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Broken [JuriMayu sister's relationship][OS]
« on: February 06, 2013, 12:34:25 AM »
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Re: The Heart [OS] [Atsumina/Atsuyuu]
« Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 01:34:28 AM »
Yup, I teared up :P
Really great one shot. So much emotion and love in those few sentences, it was beautifully written :)

Great story, thanks for writing it :D You write really awesome fics! Looking forward to ur future fics and of course the continuation of 48 days :D
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Re: The Heart [OS] [Atsumina/Atsuyuu]
« Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 01:41:53 AM »
its a oneshot?
is a really good history and interesting
thanks.  :twothumbs

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Re: The Heart [OS] [Atsumina/Atsuyuu]
« Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 08:12:47 AM »
Very heart-felt story.... Ah such a sad ending but at least comforting...

Yeah... Atsuko at least can say her good bye to Minami...

Yuko rejecting Minami's heart subconciously so Atsuko able to forget about Minami and moving on with her life...

Very good fic there... Thank you for the OS.

Can't wait to see your other creation

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Re: The Heart [OS] [Atsumina/Atsuyuu]
« Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 10:38:27 AM »
This story so sad but it's awesome
I used to watch movies chinese similiar story like this but i forget what the title of movie.
Thank you for write this fic

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Re: The Heart [OS] [Atsumina/Atsuyuu]
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2013, 12:45:54 AM »
It's a pretty sad story while I was proofreading (somewhat, LOL) it.  :badluck:

I wonder what Acchan's going to do right now?  :dunno:

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Re: Valentine's day OS - Please, don't leave me. [Sayacchu- Maachun/Sayanee]
« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2013, 11:56:56 PM »
The beginning was a bit of a troll to me. MOU....  :temper:

But I really like it! The two girls are cute~  :luvluv2:

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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #7 on: March 07, 2013, 09:59:48 AM »
Mayu in a situation had to be real despite her outward personality although Yuki was strong enough to corral the CG into her own.
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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #8 on: March 07, 2013, 10:03:28 AM »
Hum... Yes ? - didn't understand what you say -.-" sometimes I'm such a baka in english - Sorry  :nervous

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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #9 on: March 07, 2013, 10:10:53 AM »
Hum... Yes ? - didn't understand what you say -.-" sometimes I'm such a baka in english - Sorry  :nervous

I was just trying to run down the story in my mind and MaYuki interacting with each other
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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #10 on: March 07, 2013, 11:56:21 AM »
It is realist...
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #11 on: March 07, 2013, 04:32:12 PM »
I hate AKB's scandals  :banghead: :banghead:
but I like this story  :D
I'm waiting for the season 2 of your ongoing FanFic  :deco:

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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #12 on: March 07, 2013, 05:51:34 PM »
awww poor mayu doesn't want to lose yuki :cry:, and i agree mayuki should be together  :yep:
yuki will always be by mayu's side whatever happens to them :deco:
i hated that scandal about yuki, its all lies :angry:
thanx for the fic :cow: :bow:
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Re: It’s the only place where I need to be. [Mayuki][OS]
« Reply #13 on: March 08, 2013, 03:53:20 AM »
In uncertain times like this, MaYuki fans need a story like this to reassure us. Thank you very much for this one-shot :) I share the same thoughts as you regarding Mayuyu's feelings towards Yukirin's "scandal". I truly hope that they will solve any issues they have soon (if something really happened) and return to being the pair of happy and silly buddies. Mayuyu's birthday is this month so Yukirin had better do something to get her cyborg back!

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Re: Show must go on [OS]
« Reply #14 on: March 17, 2013, 06:31:18 PM »
I like Battle Royale! And this is.... amazing. I have no words I can say.

The pairing? Feels like MaYuki. :3
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Re: Show must go on [OS]
« Reply #15 on: March 17, 2013, 06:35:57 PM »
well it wasn't too much of a challenge per say more of the writers and readers thinking :nervous

I like how it is setup although the final phase might be a total blood bath

Also, I like BR too :nervous
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Re: Show must go on [OS]
« Reply #16 on: March 17, 2013, 06:51:45 PM »
i like your mayuki fic, it's just, somehow, warms my heart.
i really wish they can be together again, and hopes yukirin didn't graduate in the near future.

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Re: Show must go on [OS]
« Reply #17 on: March 17, 2013, 11:36:06 PM »
Battle Royale is seriously one of my very few books that I love to death~  :farofflook:

Anyway, this is an interesting concept and indeed, I feel like it's Mayuki.  :on lol:

You should make a continuation of this or something.  :on GJ:

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Re: I can't without you [Mayuki/JuriMayu][OS]
« Reply #18 on: May 26, 2013, 08:57:21 PM »
This is so sad

but in the end it is a beautiful OS

She loves her but she cant throw a other live for it
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Re: I can't without you [Mayuki/JuriMayu][OS]
« Reply #19 on: May 26, 2013, 09:07:10 PM »
I agree with Elo. It is pretty sad, but in the end, Mayu decided to stick with Yuki and leave Jurina as her past. :panic:

Ah-This fiction made my heart go all over the place while I was reading it over. Thank you for writing it and hope to see more of your work! :deco:

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