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Author Topic: Oyasumi #19 (Maiha + Momoko Oneshot) & Oyasumi #20 (KohaLin Oneshot)  (Read 28134 times)

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Ogawa Makoto was tired from the concert she had to attend. She was sweating, and the bright, energetic, Mako-chan changed to tired and sleepy Mako-chan. She got her clothes from her bedroom and she took a long, warm shower.

She put on her comfortable clothes and came out of the bathroom. She took her stinky clothes and put them in the washing machine. She was about to walk back to her room when she heard somebody's voice.

"You look tired Mako-chan." A tall figure stood in the hallway, a smile creeping up on her face. "I am," Makoto replied, hugging the figure. "Thanks for inviting me."

"You're welcome." The tall woman replied, stroking Makoto's hair. Makoto giggled and the two walked in the woman's room.

Makoto has had a crush on this girl ever since she joined Morning Musume. Especially during the "Mr. Moonlight" video shoot. Makoto blushed as the two were under the sheets and the blankets.

"I know you're blushing." the taller woman's arms were around Makoto's waist. Makoto could feel her cheeks go hot.

"I am." Makoto said, closing her eyes. She turned to face the woman, who was smiling.

"I can't believe I'm saying this..." the woman's lips were close to Makoto's lips.

"Tell me." Makoto was curious.

"I love you," the woman whispered. "I love you Mako-chan."

Makoto could feel the woman's lips against her own. They were actually, soft.

Before she could go to sleep, Makoto finally whispered,

"I love you too Yossie."
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Well, what do you think?

It's my very first one-shot!  :cow:

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« Last Edit: August 29, 2009, 09:18:41 AM by Hotaru »

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Re: Oyasumi
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2009, 04:48:36 AM »
 :oops: awww that was really sweet~ ^^ Yossie/Mako fics are a rare thing to read nowadays ^^ i'm glad ur writing them ^^, btw i kinda did a one shot too on my blog, but it's not as good as urs  :sweatdrop:

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Re: Oyasumi
« Reply #2 on: March 26, 2009, 04:53:32 AM »
Cute.  :wub:
They so belong together.  :lol:

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Re: Oyasumi
« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2009, 06:14:05 AM »
Are you sure this isn't supposed to be a chapter in your "Untitled" fic? :P

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Re: Oyasumi
« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2009, 03:43:59 AM »
@lonewind: They are rare fics to read.

@wotachan: They do.

@JFC: I'm sure.

I'll post a oneshot soon! :mon bye:
 

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Re: Oyasumi
« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2009, 01:20:56 PM »
Yeah, Mako and Hitomi are rare. Great that you decided to write this. More please!! :twothumbs
« Last Edit: March 28, 2009, 07:40:59 AM by lil_hamz »

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Oyasumi #2
« Reply #6 on: March 28, 2009, 03:23:18 AM »
"Crap." Fujimoto Miki muttered under her breath as she fumbled with her keys, trying to unlock the door. Her hands were shaking until she was finally calm again.

She unlocked the door and walked inside, seeing her best friend Aya sleeping on the couch.

"Tan..." Aya muttered in what sounded very...odd.

"Yes Aya-chan?" Miki turned the lights on.

"OH! TAN!" Aya shot up and ran towards her friend. Miki had no idea what was going on.

"What's going on?" Miki suddenly had an urge to ask questions. "Where's Yossie?"

"Uh..." Aya looked down, not saying anything.

"What's wron-" Miki was interrupted by a hug.

"MIKI-TAN!!!!" a familiar voice shouted.

"Yossie!" Miki started laughing.

"Hey Miki." Yossie whispered.

"You two..." Aya shrugged her shoulders.

"Is there something wrong Ayaya?" Miki asked with a smirk.

"It's...just...I don't know why I live with you guys." Aya had a nervous laugh.

"Because you're our friend." Yossie replied, walking over to the refridgerator.

"True." Aya blushed a little when Yossie winked at her. 'Bad Aya...Yossie's with Miki. It's natural when she does that.'

"So you should like being here." Miki said, yelping as Yossie held her tighter.

"I'm going to leave you two alone." Aya smirked, going to her room.

When Aya went to her room, she lie down on her bed, hugging her pillow.

'Why does this happen to me?' she thought. 'If Miki didn't have her, I would have had her.'

'It's official.' she said out loud.

'I'm in love with Yoshizawa Hitomi.' she thought before going into a deep sleep.
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A little longer, this just popped up in my head.

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Re: Oyasumi #2
« Reply #7 on: March 28, 2009, 07:19:22 AM »
nice! this totally new read! a yossie/aya pairing with yossie/miki  :twothumbs i really like ur writing style ruru ^^ keep it up!

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Re: Oyasumi #2
« Reply #8 on: March 28, 2009, 07:43:01 AM »
Then I hope more ideas pop into your head. Then we lucky readers would have more fics to enjoy :)

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Re: Oyasumi #2
« Reply #9 on: March 28, 2009, 12:32:16 PM »
Great Pairing
Yossie/Miki pairing win
Yossie/Aya win too, I really didn't thing about that pairing  at all :sweatdrop:
but It really a nice pair  :wub:  :wub:
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: Oyasumi #3
« Reply #10 on: March 28, 2009, 08:58:18 PM »
@lonewind: Thanks.

@lil_hamz: HAMMY! Thanks.

@YumePouk: Thanks again.
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Konno slowly opened her eyes, her vision a little clear. She had no idea what time it was, but it was pretty early in the morning.
She felt a pair of arms wrap around her waist and pulling her close. Maybe too close....

'Oh. Crap.' Konno thought, her posture frozen.

"You're not going anywhere. It's too early in the morning." a voice whispered. Konno knew who this voice was....

"Yossie?" Konno whispered back. "What am I doing here?"

Yossie giggled, slowly getting up and walking over to Konno's side of the bed. "You don't remember Konkon?"

Konno shook her head, pouting. Yossie laughed and smirked, taking Konno's hands.

"We had that Gatas party last night as a celebration of the tour," Yossie explained. "You didn't have anybody to share a room with, so you came in here."

"Oh." Konno turned red. "So...then...why were your arms around my waist?"

It was Yossie's turn to turn red. "Um...Erm...well.." She scratched the back of her head, trying to find an explanation.

"Well?"

"IreallylikeyouKonnoyouaresohuggableIloveyou." Yossie said all in one breath.

"Wow, really?"

"Well, yes." Yossie replied, fiddiling with her thumbs.

"I like you too Yossie." Konno quickly kissed Yossie and went to the refridgerator.

"That's it? Just a quick kiss?" Yossie was puzzled.

Konno closed the refridgerator door and walked back to the bed. She kissed Yossie, this time a little bit longer.

"Better?" Konno hoped that Yossie would say yes.

"There will be more later." Konno went to the refridgerator to get some milk.

"Do you promise?"

"I promise." Konno replied, getting out the milk and getting out some cereal.
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Short. I know. :sweatdrop:

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Re: Oyasumi #3
« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2009, 03:02:55 AM »
 :wub: awww ^^

your writing is cute Ruru! lol i need to member that this fic is just one-shots. cuz i was like 'Konkon and Yossie? what happened to Aya?' lol

but that was another cute and sweet fic ^^ and you update so fast!

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Re: Oyasumi #3
« Reply #12 on: March 29, 2009, 04:20:01 AM »
If it weren't for the fact that these are all one-shots I'd be thinking "Hot damn Yossi gets around!" XD

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Re: Oyasumi #3
« Reply #13 on: March 29, 2009, 06:33:18 AM »
I just read the 3 one shot, but I did't know they were one-shots so after read the one with and then the one with Mikitty I went all "WTH?!!! Yossy is cheating Miki?! :shocked "  Glad they were one-shots jejeje :D  ohh and the one with Aya is great!!! I've just read a very few fics about Yossy&Aya and I love them jejeje I even have a name for them, Ayassy XD although Yomiki is still #1 for me :heart:
Konkon&Yossy is still a bit weird, but it was cute.

Keep the good work :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Oyasumi #4
« Reply #14 on: March 30, 2009, 04:55:51 AM »
@lonewind & JFC: Don't forget these are oneshots. But domo arigatou! :D

@Kreuz_Asakura: AWESOME! I GOT A FOUR THUMBS UP!
Uh...anyway, thanks for reading. The name cracks me up. XD
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Michishige Sayumi's alarm clock started beeping loudly, which was obviously annoying the girl as she turned it off.

She looked at the time. 6:00 A.M.

'Great.' Sayumi thought, slowly getting up and making her bed.

She immediately froze when she heard someone shout, "SHIGE-PINKU!!!!!"

"Why is she here?" Sayumi muttered to herself as she felt her cheeks get hot.

"Shige-Pinku." the girl wrapped her arms around Sayumi's waist, hugging her tightly.

"Koha-Pinku..." Sayumi yelped when the two girls fell on the bed.

"Why are you here early?" Sayumi asked the first question that popped in her mind.

Koharu was silent, getting off of Sayumi and sitting on her bed. Sayumi sat up.

"I wanted to see you." Koharu's face was pink.

It was Sayumi's turn to be silent. 'What do I do?'

"Uh...Koharu, do you mind if you wait downstairs? I have to get dressed for school." Sayumi gulped.

"I don't mind." Koharu replied softly, and went downstairs.

Sayumi felt bad for kicking Koharu out, but she needed to get dressed in her uniform, which only took about ten minutes.

She went downstairs and made some cereal, and sat next to Koharu, who was staring at Sayumi.

"What?" Sayumi felt the heat in her cheeks rise.

"Nothing." Koharu smiled, playing with her Hello Kitty keychain.

"Okay..." Sayumi started eating her cereal.

The room was filled with silence, but it was broken by Koharu leaning on Sayumi's shoulder. Sayumi was finished with her cereal at that time.

"Koharu, you're acting weird." Sayumi's posture was very stiff.

Koharu looked up at Sayumi. "You're cute." she poked Sayumi's cheek. 'This only makes things worse.' Sayumi's cheeks were now red.

"I know I am Koharu, but-"

All of a sudden, Sayumi felt Koharu's very soft lips. She was actually kissing Sayumi.

"Now, let's go to school!" Koharu took Sayumi's hand, and the two girls left the Michishige household. 

Still, Sayumi had no idea why Koharu kissed her. She kind of...liked it.

She giggled and looked at Koharu, who was chatting away about her weekend.

It was Sayumi's chance to kiss her, and she did.

"Sayu..." Koharu was about to say something, until Sayumi stopped her.

"I love you too Kusumi Koharu."
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I have no idea why I'm into fluff, I'm normally angsty XD.

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Re: Oyasumi #4 (Koharu + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #15 on: March 30, 2009, 05:30:54 AM »
Just read all four~ They are so cute!! FLUFFY!! *cuddles their puffiness* I like the Rainbow Pinku one and the Miki/Yossy/Aya one. Keep up the good work.

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Re: Oyasumi #4 (Koharu + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #16 on: March 30, 2009, 06:17:47 AM »
Nothing wrong with fluff. :yep:

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Re: Oyasumi #4 (Koharu + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #17 on: March 30, 2009, 11:37:52 AM »
gyaaa~ so cute!!!  :ptam-shy: :ptam-shy:

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Re: Oyasumi #4 (Koharu + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #18 on: March 30, 2009, 01:46:11 PM »
aw the one-shot was cute. KohaSayu one of my favorite pairings. lol

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Re: Oyasumi #4 (Koharu + Sayumi Oneshot)
« Reply #19 on: March 30, 2009, 05:15:02 PM »
 :oops: awww that was cute~  :heart: koha/sayu hmm they make a cute pairing~

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