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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #20 on: January 26, 2013, 05:26:05 AM »
Takamina is soo cute... the way she acts and the way she says her Thank you.... very very cute....

Who is the one asking Black to find out about a 'girl'... who is this 'girl' in question?

Why Lovetan gave evil grin towards the end... after borrowing Mayu's phone?

Getting more and more mysterious.... Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #21 on: January 26, 2013, 08:19:09 AM »
I WANT MORE!! XD

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #22 on: January 26, 2013, 11:07:00 PM »
lol yesh I really think so! xD  :mon innocent:
oh and when  Kanon and Lovetan were mentioned I was like "dare?????" and had to look them up  :mon wind: I saw them before but...wasn't really.... *looks away* :mon dunno:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #23 on: January 27, 2013, 03:08:58 AM »
some how the last part make me...... :sweatdrop:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #24 on: January 27, 2013, 06:01:24 AM »
ahhh, takamina really make me smile XD
i love when takamina and jurina kissing moment, it's really cutee. Thanks for update, need more takamina cuteness moment :3

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #25 on: January 28, 2013, 10:11:08 AM »
Wao.....Atsuko so strong so kakoii.. :ding: :ding:
Ah...Takamina is so cute ...I want to be kissed by her :bath: :bath:
Uhm..about the girl whom Black have to find...I gues she is Mayuyu right :dunno:
I'm so curious about the one who left Takamina :dunno: maybe it's Tomochin :nervous
please update soon :byebye: :byebye:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #26 on: January 28, 2013, 05:45:24 PM »
Love AKB
             ~TakaYuu~
                           ~AtsuMina~
                                          ~KojiYuu~
                                                      ~TomoTomo~
                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

Love this Pairing
                                And more ^^

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 2 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #27 on: January 29, 2013, 01:53:55 AM »
Hihihi I'm sure Love-tan did something funny ^^

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #28 on: January 30, 2013, 11:43:28 AM »
arrow27 : haha  :P she did kick butt~
cisda83 : here is the next chapter! ^^
chichay12 : here!!
FlameHazeKatsu : don't worry we are a beginner! hehe~
steven_0809 : don't worry Lovetan is not bad..xD
FNK23 : even me couldn't stand the cuteness by writing it LOL~
Hii_chan : you're right! its Mayuyu..and Tomochin..wrong! hehe~
Elo : Hello Elo!! ^^
kahem : she did~ xD

here is the next chapter!!  :D

Chapter 3


The next morning...

Two girls who still having a nice dream were merely having a heart attack due to the alarm song of the phone.
They quickly woke up because of the alarm song.

Mayuyu quickly turn off the alarm phone.

[the alarm song is ‘Top That’ by U-kiss..I suggest you guys use this song as your morning alarm.. xD ]

“Arrgghhh!!! Mayu!! Why you use that song as an alarm! I was nearly having a heart attack just now...” said Jurina while rubbing her chest.
“I did not put this song as my alarm!” said mayuyu confuse but still with a sleepy face.
Suddenly, Mayuyu realise about something.

“wait...


last night...



Lovetan....”

Then she gasped when she realise about it..

“LOVETAAAAAANNNN!!!!!!!!” scream Mayuyu. Jurina beside her closing her ears with her hands.
Mayuyu quickly get up from the bed and storm out of the room and walk fastly to Lovetan and Miichan’s room.
When Mayuyu open the door,there was no one in there. Then she goes to the kitchen, there she saw Miichan
 preparing breakfast while Takamina was sitting on the chair watching Miichan preparing breakfast.
“Miichan, where is Lovetan?” ask Mayuyu to Miichan.
“She already going to school with Kanon awhile ago...” answered Miichan.
“that girl...” said Mayuyu while gritting her teeth.
After that, Mayuyu and Jurina quickly taking a shower and then go to school.




*meanwhile

“That was punishment for you two for eating katsudon that I bought for Takamina..hehe..” said Lovetan with a victory smile on her face.
She and Kanon are on the way walking to school.


*At school

Lovetan and Kanon already on their own class. Mayuyu and Jurina just arrived.
Mayuyu was in the same class with Lovetan while Jurina with Kanon.
“Good Morning cyborg!” greeted Lovetan showing her smile to Mayuyu who enter the classroom with a cyborg face.
She went to her sit which is in front of Lovetan’s. Then Lovetan move her head forward and whisper to Mayuyu’s ear.
 “Ne..how was the morning alarm song? Great right? Hihi~”
“Whatever~” mumbled Mayuyu while crossing her arms to her chest still looking at the front.
She can’t do anything since she know Lovetan doing that as their punishment for eating that food.



*
Black just got a details about a girl that she had to find.

Name: Watanabe Mayu
Age:17 years old.
Currently studying at Sakura High School.
p/s: I want you to find where she lives right now and with who. And make sure that she doesn’t know
 that you are looking for her. She is a very smart girl, be careful.


“Watanabe Mayu..” mumbled Black while looking at Mayuyu’s picture that was being sent to her.





*After school..


Jurina and Kanon are still at school because they have some work to do.
“Mayuyu,aren’t you going back home?” asked Lovetan as their walking out of the school gate.
“No, I don’t want to go home yet..I think I’m going to Miichan’s bakery.” Answered Mayuyu without looking at her.
“okay then,I’m going home first. Bye~” said Lovetan.
“bye~” said Mayuyu.
Mayuyu then walking to Miichan’s bakery.


*At Miichan’s bakery.

Mayuyu enters the bakery..
“hey Miichan~” said Mayuyu to Miichan who was busy with her customers.
“oh hey Mayuyu~ Why are you here?” ask Miichan.
“don’t know either.. the author brings me here~” tell Mayuyu with a blank face.
Miichan was confuse at what Mayuyu’s talking about.
“Oh, since you are here, why don’t you bring Takamina to the playground. I think I will be busy this whole day.” Said Miichan.
“Hmmm...alright then.. where is she?”
“She’s at the back. And after that bring her home. I might be late today.” Tell Miichan.


That evening, Mayuyu brings Takamina to the playground.

“We are here!” said Mayuyu as they arrived.
Takamina smile happily then quickly let go of Mayuyu’s hand and running happily to the playground.
There are not many people at the playground.
Mayuyu sit on the bench there and take out her manga from her bed and read them.
Sometimes she looks at Takamina who was playing there afraid that she is gone.




After a while,

Mayuyu felt like someone was watching at their direction.
She looks everywhere.
She felt like someone was watching her as she looks from the corner of her eyes.

Sensing the danger, Mayuyu quickly call Takamina.
“Takamina!!! Come here~”
Takamina then come to Mayuyu. Then Mayuyu put her arm on Takamina’s shoulder
and bring her out of the playground.
“Lets go!” said Mayuyu. Mayuyu saw Takamina’s frown face.

“Lets go buy Ice cream!!” said Mayuyu after that.
Takamina’s expression change from sad to happy.
“yay!!! Ice cream!!” said Takamina looking at Mayuyu.
Mayuyu sighed.
Mayuyu end up buying ice cream for Takamina.

Suddenly, Takamina bump onto someone and her ice cream fall on the ground.
“my ice cream~~” said Takamina about to cry.
Mayuyu just looking at the ice cream on the ground.
“I-I’m sorry~ I did not meant to-“ said Acchan who was bumping onto Takamina just now.
“ice cream~~”said Takamina still looking at her ice cream on the ground.
“Ehh, how about i buy you new ice cream?” said Acchan looking at Takamina.
“Really?”ask Takamina suddenly looking at Acchan.
Acchan suddenly hipnotize by the sparkling eyes. “y-yes..”

“problem solved!!” said Mayuyu smirked suddenly making the two look at her.
After that, Acchan buying an ice cream for Takamina.
“here you go~” said Acchan smiling while giving the ice cream to Takamina.
Takamina happily taking the ice cream.
Then Mayuyu told Takamina to give her a thank you kiss~
Acchan was currently looking at somewhere else.

Then Takamina start moving her head forward to kiss Acchan’s cheek,

but at the same time, Acchan turn her head to the front...


and they lips touched...




T.B.C~
« Last Edit: March 24, 2013, 08:52:59 AM by chiqinna »

Offline FlameHazeKatsu

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina+other pairings]
« Reply #29 on: January 30, 2013, 12:29:25 PM »
yay first to commentoo on this lol ;p  :farofflook: (this is the first for me that's why...)
 
THE ENDING!!! KYAAA!!!!!!  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol: lol that made me fall out of my sit... hahahaha  wooooooooo~~~ looking forward to the next chapter...  :on gay: :on gay: and *cough* *cough* my image on Takamina here is a kid? o.o" bahahaha....i'm imagining things 2 much?  :err:

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« Reply #30 on: January 30, 2013, 12:35:31 PM »
CONGRATULATION!!  :onioncheer: lol~ haha  :lol:
I can imagine that.....you fall out of your sit   :mon trudge: lol~

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« Reply #31 on: January 30, 2013, 12:39:58 PM »
aaahh, minami kissing acchann !!
Wonder what happen next, probably minami will act know nothing and innocent while acchann ?? Ahh you made me smile X))

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« Reply #32 on: January 30, 2013, 12:46:01 PM »
hehe~ I don't know yet how to make the next part LOL~  :dunno:
just wait and see~~~~  :on gay:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #33 on: January 30, 2013, 01:27:05 PM »
Wah.... Minami and Atsuko kissing each other....

What's Atsuko reaction after that kiss.... wondering?

Mayu can sense something off... is it Black who is giving the danger vibe that Mayu's sense?

Can't wait to see more... as usual Minami is so Cute.... Thank you for the udpate

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #34 on: January 30, 2013, 02:00:30 PM »
Yes its Black cisda83.. hehe  :)

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #35 on: January 30, 2013, 08:49:39 PM »
it is just now that I found out your fic. It is really sad to see Takamina in that state she is like an 5 years old little girl I like it that she ended up kissing Acchan XD I wonder how is going to be the meeting between Yuki.and Mayu :3 I like it when you comment inside the it made the fic funny :D
I can't wait to know about everybody's past~
update soon your story is original ;)

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #36 on: January 30, 2013, 08:50:13 PM »
thanks for the update! Mayu is sweet, and she has great senses to pick up that someone was watching her! As for the meeting b/w Minami and Atsuko, it was sooooo cute~ Wonder how Atsuko will react :)

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #37 on: January 31, 2013, 01:00:44 AM »
cool
minami is really childish  XD
great fanfic
thanks for update.  :twothumbs

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #38 on: January 31, 2013, 01:39:01 AM »
lol a heart attack alarm, not bad
kiss!!!!! yay!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 3 [atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #39 on: January 31, 2013, 05:41:29 AM »
atsumina´s kiss awww..

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