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Title: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 12:40:51 PM
Thank you for this picture Zita-san (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?action=profile;u=53711). I love it.

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BVZWTieCAAAuu5f.jpg)


PART 1


It’s a new day and new fight…. *sigh

Jurina just wake up in the morning, she walk away from her bed and go to the mirror.

Ahh.. yesterday was a most fun tournament in my life. I never feel the pain like this for a long time.

She grin to the mirror, then she go to the bathroom. After she clean up her self, she sit on the floor and took some medicine. She bandaged her wound and bruises well by her self, she seems used to it.

*phone ringing*

"Hello."

Where are you? Are you OK? We have a fight again tonight.” A man talk to her with a worry in his voice.

"I’m OK. Where?"

The place is same as yesterday, 2 AM. Our opponent group still from yesterday.. they claim for re-match. But……

"What?! Are you kidding me?! They already lose last night. " Jurina raise her voice.

They seems wanna take a revenge to you tonight, you better be careful in this match. And…….” That man take a deep breath.

“Just tell me.. no time for a chicken like you.” Jurina seems annoyed.

OK OK.. relax. And for this match, spectators wanna see our match using tools, the referee and judges forced to approve it.”

"Tools? Like our weapon? It’s OK.. piece of cake." She laugh at it.

Are you sure? If you win, you can get an amazing price.. It’s 10 times more bigger than our usual money that we got from 1 match.” He stop talking again and he continue it before Jurina cut him again. ”We can reject it now.. you know… too dangerous.”

"It’s OK buddy, my body already more strong than you imagine, so don’t worry about it.. I love money more than my body. HAHAHAHA. OK my manager, I have something to do. See you tonight, BYE."

She turn off her phone before her manager lecturing her again.

She look around her room, it’s not big.. just fit for 1 person. She sigh.. a deep sigh.

It’s already 4 years since I became a street fighter. Fight for other people’s fun and for their bet. This’s s*cks but OK.. rather than I have no job, starving, and then sleep on street.

*FLASHBACK*

Little Jurina run, run like she chased by someone. She fall and run again. After many times she fell and rise again, this time she can’t stand again, out of breath.. too tired.

She cry but nobody care about her, they keep walking. Tired, pain, thirsty, hungry, and afraid. She didn’t know how many days she had run away from that place.

"Hey.. what are you doing in here?! It’s already midnight.. just go home." A men waking up little Jurina.

Jurina open her eyes slowly, she can’t get up because fatigue. Then she cry, ” I don’t have home”. She cried more louder.

That man shock, without more thinking he pickaback little girl and run to his home. Jurina look confuse because this’s not home… just a place. But she didn’t care and fall to sleep again after that man put her to the bed.

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"What’s your name?" The man from last night ask her with a smile.

"Jurina. Matsui Jurina. 13 years old." She look down to the floor to avoid man’s eyes.

"OK Jurina, no need to affraid to me. Where is your home? I will…."

"I HAVE NO HOME!" Jurina yell to the man. "Just put me on the street again and I will not bother you again. Thank you."

Jurina walk away, she’s still weak but this time she’s sure that she won’t fall again.

"Wait." That man call her. He seems not sure about what just he decided, but he has no choice. He hold Jurina hands, look into her eyes. "From now on… you have a home and a brother to comeback." He stop a while and.. "My name is Takeru. Kobayashi Takeru. 20 years old. I am your brother and this is your home." He smile.

"But.." Jurina too confuse about this. " I don’t even know you."

"You already know me.. I’m Takeru and you’re Jurina Kobayashi. Don’t say anything again. Just go to the bathroom. I will buy your cloth, but not pretty cloth because I have not much money so…."

"Thank you." Jurina hug that man. She cry again, cry because she’s too happy. "Thank you… brother."

*END OF FLASHBACK*

"That manager too worried about me, I am not a child again. I don’t even believe that he’s my brother, I almost think than he’s my mother." Jurina chuckled.

=================****====================

BAAANNNGG!!

Fresh blood come out from Jurina’s head. She wipe the blood that cover her eyes and smile.

"I never been so interested in my life before." She laugh. Then… "Haaaaa!!!!!" Jurina run to the one who hit her with an iron stick.  The boy want to hit again but Jurina grab his stick and kick him at his ‘dangerous part’.

That boy cried out in pain and knelt on the floor. Another boy attack her from behind. Jurina didn’t react to it and turn around with a grin in her face that almost covered by blood. She hit that boy’s face really hard, she hit it over and over until that boy fall.

The judge count until 10, then no rection from both of them. “JURINA WIN!!!!” He raise Jurina’s right hand.

The audience enjoy that match, they yell Jurina’s name over and over. Of course they’re happy about it. Jurina is the stongest in this place, Jurina never defeated this year. Everybody put their bet to Jurina.

She smile and walk down from the ring. “See? I won again. So, don’t worry too much about me, big brother.”

"Yeahh… I feel like a girl when I stand beside you. Your stength is not a joke. Come here, I’ll clean your wound." Takeru already prepared the warm water and a towel.

"No. Please no. I will clean it by my self. Everytime you touch my wound, it’s became 1000 times more pain." Jurina run as quickly as she can.

Takeru shook his head, and laugh. That girl just has her strong and deathly aura on that ring. After that…. she’ll cry like a baby.

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For the name of the heaven, I am bored to the death. Why the match schedule became so rare??!! Is everyone already afraid of me. Come on please… I need some money again. Money? Well… I already have money, more than enough. But, fighting is the most exciting thing in this world.

Jurina grumble by herself. She decide to go to the gym. She pack her needs and take her key. It only need 10 minutes to arrive there, she parked her motorcycle outside.

Here we go…. my 2nd favorite place after match’s ring.

*FLASHBACK*

“Jurina, why do we here?” Takeru ask 15 years old little Jurina. It’s been 2 years since Jurina come to him and bright his day.

Now, he confuse why his sister brought him here.. to the gym?! what??!! Did she insult my ‘manly’?

"I want to became a strong man like you." She look Takeru’s eyes. "So someday, I want to be able to stand on my feet. So……. I can go and I will not be your burden anymore.”

Takeru shock with his little sister’s words. No, she’s not his little sister anymore… she already grow up and it make him sad.

"No Jurina, I don’t feel you as my burden. I am happy that night I stop and ask you, I’m happy to meet you. You’re my reason to life until today. I want you to stay by my side forever. You’re my sister and please not say that thing again to me, OK?"

Jurina shed her tears, Takeru is so nice to her. She can’t imagine herself now without Takeru. What will happen if that night Takeru don’t stop and pick her from the street? Jurina afraid to look back to that days.

"So, why do we here?" Takeru ask again, this time with more soft voice.

"Brother, since I don’t have money to go to school or something to train my brain… so I decided just to train my body. If brain can’t bring me some money, my body will do that job."

Takeru shock. Deathly shock. “What are you talking about?! It’s true that’s my fault.. I can’t give you much money for school. But, it’s not the only way Jurina!!”

"What do you mean?"Jurina try to understand her brother words, the she get it. "No-no-no. That’s not what I mean. Not that job. Do you think I am crazy?!" Jurina’s cheek blush.

"Ahhhh…" Takeru feel relieved.

"I want to become a fighter."

“Wait, What?!! It’s bad too. You’re really insult my manly in here.” Takeru shook his head.

"Yes, you’re so weak. You know that. You even can’t move the cupboard. I always did it for you.” Jurina grinned. Then they laugh together.

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Jurina chuckled everytime she remember that time, the first time she get here.

After she change her clothes, she choose treadmill as her warm up. Usually she pick the place where she can watch the TV while she do the exercise. She’s the only one who’s train there, so she’ll free to choose the channel. She choose a channel who almost show the music programs everyday.

*Music Video Played*

Jurina back to her treadmill. After 1 hour runs, she takes a break and sit in to a chair there.

Our young talented actress who lately got so much positive attention because of her acting and her song, Rena, gone for almost 2 weeks now. Her manager said that this past months she always tell that she want to take a vacation, but because her schedule is so tight.. her management can’t approve her request.

Then, she decided to leave her apartment and sent a message to her manager
‘Don’t worry about me, I just want to go to have my holiday… I will comeback soon.’

We hope she’ll okay out there.

This is our highlight news for tonight. See you tomorrow.


Jurina change the channel, she didn’t have an interest in this kind of entertainment news. Waste of time. Actually, she even didn’t have an interest when it comes to TV. She only watches in here.

——————————- TO BE CONTINUED ——————————————
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on September 16, 2013, 12:52:26 PM
Rena-sama missing? Jurina must save her!!  :frustrated:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: Angeldarke on September 16, 2013, 01:07:47 PM
This fic is cool

I want to see the next cap

please continue
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 01:23:35 PM
Rena-sama missing? Jurina must save her!!  :frustrated:

No.. No.. Please don't stress out sakura_drop-san..
Rena-san is completely fine..  :P2
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 01:28:43 PM
Quote
This fic is cool

I want to see the next cap

please continue

Thx for your support.

I will.
I already wrote the next chapter.. But, it need some revision.:D
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on September 16, 2013, 01:31:01 PM
Rena-sama missing? Jurina must save her!!  :frustrated:

No.. No.. Please don't stress out sakura_drop-san..
Rena-san is completely fine..  :P2

oh thank god...  :mon exhaust:

mhm... then...they must meet, right?  :mon misch:

like, Geki vs Jailbait in a fight?  :mon star:

but then in the end they realize they are better suited as lovers friends than rivals~  :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: gek geki on September 16, 2013, 01:46:27 PM
Rena sama!!! No!!!
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 01:50:31 PM
Rena-sama missing? Jurina must save her!!  :frustrated:

No.. No.. Please don't stress out sakura_drop-san..
Rena-san is completely fine..  :P2

oh thank god...  :mon exhaust:

mhm... then...they must meet, right?  :mon misch:

like, Geki vs Jailbait in a fight?  :mon star:

but then in the end they realize they are better suited as lovers friends than rivals~  :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff:

Actually, It's hard to me to imagine how Rena-san as a fighter.
Well.... gikikara is a little bit too extreme.  :lol:

No.. Rena-san is an actress and a singer in this fanfics..
How can I make her covered by blood?!  :nervous
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 16, 2013, 01:55:54 PM
Your fic was good... Very good...

But your username... Hmm... kinda disturbing... Cause I know that meaning is....

You know....  :P :P :P

Waiting for your next update.. :) :) :)
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 02:00:51 PM
Your fic was good... Very good...

But your username... Hmm... kinda disturbing... Cause I know that meaning is....

You know....  :P :P :P

Waiting for your next update.. :) :) :)

My user name?? It's not as disturbing as I thought..
It's from Indonesian language ---> anakpanti ---> anak panti ---> orphan

Do not misunderstand. :(

Thanks for your support.  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: Minamiyuki on September 16, 2013, 02:06:06 PM
Your fic was good... Very good...

But your username... Hmm... kinda disturbing... Cause I know that meaning is....

You know....  :P :P :P

Waiting for your next update.. :) :) :)

My user name?? It's not as disturbing as I thought..
It's from Indonesian language ---> anakpanti ---> anak panti ---> orphan

Do not misunderstand. :(

Thanks for your support.  :twothumbs

Ohhh..... I thought it's from this..
Tagalog Language ---> anakpanti ---> anak (son/daughter) + panti (underwear)

Sorry for misunderstanding  :) :) :)
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on September 16, 2013, 02:09:20 PM
Rena-sama missing? Jurina must save her!!  :frustrated:

No.. No.. Please don't stress out sakura_drop-san..
Rena-san is completely fine..  :P2

oh thank god...  :mon exhaust:

mhm... then...they must meet, right?  :mon misch:

like, Geki vs Jailbait in a fight?  :mon star:

but then in the end they realize they are better suited as lovers friends than rivals~  :mon inluv: :mon lovelaff:

Actually, It's hard to me to imagine how Rena-san as a fighter.
Well.... gikikara is a little bit too extreme.  :lol:

No.. Rena-san is an actress and a singer in this fanfics..
How can I make her covered by blood?!  :nervous

ah, then...I dunno, so many possibilities...  :dizzy:

I'll leave it for you to pleasantly surprise me  :mon cute:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: sayanee123 on September 16, 2013, 03:34:57 PM
uwoohh, this fic is so interesting!! :w00t:
i can't stop imagining jurina become a street fighter  :drool:
will rena become street fighter too :?
nice fic  :twothumbs please update soon  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 04:39:20 PM
Many of you guess that Rena became a street fighter too.

But No. I think it doesn't fit to her character here. In my fanfics.. she's a singer and actress. So, it's impossible.  8)

Wait a while, OK? I will upload the next chapter tonight.

Thank you for all your support to my first fanfics.  :inlove:
Title: [4 Shots] Promise Me - PART 2 (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 05:03:24 PM
PART 2


Our young talented actress who lately got so much positive attention because of her acting and her song, Rena, gone for almost 2 weeks now.

………………


Bla bla bla. Did they thinks that I am probably dead or kidnaped by someone now?! Silly.. Media only make a tiny thing become a huge-phenomenal-interesting news to their viewer.

I already talk about this vacation before to that old man manager, but he make me like a wild girl in front of my fans. Forget it! Arrggghhh… this is your holiday Rena… no TV and no Phone.

Rena decide to turn off the Hotel’s TV and her phone. She wash her face and brush her teeth. She look to the clock and it show that now is 11.22 PM.

Time to sleep. Goodnight world. See you tomorrow.

She smile and then fall to a tight sleep. Rena feels so tired today, she went to some places in this 2 weeks. She ever planned to travel to other country, but she cancel it because her identity will known. Altough it’s fun but after all… she’s alone.

===================***==================

"Good Morning Nagoya!!!! Yeahhh." Rena throw her pillow to the air. She totally excited about this place, this is the 5th place that she wrote in her holiday list.

I must go to all over this place. I will explore this place, my vacation in here can’t be useless.

Rena take a bath, after that she wearing a t-shirt and jeans, wear a hat on her head, wear a comfortable shoes, then she put the other things that she needs in to her bag.

I must act and look like innocent girl, no one can’t know that I am Matsui Rena.

Rena grin while she looks into the mirror. Then she look around to her room to check if there’re something that she’s forget. After that, she lock the door carefully.

She grab her camera and walk away from that hotel.

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"Ahhh… I am totally tired. So hot. Well… this is a summer anyway." Rena talk to her self. She looking for a place to sit and drink the waters.

She found a park bench to sit, she wipe her sweat. When she drink from the bottle, she notice something and almost spit it out.

This place seems familiar to me. But… I am not really sure.

Rena walk around that place and trying hard to remember it. But it seems useless.

OK, I am give up. My brain and memory doesn’t works well lately. Am I already that old?

She giggled.

"Rena?" Someone call her from her back. It’s a woman’s voice.

I am dead now. Someone recognize me. Why you’re so stupid Rena?!

Rena turn back, ” Hi. Nice to meet you. Sorry I have to go now.” She turn back again and run as fast as she can. That woman call her again in hurry, but Rena didn’t respond it.

I lost 1 fan today, I am sure that she feels dissapointed to me because I ignore her like that. Poor me. Oh, this’s already dark.. I need to back to the hotel and go bath.

Rena decide to walk rather than pick a taxi, she already asked some people and lucky for her that hotel not far from her place now.

When she turn to left, she already see that hotel. The problem now is this alley is too dark. But if she turn around to get there by normal street, it’s become further.

I will take this way. No problem, I am not a kid anymore.

"GIVE US YOUR BAG!!"

Rena shock, she looks around her. Then she’s totally scared now. There are 4 men who surrounding her. She realize that she’s in dangerous situation now.

"NO!! I will not give it to you." Rena hug tighter her bag. She try to be sounds brave although she’s in a pinch right now.

"Well then.. there is no tomorrow for you. HAAAAAAA!!!!" Another men take out his knife then run to Rena’s side.

Someone please help me.. my agency.. my manager.. Anyone, please!

Rena close her eyes and cry. Goodbye world.

BRAAKKK!!

"Ughh… who are you?! do not interfere us or you will die!"

Rena didn’t have a brave to open her eyes. She only cry and hear that voice.

BAAANNNGGG!!! BRAAAKKKK!! PRRAAANNGGG!!

"Ugghhh.." "Sh*t!" "You’ll die tonight!" "HAAAAA..!!"

Rena hear that random voices comes from the robbers.

"Akkhhh… come on guys. Run. He’s too strong!"

After hear that words from a robber, she open her eyes and she looks someone run into the other direction.

"Wait!" Rena shout to that man. That man ignore her, so she run faster to catch up that man. "Wait!! I am afraid! Please don’t leave me alone here!!" After shout that words, Rena cry hardly and stops her run.

She felt her hand was grabbed by someone and she forced to run with that man… A man who save her. Rena have no choice but run along. Altough her hotel near from her place now, but she’s too afraid to back alone now.

Rena realize that she’s dragged in to the odd building. There’re so much people inside. She’s suddenly stop her step.

"Come with me or leave?! You already make me late for this!" Rena shock because that man shout realy loudly to her.

Rena obediently enter that building. She feels uncomfortable with this place, but somehow she trust her savior. That man, pointed a chair in the corner, no one sit around there. “Wait there. I will drive you home after this.”

In this bright room, Rena shock when she look that smile came from her savior. But actually not a smile that make she frozen.

Rena open her mouth when that man turn around from her. ” Wait a minute. You’re a girl???!!!”

Her savior turn back and smile again to Rena. “Just sit and watch me.”

Rena feels that her knees become too weak suddenly. She took a chair that her savior gave to her. And wait…..

No need to wait too long.. her savior show up on the right of the ring. Rena can’t close her mouth.

Sh-she really cool.

Rena not even blink her eyes. Until she realize this audience, call someone’s name.

"JURINA! JURINA! JURINA! JURINA!"

Jurina? Is it her name? Wow, she’s really famous here. With that battle mode, battle clothes, and that cool-scary aura.. no wonder that everyone loves her.

Anyway… what kind of this show? Who’s that boy who show up in the opposite of Jurina’s ring? Wait a minute.. don’t say to me this is a fight match… if that’s true, I will……

BRAAAKKKK!! BAAAMMMM!!

….. die.

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"You looks scary up there" Rena pointed the ring. "Scary…but cool. I don’t know to say it"

"You don’t need to say anything. Where’s your house?"

Rena shock because her savior already back in to her cold-mode.

"I have no home here. My house is far away from this building."

"Do not make me angry and say a lame joke like that. Just tell me, so we can go to our own way after this. I almost get much trouble because of you."

"You mean.. separate? We can’t meet again.. forever?"

"Oh please! Where are you come from? You’re too melancholic. No need for us to meet again."

Rena hide her sad face and say her hotel’s name.

*After 15 minutes*

"You already arrive, I’m going… bye." Jurina turn around.

"Wait!"

"Can you please stop yell at me? We didn’t even know each other name and you already yell at me about 10 times tonight."

"Sorry. So, what’s your last name, Jurina?"

"Kobayashi."

"I see.. Kobayashi-san. I’m Mat-" Rena can’t say her real name, she already keep her identity for these 2 weeks. "I am Tanaka Yuka." She blame herself because of this lie.

"Well.. Tanaka-san goodb-"

BRAAAKKK!!

Jurina fell to the floor, she fainted. Rena quickly call the hotel’s security to bring Jurina to Rena’s room. Rena over panic right now. Rena ask the hotel’s staff to call a doctor to check-up Jurina.

=============== TO BE CONTINUED ================

Last chapter, I made Jurina P.O.V
I make this chapter is from Rena-san P.O.V
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: ezha on September 16, 2013, 05:07:03 PM
waw thanks for update author-san
can't wait for next chapter (tonight) tehe~~
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 05:08:53 PM
Dear All,

Please kindly tell me. Is it possible to change my topic's title.
I want to change it from [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui) become ==> [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 2 (WMatsui)

Please help this newbie.  :bow:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: kurumi on September 16, 2013, 05:10:53 PM
Click "Modify" right at the top of the page (for the first post), and change the Subject of that first post to "[4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 2 (WMatsui)".
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 2 (WMatsui)
Post by: sakura_drop_ on September 16, 2013, 05:20:28 PM
ah, so Juju saved Rena-sama!!!

And now Rena-sama saved Juju!!

 :twothumbs

(I can see Rena-sama as creepy or serious, you apparently need to read more varied fiction  XD but yeah, everyone sees her as gentle and good and that is why some writers love surprising their readers with different kind of Rena-sama  :D )
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - 1 Part (WMatsui)
Post by: Archer1992 on September 16, 2013, 05:20:53 PM
ok this is really intersting

hope you continue soon

thanks ^^
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 2 (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 16, 2013, 06:33:26 PM
ah, so Juju saved Rena-sama!!!

And now Rena-sama saved Juju!!

 :twothumbs

(I can see Rena-sama as creepy or serious, you apparently need to read more varied fiction  XD but yeah, everyone sees her as gentle and good and that is why some writers love surprising their readers with different kind of Rena-sama  :D )

I think, in reality... Rena not really playful with someone who just met her.
I read many fanfics about her, but other writers always write her as a quiet person.

Actually, in this fanfics, I saw Jurina as a cold person.. so it's make Rena always angry to her. :))

Maybe my another fanfics, I can make her as a cheerful girl. :D
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 2 (WMatsui)
Post by: Haruko on September 16, 2013, 08:00:44 PM
love it! Im waiting for the next episode
Title: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 3 (WMatsui)
Post by: anakpanti on September 17, 2013, 04:01:32 AM
PART 3


"Where am I?" Jurina just open her eyes, she looks around and look cautious. Suddenly she feel dizzy and she grab her head.

"Don’t worry, you’re in my room. Here your breakfast, after that you must drink this medicine. Then you can go to sleep aga-".

"I am in your house?! Wait.. what??" Shock Jurina suddenly get rid her blanket and wake up from that bed. "I even didn’t know you. OK, I am leaving now."

Jurina walk into the door without say anything else. Rena can’t blink her eyes after Jurina said that vicious words to her.

"Can you even say THANKS TO ME?!" Rena stood up and shout out loud. She feel that she can’t accept her savior’s cold manner anymore.

Jurina turn back. “This is the 11th times you yell at me. It’s OK, I am a patient boy.”

"You…!!" Rena still can’t believe that she got that rude manner. Rena open her mouth again and ready to yell at Jurina for 12th times, but……

"Ugh…."

Rena look Jurina lean her body to the wall with her hand touch her head. Rena take a deep breath to control her emotion, she can’t angry at Jurina this time.

"Jurina… I told you. You should eat your breakfast and eat your pills. OK?" Rena help Jurina to back to her bed, then she cover that weak body with blanket.

Rena help Jurina to sit in the bed. She pick up a bowl and a spoon. “Open your mouth.” This time Rena not ask Jurina, this’s like an order.

"Wait… what do you wanna do to me?"

"I will feeding you this porridge." Rena see that Jurina lips about to move again, but Rena cut her off. "Don’t you dare to say a single word before you finish eating!"

Jurina obediently open her mouth. When Rena feeding her, she always look Rena’s eyes.. a sharp look. She did not turn away from her. She just focus to those beautiful eyes.

"Don’t look at me like that, stupid." Rena said that without looking back to Jurina’s eyes. She wait… but she feels that Jurina still ignore her warning. "Or.. I will feeding this porridge to your eyes!!”

Jurina sigh. “Is this your hobby?” When Rena looks confuse about her words, she continue to talk. “Is this your hobby? Is it fun for you to yell at someone?”

"No.. I didn’t mean to do that. I just -"

Jurina take the bowl from Rena’s hand. “Thanks Tanaka-san. I can eat this by myself. Sorry, I became your burden.”

Rena can understand how’s Jurina feels about her. But, She forced to shout when everytime Jurina said some cold words.

"You don’t need to show your suspicious looks to me again. This is just my thankful for someone who save me from the robber last night. Make your self comfortable, I want to take a bath. Then buy some food for our dinner.”

====================***======================

Rena open her room’s door, she take off her shoes neatly. She’s a neat girl, she heard that often from everybody around her. But she think... it’s OK. Right? To put your things in order, so you can easily find your stuff.

"Konbanwa, Tanaka-san."

Rena heard Jurina’s voice from inside her room. “Oh, you’re still here. Kobayashi-san.”

"Yeah.. If I go without a word, I’m sure that you’ll yell at me again." She grinned.

Rena smiled to Jurina and then they laugh together.

"What did you buy for us tonight, Tanaka? I am hungry."

"You can sit there and watch that TV while I prepare this dinner for us."

"Ahh.. you’re so nice Tanaka-san. So, Can I enjoy myself in here?"

"Yes. Do whatever you want."

"Will you yell to me again?"

"No, Kobayashi-san. Make yourself comfortable."

"Can I -"

"YES YOU CAN DO IT Kobayashi!! Just leave me alone to prepare this. I AM HUNGRY!" Rena can’t control herself again. Why this girl is so immature  She can beat every strong guy, but she even can’t know how to understand my word!

"Ooopppss.. sorry." Jurina walking backwards carefully.

—————— 30 Minutes Later ——————

"Hmm… yummy! You have a great cooking skill Yuka-chan!" Jurina get her second soup bowl.

"What did you say?"

"Your cooking skill is amazing."

"After that."

"What? Yuka-chan? Can I call you like that? You already shout to me for dozens times since yesterday. Doesn’t it means we’re close now?"

Rena show her gorgeous smile. “Yes we do…. Jurina.”

Our young talented actress who lately got so much positive attention because of her acting and her song, Rena, gone for almost 2 weeks now.

*Show some of Rena’s pictures to their viewer*

………………


Rena almost spit out that soup from her mouth. Oh my God. Please.. I hope Jurina didn’t recognize me. Rena close her eyes and pray.

"This is why I don’t like entertainment. Why did this news said over and over again? So boring! Who’s that childish Rena?! She run away like a coward. So immature." Jurina said that with a high tone, then she turn her face to Rena,"Are you OK?"

"Ye-yes. I ju..ju-just a little tired."

Immature??!! Childish??!! Coward?! Huh?! How dare she said that words in front of me?! Myself! Wait.. hell yeah.. she didn’t know. I still thankful for this, if not.. I can kill her tonight.

*PHONE RINGING*

"Yes Sir!" Jurina say a little joke to her brother.

"We have a fight match tonight, 1 PM. You’d better on time. Hey, are you OK? If not, I can cancel it." Takeru sounds worried.

"No no. I am OK. Who’s my opponent?"

Takayama.

Sh*t. Why that man must show up in my bad condition like this. And I already defeat him many times. But as long as I aware, he’s my only opponent who ever make me fell many times.

"Jurina… you're still sick! you must not- hhmm! hmm!" Rena feel her mouth closed by Jurina’s hand.

"I am in, Takeru." Jurina put her phone to the table.

Them both quite for a while and stare each other.

Rena finally open her mouth, “You’re still sick! Bad condition! If you dare go to that fight today, this is the last time you’ll see me Jurina.”

"Yuka, don’t make this situation more complicated. I am used to fight. I almost fight everyday. I will not lose my honor because of this silly fever."

Jurina stand and pick her bag, then she walk away to the door. “I am leaving, see you tomorrow.”

"There is no tomorrow for us."

"Ha?"

"Like I said, there is no tomorrow for us if you pass that door."

"Don’t be stubborn Yuka."

"I do this for you, I can’t see you covered by blood again.”

Jurina stop her steps. She look down. For a few minutes, Jurina and Rena just silent there. Then…….

"Sorry Yuka, I meet ‘fighting’ long before I met you. Fight is my pride. Well then… goodbye. Take care." Jurina close the door.

No, Jurina. I am the one who should said that. I am the one who met you first. Why do you became like this, Juju-chan?

Rena cry. She cry more and more louder.

=====================TO BE CONTINUED ====================

Well… this chapter only inside Rena’s room.

Because I thought that it’ll make them talk to each other more.
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 3 (WMatsui)
Post by: sayanee123 on September 17, 2013, 12:42:28 PM
eh?  :shocked
why rena said that she meet jurina first?  :?
is rena and jurina are sibling?! :huhuh
it's interesting  :twothumbs
please update soon  :bow: :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 4 (WMatsui) - END
Post by: anakpanti on September 18, 2013, 04:45:29 AM
PART 4

Sound of the closed door is still echoed in Rena’s head. It must be 1 week more she take her holiday, but all that excited feeling already gone now. Before their last quarrel happen, she has a plan to persuade Jurina to travel with her for 1 week. It’s gone now.

Juju, we break our promise. I know that, after this 12 years we even didn’t recognize each other anymore. If not because that oba-san, I also forget about our childhood.

And a thing that she hate most is… Jurina even didn’t say sorry and thanks to her.

I already wait her until this morning but that child didn’t comeback yet. A stubborn girl.

*FLASHBACK*

Well.. Jurina still sleeping. I will go out for a while to buy our dinner. I will not buy too much, because I am not sure if she’ll still in my room or not after I go back later.

Rena decided to not go out in the night to avoid last night thing happen again. When she walks to the market, she remember something.

Ah, that place. The place that I tried to remember yesterday. I will go there for a moment, if I still can’t remember it.. I will go then.

Rena go out again from the market. I will shopping later.

After she walks for about 5 minutes, she arrive there. She look and walk around, try her hard to remember. But… she can’t. Rena sigh. This is useless, I’d better go to the market again, Jurina maybe awake right now and think to leave my room.

When she turned around, she hear someone call her name. Someone who call her yesterday too. Rena turn back and see that person.

It’s a old woman, she looks weak and thin. “Rena.. please don’t run away like that again. I’m really miss you.” After said that, that woman cry.

Rena come to her and give a hug, after that woman stop crying Rena ask, “Do you know me? I mean.. there are a lot of people know me anyway. Are you my fan?” Rena smile to her.

"No. I know you since a long time ago.. even before your showbiz time."

Rena shock. “Since when you know me?”

"How old are you now?"

"24th years old." Rena answer quickly because she really curious about what happen next.

"12 years ago, you still playing in this place. Walk around and give your best smile to everyone. Didn’t you remember that?"

"No. But, I seems know this place. I try to remember but I can’t. Please tell me more about it. What was this place?"

"Ohh.. what happen to you my dear, that showbiz world really spent your time." That old woman smile. "This was your elementary school."

Rena gasp. “This was a school?! But why it seems quiet? I think today is not a holiday.”

"After your family moved to Tokyo, this school was closed. Your family was the one who support this school,everybody told about how lucky you’re to have a rich family like that. This was just an orphan school."

Rena close her eyes, this time she’s sure that she can remember it. That happy scenes comes to her mind one by one. Her tears fell down. She can remember it now, clearly!

One name comes to her mind, she cry more louder now. “Oba-san… where is my little sister? Is she live near from here?”

"Do you mean that girl who share her surname with you? As you remember, she’s an orphan. After this school closed, all students in here registered to one of orphanage foundation, include her. She just a 9 years old girl back then, she cried and  yell your name every night after you moved to Tokyo. 2 months later there’s a family who adopt her."

"Do you know where her family lives? I probably can meet her there."

"Sorry, I heard that when she was 12 years old. Her dad and mom died in a car accident.”

Rena gasp. “Oh my God. She really face the world alone, just by herself. This’s not fair. How dare I forget about this school. About her!” Rena can’t hold her tears anymore.

"But….." That woman continue her words after she take a deep breath. "She came here every year, and she said that if someday you’ll come here… she want me to tell you that she’s really miss you. But this year she didn’t come again, I thought that she really think that you won’t come back anymore. Now, after 12 years.. this day has comes."

"Why she didn’t come to me?? Send me a letter?? Lately, I appeared on TV more often." Rena shed her tears.

"I didn’t know about that my dear. You can ask her by yourself."

"You have her address???!!" She open her eyes widely.

"Yes." That woman laugh and hug that girl.

Rena go to the address that oba-san gave to her. Rena hold that paper with a hope, a paper that writen her little sister address. She’s wondering how her Juju looks now. She must became a pretty lady now.

Finally, she arrived there. She knock the door after she take a deep breath and control her heartbeat.

"Yes? Who is it?" A men answer her knocks from inside.

A men?? Did she already marriage? So that was the reason why she didn’t come to that school this year?? She probably already forget me and focus to her husband who give her the happiness that I can’t gave to her.

That man open the door. “You? You’re the one who make my sister almost late for her match last night, right? Where is Jurina? She has a match again tonight.”

Wait a minute… God, are You try to play a joke with me???

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Rena cry in her sit, she hug her bear doll tight. She cried for hours, so after she arrived at Tokyo.. her eyes looks swelling. Many reporters already wait her outside, as usual they want to get their news.

I am sure that I will become a front page and a highlight news again. Actually, I feels ashame with this kind of popularity. Ah, where is my make-up?! I am dead.. I am dead.

Her manager and some bodyguard already wait her outside too. They try to push some reporter who force to in.

Did you bring some make-up? I just wake up and my face will be exposed.

Rena send a mail to her manager. She receive a reply:

Are you crazy? I already spend a lot of time to bring these bodyguard for you, but you still want a make-up?? Now get out. We will protect you Rena.

She know that there’s no way to hide now, this’s her fault. She must admit that her manager’s patient and she knows that he really want to protect her.

Rena carry her bag and she hug her big doll to cover her face.

This is going to be a long day… Jurina, please try to watch some entertainment news. I know that you don’t like it, but….. I want you to know that I am here.

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Jurina won that match, she throw Takayama’s body to outside the ring. She want to finish this as fast as she can, so she can comeback soon and apologize to her new friend.

Why I feel like this?? Yuka just a new buddy who yell at me in every minute. This is bad. Did I love her? No-no-no.. We just meet and she almost make me get a huge trouble. But beside of that reasons, my hearts still wait for another Matsui.


BAAANNNGGGG!!!

Audience shout with a scary and unbelievable eyes.

"No, Jurina… No!!!" Takeru run in to the ring. "Stop the match. You win Takayama. You got your revenge." Takeru want to kick that boy but fail because judge-man hold him.

Takayama smirk after he hit Jurina’s head with a chair.

"No, Takeru. I can win this. I just wanna make a interesting game for audience." Jurina said that with a weak voice.

"Jurina, you’re the winner. Don’t care about the judge decision." He hug Jurina and carry her to the change room.

"JURINA WIN!!!" Jurina hear that referee’s voice and she fall into a deep dark.

That stupid Takayama, even if this is a street fight match.. but cheating still not allowed. Rule is rule.

==================================================

Jurina open her eyes slowly. She look to the clock in that room.

3PM??!! No!! Yuka…..

She try to sit down but her body seems didn’t agree with her. She can not do anything, just lay there. Feels sorry for Yuka.

"Takeru-san, why don’t you wake me up??!! I need to go to Yuka place!"

"Your body is too weak now, just look how many bandages in your body! Try to remember that YOU ARE A GIRL. You need to take care of your body more." Takeru raise her tone.

"Sorry." Jurina turn back her face.

"It’s OK, that girl. Your friend gave this to me yesterday." Takeru pick a small box. "She said that you must open it by yourself, and I will not allowed to give this to you if I see any bruises in your body. So, take care your body first, then I take care of this." Takeru smirk.

"HEY!! Give it to me!!"

—————————— 3 Weeks Later ———————————

"Takeru, give me that box. As you see, there’s no bruise again. I already take a bath 4 times a day and take care my wounds well." Jurina pout.

"OK my little sister. Catch this." Takeru throw that box and Jurina catch it well.

She open that box.

A bracelet? A Bracelet??!!! No… it can’t be…

Jurina go to her cupboard and open another small box there. Jurina take a bracelet, a same one. Twin golden bracelet.

That girl! Sh*t!

Jurina sit on the floor, she cry.

How can I don’t recognize her? Someone who I miss the most, someone who I love, someone who I wait for 12 years. Stupid. I let her go…. again.

"RENAAAAA!!!!!" Jurina scream. Not a melancholic, but it’s a angry scream.

She must kidding with me??? Play with me?? Joke with me??!! Didn't she know how long I wait her?! I hate her.

“Jurina! Stop yelling.. too loud!” Takeru go to her sister room. He see her sister lay on the floor. He never see this kind of Jurina for a long time, fragile Jurina. “Here.” He give her something.

"A letter. She said to me that I allowed to give this letter to you after I heard you screaming. What an amazing girl! How can she telling you what to do and guess what will you do??!! she even didn’t in this city." Takeru laugh hard.

Jurina look her brother.” Shut up. Just go.”

"OK OK. I just wanna say one thing for you." Takeru stop a while. "I know she’s important to you and I think she also need you. And I just want to reminder you about you’re my sister, forever. I need you but….. I will give you a special permission. So, get that girl OK."

Jurina shock with her brother words, she saw Takeru walk away from her room. She prepare her self to get another surprise attack again.

Dear My Juju,

Are you miss me? (○゜ε^○)

I miss you too my little sister (;゙°´ω°´)

Try to spent your time in your home, you’ll find me. (づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ

After you find me, we will became WMatsui again. ヾ(*´∇`)ノ

Promise me… You will find me. You must.

I will wait you.
( But please don’t make me wait for another 12 years).

Daisuki.

= Matsui Rena=

The first thing that I do if I meet you… I will kick your butt. Just wait.

=======================================================

Rena read her script for a next scene. It’s already 10 PM and she didn’t even eat any spicy meal today.

Ahh… my fans. They always so kind to me. I will ask their spicy meals. But I am afraid that this location will full of their gift to me.

Rena laugh herself. She only decide to update her blog that she didn’t have a meals since morning. After she finish her schedule, she will go to restaurant and eat.

She wanna put her phone, but a comment come. Wow… that was fast. Super fast.

"Wanna go out with me? You can eat spicy meals as much as you want."

Rena laugh… She about to reply that comment but her manager call her name. I think I will reply this later.

——- 1 hour later ——-

She go to her car that parked outside.

" I can’t take it anymore. I am so hungry." She grumbled her self while she open her car’s door. But before she enter her car. Someone grab her waist. She can feel someone’s lips near to her ear.

Someone whisper to her, “Wanna go out with me? You can eat spicy meals as much as you want.”

Rena shock. I am forget that there’re scary fans too, they'll do anything to meet me.

Rena turn around she want to kick that fan, she don’t care if she lost 1 fan tonight. But her foot grabbed first.

"Did you forget that I am a street fighter? You can not easily hit me you know. I give my comment to your blog but you don’t reply it, I think you even didn’t read it. I'm the first who give that comment, how dare you don’t repl-"

A fan words stopped by Rena lips.

"I know. I read that comment. And many of your comment before.. You’re the only one who call me ‘Tanaka-san’ there. Stupid." Rena look in to Jurina eyes, she really miss her.

"So, you aware? There are thousands comment in each post. You are so famous."

"But I am not that famous, there’s one girl didn’t know me after all.. And she need 1 year later to recognize me." Rena pout.

"Yeah.. that was a stupid girl. Her brother always turn on the TV when Matsui Rena appear, but that girl still didn’t aware about that. She found it while she -"

Jurina hugged by Rena,”I don’t care about that. I am still happy that I didn’t spend 11 years more to wait you. I Love You, Jurina. I don't want we separated again.”

Jurina shock with Rena confession. “I should be the one who confess. You even don’t remember me until Oba-san tell you. I wait you that long.”

"I am sorry, dear."

"It’s OK. Let’s eat. You already too tired and hungr-"

Rena give her passionate kiss to Jurina and Jurina kiss back. Jurina broke a kiss.

"Ohhh come on Rena, I have another match fight tonight in Nagoya!"

"What??!! You still do that job??" Rena release her hug and punch Jurina arm.

Jurina grab Rena’s waist. “I am kidding. I am a great dancer now.. a Pro one.”

====================== END==============================

Well... This is the end.
Thanks for your support.  XD
I will try to make a better fan fictions next time.  :fap
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - END
Post by: Angeldarke on September 18, 2013, 05:14:26 AM
Beautiful end  :luvluv1:

I love it  :luvluv2:

Great fic  :nya:

do more Wmatsui rsrs  :ding:

Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - END
Post by: Kazumiyu on September 18, 2013, 06:37:50 AM
The end I... ヽ(;▽;)ノ
That end that Takayama I wanted to
punch him! ヽ(●-`Д´-)ノ
but your fanfic has fantastic ending!
I enjoyed reading it!  ヽ(^Д^)ノ   
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - COMPLETE
Post by: sayanee123 on September 18, 2013, 04:15:05 PM
aaaaah sweeet  :deco:
just i thought, rena and jurina are sibling :lol:
nice ending  :twothumbs
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - COMPLETE
Post by: BbSis on September 18, 2013, 06:17:29 PM
This was so cool! I really liked it!  O/

Thank you for this awesome story o/
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: Wmatsui22 on September 24, 2013, 05:36:30 AM
~Hi Anakpanti :deco:

~Sorry for late comment..

~but this 4 shots WMatsui that you make is very interesting to read

~I really like it.

~I hope you make more...

~thanks
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: anakpanti on September 24, 2013, 09:06:22 AM
~Hi Anakpanti :deco:

~Sorry for late comment..

~but this 4 shots WMatsui that you make is very interesting to read

~I really like it.

~I hope you make more...

~thanks


Thanks for reading.
This was my first fanfic.. and my favorite too..

I always love Jurina's cool side. That's why I made this.
But lately.. after Jurina cut her hair, her tomboyish side changed to cute image.
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: Archer1992 on September 25, 2013, 05:53:26 PM
so lovely

thanks

Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: Kirozoro on January 10, 2014, 05:39:30 PM
They so cute and they dont have to wait another 12 years to find each other
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me (WMatsui) - [COMPLETE]
Post by: Kyuartz on April 30, 2018, 02:17:18 PM
I might be late in reading this
But I love this fic so much
Or more to I love all of your work although I still have some that I haven’t read yet
But I would try my best to leave comment in every single fic
I am trying to finish up all wmatsui fic from you. Haha
Keep up the good work
Title: Re: [4 Shots] Promise Me - Part 4 (WMatsui) - END
Post by: fazmin13 on May 14, 2018, 10:00:46 PM
I love this fic so much..
 :love: