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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #80 on: July 10, 2010, 04:23:49 PM »
^   :lol:  Okay, I'll try to change the current fic's ending  XD

Aside from the reason that I told 'someone' I'll make her Ai suffer, actually I'm wondering too why  XD maybe because I've seen/read Risa's being torn in other fics that I want to protect her in mine lol

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #81 on: July 10, 2010, 04:25:32 PM »
^so u actually did wanna make ai die in the firstplace? then go ahead :lol:
lol..mayb i dont wanna a takagaki happy ending already..since this fic start to go to gakikame..so let it be?LOL..
i dont wan gakisan to have aichan in the end..XD

and u decide to kill and make ai suffer so tat u can protect gakisan?! :angry:
Tsk

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #82 on: July 10, 2010, 04:31:16 PM »
^ I'm not telling  :P
GakiKame, ReinAi, TakaGaki who do you think I love from the three  :D

You don't want Gaki for Ai? Hmmm

You know I love Ai, she's my Top 1 with Eri, but hmmm there's just something in me that wants to protect her by all means  XD the same way I feel for someone in here  :D

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #83 on: July 10, 2010, 04:38:28 PM »
gakikame..LOL..
i still think u love gakikame more then Takagaki..

cos i hate gaki?LOL..

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #84 on: July 10, 2010, 04:42:27 PM »
My love for TakaGaki is equal to my love for the Gorokkies or even more, I told you about that already  :smhid lol

You hate Gaki.?. okay I will hate your Ai in return  XD

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #85 on: July 10, 2010, 04:44:35 PM »
go ahead then.. :)
many ppl hate her already.. :lol:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #86 on: July 10, 2010, 04:48:40 PM »
Haiz! You know I could never do that, even if someone will put a knife on my neck :yep:  That's how  I  :heart: her.


Time for bed  :D 

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #87 on: July 10, 2010, 04:51:36 PM »
ok..good night..=)

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #88 on: July 10, 2010, 04:53:24 PM »
You take care yeah  :)

And goodnight S!hu!

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP10 7/08]
« Reply #89 on: July 15, 2010, 02:25:54 PM »
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poor Reina :cry: , you are being very cruel to her in this fic!
:D Sorry  :D

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Mind you you arn't being much nicer to Ai  :cry:
Yeah, kinda  :D



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You shy? No way! You’re THE ebil powerd K!!
I am  :yep:  My ebil power only lives in here  :D

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If inspiration is kind enough to visit me  ;)
Okay... *taps fingers on the table while waiting*  :twisted:  XD

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NOOOO!! Why?? I thought K :heart: C?

:mon runcry:
I do and I was serious when I said it  :)

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Ai...I hope Risa sees Ai’s love for her, but then there’s Reina.....
So, where do I put Reina and Risa?  :D



S!hu!
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didnt i ask you to change the title of your fic!LOl..
it's just gakikame!!! :angry: :angry: :angry:
You see, I'm overly stubborn  :D

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somehow, i really think you gonna kill aichan in this fic..LOL
Lemme think about that  :twisted:

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SEE!!!GAKIKAME GAKIKAME..
BXXX kR.. :lol:
What's that in bold?  :D

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poor aichan.. :( :cry:
kR is gonna kill you before you even be with gakisan in this fic
Oh boy, why do I have a psychic reader  XD  XD  XD

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EBIL
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kawaii beam
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LOL WHAT?! XDDD :rofl:
It was funny, ain't it?  :D

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ai just loves to be beated by risa dosent she? XD lol
Yeah  :D  but for how long.?.  :pimp:

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lame jokes rock XD
Yay!  :yossi:  :otomerika:  :yossi:



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:lol: :lol: :lol: :rofl: :rofl: Love it!
Thank you  :grin:  Try telling it to your friends and see their reactions  XD  or not  :lol:



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LAME JOKE STA~TO
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What.?. It's funny  XD

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*high-five* Glad to have someone on the same mind :mikilaugh:
Tsk

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Oh man, you're really killing me with all the GakiKame-ness :bleed eyes: Give Ai a break already :banghead:
:lol:  :lol:  :lol: Would you believe me if I said I'm trying.?.  XD





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“That was funny.” Eri was bursting into uncontrollable laughter after glancing sideways. She didn’t intend to laugh but couldn’t help it when the previous event flashed back inside her mind. How the slightly older woman reacted when the thunder erupted. “Definitely you’re not labeled as the reaction queen for nothing” she added while trying to control her laughs.


“It ain’t funny!”


“Oh believe me, it was. You looked like a scardy cat out there.”


“Mou...” Risa broke her eye contact with the turtle and stared on her wet sneakers stomping on the accumulated rain water, pouting. Extracting more giggles from the turtle.


“What are you two laughing at?” Reina’s voice penetrated the noise that the rain produced, gaining the attention of the two rain-drenched women.


“Oh hi! I didn’t notice you’re here.” greeted the turtle after seeing the three staring at them.


“Of course you won’t, you’re too busy looking and holding someone’s hand.” The yankii growled through clenched teeth.


“What’s wrong with you?” asked the smiling Eri.


“What’s wrong with me?!” Reina’s voice raised a few octaves higher than normal “Oh, nothing much, we’re just here waiting and worrying about you two while you...”


“Ano...” Risa butted in and was about to say more when a lightning struck and a crashing thunder followed, making her jump and run frantically while screaming at the same time, totally scared. She was trembling, her eyes clamping shut and was babbling incoherent words whilst clinging onto someone tightly.


Pivoting from her feelings of concern and jealousy, Ai finally let her smile grow, when giggles echoed inside and outside the porch after regaining their composure back.


When the growling of the thunders finally subsided and her fear somewhat gone, Risa opened her eyes and looked at the eyes of the person she bear-hugged.


“Was I really overly reacting?” she softly whispered


“Kind of”


Wearing her puppy eyes and her pouty lips, Risa continued “But I was totally scared”


“I know”


“I’m sorry we made you all worried.” The bean uttered in a low voice after letting out a sigh.


Messing the bean’s wet hair at first and then running her fingers through the hair, trying to untangle the mess by combing it with her fingers, Ai replied “It’s okay. You’re safe, that’s all that matters. Why don’t you go take a hot bath before you catch a cold?”


“How about you and I soak in the tub together?” Eri suggested not looking. She was bending down, unlacing her shoes, totally unaware of the people’s reactions.


After hearing the offer, Ai stiffened. Her eyes then focused on Risa’s face, trying to decipher the bean’s thoughts. Risa seemed like she’s contemplating about the offer. She was even playing with Ai’s shirt’s hem and her face turned redder in every second that went by.


‘Will Risa say yes?’ ‘What will I do if she will?’ ‘And when did deciphering Risa’s thought become hard?’ Ai’s train of thoughts was cut when the bean opened her mouth to respond, which made her heartbeat race and waited anxiously for the words to assemble.


“Oh, it’s okay. You go first, I’ll bathe after you.” Ai was not sad with the bean’s answer neither totally happy with it. Negative ideas were still running inside her head, but she was relieved nonetheless.


“Are you sure?” Eri asked tilting her head to the side while eyeing the bean. When Risa nodded, she gave out a sweet smile and headed toward the house. But before reaching the door, she paused and ruffled the yankii’s hair and scampered away toward the house entrance whilst laughing.


“She’s so happy” was all Sayu could say.


“Whatever it is that you’ve done that make her this happy… I’m grateful.” Reina mumbled before following the turtle. “And if I were you, I’d better go inside or I’d be dealing with cold.” She added.


“Aichan, lets go prepare for our ba... Achoo!”



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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #90 on: July 15, 2010, 04:03:53 PM »
Ahh when the thunder struck again she grabben onto Ai  :wub: Poor Reina must be devasted by that though  :cry:

Eri just coming out and saying that she and Eri should bathe together   :lol: but poor Ai was scared that Gaki would say yes  :cry:

Gaki said no but Ai was not really happy, Poor Ai and her conflicting emotions  :bleed eyes:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #91 on: July 15, 2010, 04:19:59 PM »
Reaction Queen XD

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“How about you and I soak in the tub together?” Eri suggested not looking. She was bending down, unlacing her shoes, totally unaware of the people’s reactions.
:lol: Cute, totally oblivious.

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“Aichan, lets go prepare for our ba... Achoo!”
Ah! She wants to bathe with Ai! And she's catching a cold! Oh, wait, that's bad. :sweatdrop:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #92 on: July 15, 2010, 04:34:47 PM »
AW~ poor mame! i'll save u frome the thunder!

and poor ai, she's like mentaly all overthe place >.< but god thing risa denied that bath offer eventhought nothing probably woul've happened. plus i guess risa hasnt seen ai's bandage yet?? im sure reaction/mama mode will come out for that lol

cant wait for the next one~ and if mame's sick then sweet dr lovely will take care of her....*somehow feels another lame joke about love sicknes will form XD*
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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #93 on: July 15, 2010, 05:27:25 PM »
@ badsaints

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*high-five* Glad to have someone on the same mind :mikilaugh:
*high-5 back* Yep, it's just so hard to believe that the ebil is shy  :smhid


@K

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I am  :yep:  My ebil power only lives in here  :D
*gives unconvinced look*
XD

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Okay... *taps fingers on the table while waiting*  :twisted:  XD
:lol:

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I do and I was serious when I said it  :)
Thank you.
You know I wonder if people will get the wrong idea if we keep doing this?

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So, where do I put Reina and Risa?  :D
Umm... how about together? TanaGaki? LOL

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“How about you and I soak in the tub together?”
:mon wtf:
 :on yellcard:

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“Oh, it’s okay. You go first, I’ll bathe after you.”
:sweat:


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #94 on: July 16, 2010, 10:44:25 AM »
*somehow feels another lame joke about love sicknes will form XD*



LAME JOKE STA~TO


Ai Takahashi went to visit her crush Risa Niigaki on her apartment with flowers, balloons, plushie and chocolates in both hands, determined and ready to face her fate  :mon rockstar:  When she rang the bell, her jaw dropped on the floor  :mon scare: when she saw someone other than Risa opened the door because she knew Risa live all by herself. Her eyes grew wide  :mon wtf: when she noticed the girl had no pair of pants on, good thing her shirt was long and loose.





RISA: Who is it? *Asked Risa from inside*

SOMEONE: “Ummm, wait”  :huhuh   “Who are you?”  :)

AI: “Please tell her it’s Ai Takahashi”   :mon emo:

SOMEONE: “Ai Takahashi”  :)2

RISA: “Oh, please let her in, Someone” [lol]




Ai stepped inside apprehensive. She was even more shocked  :mon freeze: when she saw her crush only in her camisole and underpants sitting on a couch holding some things. Slouching, she walked towards Risa  :mon oshitwc:





RISA: Hi!  :gmon hi: *was happy to see Ai*

AI: Do you have any adhesive tape?  :mon cry: * was sad and still slouching*

RISA: Eh?  :gmon blonde:

AI: Even a band-aid will do  :mon duh:

RISA: Where will you use it?  :gmon blonde:

AI: For my broke heart  :ptam-hbk:

RISA:



Playing cards flew in the air around Risa  landing in a mess on the wood-tiled floor



Lol, there my first original  :grin:


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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #95 on: July 16, 2010, 01:54:40 PM »
 :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #96 on: July 16, 2010, 08:06:01 PM »
LOL someone XD is this someone eri by anychance? XD
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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #97 on: July 17, 2010, 06:28:30 AM »
@lame joke:  :prayers:

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She was trembling, her eyes clamping shut and was babbling incoherent words whilst clinging onto someone tightly.
TakaGaki :wub:
but so it mean that previously, gaki cling tightly onto kamei when ai is not around?  :angry:

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Messing the bean’s wet hair at first and then running her fingers through the hair, trying to untangle the mess by combing it with her fingers, Ai replied “It’s okay. You’re safe, that’s all that matters. Why don’t you go take a hot bath before you catch a cold?”
:wub: :oops:

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“How about you and I soak in the tub together?” Eri suggested not looking.
*off to take my knife*
:knee: :kickass:

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She was even playing with Ai’s shirt’s hem and her face turned redder in every second that went by.
she is thinking whether to bath with kamei???  :angry:
but since she is playing with Ai's shirt, maybe the image of she bathing with Ai's appear suddenly in her brain? or mayb that what she always hope..  :lol:

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“Aichan, lets go prepare for our ba... Achoo!”
she wan to bath with aichan?
and yes!she sick!! XD LOL


kR, you have to update faster!!! XD
i dreamt about this fic yesterday that you have complete it already..and remember reading such plot in the last chp
"Risa lean in and give a peck onto aichan lips a few times while aichan is giggling...blah blah blah..kamei stop at the doorway and walk away sadly yet again cause she been seeing such scene since morning.."
LOL..so does it mean, u not giving me a happy takagaki ending? since dream is always opposite.. :lol:

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #98 on: July 18, 2010, 01:43:14 AM »
oddball
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Gaki said no but Ai was not really happy, Poor Ai and her conflicting emotions  :bleed eyes:
Conflicting emotions nee  :D



rnd-sama
That's our Eri  :D

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Ah! She wants to bathe with Ai! And she's catching a cold! Oh, wait, that's bad. :sweatdrop:
I suddenly remembered a joke  XD will post it later if I can  :D



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plus i guess risa hasnt seen ai's bandage yet?? im sure reaction/mama mode will come out for that lol
Damn, I totally forgot about the bandage  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  Thanks for reminding me  XD  I was able to write the next up because of that  :D



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*high-5 back* Yep, it's just so hard to believe that the ebil is shy  :smhid
:mon runcry:

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*gives unconvinced look*
XD
Again  :mon runcry: lol

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Thank you.
You know I wonder if people will get the wrong idea if we keep doing this?
:shocked lol
Well you're one important person to me too  :)

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Umm... how about together? TanaGaki? LOL
:OMG: lol

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:mon wtf:
 :on yellcard:
Why not.?.  :P



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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Yay!  :strawberry:  :strawberry:  :strawberry:



kawaii beam
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LOL someone XD is this someone eri by anychance? XD
I put Eri's name at first but erased it because I noticed there are a few who doesn't want Eri when there's TakaGaki  :D and replaced it with the first Gaki-fan that came into mind but replaced it with Someone in the end because:
1) I don’t want to get murdered for using her name and I haven’t seen her in a while so asking her permission would take time, I guess  :D
2) Other Risa fans might get jealous because she gets to play Strip poker with the bean  :grin:  as if  :lol:



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@lame joke:  :prayers:
lol

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TakaGaki :wub:
but so it mean that previously, gaki cling tightly onto kamei when ai is not around?  :angry:
No other person next to her  :P  unless you want her to hug the trees instead   :smhid
 
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*off to take my knife*
:knee: :kickass:
Jezzz S!hu!  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:

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she is thinking whether to bath with kamei???  :angry:
but since she is playing with Ai's shirt, maybe the image of she bathing with Ai's appear suddenly in her brain? or mayb that what she always hope..  :lol:
:bigdeal:  XD

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she wan to bath with aichan?
and yes!she sick!! XD LOL
OMG! You're happy that Risa's sick?!?  :OMG:

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kR, you have to update faster!!! XD
This update was supposed to be posted yesterday but I ran out of time... so decided to post it last night but the forum was undergoing maintenance. And I'm trying but I've been lazy-ing around lately  :P

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i dreamt about this fic yesterday that you have complete it already..and remember reading such plot in the last chp
"Risa lean in and give a peck onto aichan lips a few times while aichan is giggling...blah blah blah..kamei stop at the doorway and walk away sadly yet again cause she been seeing such scene since morning.."
LOL..so does it mean, u not giving me a happy takagaki ending? since dream is always opposite.. :lol:
Noted  :D
And you dreamt about my fic  :wriggly: that's your cue to always comment in every update!   :angry: lol





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It felt weird bathing alone when the other party was just right outside waiting for her turn. This is their first time not being together in a bath in twelve years.


Mama Takahashi was always making it sure that they would always take a bath together when Risa was brought to the Takahashi household. For two reasons, one, to make Risa feel at home and never feel alone, and two, to make her two girls’ bond be stronger, until they got used to it that none would go into the bathroom when the other was not yet around.


Risa took a deep breath after submerging fully one last time. “Okay, I’m done.” she mumbled as she got out and wrapped her wet body with a Minnie Mouse printed towel. Holding the towel to secure it with one hand, she pulled the plug out to drain the water with the other. After that she walked to get her clothes in the corner and put them on.


After a while, she was in front of a mirror, taking her time drying her hair with the hair dryer that Eri had lent her whilst waiting for the water to fill the tub up again. Holding the device made her remember about the time she shared with the turtle at the riverbank. How they gradually opened up and created a comfortable ambiance in the process. And somehow, learn to trust each other. It all started after the long moment of silent cries, when Risa took the initiative to break the silence after composing herself. That was when she took the charm out from her bracelet and put it on Eri’s necklace, where it originally belonged. The turtle was taken aback at first but a genuine smile then followed. Recalling it sure did make Risa’s mood lighten up.


Putting off and setting down the device, the bean walked toward the tub and immersed her hand to test the water’s temperature “Perfect” and headed out after shutting the tap off.


Feeling fresh and clean, Risa went downstairs to look for Ai. Humming a random song, she swayed here and there while walking. When she was not able to locate Ai inside the house, she decided to head to the porch. Slowly opening the door, she stuck her head out and peeked. And then a smile crept across her face when she saw her best friend’s back in one of the corners of the porch, standing and alone.


Risa was about to call out Ai’s name when someone’s head tilted to the side, revealing a small part of a forehead and a portion of her hair. Her heartbeat stopped for a moment. And then a low husky groan followed which made both of her ears twitched. Her eyes grew wider when the hidden person’s left hand crawled and buried her fingers in Ai’s hair.


A lump was building inside her throat, tears were brimming and ready to glide down, and her heart was palpitating at a faster rate. The same feelings the first time she accidentally saw them kissed.


“But why? Why am I feeling this way?” confused, she closed the door slowly in order to disturb not the two, just like the way she did when she saw Reina and Ai kissed almost two years ago.

“Achoo”



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I’ll try to update again tonight, if I fail, then this will be my last update until the 27th. Take care people!

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Re: ANOTHER TIME, ANOTHER PLACE ~TakaGaki.?. Fic~ lol [UP11 7/15]
« Reply #99 on: July 18, 2010, 01:49:34 AM »
O.O SHE SAW REINAI KISS?!?!?!?! POOR MAME! >.<

and lol that u forgot XD i ws waiting for like a pure reaction queen moment XDDD

and looks like poor risa's got a cold?
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