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The Sweetest Taste (TomoTomo fanfic) - COMPLETED
« on: March 11, 2014, 07:41:31 AM »
Author's note:

newbie here! this isn't my first akb fanfic but this is the first one i posted. since tomochin's the first akb member i knew (i saw her ads everywhere the last time i visited akihabara), she deserves to be my first here.

your comments/criticisms will be highly appreciated! thank you!

The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 1


I received a wedding invitation from my childhood friend. He and I were really close until highschool. I had feelings for him that time but I wasn't able to tell him because I don't want to ruin our friendship. We went to different college and never seen each other again since then.

I arrived at the venue. It's an afternoon wedding. I tried to look for him, he really seems happy today.
After the ceremony, I went to him to personally congratulate him.

"Omedetou, Shotaro-kun!"

"Tomochin! I'm glad you made it here." He hugged me.

"Yes, the last time we saw each other was during our highschool graduation. And now, you're married. I'm so happy for you."

We continued our conversation. Then suddenly we heard a noise of a broken glass.
"Oops! Sorry, I slipped hehe.." A girl from one of the tables said laughing. She's drunk.

Shotaro-kun grabbed me to the side.
"Tomochin, can you do me a favor?" He asked in a low voice.

"What is it?"

"See that girl over there?" He's pointing to the direction of that drunk girl.
"Please bring her home safe for me."

"W-Why would I do that?"

"Since I'm already a married man, I can't possibly help her now. She's a very important friend to me."

"Shotaro-kun.. is there something you're not telling me?" I looked at him suspiciously.

"Okay! S-She's my ex and.. I owe her big time. Look, I really care for her so please, Tomochin?"

His ex.. I thought his wife was the only girlfriend he had.
"Fine, I'll do it." I finally agreed. "But I don't even know her address."

He searched for a pen and wrote something down. Then he handed me a piece of paper.
"Here's her home address. Thank you, Tomochin! Please take care of her for me!" Then he left me.

So I went to that girl. She's almost same height as me.
"I know you don't know who I am, but the groom personally requested me to bring you home. So come with me." I said, not letting her speak. I dragged her to my car and started to drive.

"So driver-san, what's your name?"
It's the first words she said to me. Her voice sounds childish.

"First of all, I'm not your driver. Second, I don't talk to drunk people." I answered.

"But you just talked to me earlier, chiyuu.."

Chiyuu? She really talks like a child. Maybe because she's just drunk.

"A stranger is sending me to my own home, and yet I don't even know her name! It's scary.. chiyuu.."

"Fine. It's Itano Tomomi."

"Tomomi.." She repeated my first name. After that, she didn't talk again.

We arrived to her apartment. There's Kasai written on her front door.
I got her keys and opened the door. Her place is bigger than mine.

"Where's your room?" I asked while I'm still supporting her.
Then she pointed me the direction to her room.

I put her on her bed. God, she's heavy. Before I turn away, she suddenly flew her arms around my neck, grabbed me back and kissed me on my lips.

What the.. this drunk girl stole my first kiss!

I tried to pull away from her but she's strong. She got on top of me and pinned me on her bed. She was staring long at me, like she knows me. Her face was so close, I can smell her breathing. I never imagined I can find a girl's face this sexy. Then she put her lips on mine again. This time much deeper, demanding for an entrance. I can taste the alcohol on her mouth. I felt like I'm also getting drunk because of that sweet taste. I can't move or resist. She's still kissing me, down to my neck and collarbone. And then she stopped.

She fell asleep. I immediately got up.
I had mixed emotions. It's not that I'm disappointed or something.. Wait.. Am I? What am I thinking? She's a girl! A drunk girl!

I took a deep sigh and look at her again. How come Shotaro-kun had a girlfriend like her? How can I leave her like this? He told me to take care of her.
I stayed and waited for her to wake up.

"My head hurts. What happened?" She asked. I guess she doesn't remember anything.

"You're drunk at Shotaro-kun's wedding. I'm his friend, he told me to bring you home."

I gave her a cup of coffee.

"And now that you're awake, I believe you can already take care of yourself. But may I use your bathroom first before I leave?"

She nodded.

I washed myself and noticed a kiss mark on my collarbone. Damn that girl, she doesn't even remember what she did to me.

I came back. She's sitting on the side of her bed while drinking the coffee I made.
"He told me you're his ex." I spoke to her again. "Are you heart broken that's why you drank too much? You know, you should be happy for him."

"It's not totally because of him. It's already been few years ago since he broke up with me. He told me he only liked me because I have the same name with his first love."

"Oh, now that you mentioned it.. You're Kasai-san, right? I still didn't get your first name."

"Yes, I'm Kasai... Kasai Tomomi."

TBC

so how was it?
i'll be updating the chapters soon.
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« Last Edit: October 22, 2017, 07:29:45 PM by sophcaro »

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2014, 10:36:25 AM »
TomoTomo, yay~

Tomochin's first kiss was with drunk Chiyuu ;-)
I like your fic!
Keep it up!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2014, 10:56:46 AM »
mmmm shotaru kun was fall in love with tomochiiiiinn!!

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plis continue thiiiiis!!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2014, 11:34:35 AM »
 :on woohoo: :on woohoo:tomotomo fanfic!!!! Please continue!!!
So tomomi only kissed Tomochin because she was drunk and thought tomochin was Shotaru? Or does she know who tomochin is?

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2014, 11:41:07 AM »

It's been a while when i last read TOMOTOMO.!

 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Pls. update this.! :bow: :bow:
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2014, 04:58:54 PM »
Omg it Tomotomo

And his first love it Tomochin


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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2014, 06:42:30 PM »
I'm very happy when saw this fic  :wub: tomotomo fic, because tomotomo fic is rare in box AKB48 fanfic in jphip ( actually tomotomo fic isn't much in all most of forum). Besides, some fics have still finished  :smhid , some fics are dropped  :( . I hope this fic won't like those  :twothumbs

I hope you'll update soon  :roll:


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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2014, 08:34:49 PM »
yay tomotomo fanfic  :P

hope you update soon  :twothumbs

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #8 on: March 12, 2014, 02:51:05 AM »
Oh... new TomoTomo fic... Yaaaay... XD Nice opening chapter, will look forward for the next.

.... some fics are dropped  ...

Eh.... one is still in the process even though it has been months....*quietly hides and runs away*

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #9 on: March 12, 2014, 03:33:13 AM »
A new tomotomo fanfic eh?

I don't remember when's the last tomotomo fic I read. :?

anyways, love the prologue!  :thumbsup

can't wait for the next update! :onioncheer: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.1
« Reply #10 on: March 12, 2014, 10:44:05 AM »
first of all, i'd like to thank these people for their warm comments!
Lost Heaven, Minami-chan, tfme3638, konaotaku148, Kirozoro, songbac, FoxKing, stv_wong, Railgun96
and also to those people who gave thanks to me!

hontou ni arigatou gozaimasu!  :bow:

promise i'll be updating the chapters as soon as i can!


The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 2


That girl.. I can't stop thinking about her. Just how many other Tomomi have you met in your life before her, Shotaro-kun?
His first love.. I wonder if it's... Aaaghh!! Not possible! It's like I can still confirm it to him. He's already married! It doesn't matter anymore..

"Earth to Tomochin.."

I startled as someone poked me. "You're spacing out again." A tall girl said staring at me.

"Sayaka! How long have been there?"

"Actually, I was here first." She answered smiling at me.

"Oh sorry, I didn't notice you."

"Tomochin, you've been like that since you went to that wedding. Don't tell me you're still affected by your childhood friend?" She asked.

"No, it's not like that. I already got over him a very long time ago."

"Then why are you acting weird lately? Or maybe you met a new guy!"

A new guy? My head hurts. "Unfortunately, I didn't. I met a drunk girl instead."

"Then that's more interesting!" Another tall girl joined the conversation.

"Sae, you're late again!" Sayaka glared at her. "What's going on? Our friend here is not herself these days, and you.. you're consistently late."

"Come on, it's still early. I don't see any customers yet."

"You know, we still have lots to prepare for today!" Sayaka told her.

"It's also too early to boss around." She teasingly answered.

"Whatever!" She's pissed as she went to the kitchen area.

These two are my friends. This scene is pretty normal to them. We work together here. I'm a chef specialized in pastries. And I have my own cafe.

"So, about that girl you just mentioned." Sae continued. "I've known you for so long already, Tomochin. And this is the first time that something bothered you like that."

I was a little shocked with those words.
"Well, it's not like that girl and I already became friends. I just helped her to get home."

She looked at me with concern.
"You always work hard here, Tomochin. It's good to loosen up a bit sometimes." She advised.

"Sae! What are you still doing there? When do you plan to help me here in the kitchen!" Sayaka called out.

"Coming!" Then she left me.

It's been weeks since the last time I met Kasai-san. I don't even have a contact of her. Maybe she already forgets. I'm still a stranger to her after all.

~

I arrived home. It's been a very busy day for us. I'm tired. I laid on my bed.

I heard my phone ringing. I checked, it's an unknown caller. It's already late at night. I wonder who it is. I answered. "Hello, who's this?"

"Moshi moshi~ To-mo-chin~" This childish voice sounds familiar. I felt my heart skipped a beat.
"It's me, Kasai Tomomi!"

"Oh, it's the-drunk-girl-Kasai-san!" I jumped off my bed.

"Hey, that's too long for a nickname chiyuu.." That chiyuu again.
"Just call me Tomo! Since you already stayed in my apartment once, I felt like we're close to each other already!"

Close... How much closeness does she actually remember? Oh my.. I'm getting flashbacks of what happened that night. I know I'm blushing right now, good thing she can't see me.

"So can I call you Tomochin?"

"You already did before you asked! And how did you know my nickname?"

"Oh about that! I just heard Shotaro called you that way. I talked to him to ask for your number."
She asked for my number? Now my heart is beating fast.

"Are you free tomorrow?"

"Why do you ask?"

"Well, it's weekend you know. I want us to hangout or something.. I'd like to thank you for helping me the last time."

"Y-You don't actually need to do that."

"But I badly wanted to meet you again, chiyuu.." She said childishly. My heart is beating two times faster now.
"I'll wait for you tomorrow. I'll text you the time and place. See ya!"

"W-Wait!" She hanged up.

Did she just asked me out? It sounded like a date to me. And why does she excite me like this?

Few seconds later, I received a message from her.
So we'll meet at 9:00 am and the meeting place is..... EEEHH?!?

TBC

yeah i know it's a bit short.. but don't worry
i'll be keeping my promise to update soon!
thanks for reading!  :)

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #11 on: March 12, 2014, 01:25:36 PM »
Wow! You update fast!

Wonder what will they be doing on their date? :dunno: :ding: :luvluv2:

can't wait for the next update!  :stuffed:

And keep up the good work! :thumbup

« Last Edit: March 13, 2014, 01:28:51 PM by Railgun96 »

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #12 on: March 12, 2014, 02:23:53 PM »
Janjanjan~
Chiyuu kawaii~
And Tomochin too~
They'll go out to somewhere already, yay~
But, where? :dunno:
And... SaeYaka appearance :heart:
I'm waiting for the next chapter already :yep:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #13 on: March 12, 2014, 03:49:49 PM »
Lol Tomochin is spacing out

Tomotomo is going on a date...

Update soon~

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #14 on: March 12, 2014, 05:58:02 PM »
Thank for your update  :bow:

i think maybe the meeting place is tomochin's cafe  :roll: :roll: :roll:  ,so Sae and Sayaka will meet the girl who makes tomochin space out like that  :lol: :lol:

I hope I'll be read their "date" soon :3  :D :D
« Last Edit: March 13, 2014, 02:33:45 AM by songbac »
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #15 on: March 13, 2014, 12:12:18 AM »
in tomochin´s cafe.... not?!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #16 on: March 13, 2014, 02:06:22 AM »
I'm alredy loving this xD good job!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #17 on: March 13, 2014, 03:17:29 AM »
wow fast update...  :twothumbs

tomochin spacing out...  :P

cant wait for there date ...  :inlove:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #18 on: March 13, 2014, 11:35:23 AM »
Short but super cute  :heart: :twothumbs
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.2 03/12/14 Update!
« Reply #19 on: March 13, 2014, 03:27:16 PM »
again, i would like to thank those who continued to read and support my fanfic!  :bow:
your warm comments push my eagerness and excitement to update more!

The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 3


This place.. When was the last time I've been here? I don't get it. What was she thinking?
I read her message again.

-

Hi Tomochin! (o^^o)

9:00 am tomorrow at the Disney entrance!
I already bought our tickets chiyuu..
See you there! (^o^)/

Tomo~ (^ω^)

-

An amusement park. I sighed. This is so childish.

I called the cafe first before I enter. It's Sae who answered the phone.
"Hello, Sae. I'll take a leave today. Please take care of the cafe while I'm out."

"Oh, this is new. Are you on a date?" She teased.

"No, I'm not!" I said out in a loud voice. "Anyway, also tell my message to Sayaka."

"Don't worry about Sayaka, I'm sure she's looking forward to have me all alone here."

"Hey, I heard that! Give me the phone!" Sayaka shouted.

"You're so defensive! You know I won't bite. Hehe.." Sae said as she hands the phone over.
Those two fight really like cats and dogs.

"Hello Tomochin! Don't worry about the cafe, we'll be taking care of it. Just enjoy yourself, okay? Bye." She hangs up.
Did they really think I'm on a date right now? A date. Now that I think of it, the last time I've been here.. I was with...

"Tomochin! Over here!" Someone called my name. It's her.
She looks much decent now that she's on her normal state. Well I think she's actually.. beautiful.

"Come on, Tomochin! Let's go in!" Her mature looks are contradicting her childish voice. She held my hand and dragged me along inside. Now, we look like a couple. This is not a date! I'm trying to convince myself.

"Say, Tomo. Why did you choose this place?" I started to talk to her.

"I've been wanting to go here for a long time. I'm happy you came with me chiyuu.." She smiled.

"You mean, this is your first time here?"

"Yup! How about Tomochin?"

"I think I was in middle school the last time I went here."

"Tomochin's my sempai here then! Please tour me around!" She's not letting go of my hand.

"So where do you want to go first?" I asked as I get us a map of the place.

"Hmm.. I don't know yet." She answered cutely.

This girl asked me out and she doesn't have any plan at all. I sighed again. I guess I have no choice but to lead on this date.. Wait, this is not a date!

The lines to the rides are long. We took fast-pass tickets for our first ride.
"I guess we have to wait before our turn." I told her. She just followed me still holding my hand. It felt like I'm with a kid. She's really cute. I feel like I wanted to protect her, to take care of her.

She had fun on our first ride. I'm happy I made her smile like that. We fall in line to the next one. The line here is much longer. We had conversation as we waited for our turn. I told her about my cafe and my friends. She laughed when she heard how Sayaka and Sae fight each other everyday. We also talked about her job. She said she's working at her family's company.

"Ne Tomo.. I'm just wondering, how did you and Shotaro-kun meet each other?" I finally asked.

"Shotaro and I were together in college. He's been very honest to me." She answered.
"We only lasted for few weeks. I never had any relationships since then."

I stayed silent. I was afraid to open up the topic about the reason why they broke up.

"How about Tomochin? Do you have a boyfriend?" She asked.

"No, I never had one."

"Really? It's impossible that no one falls for a girl as pretty as you!"
She thinks I'm pretty. My heart is behaving weird again.

"Well, I loved someone before. But I was still young that time."

"Puppy love! How cute.. So you had your first kiss then?"

My first kiss? You stole it! It hurts that she doesn't remember.
"No, it was one-sided. I never got to kiss anyone yet." I lied.

"Oh.. that's sad." She looked away. The line got shorter until we reach the front.
"Yay, it's our turn now!" She really looks excited.

We spend the whole day trying all the rides. We ate burger and pizza while we watch the parade. We bought souvenirs in the shops. We also watched the fireworks together.

I looked at my watch. It's already past 9:00 pm. I didn't notice how time flew away so fast. I didn't feel tired at all. With her I felt like I'm a kid again. I never imagined I can enjoy so much like this.

"Tomochin.." She looked at me. "Thanks for today! I had fun!" She smiled.

"Me too." I smiled back.

She's staring long at me again. I wanted to kiss her... but I can't. She has no idea what happened between us.

"Ano.. Tomochin.. There's something I wanted to ask you about that night."

"What is it?" I asked.

"Hmm, nothing. Just forget about it chiyuu.. Let's go home?" She held my hand as we leave the place so-called the happiest place on earth.
And it is indeed. Maybe it's just because.. I'm with her.

TBC

since that akbingo scene where tomochin fights chiyuu because she came late meeting her at disney..
i've always imagined how cute they are together there! :wub:

next chapters coming up!
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