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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #40 on: January 04, 2012, 10:19:39 PM »
Acchan agreed wxith a peace treat? Hum it smells trap

hmmm, did i make acchan sound that bad in the story? :P

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #41 on: January 06, 2012, 01:08:28 PM »
UPDATE!!!!!   :cow:

well... actually I'm late.... OTL


RAMBUTAN IS HERE!!!!  :twothumbs opps.... I mean Rabutan!  :sweatdrop:


“Lord Minegishi.”

There was silence in the room.  Everyone looked at Miichan but she doesn’t seem to be acknowledging.

Tomochin smacked Miichan on her arm.

“OW!” Miichan looked at Tomochin,who was giving her a death stare.

“Oh right, that’s me.” Miichan whispered.

Everyone mentally face palmed.

Miichan looked back at the visiting Lieutenant. “Yes?”

“I, Lieutenant Nakagawa, on behalf of Aikuchi Kingdom, accept your peace treaty offer.”

“YES!”  Miichan jumped up and down, hugged and kissed the stunned Lieutenant.

“Miichan!” Tomochin quickly grabbed Miichan away from Lieutenant Nakagawa while mentally face-palming herself again.  Just when she thought Miichan was finally serious, it’s like she is back to her previous self in an instant.

“Thank you Lieutenant.  Is there anything we can help with?” Sayaka asked.

“Thank you for your offer, we will be preparing to leave your kingdom.  Please excuse me.” Lieutenant bowed and left.

“We did it, we did it.” Miichan said while still happily  jumping up and down.  She went over to Yuki and gave her a big hug. 

“You’re awesome Yuki.  Would you like to work for this Kingdom? Be the Lord perhaps?” 

“HA?”  Yuki replied immediately wide eyed.

“Your reaction is cute as always!” Miichan pinched Yuki’s cheek.


aw~ Micchan!   :rofl:



Rabutan is here!!!!


Waiting for Acchan and Mayuyu's talk... Acchan is not bad at all  :cry:




Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for updating!  :twothumbs

forever waiting for you to update!  :bow:




and

RABUTAN IS HERE!!!! :heart:
sorry for being silly OTL



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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #42 on: February 04, 2013, 04:57:15 PM »
I know this thing haven't been updated for ages, but please update soon!!

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #43 on: February 04, 2013, 07:37:37 PM »
please please update soon!    :bow: the fanfics is fantastic!  :wub:

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #44 on: February 06, 2013, 04:22:01 AM »
wow. wasn't expecting to get a notification of reply in this thread.

Thanks!

I do have 2 more chapters written but not sure if i should upload it cause I don't have that writing feel to finish the story which makes it kinda pointless.

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 7 (Updated: Dec 28)
« Reply #45 on: February 08, 2013, 01:15:47 PM »
Pleaseee upload it :(

I'm dying for it!!!!  :bow:

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #46 on: February 22, 2013, 09:26:05 PM »
Wow, I'm actually updating?!?! A lot has happened in AKB world since I last updated! Well, since I do have some stuff written and this thread was bumped, I decided to post what I have.   Not sure if anyone is still reading this, here's part 1 anyways.

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Chapter 8 – It’s Party Time Part 1

“We need to tell Reina immediately that we need to save as much beer as possible for the grand celebration. Can’t have a party without Kiuchi beer.  Oh, and Yuko, I’m stealing Ayarin for the party, hmmm, that means we need lots of metal and plastic dishes.  Hmmm…”

“what else, what else…”

"Beer, check.  Food check.  Oh, guests!"

“Send an invitation to Aikuchi, everyone is invited.”

“This is gonna be the best party ever!”


It’s been two weeks since the end of war.


Miichan has been busy planning her party, leaving the Kingdom’s administrative work to Tomochin.

Miichan happily plan for the party while hanging out with Yuko, Yuki and Sasshi at Sae’s bar.


Rie walks into the bar. Yuko waved her over.

“Oh?” Sasshi surprised.

“I invited her to come after she finished fixing the vents from the lobby.” Yuko smiled.

Rie walked over to where they were sitting with a smile.

“It’s nice that everyone is back, it was weird living at your house Yuko, with just Ayarin and me.  I think I’ve gained 10 pounds while you were away. She kept cooking meals for 8 people.”

Everyone laughed.  Everyone has been trying to keep the mood light since the end of the war.


“So Yuki, what’s the weather going to be like for the next week?” Miichan asked.

“Eh?”

“It’s a weeklong celebration, I need good weather!” Miichan said seriously.


Tomochin entered the bar.

“Oh crap!” Miichan ducked under the table.

“Minegishi Minami!” Tomochin yelled.

“I am going to count to 3, if you don’t get your ass from under the table, I’m going to pull you out!”

Everyone smiled and enjoyed the commotion.

“One…”
“Two…”

“Okay okay, I’m up, I’m up!” Miichan surrendered.

“Sae, can I get a gin-a-tonic please.”

“Ehhhh. Tomochin, you finally give in.” Sae said as she handed Tomochin her drink.

“I’m going to drink this and then drag Miichan and her ass back to the palace.”

“Ha, not if I get back there before you do!” Miichan dashed out of the bar.

Tomochin sighed.

She took a sip from her drink and sighed again.

Yuko sat moved over to sit next to Tomochin and pat her on her back.

“Like I always say, Miichan is lucky to have you.”

Tomochin sighed loudly.

“I’ve been meaning to ask you, those attacks, were they your ideas or..?” Yuko asked.

Tomochin shook her head. “It was all Miichan, she took charge of the whole thing.  She knew the lands inside and out, every crook and nook of the area.  She took the info that Yuki gave her and ran with it.  I’ve never seen her so serious.”

Yuko simply nodded.

“But that was short lived. She’s back to her ways and I’m back to running her Kingdom.” Tomochin sighed.
   
“When was it ever Miichan’s Kingdom, Tomochin?  You can lie to yourself about it and deny it all your want, but you love Miichan as much as Miichan loves you and you love this Kingdom as much as Miichan does.”

“I don’t love her, I’m just bounded to her.”

Yuko rolled her eyes. “Sure Tomochin, if Miichan is going to marry someone, you’re really not going to care?”

“I don’t care who she marries!” Tomochin finished her drink and placed it on the counter.

“Are you sure about that?” Sae looked at Tomochin as she walked over to their table.

“Not  you too Sae, I’m in no mood for this.  Miichan can marry everyone in this Kingdom and I wouldn’t give a damn!” Tomochin raised her voice in reply.

“Careful what you say Tomochin, it might come true and you’ll regret it.” Sae replied.

Yuko gave a questionable look to Sae and Sae nodded back in return.



*Aikuchi Kingdom*


Knock Knock

“Come in.”

Atsuko opened the door and walked into the room.

“Atsuko.” Mayu said.

Atsuko placed the tray of cookies on to the round table in the middle of room. She sat down on the pillow by the small table next to the bed and motioned Mayu to sit next to her.

Atsuko grabbed two cookies and gave one to Mayu who was now sitting next to her.

Atsuko took a bite from her cookie and said, “It’s been awhile since we did this.”

Mayu nodded, “yah, not since I left for Bitoku…”

Mayu stopped mid-sentence. 

Atsuko looked at Mayu and moved closed to Mayu and gave her a hug.

“Atsuko, I…” Mayu started to sob in her embrace.

“It’s ok, it’s ok.” Atsuko patted Mayu and let her cry.

Atsuko has always felt guilty not being able to spend much time with Mayu.  She let Mayu cry in her arms and listened to what Mayu in between her sobs.

“So that’s how you were able to do it. You got close to Lord Kashiwagi.” Atsuko smirked at her little sister.

“What? It’s not like that!”  Mayu said while blushing.

“I guess I should have had the sex talk with you before you left.” Atsuko smirked.

“Atsuko!” Mayu blushed.

“My little sister is all grown up…sigh.”

“Atsuko!!!” Mayu slapped Atsuko.  “Stop teasing me!”

Atsuko laughed. “Okay, okay.”

“By the way, Kiuchi invited us to a celebration party, why don’t you and Minami go on behalf of our Kingdom.   I hear the Kiuchi Kingdom knows how to throw a good party!”

Mayu didn’t respond.

“It’ll be good for you, meet new people and have some fun.” Atsuko said as she lightly patted Mayu on her head.

“Okay…” Mayu agreed reluctantly.

Atsuko left Mayu’s room and walked back to her office.  She was in a good mood.  After spending the afternoon with Mayu, she felt relieved. 

She wondered, what is it that she’s fighting for.....

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #47 on: February 22, 2013, 09:49:45 PM »
lol miichan runs to the palace first so tomochin can't drag her :lol:
tomochin you love miichan really  :P :heart: :yep:
omg! mayu might see yuki  :shocked please find yuki, mayuyu! :deco: :deco:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #48 on: February 22, 2013, 09:57:33 PM »
Great updates.... as always....

Tomochin is so childish.... She likes Miichan... but doesn't want to acknowledge.

Miichan and Mayu are going to the party... what's going to happen there?

The story is getting more and more interesting...

I can't wait to see more....

Thank you for update...

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #49 on: February 22, 2013, 10:19:31 PM »
Thanks for the update! I'm always waiting..

That was funny, Miichan ran away, Tomo cant get her now

Ahh, Party party! I wonder what will happen once Mayu and Yuki meet  :shocked:


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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #50 on: February 23, 2013, 03:40:13 AM »
Thanks for updating!
I started reading just now and it's really good!
It reminds me a bit of Gou, the taiga drama.


Please keep writing. This is a really good story. Looking forward to more MaYuki  :cow:

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #51 on: March 12, 2013, 12:31:50 AM »
please update!  :cry: :bow: :bow:
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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #52 on: March 12, 2013, 09:14:40 AM »
Wazaah I wasn't  see the update! I love this story! Continue please!

I hope Mayu can meet Yuki!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #53 on: March 22, 2013, 03:38:53 AM »
what a great fic! haha  :on lol: btw please have more atsumina scene hehe. and please update soon! thanks  :cathappy:

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #54 on: March 23, 2013, 09:40:54 PM »
I'm you're silent reader and I just wanna let you know that I'm really following this fic.
I always love plots like this.. Do your best and take your time updating!
I'll be looking forward as always.
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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #55 on: March 24, 2013, 03:08:38 AM »
Please continue!!!!!  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #56 on: June 09, 2013, 01:15:08 PM »
continue this please :)
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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #57 on: June 09, 2013, 03:09:40 PM »
Continue this story please....

This is one of my fav. fic...

I had already forgotten about this fic... after so long didn't get any update

Well...Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #58 on: June 11, 2013, 09:27:59 AM »
Well, the author has a life too so we should just wait XD

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Re: Kingdoms - Chapter 8 (Updated: Feb 22)
« Reply #59 on: July 13, 2013, 02:15:42 AM »
I'm Loving this Fic so far  :twothumbs
Please tell me that Sae & Sayaka are a Couple  :wub:
Poor Yuki loosing her memory  :cry:
I wonder which Matsui is the Dead one...Jurina or Rena :?
I can't wait for the next part!  :panic:

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