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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #40 on: November 01, 2012, 06:27:20 AM »
 :roll: ooh' ! when would you update this ?? busy writing the devils kiss ??  :hehehe:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #41 on: November 01, 2012, 06:49:47 AM »
yes busy writing and doing stuff .. like imagining things .. busy with my lovelife and etc ..

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #42 on: November 01, 2012, 07:08:37 AM »
ahem... yellow also want to read this one... it has been a while you update... yellow want to know what happen next after that birthday kiss
i think you better get it update sooner :P
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #43 on: November 01, 2012, 07:17:26 AM »
when my inspirations came back :) please ? devil's kiss is my focus .. but who knows ? hehe

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #44 on: November 01, 2012, 07:22:44 AM »
ok.. i think other than this, you still me a shot on riho and ayuyu... i think better don't pressurise you anymore, or else later you gonna give angry with me... anything you write i will read and give you those comments   :thumbsup :grin:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #45 on: November 01, 2012, 07:27:20 AM »
really ?! thank you ! you sure you want that as a oneshot only ?

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #46 on: November 01, 2012, 07:30:19 AM »
really ?! thank you ! you sure you want that as a oneshot only ?
anything... as long as you write, be it a shot or fiction  :thumbsup and as long as it's about them. :theking

because yellow want idea on them for my next shot on them :nervous

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #47 on: November 01, 2012, 07:37:36 AM »
hohoho please give me more time to write :)

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #48 on: November 01, 2012, 07:39:51 AM »
no worry... you have that one month to write since yellow also a little busy now :nervous
take your time  :grin:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #49 on: November 01, 2012, 08:05:42 AM »
Hey i want qn update of this one  :w00t:

sl please.. please me beacuse i spoiled you ToO!!   :shakeit:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #50 on: November 01, 2012, 08:08:20 AM »
i'll try okay ?! hehe :))

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #51 on: November 02, 2012, 01:21:08 AM »
maikea, don't stop writing... if you ever do so, you are making me super angry >:(
and don't need to feel guilty towards me, it is my own fault. if you ever feel so, you should write more to make up to me  :yep: (you are fully aware that yellow is a total fan to your fics so don't stop writing  :D or else, i will really get angry with you  :angry:)


you know actually i intend to write a shot and get posted up to brighten up the situation. however, after reading this message that you want to stop writing for the time being, my mood was totally damned... now, i have no such mood anymore... :(
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #52 on: November 02, 2012, 02:02:13 AM »
oh im sorry ! cheer up ! hehe.. i will give you ahm a good update ?

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #9, 9-22-12)
« Reply #53 on: November 02, 2012, 02:29:41 AM »
ok... but my mood is still quite condemned so i have no mood now to write...

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #54 on: November 09, 2012, 07:28:00 AM »



 CHAPTER 10


 "Aww.. My  head  hurts.." Niigaki  Risa  slowly  sat  up  from  her  bed  while  rubbing  her  temple  gently. She  must  be  very  drunk  last  night  to  cause  this  headache. wait.. DRUNK??! She  was  drunk?! She  tried  to  recall  what  happened  last  night.. : Ai-chan's  party, friends  drinking, and.. and.. wait..  Maybe  she  needed  a  cold  shower  right  now.
After  taking  a  shower, she  walked  out  of  her  room  and  headed  to  the  kitchen. She  find  her  Mama, Erina  and  Sayumi  currently  eating  their  breakfast.
"Morning.." She  greeted.



 "Ohayo.." they  greeted  back. Risa  turned  her  gaze  to  Sayu  who  was  smirking  at  her  and  looking  at  her  playfully. "What's  up?" Sayumi  asked.


 "A  little  better  now.." She  answered. "Why  are  you  smirking  at  me  like  that?"


 "Oh  son't  mind  me, cousin.." Sayumi  giggled.


 "how  was  the  party  of  Aichan?" Her  mother  asked.


 "I..?" she  swallows  the  food  in  her  mouth. "I  don't  remember?"


 "Because  you  were  too  drunk  last  night  onee-chan!" Erina  chuckled. "Aichan  had  to  carry  you  all  the  way  here.."


 "Eh? really?"


 "Are  you  sure  you  don't  remember  anything? Everything  about  last  night?" Sayumi  teased. "you  were  so  hyper  to  the  point  that  you.. "sayu  smiled. "That  was  so  funny.."


 "That? I  don't  understand  you, Sayu." She  frowned. "By  the  way, Where's  Aichan  and  Len? They  should  be  here  eating  their  breakfast  too?" She  asked  when  she  noticed  that  her 'bestfriend' wasn't  here  to  eat.


 "She's  taking  Len  back  to  his  parents." Her  mother  answered, standing  up.


 "What? Why? The  vacation  hasn't  ended  yet.."


 "Ne, Gaki-san.." Sayumi  called  her. She  turned  to  her. "You  really  can't  remember  what  happened?  She  asked  again.


 "I  told  you  I  don't  remember..Why  don't  you  tell  me?";


 "It  was  nothing  important.." Sayumi  shrugged. "It's  just  that  you  were  too  hyper  hehe.. I  like  the  way  you  gave  your  birthday  gift  to  Aichan!" Sayumi  sighed  when  she  raised  her  brows. "In  short, you  kissed  her."


 "WHAT???!!!!" Niigaki  Risa, eyes  wide  open  shouted. "EHH??!" She  stood  up, almost  knocking  her  chair  down. "HONTO  NI????!!!"


 Michishige  Sayumi  covered  her  ears. "Goodness, Gaki-san!! I  don't  want  to  be  a  disable  person  because  of  you!" Sayumi  gave  her  a  cute  glare. "Idiot  bean!"


 "I  did  that?! I  really   did  that?!" She  asked, shaking  Sayumi's  body.


 "Stop! You  stop! You  make  me  feel  so  dizzy! Risa  do  you  want  to  kill  me?!" The  injured  bunny  grabs  her  wrist. "Ask  Aichan  if  you  want!" She  pouted. "Such  a  reaction  queen.." The  bunny  mumbled.


 "I  don't  want !" She  blushed. Just  thinking  she  would  ask  that  bully, it  make  her  feel  so  embarrassed.


 "Then  just  pretend  that  you  don't  remember  anything.."

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 Sayumi  smiled  when  she  saw  Eri, standing  in  front  of  her  house. It  seems  that  she's  busy  with  something. "Eririn !!!" She  shouted, hugging  her  from  behind. She  immediately  felt  the  warmth  of  her  back.


 "Sayumi."


 "Why?"


 "Can  you  take  your  arms  off  me  now?"


 "Tsk. Later. I  am  enjoying  the  warmth  of  your  body. Did  anyone  ever  told  you  that  it  is  n ice  to  hug  your  back?" She  asked.


 "No  one. Just  you."


 She  smiled. "So, I'm  the  first  one  who  hug  you?"


 Eri  sighed. "Sayu.."


 "Yes?"


 "I'm  really  busy.. Could  you  let  me  go  now?"


 "You're  always  busy.." She  hugged  her  more  tightly. "Nothing's  new."



 "Sayu!"


 "What?!" She  whined. "Don't  tell  me  you're  going  to  sue  me  for  sexual  harassment?!" She  giggled. "Let  me  hug  you  just  for  one  minute  okay?" Then  Eri  sighed  again. She  touched  her  arms  that  was  hugging  her  waist. It  was  such  a  simple  gesture  she  could  not  help  herself  but  smile.


 "Okay.."


 "Eririn?" Is  it  okay  to  hug  you  like  this?"


 "If  I  tell  you  no, would  you  listen  to  me  and  let  me  go?"


 "Try  that?"


 "Don't  want.. I'm  lazy  now." Sayu  giggled  again. She  loved  teasing  Eri.


 "Ahem ! Public  display  of  affection? Oi.." Sayu  turned  her  head  and  saw  Miki, Tsuji  and  Yossi. She  let  go  of  Eri.


 "What  are  you  three  doing  here?" Eri  asked. Annoyed.


 "Walking.." Miki  answered.


 "Walking? Don't  kid  me  Miki."


 "You're  being  paranoid.." Tsuji  said.


 "Yes.." Yossi  added. "You  think  we're  interrupting  your  loving-loving  with  Shige-san?" She  teased.


 Eri  covered  her  eyes  with  her  hands. "Don't  look  at  them. They're  not  human." Sayu  nodded.


 "Aww.."


 "Yossi.. I  saw  Rika-chan  over  there.." Eri  said.


 "Where? wait ! I  gotta  go ! see  yah !" She said  and  runs  away.


 "Oi, by  the  way  Eri. We  were  going  to  her  bakeshop." Miki  said, turning  to  Tsuji. "Maybe  you  wanna  join? With  Sayumi  of  course.."


 Sayu  smiled. 'You're  a  genius  Mikitty!! I  could  kiss  you!' . Then  she  immediately  turned  her  attention  at  Eri  and  looked  at  her  with  puppy  dog  eyes. She  really  wanted  to  go  out  with  her.


 "No, Thanks. I'm  busy.."


 Sayu:  :on blackhole:

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 hehe  I am very sorry  for the long wait  :kneelbow: i hope you like this chapter.  :temper: hehe  see  yah !

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #55 on: November 09, 2012, 07:46:01 AM »
That last one was a funny expression
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #56 on: November 09, 2012, 07:55:37 AM »
 ^ Sayu on blackhole :) hehehe  :lol:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #57 on: November 09, 2012, 08:27:53 AM »
mahal kita   :love:

thanks for the update... you are surprising me as i thought you are doing it this weekend.

i really like sayu being so little devil sometimes   :heart:
 :thumbsup eririn to make sayu into blackhole.

i really wonder how the bean gonna face the monkey after knowing what she have done  XD

mahal kita :love: wo ai ni :heart: i love you :inlove:
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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #58 on: November 09, 2012, 08:35:49 AM »
 i don't know either? maybe .. Argh ! i want to make this story to move faster ! Ai should confess her love !  XD :lol: but first.. kameshige  :shocked:

 hey.. mahal din kita  :heart: i love you too  :wub: and wo ye ai ni  :ptam-kiss:

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Re: Love Me, My Darling Enemy (TakaGaki)(Chapter #10, 11-09-12)
« Reply #59 on: November 09, 2012, 08:39:52 AM »
anything as long as you have the time to  :)

mahal din kita  :heart: i love you too  :wub: and wo ye ai ni  :ptam-kiss:

i also update  XD... sorry in this chapter still no you meeting Ai but i promised soon... very soon, the date of you and Aichan  :P maybe i give it to you straight after my exam... as i won't update anymore until exam is over... i have to restrain myself for the time being  :nervous

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