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Title: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: Kanata48 on December 18, 2012, 07:30:57 AM
A/N: This is my first Fanfric~ Please tell me what you think of it~ :cow: I'm not good at writing :sweatdrop:
Sorry if my grammar sucks :cry:



                                                                                   Chapter 1

                    My name is Takahashi Minami. I'm a idol. Have you ever heard of AKB48? Well....I'm a member. I'm Team A's captain. My Team's ace is Maeda Atsuko. I'm actually in love with her but I can't tell her that....I don't want to lose her and the friendship we have.

   
                 "Okay,that's all for today". "Thank you very much~" We had just finished our lessons for today. Yuihan walked over to me "Takamina-san, may I go home with you today? "Sure, why not? Let's grab something to eat too" I replied. " Hai~" Yuihan repiled with a smile. I waited for her while Yuihan packed her stuff. (Writer's note: Takamina and Acchan always go home together but our midget here forgotten about it cause she was tired and hungry after lessons)


                "Bye bakamina~" Yuko  waved to me. "Yuuchan"! "stop calling our captain names"! Haruna shouted at Yuko and smacked her in the head. I smiled at the duo. Haruna and Yuko are actually dating....I'm really jealous of them sometimes....I really wish I have guts to confess to Atsuko just like how Yuko confess to Haruna. "Hai~" Yuko said while clingling on Haruna "Gomen ne~Takamina....you  know how Yuko is....when she's excited" Haruna apologised "Excited"? I replied. "We are going to the new ramen shop that had just opened nearby~" Yuko said. "Let's go Nyan-Nyan~ I'm hungry" "I will see you tomorrow for no3b's recording Takamina" Haruna said before being drag out by her hungry squirrel.



                 "Yeah...." I said to no one. "Sorry for the wait Takamina-san"! Yuihan said while walking towards me.  "Nah....it's cool....we hardly eat together after all and we haven't been talking lately since both of our schedules were so tight".



                                  (Writer's note: Our midget here still forgot about our Acchan) ".......Takamina-san"!! Yuihan jumped on me out of the blue! "H-hai?" I asked nervously. "You're so nice~" (Writer's note: They are in a very weird situation now...both of them doesn't know that....when I say weird, allow me to explain: Yuihan jumped on Takamina, Takamina fell and Yuihan is on top of Takamina now. And the result? Presenting: A jealous Acchan)



                           "Minami"? Acchan walked towards them and ask Takamina. "What's with the position you're in"? Acchan released a dark arua. (Writer's note: A jealous Acchan is not good. Better apologize midget) "A-acchan"? I said with a scared voice. *This is not good* I thought. "Yuihan....care to get off me before a tsundere pounce on me? I ask Yuihan. "A-ahhh....gomen ne~" Yuihan got off Takamina and helped her up. "Minami~" Acchan said in a dangerous voice. "You still haven't explain yourself here". "Umm...." Was all I managed to say. "Atsuko-san.....that was my fault.....don't blame Takamina-san" Yuihan explained and wink at Takamina without letting Acchan see that. (Writer's note: Takamina saw Yuihan winked at her~ She was relived that our tsundere,Acchan calmed down after our Yuihan clear things out)



                            "Thanks Yuihan" I whispered loud enough for Yuihan to hear when Acchan calmed down. "No problem~" Yuihan whispered back. "Ne~ Minami~" Acchan asked. "Hmm"? "Lets get something to eat~" Acchan said. *Oh....crap I totally forgot about Acchan thanks to my stupid hungry stomach!*  "Umm...." I looked at Acchan than at Yuihan. "Gomen!" I clap my hand together and bowed. "I agreeed to go back with Yuihan today"! I apologized.


                       "Ehhh? You are leaving me alone"? Acchan pout. "I will treat you some salad tomorrow"! "I already agreed to go back with Yuihan". I looked at Acchan with puppy eyes. *Awww....I can't say no when Minami show me puppy eyes* Acchan thought. "If you come over to my place tomorrow I will forgive you today". Acchan said into Takamina's ears. Takamina just nod and Acchan  smiled at Takamina and walked off. "I will see you tomorrow Minami and.....Yuihan". Acchan said before disappearing. (Writer's note: Acchan is still jealous of our Yuihan. A tsundere are scary sometimes....)



                          Yuihan turned to Takamina after Acchan disappeared out of sight and smiled. "Shall we go and grab something"? "Yeah...." I said. *Score! I manage to get Takamina-san for myself!* Yuihan thought. They went to a near by cafe to eat their dinner and after getting themselves a seat and ordering what they wanted they started talking and catching up with each other. After eating, Takamina called for bill. The waiter gave Takamina their receipt and when Takamina was about to give the waiter the cash,Yuihan told Takamina: " I will pay for today's dinner". Yuihan took out her wallet. "No way...I'm paying" Takamina quickly said and handed the waiter the money. They stared fighting over who should pay for the dinner and finally Takamina won the battle. (Writer's note: That took about 15mins to settle....Takamina was so manly saying that she would pay for the dinner~)



                          "I will walk you home.....it's getting late now". Takamina said to Yuihan. Yuihan was still grumbling about Takamina paying the bill and she stopped when she heard that Takamina wants to send her home.  "Yuihan...."? "Takamina-san~" Yuihan hugged Takamina out of nowhere and kiss her on the cheek "You are so nice~" Takamina was stunned when Yuihan kissed her and all she could do was blush. "But I thought your house was the other way"? Yuihan asked with her head tilted to the side cutely. (Writer's note: Yuihan didn't let go of our midget yet) "It's okay....I will walk you home is not very far anyway. And I can't let you walk home so late at night....what if something happens to you"? Takamina said still blushing at Yuihan earlier action. *Takamina is worried about me~* Yuihan thought. "Okay...." Yuihan agreed.



                          After 20mins of walking they finally reached Yuihan's house. "Thanks for walking me home Takamina-san~" Yuihan said. "Yeah....no problem" Takamina said. On the way to Yuihan's house both of them didn't say a word except Yuihan's and Takamina's mind....Yuihan was happy that Takamina walked her home and paid for her dinner and our midget was still blushing at Yuihan's kissing. Both of them part ways and said their goodbyes.



                          "I'm home~" Yuihan shouted to no one. "I forgot mum and dad are not at home today....."Yuihan went back to her room and showered. She jumped on her bed after she bathe and looked at a picture in her phone that she has taken with Takamina. *One day....I will make you mine* she smiled at the picture and she fell asleep....

To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Tam_atsu on December 18, 2012, 10:23:19 AM
Yehey!!! Kojiyuu~ they're dating  :inlove: :inlove:
More kojiyuu pleasee  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Tanchan on December 18, 2012, 10:31:30 AM
Oh no Jealous Acchan is being jealous, better do something to fix it Takamina XD. And Yuihan, this is unexpecte :panic:, well I guess Acchan's finally found a worthy love rival in term of possessiveness  :nervous
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: hazwani on December 18, 2012, 10:33:22 AM
yeah...nice one,

looking foward for next chapter  :heart: :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: freakymonday on December 18, 2012, 11:02:40 AM
oh yeah! Atsumina + Kojiyuu!!!!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: kahem on December 18, 2012, 11:21:33 AM
Oh Acchan has some competition ^^
I like jealous Acchan hehe
I like when you comment in yhe story, it's pretty funny
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: bimbo on December 18, 2012, 02:14:00 PM
It's always Tomochin being the rival to Acchan but Yuihan?  :hehehe:

Looking forward for the next chapter!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: miayaka on December 18, 2012, 04:53:33 PM
uh oh~
making acchan jealous
interesting!
kojiyuu starting a move!
Looking forward to the next chapter  :jphip:

btw  :welcome
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: chichay12 on December 18, 2012, 05:03:48 PM
takayui??
What the..haha
Thats a first!

I want more!
Thank you for the update!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: CheesyBits on December 19, 2012, 05:07:04 AM
This fic is awesome~~

Can't wait for the next update:3
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on December 19, 2012, 05:30:39 AM
yeah!! kojiyuu is together!!! :B

In deed now i thing this could happpen.. because takamina like so much yuihan...  I love it!! :B Acchan!1 fight for your husband
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: FNK23 on December 19, 2012, 10:09:04 AM
so, this is it, a declaration of war from yuihan, acchan should be ready to win her husband.
i wonder, whether acchan will know about the kiss or not. better not cause i still want takamina alive :3
hope takamina can survive from the jealous ace :3
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on December 22, 2012, 05:56:11 PM
Thanks for the comments guys~ :heart: You can expect more jealous Acchan XD

Miayaka: Thanks....it's my first Fanfric so please continuing reading it even if my grammar sucks :nervous
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: stepk on December 23, 2012, 05:29:58 AM
yui love takamina?  :O
uuu acchan  XD
please continuous.  :panic:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 1 - 12/18/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: KojiYuu44 on December 23, 2012, 07:46:28 PM
Yuihan is making Acchan jealous... This is new  :)
I like it... Please continue
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on December 28, 2012, 09:46:29 AM
A/N: LOL. Looks like I made a mistake posting a new topic instead of here :nervous But thanks for telling me Tanchan-san :) And Chichay12 for telling me too :heart: And here we go again.......Finally done with chapter two :lol: Hope you like it~ :deco:


                                                                                    Chapter 2

                    *It's so cold today~* Mayu complained. A gust of wind stopped Mayu in her tracks. *Stupid wind....wait till I tell Yukirin!* Mayu cursed the wind. Mayu is on the way to Yukirin's house to give her a wake up call. "I'm so asking Yukirin to kiss me later....even if I go to her house without telling her".



( Writer's note: Our Mayuki couple are also dating the only one couple that has not date is atsumina. In this Fanfric I will concentrate on putting atsumina together)

     

              Mayu stopped in front of Yukirin's house. It is currently 5.30am and their lessons don't start until 12pm. So of course Yukirin will still be sleeping now. "Should I go all tsun tsun on her when she wakes up or go all dere dere"? She asked no one in particular.
(Writer's note: Mayu is currently thinking of a plan to wake Yukirin up......lovingly.)
Mayu was about to ring the bell when Yukirin's mother opened the door. "Ahhh....Mayu-chan". Yukirin's mother said in surprise. "Ohayou gozaimasu~"
Mayu greeted Yukirin's mother with a smile. "Going out so early"? Mayu asked. "I got work today....so I won't be back till tomorrow". Yukirin's mother replied. "I will look after Yukirin till you get back~ Don't worry and go to work~ Leave Yukirin in my hands~"! Mayu said and salute Yukirin's mother. Yukirin's mother smiled at the cyborg. "Arigatou....I will leave Yuki in your hands". "Hai~"


(Writer's note: Mayu sounds like she want to marry Yukirin....and Yukirin is still asleep)



                   Mayu went in the house and went straight up to Yukirin's room. "Hmmm~ Yoshi! I will pounce on her"! Mayu decided.
(Writer's note: Do not try this at home! It's dangerous!)
Mayu walked in the room and found Yukirin sleeping peacefully. *Kawaii~* Mayu thought. *Let's take a picture of it~ Can't pass up the opportunity~*  Mayu took out her phone and set off the flash....just in case operation: Let's pounce on Yukirin at 6am in the morning fails....if Yukirin wakes up of course. (Writer's note: It was already 6am because Mayu was looking in Yukirin's fridge as she was hungry.....and she had ice-cream and some chocolate. I thought Mayu said she was cold?)
 *click* "And saved~" Mayu whispered. "So cute~" Mayu poked Yukirin's cheek softly. "Yoshi~!" "Operation: pounce on my Yukirin in the morning so that she will go all tsun tsun  on me in the morning and all dere dere on me in the afternoon will start now~".
(Writer's note: So that was your intention? Smart move~)



                    Mayu walked to the door....turned back and face Yukirin's sleeping face....and she run and pounce on Yukirin waking her up. "Mayu"?! Yukirin's showed her reaction queen's face when she woke up and saw Mayu's grin. "Hehehe~ Ohayou Yukirin~" "Wait....what time is it now"? Yukirin looked at her clock beside her. "Mayu! It's only 6.05am! Lessons don't start until 12pm and I won't wake up until 9am"! Yukirin shouted at Mayu. "Awww~ I missed you and you scold me in the morning when I can't even get up myself~" Mayu said and pout. "Ahhh....gomen ne....I'm tired....yesterday lessons were tough". Yukirin apologized to Mayu when she realized that Mayu normally doesn't wake up early too since Mayu is not a morning person. "Going all dere dere already"?  "You haven't go all tsun tsun on me~" Mayu said in a playful tone. "Let me get ready first" Yukirin pushed Mayu off the bed. *Thud!* "Yukirin that hurts~ Why did you do that for"? Mayu asked while rubbing her butt and helping herself up. Yukirin smiled at Mayu and kissed her on the lips. Mayu was stunned when Yukirin kissed her unexpectedly. Yukirin saw Mayu stunned face and giggled. "That stunned face of yours is kinda cute too~" Yukirin said playfully. Mayu blushed at that statement. "I-I will wait for you downstairs". Mayu went down and wait for Yukirin. "She's kinda cute when she's blushing". Yukirin said and giggled.

(Writer's note: Well.....looks like Mayu didn't ask Yukirin to kiss her....but she still gets what she wanted)



                    *Yawn* "Argh....what time is it"?  The morning sun shine brightly on her face causing Takamina to wake up. Takamina looked at her clock. " 7am......7am! Oh crap! I'm going to be late! No3b is supposed to meet at 8.30am! Stupid clock! It's spoiled again"! Takamina quicky got ready and went down. "Ohayou"! Takamina greeted when she saw her parents in the kitchen eating their breakfast like any other usual day. "Ohayou Minami". Both her parents greeted. "My darn clock is spoiled again! Mom! Please seriously throw that thing away or I'm going to be late everyday"!
 (Writer's note: Looks like Takamina has forgotten that she can throw the clock herself.....fail......as usual.)
"I will buy one later! So please seriously throw that stupid clock! I'm seriously freaking late"! Takamina put on her coat and quickly rushed out.



                    Upon reaching her destination,Takamina was greeted by Haruna and another Minami which is Mii-chan. "Takamina! You are late"! Mii-chan shouted. "Well....you should know the reason by now". Takamina said in a frustrated manner. "Well Takamina made it in time and came here in one piece.....so it's fine".
(Writer's note: Don't worry she was in one piece before:3)
"Let's get this going....and more lessons ahead" Takamina said. "Please don't say lessons anymore~" Mii-chan complain. "My muscle still aches~"
(Writer's note: Please stretch before and after you exercise~ Or you will be the same same our Mii-chan here)
"I asked you to stretch after leesons right? What were you doing"? Takamina asked. "Well.....I was hungry". Mii-chan said softly. "Everyone was hungry not only you.....and everyone stretched after lessons except you". Takamina said. " Who's fault is that"?! Mii-chan shouted at Takamina. "YOURS"! Takamina shouted back. "Let's get ready shall we? Or we will be late for the recording and for lessons". Haruna smiled at the two hoping that both of them would not fight over things like this. "Haruna~ I told you not to mention about lessons~" Mii-chan complained. *Sigh....I wonder if Atsuko  is awake now.....she should be...I will sent her a text message* Takamina thought.

To: Atsuko
Subject: Ohayou~

                 Ohayou~ >.< No3b is going to do a recording for our new single~
                 Wanna eat lunch together?\(^o^)/

                  Minami.

*And sent.....I hope this recording is fast......I miss Atsuko* Takamina thought. "Takamina~ It's time~". Mii-chan called out. "Hai~"
(Writer's note: Seems like it's going to be a Atsumina date don't you think?)



Somewhere in Akiba......

                    "Atsuko~" "You have a message~" Tomochin called out. "Eehh? H-hai~" *Who will text me so early in the morning?* Acchan thought. Acchan walk over and thanked Tomochin for telling her and she opened the text message that was just sent over. She read it and blushed. *Minami sent me a message....and she asked me out!*  Looking over at her best friend who is blushing madly over a invitation,Tomochin decided to ask Acchan a question that she knows the answer to. "Atsuko"? Acchan didn't hear Tomochin because she was blushing like mad. Tomochin decided to go closer and ask. "Atsukoooo~" "Y-yeah"? Acchan finally repiled.
(Writer's note: It's just an invitation.....to have lunch together that's all.....with the midget)
"I called you twice...." Tomochin complained. "Gomen ne....." Acchan apologize. "Was that Takamina who sent you that text message"? Tomochin asked and giggled. Acchan blushed when Tomochin said Takamina's name."Y-yeah....." Tomochin burst out laughing. "Hahahahaha!!! I thought so! When I saw that adorable blushing face of yours the first thing that came to my mind was Takamina!! I know you too well Acchan"!! "Tomochin!! What if someone hears you"!? Acchan shouted at Tomochin.
(Writer's note: Just in case you were wondering where they were......they went to the practice room early to get the dance steps right......)
* I can't wait~ I have to reply Minami~*

To: Minami
Subject: Re: Ohayou~

                 Ohayou~ ♪(´ε` ) Good luck for your recording~^^
                 I would like to have lunch with Minami:3
                 I'm in the practice room with Tomochin~ We are practicing to get the
                 dance steps right~ It's difficult >.<

                  I will wait for you at the usual cafe~ Let's eat there today\(^o^)/

                   Atsuko.

*I hope Minami would reply soon~* "Acchan.....got a date with captain midget"? Tomochin teased Acchan. "Tomochin"! Acchan shouted at her.


                    "Thanks for the hard work~" no3b has just finished their recording and they are heading towards Akiba. *I have a message?* Takamina read over the text and when she know that Tomochin is with Acchan alone in the practice room she stopped in her tracks. "Is there anything wrong Takamina"? A worried Haruna asked when she saw that Takamina wasn't walking beside them. *Tomochin is with Acchan?! You gotta be kidding me! * Takamina shouted in her mind.
(Writer's note: Now a jealous midget?)
Takamina decided to text back Acchan in case Acchan get mad if she doesn't.

To: Atsuko
Subject: I'm hungry~ >.<

                No3b is done with the recording~
                I'm hungry~ I haven't had breakfast thanks to my stupid clock! >.<
                I will meet you at the cafe:3 I'm on my way~

                 Minami.

*Guess I will ask her about Tomochin later.....* By now......Haruna and Mii-chan are staring at Takamina.......worried at her unusual behaviour. When Takamina realised that someone was looking at her she looked up and found both of her best friends were staring at her. "W-what"? Takamina asked nervously. "Are you alright"? Haruna asked. Mii-chan walked over to touch Takamina's forehead. "Hmmm....you don't feel like you have a fever...." "I'm fine.....what makes you think that I'm sick"? Takamina push Mii-chan away and excused herself. "I will see you both in the practice room.....and Haruna......if you are going to meet Yuko....drag her to the practice room on time or we will have to wait for both of you. Don't make the rest of the members wait for both of you". Takamina quickly said before disappearing out of sight. "It's not only me and Yuuchan......the mayuki couple too......". Haruna pout and complained. "Well.....don't you have a squirrel to meet? If you don't want to be late you better hurry up". Mii-chan said and laugh at Haruna. "Mii-chan! *sigh* You're right though.....I better meet Yuuchan before she starts complaining when I see her". Haruna quickly left the scene leaving Mii-chan alone. "Time to eat some lunch~ I'm alone eh"? Mii-chan said to no one in particular.
(Writer's note: Forever alone Mii-chan?)



At a certain cafe in Akiba.......

                     *Tomochin said to have a nice date with Minami.......and she left me and Minami alone.....I'm nervous~* Acchan blushed at the thought of Takamina.
(Writer's note: Like I said......it's only a invitation for lunch......and Takamina is jealous now.....actually.....very jealous)
Just as Acchan was about to reply Takamina's text message.....a midget appeared out of nowhere surprising Acchan. "Atsuko~ I'm here~" Takamina pant while smiling. *I ran all the way here just in case that Tomochin did anything to my Atsuko!* A super jealous because Tomochin and Acchan were alone in the practice room early in the morning and who in the world knows what they did together Takamina thought. "Minami! You surprised me! I was about to reply your message~"!  A surprised Acchan said. "Ah.....gomen! Looks like I have to practice my entrance eh"? Takamina tried to act cool in front of Acchan only to make her burst into laughter. "Hahahahaha!! Minami you looked wreid! You should have seen that face of yours"! Acchan continued laughing. "Eehh?! I thought I looked cool". *Did I just fail again? Argh.....Great. I rather kill myself now.*
(Writer's note: Don't worry~ I won't let her kill herself:3 but as usual......our midget failed again. I sometimes wonder how many times in a day can she fail?)
"Don't worry Minami~ Even if you fail.....I will always love you". Acchan said and when she realized what she had just said to Takamina.....it's already too late.....Takamina was already blushing like mad. *Me and my stupid mouth! I hope Takamina doesn't know that I REALLY love her.....I don't want to lose the friendship we have now*
(Writer's note: Both love each other.....same reason not to confess and both blushing like mad now.)
*What did she just said to me? She loves me? I think I can die in peace now.....better confirm what Atsuko just said to me* Takamina thought while blushing like mad. Takamina stole glances at Atsuko and decided to break the silence. "Atsuko....can you repeat what you just said"? Takamina tried her luck but of course our famous tsundere won't admit it. "W-what a-are you saying? I don't know what you are talking about baka"! Acchan quickly denied and look away. *I thought so.....*sigh* can't do anything about it if she doesn't want to say it again......looks like I won't be dying of happiness now* A disappointed Takamina thought. The both of them ordered thier lunch and ate in silence. *Even if I have a katsudon in front of me.....I'm happy but Atsuko is not talking at all.....this is weird......Atsuko always talks to me.....* A I'm so happy that I'm eating katsudon for lunch but my Acchan won't talk to me Takamina thought. Takamina suddenly remembered about the text message that Acchan sent her. "A-Atsuko.......about that text message in the morning......Tomochin was with you the whole time? Both of you were alone right"? Takamina asked while finishing up her katsudon. "Y-yeah....." Acchan replied. She was surprised to hear Tomochin's name when they are together. "Did both of you do anything"? A serious Takamina asked. *Takamina is serious now......is she.......jealous? Hahahahaha that's rare......does she like me or something? I won't ask her though.....* Acchan thought. "Hmmm......let's see.....all we did was practice a little? And Tomochin keep teasing me after you sent that message to me.....inviting me to lunch". Acchan said in a thoughtful manner. "That's good...." A relieve Takamina said. After finishing thier lunch......Takamina told Acchan to wait outside first and Acchan did......Takamina paid the bills and went out to meet Acchan. "Let's go to practice now shall we? Although it still early.....let's change and chat in the practice room". Takamina said. "Ahh....my lunch bill......". Acchan remembered she haven't paid her bills. "Don't worry.....my treat. I paid for you already". Takamina said and grabbed Acchan's hand.
(Writer's note: More like holding hands:3)
*At least I don't have to fight over a stupid bill......I'm treating Atsuko.....and who will like a drop dead beauty pay the lunch bill.....at least I wouldn't have to fight over a bill for 15mins.....like I did with Yuihan last night* Takamina thought. Acchan was blushing madly because Takamina was holding her hand in public. "M-Minami......what if someone saw us"? Acchan said nervously. Her heart was pounding like mad and she was blushing. "Hmmm? Let them see then". Takamina gave Acchan a huge grin and when Acchan saw that grin she blushed even harder. "Are you alright Atsuko? Your face look red....." Just when Takamina was about to touch Acchan forehead to check her temperature,Yuihan walked over and scared the wits out of them. "Takamina-san"! Yuihan shouted. Takamina quickly let go of Acchan's hand and turned to Yuihan. "H-hi......what are you doing here"? Takamina quickly said. "I saw you and Atsuko-san together so I thought we could go to the practice room together". Yuihan said and looked at Acchan. *You think you can steal Takamina-san away from me? Even if you are my sempai......I won't let you have it your way!* Yuihan thought.
(Writer's note: A jealous Yuihan?)
The three of them walked to the practice room and the conversation is only between Yuihan and Takamina. Acchan stayed quiet the whole time only looking at Takamina occasionally.



At the practice room.........

                    "Yo! Bakamidget! Whoa.......coming in with two of AKB's beauty"? Yuko shouted when she saw Takamina coming in.....with Acchan and Yuihan. "Yuuchan! Stop calling our captain names! If you continue doing that........I will ignore you today"! Haruna shouted and smacked Yuko on the head. "Hey~ What did you do that for? That hurts~ And you know that you can't ignore me the whole day~" Yuko said and pout while rubbing her head. "I won't ignore you because you called our captain names......it's because you looked at someone else other than me......" Haruna  wispered softly but Yuko was able to hear. "My Nyan-Nyan is jealous~ That's so cute~ Let me hug you~" Yuko pounce on a blushing Haruna. "Yuuchan! That's not a hug! That's a pounce.......and a hug....let me go! People are looking!"Hauna said while blushing.  "I will never let you go even if Nyan-Nyan push me away~" Yuko said in a singing voice.
(Writer's note: New Yuko song? Related to Haruna? LOL.)
Takamina just smiled at the couple and put her bag down. "Hey~ Takamina~ You are late~" Mii-chan pounce from behind and cling on Takamina. "It's still early......I'm only not the first that's all......" Takamina sighed and pushed Mii-chan away. "Hey~ Don't just keep pushing me away~ Don't be so cold Takamina~ And you are always the first to come here~" Mii-chan said and pout. "I don't have to be first all the time......and I'm not being cold". A slightly frustrated Takamina replied. "Okay~ Geez.....you don't have to sound so annoyed at me....." Mii-chan said and walked over to Acchan. "Atsuko~ Your husband is so cold to me today~ Go cheer her up and go lovey dovey on her~ Go kiss her or something~" Mii-chan said and pretended to cry. "H-husband? A-and kiss"? Acchan said and turn red with embarrassment. "She is your husband so do something to her~" Mii-chan said and cling on Acchan. "Mii-chan! Stop saying things that people could misunderstand you"! Acchan shouted and blushed when Takamina looked at her and smiled. *D-did Minami just looked at me and smiled? Her smile is so dashing~ I think I shouted too loud* "You got teased again Atsuko? Second time today~" Tomochin walked over and poked Acchan blushing face. "Tomochin"! Acchan shouted and glared. "Oh......don't be mad Atsuko~ I'm just teasing you~" Tomochin said and smiled.



5mins before lessons..........

                    "Everyone! Do you stretches before leesons starts! And where the hell did the mayuki couple go"? Takamina said and asked. "I don't think they were here from the very start......try calling them someone"? Mariko said. "Gomen~ We are late~" Mayu shouted and apologize. Yukirin stepped in and apologize for being late too. And everyone got ready for their tough lessons ahead.
(Writer's note: Mayu's entrance surprised everyone present in the room. And Yukirin stepped in like a boss:3)



After lessons.......

                    "Ah.....shit. My whole body hurts like hell......" Takamina complained and packed up her stuff. Yuihan decided it was time she asked Takamina to go to her house and spent the night. *If Takamina-san comes over.......I will confess to her......* Yuihan thought. Just as she was about to invite Takamina,Acchan walked over and hugged Takamina from behind. "Minami~ You promised to stay over at my house yesterday~" Acchan said. "I forgot to pack my shirt.....". Takamina said. "Eehh~ It's okay~ You can wear mine~" Acchan said and smiled. "I-if you say so...." Takamina was nervous.....she was going to spend a night in Acchan's apartment alone.
(Writer's note: Acchan live by herself......which means.....Acchan got the upper hand of winning Takamina:3 I don't have to explain why......you should know the reason~)
*Did Atsuko-san invite Takamina-san already? Am I too late? Oh shit* Yuihan complained in her mind. *I have to win somehow.......I won't lose to her!*
(Writer's note: Jealous Yuihan is scary~)

To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Minami-chan on December 28, 2012, 11:04:25 AM
Interestingly, I have wanted to keep reading and see what happens with all couples
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: saeyukilover on December 28, 2012, 01:53:03 PM
yui as third party :shocked: ........ very good :)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Chanaline on December 28, 2012, 02:36:06 PM
It looked interesting!! :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: stepk on December 29, 2012, 12:06:32 AM
Atsumina :inlove:
acchan is alone in the house  :drool:
is a good thing.  :thumbsup
Waiting next chapter.  :bow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: XxRoByNxX78 on December 29, 2012, 01:15:49 AM
Mayuki  :inlove:

Atsumina  :inlove:

Kojiyuu  :inlove:

Yuihan even if i love atsumina done give up
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: kahem on December 29, 2012, 03:37:04 AM
lol poor forever alone Miichan
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on December 29, 2012, 04:19:32 AM
i love this.. jejej fight for your husband atsu... jeje aww kojiyuu lovey dovey moment..
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: miayaka on December 29, 2012, 07:14:16 AM
Im glad you post here your chapter 2
 :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: FNK23 on December 29, 2012, 08:44:26 AM
1-0 for acchan :thumbup
acchan should confess to takamina asap  :heart:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: korin48 on December 29, 2012, 12:47:36 PM
Hmm... Interesting!  :mon cute:
Jealous Yuihan surely is scary!  :mon chilly:
If Acchan has feeling for Takamina, she should confess her!  :mon noprob:
Please update soon!!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 2 - 28/12/2012] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 06, 2013, 08:50:57 AM
Thanks for the comments :cow: Please continue reading :heart:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 06, 2013, 08:55:34 AM
A/N: Thanks for the comments :heart: It helps :cow: I hope this is not crappy :nervous



                                                                                          Chapter 3

On the way to Acchan's house.......

                    *My heart is going crazy! I can't believe I went! I did promised Atsuko yesterday for forgetting about her.....but still.......she live alone! Darn it. I hope I don't do anything to her......if I can control my stupid mind!* Takamina complained in her mind and she was blushing at the fact that she WILL be alone in Acchan's house.
(Writer's note: Takamina can control herself if Acchan don't do anything seductive to Takamina.........well..........I said IF Acchan don't do anything which is impossible in Acchan case)
*I don't know if it's my imagination but Yuihan keep on staring at Takamina during lessons........I wonder if she likes Takamina.......but I will win for sure!* Acchan thought.  "Atsuko"? Takamina spoke up suddenly. "Yeah"? Acchan looked at Takamina smiled. *Whoa......she smiled at me! I think if her fans know we are alone tonight they will kill me!* Takamina thought. "Urm.......are we reaching or something? Because......there isn't a single soul here! Don't tell me you walk home like this everyday! You said you will be fine if I walked you to the station only"! Takamina shouted. "E-ehh? I walk here everyday......day and night......" Acchan replied nervously knowing that Takamina was mad at her. "It's dangerous! Alright.....I will walk you home from now on"! Takamina said and held Acchan hands. "Minami.......are you.......worried about me"? Acchan said playfully. "Of course I am! Who knows what will happen to you if I let you walk home yourself"! Takamina said without hesitating. Acchan was shocked at Takamina's straight forward answer and she blushed. "O-okay.....if you insist on walking me home....." Acchan murmured. "Not only walking you home......I'm making sure you reach your doorstep"! Takamina said and looked into Acchan's eyes. Seeing Takamina getting worked up just because of worrying about her she decided to let Takamina walk her home everyday.......of course Acchan have a motive on agreeing on Takamina walking her home......to win over Takamina and having her all to herself.
(Writer's note: Takamina is being manly again~ She should worry about herself now......good luck midget~)



In front of Acchan's apartment........

                    "Hai~ We are here~" Acchan smiled and looked at Takamina who looks exhausted. "Finally.......I felt like we walked for hours........it felt like we done the whole setlist for a concert or something......I'm dead beat". Takamina said in exhaustion. "Minami we only walked for 10mins~ You must be tired if you are so exhausted just by walking a short distance~ " Acchan giggled. "Let's go in~" Acchan said and opened the door to her apartment.



In the apartment........

                    "Sorry for the intrusion~" Takamina said. "Make yourself at home~" Acchan said and grin. Takamina didn't saw Acchan's grin at all and walked towards the living room. *I will hug Takamina from behind~ Should I? Am I taking things too fast?* Acchan thought. "W-whoa......this place is huge"! Takamina said and look around the house like a kid that went to a amusement park for the first time."Atsuko! Is this your room"? Takamina asked excitedly and looked inside the room. "Yup~ But I don't have a lot of manga like you do~" Acchan said and smiled at Takamina. *She looks like a kid~ So cute~ I wanna hug her~* Acchan said and before she could hug Takamina.......Takamina jumped on Acchan's bed. "It's soft~ And it's smell like you~* Takamina said and smelled Acchan's pillow. "D-don't do that"! Acchan blush when Takamina smelled her pillow. Takamina did not answer her. "Minami"? Acchan walked over to her bed and saw that Takamina was asleep already. "You should shower and change before sleeping~" Acchan said and tried waking Takamina. "Y-yeah"? Said a sleepy Takamina. "At least shower and change before sleeping~"
Acchan said and quickly kiss Takamina on the cheek. "You must be tired~ I will leave a towel and a pair of clothes for you in the toilet~" Acchan smiled and leave the room. *Did she just kissed me?! Oh my god! I think she did!* Takamina blushed and head towards the toilet that was in Acchan's room.
(Writer's note: Acchan did kissed you midget. Be happy~)



In the kitchen........

                   * I can't believe I kissed her! I hope she don't hate me~ I will get her something to drink......* Acchan thought and prepared some orange juice for Takamina to drink.




15mins later.........

                    "That was nice~ I feel refreshed again"! Takamina said. Takamina went out to the living room and to her surprise Takamina saw that Acchan has already taken a shower and was waiting for her. "Eehh?! You are done already? But I was showering....." Takamina said and looked at Acchan. "I got two toilets Minami~" Acchan said and giggled. "I see....." Takamina was not surprise at the fact that Acchan got two toilets in her apartment since the apartment was huge in it's own way. "Minami~ Come and sit down~" Acchan said and pat on the floor next to her. "On the floor"? Takamina said. All she received from Acchan was just a nod. "Okay......" Takamina obediently sat beside Acchan. "Hai~" Acchan passed a cup of orange juice to Takamina. "T-thanks...." Takamina thanked Acchan for the juice and drink it in silence. "Minami~ You are so quiet~" Acchan looked at Takamina and smiled. "I-I'm just tried......" Takamina quickly said and avoid looking at Acchan. *She smiled! Oh great. Dear kami-sama.....if you hear me please forgive me if I do something I'm not supposed to tonight* Takamina prayed. "Urm......let's sleep now"? Takamina said and gets up. "Sit down~" Acchan stands up and pushed Takamina down on the nearest sofa. "A-Atsuko this is not siting down......you are totally on top of me now". Takamina said and looked away. *I can't take it anymore! Since Minami is here I will make it clear tonight!* Acchan thought and stared at Takamina. *This is bad......really bad.......someone please get me out of this situation before it gets worse!* Takamina prayed for someone to break the awkward silence that filled the room. Suddenly,Takamina's phone vibrated and signaling that someone was calling her. "S-someone is calling me.....care to get off me so that I can answer my phone in case it's important"? Takamina said and pushed Acchan off her. Takamina looked at the caller ID and saw Yuihan name. *Thanks Yuihan~ I own you one!* Takamina thanked Yuihan in her heart before answering. "Hello? Yuihan"? Takamina answered the phone. "Takamina-san......can you come out now? I want to talk to you......" Yuihan said with a hint of sadness in her voice. Takamina noticed that Yuihan seems to be worried about something. "Eehh? What happened to you? Are you alright"? Takamina asked. "I'm fine......but......can you come out now? Are you busy or something"? Yuihan said. Takamina looked at Acchan. "Urm.......do you really need to talk to me now"? Takamina asked Yuihan. "If you are busy I understand since no3b recently has a new single......than I will speak to you tomorrow........please take care of yourself.........goodnight". With that Yuihan hang up the phone before Takamina could reply. "She hang up on me"? Takamina looked at the phone and asked.
(Writer's note: Well she hung up on you midget......and you got a Acchan to settle. Good luck.)
"Was that Yuihan"? Acchan asked. "Yeah.....looks like she wanted to tell me something but she hung up on me......" Takamina replied. *What was she trying to do? And she just make me lose my chance on confessing to Minami!* Acchan left hand clenched into a fist. "Atsuko"? Takamina asked. Takamina saw that Acchan wasn't so happy for some reason.
(Writer's note: As expected of Takamina~ LOL. But Jealous Acchan is still scary~ >.<)
Takamina walked over to Acchan and hug her from behind. "What's wrong? Angry at me or something"? Acchan was surprised that Takamina would hug her even after she pinned Takamina down on the sofa. "N-no.....I'm not angry at you......" Acchan blushed a little.
(Writer's note: Wow.....that was fast! Acchan changed a little too fast when it comes to Takamina:3 LOL.)
"Glad to hear it than~" Takamina said and give Acchan a quick kiss on the cheek. Acchan blush like mad when Takamina kissed her. "Eehh?! Minami"? Acchan said in surprise. "I'm tired......let's sleep now~" Takamina said and carried Acchan bridal style to Acchan's room and close the door. Takamina place Acchan gently on the bed and off the lights she lie down beside Acchan. *Im daring right now......get hold of yourself Minami! Argh......I hope Atsuko wouldn't slap me or something.......* Takamina thought. Acchan hugged Takamina and rested her head on Takamina's chest. "Oyasumi Minami~" Acchan said. "O-Oyasumi......Atsuko". 
(Writer's note: Nice move Takamina~)



In Yuihan's room..........

                    *That woman!!! Argh......I wouldn't lose to you! Just you wait and see! I will win Takamina-san's heart and prove to you I'm better than you! Even if you are the ace of AKB so what?! Even if you are in the same team as Takamina-san so what?! I will win this battle! Even if I have to put my life and job on the line! I will win!* Yuihan thought and punched the wall.
(Writer's note: Jealous Yuihan is scary~)



In Haruna's room.........

                     "Nyan-Nyan~ Skinship~" Yuko said and jumped on Haruna. " You idiot! Don't jump on me"! Haruna shouted and smack Yuko on the head. "Nyan-Nyan~ That hurts~ Come on......stop avoiding me~ I said I'm sorry~ I don't mean to hug you in front of everyone.......besides our captain didn't say anything~" Yuko pout and rub her head. "That's your fault"! Haruna said and turned away. "Nyan-Nyan~ Come on......." Yuko tried apologizing to Haruna. *Since nothing works than I will hug Nyan-Nyan......I hope that works......* Yuko thought. Yuko hug Haruna and pout. "You can't stay like this forever~ I know you love me~" Haruna blushed. "Yuko......." Haruna stare at her squirrel and kissed Yuko. Haruna pulls away and stares into Yuko's eyes. "You are an idiot". Haruna said. "If my Nyan-Nyan says so~" Yuko said and grin.



In a certain park..........

                    Two couple was seen holding hands and taking a stroll in the park.......in the middle of the night. "Yukirin~ I'm cold~" Mayu said and hug Yukirin. "Well......it's my cyborg that wants to come to the park in the middle of the night........" Yukirin said and hug Mayu back. "But I thought we could do lovey dovey stuff in the park~" Mayu said bluntly. Yukirin blushed. "Mayu! Don't say that in public! It's embarrassing"! Yukirin said and lightly hit Mayu on the head. "Yukirin hit me~" Mayu pout. *This girl is so blunt sometimes......* Yukirin thought. Yukirin lift Mayu's chin and kissed her.......in the middle of the park. Mayu pulled away first. "Yukirin......you are so bold~" Mayu said and teased Yukirin. "I can't always let you do the kissing......." Yukirin said and blushed. "You are so cute sometimes Yukirin~" Mayu said and giggled.

To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: ikun1216 on January 06, 2013, 09:10:02 AM
I can't help but root for the underdog. . . :sweatdrop:
Go Yuihan!!
 
Or should I just root for Takamina for going through this love triangle?
 :dunno:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: korin48 on January 06, 2013, 09:41:07 AM
Wow! Jealous Yuihan and Acchan is scary!  :mon chilly:
Takaboy has nice move!  :mon misch:
If Yuihan doesnt have 'boyfriend', she should fall for Kuchi XD because her oshimen is Yuihan... :mon heh:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: hara on January 06, 2013, 10:13:31 AM
Yuihan looks so scary...   :OMG:


Please dont make Yuihan have broken heart..
if she cant get Takamina, send someone for her..  :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Tanchan on January 06, 2013, 10:23:47 AM
At least now Acchan has a worthy rival :lol: but poor Takamina, she has to deal with two jealous girls :nervous
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: DC2805 on January 06, 2013, 02:51:31 PM
 :shocked Yuihan is really unexpectedly scary! But love cannot be forced ... jealously can cause wars but cannot win over hearts!

more of Mayuki's silly yet cute love in actions, please? love the couple!  :inlove:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: chichay12 on January 06, 2013, 04:23:42 PM
wow..i never think yuihan can be that scary..XD
i want more atsumina....hahaha
 :nervous :nervous :nervous
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: stepk on January 06, 2013, 06:29:14 PM
eeeh yui bye bye i'm scared.  :shocked   this girl  :lol:

Atsumina more atsumina I really love this couple
and Mayuki  :wub:

Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: LoyalFlutist on January 06, 2013, 09:16:43 PM
Heaven good lord, jealous Yui and Acchan is pretty scary.  :on freeze:

Ahhh, I don't know who to root for. Acchan or Yuihan? Agh, Takamina, who are you going to finalize with?! Even I can't tell who should be with Takamina. :scared:

The last two part with Kojiyuu and Mayuki is really adorable~ Hope to see another update on this fiction!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on January 06, 2013, 09:57:49 PM
Heaven good lord, jealous Yui and Acchan is pretty scary.  :on freeze:

Ahhh, I don't know who to root for. Acchan or Yuihan? Agh, Takamina, who are you going to finalize with?! Even I can't tell who should be with Takamina. :scared:

The last two part with Kojiyuu and Mayuki is really adorable~ Hope to see another update on this fiction!

jejej takaboy is such a player..
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: kahem on January 07, 2013, 12:46:17 AM
Kisses!!!!!
Jealous girls are scary lol
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 09, 2013, 09:00:49 AM
Thanks for the comments :lol:

ikun1216: LOL. Thanks for reading :lol:

Correne: LOL. Tell that to Amakuchi yourself XD

hara: Let's see how the story goes :)

Tanchan: Takamina can handle it:3 No problems XD

DC2805: LOL. That's true.....thanks for reading :)

Chichay12: LOL. There will be more Atsumina don't worry about it :lol:

stepk: LOL. Thanks for reading :)

LoyalFlutist: Thanks for reading~~ :cow:

Haruko: LOL :lol:

kahem: Thanks for reading :) LOL.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on January 09, 2013, 09:32:28 AM
Yeah... great fic there... Thank you

Well atsumina moments are great and sweet.

Oh I'm frustrated with Yui to always getting in atsumina way...

Well YukoxHaruna and YukixMayu moments are great too.

well can't wait for your next chapter

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 09, 2013, 10:15:07 AM
cisda83: Thanks~~ :love:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 3 - 6/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 09, 2013, 12:35:15 PM
A/N: Thanks for the comments~~ :heart: Without further ado.......I present to you Chapter four :cow:



                                                                                      Chapter 4

In the morning at Acchan's house...........

                    It was 8:30am in the morning...........and a certain midget was up. *I can keep on staring at Atsuko forever.........what am I thinking?! I will get killed.......by her crazy fans!* Takamina thought. Acchan was still sleeping soundly and Takamina was staring at her. 
(Writer's note: On that day the members have the day off.......to do anything they want. So......Acchan is still asleep:3) 
Acchan suddenly moved closer to Takamina.........and they were just inches away from each other lips. *Whoa........hold on here!! Is God trying to do something here?! Should I kiss her in this kind of scenario? M-maybe I should steal a kiss from her.......should I? I don't know anymore! If I wake her up........I will just say that was a morning kiss......* 
(Writer's note: You watched too many dramas and anime........) 
Takamina lean forward and kissed Acchan. It didn't last for long........Acchan suddenly woke up and opened her eyes in surprise. Takamina quickly pulled away and blush. "Urm......that was a wake up call"? Takamina laughed nervously. "That was bold of you Minami~ Stealing a kiss from me while I was asleep~" Acchan teased Takamina.
(Writer's note: Takamina was caught in action~ What kind of excuse is that? LOL.) 
Acchan leaned forward and kissed Takamina.......surprising the midget. "Ohayou~ I will make some breakfast for us~" Acchan said and left a stunned Takamina in the room. *Urm.......EEHH??!! D-did Atsuko just kissed me?!* Takamina thought. 
(Writer's note: Yeah. She did. Wait......Acchan doesn't know how to cook......Takamina will seriously die.) 
(Takamina: Wait......I will?)
(Writer's note: Yeah. Wait......why are you here?)
(Takamina: Cause you said I will die. Don't kill me.......I thought main characters don't die?) 
(Writer's note: I won't kill you......the readers will hate me for life if I do that:3) 
(Takamina: Go back to the story.)
(Writer's note: That's my line. And back to the story..........) 
Suddenly,Takamina's phone vibrated and she looked at the caller ID and smiled. Takamina picked up the phone. "Ohayou Yuko. What's up"? Takamina greeted her fellow midget. "Ohayou Bakamina~" Yuko said over the line. "Yuko!! Stop that"!! Haruna's voice could be heard in the background. "Hai~" Yuko said playfully. "So......I was wondering if you wanna join a few of us to the amusement park? We will be meeting at Tokyo main station~ At........wait I forgot.......hold the line". Yuko said. "Nyan-Nyan~ What time will we meet the rest again"? Yuko voice could be heard in the background. "12pm......stop forgetting that.......that was the fifth time you asked me that"! Haruna complained. "I got Nyan-Nyan to remember that for me~" Yuko said playfully. "The captain is waiting.......go and answer the phone". Haruna said coldly. "Awww......Nyan-Nyan is mad~" Yuko said and answer the phone again. "Well.....12pm at Tokyo main station......don't be late. And bring that tsundere of yours". Yuko said and hang up the phone. "I didn't even said I was going.......and that was the second time this week someone hang up my phone......guess I can't spend time with Atsuko alone........"Takamina said disappointingly. Takamina walked to the kitchen and saw a troubled Acchan trying to think of what to cook for Takamina. "You don't have to bother cooking anymore........Yuko just said that we will be going to the amusement park........12pm at Tokyo main station.........I didn't even said that we are going.....Yuko said to bring you over too". Takamina said. "Eehh~ And I wanted to cook something too~" Acchan said and pout. *Looks like I'm saved......from Atsuko's cooking.......thanks Yuko.....although I still hate you for disturbing my private time with Atsuko.* Takamina thought and sighed.



At Haruna's house...........

                     "Nyan-Nyan is scary when she is in tsun mode~" Yuko said and laughed. "YUKO"!!!!  Haruna shouted. "Whoa........I just invited Takamina to Disneyland........and you shout at me"? Yuko said. 
(Writer's note: Couple fight? Whoa.......) 
"You said amusement park! And that not why I'm angry"! Haruna shouted. 
Yuko just stand up and leave. "I......will see you later........I remembered that I need to do something......" Yuko said and excused herself. "Yuko! Come back here! I'm not done with you! Don't run away"! Haruna shouted but she heard a door close. "That idiot........." Haruna said. 



At Mayuki's location...........

                    "Yay~ Amusement park~ Disneyland~ Tokyo station~ And date~" Mayu said and jumped around like a little kid. "Mayu......stop jumping around.....I know you are excited.....just stop jumping". Yukirin said and smiled. "A date with Yukirin~ Yay~ I don't even remember when was the last time we went on a date~" Mayu said and pout. "Urm......last month"? Yukirin said. "No! Two months! The last time we went on a date was two months ago~" Mayu pout and look away. "Eehh? That long? I-I'm sorry Mayu.....looks like I'm too busy lately......that I forgotten about you........" Yukirin said and apologize knowing that Mayu was waiting for her all this time. "And.....that's why Disneyland~" Mayu said and smiled. *That was fast! I thought she was angry at me......* Yukirin thought. "Let's go~" Mayu said and grabbed Yukirin's hand and dragged her to the station. "Walk slower......." Yukirin said and smiled. 

To be continued. 

(Writer's note: The next chapter will be about dates and kisses and more jealously~)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: korin48 on January 09, 2013, 01:01:36 PM
Wow! You updated already! :twothumbs

I love the perverted side of Takamina XD
Please update soon! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: stepk on January 10, 2013, 02:25:09 AM
This is so f*cking great  :panic:  :D

no more words   XD

thanks for update  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: arrow27 on January 10, 2013, 02:41:02 AM
Thanks for the update :) Cute moments between the pairs & lol moments as well. I laughed when Takamina left the story & chatted with u :p
Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on January 10, 2013, 06:28:00 AM
Dates, kisses and jealous my 3 favorities words :B
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on January 10, 2013, 10:36:56 AM
Wah.. Minami is pretty bold there to make such a move.

Well as usual YukoxHaruna pair always fun

And MaYuki pair is also fine... coz' their interaction is like looking at sisters together than lover.

Anyhow, can't wait to see your update again...

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 4 - 9/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on January 12, 2013, 03:51:11 PM
A/N: Thanks for the comments~~ :heart: Chapter 5 Part 1 :cow:



                                                                                   Chapter 5 part 1

At Tokyo main station......

                    The first couple to reach was.....Mayuki. Mayu was so excited she can't stop....going crazy at Yukirin. "WE ARE HERE~~~"!!!! Mayu shouted and throw her fist in the air. Yukirin quickly looked around and cover Mayu's mouth. "We are idols! And we will have another scandal in AKB if we were found out! So stop shouting and drawing attention! It's embarrassing"! Yukirin hissed at Mayu. Mayu pulled Yukirin's hands off her mouth and smiled.  "I won't mind having a scandal....if it's with you~" Mayu said playfully. *She is really blunt.....* Yukirin thought and faceplam herself. "That won't be good at all. We can't be found out....and we are in public so behave yourself. Or no hugs for you today". Yukirin said sternly. "Hai~ But you can't resist me~" Mayu said. Suddenly,a man approached the Mayuki couple and grabbed Mayu's hand. "Hey kid. Wanna have some fun with me"? The man asked.
(Writer's note: He is just some random guy.....)
"Hey bastard. Wanna die"? Yukirin grabbed the man shoulder and give out a dangerous arua. "Yay~ My hero~ Black Yukirin is out"!  "Don't lay your dirty hands on her". Yukirin said and kicked the man's shin. "That hurt bitch"! The man said and was about to hit Yukirin when Mayu hold his arm. "Wait a sec mister~ If you wanna hurt Yukirin I will make sure you won't be living tomorrow~" Mayu said and gave a fake and scary smile.
(Writer's note: A yandere smile. I'm scared~)
Out of nowhere a girl sudddenly punched the man in the stomach and grabbed his shirt. "If you were to hurt one of the girls....I will kill you. So move it! If you wanna live"! The girl shouted. "I'm sorry"! The man said and quickly ran away. "You guys alright? Hurt anywhere"? The girl asked and removed her mask. "Yuko"! The Mayuki couple said in unison. "Arigatou~" Mayu thanked Yuko and hugged her. "No problems ya know~" Yuko said and smiled. "But really....if you didn't come to our rescue we won't know what to do". Yukirin said and smiled. "Where's Nyan-Nyan"? Mayu said and looked around. "Nyan-Nyan will be here later~" Yuko said. Mayu and Yuko started talking about the members boobs and butts....as usual. "Yukirin's boobs has grown lately~" Mayu said and looked at Yukirin. "Mayu"! Yukirin lightly smacked Mayu's head. "Yuko~ Yukirin hit me~" Mayu said and pout. "Let's buy some ice-cream while we wait for the captain and the others to show up". Yuko pat Mayu's head and smiled. "Yay~ Ice-cream~" Mayu said. "I thought you said you were cold....." Yukirin said. "Don't worry~ I got Yukirin to warm me up". Mayu said and kissed Yukirin on the cheek. "I will be right back~" Mayu said and give her cutest smile. "D-don't be long". Yukirin said and blushed. "Awww~ That was so sweet of you~" Yuko said and pat Mayu's head. "Yuko-san! Yukirin and Mayu-san"! A voice called out to them. "Ohayou gozaimasu. I thought I will be the first to be here.....I hope I'm not late". Yuihan said politely. "Ohayou~" All three of them greeted. "You are not late at all....since Takamina and the others are not here yet". Yuko said. "Yuihan"? Mayu asked and showed puppy eyes. "Hai"? Yuihan said and wait for Mayu to continue. "Can you please look after Yukirin and if anyone comes randomly and touch my Yukirin....kick them. You can kill them too". Mayu said seriously. "M-Mayu.....I can look after myself.....and Yuko.....if anyone comes randomly at Mayu......I give you permission to murder them". Yukirin said and turn to Yuko. "I can see why both of you love each other so much". Yuko said and giggled. "Yuko-san......did you just said that Takamina-san is coming too"? Yuihan asked. "Yeah I did". Yuko replied. "Eeh?! At least tell me that when you invited me"! Yuihan said and started to panic. "Clam down Yuihan......you looked cute today so it's fine.....geez.....is that all you worry about"? Yuko said. "I-I'm sorry....." Yuihan said and claimed herself down.
(Writer's note: Looks like this won't be good at all....if Yuihan is here.....Takamina will have some......woman's problem.)



At atsumina location.......

                    "Atsuko......you are too close......" A midget said and blushed. They were.....in the train. It was kinda packed......so Acchan was worried that someone will touch Takamina so......she went super close to the midget to protect her. "Don't keep moving Minami~"Acchan said and pushed Takamina closer to the train door. *Why am I in this kind of situation again?* Takamina thought. "We are alighting soon~" Acchan said. "R-right......." Takamina said and look away.
(Writer's note: Acchan is so bold~ LOL.)



Back at Tokyo main station.......

                    "Nyan-Nyan~~ Aitakata~~" Yuko said when she saw Haruna walking towards them. "Kimi ni~~~" Mayu sing along with Yuko. "Mayu"! Yuko said. "Roger"! Mayu said and salute Yuko. "On three......one.....two.....three"! "AITAKATA~~~"!!! Both Mayu and Yuko sang and throw both of their hands towards Haruna. "Mayu....I said lower your volume......." Yukirin said and facepalm herself. "Yucchan! not so loud"! Haruna said and smack Yuko on the head. "Yuuchan? Nyan-Nyan~ You are not mad at me anymore~" Yuko said happily. "I am"! Haruna shouted. "But you only call me Yuuchan when you are not mad at me~ And you call me Yuko when you are mad~" Yuko said and hugged Haruna. "Yuko". Said a midget that popped out of nowhere. "Whoa! You scare me there"! Yuko said and turn around. "Ohayou". Takamina said. "Ohayou~ Why so moody"? Yuko asked. "Ask yourself......." Takamina said. "Minami~ You are too cold~" Acchan said from behind. "C-cold"? Takamina said. "T-Takamina-san......" Yuihan said. "Oh.......Ohayou Yuihan~" Takamina quickly recovered and greet Yuihan. "Wait.....how many people did you invite Yuko"? Takamina looked at Yuko suspiciously. "Let's see.....Jurina,Rena,Yuihan,Atsuko,Takamidget,Mayu,Yukirin,Mariko,Mii-chan". Yuko counted and name the members that she invited. "That many"?! Takamina shouted. "That's only eleven members.....plus me and Nyan-Nyan. I wanted to invite more people ya know"? Yuko said. "Please don't......we don't want to attract to much attention.....it will be troublesome". Takamina said. "Fun killer~" Yuko said and stuck out her toungue. "Whatever". Takamina said and rolled her eyes. "So cold~~" Yuko said and laugh. "
(Writer's note: Takamina is still annoyed at Yuko for calling her out.....interrupting her time with Acchan.)
(Takamina: I'm not annoyed!)
(Writer's note: Than.....angry?)
(Takamina: No!)
(Writer's note: Why are you here again?)
(Takamina: Break time......and Mii-chan,Jurina,Rena and Mariko will be here soon.)
(Writer's note: I know that! And please stop talking to me!)
(Takamina: Just passing-by~ And hi Chichay~~)
(Writer's note: Don't greet Chichay here......)
(Writer's note: And back to the story.......)
(Takamina: I'm not done yet!)
(Writer's note: Go back.......Acchan is waiting for you.)
(Takamina: Acchan? Alright! Back to the story people~~)



10 mins later.......

                    "Ohayou gozaimasu~" Jurina was the first to greet them upon reaching. "Ohayou~" Yuko and everyone greeted her. "Where's Rena"? Mayu asked. "Rena-chan is buying some melon pan.....again". Jurina replied. "Again"? Yuko asked. "She brought.....5 melon pan this morning for breakfast....." Jurina said and showed her five fingers. "5 melon pan? That's......a lot......and saying about breakfast.....Atsuko.....I'm hungry~" Takamina said and face Acchan. "Minami is hungry~ That's so cute of you~" Acchan said and hugged Takamina. *Argh! She hugged Takamina-san! I'm breaking them up!* Yuihan thought and stepped forward and pulled Takamina away and give Takamina a sandwich that she had with her. "P-please eat this! I made it this morning"! Yuihan blushed and handled the sandwich to Takamina. "Oh....is this for me? What about you? And it's handmade~" Takamina said and smiled. "I'm fine....you can eat it.....I-I don't really have to eat or something........" Yuihan said and blushed. "Wow.......that almost looked like a confession". Yuko said and Mayu nod her head. "It's just breakfast....." Haruna said and facepalm herself.
(Writer's note: Okay~ Skip this part~)



5mins later........

                    Everyone finally arrived at the meeting point....and Rena finished her bread.
(Writer's note: She can really eat......)
"Yay~ Finally~" Mayu said. "Settle down~~" Yuko said. "Let's spilt up~~" Yuko said and starts giving instructions. "Mayu you will go with Yukirin~ And I will go with Nyan-Nyan~ "Mariko.....and Mii-chan~" Yuko said and grin. "I'm fine". Mariko and Mii-chan said in unison. "Good~ Than.....Rena and Jurina~ And.....the most troublesome one........Takamina"? Yuko faced and asked Takamina. Takamina looked around and sighed. "Atsuko and Yuihan....I'm fine.......I guess". Takamina said. "Okay~ Than we are settled....12pm....at Disneyland~" Yuko said and give everyone a peace sign. "If we spilt up....what's the point of meeting"? Takamina said and sighed. "Go and have your nice breakfast and shop around I guess? It won't open to us until 12pm.....so we meet at 12pm....at Disneyland"? Yuko explained. "You lost me....." Yuihan said.
(Writer's note: Yuko is up to something........)
"Opened to us? It's already opened....." Takamina said. "Not to us~"See you later~" Yuko said and dragged Haruna off to somewhere. "And she left us?! Yu—"Takamina mouth was covered before she can finish her sentence. "Takamina-san......I think you should keep it down for now.......there is a man with a camera nearby.......he has been looking at us for awhile.......let's go first". Yuihan calmly explain before releasing Takamina. Takamina just nod and signal to the rest to go off first and contact by phone. The rest nod to show that they understood what Takamina was saying and go to their separate ways.



In a certain cafe.....

                    "That was close.....". Takamina said and sip on her drink that she ordered a few minutes ago. "I'm tired~~ Minami~~" Acchan said and sat closer to Takamina. *Whoa.....too close.....she's too close!*  Takamina thought and blushed. "Ahem.....Atsuko-san....we are in public. Although we are in a private cafe....please behave yourself...." Yuihan said. "Meanie~" Acchan stuck her tongue out at Yuihan. "Atsuko". Takamina said and hit Acchan lightly on the head. "Minami hit me~~ I hate you~" Acchan said and turn her head away. *Argh! What did I just did to Atsuko?! Now she hates me!!! I hate myself!!*  Takamina thought and mentally faceplam herself. *Sniff* a sound was heard next to Acchan. "Sniff"? Acchan said and turned around and saw Takamina crying silently,tears dripping down  her cheeks. "Eehh!? Minami?! Why are you crying?! I'm don't mean it~" Acchan quickly apologize to Takamina. *Sniff* "It's okay....there's something in my eye". Takamina quickly think of an excuse. "Takamina-san.....that was a lame excuse......" Yuihan said and giggled.
(Writer's note: Lame.....but your wife knows it's not like that~)
"Minami~ Don't lie.....I know you well.....we have been together for a long time already~" Acchan said and smiled at Takamina. *She figured it out so fast! Is my excuse too lame? I'm always failing....even in my lies....I'm even impressed with my own fail character......*  Takamina thought and looked away. "Takamina-san.....acts like a kid~ It's so cute~" Yuihan whispered and giggled silently. "What was that"? Acchan said and looked at Yuihan. "N-nothing...." Yuihan said and blushed. "Okay......" Acchan said and went back to tend to Takamina.

To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: DC2805 on January 12, 2013, 07:44:16 PM
Thanks for this new chapter! More actions from the rest of the couples, please!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on January 12, 2013, 09:07:57 PM
Wah... I really feel sorry for Minami there... being surrounded with 2 girls that going to fight for her attention.. although Minami likes Atsuko more...

Yuko and Mayu... are so childish as usual... Yuki and Haruna... would get high blood pressure soon enough.... because of their partners.

Rena... can eat lots of melon pan huh?

Anyhow, great update... Thank you... hope to see the next one

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on January 12, 2013, 10:08:46 PM
waaa.. about atsumina train´s scene.. OMG!! jeje takaboy you are the man!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: kahem on January 13, 2013, 02:45:01 AM
lol Yuko is really something ^^
I like the fight scene xD
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: korin48 on January 13, 2013, 03:59:52 AM
Lol! Poor Takaboy! Being surrounded by 2 sexy girls!  :mon evillaff:
Go Takaboy choose Acchan!  :mon blowhorn:  When will be Kuchi's apperance? just kidding...
Yuko and Mayu are pervert, as always!  :hiakhiakhiak:
I love AtsuMina's train scene... I love how Acchan flirts Takaboy... :luvluv2:
Please update soon! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: FlameHazeKatsu on January 22, 2013, 07:00:34 PM
'Woah triple dates?! Niiiice...."  :mon star: that's what I thought until Yuihan showed up  :mon noprob: And yeah the A/N is really driving me crazy.... :mon duh:  :mon headbang:  :mon runcry:  :mon POd: It's just that...it's a little too much?  but it's ur writing... :mon cigar: and yesh thx for the update~~ looking forward for the updates~  :mon inluv:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 1 - 12/1/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: FNK23 on January 25, 2013, 10:09:05 AM
your writing style is funny, i like when takamina out of the story. And it's too much cuteness inside heree, i like when yuko and mayu sing aitakatta together it's funnyyy. Looking forward he next update
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki
Post by: Kanata48 on March 05, 2013, 10:12:47 AM
A/N: Sorry if I took a long time to update this chapter...I was busy with tests and stuff :sweatdrop: LOL.



                                                                                 Chapter 5 part 2

At 12pm in front of Disneyland.......

                    "W-whoa...." Takamina said and her eyes sparked with excitement. "So this is Disney? I-it's huge....I should take a picture....." Takamina said as she takes her phone out. "Minami~~ Let's take one together~~" Acchan said as she hugs Takamina from behind playfully. *A-again? T-too close! You are to close Atsuko!* Takamina thought and blushed a deep shade of red. "Of course~~" Acchan said as she held Takamina's hand. "I-if you say so...." Takamina said as she was about to take a picture with Acchan,Yuko popped out of nowhere. "ATSUMINA PLUS YUKO"!!! Yuko shouted and pose behind them. "You scared the hell out of me Yuko"!! Takamina shouted at Yuko and smacked Yuko on the head. "Only Nyan-Nyan can hit me!! Acchan!! Control you husband for once"!! Yuko shouted and rubbed her head. "H-husband"? Acchan blushed and looked at Takamina. "I have a wife"? Takamina said and looked around. "Idiot". Mariko said and lightly hit Takamina's head. "What? Are you stupid? Bakamina? Yahoooo~~ Are you there"? Yuko knocked Takamina's head and waved her hands over Takamina's eyes. "Did I do something"? Takamina asked. "Wow....I'm not surprised to hear that....." Tomochin said as she approached the group. "Hi Tomochin~~" Yuko said. "Hi again? Anyways.....you fail too much my dear captain". Tomochin said and flicked Takamina's forehead. "Stop aiming for my head"!! Takamina shouted and hid behind Acchan for protection. "Shouldn't it be the other way round"? Tomochin asked Yuko. " Hmm....wife protecting the husband?

I think it's okay if you apply that on mayuki....not atsumina though....Takamina is the man~~" Yuko said and put a thumbs up. "Since when"? Takamina asked. "Since the beginning~~" Acchan said. "AKB papa". Mayu said and hug Yukirin. "Well....Mayu's right. You have been AKB papa since the beginning". Yukirin smiled sweetly at the captain. "Takamina-san has always been a leader and AKB papa to all the members and fans". Yuihan said. "Hmm....there were fans that told me that during handshakes event". Takamina said as she tried to progress what Yuihan had just said. "Well then! Since everyone has gathered....let's get going~~" Yuko said and pulled Haruna along.



After that....

                    "I'm at the top of the WORLD"!!!! Yuko shouted at the top of her lungs. They were at....the roller coaster ride.
(Writer's note: I can't take roller coasters >.<)
*I'm scared....freaking scared....but.....* Takamina looked to her side and saw Acchan's smile. *BUT HOW CAN I REJECT HER?!* Takamina shouted in her mind. "Minami"? Acchan called out to Takamina. "Y-yeah"? "Why...is this roller coaster so high up"? Acchan looked up and pointed at the top. "Maybe—" Takamaina started but was cut off by Yuko. "Maybe because you are a midget"? Yuko suggested. "You are no taller either...like you are the one to say". Takamina said. "At least I'm taller than you~~" Yuko said and poked Takamina cheek. Takamina glared at Yuko. "Acchan! Your midget glared at me"! Yuko complained. "M-m-my m-midget"? Acchan asked and blushed. "Well...she will be yours soon~~" Tomochin whispered in Acchan's ear.

"Tomochin"!! Acchan shouted. "Calm down~~ I'm just teasing you~~" Tomochin said playfully. "It's not like that idiot will know...." Tomochin said and pointed at Takamina who was choking Yuko...for insulting her height. "She not an idiot"! Acchan said. "Whatever~~" Tomochin said. "Well...she is".  Rena said. "Wait. melonpan again"? Tomochin asked. Rena just nodded. "How many had she eaten so far"? Tomochin asked Jurina...who was clinging on Rena. "Let's see....5 in the morning....2 before we came...and 3 now". Jurina said. "Wait...that's...." Tomochin said. "10 melonpan". Rena replied. "You really love eating melonpan....". Tomochin said. "Well more like...sweet stuff~~" Jurina said. "Too much sweet stuff". Takamina said. "Where's Yuko"? Tomochin asked. "Haruna is saving her soul". Takamina said. Tomochin looked at Yuko. "She looks dead...." Tomochin said. "Anyway....Rena eat proper meals at proper time. It's not good if you do not eat properly". Takamina said. "Hai~~" Rena salute Takamina. "Let's go up~~" Acchan said and drag Takamina up. *I'm doomed....* Takamina thought.



After the roller coaster ride.....

                    "I feel sick....." Takamina said as she sat on the bench with Yuihan. "Are you okay Takamina-san"? Yuihan asked worriedly. "I-I'm fine let me rest for awhile......" Takamina said. "Minami~~" Acchan called out. "Y-yeah"? Takamina said nervously. "Drink up~~" Acchan said and pass a bottle of water to Takamina. "T-thanks..." Takamina said. "The captain is sick". Mayu said. "I didn't know you can't take roller coasters Minami~~" Acchan said and sat down next to Takamina. *Well...you were the one who drag her up Atsuko-san* Yuihan rolled her eyes. "I'm fine....I guess"? Takamina said. "You are definitely not fine". Yuko said. "Oh? Worried about our captain? That's rare". Haruna said as she place a wet towel on Takamina forehead. "No. I'm not! Why  must I be worried about Bakamidget"? Yuko said and pointed at Takamina. Without a word,Haruna smacked Yuko. "That hurts~~" Yuko pout and rubbed her head. "Blame yourself". Haruna said. "I'm hungry". Mayu hugged Yukirin.

"Didn't you already eat more than you need"? Yukirin asked and pat Mayu's head. "Cyborg...out...of energy...." Mayu said and pretended to faint. "Okay...no ice-cream". Yukirin said. "Yay~~ Food~~" Mayu said and put her hands in the air. "Did anyone said food"? Yuko asked. "Me~~ Mayuyu is hungry~~" Mayu said. "Let's eat than~~ Mayu is hungry~~ So am I~~" Yuko said.
(Writer's note: Food again? They can really eat....LOL.)



At a cafe.....

                    "May I take your orders"? A waitress asked politely. "Let's see...." Mayu said and stared at the menu that was given to her. "I want...." Yuko said and make eye contact with Mayu. "We want everything on the menu"!!! Mayu and Yuko shouted and passed the menu to the waitress. "E-everything"? The waitress asked and looked at the duo surprisingly. "Yup! Everything~~ Thank you~~" Mayu and Yuko said together in chorus. "Not everything"!! Haruna and Yukirin shouted and smack their partners in the head. "I'm sorry about that..." Takamina apologize sincerely. "Is everyone okay with the lunch set"? Takamina asked. "We will gladly take that"!! Haruna and Yukirin said and covered their partners mouth in case they said anything else unnecessary. "T-thank you and please wait a moment before we serve your drinks". The waitress said politely and leave. "Meanie". Mayu and Yuko said when they are released. "We can't eat everything from the menu"!! Haruna shouted. "Mayu....please stop eating so much in a day..." Yukirin said and sighed. "Than can I..." Mayu started. "No". Yukirin said firmly knowing what Mayu wanted to say. "Awww....Yukirin is angry~~" Mayu said and pouted.  "
(Writer's note: Let's skip this or all of you will fall asleep before reading the end XD LOL.)



After eating......

                    As usual....Takamina will go for the bill when Yuihan or Acchan wants to pay the bill. "No way"! Acchan shouted. "Takamina-san please let me pay this time. You paid for my meal the other time". Yuihan said. "The other time? What other time Minami"? Acchan asked. "It's just a meal...." Takamina said. "Let go of the bill Minami~~ Let me pay~~" Acchan said. "No way! I won't let AKB top beauties to pay for a meal"! Takamina shouted. Upon hearing what Takamina had just said...Acchan and Yuihan released the bill that they were fighting for and blushed. "Oh~~" Mayu and Yuko said and looked at Acchan and Yuihan than at Takamina who was paying the bill. "Takamina was so manly~~" Jurina said and hugged Rena. "I want to eat melonpan again". Rena said. "You just ate...." Tomochin said.
(Writer's note: Rena can really eat...LOL.)



                    As time passes....more members came and join in the fun at Disney. Of course...Team K twin towers are needed...for Yuko's plan to work.
(Writer's note: I did mention about Yuko planning something...I have short term memory XD LOL.)

It was already 6pm in the evening when they finished playing almost every ride in Disneyland. "Alright! Let get ready and head home~~ There will be a bus waiting for us to fetch us home~~" Yuko said. "Wait~~ I need to buy a souvenir for my sister" Umeda Ayaka,one of the members who joined in after her jobs were done for the day said and head towards the souvenir shop. As a few of the members wanted to do some other stuff,Yuko decided to have a short break before leaving.
(Writer's note: It was part of the plan.)
"Yuko! Don't call for breaks randomly! We can't let the bus driver wait for us"! Takamina tried reasoning but Yuko just totally ignored Takamina and quickly wink at Sayaka and Sae who was with Takamina and walk away. "Argh!! Oshima stop ignoring me"! Takamina shouted. "Calm down Takamina". Sae said calmly. "Geez...that girl can drive me crazy sometimes...." Takamina said and facepalm herself. *Now!!* Sayaka signaled to Sae and both of them immediately covered Takamina mouth and blinded folded her. Dragging Takamina to the assigned location as planned. Takamina couldn't fight back with two of Team K's strongest members.



At the assigned location....

                    "And...we are here". Sae said and signal to Sayaka to let Takamina down. When Sayaka removed the blindfold Takamina immediately move away from the duo. "Why the hell did you guys do that for"?! Takamina shouted. "Let's see..." Sae said and looked at Sayaka for help. "We..." Sayaka started. "That was part of the plan actually". Mariko appeared from behind with everyone following at the back. "What plan"? Takamina asked. "Look behind you. Midget". Tomochin said. Takamina obeyed and turned around. She saw a huge bridge before her with two different path to two different places. "This bridge...coincidentally called 'The bidge of fate' you know what that means right Takamina? "Where's Acchan and Yuihan"? Takamina turn around and asked. "Your answer...is right before you". Rena said. "Huh"?  I don't get it..." Takamina said and look at Yuko. "As usual...care to explain to her Nyan-Nyan"? Yuko asked and looked at Haruna. "Okay...look at the bridge in front of you". Haruna said and point towards the bridge. Takamina obeyed and looked towards the bridge. "There are two ways for you to choose. Left or right? That...will be your choice". Haruna finished.  "On the left...we have Acchan. And on the right...we have Yuihan". Jurina said and smiled. "They will wait for you at the end of the bridge...you can only choose one path to walk on". Takamina thought about it for awhile and understood what's going on. "If...I choose one of them...what will happen to the other"? Takamina asked seriously. "You got it...that's our captain". Mayu said. "Well...Mayu and I will handle that...don't worry about it". Yukirin said. Takamina nodded and walk towards the bridge. *Acchan...well...I always look out for her...and Yuihan...she was always there for me...But...I want to be with Acchan and protect her until the day I die...and too continue to look after the adorable junior of mine and see her make her dreams come true* Takamina thought. Takamina bowed towards the path that leads to Yuihan and apologized. "I'm sorry...I knew you had feelings for me but I am not able to return those feelings that you gave me. I'm sure there will be someone out there who will take care of you and look after you until the day that you part from this world....there is someone...who needs me more...thank you for always being there for me...please look after me from now on". Takamina said and bowed once more before walking to the left path of the bridge. Everyone smiled and knew what to do next. Mayu and Yukirin head towards Yuihan while the others wait at another location for them to return. Nobody knows what will happen from now...but..everyone knows that a certain midget made the choice on her own.

                    "Acchan". Takamina called out when she reached the end of the bridge. Acchan turned around when she heard her name and smiled when she saw the person she wanted to see.


To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Elo on March 05, 2013, 12:28:41 PM
yeyyyy finally atsumina  :wub: :deco:

please update very soon the next chapter  :bow:

I cant wait anymore :bow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on March 05, 2013, 04:30:02 PM
haha Mayu and Yuko want to order everything on the menu  :lol:
Takamina acting like a gentleman  :heart: :yep:
awww Rena want's more melon pan :P, I wanna try it myself :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Hii_chan on March 05, 2013, 06:06:55 PM
yeah..I love Atsumina
but why dont you make more Takayui moment ?
I like them too
thanks for update :welcome
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: stepk on March 05, 2013, 11:34:23 PM
its been awhile...

the chapter is really cute   :wub:
yuko always bothering  :lol:

minami choose acchan...  :inlove:
cuute.. thanks for upload.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: mae on March 05, 2013, 11:45:04 PM
thank you for update
yeah takamina choose acchan  ;)
please udate soon :)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Haruko on March 06, 2013, 03:41:16 AM
yeah!! atsumina!!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on March 06, 2013, 05:14:27 AM
Takamina is so clueless as usual but she can be naturally flirting with someone without relishing (i.e. during the time when she want to pay the bill)

Yuko and Mayu are so childish.... Rena eats too many melonpan

Ah... Yuko and the others.... were trying to make Takamina choose who she wants to be with...

Yeah... Takamina chose Atsuko

But poor Yui-han that always be there for Takamina and loves her very much...

Can't wait to see what happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: ikun1216 on March 06, 2013, 05:58:34 AM
I think I had a mini spazz attack when I read Ume-Chan's name :luvluv1:
Ahh, Poor Yuihan...I wonder what will happen next?
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: korin48 on April 12, 2013, 11:52:32 AM
Aw! Poor Takaboy XD
Lol Oshiri sisters want everything :lol:
Update soon please!  :bow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Archer1992 on April 14, 2013, 05:01:19 PM
Grat! FF
Continue ASAP PLIS ^3^
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 5 part 2 - 5/3/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: deviantone on April 19, 2013, 12:33:25 AM
So....basically i read this whole thing while i was at work....I'm so bad :smhid. This is a great story! I love Takamina...i can relate to your stories version of her very much  :hee:. I can't wait until your next update...Maybe I'll do some system management and coding while I wait for your update  :glasses:. Afterall, thats what I get paid for  :on lol:. Great story! Keep up the good work! And again, CAN'T WAIT!! :on bleed:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Kanata48 on April 28, 2013, 08:02:31 AM
                                                                                    Chapter 6

                    *I know that I don't really have a chance...but I really love Takamina-san from the bottom of my heart!* Yuihan thought and put her hands together and prayed.



                    "Nee? Yukirin"? Mayu asked as she held Yukirn's hands while making their way over to Yuihan. "Hmm"? Yukirin said and looked at Mayu curiously while waiting for Mayu's question. "What are we going to do when we get there? I bet Yuihan is gonna cry..." Mayu said and looked up the sky with a sad look pinned on her face. "I will handle that somehow...let's go". Yukirin smiled and said knowing that Mayu is concerned about Yuihan. "Hai~~" Mayu said and both of them walk towards their destination.



                    "Yuihan..." Yukirin called out when they reached their destination. When Yuihan saw Yukirin and Mayu, Yuihan squat on the spot and blast into tears knowing that Takamina did not choose her. Yukirin rushed over to Yuihan side and hugged her trying to calm Yuihan down. "Awww...I wanna hug Yukirin too~~" Mayu said and pout. Yukirin did not hear Mayu and continue to tend to Yuihan. *Sigh...oh well...I know Yukirin is trying to help Yuihan...but I haven't seen her for two months straight...and we hardly text each other since Yukirin and I were kinda busy with our own work and stuff...* Mayu thought and looked up at the stars on the sky.



                    "Acchan". Takamina called out when she reached the end of the bridge. Acchan turned around when she heard her name and smiled when she saw the person she wanted to see. "Minami..." Acchan went over to Takamina and hugged her. Takamina just hugged Acchan without saying a word. "W-wait...if you choose me...what about Yuihan"? Acchan suddenly asked. "Yuihan..." Takamina whispered and looked at the direction of where Yuihan was waiting for her. Takamina grin as she knew what she should do. "Well, for the time being...it's taken cared of. For now...it's just you and me". Takamina said and looked at Acchan in the eye. Acchan blushed when Takamina made an eye contact with her. "D-d-don't you have to take care of that captain"? Acchan asked while looking down as if the ground is the most interesting thing in the world right now. "Well...after I take care of you first". Takamina said and lift Acchan chin up and kissed Acchan. Acchan was surprised at first but returned the kiss after awhile. After a few seconds, both of them pulled apart. *I sure have the guts to do that today...* Takamina thought and blushed while looking away. *Minami was kinda cool when she did that~~* Acchan thought and smiled. Breaking up the silence, Takamina took Acchan hand and pointed towards the direction that she came from. "Let's go back there...." Takamina said. Acchan nodded her head and the couple went to meet the rest of the members.



                    When the Atsumina pair arrived, Yuko went and hit Takamina on the back. "You were so cool Takamidget"!! Yuko said and gave Takamina a thumbs up. "That hurts you idiot"!! Takamina shouted and nearly hit Yuko back until Acchan held Takamina back. "Don't hit Yuko~~ Yuko is just playing with you~~" Acchan said playfully. "You called that playing"? Takamina said and rubbed her back. "Yuuchan! Apologize now! You hit Takamina too hard"! Haruna said and gave Yuko the "apologize to Takamina or die look". "I-I'm sorry captain...." Yuko said sincerely and gave Takamina puppy eyes. "That doesn't work on me...but...just don't hit me that hard in the future...I will seriously die". Takamina said. "Hai~~" Yuko said and cling onto Haruna. "Acchan..." Takamina started and looked at Acchan. "Hmm"? Acchan replied. "Wait for me for awhile...I need to handle this..." Takamina said in a serious tone. "Go and fetch Yuihan...I will be fine with everyone here". Acchan said and smiled. "But..." Takamina started knowing that the smile that Acchan gave has a sad expression in it. "Go midget. Yuihan is waiting for you. Don't let a beauty wait".  Yuko said and give a serious expression. "Yuko..." Takamina said and thought about what Yuko said. "Well~~ My Nyannyan is my number one though~~" Yuko said and hugged Haruna. "I thought you were serious for once"!! Takamina shouted and hit Yuko on the head. "Don't do that!! Only my Nyannyan can hit me!! Acchan!! Control your midget for once before I really need to got to the hospital to check my head"!! Yuko shouted and rubbed her head. "Minami~~ Stop hitting Yuko~~" Acchan said and hit Takamina lightly on the head. Takamina did not say a word and looked down. "Acchan...will you really be alright without me"? Takamina said with a serious tone. Acchan thought about Takamina question for a while and smiled. "Hmm...maybe for a few minutes...but I can't live without Minami for my whole life~~" Acchan said and smile cutely. *OMG...THAT'S SO FREAKING ADORABLE~~* Takamina shouted in her mind. Mariko cleared her throat and everyone's attention went to her. "Did you forget that you still have a member to fetch my dear captain"? Mariko said and point toward the direction of Yuihan. "I totally forgotten about it"!! Takamina shouted and panicked. "As expected of my senpai...in terms of falling jokes". Jurina said. "Yeah...as expected from the king of falling jokes and the idiot captain". Rena said and bite into her melon pan.
(Writer's note: Wait...again?)
"As expected from captain idiot". Tomochin said and facepalm herself. "Just joking". Takamina said. "I remembered about Yuihan...I just don't know what to say when I see her..." Takamina said and looked up the sky and reach out for the stars. Everyone smiled knowing that the captain midget is worried about what to say to Yuihan since she knew about Yuihan feelings towards her. "Don't worried about that Takamina". Umechan said and give Takamina an assuring smile. "We will take care of Acchan...so don't worry about". Miichan said and pat Takamina on the back. "You will know what to say when you get there...since it's Minami...you won't have any trouble with it". Acchan said and hugged Takamina. "Believe in yourself captain". Acchan whispered in Takamina ears before releasing her hug. Takamina nod and give Acchan a peck on the cheek before jogging away to Yuihan. "Awww~~ That's so sweet of her~~" Sae said. *I hope Minami will be alright...* Acchan thought worryingly.



                    Sobs could be heard when Takamina arrived. "Oh~~ Takamina~~ You are finally here..." Mayu greeted the captain while holding on to a cup of hot chocolate. "Hot chocolate now"? Takamina asked and giggled. "Yup. It's cold at night you know? Plus, Yukirin is busy hugging Yuihan to notice me anyway". Mayu said and look away. *Jealous Mayu now?! Plus...Mayu's arua is pretty dangerous now...I got a chill down my spine being so near the cyborg..." Takamina thought. Takamina look over to Yuihan and Yukirin. When Yukirin saw Takamina she just nod her head and pulled up Yuihan who was exhausted from all the crying. Takamina walked over and give Yukirin a hand and help Yuihan over to a fountain to let Yuihan sit down and rest. "I will handle this...go and handle your cyborg...she has a super dangerous arua..." Takamina said and point at Mayu who was still sulking at the side and looking at the stars on the night sky with her hot chocolate on her hands. "M-Mayu is jealous? That's so cute~~ But I didn't know she was over there..." Yukirin said and excuse herself. Takamina watched as Yukirin walked over to Mayu and poked Mayu cheeks. Mayu just continue to sulk. "Come on Mayu~~ Let go back to the others first~~ Leave Takamina and Yuihan to talk privately~~" Yukirin said and dragged Mayu back. Takamina smiled at the couple on how adorably cute they are.



                    Takamina walked over to the fountain and sit beside Yuihan. Neither of them spoke a word and just enjoying each other's company. "I'm sorry..." Takamina said and hugged Yuihan. *W-wait!! Takamina-san is hugging me...is this a dream?? B-but I can feel Takamina-san warmth...* Yuihan thought. "I...I won't give up on you even though you choose Atsuko-san". Yuihan said boldly. *She just don't give up eh? (Laughs) Well, that's my junior...* Takamina thought and smiled at Yuihan. "You won't give up"? Takamina asked. "Yes. Until you see that I'm better than Atsuko-san...I won't give up. Even though I can't beat Atsuko-san in dancing or singing, I will win over you"! Yuihan said and fist pump. Takamina laughed at Yuihan's cute actions. "Well, it's about time we go back to the others...shall we"? Takamina said and stood up. "Hai~~" Yuihan said and was about to stand when Takamina reach out for her hand. "Let's go". Takamina said and pulled Yuihan up.



                    "Hey look! Takamina and Yuihan are back! With Yuihan clinging on–" Before Yuko could finish her sentence, Mariko covered her mouth. "I'm back..." Takamina said when she saw everyone. "Ah...welcome back Takamina~~" Mariko said while covering Yuko's mouth at the same time. "Erm...why is Acchan looking extremely angry for some reason"? Takamina asked.
(Writer's note: Jealous Acchan now?)
"Oh shoot..." Mariko said and glared at Yuko for shouting so loud when Takamina arrived. "Hahaha...my bad"? Yuko laughed nervously. "Ne Minami? Why is Yuihan clinging on you"? Acchan asked while giving out an extremely dangerous aura. "I'm just clinging onto Takamina-san's hand that's all. Atsuko-san". Yuihan said. Acchan just snatched Takamina away from Yuihan and glared at Yuihan. Yuihan did the same and snatched Takamina away from Acchan. Takamina asked Mariko to quickly stop them before things get worse than it already has. Everyone smiled at the scene before them.



The next day.....

                    When Takamina and Acchan entered the practice room, Yuihan was the only one in the room. "Oh...I thought we are going to be the first one..." Takamina said. Yuihan heard Takamina's voice and went to greet her. "Ohayou Takamina-san"! Yuihan greeted and glared at Acchan when she saw that Takamina did not come alone. Takamina noticed that and laughed nervously.
(Writer's note: Takamina actually noticed that? LOL.)
Acchan and Yuihan was about to quarrel when Takamina pulled Acchan away. "Calm down Atsuko...I already told Yuihan that I only have you in my heart. You are my one and only...and that I only see her as my junior and my friend". Takamina said. Upon hearing what Takamina just said Acchan blushed. Yuihan cleared her throat and looked at the couple. "Can I speak to Atsuko-san privately, Takamina-san"? Yuihan asked and smiled at Takamina. Knowing what Yuihan would say, Takamina just smiled back and excused herself from the room.



                    "So..."? Acchan said when Takamina leave the room. "Takamina-san...is really serious about you. I...will give up on Takamina-san...so please take care of Takamina-san. But...if you ever let Takamina-san go...I will take advantage of the chance and win over Takamina-san". Yuihan said and looked at Acchan with a serious face. "Thank you...for giving up on Minami...but I thought you won't give up"? Acchan asked. " I just say I'm giving up cause it won't be nice if I get between your relationship. But...I will take every chance I have to win Takamina-san over". Yuihan said and grinned. "I won't let Minami go. Ever. Even after I die". Acchan said and smiled. Unknown to them, Takamina was outside and she heard everything that they have said. Takamina smiled knowing that both of them made things clear between them. Suddenly, Yuko popped out of nowhere and scared the hell out of Takamina. "YO!!! TAKAMIDGET"!!! Yuko shouted at the top of her voice. "DON'T SCARE ME YOU IDIOT"!!! Takamina shouted and smack Yuko on the head. Acchan and Yuihan quickly went to see what's with all the commotion as Yuko and Takamina voice could be heard from the room. "Acchan! Your midget hit me again"! Yuko complained to Acchan. "Minami~~ Don't hit Yuko so much~~" Acchan said and lightly hit Takamina on the shoulder. "I'm sorry". Takamina said and pout. *Minami is so cute~~* Acchan thought and hugged Takamina. *I can totally die happy~~* Takamina thought and mentally fist pump. Mariko walked over and cleared her throat to get everyone's attention. "Lessons will start soon~~Let go in". Mariko said. Takamina took a step away from Acchan and asked everyone to go in and get ready. "And Miichan. Do your stretches or you will will complain about the body ache later". Takamina said and pointed at Miichan. Miichan just groan and hugged Acchan which made Takamina stare in annoyance. Miichan saw and quickly went into the practice room. Everyone laughed at the scene and went in to the practice room.



10mins before lessons....

                    Togasaki came in to announced that they will have a handshake event for their latest single, So long! Everyone was excited and whispered to each other about the news. "I'm so excited~~ Mayu, who do you think you will partner for the handshake event"? Yukirin asked and turned to Mayu. But Mayu did not hear Yukrin and just stare at the floor. "Mayu"? Yukirin called. "Huh? Oh...sorry...I didn't hear you..." Mayu said and apologized. "Are you okay"? Yukirin asked worriedly. "Y-yeah...just thinking about something that's all". Mayu said and smiled a little.
(Writer's note: Looks like something is on Mayu's mind...)

To be continued.


Writer: Thanks for reading~~ LOL. Don't worry...I'm not here to end the story XD I have an announcement to make.


This is the end for Jealously and Love arc~~
Next arc: Jealously and Love - Mayu's decision!

Mayu: Please look forward to it!

Writer: Where did you come from?

Mayu: The next arc is about me and Yukirin. So of course I'm advertising.

Writer: It will not only be full of Mayuki...LOL. There will be Atsumina, Kojiyuu and maybe Wmatsui?

Everyone: Please look forward to it!

Writer: Stop doing that!

Yuihan: I will win over Takamina-san!

Acchan: And minami is mine~~

Takamina: Please make my life easier...

Writer: Okay? Right...please look forward to it! And thanks for reading^^ Please continue to read~~ Credits to Correne for choosing So long! for this fic's single XD Thanks pal☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: leEwẬy on April 28, 2013, 08:14:37 AM
Mayu was jealous when Yuki buy hug Yuihan :hehehe:
Poor Yuihan, hope she'll have someone beside her :on speedy:
YuiAtsumina :on lol:
What Mayu was thinking in her mind? :dunno:
Yay, next chapter is focused on Mayuki, right :on woohoo:
Can't wait to see it :tantrum:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: -gibson-mayulover on April 28, 2013, 08:37:45 AM
So mayuki is the next arc
Kyaaa! Can't wait for it
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on April 28, 2013, 09:19:45 AM
Ah.. Takamina and Atsuko are so cute together...

Poor Poor Yui... being rejected... She knew from the start that she didn't have a chance.... But....

Eh... Yui didn't want to give up... and Takamina can't say anything about it...

Ah... Atsuko and Yui are still fighting over Takamina even if Takamina and Atsuko are officially together...

Eh... Yui changed her mind again... now she is going to back off...

But if ever Takamina become available in the future... she is going to snatch Takamina from Atsuko...

I guess it was a fair warning...

Eh... What's wrong with Mayu? What is she think about?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: gek geki on April 28, 2013, 10:29:14 AM
Mayuki~
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: DC2805 on April 28, 2013, 11:03:35 AM
Yuihan is so persistent and never give up! Good in the sense that Acchan will forever on high alert and watch over her midget!  :peace:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: mayuki_daisuki on April 28, 2013, 11:20:22 AM
I WANT MORE!!  :heart: :yep:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: kurumi on April 28, 2013, 06:08:25 PM
Hahaha! I just found this story and it is too cute. So many voices (including the author's) makes it really lively! :deco:
Looking forward to your next update :)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: mae on April 28, 2013, 11:05:10 PM
Thank you for update
Please update soon :)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Railgun96 on May 03, 2013, 12:08:21 AM
This fic is so cute!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Update soon!
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: Dieyg48 on May 27, 2013, 10:43:22 AM
Hehhhh~My god...Yui you never give up aren't you!! But thats make it even more lively!!!
 :yep: :lol: XD :inlove: :thumbsup

~Hooo!! I feel sad for Yui but...AtsuMina FOREVER!!! XD <----Can't help it  :sweatdrop: heheh
 :P2 XD :heart: :wub: :twothumbs

~Woouhuuu!! What is Mayu have on her mind!? Curious about it!!
 :twisted: :inlove: :banghead: :cathappy:

~Anyway!!Please update soon kay'!!i'll be waiting for it!!
 :thumbsup :wub: :twothumbs :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: IntanLakz on May 29, 2013, 08:44:16 AM
Finally together  (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/admire2-onion-head-emoticon.gif?1292862489)

but poor Yui (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/crying1-onion-head-emoticon.gif?1292862497)

please update soon (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/wow1-onion-head-emoticon.gif?1292862527)
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 09:18:30 AM
Kanata48-san

Update please....

Your story is one of my fav.

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love [Chapter 6 - 28/4/2013] (Atsumina,Kojiyuu and Mayuki)
Post by: deviantone on June 15, 2013, 06:01:31 PM
ATSUMINA HAS FINALLY HAPPENED!!  :mon inluv:. Great chapter! I really love this story! Can't wait for you next update  :mon dance:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: Kanata48 on July 02, 2013, 12:52:47 PM
A/N: Long time no see guys~~ XD I manage to get some motivation while reading your comments :lol: I'm sorry if it doesn't meets your expectations :cry:


Chapter 1


"Handshake event..." Mayu thought and looked at the notice board which was in the dance studio. "Hey...Mayu?" Yukirin called out as she approaches Mayu.


Mayu did not answer and continue to stare at the list of names for the handshake event that Togasaki put up. "Mayu? Watanabe-san? Cyborg? Mayuyu?" Yurkirin tried calling Mayu but Mayu just spaced out and continue to be in deep thought. *I guess I have no choice...* Yukirin thought and took a quick look around. When no one was looking, Yukirin quickly gave Mayu a quick kiss surprising the other girl.


"Y- Yukirin!" Mayu used her hands to cover her mouth. "That took you long enough to notice me..." Yukirin said and pout making the other girl grin.


"Yukirin is so cute when you make that face~~ As expected from AKB reaction queen~~" Mayu said and move closer to Yukirin's face. "M-mayu?" Yukirin said while backing off a little. "Hmm? Why are you backing off?" Mayu asked.


"Everyone is watching us now..." Yukirin said and blushed a little. "Huh?" Mayu turned around and saw that every member present in the room looking at them.


"Making a move now little cyborg?" Yuko asked and step up towards the couple. "I'm not little!!" Mayu said and faced Yuko. Yuko signalled for Mayu to step out for a moment. Mayu nodded and went out of the dance studio with Yuko.


Both of them went to get a drink at a vending machine that was located on the 5th floor which had a nice view to look at. They head out to the rooftop to get some air.


Yuko took a sip of her juice before asking Mayu a question which had been bothering her. "Say... Do you have something on your mind?" Mayu did not answer and continue looking at the scenery with a can coffee in her hand.


*sigh... She just won't tell me what's on her mind...* Yuko thought while looking at Mayu. "I'm trying to decide... If I should..." Mayu said while having a sad look on her face. "Trying to decide what?" Yuko asked nervously.


"I think I want to—" Mayu was cut off by a sports car that was passing by. But Yuko was able to hear what Mayu said despite the noise of the engine passing by.


Yuko's eyes widen as she heard what Mayu had just said. "A-are you sure about that? You can't turn back after that..." Yuko said as a sad expression was shown clearly on her face.


"Um... I'm not so sure about this... I'm still deciding on it though... So don't worry about me so much Yuko..." Mayu said as she slowly walked back to the exit.


"Mayu." Yuko called out before Mayu walk out. Mayu stopped in her tracks but did not turn back to face Yuko. "I will support you no matter what you choose... Because that's your choice." Yuko said as she tried to hold back her tears.


"Arigatou..." Was what all Mayu manage to say before running out with tears rolling down her cheeks.


*Please decide carefully Mayu... Your fans... Are always supporting you no matter what... So please have the courage to decide...." Yuko thought as her tears rolled down on her cheeks while smiling.


To be continued.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: mo-chan on July 02, 2013, 04:36:45 PM
graduate!?  :stoned:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: Terragen on July 02, 2013, 05:18:57 PM
Graduate...

What else?

At first i though its about her and yuki.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: rochilu on July 02, 2013, 11:32:20 PM
she want to graduate? why she will do that ._.
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: leEwẬy on July 03, 2013, 08:53:10 AM
What the!!??!?! :stoned:
Please, don't make Mayu graduate :pleeease:
Kinda happy with a little of Mayuki sweet moment :luvluv1:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: cisda83 on July 03, 2013, 08:58:56 AM
Eh... Graduate....

What's happening next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: gek geki on July 07, 2013, 09:02:22 AM
OMO!! GRADUATED??? NO!!! YOU HAVE YUKI ON YOUR SID EWHY WANT LEAVE HER
Title: Re: Jealousy and Love - 2nd arc: Mayu's Decision! [Chapter 1 - 2/7/2013]
Post by: Hatakeru on August 19, 2013, 01:15:55 PM
Where's the update Kanata-chan? I'm still waiting for it...  :cry:

By the way, really love this story so much!  :on woohoo:

Please update soon!  :twothumbs :twothumbs