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Title: Game Cheats (Part 2 SP) YEAAAAAH!
Post by: Alexander on April 24, 2011, 11:57:06 AM
One shot

What is love? Takaachan, Kojiyuu, and TakaHaru

They know that it is not right but what can they do?

They’re in love with each other. They can’t stop their feelings. Love doesn’t choose who you are going to love. She doesn’t know what to do if she loses
her she’s her life now. She loves her so much. She doesn’t care anymore if someone found out about them.

They know that it is inhuman that they’re cheating with their girlfriends but can they do?

--

The smaller girl wriggles at the embrace of the taller girl that made the taller girl woke up from her slumber.

“Minami what are you doing?” Takamina looked at the girl that’s embracing her.

“I’m just making myself comfortable Haruna” the girl named Haruna sighed

“Minami we did it again. We made love again. I want them to know that I’m in love with you. I can’t do this anymore. I can’t hide it anymore. I don’t want Atsuko clinging at you. I don’t want her kissing your lips you’re mine Minami. You’re mine only” a tear slipping on Haruna’s eyes

“Haruna”  Minami cupped Haruna’s face and wiped her tears

“Haru we’re going to say it okay so please stop crying” Minami pecked Haruna’s lips and tried comforting her. She’s going to do anything just for her.

She doesn’t know if it’s going to be okay after they confessed about their relationship but she doesn’t care anymore. It’s going to be a long and heart breaking day tomorrow.

--

They were in theatre right now. They just finished practicing for the performance next week. Takamina sighed for the nth time it’s hard for her to say it to Acchan she once loved Acchan and cheating on her and breaking her heart is already too much but she’s going to do it because it’s for Haruna.

She thought that this is the best. Everything will be okay after this.

Acchan not knowing anything happily walk at Takamina’s direction and gave her a water bottle. Takamina just seeing Acchan’s happy face made it harder for her to say it.

“Thank you Atsuko” Acchan hearing her name not her nick name was shocked. Something is going on she thought. Takamina never called her Atsuko she just called her that if they were in an argument. Did she do something?

“Is there something wrong Takamina?” Acchan sit beside Takamina and hold her hand. Her voice is filled with sincerity and love.

Takamina just kept quiet and after debating with her conscience she spoke

“Do you have something to do later Acchan?” she manage to show a big fake smile at Acchan

“Nope!” Acchan said in a high tone voice and let out a giggle and kissed Takamina at the cheeks. Nothing is wrong she thought. She knows that Takamina loves her so much.

“Can you stay here after the practice?” Takamina looked at Acchan with pleading eyes

“Sure” Acchan smiled Takamina and hugged her

“I love you so much Takamina” Takamina was shocked it’s getting harder and harder.

“I know” she just stayed at the embrace and sighed. Feeling someone is staring at her she looked up and saw Haruna looking at her with tearful eyes.

Yuko is sitting beside her and playing with her hands. Yuko is like her sister hurting her is like hurting herself. What is she going to do now? She’s going to hurt her best friend and sister at the same time. She saw that Yuko is so happy just being with Haruna her left eye twitch it’s like God is testing her. It’s like God is asking her if she’s going to choose friendship or love. Her love life is like a dorama.

“Let go of her” Haruna mouthed at Takamina

Takamina obliged and let go of Acchan. Acchan looked at Takamina with questioning eyes.

“Are you hungry? Do you want me to buy you a sandwich?” Takamina asked she wants to be alone and think

“Okay I want a tuna sandwich” Takamina stoop up pats Acchan’s head

“Okay boss I’ll get you a tuna sandwich” Takamina did a salute. Acchan laughed at Takamina’s silliness

Takamina walked at the door and looked at Haruna and Yuko they were talking and they look happy. Takamina not knowing that someone is observing
her. The person stood up and followed Takamina.

“What are you buying?” the person asked

“Jesus Christ! Miichan you scared me!” Takamina patted her chest

“I’m buying a tuna sandwich for Atsuko” They were in a nearby convenient store.

“Oh okay” Miichan just observed Takamina and said nothing

“Do you want something? “ Miichan shook her head. She paid the sandwich and say her thanks at the guy who is spazzing at the two of them.

“Okay let’s go now I think boss is hungry” Takamina laugh. From Miichan’s point of view it’s a forced laughed and if you’re a passer by you’ll think it’s
just a laugh nothing special.

“You love her so much that you’re willing to sacrifice everything”

“Of course! I love Atsuko so much” she smiled at Miichan and patted her shoulders

“I love her so much” there’s a glint of sadness in her voice

She loves Haruna so much that she’s willing to do and sacrifice everything for her.

She looked at the floor while walking

“I’m not talking about Atsuko” the light atmosphere began to turn in a serious one

“What are you talking about Miichan?” they were just few blocks away from the theatre

They stopped walking and looked at each other

“I know about you and Haruna” Takamina looked at Miichan like it’s the end of the world

“Me and Haruna? What are you talking about Miichan!” Takamina laugh really loud while clapping her hands

“Stop it Minami” She look at Takamina with serious eyes

“Stop acting Minami” Takamina was about to say something when Miichan stopped her with her hand

“Let me talk first. I know it from the beginning about you and Haruna. The way you two look at each other, the way you hugged each other, and the way you treat each other. It’s different from before I know what’s happening the three of us we’ve been friends for I don’t know how many years. Why didn’t you say it to me? I feel so betrayed Takamina. I know if something is going on. If you’re going to say it to both of them please say it in a nice way. I know that there’s no nice way when you’re going to break up with someone but Takamina please make it today Acchan’s or even Yuko’s special day. You know what I mean before you break up with her make her happy. I’m friends with the four of you. I don’t want something bad will happen. I’m going now” After that Miichan left Takamina dumfounded. She doesn’t know what she’s feeling right now. Her feelings are mixed up. She just want hide from everyone.

She goes back at the convenient store and bought sandwiches and sodas for everyone.

“Here Acchan” she hand Acchan a soda and a tuna sandwich

“You bought for everyone?”

“Yup and I already gave it to them but I didn’t gave Haruna and Yuko’s share let’s go there”

“Aww. My girlfriend is so sweet! Isn’t she?” she asked Mayuyu

“Yes” Acchan giggled and intertwined there hands

“Yuko! Haruna!” Yuko waved at Acchan. Haruna just looked at the two girls who are holding hands. She’s jealous right now it’s clear from her facial
expression.

“Here”

“Ooh! Tuna sandwich! Thanks Takamina! You’re the best!” she gave Takamina two thumbs up

“Here” Takamina lovingly smiled at Haruna

“Thank you” Haruna stood up and kissed Takamina’s lips

“Hey!” Yuko and Acchan shouted in unison

“What’s with the kiss Haruna?!” Acchan hug Takamina and glared at Haruna

“Nothing I’m just thanking her” Haruna said flatly

Acchan's mouth is slightly agape. Haruna is not like this. Yuko just looked at them feeling her heart ache a bit.

“Thanking her?! Are you crazy?! You kissed her!” she pointed an accusing finger at Haruna

“It’s just a kissed Atsuko don’t shout at Haruna!” Takamina freed herself from the hug

It’s the first time that Takamina shouted at someone’s face. It’s the first time that she shouted at Acchan. The theatre went quiet and everyone stopped
eating.

‘I guess my speech didn’t reach Takamina’s heart after all’ Miichan thought

“You’re defending her Takamina?! For goodness sake! I’m your girlfriend! I’m the one you must defend!” Acchan shouted. Any second now she’s going
to cry

Haruna intertwined their hands and said

“She’s my girlfriend! And she’s mine! I can do whatever I want!”

The girls looked at Haruna. The room went deadly quiet it’s like the time stopped no one even dare to spoke. Yuko started sobbing. Acchan just looked
at the two of them a tear slipping her eyes.

“We’re over Maeda I don’t love you anymore” Takamina said flatly. It’s like she’s another person.

“It’s same for you Oshima” Yuko ran away while Acchan just stood there not minding that tears are flowing from her eyes.

“Is this a joke?” Acchan mumbled

She looked at the floor and looked at Takamina.

“You said that you love me” she mumbled again. She walked beside Takamina and tried to entwined Haruna and Takamina’s hands.

Haruna hold Takamina’s hands tightly enough to break her bones

“You’re the worst person ever!” she shouted at Takamina

Like Yuko she ran away too.

They said it. They’re free now. Everyone knows about it.

Miichan stood up and patted Takamina’s shoulder

“That didn’t went well”

Love is cruel. Love is scary sometimes it can destroy a friendship and a relationship at the same time when it wanted to. Love is the most powerful
feeling the human being can feel.

But what is the true definition of love anyway?


:wigglypanda:

I'm bored so I wrote this. I saw FoF requested at the fanfic discussion thread that she wants a TakaHaru and I don't know if she meant by Takamina x Haruna if it’s not right pairing just say it to me. I wish you enjoyed reading.

Request anyone? I don't have anything to do.
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: TakahashiJ on April 24, 2011, 01:03:06 PM
The first time I'm reading this. D: takamina is such a meanie in here. Hmmms, I would still go for more takaacchan and kojiyuu. But this fanfic seems good too :) . Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: eSsIe21 on April 24, 2011, 02:06:48 PM
what?.... :gyaaah:, takamina left acchan!!! :stoned:

why!!!!...., bring back my takacchan!!! :pleeease: :on cloudeye:..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......



.yuko be strong!!!!!! :tantrum:
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 24, 2011, 02:49:52 PM
I'm quickly liking TakaHaru, but the way they got together and what they did to Acchan and Yuko was breaking my TakAcchan and KojiYuu heart  :fainted:
Though I like how Haruna was more forward on her action and she expressed her dislikes about TakAcchan closeness.
Ah, Miichan the all-knowing awesome friend  8)
But TakaHaru why so heartless? Especially Takamina  :bleed eyes:
Acchan and Yuko should just get together  :P
But love really is a mysterious force, it can bring good or bad.
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: bou-j525 on April 24, 2011, 05:57:02 PM
To be honest.... I would now be a TakaHaru fan if Takamina hadn't been so harsh with Acchan  :nervous
But due to the fact that she broke up with her this way (OMG AND POOR YUKO)... I'm disliking TakaHaru XD
But I really like your fic ^^ I was like really into it, almost screaming at my computer  :nervous
Thank you!!  :theking
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: RenaChii on April 24, 2011, 10:09:20 PM
YUUUKKKOOOO~!!  :pleeease:
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: Tanchan on April 25, 2011, 12:17:18 AM
Argggg...this fic is so cruel to both Acchan and Yuko, especially Acchan seeing how much she loves Takamina. Since TakAcchan is my OPV I feel all the more sorry for Acchan. I would have liked Takaharu in this fic had it just been about them and no breakup scenes. However, I don't deny that this is a good fic.
But please bring back my Atsumina in the next one.
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: mangobanana15 on April 25, 2011, 12:35:10 AM
I would've enjoyed this much more if Takamina and Haruna let them down easy

especially since i'm a Takaachan fan and i hate seeing them so sad

Takamina should've taken Miichan's advice at least give them a good time before you leave them

maybe u can write this pairing without the heartbreak  :cry:

Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: FoF on April 25, 2011, 05:12:45 AM
First, thank you for granting my request. Reading your fic actually gave me an idea. So thank you!!!  XD  :bow: :bow:
Second, reading your fic made me want to ship TakaAcchan again for you have made TakaHaru to be insensitive to their friends.
Acchan!!!! Yukooo!!! WHY?!!!! :cry:  :cry: :cry:
Lesson learned here: Always listen to Miichan.  :lol:
All in all, I enjoyed it.  :twothumbs though I swear I almost broke my computer because of TakaHaru's actions.  :smhid
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: Keichan ^_^ on April 25, 2011, 07:56:02 AM
-points at FoFchan-   :( such an evil request it ended up being!!!! Argh it was horrible! Poor acchan was so cute and sensitive... Then BAM!!!! It was heartbreaking!!!! Argh now this constant fear will occur if acchan and Yuko leave akb suddenly!!! Anywho it was still a wellwritten, yet depressing, fic!  :twothumbs
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: kahem on April 25, 2011, 07:59:52 AM
WOW I like it!!!!!!!!! But like the others I think Takaharu were too harsh T_T
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: crazywota on April 25, 2011, 09:26:49 AM
Yukoooooooo and acchaaaaaan  :on speedy:

I ship Takaboy x Haruna but.. Takamina, y u do that to acchan?  :banghead: Haruna, y u do that to korisu?  :angry:

anyways, i really like it  :thumbsup :thumbsup
Title: Re: What is love? (Takaacchan, Kojiyuu, and Takaharu)
Post by: Alexander on April 25, 2011, 12:02:46 PM
Oneshot

Takamina’s crazy and funny story (TakaTomo and Takaacchan) requested by Tejinashi

Takahashi Minami always thought having two persons fighting over you is cool because it means that you’re popular. She once watched an English movie about it, the girls fighting over a one guy. But now that she’s the guy in the story and there’s two persons fighting over her it’s pretty hard and irritating. The girls fighting over her are named Maeda Atsuko and Itano Tomomi. Acchan became clingy when Mendol finished filming and as for Tomochin she got clingy when she once becomes her leading lady at Danso in AKBingo. One person being clingy is okay but two persons at the same time she feels like she’s going to die. She heard a song about two persons is better than one person but for her heck no! Not cool not cool at all. Everything turned upside down her peaceful life is now gone. But after months she had gotten used to it, the girls fighting over her, and wanting her attention she’s okay with it for now.

I’ll tell you the scenes or moments that I remember when the two of them fights over Takamina. Let’s begin her story. Takamina’s crazy funny story

Scene #1

Miichan kissed Takamina on the lips because they played truth or dare and Miichan was asked to kissed Takamina and because that the two them I’m talking about Acchan and Tomochin teamed up and blackmailed Miichan. After the blackmailing incident Miichan didn’t talk to Takamina for 2 straight months, at that time Takamina just wants to shout at Acchan and Tomochin in the face.

Scene #2

Do you remember the scene in Heavy rotation MV? Where Acchan and Tomochin kissed Takamina? Before that happened Acchan and Tomochin are arguing who is going to kiss Takamina at the PV. I know that you guys already know that they both kissed Takamina and they both kissed each other too which was weird for Takamina. Why would they kiss each other if they despise each other?

Scene #3

This is still about the Heavy rotation PV. I think it’s the making. Acchan kissed Takamina on the lips. Tomochin saw that after the filming. When there’s no camera we all know what happened they argue again. They fight over Takamina. Scream at each other’s faces.

Scene #4

Do I need to explain it? This picture says it all! Poor Takamina

(http://i48.tinypic.com/o5vvc6.jpg)

Scene #5

Once upon a time a Prince named Takahashi Minami got really sick. He has a two maids taking care of him. Their names are Maeda Atsuko and Itano Tomomi. He was so sick that he can’t even blink his eyes. The two maids argue all day long and because of that the Prince health got worse. Thanks for his almighty sister her name is Mariko. She kicked the two maids literarily kicked them out at palace. Okay enough with the story telling. Takamina got really sick she had a high fever and Acchan and Tomochin volunteer to take care of her. They just argue all day long and forgot to take care of Takamina. Mariko being herself checked if Takamina is okay and the two if their doing good taking care of her. When she checked it the two girls are just arguing and Takamina is already pale. She kicked them out like what I said earlier she literarily kicked them out.

Scene #6

This picture is the evidence.

(http://picroda.jphip.com/akb48/jphip62966.jpg)

The two took a picture and Acchan saw that she kissed Takamina passionately in front of Tomochin that made Tomochin become incredible hulk and kissed Takamina too aggressively.

Scene #7

Hanako visited Takamina at the theatre the two of them are really close because of Mendol. Acchan and Tomochin didn’t even greet Hanako. They were so disrespectful that made Hanako wonder if she did something wrong to them.

“I think they don’t like me. Did I do something wrong?” she asked Takamina. It’s her first time going to the theatre and first time meeting them.

“No you didn’t they’re just like that. They’re so childish. Don’t mind them” Takamina sighed feeling a bit embarrassed in front of her friend.

Scene #8

Acchan asked Takamina to go shopping with her but Tomochin asked her too to go shopping with her. She didn’t know what to do. They did a rock, paper, and scissors game and Acchan won. Takamina saw that Tomochin was not happy so she said to both of them that why don’t they go shopping three of them together. Acchan first didn’t agree but Takamina said that she will give Acchan a kiss if she agreed so finally Acchan agreed. They go shopping and in the end of the day Takamina was their like Personal assistant. She did all the carrying of their shopping bags. It feels like she has two girlfriends.

Scene #9

They were like playing tug of war and Takamina was the rope.

“She’s mine!”

“No she’s mine!”

“Mine!”

“Mine!”

‘Mine’ was the only word Takamina was hearing. She’s already dizzy with all those tugging

“STOP!” someone shouted she don’t know who is it but she doesn’t care anymore and the last thing she remember was someone shouting her name and
everything went black.

Scene #10

They did a mini celebration for their successful release of their single. Foods and beers are there too. Takamina can’t tolerate alcohol so she just drank cola. The two girls were at her side. They were having a competition that can drink so many beers and can still talk and think straight. The result was no one win both Acchan and Tomochin were drunk. Acchan were resting her head on the table and she’s drooling Takamina was relieved that Acchan didn’t bother her and she looks cute too when she’s not bothering her. But the problem is Tomochin she was talking sexually with Yuko and what she meant is she was talking what she’s going to do with Takamina later you know what I mean. Tomochin looked at Takamina with lustful eyes. Takamina’s hairs stand up and it’s already giving her goose bumps.

“You’re only mine get it?” Tomochin said in a seductive way while licking her lips

“Wha-What are you saying?!” that made Takamina stutter.

Tomochin stood up and sat at Takamina’s lap. She hugged Takamina and said it again to her ear and blows some air to it. She feels light headed she don’t know
what to do anymore. Tomochin licked Takamina’s left ear.

“I loooooooove yoooooou~” she said seductively and nibble Takamina’s left ear

Tomochin is giving her goose bumps.

“T-Tomo s-stop i-it” even though she doesn’t want Tomochin to stop but it’s not right. Not right at all.

“Stooohp whaaaaat?” Tomochin innocently asked. She hugged Takamina in a loose hug.

“You’re ssssho cute Takaminaaaah~”  Tomochin’s lips were just 5 centimetres away when she passed out.

A cold sweat trickling down Takamina’s face

“That was close”

Scene #11

It was getting out of hand. It’s already enough. She was fine with it. Tomochin and Acchan wanting her attention the two of them arguing but it was getting out hand when the two of them started punching and scratching each other. It was now or never Takamina thought. She lectured both of them. After those lecturing the both of them became mature but not so mature. They still argue.

PRESENT

She was having a dream about the things that happened to her when those two girls are fighting.  Even in her dreams they’re hunting her. It was only 4:00 in the morning and practice starts at 6:00. She still has time to waste.

They just finished practicing the other girls already left. Tomochin, Acchan, Miichan, Haruna, Yuko, Mariko, Sasshi, Mayuyu, Sae, Sayaka, and Takamina were the only left. They were just sitting there.

“Do you like me?” Tomochin asked out of the blue

“Yeah I like you” Takamina answered

“What about me Takamina?” asked Acchan

“I like you too Acchan”

“You like all of us!” Tomochin said

“Can you please choose between me and Acchan?” choosing between them is pretty hard

“Me or Tomochin?”

“Or?”

“Takamina!”

“You meanie!” they both pouted

It was hunting her. It was already 1:00 in the morning and she can’t sleep. How is she going to face them tomorrow? What’s her answer?

“Can you please choose between me and Acchan?” It was hunting her to the point that she kept hearing it.

She loves both of them. She just found it out few days ago. She can’t live without Acchan and Tomochin. Even though those two are irritating sometimes, annoying
sometimes, childish all the time, argues all the time, and causes her problem all the time. She loves both of them. She’s so confused right now. Her life is pretty crazy and funny.

But now that it came to an end the question is who is she going to choose?

-----

I hope you like it Tejinashi  :)
Hehehe. I just made up those scenes.
Thank you for the comments. I’m really happy that you like it. You guys are making me blush.  :shy1:

‘What is love?’ is pretty cruel. I’m thinking of writing a TakaAcchan without heartbreaking scenes and Kojiyuu too.

Anyone can help me think of a story for TakaAcchan? Just suggest a plot.

Mariko x Miichan story is on progress I really don’t have anything to do so I write oneshots right now.

I want to write a Miichan x Takamina story too lol.

Again thank you for the comments! I’m really happy that you like it. I thought that you won’t like it because for me I’m not really a good author. THANK YOU SO MUCH! i LOVE YOU ALL! I'M SERIOUS.
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: Tejinashi on April 25, 2011, 12:22:53 PM
^ love it, thanks you  XD, but I really didn't think that you will include my name   :nervous, now I have to hide in case someone want to murder me  :nervous
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 25, 2011, 02:07:02 PM
Wow you're a very productive author  :thumbsup
Man, I love this one, too funny!
Poor Takamina though, one might think it's cool and all that to have two people fighting over you but when you're trapped in that situation it might just be the exact opposite.
I couldn't help but think if you add a TakaHaru then Takamina would die  :lol:
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“Or?”
:grin:  good choice
Can't Takamina not choose? Can's she have both as girlfriends (peacefully) instead? Better yet, all three of them should just love each other so no more fighting!  XD
At this rate, Takamina harem seems possible.... LOL

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Mariko x Miichan story is on progress I really don’t have anything to do so I write oneshots right now.
What do you mean you don't have anything to do? What about your other ongoing fanfics?  :P
Anyway MarikoxMiichan sounds fun.

As for TakAcchan plot, actually I've been thinking about what if all the TakaHaru that's been going on is actually their plan to get Acchan and Yuko jealous for them. Something like:

"You know Takamina, I think it's time we teach those flirts a lesson," -Haruna
"What do you mean?" -Takamina
"Let's become wifes!" -Haruna
"Eh??!"-Takamina
So there goes the start of all TakaHaru moments...

Well, maybe not like that...but I hope you get what I mean? And you get both TakAcchan and KojiYuu that way. You don't have to write it like that of course, I'm just trying to help. Do it your way, good luck author-san!  :)

ps. that bunny at the bottom makes me laugh
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: Alexander on April 25, 2011, 07:24:30 PM
pretend_2besome1: I find you interesting hahaha. That sounded creepy but I really find you interesting. You always comment on my fanfics. I'm flattered ROLF I liek you nao. Please don't mind me  XD me too! That is one sexy I mean funny bunny  XD

Tejanishi: ASAGFADGJAAKSGASLGKDSA! You like it! I love you! Bro! Let’s partay!  :panic:

I'm going to reply to all of you lol because I'm bored

TakahashiJ: Yes I made Takamina a meanie there  :twisted:. I want something new and I want to spice things up because she's always the nice girl :D
eSsIe21: Yes you read it right. Takamina left Acchan. I'll bring back TakaAcchan someday!  :D
bou-j525: I made you dislike TakaHaru  :cry: I'm a bad person. Thank you for liking it and reading it. I like your fanfic but I'm too lazy to comment and I don't know what to say. I'm a bad commenter.
RenaChii: YUKOOOOOO~  :cry: she's still crying. It's my fault. I'm sorry
Tanchan: I am going to bring back Atsumina OH YEAH!  :panic: But it's a different one shot and I'm not going to put break up scenes just for you.
mangobanana15: AFDAGKGSFGKA  :shocked I'm going to write now a HAPPY TakaAcchan FANFIC!!
FoF: You're welcome. Cool I gave you an idea! Does that mean that you're going to write another fanfic?  :shocked: I'm going to wait for that.
Keichan ^_^: lol don't blame FoF. It's my fault that's why it's a depressing fic. Thank you so much!  :D
kahem: Yes I made them harsh because I want something new. Thank you so much!  :D
crazywota: Yukoooo and Acchaaaan are still crying they're here right now. Thank you so much!  :D

I'm a genie in a bottle~ Tell me your wish~ I'm your personal genie just for now. Request?
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: khryz0421 on April 26, 2011, 09:17:48 AM
whaha......=)) i really like your post alexander....I like TakaTomo and Takaacchan  now................

i hope you can made a fanfic of takaacchan.......=) just two of them..
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: mangobanana15 on April 26, 2011, 09:52:51 AM
I totally love it!!  :D I am a huge fan of Takaachan and i also really like Takatomo

They are so crazy for Takamina its so hilarious they should just both date Takamina  :lol:

Glad to see this one so much happier then the last one :yep:

A Takamii one shot sounds really interesting if you wrote one it would be my first reading bout this pair

Update soon!
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: kahem on April 26, 2011, 12:54:03 PM
Hahahaha so funny!!! It would be great if Takamina choose both of them but she can't do that can't she.^^
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on April 26, 2011, 03:25:13 PM
Interesting? Thanks, that's new. Usually people find me crazy  :lol:
I happen to like your fics therefore I commented  :)

Quote
I'm a genie in a bottle~ Tell me your wish~ I'm your personal genie just for now. Request?
:huhuh  somehow I keep hearing SNSD's Tell Me Your Wish when I read this
Hmm request...maybe update your AKB baby fic one? Or is this strictly one-shot request? If it is then I'll just wait for the outcome of the one-shots you plan on making.
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: khryz0421 on April 26, 2011, 06:51:24 PM
can i ask Alexander?? could you make a fanfic about mariko-sama??

pls... pls.... pls...
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: Alexander on April 26, 2011, 07:37:44 PM
khryz0421: I wrote a MarikoxMiichan oneshot does that count? It’s on progress but I don’t know when I’m going to post it  :)
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: bungal on April 26, 2011, 08:06:12 PM
I love your one shots, you're certainly a very creative person.  :twothumbs

Ahh TakaTamo that was really cute! I kept remembering Taka's danso, they were a really great pair. There's something about Tomochin's diva/fashionista aura that matches well with Taka's earnest/dorky attitude.  :inlove:

The picture where Tomochin was feeding Taka, the look on Kojiharu face, would that count as further TakaHaru evidence? Or is Haruna just spacing out. You can never really tell with the lovable marshmallow space cadet.  :lol:

For requests: I have a really soft spot for Taka X Erepyon, It all started when I watched the PV and the making of Boku no Taiyou. I'm oddly fascinated by the Taka X Yuko pairing, its almost like its twincest.  XD

I second the request for MiichanXMariko-sama and TakaMiii. 

Keep it up, your fics are always refreshing and a lot of fun to read!  :)
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: aoi_sora on April 27, 2011, 09:50:40 AM
at first i thought that TakaHaru was Takajo and Harugon!!! HAHAHAHA! stupid me!
but this TakaHaru make Acchan and Yuko cry... so sad!!! Yuko didn't say anything... she just cry and run away.. my poor Yuko!!!
TakaHaru Y so mean!!!! :angry:
nice story!!!

TakaTomoAcchan story is so funny!!!  :cow:
TakaTomo is looking good in that kissing photo!!!  :wub:

...Or is Haruna just spacing out.
LOL i think she is!  :rofl:

how about Taka and Mariko-sama! hehehe!
thanks for the stories!!!
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: khryz0421 on April 27, 2011, 09:28:18 PM
Alexander-san it is okay even it's marikoxmiichan... i just want to read some fanfic about mariko...=)


and pls.... post it!! plss.... plss.... plss.....T_T
Title: Re: Takamina's crazy and funny story (TakaAcchan and TakaTomo)
Post by: Alexander on May 02, 2011, 05:07:14 PM
Cupid’s mission (Mariko x Miichan)

Because of her I and Acchan became friends again. After waiting for 9 months she finally forgave me from what I did to her. I and Haruna are doing well too and as for Yuko she’s still not talking to us. There’s still sadness in her eyes. Anyway, Miichan she helped me a lot and now I’m going to help her. She’s a love expert and she can see if you’re in love of that person but her love life is just plain as a white painted wall. She’s a naive person. I need to help her. I want to be the love expert now. I want my best friend to be happy. It’s time for me to do something. It’s time for Cupid’s mission.

After observing her and her surroundings if someone secretly looking at her, I found out that Mariko likes Miichan. She looks at her secretly and checks her from time to time. Whenever someone approach or get lovey dovey with Miichan she get pissed off. But you can feel the love in the air. I need to break the shell. I need Mariko make a move!

“What are you thinking?” I heard a voice beside me. It can’t be Haruna because she’s sleeping at my lap.

“I’m thinking of Ha-Haruna?” Good one Takamina! Nice save you even stuttered!

“Okay” she gave me a toothy smile

“Have you ever fallen in love Miichan?” she gave me a confuse look and she shrugged

“I don’t know. I never thought of it” I look at her like she had gone crazy. She never fallen in love?!

“Not even in your childhood days?!” Haruna made a sound

“Huh?!” I whispered at Miichan I don’t want to wake up my baby.

“Yes not even in my childhood days Minami” she smiled at me again

“But b-but Miichan! That’s crazy! You’re abnormal don’t you think?” Miichan laughed. Did I say something funny?

“I don’t need love life in my life now Takamina. I’m okay seeing AKB48 happy”

“You don’t want a partner?” If she said yes I’m doomed

“Yes” I’m really doomed! What about my mission? My Cupid’s mission!

Acchan called her she left me alone with Haruna and my thoughts. I think I needed the love expert and the greatest matchmaker. I need Yuko because of her
matchmaking I and Acchan got together but how am I going to make her help me. I guess my Cupid’s mission is not a success but no! Didn’t I say to myself that

I’ll make her happy? I need to do everything! I can do this!

“Why are staring at space Minami and what are you thinking while smiling like a pervert” that broke of my trance

“Nothing baby I’m just thinking of what we’re going to do tonight” my mouth said. It just slipped. I looked at Haruna and she was blushing.

‘Cute’

“Pervert!” she slapped me really hard

‘I take it back not cute at all’

---

“Hey” she just nodded at me. This is depressing really depressing. She’s not talking to me.

The silence it’s killing me!

“I’m sorry” my mouth again I think it has a brain on its own. She looked at me and she smiled. Smiled? Is that the sign of that we’re okay?

Is she just waiting for me to say sorry?

“I miss my twin”

“I miss you too Takamina” she hugged me and cried. I miss you so much Yuko

We were just hugging. Absorbing every moment now that we’re okay

“Yuko”

“Hmmm?”

“Can you help me?”

I explained to her every detailed. And now my true mission begins!

“So we’re going to make Mariko jealous? And that’s all?”

“Yup!” The girls found out that I and Yuko are okay. Everything is fine now and I just need to fulfil my mission.

Mariko, Acchan, and Miichan were sitting at the corner and they were talking.

MISSION: MAKE MARIKO JEALOUS

Yuko approached Miichan and sat on her lap. You can clearly see that Mariko frowned.

“What?” Yuko innocently ask at Mariko. Miichan is fine with it and Mariko is the opposite

Mariko just glared at Yuko now that she’s playing with Miichan’s hand. Intertwining and entwining it.

“What are you doing Yuko?” Miichan chuckled finding amusing the playful Yuko

“Nooothing” Mariko looked more pissed than ever

“PDA huh?” Mariko asked out of the blue

“PDA? How come this is PDA?”

“Oh right no one will go flirting with you! And no one will ever date you!” Mariko scoffed

“What the heck are you saying?!” Miichan is getting annoyed. Sensing that a fight is coming Yuko silently crawl away. Acchan is looking at them silently.

Mariko stood up

“I hate you!”

“What is wrong with you?”

--

“Let’s go now! Takamina I’ll go to Mariko and you to Miichan got it?”

“Roger that!”

--

“Hey you okay?”

“Sheesh that girl I don’t get her! What’s wrong with her? Storming off like that”

“You’re worried?”

“Worried?! Oh God! Takamina don’t say something so hurtful! Me worried about her? No way! No freakin’ way!”

Takamina giggled

“What are you giggling about?” Miichan asked clearly pissed that her friend is giggling when she’s not in the mood

“What are you feeling right now Miichan?” Takamina asked calmly

“I’m pissed!” is she really pissed? There’s something more and she can feel it but she can’t seem to point a finger to it.

 “I have a question Miichan. What if Mariko didn’t ever talk to you again? What are you going to feel?” Why is Takamina asking such a question like that?

Miichan opened her mouth but closed it immediately. What is she going to feel? She doesn’t know it.

“Think about it Miichan” and Takamina said that she left Miichan.

---

“Marikoooooo~” Yuko poked Mariko’s shoulder

“What are you doing here?” Mariko asked without even looking at Yuko

“You’re jealous!” Yuko said. She’s asking for her death now.

That statement made Mariko looked at Yuko wide eyed

“You’re jealous! You’re jealous! You’re jealous! Just admit it! Marikooooooo” Yuko looked at Mariko teasingly

“You like Miichan!”

“W-What a-are you sa-saying?!” a big blush formed at Mariko’s face

“Yoooou like Miichaaaaan!!” Mariko looked flustered

“Shu-Shut up! Stop saying nonsense!” Mariko crossed her arms over her chest and look at the other side of the room totally ignoring Yuko.

“Oh! Look its Miichan!” like a flash Mariko looked where Yuko pointing at.

“You fell for that?! BWAHAHAHAHHA! Just admit it!” Yuko said while clapping her hands

“SHUT UP!” Mariko looks even redder

“I’m sorry! I’m sorry! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

“STOP LAUGHING!” Mariko looked flustered

“You really fell for that? That was really cheap you know. We know that you like her so just admit it. We’ll help you”

“I don’t like her!” Mariko tried to defend herself

“Oh really? Then why are you so pissed off earlier?”

“I am not!”

“If you just cooperate you know maybe you can be with her”

That made Mariko silent

Mariko nodded her head and looked at Yuko

“Okay I admit it I like her happy?”

“Happy baby!” Yuko hugged Mariko

---

“Did you ask her the question?”

“Yup! And she didn’t know the answer”

“Thought so! Mariko already admitted it. I already said to her that she just needed to give Miichan a silent treatment and that’s all”

“I’m glad that we’re friends again Yuko! Thank you so much!”

“I’m glad to Takamina”

---

“What if she didn’t really talk to me ever again?” that phrase kept ringing in her mind

“What the hell? Why am I thinking about that? It’s her fault! Why did she even get so angry? What’s her problem anyway?!” she asked the poster beside her bed
it’s a beginner poster of them.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I’m insane!” she screamed at the poor pillow

Miichan is confused and tired. She doesn’t know what she’s going to feel if Mariko didn’t ever talk to her again

---

It’s been a week since Mariko started giving her a silent treatment and it’s killing her!

She saw some girl in SND48 talking to her and they just shared a hug

“I want to rip off the girl’s head” she unconsciously said

“That’s scary Miichan” Acchan looked at Miichan weirdly

She give Miichan a what’s-gotten-into-you look

“Huh? What’s scary?” Miichan asked confused

“You just said that you want to rip off that girl’s head”

“I said that?”

“Yes you did”

---

Two weeks! And counting she can’t take it anymore

Miichan’s P.O.V.

I can’t take this anymore I’m going to confront her later. That silent treatment of her is killing me!

I want to talk to her! I want to have fun with her again!

I paced back and forth. I need to find Takamina to help me!

I saw her feeding Haruna and sweetly talking to her

“There you are!” I snatched her and I can clearly see that the both of them were shock

“Sorry Haruna! I need Takamina!” I dragged her away

“Ow! What do you want Miichan?”

“Sorry! Takamina! I can’t take this anymore her silent treatment is killing me!” I shook her

Takamina’s P.O.V.

“STOP! Stop shaking me I’m getting dizzy! Okay! okay I’ll help you” I didn’t know that our plan will work

“Really?”

“Yes really! So please stop Miichan” I held my head and I saw Yuko snickering

‘Go with the plan!’ she mouthed at me and gave me thumbs up

“Let’s talk first okay? Doctor Takamina is here”

“Okaay” she sound unsure

“What are you feeling right now?”

“What am I feeling right now? I’m hungry?” Takamina face palmed

“Not that Miichan! What are you feeling about the silent treatment?”

“Oh well didn’t I said to you earlier that it’s killing me”

“Why is it killing you?”

“Why is it killing me?.....I don’t know Takamina”

“Are you feeling anything when she’s near you?”

“Well yeah my face heats up but I guess it’s because radiating at her because she’s a devil” Oh! She’s blushing when Mariko is near!

“You like her” I said there’s no point of getting into circles

“WHAT?!” That’s the reaction that I expected and soon she will say are you crazy Takamina?!

“ARE YOU CRAZY TAKAMINA?!” I’m right!

“Nope you’re the one who’s crazy. Crazily in love at Mariko” I patted her head and stood up

---

‘Do I really like her?’ the girl in her pajamas asked herself

She opened her laptop and searched at the internet about liking someone. While she searching she saw a post about ’10 signs of liking someone’

‘I’ll prove Takamina that I don’t like her. I don’t swing that way’ she said to herself

Do you need to know what are the 10 signs that you like someone? If so, then you may be confused on what you want and if you really like the person. If you are
trying to really figure out if you unconsciously like someone, then go through this archive to find out. You may be surprised at how much attention you give to one
person.

‘I’m feeling confused right now’

1.   If you find yourself thinking about her. Anytime you think about someone without them being around, then you may like them. No matter what you are doing, if she crosses your mind, then you like her for sure.

‘I do think of her unconsciously sometimes but I’m just worried about her!’

2.   If every other girl reminds you of her. This is one of the nest signs that you like someone.  Whether you believe it or not, every girl will start to look like her. When this happens, she may have you wrapped around her finger.

‘Nope! There’s only one Mariko to me that giant. Takamina is wrong I really don’t like her’

3.   You find yourself going out of your way for her. If you are not already a gentleman and you all of a sudden become a sweetheart, then you like her. There is no way around this one. Anything she asks you probably will do for her if you like her.

‘I do become gentlewoman sometimes to her but I’m just being you know!’

4.   You like talking to her. Usually, a great conversation with someone is the beginning to new things. If you can hold a conversation with her that can last for more than fifteen minutes, then you may like her. Do not fight it off.

‘I do like talking to her’

5.   You tell her things that you do not tell other people. Usually, when are talking to someone we like, we usually slip up and tell them things about us that we do not tell people every day. This may mean that you feel comfortable around her and that you can tell her almost anything.

‘I told her that I’m the one who ate Takamina lunch'

6.   You smile for no reason when she's around. Smiling is usually uncontrollable when you are around the person you like. Sometimes, you may not even notice you are smiling. You may be so hypnotized by the presence of your crush.

‘Smiling is a common thing that I do every day. Takamina is not right’

7.   You try to groom when your crush comes around. If you all of a sudden try to fix yourself up when they are around. Then, you definitely like that person. Especially, if you may be pulling out your comb to make sure that your hair is perfect.

‘I’m a girl of course I want to look good!’

8.   You get nervous when they are around. If you can't find yourself acting normal when you are in the presence of someone else, then you definitely have a crush on them. Do not make it obvious, though or they may think you are weird. Try to act as normal as possible.

‘Sometimes I do get nervous’

9.   You have visions of the future. If you daydream about how life would be if you were with the person, then you most definitely like them. Sometimes, we humans tend to daydream and wonder "what if."

‘A big N.O.!’

10.   You compliment her a lot. If her compliment her a lot, then you probably like her. You want her to feel great about herself and around you. Compliments really shows how you feel and think of others if it is an honest compliment.

‘I do compliment her a lot’

“THIS IS COMPLETELY INSANE! I DON’T LIKE MARIKO!” the girl shouted at the laptop

---

“Do I like her?” she asked Acchan completely unaware what’s the girl is asking

“Huh?” Acchan scratched her head and looked at Miichan

“I said do I like her?”

“Yes?”

“EVEN YOU ACCHAN?!” she screamed at Acchan’s face

“Eww. Miichan you spit on me” Acchan wiped her face

---

2 weeks since she talked to Doctor Takamina and she finally understood it she like Mariko

They just finished practicing and hell she was tired already with the love thingy she just found out

It’s stressing her already

5 weeks of silent treatment. FOR 5 WEEKS SHE DIDN’T TALK TO MARIKO!

How did she endure it?

And again she saw Mariko talking to the other girls animatedly. She was across of the room

Mariko was totally flirting with that girl. She really can’t take it anymore

She stood up and screamed from the top of her lungs

“STOP IT MARIKOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” she looked at Mariko and boy Mariko looked so cute to her eyes

She marched towards Mariko and yanked her arm

‘MISSION SUCCESS!’ Takamina and Yuko pumped their fist in the air

“I LIKE YOU! YOU GOT THAT?!” Miichan kissed Mariko earning a blush from the other girl

They’re like Tom and Jerry always fighting and teasing each other but they really can’t live without each other.

---- :) :) :)
AND THAT WAS CUPID’S MISSION (lol I feel like I'm a sports announcer or something)

So far this is the longest one shot I ever wrote in my life.  I’m drained now lol I’m almost done with the Chapter 2 of AKB Baby it’s long too so it took me awhile to finished it.

UP COMING ONE SHOTS. I’m not sure when I’m going to post it.

1) TakaMii

2)Taka x Erepyon

I’m still thinking of writing a W MATSUI one shot. I already have a story but I really don’t know the both of them so it’s hard to write it and as for TakaYuko and
Taka x Mariko rolf I’m out of ideas I think I need an inspiration.
Bye bye~ I think I need to say goodbye for awhile to my internet life
Title: Re: Cupid's Mission (Mariko and Miichan)
Post by: eSsIe21 on May 02, 2011, 05:15:20 PM
yehey!!!!!..., marikuu fiction!!!!!!! :cow:...., thank you very much!!!! :kneelbow: :luvluv2:


...i'm very happy about this fiction!!!!... again thank you very much!!!!


.... plz keep writing more marikuu, takacchan, kojiyuu fiction!!








.... wow erena is having a fiction!!!! :OMG: :OMG:..., and she was about to pair to taka!!!!... :dunno:
Title: Re: Cupid's Mission (Mariko and Miichan)
Post by: bungal on May 03, 2011, 03:02:45 AM
Ah, Alexander-san you are awesome.  :lol:

For Taka X Mariko inspiration, you might want to watch this video. Its really cute.  :deco:

篠田麻里子×高橋みなみ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QU4uHkhGS6Y#)

Title: Re: Cupid's Mission (Mariko and Miichan)
Post by: kahem on May 03, 2011, 08:26:04 AM
Miichan totally cracked me up!!!! Hahahaha

Taka x erepyon? It sound interessing ^^
Title: Re: Cupid's Mission (Mariko and Miichan)
Post by: Alexander on May 04, 2011, 07:11:20 AM
Okay so this is just a short update from me! Enjooooooooy~

Questions (W Matsui)

The things I do with her I always compare it with the things I do with you. I don’t know if it’s just me that even the little things she does I compared it you. Why are you so perfect?

Why are you so fragile and perfect? You’re a porcelain doll that I can’t seem to have again.

I’m with someone else now and we were perfect too but why am I wishing that she’s you?

When we go to the place we used to hang out I compared it to the old times. Why is it old times are always seem perfect to me?

I can’t stop thinking about you when I close my eyes you’re the only one I see. Are you a wizard because I want to know what spell did you casted on me.

I wonder what you’ll do if we bump into you. Are you going to slap me? Or just ignore us?

I wish it is the old times again when we are still together when things are still better.

She gave me a goodbye kiss but when I taste her lips I thought about you. You’re strawberry lip balm I can still taste them.

I just can’t forget about you.

You’re a perfect girl for me and I let you go without even thinking about it. I was so stupid at that time. I thought about my feelings first without thinking about
you.

I regret it now. Now that you’re not with me anymore what will I do? Can you please answer me? I’m begging you.

Why did I even break up with you?  We were so perfect together. Do you know that they call us pretty couple? I wish you do.

Do you still remember the times when you will feed me and times when we will do things together? I wish you do.

I love you so much and letting you go is the biggest mistake I ever did in my whole life.

Saying to my friends that I already moved on and living my life to the fullest with my new lover are the biggest lies I ever said in my life.

They always say that I need to take good care of you because there’s no one other like you and they were right there’s really no one other like you.

I don’t know what to do anymore. I should have just thought about it first before I said it.

I was so angry that’s why I suddenly blurted it out. It was the time of our biggest fight. I didn’t mean to say hurtful things to you. It was just my way of releasing my anger.

I was stressed and you did something that angered me more.

I saw a video of you in your phone kissing someone else and it hurt me. You look so happy there. I have a question am I not enough to you? Why did you even do
that?

I wish there’s a time capsule and I’ll do everything to correct my wrongs and trust me I’ll make things more perfect than ever you could imagine so please come back to me.

I know that I can’t have the old times again but I’m just wishing it but now that it’s already too late I’m sure that the genie can’t grant it.

I have so many questions to ask you and this is the first question that I will ask you. This will be the last question and please answer it.

When will I learn to forget about you Rena?

And do you know that even in my last breath I always thought of you.

/\___/\/\/\____/\/\/\/\_____/\/\/\_____/\/\/_____/\/\/\/_______/\___________________-

Matsui Jurina was announced dead on arrival and was dead at exactly 1:00 am.

She was hit and run by a truck. It was already 50-50 when the ambulance came to help her.

--------

I’M SORRY! I just want to write a sad fanfic and W MATSUI came to my mind.

The thingy up there was her heart beat. I’m sorry if it’s a fail. I’m sorry! Please don’t kill me.

This is just a fanfic that I wrote so please don’t take it seriously. I don’t want them dead. I love both of them. Now I feel guilty writing a fanfic like this.

I said that the upcoming fanfics are TakaMii and Taka X Erepyon but I just can’t help myself to write a W MATSUI. I always want to write one and the next time
that I’ll I write I’m going to write a decent one.

Have a good day  :)
Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: ShibuyaDokiDoki on May 04, 2011, 07:45:07 AM
I.... what is this....? I don't even... I ....  :fainted: they broke up...?  :tantrum: Jurina is dead.....?!!!!  :gyaaah: :frustrated:

LOL okay shock aside~( :imdead: ) i like it :D i like all your fanfics! LOL please do keep writing! (*cough* i look forward to more WMatsui.... :shifty: *cough*) LOL well hope you update soon!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: kahem on May 04, 2011, 11:04:45 AM
So sad!!!! T_T Jurina!!!!!!
Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: khryz0421 on May 04, 2011, 11:44:40 AM

Quote
Cupid’s mission (Mariko x Miichan)

i like the title.... :ding: i really love mariko-sama ang now miichan.... marikuu!!

Quote
“Why are staring at space Minami and what are you thinking while smiling like a pervert” that broke of my trance

“Nothing baby I’m just thinking of what we’re going to do tonight” my mouth said. It just slipped. I looked at Haruna and she was blushing.

‘Cute’

“Pervert!” she slapped me really hard

‘I take it back not cute at all’

i love the pervert takamina.!! :on bleed: :luvluv1:

Quote
“PDA huh?” Mariko asked out of the blue

“PDA? How come this is PDA?”

oh! what is pda? :dunno:


Quote
Do you need to know what are the 10 signs that you like someone? If so, then you may be confused on what you want and if you really like the person. If you are
trying to really figure out if you unconsciously like someone, then go through this archive to find out. You may be surprised at how much attention you give to one
person.

‘I’m feeling confused right now’

1.   If you find yourself thinking about her. Anytime you think about someone without them being around, then you may like them. No matter what you are doing, if she crosses your mind, then you like her for sure.

‘I do think of her unconsciously sometimes but I’m just worried about her!’

2.   If every other girl reminds you of her. This is one of the nest signs that you like someone.  Whether you believe it or not, every girl will start to look like her. When this happens, she may have you wrapped around her finger.

‘Nope! There’s only one Mariko to me that giant. Takamina is wrong I really don’t like her’

3.   You find yourself going out of your way for her. If you are not already a gentleman and you all of a sudden become a sweetheart, then you like her. There is no way around this one. Anything she asks you probably will do for her if you like her.

‘I do become gentlewoman sometimes to her but I’m just being you know!’

4.   You like talking to her. Usually, a great conversation with someone is the beginning to new things. If you can hold a conversation with her that can last for more than fifteen minutes, then you may like her. Do not fight it off.

‘I do like talking to her’

5.   You tell her things that you do not tell other people. Usually, when are talking to someone we like, we usually slip up and tell them things about us that we do not tell people every day. This may mean that you feel comfortable around her and that you can tell her almost anything.

‘I told her that I’m the one who ate Takamina lunch'

6.   You smile for no reason when she's around. Smiling is usually uncontrollable when you are around the person you like. Sometimes, you may not even notice you are smiling. You may be so hypnotized by the presence of your crush.

‘Smiling is a common thing that I do every day. Takamina is not right’

7.   You try to groom when your crush comes around. If you all of a sudden try to fix yourself up when they are around. Then, you definitely like that person. Especially, if you may be pulling out your comb to make sure that your hair is perfect.

‘I’m a girl of course I want to look good!’

8.   You get nervous when they are around. If you can't find yourself acting normal when you are in the presence of someone else, then you definitely have a crush on them. Do not make it obvious, though or they may think you are weird. Try to act as normal as possible.

‘Sometimes I do get nervous’

9.   You have visions of the future. If you daydream about how life would be if you were with the person, then you most definitely like them. Sometimes, we humans tend to daydream and wonder "what if."

‘A big N.O.!’

10.   You compliment her a lot. If her compliment her a lot, then you probably like her. You want her to feel great about herself and around you. Compliments really shows how you feel and think of others if it is an honest compliment.

‘I do compliment her a lot’

it is true.... :luvluv2:

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UP COMING ONE SHOTS. I’m not sure when I’m going to post it.

1) TakaMii

2)Taka x Erepyon

wow.... it sound interesting :glasses: i'm looking forward to it...

and thanks for writing marikoxmiichan... :kneelbow: :luvluv1: :mon lovelaff:

Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: Arakawa on May 04, 2011, 05:15:16 PM
^ PDA = public display of affection

lol
Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: khryz0421 on May 05, 2011, 09:27:29 AM
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^ PDA = public display of affection

lol

ahh :bingo:.... thank you arakawa-san!! :kneelbow: :shy2:
Title: Re: Questions (W MATSUI)
Post by: Alexander on May 08, 2011, 05:50:06 PM
Childish acts (Mariko x Takamina)

“Blah blah blah blah blah blah” the Teacher says things and the students are not listening this is a usual scene in AKB high school. Who wants to listen to a boring lesson? No one right?

Anyway, AKB high school is a school for girls only. It’s a school with high standards only chosen girls can study here.

8:00 am Room AKB 48

This room consists of different types of girls. There’s a boob maniac, a girl with ear fetish, a model, an ace, the captain, the mangaka and many more. It’s really a unique set of class.

Teacher Akimoto Yasushi their history teacher and the owner of the school

A light snoring can be heard at the captain, Mr. Akimoto stopped for a while and walk towards her chair.

“EHEM! Ms. Takahashi do you mind saying your opinion?” He faked a cough again and looked at the captain.

 Takahashi Minami is still in her own her world not knowing anything that her teacher in history is calling her name.

Maeda Atsuko her best friend and seatmate lightly kicked Takamina’s chair.

“Takamina!” she whispered and kicked again and again

“Stop it Acchan that won’t work let me help you” Mariko smirked this will be her payback for calling her Goliath yesterday and humiliating her in front of the other
students.

She stood up and bowed at Mr. Akimoto for disturbing his lesson. She picked up her book and rolled it and BAM!

Takamina bolted up and looked at her surroundings her sleepy eyes became wide open when she saw her History Teacher standing beside her and holding a book.
She gave him an apologetic smile.

The girls giggled

“Thank you Mariko you may sit down now” Takamina looked or should I say glared at Mariko.

Mariko rolled her eyes and grinned. The history class was ended quite a bit embarrassing for Takamina.

It was already a recess time. One of the usual scenes here in Room AKB is the bickering of Mariko and Takamina.

“YOUR.NAME.IS.GOLIATH” Takamina said every word with emphasis in it, making Mariko flinched

“C.H.I.B.I.K.O” like Takamina she put an emphasis in it

“At least I’m cute” that made Mariko shut up

“Ohh that hit the spot!” Takamina gave Mariko her signature smile that fan girls would love to see right now.

‘That annoying smile again’ It irks her whenever she sees that smile

Takahashi Minami also known as Takamina she’s the captain of basketball team. Even though she’s a bit short she’s really good at it. Acchan is her best friend
since diaper days and as for Goliath she doesn’t know but she’s friends with her. Takamina is sure is popular with girls she even have a fan club.

Again back with the story

With their usual bickering again and now they were in gymnasium and the lesson is basketball that made Takamina happy. Mariko doesn’t know how to play
basketball well how would she know? she’s a model for goddamn sake.

She tried to shoot for the third time but it didn’t even hit the ring. She has long legs and long arms but why can’t she play this damn sport?

She heard a laughing at her back and found Takamina laughing her ass off

“You don’t know how to play basketball?! That’s a shame Mariko!” she looked at the girl in front of her and gave her one of her signature smile.

Takamina did a suave 3 point shot that made the girls outside the gymnasium squealed in delight.

“Damn you! Die! Disappear or Evaporate! I hetchu!” Mariko shouted at Takamina that made the girl just laugh again.

“Yeah yeah whatever”

3 days have passed but Takamina still hadn’t showed up that made Mariko worry at her little friend.

She and Acchan went at Takamina’s house and found out that Takamina has a high fever and can’t attend school.

Even in her worst state she still manages to make fun of her friend. As for Acchan she was used to their bickering for her they’re like singing with their own language.

Mariko was peeling an apple for them to eat and insulting her friend also at the same time when someone knocked on the door when she looked up she found staring to her mortal enemy Mocchi. She’s a little bit clingy at Takamina and she pisses Mariko so much that she wants rip Mocchi’s head away from her precious body.

“Hey Mocchi! Whatcha doin’ here?” Takamina casually greeted Mocchi and gave her signature smile at the girl

Mocchi went to Takamina’s side and put a basket of fruits in her table.

“I am here because I heard that you were sick and the girls at your fan club gave me fruits earlier they were really ecstatic when they heard about you and Takamina for the record you should really take care of yourself”

“Yes Mooooooooom!”

 For the rest of the afternoon they were talking and Mariko all did was glared at Mocchi who returned a glare too.

“So I heard that you’re going to model for this really popular magazine?” it was Sunday and they were talking at the park just the two of them. The Model and the captain talking at the park peacefully without their bickering is not an everyday scene

“Yeah” Mariko shortly replied her heart pounding. Since the day when Takamina taught her how to do a free throw shot she had starting to like the little captain.
That day their skins touching and Mariko can feel Takamina’s heat when she remembers it her face flushes

“Are you okay you’re red Mariko, Do you have a fever?” Takamina pressed their foreheads her Mom does this when she feels she will have fever.

Mariko gets even redder because they’re practically centimetres apart if you see them you would think that they’re going to make out.

“I-I’m okay!” she stammered and pushed Takamina

“Okay! I get it. No need to push me sheesh”

Mariko didn’t know that she will fell for this chibiko. She never imagines it. She never really experienced what love is and this is the first time she felt it. When
Takamina will do something that would need them to be intimate at each other (it was Mariko thinking that they’re being intimate with each other). When their skin is touching Mariko find herself blushing.

Valentine’s day a normal day for them nothing special but for Mariko it isn’t she’s still debating if she will give Takamina the chocolate that she made. She can see
that everybody is casually giving chocolates at Takamina but why can’t she do it too? Last valentines she gave Takamina a chocolate too.

‘OMG! She’s looking at me! What am I going to do?! Okay! Mariko! Stay calm and cool just smile at her! Go girl!’

They were just standing and looking at each other. Takamina’s eye lit up when she saw that Mariko is holding a box of chocolates

“Is that mine?” she excitedly asked

“H-here!” she gave it to Takamina and run while holding her blushing face

“THANK YOU!” Takamina shouted. She unwrapped it and found a handmade chocolate. She found out that it was handmade in first glance because it looks horribly
enough for you to be poisoned.

“What it this? Is she trying to poison me? Mariko made it so I won’t doubt it” she put it in her bag and the other chocolates in a paper bag.

‘Maybe she is really trying to poison me’

Till now Mariko hasn’t confessed for her just being with Takamina is enough. She doesn’t want to risk their friendship just for her sake.

“CHIBIKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WILL KILL YOOOOU!!” Another one of their silly fights *sigh* well it’s not Mariko and Takamina without it.

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Upcoming OS:

TakaMii - 35 % complete
Taka and Erepyon – 3% complete
Haruna and Mariko – 0% complete. I’m excited to write this because Haruna is in it.

I’m having a hard time finishing the TakaMii OS lol epic fail. Summer is going to be over soon so I think I will not be able to update more often.
I will not take request anymoooar for now rolf because I still need to update my fanfics. I’m a bad author. Bye bye. I really need to get a life. SERIOUSLY.
Title: Re: Childish acts (Takamina x Mariko)
Post by: khryz0421 on May 08, 2011, 06:40:55 PM
well done... :twothumbs

thanks for writing another mariko-sama fanfic.... :luvluv1: :luvluv2:

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“Dam you! Die! Disappear or Evaporate! I hetchu!”
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i love this part!! :farofflook:  :farofflook:

takamina here is a bit different.. :on lol: a rude takamina!! :on lol:

hope you can write more....  :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:
Title: Re: Childish acts (Takamina x Mariko)
Post by: Alexander on May 16, 2011, 11:06:31 AM
A/N: So yeah I tried writing a Horror/Thriller/Drama/Mystery one shot sorry if it’s no good it’s my first time writing one. Enjoy!

Survivors (AKB48)

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!” a bloodcurdling scream can be heard all throughout the forest. The birds that were having their nap time are startled and started to fly away and a strong wind gushed to her scared and surprised face she put her hand on her mouth and tried not to scream again.

Takahashi Minami the last survivor of the plane crash that is what she thinks because she had been wandering around in this island for almost 2 weeks and the
amount of time was long enough but she didn’t find any passengers and her friends.

Two weeks without companion it’s been two weeks since she last saw her friends. She saw the plane and it was landed successfully the plane was not damage at all but when she search there her friends are not there. She tried to search around the plane but still no sight of them.

They were just having a trip to Singapore and when they were about to go back to Japan a plane crashed occurred and here she was alone in a strange island.

She was startled when she saw a dead body it was hanging on the tree and it looks like he was stabbed to death. His head is hanging low, his eyes are open, and his clothes are torn. He was starting to decay and around the tree and his body there are flies, rats, and worms.

It was the captain of the plane the way he died it doesn’t look like an accident. She clenched her fist and tried not to cry. There’s no point of crying it was already done and now how can they go back to Japan? Out of nowhere someone grabbed her neck and strangled her. She grasped for air and tried to struggle. Minami prayed and cried for help any time soon she will be out of oxygen and the person who was strangling her disappeared. Her patience are getting thin she just want to kill herself now. She’s alone and someone tried to kill her a few seconds ago what will she do now? Using her phone is no help there’s no signal. How can they go back now that they’re only hope is already dead.

Her loud throbbing of her heart is the only sound that she can hear at the moment. She can’t stay at this place where someone tried to kill her.

She shut her eyes and run as fast as she can.

She’s already losing hope that she can go back to Japan alive.

 Where is she right now? Where are her friends? Are there any survivors?  What is this strange island? Why did someone tried to kill her? How can they go back
now? Those questions are flooding her already throbbing head.

She didn’t saw that there’s a branch in front of her and because that she tripped and a figure suddenly appeared in front of her she can’t see what it looked like because it’s dark and it suddenly tried to pull her. Her body is aching and she can’t struggle anymore is she going to die now? Is it already her time to say goodbye without seeing her friends? And after that everything went black.

I woke up with a head ache all I remember is that I tripped and someone is pulling me. I tried to stand up but my body betrayed me.

“Takamina! Guys! Takamina is awake!” someone shouted. My head is still aching like hell

‘Where I am? Wait someone and it knows my name?! The girls! They’re okay!’

I tried to stand up again

“Hey don’t strain yourself you need to rest kiddie” I rubbed my eyes am I dreaming?

“MARIKO!” I can’t stop crying I’ve been alone for two weeks

She hugged me cried

“We were so worried about you” She cried harder and I looked up I saw them my friends and my family they’re okay. I’m so happy.

“GROUP HUG!” Miichan shouted. We can still go back to Japan as long as we’re together.

They stopped walking when the flight attendant suddenly screamed

“DEATH! HE IS ALREADY CALLING US! WE’RE GOING TO DIE! THEY’RE CHASING US!” the flight attendant screamed who had gone crazy. She pulled her hair and
laugh crazily.

“Death death DEATH!” she mumbled and looked t the people around her

“They’re chasing us! Do you know that? Death death!” she screamed again

“STOP!” Takamina screamed her friends are getting scared and she’s getting irritated at the flight attendant

“DEATH!” the flight attendant pulled her hair and looked around finding something or someone

“STOP THINKING NON-SENSE THINGS! NO ONE IS CHASING US! NO IS GOING TO DIE! STOP THINKING OF NEGATIVE THOUGHTS!” she pushed the flight
attendant and pointed a finger at her. She let herself cry the anger inside her build up and this woman is screaming non-sense things. They’re not going to die! No
one is going to die! No one is chasing them! They can still go back to Japan!

She buried her face in her palm and sobbed loudly. The rest of the AKB48 didn’t stop her she’s been taking care of them for almost 2 and half weeks.

“Please stop thinking those non-sense things..Please” They need to stay strong. Thinking of those things won’t help them.

“DON’T YOU KNOW IT?! THE ONE TRIED TO KILL YOU! THE ONE WHO KILLED THE CAPTAIN! THEY’RE CHASING US! I SAW THEM YESTERDAY! WE’RE GOING TO
DIE! WE’RE IN A HAUNTED ISLAND! THOSE SOULS! THOSE LONELY AND SCARED SOULS! THEY’RE GOING TO CHASE AND KILL US! THEY WANT COMPANIES!” and out of nowhere a black figure appeared at the back of the flight attendant and killed her. She was strangled to death and her eyes popped out.

They were 60 people and now they’re only 58. The captain and flight attendant are already dead leaving 58 people. They just saw it. They can’t do anything about it because those guys are powerful. All that they can do is cry.

“Let’s go it was her fault anyway” said the Priest. He was one of passengers

It’s already pitched black when they stopped walking. They prepared a camp and a fire. Tomorrow is going to be another day. They’re going back to the plane and see if they can use it to go back to Japan. Luckily there’s another Pilot with them.

“Let’s sit and pray before we go to sleep” they always do it because the Priest said that it will help them. After 15 minutes of silence and praying the Priest spoke

“You must be wondering why we always pray” the girls and the rest of the passengers nodded

“Those people are trying to kill us because they want companies the flight attendant is right. The only way to protect ourselves is praying. They’re demons so they’re scared of God.  They’re people who were stranded and died here and now that we’re here they want to kill us so they can have companions. We need to pray and please don’t believe on them, the flight attendant believed at them” the Priest carefully explained

“So we’re just hallucinating?” Matsumi asked while shivering it was a cold when it’s already here in this strange island

“Yes” the Priest nodded and said that it’s time to sleep

It was time to sleep the AKB48 girls find a pair and hugged each other. Takamina was the only one awake.

They’ve been here for almost 2 weeks and half, can they still go back to Japan? When will the help come? How can survive this haunted island? Can they go back
to Japan alive?

Their clothes are torn and they’re stinky and hungry. There are only fruits here and it’s not enough for them, can they still survive? Are they going to be like those
people trying to kill them? Are they going to die here too?

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A/N Part 2: PART 2? Naah..(I’ll think about it) I still have to write 3 one shots to write lol there are so many (SO MANY) unfinished one shots in my laptop but I don’t know if I’m going to finish and post them. The fanfic thread here in AKBar48 is dead like the souls in my one shot. WHERE ARE YOU PEOPLE?! WHERE ARE THE AUTHORS?! T_T WHERE ARE YOU GUYS?! I WANT TO READ YOUR FANFICS! /rage...I’m going to school soon and I can’t use my laptop every now and then because I will be tutored (yes tutored because I suck at math) (I hate math and I hate my Teacher) and that’s why I can’t use the internet and laptop T_T. I’m going to have a life starting June.  I will still continue to write my fanfics and the other upcoming one shot that I said but I don’t know when I will post them lol because I’m so lazy to finish them and I suck because I don't know what to write my math Teacher is killing me (I'm going to blame him)

Supposedly upcoming but until now I still haven’t post them and I keep posting other one shot instead of this!:

1) TakaMii: Until now I’m still having trouble finishing this one shot because I have a writer’s block? Or I’m just lazy?

2) Taka x Erepyon: I don’t have anything to say lol

3) Haruna x Mariko: I have a story but I’m too lazy to write it. Don’t worry I’m still going to write it. I forgot who requested it sorry if I haven’t started writing your request. I’m really sorry.

The pressure is killing me. Bye for now! I guess I won’t be online for many years! Lol kidding.
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: kahem on May 16, 2011, 01:48:57 PM
Wouah I don't know if I would continued your strory because I'm really really really scared when there are ghost involved but I want to know what is going to happen, arg what a dilemma xd
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: TakahashiJ on May 16, 2011, 07:45:05 PM
Im afraid of ghost stories LOL ><.
Why our country, Singapore ?
Thanks for update ^_^!
Takamina survived <3. ~
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: khryz0421 on May 17, 2011, 11:11:35 AM
so scary .. i don't like scary things... :OMG: but i really like this fic so i try my best to read the next chapter without  imagine  the scene ... :frustrated:

nice fic..:frustrated:
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: bou-j525 on May 18, 2011, 01:15:26 AM
GHOST STORY. LOL. I enjoy it. It's different from everything I've read before so ^^ Plus, Takahashi survived so  :twothumbs
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on June 03, 2011, 11:04:24 PM
Cupid’s mission
I just can't imagine Takamina being a perv  XD
Oh it's beyond good to read Acchan, Yuko and Takamina are okay again  :cow:
Miichan & Mariko = tough love.


Questions
Y u no make happy end for them?  :(
It's okay though.


Childish acts
I find this Takamina so amusing because of her cockiness.
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“Damn you! Die! Disappear or Evaporate! I hetchu!”
:lol:
Tsundere Mariko?
Another tough love. It seemed this is the case with Mariko couple.


Survivors
The genre sure is interesting.
 :shocked the person strangling Takamina disappeared?
I'm hoping there'll be more part to this.


I think it's hard to make a TakaMii regardless of writer's block or anything. So don't stress yourself and have fun writing whatever idea that comes to your mind first. Good luck!

ps. I hate math too.
Title: Re: Survivors (AKB48)
Post by: Alexander on June 12, 2011, 12:48:56 PM
I’m here (TakaMii)

A bouquet of roses in her left hand and a bright smile on her face Takamina excitedly walk towards the dressing room of her girlfriend.

“She’s going to love this bouquet!” she excitedly talked to herself. Acchan just finished promoting her new album and Takamina was so proud of her girlfriend. They don’t have time to talk to each other because of their busy schedule so she planned to surprise her girlfriend but before she reach the dressing room she saw two girls in front of the room and they are kissing. Takamina scrunched her nose and squinted her eyes feeling a bit odd because the two girls seem quietly familiar to her. She stopped mid-way and watched them. Feeling a bit disgusted because they’re making out in front of her girlfriend’s dressing room. They stopped kissing and broke apart, she squinted her eyes again and it hit Takamina, it was Acchan and Sae who was kissing. She couldn’t move, her eyes began to tear up and she couldn’t breathe properly. ‘Why are they kissing?’ ‘Is this for real?’ these thoughts flooded Takamina’s mind. They talked for a while and Sae opened the door of the dressing room. Takamina remained hard as a rock at her current spot. She feels like someone is stabbing her heart repeatedly. She spaced out and the tears began to fall. Memories of her and Acchan flashed back in her mind and the happy memories slowly fade away.  She slaps her cheeks for a few times and wiped her tears but they kept falling. Her feet started to move like it has a mind on its own. There’s no point of giving the bouquet now.

Miichan happily skip through the corridor wondering if Takamina successfully gave the roses to Acchan. She wanted to congratulate Acchan for doing a good job. She already gave enough time for the love birds. As she turned left she bumped into someone.

“Oh sorry didn’t mean to—Takamina?!”

Takamina dropped the bouquet and hugged Miichan. She began to sob uncontrollably like a kid lost in the department store.

“W-what happened Takamina?” she asked Takamina feeling protective to her friend. She will never let anyone make her friend cry.

“Let’s go to my house and talk” Sensing that Takamina can’t speak properly right now.

‘Maybe something bad happened between her and Acchan'

They were sitting on the sofa and Takamina is still crying. Miichan just let Takamina cry. It’s the best for her in this situation.

Takamina hiccupped and tried to speak.

“A-Acchan....kissing” she hiccupped again and tried to continue what she was saying but Miichan stopped her. The first 2 words she heard are enough for Miichan to understand what is happening.

“Is....is she.... cheating on... you?” Miichan said it cautiously so it won’t hurt Takamina more.

Takamina nodded and tightly hugged Miichan. Takamina sobbed loudly while saying incoherent words. An angry frown started to form on Micchan’s face and her fist curled up.

‘No one hurts Takamina. No one can make her cry’

After 20 minutes Takamina stopped crying.  Her dress is damp but it’s okay because it’s Takamina. Takamina is still vulnerable and she needs someone to make
her a bit happy. Maybe eating can make her happy?

“I’ll go get us some cake and tea, just sit here okay?”

Takamina nodded her head. Miichan gave Takamina a last look before she goes inside the kitchen.

Takamina’s P.O.V

I feel so betrayed and unloved with all those years I’ve been with her are a joke? Am I not enough for her? I did everything to make her happy but is it not
enough? I’ve seen them before being intimate with each other but I just ignore it because they’re friends. She’s my first for everything. I gave her my life and soul. Is it not enough? I don’t know what I’m going to now. It feels like everything are non-sense to me. I want to die. My heart is not with me anymore. She broke it into a million pieces. I’m tired and sick of this.

“Here eat this it will make you a bit happy. Chocolate cake makes me happy” Miichan offered me a slice. Only Acchan can make me happy..

“I’ll be back, eat it okay?” she patted my head and gave me a smile

I held the fork tightly..I can feel my hands trembling. Maybe I should just die? Maybe if I die Atsuko will finally realize that she likes me? What if she doesn’t? What
if she won’t even realize that I’m gone? Maybe I should just kill myself right now so everything will be fine.

I was about to stab myself but someone slap my hand.

Miichan’s P.O.V

I gave her the chocolate cake and gone back to the kitchen to get the tea. I wish she will cheer up a little. I don’t want to see her crying. She’s just too precious to
be crying. Those tears don’t suit her face. It’s the biggest mistake Atsuko did. Takamina is one of a kind and cheating at her is the biggest mistake that moron did.

I arranged the tea and put it in the tray.

‘I’ll do anything for Takamina’ I was about to call her name but when I look at her she’s about to stab herself. I dropped the tray and run as fast as I can to slap her hand.

The sound of the glass shattering and my heart beating are the only sound I can hear right now. My tears start falling down.

“WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?!” I screamed at her face. I don’t care if I’m crying right now. Only matters right now is why did she try to kill herself

“ISN’T IT OBVIOUS?! I’M GOING TO KILL MYSELF AND YOU INTERRUPTED IT!” she fired back at me. I can feel myself trembling because of anger.

“WITH A FORK!? ARE YOU INSANE!? DO YOU THINK A FORK CAN KILL YOU RIGHT AWAY?!” I shot back at her. I knelt down and buried my face in my hands.

“You don’t understand Miichan...” she mumbled. I can barely hear it.

I look up and found that she crying too.

‘Why are you doing this to yourself Takamina?’

“Then let me understand it Takamina..” I whispered. This is too much already.

“..................” Silence. It’s killing me. I want to know what’s going on her mind.

“There’s no point of living Miichan...” Did I hear it right? Did she just say it?

“NO POINT?!” I screamed at her and I saw her flinched.

“What about AKB48? What about us? your friends? What about me? What do you think we will feel if you kill yourself?! Do you think it can solve your problems?!
Huh?! Takamina! Do you think it can?! Acchan is not the only girl in the world. There so many fish in the sea! Open your fucking eyes!” I catch my breath. There are many things I wanted to say to her. Didn’t she think that we will feel sad if she died?! Damn it. This is your entire fault Atsuko.

 “STOP SCREAMING AT ME! YOU DON’T KNOW ANYTHING MIICHAN! SHE’S THE ONLY GIRL FOR ME!” She pointed an accusatory finger at me. That left me
speechless. She looked at side and sighed. I wiped my tears with my hands and stood up. I turned my back to her.

“You are so blinded by your love for Atsuko, that you can’t see other people’s feelings..Can you please open your eyes and looked around? There are many people that’s going to be sad if you kill yourself...and you don’t see that I love you..” I mumbled the last word. I wish she didn’t hear it. I’m so sick of this. I’m tired of being the 3rd wheel.

“What did you say?” I heard her whispered. I just stood there not caring if she just asked me a question.
I heard footsteps and she turned me around.

“Pardon?” There’s a serious look on her face. I looked down and kept quiet. She tightly held my wrist.

“Ouch! You’re hurting me Takamina..” I heard her gasp and her grip loosen.

“S-sorry”

We just stood there.

“I-I I said..I said..I said...I-I..I like..No..I...I..l-love you” I can feel my tears start falling down my cheeks.

“Miichan...”

“Please don’t talk Takamina..please..” I hiccupped. It’s my turn now to cry. I know that she will reject me. I know that this is not the right time to confess but I just
can’t help myself. The anger and jealousy are building up inside me.

Takamina’s P.O.V

My hands started to move. I just had a urge to hold you in my arms and say sweet things to you. Your confession is so sudden for me it to sink it in my head.
You’re my best friend and I don’t know what I’m going to do if I lose you.

I held you in my arms.

You asked me why I’m doing this but neither do I know why. I looked into your eyes and I never knew that you have a pair of beautiful eyes. My face started to
move like you have some kind of hypnotic powers. You look so beautiful.  I didn’t even notice that we’re already kissing. We broke apart and you looked at me with questioning eyes. I wish you can help me to forget about her. I know that you will not do what she did to me. I believe you Miichan. I know that I’m just using you right now to forget the hurt that I’m feeling but I guess I’m releasing all my desires to you when I heard you said you love me. Does it even make sense?

“Takamina...” you said breathlessly. I kissed you once more. I will try my best to love you.


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Sorry I don’t know how to end it :cry: I suck  :cry: Thank you for the comments and I'm still thinking if I should write a part 2 of Survivors  :cry:  Cry baby Alex  :cry: I finally posted this and I think that I'm going to disappoint you because I suck and I blame my math teacher :angry: (still blaming him)  :angry: Sorry for wrong grammar or anything too lazy to change it :D
Upcoming one shots:
1) Taka x Erepyon
2) MariHaru
aaaand Advance Happy Birthday to Kumi Yagami of SKE48  :) Tomorrow is her birthday  :D Happy birthdaaaay happy happy birthday to yooou  :pen_whirl:
Title: Re: I'm here (TakaMii)
Post by: AAAice on June 12, 2011, 11:01:20 PM
Oh my golly gosh!!! Sae and Atsuko?! I cant imagine. xD The story is soooo sad for the fact that Takamina really love Acchan and Acchan cheated on her.  :angry: :cry:

Miichan. :[ How about Mariko? Lol.

And LOL at Takamina uses fork to stab herself.  :smhid

Can't wait for Mariharu. :]
Title: Re: I'm here (TakaMii)
Post by: kahem on June 13, 2011, 12:33:14 AM
It's too sad T_T poor both minami
Title: Re: I'm here (TakaMii)
Post by: Alexander on July 09, 2011, 06:02:11 PM
Game cheats (SNEAK PEAK)

“ Tutor?”

“Yes” Minami shortly replied

“Go introduced yourself Honey” her Mom glared at her. She forgot to introduce herself.

“Go eat your food Erena or it will get cold. We’ll talk about this later” Mrs. Ono sternly asked her daughter. Erena obediently eat her supper.

“You’re too cute sometimes” she kissed her girlfriend's plump lips and lay back again

“Yeah you are beautiful” Takamina mumbled

“NO! I-I mean uhh. It-it’s okay. I’m okay! Look! I’m okay! Ahaha haha ha!” She made silly gestures and a fake laugh at the end

“Huh? I said ice cream Erena not Taka-”

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SOOOOOO yeah lol I don't know what to say. I just want to tease you readers. I love teasing people. Yeah... right...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ACCHAN  :D ADVANCE HAPPY BIRTHDAY to her woohooo.
Guess what is the meaning of the title. A prize is waiting. Maybe a personal request, I could write you a oneshot if you get it right. This is to easy to guess lol
Title: Re: Game Cheats
Post by: khryz0421 on July 09, 2011, 06:09:57 PM
argh!  :cry: continue..

btw i'm not good in gueesing :smhid
Title: Re: Game Cheats
Post by: RenaChii on July 09, 2011, 10:39:55 PM
I Hope Erepyon is here in this fanfic~  :sweatdrop:
Title: Re: Game Cheats
Post by: pretend_2besome1 on July 14, 2011, 10:53:24 PM
I’m here
Sae and Acchan, why?  :depressed:
Somehow it feels like this Takamina got karma for what she did to Acchan in your TakaHaru shot even though it's unrelated  XD
Despite the seriousness of the situation...with a fork, really? lol
I hope Miichan doesn't end up as a rebound

I think most author love to tease their readers and sorry don't know the meaning of the title. I think you need to give out more hints
Title: Re: Game Cheats
Post by: Alexander on November 01, 2011, 06:53:05 PM
Game cheats Part 1

“I’m home!” a certain high school girl shouted and throws her shoes at the corner. She happily skipped to the living room but stop mid-way when she noticed that they have a visitor. There’s a girl in front of her parents. They were talking seriously and that made her curious. She dropped her bag at the side and because of the heaviness of her bag it made a creak sound earning looks from the people at the living room.

“Oh, Honey you’re home. Come here. I want you to meet Takahashi Minami” her Dad introduced their visitor. The girl stood up from the sofa and bowed. The high school girl walks beside her father.

“Hi, my name is Takahashi Minami but you can call me Takamina and from now on I’ll be your tutor” the girl named Takahashi Minami smiled at the other girl.

“ Tutor?” the girl asked. Hearing someone suddenly say that they’re her tutor from now on is shocking to her because she just failed her English test once! Feeling a bit pissed to her parents. She doesn’t want a tutor.

“Yes” Minami shortly replied.

“Go introduced yourself Honey” her Mom glared at her. She forgot to introduce herself.

“Hi, my name is Ono Erena. Please take care of me” Erena bowed at her tutor earning a chuckle from no other than her tutor

“She’s a good girl. I think it’ll be easy to tutor her” Minami said.

They talked about the fee, the days when she will be tutored which is every day after school and so on. Takamina bid a goodbye because it’s already getting dark. She refused to eat dinner with them.

“Mom! Dad! Why would I be tutored?” It’s been bugging her since few hours ago. She’s been itching to ask this to her parents.

“You failed your English test and your grades are getting low. Minami is from Tokyo University. I’m sure that she will do a good job tutoring you” Mr. Ono put down his chopsticks and explained it to her daughter

“Go eat your food Erena or it will get cold. We’ll talk about this later” Mrs. Ono sternly asked her daughter. Erena obediently eat her supper.

“I just failed my English test once” they just finished eating dinner

“And don’t forget that your grades are getting low too”

“But Mom I don’t need to be tutored”

“Yes you are”

“Erena, Minami is a good kid. Don’t be scared of her” Mr. Ono chuckled

“Daaaad! I’m not scared of her” Erena whined.

Saturday means no tutoring session for Takamina. She just woke up from her sleep. She sits up straight and stretched her numb arms. Takamina yawned and
scratch her cheeks. Two pairs of slender arms engulf her from a tight hug.

“Minami it’s only 6:00 am let’s sleep till noon” her girlfriend sleepily said

“Tomo you know I always wake up 6:00 in the morning”

“But its Saturday can’t you just relaxed today? I can’t see you starting next week because of your tutoring” Tomochin pouted. Takamina will be certainly missed by
her girlfriend.

Takamina pinched Tomochin’s cheek and stretched it.

“You’re too cute sometimes that I can’t help to harass you” she kissed her girlfriends plump lips and lay back again. Tomochin wrapped her arms around
Takamina’s waist and put her head in the crook of her neck.

“Minami”

“Hmmm?”

“Nothing I just want to say your name”

“Takaminaaaaa~” Tomochin’s hot breath tickled Takamina. Takamina giggled and responded with a ‘hmm’

“Is she beautiful?” Tomochin draw circles on Takamina’s right cheek and constantly kissing it

“Yeah she is. She’s very beautiful” Takamina lovingly answered. Tomochin pushed Takamina after hearing her answer, she pushed Takamina hardly enough for
her girlfriend to yelp in pain. Takamina landed on the floor with a loud thud.

“WHAT?!” Tomochin furiously asked to her girlfriend who is caressing her aching butt at the moment.

Takamina looked at Tomochin with teary eyes.

“Why did you do that Tomo? It hurts” Takamina stood up and lightly tap her aching butt. She pouted.

“You said she’s beautiful” Tomochin turned away at Takamina not even feeling a bit sorry to her girlfriend.

“Yeah you are beautiful” Takamina mumbled

“What?” Tomochin looked at Takamina. Did she just hear Takamina correctly?

“I said you’re beautiful. I answered your question but you pushed me” Tomochin stood up and hug Takamina. She smiled and kissed Takamina on the nose.

“Sorry Minami” Finding it cute that Takamina misheard her question and said that she’s beautiful. She shouldn’t have asked that question. She is sure that
Takamina will never cheat on her.

“You’re getting tutored!?” Miho Miyazaki shouted at her best friend

“Shh! Can you be any louder?! Do you want the whole school to know it?” Erena irritably shushed her best friend

“Sorry but why are you getting tutored?” Miho scratched her head

“My parents said that my grades are getting low so they said I should get a tutor” Erena explained every detail

“Oh that explains it. Is your tutor a he or a she?”

“A she, She’s from Tokyo University” Miho’s eyes widened when she heard the word Tokyo

“Wow! She must be really smart if she’s from Tokyo University! Erena you’re so lucky”

“You’re not helping me Miho! Didn’t I told you that I don’t want to be tutored” Erena pouted at her friend

DING DONG

“We’ll talk later!”

“Good Evening Mr. and Mrs. Ono” Takamina politely greeted them

“Good Evening Takahashi. Erena is upstairs” Mrs. Ono smiled at Takamina

Takamina went upstairs tiredly.

“I really need to exercise” she knocked 3 times

“Come in”

“Let’ start the tutoring” Erena kept silent.

“You’re a stubborn kid huh?” Takamina smirked. Her question is answered by a silence

“You really don’t want to be tutored?” once again her question is answered by a silence. How fascinating she’s like talking to herself

“Okay I’ll go now” Takamina made her way to the door. She opened it slowly and still smirking.

“I’m just going to say to your parents that you don’t want to be tutored” Takamina slowly made her way outside Erena’s room.

“WAIT! Don’t do that! Le-Let start the tutoring thingy” Erena hurriedly tug Takamina’s arm. She doesn’t want to get into the bad side of her parents.

“Okay” The tutoring sessions went quiet well it was already 8:00 pm when Takamina went home. Takamina stretched her aching muscles. Maybe she’s really
getting old.

“I should really exercise more” she mumbled.

“I’m home! Tomo?” she whispered her girlfriend’s name

“Maybe she’s already asleep” she went to the living room and found her girlfriend sleeping like a baby at the sofa. Takamina lightly chuckled. She kissed Tomochin
on the forehead and disappears in the kitchen. She was really hungry. She didn’t feel it when she was in Mrs. Ono’s house so that’s why she declined the offer.

She saw a meat and rice at the table and there’s a note too.

Eat this! I cooked it heart! heart!

Wake me up when you’re already finished eating okay? Kiss! Kiss! Kiss! I love you!

-Tomo

“Tomo” A small smile crept on Takamina’s face. She hungrily devoured the food like a wolf that hadn’t eaten in many years. She finished eating within 25 minutes.
She put the plate in the sink.

“Thank you Tomo” She kissed her girlfriend on the lips and Tomochin made an agreeing sound. Takamina lift up Tomochin and started walking to their room.

‘Because of Tomochin’s cooking I became strong but’ she mumbled

“I didn’t know that you’re this heavy Tomo” she said to her sleeping girlfriend

It’s been two weeks since Takamina started tutoring Erena and it’s been 4 days since Erena started feeling weird whenever Takamina is near. It just started when
Takamina waited outside her school and they went home together. After that waiting and going home together she felt like Takamina is the coolest, prettiest, smartest, and hottest person EVER!

“Spell Enthusiastic” Takamina said in English with an accent. Erena snickered when she heard Takamina. She found it funny when Takamina is speaking in English.

“Is something funny?” and one more thing when it’s tutor session Takamina is serious. Takamina scrunch her eyebrows to look scary.

“No-nothing” Erena gulp feeling a lump on her throat. She blushed when she thought that it was hot how Takamina said it.

“Are you okay? You’re red, Erena. Do you want me to stop? I can go home now if you want” Takamina was about to stand up when Erena shouted no

“NO! I-I mean uhh. It-it’s okay. I’m okay! Look! I’m okay! Ahaha haha ha!” She made silly gestures and a fake laugh at the end

“Oookay. Let’s start all over again! Spell Enthusiastic!” Takamina said in a cheery voice

Saturday afternoon means no tutor for Takamina. Takamina and Tomochin agreed to hang out at the mall. They were holding hands just like normal couples while
looking at the stores.

“ACHOO!” Takamina rubbed her nose

“Are you okay?” Tomochin asked. Concerned for her girlfriend

“Yeah just a cold don’t worry about me” Takamina beamed a smile to Tomochin

“Really?”

“Really!” Tomochin’s lips curved into a smile. Takamina changed her cold attitude towards people. She’s more smiling now. It’s all thanks to Takamina.

At the other side of the mall

“Takamina?” a hurt expression is all over Erena’s face.

“Huh? I said ice cream Erena not Taka-” Miho gave Erena a confused expression. She saw her best friend staring at something, she followed it. Erena frowned
even more when she saw that Takamina kissed the girl she’s with.

“Is that your tutor?” Miho looked at Erena concerned at her friend. She doesn’t want to see her frowning it hurts her. She loves Erena so much.

Erena looked away and gave a fake smile at Miho

“Nope! Let’s eat! Wait? Miho what did you ordered?” Erena said energetically. Maybe pretending to be okay is good. Maybe pretending that she’s not in love with
her tutor will set things correct.

“Ice cream, it can help you cheer up” Myao simply answered

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“How was your school?” T

“What are you? My Mom now?”

“Yeah maybe I can be your Mom” Takamina said to Erena. They are having a break. They’re both tired. Erena stood up and lay at her bed.

“Sleepy?”

“Yeah” Erena scoot over to the right

“Me too” They were both lying at the bed. Doing nothing and just staring at the ceiling. For a good 10 minutes no one talked.

“Takamina..Do you have a boyfriend?” Erena broke the silence. Her voice crack when she remembered that day.

“Nope. I have a girlfriend” Takamina said proudly

Erena sit up straight and looked at Takamina seriously. Takamina’s smiling face turned into a confused one.

“What? Do I have a booger on my nose?” Takamina joked but Erena didn’t even smile. She didn’t even flinch.

“Why are you hurting me?” Erena asked

“What are you talking about?” Takamina sit up straight too and scratch her head.

“Why are you like that?” Erena asked sadly

“Is there something wrong Erena? Why are you asking me weird questions?”

“Takamina...I like you” Erena said with all of her feelings. She let it all out.

“I like you too! We’re friends!” Takamina smiled. She misunderstood what Erena was trying to say.

“No I mean..Forget it” Erena sighed, feeling thousands of knives are stabbing her right now.

“Okay if that’s what you want”

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Is Takamina being stupid? Who do you want Takamina to end up with? Tomochin or Erena? Do you want to see the part 2?

AND I’m back in the game(lol I just want to say that) Sorry for being hiatus for so long. You know life is hard. We’re all busy sometimes. Busy busy busy that I just want to delete my account here. You can kill me now. I am now going to finish my fanfics little by little. I miss writing stories. I think I’ve been hiatus for 4 or 5 months? I’m not sure. Sorry again! Please accept my apology! Thank you so much! Sorry for grammatical errors too tired to check it. For the prize thingy just forget about it. (I'll be fixing this tomorrow.I'm going to sleep now)
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: Loveforever on November 01, 2011, 08:43:04 PM
of course Tomoooooooo!  :inlove: I like this fic alot!!! thanks alexander, keep up the good work!!!
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: chibi-nyao-chan on November 01, 2011, 10:38:29 PM
waaaa I want the 2nd part !!!!
I like Tomo and Erepyon so... I don't know what Takamina must do !!!!!
She can not have two girlfriends ?? xD

The 2nd part pleaaaase  :luvuluvu:
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: RenaChii on November 01, 2011, 11:06:05 PM
Erepyon love Takamina?!  :panic:

New pairing~  XD
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: haruhi16 on November 01, 2011, 11:52:54 PM
first time to comment here!  :)

I can see you did a lot of rare pairings here! You know what? i was face palming the whole time while reading all your OS!! I admit, i don't really like the pairings here, except for MariMii! i love those troll couple!  XD   

but you did a nice story for the rare pairings here  :) :)

Hope you update soon!  :thumbsup
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: skytsuna on November 02, 2011, 06:12:57 AM
 :w00t: I like the Takamina x Mariko~ My first time seeing it and it's GUD!!!!  :twothumbs

AND..................................... >>> GAME CHEATS PART 1 >>>

Oooooh~ :heart:!!!!! I like it  :love:
It's my first time seeing Erena x Takamina and it interests me~~  XD
And I also like the Takatomo pairing~~~  :inlove:
 :thumbsup It's awesome~!!!
Thank you for updating this~!!!  XD :cow:

 :bow: :bow: Please update the continuous soon  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: kahem on November 02, 2011, 08:16:43 AM
Oh Takatomo and Takapyon!!!
I don't know which pairing chose lol
Takamina is so clueless xD
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: Megumi on November 08, 2011, 06:57:47 PM
Hrrm how did I miss this topic? Cupid’s mission (Mariko x Miichan)

Quote
5.   You tell her things that you do not tell other people. Usually, when are talking to someone we like, we usually slip up and tell them things about us that we do not tell people every day. This may mean that you feel comfortable around her and that you can tell her almost anything.

‘I told her that I’m the one who ate Takamina lunch'

I laughed so hard at this  :rofl:

And for W Matsui story... :shocked  :bleed eyes:

Waiting for your next update   thank you :bow:
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: blueangel65 on November 08, 2011, 09:02:38 PM
WOW!  :w00t: The Game cheats Fic is Nice..  :twothumbs I Like it, heHe!
Even when no Acchan, heHe!  :lol: I like TakaTomo too, but Erena is new..

I don't know too who Takamina wants to be with, but I think TakaTomo is OK, 'coz they are together now..

Huaaah~! It's difficuLt to pick, 'coz it's aLways someone will hurt, and it's a probLem..

weLL! I Like it, pLease update soon.. :) Thanks!
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 1) 11/2/2011
Post by: Alexander on January 04, 2012, 04:23:31 PM
Game Cheats Part 2 Sneak Peak!  :cow: :otomerika: :yossi: YEAH! YEAH! YEAAAAAAH!

“Miho...What is love?” Erena asked her friend. Feeling a little bit blue because of what she saw yesterday.

“Love? Hmm. Let me think first Erena. Ah! To me Erena, love is a game that sometimes you use game cheats to win it but every game there’s always a winner and a loser, that my friend is my definition of love” Miho answered.

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I'm a halfway done with Game cheats Part 2. Yes I was hiatus! I am always hiatus because I'm so lazy. I am terribly sorry for being such a lazy person. I'm so sorry. I am really sorry. Sorry sorry sorry~ I just want to ask something to you guys, What is love? Yes I just asked what is love! YEAH! I need answers! Yeah! I don't know what to write anymore. I want your opinions! YEAH! :D  :twothumbs

Upcoming OS
Game Cheats Part 2 - Takamina x Erena
Untitled - Haruna x Mariko (I am so sorry to the one who request this pairing. I am so sorry. Again, I am terribly sorry for being such a lazy person.. Gomen. Please forgive me. I promise you that I will write this beautifully. Lol. Sorry again  :cry:)
Title: Re: Game Cheats (Part 2 SP) YEAAAAAH!
Post by: Sok on January 04, 2012, 06:03:29 PM
Can't wait for part 2.
And for your question. It depends on the person.
Love can be many things.
But the mostly use explanation for love is when your heart beats faster whenever you're near the person you love. Your heart hurts whenever you think they are with someone else other than you. In love there will always be a loser and winner. A long with love comes pain and hardships. It all depends whether you wanna take the chance and claim that love.
Well takes what I've experienced. In life you have to take risks in order to get what you want. Nothing will be handed to you. Not even love.

Hope this helps you in your writing.