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Offline NightSky

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Blank....HELP
« on: December 09, 2014, 04:46:45 AM »
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Offline River1721

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Re: Blank. Where Memories should be. [ Atsumina, Wmatsui and others]
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2014, 06:12:05 AM »
Welcome ~ :welcome
I wonder if those dreams that Jurina had were once real? :tama-uhh:
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Jurina for some weird reasons is close to her.
Well, its a good thing that she knows Haruna. NyanNyan might help Jurina one day. Hm, what is going on with KojiYuu. Their conversation somehow related to Jurina acting differently.  :mon sweat:
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“ So Mariko find Her? is she coming back.… Is that ok?”
Eh, was Acchan's sister missing? I wonder, if its who I think it is. :bigdeal:
Aw, Takamina spoiling Acchan its cute :nya:
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Somehow Kumi's presence make her feel safe.
Kumi's such an amazing friend to Jurina! :mon fyeah:
Rena does seem to seclude herself from the rest of the class. Maybe that will change later on. :mon determined:
This story's really interesting, it left me wondering some of the characters history, and what will happen next as the story goes on :hee:
I hope you can update soon :tama-heart:

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Re: Blank. Where Memories should be. [ Atsumina, Wmatsui and others]
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2014, 06:13:38 AM »
oh kojiyuu is here ;)



wmatsui they are interesting :)


i wilj wait for the next chapter.. :cathappy:

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Re: Blank. Where Memories should be. [ Atsumina, Wmatsui and others]
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2014, 03:11:51 PM »
Kojiyuu..Atsumina and Wmatsui yea!!!

I wonder what are Kojiyuu is hiding

Maeda, don't work urself out

Rena is still mystery

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Re: Blank. Where Memories should be. [ Atsumina, Wmatsui and others]
« Reply #4 on: December 09, 2014, 03:41:23 PM »
That's an interesting start!
I think Rena and Jurina were in some sort of accident when they were young, and now they don't remember each other  :huhuh
Chapter 2 please   :thumbup
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Its gotten even more interesting! :tama-heart:
So that's the history between Takamina and Acchan. Its nice to know that Takamina was there by Acchan's side, when she needed her the most. :hee:
Atsuko trying her very best, and becoming the president of the company to be able to find her sister is so sweet :k-sad:
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It was an accident, and the little kid was covered in blood
Okay, that clearly has to be Jurina.  :mon sweat:
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a few days after they took her sister away 4years ago a group of people attacked them and took the girl away, after that she vanished completely.
I wonder if this somehow relates to Jurina living with Haruna :bigdeal:
I wonder why the student council see Rena as a threat to them? Maybe she's a person Mariko hired to check on Jurina? :dunno:
Thanks for the update, can't wait for more :tama-yeeaah:

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Omg Acchan background is tradegy...i'm glad that Takamina is there with Acchan

I hoped that Acchan find her sister soon 

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who is the sister? Jurina or Rena?

Who are these enemies?

Who kidnapped Atsuko's sister?

Would Atsuko try to establish contact with her sister?

Would the sister still remember Atsuko?

Is there anything needed to be investigate about the death of Atsuko's parents?

What about Atsumina?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the new story and the updates

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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“Good….” the man look the picture with an evil simile.
That's not a good sign!! That's never a good sign!!! :mon tantrum2:
So, the Oshima family works for only one family. And they are like bodyguards too. :hehehe:
It was kind of the Oshima family to take Kummi in. I'm surprised that there is someone more stronger than Yuko. :mon lol:
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“ Sadly that is impossible, some encounters are inevitable; truth always comes to light“
Nicely said Haruna. The truth can never be kept hidden, it will always be revealed sooner or later. :mon determined:
Eh, Rena having a scar on her chest. Both her and Jurina have missing pieces in their memories. I wonder if their connected somehow.  :dunno:
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"Here, I bought you melon pan"
Rena and her melon pan :tama-heart:
I'm glad that Sayaka trusts Kummi, I was worried that she might have thought something else about her. :sweat:
Thanks for the update. You sure are spoiling us :nervous

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As a reader I'm all for the author to spoiling us with everyday update. But I also think rushing things spoils the story.

so If you think taking a break from everyday updates is good, then why not set a schedule for updates?

Maybe a bi-weekly update or three per week. It will give you more time to think things through and have a clear perspective on how you want your story to go.

As for the story itself, I think you're doing great. Just watch out that you don't make your characters seem TOO perfect, flaws is good, it's what makes them interesting and relatable.
« Last Edit: December 11, 2014, 05:30:39 AM by qr.rima »

Offline cisda83

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ah... who is the sister...?

Still wondering... but somehow I'm more leaning toward Jurina as the sister

But both Jurina and Rena seem to be connected somehow...

They both have missing memories....

Why did Rena have that scar on her?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

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Who is this mystery old man

Is Sayaka really Rena sister

Who is the man niece?!?

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oh! I really like this fic!!!
I can´t wait to read more too!

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Erm... Yeah.. now its clear that both Rena and Jurina were together when they were young...

Both had their memories forgotten...

I'm pretty sure that Jurina is Atsuko's sister now...

Am I right?

Would there be some flashback about Rena and Jurina past?

Would Atsuko coming to see her sister?

Can't wait to see what's going on next?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs


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Rena and Jurina was together when they was young, but wh Rena scared?

Update soon

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This become more and more interesting! !!!
Please keep continuing,  I'm cheering here for you!!

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My fic:
Look at Me, My Love (Kojiyuu, Atsumina, Mayuki, WMatsui, etc)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38375.0
The Reason I Became Crazy (Kojiyuu, Atsumina, Marimii, and others)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38595.0
Who Am I? (Yankee Yamete Itadakimasu) - KojiYuu, Atsumina, and others
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39143.0
Oh My Ghost!! (KojiYuu, Atsumina)
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39569.0

**_ KojiYuu Short Fics _**:
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=38698.0

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What is happenng to Rena pass? Who is the other girl?

Why is Acchan doing this? Poor Takamina

Update soon

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Why is Acchan doing this? Poor Takamina



I don't like either Acchan attitude.  :cry:  She still need to understand that, with all what is happening, she is not alone in all this, If she want to get back her sister. She still need a strong shoulder.


Waiting new update!


 
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