Tentoumu chu! fic eh. What a good stuff I came across. This is rare.
Ryouha-tan and Okada fan here~
This is like a Sailor Moon x Precure x Symphogear x AKB0048!Tentoumu-chu AU in my opinion. No offense here.
I think it would be better if you take some time on writing a lengthy narrative paragraph on action scene.
I imagined Kaiba looks like that Kaiba from Akuma no Riddle (it's an animanga, the anime is aired this spring).
Yay a new fan~ Glad you like my fic. And I'm pretty surprised you see all these references.
I just love mixing mahou shoujo and idols together. I don't know why!
Eh? Does Kaiba really look like that? I imagined a bit different, but think what you like.
BTW: I'm an Okada-fan, too. I just love her. She's so majime(or probably just super-duper caring), and she's sweet, too. Plus, she's an outstanding actress. Who couldn't love her?