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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #20 on: November 23, 2011, 07:23:29 PM »
Man close fight between Yuki and Acchan until the vamp started to play a bit, well, dirty...  :nervous hmm seems as though Acchan is facinated by Yuki, perhpas even a little attracted to her.....

As for Yuki.... hmm, perhaps Acchan got the best of that fight but does Yuki has some 'powers' of her own perhpas, something to do with the locket and 'him'

Poor Takamina, a vampire hunter with a crush on a vampire.... that can't be good!  :panic:

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #21 on: November 23, 2011, 11:37:03 PM »
I had my fight!!! Yay!!!

Hahahahahah!! I'm imaging Takamina hitting Gekikara no stop with a baseball batter and I can't stop laughing

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #22 on: November 24, 2011, 10:58:35 AM »
Hahahahaha! The fight between Yuki and Atsuko was hilarious!  :rofl:
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"That night, Yuki and the Magnificent-Four were walking home slowly, looking down, messed up, and feeling depressed.
Mayu lend her vest uniform to Yuki, but since Mayu has smaller body size than Yuki, it’s still not covering.
Meanwile, Yuko's head looks so wet, because Sasshi had thrown some water to wake Yuko up from faint.
Few people stare at those five messed-up girl with a strange look while they were walking in the pathway."

There are so much humour in this fic that I can't  stop laughing every time.

Thank you looking forward to next chapter  :bow:
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #23 on: November 24, 2011, 12:52:25 PM »
hey I just read all your chapters and I like it..  :twothumbs

for chapter 3: takamina got imprinted by acchan..!  :mon XD:  :on lol:

please udate this... ASAP

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #24 on: November 26, 2011, 07:14:46 AM »
That was so fun!  :rofl:

Yuki so hot and cool!  8) :cathappy:

Takamina and a Spoil Vampire Acchan! GREAT!  :w00t:

lovet it!  :inlove:

please update soon!  :thumbsup

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #25 on: November 27, 2011, 10:10:12 AM »
CHAPTER 4. A THIEF, A KISS, AND A DANGEROUS-GIRL........


Yuki was still mad about what happened the other night.

The four girls sit on a bench on the local cemetery, while watching Yuki busy punching a vampire, who was just so unlucky to met Yuki in her bad mood.

Sasshi: “Poor vampire. He didn’t do anything wrong. And Yuki just made him a punching bag. Is she on her period or something? She’s so fierce.”

Takamina: “Hahahhh…..Just being a vampire isn’t wrong for you, Sasshi?”

Sasshi: “Look at her. She’s losing herself. Several days ago, when I was patrolling with her, she was like, zap-zap-zap …..” Sasshi’s immitating a fast hook and jab.
           “Just like that, and the vampires are vanished. No wasting time, no suffering for them.
             But now, obviously she’s playing too long with that vampire. I feel pity for him.”

Mayu: “Yeah, agree. Today, when I met Yuki outside, she was beating up some criminals. They were four big guys.
            She broke the nose of two guys, broke the rib of one guy, and send the other flying to a pond. They were taken to hospital after that.
            Maybe Yuki just love violence. This is not right.”

Sasshi: "Yeah, just like you love swindling. You're no better than her, Mayu-chan."

Takamina: “I guess she's still mad about the accident with her shirt and the vampire. I’m warning you, don’t mess up with her. Or you’ll end up like Yuko.”

Yuko, “Grrmgblblsbfmmmrbbbnmmmsllldd…..” her mouth full of chocolate and chips, which her friends has bought for her,
to recover her heart after Yuki’s epic punch.

“Seriously, Yuko, you should stop thinking about Yuki’s bo*bs! And keep your pervert-radar lay low!
We know you’ve been lonely since Nyannyan left. But Yuki is not Nyannyan.” said Takamina.

Yuko looks sad. “Nyannyan……..” Yuko lips bent down, showing her desperation.
Her eyes looking up to the night sky full of star, tried to find her Nyannyan there.

(Poor Squirrel. Takamina thinks).
She get up, approached Yuki who is still busy kicking the vampire. Then Taka stabbed a stake to the vampire’s chest, just to end his suffering sooner.

“Yuki, I’m sorry for interrupting your party. But it’s already late. And we have killed many vampires tonight. Let’s go home.”

After that, they collecting the vampire teeth and decided to go to a café for a nighty-night.

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At the cafe.

[KASAI POINT OF VIEW]

“Hey, Tomomi, you’re looking hot today!!” I hear a boy voice shouting at me.
“Well, I am hot every day. But thanks anyway, Ryuji! ” I smiled at him.
“Yeah. I mean, you’re hotter. By the way, I come here for you,” Ryuji said.
“Oh, really?”
“Yeah, let’s go out, after you’ve finished your work!!”
“Okey, Ryuji. I gotta work until 10 pm. Just wait for me.”

That boy nod and smile cheerfully.
“You want something to drink?”
“Yes. Milk, please.”
“Milk?” I laughed at him, “You’re a baby..!!”
“I want to become taller so that I can be a wonderful boyfriend for you, Tomomi.” he said smiling.

I laughed and kissed his cheek. He’s such a cute boy. Two years younger than me.
He’s not my boyfriend, but I like him very much. He’s funny and always make me smile.
I think of him as my little brother.

Ryuji then walked away to find a seat, suit himself there and wait for me.

The front door opened again, and I saw Takamina and her friends coming through the door.
“Hey, Tomomi….!!!” they called out my name and waved at me.
I wave and greet them back.

They come here quite often, mostly after they have killed some vampires and collected the rewards.
They usually come here to celebrate their rewards.
I notice there is a new girl in their gang. They sit in a bench near the register.

I approached them.
“Got some good killing tonight?”
“Yups. And that’s because we have a new member. Here….Tomomi, Yuki. Yuki, Tomomi.” Takamina introducing me to the new girl.

I looked at Yuki and smiled at her. She smiled back. But I can sense her anger hanging somewhere in this room.

“What do you all want to order?”

They eagerly mentioned this and that.

“Wow…Are you sure you can eat them all up?”
“We’re celebrating for Yuki, her coming to our city.” Taka smiled.
“Okay then. I’ll add some free desert for you all tonight.”
“Thanks, Tomomi!! You’re so kind..!!”

Those girls has been good friends with me.
Takamina, Yuko, Sasshi, and me. We are in the same class, and we’re so unseparable in high school.

About Takamina, she still live with her mother, a single parent, and her little sister.
Her father died several years ago, killed by a vampire who sucked and drained his blood.
I think that’s the main reason why Takamina want to hunt vampires down.
Although she doesn’t know, which one has killed her father. And maybe she'll never know.

Sasshi, she came from a rural area to attend high school in this city.
Her parents are still living in Oita. She sometimes pay a visit to her town.
But she wants to learn how to support herself, so after graduation, she still stay here.
During the day, she works on a machinery shop, since she’s good with tools and stuff.

While Yuko, both her parents died in an accident when she was in middle school.
But she keep herself cheerful, mainly because Nyannyan was always there for her, until she moved to another city. They are very close.

Oh yeah, about Nyannyan, she is one year older than us.
She is very beautiful, bright, mature, but sometimes absent-minded and air-headed.
She is really a man-killer. And a very independent girl.
Already support herself since high school, making money from a part-time job at massage parlor.
She managed to rent an apartment for herself, then she asked Yuko and Sasshi to be her roommate.

There is also Miichan, but after graduation, she moved out from this town because of her parents’ job.
I think Miichan has some kind of psychic power.
Sometimes she would warning us about the things we were about to do, as if she wanted to prevent us from going somewhere,
or prevent us from doing something.
And much for our surprise, she usually right.

And the last, is me. A peaceful girl. Working in this café every night.
I choose this job because I like to see lively people (not dead people), and watching them enjoy their life while they can.
That’s why I don’t join my friends when they’re hunting vampire.
Not that I’m a coward. I just don’t belong to violence.
Besides, I gotta work here from evening until night. So, in any ways, I can’t join them.
But we’re still hanging out often when we have free time.

About the youngest girl with a flawless cyborg face, Mayu, she came to this town last year.
After Nyannyan left the apartment, Mayu come over and used Nyannyan's room.
She’s three years younger than us, now in her high school’s sophomore.
We don’t know much about her. Except that her family got killed by vampires, and she’s the only one who survived.
She doesn’t like to talk about it. She must be very traumatized.

Mayu is a smart girl, but she’s much of a rebel, delinquent, and trouble-maker: skipping school, stealing, gambling, etc.
I wonder it is because of her sad past, now she’s lost without someone to guide her.

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Next day.

[MAYU POINT OF VIEW]

(Oh sh*t! They cornered me.)
Mayu looking for a way to escape.
Some yankee boys from another school surrounding her and swinging their batter stick around.

“You’re cheating, little rat.”
“Nobody can win that much seven times in a row, in a poker game.” one boy said.

“You’re all moroon. Haven’t you heard about probability theory?” I mocked the boys.

“What’s that? A new way of cheating? Just shut up and give us back the money...!”

I stepped back. They were about to attack me, when someone come out.
It’s Yuki…!!! (well, who else?).

Is she stalking me? Mayu thought. I wonder how Yuki is always be there and saving everyone just in time.
Oh, I forgot, we live in a fiction. And in the world of fiction, that kind of thing can happen anytime.
No need to explain why.


“Are you making trouble again, Mayu-chan? Haven’t you tired of that?” asked Yuki.

“I swear this time I didn’t do anything wrong. It’s just a normal gambling. Except that I’m so smart so that I always win.
And I've been practicing my poker face a lot. So are you gonna helped me out, or not?”

Yuki take a deep breath as if she was bored.
She stepped forward, putting herself between me and the boys.

“Boys, I’ll give you 10 seconds. So, run, before I kill you.” Yuki's warning the boys.

Then she put on a pair of black leather gloves, clench her fist, and set her usual fighting stance.

1..tic...2..tic...3..tic...4..tic...5..tic...6..tic...7..tic...8..tic...9..tic...10..and tic.

Nobody run. And I don’t need to tell you the details about what happen next.
She beat up the boys, while I’m being a troll, watching the whole fighting until they escaped in horror.
I’m mocking them while they run away.

And that’s it. Yuki always ended up helping me out of my trouble.

The other day, Yuki caught me as I pickpocketing in an underground station.

“Hey, swindler!” she hit my head quite hard.
“Ittttaiiii…………!!!!!”
“Give me back that cellphone.”
“What? No, Yuki.” I hide the cellphone behind my back.
I just managed to steal it from someone’s bag just now.

“Give..it.. to… me.” Yuki stared at me with that death-glare look.

“Okay….okay….” I pouted. (Damn!!!)
I reluctantly give the cellphone to Yuki. She walked to the person whom I stole it from, and she gave it back to him.
(Good bye, my new smartphone.)

“You should stop doing that, Mayu-chan. It’s a crime.”

“And if I won’t, what are you gonna do about that?”
(Yuki, you said you would throw me to the police. But you never actually do that. You’re just bluffing, right?)

“If you’re a little bit older, I would sent you to jail without hesitate.”

“Then why do you always save me, instead of drag me to the police?”

“It’s just so that I can punish you myself. Someone need to spank you hard on your butt.”

“What? I didn’t say you could punish me. You’re not my mother, you’re not my sister. Don’t just come into my life and making rules like that.”

I got mad.
Me, got spanked? No effing way….!!!
Adults can be so annoying.

We walked.
Then I see a girl, maybe one year younger than me. She seem lost.

That younger girl called me, “Ne…onechan. Can I ask you something?”

I approached her.

She said, “I just found this somewhere near here. I think it’s left from dusted-vampires.
Can you show me the nearest police station? I want to take the rewards.”

She showed me lots of vampire teeth and another artifact which is left from vampire, which could be used to claim rewards.

“Sure. How old are you, by the way?” I asked her.

“I’m 16. Why?”

My brain is thinking fast.
“Hmm….the police only accept your claim if you are above 17.” I said to her.

“Ohh…..”

“But don’t worry. You can sell it to me. I will buy them at a very reasonable price.” I smiled at the girl.

“Really? How much? I don’t know the legal price for it.”

Oh, she doesn’t know. Good….
I got excited.

Then I mentioned a price. Actually it’s almost half the price. But she seem to believe it.
Yaaaayyy……I’m getting rich today. I can’t believe it was so easy to fool this girl.

That little girl then hand her vampire’s stuff to me, and I gave her my money.
After this I’m gonna claim the rewards with full, far higher price. I smirked. I'm so lucky today.

“Deal….!!”” I said to her.
“Thank you.” she said and walked away.

“OUUUUUUCCCHH………!!!” out of sudden, I felt my ear being pinched hard.

I turned around and saw Yuki's standing behind me, pinching my ear.
She has a black aura around her. So scary.
She smirked at me, and her eyes's staring at me with a death-glare look.

Yuki: “You swindler. Who teach you this dirty skill?”

“No one. I learn it myself. ........UWAAAAHH…...OUUUUUCCHH…..!!!!!!”

I screamed as she pinched my ear harder.
I had to followed her around while she dragged me by my ear.

Yuki then called the little girl.
“What’s your name?” Yuki asked her.
“Rabutan.”

“Okay, Rabutan. My friend was just teasing you. You shouldn’t believe her right away.”
“Ohhh…..I thought that…” Rabutan stare with a funny look, as she watched me being pinched and dragged around and embarassed myself.

“It’s better if we accompany you to the nearest police station.” said Yuki.

She released her pinch on me. I rubbed my ears, and make a sound of pain and relieve.

“Listen up, swindler. Give the stuff back to her! If you want to do a trade, do it properly.” Yuki ordered.

I pouted and said goodbye to the money that was about to be mine.
(Crap….!! Why don’t she just mind her own business, and stop watching me like this? What am I, a criminal?)

“Someday this could get you into a serious trouble. Besides, how could you trick such a cute little girl like that?”

Yuki hit the back of my head.

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Let's leave Mayu and Yuki for a moment, and move to another interesting scene.

“So, have you meet your new toy, Atsuko?” asked Shinoda.

“Yes. She’s……fun.” Acchan answered wonderingly.

“Fun? Is that it? Just fun?” Shinoda asked curiously.

“Ehhmm….yeah, interesting. She's very strong, as you told me.”
Acchan answered but she seem not paying attention to what Shinoda had asked her.
She was thinking of another thing in her mind.  Another toy. The midget.

Acchan then smiled, “Indeed, IT IS very interesting. Thank you for giving me new toys, Shinoda-sama!”
She kissed Shinoda on the cheek, and walked away.

“Wait Atsuko, darling, I would like you to meet my new friends.”
“They are foreigner. As you know, our races have been spreading our domination in this world. America, Europe, China.
It’s very important to treasure our relationship with them.”

“Okay, Shinoda. I’ll prepare myself.”

“They will come tonight for a dinner.”

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Not long after that.
In the main room of the building.
Shinoda was talking with two stranger, while Acchan walked closer to them.

“I am Bill, and here’s my son, Damon.”

That boy are very handsome.
Acchan said, “Birru…. and Damon.” She said with her Japanese accent.
Luckily, Damon is not hard to spelled with Japanese accent.

The boy smiled teasingly, “Yes, that’s right. And you are….”

“Atsuko.”
(This boy is a player. I don't like him. Acchan thinks).

“What a beautiful name, Atsuko.” said Damon.

Acchan and Damon talked for a while.

“Okay, then. Bill and Damon, you could take a rest in your room. My troops will be hunting for some fresh meat and blood, for our dinner tonight,” said Shinoda.

The two stranger excused themselves.

“Acchan, put on your best outfit for dinner tonight.” asked Shinoda.

“Okay, Shinoda.” Acchan answered obediently.

Acchan then go to her room upstair and change her dress.
She’s looking bored.
Then she opened the window in her room, and jumped out from her window.
The window was high, but we know Acchan is a mischievous and adventurous vampire.
She’s been used to jump out from that window, since she was still a cute baby vampire, long time ago.

“Atsuko, are you ready? Come out, Atsuko!” Shinoda yelled from outside the door of Atsuko’s bedroom.
 
No answer.
Shinoda called again several times.
And still didn’t get an answer.
Shinoda break the door’s lock, and find the window already opened.
Wind coming in from that window.

“OOHHH….NOT AGAIN……!!!” Shinoda shouted angrily.

Shinoda walked closer to the window, and saw Acchan running through the cemetery next to their building.

“THAT SPOILED BRAT…..!!! Where is she going..!!??”

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Not long after, Acchan encounter Takamina while the midget walking home after her usual hunting with the gang.

“Hello, Midget!”

“YOU…!!!!” Takamina surprised. She raised her guards quickly, reaching her stake.
Her heart is beating faster to see the vampire. She's scared, but fascinated at the same time.

Scared, because she know this vampire is strong, she had make fun of Yuki in their last fight.
Fascinated, because the vampire now wearing an outfit that makes her looks like a real princess.

Now she’s alone with this Somewhat-Bitchy-Vampire.
Taka feel regrets that she refused Yuki's offer to walk her home.

“Easy with the stakes! You may hurt yourself!” said Acchan.

“YOU, stay away from me…!!!” Takamina stepped back as Acchan moved toward her.

“You...you…you….stop calling me with ‘YOU’!”
“I had a name. It’s Atsuko. Or I prefer Acchan. Call me Acchan.”
Acchan smiled cheerfully. “And your name is…?”

“Never in any chance I’m telling you my name.” Takamina get more defensive.

“Oh my….you’re so mean. Don’t you have any courtesy for me? I’m a princess, you know.”

Princess? What princess? What kingdom? Taka wondered.

“Well, I don’t care! I’m a princess myself.” said Takamina.
(That’s right, at least my mother think I’m a princess.)

Takamina started to attack Acchan.
But Acchan dodge it easily.
“You know what? For cute girls like us, instead of fighting, we should be kissing.”

“WHAAAAATT????” Takamina shocked.
This girl, I mean, this vampire, is crazy. After she abused Yuki’s shirt, now she want to abuse my lips?

“I’m serious. I want to kiss you!!” Acchan’s persisting, and moves closer to Takamina.

Takamina: “No, stay away!!”

But Acchan didn’t listen to Takamina. Acchan keeps moving forward.
Then they had a brawl for like, ten minutes.

Takamina tried to defend herself (especially her lips), from Acchan’s brutal attack.
For such a small girl, Takamina is quite strong and she can fight well.
But still, Acchan get an upper hand.

Acchan pushed Takamina to the gate near them.
Finally Taka decided to give in.
(Maybe this vampire is not bad herself. Maybe she just want to have fun. I hope she's not planning to kill me with her kiss.)

Then, Takamina started to return Acchan’s kiss.
Acchan is quite surprised that Takamina return the kiss.

They started to kiss passionately, lips on lips.
Then they moved to each other’s neck.

“What are you doing, Midget?” said Acchan.
“I’m doing what you want. Happy now?” Taka answered, while her head buried away in Acchan’s neck and collar.
Her hands are groping Acchan’s butt and hand.

“Midget….you’re tickling my neck, and my hand.” Acchan’s breathing, gasping, and moaning.

Takamina still tickling her, and then….
“Okay, I’ll stop.” she smiled, and freeing herself from Acchan.

Five second later…

“HEYYYY………..WHAT IS THIS……!!!!?????”

“Tehehehe……” the Midget smirked.

Acchan’s left hand was chained to the gate.

“Ahhh…..that was such a kiss we had there….I want to do it again.” Takamina said mockingly and wiped her lips.

“YOU TRICKED ME..!!!! ” Acchan’s freaking out.
She tried to grab Takamina, but Takamina is out of her reach.

“So, you’re fate is on me now, Princess Atsuko. Or, should I call you, Acchan?”
Takamina started to teasing Acchan. She’s playing with her stake, and threaten Acchan with it.

“I have an idea. You can kneel down, and beg me not to stab you and turn you into dust. Maybe then, I'll be nice to you.”
Takamina took some soil from the ground, dusted it, then throw it to Acchan’s face.

The handcuff was made of steel. Even the strongest vampire cannot break it free.
Smart Takamina, she always bring the handcuff with her, for the sake of her safety.

Then Takamina took her cellphone, and shoot several photos of Acchan in chain.
Acchan get more mad, she kicked the gate, and tried to bite the chain with her fang. But failed.

“Your cute face will be on the headline of local newspaper tomorrow!” the Midget laughed her as* off, and then she run away.

 “Just wait here for your prince. Or else, you’ll be nothing but dust when the sun rises tomorrow morning.”
Takamina wave her goodbye, and she throw an invisible kiss to Acchan from the distance.

“Oh great…!!!” Acchan stared at Takamina until the midget is out of her sight.

Poor Acchan. She can handle Yuki so well. But she’s no match for our little captain. The Mighty, Magnificent Midget.


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Half an hour later……
Acchan still trying to break herself free from the chain.
She tried to kick the gates down.
But the gates are made from steel.

Finally, she's tired and decided to call someone for help.
She reach her cellphone in her jacket and slide it open.

“Hey….Umechan….can you get to me? I’m in trouble…....Yeah......Please come, hurry!! Bring an axe, or anything...” said Acchan to the phone.

On the other side of the line, Umechan answered, “Where are you, Acchan? Okay. Wait there.”

“She is in the cemetery, Shinoda.” Umechan told Shinoda, who was standing close in front of her.

“Let’s go there.” said Shinoda.
“Damon, you want to come with us? We’re rescueing our princess.” Shinoda asked Damon to join.
Shinoda planned to give a lesson to our spoiled princess, by embarrassing her in front of the guest.

So here we are in the cemetery.
Acchan was even more mad because it’s not only Umechan who come for the rescue.
Shinoda come too, and also Damon.

Damon was like, “What’s on earth this princess doing out here, being chained like this?”
He can't stop smiling mischievously at Acchan, with an unspoken words of "Oh My God...You're look so good in chain, you Naughty Princess...."

And that happened to be the most embarassing night for our spoiled vampire.

Most importantly, that night, Takamina had make herself to be Acchan’s greatest sworn enemy.

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At the cafe.

[KASAI POINT OF VIEW]

“Okay, everybody. Now we have a new life performer in this café. Here she is….xxxxxxxxxxxx…!!!”
I can't hear her name, because the crowd was too loud.

Everybody in the café were clapping and cheering eagerly, as a girl walked from behind the stage.

She is a pretty girl. With wavy, dyed-brown hair. And she has a smug face.

Who is this girl? She act so smug and confident, like she is the best thing in the world.

But well, I can see the reason. She is the gorgeous girl I’ve ever seen.
Her lips is incredibly sexy. I wonder how many kisses she had already. I bet boys would love to kiss those lips.

She reached the mic, bowed to the audience, raised her left hand, and started to sing and dance.

And for a couple of minutes, I just can’t take my eyes off her.

Oh my god, she’s very good at dancing.
There are four backup dancers in black leather jacket and pants, dance along with her.
They are all wearing sun glasses, except the singer herself.

The singer is wearing a glittering, grey no-sleeves top, and mini skirt with the same colour, a belt around her waist,
a white jacket which she didn’t put on properly so that it revealing her bare shoulder, and a pair of leather boots covering up to her knees.

She’s so hot, fashionable, and sexy.

I don’t know the title of the song. But the beats are very catchy and she dance so well to the song.
The way she move her body to the music was so fascinating: she shaked her hips, her shoulder, her belly, her legs.
And she can do it all while wearing those high-heel boots.

     Dear J! Furimuita kimi wa
     You're J! utsukushisugite
     boku wa mou kizetsushi sou da yo
     kimi yori motto
     kagayaiteiru mono wa less than zero

     hajime wa kizukanakatta kurai
     dareka wakaranakatta kurai
     ano hi no BABY
     suteki na LADY umare kawatteta
     mou nido to hanasanai kurai
     dare ni mo ubawarenai kurai
     dakishimetai BABY
     boku wa GET READY
     ai no tame ni subete wo suteyou.


I can’t stop staring at her.

After she finish, everyone clapped and shouted, “More….More…..We want more…!!!!”

The girl bowed, walked down the stage and passed in front of me.
She doesn’t even look at me.
(What a girl. She act like she’s a star already.)

I smiled to myself and continue my work on the cash register.
(What am I thinking? She’s hot, so what? It’s not like I have a crush on her.)

But I can’t deny, I am hoping for that girl to perform again in this café.
I want to see her again.

I saw Ryuji walked closer to the register.

“Hey, Ryuji!”
“Hey, Tomomi!”

“Did you see that girl who was performing just now?”
“Oh yeah.”
“Who is she?”
“I don’t know, people called her Tomochin. I heard she just coming to this town.”
“I see.”
“And there is something about her,” Ryuji whispered, “I think she had trouble with police. I saw her being interrogated by the police yesterday.
But it seem she got out from jail by paying ransom.”

“Really?” I was a bit shocked.
I sense danger in this Tomochin girl. But somehow that makes me even more attracted to her.

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TO BE CONTINUED.......
« Last Edit: January 06, 2012, 05:27:20 AM by anzai48 »
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #26 on: November 27, 2011, 10:42:21 AM »
Taka gives in??  :hehehe: I bet she want to kiss Atsuko as well~~  :mon evillaff:  she kissed her back... LOL...  XD

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #27 on: November 27, 2011, 11:02:26 AM »
Will Acchan pay back time (revenge) to Takamina.... it would be fun thou......... please continue updating..... thanks

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #28 on: November 27, 2011, 12:02:23 PM »
hey I just read all your chapters and I like it..  :twothumbs

for chapter 3: takamina got imprinted by acchan..!  :mon XD:  :on lol:

please udate this... ASAP

I'm glad you like it.... :grin:

imprinted...that was the word I was looking for....thanks... :grin:
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #29 on: November 27, 2011, 03:57:40 PM »
 Takamina! :rofl: 

she totally fooled Acchan!  :shakeit:

i wonder what Acchan will do about it!  :grin:

thanks for updating!  :thumbsup

please update soon!  :panic:

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #30 on: November 27, 2011, 05:09:06 PM »
Woo!! I love this story! vampire <- :thumbup :thumbup
 
May I translate it from English to Chinese? :bow: :bow: :bow:
I would like to share with my friends who love those cp :inlove: :inlove: >_<

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« Reply #31 on: November 27, 2011, 05:24:21 PM »
Woo!! I love this story! vampire <- :thumbup :thumbup
 
May I translate it from English to Chinese? :bow: :bow: :bow:
I would like to share with my friends who love those cp :inlove: :inlove: >_<

Thanks.....I'm glad you like it...... :wub:

Of course you can translate it (and also the upcoming chapter),
I'd be more than glad if you can share this sheer joy with your friends..... :)
« Last Edit: December 09, 2011, 12:05:34 PM by anzai48 »
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #32 on: November 27, 2011, 05:54:10 PM »
Yay!!! I like it!! I like it!!! I like it!!!
The Takacchan scene is so hot!!!
And Tomotomo!!!! YAY!!!

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #33 on: November 27, 2011, 08:30:50 PM »
MaYuki~!!! still no romance huh~


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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #34 on: November 27, 2011, 08:58:27 PM »
 :lol: Poor Mayu, seems as though even if Yuki is a tough fighter and a bit of a rebel herself (possibly with anger management issues!) she wants to do the right thing, well she at least wants Mayu to do the right thing anyway!  :lol:

Hmm, so Mayu lost her parents to vampires, I wonder if Yuki's story is similar, with that necklace involved too.....

And Takamina getting one over on Acchan!  :w00t: kinda hope this becomes a trend, seeing Acchan who is used to being in control, be tricked by takamina was epic!

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #35 on: November 27, 2011, 10:50:24 PM »
i like atsumina scene.. good job takaboy.. like a bos kiss your wifey and.. run away :D jaaj im waiting the atsuko`s revenge
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #36 on: November 28, 2011, 01:29:27 AM »
MaYuki~!!! still no romance huh~



Be patient..... :lol:

We're already on the right track. I'm working on it.  :grin:
First thing first, we need to set up a strong story line (with some emotional background), before we get to those lovey-dovey scene.....:grin:

MaYuki is my favorite pairing after all.  :grin:
« Last Edit: November 28, 2011, 01:36:41 AM by anzai48 »
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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #37 on: November 28, 2011, 02:00:13 AM »
I really really enjoy your fic.  XD
The kissing sense was funny.  :kekeke: Smart Taka.  But poor Acchan.  :farofflook: being embarrassed in front of that guy.

Update whenever you can.

And thank you for updating.  :kneelbow:

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire, Chapter 4] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #38 on: November 28, 2011, 10:52:11 AM »
here it comes!! Taka's special ability  :kekeke: :kekeke: I love the way Acchan teases Taka  :luvluv1: Kissu....kissu...and she finally gets it  :gmon twirl: Poor Acchan, being fooled by Taka ...  :pig laugh: BUT I LOVE IT!  :mon suspect:
LOL MaYuki's part~  :mon lmao: its like Yuki stalking her, I wonder what Mayu is to Yuki. Maybe we have a story behind it?? :mon dance:
Yeeeeyyyy!! the pair I've been waiting, TomoTomo finally appears!!  :mon angel: I hope in the next part, they will always appear  :mon inluv:
Okay... I want to ask you... Are you writing a comedy fict??? LOL  :mon evillaff: its funny!! haha..  :mon XD:
I hope I can read the next part in short of a time.  :mon innocent:
update soon!  :on asmo:

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Re: [ongoing: Human vs Vampire, Chapter 4] Mayuki, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, TomoTomo
« Reply #39 on: November 28, 2011, 12:25:35 PM »
@moekare,

not pure comedy, because I will also put some drama/tragedy in the next chapter...... XD

the comedy is just there so I can write something.....XD

after the storyline is set, it will be more of the drama.......... :grin:
« Last Edit: November 28, 2011, 02:19:04 PM by anzai48 »
My oshi: Kashiwagi Yuki, Maeda Atsuko, Tomomi Itano, Matsui Rena.
I ship MaYuki, AtsuMina, WMatsui, GekiBlack, TomoTomo.
My ongoing fanfic: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE. Word count = 373006 words.
My longest update: Body-Swap, 14971 words.
And then I broke the records again with 20400 words (Chapter 24. Mario Must Die).
See also VAMPIRE'S LOUNGE.

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