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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Meetings
« Reply #80 on: August 22, 2011, 12:56:48 AM »
YAY!!!
its shorts but I guess its fine... :grin:

less gaming more updating...  :mon geek:

daddiee might not update if mommy keep playing...  :mon impatient:
Yah less gaming pwease and more updates
FLEAN don't say that pwease!!!
NALYN U BETTER UPDATE MORE OFTEN

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Meetings
« Reply #81 on: September 03, 2011, 12:15:19 PM »
my head hirts so much..!  :banghead:
i wanted to sleep but i ended up hooked on this!  XD
i have to finish it but my head hurts!  :catglare:
i'll finish it tomorrow! :cathappy:
btw "NICE FIC!!"  :twothumbs  :rofl:
i'm new with tomomo but i like it! hahahaha  :w00t:
I WAS ABOUT GIVE A PEEK TO NEXT PAGE! NOW I RELIZED THAT I'M  AN IDIOT  I THOUGHT THAT PAGE 5 HAD MORE CHAPTERS! hahahahahah :rofl:
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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Meetings
« Reply #82 on: September 08, 2011, 08:15:24 PM »
I want Tomotomo's blog be like that every day lol

Ah JP1 be careful next time xD

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Meetings
« Reply #83 on: October 28, 2011, 01:35:29 AM »
Kame is just passing by  :on gay:

not revised.

Love Impossible M3-Festival 1

After 2 weeks,Actual festival day

 In front of the gates~

Some students were welcoming the visitors.Today,both Ali and Bou are in duty.

"Morning and Welcome,please enjoy yourselves"Ali saluted playfully.Bou just rolled her eyes at her teammate's immature act.

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"Mama mitte!"Nina-chan pointed towards the two guards.

"They are girls,kakkoi!!"It was the little girl's first time to see female guards,she then waves at them when she got closer.

In return, Bou gives her a candy.

"A sweet candy for the sweet girl"Bou said with a wink.

"Ohh candies!,thank you Guard-san"Nina-chan bowed.

"Your welcome and please enjoy your visit".

"We will thank you"The mother and daughter then made their way inside.

"Ne,Takamina's family right?"Ali asked while facing the more upcoming visitors.

"Yeah"

"How much time left?"

Bou sighed"Just an hour more so stop fidgeting there"

Almost an hour passed...

"3minutes more!!!"Ali shouted,getting attention from the crowd and a certain short haired girl with a baseball cap and big shades.

The tall girl made her way to the blushing Ali and the now laughing Bou."Having fun aren't we?"

Ali and Bouj turned to her and welcomed her.

Bouj examined the girl in front of her gettign the feeling she knew her from somewhere but can't really recall.

Not until the girl removed her shades.

"Shinoda-san!"Both of them blurted out.

"How are you monkeys?"Mariko grinned.

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Meanwhile~

"Nalyn,how's it going there?"Gen. Yang was talking on her phone.

"Things are doing fine Gen. Hey!!!Stop doozing odd Jyan!"a smack was heard in thebackground.

"Aw, it's not my fault!Mitch was-"

"Ok no need for details" interrupted Gen.

"Sorry,anything else Gen?"asked Nalyn.

"How about the preparations?"

"Taka J finished all costums in time and heading here with Wisnu,the singers are on standby though some of them joined the morning celebration."

"Those girls really...I don't understand them.."Yang sighed.

"You're just getting old"Nalyn mumbled to herself.Jyan tried not to laugh.

"You're saying something Nalyn?"Gen Yang asked.

"Nope,just remembered something not important"she quickly answered.

"I see,oh well.My date is here.See you later at the concert" then the line is cut.

-....
Jyan burst out laughing."Pahahah"Jyan patted Nalyn's back.

"That hurt!anyways,it's a good thing she didn't hear me.Or else I'll be dead"She sweatdropped.

At the Kashiwagi Household~

"Wisnu!!Hurry up!"Taka J shouted.Today was the festival,so they have a day off.
They are supposed to be there in 30minutes but Wisnu woke up late to her surprise.

"Heck,there's always a first time".

"Ready"Wisnu said as soon as he stood next to Taka J.

"Here hold these while I take the suitcase."She handed him the handbags.

They walked to where the waiting car.Taka J opened the door for Wisnu.

"Ladies first"

"Who are you calling a Lady?!"Wisnu snapped putting the bags in the back seats.

"No one in particular"Taka J grinned who was already on the passenger's seat.

Wisnu narrowed his eyes but shrugged it off.He turned on the engine and drives away.

On their way they talked random things.

"Changing the topic,how's SaeYuki so far?"

Wisnu think for a second."Hmm,it was getting good until one of her ex's ruined it"

"Sae's?,sorry I've been busy with the dresses lately I didn't catch up on anything"

"Yeah"Wisnu makes a U turn then continued .

Flashback# 5 days before the actual Festival~

Sae and Yuki were talking while walking in the hallway,the others were busy with the preparations.

Wisnu had them on monitor,watching them.

Then he saw a girl approached Sae,checked out Yuki from head to toe and smirked.

Sae was getting nervous cause she remembered the girl but not her name.


"She called Yuki a slut and slapped Sae very hard leaving a mark calling her a player and left."

Yuki just stood there shocked wondering what just happened.When she recovered she looked at Sae with a questioning gaze and asked.

"Is that true?Are you a player?"She asked.She put aside being called a slut,this was more important.She needed answers and she wanted them now right from Sae's mouth.The word she heard sounded like a big explosion.

"Yes but it's-"Sae stopped when Yuki shakes her head and start turning away,then running afterwards.

"Wait Yuki! Let me explain!"Sae shouted runnning after the raven-haired girl.

"No, leave me alone!"Yuki answered back not wanting to listen.Sae was left all alone with a sadden face looking at where Yuki disappeared.

"She didn't even let me finish..."Sae sighed and walked back to her class,shoulders down.'I better clear things up before it's too late..'she thought.

Flashback end#

"Did I miss that much?damn"Taka J scoffed.

"Yeah and this one"Wisnu continued.

Another flashback#

2 days after the incident~

A group of friends were sitting on a picnic table in a park.

"Sae,you can do it!you're a player  so it should be easy to get her"one of Sae's friend encouraged her.

Wisnu was sitting near a bench disguised as an old man holding a newspaper.With some hightech earphones he could hear all their conversations.

"Dude,I quit being a player when I found her"Sae sighe earning a big laugh from them.

"Are you serious?The real Sae wouldn't say that"Sayaka said through laughters.

"I'm serious here Saya"Sae's tone changed making them stop.

"Yabe,our Sae finally graduated from being a player"Rena seems amused.

"Man, our top player had to be the 1st"Sayaka chuckled.

"What should I do?That girl called Yuki a slut and now Yuki hates me for being a player"Sae said with worried face.The others remained silent not knowing what to say.

Wisnu stood up and made a loud sigh,the youngsters looked at him with  curious faces.He turned to Sae."Lad"Sae pointed at herself.

"Oji-san are you talking me?"Sae asked.Wisnu nodded.

"Changing has it good and bad points.All the bad things you've done in your past will eventually come for you,till then bring yourself to accept them all and start over again.If you really love this girl,don't waste your time and clear things with her.Time is gold kiddo,don't make the same mistake like me."after his speech,Wisnu left.


flashback ends#

"OMG you did not do that"yelled Taka J shocked.

"Oh yes I did,Gen. Yang ordered me to spy Miyazawa after that day and help her when I can.There I helped her"Wisnu explained.

"Aiz"Taka J rolled her eyes.

"Oh we're here"Wisnu said,ahead of them was the school entrance.Wisnu parked the car near the gate.

"Seems like Ali and Bou's turn finished"Wisnu said while seeing 2 different guards in the entrance.

"Let's get these to the rest and look for them after"Taka J suggested.

"I wanna check those also"pointing at the stalls.

"Of course"
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Student counsil Room~

Yuki was busy revising some papers.The wall clock says 11:45am.The rest of the body counsil were out to check how was the festival doing.

Just then someone knocked on the door.Not asking who it was,she let her/him in.

"Yo" greeted that person.Letting out a sigh,she faced the one who've been bugging her with her sorries and 'I'm not a player anymore' .

"Oh Miyazawa-san,what brings you here?I thought you guys were busy?"Yuki asked.

"Not as busy as you it seems,here have some water"Sae put it on the desk.

"You didn't have to you know,there's a fridge over there as you can see but thanks anyway"she said taking the bottle in her hand.

Minutes passed but neither of them talked so to break the silence,Sae decided to leave.

"Seems like I'm disturbing you,I'll take my leave to go help my class"

Yuki didn't say anything,in fact she didn't know what to say.Sae already left the room.

She stood up and went to the window.After a minute she saw Sae walking to where the stalls are but stopped near a trashcan.She saw her throwing a white flower like a rose.

"Was that supposed to be mine?"She knew some flower language, the white symbolized Peace,Sae might have chosen it for peace offering.

"Have you really stopped being a player?"Yuki wondered.

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Sae's POV

I didn't have the guts to give her the flower,I've thrown it in a bin and walked to where my class was.

"Sae you're back!"Sayaka shouted when she saw me.She excused herself to the costumer and head to me,pulled me inside and gave me my uniform.

I sighed and just put it on.Looking on the mirror,I saw the playerme just before I met Yuki,the cause why I can't really get the girl I want.

After fixing the suit,I came out and began to serve as well.My class decided to make a BUtler café.

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"Juri,buy me some cottoncandy!" a girl with a red hoodie pointed at the Candy stall.

"You want more?!Takoyaki,yakisoba,hotdogs and now cottoncandy??Mayu!!"Jurina grunted.

"I'm hungry!"Mayu whined.

Just then,Mayu saw a sign "Butler Café" up to the 2nd floor.Her eyes shone..

"Cake!!"She pulled Jurina to where the café is.

"Oh dear,my allowance.."

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Back Stage Studio~1:10pm

"JP1-san,I'm going out to meet my girlfriend,can I?"a  red-haired guy  asked but with a femenine voice.

"Sure,go ahead,just don't take too long ok?We still need some last practises."JP1 said smiling at the latter.

"I'll come back with her thank you" he then left the room.

Angy was in the kitchen,the studio has one,preparing some snacks.Another two guys were seated on the couch.One has been waiting for his lover's call while the other one was reading a manga.

"Why is she not calling back?!"the one with the striped-blue hair whined.

The other on the other hand just finished reading and thought of something.

"Let's go to the stalls?"He suggested but the boy didn't hear him and kept on whining.

He continued."I heard there's also a gyoza stal-"He couldn't finished when his mate screamed.

"WHERE!?"He stood up and held him on his shoulders with both his hands.

"Second Floor left wing-"

"GYOZA!!"

"KYAAA!"

Then the door closed with a loud thud.Screams still could be heard outside.

"Wow,will Takamina be okay?"Angy asked putting down what she prepared.

"Let them be"JP1 shrugged.

Just then Wisnu and Taka J arrived with all the costumes.

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"Nina-chan say ahh"Ma Takahashi was feeding her youngest.

"I'm full mama, now Nina wanna go see oneechan"

"Sou ne,ok.I'll go out for a bit and call her,this place is noisy."the mother took out her phone and dialed a number.

"Don't talk to anyone ok?I'll just be outside"

"Un!" Nina-chan nodded.Ma Takahashi then went out leaving Nina alone on the table.

While waiting,Nina-chan watched the people around her,full of strangers.She stayed quiet,like a proper girl.She didn't notice a girl looking at her.The girl approached her and talked.

"Ne,Can I sit with you?"the girl asked.

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Atsuko was walking around,checking the stalls and some games sponsored by the student counsil.She bought something to eat,sweeten popcorns with different colors.

Entering another room,her eyes caught a lone figure of a little girl sitting on one of the tables.She didn't see any adult around her and she seems afraid but just pretending to be not.

"Hmm"Atsuko decided to approach her.

"Ne,Can I sit with you?"She asked.

The little girl turned to her.'Kyaaa kawaii!!' Atsuko thought,trying herself not to pinch those cheeks.Then the little girl spoke.

"Mama said not to talk to anyone."

Atsuko smiled.Such an obedient girl.But she made a mistake.

"But you're talking to me right now.."She teased.

"Ah,honto da"she scratched her head after realizing her mistake.

"Hehe,you're so cute"Atsuko giggled.

"I'm Atsuko and you are?"she asked after taking a seat.

"Nina-chan!"they shoke hands.

"oneechan's so pretty"Nina-chan said admiring her new friend.

Atsuko blushed but chuckled."Thank you,you're pretty too and very cute."

"By the way,what are you doing her alone?"the older girl asked.

"Nina-chan's waiting for Mama coz she calling onii- I mean oneechan"

'Oniichan?'

"Ahhh,then I'll make you company till your mama's here ok?"

"Arigato Atsu-neechan"

"Your welcome"

The two new friends talked more for a few minutes until Ma Takahashi came back.

"Gomene Nina,Ma had some problems"She appologized,taking her daughter to her arms.

"Iyo mama,Atsu-nee stayed with me"the mother then noticed Atsuko.

"My,what a lovely lady,thank you for entertaining this little devil"Atsuko laughed after hearing that.

"Ma,you meanie"Nina pouted,crossing her arms.

"Sorry,sorry you're just too cute"She said pinching her cheek.

"Owh,oneechan wa?"but instead of her mother's answer,she heard another else's.

"Looking for me?"the voice said behind Atsuko.The latter turn herself to see who it was.

"YOU!!" the blond guy said.

"Y-yes?!"Atsuko asked,shocked when the short guy shouted at her.

TBC------

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am i back yet? not sure  :D
« Last Edit: October 28, 2011, 02:03:41 AM by anoni2 »
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #84 on: October 28, 2011, 05:20:01 AM »
yesssssssssssss .! finally you updated mom ..!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

i'll edit my comment later .. :3

edit

cliffhanger !!!!!!!!!!!!!

nina so cute .. ..

i want an update ........!!!!!!!! mom .! stop playing .!
« Last Edit: October 28, 2011, 06:17:20 AM by khryz0421 »

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #85 on: October 28, 2011, 05:52:29 AM »
Mommy!!! You update!!! I'll edit my comment later..  XD

edit :
Gomen ne mommy~~ I've just got time to read your update~~ :on lol:  really nice chapter!!!  :on GJ:  and I need to next one!!!! NOW!!!!! waa~~~ :tantrum:

Update mommy!!!!  :mon blowhorn:  I want to know what happen to AtsuMina!!!! onegai!!!!  :bow: :bow:

btw, why I haven't seen around lately??  :dunno:
« Last Edit: October 30, 2011, 11:15:02 PM by Flean »

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Meetings
« Reply #86 on: October 28, 2011, 06:06:59 AM »


"Ladies first"

"Who are you calling a Lady?!"Wisnu snapped putting the bags in the back seats.

"No one in particular"Taka J grinned who was already on the passenger's seat.



I'm gonna paint your shell again, Nalyn. This time with oil paint.  :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #87 on: October 28, 2011, 08:13:21 AM »
Finally an update!!! YAY!!!
Persona is here!!!

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #88 on: October 28, 2011, 05:46:48 PM »
What a Cliffhanger.. But I'm Happy that you update, FinaLLy..  :D
I want to know why Takamina shout at Atsuko..  :?
heHe! Nina so cute, I want to pinch her cheek, heHe!  XD
and Onii- ? haHa! I think Atsuko will thought that Takamina is a Boy.
Haha! Update as soon as possibLe.. Onegai!  :bow: :bow: :bow: and Thanks!

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #89 on: October 31, 2011, 09:46:59 PM »
oh update  :)

Nina-chan cute  :mon inluv:

too bad Gen Yang didn't hear Kame  :banghead:

I feel sorry for Wisnu being called a lady and yes, LETS draw on Nalyn's shell  :on lol:


EHH Sae do something   :temper:

Cliffhanger  :mon fierce:

update soon or else satan will visit you at home  :mon evil:

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #90 on: November 05, 2011, 11:57:24 PM »
It was so fun reading "Love Impossible" with humours JhipsTerz group...waiting for next update!
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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 1
« Reply #91 on: April 30, 2012, 02:56:46 PM »
Thanks for reading and Sorry for not updating *bows 90º.
still lazy to update and more projects to do  :badluck:

don't you dare  draw on my shell  :catglare: it's hard to remove!!!!


- - - - - - -
Festival part 2 a

"You!" exclaimed Takamina.

"H-hai?"

"Nani oniichan?You know Atsu-nee?"

"Just the girl who run into me then left without appologizing hmp" Takamina crossed her arms.

Atsuko frowned "But  I remember it was a girl..." she looked at him from head to toe.

 "Wow didn't know you were into this, it suit you though" Atsuko smirked.

Takamina's eyes widened remembering she was still in men's clothes.

"Hey! don't change the subject!. I'm wearing these because of the coming concert, you rude woman!" Takamina snapped.

Atsuko faked a shocked face " Oh really?!what are you going to do? comedy?gag concert?" she teased.

Mrs Takahashi just watched amused by their bickering , Nina didn't know why the two were shouting at each other. As for Miichan...


"TAKAMINA ARE YOU DONE QUARRILING WITH YOUR LOVER?! I'M HUNGRYYYYYY!" Miichan loudly whined.

Nina-chan covered her ears as well as the others.

"Geez no need to screamed in my ears! I think I just got deaf" Takamina tilted her head.

"Come on hurry up!"

"Alright alright! and who said she's my LOVER?!" Takamina pointed at Atsuko.

"She's not?"

"OF COURSE NOT!" they looked at each other.

"STOP COPYING ME!"again at the same time.

"are you really not lovers?"

"WHAT??! NO!"

"Who would want to be with a rude woman like her!"

"Nor to a shorty like you!"

"What the hell! I'm normal sizeeee!!!"

"Girls, that's enough" Mrs Takahashi said stopping the two.

"SHE STARTED IT!!"

"I don't care who started it, both of you ,say sorry to each other!"

"Mom, are your serious?!" Takamina asked in disbelief.

"Do I look like I'm kidding?"

"But mooom!"

"It's ok Auntie." She faced Takamina.

"Sorry for being rude S.H.O.R.T.Y"

"Stop calling me shorty you rude woman !" Takamina gritted her teeth.

"She said her sorry now it's your turn Minami" Takamina turned to her mother. She only call her name when she's serious.

"Why do I feel I'm the one at fault here?!"

"Minami..." Takamina gulped.

"I-'m sorry..."

"There, done can we go now?!" Miichan screamed.

"Miichan-nee loud!" Nina-chan whined.

"Ops sorry hihihi but I'm hungryyyy"

"OK, stop pushing me" She fixed her shirt.

"Ma care to join us?"

"Aren't you going to invite Atsuko too?"

Takamina sighed. "Fine, Atsuko-san will you join us also..?"

"Let's see.." Acchan began to think.

"Say yes Atsu-nee onegai!" Nina-chan asked showing her puppy eyes. Atsuko chuckled.

"Alrighty, just for you~" Atsuko pinched Nina-chan's cheek while the little girl just giggled.

"Yatta!!Atsu-nee likes me more than Nee-chan!"

"Hmp" Takamina scoffed.

"LET'S GOOOO!"
- - - -

 :OMG:  what am  I doing

 :fainted:

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Re: Love Impossible--Mission 3 Festival part 2 a
« Reply #92 on: April 30, 2012, 03:13:03 PM »
MOMMY!!! You updated!!!  :luvluv1: miss ya.. miss ya..  :luvluv2: been busy?? I've been busy as well..LOL

but I need more!!  :mon XD: I need more AtsuMinaness!!! mommy!!!!  :mon yeah:

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« Reply #93 on: April 30, 2012, 04:44:55 PM »
Finally you updated. Been longing to it. Thanks

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« Reply #94 on: April 30, 2012, 05:09:07 PM »
Okaeri, hisashiburi ne?

Good chapter i love how atsu and minami fight jajaj keep going XD

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« Reply #95 on: May 01, 2012, 12:12:45 PM »
 XD Yei! You updated!

 :bow:

Thank you for your update!
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« Reply #96 on: May 10, 2012, 09:50:36 AM »
Hahaha! The arguing is funny ^^

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