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Into the unknown <Sa-Milky> Chapter 2 Updated 10 April 2012
« on: March 29, 2012, 02:23:06 PM »
Chapter 1

“Patrol Car 4687… Patrol Car 4687… Response please... over…”

“Patrol Car 4687 here…”

“We have a situation 9 at coordinates 467 897…. Please head over there over…”

“Patrol Car 4687… Roger that… Heading towards 467 897…”

“Tango Yankee Patrol Car 4687… Over and out…”

*******

“Sheesh… Sayanee, why do we always get situations 9 here? Can’t those blasted cats find a better past time apart from getting struck in trees? I didn’t spend a year in Police Academy for this shit! Why can’t our police career be much more interesting?”

Yamamoto Sayaka resists the urge to give herself a face palm. Appointed as “Team Leader”, she has to lead by example, even if the task given to them were mundane ones like saving cats, helping old folks crossing the road, directing traffic in front of the local primary school to make sure the little ones are safe and sound.

To her, duty is of utmost importance; her code of honor from the bloodline of Samurais made it so. Now, if only this rash, irritating and always vocal excuse of a policeman could just follow her example and go by the book, things will be much more pleasant and smooth. But than again, Watanabe Ryuki aka Milky was anything but a book follower, bring her much grief at all times.

As the patrol car slows down to a stop at the traffic junction, Sayaka narrows her eyes as she pulls hard on the handbrake.

“You seem overly energetic today, why don’t I drive …”

******

Watanabe Milky’s face turned another shade greener as he struggles with the continuous curves of the mountain roads. Normally, he would be fine but not when the car was zipping around like the AE86 from Initial D.

A quick pull of the hand brake locks the rear wheels, causing Milky to brace himself for another familiar experience of G forces as the patrol car drifts cleanly through another turn.

“This won’t be over! Yamamoto Sayaka! I will take my revenge…”

******

The patrol car decelerates to a soft stop in front of an old farmhouse, bringing much needed relief to at least one of the occupants.

Struggling to breathe some fresh air and possibly force back the urge to empty his stomach from the several near-death experiences, Milky stares hard at Sayaka.

“Gosh! Are you mad! You could have gotten us both killed!”

“Weren’t you the one looking for something interesting? Quit yelping like a little kid and man up, there’s still a Situation 9....” replies Sayaka coldly as she exits the vehicle towards a panicky grandmother waiting anxiously for their arrival.

******

“What do mean I have to go? From what I understand, Japan is still a democracy and we are of same rank…”

“Fine… We shall let fate decide… Are you ready?”

“Jankenpon!!!”

“……”

Resigning himself to his fate, Milky grabs the foldable ladder from the boot to handle the situation 9 while whispering under his breath, “I’m sure she must had cheated… She can’t be winning all the time…”

******

After some hard work, persuasion, curses and a few scratches and bites, Milky manages to retrieve the kitten and return it to its owner.

“Oh Officers! How could I possibly thank the two of you…”

“Don’t worry about it Yamada-San, it’s our pleasure to serve you!” replies Sayaka.

“The pleasure is only hers… Not mine… She’s not the one that has to face that furbag from hell…”mumbles Milky, only to receive a cold hard stare from Sayaka.

“How about I get the two of you some warm milk for the cold evening? I’m sure you could use that and some nice cookies too for your effort” replies the elderly lady enthusiastically as she pulls Sayaka in by the arm, leaving Milky no choice but to follow them.

******

“Itadakimasu!” announce the two officers politely before starting their meal.

Sayaka nibbles politely at the cookies while Milky took big huge bites in gusto, clearly enjoying them.

“Shouldn’t you watch your image? You’re in uniform…”

“But it’s so good! I can’t help it…” replies Milky sheepishly before attacking another cookie.

Looking at the scene, Yamada-san laughs coyly before looking at them accusingly.

“Are you both married? You seem quarrel like husband and wife…”

“Who! What!? Him/Her!?! Never!” reply the both of them in unison as they cross their arms and look in opposite directions.

“Kawai… Your replies are even in unison. You both should seriously consider each other…”

“OBASAN!!!” come another chorus in unison.

“Hohoho… Young people nowadays are so cute and shy. You both should follow your heart. I did when I was younger and I was happy…” drone Yamada-san as she continued with her life story…

*******

“Thank you Yamada-san for the cookies!” reply the two officers with a bow before proceeding towards their patrol car.

“Thank you for your help! And remember to follow your heart!” reminds Yamada-san as she waves goodbye to the patrol car.

******

The farmhouse slowly disappeared from sight as Milky applied more pressure on the accelerator. After the “exciting ride”, it would be hard for him to allow Sayaka to take over the wheel ever again.

After the teasing by grandmother Yamada, the two kept quiet during the journey back, preferring not to take the risk of any possible awkward moments.

However, Milky, being the chatterbox, found it hard to keep the silent. A bright light from the sky provided the topic to break the ice.

“Hey, Sayanee, had you ever wish upon a star? They say if a star falls down from heaven, your wish will be granted!”

“Wishing star? Where?”

“There!” replied Milky as he stopped the vehicle so that they could have a better look.

However, their faces from amazement turned quickly to horror as the ‘Wishing Star’ become a burning mass, zipping across the night sky to crash at a site that seems to be suspiciously close to Yamada-san’s farmhouse.

“Yamada-san…” they replied in union again as they turned the vehicle around with worried faces.

******
« Last Edit: April 10, 2012, 01:23:14 AM by Prataz »

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2012, 02:30:46 PM »
wow...finally NMB fic!! and i like the background story about police thingy  :) its extraordinary theme you have here. continue~
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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2012, 04:20:16 PM »
Hurray! Another NMB fic, and SayaMilky again! :w00t:

I have several questions after I read this.
Is this Yamada-obasan somewhat related to Yamada Nana?
And why did you write Milky as a male again? I mean you've already made her a male in Winter Sonata. Hehe.. don't mean to object though, it's just the curiosity asking (and I have a hard time imagining Milky as a male too XD).

Too many questions? Sorry.. but I'm just excited reading another NMB fic. :D

Do you (and Eru-san as well) by any chance know where I can find other NMB fics? :? In English of course... (ah, questioning again  :doh:)
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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2012, 04:31:19 PM »
@aruka try looking at nihongogo :)
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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 04:45:30 PM »
OH YAY MILKY ND SAYANEE FIC!!  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
This is soo good~ POLICE.. :thumbup
I thought you stopped writing im glad you started again~  XD

Please update soon i'll be waiting !! :fap

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2012, 05:08:56 PM »
whoo hoo
Sayaka Milky couple
please coninue.. :bow:

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2012, 10:31:38 PM »
Milky as a man?!

Please update soon~

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #7 on: March 31, 2012, 03:00:43 AM »
WOOT! It's an NMB fanfic! WOOHOO!  :cow:

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: March 31, 2012, 10:50:38 AM »
Finally! SayaMilky Going to be Popular here...
I started to Love this Pairing more and more... I'm Looking forward for the Update! Thanks for the wonderful story, anyway..
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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 04:37:04 PM »
Hi all,

Many apologies for the hiatus! Works being crazy, especially with new sales targets coming in =/

To all that think that this is going to be police fic, think again!

The next update will proof you guys wrong =P

Since it's into the unknown, who knows what will happen? Will we see Ultraman? Godzilla? Or will it be Yuki-onnas frolicking around with cyborgs?

I'm sorry to all the Milky fans that she's always a guy in my fic but I'm sure she will look good as a guy.

Imagine the cheeky grin, the mischievous eyes and the talent to get Sayanee into trouble. I'm sure we will all have a hell of a time =)

And yes, I love NMB48! I think they might be even better than AKB48 especially after watching them live.

They blown me out of the water and converted me from worshipping SNSD to being their fanboy.

I think this fanfic might let me have a chance to understand NMB48 more and even SKE48.

There will be AKB48 here and there but the focus will be on Sayanee and Milky.

And now I shall go back to Microsoft Word so that Chapter 2 will happen for REAL!




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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2012, 04:50:52 PM »
Lol, Ultraman? Godzilla? Fooling around...
Yea, as you said, It's always Milky who's Cheesy! To see her in male form would be Awesome!
Btw, Update Soon!Try not to fooling around with something nonsense like you said just now about Godzilla and etc.
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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #11 on: April 08, 2012, 01:31:39 PM »
NMB48  :cow:  i became NMB fan recently..and i love sayamilky  :heart:

i'm waiting for chapter 3


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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky>... Chapter 1
« Reply #12 on: April 10, 2012, 01:22:25 AM »
And yes! The next chapter is posted! Sorry for the delay!

I'm sure this chapter will create much more confusion, which will be revealed in Chapter 3.

Chapter 2 “Nani Kore….”

“Yamada-san…” they replied in union again as they turned the vehicle around with worried faces.

Throwing caution into the wind, Milky steps hard on the accelerator, taking the small engine of the Daihatsu Mira to the limits.

Normally Sayaka would have chided him for the lack of finesse in his driving but the situation calls for much urgency. She will leave the chiding later once the crisis is resolved.

******

Moments before…

“Black to Mother Hen, Message over…”

“This is Mother Hen, Send over…”

“Black. Ugly Pig in sights. Request Permission for Angry Bird…”

“Permission Approved. Ensure Ugly Pig sleep in the park. There’s a need for more ham…”

“Black. Roger that.Black to all. Time to get angry…”

“Nezumi. Roger that. Red Bird Load and Ready…”

“Takoyaki. Roger that. Red Bird Load and Ready…”

“Black to all. Bring home the ham when you’re ready…”

“Nezumi. Roger that. Visual lock affirmative. Proceeding to bring home the ham”

 “Black to Nezumi. Remember we need the ham. Avoid scarring the meat…”

“Nezumi to Black… Roger that… Red Bird on the way…Contact… Ugly Pig is still on the move…”

“Snow Roger that… Takoyaki… Switch to Yellow Bird… Punch it through…”

“Takoyaki to Black. Roger that. Yellow Bird is online… Engaging now… BINGO! Ugly Pig is down…”

“Black to Mother Hen. Ugly Pig is sleeping now… Bed at 467 897 over…“

“Mother Hen to all… Stage Clear with 5 stars…”

“Black to Mother Hen… Tango Yankee! Permission to recover the ham?”

“Mother Hen to Black… Permission granted… Rock and Roll out”

“Black to all… Rock and Roll… “

“Nezumi… Acknowledged… Providing Air Cover…”

“Takoyaki… Acknowledged… Providing Air Cover…”

“Black to Butcher Leader… Message over…”

“…. You know I hate that call-sign…”

“Black to Butcher Leader… Please use standard protocol please…”

“…. Butcher Leader… Send over…”

“Black… Butcher Leader… Ugly Pig is down… Harvesting in 5… Location in the park… Picking up 3 signatures from heat scans… Ensure their safety and bring back the ham…”

“Butcher Leader… Roger that… “


******

The patrol car screeched to a stop near the familiar farmhouse as the two officers rushed out with a sense of urgency.

The burning ball of fire had crashed near the field of the farmhouse, resulting in a crater the size of a football field. The resultant impact had created a shockwave blast to its surroundings, lighting up the serenity of the countryside with burning chaos.

Look at the carnage before them; the two could only react with “Oh My God…”

******

Training took over as Yamamoto Sayaka started to bark out orders to Watanabe Milky.

It wasn’t a time for them to panic. Although the farmhouse was in good condition and a good 500 meters away from the burning carnage, she wasn’t ready to take any risks. The safety of Yamada-san was of the utmost importance.

“Milky… Door Drill! Now!” commanded Sayaka as she dragged out the portable battering ram from the boot of the car.

“Yamada-san! We are coming!”

******

“3! 2! 1! YOSH!” huffed Milky as the battering ram hit the main door. Upon impact, the internal piston fired, triggering another impact from the internal cylinder, breaking open the door.

“Yamada-san!” screamed both officers as they stormed the building, only to find an angry looking Yamada-san looking at them sternly while pointing at her broken door.

“Why don’t you press the door bell next time…”

******

“Gomen nasai! Yamada-san! We panicked…” apologized Sayanee profusely while pushing Milky forward to face the fury of Yamada-san, which came as a quick knock on the head.

 “Ah! Itai!” moaned Milky as he rubbed furiously on the bruise forming on his forehead.

“I shall forgive you both if you can explain why…”

“Eeto, Yamada-san, Why don’t you take a look outside?”

As the two officers escorted the elderly woman outside, her only reply was just “Nani Kore….”, followed by a jaw drop upon seeing the crash site.

******

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky> Chapter 2 Updated 10 April 2012
« Reply #13 on: April 10, 2012, 02:55:46 AM »
I've been waiting for this YAYAYAYAY  :heart:~
Your right now im seriously more confused..  :?
Im guessing Yukirin and Mayuyu is in this but, I didn't really get who else is..  :O

Update soon I need to know whats happening!~  XD
I'll be waiting!!  :w00t:

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky> Chapter 2 Updated 10 April 2012
« Reply #14 on: April 10, 2012, 11:52:16 AM »
Yay! An update! Love you, Prataz-san for writing an NMB fanfic! :heart:

Anyway, I'm kind of confuse though, about who is actually going to be in this.

Like Popsicle-san said, it's obvious Mayuyu and Yukirin are going to be in it.... but who else?

WAIT! Don't tell me, I want to read on and find out (^^)

And lol~ I'm so dying to know who is "Butcher Leader"  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Awaits for your next update not so patiently~

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky> Chapter 2 Updated 10 April 2012
« Reply #15 on: April 10, 2012, 01:16:20 PM »
I think there are Yukirin, Mayuyu, Yuka and maybe Churi?

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Re: Into the unknown <Sa-Milky> Chapter 2 Updated 10 April 2012
« Reply #16 on: May 01, 2012, 02:36:00 PM »
Sorry for the delay!

A sneak preview to the new chapter! Will be posting pretty soon I hope hahaha

“Butcher Team… Hitting hot zone in T-10… Those who walk in light will bath in his glory! May God be with you… And Matsui… Remember to not lose control!”

“ARG! Okotteru?”

“No… I’m only Black… You’re the mad one…”

“Arg! I swear that you are the reason why I go mad…”


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