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Title: The Deal - Ch.16 (RenaYuki, other pairings) 9/12/16
Post by: Sok on November 18, 2011, 10:32:17 AM

Hello everyone, :mon hi: I'm a newbie and this my first first time writing a fan fiction. I'm really nervous about this. :mon sweat: I hope it will get your interest and attention. Please do comment/ give me some advise cuz it'll really help me a lot.

Table of Contents
Prologue (Bleow)
Ch. 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg970378#msg970378)
Ch. 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg970520#msg970520)
Ch. 3 Part 1 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg970756#msg970756)
*Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg971440#msg971440)
Ch. 3 Part 3 & *Extra 2* (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg972477#msg972477)
Ch. 4 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg973618#msg973618)
Ch. 5 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg975415#msg975415)
Ch. 6 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg976924#msg976924)
Ch. 7 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg978390#msg978390)
Ch. 8 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg980884#msg980884)
Ch. 9 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg984709#msg984709)
Ch. 10 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg988072#msg988072)
Ch.11 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg991823#msg991823)
Chapter 12 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg1002367#msg1002367)
Ch. 13 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg1059658#msg1059658)
 Ch. 14  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg1128802#msg1128802)
 Ch. 15  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg1132646#msg1132646)
 Ch.16  (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31147.msg1384262#msg1384262)




Prologue

Death in itself is not a simple thing.  There are people in this world who accept death when it has come for them but there are also people who fight against that.  They keep fighting and try to overcome their illness or hardships, but sometimes that determination fades away.  No matter how hard some may try to survive and defeat that illness there is still the fact that they will die, and to prolong their live they can and will go to extreme measures.  This person in front of me has had many painful hardships, each harder than the one before.  She has had to bury four of her children, each child having died of unknown causes.  She had to deal with many hardships very time one of her children died. 

It’s been 120 years since she had summoned me; she made a deal with me to prolong her life and grant many other things but what she didn’t know was that the price she had to pay would be her children’s life. 70 years have passed since the deal was made. She had suddenly decided to end our little contract and everything went black for me. It’s been 50 years since she sealed me in this damn object.

Now the woman dress in a tan Daria Maxi dress in a coffin face facing up with a small smile on her cold pale lips her cold dead hands across her chest holding a white rose.  It seems she’s happy because she will finally be able to see the children that she loved so dear but she will also be leaving the grandchildren she treasured so much, but she leaves her granddaughter something that will change her life once she opens it for better or worse.





Sorry :kneelbow: if you don't find it interesting I'll stop.  :on cloudeye:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Tejinashi on November 18, 2011, 10:43:44 AM

WHAT DID YOU SAY AT THE END? :angry1:
THIS IS JUST TOO INTERESTING TO PASS :angry1:
DON'T YOU DARE TO STOP :angry1:
Please continue :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: kahem on November 18, 2011, 10:54:14 AM

So interesting!!! A deal with who? Devil? Angel? Please update!

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 18, 2011, 11:55:58 AM

Wow! :w00t: It's sooo INTERESTING!!!!!

I WANT MORE!!!  :tantrum:

 :temper: DON'T STOP!!!

It's really interesting :thumbup 8)

Ahem.. Hopefully it's Atsumina :nervous :peace:
But even if it isn't still please update~!!! :)

I need more  :mon cute:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: haruhi16 on November 18, 2011, 12:04:25 PM

i hope it's KOjiyuu or Saeyuki <333 hehe

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: luckymmsg on November 18, 2011, 12:42:37 PM

Interesting Prologue... :twothumbs


Please go on.


Like haruhi16, hoping it's KojiYuu, SaeYuki and one more AtsuMina. :wub: :wub:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Flean on November 18, 2011, 01:58:30 PM

WWOOOOOWWWW!!!!  :shock:  You just make me feel goosebumps all over!!!

The prologue is too interesting!!!  :wahaha:  I need to know the whole story!!!  :mon evillaff:

Please continue~~ :kneelbow: I might going to kill you, if you dare to stop.. :shifty:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: RJay on November 18, 2011, 03:05:17 PM

WHAT ARE SAYING!!! :angry1:
You shouldn't say stuff like that.
I find it really interesting :bingo:
I'm really curious about who it's about :dunno:

please update soon

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: karomuwi on November 18, 2011, 03:40:25 PM

Ooh~! Interesting title! It already made me interested! Plus the prologue! I'm very interested now! Please continue! And don't worry because everyone here is nice and they'll give you very helpful advices! Please do continue! ^^ I think I just got some energy to do mine because of you! haha

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Sok on November 18, 2011, 06:45:51 PM

Thank you everyone.  XD

 I'm so happy you like it. :mon lovelaff:

I'll try to update today.  :P

I'm not really sure who the pairs will be yet. :mon dunno: But I'll try to include KojiYuu, SaeYuki and AtsuMina.  :mon bat: or maybe not, don't know :mon sweat:

I'm working on the first ch. to give background of who it is.  Thankyou

 :mon bye: :mon bye: :tama-bye:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Flean on November 18, 2011, 06:57:13 PM

AtsuMina please~~  :bow: :bow: please.. please.. please~~  :mon pray2:

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Tejinashi on November 18, 2011, 08:20:53 PM

You should just keep your opinion, evrything you write I'm sure would be great, don't change your choice of couples or story-line or whatever it is because someone said so :) (although I love atsumina too and pray the couple will actualy be atsumina lol), think first then just make the choice. Of couse it's a should to listen to other people comment (of couse, do you know how hard it is for me to comment here, I'm just shy *blush*) but whatever it is, your own decision is still forever the best XD

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Sok on November 19, 2011, 12:56:38 AM

Thank you.

I'll be updating Chapter 1 later on Today. Just need to edit some stuff. :glasses:

But don't worry  :mon thumb:

cuz everything is still a mystery.  :mon wtfmm:

Title: "The Deal" Chapter 1
Post by: Sok on November 19, 2011, 01:41:09 AM

Here It is.  XD

Now let your imagination run wild.  :kekeke:

Chapter 1

“I don’t know anything about her, only the bit of info I got after she had summed me.  I am but a servant, who merely grants, hmm…how should I put it? Hmm…um… Ah!  One’s desires and wishes…well at a price, of course. But then again I also do as I please.”



Background

Humans label supernatural beings into two categories Demons and Angels.  Demons are supernatural beings who are summed to do The ‘Devil’s’ work, corrupting humans by using the 7deadly sins. Angels supernatural beings who work for ‘God’ to protect and watch over humans.

Well… what they don’t know is that the ‘Devil’ they so fear doesn’t really care about getting humans’ soul, he just simply wants entertainment. (There are two types of Demons; Low ranking demons, have no power so they cannot go to the human world, and High ranking Demons which are known as Devils.) He lets his top Devils, the Dark family, do what they pleased which sometime involves humans. While low ranking Demons are servants who stay in hell and work in the hell pits.

While the ‘God’ many worship just watches over them. (The there are also two types of Angels in Heaven which are low ranking Angels called Guardian Spirits, and high ranking Angels are just Angels.) He sometimes sends Guardian Spirits to protest humans. While with his top high ranking Angels on the other hand…Mostly cuz he was annoyed or angered by his Angels, he would send them down to the Human world. Their mission was to take over the lives of people who have been in comas and not responding. You would think that Devils would be the ones doing that, but when the Angels under ‘God’ got bored there was no way in Heaven or Hell ‘God’ was going to deal which them, especially when it came to his top Angels, the Wild Family. So he decided to have them become and take over human body that no longer held a soul, they still had their powers. By doing this he and the rest of his kingdom could have some peace and quiet. Which they all welcomed.



Well as for me, if you believe that I am a Devil who works for the ‘Devil’ or even an Guardian Spirit send down to protest and watch over someone or worse take over someone else body….OH HELL NO! YOU ARE WRONG!!!

In fact my family and I are neither Angels nor Devils. We are just immortals who happen to have the some powers that resemble theirs. But out of the two, we’re closer to the Devils…well we’re closer to the top family of Devils, known as the Dark Family. The reason begin we hang out and interact with them a lot; we’re like really close friends. And since we never really met an Angel before, I don’t really know if we would get along, but one thing I do know is that the high ranking Angels are called the Wild Family. I wander why? Well anyways..now that I think about it, it’s been a long time since I’ve seen my family.

To be exacted it’s been 50 long years since I last saw my family and friends. Well my family really isn’t my family by blood, it’s just that we have always known each other and we feel like we really are a family. We’re known as the Joker Family by both Angels and Devils, don’t know why, though. Either way it suits us. But still I miss them, and I cannot wait to see them. I hope that someone is stupid enough to break the seal and free me.

Suddenly, I see a bright flash of light next thing I know is that I’m in a room surrounded by fog, but out of that f***ing darkness. Thank you, whoever the hell you are! Then there’s a scream “Kyaaaa!! Demon!” What the hell? Are they talking to me? I turn around, something Soft yet hard hits me on my head *SMACK* and everything goes black.

Title: Re: "The Deal"
Post by: Flean on November 19, 2011, 01:58:35 AM

Woh!!!! finally chapter 1!!!  :on gay:  I'm loving it... nice description about the devil and the angel...  :on GJ:

I'm really curious about 'The Wild Family..'  :mon dunno: They were angel, yet wild?? Gah!!! This is so cool!!!  :mon fyeah:

Quote from: Sok on November 19, 2011, 01:41:09 AM

Suddenly, I see a bright flash of light next thing I know is that I’m in a room surrounded by fog, but out of that f***ing darkness. Thank you, whoever the hell you are! Then there’s a scream “Kyaaaa!! Demon!” What the hell? Are they talking to me? I turn around, something Soft yet hard hits me on my head *SMACK* and everything goes black.

LOL... Even immortal can passed out.. :wahaha:   

I need to know what happened next!!!!  :on lol: Please update soon...  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 1
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 19, 2011, 04:24:21 AM

 :w00t: Yea!! Chapter 1!  :peace: And it's interesting!
I can't wait to know what happen next :banghead:
Please update soon :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 1
Post by: karomuwi on November 19, 2011, 05:14:48 AM

YAY~! An update! If I can suggest some pairs, can you add some Mayuki, WMatsui and WTomo? It's just a suggestion. But I'm sure that I'll love and continue to love this story even if it's not them. Because it's just so INTERESTING  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 1
Post by: skytsuna on November 19, 2011, 05:18:40 AM

 :w00t: An Update!!! XD
I am really curious about what will happen later, please write more :twothumbs
I really want to know which pair it will be about :?
I want to know what happen next!!! XD

 :bow: :bow: Please Update Soon~~~ :thumbsup

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 1
Post by: Sok on November 19, 2011, 05:29:57 AM

Thank you.

I'm working on Chapter 2. So it might be update by tomorrow. Hopefully. :hehehe:

But it may or may not state who it's about. Yet.  :twisted:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 1
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 19, 2011, 06:30:02 AM

 :w00t: Oh! Hopefully you would be able to update tomorrow XD
But it will not be stated who it's about yet???? :banghead:
Wa... I'm so curious :panic: :panic:
 :smhid You're good at making me curious....!!

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: Sok on November 19, 2011, 09:42:05 AM

Hope you all like it. Two names are reveal  :kekeke: :on woohoo: But there more to come. :mon star:

Chapter2


The woman had only one remaining son out of the five, this son had six sons and only one daughter.   He was proud to have such a beautiful and loving daughter.  She was intelligent, patient, kind, serious, caring, friendly and very popular. She never had trouble getting a boyfriend if she wanted, but she never had one because she’s waiting for her true love to come and sweep her off your feet. (Even if she did get a boyfriend her brothers would most likely scare the daylights out of him.) Four of her six brothers Sano, Nite, Natsu, and Tea where very protective over her while the oldest Alex didn’t really seem to care about her or their family. The one she felt understood her was her brother Miku, who is the youngest out of her brothers, only two years older than her. She doesn’t spend a lot of time with them because they’re usually busy with work. But she doesn’t mind it cuz she rather spend it with her four best friends. Even when her brothers have free time to take her shopping or spend time with her, she would invite her friends. In the end her brothers looked like shopping carts with all the bags of stuff they were carrying.

She had first summoned that hummable servant the same day of her Birthday; don’t jump to conclusions thinking that it was a birthday gift or something. Nooo, her summoning them was due to her father who had just informed her that she was to marry. She had been told by her Father, who she dearly loved, that she would be marrying into the third wealthy family. He said, “This marriage would benefit our family greatly, we would no long need to cut workers.” “But father, I have never met this man and I don’t to marry him just cuz you wanted their family’s money!” “It doesn’t matter! You will marry whoever I see fit! Understood, young lady!”  At that moment she slapped him then ran to her room.  There she placed a pillow and cried out, “AHHHH! W-w-why! Why me!?”  Softly crying into her pillow she had remembered the stories that her grandmother would tell her as bedtime stories, long ago when she was 9 years old.
 One story in particular was about a ‘demon’, who grants the wishes of its summoner.  With a low soft voice she said, “Grandmother had only told that story once, but for some reason… I remember it clearly as if she’s telling it to me right now.” 


Flashback

My grandmother sat on the right side of the bed leaning her back on the headrest looking at her. She a small smile on her face “This demon obeys no one and does whatever it pleases.  It grants your wishes and desires without even a second thought. However, whoever becomes its master must beware of its trickery,” she chuckles a little bit before continuing “it does not have a gender, but it will become a man or a woman based on its master desires.  It will grant as many wishes and desires as long as you pay its price.” She stops, her face changes from happy into a sad one, she then looks at me. She’s now serious, I’ve never seen her with this expression and it kinda scares me. “You might think I’m making all this up just to get you to sleep, but it’s all real.  That demon is the only reason why this family exists.  It has been a long time since that demon has been summoned.  I believe it has been nearly 40 years since the head of our family, summoned it.  It is said that she sealed it into an amulet on a necklace that is passed down to the head of the family.” Wait. Granny isn’t the head of the family you? So, won’t you be the one who sealed it?” “Well, yes. My aren’t you such a smart young lady.” “Hehehe, thanks Granny.” “You’re welcome sweetie.” “By the way Granny.” “Yes, Sweetie?” “Where that necklace you’re talking about?” I tilt my head while pouting. She tilts her head side to side playing with something on her neck. “Hmm… I guess it would be the necklace I have on right now.  But there’s no need to worry, dear” said grandmother with a gentle grin on her face. “Okay.” I replied with a smile.


“The…neck-lace…you have… on, right… now?”  I spoke those words once more and remembered that she had given me that necklace on my tenth birthday a few weeks before her death. I remember seeing it lying around somewhere. “hmm… Where was it? I think the last time I saw it, it was somewhere in here… maybe under my dirty towels?”  I started looking for the necklace.

In the process I end up turning my room in-side-out. “And if I find it then maybe I can…I can… I can… wait. Why am I looking for it?  Is it important?  Do I need it? argh” I step on something sharp, I paused and lifted my foot from the sharp object. When I looked down I was surprised to find that it was the necklace I was looking for. But why was I looking for it? [/i]

She had forgotten why she was looking for it in the first place.


In that moment of confusion the door opened and her father entered the room with a man in his sixties. Oh my. . .Who’s this guy? He’s creepy… like jeepers creeper creepy.

“Mr. Kawano Jiro, this is my daughter, Yuki Kashiwagi. She’s 19.”
“Oh, hello Yuki.” Smiles.
“Sweetie say hello to Mr. Kawano Jiro.”
“H…He..hello, Mr. Kawano.” Shows fake smile.


You got to be kidding. This guy. Please don’t tell that… that’s the guy I have to marry. Dad, what were you thinking? This guy’s old enough to be my grandfather. Shit, he might be old enough to be Jeepers Creeper himself.


I saw my daughter’s expression change maybe it was due to the fact that her room was a mess so I told her, “Yuki, if you need me I’ll be in my study with Mr. Kawano. Okay?” “Ye..Yes, father.” After her answer both I and Mr. Kawano left her room. Once we reached my study I remembered that I had forgotten to tell her that Mr. Kawano had come here to talk about the design for the restaurant Miku is the head chef for. Well, whatever it’s not like she would think that he’s the guy she gonna marry. A few minutes later I heard cries and scream. After Mr. Kawano left I went to Yuki's room.


After my father had left I put up the necklace and held it in my hand on my chest. OhGod OhGodOhGod. OH…MY… GOD! Imma get married to Jeepers Creepers. Mom, I wished you were still alive to smack some sense into Dad. How could he marry off to Jeepers Creepers over there. At that moment I realized something important, it was that I would never met my Prince Charming. I began to cry my heart out, Oh God… I don’t wanna marry that old creepy old guy. Please God send someone to save me. I wanna met my prince charming and marry him.

A single tear drip dropped onto the necklace’s amulet and began to shine and heat up.

The necklace I was holding suddenly began to shine and heat up, burning me. I let drop to the floor then there was a loud click as if something had open. I looked at it and the amulet on the necklace was now open, suddenly there was a flash of light and fog surround the amulet. Then I noticed that there stood a figure of something. I scream “Kyaaaa!! Demon!” I panicked and was freaky out.  I graded the first thing I saw, which was a dirty Towel, I twisted it and connected the ends and swag as hard as I could as the figure turned around. After a loud *SMACK* to the head it fell to the floor, I took this opportunity to run for. I run out my room all the way to my brother Nite’s room which was on the other side of the mansion. (A good distance of 2640 feet away from her room.) I went into his room and hid in his long towel cabinet. Inside the safety of the towel cabinet tried to calm myself down.

“It was just my imagination running wild. It’s all due to stress. Yes! All due to stress caused by the marriage to that jeepers creepers. Yes! Let’s go with stress. It’s all due to stress. Yes! It’s been a stressful day. It’s all cuz of stress.”

Then I heard a little giggle from outside of the cabinet door. And suddenly opens revealing a person staring back at me. S***






Not sure when I'll update Chapter 3. :cool2: I'm kinda drained out right now.  :err: :stoned: :frustrated: :scared:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: Flean on November 19, 2011, 10:23:42 AM

Woh!!!!  :ding: Yuki!!!!  :on lol: now i wonder who's the demon...  :glasses:

take your time.. I'll be waiting for next update...  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 19, 2011, 05:26:23 PM

OH!! Chapter 2!! :w00t:
It's Yuki~!!! XD
I hope it's Mayuki :peace: :bow:
I'm really curious :banghead: What's going to happen next? :?

Thanks for the Update 8)
Please update soon :bow: :)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: qyyzz101 on November 19, 2011, 05:39:07 PM

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
i wish it's saeyuki :love:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: Haruko on November 19, 2011, 06:31:40 PM

i hope too saeyuki couple

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 2
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 20, 2011, 01:18:52 AM

I 'really' hope it's about SaeYuki :gmon twirl:

Update soon!  :)

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 3
Post by: Sok on November 20, 2011, 01:46:04 AM

I was reading a few fanfic earlier  XD that motivated me to update.  :thumbsup

Okay. I must warn to Not jump into conclusion. when you read Chapter 3. Okay? This ch. is goin to be about 2 to 3 parts.
Again, DON'T GUESS WHICH PAIRS UNTIL I UPDATE THE WHOLE OF CHAPTER 3.

Thanks Heres



Chapter 3
 
Part 1

When I came to I was laying on the floor.
Where am I? Is this a pig stall or just a joke? What the hell happened in here? Don’t tell me I interrupted a rubbery? Wait that cannot be cuz they said Demon, not ‘OH SHIT WE’RE CAUGHT!’
I got up from the floor and looked around, my sight stopped on a towel laying on the floor. It was twisted up and the ends fold together. “OH HELL NO!”  Please… Please tell me I was knock out with a towel. “Well that examples why it was soft yet hard.” Wait WTH am I thinking I should be angry that the person hit with a dirty towel! Whoever hit me is going to pay. *SMIRK*

*Knock**knock* “Sweetie are you  in there?” Oh Shit. Gotta hide. I panicked and jump into the bed and covered myself at the same time the door open. Lucky the bed isn’t messing or smelly. Then the man speaks, “Sweetie I know you’re upset about having an arranged marriage.” Marriage? Hmmm? Maybe I can use this.

“Um”
“I just came to check up on you because I heard crying and screaming.”
“Hmmm” I need to keep quiet. Don’t want to give him the wrong impression.
“Also I wanted to tell you that Mr. Kawano Jiro is not the person you’re going to marrying, okay?” Whoa sounds like a stalker’s name. haha. Well, whatever. Note to self use this. (Evil smile)
“I just wanted to tell you that okay?”
“Un” Damn! How long is he planning on taking? I need to get the hell outta here! But first have some fun with this ‘Sweetie’ of yours. Hehe.
“Well,…okay Sweetie. I’ll see you at diner.”
“Un” Hells ya! About time he leaves! Well now off to find this ‘Sweetie’ of yours. *Smirk*


I got out of the room and heard a loud *THUMP* which seems to have come from the other side of the mansion. Wonder if it leads to this ‘Sweetie’? *Smirk*  I start running in that direction to which the sound came from. Once I get there, I stepped into the only room around there. AT first I don’t see anything, but then when I got near the bathroom I could hear someone talking to themselves. Are they stupid, crazy, or on something? Well, I think I’ll go with their on something. *sign and head shake* I walk into the bathroom but didn’t see anyone. Then I heard, “its all cuz of stress.” Coming from the towel cabinet, I giggled a little before opening the top cabinet door revealing a girl scarily staring at me while I stared back.    

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: Flean on November 20, 2011, 02:05:18 AM

Woh!!!! she not gonna marry that Kawano Jiro???  :hehehe:  hahaha... this is interesting... Gah!!! i wanna know who's the DEMON!!!!  :on lol:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 20, 2011, 05:59:15 AM

I really want to know who that immortal is!!!!! :banghead:
Please Update Soon :panic: :panic:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: Megumi on November 21, 2011, 12:05:24 AM

 :hehehe: Interesting! I've just began to read this fic today.

Hrrm all I can say is....AWESOME!

Waiting for your next update  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: kahem on November 21, 2011, 06:16:32 PM

I wanna know who is the demon too, update please!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: RenaChii on November 21, 2011, 09:23:40 PM

Hope it's SaeYuki~!! (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)
 
PLEEASEE~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_cny0.gif)

I'm waiting for  the next chapter~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/kekeke.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 1
Post by: Sok on November 21, 2011, 11:16:04 PM

I'll be updating Ch.3 Part 2 and an Extra about the angels by this evening.

Thank you everyone.

Title: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: Sok on November 22, 2011, 01:31:00 AM

Here are The Extra about the Angels as well as Ch. 3 Part 2. I hope you enjoy it, but remember not to guess the pairings until Part 3 is updated.

*Extra*

In Heaven

Four Angels stood in front of their LORD. "YOU 4! I'VE HAD IT!" The LORD yelled full of annoyance and anger towards them. "You'll be going down to the Human World to do the takeover mission; the family has the same name as your Family. Understood?" He had managed to calm himself down and speak in an authority voice.
"Yes! My Lord." All four said in unison.
"Good." he heaved out a sign. "Now leave immediately." They left the chamber and he let out another sign. "Man, these four are more like Devils than Angels." Shaking his head. "Well at least we will be having Peace and Quiet in here." Cheers in the background from all Angels and Guardian Spirits.

With the Four Angels

"Is it just me, or can you hear cheers from everyone?" The long redish brown haired asked the others.
"Nah it's your imagination. Everyone here loves us." The shortest of the four replied.
"Hell ya! We're going to the Human World!" A black short hair yelled from the top of her lungs jumping up and down from excitement.
"What the?!" Before the long brown hair could finish she was interrupted by a short brown hair.
"Sae, we're not going there for good behavior. Btw we have to take over a human's body and live in their place." "Yes, I know that, in fact we all know that, Mariko." Sae retorted.
"Oh! Btw Marichan. Who are we being? I mean becoming?" The shortest asked Mariko. "Yeah! Mayu's right. I wanna know too." Sae added excitedly. "Sorry guys., but I have no clue. Haruna's the one with the info. Why not ask her?" Mariko deadpanned.
"Oohhh."Both Sae and Mayu deadpanned, looked at each other before turning to face Haruna, who was behind them.
"So...um...ano..Haruna?" Sae asked uncertain. "Hm?" Haruna responded half out of it. "Who are we becoming? And what's the family name?" Mayu asked her with a bored and tired tone of voice. Which pissed and annoyance Haruna. "Weren't you listening to our LORD! Huh, Cyborg?" "Nope! Not really, too excited! That's why we're asking you." Sae abd Mayu said in unison aith a big smile on their faces. While Mariko on the other hand inwardly face palmed and signed. Please Haruna control yourself. You know these two become idiots when going somewhere new.
Haruna heaved a heavy sign."Okay. Our Lord said the family has the same name as ours." Before she could finish Sae interrupted. "Which means?" Sae asked and tilted her head. Mayu answered for Haruna. "It means their name is the Wild Family just I like ours. Now stop interrupting. Will ya!" Meanwhile haruna thought: Can I kill or at least beat some sense into her? No, have to control myself. Well until the mission starts *devilish smile*
"Oh! She's in space out mode." Sae informed poking Haruna's arm. "Huh? Oh. You're right she's in airhead mode. haha" Mayu agreed with Sae. Mariko's thoughts: If only you knew. Haruna's real personality, it'd scary you two. haha. The clueless have it easy.
Once Haruna came back to reality, she began to explain everything to them.


Three Hours Later
She finished explaining, it would have gone faster if Sae didn't have to comment on how similar that family is to them. She explained the family's businesses, relationships with other families (lucky that family only close to The Royal Family), and of course the people they will be becoming (didn't know their gender).
"Now Mayu, Sae, and Marichan, once we become them. It will seem that they were never in a coma to the people around. Understand?" Haruna told them.
"Yes,"
"Btw Sae and Mayu please be careful. We don't want any unwanted attention." Mariko said in a tired voice.
"What do you mean?" Both in Unison tilting their head. "What she means is that even though we're human bodies we can still use our powers." She pause and glares at both Sae and Mayu making them sallow hard. "So, Do not use your powers to attract women or other people's attention. That's an o-r-d-e-r! From God too." She said it in such a cold and commanding voice that send chill down their spines. Mariko's thoughts: Wow. She held herself back.
"Y-Yes, Sir!" "What?!" "W-w-we mean Haruna!" Both said in unison, fear can be heard in their voices. Their thoughts were even in unison: Whoa. She's scary when angry. note to self never ever anger Haruna. Hope whoever falls for her is strong. Mostly hope that person's fearless to stare death in the eyes.


Somewhere in the Human World

"Aaachoooooo!"
"What's wrong? Got a cold?"
"Hm?... Nah. I think someone's talking about me. Anyways let's get back to work."
"Okay."



TBC






Part 2

Yuki=brown   Unknown person= Purple

She looks like a scared chicken staring at me then she composed herself. WOW! She’s beautiful. She looks like a princess from one of those fairy tales who waits for Prince Charming to arrive and sweep her feet…wait that doesn’t sound right. Was it sweeping her off her feet instead? Well, whatever. Man she looks like she wants to be teased. *devilish smirk*

There stood a girl staring back at me. She looks a fragile princess. You know the type that cannot do anything but relay on people to do it for her. Well until I saw the devilish smirk she was giving which also gave me a chill.

“Hello, I am the person you summoned earlier.”
Woww. She has a sweet and tender voice.
Is this girl slow, really on something or just plain rube? *Cough* “By the way my name is Rena Matsui. And you are?”
“Oh, Sorry. I’m Yuki Kashiwagi. Nice to meet you.”  Oh shit I’m starting to get cramps.
“Excuse me, but do you mind getting out of there?” I offer my hand to her.
“Oh! Yes! Thank you, Rena.” Whoa she moves fast, already calling me by my first name. I took the hand offered and got out of my hiding place (top part of the towel cabinet). She’s stronger than I thought and has soft hands.

Sorry if there are misspelling.

“So you’re here to grant my wish?”

It seems she doesn’t know. *devilish smile* Oh I can play with this hehehe. “So anyways,  you summoned cuz you don’t wanna marry Mr. Kawano Jiro, right?” Oh what’s this? Her react is so funny, as if she ate a sour lemon. ahhh!  Let’s see more.

“H-Ho-How did you know?” Can she read minds?

 Hehehe. Let’s play shall we?*evil smile* “Well you did summon me ‘Master,’” Oh how I hate using the word ‘Master’ But it’s all to play this fool. “So, shouldn’t I at least why I was summoned. Hmm? Beside wasn’t it because you want him dead?” I tilt my head to the right with a small smile on my face.

“Wh-Wha-What?! No! nonono, No! I just don’t want to marry him at all! I swear!”  Oh God that was close. For a second there I was thinking that I actually wanted him dead. Good thing Granny warned me about her trickery.

Ahhh maaann. I didn’t get that much reaction from her. Gotta think of something quick…*Ding* “Oh are you sure you don’t want that? Are you sure that deep down you don’t want him D..E..A..D?” Now, let’s see those reactions.
 Wait, what?! I cannot really want that? Right? Well Granny did say she grants your wishes and desires, so maybe I really want him de…Wait no! This is just another of her tricks.
Ooooh my… I’m having so much fun. Her reactions change so quickly. I wonder wht she’s thinking? Well, whatever it doesn’t matter. I’m more interested in her quick change of emotions hehehe. OH SHIT! She’s angry.

“NO! I JUST DO NOT WANT TO MARRY HIM! Understood?” Shit she’s scaring when she’s angry. Man, that was close, almost fell into her trap.

“Okay!” *big grin* Damn it! That didn’t go as planned. Well I still got one thing. “But”
“But?” Oh no. What does she want?
“But you have to pay up, first.” *Smirk*
I’m not liking that smirk on your face.  What’s she planning? “Pay up?”
“Yes! You know in exchange for you not to marry him. You don't honestly except me to do it for free do you?”
“O-oh. Okay. I’ll pay whatever it is!”
“Great! Now close your eyes.” *devilish smile*
Oh God there’s that smile. “Do I really have to?”
“Yes! Beside you just said you’d do whatever it is. Now close your eyes and once you pay up I’ll do my part of the deal. Just to make it clear I promise that the person you’ll be marry will not be Mr. Kawano.  Okay? ”
 “o-o-okay.” I close my eyes. What’s she going to do? Or is she taking this opportunity to leave me not keeps her end of the deal?

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: Flean on November 22, 2011, 01:59:32 AM

WOH!!!!! Rena-chan!!! WOH!!! WOH!!!  :mon fyeah:   I didn't expect that!!!  :mon determined: this getting interesting~~~  :mon star:

Q : why the wild family was sent to human world??  :mon suspect:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: Sok on November 22, 2011, 02:11:15 AM

Flean you'll find out in the upcoming Extra 2.  :ding:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 22, 2011, 03:58:44 AM

 :w00t: Oh! Update!!
I was shocked!! It was Rena XD I didn't expect that :grin:
I wonder what is it that Yuki will have to 'pay up' :?

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
 :bow: Please Update Soon ;)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 22, 2011, 04:42:51 AM

Woah.....At first I think it was Mayu. Haha! I didn't expect it would be Rena.
Anyway,thx for the update! Update soon! :tama-bigheart:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: RenaChii on November 22, 2011, 01:42:19 PM

It's RENA! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/stoned.gif)

Devil Rena~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_bleedy56.gif)

Please update soon~! (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: Megumi on November 22, 2011, 03:38:25 PM

Waaaaa! It's Rena-chan!  :luvluv2:

LoL this will be interesting...I wonder what Rena will do with Yuki.

Thank you for your update!  :on cny1:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Extra & Ch. 3 Part 2
Post by: kahem on November 23, 2011, 09:23:08 AM

Yuki/Rena? *big grin*

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2
Post by: Sok on November 24, 2011, 04:43:48 PM

Hey guys I had a really hard tine trying to figure out Yuki had to pay. Hope you like my decision. Thank you for reading.

 Ch. 3 Part 3

Yuki- Brown    Rena- Red

“O-okay.” I close my eyes. Next thing I know is something soft pressing against my lips. It tastes like strawberries. Sudden it begins to move gently against my lips. Whatever it is it feels soo good. Before I knew it I was responding back, I wrapped my arms around her neck deepening our kiss. Are kisses always this good?
I decided that the payment would be a kiss, a short one of course. When I was about to pull out she wrapped her arms around me. Oh my *smirk* seems little she’s enjoying our little kiss. Now let’s see how far I can go. I wrapped my arms around her waist to see if she would push me back, nothing happened instead she pressed her body against me. She remembers me of someone I know. I started to descend my right hand down and *squished*
*gasp* Oh god, she’s squished my ass. I should really stop this but I don’t want it to stop. I bite her bottom lip in responds.
She’s biting my lip, does this mean she wants more? Is this like her first time kissing or something? Well whatever let’s continue. She opens her month and I sneak my tongue in and start exploring. When *ring**ring* she breaks the kiss to answer her cell.
Oh god that was close. If my cell hadn’t ringed I don’t know where we would have stopped if at all.
“H-he-hello? Yuki …speaking.”
“Hey Yuki! Why you panting? Were you excising or something?”
“Oh Hey Tomomi. And yeah something like that.” I calm down.
“Oh. Well I was just calling to make sure you were okay since you left kinda upset earlier today. Chiyuu~”
“Oh that. I’m okay now. Well I have to go. Talk to you at school. Bye.”
“Oh. Ok. Byebye. Chiyuu~”
I so glad her cell rings if not I would have done something stupid. That would have given me problems with her back home. I was about to leave when Yuki spoke.
 “So you’re going..” I cut her off before she could finish. “It’s already done. You’ll be marry someone else.” “Thank you, Rena.” “No problem. And thank you for the kiss.” Wow she’s the color of a cherry. I turned towards the door to leave but she stopped me once more. “Where are you going?” “Home. I’m going to my home since I granted your one and only wish.” “What do you mean one and only wish.” “You’re lucky I didn’t hurt you for what your grandmother did to me. Okay. Btw your cells been ringing, aren’t you going to answer that?” “what? Oh right.” I answer my cell and when I’m done I turn to see that she’s gone.

I didn’t even notice I had eaten dinner and now sitting with my father waiting for my Fiance and his family. “Sweetie the Wild Family is a great family they’ll take good care of you, I promise.” “hm.” I still can’t believe my first kiss that I have been saving for my prince was wasted on a Demon. I officially sold my soul to da Devil. Wait did he just say Wild Family? What’s up with that name? Oh they’re here. Wow the shortest is so cute! Kyaa! He looks like a doll. I hope he’s my fiancé or the tall muscular short black hair one. Ah! Dad you actually did something right. They’re both my ideal prince.




Flean this is for you and anyone who wants to know why they were kick out.

Extra 2


“What’s wrong? Haruna?” Mariko is the first to enter. Mayu’s the second to enter. “Are you hurt or something?” Mayu asked not really concerned. “This is what’s wrong!” Sae finally enters and says “Oh come on Haruna. It’s not that bad.” Trying to calm down Haruna.
“No! This is all your’s and Mayu’s fault!”

Flashback
“Okay girls let’s get going.” Mariko says.
“Okay.” The three said in unison.
The four Angels come crashing into their new bodies.

“Ugh! That hurt.” A male with reddish brown with dark red high lights said while getting up and starching his stiff body.
At the same time the room to the left of his
“Ugh, I didn’t think we were going to crash land into our bodies. Man my back is killing me.” The tall slim black hair male says while getting out of bed. He then spells HEAL in a yellow light healing all his sore muscles. “Ah! That’s better!” Feeling relieved from his back pains and heading out the door when he hears a loud *Kyaa!*.
Same time in the room across his
A tall muscular short black hair male was jumping off the wall due to his excitement. “Yah! I’m a man! Now I can play with as many girls as I want!” He was now jumping up and down the bed when heard a loud *Kyaa!* which causes him to fall on his head.
Same time in the room to the right of his
A doll like male is waking up. “Haaaa! That was a good nap. Should do this more often.” Getting out of bad and goes to the toilet to do his business when suddenly he hears a loud *Kyaa!* which caused him to miss. “Damn! It hit the ceiling…well it isn’t my job to cleaning.” He leaves to check what the screaming about.
End of Flashback
“Oh come on Haruna. Don’t be like that.” Sae says.
“If it wasn’t for twos behaviors I wouldn’t be a man now. In fact we wouldn’t even have been sent down here in the first place!” Haruna hissed. “Come on, like I said it’s not that bad being a man.” Sae tries to convince Haruna. “That’s cuz you have always wanted to be a man!” “Okay, you got me there but still.” Before Sae could finish Mayu cut in. “You have no choice but to accept it. So why bother complaining.” Mayu said with a wth let’s just try it attitude. “Besides Haruna this is as much your fault as Sae’s and Mayu’s.” Mariko added. “Hey! Don’t group me with those two! I ain’t a pervert like those two.” Haruna argued back. “Hey! We ain’t perverts, we simply like skinship!” Mayu answered back Smiling. “Yeah, and I’m the pope.”  Mariko deadpanned. “Well hello Mr. Pope, I’m Sae.” “Not funny Sae.” Haruna said. “Besides no matter how you look at it. It’s all three of your faults, I’m the innocent bystander. If only we weren’t related then I would still be in heaven.” Mariko shakes her head and let out a heavy sigh while messaging his temples. “Sorry Marichan but it’s more of Sae’s fault.” Mayu pointed to Sae. Sae “What?! How so? Huh?” “What? Dude you created a strip club in Heaven and began to take several females’ purity which goes against one of God’s rules. You must be married before any sexual activity. Besides you slept with God’s wife and nearly unpurified his daughter!” “You what?!” Both Mariko and Haruna yelled in unison turning to face Sae who gave them a I-didn’t-do-anything-wrong look which somehow pissed them off. “Well…in my defense I was drunk when I did that! And she’s the one that took advantage of me. And as for his daughter, she’s HOT. In my defense.” “How is her being hot gotta do with you defending yourselves?” Mayu asked with an are-you-an-idiot voice. “Wait. If it has to do with flirting and touching girls then you are as much at fault then I am. Mayuyu!” Sae retorted. “Hey! I’ll admit I like flirting, touching, kissing and other stuff with girls but I ain’t to blame for this. If you think about it, it’s all Haruna’s fault.” Mayu said in an innocent voice and turned pointing her finger to Haruna. “Yeah! It’s all your fault, Haruna!” Sae also turning to point at Haruna. “Wait! WHAT?! Marichan help me out here.” She turned to Mariko who shrugged. “They’re right. If you hadn’t beat the crap outta the guys who were should to do this mission we would still be in Heaven right now.”

In Heaven with God: No! You would have still been sent down. (In the background you can hear LMFAO - Party Rock Anthem. Everyone parting hard and cheering. “Yeah we’re freeeee!” “Let’s keep dancing!” “Finally!” “Hey! Don’t forget! Pppeeeaaacccceee N Quuuiiieeetttt!” “Yaeh!”)

“Hey! How sure you about that Marichan? Besides it wasn’t my fault it was self-defense.” “How so?” all three asked curiously. “They wouldn’t go away when I asked them to, and then one out of them graded my ass and tried a kiss me. So I did the only logical thing to do, which was to beat the living crap outta them.” Big smile. “Wouldn’t you girls. I mean guys have done the same?” She asks the three. “I understand where your coming from.” Mariko said. “Yeah, but you didn’t really have to beat them from Top high ranking Angels to low ranking flowing spirit thingies. I feel sorry for them.” Mayu added. “Mayu’s right they were God’s number 1’s. But I never thought that someone other than God could degrade Angels in ranks.” Sae added. “You can but you have to be powerful then them.” Mariko informed Sae. “Well now thanks to me, we’re number1!” Haruna said in an innocent and happy voice. “well anyways what were we talking about before the whole blame game?” Haruna asked tilting her head. “You’re a man now. That’s what.” Mariko replied. “Oh, whatever.” “Whatever?!” The three said surprised. “Well anyways one of us well be getting married.” Haruna added in a bored tone. “But we’ll choice who marries her once we meet her, okay?” Haruna states. “Okay.” The three answer.



Don't know if the pics will work but here they are
Pictures of Markio, Haruna, Sae, Mayu.
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If they don't work please tell me a way to upload them. Thank you.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2 Nov. 24
Post by: Flean on November 24, 2011, 05:57:59 PM

Yuki and Rena scene was HOT!!!  :mon mischief:  I think I'm gonna like this pair now~~  :mon inluv: and chiyu~~ you're calling at the wrong time~~  :mon nyah:

I LOLed...  :lol: at the reasons why they were kick out...

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2 Nov. 24
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 24, 2011, 06:41:33 PM

Woah!!!!! Interesting!!!!!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2 Nov. 24
Post by: kahem on November 24, 2011, 07:21:06 PM

Is useless to know who is the more in fault, they are all in fault for our bigger pleasure xD
Rena/Yuki kiss was hot!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2 Nov. 24
Post by: RenaChii on November 24, 2011, 09:17:29 PM

Yeah~ Yuki x Rena was so hot~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/k-inlove.gif)

Who is going to marry Yuki~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/dunno.gif) CURIOUS! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/frustrated.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 3 Part 3 & Extra 2 Nov. 24
Post by: Sok on November 24, 2011, 11:38:54 PM

Hey guys this is a little hint for the next chapter.


Wow Sae’s hot! Hope I marry him.

Kyaa! Mayu’s so cute! I wouldn’t mind being married to him, either.

Sae’s and Mayu’s thought: I wouldn’t mind doing things to her. *smirk* I have to claim her before Mayu/Sae.

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Sok on November 28, 2011, 01:55:17 AM

I'm not really sure who Yuki should marry, so they'll have to fight for her love. Hope you enjoy. XD



Chapter 4

“Yuki this is the Wild Family. The family you’ll be marrying into. Wild this is my daughter.” Her father said.
“Hello, my name is Yuki Kashiwagi. Pleasure to meet you.” She gives them a bow.
“Hello, my name’s Mariko Shinoda, but please call me Mario. I’m the head of the Wild Family.” A tall slim black haired man said giving a slight bow.
“I’m Sae Miyazawa. Nice to meet you.” the tall muscular short black haired man said smiling. Yuki’s thoughts: Wow he’s hot! Hope I marry him.
“Hey! I’m Mayu Watanabe, but for you and only you I’ll be Mayuyu.” The doll like boy said smiling. Yuki’s thoughts:  Kyaa! He’s so cute! I wouldn’t mind being married to him.
Sae’s and Mayu’s thought: I wouldn’t mind doing things to her. *smirk* I have to claim her before Mayu/Sae.
“Hello, my name is Haruna Kojima, but I think it’d be easier for you to just call me Riku. Since there’s a big chance you’ll screw up my name anyways. You do look like the type that screws up a lot.” He said with a matter-of-fact voice. Yuki’s thoughts: Damn! He’s blunt. Btw was his name Yaruna, Yoona, or Haurna? Ugh! Screw it I’ll just go with what he said to call him by Riku.
“Riku! That’s isn’t nice.” Sae and Mayuyu yelled in unison. “Sorry about that.” Mario apologizes.
Yuki’s thoughts: Wow, all four are handsome. But I’m more into Sae and Mayuyu. Wait.

“Excuse me. Sorry for asking this, but why are you called the Wild Family? And what are your family businesses.” Yuki asks. “Oh, That. Don’t worry it’s nothing bad.” Mayu answers with a smile and winks at Yuki. He gets close to her and whispers in her ear in a seductive voice. “If you want I can show you.” Yuki gulps. “Hey! Don’t flirt with my future wife!” Sae yells while pulling Mayu away from Yuki. “Or what?” Mayu retorted with a evil smile. “Or I’ll…” Sae was cut off by Mario. “Okay, okay calm down you two.”
“Sir, did you not tell her?” Riku asked Yuki’s father. “Oh! No, I forgot to inform her, but please you tell her.” Riku turned to Mario and whisper to him. “Wtf. This old man can’t do anything. Can we get rid of him and just keep his restaurant and business shares?” “Take it easy Riku, human seem to be slower than us Angels.” Mario whispered back. “But this guy’s useless.” “Remember you promise me you would hold your tongue. Meaning you can’t hurt others feelings.” “I shouldn’t have promise that, then” Said to himself.
He turned his attention back to Yuki. “Ok. We’re da Wild Family due to our family businesses. We are the third wealthiest & richest family.” we’re also angels but you don’t need to know that.) Yuki: His spacing out. Is he an airhead? “We own the three famous Love Hotels in Asia, Shi in Japan, Nou in China, and Fen in Taiwan, the two top Adult stores in Japan, number 1 casino in Russia and a few here in Japan, two VIP strip clubs, Adult magazine, overseas A.V. Production Company, and the Escort Agency here in Japan.” He said in a bored and tired voice. All the information stunned Yuki. Yuki’s thoughts: Wow. Wait, aren’t all those perverted stuff.
After Riku’s explanation, Mayu had just realized what Sae had said a while ago. “Hey! Wait! What the hell do you mean with your future wife? HUH?! We never agreed on who was going to marry her!” Mayu yelled at Sae. Yuki’s thoughts: He’s so cute when his angry. It makes me wnna…wait what was I thinking. She shakes her head. “What did…” Sae was about to yell at Mayu by was cut off by Mario and Riku. “He does have a point.” Riku continued in a bored and sleepy voice. “We never decided who was to marry her, we just agreed to the marriage thing. That’s all.” “Riku’s right. Well since Sae and Mayu are the youngest and close to her age. Why don’t one of you two marry her?” Mario said in a calm voice. “I WILL!” Both Sae and Mayu yelled stepping closer to Yuki.
Yuki turned to her father and whispered. “Um? Excuse me, father?” “Yes, sweetie?” “So. You didn’t really get me a fiancé. You just want me to marry into their family.” “Yes!” He answers excitedly smiling at Yuki. Yuki’s thoughts: Great! His selling his only daughter.
“Hey! U TWO!” Riku yelled smacking the two hard on their head. “Itai!” “It seems to me that both of you want her. So how about trying to win her heart?” “What do you mean? Riku-nii?” Both Sae and Mayu turned to face Riku. “Don’t call me Riku-nii, or else.” “Or else what?” Both said and tilted their head to one side. “Or else I’ll beat you like I did those guys.” *Gulp* “Sorry, please continue.” “Okay. What I mean is that she choices who she wants to marry outta the two of you.” “I agree.” Yuki’s father yells. “Okay.” Mario says and turns to Yuki. “So you will choice who to marry. Don’t worry you don’t have to choice right now, but please choice within 4 months from now.” Mario said in a sweet and caring voice. Yuki’s thought: Maybe I should marry him?  *Blush*
“Okay! Whoever you wish to marry I’ll be 100% behind you. No matter who it is.” Her father said excitedly pushing the four young men out the door and closing it. Damn is that how you treat your future in-laws? No wonder my mother’s parents don’t like you.

Outside the said door
“Hey Guys! I think this is going to be fun.” Sae laughed. “Yeah, but don’t think I’ll go easy on you.” Mayu playfully said getting into their car. “Don’t use your powers! You have to win her heart the old fashion way!” Mario and Riku yelled and sighed. Why try when they never listen. *sigh*

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Tejinashi on November 28, 2011, 04:08:26 AM

OH EM GEEE,this just got more and more interesting XD, whoever Yuki is with is fine by me, I just not really into SaeYuki -_-, but don't worry about me, just go with your own choice like I said before, whatever it will going to be is definitely nice, I think so XD

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: RenaChii on November 28, 2011, 08:38:12 AM

It's MORE interesting~ (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

Rena X Yuki X Mayu X Sae?! who will win Yuki's heart?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/k-inlove.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/kneelbow.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 28, 2011, 04:39:48 PM

Wow!!! It's really getting so much interesting!!! XD
Competition for Yukirin between Sae and Mayu :lol:
Although I hope Mayu wins :nervous

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Please Update Soon :bow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Sok on November 30, 2011, 05:53:13 AM

Hey Everyone if you're curious about how the Wild family looks like here are the links

Mario
file:///H:/working%20fanfic/fanfic%20pic/mario.jpg

Sae
file:///H:/working%20fanfic/fanfic%20pic/sae.jpg

Mayu
file:///H:/working%20fanfic/fanfic%20pic/mayu.jpg

Riku
file:///H:/working%20fanfic/fanfic%20pic/Riku%20likes%20fight.bmp

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Yagami.Rai on November 30, 2011, 08:31:44 AM

I can't see the pics.... :(

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: kahem on November 30, 2011, 08:57:46 AM

A lot of suitors for Yuki hehehe nice!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: AKBlover_99 on November 30, 2011, 09:52:12 AM

I can's see the pic of the handsome boys too..... :sweatdrop:
Oh,yeah! Thx for the update!!!!    :tama-bigheart:
Update soon! :peace:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 4 Nov. 27
Post by: Sok on December 02, 2011, 08:52:15 PM

Sorry about that.  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

I'm also working on updating Chapter 5. I'm currently half way so it MIGHT be updated AROUND this evening.   :on woohoo: :on gay: :on GJ:

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: Sok on December 03, 2011, 03:08:22 AM

Chapter 5

After leaving Yuki, Rena arrived at her family’s Mansion, The Joker Family Mansion.
“I’m finally home.” Rena said to no one happy to be back home. Good thing no one knows who the members of The Joker Family, or else they’d be freaking out about one’s age. Rena then walks through the Steel Gate and to the front door. She opens it and walks in to find the head of their family sitting in the living room reading over several papers. Rena takes a deep breath and screams. “I’m home!” “Welcome back….EH?! Rena?!” “Hey, Takamina. Where’s everyone else?” “TAKAMINA! Did you just scream Rena?” Someone yells from the second floor but was ignored. “Rena! Where have you been?” Takamina screamed at Rena setting down the papers she was reading. “hehehe…Locked up. Why? Did I miss anything juicy?” “EH?! Lock up?!” Three figures screamed after coming down the stairs. The moment they noticed who their leader was talking to, the youngest ran towards Rena and gives her a bear hug. “RENA! RENA! RENA! YOU’RE FINALLY BACK! I’VE MISSED YOU SOOOOO MUCH!” “C-ca..can…can’t…I..I can’t…breath…NEED AIR!” Rena said trying to escape from Jurina’s bear hug. “Jurina! Let her go! Can’t you see you’re suffocating her!” The other two figures yelled at Jurina who let go of her death grip on Rena. “Sorry Rena. I got too excited.” “It’s okay and thanks Tomochin and Michan.” “No problem.” “Btw Rena, why did you say locked up? Also the fact that you left for 50 years without telling us.” Tomochin asked curious. “Yeah! Especially without telling me! I’ve been lonely at these nights without you.” Jurina yelled at Rena. “Oh that, sorry.” Rena’s thought: don’t really like sleeping in the same room with you, Jurina cuz you do stuff to me when I’m asleep. “Remember the woman I had made a deal with 120 years ago.” “Yeah.” They all responded. “Well about 50 years ago she had sealed me in a necklace.” “How?” “Don’t know.” “When did you escape?” “Just a little way ago I was freed.” “By who? Female or male?” Jurina asked curious if it was a female. “Don’t know. Now let’s leave it at that.” Rena quickly responded. “Who freed…?” Jurina asked once more but was cut off by Takamina. “Okay we will leave it at that Rena.” Jurina glared at Takamina who responded with ‘I’ll lock up so you won’t see her’ look.
“Thanks. Btw Takamina.” “What is it Rena?” “I don’t really know how to say this but…” “What is it? You know you can tell me anything.” “Well, it’s just that. Dude, I know that Tomochin, you and I can change our genders and that you have a boyish personality, but you didn’t really need to turn into a man especially when you’re in women’s attire. It looks disturbing.” Rena tries to hold her laughter but fails and beings to laugh with Miichan, Tomochin and Jurina who also realized what Takamina was wearing. “What? Eh? Stut up! I didn’t have any men attire and it’s not my fault, I’m like this.” Takamina says with a depressed look. “What does you mean?” Jurina asked. “Just use your power to turn back into a woman.” Tomochin said. “I tried but it does work.” Takamina said with a sad voice. “Really? What happened to make you this way?” Rena asked curious. Takamina turned to face Miichan who just smirked. “It’s her fault!” Takamina yelled pointing her point towards Miichan. “What?” Juarin, Tomochin, and Rena asked confused. “I’m like this because of you! Miichan!” “What? Cuz of me? What are you talking about, Bakamina?” Miichan asked innocently. While the other three were still confused. “What do you mean, Takamina?” Tomochin asked getting closer to Miichan. “Takamina, you’re saying Miichan made you this way? But how?” Rena asked putting the pieces together. “Yes! She give me something saying it was ‘Gatorade.’ I drank it and began to feel hot and sweating then puff. I’m a man.” Takamina explains in even voice. “Awesome! Can I have one?” Jurina shouted jumping up and down. “Jurina calm down.” Rena tried to calm Jurina down but didn’t work and she was beginning to annoyed. *SLAP* “Itaiiii! Rena why did you slap me?” Jurina said showing Rena your sad puppy look. “Cuz! U won’t calm down!” Jurina thoughts:I’ll get you back later *smirk* I’ll make up for the 50 years we haven’t seen each other. In that moment Rena felt a chill run down her shine and a cold sweat.
“Miichan you can reverse it, right?” Asked Tomochin who was looking at Miichan with a worried face. “NO. I didn’t make it.” “What do you mean, Miichan?” Rena turned to face Miichan ignoring the disturbing feels she getting. “Well, the thing is that…” “What?” “I didn’t create it. I kinda… before I say anything.” Miichan turns and faces Takamina. “You have to promise not to get mad.”   
“Miichan! Just say it!” both Tomochin and Rena yelled getting inpatient. “Hey! Takamina has to promise not to kill me First.” Miichan yelled back. “Okay, I promise not to hurt you. Happy now tell me.” Takamina said in a calm voice. “Okie Dokie. I found it in a trash bin.” Miichan said before running away from Takamina, who’s now trying to kill her. “Miichan I’m not going to hurt you just still stay.” Takamina said chasing Miichan around the Joker Mansion. “HA! You think I can’t see you killing aura. You wish! HA!” Miichan said running behind Tomochin and Jurina for protect purposes. While Rena sits down on a single sofa. Takamina stopped a few feet away and slowly gets closer to the three. “Tomochin, Jurina get out of the way, please.” “No can do. Takamina.” Tomochin said stepping closer to Miichan.
Rena still watching from the sidelines. Her thoughts: Man. I really missed this. Seems Those two are still a couple. But I kinda feel sorry for takamina cuz she really needs to put on some guy clothes cuz the girl clothes she has on are not meant for men. It show things you don’t ever wanna see unless it’s the person you love then it’s ok. I should go shopping tomorrow for her. “Takamina you promised you won’t hurt Miichan.” Jurina said stepping in front of Takamina to block her from advancing towards Miichan. “Okay. Fine. I give up! It’s not fair when it’s you three against me.” Takamina says leaving the room to go her bedroom on the second floor. Miichan hugs Jurina and whispers into her ear. “You can do whatever you want to Rena, today. I’ll help you.” Suddenly Rena the same chill from before run down her shine. That’s weird. Jurina then turns to Rena winks at her and gives Rena her famous cat like smile. Oh shit! That’s why I felt the chills. I better sneak out the mansion before she goes into my room. Besides I really don’t want her to smell what’s her name’s scent on me, I’ll be eaten for sure.    “OI! Takamina maybe your girlfriends can turn you back!” Tomochin yelled. “Oh that’s right.” Jurina said. “Well how about we go to sleep.” Miichan said yawning. “Yeah.”
When everyone was asleep. Jurina sneaked into Rena’s room and was getting into her bed when she noticed Rena wasn’t there. She checked the whole mansion but she was nowhere to be found. She goes to Miichan’s room. “Miichan! I can’t find her!” “Jurina, Miichan’s in my room.” Tomochin said sleepily and goes back to sleep. “Sorry.” Jurina whispers. “Miichan!” “Ugh?! Is breakfast ready?” “No. It’s me.” “Oh. No food?" "NO!" "Ok, I'm going back to sleep. nightnight." "No you said you would help me." "What’s up?” “Rena isn’t in the mansion.” “What?! She left? Well there’s nothing we can do. We’ll get her next time. Okay?” “Okay. Good night.”

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 03, 2011, 04:01:50 AM

Quote from: Sok on December 03, 2011, 03:08:22 AM

“Okay, I promise not to hurt you. Happy now tell me.” Takamina said in a calm voice. “Okie Dokie. I found it in a trash bin.” Miichan said before running away from Takamina, who’s now trying to kill her.

LOL :lol: I was laughing so hard here XD
Haha.. Miichan founded it in a trash bin and let Takamina drank it :twisted:
So she'll stay a man for now :thumbsup Good Job Miichan :peace: :peace:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:

Quote from: Sok on December 03, 2011, 03:08:22 AM

“OI! Takamina maybe your girlfriends can turn you back!” Tomochin yelled. “Oh that’s right.” Jurina said.

BTW who's the girlfriends of Takamina Tomochin say??

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: Flean on December 03, 2011, 08:39:10 AM

I kinda confused.. But this chapter is hilarious...  :wahaha:   and who's Takamina's girlfriend??  :hehehe:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: RenaChii on December 03, 2011, 09:40:25 AM

So Jurina still LOVE Rena in this fic~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy2.gif)

Ah~ still curious who will be Yuki's pairing~ (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

Or could it be a harem?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shock.gif) But I would love to read something like that~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/shy1.gif)

Thanks for updating~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/kneelbow.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: kahem on December 03, 2011, 04:43:47 PM

Hahahah Miichan is crazy !

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: Sok on December 04, 2011, 01:09:10 AM

Sorry, Flean and to anyone that found it confusing.  :kneelbow:

Thank you all for reading. I'll try to update as soon as possible.  :mon sweat: Maybe next week.

Once again Thank you.  :hee:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 5 Dec. 2
Post by: Megumi on December 04, 2011, 02:25:18 AM

 :hiakhiakhiak: SoK why do you write funny fics....omg my stomach!

Ch.5 was nothing but  (http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRdEWddq1Z5YIlkgLwDktDFA_C5rISR9V0fTFQOGGJMTtJP_KN_7w&t=1)

Thank you for your update!

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: Sok on December 06, 2011, 10:25:22 PM

Hello everyone. Thank you all for reading. Hope this chapter isn't confusing. There may be some misuse of words.

Chapter 6

The next day
Rena bought guy clothes for Takamina and gave them to him. They were now waiting for Takamina girlfriends to come.
“Hey, guys how many time do I have to tell you, they’re not my girlfriends. Only one is.” Takamina said depressed. “Yeah. And I’m not Rena’s girlfriend.” “U’r not my girlfriend!” Rena shouted trying to push Jurina off her lap while Tomochin and Miichan smirked. “Aww. Aren’t they a nice couple?” Miichan said smiling at Rena. “Hey! What have you been teaching her this past 50 years Miichan?” Rena asked pissed off. “She’s never been this aggressive towards me before.” “Nothing?” Miichan said with a smirk. While Rena had her attention on Miichan, Jurina was about to kiss Rena but she was suddenly tackled to the ground. “Itaiii! WTH!” “Rena! You’re back!” *Chuu~* “OI! Don’t be kissing her! She’s MINE! KUMI!” “No! She’s MINE! JURINA!” “NO! I’M NEITHERS! I’M SINGLE!” Rena yelled pushing Kumi onto Jurina. Miichan and Tomochin sitting back laughing at their ‘love triangle’. Takamina looking around in panic when a chill ran down her spine.   
“Takamina!” two voice shouted from the entrance of the mansion. “Takaboy, you’re girlfriends are here.” “They’re not my girlfriends!” “That’s right. I’m takamina’s girlfriend. Mocchi’s just her stalker.” “OI! I’m not a stalker. Do you see me chasing her all the time?” “No!” “See than I’m not a stalker.” “Ok. But you’re not her girlfriend. I am.” “Erena’s right. She’s Takaboy’s official girlfriend. While Mocchi’s Taka’s ex.” Meanwhile they talked Takamina tried to escape. But was stopped. “OI! Takamidget what happened to ya?” “Yuko! Wth! I was so close.” “Sorry, but I won’t let you escape.” Devilish smirk.
Everyone settles down in the living room. Takamina explains why she’s a man and that she can’t use her powers to turn back into a woman. “So, any clue how to turn me back?” “No. but isn’t better for you to still as a man since your only interested in women.” Yuko said in a bored tone. “Ture. And it’ll be easier for us to go out when we’re in school.” Erena says to Takamina while holding his arm between her chest. “u’r right.” “Wait, what?! SCHOOL?!” Rena, Tomochin, Miichan, Takamina, and Jurina yelled surprised. “what do you mean school?” Miichan asked thinking she might’ve heard wrong. “What Sayaka didn’t tell you?” Mocchi said taking a break from nibbling Takamina’s ear. “No. She just told me that she needed a few more students.” Takamina said while trying to get Mocchi off him. “Yeah. And the fact that people want to meet the richest and wealthiest Family. As in you guys. At they’re even petitioning to take your fortune as their own.” “So to stop them, we have to go to school?” Rena said uninterested. “Yes. It’s the easiest way to introduce you to the country, well to those greedy people.” Yuko said. “Besides the school you’ll be attending is the very school Takamina found.” Erena said proud. “You mean AKB Private Academy. Where all those rich brats attend?” Miichan said. “Yes.” “What other school have I found?” Takamina asked Miichan. “Well just making sure Bakaboy.” “SO Yuko do we need anything?” Tomochin asked. “No Sayaka already fix everything for you all including us to attend. And don’t worry Mocchi will be the school nurse so she’ll have to stay there.” “It’s not fair that you guys are students and I’m the school nurse.” “Okay that’s too bad for you but it’s still good news for us.” Miichan said going back to topic. “So when do we start?” “This Monday, well tomorrow.” “Do we really have to do it?” Jurina whined still wrestling with Kumi over who’s going to sit on Rena’s lap. While the said person seems to have given up on protesting. “Yes. Well you don’t have too. Since you and Kumi will be in a different grade from us.” Erena said. “What?!” Kumi and Jurina shouted. “so we have to attend so people know who we are, so they don’t take our money and fortune.” Rena and Tomochin said realizing the only logical reason they would have to go public. “Yes, wait how did you know?” Mocchi asked. “Well, since the government and other rich families have been looking into our history, family and backgrounds, it kinda makes sense that they want to know who the members are.” Takamina said standing up. “So, we’ll start school tomorrow. Get ready to enter society.” “You guys can do that. I’ll stay in hiding.” Rena says going upstairs to her room. “Rena, you will no longer have rights to your company and money. IF YOU DON’T GO TO SCHOOL!” Takamina said with a strict voice. “Fine. I’ll go. Father.” “OI! Don’t call me Father!!!” Everyone laughed. “Yea, yeah. Father. Old man whichever you prefer. Remember to take care of them gray hairs!” “OI! We’re the same age!” Everyone’s still laughing at Rena’s reply.

Yuki’s POV
It’s finally Monday and I have to go to school. Hopefully I can meet Mayu and Sae when I come back home. I get ready and go down stairs, eat my breakfast and say bye to my father. Now it time for school.
I walk into my class and see my bestfriends. “Hey girls.” “Hey. Yukirin.” They all greet me at the same time. “So, Tomomi here was telling me that you finally met your fiancé?” “Yes, Acchan.” “Will is he hot?” “Well they’re both attractive, Lovetan.” “Wait did you just say both? As in two?” “Yup, Maachan. As in two very attractive guys fight over my love.” “WHAT?!” “How can that be?” Lovetan said curious. “Well it’s just that they agreed to see which one wins my heart.” “They must be ugly. And not attractive” Acchan deadpanned. “No. they’re very attractive.” “What family are they from?” Maachan asked. “Wild Family. Why??” “Oh. They must be attractive since the guys in that family are known as players.” “Really? I didn’t know that?” Acchan, Tomomi, and Lovetan responded to Maachan’s statement. “Yuki be careful.” Lovetan said before leaving with Maachan to their classroom. Lovetan and Maachan are a year young than me, Acchan and Tomomi.
The teachers comes in. “Good morning everyone today I have a few new students to intro duce to you today.” My classmates begin to whisper about the new students. “Unfortunately, there’s only one of them here right now, so he introduce them himself. Then when the others are here their introduce themselves.” I wonder who the new students are. I quickly fix my eyes on the guy how walked in, it’s him. “Hello, My name is Sae Miyazawa. Nice to meet you.” I can heard Acchan. “Wow he’s hot.” “Sae, please take a seat at the back next to Tomomi. Tomomi raise your hand.” “Here. Chiyuu~” 
Sae POV
I walk into my class and spot Yuki. I’m so glad Mayu is a year younger than me. Now I have all the time I need to play with her. From the looks of things here I’m the hottest guy in class. I introduced myself and can heard girls whispering. “Aww he’s hot.” “So cool.” “Does he have a girlfriend?” Man, I’m loving this place, but I have to be careful around Yuki can’t lose her to Mayu, well not until I’ve played with her. I then go to my sit. Whoa she’s cute yet sexy. “Hey, I’m Tomomi kasai. But call me Tomo or Chiyuu~” “Hey I’m Sae.”
Yuki’s POV
It’s already lunch break and the other new students haven’t shown up. Sae then gets up from his seat and come towards me. “Hey Yuki.” “Hey Sae.” “Wait you know each other?” Acchan and Tomomi asked confused. “Yeah, he’s one of the guys who has to win me over.” “Yuki consider it done.” Sae says in a seductive way. “Oh no you don’t Sae!” “Mayu? How did you know this was our classroom?” I asked a panting Mayu. “Sorry” Mayu straighten up and walked over to me and my friends. “Hello, I’m Mayu Watanabe and I’m the other guy completing for Yuki’s heart.” “Hey bro. you still haven’t answered Yuki’s question.” Sae says glaring at Mayu. “Sorry. Lovetan and Maachan told. I thought they were right behind.” He turns to see a panting out of breath Lovetan and Maachan entering the room. “Mayuyu, you run to fast.” Lovetan said sitting down. “Yeah.” Maachan sitting on top of lovetan. “Sorry.” Mayu bows. “It’s okay. And it’s nice to see that Yuki has two hot guys fighting for her.” I blush. We talk until break’s over; Mayu, Lovetan, and Maachan go back to their class.
“Everyone the new students are here.” Two guys and two girls enter the classroom. “Okay, please introduce yourselves.” “Hello I’m Minami Takahashi. You can call me Takamina. Since Minami is a girl’s name, but you can still call me Minami if you want.” A short black haired guy said with a kind smile. “I’m Erena Ono and I’m his girlfriend so back off.” A black haired girl said taking Minami’s arm. “I’m Tomomi Itano.” “Oh you have the same name as me. I’m Tomomi Kasai. Chiyuu~” Tomomi said waving her hand at the male Tomomi. “CALL ME TOMOCHIN!” Hearing the new student quickly yell to everyone to call him Tomochin made Tomomi sad. “Yahooo~ I’m Minami Minegishi, but call me Miichan. And Tomomi Chiyuu over there back off! He’s my man!” you can hear the guys and girls say “What? They’re taken?” “No single boys.” “No cute single girls!” “There goes our chance.” The all sigh.
The four new students take their sits. Minami next to Acchan in front of me next to the window, Miichan next to Erena on the opposite side in front of the class next to the door, and Tomochin behind Tomomi and Sae in the back near the back door.
The lesson continues until the teacher stops and turns to Minami-kun and asks him. “Where’s the other new student? Minami-kun?” “Oh he’ll be here.”
“What there’s another student?” Some of the guys say. “I hope it’s a hot girl?” “No, I hope it’s a guy.” “Cute, sexy, hot or handsome is okay by me.” Acchan leans backward and whispers to me. Then the classroom door opens wide with a loud *THUMP* a tall handsome pale white skin with dark black hair guy comes in. He looks familiar, but I can’t remember from where. He then introduces himself before the teacher could even say a word. “Hello, I’m not really interested in getting to know any of you. But I’m force to attend school, don’t except me to be nice and sweet like other guys who wanna get into ya know. We ain’t kids. So don’t bug me! Don’t ask any personal questions!” He says annoyed and spots the only empty seat in the room which happens to be right next to me. He walks over and sits down. Sae keeps on glaring at him. “It’s good that you found a sit Mr.?” “Matsui. Ren Matsui!”
In the background you hear the students. “Kyaaa! He’s so cool and cold.” “Even his name’s cool.” “Does he have a girlfriend?” “He’s like a prince.” “Wow.” "Yuki and Ren look good together." "Kyaaa!" "Hope he doesn't fall for Yuki." The girls whispered loud enough to be heard. “We should become friends with him.” “Yea, maybe we can get girls with his help.” The guys said. “WTH?!” Sae says giving Ren his death glare.
Wait. Did he say his name was Matsui Ren? Why does that name sound so familiar?
I then felt a hand squish my ass. It can’t be. “Hey! What r u thinking?” “What princess?” He looks down at his hand. “It’s just that you’re so hot I couldn’t help myself.” “We’re in the middle of a lesson.” I slapped his hand away. “Ren! Stop, or else.” Minami leans back as if scratching and smacks Ren. “Okay.” He turns and looks at me with smirk that reminds me of someone. “I’m sorry, Princess.” Ren said. Wait. It can’t be the demon can it? But she was a girl not a guy. Right? But now that I look at him up-close they have the same eyes, lips and devilish smirk. Those lips are exactly like hers, wait. What am I thinking? Ren Matsui, Rena Matsui? It can’t really be the same person, can it?
Ren’s POV
I slam the door to class. I introduce myself self before the teachers asks. “Hello, I’m not really interested in getting to know any of you. But I’m force to attend school, don’t except me to be nice and sweet like other guys who wanna get into ya know. We ain’t kids. So don’t bug me! Don’t ask any personal questions!” I’m annoyed due to two reasons. 1. Kumi and Jurina wouldn’t leave me alone. 2. I hate being a guy! Girls are looking at me like a piece of meat. Both guys and girls ask about personal information and other stupid things, like: what family are you from? Are you rich? Does your family have good genes? Do you think if we have a kid they’ll be good looking? Do you have a girlfriend? Let’s go shopping. Be my boyfriend. Hey help me get in with this chick. Teach me some moves.
They all bug. Sometimes I just wanna beat them an inch from death. I like people who don't ask or care about who your family is or does.
I look around a spot an empty seat next to a girl that looks familiar. I start walking towards the seat when I notice the girl sitting next to Minami. I smile, bit my lower lip and wink at her, she smiles back and blushes. Then I sit down. “It’s good that you found a sit Mr.?” “Matsui. Ren Matsui!” I said. I feel someone glaring at me but shrug it off. It’s odd I feel like I know the girl sitting next to me. She looks familiar and like a princess I’ve teased before; I feel my hand moving on its own then grading something soft and familiar. “Hey! What r u thinking?” “What princess?” I look down confused and see I’m grading her ass. “It’s just that you’re so hot I couldn’t help myself.” The words come out my mouth. “We’re in the middle of a lesson.” She slaps my hand away and I start to miss the softness that was in my hand. Then I heard, “Ren! Stop, or else.” Minami leans back as if scratching and smacks me hard on my head. Damn he hits hard. “Okay.” I turn and look at the girl next to me with evil smirk on my lips, her reaction reminds me of someone. But who? “I’m sorry, Princess.” And turn to pay attention to the rest of whatever is being taught to us.


TBC.....



Thank you for reading.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: Haruko on December 07, 2011, 05:53:44 AM

omg! the pairs are so strange...

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 07, 2011, 07:49:04 AM

Yes!! Update XD
I was :w00t: Eh?? Erena and Takamina?? Then I re-read again because I didn't expect it XD
It was surprising and getting extremely interesting :thumbsup
I wonder if Acchan will fall for Takamina and a love triangle will start :?
And Yuki's part is becoming somewhat a large competition :lol:

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
It's so interesting so please update soon :mon cute: I really want to know what happen next :)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: RenaChii on December 07, 2011, 08:43:30 AM

Rena become a guy~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/nya.gif) REEENN~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/luvluv1.gif)

Erepyon is here too~!! (http://www.indowebster.web.id/images/smilies/jeanovea/sebel.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/101_.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: kahem on December 07, 2011, 09:01:50 AM

Hum *big grin* I don't know why but it smels drama hehe~

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: skytsuna on December 07, 2011, 09:11:29 AM

Erena and Takamina!!! :w00t:
I didn't expect that XD

Nice Update :twothumbs
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Please Update Soon :bow: :bow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 6 Dec. 6
Post by: karomuwi on December 07, 2011, 01:27:13 PM

I apologise for not commenting before but now...


AWESOME!!! The pairs are interesting! It's funny and I have no idea what's going to happen!! Why do you have to tease me?! I like Yuki with Sae, Mayu and Rena!! (mostly Mayu and Rena) And Erena with Takamina?! It's just so interesting! It's great to the core!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Please update more! I can't go to school without reading or re-reading the whole story! It's just so interesting even if I keep reading it from the start! (lol. I think I'm fangirling)

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 7 Dec. 11
Post by: Sok on December 11, 2011, 08:14:54 AM

Hello everyone.  :mon hi: I hope I didn't fail in this chapter.  :mon POd:

Chapter 7

Once the bell signaling the end of school rang and the first to leave class were Ren, Minami, Tomochin and Erena. Minami, Tomochin and Erena went home while Ren ran away from girls while scream. “WHY THE HELL DID I HAVE TO BE THE ONLY SINGLE ONE BEING CHASE. DAMN YOU TOMOCHIN AND MINAMI. N DAMN U FOR HAVING GIRLFRIENDS.” Girls are chasing him asking. “Ren let’s talk.” “Do u have a girlfriend?” “What family are u from?” “Do u have a girlfriend?” “OMG! Not those QUESTIONS!”
Leaving Miichan a lone to make friends.
“Now that I’m alone. I should make friends.” Miichan said to herself walking out the school building towards the exit gate. “Um.. Miichan?” Miichan turns around and see three girls from her class. “Huh? Oh Hi.” “Hi, my name’s Atsuko Maeda and these are my friends Yuki Kashiwagi and..” “Tomomi Chiyuu Kasai, yeah I know who she is. And sorry about Tomochin’s and my behavior towards you. But still he’s my man.” “Um.. no need to apologize. I understand.” Tomomi said smiling. “It’s weird through. He’s never acted like that before.” Miichan said thinking out loud. “Maybe cuz you’re new here.” Yuki said. “Maybe. Anyways are there any good cake shops here?” “Yeah, there are would you like to hang out with us?” “Yay! Atsuko.” “Oh, you can call me Acchan.” “Call me Chiyuu~” “Why? It’s that you’re middle name.” Miichan asked. “Oh she says Chiyuu~ at the end of her sentence.” Acchan informed Miichan. “Oh, you’re weird! But I like it; it makes you special and deferent. So whe…” Miichan was cut off by a guy waiting at the front gate. “Yuki! Let’s hang out!” He grads her hand and begins to drag her with him outside where there no one. “Aoi. Let me go!” Yuki shouted. Seeing this Miichan graded Yuki’s other arm and pulled her away from the Aoi. “Hey! She ain’t interested. Besides she already has plans with us. Now beat it! Loser!” Miichan yelled at him in an angry voice.“Who da hell r u? Her boyfriend?” Aoi stepped closer to Miichan so now his in her personal space. “NO! I’m her friend.” “So, you have nothing to do with her. She’s my girlfriend. Now back off Gachapin.”

Ren’s POV
“Hhhhhaaaa. Finally I got away.” *panting* “I hope I don’t have to do this every single day.” I said tired from running all over the school. “Ren!” “Huh?” I turned to see who had called me. “Oh Jurina, Kmui.” I feel really tired and emotionless; I didn’t want to deal with them right now. “What’s wrong?” Kumi asked concerned. “Did we do something wrong?” Jurina asked worried. “Huh? Hmmm.. Nah, it’s just that I was being chased by girls from my class.” They both had a ‘OH HELL NO! NO ONE MESSES WITH MY MAN!’ look on their face. I didn’t really care. I was going to say something but suddenly felt a pulse in my head.

“Hey, Ren can you hear me?” “Miichan? WTH?” “Yeah, where are you?” “I’m still on school grounds with Kumi and Jurina. Why?” “Great. First get rid of Kmui and Jurina. Then come outside the front gate and come to area with trees.” “Why?” “I’m kinda in trouble. Hehehe” “What did you do this time?” “I didn’t do anything! The guy’s being a jerk! Come help me. He’s breath is kicking and I mean kicking. Probably he hasn’t brushed his teeth in days or even weeks.” “Hahaha. Okay I’ll help.” “Thanks and don’t tell Tomochin.” “k.”

“en? Ren? Ren?” “Huh? What’s up?” “You’ve been zoning out.” Kumi said with a worried face. “Oh sorry. You two should go home first. I need… sometime to clear my head.” I looked at them with a tired look. “No, I’l..” “No Jurina. I think it’s best if we leave him alone.” Kumi told Jurina pulling her away. “Okay. We’ll see you at home.” Thank you, Kumi. Now to save Tomochin’s pushy, I mean girlfriend.

Outside the school Gate
“Aoi! Yuki isn’t ur girlfriend she doesn’t even like you!” Acchan said pulling Yuki away from Aoi. “Yeah. And stop saying she is. You stalker. Chiyuu~” Chiyuu said stepping closer to Miichan but quickly went running behind Acchan. “What’s wrong? Tomo?” Yuki asked worried. “He has bad breath. It smells like a toilet that hasn’t been cleans in years. Chiyuu~” Their thoughts: Poor Miichan. We should pay for her cakes, when we go to the shop as an apology.“No! She’s my girlfriend.” “No! She’s not cuz she’s dating my brother!” Miichan yelled pushing Aoi back hitting someone. “Itai.” The person says and turns around. “Hey what was that for?” “Ren! You’re here! I knew I could count on you.” “Oh hey, Miichan. I finally found you. You know you’re hard to find than Takamina.” “What but he’s a midget! And I’m the best average height.” Miichan pouted. “Anyways, what did you need my help for? And who’s this guy?” Helps Aoi up. “Don’t help him!” “Why?” Ren asked tilting his head. Acchan’s thoughts: OMG! He’s so hot. Kyaaa! He looks so cute tilting his head like a kid. Yuki’s: Is he really Rena? I need to know. Seeing him tilt his head is sooo cute! Yuki! Focus. 
 “He’s breath stinks! That’s why!” Miichan says pretending to puke. “That’s not a good reason.” Ren said bored. “So you’re her brother?” Aoi says pissed. “Yes. W..?” Before Ren could finish Aoi punches Ren’s face spending him back a few feet. “WTH!” Ren yelled pissed. “That’s fo…” Aoi couldn’t finish because Ren punched his jaw. “Ugh!” Aoi cried in pain. “GO! REN! GO! BEAT HIS A**. GO! REN! GO! MAKE IT FAST! I WANT CAKE!!!” Miichan cheered while Ren beat the living daylights out of Aoi. Acchan’s thoughts:He looks so hot fighting. You can see his well toned biceps and triceps. Too bad his uniform isn’t tight. By the end Aoi had 4 broken ribs, dislocated shoulder, and his face was beaten, he now look like a zombie. “YAY!!! That’s my brother!” Miichan said jumping up and down.
“OH Shit! What have I done?” Ren said getting off Aoi. “You helped me!” Miichan said happy. “Yeah, but what’ll happen if Minami finds out?” Ren said looking at Miichan. “Don’t worry. Fortunately, for us no one’s here other than you, Acchan, Chiyuu, Yuki and me, oh and that guy on the floor.” Miichan said innocently. “Wait, Acchan, Chiyuu and Yuki? Who are they?” Ren asked confused. “The girls in our class that are behind you looking scared, well except Acchan who looks excited.” Miichan pointed at them. “Hm? Oh sorry if I scared you.” Ren bowed to them. “Oh it’s ok. Btw I’m Atsuko Maeda but call me Acchan.” “Tomomi Kasai, but my friends call me Chiyuu or Tomo.” “Hi, I’m Yuki Kashiwagi and my friends call me Yukirin.” “Hi. Btw Miichan why was he harassing you?” Ren asked. “Oh, he was dragging Yuki with him and claiming he was her boyfriend.” Miichan said kicking Aoi. “Oh. But that’s none of your business.” Ren said shaking his head. “Yes, it is. Their my friends!” “Since when you?” “Since ya left me.” Ren gives up arguing. “Anyways I’ll be going home now.” “Ren wait!” ‘Yes, Yuki?” “Thank you.” “You’re welcome. Now, bye.” “Hey! Ren come eat cake with us.” Miichan said clinging onto Ren’s arm. “Hey, Miichan if Tomochin saw you doing this to me, he’d kill me. Now let go.” “No!” “Let go!” “Come on Ren join us.” Acchan sweetly said clinging onto his other arm. “Yeah! As a thank you. Right Yuki?” “Hm? Yes.” “Fine. I’ll go. But first, Miichan let go.” “What? Why are you only telling me and not Acchan?” “Cuz you have a boyfriend. I’m don’t.” Acchan said while pulling Ren away from Miichan’s hold.
 “So what’s the Cake shop like?” Ren asked walking hand in hand with Acchan. Yuki’s toughts: What the hell! That should be me. “Oh it’s great you’ll love it. Even though it’s old.” Acchan exclaimed. “What do you mean?” Ren and Miichan asked. “It’s been around for years.” Yuki added. “In fact today’s is Tricksters’ Cafe 75 yr anniversary. Chiyuu~” Chiyuu said. Ren’s thoughts: What’s up with the Chiyuu? It sounds like Chuu~

In Tricksters cafe
 Miichan ordered 16 different cakes while the others ordered one cake and a drink. “Wow. Miichan wouldn’t it be better if you buy the cafe instead of ordering all those cakes?” Acchan said. “I can’t do that.” Miichan said as she ate her cakes. “Why not?” They asked and Miichan points to Ren. “Huh?” “She’s pointing at me cuz I own this cafe.” “Really?” “Yeah.” “But doesn’t this shop belong to a member of the Joker Family?” “Yes. Minami, Tomochin, Erena, Miichan, Jurina and I are the Joker Family.” Ren says bored. “What?!” “Yeah. We just never really found it important for others to meet us, but since the Royal Family and other people are petitioning to take our wealth. We had to enter society.” Miichan says ordering her 2nd round. “Oh.”
Acchan, Chiyuu and Yuki turned to each other and whispered. “What are our fathers thinking tiring to take another family’s money.” Acchan said. “I don’t know but maybe it has to be with Yuki’s engagement too. Chiyuu~” “We need to talk with Maachan and Lovetan. But later.” Yuki said turning back to eating her cake.
 “What were you girls talking about?” Miichan asked as she ordered her 4th round of cakes. “Hey Miichan! You’ve already eaten 48 slices of cake. You know that you still have to pay for your order.” Ren said pissed at how many cakes she has eaten. “What? But we own this.” “NO! I own this. Or have you forgotten that you and the others have no right or share of my businesses.” “No fair!” “Yes fair.” “No way! I didn’t bring money or my cards with me today.” “Oh really?” “Yes, now can you make it on the house.” “Nooooo. I can make it on Tomochin. Let me call him.” “No! Alright I’ll pay.” “Good. Cuz I don’t want my Cake shop to go broke cuz of you.” “Ren you’re too strict with money. Haha.” Yuki said unintentionally grading his arm and leaning into Ren. “Oh. Of course. Especially when it comes to Miichan. If not careful you can go broke by just feeding her.” They all laughed except Miichan who pouted. “Ok. Sorry Miichan that was too much.” Ren said. “It’s ok Ren. It’s true after all. I’ll be more careful. So to make it up I’ll pay for everyone today.” Miichan says paying the bill and leaves with them.

They had already dropped off Tomomi and Acchan at their homes and were now walking Yuki. “Ren.” “Yes Yuki?” “Can I talk to you in private?” Yuki asked. Ren and Miichan stopped and looked at Yuki. “What did you say?” Miichan asked. “I need to talk to Ren in private.” Yuki rephrase. “Well. Ren you’re on your own bye. See you at home! N don’t worry I’ll won’t tell Kumi and Jurina about Yuki’s confession.” Miichan yelled back as she was now a good distance away. “Hey! Why are you running!” Ren yelled after her but she was already gone. They continued to walk. “So Ren?” “This isn’t a confession is it?” “No it isn’t. Is Rena Matsui your sister?” “No Yuki I do not have a sister named Rena. That’s my name.” “So it was you.” “Huh? What do you mean?”  Ren asked confused. “You’re the Demon.” “Hey! I ain’t no Demon. I’m an immortal which is way way way different than a demon.” “Okay. But still you’re that girl.” “Yes. Wait, What?! How do you know?” “I’m the girl who..um… k-ki-kissed.” “Oh, wait that was you?” Ren asked surprised. “Yes.” “No wonder you looked familiar. So, um…. is there a reason why you brought this up?” “No, I just wanted to know if it was you.” “Okay, but don’t tell anyone not even my family that you know me from before today. Especially Jurina or Kumi.” “Who are they?” “They’re crazy that’s all you need to know.” “Okay, Ren. But you’re different from when we first met.” “How so?” “You’re funny and don’t really care about status. I like that in guy, in you.” “Huh? Did you say something?” Ren was playing dumb. “I was saying you’re funny.” “How?” “Well the way you introduced yourself today was funny and true. Then in the cake shop.” “Oh ho hope you aren’t falling for me now.” “Oh don’t worry. I got two attractive young men having me fall for them.” “Oh sounds fun. Maybe I should join?” “NOOOOOO!” “Why not?” “You’re not my type.” “Really? So what you said earlier about..” “Oh, we’re here. Thanks for walking me, bye.” Yuki said running into her mansion. “Hey! You haven’t … ha forget it. Well maybe I should join in just for fun.”
“No need for you.” A voice comes from behind Ren.
“Huh?” Ren turns around. “Hey aren’t from my class. And who’s the doll next to you.” “Hello Ren. Long time no see.” The two people say. “Huh? Do I know you?” “Yes. But you won’t remember meeting us or Yuki, in a few seconds.” The shortest of the two says getting closer to Ren. “Huh?” Then everything goes black for Ren. “Hee. Seems we’re not the only two completing for Yuki’s heart.” “Yeah. Anyways let’s leave him somewhere before we go in.” “Yeah, don’t want Mario and Riku to know we used our powers.” “No, I don’t want Yuki to find him here and help him.” “U’r right. Besides I never imagine seeing him again.” “Yeah. Anyways let’s get rid of him.”


 TBC...

Thank you for reading. XD

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 7 Dec. 11
Post by: seabrother on December 11, 2011, 09:30:23 AM

This is getting really interesting.
Lol at Acchan's thoughts :love:
Sae, Mayu, what are u gonna do to Ren? :banghead:
Good job, Sok. Plz update soon  :thumbup

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 7 Dec. 11
Post by: Megumi on December 11, 2011, 04:16:30 PM

LoL Ren/Rena chased by girls and Acchan?! what the? leave Ren alone!  :P
Hahha Aoi's breath Pfffft! Miichan is so funny as always.
Finally I'm glad that Yuki&Rena remember each other now.
Sae&Mayu hrrm...can't wait for your next update I wanna know what's happening with Ren/Rena

Thank you for your update!  :bow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 7 Dec. 11
Post by: RenaChii on December 11, 2011, 10:25:39 PM

Everyone love Ren~!!! yey~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-03.gif)

Sae & Mayu why you do something like that?! it not fair~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-12.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/tama-13.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 7 Dec. 11
Post by: kahem on December 14, 2011, 08:59:07 AM

Hahahaa!!!! So funny and Ren is so cool!

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: Sok on December 18, 2011, 07:20:18 PM

Thank you  Yagami.Rai, seabrother, Megumi, kahem, and RenaChii for your comments. And thank you for reading. I think I failed in this chapter.  :mon cry: Sorry if it's boring or confusing.  :mon POd:

Chapter 8

Yuki’s POV
Yesterday when I got home, my father was in the living room talking with Mario and Riku after an hour or two Sae and Mayuyu came. We talked about what I like and don’t like, our whole conservation was about me. They didn’t really talk about themselves at all. Which kinda pissed me off. They were getting to know me but I wasn’t getting to know them at all. I don’t really know why I’m happy to go to school today. Is it cuz I get to see Mayuyu and Sae or cuz Ren.
“Yuki! So how was your sleep?” “Hm? Fine. Why?” “Cuz I was dreaming of you.” “Sae, that was too cheesy and made no sense.” Mayuyu deadpanned. “Yeah. I agree with Mayuyu.” Lovetan says while the others nod. “Okay. Fine. Whatever.” Sae said leaning back on Ren’s chair. Now that I think about it he’s not here yet. The day passes without anything interesting happening. I go home with Miichan, Acchan, Lovetan, Maachan, and Tomo. We all go into my room and talk for four hours non-stop, I learned that Miichan has a big appetite just like Acchan. I wake up the next day; go to class and he’s not there. Sae and Mayuyu have been showing a lot of affection towards me and I like it but for some reason he’s always on my mind. I’m getting a long well with Sae and Mayuyu, but Sae is getting more of my attention. It’s been a week since he walked me home.
“um. Excuse me. May I talk to Yuki for a minute?” I turn around to see who it was. “Miichan!.” Acchan gets up and hugs Miichan then turns to face Minami. “What you want midget? Don’t tell me you want Yuki as your girlfriend?” Acchan asked in an annoyed tone. “Hey I ain’ a midget! And I already got a girlfriend!” Minami shouted. “Yeah. But he’s not a midget, he’s miniature sized.” Tomochin said patting Minami’s head. Everyone laughs. “Tomochin, he’s fun size.” Erena says hugging Minami from the back. After laughing for a while. We introduce each other and became friends. “Um. Yuki?” “Yes. Miichan?” “Can you come with us?” “Sure.” I follow Miichan and Minami to the hallway. “What’s up?” “Well, Miichan told me that you were the last one to see Ren last Monday.” “Yes. Why?” “Did he stay at your mansion? Or tell you anything?” Miichan asked worried. “No. Why?” “Oh it’s nothing we should go back to class.” Minami said push me towards class. Now that I think about it they seem worried about him, where Ren could be.
Since then we have talked and hanging out more with Minami and the others. Where can he be? It has already been almost 2 week since he has shown up. “Hey, Yuki is there something wrong?” Tomomi and Acchan asked. “Huh? No, nothing at all. Now let’s go meet the others.” We went to the garden in the school to eat with Maacahn, Lovetan and their two new friends, Wild family, and Miichan and the others. It’s was fun. We learned who the top three families were. The first was Joker family which consisted of Minami, Ren, Tomochin, Miicahn, and Jurina. The second was Dark family which consisted of Sayaka our student president, Yuko our school’s soccer captain, Mocchi our school nurse, Erena, and Kumi. The three was Wild family which has Mario, Riku, Sae and Mayuyu. “Wow. So the new students are from the top families.” Lovetan said. “Yeah.” “But I wouldn’t have guessed that midget was the head of the richest family.” Acchan retorted. “Hey, height has nothing to do with it.” “Yeah, yeah. Whatever.” Acchan said. “Hey, have you seen Ren?” Kumi and Jurina asked looking for Ren. “No.” I say. “ah.” They said disappointed. What’s their relationship with Ren?
“Kumi, Jurina Ren’s probably running away from the girls in school.” Erena says comforting the two girls knowing full well that he hasn’t been coming to school since the day they started. “In fact I heard that he already has a fan club.” Yuko said clinging onto Riku who looked pissed and Mario trying to calm him down. “Yuko’s right. I finished signing the official papers for their ‘Prince Ren Club’ the same day you guys joined school. Which has about 30 members already.” Sayaka said finishing her lunch. “What?!” Sae and Mayuyu yelled pissed. “Calm down you two. You already have Yuki.” Mario said sitting the two. “Yeah you already have our bestfriend Yuki.” Tomomi, Acchan, Lovetan, And Maachan scolded the two. “Hey! What about us?” Kumi and Jurina asked pouting. “What about you?” Mocchi asked. “Hey! Did you forget Ren’s ours.” “No, Ren’s signle. And he’s been telling you two nonstop that he thinks of you as younger sisters.” Sayaka explain making the two pout even more. “Fine. I’ll just make him fall for me.” Jurina confidently said. “Oh no you don’t. He’ll fall for me!” Kumi shouted. “No, he’ll fall for me cuz you two are still little girls.” Acchan said with a smirk. “Oh yeah?” Both say. “Yeah.” Acchan replies.
“Okay. How about we make a bet.” Mocchi says standing up. “What kind?” the three ask. “Okay. How about Minami explains to you cuz I have to go back to work.” Mocchi said leaving. “Okay, how about the losers have to entertain the guys in the group. As in Mayu, Sae, Riku, Mario, Ren, Tomochin, or me. And to make it fair for the losers, they’ll pick the name out of a box, so it’s random.” Minami explained. “The first round will be to get him to carry you bridal style!” Miichan yelled excitedly. “Okay.” “Now whoever gets them to carry them bridal style is the winner.” Erena clarified. “I’m in favor of Acchan!” Miichan yelled. “Wait, Why?!” Kumi and Jurina shouted. “Cuz we have the same class.” Acchan said smiling. “OI, how about we make this more interesting Minami?” Mayu and Sae said. “Oh, you’re right. It’ll also go for Yuki. Whoever gets her to kiss you in a passionate way wins the first round. The loser or losers will have to pick a name from the box and entertain the girl. But Yuki must be the one to kiss you, not you kiss her.” Yuko said excitedly. “What?! We didn’t mean that.” Sae and Mayuyu yelled. “I’m in favor of this Ren guy.” Mario and Riku yelled. “What?! Going against your bros.” Sae and Mayuyu yelled. “Well if this guy already has a fan club before you two.” Mario explains. “He must be very attractive and better looking than you two.” Riku deadpanned. “True, if I wasn’t with Minami. I would be dating him.” “Same for me. If I wasn’t with Tomochin, I would totally..” “Don’t you dare finish that sentence.” Tomochin said in a cold voice. “You know what. I think we should leave Tomochin.” “Yeah. Seems our girlfriends no longer need us.” “Hey, guys don’t leave.” Miichan and Erena yelled but they were already gone. “Wow. Nice one girls.” Lovetan and Maachan deadpanned. Everyone started laughing.

It’s already after school. Acchan, Jurina and Kumi are busy plotting a way to get Ren to carry them bridal style. Wouldn’t be easy just to say you hurt your ankle and have him carry you? Well now that I think about Sae and Mayuyu have that bet too, hope they aren’t plotting anything. I was walking to the door when Sae kissed me. “That doesn’t count! She has to kiss you!” My friends yelled slapping Sae on his shoulder. If it had been Ren I would have responded the same way I did when we first met. Where can he be? Wait, what am I thinking! “Yuki?” “Yes, Sae?” “Go on a date with me today.” Should I go? It’ll help take my mind off that jerk Ren. “Okay.” “Great I’ll pick you at 9.” Before I could reply he was already out the door then I notice Mayuyu holding flowers? Where did he get those flowers from? “Oh, hey Mayuyu what’s up?” “Would you go on a date with me today?” He hands me the flowers and smiles. “Um. Sure.” “Great, I’ll pick you up at your house at 6.” With that he left.
My date with Mayuyu was a normal classic one; movie and a dinner. During the movie he started stealing kisses from me which annoy me at first but I didn’t really care, I never responded back. Our date ended at 8:30 giving me enough time to get ready for date with Sae. He took me to a night showing of a popular vampire movie. I don’t why people like this stuff, it makes no sense. After the movie he took me to a café shop, I was drinking a hot chocolate, I didn’t notice that wipe cream was on my upper lip until Sae leaned over and kiss me. “I wanna go home, Sae.” “Why? We just starting.” “No, Sae we have class tomorrow so we need to go.” He became annoyed that I was telling him that I wanted to go home. “Fine, let’s get outta here.” We left the café after a few blocks he graded my wrist and dragged me into a dark alley, pushed me against the wall and forcibly kissed me moving his free hand over my body. “St…Stop!...Stop!...Sae!...Let me go!” I shouted between his kisses, I tried to push him away but was too strong for me. I bit down on his lip as hard as I can, making him blood. “U b****! U’ll pay for that!” He shouted and slapped me, I landed on the ground. Blood started coming out of the counter of my lips. He climbed on top of me. “Sae! Stop please.” I begged and started to cry, he’s not the guy I thought he was. “Shut up! This is your fault! No girl has ever rejected my kisses or touch and you won’t be the first! Shut up if you know what’s good for ya!” He shouted kissing my neck. Someone please help me! Rena, Ren, help me. I need you. I was suddenly snapped out of my thoughts by a yell. “Hey! What do you think you’re doing! Get off of her!” A dirty, stinky, oily faced man came towards us. “And what are you ganna do about it?” Sae got off me and went towards the man. “Beat the living s*** you!” He said smirking at Sae. Sae and the man began to fight. This strange yellow light was surrounding the man’s fist and feet. While red light surrounded Sae’s whole body. What’s going on? Is it possible that Sae’s a demon? “Oh. So it’s you. I thought we got rid of you.” Sae tells the man swaging his fist. “Sorry, but you own me. And there’s no way you’re getting off without paying up.” The man said punching Sae in the stomach then following with a knee kick sending Sae a couple steps back. He then continued which two right jabs and a left up cut that send Sae flying into the wall behind me totally destroying the wall. “Haha. Seems you haven’t fully recovered from your last beating. Old man.” “Hehehe. You’re right, but I don’t need to be 100% to beat you Sae, but remember you’re older than me. Ne? How about less talking and more beating? hehe” The man said charging towards Sae who blocked it but then he was body slammed onto the ground. The man quickly straddled Sae and started a rain of punches while he giggled. He stopped once he knew Sae wouldn’t be getting up any time soon. “Hey, are you okay.” He says turning to me. “Yes. Thank you.” “U’r Welcome. Please take care of yourself, especially when you’re around men.” “Will do. Thanks.” The stinky, dirty clothed, oily face man graded my hand gently and leaded me to the streets then left me near Tricksters Café.

TBC....

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: Haruko on December 18, 2011, 08:23:12 PM

mmm i dont like the behaviour of mayuyu and sae...makes me so sad..

but its a interesting history...

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: Megumi on December 18, 2011, 09:26:48 PM

Pfft! Acchan is so * face palm she doesn't like Takamina at all  :lol:


 :shocked Mayu&Sae are angels but damn they are so evil well Sae is the most evil...
What happened to Ren/Rena? Did they like turned him/her to an old man? or maybe it's not the same person...


 :panic: Can't wait for your next update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: RenaChii on December 18, 2011, 09:40:16 PM

Why Mayuyu & Sae become a bad guy?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/107_.gif)

Ren~!! you must protect Yukirin~!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/scolding.gif)

Please update soon~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/on_drink2.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: gekikarabuACE on December 19, 2011, 02:14:47 AM

Ah, finally had time to go through this story. :)

I gotta say, the more I read through this, the more I'm not liking Sae and Mayuyu's character at all. At first I thought it would be fun to see Sae, Mayuyu and Rena battle it out for Yukirin's affection. But now, with what Sae and Mayuyu did (especially after what Sae just did :smhid), I'm really starting to dislike it. I'm guessing that the old man was actually Rena, and Sae and Mayuyu did something to her and got her stuck looking like her real age. And obviously, Yukirin's more than a little taken with Rena even though she's kind of in denial.

Other than that, I seriously lol-ed because everyone seems to be smitten with Rena. Even Acchan! Lololol, Rena/Acchan pairing, now that is something you really don't see. Anywhere!

Anyway, thanks for the update!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: kahem on December 19, 2011, 08:24:55 AM

What happen to Sae and Mayuyu??? I also don't really like their behavior
The old man is Rena/Ren?

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 8 Dec. 18
Post by: Yagami.Rai on December 27, 2011, 01:30:45 PM

OMG! I don't like Sae's behavior at all.... :smhid
Acchan doesn't like Takamina at all :cry:
Is that old man actually Ren?? :?

Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon :mon cute:

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: Sok on December 28, 2011, 03:00:05 AM

Sorry for the wait.

Chapter 9

In the study inside the Joker Mansion
“Miichan!” “Yes? Takamina?” “Where the hell is Ren?” “I don’t know.” “It’s been 2 weeks since we last saw him and you were the last one to see him.” “Yeah, but like I told you. I left him alone so he could walk Yuki home.” “I know. We asked her and she has no clue what happened to him after he dropped her off.” “You don’t think he was sealed again, do you?” “I don’t think so Miichan, anyways just keep this from the others.” “Okay. I’ll also try and find out something.” “Okay. I have to go meet Sayaka and tell her. Then we’ll go to the principal and influence him once again.” “You mean brainwash him into say he gave Ren another special assignment.” Miichan said with a smirk. “Yes. Will it’s a good thing Tomochin and Erena have hid it from Jurina and Kumi. And that Jurina and Kumi are now busy plotting. Now get ready we need to go to school.” “Okay.” They go outside to the living room where the others are waiting.
“Hey, what were you two talking about in there?” Tomochin asked as Miichan cling to his arm. “Hey, is Ren in his room?” Jurina asked. “No! He already left.” Takamina says and steps out the mansion and the others follow. “Hey Takamina where has Ren be..” Tomochin cut off by Miichan stepping on his foot very hard. “Itai! What was that for?” “Sorry huby. I slipped.” Miichan says innocently. “Oh, okay. But where has Ren…Itai! Takamina WTH!” “What? You walk into my fist.” “Hey Guys, you should stop fighting we already at school.” Jurina said. “Good morning!” Erena runs to Takamina and kisses him on the lips. “Sorry Erena but I need to talk with Sayaka.” “Huh? What’s up, Takamina.” “We need to go some private.” “Okay. I’ll see you during lunch. Bye.” “See u in class.” Takamina says pulling Sayaka towards the principal’s office.
“Where’s Ren?” Kumi asked screeching for Ren. “His already here.” Miichan lied. “Oh. So where your class?” Kumi asked. “Why?” Miichan asked with caution. “Ren also in your class.” “Oh you’re right. I totally forgot they’re in the same class.” Jurina said turning to Miichan.“So where is it?” Kumi and Jurina asked. “Why?” “We’re starting the bet today!” “Oh, but didn’t you say you were going to plan it first before going into it?” “Yes and we did now it’s time to act.” Kumi explained. “Tomochin your class please.” Kumi asked politely while Jurina did puppy dog eyes at him. He was about to tell them if Miichan hadn’t passionately kissed him. “Level 3 class A.” Erena said.  Miichan had forgotten Erena was in their class.

Minami’s POV
I was walking with Sayaka out of the principal’s office. Sigh. “So, that went pretty well.” “Yeah thanks, Sayaka. And don’t tell the others.” “Don’t worry. I for one don’t want Kumi and Jurina doing the thing they did when Ren went missing 50 yrs ago. It was hell. Shoot even the Devil couldn’t stand them.” “Yeah. Anyways what’s happened to Yuko. She’s been … um… how do I say it?” “More prevented than ever.” “Exactly.” “Well in our class we have Mario and Riku. And Riku is the one she clings onto. Yuko keeps harassing him to no end. Even with his brother Mario’s help, we can’t separate her from him.” “Oh ho. So she finally found herself a chew toy.”
“Hey! Get this f*** squirrel off me. Before I make her cry!” Riku shouted form their class. “No, Riku-nyan. You would never make me cry. You’re too in love with me to make me cry.” Yuko shouted happy. “Why u…” Riku sounded piss and rising his fist to strike Yuko. “Okay you two. Yuko let go of Riku before something bad happens to you.” Mario says trying to unattached Yuko from Riku. What the hell? She looks like a baby koala climbing a tree.“Seems so. Well I should be going to class and detach Yuko from him before class starts.” “Okay. You better hurry, Riku seems to be releasing some pretty strong killing aura.” “Oh, you’re right. See ya.” I stay there for a while watching Riku hold onto the door while Mario and Sayaka pull Yuko away from Riku. I start walking to my class after they had separated Yuko from her chew toy. I suddenly felt pulse in my head.

“Takamina! We’re in trouble!” “Miichan?” “Yeah, anyways we’re in trouble.” “How?” “You’re girlfriend told Kumi and Jurina our class. And they’re planning to show up during lunch. To start the bet.” “Sh**! That is a problem. We can’t let them know he’s not here.”

“Takamina.” “Miichan! Why are you here.” “Bakamina, you’re outside our classroom. Why wouldn’t I be here?” “Oh, sorry anyways let’s get in.” “Yeah.” When I entered the classroom there sitting next to Yuki was Ren. I heard Miichan. “WTH? He wasn’t there a second ago.”

Yuki’s POV   
I walk into class and I don’t see Sae but I do see Mayuyu. “Hey Mayuyu, where’s Sae?” Lovetan asked. “He’s at home resting. I don’t know what happened to him last night, but he came home late and was acting strange. In the morning before coming to school I asked him what happened to him. He said he doesn’t remember anything from yesterday.” “Oh. Well I hope he feels better.” Maachan said. . I honestly don’t wanna see him right now after what he tried to do to me last night. After talking for a while the three left to their class. I feel like s***, I’m so tired and hungry.  Why didn’t I eat breakfast? I was brought back to reality by someone sitting down next to me. To my surprise it was Ren.

Ren’s POV
It’s been a day since I wake up in a dump. I remembered everything, memorizes I have been missing; I wouldn’t have ever reminded if they haven’t beaten me close to death. Now I know who the angels that did that to me are, they’ll be paying for taking my wings. More importantly they’ll pay for taking her away from me. When I was going home I heard a voice calling out to me. I don’t know who it was, but for some reason my body began to run towards it. I ran 10 miles until I got to where the voice was calling from. When I focused my vision I saw one of the angels on top of a girl. Everything after that is a blur, when I finish beating him I turned to the girl she looks familiar but I can’t see her clearing due to my blur vision. I take her hand and left her near my Café. I go home and get cleaned up then go to sleep. In the morning I heard voices and noises down stairs. “Man~ There’s school today. I still got 1hr & half until class starts.” I go back to sleep and half an hr later I wake up and get ready. I go to my café and eat a huge breakfast, I look at my watch and it’s almost time for school. I walk in and see Minami and Miichan talking; I quickly get inside and sit down in my seat next to I really don’t know who the girl is. 

Yuki’s POV
Hey, Ren long time no see.” I tell him, he turns to face me and has a blank look on his face. “Hello, do I know you?” What?? “Ren stop playing around it’s me Yuki.” He looks at me as if I’m a crazy person. “I’m sorry, but I don’t know you.” He says it in such a distant and cold voice. “I’m Yuki, your desk mate.” I said trying to hide me sadness. “Oh, of course. Sorry, it’s just I didn’t recognize you.” He says and turns to the front. What’s wrong with him?The class started but most of the students were paying more attention to Ren. It seemed that he was starting to get annoyed by their stares and glaring. “OI! If you have something to say to me then say it and stop staring and glaring at me!” He shouted scaring the sensei and the other students. Why is he so angry? Did something happen?
Its lunch time, I was going to speak to him but Jurina and Kumi appeared grading Ren and dragging him out the room. “Oh, great they took him before I had the chance to talk with him.” Acchan whined. “Ha! That’s what you get!” Minami exclaimed. “Shut up! Midget!” “You shut up!” “Hey, you two calm down. You sound like a married couple.” Miichan teased which earned her a hard SMACK on the head from Erena. “So, Yuki have you kissed any one yet?” Tomochin and Tomo~mi said in unison. “Oi! Don’t copy me!” Tomochin glared at Tomo~mi. “I didn’t copy you! Chiyuu~” Tomo~mi pouted cutely at Tomochin who quickly turned the other way, which caused Tomo~mi to smile cutely at him and Miichan to give both a questioning look. I can feel some sexual tension. But why? Is it possible Tomo~mi likes Tomochin?
“Hey, Yuki is something wrong?” Maachan asked. “Huh? No, nothing. Why?” “Well you look down.” Acchan and Lovetan said. “Maybe it’s cuz of Ren.” Minami said. “Huh? What do you mean Takamina?” Tomochin asked. “Can’t you sense that there’s something different about Ren but old.” Minami explained. “Yeah, he’s back to his old self.” Yuko said coming in clinging onto Riku who seemed to have given up any type of resistance against Yuko. “Yuko’s right he’s back to his old and cold self.” Sayaka added. “Btw where is this Ren anyways? I want to meet him.” Riku and Mario said looking around. Suddenly I see Kumi carrying Jurina bridal style. “Hey girls. Ren’s the one who’s supposed to do the carrying.” Acchan smirked. “Our plan failed.” “What do you mean?” We all asked. “Well I pretended to trip and injury my ankle. I asked Ren to carrying me, but he just stood me up and told me to walk it off.” Kumi said upset. “I trip and fell down some stairs hoping he would catch me. But instead he graded Kumi by the collar and put her in his place so she ended up catching me bridal style and she walked here carrying me.” We all started laughing. “Wow! I’m so glad I haven’t made my move yet.” Acchan said lauging. “Hey, Acchan can I speak to you?” Mayuyu asked. “Sure.” They go somewhere.
End of Yuki’s POV

Acchan and Mayu talk
“Okay I got a plan so we win the 1st round. You in?” Mayu asked Acchan. “I’m in! So what’s the plan?” “Well, Yuki is going to the library after school right?” “Yeah, why?” “Take Ren with you, and then use the ladder to ‘search’ for a book then you’ll fall, and he’ll catch you. While I’ll trip Yuki so she lands on top of me and kisses me.” “And we win the 1st round.” Acchan said smiling evilly with Mayu.

End of school
After school Mayu went with Yuki to the library and Acchan dragged an unwilling Ren there but she didn’t expect both Kumi and Jurina to come as well. “Mayuyu, can you please grad that book on the top shelve for me?” Yuki asked pointing to the book. “Sure.” Mayu begins to climb the ladder. Acchan meanwhile wrestled with Kumi and Jurina for Ren’s ‘help’, they happen to be near the ladder Mayu was on. They hit the ladder hard enough to make Mayu fall and Yuki was pulled forward and land on top of someone. “Holy ****! We didn’t expect this turn of events!” Yuko shouted excitedly. “So, our winners are Mayu and Acchan!” Erena said smiling at their positions. “I told you Acchan was going to win but I didn’t expect this.” Miichan said looking at the scene in front of them. Ren had reflexively caught Mayu, who’s blushing like mad. Acchan had fallen backward after hitting the latter grading Yuki’s arm for support but ended up bring her down with her causing Yuki to land on top of Acchan and fully kiss her on the lips. “Not what you’d expect.” Mario said. “Yo~ Mayu~ Are you blushing?” Riku teased. “N-n-no! I’m just out of breath! U know how hard it is to climb ladders!” Mayu said unintentionally putting his face in Ren’s neck. “Mayu, you can let go of him now.” Miichan said helping Yuki off Acchan. “Yeah, unless you’re attracted to him.” Riku winked at Mayu who blushed more and had Ren put him down. “T-thank you for catching me.” Mayu stuttered. “No problem. I’m leaving bye.” Ren left before anyone could say anything. “So the losers have to entertain. Now pick a name from the box. Blues has the guys’ names and red has the girls names.” Yuko said taking out the said boxes. “Hey! When did you make those?” Everyone asked. “During class. Now pick!” Kumi got Tomochin, Jurina got Ren, and Mayu picked for Sea who got Sayaka. “Wait! Why is Ren’s name in there?” Acchan asked. “Just cuz. Yuki’s name is also in here. Besides it’s funnier like that. Right Riku? Riku?” Yuko said shaking the red box, turned around to see that Riku had left her. “RIKU~” “He left while you were focused on them.” Mario said pointing at the losers. “NOOO~ But he won’t get away!” Yuko said giving the boxes to Erena. “What do u mean?” Yuki asked while the others nodded. “I have a Riku-nayn sensor!” Yuko said showing her dimples. “See ya!” Yuko was gone, few seconds later. “AHHH~! NOT U!!! OH GOD! HOW DID SHE FIND ME~!” “RIKU~! SKINSHIP! SKINSHIP!” “NOOOOO~ GET AWAY FROM ME~ SREW IT!” “YAY! SKINSHIP!” “YUKO! U PREVENTED MIDGET SQUIRREL……” After a few minutes, Yuko came running towards Minami and them crying.

TBC....

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: gekikarabuACE on December 28, 2011, 04:54:11 AM

Okay, I'm a bit confused now. So Ren woke up remember what Sae and Mayu did to him, but doesn't recognize Yuki?  :? Or was he remembering something else from the past (his first disappearance)?  Takamina did say he went back to his old self.

Ah, I still have so many questions running in my mind.  :panic: I can't wait for the next update!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: Sok on December 28, 2011, 06:11:47 AM

@ gekikarabuACE- Mayu and sae used their powers to erase Yuki from Ren's memory. But he remembers her in the up coming ch.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: Haruko on December 28, 2011, 06:23:26 AM

wow wow good :D, sorry but my favorite part its kojiyuu jaja riku.nyan sensor :D

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: haruhi16 on December 28, 2011, 08:48:09 AM

lol seriously, you need to change Yuko's character in here, make her the serious type now so Riku will come after her this time. For a change. I already read all the fics here and Yuko's character are all the same, well i mean not all, there are some that she's serious but we are getting used of it and she's acting really annoying now..

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: kahem on December 28, 2011, 09:06:43 AM

Lol the librairy scene!
Acchan and Yukirin's kiss yay!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: RenaChii on December 28, 2011, 12:03:59 PM

REN!! Why did you lose your memory about YUKI?! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/OMG.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 9 Dec. 27
Post by: Megumi on December 30, 2011, 02:28:22 PM

Ehhh?

They took Ren/Renas wings?!  :panic:
Was she an angel before?!?! Waaa Ren/Rena got an amnesia!!!
Poor Yuki and LoL Mayu blushing when Ren catches her.....Yuki&Acchan kissed  :rofl:


Riku&Yuko when will Riku require his love for the perverted squirrel?!

Can't wait for your update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 10 Jan. 5
Post by: Sok on January 05, 2012, 05:10:38 PM

Thank you to kahem, RenaChii, Megumi, gekikarabuACE for leaving thank yous.

@ gekikarabuACE, Haruko, haruhi16, kahem, RenaChii, Megumi- Thank you for your comments.

I'm thinking about making Yuko more serious in the upcoming Chapter. Well more likely a Riku vs Yuko.  :twisted: Sorry for any mistakes or confusion. Hope you enjoy this chapter.

Chapter 10

“Yuko?! What’s wrong?” Erena, Sayaka, Miichan, Jurina, Kumi, Yuki, Lovetan, Maachan, Acchan and tomo~mi asked worried. “Don’t forget, losers your punishment will happen tomorrow.” Said Takamina. While the boys left them alone to talk. “Well I’ll see you all tomorrow.” Mario and Mayu said going to Riku who was waiting with a devilish smirk. “See ya.” Tomochin and Takamina said going home.

Back to Yuko and the girls 
“Yuko what happened?” Yuki asked while comforting her. “Riku, he doesn’t love me.” Yuko cried. “We all know he doesn’t love you.” Erena deadpanned. “Yep, he never really liked you.” Jurina and Kumi added. “In fact, he always looked pissed whenever you touched and harassed him.” Miichan said shaking her head. “Hey! That’s how I was taught to show my love!” Yuko pouted. “By Sexual Harassment?” Lovetan and Maachan deadpanned. “Yes!” Yuko retorted. “Yuko, that’s against the law, if he pressed charges you can go to jail for that.” Yuki said. “What? But Yuko’s right!” Acchan defense Yuko’s way. “What?!” the girls shouted. “YAY! Acchan is on my side!” Yuko shouted happy. “Well it’s the easiest way to get the guy you like interested in you, right? Chiyuu~” Tomo~mi replied. “How?” The others asked. “Well, how did you get Tomochin, Miichan? Chiyuu~” Tomo~mi asked. “Well, um…skinship.” Miichan said realizing their right. “Erena and you? How did you get that midget?” Accahn asked not knowing why she asked. “Same. Skin ship.” “Okay, maybe those two are affected by skinship, but what about Ren?” Yuki asked wanting to know how she can get his attention. “Yuki’s right. Ren never seems to be affected by skinship.” Miichan added.”Maybe he’s gay!” Yuko shouted. “Then that makes Riku gay too.” Acchan, Kumi, Jurina, and Yuki retorted. “Why?” Yuko yelled. “Cuz he acts the same way Ren does.” Erena said. “Ture that!” Tomo~mi, Lovetan and Maachan agreed. “No, it’s just that Ren doesn’t seem to be interested in getting into a relationship with anyone. Now I’ll see you girls tomorrow.” Sayaka said as she left home, seeing that Yuko wasn’t that hurt. Yuko’s thoughts: I think I need to change my way of getting Riku. Besides I’m getting tired of him ignoring me. Who does he think he is? No one resist a devil’s charm. Hmm, maybe I should use the 7 deadly sins well except sloth. 
“Sayaka’s right. Besides, he can’t be gay cuz he’s ki…” Yuki stopped talking cuz she realized what she was about to say which would be bad. “He What?” Miichan questioned looking at Yuki. “Nothing! Forget I said anything. Bye!” With that Yuki started running. “Oh no u don’t!” Lovetan yelled. “Get her girls!” Acchan commanded. Lovetan, Maachan, Jurina, Kumi, Yuko, Acchan, Miichan, Erena, and Tomo~mi were now chasing her.
“Hey! I thought Yuki wasn’t the athletic type.” Miichan shouted. “No, she never was!” Maachan, Lovetan and Tomomi shouted. “Then how the hell can she be so fast?!” Yuko retorted. “Maybe it’s cuz she’s hiding something juicy.” Kumi shouted. “In that case, DON’T LET HER GO!” Acchan yelled. Yuki ran out the school gates to a nearby park into a dark tunnel and hid in the shadows as she heard the girls’ footsteps getting louder and louder until they passed her. She let out a sigh of relieve, she started walking out the tunnel when she noticed how dark the sky was. “Ah, it’s already dark.”I hope nothing hopes while I’m going home. Yuki thought as she walked home in a quick pace. She was too focused on getting home she did not notice the group of men following her. When she got near an alley one of the men ran up to her from behind. His hand over her mouth and dragged her into the dimmed lighted alley. Oh god! Not again! Someone save me! Tears began to roll down her cheeks as she noticed the man was not alone, there were four more men approaching her.

Ren’s Pov
I can’t believe I didn’t recognize Yuki. How could I forget such a beautiful woman such as her. Wait! What am I thinking? Argh! I need to find something to take my mind off thinking. “Oi! Cutie, wanna have fun?” A drunken man said as he harasses a teenage girl. “Mister, please let go of me.” “Sorry, sweetheart, but I just want to have some fun with ya.”Great! I think I just found my toy. *Evil smirk*“Oi! Old guy! Yeah, you the one harassing the underage girl. If you want fun why not have it with me?” “Sorry, I’m not into men.” I charge at him and sides tackle him to the ground, I quickly get up and check on the girl. I see that her shirt is ripped, so I gave her my jacket. “Hey, you better go home. Your parents must be worried about you.” “Yes, thank you.” After she leaves I put my whole attention on the guy standing up. “You’ll pay for that kid!” He says charging at me. I take the hit, but didn’t hurt at all. I get up and start punching him, then I do a spin kick knocking him on his butt. “Now, Mister let’s hear you scream.” I say in my cold chilly voice and start to giggle. I break both his legs and he screams as the pain grows begging me to stop. Hehe, it’s been a long time since I’ve done this. I wonder what I else I can break. How about his playmate? hehe. I want blood.

Back to Yuki
 They all had a perverted look on their ugly mugged faces. Before they even got close enough to touch Yuki, they all heard crying and begging coming from deeper within the alley (behind Yuki). “Please, please don’t hurt me.*sobs*” The person begged until a deathly scream was heard. “I swear *sobs* never to do *sobs*  that ever again. *sobs*” You could hear fist hitting fresh over and over again until a soft thump was heard. The man covering Yuki’s mouth and holding her from behind suddenly felt a chill run down his body as well as the other four men as they heard a voice. “Ne…okotte iru? hehe.” The men were all frozen until the person spoke. “Ne? Wanna be my punching bag? Hehe” With that the person graded the man holding Yuki and threw him against the wall and processed in punching him repeating. The other four charged towards him, attacking him from behind. Yuki stood there admiring the person; even though the giggles, the blood on his fist and face and his violent behavior would scare others to death she found it attractive, very attractive. After the person had finished beating the men he turned to Yuki. Yuki’s thoughts: Wow, even though they’re faint his white wings are so beautiful. Is he an Angel? Wait. Angel? The guy’s definitely human so why did I just see wings? OMG! Don’t tell it’s my time to die. He’s coming towards me.The person spoke. “Y-Yuki?!” “Ren.” Yuki said surprised as he got closer to her a smile immediately formed on Yuki’s lips, Ren immediately took Yuki’s hand and hugged her tightly before leading her to the streets, they started walking towards Yuki’s home hand in hand. Ren wouldn’t let go.
“Ren?” “…” “Ren, say something.” Yuki said worried. “You should be more careful.” “I know.” “If you know then why aren’t you more careful?” Ren asked mad. Ren’s thoughts: Why am I so worried about Yuki? Why am I being protective over her? Why do I care so much about her? What happens to her shouldn’t affect me, but still why do I feel this way towards her? It’s the same feelings I had towards *her* but I don’t remember what this feeling is called.“Sorry, it’s just that my mind was focused on something else.” “You know you could have gotten raped or worse pregnant because those pieces of trash or even worse been killed!” Ren said in an upset voice. Ren’s: Wait, why am I acting like this? Those two angels are involved with her. I shouldn’t get involved with her, but why am I so attracted? “I know. Then why don’t you become my boyfriend and protect me?” Yuki asked. “No.” “I’m so..” Yuki said disappointed but was cut off. “No Yuki it’s not your fault. It’s those two angels’ faults for not being with you. Aren’t they supposed to be winning your heart or something? They should be with you protecting you. Not me.” Ren said in a calm voice. “Yes, but I’d rather have you. Wait? Angels?” Yuki asked confused. “We’re here. See you.” Ren left without answering her question. Yuki enters her home still thinking about what Ren said. Mayu and Sae Angels? More like Devils. Wait if their Angels than that means Riku and Mario are Angels too. But Mario’s the only one that kinda acts like an Angel while the others act more like Devils. *sigh* my head is starting to hurt. I should talk with Ren, but I feel that something’s changed about him. I want the teasing Ren that took my first kiss.

Yuko’s POV
Okay, so yesterday I decide to stop being clinging and annoying since that’s not really me. I have to go back to soccer today since I haven’t been attending practices. Well, if Riku doesn’t love me then so be it. I don’t care.Okay, Yuko. The coach has decided to give you a second chance since you’re the soccer team’s Ace and captain, but no more skipping practices to chase after Riku.” Sayaka tells me. “Okay! I promise all my attention will go towards improving my soccer team.” “Good.” Erena says. “Yep, that’s good to hear since many of the girls are fighting each other during practice. My workload has increase cuz of them.” Mocchi adds. “What you mean?” I asked confused, my girls are serious and know better than to fight one another on the field. “Since you haven’t been around, they decide to choose a new captain and see who’ll be the new Ace but always end up fighting each other.” Erena explains. “That’s the main reason the coach gave you a second chance, cuz you’re the only one that can smack some sense into them.” Mocchi added. “Okay that’s enough, let’s get going.” Sayaka said.
I walking into class with Sayaka beside me, the first I notice is Riku sitting in his seat playing with his PSP while Mario flirts with some girls. “Yuko are you okay?” Sayaka asked me worry in her voice. “Yeah, I’m fine.” She goes to her desk and I take my seat next to Riku. “ohayo.” I greet him. “Oh, Ohayo.” He says without looking at me. I really wanna touch him, but I have to show him that I’m not the Yuko he knows. The entire day I didn’t pay any attention towards him, but that didn’t go unseen by several girls who quickly surrounded him. He chit chatted with all of them; he has never acted like that towards me.

Tomomi’s Pov
*Sigh* How do I get Tomochin’s attention? Miichan said she used skinship to get him, but whenever we’re near each other he distances himself from me. *Sigh* I should ask Yuki or Acchan for advice. Well I see Acchan but where’s Yuki? Class’s about to start where can she be? “Tomomi?” “Huh? Oh, what’s wrong Sae? You look kinda dead.” “Oh it’s nothing. Have you seen Yuki?” “No, I haven’t.” “Oh, okay.” Sae looks kinda down, did something happen between them? “Btw Sae you lost the bet. You’re person is Sayaka, the losers punishment is today after school.” Tomochin said to Sae. “Yeah, I know Mayu told me yesterday. I’ll be there.” “Great to hear that.”I don’t like the idea of Kumi being alone with Tomochin in a single room.
I know she likes Ren but still not liking the idea.The class starts and Yuki isn’t here. Huh? It’s already after school? Where the hell was I? That class went by so fast?
“Okay ladies, how about we go with the losers?” Acchan said happily. “Sure.” We go to where they are. Kumi doesn’t look to happy to have gotten Tomochin while Jurina is glad she got Ren, but he looks a little sad. “Hey, Sayaka where’s Yuko?” Minami asked. “Oh she’s at soccer practice.” “Huh? She’s in the female soccer team?” Sae, Mario and Mayu shouted. “Yeah, she’s the Ace and captain. Why?” Erena answered. “Not good.” Sae said. “What do you mean?” I asked curious. “The boys’ soccer team is playing against the girls’ team today.” Mayu replied. “Yeah, so?” Acchan said. “Riku is their new Ace.” “What?!” we all shouted. “I thought Riku wasn’t athletic!” Tomochin, Minami, Miichan, Lovetan, Maachan, and Acchan yelled. “Well, he’s very athletic but doesn’t like wasting energy unless it interests him. Like gaming or soccer.” Mario informed. “Oh.” We al said.
“Anyways back to the punishment.” Ren said grumpy. “Okay. So losers you know you’ll be entertaining now go into your rooms.” They going into their rooms except Kumi and Tomochin, they stop before opening the door. “Um, Tomochin you go in first I have to use the restroom.” “Okay?” He goes in. Everyong else was going to watch the soccer game, but I stayed there I didn’t realize that Kumi was calling out my name until she snapped her fingers. “Huh? Oh, Kumi what’s wrong?” “I’ve been calling your name. Anyways would you mind taking my place.” “What?” I asked confused. “Take my place with Tomochin. Don’t worry he won’t know it’s you cuz the room is pitch black and he doesn’t have night vision.” “Um, no. It’s okay.” “Too late! You’re already in front of the door.” What? When did I get so close? I try and resist but Kumi opens the door and pushes me hard into the dark room, I fall and land on something soft. “Uhh~ WTH!” OHMYGOSH! I landed on top of Tomochin. I get up quickly but am suddenly pulled back down on top of him; he tightly hugs me and kisses me. OHMYGOODNESS! He’s such a great kisser.
Without realizing it I’m kissing him back, his hands now moving all over my body. We break the kiss to get air into our lungs. *panting* “Wow1 Chiyuu, you’re a good kisser!” Tomochin said still catching his breath. “Um, how did you know it was me?” “One good reason, you’re taller, sexier, cuter and better body line than Kumi. I also thought she would do something like this so she could go and spy on Jurina and Ren. And I’m glad it’s you.” Tomochin smiled. “Hey! That’s more than one reason. Hehe” “Yeah, anyway shall we continue?” He said as he nibbles on my neck. “Yes, but what about Miichan?” “She’s been busy arguing with Mario-sempai to even pay any attention to me. The only times she pays me any is when you’re near me.” He moves onto my jaw. “Oh, so she worried I might steal you from her?” I teased and he stops and looks at me. “Yes, but you already stole my heart the moment I lend eyes on you. Sorry for being cold towards you, but that’s how I show I care.” He said and started to take my top off. “Tomochin you’re so sweet, but you have a girlfriend and she’s my friend, so we need to stop.” I know I said that but I really don’t want him to stop. “Okay.” He stops and fixes my top. “I’ll break-up with Miichan.” He took out his phone. “Miichan?” He puts her on speaker. OHMYGOSH! He’s really breaking up with her.
“Tomochin? What’s up? And make it quick I’m arguing with this half-assed Angel.” “Hey, my name’s Mario! You Gachapin!” “Miichan let’s break-up.” Toochin plainly says. “What?!” Both Miichan and Mario shouted. “You’ve been busy with Mario lately and have no time for me. Besides I really like this girl. And you know how hard it is for me to do this.” Tomochin said honestly. “Yeah, I understand. So Tomomi you better take care of Tomochin.” Miichan said in a serious tone. “And Tomochin treat Tomomi with respect or else I’ll beat you.” Mario said also in a serious tone. “I will. Wait! How did you know?” Tomochin shouted. “The way you two look at each other gave it away.” Mario and Miichan deadpanned. “Oh, well thanks Miichan and I’ll take good care of Tomochin.” I replied. “Good. Now that I’m not in a relationship, let’s go on a date.” Miichan commanded Mario. “What? And why do I have to date you?” Mario retorted. Both me and Tomochin yelled. “You two are way too attracted to each other. Now do us a favor and also start dating.” Mario heaved a sigh. “Okay, fine but how about we go on a double date? I don’t want to be alone with Miichan, you never know what she’ll do.” Mario said. “Hey! I aint like Yuko!” Miichan protested. “Well, you’re her friend so it’s possible.” Mario replied. We laughed. “Sure. We’ll be waiting at the front Gate.” “Okay.”

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 10 Jan. 5
Post by: Haruko on January 06, 2012, 05:28:07 AM

awww yuko beocome more serious like it!! come on yuuchan prove to riku that you are more that a pervert :D

aww tomotomo couple :D

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 10 Jan. 5
Post by: RenaChii on January 06, 2012, 07:15:28 AM

Ren~ Why you so COOL~ (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_lovelaff.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 10 Jan. 5
Post by: Megumi on January 07, 2012, 01:54:03 AM

 :ding: this is so interesting!

Ren/Rena was indeed an angel?! OMG OMG I can't wait to know more about Ren/Renas story!

Poor Yuko but I'm exited to see Yuko&Riku Soccer team meeting each other!

Yukirin where are you?!  :(

 :w00t: Yei for Chiyuu~&Tomochin together and Miichan&Mario...

 :panic: Exited exited!

Thank you for your update& looking forward t next!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 10 Jan. 5
Post by: kahem on January 08, 2012, 10:57:37 PM

Yay my Tomotomo!!! But wtf? They broke up like that, nornal??? Lol

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Sok on January 15, 2012, 12:06:00 AM

Hello, thank you to everyone who left thank yous and comments.
I'm sorry for any grammar mistakes, confusion and soccer ran through. Didn't really wanna write much on it. Also the last scene might be too hot.  :bath: Hope you all enjoy it.

Chapter 11
Yuko’s POV
It’s after school and time for practice. I get ready, good thing our practice clothes are just shirt and shorts, then quickly step onto the field. When I’m near the bleachers I start to hear shouting. “Hey! I’m better!” “Yes, but I’m smarter!” WTH! What are they arguing about? Seems Mocchi wasn’t kidding about an increase in work. I better stop it. “Yo! Coach, I’m here for practice!” I yelled and soon enough the girls stop fighting. “Oh, Yuko you’re finally back!” “Yup, so I heard what’s been going on during my absence. Would you like me to take over today’s and this whole week practice? I have some pretty heavy stuff ready for our team’s training.” I smirked evilly which makes all my teammates and coach gulp. “No, well not today’s but the rest of the week is fine.” “Okay, but why not start today?” I asked disappointed, I really wanna work these girls until they sweat blood, and I mean literally sweat blood. “Today’s the practice game against the boys’ team.” My Vice captain answered. “Yeah, I can’t believe you forgot!” Another said. “You were the one that set it up.” The coach added. Oh yeah. I totally forgot, but they no longer have their Ace. Thanks to Ren who beat him so bad he’s now in the hospital. “Oh sorry, I’ve been busy. But they don’t have an Ace Aoi any more so it wouldn’t be as tough.” “What are you talking about?” “Okay girls I’ll leave you all alone until the match is over. Bye.” The coach said. Dude, why are you our coach when you do nothing other than eat and watch me coach and train them then take all the credit. Good thing the principal’s under her family’s control. *sigh* “Aoi’s in the hospital isn’t he?” “Oh, yeah! But they got a new more handsome Ace while you were gone.” “Yeah, he’s so hot. I mean in both his looks and his soccer skills.” “What you mean?” I’m confused even more now. “He’s ten times a better player than Aoi.” “And way~ more attractive.” Wow, this guy has both looks and soccer skills. He’s my perfect man. I wonder who he is. Ah! I can’t wait for the match to begin. I hope this guy will take my mind off Riku.

Riku’s POV
Today I and my boys will be playing the girls. They tell me that the girls’ captain is also their Ace; she’s fast, aggressive, beautiful, and very skilled. I honestly hope she’s what they say she is I hate clingy people. I usually ignore and leave them cuz they think I’m an airhead and will go along with them. That’s only cuz I have to watch my tongue since Mario doesn’t want any trouble. “Oi! Riku!” “Yo! What’s up?” “The sky! haha” Our team’s captain replied. “haha, real funny Chi. Anyways today’s the day I meet the famous Captain/ Ace of the girls’ team.” “Haha, yup!” Chi said. “You’ll finally meet our soccer Queen.” Our Vice captain Tae said. “Our soccer King will meet his Queen. Haha” Chi added making us laugh. “haha, just hope it’s true what you all told me about her.” “Don’t worry, she’s not like that stalker of yours.” One said. “Now that you mention it, she’s not here today.” Another one added. “You didn’t do anything to make her stop? Did you?” Tae asked. “Man, and she was really cute, too.” Chi pouted. “haha, don’t worry. She’ll probably stalk you next.” I said laughing. “Really? I hope so!” Chi said excitedly which made us laugh.
End of Riku's POV

(Striker – Generally the same as a forward, though it sometimes refers to a forward that is his/ her team’s primary scoring threat.)

“Okay, it’s time to start the game.” The referee with the #00 shouted. “Okay, would both teams spend their Captains and vice captains please.” Referee with #0 yelled. Both teams C and VC went and were told the rules and sportsmanship after the referees’ talk they go back to their teams. “Riku! You’ll be our Striker.” Tae said as we did our circle. “Aint I always.” Riku smirked. “Yup!” #12 said proudly. “That’s why he’s our Ace now.” #9 said. “Okay, anyways, she’s their Striker so be careful.” Tae said. “Ever since she became the girl’s captain the boys have been losing to the girls for 3 yrs.” Chi said upset. “Wow, 3 yrs? Well that’ll change today.” Riku said and all the boys smirked. Mean while with the girls. “Kyaaa~” #18, 23, & 21 screamed as they spotted the boys’ Ace. “What? What’s with you?” Yuko asked confused. “It’s him.” The rest shouted pointing at Riku. “Huh? Who?” Yuko asked more confused. “It’s the boys new Ace.” #14 said slapping Yuko’s arm. “Oh, so which one is it?” Yuko asked as she looked at the circle of boys. “Aw~ he’s already in the circle.” The girls complicated. “Well you don’t have to worry. He’ll be playing Striker.” The vice captain said. “How you know?” Yuko asked. “He always plays Striker. So you’ll be playing against him since you always play Striker, too.”
“Okay Ladies and Gentlemen. Let’s begin the match.” Referee #0 yelled to the crowd that has gathered to watch the annual match between the boys and girls soccer team. The crowd cheers for their team. Mostly cheers for the girls since they’ve been winning for 3 yrs straight.
Now the teams’ Forwards and Strikers are facing each other, girls get the ball first. Riku’s thoughts: Yuko? She plays soccer? Yuko’s thoughts: Riku? Why you playing soccer? Ah! And here I thought the match could keep me from thinking about you. Hey! Handsome!” “Oh hello # 21.” Chi said. “Not you! #22.” “Huh? Oh hey can you give me the ball?” Riku asked as the referees signaled the match to start. “Oh time to play.” Riku smirked as he took the ball from #21 and ran pass the shocked Yuko. In the few second he scored. The men in the crowd cheered. Yuko quickly snapped out of her shock as she noticed that the boys had scored. Yuko’s thoughts: OH HELL NO! NO ONE SCORES ON MY GIRLS. YOU’RE GOING DOWN RIKU! As the girls’ goalkeeper kicked the ball in, # 14 quickly got the ball and passed it to Yuko. Yuko then ran pass two boys who were on defense on her and scored teeing the score. Riku’s thoughts: Damn, she’s as skilled, fast and beautiful as the guys said, but I still don’t see the aggressive side. *smirk* Maybe I should make her. The game continued. Riku and Yuko taking the ball from each other and blocking them (you know the usual), throughout the match both sides defense got tighter and stronger neither the boys and girls scored the rest of the first half and the beginning of the second half. Bothe sides showed that they were tired and having muscle aches, except Riku and Yuko. “Time out!” Chi yelled to the referees. “Time out!”
Boys
“Man, we haven’t scored since Riku’s first goal.” “Yeah.”  “I’m dead tired.” “My butt muscles hurt!” “I feel like I’m gonna lose my legs if we keep going like this.” “This is the hardest match I’ve ever been in.” “Guys, I agree this is the tough match against the girls, in fact against anyone we ever had.” “Hey, we just need to be a little rougher that all.” Riku said. “He’s right.” Tae said. “But we don’t have strength to be rougher than we all ready are.” “Yeah, if we continue, I might get a heart attack.” “Okay, Riku, you’re to go all out on them by yourself since you still look fresh.” Chi said. Riku’s thoughts: Of course, I keep healing myself right after Yuko and I battle for the ball. Good thing I have healing powers or else I’d be lying on a hospital bed right now. Damn! Is Yuko really human? Her strength seems that of a devil. “Hey Riku do you workout or something?” “Yeah cuz you don’t look the least bit tired.” “Really? Thanks.” Riku asked unsure. “Yes. But first take off your shirt and change shorts with Chi.” Tae said. “Why? Chi’s shorts are too tight and short for me.” Riku asked confused. “Just do it.” “No!” “Boys get him!” Chi commanded. The boys quickly graded Riku and took his shirt off and exchanged Chi’s shorts with his. “Man, I feel naked.” Riku said embarrassed covering his chest and mid section. “Wow, dude. You got a sexy body.” His teammates and said in unison. “Chi! Why the hell do you have to wear such small tight a** shorts to practice! I feel NAKE!!!” Riku yelled.
Girls
“I’m dead tired.” “My butt muscles hurt!” “I feel like I’m gonna lose my legs if we keep going like this.” “This is the hardest match we’ve ever had with the boys.” The girls complained. “Ha, yeah but why are Yuko and Riku the only ones not tired.” “Yeah, that’s right.” “You two are the ones doing most of the work yet you’re not tired one bit.” Yuko’s thoughts: Of course! I’ve been using my healing power to stay alive. Shoot! If I didn’t know better, I’d say he was a devil but I know all the devils. Unless…. He’s an Angel? Nah not possible, right? “Okay! I got a plan.” Yuko shouted. “What is it?” “Play until you sweat blood!” Yuko shouted and smiled showing her dimples. “NO!” Her teammates yelled grading her. “We got a better idea.” Her teammates smirked. “Uh ho.” A few minutes later, Yuko was in a different outfit than she was before. “WTH! Why am I half NAKED!” Yuko shouted upset. “Well, you’re the only one with energy.” “We’re all dead tired.”
“Okay! TIME OUT IS OVER!!” Yelled the referees. Both teams are back in their positions. The crowd went crazy as they saw what the teams’ Aces were wearing. The teams were all in positions when they see the other teams strikers (Riku (http://imgs.yoox.biz/47/47108764_2.jpg), Yuko (http://lh5.ggpht.com/-wygYCkZ-Y9c/TKt21EyJ_DI/AAAAAAAAKmE/wTnvO6twxJM/yuko_oshima_185.jpg)) they all faint except Riku and Yuko. The Crowd: “NOOOO!!! GET UP AND CONTUINE!!”
“They must be tired.” Riku said as he got close to Yuko. “yup, they looked as if they were going to faint any time.” Yuko said also getting close to Riku. Then both Referees approached them. “Um, excuse us but it seems the match ends here.” “Since all your players have fainted.” “It’s okay.” Both Yuko and Riku said. The referees then called Mocchi who seemed very upset that she has gotten an increased of work. “Anyways I’ll go change since it’s ended.” Yuko said and left. Riku’s thoughts: Why is she so down and depressed? Wait! Why do I care? She’s a perverted squirrel! I don’t like perverted people. Yet now that I played against her, I see her in a different way, I would’ve never guess she could be so serious and passionate about something not perverted. Maybe I should cheer her up and apologize for yesterday. I was really a jerk. Riku quickly ran after Yuko to talk to her but he found her surround by guys from their class and other classes. “Yo Yuko you very sexy in that.” One smirked. Yuko didn’t really pay any attention to them and passed them. “Hey! Didn’t you hear?!” Another yelled and graded Yuko’s arm to stop her. “yeah, I heard but I don’t care.” Yuko said still looking at the floor. Riku’s thoughts: Why is she not fighting back like she usually does when guys hit on her? Wait! Why am I hiding? I should just walk up and take her away from them. Yes, wait Why do I want to help her? Agh! Damn! I’m confused! What’s this I’m feeling? “Haha, if you don’t care then you wouldn’t mind if I do this.” A different guy said and grope Yuko’s butt. Riku’s Thoughts: Oh, Hell no!  That's my woman! Yuko didn’t react to it at all. “hey, so you don’t mind if we have a little fun now do you?” The guys were starting to get closer to Yuko. “Oi! Leave my girlfriend alone!” Riku said braking into the circle and punching the guy groping Yuko’s butt. “WHAT THE HELL!” He shouted. “WHAT YOU SAY?” Riku replied in a cold icy voice glaring at the guy and the others. “um, nothing bye.” The guy went running and the rest followed. Yuko still didn’t react. Riku’s: What’s wrong with her? She didn’t even react in the slight when I yelled she was my girlfriend. Was I really that big a jerk towards her? Urgh! I can’t take this anymore. Riku graded Yuko’s hand and took her into an empty room and closed it quick. “Yuko?” no answer. “Yuko, say something.” Still no answer. “Yuko!” Riku now shaking Yuko violently by her shoulders but still no answer. Riku heaves a sigh.
“It’s now or never.” Riku said to himself, which made Yuko look up at him but she was interrupted by something soft on her lips, she was closing her eyes when she suddenly felt a pair of hands touching her chest area which caused her to yelp. She let out a moan when Ruki pressed his body against Yuko’s, he lifted her and she wrapped her legs around Riku’s waist, he then up took off her sweater. He walked towards a table and sat her on top of it. They were now grinding into each other. Riku kissed Yuko's lower lips, begging for an entrance. Yuko parted her lips and Riku's tongue immediately explored Yuko's mouth.  Their tongues were dancing around in each other's mouth. They pulled away after 5 minutes of deep kissing due to the need of air. “*pant* you *pant* really *pant* are a *pant* pervert.” Yuko said catching her breath. “haha, no *pant* it’s just *pant* with you.” Riku replied getting air into his lungs. “Well, I really do enjoy this side of you.” “Haha, too bad. But it’s over. Bye.” Riku said as he tried to separate from Yuko. “Oh no you don’t.” Yuko said tightening her grip around Riku’s waist. “Why not?” Riku smirked knowing what Yuko had in mind. “You said I was your girlfriend. Meaning that You’re my boyfriend now.” Yuko said putting her arms around Riku’s neck. “Oh, you have no idea how I really am.” Riku smirked leasing some dark aura. “Wait, on second thought let’s get to know each other better.” Yuko said separating from Riku but was pinned down onto the table. “Oh no you don’t. You got me interested and when I’m interested in something I don’t share or let it get away until I bored. And let me tell you, I don’t get bored with devils.” Riku showed an evil smirk. Yuko’s thoughts: UH HO, seems I’ve awaken a part of him that’s scary and violent. Lord please help me live, oh never mind he’s just perverted. “Riku! Please be my boyfriend.” “Of course, but you need to stop being so perverted in front of everyone or I’ll have to punish you.” “Deal.” Yuko’s thoughts: I wonder what the punishments will be? Well one way to find out. (Riku’s still doing things to Yuko making her moan.) 



TBC....


I might delete the last part. I think it might be too hot.



 

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Nab on January 15, 2012, 03:14:23 AM

 :drool:  :drool:  Greaaat!!!   :bow: RikuxYuko is perfect!!!  :twothumbs  :drool: please.. more more  :bleed eyes: Tnks!!!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: haruhi16 on January 15, 2012, 03:39:27 AM

Wow, i'm glad you followed my advice for changing Yuko into a serious one. Haha! I like the way you did to Riku, now he already fell for Yuko and i really hope he'll be nice now to her! or else i'll take Yuko away from him! LOL

Yes! I think i like Yuko more in a serious behavior, so Riku will always come after her this time! Go Yuko! Make him come after you this time and make him jealous to death! deserves him for being so cold to you all these days! lol yeah i'm a sadist :P

Thanks for the update and i hope you'll update soon!! Thumbs up!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Yagami.Rai on January 15, 2012, 04:57:41 AM

Yea!! Thanks for the Update XD

 :shocked Riku so aggressive...
and declare that Yuko is his girlfriend :grin:
It was great :D

Please update soon :mon cute:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Sydney W on January 15, 2012, 06:09:27 AM

Riku and Yuko finally end up.
Yuko have awaken the aggressive side of Riku. She gonna face the punishment.
Update next. Thanks

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Haruko on January 15, 2012, 08:07:54 AM

aww my kojiyuu together thanx.. riku you are a pervet... devil pervert..

why why you erase the last part.. we gonna know.. we MUST know

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: kahem on January 15, 2012, 08:05:03 PM

Owwwwww! Yuko and Riku owwwww!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 11 Jan. 14
Post by: Megumi on January 15, 2012, 11:44:08 PM

 :rofl: Aoi was their former team guy soccer Ace?!  :shocked: LoL with a bad breath and all *ROFL

Yuko&Riku in their second outfit was pure hotness no wonder why their respective team fainted...  :ptam-glow:

Finally Riku&Yuko are a couple hehehe one question Sok-san will there be AtsuMina?!!
Acchan might like Takamina if she turned back into a girl...or not  I'm just curious about how their love will be (if there are any)

Thank you for your update!

Arígatou!  :kneelbow:

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 12 Feb. 12
Post by: Sok on February 13, 2012, 12:21:47 AM

Hey everyone sorry for the long wait. Haven't gotten a good internet connection.

It's been a while since I've update this, so here it is. It's not confusing. Sorry for any misspelled words didn't really have time to check.

Thank you everyone.

Chapter 12
Next day everyone is hanging out during lunch except Ren who’s off running away from his fan club and Yuki who has not come to school. “Hey, Riku and Mario what happened to you two?” Mayu asked. “Huh? What you mean?” Riku & Mario asked. “Well you two didn’t come home yesterday.” Mayu said. “Oh, that’s right. Now that you mention it. Miichan and Tomochin where were you?” Minami asked. “And Yuko where were you yesterday after the game?” Erena and Kumi asked. “With Riku-nayn!” Yuko shouted and clinged onto Riku. “Oi! Get off me!” Riku shouted as he tried to separate himself from Yuko but Yuko continued her advances towards him. “Wow, seems everything has gotten back to Yuko harassing Riku.” Lovetan said. “Not really. During class she’s much more serious.” Mario informed. “Yeah and I like that side better.” Riku said. “Really? Can I get a kiss now as a reward for behaving?” Yuko said as she leans in closer to Riku’s lips. “haha, seems she’ll never change her ways towards you, Riku.” Mayu said laughing.  “Okay! That’s it! Yuko come with me.” Riku said as he and Yuko left. “Hope he doesn’t make her cry like last time.” Eran said. “Okay, well that solves theirs now to Mario, Miichan, and Tomochin.” Sayaka said. “Oh and Tomomi.” Kumi added and smirked. “Huh?” the others said. “Well, Tomomi.” Kumi was cut off by Tomomi’s hand on her mouth. “Me, Michan, Mario and Tomomi were hanging out.” Tomochin quickly responded. “Oh. Well that explains why you all weren’t here.”

Riku & Yuko
“Yuko didn’t I tell you not to be perverted or clingy towards me in front of others?” Riku asked Yuko who was sucking his neck. “Yes and you told me that I would be punished.” Yuko said smiling. “Oh so you’re aware that I’ll be punishing you?” “Yes, I’m ready for my punishment now!” Yuko happily exclaimed. “Oh, that’s great.” Riku smirked and leased his dark/ pervy aura. “Uh oh. On second thought I just remembered I have something to do so I’ll be going now bye!” Yuko said running away from Riku, but he caught up to her. “HELP! SOMEONE! RIKU’S GOING TO HMMMMMM!” Yuko shouted as loud as she could but Riku covered her mouth and pulled her into an empty class. “Now it’s time for your punishment.” Riku said seductively. Yuko’s thoughts: Note to self Riku’s too much when his switch is turned on. Never ever be perverted in front of public only in private. Lord please save me from this.

Back to the group
“Hey did you hear Yuko just now?” Miichan said looking up. “Yeah.” Kumi and Erena said. “Maybe she was chasing Riku.” Mario said. “Yea, I think since I heard her yelling Riku.” Lovetan said. “Maybe Riku escaped and she’s searching for him.” Maachan added. “Yeah, that most be it.” Everyone agreed and left for their class.
While in class Acchan whispered to Minami. “Oi! Minami don’t forget you’re my slave today after school.”
Flashback
“I bet you Yuko’s team beats Riku’s!” Minami said. “I’ll take you on! I bet that it’s a draw.” Acchan said. “You’re on! Loser does what the winner says.” Minami smirked.
“Ha! I win!” Acchan shouted. “You were lucky that’s all.” “No, the game ended with a draw.” “Just cuz the teams fainted.” “Still, I win.”
End of flashback
“Yeah, yeah. You don’t have to remind me every minute. You know.” “Just making sure and get rid of your girlfriend too.” “You don’t have to worry about her.” “What you mean?” “We broke up three days ago.” “Why?” “Stated going out with another guy.” “Whoa, didn’t know you rolled that way.” “No, not me! Her! She’s going out with a guy. Jeez” “Oh, well you said going out with another guy. So I thought.” “Yeah yeah. Just pay attention to class will ya.” Acchan’s thoughts: Why do I feel happy? Am I really attracted to this midget? Nah~ Ren’s my type. He’s so hot, knows how to fight, and gives this feminine feel. After school they’re all going their separate ways: Yuko & Riku off to practice (wait, why’s Yuko limping?), Tomochin & Tomomi shopping, Miichan & Mario arguing about Miichan’s endless stomach and how Mario won’t pay for all her food only 1/3 of it but she wants him to pay her whole diner, Lovetan & Maachan on a date, Ren off to who knows where, Kumi & Jurina & Mayu off to spy on Ren (wait why’s Mayu following Ren? Wait! Why’s he checking Jurina butt? Eeh~), Sae & Sayaka to the student council meeting (Sayaka forced Sae to join as punishment for not entertaining her well yesterday), Erena off with her new boyfriend, and finally Acchan & Minami are alone.
“Okay, so what do you want to do?” Minami asked in a let’s-get-this-over-with tone of voice. “Let’s go somewhere peaceful and relaxing, Takamina.” Acchan said smiling ignoring his tone. “Okay, Acchan. Wait did you just call me Takamina?” Takamina asked shocked. “Yes. Why you don’t want me to?” Acchan pouted cutely. “U..um no it’s just that it surprised me that’s all.” Takamina’s thoughts: Wow! Why’s my body acting excited? She just called me Takamina. Wait. Was she always this cute? Ugh! Minami focus! This is a punishment not a date. “Okay then let’s go.” Acchan graded Takamina’s arm and led him to a park nearby. “This is just the kids’ park near the school what’s so peaceful about this place?” “Wait, we’re not there yet.” Acchan and Takamina walked down a path near the back of the park after 10 minutes of walking they saw beautiful scenery  (http://travel.nationalgeographic.com/u/H6yMi6fUB_1JR964xxG8RxsYArlNNn1lR5PWutchJZER8RZr6ufeB-XvMzJ2InNSmw7TyeK5VWDz/). “Amazing. It’s so beautiful.” Takamina said in aw. “I know. Not many people like to walk deep pass the kids’ park. So there are rarely any people here.” “Oh.” Acchan looked at Takamina who had his mouth open and his tongue sticking out a little. She decided to slap up her hand closing his mouth which caused him to bite his tongue. “ITAI!” “haha, you looked like a dog drooling, so I closed your mouth for you. Haha” “Why you.” Takamina started chasing Acchan around. “Hey! Stop! Stop right there!” Takamina yelled as he chased Acchan. “Make me Short Midget!” Acchan shouted and laughed. “Oh hell no!” Takamina said upset he teleported in front of Acchan who was running full speed. He used his powers without thinking. She was shocked to see him do that and crashed into him; they both fell onto the ground rolling when they finally stopped Acchan was on top of Takamina. Their thoughts: What’s this soft feeling?

Student council room
“Sayaka I can’t believe you got such a hot guy to join and do our work.” A guy said eyeing Sae up & down. “Hey! I don’t know whether he’s gay or not. But please don’t make him.” A girl with long black said. “I agree with Rie. Don’t turn him gay.” Sayaka said. “Oh come on. That only happens…” “Whenever you set your mind to it. That’s why we are warning you. Don’t turn Sae gay.” Rie said. “Besides he’s my slave.” Sayaka said with a smirk. “Oh Gaw! If he’s your slave than he must’ve done something that didn’t satisfy you.” A girl with short black hair said. “True.” Sayaka replied. “If he can’t satisfy you than I don’t want him. Cuz my guys got to be strong and tough. That’s why they always have to pass your tests.” The guy said with a smile. “Poor dudes.” Rie and the short haired said. “Oi! Sayaka! I’m done with what you gave me!” Sae shouted. “Okay, now if you would please clean the unused classes and the storage room on the second floor.” Sayaka said more like demanded. “What?!” “You heard her.” The boy said. “Dude I suggest you do what she tells you unless you wanna have you a** handed to you.” The short hair advised. “They’re right, you don’t want her to beat you, well unless you’re a masochistic then that’d make Sayaka here a hard core Sadist.” Rie joked. Sae’s thought’s: No! I can’t heal myself like Riku and Mario. Why didn’t I get the power of healing? If she beats me up then it’ll take a while to heal like when I got beat up by that old guy. Can’t let my perfect body get injured again. “Okay.” Sae leaves the room. “Great guys now he thinks I’m a hard core sadist.” “You’re welcome!” The guy said and smiled. “Thank you for saying that.” The short hair girl said waving a recorder. “Oi, Yuuki you aren’t going to? You know.” Rie asked. “Yes, sell it to Sayaka’s masochistic club. I bet they’ll all love hearing her say she’s a hard core sadist over and over again.” Yuuki said with a big grin. “What’s this about a masochistic club?” Sayaka asked with her arms across her chest. “Oh, well a lot of male students who are fans for your violent side have created a club. They all dream of being hurt by you. You know in a kinky way.” Yuuki said not really looking at the now upset Sayaka. “Oh really? Well too bad you’re the one who’ll be having that pleasure.” “Huh?” Yuuki asked but noticed that both Rie and the guy were no longer in the council room. “Um. You know you’re starting to look like a crazy sadist right now, Sayaka. I think I should go. Bye.” Yuuki said and turned around to run but Sayaka got her and put her lap and spanked her.  After a few minutes of spanking she was freed and ran out the room cursing.   
“Why did I get such people as student council members?” Sayaka asked herself. “Cuz they seem to be the only ones who understand you.” Sae said coming into the room. “Well true, but they’re a lot to handle especially when they get a new toy.” Sayaka pretend to have a headache. “Haha. You know you’re more relayed back than I thought you were.” “Of course! What you think I was an uptight b**?” “Sort of but mostly a big sadist, cuz of the image you put as the student council president.” “Oh that’s understandable even though I have never shown my violent side to anyone at school. I usually eat bananas like a Gorilla and walk like one too.” Sayaka joked making Sae laugh. “haha. If you’re a gorilla then I’m a dinosaur.”  “haha. Well you look like one.” “haha. You know I think yesterday and today I’ve gotten to see a little of the real you.” “Oh really? And what’s the real me like then?” “An Idiot likes to act dorky and loves to be feminine but can’t cuz of how most of the student body see you which are manly and violent.” “Good point.” “Also you should really change your makeup.” “I don’t wear makeup.” “In that case put some on it’ll make you look less manly. I hope.” “Sure, but got no makeup sets.” “That’s cool, I’ll buy one. btw is that all for today?” “Yeah that’s all bye.” “Wait! What about that makeup set?” “What? You want me to go with you?” “Well of course! Now let’s go!” “Wait! Why you dragging me?” “Cuz you might run away. Besides won’t it be weird for a guy to be trying on makeup?” “I agree that would be weird well unless you’re a tr…” “Don’t you dare finish that sentence.” “Or what?” “Or I’ll show your fan club this video of you spanking Yuuki.” Sae holds up his Galaxy Nexus Android. “Wait, you have a Samsung?” “Yeah, don’t like to go with the flow. Besides they’re too many people with iphones.” “I understand.” She shows her own phone. “Is that a PRADA by LG?” “Yup.” “Nice.” “Thanks, well are you still going to buy me that makeup set.” “Of course don’t want people thinking I’m hanging out with a man in a shirt.” “really?” Sayaka starts to act as if she’s crying which Sae thinks she really is. “Uh oh. I really didn’t mean to make you cry. I’m sorry. Please stop crying I’ll do anything.” “Okay, buy me a week’s worth of Milo.” Sayaka said smiling. “Hey! You were faking?” “No, anyways week’s worth of Milo, please.” “Okay.”

Ren’s POV
I’ve been walking for a while and I can sense that Jurina, Kumi and Mayu are following. I need to get rid of them before I enter the club. I quicken my pace and slip into a packed restaurant then use my powers to change into my female form and join a group of girls who are walking out the door. Good thing, the restaurant was packed with girls. With that I managed to lose them, now off to the Club. Before I reach the club I turn back into my male form.
“Name please?” The Bouncer asked me. I say nothing just show him my VIP pass and lets me in. The place is packed but I go straight into the VIP area  (http://www.mythlive.com/home/myth/images/links/VIP%20LOUNGE_700x467.jpg) which is separated from the rest of the club, it’s very relaxing and comfortable. I like it here. 
“Yukirin! Come on, drink it!” “No! Tea, I don’t wanna drink!” “Come on! It’s only one drink, Yukirin.” “No! Natsu! I’m underage!” Yukirin? Nah~ It can’t be that Yuki, right? Wait! What is she doing at a club with two men? Most importantly WHY DO I CARE?

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 12 Feb. 12
Post by: Haruko on February 13, 2012, 05:04:49 AM

riku nyan bad side ... like so much

and atsumina im so curious for that ;B

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 12 Feb. 12
Post by: RenaChii on February 13, 2012, 12:49:29 PM

NO REN

YOU MUST CARE!! (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_headbang.gif)

BEAT THOSE GUYS AWAY FROM YOUR YUKIRIN!!  (http://forum.jphip.com/Smileys/default/mon_evillaff.gif)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 12 Feb. 12
Post by: kahem on February 26, 2012, 08:42:05 PM

WOW a lot of thing happened!
Rikuyuu is still WOW!!!!!
Acchan and Takamina start to like each other yay!!!!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 12 Feb. 12
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on February 26, 2012, 11:12:35 PM

update soon cause i lov this i want to know more about Riku's pervy side lol

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 13 June 28
Post by: Sok on June 29, 2012, 12:26:18 AM

Hey, everyone I know it's been a long time since I updated this fic. Hope it's not confusing. Enjoy!!!

Chapter 13

“Yukirin! Come on, drink it!” “No! Tea, I don’t wanna drink!” “Come on! It’s only one drink, Yukirin.” “No! Natsu! I’m underage!” “Come on baby.” They both say pushing the drink to Yuki’s lips. “No!!” Yuki yelled and slapped the drink away, spilling it on Tea and Natsu. “WTH!!!” They both stood up and looked pissed that their outfits were ruined. “You B@#%!!!” Tea yelled grabbing Yuki’s arms so she wouldn’t be able to move. “You’re going to pay for that!!” Natsu shouted grabbing Yuki’s chin. “S-s-stop, p-p-please stop. Don’t hurt me.” Yuki stuttered afraid. She has never seemed them act like this before. “Shut up!!”SMACK!!!Natsu slapped Yuki hard on her face then processed on kissing and licking the right side of her neck while Tea did the left side. She cried and begged them to stop and leave her alone. 
There were hardly any people inside the longue that seem to care what happens to the girl being violated by the two men. Not far from where it was happening were a group of 3 young adult men in their 20’s surrounded by 10 women, laughing and getting “hot”.  On the other side sat a young man who still wore his school uniform watching the entire scene as the girl begged and tried to escape from the two 20 something old years. He felt disgusted that he actually cared what might happen to the girl, but he felt more disgusted that the group of adults did nothing to help the girl as they watched the 2 grown men do such thing to a high school student.
(Yeah~ she’s a perfect 10. Has a great body, smexy, beautiful and lovely eyes. But still it’s immoral to advance on such a young girl and take advantage of her especially if she doesn’t want it.)
He stood up and walked to them. He quickly pulled the girl away from them and into his embrace her face buried in his soft muscular chest. She looked up to see his face, she was surprised as to who it was. “R-Ren?”  “You’re safe. I’ll protect you, Yuki.” He softly whispered into her ear causing her relax in his embrace before staring down the two older men. “Hey! What’s your problem!!” Both shouted stepping closer to them, Ren quickly pulled Yuki behind him to protect her from the two men. “Nothing, just protecting her from you animals.” He nonchalantly said with a shrug. “Why you little brat!!” One swung his fist towards Ren who gladly took the hit to his jaw while the other punched his right side. He fell back a few steps before pushing Yuki towards the exit but instead she tripped and landed gently on the sofa, he sighed before quickly turning his attention as the two men were getting ready to attack him. He quickly block he taller of the two’s punch grabbing his wrist quickly twisting it causing the guy to scream in pain. “Uuuugggghhhhh! Iiiitttttaaaaiiii!!!” “heheehe, does it hurt? Hahaha!!!” Ren laughed and giggle at the man’s cries of pain and screams begging him to stop. The other one charged toward Ren tackling him to the ground and pinning him down while punching his face again and again while the other got up. “Hehehehe. Hahahaha.” Ren giggled as he got hit over and over again. Ren got tired of being punched so he block the short guy’s punches and flip their position so now his on top beating the life out of him. The taller one seeing what was happening to the shorter one ran to Ren and locked him in a choke hold. This did nothing to Ren since he kept laughing that creepy laugh and kept raining punches on the shorter guy who was now unconscious and a bloody mess. He stopped once he was he felt someone biting his left shoulder. He turned and elbowed the taller guy in the gut. “Agh!” He fell back holding his stomach. “Hehehehahaha” Ren laughed as he saw the scared face the men had along with the group of people who were watching. “What’s wrong? hahaha” Ren asked as he bite his nails looking at them with murderous eyes. But he stopped when he suddenly felt arms wrapped around his waist and warmth spared through his body. What are these soft things pressing against my back? It’s heaven~ “Ren, that’s enough. I wanna go home.” Yuki softly spoke resting her head on Ren’s back. Ren turned around to face Yuki, his eyes soften when he saw her scared, sadden and worried expression he quickly pulled her in a gentle and comforting hug. “I’m sorry you had to witness that, again.” Ren whispered softly kissing Yuki’s forehead. “Let’s go home.” He smiled at her intertwining their fingers and walking out the club.
They walked in a comfortable silence until they got Yuki’s home. “Thank you.” “No problem.” Ren said letting go of her hand.  She began to walk towards her home but stopped and waved to Ren. “Good night Ren!” She shouted going inside.

Few weeks passed
Sae and Mayu seemed to have lost interest in making Yuki their wife since they started to hang out with Sayaka and Jurina. Same with Jurina and Kumi, they both gave up on making Ren theirs since Jurina started to hang out with Mayu more while Kumi started to spend more time with Mocchi. Acchan seems to have found someone very very interesting since that person can’t refuse her commands. TomoTomo and Mario & Miichan have become the schools funny prankster couples since they’re always joking around with each other. (Unfortunately Mario always stuck cleaning Miichan’s and TomoTomo’s pranks.) Riku and Yuko are known as the school’s smexy cute star couple with a supporting fan club (for both soccer and their love life). Ren and Yuki are still the same.   

The end of the school year
“Hey, what are you guys planning for the summer?” Acchan asked hugging Takamina. “Jeez, can’t you let go of me?” Takamina said struggling to get out Acchan’s grip. “No.” She smiled. “Anyway, answer my question.” “Nothing really.” Takamina replied. “Oh, how about you spend it with us?” Tomomi said coming closer to them. “As in spend my whole summer vacation with you?” Tomochin asked hugging his girl. “Yes.” Tomomi replied giving him a quickly kiss. “Hey! No fair!! I wanna spend time with my hubby too~” Miichan whined hitting Tomochin. “Oi! Why you hit MY Tomochin when you said you wanted to spend time with your hubby?” Tomomi scolded hugging Tomochin tightly. “He was the closest person.” “Anyways what made you thing it was only going to be us?” Acchan said. “huh?” Everyone asked. “My brothers and I will also be going.” Riku announced coming into the class holding Yuko’s hand. “Really?” Miichan asked. “Yeah.” “Alright! So it’s settled. We’ll all meet at Yuki’s mansion to discuss the details.” Yuko excitedly shouted. “alright, wait but not everyone would want to or be able to go.” Takamina reasoned. “Like?” Miichan asked. “Oh yeah, Mocchi and Kumi have to go back and spoke with THE DEVIL. While Erena will be with her boyfriend.” Yuko stated while Takamina facepalmed. “You mean their old man? Right?” Riku asked. “Huh?” Yuko asked him confused. “Yeah! Their old man!” Takamina quickly stated giving Riku a quick thank you look. “Oh~” Acchan and Tomomi mouthed. “Oh, that reminds me Maachan and Lovetan wouldn’t be able to go since their father took them to France.” Acchan stated. “Okay, so we’ll all go to Yuki’s after school.” Miichan said. “And we’ll bring Ren.” Yuko stated leaving their class with Riku.
Class goes by there’s 50 seconds left before the end of school   
“Finally!!! Summer vacation!!” Everyone yelled once the last school bell rang running out the school gates.
“Okay, let’s go to your mansion Yuki.” The gang said. “Huh? Why?” Yuki asked confused. “To plan our summer vacation.” Acchan said. “Oh yeah, I forgot. Okay, let’s go.” They’re all at Yuki’s mansion. “Hey Yuko and Riku weren’t you supposed to bring Ren?” Sayaka and Sae asked as they cuddled. “Oh shot! We forgot!!” “Doesn’t worry, Takamina will go get him.” Acchan stated. “I will? Yes, I will!” Takamina shouted after Acchan gave him a look. Without thinking he vanished in front of everyone and reappeared with a chained up Ren beside him. “And here he is.” “Bakamina!!” All immortals yelled at him. “What?” He confused. “Sweetie, you just used your powers in front Yuki and Tomomi.” Acchan explained. “Ooohhhhh~ my bad.” “Turn into a girl.” Acchan command and buff he’s now a girl. “Hey, you can turn back into you girl form!” Tomochin and Ren exclaimed. “Wait!!! You can turn into a girl like my Tomochin!!” Tomomi shouted. “Wait, you know what we are?” “Yup, Tomochin, Miichan, and Mario explained everything to me.” Tomomi stated with a smile. “You know how The Joker Family immortals, Wild Family Angels, and Dark Family Devils.” Yuki stated. “Yes!” Acchan and Tomomi replied. “Wait, how do you know?” Everyone asked except Ren who was getting out the chains. Yuki simply looked at Ren as he sat next to her. “Yuki has gotten herself into many troublesome situations.  It’s not that surprising that she found out. That’s all you need to know.” Ren stated nonchalantly sipping coffee. “True.” Yuki added also sipping her coffee. The others just stared at them dumbfounded.
“Anyways, what happened for you to be able to turn back, I mean control your power?” Ren asked turning everyone’s attention towards Takamina. “I can’t really control my power yet.” “What you mean?” “Takamina turns into whatever gender I want her to be. But I think I’ll keep her as a female since I like the way she feels and she’s sooo much more huggable and kissable.” Acchan stated clinging onto Takamina. “Interesting.” Riku said standing up and walking towards them. “Wow! She’s much shorter than her male form!” Riku exclaimed patting her head. “Hey! I’m not a pet!” Takamina shouted glaring at Riku. “You’re right you’re not a pet, you’re midget.” Miichan stated standing on Takamina’s other side. “I’m not a midget!” “Yes you are. Takamidget.” Miichan and Riku deadpanned. “That’s it! You’re both dead!” “Ah! We’re being attacked by a midget Monster! Run for your lives~! Ah! Hahahaha!!!” Both joked as they ran from Takamina.
“Anyways what’s the reason we’re here.” Ren asked. “We’re planning on how we’ll spend our summer vacation together.” Mario stated. “Okay, I’m not going.” Ren deadpanned. “You have to!” Sae and Mayu shouted. “Why?” Ren raised a brow. “Cuz we need you to be with Yuki since we’ll be with Sayaka and Jurina.” Sae explained. “What’s that got to do with me?” “Yuki’s father’s only letting her go since he believes this will be a good chance to finally choose who she’ll marry.” Mario explained. “Huh?” Ren confused. “My father’s hell bent on me marry one of them even though he knows that they are no longer interested in the marriage and already have someone. He's okay with them marring me and having affairs with other women as long as he gets into their family.” Yuki sadly said. “Yeah, and also the fact he has a contracted which stated that one of us has to marry her.” Mayu stated. “We just want to spend time as much time as possible before w…” Sae was cut off by a sweating Riku. “Wait up, I think you guys have forgotten something important.” “What?” Everyone asked. “That she chooses who to marry no matter whom, her father will support her.” Riku stated. “We already know that.” Mayu and Sae shouted. “Idiots, are you really that dumb or do I have to beat knowledge into your brains?” Riku sighed. “Huh?” “Okay it’s simple. We just need to introduce her father to someone with the same or greater statue than us and claim he’s Yuki’s boyfriend but doesn’t really want to get married until they’re both ready. Giving Yuki time to actually found someone she loves and love her back and the two of you the freedom to be with your girlfriends. Making the contract invalid and no longer needing to give him power over our businesses.” Riku explained to them then looked at Ren. “And I know the perfect guy for the job too.” He added while the others caught on.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 13 June 28
Post by: Megumi on July 03, 2012, 11:23:15 PM

Yes we know the perfect guy for the job *fufufu

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“What’s wrong? hahaha” Ren asked as he bite his nails looking at them with murderous eyes. But he stopped when he suddenly felt arms wrapped around his waist and warmth spared through his body. What are these soft things pressing against my back? It’s heaven~ “

Ren/Rena I know what it is! It's called boobies!
OMG LOLOLLOL I'm so sorry don't mid me and my perverted mind OTL

Thank you for your update Sok-san !
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Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 13 June 28
Post by: flameeyes on July 23, 2012, 03:51:19 AM

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Title: "The Deal" Ch. 14 Dec. 08
Post by: Sok on December 08, 2012, 09:48:37 PM

Hey everyone, sorry I haven't update any of my stories in a looooonnnnnngggggg time. I know, this update might be confusing but for some odd reason I kinda ended up with this. Hope it still flows.
I hope to be able to update faster soon. I'll see y'all later.

Chapter 14


“How did I end up here!!!!” Ren shouted as Riku, Mario, Mayu, Sae and Tomochin passed him into Yuki’s father’s study. “Omg! This wouldn’t work. It can’t.” He told them. “It will! Just chill!” Riku slapped him. “Ouch! That hurt!” Ren glared at Riku. “Shut up! We need you to do this.” With that they closed the doors.
“How the hell am I suppose to do this?”
“Simple, just don’t kill my father.”
“huh?” Ren looked up and saw Yuki. “Oh, yeah.”
*giggles* “You shouldn’t worrying too much.”
*sigh* “I know. It’s just why did I have to be the one? There’s Tomochin and Takamina.”
 Yuki gave him a blank look. “Ren, they’re dating Tomomi and Atsuko. They’ve also have already met my father.”
“Oh~” He looks around. “So~” Looks around some more. “Wow, that’s a beautiful portrait of you, Yuki.” Ren smiled looking at an old portrait painting.
“Huh? Ah! That’s actually my ancestor. She was my Father’s great great great great grandmother.”
“Really?” He said looking at the painting and then Yuki. “You look exactly like her.”
*giggles* “Thank you.” She smiles and then frowns.
“What’s wrong?”
“You know, now that I think of it. You remind me of a young man that’s in a painting with her.” Yuki said in deep thought as she walked out.
“um, okay?” Ren just sat down waiting to meet Yuki’s father.

10 minutes waiting…

30 minutes later…

20 more minutes of waiting nothing…

Ren's POV
*sigh* “I’m sooooo bored~~~~~~~~~ Ah!!!! I’ve been sitting here for a damn hour already!!!!” I exclaimed closing my eyes and leaning my head back on the backrest. “Why does that painting look so fimilar?”

“Ren, stop staring at me.” She smiles. “I’m sorry it’s just that you’re so beautiful. I can’t take my eyes off you.”He said smiling and caressing her cheek. “You’re such a sweet talker.” She playfully hit his arm. “Only for you…” *cough* “Excuse me, but would you stay still? You must be in the same position so I may be able to perfectly paint the both of you.” The painter stated glaring at me. “I’m sorry, sir” She bowed her head. *chuckles* “Oi!! No need for you anymore. Just leave our portrait there and your equipment.”
“Ren, why?” She looked at me. I simply got up and walked to the painting stances and equipment. “Don’t move.” I painted staring at her beauty, with each stroke I made sure they were perfect and clean. *smiles* “Yuki, here.” I showed her the painting.   

“Hm~ her great great great great grandmother, huh? *chuckles* you really do look like her. *smiles* It’s as if you really are her. *sighs* Seems I’m starting to remember, huh.” My head starts to hurt.

Flashback
1890
“Who are you?” “I’m Ren the Trickster. I’m here to make the contract you wished for.” “You’ll prolong my life?” “Yes, but you must pay the price.” “I’ll do anything.” “Good. Now what’s your name?” “Julia Kashiwagi.” 
(Scene changes)
1769
“Master Ren!!! Why?!” “My Lord Ren!!” “We can’t!!” Several burying faces shouted kneeing before me crying. “Is this what you want my child?” A male and female voices asked. “Yes mama and papa, I want to forget her. I want to fall and be free. Just the same as she is.” “But, what if you die?” “What if you fall and become human?!” “What if you forget who you really are?” “What if you meet her again?” Papa asked. “What if you fall in love with her again?” Mama asked. “What do you mean my lord/ Mastress?” They asked. “She’s unique, let’s put it that way.” Papa said pated the shortest male’s head. “Huh?”  “I will let it be. But neither of you know how unique she is to me.” I smiled. “But master Ren, who would take care of you?” 2 male voices asked. “Lord Ren, we will accompany you!!” 2 female voices stated. “No!! I must do this alone.” “But prince!!!” I left them there.  I must say good bye to her one last time before I leave.
I walked inside the beautiful garden knowing exactly where she would be. “Ren?” She said running to me and hugging me. “Ren, I’ve missed you so much!!” She kissed my lips. “I missed you too.” I kissed back. “Where have you been?” “I’ve been with my family.” “oh, I see. Anyways, is there something wrong?” She asked. “No, nothing at all.” I smiled and hugged her. Am I a coward for wanting to not feel the pain of losing you?
(Different scene)
“Ren? Did you know? Did you know this would happen to me?!” She cried and hit me. “I’m sorry, but you know what I am. There’s nothing I can do. I’m sorry.” I hugged her. “I know~ *sobs*” She pecked my lips before breaking the hug. “I sorry, but I can’t break the rules I’m bound to since birth.” “I know, don’t worry. I don’t hate you.” She smiles and walks away.
“Good bye, my Yuki. I wish to meet you in the future if possible.” I said as a lone tear fell down my cheek before disappearing. Agh!!!!! Pain. Pain. Pain. AGH!!!!!! ARG!!!! Everything’s white.   

“Agh..” I suddenly opened my eyes holding my chest. “Were those my memories?”
“OI!!! You brat!!!” I suddenly heard a scream. I looked up and then felt a strong punch to my stomach and then you to my jaw. Suddenly I was lifted off the chair and slammed hard onto the floor then punched. I looked up and saw 4 guys who looked pissed as hell. “What’s that for?” I got up and dusted myself off. “You, bastard!!!” A tall thin man shouted grabbing my collar.
 Suddenly the study’s doors busted open to reveal a very upset looking Yuki. “Sano, Nite, Natsu, and Tea leave my boyfriend alone.” She coldly stated glaring at them. Damn!! I’m ready not in the mood to do this shit now. *sighs* Wait, I can see black aura around Yuki.
“Yuki!! Calm down!!” The man grabbing me let go and was now trying to calm her down. “Why?!! Sano, why would you hit him?!” “Natsu and Tea told me he’s the guy that was harassing you non-stop at school. Right Nite.” “Yeah, that’s what they told us.” “What?!” She glared at the other 2. Wait, those are the 2 guys from the club. So they’re her brothers?! Wait, I can feel Yuki’s sudden desire to kill.
“Oi, Yuki calm down.” I quicky backhugged her. “See I’m fine. Their attacks didn’t hit me.” I stated. “Good.” She relaxed into me, placing her hands on mine. “By the way, isn’t the stalker they’re talking about that Aoi guy?” I asked. “Yup. *nod* Hey, now that I think of it. He’s still hasn’t been released from the hospital.” She said truning her head to face me. “Really? I don’t remember beating him that hard.” “Really? You dislocated his arm and leg along with giving him a lot of broken bones.” “Ah~~ Damn woman. Your name should be trouble.” “Why?” She frowned turning around in my arms and wrapping her hand on my neck. “Well, first of all when we met you knocked me out with a damn towel. Then I had to fight that Aoi guy, I got beaten up after walking you home, those guys I fought in that one alley, and those 2 that were harassing you in the club.”
“Interesting, I never thought my sweetie would be that troublesome.” A male voice said. “Oi, don’t get me wrong. That’s what makes every day with her unique and fun.” I said smiling at Yuki. “Aw~~ is the princess blushing~~~” I teased. “No.” she broke the hug, crossed her arms and did a upset ‘Hpmh!’
“Uh ho!! Did I upset ze princess?” I whispered into her ear. “Stop~~” She whined and pouted cutely. *chuckles* “Okay, sorry.” I smile and pat her head. “Ehem!!! You 2 are aware that we’re still here, right?” Sano said. “No, I totally forgot you guys existed.” I stated in a bored voice. “So, you’re the boyfriend?” The male voice from earlier asked. “So, you’re the bulter?” I asked. “No. That’s my daddy.” Yuki smacked my arm. “How was I supposed to know? I’ve never met your family.”     
After that, Yuki was pushed out the room and I was locked in with her father and 4 older brothers. I hope I don’t end up beating the life out of them. *sighs* What ws\as that earlier?

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 13 June 28
Post by: steven_0809 on December 08, 2012, 10:10:21 PM

hahaha ren is scard now that the first

Thank you for update
 :)

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 14 Dec. 08
Post by: Tam_atsu on December 09, 2012, 06:24:58 AM

Thanks for the update. :) more rikuxyuko please :bow: :lol:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 14 Dec. 08
Post by: cisda83 on December 17, 2012, 02:31:42 PM

Interesting... So Ren knew Yuki from the past life... I'm pretty sure Yuki is the reincarnated of the Ren lover from the past.

Well very good plot hope u are going to update them soon.

Can't wait to see the next one and also thank you for the update.

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :theking

Title: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: Sok on December 19, 2012, 04:36:49 AM

Chapter 15

“Alright!!! Vacation time!!! Come on!!” Everyone was excited about their vacation while one guy just zoned out.
“Wohoo~~~~” Everyone ran towards the beach.
“Why be so excited? It’s just the beach.” Ren sighed walking away from the group. It’s been a week since he had that flashback and it seems he has gotten less friendly and talkative. He can’t stop thinking about it. He tries to force himself to remember what it was, tries to remember everything but can’t. There seems to be something blocking him from doing so. What did it mean? Who was he really? Was he still Ren from the Joker family? Was he still a trickster? Questions kept popping up.
Ren left everyone to have their fun while he walked towards the woods near the beach. “Why? Why do I feel like I’m not supposed to remember?” Ren whispered trying to remember. “Why?!” Ren shouted feeling his frustration grow. “Why? Why do these memories haunt me? Who was I really?” He asked himself as he walked deeper into the woods. “Why do I feel these feelings towards Yuki? *sighs* You 2 are really so alike. Well except this Yuki is much sexier and confident.” He smiled thinking of Yuki.

Flashback
“Promise me that you’ll never leave my side.” “Yuki, you know I can’t do that. But I do promise you that I’ll do everything in my power to stay with you.” Ren caresses Yuki’s right cheek. “But I want you to be with me forever~” Yuki whined then cutely pouted. *chuckles* “You’re so cute~~” “I know I am~~~” *chuckles* “I’m sorry I doubted you back then.”
(Changes to a memory from much earlier)
Ren sat leaning against a tree waiting for Yuki to arrive. He started humming when he suddenly sat up. “Something’s not right. Insight!” His version turned white and he saw Yuki’s Father and men in a study. “What do you mean?!” Yuki’s father yelled. “I’m sorry, but she’s cursed.” A man stated. “She’s been cursed by that man.” Another hissed. “What are you saying?! That man has been nothing but good to her!!” Her father shouted. “He’s not human!!!” Another man stated. “So?! They love each other!! That’s the only thing that matters to me!! Now leave!!!” He yelled at the men as he pointed at the door. “You’ll regret not listening to us.” “We’ll make sure that she’s punished.” “Don’t you dare do anything to my daughter!!!” Yuki’s father yelled as the men left. “Ren? Ren. Ren~~” “Huh?” Ren snapped out of his trace and looked at Yuki. “Princess, you startled me.” “really? Cos you looked pretty zoned out to me.” “Sorry, I was in deep thought.” Ren lied. 

(Another scene)   
Electric shocks came out of his body burning whatever was in a meter range around him. “What? How did I?” Ren was shocked. He had never excepted to hurt the people there. “Princess, don’t you see the monster he truly is?!” A man shouted as he looked at Yuki. “yuki, it’s not what it looks like.” Ren walked towards Yuki with pleading eyes. “Why?” She asked stepping back as he walked closer to her. She looked terrible by Ren. “Don’t come any closer!!!” A man stood in front of Yuki looking as he was her knight in shining armor. “You!!!” Ren hissed as his powers flowed thro his body. The man smirked as he held Yuki in his arms. “diaboli filius et dea (son of the devil and goddess)” He said and Ren disappeared.   

Ren was snapped out of his flashback when he hit a tree. “Ouch!!” He rubbed his face. “What the?! When did I get here?” He looked around and noticed it was already late. “Oh, I should probably head back now.” Ren turned around and was startled. “oh, I’m sorry. I didn't notice you.” He said to a beautiful woman. “It’s okay.” She smiled and caressed his cheek. “You’re a very attractive man.” She said smiling. "Um, thank you and you're a very beautiful woman." Ren smiled back. "Thank you." She smiled and suddenly captured Ren's lips. Ren instantly resisted and tried to push her away but he suddenly felt sleepy and weak. He slowly started to return the kiss, wrapping his arms around the woman and slowly laying her down onto the ground. They break the kiss for air. "That's a good boy." She smiled and kissed him once more. Ren's mind was clouding his eyes dark and clouded with lust. He began to kiss the woman roughly when Yuki's face came to his mind, he stopped and stared at the woman under him. She's not Yuki. I want Yuki not her. The last thing he remember's is seeing Yuki's beautiful face with tear fulled eyes. "Yuki." Ren softly whispered before passing out. This displeased the woman greatly.

Back with the group
Everyone was having fun and all when Takamina and Tomo suddenly stopped and had a worried looked. “Tomochin? Is something wrong? Chiyuu~” “Takamina!!” Tomochin shouted. “I know. I feel it too.” Takamina said looking at tomochin. “Hey what’s wrong?” Yuki asked worried. “Where’s ren? He hasn’t returned yet.” Tomo said looking around. “I have a bad feeling.” Miichan stated as she looked at takamina and Tomochin. Takmina nodded as he and Tomochin quickly spread their black wings and flew towards the woods.
“What?! You’re Devils?!” Everyone except Miichan and Jurina shouted surprised. “Miichan, there must be something wrong for them to use their real powers in front of everyone.” Jurina whispered. “I don’t know, but I have this bad feeling.” “So it’s not just me.” “Yeah, we must go and report this to Mistress.”
“Hey, Miichan and Jurina. What’s going-” Mayu and the rest turned to Miichan and Jurina but were surprised when they saw them disappear in what seemed like lightning. “What?!” Sae shouted. “They’re Angels?!” Mayu and Mario yelled. “How come we couldn’t sense their true nature?” Riku and Yuko asked. “I don’t know, but I feel like they’re keeping something from us.” Acchan stated.

Somewhere in Heaven
“Mistress!!!” miichan and Jurina shouted as they entered the Goddess chamber. “Yes?” She gentling smiled at her 2 angels. “We, we have something to tell you. It’s about Prince Ren, he might be getting his memory back.” Jurina stated. “And there’s this bad feeling. Along with him meeting who seems to be his past lover, Yuki Kashiwagi. And the fact that his presence suddenly disappeared.” Miichan stated worriedly. This made the beautiful Goddess frown.

Somewhere in the woods
“Where is he?!” Takamina shouted. “I don’t know!!!” Tomochin shouted back. “this is the last place where we sensed his presence.” Takamina paced around. “He cn’t just up and disappear like that.” Tomochin frowned looking at the ground. “wait, Takamina. Look.” Tomochin kneed down and touched footprints. “He wasn’t alone.” He stated as he looked at Takamina. “We must inform this to Master.” They suddenly disappeared into white smoke but little did they know they were being watched by someone.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: Shinoki on April 09, 2013, 11:31:36 PM

Such a good fic... just one more chapter and ur done...... well, I don't know, but ganbatte yo~~ I kind of guessed Yukirena at the very beginning.... personally I like female Geki, but what ev... doubt this will be continued, but still waiting

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: cisda83 on April 10, 2013, 11:03:49 PM

Sorry didn't see your update until now.

Wah.. Ren is confused over himself....

Ah.. who was this person that trapped Ren in the past?

And who is this woman that wanted Ren by hypnotized him?

Ah... Takamina and Tomochin are keeping eyes for the Devil whereas Miichan and Jurina are for the Angel

Who was that person that observed Takamina and Tomochin in the area where Ren was last seen?

Was it the woman that was with Ren or the man of Ren's past?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 11, 2013, 12:51:43 PM

Please update soon! It's been over 4 months D:

Please *shakes shoulders*

It's a really awesome story!!

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: Geki karaiiiii on June 28, 2014, 05:00:41 PM

please continue....

  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

it's pretty interesting :mon determined:




I want to know what will happen next  :mon headbang:................

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: sastio13 on June 28, 2014, 05:23:21 PM

uh oh what happened with ren?
curious....
ah, please update more sok! please please please hehehe
thankyou :bow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: rightsaver143 on June 25, 2016, 10:17:44 PM

WOW!!! :shocked :shock:

i totally thought at first that it would be mayuki or sauyuki :luvluv2: but then... :tama-piss: it transformed into yukirena :on bleed: :nya: :shy2: :shy1: :luvluv1:

that chapter 11 kojiyuu moment is a blast :mon yeah: who would have thought that riku will initiate it :mon bleed2:

and that chapter 14 yukirena past they are meant for each other :mon lovelaff:

update it please :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Title: Re: "The Deal" Ch. 15 Dec. 19
Post by: Sok on September 12, 2016, 06:06:57 AM

Hello everyone.
 I know I've been gone for a couple years  :on chew:  :badluck: But I'm back to finish all my Fics.  :on study: I'll like the thank everyone that has left me messages and thanks yous. I'll do my best to update all my works

Thank you for your support.  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Here Chapter 16 Please let me know what you think. Thank you.




Chapter 16

“Ugh~ What happened?” A young man sat up in a bed holding his head. “Man, I feel like someone just drove a bus through my brain. Agh~” He looks around what seems to be a luxurious room.
“Ah! You’re waking.” A beautiful woman smiled at the young man.
“Huh? Um, who are you? Where am I? And most importantly, who am I?” Asked the young man.
“Oh honey~” The woman sat down next to him. :We’ve been thru this already.”
“Okay, then you wouldn’t mind explaining again. And why do you look like you’re a stripper?”
“Now that’s just rude~!” She pouted and caressed his face. “Besides you know this is my nightgown.”
“uh-huh~ And why exactly are you wearing that?” He swapped her hand away from his face. [Looking at her like WTF lady don’t touch me]
“You really don’t remember me?” She showed her best puppy eyes.
“Look old hag. If I knew who you were I wouldn’t be asking, okay?! Now answer my questions. And put some clothes on. Looking at you like that is just pissing me off for some unknown reason.” The young man was becoming impatient.
“Honey, calm down. The doctors said to not strain yourself in trying to remember. So just relax and trust me.” The woman stated smiling lovely at the man.
“Don’t look at me like that while youre wearing that.” He plainly stated getting out of bed and walking around. “It makes me wanna puke.”
“Charming.” She sweat drop. “Well since you seem to be able. How about we go out on a date.” She smiled leaving the room.
Blah~ :mon barf: Date with a hag like you no thanks but I’ll like to leave this room. It’s been a while since I’ve been outside.

Wild Manor
 “Where can they be?” “It’s already been 2 weeks and nothing.” “We’ve gone to hell and didn’t find Tomochin or Takamina.” “Same here. Mario and I went to heaven and couldn’t find any trace of Jurina and Minami.” “It’s like they disappeared.” “There’s no proof they ever existed.” “We can’t give up hope.” “They’ll come back.” “Don’t worry Yuki? We’ll find him.” Atsuko and Tomomi hugged Yuki. Everyone was present except the members of the Joker family. They had disappeared. No one had seen and heard from them since that day on the beach. Each pair had returned to their realm of origin in hopes of finding Ren.
Two shadows hided in the darkness watching the group as they fused about. “So when do you think they’ll come out of hiding.” “I don’t know, but the one thing I know. Is that that woman won’t be able to contain the prince for long. It’s only a matter of time he loses his patience.” “If that is so, we must report this to Master Zec. Can’t let him get away like last time.” With that they sneaked out.

Somewhere in Heaven
 “Mistress?” “Hm? Yes, Miichan?” “Why are you so calm?” “There’s nothing wrong.” “Aren’t you worry about Prince Ren” Jurina asked looking at the goddess. “Don’t worry girls, my son will be fine. He just needs to find himself again. His true self. In the meantime just go back to your friends they must be worried about you.” “Okay.” “But before you return. Please pay a visit to my Love. He asked for your help with some reading and was hoping you girls could go to the archives and help the boys out.” “Of course!!” “Have a safe trip.”

Neutral Ground between Hell and Heaven
“Takamina!!” “Did you find something Tomochin?!” “Yes!! Come over here and look at this.” He showed Takamina an old scroll. “What is it?” “Cant you see it?” “See what?” “Bakamina?! Look at the photos of the man. Doesn’t he remember you of someone?” “WHa… wait! He looks like the guy that caused that crusade against The Prince during the time he fall inlove?” “Yeah, but look at this. This was painted in the 1760’s around the time the Prince met the human Princess.” He showed him a painting of the same man. “How is this possible? A moral can’t lived that long?!” “A moral can’t but a moral that sells their moral for immorality can. They are able to live forever but they are still able to get injured or die.” “What you mean?” “What he means is that moral can live for forever if they sell their morality. But the price to that is they stand still in the space of time while they watch the ones they love live, love, move on, and eventually die. Leaving them alone.” Miichan answered as she and Jurina came to sit with them. “There’s only a few recorded deals of that nature in the scrolls.” Jurina stated. “Oh!! I remember now.” Takamina shouted. “What are you goin on about?” “Tomochin! Don’t you remember?! The Prince used to always make those deals. In fact he was the only one who can create the possibility.” “What are you talking about? I don’t remember none of that?” “Do you guys remember the time where the Prince would go out to the moral world when we had barely been put on his protection.” “Yeah, I remember we were all just barely coming into our powers.” Miichan answered. “Same with the Prince. No one knew what kind of power the prince would possess. Being born from A Goddess and Devil." “Wait, I think I’m remembering. That was also the time were there were a lot of people dying.” Tomochin frowned remembering. “Yeah, apparently the Prince had made deals with many people about becoming immortals but unfortunately many of them after years of watching death around them couldn’t take it anymore and ended it themselves.” Jurina stated. “I remember him tho.” Miichan stated looking at the photos. “You remember too?!” Tomochin asked. “Let’s continue researching more before reporting.” Takamina stated grabbing more scrolls.
2 Days Later
“How’s everything going?” The Devil asked walking arm in arm with his Goddess into the archives. “Master!!” “Mistress!!” “We believe we have found something that can help us found the Prince!” “That’s great.” “What have you found out?” “Master do you know this man?” Tomochin showed the photo of the man.  “Ah! Yes I remember him. He was the moral that was in charge of Ren’s protection and guidance in the human world. Why do you ask?” The Goddess replied. “Master, Mistress we believe this may be the one responsible for the Prince’s pain.” Tomochin stated. “If I’m not mistaken his name was Zec Gestel.”

Yuki’s POV
*Sigh* Ren where are you? I miss you. “Yuki!!! Come on! It’s time to go!!” *Sigh* “Going Father!!!” I grabbed my luggage and heading to meet my father. “Come on Sweetie. We don’t have all day our flight leaves in 2 hours.”  “Sorry father. I’m ready” We walked out and into the car, the drive to the airport  and flight was quick. “Father, how long are we gonna be gone?” I asked as we land. “Until you forget about that boyfriend of yours. I will not have you waste away waiting for him when there are many boys that will die to have his place.” Father stated walking to the car.

Title: Re: "The Deal" Came Back!! Ch. 16 9/12/16 (RenaYuki, other pairings)
Post by: sansan3 on September 15, 2016, 07:44:14 PM

 :welcome
I did't knew about this fic before but because your update I already known and I've already read this fic from start until your last update.
I like the story and because renayuki too.  :twothumbs
 I'll waiting for your next update & i'm sorry my comment is too long
 :mon sweat: