We need more Kojiyuu and Tomotomo fanfics :peace:LOL ive never seen anything TomoTomo before XD unless i'm passing it :O
LOL ive never seen anything TomoTomo before XD unless i'm passing it :ODark-Atrox has wrote about the pair. :yep:
Dark-Atrox has wrote about the pair. :yep:Oh thanks! I'll check it out later, i like dark-atrox's work LOL never really commented though.
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LOL Alexiel is a girl's name xDD
You shouldn't be surprised Sora-kun! Or should i say Sora-chan?
Everyone thought you were a boy at first too!! XD
from sorakamiya on: April 12, 2011, 02:26:41 PMUmmm... you know, I'm also wondering too 'cuz she (FoF sama's a girl too!!! ehehehe :] :gmon shy: ) somewhat promised me that she'll update her POF soon but... well... I'm not really forcing her, but anyway... ehehehe :mon sweat:
btw where FoF san? is anyone know? :? :?
from Mari07 on: April 10, 2011, 08:54:37 PMI hope you're now taking me seriously even if I'm using a lot of emoticons... ('cuz me serious :mon wtfmm:)
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You still make me laugh xDDD sorry, i couldn't take you seriously with all those emoticons
from pretend_2besome1on: April 10, 2011, 09:15:49 PM
^^ Readers have their own preference when it comes to fanfic, so even if you think your fics may not be good, for others it could be great.
And I did say I like your fics, right?
from ShibuyaDokiDoki April 11, 2011, 06:34:25 AMThanks a lot guys for supporting my fics.... :mon inluv: :mon crazyinlove: I'll try harder.... huhuhu :mon waterworks: I'm soo touch for everyone who's supporting me....
alexiel17... you a cool author... LOL trust me! just keep trying your best~ i do like our fanfics... :D
from sorakamiya on: April 11, 2011, 09:02:12 AMWadaya mean 'bout "even alexiel17 also girl?? :shocked :shocked :lol:" Is it not believable? :mon wtfmm: hehe :lol: :lol:
wooow.... i kind a surprise too that most of the member in here are girls... XD XD even alexiel17 also girl?? :shocked :shocked :lol:
btw i love all your fict guys... :grin: :grin: so please keep update :thumbsup :thumbsup and alexiel17 where is my b'day present? :smhid
Posted by: eSsIe21on: April 15, 2011, 11:47:25 PM
can someone made a fiction about mariko-sama and minegishi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D...., please some one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ummm... you know, I'm also wondering too 'cuz she (FoF sama's a girl too!!! ehehehe :] :gmon shy: ) somewhat promised me that she'll update her POF soon but... well... I'm not really forcing her, but anyway... ehehehe :mon sweat:
Wadaya mean 'bout "even alexiel17 also girl?? :shocked :shocked :lol:" Is it not believable? :mon wtfmm: hehe :lol: :lol:
And bout this "alexiel17 where is my b'day present? :smhid"............ I have nothing to say.... Pressure much? :smhid :smhid hehe :lol: Ok I'll try :)
I know that some of you missed me... :wriggly: I'm sometimes a narcissist aren't I? *jokes* ehehehe :lol: :lol:
.can someone made a fiction about mariko-sama and minegishi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D...., please some one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i luv them!!!!!..... :banghead:
Currently waiting for Katura, FoF (where did she go?), Immo and Japanime to update
Hehe :>
QuoteUmmm... you know, I'm also wondering too 'cuz she (FoF sama's a girl too!!! ehehehe :] :gmon shy: ) somewhat promised me that she'll update her POF soon but... well... I'm not really forcing her, but anyway... ehehehe :mon sweat:
owgh, so FoF san girl too... nice lots of girl member here.... :twothumbs :twothumbs
^ Ya you're correct; they registered their marriage a while ago, and now they've finally held a reception.LOL im one of those people-who-watched-mendol-first-and-then-became-a-AKB-fan LOL but then it died after a week. Later i watched MG and then i became really hooked to akb, so does that count?
I like reading ppl's accounts of how they became fans of AKB48; there are a handful that watched Mendol first, and then found out about the group. I find that interesting. :yep: I have yet to find a fan that watched MG first.
There are 48 members in AKB, and even 48 members in SKE ! Then... Why it's always the same pairings ? xDBecause they are the most popular pairing and people like write about their favorite one, I guess. But if you want you can give me 2 names and I'll try to do something ^^
There are a lot of possibilities then ! xD
I'm complaining but I'm happy to read your fanfics ! =P
Gakeri -thats true... but somehow... i cant see the pairings (KojiYuu, AtsuMina, MaYuki, SaeYaka, W Matsui, etc etc etc) being split up and paired off with others... somehow i just cant... LOL :wth maybe im just weird that way... :sweatdrop:
Don't need to slip up them ! =PAhhhh! I see what you mean now! LOL yea i agree~ but arent they already kinda like a couple? I thought i saw it somewhere... :wth LOL or i could be seeing things :sweatdrop:
I wanted to say... Making new pairings with others girls ! ^^
For example, Akicha X Sasshi are a good pairing ! Or... Sasshi X Kitarie or, Reinyan and Chikarina ! xD
But you make me dream with Anna and Kumi's pairings ! I have never thought they can be together before I read your fanfic !
And now, they are one of my favourite pairings ! *_*
LOL i'm glad you like that pair... i kinda just threw them together cause i thought they would look cute after seeing a picture with them together... :yep:
You're right ! They are so cute ! *_*
Oh ShibuyaDokiDoki, I have a question.. Will you continue "High School Love Story" with W Matsui and AnnaxKumi ?
You're right ! They are so cute ! *_*
Oh ShibuyaDokiDoki, I have a question.. Will you continue "High School Love Story" with W Matsui and AnnaxKumi ?
LOL want me to? :O2
You're right ! They are so cute ! *_*
Oh ShibuyaDokiDoki, I have a question.. Will you continue "High School Love Story" with W Matsui and AnnaxKumi ?
LOL want me to? :O2
@akinyan Welcome to the world of AKB fanfiction. Nice to meet you too and we'll try not to eat you alive.
I said we're going to TRY not to do so. Fortunately, I'm not like that...all the time. Anyways! Enjoy your stay here and go read some fanfics~
Law #3 This is the land of the dropping pants, so there’s no doubt that there will be promiscuous scenes in fanfics. Any chapter or one-shot with a fairly questionable moment should be sent to me for screening. Usually, sex scenes that are vague enough on details pass the test and are allowed to be posted. If I see something TOO direct like “she slipped her fingers in her lover’s –bleep- whilst biting her -bleep- “ I will send it to the perv xDLemons/Pervs are allowed, they just need to be posted in the right place. If you're not sure about what's okay or not, then you can either PM me or Barrie the questionable scene/chapter.
- Post your explicit perv stories here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=155.0)
- Information on how to gain access to the Perv area (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=1002.0)
:hee: Could anyone make a Takatomo fanfic please~~ :on cny1:Well, Loveforever's Who are you? fic also has TakaTomo in it i think... :dunno: Tomochin as the love rival there..
The ending could be Atsumina but I kinda want Tomochin as the love rival there~~ :luvluv2:
:onioncheer: I'll be cheering for ya~ Ganbatte! :onioncheer:
@caecus : welcome to Jphip and nice to meet you to caecus-san...I second that! Everyone here is super nice.
Hi everyone. :)Hi again, anzai48-san! :D
I took many ideas/slank/quotations/lyrics from here and there. Is that count as plagiating? I hope not. :cry: (I develop my own re-imagination from the sources).Since I saw none of the comments in your thread telling you about it, I assume what you did doesn't count as plagiarizing. How about you, everyone?
And who are the male writers here?I admit male writers are rare here, yet I'm one of these rarities. :grin: The only other males I know are the already-said Alexander-san and caecus-san (btw, welcome to jphip, caecus-san!)
Not that I'm sexist or gender-bias, but it will be interesting to observe how differ the male writer and female writer will be when it come to writing-style,
and their mind/imagination.
I took many ideas/slank/quotations/lyrics from here and there. Is that count as plagiating?If the ideas/lyrics make up a strong part of your work, then it's usually a good idea to give credit to the original author/artist, or let your readers know that you've been inspired by others' works :)
i never write about AtsuMina and KojiYuu though i want to lol (someday i'll write about them)
Hello.
Lately, I've been spazz over Shiichan (Oya Shizuka) and Shawako (Hata Sawako). I don't remember since when, but they are awesome in their own way!
So... if there's anyone who know and or have a or some fic about them, tell me, please?
Thanks.
somebody, anybody...can i request takatomo? LOL :hiakhiakhiak:Gah!!! TakaTomo!!! :mon bleed2: So irresistible!!! :mon mischief: but I must stay loyal to AtsuMina!!!! :mon XD:
(http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m0rek6VkqM1r92w83o1_500.png)
:on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
somebody, anybody...can i request takatomo? LOL :hiakhiakhiak:Gah!!! TakaTomo!!! :mon bleed2: So irresistible!!! :mon mischief: but I must stay loyal to AtsuMina!!!! :mon XD:
(http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m0rek6VkqM1r92w83o1_500.png)
:on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
Hello.
Lately, I've been spazz over Shiichan (Oya Shizuka) and Shawako (Hata Sawako). I don't remember since when, but they are awesome in their own way!
So... if there's anyone who know and or have a or some fic about them, tell me, please?
Thanks.
could you be an Oya fan? =o because I am xDD
Hello everyone I'm new here :)) Please take care of me from here forth.
With my towel, I wipe away the sweat that has accumulated around my neck. Everyone has gone home already, leaving me alone to practice on my own. Usually I practised my singing, and then I move onto the dance routines, overall an extra two hours. I try to fit as much practise in as much as possible. It wasn’t that I wanted to be the best. I just want to be at my best.
The different;
- more dramatic (kidnapped, accident, parent reject their marry, and others)
- even they love each other but some reason they dont get each other too easily (I read some fic in this forum, they dont get their lover too easily)
- having bad ending (someone died, get separated by other dimension and ...)
- less action fic on this forum ( write to much about sex due I know is others request but i think is too over )
Also, you aren't gonna get banned for your post. Your post did help in a way for the authors to see the differences, though, try searching more around the thread, you'll see a lot of happy fic and some variations around. :)
And, I hope I didn't sound a bit offensive or snarky there, I do not mean any harm or offenses, just my own side from what I understood from what you have posted. :sweatdrop:
No, you won't get busted.
Instead of busting you, I would like to thank you because you just give me more ideas to write in my fic. :D
(Let's see, how about Geki kidnapping Yuki and torture her?)
Or make Geki accidentally bite Yuki and kill her?
Or make Sasshi got into a car accident and kill herself?
Well, I don't know if you like vampire fic.
But I have a kidnapping-scene (Sasshi/Rabu) and a lot of fight-scenes, death scenes, bad endings, S&M, also a hilarious sex problem (Atsumina).
If you want to see your oshis fight each other, got tortured (Acchan & Airin), even got killed (Shinoda Mariko), then you might check my fic. :)
But then maybe you have already read it, and you think it's boring. XD
Anyway, I'm open for critics.
EDIT:
And if you want to see your kami-oshi acting like a real b****, you might check Basket Case (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=31804.0) by FOF. :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
It's not the genre or the story that becomes the problems.
It's the amount of some mainstream pairings that was used too much as the main characters.
Even though the story is different, it's the characters that made it boring.
Too much using them for fanfics may cause the dead end and lack of creativity for the authors of the fandom.
Maybe lots of people likes it, the mainstream. But if they read it over and over again, they would bored and then left the fandom.
Even though the whole stayed or left is their own decision to make... But from my experience as one of the authors in FanFiction.Net, it won't do any good.
It's like claimed yourself as an otaku but the truth is you just knew some animanga. Moreover, those you knew is what people could say as 'already popular'. Shame on it.
It's not the genre or the story that becomes the problems.
It's the amount of some mainstream pairings that was used too much as the main characters.
Even though the story is different, it's the characters that made it boring.
Too much using them for fanfics may cause the dead end and lack of creativity for the authors of the fandom.
Maybe lots of people likes it, the mainstream. But if they read it over and over again, they would bored and then left the fandom.
Even though the whole stayed or left is their own decision to make... But from my experience as one of the authors in FanFiction.Net, it won't do any good.
It's like claimed yourself as an otaku but the truth is you just knew some animanga. Moreover, those you knew is what people could say as 'already popular'. Shame on it.
True, there may be too much atsumina, too much kojiyuu, too much mayuki, too much wmatsui and gekiblack and all that, but can you count on how many of them are 'original', 'unused', and most of all well written ? I'm not pointing out any names.
Everyone can improve as long as they continue to write, and I admit most of the fanfics now are pretty bad. Some are out of character, some doesn't use correct grammar, some even write in script form! (Acchan:, Takamina: yada yada yada). These are all bad, they're all literally but barely correct writing.
Reading other people's correct writing make people correct their own, this is why people should read ones that are well written.
You see, there are fandoms with limited characters, such us So Nyeo Shi Dae, Morning Musume and other groups that do not have hundred of members. You're only saying that because there are a lot of possibilities in the 48 group because there are a lot of members, and you want dynamics.
But that's just you being selfish with your opinions.
The fact is, most writers in this fanfic section commit 'cliche' plots. No matter who they use, if they are out of character (acting similar to someone not themselves) and the same concept is written over and over again I doubt you'd enjoy any.
You're being subjective instead of figurative, because your opinions are your wants and not what is really happening.
True, there may be too much atsumina, too much kojiyuu, too much mayuki, too much wmatsui and gekiblack and all that, but can you count on how many of them are 'original', 'unused', and most of all well written ? I'm not pointing out any names.
Everyone can improve as long as they continue to write, and I admit most of the fanfics now are pretty bad. Some are out of character, some doesn't use correct grammar, some even write in script form! (Acchan:, Takamina: yada yada yada). These are all bad, they're all literally but barely correct writing.
Reading other people's correct writing make people correct their own, this is why people should read ones that are well written.
But because of the demands of selfish people like you, the writers who write well have pretty much disappeared now, because this fandom really have selfish fans.
Well that's all.
1- I think it's a bit harsh to repeatedly call caghaunt "selfish". I understand an author's frustrations. I, too, have been inundated by requests from such "selfish" people. Yet, keep in mind their disadvantage and frustrations. You may like a popular pairing and so you have numerous stories available to you to read. A fan of a less popular OTP might be considered lucky to find just a couple stories to read.
If your OTP is underwritten and you come across an author whose writing you enjoy, I don't think it can be considered selfish of you to ask if he could write a story about your OTP. However, DO NOT bombard that author with requests. If he tells you no, simply accept it. If you're desperate, try to go one more step and write your own story about your OTP.
Keep in mind that authors tend to write about the pairings they enjoy. NO AUTHOR IS OBLIGATED TO DO OTHERWISE.
"Fan Fiction Readers' Ethics".
-DO NOT repeatedly make requests of an author. "No means no."
-DO NOT pester an author to make updates. Contrary to what seems to be popular belief, writing a good story is not easy.
-DO NOT denounce a story simply because you do not like the pairing, setting, plot, etc. No one is forcing you to read it.
-DO leave positive messages. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hey guys o/ I'm kinda new here. I'm having so much fun reading your fanfics here o/ that fired me up to write my own fanfic, so I don't know if this is the right place, I'd like to ask for help ;D I already have the idea, but I feel I miss some details... Can someone please help me? *.*
arisa03, you might agree with me on a concept which I will label "Fan Fiction Readers' Ethics".
-DO NOT repeatedly make requests of an author. "No means no."
-DO NOT pester an author to make updates. Contrary to what seems to be popular belief, writing a good story is not easy.
-DO NOT denounce a story simply because you do not like the pairing, setting, plot, etc. No one is forcing you to read it.
-DO leave positive messages. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
"Fan Fiction Readers' Ethics".Those are some great ethics points Hitobo, and think everyone should adhere to them.
-DO NOT repeatedly make requests of an author. "No means no."
-DO NOT pester an author to make updates. Contrary to what seems to be popular belief, writing a good story is not easy.
-DO NOT denounce a story simply because you do not like the pairing, setting, plot, etc. No one is forcing you to read it.
-DO leave positive messages. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Also, this is completely unrelated to the discussion, but I've been thinking that this forum needs a bit of organization. (You have all been very productive!) Perhaps some sub-classification pages? One for ~48 group member-centered stories, one for Majisuka Gakuen themed stories, and one for crossover/other stories?
Until next time,
Hitobo
...on the topic of Out of Character
I don't touch OOC that much, because a person's characterization of a human being is their own perception of that person. I believe in fanfic writing, there isn't such a thing as 'Out of Character' but just a 'difference in opinion.'
Quote( write to much about sex due I know is others request but i think is too over )
So the point is .... is it okay for me to continue those scene or what? Demn! Actually I want to do it in a romantic way, yes I had wrote too many AtsuMina make out scene in my fiction but it's PG-16 I think? I'm straightforward with my word just in PERV section... so now I'm doubted is it okay to continue make out scene in my story? I just think that the reader only read the make out scene part in my story...urgh.... shoot! What a cheap story that I have in my fiction...ARGH??!!! :OMG:
BUT THE TRUTH IS I STILL LOVE MY ATSUMINA MAKE OUT SCENE IN MY STORY LOL!! :bigdeal:
I know I'm new here but I've been lurking around forever and actually seeing a proper discussion going on here is rather... surprising :nervous
...on the topic of Out of Character
I don't touch OOC that much, because a person's characterization of a human being is their own perception of that person. I believe in fanfic writing, there isn't such a thing as 'Out of Character' but just a 'difference in opinion.'
It's true that for RPF the characterization is mostly our perception of that person but I do believe that OOC-ness can still happen. Maybe it's a bit harder to classify OOC-ness for RPF, but for me, there are unique traits of the girls that we know which distinguish them from the other girls and when I see writers write differently.. I would still consider that as going OOC. Just think of it, if there is no OOC-ness then you can just easily swap the characters between fics since there is nothing that can differentiate them with each other.
I'm not sure if I have gotten my point across clearly but I'd just like to point that out. And characterization is really one of, if not the most, important elements in a fic for me. :)
Also, I stated that with the "Unique traits" also as a default. Sure, the girls have unique traits with them and it's a default, and that's how we classify them. However, how they react in certain scenes, such as sex scenes, surprises, drunk scenes and such, is a matter of our own perception.
Like if I wrote a drunken Kojima Haruna as a more honest person, you can't tell me "That's OOC." because in my perception she'll be an honest person when drunk, but you may or may not agree with me. But I still wrote her as the "Quiet but Troll" Type of character, which is her default characteristic.
I'm not sure if I stated this well, but that's what I meant by my previous post. I apologize if it was confusing.
Is not wrong for those sex scene, but just hope dont be writen too much of it,
some how I scare that there are some fiction with nice story line but end up with all sex scene,
I know that sometimes author really dont have idea to continue the fiction,
when no idea for the fiction, (yeah u can add some sex scene for getting idea or comment from reader)
but not too much of the sex scene for it.
Unfortunately, it is my belief that this happens too often. It seems to be that the popular opinion is that smut = a good story. As stated in one of my earlier posts, I am not impressed when writers use smut as a crutch. (By this, I mean that they use it to 'save' or 'support' a story.) Yes, smut is popular, and yes, its inclusion will get you more hits, views, and comments. However, if tactlessly placed/used, a smut scene (or scenes) can ruin a good story. Honestly (and yes, this is just my opinion), smut only has a place in a story when that story's sole purpose is to be a smut story.
Not sure if you get my point there, it's pretty hard to explain. But I'm not that mean. I'm not gonna bite every author who writes my girls differently than what I thought of them. What really frustrates me is that some authors who potray them like, for lack of a better word, horny pornstars. :smhid I have too much respects for the girls and seeing them like that, even if it's just in fiction, makes me... sad. :(
These two opinions, I couldn't agree more. I know scenes like that fish out more comments(oh this sad, sad reality)and naturally authors would like to get more feedback from their readers but, a smut, for me, is never a good story. Now, if you write a story with mature scenes that will help to expand the plot, that my friend, sounds like a better story to me.
Call me old fashioned, call me a hopeless romantic, but I'd prefer a nice romance story full of emotions rather than some tasteless smut/make out/sex/ scenes.I thought we have porn and literotica for those dirty things....But yeah, if people still wanna go read all those things, I'd prefer if they just keep it intheir headthe perv section.
What happened to the good ol' romance anyway? Surely it's not dead? :nervousOr kids these days prefer to just get it on and over with. LOL
Lmao, yes, this seriously. True, if you write romance, you can't help but have some 'smut' as well, because even if a lot of people doesn't believe, sex is a necessity in romance. But that doesn't mean they're always sexually frustrated towards each other. That just by standing beside each other, they already want to make a jump on them and take them there lmao.
These two opinions, I couldn't agree more. I know scenes like that fish out more comments(oh this sad, sad reality)and naturally authors would like to get more feedback from their readers but, a smut, for me, is never a good story. Now, if you write a story with mature scenes that will help to expand the plot, that my friend, sounds like a better story to me.
Call me old fashioned, call me a hopeless romantic, but I'd prefer a nice romance story full of emotions rather than some tasteless smut/make out/sex/ scenes.I thought we have porn and literotica for those dirty things....But yeah, if people still wanna go read all those things, I'd prefer if they just keep it intheir headthe perv section.
What happened to the good ol' romance anyway? Surely it's not dead? :nervousOr kids these days prefer to just get it on and over with. LOL
Sorry for butting in, but I do think the same with you. It's kinda sad when you saw a nice story and in the end it was turned into a smut story :banghead:
Perhaps I am a hopeless romantic, but I rather read a romance with a minimal bed-scenes rather than a smut
Lmao, yes, this seriously. True, if you write romance, you can't help but have some 'smut' as well, because even if a lot of people doesn't believe, sex is a necessity in romance. But that doesn't mean they're always sexually frustrated towards each other. That just by standing beside each other, they already want to make a jump on them and take them there lmao.
Yeah... I agree sex IS a necessity inromancelife, but when I read a story full of it (smut) that is just... kinda destroying the story. :smhid But, that's my opinion.
Quote from: Sieka on Today at 02:49:22 PMQuoteI however don't agree that sex is a necessity in one's romantic life.
I could not agree more.
In regards to smut in fanfiction, as many of you have said, first-and-foremost: leave it in the perv section.Being a tasteless wide-opened vulgarity or a beautifully wrapped sweet romance, there's already the proper place and rules that offer us the chance to write those kind of things. After this, it's personal taste.
If you're not sure whether or not your story can be on the main board, please check the, "The Golden Laws of JPH!P Fanfiction" thread.
Smut only has a place in a story when that story's sole purpose is to be a smut story.
We are of the same opinion, it seems. I too don't often read total genderbend stories (wherein some members are presented as males from start to finish) for these very reasons. (I do enjoy some cross-dressing stories. I believe many of us here are fans of Mendol.)
In my mind, if one wants to read stories about AKB's members, then one likely wants to read stories about the girls as girls. Personally, when it comes to most total genderbend stories, the changing of a member's physical sex strikes me as a statement that the girls being in same-sex relationships is somehow not acceptable or 'good enough'. It just... irks me. (Interestingly enough, most of the total genderbend stories I've read (which isn't many) are laden with sex scenes.)
However, in writing fan fiction, the truth is that we often must deny some facts of reality. In regards to genderbending, some authors have chosen to change that certain aspect about the members. Thankfully most of the authors here are kind enough to mark their genderbend stories, so they can easily be skipped over if one so desires.
^ Please stop mentioning my name!!! :angry1:
@moonchild : Do, jjinja chugulle~ :shifty:
...also I want to be honest in here, that eherm (please don't be mad at me, okay~) I'm reading only some interesting part in ATSUMINA story, I'm not reading all of it.... it's not like the story is not interesting or something, it's because I'm lazy to read and hate to read a long story~ yeah! I'm the bad one in here I know~
One more thing, sometime I can't really understand their paragraph when they're using a beautiful words in writing a story, in your case I think your words erm, quite easy to understand but maybe I think I must read it again to understand the story line? hehehe~
PS: I'm not the person who like to read a novel~ I'm the person that love reading an anime manga and comics ...
No offense taken. I know my story is a bit lengthy and that not everyone has a taste for long stories.
To be honest, I have a hard time writing short stories because in my head everything becomes so intricate.
As for vocabulary: if ever anyone has trouble understanding something in one of my stories, please don't hesitate to inquire about it. I'll try my best to explain.
amm can someone help me...
when i tried to read this links http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34388.new#new) :banghead:
i can never read it... why.. can someone tell me :thumbup
thanks
In regards to ~48 fan fiction, what kind of stories do you like to read and in which settings?
Note: This is not an inquiry about pairings.
Different genres include but are not limited to: Action, Adventure, Angst, Crime, Crossover, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Genderbend, General, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-fi, Suspense, Supernatural, Tragedy
Different settings include but are not limited to: Family, Historical, Military, Real-world, School/University
@paperbagkun: (Please click here.) (http://youtu.be/e-yuqhK-WLw?t=1m14s)have a nice link there...
I'd like to ask about, Story formats. Mostly fanfics are written in prose and paragraph formats. Shouldn't it be part of the rule that "Script Format" stories should not be allowed? Like for example, fanfiction.net does not allow these because they are not prose. I am only asking tho and maybe suggesting on the side /o/Good topic of discussion. Personally, I don't like script format. I would like to get an input from the community. Should they stay or go?
Takamina: But that's nonsense! (throws the book on the ground)
"But that's nonsense!" Takamina said as she threw the book on the ground.^That would be a form of prose but isn't exactly improving the quality of writing that much its just rearranging the order in which you type
So... everyone is here just to say they wrote something? What about the readers? Sure scripted things are easiest to read when you have limited English. But writing in prose improves the writer and improves the reader because it convinces them to consult words to the dictionary and learn more.I didn't mean that in anyway in fact I only read and have no intentions of writing any stories and as for improving the readers I can sort of understand what you mean but can't really comment any further since I've never had that problem. However I do agree with the fact that laziness isn't the most satisfying excuse to hear
I see what you mean about the idea of forcing writers to improve by removing the script format so that would mean rather than entire story is written like thisQuoteTakamina: But that's nonsense! (throws the book on the ground)
You would rather all the speeches written like this?Quote"But that's nonsense!" Takamina said as she threw the book on the ground.^That would be a form of prose but isn't exactly improving the quality of writing that much its just rearranging the order in which you type
I'm merely stating that by creating a separate thread for one thing (in this case, script), it sets a precedence, thus making it nearly obligatory to create a new thread for any other type of story that some readers dislike (the example I used being genderbend).
Also, I thought of something, rather than using paragraphs and prose to help the writer's improve, why don't we all just give out good commentaries to help them expand? Like a bit of criticism on the side since it would help out well in a writer's development if they receive something like this, if the readers and more experienced writers could give out their own feedback in the stories they read and point out things they think need improvement, then it might work well with that, wouldn't it? :)
Please don't misunderstand. I'm not saying that this is something that I want to happen or that needs to happen. I'm merely stating that by creating a separate thread for one thing (in this case, script), it sets a precedent, thus making it nearly obligatory to create a new thread for any other type of story that some readers happen to dislike (the example I used being genderbend).
This is a good suggestion but the writers themselves have to be open to criticism first. I love it when I receive constructive criticism but I also understand that some writers are more sensitive about it while some just want to share what they have and don't wish to change the way they write. I think the issue now is readers don't dare to offer criticism in fear of offending the writers. To help manage this, maybe writers can specify in their author's notes whether they want criticism or not. Of course, while the writers have to keep an open mind, readers need to be tactful too :deco:
Should they have their own section? No. I don’t think the magnitude of scripts is so big that a new section is needed. Perhaps authors can add “(script)” in their titles from now on.
"I'm sorry for using the word ban, let's change it to 'limit' then."
Perhaps authors can add “(script)” in their titles from now on.
I wouldn't sit through a 100,000 word "Script formatted" fanfic. I can't stand that.
If you don't like it, don't read it. Just click the back/close/whatever button; it's not that hard to do.
I find script format to be a bit difficult on the eyes (unless I’m auditioning for a role, which is never), and that’s usually why I don’t prefer them. However, I couldn’t see myself restricting them. Scripts are welcomed. Really good arguments on both sides.
Should they have their own section? No. I don’t think the magnitude of scripts is so big that a new section is needed. Perhaps authors can add “(script)” in their titles from now on.
^ AGREED!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Arisa chan~~~ nyahahah~~~~~ :on gay:I know you're quite the energetic one, so I'm not sure if this post is a burst of energy or if it's meant to be sort of teasing tone. Let's keep things cordial. ;)
This isn't something for argument, mostly just my feelings as a prose writer, I actually find writing my updates really time consuming, even writing one-shots takes up more time to the point that most of my updates are lengthy for some the reader's own liking.
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I actually thought at first that people hated me because no one liked to comment on my thread most of the time if I'm not updating Chinmoku or writing KojiYuu and AtsuMina, mah, not really my kind of problem, but its discouraging seeing how much support the script stories get, but then I don't really mind it that much because I love writing what I write, be it in any format or in pairings people wouldn't even like to read, I love what I do.
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Also, whether English isn't your first language, it doesn't really matter, most of us aren't native English speakers here I know and we shouldn't use that as a counter argument in discussions because all in all, its actually the effort that counts in what you write, doesn't it? :) Whether its perfect or not, its the thought placed in it that counts. ^ ^
With regards to vocabulary, my best friends are dictionary.com and thesaurus.com when I write. My vocabulary is actually not very extensive so I have to put in extra effort to vary the words I use. As I write, I always re-read what I have written to make sure there are no words that have been used too frequently.And I don't just pluck any word I find in the thesaurus. I always double-check its meaning in the dictionary to make sure it's suitable for the character and the situation. There are a lot of work and thought put into writing each update as mentioned by Sieka and HashirePomeranian. It's not just about throwing in beautiful words. The tougher and more time-consuming part comes when you put everything together to make the story and the characters come alive.
Happy New Year everybody.
Oh, and paperbagkun: Here's hoping that discussion was 'alive' enough for you!
Hey hey~~~ SAKURA_DROP_ is HERE?!! So who's gonna write it back? anyone? where's the other people who wanna talk about it? ABOUT THOSE BEAUTIFUL SMUT STORY?!! SO MAKE IT IN HERE THEN~~!!!!!! I'll be waiting for IT!! nyahahah~~~~ :on gay:
Hey hey~~~ SAKURA_DROP_ is HERE?!! So who's gonna write it back? anyone? where's the other people who wanna talk about it? ABOUT THOSE BEAUTIFUL SMUT STORY?!! SO MAKE IT IN HERE THEN~~!!!!!! I'll be waiting for IT!! nyahahah~~~~ :on gay:
Can you PLEASE not post irrelevant posts in important threads? Thank you.
^ so are you pissing off arisa chan? It's my right~ so what? I can POST AS MANY AS I WANT IN HERE~!! Nee..OKOTTERU~??!! NYAHAHAH!!!!! ~~~~~ :on gay: :on gay:
These childish comments... Is this a place ONLY for novel writers? Is this a place ONLY for perfect vocabulary fanfiction? Is this a place for ONLY you or ONLY me? I believe this place is for ALL people who love reading and writing fanfiction. You all sound like if we write something less creative then you are totally underrated. Isn't it the same for us then? Shouldn't we complain too then? "I'm sorry can you remove or limit the awesomely written fics because my works then are like sh*t and no one is reading them!!" No, it's not like that.
This community here is open for everyone, that's what I believe in. When I first came here I was just a reader and I never thought I should log in. Then I read R I V E R and I was done for good. I just had to register and comment on it ASAP. And that's when inspiration hit me to the max and I started writing. I was not good, I was really bad at the beginning and yet I received warm welcome, people commented on my stories and liked them. At first I felt like I really want them to comment and to 'thank you' the stories... But then... I got this question asked and it hit me it's not the most important thing.
You have to ask yourself. Are you writing only because you want to receive comments and 'thank yous' or you write because you enjoy writing?
Yes, apparently I love comments and 'thank yous' but not to the point where it can ruin my creativity. The thought that there are many people who (like me in the beginning) are not logged in but read them is enough for me to continue on.
One reader is already a reader.
It doesn't matter if only one person reads my smut story or my hardcore story (if I ever write one). What matters is I was able to post and share it. Why I write things like that? You never got into the mood where you just wanna go all out? Like, you are really pissed and just wanna hit someone but you can't? Well, I have these moods and that's where writing comes handy. By writing you let your steam off, you write out your ideas and frustrations and then you share it. When you share it and get at least one view you become lighter and the pain, it lessens. What I mean by this?
This place is not ONLY for prose writers or for people who wish their fanfiction to be made into a book.
This place is for every writer and reader out there, no matter his writing style, vocabulary or skills. If you think I hate you for your opinions and arguments and I now just go back at you, well... You're wrong. I admire those writers who have wide vocabulary, nicely done stories, perfect plots and etc. Sieka-sama, Divine Vengeance-san, muwi-chama, seigus-san,daddyFlean-kun and others are the ones I look up to, they are my gods of fanfiction. I don't know them personally and I might not always agree with their opinions but their works are gold worthy.
And yet there are also many people in this place who have amazing plots without using clever words, or funny stories without any plot that I enjoy reading. This place for me is sacred, I feel here like at home when I come and can read whatever I want. When I am in a sulky mood I wanna read some funny drabble or fluffy story or Sieka-sama's angst works. When I am in a good mood I go and read serious stories or perv stories or just any story I'm up to read.
If you wanna get lots of feedback, just write popular pairings.
That is kinda the thing everyone by now probably noticed. Really. Either you have to write a very popular pairing like AtsuMina or KojiYuu (I have nothing against the pairs) or your story has to have a very good plot/vocabulary. So what? Should I stop writing my OTP and things I like to write just because some people enjoy popular ones more? no. I continue writing things I like and enjoy as this (as I remember) was the place for EVERYONE to put their creations NO MATTER the style and vocabulary or skills.
I just noticed Sieka-sama's comment. Yeah, because my vocabulary is not perfect and because I'm not that good as you are I can't state my opinions that easily. I'm not offended by your words, I never was. I like critique as it helps me move forward.But no one here makes criticisms cause people here get pissed off by it. Tell you off for writing script (because they think it's not creative and it's their personal opinion/criticism) they blow their top off at you because YOU CAN'T MEDDLE WITH MY WRITING STYLE yes.
What I meant by try to make things okay for everyone was my idea of stating in the title what kind of fic that is. Wouldn't it be okay for everyone to know whether its hardcore or fluffy? Labeling your fic is the thing I see as the best option if there are many people against hardcore things. I agree with bochang-san about the gender and age thing. There are may people who love hardcore and many who love fluffy. We just have to try to understand each other. My idea still stays: let's label our fics.
This is not too long I hope. Also, sorry if it doesn't have a nice vocabulary. I am not that good in writing prose. I just hope you can understand my thoughts this time. Don't be offended. We just discuss this, nee?
@arisa03 and everyone
Please stop fighting! I hate to see you fighting! Did you guys read the rules!? The rules say "Don't fight!"
This forum is like a family! Let's us all forget this small matter.... especially you, Rukaeru...
Arisa, i didnt mean to hate and hurt you okay...i just hate to see you all fighting...
Okay! Let's us forget this small matter... d***... it happens with me several times...fighting over small matter....
btw limiting or change the term of sexual reproductive organs i think is unavoidable in a smut..
but you can try to. :3 but if you didn't find any other way to change the term.. it's okay i think. :3 It's a smut.
Shouldn't we complain too then? "I'm sorry can you remove or limit the awesomely written fics because my works then are like sh*t and no one is reading them!!"
Also, I never said about anything about novel writers or this place only for "awesome stories" as you point them or anything about vocabulary. I never said anything, please do not misunderstand me for I never pointed that out, I feel like you are placing words into my mouth when I am very conscious that you aren't, I know of course, you aren't. And again, the reason why I use your words against you is to place my own points, I am not doing it just to criticize you of not being an English speaker because I am not an actual English speaker, I'm a Filipina and English is my second language and believe me, I am not too good at English, its just the effort that counts to actually make everything good.
And I also agree with arisa-san, sometimes just labeling wouldn't work, I doubt the agreement with script labeling would even work either...I'm afraid not everyone would comply with it.
Also...this:Shouldn't we complain too then? "I'm sorry can you remove or limit the awesomely written fics because my works then are like sh*t and no one is reading them!!"
You hardly know my feelings, you shouldn't say something like that. I've never once said all of my worries in this thread, with the prose subject it was only about a quarter that I let out. Only Eru and Mint-chan know my worries, you have not the slightest clue, but I'm aware of that, isn't that why I wrote a reply to you before, about how you felt? I know how hard it is, but for me, you don't see my side at all.
And no, I'm not trying to argue here.
I believe that this is nothing to discuss about.
I know that SOME people are pissed about script writing and vulgar words like e.g penis, etc.. But that's just how we write it.
If you don't like those in the stories, then you should stop reading a just find another fic that you that will suit your taste.
Complaining about it just creates trouble. WE LOVE AND ENJOY HOW WE WRITE SO THAT'S THE REASONS WHY WE ARE AGAINST YOUR IDEA.
Please.. I beg you.. Stop it already.
Sorry for butting in.
I have written more smut than my fingers can count, and not once have I said the words P****, V*****, and other words close to those. It's not 'unavoidable.' If you want something you can find ways to get it, if you're not lazy.
Labeling cannot fix everything. I do not think Sakura's suggestion will work, but this is my PERSONAL PREFERENCE on this issue.
The main issue now is LAZINESS and the FAILURE TO COMPLY TO EVERYONE.
I believe that this is nothing to discuss about.
Complaining about it just creates trouble. WE LOVE AND ENJOY HOW WE WRITE SO THAT'S THE REASONS WHY WE ARE AGAINST YOUR IDEA.
Please.. I beg you.. Stop it already.
We never said this place is ONLY for (insert kind of people here), you said that.
Basically, you like popularity and do not write for yourself, you write so you get comments, you do not want improvement because it ruins your creativity. Good job.
I agree that writing is something to vent out your anger but not when you're not being creative because there are certainly more words than penis, dick and vagina.
Again, I never said that you said it. My argument is for 'improvement,'. Don't like it, don't do it, these are the words you go by don't you?
This is probably one of the rare things you wrote that I might agree with.
But no one here makes criticisms cause people here get pissed off by it. Tell you off for writing script (because they think it's not creative and it's their personal opinion/criticism) they blow their top off at you because YOU CAN'T MEDDLE WITH MY WRITING STYLE yes.
I am from the Philippines and English is not my first language, but I want to improve so I seek improvement and that's by not sticking to just what I have, people here don't want it? then don't.
Simply labeling doesn't fix anything.
I have written more smut than my fingers can count, and not once have I said the words P****, V*****, and other words close to those. It's not 'unavoidable.' If you want something you can find ways to get it, if you're not lazy.
Labeling cannot fix everything. I do not think Sakura's suggestion will work, but this is my PERSONAL PREFERENCE on this issue.
The main issue now is LAZINESS and the FAILURE TO COMPLY TO EVERYONE.
for arisa san.. well. sorry for not being a smut writer.. :3
maybe it's true some of us find it too troublesome to change the term..
well, maybe we didn't realized we can change it, maybe we're too lazy, have a little vocabulary, etc..
but for me, or maybe some people it's kinda difficult..
and maybe we won't realized it until someone tells us.
like how Sieka show me how to change the term at twitter..
i won't realized it if she didn't tells me..
and i found your argument kinda harsh to the others..
so basically your argument imply that people who write smut with a sexual reproductive organs in it are lazy people.
and you, since you can find another different terms for it, you're dilligent.
i'm not offended by this argument, but maybe most of other people do. XD
and for failure to comply everyone.
i think that's impossible.. to comply everyone.. i don't even know the meaning of that words. XD
well, as i said before. everyone have a freedom, but their freedom is limited by other's people freedom.
so it's an impossible task to keep everyone happy, because maybe his/her happiness can be a disaster to another person.
so, they need to be considerate with their freedom.
and you asked my why it seems like you're fighting againts the world?
maybe because you're using some bold and underlined.. even italic words. :3
like how i used them up there.
XD
omg this is so fun~!
thx for sieka and eru because they keep talking about this in twitter! LOL
btw:
you said that you're helping us by giving advice, but actually, that's not the right attitude when giving an advice.
even if your advice is helpful, but other people can percieved it differently when you delivered it with a wrong way. :)
I believe that this is nothing to discuss about.
I know that SOME people are pissed about script writing and vulgar words like e.g penis, etc.. But that's just how we write it.
If you don't like those in the stories, then you should stop reading a just find another fic that you that will suit your taste.
Complaining about it just creates trouble. WE LOVE AND ENJOY HOW WE WRITE SO THAT'S THE REASONS WHY WE ARE AGAINST YOUR IDEA.
Please.. I beg you.. Stop it already.
Sorry for butting in.
Let me say this again, we are suggesting ways FOR YOU TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITING.
We are not commanding in anyway on which you make us out to be, sure that's how you write it, but there are always 'other ways' and you people don't look at it.
We're trying to help, but lol looks like it's better to just give up.
Also, complaining? Wow, you think too highly of yourself, I wouldn't even bother, not worth my time. Why should I care about other people?
I believe that this is nothing to discuss about.
Complaining about it just creates trouble. WE LOVE AND ENJOY HOW WE WRITE SO THAT'S THE REASONS WHY WE ARE AGAINST YOUR IDEA.
Please.. I beg you.. Stop it already.
Hi CheesyBits, no offense but just a gentle reminder that discussions help people to understand each other better and move the community forward. We don't want to block out communications, do we? :)
Also, it's been reiterated in The Golden Laws thread that the initial posts on this topic are suggestions and not complaints. Just want to clarify that. Thank you.
Hello everyone :)
I never thought the simple question and suggestion I just did could actually lead into something like this :O2 I've been watching this forum from now and then and still, over your repetitive and tedious issues and arguments you brought back, I still cant find my answer for my question in Golden Law thread. I'm only seeing you guys bringing back the old matters, which I thought already died down, adding them to your arguments again and again. I'm here simply only saying what I'm thinking and I don't mean to offend anyone here. Thank you in advance :)
you forget we want to be understood too.
No. I don't think highly of myself because that's the thing that I always never want to do in my life. I promised myself not to follow my grandparent's footsteps of thinking highly of themselves. But heck, I don't want to argue about that nor do I want to argue with you.
I know that you care about us, about our writing and improving it. I love your idea about improving but changing what we love to do is just.....
But I would like to thank you for thinking about improving ourselves.
I'm a Filipino too and Tagalog is my first language and English is my second language so I'm also not really that good in English tooconsidering that we speak broken English in Singapore..
I'm sorry if you thought that I'm arguing with you.
so arisa-san, that's not the point in my post. :3
i'm only try to tell you how people can percieved something differently. :3
you maybe thinks that with bold, italic, and underline, your argument will be read by the others.
but the other may find the bold, italic, and underline something harsh or commanding(?)
so suggestion is not the same as an advice?
well, sorry if i got there wrong. :3
so let's change the words "advice" with "suggestion"..
because you said it's a suggestion, not an advice. :3
and also i didn't state you said those words, but yes, those words implied in your arguments. :3
and maybe other people will think the same as me.
:D
Labeling such is, putting on the title of the thread a very brief summary of what it is. (AtsuMina) (Title), or more like nowadays (Script)(AtsuMina)(Title), or very much in the near future (Script)(AtsuMina)(Title)(Contains Vulgar Language)
With this example, it clearly shows that labelling is going to clutter up the board and in case anyone is unaware, there is a limit to the number of characters you can put in a thread title.
So we should try to think of a better solution to satisfy both sides or at least come to a compromise.
Mostly fanfics are written in prose and paragraph formats. Shouldn't it be part of the rule that "Script Format" stories should not be allowed? Like for example, fanfiction.net does not allow these because they are not prose.
I think there has to be revision on perv fic rule as I now keep seeing fanfics which is very uncomfortable to read. How about banning or limiting the usage of blatant words of the anatomy such as p***s and etc.
I think what they meant is that, AKB is a girl-group, and the excess usage of "Penis" for a girl-group fanfic (when it's supposed to be Yuri) is quite unsettling?
Even though its in the perv, I still think there should be moderation when it comes to how vulgar they are, whether it not be underage members.
I think what they want is for writing to be more creative.
How about change the labels with the tags like in livejournal. :3
What if the person doesn't have as much time as to reread the story lots of times and use thesaurus every time they want a new word? Can't he post a simple story as it is? Yes, I think about my writers, but sometimes the grammar is not a most important thing for me, as when I read the story, if the plot is good, I get so into it, the grammar is just of no importance then.
Where to apply for the mods and what are the things I need to know if I want to become one?
like this one?
(http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8544/47428312.jpg)
but yeah, it'll took some space at the bottom. :3
with this tags, you also can find other story with the same genres or pairing.
If we can resolve this Great Divide
I don't see this as two camps, because the two sides you describe (i.e. quality VS freedom) aren't mutually exclusive.
It almost sounds like people are using terms like "freedom" or "creativity" as an excuse not to put more effort into their work.
Anyway, like I said, people are free to write what they want and how they want (as long as it follows basic forum policy).
the camps are there and that's why there is so much unresolved tension on this forum.
I'd like to propose a thread where writers can kindly share English and writing tips; what they believe makes a story better.
Example: "Try not to write long lists of details because they tend to distract from the story and are often unnecessary," not "Don't write lists of details; it's just wrong."
It could also serve as a place where writers that might be having trouble can ask a question and gain a polite answer.
Example: Q: "How can I write this sentence so that it doesn't sound so _____?" A: "Try switching _____ and _____, so that_____.")
There's a chance I might have misunderstood you and that we actually have the same idea in mind in regards to the initial post (and if it is the same, ignore this next bit), but just in case:
This is a great idea and I hope it happens but I just want to check if readers can also provide advice?
Also if enough people are willing then could some sort of proofreading/editing section be added to this, it could be as simple as a list of people who are willing to do it
As for interest, it's just been the handful of people whose names you can see as having left thank yous for the relevant posts. (What happened to all the members that participated in that last debate? Where did they all go? Here we are, all chummy, and they probably think that there's still an argument taking place.)
I did think of another section for the initial post: a links section, meant to help others find quick and easy access to helpful sites (i.e., the English language learning sites that were shared elsewhere in this thread.) Any objections to this idea? If not, any sites to suggest?Nice idea so people can do some research of their own; can only think of simple sites like dictionary.com or thesaurus.com but people underestimate just how useful they can be :thumbup
I did think of another section for the initial post: a links section, meant to help others find quick and easy access to helpful sites (i.e., the English language learning sites that were shared elsewhere in this thread.) Any objections to this idea? If not, any sites to suggest?
(What happened to all the members that participated in that last debate? Where did they all go? Here we are, all chummy, and they probably think that there's still an argument taking place.)
Then nori (if nori doesn't mind too) and I can work with you through PM to finalise the proposal.
You're welcome. And that's a nice, concise way of putting things.
Just to be clear, though, when it comes to an unusual pairing's success, I don't feel that it needs to be at all believable in real life so long as you make it believable in your story.
Of course, there are times in which random, inexplicable pairings can be refreshing. Also, I'm sure there are readers here that will enjoy reading about a pairing no matter how fantasized it seems.
I think I would struggle making Takamina or Miichan an antagonist in any story :nervous
Miichan, on the other hand, is still plausible especially if you've been watching a certain AKB48-related anime. I won't say anymore to spoil the plot though.
I know exactly what you mean and that does give some new scope but the biggest problem I have is the reference of her looking like Gachapin :nervous
Making her an antagonist would be to make one of my childhood characters an antagonist, and I just can't do that :cry:
On another note totally agree with your list and made me realise Yuki/Black is also quite a good antagonist
I don't know if it's the right place to do it, but here it goes.
Though I do understand that this probably won't have many replies since I doubt many people would be comfortable talking about this sort of thing maybe? Still it would be nice if I heard from a few people just to get a better perspective of things :)
It shouldn't be something a writer tries to avoid, especially if it'll give their plot more depth/meaning/realism/good stuff
^
April Fools' prank... yare yare. :bigdeal:
At least it's lighter compared to last year's prank which I found very disgusting. I was definitely pissed off at that one, just sayin' :)
April Fools day just get the hell out of here already! :grin: I wanna read the fics comfortably.
So can I post my story here? This is my first time that i'm creating a fanfic, so expected to have many miscorrected words. :lol: :lol: :lol:
I'm the only boy in here? Or the ratio of boys to girls are suddenly high?
LOL its just cuz we females are awesome! no jk... WHERES ALL THE GUYS? LOL
alexiel17... you a cool author... LOL trust me! just keep trying your best~ i do like our fanfics... :D
i also like dark-atrox's work... lol its really good!
Lately I've been wanting to see more fics with unusual pairing. I mean I like certain pairings but reading unusual ones is refreshing. XD
On side note, I have a draft with uncommon pairing (Yukirin x Yuka)(that I don't think I'll be able to finish with incapability of forming words from the images I have in my mind):panic:
So I'm currently in the middle of writing a fluff on Yukirin x Tomochin (Don't ask me how I decided to do this seemingly-nonexistent-and-weird pairing XD) which, for once, progressing well and I actually have a clear vision how I want it to be :D but....
I wonder if I should use past tense in writing it (the non-convo ones)? Currently it's mixed of present and past tense :?
Could anyone make a Atsunyan and Takayuu fanfic plsss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:
So I'm currently in the middle of writing a fluff on Yukirin x Tomochin (Don't ask me how I decided to do this seemingly-nonexistent-and-weird pairing XD) which, for once, progressing well and I actually have a clear vision how I want it to be :D but....
I wonder if I should use past tense in writing it (the non-convo ones)? Currently it's mixed of present and past tense :?
Pros and Cons
Familiarity
Since the past tense is familiar to readers, readers don’t have to adjust when they begin a story written using past tense. There might well be an adjustment period for readers of present-tense stories.
Novelty
Stories told using present-tense narration can be enticing because they’re different. Readers may also end up paying closer attention since the format is one unfamiliar to them. They may develop a deeper involvement in the story.
Immediacy
Some writers and readers believe that use of the present tense makes story action and events more immediate. On the other hand, proponents of the past tense may find that verbs used in the past tense make story events seem more immediate. Because there’s no adjustment needed, readers can imagine themselves in the story from page one.
Believability
Readers have to believe that story events written in present tense are happening at the very moment they’re reading. That’s admittedly a stretch for some readers since they know the story events are not happening in the now. After all, a book’s events have to have been completed before the book was written. Yes, readers can get over this incongruity, but reader perception is something to consider when you choose your narrative tense.
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Can I able now to access to the Perv Section of the forum??? (Turning 18 this year, next 3 months) XD XD XD
Can I able now to access to the Perv Section of the forum??? (Turning 18 this year, next 3 months) XD XD XD
You have to wait till you turn 18.
This place is slowly changing to the place I never wanted to come to... Before it was a nice place for everyone to be, share their works and have fun. Now it's with so many rules and with so little appreciating people that... I dunno...
It just feels like all we wanna d is make rules and more rules and more rules... It just gets more complicated to post a simple story coz' every time you have to go over a huge list of rules and see if you accidentally didn't write something you were not supposed to write. I get all the +18 rules and the other ones who were made in the very beginning, but the suggestions recently became somewhat.. they just put me off and I have a craving to go to other places...
I'm not surprised that so many good writers left this place and that so little update those good stories... Because it's not the home we were used to... Now it's some other place we don't know anymore...
whatever... I just said what's on my mind... *off*
Rating:I believe the authors already do a decent job when it comes to notifying readers of what to expect in their stories. I don't really feel the need for this system, but thanks for sharing your idea. :)
Authors:
Genre:
Pairing:
Characters:
Summary:
Disclaimer:
Sometimes they put 'Warning'
I've noticed Johnnys fandom put these every time they post a new fanfic;
Rating:
Authors:
Genre:
Pairing:
Characters:
Summary:
Disclaimer:
Sometimes they put 'Warning'
I'm suggesting that every post put these as this makes it easier for the readers. It'll also makes the page more arranged and tidy :) Who knows, maybe this can makes another OTP emerge. tbh, I'm not really interested to read pairings other than the common one. So the summary helps a lot because even if you don't like the pairing, the story line might get you interested.
It just feels like all we wanna d is make rules and more rules and more rules... It just gets more complicated to post a simple story coz' every time you have to go over a huge list of rules and see if you accidentally didn't write something you were not supposed to write. I get all the +18 rules and the other ones who were made in the very beginning, but the suggestions recently became somewhat.. they just put me off and I have a craving to go to other places...
QuoteLaw #10 Only start a thread to post fanfic(s). Fanfic contests and threads like Seven Word Story (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34936.0) are fine. However, threads asking for support for or feedback on fanfic ideas are not as they will become dead threads in time to come.
- Ask for feedback on fanfic ideas in The General AKB48 Fanfic Discussion Thread (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29068.0)
- Post messages or letters to AKB48 members in the specific girl's thread here (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?board=88.0)
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Rationale behind the introduction of Law #10:
This law is to prevent the AKB48 fanfic boards from getting cluttered with irrelevant threads. There are more suitable sections within the AKBar48 to post certain things. Please explore this wonderful community and who knows, you may make new friends outside of the Fanfic Forum! :jphip:
If you are a writer with an existing story thread, you may ask your readers for feedback on new fanfic ideas in your own thread. We are fine with this. Just don't start a thread or poll to merely gather feedback and support.
I read my own type of writing and hope to find something to improve on later on
I read my own type of writing and hope to find something to improve on later on
I actually never thought of it like that but I guess it makes sense to do that as well, maybe I should do that more :nervous
^ I kind of think I know what you mean but at the same time I haven't got the faintest clue. It is definitely a difficult thing though finding the right balance between simplicity and pairings in order to attract "casual" readers and also trying to push and improve your own writing skills. I mean it does make me wonder sometimes about what would happen if you literally swap the names and make the correct adjustments to from an unusual pairing to a common popular pairing, plot and story still the same, just how many more people would read it...
Though I guess that shows how much more I can learn from all this but replacing the pairs that might be an interesting little experiment to try out.
What is it that makes you read a certain fic?
Are you really fussy when it comes to choosing something to read or will you literally just read everything and anything?
Personally I used to read pretty much anything which had my kamioshi (Jurina) in it but lately I have been reading a considerably lower amount which is more due to the fact that I don't have the luxury of being just a reader XD
What if the writer doesn't want to reveal the huge plot development? Like, the setting is school but later school becomes not important? Isn't deciding from just a few chapters is too cruel for a writer?
Why You Should Write a Compelling Opening Chapter
Written by Idrees
Of all the novels I’ve read, I (and you) prefer those who have a compelling opening chapter. The chapter which draws us in and leads us smoothly throughout the book to the end. If we are not “hooked” by the chapter, we close the book snap shut. Which means the author has failed to do his job.
But you don’t want to be that author. You want your novel (or any form of fiction) to be a bestseller. Widely read. Widely praised. You want your reader to be hooked in. You want him/her to finish the book and not close the book until the last word has been read. You want your book to stand the test of the reader’s patience.
But how do you actually achieve these things?
How do you ensure that the reader will actually do the above?
The answer is simple. You write a compelling opening (first) chapter.
It’s magic! The compelling opening chapter ensures that the reader will continue with the book. It ensures that he’ll not close the book snap shut right after reading the first page. It ensures that he/she will be hooked. Despite his impatience, he/she will read on.
Of course, this doesn’t guarantee that he’ll not close the book anytime he’s reading. You can’t guarantee that, unless you are perfectly sure that your book is perfect (no one’s is). Anytime you write a chapter which doesn’t interest the reader, he/she will close the book. So you can’t say a compelling first chapter is everything.
But it’s a foundation. A foundation for your book. History says that the odds are very less when it comes to books having great first chapters and lousy follow-up chapters. In simpler terms, if you write a compelling first chapter, it’s taken for granted that you can write. That you can write well.
hi, hello
um this is my first time posting on this thread....err
I just wanna ask something.....
I've been struggling on this for a while eh...
but, how do you show or express emotion on you're character.
like for example my character is happy of course they smile, laugh or etc, but how do you express more...
like, I want to show my character in pain, but how do I explain this to the readers...
I want the readers feel what my character's feeling,
but how?
"Respect your readers. Be responsible."
I love AKB48. That's why I write fanfics of them. I totally understand the fun in imagining our favourite idols in all sorts of situations and relationships because I do that all the time. Anybody who can look into my mind will surely be overwhelmed by the crazy number of plot bunnies hopping all over the place. The gears in my head never stop spinning and many times, I find myself smiling like an idiot in the middle of nowhere as a result of my OTP fantasies. While it is very tempting to share all these ideas and little scenes with the community, I have to stop myself from posting them on impulse because I haven't plotted the stories yet. It is unfair to the readers if I post a teaser or pilot chapter and don't ever revisit it due to the fact that I haven't even thought of how to continue the story. As a reader myself, I understand the frustration of reading a promising start to a story and being all excited about how it will progress only to get my hopes shot down when I realise the writer has already abandoned the story. I don't like the disappointment so I don't wish to subject my readers to the same thing. Hence, I limit myself to posting only one multi-chapter story at a time and the occasional one-shots. Yes, writing is supposed to be enjoyable and free for the writer but as I am posting my works in public, I can't help but feel responsible towards my readers. In short, your readers are your supporters. Respect them by offering them the best that you are capable of.
Everyone, I wonder if you ever have an idea in your mind that you feel that you won't be able to write with your lacking of references or personal capability?
I'm curious about the "AKBlasphemy48" site and I've sudden interest about it....
How will I register to that site? XD XD XD XD XD
sorry for the 'out of the blue' topic XD XD XD XD XD
I'm curious about the "AKBlasphemy48" site and I've sudden interest about it....
How will I register to that site? XD XD XD XD XD
sorry for the 'out of the blue' topic XD XD XD XD XD
or you can ask akblasphemy48-san to make you a contributing writer there ;)
^I'm already have a post in there...
But still..... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
I'm curious about the "AKBlasphemy48" site and I've sudden interest about it....
How will I register to that site? XD XD XD XD XD
sorry for the 'out of the blue' topic XD XD XD XD XD
or you can ask akblasphemy48-san to make you a contributing writer there ;)
Well try this.. Here's the link http://akblasphemy48.com/submit-fanfic/ (http://akblasphemy48.com/submit-fanfic/)
WTH that I can't able to access perv section? I want to see it now! (I already reply my access to the that forum)
Anyway folks, just curious, where do you usually have the most idea flowing in your mind and able to write your fic smoothly?
I find myself writing most of my fics when I'm lying on my bed before I sleep XD
sakura-san~~
truthfully, I have no idea either...
but sprain ankle + more pressure on it = something like swelling and pain?
whenever I go to a doctor for that type of thing, it isn't much of a hospital type thing
more like a clinic, the doctor will more or less say the common symptoms and not say the complicated things
basically, I guess swelling and like not being able to walk, healing will be further hindered, it is advised that you(Girl A) tell Girl B to rest a bit...
(btw, turns out that some people have to get surgery cuz of sprains, but you might not want to make it more confusing with that type of thing!)
I just googled it and it seems that there are different levels of sprain, (google will answer 75% of your questions)
maybe when Girl B interrupts, she'll say something like the sprain is not bad at all and it was just something tiny and minor
(once in a while, you'll trip and sprain you ankle or something, but most of the time, it heals within a day even if you do walk around and stuff, I guess that's s minor sprain?)
^Well the only way to treat any sort of sprain would be to bandage and compress the ankle. Also the doctor would tell you not to do any sort of exercise and if it's really serious they might give you a pair of crutches so you don't have to walk.
I wish I could say more sakura-san but I'm not too sure what else it is you want to know :nervous
Well a sprained ankle isn't typically an injury I would associate with having to spend a week in hospital even if you do make it worse by continuing to exercise. Now this is purely from personal experience but maybe you could have her sprain/twist her knee instead?
Like I said earlier I've played sports with a sprained ankle and been fine but I sprained my knee once. There was a small "pop" sound but it didn't hurt much and I would have continued playing but someone stopped me. In the end I was on crutches for 2 weeks so maybe if she continued to ignore that then she might have to spend time in a ward?
Now I only need fr someone to write a short explanation stuff/example sentences from a professional doctor and then could go on with the story
I had the unfortunate pleasure of having knee surgery last year, so I can help you out with some terminology and what not. I could send you some example statements by PM within the next 24 (I'm a bit short on time at the moment).
However, it's not something that would require a stay in the hospital. Some quality time on the couch, though, is definite. You might want to consider altering the scene, like Girl B eavesdropping on Girl A's check-up appointment.
I'll wait for seigus-san, kira-chan or other medical people to help me (maybe though PMs).
Rest – avoid regular exercise and reduce your daily physical activity. Using crutches or a walking stick may help if you cannot put weight on your ankle or knee.(Source: http://www.nhs.uk/Conditions/Sports-injuries/Pages/Treatment.aspx (http://www.nhs.uk/Conditions/Sports-injuries/Pages/Treatment.aspx))
Ice – apply an ice pack to the affected area for 10–30 minutes. A bag of frozen peas, or similar, will work well. Wrap the ice pack in a towel to avoid it directly touching your skin and causing ice burn.
Compression – use elastic compression bandages to limit swelling.
Elevation – keep the injured leg, knee, arm, elbow or wrist raised above the level of the heart. This may also help to reduce swelling.
Bows... I have a question...
How many characters do you think is the max to put into a story...?
Since, I kind of want to add a few more into a story with already...
hrm... like 10 main characters and 6 minor characters...
It's kind of killing me because I want to add Kumi and Non in there...
along with Erena, Myao, and Rabutan for like... the loli trio(including mayu) plus Myao...
but i think it might be overboard...
Okay... I am not sure what to do and how to react, so I came here for help.I hope you realize that I meant no personal insult to you at all. You can write fics about any pairing that you like, but asking others to post stories as well while excluding one specific pairing randomly left me with confusion to be honest, which I decided to voice by posting.
Usually, when a person has an anti pairing, u respect his/her choice.
Usually, when u post your own thread with a rule, people would understand it's YOUR thread with YOUR rule.
Usually I am open to critique, be it positive or negative.
But recently I realized I have haters. They come out and bash my preferences, my threads,my work. The do not come and say criticism, they come oit and bash, trying to hurt.
I'd love all my haters to tell me one thing because I don't understand it.
What the hell? What have I done to you? Tell me openly.
Didn't we try to make this place open to creativity, aspiring writers and older veterans in the field? Didn't we agreed to make this place peaceful? Where all of it has gone?
Maybe I misunderstood some of u, but recently most of u misunderstood me.
Another question.
If I make a thread where I want to see a story with a pairing that is Jurina or Rena centered, no matter how popular it is, with the exception being RenAirin...is it wrong?
^ to be honest, I wouldn't encourage an open thread like how you did yours (novel idea but the fighting is inevitable)
As for the making of the other thread, best thing was not to make it. We love to help and make this area flourish but don't create enemies.
For me there are anti pairings I have dealt with and my best thing is either don't read it and don't write it.
This is just me being honest and respectful to you and other authors. Haters gonna hate but the thing is to always be the better person in the situation
Usually, when a person has an anti pairing, u respect his/her choice.
Usually, when u post your own thread with a rule, people would understand it's YOUR thread with YOUR rule.
Another question.
If I make a thread where I want to see a story with a pairing that is Jurina or Rena centered, no matter how popular it is, with the exception being RenAirin...is it wrong?
But recently I realized I have haters. They come out and bash my preferences, my threads,my work. The do not come and say criticism, they come oit and bash, trying to hurt.
I'd love all my haters to tell me one thing because I don't understand it.
What the hell? What have I done to you? Tell me openly.
Didn't we try to make this place open to creativity, aspiring writers and older veterans in the field? Didn't we agreed to make this place peaceful? Where all of it has gone?
Maybe I misunderstood some of u, but recently most of u misunderstood me.
Flutist, I never read your fic since I'm not much of those action-packed genre fan but I kinda get what you're trying to say. Basically, I could give them even screentimes by using arcs, chapters etc? And to not cut out a scenario just like that? As for forgetting the secondary characters, well, it's a habit of mine XD but hey, an epilogue that shows how the characters are doing is a good idea... And I think how I'm writing Acchan is making others hate her O.O''
For writers out there, what kind of genre do you tend to put down on your stories? Do you like writing romantic comedy or more on an angst side? And for readers, what's your preference? Do you like reading touching scenes or something that makes you laugh?
I guess I like the ones that have tension, drama and that dark feel probably because my emotions are always everywhere and at the same time locked up and since I can't express them to other people, I place them in my fics because I can express everything that I can't and everything that I had felt before. I also have the tendency to crave for angst and drama fics because I can feel some relation and it feels far more close to reality than with those light-hearted fluffy fics, not that I don't read them, I like them too, but I'm far more detached when it comes to happiness in some areas.
Also, I find angst and drama fanfics leave more impression to me, they are far more memorable than fluffy comedic fanfics because you can always see those light fics everywhere, but you can only see a great angst and dramatic fic once in a blue moon, so yeah, they are a rare prized treat to me.
I guess I like the ones that have tension, drama and that dark feel probably because my emotions are always everywhere and at the same time locked up and since I can't express them to other people, I place them in my fics because I can express everything that I can't and everything that I had felt before.
With all due respect, I beg to differ on this point. I agree that there are generally more light-hearted comedic fics around but it is not easy to come across one that is truly well-executed (especially since the characters have a tendency to go OOC in them); just like how it is rare to find a great angst fic that tugs at the heartstrings. Whether a story is memorable or not, it mainly boils down to how the writer delivers it instead of the genre it belongs to. Several light-hearted fics have left deep impressions on me because of the writers' writing style and skill. Anyway, this is just my personal opinion too so no hard feelings :)
I do agree that light-hearted fics can also leave deep impressions, but that is a rare gem. I mean, you really need a good execution and the plot to make it happen. I haven't really seen a lot of light-hearted fics that gave me a long lasting impression so I lean more on the drama and angst side. I don't take offense in that since we all have our favorites and opinions.
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Oh right, don't get me wrong when I said "I'm far more detached when it comes to happiness in some areas.", I'm just clueless on some parts but I'm not rejecting happiness. Honestly, since I see happiness as a temporary feeling, the height of excitement and fun or calmness those light-hearted fics give is as temporary as happiness can be. I'm overall a pessimistic person and I'm not gonna take that down so I place that negativity in my fics, that doesn't mean that I myself am leaning to being a suicidal person. I just love those two genre because it's close to reality from what I see and feel and I want to share the feeling with people who can relate. Whether anyone reads my fics, it's up to them, I couldn't careless if no one ever read them at all, I've learned the hard way of getting nothing back at all. :9
I also think...light-hearted fics are too common that it's too sugary-sweet and awfully detached to some parts of reality, sometimes you need some sourness and salt. Not everyone wants to write drama and angst since it's just stressful enough to write about those emotions, but hell, too much light fics is kind of like an equation to reading fairy tales where those happy endings always end up making you hope until they deceive you when you face reality. Oh childhood days...... :lol: :lol: :lol:
I'm aware that everyone here knows reality, so you don't need to tell me about that, I am aware, that's just my opinion and this is me slightly high from too much projects. 8)
That is why we have a wide variety of writers here and we can easily chose, it's our own choice in the end, nee? :)
I'm pretty sure Sieka wasn't "looking down" on light-hearted fics as she was just explaining her preference for angst/drama over fluff/comedy so let's be careful with our choice of words there to avoid misunderstandings :)
And still, looking down on those light fics is not an option, because it helps you laugh and smile when all you want is run away, hide or sometimes even die...
For example Mii-chan pushed Takamina to the ground as revenge for her fallen lover Sasshi who Takamina killed years ago, I tend to think about unimportant details... Like right now I'm thinking to write [but as we all know, who cares about Sasshi?!]. Damn. I need proofreading.
Though writing fanfics is a hobby, it can feel like work sometimes, especially with on-going fics (which usually takes me a month to update a chapter :nervous)
How do you stay on task and write?
This hasn't happened to me, but from all the stories out there, I was wondering if anyone has ever found a story that is startlingly similar to their own. And I don't just mean themes and a characteristics, because undoubtedly there must be some stories that are similar especially when they contain the same characters or are the same genre. What I mean is a plot/storyline that is so frighteningly close to yours that it might have been the same story.
And to make it more awkward, find the story and realise the author began it sooner than yours (dun dun duuun)
Also, has anyone felt anxious about your unwritten stories/one-shots. I know this is going to sound quite bad and I might lower other's opinions of my self but I always feel nervous that if I don't finish my fics, someone else is going to start a similar idea and I won't be able to do it in fear reader's may think I copied that author. Although those opinions won't matter in the long run, it makes me worried. And I know if I change the way I write, as not everyone's methods are the same, it won't be the exactly the same but people may draw from the close plots and themes.
Sorry for the late reply, but Sieka's advice is really what I needed XD
It wasn't the emphasis but the part at the end, I just realized it. I forgot to follow-up dramatic scenes and building the suspense, thrills, steps and such. I just realized it after reading that bout days ago XD
Thanks, man. It helps a lot! OwOb
How do you stay on task and write?
I have a tendency to have a good amount of ideas, but then, for no reason, go off to rewatch an anime that I'm not too interested in or rewatch something weird(Mousou Deka, etc.)... And then, due to the fact that I waste a lot of time(boredom), the quality of my work actually drops quite a lot. (Which is bad.)
So I'm wondering how do you guys (girls and boys) stay on task when writing??
This hasn't happened to me, but from all the stories out there, I was wondering if anyone has ever found a story that is startlingly similar to their own. And I don't just mean themes and a characteristics, because undoubtedly there must be some stories that are similar especially when they contain the same characters or are the same genre. What I mean is a plot/storyline that is so frighteningly close to yours that it might have been the same story.
And to make it more awkward, find the story and realise the author began it sooner than yours (dun dun duuun)
Also, has anyone felt anxious about your unwritten stories/one-shots. I know this is going to sound quite bad and I might lower other's opinions of my self but I always feel nervous that if I don't finish my fics, someone else is going to start a similar idea and I won't be able to do it in fear reader's may think I copied that author. Although those opinions won't matter in the long run, it makes me worried. And I know if I change the way I write, as not everyone's methods are the same, it won't be the exactly the same but people may draw from the close plots and themes.
So just wondering if anyone else is as paranoid as me :nervous
I'm wondering what everyone's age is once I read yar stories O.O
NEE, WAT'S YAR AGE???!!! >A<
@LoyalFlutist:
Actually, I find it very funny that you consider 2008 to be something "waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay back" and did literally laugh out loud.
Ambenya-san is an 18 year old girl who once had a dream about Takamina and Yuko (Holy- I didn't even have a dream of Yuihan, let alone Acchan O.O'') I rarely see anyone pairing up their OTP. Or is that just me? XD I mean, come on. Who'd want to pair up Yuihan and Rena~? Or Acchan and Rena~? Wait... I already thought of doing the latter... >.>
Ambenya-san is an 18 year old girl who once had a dream about Takamina and Yuko (Holy- I didn't even have a dream of Yuihan, let alone Acchan O.O'') I rarely see anyone pairing up their OTP. Or is that just me? XD I mean, come on. Who'd want to pair up Yuihan and Rena~? Or Acchan and Rena~? Wait... I already thought of doing the latter... >.>
I do pair my faves, Yuko-sama and Rena-sama, Yuko-sama and Acchan. Heck, I even have Rena-sama and Acchan paired in one of my stories~~ Nya~ so fun to read about all writers.. I should also write about myself when I have more time, nee?
Ambenya-san is an 18 year old girl who once had a dream about Takamina and Yuko (Holy- I didn't even have a dream of Yuihan, let alone Acchan O.O'') I rarely see anyone pairing up their OTP. Or is that just me? XD I mean, come on. Who'd want to pair up Yuihan and Rena~? Or Acchan and Rena~? Wait... I already thought of doing the latter... >.>
I do pair my faves, Yuko-sama and Rena-sama, Yuko-sama and Acchan. Heck, I even have Rena-sama and Acchan paired in one of my stories~~ Nya~ so fun to read about all writers.. I should also write about myself when I have more time, nee?
I'm guessing Acchan ain't yar top oshii since yar not using a '-sama' for 'er XD And dude! Where is it?! I wanna read it QAQ
sakura_drop_san, as I once said a few months ago,
You, sir, are awesome! QAQ
I just read the beginning (since I'm not letting the ending get the better of me if it turns into a murderous ending) and not only is it (supposed to be) AtsuRena but also AtsuYui?!
You just made my day!!! >w<
Ashura's top 3:
1. Maeda Atsuko
2. Matsui Rena
3. Yokoyama Yui
Llyoo-san is a 21 year old girl who tried to pair up Malfoy and a Weasley (Seriously?) and also has a habit of making a fic into a murderous or sad ending. I've never read any but now I'm curious...
[b]Writing history:[/b]
Name/AKA: LoyalFlutist
Age: 16
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Do you write fanfics?
How did you get into AKB48/fanfics?
Writing history: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29068.msg1221382#msg1221382 (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=29068.msg1221382#msg1221382)
seigus-san, by your will OAO. XD
Llyloo-san, but don't ya think happy endings are fun~? Like, I could never find it in me to kill Acchan in any of my fics. I just can't. There are somethings like Acchan gets 'hurt' by her pair, either Takamina, Yuko or Mariko-sama but that's just it~ Killing Acchan in my fic is my last resort, unless I find a more cuter/happier/Yuko-loving ending. But still... Acchan murder case sounds fun... : D
What made you start writing in general? Especially with the 48 Group? And if you want to, I guess share the time when you first started writing and if still writing, how you got to this point.
Girl A bumped into a long-haired girl outside the school gate.
Girl B: Ouch! (falls down)
Girl A: (rushes forward) Are you okay?
At that time, the fanfic community here was much smaller compared to what we have now. While going through the fanfics on the board, I came across a superbly entertaining and well-paced multi-chapter and multi-character story. Because of that story, I emerged from my lurking status and posted regular reviews/comments for the writer's stories. The more I read, the more I was inspired to write my own AKB48 fanfics. Bit by bit, the desire to challenge that writer's level of writing grew and it finally exploded last July when I posted two one-shots to celebrate Kashiwagi Yuki's birthday. Due to the encouraging feedback I received from the lovely readers, I decided to develop my second one-shot into a multi-parter which is now known as the Dr. Watanabe x Nurse Kashiwagi series.
What made you start writing in general? Especially with the 48 Group? And if you want to, I guess share the time when you first started writing and if still writing, how you got to this point. (Kind of like a little timeline to you first writing till certain points.) The lengthier it is, the more we get to know about you and that creative mind, haha~ :cathappy
What made you start writing in general? Especially with the 48 Group? And if you want to, I guess share the time when you first started writing and if still writing, how you got to this point.
I haven't been here... yet... :shocked
seeing the content of the place I feel bad I didn't acknowledge this :sweatdrop:
so uh... lemme share what I remember(I doubt anyone would read this)
I started to know about AKB when I was 13 years old, I was a second year high back then. [2011 :D ]
A friend of mine keeps on posting AKB stuff on his Facebook causing me to be curious, that friend of mine his kami-oshi is acchan.
I asked what AKB is and he told me the simple term.
He gave a link to his favorite Preformance; RIVER.
I got a lil bit more curious. I searched them up and stuff and after the search I watched Channel [V]
to me surpresa AKB, AKB everywhere [Coincidence? I think not!! :w00t: ]
The very first PV I watched:
OOGOE Diamond.
After that I don't even remember how I got addicted and became attached to this special family :)
But what I know is that I LOVED mayuyu, she was my numero uno oshi!! until I became an DD [Dare Daisuki]
Now in fanfiction.... I...I don't even remember when I started reading them... :sweatdrop:
Ok anyways uhh.... The very first fanfic [AKB FANFIC] I read was a MAYUKI fanfic
[And was followed by the fandom and 1 smut and After that this DAMN RIGHT LONG user name was born XD ]
Then I came across with one ATSUMINA.
"Forget me not" was the title back then I didn't cry much since I didn't have much info about other pairings...
[Read it again a month ago.... DEM FEELS MAN!!!]
After that this DAMN RIGHT LONG user name was born
I don't remember how I got into fanfics...[I feel like it started off with Anime Fanfics... ] :nervous
But what I do remember was making my first fanfic, a SAEYUKI fanfic, on a Darn notebook...
"INFINITY II: We finally meet again my love"
[After watching infinity musical from mayuki to saeyuki shipper :lol: ]
This Fic was never finished, it's been 2 years since I started making this and Rewriting it on another notebook with
Extended chapters [Chap 4 is 17 pages long and Back to Back, reason why I haven't updated that dull thing]
I then started reading SAEYUKI stories.
So far...
Crono-san's "REACHING OUT TO YOU" Was the only thing that kept me hanging in the cliff hanger section XD
But as I started reading more fics here as a mere silent reader, I started to love the works here, and then I wanted to type and post my own creations.
the first one I ever made here was
"Goodbye isn't Forever I promise: THE TOKYO DOME STORY"
After receiving feedbacks...
I started writing for the sake of others. I feel happy when someone comments because by then, I know someone enjoys
The hobby I love to do.
Then everything was followed by "New years isn't the same without you" "Sin and Punishment" "INFINITY II" "PHLOPHOBIA[Editing it]"
"Maternal Love" etc
I keep on writing because many are reading. I love to write make stories that can make you Cry,Laugh, get angry and everything...
Being a writer has been the greatest thing I've decided to be. Because I can share what my mind can offer for others.
Practically, this what sums it up... [And this was made by my remaining memories due to Memory loss probs.... I'm 15(i think) yet I already have memory loss :lol: ]
I'll try and edit this once I remember everything... if I'm allowed to :D
I haven't been here... yet... :shocked
seeing the content of the place I feel bad I didn't acknowledge this :sweatdrop:
so uh... lemme share what I remember(I doubt anyone would read this)
I started to know about AKB when I was 13 years old, I was a second year high back then. [2011 :D ]
A friend of mine keeps on posting AKB stuff on his Facebook causing me to be curious, that friend of mine his kami-oshi is acchan.
I asked what AKB is and he told me the simple term.
He gave a link to his favorite Preformance; RIVER.
I got a lil bit more curious. I searched them up and stuff and after the search I watched Channel [V]
to me surpresa AKB, AKB everywhere [Coincidence? I think not!! :w00t: ]
The very first PV I watched:
OOGOE Diamond.
After that I don't even remember how I got addicted and became attached to this special family :)
But what I know is that I LOVED mayuyu, she was my numero uno oshi!! until I became an DD [Dare Daisuki]
Now in fanfiction.... I...I don't even remember when I started reading them... :sweatdrop:
Ok anyways uhh.... The very first fanfic [AKB FANFIC] I read was a MAYUKI fanfic
[And was followed by the fandom and 1 smut and After that this DAMN RIGHT LONG user name was born XD ]
Then I came across with one ATSUMINA.
"Forget me not" was the title back then I didn't cry much since I didn't have much info about other pairings...
[Read it again a month ago.... DEM FEELS MAN!!!]
After that this DAMN RIGHT LONG user name was born
I don't remember how I got into fanfics...[I feel like it started off with Anime Fanfics... ] :nervous
But what I do remember was making my first fanfic, a SAEYUKI fanfic, on a Darn notebook...
"INFINITY II: We finally meet again my love"
[After watching infinity musical from mayuki to saeyuki shipper :lol: ]
This Fic was never finished, it's been 2 years since I started making this and Rewriting it on another notebook with
Extended chapters [Chap 4 is 17 pages long and Back to Back, reason why I haven't updated that dull thing]
I then started reading SAEYUKI stories.
So far...
Crono-san's "REACHING OUT TO YOU" Was the only thing that kept me hanging in the cliff hanger section XD
But as I started reading more fics here as a mere silent reader, I started to love the works here, and then I wanted to type and post my own creations.
the first one I ever made here was
"Goodbye isn't Forever I promise: THE TOKYO DOME STORY"
After receiving feedbacks...
I started writing for the sake of others. I feel happy when someone comments because by then, I know someone enjoys
The hobby I love to do.
Then everything was followed by "New years isn't the same without you" "Sin and Punishment" "INFINITY II" "PHLOPHOBIA[Editing it]"
"Maternal Love" etc
I keep on writing because many are reading. I love to write make stories that can make you Cry,Laugh, get angry and everything...
Being a writer has been the greatest thing I've decided to be. Because I can share what my mind can offer for others.
Practically, this what sums it up... [And this was made by my remaining memories due to Memory loss probs.... I'm 15(i think) yet I already have memory loss :lol: ]
I'll try and edit this once I remember everything... if I'm allowed to :D
You didn't say about Airin, your new Kami-oshi and your Senpai that you've been obsess.. XD XD XD
And you didn't say how you ditch Mayuyu...... :P :P :P :) :lol: :lol: :lol:
Don't know about interesting but it's certainly easier to read with good grammar :nervous
Although in my case any story is a good thing now XD Really need to start writing again :nervous
Though this site doesn't have many grammar-nazi
Well my english is way bad, need time to correct grammars... (All hail Asians)First, I'm not taking this in any negative way :) though generally speaking, being Asian doesn't make you any better or the other way around. :lol:
About OTP's, some readers are enjoyably reading that rather a non-pairing fic...Romance is really not my forte (Shikaku Kankei is only my current fic that has romance in it). Because of that, creating an OTP fic is way harder and more difficult than creating a non-pairing thread, especially Action and Sci-fi genre (my favorites).. :) :)Like I said, people do have different styles and of course preferential :lol: as for me, I'm fine with any XD
LOL!Though this site doesn't have many grammar-nazi
Jokes I'm not that fussy, I just couldn't resist this opportunity XD
@imteedee & Saku: I'll get it done eventually but considering I've just moved out the other week I think I have a legit reason to be a bit busy XD Still sorry for taking so long :nervous
Is a fic with correct grammar more interesting to read than a fic with incorrect grammar?
no one is perfect... But at least check your written texts with spellchecker in word and fix the paragraphs..
What genre do you find it easier to write in?Err... Probably fluff. Like, innocent slice of life or something. I can do most things but fluff is probably something I can think of quicker. I don't know if the readers are satisfied with the fluff I wrote but I myself am satisfied XD As for the opposite to the question, I find it hard to write action and smut... Action, because I can't... exactly... transfer what I'm thinking, the fights, to my writing... And as for smut... well... I don't actually have to explain that, do I?
Is it easier for you to write a non-pairing or OTP/any-pairing fic?
Be also very aware that high level English could make people confused. Like how I read some AtsuYuu smut the other day and I was flabbergasted by how the writer wrote the story in a very intellectual fashion.
Be also very aware that high level English could make people confused. Like how I read some AtsuYuu smut the other day and I was flabbergasted by how the writer wrote the story in a very intellectual fashion.
I think you are referring to flowery language. Proper grammar should never confuse readers whereas flowery language might do just that due to overly elaborate (and sometimes unnecessary) descriptions that take the attention away from the plot and action. That's not to say that flowery language doesn't have its advantages. It is good for establishing the mood and describing the setting but overusing it when the focus should be on the story development can be just as distracting as having lots of grammatical errors in the story.
Not really? I meant that the writer uses words that are... well... not in basic English. And of course medieval language... Those are hard to understand...
"The girl woke up from her slumber, teary-eyed after yawning. She was wearing her school uniform, a white blazer, red tie, pink skirt, and her hair was done in a ponytail-fashion since she forgot to let down her hair the day before thanks to her best friend's constant story-telling of her and her adventures with her girlfriend. Inside the room was messy. A pair of blue undergarments was lying on the table, a wooden-colored chair was sat next to her bed, a yellow lamp shone brightly at the corner of the room and the white rectangular door was opened, probably due to her best friend's constant come and go into her room."
Okay, that was probably pointless... Anywho, to me, I think that's already too far into detail.
Ask Yourself, Why?
When you go through your manuscript, ask yourself what the purpose of each scene is. For instance, if you have your main character go to the deli, ask yourself why it is important for the reader to know about this. And I’ll give you a hint, if you’re illustrating the setting to the reader, this scene will need to be either removed or enhanced. Otherwise, it will slow down your book’s momentum, and from there you can lose reader interest.
If you go through the entire day of your main character—from the moment he wakes up, to the shower he takes and the meal he eats—that’s a huge red flag that you need to be asking yourself why the reader should care. Almost always this is an indicator that you need to tighten up your story and thin these sections out.
How do writers decide what details are important?Interesting thought that, a handy article as well. I guess I've never consciously gone through the steps outlined in the article (think of that what you will) but I think of most of writing is fairly linear and the events tend to stick and focus on the main plot, so not many little OTP moments on the side. This might seem a little too narrow but if the story is focusing on a pair then the whole story is like a moment between the two? XD
Is a fic with correct grammar more interesting to read than a fic with incorrect grammar?
What genre do you find it easier to write in?
also...
Is it easier for you to write a non-pairing or OTP/any-pairing fic?
When you write, are you prone to putting your oshis into really bad positions, nearly killing them, killing them, or making their character very sad?
When you write, are you prone to putting your oshis into really bad positions, nearly killing them, killing them, or making their character very sad?
When you write, are you prone to putting your oshis into really bad positions, nearly killing them, killing them, or making their character very sad?
When you write, are you prone to putting your oshis into really bad positions, nearly killing them, killing them, or making their character very sad?
I am having difficulties, if somebody helps me I thank.
I am new in the forum.
When I am reading a fanfictions, some parts say, to go in the session pervy but when I click of the the following sentence.
The topic or board you are looking for appears to be either missing or off limits to you.
I already made login and everything but he/she doesn't enter. :cry:
Somebody helps me please. :bow:
This has been lingering in my mind for a while...
For the writers here, I would like to know the reasoning when you start a fic and choose the characters. Do you start it with a plain draft that doesn't involve any girl or you already have anyone in mind and adjust the script accordingly?
I hope I make sense with the question lol.
For the writers here, I would like to know the reasoning when you start a fic and choose the characters. Do you start it with a plain draft that doesn't involve any girl or you already have anyone in mind and adjust the script accordingly?
This has been lingering in my mind for a while...
For the writers here, I would like to know the reasoning when you start a fic and choose the characters. Do you start it with a plain draft that doesn't involve any girl or you already have anyone in mind and adjust the script accordingly?
I hope I make sense with the question lol.
But what had with the fanfiction:
"Messy Man - Aggressive Woman."
Did they delete, because? :cry: :cry:
How do I do, to read, or to enter in contact with the writer?
Here, I will state my feeling. I thought delete an old account and create new will change the way, I want to start a new and Daigong promise me to keep this as secret, now you guys bashed me? Thanks guys, and Sorry Jul3, You're so hot! :wriggly:
I will stop writing now, thanks for supporting me before
and Seigus, I have request, could you please delete my thread again? Thanks and sorry, I should ask Daigong what's wrong with this? Every year will be a hot issues for me~ Nyaha! :on gay:
Here, I will state my feeling. I thought delete an old account and create new will change the way, I want to start a new and Daigong promise me to keep this as secret, now you guys bashed me? Thanks guys, and Sorry Jul3, You're so hot! :wriggly:
But, it's impossible for me to be an author, because I'm busy and I don't have a talent to be a writer.. :grin:
I have two ideas that I want to put into a story or fanfic..
But, it's impossible for me to be an author, because I'm busy and I don't have a talent to be a writer.. :grin:
So, I'm looking for a writer who is willing to help me with these ideas of mine..
PM me if you're interested..
Thank you..
*SOS Brigade room*
Haruhi S.: *slams hand onto desk* "Everyone! We will be visiting a host club! >:'D"
Kyon: "Hah...? o.o;"
Yuki: "..."
Mikuru: "E-E-Eh?! @.@" *almost spills tea from her tray*
Koizumi: "Well well... Isn't this interesting? A host club, huh?" *smiles*
Kyon: *recovering from shock* "Is there a reason Haruhi wants to go to a host club? Isn't it a place where men goes and make a women feel happy or something? o.O"
Yuki: “Hosts are sort of heterosexual male sex workers, but they do not sell ‘sex,’ though it can happen outside of the club. It is more of a companionship, like a hostess club. Or their work is similar to escorts, but much more institutionalized."
Kyon: "..."
Yuki: *stops reading her book and looks up to Kyon* "That is merely what a 'Host Club' means."
Kyon: "Er... Okay then... -.-"
What motivates you to write?
What motivates you to write?
I have two ideas that I want to put into a story or fanfic..This's the first time for me to give a comment in this thread, because I'm not a good author either. :P
But, it's impossible for me to be an author, because I'm busy and I don't have a talent to be a writer.. :grin:
So, I'm looking for a writer who is willing to help me with these ideas of mine..
PM me if you're interested..
Thank you..
But I'm curious~ in what situation do you write the most efficiently in?
:deco: I have a MaYuki fanfic with other couples but IDK if I should put it up~ It's an AKB x Anime crossover~ Can you guys help me? :rock: :peace: :thumbup
Typically, I write most of my stuff after 6 PM and when I'm sleepy. (It might just be that I'm too lazy to write when I'm active...)
But I'm curious~ in what situation do you write the most efficiently in?
Well I'm curious for one thing, how did you guys gather/think/come up with an idea to write a fanfic?
Also~ What inspires you to write fluff/angst/wtv it is? :lol:
May I throw back the questions? I'm curious about your answers though....Kate. :D]
Oh wow, this group has a very interesting and fun comments to read XD
Well I'm curious for one thing, how did you guys gather/think/come up with an idea to write a fanfic?
Also~ What inspires you to write fluff/angst/wtv it is? :lol:
I've got another curiosity...
Which member has a harem in your point of view? Explain maybe?
Jurina - Rena, Mayu, Churi
Sae - Yuki, Sayaka, Acchan (based on their relationship in Majisuka Gakuen), Kasai
Takamina - Acchan, Mocchi (ear fetish), Haruna, Tomochin
Yuki - Mayu, Sae, Rena
Acchan - Takamina, Miichan, Yuko
I've got another curiosity...
Which member has a harem in your point of view? Explain maybe?
hi i was wondering if i could have access to the pervey section?
Please somebody helps me.
I am seeking a fanfic that I read. It is on the takamina, acchan and yui.
Acchan and yui, fight for the takamina.
I don't remind the name of the fanfic.
excuse my English.
This is a question I've had for awhile, but what are some popular couples that aren't written about here?
I ship a lot of the smaller pairings that no one really cares for in this forum (the ~big~ ones being Wmatsui, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Atsumina, Atsuyuu, MariMii, etc). I understand that they're popular and all, but I was wondering what other pairings people shipped despite not writing about them due to the lack of overall support in this forum (i.e. I ship Akicha/Reina, but no one is very into them? Not to mention I like FuuKei, UmeMii, etc).
hello, I saw a fanfic with Mayu and Miłki they are twins and have a little sister Jurina. I Would like know the title or the author please.
Hi everyone,
I am not sure if I am allow to post this here, but I am fairly new. I have read a couple fanfics on here. I am a fan of YuiParu and NMB pairings. Can anyone recommend any fanfics that has YuiParu or NMB pairings? The pairings does not have to be the main character of the story! Thank you. If I am not allow to post this here, then let me know, I will remove this immediately! Thank you!
My fear right now? That I won't ever be able to finish Virgin Love because I'm super moody bastard with lazy bums lol.
My fear right now? That I won't ever be able to finish Virgin Love because I'm super moody bastard with lazy bums lol.
Same... I fear that I couldn't finish Mask because I'm hellla busy with work :banghead:
My fear is being stuck up with my fantasies. XD
someone asked me...what is your greatest fear being a writer?
My fear right now? That I won't ever be able to finish Virgin Love because I'm super moody bastard with lazy bums lol.
Same... I fear that I couldn't finish Mask because I'm hellla busy with work :banghead:
I'm afraid that I can't finish ALL of my fics.. I'm on the period of laziness now.. :banghead:
I think most writer have the same fear, don't they?
Not being able to finish due to whatever... Which is my biggest fear because I tend to start things, instead of finishing them...
Not interesting enough... my 2nd fear, because I feel like my story is boring, therefore I have no readers at all...
Not meeting expectation or whatever...
I think it's easy to end. The hardest thing is how to connect the beginning to the end lol.second that...especially for a person like me whose ideas come in random order :err:
and yet I think I saw you win on one of the contests here, eh? congrats :twothumbs yeah, and for that I need to set goals, seriously I still think of these stuff once in a while, and that for the sake of what we call peace of mind, I think I need to update...I miss writing :lol: and Hiiiii to you all long time no post XD
I think it's easy to end. The hardest thing is how to connect the beginning to the end lol.
My fear right now? That I won't ever be able to finish Virgin Love because I'm super moody bastard with lazy bums lol.
Same... I fear that I couldn't finish Mask because I'm hellla busy with work :banghead:
I'm afraid that I can't finish ALL of my fics.. I'm on the period of laziness now.. :banghead:
It looks at me again, I am saving the fanfiction I'm reading, but there's one that I forgot, is with Acchan and Takamina, they are dating but Atsuko finds her father, and he forces Takamina break with Acchan. And in the end the two announce the graduation. I thought I saved it, but I guess not. If someone can help me, I thank you.
I know it's getting annoying asking this, but I tried searching but can not find. :bow: :bow: :bow:
We're on the same boat :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Anyways... Has anyone know some Kumiyuri fanfics?? That pairing was so rare that it sleeps on the deepest trench... :( :( :(
Kumiyuri is my most OTP, second to Mayuki, Wmatsui, Atsumina, Furuyanagi and Rinorie.... :) :) :)
My fear right now? That I won't ever be able to finish Virgin Love because I'm super moody bastard with lazy bums lol.
Same... I fear that I couldn't finish Mask because I'm hellla busy with work :banghead:
I'm afraid that I can't finish ALL of my fics.. I'm on the period of laziness now.. :banghead:
We're on the same boat :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
Anyways... Has anyone know some Kumiyuri fanfics?? That pairing was so rare that it sleeps on the deepest trench... :( :( :(
Kumiyuri is my most OTP, second to Mayuki, Wmatsui, Atsumina, Furuyanagi and Rinorie.... :) :) :)
Just a little rant but I wish there were more sister groups fanfics... or even just fanfics with AKB youngsters. ;(
I'm curious if anyone else feels the same way...
Are there any fanfics out there where you cringe and feel sick because it was written, and you think that this fanfic should never exist?
It's not the way it's written or anything like that, but you just can't stand it for some reason, and you don't like the idea of it one bit...
I know all of you are awesome when it comes to writing. But I have a question, what is/are your secrets when it comes to writing?
Do you use your:
Feelings?
Thoughts?
Personal experience?
Or you just rant a lot?
(You can add something if your secret is not there) :mon sweat:
Thank you! :mon bye:
It really depends on what kind of story I am writing.
Mostly I write when inspiration hits me, and it can be activated by even the tiniest things.
There are times when emotions or my personal experience gives me a lot of ideas for my fictions, however, I try to not rely on them too much. I just take the gist/idea of it. Then I put myself into my character's shoes and write the story from a different perspective, with sometimes different environment and outcome/happenings than what happened to me.
Sometimes the events that are happening give me thoughts and based off of them are some of my greatest fics (in my opinion). Times when you have nothing to do with something personally but put your own thoughts and perspective on it is when the best work can be produced. How would I feel if that were to happen to me? What would I do? This main character in the story, with his/her personality, can he/she endure this? And etc. It makes the writer work more on the character's development, so I think it is one of the greatest ways to start a fic and go with it.
Ranting is one of the lesser preferences of mine, because with ranting you might lose yourself in your own emotional drive and forget the character and his/her personality and behavior.
I hope this made sense ^^;
P.S. @Rine: that Yuuko-sama picture :heart:
That's right, Saku. But what if your stories are based from vampire, wolves, witches, and other mythical creatures? :dunno:
I KNOW RIGHT?! :mon inluv:
There are a lot of authors who left their story hanging. Oh well, real life crisis will always get in your way. .-.
There are a lot of authors who left their story hanging. Oh well, real life crisis will always get in your way. .-.
I fully agree with you! Sometimes just have to think own continuation of the unfinished stories.. But it's not the same anymore.. :(
There are a lot of authors who left their story hanging. Oh well, real life crisis will always get in your way. .-.
hello everyone.. will you recommend me for wmatsui fanfics genre angst/au? :mon inluv:
sorry for my bad grammar >.<
Uhm.. I just wanna ask.. Since Jurina is already 18 now, can I post a Wmatsui smut in jphip?
I just want to ask y'all good folks. :dunno:
You see, I've been doing some research about Nogizaka46 because I'm curious about them. Uhh..then yeah, some ships we're showed off. Are there are some fics here (or on Tumblr) about WakaReika and IkuMai? :hehehe:
Thanks! /o/
^ Haha, I would be glad if we have more sister groups fics that is not wMatsui, really. SayaMilky is still fine because there are not too many fics of them at the moment but I would be appreciate more if other pairings are explored. SKE and NMB have so many pairings and it is a waste that they are rarely utilized here. I won't talk about HKT because the pairings there are like an endless cycle, everyone is shippable with the others lol.
Well, more fics with younger gens of AKB is also a great idea. I mean, MogiSaho? YuiriAyaka? So many potentials to explore.
^ Haha, I would be glad if we have more sister groups fics that is not wMatsui, really. SayaMilky is still fine because there are not too many fics of them at the moment but I would be appreciate more if other pairings are explored. SKE and NMB have so many pairings and it is a waste that they are rarely utilized here. I won't talk about HKT because the pairings there are like an endless cycle, everyone is shippable with the others lol.
Well, more fics with younger gens of AKB is also a great idea. I mean, MogiSaho? YuiriAyaka? So many potentials to explore.
It would be nice :)
Although I think majority should be written out for a following which gives an idea XD
i also wrote some of the lesser known pairings. but i mostly focused on ske, tried to wrote some nogizaka too
problem is i don't really have time to wrote what i had in draft so i couldn't update often
Okay, I've been here for quite a while but never actually post in this thread when I could use some tips :v
might as well do it now then..
Okay, I've known lots of themes and different settings of fanfics from this place and not forgetting pairings as well. But the thing that intrest me the most is how readers tends to prefer fanfics that includes minstream pairings and pay more attention to them a lot more than the ones aren't. Well, a lot of them that includes old generation members as the pairings (which most of them graduated already), but then surprisingly many new members here actually know the pairings despite graduations.
Now my point here is, I'm not asking for anybody to stop taking interest in them but rather than I want to try to get readers to take a look at other pairings as well that may be small but potentially big in the coming times. I know some of you read my fanfics already, so could anybody give me some sort of tips as to how make readers intrested in the uncommon pairings please? If anybody can do so, that would be very lovely.
Okay, I've been here for quite a while but never actually post in this thread when I could use some tips :v
might as well do it now then..
Okay, I've known lots of themes and different settings of fanfics from this place and not forgetting pairings as well. But the thing that intrest me the most is how readers tends to prefer fanfics that includes minstream pairings and pay more attention to them a lot more than the ones aren't. Well, a lot of them that includes old generation members as the pairings (which most of them graduated already), but then surprisingly many new members here actually know the pairings despite graduations.
Now my point here is, I'm not asking for anybody to stop taking interest in them but rather than I want to try to get readers to take a look at other pairings as well that may be small but potentially big in the coming times. I know some of you read my fanfics already, so could anybody give me some sort of tips as to how make readers intrested in the uncommon pairings please? If anybody can do so, that would be very lovely.
Okay, I've been here for quite a while but never actually post in this thread when I could use some tips :v
might as well do it now then..
Okay, I've known lots of themes and different settings of fanfics from this place and not forgetting pairings as well. But the thing that intrest me the most is how readers tends to prefer fanfics that includes minstream pairings and pay more attention to them a lot more than the ones aren't. Well, a lot of them that includes old generation members as the pairings (which most of them graduated already), but then surprisingly many new members here actually know the pairings despite graduations.
Now my point here is, I'm not asking for anybody to stop taking interest in them but rather than I want to try to get readers to take a look at other pairings as well that may be small but potentially big in the coming times. I know some of you read my fanfics already, so could anybody give me some sort of tips as to how make readers intrested in the uncommon pairings please? If anybody can do so, that would be very lovely.
I'm one of those readers who likes to stick to mainstream pairing even though half of them are already graduated. So I can't really give you tips regarding changing our point of view into reading the uncommon pairings, but I can give you my perspective regarding it and hopefully it'll help you somehow...
There are some of us out there who sticks to our OTP only and would occasionally read other pairings that are included within our OTP fanfic, but that's pretty much it because we're that stubborn. We don't really care for anyone else besides our OTP. There are some who sticks to a specific genre of their OTP as well. Those who have an OTP should understand what I mean by all this.
Sadly, I'm all of everything above... I like AtsuMina only, and only read them if it's girl x girl because I dislike genderbending. I would prefer happy stories over sad, but I read them all anyway, except if they end up really bad. Also writing skills, formatting, and English plays a big part in determining if a story is good to read or not.
Then there are people out there who are very open-minded. They could read any pairings because they're a DD (dare demo daisuki) and could tolerate all kinds of pairing. Fanfic/AKB48 overall interest them more than a specific pairing.
I think there are plenty of DD out there, so you can totally appeal to those audience versus those who are stubborn OTP only readers.
If you think KojiYuu is too mainstream here at JPH!P, try to look at the fanfics board and think again. XD
But still, don't give up. Try to write more stories about your favorite pair, then maybe there is a silent reader who will just magically appear. :>
Yuki-san, I think you forgot a certain pair. XD
PS:Please update Virgin LoveXD
Yuki-san, I think you forgot a certain pair. XD
PS:Please update Virgin LoveXD
Yeah MaYuki
although i know the answer for the Virgin Love XD
Quick question, can I post Nogizaka46's fic?omg moe please do (though idk if it's alright to post ngzk fics in this section) :inlove: and #imissyourfics
we also need more furuyanagay fics
we also need more furuyanagay fics
Technically we need variety... just some people do it in other places :lol:
we also need more furuyanagay fics
Technically we need variety... just some people do it in other places :lol:
what do you mean in other places?
yes...I hope we had more of furuyanagi, rinorie, sayamilky fics... also, that readers won't get scared with various different pairings...
we also need more furuyanagay fics
Technically we need variety... just some people do it in other places :lol:
what do you mean in other places?
yes...I hope we had more of furuyanagi, rinorie, sayamilky fics... also, that readers won't get scared with various different pairings...
honestly... the writers who do that now have their own places to write with just how it is hard for others to break away from the usual pairings. For now, I'm doing requests (which is on another board, PM me if you want to know what I'm talking about) and also I post on tumblr, which is where most of my stories to go regardless of situation.
Overall, the readers are very set to what they want to see and you can't change that personally, best thing is to seek others :nervous
I think FoF's Basket Case are pretty long at 26 (or 27?) chapters and nearly 300k words according to my archive iirc. And it is still unfinished lol.
Outcast and the Exiled has about 30-something chapters at the moment and it is also ongoing fic.
Can't remember about the finished ones though.
Anzai48's Human vs Vampire S1 quite long--25 chapters with few chapters being split into few parts--and now it continues to S2...
im interest have a question
what is the longest ff someone written in this fandom? how many chapter usually?
Well, I can't find th other KojiYuu ficts here, can you all help me? Thanks. :)
Well, I can't find th other KojiYuu ficts here, can you all help me? Thanks. :)
What about "How Long Does Forever Last?" author melon-lover ?
Well, I can't find th other KojiYuu ficts here, can you all help me? Thanks. :)
What about "How Long Does Forever Last?" author melon-lover ?
Can you send me the link? I'm actually looking for the old ficts like way back from 2011(?)-2013 hehe :)
Hi Guys :) So, i'm surprised that the WMatsui authors or whatever are so active. Y'all so amazing :)
Mayuki!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Hi Guys :) So, i'm surprised that the WMatsui authors or whatever are so active. Y'all so amazing :)
Mayuki!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Hi Guys :) So, i'm surprised that the WMatsui authors or whatever are so active. Y'all so amazing :)
Mayuki!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Wmatsui is the most populer pairing, i think
Hi Guys :) So, i'm surprised that the WMatsui authors or whatever are so active. Y'all so amazing :)
Mayuki!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Wmatsui is the most populer pairing, i think
I think it's a good thing that people started embracing more various pairings, it used to be all mainstream. I am one of those who is known for crack pairings (hi5 Kuro :D ) and as much as I love the mainstream ships, I am not afraid to get those said daggers thrown at me when I write the nonstream ships. Especially when I get no comments or likes XD that just drives me to write them more so people finally start noticing my love for weird ships :D
i love mainstream pairing...ship them every free time i have, totally read every wmatsui and mayuki fic i stumble
but i find myself write an eighteen chapter of Jurina and sakura fan fiction
i guess...i just find it interesting to look for more shipping possibility when i watch or find any akb materials around, since all the major pairing already graduate and left mayuki all alone
it used to be so fun...when watch a concert video ...and stop breathing when takamina look at achaan, or yuko casually flirt with kojiharu.. then stop the video,, just to rewind it for like 1000x...after they all gone... find it a bit lonely on the recent concert or video footage
i just want to find more reason to rewind the video i find, or to do more stupid analysis regarding the monotone blog they write... looking for shipping thread
Life takes away so much of our time from writing... Least, that's what I believe in. :catglare: Just to start a random banter, anyone dreads of the sensation where you want to write, but you can't due to school/work/responsibilities? It's quite an annoyance!
Takamina this dating?She wasn't confirmed nor denied anything in KoreNani Radio regarding her dating scandal leaking out.
hi...um im kinda new hereYes, You just paste the line and it'll show the video directly :)
I'm thinking of write a fic based on a FMV , but i can't figure out how to post a youtube video in here
is it even possible ? i think i saw it before .. but... i don't know how to do that
Hi guys, I just wanna say hi. My name is daigong and I pay the fees, founded the place with Masa and many many beautiful people.
THANK YOU FOR DOING WHAT YOU DO!
If you have any questons please do not worry and ASK ME!! I been gone too long, FUCK SCHOOL FUCK WORK FUCK BACKSTABBERS!!
:hipheart: is DA KING OF WEBSITES!!!
My DEUCES UP!!
“People love a happy ending. So every episode, I will explain once again that I don't like people. And then Mal will shoot someone. Someone we like. And their puppy.”
― Joss Whedon
Yes I do feel that way.
It is odd, indeed, to imagine that there's still something in our ships (chemistry/dynamic of relationship), when the ships are clearly going down.
Therefore when I read/write fanfic about them, I always imagine that I am watching movies/dorama adaptation in which the girls are just doing acts in front of camera.
It's hard to pretend that our pairing is still loveydovey in real life, because now we don't get daily dose of our old-OTP moments anymore (the graduated/old-gen members are probably busy with their own life and barely meet each other anymore). But it's far easier to pretend and imagine that in real life, at this time, the old-gen girls are having a rendezvous by doing a project together, co-starring in movies/dorama together (which will be based on fanfic adaptation XD) . This way it won't feel so odd anymore. Yes it creates a false illusion. But it works for me. :)
And besides, their chemistry in the past (before they graduated) were still real, right? :wub:
(Actually I still can't get over Mayuyu's graduation, so I'm writing this to cheer myself up. *MaYuki :cry: *)
Anyway, keep writing, LoyalFlutist-san!
I love your works!
I'm still in the middle of How Far Are You Prepared To Go, it's so thrilling & addicting
If you want to start writing about new-gen pairings, then go ahead, but please still do the old-gen too! :bow:
Heck, if you're in Stone Age, then I'm in Jurassic Age! XD
I've always wondered how odd it seems when I'm still stuck in the Stone Age with the kind of pairings I write in my work. Almost all of the ships are going downhill faster than one could holler "HOLA HOLA"! I wonder if any old writers (or new ones) that stuck with the Atsumina, wMatsui, Mayuki, SayaMilky, Twin Tower, MariMii and so on ever felt this way? :bleed eyes:
Late on this topic of conversation, but you can't help to like what you like. So if you really love Mayuki and you can only write them, then that's that. I'm still stuck on AtsuMina and I do continue to write them even though both has already graduated, and theres less material to work with now, but there are still some interaction between them and the chemistry/relationship doesn't seem to change from back in the AKB days.
I'm glad someone brought up this topic, because I sometimes felt like I was the only person sharing that kind of opinion in this fandom...
I agree mostly with everything that's been said here.
No matter if your ship or one member of your ship graduated and the girls interact very little now (or even not at all), it doesn't invalid the chemistry they had when they were still in the group. That chemistry was real and precious, and you can never take that away. In real life, people drift apart for different reasons. You change school or work. You move to another city/country. You progressively loose sight of that person you once were friends with. Does the fact you don't interact with that person anymore means that friendship/chemistry you had with that person was not real?
No, it doesn't.
In that sense - and contrary to many writers who seem to have a problem with that - it doesn't matter to me at all if there isn't any new 'material' to fuel my motivation. I see fanfic writers still writing about shows or movies that ended 5, 10 years ago. For instance, the Mai Hime fandom. The anime was released in 2004, and people still write new fanfics in 2017. How come? There is no new material to speak of. Well, somehow, they still feel inspired by those characters, and the beautiful relationship they had on that show.
Well, that's exactly how I feel about my ship WMatsui.
I'm glad someone brought up this topic, because I sometimes felt like I was the only person sharing that kind of opinion in this fandom...
I agree mostly with everything that's been said here.
No matter if your ship or one member of your ship graduated and the girls interact very little now (or even not at all), it doesn't invalid the chemistry they had when they were still in the group. That chemistry was real and precious, and you can never take that away. In real life, people drift apart for different reasons. You change school or work. You move to another city/country. You progressively loose sight of that person you once were friends with. Does the fact you don't interact with that person anymore means that friendship/chemistry you had with that person was not real?
No, it doesn't.
In that sense - and contrary to many writers who seem to have a problem with that - it doesn't matter to me at all if there isn't any new 'material' to fuel my motivation. I see fanfic writers still writing about shows or movies that ended 5, 10 years ago. For instance, the Mai Hime fandom. The anime was released in 2004, and people still write new fanfics in 2017. How come? There is no new material to speak of. Well, somehow, they still feel inspired by those characters, and the beautiful relationship they had on that show.
Well, that's exactly how I feel about my ship WMatsui.
Yeah, we all know that Wmatsui ship is pretty much sank now :fainted:
Rena doesn't even following jurina's Twitter acc :frustrated:
But I still love this ship anyway
they're just so cute together :ptam-shy:
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HI!
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how do I put this
well.. first I kinda spend a whole day, made this fan Made Video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yg1ON1pufqc
and theres a storyline and all and such on it
so I kinda confuse
can I post it here? can It be considered as fanficVid?
or should I write something for it? can I actually open bidding it for writer to write about it if they feel like? (since the only fanfic I could write is jurisaku :'D and maybe I give um... more fanvid in return)?
well um ... I'm throwing it here coz... this is where all the AKB48 shippers dwells they said
so... I'm open for a suggestion
Hi all, can't really find the right thread for this, but I want to ask if any of you can tell me the name of the following story.http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38269.0 this?
It's genderbender SaeYuki fic, where Yuki is an undercover cop(?) posing as a teacher at Sae's high school. They eventually fall in love, but somehow don't end up together because Yuki suddenly disappears. A few years later, Sae is now in training at some police academy, where he catches wind of Yuki and finds her.
Any help would be greatly appreciated!
but i can't go to perv section :fainted:
There was a Nogizaka46 fanfic called "All That Glitters" that featured Nanase and Maiyan working as editors at fashion magazines. I really enjoyed it, but now I can't find it anywhere. Was it deleted?
but i can't go to perv section :fainted:
As I see it, you need more posts. My best advice is to comment around the fanfics section. I think it would be good to see what you think of others if not you can venture out and post more about you :3
And good luck for finding collaborators (co-writers)! I will be looking forward for your next project! IMHO, you better look for someone who is younger or less experienced than you to do your projects, because now you are a senior member here and now it’s time for you to teach and nurture other members. If I were still young (as in highschool) I would definitely take your offer and take all the opportunity that I could get to learn anything from you (since you are so awesome), but alas, now I’m already too old and I have to retire from this fandom already.
It's been a while since I came back to this website. Quite interesting to see how much it had changed from the past 2 years.
Seems like all the AtsuMina writer/fans are dead lol and I don't blame any of them for it either. It feels like I'm the only one left even though none of my stories are finished either. It's sad to say that my heart isn't into this fandom anymore and it has move on to another, but AtsuMina will always have a place in it. I just need to woman up and finish my fics before retiring for good, but all the ideas I came up with wanting to write them would be such a waste if it isn't out there...anyways...
The news about RIVER being deleted by the author is very sad. That was one of my favorite fics to go back to and read... Is there any new good AtsuMina ones to read or have they really sunken and there are no chance of revival?
What are the kids into these days?
The kind of general 48 is hovering on it. Pretty underwhelming. I'm not surprised with all the members graduating although... the only active writer... is on the other side. 46 is pretty active yet I don't see a great one coming up soon
The kind of general 48 is hovering on it. Pretty underwhelming. I'm not surprised with all the members graduating although... the only active writer... is on the other side. 46 is pretty active yet I don't see a great one coming up soon
You know Kuro, I'm surprised you're still moderating around here considering your OTP is Mayuki? I believe they are still alive, right? Have you been writing or just sitting back and watch over?
You know Kuro, I'm surprised you're still moderating around here considering your OTP is Mayuki? I believe they are still alive, right? Have you been writing or just sitting back and watch over?
I had no OTP XD It's pretty much dead as well from how I see it. Best has been SayaMilky lately bc of Sayanee's graduation. I've been writing more towards the other forum where no one is currently reading keeping that afloat as long as I can and working on moderating the fics in general with a close eye about other issues which should arise one day...
You know Kuro, I'm surprised you're still moderating around here considering your OTP is Mayuki? I believe they are still alive, right? Have you been writing or just sitting back and watch over?
I had no OTP XD It's pretty much dead as well from how I see it. Best has been SayaMilky lately bc of Sayanee's graduation. I've been writing more towards the other forum where no one is currently reading keeping that afloat as long as I can and working on moderating the fics in general with a close eye about other issues which should arise one day...
Oh? I thought Sayanee graduated a long time ago lol... What's the other forum/fandom are you trying to keep afloat?
I think I'm destined to ship couples that are no longer together. I'm never there when it actually happens, but there when it's all over with -_-
I'm curious about the issues that you'll closing your eye for. How bad can it be?
Oh? I thought Sayanee graduated a long time ago lol... What's the other forum/fandom are you trying to keep afloat?
I think I'm destined to ship couples that are no longer together. I'm never there when it actually happens, but there when it's all over with -_-
I'm curious about the issues that you'll closing your eye for. How bad can it be?
I've been writing a lot of perv fics. Most of them are just that although reasoning behind why many don't see me in the areas where everyone has access to. The other part is that particular region because as bad as things are, I'm expecting it to grow unless the demand isn't there to start with
While there aren't many writers, I can definitely say theres a good handful of loyal readers.
Always better to have more fics! I look forward to reading your stuff. (Again!)
welcome back!
OOOOOOH SHACHOU, WELCOME BACK, :deco:
I'm actually also thinking of doing that in the near future, but honestly, do not know where to start from lolol been so long on hiatus it's not even funny :smhid :bow:
I know BbSis is coming back to write her projects too. At least, to finish them up. Not sure about the other writers, but it's at least comforting... mildly comforting to finish up what we have here... eventually. We'll just have to take them one step at a time. :panic: