...

WINNER - KOJIMA HARUNA OF 007 TEAM!

Inside the booth, the two other cousins breathed a sigh of relief and began laughing at Haruna's antics.

*****

Haruna was whistling a happy tune as she walked back to their booth. Her whistling stopped when she was pounced by her cousins, congratulating her.

"That was some race Haruna! You do know how to get us two at the edge of our seats." Takamina high-fived her cousin.

"Hehe, I know you would approve in the end. I did promise to spice things up after all." Haruna replied.

"I still think it was mean... you're just like Grandpa, only a couple of decades younger." Miichan teased.

"Don't compare me with the old man Miichan. I'm not grouchy and old like him." Haruna defended.

Inside the TSOA building, Takahashi Hisao sneezed...

"That's why I said 'decades younger'..." Miichan teased again, and began reading the guidelines for the last category. "Ara, Ara..."

"What's wrong?" Haruna asked, her expression turning serious.

"I think Takamina's category is the most challenging of all. According to this, there will be 2 parts of the competition. The participants will be judged by AKB48's General Manager and the Crew Chief themselves!" Miichan summarized.

"Let me see..." Takamina said and began reading the guidelines as well. Haruna and Miichan waited for her reaction...

"This is gonna be a loooooooooooong race..." Takamina sighed and dropped her head on the table.

*****

Meanwhile at the V.I.P Observation booth of the AKB48 Race Team...

Mariko saw the turn of events of the second competition and was quite surprised. She then reached for the files labeled "007 participants" and began reading the cousins' information.

This team is quite remarkable... even unpredictable. One of them is cute too..." Mariko mused then reached for her mobile phone and began dialing a familiar number.

"Hello Crew Chief? Hai... I just want to remind you that the drifting competition will be held in an hour... Hai... I'll see you then... Ja..." Mariko then pushed the end call button.

"I'm quite curious of what the outcome will be in the final category. 007 team seemed to be the favorite of the spectators... Let's see if they can surprise me as well." Mariko thought as she left the V.I.P booth.

To be continued...

:on drink: There you have it! I hope I was able to meet your expectations regarding Haruna's race. :mon sweat:
I'm still in the process of writing about Takamina's category... please stay tuned! :mon geek:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: anoni2 on July 11, 2011, 01:22:59 PM

1st to comment yey!!!

ohhh antic's FTW!!! haruna won nyahaha :lol:

2 fase eh let's see what happens on taka's race :d

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: Flean on July 11, 2011, 01:24:10 PM

nice2~~~ :on GJ: Takamina is next!!! :onioncheer:

I wonder who the Crew Chief??? :hehehe:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: AAAice on July 11, 2011, 04:00:19 PM

Haruna being badass!

Oh Mariko thinking 'Miichan' is cute on the picture. xD

Yerr, I can't wait for Takamina's race.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: immortal_K on July 13, 2011, 10:55:58 AM

Wow this is awesome, love how Haruna spiced up her race :D

Can't wait to see what Takamina will do :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: kahem on July 13, 2011, 12:11:35 PM

Nice Haruna ;)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2c - MAKING THE TEAM] - Haruna's Antics
Post by: AFLynx on July 14, 2011, 04:08:36 AM

@anoni2: yay for being the first one to comment :onioncheer:

@AAAice: is it that predictable that Mariko finds Miichan cute? :hee: we'll just see how it will progress as I write the story.

@immortal_K: I'm happy to see that you enjoyed Haruna's race. :shy1: I hope Takamina will do good in her category as well. :glasses:

@kahem: thanks for your post. I can finally post in this forum after 2 long days! :badluck:

Minna, thank you for reading my first fanfic! I'll finally update this within the day. Thank you for your patience :kneelbow:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: AFLynx on July 14, 2011, 12:06:30 PM

@Flean: sorry, I wasn't able to include you in my comments awhile ago, but better late than never. XD Anyway, you'll find out later who's the Crew Chief. ;)

Here's the next installment. Enjoy!

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM [Takamina the Drifter]

"Takamina, snap out of it. Let's just review the flow of the category." Miichan reminded, gently shaking her cousin.

Takamina sighed then grabbed the papers in front of her. "It says here... that it'll be just like any Drifting competitions: the preliminaries will be the Tansō (individual pass) followed by the finals which is the Tsuisō (tandem pass)... I told you it'll be a long race."

"Just think that you'll have a break at least in between while waiting for your turn." Haruna said. "From the looks of it, not all 20 teams will push thru in this category... only the top 16 teams are qualified for the Tansō then 8 teams will be chosen to move forward for the Tsuisō. In the Tsuisō, each participant will be given the chance to be the 'lead' and the 'chaser'. Judges will use the pyramid system in this category where the 8 teams will be randomly paired, whoever gets the top 4 scores will advance to the 'semi-finals' and among the top 2 who gets the best score will be declared the winner."

"To add to that, the order of the participants for the Tansō will be in random and will not be based on the group number." Miichan added. Suddenly the speakers blared to life and the advertisements on the wide screen changed, announcing the order of the participants.

ATTENTION: ALL 16 PARTICIPANTS, PLEASE CHECK THE WIDE SCREEN FOR THE ORDER OF YOUR INDIVIDUAL PASS. YOU MAY NOW GATHER AT THE DRIFTING TRACK.

"Hmmm... it looks like you're the last one to do the Tansō." Haruna noted as they all looked at the wide screen.

"Yosh! I'll show them what our team is made of!" Takamina pumped her fist and gathered her things.

"Make us proud Takamina!" Miichan cheered.

*****

PRELIMINARIES - TANSŌ

Twelve contestants have already made their passes. Takamina began pacing in her place.

"Mou~~ stop pacing, will you? You're making me dizzy just looking at you!" Miichan complained through her headset as she looked at Takamina using her binoculars.

"Gomen ne. I just want to get this over with." Takamina said, then a crew member signaled her to get ready. "Okay, I need to go to my car now, I'm up in a couple of minutes." Takamina said, removing her headset. Takamina walked towards her 2011 black Ford Mustang, flicked her hair, and wore her helmet. "Testing... can you hear me?" Takamina said in the built-in mic.

"Loud and clear." Haruna replied.

Takamina got in her car, started the engine and positioned it to the starting point. She then began revving up the engine by stepping on the gas while the waiting for the signal lights to turn green.

3...
2...
1...

GO!!!

Takamina made a high-speed entry from the starting point, then continued to change gears until she reached the car's 6th gear and maintained it's top speed.

"You're approaching your first bend Takamina. Try to keep your speed when you make your turn." Haruna coached.

"Copy." Takamina simply replied as she steered the wheel as hard as she could when she approached the bend, keeping the rear of the car close to the bend. Smoke billowed from under the car and the tires made screeching noises during the drift and as she zoomed forward the next bend.

"Yatta! Nice drift Takamina!" Miichan cheered, looking at Takamina cross the finish line, leaving a trail of smoke and tire noise.

*****

Meanwhile in the Judges' booth...

"Did you see that Mariko-sama? It's one of the best drifts I've seen so far in this competition." Sayaka Akimoto, the Crew Chief of AKB48 Race team commented.

"What happened to calling me Mariko-chan? It's as if we didn't go to the same high school, Sa-ya-ka-chan!" Mariko teased.

"Fine Mariko-CHAN." Sayaka smiled. "Well, let's go and calculate who's gonna be at the top 8 for the Tsuisō." She added as she gathered the individual scoring sheets.

*****

Back in 007 team's booth, the announcer finally announced the results:

HERE ARE THE RESULTS OF THE TANSŌ CATEGORY:
001 - 80.0 007 - 97.5 (1st) 016 - 94.0 (4th)
002 - 83.5 010 - 90.5 (6th) 018 - 81.75
004 - 96.25 (2nd) 011 - 85.0 019 - 92.75 (5th)
005 - 87.75 (8th) 014 - 89.75 (7th) 020 - 95.25 (3rd)

"Yatta! You made 1st place Takamina!" Haruna cheered as she and Miichan hugged their cousin and jumped for joy.

"We shouldn't celebrate yet. I still have to top the tandem pass." Takamina reminded, plopping on the nearby chair.

FINAL PARTICIPANTS FOR THE TSUISŌ CATEGORY, PLEASE ASSEMBLE AT THE DRIFT TRACK IN 15 MINUTES

Takamina sighed... again. "I'll just take my break at the assembly point. I gonna take a very long hot bath after this event is over!"

*****

FINALS - TSUISŌ

Takamina was able to move forward from the eliminations and semi-finals of the Tsuisō and was currently waiting for the final tandem pass.

"Great job Takamina! Just one more opponent and you will be the winner!" Haruna encouraged.

"Be on your guard though. Your opponent is from the 004 team who placed 2nd in the individual pass. From what I've observed, she also has the technique. Be careful Takamina." Miichan added.

"Thanks minna. I will do my best." Takamina replied while waiting for the signal.

*****

TAKAMINA - AS CHASER

3... 2... 1... GO!

Takamina let her opponent zoom past her then finally started shifting gears to make the chase. She made sure to get as close as possible to her opponent without colliding on the rear of the opponent's car.

"Keep it steady Takamina..." Takamina thought, approaching the bend. Both cars steered down the curve emitting a cloud of smoke on the road. Takamina steered closer to her opponent while maintaning her speed and control over the wheel which caused the other car to swivel a bit as they both passed the bend.

"That's it Takamina! Just maintain your gap with each other. Don't overdo it or you might collide with each other!" Haruna cheered, monitoring the pass through the wide screen.

At the Judge's booth, Mariko squinted her eyes and smiled cryptically. "Impressive, she was able to maintain that small gap during the drift without collision. Not even our previous drivers had the courage to that daring." She thought.

"Roger that... I won't let her gain speed ahead of me." Takamina said as she speed close to her opponent on their way to the finish line.

*****

TAKAMINA - THE LEAD

Breathe in... breathe out... was Takamina's mantra while waiting for her turn to be the lead in the second pass. Haruna and Miichan on the other hand, was silently cheering for their cousin in their booth.

3... 2... 1... GO!

Takamina stepped hard on the gas as she saw the signal light turned green. "Haruna! How's my opponent behind me?" Takamina blurted out, focusing on the road ahead while trying to outrun the other car.

"She's about 1ft. behind you! Be careful Takamina, you might lose control going fast like that." Haruna replied.

"There's the bend, let's see how my opponent will keep up on my drift." Takamina thought.

With focus and determination, Takamina seemed tuned out all the noise emitted by both cars. Takamina now understood why they liked to race - it's the calm... the rush... that feeling when you can already hear your heartbeat while seeing everything around you blur as you pass by. Like snapping out of a trance, Takamina, steered her wheel as she approached the bend.

Haruna and Miichan stood up as Takamina made her drift. Meanwhile on the Judges' booth, Mariko and Sayaka were already leaning on their desk staring in awe as Takamina drifted beautifully and maintained the rear end of the car's angled longer than anyone had in the competition. Because of the car's angle, the chaser's car made a wide gap from Takamina's.

"Now's my chance!" Takamina screamed in her mind. She immediately repositioned the wheel after passing the bend and furiously stepped on the gas. The engine roared and her tires screamed as she zoomed straight to the finish line.

TAKAHASHI! TAKAHASHI! TAKAHASHI! the crowd chanted. The chanting continued as Takamina got out of her car. She then removed her helmet, let out a loud sigh and smiled a dimpled smile as she saw her cousins running towards her and gave her a hug.

Mariko and Sayaka looked at each other and smiled. "Looks like even the crowd agrees who's the winner." Sayaka said, Mariko nodded in response.

WINNER FOR THE DRIFTING CATEGORY - TAKAHASHI MINAMI OF THE 007 TEAM... MAKING THE 007 TEAM THE OVERALL WINNER OF THIS COMPETITION!!!

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan squealed and jumped for joy as the crowed noisily cheered with them. "We made it!" Takamina said, hugging her two cousins.

*****

Somewhere in the bleachers...

"Wow they sure are great! They will make a great addition to the team!" A short girl said to her companion beside her, looking at the three cousins at the race track.

"Yes they will, and they are not bad looking as well." The taller girl smiled keeping her eyes at Takamina. Her smaller companion smirked and nudged her.

"I see you've already set your eyes on the Drifter... I find the tallest one cute though."

"I guess... we'll see. Anyway, let's go look for onee-chan. I bet she's still with Sayaka-chan right now." the taller one said as they made their way to the Judges' booth.

To be continued...

:on roll: Finally finished the whole chapter! I apologize that this seemed kinda long because in reality, Drift races are REALLY long that it takes two days to finish both individual and tandem pass. :imdead: I hope I did justice to Takamina's category though :sweat:
And ooooh.... I'm gonna add new characters in the next chapter too! I bet everyone knows who they are :hehehe:

I would really love to read your feedbacks! Thank you all for your support! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: immortal_K on July 14, 2011, 12:20:11 PM

Takamina! Takamina! Takamina!!!!!!

KAKKOII!!!!!! :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: Flean on July 14, 2011, 12:25:10 PM

you reply my comment!!! XD its okay if you didn't, I'm not good in replying comments anyway.. :lol:

Takamina & Drift just AWESOME!!!! :on GJ:

Yeay... for new characters... cant wait for the next update!!!! :mon inluv:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: AAAice on July 14, 2011, 12:37:55 PM

Ahh, I quickly changed my song to Tokyo Drift!

'I wonder if you know,
How they live in Tokyo,
If you seen it, then you mean it, then you know you have to go.
Fast and Furious~
DRIFT DRIFT!'

Gee, reading your fic makes me wanna continue my game in Need For Speed. Drag, Drift and Sprint racing is the best!

I'm having a big Prediction again about who is the two person on the bleachers. xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: kahem on July 14, 2011, 12:53:48 PM

I'm glad I can finally post here
And new characters... It's smelled love heheheh

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: AFLynx on July 15, 2011, 08:51:27 AM

Hi Minna! :mon hi: Thank you for taking the time to post your comments here. I really love reading about your comments, it does inspire an aspiring writer like me :mon cute:

immortal_K: I want the three of them to have kakkoii moments, but honestly among the three of them, Takamina is my favorite so definitely I'm gonna be a bit biased when it comes to here scenes... just a bit of course since I like Haruna and Miichan too.

Flean: I am currently writing the next chapter right now, and yes, I'll definitely introduce more characters in the next chapter :mon study: :mon worklate: I am hoping that I can post it by tomorrow or if I'm lucky, later in the evening.

AAAice: actually, I was imagining that song while writing for that chapter! :mon rockstar: oooh, do share with us your predictions about the girls on the bleachers :mon misch:

kahem: It was a relief to me as well! Yup, definitely love will be in the air in the upcoming chapters :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: immortal_K on July 15, 2011, 09:36:46 AM

no3b's!!!!! <3 So hard not to love them :inlove:

I like reading AAAice's predictions, they are always so interesting, and even if its not the case, they could very well become ideas for another story :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: AFLynx on July 15, 2011, 09:49:40 AM

immortal_K: they are the first members of AKB48 that I knew when I first watched Mendol. That's when I got curious about AKB48. Honestly, I'm still getting to know most of the members except those who are always visible.

If AAAice's predictions in my story is correct, then all I can say is: "Great minds think alike!" :wahaha: j/k! Everyone in this forum are great! :on GJ: That's why I got inspired to write a story and post it here. :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 2d - MAKING THE TEAM] - Takamina the Drifter
Post by: immortal_K on July 15, 2011, 12:38:40 PM

AFLynx: If AAAice's predictions aren't correct then even better since we don't think alike that means more variety of fics with random plots right? haha Yea I actually started to listen to no3b before I even know about AKB48, and the learning curve to their group is never ending....

I feel like I lurk around here too much :lol: can't help it work is boring, especially when most people are sleeping right now, the immortal is bored.........*RAWR*

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET]
Post by: AFLynx on July 16, 2011, 10:15:30 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 3 – MEET & GREET

After being announced as winners, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan finally had the chance to relax.

“Ha~~ taking a hot bath sure is refreshing!” Takamina sighed, drying her hair as she sat on her bed inside their shared bedroom.

“I’ve already sent an update to Grandpa informing him that we made it to the team.” Miichan said, still using their laptop while sitting comfortably on a bean bag.

“One of the organizers told me that we are to report at the General Manager’s office in three days time. Then the General Manager will then give us an orientation thereafter.” Haruna informed them as she furiously pushed the buttons on the controller of their PlayStation.

“Well then, let’s just take advantage of the remaining days that we are on break before we investigate for our mission.” Miichan said as she stretched out her arms.

*****

After three days, the cousins finally went to the AKB48 Racing Team Headquarters. As they entered the Gen. Manager’s office, Mariko is currently
looking outside the window. When she finally noticed the cousins, she smiled and walked towards her desk.

“Konnichiwa everyone! Welcome to the AKB48 headquarters. I am Mariko Shinoda, General Manager of the team.” Mariko greeted.

“Good afternoon, Mariko-san.” The three replied and made their individual introductions as well.

“Please call me Mariko; I basically consider the team as a family so no need for formalities. Anyway, congratulations on winning the tournament. You definitely wowed the crowd for every category! I already have your contracts for joining the team. If you don’t have any further questions, please sign at the appropriate space provided then I’ll introduce you to everyone.” Mariko said. Miichan consistently stared at her every move as Mariko handed the contracts and moved around the office, which Takamina noticed.

“Oi, Miichan, it’s rude to stare you know. “ Takamina whispered as she nudged her cousin.

“Ah! Gomen!” Miichan whispered back, covering her face with her contract.

*****

After the contract signing, Mariko gave them a nickel tour of the AKB48 garage.

"Wa~~ Sugio!" Miichan said looking at the wide area in front of her. A couple stock cars and bikes were parked at the middle of the garage. Spare parts and tires are neatly displayed near the west wall, beside it are the working tables where the Crew Chief is currently talking to one of the mechanics. Sayaka Akimoto noticed them and walked towards them.

"Yo, Mariko-chan! I see that you've brought me our new drivers." Sayaka said. "I am Sayaka Akimoto, Crew Chief of the team. This is Sae Miyazawa, my assistant and the head mechanic." Sayaka introduced and Sae bowed in greeting which the cousins bowed as well.

"Nice meeting you all. Just one quick question: do you know how to repair a car... or to change its' tire at least?" Sae asked.

"Hai. We tinker with our cars every now and then to keep it in top condition." Takamina replied.

"Wonderful! I'd hate to see our drivers be clueless when their cars breaks down on them. You three won't have to worry because I'll also teach you a thing or two." Sae grinned.

"That'll be awesome! Please take care of us!" Haruna exclaimed.

Sayaka then called the Pit Crew members that are in the garage, each moving forward and formed a horizontal line in front of them.

"Hi everyone, I'm Rei Kitahara, the Tire Passer." Rei bowed.

"Good afternoon, I'm Rina Chikano, the Inside Front Tire Changer." Rina waved.

"I'm Jurina Matsui, the "Dead Man". Jurina introduced.

"Eh?! You're already dead?!" Miichan yelled, which made everyone laugh and causing her to blush.

"Hahahaha! I never expected that kind of reaction." Jurina laughed. "I am responsible for operating the levers of the fuel tank that allows the fuel to flow through the hose into the car. My positioned is named as sucj because if a fuel problem occurs, I can "dead" stop the fuel by releasing the levers." She further explained.

"Oh... so that's why you're called as such. Something new I learned today." Miichan laughed, scratching her head.

"Good afternoon, I'm Rino Sashihara, the Fueler."

"Hi, I'm Moeno Nito, Starting Tire Passer."

"Yui Yokoyama here, Inside Rear Tire Changer."

"I'm Mika Komori, the Fire Extinguisher. My position is quite self-explanatory." Mika joked earning giggles.

"I'm Kana Kobayashi, the Jack Man."

"Hello, Asuka Kuramochi here, the Outside Rear Tire Changer."

"Last but not the least, my name is Aki Takajo, the Outside Front Tire Changer." Aki winked.

"Now that you've met the entire Pit Crew, we'll show you our Tech Lab. Okay everyone, back to work!" Sayaka clapped, hearing collective groans and jokes from the team.

*****

Mariko, Sayaka and Sae guided the three new drivers to their Tech Lab. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan are again in awe as they entered the equally large laboratory. Various engineers are busy in their stations, testing different engines and some are busy in researching about different types of fuel, while there are some who are making technical drawings of cars and bikes.

"Wow, your team sure invests in technology and research as well." Miichan observed.

Mariko paused and turned to look at her then smiled. "My uncle, Yasushi Akimoto believes in taking care of the team. He makes sure that everyone has what is needed. He also believes in honing the abilities of each member by continuous reseacher and providing the latest technology available. The team won't be the best all-female race team in the country without his support." She explained.

"He~~ he's your uncle? Is this a family business or something?" Haruna inquired which made Mariko giggle.

"You could say that... well, let's meet our engineers then." Mariko said and resumed her walking, meeting the engineers at the middle of the lab.

"Make sure we note that down, minna. It's part of our mission to protect Akimoto-san and the team, especially those who are very dear to him." Takamina whispered, Haruna and Miichan nodded in response.

"Hi everyone, I'm Mayumi Ushida, the head Mechanical Engineer."

"Nice to meet you all, my name is Ayaka Umeda, Chemical Engineer."

"I'm Ayaka Kikuchi, the Industrial Engineer of the team." After the greetings, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan introduced themselves as well and bowed.

"I know it's overwhelming to meet them all at once. We don't expect you to memorize their names today. But you'll all get to know them as time goes by." Mariko teased then glanced at her watch. "Crap, I'm late for the photoshoot. Sayaka... Sae... thank you for accompanying us."

"No problem. We're glad to have you in our team - Takamina, Haruna, Miichan." Sayaka smiled.

"Okay. C'mon girls, I'll introduce you to the last group of the team. I bet they are still in the studio." Mariko said, walking ahead.

"Studio?!" Takamina, Haruna and Miichan asked keeping up with Mariko's pace leaving the Tech Lab.

*****

The group finally exited the garage and entered the equally large studio beside it. Various equipments were in different places, both for photo and video sessions. Different doors lead to various rooms: the stock room, changing room, make-up room and the wardrobe room. At the end of the vast area, a large backdrop is placed where a group of girls are currently posing in front of a photographer. Music can also be heard in the speakers installed around the studio while cameras flashed to the beat of the music.

"Finally, this studio is where the Flag Girls do their photoshoot, in which I am also a member. We are responsible for the marketing campaigns for the team. We sometimes carry the checkered flags during the races tat we host, but most of the time, we are the morale boosters for the team." Mariko said. "You three will also be asked to be photographed every now and then."

"Cool! We get to pose in front of the camera!" Miichan said excitedly.

The photographer finally stood up, signalling the end of the photo session. "All right girls, that's the last shoot, you call all take a break. Mariko, there you are! We've been waiting for you. I am Amina Sato, the head photographer." Amina said, then the Flag Girls began gathering around them.

Mariko introduced the Flag Girls one by one. "Takamina... Haruna... Miichan, meet Rena Matsui, Mayu Watanabe, Miho Miyazaki, Chisato Nakata and Natsumi Matsubara." Mariko said, pointing at the girls as she each said their names. "Two of our members are currently overseas taking a vacation leave. By the way Mika-chan, where are my sisters?" she asked.

"We're here onee-chan!" the smallest of the two yelled as they made their way to the group.

"Sisters?! This IS really some kind of a family business!" Takamina said surprised.

"I am Minami Minegishi, you can all call me Miichan." Miichan bowed to the girls.

"Haruna Kojima here. You can... call me... Haruna...?" Haruna slowly introduced herself, looking at the smallest sister who is currently circling around her, looking at her from head to toe as if like a lionness on a prowl.

"Haruna eh... you're the one who won the second race! You're way cuter up close! I'm Yuko Oshima, captain of the Flag Girls. You can call me Yuko... and I'll call you NyanNyan~~!" Yuko squealed as she pounced on Haruna.

"Eh?! NyanNyan?!" Haruna exclaimed, struggling from Yuko's tight embrace. She looked at her cousins seeking help, but they seemed not to mind Yuko.

"Hai! NyanNyan! You're my NyanNyan from now on!" Yuko proclaimed who continues to snuggle against Haruna's arm. Haruna sighed and just stood in place as a sign of defeat.

"Don't mind my sister. She just takes ownership if she sees something that she likes... or in this case, someone that she likes. I am Atsuko Maeda, the Ace of the Flag Girls." Atsuko said, looking only at Takamina in the group.

Takamina blushed at Atsuko's staring. She then finally realized that it's her turn to introduce herself. "N-Nice to meet you. I'm Minami Takahashi, everyone calls me Takamina." Takamina bowed deeply in an attempt to hide her blush.

"Ma~~ looks like things will really be interesting from now on don't you think, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na?" Atsuko said, giving her a mysterious smile.

Takamina looked at Atsuko questioningly. "Interesting? What does she mean by that?" she thought.

To be continued...

Quick Note:
I didn't give the same surnames for Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko for this story considering that they are sisters. I might just forget that as I write the upcoming chapters that's why :bigdeal:

Finally, I was able to introduce you to the team! I hope your favorite AKB48 member is included. :hee: Will work on the next chapter after posting this. Thank you all for your support! I will wait for your feedbacks minna! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 16, 2011, 10:27:24 AM

YAY! Update! One of the best thing that happen all night ^.^d

THey finally meet the team and Yuko is already all over Haruna keke, hmm I wonder what Acchan mean by interesting?

THanks for the update!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: AAAice on July 16, 2011, 11:14:25 AM

Weee. I'm right. Yuko and Acchan on the bleachers three days ago? xD

Yeah, you've mentioned one of my favorite girl... Mika Komori!!!

Yuko, she'll never change. Acchan hmm, interesting. :]]

-

UPDATE UPDATE! :shakeit:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: kahem on July 16, 2011, 12:06:30 PM

Hahaha almost all the AKB are here ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: virgo_shaka on July 16, 2011, 12:27:21 PM

Mika Komori got two jobs then. As a Fire Extinguisher and Head Photographer. :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 16, 2011, 05:50:35 PM

immortal_K: haha, I wonder about that too... Acchan is being her mysterious self I guess. :bigdeal:

AAAice: yes you are right! :on GJ: we all love Yuko as she is, I think it's part of her charm.

kahem:I intended in this story to have most of the girls have a part even if it's just introducing themselves. I'm planning to give them all the chance to have a dialogue every now and then. And besides, I haven't mentioned the other two Flag Girls... they are on vacation after all. :glasses:

virgo|_shaka: Thank you for that feedback! :kneelbow: I really am grateful! I really like it when someone points out my errors in my writing. For me it's some kind of support to make me do my best. :hee: I changed the photographer to Amina Sato so as not to confuse everyone further. While writing this story, I just left the introductions blank first then searched for all the members of the team then type the names on the blanks... thus creating redundancy and error on my part :dizzy: Again, thank you! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: Flean on July 16, 2011, 06:33:14 PM

wah... many new chara... XD who's on the vacation leave?? can't wait...

Quote from: AFLynx on July 16, 2011, 10:15:30 AM

"Ma~~ looks like things will really be interesting from now on don't you think, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na?" Atsuko said, giving her a mysterious smile.

gah!!! more interesting things!!!! :mon inluv:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 17, 2011, 07:40:43 AM

@Flean: hehe, I'm not telling as of this time. I'm thinking they will go back to work after 2 chapters or so. Thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 3 - MEET & GREET] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 19, 2011, 05:23:04 AM

Great fic XD
Can't wait for next chapter :cathappy:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 19, 2011, 07:48:02 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER

After a few days of working in the AKB48 garage, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan became accustomed on how things are done and became fast friends with all the members including those who are not directly working in the garage.

Back in the apartment…

“We have an e-mail from Grandpa. He received a lead that there are some drug dealings that has been happening in one of the motorcycle events here in Tokyo.” Takamina informed her cousins as she read the e-mail.

“That’s so vague! There are different types of motorcycle events all around Tokyo. It could be anywhere at any time!” Miichan complained while eating breakfast.

“We’ll just have to take our chances. We just need to investigate during our scheduled events – we could work from there.” Haruna suggested.

“You’re right Haruna. We just have to be observant in our every race. We also have to make sure that the team is safe from harm as well.” Takamina said as she closed her laptop. “Anyway, we have to get going… Time for us to go back to the garage.”

*****

Since there are no scheduled races for the team as of this time, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan are given some tasks to help out the team. For today, Haruna is checking the inventory of the tires and engines, Miichan is doing an oil change in one of the bikes and Takamina is busy checking the axle boots under one of the cars. Everyone suddenly looked in surprise on the garage entrance where they suddenly heard someone running and squealing:

“NyanNyaaaaaaan~~!” Yuko screamed, tackling Haruna, bumping both of them to the tire rack where Haruna is doing inventory.

“How many times do I have to tell you I’m not your NyanNya – ah heck, never mind.” Haruna blushed and sighed. Yuko on the other hand, took it as a sign of victory. “Anyway Yuko, what are you doing here? Don’t you have a photoshoot or something like that?” She teased with a straight face.

“Mou~~ NyanNyan, I came to see you of course! And we always hang out in the garage when there’s nothing to do.” Yuko smiled at Haruna. “Say, has anyone of you seen Mariko onee-chan?”

“She’s in her office, talking to Sayaka-chan.” Miichan informed them wiping off the grease on her hands.

“And how, if I may ask, know about her whereabouts?” Haruna asked, smiling mischievously.

“E-Eh?! We-Well, she e-mailed me this morning, that’s why.” Miichan stuttered, wringing the now dirty towel in the process. “She did give us her contact details, remember Haruna?”

“Nope, she didn’t give it to me and I don’t think Takamina got her number either.” Haruna continued with her teasing.

“Ara, it seemed you’re a special one for Mariko onee-chan then.” Yuko teased, giving Miichan a full-faced blush.

Meanwhile, Takamina is still busy working under a car when a pair of feet wearing high heels stopped beside the car she is working on.

“Ta-Ka-Mi-Na!”

Takamina frowned trying to recognize the voice. “A-Atsuko-san?!” she finally thought, jerking up on impulse, forgetting that she is still under a car.

*THUNK!*

“Owww~~~” Takamina groaned, wheeling the palette that she is lying on out of the car.

“Takamina, are you alright?!” Atsuko asked worriedly as she helped Takamina to stand up.

“Y-Yeah, I’m okay. I think I just got a bump on my head, that’s all.” Takamina whispered, rubbing the soft spot on her forehead.

“Let me see…” Atsuko said as she leaned towards Takamina, touching the bump that slowly forming on her forehead. “Don’t worry; your head is still intact.” Without warning, she placed a gentle kiss on Takamina’s forehead. “There, that should do the trick.” Atsuko smiled.

“A-Atsuko-san?!” Takamina exclaimed trying to hide her blush.

“Mou, you don’t have to be so formal. After all, I’m calling you by your nickname Takamina.” Atsuko teased.

“Well, if you insist. But calling you Atsuko-chan sounds like it’s a long nickname. So… is it okay if I and my cousins call you Acchan?” Takamina sheepishly grinned.

Atsuko was taken aback by Takamina’s request that she was not able to hide her surprise, causing her cheeks to turn pink. “How did you know… only my sisters call me Acchan… Did they tell on you?” Atsuko asked.

“Iie, I just thought it suits you… it is a cute nickname after all.” Takamina smiled.

“Okay, you can call me that since you’re being adorkable today.” Atsuko teased, pinching Takamina’s cheek then started walking towards the studio.

“Ow! Hey, is that even a word?” Takamina yelled at Atsuko’s retreating form. Atsuko then turned, walking backwards.

“Now it is since I used it in a sentence. I’ll see you later!” Atsuko waved, then turned again jogging to the garage exit.

*****

After Sayaka returned from Mariko’s office, she asked the cousins to have a short meeting with her in her own office.

“I received an invitation for us to join a motorcycle event tomorrow night in Chiba. It’s a Drag Race and each of you will get to have one pass.” Sayaka said.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan looked at each other and nodded. “This is our chance.” They all thought.

“As much as we rely on Aki-P’s funds for the team, we also have to earn our keep to maintain the group. The bets that we collect will be allocated equally for the Pit Crew, Tech Lab and for the Flag Girls. You will also be given a commission for your hard work.” Sayaka smiled.

“Yosh! You can count on us Chief!” Miichan exclaimed, pumping her fist.

*****
The day of the motorcycle event finally arrived. Various teams can be seen scattered around the area and spectators were continuously placing bets on their favored teams for every pass as shown on every screens in the area. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan are roaming around the event, scanning the area and communicated with each other using a device inside their ear.

“Haruna… Miichan… do you see anything suspicious?” Takamina whispered amidst the noise the motorcucles and crowd cheers, knowing that their device is loud enough for her to be heard by her cousins.

“Not yet where I’m at… How about you Miichan?” Haruna asked, checking the fit of her boots while looking around her.

Miichan continued walking on her are and spotted a group of men whispering on the far side where the event is currently taking place. She then moved on one of the screens as if looking at the event details. On her peripheral vision, she saw a man open up a briefcase containing bundles of money while the other one opened up a bag containing plastic bags filled with what seems like cocaine. Being high-trained agents, Miichan was able to get the gist of the conversation of the men thru lip reading.

“Target spotted. A group of ugly men that we’re gonna deal with are drug dealers alright. Transactions will take place in the empty lot nearby after the event.” Miichan reported and walked smoothly back to where the AKB48 team are assembled.

“Good work! Haruna, let’s go back as well.” Takamina replied.

“Copy that.” Haruna said and both cousins also made their way to the team.

*****

“There you are! I thought you three already ditched us before the race even started.” Sae waved to the approaching cousins.

“Sorry about that, we just checked what kind of bikes the other competitors have.” Takamina replied, making up an excuse.

“Enough about that. You three will take your pass after another so don’t go wandering further. Haruna, you’re the first to go.” Sayaka said pointing at her designated bike.

“NyanNyaaaaaaan~~!” Yuko yelled on top of her lungs running towards Haruna.

“O God… is this some kind of déjà vu?” Haruna thought as she wore her helmet. Yuko hugged her then clasped her hands on either sides of Haruna’s helmet, as if telling her to look at her.

“Do your best, okay?” Yuko sweetly smiled. After a couple of seconds, Haruna nodded in reply and drove her bike to the starting point.

At the go signal, Haruna cranked the accelerator of the bike, taking the lead of the pass. She maintained at high speed until she crossed the finish line, leaving her opponent a few meters behind her.

“Yatta! Look at my NyanNyan go!” Yuko jumped in delight while shaking the lights off of Sae.

*****

After all the excitement and giving Haruna their congratulations, Sayaka informed the team that Takamina’s next.

Takamina immediately wore her helmet and rode her bike. Before she was able to start her engine, Atsuko approached her and kissed her helmet, leaving a lipstick mark on her visor.

“For luck.” Atsuko simply said. Takamina gave her an OK sign and made her way to the starting line.

“Hehehe… I don’t think Takamina will wipe off that lipstick mark on her helmet.” Miichan whispered in their communicator.

“I bet she will have it framed.” Haruna said, adding her two cents’ worth.

“Shut up.” Takamina said as she listened to her cousin’s giggling.

As soon as Takamina saw the signal light turned green, she cranked the clutch creating noise from the bike and zoomed from the starting line. Just as she approached the finish line, she did a roll-on power wheelie by lifting the front of the bike a few meters from the finish line until she crossed it. The team and the crowd cheered for her victory and display of showmanship.

“Ara, is she trying to impress someone?” Mariko said as she glanced at Atsuko beside her.

“I wonder about that too. Do you have any idea who might that be, Acchan?” Yuko teased, poking at Atsuko’s pink cheeks.

*****

As Miichan prepare for her turn, she glanced at the opposing team’s side to see who she’s gonna be against with.

“Shimatta!” She thought. “Takamina… Haruna… I’ll be competing with the ugly men’s driver.” Miichan whispered in her communicator.

“Understood. We’ll monitor their every move.” Haruna replied as Takamina made her way back to the team. Takamina nodded at her direction confirming about Miichan’s update.

Miichan checked her outfit and then began rummaging in her equipment bag. “Now where is my…” her thoughts were cut off as Mariko approached her with the thing she is looking for.

“I bet you’re looking for this. Win this race, for the team.” For me. Mariko said as she handed the helmet.

Miichan winked in response and wore her helmet.

*****

At the starting point…

Miichan stared at her opponent, then cranked the clutch that made her opponent look at her.

“You’re going down!” she thought, giving him thumbs down. She was given the finger as a reply.

“Stop taunting him Miichan! They might get suspicious.” Haruna whispered in the communicator.

“Let’s see if he can use that finger again once we deal with them.” Miichan replied as she waited for the go signal.

Miichan was able to finish the race with ease, not giving her opponent a chance to catch up with her since the signal light turned green. When she got back to the team, the cousins saw Miichan’s opponent get back to where the ugly men were standing and pointed at her. Suddenly the opponent’s group gathered their things and made their way out of the event.

“Man, I’m hungry… well everyone, let’s celebrate! Let’s all have dinner together!” Sayaka exclaimed earning cheers from the entire team.

“Sayaka-chan, you go on ahead with the team... I ah… just saw one of our friends in the crowd and we would like to say hi.” Haruna blurted as an excuse while Miichan and Takamina went on ahead and followed the drug dealers.

“Okaaaay… I’ll just text you which restaurant we’re in. C’mon girls, let’s go.” Sayaka replied. Maruko, Atsuko and Yuko looked at the cousin’s retreating forms, curious to what they are up to.

*****

At the nearby empty lot…

“Jun, it’s a shame that you lost in the race… worst thing about that is you lost to a girl.” A middle aged man wearing a suit and dark sunglasses said making the other men laugh.

Jun, which Miichan’s opponent, sneered. “It won’t happen again boss… when I get another chance.

The boss hmphed then waved his hand. “If you get another chance. Take charge of the deal then report back to the warehouse.” He said as he stepped inside a black sedan together with some of the men then drove off.

Just as Jun was about to hand the bag to their customer when Takamina, Haruna and Miichan arrived calmly at the scene. The men instantaneously looked at them, smiling.

“Well, well… look at what we have here. Do you wanna play, little kitties?” one of the goons taunted. The cousins weren’t amused at him and one by one they flashed their badges in front of the men.

“The kitties that wanna play happens to be Special Operatives Agents. You’re all under arrest for Drug Trafficking.” Takamina said.

Jun recognized Miichan by her suit and growled. “Let’s see if you can handle this besides racing.” He said, motioning for his men to attack. Jun’s customer ordered his men to attack as well, running towards a nearby car.

The brawl finally began. Amidst the attacking men and punches and kicks delivered by the cousins, Haruna ran to the customer who’s trying to get away and grabbed him from behind as he opened his car. Just as he swung a left hook at her direction, she dodged the punch and delivered an uppercut to his jaw, rendering him unconscious. She handcuffed him on the steering wheel and grabbed the keys inside to make sure he doesn’t escape and moved on to the other men running towards her.

“This is not good.” Jun angrily thought as he sees the other men drop down like flies from the cousins’ moves. He rode his bike together with his men and began circling the three to trap them.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan are back to back, looking at the men as they brandished baseball bats and steel pipes as weapons. One of the men swung his bat at Takamina which she easily blocked and retaliated by swinging her arm towards his neck, effectively lifting him from the bike, knocking him unconscious to the ground. Miichan grabbed the bat and swung it to another biker’s back, making him swerve and collide to the other bikers. The fight continued until Jun and two of his remaining men decided to abandon the empty lot and ran into a nearby alley.

“Mou! Who says an agent’s job is easy? All these crooks do is run!” Haruna complained as they chased after the remaining men.

As Jun and his men is near the end of the alley, a van stopped in front of them and let them in the vehicle. The cousins immediately stopped when some of the men inside the van brought out high-caliber guns out the windows and pointed at them.

“Uh-oh!” Takamina, Haruna and Miichan thought as they ducked to nearby crates and garbage cans when the men started showering bullets at their direction. The van immediately sped up when the cousins began to hide.

“That was close. Is everyone okay?” Takamina panted, looking at her cousins. Haruna nodded and Miichan immediately called the agency via mobile phone to arrest the men they left at the empty lot.

*****

After a few minutes, a squad of TSOA agents finally arrived at the scene, taking the criminals into custody. Hisao Takahashi also arrived as well.

“Good job girls! Though three of them escaped, you were able to gather the evidence.” Hisao said, pointing at the briefcase filled with money and the bag of cocaine.

“Thanks Grandpa! We’ll try to investigate further on whom they are working with.” Haruna said.

“Wonderful. We’ll update you as well whenever we receive something from the intel. You girls should head back to wherever your team is so as not to make them worry.” Hisao said as the rest of the squad drove off the empty lot. The cousins nodded in reply and headed to where they left their bikes.

*****

Meanwhile, Jun called his immediately boss about the incident during the transaction. The dark suited man frowned as the call ended, gripping hard on his mobile phone.

“That idiot!” he thought then furiously punched numbers on his phone.

“Good evening sir, Masanori speaking.” He said as someone answered his call. “It seems that some are finally taking steps to stop our business deals… Hai… we’ll deal with them once we get to know who they are.”

To be continued...

:on_hot: writing about the action scene is a bit hard for me... Gomen ne everyone if this seemed long. I want everyone to read the action scene as I imagined it.

Again, thank you for reading my fic! I'm already writing the draft of the next chapter... Spoiler alert: will introduce another member of the team (but not the ones who are on vacation... they are still having fun wherever they are.) :glasses: :wahaha:

:byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: kaizoku_gal on July 19, 2011, 07:56:38 AM

Just got the time to sit down and read this fic properly. LOL my brain doesnt process action story as well as other kind of stories :lol:

But good job! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: Flean on July 19, 2011, 08:11:55 AM

the longer the better... LOL.. :lol: love Takamina being adorkable~~ XD

more action!!!! yeah!!! :mon zoom:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 19, 2011, 08:18:25 AM

LOL I sure Takamina will frame her helmet now keke

They are so kick ass! too bad 3 of them got away, they cheated! used guns LOL
YAY for ACTION! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 19, 2011, 11:08:19 AM

Ninjatigerdemon: thanks for the comment! I hope you already read the latest chapter :hee:
kaizoku_gal: thank you for taking the time to read my story! :luvluv2:
Flean: I love writing about Takamina being adorkable. :luvluv1: well, i guess i can say that if i wrote a long chapter it means it has action parts in it :mon zoom:
immortal_K: i also bet she will frame it :hiakhiakhiak: honestly, i had fun writing that scene... i was like :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: AAAice on July 19, 2011, 11:09:18 AM

Ahh that must hurt Takamina. :]] Lollage at the part when Takamina jerked up and hit her head under the car. -.-

Pfft, Jun. Go away. :]] Still can't beat the three girls.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: khryz0421 on July 19, 2011, 11:11:41 AM

nice action scenes! :mon woo: :mon woo: more action! :mon thumb:

i need your update! :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: kahem on July 19, 2011, 11:56:12 AM

Nice update ;)
Takamina is so cute ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 19, 2011, 02:49:52 PM

Thanks for updating
The action scene was wonderful
:cathappy:
Update soon :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 19, 2011, 10:28:52 PM

gah SOO COOL!!! :twothumbs

argh 3 escaped!!! oh well they'll get caught later nin nin

waiting for next update yes yes :yep:

i can't find my notebook :cry:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 20, 2011, 04:19:56 AM

AAAice: I imagine Takamina being like this when Atsuko touched her bump on her forehead :monk gboy:
khryz0421: will post an update soon!
kahem: thanks kahem!
Ninjatigerdemon: thank you for the comment! will try to think of more action scenes in the future chapters!
anoni2: haha, yes the 3 who escaped will be caught... and clobbered soon. :P where did you put your notebook? :cry: are you talking about a writing notebook or a small laptop? :?

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 4 - FIRST ENCOUNTER] update
Post by: khryz0421 on July 20, 2011, 08:10:14 AM

i'll wait for your update.^^ :mon cute: :mon cute:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST]
Post by: AFLynx on July 20, 2011, 08:50:16 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 5 – STARING CONTEST

After successfully arresting the criminals, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan were able to catch up at the restaurant where the team is already having dinner. When they arrived, no one really questioned where they had been seeing that the cousins immediately ordered and ate their meal once they sat on their seats.

The next morning, everything went back to normal – the team is busy with the usual tasks. Miichan sighed as she replaced one of the tires of the bikes used in last night’s competition.

“Miichan, you looked wiped out.” Takamina said, wiping her arms with a towel.

“You’re not so bad looking yourself.” Miichan retorted, point out Takamina’s eye bags.

“We all look horrible from last night.” Haruna groaned, slumping on the floor and resting her back on the bike Miichan is working on.

Sensing the cousins’ mood, Sae went to their direction. “I know you are all tired last night. Why don’t you take a break for the rest of the afternoon?” Sae suggested.

Takamina and Haruna smiled. “I’ll take a look at the Tech Lab and see new designs that they have for our cars.” Takamina said and headed to the lab.

“I’ll check the pantry if there are some snacks available. I bet Yuko and the other Flag girls are there too.” Haruna said as she stood up.

Miichan attached the final screw on the wheel when Sae placed her hand on shoulder. “Mariko-chan is in the studio for her photo shoot… you should go see her. My girlfriend is also there working with her.” Sae hinted.
“Arigato.” Miichan replied, placing her tools in her toolbox then exited the garage heading to the studio.

*****

When Miichan entered the studio, she squinted at the continuous flashing of lights. A few feet from the photo shoot area, a girl noticed her entry and waved for her to come forward.

“Hi! You must be Miichan, one of the new drivers, I’ve heard so much about you. I’m Yuki Kashiwagi, the make-up artist of the Flag Girls. You can call me Yukirin.” She bowed in greeting.

“Nice to meet you Yukirin. You must be Sae’s girlfriend.” Miichan replied.

“Yup. You’re just in time for Mariko’s shoot… but I think she is not in the mood today.” Yukirin said as they both looked on to the shoot area where Amina and Mariko are working.

*****

Amina lowered down her camera and pouted at Mariko. “Mariko-chan, what’s wrong? You seemed out of it.” She observed.

Mariko sighed as she adjusted her sitting position on a bike they are using as a prop for the shoot. “Gomen ne Amina-chan. I’m just thinking about the paperwork that’s working for me after the shoot. I barely got enough sleep too because of the race last night.” She explained.

Amina gave her a worried smile. “I’ll tell you what, we’ll just finish the rest of the shots then we’ll call it a day. Do your best!” Amina said.

Mariko sighed again. “Fine. After all, we really need to take a break. I bet Yukirin is pressured as well.” She then noticed Yukirin talking to Miichan while looking at them.

What’s this? Mariko is staring at us… I see… Yukirin thought. “Miichan, why don’t you sit just behind Amina-chan to get a close view of the shoot? That way, you can see Mariko-chan do her magic.” You don’t have to worry about being in the way.” She said as she guided Miichan to sit at an available chair.

Yukirin, what are you up to? Mariko thought as she combed her hand thru her hair, feeling conscious now that Miichan is watching. Amina then asked Yukirin to retouch Mariko’s makeup for the remaining shots.

Miichan stared at Mariko and smirked. Let’s see how the great Mariko do her work.

Mariko noticed Miichan’s smug look and narrowed her eyes. Is that a challenge, Miichan? You’re so on!

Amina started clicking the camera, emitting constant white flashes across the room for every shot taken. Mariko never let her eyes off of Miichan as she did various poses while seated on the bike.

“That’s it Mariko-chan! Just keep your eyes on the camera! The camera loves you!” Amina encouraged, and very glad for Mariko’s change of mood.

Standing beside Amina, Yukirin giggled. “If you only knew Amina-chan.” Yukirin whispered, knowing the model is looking beyond the camera and over to the seated race driver.

Miichan let out an exaggerated yawn, and made a bored look towards Mariko. Is that all you’ve got? she thought, further challenging the model and lazily lounged on her seat.

Yukirin further observed the two. I feel like I’m in a tennis match! Let’s see who’ll take their eyes off of each other first. I wish Sae is here, we could make a bet on this. Yukirin smiled.

Seeing Miichan’s bored expression, Mariko devilishly smiled at her. I hope you can keep up with what I’m gonna do Miichan. she thought then began slowly unzipping the biker suit that she’s wearing until the zipper’s almost past her cleavage. She then waited for the other girl’s reaction.

Holy -- ! She’s not gonna undress, is she? Miichan thought, her eyes widening but kept her eyes on Mariko’s face.

“Wow! That’s great Mariko-chan! Let that passion come naturally out of your eyes! Just let the emotions flow, we only got a couple of shots left!” Amina exclaimed, still oblivious of the interaction between the two.

Mariko let out a laugh, sharing her genuine smile to the camera and to the people around her. I never thought this will be fun! she thought. After a few seconds, her smile faded a bit when she saw Miichan’s reaction I wonder what she’s thinking right now… Thinking that she may been a bit overboard, she gently tucked her hair behind her ear and sheepishly smiled.

Beautiful… was the only thing that Miichan could think of, looking at Mariko with admiration in her eyes. She gave the model a reassuring smile.

Mariko saw Miichan smile at her then blushed, finally lowering her eyes to the floor. I guess you won this time Miichan… she conceded.

Game, set and match… Yukirin smiled and began fixing her makeup kit.

“What a dramatic expression for the final shot! Great work Mariko-chan! I can’t wait to have these shots printed!” Amina said then began removing the lens of the camera. Before Mariko could answer her, she saw Miichan stand up from her seat and winked at her before finally leaving the studio.

“Thank you.” Mariko whispered as she looked on to Miichan’s retreating form.

To be continued...

:mon lurk: my first attempt to write such a scene... I thought that Miichan and Mariko's characters fit in such a situation. Anyway, I'm currently writing the plot for the next chapter. thank you for reading! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 20, 2011, 09:19:15 AM

More!!!! :twothumbs

Totally saved me from boring work!

Haha staring contest between miichan and mariko (miichan wins first round :lol:)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 20, 2011, 10:58:06 AM

wohoho what a match :cathappy: i have a bad experience with staring contest but this one is good marimii :inlove:

oh it's a normal notebook where a write my fic parts XD i left it in London by acci :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: AAAice on July 20, 2011, 11:21:49 AM

That's hot!!! I can totally visualize Mariko and the most of the photoshoot scene.

Props to Amina and her work! :]] LOL at Yuki making an evil antics.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 20, 2011, 11:33:45 AM

immortal_K: hehe, I was undecided at first who will win the staring contest... then I imagined Mariko's face when she's embarrassed and I was like :wub: My inspiration for this chapter came from the fact that more often than not, I lose in a staring contest :sweatdrop:

anoni2: you're not the only one who has a bad experience about it >.< it's a shame that you accidentally left your notebook in London :cry: you can always rewrite your ideas for your fics :)

AAAice: I once got the chance to see a clip of Mariko's photoshoot in youtube and I was like :inlove: I can totally relate to what you said! Originally, I planned to introduce Yukirin as one of the Flag Girls in Chapter 3... but I totally forgot :nervous I think Yukirin is the best member that I could think of as a background observer :P

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: kahem on July 20, 2011, 12:40:04 PM

Yukirin good job!!!!!
I can perfectly imagine the scene, especially the part Mariko unzip the biker suit ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 20, 2011, 04:06:28 PM

kahem: thanks for the comment :P That scene made me blush a bit as I wrote it down... if Mariko unzipped her suit any lower... :mon blood:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 20, 2011, 04:10:05 PM

waaaa hahaha XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 20, 2011, 05:43:50 PM

It gets more interesting each chapter :cathappy:
Ah miichan must have been so happy
Update soon XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: blughise on July 20, 2011, 05:49:57 PM

I wonder what will Takamina and Acchan staring contest be like?
UPDATE SOON

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: kahem on July 20, 2011, 07:08:31 PM

^
No matter how many time they would do it, Acchan will always win xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 21, 2011, 04:27:40 AM

Ninjatigerdemon: I'm guessing that Miichan was happy too. We have to thank Sae for that for suggesting to go to the studio on her break. :wahaha:

blughise: I wonder about that too. If I get enough requests to make a staring contest chapters for HarunaxYuko and TakaminaxAtsuko, I might write about it too. :P Next update will be up soon. :glasses:

kahem: Hahaha, I would have to agree with you... we all have that the general idea that Acchan will always win :nervous

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 21, 2011, 05:13:36 AM

I request for atsumina and kojiharu staring contest too
XD
:twothumbs :twothumbs

Having difficulties leaving comments on phone keke :banghead:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: hott3stson3 on July 21, 2011, 05:24:02 AM

Shinoda Mariko, you have never failed to make me squirm during you're time of sexyness~ :P

OMFG!!!! Kill me now!!! :shocked :w00t: :w00t: :drool: :w00t:

^Never mind, forget what i said up there!!!

I need to be alive to see Atsumina & Kojiharu staring contest :panic: :panic:

Update soon!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 5 - STARING CONTEST] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 21, 2011, 05:32:02 AM

I would like to also request a atsumina and kojiharu staring contest XD
:lol:
Can't wait for next chapter

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA]
Post by: AFLynx on July 21, 2011, 08:41:02 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 6 – RED SEA

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan received an e-mail from the agency…

The criminals that you were able to capture ratted out that their group has a warehouse at the Tokyo pier. Investigate the place and give us a report on whatever you may find there.

Takahashi Hisao
TSOA Chief of Staff

*****

On that same night that they received the order, the cousins went to the aforementioned pier. Dozens of old warehouses and container vans were all over the place, and some small fishing boats where anchored at the wharf, giving an eerie feeling at night.

“I hate going in this kind of place! It’s scary, cold and smells fishy!” Miichan said as they got out of their black 4x4 convertible Jeep Wrangler.

“I don’t quite understand your reasoning… only the fishy part of this pier.” Haruna teased.

Takamina suddenly heard cars heading at their direction. “There are cars coming this way. Quick! Let’s hide.” Takamina said and they began scrambling behind a nearby container van. A group of black sedans and van parked at a warehouse across where they were hiding. A couple of men got out of the cars, carrying firearms and entered the warehouse.

”Odd… it is kinda late to visit a warehouse, don’t you think? Let’s wait a bit until they leave.” Takamina whispered.

After an hour, most of the men finally left, leaving the others to guard the warehouse. With guns in hand, the cousins silently went their way towards the building, entering thru an open window. When they got in, Haruna silently went up to the second floor while Takamina and Miichan scanned the perimeter to make sure that the coast is clear before following Haruna.

At the 2nd level of the building, they picked one of the two locked doors open. Once they entered, they saw different equipments that were commonly used in laboratories. At the farthest table, they noticed that it was dusted with what seems like white powder.

"Is this some kind of meth or cocaine lab?" Miichan whispered, guarding the door.

"That's possible. But I don't think this is not their main lab. It is too small a lab if they want to produce large quantities." Takamina whispered back, scraping some of the white powder into a small tube then placed it in one of the pockets of her vest. The three then made their way to the second room.

The second room appeared to be the control room of the warehouse wherein there is a large glass window overlooking the entire ground floor of the warehouse. Haruna saw a computer and turned it on, connecting a handheld tablet into one of the ports. She was able to access a database but encountered a pop up window.

“It needs a password…” Haruna mumbled, then opened a software programmed by the Agency to simulate various combinations of possible passwords. “This will take a while, but I’ll do my best to access their database.” She said and began typing furiously on the computer’s keyboard.
Miichan looked out the glass window to take a look at the area below. Her eyes widened in surprise as she saw the things below which is illuminated by the moonlight thru the windows all over the warehouse.

“Whoa! Is this some kind of a garage as well? Look Takamina! There are racing cars and bikes down there.” Miichan pointed. Takamina who was guarding the door moved besides Miichan to take a look.

“This means that whoever owns this dirty business might own a racing team as well.” Takamina used her night vision goggles to take a closer look, and then panned her vision to some of the large tables below. “It looks like they are into gun smuggling as well. There are high caliber guns everywhere. Haruna, how are you doing there?” she asked.

“Almost there…” Haruna said. She let out a cleansing breath when the last combination of password was accepted. “Yatta! I got in! I’ll just copy the files that they have and we’ll get out of here.” She said as she clicked “copy” in the computer and started downloading the files to the tablet.

*****

Meanwhile, a roaming guard passed by the area where the cousins entered thru a window. He frantically grabbed his radio when he noticed the window wide open enough for a person to climb thru. “Sound the alarm! We have an intruder!”

The three cousins looked up the blinking red light on the wall when the guards sounded the alarm. “Quick Haruna! We have to get out of here!” Miichan said as she exited the door and pointed her gun at either direction.

“There, all done!” Haruna said as the screen flashed “downloading complete” and hastily unplugged her tablet and inserted it in her hard shell backpack. As they made their way down the stairs, one of the men spotted them.

“There they are!” pointed one of the men and they scrambled towards the cousins’ direction. Miichan threw a smoke grenade at them slowing their approach. Takamina saw some gas cans near where the men are and shot a few rounds from her Glock 17, causing it to explode and putting some of the men on fire.

“That should get them fired up!” Haruna joked as they ran towards a backdoor exit. Seeing that the door is locked by chains, she aimed her gun and took a shot letting the chain loose then kicked the door open and ran their way out.

*****

A group of cars stopped in front of the building and then came out Masanori and some of his men. He received a frantic call from the guards a few minutes back, and frowned at the condition of the warehouse. He then spotted the cousins running towards the wharf.

“After them!” he ordered his men, making a run towards the cousins’ direction, firing their guns at the same time.

“This is not good! Let’s head towards the port near the wharf!” Takamina shouted. Each of them pulled out their guns and began shooting at the men as they ran. Some men were effectively disabled as they were shot on their knees or shoulders.

Masanori frowned at the situation. “Get me the M72.” One of his men loaded the light anti-tank weapon and handed it to him. He placed the weapon on his shoulder and fired the missile towards Takamina, Haruna and Miichan’s direction to the wharf.

Near the end of the port, the cousins stopped for breath. Their eyes widened in fear as they saw the missile flying swiftly in their direction.

“Jump!” Miichan screamed as they dived down the water. They were able to dodge the missile where it hit an anchored tugboat just behind where they were standing, causing it to explode.

*****

Masanori and the rest of his able men went to the area where they last saw the cousins before they dived down towards the sea. He ordered his men to shoot at the water, emitting a loud noise as they shower bullets to the water. He then grabbed a MagLite from one of his men then aimed the light towards the water. He let out a satisfied smirk as he saw the seawater turn into a tinge of red.

“Let’s see if you can survive that.” He laughed and tossed the flashlight to one of his men beside him and walked away.

To be continued...

:mon speechless:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: kahem on July 21, 2011, 09:51:35 AM

Of course Acchan will always win against Takamina lol
Action was great!!!! Like a spy movie yeah!!!! I'm sure they would be alright

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 21, 2011, 10:33:23 AM

OH NO! it must be spilled red paint!

I hope the three of them are okay :prayers:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 21, 2011, 10:45:13 AM

LOL that was cool with missiles and all!!! agents agents ftw!!

waaaa who got shoot :shocked

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: blughise on July 21, 2011, 01:53:40 PM

THAT WAS SO EXCITING AND THRILLING!!!!! XD XD XD iT'S LIKE MISSION IMPOSSIBLE!!!! i HOPE THE GIRLS ARE OK!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: Flean on July 21, 2011, 01:58:06 PM

I'm so Love the agent/spy action... :w00t:

you're good!!! :twothumbs

Please update soon~~ :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 21, 2011, 02:24:48 PM

Thanks for updating
The action was awesome :cathappy: I LOVE IT!!!
Update soon :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: khryz0421 on July 21, 2011, 06:10:34 PM

wow! missile! :O :O i hope no get hurt.. :( :(

please update soon.. :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 6 - RED SEA] update
Post by: AAAice on July 21, 2011, 06:32:21 PM

Hehe actions FTW!

Damn those three girls are badass!

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 22, 2011, 05:47:21 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 7 - WELCOME BACK

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan finally emerged from the water beside a fishing boat gasping for breath, and then looked towards the direction of the burning tugboat.

"That was close... Is everyone okay?" Takamina panted, shivering from the cold water.

Miichan nodded and looked at a pale faced Haruna. "Haruna, you've been hit!" she exclaimed.

"I think a bullet grazed my arm..." Haruna winced, clutching her arm.

Takamina carefully removed her hand that's covering the arm and examined the wound. "It's a scratch alright... Let's get out of here and call the agency when we get home." she said worriedly. She then supported Haruna as they swam ashore to head back to their Jeep.

*****

Once inside the apartment, Miichan called the agency and asked for a doctor to come over. Both Takamina and Miichan helped Haruna to undress and take a bath to cleanse the wound while waiting for the doctor, then took their own baths. After a few minutes, a doctor from the agency finally arrived.

"Good news, I don't have to stitch the wound. You girls did the right thing to call the agency instead of going to a hospital. That could've brought questions from the doctors and you could've blown your cover." Yohko Suguira, a doctor and a special agent of the TSOA said, as she dabbed some antiseptic while looking at Haruna for any pained reaction.

"Thank you for your help, Yohko-sensei." Haruna said while looking at her arm being bandaged with gauze. The doctor then moved to Takamina and Miichan, checking their wounds and began her treatment.

"Fighting crimes... Saving lives... And risking our own lives is part of our job. Who says an agent's job is easy?" Yohko rhetorically asked, making the girls giggle.

"That's what Haruna said when we had our first encounter with our suspects." Miichan said.

Yohko sighed then smiled, gently clasping each of their hands. "I've known you three since you started coming by the agency ten years ago to visit the Chief. I even treated your boo boos as you've once called it whenever you got rowdy in playing at the office. All of the other agents who also saw you grow up will agree with me that you've grown into fine young women. We've waited for this time that you'll finally join the team." she said, squeezing their hands lightly. The girls then gave the doctor a hug, just like they always do.

"I guess I have to get going. You girls should better take a rest. Also, I bet Midori is waiting for me. She worries too, you know." Yohko said as she packed her medicine bag.

"Please tell her not to worry. Oh, and kindly tell her to run some tests on the sample that we got and check out the files in the tablet." Takamina said she handed the tablet. Midori Suguira is one of the best researchers that the agency have.

"Hai, I will. You should visit us whenever you are free. You should remind Midori that she has a girlfriend who gets jealous on whatever she is researching." Yohko said, referring to herself.

"We'll visit one of these days. Take care on your way home!" Miichan replied as they guided the doctor to their apartment door.

*****

The next day, everyone in the AKB48 racing team is chatting cheerfully, huddling near two other girls. The chatting seized when everyone noticed their race drivers entered sluggishly into the garage. Yuko broke the silence as she squealed when she saw Haruna.

"NyanNya--" Yuko's squeals stopped when she saw Haruna's arm. "What happened to your arm?!" she then looked at Takamina and Miichan. "What happened to you two?!" she exclaimed. Upon hearing this, Atsuko and Mariko ran towards Takamina and Miichan as well, and the rest of the team followed.

“Ah… this? Eto… I accidentally fell off my bike trying to dodge a cat who suddenly ran across the street last night.” She explained. What a weird excuse! she thought, mentally facepalming.

“How about you Takamina? What happened to you?!” Atsuko demanded, teary eyes as she touched the faint cuts and small bruises on Takamina’s face and arms.

Takamina looked at Miichan who’s quietly hugged by Mariko. “Well… Miichan and I were exercising in our gym in our apartment and we had a practice sparring last night. I guess we got kinda rough without knowing it.” She replied. Takamina then cupped her hand on Atsuko’s cheek, and then used her thumb to wipe the tears that’s threatening to fall down.

“Mou! Don’t scare me like that!” Mariko pleaded as she gently pulled out from Miichan’s hug, still resting her hands on Miichan’s shoulder.

“I’m sorry Mariko. Next time, we’ll not be so rough on each other anymore.” Miichan promised, earning a smile from Mariko.

Everyone in the team sighed in relief as they heard that the cousins are okay. Sayaka clapped her hands to get everyone’s attention. “Now that everything’s cleared, I want to inform you that we will join a city race in a week’s time.” She announced, earning excited whispers from everyone. “Takamina, Haruna, Miichan… please take care of yourselves and be in your top shape for this race.”

“Hai!” the three responded.

“Oh and before I forget, two of the Flag Girls finally got back from their vacation.” Mariko said waving to one of the newcomers to come over. “Takamina, Haruna, Miichan – I’d like you to meet Tomomi Kasai.”

“Hajimemashite. Yoroshiku onegai shimashu.” Tomo-mi bowed.

“Yoroshiku!” the three cousins bowed in reply. Their eyes widened in surprise as they saw the second newcomer walking towards them.

Mariko placed her hand on the second newcomer’s shoulder and said, “And last but not the least, to complete, the Flag Girls team, I’d like you to meet Itano…” Mariko was cut off when Takamina, Haruna and Miichan blurted out –

“TOMOCHIN?!!”

To be continued...

Disclaimer: Yohko and Midori are originally from Sunrise from the Mai Hime anime/manga... I just borrowed them to add additional characters in my story. (sorry got lazy thinking of other names ^^) but then again, this is still my story and in this story, they are in a relationship :wahaha:

Thank you everyone for your comments! :kneelbow: about the HarunaxYuko and TakaminaxAtsuko staring contents... I'm not sure when I'm gonna write about it... as of now, I'm having a hard time thinking about Haruna and Yuko's staring contest :frustrated:

Anyway, I finally introduced the last of the Flag Girls who were on vacation as mentioned in chapter 3... I definitely won't leave out these two in my story :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 22, 2011, 06:01:48 AM

Great Chapter XD
Glad that they are all alright XD
Thanks for updating :twothumbs
I wonder how they knew tomochin :?
Update soon! :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: hott3stson3 on July 22, 2011, 06:18:43 AM

:dizzy: :dizzy:

man you update fast AFLynx-san!!!

My parents wouldn't let me use my laptop since i came home late :err: :fainted:

but now my parents forgot they grounded me!! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

ch. 6~ OMFG!!! It's like Charlies Angels!! :on woohoo:

ch. 7~ Thank god they're okay lol

:stoned: they know Tomochin? Is she going to be someone's ex??

plus the cliffhanger!!! :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye: :on cloudeye:

You're killing me!! Lol Update soon!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: immortal_K on July 22, 2011, 07:56:05 AM

The suspense is killing me, I wonder how they know tomochin :O

What's going to happen now? Will their cover be blown?

Can't wait till next update XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: kahem on July 22, 2011, 09:45:00 AM

Tomotomo? Please!!!!
They know Tomochin? Interesting hehehe

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 22, 2011, 10:52:26 AM

ngek haruna got hit @_@ uff only a scratch great great phew~

what excuse was that :shocked :rofl:

wait aint they lovey-dovey :cathappy:

tomotomo appeared ehehe me wonder why they know tomochin too XD

I like Mai Hime!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 22, 2011, 11:24:21 AM

anoni2: I laughed at myself when I wrote about that excuse :nervous lol yeah, they are lovey-dovey :P I like Mai Hime too XD
kahem: you'll soon know how they met Tomochin 8)
hott3stson3: glad to know you like the story :) i update fast because I wrote chapters 6 & 7 in one sitting. It's good that your parents forgot that they grounded you then lol XD please wait for the next update!
Ninjatigerdemon: hehe, I just gave Haruna a scratch... I dont want their skin to be marred with big ugly scars in the story lol

To everyone whom I wasn't able to reply to that commented before chapter 7: Thank you for reading my fic! I will do my best! :on study:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: blughise on July 22, 2011, 03:22:53 PM

Oh yah, this is definitely more like Charlie's Angels than mission impossible XD Can't wait for the next update!!! the TomoTomo couple are bacK!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on July 22, 2011, 07:42:12 PM

You're combining lots of good things here: the racing, the action, the romance and all that :thumbsup
Out of all the potential couples, MariMii is definitely taking my interest so far. With the staring contest in chap 5, I wasn't really expecting Mariko to direclty hug Miichan at chapter 7 even when Mariko is worried (which is adorable btw :wub:). It suddenly makes me want to read more of their moments than my bias pair, AtsuMina :P
Ah Tomochin, the girl who usually brings the surprise...
Before chapter 7, when I saw your Natsuki ava pic and the word "ara" spreads all over the fic along with Acchan saying "Ta-Ka-Mi-Na" in such way, I feel like I'm reading A ShizNat or Mai-Hime/Otome fic somehow, now even Yohko and Midori are there :lol:
Speaking of ShizNat, I suppose Takamina makes a good Natsuki while Acchan makes a good Shizuru XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: dark-atrox on July 22, 2011, 08:08:19 PM

..and i thought im the only jphipsters who love MAI HIME! :lol:

i should've known...natsuki as ur avatar tsk..tsk..! XD

~yawn~

thanks for the update! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 24, 2011, 08:14:01 AM

@blughise: yup! they are back :P please wait for the next update!
pretend_2besome1: wow! this is the first time I received a lengthy feedback! thank you so much!
When I first thought of the pairing, I thought to make it different from HarunaxYuko and TakaminaxAtsuko. Among the three pairings, I want MariMii to be "subtle" in the sense that they have that silent mutual understanding... or you could blame my mushy side in writing. :grin: As the story progresses, of course I will write about the other two pairings. :grin:
Hehe, I've been caught! Though it is not intentional on my part to make it feel like reading the Mai Hime manga or watching the anime counterpart, I thought Shizuru's "ara ara" comment suits in some of the scenes in this story. Lol, yes I have to agree that Takamina makes a great Natsuki and Atsuko is like Shizuru. :P
dark-atrox: hehe, I thought I made it that obvious already :P thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 7 - WELCOME BACK] update
Post by: Flean on July 24, 2011, 08:18:43 AM

Quote from: AFLynx on July 24, 2011, 08:14:01 AM

yes I have to agree that Takamina makes a great Natsuki and Atsuko is like Shizuru. :P

me too~~~ XD

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET]
Post by: AFLynx on July 24, 2011, 10:22:46 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET

Previously...

Mariko placed her hand on the second newcomer’s shoulder and said, “And last but not the least, to complete, the Flag Girls team, I’d like you to meet Itano…” Mariko was cut off when Takamina, Haruna and Miichan blurted out –

“TOMOCHIN?!!”

*****

"Haruna! Miichan! Takamina! Long time no see! So you're the new drivers these three has been babbling about." Tomochin said pointing at Yuko, Mariko and Atsuko. She then gave the three cousins a hug, minding their injuries.

"Eh~~ You know them Tomochin?" Mariko asked.

"Yup, I've known them since we were kids. We all went to the same school until high school. It's kinda sad that they didn't keep in touch when we went to different colleges." Tomochin pouted.

"Gomen ne Tomochin. We all went to the UK to study at Oxford University." Takamina said, scratching the back of her head. I'm sorry for the excuse Tomochin...

"Hmmm... okay, I'll accept your excuse. I remember you once said that most your family members are Oxford graduates." Tomochin said. This new information caused murmurs from the other members of the team.

"You all seemed very close with one another." Yuko observed, changing the topic.

"Yup! For some reasons, the four of us end up as classmates since kindergarten." Haruna said.

"But I think Takamina is closer to Tomochin. Asides from being a member of some sports clubs, Takamina is in the drama club with Tomochin back in high school." Miichan added, who didn't seem to mind Takamina's nudging.

"Oooohhh... I think there's a good story behind that." Mariko said, looking at Atsuko's direction.

Tomochin giggled as she saw Takamina's face turned red. "Before we graduated, our class were in charge for the stage play for the school festival. Our play was Romeo and Juliet." she said.

"So... which of the characters did you portray?" Atsuko asked, slightly raising an eyebrow.

"I was Lady Capulet." Haruna smiled.

"I portrayed Mercutio, friend of Romeo." Miichan said and made fencing movements which made everyone laugh.

"Erm... as a member of the drama club, I was asked to play as one of the main characters. I portrayed Romeo." Takamina said shyly.

"Masaka, then that means..." Atsuko thought as she looked at Tomochin who placed her hand on Takamina's shoulder. "Please don't say it!"

"And I was Juliet." Tomochin simply said, grinning at Takamina.

"The audience were amazed at their performance, especially at the part when they kismmmph..." Miichan was cut off as Takamina clamped her hand to her mouth.

"AAaanyway... you could say that the play was a success." Takamina interjected.

Everybody then began asking questions about their past with Tomochin. Atsuko on the other hand, stayed silent which was noticed by Mariko and Yuko.

*****

A week has passed and the day for the scheduled race finally arrived. The AKB48 racing team arrived at the meeting point early for the registration.

"It says here that we can only submit one entry for the race. Since we have three drivers, the organizers chose who will represent the team." Sayaka informed Takamina, Haruna and Miichan.

"And...? Who did they pick?" Miichan asked excitedly.

"Takamina." Sayaka replied, patting the girl's shoulder. Though not picked, Haruna and Miichan hugged their cousin as a sign of support. Just as they were walking towards where the rest of the team is, they heard thunderous footsteps and loud screams headed their way.

"What the --?!" Takamina gasped. Suddenly, the three cousins were surrounded by large group of girls holding autograph books and pens. There were constant flashing of and loud squeals from the fangirls.

The Flag Girls and some of the Pit Crew members who were already at their booth looked at the direction where the loud screaming came from.

"Hoho! Looks like our drivers now have their own fangirls! Good job!" Sae said, raising a thumbs up at the three cousins' direction. Yukirin smacked her head with a magazine.

"I actually don't blame them. They've been very competitive since they won to join our team." Rena said, looking at the cousins who were frantically signing autographs.

"They should be careful though. I bet some of the fangirls are gonna confess their love for our drivers." Mayu said, pointing at some persistent girls.

Mariko raised an eyebrow and huffed. "It seems that I need to tell them to back off of MY Miichan." she said, leaving the Flag Girls slack jawed.

*****

"Haruna! Sign my autograph book please!" "Miichan kawaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!" "Takamina you're so cool!!!!" and various squeals can be heard from the fangirls.

"Mou~~ we have to get out of here!" Haruna said to Takamina and Miichan.

"I'm getting claustrophobic!" Takamina said as she signed an autograph for one of the fans.

"Miichan, are you still single?" asked one of the fangirls with hopeful look in her eyes.

Miichan held her hands up, trying to make the fangirl back off. "Ah... well..." she stammered, then saw Mariko's approaching form. "Actually, there's a girl that I like. Gomen ne, please continue to support me still." Miichan bowed. As Mariko approached Miichan, she extended her hand which was gladly taken by Miichan and then they walked smoothly back to where the AKB48 team is standing. Though disappointed, Miichan's fangirls squealed and cheered for their idol.

"Sugoi~~ Mariko onee-chan is cool!" Yuko said as Mariko and Meechan approached them, still holding each other's hands.

"Well, Haruna and Takamina are still in trouble..." Tomo-mi said.

Yuko saw one of the fangirls trying to kiss Haruna and frowned, pulled her sleeves up her shoulders then stomped her way to Haruna. "Nobody has the right to kiss NyanNyan! Heck, I didn't even kiss her yet!" she growled, making everyone laugh.

*****

Haruna was trying to fend off a fangirl when she heard - "NyanNyaaaaan!" Every one of the fangirls stared at the fuming Yuko trying to get in the middle where Haruna is standing. Once Yuko got to where her object of affection is, she suddenly grabbed Haruna intro a hug and glared at the fangirls.

"Back off! She's my NyanNyan and she's mine alone!" Yuko screamed.

*crickets chirping*

After a few seconds of stunned silence, the fangirls resumed their screams and squeals.

"Oh my God! Haruna-sama is with Yuko-san, captain of the AKB48 Team Flag Girls!" "They look cute together!" "Yuko-san! We place Haruna-sama in your care!" they all cheered.

"N-Nani?!" Haruna exclaimed as she was dragged by Yuko from the crowd.

"O-Oi! What about me?!" Takamina shouted at Haruna and Yuko.

*****

Haruna and Yuko finally made their way to the team. Takamina on the other hand is trying her best to appease the crowd and continued signing autographs.

"Aren't you gonna help her Acchan?" Mariko asked, looking at the crowd getting larger by the minute.

Atsuko made a thinking pose. "Hmmm... I think we'll let her stew for a couple more minutes. Let's see how Takamina handle such a large crowd." she said, smiling mischievously.

Meanwhile, Takamina was patiently signing each of her fans' autograph books and tried even harder to smile when asked to have her picture taken. She even dodged a few fans who tried to kiss her.

Takamina looked at the team who's standing a few meters away from her. "Are they just gonna stand there? Haruna! Miichan! ANYONE! HELP ME!" She silently pleaded with her eyes.

Tomochin looked at Atsuko and gently shook her head. "I think she's giving Takamina a hard time. Geez Atsuko-chan, now is not the right time for that." she thought. Smiled playfully and thought, "I wonder how Atsuko-chan will react to what I'm gonna do." nudging Tomo-mi. Tomo-mi looked at her who has a sly glint in her eyes, nodded thinking that Tomochin has a plan to save Takamina.

Tomochin dramatically sighed then flicked her hair. "Well, I think Takamina has suffered enough. I might as well save her for the race." she said, winking at Haruna and Miichan's direction and not minding Atsuko's surprised look.

"Knowing Tomochin, I think she's up to something..." Haruna whispered to Miichan, who responded by nodding furiously.

*****

Meanwhile, Takamina is already getting tired of entertaining the large crowd that's surrounding her. *Sigh* "Did I do something bad in my past life that no one's helping me right now?" she thought. She was surprised and disappointed at the same time, when she saw Tomochin approach. This earned displeased looks from the fangirls.

"Let me guess... you're Takamina-sama's girlfriend?" one of the aggressive fangirls mocked.

Tomochin seductively wrapped her arms around Takamina and simply said, "You could say that..."

"We don't believe you!" "Prove it!" "We'll still love Takamina-sama!" some of the fans yelled.

"These fangirls sure are stubborn!" Tomochin inwardly sighed. She then made Takamina face her and wrap her arms around Takamina's neck. "Takamina... Remember Romeo and Juliet..." She purred in her ear.

*****

The AKB48 team gasped as they look at the scene unfold between Takamina and Tomochin. Miho gently tugged Tomo-mi's sleeve to get her attention.

"Ne, Tomo-mi... aren't you gonna stop your girlfriend?" she asked.

Haruna and Miichan looked at their direction. "G-Girlfriend?!" they both exclaimed.

Tomo-mi giggled at their reactions. "Yes, I'm Tomochin's girlfriend... and no, I'm not going to do anything." she simply answered. Just like Tomochin, she looked at Atsuko's worried eyes looking at Takamina. Tomo-mi inwardly sighed, "Atsuko-chan, you may be good at teasing, but try to be more honest with your feelings..." she then shifted her look back to Takamina and Tomochin.

*****

After Tomochin whispered to Takamina, she slowly guided Takamina's hands to her waist and then moved her arms back to Takamina's neck. Takamina responded by pressing Tomochin's body closer to her. Looking at Tomochin's eyes, she gently tucked Tomochin's hair beside her ear, then cupped her cheek. Ever so slowly, Takamina inched her face towards Tomochin's, then completely closing the gap between them.

The AKB48 team again, gasped at what they are seeing while the fangirls squealed.

"N-No way..." Mariko whispered.

"Kiss?!" Yuko shouted.

To be continued...

:on freeze: please don't kill me...

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: anoni2 on July 24, 2011, 10:33:33 AM

:stoned:

oh my gah

mariko said my miichan XD!!!!

seriously yuko not kissed her yet? slow!!

oh oh at takamina's part :shocked

update soon!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: bungal on July 24, 2011, 10:55:30 AM

TakaTomo is so hot. :inlove:

(http://i614.photobucket.com/albums/tt224/yankumin/tumblr_lonh8pZr6J1qakjtao1_500.png)

This fic is getting better and better. Great Job! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: YumePouk on July 24, 2011, 01:44:42 PM

^
:thumbsup pic

chap
I love Romeo&Juliet especialy in this fic
Hehehe I think Acchan wanna stop them before their lips touch each other
*cross my fingers* otherwhice Takamina will have to prepare to face a piss off, angry&jealous Atsuko XD

Do your best for the fic and continue to give us an amazing and awesome story

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: Flean on July 24, 2011, 01:46:03 PM

I like TakaTomo in this chap~~~ :twothumbs

Acchan you better do something~~~ XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: blughise on July 24, 2011, 01:58:23 PM

I'm thinking that too but I was thinking that Acchan will be the one to kiss TAkAMINA......if that happen , i'll die happily.....please update sooon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 24, 2011, 02:35:39 PM

Acchan going to be very angry
Can't wait for next chapter update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: Sydney W on July 24, 2011, 03:41:44 PM

Could that be double kiss scene. I mean right after takamina x tomo kiss scene, Acchan came forward & grab takamina from Tomo to kiss Takamina instead?? XD
Anyway, waiting for your next update. :rock:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on July 24, 2011, 06:05:27 PM

You're welcome :)
That's what I thought of MariMii too. They're subtle yet they're like...oh so sure with each other? What they need is to be official!
I don't mind the unintentional Mai-hime part. Have you been reading too many Mai-hime fics, though? :P

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"It seems that I need to tell them to back off of MY Miichan."

Good damn right, woman! You show them girls Miichan only belongs to you! I'm behind you all the way! XD

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"Actually, there's a girl that I like. Gomen ne, please continue to support me still." Miichan bowed. As Mariko approached Miichan, she extended her hand which was gladly taken by Miichan and then they walked smoothly back to where the AKB48 team is standing. Though disappointed, Miichan's fangirls squealed and cheered for their idol.

With this, I hereby declared MariMii is my fav pair in this fic! (unless you changed my mind in the future)
KojiYuu the hilariuos couple as usual lol
Fangirls are always scary....
Somehow I knew there would be some TakaTomo moments and I'm liking it :lol:
Now Atsuko, the previous tease, getting teased back! I would love to see what her reactions gonna be. Either way, she better claims Takamina fast :wahaha:
Oyeah, I wish you would elaborate how MariMii get close at first
And please keep on going with your mushy side author-san, it's pure awesomeness :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: kahem on July 24, 2011, 08:04:29 PM

WOW nice rescue but Acchan would probably be mad hehehe

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8a - ROMEO + JULIET] update
Post by: AFLynx on July 25, 2011, 04:06:11 AM

anoni2: lol, yeah yuko and haruna haven't kissed yet :nervous thanks for the comment!
bungal: that pic is my fave TakaTomo moment :mon bleed2: :imdead:
YumePouk: hi! glad to see that you enjoyed the Romeo and Juliet moment :D well, Atsuko could've had that chance but she stalled way too long :nervous thank you very much for your comment! I'll do my best! :mon XD: :mon kungfu:
Flean: thanks Flean! We'll see in the next chapters if Acchan will do something about it... or Takamina might do the first move... im not sure yet :nervous
blughise: lol that's my original plan actually... but then I thought 'were's the thrill in that?' that's why I gave Tomochin a grand entrance in this story ;)
Ninjatigerdemon: will update as soon as possible! I think everyone is hyped up about what's gonna happen next :P
Sydney W: Oooohh... I never thought about that lol. you'll see what will happen in the upcoming chapters. please stay tuned!
pretend_2besome1:

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I don't mind the unintentional Mai-hime part. Have you been reading too many Mai-hime fics, though?

- again: guilty lol

Quote

Oyeah, I wish you would elaborate how MariMii get close at first

I know that I somehow made a leap in regarding to their relationship. I just thought that if I put too much detail in my story, it might seem dragging to the point of becoming boring. But fret not - I'll insert some chapters every now and then that concentrates on the relationships of the 3 pairs in this story.
lol, you're the first person to tell me that my mushyness is equals to awesomeness :P
kahem: hehe, we'll see in the next chapter :P

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 25, 2011, 09:01:02 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 8b - Romeo + Juliet

"N-No way..." Mariko whispered.

"Kiss?!" Yuko shouted.

*****

Atsuko was stunned at what she saw. After a few minutes, Takamina and Tomochin finally got out of the crowd and headed back to the team. Snapping out of her reverie, Atsuko lowered her gaze, unsure of what to do.

"I... I don't feel so well... I think I'll head back to our bus to rest." she weakly informed Mariko and Yuko.

Takamina jogged back towards Atsuko. As she was about to call her attention, she stopped in her tracks when Atsuko walked away. "Mariko... Yuko... Where's Acchan going?"

The two sisters looked at each other. "Acchan said she's not feeling well so... She went back to our bus." Yuko said.

Hearing this information, Takamina slumped her shoulders, disappointment clearly written all over her face.

"Let her take a rest Takamina. We'll still be here to cheer you on." Mariko said, patting her shoulder. Takamina simply nodded then headed to where she could change her racing gear. “I hope we get some answers about what happened earlier.” Mariko thought.

*****

Takamina finally changed into her racing gear. With helmet on hand, she walked her way towards Sayaka and Sae for her briefing before the race.

“The committee has given us the route for the race. They’ve put up signs for every twist and turns of the race. They’ve also blocked the roads not indicated in the route so as not to encourage the drivers to take shortcuts.” Sayaka said, handing Takamina a map for her to review.

“You need not to worry about memorizing the route; we’ve installed the map in the GPS inside the car just in case.” Sae added.

PARTICIPANTS, PLEASE GATHER AT THE STARTING POINT IN FIFTEEN MINUTES

“Arigato, I’ll do my best.” Takamina replied. As she neared the racing car that she’ll use, Haruna and Miichan approached her.

“Grandpa always reminds us not to drive when we are emotionally incapacitated. I know you’re sad and confused right now Takamina, but for now, try to shove those feelings aside. The team needs you right now.” Haruna said, squeezing Takamina’s shoulder.

“We’ll ask Sae-kun if we could wear the extra headsets that the team has to cheer you on during the race.” Miichan added as she tried to cheer Takamina up.

Takamina let out a loud sigh and smiled, “Thank you Haruna… Miichan… Yosh! I can do this.” She said pumping her fist, making her cousins smile as well.

*****

At the starting point, Takamina and the other drivers were already waiting inside their cars, anxious for the race to start. Sayaka knocked on Takamina’s window which she opened immediately.

“We’ll talk to you during the race using our headsets. Haruna and Miichan will be listening as well. The rest of us will head to the finish line and we’ll wait for you there. Do your best.” Sayaka said and patted Takamina’s helmet. Takamina gave her thumbs up in response.

A few meters away, Takamina saw the Flag Girls without Atsuko, cheering and jumping excitedly.

“GO AKB48 TEAM!” Yuko shouted wildly.

“Takamina! Ganbare!” Rena shouted and the rest continued cheering for their driver.

Takamina smiled at the sight and then furrowed her eyebrows. “It’s strange, for some reasons I know she’s not there… why does my chest hurt at that mere thought?”She exhaled loudly then waved her hand towards the direction of the Flag Girls as a sign of thanks for their support.

3…
2…
1…
GO!

The race cars immediately left the starting point when the light turned green. Takamina focused on keeping her speed up and at the same time looking at the map in the GPS every now and then. She frowned when she saw a black car trying to bump its way towards her.

“Sayaka-chan, isn’t it against the rules if a driver tries to collide his car to another’s to win this race? There’s one that is getting aggressive.” Takamina reported via headset.

“This is a city race Takamina. You are bound to encounter such drivers. There are no specific rules about bumping into other cars.” Sayaka replied. Just as Sayaka finished her explanation, the black unmarked racing car starting bumping Takamina’s car on the rear.

“Oof! The freak driving a black car is trying to bump the rear of my car!” Takamina said as she shifted gears to avoid further collision. The said black car steered to the side and sped up until it was side by side Takamina’s car.

“Black car…? I didn’t see any black cars at the starting point before the race started.” Sae said looking at Sayaka who just shrugged her shoulders. Haruna looked at Miichan, who was sporting a look saying that there’s something wrong. Both cousins ran into a secluded place then removed their headsets.

"Takamina’s in serious trouble, we have to help her.” Haruna said as she pulled out a device from her pocket. It is a small tapping device that will tap any headsets or communicators where they can hack in their own frequency so that they can use it without other people listening in. Haruna and Miichan looked at Sayaka and Sae’s direction and then Haruna pushed a button, sending high frequency noises to the headsets.

“Gah!!! What was that? Is this thing grounded or something?” Sayaka exclaimed as she immediately removed her headset, which Sae did at the same time.

“I’m not sure… I hope Takamina’s headset isn’t affected like ours or else she’ll lose concentration of the race.” Sae said worriedly, looking at her headset in hand, hearing noises from it still.

As soon as Haruna and Miichan saw the two remove their headsets, Haruna pushed some buttons to locate Takamina’s frequency then turned off the noise. Both cousins wore their headsets again. “Takamina, can you still hear us?” Miichan shouted thru the headset.

“OOOOWWW!!! Took you long enough to turn off that damned noise! I almost lost control of the wheel!” Takamina shouted back, still trying to avoid the black car that’s trying to force her at the side of the road.

Miichan pulled out a small palmtop device that is linked to the agency’s satellite. She then located Takamina’s car via a tracker that they installed inside the car. Once the satellite pinpointed Takamina, it sent live streaming video in the device, giving her and Haruna an aerial view on what’s happening.

“Gomen ne, Takamina. Midori-sensei gave this to us before our mission.” Haruna explained.

“Sheesh! I bet she didn’t test it before handing it to us. I’ll tell Yohko-sensei on her that she’s making equipments that are hazardous for our health!” Takamina complained. She then saw that she’s approaching a sharp curve ahead of her. “Let’s see if that jerk in the black car is truly a racer…” she added.

Haruna and Miichan watched closely at the palmtop device as Takamina’s car gained speed, leaving the black car chasing behind. As Takamina approached the bend, she immediately drifted and sped her way once the road became straight again. The black car on the other hand, wasn’t able to steer immediately, therefore crashed its’ side on an electric post on the side of the bend.

“Ha! Serves him right! Takamina, what’s your current position in the race?” Miichan asked.

“Because of that baka driver, I’m currently at the last place! Don’t worry, I’ll finish and win this for the team.” Takamina replied confidently as she gained speed, changed lanes and successfully cutting in front of one of the racers. “One at a time Takamina, you can do this.” She inwardly said as a mantra as she aims to overtake the next driver in front of her.

To be continued...

:mon trudge:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: immortal_K on July 25, 2011, 09:52:08 AM

That black car totally deserve it! should make the car go up in flames too

Hope Takamina wins the race :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: kahem on July 25, 2011, 10:10:35 AM

Takamina needs Acchan for cheering her ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: Sydney W on July 25, 2011, 12:36:09 PM

Takamina is surely not in a good mood now due to:-
1) Misunderstanding btw her & Acchan
2) Last position in the race

Quite piss off.. Keep us up with the next update.. :jphip:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: blughise on July 25, 2011, 01:55:22 PM

ahhhh stupid black car, trying to get a car crash with Takamina!!!! :angry:
Good thing, Takamina took care of him 8)
but she still need to fix one more problem.................Acchan!!!
TAKAMINA GANBARE!!!! and please win the race!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 25, 2011, 02:46:52 PM

Takamina must win the race and fix her problems with acchan
Good thing she got rid of the black car
Thanks for updating
Update Soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 26, 2011, 04:26:30 AM

immortal_K: thanks for the comment! Chapter update will be posted soon!
kahem: Yeah, I agree Takamina needs Acchan to cheer her on 8)
Sydney W: Lol, yes Takamina was pissed of because of those reasons! :P
blughise: everything will be clarified in the next chapter. stay tuned!
Ninjatigerdemon: Well, Takamina is determined to win that race... well she should win that race lol

Thank you everyone for supporting my story! :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: hott3stson3 on July 26, 2011, 04:37:37 AM

Oklansihgnkla!!!
:frustrated: :frustrated: :frustrated:

^ I hope you understood that :hehehe: :hehehe:

Man, you update really fast!!! But that's more of a reason to love you :hee: :hee:

Awww, Atsuko is jealous and sad~

It's okay Acchan!!!

Takamina!!! You Can beat their asses!!! Gamabre!!

Lol, update soon~ (which you probably will)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8b - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/25 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 26, 2011, 04:50:06 AM

hott3stson3: no... i didn't really understood that :dunno: :cool2:
hehe, I write my chapters ahead of time... and I daydream about the next scenes when I'm bored :dozing: then I either write it on paper or type it in my MS Word mobile.
Lol, if you could wait for an hour or so, you'll have the chance to read the next update :bingo:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 26, 2011, 08:31:16 AM

I can't believe this is my 50th post!!! :D Anyway, on with the new chapter!

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 8c - Romeo + Juliet

Back at the scene where the black car collided to a post…

Jun stepped out of the wrecked car and kicked one of the tires out of frustration. Hearing his mobile phone ring inside his pocket, he let out a sigh and answered the call. “It’s me boss… No… I wasn’t able to catch her; the driver was a drifter… Hai, I’ll wait for the others to clean this mess.” He then flipped shut his mobile phone and growled. “Those girls are a pain in the ass!”

*****

Takamina on the other hand, is doing her best to catch up on the remaining drivers in front of her. She has successfully sped fast thru her other opponents, making her way to second place.

“Good job Takamina! There’s only 15km left of the route before the finish line.” Haruna informed her, looking at the palmtop device.

“Copy that. I’m now just a few meters behind the car in front of me. You’d better untap the device now Haruna before Sayaka and Sae do something about it.” Takamina replied.

“Roger. We’ll head back.” Haruna said. Miichan helped her turn off the high frequency noise and removed the device. They both hid their gadgets in their pockets and walked back towards Sayaka and Sae.

“Where did the two of you go? Never mind that, are your headsets working fine?” Sae asked.

“I’m not sure… we took it off when it emitted a strange noise. Maybe you could check it again?” Miichan asked, sporting an innocent look.

Sayaka carefully placed the headset in place and was glad that it didn’t give out an ear-splitting noise. “Takamina, can you hear me?” she asked. Sae, Haruna and Miichan wore their headsets to listen as well.

“I can hear you loud and clear Chief.” Takamina replied. Everyone at the other end of the line sighed in relief.

“And your status?” Sae asked, looking at the finish line for any signs of race cars approaching.

“I’m just behind the leading team… only 5.5km away from the finish line.” Takamina reported.

5 kilometers…

Takamina changed lanes and stepped hard on the gas pedal. She inched closer until her car is almost beside her opponent’s.

4 kilometers…

Her opponent tried to outmaneuver her by trying to bump her car at the side. Takamina smoothly dodged her opponent’s attempt while eyeing another curve ahead of them.

3 kilometers…

Takamina braced the steering wheel, anticipating the bend. She suddenly turned her steering wheel once she approached the bend and drifted smoothly, emitting billowing clouds of smoke behind her. She again turned her steering wheel into position and sped straight up the race course.

2 kilometers…

Takamina looked at her rear view mirror and was glad to see that her opponent was a few meters behind her. “Now’s not the time to be overconfident. Better finish this race…” she thought.

1 kilometer…

Takamina shifted her gear and stepped hard on the gas pedal, her opponent doing the same. Both their cars sped their way towards the waving checkered flag…

WINNER! AKB48 TEAM!

The Flag Girls cheered as they heard the announcement. Haruna and Miichan ran towards Takamina’s car and hugged her as she got out of the vehicle.

*****

When all the excitement finally ended, the AKB48 team packed up their equipment and headed to the parking lot. Takamina stopped beside the Flag Girls’ bus, staring at the door. Mariko saw her and stepped out.

“Ano, Mariko-chan… is Acchan feeling well now?” Takamina shyly asked.

Mariko shook her head. “I’m not sure… she’s taking a nap when we got in. I think it’s best to just leave her be at this time.” She replied. Takamina nodded in understanding and walked away to her waiting cousins. Mariko stepped back in and the bus started its way out of the parking lot.

At the back of the bus, Atsuko peeked at the window. She stared at Takamina’s walking form and sighed.

*****

Meanwhile, as the Flag Girls headed back to the AKB48 headquarters, the girls chatted endlessly inside the bus.

“Takamina is so cool! Did you see how she took off her helmet? It’s like watching a movie in slow motion!” Chisato said.

“I hope she’s okay thought. I saw some scratch marks at the rear of the car. I think some driver got aggressive during the race.” Natsumi wondered. This made Atsuko look at her direction from where she was sitting. She slouched back when she saw Tomochin looking at her.

Mariko saw the interaction between the two. “Anyway, enough about the race. Tomochin, do you wanna share how you pulled Takamina out of her fangirls?” she asked. The other girls then began asking rapid questions to Tomochin.

“Oh you mean the kiss? It never really happened.” Tomochin shrugged, making Tomo-mi giggle.

“EH?!?!” the Flag Girls exclaimed.

“Care to elaborate?” Mariko asked, her “onee-sama mode” kicking in.

Tomochin flicked her hair.” Mou~~ it seems that everyone was not really listening at all… as I have said last week, Takamina and I were members of the our high school drama club. We just re-enacted a scene from Romeo and Juliet. It was all an act! We didn’t kiss in front of that crowd.” She explained.

“But… but… but… it was clear as daylight that we saw Takamina kiss you!” Yuko blurted out.

Tomochin giggled. “It was a trick that we learned from the drama club. Takamina cupped my cheek to make the fangirls think that we were kissing. We were just basically cheek to cheek. Here, I’ll show you.” Tomochin faced Tomo-mi who’s sitting beside her and then repeated how it’s done. Everyone elicited “oohs” and “aahs” in understanding.

“So that’s how it’s done. I thought all actors really kiss on stage. But it does make it look romantic thought.” Rena giggled.

“Did you know about her plan Tomo-mi?” Mayu asked.

“Not really… but I sort of had an idea. They way they interacted, it reminded me of one of the high school play videos that Tomochin made me watch. I also recognized Takamina from the videos as well. Oh! I actually have the Romeo and Juliet play installed in my iPad. Here, let me show you…” Tomo-mi said, pulling out her iPad from her bag. The girls then began huddling around her seat to take a close look. Tomochin on the other hand, stood up and made her way to the far end of the bus where Atsuko is still sulking.

“I know you were listening… And I know that what I did could’ve caused a lot of rumors in the industry…” Tomochin said as she sat beside Atsuko. Seeing that Atsuko seems more interested at the view outside the window, she tried another strategy.

“Do you like Takamina?” she bluntly asked. Atsuko looked at her in surprise, her cheeks flushed pink. Tomochin mentally patted herself seeing that her outward question had that effect on her.

“Were you in love with Takamina?” Atsuko retorted back, not answering her question.

Tomochin laughed, which made Atsuko look at her in confusion. “Of course I love her… as a friend. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan were like the sisters I never had.” She replied. “I’m in love with Tomo-mi, you know that Atsuko-chan. If things turned out differently, Takamina and I will still be the best of friends. I am happy that my best friends came back into my life.” She honestly said.

The revelation made Atsuko smile. Tomochin clasped her hands and said, “And you, Atsuko-chan are one of my friends. If you like Takamina, be honest with your feelings. Teasing is good in keeping Takamina on her toes, but don’t go overboard. You might end up seeing her really kiss another girl.” Tomochin advised.

Atsuko nodded in understanding, mentally shaking off the image of Takamina kissing another girl in her head.

“Well, now that I made everything clear, let’s watch the video of our play. You should see how Takamina looked like when she played Romeo that earned her the nickname “Takaboy” in the drama club.” Tomochin said , pulling Atsuko back to their teammates who were already engrossed in watching the video.

*****

It was almost 3am when the Flag Girls finally arrived at the headquarters. The girls groggily entered a lounge room beside the studio. As Mariko flicked the lights on, they were greeted by a sweet, powdery scent in the air.

“It smells nice in here…”Yuko said, sniffing the air. She then spotted a large stem of tiger lilies resting on a coffee table. “Acchan, looks like someone brought you a gift tonight.”

Atsuko picked up the flower then furrowed her eyebrows. “That’s strange, did someone came in the studio before us?” she asked.

“I don’t think so. Sae called me awhile ago informing me that the Pit Crew team will go out for a drink.” Yukirin said.

“Oooh… tiger lilies…” Mariko thought in understanding. “Acchan, there’s a note tucked in one of the leaves.” She pointed.

The girls gathered around Atsuko as she saw a small folded sheet of paper. Holding the flower with her other hand, she gently opened the note and read out loud the neat handwriting inside:

O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright!
It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night
Like a rich jewel in an Ethiope's ear;
Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear!
So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows,
As yonder lady o'er her fellows shows.
The measure done, I'll watch her place of stand,
And, touching hers, make blessed my rude hand.
Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.
- Act I, Scene 5

"I don't get most of what's written in there, but it sure sounds romantic, with the flowers and all." Yuko said, elbowing a now blushing Atsuko.

"I wonder where this verse came from..." Atsuko whispered. Tomochin went beside her then read the note as well. Her eyes widened in realization then giggled when Atsuko looked back at her for some answers.

"You know what Atsuko-chan, you should really read your books and try to lay off reading mangas every now and then. If you do that, you might know why that person gave you tiger lilies and that specific verse." Tomochin smiled cryptically and patted Atsuko's shoulder.

Atsuko looked at the flowers and took a sniff of the sweet smell. She then reread the note and smiled, feeling warm inside her heart.

To be continued...

That's the end of the entire Chapter 8 :hee: I will wait for your feedbacks! Thank you for your continuous support everyone! :kneelbow:

P.S. - if you want to know about the verse and about the flower, just let me know.... or you can just try to search for it on your own so that I can leave it as a mystery for everyone. :on cigar:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: Flean on July 26, 2011, 10:11:14 AM

yeay!!! they didn't kiss!!!! XD

I can't wait how Acchan and takamina relationship to evolve.. :w00t: :w00t:

update soon... :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: immortal_K on July 26, 2011, 10:18:05 AM

YAY Takamina won! and she didn`t kiss Tomochin! :inlove:

Hmm did takamina leave those tiger lilies there?

Don`t understand the meaning of the verse can you explain please?

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: Sydney W on July 26, 2011, 10:28:51 AM

The verse is part of Romeo & Juliet scene btw Takamina & Tomo used to act in their drama club back into their high school days..... XD
Nice. Waiting for the next chapter. Thank you. :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 26, 2011, 10:42:38 AM

Flean: I can't wait either lol, we'll see in the upcoming chapters :)
immortal_K: hehehe... You'll find out sooner or later :hee:
Sydney W: you're correct! that's why Tomochin recognized the verse. Those are Romeo's lines... he uttered those words because he was struck by Juliet's beauty... basically love at first sight :glasses:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: khryz0421 on July 26, 2011, 11:44:51 AM

fast update.. :twothumbs

my fav movie! romeo and juliet! :twothumbs
why tiger lilies? :?
i want to know the meaning of that verse too. :)

update soon.. nice story :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: anoni2 on July 26, 2011, 11:55:01 AM

SHE WON!!! :mon fyeah:

oh about the verse is from Romeo and Juliet,when he first saw Juliet. ah I think it was like that lol

tiger lilies :mon inluv:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 26, 2011, 02:21:26 PM

Takamina won and she didn't kiss tomochin :cathappy:
Can't wait for next chapter Update Soon !!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: blughise on July 26, 2011, 03:26:35 PM

such a cliff hanging ending!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE, MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! :inlove:
I didn't know Takaboy can be romantic?! :wub: :inlove:
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: kahem on July 26, 2011, 03:39:29 PM

So sweat the lilies!!!
And Tomochin is a genius ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: TakahashiJ on July 26, 2011, 04:50:14 PM

Way to go TAKAMINA :P. HAHA That caught Acchan heart!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on July 26, 2011, 06:01:24 PM

I've been there. When you read too many Mai-Hime/Otome fics, you started to hear "ara" in you head continuously :lol:
It's okay if you don't elaborate, I was just curious about how MariMii became close.

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lol, you're the first person to tell me that my mushyness is equals to awesomeness :P

Really? Because I think it is.
I was hoping she would stomp towards TakaTomo and claimed Takamina as hers seeing that she's the one approaching Takamina and teased her, but Acchan backed out instead...that must've shocked her.
Ooo nice gadget there from Midori
Kakkoi Takamina! 8)
Before 8 c I'm about to ask you whether the kiss was real or not, got the answer already.

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“And you, Atsuko-chan are one of my friends. If you like Takamina, be honest with your feelings. Teasing is good in keeping Takamina on her toes, but don’t go overboard. You might end up seeing her really kiss another girl.”

This. Tomochin you awesome girl you :twothumbs
I'm too lazy to search on my own, so do tell me about the verse :P

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: arisa03 on July 26, 2011, 07:51:47 PM

Romeo is making moves on ~~his~~ her Juliet eh? >=D I can't wait for your update! Hoping to see more develop on AtsuMina and the rest of the couples as well! ;D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: JPopLover on July 26, 2011, 08:47:58 PM

:shy2: awww I bet it was Takamina who left those tiger lilies x3 Tiger lilies represent pride and wealth and the scene from Romeo and Juliet is the part where Romeo falls in love with Juliet at first sight ^^ I love how this story is progressing! :D Hope you update soon ^-^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 8c - ROMEO + JULIET] 7/26 update
Post by: AFLynx on July 27, 2011, 08:07:55 AM

khryz0421: why tiger lilies... well, it's one of my favorite flowers :P hehe, I'll let everyone know soon. Regarding that verse, that was Romeo said in the play when he first saw Juliet... he was saying that Juliet taught the torches to burn bright because of her beauty, then compared her to other things as well. At that time, he knew that he fell in love at first sight 8) well, that's my interpretation anyway lol. I hope that helped.
anoni: yup, I further interpreted the verse there ^ :P i love lilies because of its scent :nya:
Ninjatigerdemon: hehe, that means Takamina and Tomochin are great actresses if most of the readers here thought that they kissed :P
blughise: :on asmo: Takaboy has a few surprises up her sleeves I guess :nervous
kahem: Hehe, I like Tomochin as a member of AKB48... and I find her cute as well so I gave her a large role in my story :luvluv2:
TakahashiJ: hehe, I guess Takamina has her ways :P
pretend_2besome1: I think MariMii doesn't need a reason as to why or how they became close... it shows that they like each other since the beginning. :P but then again, I want to write more on how their relationship will evolve and I will do it with HarunaxYuko and TakaminaxAcchan as well.
I know that 99% of the time, Acchan will definitely stomp her way to Takamina and Tomochin to stop the kissing scene, so I decided to make it different somehow to make it more interesting :hee:
Like I've said, I like Tomochin as well and I think it suits her to say that to Acchan :P
arisa03: Hi Arisa! :mon hi: of course you will see some development in the 3 pairs' relationships! please stay tuned!
JPopLover: Hi JPopLover! Yes, those are the meaning of tiger lilies, but I chose those flowers because of another meaning it has :glasses: well, the meaning of the lilies that inspired me to add it to the story came from a movie... I'll share it to everyone in one of the chapters soon!

this is the first time I replied to more than 5 feedbacks! :farofflook: I wonder if I get more feedbacks if I delay my updates for about a day or two :dunno: hehe, just kidding! speaking of updates, please be patient with me because I'm still finalizing my draft for chapter 9 and at the same time, I want to make a draft of the other chapters as well. I owe it all to you that it seems that a lot of ideas are flowing inside my head that I need to write it down before I forget it. :on chew:

Thank you minna for your support! :luvluv2:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)
Post by: AFLynx on July 28, 2011, 05:37:36 AM

As requested by some members... Hope you'll enjoy reading this chapter! :hee:

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)

Haruna is bored…

Since everyone had been working together in keeping things in order and in tiptop shape in the garage, the tasks for today have been accomplished early. Haruna strolled around the headquarters and ended up inside the studio. As she entered, most of the Flag Girls are packing their stuff, ready to leave.

“Konnichiwa, minna! Are you leaving early for the day?” Haruna asked Tomochin.

“Hi Haruna! Yup, we just finished practicing some choreography and it ended earlier than expected. We’re going to hang out at a nearby café, want to join us?” Tomochin replied.

“Hmmm… I don’t want Takamina and Miichan to get left behind so, maybe some other time.” Haruna said as she looked around. “Ne, is Yuko gonna join you?” she asked.

“Yuko onee-chan is still in the rehearsal room cleaning up. She said she’ll catch up with us once she’s done.” Atsuko said.

“I didn’t know this studio has a rehearsal room… Anyway, I’ll look for it and check if she needs help. Thanks!” Haruna said and waved goodbye to the Flag Girls.

*****

As Haruna saw a sign leading to the rehearsal room, she saw that the door is open and music can be heard inside.

“That sounds like… waltz?” Haruna thought then entered the room. Just like any rehearsal rooms, one side of the wall were mounted with full-length mirrors and speakers mounted on each side of the room. On the opposite end is where the audio equipment was placed and that is where she saw Yuko looking at some stacks of CDs. Yuko noticed her when she looked at the mirror then turned around to greet her.

"NyanNyan! What a pleasant surprise! Come in! This is the first time you entered the rehearsal room, isn't it?" Yuko exclaimed, motioning for Haruna to enter.

"Sugoi! Yes, this is the first time I went inside this room. Anyway, why are you listening to waltz music?" Haruna asked, looking around as she made her way into the middle of the room.

Yuko smiled and shrugged, placing the stacks of CDs in a shelf. “I just saw a CD that has a waltz track in it. NyanNyan, do you know how to dance?” she asked as she walked halfway across the room, stopping in front of Haruna.

*****

Across the rehearsal room, Yukirin locked the door of the makeup room and noticed that the rehearsal room was still open. As she neared the entrance, she noticed Haruna and Yuko looking at each other.

“Ooohh… what’s this? Another staring contest? This I gotta see…” Yukirin thought and stood just by the doorframe of the rehearsal room.

*****

“Well… I’m not really a good dancer. Among the three of us, Miichan is good at dancing.” Haruna said, scratching at the back of your head.

“Really? Since we’re here, I could teach you.” Yuko said then with her left hand, she grabbed Haruna’s right hand then placed Haruna’s left hand on her waist. Yuko then finally placed her right hand on Haruna’s shoulder. “I’ll first take the lead to guide you then it’ll be your turn to lead, since you’re taller.” She grinned.

Haruna awkwardly followed Yuko as they danced slowly. Being conscious with every step, she almost tripped at Yuko’s feet, but side stepped to avoid tripping both of them further.

“NyanNyan, don’t look at your feet! You should look at me to avoid missteps. And besides, it’s rude not to look at your partner when you’re dancing with her.” Yuko teased.

“Ah! Gomen!” Haruna gulped, her cheeks turning pink.

“Hehe, okay let’s start over again. It’s just a three meter dance so it’s quite easy.” Yuko said. After waiting for the appropriate timing in the music, Yuko started to guide Haruna again. “One, two, three… one, two, three… that’s it NyanNyan! Just to the step-sidestep naturally.” Yuko giggled, looking at Haruna.

Haruna giggled, looking at Yuko. “I can’t believe I’m actually dancing!” she said, giving Yuko a full smile as they glide to the dance floor.

Yuko smiled back. “Now it’s your turn to lead.” She said. Haruna nodded and continued their dance. She became confident with her steps and eventually made use of the entire space of the dance floor as they glided and twirled inside the room.

Yukirin smiled as the two danced. “Yuko really is a good dancer and a good instructor. I thought she’s gonna ruin the moment by doing something she usually does when she sees Haruna-chan.” She thought.

After a few minutes, the music finally faded and stopped. Haruna was able to lead Yuko smoothly and stopped right back on the middle of the dance floor.

Haruna smiled at Yuko, still looking at her. “Well, the waltz finally ended. Thank you for teaching me how to waltz. How can I repay you Yuko-sensei? You can ask anything you want.”

“Anything?” Yuko said, raising an eyebrow.

Seeing Yuko’s look, Haruna began to consider if she should take back what she said. “Eto… just as long as it’s within means.” She said, suddenly becoming nervous.

Yuko then placed both of her hands on Haruna’s shoulder. “NyanNyan…” she whispered.

“Ha-Hai?” Haruna stammered.

“Gimme a Chuuuu~~…” Yuko playfully said, closing her eyes and puckering her lips, waiting for Haruna’s reaction as she closed in on Haruna.

Haruna’s eyebrow twitched. “Mou, Yuko!” she complained, and then pushed her index finger at Yuko’s forehead making Yuko step back, then walked out of the room.

“Itai... NyanNyaaaaan~~! You said I could ask you anything I want! I want my Chu~~~!” Yuko said playfully following her out of the door. Both girls did not mind Yukirin who stepped aside as they walked out.

Yukirin blinked… facepalmed and then sighed. “I spoke too soon… Yuko still knows how to ruin the moment.” She thought, seeing the two bickering and laughing as they exited the studio.

“Well, I must say it’s kinda entertaining. Haruna – 1 point… Yuko – KO’d by Haruna with just one use of a finger.” Yukirin giggled and turned off the lights of the rehearsal room and finally locked the door.

To be continued...

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 28, 2011, 05:51:18 AM

Thanks for updating another staring contest :cathappy:
Yukirin just loves staring contest :)
The dancing scene was very sweet and beautiful
Yuko ruining the moment is very normal
I hope you could do another staring contest again one day :D
Can't wait for next chapter XD
UPDATE SOON

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: JPopLover on July 28, 2011, 06:01:37 AM

:on lol: haha xD Yuko sure knows how to ruin a moment x3 lol Thanks ^^ I just recently started using jphip :) I made this account several weeks ago but barely started to use it -.- Your story is really good ^-^ Good luck drafting the next few chapters and hope you update soon :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: Flean on July 28, 2011, 06:31:42 AM

yeay!!! another staring contest!!! XD nice one.. waltz... i like it... :twothumbs

Quote from: AFLynx on July 28, 2011, 05:37:36 AM

“You said I could ask you anything I want! I want my Chu~~~!”

Yuko so cute!!!! :on lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: immortal_K on July 28, 2011, 09:04:05 AM

YAY!! another staring contest!!! now still need a atsumina to complete the collection! KEKE

Seems like the cousins are in the lead. 2 - 0 XD

LOL at Yukirin for being there, I guess she is the score keeper :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: blughise on July 28, 2011, 01:31:49 PM

That was kinda short.....I was kinda expecting something more from the KojiYuu pair.....anyways I'll looked forward for the next staring contest...PLease update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: kahem on July 28, 2011, 08:50:35 PM

Hahahah Yuko is still Yuko

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: AFLynx on July 29, 2011, 04:15:57 AM

Ninjatigerdemon: thanks for the comment. I think Yuko was just being playful in the end :nervous I
JPopLover: wow really? I'm honored that my story got your attention. Thank you for the feedback and I'll try to update soon.
immortal_K: Lol, I think Yukirin is just lucky that she's almost always there whenever a staring contest happens :P
blughise: I must admit that it is disappointingly short... I dwelled to much at how it would end. I'm still at the phase where I see their pairing as being playful... but eventually, I'll try to make it more romantic for them. Thanks!
kahem: True! (enough said lol)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: arisa03 on July 29, 2011, 07:27:33 AM

Hello AFLynx! =D *waves*

Yuko - K'O'd by Finger, Haruna - 1pt. LOL xD

That was a nice update! Thank you! I can't wait for more. xDDDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 9 - Let's Dance (Staring Contest part II)]
Post by: anoni2 on July 29, 2011, 11:11:22 AM

nyahaha nice update i laughed at yuko :rofl:

lmao it's good to be reader only and comment comment ^_^

freedom from updates!

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: AFLynx on July 29, 2011, 02:43:11 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 10 – Fallin’ (Staring Contest finale)

For the past few days, Atsuko has been receiving lilies in several ways. The first time she received it, the flowers were placed on top of a coffee table in the lounge room of the studio. One time, she saw Casa Blanca lilies inside her personal cubby in the dressing room. This has piqued Atsuko’s curiosity to the point of frustration.

Today, Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko are running late. Knowing that they won’t make it in time for their photoshoot, Mariko asked their father if his driver can drive them to the studio. As they entered the gates of the headquarters, one of the security guards ran to the passenger side of the car and tapped at the window.

“Ohayo gozaimasu, Mariko-sama. I was asked to give this to a certain Atsuko hime-sama.” He winked after he handed the flower to Mariko when she opened the window. He then tipped his hat then walked away.

“Ah! Chotto matte…” Atsuko said, but was too late when the guard went back to the security post.

Mariko smirked as she closed the window. “Hai. These are for you… Atsuko hime-sama.” She teased in a singsong voice as she handed the flowers to Atsuko.

“He~~ your suitor has been very creative lately! And to top it all off, that person has been giving you different kinds of lilies. I wish NyanNyan could give me something special too… she owes me a kiss by the way.” Yuko pouted.

Atsuko giggled at her sister’s expense. “Mou~~ I’d rather prefer that person give these flowers to me personally…” she whispered, tracing her fingers to the lilies’ petals as the car drove towards the studio.

*****

At the garage, Yukirin happily munched an apple while sitting at one of the work tables. She noticed Atsuko a few meters in front of her, idly tweaking the flowers in her hand while looking at Takamina. As Yukirin saw her girlfriend whistling pass in front of her, she yanked her by the collar and pulled her beside the table that she’s sitting on.

“Whoa! Hey babe, miss me much?” Sae playfully asked.

“Not really now that you mentioned it, you goof… Look.” Yukirin teased and then pointed out at Takamina and Atsuko. “Wanna make a bet?” Yukirin asked.

“Sure!” Sae replied, staring at the pair in front of them.

“I bet 5000Yen that if they do a staring contest, Takamina will win.” Yukirin said, taking a bit of her apple.

Sae looked at her like she’s grown two heads. “That’s a lousy bet! Takamina is shy and we all know that Atsuko is such a tease. My money’s on Atsuko-chan.” Sae said confidently and then both of them looked on to the pair.

*****

“Whew! Glad that it’s finally done. It’s really hot today!” Takamina sighed as she finished checking the carburetor under one of the hoods of the racing car. Slamming down the hood, she felt that someone is watching her. As she turned around, she saw Atsuko looking at her direction.

What’s Acchan looking at? Takamina thought as she removed the rubber band that is securing her now messy pony tail and then tied her hair again at the same fashion while looking at Atsuko.

I wonder what Takamina will look like if she’ll let her hair down… Atsuko thought while still looking at Takamina.

Takamina looked around her and realized that she’s the only one that’s in Atsuko’s line of vision.

Gah! I feel sticky in my worksuit! If I am the only one around here… Is she looking at me? Takamina stared back at Atsuko curiously.

Remembering that her worksuit is wet, Takamina zipped it open until her waist then removed the sleeves of her suit. She then tied the sleeves into a knot in front of her waist, revealing the sleeveless white razorback shirt that she’s wearing. Takamina kept her look on Atsuko still trying to decipher what Atsuko’s thinking about.

Ma~~ her white shirt looks good on her. Atsuko thought, eyeing Takamina appreciatively.

This is getting creepy… Takamina thought as she wiped her arms with a towel that she grabbed from her back pocket. I wonder what she’s thinking right now…

Atsuko pouted as they stared at one another. Takamina… you are so clueless! Let’s see if this will get your attention… She devilishly thought.

Takamina furrowed her eyebrows. Why am I suddenly getting nervous?

Seeing Takamina getting flustered from where she was standing, Atsuko decided to make a move. Atsuko lifted an eyebrow suggestively towards Takamina then batted her eyelashes. She smiled a gentle smile then slowly let her tongue peek out a then soflty bit her lip.

Takamina’s eyes widened at Atsuko’s display. Slack jawed, she unconsciously dropped her towel. Takamina tried to grab the towel but because of her being flustered, she accidentally kicked a toolbox lying just beside her, scattering some of the tools inside the box.

Haha! Gotcha Takamina! Atsuko giggled and winked at Takamina.

At the other end of the garage, Sae placed her open palm in front of Yukirin. Yukirin made a sour face and placed the money on Sae’s hand.

“Hehe, easiest money I’ve ever made.” Sae teased.

Takamina – 0 Atsuko – 1

*****

Lunch finally arrived. Everyone is at the pantry area, enjoying their meals and the company of each other. Takamina just finished her usual lunch – katsudon. She moved to a table at the far corner of the pantry with a big notebook in hand, and a couple of pencils and an eraser sprawled on the table.

Atsuko is chatting with the Flag Girls at their usual table and noticed Takamina. Sipping her juice box, she squinted as she saw Takamina quite busy doing something on her notebook.

What are you doing Takamina? Atsuko thought. She excused herself from their table and made her move towards Takamina.

*****

Yukirin, again, noticed Atsuko walking towards Takamina. She gently nudged Sae who was currently eating her bento and looked at where Yukirin is pointing at.

“Let’s make a bet again shall we? This time, let’s double the money. I bet Takamina that she’ll win this time PLUS she will make Atsuko-chan blush.” Yukirin said.

“Wow, you’re willing to throw your money that easily Yukirin. Alright, I’m still with Atsuko and she’ll make Takamina blush first.” Sae said. Both of them, again, looked at the pair.

*****

Atsuko stood in front of the table where Takamina is seated.

“Ta-Ka-Mi-Na!” She said in a singsong voice.

Takamina looked up in surprise then immediately closed the big notebook. She currently looked like a deer in the headlights, clutching the notebook to her chest.

Atsuko gave her an amused look. “What are you doing?” She asked, as she sat on a chair across the table.

“N-Nothing…” Takamina stammered.

“I bet you’re hiding something there… can I take a peek?” Atsuko asked, looking at her while batting her eyelashes.

Takamina for the nth time that day, furrowed her eyebrows. This girl is up to something… Well, I’m not falling for that trick anymore. “I’m sorry but I don’t want anyone looking at it.” Takamina answered, giving Atsuko a serious look.

Atsuko pouted, “Mou, Takamina! I just wanna take a peek, please?” Atsuko said, giving Takamina her sweetest smile.

“Nope. Sorry.” Takamina smirked still looking at Atsuko.

Atsuko narrowed her eyes then stood up then rounded at the corner of the table, thinking of grabbing the notebook from Takamina. “Well, if you’re not gonna let me see it, then I’ll taAAAAHHH!” Atsuko yelled as she slipped on spilled juice on the floor. Everyone in the pantry gasped.

Any second now, I’ll feel a pain in my butt… Atsuko thought with her eyes closed, already imagining the intense pain that she’ll feel any second now… any second…

.....

....

...

..

.

Wait… wha…? Atsuko thought. Instead of feeling pain, she felt an arm behind her shoulder and on her waist, like someone stopped her fall. She finally opened her eyes slowly and was staring back at Takamina with a concerned look on her face.

“They look like they’re dancing the Tango. Is that what you call a dip?” Rena asked, making everyone around her sweatdrop.

Atsuko unconsciously placed her hands on Takamina’s shoulder. She… has the most expressive brown eyes I’ve ever seen… She thought.

Takamina stared back at her, waiting for her to say something. Acchan, are you okay? Say something…

After a few seconds, Takamina finally broke their silence. “Acchan, are you okay? Are you hurt?” she whispered.

Atsuko snapped out of her reverie then looked at their current position, “Ah! G-Gomen, Takamina. I just slipped… You can help me up now.” Atsuko whispered, her face turning red into a full blown blush.

“It’s good… that you’re okay.” Takamina gently smiled at her then helped her get up. Atsuko suddenly became shy, unable to hide her blush.

“Ano… I’ll just go back to our table…” Atsuko said shyly and Takamina nodded in reply. The Flag Girls immediately flocked at her, checking if she is alright. Takamina gathered her things and silently went out of the pantry.

“It’s a good thing Takamina was fast enough to catch you when you fell.” Yuko said, checking Atsuko if she’s hurt.

“Actually, I think I am still falling…” Atsuko whispered, not minding the curious looks of the other girls. And I am glad that she’s actually the one who is ready to catch me.

*****

Meanwhile…

Sae gawked at what she saw happened between Takamina and Atsuko. Yukirin giggled at her expression and motioned Sae to hand over the money.

“Well, now I’ve seen the day that someone made Atsuko blush and stammer like that. Alright babe, you won.” Sae surrendered and gave Yukirin 10,000Yen.

“I love staring contests!” Yukirin said, counting her money.

Takamina – 1 Atsuko – 1

To be continued...

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: Flean on July 29, 2011, 02:54:30 PM

One of the best staring contest ever... :twothumbs :twothumbs

Argh!!! cant wait for the next update!!!! :panic: :panic: :panic:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: blughise on July 29, 2011, 02:58:27 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :luvluv1:
SO EXCITING!!!!!!!

LOL AT Yukirin and Sae :rofl:

Now its time to settle the score!!! :hee:

Who's gonna win, I wonder :P

And will the 'secret admirer' finally show herself

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 29, 2011, 03:06:37 PM

I LOVE THIS STARING CONTEST :inlove:
Thanks for updating
update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: arisa03 on July 29, 2011, 04:03:21 PM

Hell yeah~ Staring Contest WIN! xD Yes Acchan! FALL, FALL~ Takamina will always be prepared to catch you as you fall. ;D please update soon! xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: immortal_K on July 29, 2011, 05:50:36 PM

HAHAHA, Love this staring contest! It`s a tie but still seems like Takamina got the better prize :on lol:

I wonder what Takamina was drawing.

Wow Yukirin just happens to be at every staring contest and this time she made bets with Sae too haha

THanks! Please update soon :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: kahem on July 29, 2011, 10:28:45 PM

Ok I was wrong Acchan can't win at all the times lol
Rofl Sae and Yuki made bet

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: JPopLover on July 30, 2011, 12:51:13 AM

haha Yukirin and Sae made bets xD awww Takamina saved Acchan, hope they get together soon ^^ mhm your story really caught me :) I enjoy reading it so much I find myself checking daily for updates :3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: YumePouk on July 30, 2011, 12:59:12 AM

I should bet with the SaeYuki coupla as well :wahaha:
:wriggly: :nya: Takamina "the knight" saved Atsuko "Hime-sama" from falling
but I wonder what was Takamina was doing with her notebook??? :gmon blonde:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: AFLynx on July 30, 2011, 02:40:59 PM

Flean: draft for the next chapter is currently being written. :) thanks for the comment!
blughise: well... I'm not sure if Takamina and Acchan will settle the score... I hope to find the inspiration/idea on how they will settle it. :hee:
Ninjatigerdemon: thanks for the comment! please wait for the update!
arisa03: hi arisa! that'll be my icon for you for now on --> :mon hi: hehe, I guess no matter how many times Acchan falls, Takamina is there to catch her :luvluv2:
immortal_K: I have to agree that Takamina got the biggest price :on asmo: hehe, I did it on purpose that Yukirin is the constant witness to all staring contests... she does react quite nicely in person i think lol.
kahem: Takamina proved us wrong lol I wrote about the bet because Yukirin said about making a bet with Sae... her exact words were: I wish Sae is here, we could make a bet on this. - I just made a follow up about that :P
JPopLover: I'm glad you enjoy reading my story! :luvluv2: as much as I would like to update on a daily basis, I don't have that much luxury because I laptop broke and my new laptop from my dad hasn't arrived yet :imdead: I'll try to update as quickly as I can. Thanks for your support!
YumePouk: Hi Yume! thank you for reading my fic! Takamina was being a "TakaKnight" in this chapter I guess lol. You'll all soon find out about what's the fuss about Takamina's notebook. :glasses:

TO EVERYONE: :kneelbow: thank you so much for reading my fic! I hope you don't mind if this story is a bit long (please tell me if I might be overdoing it already :mon hanky:) but honestly, I don't want this story to end... yet (since this is my first fanfiction ever!) and don't worry it won't end soon. So, to end this post I would like to ask the following questions:

1. How can I do that index thingy so that everyone can just click on the links of the chapters instead of browsing thru all the pages :dunno:
and...
2. Would you like to settle the score between Takamina and Acchan?

Please let me know! Thanks again everyone! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: D_Sphere on July 31, 2011, 04:55:40 AM

I was hoping that you wouldnt end it so soon :mon ref:

Please Dun End it so soon :mon whimper:..ur Fic's awesome!

Love The Actions..Love the Racing..and most of all the interactions between the Pairings! :heart: :deco:

Ganbaro :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on July 31, 2011, 05:12:50 AM

Don't end the story it's getting more interesting
This is your story and you get to do whatever you want
I love how you write about each pairings in their own way
You write about action love and racing all together that it is so awesome
Oh I don't know how to do the first thing
But about the Atsumina part I would like them to finally be together but I also don't
I just want to see more teasing then they get together XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: YumePouk on August 01, 2011, 10:14:58 AM

Yeah good to know that you will not end soon ^^
and to answer your questions :

1 : Go to edit your 1st post of the thread
When you are there
Clik on the icone to insert a link
From the left 2nd line & 2nd icone
(earth with a paper page when you clic on it = (http://)
in the space you put the link of the chapter)
You do that for each chapter you want to link in the index

2 : Hmm for me I think you shoul not settle the score for the AtsuMina couple yet
Let continue the teasing a little bit...but if you think that they need to stop the teasing and staring
Then you should settle the score between those 2 :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: AFLynx on August 02, 2011, 07:11:37 AM

D_Sphere: I'm not gonna end the fic soon... I am actually thinking of ways on how I can add more chapters :nervous Thank you for reading my fic! :kneelbow:

Ninjatigerdemon: Thanks for the tip! I am really glad that you all like reading my fic... it gives me the inspiration to write the next chapters in this story. I actually enjoy writing about Atsuko and Takamina's teasing that I haven't made a draft on how they will get together :grr: I'll eventually get there lol

YumePouk: Thanks YumePouk! I'll keep that in mind... for now, I'm still having fun with their teasin :P

To everyone: I'm currently finishing the latest chapter... I'll post the update in a couple of minutes. Thank you for being patient! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: immortal_K on August 02, 2011, 07:33:51 AM

Nice Index :twothumbs

YAY update sooon, *lurks* :on lol:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...
Post by: AFLynx on August 02, 2011, 08:25:41 AM

@immortal_K: you can quit your lurking now :on lol:

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 11 – There Goes Our Saturday

Saturday is Takamina, Haruna and Miichan’s favorite day of the week. It means no practice races, no grease stains, no stress… and most of all, they could just stay in their apartment and do nothing but eat, play videos and sleep the day away. Too bad, this Saturday is an exception…

TTTRRRRIIIIINNNGG!!!

Takamina groaned, blindingly stretched an arm under the covers trying to grab the handset of their telephone.

“Moshi moshi…?” Takamina mumbled, sleep still evident in her voice.

“TAKAMINA! GOOD MORNING!” greeted the caller.

Takamina slowly got up and squinted at their alarm clock. “Midori-sensei? Why the hell are you calling us on a Saturday? It’s only 5 in the freakin’ morning! The sun isn’t up yet!” she complained, her voice waking Haruna and Miichan.

“Mou~~ can’t I call my three favorite agents? Yohko said you all promised to visit me here in the agency…” Midori pouted.

Takamina placed back the handset on its console and placed Midori on speaker phone. “What do you want at this time of the day, Midori-sensei?” Miichan yawned.

“Ah! About that, I want you to go to the agency today. The lab results from the sample that you gave me are already in and I’ve already checked the data inside the tablet.” Midori answered.

“Alright, alright… we’ll go there today. Can we at least wait for the sun to come up first?” Haruna asked,

“Of course you can! Make sure you bring me a present as well. Ja ne!” Midori said cheerfully then hanged up.

The three cousins looked at their telephone in disbelief. “She’s awfully cheerfull on waking us up early. I hope she realizes she just ruined our Saturday.” Takamina mumbled, Haruna and Miichan nodded in agreement.

*****

At the TSOA Research Facility…

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan entered the sliding metal doors of the research facility. The said facility has been their favorite wing of the building since they were kids. Inside the research facility, a group of scientists are busy conducting experiments at the left side of the department. To the right is where a team of engineers are testing different kinds of gadgets and artilleries that their latest technology can offer. The middle part of the facility is slightly elevated which acted as Midori’s desk where she can supervise all the activities inside the research facility. As the cousins climbed the “captain’s deck”, which Midori fondly calls it, they saw Midori typing away and looking at the large glass screen in front of her.

“Here’s your present as requested. It’s a good thing the wine depot near our place opens real early.” Haruna said, placing a large bottle of Kubota Hekijyu sake beside Midori’s keyboard.

“It’s good to see the three of you again! And it’s even better that you remember my favorite brand!” Midori exclaimed, hugging the bottle to her chest.

The three cousins sweatdropped. “Uh… you’re welcome…? Anyway, what did you find out Midori-sensei?” Takamina asked. Midori went back to typing then various panels appeared on the screen.

“Just by looking at the samples that you’ve collected, it does look like meth or cocaine. One of our analysts made a test and confirmed that it’s crack cocaine.” Midori said pointing at one of the panels showing the lab results.

“And the data inside the tablet?” Miichan asked.

“Well, I personally checked the files and found out that the warehouse that you infiltrated was owned by a certain Yamamoto Industries Inc., one of the largest shipping companies here in Japan.” Midori said. Using her fingers, she touched the glass screen to arrange a panel then double tapped the panel into full screen mode. “It seems that it’s not their only business. The data contains their suppliers and customers around the world and some of the recent accounting records that they have. It shows in the data that you’re dealing with drug dealers and at the same time, smugglers. They are smuggling high caliber firearms and I find it amusing that they smuggle car and motorcycle parts as well.” She added.

The cousins stared at the panel in front of them. “Wait… the brands listed in car parts are the types used for making race cars.” Takamina said.

“Yamamoto you say… I don’t think I have heard that company since we started in AKB48.” Haruna wondered.

Midori began typing again, opening another panel revealing a company profile on the screen. “You are right Takamina, that those car parts are used primarily for race cars. I took the liberty and searched if there is a certain Yamamoto company who is involved in the racing industry. Lo and behold, the company itself owns a race team under its name and recently purchased 2 other teams in a span of 3 years.” She said.

Takamina frowned at this new information. “So that means… they’ve also been buying out teams so that they can freely sell drugs and firearms during a racing event. I’m thinking that they may be responsible for the ‘accidents’ that have been happening in some racing events to prevent the other teams from winning.” She concluded, remembering the black car that chased after her in one of their races.
“There may be a possibility in that Takamina. I’ve been researching that their team is a strong contender in the industry. They don’t take losing lightly.” Midori said.

“Our team has been winning lately. It’ll only take a matter of time before we become a blip on their radar. I think for now, we have to make sure that they don’t try to buy the team.” Haruna said and her two cousins nodded in agreement.

“Well, now that I’ve given you all the information that I’ve collected so far, it’s my turn to give you your presents.” Midori concluded and lead the cousins to the armory section of the facility.

*****

Upon entering the armory section, Midori flicked on the lights then pushed some buttons on a control panel mounted near the door frame. The white, blank walls automatically revolved revealing different kinds of artillery known to man and some weapons that the agency uniquely designed. Midori clicked some more buttons prompting some tables to rise up from some portions of the floor revealing different kinds of gadgets.

“Sugoi…” Miichan whispered.

“Hoho! I’m glad you appreciate it! You three look like kids in a candy store. The Chief gave me a go signal to take as much equipment and weapons that you like. I don’t recommend taking the big guns though. You’ll all find a hard time to conceal it and besides they are quite heavy.” Midori said giving them a big black bag.

The cousins scurried off checking the weapons and gadgets available. After a few minutes of getting the items that they might need, they zipped the bag close with a satisfied look on their faces.

“I felt like I’ve been on a shopping spree! Thanks Midori-sensei!” Takamina said.

“You’re always welcome. Before you leave, I’ll show you my pet project that I’ve been working on for quite some time now.” Midori said motioning them to follow her at the farthest side of the room. Midori touched the white wall transforming it into a two-way mirror. At the other side parked a blue/silver BMW ActiveHybrid 7.

“Whoa! That’s a cool ride you have Midori-sensei!” Haruna exclaimed.

“I’ve made impressive modifications in that car and it is at its final stage of testing. If all our modifications will be completed any day, I’ll let you know so that I can personally hand you the keys to that car.” Midori said proudly.

The cousins widened their eyes in surprise, still looking at the car. “Thank you Midori-sensei!” they bowed.

“Hehe~~ anything for my favorite budding agents! Anyway, you girls should get going. I’ve already kept you long enough and it’s time for you to enjoy what’s left of your Saturday. As always, I’ve enjoyed your company.” Midori smiled, receiving hugs from the three.

*****

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan sped thru the Tokyo Metropolitan Expressway using their Lancer Evo X. Miichan being the driver, glanced at the rear view mirror and frowned. Three unmarked sedans have been following them a couple of minutes since they left the agency.

“I hate to tell you this, but I think we are being followed.” Miichan said, slowly stepping on the gas pedal.

Takamina who’s sitting at the passenger side of the car glanced at the right side mirror. “You’re right. They also sped up when you stepped on the gas.” She confirmed.

Haruna who is sitting at the back seat looked behind her. Her eyes widened in shock when some of the men in the cars pulled their guns out and aimed at them. “Crap this is not good! Miichan, drive!” Haruna exclaimed then ducked in the nick of time when the men began showering their car with bullets.

Miichan stepped hard on the gas pedal then began distracting their chasers by swerving on the lanes. The cars chasing after them tried hard to chase after them and continued shooting at their car.

Takamina looked out of the window then pulled out her newly acquired Mac-10 then aimed at the chasers. She fired a few rounds to distract them and caused the drivers to swivel trying to dodge from side to evade Takamina’s shots.

Haruna pushed half of her body out of the left window then aimed her Glock 17, injuring some of the armed men. She ducked back inside the car and rummaged at the black bag containing some of their new artillery. She let out a squeal when she found was she’s looking for.

“Haruna, what are you rummaging for inside the bag?” Miichan asked, trying hard to navigate on the road and at the same time dodge the gunshots.

“Tire caltrops. These will help us get out of this mess.” Haruna said. She gave a handful to Takamina then both of them scattered the caltrops on either sides of the car towards their chasers.

The unmarked cars swiveled as each of their tires popped like balloons. The magwheels produced sparks as their cars maneuvered aimlessly on the road. The three cars collided with each other, rendering the drivers and passengers unconscious in the middle of the wreck.

The three cousins stepped out of their car and looked at the wreck. “I’ll call the agency regarding this. I think we also need a new car as well.” Miichan said, looking at their bullet-ridden car.

*****

The TSOA agents finally arrived a few minutes after the cousins made a call. The chasers were apprehended and those who were injured will be taken care of in the agency’s own infirmary. As the three cousins oversee the activity in front of them, a BMW car stopped beside them.

“Yo!” Midori greeted as she lowered down a window.

“Midori-sensei! What are you doing here?” Takamina asked.

“Well, I’ve heard from our grapevine that you’re involved in this wreck. I assumed that you might need a new ride.” Midori said as she got out of the car. “The tests are complete and you can now take this car. Remember to always to take it to the carwash every now and then.” She added, throwing the keys at Haruna , who caught it in mid-air with ease.

“Thank you sensei!” the three exclaimed. Their excitement turned into curiosity when they heard someone’s phone ringing. Haruna pulled out her phone, noticing that she received a text message.

"Eh?! How did she get my number?" Haruna exclaimed, and let Takamina and Miichan read the message:

NyanNyaaan~~ <3

I miss you!
We’re currently at Berry Parlour right now. ( *｀ω´)
See you in a couple of mins!

Yuko <3

Haruna blushed earning giggles from Takamina and Haruna. “Well, we might as well use the new car going to the café. Midori-sensei, thanks again for the new ride!” Takamina said and the three of them got in the car.

*****

Saturday is Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko's favorite day of the week. It means no photoshoot, no flashing cameras, no stress... And most of all, they could just hang out with fellow Flag Girls members and do nothing but stroll around the city, shopping, and chat endlessly over coffee.

Now it's been a week since Atsuko began receiving flowers in different fashion in the studio. Since the AKB headquarters are closed during the weekends, she assumed that she won't be receiving anything today. The mere thought somehow made her feel sad. However, this Saturday seemed to be an exception...

Inside the Berry Parlour, the Flag Girls chatted comfortably as they check the menu and place their orders. Yuko giggled then flipped shut her mobile phone and asked one of the waitresses to add three more chairs to their table.

"You look like a cat who ate the canary Yuko... What's up?" Tomo-mi asked.

"I texted NyanNyan that we're here at the Berry Parlour. She replied that she'll be here in a couple of minutes. Takamina and Miichan is with her by the way." Yuko said, giving a knowing glance to Mariko and Atsuko.

"Eh? How did you get her phone number? Did she give it to you?" Mariko asked.

"Nope. I snooped in her personal file when I visited you in your office." Yuko answered making everyone laugh.

Suddenly, a waitress stopped on their table, as if looking for someone in their group.

“Excuse me, is there someone named Atsuko-san in this group?” the waitress asked.

“Hai… that’s me…” Atsuko said raising her hand. The waitress smiled then gave her a long stem of lilies that she’s been hiding behind her back.

“Someone asked me to give this to you Atsuko-san. Your orders will be ready in a couple of minutes. Please enjoy your stay.” The waitress bowed then went back to the kitchen.

The Flag Girls stared at the flower then suddenly swooned and gave an ecstatic squeal, snapping Atsuko out of her reverie.

“Hehe… looks like your suitor has ways to find you Acchan.” Yuko teased.

Before Atsuko could answer, she and the team suddenly heard the door chimes tinkle, signaling new customers. Haruna and Miichan opened each of the doors then Takamina entered in between them. They looked around and smiled as they saw the Flag Girls inside the café. The Flag Girls waved at their direction as the three cousins made their way to the table. Miichan immediately sat beside Mariko while Yuko yanked Haruna to an empty seat beside her. Takamina automatically seated beside Atsuko and noticed that she is quietly holding a flower.

“Acchan, is there something wrong?” Takamina asked, checking the menu.

Atsuko glanced sideways and gave Takamina a gentle smile. “I’ve been wondering who is responsible for these lilies that I’ve been receiving… do you have any idea who might that be, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na?” she asked sweetly… too sweetly, Takamina thought.

“I really don’t have an idea Acchan.” Takamina replied, looking at Haruna and Miichan who were giving her devious looks.

“Aren’t you jealous Takamina? Someone is making a move on Atsuko-chan.” Tomochin teased.

Takamina let out a small laugh. “Nope, I’m not jealous of that person. Actually, I’m more jealous of the flower.” She replied, earning her curious looks from Atsuko and the rest of the group.

“Jealous… over a flower?” Mariko asked.

“Well, yeah! You see, I don’t see the person who gave the flower to Acchan. I’m jealous of the flower because it’s the one being held in Acchan’s hand.” Takamina reasoned, making Atsuko blush.

“Ooooh… how very manly of you.” Mayu teased.

“O-Oi…”Takamina said, scratching the back of her head, making everyone laugh.

*****

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan enjoyed their afternoon with the Flag Girls as they chat and ate tasty desserts in the café. When they noticed that it’s almost sunset, everyone decided that it’s time to go home. The three cousins excused themselves from the table, telling the Flag Girls that they are going to check their car parked outside.

Mariko waved to one of the waitresses and asked for the bill. “Ano, excuse me, can we have the check please?” she asked, while the girls rummaged inside their bags to give their share of the bill.

“Oh, sorry miss, but your bill’s been paid by your three companions that went out.” The waitress pointed out.

“Eh?!” The Flag Girls exclaimed.

“That’s so typical of them. They like to surprise people since we were kids. Anyway, let’s meet them outside and just thank them.” Tomochin said off-handedly and rose from her chair.

“Wow, she really knows their personality…”Mariko mumbled, then everyone went out of the café. By the time they all got out of the entrance, they were startled when a BMW stopped in front of them.

Takamina, who is now the driver, stepped out of the car. “We were wondering if we could drive the sisters home tonight…”she said, looking at Atsuko, Mariko and Yuko, making them blush. The rest of the Flag Girls squealed then said their thanks and waved their goodbyes to the three pair.

Haruna and Miichan stepped out of the car as well, then guided Mariko and Yuko inside. Takamina walked to the passenger side of the car, opened the door and then looked at Atsuko as she got in the car.

“Well, it seems that you’ll be seating next to me, Atsuko hime-sama.” Takamina grinned. Atsuko was about to say something when Takamina closed the door and jogged her way to the driver’s side. Atsuko looked at her when Takamina got inside the car and adjusted her seatbelt. Takamina just grinned at her, then looked at her cousins who were being snuggled by Mariko and Yuko.

“It looks like our Saturday ended on a good note, right Haruna… Miichan?” Takamina said then smiled at Atsuko as she started the engine. Atsuko smiled in response then placed her hand on Takamina’s right hand that is clutching the gear.

“I guess so… yeah it did.”Haruna wheezed as she was hugged tighter by Yuko.

“Of course it did! Come on, Takamina, let’s take these princesses home.” Miichan said placing her arm over Mariko’s shoulder as Takamina sped off the road.

To be continued…

I wrote this chapter last Saturday... hence, the title of the chapter. Enjoy! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - Fallin' (Staring Contest finale)]
Post by: immortal_K on August 02, 2011, 08:50:23 AM

*comes out from lurking*

YAY!!!!! =O they got the new car, I wonder what alterations was done on that :lol:

LOL Midori and her sake :twothumbs

Hmmm, I still believe Takamina is the one behind the lilies :wahaha:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: anoni2 on August 02, 2011, 10:02:52 AM

Midori still the same XD

they are so gentleman :lol:

Takacchan :shy2:

nice waiting for the next update and tyt-su :mon thumb:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: AFLynx on August 02, 2011, 10:08:12 AM

immortal_K: thanks for reading! hehe, honestly, i havent thought of the alterations for that car... :mon sweat: I saw that model in their website and it was an awesome car! Takamina sure got a lot of connections if she's the one behind the lilies :glasses:

anoni2: i think Midori will always be the same... even her age is still the same until now lol. hehe, I hope I wrote the Takacchan scenes well... Thanks for the comment! will try to update as soon as I can! :cool1:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: blughise on August 02, 2011, 02:05:04 PM

That was pretty good!!!
there are some actions and ro~ma~nce :grin:
hey what happened to the staring contest?
anyways update soon XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on August 02, 2011, 02:48:10 PM

They got a new car!!
Takamina gettin jealous over the flower part was funny
Can't wait for next chapte update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 10 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: AFLynx on August 02, 2011, 03:02:57 PM

blughise: are you talking about settling the score in the staring contest? well, i haven't thought of a good scene about that :depressed: or i'll just leave it as a tie for Takamina and Atsuko. :dunno: I think I'll just ask everyone regarding that. :bingo:

Ninjatigerdemon: hehe, I'm glad you thought that it's funny... I thought I was cheesy when I wrote that part. :barf:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: blughise on August 02, 2011, 03:47:40 PM

Yes.....if you want to settle it...............and also the secret admirer..........but it's all up to you.............I'll just patiently wait

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: JPopLover on August 02, 2011, 08:45:57 PM

:hee: I just loved the scene where Takamina, Miichan, and Haruna where being all gentlemenly(womenly?) :nya: Hope you update soon ^^ seriously loving this story :3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: arisa03 on August 03, 2011, 04:02:29 AM

I realized I did not comment for Chapter 10. What is this?! o A o. Anyway I'm here~~~ What are these gentlewomen? xDDD They are so womanly. LOL. xD I can't wait for more! ; v ; b Update soon! :3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: AFLynx on August 03, 2011, 01:07:36 PM

blughise: I'll probably set aside that staring contest... I have a lot of chapter ideas that I don't know which one I'll post first :dizzy: Thanks for being patient!

JPopLover: hehe, they are being gentlewomanly perhaps? :mon sweat: I'll try to update as soon as I can!

arisa03: :mon hi: yeah, I kinda missed your comment lol, but it's okay. I'm more happy that you were able to read the updates. :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 11 - There Goes Our Saturday...] update
Post by: arisa03 on August 03, 2011, 03:36:33 PM

I'm sorry. OTZ. I usually read updates on my iPod. xD But my account isn't logged in so I can't comment or thank. xDDD Yes I am so happy to have read the updates. You better update soon! XDD!

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 06, 2011, 01:12:29 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 12a - Whole Day Affair

Breakfast - Haruna x Yuko

Today, Haruna woke up really early for her taste. She tried to get a few more minutes of sleep to no avail. Rising from her bed, she decided to go to the garage early. After doing her usual morning rituals, she got dressed and wrote a note to her cousins that she already left. With her helmet in hand, she stared at one of their spare helmets just as she was about to go out the door.

"Hmmm... I think I'll bring that spare helmet with me. Who knows who I'll bump into at this time of the day." she said to herself and grabbed the spare helmet before heading out the door.

*****

Yuko woke up early today. As she looked out at the balcony of the bedroom that she shared with her sisters, she thought that it's a good day for a walk. After getting dressed, she told one of their housekeepers to tell her sisters that she already left.

"I guess I'll take the train going to the headquarters. But I have this feeling that I'll meet someone that I know this morning..." Yuko thought, humming to herself as she stopped at a sidewalk.

Suddenly, a motorist stopped in front of her. She furrowed her eyebrows thinking why the motorist is blocking her from crossing the street.

The motorist took off her helmet. "Ohayo Yuko." Haruna greeted.

Yuko’s eyes lit up. “Ohayo NyanNyan! You’re early today! Are you on your way to the headquarters?” She asked.

“Yup… Ano… I’m actually hungry right now… wanna grab some breakfast with me?” Haruna asked offering Yuko the spare helmet she brought.

Yuko squealed at the thought. “Of course NyanNyan! I was thinking of having my breakfast in the studio, but since you offered, I’d love to have breakfast with you.” Yuko said putting on the helmet and carefully climbed behind Haruna on the motorcycle.

Haruna checked if Yuko is already comfortably seated behind her. “Our helmets have built-in headsets just like the ones that we use during the race… so we can talk without shouting our heads off.” Haruna informed Yuko.

“Sugoi~~ I get the chance to talk to my NyanNyan during the trip!” Yuko said as she heard Haruna in her helmet. She hugged Haruna’s waist as they sped up the road.

“Uh… hold on tight, okay?” Haruna said.

Yuko smiled and pulled Haruna into a tight hug. “I could do this all day you know, NyanNyan.” She said, making Haruna blush.

*****

After a few minutes, they agreed to have breakfast at the Good Morning Café. They chose to sit at the sprawling back garden area of the café. Yuko and Haruna then called a waiter for their order and was served immediately much to their delight.

“NyanNyan, say ah~~…” Yuko said, offering a spoonful from her mixed fruit and yogurt bowl.

“It’s okay Yuko, I have my own…” Haruna stammered, pointing at her yogurt.

“Well, yours only have yogurt. I want you to taste this. Now... say Ah~~…” Yuko insisted.

“O-Okay… Ah~~…” Haruna said as she took a bite of the offered salad. “Mmm! It does taste good!” Haruna smiled.

“See, I told you!” Yuko smiled, as she sliced her French toast.

Haruna and Yuko were able to polish their plates because of the delicious meal. While lounging at the garden area sipping their coffee, Yuko thought of something.

“NyanNyan, how about we play a game?” Yuko said.

Haruna almost choked on her cup when she heard Yuko. “Gah! G-Game? Here in the café?” she asked.

“Hai. I call this the “One Word Game”. It’s fairly simple. I’ll give one word to you then tell me anything that first comes into mind after hearing that word. We’ll take turns giving a word and telling something about it.” Yuko said.

Haruna placed her cup back to the table. “Alright, give me a word then.” Haruna asked.

"Music." Yuko said.

"Ummm... Violin." Haruna simply answered.

"You have to tell me why you remembered violin silly." Yuko giggled.

"Oh!" Haruna giggled along with her. "I played the violin since I was six years old. Takamina and Miichan played other instruments as well. Our grandma insisted we learn a musical instrument... She was once an opera singer in her days." Haruna said.

"Sugoi... I would love to hear NyanNyan play the violin sometime. Your grandmother seems like an amazing woman." Yuko said.

Haruna smiled. "I'll introduce you to her someday. She'll be happy to know that I know someone who's a great singer. I heard you sing during one of your shoots and you have an amazing voice." she said as she ordered for another cup of coffee, not noticing Yuko's blush.

"A-anyway, it's your turn to give me a word." Yuko said.

"Hmmm... How about... balloon?” Haruna shrugged her shoulders.

Yuko frowned. “I hate it.” She said.

“There must be a story behind that.” Haruna said curiously.

“When I was six, our parents took us to a festival and bought us balloons. Mariko onee-chan was being naughty back then that she poked our balloons with a pin. The sound of the popping balloon surprised me so much that it made me cry. Ever since that day, I don’t want to get near a balloon ever again, thinking it might just pop beside my ear. I guess I was traumatized.” Yuko said.

“I see… I’ll keep that in mind. Your turn.” Haruna said.

“Bedroom…” Yuko said, giving Haruna a playful look.

“What’s with the question?” Haruna blushed.

“Oh~~ are you thinking something naughty NyanNyan?” Yuko wiggled her eyebrows.

Haruna sweatdropped. “You’re the one who’s thinking naughty Yuko…. Anyway, I must admit, the first thing that I thought is how messy my bedroom is back at home. It looks like a store room of some sort. I am a lazy person and I tend to just keep the things in my room and forget that I have to throw some of them away.” Haruna explained.

“Hahaha! I wonder what NyanNyan’s bedroom looks like. Okay, now it’s your turn.” Yuko said.

“Plant.” Haruna provided.

“Becky.” Yuko said.

"Who's Becky?" Haruna raised her eyebrow.

Yuko gasped in mock surprise. "Why Haruna, don't tell me that you're jealous." she said, batting her eyelashes.

"What?! N-No, I'm not jealous! I'm... Ah... Just curious who Becky is." Haruna coughed.

"Well, Becky is my pet mint plant!" Yuko smiled.

"This is the first time that I heard someone that has a pet mint plant. Why mint if I may ask?" Haruna said.

"I just love the fresh fragnance that it produces. I saw in a book that it may also produce cute flowers. Becky is just a small plant as of now. I can't wait for it to grow flowers someday." Yuko said.

"I never thought that you're a plant lover. I think it's kinda cute." Haruna smiled then checked her phone and replied to a text message she just received.

Yuko looked at Haruna. "Okay, it's my turn to ask... What do you think about the word 'love'?" she asked.

Haruna looked at her then made a thinking pose. "I never thought about it in the past actually. There were a few who have professed their 'undying love' for me back in high school but turned them down, thinking that I'm still young for that and soon it'll just pass in time." Haruna said. Yuko looked at her cup in her hands with a slightly disappointed look on her face. "But... Now that I'm older, I think I'm willing to give love a chance." Haruna added, making Yuko smile.

"Yokatta..." Yuko whispered then glanced at her watch. "Oh no! It's already 9 o' clock! We're gonna be late!" Yuko exclaimed, calling one of the waiters then paid their share of the bill.

As the two rode the motorcycle, Haruna paused as she turned the key to the ignition.

"By the way Yuko, how did you get my phone number?" Haruna asked thru the headset as she manouvered the motorcycle out of the parking lot.

"It's for me to know and for you to find out." Yuko answered playfully, rubbing her hands at Haruna's tummy.

"Oi! Your hands are wandering Yuko. Hold still." Haruna mumbled. She intertwined her left hand on Yuko's hand as she drove. Yuko smiled in contentment then leaned her head on Haruna's back as they sped their way to the headquarters.

*****

Once they were at the entrance of the studio, Takamina waved at them carrying something in her hand. Once they stepped out of the motorcycle, Haruna rushed towards Takamina then took what she was carrying then Takamina went back to the garage. Haruna smiled at Yuko then walked to her direction.

"I had fun today Yuko... Here, this is a thank you gift." Haruna shyly said handing her gift to Yuko.

Yuko smiled at Haruna's thoughtfulness. "A mint plant?" she asked, eyeing the small potted plant wrapped in soft red paper to make it look like a bouquet.

"Well yeah... I don't know your favorite flower and since you said you like mint, it's better than giving you a random flower. I also noticed that your favorite color is red hence the wrapping paper." Haruna smiled.

Yuko looked at Haruna unsure of what to say. She simply inched her way in front of Haruna then gave her a kiss on the lips.

"Thank you for the breakfast and for the gift. This is the best date ever!" Yuko exclaimed, hugging Haruna's arm dragging her towards the studio.

"This is not a date you know!" Haruna pouted, still blushing from the kiss.

"Well according to my book, it is considered as a date. I can't wait for our next date NyanNyan!" Yuko giggled as they entered the studio.

To be continued...

:kneelbow: I'm sorry for the late update... Work has been on the way with my writing... I hope that I'll receive my new laptop from my dad soon so that I can just write at home :prayers:

the One Word Game is something that my friend and I came up when we were in a coffee shop. It kept the conversation ball rolling until it's already closing time. :hee: I just thought to give it a shot with Haruna and Yuko. Hope everyone enjoy this chapter! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: Flean on August 06, 2011, 01:18:25 PM

Yeay!!! an update!!!! :cow:

KojiYuu moment are just~~~ :wriggly:

Update soon~~~ :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: blughise on August 06, 2011, 01:24:02 PM

that's pretty normal...........for once Yuko didn't do anything perverted....will she did try but she didn't persist...........
Really nice Kojiyuu moment.................
I want Marimii and Atsumina moment next please XD
update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: immortal_K on August 06, 2011, 01:26:07 PM

Thanks for the update,

The one word game sounds interesting, maybe I can try that sometimes when I'm bored sitting around :twothumbs

Love the Kojiyuu moments, I guess that text Haruna sent off was to get Takamina to get her the mint plant for Yuko

:nya:

Please update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 06, 2011, 01:43:17 PM

After posting the update... I just restarted the computer that I'm using and I was like :shock: Flean, blughise, immortal_K... sure are fast readers lol

@Flean: I'll try to update as soon as I can... I'll try to sneak it at work on Monday hehehehe :on crazygran: for now, I'm gonna use my phone which is kinda hard :stunned:

blughise: hehe, I just thought that it's nice to write about Yuko not being a pervert for a change lol... Marimii and Atsumina moments are a sure bet for the next update... though I'm still undecided who will I write about first :dunno:

immortal_K: it is kinda interesting... my friend and I didn't have a bored moment :cool2: it's also a nice way to get a friend better
You're right about that! :mon thumb: I didn't elaborate about it and I'm happy that it is that obvious on how I wrote about it.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: immortal_K on August 06, 2011, 01:52:37 PM

AFLynx: LOL normally I read on my phone and don't comment till later, but I just happen to be on break at work so I found a computer to sit at :twothumbs. I was imagining the whole scene in my head while I read your update :wriggly:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 06, 2011, 02:08:18 PM

immortal_K: hehe, no wonder you replied quickly. I also imagine the scenes when I read fanfics :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: arisa03 on August 06, 2011, 03:26:48 PM

That was so cute! <3 Yuko as perverted as ever. XDDD I can't wait for the other dates. <3 Oh Haruna you tsundere. xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on August 06, 2011, 07:46:19 PM

Thanks for updating
The Kojiyuu moments were cute
Can't wait for next chapter update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: JPopLover on August 07, 2011, 02:14:12 AM

:shy2: aww the Kojiyuu moment was so kawaiii!! ^^ I hope you write moments for Atsumina and MariMii too :3 Thanks for updating! :D Hope the next update comes soon! ^-^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 07, 2011, 12:58:58 PM

arisa03: :mon hi: thanks for the comment! Hehe, I too think Haruna is a tsundere lol.

Ninjatigerdemon: I'll try to update as soon as I can. I really can't wait for my laptop to arrive! :tantrum:

JPopLover: I'm already thinking for the Atsumina and Marimii moments too... I'm actually having a hard time writing about the two because I'm scared that I might not write a good chapter like the previous one... :on freeze: but I'll try my best :mon determined:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on August 07, 2011, 06:16:48 PM

Sorry for the late comment, been busy and tired this week
So MariMii is pretty much "like at first sight"? :grin:
It's actually interesting that you made Acchan retreated
lol Yukirin is like a spy or something, witnessing the couples staring contest. But wow KojiYuu dancing...and a waltz too :O

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“Gimme a Chuuuu~~…”

As expected of Yuko XD
Atsuko hime-sama...princess Atsuko, eh? Nice
Whenever I read a fic that said Acchan batted her eyelashes, I wanted to laugh cause it reminds me of what she did on the Mariko's Danso
hahaha Acchan is still falling, good job Takamina!
I do like that the score between AtsuMina is a tie
With the car, this feels like James Bond now :P

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“Well, yeah! You see, I don’t see the person who gave the flower to Acchan. I’m jealous of the flower because it’s the one being held in Acchan’s hand.”

:rofl: Takamina is cool and all but imagining her saying this totally cracks me up

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"Hmmm... I think I'll bring that spare helmet with me. Who knows who I'll bump into at this time of the day."

Pssh, excuses. You know you want to ride with a certain squirrel XD
KojiYuu: a date and a kiss, check! Can't wait for the others, especially MariMii :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12a - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 6 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 08, 2011, 02:41:25 AM

pretend_2besome1: hi! long time no... er, comment lol.
yes, Marimii is like at first sight in my story. :grin:

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It's actually interesting that you made Acchan retreated

are you talking about the chapter in Romeo + Juliet? If so, I really intended that Acchan would back away because I want to portray that her teasing backfired on her
hehe, I just thought that Yukirin would be a good witness to all staring constest for consistency... :nervous

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Whenever I read a fic that said Acchan batted her eyelashes, I wanted to laugh cause it reminds me of what she did on the Mariko's Danso

lol, that's where I got it from! Acchan sure can bat her eyelashes whenever she wants to lol

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Takamina is cool and all but imagining her saying this totally cracks me up

lol, blame it all on me... that's my mushyness who made Takamina say it
I am currently working on the next chapter.... hope I'll finish it soon. Thanks for your comment! :luvluv2:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 19, 2011, 11:07:01 PM

Waaaaaaaaaaah! Sorry for the very late update! :OMG: :dizzy: :imdead: Writer's block visited me these past few days and work has been on the way as always (or is it the other way around... lol kidding!) Anyway, hope you'll enjoy this veeeeeery long update! (well, for me it is long :nervous :P )

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 12b - Whole Day Affair

Lunch - Takamina x Atsuko

10:00am… Same day.

Takamina is whistling while tinkering under one of the race cars. Today is a nice day, she thought. Her whistling stopped when someone suddenly yanked her out of the car.

“Ahhh! Haruna! Why did you yank me out of the car for?” Takamina yelled in surprise, blinking at the bright lights from staying under the car for quite some time.

“Gomen ne. It’s not my idea to yank you from what you’re doing. It’s this squirrel girl’s idea… she has a favor to ask you.” Haruna said, pointing at Yuko who is clinging at her back.

“Mou, that’s not nice NyanNyan!” Yuko pouted, still clinging behind Haruna. “Anyway Takamina, about my favor… I promised Acchan yesterday that I’ll fetch her after she meet up with her friends… I completely forgot about it because I was preoccupied this morning.” Yuko leered at Haruna, making her blush.

Takamina sweatdropped. “Ano… and your favor?” she asked.

“I called at our house and it seems that our family driver is unavailable… and I have a scheduled shoot in thirty minutes. Can you please fetch her in my stead?” Yuko asked, batting her eyelashes.

Takamina’s eyebrow twitched. “Batting your eyelashes wouldn’t work at me. It’ll only work at her.” She said, pointing at Haruna.

“Oi.” Haruna said making Yuko pout.

“So… are you gonna fetch her for me? It’s your chance to spend time with her you know.” Yuko winked.

Sighing, Takamina gave Yuko a shy smile. “Wakatta… I’ll do it because it’s for Acchan, not you.” She teased. She then picked up her tools and made her way to their locker room to change.

Yuko beamed. “Arigato! Take care of my sister!” Yuko waved at Takamina’s retreating form, then went back to snuggling Haruna’s back.

*****

Outside a shopping mall, Atsuko is leisurely chatting with her friends, checking the window displays of each store.

"Ne Atsuko-chan, I heard from Yuko-sempai that you've been receiving flowers from a secret admirer... Is it true?" One of her friends asked.

Yuko onee-chan sure knows how to run the gossip mill. "Ah yeah, she's right Yumi-chan. It seemed that everyone already has an idea who the person is except me." Atsuko answered. Though I wish she's the one behind all those gifts...

"He~~ is it someone from the Flag Girls? From the Pit Crew? Yumi-chan and I watched one of the races your team participated in and I would say that one of your drivers is cute Atsuko-chan." another friend piped in.

Atsuko stopped in her tracks as she turned to face her friends. "We have three drivers. Which one are you talking about Miyuki-chan?" Atsuko asked. Oftentimes, Atsuko and her sisters invite their friends to watch races the AKB48 team participates in to gain more supporters for the team.

"Ah, I think Miyuki-chan is talking about the driver from your last race. I think her name is Takahashi -san, am I right Atsuko-chan?" Yumi asked.

Just as I thought. "Hai, her name is Takahashi Minami." Atsuko answered.

"Yes, that's her. Did you see how she crossed the finish line? She's so cool when she removed her helmet!" Miyuki babbled.

Atsuko rubbed her temples with one hand. How could I forget? I wasn't exactly there to cheer her on. "Gomen ne Miyuki-chan. I can't seem to remember that." Atsuko said as an excuse.

"Too bad... She was such a dream that time. Ne Atsuko-chan... Can you introduce me to her? Is she dating someone or is she still single?" Miyuki continued with her babbling.

Great. One of my friends has a crush on her. "Ma... I'll ask her about tha-" Atsuko wasn't able to finish her sentence when a man bumped into her then made a run for it after grabbing her bag. "What the... MY BAG! STOP, THIEF!" she yelled as she and her friends tried to chase after the man.

*****

Takamina exited at the parking lot then made her way to where Yuko was supposed to meet Atsuko and her friends.

"Yuko said she'll meet them in front of the Power Mac store. Geez, why is it that the parking lot far from the mall?" she asked no one. A sudden shriek a couple of meters away from her stopped her musing.

"...MY BAG! STOP, THIEF!"

Takamina frowned then saw the supposed thief running towards her direction. "Che... I hate thieves, especially on broad daylight. Criminals are getting bolder these days." she thought. Takamina continued to walk calmly until the robber was within her reach. She hooked her arm on the robber's arm, effortlessly lifted the man using his momentum, and then slammed his body on the street. “You know, it’s not nice to take things from others.” Takamina said to the fallen man.

“Mind your own business bitch!” the man yelled as he quickly stood up, aiming a punch towards Takamina’s face. She effectively defended herself by executing an upward block and quickly retaliated by punching the man on his jaw. Takamina side-stepped, enclosed her left fist with her other hand then quickly turning, she elbowed the thief just below his chest, making him crumble and fall back on the pavement. She stomped her foot on the man’s chest, keeping him firmly lying on the street. “Man, you gotta need to learn some manners.” She said as she saw the security guards running towards her direction. Onlookers within the area applauded for apprehending the thief.

After talking to the guards, the thief was escorted to a nearby police station. Takamina picked up the stolen bag and saw three girls running towards her.

“Ano, thank you for… Ara, Takamina?” Atsuko said with a surprised look on her face.

Takamina gave her a shy smile as she handed Atsuko her bag. “Good morning Acchan, I believe this bag is yours?” she asked, scratching the back of her head.

Just as Atsuko was about to say something, Yumi and Miyuki hovered at Takamina. “Wow that was so cool! We saw everything that you did to that man!” Yumi exclaimed.

“Oh… My… God… it’s Takahashi-san! I finally got the chance to meet you! You’re way cooler and cuter in person!” Miyuki gushed, grabbing Takamina’s hand.

Takamina sweatdropped and looked at Atsuko. “Uh… thanks?” she mumbled.

Atsuko sighed, prying Miyuki’s hands off of Takamina’s. “Takamina, I’d like you to meet my friends – Yumi Hirasama and Miyuki Akiyama.” She introduced, gently wrapping her hands on Takamina’s arm.

“Y-Yoroshku…” Takamina greeted, tilting her head at the two.

Atsuko’s friends continued their gushing until they were interrupted by Atsuko. “Anyway, don’t you have “somewhere” else to go Yumi-chan… Miyuki-chan?” Atsuko raised an eyebrow then side-glanced at Takamina.

Yumi finally realizing what she’s talking about, glanced at her watch then grabbed Miyuki by the arm. “ You’re right Atsuko-chan! We’re supposed to meet someone for lunch, isn’t that right Miyuki-chan?” Yumi said nudging Miyuki for her to get the idea.

“He~~ where are we going?” Miyuki asked dumbfounded, still staring at Takamina.

Get a clue Miyuki-chan! Yumi thought. “Let’s just leave these two alone Miyuki-chan. Takamina, it’s nice meeting you! Hope to see you in your next race! Miyuki-chan, let’s go!” Yumi bowed and dragged Miyuki with her.

“Ah… Ja…” Takamina waved a hand at the two arguing as they left, she then looked at Atsuko. “You have… very interesting friends Acchan…” she said, making Atsuko giggle.

*****

Takamina and Atsuko continued walking along the stores outside the mall, only stopping whenever Atsuko sees something that catches her eye.

“Takamina, thank you for catching that thief, and for getting back my bag.” Atsuko whispered as she looked at a bracelet in one of the stores they’re in.

“You’re always welcome. I’m glad I’m there when that happened. Hey, is that a charm bracelet?” Takamina asked, pointing at the object in Atsuko’s hand.

“I guess so… it is kinda cute…” Atsuko replied, checking the little trinkets attached to the bracelet.

“Do you like it? Erm… to buy I mean?” Takamina further asked. Smooth, Takamina. That’s really an awkward question to ask.

Atsuko checked the price tag and then returned the item to the sales lady. “Like I said, it is cute, but not in my budget. Anyway Ta-Ka-Mi-Na… I think I haven’t thanked you properly yet.” Atsuko said in a low tone then slowly walked towards Takamina.

Takamina gulped, backing away from Atsuko’s advances. So this is what a deer feels like when it is cornered by a… hunter... perhaps? “A-Acchan… y-you already said thank you a couple of minutes earlier. You heard her say that, right Miss?” Takamina asked the sales lady who just merely shrugged her shoulders and giggled at them.

Atsuko giggled as well at Takamina’s flustered state. I might as well stop with the teasing or else Takamina might run out of the store without me. Atsuko grabbed Takamina’s hand and guided them both out of the store. “Since you don’t want me to say thank you any more, I’ll just treat you to lunch. I know a place where you'll enjoy the food.” She smiled dragging along Takamina.

*****

Takamina and Atsuko went to the Maisen restaurant that is near Omotesando station which is a couple of minutes away from the shopping mall. The said restaurant was a former public bath house which was renovated into a high-celinged restaurant with Japanese rooms, bars and western-styled rooms to accommodate the customers.

Takamina eyed the interior of the restaurant as they look at the menu. “Wow, this place looks great.” Takamina said to Atsuko who called for a waiter.

“I’ve been meaning to eat here since I saw great reviews in some food blogs, but I don’t know whom to invite since everyone seems busy. Since you seemed to be at the right place and the right time, consider yourself lucky to be dining with me here.” Atsuko teased.

“Gee, thanks…” Takamina said making Atsuko giggle.

“Speaking of convenience, I’m wondering why you were outside the shopping mall at that time? I was supposed to meet Yuko onee-chan.” Atsuko wondered.

Before Takamina could answer, the waiter arrived at their table. Atsuko ordered for the pork cutlet set meal and Nodate set meal while Takamina ordered for the pork fillet cutlet over rice. “Actually, Yuko-chan asked me to fetch you because she forgot that she has a photoshoot. I’m glad I agreed to meet up with you.” Takamina said as the waiter bustled at their table placing their drinks. Takamina looked at Atsuko then thought of something. “Say, do you have any idea how Mariko-chan and Yuko-chan got Haruna and Miichan’s numbers?” Takamina added.

Atsuko giggled remembering how Yuko got Haruna’s number. “Well, since Mariko onee-chan is the General Manager of the team, it is natural that she has all your information in your files at her office. Yuko onee-chan on the other hand, filched it from Haruna-chan’s file.” Atsuko said. Somehow I envy my sisters just because of that.

Seeing her somehow disappointed face, Takamina gave Atsuko a lopsided grin and held her hand out to Atsuko. “Give me your phone.”

“What?” Atsuko asked, giving Takamina a confused look.

Kawaii… Takamina giggled. “Just give me your phone Acchan.” She said. Atsuko reluctantly placed her iPhone in Takamina’s hand. Takamina tapped on the phone’s screen for a couple of seconds then gave back the phone to Atsuko.

“What did you do to my phone? Did you add some kind of tracking device to it?” Atsuko stared at her phone then raised an eyebrow towards Takamina.

Well, it is something that I might do because of my work. Takamina admittedly thought. “That’s silly Acchan. I added my contact details in your address book.” Takamina smiled then the waiter came back with their orders. Atsuko stared at her phone then opened her address book, a smile forming on her lips as she saw Takamina’s name with her contact details. She experimentally called the number and giggled when she heard Takamina’s ring tone.

~~♪♫ Aitakatta, Aitakatta, Aitakattaaaaaa ♪♫~~…

“Just checking.” Atsuko teased, placing her phone back inside her bag. Both girls then said their thanks for the meal. Atsuko continued looking on to Takamina as they eat. Being the observant girl that she is, she noticed that Takamina is fond of meat, given the fact that Takamina’s favorite has always been katsudon. Without thinking, Atsuko, grabbed some vegetables with her chopsticks from her set meal and placed it in Takamina’s bowl.

“You know, you should always eat your vegetables.” Atsuko said clicking her chopsticks in front of Takamina.

Takamina just blinked and stared at the pickled vegetables inside her bowl. “You make it look like you’re my mom.” Takamina teased, picking up a piece of tomato with her chopsticks.

“Here I thought you would say that I look like your girlfriend or your wife.” Atsuko teasingly whispered as she ate. Takamina heard the teasing and almost missed popping the tomato in her mouth.

“Uh… let’s not get ahead of ourselves, shall we? We’ll just cross the bridge when we get there.” Takamina stammered.

“If you say so, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na.” Atsuko smiled. “Let’s finish our lunch then head back to the headquarters.” She said, adding more vegetables in Takamina’s bowl.

*****

After the hearty lunch, the two decided to walk back to the where she parked her car. “I forgot to ask you this Takamina… where did you learn to defend yourself from the thief?” Atsuko asked.

Takamina almost stumbled at her question. “Ah, well… when we were kids, Miichan wanted to study martial arts. The three of us studied Aikido. I also practiced Taekwondo and Kyūdo. Miichan also practices Karate while Haruna is still into Kickboxing.” Takamina replied. And the three of us knows Jiujitsu and Muai Thai…

“Sugoi… you three are cool. I mean, you can do self-defense and all that.” Atsuko replied. Takamina smiled at her as they walked. “If you want, I could teach you a thing or two… if you’re not busy that is.” Takamina suggested.

Atsuko nodded then decided to change the topic. “Ne Takamina, do you know anything about flowers?” She asked.

“That’s a weird question. Well, I know some of the meanings behind some flowers. For example, the rose means love, fidelity… and all that.” Takamina replied.

“Oh yeah? Well, tell me what you know about the lily.” Atsuko said. I want to know if you’re the one who’ve been giving me those lilies.

Takamina shrugged, “You don’t want to know about the lily.” She said, waving off the question.

Atsuko pouted at Takamina. “Well, I want to know about it because it has become my favorite recently.” She retorted.

“Ask me about the azaleas instead.” Takamina said, again not minding Atsuko’s request. “Okay, what about the azaleas…?” Atsuko asked.

“It means may you achieve financial security.” Takamina informed her. Atsuko made a weird face as she heard it. “Eh? Weird… now tell me about the lily.” Atsuko insisted.

Takamina sighed, walking ahead of Atsuko. Turning around the other girl, Takamina shoved her hands inside the pockets of her pants. “The lily means… the lily means I dare you to love me.” She replied then slowly walked back again.

Atsuko stopped in her tracks as she heard the answer, noticing her cheeks grow warm. Snapping out of her reverie, she quickened her pace to Takamina then laced her arm on hers. After a couple of minutes, Atsuko basked in the moment and they just walked comfortably towards the parking lot. She stared in wonder as Takamina opened the passenger door of a silver Mercedes Benz convertible for her.

“This is not one of the cars in the garage. Is this yours?” Atsuko asked in bewilderment as she got in the car.

“Yeah you could say that. Buckle up Atsuko hime-sama, I’m gonna drive us back to the garage. They might think that I took you somewhere far from Tokyo.” Takamina teased as she closed the passenger door.

You could take me anywhere Takamina. Atsuko thought as she sat comfortably in her seat then Takamina started the engine and drove off the parking lot.

*****

Takamina insisted in walking Atsuko inside the studio. When they finally reached the door of the dressing room, Atsuko stopped then faced her.

“Thank you again, for getting my bag and for being my date this afternoon.” Atsuko smiled. Let’s see if Takamina will react to what I said.

Takamina was taken aback but instead grabbed Atsuko’s hands. “I should be the one who should say thank you since you treated me for lunch this afternoon. W-Well, it’s not exactly a date Acchan… Maybe we can do that some other time?” she asked hopefully.

Atsuko almost held her breath at what she heard. She gently placed her hands on Takamina’s shoulders and gently smiled. “Yeah, we could do that some other time. But a girl like me wants to be asked out on her first date.” She suggested. Taking her chances, she inched her face towards Takamina’s aiming for a kiss. Atsuko stopped just as their lips touched when the dressing room door suddenly opened.

“Ah! Konnichiwa Acchan! Oh and Takamina too! Yo!” Yuko exclaimed as she burst open the door.

Atsuko and Takamina stood frozen for a few seconds then shyly parted from each other. Great timing Yuko-chan... or not... Takamina thought.

“Konnichiwa, Yuko onee-chan.” Atsuko sighed disappointingly. Mou! Yuko onee-chan has a weird sense of timing too!

Yuko hugged the two girls and guided the three of them towards the garage. “Thanks for bringing back my sister Takamina! Well, enough being comfortable you two. Let’s check the other girls and see what they up to. Let's GO!” Yuko exclaimed, dragging Takamina and Atsuko along.

To be continued...

Author's Note: I adapted some of the lines regarding the meaning of the lilies from the movie Imagine Me and You... just so everyone knows. :mon geek:
Hope you like this update! Thanks for supporting my fic! :mon bye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: JPopLover on August 20, 2011, 12:42:24 AM

LOL xD seriously Yuko's random appearances make me wanna laugh ^^ aww yayy for Atsumina! ~ x3 I hope a MariMii is next ^-^ Update soon :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: Flean on August 20, 2011, 12:44:46 AM

I've been thinking when are you going to update last night and you updated this morning... LOL... :on lol:

I love this chapter... a great way to start my day... :on drink:

the unofficial date is~~ :wriggly: but yuko why must you ruin the moment!!!! :scolding:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: blughise on August 20, 2011, 03:05:37 AM

You finally update!!! I've been waiting for quite sometime :P I guess you're quite busy with school stuff

anyways Yuko totally ruined the moment!!!

She always ruin the moment! :p

I want MariKuu next please XD

update as soon as possible!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: immortal_K on August 20, 2011, 06:31:05 AM

yay you finally updated,

Way to you Yuko! what bad timing could've waiting just a little longer before opening that door :smhid

So we had KojiYuu last chapter, and AtsuMina now, that means MariMii next :cow:

Hope for another update soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 09:21:57 AM

@JPopLover: thanks for the comment! :hee: I hope to update soon too, so I'm praying that writer's block won't visit me again... ever :err:
@Flean: Flean, you're a psychic now? :on lol: but seriously, I've been meaning to update since last week, just got the time last night to update because I finally have my laptop :farofflook: oh, and don't blame Yuko lol
@blughise: thanks for patiently waiting too :P I've been quite busy for two weeks. o.O yup, MariMii's next... I'll try to start writing it tonight. :mon worklate: (since I know I'll be staying up late since I just slept this morning... :mon ghost:)

Thank you everyone for reading! :shy2: :luvluv2: if you have any more comments or suggestions (or if you just wanna say hi :mon hi: ) just let me know!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: leftielove on August 20, 2011, 09:37:25 AM

Yay, update =D

Oh-ho, so I guess the staring contest still has to be determined? Takamina, show her what you got! xD

Great story, I can't wait for the next part

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 09:58:43 AM

leftielove: :hee: hi leftielove! this is the first time I saw you comment in my fic, thanks! yeah, the staring contest has yet to be determined because I already plotted my upcoming chapters... but definitely, I will write about it. Thanks for the comment! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: D_Sphere on August 20, 2011, 02:26:43 PM

Gosh i love Imagine me & you! :deco:

Thanks for updating!
:twothumbs
FIGHTING!

Will be waiting very patiently for more :peace:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 04:50:04 PM

D_Sphere: it's great to know that someone in the forums knows about the movie! XD I love the scene about the lilies :P I'm gonna starting writing the next chapter tonight... but I'm not sure when I'll finish it though. but I'll finish it as soon as I can :oops:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: arisa03 on August 20, 2011, 05:41:50 PM

Omo! An AtsuMina date! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 That's so... cute. xD Acchan's friends should learn not to hit on their friend's love interest. 8DDD Thank for the awesome update! I can't wait to see the 'planned' date now. xD And man Yuko, always barging on the wrong timing. xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 05:50:50 PM

arisa03: :mon hi: great to see that you like my update! :mon fu: hehe, I wonder how their planned date would turn out too :dunno: please wait for my next update! thanks for reading and for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: blughise on August 20, 2011, 06:40:11 PM

Yes...that's what I meant MariMii...
I've been kinda used on calling MariKuu...since most of the time ,I see this pairing more than MariMii XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 07:07:35 PM

blughise: ah I see... :mon sweat: I hope I write a good chapter for those two

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: immortal_K on August 20, 2011, 07:33:57 PM

Will be waiting to see what kind of affair marimii will bring us XD
Hopefully writers block don't pay anymore visit in the future :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 20, 2011, 07:44:50 PM

immortal_K: now that you mentioned it, I also pray that writer's block would just ignore me... completely lol. :nervous XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: YumePouk on August 24, 2011, 11:26:23 AM

:cathappy: :twothumbs
Great TakAcchan "1st date I can call it" :wub:

:hehehe: Yuko really know when to pop up LOL XD

Can't wait to read what will happen next
and what you plan for the girls
Ganbare~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 24, 2011, 01:01:20 PM

@YumePouk: Thanks for the comment! :luvluv2: I have a lot of plans for the girls... especially for Takamina and Atsuko (spoiler alert!). I'll try to finish the next chapter as soon as I can. Thanks for reading! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on August 27, 2011, 07:56:40 PM

Ah, I was hoping the update would be about MariMii...look what you've done here, AtsuMina is supposed to be my fav :lol:
I wonder if the batting eyelashes skill runs in the family, would like to see Mariko-sama try it on Miichan
I definitely approve this cool Takamina! :on GJ:
Tease Takamina later, Acchan. You're gonna have lots of rivals so you better claim her first and fast (or is it Takamina's job instead?)
Both AtsuMina are pretty smooth with each other

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“Here I thought you would say that I look like your girlfriend or your wife.”

The AtsuMina shipper in me would love to see that (especially in real life XD)
Yuko, why u ruined a nice AtsuMina moment OTL
Ah, I like that scene from Imagine Me and You

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12b - Whole Day Affair] Aug. 20 update
Post by: AFLynx on August 28, 2011, 07:47:48 AM

pretend_2besome1: haha, sorry about that. one of the reasons why the last chapter took me so long to post is that I was undecided which pairing I will write about :nervous but the thought of imagining Takamina clobber a thief seems more appropriate and cool lol. I'm glad you approve of the image of Takamina in this story :on asmo:
I'm not sure if batting of eyelashes runs in the family... lol I haven't thought of that actually! I just type away whenever it is appropriate lol
About rivals... I'd rather not say something about it :mon speechless: :hee:

Quote

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“Here I thought you would say that I look like your girlfriend or your wife.”

The AtsuMina shipper in me would love to see that (especially in real life XD)

-> lol me too! I imagine it like I'm watching a movie and it made me feel :mon lovelaff: while writing it.
:w00t: glad to know another member who knows about the movie!
thanks for the comment! hope you'll wait for the next chapter! :mon bye:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on August 29, 2011, 09:47:18 PM

:on drink: Finally, an update! I hope everyone will enjoy reading this... especially the MariMii fans out there :hee:

Chapter 12c - Whole Day Affair

[Dinner – Miichan x Mariko

3:00pm… Same day.

SLUUUUUUURP...!

“Oi...”

SLUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRPPPPP!

“OI! Will you stop slurping your ramen Miichan? You’re loud enough to be heard in the garage!” Sayaka complained. The team is currently having an afternoon snack after a long day and is lounging inside the pantry with their snack – ramen.

“But Chieeeeeeeef! This ramen is sooo delicious!” Miichan said in between chews. Sayaka sighed at Miichan’s antics while the rest of the Pit Crew and Flag Girls just laughed. Everything seems normal, she thought. Everyone is chatting, laughing, and even agreed that the ramen that they are eating are delicious. Yuko is trying to feed Haruna with her chopsticks… Atsuko is making goo-goo eyes on Takamina, and as always, Atsuko did not fail to make Takamina blush. I think I’m missing someone in the group, Miichan thought as she continued to slurp her ramen ignoring Sayaka’s glare. Sayaka’s phone rang adding to the noise in the pantry.

“Sayaka here. Hi the… yea… well good afternoon to you too… you wha… can you stop interrup… I know you’re boss but… fine, I’ll send someone over to pick you up.” Sayaka said then stared incredulously at her phone when the call ended. “Someone’s stressed today.” Sayaka mumbled then looked at Miichan who still continued with her slurping. “Miichan. I have a job for you to do.” She added.

SLUUURPPP…?

Sayaka sweatdropped. “Mariko-chan needs a driver to pick her up. She’s at the Tokyo TV station for a meeting.” She said as she picked her chopsticks again.

“Why me?” Miichan asked, finishing the rest of her ramen. Sayaka just shrugged her shoulders. “I chose you because I know you wouldn’t mind.” Sayaka teased as the rest of the team joined in the teasing.

“Fine. Which car will I use?” Miichan asked. Takamina threw a car key to her, catching it in mid-air with ease. “You can take Gakutenou for a spin Miichan.” Takamina said.

“Gakutenou?” Miichan said curiously, looking at the car key. “That’s what Midori-sensei named that car she gave us.” Takamina whispered to her.

“Sheesh, she’s the only one I know who would give a weird name to a car. Anyway, I’m off to pick up Mariko. Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do Takamina.” Miichan winked at her cousin, twirling the keychain of the car key in her index finger as she walked to where the car is parked.

“Knowing you, you are the one who is bound to do something Miichan!” Takamina yelled at Miichan’s retreating form then sweatdropped when she saw Atsuko batting her eyelashes at her. Miichan should’ve told that to Acchan! Takamina thought, suddenly feeling very nervous.

*****

Mariko bowed to everyone in the board room located at the top floor of the Tokyo TV Station. Wearily, she exited the room and pressed the down button when she neared the elevator. “What a day. It’s a good thing that the meeting ended a bit early.” She thought as she entered the elevator. Grabbing her organizer in her bag, she flipped through the page and checked her things-do-to list. “This is gonna be a long day. I wish something, or someone would make things easier for me today.” She sighed; snapping shut the organizer and putting it back on her bag, waiting for the elevator to take her to the ground floor.

As the general manager of the entire team, Mariko has been meticulous in her job. She made sure that everything is in order and the things that are needed by the team are being taken care of. It can be stressing at times but Mariko still loves the team that’s why she enjoys her job. “I hope I’ll get everything done today so that I can go home early. I wish this day would end already.” She sighed again as she made her way to the lobby then exited through the main door. As she exited the doors, she saw a group of girls crowding someone beside a car.

“Nani? Is that Miichan?” she thought as she saw Miichan talking to the girls. Miichan is currently signing some autographs from the girls, oblivious that Mariko has already exited the building. Mariko huffed as she saw the girls getting close to Miichan as they asked for the driver’s autograph and pictures. Too close, she thought. She checked and straightened herself before walking gracefully towards where Miichan and the girls are standing.

“Ano, Minegishi-sama, what are you doing outside the TV station? Are you here as a guest in one of the TV shows?” one of the fans asked as she handed her autograph book to Miichan. “Actually, I’m here to see someone.” Miichan smiled, adjusting her aviator shades and rested her back on the car as she signed in the autograph book. What’s taking her so long? Miichan sighed. True enough, she saw Mariko making her way towards her with a confident gait in her steps. Wow, she really is a model. She looks like she’s walking on a runway. Miichan thought as she looked peeked through her shades. Mariko simply raised an eyebrow towards her as she continued walking. Am I in trouble? Heck, I think I am. Miichan gulped. “Well ladies, I think I should end this chitchat. The lady that I’m waiting for finally arrived.” Miichan said to the fangirls as Mariko neared them. Mariko smiled at the fangirls as they all bowed in greeting towards her then finally left.

“Konnichiwa, Mariko-sama. I’ll be your driver for today.” Miichan greeted, taking off her shades to get a better look at the other woman.

“Though I am surprised that Sayaka-chan sent you as my driver, it didn’t faze me that you have fangirls anywhere you go.”

Oh ho ho! What’s this? “Are you jealous, Mariko-sama?”

Mariko folded her arms on her chest, still raising an eyebrow. “Do I need to be jealous, Miichan?”

I love this kind of banter. Then again, we’ll be stuck in here. “No.” Miichan simply said then opened the passenger door for Mariko. “Are we going back to the headquarters?” she asked.

“Nope. Since you’re convenient enough to be my company this afternoon, we’re going shopping.” Mariko said as she got in the car.

Shopping? Miichan thought then made her way to the driver’s seat.

*****

Mariko and Miichan roamed around the shopping mall and currently at the main department store. “So, what are we buying right now Mariko?” Miichan grunted as she arranged the shopping bags in her hand.

“My cousin is getting married this week and I’m going to buy her a gift.” Mariko said as she looked at the bridal registry in her hand, choosing the espresso maker in the list.

“Good thing I went along. It seems that you need a pack mule with all the stuff that you bought.” Miichan mumbled as they went to the gift wrapping section.

Mariko stopped in her tracks and faced Miichan. “You make a very cute pack mule then Miichan.” She said as she pinched the other girl’s cheek.

“Whatever you say Mariko. Anyway, are you done with your shopping?” Miichan said, rubbing her cheek as she grabbed the newly wrapped gift from the counter.

“Not yet. I saw the Nike store nearby and I would like to buy something for Yuko-chan and Acchan.” Mariko said, making her way towards the store. As soon as she got in, Mariko glanced at the various shoes on the shelf and examined some shoes that her sisters will surely like.

“It’s nice of you to buy your sisters a gift out of whim.” Miichan smiled as she sat at one of the plush chairs in the store.

“I’m their onee-chan after all, and I love my sisters. They remind me that I should enjoy life with my family.”

“Nice… what does your work remind you of?”

“Hm… it reminds me that I need to learn about being responsible and take care of other people besides myself and my family.”

“How about the team? What do they remind you of?”

What’s with all the questions? “The team reminds me that I have a lot of friends whom I can rely on.”

“Aaand… what do I remind you of?” Miichan asked, smiling at Mariko.

You remind me that perhaps love is a wonderful feeling… that I should give it a chance. “You remind me that a cute thing like you can be reliable at times like this.” Mariko winked, choosing 2 pairs of the latest sneakers for her sisters.

Miichan suddenly stood and faced Mariko, staring at her. Mariko furrowed her brows trying to get away from the other girl’s scrutinizing eyes. “W-What…? Why are you staring at me?”

“You are such a bad liar.” She smirked.

“Whatever gave you that idea?” Mariko asked, suddenly feeling conscious.

“It is true that we women are all alike. What we think is different from what we say. Some are just honest to what they think and say.”

Mariko blinked at the other girl. “When did you become… insightful?” she asked, trying to change the subject. She caught me.

Miichan reached her finger at Mariko’s face and traced her delicate features. “Whenever I’m with you Mariko… only when I’m with you.” I like the way you lie Mariko.

*****

Miichan shut the trunk of the car with a sigh. Seriously, who shops for four hours straight without stopping. Oh wait, nobody has to answer that. Miichan thought as she looked at Mariko who is sporting a pleased look on her face.

“Finally! We can go home now.” Mariko said happily. It made her wonder why Miichan just simply stood at the back of the car staring at her. “Miichan?”

“Would you like to go out on a date with me tonight?” Miichan blurted out.

“I-I’m sorry, what?” Mariko asked, not believing what she heard.

“Erm, I mean dinner. Would you like to go out to dinner with me? It’s almost eight o’ clock in the evening after all and I’m hungry.” Miichan stammered, opening the passenger door for the other girl.

Mariko sighed. “I’d love to go out on a date with you tonight. Take me somewhere special.” She whispered, letting Miichan know that she was heard the first time.

*****

Miichan handed the keys of the car to the valet as they stopped in front of an elegant, contemporary styled restaurant. Mariko looked at the long line of people outside the establishment and was surprised that Miichan just walked her way inside. Curiously, she followed the other girl, and noted that the patrons did not seem to mind Miichan just barging in.

“Ah, Minegishi-sama, good evening! It’s been a while since you’ve graced us with your presence.” The maître d' greeted. Minegishi-sama? I have to ask Miichan about that, Mariko thought.

“I know, it’s been a while, Sakura-san. Anyway, is my favorite table available for the evening?”

“Of course it is! I assume that it’s only a table for two?” Sakura inquired, giving a knowing look at Mariko.

Miichan smiled and nodded in confirmation. “Right this way Mariko-sama.” Miichan teased, holding Mariko’s hand as they made their way to their table.

Sakura guided them to an intimate booth of the restaurant, overlooking the busy streets of Tokyo. The mildly dimmed yellow lights and faint music gives the feeling of comfortable dining for the patrons who were busy chatting and eating near Mariko and Miichan’s table. As they sat comfortably in their booth, a busty, orange-haired chef greeted them.

“Miichan! It’s been a while! I missed you so much!” The chef exclaimed, hugging Miichan. Mariko’s eyebrow rose at the display of affection.

“Ano… Mai-san, stop crushing me with your boobs, will you? Anyway, Mariko, I’d like you to meet Tokiha Mai, the executive chef of this restaurant. Mai, this is Shinoda Mariko, my date for tonight.” Miichan wheezed from Mai’s hug.

“Nice to meet you Mai-san. Miichan seems quite popular in this establishment.” Mariko said.

“Nice to meet you too Mariko-san! Of course she is! She is one of the…” Mai stopped when she saw Miichan glare at her. “Uh… she’s one of the…uh… favorite patrons in this restaurant!” she continued.

“Anyway Mai-san, we’re hungry. How about cooking us up some of your specials? Just surprise us, your creations are always delicious. Make it a five-course meal, I’m famished.” Miichan requested.

“Now that’s the reason why she’s one of the favorite patrons in here. She’s not choosy, and she gives profit to the restaurant.” Mai winked at Mariko, obviously teasing Miichan. “I’d better head back to my realm – the kitchen. Enjoy your night ladies.” Mai smiled as she excused herself and a waiter went to their table to ask for their drinks.

Miichan waved at Mai and handed the drinks menu to Mariko. “You can pick our drinks for tonight to start off our meal.” Miichan smiled.

“Are you trying to get me drunk, Miichan?”

“Nooo… I just want you to relax since I know it’s been a long day for you.”

Mariko smiled sweetly as she glanced at the list of the drinks available. “I’d like for a bottle of Crystal ’95 please.” She said to the waiter, looking at Miichan’s reaction to her selection.

“Mah, you’re an expensive date.” Miichan teased. “That will be fine.” She nodded to the waiter.

“Am I?” Mariko teased back.

“What?” Miichan responded with a smirk. “Expensive or my date?”

Mariko laughed at that. “Oh I am well aware that I’m expensive.” The waiter approached their table with the bottle of champagne and poured each of them a glass. “Is this a date?” Mariko asked, tracing the cold flute glass with her fingers.

“Do you want it to be?”

“Yes.” Mariko said, sipping her champagne.

“Then it’s settled then.” Miichan raised her flute glass then sipped her champagne as well.

“Hmmm, now I can ask you what’s been bugging me since we got here. You seemed quite popular in this restaurant. Are you a frequent patron?”

“Actually, yes.” Miichan responded honestly.

“Did you already bring someone here to eat?” Mariko asked again, as a waiter brought their soups and salads to their table.

“Yup. I’ve already brought two girls to eat here.” Miichan said and started eating her soup. She stopped when Mariko stared incredulously at her. “Relax Mariko, you know them. Their names are Takahashi Minami and Kojima Haruna.”

Mariko blinked as the names register in her head. “You are such a tease Miichan! I almost thought that I’m not that special to you.” She sighed dramatically as she started with her salad.

Miichan looked at her then smiled. “Actually, you’re the first person that I’ve asked to come to eat with me here. I hope that we can do this again some other time.”

Mariko almost dropped a piece of lettuce that she was about to pop in her mouth and felt her blood rushing in her ears. “I’d love that.” She whispered. “You didn’t really answer my question.”

Miichan chuckled. “Nothing seems to get past you Mariko. Honestly, my family owns this establishment. Takamina and Haruna are also shareholders of this restaurant.” She replied.

“Seriously?!” Mariko exclaimed, earning looks from the other patrons nearby to their table.

“Seriously.” Miichan said, tracing an x mark over her heart with her index finger.

“You are such a mystery to me Miichan, ever since I read your profile during the audition race. Is there something about you that I still don’t know yet?” Mariko asked, as the waiter placed their main course meals.

Miichan almost choked at her meal. I’m sorry Mariko. Someday, you’ll know everything about me. “Well… I’m just a race car driver who is a part-owner of this restaurant.” She answered, cutting a piece of meat.

Mariko simply shook her head. “You are a bad liar too, Miichan.” She simply answered, not pushing further with the topic.

*****

After the finishing their meals and emptied the champagne bottle, Miichan of course paid for their meal and offered to take Mariko home. Their travel towards Mariko’s family home has been a quiet one. Mariko is just content holding Miichan’s right hand which she rested on the stick shift as she drove with her other hand. Miichan on the other hand, is trying to concentrate on the road and at the same time, trying to ignore the gentle caresses of Mariko’s thumb on her hand. She knew that their night has come to an end as they neared the mansion and the gates automatically opened. She drove the car to the driveway and stopped in front of the main door.

“I guess that’s the last of the stuff from the trunk.” Miichan said, placing the rest of the shopping bags on the floor.

“Thank you for being my pack mule today.” Mariko teased.

Miichan grabbed her hand and gently kissed it. “Thank you for being my date this evening.” She simply said.

Mariko smiled, placing her other hand on Miichan’s shoulder and inched her way closer to the other girl. “Do I get a goodnight kiss then?” She asked, batting her eyelashes.

Miichan inhaled, as if the other girl just knocked the wind out of her. “I thought you’d never ask.” She said, shyly pressing her lips to Mariko, slightly brushing her tongue out to the other girl’s lips seeking permission to enter. Mariko complied, opening her mouth as she reciprocated the kiss, grabbing Miichan’s face as the other girl pulled her closer. The two separated due to lack of oxygen and pressed their foreheads together.

“Miichan… you do know that I like you. I mean, I like you… like you.” She sighed, loving how warm she feels with Miichan’s hands resting on her waist.

“And I really like you, like you as well. We could take this slowly Mariko. So, does this mean there’s a second date?” Miichan asked, brushing a stray hair from Mariko’s face and gently tucked it in her ear.

“Yes, there will be a second date… just as long as you seal it with another kiss.” Mariko whispered. Just as Miichan was about to aim for another kiss, the wall lamps on the either side of the main doors suddenly flickered erratically. Miichan looked at the lamps then gave a curious glance to the giggling Mariko. “That must be a doing of my sisters. They always do that when I get home from a date.” she answered, gently massaging Miichan’s shoulders.

“You’ve been out on dates before? And here I thought I was a special date for you.” Miichan dramatically sighed.

“Haha. Of course silly, I’ve been out on dates before. Those two used to flick those lamps so that my dates won’t get a kiss from me. Frankly, my previous dates were quite a bore, Yuko and Acchan didn’t approve of them. Yes you are my special date because you made me feel special. The fact that my sisters let us kiss means you’re good in their book.” Mariko said.

“Great to know that then. I’d better get going, Mariko. You’re sisters might kill me just by ruining my eyes.” Miichan teased trying to ignore the flickering lamps and the giggling inside the main doors. Miichan gave Mariko another lingering kiss, which Mariko moaned in response. Mariko teased her by gently biting on Miichan’s lower lip as they parted. “Sweet dreams, Mariko.” She smiled as she walked towards the driver’s side of the car.

“I know I will. Be safe, Miichan.” Mariko answered. She simply stood and stared at Miichan’s car as it drove away towards their gate. Mariko sighed happily and entered the house, brushing past Yuko and Atsuko who were squealing in delight for their eldest sister.

To be continued....

Gah, I suck at writing kissing scenes... :frustrated: :temper:
I added another Mai-Hime character in my story, sorry I can't help but just add her in this chapter :wahaha:
I hope I'll get feedbacks from everyone! Thanks for reading! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: immortal_K on August 29, 2011, 10:40:18 PM

YAY THanks for updating

Its finally MariMii's day affair :luvluv1:

Midori named the care Gakutenou :thumbsup

LOL Miichan asked for a date :lol:

Woot you threw in Mai into the story! :hee:

WOW, Miichan totally moves much faster then her cousins :twothumbs

Please update soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: blughise on August 29, 2011, 11:12:20 PM

that is flipping awesome!!! XD
Compare to Haruna and Takamina, Miichan is sure is Fast!!! She know what she wants and knows how to get it too! XD
I love how she's so gentleman-like and gallant when she took Mariko-sama on a dinner date! :heart:

Is the next chapter going to be Atsumina? Cuz when Miichan left to pick Mariko-sama, it's like something fun will happen to them :)

update soon XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: anoni2 on August 30, 2011, 12:45:49 AM

mai hime mai hime!!

i mean marimii marimii !! :luvluv1:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: JPopLover on August 30, 2011, 01:08:38 AM

Mii-chan kakkoi!~ xD omg that was soo cute ^^ aww Mariko and Mii-chan are sooo lovey-dovey already x3 I wonder what's coming up next ^-^ hope you update again soon! ~ =3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on August 30, 2011, 05:44:53 AM

immortal_K: thanks for reading! :luvluv2: I already have 2 mai hime characters in my story and I thought that it wouldn't hurt if I added another one lol. Yup, I think it's already in my subconscious mind that Miichan will be the fast one when it comes to love in my story. :)

blughise: I think Miichan is the mature one when it comes to relationships lol. About the Atsumina scene at the beginning of this chapter... well, I just wrote it because I thought that it may be a usual everyday scene for the both of them. :mon sweat: I already have a plot for my next chapter... I hope it will be a fun chapter :mon determined:

anoni2: I had to laugh at your reaction... kawaii! :on GJ: you seemed to like the chapter lol. thanks for reading!

JPopLover: Glad to know that you like this chapter! ^-^ I'll try to update as soon as I can!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: haruhi16 on August 30, 2011, 06:34:01 AM

MariMii is sooooo :wub: :wub: :wub:

I love your fic, keep it up!

please update soon! :cow: :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on August 30, 2011, 07:11:40 AM

haruhi16: hi! :hee: thank you for the comment! I'll try my best to update soon! :kneelbow: :prayers:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: immortal_K on August 30, 2011, 07:15:10 AM

LOL yea, it's been so long since I watched Mai Hime, reading this sudden made me want to go back and watch it again :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on August 30, 2011, 07:23:53 AM

immortal_K: me too! my dvd has been sitting in its case since I don't know when lol

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: Flean on September 01, 2011, 06:27:07 PM

I forgot to comment after I read the update the other day... :P

But still... I like this chapter... Man!! MariMii.. They sure are something... :inlove:

I like the reaction between them.. so romantic... :luvluv1:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: kahem on September 01, 2011, 10:37:08 PM

WOOWWOWOWO!!!! Yeah the couples are here!!! But seriously what is the problem with the timing in that family lol

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on September 02, 2011, 04:51:36 AM

Flean: :w00t: I'm happy you liked this chapter! I think MariMii is the mature couple in this story... maybe because Mariko is the eldest of the three sisters (and I unconciously based it on that :nervous ) Honestly, every time I reread this chapter, I think that MariMii are such flirts :lol:

kahem: lol I'm not sure about their timing. I think it just runs in the family or they just do that to get into each other's nerves :P

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on September 03, 2011, 06:13:59 PM

Finally, MariMii! :D

Quote

SLUUURPPP…?

lol Miichan
I'm imagining the real Gakutenou somehow haha
AtsuMina is being funny to each other
I don't mind the appearance of Mai-Hime characters, are you planning to bring more of them? (give me Nao! I kid)
Yay, the batting eyelashes runs in the family! But Mariko's succeeded the most and got a kiss
The sisters are really something else XD
Wow, MariMii is like totally in a whole new level compared to the others. With AtsuMina it's like young love and with KojiYuu it's like...kiddy love? :P
I so like this chapter :twothumbs

Ps. this chapter means MariMii is official, right? Can't wait for the others to follow them soon :deco:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: haruhi16 on September 03, 2011, 09:59:26 PM

heyyy~ you need to updateeeee~ i'm still waiting :( :(

i like your fic! :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12c - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 8/30
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 07:10:22 AM

pretend_2besome1: :hee: glad to know you like the chapter. Yes, those sisters are something else :lol: I didnt really think of adding Nao in my story :dunno: coz I'm not sure what her role would be :nervous hope you'll wait for my next update!

haruhi16: awww :shy1: actually, I'm almost done with the next update.... I was actually writing it last night and I woke up pretty late today... please be patient with me. :sweat: I'll try to post it in a couple of minutes. :mon study:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 09:57:37 AM

I promised haruhu16 that I will be posting it in a few minutes after I replied to her post... it turned into hours because I was so busy ogling at Atsumina pics :on bleed: Anyway, hope you'll like this chapter!

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 12d - Whole Day Affair

[Midnight Snack]

11:00pm… Same day, inside Takamina, Haruna and Miichan’s apartment

Miichan went inside their apartment whistling. “Honeys, I’m home!”

“Honeys?” Haruna raised an eyebrow as she placed different snacks on the coffee table in the living room.

“Well, since there’s two of you here in the apartment, it should be plural… thus the words honeys.” Miichan said as she plopped on the sofa and threw the car key at Takamina who caught it with ease in mid-air.

“Whatever, you dork.” Haruna said. Takamina saw something different in Miichan’s mood. She sat beside her and stared at her cousin.

“Hmmm… I was right. You did something to make you grin like that. Okay, spill.” Takamina said.

“Let’s just say I kissed a girl and I like it.” Miichan winked, using the lines of the song.

“Lemme guess, it tastes like her cherry chapstick?” Haruna continued.

“No… more like strawberries and champagne.” Miichan replied.

“You make it sound like you tasted a lotion from Victoria’s Secret.” Takamina laughed.

“But seriously guys, this is the best evening ever! I got the chance to ask Mariko out on a date after her meeting and shopping and… I got to kiss her.” Miichan replied with a blush. Takamina and Haruna squealed and poked their cousin.

“This calls for a celebration then! I think we still have a couple of sodas in the fridge. You’d better tell us the whole story.” Takamina said as she headed to the kitchen.

The three cousins huddled in the living room eating snacks and drinking canned sodas. Miichan made a quick recap of her evening much to her cousins’ delight. “So, does that mean that Mariko’s your girlfriend now?” Haruna asked, grabbing a bowl of popcorn on the coffee table.

“Not yet I guess, but you can say that we’re dating right now.” Miichan replied. “Enough about my day. It seemed that we’ve been quite busy today that we didn’t really get to talk in the garage. How was your day Haruna? You woke up quite early today.” She continued.

“I know, right? I even surprised myself! While I was on my way to the garage, I saw Yuko and well… I asked her to have breakfast with me.” Haruna said shyly.

“Ooooh… it sounded like you two are fated to meet this morning.” Miichan teased.

“So, how are you and Yuko then? She seems quite taken with you, you know.” Takamina asked.

“You can say that. Whenever she’s around, I feel like a tree that that squirrel-girl is trying to climb. And she even gave me a weird nickname the first time we were introduced in the team!” Haruna said, demonstrating how Yuko hugs her to Takamina, proving her point.

“Okay, OKAY! I got your point… you can stop crushing me now.” Takamina wheezed.

“I observed that even though Yuko’s been clinging to you, you stopped resisting after a couple of days. Does that mean that you’ve accepted it, or you just stopped resisting because you don’t know what to do with her?” Miichan interrogated.

“No, it’s not that! Well, I guess I got comfortable having her around me all the time.” Haruna reasoned.

“Does that mean that when Yuko kissed you, you liked the feeling? If that’s the case, why don’t you just tell her that you like her too?” Takamina asked.

“Wait, I didn’t know that! Yuko kissed you?! Good for her! She’s always honest with her feelings.” Miichan said.

Haruna glared at Takamina. “Says the wise one who’s been crushing on Acchan… Of course, I’ll definitely tell her how I feel, so don’t get too excited. I mean, we even haven’t got out on a date. Before you interrupt me, that breakfast is not considered as a date.” Haruna defended herself.

“It looked like a date to us. You should see that wide smile Yuko’s been sporting the whole day. It was priceless.” Miichan teased, nudging Haruna.

Haruna rolled her eyes. “Anyway Takamina, how did your day go? Acchan has been batting her eyelashes to you after you met up with her.” She asked. Takamina shared to her cousins how her day went with Atsuko. Haruna and Miichan shared knowing glances then giggled.

“Takamina, the knight in shining armor, saved the day for Acchan, the damsel in distress! That’s sooo manly of you!” Miichan teased, opening up a bag of chips.

“Oi, why do you have to say it’s manly? I was just at the right place at the right time.” Takamina explained.

“It seems to me that you are fated to meet Acchan this afternoon.” Haruna teased.

“Hey, that’s Miichan’s line for you Haruna, not me.” Takamina defended.

“Well, it does seem to apply to you too Takamina.” Haruna reasoned. “Anyway, I know you two like each other. Have you told Acchan how you feel?”

“Well, like you, I haven’t got the chance to tell her yet. We… I was always interrupted… and I chicken out easily.” Takamina mumbled.

“And so? That shouldn’t stop you from telling her. You are so slow in the love department Takamina. It is obvious that Acchan likes you!” Miichan said.

“I know I’m slow, and I’m scared okay? When I’m ready, I’ll tell her. I don’t want to tell her that I like her just like that. I want it to be special.” Takamina explained. Haruna and Miichan blinked at what they heard from their cousin.

“Wow… I never thought you’re a deep thinker Takamina.” Miichan mumbled as she munched some potato chips.

“Hey, give me some credit here. I want to give her something special to express how I feel and I really don’t want to rush it.” Takamina explained, grabbing another can of soda.

“We know about that Takamina. I just hope that you tell her how you feel before it’s too late. Someone might beat you to it you know.” Haruna said.

“Says the ever wise Haruna.” Takamina teased back at Haruna.

“Well enough about that. We still have to investigate about our mission. We’ve been quite slacking in that department. We will never hear the end of it from Grandpa.” Miichan sighed.

Takamina and Haruna slouched back at the couch. “Ne, anyone up for a night ride? It’s been a while that we rode our motorcycles together. Maybe we could patrol around the city and maybe catch some bad guys in some dark alley.” Takamina suggested.

“Oh, nice idea! It is been a while.” Haruna smiled.

“Yosh! Let’s change our outfits then.” Miichan pumped her fist then the cousins moved to throw the empty soda cans and wash the empty plates.

“I just have one favor…” Takamina said and whispered into Haruna and Miichan’s ear as they may their way to their shared bedroom.

*****

Same time - inside Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko’s bedroom…

“I still can’t get over what we saw outside the door! Miichan kissed onee-chan!” Yuko squealed together with Atsuko.

“Hehe, that trick of flicking the lamps sure stopped them. I think they won’t stop if we didn’t do that.” Atsuko chuckled, pouring tea into three cups and placed it at a side table near Mariko’s bed.

“Will you two stop that!” Mariko chided her sisters. Yuko and Atsuko didn’t take it seriously as Mariko was still smiling while painting her toe nails. Yuko looked at her eldest sister. Mariko onee-san sure looks so in love. Mariko looked over to Yuko who was sitting at her own bed, staring at her. “Do you have something to tell me Yuko?” Mariko asked.

“Hmmm… nothing really. It’s just that, love suits you onee-chan.” Yuko smiled, reaching for a cup and sipped her tea. Mariko blushed at Yuko’s comment. Personally, Mariko didn’t expect for her day to end in such manner, but she wasn’t really complaining.

“Really, you think so?” Mariko whispered, still busy painting her nails.

“Of course, we think so! Didn’t you say that Miichan was cute when you saw their application form for the audition?” Atsuko asked as she brushed her hair. Mariko placed her nail polish on top of her dresser and smiled at the memory.

“Yes and she is even more beautiful up close. It annoys me that because our team is becoming more popular, our three drivers seemed to have a lot of fan girls everywhere.” Mariko sighed.

“True.” Yuko and Atsuko replied at the same time. “We can’t really complain about that since those fan girls are our team’s supporters. Anyway onee-chan, does that mean that Miichan is your girlfriend?” Yuko asked.

“Yes… almost.” Mariko answered. Yuko and Atsuko furrowed their eyebrows at their sister’s answer. “That’s not a clear answer onee-chan.” Atsuko mumbled.

“Let’s just say that Miichan and I are dating.” Mariko answered as she fluffed her pillows.

“Oh okay. I just wish NyanNyan and I are dating too.” Yuko sighed as she jumped to Mariko’s bed. Atsuko looked at a side table beside the glass sliding door to their balcony and noticed a mint plant beside Yuko’s pet, Becky. “Ne, Yuko onee-chan, did you buy that plant?”

“NyanNyan gave it to me.” Yuko plainly answered.

“Eh?! When?” Mariko sat surprised and looked at her sister. Yuko smiled at her sister’s reaction, “Just this morning. NyanNyan and I had breakfast together aaand… I got the chance to ride a motorcycle with her.” Yuko gushed as she hugged Mariko’s pillow.

“You’re lucky that you woke up early today then. I bet you’re thinking that you two are destined to see each other this morning.” Atsuko teased.

“Of course! This is really my lucky day.” Yuko answered as Mariko grabbed her pillow from Yuko’s grasp. “So… care to share your lucky day with your NyanNyan?” Mariko asked as she fluffed her pillow for the second time.

“Well, NyanNyan sure is shy at that time so I suggested the one word game that we used to do. I really did learn something from her. I’ll give her credit that she is one heck of a listener.” Yuko answered as she looked at the potted mint plant. “Hugging her during the motorcycle ride is an added bonus this morning.” Yuko added, wiggling her eyebrows.

“You’re perverted at times that I think it scares Haruna to no end onee-chan.” Atsuko sweatdropped.

“And you, my dearest youngest sister is one hell of a teaser and it’s a wonder that Takamina hasn’t lost a lot of blood from all that blushing.” Yuko said as she stuck her tongue out to Atsuko. “How’s your day Acchan? By the way, how’s Yumi-chan and Miyuki-chan? It’s been a while since I last saw those two.”

“Oh really? Then how come Yumi-chan and Miyuki-chan knew about those flowers that I’ve been receiving?” Atsuko raised an eyebrow, pointing at her dresser where a lily is delicately placed in a glass vase. Yuko just smiled sweetly at her sister in response.

“As much as I don’t want to ask this question again Acchan, I think I might as well do… care to share your day with Takamina?” Mariko asked. Atsuko fumbled at her pajama top, “Well, my bag was almost stolen from me,” She mumbled.

“Nani?!” Mariko and Yuko shouted in surprise and moved to sit beside Atsuko. “Don’t worry, Takamina was able to get my bag and the thief got arrested. Yumi-chan and Miyuki-chan also got the chance to meet Takamina by the way, and I think that Miyuki-chan has a crush on her.” Atsuko explained, remember her friends’ awe in meeting Takamina.

“He~~, based on that look that you’re sporting, your friend Miyuki-chan is turning into Takamina’s fan girl.” Mariko teased. “Are you jealous, Acchan?” Yuko said, adding her two cents.

“Mou, I’m not jealous!” Atsuko pouted. “I don’t have a reason to be jealous because Takamina personally saved her number in my phone AND I get to have lunch with her.” She defended.

“Aaannd… how did your lunch with Takamina go?” Yuko asked excitedly, waving her hands in a rolling motion, encouraging her sister to continue. “Seriously, don’t leave us hanging Acchan.” Mariko mumbled.

“I found out… that she doesn’t eat that much vegetable.” Atsuko said in a matter-of-fact. Mariko and Yuko almost fell from Atsuko’s bed from what they heard. “Mou Acchan!” Mariko and Yuko said at the same time, making Atsuko giggle.

“Well, she really doesn’t! Anyway, besides that fact, she was able to stop the thief because Takamina practices martial arts… and so does Haruna-chan and Miichan. The funny thing that I learned from Takamina is that she seems to know a lot about flowers.” Atsuko said.

“Flowers you say…” Mariko said, giving a knowting looking at Yuko. “Eh? Onee-chan, is there something that I should know about?” Atsuko asked. Yuko giggled and patted Atsuko’s back, “Don’t mind what onee-chan said, just tell us what the two of you were doing in front of the dressing room when I suddenly opened the door.” Yuko said in a sing song voice.

“I knew you would ask me about that. I was about to give her a kiss to thank her, but as always, your timing sucks Yuko onee-chan.” Atsuko replied.

“Hahaha! I overheard you at the other side of the door and I just can’t resist teasing you two. Boy, you should see the disappointed look on Takamina’s face.” Yuko laughed. Atsuko’s eyes went wide, “Really? She was disappointed?”

Yuko huffed at Atsuko’s response, “Wow, because you’re also disappointed you missed that look on her face!”

Mariko laughed at her sisters, “Acchan you’re really something. I can imagine Atsuko hime-sama almost giving Takamina the knight in shining armor a kiss for her bravery and gallantry.”

“Who needs a knight in shining armor when I have a race driver who looks good in her biker leather suit?” Atsuko winked as her sisters nodded.

“I must agree that Miichan, Haruna and Takamina look good in their race outfit,” Mariko answered, already imagining Miichan in her outfit. “Acchan, you’d better tell Takamina that you like her or else someone else might beat you to it. Remember what happened when Tomochin saved her from those rowdy fan girls? Honestly, I was expecting you to yank Takamina out of that crowd just like Yuko and I did. Since you were in your teasing mood, Tomochin beat you to it. And it is really unlike you to just turn around and leave.” Mariko said in a worried tone.

Atsuko rolled her eyes, “I know, I know… Tomochin and I had a talk about it and she said exactly the same thing. I’m just… I don’t know… scared that Takamina will run off on the opposite direction when I tell her how I feel. And besides, I really want to be that girl who gets confessed at… and a girl like me wants to be asked out on her first date.” She pouted, remembering the hints she gave to Takamina when they went out to lunch.

“Haha, true! Well, let’s pray to the gods that Takamina will have the courage to ask you out on a date soon.” Yuko hugged her sister in response. Atsuko sighed as she stood up, “Maybe I’ll catch me a falling star and make a wish.” She said as she opened the glass doors and walked towards their balcony. As soon as she rested her arms on the stone ledge and looked up at the night sky, she smelled a familiar sweet powdery scent in the air. Curiously glancing around the area to where that scent came from, her eyes widened in surprise when she saw a stargazer lily resting at the far edge of the ledge of their balcony.

“EHHHHH?!?!?!” Atsuko yelled in surprise. Mariko and Yuko ran to Acchan. “Are you okay? Did you see some robbers?” Mariko asked as she looked at their front lawn and to their main gates. Atsuko simply stared at the flower and pointed at it. “I see… looks like your secret admirer has done it again. Hehehe.” Yuko joked and nudged Atsuko.

Atsuko gently picked the lily and traced the delicate, pink petals. “Mou~~ I wonder when did that person leave this flower.” She suddenly heard engines rumble just outside their gates , followed by motorcycle noises moving farther from the vicinity of their house. Mariko looked to where the noise came from and chuckled, “I think that your secret admirer has his or her own ways of finding you.”

“And looks like your secret admirer even asked help from some friends just to deliver that flower to you. Let’s get inside, it’s getting a bit chilly.” Yuko said, grabbing the arms of her sisters.

“I know you two knew something about who this person is. Come on Mariko onee-chan, Yuko one-chan… spill it out already! Mou!” Atsuko pouted at her sisters as they went back to their bedroom.

To be continued...

That's the end of chapter 12! I think I was thinking about food when I thought of this concept. :smhid I was watching Mendol again last night and I imagined the sisters' and the cousins' conversation would look like. I hope you like this chapter! :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: haruhi16 on September 04, 2011, 10:47:58 AM

Awww thanks AFLynx!! :) :)
I was waiting for the update! and thank you so much for granting my wish! :) :)
Nice chapter! :heart:
MariMii couple so :heart: inlove! :wub:
I hope Nyan Nyan will stop being so tsundere to Yuko. I hope there's a little twist between them so Haruna will come after Yuko this time. I just don't like Haruna for being so tsundere in all fics here in JPHIP! hehe. But still i'm a fan of KOjiyuu :heart: Well i like your story so much! :D :heart:
And for atsumina, sigh* here's a punch for takamina for being so chicken! :rock:

Thank you for the update! I'll keep checking your fic ! Keep it up :heart: :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: Sydney W on September 04, 2011, 10:57:26 AM

Since mariko x miichan & yuko & haruna are in relationship, it should be acchan & takamina turn ~ Please make them confess their feelings & waiting for your next update

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 02:35:35 PM

haruhi16: thank you for being patient in waiting for my update! :luvluv2:
Since you've mentioned something about a lil twist for the KojiYuu pair, I'll try to think of something that will go nicely to the plot of my story :mon determined: just don't hold your breath though :nervous
As for Takamina... well... I wrote her to be like that so I guess that punch should be directed to me :nervous :lol: I'll make sure that she'll have more guts to express how she feels in the upcoming chapters :P
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll do my best not to be lazy in updating my fic :farofflook:

Sydney W: Thank you for reading my update! :luvluv2: Since I am a very big fan of AtsuMina pairing, I have a big plan for those two. :kekeke: I'll keep everyone posted regarding AtsuMina's relationship :glasses:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: blughise on September 04, 2011, 02:48:54 PM

Really nice chapter!!! XD

we got to see/read the cousin and the sisters bounding and telling each other their day XD

MariMii are now dating which is awesome!
KojiYuu almost there as Haruna being to open up and show her feeling for Yuko
Atsumina......I can't wait... please write them on you next update :P
It's already obvious who's Acchan's secret admirer, almost everyone knows her, expect Acchan herself :)

update ASAP PLEASE

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 04:59:54 PM

blughise: thanks for the comment! :luvluv2:
I actually have two chapters in mind but I don't know which I should consider being the next chapter :dunno: I'll try to decide as soon as possible :nervous
Takamina and Atsumina are both clueless in this story that I even surprise myself :smhid lol :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: blughise on September 04, 2011, 05:18:31 PM

hahaha...

Yah they really are both clueless but Takamina's really making an effort and initiative :)

Wait, two chapters about atsumina????

Please decide soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 05:36:41 PM

blughise:

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Wait, two chapters about atsumina????

yes... and no... lol :lol: it's gonna be a lil secret between me and my laptop :mon speechless: but one thing's for sure - one of the two chapters have sub-chapters because I think it's gonna be a long one :on crazygran:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: JPopLover on September 04, 2011, 07:45:03 PM

Aww x3 I think all the pairs are slowly falling in love ^^ Your story is so beyond awesome :) Oh and I have a random fact to tell: I'm a mixed French-Canadian and Japanese :D omg gene awesomeness ~ xD lol Please update soon :]

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: kahem on September 04, 2011, 07:51:29 PM

Go Takamina tell her how you feel

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 04, 2011, 08:13:52 PM

JPopLover: wow gene awesomeness is right! :on asmo:
Yes, the three pairs are all growing up and falling in love :farofflook: I'm glad you think my story is beyond awesome! :luvluv2:

kahem: Takamina was being a slow poke :err: but I know she'll definitely surprise us once she tells Acchan how she feels.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: immortal_K on September 04, 2011, 10:37:39 PM

Ahhh Acchan still can't figure out who her secret admire is :lol:

The cousin/ sister interrogation night...

Yuko purposely interrupted Acchan boooo,

I wonder how Takamina is going to confess, she's getting left behind in the dust by her 2 cousins keke

THanks for the update, please continue I can't wait to see what happens.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: Haruko on September 05, 2011, 03:30:23 AM

achan jelousy so cool

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 05, 2011, 05:23:17 AM

immortal_K: I'm sure Yuko did that because she is testing the pair. :nervous
Honestly, I haven't made a draft on how Takamina will confess to Acchan :dizzy: :frustrated: I write one chapter at a time :badluck: Well, I just hope it will come to mind soon. :nervous

Haruko: Hi Haruko! :hee: I can imagine Acchan's pout whenever she becomes jealous :shy1:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: immortal_K on September 05, 2011, 05:41:28 AM

no worries, I'm sure when it comes, it will be awesome :twothumbs

Well it seems like the sisters like to test each other/ interrupt, its their way of bonding keke.

LoL'ing at how the cousins dropped off the flowers, can't make it any more obvious but Acchan still didn't get it keke

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 05, 2011, 06:21:27 AM

immortal_K: Thank you (and to everyone as well) for having that much confidence in my writing! :luvluv2: I hope my imagination works double time soon so that I'll be able to finish the next chapter. :nervous

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: arisa03 on September 05, 2011, 07:25:12 AM

I don't remember the last time I replied! I've been behind for two chapters! OTL.

oh Takamina, and Acchan's batting eyelashes forever win. LOL KojiYuu and AtsuMina should just confess to each other already, I can't wait for the day that, that would come. >=DDD The flowers... I bet Takamina was epically sending them to Acchan, since she wanted things to be special. LOLOLOL xD

Thank you for the awesome update as always AFLynx! I can't wait for more <3<3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 05, 2011, 08:15:32 AM

arisa03: :mon hi: <- yeah it's been awhile because I haven't used this icon for such a long time :)
Thank you for your support arisa03-chan! I've been reading your works as well and all I can say is that you're one awesome writer as well :on GJ: I haven't posted a comment on your works because I'm just lazy at times :on chew:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: haruhi16 on September 05, 2011, 10:07:39 AM

Thank you AFLynx! :) :) i'm looking forward to it! so excited for a twist between Tsundere Haruna and hentai Yuko. Update soon :thumbsup :cow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: arisa03 on September 05, 2011, 11:21:14 AM

Oh! xDDD Thank you for reading them as well! <3333 And you can just call me Arisa :3333 xD I really love reading your works. >_< b!!! I can't wait for the next one. xD And it's okay if you dont' comment yet. But you should soon. >=DDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 06, 2011, 08:43:07 AM

haruhi16: I might write about their pairing after a couple of chapters though. I hope you'll be patient about it :nervous

arisa03: hi! :mon hi: okay, I'll call you Arisa-chan then :hee: I'll comment as soon as I post this ;)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: haruhi16 on September 06, 2011, 10:25:49 AM

@AFLynx : great :), no it's okay, i'll wait ! i'll just keep checking ya know~ :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: takasica on September 06, 2011, 08:27:10 PM

Just started reading this. I really like the plot/storyline. It's quite entertaining and amusing :> Looking forward to the next chapter.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: Kid_Alpha on September 06, 2011, 10:48:33 PM

Um excuse me? Did you just make a AKB/Mai Hime fic?

How dare you make such a clever and awesome crossover!

LOL Well I don't really have much to say but I really love it and I want can't wait for more future updates~ :peace:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 12d - Whole Day Affair] UPDATE! 9/4
Post by: AFLynx on September 07, 2011, 04:11:20 AM

haruhi16: yes please! keep on checking my fic! :thumbsup

takasica: hi takasica! :hee: glad to see that you like my fic! hope you'll read my next update (which I have yet to type btw :err:)

Kid_Alpha: hehe :hee: lol I just thought that Mai fits in the MariMii chapter that's why I added her :P I think she'll be the last Mai Hime character that I will write in my story XD

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 03:59:04 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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CHAPTER 13 - TIE BREAKER

Atsuko hummed softly as she entered the studio after visiting Mariko in her office. She’s been practicing a song that she will sing for their cousin’s wedding. I wish I can finally memorize the lyrics… why did cousin Ami have to pick an English song for her bridal march! Atsuko thought helplessly. Chattering from the other Flag Girls stopped her from her thinking and she looked on curiously. Yukirin saw her come in and motioned her to join in with the conversation.

“Hey minna, what’s up?” Atsuko asked, folding her lyrics sheet and placed it inside her skirt pocket. She noticed that Rena was the center of attention of all the members.

“Glad that you could grace us with your presence, Atsuko-chan.” Yukirin teased. “You see, our Rena here seems to have a crush on someone from the Pit Crew and she is asking for advice from everyone.” She added. Everyone squealed for Rena, making the poor girl blush.

I hope it’s not Takamina, God knows how I would hate to have a rival from our team! Atsuko thought.

“Well, you see Atsuko-chan, I have a crush on Jurina, no… I am in love with Jurina. It’s just that… I don’t know if she feels the same for me. There, I said it. Is everyone happy now?” Rena pouted and blushed even harder when the girls cheered for her.

Atsuko sighed in relief. “Why don’t you just ask her? You were never a shy person when it comes to Jurina-chan.” She suggested.

“*cough* Easy for you to say *cough*” Tomochin mockingly coughed in her hand, making Tomomi and Yukirin laugh.

Rena giggled as she overheard Tomochin. “I don’t want to be the first one to tell her that. I want to know first how she feels for me. I could jinx it or something and I don’t want to look stupid. She’s very special to me and I really don’t want to be overconfident.” Rena mumbled, wriggling the handkerchief in her hand.

“You’re a teaser Atsuko-chan. Maybe you could suggest Rena something that’s subtle and won’t give away with Rena’s intention to Jurina-chan.” Mayu suggested. Atsuko was about to comment on being the tease among the group when she saw Rena’s pleading look.

Atsuko sighed and sat on a nearby chair, deep in thought. Suddenly she brightened up like she had a light bulb moment.

“Okay Rena-chan… this one’s foolproof. When you’re talking with Jurina-chan, place your hand on top of her thigh. Make it low enough so she won’t suspect anything, but high enough so that it’ll definitely gets her thinking. If she thinks of you only as a friend, she won’t blink an eye and just think that it’s a friendly gesture. If she is also interested in you, it’ll be enough to get her juices going.” Atsuko said with a satisfied smile. Everyone in the group stared in wonder at her, making her think that somehow she suggested something overboard.

“Well, that’s my imouto for you! Now I really think that it runs in the family. Mariko onee-chan would agree if she’s here with us.” Yuko joked.

“Sugoi… I never knew you were so devious Atsuko-chan…” Rena said. “Very well, I might as well try it. Thanks for the suggestion!” she added, clapping her hands as she thought of her opportunity to try the suggested plan.

That IS a devious plan. Takamina, why do I suddenly feel sorry for you? Yukirin thought as she looked at Atsuko’s innocent smile.

*****

The more Atsuko thought of her advice, the more she wondered if it would actually work. She thought that what she read from her shoujo mangas and romance novels were so different from real life. There’s only one person that she would certainly try her advice on – Takamina. That may probably work. I’ll get to see if there are negative reactions from Takamina and Rena can tell me if it will work for Jurina-chan.

During lunchtime in the pantry, Atsuko shared a table with her sisters together with Takamina, Haruna and Miichan. Mariko and Miichan were happily giggling and talking while the other two pairs looked at their interaction with amused faces.

“Seriously, if you’re gonna be sweet and lovey dovey with each other further, the rest of us in this table will get a cavity from all that sweetness oozing out from the two of you.” Takamina mumbled, making the rest of the girls in the table laugh at her observation.

“Don’t mind her Mariko, she’s just jealous you know.” Miichan smirked, hugging Mariko even closer to her.

I think I’ll test my suggestion to Rena-chan now. “Well Takamina, it is not really a bad thing since they do like each other, right?” Atsuko smiled at Takamina who was sitting beside her. She leaned towards Takamina a bit and placed her right hand on Takamina’s left thigh. Takamina did not miss Atsuko’s touch and nearly leapt straight up, almost knocking her chair over. Atsuko gaped at Takamina’s reaction.

“A-Acchan… y-your hand…” Takamina stammered. Geez Takamina! Think of something quick! “I-It was c-cold…” she mumbled, sitting back on her chair.

Atsuko faced Takamina and gently rubbed Takamina’s upper arm, making the other girl shiver. “You felt that when you’re wearing your overalls? Are you coming down with a fever Takamina? You feel awfully warm.” Atsuko asked with a concerned tone on her voice. Mariko, Yuko, Miichan and Haruna looked at the two with amused looks on their faces as they just sat and listened to their conversation.

“I’m okay, really!” Takamina stammered, hastily finishing off her katsudon lunch. “Um… listen, I have to go check on some of the cars that needed some tune-up.” She added, standing up from her chair.

“Do you want me to go with you?” Atsuko asked as she was about to stand up as well.

“No!” Takamina said a little more desperate that she intended. “Ano… I mean, you might stain your clothes. You know how dirty it would get when you tune up a car.” Takamina added as she made her way outside the pantry towards the garage.

“That’s a lame excuse…” Miichan mumbled, earning a playful slap on the arm from Mariko. All Atsuko could do was stare at Takamina’s retreating form, wondering what had just happened. Suddenly they heard someone knock off a chair at the other table beside them and saw Jurina-chan awkwardly walk out of the pantry. Rena was staring at Jurina who seems to be in a hurry to get out of the pantry as well.

Yuko stared at the door and gave Atsuko a thumb’s up. “Hahahaha! It seems that your advice worked Acchan!” she bemused at her sister who was still curious to what just happened.

*****

After lunch when everyone finally went on with their tasks for the day, Rena tapped Atsuko’s shoulder when they were at the lounge area of the studio.

“It worked,” Rena simply said.

“How do you know?” Atsuko asked, trying to conceal her curiosity.

“I placed my hand on her thigh just as you said while we were chatting during lunch. I swear, Jurina-chan stood up like she felt something hot! You saw her walk out of the pantry like there’s no tomorrow, right Atsuko-chan? I don’t want to expect much but at least it gave me an idea that Jurina-chan likes me too. I hope she’ll find the courage to finally ask me out on a date.” Rena said excitedly, clasping her hands on her chest.

The whole time Rena was talking, Atsuko’s eyes were getting wider by the second.

“Acchan, our dresses finally arrived! You can try them on so that the seamstress can check if it fits. Yuko-chan is already trying hers on inside the dressing room.” Mariko said, walking towards their direction, holding a dress bag. Atsuko snapped from her wandering thoughts and excused herself to Rena as she walked towards her sister.

*****

Takamina almost dragged herself to the studio after checking almost all the race cars inside the garage. Seriously, Acchan is in her teasing mood today. Takamina thought as she shivered, remembering how Atsuko’s touch affected her. Upon entering the studio, she saw Haruna and Miichan sitting at the lounge area, together with the other members of the Pit Crew. She saw that the Flag Girls was busy bustling about, looking at Yuko and Mariko wearing pristine gowns.

“Hey everyone, what’s going on in here? And why is Yuko-chan and Mariko-chan wearing gowns? Is there a photoshoot or something?” Takamina asked as she sat beside Haruna, placing her big notebook on her lap.

“They don’t have a photoshoot. Mariko told me that their cousin is getting married and they are the bridesmaids. Mariko is an exception because she is the maid of honor since she is almost the same age as their cousin.” Miichan informed her, eyeing Mariko who was wearing a light blue, strapless long gown.

“Hmmm… the gown fits perfectly for Yuko.” Haruna simply said as she looked at Yuko wearing a light blue empire cut gown that flows smoothly just past her knees.

“Atsuko-chan is still wearing hers inside the dressing room.” Jurina added as she stared at Rena who was with the other Flag Girls, busy chatting with Mariko and Yuko.

“Ne, Jurina-chan… why were you in a hurry to leave the pantry during our lunch?” Sae asked as she placed a tea set given to her by Yukirin on the coffee table.

Jurina blushed at Sae’s question. “Well, I just got flustered when Rena placed her hand on my thigh.” She mumbled, as her answered earned an earful of teasing from the Pit Crew members inside the studio.

“Hahaha! I think that’s her way of telling you that she likes you!” Sayaka suggested. Takamina almost choked on her tea when she heard the comment.

“Really? It’s good then because, I like her too.” Jurina answered honestly. Her answer made the Pit Crew holler while the rest of the Flag Girls looked at them with curious looks on their faces.

“Just ask her out then. I’m sure she’ll say yes since based on what you said, the feeling’s mutual.” Takamina suggested.

“You’re the one to talk Takamina…” Haruna teased her cousin then motioned Takamina to pour her another cup of tea.

Takamina blushed at the teasing and grabbed the teapot while Haruna still held on her cup on the table.

“Say when, Haruna.” Takamina simply said and began pouring the tea.

Everyone on the lounge area looked at the Flag Girls as they squealed at the direction of the dressing room. Takamina furrowed her eyebrows as everyone around her turned to watch the other girls huddled Atsuko when she got out of the dressing room. Takamina opened her mouth as if to speak but no sound came out when Atsuko finally came to her view.

“When… Takamina… when!… WHEN!!!” Haruna shouted, pulling her hand away from the overflowing teacup.

Takamina stopped her gawking just before she had poured all the contents of the teapot to the coffee table. She was awestruck not just because Atsuko’s gown fits perfectly, but mostly from Atsuko’s beauty.

Atsuko shyly stepped beside her sisters who were smiling in approval of her gown. She is also wearing a light blue gown which has a different style from her sisters. Takamina’s gaze started at Atsuko’s feet, which was enclosed in silver strappy stilettos, up to Atsuko’s light blue haltered gown which moderately covered her ample chest. Takamina’s eyes widened when she saw that the gown has slits past above the knee that shows Atsuko’s smooth legs as she walked. Takamina blushed at the sight, and then she began to notice that everyone around her is also staring at Atsuko.

“Oi minna… quit staring at her.” Takamina hissed. Haruna smirked at Takamina’s obvious over-protectiveness.

“But… just look at her!” Sae stammered, earning a glare from Yukirin who is ready to throw a makeup brush towards her direction. Takamina simply smiled, knowing what Sae is talking about.

*****

“Onee-chan, are you sure that this gown looks good on me?” Atsuko shyly asked Mariko, looking on at the seamstress bustled around her, placing pins for the final fitting while Yukirin styled her hair in a braided fashion that she likes as she suggested that Atsuko have her hair styled and her makeup done to complete her look.

Mariko raised an eyebrow and looked at Yuko who is also sporting the same expression. “It does look good on you Acchan. If you need more proof, just look at the Pit Crew looking at you.” Mariko pointed to where the Pit Crew is sitting, specifically pointing towards Takamina.

“I’m just not sure anymore onee-chan, especially when it comes to Takamina. Her facial expression is really amusing especially when she is flustered and all but I just couldn’t tell the expression in her eyes.” Atsuko whined, looking at Takamina.

“Excuse me from butting in this sister talk Mariko-chan,” Yukirin said as she tilted Atsuko’s face to put some liquid eyeliner on Atsuko’s eyelids. “Seriously Atsuko-chan, for someone who we call The Ace in the Flag Girls team, you sure know how to nurture insecurity when it comes to Takamina.” Yukirin observed, making Mariko and Yuko giggle.

Atsuko pouted then looked again at the subject of their conversation. She furrowed her eyebrows as Takamina opened her notebook and began scribbling at it while looking at her. “Okay, here’s the question for you three – what do you see when Takamina looks at me?” Atsuko asked, making Mariko, Yuko and Yukirin look at the subject of their conversation.

“You know what Acchan… it’s either you’re totally clueless or you’re just playing dumb.” Yuko mumbled, still looking at Takamina. “It’s pretty obvious that she’s looking at you because you’re beautiful…”

“Or… there’s something more in her eyes…” Mariko added cryptically.

“You’re not really helping…” Atsuko pouted.

“Maybe, just maybe… Takamina is looking at you through love’s eyes.” Yukirin answered as she put some blush powder on Atsuko’s cheeks.

Love’s eyes… Atsuko wondered.

*****

After the seamtress finally finished checking the fit of the sisters’ gowns, the Flag Girls decided to have their personal photoshoot with them with the help of Amina, the head photographer. Atsuko thanked the heavens above when she changed back in her clothes and handed her gown to the seamstress. As she exited the dressing room, she noticed that Takamina is the only one left at the lounge area, still concentrating on her notebook. I wonder why she didn’t headed back to the garage like the others… Atsuko thought and walked her way towards Takamina.

Takamina noticed Atsuko making her way towards her direction and suddenly closed the notebook and hid it behind her back. Atsuko noticed this and raised her eyebrows.

“Care to share what’s inside that big notebook of yours, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na?” Atsuko asked as sat directly in front of Takamina.

“Well, I don’t mean to be rude Acchan, but it is kinda private…” Takamina stammered.

Atsuko pouted at Takamina’s response. “Mou~ are you telling me that you don’t trust me?”

“Ah, Iie… it’s just that… I know I’ll get embarrassed when you take a look at it.”

Atsuko tapped her chin for a few seconds then gave Takamina a devilish smile. “Okay then… how about we play a game for it. If you lose, I’ll get to take a peek on that notebook. If you win, it’s your decision if you want me to take a look or not.”

Takamina sighed at Atsuko’s suggestion. Why are you so curious on what’s inside the notebook? “Okay… what kind of game would you like to play?”

“Staring contest.” Atsuko simply answered.

*****

Yukirin entered the studio after visiting Sae in the garage. Her ears perked up with interest as she heard Atsuko answered Takamina.

Oh ho ho! Another staring contest between Atsuko-chan and Takamina? Yukirin, your timing is almost always perfect. What’s the score again….

Takamina – 1 Atsuko – 1

Hehe, I hope this will break the tie between those two. Yukirin thought and decided to just observe as she leaned at the door.

*****

At Atsuko’s signal, the staring contest finally began. They didn’t decide on any specific rules about their game and that’s why Atsuko decided to distract Takamina by batting her eyelashes and biting her lower lip, remembering how Takamina reacted when she first did it.

“Acchan, are you trying to distract me?” Takamina grinned as she stared at Atsuko.

“Hehe, I’m just trying my luck… Are you hiding something special inside that notebook?”

Takamina raised an eyebrow at her question. “Well yeah, it is somehow special to me.”

Atsuko huffed at Takamina’s plain response. This staring contest will take longer than I expected. I wonder if Takamina is already immune to my constant teasing… maybe not. Atsuko thought.

“What are you grinning about all of a sudden?” Takamina asked.

“Nothing… it’s just that, I just thought how giddy you were during lunch. Why did you suddenly ran towards the garage?” Atsuko asked.

It’s because of what you make me feel, Acchan… “Like I said during lunch, the race cars needs some tuning up.” Takamina replied.

Atsuko narrowed her eyes as she stared at Takamina’s eyes. Somehow I don’t believe that Takamina. Oh, I know! I’ll ask a question that will really make her lose. “Ne, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na… am I pretty?” Atsuko innocently asked and batted her eyelashes again.

Gah! What’s with the question? “To tell you honestly, you’re far from pretty Acchan.” Takamina said with a matter-of-fact tone.

Atsuko’s eyes widened, and is now trying to contain her irritation towards Takamina’s response. I hope she’s not insinuating that… “Are you saying that I’m ugly?!”

Takamina giggled at Atsuko’s reaction, realizing that Atsuko somehow interpreted her answer in a negative way. Takamina gave Atsuko a gentle smile, then reached at some stray strands of Atsuko’s hair and tucked it neatly beside her ear. “What I’m trying to say is that you’re not just pretty… you’re beautiful in my eyes Acchan.” Takamina whispered, never taking her eyes off of Atsuko.

Atsuko blinked at Takamina’s answer and is trying to stop the sudden rush of warmth that is traveling fast to her face. What’s this? Her gaze seems to penetrate to my very soul… do you look at me with love’s eyes Takamina? Atsuko thought as she closed her eyes and lowered her head to hide her blush. Her eyes immediately opened when Atsuko realized what she just did.

“Looks like Takamina won the staring contest.” Yukirin whispered, mentally patting Takamina on the back.

Takamina grabbed her notebook and stood up, extending her hand to Atsuko. Atsuko appreciated that Takamina was not someone who would rub her victory into someone’s face.

“I promise Acchan, I’ll let you look inside my notebook. I haven’t finished most what’s in it. Once I’m done, you’ll be the first one to know.” Takamina said. Atsuko merely grabbed Takamina’s hand in silence as she stood up. “Come on, let’s check what your sisters and my cousins are up to. If we’re lucky, they might invite us to go to Berry Parlour for an afternoon snack.”

“Is this gonna be a date?” Atsuko asked sweetly as they slowly walked towards the exit of the studio.

“A-acchan…” Takamina whined as her cheeks suddenly became pink.

Atsuko inwardly giggled, as she hooked her right arm on Takamina’s left and intertwined their fingers. At least I know my teasing still has the same effect to Takamina. “Just kidding Takamina. It’ll be a group date then!”

“Oi.” Takamina simply responded and smiled as she heard Atsuko’s laughter.

*****

As Takamina and Atsuko made their way out of the studio, they didn’t notice Yukirin who was resting her back beside the door as they walked. Yukirin smiled at the two’s interaction and quietly entered the studio to gather her things inside the makeup room.

“No one can really compete with someone who looks at you with love’s eyes.” Yukirin mused. “Takamina sure scored a lot of points in Atsuko-chan’s book with her answers. Now I know who broke the tie that has been nagging me for weeks.” She chuckled.

Takamina – 2 Atsuko - 1

To be continued...

Oooooh! This is the 250th post in this fic! :wahaha:

Finally! An update! :sweat: :onioncheer: :on drink: I decided to break the tie between Takamina x Acchan's staring contest. Were you also expecting that Takamina will win? :hehehe: Anyway, just to inform everyone, I won't be elaborating regarding my WMatsui pairing in this story. I just thought of the pair so that it'll fit in this chapter. :hee: As always, if there are great feedbacks regarding it, I might consider inserting the pair to some chapters, but of course I'll be concentrating on our main 3 pairs in the story.

I hope you like this chapter! I would really love to read what everyone thought of this :luvluv2: Thanks for supporting my fic! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: blughise on September 10, 2011, 04:15:45 AM

I've been waiting for this!!! XD
Yah, I so totally see Takamina winning the staring contest :grin:

Acchan is slowly realizing Takamina's feeling for her! AWESOME!!!
Hurry up and confess to her Takamina!
And I'm also curious on what the content of that notebook.... I'm guessing it could be poems or sketchs of Atsuko since Takamina is pretty good with drawing.
Thanks for the update and update as soon as you can

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 04:23:17 AM

blughise: :onioncheer: wow you read it rather quickly! :luvluv2: Hehe, I know you'll love this chapter since this is Atsumina-centric :P Well, Takamina will also let us glimpse on what's inside her notebook once she's done :bingo: Hopefully, I'll be able to write the next chapter later on tonight :on study:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: blughise on September 10, 2011, 04:37:04 AM

Hehehe...I'm a fast reader and abit fast updater too :P
I'll be waiting patiently for the next update then!!!! Ganbarre :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on September 10, 2011, 04:54:53 AM

It has finally came
Takamina has won the staring contest
I also wonder what is in the notebook
Can't wait for next chapter
Please update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 05:00:08 AM

Ninjatigerdemon: :luvluv2: thanks for reading my fic! Regarding the notebook, I might leave everyone hanging about that for a couple of chapters more :kekeke: Thanks for the feedback! :nya:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: Flean on September 10, 2011, 05:26:46 AM

Gah!!! :mon inluv: I've been waiting for takamina and Acchan staring contest again... :shy1:

I can't stop grinning while reading the staring scene... :shy2:

Thanks for this awesome update... I cant wait for takamina to confess... :on lol:

please make a romantic date between those two~~ :luvluv1:

hope you update soon~~ :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 05:39:33 AM

Flean: :hee: glad you liked this chapter! Hehe, my fave scene in this chapter is when Atsuko placed her hand on Takamina's thigh. I was laughing while typing this when I imagined what would Takamina would look like if it is like a TV drama :on lol:
I'll definitely make a romantic date for our pair! But I'm gonna give them a very hard time before they go out on a date :kekeke: *evil laugh*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: JPopLover on September 10, 2011, 06:23:09 AM

:D awww soo kawaii!! hehe looks like Takamina won ^^ I have a feeling that her notebook may just be a very important symbol in the future ;D lol Look at Miichan and Mariko being all lovey-dovey already ^-^ such a cute couple =3 I hope Miichan plans on asking Mariko on another date soon so that she can also ask her to be her girlfriend in some cliche romantic way xD Hope you update soon! :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: arisa03 on September 10, 2011, 06:29:06 AM

Takaman smooooth. LOL. Acchan sure is such a sadist LOL. totally totally an S. LOL. This was awesome! XDDD! tie breaker... Somehow I look forward to Acchan's revenge of sorts LOL. Update soon! ; v ;

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 06:43:19 AM

JPopLover: lol yes, the notebook has a significance in my future chapters (hint hint! :mon hobo:) Romantic dates are always cliche and yes, they will have another date. I'll keep everyone posted regarding that. :mon geek:

arisa03: Hi arisa-chan! :mon hi: lol Acchan is not really a sadist... more like a teaser or devilish :mon bat: hehe, I know there'll be readers who will expect Acchan to win in the staring contest that's why I decided to give it a twist :mon heh: I hope you liked how it turned out though. :mon innocent:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: Haruko on September 10, 2011, 07:19:23 AM

i think than acchan gonna to win you know a princess teaser.. but oh! surprise.. i like it :D im waiting the next episode :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 08:32:21 AM

Haruko: Hi Haruko! Glad you liked the surprise in the chapter :hee: :luvluv2: I won't promise that I'll post the next chapter immediately but I can assure you that I can work on it as soon as possible. :) thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: immortal_K on September 10, 2011, 09:07:44 AM

WOW 2 in 1, nice going Acchan keke 1 advice that worked on bother Takamina and Jurina keke, yay some W Matsui interaction too.

Laughing at Takamina when Acchan came out with her gown, some one totally threw a Pacifism on her (enchanted creature can't block or attack) in her case, fail to react after being captured by Acchan. Almost burnt Haruna's hand too keke.

The cousins are winning with a lead of 4 to 1 after this tie breaker :lol:

Thanks for the update, don't stay up too late next time sleeping so early is not good for you =P

Please update soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: leftielove on September 10, 2011, 09:13:27 AM

Oh-ho, a final tie breaker. I didn't expect Takamina to win it, though I love Atsuko's reaction. I love how Yukirin always happens to be around when that happens xD

I like how everyone is coming together. thanks for the update =D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: Sydney W on September 10, 2011, 01:23:40 PM

keep up with the next chapter... thanks

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: haruhi16 on September 10, 2011, 05:13:13 PM

LOL @ the staring contest!! wooooh! please update soon!! :panic: :panic: :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 10, 2011, 06:45:09 PM

immortal_K: lol you know Atsuko she is one "Enchantment" uh... I mean, Enchantress :nervous I wish I could see that scene in some sort of a drama... I wanna be the director if there's such a dorama that exists :mon blowhorn:
I'm thinking that it'll be the last installment of a staring contest here in my story so we don't really need to keep score. :mon sweat:
Hehe, I'll also try not to stay up late till early in the morning :dizzy:
Thank you so much for reading it!

leftielove: hehe, that's the twist for the tie breaker :bingo: I always like to get away from what's expected to add surprise to my story :hee: Regarding Yukirin's appearances during staring contests, I intended her to be always there since I started writing the 1st staring contest (MariMii) XD
Thanks for reading my update! :luvluv2:

Sydney W: I'll try to update as soon as I can :on study: Thanks for reading! :luvluv2:

haruhi16: I'm happy you like my update! Thanks for reading! As I have said, I'll try to work on an update as soon as I can :prayers:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: arisa03 on September 10, 2011, 07:50:27 PM

Yes! i liked it! Shy Acchan forever welcome xD. I think when it comes to Acchan, sadist/tease/tsundere are an all in one. XDDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: 2448 on September 12, 2011, 10:43:46 AM

Hey! i'm a new reader of yours. And I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE the plot and your writings.
Nice work and i cant wait for the next chapter of yours. :twothumbs :thumbup

:banghead: I cant wait for takamina's confession!!!!
Thanks for your updates!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 12, 2011, 12:02:25 PM

2448: Hi 2448! :hee: I'm glad to know that YOU LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE the plot of my story! :on GJ: I'll try my best to keep this fic more interesting in the future chapters :on study: thanks for your comment! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: immortal_K on September 13, 2011, 10:32:06 AM

yup Acchan is one scary "Enchantress" keke,

You always stay up till "early" in the morning! lol but I do that a lot too haha

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 13, 2011, 11:17:52 AM

immortal_K: lol yup, and if I'm Takamina, I won't complain :P
Lol, so you're a night owl as well eh? :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: immortal_K on September 13, 2011, 12:15:42 PM

I see you online :lol:

RAWR! yup night immortal bwhahahahahaha, I don't think I will complain either keke

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: kahem on September 13, 2011, 07:16:27 PM

Ahahaha the advice is nice ;)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 13 - Tie Breaker] UPDATE! 9/10
Post by: AFLynx on September 14, 2011, 05:08:14 AM

kahem: hehehe, I think Acchan read it in a Teasing 101 book or something :P thanks for the comment as always!

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 15, 2011, 08:27:46 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 14a – Pre-Wedding Pinch

Yuko paced inside the studio, biting her nails while clutching her cellphone. Tomorrow’s the wedding of their cousin Ami, and Yuko received the bad news that the instrumentalists she hired for the ceremony backed out. Why did Acchan and I agree to take charge of the music in her wedding? Oh right, it’s because Ami batted her eyelashes on us… seriously, I’m beginning to think it runs in the family! She groaned. Atsuko stared at her, thinking that the rug that Yuko is walking on is already wearing thin at the rate she’s going.

“Onee-chan… you’re making me dizzy...” Atsuko mumbled and sulked at the chair.

Yuko stopped from her pacing and stared incredulously at her sister. “Why are you so calm at a time like this? Ami is expecting us to provide some instrumentalist for the ceremony, and YOU are expected to sing once she stepped inside the church.”

“I’m calm because it means that I don’t have to sing during the wedding! I can just sit back and relax just like a normal bridesmaid.” Atsuko reasoned as she stretched her arms and legs. “And besides, we agreed with her that if we encounter any problems with her request, we can just pop in a CD in a stereo and play the song that she requested.”

“I won’t hear any of it. We will get an earful from onee-chan and from mom and dad. Honestly, I don’t even want to talk to Ami about it. She’s being a bridezilla right now and onee-chan is already trying her best to keep her calm. I wish I pursued my piano lessons further when we were kids.” Yuko sighed and stared at the music sheets that are laid on a coffee table besides where Atsuko was sitting. “Think Yuko… THINK!” Yuko said out loud, tapping her cellphone on her forehead. Her eyes widened when she suddenly remembered…

“Alright, give me a word then.” Haruna asked.

"Music." Yuko said.

"Ummm... Violin." Haruna simply answered.

"You have to tell me why you remembered violin silly." Yuko giggled.

"Oh!" Haruna giggled along with her. "I played the violin since I was six years old. Takamina and Miichan played other instruments as well. Our grandma insisted we learn a musical instrument...“

Yuko grinned at the memory, “Perfect.” Yuko simply said and looked at Atsuko mischievously as she flipped her cellphone open.

“Spill it out onee-chan. I can hear the gears in your head turning.” Atsuko said suddenly thinking that she won’t really get to relax during their cousin’s wedding.

“Memorize the song Acchan. I know a certain group that’ll be perfect for providing the music at the wedding.” Yuko simply said and punched a very familiar number in her phone. Atsuko sighed and grabbed the music sheets to resume her practice.

*****

Haruna parked Gakutenou with ease as they arrived at the parking lot of the headquarters. Just as she was about to turn off the engine, the mini screen on the car’s console suddenly came to life, surprising the three cousins.

“Good morning Angels!” Midori chirped, waving at the screen in front of them.

“Um… I don’t think we need to say Good morning Charlie! Midori-sensei. Besides, Charlie didn’t even show his face in the movie.” Miichan mumbled.

“You are such a killjoy like Takamina, Miichan.” Midori pouted. “Anyway, I have a special assignment for you three…”

“Isn’t this a special assignment already?” Takamina asked.

“Yes it is, but we received some information from the Intel that is linked to what you are currently investigating right now. One of our agents assigned in Russia informed the headquarters that Solntsevskaya Bratva seems to have connections in our country and have been smuggling firearms since the brotherhood was formed. What’s interesting about this is that the name of the gang is included in the contacts of the Yamamoto brothers that you were able to get from their warehouse.” Midori explained.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan looked at each other and frowned. “Isn’t that group one of the most powerful mafia in Russia? So, what do you want us to do Midori-sensei?” Takamina asked.

Midori giggled as she saw the serious looks the three cousins are sporting. “You’re right about that fact Takamina. I’m asking you to do what are expected for agents of your caliber.” She answered. “The mafia is expected to enter the country via an uncharted plane tomorrow at two in the morning, and will land at a private airstrip. I already sent you the details of the location in your e-mail.”

The three cousins groaned at what they heard. “Mou, Midori-sensei! You should have informed us sooner so that we could’ve prepared ourselves!” Haruna complained.

Midori looked at her watch and showed it to them. “It’s just 9 o’ clock in the morning… that means you still have 17 hours to prepare and go to the location. I’m sure you know how to manage your time well.” Midori winked.

Miichan huffed and unbuckled her seatbelt. “Well in that case Midori-sensei, we’d better get going. We’re still race drivers of the AKB48 team and we have a job to do. We’ll review the details in Haruna’s tablet in between work.”

“Great! I know the Agency can count on you!” Midori exclaimed, giving them a thumbs up. “Oh before I forget, I left a parcel in front of your apartment. I have this nagging feeling that you’ll find it useful. Don’t forget to use Gakutenou. Give us a call if you need backup. Ja ne!” Midori said, giving them a small salute before she cut off the communication that prompted the screen to turn off.

Haruna slouched on the car seat. “Wow, the Yamamoto brothers sure knows a lot of dangerous people. This is gonna be a big break in our career if we are to catch one of the big fish in that mafia.”

“We have to be careful in this operation though. Since they are gonna import firearms, I bet both the parties are gonna be well-armed.” Takamina added.

“We’ll just have to talk about this later. This means we have to be discreet to everyone when we talk about it, especially to Mariko, Yuko and Acchan.” Miichan said. As Haruna turned off the engine and pulled out the key from the ignition, her phone buzzed inside her pocket.

“Moshi moshi? Good morning Yuko… we’re already here at the parking lot... Okay, see you in a few.” Haruna mumbled and pressed the end call button.

“Yuko wants to talk to us and asked us to wait for her in the garage… I wonder why her voice seemed to be in between panic and excitement.” Haruna shrugged as the three of them got out of the car.

*****

NYANNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!

Yuko squealed in delight as she ran towards Haruna then launched herself to the other girl’s body, clinging like there is no tomorrow.

“Gah! Uh… nice to see you too Yuko.” Haruna wheezed holding the other girl to keep in balance. Takamina and Miichan simply giggled at the exchange which has become an everyday occurrence.

“So Yuko-chan, Haruna here told us that you have something to tell us…” Miichan said.

“Oh! Right…” Yuko said then jumped down from Haruna’s embrace. “Acchan and I are in a pinch. The instrumentalists for the wedding of our cousin backed out and it’s too late for me to find a replacement. Haruna told me that you all play musical instruments, would that be right?” Yuko said.

“Uh… yeah…” Takamina answered.

“Wonderful! I am hoping that you would help us. The wedding is tomorrow at 8 o’ clock in the morning. You just have to play when the entourage enters and play another song once our cousin enters. Here’s the music sheets, I’ve already photocopied for each one of you.” Yuko said, handing out a folder to Haruna. Haruna flipped through the sheets for her cousins to see.

“Hmmm… I think we can manage to play these without practicing. The song for the entourage is quite common and I’ve already heard the song for the bride. Who will be your soloist?” Takamina said, glancing through the sheets.

Yuko giggled, “That’s for me to know and for you to find out. Just think… it’ll be an opportunity for all of you to see us in our gowns again.” She winked.

Miichan imagined Mariko in her gown, “Now who could say no to that offer? I’m in.” she said, giving Yuko thumbs up.

“Where’s the wedding gonna take place?” Haruna asked.

“It will be held at the St. Therese Parish Church which is an hour away from here. It’ll be a Catholic wedding since my cousin and the groom are Catholics.” Yuko answered.

The three cousins smiled at the information. “We know the place. We’ll be there early.” Takamina simply answered.

“Yatta! Thanks minna! I know I could count on you! I’ll inform Sayaka-chan so that you’ll all be excused in coming to work tomorrow. Keep this a secret from Mariko ‘nee-chan and Acchan – I want to surprise them as well. Anyway, I’m off to check if the soloist has already practiced the song. NyanNyan, I’ll see you at lunch!” Yuko hugged Haruna then skipped her way to the studio.

The three cousins blinked at Yuko’s retreating form then sighed. “Now that she’s solved her problem, I think now we are the ones who are in a pinch. We have to manage our time to finish the operation and at the same time be early for the wedding…” Haruna groaned. Takamina and Miichan simply sighed and nodded.

*****

During lunchtime, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan made sure to spend the 1 hour break with Mariko, Yuko and Acchan. The three cousins were edgy in reviewing the information in Haruna’s tablet that they immediately excused themselves once lunch was over. They would meet up on a secluded corner in the garage and huddle as they browsed through Haruna’s tablet. It is quite a busy day so nobody seemed to mind them talking discreetly, except for Mariko and Atsuko.

Mariko noticed that Miichan wasn’t able to visit her in her office today. It has been a daily routine that Miichan would just visit her in the office and keep her company. I miss my Miichan, she thought, staring at the stack of papers in distaste.

Atsuko find Takamina a little too skittish whenever she would go to talk to the three cousins. Takamina is acting weird as if she and her cousins are hiding something, she thought.

Yuko on the other hand, assumed that the three cousins are just busy reviewing the music sheets and paid them no mind to what they are doing. I bet they are already reviewing the song... might as well leave them be, she thought.

The day finally ended and Takamina, Haruna and Miichan were too eager to leave early, much to Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko’s dismay.

“Gomen ne Mariko, we have to leave as soon as possible. I’m sorry I wasn’t able to visit you a while ago.” Miichan said, holding Mariko’s hand.

Mariko smiled at Miichan’s thoughtfulness. “Apology accepted. You can make it up to me after our cousin’s wedding.” She winked and gave Miichan a kiss on the cheek.

Yuko lunged at Haruna and hugged her tight. “NyanNyan, I’m gonna miss you! I’ll see you after our cousin’s wedding.” Yuko winked at Haruna and kissed her cheek as well.

“Right, I’ll see you after the wedding.” Haruna simply answered trying hard not to blush. Why is she keeping it a secret anyway?

“You’ve been avoiding me today, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na…” Atsuko said as she walked in front of Takamina, sporting a dangerous smile on her face.

Gulp. “Ah… whatever gave you that idea Acchan? I… uh… I was just discussing some erm… family matters with Haruna and Miichan, that’s why we seemed so preoccupied today.” Takamina answered as an excuse.

Atsuko narrowed her eyes at Takamina then placed both of her hands on Takamina’s face. “Since we’re not going to work tomorrow, you should behave yourself while I’m away.” Atsuko teased as she squeezed Takamina’s face with her palms.

Isn’t that supposed to be my line? “Mou! Stop squeezing my face.” Takamina pouted then Atsuko released her hands from Takamina’s face. “Alright, if you say so Atsuko hime-sama, I’ll be in my best behavior.” She replied, then jogged to keep up her pace to her cousins who were headed to the parking lot.

Atsuko waited until Takamina was a few meters away from the group then shouted, “Takamina! You forgot your kiss from me!” she bellowed. Takamina almost lost her footing which made everyone laugh.

*****

At the cousins’ apartment…

“Bulletproof vests?”

“Check.”

“Hand guns?”

“Check.”

“Communicators?”

“Check.”

“Dresses for the wedding…?”

“Che-… wait, what?!” Miichan blurted out, giving Haruna a surprised look then stared at the checklist that Haruna is holding.

“Do you expect us to wear the same clothes that we’ll wear in the operation for the wedding? We’ll stand out by being stinky.” Haruna reasoned, twirling her pencil in between her fingers.

“Where did you get all these dresses in a short amount of time?” Takamina asked as she hanged their dresses on a wall mounted rack.

“I contacted Okaa-san to do the shopping for us and gave our sizes. She was very much happy to do it since she’s going shopping anyway. Her secretary delivered it to the garage while you two were still busy working.” Haruna replied.

Takamina sat beside Haruna and Miichan then began opening the parcel from Midori. “I wonder what’s inside this parcel…” she mused.

Once opened, Takamina took out three sunglasses which are carefully wrapped in individual bubble wraps and a plastic bag containing what seemed like Ping-Pong balls with a sticky note stapled at the bag.

“Warning: use sunglasses when you use these. These balls are flashy and go with a Bang!” Miichan read out loud.

“Oooo… are you thinking what I’m thinking these are?” Takamina asked, raising the bag in front of Haruna and Miichan.

“Hehe, I think we’ll have fun using those.” Miichan replied, wiggling her eyebrows.

“I must say, Midori-sensei has taste. She customized these designer sunglasses for us to wear.” Haruna said as she tried on one of the Ray-Ban Aviator shades. “Wow, the lens of these sunglasses automatically adjusts to the brightness of our surroundings!” she exclaimed as she tilted her head up the ceiling then stared at the room light.

Takamina also tried one on and stared at the darkness outside their window. “Whoa! It even automatically adjusts to night vision!” she exclaimed, surprised that her vision adjusted into a green hue that usually is emitted from a standard night vision goggles.

“Perfect combination if you ask me! We have to add something that we could use for hand to hand combat.” Miichan said then grabbed Haruna’s pencil, scribbling additional items to their checklist.

“Nice idea! It’ll avoid fatalities and we can have those goons arrested once we’re through clobbering them.” Haruna giggled.

“Yosh! Let’s just double check everything so that we can rest early. It’s almost ten o’ clock and we need to at least get an hour’s rest. We don’t want to be late on our appointment.” Takamina winked and they all busied themselves in preparing their things.

*****

Meanwhile, inside Mariko, Yuko and Acchan’s bedroom…

Yuko hummed a happy tune much to Mariko’s amusement and Atsuko’s annoyance. “You seemed to be in a happy mood Yuko-chan, what gives?” Mariko asked as she brushed her hair.

“I finally got a replacement for the instrumentalists that back out for the wedding.” Yuko grinned.

“That’s wonderful news, isn’t it Acchan?” Mariko teased, nudging her sister who was sitting beside her on her bed, pouting.

“Mou~ Yuko nee-chan, you are such a killjoy.” Atsuko groaned, clutching a pillow.

“Everyone in the family is expecting you to sing Acchan… or would you rather face the wrath of Ami the Bridezilla?” Yuko asked.

“No thank you.” Atsuko mumbled. Mariko placed her brush on top of her bed side table then looked at Atsuko. “Are you sure you’re not just pouting because you’re going to sing at the wedding?” Mariko asked raising an eyebrow.

“Hehehe, I think our imouto is just missing someone who won’t be at the wedding tomorrow.” Yuko teased and gave Mariko a wink.

Atsuko simply huffed at Yuko’s answer and transferred on her own bed. Yuko smiled at her sister then playfully bounced on Atsuko’s bed which Mariko immediately followed and sandwiched their youngest sister on the middle of the bed.

“Don’t worry Acchan. Who knows… Takamina might just show up at the church during the wedding.” Yuko hinted. You’re in for some surprise tomorrow Acchan… you too, Mariko ‘nee-chan.

Atsuko furrowed her brows at Yuko, “Are you trying to tell me something?”

“What I’m trying to tell you is that if you wish hard enough, you might get your wish.” Yuko smiled then headed to her own bed.

“Okay, enough of that. We need to sleep if we want to look our best tomorrow. Oyasumi nasai, Yuko, Acchan.” Mariko said, shutting off the main light of their room then turned on a bedside lamp.

“Oyasumi.” Yuko and Atsuko answered.

I wish… Atsuko whispered before she succumbed to the sandman’s call.

To be continued...

This is a long chapter so I decided to cut it into two parts. If I waited for myself to finish this, it would've taken me another day or so to post the complete chapter... and because of my excitement, I also decided to post this part... at 2 am in the morning :dizzy: lol
I hope everyone likes this update! :whistle: :hee: :luvluv2: :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: Flean on September 16, 2011, 12:44:42 AM

gah!!! :luvluv2: another interesting chapter.... :on GJ:

i cant wait for the wedding and the special assignment... :on comhere:

mariko and acchan gonna be surprise~~ :on lol:

update soon please~~ :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: blughise on September 16, 2011, 12:47:51 AM

VERY VERY NICE CHAPTER!!!!
Will get to see some action and romance for the next chapter for sure!!!!

I so can't wait for the next udpate!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: JPopLover on September 16, 2011, 01:34:39 AM

I can't wait ^^ wonder what's gonna happen next? =O soo exciting xD lol Thanks for updating and hope you update soon :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: arisa03 on September 16, 2011, 03:40:40 AM

that wish is definitely going to come true. xD So much badassery and epicness soon. I want to see Takamina screw up like a boss cause she's too busy watching singing Acchan. <3<3<3 Update soon!! xDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: immortal_K on September 16, 2011, 03:46:24 AM

Thanks for the update!!!!!

WOw they have a mission then have to make it to the wedding tooo, hope everything goes smoothly for them
and for the cousins to impress their girls :twothumbs

Please update soon!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: haruhi16 on September 16, 2011, 04:25:36 AM

Nice update!!! Another nice chapter you have there AFLynx!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup

I can't wait for the next chapter!! can't wait to see Acchan and Mariko's reaction of Yuko's surprise !!

UPDATE SOON!! :thumbsup :thumbsup :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 16, 2011, 05:25:57 AM

Flean: Yup, Mariko and Atsuko are gonna be surprised in the next chapter :on lol:

blughise: I'm very glad that you liked the update! :luvluv2: yes, there will be action and romance in the next chapter! :on asmo:

JPopLover: I'll keep everyone wondering for a day or so before I post the next update :kekeke: :hee:

arisa03: Hi arisa-chan :mon hi: ! Hehe, let's see if Takamina can multi-task during the wedding... she might just surprise us... :glasses:

immortal_K: haha, just read your tweet a couple of minutes ago (and replied to it) :P XD I hope they managed their time well to make it to the wedding early.

haruhi16: Thanks haruhi-chan! :luvluv2: I did wonder about that too. I'm already imagining the three sisters in their gowns :on bleed: :mon blood:

Thank you everyone for your comments! :mon cute: I'll do my best to update the next installment as soon as possible :mon determined: :mon study: I hope everyone enjoyed reading this! I would like to hear/read from the other members as well! Thanks again! :kneelbow: :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: arisa03 on September 16, 2011, 05:27:05 AM

Muli-tasking... Takamina must be good with her hands. 8DDD I did not mean anything by that all. LOL I can't wait for the update! xDDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 16, 2011, 05:58:47 AM

arisa03: I know what you mean arisa-chan :on lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: kahem on September 16, 2011, 08:45:12 AM

Can't wait for the wedding ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 16, 2011, 12:04:34 PM

kahem: currently writing the next part since it's downtime here at work! XD thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: Haruko on September 17, 2011, 06:32:54 AM

the next chapter goona be epic!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: 2448 on September 17, 2011, 06:54:35 AM

:bleed eyes: I HOPE THEY WILL REACH THE WEDDING CHURCH ON TIME!!! :panic: :panic: :panic:
But i love dramas~ So i'm wondering how will the next part be. :lol:

and yay! you updated :cow:
cant wait for the next chapter!!! :D
it will be really dramatic & epic, if no3b went to the church with all of injuries. OOPS! Just joking~ HAHAHAHAHA!

thanks for your update! :D :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 17, 2011, 07:28:11 AM

Haruko: I hope the next chapter will meet everyone's expectation :on freeze:

2448: lol I have confidence that they will make it early to the wedding :mon determined: I wish I could post the next update soon... still working on it :mon wind:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: hott3stson3 on September 18, 2011, 07:25:11 AM

OMFG!!!!! oJMklfnmikngjwlikJKMBIGKNJRKLlIKANFJKbnjsnfej!!!!

I HAVENT COMMENTED IN SUCH A LONG TIME!!!!
I'm Sorry!!! :OMG: :err: :on cloudeye:
Like Serious, I'm Tottaly Scolding Myself Right Now LMFAOOOOOO!!!
So, as a sorry gift...I made something for you!!! :hee:

http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow (http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow)
*Love In The Fast Lane Trailer*
(Check Out The Description)

I hope I'm forgiven :depressed:
LMFAOOOOO!!! Please Update Sooooon!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: Flean on September 18, 2011, 08:37:20 AM

Quote from: hott3stson3 on September 18, 2011, 07:25:11 AM

http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow (http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow)
*Love In The Fast Lane Trailer*

WOWW!!! :mon star: nice trailer!! :on GJ:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: immortal_K on September 18, 2011, 02:30:17 PM

Quote from: hott3stson3 on September 18, 2011, 07:25:11 AM

http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow (http://youtu.be/91E0oBOG_Ow)
*Love In The Fast Lane Trailer*
(Check Out The Description)

OMG!!!!!! THAT IS SO AWESOME!!!! CRAZY TRAILER!!! :inlove:
GREAT JOB!!!! :twothumbs I LIKEY!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: AFLynx on September 18, 2011, 02:32:06 PM

hott3stson3: OMFG!!!!! :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
I am actually squealing here in my room! I am honored hott3stson3!!!! It is a very wonderful gift! (you don't have to be sorry too coz I know that you read my story :shy1: to be honest, you seemed to grab some of the scenes in my head for the next update! now I'm really hyped to finish it! :mon determined: :mon beam: :mon study:
thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :farofflook: :kneelbow:

Flean: hott3stson3 sure knows how to hype up a writer like me :on GJ:

immortal_K: I feel overexcited now! I'm gonna finish my story in a couple of minutes because of that! :inlove:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14a - Pre-Wedding Pinch] UPDATE! 9/16
Post by: immortal_K on September 18, 2011, 03:05:38 PM

I am trying to be overexcited about knowing that you will update in the next couple mins, but the fact that I have to leave for work in the next couple min is totally killing the mood and killing me...... so tired...........

I'm positive the only time I'll be alive and not zombie walking/ working will be when I take a break to read your update later ROFL.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 18, 2011, 05:30:21 PM

I know everyone's been waiting for this installment and I apologize it took me quite some time :fainted: This is a VERY LONG chapter and I hope everyone's eyes won't gloss over from reading :dizzy:

A reminder just before the story continues:

"This is a dialogue" = foreign language

I would like to thank everyone for your continuous support of my fic! :luvluv2: I would like to thank hott3stson3 for making that awesome vid for my story! I'll post the link on my index later on.

Anyway, I hope everyone will enjoy this chapter!

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

CHAPTER 14b – Two Words

The following day – 2:00 in the morning

Jun Ohayashi stared at the blinking lights on the runway at the private airstrip. The plane should be landing soon, he thought as he took a long drag out of his cigarette. One of his underlings pointed at the dark sky, where a plane is signaling for landing on the runway. Excellent, they are prompt as always. Jun smirked as he puffed out a long line of grey smoke and threw the cigarette butt carelessly on the ground. He and his group waited for the plane to make its stop and walked towards its direction.

A tall burly man first exited the plane and stepped down the stairs, followed by his men, carrying out big trunks. Taking a cigar out of his inside coat pocket, he lit it with his diamond encrusted zippo lighter and puffed out a cloud of bluish grey smoke as he strode down to where Jun and his men are standing.

“Vyacheslav, it is good to finally meet you.” Jun spoke in Russian and clasped the tall man’s arm in greeting.

“It’s good to hear that you speak Russian, my uncle chose well in doing business with you. Please, call me Slava since I’ve heard so much about you from your bosses.” Vyacheslav Slava Mikhailov, one of the prominent members of the organized crime syndicate answered.

“Our groups have been in a good relationship for quite some time now, Slava. It is a must that we understand each other.” Jun laughed wickedly. “Well then, can you now show us the wares? We have the payment right here.” He snapped his fingers and one of his men behind him carried out two steel suitcases beside him.

“Wonderful! I’m sure your boss will be satisfied with the trade.” Slava answered and motioned his men to drag the trunks for them to see. The men opened up the trunks one by one, revealing high caliber guns and rocket launchers.

Jun crouched to one of the trunks labeled “Kalashnikov Series” and took out an AK-47, testing its weight and quality. Placing back the rifle in the trunk, he continued his inspection of the other firearms. Various rockets and rocket launchers are in one of the said cases, bullets of different sizes were also meticulously arranged inside a different trunk. With a satisfied smile, he stood up and took one of the steel cases from his men and opened it in front of Vladimir.

“Everything seems to be in perfect condition. Here’s our payment as promised.” Jun said, revealing neatly stacked bundles of US dollars. One of his men also opened the other steel suitcase full of money. Slava picked up a bundle and flicked his thumb, fanning the money in the process. “Ah, the smell of newly minted money... It got a nice scent to it no? We trust you that these are not counterfeits.” Slava said, waving the bundle and placed it back inside the suitcase.

Jun smirked, “We’re anything but counterfeiters… it’s bad for the business.” Jun laughed. His laughter died out when he heard a sudden roar of a car engine towards their direction. The car continued to speed up aiming at their party.

“Fire at the car, you idiots!” Jun shouted and his men scrambled, showering bullets to the car. Slava ordered the same to his men, making the car sparkle from the continuous firing of guns. The car drifted sideways emitting clouds of smoke from the traction of the tires and stopped sideways just in front of the criminals. Jun raised his hand up signaling everyone to stop shooting. Just as the clouds of smoke faded into thin air, everyone was surprised that the car remained unscathed even though it has been ridden with countless number of bullets.

After what it seems like an eternity, the three doors of the car finally opened. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan stepped out of Gakutenou gracefully and stood side by side. Each of the cousins donned sleek, black leather pants topped with immaculately white collared blouse hidden in a black medium length leather trench coat. The agents held out their badges in front of the men.

“It’s those pain in the ass agents again!” Jun growled.

“You’re all under arrest for illegal smuggling of firearms.” Miichan calmly said.

Slava laughed at the three cousins. “Our spies warned us that they might be a private investigating agency that might interfere with our operation, Jun. I didn’t expect them to send out little girls to do the dirty work.” He smirked.

Takamina raised an eyebrow at the tall man. “Don’t underestimate us.” She said in perfect Russian. The three cousins are fluent in different foreign languages as required in the academy. Takamina however, showed aptitude in learning faster among their peers that she was able to learn five more foreign languages besides what is stated in their curriculum. “We know your story Vyacheslav Mikhailov. As one of the nephews of the big boss, you are trying to earn his favor to be his heir once he steps down or die. It’s too bad that you will put your uncle to shame once he heard in the international news that you have been apprehended.” Takamina taunted.

Slava suddenly became serious as he heard Takamina spoke in his native tongue. “I apologize for my rudeness then. I must say that I did underestimate you. My uncle will be proud of me once this operation is finished. I also apologize that since you tried to interfere, I’m afraid we’ll have to kill you. I’ll bring back your heads in Russia as a souvenir for my uncle.” He simply said. His men suddenly formed a circle around the three cousins and aimed their guns. Jun waved a hand and his men did the same.

“As you can see, you are already outnumbered. We’ll make sure you’ll all die in a sudden, painless, death.” Jun said.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders. Each of them pulled out their aviator shades and put them on. The cousins also took out knuckle busters and wore it on their hands.

“What kind of idiot would wear sunglasses at two in the morning?” One of Jun’s men whispered to his comrade next to him. “Just shut up and aim your gun at them you baka. Jun might hear you and have you shot instead.” His comrade answered back.

Haruna took out one of the balls that Midori gave them and showed it to the men. “We’ll defeat you using these and our fists. You will be blinded in surprise once you finally realized that you’re all beaten by girls.” Haruna smiled mysteriously.

Jun growled again, seething in anger. “You’re too arrogant for your own good woman! Shoot them!” He ordered his men.

“Now you see us, now you don’t!” Miichan yelled, as the three of them threw the balls with force on the stone pavement. The impact of the balls on the concrete caused it to explode, producing a blinding flash of light that is ten times brighter and lasts longer than an ordinary flash bang.

The men around them screamed in pain as their eyes were temporarily blinded by the flash. Some of the men shot aimlessly around them trying to shoot at the three cousins.

“Stop shooting you idiots! You’ll all get us killed! Just swing your rifles at them until the effects of wear off!” Jun shouted as he crouched on the ground beside Slava.

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan immediately moved once the flash bangs took effect and individually knocked each of the men around them. Each of them simultaneously took turns in throwing the balls one at the time whenever the flash began to fade as they moved to disarm and clobber each of the men around them.

Haruna ran to a gangster who is swinging his rifle madly in front of him with his eyes closed. Haruna ducked from his swing, and then grabbed his rifle. Haruna used his rifle like a bō and began hitting his arms and torso with full force. She then made a thrust movement towards the man’s chest which finally knocked him on the pavement, moaning in pain. She felt another man bump behind him and did the same to the other man.

Miichan was busy clobbering a gangster when she felt a hand grab her by the shoulder. She quickly turned, locked her left hand on the other man’s shoulder. Miichan gave the man a head butt, forced her palm on the man’s chin, delivered an upward elbow thrust on the same location then punched the man’s throat in one swift motion. She smirked when the man dropped to the ground then moved to her next target.

On Takamina’s side, she continued to knock the men unconscious one by one. A man suddenly rushed behind her then wrapped a metal chain on her throat. The man twisted his body along with the chain, and then crouched as he tried to throw her on his back to choke her further, lifting Takamina off the ground. Takamina grabbed the chain with both hands went along with the man’s plan. She smoothly flipped her body on the man’s back and landed in front of the man effortlessly. The man unconsciously let go of the chain because of what she did. Takamina immediately delivered a low kick aimed just below his knee, effectively dislocating his left knee, knocking him to the ground howling in pain.

The three cousins continued their sparring with the gang members who were dropping like flies around them. Miichan lightly tapped her communicator in her ear as she continues her assault, “Midori-sensei, we *punch* are almost *kick* done here *uppercut*. Please send some backup right away.” She panted as she multi-tasked between talking to Midori and knocking out the men around them.

“Copy that Miichan! I’ve already asked some of our agents to be on standby fifteen minutes away from your location.” Midori answered, as she typed furiously on her laptop, signaling the agents to head immediately to the airstrip.

Jun stood up, groaning in pain from the effects of the incapacitants that the three cousins used and heard sirens blaring towards the airstrip. “Slava, we have to get you out of here. We won’t be a happy camper if you get arrested.” He said, helping Slava stand up and both ran to the nearest car that Jun and his men used to get to the airstrip.

“Jun and mister-what’s-his-name is getting away!” Haruna yelled. Takamina looked to where Haruna is pointing, immediately grabbing the chain that was used against her and then chased after Jun and Slava. Haruna and Miichan continued to attack the remaining men as the other agents finally arrived at the scene, helping them handcuff each of the injured men.

While running, Takamina took off one of her knuckle busters and tied it on an end of the chain, making a makeshift kusari-fundo. She continued to run as fast as she could until she was about two meters behind Slava, letting out a growl as she swung the chain toward Slava’s head. The knuckle buster that is tied to the chain connected to Slava’s head, knocking the man down from the fierce blow. Slava groaned in pain and felt his hands yanked behind him as he was handcuffed before he blacked out.

Jun finally reached the car and frowned when he looked behind him. “Shit, they got Slava. I have to get out of here.” He growled as he got in the car and sped out of the airstrip. Takamina stood up and saw Gakutenou stop beside her.

“Quick, let’s chase after that slimeball.” Haruna said as she lowered down the car window. Takamina quickly got in the back seat of the car. Miichan who is now the driver, cranked up the gearshift then stepped hard on the gas pedal.

The three cousins continued their chase until they reached the highway over Tokyo bay. Takamina opened a window and began firing towards Jun’s car. Haruna furiously tapped on the mini-screen mounted on the dashboard.

“What are you doing Haruna? You should be firing your gun like what Takamina is doing.” Miichan said as she concentrated on the road.

“I think Gakutenou has something stored in it that might be of use at times like this… Yatta! Found it!” Haruna squealed, tapping on the screen. The screen came into life with a view of the back of Jun’s car. Haruna began typing some options that are listed on the side of the image then chose Car Taser. She tapped at the image of Jun’s car, locking on the target. A round magnet-like object suddenly shot out of one of Gakutenou’s bumper ends and attached itself on Jun’s car trunk. The cousins gasped in surprise as they saw electric currents flow around the car, shutting down the electric power of Jun’s engine. The car stopped and crashed on the side of the highway.

Jun came out of his car and stepped on the ledge of the highway. Miichan stopped their car a few meters from the crash and stepped out as well. “Give up Jun, you have nowhere to go.” Haruna said as they walked towards Jun.

Jun laughed, “As much as I want to stay and chat, I’m afraid I have to fly.” He answered back. A helicopter suddenly emerged under the highway bridge, with one of the men on board pointing a rifle at the three cousins. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan immediately dove behind Gakutenou as they were again showered with bullets. Jun immediately grabbed the suspended ladder as the helicopter flew away towards the bay.

The three cousins peeked out once the firing stopped. “You are right Haruna, Jun is a slimeball…” Miichan mumbled.

*****

Midori took the responsibility to oversee the arrest of Slava and the members of both gangs. She tilted her head to the side as she heard a car stop.

“Ah, my favorite agents have finally arrived. Were you able to chase after Jun Ohayashi?” Midori said to the three cousins walking towards her direction.

“Yes we did chase after him, but he got away when a helicopter came out of nowhere.” Takamina answered.

“What an ass. Don’t worry; we’ll get our hands on him one of these days. Anyway, good job everyone!” Midori exclaimed, giving them a thumbs up sign. “Nice shot by the way Takamina. Some of the agents saw you swing that chain on Slava’s head. If you swung the chain harder, you could’ve cracked his skull.” Midori smirked.

Haruna and Miichan giggled, patting Takamina for her good work. “Thanks for the backup Midori-sensei.” Haruna said and looked up at the sky, noticing that the once dark sky is now changing into a tinge of blues and purple. “Midori-sensei… what time is it?” she asked.

“Hmmm… it’s already five in the morning.” Midori answered as she glanced at her watch.

“Shimatta! Takamina, Haruna, we’d better leave or else we’ll be late! Midori-sensei, we’re sorry but we have to go!” Miichan anxiously exclaimed as they hurried inside the car and sped away from the airstrip.

Midori blinked as she stared at the car speeding away from the location. “Those girls are always up to something.” She laughed inwardly, shaking her head in amusement.

*****

5:30AM – Takamina, Haruna and Miichan’s apartment

The three cousins immediately barged in their apartment once they arrived.

“It’s a good thing this apartment has three bathrooms including what’s in the guest room!” Haruna panted as she grabbed her toiletries and rushed towards the bathroom inside their bedroom.

“Ewwww! I feel sticky from all the workout that we did! Takamina, I’ll use the bathroom downstairs.” Miichan said with mild disgust. As she was about to go out of their bedroom, she noticed Takamina looking at their full-length mirror, slightly touching her neck. “What’s wrong?”

Takamina sighed, “There’s a bruise forming on my neck because of that stupid chain… When Acchan sees this, she might get worried… or worse, she might get suspicious.” She mumbled, staring at the slight discoloration of her skin just below the right side of her jaw.

Miichan smiled, placing her hand on her cousin’s shoulder. “Don’t worry, Haruna and I will help you cover it with makeup. For now, let’s take a bath first.” She answered assuringly. Takamina nodded and prepared her things as well.

*****

6:00AM

Atsuko yawned as she flipped the channels of the TV inside their bedroom. “I really don’t like morning weddings. I hope the ceremony ends early so that we can hurry off to the reception.” She whined, slowly sitting on her bed to prevent getting wrinkles on her gown.

“Quit whining and save your voice for the bridal march Acchan.” Mariko mumbled as she wore her dangling earrings. “Where’s Yuko-chan?” she asked. Acchan merely pointed at Yuko who was standing outside their balcony, talking on her mobile phone.

Mari-chan! Yuu-chan! Acchan! It’s time to leave!

“We’re almost done mom!” Mariko answered out loud as she opened their bedroom door. “Yuko-chan! It’s time to leave.” She said, making the other girl step inside their bedroom and the three of them headed downstairs.

*****

6:30AM

Takamina changed gears as they sped their way towards the church. “Are you sure you two were able to bring everything including the music sheets?”

“Yes otou-san, the music instruments are inside the trunk and I have the music sheets right here.” Haruna answered, waving the music sheets.

Miichan who was sitting at the back seat leaned forward, “Did you bring your instrument Takamina?” she teased, making her cousins giggle.

“Don’t be silly Miichan, it will not fit inside the trunk. I called Father Sekki for help regarding the arrangements where we will play inside the church.” Takamina smiled, stepping on the gas pedal hard.

“Oooh, nice thinking Takamina!” Haruna clapped her hands. “Remember to park behind the church, just in front of the parish office. Yuko said we’re part of her surprise.” Haruna added.

“What does she mean by that?” Miichan asked.

“I really don’t know…” Haruna answered. I think you and Takamina are the surprise… Haruna smiled inwardly.

*****

7:00AM

The three sisters together with their parents, finally arrived at the church. Some of the guests were already entering inside while some were congratulating the groom who was standing outside the church doors together with his best man.

Yuko flipped open her mobile phone and smiled as she saw that she received a new text message.

We parked behind the church just as you requested. We’ll just sit back inside the parish office and go inside the church 15 minutes before the wedding starts

Haruna a.k.a NyanNyan

“What are you smiling about Yuko onee-chan.” Atsuko asked.

“Oh nothing, I just received a text message from NyanNyan.” She answered cheerfully, placing her mobile phone inside her tote bag that matched her gown.

“Good for you. I haven’t received any text message from my Takamina since yesterday…” Atsuko pouted.

My Takamina eh? She’s beginning to sound like me and Mariko onee-chan… ”Don’t worry, it’s still early and she might still be asleep. Anyway, let’s congratulate the groom for putting up with our cousin.” Yuko smiled as she grabbed Atsuko’s hand towards the groom.

*****

7:15AM

The three cousins were able to talk to one of the personnel in the parish office and were glad to hear that the parish priest was able to accommodate their request. They sat comfortably on one of the couches and make a quick retouch of their makeup.

Takamina yawned and stood up, “I’ll go take a walk on the side garden. I’ll just meet you guys inside the church before the ceremony starts.”

“Okay, make sure to take note of the time Takamina.” Miichan answered while Haruna just nodded who was busy applying lipstick.

Takamina slowly walked towards the side garden and smiled at the sight. This surely brings back memories, she thought as she shielded her eyes from the morning sun. As she made her way towards the center of the garden, she saw a little girl wearing a light blue gown sitting on a stone bench, swinging her feet and clutching on a flower garland.

“Hey there little one, enjoying the view of the garden?” Takamina gently asked as she sat beside the little girl.

The little girl shook her head vigorously, “I’m hiding here.”

“Hiding? Whatever for?”

“Mama said that I have to walk in the middle of the church by myself and I don’t wanna!”

Oh, so she’s the flower girl… “Ah, you’re nervous you say…” Takamina repeated. She gently took the flower garland from the little girl’s hands and delicately placed it on top of the girl’s head. “A pretty girl like you shouldn’t be nervous. I know you could do it! Everyone will be very happy and proud when they see you in your cute gown as you walk down the aisle.” Takamina said gently.

The little girl looked up at her with a puppy dog look in her eyes. “You think so one-chan?”

“Of course! I for one will be very happy and proud of you if you walk down the aisle all by yourself.”

The little girl’s eyes widened in wonder, “Will you be there too?”

“Yup! I should be the one who should be nervous because I’ll be sitting in front of the people since I am one of the instrumentalists for the ceremony.”
“Sugoi onee-chan! Ano, is it okay to call you onee-chan?”

Takamina giggled at the little girl’s cuteness. “Of course you could call me onee-chan. My name is Takamina by the way… and you are…?”

“Hajimemashte Taka-nee chan. Hotaru desu.” The little girl bowed politely.

“Hajimemashte Hotaru-chan.” Takamina greeted in reply. Suddenly, a woman walked towards to where they are sitting at the garden.

“There you are Hotaru-chan! Gomen nasai if my daughter has interrupted you in any way. She decided to hide from us because she is nervous to walk down the aisle for the wedding.” The woman, whom Takamina assumed is Hotaru’s mother bowed in apology.

Takamina smiled as she helped Hotaru stand up. “It’s nothing really. Hotaru is a good girl and promised that she’ll walk down the aisle later.”

The woman smiled as Hotaru walked beside her and held her hand. “Thank you for convincing her. I’m Kito Sakura, Hotaru’s mother and the aunt of the bride.”

“Takahashi Minami, it’s nice to meet you Sakura-san.” Takamina bowed respectfully. Seeing that Hotaru was smiling at her, Takamina knelt in front of the girl, “Let’s make a deal Hotaru-chan… if you’re gonna be a brave girl and walk down the aisle, I’ll let you sit beside me while I play music later on.” Takamina smiled, tapping the little girl’s nose.

“Really?! Mama, can I sit with her later?” Hotaru looked up to her mom, batting her eyelashes.

Sakura smiled at her daughter, “Of course you can Hotaru-chan. Make sure that you’ll be a good girl and not interrupt Minami-san while playing.”

“Hai, I will be good! See you later Taka-nee chan!” Hotaru waved as her mother guided her towards the entrance of the church.

Takamina waved back and proceeded towards the church as well.

*****

“What took you so long Takamina? The ceremony will start any minute now.” Miichan said as she adjusted the endpin of her Yamaha Silent Cello.

“Gomen ne, I made a friend while visiting the garden.” Takamina said as she sat in front of the church’s baby grand piano.

“Everything’s all set. We’ll just have to wait for the church doors to open then we’ll start with the song for the entourage.” Haruna said, plugging her Yamaha Silent Violin and Miichan’s cello in an amplifier.

Takamina scanned their position at the left side of the altar facing the guests inside the church. Haruna and Miichan is positioned just behind her where the baby grand piano is placed, and a sole microphone on a mic stand is positioned just in front of them.

I wonder who will be the soloist... “Perfect. Let’s wait for the doors to open then.” Takamina said as she flipped through her music sheets.

*****

8:00AM

As if on cue, the young Sacristans opened the heavy wooden double door of the church. Takamina softly started playing the piano with Haruna and Miichan accompanying her after a few measures of Pachelbel’s Canon in D. The guests looked behind them and saw the first of the bridesmaids standing at the door.

Yuko, the first bridesmaid, stared in wonder at the vastness of the church. Clutching a small bouquet of roses in her hand, she let out a breath and smiled as she took a step towards the aisle. Yuko looked at the side of the altar where the three cousins are currently playing.

NyanNyan is so beautiful while playing the violin. Yuko thought, trying her best not to smile widely. She noticed that Haruna preferred to stand while playing the violin.

Haruna glanced up from her music sheets and saw Yuko staring at her. She winked in acknowledgement, making Yuko blush as she made her way to her designated seat. Haruna inwardly giggled as her left fingers continue to press and and glide on the neck of the violin as her right hand guides her bow on the instrument.

*****

Atsuko stifled a yawn. Gently smiling, she stepped forward after a bridesmaid began walking a meter ahead of her.

It’s funny how I miss someone so much even though it’s only been a day since I last saw her… Atsuko sighed inwardly, not paying attention to her surroundings as she continued her gait towards the pew for the bridesmaids. As she reached the middle of the aisle, she stopped her daydreaming and concentrated on listening to the song that is being played.

”The instrumentalists that Yuko onee-chan hired are good.” She commented and looked towards the source of the melodious playing. Atsuko’s eyes widened in surprise as she saw the three cousins just below the side of the altar. Her cheeks flushed pink as she realized that Takamina has been looking at her before she even noticed the other girl playing the piano.

I miss you Takamina! Atsuko squealed inside her head, giving the other a megawatt smile as she stood beside Yuko in their designated pew.

Takamina silently gave her a dimpled smile in return as her fingers continues to dance on the black and white ivory keys of the piano.

*****

I’m gonna be a brave girl, just like what Taka-nee chan said. Hotaru inwardly thought as she was instructed to walk down the aisle. Hotaru smiled at guests who gushed at her cuteness, most of them taking pictures of her as she walked and scattered rose petals that she was holding in a small wicker basket.

Sakura and her husband were so proud of their daughter that they took pictures for every step that Hotaru made. She laughed a bit when after Hotaru was able to make it to the supposed pew for the flower girls, Hotaru ran towards the side of the altar and sat beside Takamina who talked to her in hushed tones as she played. Everyone inside the church smiled at Hotaru’s playfulness.

“So that’s the friend you were talking about.” Miichan smiled.

“Yup, and she is a very pretty and brave girl.” Takamina winked, making Hotaru blush.

*****

After all the bridesmaid and the rest of the entourage were finally able to march down the aisle, the guests were eager to see the maid of honor walk down the aisle. Mariko smiled at the guests as she walked down the aisle, her strides slow but sure just like she’s walking on a fashion runway.

The three instrumentalists seem familiar… Ara, is that… Miichan? She gasped as her heart leaped at the sight of the other girl. The three cousins wore white dresses that almost seemed to match which Mariko find endearing, especially Miichan. Out of being spontaneous, Mariko blew a kiss towards the cello player then made her way to her designated seat a few meters behind the bride which separates her from the bridesmaids.

Miichan, who was staring at Mariko since she entered the church, was surprised at the gesture. God, I really adore that woman… she thought, feeling her cheeks gradually warm up.

*****

The rest of the entourage finally finished, and the groom and his best man were now patiently waiting for the arrival of the bride. A white limousine slowly parked in front of the church doors and the bride finally exited the car. As Ami, the bride, stopped at the end of the red carpet, all the guests stood up and looked at her.

“Okay… now where is our soloist?” Takamina whispered to Haruna and Miichan who shrugged their shoulder in response. Takamina felt a gentle tug from Hotaru then pointed at the pew of the bridesmaids.

“Mama said Atsu-nee will sing today. She’s my cousin you know!” Hotaru whispered.

Atsuko slowly walked towards the side of the altar, smiling at Takamina. She purposely stood in front of the mic stand then looked over her shoulders, giving a wink to the pianist. I bet Takamina didn’t know that I’m the soloist. She mused. Atsuko looked at the bride and saw her nod. She looked at the three cousins and nodded, giving them a signal that the bride is now ready for her walk on the aisle.

Haruna and Miichan prepared their bows and eagerly looked at Takamina who was busy gawking at Atsuko. Takamina shook her head vigorously, then took a deep breath as she slowly played the intro of the song. Ami then walked on the aisle towards her husband-to-be. On cue, Atsuko sang the first verse of the song.

In a while, in a word,
Every moment now returns.
For a while, seen or heard,
How each memory softly burns.
Facing you who brings me new tomorrows,
I thank God for yesterdays,
How they led me to this very hour,
How they led me to this place...

Ami smiled that Atsuko was able to sing her request, trying not to cry so as not to ruin her makeup. Everyone seemed to be moved by the song, including the men. The groom, who is waiting by the altar, took out a handkerchief, and shamelessly wiped his tears.

Every touch, every smile,
You have given me in care.
Keep in heart, always I'll,
Now be treasuring everywhere.
And if life should come to just one question,
Do I hold this moment true?
No trace of sadness,
Always with gladness...

'I DO...'

Haruna slowly swayed as she played the melody of the instrumental part of the piece, with Miichan and Takamina accompanying her. Takamina continued to accompany Atsuko as she sang every verse.

Now a song that speaks of now and ever,
Beckons me to someone new,
Unexpected, unexplored, unseen,
Filled with promise coming through.

Atsuko removed the mic from its stand then slowly walked in front of the piano and stared at Takamina. Takamina stared back at her and smiled.

In a while, in a word,
You and I forever change,
Love so clear, never blurred,
Has me feeling wondrous, strange,
And if life should come to just one question,
Do I face each moment true?
No trace of sadness, always with gladness,

'I DO...'

Ami stood in beside her groom and smiled. The groom hugged her parents then smiled at his bride. He purposely took her hand and hooked it in his arm as they slowly walked together towards the altar. As the music slowed, signaling the ritardando part of the song, Takamina mouthed out the lyrics to Atsuko so that she can follow with the music.

Never with sadness...
Always with gladness...

'I...DO....'

As the music finally faded, Takamina and Atsuko continued to look in each other’s eyes…

*****

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan decided to continue to provide music throughout the ceremony much to the couple’s delight and Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko’s amazement. During communion, they played Ave Maria by Schubert. When the priest announced that the groom may kiss the bride, they played Trumpet Voluntary by Jeremiah Clarke that accompanied the applauses from the guests. Lastly, Air on G string droned from their instruments during the photoshoot for the bride and groom.

*****

The guests threw rice and rose petals above the newly wedded couples’ heads in greeting as they exited the church. Ami walked purposely to where Takamina, Haruna and Miichan were standing.

“Thank you so much for being part of my wedding! You three made it more special to me and Ryo.” She said.

“It’s our pleasure Ami-san. We bid you best wishes… Congratulations to you Ryo-san.” Haruna said as the three of them bowed.

Mariko suddenly walked towards them and hugged Miichan. “I missed you so much Miichan! Mou~ you really surprised me by being here today!” she pouted.

“Blame Yuko for it Mariko, I think she wants to surprise you… and Atsuko. Anyway, I missed you too.” Miichan replied, raising Mariko’s hand as she placed a gentle kiss on her knuckles.

“I think I won’t be blaming her, but I am gonna thank her. Anyway, where’s Yuko?” Mariko asked looking around the crowd outside the church.

Miichan looked around as well. “I don’t know, I just saw her a while ago. Hey, where did Haruna go?” Miichan asked. Takamina simply shrugged her shoulders as she looked around as well.

*****

Yuko and Haruna stood in front of the altar, staring at the large cross in front of them holding each other’s hands. Yuko then faced Haruna and held her other hand.

“Thank you for being here NyanNyan. I finally get to see you play the violin. You were amazing!” Yuko gushed.

Haruna blushed, gently stroking her thumbs on Yuko’s hands. “You’re always welcome Yuko. You know that I’ll always be there where you ask me to be.” Haruna answered.

Yuko blushed at Haruna’s statement and gently touched her cheek. “Is that a promise?”

Using her pinky finger, Haruna hooked it with Yuko’s. “Always.”

*****

Takamina stood at the garden and looked behind her shoulder when she heard a clicking of heels towards her direction.

“You seemed to be familiar with the church and this garden….”Atsuko whispered as she finally stood beside Takamina.

“Our grandmother is a devout Catholic and a parishioner of this church. She tended this garden when she got married in this church and sponsored to have it maintained.” Takamina answered with a smile.

“Sugoi… it is a special place for you.” Atsuko remarked as placed her placed her hand on Takamina's neck. Takamina flinched as Atsuko's hand touched the bruised part of her neck that Miichan covered with makeup.

"What's wrong? Are you sick?" Atsuko asked worriedly.

I knew she would be worried... “It's nothing Acchan... anyway, Granma love this place, and visits this garden whenever the weather’s warm. She made sure that the flowers are well taken care of. She even planted her favorite flowers.” Takamina said, pointing at the base of St. Therese’s statue where white lilies are in bloom.

Lilies… Atsuko thought, taking note as how Takamina dodged her question. As she was about to speak, she heard a cheerful shout of “Taka-nee chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!” coming towards their way. Hotaru ran towards them, slowly followed by her mother, Haruna, Miichan, Mariko and Yuko.

Takamina held out her hands as Hotaru jumped towards her arms. Takamina gently lifted the girl up and hugged her. “Taka-nee, you’re so kakkoii!” the little girl squealed, giving Takamina a fierce hug.

“I see that you’ve met our cousin Hotaru, Takamina.” Atsuko said. That lucky girl! She even managed to sit beside Takamina during the whole ceremony!

“She’s great right, Atsu-nee? She even called me pretty!” Hotaru said.

What the… is teasing run in Atsuko’s family? Takamina thought, laughing nervously as she saw Atsuko raise an eyebrow in her direction.

”Hotaru-chan, it’s time to go.” Sakura said, smiling.

“Thank you Taka-nee chan for letting me sit beside you. I hope we’ll see each other again!” Hotaru said then kissed Takamina on the cheek.

Everyone laughed when Takamina blushed. Yuko smiled devilishly and nudged Atsuko’s side. “It’s a good thing that Hotaru-chan is fourteen years younger than you or else, she could’ve stolen Takamina from you.” Yuko teased.

“Shut up Yuko onee-chan.” Atsuko mumbled making her sisters laugh.

Takamina gently lowered down the little girl to the floor. Hotaru grabbed her mother’s hand then exclaimed, “When I grow up, I wanna be Taka-nee’s bride!”

“Eh?!?!?!?!?!!!” everyone exclaimed excluding Sakura who laughed at Hotaru’s declaration.

“Hotaru-chan, you’re too young to think of those things. I think it would be best if you think of her as your older sister. I bet you’ll see each other more after this day.” Sakura smiled at her daughter who is giving her her best pout. Hotaru finally smiled when she thought it would be best to have a cool sister like Takamina.

“Okay mama. If Taka-nee doesn’t get a bride soon, I’ll be her bride when I grow up.” Hotaru answered, earning Takamina teases from the group.

“We’ll see about that…” Atsuko mumbled, again making everyone laugh and Takamina blush even further.

*****

Though invited by the couple to join the reception, the three cousins politely declined for a much needed rest. Even though Atsuko, Mariko and Yuko were saddened and disappointed, they waved their good byes as the three cousins drove away from the church. Sakura stepped beside Atsuko and waved goodbye as well.

“You know, lucky is the one who will have Takamina as someone’s bride.” Sakura whispered, making Atsuko look at her. She smiled when her niece looked curiously at her. “What I’m trying to say it that, you’re lucky because Takamina looks at you with love’s eyes.” Sakura winked.

Atsuko was about to respond to her aunt when she felt Hotaru tug her gown. “Someone wants me to give these two you.” Hotaru smiled as she gave Atsuko three stems of lilies. Yuko and Mariko gave each other knowing looks

“Who asked you to give these to me Hotaru-chan?” Atsuko asked in wonder as she took the flowers.

“I promised to keep it a secret. That person said it came from somewhere special to her.” Hotaru cryptically answered. She looked at the garden at the side of the church then grabbed her mother’s hand. “I’ll see you later Atsu-nee, Yuu-nee, Mari-nee!” the little girl waved as she and her mother walked towards their car.

Atsuko blinked at her little cousin’s retreating form. “For someone so young, she seems to be a devious little girl.” Atsuko mumbled.

“I think it runs in the family.” Mariko smirked, as she walked with Yuko towards their car.

Atsuko smelled the powdery scent of the lilies as she followed her sisters. Takamina, do you really look at me with love’s eyes?

To be continued...

:sweat: Finally finished this chapter! :onioncheer:

This chapter is sponsored by: Yamaha (for the musical instruments lol) if you're curious as to what their instruments look like, just go to Yamaha's website. :bingo:

songs for the wedding ceremony (http://youtu.be/JkbAUoiPt3k) - here is a vid with the excerpts of what our main characters played.

Two Words by Lea Salonga (http://youtu.be/XieeUXT2KOs) - here's a link for the song that Atsuko sang. Lea Salonga was the singing voice of Princess Jasmine and Fa Mulan of the Walt Disney movies. She actually sang this song as her wedding vow to her husband. This vid however is a video telecast from a Philippine network about their wedding. Lea Salonga is popular in the Broadways and I'm a fan of hers :nya:

I hope everyone likes my chapter! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: immortal_K on September 18, 2011, 06:01:10 PM

A nice long and beautiful wedding and new chapter for us and for them =D

Come on Acchan its about time you figure out who is giving you those flowers, even Hotaru is in on the loop now.

First the action was hardcore, I can definitely imagine them stepping out of their car and taking everyone down because they are just that perfect. Then at the wedding their grand performance and the song is brilliant especially how Acchan walked over to Takamina, the way she mouth the words its like they already exchange "I DO's"

MariMii couple is lovey as always, and KojiYuu is just as :heart: with Haruna promising to always be there in front of the alter.

LOL at the family I guess devious and mischievous runs in the family XD

All in ALL AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!! THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: blughise on September 18, 2011, 06:02:29 PM

OMG!!!! :w00t:
So many things happen!!!
First off, Let me say Thank you for this wonderful chapter!!! Though its sucks that, that bastard Jun got escape again! It's good thing that they were able to finish the job before the wedding! :grin:

The wedding is so amazing!!! I can totally Imagine Takamina playing with a white grand piano!!! She looks so cool!!! And I like the song that you use too. I have also watch her wedding when I was still leaving back in the philippines, she looks stunning!

Hotaru-chan is so cute!!! She's a little Atsuko XD :grin: :P
And come on now Atsuko, Takamina's been giving you lots of hints, and you still don't get that she's your secret admirer!

Really really nice chapter....with lots of cute and nice moments from all 3 pairings/couples

I so can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: Sydney W on September 18, 2011, 06:22:34 PM

awesome... thank you

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 18, 2011, 07:24:18 PM

immortal_K: Thank you for being patient with me with this update! XD Hmm... Takamina and Atsuko did seems like they also exchanged vows in the church because of that song! I totally imagined that when you mentioned it! :wriggly: lol I think it does run in the family and shows at a young age like Hotaru-chan's :lol:

blughise: I hope your eyes (and everyone's) are okay after reading this chapter :nervous Jun still has something to do that's why he escaped. :mon cigar:
I thought of Hotaru-chan to add some love in our Atsumina pair. She did a great job in keeping a secret about the lilies. :on gay:
I think Atsuko needs another clue perhaps? :dunno: we'll see in the future chapters :hee: Thank you for reading! :twothumbs

Sydney W: having someone say that my chapter is awesome boosted my morale as a writer. :kneelbow: :cool1: :luvluv2: Thanks Sydney W!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: JPopLover on September 18, 2011, 07:36:15 PM

This is just getting better and better ^^ I love how MariMii is so close to each other :) ohh look at the sweet Kojiyuu moment and the super adorable moment in the garden with Atsumina :3 Thanks for updating! Hope the next update comes soon =D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 18, 2011, 07:49:10 PM

JPopLover: :w00t: Thanks for reading JPopLover! I'll do my best to make my chapters more interesting as it progresses :mon kungfu: I'm actually thinking of how I'll write about each of the pair's relationship in the future... as of now, all I can say is - Acchan... you'd better do something or else Hotaru-chan might just take Takamina away from you! :nervous lol Thanks for the comment! :P

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: Kid_Alpha on September 18, 2011, 09:02:20 PM

I can't find words to properly express myself right now but yeah I love this~!

KojiYuu forever sweet :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: Flean on September 18, 2011, 09:02:42 PM

I'm speechless... :mon speechless: There are too much awesomeness in this chapter... i don't know where to begin... :mon huh:

All I can say is that I'm so in love with this chapter... I totally can imagine all the actions!!!! :mon zoom: gah!!! they're so kakkoi!!! :mon inluv:

The 3 of them in the white dress are just... :luvluv1: and for the couples moment, should I comment any further?? because I'm too biased!!! LOL.. :wahaha:
I'm just gonna say Kyaaaaa!!!! OMG!!! *fainted* :imdead: They're just too cute together!!! and Acchan... it's okay for not knowing or she pretend not to... (playing hard to get maybe.. or am I imagining all this to myself?? LOL...) Somehow, I could sense there's gonna be an epic love story between them... :mon lovelaff:

Too much awesomeness and love in the air~~ :mon crazyinlove: Thank you for this update!!! please update soon.. :kneelbow:

* (sorry if my comment taking too much spaces... since your update longer than usual, I thought maybe I should make my comment longer than usual too.. :lol: )

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: sorakamiya on September 18, 2011, 10:33:15 PM

this chapter sugoooooooooooooooooiiiiii~ :farofflook:

atsuko jealous of hotaru XD XD XD i like how the pair relationship develop in here.... :nya: :nya:

waiting for the next update~ :hee: :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: kahem on September 18, 2011, 11:23:29 PM

Action was great! And Takamina is so popular with girls lol

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: D_Sphere on September 19, 2011, 12:47:30 AM

One Word :

Awesome :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 19, 2011, 06:54:30 AM

Kid_Alpha: I'm glad to hear that Kid_Alpha! :luvluv2: I wonder how the Kojiyuu relationship will progress :hee:

Flean: now I'm the one who's speechless because of your lengthy comment :mon speechless: :nya:
my fave action scene is Takamina's :hee: I hope no one's mad at me for putting a bruise on her neck :on freeze: good thing Atsuko didn't notice it :sweat:
about the dresses... I got the inspiration from their no3b album where they wore dresses :wriggly:
I hope I'll meet everyone's expectations regarding the Atsumina pair :on drink: I actually have a lot of ideas about their relationship
again thank you for reading and for this comment! :D

sorakamiya: thank you for reading and for your comment :bow: :luvluv2:
I know I would be jealous as well because Hotaru-chan got to spend time with Takamina :grr:

kahem: thanks for the comment! hehe, Takamina seems to be popular with girls... even younger ones :hehehe:

D_Sphere: :shy1: Thanks for reading!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: Haruko on September 19, 2011, 07:06:06 AM

Omg omg like i said before epic chapter jaja bt the best part is the atsuko's cousin i laught a lot ...i'll be waiting he next i Don't care if this is long

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: 2448 on September 19, 2011, 07:59:19 AM

YAY!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for your long update! I LOVE IT~ :wub: :wub: :wub:

The wedding is totally perfect~ P-E-R-F-E-C-T! :cow:
And... awwww~ aachan is jealous over the small girl. HAHAHAHA!
Takamina, indeed the girls-killer. :inlove:

And yup, i love this chapter! :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: sorakamiya on September 19, 2011, 08:55:56 AM

:lol: :lol: :lol: well hotaru is a lucky gurl though and anyway i thought her parent names will be michiru n haruka though XD XD XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: hott3stson3 on September 19, 2011, 09:12:02 AM

:farofflook:

That chapter was like, killer cute!!! :hee: :luvluv2:

Ahhhh, KojiYuu being all cute :luvluv1:

Mariko and Miichan being all sexy with each other :nay:

And of course Takaachan with their teasing. :on GJ: :luvluv2:

Awww, Your welcomed!!! To be honest when you said you felt honoured i was feeling like this :monk gboy: :mon innocent: :mon inluv: :mon dance: :mon yeah:
But whatever xD!!! I should feel honoured to received such legit reply from you :mon squee:

Lets just say, that was a perfect long chapter. Thanks to all the cuteness you put in i was literally :imdead:
kind of thing! LMFAOOOO!!! AFlynx you have done it again!!! I love this chapter!!! But why do i feel something is about to happen.... :mon wtfmm: Please update soon!!! :mon loveflower: <-- LMFAOOO!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: haruhi16 on September 19, 2011, 09:16:19 AM

wow thanks for the update AFLynx! I've been waiting for this!! this chapter is so good! and thank you for posting the classical wedding song! i can totally imagine the scenes in the story!! I hope at the end of this story , those 3 couples will have their own wedding too!! :wub: :wub: :wub:

Please update soon AFLynx!! :thumbsup :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 19, 2011, 10:41:29 AM

Haruko: You were right... it became an epic chapter! :on GJ: Thank you Haruko (and everyone of course!) for believing in my writing ability :kneelbow:
:lol: :lol: :lol: Hotaru-chan wants to become Takamina's bride. I did laugh as well while I was typing that scene... I imagined everyone's reaction, especially from Acchan :shock: <- like this lol

2448: I think they find Takamina charming. :dunno: I'm really not sure lol Acchan should really do something quick since Hotaru-chan seems determined to be Takamina's bride lol. Thanks for reading! :luvluv2:

sorakamiya: lol I knew it! I knew someone in the forums is bound to think about Haruka and Michiru :lol: well, it did cross my mind to add them but I decided not to :P

hott3stson3: again thank you for the vid! :luvluv2: I hope this fic will inspire you to make another one for the future chapters :hee:

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But why do i feel something is about to happen.... :mon wtfmm:

:mon wtf: what makes you think of that? :mon sweat: anyway, if there is really something that's gonna happen, I'm not tellin' :mon speechless: :mon hobo: lol
thanks again for reading this chapter!

haruhi16: thank you as well for supporting my fic haruhi-chan! :luvluv2: we'll see if they get to be wed at the end of the story... :nervous

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: aruka on September 19, 2011, 03:35:10 PM

AFlynx-san, I totally don't mind if you post VERY LONG chapters like this one again in the future..

So far, this fic is one of the bests I've read (and I'm not lying!! Really!!). As for this chapter, I also agree with the others: :twothumbs VERY EPIC :twothumbs

Perhaps this chapter will be a serious challenge for you to write another one with the same level of epicness... wish you luck!! :D :peace:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 20, 2011, 04:55:25 AM

aruka: thank you for your comment! :luvluv2: Yes, it will be a very serious challenge for me to write a chapter such as this one. To be honest, I am a little bit nervous right now because I'm thinking that everyone might expect the same level of intensity and emotions like in this chapter :mon emo: when there is action involved, I'll definitely try to make it as intense such as this one. :mon determined: Overall, I'll try to do my best! :mon beam: Thanks again for reading!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: immortal_K on September 22, 2011, 05:53:18 PM

YAY the bet is on, and I get to watch at the side!!! Totally pulling a Yukirin as you mentioned :lol:

I can't wait for you and Japanime to update your stories :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 22, 2011, 06:39:02 PM

immortal_K: lol my bet with japanime1 is this - when one of us would update our fic, the other should also update hers as well. either way, it's a both win since we get to update our fics :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: haruhi16 on September 23, 2011, 07:33:32 AM

i'm still waiting for the update :(

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: AFLynx on September 23, 2011, 09:22:22 AM

haruhi16: gomen ne, haruhi-chan... :mon surr: work has been a pain this week and I don't have much time to update. I've already started writing a few paragraphs for the next chapter and I'm hoping that I'll get to write later when I get home. :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 14b - Two Words] UPDATE! 9/18
Post by: haruhi16 on September 24, 2011, 04:31:47 AM

aww it's okay, i'll wait! Take your time! i'll keep checking! :D

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: AFLynx on September 26, 2011, 08:48:14 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 15 – Enter the Diva

For Local and International News:
Vyacheslav Slava Mikhailov, a member of the Russian brotherhood Solntsevskaya Bratva was arrested this morning by a private intelligence agency together with the Tokyo Police Department for illegal firearms smuggling. Both departments are continuously investigating which group is responsible for the transactions with the Russian…

*BANG!*

Smoke wafted from Tanako Masanori’s gun as he stared at the TV short circuited from the bullet that penetrated the screen. He frowned, not just because the operation has been a failure, but also it has brought the media’s attention at the same time.

“Those girls have been costing us to lose millions!” Masanori gritted his teeth, slamming his pistol on the table beside him.He looked at the now destroyed TV and smirked, “One of these days, they will pay what they owe to us.” He mumbled, pushing one of his men out of his way as he exited their group’s hideout.

*****

At the AKB48 Headquarters’ Race Track...

Every member of the Pit Crew bustled about at the race track to have a practice race for an upcoming competition. Sayaka, the Crew Chief, decided that it’s Miichan’s turn to be the driver for the event. Takamina and Haruna, who are standing at the Pit Stop together with Sayaka and Sae, looked on as Miichan maneuvered through the entire race course.

“Miichan, try to drift more at every bend of the track. You’re speed is inconsistent when approaching each bend.” Sayaka piped in her headset.

“Remember that we are not just evaluating your progress as one of the drivers, we are also testing the endurance of the car. Uuchii and Ayarin just recently developed the design of the car and the engine so we need to test it now.” Sae added, mentioning the names of the mechanical and industrial engineers of the team as she scribbled notes on her clipboard.

“Copy that.” Miichan answered as she continued to race through the track.

“Miichan will do fine in the competition. I’m pretty sure that our engineers did a great job in their handiwork.” Takamina said, looking at Miichan’s car zoomed past to its last lap.

Haruna was about to answer her cousin when her cellphone blared inside her pocket. She excused herself to take the call and stepped a few meters away from the crew. After a few minutes, she jogged back beside Takamina. “Takamina, Grandpa wants us to come to the agency.” Haruna whispered.

“Eh? When?” Takamina asked. Haruna waited for Miichan to park the car beside the Pit Stop and dragged both Takamina and Miichan to a secluded area.

“Miss me much?” Miichan mumbled, still wearing her helmet. She took of the said gear and slightly shook her hair, waiting for Haruna to respond.

“Just a bit” Haruna teased, “ Anyway, like what I’ve said to Takamina, Grandpa wants us to come to the agency. Today.”

“Today?!” Takamina and Miichan yelled, earning curious looks from the team.

Haruna sighed, “Yes, today… weren’t you two even listening? Anyway, Grandpa said that it’s been a while since he last saw us and would like to hear about our mission.”

“I bet he’s just simply telling us that he misses us.” Miichan smirked.

“I guess we just have to tell Sayaka-chan that we’ll be out for a couple of hours today.” Takamina said. The three cousins walked purposely to where Sayaka is currently checking the condition of the race car.

“Ano, Sayaka-chan… is it okay for us to leave work for a couple of hours?” Haruna asked.

“Whatever for?” Sayaka asked as she opened the car’s hood.

“We’ll you see… our Grandpa asked us to visit him while he’s in town. It’s been years since we last saw him.” Miichan said giving Sayaka her best puppy-dog eyes.

Sayaka blinked, “Haha, alright Gachapin. You three can take the morning off,” she winked then went back to checking the car.

“Gachapin?! That was my best puppy-dog eyes!” Miichan huffed.

“Too bad it resembled too much of Gachapin…” Sayaka sweatdropped. “Anyway, get out of here before I change my mind. Oh, don’t forget to tell some members of the Flag Girls too… I don’t want to be at the listening end of their inquiries about your whereabouts.” Sayaka winked.

“Wakatta.” Takamina said, giving a small salute to Sayaka as they left the race track.

*****

At Mariko’s office…

Mariko tapped her fountain pen on top of her desk as she reviewed the stack of papers in front her. Mou~ I think this will be a long day. Why am I even questioning that? It IS gonna be a long day, she inwardly complained. A faint knock on her office door interrupted her musings and asked for the person on the other side of the door to come it.

“Mariko, busy much?” Miichan asked, peeking through the door.

Mariko smiled, “Yes, it is always a busy day for me.” Mariko replied, continuing to read some papers and writing some notes to some while Miichan walked forward towards her desk.

“Ohayo, Mariko.” Miichan softly said as she cupped Mariko’s cheek and placed a delicately kiss on her soft cheek. She stopped a short distance from Mariko’s face when she noticed the other girl staring at her. “What’s wrong?” she finally asked.

“I don’t think that you greeted me a proper greeting Miichan.” Mariko whispered, placing her hand on the other girl’s neck. She pulled Miichan again and kissed her on the lips which Miichan reciprocated with delight. “There, that’s much better. Good morning to you too, Miichan. To what do I owe you of this visit this early morning?” Mariko asked, as she resumed writing.

Miichan stretched her arms and plopped down on the couch near Mariko’s desk. “Well, I just want to inform you that I’ll be out for the entire morning. I’ll be back after lunch or so.” Miichan said in a matter-of-fact tone as she slouched further on the soft cushion.

Mariko stopped writing then stared at Miichan, “Where are you going? Do you have a date that I don’t know about?” She inquired, resting her chin on her hand.

Miichan smirked, “You could say that.” She answered, resting her head on the couch as she closed her eyes. Miichan waited for Mariko’s response, knowing that the other girl would react to what she said. She continued to pretend to doze off and heard a clicking of heels towards her direction. Her eyes snapped open when Mariko sat on her lap.

“Is that a joke? Because if it is, it is really a bad one. I thought we’re already dating…” Mariko pouted.

“We are dating Mariko, though we have to go on a second date first.”

“I mean, EXCLUSIVELY dating?” Mariko asked, stressing the word to emphasize her point.

Miichan gave out a small laugh, “Okay, I was joking. I’ll be out with Takamina and Haruna to visit my Grandfather. And to ease your doubt, yes we are exclusively dating. I thought I already came across when I greeted you this morning.” Miichan said, placing her hands on Mariko’s waist.

“Oh I see, so what time will you go to out then?”

Miichan looked at her watch, “In about fifteen minutes, why do you ask?”

Mariko smiled seductively at Miichan. She stood up in front of her then slowly traced her hands on the other girl’s legs until she settled back on her lap, straddling Miichan’s hips. “Well then, I have an idea what we could do in fifteen minutes…” Mariko whispered suggestively as she lowered her head on Miichan’s.

Miichan drew lazy circles on Mariko’s back, trying not to moan in pleasure at the closeness of their bodies, “I think I like the idea already.” Miichan answered, pulling Mariko closer to her as they kiss.

*****

At the Garage…

Haruna entered the garage then looked around. Yuko’s not in the studio… I wonder where she is… she thought.

NYANNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!

Haruna turned towards the screaming came from. Yuko was screaming on top of her lungs as she ran towards Haruna.

Oh God, here it comes! Haruna thought as she closed her eyes waiting for the inevitable. When the expected launching of Yuko towards her did not come, she opened an eye and saw Yuko standing in front of her giving her a devilish smile.

NYANNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!!!

Yuko shouted on top of her lungs again as she finally launched herself on Haruna’s body, locking her legs behind the other girl’s back. Ack! I thought she wouldn’t do that! Haruna inwardly thought, walking towards the nearest table to put down the squirrel girl. As Haruna was about to let go, Yuko frowned and kept her legs locked behind Haruna’s back. “What do you think you’re doing?” Yuko asked, raising an eyebrow.

What’s with Yuko today? “I can’t really talk to you that well if we’re too close to each other.” Haruna whined.

Yuko pouted then let go of her arms around Haruna’s neck, still keeping her legs behind the other girl’s back. “Fine. Oh! NyanNyan, I have something for you!” Yuko excitedly said, as she reached something from her pocket. Haruna merely huffed at their awkward position. Yuko took Haruna’s hand and placed the object inside her palm.

Haruna picked the object between her thumb and index finger as she leveled it on her face? “What’s this?” she asked.

Yuko rolled her eyes from Haruna’s bout of air-headedness, “Isn’t it obvious NyanNyan? It’s a phone strap! I have one just like that, but with a letter O instead.” Yuko smiled. Haruna smiled as she inspected the said phone strap. It is a smallcloth checkered teddy bear with little black button eyes, and a letter K stitched on its belly. Haruna lowered her gaze, the phone strap still resting in her palm.

“Dou shita no? Don’t you like it? I can have it replaced… or buy you a new one that you will like…” Yuko stammered as she noticed Haruna’s forlorn look.

Haruna shook her head as she looked at Yuko. “No, I really like it. It’s just that, I haven’t given you something that you can always carry. I don’t expect you to bring the mint plant with you everyday.” Haruna answered.

NyanNyan kawaii… Yuko inwardly gushed. “I really don’t mind that NyanNyan. I just want you to bring something with you to remember me by.” She further explained.

Haruna smiled at Yuko’s thoughtfulness, “Thank you Yuko. Ah, I almost forgot! Takamina, Miichan and I will be out until after lunch to visit my Grandpa. Don’t miss me too much.” Haruna teased.

Yuko smiled at Haruna’s teasing. After that meeting-with-NyanNyan-on-the-street-kind-of-fate, Yuko observed that Haruna has been more at ease with her and teased back whenever she seemed fit. “Okay, give me a chuu~~ so that I won’t miss you that much.” Yuko batted her eyelashes.

Haruna laughed, “Okay then, but first you have to let go of me. I promise I won’t run away.” She answered.

Yuko hesitantly let go of her legs on Haruna’s waist as she sat still on the table. “Now close your eyes…” Haruna instructed.

Yuko giggled at the thought that finally, she would get her “chuu~” from her NyanNyan. “Alright, I’m waiting!” Yuko said excitedly, pouting her lips as she closed her eyes.

Haruna waited for a couple of seconds and was amused that Yuko kept on pouting her lips at her with eyes closed. Immediately, she clamped a hand on Yuko’s mouth then kissed the back of her own hand, giving out a resounding smack then let go of the other girl.

“I’ll see you later after lunch Yuko!” Haruna winked as she walked out of the garage.

Yuko blinked in disbelief at Haruna’s teasing, “Mou NyanNyan! Get back here and give me a proper kiss!” she yelled at Haruna’s retreating form.

*****

At the AKB Flag Girl’s Dressing Room…

The Flag Girls team is leisurely lounging inside their dressing room. Everyone is chatting amiably while enjoying the strawberry shortcake that Mayuyu bought from their favorite hangout, the Berry Parlour. Sitting in front of her designated booth with a piece of cake and a cup of tea at her table, Atsuko smiled a delicate smile as she scribbled something on her notepad.

Without even looking behind her and the mirror in front of her, she felt a very warm presence. “Ohayo, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na~” Atsuko whispered, still writing on her notepad.

Takamina raised her eyebrows in amusement and in surprise, placing her hand on Atusko’s shoulder. “Ohayo, Acchan. Wow… that is kinda creepy…” Takamina mused.

Atsuko grabbed Takamina’s hand then pulled her close to her back, making Takamina lean towards her with Takamina’s face just a few inches beside her face. “Creepy? What do you mean Takamina?” Atsuko asked, batting her eyelashes at Takamina’s reflection in the mirror.

Takamina blushed at their awkward position where Atsuko held her in her place. “Ah… well… it is creepy that you know that I’m right behind you when you weren’t even looking at the mirror.” She answered honestly.

Atsuko giggled then finally let go of Takamina. “There’s nothing creepy about it really. I just… know that you’re there…” Atsuko whispered. Trying to hide her blush, her eyes darted on her table looking for something that would change the subject. “Ah! Takamina, you should try this cake, it’s delicious.” Atsuko offered, pointing at her cake.

Takamina eyed the cake that Atsuko has obviously been eating before she came in the room. Grabbing the dessert spoon on the plate, she took a small piece and took a bite. “Hmm… Umai!” Takamina exclaimed, helping herself for another spoonful of the treat.

Tomochin, who is currently seated beside Atsuko while eating her cake, glanced sideways at the two and smirked devilishly. “You know Takamina, that’s the spoon that Atsuko is using right now.” Tomochin said, making Tomo-mi, who is sitting beside her giggle.

Takamina’s eyes widened in surprise as she heard Tomochin. Blushing furiously, she took a huge swallow on the cake, choking a bit as she almost swallowed it at the wrong pipe. Atsuko gasped at Takamina’s misfortune and patted her back, “Mou Tomochin. It’s not nice to tease Takamina while eating.” She pouted at the girl who is still smirking beside her.

Tomochin smiled innocently at Atsuko, “I didn’t say anything wrong Atsuko-chan,” Tomochin said then looked at Tomo-mi, “Ne~~~?”

Tomo-mi giggled and simply answered, “Chiyuu~~~!”

Atsuko shook her head at their friends’ playfulness, “Here Takamina, have some tea.” Atsuko said, offering her cup to Takamina.

Takamina took the cup and took a long sip. “Ma~~ isn’t that your cup, Atsuko-chan? Oh and look! Takamina sipped directly to where you last drank from it! Waa~~ indirect kiss!” Mayuyu teased, dramatically holding her spoon on her chest.

Hearing Mayuyu’s teasing, Takamina, again, choked. “Ah!!! Hot! Hot! Hot!” Takamina crunched her face as she felt the hot liquid going down her throat. “Mou! Why is everyone ganging up on me?!” she pouted, making everyone in the dressing room laugh.

Atsuko smiled, “Nevermind them. Here, have a seat.” She said, dragging a nearby chair beside her. Takamina sighed then seated at the offered chair. When Takamina finally got comfortable, Atsuko stood up and sat on Takamina’s lap then continued writing on her notepad as she leaned on to Takamina’s back.

“Ano… Acchan… why are you sitting on my lap?” Takamina asked, unconsciously wrapping her arms on Atsuko’s waist for balance.

“*cough* clueless Takamina *cough*” Rena piped in, faking a cough.

“Well, I like to sit on my Takachair, thank you very much.” Atsuko said. Takamina rolled her eyes.

“Ne, what are you writing anyway?” Takamina asked, glancing at the other girl’s shoulder to take a better look on the notepad.

“I write as a hobby whenever I have the time Takamina. I seem to have the inspiration at the moment so I might as well put it in writing.” Atsuko answered, glancing at an orange lily on her table. One of the staff members handed it to her when she got in the studio, telling her that it came from her secret admirer.

“Can I read it?”

Atsuko pressed her notepad on her chest. “I’ll finish this first before I’ll let you read it.”

Takamina blinked then sighed in resignation, “Anyway, I have something to tell you Acchan.”

Atsuko put down her notepad and pen on her table. She casually draped an arm over Takamina’s shoulder then adjusted herself so that she could sit on her lap sideways. “Ano… I’m gonna visit my Grandpa together with Haruna and Miichan so… I won’t be here until after lunch. I just want you to know that…” Takamina continued.

Atsuko smiled, gently tracing her other hand on Takamina’s face. “That’s so sweet of you…” she whispered, placing a kiss on Takamina’s cheek. “Hope you’ll all enjoy your day with your Grandpa then.” She continued as she stood up and sat back on her chair.

Blushing, Takamina placed her hand to where Atsuko kissed her then stood up as well. “Thanks. Well, Atsuko hime-sama, I’ll see you after lunch. Ja.” Takamina said, waving goodbye as she went out the door.

“Ooooo~~~ Atsuko hime-sama… Is Takamina treating you like a princess now? And wait… did you just gave Takamina a kiss?” Tomo-mi winked at Atsuko, everyone joined in with the teasing then began gathering at Atsuko’s table.

Atsuko sighed, Oh God… Now that Takamina left, I bet I’ll be the target of everyone’s teasing. Takamina! Come back here! She whined inwardly.

*****

At the Tokyo Special Operatives Agency

Midori stood patiently outside the main doors of the agency. As soon as the gates of the agency finally opened, 3 motorcycles zoomed past the guards. Midori rolled her eyes up to the heavens as the motorcycles stopped directly in front of her.

Acting in sync, Takamina, Haruna and Miichan removed their helmets and got off their motorcycles.

They make stepping off the bike look like some choreography in an action movie. Midori thought.

“Midori-sensei, you’re waiting on us now? We’re supposed to meet Grandpa not you, you know.” Miichan joked as the three cousins stepped in front of Midori.

“Good morning to you too, Miichan.” Midori smirked, “I heard from the grapevine that you’ll be coming for a visit, so I decided to escort you to the Chief’s office.” She added.

“Grapevine?” Haruna asked.

“We know our way to the Chief’s office, Midori-sensei. There’s no need for you to escort us. We know what kind of schedule that you keep.” Takamina said politely.

“I’m pretty sure you NEED an escort. The grapevine that I’m talking about is waiting for you three to come in the lobby.” Midori amusingly said as she turned to look at the windows by the main doors.

The three cousins followed Midori’s gaze and their eyes widened in surprise, “A-Ano, Midori-sensei… why are there a lot of agents crowding the lobby?” Takamina stammered.

Midori smirked, stretching her arms above her head, “Since you’ve been quite popular in the racing circuit, you’ve made every agents in your age group your fangirls… or whatever you call them nowadays. Even the graduating class of the academy suddenly came to visit their beloved sempais… if you know what I mean. C’mon you three, let’s go and face the music.”

As Midori opened the big double doors, deafening squeals suddenly greeted them like a rolling tidal wave. Seeing that the three cousins stayed rooted to where they are standing, Midori shrugged her shoulders and motioned for the three cousins to come inside the building.

Uh-oh… Takamina, Haruna and Miichan gulped.

*****

The three cousins, together with Midori squeezed themselves in between the crowd of agents as they made their way towards the lobby. Midori parted a path for the four of them to come in as the three cousins tried to say hi to all the agents squealing at them. Miichan acted cool especially in front of their kouhais. Haruna casually smiled at the crowd, frantically shoving Miichan to keep moving. Takamina on the other hand, fell behind as she was assaulted with hugs that Haruna has to grab her by the scruff of her shirt to pull her out of the crowd.

Takamina slammed her palm on the elevator button as they finally managed to get away from the excited crowd. “Mou! It’s about time you guys helped out!” she shouted to some senior agents who finally blocked the crowd from attacking them further into the elevators.

“I think they find it amusing…” Miichan mumbled, looking at the senior agents who are snickering because of their antics.

“Everyone knows that things gets exciting whenever you three are in the agency.” Midori smirked. The elevator finally made a ding! sound and open it’s doors. “Well then, let’s go up. I won’t be accompanying you to the Chief’s office. Youko will have a fit if she heard that I wasn’t able to finish my work for the day.”

The three cousins nodded, “Thank you for being our escort then.” Haruna teased as they went in the elevator.

*****

At the Chief’s Office…

Hisao Takahashi snickered when he saw the disheveled looks of his grandchildren, “You’ve gathered quite a large crowd downstairs. Either you became popular or it just runs in the family.” Hisao teased, motioning the three cousins to sit.

“Mou!” Takamina, Haruna and Miichan pouted as they plopped on the couch.

Hisao stood up from his leather chair then sat on a seat adjacent to where the cousins are sitting. “Anyway, I would like to congratulate the three of you for apprehending Vyacheslav Mikhailov. We’ve already taken him in to custody of the Russian Police Department.”

“It’s too bad we weren’t able to get that slimeball Jun-what’s-his-name.” Haruna pouted, “He used a helicopter to escape!”

“I’ve read that in Midori’s report.Hopefully, we’ll be able to gather enough evidence and identify the Yamamoto brothers who are the masterminds of these organized crimes that has been happening. Though their company is well known, they rarely go out in public.” Hisao answered. “Tell me, how are you fairing with the AKB48 team?”

The three cousins blushed at the same time, “Ano… we consider the team as our friends Grandpa…” Takamina whispered. Hisao laughed merrily earning him curious looks.

“That’s not what I’ve heard from Akimoto. It seems that his nieces are beginning to like the three new drivers…” Takamina, Haruna and Miichan stared at him incredulously, blushing at the same time. “Don’t worry it’s not a bad thing. Akimoto is really relieved that you three are part of his team. He is confident that you won’t let anything bad happen to everyone.”

“We’ll make sure to protect everyone Grandpa.” Miichan answered honestly, thinking of Mariko and the rest of the team.

“We’ll always be there when we are needed.” Haruna added, remembering her promise to Yuko.

“Everyone is relying on us, so we’ll do our best.” Takamina pumped her fist, imagining Atsuko’s brilliant smile.

“Very good. That’s the best answer that I want to hear from you. Just remember, in order to protect and to serve other people, you should also be careful in everything that you do. Our job is not just about risking our lives, but to make sure to stay alive as well. When you’re hurt or worse, get killed, it’s not just you who are in pain. Your family, friends and loved ones will feel the agony even more than you did.” Hisao reminded.

“Wakatta.” The three nodded their heads in response.

Hisao smiled, My grandchildren will be the best agents that this agency will ever have in their generation. “Now that that’s settled, I’m hungry. Would you like to have lunch in the cafeteria? We can continue our talk while eating...” He suggested.

“NO!!!” The three cousins answered in panic. Hisao raised an eyebrow curiously. He knows that the girls loved the food in the cafeteria and it took him by surprise to get such panicky reaction.

“What we mean Grandpa is that… wedontreallywanttogothroughthecrowddownstairsagain…” Miichan muttered.

Hisao laughed at how Miichan answered, “Good thing I still have good hearing to be able to understand that. Don’t worry, I’ll put on my “Chief Mode” look. That’ll keep them from coming to us within a two mile radius.” He winked as he hugged the girls, making their way out his office.

*****

An hour of conversation, hearty lunch, and two desserts later, the three cousins hugged their Grandpa to go back to the AKB Headquarters. Takamina, Haruna and Miichan were able to go out of the building with ease with the help of Hisao and his consistent “Chief Mode” look.

As the three cousins arrived at the headquarters, they noticed that the garage doors are closed, a large note taped on one of them.

“Takamina, Haruna and Miichan: Go to the studio when you get back – Sayaka.” Haruna read.

“I wonder what’s up in the studio…” Miichan whispered as they made their way towards at the said location.

Once they arrived, the Pit Crew huddled with the Flag Girls and the engineers from the Tech Lab. Everyone were whispering to each other excitedly, like the three of them, it seems that all of them don’t have an idea of what’s going on. Mariko, who is standing at the middle of the team saw them and waved for them to come closer. Her two other sisters hurried towards Haruna and Takamina’s side while Miichan moved a bit forward to stand closer to Mariko.

“Finally! You three are just in time!” Mariko smiled, specifically to Miichan. “As some of you know, I had a meeting at the Tokyo TV station just recently and I have good news. A manager of a well known recording artist asked us to be a part of her music video.” Mariko continued.

This news elicited excited squeals mostly from the Flag Girls but nevertheless, everyone was hyped up for the opportunity given to the team. Mariko laughed at everyone’s energy then motioned for everyone to quiet down.

“Minna, I would like to introduce to you to Sarukawa Keiji, president of the Monkey Pro. He’s the one who is responsible in producing the music video.” Mariko informed the team, pointing at a middle aged man wearing glasses beside him. Everyone bowed politely in greeting.

“Thank you for accepting our request Shinoda-san. We’re very happy for this collaboration with your team. I hope that we will work together harmoniously.” Sarukawa said.

“Ano, Sarukawa-shachou, where is she by the way?” Mariko asked.

Keiji looked at his watch, “She should be here by now…” He answered. Suddenly, a starfire pearl Lexus LS 2011 parked in front of the studio. “Ah! Right on time!” He bellowed.

Everyone glanced at the car as the chauffeur opened the passenger door. A slender foot that is enclosed in a Jimmy Choo white peep-toe slingbacks stepped out, then a woman of early 20’s wearing a white ruffled silk-satin halterneck dress accented with a multi-chain necklace, finally got out of the car. She flicked her hair as she clutched her D&G bag, purposely walking towards the large group.

“Wow… isn’t that…” Myao whispered, hiding her excitement as she realized who the woman is.

The said woman finally stopped right in front of everybody then removed her Gucci sunglasses.

“R-Ray?” Haruna gasped excitedly.

“Majide?!” Takamina exclaimed.

To be continued...

Sorry for the very long time it took me to update :mon wind: Work has been a pain and I've been revising this chapter for days :mon ko: Anyway, I just introduced additional characters in my fic (Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuun!!! :mon freeze: ) We'll see what will happen in the next chapter! :mon geek:

Hope everyone will like this update! Thanks for reading! Do write me a feedback if you have the chance! :mon sweat: :mon bye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: blughise on September 26, 2011, 09:14:03 PM

Yabbe!!!!!

Takamina in trouble!!!!

Acchan better move fast, a rival.......your biggest rival has just appeared!!!!

With Ray's appearance,it'll spice things up and it'll add more drama!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

I hope Atsuko would finally realize how much Takamina loved her and finally be together!!!!

please update soon AFLynx!!! XD XD XD

I so can't wait for the next chapter :grin:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: kahem on September 26, 2011, 10:07:42 PM

Oh Ray. Thing will become spicy hehehe

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: Flean on September 26, 2011, 11:01:51 PM

MariMii is H.O.T...... :mon crazyinlove: and KojiYu is so sweet~~~ :mon lovelaff: GAH!!! Too much cuteness.. :mon dance:

WHAT!!! Ray is appearing??? :mon spit: NOOO~~ This means troubles ahead... :mon geek:

Owh!!! Owh!!! Takamina and Acchan should be together already!!!! :tantrum:

I want the next chapter!!! ARGH!!!! :mon tantrum2: Please update soon... :mon surr:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: YumePouk on September 26, 2011, 11:29:06 PM

I just stop by to let you know that I really love how everything go so fluently :wub:
it's as if I'm watching a movie :-D

about ur updated
Mariko know how to spend those fifteen minutes alone with her Miichan :on love:
Teaser Kojima's something new to me, I really ike it & wish to see more of this side of her
AtsuMina moment in the dressing room are so sweet :inlove: + the indirects kissu~~ kyaaahhh :wub:
lol they were a bit famous in the agengcy befor but now they're become celebrities in their agency and have to walk pass abig crowd of fangirl XD
the cousins know Ray and
especialy did Takamina had some relation (?) with the Diva?!?!/ know her?!?!
We wanna see a jealous Atsuko again and
I hope she will claim Takamina and show to the Diva that she's only her property ^_~ :hehehe: :mon love:

can't wait to read more what will happen...update when you can...keep yoir great work
*go back to the shadow until I will have some free time again Y_Y*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: sorakamiya on September 27, 2011, 01:21:01 AM

Quote from: Flean on September 26, 2011, 11:01:51 PM

MariMii is H.O.T...... :mon crazyinlove: and KojiYu is so sweet~~~ :mon lovelaff: GAH!!! Too much cuteness.. :mon dance:

WHAT!!! Ray is appearing??? :mon spit: NOOO~~ This means troubles ahead... :mon geek:

Owh!!! Owh!!! Takamina and Acchan should be together already!!!! :tantrum:

I want the next chapter!!! ARGH!!!! :mon tantrum2: Please update soon... :mon surr:

i feel the same as daaaad~ :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

here come the love rival~ and i bet yuko love rival will soon appear :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

but make it atsuminaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: haruhi16 on September 27, 2011, 04:11:22 AM

MariMii couple is always so smexy.. and kojiyuu and atsumina couple are soooo cute :wub: :wub:

and wait.. RAY?! :shocked :shocked

oh i sense a disaster will be on the next chapter. :P

please update soon! :bow:

please update after two or three days, don't let us wait for one week :( . I love your story so please :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: JPopLover on September 27, 2011, 06:29:22 AM

ohhh snap! I sense a LOT of drama coming up with the appearance of the charismatic songstress Ray :hehehe: wow so now it's a AKB48/Mendol mix-up :glasses: Seriously, how do you write such an awesome story? :nya: Thanks for the update and hope you update again soon! :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: AFLynx on September 27, 2011, 12:06:21 PM

blughise: as always, you're the first to comment :hee: (just noticed it lately lol) Yes, with Ray in the picture... er, I mean in the fic, she'll definitely add spice and drama to the story! Thanks for reading!

kahem: you said it. :mon geek: lol thanks for reading!

Flean: there... there... calm down :monk gboy: lol I'll try to work on it as soon as possible. I'm actually in a pinch because of a typhoon here in the Philippines... im using the remaining battery life of my laptop since there's no electricity. :mon cweepy: So I'm gonna write the update first in the old fashioned way then transfer it in my laptop :nervous thanks for reading!

dream_catcher: lol i know the title is gonna be a hint! :lol: I'll have to make you wonder some more until the next update then :hee: thanks for reading!

YumePouk: :monk gboy: thank you for saying that it's like you're watching a movie. :mon love:
lol I just find Mariko sexy that I imagine that she CAN be a seductress lol as for Haruna/Yuko - yes it is something new, but possible to happen XD for Takaachan pairing - I'm just in the mood to somehow tease Takamina :wahaha:
Since the three cousins have arrested a member of a famous gang, I imagined that they are gonna be famous in the agency and came up with those scenes :lol:
I won't discuss anything about Ray :mon speechless: lol
thank you for reading! :luvluv2: dont lurk in the shadows too much lol

sorakamiya: this is gonna be the first and last spoiler for the next chapter: it IS gonna be more Atsumina centric but the other pairs will be in it too of course. :whistle: thanks for reading sora!

haruhi16: :mon sweat: I'll try to update it as soon as I can. Thank you for being patient in waiting for my updates. :mon love:

JPopLover: lol I just write down whatever comes into mind... though it is hard at times. :mon emo: i'm happy whenever what i imagine would turn out great once i finish it. and of course with everyone's encouragement, i try my best. :mon determined: there are times that i also take into consideration some suggestions (like the staring contest... it was supposed to be MariMii only :nervous) Thank you for reading~ :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: immortal_K on September 27, 2011, 12:29:55 PM

I woke up this morning and read this on my phone, and finally realize I forgot to come back and leave a nice long comment so here I am back here again just for this :twothumbs

Awesome and Amazing! Definitely not boring like you said, you lies! haha. A lot of drama, a lot of fluffs and a very hot MariMii!!!!! Those two are on FIRE~! Totally love their interaction and scenes, forever entertaining.

Yuko + Haruna, they are starting to come together very nicely, love how Yuko waited until Haruna open her eyes before she finished her jump and glomp.

Acchan and Takamina =.= too slow!! They should be together already, Takamina it's time to pick up the speed, Acchan sat on you, kissed you and all and still you are lagging behind. It's like you are getting left behind by Miichan and Haruna in the love department while you are still stuck in stage 1.
NOw that Ray also appeared, things will become difficult (i'm guessing) she doesn't just appear for fun, I'm sure there is a story/ plan to place her into the story during this time. I also have a feeling something is going to happen with them and the girls because of their dangerous missions. Why else would grandfather make an appearance to remind them right? Given that the bad guys know what they look like, and they are on the team and getting a lot of notice from their fans and media I suppose for doing so well in their races........

ANyways ranting on because I miss being here, so trying to extend my stay but unfortunately time to go back to the books.

THanks for the update. !

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on September 27, 2011, 10:08:27 PM

As much as I like Takamina leading the score for now, I kinda liked how it's a tie before and love's eyes, huh? :grin:
Official or not, MariMii is getting better and better :deco:

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“Takamina! You forgot your kiss from me!”

Totally laughing at that, Acchan you tease. Sometimes I feel bad for Takamina with all the teasing Acchan's done
It does feel creepy somehow how Acchan was able to tell Takamina's presence behind her 0_o
Finally the tease got the taste of being teased by the others XD
So maybe with the appearance of Ray will be the push she needed to be more serious on Takamina before the girl gets snatched by the rivals (I count Hotaru in :lol:). That is if Ray's going to fall for Takamina...though it would be funny if Ray's after Acchan instead lol
Either way I hope AtsuMina make a progress soon!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: takasica on September 28, 2011, 03:35:19 AM

Yay. I always love reading your updates. Taka and her obliviousness is quite amusing lol. But omg Ray, I did not expect thaaaat. I shipped Kai/Nami and Ray in Mendol and I'm quite excited to see what her role in this fic will be. Looking forward to the next chapter ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: AFLynx on September 28, 2011, 04:38:01 AM

immortal_K:

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Why else would grandfather make an appearance to remind them right?

well, I just thought that it's been a while since Grandpa was written in the previous chapters so... I included him in this chapter :mon sweat: but yeah, I also thought that it would be nice if someone would give an advice to the three cousins. :glasses:

pretend_2besome1: lol yeah it'll be funny if Ray falls for Acchan... :nervous I am still rooting for our Atsumina pairing though :onioncheer:

takasica: I love Kai/Nami x Ray pairing in Mendol too XD I just added Ray into the mix so that it will be complicated for everyone :on freeze: I'll try my best to make it more interesting for everyone. thanks for reading!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: Haruko on September 28, 2011, 07:02:48 AM

you are in trouble takaboy.... a stalker is coming now... acchan use your tactics for win takamina`s heart right now..

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on September 28, 2011, 10:52:25 AM

Manage to keep track this awesome fic of yours :twothumbs
I seriously like the way MariMii tease with each other :inlove:
can wait for the next update n OMG RAY :shocked ~~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: AFLynx on September 28, 2011, 12:11:33 PM

Haruko: lol now she's Takaboy... I wonder what will happen (still clueless since I'm still writing the next chapter lol :nervous)

CrimsonGrxy: Hi Crimson! :luvluv2: thank you for reading my fic! I'll try to work on the next chap as soon as I can!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: yourstruly on September 29, 2011, 06:14:47 AM

Someone's gonna be in a mess after this....i think 2 ppl will be in a mess......
Atsuko in a angry mess.....Takamina is in a triangular mess
and Ray will be a pest to Takamina.....
so much fun =)

Haruna and Yuko are so cute together in this fic <3

Miichan and Mariko is just super hot.......

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: AFLynx on September 29, 2011, 08:05:58 PM

yourstruly: :lol: lol I like your perception on what's gonna happen in the future chapters. yes, it's so much fun... though if there are 2 ppl in a mess, there's only 1 person who caused it... and that is me lol :grin: thanks for reading!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 15 - Enter the Diva] UPDATE! 9/27
Post by: RJay on September 29, 2011, 10:23:30 PM

takamina's in trouble now
acchan will be having a rival :OMG: :badluck:
i need updates, please update soon
can't wait for the next chapter

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: AFLynx on October 02, 2011, 08:32:45 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 16 – History

Previously…

“R-Ray?” Haruna gasped excitedly.

“Majide?!” Takamina exclaimed.

Ray smirked as she got the reaction that she expected since she stepped out of her car.

“Ranked Number 1 for ten consecutive weeks in Music 10. Our very own – Very Charismatic Diva Ray!” Keiji exclaimed as he introduced the singer in an exalted manner.

Ray rolled her eyes, brushing off Keiji’s introduction and walked towards Mariko. “Ohishashiburi, Mariko-san.” She greeted Mariko, then turned to Sayaka who was just behind the General Manager. “You too, Sayaka-kun. It’s been a while.” Greeting with her patented smile.

The greetings created murmurs of astonishment from the group. “Ne Yuko, how did Ray know Mariko-chan and Sayaka-chan?” Haruna asked in wonder, tugging Yuko’s sleeve.

Yuko huffed who seemed not affected with Ray’s display of charisma. “Ray-san, Mariko onee-chan and Sayaka-chan graduated in the same year. The three of them, including me and Acchan studied in the same high school.” She answered off-handedly.

“Sugoi! It must be great to know a singer like her since high school, right Acchan?” Takamina smiled, gently placing her hand on Atsuko’s shoulder. Atsuko absent-mindedly nodded in response. Takamina did not push the subject further, thinking that it is something of a delicate matter for the other girl.

Mariko shook Ray’s hand, “Ohisashiburi desu, Ray-san. Yes, it has been a while.” Sayaka walked beside Mariko and nodded at the singer, “Nice seeing you again Ray-chan.” Sayaka said with a curt smile.

Glancing sideways, Ray saw Yuko and Atsuko and walked towards them. “Yuko-san, fancy seeing you here too. You’ve grown a bit since I last saw you in our graduation.” Ray smirked.

Yuko frowned at Ray’s greeting. “And you, Ray-SAN, hasn’t changed a bit. You’re still the same Ray-I-know-I’m-a-diva since high school.” Yuko retorted. Ray ignored Yuko’s remark and looked at Atsuko, who was ignoring her while clinging on Takamina’s arm.

“Ara, is this little Maeda? You’re now taller than your sister beside you. I hope that you’ve developed your talent just as how tall you’ve become now.” Ray said cryptically.

Seeing that Atsuko did not reply and Yuko might blow a gasket in a few seconds, Mariko decided to intervene. “Ah, Ray-san! I want you to meet the drivers of the AKB48 team – Takahashi Minami, Kojima Haruna, and Minegishi Minami.” Mariko said, pointing at the cousins as she introduced them one by one. “One of them will be working with you in your new music video.” She continued in a hurried tone to break off the tension between Ray and her sisters. Seriously, this is beginning to feel like we’re back in high school!

“Eh?!?!” the three cousins exclaimed.

Keiji laughed at their reaction. “You’ve all heard Mariko-san correctly! As we’ve discussed in our meeting, one of the drivers will be involved in the MV. We’ll be choosing some members from the Flag Girls and the Pit Crew as well,” he announced. Everyone clapped with excitement for the possible opportunity to be included in the video.

Haruna shyly stepped forward towards Ray, followed by her cousins. “It’s nice to meet you Ray-san. Ano… I’ve always been a fan since your debut. Is it okay if we shake hands with you?” she asked. The cousins hastingly wiped their hands on their pants. Haruna slowly stretched her hand to Ray.

Ray scrutinized the three cousins from the sneakers that they are wearing up to the worn out overalls that they wear in the garage. She raised an eyebrow and turned her back at Haruna, slapping the offered hand.

“Don’t touch me.” Ray simply stated.

“What?” Haruna asked her cousins who just shrugged their shoulders. She made a quick scan of herself, noting that there’s nothing wrong with what they are currently wearing. After all, it is their everyday work clothes and the Flag Girls didn’t mind it much.

“Weren’t you listening? I said – Don’t.Touch.Me.” Ray said, stressing every word.

Everyone stared at the diva in bewilderment, Sayaka simply shook her head and looked at Mariko. “Looks like some things never change.” Sayaka whispered to Mariko who nodded in agreement.

“Seriously Sarukawa-shachou, one of them will be in my MV? A songbird like me can’t be in the same video with some… grease monkeys like them.” Ray complained to Keiji as she daintily sat on a nearby couch in the studio’s lounge room. Haruna lowered her head with a clear dejected look on her face.

“No way…” Haruna said sadly.

Yuko’s ears flared red at what Ray said. “OI! The one that you’re calling a grease monkey is my NyanNyan!!! Why I’d oughta kic-hmmphf! Mmphfphh!!! HMMMPH!!!!” Mariko was able to clamp Yuko’s mouth shut with her hand as Sayaka and Atsuko grabbed Yuko’s flailing arms before she could get her hands on the diva.

I’ve had enough of her attitude! Takamina thought, disappointed that a famous person just single-handedly rejected a fan, much worse, her cousin Haruna!

“Oi, you ugly woman!” Takamina taunted at Ray, who got her attention. “There’s nothing wrong with the clothes that we wear and what we do for a living. I don’t care if you’re the most popular singer or whatever. A woman with an ugly character like yours is someone who should not be idolized by people.” Takamina continued, glaring at Ray.

“Takamina, calm down. You shouldn’t say those things to Ray-san. She’s still our guest!” Miichan reminded.

“I don’t care!” Takamina shot back. She grabbed Ray’s hand, forcing her to stand up. Ray’s cheeks flushed pink while staring at Takamina’s determined eyes. “Listen here, if you don’t fix that attitude of yours, you’re going to be lonely for the rest of your life.”

Everyone gawked at what Takamina said. Sayaka went behind Takamina and slapped her with a large harisen on the back of her head. “Ray-san, Sarukawa-shachou, I apologize for my crew member’s misbehavior.” Sayaka bowed, forcing Takamina to bow as well by grabbing Takamina’s head.

Seeing that everyone’s attention is towards her, Ray’s lips quivered from embarrassment and stormed out of the studio.

“Ray... Chotto matte!” Keiji shouted at Ray’s retreating form. “What a weird temper… Anyway, I’m also sorry about Ray’s behavior. We’ll be back tomorrow for further details of the music video.” Keiji bowed to the AKB team and followed the diva.

“Wow… that went well… by the way, where did the Chief get the harisen from?” Miichan mumbled, making everyone look at her.

*****

After the meeting with Ray, the whole team decided to spend the afternoon in their favorite café.

“Wow Takamina, you sure handled Ray in a manly manner a while ago. You gave her a taste of her own medicine.” Miichan commented, waving her spoon at her cousin.

“Oi.” Takamina reacted. “I was just telling the truth. And besides, it’s pretty much obvious how she just embarrassed Haruna by calling us grease monkeys.” She reasoned out.

“By the way Mariko-chan, Sayaka-chan… Yuko said that you know Ray since you were in high school. Is she such a brat back then?” Haruna asked.

Sayaka huffed at the question as she took a bite of her strawberry tart. “Mariko-chan and I were Ray’s classmates. She was a member of the glee club and she sings most of the solos and arias during school festivals. Ray displayed a promising talent at such a young age that she was called The Diva by the entire school. I think it did get into her head that most of the time, she doesn’t let anyone forget that fact.” She informed everyone.

“Ne Yuko, how come you’re greeting with Ray seemed… I don’t know, hostile?” Haruna asked Yuko who is sitting beside her.

“You can say that. She used to bully every member of the club, especially Acchan.” Yuko pointed her youngest sister across the table.

Takamina looked at Atsuko seated beside her, poking at her berry parfait. “Did she really bully you?” she asked. Everyone blinked as they waited for Atsuko to reply.

“Yeah, she did…” Atsuko whispered, eating a spoonful of her treat.

Yappari, I know she wouldn’t answer that question directly, Yuko thought. “When Atsuko entered high school, she also became a member of the glee club. Our advisor took note of Acchan’s singing and instantly knew that Acchan will be the next soloist once Ray-san graduates. Ray-san didn’t take it lightly and began taunting Acchan that she will never compare to her singing abilities. During Mariko onee-chan’s senior year, Acchan was supposed to sing the solo for the school festival but she backed out because of Ray-san.” Yuko answered for her sister.

“I didn’t know that… what happened?” Mariko asked, raising an eyebrow.

“Sensei chose Acchan because everyone knows that the seniors are busy before graduation. Ray-san however, managed to bully Acchan that she won’t perform that well on stage. Acchan became nervous and eventually backed out. Ray-san managed to pull an innocent face, saying that she will bear Acchan’s supposed responsibility." Yuko said in an irritated tone, gesturing a quotation mark with her index and middle fingers.

"That really sounded like the Ray we used to know. She knows how to psywar anyone to her advantage." Sayaka said.

Mariko gently placed her hand on top of Atsuko's, "Gomen ne Acchan if I wasn't able to defend you from Ray's bullying before..." she apologized sadly.

Atsuko smiled, "It's okay onee-chan, I won't let it happen again."

"Now that that's been cleared, there's something that Takamina should do." Sayaka said. Takamina looked curiously at Sayaka then pointed at herself.

"You're talking about me? What do you mean Sayaka-chan?" Takamina asked.

"You should apologize to Ray." Sayaka simply said, polishing the rest of her tart.

"What?! I thought everyone agreed that Ray-san deserved what Takamina said to her?" Yuko complained.

My little sister doesn’t seem to forgive and forget that easily... At least she did it for Acchan... Mariko sighed. "Technically she argued with a client, and it'll bad for our team's image if Ray tells the media on us." she reasoned.

Atsuko scooted her chair closer to Takamina, “I think you should really apologize to Ray-san. Just think about the team, if not, do it for me.” She whispered, smiling at the racer.

Takamina blushed then sighed, “All right, I will apologize to Ray-san when she gets back to the headquarters. I will do it for Acchan and for the team, but it doesn’t mean that I have to like it.” Takamina announced to the group.

Tomochin, who is seated beside Takamina, stared at the racer which Takamina noticed. “Why are you staring at me Tomochin?” she asked, raising an eyebrow.

Tomochin shrugged then went back to eating her fruit tiramisu tart, “Nothing. It’s just that I noticed before Ray stormed out of the studio, she was blushing… or maybe it’s just my imagination.” She said off-handedly.

“That’s impossible. The only reason why she would blush is because of embarrassment.” Yuko interjected.

Tomochin again shrugged her shoulders, “Maybe… or it might be something else.” She said cryptically. Everyone furrowed their eyebrows and shrugged their shoulders as well.

*****

The next day…

Takamina went ahead and opened the garage door as Haruna and Miichan parked their car in the parking lot. She quickly went to their locker room and started changing in their usual work clothes. As soon as she finished changing, she scanned the Pit Crew’s bulletin board where all the daily tasks were posted for each member.

“I think I’m gonna have a headache from all the things that I have to do today…” Takamina sighed, resting her forehead on the bulletin board. Suddenly, a loud clicking of heels echoed in the empty garage that stopped a few meters behind her.

“Busy day?” the other person whispered, her voice echoing inside the garage.

Takamina turned around, expecting that it was one of her cousins or a member of the team. “R-Ray… san… Why are you here?” Takamina mumbled, not expecting for Ray to answer.

They stared at each other for a moment and then Takamina suddenly became conscious and remembered that she have to apologize to the idol. “Erm… I’m really sorry how things went yesterday when we met.” Takamina said sincerely, deeply bowing in front of Ray.

*****

As Haruna and Miichan was about to walk out of the parking lot, they noticed an unfamiliar Lexus car parked beside their car.

“I wonder who arrived this early…” Haruna wondered.

“I’m not sure… most of the members in our team doesn’t have their own personal car… anyway, I’m sure Takamina has already opened the garage so we might check if we have a visitor.” Miichan answered.

As they were about to enter the garage, Haruna and Miichan noticed Takamina and Ray standing at the middle of the garage.

“Erm… I’m really sorry how things went yesterday when we met.” Takamina said sincerely, deeply bowing in front of Ray.

“Good thing that Takamina kept her promise that she would apologize to Ray-san. Let’s eavesdrop for a bit and give them some privacy.” Miichan said, yanking Haruna back outside the garage door.

“I wonder how Ray-san would react this time.” Haruna whispered.

*****

Takamina stood up straight after she bowed at the idol, scratching the back of her head. “I have no hard feelings, and I was just casually saying what came to mind… no… I mean that… Um…” Takamina stammered.

She’s cute when she stammers, Ray thought. Seeing that Takamina is still on a roll in mumbling her apology, Ray walked in front of her and closed the gap between them by kissing Takamina’s lips.

*****

Haruna and Miichan gasped at what they saw.

“Kiss?!” Haruna whispered.

“Uso?!” Miichan exclaimed.

*****

Takamina froze at what Ray did and slightly pushed the older woman from her and jerked backwards, stumbling on a toolbox lying behind her on the floor. “Wha-?! What are you doing?” she exclaimed. “You’re Japan’s number 1 Diva! If someone saw what you did, it’ll be scandalous and it will ruin your career!”

“It’s fine because I belong to Nami now.” Ray smiled.

“Nami?!” Takamina raised an eyebrow.

“Yup, that’s the nickname that I decided to call you.” Ray said in a matter of fact tone.

Takamina rolled her eyes, like she just heard a loud feedback from what Ray said. “I feel dizzy right now…” she groaned, trying to digest what’s going at this time of the day.

*****

Haruna and Miichan almost stumbled from what they heard.

“What the hell?! How did things get like this?” Miichan asked in bewilderment as she and Haruna kept on eavesdropping.

*****

Ray shyly looked on the floor and smiled, “I’m really happy about those things that you said yesterday.” She whispered, remembering the harsh but honest words that Takamina said yesterday. “I’m very famous in the music industry that no one dares to lecture me even if I’m being selfish or ill-tempered…”

That’s not something to be proud of… Takamina thought.

“…but now I understand!” Ray continued, grabbing Takamina’s hand. “You said those words to me because you care for me. It’s your confession of true love!”

Takamina quickly let go of her hand, “You’ve got it all wrong! I was just telling the tru-mmph!” Takamina wasn’t able to finish when Ray suddenly kissed her again.

*****

“What the?!” Haruna bellowed, clamping her mouth with her hand because of her sudden outburst.

“Kiss… Part 2!” Miichan mumbled, making a ‘V’ sign.

“What do you mean ‘Part 2’ Miichan?” Mariko asked, who was standing beside the two cousins.

Haruna and Miichan turned in surprise when they heard Mariko’s voice. The General Manager just arrived together with her sisters who were looking curiously at them.

“Ano… well… we have a visitor… and she’s with Takamina right now.” Miichan stammered, pointing inside the garage.

“Since we’re here, let’s meet the visitor as well.” Yuko said, almost entering the garage when Haruna stopped her. Yuko looked at Haruna curiously as if asking what’s wrong.

“I think it’s a bad idea because our visitor is speaking privately with Takamina.” Haruna reasoned out as she blocked the entrance.

Atsuko raised an eyebrow at what she heard. “Who’s the visitor that you’re talking about Haruna?”

Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko stared expectantly at Haruna and Miichan, waiting for an answer. “It’s Ray-san…” Haruna answered.

Atsuko’s eyes widened in surprise and immediately stormed inside the garage, making her older sisters, Haruna and Miichan follow suit.

*****

Takamina pushed Ray again, “Mou! Will you stop doing that?!” she groaned. She turned her head towards the garage entrance when she heard footsteps coming in the garage. Takamina’s eyes widened in surprise as she suddenly realized that Atsuko saw Ray’s kiss. Oh crap… Takamina thought.

Atsuko’s eyebrow twitched as she saw Ray kiss Takamina. MY Takamina! She inwardly growled. With a determined look on her face, she walked towards them and stopped in front of Takamina. She took out a handkerchief from one of her skirt pockets then gently wiped Takamina’s lips.

“You should be careful Takamina. You might get something contagious.” Atsuko said, clearly talking about Ray as she continued to wipe off the lipstick on Takamina’s lips. Ray simply raised an eyebrow and crossed her arms over her chest.

Takamina blushed at the attention that Atsuko’s giving her. “A-Arigatou…”

Sensing a storm brewing between Atsuko and Ray, Mariko – as always, decided to join in the conversation, “Ano, Ray-san… we’ll have our meeting in a couple of minutes. I suggest that we wait for Sarukawa-shochou in my office.” Mariko suggested as she tried to coax the diva out of the garage.

Ray huffed, strutted and stopped beside Atsuko and stared at the younger girl. I am not the little girl that you used to bully Ray-san! Atsuko thought as she glared at the diva without hesitation.

Ray smirked at the determined look on Atsuko’s face. Ma~~ is that a challenge look that you’re sporting Maeda? You are so on! I will get my Nami’s love without you even knowing it. Ray thought, shooting Atsuko a withering glare as she stormed out from the garage with Mariko following behind.

To be continued...

Finally, I was able to update my fic! Gomen ne minna if it took me so long :mon surr:
Yes, (if some of you are wondering 'why is this scene seemed familiar...') I incorporated the scenes from mendol into this chapter :mon sweat:
*short disclaimer: Mendol Ikemen Idol is not mine... but this fanfic is mine XD lol
I hope everyone will like this new installment! I would love to read your comments about this new chapter. Thanks for being patient everyone! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: blughise on October 02, 2011, 09:19:52 PM

OMG :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

RAY YOU A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :scolding: :on voodoo: :mon mad:

How dare her slap NyanNyan's beautiful hands!!!!! :mon mad:
and bully Acchan!!!! :angry: :knee:

I Swear i'll hunt her down!!!! :on voodoo: :temper:

And now she's going to steal Takamina away from Acchan!!!

ACCHAN don't lose to that Ray bitch!!!

Ganbarre !!!! :onioncheer:

FIGHT FOR YOUR LOVE!!!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: RJay on October 02, 2011, 09:21:02 PM

daijobu AFLynx-san
love triangles makes it even more interesting
keep up the good work
i kno its to early to say this but
please update ASAP
good job on this fic BTW(rlly interesting)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: blackstar on October 02, 2011, 09:36:16 PM

I love :heart: ur fic
im new here please take care of me :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: Flean on October 02, 2011, 09:37:50 PM

Hahahaha... Such an interesting chapter.... :on GJ: with mendol's scenes...

Quote from: AFLynx on October 02, 2011, 08:32:45 PM

MY Takamina! She inwardly growled. With a determined look on her face, she walked towards them and stopped in front of Takamina. She took out a handkerchief from one of her skirt pockets then gently wiped Takamina’s lips.

I totally like this AtsuMina moment... Gah!!! So sweet!!!! :wriggly:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: kahem on October 02, 2011, 11:09:50 PM

Ray started to move, Acchan don't lose

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on October 03, 2011, 12:19:15 AM

wowowo~ Ray already making her first move :lol:
u never fail to amaze me with ur fic :twothumbs
n yay! mendol scene coming back again~

will be waiting for the next update, keep up the gudwork :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: immortal_K on October 03, 2011, 12:37:36 AM

=.= its almost exactly what I thought after you tried to tell me what will happen LOL.

But it always feel different reading it, enjoying my daily dose of reading if not for the appearance of RAY!!!!! RAGE!!!!
Okay maybe not as bad as Blu above, but still RAGE!!!! I was always saying how Takamina and Atsuko is so slow and taking forever,
now there is a reason for them to speed up or Ray might get a chance :panic: AHHHH PANIC!

Ray will forever be a source of entertainment where ever she appears, always kicks up a storm and brings in the drama. So she use to
bully Acchan too =.=

:twothumbs :twothumbs Another awesome update, good thing I never trust you when you said its not good :P

LYNX! UPDATE SOON! or I will troll you again!!!! :twisted: :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on October 03, 2011, 02:52:01 AM

Ah it been a long time since I have reply to a story
Ah I feel competition for takamina
Atsuko don't give up
Update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: JPopLover on October 03, 2011, 03:52:02 AM

Oh snap! :pandaaa: I can't believe history is really repeating itself :frustrated: Looks like Acchan's got some competition :ding: I predict some serious drama and comedy following suit :kekeke: That was an awesome update and hope you update again soon! :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: haruhi16 on October 03, 2011, 04:04:33 AM

Oh sh*** ! Ray wtf ?! :angry: :angry: :angry:

Takamina's heart is for Acchan only!! ACCHAN!!

Acchan! fight for your Takamina! :cow:

Takamina, please slap Ray's face..no.. PUNCH her face if she kiss you again!!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Nice chapter btw AFLynx! please update soon!! Don't let us wait for a week :angry: :angry:

LOL kidding XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: AFLynx on October 03, 2011, 05:31:53 AM

blughise: :err: your reaction is quite amusing :rofl: don't hunt Ray down yet... she's still needed in my future chapters :nervous

RJay: Hi RJay! :hee: sorry for not replying to your first comment... was busy banging my head on the wall for this update :banghead: jk! anyway, i just noticed that you're quite fairly new in making comments in my fic... so id like to say thank you for liking my fic :luvluv2:

blackstar: hi blackstar! welcome to the jphip forums! :welcome :jphip: i'm happy to know that you love my fic :luvluv2:

Flean: thanks for the comment Flean! Honestly, I am quite happy that I was able to connect my chapters and was able to incorporate mendol scenes as well. I can also imagine Atsuko glaring at Ray for kissing her Takamina :nervous

kahem: let's cheer for Acchan so that she can hurry up already! :onioncheer: :scolding:

CrimsonGrxy: thank you for your comment :shy1: i'll do my best! :mon determined:

immortal_K: *fail* I am not trustworthy :on blackhole: :mon runcry: lol kidding! okay, from now on, i wont say that my update is no good. I always feel that way when I read fics... yes, i'd have an idea on what's gonna happen but in the end, it almost always surprise me at how the writer was able to write the scene that it makes it totally different from what I assumed the story would go. :nervous

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LYNX! UPDATE SOON! or I will troll you again!!!! :twisted: :lol:

lol either way, you'll end up trolling me anyway :mon exhaust: so im not really surprised lol

Ninjatigerdemon: yes it's been a while since I last saw you comment, but I'm happy that you were able to read my update :hee: thank you!

JPopLover: thank yo JPopLover! :luvluv2: yes, there will be drama and comedy in the upcoming chapters because of Ray's sudden appearance in my fic so stay tuned! :hee:

haruhi16: thanks for reading haruhi! as what I would always say, I'll try my best to write the next update. please bear with me whenever it takes some time before I update :depressed:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: arisa03 on October 03, 2011, 09:03:48 AM

Troll! LOL. GO ACCHAN! TROLL RAY!! We all know Takamina is more than head over heels for Acchan anyway <3. Update soon~~~~~~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: Arakawa on October 03, 2011, 09:46:27 AM

Go Ray :~)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: AFLynx on October 03, 2011, 10:09:16 AM

dream_catcher: yeah, i noticed that 100% of the time, things are complicated for the atsumina pairing :nervous

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say, you won't be making problems for kojiyuu and marmii right?

regarding this, i really haven't thought about it... but it is possible... though im not making any promises :mon sweat: it is an interesting suggestion though :mon dunno:
thanks for reading!

arisa03: hi arisa-chan! :mon hi: it's been a while since i saw you comment here :mon sweat: lol I'm already pitying Takamina from all the attention that she'll get from Acchan and Ray :mon lol: thanks for reading!

Arakawa: Hi Arakawa! I take it that your bets are on Ray? XD :P I'm already excited to write on how she'll get Takamina's attention from Ray. :mon cigar:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: arisa03 on October 03, 2011, 10:16:30 AM

Yeah, I have been really busy and do not have the time to reply. ;____; And LOL. Poor Takamina. xD I know she'll choose Acchan anyway. <3<3<3<3 Go Takamina! Reject Ray like a boss! LOL xD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: RJay on October 03, 2011, 09:40:25 PM

Quote from: AFLynx on October 03, 2011, 05:31:53 AM

RJay: Hi RJay! :hee: sorry for not replying to your first comment... was busy banging my head on the wall for this update :banghead: jk! anyway, i just noticed that you're quite fairly new in making comments in my fic... so id like to say thank you for liking my fic :luvluv2:

@AFlynx: yup i'm new here :hee: , its ok really and no problem, i really like it no, i mean i really love it :luvluv1:, i read from prologue till chapter 15 in just 2 days :on study: that's proof how much i love reading this fic :wriggly:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: haruhi16 on October 04, 2011, 02:42:28 AM

AFLynx, please you told me you'll put KOJIYUU couple in a mess and you'll make Haruna jealous! you know for a change! I'm still waiting about that. Please take note! :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: yourstruly on October 04, 2011, 03:30:57 AM

AHHH!!! I WANT TO KILL RAY >=(
Has she never heard of Takacchan or Atsumina? God...where has she been all her life....

GO ATSUKO, you show that diva what you will do for love....
Takamina better protect Acchan or else.....

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: Haruko on October 04, 2011, 06:23:15 AM

jajaja kiss part 2 I love the scene!!.. but the answer of atsuko was much better:D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: AFLynx on October 04, 2011, 07:05:28 AM

arisa03: :mon hi: arisa-chan! everybody seemed busy nowadays (including me :nervous ) and it is understandable. i wonder how Takamina will handle things though :dunno:

RJay: wow that sure is fast! :on study: thank you for liking... no, loving my story! XD

haruhi16:

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Since you've mentioned something about a lil twist for the KojiYuu pair, I'll try to think of something that will go nicely to the plot of my story :mon determined: just don't hold your breath though :nervous

^ that was my last reply to you regarding your request haruhi16. i apologize if it will take long or worst case scenario if im not gonna be able to write about the 'twist' in my Kojiyuu pair... because of my ongoing plot, i have to wait for the right opportunity to make it happen... if it happens. :kneelbow: i hope you'll understand :)

yourstruly: don't kill Ray... i still need her in my chapters :on chew: lol We'll see how Takamina will handle things between Ray and Atsuko :nervous

Haruko: lol me too! it was so hilarious that i just have to add that in my fic... and it fits in the scene! XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: Japanime1 on October 07, 2011, 10:30:18 PM

Woo~ all in one sitting~! :grin: Hope you enjoyed my live commentary. :mikilaugh:

TIME TO HEAT THINGS UP! :bath:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 16 - History Repeats Itself] UPDATE! 10/03
Post by: immortal_K on October 07, 2011, 11:50:52 PM

@Japanime1: I don't know if Lynx enjoyed your live commentary but I definitely found it very amusing and :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: AFLynx on October 08, 2011, 10:52:18 PM

This chapter is for a friend who is a stalker/lurker in the forums with an original name :on crazygran:

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 17 – Challenge

Takamina tapped her pencil on the logbook attached on a clipboard as she made her inspection of the race car that Miichan will use for the upcoming competition. Everything seemed in tiptop shape… she thought, ticking off the car parts that she already checked. Let’s see… Window net – check!... Battery mount – check!... Stickers… Takamina walked her way to the driver’s seat where Miichan is also helping in the inspection, checking the racing seat and seat belts.

“Miichan, are the safety stickers in place, especially on the emergency kill switch?” Takamina peeked inside the driver’s side of the car.

Miichan, who is sitting on the driver’s seat, is checking the durability of the roll cage and how the driver’s seat is firmly attached to the tubular structure that forms the cage. “Yup, everything seems to be in place...” She said, pointing at the sticker just beside of the steering wheel.

Takamina ticked off the final item to be checked as Miichan got out of the car. “This car that you’re gonna use looks good isn’t it Miichan?” she said. Mariko was able to convince Honda to sponsor a car for the team by submitting the designs made by the team’s engineers Honda gladly accepted Mariko’s proposal that they applied the engine and applied the designs of the engine and the exterior of the car and named it the limited edition Honda AKB #48 NSX-GT 2011.

Miichan tapped her chin as she circled the car. For her, the car looks impressive. Sae was in charge of overseeing the paint job and design with Sayaka’s approval. The car is painted pink that gradiates to black, with the team’s name “AKB” painted white on the hood of the car. A white number 48 are painted on the roof and either sides of the car with their major sponsor’s name emblazoned just behind it. Various different sponsor stickers are also adorned in the car. “I think I’m gonna name this baby… Gachapin.” Miichan said with finality in her voice.

“Gachapin?” Takamina said, raising an eyebrow in confusion.

“Yup, I remember Sayaka-chan calling me that… so I’m gonna name it Gachapin just to irritate her.” Miichan said, sticking out her tongue.

“But it’s not even green!” Takamina reasoned, pointing at the car.

As the two were about to argue about the name of the car, Haruna made her way towards them after inspecting each of the spare tires for the race. “How’s the inspection coming along?” she asked.

“It’s already finished. Miichan just named the car Gachapin for crying out loud.” Takamina answered, pointing her thumb to Miichan.

“But it’s not even green…” Haruna said, tilting her head sideways as she looked at the car.

“I already said that to her…” Takamina mumbled.

Miichan pouted, “Fine then, I’ll call her GachaPINK since you’re arguing about the color of the car.”

“You’re lucky that the car doesn’t know how to talk or it could’ve complained about the name you gave it.” Haruna said, making Takamina and Miichan laugh. Haruna decided to change the topic of conversation and smiled devilishly at Takamina. “Anyway Takamina, how does it feels that there are two girls who are fighting for your affection?” she asked, nudging Takamina’s side.

Takamina inwardly groaned as she tapped the clipboard on her forehead, hiding her face in the process. “Mou, don’t remind me of what happened this morning. It’s awkward enough that I have to stand in between them while they stare at each other as if they want to rip each other’s heads off!” Takamina said, her shoulders slump as she placed her clipboard on a nearby table.

“I gotta hand it to you Takamina… girls seem to notice you without you putting much effort. Hotaru wants to be your bride… and lo and behold - here comes the very charismatic diva Ray who seemed to believe that you’ve confessed your undying love to her, thus giving you a new nickname. You’re manning up!” Miichan winked, slapping her hand on Takamina’s shoulder.

Takamina narrowed eyes and gave out a sarcastic little laugh at Miichan. “How many times do I have to tell you: I.Am.Not.A.Man! I’m still a girl the last time I checked this morning thank you very much.”

Sayaka walked past the three cousins as she tacked a paper on the bulleting board beside where Takamina was standing. She clapped her hands, signaling for the entire crew to gather in front of her. “Team I have an announcement for you. I’ve attended the meeting with Mariko-chan and Ray-san and handed me the list of the members that will be included in the Music Video. You can check if you’re names are included in the list.” Sayaka said, patting the paper she just attached on the board.

Since the three cousins were just beside Sayaka during the announcement, they were the first ones who stood in front of the board as the rest of the Pit Crew flocked to read the list:

Race Car Driver / Ray’s partner – Takahashi Minami

Members of the Pit Crew included:
Kitahara Rie
Kuramochi Asuka
Matsui Jurina
Miyazawa Sae
Sashihara Rino
Takajo Aki

*any changes in the list will be announced later on*

“I don’t know if I should feel happy or scared that you’ve been chosen Takamina…” Miichan mumbled.

Takamina pinched the bridge of her nose between her thumb and index finger, “Great… juuuuuust great…”

*****

At the Flag Girls Studio – Lounge Room…

Atsuko sighed as she continued writing in her notebook. This didn’t go unnoticed by Yuko and the other girls that are sitting beside her in the lounge room.

“Ano… Atsuko-chan… its okay to vent out but, I think you’re already drilling a hole in your notebook.” Tomochin said, holding Atsuko’s hand to prevent damaging her notebook further.

Atsuko blinked and stared at her notebook. “Ah, gomen… I’m just irritated, that’s all.”

“What are you writing anyway Acchan?” Yuko asked, propping her feet on the coffee table as she slouched on the couch beside her youngest sister.

“Oh it’s nothing… well it IS something… I’ve been meaning to give this to Takamina but I haven’t finished it yet.” Atsuko replied, flipping her notebook to write on a new page.

“Aww… that’s so sweet.” Tomochin cooed. A clicking of heels interrupted their conversations as they saw Yukirin enter the lounge room towards their bulleting board.

“Hey Yukirin, where have you been?” Chii-chan asked as every member walked towards the bulleting board.

“Mariko-chan asked me to join the meeting and informed me that I’ll be the make-up artist for the music video. I don’t know if I’m gonna enjoy doing Ray’s makeup during the video production.” Yukirin scowled, tacking the paper in place on the board.

“Well, you could mess up her makeup… accidentally that is.” Yuko suggested with a devilish grin.

“Nah, it’ll be too obvious. Anyway, I was also asked to post this on our bulletin board. It’s the list of the members who will be in the music video.” Yukirin pointed at the board.

The Flag Girls suddenly huddled in front of the bulletin board to read the list:

Race Car Driver / Ray’s partner – Takahashi Minami

Members of the Flag Girls included:
Itano Tomomi
Kasai Tomomi
Matsubara Natsumi
Matsui Rena
Miyazaki Miho
Nakata Chisato
Watanabe Mayu

*any changes in the list will be announced later on*

“How come everyone’s included except for Atsuko-chan and Yuko-chan?” Tomo-mi asked.

“I don’t really care since its Ray-san’s music video.” Yuko answered off handedly.

“But Yuko-chan, you’re our captain and Atsuko-chan is our Ace so it is kinda weird that’s all.” Mayuyu said.

Atsuko stared at the list and frowned as she saw who will be Ray’s partner in the video. “I think I know who is behind all this. I’m gonna talk to Mariko onee-chan.” She said, tearing up the paper from the board and stomped her way to Mariko’s office.

“Oi Acchan! Don’t let me miss all the fun!” Yuko yelled, running after her sister.

*****

Atsuko is fuming as she stomped towards Mariko’s office, ignoring Yuko who is keeping up with her pace. She purposely slammed the door open as she barged in the office.

“Mariko onee-chan! What’s the meaning of thi – oh… it’s you… what are you doing here? Where is Mariko onee-chan?” Atsuko narrowed her eyes dangerously to the person sitting on the couch reading a magazine.

Ray continued to flip through the pages of the magazine, “Mariko-san asked me to stay here as she went out to meet the director of the music video at the lobby.” She answered abruptly.

“Care to explain this?” Atsuko asked, holding the paper in front of Ray’s face.

“It’s a list of names… I expect that you know how to read Maeda.”

“Why is Mariko onee-chan not included? She’s also a member of the Flag Girls you know.” Yuko asked, crossing her arms over her chest.

“Mariko-san will be co-producing the video so she voluntarily declined to be added in the lineup.”

“How about Yuko onee-chan, I think it’s in the protocol that the team’s captain should be included.” Atsuko said.

“She’ll just ruin my music video by being irritable.” Ray said, placing the magazine back to the coffee table in front of her.

“Actually you did me a huge favor. Now I don’t have to put up with your diva attitude.” Yuko said sarcastically. “Why is my youngest sister not in the list? She’s the Ace of the team.” Yuko added.

“Conflict of interest.” Ray said as she stood in front of the two sisters. Yuko and Atsuko looked at each other, wondering what Ray means.

“It is obvious that you like my Nami, Maeda. I intend to have her to myself.”

“Nami? I don’t think Takamina will like that nickname. Stay away from her. You’re not good for her.” Atsuko said.

Ray let out a short laugh. “How would you know? I know my Nami is still single. That means I have a shot in getting her to love me.”

Yuko almost gagged at what Ray said. “Don’t flatter yourself Ray-san. Takamina won’t pick you as her girlfriend.” Yuko mocked.

Ray raised an eyebrow, then turned to face Atsuko. “Oh yeah? Well then, tell me Maeda: did Nami ever ask you to be her girlfriend?”

Atsuko was stunned at the question. “Well… I…” It is obvious that Takamina likes me… right?

Ray smirked seeing that Atsuko became flustered at her blunt question. “Did you even tell her that you like her?”

“I…” I’ve been teasing her all this time…

“If ever Nami has shown you kindness, don’t you think that it’s just part of her nature?”

“…” Takamina is kind to everybody… I am more than just a “somebody” to her right?

“Did Nami ever admit that she loves you? “

“…” No…

“Tch... Pity... I expected that you would answer those questions easily.”

“STOP IT!” Atsuko screamed at Ray, feeling her heart beat faster, her breath quickening as doubt and fear entered her mind.

“Ha! You are such a fool Maeda! You’re not even honest with your feelings!” Ray continued to mock Atsuko. Yuko inwardly growled as she gently pulled her younger sister behind her back, standing face to face with the diva.

“I swear… one more harsh word to my little sister, I swear! I’ll punch your face so hard that no one will recognize you, not even your own mother.” Yuko whispered between clenched teeth. As Ray was about to respond to Yuko’s taunting, Mariko and Sarukawa-shachou entered the office.

“That’s enough!” Mariko yelled at the three. Mariko and Sarukawa Keiji have been standing by the door since Ray started taunting Atsuko. The two managers didn’t expect things to go this far.

Mariko slowly walked between Ray and Yuko, eyeing the three younger women in her office. “I won’t tolerate any misconduct in my office or anywhere inside this headquarters. If you three have a score to settle, do it in a calm way. Violence or trash talking won’t get you anywhere.” Mariko said seriously.

Keiji sighed as he stood beside his prodigy. “Ray, we’re the one who asked for their help for your music video. I suggest you keep your temper in check until we finish shooting for your music video.” He said, knowing that Ray won’t simply apologize to anybody. Anyway, we have to meet the director at the studio. Mariko-san, Ray and I will go ahead to the studio.” Keiji said as he coaxed Ray out of the office.

Mariko simply nodded at Sarukawa-shachou. Sighing in relief, she looked at her two younger sisters, unsure of what to say. Yuko is still furiously looking at the door while Atsuko stiffly stood as she stared at the floor. Knowing that her sister has nothing to say as of this time, she pulled them close to her and hugged them tight.

*****

At the studio…

The members of the team who were included in the list are already gathered by the time Mariko, Atsuko and Yuko arrived. Haruna and Miichan is also there out of curiosity and support for Takamina. When Atsuko is about to stand beside the drifter, Ray beat her to it by pulling Takamina to her in front of the group. Takamina sighed and stood stiffly beside the diva who started babbling on how excited she is for this project. The display of Ray’s aggressiveness didn’t go unnoticed by Atsuko and the rest of the team.

“Minna, thank you for being a part of the Monkey Pro’s project.” Keiji announced with a loud voice. “I am happy to introduce to you one of the talented music video directors in our country – Fumetsu Kira!” everyone in attendance applauded for the newcomer.

A petite, long-haired young lady smiled as she bowed to the group. “Good afternoon everyone. I’m happy to be a part of this production. Yoroshiku onegai shimashu.” Kira said with a smile as she adjusted her Gucci eyeglasses.”

“Fumetsu-sensei, would you like to take a tour of the headquarters to get to know the lay of the land?” Mariko asked.

“I’d love to Mariko-san, and please, call me Kira. This will give me a general idea of the flow of the music video.” Kira said. “I’d prefer if some of the actors will accompany us as well.”

Ray’s ears perked at Kira’s suggestion. “Mariko-san! Nami and I will accompany you in the tour.” Ray suggested, grabbing Takamina’s arm.

“Nami? Seriously?” Haruna whispered to Yuko which was heard by Miichan and Atsuko.

“I already told that witch-with-a-capital-b that “Nami” doesn’t suit as nickname for Takamina.” Atsuko answered, staring at Ray fawning over the drifter.

“Uh… okaaay… Very well then, thank you for being here to meet Kira-sensei. You may all go now and continue with your tasks for the day.” Mariko winked at everybody as she guided the Kira for the tour while Keiji and Ray, who is dragging Takamina along, followed her.

*****

Takamina sighed as she tried to look attentive as Mariko lead their small group at the headquarter’s race track. I’m bored… I’d rather fix some engine trouble than be here walking around and listening to Ray’s unending chatter… she inwardly thought.

“Your race track is a perfect setting for the theme of the music video. I can already imagine how Ray-san’s video will turn out.” Kira said, scanning the vast area around her as they walked.

“Kira-sensei is amazing, isn’t she? I heard that she’s not one of those conventional directors who just stick to the script. She’s also kind to consider the opinions and suggestions of the actors and her staff whenever she works.” Ray whispered to Takamina’s ear.

“Oh really? She must be something then.” Takamina answered as she tried to put some space between them to no avail.

“After this tour, would you like to go out with me? I’m sure Mariko-san and Sayaka-kun won’t mind you leaving early for the day.” Ray purred, wrapping her hands on Takamina’s arm.

“Ano… Takamina… can I talk to you for a moment?” asked Atsuko as she approached the two as they were walking.

Takamina’s face lightened up as she saw Atsuko. “Sure Acchan! Is there anything I can do for you?” Takamina asked with a dimpled smile.

Now that Atsuko had Takamina’s attention, she desperately searched for something to ask. She only thought of interrupting them before the diva sunk in her claws that she hadn’t thought ahead of a reason for the intrusion.

“Well Maeda, what do you want from Nami? She’s waiting you know.” hissed Ray.

Takamina finally thought of an idea and called for Keiji’s attention. “Ano, Sarukawa-shacho, can you please accompany Ray for the rest of the tour? I’m afraid that I am needed somewhere that I have to leave.” Takamina asked.

Keiji nodded, “Sure Takahashi-san, thank you for accompanying us. Come on Ray, Mariko-san and Kira-san are waiting.” Keiji said, dragging along the diva.

As the rest of the group continued with the tour, Takamina grabbed Atsuko’s arm and hastily walked back to the studio. “Thank you for pulling me out from that tour Acchan. It’s so boring and Ray has been chattering endlessly about anything!” Takamina said, not letting go of Atsuko’s hand as they walk. “Anyway, what are you going to ask me?”

Atsuko smiled, “Nothing really. I just realized that I haven’t spent time with you today that I have to pull you out of that tour.”

“Do you have anything to do for the rest of the day?”

“I’ve finished the entire scheduled task for me today. Why’d you ask?”

“Well… we can call it a day and have tea at the Berry Parlour. I know Mariko-chan and Sayaka-chan won’t mind us leaving early for the day. I’ll just send them a message that we already left. I’ll also drive you home afterwards.” Takamina suggested.

“I’d love to. It’s the best thing that I’ve heard today.” Atsuko blushed as they walk, feeling the warmth in their intertwined fingers.

*****

After the tour finally ended, Ray stormed her way back to the studio. She is furious because of the fact that Takamina was able to escape from her grasp with Atsuko. She made her way to the lounge room where Yuko and the rest of the Flag Girls were chatting over a cup of afternoon coffee.

“Where’s my Nami?” Ray asked to no one in particular.

Tomochin raised an eyebrow at Ray’s attitude, “Where’s your Nami?”

Ray rolled her eyes in frustration. “Okay let me repeat that – where’s Takamina?”

Tomochin smiled in amusement as she looked at Yuko who was smiling devilishly. “Oh you don’t know? She already left the headquarters... with Atsuko-chan.” Tomochin answered casually as she poured Tomo-mi another cup of coffee.

Ray furrowed her eyebrows at what she heard. “That Maeda….” Ray whispered in frustration.

Yuko had to laugh at the diva’s reaction. “Looks like my little sister was able to nab Takamina right under your nose.” Yuko said sarcastically, making the Flag Girls giggle.

Ray narrowed her eyes as she stomped away from the lounge room. If that’s how you want things to be Maeda then fine! Two can play at this game…

To be continued...

Hi everyone! Thank you for always being patient with me :kneelbow: I hope that everyone will like this new chapter :hee: Please do leave a coment if you have time! Thanks again! :luvluv2: :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: blughise on October 09, 2011, 12:46:59 AM

OMG!!!!! LYNX!!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
this is getting more interesting!!!!

I swear how dare she mock Acchan! :angry: :angry: :angry:
YAH Yuko go ahead and punch her, I'll totally help you with that!!!

Really Ray, can't you see that Takamina's isn't interested in you!

and you even include KIRA in here :rofl: she must be trolling on you :P

Now I wonder how Acchan and Takamina's escaped went!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: kahem on October 09, 2011, 12:55:50 AM

I can smell a girls war heheheh

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: Flean on October 09, 2011, 01:09:26 AM

hahaha... I totally love this chapter... :on lol: there's even fumetsu-kun in it... :mon fyeah:

Acchan should make some move already~~ They like each other but being tsun tsun.. LOL :mon determined:

And I also sense love war on the upcoming chapters... :mon evillaff: update soon... your story totally worth waiting for~~ :mon thumb:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: haruhi16 on October 09, 2011, 01:29:31 AM

OMG finally an update! :cow:

Ray is messing up with the Ace. Sorry Ray, your Nami only likes Acchan. Please finish the MV and get out of the scene! SHOO!

Nice chapter AFLynx! Update soon :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on October 09, 2011, 01:37:11 AM

yea update~ acchan that's what you get being tsundere around takamina :lol:
am loving this chapter cant wait for the next update since it would be intresting with this love war :glasses:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: Haruko on October 09, 2011, 02:21:06 AM

its a cat fight!! go maeda.. gain takaminas heart.. go ahead and kiss her :D easy ne?

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: RJay on October 09, 2011, 02:31:18 AM

:grr: :grr:
good thinking acchan!!! :wahaha:
i wonder what ray is thinking of doing to takamina :dunno:
but if she does something overboard to destroy the takacchan pair i will...!!! :angry1:

thanks for the update
and please update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: AFLynx on October 09, 2011, 07:16:07 AM

I added a phrase in one of the paragraphs in the update... somehow i kinda forgot that i was typing it and left it hanging lol :banghead:

blughise: you're the first to comment... again :on lol: lol about Kira - no... she didn't troll me, i asked her if she wanted to be in my fic and there you go :P

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Now I wonder how Acchan and Takamina's escaped went!!!

^ I won't really elaborate on this. I'll leave it to everyone's imagination. All I know is they had tea and some cake and Takamina drove Acchan home safely. :on drink:

kahem: hi kahem! :hee: yeah, there's definitely gonna be a competition between the two. :hehehe:

Flean: Fumentsu-kun will be in my fic until the MV finishes :on cigar: :mon blowhorn: we'll see how Acchan will keep up to Ray's attempts in getting Takamina's heart :hee:

haruhi16: lol i hope it's that easy to shoo Ray out of the scene :nervous thanks for the comment as always haruhi! :luvluv2:

CrimsonGrxy: lol I think Acchan wasn't able to factor Ray that's why she's being a tsundere all this time. :mon sweat: I'll try my best to make every chapter as interesting as possible :mon beam: thanks for the comment!

Haruko: :mon ehh: yeah, it's supposed to be that easy right? I hope someone speaks sense to her :err:

RJay: :nervous Ray just wants to go out on a date in this chapter, that's for sure. I'm not sure of her plans on how she'll get Takamina to like her though :mon huh2: thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: JPopLover on October 09, 2011, 08:11:01 PM

Oh snap! :hehehe: Looks like it's Acchan-1 Ray-0 xD LOL I think Takamina just finds Ray to be very annoying and snobbish :on lol: This just gets more and more intersting! :hee: Thanks for the update and hope you update again soon! :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: arisa03 on October 10, 2011, 12:18:46 AM

And Takamina drove Acchan safely, a good night kiss and a flowe--/shot LOL. This was a nice chapter. AtsuMina ftw. LOLz Well Acchan time to stop teasing Takaman 8D. Thank you for the wonderful update AFLynx! <3 *gives cookie*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: AFLynx on October 10, 2011, 04:57:43 AM

JPopLover: lol you're keeping score between Ray and Acchan? :hee: Thanks for reading and for the comment! :luvluv2:

arisa03: arisa-chan! :mon hi: lol i imagine you imagining what happened after they left the headquarters XD Thanks for reading... for the comment... and for the cookie! :mon devcandy:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: immortal_K on October 10, 2011, 08:25:22 AM

=P I finally came to leave my comment =D, I kinda gave you a bit of live comment already, but as I was saying the best part has to be when the director appeared!
THE BEST DIRECTOR EVER!!!!! hahaha :twothumbs :twothumbs

Wow, a PV with none of the three sisters (not that they want to be apart of it) but Ray paired herself to Takamina already...
At least Acchan still find ways to get Takamina away so they can spend time together. Acchan 1 : 0 Ray~!!

MIICHAN!!! You really going to name your car GACHAPIN??? but its not even green..........

Noooow I wonder if we will get a scene of just Acchan and Takamina on their nice little outing :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 17 - Challenge] UPDATE! 10/09
Post by: AFLynx on October 10, 2011, 09:34:40 AM

immortal_K: wow, i think everyone is really keeping scores! :nervous
:on lol: Miichan is gonna name it GatchaPINK just to irritate Sayaka
about the scene bet. Atsumina pairing, I won't dwell on it in my next chapter. I'll leave it to everyone's imagination. it's like watching a tv series :kekeke:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: AFLynx on October 23, 2011, 12:51:46 AM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 18a – Lights…

Act 1, Scene 1 – at the three sisters’ home

Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep!

Mariko sighed in wakefulness as she turned off her alarm clock. Stretching her arms above her head as she rose from her bed, she peeked at her sisters’ beds beside her.

Yuko-chan is still fast asleep… I don’t think a fire can even wake her up… Mariko thought in amusement, looking at Yuko who has haphazardly thrown her blanket around her body in her sleep. Ara… Acchan is already awake? she thought as she saw Atsuko’s bed already made. Slowly rising from her bed, she made her way downstairs.

*****

Atsuko was done chopping some dark chocolate when Mariko entered the kitchen.

“You’re up early… what are you making Acchan?” Mariko said, as she sat on a stool by the breakfast islet in front of their main kitchen counter.

“Oh it’s nothing onee-chan… just making a sponge cake with dark chocolate ganache… mom’s recipe…” Atsuko replied, checking their mom’s recipe book in front of her while waiting for her cake to cook and for the heavy cream in a pot to boil.

“Really? I love mom’s cake recipe! Oh, you even used Meiji black chocolates! Can I have some after it’s done?” Mariko exclaimed, looking at Atsuko as she finally placed the chocolate in the pot.

“I’m sorry onee-chan, but I won’t be sharing this to anyone. It’s a gift for someone.” Atsuko replied, stirring the chocolate.

Mariko pouted when Atsuko slapped her hand with a spatula when she tried to dip her finger in the chocolate. “Mou~, you don’t love your onee-chan anymore… Is it for Takamina?” Mariko asked, preparing some milk and cereal for breakfast.

The kitchen timer made a little Ding! sound, signaling that the cake is already done. “I still love you onee-chan you know that and yes, it’s for Takamina.” Atsuko said as she took out her sponge cake out of the oven.

Mariko smiled as she drummed her fingernails on top of the counter as she began eating her cereal. Mariko raised an eyebrow as she thought of something that will surely distract her youngest sister.

“The shoot for the music video starts today you know…” Mariko said off-handedly, twirling her spoon in front of her sister.

“I know…” Atsuko sighed.

“Takamina might get busy in the coming days during the shoot…”

“I know…”

“Ray might get her hands on Takamina if you don’t act soon…”

“IknowIKNOWIKNOW! Mou onee-chan! Stop stating the obvious!” Atsuko pouted, as she spread the now cool ganache on top of her sponge cake and at the same time, ignoring her eldest sister’s laughter.

“Ohayo~…” Yuko mumbled as she entered in the kitchen in her glorious, sleepy state. She suddenly became wide awake when she saw the cake that Atsuko is icing. She sat beside Mariko and tried to dip her finger in the chocolate bowl, but her hand was treated the same as Mariko’s when Atsuko slapped it with her spatula. “Acchan… you don’t love me anymore.” Yuko pouted, giving Atsuko her best puppy-dog eyes, as she grabbed herself a bowlful of cereal.

And here I thought I’m the youngest among us three… Atsuko sighed, staring at the ceiling. “Sorry Yuko onee-chan, I love you too but it’s for Takamina.”

Yuko glanced to Mariko and smiled devilishly at their youngest sister, “Takamina’s gonna spend the rest of the day with Ray-san you know…”

“Mou! You’re as bad as Mariko onee-chan!” Atsuko pouted, and then joined in her sisters’ giggles. After their laughter died down, Atsuko eyed her creation appreciatively. “I hope Takamina will like this cake.”

“Mom’s recipe is fool-proof; you don’t have to worry about her not liking it. Anyway, I’ll leave early today. Make sure to get to the headquarters on time.” Mariko said, placing her bowl in the sink and went out of the kitchen.

“Hai~~ Mariko-sama.” Atsuko and Yuko replied in unison.

*****
Act 2, Scene 1 – AKB48 headquarters

Takamina raked her fingers thru her bangs as she looked at the mirror. I’m lucky that Yukirin was able to help me with my hair and makeup… she thought, also checking her ponytail neatly tied at her nape so that it won’t mess her hair once she wears her helmet.

“Good luck on your shoot Takamina.” Haruna said, giving her thumbs up while sitting on Takamina’s personalized director’s chair.

“It’s not like I’m gonna deliver some lines during the shoot Haruna.” Takamina laughed, pointing at her yellow 2012 Audi R8 GT. Like Miichan’s car, a large “AKB” is painted in between two black streaks on the roof that extends until at the back of the car. A bold number 7 is also painted on either side of the doors just beside the black carbon fiber matte sideblades, and a black spoiler adorns its back.

Miichan whistled appreciatively at Takamina’s car. “I must say Takamina… you have a very nice ride. And you’re not so bad looking yourself too. Our family has good genes.” Miichan said as Haruna nodded in agreement. “By the way, how come you haven’t zipped up your racing suit yet? It’s almost time for the filming.” Miichan added.

“Because it’s humid Miichan, and I don’t want to be sweaty even before the filming starts.” She replied. Takamina is wearing a fitting yellow racing suit with black stripe details that emphasized her figure, the unzipped top currently hung low on her waist, showing off her white sleeveless shirt.

NYANNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

Yuko yelled on top of her voice as she sat on Haruna’s lap. “Ohayo NyanNyan~!”

“You’re a bit late today; even Mariko-chan’s earlier than you… what gives?” Haruna asked, trying to balance their weight, fearing that the director’s chair might gave out any time soon.

“Well, Acchan was kinda busy this morning that’s why we were running late.” Yuko said plainly as she pointed at her sister who is walking towards their little group.

“Ohayo, Ta-Ka-Mi-Na.” Atsuko greeted warmly. She smiled at the sight of Takamina, who finally decided to wear the top of the one piece racing suit. Stopping in front of Takamina, she gently grabbed her hand as she was about to zip up her racing suit. “Here… let me help you…” Atsuko whispered.

Ever so slowly, she zipped Takamina’s racing suit until it finally stopped just above Takamina’s collarbone. Atsuko adjusted the Velcro strap that holds the stiff collar of the racing suit and then gently placed her hands on Takamina’s shoulder. How can Takamina pull off being kawaii and kakkoii at the same time? “You’re handsome in your suit Takamina.” Atsuko winked.

“O-Oi.” Takamina stammered, trying to hide a blush and ignoring her cousins’ giggles at the same time.

NAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!

Takamina furrowed her eyebrows, Who the hell is Nami? Her eyes widened in recognition of the source of the screaming.

Ray jogged towards Takamina, completely ignoring Atsuko, shoving her behind her back to get Takamina’s attention. “What do you think of my outfit?” Ray said as she twirled in front of the drifter.

Takamina bent her head sideways as she stared at Ray’s outfit. “Well, it’s one of the uniforms of the AKB Flag Girls right?”

“Yes, but is way much better than the captain’s and ace’s uniform, don’t you think?” Ray smirked. Haruna immediately grabbed Yuko’s waist when she saw the squirrel girl’s eyebrow twitch and ready to pounce at the diva. Atsuko simply raised an eyebrow and crossed her arms on her chest.

Takamina was about to respond when one of Ray’s PA approached them. “Ano, Ray-sama, Kira-sensei wants you and Takahashi-san to be in your designated places in fifteen minutes.” Ray’s PA politely said. Ray immediately linked her arm on Takamina’s then half-dragged her towards the director.

“Let’s go Nami. We won’t want to keep the director waiting for us.” Ray said excitedly. Takamina looked at Atsuko apologetically as Ray continued to pull her away from their little group.

Haruna and Miichan blinked at how fast Ray was able to drag away their cousin. “You know what Acchan… Takamina will spend most of her time with Ray from now on…” Haruna mumbled.

“Yeah, and from the looks of it, she already has the upperhand…” Miichan added.

“I know already! Mou! You two are as bad as my sisters!” Atsuko sighed exasperatedly as she marched towards the dressing room. Haruna and Miichan curiously looked at Yuko who merely smiled and shrugged her shoulders.

*****

Act 2 Scene 2 – Script reading

Mariko scanned the entire racetrack as Kira’s staff bustled about checking if all the video equipments are in check. “You have a very efficient staff, Kira-sensei.”

Kira smiled, “Thank you Mariko-san. They have already put up the video cameras all over the race track to be able to film Takahashi-san while driving. I have also assigned different cameramen to shoot Ray-san together with the Flag Girls at the nearest bleachers in front of the finish line.” She said, pointing at the said location. She spotted Takamina and Ray approach their direction.

“Ah, the very charismatic diva finally graced us with her presence.” Kira greeted Ray, then tilted her head at Takamina.

“Ohayo, Kira-sensei… Mariko-san.” Ray greeted cheerfully, still clutching Takamina’s arm.

“Ano, Kira-sensei, you said you’ll be briefing me on my scene, right?” Takamina asked, glancing at Ray as if giving the director a hint to help her get out of the clutches of the diva.

“Ah… right… Ray-san, you can go now to your place. The Flag Girls are already there for the scene.” Kira sweatdropped.

Ray pouted at the director’s request. “I’ll finally see my Nami drive her sexy race car. Do your best.” Ray said, kissing Takamina’s cheek. Mariko furrowed her brows at what Ray did and looked at the diva run towards her designated place.

Takamina rubbed her cheek furiously with one hand, “Arigato Kira-sensei… my arm is already getting numb from Ray-san’s grip.”

“Hahaha! No problem Takahashi-san. Anyway, I want you to read the script. Everyone doesn’t really have lines except Ray-san who will be lip syncing along with the music, but I want you to familiarize yourself on the flow of the scene.” Kira said, handing Takamina the script.

Takamina scanned the script for a few minutes then handed it back to Kira. “Okay Kira-sensei, I read most of it. I’ll do my best.” Takamina smiled.

“Yosh! We’ll start the shooting in fifteen minutes.” Kira answered. “Everyone, we’ll start the shooting in fifteen minutes.” Kira said in her headset, announcing the schedule all throughout the race track.

*****

Act 2 Scene 3 – Video Intro

“Okay, places everyone!” Kira said over her headset as she looked on to a monitor behind the set. Her assistant director clapped the digital clap board in front of the cameras to signal the start of the video:

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   Takamina slowly walked out of the Pit Stop as the Pit Crew readied her car. Smiling, she traced her fingertips at the side of the car until she reached for the door and opened it. Pausing, she glanced up to the bleachers where Ray and the Flag Girls are sitting.

   Tomochin noticing Takamina looking at their direction nudged Ray who was busy ogling at the drifter. Ray blushed as she waved a hand to Takamina. The Flag Girls noticed Takamina smile as she wore her helmet before getting in the car and drove towards the starting line, and began teasing Ray for the attention.

   Mayuyu, who was standing beside the starting point, raised the green flag and waved it actively as Takamina revved up her engine and sped up the race track. Ray stood up together with the Flag Girls as they cheered for the racer. As Takamina approached the finish line, she quickly maneuvered her steering wheel and swiveled sideways after passing by Mayuyu who was now waving the checkered flag.

   Takamina stepped out of the car and took off her helmet, flicking her hair in the process. Wearing her black Oakley shades, she noticed the Flag Girls approached her while Sae and Jurina jogged towards her. Takamina politely excused herself to Sae and Jurina then slowly walked towards Ray until they stood face to face.

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“Aaand…. CUT! Nice job for the intro! Good job everyone!” Kira said, as the cameramen stopped filming. “We’ll continue the next scene tomorrow.” The director continued.

Ray smiled, quickly lunging herself to Takamina. “That was so cool Nami! This is the first time I saw you race, even though it’s just for my music video. I’d like to watch you in your race someday.”

Takamina tried to pry the diva from her but sighed defeatedly, I guess resistance is futile… “Well, maybe you’ll have that chance when you’re not busy anymore. Anyway, I’m going to the locker room to change into my garage suit.” Takamina stammered, finally being able to stop Ray from hugging her.

“Do you want me to help you Nami?” Ray winked, asking in her innocent tone.”

“No thank you, I think I can manage.” Takamina sweatdropped, immediately running towards the garage.

*****

Act 3 Scene 1 - Gift

The first shoot ended in time for the teams afternoon break. With a box in hand, Atsuko hummed merrily as she went in the pantry where all the members are taking their break. I really hope Takamina will like this… she thought hopefully as she saw Takamina sitting at their usual table with Haruna and Miichan. As she was about to approach them, Ray beat her to it with a bigger box in hand.

“NAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!” Ray shouted cheerfully, sitting beside Takamina.

Takamina rubbed her temples, “Konnichiwa, Ray-san. Ano, I very much prefer if you would call me Takamina.” She said politely.

“You don’t really much have of a choice since that’s my term of endearment to you.” Ray pouted, “Here, I have a present for you.” Ray smiled, shoving the box in front of Takamina.

Atsuko looked on at Ray and Takamina as she sat beside Yuko who is seated with Mariko. “Oh look, Ray-san also have a gift for Takamina… and guess what, it is a bigger cake than you made.” Yuko whispered at her younger sister as they saw Takamina open the box of treat.

Takamina whistled as she saw the treat. “Wow, thank you Ray! It is a rather expensive gift.“ Takamina said, making Haruna and Miichan peek through the box. Ray gave Takamina a Super Melon Short Cake which can only be purchased at Pattiserie Satsuki in Hotel New Otani Tokyo.

“I knew you would like it!” Ray clapped her hands in relief.

Takamina looked at Haruna and Miichan who was drooling at the sight of the cake. “Ne Ray-san… so this cake is only for me?”

“Of course, since I like Nami so much.” Ray answered, eager to see Takamina eat the dessert.

“So does that mean that I can do whatever I want with it?”

Well, you could eat it off of me… now where did that thought come from? Ray blushed, “Uh, of course Nami since it’s already yours…”

Takamina beamed at Ray’s answer. “Great! It’s so kind and generous of you.” Takamina exclaimed as she stood up. “Minna! I have dessert for everyone!” Takamina announced at the pantry, showing the 12-inch cake to the team. Haruna and Miichan squealed in delight and began looking for plates and forks as the other team members began crowding at their table.

Ray’s eyes widened in surprise at Takamina’s announcement, “Nami, that’s not what I meant!” Ray said, trying to stop the members from getting a piece of cake.

“Ray, we need to go, you still have a recording to do at the studio.” Kenji said, standing at the door of the pantry. Ray huffed as she stomped her way pass to her manager.

*****

Act 3 Scene 2 - Save the best for last...

Atsuko sighed as she stared the box of cake in front of her. “Now that Takamina received a cake, I don’t think Takamina will eat my cake.” Atsuko mumbled, resting her chin on her hands.

“What’s inside the box Acchan?” Takamina asked, standing behind where Atsuko is sitting.

Atsuko sighed, “Oh nothing… it’s just a cake that I made for you Takamina…” Wait, what?! Takamina?! Atsuko realized, quickly looking behind her back.

Takamina giggled at Atsuko’s flustered state and sat across Atsuko’s table. “You made this for me?” Takamina asked excitedly as she opened the box, revealing a small chocolate covered cake.

“Yes, I made it this morning.” Atsuko whispered.

Takamina blushed, “A-Arigato, that’s sweet of you.” Takamina said then slid a plate with a slice of the super melon short cake in front of Atsuko. “Here, I saved you a piece. It’s actually quite good.”

Atsuko furrowed her eyebrows, “Thank you Takamina… were you able to eat a slice after sharing it to everyone?” Atsuko asked as she ate a forkful, “Oishii~~!”

“It’s okay that I didn’t get to eat the cake. I once ordered that when I accompanied my mom to Patisserie Satsuki to meet her friends.” Takamina answered. “Itadakimasu~” she dug in to Atsuko’s cake.

Atsuko waited for Takamina’s reaction, sighing in relief when Takamina nodded appreciatively then took another big bite of the cake. “Yokatta…” she whispered.

Takamina stared at Atsuko as she ate almost half of the 6inch cake, “I might get busy for the next couple of days Acchan…”

“I know…” Atsuko answered, lowering her gaze at her now empty plate.

“So that means that I might not have lunch together with you, Haruna and Miichan…”

“I know…”

“So you know that we should spend as much together then?”

“I know… wait what?” Atsuko stammered. Did I hear that right?

Takamina smiled, “Let’s spend as much time together okay?” she said hopefully. “Oh… and your cake tastes way much better since you made it especially for me.” Takamina continued, making Atsuko blush.

To be continued...

:kneelbow: sorry for the very late update everyone! been busy with work and i've been editing this chapter since i had a hard time visualizing it in my head. i hope everyone likes this update. :hee: please comment whenever you have the time! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: Flean on October 23, 2011, 01:18:26 AM

You updated~~~ :luvluv1:

edit:

Quote from: AFLynx on October 23, 2011, 12:51:46 AM

“So you know that we should spend as much together then?”

“I know… wait what?” Atsuko stammered. Did I hear that right?

Takamina smiled, “Let’s spend as much time together okay?” she said hopefully. “Oh… and your cake tastes way much better since you made it especially for me.” Takamina continued, making Atsuko blush.

Finally!!!! :mon beam: Taka made some move!!!! :mon squee: I'm so happy~~ :mon inluv:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: RJay on October 23, 2011, 02:52:29 AM

Quote from: AFLynx on October 23, 2011, 12:51:46 AM

“So does that mean that I can do whatever I want with it?”

Well, you could eat it off of me… now where did that come thought from? Ray blushed, “Uh, of course Nami since it’s already yours…”

Takamina beamed at Ray’s answer. “Great! It’s so kind and generous of you.” Takamina exclaimed as she stood up. “Minna! I have dessert for everyone!” Takamina announced at the pantry, showing the 12-inch cake to the team. Haruna and Miichan squealed in delight and began looking for plates and forks as the other team members began crowding at their table.

Ray’s eyes widened in surprise at Takamina’s announcement, “Nami, that’s not what I meant!” Ray said, trying to stop the members from getting a piece of cake.

I find this really funny :mon lmao:
I thought this chapter will never come, but it finaly came :on drink:
please update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: arisa03 on October 23, 2011, 04:21:23 AM

You go girl! Guy! Uhh... Takaman! LOL. this is an awesome update! <3 (Posting on iPod like a boss) Go go Takabaka! at least you know
WHO it is that you really love hoho and way to go Acchan! Shy!blushing!Acchan is forever welcome <333 Update soon~~~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: Haruko on October 23, 2011, 04:30:54 AM

wow.. the video description awesome :D i wanna watch it!!! well.. Takaboy we know you are so kakkoi!!... totally a ladies`s man :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: haruhi16 on October 23, 2011, 05:04:56 AM

finally you updated AFLynx!!

Atsumina is <333

WTF Ray, just please go away from Takamina!

Thanks for the update! :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: blughise on October 23, 2011, 05:35:50 AM

Moe Lynx I need more!!!

I love part with Mariko-sama and Yuko teasing Acchan :lol: Love the sister bond
and even Miichan and Haruna :P

Arrrr Ray damn that woman!!! She really need to see that Takamina isn't interested on her!!! Good Job Kira for helping Takamina :P

It's a good thing Takamina didn't eat that cake!!!
Now Takamina is taking the initiative!!!!
I can't wait to see more Atsumina moment!!!

damn I'm not the first to comment this time :P
Ohh well.....so busy hardly have the time to read or even leave comments

Please update soon Lynx XD XD XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: AFLynx on October 23, 2011, 06:51:40 AM

@Flean: hello! :hee: I felt relieved that I was able to update... finally!
I hope that Takamina will have that much time to spend with Acchan :prayers: thanks for the comment Flean! :luvluv2:
@RJay: :on lol: lol it's good to see someone comment about that part of the chap! I was wishing that someone would comment about it and tell me that they find it funny too. :P I hope that I'll be able to write about the next chapter soon. thanks RJay for the comment!
@arisa03: hi arisa-chan :mon hi: lol it's about time that takamina knew who she likes :on lol: everyone seemed to gang up against acchan that she has to act soon or else ray might get takamina... i hope she gets takamina soon :mon determined:
@Haruko: I wanna watch the video too :farofflook: lol that's just the intro though... i'll be writing more about the video in the next update. thanks for the comment! :hee:
@haruhi16: yes, finally i was able to update :sweat: thank you for being patient with me :kneelbow: im hoping to update soon too. thanks for the comment!
@blughise: lol someone beat you to it! XD
lol everyone's been teasing Acchan, including Takamina at the end of the chap :P
I've been busy at work too but, I'll try to write so that I can update as soon as I can. thanks for the comment!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: arisa03 on October 23, 2011, 07:26:57 AM

Poor Acchan ganged upon like a boss.xDDD I'm sure she knows it already. Acchan time to take Takamina. >=D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: Sydney W on October 23, 2011, 10:18:16 AM

Impressive... Love your update... Takamina + Acchan relationship starting to develop... :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on October 23, 2011, 02:46:22 PM

I laughed when acchan got ganged up xD
and at the end u make me go :wub: inside <3
great update! :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: RJay on October 23, 2011, 06:18:31 PM

@AFLynx: yeah it doesn't bother me,
but seriously, i really find that part really funny :mon lmao: :mon lmao:
and I bet when Acchan gave her cake to Takamina, Takamina doesn't want to share this time

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: skytsuna on October 23, 2011, 10:48:14 PM

Quote from: AFLynx on October 23, 2011, 12:51:46 AM

Haruna and Miichan blinked at how fast Ray was able to drag away their cousin. “You know what Acchan… Takamina will spend most of her time with Ray from now on…” Haruna mumbled.

“Yeah, and from the looks of it, she already has the upperhand…” Miichan added.

“I know already! Mou! You two are as bad as my sisters!” Atsuko sighed exasperatedly as she marched towards the dressing room. Haruna and Miichan curiously looked at Yuko who merely smiled and shrugged her shoulders.

I really love this part~ Its really funny, I love Acchan's reaction here :twothumbs
So cute and adorable~~~ :farofflook:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: JPopLover on October 24, 2011, 03:03:01 AM

Great update =D haha Ray is so losing to Acchan at winning Takamina's affection :fap OMG :panic: I've been sick with the flu :fever: so lately I haven't been updating my story either :err: Urgghh anyways I LOVE THIS STORY :luvluv1: hope the next update comes soon :nya:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: AFLynx on October 24, 2011, 04:59:42 AM

@arisa: hi again arisa-chan! :mon hi: lol im thinking that everyone is ganging up on her because they want her to be Takamina's girlfriend... soon :on lol:
@Sydney W: thank you Sydney! :luvluv2: yes, their relationship is developing now compared to the previous chapters and I'm going to make it interesting for our Atsumina pairing. :mon determined:
@CrimsonGrxy: I'm happy, again, that I made you and the others laugh. :hee: thanks for the comment!
@RJay: lol Takamina didn't even share that cake to me! :mon whimper: lol, I'm glad that you had fun reading the update. :monk gboy:
@skystuna: hi skytsuna! :hee: I totally imagine Acchan stomping off from the scene :on lol: thanks for the comment!
@JPopLover: thanks for the comment! i hope you feel better now :hee: i've been busy and sick too lately that's why it took me so long to update my fic. I'll do my best to post the next update. thanks for your support! :luvluv2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: kahem on October 24, 2011, 08:54:53 AM

Hahahah I just wanna see Ray's face when Takamina share her cake with everyone

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: immortal_K on October 25, 2011, 01:19:05 PM

LYNX!!!!!!! :twisted: I'm ALIVE!!!!

Couldn't sleep so came here to bum around and leave evidence of my presences since I've been lurking around here all month keke :twisted:
Soon, almost over then I can burn my books bwahahhaahh!!!!!

WOOT director KIRA is AWESOME! and AMAJING! don't you think? hahaha, she save Takamina from Ray too, I demand some cake for reward but then I doubt Takamina will be willing to share, and I doubt Acchan will let anyone else close to the cake made just for Takamina :lol:

But WOW this is awesome! and I love how Ray tries so hard but still fails because there is something in life that you can't fight. Kinda feel sad for Ray, you can totally see her devotion but just not for the right person, someone should go wake her up and tell her to spend her energy on someone else.... But at least her present is speeding up the AtsuMina get together because their position is being threaten now HAHA

Of course everyone has to gang up on Acchan to give her a little bit of push, you just have to love the caring sisters and friends :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

YES TAKA spend more time with ACCHAN!!!!! and GO Miichan eat up all of Ray's cake just so she can develop high blood pressure and maybe stroke out....... jk like I say its sad enough Ray is a bit delusional already.

Please update soooooooon :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: AFLynx on October 28, 2011, 09:42:21 AM

@kahem: :on lol: i would love to see her reaction too. thanks for the comment kahem! :luvluv2:
@immortal_K: immortaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal!!!! you're alive! :mon bat:
hehe, i've been meaning to reply to this comment of yours but work has been a pain so.... :mon sweat:

Quote

WOOT director KIRA is AWESOME! and AMAJING! don't you think?

^ lol of course Kira-sensei is awesome! :mon cigar: she'll be showing in my fic for another chapter or so. XD
Thank you so much for your feedback, especially regarding the relationship of Takamina and Acchan. We'll let's just say that they are in for a pretty interesting ride in the upcoming chapters.
I hope I'll be able to continue to keep the readers sitting on the edge of their seats on what will happen next :hee: I won't promise when I'll post my next update but one thing's for sure - I'm already working on it. :mon study: :mon worklate:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: haruhi16 on October 28, 2011, 10:32:40 AM

and here i am, i thought you updated your fic *SIGH*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: GreenAnarchist on November 05, 2011, 07:37:59 PM

I think i'm going to like this fic.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18a - Lights...] Acts 1 - 3 UPDATE! 10/23
Post by: chykla on November 07, 2011, 02:31:49 PM

I FINALLY COUGHT UP AFTER 5246584724 HOURS OF NON-STOP READING ;AAA;

Y U END EETLIEK THAT ;-:

-iwanttoeatacchan'scakelikerightnaoplease-

CUS OF YEW IMA PLAY ALL NFS GAMES (Y)

I SHALL IMPATIENTLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE (Y)

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: AFLynx on November 07, 2011, 07:53:39 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 18b.1 – Camera…

Act 4 Scene 1 – Via E-mail

Takamina stretched her arms as she sat up on her bed. “I hate how the weather gets cold nowada-ah..ah….ACHOO!” she sneezed. And I hate it even more when I wake up sneezing and with a stuffy nose… Seeing that her cousins are already up, she fixed her bed and headed downstairs. Haruna glanced at her direction while lounging in the living room, busy scanning their laptop.

“Ohayo, Takamina. Want some apples?” Haruna greeted, showing her cousin a plateful of the sliced fruit.

“Thanks. Where’s Miicha-ah…ah… ACHOO!” Takamina sneezed again, reaching for the tissue box on the coffee table.

“Gesundheit. Miichan’s taking a bath right now. Wow, cold weather doesn’t really agree on you Takamina. You should keep warm. You know how bipolar the weather gets nowadays.” Haruna replied as she patted the sofa, motioning Takamina to sit beside her. “We just received an email from the headquarters this morning. Miichan already read this before she got in the bathroom.” She added, positioning the laptop so Takamina can take a closer look.

To: Takahashi Minami, Kojima Haruna, Minegishi Minami
Cc: Suguira Midori

Subject: Recon Mission

Our Research team has been diligent in tracking and checking the Yamamoto brothers’ assests and finances. It has come to our attention that the number of their teams has increased in the past two months. We would like you to go on a recon mission to check how the brothers operate and see if they are eyeing to buy any specific team and see if they are making illegal transactions during the races.

Attached on this email are some scheduled races that the Yamamoto brothers’ team/s would likely participate to. We will expect an immediate report for every race that you go to.

Takahashi Hisao
TSOA Chief of Staff

“Seriously?! They want us to do a recon mission at a time like this?” Takamina groaned, slouching beside Haruna.

“It is understandable since it is part of our mission.” Haruna shrugged.

“I take it that Takamina already read the email?” Miichan asked, toweling her hair dry as she joined her cousins in the living room.

“Yup, and I think she’s not liking the idea already, with the schedule that she keeps lately.” Haruna teased, making Takamina groan again and hide her face with a throw pillow.

*****

Act 5 Scene 1 – Stop and stare

Atsuko stepped inside the garage and noticed that Kira’s staff is busy assembling their equipments for the music video. I guess the next scene is here… Atsuko thought. Seeing Haruna and Miichan sitting just behind Kira who was looking at her monitors, she decided to join them. I might as well watch with Haruna-chan and Miichan.

The two cousins sat comfortably and waved Atsuko to come over. “Ohayo, Acchan. Come sit with us, the next scene will be shot in couple of minutes.” Miichan smiled, pointing at Takamina, Jurina and Sasshi who were already in their positions for the shoot.

“Okay, places everyone! We’ll start the next scene now.” Kira announced. Haruna, Miichan and Atsuko looked on as the assistant director slapped the clapboard in front of the camera, starting the shoot.

Takamina, Jurina and Sasshi hovered over a racing car to check the engine under the hood of the car. “Takamina, are you sure it’s okay to talk while we’re being filmed?” Sasshi asked nervously as she checked the brake fluid bottle.

“Hai, I already asked Kira-sensei. She told me that any conversation will be muted by Ray-san’s song. And besides, I’m the only one who has to say something that’s written on the script and it’s only a sentence so don’t worry Sasshi.”

“This music video isn’t that much different from working really… I mean, it’s just a bit different since we are still working while being filmed.” Jurina whined, checking the oil level of the car.

“Since we are already working, we might as well do it properly so that it will save time.” Takamina answered as she reached for the transmission.

Sasshi and Jurina heard someone approach them, slowly standing up straight and stared at the person heading their way while Takamina still busied herself checking the engine of the car. Takamina felt Jurina tap her on the shoulder and looked at her curiously. Takamina followed Jurina’s gaze and her eyes widened in surprise. Ray stopped in front of them, dressed in a short sundress, waving shyly specifically at Takamina.

Takamina, finally realizing her manners, quickly stood up straight, not noticing the hood of the ca ̶

*THUNK!*

“Itai~…” Takamina whispered as she rubbed her head, making Ray jog where she is standing.

“Are you okay Nami?” Ray asked worriedly, placing her hand on top of Takamina’s head.

“Uh… hai…” Takamina managed to smile as she looked at Ray, remembering that she has something to say. “Um… by the way, that dress looks nice on you.” She said, making the diva blush.

“CUT! Good job Takamina! Though banging your head on the hood seems unexpected, it will make the video more realistic.” Kira shouted, giving Takamina a thumbs up while making everyone around them laugh.

“Oh boy, whatever Takamina did to make Ray blush doesn’t really look good.” Miichan whispered to Haruna as she looked at Atsuko’s worried face.

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After the shoot, Takamina decided to finish tuning up the car. There, this baby’s all set. And as always, my hands are dirty. Now where is my towel… Takamina sighed in satisfaction as she searched her backpocket to wipe her hands.

“Ohayo, Takamina….” Atsuko shyly walked on Takamina’s direction. “I noticed you don’t have a towel like you usually do so… here, I deliberately got this from your cubby when I went to your locker room this morning.” She added, handing the drifter a clean towel.

“Ah, that’s sweet of you Acchan. Thanks…” Takamina smiled, wiping her hands with the offered towel.

“Ano…” Atsuko mumbled, looking down on the floor as if it took her interest.

“Yes Acchan, do you have something to ask?”

“I was just wondering… you seemed to get along with Ray lately… on the scene I mean.”

“Oh… that. Well, it seemed that Kira-sensei gave Ray-san and I two different scripts. I didn’t notice that Ray-san was already in the scene that time and I just have to say one single line.” Takamina said, shrugging her shoulders.

Atsuko giggled at Takamina’s explanation. Yokatta… I was worrying for nothing.

Takamina rose an eyebrow, “Eh? What are you giggling about?”

“Nothing at all Takamina, nothing at all. Ano, would you like to go home together later after work?” Atsuko asked.

This is one of the things that I hate about that recon mission… “Gomen ne, Acchan. I can’t drive you home later tonight. I ah… I mean, Haruna, Miichan and I have to visit our Grandparents for their wedding anniversary... yeah, it’s their anniversary today.” Takamina stammered, making up an excuse. I have to tell Haruna and Miichan about that excuse that I made, or else Atsuko and her sisters might get suspicious.

“Oh, I see. I hope you’ll enjoy your night with your grandparents then. Maybe someday, my sisters and I will get the chance to meet them.” Atsuko answered, making Takamina blush. “Let’s see what your cousins and my sisters are up to Takamina. I think they’re hanging out at the pantry right now.” She continued, linking her hand on Takamina’s arm and guided her to the pantry.

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Ray narrowed her eyes as she saw Atsuko holding on to Takamina as they pass by. Ray is sitting beside Kira, reviewing the scened that they just filmed a while ago. Maeda’s taking advantage of Nami while I’m not on her side. I have to do something about it. Ray thought.

Her frustrated look became devious as she thought of a plan. “Kira-sensei, do you have a moment?”

“Yes Ray-san?” Kira answered, still looking on the monitors as she and her assistant reviewed every angle of the scene being played.

“I have a suggestion that we can do for my music video.”

Kira swiveled her chair to face the diva, “Oh really? Do tell…” the director answered, waiting for Ray’s suggestion.

*****

Act 5 Scene 2 – Daikoku Futo, Yokohama

Takamina shivered as she looked up in the night sky. It was almost around 10 in the evening when she parked their 2012 crystal black pearl Civic Coupe at Daikoku Pier near the Yokohama Bay Bridge. This place looks like Wal-Mart on Christmas when we went on vacation in New York. Takamina thought as she pocketed the car keys.

Daikoku Futo is a tiny man-made island which serves as a customs yard and a freeway byspass around Yokohama City. In the middle of the island is a highway rest stop which serves as a meeting place for racers of all sorts before tearing up the Tokyo streets.

“So this is the legendary Daikoku Futo. How come we haven’t been here before?” Miichan said as she got out from the car and looked around the area. Various cars are parked and arranged in neat and orderly manner, and a lot of people are comfortable seated in their families, enjoying what seems like a picnic with their kids.

“It’s because we’re trained to be agents since we were kids, that’s why.” Haruna rolled her eyes, yet seemed excited to be in the area at the same time.

A tall man nearby noticed the cousins and decided to approach them. “Hello there ladies, are you new in the racing scene? I am Hachirou by the way; I’m sort of like a tour guide for this place and I take bets for the racers every night.” He introduced himself as he took a long drag of his cigarette.

“Sugoi! Would you give us a tour Hachirou onii-san? My cousins and I would like to know more about the races and maybe place some bets on some racers.” Miichan batted her eyebrows as she squeeled in delight.

Ah… kawaii~ “Ah… of course, of course! I’d be happy to take you to a small tour for free tonight. This place should have more cute girls like you three. Ano, if you could follow me please then we could start the tour.” Hachirou stammered, walking ahead of the cousins.

“Wow, your cuteness is in full throttle…” Takamina whispered to Miichan as Haruna giggled in agreement.

Miichan smiled then flicked her hair, “Admit it Takamina, it worked plus it served our purpose. Let’s go girls; we don’t want to keep our onii-san waiting.”

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Hachirou guided the cousins in a nearby fastfood restaurant and pointed out at a long row big four-door sedans. “This is where all the VIP’s park. They are not about speed, though their cars are packed with horsepower.” He explained, as the cousins looked on to the VIP cars which are customized with TVs, speakers and packed with high-end luxury parts.

“I don’t think that’s our thing onii-san…” Haruna pouted as they followed the tour guide.

“Next to the VIP cars are the light automobiles.” Hachirou almost shouted to the cousins when they passed to where the light cars are parked. Loud blaring of Japanese pop music can be heard around the area, and some girls wearing kinky clothes are dancing, gyrating and jumping to the beat.

“I think that’s more of our thing…” Miichan whispered to her cousins, pointing out to the hyperactive dancing girls.

“You just sounded like an oji-san, Miichan.” Takamina whispered back.

“You don’t have to be shy Takamina, since you’re quite a man yourself.” Haruna said, adding her two cents.

“Oi.”

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Takamina, Haruna and Miichan stopped at the middle of the lot in awe. “Oh. My. God. This place has the wildest sports cars anyone can ever dream of having…” Miichan whispered, eyeing the GT-Rs parked accordingly to models in one lane. Different cars like Lancers, Imprezas and Skylines are lined up opposite to each other as if ready for their next racing battle.

“Yeah, and it seems our target owns one of your dream cars Miichan.” Takamina whispered as she stared to one of the contenders. Haruna and Miichan followed her gaze and saw what their cousin is talking about. Beside one of the Subaru Impreza rally cars stood Jun, who was eyeing possible opponents in front of him.

“Ah ojou-san, you seem interested in the Yamamoto team. A lot of people place their bets on that team because they win most of their races.” Hachirou explained when he saw the cousins stare at Jun’s direction.

“They seem to be a very formidable team onii-san. Do they have a scheduled race tonight?” Haruna asked.

“I don’t think they are going for a race tonight. That guy named Jun is very picky when it comes to their opponents. Ah, but they do have a scheduled race tomorrow night.” Hachirou answered, flipping a small notebook that he fished out of his backpocket.

Takamina nodded to Haruna and Miichan as if conveying something. Her two cousins nodded in reply, “Ano onii-san, if that’s the case, we’ll be on our way.” Miichan said.

“Eh? Leaving so soon ojou-san?”

“Gomen ne, onii-san. As first time expectators, we would like to bet on a team that will surely win. Don’t worry, we’ll come back tomorrow night for the race.” Takamina added.

“I guess that’s understandable. Please come back soon. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the races.” Hachirou smiled, giving them a small salute as the cousins took their leave.

*****

Act 6 Scene 1 – Change of Plans

The next day…

Atsuko hummed softly as she entered the garage. She’s used to loud noises due to clanging of tools and engines running, but it seems that the activities inside the garage is different this morning. Spotting Yuko and some of the Flag Girls near where the Pit Crew is working, she decided to join them.

“Yuko onee-chan, what’s going on? And why does Rena look like… um, irritated?” Atsuko asked her sister, pointing at her team mate who is pouting at something.

“That’s the reason why…” Yuko said off handedly, pointing at the scene in front of her. A cameraman is hovering over the area where Takamina and Jurina are working on a motorcycle. Beside Takamina stood Ray, who was asking rapid questions regarding different parts of a motorcycle. Takamina on the other hand, answered each questions enthusiastically, thinking that Ray is suddenly becoming interested in knowing more about the racing industry.

“Those cameramen hovering around Takamina and Jurina just spoiled my day. Here I thought I could sit beside my Jurina while she works today.” Rena pouted even more.

“Ohoho, your Jurina you say…” Yuko teased, making Rena blush. “Anyway Acchan, according to Mariko onee-chan, it’s Kira-sensei’s new instruction. Whenever that diva is around Takamina, they will be filmed by one of those cameramen. She said that it’s for the new single’s DVD… something about a behind the scenes thing.” Yuko’s eyebrow suddenly hiked up, “I think I know who’s behind all of this…”

Atsuko looked at the scene that’s transpiring in front of them. Ray noticed three set of eyes looking at her, while listening to Takamina explain how a motorcycle engine works.

Watch and learn Maeda… Ray thought as she smirked at the Ace’s direction. “So, Nami… how does this thing work again?” Ray pointed at the cylinders of the engine. She strategically placed her hand on Takamina’s shoulder, then lazily roamed it around Takamina’s back until her hand landed on the drifter’s waist.

“Oh, that’s what you call a cylinder. Here’s how it works…” Takamina babbled on as she explained the engine part of the motorcycle, not noticing Ray’s roaming hand.

Ray smirked at Atsuko’s direction while half listening to Takamina’s explanations. That’s how you do it Maeda. I hope you’re taking down notes.

Atsuko gasped as she saw Ray getting bolder in her interaction with Takamina. She can’t help but feel the dread creeping up inside of her heart.

*****

Act 6 Scene 2 – There’s always a first…

It’s lunchbreak and the cousins is sitting on their usual table with Atsuko, Mariko and Yuko. Takamina sighed in relief as she ate her katsudon, Finally… some much needed rest. It’s a good thing that Sarukawa-shachou pulled Ray for a recording in their studio. I don’t know if I could stand it any longer whenever a cameraman follows me wherever I go.

“Wow, it’s been a while since we sat down to lunch together. How are you Mariko-chan? I hope my cousin Miichan here is taking care of you.” Haruna asked as she pointed a thumb towards Miichan who is sitting beside her.

Mariko rolled her eyes and giggled, “Work has been a drag since I’m taking care of your race schedules and Ray-san’s music video. She’s being a pain lately. Oh, and don’t worry about my Miichan, she takes care of me in more ways than one…” she cryptically said and winked at Miichan.

“Too much information Mariko onee-chan…” Yuko choked on her juice.

“You’re just jealous Yuko-chan because Haruna is being tsundere.” Miichan teased back, ignoring Haruna’s pout at her. “Anyway Takamina, how are you lately with Ray-san? It seems that you’re getting comfortable with her hanging unto you.” Miichan asked.

“Oh… that. Ever since the shoot started, I’m beginning to think that Ray-san’s actually a nice person. Plus, she seems that she started to take an interest in knowing about cars and in the races that we do.” Takamina explained.

Mariko rested her chin on the palm of her intertwined hands, “You mean you’re not miffed with her anymore? She was a bitch at Haruna when you first met her and besides, she stole a kiss from you.” She inquired.

“Of course it annoyed me that Ray-san treated my cousin badly, but I believe in giving other people a second chance to change for the better. I hope that she’d change how she treats others for her own good.” Takamina explained.

“And about that stolen kiss…?” Mariko pushed thru her question.

“Well, she’s actually my first ki ̶ “

“EH?! Majide?!” Haruna and Miichan interrupted. Atsuko’s spoon stopped halfway to her mouth when she heard that bit of information.

Takamina rolled her eyes, “Seriously, yes it was my first kiss. If I had my first kiss in the past, you two could’ve been the first to know.”

“Are you trying to tell us that it didn’t affect you that much when she gave you your first kiss?” Yuko asked, noticing Atsuko put down her spoon.

“Of course it ̶ ̶ “ Takamina stopped when she saw Atsuko suddenly stand up from her seat. “Acchan, is there something wrong?” she asked, seeing that she didn’t touch most of her lunch.

“I think I just lost my appetite. Excuse me…” Atsuko whispered then walked out of the pantry. Takamina gave Mariko and Yuko a questioning gaze. The two sisters simply shrugged their shoulders, a worried expression clearly evident on their face.

To be continued...

Minna, thank you for being patient with my update. :kneelbow: Everything seemed to take most of my time lately :dizzy: Anyway, I hope you'll enjoy this update. Please leave a comment as I always enjoy reading it (and everyone's comments are my motivation to improve my writing as well :farofflook: ) Thank you for reading! :byebye:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: blughise on November 07, 2011, 08:46:03 PM

YAY!!!!
Im first this time :cow:

I just got back from school and the first thing I did was went to my laptop and I found your update!!!!
I missed this so much Lynx!!!!

So much happened in here!!!

finally some progress with their mission

I like the first Atsumina moment!!!
Damn that Ray she really never gives up!!! :angry:

and Bakamina :smhid
Poor Acchan!!!! Ganbarre!!! Don't give up on her!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: arisa03 on November 07, 2011, 11:17:33 PM

Bakamina! >:U You're supposed to chase after her and explain yourself!! >:U But jealous Acchan is jealous. Acchan remember what Tomochin said ;A; Thanks for the update AFLynx! I have been waiting <333 Update soon. ; v ;

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: RJay on November 07, 2011, 11:51:47 PM

What? Takamina's first kiss is with Ray? :OMG: :frustrated:
I can't believe it! :fainted:
Acchan don't leave! :pleeease:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: Flean on November 08, 2011, 12:46:55 AM

OWH!!!! I've been waiting for your update!!!! :on lol:

Takamina is so slow~~ :mon exhaust: Go chase after Acchan!!! :scolding:

I can't wait for your next update!!!!! :tantrum:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on November 08, 2011, 01:28:06 AM

ray n her devilish plan :tama-mad:
minami y u so slow~ u better go after acchan! :temper:
will be waiting for ur next update D:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: karomuwi on November 08, 2011, 02:28:22 AM

And now I have commented!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

No punishments for me~! Hooray~! :P

So...Ray's so evil~! Nice! Love her plan! And now Acchan is getting more and more jealous! Plus learning that Ray was Takamina's first kiss is just..... :inlove: Aah~ Update more! Update fast! hehehe XD

Make Acchan more jealous! Make Ray and Takamina closer! Yeah~ I'm so evil! Mwuahahahaha :twisted: :twisted:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: JPopLover on November 08, 2011, 02:39:28 AM

OMG! :shocked Takamina had her first kiss with RAY?! :err: poor Acchan must have been heartbroken :badluck: Thanks for the update and hope you update soon!! :onioncheer: P.S. I know I'm a writer to but sadly I had been ill with the flu for about 2 and a half weeks and I just got back to school and my pediatrics teacher gave me like a million make-up assignments :OMG: :dizzy: -______-"" So now not only am I far far far behind in updating a request one-shot but I'm also behind in schoolwork :frustrated: :gyaaah: keke srry for my ramble ~ :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: chykla on November 08, 2011, 04:28:44 AM

COME ON TAKABOY, GO CHASE AFTER YOU ACCHAN ;_____;

THANK YEW FOR YER UPDATE, ILLBBE LOOKING FOWARD TO THE NEXT ONE ;-;-;-;-;

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: skytsuna on November 08, 2011, 04:59:09 AM

Yea!! Yea!! An update~~!!!!! :heart: :on GJ:
I've been waiting for this~!!!! :on lol:

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Hoho... Acchan is jealous~ XD
:mon lovelaff: I love it when Acchan is jealous~ I think it's cute :mon crazyinlove:
Hehe.. I'll be hoping for more Atsumina moments :mon cute:

Once again, Thank you so much for the update :kneelbow:
:onioncheer: I'll be waiting for the next update patiently ;) Please do your best :mon thumb:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: haruhi16 on November 08, 2011, 05:09:31 AM

finally an update!! .........................

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: Haruko on November 08, 2011, 06:23:39 AM

aww poor acchan that hurts.. i know..

takabaka can you tell that kind of information more... carefully...

maeda-san.. get uo i fight for you takamidget come on!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: immortal_K on November 08, 2011, 07:17:52 AM

WHAT! That stupid director went with Ray's idea and now Acchan is hurt :(

Takamina go fix everything, don't believe Ray its all a lie, fake, not really, just a show!!! GO to Acchan she is the one for you!

But then maybe with a jealous Acchan, she will now come up with something to 1 up Ray and shove her aside with grace bwahahaha

Agree with the comments here, need more AtsuMina moments keke

WOW that was Takamina's first kiss and it wasn't given to Acchan :thumbdown: but then like I say Jealous Acchan might become
dangerous :twisted: :twisted:

Thanks for the update, and please update again sooon!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: kahem on November 08, 2011, 08:57:35 AM

Ray never disapoint me for adding drama hehehe
Acchan don't worry, Ray can be jer first kiss but you could be her first *ahem* ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.1 - Camera...] Acts 4 - 6 UPDATE! 11/08
Post by: Haruko on November 09, 2011, 04:52:51 AM

Quote from: kahem on November 08, 2011, 09:03:18 AM

Ray never disapoint me for adding drama hehehe
Acchan don't worry, Ray can be jer first kiss but you could be her first *ahem* ^^

jjaajjajajaj yeah acchan... you can be her first cof cof everything.. the first person who touch her... all :D jajjaj perv mind working

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: AFLynx on November 13, 2011, 08:15:02 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 18b.2 – Camera…

*****

Act 7 Scene 1 – Take a picture

“Okay Ray, give the camera your most seductive smile.” Kira said as Amina continuously clicked on the shutter button of her camera.

*Click*

“I’m bored…” Ray whispered as she forced a smile while looking at the camera.

*Click*

“C’moooooon, you’re the VERY CHARISMATIC DIVA RAY! I know you can do better than that!” Kira cried out behind Amina, encouraging the singer to do better with her poses.

*Click*

“I’m tired…” Ray whispered, giving the director and the photographer a sluggish pose. Straight ahead, she sees Takamina sitting a few meters in front of them who seemed busy while holding a big notebook.

Just as Amina was about to take another photo, Kira patted the photographer’s shoulder to stop for a bit. “Alright Ray, what’s the problem?” Kira asked, placing her hands on her waist while waiting for the diva’s response.

“Kira-sensei~…” Ray whined, “We’ve been taking my pictures for two hours now. My eyes hurt from the flashing lights and my legs are seriously killing me… can we take a break?” Ray pouted.

Kira sighed as she looked up the ceiling, As I recall when I signed the contract for this project, I am supposed to work with a professional singer and not with a whiny princess… “Alright Ray, we can take an hour break. Make sure to give me quality pictures when we get back to the shoot for your CD cover.”

Ray clapped her hands in delight, “Arigato Kira-sensei! I’ll do better later, I promise!” the diva squealed and skipped daintily towards Takamina.

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Takamina eyed her latest drawing and nodded in satisfaction, “There, all done. I just have to make sure to show this to Kikuchi-san and ask for her opinion.” Takamina said to herself, noting to go to the Tech Lab to have her car design approved by the Industrial Engineer. Suddenly a pair of hands sneaked behind her back and covered her eyes.

“Guess who?” asked the person behind her in a sing songy voice.

“Um… I know you’re not that someone who always cover my eyes so… is that you Ray-san?” Takamina answered slowly.

“Nami, you can recognize my voice!” Ray beamed. “What are you doing? Are you drawing something perhaps in your sketchpad?”

Takamina rolled her eyes at Ray’s assumption. “Yes, I am actually drawing a car design for the team.”

“Can I take a look?” Ray battered her eyelashes at Takamina.

“Um… I guess so.” Takamina blinked, not used to Ray batting her eyelashes on her and handed her big sketchbook to the diva.

Ray carefully flipped each page and is astonished at Takamina’s design. “You’re a talented artist… as expected of my Nami.” Ray sincerely said, gently closing the sketchback and handing it back to the owner.

My Nami? “Thank you…” Takmina answered meekly.

“Nami, I want you to draw me.”

“N-Nani?!” Takamina choked out.

Ray giggled at Takamina’s bug-eyed look at her, “Nami, just by looking at your designs, I believe that you know how to sketch a person’s profile. Pretty please Nami? I still have 45 minutes before I get back to the shoot…” the diva pleaded in the sweetest tone that she could muster.

Takamina let out a grin, emphasizing her dimple on her left cheek as she twirled her pencil on her hand. “Alright. You can consider this as a gift from me.” She replied, flipping the notebook to find a fresh new page.

“Yatta! Arigato!”

Takamina began sketching the outline of the singer’s face and noticed that Ray kept on switching her poses. “Ray-san, you have to sit still… or at least focus your eyes on something… or you can look at me while I’m drawing you.”

“If you say so my Nami… I can do that all day.” Ray whispered, looking at Takamina as she settled on her seat.

A few meters away, Kira saw and grabbed a cameraman who passed by her side, “Make sure that you film those two…” she said, pointing at the race car driver and the diva.

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Atsuko and Yuko headed towards the dressing room, discussing their tasks for the day. The sisters stopped as they entered the room when they saw the other Flag Girls huddled in one corner of the room. . As they neared the huddle, the sisters saw Ray sitting comfortably in one of the chairs, showing a large piece of paper to the Flag Girls.

“Ara, ara… what are you doing here Ray-san? If you want to join the Flag Girls team, I’m sorry… we don’t need another member.” Yuko said off-handedly.

Ray smirked, tracing the outline of the drawing paper in her hand. “If I were to join the Flag Girls, they won’t be needing a team captain and an ace anymore. I could fill in those roles perfectly.” Ray gave out a short laugh. “Anyway, I was just showing them a gift that Nami made for me.”

Gift? Atsuko thought looking at the paper in Ray’s hand.

The diva saw the curious look of Atsuko. “Let me guess, you don’t know that bit of information about Takamina….” She taunted. “She is very sweet enough to draw this for me.” Ray continued as she forced the drawing paper in front of Atsuko’s face.

Atsuko grabbed the paper and took a good look at the drawing, with Yuko staring at the paper beside her. “Yuko onee-chan, I didn’t know Takamina could draw this good… do you?” Atsuko whispered, in awe at how Ray’s profile was drawn accurately.

“Um… I know I’m gonna be mean when I tell you this Acchan but… everybody knows that Takamina likes to draw a lot…” Yuko whispered back.

“She does?” Atsuko mumbled. Did Takamina hide it from me on purpose? Has she been drawing Ray-san in her notebook? Atsuko thought as insecurity began creeping up on her.

Ray casually grabbed the paper with her index finger and thumb out of Atsuko’s hand. “Careful Maeda, you might ruin my Nami’s gift. You have to might want to hurry up though… the next time I grab something from you, it won’t just be a piece of paper… I’ll definitely grab the artist too.” Ray winked devilishly and walked out of the dressing room.

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As Ray exited the dressing room, she stopped when she saw someone at her peripheral vision – Tomochin casually leaning by the door frame, filing her nails as she stared at the diva.

“What are you looking at Itano-san?” Ray asked. She and Tomochin have been professional in front of the camera, not really talking to each other unless it’s work-related.

“You’re one heck of a woman Ray-san. I’m beginning to believe what Yuko-chan has been telling about you.” Tomochin answered, still filing her nails.

“What are you talking about? I don’t think I understand you.” Ray said, raising an eyebrow.

The diva’s question made Tomochin stop at what she’s doing, “Stay away from Takamina. You may act like you’ve changed around her, but it seems that you’re still the diva that Yuko-chan and Atsuko-chan used to know. Takamina deserves someone better.” Tomochin snapped casually at the diva.

Let me guess… Itano-san likes my Nami too? “If you’re after my Nami, forget it. You’re no match for me when it comes to getting my Nami’s attention.”

“Oh, so you think I’m after Takamina? I don’t have to do something… I’m her bestfriend after all.” Tomochin shrugged her shoulders, satisfied that her answer earned a shock look on Ray’s face. “I’ll say it again Ray-san: Stay. Away. From. Takamina.”

Ray calmly stepped towards the other girl until they stood face to face, “You can’t make me Itano. If other people hurt because of love, I’m one of the few who dares to hurt others for the sake of love. I’ll do everything to make Nami mine.” the diva whispered, then turned her back from Tomochin, finally walking out of the studio.

*****

Act 7 Scene 2 – Excuses, Excuses…

Takamina, Haruna and Miichan sighed in relief as they saw the time finally changed to six in the evening on the clock inside the garage, signaling that work for the day is finally over.

“We have to hurry minna. Miichan, are you sure you won’t get tired for staying up late in our recon mission? You need your rest for tomorrow’s race.” Haruna said as they changed from their overalls to their usual everyday clothes.

Miichan rolled her eyes as she slammed her locker door shut. “Yes, I am gonna be okay, okaa-san. I already asked Sayaka-chan if I could take the day off tomorrow. I promised I’ll be here when we’re ready to go to the race course together with the rest of the team.”

“We’re just making sure that you’re gonna be okay Miichan. We don’t want the driver to get sick before the competition-ah…Ah…ACHOO!” Takamina sneezed, making her pause in tying her shoe laces.

“Well otou-san, you’re as bad as okaa-san beside you.” Miichan said, pointing at Haruna. “I’ll be fine, trust me. Unlike you two, I can sleep the whole day while you’re still forced to wake up early to work tomorrow. And besides, you look like you’re the one who’s gonna be sick… are you okay Takamina?” Miichan asked.

“I’m perfectly fine Miichan. Anyway, let’s go.” Takamina said. As the cousins passed by Mariko’s office, the three stopped as the office door opened, almost bumping to Mariko, Yuko and Atsuko who were about to go out of the office.

“Oh! NYANNYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!!! I missed you today? Going home early?” Yuko squealed as she latched her arms on Haruna.

“Uh, yeah, we’re almost ready to leave Yuko. How about you guys?” Haruna asked, placing her hands on the squirrel-girl’s waist.

Atsuko shyly stepped forward with a lily safely tucked inside her shoulder bag, with the flowers peeking out just out of its confinement. Atsuko saw the flower when she went to her older sister’s office, and when she asked Mariko about it, the general manager simply shrugged her shoulders and told her she didn’t know who placed it on top of her coffee table.

“Since we’re all headed for home soon… would you guys like to go to the Berry Parlour first to have a cup of tea?” Atsuko asked the cousins, staring intently at Takamina.

“Gomen ne, Acchan. I’m sorry but we’re in a hurry right now. My… ah… mom just called this afternoon and we’re expected at a charity ball that’s being held at our restaurant. It’s a surprise that mom wants us to be there all of a sudden that’s why we weren’t able to invite you three.” Miichan answered quickly before Takamina could respond and take Atsuko’s offer.

Atsuko nodded in understanding and moved towards Yuko’s side. Mariko hugged Miichan then placed a kiss on the driver’s lips. “You’ll have to make up for us then. Make sure you’ll get enough rest for the race tomorrow. If you win first place, I have a very big reward prepared for you.” Mariko purred.

Takamina rolled her eyes, “Okay lovebirds, enough of that. Again, we’re sorry we can’t spend time with you today. Anyway we have to go now. Take care on your way home!” Takamina stammered in a hurry, pushing Miichan and grabbing Haruna by the collar to untangle her cousin from Yuko’s grip as they finally head out the headquarters.

“Nice excuse Miichan. It’s somehow plausible that Auntie will hold a charity ball in your restaurant.” Takamina said as they neared their car at the parking lot.

“I have to make the excuse for the three of us, or else you might’ve given in on Acchan’s suggestion.” Miichan answered as she stepped in on the driver’s side of the car.

“You have no idea…” Takamina whispered as she and Haruna followed suit in getting in the car.

*****

Act 8 Scene 1 – Recon II

10:00pm - Daikoku Futo, Yokohama

Hachirou flicked his lighter open as he lit another cigarette. “It’s mightly crowded as always. I just wish there are more cute girls that would arrive tonight.” He sighed. Hachirou almost dropped his cigarette as a black Civic Coupe stopped in front of him. In sync, the three cousins stepped out of the sedan and waved at the startled man.

“Konbanwa, onii-san. Did you miss us?” Miichan asked in the sweetest tone that she could muster.

Kami-sama, thank you for answering my request… Hachirou thought as he looked up at the night sky. “Ah, we meet again ojou-san! So, are you three ready to watch your first drag race?” Hachirou asked.

“Hai~~~” The three cousins answered.

Hachirou laughed at their enthusiasm, “Very well then. I heard that there will be a drag race in Chiba that will start by midnight.” He informed the cousins, taking a long drag from his cigarette. “I also heard that Jun-san’s team will be in the race too.”

“This is our chance minna.” Haruna whispered at her cousins. “Arigato for the information Hachi-nii… ah, do you mind if we call you that?” she added, batting her eyelashes.

Kawaii~ “Ah, not at all ojou-san! I’ll meet you at Chiba in an hour or so then. The venue wouldn’t be that hard to find because there will be a lot of cars in the area.” Hachirou waved as he made his way to a large crowd of visitors in the area.

Takamina and Miichan blinked at the man’s retreating form, “Now I’ve seen the day that Haruna acted all cutesy… and a guy actually fell for it…” Miichan mumbled.

Haruna gasped in mock surprise at her cousins, “Shame on you two for not thinking that it will not work.” She said, cluthing her chest, acting like she got stabbed in her chest.

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11:30pm – Chiba

By the time that the cousins arrived at the venue, the drag racing has already started and beginning to pick up steam. They spotted Hachirou in a large crowd of people, taking bets for the next race.

Takamina tapped Hachirou’s shoulder, “We’re finally here Hachi-nii. Who are the contenders for the next race?”

“You’re just in time, ojou-san. Jun-san’s team is up next. Want to place a bet on their team? I must warn you though; it might cost a lot since this is one of the main races for the night.” Hachirou said, waving a large stack of money in front of the cousins.

“Well, I’m hoping that one thousand…”

“One thousand?! Nobody in here bets with just one thousand yen for a drag race!” Hachirou interrupted.

Takamina gave a short laugh making Hachirou furrow his eyebrows in confusion. “As I was about to say, I hope that one thousand US dollars will be a good bet for Jun-san’s team.” She continued, waving ten crisp one hundred US dollar bills in front of his face.

Hachirou’s eyes widened, “Ah… of course ojou-san! Wow, you three are rich! You’ve placed a bet on one of the greated teams here. I’m sure your you’ll get your money’s worth after the race. I have to apologize in advance that I’ll give you your winnings in Yen… you’re the only group who placed a bet in US dollars.”

“That’s okay Hachi-nii… it’ll save us the trouble of finding a money changer at this time of the night.” Miichan said off-handedly.

“Great to hear that ojou-san! I suggest you go to that nearby footbridge to get the best view of the race. Just find me on this spot to collect your winnings.” He answered excitedly, poiting at the footbridge just a few meters away from the starting line.

----------

The cousins looked down at the streets as they got to the footbridge. Quite a large number of spectators also gathered at the footbridge, waiting for the next race to start. Below them, a total of six cars lined up behind the starting/finish line, ready to rumble. The cousins narrowed their eyes as Jun stepped out from a blue GT-R and began taunting the driver of the car beside him.

“That Jun is all talk. Look, I bet he’s just bluffing to intimidate that driver from winning the race.” Miichan pointed at Jun.

“Ne Takamina, where did you get all that money? Masaka, don’t tell me that it’s the agency’s funds… or worse, you got it from the team!” Haruna poked Takamina’s cheek.

“Don’t be silly Haruna. It’s my personal money. Hachi-nii should pray that he’s right when he said Jun’s team always win… or else it’ll cost me a lot… and it’ll cost him his nose when I punch him on the face.” Takamina said.

“Make sure to treat us to dinner or something when you get your winnings.” Miichan reminded.

“Of course! You two could even ask Mariko-chan and Yuko-chan to go with us, I’ll ask Acchan as well…”

“Oh… a triple date? I love the idea already! I know this sounds weird but, I’m rooting for Jun’s team already because of that.” Haruna teased.

“Shut up you two… let’s see just how nasty Jun’s driving in this race.” Takamina said, waiting for the race to start.

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The race finally started when the traffic light in front of the starting point turned green. Billows of smoke covered the pavements as the race cars shrieked their tires out as they zoomed past the starting line. Based on the cousins’ observation, the racers will turn right to a main intersection which is ten blocks from the starting point, turn right again on the next intersection and will go back to the starting point which also serves as the finish line. As much as they are enjoying the race, they focused more on the car that Jun is driving.

“That slime ball is a maniac! Look at him shamelessly bump to the other cars!” Haruna shouted out, confident that no one will hear her amidst the wild cheering of the other spectators. Jun’s car maneuvered it’s way towards the intersection, bumping into a yellow Impreza, making it swivel and crash into another car behind it.

“Ouch, that’s gotta hurt.” Miichan winced. The three cousins jogged towards the other side of the footbridge, waiting for the first contenders to approach the finish line.

“His driving reminds me of my last race. I think he’s the one driving that black sedan before…” Takamina narrowed her eyes as she remembered the incident.

“It’s a good thing that he’s not a good drifter as you Takamina.” Haruna said. “Look, here comes the first two racers.” She pointed out at the red Lancer Evo VII taking the lead, with Jun’s car following behind it.

The cousins held their breath as both cars tried to outrun each other, gasping in shock when Jun sped up beside his opponent and banged the other car’s side, forcing the Lancer to the concrete barrier on the side of the road. Sparks flew as the Lancer got in contact with the roadblocks. With another forceful bump from Jun’s car, the Lancer finally crashed on the concrete barrier, making his opponent’s engine stop and send out billows of smoke from the inside of its’ hood. The driver immediately got out of the car as he helplessly watched Jun pass through the finish line.

The cousins shook their heads in disgust even though a large crowd of spectators cheered for Jun’s victory. “That’s not how a real race should look like…” Takamina mumbled as they made their way to find Hachirou.

*****

Act 8 Scene 2 – Winnings

Hachirou smiled as he saw the cousins walking towards him and waved cheerfully. “See? I told you Jun’s team would win! Do you want to collect your winnings or would you like to place another bet for the next race?” Hachirou asked no one in particular among the three cousins.

“Gomen ne, Hachi-nii… we’re here to collect our winnings. As much as we want to watch the next race, I’m afraid it’s already late.” Takamina said.

“Ah… wakatta. Anyway, ojou-san, here’s your winnings. You three managed to earn two hundred thousand yen!” Hachirou said, placing a bundle of money in Takamina’s hand. “I approached Jun-san a while ago after he got out of the car, telling him that three cute ojou-sans placed a large bet on his team and I want him to meet you. Too bad he declined, saying that he got some important business tonight.” He continued, glancing at his watch, telling him it’s already past one in the morning.

The three cousins looked at each other, suddenly curious at what business Jun was pertaining to. “That’s a shame Hachi-nii… he seemed like a cool guy, plus he made the race um… exciting.” Miichan managed to smile, crossing her fingers behind her back.

“Maybe you could meet him some other time when you get back.” Hachirou said, shrugging his shoulders. “I hope to see you in the future races.” Hachirou said, as he offered his hand for a handshake.

Haruna and Miichan genuinely shook the man’s hand. Hachirou looked at Takamina in surprise when she managed to place a ten thousand yen bill in his palm after they shook hands. “That’s your tip for being a great onii-san and tour guide for us, Hachi-nii. We’ll definitely look for you when we watch another race.” Takamina said, with Haruna and Miichan nodded in agreement.

Hachirou’s lip quivered as he looked at the three cousins. “A-arigatou ojou-sama! Finally, a group of cute girls appreciates what I do! Yes, we’ll meet again soon! Thank you so much!” Hachirou bowed at the three cousins as they walked away to where they parked their car.

“That was generous of you Takamina. I wonder what Jun’s up to when Hachi-nii said he had some business to do tonight.” Haruna said as they walked at the streets of Chiba.

“Ten thousand yen is nothing compared to the help we got for tracking down that slime ball. After Miichan’s race, we’ll continue our recon mission. I just hope we can catch Jun in the act in whatever business he’s up to tonight.” Takamina said as they neared the area where they parked their car.

To be continued...

Waaah~ I managed to update after five days! :farofflook: I would like to thank everyone who read the previous chapter and who left their comments :kneelbow: I hope everyone will leave their comments to this new chapter too! I also hope that everyone will like this chapter :hee:

@blughise: lol yay for being the first one to comment on the previous chapter! :onioncheer: yes, the three managed to make some progress in their mission... I hope you'll like this new chapter too! :)
arisa03: Hi arisa-chan! :mon hi: I had to lol at how you said Bakamina :on lol: too bad for Takamina that she wasn't able to explain herself because she got interrupted... twice! XD thanks for the comment!
Rjay: I know... I was shocked too that Ray is Takamina's first kiss :stoned: thanks for leaving a comment! :nya:
Flean: hehe, I agree that Takamina's waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too slow :err: I hope she does something nice for Acchan soon!
CrimsonGrxy: Ray has been consistent in grabbing Takamina's attention, hasn't she? :nervous I hope Acchan won't give up on Takamina though... thanks for the comment! :luvluv2:
karomuwi: lol yay! I finally got a comment from you! :onioncheer: well, we'll see what's Ray's gonna do in the upcoming chapters. :nervous hope you'll leave another comment for this new update!
JPopLover: thanks for the comment! :luvluv2: don't stress yourself too much between writing and doing school stuff... getting sick is really not a good feeling I tell you (because I got sick too a couple of weeks ago :fever: ) everyone will be patiently waiting for your updates as well :hee:
skytsuna: thanks for the comment! I must agree that a jealous Acchan is a cute Acchan :lol: hope you'll like this new update!
haruhi16: thanks for reading the previous chapter... I hope you'll also like this new installment. :hee: btw, what does the dots in your comment mean? :dunno: I'm just curious is all :nervous
immortal_K: lol it's not the director's fault :nervous here's something to read while you're away for a vacation. :on lol: I hope you'll leave a comment when you have the time. Enjoy your vacation! :luvluv2:
kahem: lol Ray is not just a very charismatic diva... I think she's also a drama queen :bigdeal: well, as far as Takamina's first *ahem*.... we'll see about that in the future :mon blood: thanks for reading!
Haruko: lol another new nickname for Takamina :on lol: well like I said, she always got interrupted that's why she wasn't able to explain herself carefully lol maybe she'll be able to explain herself to Acchan in the future chapters. XD thanks for reading!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: Flean on November 13, 2011, 09:16:19 PM

Yeay!!!! I just woke up and... and... you update!!!! :ptam-shy:

I'm getting annoyed... ray and her tricks.... :on thumbb: takamina probably had Acchan all over her sketch book... :luvluv2:

Thanks for the update~~ :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: blughise on November 13, 2011, 09:50:24 PM

Damn Im not the first this time!
but ohh well nice chapter!!!

I think I finally know why Takamina never show Atsuko her notebook :P
Damn that Ray!!! Kira-sensei what are you doing!!! You shouldn't put up with Ray's bratty, whiny spoiled princess brat character!!!!
and Yah you go Tomochin! Show RAY who's the boss!!!!

everything else is good though the cousin's mission is slowly progressing....I want some action and Kicking some asses next please!!!
and I wonder how long will the sister's would notice the cousin's excuses whenever they try to have some quality time with them!!!

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE LYNX!!!
I can't wait for more!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: kahem on November 13, 2011, 10:56:24 PM

Well, I'm sure Acchan will be her first hehehe
Tomochin is cover Acchan's back yeah!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 14, 2011, 05:28:59 AM

:w00t: Nice!!!!!!!!
I :heart: this!!!! XD
Tomochin rocks!!! :P confronting Ray 8)
Thanks for the update :)
Can't wait for what happen next :thumbsup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: skytsuna on November 14, 2011, 05:32:16 AM

Yes!!! Update!!!!!!! :w00t:

I LOVE IT!!!!!! :heart:
I enjoy reading this~ :wub:
:inlove: I think Takamina been drawing Atsuko in her notebook XD
:thumbsup Tomochin!!! Telling Ray to Back-off XD
Thanks for the update :thumbsup
:bow: Please update soon ;)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on November 14, 2011, 06:07:38 AM

well~ it would be interesting if ray end up with takamina if acchan dont do anything yet :glasses:
twisted plot anyway :kekeke:
oh what the heck! acchan do something! there is no time to get jelly over silly things :temper:
n update soon lol :lol:~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: haruhi16 on November 14, 2011, 07:48:55 AM

Finally an update!! hahaha yeah you noticed the dots on my comment?haha well it was too short for me, i always want the next chapter ASAP!!!! :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: kekekeke.. you don't know how much i love your fic!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: karomuwi on November 14, 2011, 12:39:53 PM

And now I comment! AGAIN! :cow: :cow: :cow: YAY~!

Haha! I really love the part when Haruna clutched her chest because of what the two said! I really lol-ed at that part! Love the new update! I just hope that next time, Acchan will be the one Takamina draws. She'd be a great muse! ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: Megumi on November 15, 2011, 12:25:16 AM

Yesh! I was waiting for your update so long! I even got an abstinence :panic:

And this update was a long one so I'll forgive you *hehe

But seriously! Thank you for your update I'm waiting for next! :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: Haruko on November 15, 2011, 06:26:05 AM

OMG!!! good chapter!!... acchan go and fight for takamina..

takamina you are so innocent...

Ray you are so slu.. (bad words insert here)

yuko seduce more to nyan nyean..

when star the drawing scene i think that ray gonna say that she wants that takamina drawn her like the movie "titanic" you know naked... or something like that i dont know why but all the chapter i think that this line gonna appear..

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: YumePouk on November 18, 2011, 09:31:09 PM

{out}
Waaaaaaahhh
Shame on me for not commenting often :sweatdrop: gomen ne >__<

Normaly I tolerate Ray but since she appeared i felt bad wibe from her
And I was right because now we didn't have much AtsuMina moment =[ + Acchan is mad at Takamina I think <_<
i would not be Takamina nor Ray coz I think jealous Acchan CAN be really scary

Takamina you should do something to keep Ray away from you,
maybe you wanna lose Acchan or u will go through some hard time later...
But I hope everything wanna return as before the Diva came...

Good to read that the cousins missions progress well
Wonder What will happen next
Ganbare in writing this fic
I'll always support ur work =] *throw a smoke bomb on the ground and dissapear as a ninja*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: JPopLover on November 21, 2011, 04:39:18 AM

So I've been MIA :depressed: anyways woww in the awesome update :hee: update again soon :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18b.2 - Camera...] Acts 7-8 UPDATE! 11/14
Post by: immortal_K on November 24, 2011, 06:32:17 PM

Hey Lynx!

I still think its the directors fault! and the dumb director let Ray get away for a break and now she has a drawing of
herself by Takamina!!!!! Where are the Atsumina moments?????

Go Tomochin take down that diva for your bestfriend!!!! Gotta get Acchan and Takamina together =( those two are
taking forever and swimming around in circles for ages!

HURRY WRITE MORE NOW!!! UPDATE! lol

Thanks for the vacay reading but I wasn't able to read it till after I got back hahaha

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: AFLynx on December 07, 2011, 09:20:27 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 18c – Action!

*****

Act 9 Scene 1 – Break-in at Dawn

4:00 AM

Jun smiled devilishly as he saw a race car in the middle of the garage he stealthily sneaked in. Some of his armed men guarded the door as he picked the driver’s door of the car and pulled a knob inside to open the car hood.

“Are you done yet?!” One of the armed men yelled from the garage entrance.

Jun grumbled, seething in anger. He purposely walked back to the garage entrance and slapped the armed man at the back of his head. “You idiot! All that yelling will cause a ruckus and someone is bound to finds us sneaking in!” He hissed between clenced teeth. “Just shut up and let me do my work.” He added and went back to the car.

Flicking his flashlight on, he pulled out a small gadget as big as a match box inside his coat pocket. “This will blow everyone’s mind off during the race…” Jun whispered, snickering at his own joke. Aiming his flashlight on the car’s engine, he secured the small gadget behind the engine where it won’t be easily seen. He then silently closed the hood and walked out of the garage.

“Let’s go boys. That’ll teach them for not agreeing with our proposition.” Jun whispered as his armed men closed the garage and all of them rode an unmarked black van and drove away into the night.

*****

Act 10 Scene 1 – Words get in the way…

Takamina coughed, feeling her throat getting itchy by the minute. This is what I get from lack of sleep… it was almost five in the morning by the time we arrived at the apartment. Takamina thought, more worried about her health than complain about the recon mission.

“Now I’m jealous of Miichan… she has the day off to prepare for the upcoming race tonight. I’m just thankful that Ray-san’s video shoot is about to end… I can’t wait to just concentrate on racing and in our mission.” Takamina whispered to herself, grabbing a leather jacket on a nearby chair in preparation for the morning shoot.

“Ara, why does it seems that whenever I walk into you, you’re always putting something on… or taking something off…” Atsuko teased softly as she made her way towards the drifter.

In surprise, Takamina fumbled in putting on a jacket and straightened up as Atsuko neared her. “Ah… well…” Takamina scratched her nape then smiled at the girl in front of her. “I think that it’s the Fates’ doing so that we can talk. Um, you know… it’s been a while since we really had a chat.” She added, trying to zip up the jacket while still looking at Atsuko at the same time. I really miss talking to you Acchan…

Atsuko giggled at Takamina’s attempt to act cool. “Remind me to thank the Fates then. Here, let me help you." I miss you too Takamina…

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Ray hummed her latest song as she entered the garage. Her humming stopped short as she saw Atsuko talking with Takamina.

“Why that little Maeda brat…” Ray hissed between clenched teeth. No one has the right to steal my Nami’s affection from me! “NA ̶ !”

“Ray-san…” a voice from behind her cut her short from shouting at Takamina at this time of the day. Ray quickly turned her head at the source of the interruption. Ignoring the person, she looked back at Takamina and Atsuko and tried it again… to no avail.

“Ray-san, if you please… can I talk to you for a minute?”

Ray growled inwardly, inhaled an impatient breath and turned around. “Ohayo Kira-sensei, what can I do for you? Make it quick because I have something to do.”

Kira stifled a laugh at Ray’s response. “I would like to suggest that you should immediately go to the Studio and have your makeup done by Kashiwagi-san. I’m also told that Sarukawa-shachou would like to talk to you after you’re done with your makeup.” Kira said at the scowling diva.

“But…” Ray pouted as she looked back at Atsuko, slowly zipping up Takamina’s jacket. Her eyes narrowed into slits as she saw Takamina blush from Atsuko’s attention.

“Now, now Ray-san… be a good lil diva that you are and follow your director – me. I don’t want to burn more daylight that we already had just because you stood here and whine at me. Get your makeup done and talk to Sarukawa-shachou already.” Kira said with finality in her tone and lightly shoved Ray towards the direction of the studio. Ray continued to pout at the director but eventually stomped her way out the garage.

*sigh~* Now that the diva’s been taken care of, all I need to do is get Takahashi-san’s attention… Kira thought as she looked at the two girls a few meters in front of her.

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Takamina gulped loudly as Atsuko zipped her leather jacket for her. Looking past Atsuko, her eyes widened in panic as she saw an agitated Ray looking at them. Uh oh…

“You suddenly look pale Takamina, is there something wrong?” Atsuko asked, touching Takamina’s cheek with worry. My Takamina looks like she saw a ghost!

Takamina mentally shook her head, “Ah… it’s nothing Acchan. I uh… am just nervous about the shoot that’s all.” She nervously smiled. Thank God this is the last scene for Ray-san’s video!

“You don’t have to be nervous about it Takamina. I’m sure you’ll look cool in the video.” Atsuko winked. I wish that shoot will end… like right now. Today. Pronto. ASAP!

Takamina gasped inwardly as she saw Ray charging towards their direction. Oh God, here it comes! she thought then shut her eyes tightly, waiting for the inevitable rage of the diva.

“NA ̶ !”

…..

….

…

..

.

Eh? Ray-san should be charging to us by now… the drifter thought. Slowly opening one eye, she peeked again behind Atsuko’s back and noticed Kira talking to an agitated diva.

Atsuko furrowed her eyebrows at Takamina’s facial expression, “Are you sure there’s nothing wrong Takamina? Is there something behind my back?” she asked. Atsuko was about to look behind her when Takamina grabbed her face with both hands, effectively drawing her stare back at the drifter.

“Ah! Nonononono, nothing’s definitely wrong Acchan. So, tell me about your schedule for today.” Takamina stammered, changing the subject. Realizing that she’s still holding Atsuko’s face, she immediately let go of her hand, feeling her blood rush to her cheeks. That was close!

Atsuko rolled her eyes as she enumerated her tasks just as Takamina requested. Takamina kept on nodding her head as a response to the talking Atsuko while looking at Kira shoving Ray outside the garage. Good thing Kira-sensei has good timing…

Takamina raised an eyebrow as she saw Kira look at her. From her vantage point, Kira gave her a signal of “1” and “5” on each hand then pointed at her wristwatch then exited the garage door.

“Takamina, are you listening to me? Are you sure that it’s okay that we’re talking and all… I mean, Kira-sensei might be looking at you for the shoot.” Atsuko shyly asked.

Takamina smiled, “Haihaihai! I'm listening! I think I still have 15 minutes to spare before I go to the shoot.” Thank you Kira-sensei!

“Wonderful! It’s been a while since we really talked.” Atsuko said, smiling widely. Yokatta… “Anyway, where is the shoot gonna take place? Is it at the studio… or maybe at the practice track?”

“Well, we’ll start shooting later at the studio but I heard that we’ll be do a location shoot afterwards. I don’t think I’ll be joining you for lunch today with everyone.” Takamina answered. This video has taken most of my time away from you Acchan…

“I see… do your best okay?” Atsuko whispered, pumping her fist in front of her chest for encouragement. I know… I really miss you… even the other team members misses you… well, they miss your failed expressions more though…

Takamina snapped her fingers as she had a lightbulb moment. “Oh! Are you available let’s say, tomorrow? You can say that I earned more than usual and I would like to treat you for lunch or dinner if you’re available. I already asked Miichan and Haruna-chan to ask your sisters to join us as well. My treat.” Takamina said excitedly. Translation: I made a huge bet in a city car race and I managed to earn two hundred thousand yen from it.

“Tomorrow’s Wednesday right? The Flag Girls have a rehearsal during noon until late at night.”

“I see… how about Thursday?”

“Yuko onee-chan and I have to do inventory work for the Flag Girls supplies and costumes. I don’t think Mariko onee-chan is available too because she has to do some accounting stuff.” Atsuko pouted inwardly. I know my sisters and I are free on Friday though… please say that we’ll go out on Friday…

“Um… Friday?” Takamina asked, looking at her Nike shoes sheepishly.

It’s rare to see Takamina so shy around me… kawaii~ “Friday is okay with me, and I know my sisters are free on that day.

YES! “Wonderful! Friday it is then! I’m thinking it’ll be an early dinner after work. I’ll let Miichan and Haruna know so that they can tell your sisters.” Takamina replied.

Atsuko and Takamina talked about other things until the drifter glanced at her wristwatch, informing her that her fifteen minutes with the Ace has already passed. “Ano… I have to get going Acchan… I’ll see you later this afternoon then.” I wish Kira-sensei could’ve given me more time with you…

If only time could stand still whenever I’m with you… “It’s okay I understand. Mariko onee-chan also expects me to be in her office this morning. I’ll see you later then.” Atsuko said. She walked towards the garage door, turning back one last time to look at Takamina, she gave her a hand wave then jogged her way out.

“Bye…” Takamina whispered, a smile plastered on her face. I can’t wait till it’s Friday!

*****

Act 11 Scene 1 – Those Three Words…

Jun stepped out of a black van and looked at the scene in front of him. “The ever famous Twin Ring Motegi. I’m looking forward to an eventful race today.” He whispered to no one, snapping his fingers to his men to hurry up and get in the venue. “Let’s go boys. We don’t want to keep the fans waiting for another explosive race.”

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Sayaka whistled a happy tune as she tapped their team’s racing logbook. The technical inspector just finished inspecting Miichan’s gear and racing car and informed the Crew Chief that everything is in top condition. Sayaka clapped her hands to get the attention of everyone in their designated pit stop.

“Alright minna, listen up! I know we’ve been busy lately but you were able to keep everything in shape. Great job everyone!” Sayaka exclaimed, wherein everyone cheered in response. “For now, let’s support Miichan and do our best!”

“Hai~!” everyone responded.

“Miichan! Ganbare!” Takamina exclaimed, handing Miichan her racing outfit.

“You’ve practiced very hard and we know that you will win this race.” Haruna smiled, pumping her fist.

“Thanks. I’ll do my best. Who knows, I’ll be the next Danica Patrick*.” Miichan winked as she took her outfit.

“That’s the spirit!” Sae interjected, patting Miichan at the back. “You’d better get changed now, the race is about to start.” The Assistant Crew Chief added, pointing the way towards the nearest dressing room designated per competing teams. Miichan nodded in response and jogged towards the dressing room.

“Yeah, and we’ll let you know when Mariko-chan and the rest of the Flag Girls gets here!” Sayaka yelled to Miichan’s retreating form, making the rest of the Pit Crew laugh.

“You do that Chief! You should definitely do that!” Miichan yelled back.

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Miichan adjusted the Velcro strap on her collar as she made her way to their pit stop. Checking herself on a mirror on top of a nearby table, she smiled in appreciation. Yukirin did a very good job designing my suit. I have to thank her later on. Her outfit is patterned like what Takamina wore for Ray’s music video – a black fitting racing suit with pink stripe details that accentuated her body very well.

“I know I will look good while driving GachaPink… now where did I put my helmet…?” Miichan said to herself while wearing her gloves.

“I bet you’re looking for this…” Mariko said behind her, handing the helmet to the driver. My sexy driver…

Miichan turned around and smiled, It’s just like my first motorcycle event for this team. “Why thank you kind ojou-sama. Are you gonna watch from the stands, or will you and the rest of the Flag Girls stay here in the pit?” she asked, holding her helmet and resting it on her hip.

“We’ll be here in the pit cheering for you. Do your best okay? I know you’ll win this race.” Mariko said, holding her hand.

“Yo lover girl! Time for you to kiss your princess and get this show on the road!” Sae bellowed outside the pit stop where the rest of the crew where busy around her race car.

“Hai~!” Miichan yelled back, making Mariko giggle.

“I guess, you’ll have to get going then. Like I said, win this race… for the team… and for me.” Mariko smiled as she let go of Miichan’s hand, about to make her way to the Flag Girls team behind her.

Miichan tightened her hold on the other girl’s hand, making Mariko raise a playful questioning eyebrow towards her. Miichan let out breath and nervously looked at the manager, “I love you…” Miichan whispered.

“Eh?” Mariko whispered, slowly facing the driver. Why say it now, Miichan?

“I love you… I just, well… I just want you to know…” Miichan repeated shyly.

Mariko blushed, touching Miichan’s cheeks gently with both hands. “I love you too, Minegishi Minami. Here, take this. For luck.” Mariko said, pulling out her handkerchief from her skirt pocket and tied it on Miichan’s right arm. She surprised everyone by kissing Miichan passionately on the lips, smiling inwardly as she felt an arm snake around her waist. The Pit Crew and Flag Girls cheered and whistled teasingly at the pair, stopping them from their public display of affection.

“Ganbare, Miichan.” Mariko whispered and made her way towards her sisters. Miichan smiled as she wore her helmet and jogged at the waiting Pit Crew.

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Sayaka double checked the inside of the racing car as Miichan made sure that her seatbelts are secured. “Miichan, take note of the curves of this race track – it is very much different that the ones that we have in the headquarters. Expect that the third and fourth turn will be tighter than the first two turns of the track. Other than that, I’m sure you’ll do fine. Sae and I will monitor your performance during the race. Takamina and Haruna will help out too. The four of us will be talking to you via headset.” Sayaka said, tapping Miichan’s helmet.

“Don’t worry Chief, GachaPink and I will do our best!” Miichan mumbled on her built-in headset inside her helmet.

“GachaPink?” Sayaka questioned looking at her assistant and the cousins behind her.

“That’s what she named for the car… it’s originally named Gachapin actually.” Takamina answered, pointing at the pink Honda AKB #48 NSX-GT 2011.

“Gachapin? But it’s not even green…” Sayaka mumbled.

“We already said that. Miichan said she almost named it as such just to irritate you.” Haruna added.

“Anyway, I have to get going. The other teams are already waiting for me at the starting point. Talk to you later during the race!” Miichan hurriedly said, pulling up her car window and drove her car towards the starting line.

“Oi! Get back here… Well, Miichan did pulled a prank on me on that one.” Sayaka said, scratching the back of her head, ignoring Miichan’s giggles in her headset.

*****

Act 11 Scene 2 – Fire, Works…

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ANNOUNCER 1: WELCOME TO THE ANNUAL TWIN RING MOTEGI RACE! EVERYONE ON THE STANDS ARE CHEERING LOUDLY WAITING FOR THE RACE TO START. TELL ME PARTNER, WHO ARE YOUR BEST BETS IN THIS RACE?

ANNOUNCER 2: WELL PARTNER, I HAVE 3 RACING TEAMS THAT I HAVE DIBS ON – #2 CAR OF THE TEAM TOKAI, #6 CAR OF THE YAMAMOTO TEAM, AND #48 OF THE AKB48 TEAM. MY FORECAST IS THAT THOSE 3 TEAMS WILL GO HEAD TO HEAD ON THIS PRESTIGIOUS RACE.

Haruna and Takamina’s ears perked when they heard the announcer. Both cousins nodded to each other, their senses high on alert to their surroundings looking for a very familiar face – Jun Ohayashi’s.

“Ganbare, Miichaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!” Yuko squealed with the rest of the Flag Girls inside the pit stop. Miichan giggled as she overheard the squirrel girl in her headset as she waited for announcer’s signal.

RACERS – START YOUR ENGINES!

The roar of the engines from each individual race cars echoed throughout the venue, along with the loud cheers of the fans on the stands. Sayaka, Sae and the two cousins waited anxiously at their pit stop and concentrated their view on Miichan’s car.

3…

2…

1…

GO!!!!

A loud cracking sound of a pistol and the waving of a green flag from the starting/finishing line started the race. Miichan revved up her engine, stepping hard on the gas pedal, making her tires screech alongside with the other cars.

“You’re doing great Miichan! Keep your drifts consistent, just like what we’ve been practicing. You don’t need to hurry, you have good standing in the race.” Takamina said, watching her cousin drift on the second turn on a small monitor in front of her.

“Roger that.” Miichan replied, drifting with ease as she passed the third turn, anticipating the fourth narrow turn of the track.

“Good job Miichan! This is a 127-lap race so make sure to check your gauges, especially your gas indicator. Make a pit stop every 11th lap, we’ll be waiting for you.” Sayaka said.

“I’m on my 10th lap and I think I already wore my tires down. I’ll head to the pit stop when I cross the line.” Miichan answered. Sayaka immediately gave a signal to the Pit Crew to get ready.

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The race dragged on with Miichan heeding Sayaka’s advice, making a pit stop on an 11-laps interval. The crowd cheered as the leading 3 teams are on their 125th lap in the race.

ANNOUNCER 1: WOW, YOU SURE HIT THE MARK ON YOUR BETS PARTNER! THE 3 TEAMS THAT YOU MENTIONED ARE CURRENTLY BATTLING FOR FIRST PLACE - #6 OF TEAM TOKAI LEADING THE RACE WITH #48 OF AKB48 TEAM TAILING BEHIND. THE YAMAMOTO TEAM IS NOT FAR OFF FROM OUR 2ND BEST TEAM!

ANNOUNCER 2: AND THE CROWD GOES WILD AS THE THREE TEAMS PASSED THE 127TH LAP! I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE THE OUTCOME OF THIS RACE!

Somewhere in the stands, Jun smirked at what the announcer said. “It’s time to show that team how wrong they were to decline to sell their team to the Yamamoto group.” He whispered, pulling out a small trigger-like device from his coat pocket.

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Mariko with the rest of the Flag Girls cheered excitedly as they eyed their team’s car zoomed past the last lap.

“You can do it Miichan!” Mariko squealed, clasping her hands in front of her chest. Please make her win!

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Miichan stepped harder on the gas pedal as she drove passed to her opponent. The Team Tokai’s driver immediately moved to the inside of the curve and stepped on the gas pedal, slightly bumping the left side rear of Miichan’s car.

“Be careful Miichan! Focus on controlling your car!” Sae exclaimed on her headset.

“Don’t worry, I have it under contro ̶ “

*BOOM!*

Team Tokai’s hood suddenly exploded, colliding it completely to Miichan’s car, swiveling it to a 180-degree turn. Team Yamamoto’s car, crashed on Miichan’s car on the side, sending her car flying and turning in mid-air towards the barrier in front of the shocked fans. The front end of Miichan’s car crashed on the barrier, and backed down the track as it slowly stopped inside the lane.

Sayaka stared in horror as she saw the damage of Miichan’s car. “Komorin! Sae! Go with the emergency crew of the race, they might need you there to check on Miichan.” She yelled at her designated Fire Extinguisher and at her Assistant Crew Chief. Komorin and Sae nodded seriously and ran towards the emergency crew of the race.

“Miichan! Are you okay?! Answer me!” Takamina exclaimed in her headset, staring helplessly at the scene in front of her.

“She’s not answering Takamina… God, I hope she’s okay.” Haruna whispered, placing her hand on her cousin’s shoulder.

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ANNOUNCER 1: OH NO! THAT TOTALLY DESTROYED THE FRONT END OF AKB48’S CAR! LOOKS LIKE THE TEAM WILL NOT MAKE IT TO THE FLAG. TEAM YAMAMOTO WON THIS RACE.

Jun gave a short laugh at the announcement. “That should give them a lesson. Too bad, AKB48’s car is on the way. I pity whoever their driver is…” He whispered as he left his seat on the stand, shoving random people on his way to the exit.

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Mariko sank to her knees as she saw how Miichan’s car crashed on the barrier. The Flag Girls stopped their cheering the moment the other team’s car burst into flames and gasped at the condition of Miichan’s car. No… this can’t be happening…

Yuko and Atsuko immediately went to their elder sister’s side. Both younger sisters knew that no words will calm Mariko down. Yuko and Atsuko immediately grasped Mariko’s hands as she stood up, determined to go towards Miichan’s dilapidated car.

“Please onee-chan, don’t force your way to the race track. Let Sayaka-chan and the rest of the Pit Crew check Miichan’s condition.” Yuko pleaded helplessly.

“No, I won’t just stand here Yuko! Let. Me. GO!!!” Mariko yelled trying to get out of her sisters’ grasps. This is not real! She just told me she loves me!

Atsuko pulled Mariko and hugged her tight together with Yuko. “Onegai, onee-chan…” Atsuko whispered towards Mariko’s ear.

Feeling her sisters hug, Mariko snapped out of her trance and cried openly, letting out a wail full of pain…

“MIICHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!”

To be continued...

* - Danica Patrick is the first woman race car driver that won at Twin Ring Motegi

:kneelbow: Gomen ne everyone, I know this update is way overdue... I hope you won't kill me because of this chapter :on freeze:

INXS: I'll reply to everyone's comments for the previous chapter in a couple of hours. I do hope I get feedback from this chapter as well. :sweat: Thank you everyone for being so patient with me!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: ilovecandiedapples on December 07, 2011, 10:51:43 PM

yay you updated :twothumbs
Noooooooooooooo miichan why, and after she told mariko she loved her too :cry: i hope she's not to badly hurt :(
anyway thanks for the update and like always you never fail to amaze me :bow:
please update when you can :cow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on December 08, 2011, 01:44:22 AM

Will wait for the next update ._.
*pls dont kill miichan* :bleed eyes:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: blughise on December 08, 2011, 01:59:31 AM

Sweet Atsumina Moment Kawaii!!!
I so can't wait for you to get rid of Ray!!! :)
Good Job Kira-sensei for keeping that spoiled Diva away from my Atsumina :D

Ohh !!!!! NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! MIICHAN!!!!!!! :shocked: :shocked: :shocked:
Just when Miichan finally told to Mariko-sama that she loves her!!!

Damn That Jun dude he is going to pay for that!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:

I missed this you know!!!
it's like it's been so long since your last update!!!

I hope you update soon!!!
I wanna know what will happen to Miichan!!!

Mariko-sama hang in there!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: JPopLover on December 08, 2011, 03:16:05 AM

:frustrated: NOOOOO!!!! Mii-chan :pleeease: I hope she's ok! Poor Mariko :gyaaah: Man this chapter was sooo dramatic :D I loved this update ^^ I hope you update soon :3 Thanks for the update :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: Haruko on December 08, 2011, 06:11:31 AM

wow wow something is going workg.. miichan T_T be strong for us

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: AFLynx on December 08, 2011, 02:56:30 PM

Hi Minna! :hee: as promised, I will reply to the comments for the two latest chapters:

Flean: about Takamina's sketchbook... it's still a secret coz she didnt even let me take a peek on it :dunno: lol

blughise: Ray is kinda stubborn isn't she? I think this time Kira-sensei was able to fend off Ray giving Takamina some quality time with Acchan :glasses: Kira-sensei is a very cool director I tell you. I think she'll still be on my next chapter 8)
Yes, it's been a while since I updated... I've been busy with work and choir stuff. :nervous I hope that I'll have the time and enough ideas so that I can update sooner. XD

kahem: Tomochin is a cool friend to have in my story :cool1: I hope I'll get a comment from you for the latest update! :luvluv2:

Yagami.Rai: Hope you've already read the latest chapter! :P I can imagine Tomochin being "Shibuya-like" while confronting Ray. XD

skytsuna: I'm glad that you enjoy reading my story :hee: and I hope you've read the latest chap. I hope you'll let me know what you think of the latest chapter. thanks for reading my story!

CrimsonGrxy:

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well~ it would be interesting if ray end up with takamina if acchan dont do anything yet

I'm not really gonna answer that directly but... if Acchan is as slow as Takamina, things might end up that way. :nervous
As for Miichan's condition... I think they are still waiting for the other cars to finish the race. :mon sweat: I'll try my best to write the next chapter soon. Thanks for reading!

karomuwi: I agree! Acchan is a great muse! Hope you've already read my latest chapter :hee: it's nice to know that your laptop is okay now :D talk to you whenever! 8)

Megumi: thank you for being patient with me. I really appreciate it when there are members in this forum that anticipates my update. Everyone keeps on motivating me to improve in my writing :kneelbow: like what I said to everyone, I hope you already read my latest chapter... and I hope I get a comment from you too :P

Haruko: lol I actually had the same visualization when I was writing the previous chapter XD I was just waiting for a reader to make that exact comment about the Titanic scene. Thank you also for reading the latest chap! :D So far, no new on Miichan yet... currently busy keeping Mariko calm :nervous

YumePouk:

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Ganbare in writing this fic
I'll always support ur work =] *throw a smoke bomb on the ground and dissapear as a ninja*

Thank you for believing in me and in my writing! :farofflook: it's been a while since I last saw you reading around the forums... I hope you're doing well :D

JPopLover: :mon sweat: hehe, getting that reaction from you means that I've done a good job in that chapter :D

immortal_K: the director did a good job in the latest chapter :thumbsup hope you already read it! XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: sorakamiya on December 08, 2011, 04:56:24 PM

this is greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat~ :cow: :cow:

but waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa michaaaaaaaaaaaaaan~ :panic: :panic: :panic:

i hope she alright :cry: :cry:

anyway, if there is kira there should be flean n sora. make it as an addition chara~ XD XD XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: immortal_K on December 08, 2011, 06:15:39 PM

Quote from: sorakamiya on December 08, 2011, 04:56:24 PM

anyway, if there is kira there should be flean n sora. make it as an addition chara~ XD XD XD

Kira is special! other then the fact the director was an idiot in the last two chapters with letting ray get away with trying to steal takamina...
FINALLY did something right, should've did that long ago and make more chance for Atsumina :twothumbs
This is much better with less Ray and more Atsumina moments keke.
Other then that..... =.= YOU!!!!! IF MIICHAN IS HURT IN ANY WAY I WILL STRANGLE YOU!!!!! then make it look like an accident!

YES I'M THREATENING YOU!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: kahem on December 08, 2011, 06:23:57 PM

Noooooooooo!!! Miichan!!!!!
Don't kill her!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: AFLynx on December 08, 2011, 07:30:02 PM

ilovecandiedapples: Thank you for reading my update and the fact that you find my story amazing! :bow: :bow: :bow: I know I'm gonna sound like a troll but, regarding Miichan's condition... we'll see about that in the next chapter XD hope you'll look forward for the next update!

sorakamiya: :nervous I'm not gonna promise that you and flean will be in the story :nervous maybe i'll include you two in some other stories that i have in mind that i haven't written yet 8) i just wanna concentrate on this and on my parent trap fic first before i write a new story. thank you for reading my update! please look forward to my next chapter of the story :bow:

immortal_K: lol yes, Kira-sensei in my story is a cool director.... but she's just doing that because it's part of her job :nervous the readers will find out more about this director in my next chapter (major spoiler! kekeke)

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Other then that..... =.= YOU!!!!! IF MIICHAN IS HURT IN ANY WAY I WILL STRANGLE YOU!!!!! then make it look like an accident!

:on lol: I'm gonna troll you for a bit regarding that... that'll keep an immortal like you on your toes :kekeke:

kahem: the race hasn't finished yet actually, so we'll soon find out what will happen on the next chapter :frustrated: i hope you'll be patient with me in writing the next chapter :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: Megumi on December 08, 2011, 11:26:33 PM

yesh! :farofflook: Another update! One of my fav fic!

XD Finally Takamina&Acchan have time to talk which each-other!

Miichan&Marikos scene saying "I love you" *I died LoL :wub:
But then BOOM! and I was like :shocked *my heart stopped :gyaaah:

Miichan!!!!!! :panic: Now I can't wait for the next update!

Arígatou! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: skytsuna on December 11, 2011, 07:26:52 AM

Yes!! Thank you so much for the update :kneelbow:
Finally have time to read it and it's so good :twothumbs
GJ Kira sensei XD

Miichan confessed to Mariko :wub:
And Mariko kissed Miichan passionately :inlove:

NO!!! Miichan!!!! :frustrated:

Please update soon :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 11, 2011, 07:32:27 AM

Yatta!!! Update!!! :w00t:
Sorry for the late comment :P

Yea!!! Ray's shooting is going to be over soon :yep:
Kira sensei :thumbup :thumbup

:w00t: Miichan confess to Mariko?!!! :wub: PDA!!! :inlove:

Everything was going smoothly until.... that BOOM!!! :(
NO!!!!!!!!! Miichan!!!!! :panic:
That Jun!!!! :angry: :rock: If anything happened to Miichan... I'll kill you!!!! :angry:
Mariko... :cry:

I was really looking forward to their dates on Friday... but I guess it won't be coming now... :cry:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
It's really dramatic :) I can't wait to see what happen next so please :mon cute: update soon

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: Ninjatigerdemon on December 16, 2011, 11:42:36 PM

I see that alot has happen since I been gone.
Well I can't wait for your next chapter.
Update soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: Flean on December 17, 2011, 01:32:53 PM

I was just happy reading AtsuMina part... :luvluv1: and then... BOOMM!!!! :shock:

ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mon runcry: What happened to Miichan!!!!! :mon scare:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 21, 2011, 08:14:45 PM

Just dropping by to let you know I haven't really got the chance to read the fic, but once I did I'll be back to comment on it.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: YumePouk on December 31, 2011, 04:26:57 PM

Hello I know it's been a while I was around
I'm just droping here to let you know I'm fine （＾＿＾）
and I catch up with ur story since the last chapter I comment
University Life really do take my Timeヽ(￣д￣;)ノ=3=3=3

the Story
Yeah tank you Kira to help Takamina
and let Takamina&Atsuko have some quality time together :wub:

Noooooooo Mii~chan Σ（ﾟдﾟlll）ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ
Why why this accident had to happened....don't let her died...not after her confession to Mariko-sama Y-Y

I wish to red the next chapter soon
please update when you can
I'll be waiting in the shadow ur next chapter☆〜（ゝ。∂）

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18c - Action!] Acts 9-11 UPDATE! 12/08
Post by: GreenAnarchist on January 16, 2012, 04:27:10 AM

:) Lynx....you must finish your update! :rofl:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: AFLynx on January 16, 2012, 08:09:04 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 18d – Aaand… CUT!

*****

Last Chapter… Mariko’s POV

The excitement of the fans and the continuous cheers of the Flag Girls is deafening to my ears. My Miichan is already at third place, and I know that she’s definitely gonna win this race.

“You can do it Miichan!” I squealed, clasping my hands on my chest. I prayed to any higher being who is somehow listening to me right now to make her win.

……

What’s this?

I squinted at Sayaka, Takamina and Haruna who are somehow uneasy as they blabbered on their headsets. From what I’m hearing from the announcers, it seemed that Miichan and the other two teams are in a tight battle for the first place.

“Be careful Miichan! Focus on controlling your car!” I heard Sae shout on her headset.

Before I was able to look at the track, I heard the most devasting sound that I know I will never forget…

*BOOM!*

My vision slowed as if like in the movies… I stood helpless as the other team’s car exploded and collided to my Miichan’s car.

The next thing I knew made my world spin out of its axis…

And then stop.

No….

No… this can’t be happening…

I didn’t pay attention to my sisters who are already beside me. All I could think of is I need to run to the race track to see if Miichan is still alive.

“Please onee-chan, don’t force your way to the race track. Let Sayaka-chan and the rest of the Pit Crew check Miichan’s condition.” Yuko pleaded helplessly.

“No, I won’t just stand here Yuko! Let. Me. GO!!!” I yelled.

I never yelled at Yuko-chan.

This is not real! She just told me she loves me!

Yuko didn’t listen to me as I tried to pry myself out from her grasp. I stopped when I felt Acchan hug me from behind and heard her whisper, “Onegai, onee-chan…”

My lips trembled uncontrollably on hearing Acchan’s plea. Finally, the floodgates of emotions burst open as I screamed,

“MIICHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!”

*****

Act 12 Scene 1 – Back in your arms again…

Sayaka rubbed her temples as Komorin and Sae took their leave to accompany the Emergency Crew towards where Miichan’s car stopped. Takamina and Haruna on the other hand, went immediately to Yuko and Atsuko’s side, still comforting the crying Mariko in their arms.

“Please Miichan, be okay…” Takamina whispered a silent prayer as she looked on wide screen TV at the middle of the field. She winced inwardly as the camera zoomed in and focused on Team Tokai’s burning car that is being attended to by the fire extinguishers of the racing circuit then moved on to the dilapidated car of their team.

ANNOUNCER 1: HONESTLY PARTNER, I’VE NEVER SEEN SUCH A HUGE EXPLOSION AND ACCIDENT IN MY ENTIRE CAREER AS A RACE ANNOUNCER. THIS WILL DEFINITELY GO DOWN THE HISTORY OF TWIN RING MUTEGI RACING.

ANNOUNCER 2: IT’S GOOD TO KNOW THAT AN EMERGENCY FIRE TRUCK AND AMBULANCE ARE VERY EFFICIENT IN PUTTING OUT THE FIRE ON TEAM TOKAI’S CAR AND THE DRIVER WAS SAFELY RUSHED TO A NEARBY HOSPITAL. WE HAVE YET TO SEE THE CONDITION OF AKB48 TEAM’S DRIVER, MINEGISHI MINAMI.

“I hope Miichan is okay NyanNyan… I don’t think Mariko onee-chan will handle it pretty well if something happens to her.” Yuko whispered to Haruna as she glanced at Mariko who is still sobbing in Atsuko’s arms.

“Don’t worry Yuko, Miichan is tougher than you think.” Haruna smiled, gently grabbing Yuko’s hand.

A wide collection of gasps and roaring cheers from the crowd caught the attention of each member of the Pit Crew and the Flag Girls. Sayaka grabbed her binoculars and immediately looked at the wreckage on the race tracks and pumped her fist in the air, earning curious looks from the other Pit Crew members.

“YES!!!” Sayaka yelled as she kept on looking in her binoculars.

“Nani? Is there something going on out there?” Takamina asked as she ran towards Sayaka’s side. The Crew Chief shoved the binoculars to Takamina to have her take a look to where she was looking a while ago. Takamina let out whoop, scanning at the direction to where Sayaka was previously looking at.

ANNOUNCER 1: I CAN’T BELIEVE IT! MINEGISHI-SAN GOT OUT OF THE CAR AS IF NOTHING HAPPENED! JUST LISTEN TO THOSE CHEERS FROM THE CROWD PARTNER!

Mariko hiccupped and immediately glanced towards wide screen TV. She gasped when she saw Miichan slowly got out of the car as the Emergency Crew stopped on the finish line which was just a few meters from where Miichan’s car stopped. The fans continued cheering as they saw what Miichan did.

ANNOUNCER 2: LOOK AT WHAT MINEGISHI IS DOING PARTNER! SHE’S RUNNING TOWARDS THE FINISH LINE! I BET LIKE ANY OTHER ATHLETE OR MARATHON RUNNER, SHE WANTS TO FINISH THE RACE!

The Flag Girls and Pit Crew cheered as they continued to witness everything on the wide screen. Miichan ran towards the finish line where Sae and Komorin were already waiting for her. The camera zoomed in at Miichan as she carefully removed her helmet, flicked her hair, and waved at the cheering crowd.

Yuko and Atsuko nodded at each other as they look at Mariko who let out a sob of relief while still looking at Miichan’s image. “Let’s go onee-chan, I bet Miichan would be happy to see you right now.” Atsuko said softly, helping Mariko stand up.

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The Emergency Crew drove Sae, Komorin and Miichan back at their Pit Stop wherein the entire AKB48 team is eagerly waiting. Photographers and reporters already crowded the van, snapping photos and waiting for Miichan to step out of the van.

“Because of that stunt that you did at the track, you became an instant star compared to Team Yamamoto.” Sae laughed, slapping Miichan’s shoulder.

Miichan smiled sheepishly at Sae, “Actually, I don’t feel like a star at all. I know I’ll be feeling the aftermath of the impact tomorrow morning when I wake up.” She replied, gently rubbing the back of her neck.

“Ano, Miichan… Mariko-sama was really scared you know.” Komorin said to the driver.

“I know… I was scared too.” Miichan whispered as they stopped in front of the team’s Pit Stop.

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Photographers, Cameramen and Sports Reporters flocked the Emergency Crew’s truck when it stopped in front of AKB48’s Pit Stop. Sae and Komorin blocked some of the media people to make way for Miichan to get out of the truck.

“Minegishi-san! How does it feel to have survived the collision?” “Do you think it is just a simple accident that happened?” “Minegishi-san! Over here!” “Minegishi-san!” the reporters yelled over the bright flashing of camera’s of the photographers that surrounded Miichan when she stepped out of the truck.

“I’ll deal with them Miichan. We should get you out of this crowd.” Sae said. As she was about to apologize to the media crowd, Miichan placed a hand on her shoulder and shook her head. “No, it’s okay Sae-chan, I can handle a few interviews for a couple of minutes.” Miichan said, letting out a deep breath as she faced the eagers reporters for her answers.

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Mariko smiled at her sisters as they walked their way out the Pit Stop. She’s always been the strong one, and she is glad to know that she can rely to Yuko and Atsuko whenever she needs somebody to lean to.

“Ara, what’s going on?” Atsuko furrowed her eyebrows as they stopped to see a mass of photographers and reporters a few meters away from the Pit Stop’s entrance.

“Looks like Miichan is here… Mariko onee-chan, I think you need to save Miichan again from a big crowd.” Yuko winked and slightly shoved Mariko for encouragement. Letting out a long breath, Mariko pulled her jacket closer to her body as her feet guided her towards the crowd outside.

I don’t care if my mascara is ruined or if my hair is a mess. I want to see and feel that my Miichan is alive. Mariko thought as she continued to jog past the Pit Crew and the Flag Girls then eventually ran to Miichan.

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“Minegishi-san, what can you say about the accident being a hindrance to your chance of winning the race?” A reporter shouted as she shoved the microphone on Miichan’s face.

Eh? I expected a more sensible question than that… Miichan thought and mentally facepalmed. “Everyone who participated in this competition is very much aware that accidents do happen during a race…” Miichan answered as she politely smiled in front of the flashing cameras. Her trail of thought got cut off as Komorin tapped her on the shoulder.

“Tell Sae-chan to give me another minute and I’ll politely decline any more interviews.” Miichan whispered to Komorin who was behind her back. She furrowed her eyebrows as Komorin’s tapping didn’t stop. Excusing herself to the overzealous crowd, she turned towards the other girl who didn’t know that she was already tapping Miichan’s chest. “Ano… Komorin… you can stop poking on my chest now…”

“Ah! Gomen! It’s just that…” Komorin trailed off as she pointed at a running figure towards them. Photographers stopped taking pictures and Reporters stopped asking random questions as they also looked at the direction where Komorin is pointing at.

Miichan gawked at the running figure, “M-Mariko?!” Miichan exclaimed. Upon hearing the name of the AKB48 Manager, the reporters whispered excitedly amongst themselves and parted like curtains as Mariko rushed towards them and immediately wrapped her arms around Miichan’s neck.

“Miichan, I’m so glad that you’re alive…” Mariko desperately whispered and kissed Miichan fully on the lips before the driver had the slightest chance to react. Though surprised, Miichan automatically wrapped her arms around Mariko’s waist and kissed her in return. Photographers automatically took shots of the couple as the Reporters started bombarding questions regarding Miichan’s relationship with the Manager.

“All right people, party’s over! Minegishi-san needs to see a doctor if she has any injuries from the crash.” Sayaka bellowed, putting her hands in front of her chest as if telling the people to give the couple some privacy. The crowd grumbled in disappointment but eventually left the area to do find the other teams who participated in the race.

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“You are such a baka Miichan…” Mariko sniffled as she let go of Miichan’s lips and rested her forehead on the other girl’s. “…scaring me like that after telling me that you love me…” she continued as tears started to trail down her cheeks.

Miichan bit her lip at the sight of the girl she loves crying in front of her, “I’m sorry… I was scared too. I’m not ready to die yet, because I just admitted what I really feel for you.” She whispered, wiping Mariko’s tears with a finger.

“Please… no more jokes about dying Miichan. I don’t know if I could handle it.” Mariko chided as she hugged Miichan.

“Ano… I hate to interrupt you two… sensei’s here to check up on you Miichan.” Takamina interrupted with Haruna and the said doctor beside her.

“Yo-Yohko-sensei?” Miichan exclaimed as the doctor waved and winked at her.

“You know who sensei is?” Mariko asked.

Ooops… “She… she’s our family doctor. Yeah, our family doctor! Takamina and Haruna know her too. Funny that she’s also the doctor for this event.” Miichan stammered.

Yohko laughed at Miichan’s excuse, “I am Dr. Yohko Suguira, and yes I am their family doctor. It’s a pleasure to meet you Shinoda-san, though I wish we could’ve met in a better situation than this.” Yohko greeted as Mariko bowed politely. “If you’ll excuse us Shinoda-san, I’d like to check up on Miichan inside the ambulance to make sure she didn’t incur any injuries.”

“Of course Suguira-sensei.” Mariko answered politely then faced Miichan. “I’ll be waiting at our designated parking if you need me… I love you.” Mariko said and kissed Miichan before heading to her sisters who were waiting with the rest of the Flag Girls team.

“I love you too…” Miichan answered back with a smile.

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Miichan sat on the stretcher inside the ambulance as Yohko started with her checkup. Takamina and Haruna informed the Pit Crew that they will be accompanying her and promised Sayaka to deliver the doctor’s report once Miichan’s checkup is finished.

“What brings you here Yohko-sensei? Not that we’re not happy to see you but, I know that you’re not really the doctor assigned for the event.” Takamina asked.

“The Chief forwarded Haruna’s report to me and Midori about your recon mission. I insisted that I should be here during the race because somehow, I know something big is going to happen. Of course, Midori insisted as well, but the Chief declined her request, knowing all too well that she’s kinda energetic if there’s something exciting going on around her.” Yohko rolled her eyes as she checked Miichan’s blood pressure.

Haruna giggled at the doctor’s response, “Yeah, we know what you mean Yohko-sensei.”

“So, what’s your diagnosis sensei? Any injuries?” Miichan asked as Yohko finally finished her checkup.

“Well, your brain’s still intact in your skull and you don’t seem to have broken any bones since you’re not complaining about any pain… for now.” Yohko teased. “Anyway, take this medical report to your Crew Chief and Manager. I’ll be sending a copy to the agency as well.” Yohko said as she wrote on a medical form and gave it to Takamina. “Midori and the rest of the team will head out to Team Tokai’s headquarters later tonight to investigate on the damaged car. Takamina, Haruna – Midori is expecting you to be there. Miichan on the other hand, will stay in your apartment to rest.”

“But Yohko-sensei…” Miichan complained.

“No buts… you’ll be feeling the impact of the crash in the next few days so I strongly advise you to rest for tonight.”

“Fine… let Takamina and Haruna have all the fun.” Miichan pouted and crossed her arms on her chest.

*****

Act 12 Scene 2 – Investigation

Wednesday, Midnight…

Haruna and Takamina stepped out of Gakutenou as they finally arrived in front of Team Tokai’s headquarters. Walking towards the main gate, Takamina and Haruna showed their badges to their fellow agents who without question let them in.

“Takahashi-san, Kojima-san, Midori-sensei is waiting for you at the garage.” One of the agents informed them.

“Arigatou.” Takamina simply answered and made their way towards the said area in the headquarters.

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Midori flipped through Team Tokai’s racecar logbook as the other agents gathered evidences in the dilapidated racecar. She glanced sideways as she heard footsteps approaching towards her.

“Ohayo, Midori-sensei.” Haruna winked, giving Midori a small salute with her right hand.

“You’re right about the part being morning – it’s past midnight! What took you so long? We’ve already started gathering some possible evidences from the exploded race car.” Midori replied, closing the logbook with one hand.

“Gomen ne, Midori-sensei. Mariko-chan insisted that the whole team go out for dinner and we dropped Miichan off to the apartment thereafter so that she can take a rest.” Takamina explained as she wore her jacket.

“Ah, fine then. Yohko told me that Miichan didn’t have any injuries. Everyone in the agency is quite relieved to hear that good news, especially the Chief. Anyway, let’s get inside the owner’s office. We have yet to interview him about the incident.” Midori said, guiding the cousins to a small office beside the garage. Once inside, there were greeted by a sight of a weary middle-aged man sitting behind a big oak desk.

“Tokai-san, I’d like you to meet two of our finest addition to our agency. This is Special Agent Takahashi, and Special Agent Kojima.” Midori said as she placed her hands on each of the girl’s shoulder as she introduced them to man. Takamina and Haruna bowed politely and shook hands with the tired man.

“I’ve heard so much about you from Midori-san since she and the other agents have arrived a while ago. I am Kazuhiro Tokai, owner of the Tokai Racing Team. Please, make yourselves comfortable and have a seat.” Kazuhiro said, extending his hands to the chairs in front of his desk.

“Thank you for agreeing to have our agency look into this incident Tokai-san. I’ve already scanned your logbook and it shows that your car was in perfect condition before the race.” Midori informed everyone in the room as she placed the logbook on the desk.

“If that’s the case then, the explosion is not an accident, but definitely sabotage.” Takamina added. “Tokai-san, if you don’t mind me asking, do you have someone in mind who would do such a thing?” she asked as she looked at the owner of the racing team.

“I know that you would ask about that,” Kazuhiro sighed. “Another team is actually interested in buying us out, which of course I flatly declined. Though they offered a very tempting amount, I’m not a heartless owner who will just simply let a stranger handle what I’ve worked for in years. My Pit Crew is like an extended family for me, and I know once I sold everything, they will lose their jobs.” He continued.

“Which team are you referring to Tokai-san?” Haruna asked.

“Team Yamamoto, who happened to win the race. I’m sorry that Team AKB48’s car got into the accident as well. Jun threatened me that I’ll regret my decision for not selling the team to them.”

Jun you say… Takamina thought as she looked at Haruna who nodded back at her. “Did he threatened to kill you Tokai-san?” Takamina finally asked.

“No, but he did something worse – he targeted my family. Our racecar driver is my only son, who almost got killed inside the car. I don’t know if I could bear it if my son died in the explosion. Jun made sure that his threat is clear to me.” Kazuhiro whispered, leaning back to his swivel chair.

Haruna shook her head in disgust. People are insane nowadays… the Yamamoto’s don’t care about anything when money is involved. “I’m sorry about the accident. We hope that your son is recuperating as we speak.” Haruna said.

“I thank the heavens above that he made it out alive. I can always repair or replace our race car anytime, but nothing can ever replace my son. This is the very reason why I want this incident to be investigated by the finest agency in Japan. I want to take this incident to court once you gathered evidence that will prove that they are behind the explosion.” Kazuhiro said with conviction.

“Wakatta. We will do our best then.” Midori answered, smiling inwardly as she saw the determined look on Takamina and Haruna’s faces.

*****

Act 13 Scene 1 – Black and White

Takamina gently opened the main door of their apartment and quietly entered the dimly light hallway. It’s already two in the morning, and the last thing that they want to happen is to wake Miichan just because they banged the door close as they arrived.

“Tadaima…” Haruna whispered to no one in particular as she removed her shoes and changed into her slippers. “I’m gonna check on Miichan if she’s resting.” She added, as she padded inside the living room and climbed up the stairs towards their shared bedroom.

Takamina slouched on their couch and stared listlessly at the ceiling. “It’s been almost a week that we haven’t got a decent night’s sleep…” Takamina whispered. Looking at the side of the living room, she stared at the baby grand piano that is tucked at a corner of their living room just beside a bay window.

Takamina pondered for a bit as she slowly stood up from the couch and made her way towards the piano. Opening the dark wood cover of the keys, she gently touched the white ivory keys with her fingertips and finally pressed the Middle C key with her right index finger.

“Miichan’s sleeping like a log… and I think I heard her snore as well.” Haruna giggled as she walked down the stairs. She curiously raised an eyebrow as she saw Takamina puttering around the piano, arranging some blank music sheets and sat comfortably in front of the musical instrument. “Aren’t you gonna sleep yet Takamina? It’s almost two in the morning and we still have work later.”

“I think I’ll be staying up for another hour. I have a song in my head that I need to play and write it down lest I forget it.” Takamina said.

“Fine then. Honestly, you really need to get some sleep Takamina, you’ve been kinda pale these past few days. Oyasumi.” Haruna said and headed back upstairs.

“Oyasumi, okaa-san.” Takamina teased. Closing her eyes, she began to play the ivory keys that echoed a soft melody in the apartment.

To be continued...

If there's a penalty for not writing an update for a very long time, I could've paid a very large fine right now :sweat: I'm sorry if this took me a very long time - Christmas season is always the busiest time of the year for me because of choir activities. I would like to thank everyone for being patient with me and still continues to support my writing :kneelbow: Please feel free to comment after reading this. I hope you enjoy the new installment :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: kahem on January 16, 2012, 08:46:10 PM

Yay Miichan is not dead!!!!!!
Oh Marimii is so cute~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: Minami-chan on January 16, 2012, 10:28:27 PM

Great!
continue the fic is fantastic!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: blughise on January 16, 2012, 11:21:55 PM

LYNX!!!!
YOU FINALLY UPDATE XD XD
:cow: :cow: :cow: :cow:
damn I was so scared for Miichan back there, good thing she made it out alive and unscratch

Damn those dirty Yamamotos bastards!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:
I hope the gurls could gathered all the necessary evidence so that those Yamamotos bastards could pay for their crimes.

and what's up with Takamina composing a song? though I don't really mind it, it sound romantic :P

anyways thanks for finally updating!!!
I hope it won't take this long again for you to update :P

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: Sydney W on January 17, 2012, 02:01:00 AM

That a relieved to see Miichan is safe.
Minami composing a song. Guess it's for Acchan.
Update as soon as you can.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: Haruko on January 17, 2012, 04:59:45 AM

awww miichan its ok :d you make me happy!! aww great kiss scene!! :D

Im waiting for atsumina and kojiyuu moments :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: GreenAnarchist on January 17, 2012, 05:25:08 AM

:wub:kissing scene :wub: Please update again when you can!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: Megumi on January 17, 2012, 08:53:08 AM

:bow: Miichan is alivee! Yamomoto damn bastards!

Thank you for your update!

Arígatou! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: haruhi16 on January 17, 2012, 09:07:14 AM

Finally you updated!

Yes! Miichan is not deaad! Phew! Okay, i'm okay now~ :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 17, 2012, 09:59:42 AM

Yatta! An Update :w00t:
I've been waiting for it~ :D

Yokatta~ Mii chan is not injured anywhere~ :cathappy:
MariMii is just so sweet~ Aw~~ :wub: :wub:

sigh* Those Yamamotos!! I hate them! :angry:
Well.. nobody love villians ryt?? :lol:

Hoho~~ Takamina writing her song~ It's so cool~ :thumbsup
Somehow it just feels elegant~ ♥ Taka and piano~ I don't know why but I love imagining it :D
I wonder what song will she create XD

Thank you so much for the Update :kneelbow:
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
I ♥ Love ♥ your fic~!! :oops:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: CrimsonGrxy on January 18, 2012, 07:48:36 AM

Quote

ANNOUNCER 2: LOOK AT WHAT MINEGISHI IS DOING PARTNER! SHE’S RUNNING TOWARDS THE FINISH LINE! I BET LIKE ANY OTHER ATHLETE OR MARATHON RUNNER, SHE WANTS TO FINISH THE RACE!

I dunno why but i laugh really hard at this part,
imagining miichan running just to finish the race like a boss :rofl: :rofl:
n wooo~ Maritroll/Mii-gachapin kiss scene :tama-excite:
another great-long update can't wait for the next:thumbup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: immortal_K on January 19, 2012, 05:48:33 AM

YAY Miichan is alive!!!!!! Fulling intact and running towards the finish line! AWESOME! Totally awesome and badass!

WOOHOO Go Mariko-sama! The world doesn't matter as long as your Gachapin is okay and with you =D. Both of you will
be sure to make the cover of every mag/newspaper the next morning. :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Hmmm the suspicious accident, I hope they find something so they can take down Team Yamamoto.

Takamina make sure you play it for Acchan and please spend some more time with the girl, you are moving way too
slow, just look at your cousins. Miichan is going to make the cover page already :P

Please UPDATE!!!! faster faster! and write all those other ideas you told me about I wanna read those tooooooooooooo

~imo_K

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: FoF on January 19, 2012, 03:11:08 PM

Read your chap. :D
I'm glad you didn't kill Miichan. And her running towards the finish line, I can definitely visualize that! XD
Looks like Mariko can't keep herself away from Miichan. Cute! XD
Maeda saying the word 'Ara' made me remember Shizuru from Mai Hime.
Then I remember your avatar and yup...I have a feeling you're a Mai Hime fan as well. Shiznat! XD
Anyway, keep writing keep updating! :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: AFLynx on January 19, 2012, 06:42:20 PM

To Everyone: I'm so happy that you all liked the chapter :farofflook: You all inspire me to do better in my writing. Arigatou! :kneelbow:

kahem: thanks for reading! like NyanNyan said in the chap, Miichan is tougher than Yuko thought ;)
Minami-chan: thanks for the comment! I'll do my best in making it more and more interesting for everyone. :mon determined:
blughise: I'm currently thinking on how their mission will go in the future chapters, I hope I'm gonna make it exciting for everyone. As for Takamina playing the piano scene - :mon speechless: About the update, I'll write an update first on the Parent Trap fic before I'll update this one. XD
Sydney W: Thanks for reading! We'll learn more about the song soon :mon geek:
Haruko: I'm glad that I was able to come across when writing that kissing scene. :mon cute: Those moments will come in the future chapters as soon as I am able to finalize my summaries :nervous
GreenAnarchist: of course you loved the kissing scene and yes, i'll try to update as soon as i can XD
Megumi: Thanks for reading and thank you for being patient with me when it comes to posting my updates! :kneelbow:
haruhi16: Thanks for always reading and being patient haruhi-chan! :luvluv2: I know I kinda trolled everyone but my schedule did not permit me to finish this asap during xmas season. Hope you'll patiently wait for the next chapter!
Yagami.Rai: Thanks for reading! :kneelbow: I know how you feel about the Yamamotos XD the fact that you hate them makes me happy coz it means I wrote a very nasty group of villains Even before I wrote about the chapter "Two Words", I was convinced that the piano is the right instrument for her. :luvluv1: Arigatou for loving my fic!
CrimsonGrxy: i know right?! Miichan was totally the boss during the race XD I'm thinking that you like long chapters then? :nervous Thanks for reading! :hee:
Immortal_K: now I know you wont strangle me and make it look like an accident since Miichan is fine :nervous We'll see what will happen to my Atsumina pairing... for now, it's a secret. :P I'll write about my ideas when I have the time (and when I'll learn how to update a lot of fics in a short span of time :nervous ) thanks for reading!
FoF: I'm honored that you read my update FoF-san! :kneelbow: *faints* :farofflook: I've been using a lot of "Ara's" in my fic and yes, it's derived from Shizuru... for me, it somehow depicts playfulness :hee: and of course, I can imagine Takamina being Natsuki and all . I'll do my best to update as soon as I can... but for now, Parent Trap is a priority for updating. I hope you'll have the time to read it too. Again, thank you for reading and commenting FoF-san! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18d - Aaand… CUT!] Acts 12-13 UPDATE! 01/17
Post by: JPopLover on January 21, 2012, 02:47:36 AM

I'm so glad Miichan is ok!! :D Thank goodness ^^ Author-san you are awesome!~ I really thought that the chapter was great and I hope you update again soon! :3 :onioncheer:

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: AFLynx on March 31, 2012, 11:25:49 PM

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
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Chapter 18e – And that’s a wrap…

*****

Act 14 Scene 1 – The Review

Atsuko sighed as she plopped in front of her desk inside the Flag Girls’ dressing room. Yesterday has been an exciting yet heart stopping event due to the collision that happened during the race. She was glad that Miichan was unscathed after the team’s car collided at the track. In the back of her mind, it reminded her of her elder sister Mariko’s agony as they witnessed how grave the incident was. I’m not sure if I can be as strong as Mariko onee-chan if that happened to Takamina… Shaking the image off of her head, she grabbed her desk calendar and smiled.

Two more days ‘til our triple date. Atsuko giggled inwardly. Taking a pink pen out of her drawer, she drew a flower on the said day in her calendar and marked it “Date <3.” Satisfied with her drawing, she stood up and headed out to the lounge area of the studio.

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Play…Pause…

Rewind…Stop.

Fast Forward…Play….

Stop.

Kira clicked away with her mouse as she focused on looking at the two large flat-screen monitors in front of her. Glancing sideways, she noticed a figure slowly coming towards her direction.

“Ah Maeda-san, good morning,” Kira greeted the other girl and motioned her to come over.

Atsuko smiled and bowed, “Ohayo sensei. What’s with the two monitors? Do you actually need more than one screen?”

The director chuckled at the innocent question, “Well, I’m currently reviewing the final cut of Ray’s MV. I needed these two monitors so that I can review the video simultaneously. Later on, I’ll be presenting it to Shinoda-san and to the entire Monkey Pro Productions for final approval before releasing it on air.” Kira explained. Looking at the younger girl behind her, she noticed a blank expression as Atsuko continued to stare at the screens in front of them. “Say… since you’re already here, I’d like you to be the first one to watch the entire MV before I present it to the board… that is if you don’t mind.”

Atsuko blinked at the director, quite taken aback by the sudden request. “Uh, of course Kira sensei, I’d be honored to,” she said, quickly grabbing a chair nearby and sat beside Kira. Seeing that the Flag Girls’ Ace is comfortable, Kira clicked the ‘Play’ button on her laptop.

Atsuko bobbed her head in appreciation as the intro of the song played in the MV. It is a song about finding love in one of the unusual places and circumstances after all. To avoid friction with the diva, she never watched the entire production. As curiosity got the best of her, she scooted a bit forward to watch the video.

Takamina is kakoii in the MV. The Flag Girls did great in their dance routine and they’re not bad in acting too. As expected, Tomochin is a very good actress. Atsuko noted as she watched the video. Atsuko smiled every time the drifter would show up or would focus on her smiling face, then would roll her eyes in exasperation whenever Ray would show up, especially with Takamina. Unbeknownst to her, Kira stopped watching the video but is now observing her with a slightly amused grin on her face.

Atsuko’s expressions changed as the MV progressed. Just like the song, the scenes moved forward as Ray and Takamina was supposed to be getting close to each other. It did not get past her as the two interacted, especially at the last few minutes of the video. So this is the location shot that Takamina told me last time we talked. she thought bitterly.

The last scene started at the garage where Takamina invited Ray for a motorcycle ride. The scene shifted as the cameras followed the two on an open road overlooking the sea. Atsuko narrowed her eyes as the two travelled happily, not blinking at the part where Ray held Takamina’s waist tightly and leaned on the driver’s back during the ride. As Takamina and Ray held hands while walking on the beach played, she is almost ready to bolt out of the studio. When Ray snaked her arms around Takamina’s neck as the sun sets, she’s already trying hard not to break down beside the director. Atsuko let out a sigh of relief when the last scene faded and the credits started rolling.

Smirking, Kira turned off the monitors and faced the other girl, “So, what do you think of the video Maeda-san?”

Atsuko squirmed on her seat trying to be as composed as possible in front of the director, “Well, I must admit the song is really good…”

“Aaand…?” Kira urged the other girl to continue.

“W-Well Kira-sensei, it’s pretty much obvious that Takamina has gotten close to Ray ever since the filming started. So… I think that Takamina has fallen in love with Ray.” Atsuko finally mumbled.

Eh? Hmmm… “Ma~, I never thought you’d put it that way.” Kira scratched her cheek thoughtfully.

“Nani? Well, anybody who is always around them since the MV started would think that way!”

Kira let out a short laugh and shook her head. It doesn’t always work that way Maeda-san, the director thought. “I’m right, aren’t I Kira-sensei? I mean, you’d think the same way too right? What do you think?” Atsuko added.

“Well, all I can say about the two is that they are both great actresses,” the director answered, removing her glasses and wiping it with her shirt tail. Kira almost laughed out loud as Atsuko merely blinked at her. “What I mean is that it’s what I expected them to do, especially in front of the camera.” Kira continued.

“I really don’t get what you mean…” Atsuko admitted.

The director chuckled at the younger girl. Ever since she was introduced to the team and informed them that the diva will be using the headquarters for her MV, most of the girls made sure to watch the filming. Except for Oshima-san and Maeda-san, Kira realized. From her observation, the two sisters avoided the diva like the plague, and Ray was very much thankful for that fact and took advantage of Takamina’s time for an entire day.

But unbeknownst to Atsuko, her absence is always noticed by one of Kira’s best actresses.

Kira saw that Takamina has a natural talent in acting, which was later confirmed by Mariko that the driver has been a prominent Drama Club member together with Tomochin. The small driver was able to act out Kira’s oftentimes sudden instructions naturally that to the untrained eye, it will seem that Takamina is just being herself. The director was able to look beyond that. She noticed that whenever she would yell “Cut!”, Takamina would snap out of her somewhat acting trance and would change back to her usual demeanor. What Kira find more amusing is that whenever that happens, Takamina would look around as if looking for someone. A specific person.

The director snickered as she remembered the time when she gave Takamina some sort of a break from the diva to be able to talk to the Ace who is now pouting in front of her. “What’s so funny Kira-sensei?” Atsuko mumbled.

“Ah, nothing at all Maeda-san,” Kira coughed. “I have one favor to ask you though.”

“What is it sensei?” Atsuko asked nervously, stuffing her hands on her skirt pockets.

“I’ll be blunt: I know you’ve been harboring a crush on Takahashi-san and I am sorry that she is somehow slow in that department. Please don’t assume that she feels the same way in the MV as in real life. Life is a very big stage as it is! If you’re just gonna sit back and watch… you will gain nothing. However, if you decide to step up to the challenge, then you have a fighting chance in winning her heart. I know you’re a creative person, you can always give her something that will tell her how you feel.” Kira winked at the now blushing Atsuko.

The Ace’s face brightened as she had a light bulb moment, “Arigato sensei! I know just the thing to give her!” Atsuko bowed excitedly and ran towards the dressing room, leaving the director who gave a small salute at her running form.

*****

Act 14 Scene 2 – Music without Lyrics

Takamina winced as she struck a wrong note on the piano inside the rehearsal room of the studio. Today is a slow day, and she asked permission from Sayaka if she could spend the day in the aforementioned room. The Crew Chief accepted her request, on the condition that she should get back to the garage when she is needed.

Ever since Takamina and Haruna got back from Team Tokai’s headquarters, Takamina wasn’t able to sleep because of the sudden urge to compose the music that has been playing in her head. Though she promised Haruna that she’ll just stay up for another hour, it took her by surprise to see the sun rise at their apartment’s window just when she ran out of music sheets. Takamina giggled when she remembered how she sheepishly gave Haruna a “peace” sign when she was caught red-handed in breaking her promise.

“Ah! Mou…” Takamina exclaimed, pulling her back from her musings as some of the paper fell on the floor. Tired as she already is due to lack of sleep, she sluggishly bent her upper body from where she is sitting. A sudden jolt of pain and dizziness coursed through her head as she stretched out for the now cursed sheets.

Just a few… more… pages… Her fingertips brushing against the remaining scores.

“Nami! I finally found you!”

“GAH!” Takamina squeaked as she almost fell head first on the floor if there wasn’t an insistent pair of arms hugging her from behind. “Hello Ray-san. To what do I owe you the pleasure of your sudden visit?” she sighed, trying to pry herself from the diva’s grasp.

“Kyaa~! My Nami knows it’s me even though she didn’t see me come in!” Ray exclaimed, tightening her hold of the drifter.

Takamina rolled her eyes at Ray’s assumption. “Ano… well… you’re the only one who calls me ‘Nami’…” she said in a matter-of-fact tone, hoping that the singer would let go of her death grip. Ray pouted playfully as she hoped that Takamina would play along with her in the conversation.

“Nami, what are those scattered on the floor?” Ray asked, breaking the sudden silence in the music room. Finally releasing the race car driver from her grip, she picked up all the sheets then settled beside Takamina as she scanned the scores.

“Oh! It’s a song that I just wrote last night,” Takamina’s eyes brightened at the question, bowing her head in thanks as Ray carefully arranged her music sheets on the music rack of the piano.
Ray placed her hand on her chin thoughtfully as she read the notes and began humming. Takamina’s eyebrows rose as she looked at the diva in wonder. She… she’s humming my song in perfect pitch! is all that she could think of.

Though Ray has been called a diva since high school, she didn’t want to end her reputation when she graduates and decided to study at the Tokyo Conservatory of Music to truly live up to the name. “I think this is a nice song Nami! Is this song for me?” the diva asked, batting her eyelashes.

“Well… Ah! How about I play it for you instead so that you can hear the whole song? It doesn’t have lyrics yet, but I have this feeling that it’ll just smack me right in the head one of these days.” Takamina tapped her head jokingly, trying to change the subject.

Hearing sudden stop of footsteps, the diva glanced at the door of the rehearsal room. Seeing no one, she turned back her attention to the driver seated beside her. “That’s a great idea! I’d love to hear my Nami play for me!” Ray purred in Takamina’s ear. Seeing the other girl’s apparent discomfort, she scooted a bit to give the drifter some space and smiled at Takamina who bustled about in arranging the sheets in order on the rack. Takamina gently closed her eyes as she positioned her fingers on the white ivory keys of the piano. With a soft breath, she let her fingers dance on the ivory keys.

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“Arigato onee-chan for letting me use your computer! I’ll see you later, Ja!” Atsuko waved cheerfully as she closed the door of Mariko’s office.

With Kira’s encouragement, she hastingly grabbed her little notebook and barged in her sister’s office. She typed as fast as she could, copying what she already wrote and adding more words as if someone opened a dam that has been barring her creativity in the past few days. Atsuko let out a satisfied smile as she printed her work, ignoring Mariko’s amused look. With a bounce on her steps, she made her way towards the garage.

“Eh? She’s not here?”

“Gomen Atsuko-chan, you just missed her by a couple of minutes.” Sayaka answered, scribbling on her trusty clipboard as she walked around the team’s storage room with the Ace of AKB48 Flag Girls tailing behind her.

“Ano… Takamina… where is she?” Atsuko trailed off knowing that the Crew Chief wasn’t able to answer profoundly.

“Eh? Oh. She said something about using the rehearsal room. I bet she’s still there, playing the piano or something.” Sayaka waved off-handedly, still concentrating on her task.

Atsuko’s face brightened at the information. Ever since her cousin Ami’s wedding, she’s been meaning to ask Takamina to play for her. Deep inside, she knew they had that instant connection when she sang “Two Words.” For her, it’s like they are the only people that existed inside the church, accompanied by the soft melody of the piano.

With a squeal of excitement, she hugged Sayaka in thanks, and headed off to the studio’s rehearsal room.

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Atsuko stood a few meters in front of the rehearsal room, staring at the open doorway. For some reason, she has been rooted on the spot a few minutes after she came back to the studio.

What if she doesn’t like it? I did re-read it and it doesn’t have any typos… right? Maybe I should ask Yuko onee-chan to check…

ARGH!

Atsuko mentally slapped herself. Snap out of it, Atsuko. You’re the ACE of the AKB48 Flag Girls. You’ve been in front of hundreds of people a lot of times to promote the team. There’s no reason for you to get butterflies in your stomach…

Right?

As she finally took a step forward, she heard a voice that is definitely not Takamina’s.

“I think this is a nice song Nami! Is this song for me?”

Ara… is that… what is she doing here?!

“Well… Ah! How about I play it for you instead so that you can hear the whole song? It doesn’t have lyrics yet, but I have this feeling that it’ll just smack me right in the head one of these days.”

Hearing Takamina’s reply, she hurried towards the door, hiding behind the door frame just in time when Ray glanced at her direction.

“That’s a great idea! I’d love to hear my Nami play for me!”

Atsuko closed her eyes as the sweet melody of the piano resounded in the studio. It was filled with hope in love, that whoever Takamina wrote it for is a lucky girl. she thought. What saddens her right now is that she isn’t the one Takamina is playing the song for. As the song finally ended, Atsuko peeked back inside the room.

----------

Takamina smiled as the song ended and the last note faded. “Well, that’s it…” she sheepishly said.

The diva daintily clapped her hands, like she is watching a piano concert. “As expected of my Nami, it’s wonderful! Whoever you dedicate that song to is a very lucky person.” She said, voicing out what Atsuko thought.

Takamina blushed at the unexpected compliment. Though Ray has always expressed her interest to her, Takamina has always been thankful of the “rare” normal discussions that they would have. “A-Arigatou,” she simply replied.

Seeing how Takamina responded to Takamina to her compliment, she stopped restraining herself further and pressed her lips on the drifter’s cheek, dangerously close to Takamina’s lips. Ray waited for her reaction, smirking when Takamina merely huffed and sheepishly rubbed her cheek. Now I have the upper hand. Ray thought triumphantly, glaring at the entrance of the rehearsal room.

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Atsuko gasped, hiding again as she saw Ray’s triumphant glare at her direction. How many times do I have to see Ray kiss her? And why is it that Takamina didn’t seem to mind her doing that? she thought, closing her eyes. Crumpling the paper in her hand, she resorted to what she always do when she admits defeat.

Run.

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Tomochin yawned as she went out of the dressing room. During slow days like today, she’d oftentimes choose to take a nap in their dressing room than hang out at the garage like the most of the Flag Girls would do. Because of the consistent protest of her empty stomach, she finally decided to leave the comfort of the sofa in the room. As she rounded the corner on her way to the pantry, she bumped onto someone running, like a person would in a bad dream.

“Hey, watch where you’re goi ‒… Atsuko-chan?” Tomochin held the other girl as they almost toppled on the floor. “What’s wrong?” she tried again, looking at the Ace who seems to be interested in looking at the floor.

“No… there’s nothing wrong…” Atsuko mumbled, still looking at the floor trying to avoid Tomochin’s gaze.

Of course there’s nothing wrong, you’re crying Atsuko-chan. Tomochin thought sarcastically. “Are you hurt? Is it about…”

“I’m fine Tomochin. I just need fresh air. I’m sorry I have to go.” Atsuko interrupted, prying herself from Tomochin’s grip and immediately ran towards the exit.

Tomochin furrowed her eyebrows at Atsuko’s behavior. As she looked down the floor, she noticed a crumpled paper. Atsuko-chan might’ve dropped this, she thought, picking it up. Suddenly curious of Atsuko’s behavior, Tomochin made her way from where the Ace came from, stopping a few meters away from the rehearsal room. What she saw inside confirmed her suspicion.

“Atsuko-chan must’ve caught Takamina with Ray… and at a bad time at that.” Tomochin deduced. Gently smoothing out the wrinkled paper, she began to read the concealed message…

Kokoro no katasumi
Flower…

Tomochin gasped at what she read, folding the paper with care. She stopped reading because she feels like she is delving into Atsuko’s emotions written on paper. She knows that Atsuko has been writing, and this time she realized that the Ace has been writing with someone in mind.

Takamina.

*****

Act 14 Scene 3 – the Missing Piece

“Minna, has anyone seen Acchan?” Takamina asked as she entered the pantry. Flag Girls’ and Pit Crew members shook their heads, except for Tomochin who stood up from her seat and is now marching towards her. Takamina gave out a squeak when Tomochin yanked her by the arm and dragged her to the restroom.

“Itai! Tomochin, why did you yank me here for?” Takamina asked, rubbing her arm.

“You are such a Bakamina!” Tomochin growled at her best friend, slapping the now folded piece of paper on Takamina’s forehead.

“I‒taiiii! Why did you do that for?” Takamina whined, taking off the paper on her face. “Are… what’s this?” she asked, unfolding the paper.

“Someone dropped it and I believe it’s meant for you. By the way, what’s Ray doing here in the studio? I thought the MV’s over?” Tomochin asked, raising an eyebrow as she leaned her hands on the sink.

“I think she has a meeting with Kira-sensei and Monkey Pro Productions in Mariko-chan’s office that’s why she’s here.” Takamina replied absent-mindedly as she began reading the message:

Ichiban utsukushii
Flower
Anata no egao ga hizashi ni nari
Koko made sodatta
Kono hana wa
Marude ai no you ni…

“Seriously Takamina, that diva is bad news. And please, do me a favor and stop being so dense.” Tomochin warned Takamina, who finally finished reading the message and is now looking at her. “Why are you looking at me like that?” she asked.

“Marude ai no you ni…” Takamina mumbled, still looking at Tomochin as something dawned at her. “Yokatta! Finally! I know that the lyrics will smack me on the head anytime! It was supposed to be a joke but here it is, in my very hands! Arigatou, Tomochin! Sorry I have to go, I still have to finish something. Ja! Thanks again!” Takamina hugged Tomochin and immediately went out of the restroom.

Tomochin blinked as Takamina dashed out like her butt is on fire. “Mou Takamina, I do hope you heard what I just said.” She tsked, shaking her head in amusement as she daintily went out of the restroom.

To be continued...

I'm sorry minna for making you wait for this long... Work has been demanding since I wrote my valentine's OS that's why I wasn't able to post this sooner. I do hope that everyone will still find my story enjoyable. Thank you all for waiting and for reading. Please feel free to comment! Since I've already updated this, I can now move on to my Parent Trap fic update ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on April 01, 2012, 12:06:36 AM

im so happy that you finally updated!

I dont know about others but i hated ray in mendol she really annoys me lol

thanks for the update it was great!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Haruko on April 01, 2012, 12:28:41 AM

jajaj i love it the couple ray/nami in mendol but.. when I met atsumina couple.. I started to hate her jaajaj so funny now.. just in "fiction" mendol drama like ray -BUT in anothers place hate her jajjaaj in just atsuko`s fool why the do a perfect couple with takamina ..

THHANX FOR THE UPDATE!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Nakamii on April 01, 2012, 01:16:31 AM

Seriously, Bakamina! You are So Dense!
Ugh... Triangle Love is just so Complicated... My Acchan... :O2 Oh Well, Update Soon!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Flean on April 01, 2012, 02:08:21 AM

Finally you updated.. :shy1: I love this chapter so much!!! :wriggly: The significant of the music and the lyric... Gyaahh!!! :luvluv1: Can't wait for the next update.. :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: xxx220 on April 01, 2012, 03:03:32 AM

Gyahhh......Your Story is Awesome... :on lol: :tama:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Sydney W on April 01, 2012, 03:21:26 AM

There a misunderstanding again between Atsumina. Hope Minami dedicate the song she create to Atsuko soon. Waiting for the lovely scene in the next update

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Yagami.Rai on April 02, 2012, 06:24:34 AM

NO!!! Acchan!!!
Takamina's song was for you not for the Diva!!!!
I hope that Bakamina will hurry and explain it to Acchan!!!

Thanks for the Update AFLynx san~~ :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Otochan on April 02, 2012, 08:18:46 PM

finally... I read all the chapters XD this fic is sugoi!!! :twothumbs

Thanks for the Update

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: saeyukilover on April 03, 2012, 03:42:39 AM

Takamina ur such aaahhh!!! :angry:

I need more update about them couples....

:bow: pls I need more sweet moments for atsumin,kojiyuu and marichan prettu please :bow: :bow:
:lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: bou-j525 on April 03, 2012, 04:13:02 AM

Everyone! Look who's alive again! It's.......... LYNX!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Thank for the update :lol:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Megumi on April 04, 2012, 03:20:03 PM

Mou! You're torturing me with late updates. I adore this fic too much...
Can't wait for the next update when ever it will be but I will wait :P

Thank you for your update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: JPopLover on April 05, 2012, 04:08:47 AM

LOL at Tomochin's funny and true comment :on lol: Bakamina xD Awww poor Acchan coming in at the wrong moments :C Don't give up Atsuko! O= Maeda Atsuko fighting! :onioncheer: Win your Minami back!~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: AFLynx on April 07, 2012, 12:18:40 PM

XxRoByNxX78: thanks for reading! :P since I discovered no3b and akb48 via mendol, I shipped Kai/Ray back then. but when I discovered the AtsuMina pairing... I shipped them ever since lol XD

Haruko: thank you for reading my update! yeah we're kinda the same. just explained that my akb48 fandom started in mendol XD

Nakamii: XD My Takamina in my fanfic is dense, no? We'll see how their relationship will progress in the upcoming chapters ;) thanks for reading!

xxx220: arigatou! and thanks for reading as well :)

Sydney W: XD i know a lot has been happening in my AtsuMina pairing... but that's my concept of their relationship. I guess I want them to be strong as a couple in my story. :) thanks for reading!

Yagami.Rai: hehehe, you know how Ray is in this story... always assuming that everything's hers... including Takamina XD thank you for reading my update as well :)

Otochan: :w00t: sugoi! thank you for reading all the previous chapters! I hope you'll watch out for the upcoming chapters as well :P

saeyukilover: thanks for reading! more updates in AtsuMina pairing in the upcoming chapters. I'll try to put in MariMii and KojiYuu interactions as well. 8)

bou-j525: LMAO! yes, I'm aliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiive! :on polter: lol took me awhile, no? I wish I won't have that much load at work so that I can update more often. but then again, that's just wishful thinking on my part XD

Megumi: thank you for always looking forward to my updates! :bow: as much as I want to update asap, I'll still try to write whenever time permits me too.

JPopLover: thanks for reading! we'll see what Acchan will do in the next chapters XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Minami-chan on April 23, 2012, 12:47:37 AM

Finally I can write, so far I had been impossible.
I'm starting to worry about the health of takamina you wearing several episodes hinting that not well.
Hopefully it's nothing serious, but ... we all know that the dramatic moments are the best XDD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: hott3stson3 on April 23, 2012, 05:02:47 AM

Oh Jeez. How long have I not commented?
Gomen AFLynx-chan :nervous but hey, just because I didn't comment doesn't mean I stopped reading your amazing fics. I've just been lazy. XD
But whatever, I'm breaking my streak of not commenting.
You need to update AFLynx-chan!
Soon!
I need some Atsumina loving in my system! :P

*plus, the cliff hanger is killing me too*

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: blughise on May 21, 2012, 03:12:03 AM

WOW It's been such a long time that I came to this site and read the fics! XD XD XD

I MISS THIS FIC!!!

anyways onto to the story, Damn bakamina look what you to Atsuko!
Why are you such a thickheaded and dense person! Can't you see that Atsuko like you! ARGHH!!! :angry:
DAMN! :angry:
and Damn RAY for being such a freaking b*Tch

I just hope Takamina fixed this misunderstanding and stopping being such a dense person and get together w/ Atsuko so that they could live HAPPILY WITHOUT RAY BITCH ON THE PICTURE FOREVER :P

I REALLY HOPE YOU UPDATE LYNX even though I know you're really busy w/ work!
Ganbarre!!

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! and "THAT" oneshot that you are working on

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: chichay12 on June 07, 2012, 05:24:12 PM

im still waiting for this to fic :fainted: :fainted:
plsss update this!!!
i really love atsumina!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
i really cant wait to the next chapter..
plss update soon :imdead:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Megumi on June 09, 2012, 10:43:51 PM

:OMG: No update.... :err:
You're killing me for waiting so long AFLynx-san :fainted:

Waiting for your update :cool2:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: chichay12 on June 23, 2012, 07:10:45 PM

hello AFLynx-san
im still waiting in your update!!
pls comeback and update this!!!
i really want to know what will happen to takamina. :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: chiqinna on July 20, 2012, 07:59:59 AM

owww Takamina~~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Megumi on July 25, 2012, 10:58:15 PM

8)2 dropping by to poke you still waiting for your update :fainted:

:err:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: lollita90 on August 14, 2012, 08:26:01 AM

i don't know how many times i've dropped by here just to see if there's an update, yet there's still no new update :gyaaah: and every single time i ended up with reading this from the top over and over again. :farofflook:
Aflynx-san, this fic is sugoi!! too much awesomeness!! :luvluv2: i fell in love with this fic that i wish the pairings are all true even in the real life.. especially MariMii :luvluv1: first time i read your fic, you made me worshipping MariMii more and more.. i just can't get enough of them, that's why i ended up reading this again n again. also, there's not much fic of marimii like this one. here, they're just SOO DAMNN HOTTTTT!!!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :nya: :wriggly: :on bleed: :shy2:
i wish that may u will be in good health always, and have free time to update more chapters soon. we will always be waiting here silently and patiently :on drink: ganbare!! :onioncheer:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Megumi on August 16, 2012, 11:45:45 PM

*poke *poke :fainted:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: chichay12 on August 17, 2012, 01:54:01 PM

i dont know how manny times i read this amazing fic,and i am never got tired of it!!
I hope this fic will be updated soon!!!
:cry:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: 7sam14 on August 17, 2012, 10:12:38 PM

Please...Please... Please continue this...it's really awesome....since i'm a bit new here...this fic is one of the ones i like the most...so yeah i hope u can update fast.... :) :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: BbSis on August 22, 2012, 07:25:08 PM

Newbie here o/

Thanks for the exiting fic! I just finished reading it all and loved it ^^~
found it looking for MariMii fanfics o/

Everything was going fine (well, almost, or at least slowly xD) and then Ray make her appearance. I cant say it was quite a shock heuheue but it give us really funny moments. Despite de fact I really like Ray, I'm cheering on Atsuko and hoping that misunderstood will be cleared soon o/

Y'now, in my mind Kai/Nami is a different person from Takamina, and thats why I'm with Atsuko, 'cause theres' no Takamina in Mendol xD

Sorry for the long speech ;p and thank you for the great fic o/ I hope you update soon ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: immortal_K on September 04, 2012, 12:39:50 PM

Lookie Lookie! I found something that I read but forgot to come back to leave comments for =p

TBH I can't remember what my comments were at the time of reading because it has been a while ago and I'm currently in the mood of "Please let this shift end, I wanna go home" so yea. Came digging in here to find stuff that I owe comments to =p

First I know you already know but I still remember how you kept me waiting for the longest time after just giving me a bit of baits to these then told me the rest isn't completed yet!

You know when you first let me read what you wrote in the beginninig with awesome Director Kira and Acchan =p. So yea Everything was going nice and smoothly until you added Ray in there =(. Now you need to quickly fix everything so we can have some crazy action and a happy ever after ending!

Oh yea I'm still waiting for those other stories you were talking about =p I'm waitinggggggg
Notice how I didn't comment much about the overall chapter? =p
It's because it has been a while since I read it and don't have the kyaaaaaa feeling or ohhhhhhhhh moments to comment on anymore =p

~immo_k

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: yuuzu05 on September 23, 2012, 08:22:25 AM

I read the whole story twice, I really love how you write the interactions between the characters especially marimii :twothumbs
i hope you can continue this story, please update when you can :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: 7sam14 on September 25, 2012, 03:29:16 PM

Pls. Update.... :on cny2: :gyaaah: :prayers:
I'll be waiting :dozing:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: bou-j525 on November 12, 2012, 02:53:24 AM

:twisted: LET'S BUMP THIS THREAD!!!! :twisted: bwahahahahahahahaha :twisted:

Just adding a little pressure on your back ;)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Haruko on November 12, 2012, 07:24:39 AM

Quote from: bou-j525 on November 12, 2012, 02:53:24 AM

:twisted: LET'S BUMP THIS THREAD!!!! :twisted: bwahahahahahahahaha :twisted:

Just adding a little pressure on your back ;)

o_o

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: Crossing Crossroads on November 17, 2012, 05:57:09 AM

This is good. *starry eyes* But I noticed this hasn't been updated in... FIVE MONTHS?! SIX?! Ah... That's okay. I can wait. For as long as ever. I'll even read it in heaven (or hell, if the devil even wants me) if I do die one day before it's update. (Fat chance.)

:3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: cisda83 on November 19, 2012, 12:16:27 PM

Just Joining

Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the interesting fanfic :twothumbs :twothumbs

Atsuko pls be patient :bow: And Minami be aggressive :cow: :peace:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: takamae on November 19, 2012, 02:01:48 PM

I can't wait about the song, I think minami going to use acchan writting for the lyric, is it??
Minami and acchan need to be more true about how they feel
Ray always a complication but I think it's good to test minami and acchan love
I read your story in just 2 days, thank you....it's a fantastic story ^^
Please update soon, will be waiting :D

Title: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: AFLynx on November 24, 2012, 10:28:10 PM

Before anything else... AUTHOR'S NOTE: XD

:kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I truly apologize that it really took me a loooooooooooooooooooong time to update. Real life caught up with me and hooked me up real good. But seriously, work has been (and ALWAYS been) a pain that I haven't been seriously been writing. :fainted: As a gift for everyone's support and patience, I made a banner which can be viewed on the first post where my index is. Hope everyone will like it. :)

Thank you everyone for being so patient with me. I won't promise that I will update every 3 days or something, but I can assure you that when I do update next time, I'll make sure that everyone will appreciate it. This fic after all, is for all of you :)

I know I haven't replied to all the comments in here since my last update, but I promise to comment after this post. :on study:

Anyway, on to the story...

LOVE IN THE FAST LANE
=================

Chapter 19 PART 1 – Sathday

Switch

*****

Coming out of the bathroom, Yuko sat down in front of a dresser that she shares with her sisters. She smiled at the memory of a few years back when their mother suggested that the 3 of them could have their own rooms now that they all have grown up.

Mariko instantly did not like the idea, saying that now that they are all grown up, they need more “bonding time” and “girls talk”.

Atsuko pleaded to her parents not to give her a separate room. Although she’s the most territorial among us three, Yuko chuckled, remembering how her little sister placed markers in their bedroom when they were kids.

She on the other hand, always loved their talks before going to bed, and of course declined their mother’s offer. After hearing tons of protests from her daughters, their mother got the idea and converted the extra rooms into guest rooms.

Glancing around their room, she smiled again when her eyes stopped at the calendar pinned on the wall beside their dresser. Acchan’s been looking forward toward to our triple date tomorrow. She’s not the only one, that’s for sure. Yuko chuckled, noting how her youngest sister marked the said date with a flower, just like what she did on her desk calendar at work.

Her musings stopped when she heard a rustle of sheets on Atsuko’s bed. Eh? Why is she still here? “I thought you went along with Mariko onee-chan at the garage?” she asked.

Atsuko sat up, ignoring her disheveled sleepy state. “I don’t want to go to the garage today,” she mumbled, plopping back to her bed.

“Are you sick?” Yuko’s older sister mode kicking in, rushed to the other girl’s side and placed her palm on her sister’s forehead. No fever.

“No… I just don’t wanna…”

Yuko sighed in relief. Yep, she’s not sick alright… “Ne, is it about Takamina then?” she softly inquired. Her assumptions were proven correct as Atsuko just burrowed deeper under blanket.

“Onee-chan…”

“Yes, what is it Acchan?” Yuko asked, knowing there’s something wrong whenever her sister made a tiny voice.

“How do you express your love to Haruna-chan? And… and… how do you know that whatever she does means that she loves you back?” Atsuko asked, peeking out of her blankets.

Interesting topic we’re having here. Yuko blinked, “Um, okaaay… I thought we’re gonna talk about you and Takamina…”

Her younger sister huffed, sitting back up again to face her. “Mou~ it’s just that… that… Argh! I don’t know how to say this. I mean, am I going too fast for Takamina? Am I going too slow? Did I tease her too much that I actually scared her? Or… or… haven’t I given much attention to her…”

Yuko blinked as Atsuko flailed her arms for each question that came from her mouth. I hope those are rhetorical questions so I won’t have to answer, “Well Acchan, you see…”

“…Am I not pretty enough for her? Am I ugly? I know I’m not ugly but… OHMYGOD! Am I getting FAT? I haven’t checked my weight these past few days! I’m so gonna blame mom’s cooking for this…”

“Acchan! Stop it! You’re babbling!” Yuko almost shouted as she shook her sister’s shoulders to stop her from ranting any longer.

“Then what is wrong with me?” Atsuko silently asked, tears threatening to fall from her eyes.

Yuko sighed at the question, feeling the distressed aura around Atsuko. “First of all: You. Are. Not. Fat. You’re getting thin as it is that I think you already made a run for Mariko onee-chan’s money. Second, you’re not ugly; it’s simply not in our genes! There’s nothing wrong with you, that I can assure you.” she teased, hoping that she would lighten up the mood. “I think you’re just insecure.”

“Nani?”

Atsuko’s barrage of questions made Yuko sad. She knows that her little (though taller than her) sister is a confident person that earned her the position of being the Ace of the AKB48 Flag Girls.

“Acchan, it’s clearly written all over your face that I can already spell it out for you. Seriously, whoever’s in your shoes right now will feel that way. I mean, you haven’t been spending time with each other since that music video started and you haven’t got the chance to really talk to her. Ne, tell me, have you told Takamina exactly how you feel about her?”

Atsuko simply raised a sarcastic eyebrow at her sister. As if I have the chance to tell her with Ray latched on her arm every time I see her in the garage…

“Oookayyyy… maybe you shouldn’t answer that. Here’s what I see Acchan,” Yuko said as she scooted closer to her sister, “Maybe… just maybe… that you should tell Takamina that you actually like her. Takamina is a very good person that’s why it’s easy for her to make friends and I bet that’s the reason why she already has a huge fanbase in the racing industry. Forgive me for being blunt but even though she’s all that jazz, the poor girl is actually dense.” She patted Atsuko’s shoulder in sympathy which made the other girl chuckle.

“So that’s it? I’ll just tell her that I like her? I mean I like her like her?”

“Yup! At least you’re being honest with your feelings instead of panicking and letting Ray taking the lead towards Takamina.” Yuko smiled as she tucked some stray hair on Atsuko’s ear like she always does when they were kids. “Promise me two things Acchan: first, stay home and get some rest. Lastly, gather your wits and talk to Takamina tomorrow on our triple date, okay?”

“Okay…” Atsuko drawled. “But you never really answered my question.”

Damn, I thought I got away with it. “Well, let’s just say that I know that she cares because of a pinky promise.” Yuko grinned at her sister’s confusion, remembering the promise clearly in front of an altar after their cousin’s wedding. “Anyway imouto-chan, I’d better get going. At this rate, I won’t be able to make it to the garage on time. I’ll just see you later when I get back.”

As she was about to get up from her sister’s bed, Atsuko yanked her back. “Ano… onee-chan, I have a favor to ask.”

The older sister sighed, “What now Acchan? Seriously, one of these days I’ll have to collect the favors from you.” Yuko teased. Atsuko sheepishly tugged her blanket then leaned in to whisper on her sister’s ear. The more that Yuko listened, the more her eyes widened.

“EHHHHHHHHHHHH?! Nani?!”

*****

Substitution

“I’m bored…”

“Me too…”

“Me three…”

“Oi, if you three are just being bored, stop sighing or start working! Just because we don’t have scheduled races lately it means that everyone has an excuse to slack off. Minna, back to work, or else it’s car washing duty to anyone caught bumming around!” Sayaka’s commanding tone echoed in the garage. A din of “Hai~” was the AKB48 Crew’s reply to the Crew Chief. Haruna, Takamina and Miichan winced inwardly as it was obvious that they’ve been caught in their musings.

“The Chief sure knows how to ruin the mood…” Miichan mumbled as she and her cousins gathered their tools.

“What mood? There’s no mood to ruin because it’s practically boring since Mariko-chan cancelled all the team’s schedules since the ‘accident’.” Takamina stressed the last word by quoting with her fingers as she opened up the hood of the partially restored Gatchapink. The nickname stuck to the pink AKB48 racing car since Miichan named it before the previous race.

“She has every reason to cancel it. Heck, I think ever racing circuit in the country cancelled most of the scheduled races for this month… well nightly city races are exception to the rule of course.” Haruna pointed out.

“Good point. I just miss the adrenaline that’s all.” Takamina sighed then looked at the garage entrance, making her cousins follow her gaze.

“Ne, Takamina… you’ve been sighing since we got in for the day. Are you waiting for someone?” Miichan teased, poking her cousin’s side with a wrench.

“Stop with the poking! I’m actually…” The arrival of an ebony Jaguar XJ stopped her from replying further. Takamina watched the passenger door open, only to be disappointed as it was only Yuko who stepped out of the luxury car. The flitting emotions that flickered in her eyes did not miss Miichan’s deciphering gaze.

“Ah… so that’s why…” was only Miichan’s reply, patting Takamina’s shoulder in sympathy.

----------

“I have a favor to ask you onee-chan she says. I promise to return the favor she says, “ Yuko mockingly mumbled to herself, mimicking her younger sister’s plea earlier this morning. “Lucky for her Mariko onee-chan agreed to her request BEFORE she told me or else I might’ve dragged her with me to work.” She grumbled, adjusting her Marc Jacobs leather bag on her right shoulder and tucking her black dress bag securely in her arms at the same time, missing the three cousins who waved at her as she passed by to what looked like a damaged pink car in her peripheral vision.

"Yuko, ohayou..." Haruna tried again, this time calling out the Flag Girls captain's name. Takamina and Miichan gave each other a curious look. This is the first time Yuko didn't pounce on their cousin in greeting.

Yuko turned her head so fast that she thought she’d get a whiplash. “Ah. NYANNYAN! Imsorryimsorryimsorryididntseeyou—AAAAH!” the rambling stopped short as she tripped on her dress bag which she half-dragged along with her as she made a run towards Haruna. Expecting to kiss the floor due to free falling face first, she let out an audible Oof! as slender yet surprisingly strong arms wrapped around her waist in the nick of time to prevent her from falling.

“Careful Yuko! Mou, what has gotten into you at this time of the day?” Haruna mildly chided, helping the other girl up on her feet. Yuko stared at her savior, feeling a rush of blood flow to her ears and cheeks. The taller girl always did everything at her own pace that it made the squirrel girl wonder in awe and where did the sudden display of agility, strength and alertness came from.

“N-NyanNyan gomen… I-I’m sorry um… Thank you for um, you know… for catching I mean, helping me.” Yuko stammered, groaning inwardly at the thought of looking like an idiot trying to string words to form sentences in front Haruna.

“No problem at all. Although, I can imagine a thundercloud looming above your head when you came in; is there something wrong?”

Another groan escaped from her lips as her arms waved helplessly to gather back her wits. “It’s Acchan…” Yuko replied, nodding her head in appreciation as Haruna grabbed the dress bag from her hands to avoid further accidents.

“Ano… Yuko-chan, is she coming in for work today? I have something to give her.”

It was Takamina, fidgeting in her shoes, clutching a CD case shyly. Yuko expected the Drifter to ask for her sister’s whereabouts. She gently shook her head in reply and gave a comforting pat on the racer’s shoulder while curiously eyeing the CD that is in Takamina’s hands.

“Gomen ne, Takamina. Acchan is kinda feeling under the weather right now,” she replied. For her, that’s the best answer that she could offer to the other girl.

“Oh. I guess I’ll just have to wait for tomorrow then.”

Just before Takamina jogged her way back to Gachapin, Yuko grabbed her hand. “Takamina?”

“Um… what is it Yuko-chan?”

“I’m not going to say that you should not worry because you already are. She’ll be here tomorrow, and will join me and my onee-chan together with you and your cousins just as you’ve planned. Make sure to talk to her tomorrow and give her that present. AND make sure you don’t back out because this whole triple date thing is your idea and you’re paying.”

Takamina chuckled at the last statement and nodded in reply, “I’ll show up don’t worry, and I promise I’ll do everything that you’ve just noted.”

Yuko waved Takamina off to do whatever she’s been doing to Gachapin. “So, care to share what happened?” Yuko heard Haruna ask. She rolled her eyes, as she recalled what happened just an hour ago.

“NyanNyan, you see…”

----------

“EHHHHHHHHHHHH?! Nani?!”

“It’s just a small favor onee-chan! I promise to return the favor in… in tenfold! No wait, make it a hundredfold!”

“Fine, I’ll discuss it with onee-chan first.” Yuko huffed, grabbing her mobile phone on her bedside table.

“I already asked her before she left and she already agreed to my request.”

“NANI?!” Yuko exclaimed, almost dropping the phone when she heard her sister’s reply. “Why didn’t you asked me first?!” I was looking forward to spending the whole day with NyanNyan. Mou~

Atsuko rolled her eyes, “Mariko onee-chan and I have been waking you up a while ago. You slept like a log even though we’ve been shaking you to wake up that I think you can sleep through an earthquake!”

Yuko let out a deep sigh and plopped on her bed, staring at her sister. “Onee-chan, please cover for me, will you? I am emotionally stressed as it is that I don’t think I will perform my best for the team.” Atsuko added.

As the AKB48 Flag Girls captain, Yuko doesn’t tolerate poor performances from any member especially from the Ace. “Okay, okay, OKAY! I got your point! Just… tell me about your schedule for the day so that we can just get over this.”

Atsuko squealed in delight as her older sister finally gave in to her request. Plopping beside Yuko, she told her about the details of the performance. Thanks to their Uncle Yasusu Akimoto, AKB48 team is one of the sponsors of a street city race in Chiba. Because of this, they need to send out a member of the Flag Girls to at least perform a flag girl’s duty in the main event. It’s a perfect opportunity for them to gain more supporters for the team.

"Ah well, since I'm covering for you, I might as well watch the races before the main event." Yuko said off-handedly to lighten her mood. "I'll just give the usual speech and wave the flags right?"

"Hai! Thankyouthankyouthankyou onee-chan!" Atsuko gushed, pulling her older sister for a bone crushing hug.

"Gah! Don't thank me yet, I remember you promising to return the favor in hundredfold." Yuko wheezed from Atsuko's embrace. "C'mon squirt, help me pack what I’m gonna wear for the event. I’m already late; I’m sure to get an earful from Mariko onee-chan when I get to the garage.”

“Squirt?! You can’t call me that anymore – I’m already taller than you!”

“Too bad Acchan I’m your older sister. You’ll always be a squirt to me.”

“Mou!”

----------

“Aaand that’s what happened this morning.”

“Wow,” Haruna’s eyebrows rose as Yuko finished telling her story, “Trust Acchan to get what she wants from her sisters.”

“ I’m starting to believe that the trait runs in the family,” Yuko replied with a smug look. “But then again, Acchan used the youngest sister trump card that’s why I caved.”

The taller girl laughed at Yuko’s statement, “I bet you can also get what you want.”

Yuko was about to reply when her phone buzzed inside her pocket. “Ah excuse me for a moment NyanNyan,” she flipped her phone open and gave Haruna an apologetic look. “Moshi-moshi onee-cha… What do you mean? I’m not la-… Hai hai, I already talked to Accha-… Mou, would you stop interrupting me already! Fine, I’ll drop by your office first. See you later onee-chan.” She looked incredulously at her phone as the conversation ends. “Someone really has to pull that stick from Mariko onee-chan’s butt. She’s very prickly when she’s working too hard.”

“Ah well, let’s just leave that to Miichan. I’m sure that she can do something about that… um, stick that you’re talking about.” Haruna shook her head in amusement. Hooking the dress bag over her shoulder, she grabbed Yuko’s hand, “Come on Yuko, let’s go.”

“Go where?” Yuko asked, absently licking her now dry lips as she felt the warmth of the other girl’s hand.

“To Mariko-chan’s office, silly.” Haruna giggled, pulling Yuko towards the exit ignoring her incessant mumblings and the amused looks on Takamina and Miichan’s faces.

*****

Strategy

Sigh.

Takamina slumped to her seat she let out a bored, yet supposedly cleansing breath. It’s lunchtime, and honestly, the highlight of her day since they started racing for the AKB48 team. Lunchtime means they could relax after tinkering around cars and puttering around the garage. It means she could hang out and share bentos with the rest of the team. Lunchtime means bonding time with her cousins together with Atsuko and her sisters.

Another sigh. This lunchtime is different, and definitely her least favorite of all lunchtimes.

Atsuko did not come to work today.

Takamina let out a sigh for the nth time as she pierced a piece of katsudon with her fork, ignoring the fact that someone just sat beside her in her usual lunch table. She plans on continuing to ignore whoever it was, until she felt a pair of eyes boring at the side of her skull.

“Oh, it’s you. Tomochin, you know very well that it’s rude to stare at another person.” She frowned at her childhood best friend who just kept staring at her.

“Have you talked to Atsuko-chan yet?” Tomochin asked, ignoring what Takamina just said.

“No, I haven’t.”

“What?! You promised me that you’ll talk to her! I can’t believe I have a chicken for a best friend!” Tomochin hissed, poking her finger repeatedly on Takamina’s arm as she stressed every word.

“Ow! Hey, what the…! OW! Quit poking me, will you?! Geez, what’s with you and Miichan today that you two been poking me. I bruise easily!” Takamina complained, rubbing her arm. “And no, I’m definitely not chickening out with my promise. She just didn’t come to work today.”

“Oh right, I forgot. Yuko-chan informed the team that she’s not coming in for work today.”

Takamina gaped, “Then why the hell did you poke my arm for?!”

“Nothing. I’m just trying to get on your nerves. Mission accomplished.” Tomochin shrugged. “I’m serious Takamina. You need to talk to Atsuko-chan and sort out whatever is going on between the two of you. If you don’t, everything might blow out of proportion.”

The drifter smiled. It’s always been like this since they were kids. They always got each other’s backs, Haruna and Miichan included. She always berates Takamina whenever she did (or is about to do) something wrong, but is always ready to lend an ear and give a hug whenever she needs one. Sometimes, Takamina wished she could openly talk to Tomochin about everything.

For now, she’s glad that her best friend is back in her life.

“Hai, hai! I’ve been meaning to talk to her; I even have something to give her.” She replied, thinking of the CD now tucked inside her cubby in their locker room.

“Fine then. I’ll accept that answer, for now.” Tomochin saw her girlfriend get settled across another table in front of them and waved at her. “Also, remember what I said yesterday: stay away from the diva. She’s bad news for the both of you.”

Takamina gave her a confused look, “Diva? You mean Ray?”

“Okay… since when are you calling her on a first name basis?” Tomochin raised an eyebrow.

“It’s her name, isn’t it? She’s the one who insisted I call her Ray,” Takamina explained, “And besides, we’ve been working on that music video of hers and I can assure you that she can be a good person whenever she wants to.”

You never changed. Always seeing the best in someone. “Whatever. Just don’t come running to me and say that I didn’t warn you.” Tomochin gave her a final poke on the arm as she stood up. She made her way towards Tomo-mi and waved at Haruna, Miichan and Atsuko’s sisters as they made their way to where Takamina is sitting.

“What was that all about?” Miichan asked, pulling a chair for Mariko to sit on.

“You know her Miichan. She’s always trying to put her nose on someone else’s business.” Takamina replied.

“Knowing Tomochin, I think she meant well.” Mariko simply said as everyone ate their lunch.

Takamina nodded in agreement. Looking at her cousins together with Mariko and Yuko, she really felt like a fifth wheel without Atsuko around. She rolled her eyes as Miichan fed Mariko from her bento every now and then while Yuko tried to steal kisses from Haruna whenever her cousin is preoccupied with her lunch.

Honestly, if Atsuko is around right now, she wouldn’t even mind the teasing that she usually gets from the Ace.

“You’re good to go, right Yuko-chan?” Mariko asked in between chews.

“Of course I am! I’m the Captain after all.” Yuko winked at her older sister. Everyone simply rolled their eyes. Mayuyu jogged towards their table and tapped Mariko on the shoulder.

“Ano, Mariko-sama, someone is looking for you at the lobby. He looks like a delivery guy or something.” Mayuyu said.

“Nani? The security guards could’ve received the item and just dropped it in my office.” Mariko replied.

“I already told that to Guard-san,” Mayuyu rolled her eyes playfully, “the thing is, the delivery guy insisted he give it to you personally. He said he’s from the Yamamoto racing team.”

Mentioning the aforementioned team piqued the cousins’ curiosity but didn’t show it least will raise some suspicions from Mariko and Yuko. Miichan frowned, Takamina simply looked at her two cousins while Haruna just nodded at them in understanding.

Mariko sighed, “Fine then, I’ll go meet up with this delivery guy that you’re talking about. Thanks Mayuyu,” acknowledging the younger girl. “I’m sorry Minami, for making our lunch break short. I’ll see you later?”

“Of course Mariko, I’ll drop by in a bit. Love you!” Miichan winked, giving her girlfriend a peck on the lips. Mariko gave out a short laugh when the other girls on their table groaned at the public display of affection as she left the table.

“Well, I have to go back to the studio as well.” Yuko said in-between chews as she finished her bento.

“Really? Whatever for?” Haruna asked.

“I have to prepare my outfit for the event, and not to mention to make some calls to our family driver so he could pick me up on time. The event organizers said that I have to be at the venue an hour before the event even though they would need me at the last race.”

“Oh, so that means I won’t be seeing you for the rest of the day then.”

“Awww, NyanNyan, I’m gonna miss you too~” Yuko said in a sing songy voice as she pinched the taller girl’s cheek.

“Itai! I didn’t say I’ll miss you baka!”

Yuko simply giggled at Haruna’s pouting face. “Whatever NyanNyan. You can always call me whenever during the event. Ja!” Yuko said as she hugged Haruna then bound of towards the studio. The three cousins let out a bored sigh when they were left behind on their lunch table.

“Well, now that we’re the only ones left, I think this is the most boring lunchtime ever.” Miichan said.

“You said it.” Haruna replied.

“Ditto.” Takamina mumbled.

----------

The rest of the afternoon flew by quickly and now it’s already the team’s afternoon break. Haruna raised the idea of having an emergency meeting and the three of them went to a secluded spot on the parking lot where they would usually park Gakutenou.

“I’m getting a nasty feeling…” Haruna said, leaning on the passenger door of their car.

“Geez, Haruna. If you’re having a nasty feeling then maybe you should go to the toilet instead of dragging us here. I could’ve been spending my time with Mariko right now!” Miichan complained.

“Get your mind out of the gutter Miichan!” Haruna growled, lightly slapping the back of her head.

“Ouch! Watch it will you?! I’m still feeling the effect of the whiplash I got from the crash!”

Takamina rolled her eyes, “Tell us about this nasty feeling Haruna.”

“Well, I have this nasty feeling that the slimeball Jun will be in the event that Yuko mentioned.”

“So, are you suggesting…”

“Yup. We should go and investigate. And to do that, we should join in the race.” Haruna’s idea made her cousins giddy with excitement.

“Let me drive and join the race Haruna!” Miichan excitedly volunteered.

“No way Miichan! You joined the last race so it’s my turn already!” Takamina complained.

“That doesn’t count because technically, I didn’t finish the race because of that freaky accident!” The two continued to bicker as they debated who will have the chance to drive for the event.

“Stop it, both of you! You two will not race for this event. I will be the one racing this time.” Haruna immediately interrupted before they strangle each other. “Besides, it’s my turn to drive."

“Whaaaaaaaaat?” Miichan drawled. Takamina huffed in defiance.

“First of all Miichan, you’re still not fit to drive. You’re the one who yowled in pain when I slapped your head so no, you’re not gonna drive for this race.” Haruna countered. “And you Takamina,” pointing at her smallest cousin, “I know you’ve been sleeping at ungodly hours and I know that most of it is because we’ve been doing investigations and all that but seriously, I’m not liking your pale complexion recently. So no Takamina, you’re not fit to drive either.”

“Demo…” Miichan and Takamina, whined at the same time.

“Which part of NO did you not understand: the N or the O?” Haruna countered back, this time her crossing her arms on her chest.

Takamina and Miichan blinked. They know that Haruna is only insistent and used an angry tone when she goes into the eldest cousin mode. It’s true that technically, Takamina bested her cousins academically and is the leader of their unit in the agency but when it comes to family and their wellbeing, Haruna has the last say as the eldest among the three.

“Fine, I understand.” Miichan caved in understanding.

“Me too Haruna,” Takamina nodded, “It’s your call now Haruna. What’s the plan? You do have a plan, right?”

“Oh yes, I do have a plan.” Haruna grinned impishly.

To be continued...

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: arrow27 on November 24, 2012, 11:10:36 PM

Thanks for the update :) Really enjoy your fic & I'll patiently be witing for the next one :D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Haruko on November 24, 2012, 11:57:20 PM

OMG!! thanx for the updated.. Im waiting a lot.. and its works... AMAZIIIIIIIIIING!! my kojiyuu, atsumina.. even i miss ray too jeje

dont leave us alone so much please..

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Sydney W on November 25, 2012, 02:04:06 AM

Atsuko and Takamina going to confesss to each other soon. Yeah ! Waiting the next update soon.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: KojiYuu44 on November 25, 2012, 03:05:04 AM

Yay!!!! Finally updated!!!
This is getting more and more exciting :)
Looking forward to the next update!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Tanchan on November 25, 2012, 04:42:24 AM

Yeah, an update from you. I'm so happy. Takamina and Atsuko should just spill their guts out to each other and Ray should just disappear.

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: chichay12 on November 25, 2012, 06:59:01 AM

YATTA!!!!
WOOOHOOOO...
:farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook:
i really miss reading ur update!!hahaha
thank god ur back!!pls dont disappear like that again!!XD

i want more!! :gyaaah:
update soon!!
:kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: yuuzu05 on November 25, 2012, 08:57:42 AM

*le gasp* an update!!! Thankyou so much for coming back to this story :bow: :bow:
i look forward to your next update :cow: :cow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: risa_ai on November 25, 2012, 09:19:59 AM

So I like, read this all in 3hours. xD At first, I didn't want to comment, BUT TAKABOY AINT LOVING MY ATSUKO, SO HERE I AM. Firstly though, who on earth is Ray? O.o This uh, PERSON, STEALING AWAY 'Nami' from Atsuko. T^T IF THIS PERSON WANTED TO GIVE A NICKNAME, AT LEAST GIVE A CUTER ONE, LIKE 'minami' or something. Nah, jk. xD
Overall, this story is well-done so far, BUT PULEEEEEEEZE UPDATE SOON AND MAKE ATSUKO DO SOME CONFESSING IN THE FACE OF RAY. /iknowimevil. Icanthelpit/ Kojiyuu was adorable though. ^^// UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON. ;A;

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: takamae on November 25, 2012, 09:30:05 AM

True!!! It's haruna time to join in a race, can't wait kojiyuu moment in the race :wub:
Minami and acchan need just spill it out
And what so special about that package? :?
Can't wait for the triple date :wub:
Thanx for the update ^^

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on November 25, 2012, 12:44:57 PM

OMG AN UPDATE YAY OMG I LOVE YOUR FIC I CANT BELIEVE YOU UPDATED FINALLY !!!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE I BEG !!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: cisda83 on November 25, 2012, 02:35:53 PM

Haruna time to race next.... Looking forward to it :? :twothumbs

Minami... man up and confess already to Atsuko.... :cow:

Great update... hope to see the next one soon :bow:

Thank you for the update :peace: :theking

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Calyrica on November 25, 2012, 08:52:49 PM

Ooh, ooh, this fic gets updated! I'm not usually one for AUs, but you've weaved this universe together so wonderfully that I love it! :heart:

(Shizuru x Natsuki is my OTP #1! Have you written fics for them, too?)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: duckduck on November 25, 2012, 09:17:26 PM

I just spent the whole weekend reading! I lvoe this! Thank you and please update soon! :cow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Minami-chan on November 26, 2012, 12:04:19 AM

:nya: :nya: :nya: :nya: yeeeeeeeeeees I´m sooooooooo happy!!!!

:on gay: :on gay: :on gay: A new chapter!!

Thanks for continue this fic, really i like (we like) a lot!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: kahem on November 26, 2012, 12:54:22 AM

oh~ Kojiharu playing the tsundere is so cute~

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: bou-j525 on November 26, 2012, 01:33:22 AM

Apparently, bumping this thread to make you update was a great idea. I shall do it again :twisted:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: BbSis on November 27, 2012, 01:17:22 PM

Upadate!! Finally!

Marikooooo don't go receive Yamamoto team's pack alone ;.; Miichan, do something!!!

Haruna racing *.*

I really liked your update :heart:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: miayaka on November 27, 2012, 01:20:54 PM

Thank you for this update
I'm really looking forward on this..

Its getting more and more exciting :panic:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: TakaminaBG on November 27, 2012, 04:00:59 PM

Finally, after six hours I fished reading this fic!!!
FIRST: IT'S SO FREAKING AMAZING!!!!
MariMii: CUTE!!!
KojiYuu: FUNNY!!
What the hell is going on with MY AtsuMina??!?!?!? Get them together like NOW!!!!
I hope nothing bad happens with Haruna, like it did with Miichan...
I wonder what Acchan is planing??
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: bou-j525 on November 29, 2012, 04:38:50 AM

No I'm not just bumping the thread again (because it'd be totally useless anyway considering that it's already on first page) !! Apparently I need to comment on Lynx's fic because she thinks I'm a legendary author and that it will boosts her career as a writer. <-- I swear I wasn't the one saying this

So first part of chapter... looong first part btw :thumbup Oh right just saying, at first I thought you wrote "I will update every three days or something" XD Then after a mini heart attack and a long "wth" moment, I told myself it was impossible and read it again XD

First, AMAZING banner :k-great: Love everything about it, even the typography is just perfect and it represents your fic very well ^^

Second, Acchan is adorable in this update XD Asking so many questions to Yuko then saying she's getting fat LOL Though blaming her mom would be a great idea considering what we saw from her blog about food :stuffed: So I'd like to say, yes Acchan, you are getting fat. But not physically, EMOTIONALLY. HAHA. Your thoughts are getting fat, you think too much, you have too many things on mind :P (gotta love that random comeback) Aww and Yuko being so nice to help her sister ^^ Speaking of Yuko, major LOL when she apologized for Haruna for not seeing her XD Could have been the end of the world and I'm pretty sure she would have reacted less than that XD

Also, the delivery guy or whatever, I don't know why but it's suspicious... and then Yuko leaving too XD and the "most boring lunchtime ever" comment made me laugh :lol: C'mon guys, you won't die... or maybe :lol:

And Haruna being insistant to be the one participating... Is there something I forgot, why is it suddenly so important for her to participate? :tama-uhh: And insisting so much... Hmm ah well maybe it's just part of her plan xD It's rare to see Haruna being "mad" anyway so it's cool XD Go Haruna, go rule the world!! *bou-j being crazy here*

And Takamina being... takamina =_= Just you admit you love Acchan or whatever and things will be so much easier... oh well knowing who the author is, maybe not wwww Though those two are really not helping eachother!! Draaamaaaa, just tell her you love her! Oh wait, that's not even close from something Takamina would do! Ah well... è.é Can't wait for the triple date :tama-apeshit:

And finally, more formal aspects, I love your writing style :thumbup Repeating myself though, but really ^^ Easy to read and to understand, nice interaction between the characters, always coherent, and various vocabulary so it's interesting to read and not repetitive. A lot of dialogues and not too much descriptions, though it's fine because it's cool to see the characters evoluating together. Plus we can know how they feel just by the way you type the convo ^^

I don't know for you, but I think this is a great general review. If you think it's not long enough well... too bad XD Can't wait for the next part and what will happen to all of them, especially takamina/acchan because well... it's takamina and acchan ^^;;

As my final word... just know that I will always be there to pressure you to write 8D

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: AFLynx on November 29, 2012, 01:30:01 PM

Thank you everyone for reading my fic! :farofflook: Again, I do apologize that it took me a VERY LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG time to update... my writing muse took a very long vacation. :err:

To make up for it, I did make a banner for this fic (it's at the first page of this thread, above my index) Hope you all enjoyed it. I had fun making it, and I think I'll be making banners for my future fics from now on. :)

Anyway, on to my individual replies:

arrow27 - :kneelbow: thank you for reading! please continue to be patient with me with my updates! :)
Haruko - :kneelbow: Thanks for your patience! I'm happy you loved the update. Lol, you miss Ray? XD We'll see if Ray comes back in the picture... I think she's busy right now because of the release of the music vid. :lol:
SydneyW - Thanks for the comment SydneyW-san! :luvluv2: I hope they confess soon too. :)
KojiYuu44 - Thanks for reading! I'm glad you find my story exciting. I hope that my future updates will be more exciting for everyone :hee:
Tanchan - I'm glad that my update made you happy... your comment made me happy as well. :farofflook: I don't wanna spoil everyone so... we'll just have to see what will happen to our Atsumina pairing in my fic :)
Chichay12 - Gomen ne for my long disappearance :sweat: :kneelbow: I promise not to do it more often. XD Thank you for the comment!
yuuzu05 - Don't worry, I won't EVER abandon this fic since this is my first fic ever. :hee: I'll even try to revive my other multi-chap fic (Parent Trap) and write whenever I have the time/chance to do so. :)
risa_ai - wow, you read the whole story for 3 hours? :shock: awesome! 8) Well, Ray is a character in Mendol Ikemen Idol, a No Sleeves dorama... you should watch it! :on GJ: The reason why I used "Nami" as Ray's nickname for Takamina is because that is her name in the dorama :) I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I may concentrate on writing an update for Parent Trap or continue w/ my pending OS. Thanks for the comment! :)
takamae - IKR?! It's really been a while since I wrote Haruna racing. :err: about the package... everything will be revealed about it in one of the future chapters. I'm happy that you wondered about it. ^^ Thanks for the comment!
XxRoByNxX78 - I know it's been a while and I'm totally blaming work for my lack of updates :fainted: I'll do my best to update faster. Thanks for the comment! :)
cisda83 - Thanks for the comment! I'm also looking forward to writing her race as well. :hee: I'll try to update as soon as I can.
Calyrica - After 7 months, I finally updated! :farofflook: Thank you for the compliment Calyrica-san! When I thought about the concept of my oshi/No Sleeves racing, I thought that I should be the one writing it, thus creating this fic. :) I do read Shizuru x Natsuki fics since they are my favorite Mai Hime pairing but honestly never tried writing about them XD
duckduck - Thanks for reading my fic! :luvluv2: Honestly, I've been spending a lot of reading fanfics as well... and I think it's one of the reasons why I haven't updated soon. :depressed:
Minami-chan - Thank you for reading Minami-chan! :) I'm happy to read/see that you (everyone) loves reading my fic as much as I love writing this. :hee:
kahem - :on lol: ah well, you know about the KojiYuu relationship... it's good to know that I was able to convey their tsundere moments in this update. among my 3 pairings, I always have a hard writing KojiYuu moments... I'll do my best to write more about them. :) thanks for the comment!
BbSis - Thanks for liking my update and for taking the time to leave a comment! :luvluv2: You don't have to worry, I think the security guard accompanied the delivery man to the lobby so I'm betting Mariko is safe and sound. :hehehe:
miayaka - Thanks for being patient w/ me in posting this. I'm happy that you like my update! :hee:
TakaminaBG - about the Atsumina pairing... I have big plans for them... and if I say big, I do mean BIG! :glasses: I know it's been taking ages for them but if you will give me time and go on with my plans for them, I'll make it worth your while :) After all, they are my main pairing in this fic. ^^
bou-j525 - :shock: a VERY long comment from one of the greatest writers here in jphip! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: First part of the chap is long because I want to elaborate on Acchan and Yuko as sisters. XD Thank you for commenting about the banner :kneelbow: Most of all, thank you for your comments regarding my writing style. I've been struggling w/ my writing style lately and I'm happy that you like it. :hee: I know my reply is kinda short... honestly it's because, I don't know what to say :on lol: Again, thank you :3

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: bimbo on November 30, 2012, 04:26:18 PM

I'm really looking forward for the next chapter! XD

It's a very nice story :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: AFLynx on November 30, 2012, 07:22:46 PM

@bimbo - Thanks for the comment! :kneelbow: I have already informed the others who already commented, I'll try my best to update... will try to write an update for my other multi-chap first or post an OS before updating this. XD Hope you'll be patient with me :hee:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Megumi on December 17, 2012, 10:57:33 PM

:shocked I've been gone so long and now...finally!
AFLynx-san updated! *crying happy tears*

How I've been waiting... :O
I'm glad that you didn't abandon your fic. (that was my worst fear)

___________________________________________________________________
Poor Takamina Acchan is not there, I wonder what's her plan though. :?
KojiYuu and MariMii....lovely as usual XD

Thank you for your update.
Looking forward to next update.

ArígatoU! :kneelbow:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Minami-chan on December 26, 2012, 01:54:43 AM

Please do not forget us!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: chichay12 on December 26, 2012, 05:53:07 AM

update!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
I miss ur fic :cry:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: AFLynx on January 07, 2013, 05:40:12 PM

@Megumi: thank you for always being patient with my updates :kneelbow: I hope you liked it :) and of course, I won't abandon this fic EVER... after all, this is my first fanfic that I've ever written XD it'll just take some time for me to update since I did plan on finishing an update of the Parent Trap first before getting back to this fic's next chapter. XD

I have plans for Takamina and Acchan, but... I won't spoil any one of you regarding that :on crazygran: I'm happy that I was able to write more about Kojiyuu... I know I've lacked some scenes for them. I hope to write about them more. :) As for MariMii... they are still crazy and lovey dovey for each other lol

Thanks again for the comment!

Minami-cha: of course I will not forget all of you~ real life just caught up with me that's why I haven't got the time to update. Don't worry, I've already written some parts of the next update and for Parent Trap... I just hope that I'll get enough free time to update one of these days. Please bear with me some more and I promise (as always) to do my best for my updates :kneelbow: thanks for the comment! :)

Chichay12: Please don't cry... it makes me :cry: too... I'll update soon when I have the time. Thanks for always reminding me not to procrastinate too much XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: qweakb on January 07, 2013, 05:54:17 PM

yay, finally... feel like waiting until my hairs turn white..haha (sorry for my bad English)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 30, 2013, 03:02:05 PM

I was reading this for like 5 hours stayed up till 2 am, (good thing school was cancelled due to weather *phew) :mon ko: :mon tweaker: I stayed up cuz I thought it was like finished ahahaha but nope... and my e-eyes--lol xD but it doesn't matter if it's for Atsumina lololol :mon yeah:

PROLOGUE: wow, can't believe some peeps didn't get who they was ;p
playing psp- Kojiharu (she's the tallest)
reading the manga- Takamina (loves reading manga)
study martial arts - Minegeshi (since it said she was wearing pink and that reminded me of Mendol Ikemen Idol)
Chapter 2- woooooot!!! damn! they're all freakin awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :mon inluv:
chapter 11 - oh my gawd! I can die without rergrets now!!!! lol thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat waaaaaaaaaaaas freaking....can't put
it to words im 2 speechless!!!! woooo! :mon thumb:

Quote

"Who needs a knight in shining armor when I have a race driver who looks good in leather suit?"

TOTALLY A KILLER LINE!!! xD best line ever lol :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

We're waiting for the next update....plz..need...to...see...the...ending... :mon fire: :mon fire: and thx for this amazing fanfiction :mon yeah: :mon yeah:

and lol I just saw the trailer when I finished reading this... :mon wtf: ahahahaha xD luv the trailer <3 :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Elo on January 30, 2013, 08:36:55 PM

please update i cant wait anymore

and please i want a happy end for atsumina kojiyuu and marimii

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: theblueknight on February 01, 2013, 03:53:40 AM

Quote from: AFLynx on November 24, 2012, 10:28:10 PM

I just caught up!!! aw man and now I have to wait come one update PLEASE!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: I finally gave this fic a chance and love it!!! cant wait for the next parts im wondering if yuko will somehow find out that they are agents that be awesome!!! :rock: :rock: :rock: :rock:

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: chichay12 on March 05, 2013, 12:31:59 AM

i'm waiting
i'm waiting
i'm waiting
still waiting....
aflynx-san!
I miss u and ur update
:cry: :cry: :cry:
Pls comeback soon
*wipe tears* XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Elo on April 05, 2013, 11:37:02 AM

Aflynx-san
I miss your update
please update soon
I am waiting patiently

update very soon hehe

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Archer1992 on April 15, 2013, 10:13:06 PM

please continue soon
this is one of my favorite stories

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: chichay12 on April 22, 2013, 07:07:47 PM

Quote from: Chichay12 on March 05, 2013, 12:31:59 AM

i'm waiting
i'm waiting
i'm waiting
still waiting....
aflynx-san!
I miss u and ur update
:cry: :cry: :cry:
Pls comeback soon
*wipe tears* XD

Still waiting :cry:
I really miss your update aflynx...XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Minamiyuki on April 23, 2013, 05:58:31 AM

I want my Takamina, Kojinyan and Miichan riding on a Bugatti Veyron EB 16.4 Supersport or Lamborghini Aventador LP700-4; and Suzuki GSX1300R Hayabusa 2nd Generation or Kawasaki Ninja ZX14R...

When will i see that scene.... :lol: :lol: :lol:

Please update.... XD XD XD

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: tfme3638 on April 25, 2013, 02:32:42 AM

Quote from: BbSis on August 22, 2012, 07:25:08 PM

Y'now, in my mind Kai/Nami is a different person from Takamina, and thats why I'm with Atsuko, 'cause theres' no Takamina in Mendol xD

I'm like that too! lol XD Totally agree with this! For Mendol, it's definitely kai and ray...But for your fic...yappari atsumina! Just to add, I love your fic :heart:! I just finished reading it... And I can't wait for more! :twothumbs
Can't get enough of the pairings here! kojiyuu; marimii; atsumina!!!!! :thumbup :thumbup

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 18e - And that's a wrap] Act 14 UPDATE! 04/01
Post by: steven_0809 on May 17, 2013, 11:12:03 AM

please please update soon
i am going to die

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: cisda83 on May 17, 2013, 12:16:45 PM

AFLynx-san

Please update

This fic is one of my fav.

I have always liked AKBxMendol...

So please continue this fic...

Can't wait to see what's going to happen with Haruna, Minami and Miichan?

Also what about Yuko, Atsuko and Mariko?

Thank you

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: AoiShiori on May 17, 2013, 03:27:00 PM

I've just finish reading this and.... wow just... wow :drool:

I really really really love this :)

I will wait forever for your update :) (I hope it's soon)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: Elo on June 09, 2013, 04:48:28 PM

AUTHOR-san please update !!!!!!!!!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane [CHAPTER 19 Part I - Sathday] FINALLY UPDATED! 11/25
Post by: sofylerry on June 09, 2013, 07:00:48 PM

I really love your fics!! :panic: please please author-san update!!! :bow: :bow:

Title: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane
Post by: AFLynx on June 25, 2013, 09:20:49 AM

Hello Minna! :hee:

First of all, I want to apologize :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
I'm sorry that it has been MONTHS since I decided to drop by and post something about an update. I know everyone are waiting for the next chapter... but this post is to announce that I am going to put Love in the Fast Lane on hiatus... for now.

*pls don't kill me* :prayers:

I actually have the draft for the next chapter, but right now, I am working on a new fic and one of the authors here is also beta reading it for me. Work and a part time business really made me busy this past few months that I decided that I'll finish the new fic first before I update LiFL and Parent Trap.

I hope everyone will understand. Rest assured, that when I finally finish that fic, I will post it immediately and will finish the next chapter of this fic.

For now, please enjoy the fics that I posted here in the forums. If you have any questions or messages, please feel free to PM. :kneelbow:

Thank you!

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Elo on June 25, 2013, 10:28:52 AM

But if you are ready will you update

or what I mean is will you update for example in one week or how is it then ???

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: AFLynx on June 25, 2013, 10:59:48 AM

Quote from: Elo on June 25, 2013, 10:28:52 AM

But if you are ready will you update

or what I mean is will you update for example in one week or how is it then ???

Hi Elo,
Like I said, I will finish my update for Love in the Fast Lane AFTER I finish my new fic (that includes banners, poster, etc.) :nervous

I'm almost halfway done, but I won't promise I will be finishing it soon. All I can say is I am still writing and will not of course abandon this story and Parent Trap.

:)

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: cisda83 on June 25, 2013, 11:51:41 AM

Okay... I'm looking forward to read your new fic...

I like both 'Love in the Fast Lane' and 'Parent Trap'

So I would probably like your new fic....

And Thank you for not abandoning the other fics...

I'll be waiting for whatever fic you're going to make...

Thank you...

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Tanchan on July 30, 2013, 06:43:20 AM

You're writing a new fic? Who is the main pairing?

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: theblueknight on July 30, 2013, 08:57:35 AM

hey its good I understand :thumbup I know how it is when you got a lot of things going around like a job for example so I can relate to that since I got a almost 24 hour gig all the time taking care of my nephew almost no time to myself so yeah but anyways I can wait no problem as for your other fic parent trap not sure if I read it but im gonna go check it out :) and as for the new one you are working on I can also wait to check it out :) I really love your writing style so I really can wait to check it out hope to hear from you soon :D

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: lezperv on September 29, 2013, 06:48:55 AM

My first time reading this and I gotta say, IT IS FREAKING AWESOME!!! :on GJ:

I really love all the relationship thats going on with No3b, it kinda sucks that Minami is the last one to be with Atsuko even though they really really really like each other X3 Hopefully ray can disappear for good, now that her mv is done. I can't wait for the triple date and I want my ATSUMINA!!! :hee:

I know this fic is on hiatus, but hopefully you'll be able to update soon XD

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Yuki13 on September 29, 2013, 09:43:06 AM

Please continue your fic!!

MariMii, KojiYuu and Atsumina is all so awesome!!

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Elo on October 02, 2013, 07:22:10 AM

I thought you would update I am waiting please update soon :cry:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: noah minami on October 18, 2013, 05:24:12 PM

Your fic is awesome... :thumbsup I love the story flows. :D Except ray still clinging near takamina eh?? Takamina still dense as usual.. :sweatdrop: what will happen to them.. I wanna know... :banghead: :?
Looking forward for ur update... :yossi:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Elo on December 28, 2013, 08:20:13 PM

When will you update I will wait for you please update soon

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: shazrey on April 05, 2014, 08:48:55 PM

i wonder wht is their plan :?
i hope u can still continue this story, pleasee :bow:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: takeshi77 on April 22, 2014, 07:30:25 PM

i hope u can still update this story :(...its was great story

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Kirozoro on June 12, 2014, 10:09:02 PM

Omg i want to know what is their plan ir Haruna plan

Please update soon

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Feat on June 15, 2014, 07:24:29 AM

AFlynx-san~. I hope you can update this. :bow:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: noah minami on October 10, 2014, 12:18:17 PM

author san ,when will you update. i told you at twiter already xD , MY PRESENT WHERE? hahaha

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: lossc on October 12, 2014, 11:46:46 AM

Oh ~ this is a great one...
I hope it will update soon ~
Author-sensei ~
Onegai ~

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: Ren-kun on January 29, 2015, 05:38:03 PM

I'm new here but WOW..this is one of the most awesome fanfics that I've read here _{(at least with regards to other atsumina and kojiyuu fics that I've seen)}.. :cathappy:

the english is good, the plot is very interesting, none of the scenes are boring, the action scenes are detailed enough to make them easy to imagine, and you were able to use a lot of references that I also like too (mai hime, imagine me and you, mendol, the kojiyuu pic at the church, takachair).. :twothumbs

I got into the AKB fandom through Mendol too btw..ehehe..

I reeeeeeally hope you'll be able to finish this fic and haven't given up on this yet..be like Miichan when she finished her race.. :lol:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: phoenix0i on January 30, 2015, 05:35:03 AM

This fic is great. I do hope that this will continue.

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on December 12, 2015, 08:44:40 PM

:sweatdrop: oh man, just when I finally caught up, you're the one on hiatus now. Sure took me a long time to catch up, though :lol:

MariMii still my remains my fav couple here, they're so good. I love their relationship.

I hope one day you'll come back and update this fic again so AtsuMina can be a couple too and maybe becomes my fav one.

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: ChibiRine on March 01, 2016, 01:23:17 PM

Still waiting for the update, I ain't giving up. XD

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: sophcaro on March 01, 2016, 02:14:59 PM

Quote from: ChibiRine on March 01, 2016, 01:23:17 PM

Still waiting for the update, I ain't giving up. XD

The writer hasn't updated since June 2013. If you haven't given up, the writer obviously has...
I'm afraid you'll have to get used to the idea and move on :(
Trust me, I know how frustrating/painful it can be. I was also following a fanfic that has been abandonned by its writer a long time ago...

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: sasshirie on March 03, 2016, 04:10:16 PM

its a good thing to have hope. i have it too, who knows really. it was a good story

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: rightsaver143 on June 25, 2016, 07:06:31 AM

Heeeeeeeeeyyyyyy...!!!!!!!!!!!! :mon spit: :mon mad:

When are you going to update :mon mad:

Update it please :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Title: Re: [ON HIATUS] Love in the Fast Lane - UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
Post by: theblueknight on July 12, 2017, 08:31:49 AM

Its been a long time huh? Man after all these years i still come back and reread this fic when knowing that its in hiatus for ever ^^; well just wanted to drop by to read it either way :) its one of my top 3 fav fics :)

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane (multipairing) 24/11/2012 [ON HIATUS]
Post by: AFLynx on August 29, 2018, 04:47:28 AM

WARNING: THIS IS NOT AN UPDATE...

...YET

:kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

First of all minna - I would like to apologize to you for taking me YEARS to go back here on the forums. Life has been busy while I was on hiatus and I needed to be a responsible adult. :stunned: I would also like to thank those members who still reads Love in the Fast Lane and still consider it as one of their fave fics here.

I would also like to reiterate that this fanfic is very dear to me and I will not just abandon it. I've been meaning to update in the past few years (I actually already finished the supposed update) but like I said, I just needed to be more focused on real life. I promised to myself when I started writing LITFL that I will make sure to complete it, no matter how long it will take me. Through this fic, I've met awesome people who are fantastic in writing... and some of them even became my friends. :) So yeah, this is a very special fanfic (and the longest) that I've written.

So here's the plan:
Since it's been a looooooooong time, I'm planning to revamp the story.

:shock: No I'm not planning on changing the ENTIRE story lol.

So what do I mean I want to revamp it? What I'm planning to do is edit the dates/year of the story (it's been almost 7 years...) and maybe edit some of my spelling/grammatical errors on each chapter. I won't make any major changes on the posted chapters don't worry.

Also a sidenote, I also won't make any changes on the age of my characters in the story. I like them just the way I wrote them to be. :)

So there it is. What I can say is that for the next couple of days or weeks, I will inform everyone for every chapter that I've updated so far, or if there's a new chapter that will be posted. I would like to apologize in advance if my future posts on this thread will be inconsistent, but I will make sure to keep everyone updated at least once a week.

Thank you again minna and I hope you will continue to support this fanfic. :kneelbow:

AFLynx

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane (multipairing) 24/11/2012 [Will be revamped/continued]
Post by: Minami-chan on August 29, 2018, 10:43:34 PM

you are welcome!

Title: Re: Love in the Fast Lane (multipairing) 24/11/2012 [Will be revamped/continued]
Post by: arfi on September 08, 2018, 10:30:59 AM

haaaaahh i'm glad you're still gonna continue this fic :ptam-kiss: :ptam-kiss: :ptam-kiss:
:cow: :cow: :cow:
thankyou and welcome back :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

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