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Title: TAKING CARE OF YOU (kaiAcchan - S1 COMPLETED) + S2 Chap9 (10/19/2014)
Post by: chemicalstar on March 06, 2013, 04:23:37 AM
Hey all..

Here I make a new fic. I hope you like it.

(http://i47.tinypic.com/25q8wpg.jpg)

~ teaser~

A man drives a car, looking at his master who sits on the backseat through the mirror. He can see his master is busy reading an agenda book. It's the second year for him working with his master. Seems like his master trust him so much, and he's so glad to work with a very nice man. His master is a young success businessman, the owner of a such a big company.

When his master close the book and put it off, the man ask his master. "Sir, I have something important to tell you."

"Hmm? What is it?" his master replies.

"Sir, as you know that recently my wife was giving birth of our first child. May I ask for day off every weekend? I have to visit my family periodically. They need a father," the man explains his condition. He hopes his master will agree with his request.

He has a wife who lives in his hometown, about 3 or 4 hours away from the city. The last 2 years, he always go home once a month to visit his wife. But since now his wife has gave birth of their first child, he thinks that he has to be on their side more often. So that is why he asked his master to give him day off every weekend.

"Every weekend?" his master asks.

"Yes, Sir. But if you do not agree, then it's okay. I'll follow your command."

The young master look at the window. He has a child at home too, so he knows exactly what his driver feels about being a father. But if it so, he have to look for an additional driver to work with them on weekend.

"Well, I agree with your request. But you can start it only if I have found additional driver to work on weekend, okay!"

The man smiles happily. "Thank you, Sir. Thank you very much."


~ The next week ~

The master get a call from his Posterioristant.

"Good morning, Sir! I have a good news for you."

"Really? What is it?" the master said.

"I found an additional driver to work with you."

"Oh, good. Thank you.."

"He will come today to meet you."

"Okay, meet me at lunch time." The master smiles happily and hung the phone. "Hey MG! I got a new driver. You can visit your family every weekend, started from this week!" He tells his driver that he always call MG.

MG looks so happy, "Thank you, Sir!! Thank you!!" he glares at him through the mirror.

"Yeah, I know how it feels to be a father." the master said. "Let's be a good father, okay!!"

MG laughs a little. "Yeah, once again thank you Sir, I'll never forget your kindness."

Then they arrived at the company office. Since that day, MG often visits his family at his hometown every weekend. He meets his wife and his newly born daughter. The new driver subtitutes his duty only on weekend. The rest day MG works as his master's driver.


Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: kuro808 on March 06, 2013, 04:30:10 AM
Nice start MG will be an interesting character

Posted by the mento Hawaiian

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: cisda83 on March 06, 2013, 04:31:15 AM
Very nice teaser...

I like the story already....

I hope it's Atsumina... with Minami as the successful businessman and Atsuko is the wife...

How about MG? Erm... can't think of anyone...

Thank you for the teaser...

Can't wait for the real thing to come out

 :inlove: :wub: :heart: :love:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: Hii_chan on March 06, 2013, 04:51:58 AM
yay..you came back with a new fic XD
seem the pairing is Atsumina...but I have no idea with the character :?
so ..I'll waiting for you
thanks for update
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: korin48 on March 06, 2013, 05:15:13 AM
Wow! New fanfic!? I have no idea whose main pairing is but hope it is AtsuMina!!
Update soon! :mon pray2:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on March 06, 2013, 09:40:59 AM
At first I was like ''Who's MG? Mayu?......nahh.....Milky?.....nahh''
Then I was like ''..hmm.....M.G..........Majisuka.....Gakuen?'' XD

Which pairing? My bet is on AtsuMina or KojiYuu..........
Looks REALLY intresting....... :thumbsup
Update soon!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> teaser <<
Post by: chemicalstar on March 11, 2013, 11:48:49 AM
Hmm... i think you can guess which pairing thatI ship the most. So maybe this first chapter will answer. Enjoy and leave some comments.. Thank you!

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CHAPTER  1


Four years later..


The master gets on his bed where his wife lays. He holds his phone and texts someone.

"Have you call the agent?"

"Yes, they just confirmed this morning. The new driver will come tomorrow."

His wife sighs. "This is the third time we change the additional driver. Why does no driver like MG?! I wish he could work with us everyday."

"I wish. But you know, if we want him to keep working with us, we have to understand him. He has family. We do understand how it feels having a child at home."

Meanwhile, a 5 years old boy is playing remote control car on the backyard. His blue toy car looks so expensive. It's his birthday gift from his dad. The boy running around while playing his toy car. Then BRUKK... His toy car crashes the wall. He tries to move it by the remote but it won't.

"Why does it not work??" he looks so upset. He tries to operate the remote but it stil doesn't work. "Aaaarrrhh!!"

"What happen master?!" a maid comes approach.

"IT'S NOT WORKING!!" he said loudly.

The maid taked his toys car and examine it even though she knows that she can't repair it.  "Hmm.. I think it's broken."

"WHAT?!  NO! I WANT MY CAR!!" he shouts loud until his dad hear it.

"Hey hey.. What happen, son?" his dad comes.

"DADDY!! MY CAR IS BROKEN!!" he shouts, half cries.

"Okay okay, I will me buy a new one. Don't cry.."

The next day, the boy is just back from school. The driver open the door and the boy out from the car and runs into his house don't care that his maid waits for him in front of the door and greet him.

"Welcome back, Master" said the maid with a warm smile. But the little boy just skip her and run inside. "Geez.. That boy. At least say 'Tadaimaaa!' when he come home.." she shake her head then follow his young master inside the house.

"Master, here's your new car!" said the maid, show the boy a new red toy car. "Your dad just bought you a new one. Look, it's cool, right?"

The boy come and take a look at the car. "NO!" suddenly he threw the car away. "I WANT MY CAR!!"

"But this is a new one, your car is broken. Look, this one is better" the maid said smiling, still try to cheer him.

"NO! I WANT MY CAR!!" the boy shouts.

Then the driver who heard his shout come inside. "What happen young master?"

The boy doesn't answer. Then the maid say "His car was broken, then master bought him this new one. But I don't know he still want his old car. Such a a stubborn boy.."

"Sshh... Don't be angry, young master. Where's your car? Let me see it? Maybe I can fix it."

The boy run to the second floor, heading to his room and then followed by the driver. The boy take his toy car and give it to the driver.

"Are you sure you can fix it?!" the boy said.

"Umm.. I guess so" the driver take the toy car and examine it. He take a look at the car carefully. "I can fix it."

"Really?"

"Of course, I can fix any car problem!" Then he take a screwdriver and repair the car.

The boy look at what he is doing. A few menutes later, the driver finish it.

"Okay, let's try it. Let me fill the battery first." he turn on the remote control and operate it. It works.

"YEAY!!! Woohooo!! " the boy jump up cheerfully. "YESS!!" he take the remote control and play it. "Thank you, MG!"

~~~

"Sir, I'm about to leave now" MG asks his master's permission to come back home cuz it's Saturday morning and the additional driver has arrive.

"Oh wait, MG. I have something for your child." the master get inside his room then come out again with a pink box.

"I went to a toy shop this morning to but his new car" the master said while give a glare at his son who is playing with his remote control car. "although he looks like rather to choose his old car. Thanks to repair it, by the way."

"You're welcome, Sir".

"Aaannd.. This one is for your child. It's a girl, right?"

"Yes, Sir... A girl"

"Well, here.. Take it"

MG takes the box and bows to his master. "Thank you very much."

"Anytime. Now go, your wife and daughter must be waiting for you."

Then MG leave the house. He goes home by train, it only takes one half hour, faster than by bus. When he arrives, a cute little girl run towards him.

"Daadddyyy!!!!" she shows her beautiful smile.

"Aacccchaaan!!" MG greets his daughter and hug her.

"I miss you Daddy!"

"I miss you too!!" MG kiss his daughter's cheek. "Hey look, I bring a gift for you.." he shows her the box.

"Let's open it inside the house. Where's your mom?"

"Mom is cooking, come on Daddy I want to know what's the gift!" his daughter drags him inside the house.

MG's wife greets him when he walks to the kitchen. But then his daughter force him to open the box.

"Daddy come on open the box.." said his daughter.

"Okay okay, calm down honey."

MG open the box and take out what's inside.

"Wow! That's beautiful!!" hus daughter shouts. She takes a beautiful barbie house, completed with the barbies and also the furniture. There were two barbies, a female one and a male one. The house seems so perfect with a dog as a pet.

"Wow, that must be expensive. Gorou, how could you buy it?" his wife asking.

"I didn't buy it. It's a gift from Mr. Takahashi.

Acchan tilts her head while holding the two barbies. "Who is Mr. Takahashi?"

"He is dad's master. Dad work for him as his driver. He is so kind, he's the one who gave this gift for you."

"Wow, he must be really nice, right dad?"

"Yes you right baby" MG pat her head. "Come on, let's have lunch together!"

"Go ahead, I still want to take a look at this barbie house."

MG and his wife go to the kitchen and prepare their lunch on the table. Meanwhile Acchan still in the living room playing with her new toy.

"Hmm.. I have to give them names."
"This is me.." she takes the female one.
"The dog is... Hmm... I think I should ask mom about the dog's name." then she shout out loud.. "Moooom.. What's the good name for a dog?!"

"Honey, come here! Let's have lunch together!" her mom replies from the kitchen.

"Eh? Honey? Yes... You are Honey!!" she said ponting at the dog.
"And you are..." she pointing at the male barbie. "Takahashi!"

"Acchaaan.. Come here baby! Let's have our lunch." MG call his daughter.

"I'm coming!" she put the barbies and the dog in the barbie house and leave it, then she join her parents and they have lunch together.





Hows that? I hope you like it.

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 1 (13/03/11) <<
Post by: Sydney W on March 11, 2013, 02:46:25 PM
It's Acchan and Kai !!! Wohoo !!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 1 (13/03/11) <<
Post by: DC2805 on March 11, 2013, 04:55:49 PM
haha, I love the way lil Acchan gives name to the male doll...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 1 (13/03/11) <<
Post by: kuro808 on March 11, 2013, 05:18:13 PM
Little Acchan and the male doll

Seems like she is pampered XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 1 (13/03/11) <<
Post by: cisda83 on March 11, 2013, 11:27:00 PM
Ah... so Aachan is still a little girl... daughter of MG

She's so cute... and demanding... hehehe

The Takahashi's boy.. is Minami or Kai?

He's a stubborn boy and very spoil.... hahaha

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 1 (13/03/11) <<
Post by: korin48 on March 12, 2013, 07:45:52 AM
The little boy is Kai and little girl is Acchan!??! Kyaa~! :mon lovelaff:
Please update soon!! I wanna know how that little boy meets little Acchan!! :tantrum:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> New: Chapter 2 (14/03/11) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on March 13, 2013, 06:04:53 PM
..
Thanks for all the comments. I’m happy that you like it and still expect the contonuation. Now you all know who’s the pairing. And it’s just the same pairing ast the latest one. But I want to make another story wbout this pairing with different characters of the pairing. It’s gonna be a long story (maybe). I hope I have time to keep update this fic. Keep reading. Thank you


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CHAPTER  2


Sun shines bright in this Sunday noon. The master Takahashi prepared himself to meet his colleague in a restaurant. Because it’s Sunday, they bring their son too., they go by car driven by their new additional driver. They sit on the backseat and Kai, their son, sits between them. After about 30 minutes driving, Kai feels sleepy.

“Mom, I’m sleepy...” he lays his head on his mom’s lap.

“You slept too late last night. That’s why you feel sleepy today. Next day Mom won’t let you playing game until midnight.”

“But the next day was Sunday. It’s okay if I play game until midnight. I don’t have to go to school on Sunday” he tries to ignore.

“Yada! You always against Mom’s command” his Mom pouts. “Okay, now go sleep... I’ll wake you up when we arrive.”

Several minutes later, they arrived in front of a resort which has a beautiful scenery from its restaurant.

“Kai, we’ve arrived. Wake up...” Mrs Takahashi pokes her son’s cheek to wake him up.
No answer.

“Son, wake up! Let’s go, dad’s friend is waiting..” now his Dad wakes him up. But still, no answer. “Kai.. wake up. The restaurant has a delicious ice cream, let’s order it. Come on wake up...”

“Huumm.. I’m sleepy, mom. I’ll wait here. Seriously, I’m sleepy” Kai said without opening his eyes.

His mom look at his dad, and it looks like his dad let him sleeps in the car and wait.

“Okay, Mom and Dad will go ahead. You sleeps here, the driver will stay here too.” His dad said.

“Yasu, stay here and take care of my son, okay.” His dad said to the driver. “If Kai wake up, take him inside the restaurant.”

“Yes, Sir.” Yasu, the new driver said.

Kai’s parents go inside the restaurant and meet their colleague, while he sleeps on the backseat in the car with the driver. About ten minutes later, the driver calls someone.

“I have a good chance. Wait me at the usual place.” Then he hung his phone.

--------

Yasu turn on the car and drives away. Kai is still sleeping, doesn’t know where Yasu brings him. He drives far away from the restaurant. Then he arrives in front of an old building. He gets out of the car and walk towards the front door of the building.

"Where is the kid?" a man inside the house ask him.

Yasu throw the car key to him, "Inside the car."

The man call another men and they walk out. Meanwhile, Kai wakes up and confused where he is.

“Eh? Where is this?” Kai look around, take a look at the place where he is now through the window. It’s not like the resort his Dad told him lately. It’s just look like nowhere, there just an old building in front of the car. He tries to open the car door but it’s locked.

“Mom!! Dad!!” he starts to panic. He’s scared so he knocks the window so that anyone can hear him. He hope his parents or maybe his driver will come. But then, out of his expectation, people who come there are not his parents, but some unknown men who walk approach the car.

Kai doesn’t know them. He feels more panic and scared. “Who are they?”

A man open the backdoor, and Kai steps backward. “Hey, little boy” he smirks on Kai.

“Who are you?” Kai ask bravely. But still, inside his mind, he’s scared.

“Come here, your parents are inside.”

Kai look at the house. It’s kinda strange if his parents are inside, they haven’t told him anything that they would go to this kind of placee. “Really? I want my Dad come here.”

“You don’t believe me? Come on just go with us.” The man starts to pull Kai closer.

“No. Don’t you hear what I said? I want my Dad come here, you idiot!!” here it is, the young stubborn kid shouts again.

“SHIT. You said I’m idiot? Let’s see who’s the idiot!” now the man pull him out of the car harshy. He carries Kai on his strong arms and take him inside. He ties Kai’s hand behind his back, and then ties Kai’s feet.

“WHO ARE YOU??” Kai shouts. “WHERE’S MY PARENTS???!!!”. He tries to avoid the man but he can’t. However he’s just a kid. Then isolate his mouth and Kai laid down on the floor. He can’t do anything but cries.

-------

In the other place where Kai’s parents meet their colleague, they finished their lunch. Kai’s mom nitices that Kai still doesn’t come. “Is Kai still sleeping?” she thought. Until they finally decide to end the meeting and come back home, Kai still doesn’t come. His parents go to resort lobby. Kai’s Dad take a look at the parking area but he can’t find their car. He still remember where the car was parked, but nothings there now.

“Where are they?” he said to himself.

His wife coming, “What happen?”

“Our car is gone. I’ll call Yasu.” He take his phone and try to dial Yasu’s number. There’s no answer.
“Not active.”

“What? So where are they?” his wife starts to panic. “Kai is with him.”

Takahashi calls the maid in his house, but they said that Yasu and Kai haven’t back home yet. The he call his staffs in the office, just in case they saw them. But they said that they know nothing about Yasu and Kai. Takahashi calls everyone and no one knows. Now they totally panic. Takahashi call his office driver to take them home.

-------

Just after they arrived at home, they call everyone to help them searching for Kai and Yasu. The one that they’re worrying about is Kai. They just don’t expecting something bad happen to their only child. Kai’s Dad initiates to call MG, just in case he knows something.

“Hallo. Good afternoon, Sir.” MG answer the phone.

“MG, did you see Kai or you do you know where is he?” Takahashi talks to the point.

“What do you mean, Sir? I didn’t see him. I’ve been in my house since yesterday.” MG said.

“Oh, GOD..” Takahashi sigh.

“Sir, what happen to young master? Is he alright?” MG starts to worries.

Takahashi tells MG what happen and MG get shocked. While he still talk to MG on the phone, there’s a phone call to their house. A maid hang up the phone.

“Hallo, Takahashi residence’s here.”

“Hallo, may I talk to the house owner? Tell Takahashi, I have his son here.” A man on the phone said.

“Sir, there’s a man said that Kai’s with him..” the maid said, give the phone to Takahashi.

Takahashi quickly get the phone. “Hello, Yasu is that you?”

“No, it’s Yasu’s boss.”

“What? What do you mean? Who are you? Where’s my son?”

“Wow, calm down, Mr.Rich. Your son is okay.”

“WHERE’S MY SON?” he said loudly.

The man laugh to hear Takahashi is in panic. “Easy, man. Here, if you want to hear his cute voice. ” The man take off Kai’s masker. “Say hi to your Daddy, little boy.”

“Daaaad!” Kai shouts. But then the man isolate his mouth again.

“Kaaaaii!! Oh my God, what did you do to my son?!” Takahashi speaks loud. His wife starts to worries him so hard. “Shit, Yasu! You kidnapped my son!”

“HAHAHA. Slow down... I did nothing. But I will... if you give me my favor.”

“WHAT? WHAT DO YOU WANT?”

“Just come to my place and bring some money. The you can take your son.”

“Shit. How much do you want?!”

“Three million dollars.”

“WHAT??!!”

“Why what? Is that too much?? Oh my God, for a succes businessman like you, I guess that’s not much. Or... okay. Maybe your son isn’t worth it. You know, I can just ‘BANG’ your boy’s head in a second and you’re just wait for his corpse coming to your house.”

“NO. PLEASE DON’T DARE TO TOUCH MY SON!! I-I will give what you want!”

“HAHAHAHAHA Good choice, Mr. Takahashi. Just come to my place with the money, not police. It you dare to bring any polices, you’ll find your son dead.”

“FINE. So where’s your place?”

Takahashi noted the place that the man said on the phone. Now all the pople in the house are panic. They can’t believe that Yasu, their new driver is a kidnapper. Meanwhile, Takahashi still not end his conversation with MG on the phone. Then he also tells MG that Kai is actually kidnapped by the new driver.

Takahashi decide to go to the bank to get the money. But before that, he ask one of his staff to check Yasu’s identity and search for him. He also call his friend who is a police chief executive. However, he doesn’t want to go there by himself. He have to keep himself and Kai are secured, even if he has to give them money.

-------

In the other town, MG who is staying in his house, get his jacket and take his shoes.

“Dad, where are you going?” little Acchan ask her Dad.

MG move down and caress his daughter cheek. “I’m going back to work, Acchan..”

“But it’s still early. Yo still have three hours left to be here, Dad.” Acchan said. Her Dad usually come back town on 7pm. But now her Dad is about to leave.

“Acchan, Mr.takahashi is in trouble. I have to help him.”

“What’s the problem, Dad? Can I help him too?” Acchan said innocently.

“What happen, Gorou?“ MG’s wife coming.

“Look, Mr.Takahashi’s son is kidnapped. He told me the address where the place of the kidnapper. It’s only takes 30 minutes driving from here. I have to help him.” MG explains to her wife.

“Oh my God.” His wofe shocked. “Be careful...”

MG nods. He wears his leather jackets and kiss his wife’s forehead.

”Daddy, can I go with you?” Acchan suddenly said. “I want to help Mr. Takahashi too. He’s so kind to me. So I want to help him.”

MG smiles by what his daughter said. “Acchan, the situation is very complicated and too dangerous. But you can still help Mr.Takahashi.”

“Really?” Acchan smiles excited.

“Yes, just stay home and pray for him. Ask God to keep Young Master Takahashi safe.” MG said to Acchan and kiss her forehead.

-------

MG leave his family and go to the place where the kidnappers and Kai are now. In 30 minutes, MG arrives in front of the old building. He hides behind a big tree and observe the situation. He also walk around the house yard to find if there a possible entrance for him.

Then he finds an opened back door of the building. He walks approach the door an enter it. The place is so quiet and dark. He moves carefully to find the place where Kai is. Suddenly he hears some footsteps, so he quickly hides himself. He safe.

He walks again and a man sees him. The man comes “Hey, who are you?”

MG quickly punches him. The fighting but MG can handle him and make the man collapsed. He starts to walk again until he find a door which is an inch opened. He sneaks throug the door and he can see his young master sits down on the floor with his hands and feet tied by ropes and the mouth is isolated.

By throwing a coin, MG makes a sound so that two men inside the room come closer to him.
“Who’s there?” the men said and walk to the door. MG hide himself behind the wall and take a bat near him. When the man open the door wodely, MG beats them by the bat. He fights the men by himself.

Kai noticed the noise, he can see someone familiar to him is fighting with the kidnappers.
“MG!!” he thought and wide his eyes. He just sits there watching the fights because he can do anything.

MG keep fight the men until all of them collapsed. MG quickly come towards Kai and untied the ropes. While trying to unties the ropes, Kai see one of the men  wakes up again. The man take hand gun and directs it to MG. Kai wide his eyes and shout “MG, behind you!!”  MG quickly look at behind him, he can see a man directs his gun to him. And in a second...

BANG!!!!

MG cover Kai by his body to protect him. The two close their eyes.

1..

2..

3..

4..

MG tries to open his eyes, he feels nothing. He pulls his body from Kai and take a look at the man. He can see the man has collapsed, and there’s a cop behind the window. Suddenly some cops are coming and take the kidnappers out. MG unties the ropes and now Kai is free.

“MG!!!” Kai hugs him tightly and cries.

“KAAAII!!!” Talahashi runs towards them.

“DAAAAD!!” Kai gets up and runs to his dad. He hugs him and cries. “Daddy, I’m scared!!”

“You’re safe, son! Are you okay? Did they hurt you?” he examine every inch of Kai’s body just to ensure that Kai is okay.

“i’m okay Dad. MG saved me..” he pointed at MG who stood there watching the son and dad scene.

“Thank you, MG ” Takahashi said.

-------

The kidnappers are prisoned. The newspaper and TV keep showing the news that son of a succesfull businessman has kidnapped but saved just in hours. Some journalist come to Talahashi’s residence to interview them.

Two days later, after the Takahashi family having their dinner at home, MG called to come to the living room.

“You call me, Sir” MG said as he arrives in the living room.

“Yes, sit down. We have something to discuss” Takahashi said.

MG sits down on the sofa. There are Mr. And Mrs Takahashi there, and their little son is busy reading comic on the sofa.

“MG, as what happened to Kai recently. I think I’m getting paranoid to find another driver.”  Takahashi starts talking. “Would you mind if you work with us full time again? I mean, even in weekend? The whole time..”

“Eh?” MG a little shock by what his master said. Then he keep silent, thinking of his little daughter who is start to grow up. If he leave his family, Acchan will miss him so much. He just doesn’t want to disappoint his daughter and also his wife.

Takahashi knows MG’s situation by seeing his silence. So he tries to break the silence. “Err... about your family...” he said. “You can bring them here. They can live here with you.”

“Yes, if you don’t mind, your wife can work with us too. As you know, a maid can’t handle this house. Especially to handle this little prince..” Mrs. Takahashi said and pat her son’s head. Kai quickly remove his mom’s hand from his head as he feels that its disturb him reading the comic.

“Just tell your wife and discuss it. Please think about it and I hope you take our offer. We really rely on you, MG” Takahashi said.

MG nods. That night, he calls his wife and tell her about the offer. Takahashi very trust MG, and also MG has work for him for years. It’s so harsh if he doesn’t take his offer. Beside, Acchan hasn’t start her school yet, it’s not hard if she move out of town to live with him. And his wife, also can work in the house to help handle the household. After talking much on the phone, they finally decide to take the master’s offer.


~~~
 
A long chapter. Hehe
I hope you like it and leave some comments.  Thank you
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: kuro808 on March 13, 2013, 06:46:17 PM
MG used to be the Takahashis' driver and now with acchan he might have to leave his family behind but the offer is on the table

Go for it

Posted by the mento Hawaiian

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: Sydney W on March 13, 2013, 06:50:38 PM
Yeay, finally MG take his master's offer which mean Acchan will be staying with Takahashi's family soon. I wonder how the kids react when they meet up.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on March 13, 2013, 09:12:03 PM
MG my herooo~~

Thank you for saving my little baby Kai

Please update soon I can't wait to know what will happen when Acchan meets Kai
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: cisda83 on March 14, 2013, 03:28:47 AM
Kai is being kidnapped... I would not leave my children with a driver at all time... esp. to someone that is still new

Wah... MG is a hero...

Ah... so Atsuko is going to live with Kai together in the same house...

Yeah... how Kai is going to behave with Atsuko around....?

Is he still going to be a spoiled, stubborn child or is he going to be conciderated and kind to MG family?

Is Atsuko going to be a Kai's personal maid there?

If Atsuko has not started going to school so she is younger than Kai, right?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the lovely update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:



Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: Flean on March 14, 2013, 04:04:38 AM
my first fic after a while not reading any and its really worth it..  :twothumbs
very interesting plot you got here..  :w00t:
can't wait for the next chap!  XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: Hii_chan on March 14, 2013, 05:46:47 AM
so...now Kai and Acchan live together :w00t:
sound interesting :twothumbs
there will be more moment I cant wait to see it
thanks for update and please make it soon :jphip:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: korin48 on March 14, 2013, 05:48:29 AM
Acchan and Kai live together?? Wooow so awesome chapter!!!!!!  :w00t:
I love it!!!  :banghead:
I am very very curious what reaction when Acchan and Kai meet!!! :panic:
Thanks for update fast!
Update soon :3
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: Haruko on March 14, 2013, 06:24:13 AM
aww cutie chibi atsumina :B... i love long chapter thanx :B ohh maeda papa is awesome
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: Wmatsui22 on March 14, 2013, 10:37:50 AM
Taking Care of You

Hi!!! Chemicalstar-san

Another good works of yours!!! (Very Happy)

I like this story!!!

It's just a unique plot...

And Acchan here is very cute!!

Please Update Soon!!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> CHAPTER 2 !! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on March 23, 2013, 05:52:08 PM
 A big sorry to update it so long. I've been in a busy week. But, thanks for the comments and looking forward this story. So, here's the new chapter.


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CHAPTER  3

A loud voice of a crying little girl can be heard from a class in an elite kindergarten. The little girl crying out loud and cover her eyes with her hands.

Then the teacher walk approaching her. “Hikari, why are you crying?” said the teacher softly .

The girl move her hands as she heard her teacher speaking. “He broke my crayon!” The girl pointed at a little boy who sits near her innocently.

The teacher look over the boy and give him a ‘why?’ face. The boy just lift his shoulders pretending that he doesn’t know anything. Looking at the boy’s reaction, the girl cries again.

“Sshh… don’t cry..” the teacher pats her shoulder, then she glares again at the boys. “Takahashi-kun, is that right?”

“I didn’t mean to” he finally says and pouts.

The teacher sighs. “Yes, I understand. But you can apologize to Hikari.”

“Why should I? I told her that I will pay for it. I can buy her a new one.” The boy said, trying to ignore what the teacher asked.

“Yes you can buy her a new one. But at least you apologize to her. Come on..”

“I won’t!” he widened his eyes in angry.

“Takahashi!!”  the teacher says in harsh manner.

“I don’t care!” the boy throws the broken crayon and leaves them. He walks away and join the other children. “Geez, girls are horrible!”

That day seems like terrible for the little Takahashi Kai. His father’s office driver picks him up from school. He’s really in a bad mood. Looking at this condition, the driver asks him when they are in the car on their way home.

“Young master, why are you look so sad?”

“…………” looking at the window.

The driver smiles looking at his young master’s arrogant head. “Something bad happened at school?”

“……………” Kai still ignores him.

Looking at his behavior, he driver just sighs and smiles. It’s common to see his young master like this. Then when they reach Takahashi’s residence, the driver open the car door. Kai get out from the car and walks towards the main door where a maid is standing waiting for him.

“Okaeri..” greets the maid to Kai, but he ignores her. He just give his bag to the maid and walking straight inside the house. The maid follows Kai who walks towards the dining room.

Kai sits down on the chair of the dining room. “Where’s my lunch?”

“Ah, young master. It’s better if you change your clothes first” said the maid.

“But I’m hungry” said Kai harshly.

The maid sighs. “Okay, but wash your hands first. Come here...” the maid leads Kai to the sink.

While washing his hands, Kai can see through the window. There is a pick-up truck that contains a lot of goods. Some people are working on it by pick up the goods inside MG’s flat. But he can’t se MG there.

“Who are they?” ask Kai to the maid.

“Ah, MG takes his family to move here.” Said the maid. “Now he will work here full time, young master. His wife will help me to handle this house too.”

The little Takahashi doesn’t comment, he sits down again and starts to eat his lunch whle the maid prepares his orange juice.

“Here’s your juice…” the maid offer him a glass of orange juice.

Kai takes it and drink the juice. “Add some ice!” he frowns.

“Ah, o-okay!” the maid takes the glass back worriedly.

“Don’t too much!” he said.

The maid just can sighs. Sometimes, this job is so tiring for her. To handle the house is not easy. She has to wash the clothes, the dishes, clean and make up the house, cooking, and the hardest thing is to take care of her stubborn young master. It’s relieving that MG brings his wife to live there. At least, there’s another person to help her handle the house. Besides, she heard that MG’s wife is good at cooking, they also have a child. She thinks that maybe MG’s wife can handle the young master too. Yes, she hopes so.

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Acchan has her own room in the second floor of the flat while her parents living in the bigger room on the first floor. Her father prepared it for her. Acchan really happy to have her own room. It’s a quite  little simple room with a little bathroom inside. But the best part of the room is a windows facing the main house which Acchan think that the house is more looks like a castle.

In the evening, MG is asked to meet his master’s family to introduce them his wife and daughter. They meet them near the swimming pool where Takahashi family are having a relax time and drinking some tea.  There, Acchan can see a boy sitting on the floor near the pool, playing with his robots. But she can’t see him clearly cause his back is facing her.

“Good evening, Mr.Takahashi” MG bows to his master.

“Ah, MG come here. Join with us” said Mr.Takahashi.

“Here it is, our new neighbour” said Mrs.Takahashi jokingly.

“This is my wife” MG introduce his wife.  “and this is my daughter.”

Mrs. Takahashi smiles widely by seeing Acchan. Having a daughter is her dream all this time, since they had Kai, they always want another child, a little girl as Kai’s sister. “Who is your name?”

“My name is Maeda Atsuko. Nice to meet you” Acchan smiles bows to them. Hearing Acchan’s voice, the little Kai turn around take a look at them. There he saw a little girl standing between MG and a woman who is in his thought,maybe she’s MG’s wife.

“Ahh, so cute!” said Mrs.Takahashi as she saw Acchan’s cute smile.

“Kai, come here. Greet MG’s family” Kai’s dad asks him. But it seems like Kai ignores what his daddy said. He turn around again and continue to play with his robots.

“How old are you?” Kai’s dad asks Acchan.

“I’m 5 years old.” Acchan answers.

“Ah, so you’re in kindergarten now, right?”

Acchan nods.

“It must be hard for her moving to a new school, right?” Mr.Takahashii said to MG.

“It’s no problem, Sir. Acchan just started her school for 2 weeks. I think she can adjust herself in the new school. I will send her to the nearest kindergarten, Sir.”
 
“Hmm.. okay. That’s good.” Mr.Takahashi said, then he look at his son. “Kai, you can play together with her. Atsuko is the same age as you. ”

Kai turn around with the cool face. He lift his shoulders. “I don’t play with girl!” the Kai turn around again and continue playing. “Girls are horrible” he mumbles.

Acchan look at Kai. She never thought that Takahashi is that cold. She thought that Takahashi is nice and kind. But it’s out of what she imagined before.

“Ahahaha… Kids. Always acts strangely” Mrs. Takahashi laughs awkwardly.

“Young master is in the kindergarten too?” MG’s wife asks.

“Yes, he just starts the school three weeks ago.” Mrs. Takahashi said.

That evening, both families have a nice chatting near the swimming pool during the tea. Except Kai, who is busy with his toys and doesn’t care of the meeting. There, Acchan only sits down and look at Kai strangely. She never thought that she will live in this Takahashi residence, and she never thought that Takahashi has a boy who is same age as her but ignored to play or even introduce each other with her. Acchan has no friend at school since she only spent 2 weeks at school then leave it. She thought that little Takahashi could be her first friend but she wrong.

The next day, MG’s wife help the maid to work and handle the house. As what the maid expected, MG’s wife agree to handle theyoung master and cooking. Fortunately, Acchan is so kind to let her mom leaving her sometimes, just to handle the stubborn young master.

“Kai, go to bed. It’s late of night” Kai’s mom said fron the doorway of Kai’s room. Kai is busy playing his video game.

“Tomorrow is Sunday” he said shortly.

“But still, you have to go to sleep. It’s not good to stay until midnight playing game.”

“I’m not sleepy, mom. I’ll never go to sleep.” Kai answers his mother, not looking at her at all.

Then MG’s wife coming and asking “Can I help you, Mam?”

“He don’t want to go sleep. I don’t know how to handle him anymore…”

“Oh… Let me try, Mam”

“Sure, good luck. If he ignores you, just leave him. He will get sleepy too, but I don’t know when..” Kai’s mom is already hopeless to handle him. So she back to her room and sleep. Besides, that day Mr. and Mrs. Takahashi has a tiring day of working.

MG’s wife come inside Kai’s room and sits by Kai’s side. “Hey, what are you playing? Looks like very fun…” she peek of what on the screen.

“Oh, Kamen Rider. You like it, huh?” she asks. Kai doesn’t respond.

“I like Kamen Rider too. He’s my favorite superhero.” MG’s wife continues.

Kai’s take a look at her. “Really?”

“Yes, I like superhero stories… I have a lot of stories about superheroes. You wanna hear it?”

Kai nods. “Yeah, tell me.”

“Hmm.. but before that, do you wanna wear your pajama first? You have some pajamas with Kamen Rider pictures, right?”

Kai nods. “Yes, I have 2 pajamas with Kamen Rider pictures on it. White and blue.”

“Ah, so you want to wear the white one or the blue one?”

“The blue one!”

“Great! That’s my favorite color!” MG’s wife said cheerfully. She takes Kai’s pajamas and help him to change his clothes. Kai follows her order insensibly. Wearing his pajama, brush his teeth, wash his hands and feet, and go to bed.

“So, Maeda-san, what’s the story?” Kai said, sitting on the bed.

“Well, I have a lo of story but maybe Hercules is going to be cool.”

MG’s wife tells him the story, and she finds that Kai has already fall asleep before the story is ended. Then she covers Kai’s body with the blanket and turn the lights off. She quickly go back to her flat. She go upstairs to check out if Acchan has already sleeping or not.

“Mom?” Acchan said while her mom open her door.

“Acchan, you haven’t sleeping yet?” she walk approach her daughter.

Acchan wakes up and sits. “I can’t sleep, so I’m waiting for you… Where have you been?”

“Young master didn’t want to go to bed. He was busy with his video game. I have to handle him first.” She sits on the bed and get Acchan on her embrace. She slowly strokes Acchan’s hair.

“Mom…” Acchan speaks softly.

“That young Takahashi is not so friendly. He event looks like an arrogant.”

Her mom chuckles. “Acchan, young master is kind too. He just haven’t show it yet. It may caused by the social life, or maybe by his habit. But remember, everyone has their good side.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yes. Deep inside their heart, everyone is a kind person. So is young master. Maybe one day he will show his kindness” her mom said. Acchan just nods and finally fall asleep.
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Post by: cisda83 on March 23, 2013, 10:26:50 PM
Ah... Kai is so horrible...

Breaking people things... just buying new one... without apologize...

Like he has no manner whatsoever

Ah... Atsuko is so cute... and kind

Mrs Maeda is so good at handling Kai...

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 !! <<
Post by: korin48 on March 24, 2013, 01:29:38 AM
Wow! Kai's attitude is more horrible!
I wonder how Kai fall in love with Acchan?
Update soon!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 !! <<
Post by: chichay12 on March 24, 2013, 05:23:40 AM
Wow! Kai's attitude is more horrible!
I wonder how Kai fall in love with Acchan?
Update soon!
Agree ^
This is the first time i hate kai in a fic..XD
I hope acchan can change her attitude...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 !! <<
Post by: Hii_chan on March 24, 2013, 09:56:25 AM
ahh..Kai is so cold and I dont like it
I wonder how Acchan make him change his terrible attitude
waiting for you and thanks for nice update :welcome
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 !! <<
Post by: DC2805 on March 24, 2013, 11:29:08 AM
Young Kai is such a tyrant in his house lol. Hope he'll learn and grow up as a well-mannered guy.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 3 !! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on March 25, 2013, 02:28:41 AM
Wow.. sounds like everyone is starting to hate Kai. LOL
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on March 27, 2013, 06:24:16 AM
hey all thanks for reading the previous chapters. here's the update!!

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CHAPTER  8

~ 2 Years later ~

Acchan go to the nearest school from the house so she can walk to school. It’s different with Kai who study in the elite school and go there by car. But in some other case, now MG work as Mr.Takahashi’s private driver. MG recommend his younger brother, Kine, who just has his driving license to work for family’s driver. Now Kine who drives Kai to school. Acchan grows as a shy girl, while Kai—still a stuborn boy. But in some reason, Kai can be obedient to MG’s wife.

“Done!” Takahashi puts his luggages on the floor.

“Done? Ah, good! Let’s go to sleep then. We have to wake up early tomorrow” his wife said while slowly get on the bed and lay herself there. They just pack up their goods and clothes to get a business trip tomorrow. It’s kind of an important business thing to do and they will spend about four days out of town. Takahashi has a chatting with his wife on bed before they sleep when suddenly there’s a knocking sound from the door.

“Mom..” a voice heard from the door.

“Is that Kai?” Takahashi said in confuse. “It’s 11 pm, what is he doing? He hasn’t sleep yet?”

“I don’t know. But I checked his room an hour ago and he already slept” his wife answers.

“Let me check it” Takahashi said as he move himself down from the bed and walk to the door.
“Kai?! What are you doing?” he said when he open the door and found his only son standing there.

“Dad, can I sleep with you?” Kai said innocently.

“Of course, come here…”Takahashi lift Kai up on his arm and take him on the bed.

“Mommy!!” Kai hugs his mom and lay down on her embrace.

“Oh my dear… Hey, why suddenly you want to sleep with us? Did you watch horror movie?” his mom asking.

“No, I just can’t sleep. I think I want to sleep with you” Kai answered.

Takahashi get on the bed and join them. “Ah, mollycoddle. Okay, Dad will tell you a bed story.”

“Your stories are lame, Dad. I rather hear Mrs. Maeda’s story. She has a lot of great stories.” Kai said ignoring his dad.

“Oh, okay. Fine. So, what if you tell us your story?”

“I don’t have any story..”

“It’s okay, you can tell us about your dreams, what do you aspire of for your future.. anything.”

“Yes, Dad is right. Tell me about your dreams for your future, baby..” Kai’s mom saying and smiles.

“My dreams? For future?” Kai said. The he stares the ceiling and spacing out. Meanwhile, his parents stares at him, waiting for him to answer the questions. For them, Kai is commonly stubborn kid, but it never bothers them because Takahashi knows exactly who is Kai. He was a stubborn kid too when he was child. Like what people said, he owns his father’s head. Even though, Kai is smart and grows handsome. He owns his mother’s dimple and cuteness. They realize maybe Kai being a stubborn kid because of their business. Both of them are the main persons of a big company which is their family’s inheritance.

“I don’t know what’s my dream for my future.” Kai suddenly said.

“Eh? How come? Don’t you wanna be something like maybe an astronaut, president, actor, businessman, doctor, musician, or anything?” Kai’s mom said.

Kai shakes his head and pouts. “I don’t know.”

Takahashi chuckles, he pats his son’s head. “It’s okay, son. You can be like Dad. You know, to hold the company and make it bigger and bigger. Since your uncle hasn’t married and has a child yet, you’re the only heir of the company. I count on you, Kai”

“Yeah, maybe. I don’t have any idea. I’m sleepy…” Kai suddenly hug his mom and close his eyes.

“Ah, this boy..  Hey but promise me you'll be a good man okay?” Takahashi said.

"Promise!" Kai said with eyes closed.

He put his arm around his son and wife and they sleep together.
"We love you son..." Takahashi said while strokes Kai's hair then kiss him on his cheek. Kai still can hear what his Daddy said but he's too weak and sleepy to reply.

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The next day, Kai  wake up. When he open his eyes, he look around and remember that last night he move to his parents’ room and sleep there. But he lays on the bed by himself. Her parents are gone. He look up at the clock, maybe he wakes up late and his parents are downstairs having their breakfast. But then he’s confused, the clock shows that it’s only 5.30 am.

Kai wake up and walk out of the room and go downstair. There, he see Mrs.Maeda and Acchan who is preparing something in the kitchen.

“Where’s mom and dad?” Kai asks.

Mrs.Maeda and Acchan turn around and see Kai still on his pajama standing near the dining table. “Ah, young master. Good morning…” Mrs.Maeda greets him.

“Where’s mom and dad?” Kai repeat what he said.

“Oh, your parents had gone. They have a business trip out of town. That’s why they went early. You were still sleeping when they went out.”

Acchan can see the sadness in Kai’s face. But she really hates Kai. Who likes the stubborn kid? They live in the same residence for three years but they haven’t talk each other. Sometimes it made Acchan angry when Kai acts egoistic. All she want to do is punch him at his nose. But she can’t do anything. Their parents work for him and his family. So Acchan keep doing right and respectful with him.

“I cooked your favorite meals. Let’s get ready for breakfast, young master.” Mrs. Maeda smiles at him.

“I’ll take a bath first” Kai said hopelessly. He walks away from the dining room and go upstairs.

Sometimes, behind his arrogance, Acchan can see the loneliness of being a child of busy parents. Fortunately, Acchan’s mom really understands him and can handle him better than anyone  including Kai’s mom.

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~ someone's POV ~

l wear my clothes in hurry. I don't know how to express my feeling but I'm frightened, sad, and lost. I pack up my bags, I don't even care which clothes that I put in the luggage. Just some clothes and documents. After pack up my bags, I drive to the airport and checking in quickly. Almost my every move is by running.

It's like just now that I got a call from my brother. He ask me if I'm fine and then we talked a lot about the business we hold togeher. Well I'm living by myself since our parents are died long time ago. I continued my study abroad. I'm proud of my brother. He almost like myown parents. He teach me everything so when I finished my study last year, I hold his business in New York while he hold his bigger company in Japan. I help him to make his company getting bigger and powerful.

It's like two hours ago I feel like I am the luckiest brother in the world. But the call from the office in Japan 15 minutes ago was make me feels like I wanna die.

..:: 15 minutes ago ::..

I was in Busan for a business trip. This morning my brother called me and asking about our new company that will be built in South Korea. My brother trust this projwct to me. I went to Busan a week ago from New York, my current residence. It was just early morning. After the call, I took a bath and get my breakfast at the hotel restaurant. Then someone from the office in Japan called me.

"Sir, I'm the chief's assistant. There's a bad news sir. I'm sorry ro tell you this way but we need you immadiately to come back to Japan."

"Wait? What do you mean?"

"Sir, there's an accidents in the highway. Seven cars crushes and 11 peoples are died. We're sorry that our head chief is one of the victim."

I drop my phone in disbelief. I feel like I'm dreaming. I quickly turn on the TV in my hotel room but it seems like the news haven't record it yet.

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"Okay, time's up! Collect your essay to the front desk."  the teacher shouts to the class.

Some student walk to the front desk and put their essay there. But then the teacher can see some students arw still doing their task. The teacher walk to one of them.

"Takahashi, still not finish it yet?"

"Hmm.. No." he answered shortly focusing on his essay..

"What do you draw?" the teacher ask when she saw that he add a drawing on his essay.

"My family. Mom dad, and me." still not looking at the teacher.

"Okay, I'll give you 5 minutes more." The teacher smiles at him. She knowa exactly who this boy is. She knows how pity this boy of being a son of busy parents.

Four minutea later, Kai shouts as his drawing is already finished. "yoshh!! Done!!" he looks at his drawing im satisfy.

'Knock knock'

There's a sound of knocing on the door. The teacher walk to the door and find the school principal standing there.

"Miss, this is Mr. Takahashi Sae. He's about to pick up Takahashi Kai home."

The teacher bows at him. "But the school time is over 2 hours later, Sir."

"Urmm.. We have an urgent situation, Miss. Please let me take Kai first, then maybe the principal will tell you our condition."

"Well, okay. I will call him." the teacher said. Takahashi-kun. Someone's here to meet you!" she call Kai.

The little Kai running towarda her while bringing his drawing. "Mam I finish my drawing. Look!" Kai said, showing his drawing to the teacher. He doesn't notice that two men are looking at him.

"Kai!!" Sae calls him as Kai look at him in surprised expression.

"Uncle Sae!!" Kai running and hug him tight.

"Hey it's been a long time. You grown up so fast!" Sae hugs Kai tight.

Then Kai releases the hug. "Uncle Sae, look at my drawing! Great, huh?"

Sae takes the essay and see it. He can see there is a drawing of 3 persons there and Kai wrote "my parents and I" above the essay. Sae keep his heart strong so he won't cry righy now.

"Yes it's great. The greatest ever!" Sae smiles at him. "Oy, Kai. I wanna take you somewhere, let skip the school!!" Sae whisper in Kai's ears. Pretending that no one including the teacher will know their plan.

Kai grins at him and nods. "okay!!"

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I take Kai from school. We go to a resaurant near the beach. I buy him a bowl of ice cream and he likes it. He tells me everything about his new toys games, and about how annoying girl in the school. I like this little boy very much. He really close to me because I alwaus give him toys and gift even though I know that he's a little stubborn. Looking at him laughing happily makes me sad and hurt. How do I tell him that his parents has died this morning??

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En of the chapter. Sorry if it's too short. Hope you like it. Thank you!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: no-chan on March 27, 2013, 08:08:52 AM
 :mon scare: Noooo!! :mon cry:
poor kai~
but i love your fic,chemicalstar....
please update~ :mon baby:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on March 27, 2013, 10:17:35 AM
Ah... Kai's parents are dead....

What's going to happen to Kai? Poor Poor Kai....

Sae is going to live with Kai in Japan and be the head of the company until Kai's old enough?!

How is the interaction between Kai and the rest of the people in his life after he heard the news of his parents sudden passed away?!

Is he going to be even a cold and stubborn person?

Ah... so sad Kai is actually very lonely and because he has no one with him all the time except servants

So he always causing troubles to seek some attentions both from his parents or some others.

How about MG...? He was supposed to drive them to airport... right?!

Eh... Kai has never talked to Atsuko...

Atsuko wants to hit Kai....

How are they going to be together?!

I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the great update

 :love: :inlove: :wub:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: Hii_chan on March 27, 2013, 11:00:57 AM
so sad  :cry: poor Kai
his parent die when he just a little boy
I guess he will be more stubborn after his parent' death
thank for update
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Post by: chichay12 on March 27, 2013, 01:42:55 PM
kaipapa...kaimama!!
this is so.....  :gyaaah: :pleeease: :fainted:
poor kai!!
 :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on March 27, 2013, 03:45:44 PM
Kaiiiii  :on speedy: 

Nooooo!!! why kai?!  :on blackhole:   :frustrated:

I bet that Kai would lock his heart when he knows.But what will happen to Acchan?

Acchan!! MAKE KAI HAPPY!!!

Sae~  :luvluv1:

Nice update as always!  :on GJ: 

Update soon I want to know what's gonna happen  :mon cry: :mon trudge:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: den_takacchan on March 27, 2013, 04:56:36 PM
that was some bad news  :( i hope kai would be :cry: alright. yeah acchan can mend his broken heart hahah 8)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 4 - 13/3/27!! <<
Post by: Haruko on March 28, 2013, 04:51:38 AM
Aww kai-kun T:T
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Post by: Tiptip on March 28, 2013, 11:02:44 AM
Noooooooooo :depressed: :imdead: :temper: poor little kai  :fainted: why you must killed his parents ..  :on speedy:

Please update this fict as fast as you can  :on freeze:
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Post by: DC2805 on March 31, 2013, 05:12:10 AM
Little Kai will be taken care of by Maeda family and uncle Sae. Hope he will not become more stubborn and ignorant but turn into a gentler person.
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 02, 2013, 03:22:30 AM
@no-chan: thank you. So glad
@cisda83 @DC2805: thank you too.. well, let’s find out what happen ;)
@Hii_chan: hmm yes, probably..
@Chichay12 @Haruko @tiptip: calm down, calm down.. sorry to make you sad
@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS @den_takacchan : Acchan makes him happy? Hmm.. I doubt that. LOL

Thanks for all your comments. Here I made the next chapter, I made it a little faster because to tell the truth, I can’t wait for them to grow up and there will be another things happen in the next chapters. LOL



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CHAPTER  5


~ Kai ~

Being with Uncle Sae is always great. Today he asked me to skit the school and took me out. We had the best ice cream in the cafe near the beach. I bet he will buy me some toys after this.

“I’ll take another topping!” I said as I get off my seat and walk to the a side of the cafe where the topping machine is. I’m about to take another topping for my ice cream but there I see two persons are standing in line. Hmm.. a lot of people like this kind of topping too. While I’m on the line, I see the TV on the wall, there I watch a news while waiting for my turn.

“The 11 victims of the accidents this morning has already evacuated, two of them are kids. It’s surprising that one of the cars that crashed car is Takahashi’s car, Takahashi is the owner of a big telecommunication company in our country. The young businessman was in the car with his wife. Both of them were passed away this morning…”

I’m standing there and there’s no words I can say. The TV shows the situation of the place where the accidents happened. There’s a car that I know exactly that it’s my dad’s car. But I still can’t believe and keep telling myself that it’s just other’s car which has the same type as my dad’s car. But then after the reporter saying my dad’s name, the TV shows his picture on the edge of the screen. That time, I believe that the news is true. All I can feel is just a confused self in disbelieve, I don’t notice that my ice cream bowl has dropped to the floor and it’s broken. The sound of the broken bowl heard all over the cafe.

“Kai, are you okay?” Uncle Sae is coming as he heard the sound of the broken ice cream bowl. Then he slowly realize that I’m watching the news on TV. He doesn’t say anything but shows his sad expression. I can see his lips gesturing like saying “I’m sorry..”. I feel that my tears start to falling down on my cheek. Uncle Sae slowly walking over me and hug me tight. I hug him and bury my face on his shoulder. I’m crying so hard.

I see a lot of people come to the burial service for my parents. I can’t think of anything but my parents. It’s like, just last night that I slept with them, but today I’m being an orphan. Orphan? Yes, I don’t have parents anymore. But in the other side, I’m glad that uncle Sae is always by my side.

Uncle Sae and I go back to my house. This is the first time that I don’t see any happiness in the house. I see no one but maid and some staff from the office. I don’t even see Maeda family. I feel something wrong. Is MG died too? I have to ask Uncle Sae.

When I’m about to get into my room, I ask him who accompanying me there. “Uncle Sae, how about MG?” I ask him. This is the first time I’m speaking after the news from the TV I the café. The whole time all I can do was crying and crying.

“MG? The driver?” he said.

I nod, then he finally tell me that MG passed away too. Perfect, I thought. Than night Uncle Sae sleep with me. The house seems so quiet, I won’t be lonely too. Before I close my eyes, Uncle Sae who sleeps next to me, tell me that he will never leave me. He will take care of me and being my parent. I do want to be with him. The closest relation of my parents is Uncle Sae, and I don’t want to live with others. He said he will stay here at my house as he has to handle the company since my dad has passed away. So it meant that he has to stay in Japan. That relieved me.

But then, he said that if I’m ready enough to move, he will take me to New York. Of course one day I have to take the company and I need a proper education for myself. Uncle Sae recommends me to study there just like him when he was young. For this thing, I don’t really care or think about it. I just said that he has to promise me not to leave.


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~ Sae ~

It’s been a week that I stay in Japan. It’s absolutely a busy week. I have to handle a lot of things, especially the company and my little nephew. Now I’m on my way to a town about 2 or three hours driving. I’m going to Mrs. Maeda’s house. After that tragic day, Mrs. Maeda, her daughter, and MG’s brother, Kine get back to their hometown. Now I’m going to their house to ask for their help. I do want to take care of Kai, but with this kind of business, it’s impossible to handle everything by myself. The maid at house told me that Mrs. Maeda can handle Kai well. So today, I hope they will come back to our house.

“Please come in” Mrs. Maeda greets me when I arrived at her house.

“Thank you…” I get into the house and she pleases me to sit down.  Then, I tell her my condition.

“Mrs. Maeda, I ask your help to handle the household and take care of Kai. I think that it’s only you that can understand him.” I beg her. There, I can see a little girl is peeking our conversation from another room. “I will pay for your daughter’s school too.”

It needs several minutes for her to think, but finally she agree. They back to our house and everything seems like usual again. I trust Kine to drive for Kai, he lives in the flat when I ask Mrs. Maeda and her daughter to stay inside the house so that she can control Kai every time .


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~ Acchan ~

It’s been a week that I skipped school, but then we back to Takahashi’s residence and I continue to go to school. All I knew is mom told me that she will work for Takahashi family again and we will stay there longer. Or maybe for the rest of our life. Now we live inside the house, we used to have a meal together with Uncle Sae and mom. We do that to cheer up and make the young master doesn’t feel lonely.

As usual, he doesn’t change yet and we never talk each other too, even if we live in the same house, we eat at the same table, but that’s how he is. Cold and stubborn. But I don’t take it too much, I don’t really care of what he do, but I do have to take care of him too. Mom told me that we have to take care of him. Yes, sometimes Mom was right. Although it was hurt that I lost my dad, that stubborn boy was the most hurt one. He lost his parents while I’m still have my mom.

In the other side of his cold head, I learn a lot of thing from him. Even though he has no parents, he can still study seriously. Yes, the only thing that changed after that tragic day is he can manage his time. He was the game and comic holic before, but now he can manage himself when is the right time to study or to play the video game. Oh, talking about video game, I bet he has no friends at all. Oh yeah, who wants to be a friend of a cold boy? So as I see him everyday, he entertains himself by playing game and swimming. I like to see him swimming, so fast and energetic. I wish I could swim too.

After these years, I learn something new. Cooking. The maid who works in the house can cook well, just like my mom. I learn how to cook from them. But since what they usually cook is the favorite food of the young master, now I know his every favorite food and how to cook it. Sometimes if my mom and the maid are busy, they used to ask me to make a hot milk for the young master. I knock his door and he please me to come in. But he looks so busy with his computer, he doesn’t even see me when I came into his room and put the milk on the table. And one thing that I hate the most about him is never say thank you. It’s okay that we’ve never talked to each other for years, but at least say thank you when we serve something for him. Urghh.. damn you, young master, if it’s not because of my mom works for you, I will punch you right on your nose until you’re bleeding.

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~ Kai ~

It's my first year in high school. So exciting that I'm actually so famous at school. Do I look handsome? I don't know, but girls are around me, even my seniors too. But I'm not too good in being friends to everyone.  Believe or not, I have busy time everyday. I have to attend some courses after school. Uncle Sae give me full activity so I don't feel lonely or even think about my parents again. I understand that it's all for my gooodness.

I walk lazily out from the school gate, the school is over today. There I see Kine near my car. He quickly open the door when he sees me. I get into the backseat of my car.

"Let's go home. I skip the course today. I want to get some rest." I tell Kine.
"Is it boring?" I suddenly aks him when wenre on our way home.

"Eh? Sorry?" he said surprised, lookibg at me throu the mirror.

"Is it boring to drive me to school and pick me up everyday? You know it's been years you do this job.."

Kine chuckles. "Ne..young master, I really do this job with all of my heart. I don't count it as a job, but as my duty. All the people in the house just like my own family, including you.." he said and smiling.

Ah, family huh? Hmm.. That's good. Talking about family, for the last two years Uncle Sae often leave me home alone. He always go out if town or even go out of Japan for business. I do understand of his business, but it sometime makes me feel that I'm totally alone.

Our car stopped as the traffic light is on. I stare out of the window. I see some girls walking on the roadside, talking and laughing. I remember that I really hate that kind of girls. They're must be annoying. Then the girls walk a bit faster, approaching a girl who is walking in front of them. They quickly grab the girl's hand and pull her.

Oh, that's a bullying. Did I said that they must be some annoying girla? Yeah, look at that. They bully another girl. One of them pull the girl hair and then slaps her hard. Oh I can't believe what I'm seeing. All I think is this world is cruel. The traffic light has turned off, I feel the car slowly goes again. There, I can see the girls leave the bullied girl, and now I can see her face clearly. I think she's crying. Poor her. Hey, is that Maeda??

"Young master, you're home?" Mrs.Maeda asks me in confuse. Yes I used to be at the course place and today is my english course schedule.

"I need some rest so I skip the course.." I answer her when she take my bag.

"Are you sick?" she pins her hand on my forehead. I quickly remove it.

"No. I'm just... tired." I walk to my room and change my clothes.

When I have my lunch by myself, suddenly someone puts a glass or juice on the table.

"Mom said that you're not feeling good. The juice will make you feel better.." that Maeda girl said.

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~ Acchan ~

As usual, he doesn't say thank you . Sick man. I turn around and about to leave but.. he grabs my wrist. I turn around again. He stares at me for a while. I feel so awkward.

"What happened with your lips?" he suddenly said. What? Is that the words that he say for the first time to me?? He talks to me? Oh, I don't even know that this jerk can talk!

"It's a.. It's.." I don't  know what to say and why doea he so sudden asks about my lips. Yes it was bleeding when those crazy girls slapped me after school.

He stand up and touch the scar near my lips. "I fell down at school" I quickly step backward. I really feel awkward when he touch it. I turn around but he holds my wrist so tight.

"Don't be scared of anyone! Just be brave." he take off his hand from me and sit down again. I don't know what he meant but I'm standing there wathing him drinking juice. Does he know about it? Did he saw when I was slapped??

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Okay, that's all guys for this chapter... Leave some comments below :)


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Post by: chichay12 on April 02, 2013, 03:37:24 AM
saving the spot..XD

kyaaa...atlast!!
 :farofflook:
kaixacchan~~
i really cant wait wait what will happen next :hee:
:on gay:
thank you for the update!!

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Post by: korin48 on April 02, 2013, 04:10:39 AM
Kai and Acchan are already high schoolers? Wow! XD
I like that last part  :luvluv1:
Kai is now very kind! He finally can talk Acchan...  :shy1:
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Post by: Haruko on April 02, 2013, 04:37:46 AM
ohh poor acchan, come on takaboy! help her!
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Post by: cisda83 on April 02, 2013, 12:01:26 PM
Ah... poor Kai.... knowing the news from TV like that....

MG is also gone... poor Atsuko and MG's wife

At least he has MG's wife taking care of him...

Atsuko is being bully at school and outside... why?

I thought she attends a normal school... so there is no need for people to be jealous of her

Ah... many years are gone by now... and they are both in high school now I guess

I thought Kai is going to be a popular guy....

He is a rich boy and a clever one too.... and also he is cold... (most would say he is COOL)

Ah... at last Kai talks to Atsuko...

What Kai is going to do to help Atsuko....?

Or Atsuko is going to stand up for herself?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 02, 2013, 01:16:48 PM
Oi, Kai why didn't you save your future GF? x'D

And who in the world dares to bully my baby? You touch her again , you're dead.......*Evil smile*

*takes out a few bombs and a gun* Kai......take those and save Acchan *gives them to Kai*.....

Sae~ *fangirls in a corner*

MG why you die?! *kills author*

Well.....at least Kai isn't only playing :D

Update soon author!! *hugs author and runes behind a couch and eats fish* x3
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Post by: _abby_ on April 02, 2013, 01:58:01 PM
please update soon !!! :kneelbow:
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Post by: Hii_chan on April 02, 2013, 04:51:02 PM
wao :w00t: Kai now seem care about Acchan
damn bullies how dare they bully my Acchan
Kai! go and save your girl :cow: :cow:
thanks for update  :deco:
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Post by: DC2805 on April 03, 2013, 03:23:50 PM
waiting for love to blossom between the 2 ... :)
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Post by: Wmatsui22 on April 04, 2013, 07:34:43 AM
Hi chemicalstar-san !:D

This chapter is so sad...

I hope Kai will not be cold to Acchan :(

Nice update!

Thanks..
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 04, 2013, 11:08:15 AM
Hey all I'm so happy that you love the story I wrote. Can't wait to update it soon but of course I have to do my school stuff too.. So, sorry if it's going to be a bit late.

REPLY TIME!!!!

@Chichay12 : hey hey.. who said that it's gonna be KaiAcchan???
@correnereyes: well it's only a beginning :)
@Haruko: not now, taka is too cold ;)
@cisda83 : yeah, Kai is always being awesome. You'll find out then..
@K-Pop-J: Sae... you'll find something shocking about Sae later!!
@_abby_ : yes I will..
@Hii_chan: later maybe ;)
@DC2805: Soon, but not that soon too. LOL
@WMatsui22: I hope so, let's see...

Be patient for the next chapters guys, keep reading ;)

ATSUMINA FOREVER!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 6 - 13/04/12 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on April 13, 2013, 10:05:47 AM
Hello....... Ah, it’s been so long. Sorry…


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CHAPTER  6

Acchan wakes up early morning. She finds her mom has a bad fever, so Acchan tells her to take a rest and Acchan will do all her mom's duty in the morning. Acchan quickly prepares the breakfast while aunt Nanny, another maid, makes up the house. Luckily, Acchan knows exactly what kind of breakfast that her young master likes, how much she have to add sugar or salt, and everything. Just like her mom & Nanny always teach her about to cook their young master's favorite foods. After the breakfast is ready, Nanny asks Acchan to give the young master his uniform. At first she's worried if she can go to the young master's room or not, considering that he has a cold head and high temper… plus about how did he knows that Acchan had been bullied. But as this duty is what her mom always do and now she has to substitute her, so Acchan take it and walk upstairs to Kai's room.

Se knocks the door. "Excuse me...". The door is unlocked. Acchan tries to knock the door again.
No answer. As what her mom said that she just go inside the room, she makes herself to open the door. She peeks in but no one's there. "Excuse me, young master? I bring your school uniform..." Acchan said.

No answer, but then Acchan can hear the sound of shower from the bathroom. "He must be having a shower.." she thought.

She comes in and about to put the uniform on the hangers. She can see a lot of books are scattered around on the table and floor. She shakes his head seeing this messy room. But in the other side, she takes a sympathy to her master that he might be studied hard last night. She picks up the books and pile them up on the table by classify it by each subject, then she leaves.

When Acchan comes back to the dining room, she meets Sae who just comes out from his room.

“Good morning..” Acchan greets him.

“Ah, Acchan. Good morning…” Sae replies the greeting, but he looks at Acchan with a confuse look. How did Acchan comes out from Kai’s room this morning. Sae about to ask it but he change the question, “Kai has awake?”

Acchan nods, “Uhn. I think he’s taking a bath. I just bring him his uniform.”

“Oh, okay…” Sae nods, still confused that usually the one who prepares Kai’s uniform and anything is Mrs.Maeda. “Thank you..”

“You’re welcome.. And, by the way, the breakfast is ready. I’m sorry we can't join to have breakfast together. Mom has a bad fever this morning. So I guess I will have my breakfast with Mom in our room.”

“Mrs. Maeda is sick?” Sae looks so surprised. Acchan nods in sad expression. “Souka… so that’s why Acchan is the one who prepares Kai’s uniform” Sae thought.
“I’ll call doctor to examine her today, don’t worry.”

Acchan takes breakfast for her mom and her. She feeds her mom to help her to eat because her mom seems like so weak.

“Acchan, would you give me some favor?” her mom said.

“Uhm… of course, mom. What do you need me to do?” she smiles at her mom.

“Since I’m not able to do a lot of things, please help me to take care of young master.”

“What? That cold head? No way…“ she thought. But of course she doesn’t tell it to her mom. She just smiles and nods.

“It’s Tuesday, he always do some exercise in the afternoon. Prepare him his warm bath tub before he finish exercising, and don’t forget to make him a glass of milk before he sleeps. Okay?”

“Okay, mom. Just count it on me. I’ll take care of YOUR DEAREST SON” Acchan said jokingly. “Just get some rest and get well soon.”

Her mom chuckles. “You’re jealous of him, aren’t you?”
“Acchan, I know he’s not that kind of friendly person. But still, look at him… if it’s not us who take care of him, who else? You sure have to be glad still having me to take care of you.”

Acchan looking down, realizing something that what her mom said was actually right. “Okay, mom. I understand. Oh, it’s time to go now or I‘ll be late” she looks at the clock which shows that it’s time for her to go to school. “And, Uncle Sae said that he will call a doctor to come.”

“Okay. Take care, honey..” her mom kiss her forehead. Then Acchan leave her mom and about to go to school.

“YOU’LL LEAVE AGAIN??!!” suddenly Acchan heard someone’s shouting. Who else? It’s her young master, Takahashi Kai who shouting this morning. Acchan stops her steps and listening to the conversation of Kai and Sae from the living room while the two is in the dining room.

“KAI! Please understand my position now!” Sae shouts back at Kai. “I have a big responsibilities of our family business, and if it’s not me who handle it, who else, Kai? YOU?” now Sae get a little angry.

Deep inside his heart, Kai does understand about this matter. But he can’t hold the loneliness in his life. He feels like he live for nothing and no one around him. He doesn’t reply back. He just turns his face to other side, still with disappointed expression.

“I suggest you to make friends with others, Kai” Sae said. “I never see you with a friend, even with a girl.”

“It’s not your business!” Kai said sharply.

“Kai, the one who can change your life is your own self. Make friends with other, I guarantee that your life will be different. At least, you won’t feel lonely anymore.”

Kai still can’t control his emotion. He leaves Sae in the kitchen and when he’s about to enter the living room, he meets Acchan. He stops for a moment when he saw her.
“Friend?” Kai thought. “Yes, maybe Uncle Sae was right. I never have any friends at all even though I’m quite popular at school. And that girl, she lives here for years and I feel like I’ve never been noticing her at all. Am I that rude? Am I that bad?”

Looking at Kai’s face which is looks like a monster, Acchan just look down. “Good morning” she said in a low voice. Kai doesn’t reply the greeting, he just walk away over her, get his bag and go to the front door to go to school. Acchan turns around and look at him when he walks away.

“Stone head!” she thought and gives him an evil look.

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Kai really had a bad mood today. He’s so depressed with the situation he had right now. He doesn’t know why but there’s a little voice in his heart to go to the salon to refresh himself—or to make another trouble. He skip the course he has to do today. Kai tell Kine to come back home, so he can go by the taxi alone.

The hairdresser greets him when he arrived at his favorite male salon. Kai takes a seat and pick a magazine on the table. He reads it and suddenly deciding something when he looks at a western blonde guy picture on the magazine. He shows the page that he open then give it to the hairdresser.

“Make mine like him!”

The hairdresser takes the magazine and takes a look at the picture. He seems so surprised as he looks at the picture. “Are you serious??”  he ask Kai.

Kai nods. “Uhn. Just do it!”

The hairdresser starts to do his job to Kai’s hair. After about one hour doing his job, he ask Kai to wait for several minutes then he leaves Kai.

“Nice colour, dude!” suddenly a boy said. Kai turn to his right side, there’s a boy who just cut his hair besides him. The boy looks like the same age as him.

“Of course” Kai answer shortly “and it’s better than yours.”

The boy laughs. “Funny. Hey, I’m Yuu, by the way.” He offers his hand to Kai. “I’m new in this town.”

Kai ignores him. He seems don’t really care about him. Yuu, who still giving his hand to Kai, seems so disappointed and pull his hand again.

“Looks like he’s not really friendly..” Yuu thought.

The hairdresser comes back and finishes his job on Kai’s hair. At the moment, Kai remember of what his uncle said. That he has to make some friends with other. When his hair is finished, Kai finally decide to walk over Yuu.

“I’m Kai, and I know a good restaurant around here” Kai smiles at Yuu.

Yuu chuckles. “Let’s go, then!”

The two go to the restaurant nearby which has  delicious foods. They have a long chat there. Especially Yuu is the one who always asking Kai everything since he’s new in this town.

“I was having a long hair. But my new school’s headmaster told me that long hair is not allowed for the students. Such a strict school here!” Yuu starts to talk.

“Where’s your new school by the way?”

“Soc.. soc.. soccer..ah, I forgot the school name. Socr..”Yuu tries to remember the school name, he suddenly look at Kai’s uniform and saw the logo. “Socrates Academy?” Yuu widened his eyes. “Hey, we’re in the same school!!”

Kai so surprised, in the other side he feels happy that Yuu is going to be in the same school as him. So it means that he will have a friend at school. “Wow, that’s quite good!!” Kai smiles.

“WAIT!! The school doesn’t allow me to have a long hair, but.. you.. you make your hair blonde??!!!” Yuu frowned while pointing his finger to Kai’s ‘new’ hair.

“Yeah. Nothing’s wrong,” Kai answer it calmly. “The school just tells that we must have a short hair. They don’t even said what colour should be.”

In a short time, the two boys can be friends so fast. It’s actually because of Yuu is very attractive and always take initiative to talk first. He asks Kai a lot of things about the school, the town, and everything. Fortunately, Kai enjoys his talk with Yuu and he thinks that Yuu’s a good friend for him.

Kai quickly go home and take some exercise in the fitness room. Working out for about one hour makes him quite sweaty. He wipes the sweat by the towel while he walks to his room and bout to take a bath. He takes off his shirt, leaves his sweaty body only in his shorts. He walks to the side of his room where the window is. The sky start turns into dark, he remembers that he has a lot of homework he has to do this evening. He takes a look at the table near the windows, there are some books that piled up neatly. Kai takes one of the book and examine the pile.

“How could Nanny knows how to pile up my books by its subject? I can’t believe a maid can understand the school subject” he thought. Then Kai walk to the bathroom but he hears someone inside because there’s a sound of water. He enters the bathroom but it’s full of fumes so he can’t see clearly.

“AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!” a girl shouts so loud just when Kai can see her clearly while they’re standing close enough. She’s actually surprised as Kai just appears there in sudden. At first Acchan can’t recognize him as he has new hair colour now. Acchan quickly cover her eyes by her hands when she notices that the guy is Kai, and he is only in his shorts, which is actually shows his whole body clearly.

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE??!!!”  Kai shouts, a little angry and surprised too. Acchan doesn’t answer, she just close her face covered by her hands. Noticing it, Kai realized that he’s almost naked. He quickly grabs the curtain to cover his body.

“Okay, you can open your eyes now. I’m saved” Kai said, with his cheeck a little bit red. “WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE??!!” he starts to shout again.

“I-I’m so sorry” Acchan said, not even looking at his face. “Mom ask me to prepare your hot tub, that’s it. Sorry to make you startled.” Acchan then walk away still in head looking down, while Kai just standing behind the curtain.

“Oh my GOD. I still can’t believe that I saw that jerk almost naked” Acchan thought. She slaps her own cheeks when she thinks about her young master’s perfect body. “What am I thinking??!! JERK!!”

That evening, as Mrs. Maeda is still sick, Acchan’s having her dinner inside her room with her mom. It makes Kai, for the n time, having a dinner by himself again. Along the evening, Acchan can see her young master doing his homework so hard. But then she saw him walk to the backyard. Slowly Acchan peeks in, Kai is sitting on the edge of the pool. His foot s inside the water. Acchan stay behind the curtain of the window which is facing the pool. She can see his face clearly. Looks like Kai thinking so deep of something.

Acchan can see the sadness in his eyes. So many time he sigh and suddenly… Acchan can see tear drops rolling down his cheeks.

“He’s crying?” Acchan thought. There, Acchan can feel the sadness and the loneliness in her subborn young master. But then acchan remember what her mom said that Kai is actually strong for a boy that is left alone with no parents. Acchan realize that she’s luckier than Kai for having a great mom. However, seeing Kai crying like this, makes Acchan remember about her father. Without noticing it, tear drops rolling in her cheek while she watching Kai from behind the curtain.

Acchan quickly wipe her tears by her thumbs. Then she walk towards the swimming pool. “I don’t have to let him sad like this” Acchan thought.

“Excuse me…” Acchan starts to speak. “Young master, it’s already late of night. You better go to sleep…” she said in soft voice.

Kai turns his head around.He see Acchan standing near the door. It’s usd to be Mrs. Maeda who usually warns him to go to bed. “How’s Mrs. Maeda?” Kai suddenly asking.

“Mom is getting better, the doctor came to examine her this afternoon. Don’t worry.” Acchan said. “I hope tomorrow morning she can cook for you again.”

Kai doesn’t give any respond again. He just having a cold head, so Acchan decides to leaves him.

“M-Ma-Maeda..!” Kai call her again just when Acchan is about to go.

Acchan stops and turns around, facing her young master again. “Yes?”

Kai stares at her for a while, thinking the proper words to say.
“C-c-can I call you.. Atsuko..??” Kai said trembling.

“Eh?”

“….”

“Uhn, sure” Acchan said, smiling at him.

Kai nods a little, “At-Atsuko..”

“Yes?” still in confuse.

Kai look away. “Nothing. Just go to sleep ahead. I want to stay here a little longer.” He turns around, makes Acchan only facing his back.

“Good night, then” Acchan slowly leaves him and go inside the house, walking slowly to her room where her mom is sleeping. While walking to the room, she keeps thinking what happened to her stubborn young master. About the tears that feel down from his eyes, about the reason why did he want to call her Atsuko than her last name.

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How's that? ;)
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Post by: Sydney W on April 13, 2013, 11:08:17 AM
A good move by Kai to start up a conversation with Atsuko. Finally, Kai's open his heart to make new friends.
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Post by: korin48 on April 13, 2013, 12:06:13 PM
Wow! You great boy, Kai! You finally start conversation with Acchan!  :ding:
I love that bathroom scene  XD Acchan saw Kai half-naked  :luvluv2:
Please update soon!  :nya:
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Post by: den_takacchan on April 13, 2013, 12:29:48 PM
:twothumbs they are progressing .!! XD kai is so cute asking to call her atsuko. ! XD. thx for the update
!
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Post by: 7sam14 on April 13, 2013, 12:39:41 PM
Yay!!! Kai finally start talking to Atsuko!!!

Kai now is starting to make Friends!!

I'll be waiting for another update!!!
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Post by: cisda83 on April 13, 2013, 03:11:31 PM
AH.. Kai is so lonely...

At least now he has made a friend in Yuu...

But what's going to happen in school tomorrow...?

Eh... Kai is willing to call Atsuko by her given name...

Why?

Is he growing conscience towards others?

Can't wait to see how the story going to develop

Thank you for the lovely update

 :heart: :love: :inlove: :wub:
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Post by: Haruko on April 14, 2013, 05:42:30 PM
Well step by step right kai?... yeah yuu is in town!! :B.. i prefer kai with dark hair...
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Post by: _abby_ on April 16, 2013, 12:01:44 PM
At last Kai make a move to get closer to atsuko   :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

Nice Chapter  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Please Update soon   :kneelbow:
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 20, 2013, 11:44:37 AM
Hey y'all... Thanks for reading my fic and leavea comment below.  Sorry it's been so long... So here's the continuation.

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CHAPTER  7



Kai and Yuu go to a bookstore after school. Kai want to buy a new manga while Yuu accompanies him. When they walk to the manga bookshelf, there are three girls there. The girls looking at them with very bright eyes. “Kakkooii!!” a girl whispering to another, though Kai and Yuu can hear what she said.

Kai seems like doesn’t really care of the girls, he starts to searching for manga there. In other side, Yuu give them his best smile to attract them. The girls starts to screaming when Yuu say Hello to them. Kai chuckles as he watches that scene. Suddenly one of the girl approaches Yuu and bravely say, “Ano… we will go to the movie tonight. There’s a new movie there and we have two more tickets if you would like to” the girl said.

“Eh? A new movie? Wow, sounds interesting” Yuu smiles happily.

Hearing what his friend said, Kai quickly approach them. “We had another plan for tonight. You can ask other guys to go with…” Kai stops talking while he recognizes the girls’ faces. “I think I ever saw there girls” he thought, buy he can't remember where is it. So, he grabs Yuu’s hand and leave the girls. They go to the cashier to pay the mangas and then leave the bookstore.

“Are you crazy? You will accept stranger’s offer to watch movie together?” Kai ask him, frowning.

“HAHAHA. Calm down, Kai. I do like girls. But I’m not that kind of guy..”

“You flirted every girl at school on your first day, how can I believe it?”

Yuu laugh so hard. “You’re jealous, Kai? Hey, man… As what I saw today, the girls at school not only adore me, but also you. You’re the one who never notice them.”

“Whatever” Kai replies sharply, walk ahead. "I'm not interested."

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“Mom, my friend invited me to go to the movie, she will treat me to celebrate her birthday. Can I go there?” Acchan ask her mom when they’re preparing the dinner.

“When? Tonight?” he mom asking.

“Yes, at 7pm. Please??” Acchan said, showing her puppy eyes.   

“Hmm.. okay” her mom said smiling.

At the moment, Kai enters the dining room, getting ready for the dinner. Sae is coming too. They have their dinner together. Sae tells them about his job in New York, and he’s about to go there again. It really makes Kai dizzy.

After dinner, Acchan quickly go to her room and change her clothes, getting ready to go out with her friends. When she’s ready, she looks for her mom to tell her that she’s about to go. She checks the kitchen and all around the house but she can’t find her mom. Acchan looks at the clock, it’s 18.50. Ten minutes to go, but she can’t find her mom. When she turns around, she’s a little surprised as she bumps someone and (once again) seeing Kai suddenly standing behind her.

“Ah I’m sorry!” Acchan bows at him.

Kai doesn’t answer. It makes Acchan feels uneasy. “Ano.. young master, do you see my mom?” Acchan asks him.

“She just went out to the store with Nanny.” Kai asnwers shortly, he walks to the fridge and take a bottle of water. “Atsuko, make me and Uncle Sae coffee. Now.” Then Kai leaves her and go to the living room.

Acchan looks at the clock again and so worried that the movie will be started in only several minutes. Although the movie is not far from the house, but still. It’s only 7 minutes left. What she can do, she has to make the coffee. After a while, Acchan comes to the living room with two cups of coffee. Kai take the cup and drink it, Acchan walk away from the living room.

“WHAT IS THIS?! Can you make a proper coffee?” Kai shouts, a little angry. It makes Acchan turns back and walks towards them again.

“Nee Kai, don’t talk to a woman like that” Sae said, widened his eyes at Kai.

“I’m sorry, master. It’s my fault” Acchan said.

“Add more coffee. It’s too sweet!!” Kai put the cup on the table.

Acchan quickly takes the cup but suddenly Sae takes it first. He takes the cup and drink Kai’s coffee.
“Hmm… it’s great, Kai. I don’t understand how can you say it’s bad.”

Acchan feels a bit relieved. She can see that Sae is not lying. Acchan is good in making any kind of drink.

“It’s okay, Acchan. I’ll drink it, you can go to make another one for this man” Sae smiles and pats Kai’s head.

“Haik..” Acchan leaves them in the living room and go to the kitchen to make another coffee. Her blood feels like boiling up.
“What does he want? Bastard!” Acchan thought. “If it’s not because of my Mom works for you, I could just pour the coffee into your face!”
Acchan look at the clock, it’s 7.00 already.” Oh, God. I’m late. Really late.” She sigh and despondently makes another cup of coffee for Kai. “Damn that crazy boy ruins my life!” she thought.

Suddenly her cellphone is ringging. Acchan grab it and see her friend's bame on the screen.
"Moshi  moshi.."

"Acchan! Where are you?"

"Ahh..ano.. I'm still at home, sorry"

"What?! Oh, God, Acchan.. The movie is about to begin. "

Acchan look at the clock, it's kinda impossible for her to go even if it's late.

"Errm.. Sorry I think I can't go. I'm really sorry.."

"*sigh. It's okay.. Maybe tomorrow I'll treat you some cakes, okay?"

"Ah, thank you.."

"Okay, Acchan. The movie is about to begin, we're getting in."

"Okay, have a good time.."

Click. Acchan put her phone on her pocket. She takes the coffee to the living room where Kai and Sae are.

“What is this?” Kai asks harshly.

“Just open it!” Sae grins at him.

Kai frowns, but he open the envelope that Sae gave to him. He tears the envelope and take out a paper inside it.

“A ticket,” he thought when he read the paper. “New York?” Kai said in confuse.

Sae smiles at him. “Yes. I call your school headmaster and he told me that your holiday is coming soon. I want you to have fun in New York for several days.”

“Hmm.. Interesting” Kai said shortly.

“So, you’re going?” Sae tries to ensure Kai’s answer.

Kai nods without saying anything but leaves him. “Make it fun!” he said.

That night, Acchan spent her time at home. She told her mom that her friend canceled their plan to go to the movie. A little lie, but it's impossible  if she said that her youngmaster made her late to go out.

It's currently 12.30 in the midnight when Acchan wake up and feels thirsty. She grab her cellphone that currently on the side of her pillow. A new message. It's 2 hours ago.

--- "Acchan. Tonight was disaster. We met our seniors, the annoying girls that always jealous of you. We met them after the movie was ended. We didn't know that we watched the movie in the same theater. I glad you didn't come with us, because if they see you here, oh.. We're in trouble. God, I wonder why do they always jealous of you. It's not your faults if there's a lot of senpai likes you. They're such a bitch.." ---

Acchan sigh after reading the message. Somehow she fells relieved that she didn't go to the movie. Is this coincidence or not, but she feels like her youngmaster just saved her. Acchan get out of the bed and walk to the kitchen. She can hear the sound of TV, but the light is off. It's all dark in the room. When she check it, there she find her youngmaster sitting on the couch watching movie.

"You're not sleeping yet?" Acchan asks him.

Kai look at her. "I can't sleep." he pouts. "You added too much coffee. Look, I'm awake now. It's your fault."

"WHAT??!!" Acchan thought. "At first he said that the coffee was too sweet, no he said it's too much coffee and he blame it on me?! SICK!!"

"Oh, I-I'm sorry" that's all Acchan finally says. Acchan walks towards him and the sit on the couch, right beside him.

At first Kai feels confused what Acchan does as she suddenly sitting beside him. But kai doesn't say anything. He keep focus on the movie even he feels uneasy with Acchan too close with him. A few minutes passed, Kai finally break the silence.

"What are you doing here?"

Acchan turn her head facing him. "Eh? I'm.. watching the movie."

"Ck. I know that."
Silence again.

"It's my fault, right? I'll accompany you to watch TV". Acchan face the TV again, just  when Kai look at her.

For several minutes later, they can only hear the TV and the clock's sound. Suddenly Kai take the remote and turn off the TV.

"I'm sleepy." he said, lying. He get up and slowly walk away.

Once again, Acchan feels confused by his behavior, just a while ago he said he can't sleep, now suddenly he says that he's sleepy. That's weird. But Acchan get up from the couch and walk behind him. When Kai is about to climb the stairs, Acchan stops her step.

"Good night.." Acchan's voice suddenly makes him stop walking. He turns around and look at Acchan. He nods without saying anything then walk upstairs.

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~ Kai ~

Today I woke up late. Super late. It's my fault, I heard Mrs.Maeda woke me up and tell me to take a bath. But when she left, I laid back on the bed. I felt damn sleepy this morning. I knew it was exactly because of that caffeine, I couldn't sleep last night. I tried to close my eyes but I was still awake until 3AM.

"Yo, iceman!! You're almost coming late today!" someone calls me when I pass the school park. It's Yuu, with some boys beside him smiling at me.

I walk towards them, "You're not going to the class?"

"The teacher is out of town, we have a free time for next 2 hours. Great, huh?" Yuu smirks.

"Souka.."

"You're late in the right time, you're so lucky, Takahashi" a boy near him smirks at me. I often see him at school, but I don't know his name.

"How do you know my name?" I ask him.

He laugh, "Oh god, what happened with you, man! Who doesn't know this Takahashi Kai. A smart, handsome and cool boy who never talk to anyone.." he pats my shoulder. "I'm Shinoda. Mario.. " he offer his hand. I guess he's not a bad boy. I shake his hand.

"I'm Matsui, Jurina." another boy shake my hand.

"Matsui?!" I said. Fells like I ever heard that name. It's my dad's colleague. As I remember, he's general of police departement. The one that my dad asked for helping me when I was kidnapped.

"Right, dude. My dad know your family." he said. I smiles at them shortly. What is this? New friend? Ah, at least they're looks like classy boys.

Day by day, they slowly become my close friend. Even though I have busy days, we used to hang out together at night, or playing basketball together.

Holiday will be started two days later. I start to pack by bags. Mrs. Maeda and Atsuko help me to pack my luggage. The day holiday starts, I go to New York by myself, Sae pick me up at the airport. We go to his apartment. It's a great apartment for a man who lives by himself.

Sae takes me to his office, he shows me how the business going, introduces mw to all the staff, and as I requested before, he takes me to so many places I've never been. It's a fantastic holiday in New York.

One day, I want to go out by myself. Sae ask his drier to accompany anywhere I wanna go. I check my bag but I can't find my camera. I ask the driver to bring me to the office, because I think I left it in Sae's office yesterday.

"Good afternoon, Mr. Takahashi" a woman greets me when I enter the office.

"Is my Uncle here?" I ask her.

"Yes, he just get back, he's in his office right now."

I nods and leave her. I walk to Uncle Sae's office. Before I get on my way, I see him in the corridor with a man. When I wanna call him, I stopped. I see him holding the man's hand. It's weird. He takes the man into his office room.

I slowly follow them and when I'm in front of the room, I peek in from the window and.... I drop my jaw.

Uncle Sae is kissing the man. I close my eyes for a while and open up again. It's not a dream. Uncle Sae is a gay.
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Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 20, 2013, 12:04:27 PM
Gay......Sae's...........gay................

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Bwhahahahahaha omg xD

And who's that 'guy' Sayaka? xDDD

Yey! Seeing this made me happy actually, thought I was shocked xD

*takes out a few bombs* Everyone...let's go and kill those girls who are jealous of our Acchan and tries to hurt her...

Yesh.....And also if  anyone finds her call me xD

Nice update x)

Update soon :D
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Post by: korin48 on April 20, 2013, 12:20:06 PM
Thanks for your update!  :farofflook:

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Maji de!?!??! Sae is gay!?  :mon spit:  Who is that 'man'? Sayaka?  :cool2:
Those girls are bad!!  :scolding:
Yuu is flirting with girls eh...   :bigdeal:
And please update soon!  :kneelbow:
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Post by: _abby_ on April 20, 2013, 12:54:59 PM
Sae is a ....... GAY :OMG:

Nice chapter

Thanks for update.
  :thumbup
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Post by: Tiptip on April 20, 2013, 01:12:10 PM
Sae ??? :o Bromance ?? :cool2:
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Post by: Sydney W on April 20, 2013, 02:11:53 PM
Kai do love Atsuko. He even helping her by preventing Atsuko to watch the movie as the bully girls will be going to cinema too. Aww, Kai don't be so iceberg man !
You need Atsuko to break the iceberg. ^_^
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Post by: 7sam14 on April 20, 2013, 03:02:56 PM
Sae................um................
HE'S GAY?????????!!!!!... :? :? :?  :shock: :shock:
hoping the man is Sayaka....

Typical for Yuu to flirt with girls....

those girls.... :on kimbo: :on kimbo:
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Post by: momondmozide on April 21, 2013, 03:53:46 AM
LOL.
NICE UPDATE :)
CANT WAIT FOR ATSUMINA LOVEY DOVEY :P

LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER  :twothumbs
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Post by: cisda83 on April 21, 2013, 10:33:15 AM
Ah... Kai is getting more and more friends...

Poor Atsuko being bullied a bit by Kai by making her remaking his coffee...   :smhid

Hahaha... He could not sleep because of it...  :lol:

Great news there... for Atsuko not being there... in the movie theatre... avoided getting bullied...

Ah... it was because she was popular by the guys that she got bullied...

Eh... Sae was gay... that was why he always needed to go back to US... he had a partner there...

That kind of relationship was not being looked well in Japan I think... in comparison to US...

What is Kai going to do with this revelation...?

What's going to happen to Atsuko...?

Who's going to help Atsuko from being bullied?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:



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Post by: ptrd3009 on April 21, 2013, 11:09:00 AM
sae is gay.................
and that guy is sayaka right?  XD
i really like little kai yuu mario jurina and acchan
it's so cute can't wait for atsumina and other pairs :love:
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 21, 2013, 01:56:14 PM
Thanks all for the comments.. I'm glad that you're still reading this fic.

I already finish the next chapter and about to post it tomorrow, after it hits 2500views I guess.. :-D

and about Sae's partner, you guys should've known who is he. LOL

And be patient for you who is waiting for atsumina moment. I'll make it long.. HAHAHAHA

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU
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Post by: chichay12 on April 21, 2013, 02:51:57 PM
I already finish the next chapter and about to post it tomorrow, after it hits 2500views I guess.. :-D
And be patient for you who is waiting for atsumina moment. I'll make it long.. HAHAHAHA

kyaaaa....
i cant wait!!!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
ATSUMINA~~
i will wait....but pls..not for to long??XD
thank you for the update chem-san!!!
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Post by: DC2805 on April 21, 2013, 03:26:51 PM
Uncle Sae's secret...woohoo..

Happy to see more characters added in...yuu, mario and jurina ...all the fine young ikemen  :drool:
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Post by: cyg_girl on April 22, 2013, 01:05:06 AM
Kai and Acchan are getting closer! Yeah! More kaiacchan moments please! And finally the ikemens have arrived! Way to go!
Please update again soon! >.<
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 22, 2013, 04:16:24 AM
Hello!!! It hits more than 2500 views and I’m so happy  :twothumbs. So as I promised, here’s the new chapter.
I’m sorry if this chapter will make you hate me but this is the storyline I’ve planned. Arigato  :on slopkiss:

It made me laugh that all of you expected Sae’s partner is Sayaka. Just find out below. Thanks 


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CHAPTER  8



It’s already late of night. Kai just get back from his glorious day hang around New York. The moment when he saw Sae kissing a guy, Kai canceled his plan to take the camera and decided to go without it. Now with such a tired body, Kai gets in the elevator the walk to Sae’s apartment. He enters the key code which Sae gave him when he was arrived in New York several days ago. When he gets in the apartment, the light is on. Sae is home.

“Okaeri, travelman!” Sae greets him.

“Ah, you’re home.”

“Have you had dinner?”

Kai nods. “Yeah, I had my dinner in Japanese restaurant near here.”

“Okay, go get a shower. I have something to talk with you.”

Kai get into his room and get in the shower. Warm water pours on his tough body, makes all his tiredness fade away. After dry himself and wear his clothes, he goes to the balcony where Sae is sitting on the chair facing the city light panorama.

“Where’s mine?” Kai sit down on a chair beside Sae. He sees his uncle is drinking coffee and enjoying the night view.

“Eh? Make it by yourself!” Sae answer it. “You’re expecting Maeda to be here and make you coffee? Sorry dude, no Maeda here” Sae chuckles.

Kai pouts. “I wonder why you don’t hire a maid to work here.”

“I’m not like you, young man. I live here by myself. I can do it by myself. Not like you, living alone with a bunch of maids” Sae pinch Kai’s nose. “Now go, make your coffee. It’s on the kitchen shelves.”

Minutes later…

“Oi, Kai! Have you done yet?” Sae shouts from the balcony. He laughs as Kai hasn’t come back yet from the kitchen making his own coffee.

“Wait a minute. You’re fussy, Uncle Sae.” Kai said loudly. Then he comes to the balcony and sits on the chair, bringing his coffee.

Sae laughs at him. “Yoshh, finally!! Your first coffee, huh?”

“Shut up. It’s more delicious that anyone else ever made.” Kai said, then he try to drink it. Sprout!!!! He sprout out his own coffee. “GOSHH!!! Horrible!!”

Sae laughs out loud. “Dude, you’re really mess up!!”

“Damn. Where did you buy this coffee! It has horrible taste..”

“Oh, you blame the coffee. Ck..Okay, just forget about it. I have something to tell you”

“Just tell me now…”

“Listen, Kai. At first I’m so sorry that all these years, even though I’m living with you in Japan, I do realize that I often went away to do the business things. The main point that I bring you here to New York is that so you can look around how beautiful is this town. And, I hope… you can stay here with me.”

“Eh? You what..??”

“I ask you to stay here in New York with me, Kai. I looked for a good high school for you… Do you agree?”

“I LIVE HERE?” Kai thought. “But… NO. I won’t live here with a gay. I could be a gay too if I stay here.” Then Kai imagine that he becomes a gay, flirting with another boy. “Ewwhh!!” he suddenly says.

“What?”

“Eh?”

“You, suddenly say ewwwhh… ” Sae asks in confuse.

“Ah, nothing..” Kai lies. “I’ll think about it later… Anything else?”

“Yeah, have you got friends?”

Kai nods. “Yeah, a lot.”

“A lot? Wow. That was fast! Who are they?”

“Oshima Yuu, Shinoda Mario, and Matsui Jurina.”

“All boys?” Sae frowns.

“Uhn. Eh? NO. It’s not like that… Urmm.. They’re just my close friends, you know, just like a group of a great guys at school. All girls adore us.” Kai said confidently.

“Really?? Sugooii ne..” Sae widened his eyes. “Told ya! You have to open your mind to others, you enjoy it, right?”

“Uhn.. feels better” Kai smiles.

“Yokata…”

The next day, Kai woke up so late. It’s already 11 AM, he get up from the bed. He come out from his room and find Sae is wearing his shoes.

“Ohayou” Sae greets him.

“Ohayou..” another voice heard. Kai look around and find a man walk in from the kitchen. The man he saw yesterday. Kai’s shocked.

“Oh, Kai.. Let me introduce my friend. He’s Akimoto Sayaka. He’s Japanese too” Sae smiles at him.

“Hey, Takahashi junior” Sayaka greets him. “You can call me Sayaka. You’re Kai, right?”

“Uhn..” Kai just nods without saying anything. He looks at Sae “You friend?”

“Yeah, we’ve been friends for years. Since we were in college. Sayaka got scholarship to study in New York. He’s great, right?”

“Oh, souka..” Kai can’t say anything. “For years? Oh my God..” he thought. Then Kai go to his room again to take a shower, but Sae call him again.

“Kai!” the Kai turns around. “I got a message from Kine this morning. He said that Mrs. Maeda was fainted yesterday. She suddenly lost her conscious.”

“EH?? Majide??” Kai feels more shocked by this news.

“Don’t worry. She’s already hospitalized. I asked some staff to manage her hospital administration.”

“Oh.. She often got sick lately. I wonder what disease infected her” Kai said, a little sad.

“Don’t be startled, okay!” Sae said. “She got cancer. Lymph cancer.”

“WHAT?? How come??” Kai widened his eyes.

“I said don’t be startled” Sae calmly said.

“But that was shocking!!” Kai a little shouting.

Sae sighs. “Hmm.. Yeah, I’m shocked too. But, this kind of cancer can infect anyone with no warn before. Just…. Let’s pray she’s gonna be okay.”


~ KAI ~

I take off my clothes. I turn on the shower and let the warm water fall on my skin. I think about what Sae said last night, about his offer to take me live in New York. Well, New York is great. But, how can I live with a guy couple? I don’t wanna be a gay too. NO NO NO. I’m still a normal man. I like girls. Besides, now I have friends in Japan. It’s okay if I’m live by myself in Japan, even if Sae never go back to Japan.

But how to tell him about it? I can’t tell him that I don’t wanna be with him because of he’s a gay! No, I have to find another reason to get me out of this place before he turn me into a gay. What what what… Holiday s still a week left, but I have to go back to Japan. Hmm.. think Kai, think!! Ah, I know!

After I finished my shower, I get out of my room and find Uncle Sae and his ‘friend’ is not there. They’re left. I go to the dining room and there are some cereals, breads, milk, fruits, and a note.

.: “I’m out to the office. Get some breakfast before you go to take another NY tour, young man! The driver is ready outside.” :.

I quickly have my breakfast and go to Sae’s office.

“Uncle Sae!” I call him when I arrived in his office. Fortunately, his ‘special friend’ is not there, so I can talk to him privately.

“Hey, Kai. You don’t take any tour today?”

“Uncle Sae, I- I think I have to go back to Japan.”

“Eh? Why?? Your holiday is a week left, right?”

“Yes, but I think I have to check out Mrs.Maeda. You know, we’re their boss. I have to find out her condition now. I’m.. I’m a little worried with her.”

“Worried about her or her daughter, huh?” Sae tease me and smirks.

“Geeezzz… I’m serious!!”

Sae laughs. “Hahahaha, I’m just ensure that you like girls, Kai. Don’t be mad!”

“Of course I like girls!”

“So you like her?”

“Heh? Atsuko? N-noo!! How can I fall for a girl like her. A nerd with eyeglasses. No way. She’s not my type” I shake my head.

Sae laughs again. He’s really annoying today.

“Ne.. Can I go back to Japan?”

“Oh, of course, let me see the flight schedule.” He takes a look on his laptop while I get my seat on the couch and waiting.

“Here. The earliest flight is tomorrow. You’re lucky. Now go pack up your bags! And don’t forget to bring the gifts you brought for your friends. I’ll book your flight now.”

“Okay,” then I leave his office and go back to the apartment, packing up my bags. I can’t believe that it’s going to be twice more than goods when I bought from Japan. I shopped a lot.

The next day, Sae accompany me to the airport. Sayaka joins with us too. Somehow, Sayaka is very kind to me, he’s quite friendly. He even talks to me about himself along the road to the airport. He’s a vice manager of a broadcasting company in New York.

“Kine called me last night. Her condition is getting worse. I’m glad that you’ll back to Japan to see her. You’ve changed a lot, Kai” Sae smiles at me. He doesn’t know that it’s just an escape from his gay life in New York.

I finally get on the plane. It’s so relieving to go back to Japan. Even I enjoy the holiday in NY, but after I knew Sae’s secret, everything seems so awkward. It takes several hours to reach Japan and I arrive there in the evening. A driver from the office picks me up in the airport. I told Kine to stay in the hospital and let the office driver to pick me up. The time I arrived in Japan, I go to the hospital first because I know I’ll find no one at home. Everyone’s in in the hospital, there is also Nanny who accompanies Atsuko to take care of Mrs.Maeda. I know that all from Kine.

The driver opens the door for me when we arrived in front of the hospital. I ask a woman in the front desk where is Mrs. Maeda hospitalized. She tells me where the room is and I walk there. I enter the elevator to reach the 3rd floor. Then when I arrived, I turn to a corridor of the hospital. There, I see Atsuko is sitting on a bench, looking down in sad expression. I slowly walk towards her.

I stop in front of her. Atsuko looks up and I find she’s surprised when she saw me standing in front of her. I can see her eyes behind her glasses are swollen, I’m sure that she was crying so hard. I can’t say anything, so I sit beside her. She takes off her glasses and wipe her teary eyes.

“You’re back.. It’s so early,” she suddenly said in a super low voice, almost whispering.

“Hmm, I want to see Mrs. Maeda” I said firmly.

“Doctor’s handling her. Her condition was getting worse for the last few hours” she’s sobbing.

Damn. I can’t see a girl crying so hard like this. It’s just, God. What I should do? Then, I don’t know what spirit possessed me, I suddenly hold her hand and say “Don’t worry, I’m here..”

Of course she’s surprised of what I did just now.
“Thank you,” she said, turns her face to me and look at me with… confused expression, and I feel so awkward. I quickly get my hand off and look away.

“Where’s Kine?” I said, changing the topic.

“He’s in the lobby with Nanny, talking with some nurse there.”

“Oh.. I- I’m going to meet them for a while, okay” I said and she nods. I get up and walk away to the front lobby. There I meet Nanny and Kine.

“Youngmaster!!” Kine call me in surprise. “You’re here…”

“Yeah, just arrived few minutes ago.”

“Thanks for coming, young master…” Kine said.

“How’s she?” I ask them again about Mrs.Maeda condition.

Kine doesn’t answer, he just give me sad expression when I asked about his sister in law’s condition.

“It’s bad. We can only pray..” Nanny said.

Hearing what they said really makes my feeling down. I talk to the nurses and a doctor there to do their best and I can pay them how much the want, anything they want. I never imagined that Mrs.Maeda condition is this serious. I get my phone and send a message to Sae that I’m arrived in hospital, I also tell him about Mrs.Maeda’s condition. After that, I walk back to the corridor where Atsuko is.

When I walk back, I see Atsuko is not sitting on the bench anymore, she’s standing in front of the door talking with the doctor. I quickly walk over them.

“We’re really sorry Maeda-san, we did the best.” I can hear the doctor said, I see Atsuko burst into tears and cries really hard. I keep walking faster. Then I read something is wrong, she lost her balance. I quickly run to her and take them from falling down. Atsuko breaks down, I catch her on my embrace. I hug her tight and let her cries on my chest. Without noticing it, I feel tears on my cheeks too. It’s hurt for me to hear that Mrs. Maeda has passed out. It’s just like I feel the same feeling when I was a kid. The day when I found my parents died.

We stay like that for a long time, I don’t even notice that Kine and Nanny are coming and they’re crying too. Atsuko hugs me so tight, I can feel she’s sobbing so hard on my chest. But then… I feel her slowly take off her hands from hugging me. I think that she stops crying, but she’s still lays her forehead on my chest. I feel something different.

“At-Atsuko?” I call her and shake her shoulder. She’s not responding. Oh my God, she’s unconscious. I shake her shoulder again and keep calling her name. “Atsuko.. Atsuko wake up..”

Kine notices it, he quickly help me to take her to a rest room and lay her on the bed. I ask Nanny to call a doctor to examine her. The doctor comes as fast as light then examine her. Fortunately, she’s okay although still lost her consciousness. I get out of the room and call Sae about the situation, then call some staff to help me manage this.


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More sadness guys, I’m sorry  :kneelbow:
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Post by: _abby_ on April 22, 2013, 04:48:54 AM

Ahhh.. No Mrs. Maeda died  :gyaaah:

What will happen to acchan now...    :badluck:

Thanks for update.  :twothumbs
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Post by: chichay12 on April 22, 2013, 05:12:35 AM
yey!new chapter..but but
Mama maeda died  :cry: :cry:
acchan be strong!!
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Post by: abcari on April 22, 2013, 05:20:34 AM
Nooooooooooooo!!!!! ;A; Mrs. Maeda!!!!!!

Now what? ;A;

P.D: I dont care if Sae is gay because Sayaka is gay too 8D
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Post by: Haruko on April 22, 2013, 05:24:21 AM
awww T_T..
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Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on April 22, 2013, 05:57:28 AM
Ehm!

*takes out a gun* are you trying to make me cry here?? TT____TT

Why Acchan's mom?? D:

Now Acchan doesn't have a mother or father D: and it's the same for Kai D:

Sayaka is a guy....................xD omg bwhahahahaahha xD dish ish show awesome xD

I bet I would feel awkward too if my uncle was gay xD

Thank you for the sad but good update :D

Update soon!
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Post by: ptrd3009 on April 22, 2013, 06:05:19 AM
so sad about ms.Maeda :cry:
kai please take care sadly acchan
hope next chap isn't sadly any more
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Post by: ricap93 on April 22, 2013, 06:26:05 AM
Lymph cancer
Lymph cancer
Lymph cancer
acchan
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Post by: 7sam14 on April 22, 2013, 09:24:00 AM
Mrs.Maeda!!!!!!! R.I.P (in the story.... not IRL) (LoL)

now acchan's the same with Kai...

no parents....

Kai!!!! Take care of sad Acchan!!!


Thanks for the Chapter!!
Author-san!!!
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Post by: Hii_chan on April 22, 2013, 11:59:51 AM
OMG..Acchan had lost her father now she will loses her mother :cry:
now..Acchan will be alone
but, dont worry i'm sure Kai will take care of you
hope so.. :)
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Post by: cisda83 on April 22, 2013, 02:24:13 PM
Kai is so very reluctant to be with Sae...

Even worse when he is in the presence of Sayaka too...

Wah.... Kai really really so want to get away from Sae that he said he was worried about Mrs Maeda...

Eh, Kai doesn't like Atsuko... he has very strong reaction over it...

Ah... Poor Atsuko for losing both her parents now...

Ah... what's going to happen to Atsuko now...?

With her mother is dead there is no reason for her to live in Takahashi Mansion...

Is she going to have to live outside...?

Ah... Kai is so great saying... 'Don't worry, I'm here for you'.... so cool...

AH.... What's Kai going to do regarding Sae's offer and Atsuko's condition?

Can't wait to find out the next

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Post by: Sydney W on April 22, 2013, 04:26:43 PM
The end, Mrs Maeda passed out. It's time for Kai to comfort Atsuko. Go forit, Kai. Make them fall in love with each others, author-san !
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 24, 2013, 06:37:13 PM
 Hey all thanks for the comments. I really appreciate it. Sorry for the bad news of Acchan's mom. So here's the new chapter. Only Kai and Acchan here... 

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CHAPTER 9


A week after Mrs. Maeda’s death, Sae go back to NY after a big enough fight with Kai. Sae, once again asked Kai to live in NY with him. There’s no reason again for Kai to stay in Japan. It’s actually because of Sae doesn’t want to leave Kai alone. For the last years, there was Mrs. Maeda who took care of him. But now it’s different.

That night when Kai finally say that he don’t want to live with him because he saw him kissing a guy. Sae finally confessed too, that he’s a gay, and Sayaka is his partner. He felt so sorry for his status. Then,  Sae decided to let Kai stay in Japan, and he promise he will visit him as much as he can. In the other side, Kai promised him to live his life well and study hard. With this situation, Sae still worried about his nephew, which is he knows exactly as a stubborn man. So Sae called Acchan to get a discussion.

"Honestly, I hope you can stay here. If you agree to stay, I will pay for your school and any of your financial need. But I don't mind if you want to leave.. All the decision is yours to choose" Sae said to Acchan while Kai wasn't home.

Acchan nods and smiles. "Thank you, I'll think about it.."

"Oh, I'll be back to NY tomorrow. If you agree with my offer, please take care of my nephew.. It's only you in the house who can understand him better."

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Today, Acchan’s aunty is coming to visit. Acchan feels so happy to meet her aunty here. But she looks like want to tell something important to Acchan.

“Acchan, please think about it again. You can live with me in Shibuya, you can continue your study there” her aunty said, holding her hand and look at her seriously.

Acchan nods. “I’ll think about it again, aunty. I’ll tell you soon” she smiles at her. Deep inside her heart, she want to live with her aunty, but feels something keep her to stay but she doesn’t know what is it.

Acchan looks at the clock. It's lunch time, Kai said that he will back home at lunch time after he accompany Sae to the airport.

“Nee, Acchan. I’ll go now, tell me soon if you’ve decide it, okay” her aunty said. Acchan stands up, then walk her to the door.

“Bye, Acchan, see you later” her aund kiss her forehead and go. Acchan close the door when her aunt is out of sight. She's about to prepare Kai's lunch before he arrives. She turns around and walk to the kitchen. The house feels so empty without her mom there. Even now Sae has hire two more maids to handle the household, it still so empty for Acchan. When she walks pass the living room, suddenly someone grabs her wrist, Acchan turn around quickly. It's Kai standing there.

“Eh? Master? When did you arrive?” Acchan looks so surprised. She didn’t even hear any sound of him arriving at home lately.

Kai doesn’t answer. He looks deep into Acchan’s eyes.
"Don't leave..." Kai said in a soft voice. There's sadness in his face. "Please, don't leave me."

Acchan stares at his sad face, "PLEASE? Did you just said 'Please', Kai?" she thought to herself, but she doesn't say anything, just stares at him in confuse. This is the first time she hear Kai say “please”.

Seeing that Acchan doesn't answer or even gives any respond, Kai talks again. "Please don't leave me, Atsuko."


~ACCHAN~


He holds my wrist so tight. I can see the deep sadness in his eyes. What happen with him? Did he hear my conversation with Aunty? Oh God what I have to do? I look at him directly. If I go, who will take care of him? However this stubborn guy is living alone.

WAIT, he's rich!! He can hire anyone to take care of him. He can hire a thousand maids to manage this households. Just think about your life, Acchan. You can't live here forever to take care of this super-high temper guy. You can back to your hometown and live yourown life, or go to Shibuya and live with your Aunty. Just leave him, Acchan.

"Please..." he talks again, now with the teary eyes. Oh my God, I can't see him like this. He cries??!! He begs me to stay?? Damn. I keep thinking what I have to choose. Leave or stay.  We keep silent for a while as I don't know what to say. But then, he looks like disappointed that I don't answer anything. He drags me strongly and walks to a cupboard. He looks for something, then takes a handcuffs from the shelf.

Handcuffs? What is he doing? I don't even know that he has a handcuffs. He quickly set the handcuffs, half on my right hand, and the other one on his left hand. I'm a bit confused of what is he going to do with it.

"Master, what are you doing?" I ask him.

"I won't let you go!!" he said in a bit angry tone.

WHAT??!! He walks to the kitchen. Me? As my hand tied to him, I'm dragged to everywhere he goes. He takes a bottle of water from the fridge and drink it until the bottle is empty. Oh, so he remember what my mom said long time ago. When he feels angry, he just have to drink a bottle of cold water to calm himself down.

He breath deeply. I stares at him silently. He walks again, now he steps on the stairs. I start to guessing where will he go. I wonder if he go to his room. Oh my God what I have to do?! After we arrived on the second floor, I pull my hand and stop walking. He turn around and look at me for several seconds. Then he walk towards a big window in the living room. He sits down on the floor. His back on the wall. I sit down too beside him. He looks at the window silently.

It starts to rain outside. We just sit there with no words, just keep silent, listening to the rain fall sound. We stay like that for several minutes and only clock voice we can hear.

"MG was not only a driver for me" he finally talks, even without looking at me. He keeps looking out of the  window. Watching the water falling down on the glass.  "He is my hero."

Suddenly it reminds me of my Dad. Yes, his family always call my dad MG. But hero? What hero? Whatever. But he's right. Dad is my hero too. Father is a daughter's first hero.

"I was kidnapped when I was 4. I remember at that scary night, MG came to the old house where I was hidden."

I look at him. Now I remember the day my dad leave me to save him. Then he talks again, still..facing the window.

"MG fought the kidnapper, he kicked them down. I could see his face was bleeding and there were some bruises. He untied the rope on me, then my dad came with so many polices. While my Dad held the police and the kidnapper, MG asked permission from my dad to take me to the hospital. He let me examined, juat in case that I got hurt or something. But I guess he's the one who should be examined. He got so many bruises."

I keep silent and take attention to him and he talks again.

"After that day, Dad never trust anybody except MG. He ordered MG to take his family move to this house, so he could work fulltime, and his wife could work with us as additional maid."

" I heard that most of our maids couldn't handle me. They said that I'm such a stubborn boy..."

Yes you are!

"But I don't know, MG's wife could calm me down, and I feel safe with her. I think she knew me so well. So patient to handle me. She's just like my second mother. I like her."

Hearing what he said, I imagine my mom's kindness, her warm smile, her care... I smile without noticing it.

"I don't know why does God take them so fast. I'm not even growing up yet. They leave me alone. It's just like I lost all the loves around me. I lost my parents, MG, his wife, and everything. All I see is black and white. No colours my life."

Tears rolling rown on my cheek. I remember my parents. My life is black and white too without mom and dad. I'm left here with this cold head guy.

Suddenly I see that he take a key from his pocket. He unkeys the handcuffs from my hand.

"Just leave, I won't force you to stay. It will be perfect if you leave. Perfect misery." he said. Now his cheeks are wet. I bet he's crying too.

I can't say anything. On the other side, I feel like I don't want to leave him. At least, I can pay his family's kindess by taking care of him. But this guy is so stubborn!

He stands up and walks towards his room, leaves me here on the floor. Suddenly I remember what my mom said: "Everyone has a good side, Acchan. It's just hidden inside their heart. Be patient and face them well. By the time, they will show their good side."

I quickly stand up and run towards him, just a second before he close the door, I get inside. He turns around and look at me. I grab the handcuffs that hangs on his wrist. I set handcuff on my wrist again, so now it ties my hand and his. He look confused with what I'm doing.

"I'll stay.." I said shortly.

He stares at me, then I think I hear him whispering "Thank you" but it's very soft and I almost can't hear it. This is the first time I hear him say Thank You even it's not that clear. I look at him and smiles. He takes the key from his pocket and unkeys the handcuffs off his hand, but let it still tied on my hand.

With the cold face, he gives the key to me. "Untie it by yourself!"

WHAT?! Oh my God he's back.

"Go prepare my lunch, I'm hungry!" he said with the cold tone and the most annoying face. He walk away to his bathroom.

Aaarrrghhh.. This monster guy!!!

The next day I text Uncle Sae that I'll stay in the house, I also tell my aunty that I choose to stay. Kine help me by telling her that he will take care of me since he is my dad's little brother.

There's a reply message from Uncle Sae that I son't really understand what he meant.

.: " Thank you very much Acchan for your decision to stay. Please take care of my nephew. Don't let him alone..." :.

At first, I didn't understand what he meant. But one night, one of the house maid teach me to make a cheese cake. I was so happy that we've made a great cheeae cake. I offer the young master to taste it. He looks like it so much. He took some pieces and brought it to his room. Hw wated to eat it while doing his school task.

In the midnight, I woken up. I find his room's light is still on. I knocked the door but no answer, so I enter the room. There I found him laying on his bed, sleeping. I bet he was fell asleep. At first I just want to take the dishes of the cheese cake he ate. But then I walk approach him and found his eyes were swollen. He was crying again.

I took his blanket and about to cover him below it. I lift his hand and found a photo frame of his parents on his hand. At that time I realized what uncle Sae meant. He always feel lonely and sad if he's alone. He need someone to look after him, to take care of him. But unfortunately, he's not really a friendly person. I have to take some effort to take care o him.

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Okay, maybe that was short. please leave comments below. Thanks for reading guys :D
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 9- 24/04/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chichay12 on April 24, 2013, 07:28:37 PM
omg!
Your update makes me sad :cry: :cry: :cry:
Kai be strong!!
Thank god acchan will stay!XD
Thank you for the update
*wipe tears*
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Post by: Sydney W on April 25, 2013, 01:37:17 AM
At last, Kai manage to trick Atsuko to stay. @_@
Come on, Kai, don't be so annoying towards Atsuko.
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Post by: _abby_ on April 25, 2013, 01:44:06 AM
Atsuko stay, now kai wont be alone. 

Thanks for update
 :twothumbs
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Post by: korin48 on April 25, 2013, 04:37:08 AM
LOL I love that handcuff scene because it is too kawaii XD
Thanks God Acchan chooses to stay  :love:
Hurry and make them fall in love with each other, chemicalstar-san XD
And thanks for update! And please update soon! :bow:
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Post by: Haruko on April 25, 2013, 05:34:09 AM
LOL I love that handcuff scene because it is too kawaii XD
Thanks God Acchan chooses to stay  :love:
Hurry and make them fall in love with each other, chemicalstar-san XD
And thanks for update! And please update soon! :bow:

yeah! but Acchan you need to teach Kai how to be a gentleman!
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Post by: Wmatsui22 on April 25, 2013, 07:19:10 AM
Taking Care of You

Hi Chemicalstar-san! :D

Sorry for late comment...

Chapter 8:

I smiled at Kai's thought about her Uncle Sae to be gay.. :D

But it's so sad that Atsuko's mother died...

I hope Kai will take care of Atsuko..

Pls. Update

Nice chapter!

Thanks.
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Post by: yourockme on April 25, 2013, 08:46:06 AM
Huwooooooow
How stupid of me
I just read this story -_-

Err anyway
The author is a sadist! *cricketsound* (Ahehe Love you author san mwa mwa tsup tsup)
killed their parents. :(

Waiting for KaiAcchan
Thank you  :lol:
O(∩_∩)O
Eyyy uhm btw I love the cover of this story
I mean The picture of KaiAcchan hehehe
Jaa bye  :thumbsup
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Post by: cisda83 on April 25, 2013, 08:52:42 AM
Thank you Atsuko... for choosing to stay with Kai...

I was suprised when Kai begged Atsuko not to leave him alone...

Ah... Atsuko now knows that Kai actually a lonely boy and cold in the outside...

Coz' he doesn't want to show people his weakness especially on the inside....

What's going to happen next with Atsuko and Kai....?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Post by: KojiYuu44 on April 25, 2013, 09:49:55 AM
just started reading this one
i'm really loving the story so far
both sets of parents are dead and now they are left with each other  :(
i wonder how things are going to turn out
sae being gay is soooo funny  :lol:
i love the pace this story is going at
thank you for the wonderful story
please update soon  :)
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Post by: abcari on April 25, 2013, 10:18:11 AM
Yey! new chapter >w< more atsumina!! Kai so lovely like always hahahaha xD

cant wait for the next upload its like a drug your fic xD
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 26, 2013, 01:15:40 PM
LOL I love that handcuff scene because it is too kawaii XD
Thanks God Acchan chooses to stay  :love:
Hurry and make them fall in love with each other, chemicalstar-san XD
And thanks for update! And please update soon! :bow:

yeah! but Acchan you need to teach Kai how to be a gentleman!

Calm down, just enjoy the line ;)

Eyyy uhm btw I love the cover of this story
I mean The picture of KaiAcchan hehehe
Jaa bye  :thumbsup

Thanks, I like how takamina being so cool there :)
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Post by: Hii_chan on April 26, 2013, 07:01:32 PM
so slow.. :OMG:
I want to see kiss scene and perv scene, too :angry1:
chemicalstar-san, do I look like a pervert? :shy2: :shy2:
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Post by: kuro808 on April 26, 2013, 10:21:29 PM
Kai still doesn't understand what Sae is trying to get into him :thumbdown:

He can't survive without being spoiled and yet Acchan is now stuck because of her family situation so the only way is to stick it out with him.

Tough times for both of them :thumbdown:
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 27, 2013, 05:52:48 AM
so slow.. :OMG:
I want to see kiss scene and perv scene, too :angry1:
chemicalstar-san, do I look like a pervert? :shy2: :shy2:

LOL..

FINE folks, I'll make the story goes fast. Seems like all of you can't wait for the two to fall in love and... get in perv scene, huh?!! okay, I'll think about it. OMG
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 28, 2013, 07:02:18 AM
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CHAPTER 10


Acchan just finished her dinner with her master, the she got back into her room. She takes out her books from her schoolbag and opens a book. There were some homework of English lesson. However, even though she is a smart enough in her school, but English is one of her weakness. She tries to answer the questions one by one. When it comes to grammar, she gets desperate.

“How can I get the first rank at class if I can't do this” Acchan sighs, she blames herself for being so lame in English lesson.
“I wish I had someone with good English to be asked about it” she lays herself on her bed and stares at the ceiling. “Eh?” suddenly she remember something. Something that reminds her of Kai. “He is good in English, why didn’t I ask him?! Argh, stupid!”
Acchan quickly gets up from her bed, wears her glasses and takes her book out from her room. She walks upstairs heading to her Kai’s room. She knocks the door and calls him.

“Excuse me young master??” she knocks the door again.

“Yeah! Come in!!” she heard him shouting inside the room, so she open the door knob and get in. There Acchan sees her master is in front of his PC screen, playing an online game.

“What?” Kai said, without move his face from the screen.

“Err, actually I want to ask your help. But… since you look so busy, I guess I’ll leave.. Good night” Acchan turns around.

“What kind of help?” suddenly Kai said, still on his screen.

“Ano… I have an English homework and I found some trouble to do it. I wonder if you’d like to help me to solve it..” Acchan said nervously.

Kai stops the game and turn around. He sees that Acchan standing there with her books in her hand. Kai nods a little. “Okay, let me see!”

Hearing that, Acchan smiles and walks towards him. Kai moves to another table, he takes Acchan’s book and check it out.

“Here, I don’t understand how to solve it,” Acchan sits down and pointing at the question she doesn’t understand.

Kai read it first and.. “Geez.. it’s so easy!! How couldn’t you understand about it?”

“Mou… master. You study in an elite high school and you join a lot of courses. That task must be so easy for you but not for me” Acchan pouts at him.

Suddenly Kai chuckles as he looking Acchan puts cutely like that. “You’re so funny”

“Hm? What’s so funny?” Acchan said innocently.

“Forget it. Look, here let me tell you the formula to solve this problem..” Kai starts to teach Acchan.


~Acchan ~

I have no idea about this boy. Sometimes he can act normally without any annoying things or making some troubles. Look, how cute is he when he teaches me the grammar formula of English, and I feel like he’s three times better than my English teacher at school. An hour later, I finally finished my homework. I’m still in his room reading another books that he owns on the table when suddenly there’s a sound from his computer.

It’s a video chat. Kai get up and go to his computer. I can see his screen shows a video of a man I knew for years, Uncle Sae.

“Yo, Kai! What’s up?”

“Great, how about you?”

“It’s cold here. But I’m okay, look, I still have my warm sweater made by Mrs.Maeda” Uncle Sae said. I smiles as I hear him saying that. I get up from my seat and approach Kai. I lean my arms on Kai’s seat behind him. Right behind him. He looks so surprised and look at me as he noticed that we’re so close but I don’t really care about it. I’m so excited that I can see Uncle Sae even through the video chat.

“Uncle Sae!!” I greet him cheerfully.

“ACCHAN!!” he said happily and smiles. But then, the smiles is fading. His expression is changing.
“HEY!! What are you guys doing in your room, Kai??!!” Sae widened his eyes.

“We-we’re..” Kai talks shivering.

“OH-MY-GOD!!” Uncle Sae shouting and smirks. Now I know what he means.

“We’re not doing anything!!” Kai shouts. I can see his face is red. I’m a little blushed too, but I know that Uncle Sae is just kidding and he just want to tease Kai.

“We’re just doing school homework, Uncle Sae” I laugh. “Kai is great in English, so I ask him to help me.”

“KAI?” Uncle Sae widened his eyes again. CRAP! What did I said?! Did I just say… KAI?! Damn.

“Since when?” Uncle Sae chuckles. Kai look at me with no words. Just look at me innocently with a deep red cheek. CRAP, I have nothing to say.

“Since we’re friends!” Kai suddenly reply him. He looks at me again. “Yeah, now we’re friends, right, Atsuko?”

I nods. Now I’m the one who is teased.

“Souka..” Uncle Sae smirks. “Okay then, I don’t want to disturb your ‘doing homework’ thing. I just want to make sure that you two are okay. See ya!” the suddenly he hang up call.

Kai close the chat and turn off his computer. I walk back to take my books on the table.

“Thanks for your help. I hope you don't mind if I ask you to help me again in studying” I said while taking my books and get ready to leave.

"Okay, good luck for tomorrow then" he said, not looking at me. I don't know what happen to him.

"And... Umm.. I'm really sorry of what i said just now. I didn't meant to call you that. Sorry" I bow to him.

"Atsuko" Kai calls me again. I turn around.

"I don't mind if you want to" Kai said, looking at me nervously. "I mean, you can call me by my name. We're friends.."

I'm surprised. FRIENDS?? Is this guy kidding or not?!
"Eh? No. It's not that, I'm sorry mast..."

"Kai. Just Kai, okay" he said cut my words calmly.

I finally give up. "H-haik.. Thank you, K-kai. Good night." I smile at him then leave.

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Acchan just got back from school. She saw Kai’s car in front of the house. Her young master is home. It’s not usual that he’s home that fast. He used to go somewhere after school to take some courses and lessons, basketball, or even hanging out with his friends. But today he gets back home before Acchan. It’s so rare.

“Tadaimaaa..” Acchan open the door and get in the house. She check all the room in the house but she can’t find Kai anywhere. “Maybe he’s in his room..”
Acchan go to her room and change her clothes. She wears some casual outfit and takes off her glasses, then she brush her hair and go to the dining room and find a maid greets her.

“Acchan, when did you back? I didn’t hear you come..”

“Yeah, I just got back 10 minutes ago. Is young master’s here? I see his car in front of the house.”

“Oh, yeah, he has been home half hour ago. Oh, Acchan, would you help me please?”

“Yes?”

“Please bring it to young master’s room. I’m preparing another dessert..” the maid gives Acchan some bottles of juice.

“He want to drink all this??” Acchan asks in confuse. She knows that her master always do something trouble but not with this bottles of juice.

The maid doesn’t reply, she looks like so busy to prepare some pudding and pies. Acchan takes the bottles of juice and walk to the upstairs, heading to Kai’s room.

Knock..knock..

“Come in!” she hears her master shouting inside the room, then she opens the door. Acchan a little surprised when she enters the room. She saw some boys inside and looking at her. As she so nervous, she quickly bows to them. The boys smiles at her.

“Oh, Atsuko.. Just put them there” Kai said, pointing at the carpet on the floor where some books are scattered around.

“Excuse me” Acchan said to a boy who sits on the carpet, then Acchan put the bottles there. She can’t stand that the boys keep looking at her, especially the one who sits on the carpet. Acchan ask for permission and leave the room.

“Yo yo yo!! Are you kidding, dude?” Yuu drops his jaw as Acchan leaves the room. “You act so cold towards girls at school, but you hide a pretty girl in your house??”

“Yeah! Such a jerk, you Kai! Come on, tell us since when you guys are together??” Jurina smirks at him.

“I don’t know that you have a good taste of girl,!” Mario pats Kai’s head.

“W-what are you guys talking about? SHE’S JUST A MAID!!” look at him innocently, but loud and clear enough.

The three young man drop their jaws.
“Maid??” Jurina said. “Whoa, if I had a maid that pretty I won’t go to school everyday…”

Outside the room, Acchan still there that she can hear what her master said. “A maid, huh?” Acchan thought. She walks away in disappointment.

“Kai, who’s her name?” Yuu looks so interested with the girl as he can’t focus with the project but keep asking Kai about the girl.

“Why should I tell you? Ask her by yourself if you brave enough…” Kai replies cruelly.

Yuu lay on the carpet, looking at the ceiling and smiles.
"She's beautiful.."

Kai take a glance at Yuu and turn to his book again.

Several minutes later, Yuu quickly drink her juice until the bottle is empty.
“Ahh… my drink is up. I will go to the kitchen to take some more. Who wants another drink?”

“Whoa, you drink it so fast. Are you that thirsty?” Jurina said.

“Yeah, I’m so thirsty. Kai, I’ll go to your kitchen, okay..”

“You don’t have to, I can call a maid to bring us another drink” Kai said.

“Uhmm.. no. I can take it by myself, bye..” Yuu quickly stands up and leaves the room.

“He acts so weird lately,” Mario shakes his head.

Yuu walk downstairs and searching for the kitchen. It’s not that he doesn’t know where’s the kitchen but he want to search where is the girl. Then a maid sees him walking there. “Sir, need some help?”

“Oh, no. No, thanks. I can get it by myself. Thank you..” Yuu smiles at the maid and go to the kitchen.

“Bingo!” Yuu said in his thought. There he can see Acchan peels some apples.

“Ehmm..” Yuu coughing when he enters the kitchen. Acchan turns around as she hears a boy’s voice.

“Hi..” Yuu smiles at her.

“Hi.. N-need some help?” Acchan said nervously and approaches him.

“O-oh yeah, I need more drink.. You know, I’m so thirsty today” Yuu said, keep smiling at her.

“Oh, let me take some juice then” Acchan open the fridge and take out a bottle of juice.

“Okay, thank you” Yuu sits down on the chair.

“Here..” Acchan offers him the juice.

Yuu takes it and smiles (again). He can’t move his eyes from her. “I’m Yuu, by the way. Oshima Yuu.”

“Nice to meet you, Oshima-san” Acchan bows at him.

“No no no.. Just call me Yuu”

“But…”

“Yeah, just Yuu. Let’s being friends..” Yuu gives his hand to her.

Acchan smiles at him and shake his hand. This guy is so different with her master. So friendly and handsome too. “Maeda Atsuko, you can call me Acchan.”

"Acchan? Cute...“ Yuu smiles. "I think we’re in the same age, right? Where are you studying?” Yuu starts to drink his juice and back to sit again. Acchan follows him to sits in front of him in the dining table.

“Yeah. I’m studying in a general high school not far from here.”

“Souka.. I’m in the same class as Kai. And I regret that it’s my first time to visit his house.”

“Eh? Why do you regret it?”

“If I knew that there’s a pretty girl lives here, I would come to visit this house everyday, hehe”

Acchan blush so red and Yuu smirks as he think that he successfully get her heart.

"Acchan, I'll go back upstairs. The boys might be wait for me"

"Okay,"

"Errr... Acchan," Yuu turns around again. "Can I have your number?"

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The evening at Takahashi Residence, Kai and Acchan have their dinner together in the dining room. Kai feel so awkward that Accham doesn't say anything, it's just not like usual. Acchan used to ask him anything, about the school, the basketball and anything. But now she's so quiet. The dinner is ended with no word out from the both. They back to their room after dinner.

However, Kai still thinking about what he said today when his friends in his room. He wonders if Acchan heard what he said in the room. He thinks that he should tell her the reason. Suddenly Kai's phoe is ringing. A new message.

From: Sae
To: Kai
Msg: Kai, you see that shoes?! Amazing , right? It's a limited edition, I heard that it's only sold 3 units in Tokyo. Go get it tomorrow and have some shopping. Ask Acchan to go, I just send you for her money for shopping.
*a picture attached

Kai open the picture and he see a picture of basketball shoes. So amazing and cool. He want to own it.  Kai get up from his bed and go downstairs, heading to Acchan's room.

Knock.. knock..

"Yes?" Acchan open the door and her expression changes after she realize that it's Kai who knocked the door.

"Hey, are you okay?"

"Yeah, fine.." Acchan replied shortly. "Can I help you?"

"Can I come in first?" Kai said, asking to enter her room.

She nods and open the door widely so that kai can enter the room. At first, Acchan feels so awkward that Kai asked to enter her room. But she think that maybe Kai want to tell something important so she allows him to get in the room.

"You heard it, right?" Kai asks her directly.

"Heard what?"

"About what I said today to my friends... Because you acted strange after that"

"Oh.. Yes of course, you spell it loud and clear. I could still hear it from the outside, MASTER.." Acchan said in angry tone. She's disappointed.

Kai walk to the edge of the room and look out of the window. He can see the swimming pool from the window. He remember that the night when he cried near the pool. He wonder if  Acchan could see him cry.

Kai turns around. "Look, Atsuko. I didn't mean to say that. I'm just..." Kai takes a deep breath. "I'm just worried of you. You know, my friends sometimes so annoying to girls. And I just.. want to protect you..." Kai lower his tone in the last sentence, almost whispering.

"I'm sorry.." he turn his heas down.

BUMM. Hearing Kai said SORRY makes her heartbeats stop. Tje first time this stubborn cold head boy saying sorry to her. Silence for  a while.

"So... Will you forgive me??" Kai breaks the silence.

Acchan doesn't reply. She still angry with him.

"Well.. What if tomorrow we go hang out together? Uncle Sae give us money for shopping. We never go out together, right?"

Acchan still doesn't answer.

"Oh, come on.. you look so horrible with that face!" Kai gives up. He looks around the room and see something catches his eyes.


~ Acchan ~

He turns around then I chuckled hearing w
hat he said. My face is horrible. Hah, this guy is so funny. He walk approaches my table, looking at my old barbie house. He looks like so interested with it. I walk towards him.

"You're already 17 but still playing this kind of toys?!" he laughs a little.

"Your dad gave it to me.." he suddenly turns around and look at me.

I smile. "Yes, he gave it to me when I was five."

He looks at the barbie house again and take the female barbie. "Wow, you keep it so well.."

"Of course, that was the best gift I ever had". I sit beside him.

He takes a look at the female doll.
"AC-CHAN" he spells the word I wrote on the doll's back. "She has a name! So this doll is you?" he chuckles.

I laughs shyly. "I wrote it when I was five. It's so normal for a little girl wishing to be a barbie.. "

He chuckles. "So, who is this guy?" he takes the male one.

I remember something. OMG. I quickly take the male doll from his hand but he holds it strongly.
"What are you doing? Let me see it" he pull the doll but I keep his hand and try to get the doll.

"No you can't!"

"I just wanna see it"

"No, please don't!"

We pull the doll each other and then he lost his balance and fall from his seat.

BAMM... I'm pulled by his hands so I'm falling too. The time I realized I'm on his top, and... oh this is so weird. Something warm blows on my face. I open my eyes, and I'm so surprised. The only thing I can see is his widened eyes right in front of me. Then I realized, something warm blowing on my face is his breath from his nose and there's no gap between...our lips.

I quickly move from his top.
"Arrhh Ittaii.." I said in pain, but I still remember about the doll. I take the doll whis is fall on the floor.

He get up and stroke his head. "Ugh..."
"Are you okay?" he ask me.

"Yeah, I'm okay. You?"

"A bit hurt.. But it's okay. No problem" he said, then look at me. I can see him blushed like tomato.

"I'm sorry.." I said, my cheek grows red.

"I-I'll s-see you tomorrow. B-bye.." he gets up and leaves.


~ KAI ~

Laying on my bed, I can't close my eyes. It's already 1 AM but I still can't sleep. Without noticing it, I still holding my lips while looking at the ceiling. What was happen just now?! I yry to remember how 'the kiss' accidentally happened.  Hmm, so this is how it feels kissing a girl...

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A short update... I'll update it later ;)
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Post by: kuro808 on April 28, 2013, 07:29:03 AM
Acchan always liked Kai but he is just clueless to the situation
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Post by: _abby_ on April 28, 2013, 07:38:37 AM
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BAMM... I'm pulled by his hands so I'm falling too. The time I realized I'm on his top, and... oh this is so weird. Something warm blows on my face. I open my eyes, and I'm so surprised. The only thing I can see is his widened eyes right in front of me. Then I realized, something warm blowing on my face is his breath from his nose and there's no gap between...our lips. :sweatdrop:

Acchan and kai KISS.   :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:

Thanks for update.   :twothumbs
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Post by: korin48 on April 28, 2013, 07:54:24 AM
This chapter makes me giggle and my heart went doki doki  :luvluv1:
Yuu falls for Acchan!??!  :grr: She is not fit for you!!! Find other girls!!  :on voodoo: Probably Haruna?


BAMM... I'm pulled by his hands so I'm falling too. The time I realized I'm on his top, and... oh this is so weird. Something warm blows on my face. I open my eyes, and I'm so surprised. The only thing I can see is his widened eyes right in front of me. Then I realized, something warm blowing on my face is his breath from his nose and there's no gap between...our lips.

Kyaaa~! :mon inluv: they had their first kiss  :ding:


Laying on my bed, I can't close my eyes. It's already 1 AM but I still can't sleep. Without noticing it, I still holding my lips while looking at the ceiling. What was happen just now?! I yry to remember how 'the kiss' accidentally happened.  Hmm, so this is how it feels kissing a girl...

Because you love her ever since you two were kids!!  :whistle:
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Post by: cisda83 on April 28, 2013, 07:55:55 AM
Ah... Kai is so friendly and helpful toward Atsuko...

Is he developing some feeling for Atsuko?

Sae is teasing them both... hahaha  :lol:

AH... Kai was worried and scared to be teased about Atsuko that he just said that Atsuko was just a maid.

Ah... Kai, do something... if not Atsuko is going to be taken and played by Yuu...

Eh... they accidentally kissing each other.... and now Kai could not fall asleep because of it....

Why did Atsuko not want Kai to see what was written in the male doll...?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen to them the next day... and also during their outing...?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: kurumi on April 28, 2013, 09:15:04 AM
I just found this forum recently, and am so impressed with the stories. Everyone has such wonderful imagination and writes so well.
I could really imagine the slow progression of the relationship between Kai and Acchan. :yep:
Even though I mostly read KojiYuu fics, can't wait for the next chapter! :twothumbs Thanks!
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Post by: yourockme on April 28, 2013, 09:54:16 AM
OH MY G!  XD
woooooooooo kissu kissu
 :cow: :cow: :cow:
MORE MORE TEHEHE  :grin:

Yay Yuu! AtsuYuu!
Kiddin :P

And they have a date next chapterrr! XDD
YIEEE LOL
Thank you  :thumbsup
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Post by: chichay12 on April 28, 2013, 10:09:54 AM
kyaaaaaaaa :on gay: :on gay:
i want more!!! :banghead: :banghead:
kaixacchan~~
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Post by: DC2805 on April 28, 2013, 11:38:11 AM
Yuu making a move on Acchan first...Kai should stop being nasty, your Acchan is a GEM in other boy's eyes and she will be captured and gone in no time if you don't know how to treasure her! Yuu, please give Kai more pressure! haha!  :grin:
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Post by: chemicalstar on April 28, 2013, 04:56:04 PM
Why did Atsuko not want Kai to see what was written in the male doll...?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen to them the next day... and also during their outing...?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

About the doll, I guess you remember what did Atsuko do to the doll in the first chapter ;)

Well.. let's see what's going on next. thank you

@sharlatan-san : welcome to JPHIP. Thanks for reading my fic

@everyone: thanks for reading my fic :)
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Post by: Haruko on April 29, 2013, 04:34:11 AM
finally the kiss!! What Yuu.. get out of atsumina love!!... get you harunya instead!
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Post by: ptrd3009 on April 29, 2013, 11:12:42 AM
yuu get out from atsumina love!!
and find your haruna then 555555
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Post by: cisda83 on April 29, 2013, 12:39:44 PM
Ah I see... the name of the doll is Takahashi...

Because Kai's father gave the dolls to MG for Atsuko when she was young

So Atsuko was embarrassed to show Kai...

She should not be embarrassed, she should just said she named the doll after Kai's father not him...

Well anyhow... Thank you for informing about the doll...

I can't remember all the detail so Thank you for reminding me where to find the info for my question

Well can't wait to see your next chapter

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: abcari on April 29, 2013, 03:28:41 PM
First kiss finally!!!
Good one in this chapter!
I cant wait for the next >w< good job! good job!
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Post by: KojiYuu44 on April 30, 2013, 03:13:08 AM
oh my...
they kiss!!!!  :)
very nice update
Thank you
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Post by: Hii_chan on May 01, 2013, 09:47:58 AM
finally, A KISS :w00t:
chemicalstar-san, you're so great   :cathappy: :cathappy:
Yuu fall for Acchan and Acchan seem likes him too,
I'm waiting to see jealous Kai
thank for update
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Post by: chiqinna on May 01, 2013, 10:42:58 AM
Hi Chemicalstar-san!!
I've been reading your fic and  :shifty: I really love the story~~~
KaiAcchan~~~  :wriggly:
but since Yuu is in so there will be love triangle!!  >:D to make it more interesting!!
hehe~
thanks for the update!!  :luvuluvu:
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Post by: korin48 on May 01, 2013, 11:46:52 AM
but since Yuu is in so there will be love triangle!!  >:D to make it more interesting!!

No... Love square TakaHaruAtsuYuu is better >:D
More interesting, more drama and more chapters!!  :kekeke:
So anyway chemicalstar-san, dont mind me!!  :mon sweat:
I am waiting for your update  :deco:
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Post by: chiqinna on May 01, 2013, 11:57:38 AM
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No... Love square TakaHaruAtsuYuu is better   >:D
More interesting, more drama and more chapters!!  :kekeke:
lol~ you're right~~  :lol: to make it moooooooooooore interesting put Ray in it~~ hahahaha  >:D
hehe just kidding~ it depends to the author after all~  :D
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Post by: chemicalstar on May 02, 2013, 06:54:50 AM
DRAMA!!! why does everyone like drama?! LOL

Well well..
Those comments above force me to reveal the clue for the next chapters... Yes, Haruna will appear, but Ray?? I haven't thought about her to be in the story yet. But I'll think about it.. ;)
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Post by: chemicalstar on May 02, 2013, 11:48:19 AM
 Hey all, it’s me again, bringin a new chapter for you. Seeing those comments above, I appreciate you all for reading this fic. So here it is….

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CHAPTER 11


~Acchan~


I get my handbag in my room then go to the front door. We’re about to go hang out together. It’s Uncle Sae’s idea that he gave us money to buy some new clothes and everything. I walk outside, there I can see Kine, my uncle is ready with the car. I stop there when Kai is about to get in the car.

"What are you waiting for? Let's go" he said looking at me who's standing there silently.

"No, we go by train" I said.

"WHAT??! Train??" he said surprised. "NO. NO WAY. I won't go anywhere by public vehicle!" he said cruelly, then he wears his sunglasses. Looks like an actor in a hollywood movies.

"Okay, just go on your own.  I'll stay home" I said, turn around and act like I'm going to enter the house again.

"How come? Uncle Sae ask us to go together!!" he shouts, takes off his sunglasses again and walking towards me.

I stop. He's right, I can't cancel it. I turn around, "I don't want to go by your car!"

"I don't want to go by train or bus!" he replies in the same tone like I was.

We look in each other's eyes with the same ego. "Okay, we separate our way. You go by your car, I'll go by train."

"... Fine!" he said, a little mad. He wears his sunglasses and get into the car while I walk to the nearest train station from the house.

Arriving in the train station, I get in the queue and buy a ticket. "One ticket to the 3rd station." I give the money then the man gives the ticket.

"Ehm, me too!" a sudden familiar voice behind me saying.

I turn around and see a blond head guy behind me. He look at me with "Satisfied?" look. I smirk at him. We finally go together and get on the train. We sit there side by side. He doesn't talk anything. Just look around the people. I bet this is his first time riding on a train.

I chuckle and he looks at me. "What's funny?" he pouts. I can't hold it and burst into a little laugh. "Nothing. Where's my uncle, by the way?"

"Home" he said shortly.

The train is stopped in the next station, then a lot of people get in. Almost full, some people don’t get their seat and decide to stand up. An old woman walks on the wagon, she searches for an empty seat. I look around but everywhere is full. The woman walks over us and she finally stand up. I look at the blond boy behind me who is spacing out, still feeling strange with this situation on a train.

“Ittaaii!!” he groans when I pinch his arm. I give him a code by show him the old woman who is standing in front of us.

“What?” he said doesn’t understand what I mean.

“Sigh..” I move closer to him and whispering “Ask that old woman to sit on your seat!”

“Eh? Why should I? This train is so full, so where will I sit?”

Ah, lame. This boy is totally lame. I pinch his arm again, force him to do what I said with wide-eyes. I don’t know why but I feel like if I force him to do something in that way, I can see he’s afraid of something. He’s afraid at me when I’m mad?

He stands up and approach the old woman, he asks her to sit on his seat beside me.

"Ah, thank you" the old woman sits beside me and I smiles at her while Kai standing in front of us.
“.. you have a good boyfriend” she continues.

“…….” I’m stunned. I look at Kai. He looks away with red cheek. Ah, funny. This boy is so funny.

We arrived at the shopping center. At first, Kai ask me to follow him looking for his basketball shoes. He’s so excited to look around the shop until he forgets that he’s with me and he leaves me. I quickly call him by phone when I’m left behind. He’s terrible. But I appreciate for willing himself to accompany me buying anything. Everyone thinks that he’s my boyfriend. A boyfriend with not so friendly behavior.

After we bought so many things, he’s about to call a cab but I deny him. I call Kine to pick our shopping bags home, while I take this arrogant blonde boy to walk around the city. It’s already dark outside, I give him an idea to have dinner. He’s agree. But when I tell him that I want to buy foods in a street which has a street food festival, he doubts it.

No wonder, he never eats street foods. Always eat expensive and healthy foods. Sigh… I have to teach him how to live like normal people on the streets. I force him to try the foods, and… bingo! He finally likes it. We spent the night trying all the foods there. Time flies so fast, we don’t notice that it’s already midnight. Once again, he tries to call Kine to fetch us but I forbid it. I drag him to a bus stop and get our way home by bus.

“Uwhh.. I’m so tired..” I said when I sit down on the bus seat. We sit on the very back seat of the bus.

“Tired? Today was awesome, why are you feeling tired?” he refuses it and sits beside me.

“So, you enjoy the day?” I smirk at him.

He looks at me, his cheeks are getting red. “A little,” he change his expression and looks away. I chuckles.

I stare at the window beside me. Watching the people on the streets, the lights, everything. “I love to walk around the city at night...” I suddenly say.

“Yeah, me too… ”

I look at him. “Really?”

He nods. “Yeah..”

“Since when?”

“Err… since now, hehe” he laughs, showing his dimple on his cheek.

I seldom seeing this view. I laugh at him too. Seeing him laughing is making me happy. “You look better like that, Mr. Blonde!”

The bus is so quiet. Of course, it’s only us inside cuz it’s already midnight. Before I notice it, he hold my cold hand. I look at him in confuse.

“You’re so cold” he said shortly, so clumsy. Then he looks away.

I smiles a little, then we just enjoy the drive. I fall asleep on his shoulder and it felt so comfortable. I'm starting to enjoy my time with him even though sometimes he sucks.

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X days later…


School is over today. Acchan went to the library and borrowed some books. Now she walks to the school gate, holding some books on her hands. Today is Kai's busy day, he will back home in the evening. Somehow it makes Acchan feels bad if he's not home all day. Even though sometimes he’s so annoying, but it’s relieving to have someone at home to share about everything.

"Watch out!!" shouts of a boy riding a bicycle very fast almost crashes on Acchan. She quickly avoids the boy's path but she finally drops her books on the ground.

"Sorry!!!" the boy shouts and leave.

"Sigh.. Couldn't he drive carefully?!" Acchan takes a deep breath and start to pick her books on the ground.Suddenly another hands pick her books to. It's her senpai is helping her. Acchan looks at him, he smiles. After Acchan collects all the books, she get up and bows to her senpai.

"Arigatou.."

He smiles and say "Anytime.. By the way, are you going home?"

"H-haik.." Acchan replies.

"Let's go home together then.."

"OH.. So this is our bitch!!" a voice of a girl heard. Three girls with glamour appearance walk approach them. It's the girls who bullied Acchan before.

"You tease my boyfriend again?!" the girl widened her eyes towards Acchan.

Acchan shakes her head.

"Darl, you misunderstood it. I'm just helping her picking up her dropped books" Acchan's senpai try to ignore.

"Shhh... " the girl put her index finger on the boy's lips. "I know this girl teases you so that's why you try to betray me." The girl raises her hand and about to slap Acchan.

"Acchan!!" a voice of a boy heard and Acchan turn around to see who is calling her.

A good looking boy with classy uniform, walking towards them smiling.

"Yuu?" Acchan thought.

"Hey, I'm waiting for you.. Let's go home," Yuu holds Acchan's wrist.

"Wait!! Who are you?" Acchan's senpai asking Yuu. Looking at the badge on his uniform, he thinks that the boy must be from an elite high school.

"Listen. I heard all the things what happened just now" Yuu said firmly. "Ironic."

Yuu turns to the girs. "Miss, if he is really your boyfriend. Keep him well. Because I'm really sure it's your boyfriend who tries to tease another girl."

Then Yuu turns to the boy. "And you, don't tease Acchan again. I'm Oshima Yuu.. Acchan's boyfriend. There’s no reason for you to tease her, of axpecting to be her boyfriend. She’s not available, dude!"

Yuu turns to the girl again."Now I guess everything is clear. Acchan never tease your boyfriend, and don't you try to bully her again!"

They can't find any words to response this situation. Yuu grabs Acchan's wrist and leave them in dropping jaw, watching Acchan holding hands with a boy from an elite high school.

“You’re going home?” Yuu asks when the two walk on the street side.

“Yes, how could you here?” Acchan asks him curiously.

“Hmm, nothing. I just want to fetch you and… maybe ask you to have an ice cream?” he smirks.

Acchan smiles and blushed. “Why is so sudden?”

“I couldn’t stop thinking about you, and today I couldn’t hold it again. I had to meet you…”

“Sweet talker..” Acchan smirks, with red cheek.

“I know you will say that. But however, that’s the truth. I really into you, Acchan” now he talks more seriously.

Acchan feels nervous. She never sees a boy saying his feeling this honest in front of her.

Seeing Acchan’s nervous face, Yuu tries to make it easy again. “Come on, I’ll treat you. There’s a great ice cream café near here..” Yuu takes Acchan’s books and hold it while his other hand holds Acchan’s hand and they walk together to the café. They talk about everything and Yuu is so expert in making her laugh. He always finds a way to make her happy.

“Yuu, thanks for today” Acchan said while they arrive in front of Takahashi’s residence. “Are you sure you won’t come in?”

He shakes his head. “No, maybe later. I just want to spend my time with you today, not meeting Kai..”

“Hmm.. okay then, thanks for everything” Acchan smiles at him. She turns around and walks in to the door.

“Acchan!” Yuu call her again just before she enters the house.

“Yes?”

“About what I said earlier to your senpai…” Yuu said. “Can I make it true?”

Acchan tries to remember what Yuu mean, when she gets it, she blushed.

“It’s okay, maybe not now…” Yuu said before Acchan could say anything. He smiles and waves his hand then leaves.

Acchan get in the house, heading to her room. She puts her school bag and the books on the table. She throws herself on the bed and spacing out. Her thought replays the earlier moments with Yuu. For Acchan, Yuu is a kind of perfect guy. He’s so kind, gentle, praises girl just like every girl wants, and the most important is he can say honestly and directly what he feels.

“This guy is so sweet.”


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Kai is walking on the hallway of the sport center after their basketball training. They actually had a special training as the forward players. They decide to have a dinner first before they going home. They enter a restaurant not far from the sport center.

“Juri-kun!” a pretty girl walk approach them and hug Jurina.

“Hey, I’m sweaty..” Jurina tries to ignore the hug but the girl seems doesn’t care about it.

Kai standing there like a stone looking at his friend hugging the girl who is looks like older than Jurina.

“Kai, this is Rena” Jurina introduce the girl to Kai.

“Hi, I’m Matsui Rena. Nice to meet you…”

”Oh, I’m Takahashi Kai” Kai shakes her hand. “Your sister?” he asks Jurina.

“Girlfriend, actually…”

“Oh..” Kai just can’t say anything but think that his friend is such a jerk, dating an older girl. Great.

“Dinner?”  Rena asks them.

“Yeah, give this Takahashi the best menu, it’s his first time eating here.. ”

“Okay. Just take a seat..” then Rena leaves them to the kitchen.

Kai and Jurina choose the cozy table and sits there.

“You date an older girl?” Kai said.

“Yes. Why? You never?” Jurina smirks at him.

“Bad boy..”

“She’s pretty. We’ve been together for three months. I was getting back from the basketball match, then I met her here. She’s amazing. You should try to date an older…” Jurina stops talking when he notices Kai is spacing out, doesn’t pay attention to what he said.

He waves his hand in front of Kai’s face. “Dude? What are you looking at?”

“Eh?” Kai look at Jurina who is looking for the direction that Kai looked at before.

Jurina smirks when he sees a sexy girl with a hot outfit sits on another table. The girl is sitting alone while eating her spaghetti.

“C-cup” Jurina smirks at Kai.

“Yeah…”  Kai said. He doesn’t notice that Jurina is teasing him. “Eh? What?” he blushed so hard when notice what Jurina said.

“Oh, man… Come on! It’s normal. Go ahead, she’s alone…”

“What do you mean?”

“Go get that big boobs for a date!” Jurina whispers to Kai.

“What?? No!” Kai shakes his head.

“Come on, don’t be a loser, man!”

“I can’t…”

“Why? You’re afraid? Don’t say that you never with a girl!!” Jurina wides his eyes.

BAMM. Kai feels like Jurina just hit him with basket ball. “I ever with a girl” Kai quickly said. At the time, he thought about the night he spent with Acchan walking around the city.

“Kissing too?”

“Of course… ”Kai try to think again. Of course he has kissed a girl, once… accidentally.
 
“You’re lying, dude! I can see that” Jurina teases him. “Hey, I have a deal. I challenge you to get that girl… in your room… for a night…”

“Crazy” Kai said cruelly.

“Ah, you’re such a loser. Kai, you don’t have to fall in love with her, but look at that boobs! So hot!! Just get them for a night!” Jurina whispers at his ears.

"No."

"Loser."

"I'm not."

"Yes you are."

"I'm not a loser."

Kai stunned with what Jurina said. That’s a shit. But he want to challenge himself too, get a girl for one night stand.

"Okay."

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Post by: _abby_ on May 02, 2013, 12:21:50 PM
Yuu is making a move to acchan      :kekeke:


Thanks for update. 

 :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: korin48 on May 02, 2013, 01:24:32 PM
Girl with big boobs? Dont tell that girl is Haruna??  :cool2:
Yuu is making move to Acchan  :bigdeal:
Kai and Acchan dating scene is so kawaii  :luvluv2:
What?! Jurina challenged Kai to get that girl?!?! :grr: Dont get that girl!! You should only get Acchan in your room and make her yours!!! :kekeke:
Please update faster!! Or else.....  :shifty:
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Post by: Sydney W on May 02, 2013, 02:39:20 PM
Oh no !! Kai don't get into the trap. You & Acchan are destiny to be together. Yuu & Haruna are same.
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Post by: hazwani on May 02, 2013, 03:32:29 PM
lol...


kai you should make acchan love you ..

not haruna  :banghead:

arghhhh..

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Post by: Yuki88 on May 02, 2013, 04:54:58 PM
I kinda have a feeling that the girl with big boobs is Kojiharu XD

And Yuu making his move to Acchan 8D
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Post by: Hii_chan on May 02, 2013, 06:48:19 PM
dont add more Ray, chemicalstar-san
I dont like drama
and you make me so confused
I want Kai and Acchan have one more step
but Haruna and TakaHaru, what can I do? I love this pairing too :cry: :cry:
anyways, thanks for great job :cow:

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Post by: kuro808 on May 02, 2013, 07:30:38 PM
Acchan's reaction will say everything after this chapter.
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Post by: ptrd3009 on May 02, 2013, 11:14:24 PM
wow yuu is make move to acchan
but i prefer kojiyuu XD
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Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 03, 2013, 01:51:04 AM
Kai and Atsuko are cute together on the date
It's good that Yuu saved Acchan
but he's taking his chance to make a move at the same time
Kai should make Acchan fall in love with him...
not that other girl Jurina pointed out
Thank you for the update!!
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Post by: Haruko on May 03, 2013, 02:50:30 AM
Oh no !! Kai don't get into the trap. You & Acchan are destiny to be together. Yuu & Haruna are same.

yeah! dont be a jerk kai!..
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Post by: cisda83 on May 03, 2013, 10:54:18 AM
Wah... Kai 1st experience in public transportation

He didn't have any common sense in normal social life.

Yeah... Kai liking his 1st outing with Atsuko... and he even held her hand....

So cute...  :inlove:

Ah... Yuu became the knight in shiny armor... not Kai...

Eh... Yuu confessed to Atsuko... Would Atsuko accept?

I hope not... I want Atsuko and Kai.... together

Ah... Kai is being challeged to have a one night stand...

He should not have accept it...

I hope he would do the right thing...

I hope he would not be a jerk... playing girl heart just like that...

Who is this C-cup...? Haruna...

Please be Haruna so all the characters are present...

Jun, Rena, Haruna, Yuu, Kai and Atsuko...

I can't wait to see how the story is going to develop...

Thank you for the update

 :wub: :inlove: :heart: :love:
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Post by: kurumi on May 03, 2013, 06:26:04 PM
Thanks for the update! I hope Kai won't have a one night stand with Kojiharu… :(
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Post by: chemicalstar on May 09, 2013, 06:35:43 PM
 Hey all, sorry it’s been so long not updating this fic. I’m in my busy days so, I just wrote this story half chapter. That’s why I made it Part 1 and Part 2. So this is the part 1. I’ll write the part 2 later. Thank you for reading my fic…

(http://i47.tinypic.com/25q8wpg.jpg)

~ CHAPTER 12 Part 1 ~

Spending the whole day after school by just doing the task, studying for school is sometimes makes her bored. Acchan is waiting for Kai to come back home. She knows that Kai sometimes ack not so friendly, but at least, she has someone she can take care about, she can look at, and someone she can ask about the school lesson. But that night, seems like Kai isn’t home yet when the dinner time comes.

“Where’s Kai?” Acchan asks her uncle Kine while having the dinner.

Kine just lift up his shoulders. “I don’t know, he texted me no to fetch him. He said he will back home by taxi. Maybe he will back home late.”

“How come? He has to have dinner..” Acchan said, her face seems so worried.

Kine chuckles. “Don’t be too worry him like that. He can have dinner out there.”

After the dinner, Acchan just goes to her room and doing her homework while waiting for Kai back home. Almost every ten minutes, Acchan looks at the clock. There’s no sign that Kai is back. Until it’s almost 11 pm, Acchan feels tired and decides to get on her bed. Suddenly she hears a sound of a car from outside the house. She quickly gets up and goes to the front door.

Kai open the door slowly, expecting that everyone is already sleeping.
GREK! He opens the door. Unfortunately, there he sees Acchan standing right in front of him, crossing her hands with a spooky look.

“Where have you been?” Acchan asks in cold tone, wides her eyes.

“A-a-cchan.. ” Kai said trembling. “I thought you’re sleeping.”

“Who is that?” suddenly a girl appears behind Kai. Her hands are clinging on Kai’s.

“Urmm.. Oh, nothing, just come in” Kai drag the girl inside, walk over Acchan who stands there dropping her jaw, looking at Kai ignoring her.

Acchan gives a strange look at the girl while she walks over. And so is the girl, she gives a strange and disgusted looks to Acchan.

Kai takes the girl upstairs, this is making Acchan more curious about who is the girl and what will they do up there.

“You have a big house..” the girl said, still clinging her hand on Kai’s arms.

“Uhn, thank you… ” Kai open his room and get in. “This is my room. Comfort yourself, I’ll get some drink. What do you want to?”

“You have cocktail?”

“Of course, just wait here, okay..”

Kai quickly get out of the room and go downstairs. His heart is beating fast, knowing that tonight is probably his big night to lose his virginity. In the end of the stairs he steps on, Acchan is standing cold there, still crossing her arms.

“Where have you been? Have you had your dinner? And… who is that girl?” Acchan said seriously.

“Too much questions. Now make one cocktail, hurry up” Kai said, commanding her to make drinks for him and for his ‘one night girl’. Kai walk over Acchan to the kitchen.

“You never drinks cocktail” Acchan said following him.

“It’s for her. Make me a lemon tea,” Kai said.

“Is she your girlfriend?” Acchan asks him again when they reach the kitchen.

“No. Uh-oh-I mean,.. yes” Kai said, a bit nervous, trying not to look at her.

“She will spend the night here?”

Kai nods, but he doesn’t brave enough to see her face. Acchan’s expression changed, looks like she’s disappointed, fortunately Kai doesn’t see it.

“I will wait upstairs” Kai leaves her.

Seeing this kind of situation, Acchan feels uncomfortable. Kai never told her that he has a girlfriend, even she never see any sign that Kai has a girlfriend. It’s so sudden that Kai takes a girl to spend the night in his house, in his room. Even though Acchan knows that Kai is a bit stubborn and arrogant, but she knows exactly that Kai is actually a good boy. The way Kai act is so strange tonight.

After she finished making the drinks, she goes upstairs and knocks the door. Kai open the door a little. How shocked Acchan when she finds Kai without his shirt on, but only on his jeans with unbuckle belt. Acchan looks at him from top to bottom. Kai notices it, and he feels so nervous looking at Acchan frowning at him.

“Yours is that lemon tea” Acchan pointing at the lemon tea glass. “That cocktail is hers.”

Kai takes the drinks from Acchan’s hands. “Okay, good night…” He quickly closes the door. Acchan feels something choked her heart and throat by seeing what she saw just now. She walks heavily and slowly downstairs. Her sleepiness is disappear. Now she can’t sleep anymore. Thinking what probably Kai does with than unkown girl in the room. Acchan walk to the bar table and sit there, she cross her hands on the table, leaning her chin on her hands and spacing out.

“I thought he’s not that type of guy…”


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Okay, that's it. I know it's too short
 But I told you it's only the part 1. So how was it? Please leave some comments. Just wanna know what do you think about this fic.
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Post by: hara on May 09, 2013, 06:53:41 PM
i really enjoy ur fanfic ^___^  :heart:
i love the story ~


please, keep writing :)
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Post by: korin48 on May 09, 2013, 07:13:06 PM
What the!??!?! Kai!! What the f*** are you doing!?!?   :on voodoo:
And you Acchan!! Do something!!! You shouldnt let him lost his virginity to that girl!!!  :angry1:
Please update fast!!!! I wanna know what happen next!!!! :tantrum:
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Post by: kuro808 on May 09, 2013, 07:34:50 PM
Seriously lol on Kai's part

Although I wonder....

Can he follow through?
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Post by: POPCAT on May 09, 2013, 08:23:49 PM
 :stoned: really Kai really
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Post by: abcari on May 09, 2013, 08:37:51 PM
wait, what? Kai! dont do that!? D:< Acchan! dont let kai do that! D:
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Post by: Haruko on May 10, 2013, 03:08:42 AM
What the!??!?! Kai!! What the f*** are you doing!?!?   :on voodoo:
And you Acchan!! Do something!!! You shouldnt let him lost his virginity to that girl!!!  :angry1:
Please update fast!!!! I wanna know what happen next!!!! :tantrum:

MMm maybe kai gonna be unconscious... or something likethat
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Post by: kurumi on May 10, 2013, 10:27:01 AM
nnn… kanashisugiru :cry: I feel sad for Acchan already!
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Post by: cisda83 on May 10, 2013, 12:17:55 PM
What the heck... Kai what are you doing....

Poor Atsuko need to see that...

Kai please come to you sense before you are too late to take everything back

If Kai did have a one night stand with that girl...

I think he will lose Atsuko for real... in this case may be to Yuu...

What's going to happen next?

Would Kai able to stop himself from making the biggest mistake of his life?

Would Atsuko hate Kai for doing this?

What about Yuu attention toward Atsuko?

And Kai bet with Jurina....?

Can't wait to find out

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: chemicalstar on May 11, 2013, 07:39:05 AM
LOL... Thanks for the comments of Chapter 12 Part 1. So here's the continuation.. I hope you like it :)

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CHAPTER 12 PART 2


~ meanwhle inside Kai's room ~

“Here’s your drink” Kai gives the glass to the girl who is laying on his bed sexily with her underwear only. Kai sits down on the bed, looking at the girl drink the cocktail in sensual style, glancing at him playfully.

“Here, try this one..” the girl gives her glass to Kai and force Kai to drink half of the cocktail.

“No, I don’t like it.. aahh” the caress his chest and pinch his nipple slowly, making Kai moans in pleasure and drink it. The girl put the glass on the table near the bed and then pushes Kai down. She crawl on his body, kissing his chest while caressing all over his body, from his chest to his private part which is still covered by his jeans. It makes Kai so weak, he can’t think of anything, just drowned in pleasure she gave.

“Is this your first time?” ask the girl, very close to his face, Kai can feel her breath when suddenly, she squeeze his bulge down there. “So cute” she touch his lips.

Pppprrrrhhhrrrrhhhttt…

“Geez, are you farting?!” Kai suddenly pushes the girl to his side. “Ewwhh.. stink!”

The girl hold her stomach and then farting again. “Urrghh.. can I use your toilet?”

Kai pointing at his toilet while his other hand holds his nose, “There!”

The girl rushingly runs to the toilet while Kai loose his feeling to make love that night. “Geez, how lame is that girl..”

Kai gets up and wear his clothes on, while suddenly he feels the same way too. “Oh my… why do I.. Ugh” Kai runs to the donstairs and get in the toilets since the toilets in his bedroom is used by the girl.

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The girl walk downstairs, bringing her handbag, looks like she’s rushing to go. Across the living room, she meets Acchan.

"Where is he?"

"Bathroom," Acchan answers shortly while pointing the direction to the bathroom.

"Tell Takeshi-san that I'm leaving. I think I'm not in the good mood tonight.." the go then walk away to the door leaving the house.

A minute later, Kai go out from the bathroom. He walks across the living room and Acchan is standing there, crossing her arms with the black aura.

"She's not your girlfriend!" she said.

"Eh? What do you mean? Of course she's my girlfriend!"

"You lied!" Acchan said with angry tone.

"WHY? YOU'RE JEALOUS?" now his voice is raising, seems like the two is going to fight or something.

"IF SHE'S YOUR GIRLFRIEND, SHE WON'T CALL YOU TAKESHI AND LEAVING, YOU IDIOT!!" this time Acchan is the one who shouts at him.

"Ta-Takeshi?!!!" Kai frowns. "Ugh.." Kai rubs his stomach, suddenly he feels like his stomach is going to explode again. "Argh, shit!!" he turns around and quickly runs to the bathroom, leaving Acchan there alone.

"Acchan, is everything alright?" a maid is coming, she woken up hearing the two shouting each other.

"Ah, everything's okay. Don't worry..."

"Are you sure?"

Acchan nods and smiles, pretending that there's nothing happened. "Uhn, please continue to take some rest."

The maid leaves again. Acchan look at the bathroom door. She walks approaching  it then pins her left ear on the door. She knocks it slowly.

Knock..knock... "Kai, are you okay??"

"No! I'm aahh... I don't know, my stomaaahhh..  I guess I had a diarhea" he answers from inside.

"Diarhea?" Acchan thought. "Did he drink it too?"
"Kai, what did you eat today?!"

"I don't know, but I swear I'll never drink cocktail again!!" he shouts.

"Crap! He drank it!" Acchan thought. Ahe quickly get some medicine from the medic box.

After feeling better, Kai slowly walks upstairs to his bedroom. He changes his clothes into his pajama and crawls onto the bed.

He takes a deep sigh when he lays his head down on the pillow. He spacing out, remembering what just happened to him earlier. He takes a look at the clock and find it out it's already 1AM.

"I shouldn't have done it. Sigh... I'll kill Jurina tomorrow" he thought.

Knock.. Knock..

Acchan comes in the room, holding a glass of water and a pack of medicine. Kai turns his head to her when she walks approach and sit on the side of the bed.

"Here, drink it" Acchan open the medicine pack and give him a pill. Kai takes it then Acchan helps him to drink the water.

"Ugh... I feel so weak. Getting diarhea is bad." Kai said, laying his head down again. "Thanks God, you're here to take care of me."

Hearing what Kai just said makes Acchan feels guilty. This is because of her.

"I'm sorry..." Acchan said in lower tone.

"Eh?"

"It's all my fault. I added some laxative to the cocktail." She looks down.

"WHAT?!" Kai feels shock. "Aaahh so that's why.."

"But I don't know that you would drink it too. I thought it would only works on her" she pouts, Kai stares at her, realizing how cute she is.

"Sigh.. So you did it?!"

Acchan nods, "I'm sorry." Kai chuckles.

"Eh? You're not angry?" Acchan surprised of Kai's expression.

Kai change his fce expression and pouts, "Of course I'm angry. Baka!"

"Sorry.." Acchan grabs his hand, begging to be apologized. "So who is that girl?"

Kai lift his shoulder. "I don't know."

"Lie!! If you don't know her, then why you took her home and doing..."

"Doing what?"

"Ano..." Acchan’s face becomes red.

"It's just a bet."

"What? You did that to a girl just for a bet?! How rude are you!" Acchan hit his chest and Kai groans in pain.

"We did nothing!!" Kai shouts try to defend himself. "I mean.. We were almost doing that until your laxative works. Ugh.. " Kai pinches Acchan's nose.

"But thanks" Kai looks at her. "I actually don't want to do that with random girls. It's too precious."

"Then why you took the bet?" Acchan pouts, still can't accept what he just did.

"She's hot. Couldn't you see it?" he smirks.

"BAKA!!" once again, Acchan slaps him. Something in her heart says: am I not that hot?
“Go to sleep!” Acchan gets up and leaves him, she walks to the door and before she turns off the light, Kai calls her again.

“Atsuko..”

“Yes?”

“Don’t leave me”

Acchan’s face getting more red of what Kai just said. Thinking about something else.

Kai chuckles, “I don’t mean of what you think, Atsuko.. Why are you blushing? Hehe”

Acchan pouts as Kai teased her, ”Good night!” she quickly turn off the lights and close the door.

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Post by: kuro808 on May 11, 2013, 07:45:39 AM
So he ends up chickening out and drinks the alcohol :lol:

Acchan has to get some sense into him
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Post by: korin48 on May 11, 2013, 08:24:59 AM
Good job Acchan!!!  :kekeke: :hiakhiakhiak: :farofflook:
Acchan blushing is so kawaii!!  :on lol:
Thanks for update!!  :ding:
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Post by: cisda83 on May 11, 2013, 09:38:09 AM
Ah... Atsuko is so naughty giving laxative in the cocktail...  :lol:

And Kai also drank it....

He is being punished...

Atsuko is so jealous and she wanted to ruin Kai's romance time...

Ah.. at least Kai is not so upset with the outcome... He doesn't want to waste his 1st time with random person...

Kai still asking Atsuko not to leave him... I think he is scared that his attitude previously is making Atsuko hate him...

I think Kai is starting to feel something for Atsuko... like he want to always have Atsuko beside him... always in his presence...

In other hand, Atsuko wanted to be notice by Kai... and wanted Kai to think she is 'HOT'.... I think Atsuko is developing some feeling for Kai too

What's going to happen with Atsuko and Kai relationship?

How about Kai and Jurina bet?

And how about Atsuko and Yuu?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Post by: DC2805 on May 11, 2013, 05:02:47 PM
What a close shave! Guys at that age can be childish...Jurina suggesting such a bet and Kai is game for it too... shame shame  XD
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Post by: Haruko on May 11, 2013, 05:59:50 PM
good job acchan.. good job :B
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Post by: Hii_chan on May 11, 2013, 06:02:14 PM
Acchan you're so intelligant :w00t: put laxative in cocktail  :deco:
Acchan's jealous is so scare :twisted:
and Kai deserve that
ahh..I like sweet talking part between Kai and Atsuko
please make more sweet scene ( and hot scene  XD )
thanks for good job  :cow:

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Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 12, 2013, 01:36:49 AM
stupid Kai taking a girl home all for a bet
Acchan pulled a good one
laxative... smart
Thanks for the update!
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Post by: abcari on May 12, 2013, 01:41:08 AM
good move there Acchan!
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Post by: Sydney W on May 12, 2013, 03:14:12 AM
The cocktail save the day !!! ^_^
Love the interaction between Atsuko x Kai. Just so sweet & caring.
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Post by: chemicalstar on May 12, 2013, 11:43:16 AM
 THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS…
So happy that so many people still reading my fic. Well,  everyone, here’s the new chapter.

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CHAPTER 13 PART 1


Day by day has passed away. Jurina finally asked for Kai’s apologize by making him into trouble with a random bitch they just met in the restaurant. Rena helped Jurina to understand Kai’s decision not to make out with random girls but with the still unknown precious one. And the deal to publish that Kai’s never with a girl is cancelled. Jurina deserve their friendship more than a stupid bet.

Almost everyday, Yuu always texts Acchan just like good morning message and any other random sweet messages. It gains Acchan’s feeling towards him. But still, even though Yuu acts like they’re couple, they’re not officially together yet. 

In the other side, everyday feels like the same busy day for Kai as a super person who has to learn everything more than regular students do. He just spent his time at home only for sleeping at night, and the spend all day outside. He almost has no quality times to get interactions with people at home, including Acchan. But he glad that Acchan always there to take care of him, because he’s not a type of person who care about his heatlh. Even if he’s outside, Acchan always texts him to remind him for lunch, dinner, and anything.

Once Friday night, Kai calls Yuu to remind him that the next day the two has to go Takahashi’s Corp office. They had a school project to learn about the business process, since the two are in the same team, Kai offers him to take some research for their school project in his family’s corp.

“But I don’t know where’s the office location exactly” Yuu said on the phone.

“Just come to my house at 8 am tomorrow, we will go there together” Kai said. “Don’t forget to bring our project task, okay.”

“Okay, see ya..”

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“Kai, wake up” Acchan’s shaking Kai’s shoulder while he’s sleeping tightly on his bed.

“Hmmm…” he murmured and turns around to escape from her. This is the same usual scene that always happens every morning. Kai always sets wake up alarm, but he always turns it off and sleep againThat’s the time Acchan has to go to his bedroom and make sure that he’s really waking up.

“Kai, come on wake up…”

“Gimme five minutes more” he murmured, still closing his eyes.

“Okay, no breakfast today!” Acchan slaps Kai’s shoulder.

Kai open his eyes when she slaps his shoulder. He slowly gets up from his bed then sits on its side, still half sleepy. “Ugh, Atsuko, you act like a mother!!” he said in low tone while looking down, but unfortunately Acchan can hear it.

“Am I look like a mother to you?” Acchan said while opening the curtains and lets the sunlight get in through the windows.

Kai look up at her when she said that. There he looks a black haired girl with a beautiful white dress, standing near his windows and the sun shines her pretty face. Kai stunned looking at her for a while.

Seeing him stunned like that, Acchan smiles and at the same time, she feels awkward as her heart beats so fast.

“It’s an angel” he murmured. But then he back to reality again. He quickly looks away.

“I’ll wait you in the dining room” Acchan said then leaves.   

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It’s actually a long weekend, their off day of school. Kai walk downstairs, when suddenly he hears a car horn in front of the house. A maid go to the front door to see who’s coming.

“Good morning, Takahashi boy!!” Yuu walks in, smiling cheerfully.

Kai looks at him in confuse, he take a look at his watch, “It’s still 7, what makes you come so early?”

“I’m not looking for you” he pull out his tongue to Kai, “I’m looking for her..” Yuu looks at Acchan who’s walking from the dining room approaching them.

“Ohayou, Acchan!” Yuu greets her cheerfully.

“Ohayou..” Acchan replies him.

Looking at this awkward situation, Kai rolls his eyes and turns around, leaving them to the dining room. He takes a glass of milk on the table and drinks it.

“HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Acchan…” Kai hears Yuu said, and he suddenly choked and squirts the milk inside his mouth. The milk squirted all over the table and his shirt. His maids panicly coming and helps him to fix the mess he made with the milk. But, the other scene of the house where Acchan and Yuu are, the mess up scene of Kai is not noticed at all. Lame. Kai sits down on the chair, keeps his eyes to take a look of what are they doing in the living room. Kai can see that Yuu gives something wrapped by a purple sparkling plastic to Acchan and she takes it happily.

“You can open it if you want” Yuu said. Now Kai keep his eyes to see what’s inside the gift he gave. Acchan opens unwrap the gift, and slowly she takes out a cute brown puppy doll.

“Aww… so cute!!” She looks so happy by what Yuu gave to her. “Thanks, Yuu… I don’t know how to requite it.”

“Naah.. it’s okay, I’m glad to see you happy, Acchan” Yuu said, smiling sweet to her.

“Oh, have you had breakfast? Let’s join us” Acchan suddenly notice that Kai is not around and actually it’s time for them to have breakfast.

Acchan puts the doll on the table in the living room then takes Yuu to the dining room. There, Kai sits down with innocent face, acts like there’s nothing happened.

”I’m sorry to make you wait..” Acchan sits down then look at him strangely.

“What?” Kai said, looking at Acchan.

“What happened with your shirt?” Acchan touch his chest, his shirt is wet. “Is it milk?”

“Uhmm.. yeah, just a little accident” Kai answers, removing Acchan’s hand from his chest nervously.

Acchan sighs. “Couldn’t you be more careful, Kai…”

“It’s okay, I asked a maid to bring me a new one” Kai said. Then they continue to eat. The breakfast being the most awkward breakfast in Kai’s life, the worst moment he ever had. He just sits there, being an unknown person watching Yuu and Acchan talking happily.

Acchan starts to talk everything about her. That she likes Yuu’s gift very much because she likes dog. “When I was child, I asked my dad that I want a pet, I like dogs” Acchan said. “But suddenly we moved out of town, to this house exactly, and Dad didn’t allow me to have a pet.”

Kai just keep silent and listening. He quickly eats his breakfast and leave them to his room. “I’m done.” Kai packs his bag and get ready to go. Kine is ready in front of the house with the car. After the breakfast is done, Yuu follows Kai to get in the car and they go to the office.

Inside the car, Kai just keep silent.

“Dude, do you have a teething problem? You’ve been keeping silence this morning” Yuu notices it, but Kai doesn’t want to say anything.


~ Kai ~

I feel so uneasy this morning. I don’t wanna talk to everyone. I asked myself if I’m mad of someone else, but I said no. I’m not mad at anyone, at Acchan, at Yuu. No. I’m just… maybe I hate myself. Yeah, I hate myself for knowing nothing about Acchan’s birthday. All these years I’m living with her together, and I just notice her birthday??!! Oh, maybe if it’s not because of Yuu, I wouldn’t know about her birthday. Geez, I don’t know why do I really hate myself now.

“Kai, may I ask a favor?” Yuu breaks my thoughts.

“Eh? What is it?”

“I want to take Acchan out for dinner…” Yuu said. “You know, it’s her birthday.”

Deep inside my heart, I don’t know why do I want to ignore Yuu’s wish. But in the other side, I think today the one who made Acchan happy was Yuu. And actually I feel really glad to see her happy… even if it wasn’t me who made her happy. But at least, she’s happy.

“Can I?” once again, Yuu breaks my thoughts.

“Uhn, okay..” oh, okay, now I don’t know the word ‘okay’ that just came out from my mouth made me choked.

Yuu smirks happily, “Thanks dude!!” He quickly takes his phone and type something, I guess he texts Acchan, asks her to go out for dinner tonight. Ten minutes later, my phone’s ringing. I open it, it’s Acchan sends me a message…

From: Acchan
To: Kai
Message:
Kai, thank you to let me go for dinner with Yuu. I’m gonna make you special dinner before I go

See? She’s so happy. Yesh, she’s happy, and I’m happy too because of it. But.. I feel something choked.

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Their research for the school project is over at 2 PM. Yuu tells Kai that he’s leaving ahead, but Kai choose to stay at the office since some of the office chiefs ask him to stay and discuss something about the Takahashi’s Corp future he has to hold later.

In the evening, Yuu pick up Acchan at Takahashi’s residence. He wears a neat suit, coming with a car and knocks the door. Yuu turns around when he notices someone’s opening the door. It’s Acchan, wearing a beautiful dress, with some make up that makes her more looks like a Hollywood actress.

“Good, evening..” Acchan greets him.

Yuu smiles at her. “Ready?” he gives his hand. Acchan takes it and then they get in the car and go to a special expensive restaurant that Yuu reserved before.

“Thanks for bring me to this beautiful place” Acchan said, after they eating their dinner.

Yuu smiles. “Living in a rich family, I thought you often to come to a place like this…”

Acchan laughs. “Well, it’s opposite to what you’re thinking. I’m the one who always take Kai to eat on the streets.”

“Eh? Why?” Yuu surprised.

“He was a stubborn boy who always hang on his family property. But I find a good side of him, so I try to take him to live general life... He deserved it, he’s a good person, actually…” Acchan said, she doesn’t notice that she’s smiling while she tells Yuu about Kai.

“Well, there must be a good friendship between you two” Yuu said.

“I think it’s more than a friendship” Acchan talks in low tone, almost whispering, and she’s spacing out.

At the same time, Yuu’s phone’s ringing, makes him surprised and doesn’t notice what Acchan said just now.


..::..::..::. .Nyan – nyan Calling ..::..::..::..





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Okay that's it.. (^.^)v
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Post by: kuro808 on May 12, 2013, 11:46:57 AM
I would like to be the fanboy and just slap Kai for being an idiot but I like reading this a lot and Yuu getting Acchan was an eye-opening moment but Kai still can get his shot yet
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Post by: hazwani on May 12, 2013, 12:15:26 PM
hahaa..
kai should make somenthing for atsuko too..

i want more sweet moment between kai and atsuko..

wahhh.. nyan nyan  :heart:
wah..
i love kojiyuu  :inlove:
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Post by: POPCAT on May 12, 2013, 12:29:54 PM
aw so cute  :shy2: :imdead:
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Post by: 7sam14 on May 12, 2013, 12:46:53 PM
Yay!!! an Update!!!!


Yuu Taking out Atsuko for dinner during her birthday...

Kai should give Atsuko a gift or something...  :cry:

Need a Sweet moment between Atsumina...

Nyan-Nyan calling yuu...

Thanks for the Update!!!!
hope u can update soon!!!
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Post by: korin48 on May 12, 2013, 01:06:41 PM
What? Nyan-nyan called Yuu in the phone?? Don't tell me she is Yuu's ex-girlfriend?  :shock:
What.... What if Yuu break Acchan's heart??  :on speedy: but don't worry Kai is there for her!  :cool1:
Kai needs to buy gift for Acchan too!! :bigdeal:
And thanks for update!  :kneelbow:
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Post by: DC2805 on May 12, 2013, 01:12:55 PM
Is Yuu 2-timing? Here comes Nyan-Nyan...
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Post by: Sydney W on May 12, 2013, 01:45:39 PM
Felt sad for Kai not knowing it is Acchan birthday. Owhh !!!

I hope Kai can come out with something special for Acchan as the night is still young !! Kai, do something before Acchan heart belong to other.

Nyan-nyan calling Yuu, is she Yuu girlfriend? Hahaha.
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Post by: cisda83 on May 12, 2013, 02:10:59 PM
Good that everything is fine for Kai in friendship... but in love.... he has no progress whatsoever....   :smhid

But Atsuko is slowly falling for Yuu... Kai, do something... if not you're going to have no Atsuko....  :angry:

Ah... Atsuko looked like an angel for Kai there for a moment...  :love:

Well, Kai is so upset with the development between Atsuko and Yuu...

Everything is his fault... he has always been only thinking about himself... He didn't even know Atsuko's B'day and He has been living with Atsuko since he was a kid...

He can't understand as to why he doesn't feel nice and happy with allowing Atsuko going out with someone else...

He can be very dense of his feeling... Please relies your feeling soon... before Atsuko really really fell for Yuu for REAL...

Ah... Atsuko saying she has feeling for Kai more than a friendship... Yeah... Kai, you still have a chance to be with Atsuko so get her soon....

Don't Yuu relies that Atsuko always seems to talk about Kai every time they are together...?

Eh... Nyan Nyan... Haruna is an acquaintance with Yuu... Haruna is Yuu girlfriend?

Ah.. Yuu is really a playboy.... Poor Haruna for being cheated on...

Atsuko, Don't fall for Yuu's sweet words... Follow your heart, not your head

What's going to happen next with Haruna, Yuu, Kai and Atsuko?

Would Atsuko able to be with Kai?

Would Kai able to relies his feeling...?

Would Yuu be two-timing Haruna?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Post by: K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS on May 12, 2013, 05:07:15 PM
NyanNyan calling......

Yuu I'll kill you if you're cheating on her  :cry:

Kai is jealous  :shy2:

I can't wait for the next chapter  :mon loveflower:
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Post by: Hii_chan on May 12, 2013, 05:30:33 PM
KAI go and get your girl a romance birthday
jealousy, jealousy, kai is jealous :roll:
and Yuu, you better dont be a womanizer if not Nyan Nyan will punish you :pimp:
thanks for fast update
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Post by: kurumi on May 12, 2013, 10:23:46 PM
Yuu doesn't need Acchan if he already has Nyan Nyan! :angry:
I hope there is progress between Kai and Acchan soon…
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Post by: abcari on May 12, 2013, 11:21:20 PM
oooh!! nyan nyan!!! kojiyuu!! xD I want to know what about the story with the two of them >w<

Kai! you idiot! go and make Acchan happy!! D:<
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Post by: Haruko on May 13, 2013, 03:29:21 AM
Kai is jealous.. come kai fight for your wife!!...

oh oh nyanyan.. is coming..
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Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 13, 2013, 07:44:23 AM
I feel bad for Kai not knowing Acchan's birthday
He was definitely jealous tho... so cute
It was nice of Yuu to take Acchan out for dinner...
but is he cheating on NyanNyan... hmm
Thanks for the update!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on May 13, 2013, 10:26:28 AM
 Hi all…. It’s a good news that I have an update for you. I think the previous chapter is too short, so I make it the Chapter 13 Part 1.

Thank you for all the comments that I can’t reply it one by one, but I really appreciate them so much. So, here’s the Part 2. Enjoy ;)

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CHAPTER 13 PART 2

~ Yuu ~


..::..::..::. .Nyan – nyan Calling ..::..::..::..



I feel like getting a heart attack, reading those words onmy phone screen when it suddenly ringing while I’m listening to Acchan. She is Kojima Haruna, or I used to call her Nyan nyan,…. my fiancee.

FIANCEE??

I know you must be shocked. My parents and hers are bestfriends, we’re bestfriends too. I used to play with her since we were kid. She my closest friend I ever had. She’s beautiful and I like her. A long long time ago when we were child, our parents held a little party that they decided to make us wife and husband. That;s when I was a kid, so Haruna and I engaged. We know that we’re engaged although we were only primary school students. But because we like each other, we agree about the engagement.

We’re so close to each other, but when people ask me if she’s my girlfriend or not, I said… no. She’s not my girlfriend. She’s my closefriend, my fiancee, the one I will get married with in the future. She loves me so much, sometimes, more than the way I do to her.

Three years ago, Nyan nyan and her family go abroad. Although we used to send email and chatting to each other by internet, but our relationship is not the same like it was before. But I know that we still love each other. Then, one year ago, I moved to this town and met a blonde boy called Kai. He becomes my bestfriend. The first time I visited his house, I met a beautiful angel named Maeda Atsuko. That was the first time I forgot that I am an engaged man.

I’m falling for Acchan so much. Day by day, I love her even more. Last night, I can’t sleep thinking about my engagement with Nyan nyan. Since I found the one I love now, I think I will tell my parents to rescript the engagement.  I’ve found a girl I love more than Nyan nyan.

I quickly reject the call. I know I miss Nyan nyan so much. It’s been two weeks or something that we haven’t call each other. But now I’m with Acchan. I don’t want to ruin my plan to confess my love tonight.

“Sorry, what did you say just now?” I said, I just lost my concentration, I didn’t hear what Acchan said recently.

“Eh? About Kai… I think it’s more than friendship” Acchan said, I can see her smile. “He’s like my son.”

“Son?? Hahaha” we laugh.

“You’re funny, Acchan. Uhm… what if we go to walk around? The scenere outside is beautiful” I said.

She agreed, we both leaving the restaurant and walk around. There is a peace and beautiful park near the restaurant with the sparkling lamps all over the road.

“Nee, Acchan…” I hold her hand, she look up at me. The glare of her eyes… oh I can’t resist it. I take a deep breath to gather my bravery.
“Would you be my girl?”

At first, she looks so surprised. But then slowly she shows me her beautiful smile, she nods.. My heart beats fast as she gives the sign that she wants to be my girlfriend. My heart is like going to explode.

“Thank you…” I hug her. We’re officially together now.

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Time flies by, it’s already 11 PM and Acchan ask Yuu to go back home because it’s already late of night.

“Thank you for today, Yuu… For the gift, the dinner, and everything” Acchan said, while they’re reaching the front door of Takahashi’s residence.

“You’re welcome…” Yuu walks closer when Acchan stops in front of the door. He move closer and raise his hand to caress her cheek. Acchan smiles as she stares at his eyes. Slowly, Yuu moves his face closer to hers, then he capture her lips by his. It’s a sweet kiss until…

WOOFF!!

The two feel shocked by the sudden sound. A sound of dog’s bark. Their lips parted.

 “You hear that?” Acchan looks at Yuu.

“Yes, a dog’s barking” Yuu said, still holding her cheek, their face is an inch away from each other.

“We don’t pet a dog here.”

“Maybe your neighbour’s dog” Yuu said. Acchan looks around, but she found nothing. “Alright, just forget it… You better go home, it’s going late.”

“Uhn, good night Acchan..” Yuu waves his hand and get in the car and leaves.

Acchan still standing in front of the door until Yuu’s car is out of sight. She looks around again when she heard the barking sound again. She feels like never heard any dog’s bark all this time. Acchan open the door and get in the house. All the lights is turned off, only some warm dim lights turned on. Acchan walks inside.

When she reach the living room, she finds a basket tied with a red ribbon, placed in the middle of the living room.

WOOF!! WOOF!!

The barking sound heard more clear as Acchan walks closer to the basket. It has a paper card on the basket, near the ribbon which written “HAPPY BIRTHDAY” there. Acchan takes the paper card and fold it back. Behind the paper, there’s a written

“Sorry, I’m late.

-Kai.”

Acchan smiles and and opens the basket. There, she finds a cute little brown puppy.
“Aww… so cute” the puppy barks cutely on her embrace. Acchan so surprised and happy for the gift. This morning she got a puppy doll then tonight, she got a reall puppy. She hugs the puppy and in a moment, the puppy starts to like her. Acchan looks around the house to look for Kai. Nobody’s there, everyone must be sleeping. Acchan checks the dining room, no one there. But something surprises her, there’s a lot of food on the dining table. It’s the food she made for Kai’s dinner. Kai hasn’t eat them yet.

Then, Acchan walks upstairs, heading to Kai’s room. She check his room. It’s unlocked, so she comes inside. It’s all dark, the lamp is turned off. There, she can see Kai is laying on the bed. She sigh as she looks at her master sleeping with the cold temperature of the air conditioner, and he wear no blanket. Then Acchan walks closer to where he lays. She takes the blanket and covers his body with it. She bent down on her knees in front of him. For seconds, she stare at his cute sleeping face, so peaceful.

“Thank you...” she whispers and smiles. She caress his cheek, stares at him for a while then stands up. She’s about to leave but then Kai grabs his wrist.

Acchan turns around and see him opening his eyes.

”Eh? you haven’t sleep?”

“How can I sleep in this hungry stomach” he pouts.

Acchan giggles. ”Why you didn’t eat the dinner I made?”

“I saw the dinner. There’s a lot of food and looks like delicious. Not as usual.” Kai get up and sit on his bed while Acchan walk closer and sits on the edge on his bed too. “It’s awkward if I eat them by myself.”

Acchan doesn’t say anything, she doesn’t know what Kai meant.

“Accompany me for dinner?” Kai said with puppy eyes, begging like a child.

“Mou..but I’m already had my dinner”

“I don’t care, you usually eat a lot. It’s so rare” Kai pouts.

Thinking about the gift he gave her, Acchan agree to accompany him having dinner. So they go to the dining room. Acchan just drink a glass of milk while Kai eats his dinner. She sits in front of him. Watching him eat his dinner in hurry. He got choked, then she offer him water. She stares at him and smiles.

“What?” Kai notice that Acchan is staring at him. He acts nervously.

Acchan smiles, “Nothing. It’s just... you can be so nice sometimes.”  Kai blushed red and act awkwardly.

After dinner, Kai goes to the living room while Acchan makes up the dining table. When Acchan finishes the dishes, she walks out of the dining room, she hears a sound of music. She takes a look at the living room, seeing Kai standing there with the music on, and the warm dreary lights of the room.

Kai walks to her, the offer his hand… “Shall we dance?” he acts like a prince asking a dance from a princess in the ballroom.

Acchan laughed a bit.

“Why do you laugh? Come on, it’s your birthday, right?”

Acchan takes his hand. Kai pull her closer to him. They dancing slowly, enjoying the romantic instrumental music in the middle of the living room. Kai stares at him deeply, they stares each other. Slowly, Acchan feels that Kai getting closer to her. Suddenly, she feels a pair of lips touch hers. Kai kisses her. It feels so warm and she likes it. It’s like en electric shock to her. But she doesn’t reply it, she remember about Yuu, she quickly pulls herself from the kiss and pushes Kai away slowly.

“Kai, I’m…” Acchan lowe her head down, but suddenly Kai cut her words.

“Uh, I’m sorry Atsuko..” Kai quickly said in panic. “Sorry, I don’t mean to..” Kai backs to the reality, where he realizes that he just lost of control.
“I’m sorry, Atsuko… I’m out of control, sorry”

Acchan nods. “It’s okay… ”

Silence for a while. Acchan looks at the clock. “Kai it’s so late, let’s go to sleep, okay?” Acchan tries to change the topic.

Kai nods. “Okay” Kai release his hand that holding hers. He takes the remote and turn off the music.

“Thanks for the gift. I’m glad you allow me to pet a dog” she smiles. “Good night, Kai.” Acchan leaves him and go to her room, taking the dog with her.

Kai go back to his room, he props himself on the bed. He stares at the ceiling, spacing out. Kai realizes that he’s so stupid by kissing her so sudden. Acchan didn’t reply the kiss.

“She doesn’t have the same feeling like mine… I’m expecting too much from her.”

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The next morning, Kai tells Acchan again to forgive him about the kiss last night. “Just forget it, let’s say.. there’s nothing happened, okay?”

“Humm.. okay” Acchan said.

“Promise me you won’t change at all?” Kai said seriously.

Acchan chuckels. She can see how much Kai doesn’t want to lose her from his life. She knows exactly what Kai’s feeling that the only one can take care of him and understand him is only herself. “Promise!!” Acchan pinches Kai’s nose, just to make the situation back to normal.

“Go take a shower, Mr. Blonde!”

Kai sigh, “Ahhh… here comes the mother!!”

Kai go to his room and take a shower. Below the warm water showering his muscular body, Kai deeply think about what just happened. Kai gets the point. Acchan doesn’t feel the same way. Now he just let Yuu together with Acchan, although sometimes, it’s hard for Kai to see them together. But Kai acts professional that he doesn’t want to change everything between him and Acchan. He doesn’t want to lose Acchan.


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Don't mad at me, it's totally a drama.

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on May 13, 2013, 11:26:20 AM
Nice... another update already...

OMG... he is engaged already... to Haruna...

And he would like to go out with Atsuko...

I think it's very unfair for Atsuko... He should be a free man before he pursue any relationship.

Not only that, he should break things off with Haruna before hand...

Because until now I think Haruna is still waiting and keeping their promise to get married when they are coming on age.

To me, he is a coward... and don't have any sense of responsibility at all...

That kind of person... can not be trusted and would not be able to do well inside or outside society.

I think he somehow... blaming his parents from engaging him to Haruna while he is still young.

Ah... Atsuko accepted Yuu's confession... why?

Eh... Atsuko's feeling for Kai is motherly love... is she for real...?!

Ah... Kai is so cute and sweet... asking Atsuko to keep him accompany while eating and giving Atsuko's real doggy for present.

Dancing together with romantic music as a background... and Kissing... So ROMANTIC...  :inlove:

Atsuko felt something for Kai.... when they were kissing... but because she already accepted Yuu... she can't do anything...

Kai was too late.... if only he did NOT give permission for Yuu bringing Atsuko out... He could have been with Atsuko...

Kai... is in pain everyday.. he needed to see the one that he is in love with spending romantic time together in front of him.

He could not do anything....  :cry:

What about Haruna... would she come back...?

Have Yuu taken care the problem about his engagement after that night he officially became Atsuko's boyfriend?

What would Atsuko do when she find out about Yuu's status?

What about Kai... would he not able to be with Atsuko?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Atsuko, Kai, Yuu and Haruna?

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs



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Post by: korin48 on May 13, 2013, 12:30:32 PM
“Nee, Acchan…” I hold her hand, she look up at me. The glare of her eyes… oh I can’t resist it. I take a deep breath to gather my bravery.
“Would you be my girl?”

At first, she looks so surprised. But then slowly she shows me her beautiful smile, she nods.. My heart beats fast as she gives the sign that she wants to be my girlfriend. My heart is like going to explode.

“Thank you…” I hug her. We’re officially together now.

What?!?! AtsuYuu became official!?!?!  :grr: Why didnt Yuu answer Nyan-nyan's calling!?!?!  :on voodoo:

When she reach the living room, she finds a basket tied with a red ribbon, placed in the middle of the living room.

The barking sound heard more clear as Acchan walks closer to the basket. It has a paper card on the basket, near the ribbon which written “HAPPY BIRTHDAY” there. Acchan takes the paper card and fold it back. Behind the paper, there’s a written

“Sorry, I’m late.

-Kai.”

Acchan smiles and and opens the basket. There, she finds a cute little brown puppy.

Aww! SO KAWAII!!!! Kai's gift is waaayyyyy tooooo MUCH BETTER than Yuu's gift!! :wriggly:

Acchan takes his hand. Kai pull her closer to him. They dancing slowly, enjoying the romantic instrumental music in the middle of the living room. Kai stares at him deeply, they stares each other. Slowly, Acchan feels that Kai getting closer to her. Suddenly, she feels a pair of lips touch hers. Kai kisses her. It feels so warm and she likes it. It’s like en electric shock to her. But she doesn’t reply it, she remember about Yuu, she quickly pulls herself from the kiss and pushes Kai away slowly.

Kiss scene again!!!! :mon inluv:

Kai go to his room and take a shower. Below the warm water showering his muscular body, Kai deeply think about what just happened. Kai gets the point. Acchan doesn’t feel the same way. Now he just let Yuu together with Acchan, although sometimes, it’s hard for Kai to see them together. But Kai acts professional that he doesn’t want to change everything between him and Acchan. He doesn’t want to lose Acchan.

What?! Don't you give up on Acchan!!! :on voodoo: Make her fall for you!!!  :on thumbb:
And please update soon!!  :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: ptrd3009 on May 13, 2013, 12:51:15 PM
yuu please stop do this
it's not fair to haruna and acchan :banghead:
i hope yuu feel the same thing with haruna again
and let atsumina go :jerk:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: kurumi on May 13, 2013, 02:47:25 PM
Thanks for posting so many updates recently! Hm, the situation is getting more complicated. Looking forward to the next chapter! XD
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Post by: Sydney W on May 13, 2013, 03:44:21 PM
So sweet for Kai to get the gift of puppy for Acchan. But at the end, Kai get nothing, not even love from Acchan but a heart break. Pity him !

Yuu can't be two timing lovers to Haruna and Acchan. Totally unfair to both. That awful !

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Post by: POPCAT on May 13, 2013, 05:36:23 PM
me gusta the gift le me want a puppy too  :pleeease:
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Post by: abcari on May 13, 2013, 06:08:41 PM
dramaaaaa!!! I like drama! >:D this fic is awesome!!
I want a dog too, but better a real Kai 8D
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Post by: Haruko on May 14, 2013, 03:33:13 AM
wait what atsuyuu o.o.. come kai fight for you woman!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: Hii_chan on May 14, 2013, 08:39:13 AM
;-(I hate you, Chemicalstar-san.         How can you do that to me. And why all kiss scence always are accident and one side  And Yuu, come back to your Nyan Nyan and leave Atsuko for Kai.                                 But, if there has Atsuyuu so maybe TakaHaru appear too
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 13 PART 2~ 13/05/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on May 14, 2013, 06:14:40 PM
 REPLY TIME..!! It’s so rare for me to reply every comments above. But since I will update this fic later (in a long time), so I guess it’s okay if I reply all your comments recently.

@cisda83  : Wow, thanks for those amazing review from my fic, I really appreciate it. Well, don’t be mad. We’ll see that no one can be blamed in the end.
@correnereyes  : LOL, I laughed on your expression of the fic, haha
@ptrd3009   : well, you’re so impatient for atsumina x kojiharu. Let’s see what will happen next ;)
@sharlatan : yeah, complicated, even I feel complicated too. Ugh..
@Sidney W : Kai always sweet, huh..
@POPCAT  : it’s funny that you want the puppy like that. Haha
@abcari : drama everywhere, and yes I agree.. a real Kai, I want him too ^^
@haruko : it’s not that easy, haha..
@Hii_chan  :  Owwhh.. don’t hate me! OMG. Yeah, the kiss is so awful in the end, but it’s romantic, right? I just gave a sign from that kissing scene ;) 

Wel.. I guess everyone starts to hate me and.. Yuu. 
(*talking to Yuu : Yuu, I think we have to leave this fic.. Trust me, everyone wants KaiAcchan. Hoho)
Don’t mad at me please. It’s just a drama. But I’m afraid that it will be a long one. I already had the story line until the end, but still have no time to write it. And now I’m in a very busy days. Maybe I’ll update it next week, or two weeks later. But thanks for reading my fic and leave some comments. You’re awesome ;)

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Post by: kuro808 on May 14, 2013, 06:26:36 PM
Wow if Kai could only see what he had instead of taking advantage he would be happy but I guess that how this story will go :nervous
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Post by: KojiYuu44 on May 14, 2013, 09:26:12 PM
Yuu needs to stop double timing...
he needs to clear things up
Kai is a nice guy after all :)
I kinda feel sad for him because Acchan doesn't feel the same way
He should have treasured her more
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Post by: cisda83 on May 15, 2013, 09:36:41 AM
Well I will look forward to your next update

Whatever it's going to be with the drama and all...

Erm... no one can be blamed in the end.... we will see what you mean by that later in the story....

I enjoy reading your story...

Can't wait to see more

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: AgentBlueBear on May 21, 2013, 05:25:47 AM
Aww,,, how sad for Kai  :(
This story really is full of drama  :bleed eyes:  :)
but it's okay, I really like your fic  :heart:  :cow: its kinda new to me and i luv it!!  XD  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
Hope you update soon! :thumbsup  :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 - 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on May 30, 2013, 06:52:23 PM
 Hello guys!! Been so long. I’ve been in busy days but now I’m back of course with the NEW UPDATE!!!
Thanks for the comments you left here, I appreciate all your response.
So here’s the new update I made. Sorry if it’s too short. Enjoy!


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CHAPTER 14




One day at Rena’s café.

“Look, this boy the power forward player, he has strong body especially his arms, he can shoot in far distance too” a guy said, telling his friends while they sits around the round table in a café. His friends pay attention on him seriously. It seems like they’re planning for something important.

“The, in the small forward there is this boy. He has a fast move, heard that he’s the main shooter“ he continued. “And then the center, he has a good trick in playing basketball, that’s why he’s in center position. He’s the tallest in the team.”

“Another players in the backcourt is not really important, I think we can hendle them” the boy said again while a girl walking approaching them.

“Ano.. excuse me, can I take the order now?” the girl said.
All of them look at her, being amazed of her pretty face, but unfortunately the girl looks like not so friendly.
“Sure, take it miss..” one of them gives the order paper and winks at her.

The girl takes the paper. “Okay, wait for a minute while we prepare the food” she tries to keep polite. Then she turns around, she hears their conversation coincidentally.

“In the game today, our target is the small forward. He’s gonna be the key to turn them down.. His name is Oshima Yuu. But be careful to the center, Matsui Jurina, and the power forward, Takahashi Kai too. Okay?” the boy said.

Rena takes the paper and go to the kitchen to tell her chefs to prepare the foods they ordered. She peeks through the windows to see the boys that sit in the round table in the café. One of them wear a basketball shirt. Rena can see the logo of the shirt. She quickly takes her cellphone and dials a number.

“Good afternoon, my lady!” Jurina answer the phone.

“Umm.. Juri-kun, who is your opponent team for the game today?”

“Uh? Why do you ask about it?”

“Umm, I’m just asking”

“I can’t remember what’s the team name exactly, hehe..” Jurina said innocently. “But as I remembered, they has an eagle in their logo. Eagle with broken wings, hahaha!!” Jurina laughs.

“Eagle?” Rena takes a look at the window to make sure what she saw. Yes, there’s an eagle in the logo of the shirt.
“Juri-kun, where are you now? Can we talk before the game started?”

“Oh, no problem. I’m still at my house, getting ready to go. I’ll visit your café first before the game” Jurina said while ties his shoes.

“See you..”

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Hours later, the team is getting ready for the game. They gathered in the changing room. The coach assistant check the members attendance while the players is preparing themselves.

“Guys, can we make a circle for a while? I need to talk, it’s important, seriously!” Jurina said in low tone so that the coach can’t hear it. All the members go towards him, execpt one person who is busy with his cellphone.

“Yuu, what are you doing there? Get in the circle now!” Jurina call his friend.

“Wait a sec, captain, wait a sec!” Yuu said, smiling while staring at her phone screen. He puts his phone in his bag and then join the rest members in the circle.

“Listen, I got an information that our opponent team has a bad plan, they want to bear us down in rotten way” Jurina said, makes the members frown. “I heard that they want to hurt us or something. I warn you to be careful of them. Stay focus and play it fair, okay?”

The members nod and then the coach call them to get out of the changing room and go to the hall. They enter the basketball hall, there are a lot of people on the tribune watching them. Cheers and applauses are around. Some girls from the cheerleaders team are getting ready to get on the field and show their performance.
Across the field, they can see their opponent members look at them cruelly just like they’re ready to kill them right now. Somehow it makes Kai feels so annoyed to face the opponent like that. He likes fair play game with fair opponent, not the one who just wants to win in rotten way.

The game is about to begin. “Good luck, guys!” Shinoda Mario pats the captain’s shoulder. This tall guy is not in the team, he’s more interested in modelling than sport. He sits on the couch with the coach, team officials, and the reserve players.

The screams, cheers, and applauses are heard so noisy when the both team enter the field. The game is began. The referee of the game throws the ball to the air, players from both of the teams try to catch it. Kai successfully take the ball, he dribbles the ball closer to the opponent’s basket. An opponent’s player runs towards him while he dribbles the ball, he quickly move the ball to Jurina who is vacant. The tall Jurina take the ball, dribbles it a bit then throw the ball to Yuu who is ready near the basket. In a second, Yuu can take the ball and throw it to the basket. Two points for their team.


The game is going more and more hot as the opponent team can race against their points but still, their team has the higher points. Kai gets the ball from the guard player, he dribbles it but suddenly an opponent player comes to ambush him. Kai look around to see who is vacant, he sees Yuu is moving, avoiding the opponent. Kai is about to move the ball to Yuu but then he feels like Yuu is not pay attention to him. Yuu looks at different direction. Kai quickly moves the ball back to Jurina, fortunately, the taller one can shoot the ball from far distance and it gives them three points.

Kai notice that Yuu has lost his focus, he takes a look at the direction of what is Yuu seeing exactly. It’s a girl walking on the tribune try to reach the vacant seat. Kai looks at the girl, then now he can clearly see it’s Acchan. Acchan is here to see the match. He sighs, no wonder Yuu lost his focus.

Jurina pats Yuu’s shoulder. “Dude, keep focus okay!”

“Oh, yeah. I’m sorry” Yuu replies. “She’s here, I can focus now” he thought. They play again, some points are attained, but still the point difference is not to far. After several minutes, time to break.

“Shit, they play well.. It’s really hard to beat them” said a guy in the opponent team while they’re having their break.

“Calm down, after this, let’s do our plan. You know that Oshima guy, he’s our target!”

During the break time, Yuu takes his towel and wipe his sweats. He takes a look at the tribune, he waves his hand when he sees Acchan on the tribune. In the other side, Kai can see it. He looks at Acchan who waves her hand back. Out of his thought, so sudden, Acchan looks at him too, she smiles at him. Kai’s face is going red, luckily he’s sweating so hard that no one can see him blushing. Kai replies the smile, then he looks at Yuu. The boy is talking with the coach, so Kai can ensure that Yuu’s not watching.

The referee blows the whistle, time to continue the game.

“OSH!!” the team shouts in circle and ready to enter the fields. The people start to noisy again as the players enter the field.

This time the opponent team is getting more serious and sometimes they play harshly. Jurina learns how the opponent plays and he feels something wrong. They look like about to chase Yuu and try to make him fall so many times. “Kai, cover him!” Jurina said while he runs across Kai.

A frontcourt player from the opponent team is running closer while Yuu is dribbling the ball. Kan can see something different with that guy. Someone blocks Yuu’s movement so he has to pass the ball and move it to others. It’s Jurina who is ready to catch the ball from Yuu. The time while Yuu is about to move the ball, Kai can see the guy tries to attack Yuu, Kai quickly running and cover him.

BUMMM!!

The referee blows the whistle, the spectators are going quiet, all the players stop moving. The referee runs to the middle of the field where some players are gathered in a little crowd.

“Excuse me!” the referee said, going through the crowd. There, Kai laid down on the floor, fainted. Yuu keeps pat Kai’s cheek to wake him up but failed. The referee call the medic staff to come in immediately and take Kai to the couch.

“He tried to attack me but then Kai cover me and h was the one being bumped. His head hits the ground” Yuu said to the coach while Kai is taken out from the field.

“Shinoda-san, go find a taxi, we have to take him to the hospital!” said the coach. Mario nods and go out from the hall. The coach walks towards the referee to discuss about the match.

“Sorry, but we can’t postpone the match, it must go on” the referee said. Sighing, the coach call another reserve player to substitute Kai’s position. “Makio-san, get in!” he said, and a guy named Makio tied his shoes to get ready.

Somewhere on the tribune, a girl jaw dropped looking at this situation. Worries all around her face, she quickly stands up and run down the tribune, he runs toward the crowd. “KAAIIIII!!!” she screams loudly.

~ Yuu’s POV ~

I’m so surprised that Acchan suddenly running to the crowd with such a worried face and hold Kai’s hand who is laid on the couch.

“Oh my God, Kaii!! Please wake up Kai!!” she said, sobbing. Somehow I can see her teary eyes.

“Oshima-san, the match has to be continued. Go back! We will take him to the hospital” the coach suddenly pats my shoulder and ask me to go back on field. I nods and join Jurina to make a circle with the team.

“LISTEN! I told you to be careful of them. Look, now we lost our power forward. But Makio-san, I count it on you to substitute Kai’s position. Let’s do our best! OSH!!” Jurina said in the circle. The game is continued again. The spectators start to cheers again.



~ Meanwhile outside the hall…. ~

“STOP!! Please stop!!” Mario stops a taxi that just pass across the hall. The taxi stops just in front of him. He quickly open the backdoor but at the same time, someone open the door too from inside the cab.

“Ooopss.. Sorry.. Miss. Uh, I thought that the taxi is vacant!” Mario said as a beautiful long haired girl comes out of the taxi.

“Naah, it’s okay. I actually stop here, so the taxi is vacant. You can use it” the girl said.

“Oh, really? Thank you miss” Mario bows at her then tell the driver to move closer to the backdoor of the hall because it’s the nearest way to the team’s room where Kai is.

Just when the taxi is arrived, some of the team staff takes Kai into the taxi, Acchan is there to accompany him. Acchan gets in the backseat and Kai laid there, his head on her lap. Two guys get in the taxi, one team staff sits in the front seat and the other one is a reserve player sit on the backseat and Kai’s feet on his lap.

“Kai.. how could this happened with you??” Acchan mumbled, still sobbing, while she caressing Kai’s head on her lap.

“Don’t worry, I’m sure he’s gonna be fine” the reserve player tells Acchan and try to calm her down.


Mario walks to the hall to go back to the match. He’s about to pack Kai’s things so he can take them to the hospital. In the stadium lobby, the girl he just met earlier, she seems like in a maze. He walks toward her and ask her. “Miss, can I help you?”

The girl turns around. “Oh, I’m looking for the basket ball hall, I’m looking for Oshima Yuu. He’s playing in the match today.”

“Ahh.. Oshima Yuu!! Wait.. you mean.. Oshima Yuu??” Mario looks at the girl from top to the toe.
“Aww man! This hot girl is looking for Yuu??” he thought.

“Yes, do you know him?” the girl said.

“Ah, o-of course I know him. He’s my friend” Mario said. “Follow me, I’ll show you the hall.”

The two walks heading to the basketball hall where tha match is being continued again.

“Hmm.. anyway, why are you looking for Yuu?”

“Huh? Can’t I?” the girl frowns.

“Uh, I mean.. what’s your relationship with him? I never saw you with him before” Mario said.

The girl smiles, “I’m his fiancee”

Mario widened his eyes.. “Fiancee??”

The girl nods and smiles “but I’m living abroad, so maybe that’s why you never saw me before.”

“Ohh, okay…”  they finally reach the hall. “Well, Miss….”

“It’s Kojima Haruna,”

“Okay, Miss Kojima..”

“Just Haruna, it’s okay, really”

“Hmm, fine. Haruna-san, you can find any vacant seat on the tribune” Mario points at the tribune. “And there..” now he pointing at the field where the game is going, “…is Oshima Yuu that you looking for.”

Haruna looks at the field where Yuu is playing basketball. He’s all sweaty and looks great just like usual. She smiles without noticing it.

“So, can I go back to the team official?” Mario said, waving his hand in front of her face, she’s probably spacing out while looking at Yuu.

“Ah, yes..” Haruna back to reality. “Thank you….”

“Mario. Shinoda Mario”

“Well, thank you Mario-san.”

Haruna walks to the vacant seat on the tribune while Mario go back to the team official. He keeps looking at Haruna, monitoring her behavior. “Geez, that girl is Yuu’s fiancee?? So how about Acchan? Oh, really, Yuu… you need to give us explanation!” he thought. Mario go to the changing room and pack Kai’s goods to his bag.



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Okay that's all for now. I'll update it later :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: kuro808 on May 30, 2013, 07:09:19 PM
Yuu is a playboy or is clueless XD

Kai took one for the team and now I wonder about Acchan
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: Yuki88 on May 30, 2013, 08:53:54 PM
Oh shit hahaha. Interesting. Totally interesting.

Kai and Acchan like each other.  Yuu likes Acchan. Haruna loves Yuu and still his fiancee. Mario (probably) falls for Haruna. XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on May 31, 2013, 04:08:40 AM
Oh wow. . .  Haruna appeared. . . Now Yuu is gonna have a bad time. . .  XD
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Post by: Haruko on May 31, 2013, 05:03:51 AM
Oh wow. . .  Haruna appeared. . . Now Yuu is gonna have a bad time. . .  XD

yeah!! aww I want kojiyuu and atsumina
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU >> UPDATED: CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on May 31, 2013, 12:27:58 PM
Pretty lucky Rena was there.... such a coincidence

Rena could spy on the opponents strategies... and Help Juri's team win the game...

Poor Kai for being sad all the time... looking at Yuu and Atsuko together...

Still he protected Yuu from the opponent dirty play...

And Kai was injured from it...

Oh... Atsuko was so sad and worry for Kai...

Would Atsuko leave Kai side while he is injured?

Would Yuu demand Atsuko to be with him...if ever Atsuko want to be with Kai taking care of him?

How bad was Kai's injuries?

Eh.. Haruna came to the game...

What's Yuu reaction with the sudden arrival of Haruna?

What's Atsuko do about Haruna and Yuu situation?

What Kai will do to Yuu about lying and two timing Atsuko...?

Would Kai and Atsuko be together then?

What's Haruna reaction from knowing that Yuu was cheating on her... by dating Atsuko?

Would they fight for Yuu... or let Yuu go?

Yeah... Yuu needs to have better answer then saying 'He didn't want the engagement... so he didn't feel he was unavailable'

I would hit the person that said that as the reason for two timing someone.... :angry:

What's Yuu going to do with Mario and others knowing about Haruna's existence as his fiancee....?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Post by: ptrd3009 on May 31, 2013, 10:29:20 PM
kai and acchan like each other and yuu like acchan
but i think yuu really love haruna and i think haruna
maybe like mario and mario maybe like haruna :lol:
but serously i want kojiyuu and atsumina :love:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: AgentBlueBear on June 01, 2013, 05:18:21 AM
omg It`s getting more and more interesting...

Now Haruna has come to the cage, what will happen to them??? Yuu you flirt!!! go back to your Haruna!!! :on thumbb:

and Haruna meets Mario and Mario might like her and vise versa,, they will fall for each other.  :stoned:

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!  :mon ref: please let this be AtsuMina and KojiYuu  :heart: :heart: :heart:

update soon!!!  :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on June 01, 2013, 08:43:27 AM
Haruna is back!!!
What's gonna happen to Yuu now??
Is he going to reject Haruna and go for Acchan??
I feel like Mario is interested in Haruna
Acchan is so worried about Kai...
I hope he's okay and admits his feelings soon
Thanks for the update!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: IntanLakz on June 02, 2013, 05:25:25 PM
Very cool story----!  :cow:

Nyan is there... so yuu, leave acchan  :angry:

please update soon  :thumbsup
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 14 PART 1~ 13/05/30 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: kurumi on June 10, 2013, 03:38:48 PM
Thanks for the update! I was so caught up with Sayonara Crawl and the elections, I completely ignored this forum. XD Gomennnasai!

Yay for KojiYuu! :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 12, 2013, 06:47:31 AM
 HELLO EVERYONE!!! Been so long! So sorry to make it so long okay 
I hope you still waiting for this fic to be continued. So, this is the new chapter. Sorry if it’s too short. I’ll update it later.


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CHAPTER 15


~Yuu~

During the game, I look at the bench and Mario is already there, so I guess Kai is already hospitalized. I can see Maio give a strange glace at me. His eyes just lke pointing to a direction of the tribune. I follow his eyes direction to the spectators.

BADUMMM BBADUMM BADDUMMM

My heart starts beating fast, so fast. NYAN NYAN??? She’s here??

“Hey hey, dude! Focus!” Jurina suddenly appears in front of me. I quickly get focus on the game again. I do my best for this game, somehow it’s so hard to play the game without Kai here. He’s a great player, but I exactly know even though he’s not here now, we have to win the game. We have to show him the medals.

Minutes later, I can’t believe that our score is equal. But, this time is our last chance to win the game. I have to shoot the ball. People in the whole hall hold their breath as I hold the ball and ready to shoot the ball.

“YUUU CHAAAANN!! I LOVE YOU!!!” I hear someone’s screaming.

I know exactly who is she. I take a glance at her, she gives me her best smile, the smile that I miss so much, she looks good today, looks so different than the last time we met. My heart starts to beat so fast. I reply her smile, then I turn my view to the ring again. I close my eyes, take a breath slowly then shoot the ball to the ring.

“POINTS!!” the referee shouts then he blow the whistle. Game is over, we win. The spectators start to cheers. Jurina runs toward me and hug me tight. We cheer for our victory. I take a glance again to the tribune, there I can see a beauty cheers at me.

I change my clothes and get out of the changing room. Mario appears in front of me, “Your…umm.. fiancee.. is waiting out there” he smirks at me.

“O-Oh? Souka.. okay thanks” I said nervously and walk away but he stops me by taps my shoulder.

“Care to explain me something?” he said.

“A-ah.. that one, umm..” I can’t think of anything.

“Dudes, I’m going to Rena-chan’s place first, let me know if you’re going to the hospital, okay!” Jurina walk across, interrupting us then he walks away. I bet he’s about to celebrate something there.

I pretend to go away and follow Jurina, forgetting the latest conversation with Mario.

“Hey hey! We’re not finished yet!” Mario said.

“*Sigh , fine, I’ll explain everything. But let me meet her first okay!” I promised him the he nods. I walk out of the hall and meet Nyan nyan there. The time when she saw me, she hug me so tight.

“Yuuchaaan!!” she calls my name near my neck while hugging me. “Congratulation!”

“Thank you..” then I release the hug, “Hey, why you didn’t tell me that you will come?”

“Humm.. I miss you so much, and you I couldn’t contact you lately, so I came here” she explains. I remember the last time she called me, I rejected it then we just sent email to each other in the next days.

“Souka… so how long will you here?” I ask her.

“Actually I want to be here for days or even months, hehe… But I think I will go back the day after tomorrow.”

“That’s so fast” I said.

“Yeah, so that’s why you have to take me hang out around the city tonight, okay?”

“Hmm.. fine. But, I have to go to the hospital fist. My friend got injured while the game just now. So I have to visit him”

“Humm, okay then. But accompany me to your house first, I want to visit your new house here and meet your parents, it’s been so long we haven’t met” she asked me.

“Sure, let’s go!”

I take Nyan nyan to my house, she meets my parents and they looks so happy to meet each other. I quickly go to sport hall again where Mario is. I meet him and as I promised, I tell him everything about the engagement, I also tell him that I’m about to decline it because I found Acchan, and Nyan nyan is more like a best friend to me now even though, yes I love her too.

“I don’t know if it’s wrong or not. But I also can’t hold my feeling for Acchan. I also love her…” I said to Mario while we’re walking to Rena’s café.

“Geez, this is so complicated. There’s nothing wrong with falling in love, Dude. Even though if you fall for two, three, or maybe a thousand girls. But the fact, we have to choose one of them so that no one’s get hurt” Mario tells me. “No, nothing’s wrong with falling in love. Don’t blame yourself for loving two persons in the same time.”

“Humm, thanks for understanding me” I smiles at him, lucky me to have a mature friend like him.

“So, are you really sure that you will decline the engagement?”
“Ahh, poor Haruna..” he teases me.

“Mou.. but I find that I love Acchan more than her” I said. “You’re the one who said that I have to choose one of them, right?”

“Okay, okay!”

“Oh, one more thing..” I stops him when we’re arrived in front of Rena’s café. “Don’t tell anyone about this, okay? Including Jurina and Kai too..”

“Fine..”

We get in the café and meet Jurina is having a good time with his older girlfriend Rena. After that we go to the hospital to visit Kai.

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~Kai~


“There’s no serious wound, so don’t worry. The bump just made him shocked, he’s gonna be okay. Soon he’ll get his conciousness”

I heard someone’s talking, I still close my eyes. I try to remember what happened lately.
HEY? I FAINTED?? Geez, that’s so lame!

“I hope so, thanks doctor..” I heard a voice of another guy. I bet there’s a lot of people around.

Then, I feel something smooth and warm holding my hand. Still with eyes closed, I try to think and remember the feeling of this soft and warm thing in my hand. It’s her. I slowly open my eyes as my fingers slowly hold her hands in mine. She looks at me, I can see her teary eyes and she slowly show her smile.

“K-Kai??” she said, trembling.

“Hey..” I said in a very soft voice, still so weak.

“Oh my… thanks God, you’re back” she cups my cheek with his other hand. “Kai are you okay? How do you feel?”

“I’m all okay, it’s just a little bit hurt here” I raise my hand and touch a part of my head.

She touch it slowly, “I’ll call the doctor, okay?” then she get up from the bed and go out while a lot of people grins at me, they look so happy seeing me back.

“Yo! Do you know how long did you fainted?” a guy asks me, he’s my junior at school but he is one of the player in the basketball team.

“2 months!” another guy shouts at me.

“WHAT?!” I wide my eyes. “Really??” I look around the room and see a calendar. *Sigh, it’s the same month as the last time I remembered.

They laugh at me. “Hahaha, just kidding man! We glad you’re back. And….”

“And how about the game? We won it, right?” I ask the curiously.

“Umm,sorry Kai,  actually… ” one of them speaks in low voice, he looks down and looks so sad.

“We won!!” someone appears in the door of the room. Everybody look at that person. He smiles widely while his hand shows us a gold medal.

“Jurina!!” I shout at him happily. “Whoaaa!!”  He walks in, that time I realize that Yuu and Mario are behind him. The cheers are around the room. There are a lot of people in my room cheering our victory.

KNOCK KNOCK

“CAN YOU PLEASE BE QUIET?!!?!?!” a man appears in the door, followed by Atsuko. Everyone’s shuts their mouth and look at him.

“Oh, doctor! How are you?” Mario said innocently.

“Can you boys please get out of the room for a while? I need to examine Mr.Takahashi” the doctor said. Everyone is going out of the room while Yuu, Jurina, and Mario still inside.

“Omedetou,” Atsuko said walks in and smiles to Yuu. I can see she moves closer and I guess she’s about to kiss his cheek. The second when she’s about to kiss his cheek, the doctor shoot his lights to my eyes. Everything’s white. Ah, great.

“Everything is fine, Mr.Takahashi” the doctor turn off his lights, now I can see everything’s around clearly. “You can even go home as soon as you want” he smiles at me. I can see those 4 people around me are happy too.

After the doctor go out, everyone is going inside again and the room become so noisy. About an hour later, a lot of people are coming. I know them, they’re from my dad’s office. They come to visit me and make sure that I’m all okay. I bet Atsuko told Uncle Sae about this and he sent those people to go to the hospital. The room is become more full of people, but then my friends from the basketball team excused to go home since it’s already dark.

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“You’re not going home?” Jurina asks Yuu when they’re about to leave the hospital.

“Uhm, no, just go ahead, I need to meet Acchan first” Yuu said.

“Oh, okay. See you” Jurina go with the others leave the hospital. Yuu sits down on a bench outside the room, waiting for Acchan, she went to the toilet earlier.

“Why did Nyan-nyan come so sudden?” Yuu thought while he sits there. “Wait, if Nyan-nyan is here, so.. I think it’s the right time for me to tell my parents about the engagement. Yeah, maybe this is a good chance for me to say it.”

“Hey you’re still here?” Acchan just back from the toilet.

Yuu stands up and face her. “Yes, I want to take you for dinner, would you?”

Acchan take a look at Kai’s room fo r a while the look at Yuu again. “I think we can go dinner later. I have to take care of Kai” Acchan said.

“Huh? But there are a lot of people there who can take care of him” Yuu said, pointing at the people inside the room, including some maids.

“Yeha, I know. But I’m pretty sure that I have to stay beside him. We can go later, okay?” Acchan smiles at him. “I suggest you to go home, you must be so tired after the game today. I want you to take some rest.”

Yuu looks down, a little disappointed, but he finally understands what Acchan mean. “Yeah, I shouldn’t be so egoist” he thought.

“Okay, then. I’m going home. Don’t forget to have a dinner, okay? I don’t expect you to get sick” Yuu said. Acchan nods. Then Yuu kiss her forehead and pats her head. “See ya”

The time when Yuu leave the hospital and Acchan is about to get in the room, a man come out.

“Mr.Takahashi wants to go home now. I guess he doesn’t feel comfortable to spend the night in the hospital” he said to Acchan.

“Right now?” Acchan said surprised.

“Yes, I’ll prepare the car” then the man leaves her.

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“Tadaima!” Yuu said while he enters his house. He can feel the different atmosphere of the house, there’s more warmth there.

“Okaeri!” Haruna greets him. “Yuu-chan, I have a surprise for you, close your eyes!” she ask him to close his eyes. “Don’t peek in!” she shouts when Yuu tries to open his eye a bit.

“Sigh, alright then, I’ll close your eyes” Haruna move behind Yuu and close his eyes with her palms. She leads him to  walk to the dining room.

“Tadaaa!!!” she cheers and open his eyes. There are a lot of foods on the table.

“Let’s have a dinner, my champion!” she smiles.

“You cooked it?” Yuu feels so hungry as he looks at the table, full of foods.

“Actually, your mom and the maid helped me to prepare it. I want a little celebration for our champion today”

“Whoa, thank you!!”

“Come on, let’s eat” Nyan Nyan pull a seat for Yuu and she sits beside him, meawhile Yuu’s parents come in and join them in the dining room.

“Mmm… so yummy!” Yuu’s dad said as he chews the food. Yuu can see the warmth and happiness around. Smiles are around. He feels so happy between these people.

“It it the right time?” Yuu thought, looking at his mom, dad, and Haruna having their dinner happily. They talk and laugh together. It seems like Yuu can’t bring himself to ruin this happiness. Finally, Yuu continue to eat and share the happiness with his parents and Haruna.


meanwhile…


“Why do you want to go home so early, you can stay in the hospital for a night and tomorrow you can leave” Acchan said, she sits beside him on the backseat of the car on their way home.

“Hmm, no. I don’t want to stay any longer in the hospital. Actually, I hate to be there”

“Eh?” Acchan look at him. “Why? Are you scared of needle? Doctor? Or… ghost?” Acchan teases him.

Kai chuckled. “Naah, Takahashi doesn’t scared of anything.”

“So what’s that?” Acchan is being more curious.

Kai spacing out, his face becomes serious. “That place reminds me of every bad things that happened in my life.. I always think about my parents when I was there. Being hospitalized makes me think that I’m getting closer to death…” Kai said, looking down. Suddenly he feels something wraps around his body. Acchan hugs him tight.

“Don’t say that again.. You make me feel the same way” Acchan said, leaning her head on Kai’s chest.

That time Kai realizes that Acchan has the same situation with him, he feel so guilty of what he just said.
“I’m sorry..”  he moves his hand and caressing her head, feel the warmth of her body on his embrace. Long in silence, Kai realize that Acchan is falling asleep on his chest.

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So that's it. Please tell me how's that..

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on June 12, 2013, 07:19:08 AM
Thank you for the update!
That Yuu. . . How can he be such a jerk? :smhid

I hope he realizes that Haruna is the one for him. . .

Acchan is really worried. . .
I want her relationship with Kai to be something more. . .

I'm looking forward to the next chapter  :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: ptrd3009 on June 12, 2013, 07:23:36 AM
yuu please don't break haruna heart . it's so sad :(
i wanna slap your head . a jerk boy :banghead:
yuu should let acchan go to kai :smhid
i guess mario and haruna might be a couple at last  :banghead:
but i need atsumina and kojiyuu :rock:
thx for your update
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: Haruko on June 12, 2013, 07:36:11 AM
OMG. Yuu don´t play with  woman´s heart please.. you need to chose Kojipa..
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on June 12, 2013, 11:44:16 AM
Eh... Yuu's heart doki doki... Was he suddenly have feeling for Haruna...?

I think Yuu just like to chase any pretty girls...

After all the complain about being enganged with Haruna... Now he was attracted to Haruna...

Because Haruna became so beautiful...

Well just break up with Atsuko ASAP... so Atsuko can be with Kai.

What... You can love lots of people but you can only fall in love with ONE....

What is that explanation... you could fall in love with 2-more people at the same time...

He would decline his engagement with Haruna... when???

When it was convenience with him or when Haruna was not there anymore...?

He should have done it before... now he wanted to keep everything from Kai and Jun or even Atsuko from finding out the truth...

Poor Haruna being like a dirty secret like that... And he'd even already forgotten about Haruna being in his house... and he wanted to have a date with Atsuko...

He really was a coward and a selfish person, he always had a lot of reason as to why he did not break the engagement.

Now his reason was that he did not want to ruin the happy atmosphere in his family...

Like Haruna was being the dirty secret between his friends... now Atsuko was being the dirty secret of his family...

And I think Yuu's family would not accept Atsuko anyway... with her being from the lower status and also poor.

Ah... it would be great for Atsuko if Yuu broke up with her... ASAP... to prevent his parents from humiliating Atsuko if ever Yuu introduced her to his parents

As I thought Yuu was selfish... wanting to have dinner with Atsuko... even when Atsuko already said she needed to take care of Kai...

Sure Kai had lots of people around him... but his main maid or care taker was Atsuko... so it was hers to deal with...

Some more... Atsuko and Kai shared lots of common situation and worries... They were also the same type of people...

They able to understand one another.... and able to know what the others thought about most of the time... except about their feeling...

Yeah... Atsuko hug Kai... and trying to comfort Kai... while also trying to comfort herself...

They needed each other... for support...

And Atsuko wanted to take care of Kai not because it was her job because she wanted too... she cared about Kai more than as a friend or her Master

What's Kai going to do with Atsuko sleeping on him...?

Would he let Atsuko sleep on his bed while he used some other place to sleep?

Or would he let Atsuko sleep on his chest?

What's going on with Yuu and Haruna?

What about Yuu and Atsuko?

Also what about Kai and Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the great update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: POPCAT on June 12, 2013, 04:31:31 PM
what gonna happen next mehehe update please ^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: kurumi on June 12, 2013, 08:20:43 PM
I want KojiYuu! Yuu needs to realize Acchan likes Kai more!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: Yuki88 on June 12, 2013, 08:26:46 PM
 :yawn:Yuu-chan..... I think he's confused right now. :(
He said he loves Acchan more than Haruna, but somewhere deep in his heart he still loves Haruna. Even if he doesn't realize that. At least that's how I think.
Acchan clearly likes Kai but she doesn't realize it. Poor Kai :/
But I have a hunch that Yuu will end up being the one who tells Kai about Acchan's love toward him (Kai).
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on June 13, 2013, 03:20:51 AM
Yuu better not hurt Haurna  :smhid
Maybe he misses her too much that's why he's finding other girls like Acchan to fill in the hole
Kai and Acchan :)
Acchan needs to admit that she likes Kai so they can be happy!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: vPANDAv on June 13, 2013, 03:59:29 AM
ahhh ~ nyannyan is here!! yuuchan please don't end your engagement with kojiharu  :catglare:

because obviously acchan is only going to hurt you and be with kai....

 please kojiyuu  :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 15~ 11/06/30 NEW!! <<
Post by: AgentBlueBear on June 13, 2013, 04:23:38 AM
Yuu you jerk!!!!!!!  :on thumbb:
Cant you see Acchan likes Kai and Haruna loves you so much~?  :mon annoy:
Please dont break Nyan nyan's heart  :fainted: I know you love her too!  :hee: so go on and leave Kai and Acchan alone  :heart:
author~san, please let this be KaiAcchan & YuuKoji..  :mon pray2:
Update soon  :thumbsup :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 13, 2013, 06:45:17 PM
 @shiruba_rein : I hope so, thank you
@ptrd3008 : soon, be patient
@Haruko : I guess so
@cisda83 : they were inside a car on their way home,.
@POPCAT : here’s another update below!
@sharlatan : check below ;)
@Yuki88 : Your guess is right
@KojiYuu44 : Yeah, Yuu misses someone like Haruna when she’s not around.
@vPANDAv : well, let’s see
@AgentBlueBear : that Yuu jerk is confused with his feeling

Sooo… guys, thank you for reading my fic. I read all the comments that all of you hate Yuu now. I just want to show that sometimes, a person can fall in love in 2 person in the same time and that’s pretty complicated. So, as you asks before, here’s the update

:yawn:Yuu-chan..... I think he's confused right now. :(
He said he loves Acchan more than Haruna, but somewhere deep in his heart he still loves Haruna. Even if he doesn't realize that. At least that's how I think.
Acchan clearly likes Kai but she doesn't realize it. Poor Kai :/
But I have a hunch that Yuu will end up being the one who tells Kai about Acchan's love toward him (Kai).

Yuki88's guess was very close :D


*Author’s note: there’s a hyperbole scene down there, but it’s a fiction by the way


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CHAPTER 16


~ Yuu ~

Days passed and everything was going well. Haruna had back overseas and here I am now, still confused about my feeling. My mission to tell my parents and Haruna about the engagement was failed. It feels like the more I confident to tell them about it, the more I see Haruna loves me so much. However, I'm afraid if I break their hearts, their hopes, and happiness. But I still can't turn from Acchan. I LOVE HER.

Talking about her, its been so long that I haven’t had a date with Acchan. I guees tomorrow I’ll ask her to go somewhere. I take my cell phone and dial her number. I hope she hasn't sleep yet.

“Nee, Acchan… Let’s go for a date” I told her on the phone. Rain is falling out there tonight. It becomes so warm that I can talk to her on the phone. Her voice warms my night.

“Hmm, good idea… When? Tomorrow?”

“Sure, let’s go somewhere. Any idea?”

“Umm, I think we can go to amusement park. It’s been so long that I haven’t go there” she said.

“Ah, amusement park. Okay then… I’ll pick u up tomorrow at 10 okay?”

“OK. So let’s go to sleep, I don’t want you to wake up late tomorrow”

“Hahaha you can call my phone to wake me up! Are you sleepy now?”

“A little. But I have to check Kai first”

“Eh? What happen with him?”

“He has a cold, not so serious but the last time I check his temperature, it’s a little bit higher than normal.”

“Ah, that boy… I see, so.. go check your son, then go to sleep okay?”

“Okay. Good night, Yuu..”

“Good night, I love you, Acchan..”

“I love you too..”

BEEP. We end the conversation. I’m not so sleepy so I get on my desk. I take an old photo album. There’s a lot of pictures taken when I was kid. There’s a lot of Haruna’s picture there.. Looking at those photos makes me realize how close is Haruna’s family to mine. No wonder, our parents want us to get married someday.

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Knock knock..

"Come in"

"EH? I thought you're already sleeping!" Acchan surprised when she get into Kai's room and find him is doing something with paper and books on his desk.

"I have something to be done tonight. Tomorrow I have to go to the office, the vice manager asked me to go there" Kai said, not looking at her but keeps focus on his work.

Acchan walks to Kai's wardrobe, she takes a coat and then put it on Kai's back. "At least you wear something warm, you know" she said, Kai looks up at her.

"I'll go out with Yuu tomorrow, can I?"

"Yuu?" Kai's expression changed. "Where?"

"Amusement park, I miss to ride the big wheel" she smiles.

"Oh,.. Umm, okay, go have some fun."

Acchan smiles happily. "Thank you," She walks to the door, "don't sleep too late, good night."

"Uhn, good night"

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The next Day


"Whoaa, it's been so long! Last time I came here when I was at junior high school," Acchan said, she looks so amazed when they arrive at the amusement park.

"Yeah, me too" Yuu holds her hand and takes her inside. The two have their fun time at the amusement park, they share laughter and happiness together.

"Ahh, I'm so thirsty!" Acchan said.

"Oh, let me buy some drinks, you can wait here or look around at the souvenir shop"

"Ok,"

Yuu walks to the fiod center and get some drinks for them. He looks up at the sky, seems like it's going to rain again. After get the drinks, he go back to where Acchan was. He gets in the souvenir shop, Acchan is looking at some manga figurine souvenir.

"You like them?" Yuu said suddenly appears beside her, he gives a can of drink to her.

"Ah, nothing. I'm just finding this figurine looks like Kai! Hahaha. Look at this" she take a figurine and show him "it looks like Kai, right?" she laughs a little.

"Eh? Uhmm, y-yeah.. I guess so" Yuu said awkwardly. "Umm, Acchan, can we go somewhere else? We haven't get on that big wheel, right?!"

"Ah yeah! You right, okay let's ride the wheel!!" Acchan said happily.

The moment the're bout to get on the wheel, the rain starts to fall, Acchan can feel rain drops fall on her skin.

"Mou.. It's raining!!" Acchan pouts.

Suddenly, they feel something weird. They hear the wheel cracking and the ground feels like shaking.

"Earthquake!!" people around starts to shout and panic.

"Yuu, let's go find a shelter!!" Acchan shouts panicly. She pulls Yuu's hand to go.

"ACCHAN WATCH OUT!!" Yuu shouts as he look up that the wheel breaks down and about to hit the ground...

People starts to scream, it's good that the wheel is empty, no one's riding there. But the bad news is that a lot of people are under, including Acchan and Yuu.

BUMMMMMMMM

The wheel hits the ground. Acchan close her eyes while Yuu is hugging her tight. Yuu open his eyes, they're still alive, their position just ten feets away from the wheel. Yuu quickly pull Acchan to the main dome where all the people stay under. Then, the rain is falling. The situation becomes more panic as another shake is up again.

People starts to scream when the second earthquake’s happening again, but not bigger than before. Women and kids are screaming. Fortunately the emergency team comes fast to evacuate the people.


~ in other Place ~

“We hope that you can study there just like your dad and your uncle, Takahashi-san” a man said. They’re in his office room while having some tea.

Kai is about to take the cup of tea, but then the cup is shaking. “Whoaa, what is this?!” Kai acts panic as the earthquake shakes the place he is now.

“Calm down, don’t panic” it’s just a small earthquake, the vice manager calms Kai down “This office has an alarm if the earthquake is dangerous enough.”

After the second earthquake passed, the vice manager turn on the TV. The breaking news shows the situation out there because of the earthquake. People are so panic, plus, the weather seems like making it worse. Heavy rain and thunder surrounding the city. The most striking news is that the big wheel in the amusement park collapsed caused of the shake.

“BIG WHEEL??” Kai stands up from his seat as he watches the news.

“Oh my God..” the vice manager agaze at the news showing the collapsed wheel.

Kai quickly moves to the door and go away. He run in the corridor, when he reach the elevator, it’s not working due to the damage of the earthquake. The elevator guards said that it will working in no time and suggest Kai to wait for a while.

“No way!” he can’t wait again, he runs and down the stairs. Running and running until he reach the lobby. He call a driver to take him to the amusement park.

“But, Sir, the situation there is very chaotic, you can’t go there. It’s too dangerous for you” the driver said.

“I SAID TAKE ME THERE!! OR I WILL DRIVE BY MYSELF!!” Kai said, half shouting.

Scared of his high-schooler young master, the driver nods and open the door for Kai. He gets in and they go to the city.

“Faster! Faster!” Kai commands him. He can’t sit calmly, he try to call Acchan’s phone but it’s out of reach. “SHIT!!! What happened with the signal??!!”

“Sir, I heard the signal and communication in the city is in trouble, but the governments and IT companies will fix it soon” the driver informs him.

Suddenly, the car stopped as they face a traffic jam.

“Isn’t there other way to go there?” Kai said impatiently.

“We almost there, Sir, but it’s stucked”

“Ugh, I’ll go now!” Kai open the car door and leave the driver.

“Takahashi-san!! It’s raining, you can’t go out!!” the driver shouts, but it seems like useless, Kai is running away under the rain.

Kai runs to the amusement park, there’s a lot of people there. The situation is still chaotic. His body is dripping wet now. He moves again into the park. He walks fast while looking for Acchan.

“ATSUKOOO!!”  he shouts to every direction he walks in. He move towards the collapsed wheel. There’s a lot of people around. Kai keeps shouting her name. “ATSUKO…!!”


Under the shelter dome, Yuu holding Acchan hand to calm her as they sit on a bench. There’s a lot of people there. Now they’re waiting for the situation back to normal so they can go back home.

“ATSUKOOO!!” Acchan suddenly heard her name is called. “ATSUKOOO!!” once again, she’s pretty sure that she’s called.

“What?” Yuu asks her as he notice that Acchan acts strange.

“ATSUKO!!”

“You hear that?” Acchan asks Yuu. Yuu try to hear what Acchan mean.

“Yeah, maybe other person..” Yuu said.

Acchan’s expression seems like she’s worried so much. She stands up, release Yuu’s hold and go.

“Acchan, where are you going??” Yuu calls her when she’s go away through the crowd. Yuu decide to follow her even he’s left behind far from her.

Walking through the crown, Acchan finally reach the outer dome. She can feel the chill of the weather outside cuz it’s raining heavily.

“ATSUKOO!!” she saw a guy walking under the rain frantically.

“Kai??” Acchan thought. Going through the rain, Acchan runs towards him, the rains starts to make her wet. “KAAAIII!!” she shouts at him.

Hearing Acchan’s voice, Kai’s turns around. He saw a girl he is searching for, running towards him. As Acchan arrives in front of him, they hug each other.

“Atsuko, are you alright??” Kai said in worried face.

“Why are you coming here in the rain?? You have a cold!!” instead of answering Kai’s question, Acchan is going mad at him of being so careless of himself.

“I don’t care!!” Kai replies whit a shout again.

“BAKA!! What if you get sick??!!” she slaps him.

“I just want to know that you’re okay!!”

“You idiot!! Come on, get in the dome!” Acchan pull his hand but Kai stops her.

“WAIT, Atsuko are you really okay??” Kai tries to make sure that she’s really really okay.

“I’m all okay, now come on, don’t take any longer under the rain!!” Acchan finally drags him into the dome.

Meanwhile…

Yuu is looking at the scene of two young under the rain..

“Acchan… you really love him, right?” he thought.


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How’s that ;) ??
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 13/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chichay12 on June 13, 2013, 07:07:04 PM
kai your the man shouting acchan name was so  :wub:
yuu its ok,you still have your nyannyan...
Chem i miss commenting in your trend..im glad your update is fast!
Kyaaaaaa atsumina(kaiacchan)
Thank you for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: POPCAT on June 13, 2013, 08:41:03 PM
Kai your so manly haha.
Yuu is Nyan-nyan you love i promise :shifty:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: Yuki88 on June 13, 2013, 09:37:47 PM
Eh seriously? My hunch is slightly right?  XD

I don't hate yuu, actually. He didn't realize Acchan likes Kai and vice versa, not to mention he missed Haruna so probably dating Acchan probably helped him relieved his feeling of missing Haruna, thus he thought he loved Acchan more than Haruna.

And, duh, Acchan really needs to realize her feelings toward Kai  :smhid
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on June 13, 2013, 11:20:39 PM
Yuu needs to screw his head on straight
I don't think he means to do any harm to anyone
He's just really confused
Kai really cares about Acchan :)
I love that side of him but Acchan is so dense
Even Yuu realizes that Acchan loves Kai
Why can't she notice already
Thanks for the update!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on June 13, 2013, 11:47:52 PM
Aww. . . . Poor Yuu

The earthquake was unexpected . . .  But I hope

It helped Yuu realized that Acchan and Kai belong together
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: Sydney W on June 14, 2013, 01:30:12 AM
Let have a love rival between Yuu x Kai over Acchan. Let the jealousy between Yuu x Acchan make Kai realize his feeling. And continue with Yuu x Haruna (sudden re-appear again) to make Acchan realize her feeling too.  :nervous
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: Haruko on June 14, 2013, 03:13:16 AM
awww I love atsumina scene but.. poor Yuu.... I feel bad ..
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: kuro808 on June 14, 2013, 03:21:39 AM
Wow this is a hard one to swallow for Yuu.  Kai cares for Acchan a lot but still has a lot more to see in the relationship rather than the current standing they are in now :nervous
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on June 14, 2013, 09:41:32 AM
Eh... they were not at home yet... Sorry... misread it then... :sweatdrop:

Great another update already.... Yeah...

As I thought Yuu would not break the engagement... He just wanted to 'step on two boats at the same time.' (two timing)

Instead of dealing and trying to solve his feeling and situation... he wanted to have a date with Atsuko...

Poor Kai... was so tired and sick... still he had lots of jobs to do for his office and school...

And He could not do anything but to let Atsuko went to her date with Yuu...

Ah... Kai was so panic when he heard the wheel in amusement park fell... he was so worried of Atsuko and he did not care about his safety and his health...

So dramatic romantic scene there... in the middle of chaos... both Kai and Atsuko were calling each other

When they found each other they hugged and started worrying about each other...  :inlove:

Ah... Atsuko seemed to love and care for Kai but she didn't realize it... at all...

She kept thinking of Kai unconsciously... like when looking at Kai-like figurine and in the middle of chaos, she realized that the one shouting her name was KAI...

What would Yuu do... Would he fight for Atsuko or Would he let her go?

How would the relationship between Atsuko and Kai develop?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chiqinna on June 14, 2013, 02:49:00 PM
I believe Yuu is a good man ...of course he is haha what am I talking about ...   :nervous
Hope Acchan realized her TRUE feelings soon .
Great update author san! !   :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: korin48 on June 14, 2013, 03:37:22 PM
Kyaa~!! Acchan always think about Kai and Kai worried about Acchan than his own... It made me doki doki! :shy1:
Yuu realized Acchan loves Kai  :on speedy: don't worry, you already have Haruna!! :mon thumb:
Acchan loves Kai but didn't realized her feelings  :mon cry:
Please update soon!  :kneelbow: :gmon flowers:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: kurumi on June 14, 2013, 06:33:32 PM
Wow, this chapter was really dramatic and sad. But I'm glad Yuu finally realizes this! He should go back to Nyannyan. KojiYuu, YAY! :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: DC2805 on June 14, 2013, 06:49:55 PM
 XD The silly couple is deeply in  :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 16 ~ 14/06/13 NEW!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 15, 2013, 04:07:24 AM
@chichay12: hey, welcome back! thanks for comments, glad u joined again :D
@POPCAT: YEAH!! kai is our man!!
@Yuki88 @KojiYuu44:  Acchan still thinks that she cares for kai in motherly feeling
@shiruba_rein : yes, Yuu finally realizes it
@Sidney W: woww such a drama!! good idea. but it l'll be going so long to en this fic. hehe. well but i'll think about it again
@Haruko @Kurosawa87 : Yuu have to feel it so he can realize aeverything
@cisda83 : We'll find out. thanks for ur review. great!
@chiqinna @correnereyes @sharlatan : thank you :D
@DC2805 : yes they are....

thanks for reading and comments everyone :D
I hope I can update it fast!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 16, 2013, 07:50:54 AM
(http://i47.tinypic.com/25q8wpg.jpg)


CHAPTER 17



Some weeks passed after the amusement park tragedy. In a chill evening, Acchan is having a dinner with Kai at home. Seems like the two is having a good time chatting with each other.

“Atsuko, you know, the day when the earthquake happened…” Kai starts another topic.

“Yes?”

“I was in the office talking with the vice manager and.. umm..”

“And what?”

“He asked me to continue my study in New York, just like my dad and Uncle Sae.”

There’s a gap before Acchan finally talk. “Oh, that’s good. He is right. You’re the one who will continue the business, so it makes sense”

“Yeah, but…”

Hearing Kai saying but, Acchan stops chewing her food.

“Would you go with me?”

“Eh? Where? You mean, New York??”

“Yes, you can study there too” Kai said with such a cute begging face.

Acchan chuckles looking at his puppy eyes. “Sure..”

“Great!!” Kai shouts happily. “You’re going too, little boy!”, pointing at Acchan’s dog which is eating it’s meal too on the floor.

“So, let’s study together after this. We have to get good grade of the exam” Kai said.

Acchan nods and smiles. “Okay..”

Day by day passed by. The two often to study together since Kai is a brilliant student at school he always teach Acchan so they can go to continue their study in New York together. One day, two weeks before the exam, Uncle Sae is coming home. He’s about to check Kai’s preparation for the final exam. The two is very happy that Uncle sae come home. They already missed him so much.

Having a tea in a Sunday morning, Uncle Sae is sitting on a chair near the swimming pool. Acchan comes approaching and sits on another chair near him, taking some biscuits and place them on the table.

“Ohayou..” Acchan greets him.

“Hey, ohayou Acchan.. Wow, looks delicious” Uncle Sae looking at the biscuits she brings.

“Kai haven’t woken up yet?”

“No, he always asks not to woken up too early on Sunday” Acchan smiles, just like she’s the one who really understand about her young master.

“Ah, that boy… Just like his dad” Uncle Sae sighs. “I bet he’s going to be like his dad in the future, a great successful businessman.”

“Yeah, I hope so...” Acchan said.

“Oh, talking about future. What’s your dream for your future?” he asks Acchan.

“Me? Umm… actually, I want to be an actress” she said shyly.

“Whoa, actress huh?? That’s great”

“Oh, and you know, last week I submitted an application to an art college in Tokyo. But I still don’t know about the result. It will be announced next month”

“Wow, you did a fast move. That’s good”

Then, Acchan remember about Kai’s wish that he wants her to go to New York with him.
“I just did it without any serious purpose. I will go to New York and study there with Kai so I can accompany him” Acchan continued.

Uncle Sae’s expression changes. “No, you don’t have to. I mean… you don’t have to force yourself to accompany him all your life. You have your own dream, Acchan”

“It’s okay, Uncle Sae. It’s my pleasure to do that. I’ve never felt being forced all this time.”

“Look, I have a thought about Kai” he lowers his voice. “All this time, I see him serious with his study. But there’s one thing that he should change about his life.” He stops a while. “He’s too hung up on you.”

“Eh? Do you think so?”

“You see? He’s like a being pampered baby. I want him to live stand on his own self. He has to grow up. I can see that he can’t do anything without you. He has to grow up. Our company needs a mature leader in the future.”

Acchan thinks about it for a while. Maybe Uncle Sae is right. Kai is a boy and he has to be a man. She can’t spoil him forever.

“You right..”

“So, Acchan. If you’re accepted in that art college, I allow you to study there. Don’t force yourself to accompany Kai forever, okay”

“But who can take care of him if he’s alone in New York? You know… I doubt if he want to live with you”

“Of course not! I won’t allow him to live in my house. I will let him living alone by himself, he has to grow up, really.”

Uncle Sae stayed at home until the exam week passed. However, he’s the only parent that Kai has, so it’s his responsibility to monitor Kai’s progress in his study. So is about Acchan, since Mrs.Maeda passed out, Acchan is become his responsibility too, especially her education. The last day of the exam he leave and go back to New York.

“Yossshh!!!” Jurina shouts. “Finally we passed it!!!”

The four bestfriends are having their time on the school rooftop, enjoying their remaining times at school.

“It’s unbelievable. We’re going to be graduate soon, right?” Jurina said.

“Uhn, have you decide where are you going to continue your study?” Mario said, asking his friends.

“I’m already accepted in a college in this town. You know, a basketball scholarship. The college has a great basketball team, and they need a great player like me, so I’m accepted without any test” Jurina smiles proudly. “How about you guys?”

“Hmm.. I will go to -” Kai said..

“New York! We now that, young man!” Mario said, cutting Kai’s words.

“What about you?” Mario asks Yuu.

“Me? Hmm.. still don’t know. I haven’t talk it with my parents. And you?”

“I will skip my study for a year” Mario said.

“EHH?? Why?” his friends respond in unisound.

“Don’t get it wrong! I will go to have a long vacation with my brother.”

“Whoa, what’s with that? When everyone think about college, you’re going vacation?” Kai frowns.

“I will travel around the world. France, Italy, China, Australia, Egypt, everything.. Then, I will decide where is the place that I like the most. That’s where I will continue my study”

“Cool!!” Jurina shouts.

“I am!” Mario grins.

“Oh, dudes… I plan to celebrate my birthday this weekend. I think my parents will allow me to have a party at my house..” Yuu said.

“Seriously?” Kai said.

“Yeah, a big party. We can invite everyone to come. It will be great. Prepare your suit, dudes!”

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~ Yuu ~


The next day, I talk to my parents to allow me having a birthday party at home. Fortunately we have a big house and a wide enough yard so we can held a big enough party there. My parents agree and I’m so happy. In the evening, I got a mail from Haruna. She told me that she probably won’t come to my party because of her busy activity due her preparation for college too. But she told me that she has already prepared a special gift for me.
That time, I think again about myself, about my feeling towards the two girls in my life. Acchan and Haruna.

After a deep thought about it. I’m still confused so I made a call to Mario.

“What’s up??” Mario said.

“Oi, dude.. I want to ask you something.. It’s about Acchan and Haruna”

“What? Acchan and Haruna?? Don’t tell me that you haven’t decide anything and you haven’t told your parents about it??”

“*Sigh, no, I haven’t”

Mario face palms himself. “Geez.. is it hard for you to choose one of them?? You said that you will choose Acchan”

“Yes, but now I’m confused…”

“Confused? Why?”

“It’s umm… I don’t know how to express it but.. I think Acchan doesn’t love me the same way as mine.”

“WHAT??”

“Yeah, and I found that Haruna always love me more than I love her. And I think Acchan loves somebody else”

“So you think Acchan is cheating on you?”

“No. But, I can see that she loves Kai more than me”

“KAI? Oh my God, I don’t understand. Yuu, can you explain it to me mor clear??“

“Look, I know that Kai and Acchan are only friends, even though Acchan is his private maid. But all this time, I found that her feeling for Kai is more than it. I feel a love between the two. It hurts though.” Yuu explained. “In the other way, I ignore Haruna and try to make Acchan loves me more. But the fact, Haruna loves me more than Acchan. I’m confused!”

“Hey, listen… Sometimes, we have to choose the one that loves us so much, not the one that we love so much. Because the one that we love, doesn’t always love us. But we can still learn how to love the one who loves us so much.”

Yuu think for a while, try to get the meaning of what Mario said.

“Haruna is such a lovely girl. So is Acchan. But what it means if you love someone who doesn’t love you? I suggest you to reply Haruna’s love, Yuu.. If you won’t, I will take her from you, I swear…”

“What?! Don’t! Don’t you dare to take Haruna from me!”

“So get her!”

“Humm… I’m just thinking about how to tell Acchan to end this. I don’t want it ended bad. I hope we can still be friends later.”

“Yeah, think a good way to say it. Don’t hurt anybody. Acchan is a girl too. Girls are emotional”

“Uhn, thank you, Mario. You’re the best!”

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Several days later, I still can’t think the best way to talk to Acchan, so I decided to keep it after my birthday party. I don’t want to ruin the party by an awkward situation because I broke up with her. So, a day before the party, I call her that I will send her a car and a driver to pick her up to go to the party while I will prepare myself for the party.

While I monitoring the people who is decorating my house for the party, suddenly my Dad comes.

“Son, come here. I need to talk to you”

“Uh, what is it?”

“I just got a call from my colleague. We will move again to Osaka.”

“What? Why is so sudden?”

“Yeah, just like usual. It’s about your college too, so I want you to prepare for your college in Osaka and.., maybe this birthday party will be a farewell party for your friends too.”

“Oh, okay then… When will we move?”

“After you graduation day”

It’s not a surprise for me. All my life I’ve been move to some different town in Japan due to my father’s business. Well, at least now I can decide where will I continue my study. If I will move after my graduation day, then I have to talk to Acchan about our relationship before that. I have to think about the good way to talk about it. I don’t want to hurt her.

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The birthday party.


~Kai ~

“You’re going there together with me?” I said, offers Atsuko to go to Yuu’s party together.

“No, Yuu told me he will send a car to pick me up”

“Oh, okay then..” I said, a little disappointed. “I’ll prepare myself, see ya” then I go upstairs heading to his room. I can see that my suit is ready. Atsuko prepared it for me. Nice choice. After I finished my self and ready to go. I walk downstairs, I can see my car is ready in front of the house, Kine is there too, talking with someone. When I walk approach, I can see another car is parked in front of my car. I bet it’s Yuu’s driver going to pick up Atsuko. Ah, that man always have a trick how to persuade a girl.

“Atsuko hasn’t finished yet?” I ask Kine.

“Umm.. ah, there she is!” Kine looking at the main door.

I turn around and surprised of what I see there. I drop my jaw and I don’t know why I’m stunned, standing still with no word to say. A beautiful angel walks out from the main door, she wears the greatest gown I ever see. Honestly, I’ve never seen her looks so beautiful all this time. Damn, I feel my heart’s stops when she glares and smiles at me. But then I realize, she’s not for me. She dresses up like that for Yuu, the birthday boyfriend.

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Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: mgxx on June 16, 2013, 08:18:57 AM
aaaaaaaaa  :inlove: :inlove:

thanks for update >.<
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: Haruko on June 16, 2013, 08:21:53 AM
omg so many things happen... but I feel bad for haruna because yuu only chose her because She love him too much? for is not fair about that.. Yuu need to fall in love before of being with haruna...

about kai yeah he needs to be a man...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on June 16, 2013, 08:36:37 AM
Wah! Things have gotten interesting!  XD

Its a good thing that Yuu decided to break up it with Acchan to be with Haruna. . . He really has to appreciate Haruna's love for him.

Acchan should realize her feelings for Kai so that he wont suffer anymore   :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: korin48 on June 16, 2013, 08:40:27 AM
MariKojiYuu.... No comments... :cool2:
Huhuhu... Poor Kai... :mon cry:
Acchan needs to realize her feeling!!  :tantrum:
Please update soon!  :mon pray2:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: kurumi on June 16, 2013, 11:25:43 AM
Thanks for the update! I don't really know what to say either… But it does seem like Kai and Yuu are realizing more.

Hope everyone figures it out. Soon!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on June 16, 2013, 01:23:44 PM
An update already... Yeah... you're so great...

Yeah... Kai asked Atsuko to come with him to NY and Atsuko agreed...

Eh... Atsuko wanted to enter Tokyo Art School for her actress career... but she did not mind putting her future on hold as long as she could be with Kai

Ah... I thought Atsuko was going to be with Kai even in NY... but Sae did not want Kai to be with Atsuko all the time...

Thinking that Kai was not mature enough.... Kai was mature enough as he was...

He was so responsible with his studies and his works at the office...

Sure he could not cook or clean house... but he had servants for that...

Oh... I want to be like Mario... able to skip college just to go around the world

Yuu was still confused over his feeling again... but I thought he knew that Atsuko liked Kai more than just friends...?!

It would not be so hard to choose... always choose the one that loved you the most than who you loved the most...

Unless you both loved each other the most... then it's okay to be together...

I knew about that advice too... it was a very good advice... I fully agreed with Mario

Now Yuu was worried about how to break up with Atsuko...

Would Yuu be able to keep to his plan about needing to break up with Atsuko the next day after his birthday...?

Would Yuu be forced to confessed that he had a fiancee when his parents found out that Atsuko was his girlfriend?

Would Yuu lied to his parents saying that Atsuko was just a friend when his parents asked who Atsuko was?

Poor Kai... he was so attracted over Atsuko's beauty but also hurt that Atsuko was dressing up so nicely for Yuu not for Kai...

What Kai would do to Yuu when he heard about Atsuko break up?

What Kai would do to Yuu when he learned that Yuu was two timing Atsuko all these time?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: chichay12 on June 16, 2013, 02:18:49 PM
good choice yuu..
acchan is for kai(minami) ONLY.. XD
i cant imagine how pretty acchan is  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
cant wait to read the next chapter!
chem~~
thank you for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: POPCAT on June 16, 2013, 02:22:34 PM
Aw man Yuu please don't make acchan cry or else i will send u takaboy on u  :shifty: :kickass:

Kai will be sad to know that acchan is not going to NY with him  :cry:

Please update soon
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 17 ~ 16/06/13 UPDATED!! <<
Post by: Yuki88 on June 16, 2013, 11:21:22 PM
Somehow I think Yuu will straightforwardly tell Acchan about her feelings toward Kai... and... Mario you gentleman :(
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 17, 2013, 04:31:26 PM
(http://i47.tinypic.com/25q8wpg.jpg)

CHAPTER 18



“I’m not sure to go there” Rena said while she opened her wardrobe to choose a proper dress.

“It’s okay, you’re not the only one. Acchan will be there too. She’s also not the student of our school. Just take it easy..” Jurina said, he lays on Rena’s bed.

“Juri-kun, don’t lay on the bed! Your suit will be rumpled” Rena glare at him. “Ne.. look at this, which one do you think the best? This one?” she shows the red dress, “or this one?” then she shows the other red dress with different cut.

“You’d better not wearing anything” Jurina teases and wink at her.

“Mou! Juri-kun is such a pervert!!”

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“Yoo!!! Good evening everyone!!” a red haired guy stands on the small stage “Wow seems like everyone has arrived here!!”

The MC greets all the guests that come to the party. “To open this special night, I have an amazing band that will rock your time tonight!!” he pleases a band to come to the stage. Then some guests are cheering to the band, especially girls.

Kai arrives arrives two minutes after Acchan. Then he walks approaching her. “What’s the different if you go with me, huh?”

Acchan chuckles, “You right, but I have to appreciate Yuu for preparing a car for me to come here.”

“BRAVOO!!” Mario comes in greeting the two, he’s been there before them. “Look at this!! Romeo and Juliet!” hearing what he said, the two are blushing, especially Kai. Mario hands over to Acchan and kisses her hand. “You’re looked so beautiful, my princess” he teases her. Acchan just laughs because she knows that Mario is just teasing her.

“Guys!! Look what I bring here!!” Jurina shouts happily when he arrives. He holds a pretty girl with him, smiling shyly.

“Ah, Rena-chan?!” Mario widened his eyes. “Welcome, pretty girl” once again, he kisses Rena’s hand.

“Whoa.. don’t too long dude! This girl is mine” Jurina glares at him.

Rena just laughs as she looks at her cute jealous boyfriend.

“Ah, Acchan, this is Rena-chan, my girlfriend” Jurina introduce her girlfriend to Acchan. “You can be friends with her.”

“Hi, Maeda Atsuko-des, nice to meet you” Acchan shakes her hand with Rena and then the two can get along with each other.

“Anyway, where’s our man?” Kai looks around, looking for Yuu.

“I don’t know, maybe he’s preparing himself inside. Let’s go have a drink first!” Mari takes their friends to get some drinks. When they’re having a chit chat with each other, the band ends the song. The MC gets on the stage again. “Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen! How’s the band??!! Is everyone cheering up the night??!!” People are shouting and cheering, make such a noise there.

“Well, the first thing first, please give applause to our birthday boy Oshima Yuu!!”

People give applause as Yuu comes on stage. He wears such a neat and good looking suit. He takes the microphone from the MC.

“Ahh, good evening everyone! Thank you for coming to my birthday party. I know that we just passed our final exam, so..I hope this party will make your day, not only me but all of us!!” as he finished his words, everyone’s cheering, at the same time, a big birthday cake comes on stage, brought by two women.

Then, Yuu’s parents are coming too. Everyone’s singing happy birthday for him with claps of hands. Then, he puffs out the candles and everyone’s cheering. He starts to slices the cake and gives the first slice to his dad.

“So, let Mr and Mrs Oshima to speak something for Yuu-san’s birthday” the MC gives the microphone to Yuu’s mother.

“Good evening everyone! I know this a special party for youth, we shouldn’t be here as we’re too old for a party like this. But we have to conratulate our only son as he finally passed the exam and now he’s 18. We’re so proud of him even though all his life, we’re so sorry to make him moved from one place to another due to his father’s business” Yuu’s mom talked.

“And talking about that, we make this big party to celebrate his birthday and also as a farewell party for him,” Yuu’s mom continued.

“Ehh?? Really” everyone starts to talk as they hearing the ‘farewell’ word.

“We’re so sorry to inform you all that after the graduation, we’re going to move to Osaka. But I hope it’s not the end of your friendship with our son, Yuu. Right?” she takes a look at Yuu. “So, if anyone of you come to Osaka later, our house is opened for you.”

Yuu smiles and nods.

“And, the last one… We want to inform you that next 3 months, we will hold a party for pur son’s engagement”

Hearing it, Yuu feels a heart attack. Everyone stops talking and listening to what his mom’s saying.

“Engagement?” Acchan thought. Her feeling is in confuse, “Me?”

“Well, the engagement was very long time ago since they’re kids, but we want to hold a proper party to celebrate the engagement between Yuu and Haruna Kojima, so if you don’t mind, you can also come to the party in Osaka”

“Mom!” Yuu whispers, widened his eyes, doing a gesture so that her mom not to tell about that. Yuu looks at direction where Acchan is. This thing is out of his imagination. He never imagined that his parents will tell people about this. Now Acchan knows about it, but this is not the way he purposed to do.

In the other side, Acchan feels like the same heart attack as he heard words “engagement between Yuu and Haruna Kojima”. She quickly leave that place, looking for some place to go.

“So, we hope all of you enjoy the party!!” Yuu’s mom ends the speech.

“Mom!!” Yuu said in hars manner. He noticed that Acchan left that place.

“Yuu-chan, where are you going??” his father calls her as he leaves the stage.

He quickly runs to find Acchan. He sees a girl with white dress walking fast near the swimming pool. He knows exactly that she is Acchan. He quickly runs towards her and grab her wrist.

“Acchan please wait!!”

She tries to escape but Yuu holds her hand tight “Please, let me explain!”

She turns around, her face is wet of tears. “All thie time you’ve been lying” she said, still sobbing. Tears rolling down on her cheek. “You never told me that you will be engaged with other girl. Why?”

“Acchan it’s not my plan. It’s out of my control. I don’t even know that my parents would do this tonight…”

“It’s not about the announcement, I ask you why you hide this from me, Yuu? Why?”

“Acchan, I never lied about my love to you. I love you… “ They start to cry. Both Yuu and Acchan are crying.

“At the time I met you, I was falling for you. I decided to cancel the engagement because I loved you more” Yuu starts to explain. He talks by heart. He talks everything he feels all this time. “But…” he take a breath to speak clearly.

“...day by day, I found that you didn’t love me the way I do. You deserve to love other person than me. In the other side, I can see Haruna is so patient in loving me. She loves me more than you do. That’s why I cancel my purpose to break the engagement. I supposed to tell you but not now, not this way. I didn’t meant to hurt you like this. I’m sorry..”

Acchan stops crying, she so surprised of Yuu’s explanation. She never thought that she made Yuu felt disappointed of her behavior all these times. Acchan doesn’t say anything… The only thing in her mind is her guilty feeling.

Yuu hugs her. “Acchan, I’m sorry for making you sad. I’m sorry for hiding it from you all these times” he cries again.

“I love you, Acchan” then he release the hug. “But I can’t see you love me the way I do. I’m sorry Acchan, I’m sorry..”

Acchan takes a deep breath. Try to hold her tears.

“We can’t make this right, we can’t be together…” Yuu said. They keep silence for a while to make themselves calm down.

Acchan looks up to Yuu. “I’m sorry, Yuu.. I’m sorry if I made you disappointed all these times. I’m sorry I didn’t notice your disappointment…”

“It’s okay, Acchan. Being together with you was always makes me happy. I’m so lucky that I’ve ever been with you.”

“Oshima-san!! Oshima-san where are you?? Your parents calling!!” someone’s calls Yuu, telling him that his parents looking for him.

Yuu wipes Acchan’s tears. “Acchan, the thing that you don’t ever forget, I never lied about my love to you. And… “ he sigh then take a deep breath. “Be true to yourself, you know who’s the one you love so much more than me.”

You leaves Acchan. She stands there in confuse, trying to understand what Yuu meant.

Meanwhile…

Kai noticed that Acchan is gone. He feels so worried about her after the announcement. Then he leave to look for Acchan, but just before he go, Mario stop him. He tells Kai everything so that Kai doesn't think that he was cheating on Acchan. With Mario's polite and wise words, Kai finally understand. But still, he can't accept the way Yuu's parents announced it. “She must be so sad!” he thoughts. Kai looking for Acchan all over the house, but she’s nowhere. Then Kai go outside, the weather is so cold.

Not Acchan that he finds first, he met Yuu outside. With anger in his eyes, Kai quickly punch him and makes him fall down. Yuu hold his cheek, there’s blood near his lips. Kai’s punch is so strong. Yuu doesn’t reply the punh, he stands up and faces Kai.

“How dare you!!” Kai punch him again, Yuu falls down for the second time. Looking at Yuu not giving any revenge, Kai stops hitting him. “Don’t you think that she must be so hurt to hear that?!”

“It’s not my intention, Kai! It’s my parents and I didn’t know they would do it this way!!” Yuu shouts at him. “You’re so lucky to have her love. I’m so envy you, Kai..” Yuu said, smilng at him. “She loves you more than me..”

Hearing what Yuu said, Kai’s not giving any respond. The Yuu pats his shoulder and leaves.

She loves you more than me..” that words keep whining in Kai’s head. Kai moves again, he look for Acchan in the yard but no one’s there, and finally, when he reach the swimming pool, there he finds Acchan standing alone near the pool. Looking at the pool and spacing out.

Kai takes of his suite, walks approach behind her and puts it on Acchan’s shoulder to cover her from the coldness.

“be true to yourself, you know who’s the one you love so much more than me” what Yuu said just now keep whining in her head. “The one I love so much more than Yuu..” Acchan thought. Suddenly, Acchan feels so warm, someone’s cover her body with a coat. Acchan turns around, to see who’s covering her body with coat. There she saw Kai standing innocently.

“Kai..” she whispers. She drops another tears.

Kai can see Acchan’s red eyes, she must be cried. Kai raise his hand to her face, wiping the tears from her cheek.

“The party’s boring, let’s go home…” he said while wiping her tears.
Kai takes Acchan walking out from Yuu’s house. They keep silence while walking.

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The guests continue to enjoy the party as they don’t know what’s going in behind that announcement.

“You said that you will find a good way to tell her!” Mario said in anger.

“Of course!!” Yuu said, covering his bleeding lips. “It’s not my plan, I didn’t know my parents would do it now!”

“So you’ve explained to Acchan?”

“Uhn.. I told Kai too. I hope they can understand each other’s feeling. And here… look at this” Yuu shows Mario the wound. “Kai punched me hard. I know he loves Acchan, he won’t punch his bestfriend if he doesn’t love her.”

“Geez, your love story is complicated!!” Jurina said.

“So where are they now?” Mario asks Yuu.

“Oh, I saw them holding hands to the parking area. I think they leave…”

“*Sigh… we have to meet them tomorrow” Mario said. “However, we’re bestfriend.”

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Acchan stops walking when they arrived at the parking area just near his car. “I don’t wanna go home right now..”

Kai doesn’t say anything. He knows what Acchan feels. She needs a place to think and calm herself down. Then Kai walks to the car, he asks Kine to go home and he takes the car by himself.

Kai takes Acchan to a peace place near the beach. He parks his car near a café, the place where Uncle Sae took him to when he was a kid. The place where he found out about his parents’ death. They get out from the car, Acchan walk in front of the car and sit on a bench near while Kai go to the café and order two cups of macchiato.

He comes back to where Acchan is, sitting on the bench beside her while watching the beach. Kai gives one cup to Acchan. They drink it, but don’t say any words. Kai want to let her calm down, he doesn’t want to ask her anything. “Girls need time to be alone..” he thought.

Acchan finished her coffee, slowly she rests her head on Kai’s right shoulder. Kai’s heart beats fast. As the weather getting colder, Kai takes her to move in the car. Acchan ask him to sit on the backseat with her, then they sit on the backseat together. Acchan lays her head on Kai’s shoulder again, now her hands pull him and place it around his waist, hugging him tightly but still doesn’t say anything.

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~ Kai ~

I can’t blame Yuu for all the things happened. It was not his intention to tell Atsuko about his engagement that way. And also, it was not his parents’ mistake because they didn’t even know that Yuu had already a girlfriend. No, I can’t blame anybody.

Honestly, I don’t know what to do now. I became the one who ruined their relationship because of Yuu thought that Atsuko loves me more than him. Could I be blamed? Ugh, I don’t know. Really, I’m confused right now. The point is… if Yuu feels that way, it means… Atsuko loves me? Really? I thought that her ‘love’ all this time is just a ‘motherly love’, because... you know, long time ago I kissed her subconsciously and she pushed me away.


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~ Acchan ~

Honestly, I’m still confused about my feeling. Yes, thinking about what You said, I guess he’s right. I love Kai more than Yuu. I feel guilty not only for Yuu, but for Kai too. Then I thought about the kiss Kai gave long time ago. Yes, Kai said he just out of control. But when I pushed him away, Kai look so disappointed.

“So, does Kai loves me since that day? So all this time I just made him hurt by getting on my relationship with Yuu in front him without noticing that he loves me too?? And the other way, I let Yuu hurt by seeing me so care and love Kai more than him as my boyfriend. I made him disappointed. I feel sorry about that. I’m the one who is being so cruel here. I’ve hurt everyone.

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Kai comfort himself, place Acchan on his embrace. Slowly, she’s falling asleep on Kai’s embrace, Kai can feel her breath on his chest. They stay like that until the next morning without words.

***

PING!!

A man just woken up in early morning. The sun starts to rise as it shines its gold ray of light through his window that faces the beach. The beautiful sunrise view he usually see everyday. He turns on his computer while makes up his bed. Then, a chat message appears on the screen on the desk. A man opens and read it. It’s from his old friend that lives overseas.

Takahashi :  “Hey beachboy! How are you?”

“Wow such a coincidence,” he murmured, then he replies the message.

Makoto :  “Never feel this better! It’s such a coincidence. Long time no see you. When you’ll back to Japan?”

Takahashi :  “Ah, sorry. Last week I came back to Japan. Sorry I didn’t visit your cafe”

Makoto :  “Ehh.. you forgot your bestfriend huh?”

Takahashi :  “Sorry, really sorry. I had a lot of works and also had to watch Kai for his exam”

Makoto :  “Oh, Kai, your nephew, right? He’s here”

Takahashi :  “Seriously? Is it too early morning in Japan, right?”

Makoto :  “Yeah, he bought two coffee last night, and now he’s still here”

Takahashi :  “Eh?”

Makoto :  “He’s with a girl. They came here last night, sitting on a bench then get in the car. I can still see his car there now”

Takahashi :  “He drove by himself?”

Makoto :  “Yes…”

Takahashi: “Oh, okay. Thanks for your information. I think I have to check him, okay. Bye”

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Sae quickly take his phone and call Kine.

“Good morning, Sir” Kine answers the call.

“Ah, Kine-san. Where’s Kai?” Sae asks him straight to the point.

“Ano.. Last night he went to a birthday party. But then, Kai asked me to go home and he took the car” Kine explained. “He hasn’t come back yet until this morning.”

“Can I talk to Acchan?”

“She’s with him, that’s why I let him go last night. Acchan’s with him…”

“Ehh?? Souka…so the girl that Makoto said is Acchan”  Sae thought.

“Sir, is there anything you want me to tell him?”

“Umm, no.. just asking. Okay thank you, bye” Sae ended the conversation.

Sitting in his working room, Sae’s is thinking about his only nephew..

“What’s going on between them? Spending the night in a car near the beach? Are they…….”

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I know it’s so fast for an update. LOL
But I did it because I have a glimpse that for several days (or maybe weeks) I’ll be very busy. So I update it fast for you. Thanks for reading 
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: Sydney W on June 17, 2013, 04:41:10 PM
A breakup for Acchan and Yuu. But a new hope for Kai and Acchan.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: ptrd3009 on June 17, 2013, 05:18:08 PM
finally yuu and acchan brokes up
and acchan realize who is she love
poor yuuchan was punched by kai :(
and crying for impossible love is made me sad
looking forward to kojiyuu and atsumina :banghead:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: cisda83 on June 17, 2013, 05:28:26 PM
another update already... Yeah... You're so great

Mario was such a flirty...

Oh... as I thought the plan to break up with Atsuko after his party night would not be as planned....

Yuu's parents announced everything... from his leaving the city after graduation and his engagement with Haruna from his young.

Poor Atsuko needed to hear it like that... but as I thought she was angry at being lied from the start about Yuu's engagement...

What now... he blamed it on Atsuko... saying that it was Atsuko's fault from not loving him more than Haruna or more than his feeling...

That was why he did not break the engagement and it was also his reason as to why he still wanted to be with Atsuko after these whole time two timing her....

He now made Atsuko felt guilty over that... she thought because she did not give her whole attention towards Yuu all the time..

Like as if... if you like someone... you want that someone to only have you and to put you 1st above someone else...

One word I would say about that kind of person... he is selfish... and egoistic...

The same could be said about Yuu... he did not put Atsuko 1st above all else... he still thought about himself...

If he did not have Atsuko... he still had a back up right... Haruna...

And he preferred to lie to everyone, including Atsuko.. be a good boyfriend and son and even fiance while he was two timing Atsuko and Haruna then.

Even when he was supposed to be blamed to put Atsuko in the middle of his screw up relationship... not Atsuko or Kai.

He still wanted to come out as the good guy by saying he was trying to make Atsuko love him, but he could not... so it was Atsuko's fault for not loving him as much.

Now he needed to break up with Atsuko also because Haruna had been very patient with him and her constant love for him after all these time, he needed to be responsible by being with Haruna...

To be honest... all these mess was Yuu's fault... he should not be with Atsuko in the 1st place...

If only Yuu did not ask Atsuko to be his boyfriend that evening... Atsuko and Kai would be together that same night...

I think subconsciously... Yuu knew about Atsuko place in Kai's heart and Kai's in hers from the start...

He was just thinking... Atsuko was a pretty girl.. who did not want a pretty girl... not only that she was also nice and responsible...

He was just being with Atsuko because he did not like his engagement... he did not want to be controlled...

He would like to choose his own girlfriend, fiancee and wife...

May be he did develop something for Atsuko.. but I would not say as strong as everlasting love... not even fallen in love, just plain love.

Yeah... Kai at last man up... he punched Yuu.... for lying at Atsuko from the start...

Anyhow... Mario explained, I could only come to the conclusion that Yuu was two timing Atsuko and Haruna...

Because Yuu already knew about his engagement before he became Atsuko's boyfriend, so he should not have chased after Atsuko at all...

At least... Yuu knew he was at fault somehow so he backed off... and asked Atsuko and Kai to realize their feelings for each other

Kai was so gentleman there; bringing her somewhere quiet, providing the space she needed and staying beside her giving her silence support.

Oh... they felt a sleep in the car the whole night...

Ah.. Sae was wondering what was the relationship between Atsuko and Kai...?

Would Sae support their relationship if ever they made it official?

Would Sae against it because of their status...?

Would Sae separate them for a reason to make Kai more independent...?

What's going to happen to Atsuko and Kai?

What about the relationship with Yuu...?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on June 17, 2013, 06:02:37 PM
ooohh. . . . so Yuu and Acchan broke up . . well it's for the good of everyone   :D

So, will Kai and Acchan take their relationship to the next level?? . . .

Please update soon!  :D
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: kuro808 on June 17, 2013, 06:43:45 PM
Kai punched Yuu on impluse to protect Acchan and to realize his true feelings, it probably would have been messy but it ended with the two being together when they needed to
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: Yuki88 on June 17, 2013, 07:55:21 PM
Oh-ho? Not only announcement about the move to Osaka but also their official engagement. I'm not really fond of the way Yuu persuaded Acchan about her love for Kai, but oh well, as long as it worked out well.

And now Sae surely misunderstood the two to have done 'something' LOL.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: POPCAT on June 17, 2013, 09:51:01 PM
Damit Yuu's parents why may  :banghead:

Ok Yuu You're safe it was kinda you're parents fault that made Acchan cry  :smhid

Now Kai  :stoned:  What me ? Yes U Kai, make acchan happy she only got u so take care of her or else

 :sweat: Yes I under stand POPCAT  :sweat:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on June 17, 2013, 10:23:26 PM
Oi Yuu's parents unknowingly breaking the news the hard way  :smhid
good thing Yuu explained himself properly after
Yuu did a good thing letting Acchan go... I hope he'll be happy with Haruna
Acchan is finally thinking about her feelings towards Kai
Kai is also putting a little more thought into his feelings :)
Hope they get together fast!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: Haruko on June 18, 2013, 03:30:08 AM
oh so manyt hings happen.. never complain about updated fast! is better for us
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: kurumi on June 18, 2013, 10:21:39 AM
I'm glad there is finally progress! Looking forward to things getting more intense :D
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: korin48 on June 18, 2013, 03:08:28 PM
Ouch... Yuu's parents told everyone about engagement... Acchan is hurt to hear that  :( But Kai is there to comfort her!  :cool1:
Yes! Acchan and Kai loves each other!  :w00t:
I LOL at Sae in the last part  :bigdeal: But I can't blame him thinking like this way...  :wahaha:
Please update soon!  :mon bye:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: giakb48ff on June 22, 2013, 06:28:42 AM
OMGIRLLL!! it so ... but so ... WAO .. man i love your fanfic ... keepgoing!! ATSUMINA!!!! :D  :thumbup :cathappy: :heart: :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 18 ~ 17/06/13 NEW UPDATE!! <<
Post by: Little Suberioo on July 15, 2013, 08:07:01 AM
woaahh i love atsumina moment..  :wub:
waiting for your update hehe
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 19, 2013, 08:01:09 AM
Good Morning Everyone!!!!

it's been so long that I nev er update this fic. Sorry :(

BUT. I have a big announcement for you.

1. I will update it this evening, it means... about 10 hours by now.
2. The story is actually soon to be ended.

So, just in case if you all forget about the story, I suggest you to re-read it so that you won't read the new chapter in confuse.

Thank you for everyone that kept send me messages to update this fic. i love you all
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: Tiptip on July 19, 2013, 08:12:29 AM
End ? But why ??? :'( it's too early to end up the story  :banghead:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 19, 2013, 12:51:35 PM
Eh... it's finishing soon...

Though Minami would be going to US then Atsuko going to actress school?

What's going to happen to them...?

Ah... I hope you would make it longer a bit... like few more chapters...

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the announcement

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: mgxx on July 19, 2013, 03:14:10 PM
oh my God :(
i hope there will be sesion 2 www
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 19, 2013, 07:56:10 PM
Hi!! Oh, it’s been so loooooong!!!! I’m so sorry guys that I haven’t updated my fic because I’ve been super busy this month. I went to some places and had no time to write or else. I even decided to make a Twitter account so that (at least) I can still update some news from this idoling fandom. So if you don’t mind, please follow me @atsumina_100. By the way, that’s an awesome account name, huh?

Well, now I’m going to continue the story of Kai x Acchan. Where did I pause it? Oh, the car scene, right?? Okay, since I’ve forgotten about the story I was about to write, so maybe I will skip that scene int the other scene two days later.





CHAPTER 19

After the ‘birthday party incident’, Acchan act normally. She act like there’s nothing happened. Of course it made Kai felt confused of Acchan’s feeling actually. But since he didn’t see any sadness in Acchan’s eyes, he felt relieved and decided not to ask or talking about ‘that incident’ anymore.

Kai goes to school today, it’s the big day for the senior class as the result of their final test will be announced today. While most of the students feel so nervous about the result, Kai doesn’t feel the same. He’s quite confident with the result. As he arrives at school, the first person he meets is Yuu. Kai can see a bruise near his lips and he notices that it’s because of his punch 2 days ago. It seems like Kai is about to avoid him, but then Yuu grabs his shoulder.

“Kai!” Yuu calls him. “I know you’re mad. But can we talk for a while?”

Kai doesn’t answer anything but still in his cold face.

“I beg you, dude” Yuu begs him with a serious expression.

Kai just nods and then the two climb up the stairs to the rooftop. Kai walks ahead while Yuu walks behind him.

“I’m sorry…” Kai heard Yuu said something. He turns around and sees Yuu is bowing so deep at him. Seeing his bestfriend acts like that, Kai is a bit surprised. He takes a deep sigh and turns around again.

“You’re so rude, Yuu” Kai simply said, facing his back to Yuu.

Yuu get up and walks towards him. “Yeah, I know. I don’t know how to apologize to you or Acchan, but I hope you can forgive me.”

“I don’t have any right to forgive you, it’s her” Kai said while he sits down. “You have to apologize to Acchan.”

Yuu sits down next to Kai. “I did. I met her this morning. I went to her school and met her.”

There’s a silence for a while. “You love her, don’t you?” Yuu finally breaks the ice. “She loves you too. What else? You should get her, Kai… I can see the love between you two.”

“I don’t think so. Maybe you’ve mistaken about her feelings towards me.”

Yuu frowns. “Eh? What do you mean? She cares about you a lot!”

“Of course, because she’s my private maid. She always there since we were kids, so it’s kind of… ordinary.”

“NO. She loves you.” Yuu quickly ignores it. “Maybe she just has to realize it.”

Kai doesn’t answer.

“Promise me, Kai… You will love her and make her happy.”

“……”

“*sigh… Fine.” Yuu stands up. “Kai, you are my bestfriend. ” Yuu take a deep breath. “If one day you find that she doesn’t love you, you can forget me as your friend. You can hate me as long as you want.”

Kai looks up at Yuu’s serious face.

“But if you find that she loves you, please forgive me.” Yuu said. “Tough, I guarantee that she loves you.” Yuu smiles at his bestfriend. “She loves you…”

Kai and Yuu stares each other without words, while suddenly…

“GUYYSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Jurina  runs towards them. “WE ALL PASSED THE EXAM!! LOOK!!”
Jurina shows some paper to Kai and Yuu. It’s the result.

“WOOOW!! KAI!! You’re my man!!” Yuu shouts cheerfully, just like there’s nothing happen. It seems like he acts normally again now. “LOOK!! You’re in the first place!!”

“Hey hey thanks to me!! I’m his lecture, you know!“ Jurina said.

“Boo!! What kind of lecture if your own grade in on……” Yuu looking for Jurina’s name on the list. “Ahh.. here! The 17th place?! Oh, okay. Not bad, dude!”

The happiness covers all the bad things that happened lately. Seems like everyone wants to forget those badthings and start a new day with smiles.

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~ At  other high school in the same town ~


“Ah, here is the 4th place princess..” two girls walking inside the class, cheering at their friend inside, who is totally ignoring them.

”“Nee Acchan.. Why do you look unhappy? Cheers up! We all have passed the exam and you even got good grades!” a friend of Acchan pats her shoulder while she’s inside the class, looking out the window and spacing out.

Acchan back to reality. She quickly shows her beautiful smile. “I’m all okay. Look, I’m.. happy!” she finally cheers up. It’s not that she’s sad when today is the big day. The result of the final exam was being announced this morning. The surprising thing was Acchan’s grade is in the 4th place. It’s kind of unbelievable considering the first three persons are quite genius in her school. So, being the number 4 above these 3 smart students is a big pride for Acchan.

What makes Acchan spacing out that day is about Yuu. Her ex-boyfriend came to her school this morning just when Acchan was about to enter the school gate. Yuu apologized to Acchan. He seems very guilty of everything happened. The end of their meeting this morning, Yuu (once again) told Acchan about Kai. He really meant it. He really meant that Kai loves her too. So this was what makes Acchan spacing out today, thinking about the probability of what Yuu said this morning. .

“Hey, by the way, I met the principal. She wanted you to come to her office.”

“The principal?” Acchan is a bit surprised. It’s the first time she’s being asked to come to the principal’s office. Without waiting any longer, Acchan go there by herself. Students all around the school, cheering their success of passing the exam well.

“Excuse me,” Acchan knocking on the door. It’s opened actually, Acchan can see the principal is sitting behind her desk.

“Ah, Maeda-san!” the principle said. “Come in.. Take a seat.”

“Haik, thank you..” Acchan sits on a chair on front of the principal’s desk, while the number.1 person in the school is taking something from the filing cabinet.

“Here it is…” she sits back on her chair, facing Acchan who is still confused of what’s the purpose of calling her here.

“First, I congratulate you for the very great progress of your academic record. I’m glad you got the 4th place of this final exam.”

Acchan smiles. “Thank you..”

“I never see you get any courses or extra hours after class, but this progress is impressing. Do you have any other course outside the school?”

“Ah, that’s..umm… no, actually.” Acchan laughs a bit. Inside her heart, she thinks that: Oh, I had another extra class after school, actually. It’s the class with Takahashi Kai sensei. Yeah, he’s a great lecturer.

”Well, I received this letter from an art college last night.” The principal starts to talk seriously. “The letter said that you’ve submitted an application to this college, is that right?”

“Yes..”

“Umm… congratulation again, Maeda-san. You’re accepted.” The principal smiles and offer her hand.

Acchan shakes her hand before she knows that THIS IS REAL. She’s accepted in the art college. “Oh my God. I can’t believe it. Thank you…”

“Don’t thank on me.” The principals said. “By the way, why do you want to study in art school? You know, with the good grade like yours now, I think you can go to another science or business academy, even go abroad.”

Fo a while, Acchan down her head, remembering about the plan Kai made for them to go to NYC. Study and…live together.

“Is it really your wish to go to art college?”

Acchan nods. “Yes, actually… I want to learn about acting.”

“Ahh… I see. You want to be an actress, huh?”

Acchan nods shyly.

“Hmm.. it’s okay, Maeda-san. Everyone has their own dream. And you know what you got to do if you have a dream?”

Acchan look at her seruoiusly.

“Go get it!” the principal said wisely. “Though, it’s not easy to reach your dream. There will always a lot of challenge and obstacles when you do it, but you have to believe yourself that everything is going to be ended well.”

“Haik. Thank you for the advice, Miss.”

“So, this is your files, the letter said that you have to manage the registration soon.”

Acchan takes the files. Then she leaves the office with such a happy expression. She comes back to her class and takes her cellphone. She dials a number. It needs time until the person she’s calling finally answer it.

“Yes, Acchan?”

“Ah, uncle Sae! Ano… I- I’m accepted in the art college”

“Wow! That’s awesome! WOW Acchan, congratulations!”

“Uhn, thank you… and, you know… I think I’m going to take it.”

“Wait, WHAT??” Now Sae feels like choked. All he knows is that Acchan and Kai, probably, in a special relationship. He feels guilty if he let them live separated to each other.

“I’m going to take it, Uncle Sae”

“No, you don’t have to if you don’t want to!”

“Eh?” Now Acchan is getting confused of what Uncle Sae is talking about.

“I mean… if you want to be with Kai, it’s all okay. You don’t have to stay in Japan. You can go to NYC too.” Sae said trembling.

“Ano… I think I’m not going with Kai. Is that okay?”

“Eh? Really? It’s your idea?”

“Yes.”

“But what about your relationship?”

“Eh? W-what relationship?”

“Your relationship with Kai, of course.”

“Umm.. I don’t understand what you’re talking about, Uncle Sae.”

“Ahahaha, don’t lie Acchan. I know you’re Kai’s girlfriend, right?”

“What?” Acchan’s heartbeat stops for a while. “No. I’m not. No. There’s nothing between us.” Now Acchan feels uncomfort with this conversation.

“Oh…” Sae stops for a while. “Okay. I’m sorry.”

“…..”

“So, you’re going to that art college?”

“Hmm….. yeah. I’m going.”

“Souka…okay if it’s your decision. Just send everything that I have to manage about your college administration.”

“Okay, thank you Uncle Sae. Bye”

Just when Acchan click the end button and close the conversation, a notification appears on her screen. It’s a message, from Kai.

From: Kai
To: Acchan
“Hey, how’s the result?”

She smiles when she knows what she has to type: a pride.

From: Acchan
To: Kai
“Amazing. I got the 4th place in school!! That’s a big thing.”

She sends it, after a while Kai replies her message.

From: Kai
To: Acchan
“Stupid. I thought you’d get the 1st place just like me.”

She pouts. But then smiles, realized that it’s great to hear Kai got the 1st place at his school.

From: Acchan
To: Kai
“Mou… it’s really a big pride for me, Kai.. ”

From: Kai
To: Acchan
“Ahahaha… Okay. I’m proud of you  So… ready for New York, Maeda Atsuko?!”

Reading the last message from Kai really hits her mind so hard. New York. New York. New York.
Now that word is haunting her. Kai seems so excited of going to New York with her.

“How do I tell him about this?” Acchan thought.


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Few days later.

~ Kai’s POV ~

It’s Sunday morning. I heard some noise when I’m sleeping. I slowly open my eyes and I can see someone is inside my room. It’s Atsuko, of course, the only one who has privilege to enter my room in the morning to wake me up. I move a little as I can feel the sunlight shine through the window.

“Oops, sorry for waking you up.” Atsuko said while she makes up my table. There are a lot of snack plastics on the table, I played online game last night while eating some snacks.

“No, you didn’t” I said.

“Ohayou...” she said smiling while walking towards me. “I can’t believe you eat them all.” She shows all the plastic.

I chuckled. Then she sits on the edge of my bed. “What do you want for breakfast? Pancakes, sandwich, or what?”

Somehow, I always think about what Yuu said few days ago. Does she really love me “not in motherly way”? Because sometimes, look at her! She’s just like a mother to me. Wakes me up in the morning, asks me what I want to eat for breakfast, and prepares my clothes. I think I should stop regard her as a private maid. She shouldn’t do it. She has to be one of the family in this house. Maybe just like my sister, cousin, or… wife? Wait. No. That’s too far. I ain’t make sure yet if she really likes me or not. But yeah, I think she should stop it all.

“You know, you shouldn’t have to do it.” I said to her.

She frowns. “Eh, why?”

“I’m not a kid anymore. I can do everything by myself. Besides, there are other maids who can do everything.”

“*sigh.. You don’t need me anymore?”

“No, I didn’t mean so.” I get up and sit, still on the bed. I can see Atsuko look at my chest when she notices me not wearing clothes.
“Look, I think you should stop of being like that to me. We’re friends, you know.” I said. It’s hard to say that we’re friends. I like her actually. “Let’s say, you’re one of the owner of this house. You don’t have to act like a maid.”

“I understand.” She said in lower tone.
She look up at me. “It’s okay if you said so.” She smiles at me.

“Well, thanks for understanding. This house is yours too.”

She smiles, somehow it’s killing me. So beautiful, smiling like an angel. Ah, I want to kiss that smile.

“Now get up!” she stands up and suddenly pulls the blanket that covers my lower body so fast.

We both noticing something. I can see her cheek is getting red. She quickly turns around while…

“OH MY GOD!!” I quickly grab a pillow and cover it.

I don’t even remember that last night, I was sleeping only wearing my boxer pants. This is really embarrassing when Atsuko pull the blanket and see me like that with… okay, it’s normal that sometimes the boy’s manhood ‘gets up’ in the morning, right? So, that’s what happened when she suddenly pull my blanket. She saw it. I’m dead.

~ end of Kai’s POV ~
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This Sunday they don’t have any plans to do. Kai wants to spend the day at home, he has a lot of manga to read. He spent this morning swimming while Acchan, secretly watching him swimming from her room. Did I tell you that Acchan likes to see her young master swimming? Yes, it’s been her habit to sneak behind her curtain watching him swimming secretly. In the afternoon, Acchan feels so bored. Today Kai always avoid her. She soesn’t know what’s the reason, but somehow she thinks that Kai probably shy of what just happened this morning. Acchan decided to look for someone around the house.

“Honey!!” Acchan calls him. She looks for him the whole house but he’s not there. “Honey, where are you?”

“We’re here!!” a guy answering from the backyard.

“Hey.. there you are!!” Acchan walks approach a blonde guy who is kneeling on the grass, still showing his shy face to her. He doesn’t want to look at her in the eye. The blond guy stands up as Acchan walks closer.

“What are you doing, Honey??” Acchan takes a dog from Kai’s embrace. “I’m looking for you around the house, you know” she talks to her dog. Kai just standing there smiling looking at them.

“He just learned how to jump and catch a thing.” Kai said, trying to make another topic. Hoping that Acchan will forget about the accident this morning.

“Really?”

“Yeah, you want to see it?” Kai offer her. Seeing Acchan nods and agrees, he takes a small ball and walk in front of them while Acchan puts the dog on the ground.

“Buddy, catch this ball okay!” Kai show the ball to the dog. “Here. One, two, three, go!”

The dog runs and jumps to catch the ball by its mouth. This little show really impresses Acchan.

“Wow! You’re great!!” Acchan takes her dog again and caress its forehead. She looks at Kai “Thank you, Kai…”

“Just thank you?” Kai pouts.

Acchan chuckled. “Eeh… so what do you want?”

“Kiss?” Kai teases her by directs his cheek to her.

“You wish!” Acchan pushes away his cheek and they laughs. She knows Kai was just kidding.

“Uhm.. Atsuko.” Kai looks at her seriously when they stop laughing. “What about dinner?”

“Dinner?”

“Y-yes... a dinner, with me… umm… in a restaurant, eh? How?” Kai said nervously.

“Okay” Acchan smiles looking directly to his eyes.

Suddenly the dog barks. Woof woof!!

“Oh, no, little boy!” Kai takes the dog from Acchan. ”It’s adult business. You won’t go. Sorry…“ he pats his hand on the dog’s head. Acchan laughs again looking at what Kai doing to the dog.

“Young master!” a maid comes approach. “There’s a call for you from the office.” The maid gives the telephone to Kai.

“Yes?” Kai answers it.

“Mr. Takahashi, your uncle asked me to show you something about the preparation for your study in New York. Can you please come to the office now?”

“Now? It’s Sunday!”

“I know, Mr. But we need to talk about it immediately.”

“But why it should be in the office?”

“Because I have a lot of things to do in this glorious Sunday. I’m so glad if you don’t mind to meet me in the office.”

“Alright. I’ll go there in an hour.” Kai gives the telephone to the maid.
“sigh.. I have to go. The vice manager need to meet me.”

“Oh… ”

“Umm.. I’ll call you back if it’s still possible to have our dinner”

“Okay”

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“I never doubted Takahashi’s brain!!” the vice manager said with a big smile on his face while seeing the result of Kai’s exam.

“You can count on me” Kai said calmly then drink his tea. The vice manager asked him to come to the office since he had to tell Kai about his preparation for college.

“So, now it’s time for me to show you the big point of our meeting…” the man takes a remote and pushes the red button and direct it to a wide enough LCD on the wall.

The LCD turned on, showing a logo of the university where Kai will study later. “So this is your campus, the classroom, library, park, football yard, gymnasium, dining hall, and….. lxCr23dbcat6fdp^R#@*EYh(#@$@”. Kai isn’t really interested with those places but the swimming pool and basketball hall.

“And… here are some places that I want you to choose one of them: the apartments” the man shows him some videos of some apartments, there are some options but Kai just have to choose one of them.

“So, which one, Takahashi-san?” there’s a gap to wait for Kai to answer it.

“Which one allows me to pet a dog?” Kai suddenly asks.

“Eh? You pet a dog? Since when?”

“Oh, umm… it’s not me, actually.” Kai said awkwardly. “It’s… Maeda-san’s dog.”

“Maeda-san??” the man seems like confused and doesn’t really understand of what his young master is talking about. Maeda-san. Maeda-san. Sounds familiar. He tries to remember who is Maeda-san.
“AH!! I remember!! But… wait. You mean, MG’s daughter that living with you now, is going to live with you in New York?”

“Yes.” Kai said innocently.

“Oh.”

“Uncle Sae didn’t tell you?”

“No. He didn’t.” The man still can’t believe of this. His young master will live together with a girl in the same apartment. What his future will be?

“It means you haven’t managed anything for her college?”

“Not yet. Sorry…”

“Sigh. It’s okay. Can I take the brochures?”

“Oh, yeah. Of course.” The man takes some papers and brochures of some colleges in NY. “Here..” he gives it to Kai.

“Well, I choose the apartment which allows us to pet a dog, okay.” Kai stands up and get his bag. “I’ll go home now.”

“Ok.”

Kai walks towards the door then the vice manager calls him again. “Takahashi-san, are you sure about it?”

“About what? The dog?” Kai turns back. The man nods. “Yeah, of course. It has to be with Maeda-san. So, the dog is going too.” Kai smiles and leaves.

The vice manager of Takahashi Corp. who has been working with this Corp since 20 years ago, stands still in his place right now hearing his 17 years old young master, who is soon going to be the chairman of Takahashi Corp, will stay in New York with a girl in the same apartment. He imagines what kind of business will Takahashi Corp hold in the future, if its future chairman is living with a girl in the same apartment since he’s 17. What kind of manager will he get in the future? Pervert manager?


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Coming back from the office, Kai quickly look for Acchan in the house.

“She’s in her room.” A maid said when Kai is looking for her.

Kai walks to her room and finds the door is opened. He knocks the door. “Atsuko??”

There’s no answer. He takes a look at the room but Acchan is not there.
“Atsuko?” he tries to call her again.

“Kai? Is that you?” her voice can be heard. She’s in the bathroom.

“Y-yeah.. it’s me.”

“Oh, wait for me. I’m still showering, okay!”

“Okay!”

When Kai about to leave the room, there are some papers on the table in Acchan’s room that attracts him to see it. Kai read the papers while sitting down on the edge of Acchan’s bed.

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Finishing her shower, Acchan get out from the bathroom.
She feels so surprised when she sees Kai is still in her room. Fortunately she wears clothes from the bathroom.

“What is this?” Kai show Acchan some papers he holds when Acchan finish her shower.

Noticing what papers that Kai holds. Acchan can’t say anything, her heart beats fast. There’s an angry look in Kai’s eyes.

“Mrs. Maeda Atsuko, Thank you for the registration. Your student ID number is 32BSf87JT5, Class A of Acting and Filming Major. The class will be started next month and we enclosed the schedule in this letter.” Kai read the letter.
 
“Kai… I’m-” Acchan is about to say something, but she doesn’t even know what will she say.

“You’re going to enter this…” Kai takes a look again at the letter. “…Art College??”

Acchan nods, full of guilty.

“*sigh. You said yes, remember?” Kai puts the letter on the table. Acchan still doesn’t look at his face. She’s afraid, actually.

“Kai, it’s my dream. I want to be an actress and I’m so sorry that I didn’t tell you about it earlier.”

“No, you can’t go! You promised me remember?” now Kai boosts up his tone.

“Yeah, I know. I used to think about that too. But, Kai… we have our own dream to chase. I can’t always be with you forever. I need to chase my dream too.”

“So what about me?”

“What about you? Kai, you’re grown up and you said it too, right? You can’t rely yourself on me all the time. I know it must be hard for us but… we have to. We can’t stay like this forever. We have to discover our life. ”

“No, you won’t.“ Kai just don’t want to let it happen even he doesn’t have any reason to make her stay.

“So you’re saying you would forbid me from going?” now Acchan is a bit angry about Kai’s selfishness. How can he forbid her to chase her dreams.

“Forbid? Who said forbid?” Kai is really angry now. Well, it’s going to be a fight.
“I was just reminding you that you said you’re going with me to New York and I was kind of… hoping you’d live together with me there.” He blushed as what he just said.
 “Oh, come on, Atsuko. You’ve always wanted to go abroad, right?”

“Yes, but there’s a lot of things I’ve always wanted, Kai.” Acchan answered. “And not this way.. I mean,”

“You don’t wanna live with me?” Kai cuts her words.

“No! Yes! Ah, I- I don’t know…”

“*sigh”

“Kai, you  know it’s my dream…”

“And being with me is not your dream? Gosh, Yuu… You lied. She doesn’t love me.”

“I’m sorry, Kai. I just need to do this before settling down forever.”

Now Kai’s heart is really broken. Hearing Acchan decided to live separated from him, living overseas from him. All his hope of being together with Acchan, just like what Yuu said weeks ago, are disappeared. No hope for them to be forever.

“Fine. Go with your dream. I hate you.” Kai walks away and bang Acchan’s door so hard, leaving a BURK!! sound to the crying Acchan inside her room.

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~ END OF CHAPTER 19 ~



Bad  ending, sorry :(
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: kuro808 on July 19, 2013, 08:29:00 PM
Well Kai needs to finally either admit his love or let her go probably forever

Nice update :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: POPCAT on July 19, 2013, 08:37:18 PM
I will keep calm and wait for the next chapter, because that's how pros do it  :thumbsup
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: Sydney W on July 20, 2013, 02:50:10 AM
Owhh. Kai should confess his feeling to Acchan instantly. Perhaps there is a turnaround between them.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 20, 2013, 11:13:39 AM
Ah... Kai was so angry with Atsuko

What Sae scared of was right.... if ever Kai was going to live with Atsuko when he was in US

All the other people that worked for Kai would not think that Kai would be able to control his company then....

What's going to happen to them?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: Wmatsui22 on July 21, 2013, 06:11:44 AM
~Taking Care Of  You  :heart:

Chapter 19

Hi Chemicalstar-san! :D

Thanks for update although it’s sad...  :cry:

What will happened to Kai and Acchan relationship?  :?

Please update soon.... :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 19/07/2013 <<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on July 24, 2013, 12:17:07 PM
Oh my what's gonna happen to Kai and Acchan now??
Why can't they just admit the the love is mutual...
Thanks for the update!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 27, 2013, 08:05:33 AM
 Yo, just finish the new update. But I think it’s too short so I make it the Part 1. I have a lot of things to do so I guess I will just update it first. Enjoy!


CHAPERT 20 Part 1


There was no dinner that evening, only tears and anger left between the two. Kai back furiously to his room, throwing the colleges brochures he brought from the office to the trash. He’s totally mad of what Acchan said.

“Dream, huh? Just tell that you don’t want to live with me! Ugh!” he thought.

Kai takes his phone and texts the vice manager, he tells him that Acchan won’t go. His every plan about living together with Acchan is canceled. The apartment, the college, the confession… Yes, Kai thought that one day he (maybe) want to confess his feeling to Acchan. Living together out of the country maybe makes them realize that they are not master-maid or just friends. They love each other. But that evening, that fight, changes everything.

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Uncle Sae called home and informed that he will come back home tomorrow, bringing his ‘special friend’, Sayaka,  together. He asked Acchan to make a special dinner for tomorrow so they all can discuss and talk about everything about their college plan.

That afternoon, Acchan goes to grocery store accompanied by two other maids to buy some ingredients. While she looks for vegetables, suddenly someone covers her eyes from behind. Acchan quickly turns around.

“Acchan!!” a girl smiles widely in front of her.

“Ah!! Rena-chan!!” Acchan smiles back and hug her. “Been so long…”

“Yeah, you never visited my café, eh?”

“Umm, sorry…” Acchan pouts. “Next time I will, as often as you want!” she shows two fingers to promise her words.

“Eh, no way! I heard from Jurina that you will go to New York with Kai. It’s impossible that you will visit my café that often”

Suddenly the smile disappears from Acchan’s face. This topic again.

“Eh? What happened? You looks so sad” Rena asks and waves her hand in front of Acchan’s face as she saw Acchan spacing out.

“Oh, no. I’m all okay… it’s just..”

“Acchan, just tell me if you have any problem, especially about Kai. Even if I haven’t knew him for long, but Jun always tell me about his bestfriends. So, I’m quite know about him.”

“Hmm… what about I visit your café now?”

Hearing Acchan’s statement, Rena understands that Acchan want to talk about this with her.

“Sure, let me pay it first, okay..”

“Okay, I’ll tell them to shop without me” Acchan pointing at two maids who are walking between the racks of milk.

“I’ll wait you outside” Rena waves her hands, then they seperated.

Once Acchan and Rena arrived at the café, Rena asks her worker to serve them two cups of cappuccino. Acchan tells her that the plan to study in New York is canceled. She also tells her about everything happened between her and Kai.

“Acchan, do you really love him?”

Acchan takes a deep sigh. ”I don’t know. I-… I guess so.” She simply said without looking at Rena.

“I guess so? What kind of answer is that?” Rena chuckled. “There’s only yes or no for love, Acchan. Don’t befool yourself.”

Acchan looks at Rena, she needs about two or three seconds to finally say  “Yes, I love him” then she looks away again.

“Ahh.. you finally confess it” Rena teases her.

“But, it’s not right, Rena-chan…” Acchan said in hesitation. “Even if we’re close enough as friends, however he is my master and I’m his maid. I don’t know what people might said if I fall in love with him. It sounds so… ”

“..bitchy?” Rena added jokingly.

“Mou… that’s rude!” Acchan pouts while Rena laughs at her.

“Hahaha. Oka, okay. I’m serious again. So, you’re not going to tell him?”

“No, he hates me so much now. I’m giving up of him... there’s no chance for me to get him back.”

“I feel so sorry about the fight, but I think at least you should tell him the truth that you love him” Rena talks again.

Acchan turns her head down looking at the ground, thinks a little. “No, I guess no… It will ruin everything. It will makes another problem, I guess.”

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Mario invites the boys to come to his house for a little farewell party since two days later he will go for his “world adventure” with his brother. He served a lot of food and drinks. They also had a game battle. It’s Kai’s and Jurina’s turn to play. Suddenly, Kai’s phone is ringing but he ignores it.

“Kai, your phone!” Yuu said. Kai still ignores it. He’s too excited with the game.

“Dudes, it keeps ringing! So noisy” Mario grumbled and give the phone to him.

“Okay, let’s pause a while, maybe your Acchan’s calling” Jurina teases him.

Hearing Acchan’s name, his mood turns bad. He looks at the screen, it’s the vice manager.

“It’s her, right?” Jurina said smirking at him.

“It’s from the office”he answered.
"Yes?" Kai answers the phone.

"Sir, we're going to hire a private maid to go with you to NY. There are some candidates so I wonder if you want to choose one of-"

"Male, 40's, can cook katsudon."  Kai simpky said, cut the manager's words. He press the red button and end the conversation.

Mario looks at his friend behavior: "He's back." he thought. Kai doesn't act like usual, the cold-headed and stubborn Kai is back. Mario wonders what happened with him.

"What's that?" Jurina innocently asks. "You're going to hire another maid?"

"Uhn.." Kai said still looking at his phone screen, looks like he's texting someone.

“There are a lot of maids in your house, even you fall for one of them, eh?” Jurina said innocently.

Mario can see Kai’s mood turns bad. He pinches Jurina’s arm to give him a code: Don’t tease him!

" Don't say that Acchan will not go with you.." Mario is guessing, giving a sharp glare at Kai.

Hearing what Mario just said, Yuu 's getting chocked. "What? Whoa whoa.. What do you mean Acchan won't go, Kai?" he frowns.

"Enough, Yuu. Let's don’t talk about her. I don't want to fight with you again" Kai avoids their questions.

"But she lov.."

"Enough! Enough! Please don't talk about her again!" Kai shouts.

"But. " Yuu  tries to deny but then Mario grab his shoulder to keep him from talking more.

"It's okay, Kai.." Mario tries to calm him down. "Let's don’t talk about this. But, later if you ready and need someone to talk, we always here okay."

They agree to continue their little party although Kai has a little bad mood. When the day goes down, the boys decide to leave. Kine is ready in front of Mario’s house just when they walk out of the door. Mario hold Kai’s hand when he’s about to enter the car.

“May I ask you a favor before I go?”

Kai frowns. “What?”

“Before you go to New York, confess your feeling.”

Kai doesn’t answer, he just lift up his shoulder and enter the car.

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Back from Mario’s house, Kai feels so stressed. Lucky him doesn’t meet Acchan when he arrives. He go to the swimming pool. Kai takes off his towel just when he arrives near the pool. He stretches his body and does some warming up moves. Swimming is the only thing he can do to calm down his head when the problems of life are around. See, being in a fight with Acchan is one of his problems of life. Facing the fact that three days later he will leave Japan and go to New York, and being separated thousand miles away from Acchan is one of his problems of life. Being so guilty to mad at Acchan and feels that he’s so selfish is one of his problems of life. And to realize that he’s falling in love with Acchan is one of his problems of life. Everything that related to Acchan, is the problem of his life now, and he needs to swim, a lot.

He finished about 4 rounds swimming. He takes a break for a while and sits on the edge of the pool while suddenly Honey, the dog comes approach.

“Hey, buddy!” Kai pats its head. The dog sits beside him.
“Sorry, you’re not going too.” He looks at the dog. He likes this dog although the one who bought it is not him. It’s one of the workers from the office who bought the dog. Kai just asked him to find a cute dog to pet for a girl. Fortunately the worker knew how to choose the right dog.
“Don’t forget me, okay!” Kai smiles at the dog. “Don’t make any trouble, and… please take care of her.”

“I love her…” he said, half whispering.

Kai gets in the water and swims again until he feels tired enough to forget about his problems. Meanwhile… Acchan is standing behind the window, she was about to find the dog. But the she finds the dog is with Kai near the pool. She heard everything except the last sentence.

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How’s that ??
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: nadiyahdz16 on July 27, 2013, 08:39:51 AM
Why it has to be the last sentence that she didn't hear?!?! :cry:  :banghead:  :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: abcari on July 27, 2013, 10:15:22 AM
Why it has to be the last sentence that she didn't hear?!?! :cry:  :banghead:  :bleed eyes:

 (╯°□°)╯︵ sƃuᴉlәәɟ ʎɯ llɐ
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: kurumi on July 27, 2013, 11:04:46 AM
I agree with the 2 people above. Kai should talk louder! Please confess soon!! :panic:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 27, 2013, 01:12:52 PM
Ah... if only Kai was saying his confession louder...

It would save lots of heartache for everyone...

What's going to happen to Atsuko and Kai next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: kuro808 on July 27, 2013, 01:50:35 PM
Well Kai can say his true feelings but keeps it knowing it may not change the results...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 19 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: korin48 on July 27, 2013, 03:33:50 PM
She heard everything except the last sentence.

Why expect?!?!!??!  :banghead: :angry:
Kai should speak "I love you" louder!!!  :smhid :angry:
Please update!!!!  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: Yuki88 on July 27, 2013, 07:55:38 PM
Drama, drama, dram. I LOVE THIS.

Obviously both of them are so thick-headed and no one dare makes the first move.

Can't wait for the update :3
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: Haruko on July 27, 2013, 08:44:24 PM
Why it has to be the last sentence that she didn't hear?!?! :cry:  :banghead:  :bleed eyes:

 (╯°□°)╯︵ sƃuᴉlәәɟ ʎɯ llɐ

hell yeah
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 Part 1 - UPDATED 27/07/2013 <<
Post by: mgxx on July 28, 2013, 04:07:57 PM
acctualy,,, I cried while reading this story ..
kai please!!! confess your feeling :(
im so sad, because this story will be ended  :( :(
i hope chemical-san will write the sesion 2 of this story, when atsuko and kai get married someday and have some child in their family.. ahh it would be interesting  :inlove: :inlove:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on August 04, 2013, 11:37:13 AM
 
Ahh, sorry if the latest update story made you all disappointed. So, to have to say SORRY again. This is going to be the last chapter. Thank you for all your support by reading my fanfiction story. I hope you all like it.

CHAPTER 20 PART 2

Just came back from his basketball game, Kai went back home. It’s so tiring day for him. He used to spend his time by playing basketball, go to meet the people to erase his heartache. Still wearing basketball uniform which covers his sweaty body, Kai walks in the house. He smells something interesting: foods. He takes a peep to the kitchen, just to make sure that Acchan is not there. However, he still try not to meet her so often even they live in the same house.

Acchan is not there, Kai decides to get in the dining room where some maids serve the foods on the table.

“Whoaa!! Whose birthday is it?” Kai said looking at the foods, drooling.

“Takahashi-san didn’t know?” a maid asked him while putting a plate on the table.

“Eh? Knowing what?” Kai answered innocently.

“Takahashi Sae-san is coming this evening. That’s why we make this special dinner. He asked us to prepare them all.” The maid said.

“Uncle Sae is coming this evening?” Kai looks so surprised.

“Yes! I wonder why you don’t know about this, young master” said another maid.

Kai pouts. It’s impossible if Uncle Sae didn’t inform anything. Uncle Sae might be called Acchan, but since Kai and Acchan is on a fight, so that’s why Acchan didn’t inform him about it.

“I don’t know…” Kai lift up his shoulder and ignores it. “Who cares…”
Kai is back to his interest of the foods. He furtively moves his hand and about to take a baked shrimp on the plate but suddenly…

SLAP!!

Someone slaps his hand, he quickly turns around and see a girl behind him.

“At least wash your hands first!” the girl grumbled without looking at him but busy with her work of preparing some beverages. Kai just pouts with a cold face.
“Uncle Sae will arrive in an hour, you better get shower now.” Acchan said, her back is facing Kai.

Kai gets upset. Without saying anything, he walks out of the dining room and go to the second floor heading to his room. He sighs deeply, throws his backpack on the bed, takes off his shoes then goes to the bathroom.

“Whoa!” he seems so surprised again, the bathroom is full of steam. He takes a look at the bath tub, someone has prepared a warm water for him. Kai thinks that it must be Acchan, the only maid who can enter his room privately. “Still care about me, eh?” he thought. He takes off his clothes and get in the tub, enjoys the relaxing warm water.

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"I'm home!!" Uncle Sae shouts happily. Acchan quickly walks to the living room and meets him.

"Uncle Sae!!" Acchan greets him.

"Acchan!!" he hugs Acchan while Sayaka who stands behind him smiles looking at the warm scene in front of him.

"Hi Acchan!" Sayaka greets her when Acchan releases the hug. She bows at him.

"Come on, the dinner is ready. Let's eat first!"

"Oh yeah! I can't wait for dinner, let's talk about a lot while eating." Sae put gives his bags to some maids so they can put the bags in his room.

"Where's Kai?" Sayaka said.

"Ah, yeah, where is he?" Uncle sae added.

Acchan pour some drinks to Sae and Sayaka's glasses. "He's taking a bath."

"Oh.."

"So, Acchan, how's your preparation for college?" Sae asked.

Acchan sits down on the chair in front of Sae and Sayaka. "Everything's okay. All the registration things are finished. I just got the schedule for the first month."

"Ah, good. I hope there's no problem with them." Sae said.

"Hmm... That art college, I have a friend teaches there." Sayaka said.

"Really?" Acchan asked. "Wow that's cool!"

"Actually, my cousin, not my friend. She's the lecturer in broadcasting subject." Sayaka said. "Eh, by the way Acchan. Is the college too far from here?" Sayaka asked. "I mean... It will be so tiring if you go there everyday even by train."

"Yes, but.. I don't have any choice. There's no relatives who live there, Uncle Sayaka" Acchan said a little sad

Sayaka looks at Sae. "You should rent her an apartrment, dear!"

"Really?"

"Of course!" Sayaka. "What if she come back from college late of night, what if there are bullies?"

"Hmm.. You're right!" Sae thinks a little. "Acchan, what if you live in an apartment bear the campus?"

"Yeah, I can ask my cousin to look for a proper apartment for you!" Sayaka offers his help.

"Uhn, that's right, Acchan. You can come back here on weekend.

Accchan smiles bright. "Thank you.."

"It's okay, Acchan. I'm your parent now!" Uncle Sae smiles at her, then he sees someone's coming with not so friendly look. "Oi, Kai!!"

Kai walks in the dining room in very cool style just like he's not so excited that Uncle Sae is coming. Acchan can see his bad behavior.

"Are you okay?!" Uncle Sae said when he hugs Kai, "You looks unwell."

They sit down again. Kai sits opposite to Acchan even there is an empty chair beside Acchan. That evening should be a good way for them to have a chit chat. But Kai's behavior is strange. He used to be so silent during the dinner and choosea to focus at the food. That's why Uncle Sae and Sayaka only talk to Acchan.

"You know, Acchan.. There will be a lot of handsome guys at college!" Sayaka said. "My cousin always tells me that her students are handsome."

"Souka..." Acchan just laughs at Sayaka. "Maybe I will have a lot of boyfriends!" she said jokingly.

"Of course, you're pretty, every guy must fall for you" Uncle Sae added.

"I'M FINISH!" Kai suddenly said. He takes his drink then stands up, leaves them and walks away.

Everyone's silent, looking at Kai's strange behavior. As Kai leaves the dinning room, Se suddenly said. "Is there something wrong with you two?"

"Ano... We're on a fight" Acchan said nervously.

"What?!" Sayaka said surprised.

Then, Acchan tells her Uncle what happened while Kai is in his room: sleeping.

"Ah, so that's why..."

"Haik, I'm sorry I made him mad." Acchan said.

"No, it's not your fault, Acchan." Uncle sae said. "Let him live by himself. You, just go to he art college and promise me to be a great actrees. About Kai, I will make him a great leader for our company. You don't have to be worried about him."

"Yes, you're righy. But still, it's so awkward that I'm in a fight with him. I can let it too much longer."

"I think he doesn't mad at you. He just can't take the reality yet."

Acchan looks at Uncle Sae directly.

"Soon he will not mad at you anymore when he realize something" Uncle Sae said seriously then stands up. "I'll take a rest, tomorrow we have to prepare for Kai's departure to NY. Good night, Acchan"

"Good night, Uncle Sae."

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The day is today. Kai's goods and stuff havr already packed up and he's ready to leave Japan for his college. Until thay day, he still in a fight with Acchan. Both of them are so coward and stone headed. No one of them wantas to take a move first.

"Let's go... We don't want to miss the flight, right?" Uncle sae calls Kai who is still inside his room.

Kine is ready with a SUV. Before Acchan get in the car, Kai quickly get in and sits in the front seat beside Kine to avoid sitting together with Acchan on the backseat. Along the ride to the airport, they have a chit chat again except Kai who is wearing an earphone and listening to his own music.

Jur when they arrives at the airport, they check in and get ready for the flight.

"Bye Acchan, always tell me about your college okay!" Uncle Sae said as he hugged Acchan.

"Haik,  don't worry about me". Acchan said. "Bye.  " she waved her hand to them.

Acchan and Kai just starea each other without saying anything. Uncle Sae, Sayaka, and Kai get in a passenger waiting room to wait for the flight.

“Are you sure there’s nothing left behind?” Uncle Sae asked.

Kai nods. “Yes, everything’s perfect.”

“Nothing you want to say before we leave?”

Kai silenced for a while. “No. I guess no.”

“I guess no? Make it sure, don’t guessing!”

Just when they enter the room, Uncle Sae (once again) talks to Kai. “It may takes a long time. You may be able to go back to Japan next Christmas. Make sure you won’t miss anything.”

“Next Christmas?” he said surprised. "I think I will be able to come back this Christmas!"

Uncle Sae laughs a little. "No, you'll be very busy this christmas. There will be no time to come back to Japan."

That's very long. Kai thinks again.

"What's goin on?" Uncle Sae asked when he saw Kai's expression changed.

“Wait a sec, I’ll be fast!” Kai said to Uncle Sae. He quickly turns around and running back ouside.
"I hope you’re still there." Kai thought.

“SIR!! Wait , Sir!” two officers forbid him from get out of the room. “You can’t go out. The plane will be departed in no time. You should go back.”

“No, please, I need to meet someone. There’s something I want to say!” Kai shouts at the officers.

“You can’t, Sir. It may impede the departure.” The officer said while grabbing his wrist hard.

“PLEASE!!” Kai begs to them. “I have to meet her…” he said with watery eyes.

Hearing word ‘her’, the officer finally let him go. “Three minutes!”

Kai smiles widely. “Thank you” he bows at them, then he walks fast to the waiting area, hoping Acchan is still there.

There are a lot of people there, it’s not easy to find her.
“ATSUKO!!” he starts to shouts her name so he can find him fast. “ATSUKO!”

Then, he saw a girl with shoulder-length hair standing facing the glass wall.
“ATSUKO!!” he calls her.

Acchan turns around and sees Kai is walking towards her. She seems so surprised as Kai is walks back to the waiting room. “What happened?” she thought.

In the other side, Kai can see Acchan’s eyes are red and her cheeks are wet. “She must be crying” he thought.

“Kai…” she said, half whispering.

Kai quickly cups her face and capture her lips with him. He press his lips to hers, tasting her sweet lips. At first Acchan just silenced, but then she replies the kiss.

Kai can feel her wet cheeks of tears. He kisses and taste every inch of her lips, enjoying the warmth of her lips. In other side, Acchan feels like there’s a butterfly flying inside her stomach as Kai kisses her passionately. Her hands moves to his body and hug him closer to her while Kai still cups her cheeks and focus with the kiss. Her heart beats fast.

As they lack of air, Kai let go of her.

“I love you…” Kai said, their face in only an inch apart.

Acchan’s eyes drop some tears again. The tears of happiness.

“I love you too, Kai..” Acchan said trembling.

Kai smiles happily, hearing that Acchan loves him too.

“I’m sorry…hiks hiks” Acchan still trembling, tears keep running down on her cheek. “I’m sorry to make you disappointed.”

“Sshhh..” Kai places hid index finger on her lips. “Don’t say again. I love you…” Kai kisses her again, more passionate than the first. This time Acchan replies the kiss just as passionate as him. It's longer than before. Kai overs the kiss again and looks directly to her eyes.

“Will you wait for me?” Kai said, half begging. “Please..”

Acchan quickly nods. “Yes.. I promise…”

Kai smiles happily. “Thank you..”
"Don't date any other guy in college even if they're handsome, okay?"

Acchan chuckled. "Okay, I won't, master!".
He still remember the conversation that night. He was jealous alhough that was only a joke.

“I love you..” once again, he meet his lips with hers again, but this one is only  a light kiss.

“Please wait for me, Atsuko..” he said, then he hugs her tight.

Acchan leans her head on her chest, drowned on his embrace. She can feel his warmth of love.

“Sir!” An officer calls Kai while showing his watch.

Kai realized that this time he has to go.

“I gotta go now..” he kisses her forehead. “See you, Atsuko..” he smiles and wipes her cheeks from the tears. “Don’t cry okay.”

Acchan release the hug and nods. “Call me when you arrive.”

Kai walks back heading to where the officers are. He turns around again to see her once again. He can see Acchan smiles at him and waves her hand.

"Whetr have you been?!" Uncle Sae asked he's  a bit mad.

"Sshh ... He just met Acchan" Sayaka said to calm him down. Then he whispers in Sae's ear. "I saw them kissing!"

"Really?!" Uncle Sae wides his eyes. "So it's official, Kai?!"

Kai just smiles awkwardly. "I guess so."

"Hahaha... I'm glad you confesses it!" Sae said as they walk in the plane. "Just be careful, a long distance relationship is not that easy." he winks at him.

Meanwhile...

Acchan is standing beside a bkack  SUV before she gets in the car, she looks up and see Kai's plane has already flew away.  She smiles, "I love you, Kai... ".



THE END

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So... That's the end!! How's that?! :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: kuro808 on August 04, 2013, 12:10:59 PM
Nice ending although they will be far apart in any case
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: Yuki88 on August 04, 2013, 12:33:01 PM
Haha, that's a nice ending, albeit a little short. I think you should write an epilogue haha.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: korin48 on August 04, 2013, 12:47:11 PM
Omg! A kiss!  :inlove:
Abit lack but nice ending...  :deco:
Please write epilogue! :tantrum:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: cisda83 on August 04, 2013, 04:16:09 PM
Nice ending... But one more chapter please to wrap it up...

Say how they become together after how many years?

How they got their happy ending...?

Thank you for the nice ending

Can't wait to see an epilogue..

:twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: Sydney W on August 04, 2013, 04:21:18 PM
Is that all ? I want an omake ! I want them (Kai x Acchan) be together at the end NOT a separate long distance relationship. Uwahh, i'm crying now.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: Haruko on August 04, 2013, 05:39:35 PM
sweet final chapter.. but I want a "omake" extra chapter.. when Kai returns to Japan... but its ok :B
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: mgxx on August 05, 2013, 04:38:40 AM
sesion 2 , please  :bow: :bow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: hazwani on August 05, 2013, 02:13:44 PM
iahhh.. i need epilogue or.second seasons.. huhu.. i want.know about after kai return to japan
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: miayaka on August 05, 2013, 02:38:21 PM
hey atsumina_100 XD
tbh I want more hahahahahahahaha
the ending is perfect but
cough* season 2 cough* epilogue
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: chichay12 on August 05, 2013, 02:44:45 PM
I want more hahahahahahahaha
the ending is perfect but
cough* season 2 cough* epilogue
Totally agree with mia!
Pls iwant more XD
thank you for the fic chem
:on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: mgxx on August 05, 2013, 02:49:34 PM
hey atsumina_100 XD
tbh I want more hahahahahahahaha
the ending is perfect but
cough* season 2 cough* epilogue

eeee don't tell anyone yet, miayaka-san *run away*  :mon trudge:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED 4/08/2013 <<
Post by: Pdpond on August 05, 2013, 03:59:40 PM
Eh end already? Omake i want omake
but its can call happy ending nya :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: chemicalstar on August 05, 2013, 07:38:02 PM
 Hi everyone!!

Thanks for all the 'thank yous' and comments you gave, and also for all the (silent) readers (who join or not in this forum) for reading my fic until the "The End" showed up.

To be honest, it's not easy to write such a long 20 Chapters fan fiction. English is not my main language, so... I notice that my English is suck. I wrote a billion typos inside. Gahh!! This thing that I couldn't ever avoid from. But I'm glad, even with those lacks of writing, you can still understand the story. Arigatou!!

Most of you expected an omake chapter, even the season 2 of this story. Well, I know even though I wrote a happy ending of KaixAcchan but it still makes another question: "How about their life after that?" Or maybe some of you still imagine how about their life will be when Kai come back to Japan.

@miayaka & @mgxx: I PLANNED IT, okay not PROMISED IT. Damn you two just made a lot of readers took too much hopes for this. Lol

Well. THANK YOU again. And about the omake or maybe the season 2, I said it: I planned it. So, let's see......
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: karenchan on August 06, 2013, 01:04:10 AM
Aww, so sweet  :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

I felt butterfly in my stomach too.
Somehow, I feel like i want to dance  :on gay: :on gay:

Thank you for the completed series.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: cisda83 on August 06, 2013, 04:31:51 AM
Yeah can't wait to see what you are going to do

Whether it's a omake or a season 2.

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: mgxx on August 06, 2013, 03:34:26 PM


@miayaka & @mgxx: I PLANNED IT, okay not PROMISED IT. Damn you two just made a lot of readers took too much hopes for this. Lol



gommenasai *running away*  :lol: :lol:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: Tupi on August 06, 2013, 07:36:15 PM
Your fic is great!!!  :twothumbs

KaiXAcchan so sweet... :inlove:
But like the other, I want more...  :panic:
Please make a omake or season 2! :cow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: miayaka on August 06, 2013, 10:00:20 PM


@miayaka & @mgxx: I PLANNED IT, okay not PROMISED IT. Damn you two just made a lot of readers took too much hopes for this. Lol



gommenasai *running away*  :lol: :lol:

oopppsss we spilled it XDDD
what happened in twitter remains in twitter  XD
BUT i can't help it! (you know I'm bias on my otp)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: KojiYuu44 on August 09, 2013, 07:12:32 PM
it took them a long time...
but they finally ended up together
such a sweet ending :)
Thank you!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: 7sam14 on August 10, 2013, 08:08:44 AM
Author-san!!!!

We(I) Need A Season 2!!!! :tantrum: :mon whine:

Pwease!!!  :bow: :bow: :pleeease: 


Though it's such a sweet ending... :farofflook:

Hope u can make more!!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: chemicalstar on September 17, 2013, 04:11:16 PM
Holla!!

it's been so long, huh...

Well I have an annoumcement today.

There were a lot of request that asked me to make SEASON 2 or at leas an omake for this ff "Taking Care Of You"

So, I considered it that... I guess,... ummm ready for it? are you ready for it??

I WILL MAKE THE SEASON 2....!!!!!

Maybe I will start writing next week, so be patient.
I saw that a lot of new comers in this forum, so I suggest you to read this ff from the beginning before you read the Season 2 that (maybe) I will write next week.

thank you, have a good day :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: shiruba_rein on September 17, 2013, 04:16:11 PM
Yatta!  :w00t:

I'm so happy 'cuz there would be a season 2!! . . . .


I am really looking forward to it  XD XD
Can't wait for next week  XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: blakwhite on September 17, 2013, 04:20:16 PM
Holla!!

it's been so long, huh...

Well I have an annoumcement today.

There were a lot of request that asked me to make SEASON 2 or at leas an omake for this ff "Taking Care Of You"

So, I considered it that... I guess,... ummm ready for it? are you ready for it??

I WILL MAKE THE SEASON 2....!!!!!

Maybe I will start writing next week, so be patient.
I saw that a lot of new comers in this forum, so I suggest you to read this ff from the beginning before you read the Season 2 that (maybe) I will write next week.

thank you, have a good day :)


yaaay season 2, i love you chemicalstar (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/onion-head/love-onion-head-emoticon.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: ezha on September 17, 2013, 04:58:43 PM
I LOVE U !!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> CHAPTER 20 COMPLETED and REPLY<<
Post by: noah minami on September 17, 2013, 06:39:01 PM
Maybe I will start writing next week, so be patient.
I saw that a lot of new comers in this forum, so I suggest you to read this ff from the beginning before you read the Season 2 that (maybe) I will write next week.

thank you, have a good day :)
 SECOND SEASON! YEAHH!!! HAHA
CAN'T WAIT LOL...

nice job!  :thumbsup  :cow: :yossi: :fap :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: chichay12 on September 17, 2013, 09:30:03 PM
Holla!!

it's been so long, huh...

Well I have an annoumcement today.

There were a lot of request that asked me to make SEASON 2 or at leas an omake for this ff "Taking Care Of You"

So, I considered it that... I guess,... ummm ready for it? are you ready for it??

I WILL MAKE THE SEASON 2....!!!!!

Maybe I will start writing next week, so be patient.
I saw that a lot of new comers in this forum, so I suggest you to read this ff from the beginning before you read the Season 2 that (maybe) I will write next week.

thank you, have a good day :)
Best news for the day!
Season 2, I cant wait :on gay:

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: cisda83 on September 17, 2013, 10:12:18 PM
Chemicalstar-San...

Love you... You're making my day...

Thank you for the decision in making season 2

Can't wait to see it

Once again... Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> ANNOUNCEMENT <<
Post by: Haruko on September 18, 2013, 02:20:16 AM
YEY!! season 2
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on October 05, 2013, 09:37:25 PM
I’m sorry it took so long since I’ve announced that I would make the Season 2 of TAKING CARE OF YOU.
I’ve been quite busy so I could just read the fictions but now wrote mine. Sorry  :P
So this is the first chapter of TAKING CARE OF YOU Season 2. I don’t think that this season is gonna be a long story, it may be ended in 4 or 5 chapters. But I’ll do my best to make the story quite awesome.

 :welcome for the new readers, I hope that you read the first season of this story first before you going with this.  :twothumbs



Season 2 – CHAPTER 1

IT’S pretty chill outside this morning. A young blonde guy just groans to the sound of alarm clock that is ringing so loud. He hits the clock and the alarm sound stops automatically. Looking up to the white ceiling, the guy with a perfect shaped nose and jaw tries to make himself totally awake. He smells something that he can notice quickly as a cup of creamy cappuccino. The guy looks at a small table near his bed where he found a cup of hot cappuccino and his cellphone. He takes that rectangular gadget and turn its screen on.

A bright smiling cute face appears the time he turn the screen on. It makes him insensibly smiling at the screen. There’s a new message notification and he quickly open it.

“Good morning, captain america!
Super blessing today”

“Takahashi-san!” a man appears on the door.

Kai took a glance at that round 40’s man. “What?”

“Don’t forget your class today is an hour earlier than usual.”

Kai takes a look at the screen and realizes that he has to prepare himself immediately or else he will come late to the class. He quickly took a bath, get his suit on, have his breakfast and go to the college. He drives his new black shiny sport car to the college by himself. The time he arrives at college, some guys come approach and greets him. He got some friends at college. They’re nice enough, but no one compares to his bestfriends in Japan. Jun, Mario, and Yuu. Although his new bestfriends in college are cool and kind, but they don’t understand Japanese. Though, it always makes Kai thinks that his bestfriends are only Jun, Mario and Yuu. Even though they’re far away from him right now.

It took some hours in the class. Now Kai is in a library with his friends. They usually go to the library after class,  looking for some references to learn at the apartment. While his friends looking for books, Kai sits and opens his laptop. He types and enters a Japanese news website, looking for news about Acchan. It's been his new custom to look for news about Acchan through the internet. Such a long distance between them makes Kai can only do this thing to know about Acchan each and every day.

A light smile grows on his face as he sees Acchan's face on the first page. It's not the first time that Acchan appears on the first page of most Japanese news sites. She's a shining star in Japan now. The news said that Acchan will release her first photobook. A lot of people left comments on that news. Most of all are happy and can't wait for the photo book. Kai bets that she has millions of fans in Japan now. Sometimes it makes him happy to see her success, but sometimes it hurts too, knowing that most of her fans are males. However, he feels jealous in some way. Knowing that millions of guys want to be her boyfriend, but him? Her boyfriend who has been far away from her.

"Hey look who we have here! A stalker!! Hahaha" Jay, a Californian guy who has light brown hair suddenly appears behind Kai.
"What are you looking at, man?" Jay looks at Kai's laptop screen. He smirks.
“Aww, she’s cute… Japanese actress,  huh?”

“Oh dude, our friend stalks her, hahaha” another guy who has blond hair just like Kai's appears beside him.

“I’m not stalking!" Kai tries to defend himself. "She’s my girlfriend, ya know!”

“Yes, alright, your girlfriend!" Jay said in 'whatever!' look on his face.
"I have some actress' too as my girlfriends for my fantasy” he winks at Kai.

"Yeah, that's right! Every man has his own fantasy though” Louis, the Irish blond guy added.

"You know Kai, Selena Gomez is my girlfriend!" Jay said confidently.

"Mine is Natalie Portman!" Louis said with a bright smile.

"Huh? Natalie Portman? Is she too old for you?" Jay frowns.

"Naah, whatever. She's still hot!" Louis lifts his shoulder.

"WHAT?!" now Kai's head is getting dizzy, noticing that the conversation is becoming more crazy. His friends still get it as a joke, or maybe not. They even think that the girl on the screen is only his 'fantasy girlfriend'. 
"IT'S NOT...”

“Oh, come on.. just forget it. Let’s go, we have a lot of things to do..” Jay drags Kai to go.

They leave the library and heading to Louis' apartment. They still have something to do about the project they had for college. They do it in a team. Three guys from different continents are about to make a project of international scale business.


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The next week, Kai check the internet. Today Acchan’s photo book will be released. He buys it online. It's so rare for a new comer actress to have an amazing career in this entertainment business. Four dramas, two movies, and a lot of of CMs in almost 3 years.  The time after the order finished. He opens the photo book on his screen.He dropjaws to see how sexy Acchan is.  There are a lot of Acchan’s photos, some were taken at the beach and she wears cute and sexy bikinis. Kai can’t blink his eyes over these fascinating pictures. He don’t even notice that his friend down there is insensibly lifting.

Suddenly, there’s a sound of call notification. Kai quickly open it. It’s Acchan calling for a video chat.
Kai open the conversation, and in a second, Acchan’s face appears on his screen.

“Hey Atsuko… it’s so sudden you’re calling me. You have a day off?”

“No, I have a break for two hours, then I saw your account is online so I call you. You haven’t slept yet? It’s already midnight there, right?”

“Ah, yeah… I don’t feel sleepy yet..” Kai said awkwardly. It’s impossible if he tell her that he just bought her photo book.

“KAI !!!” Acchan suddenly call him in different tone.

“What?”

“Your nose!! It’s bleeding!!” Acchan said in worried.

“WHAT?” Kai quickly touch his nose and yes, it’s bleeding. He grabs some tissue near the desk panicky.

“What happened? Are you sick? Don’t tell me you study too hard and had a lot of activities until you too exhausted, forgot your meal, and now you don’t care about your health?” Acchan starts worried and speaks too much.

“NO! NO! Of course not. I’m all okay, Atsuko. Trust me”

“So what is that?” Acchn frowns.

“Nothing, it’s just…” Kai doesn’t know what to say.

Then suddenly Acchan changes her expression and shows her suspicious face. “You just watched a porn movie?”

“WHAT?? NO!!! I didn’t!!” Kai shouts panicky.

“Don’t lie!“

“I’m not lying!” he replies. “Urgh, Atsuko can’t we talking about it? I’m all okay, and I don’t know why this is happening, okay?”

Acchan chuckles. “Okay okay.. Hmm, actually I just want to know if you have already prepared for your final exam or not.”

“Of course I have. I promised Uncle Sae that I’ll be graduated with straight A’s”

“Wow, that’s my boy! I’m proud” Acchan smiles. “Umm, so… you better go to sleep now. I know it’s too late of night there.”

“Eh? Why is so short? It’s just now, we haven’t talk a lot yet..”

“Come on, don’t turn against your mom, little boy!” Acchan teased. “Go to sleep!”

“*Sigh, okay okay..”

“Oyasumi Kai, I love you..” then Acchan move closer her face to the camera, closing her eyes, doing a gesture like she’s about to kiss Kai.

Seeing her ‘about to kiss’ face fulfilling his screen, Kai feels his heart beating so fast.
“I-I..I love you too” he said trembling.

Acchan sits back to her position and smiles at him. “Hey, look at that. Your nose is bleeding again!” Acchan tease him and laughs.

“WHAT?” Kai touch his nose again. No blood anymore. Acchan just teased him. “Shit!” he tought. “Don’t tease me like that!” he pouts.

Acchan can’t stop giggling by seeing her beloved master acts like a stupid.

“Bye Kai..” Acchan end up the conversation.

Kai closes the conversation page and goes to the photobook again..  “Ohhh, this girl….”
Sometimes he thinks that his friends are right. He acts like a stalker. He stalks every news about Acchan, and imagines the pervert things when he sees her photobook. He’s totally like a pervert stalker.

He turns off the computer and crawl on his bed. He takes a pillow and hugs it. Kai takes his phone and turns the screen on. He stares at Acchan’s photo on the screen. Smiling at the wrinkle she made on her nose. He remembers how it all began. How he met that cute clumsy little girl for the first time near the swimming pool in his house. How he held her hand for the first time on an empty bus in the middle of the night. How he felt a deep heartache when saw her dating another guy who was his own best friend. How hard for him to tell her that he loves her more than anything in this world. How he finally confessed and kissed her for the first time in the airport.

“I love you Atsuko” he types a message and sends it to the girl on the screen.



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So that's the first chapter of Season 2. There will be some drama in the next chapters. Soon to be updated. Thank you, have a great day.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: cisda83 on October 06, 2013, 01:28:11 AM
That's nice... Atsuko and Kai still closed after so long...

They made it work the long distance relationship

Yeah... Kai is perv. Stalker huh...  :lol:

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Nice beginning of a new season there...

Thank you

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: Sydney W on October 06, 2013, 01:46:12 AM
Yes, season 2. I want more update.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: eri98 on October 06, 2013, 02:21:37 AM
this story is just.. WOW.. can't wait for next :D  i love this story so much
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: blakwhite on October 06, 2013, 04:24:28 AM
yeah ~
finally  :cow:

i love you chemicalstar ~ san (http://eemoticons.net/Upload/onion head/kiss.gif) (http://eemoticons.net/D/onion-head/kiss)

pls update soon (http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-195.gif) (http://emoticoner.com)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: Haruko on October 06, 2013, 04:26:26 AM
yeah! i want that!! far relationship and that!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: chiqinna on October 06, 2013, 05:22:02 AM
finally!!  :cow: :cow: :cow:
long-distance relationship between atsuko and kai...
but they still loyal to their love~ ♥
thanks for the season 2 chemicalstar-san!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: chichay12 on October 06, 2013, 05:31:27 AM
 :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :on woohoo:
finally!season 2 :D

kaiacchan FTW.. XD
update soon chem :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: karenchan on October 06, 2013, 12:05:55 PM
Gosh. Your fiction is good. Its too good. It made my day.
Thanks  :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: flunicsnaz on October 08, 2013, 05:06:25 PM
damn love it.  :luvluv1:
Waiting for the next update.  :on roll:
You make me fall in love with you author san  :luvluv1:
Haha.. I'm joking... good job!!  :on GJ:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: chemicalstar on October 29, 2013, 07:29:18 PM
good evening everyone!!

gomen nee...
I'll inform you that actually I never lied about the season 2. Of course I will update it.

But layely I've been way too busy to write. though, I always give my time for writing at least 10 minutes. so apologize  me if it takes too long.

please be patient...
danke schon
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: mgxx on October 30, 2013, 02:50:29 AM
Can't waitttttt....  XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: kuro808 on October 30, 2013, 03:20:26 AM
Just read the first part and suddenly realizes that Kai may be playing it too close although the best thing was to shut up about it and just kill himself in spirit although for him, probably can't wait for more stuff...

Although it seems my perv sensors are tingling....

General idea for me lawl
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 1 061013 <<
Post by: ykariya on November 04, 2013, 05:22:23 PM
glad you decided to post the 2 season

Please continue
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: chemicalstar on November 09, 2013, 07:23:51 PM
Welcome Saturday!!!
 It’s been a long time since the last time I’ve updated this story. Now just like this bright sunny Saturday I have here, I wanna give you the same one too: AN UPDATE!!!!

I’m so sorry that it took so long. I’ve been super super super busy. And I also inform you all, I will be busy from now on. I hope you understand if I update the next chapter slowly.

By the way… about the deal I’ve made with Ruka-san. Well… he’s gone, right?! But however I’m sure he’s still stalking this forum. So, wherever you are, Ruka-san… Don’t break the deal. You still have to update “MESSY MAN”, “AIESU”, and “REVENGE”. Wherever you will update it, in your blog or in other forum, or even you mail us the story, just inform us okay!!

So please enjoy this chapter. There will be some dramas next, be careful ;)

Season 2 – CHAPTER 2

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Being an actress and a college student is not easy to do. Some people who have the same problem, usually leave one of them. They have to choose between entertainment career and college. But Acchan chooses to take both of them. She studies acting major in the art college. So she thinks that her study will support her acting career. She takes two days in a week for college, and the others for shooting and entertainment activities such as attending a talk show, press conference, interview, photo shoot, and so on.

This morning, the girl who is becoming more beautiful each and every day, has a free week end. She waves her hand to her friends at college.

“See you next week, Acchan!! Have a nice week end ” her friend said as they separate their way.

Acchan stops a taxi and rides to her apartment. The sun starts to set and the sky is getting dark when she arrives at her apartment. It’s the same apartment that Uncle Sae gave when Acchan started the college. Being an actress makes a lot of money for her, but she doesn’t want to move from that place. It’s a nice apartment she has, big enough for a person living there. Of course, Sae is a success businessman, he has a good taste of choosing an apartment for Acchan.

The time she gets in her room, she takes her phone and dials a number.
“Moshi moshi. Good evening, it’s Takahashi residence.”

“Ah, good evening. It’s Acchan..”

“Acchan!! How are you?” a woman who is a maid in the house greets her. There are a lot of maids living in that house now. Every of them know Acchan and they treat her like she’s the owner of the house. Well, they know about who Acchan is, Uncle Sae who told them about that. He asked everyone to treat her well as Uncle Sae treas her like his own daughter. But it doesn’t make Acchan changes at all. Acchan is Acchan. She used to be a maid in the past. That’s why she’s so nice and being a friendly one towards every maid who works there. And that’s why they likes Acchan a lot.

“I’m good. How about you all?”

“We’re good too. We miss you, you know… When will you come back?”

“Ha, I’m just about to tell you a good news. I will go home tonight. I have a free week end, so I think I want to spend the days at home.”

“Ah, that’s a good thing. We will prepare everything for you..”

“I will go there in an hour. Jaa nee…”

She hangs up the phone, puts it on her bed then leaves to the bathroom. After packed such things she needs, she leaves her apartment. She walks to the nearest train station from her apartment with a masker on. Of course, she doesn’t want everyone know that she is Maeda Atsuko the actress. Gets on a train in about two hours, Acchan finally arrives at town.

A Takahashi’s private driver told her that he’s waiting at rain station to pick her up. He bows at Acchan when she’s arrived. He’s not her uncle Kine. It’s a new driver. Her uncle Kine now works in suit and ties as the chief of security unit at Takahashi’s office.

She smiles just when she arrives at the house. The house where she and Kai were raised together. The house where all the things begin. She meets everyone in that house, the maids, the driver, and also Honey, her dog. Yes, the puppy that Kai gave to her in her birthday, now is a big dog. Acchan couldn’t take Honey with her in apartment as she’s very busy. Honey is better stay at home so everyone can take care of it.

“Ah, time flies.. We’ve talked too much, I think you have to take a rest, Acchan..” said a maid when Acchan has a chit chat with them. Talking about a lot of things.

“Okay, I’ll go to bed, then… Oyasumi..” Acchan bows and leaves them.

She walks in to her room. Looking around at her room. She smiles when she looks at a barbie house which is still on the table. Reminds her of her childhood time, of Mr.Takahashi’s kindness, her parents, everything about her past.  She takes the female barbie. She has a long brown hair, with a red lipstick, wearing a beautiful dress and shoes. Acchan looks at the back of her doll. There’s a kid’s writing. There, written : Acchan. She chuckles at herself.  She remembers how she wanted to be looks like that barbie doll when she was a kid. Now she’s an actress, she dresses more beautiful like that barbie. Then she puts the barbie doll again and takes the other one. The male one.

She remembers, the time when her dad brought her this barbie house when she was 5. Her dad told her that it was a gift from his master, Mr.Takahashi. Yes, she named the doll Takahashi. Then, Acchan turns the doll around to see her writing there.

“Eh??”

It’s surprising. She used to see “Takahashi” written there. But this time what she saw is different. There’s another writing with different color. She reads it: “Takahashi Kai”.

“EEHH?? When did he write his name on it??!!” Acchan seems surprised. She chuckles and a bit laughs at the dolls. “Stupid Kai!” she laughs again.

Remembering about Kai, it’s been more than two days that she haven’t talked to him. They only texted to each other. Being in a long distance relationship is not easy. But the thing that they know is they love each other. They trust each other. Even only a message, a call, a voice, a video call, that can keep them together until now.

Acchan puts the doll and gets up. She walks out of her room and walks to the upstairs. She opens the door. It’s the same room where she used to wake her master every morning. The room is so neat. Those maids take care of it even if the owner is out of country. But now it seems like a new habit for Acchan since Kai has been in New York. The time she miss him so much, she always takes her time to come back home, spending the night at Kai’s room, sleeping on his bed.

She crawls on his bed. Her hand feels the softness of the bedsheet. Slowly she lays her head on a pillow, one of her hands grabs another pillow and she hugs it tight while she slowly closes her eyes.


*an hour later, away in NYC*


Knock!!  Knock !!

“Young master!!” a voice of a man heard.

Knock!!  Knock !!

“Young master, have you woken up?” the man said again.

There, a young man is laid on his bed with eyes closed.

“Young master??” he heard the man keeps calling him.

“Arrgghh… “ he groans while stretching his body. “So noisy! What time is it now?” he removes his blanket and try himself to see the clock clearly.

“WHAT??!!” he seems surprised when he sees what time s it now.

“Young master, it’s 10 AM now” the man outside said.

“YES, I’m up!!” Kai shouts at him and quickly gets in his bathroom.

Meanwhile…


Ding dong….

Someone’s ringing the bell.

A man opens the door after seeing who’s outside from the screen of CCTV. It’s his master, Takahashi Sae.

“Good morning, master!” he greets Sae and pleases him to get in.

“Good morning, how are you?” Sae asks.

“Very good, master. Thank you..”
“Ano… what makes you come this morning, it’s so rare that you came this early.”

“Oh? Kai didn’t tell you?”

The man looked confused. “Umm.. no. He didn’t say anything.”

“I’m picking him up, we’re going to have a business trip in Europe. It may takes one week or more,” Sae explained. “By the way, where is he?”

“Bathroom”

“He just woken up?”

“Yes, sir. He didn’t say anything about business trip. That’s why I didn’t wake him up early.”

“Ahh, that boy!!” Sae sighs.

“Umm, I will prepare your breakfast” the man said. “Please take your time..”

“Okay, thanks..” Sae sits on a couch and turns the TV on.



*inside Kai’s bedroom*


“Geez, how could I forget about it. Sighs… Thank’s God the flight is in 2 hours. I still can prepare everything” he thought while drying his hair using the towel.

He takes his phone, the brightest smile in the world appears when he unlocks the screen. He quickly press Acchan’s name to call her.

Beep… beep…

“Why doesn’t she answer the call?” he thought. He takes a look at the clock. “Maybe she’s already sleeping…” 
Kai types a message:

"Europe for a business trip with uncle Sae. We’ll have our flight today. I miss you so much…”


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The next morning, Acchan wakes up and check her phone. She sees four missed calls and a new message. All of them are from Kai. She quickly replies the message.

“It’s okay. Have a nice trip Kai.. I love you.”

Acchan has planned to spend the day at home. This morning she cooks some food with some maids at home. She always like to cook, moreover, to eat.  When all the food already served. She sits on the mini bar chair and enjoys the food. Acchan turns the TV on.

“Young actress Hanako Takigawa caught hanging out with a guy who is not her husband.” A news reporter said on the TV.

“Eh? What is this?” Acchan stops chewing. She continues to watch the news.

“As this news published, her rich husband divorced their only 4 months marriage. Takigawa got millions of dollars because of the divorce from his husband who is a success businessman. It makes a big question from the people, did she married that man for money??”

“Ahh, media is so cruel..”

“If it’s so, this case is not the first time that a famous actress or female singer married a rich man for money. Last year, a famous singer ..”

CLICK!

Acchan changes the TV channel. “It’s annoying. How can media blow the things like that? It’s so cruel…” she thought. Acchan takes a sip of her tea and watch the TV again, this time she watches an interview of a swimming athlete.

“Tell us how can you get your success in this sport?”

“Ah, it’s nothing but a strict training. My coach has a great managing skill. We have a strict schedule and I have to keep my body healthy.”

“Wow, that’s impressive. By the way, beside a good swimmer, you have a good looking face, right? I know there are a lot of girls being your fans.”

“Really” the athlete laughs.

“How about your private life? Are you currently dating someone?”

“Ah, that thing… ” he smiles and stops a while. “No, I’m not dating anyone currently.”

“Really?” then the reporter face the camere. “Girls, he’s single. Go ahead!”

The athlete laughs again. “No, it’s not like that. I just have no time for a special relationship. I think this time I have to focus for my career in swimming.”

“Souka… you must don’t want to ruin anything of your bright career right now for such little things like ’being a boyfriend’, right?” the reporter said jokingly.

“Hahaha, yes, kind of…”


Acchan chuckles. “Even an athlete has the same lifestyle like an actor, eh?”
Suddenly, she thinks about something. She grabs her phone and texts something.

“I’m home. How are you? Can I visit your place today?”

She sends the message. A while after that, the phone shows a notification : Rena, sent.


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“Rena-chan!!” Acchan hugs her friend.  “It’s been so long!!”

“I’m so happy that a famous actress visits my café!” release the hug.

Acchan looks around the cafe, “It’s getting bigger now..”

“Yeah, and I have to hire more workers. Come here, I’ll show you something” Rena takes Acchan to the upstairs.

Acchan looks very stunned as she sees a rooftop style café right there. “It’s beautiful, Rena-chan!”

“Of course, I built this two months ago. Nice, huh?”

Acchan nods. She walks around. She can feel the fresh air from where she stands now.

“Let’s sit here, Acchan..” Rena ask Acchan to join.

“So, how’s your day?” Rena said.

“Hmm… it’s going great all the time. I’m happy of everything I do. Even it makes me super busy.”

“I see.. why don’t you just off your college stuff for a while and focus with your career?”

“Naah, I can’t do that. I have to finish my study first, that’s the main mission from where I start everything now.”

“You’re a hard worker!” Rena smiles. “and how about Kai? It’s been a  long time that Jurina never told me about Kai.”

“Of course, Kai is very busy too. He has to study for his college while taking his family business with Uncle Sae too. But our relationship is going well, though..”

Rena chuckles. “Ahh, sometimes I wonder how could you two keep your relationship without meet each other in a very long time.”

“Easy!” Acchan said. “We’re not living in 80’s, Miss Matsui. Now we can use internet to do everything” Acchan laughs a little.

“But no touching!” Rena quickly replies and smirks.

Acchan changes her expression. She looks down and laughs herself a little. “Yeah, you’re right… ”

“Oopps.. Sorry,I didn’t mean that, Acchan…”

“No, it’s fine.. ” Acchan laughs to make the situation easy again. “So how about Mr. Matsui, eh? Does he kiss you often like usual?”

“Ahh, Acchan! You always have something to change the topic..” Rena is blushing now. “Well, Jurina often visits me. So everything is alright. But sometimes I feel jealous as now he has a lot of fangirls in his college.”

“Boo… look what we have here, a jealous woman, eh?”

They laughs and having a long talk while enjoying fruit juices.
Suddenly, Acchan’s phone rings.

It’s her manager calling.

“Yes?”

“Acchan, I’m so sorry to interrupt your weekend, but I have something important to tell you.”

“Oh, what is it?”

“Umm, I can’t tell you by phone, it will be a long talk, we have to discuss it. Can you meet me now?”

“Now?”

“Yes, come on, it’s ‘now or never’ project. We have to move fast.”

Acchan sighs deeply. “Alright, where are you now?”

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Acchan feels uneasy that she has to go in the middle of a nice conversation with Rena. But it seems like her manager has something important to tell. The, Acchan go to a restaurant where her manager is waiting for her.

“It’s a job offer” her manager said.

“Job offer? Why it’s so sudden?” Acchan takes some papers that the manager showed her.

“It’s a new movie, will be released in the end of the year.”

“We have only three months filming?”

“Yes.”

“Why it’s so sudden?” Acchan frowns.

“Didn’t you know the news?”

“What news?”

“Hanako Takigawa, she was the actress choosed to play this role. But because of her scandal, the producer suddenly canceled the contract with her. Yesterday, I was called by the production house that they offer you the role. They want you to take Takigawa’s role in this movie.”

“Souka…” Acchan read the documents.

“I tell you, this will be a great movie. It will gain your career and popularity. If I were you, I will take this chance. But, it’s not my career, it’s yours… even I’m the manager, I will ask your first if you want to take this offer or not. It’s all your decision…”

“Hmm…. ” Acchan thinks for a while. “Let’s do it!” she smiles.

The manager smirks at her. “That’s my girl!! Let’s do a hard work, then!!”

“By the way… is the news really true?” Acchan ask her manager.

“I don’t know, but I’m sure she married that man just for money…” the manager answers.

“Why did she do such a stupid thing that can ruin her career?” Acchan grumbled.

“That’s why I warned you in the very first time you start your career, don’t date anyone. Even if you think that it’s okay to have a boyfriend, but it will always be a danger for your career.”

That time, Acchan realizes something. Something, that she hid all this time from everyone.





Kai...





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*end of Season 2 – Chapter 2*

Thanks for reading, please leave some comments so I know what’s your opinion about this. Thank you.
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Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: mikaellitsa on November 09, 2013, 09:36:54 PM
wow what gonna happen next?
i see... big problems for acchan o.0
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: Haruko on November 09, 2013, 09:59:21 PM
Its getting better every episode! I love it!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: Sydney W on November 10, 2013, 01:02:41 AM
Hope Acchan not disturbed by the takigawa news. She truly love Kai and same as Kai.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: cisda83 on November 10, 2013, 08:51:45 AM
I do hope Atsuko would choose Kai....

Though she did want to be an actress... but I do hope she would put Kai 1st than anything else...

She did come across lots of obstacles to be with Kai so Yeah....

Would Atsuko tell her manager of Kai?

Would Atsuko also get into that kind of scandal?

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: edogawa4869 on November 10, 2013, 03:56:37 PM
kayaa kyaa kyaa....

finnaly..... update.....  :onioncheer:

it's nice...  :thumbup

so acchan is hid her relationship with kai huh?

it's going to be drama....

i hope Acchan won't make Kai disappointed...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: chemicalstar on November 11, 2013, 09:13:19 AM
Goeiemorgen. I watched the news this morning. There were a huge typhoon in Philliphines yesterday. and I just remembered there are a lot of user from Phillipines here.

I hope you all are okay...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 2 091113 << FINALLY UPDATED
Post by: korin48 on November 11, 2013, 09:52:44 AM
Yes! Finally an update from you!!  :onioncheer:
*sigh* :( Waiting for your next update again....  :prayers:

Goeiemorgen. I watched the news this morning. There were a huge typhoon in Philliphines yesterday. and I just remembered there are a lot of user from Phillipines here.

I hope you all are okay...

Well, some provinces in Visayas (middle part of Philippines) are highly damaged... But don't worry, we are okay :) Thank you for your concern :)

PS: I'm also from Philippines...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 110613
Post by: chemicalstar on December 06, 2013, 05:08:43 PM
Good afternoon everyone! Or, good evening, good morning wherever you are. First thing first, I’m sorry for updating this story very late. I have a lot of business, college task, and everything. But don’t worry, I never forget to keep writing for this story because I always check this forum eventually and that reminds me to update mine too.
Thank you for waiting, I hope I didn’t lose my readers. My favorite readers who always give some ‘thanks and comments’. Thank you all. I separated this chapter into 2 parts, I hope I can finish the second part in no time. Enjoy!


SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1


A skinny tall girl is standing beside a locker in a make-up room. Both of her hands hold her black shaped phone, her eyes are focused on its screen.

“Good morning Kai. I hope you had sweet dream last night. You know, the producer has decided the release date of my new movie. My manager came this morning with a long list of activities I have to do next. I think it will be so tiring. But I’m so happy to do it. Don’t miss your lunch again, okay! I love you.”

She presses the green button and the message is sent to her beloved one. Having three months filming is quite made her super busy. Woke up early morning, went to filming locations, ended the filming late of night, did some college tasks, and had less sleeping time. She almost had no chance to have any video call with Kai. She often slept in filming location, or sometimes she slept in hotel, in the same room with her manager. It made any conversation with Kai is almost impossible.

Though, it’s not only Acchan who is busy lately. The same situation happened far away in NY. Kai was having super busy days due to business trips to several countries in America and Europe. Takahashi Corp will spread their business to Europe so there’s no choice for Sae unless to take Kai with him doing some business trips. Being in different countries made Kai couldn’t get proper time to call Acchan due to different time zones. Once he had a time to call, he had to move and went to another country, also with different time zone. But they always send messages even if it just “I miss you” words or similar things. It helps them to smile every morning when opening the inbox message.

“Acchan! What are you doing? Come on, we have to go now!” there’s a voice of a woman calling her from outside the room.

“Haik! I’m coming…” Acchan quickly puts her phone in her bag. She walks out of the room, she’s going to the studio with her manager waiting there, doing some photo shoots for the promotional posters of her new movie.

“The photographer is already inside. Everything is set, it’s only you to be there. Ready?” her manager said, just to make sure that everything is set.

“Sure!” Acchan answer with a bright smile on her face.

“Great! Good luck, Acchan”

There she is, her manager. She’s actually her senior in the college who introduced her to the entertainment business. Nishida Saki. She’s a hard worker, has a competent in artist managing skill, and a strict one when it comes for work. But she’s a nice one. She knows that Acchan is an orphan who was living with her uncle. She met Acchan in acting class where she used to be a substitute lecturer. That time, the lecturer was sick and get in the hospital, so Nishida was asked to teach the students. There she met Acchan and saw her talent in acting is impressing.

Saki-chan, that’s how Acchan call her because she’s only 4 years older than Acchan, never got too close with Acchan’s private life. They only close each other in everything about work, not private life. It makes Acchan goes along with her and made her a manager.



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Beep Beep..

A new messages appear on Kai’s phone  screen.
It’s from his uncle, Sae.

“Thanks for your time, Kai. Take some rest, okay!”

Kai takes a deep sigh as he turn off the screen. Now he’s sitting on the backseat of a luxury car on his way from the airport to his apartment in New York. He just arrived from Belgium, alone. Sae choosed to stay there while he asked Kai to go back to NY since Kai still has college things to do. He had left class for almost two weeks. Kai stares at the window, imagining how many college tasks that he left in two weeks.

Arriving at the apartment building, Kai quickly walks to the elevator. He just can’t wait to get in the shower and feel the heat of the warm water on his skin.

Just when the elevator reach 72nd floor where his apartment is, suddenly his phone is ringing.

“AH!!! You finally hang up the phone!!” it’s Jay

“I was on the plane the whole day. What’s up?”

“A party, my house, in 2 hours. You’re not going, you’re dead.”

“Wait. What party? I’m just arrived in NY, I don’t even reach my house yet.”

“Dude..” Jay is sighing. “I’m so disappointed in you.”

“….” Kai doesn’t answer anything, he arrives in front of his apartment door.

“HOW COULD YOU FORGET MY BIRTHDAY??!!!” Jay screamed through the phone and it made Kai takes away the phone from his ear.

“Oh, Jay’s birthday, how could I forget..” Kai thoughts.

“Okay, I’m sorry.” Kai puts his bag on the couch. “But, Jay.. I’m just arrived right now. I think I can’t..”

“MAN!! I’M DOING ALL YOUR COLLEGE TASK AND HOMEWORK THESE 2 WEEKS!!”

“Huh?? Really?”

“MAN, You’re cruel!”

“Ugh, fine. I’ll be there…” Kai sighs, has no choice to ignore it. “And, thank you for doing my tasks. I count on you.”

“Whatever, just be here in 2 hours or I will kill you.”

“Okay”

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Jay invites his friends including Kai to celebrate his birthday. They went to a night club to have a party there. All guys dance with some girls, very erotic. Along the party, Jay saw Kai was sitting on a seat near the bar. He looks mot so energetic tonight. Jay come approaches and asks Kai to join.
 
“Dude, those girls are hot. Your just came back from business trip, I think you have to have some fun with them.”

“No, thanks Jay. I’m all okay, I’m happy and tired enough.” Kai’s slurps his drink and talks lazily.

“Oh man, I didn’t expect a lazy hippo appears in my party like this. .  Come on, it’s my party, just come along with us!”

Kai takes a deep sighs and gives a sharp stare at Jay. “NO.”

Looking at his friend’s expression, Jay sits beside him. “Don’t you have any interest to girls?”

“Of course I do, I’m not a gay” Kai said. Saying word “gay” reminds him of his uncle. Lucky his friends don’t know that his uncle is a gay, or they will suspect him as a gay too.

“Who said you are? Or.. you really are a gay?” Jay teased.

“Whatever!” Kai ignores him.

“Hey, Kai. You see that blonde girl dancing right there? I will call her to accompany you tonight. You two will be a hot blond couple”

“I can’t do that, I already have a girlfriend, Jay! Don’t force me like a stupid”

“Really? Where? I’ve never seen you with girl”

“She’s in Japan”

Jay facepalmed himself. “Do whatever you want, good luck dude” Jay pats Kai’s shoulder and leaves.

It’s been a stressful weeks for Kai. He just feels tired and empty.

“Give me wine,” Kai asked the bartender.
.
.
.
.
Two hours later…

Jay was about to give his last speech for his party that night when he saw the bar area he didn’t see Kai there. He looked around but didn’t find him.

“Man, did you see a blonde guy sat here before?” asked Louis who helped Jay to find Kai.

“He went outside. I don’t know where he’s going up to. And he’s drunk” the bartender said.

Jay and Louis quickly get out from the building and check the parking area. There’s no Kai’s car there, they quickly get in Jay’s car and look for him.

“He’s a little insane! How could he drive when he’s drunnk!” Louis keep talking on their way.

“There! You see? It’s Kai’s car!”

“Yeah, it is. Go get him”

Once Jay turns his car to catch  Kai, they saw a big high speed truck is about to crash on Kai’s car.

“No way! KAAAIIII!!!!!” Jay screams.








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end of part 1
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 110613
Post by: chichay12 on December 06, 2013, 05:22:00 PM
Chem!!!!im happy that ur back!!! XD

But wth...ur back just to kill kai? :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:

Oh god..please update soon :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 110613
Post by: edogawa4869 on December 06, 2013, 07:16:51 PM
noooooo.... Kaaai....  :shocked

i hope he will be okay...  :cry:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 110613
Post by: cisda83 on December 07, 2013, 08:26:28 AM
Well... AtsuKai are closed as always...

Ah... classic drunk drive....

Noooooooooooooooooooo

What's going to happen to Kai?

Would Atsuko take sometimes off to see Kai?

Can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 110613
Post by: blakwhite on December 07, 2013, 10:24:34 AM
yay update :3
welcome back chemicalstar-san :3

but...

KAIIII  :gyaaah:

and

WHY I SEE "end of part 1"  :gyaaah:

pls update soon  :fainted:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 1 NEW UPDATE << 11
Post by: Koyumichan~ on December 07, 2013, 11:14:49 AM
NOOOO
KAI!DON'T DIE PLEASE! :bleed eyes:
UPDATE SOON CHEMICALSTAR SAN!
Thanks for the update :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 2 NEW UPDATE << 120813
Post by: chemicalstar on December 07, 2013, 08:02:08 PM
As I promised, I separated this chapter into 2 part, so this is the second part.
Thanks that you're happy I'm back. Thanks for your comments.  :theking

TAKING CARE OF YOU (Season 2)
Chapter 3 Part 2


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Once Jay turns his car to catch  Kai, they saw a big high speed truck is about to crash on Kai’s car.

“No way! KAAAIIII!!!!!” Jay screams.


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Meanwhile thousands miles from New York.


In a huge hall with luxurious decoration and a lot of super poster of a new released movie, a crowd full of press and journalists are focused on a man who is talking on stage. That man is a well-known director in Japan who just made a great movie. He’s talking about how he got idea to make the story based on a famous best-selling novel into a movie. Right beside him, there are about ten or twelve good looking people. The males wear tux and the females wear beautiful dress. They keep smiling and acts friendly to the crowds. Yes, they are the main cast of the movie. The brightest of them are a couple who play as the main actor and actress of the movie. Maeda Atsuko and Nakamura Aoi.

“Aoi-san, lately a lot of medias said that you are close to Maeda-san. Is that right? You two looks like a real couple” a journalist asked when the discussion forum is started.

Acchan takes a glance at Aoi and keeps smiling.

“Ah, hahaha, about that… Ano… I’m not sure about that. Hahaha” Aoi said as he looks at Acchan awkwardly.

“What about you, Maeda-san. What do you think about it?” the journalist asked again.

Acchan takes a long breath to think. “Umm, maybe it’s because we often spent our time together due to filming concern. That’s why people think about that..” Acchan said and bursts a little laugh.

After the movie premiere finished, all of the cast and crew gathered in the hall to takes a briefing from the director.

“I want you to know something” Saki-chan said when she and Acchan inside the car on the way home.

“Hmm?”

“Some crews told me that Aoi-san seems to be happy about what media said”

“Eh? What do you mean?”

“He’s interested in you. Or, maybe.. he has a crush on you. So what media said on the news about you two, seems like a benefit for him.”

Acchan chuckles. “How come..”

“And I heard that he was purposely did failures on the kissing scene with you, so that he can kiss you again and again”

“Really? I didn’t know he was doing that in purpose”

“I know he’s hot. Million girls want him to be their boyfriend. And now you got this chance to be his girlfriend” Saki-chan said. “But please remember what I told to you, boyfriend can be a damage to your career.”

Acchan smiles. “Haik, Saki-chan… I’ll always remember it. Thank you for caring me all this time..” she gives a short hug on her manager.

“Ah, you act like my little sister at home.”

“Eh? You have a sister?”

“Yes, she’s 2 years younger than you” Saki-chan opens her phone and shows Acchan her sister’s photo. Did I tell you that Saki-chan never interested to share each other’s private life? This is the first time she tells Acchan about her family. “I miss her, I think I’m going home tomorrow. Can I?”

“Nee… why are you asking my permission?”

“You’re my boss afterall”

“Mou, don’t call me boss. We’re business partners!!” Acchan gives her high five and they laugh together.

“Tomorrow’s our free day? You will go home too? I mean, to your uncle’s house?”

“Hmm, I guess no. I had a lot of college homework”  Acchan answered.

“Okay, good luck nee-chan!!” she pats Acchan’s head.

Acchan flopped her body on her bed once she gets inside her apartment. She takes a deep breath while looks at the ceiling.

“What is he doing right now?” she thoughts.


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*Kai's Pov*

It’s raining. I look around and I find that I’m on the sidewalk in the city. People walk across the streets in front of me. I look up and find myself still dry because of the roof of a coffee shop behind me. I don’t know why I’m here. My eyes keep look around to see what situation is it. Suddenly I hear a kid’s crying.

A little boy is crying under the rain, he’s standing about 10 ft in front of me.

“What is he doing?” I thought. Why the hell there is a little boy crying under the rain and he seems very sad of something.

“Mommy!!! Daddy!!” the boy screams. He cries harder.

I can’t just stand here seeing this. I’m about to walk but I can’t move my feet. It feels like I’m stuck here. I can move any of my body. I can just watch everything happens around me.

I hear a cracking sound behind me. It’s the coffee shop’s door. I turn around and see someone’s opening it. I can’t see the face because the person spreads out an umbrella while I turn around. I have to move or this person will bump me. But shit, I still cannot move my body.

“Sorry I’m tra…” I’m about to talk but then the person move forward and. SLINNGGGG  The person walks through me.

“WHAT!!” I’m surprised. How can someone walk through my body? Am I a ghost? Am I already dead??

I turn around to see the person and I find that the person is a young woman. She has a long black hair. She approaches the crying little boy and covers him with her umbrella.

“Why are you standing here under the rain?” she keels down in front of the little boy. The umbrella blocks my view to see the girl’s face but I can still hear her voice.

The boy doesn’t answer her, he keeps crying. “Why are you crying? Where are your parents?”

“My parents are gone…” the boy said, still crying.

“Nee…it’s raining and you’re soaked. Let’s come inside with onee-chan, okay!” the girl gives her hand but the little boy raises both of his hand ups, seems like he wants to be carried up.

“Spoilt child!” I thought.

I can hear the girl chuckles but then she carries the boy on her arm and she stands up. She turns around and that time my heartbeat stops.

“Atsuko…”

She walks over me and passes by through my body. They get in the coffee shop again. I still don’t get it. Why do I’m here seeing my girlfriend with a little boy and I’m like a ghost? I don’t understand. I look inside the coffee shop through the window. I can see Atsuko leads the boy to seat in the corner of the room. Their seats are near the window that I can still hear their voices.

“Wait a sec, I’ll get you a towel, okay!” Atsuko said, she showed him her warm smile. That smile, that I’ve missed so bad.

She comes back and dries him up, she looks so caring and I smile over it.

“What’s your name?”Atsuko asks the kid.

“Kai. Takahashi Kai” my smile fades away the time I hear the little boy’s answer.

“Kawaii…” Atsuko smiles, I can see her cute wrinkle on her nose. “I’ll order a cup of chocolate, okay” then Atsuko calls the waitress and order him a cup of hot chocolate.

“I’m freezing” that little boy who uses my name said.

Acchan smiles and sits beside him. “Come here, it will warm you” Atsuko takes off her jacket and puts it on him. She carries him to sits on her lap.

“Feels better?” she said, puts her hands round him.

“Uhn! Thank you onee-chan” that boy smiles.

“Good. Now tell me why were you crying under the rain? And where’s your parents?”

“I was lost. I can’t find my parents” then the boy starts to cry again.

“Shh.. it’s okay, we will find them, okay. Just relax, onee-chan will take care of you, don’t worry..” Atsuko tries to calm him down as she hugs him on her embrace.

I suddenly feel my body is easier, I can move my body. I quickly enter the coffee shop. Once, I get in, I walk slowly approaching them. I can hear Atsuko is singing a song to calm the boy. I kneel down in front of them and look at her. I’m still thinking that she can’t see me. I think I’m a ghost. But then, she notices me as she looks at me.

“Kai…”

I don’t get it. Now she can see me. I can’t hold it. I miss her. I move forward and hug her. I hug “them”, actually, considering that the little boy is on Atsuko’s embrace.

I hug them tight, just like a little family.

“Atsuko…” I hug them tighter. “Atsuko I miss you..”

“Kai..”

“Atsuko…”



“Kai… oy, Kai!! Man, this jerk must be having a pervert dream! Yo, Kai! Wake up!!”
Jay’s shaking Kai’s body.

Kai slowly open his eyes. He can see Jay and Louis in front of him and he realizes he was only dreaming.

“Urgh, where am I?” Kai said, now he feels so dizzy.

“My room. You were drunk, dude. Hard.” Louis said. “You drove your car and almost being crashed by a truck last night. Lucky you everything was fine. The trucker was super angry and I had to apologize for you like an idiot.”

“Really? Heck” Kai gets up and finds himself is on the couch inside a Louis’ room.

“Hey, you got a pervert dream, huh??” Jay teases him and laughs.

Louis laughs too. “Yeah, you were talking while sleeping. That’s lame”
“Atsuko..Astsukoo..” Louis imitating Kai’s words.

“Wha—REALLY??!!”

“You don’t remember it?” Louis said. “Oh that’s bad. Let’s see if your pants is wet” he takes over the blanket which is covering Kai but then Kai quickly denies it.

“I didn’t!! Oh my God what are you guys thinking of!” Kai goes mad.

“Is that your girlfriend?”

“Who?” Kai said innocently.

“Atsukoo… Atsukooo…” Louis imitating Kai’s words in his sleep again.

“Hey you! Stop it” Kai feels annoyed but finally it makes them laughs.

“So it’s true?”

“Yeah, she’s my girlfriend..” Kai finally said.

“Wow, what it feels like to date a famous actress?” Jay said curiously.

“I don’t know.” Kai said, lying his body on the couch again. “I don’t care who is her now, I just want to see her.”

“EH? When is the last time you meet her? Last time you kiss her? Last time you make out with her?”

“Uh? I think it’s…” Kai thinks a while. “Three years.”

“SERIOUSLY?!” Jay and Louis said in unisound.

“That’s crazy, that’s… not even a relationship.” Jay said.

“Yeah, that’s schizophrenia!” Louis added.

“Huh? What is that?”

“INSANE!!!” they said in unisound again.

“What happened to you, man? Three years!! Jesus! You gotta meet her!”

“Yeah, you manga creature, just go back to Japan and meet her. Who knows if she already had another boyfriend in Japan?”

“Jay’s right. She’s an actress, I bet she has a lot of fans. He can choose any guy to be her boyfriend.”

Kai just ignored it. “No, that’s impossible. I trust her. Though, we often call each other, video call, messages, e-mails…”

“Didn’t you ever try to go back to Japan for her? Or, you just didn’t want to?”

Hearing Louis’ words makes Kai thinking and spacing out.

“Yeah, it’s been three years..”he thought. He used to go back to Japan two years ago on Christmas. But the Sae suddenly canceled it due to business trip. It’s always about business thing. Kai was thinking to invite Acchan to NY but it seems like she was starting to do her career in some dramas so it’s impossible for her to go to NY for holiday. Since then, they never have any chance to meet each other. But then, the more Kai think why did he never go back to Japan, it’s always Sae and the business to be the answer. It’s not that he never tried to go back to Japan, but he never got allowed. Kai thinks that Sae seems like always prevents him from going back to Japan.

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In a bright morning, Acchan takes a cup of tea while she reads a new magazine that just coming this morning. She reads it in her apartment. What’s interesting is the her movie poster being the cover of the magazine. The movie is successfully being the most-watched movie this week. Acchan feels so happy about that. Later after that, her phone is ringing.

“Moshi moshi” Acchan answer the phone.

“Maeda-san, Ohayou!” it’s Aoi talking in the phone. “Have you read the news today?”

“Ah, yes… The most-watched movie!!” Acchan shouts happily.

“I’m so glad about it!” Aoi laughs as he heard Acchan shouts happily. “Ano.. we plan to make a little party. Hmm… maybe we can go for dinner together.”

“We?”

“Yes, me and some crew and other cast”

“Oh. When?”

“Tonight. Can you join?”

“Umm… okay, see you tonight!”

Acchan texts her manager to join with her, but then Saki-chan said that she can’t go because she wants to spend more time with her family. Acchan leaves her finished homework and get her dress for tonight’s dinner. She chooses a nice simple dark blue dress and a pair of silver beautiful shoes. It’s a honor for her that the cast and crew invites her for dinner together to celebrate their three months of crazy hard work filming. When the sun sets and the sky turn dark, she gets a taxi and goes to the restaurant where the party is. Some crews welcome her in front of the restaurant and accompany her inside.

Aoi shows his bright smile just when Acchan get in the restaurant. “Good evening, Maeda-san” he bows at Acchan. “You look beautiful tonight.”

“Thank you, Aoi-san” Acchan answered with a smile.

They start they party and have their dinner. The crews already prepared a big karaoke room near the dining room. They are going to having fun that night. The restaurant is private booked by them so that no paparazzi can even get any pictures of their party.

After the dinner, they get into the karaoke room and some waitress come inside the room bringing a lot of wines and drinks.

“Come on, Acchan… It’s only tonight. We’re only celebrating our hard work” one of the actresses said when she tries to offer Acchan a drink while Acchan tries to deny it.

“I treat all this drink, please don’t disappoint me, Acchan” another actress said.

“Well, I’ll try, only a glass” Acchan finally get her drink.

They have fun with the karaoke, each singing while the others dancing and cheering. No one notice that Acchan furtively takes another glass of wines and again and again, making her face gets red. She stars to cheers uncontrolled. She’s over happy.

Aoi noticed it. He thinks about something then he walks approaching Acchan and sits beside her.

“Maeda-san…” he starts to talk.

Acchan turns beside her and smile. “Yes, Aoi-san”

Aoi raise his hand and cups Acchan’s now redden cheek. He caresses it softly. “You’re beautiful”

Acchan replied and smiles.  “I am..”

“Ano.. I want to talk with you”

“Uh? What is it?”

“Umm, I want to talk to you privately. Can we go outside?”

Acchan looks around her and yes, it’s too noisy inside the room. She nods and Aoi takes her hand. He takes her out of the restaurant.

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End of Season 2 Chapter 3

That's all the Chapter 3. Please be patient for next chapter :)

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 2 NEW UPDATE << 120813
Post by: cisda83 on December 08, 2013, 02:37:02 AM
Well it's good that Kai was fine...

But why did Sae not want Kai to go back to Japan?

Did he not happy with the relationship between Kai and Atsuko?

Would Kai go back to Japan without Sae knowing?

Now Atsuko is in trouble...

Aoi seems to be wanting to ask Atsuko out...

What would Atsuko do about that?

Would Aoi do something that cross the line with Atsuko rejection?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 2 NEW UPDATE << 120813
Post by: Haruko on December 08, 2013, 03:37:52 AM
don´t go don´t go Acchan!1
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 3 Part 2 NEW UPDATE << 120813
Post by: Konoe on December 08, 2013, 01:55:44 PM
Will Kai come back to Japan? I hope so...

That Aoi. Very suspicious and a threat. :smhid

The media is very scary and might spread Acchan and that Aoi are dating. Kai come back!!!!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 130108
Post by: chemicalstar on January 08, 2014, 05:44:02 AM
Morning! Waking up too early because I also slept too early last night.
It's been so long that I didn't check this forum until yesterday I read some fanfic was updated.
It reminds me that I still have an uncompleted fanfic too.
So I decide to write again. This update is very short, but I guess it's just a teaser of Taking Care of You Season 2 Chapter 4.
So it's not the whole Chapter 4, only a teaser...

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Acchan's POV

I open my eyes lazily. I feel a dazzling light shines on my eyes. When fully I open my eyes, I can see the sun light shines through the windows. Thanks God I’m still home, I can recognize it because I know exactly the atmosphere of the room. The bed cover color, the curtain and also the wall colors. His favorite colors.

I often sleep in his room when I miss him so much. Sleeping on his bed always relieved me and cure the longing away. So, I guess last night I missed him again. The more I think, the more I’m awake, but I still don’t move any of my body but my eyes only. I slowly close my eyes again, maybe I will continue my sleep.

Then, I realize something. There’s something unusual. I feel another weight on my waist. The more I try to make myself fully awake, the more I feel another things exist. I feel a body sticks to my back, I can even feel the breath above my head. Who’s the person behind me? My heart starts to beat fast. I try to think clear. Did I sleep with a guy last night? Then I try to remember what happened last night.

SHIT. Yes I was drunk. Last night we celebrate our last day filming of my newest drama. We had our dinner in a restaurant, and yes, I drank, a little. I was drunk. Oh NO. Who’s the guy I slept with? It can’t be true. Oh my, did we do something last night? What if public knows about it? My heart beats fast when I remember the one I spent the time with last night was Aoi-san. But I’m in Kai’s room now. Did I take Aoi home and ended on this bed? I’m trying so hard to remember what happened last night but nothing’s remaining.

Now I regret everything I did yesterday to attend the celebration. I regret that I was drunk. I regret everything. I blame myself for being so carelessly. What if Kai knows about it? I feel like I’m choked when I’m thinking about him knowing me slept with other guy… on his bed. This is terrible. God, kill me now!!

I quickly open my eyes and back to reality. I move my hand slowly just to check if I still wear something. It relieves me so much when I find out that I’m still on my nightgown. But it doesn’t really prove that nothing happened last night. I slowly turn my body around just to see who is the person.

 It’s a guy. He has short black hair, but his head turned down so I can see his face clearly. But the body postures, the hair, fit on how Aoi-san looks like. My heart feels like about to explode. I try to get up until my position is sitting on the bed. Then suddenly the guy moves. My heart beats faster. He wakes up but the sun light dazzles his face so he can’t really open his eyes.


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I'm going to update the whole chapter tomorrow because I have to get myself ready for college.
Sorry for ruining the story  :twisted:
Bye :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 130108
Post by: karenchan on January 08, 2014, 06:22:12 AM
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Sorry for ruining the story  :twisted:
OH GOD.
Author-san, did you purposely left it hanging like that? :on shady: :on shady:
Kechi~ Hidoi~ :fainted: :fainted:
I will wait for your next update with full of anticipitation   :on cny1: :on cny1:
p/s : The new poster is gorgeously good  :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 130108
Post by: ifzhaa on January 08, 2014, 06:42:55 AM
author-san  XD pls update fast !!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 130108
Post by: mgxx on January 08, 2014, 06:56:08 AM
OMg . It will complicated i think.. By the way its already 2014. Why you still writing 130108? :)
But, thankyou for ur update. Cant wait to read the next chapter ^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 130108
Post by: chiqinna on January 08, 2014, 06:59:27 AM
NOOOO!!!!  :banghead:  :banghead:  :banghead:
OMg . It will complicated i think.. By the way its already 2014. Why you still writing 130108? :)
But, thankyou for ur update. Cant wait to read the next chapter ^^
I was about to say the same thing lol~ XD
I thought its still 2013 in ur place hahaha
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: chemicalstar on January 08, 2014, 07:35:16 AM
LOL I just noticed it!! Thank you for the correction.
I think I was sleepy, still on my bed when I updated it.

@ifzhaa I think you're  new reader aren't u? I've never see you before. welcome :)

Talking about the year, I haven't said HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: cisda83 on January 08, 2014, 09:43:08 AM
OMG.... Atsuko slept with Aoi.... in Kai's bed?

What's going to happen to Atsuko and Kai now?

Would Atsuko accept Aoi?

Did Atsuko really sleep with Aoi or she was drug or raped?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the teaser

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: karenchan on January 08, 2014, 09:53:51 AM
This maybe a spoiler.
But, i really hope that the guy is Kai.
Please Kai! Dye your hair to black!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: Konoe on January 08, 2014, 02:29:47 PM
You're kidding, right? :shocked This can't be happening!!!! :on blackhole:

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 09, 2014, 07:29:45 AM
what the...?  :bleed eyes: :cry:

i hope he is not aoi-san!!!!!

 :panic: :panic: :panic:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 4 NEW UPDATE << 140108
Post by: mgxx on January 09, 2014, 01:41:37 PM
You will update this story today, right ?? :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: chemicalstar on January 09, 2014, 06:53:54 PM
Yes yes yes of course I won't forget my promises. Here's the complete chapter of SEASON 2 CHAPTER 4. Enjoy!

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Acchan's POV

I open my eyes lazily. I feel a dazzling light shines on my eyes. When fully I open my eyes, I can see the sun light shines through the windows. Thanks God I’m still home, I can recognize it because I know exactly the atmosphere of the room. The bed cover color, the curtain and also the wall colors. His favorite colors.

I often sleep in his room when I miss him so much. Sleeping on his bed always relieved me and cure the longing away. So, I guess last night I missed him again. The more I think, the more I’m awake, but I still don’t move any of my body but my eyes only. I slowly close my eyes again, maybe I will continue my sleep.

Then, I realize something. There’s something unusual. I feel another weight on my waist. The more I try to make myself fully awake, the more I feel another things exist. I feel a body sticks to my back, I can even feel the breath above my head. Who’s the person behind me? My heart starts to beat fast. I try to think clear. Did I sleep with a guy last night? Then I try to remember what happened last night.

SHIT. Yes I was drunk. Last night we celebrate our last day filming of my newest drama. We had our dinner in a restaurant, and yes, I drank, a little. I was drunk. Oh NO. Who’s the guy I slept with? It can’t be true. Oh my, did we do something last night? What if public knows about it? My heart beats fast when I remember the one I spent the time with last night was Aoi-san. But I’m in Kai’s room now. Did I take Aoi home and ended on this bed? I’m trying so hard to remember what happened last night but nothing’s remaining.

Now I regret everything I did yesterday to attend the celebration. I regret that I was drunk. I regret everything. I blame myself for being so carelessly. What if Kai knows about it? I feel like I’m choked when I’m thinking about him knowing me slept with other guy… on his bed. This is terrible. God, kill me now!!

I quickly open my eyes and back to reality. I move my hand slowly just to check if I still wear something. It relieves me so much when I find out that I’m still on my nightgown. But it doesn’t really prove that nothing happened last night. I slowly turn my body around just to see who is the person.

 It’s a guy. He has short black hair, but his head turned down so I can see his face clearly. But the body postures, the hair, fit on how Aoi-san looks like. My heart feels like about to explode. I try to get up until my position is sitting on the bed. Then suddenly the guy moves. My heart beats faster. He wakes up but the sun light dazzles his face so he can’t really open his eyes.


End of Acchan's POV

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**********  flashback 12 hours earlier **********


“Hey, Onee-chan… are you listening to me?” a teenager girl waves her hand in front of her sister’s face. She just told her sister about her new activities at ballet club. It’s been few weeks that she had not seen her only sister so she has a lot of thing to tell to her. But it seems like her sister is spacing out now.
“What are you thinking of, Onee-chan?” the girl said.

“A-ah.. I’m sorry. I’m just… thinking about Maeda-san. She went to a party but I have a bad feeling for her.”

“Why don’t you just call her?”

“Yes, you’re right” Saki gets her bag and grabs her phone. She dials Acchan’s number and waits for an answer. Her younger sister is looking at her curiously.

“How?”

“There’s no answer” Saki said, pressing the red button of her phone. “I think I have to call a crew. Wait a sec, okay!”

The girl takes a sip of her watermelon juice while looks at her worried sister.

“Moshi moshi.”

“Oh, Saki.. Why didn’t you come? Everyone’s here..” a man answers the phone. Saki can hear some noise behind. The sound of people singing in karaoke room.

“Sorry, I’m visiting my family today. Ano… is Acchan there?”

“Yes, she’s here…”

“Ah, good. Umm… can I ask you a favor?”

“Yeah, sure”

“Please take care of her, don’t let her drunk, okay!” Saki said worriedly.

“Ahh, too late, she’s drunk…” the man said.

“What?!” Saki just widened her eyes. “Why did you let her drunk?”

“Eh? Why? We don’t know that she’s not allowed to drink.” The man said innocently. “Nishida-san, she’s adult and she’s not your daughter.”

Click!

The man is confused why did Saki-chan suddenly ends the conversation.

“Look, I’m sorry but I think I have to go now, Acchan might be in danger”

The girl is shocked. She is one of Acchan’s fans though, and she’s so proud that her sister is Acchan’s manager. “But, Onee-chan.. it’s raining outside. You parked your car too far from here”

Saki looks at the the window of the café they are in now. “Ah, damn..”

“But you can take my umbrella” the girl smiles. She grabs a yellow umbrella from her bag. “Here..”

“Ah, thank you Little Mermaid, you saved me.” Saki takes the umbrella. “I’ll double treat you tomorrow, I promise!” Saki said as she gets up and leaves the café.

Walking under the rain with her sister’s umbrella to the parking area, Saki doesn’t care at all that her shoes are getting wet because she stepped on puddles on the street. Just when she reaches the parking area, she’s quickly heading to her car and getting in.

Driving in hurry for about an hour, Saki finally arrived at the venue where the party is. The rain is over so she gets out of her car without carrying an umbrella. She walks fast after parked her car. She gets in the resto and heading to the party room.

“Ah..Saki-chan!! You’re so fast! You just called me that you’re home and now you’re here?” the man on the phone greets her. But it seems like Saki ignores his saying and just get into the point.

“Where’s Acchan?”

The man looks around the room and he himself is confused too that Acchan is not there anymore.
“Oy, oy! Where’s Acchan?” the man pokes another crew who walks pass in front of him.

“Oh, she’s go outside with Aoi-san”

“Okay, thank you” the man said, then he turns around about to tell Saki “Saki-c…”
He finds that Saki is not there too.
“What the hell is going on here? People disappear in a blink of eyes!”

Hearing the crew said that Acchan is going outside with Aoi-san, Saki quickly walks (half running) outside the resto. She looks for Acchan, the drunk Acchan who is taken out by Aoi-san, the playboy actor. She looks around to every part of the venue. She can’t find Acchan, but she saw a man, look like Aoi-san, facing a wall.

Saki looks at his feet, there are other feet in front of him. That must be Acchan. Saki runs towards him. “MAEDA-SAN!!” She screams.

Aoi who is about to kiss the girl he locked on the wall by his hand, turns around hearing a woman’s loud scream. Acchan looks at her too.

Saki feels like her heart is about to explode watching that scene.
“What are you doing to her?”

“What did you see?”

“You’re about to kiss her!!!” Saki’s answering, half screaming.

“Yes, and you just made it fail!” Aoi’s hand hits the wall and he leaves the two. Saki just grumbled as he leaves them. Then she looks at Acchan.

“Saki-chaaaan…” Acchan smiles at her innocently. “You’re (hic..) finally going to the (hic..) party” she puts her hand on Saki’s shoulder. Now she can’t stand or walk properly.

“Geez, Acchan you’re drunk. It’s dangerous, you know!” Saki supports her to walk. “Let’s go home now.”

Getting on her car. Saki puts Acchan beside her on the front seat. At first, Acchan is singing along the road, Saki just shakes her head looking at this drunk actrees. Her voice is quite terrible if she’s drunk like this, also with her hiccups. There’s no good part of a drunk woman singing with hiccups. It takes a long time to reach Acchan’s apartment, that Saki found her sleeping on their way.

One half hour they finally arrived in front of a building where Acchan’s apartment is. This is the only place Saki knows to take Acchan home. She knows that Acchan used to live in her uncle’s house but she doesn’t know where is it. As I said, Saki doesn’t really get into her actress’ private life. She supports Acchan to walk. With the key she found in Acchan’s bag, Saki opened the apartment. She takes Acchan to her bed and laid her there.

“Wait, I’ll take you some water” Saki said.

Only a minute after that, Saki sees Acchan is already in front of the door. She’s about to go out.

“Acchan, where are you going?!” she said. Saki looks very shocked seeing Acchan’s drunk behavior.

“I wanna go home..” Acchan said. She walks still in unproper way towards the door.

“Wait. What home? It’s already home, Acchan. It’s in your apartment!”

“No, it’s not my home!!” now Acchan is mad, like a little child who is not allowed to play a video game.

Now Saki is very confused. She puts the glass she brings on the table then she drags Acchan to the couch. “Here, drink it first. You must have very thirsty.”

While Acchan is drinking the water, Saki takes Acchan’s phone in her bag. She looks up the contact list and search word “home” and she found a number. She thinks that maybe the home that Acchan meant was her uncle’s house, not her apartment. Saki dials the number and someone answers the phone in no time.

   “Moshi moshi. Takahashi’s residence here” a woman said on the phone.

   “Takahashi?” Saki-chan thought in her mind. She thought that it was going to be Maeda Residence. “Why Takahashi?” she thought again, but then she ignores it. “Ano, is this Maeda Atsuko’s residence?” Saki finally talks.

   “Oh, yes. Who am I talking to?”

   “It’s Nishida Saki, her manager. Maeda-san is with me now, but… she’s not really well so I’m going to drive her home. Can you tell me the address?”

The woman who answers the phone is a maid that Acchan used to tell her about her career life. The maid remember who is Nishida Saki as Acchan told her a long time before. She trusts it so the maid gives Saki the address.

Ending up the conversation, Saki smiles as he just got the address. “Okay, let’s go home now!”

“Yeayy!!! I’m going home!!” Acchan shouts happily, she even raise her hands like a super happy child getting a christmas gift.

“Geez, you’re so messy when you’re drunk, Maeda!” Saki shakes her head and drag Acchan outside.

They takes two hours driving to find where Acchan’s house is. Saki check out her watch. It’s almost 2 am in the morning. Lucky not even long after that, they arrived at a big, big house, looks like a mansion.

“Ah, I don’t know that you came from a rich family” she looks at the half sleeping Acchan.

Saki gets out from her car when two maids greet her in front of the main entrance. They helps her to support Acchan walks inside the house. That time, Saki chan got a call. It’s her mother.

“Saki-chan… where are you?”

“Ah, mom. I’m in my friend’s house. What’s happening?”

“Your sister is having a fever. She went home with soaked clothes” her mom said on the phone. Saki remembers that her sister gave her the umbrella. It just makes her regret that now her sister is having a fever.

“Okay Mom, I’ll be there soon.” Saki end the conversation and tell the maid that she has to go.

“She’s still on her day off tomorrow. Please take care of her.” Saki bows at them and leaves.

Both of the maids takes Acchan into her room, they lays her on the bed, undoing her shoes, and put a blanket to cover her body. Acchan is starting to fall asleep. It’s 2 AM that everyone’s need to sleep. So they come back to their rooms after turn the light off and assuring that Acchan is fine in her room.

10 minutes after that, the maids ane everyone in the house, don’t notice that the drunk Acchan is waking up again and walking unconciously towards the upstairs, heading to their young master’s room.

Inside the room, the lamp is turned off. It’s quite dark there but Acchan just landed her body on the bed. She slowly closes her eyes again.

“Mmh… Kai” Acchan murmured on her sleep. Her hands unconciously hugging a pillow on the bed and she sound asleeps.




***************  flashback  12 hours EARLIER than that *************** 




“GOT IT!!!” Louis shouts happily and shows a sheet of paper to Kai.

Kai smiles widely as he got a ticket that Louis booked. Yes. A ticket to Japan.
“Thank you, dude!!” Kai hugs him.

“Now pack your bags! The flight will be departed it 6 hours.”

Kai looks at the ticket with such a happy expression, imagining that he will meet Acchan tomorrow.

“Dude, don’t be too happy like that!” Jay laughs at his blonde friend, he acts like a primitives admiring a computer. Jay pokes on Kai’s shoulder, “Look, your phone’s ringing”


UNCLE SAE
Calling


“Yes?”

“Kai, I’m sorry it’s so sudden. But I need  you to meet a colleague in New York hotel. There’s an agreement that we have to sign. I delegates you to sign it for me since it’s imposibble to go back to New York in 5 hours. ”

“So you mean that I have to meet him in 5 hours?”

“Yes.”

“I already informed him that you will come to the hotel and sign the agreement.”

“What?”

“And, Kai. Do not end up in the agreement only, you have to talk about a lot with him. He has a lot of experiences in economic business. Don’t go anywhere after sign it.”

“Wait, but I haven’t met him before”

“I told him that Takahashi Kai has a blonde hair. I swear there will be only one young Japanese man with blonde hair in that hotel later. Okay, bye”

Sae hung up the phone.

“SHIT!!!!” Kai shouts. He throw his phone on the couch. “I have a meeting in 5 hours.”

Kai tells his friends what Sae just told him an it makes the three seems like giving up.

“I have an idea!” Jay suddenly gets up from his seat.
“Did you said that the man only know your hair? And… eyes, and skin, umm… yeah, just blonde Japanese, right?”

“Yeah, why?” Kai looks up at him.

Jay shows his evil smile. “We still have Hoshino!”

“What?” Kai frowns. ”You mean, Hoshino from science major?”

Jay nods. “Yeah, he is my sister’s boyfriend.”

“Umm… so?” Louis added in confuse.







The three young men are sitting on the chairs, each facing a big mirror. The shortest of them, having a robe around his body. A long haired man is standing behind him, adding some dark liquids and spreading it on his hair.

“Where is he now?” Kai is asking while looking at Jay through the mirror in front of him. He can’t move his head because the hairdresser behind him is still doing his hair.

“He’s on his way. Calm down, dude!”

Several minutes after that, a half Japanese young man appears on the entrance of the salon.

“Yo, brother!” Jay greets him with a high five. “Can we start now? ”

“Oh, yeah!!” Hoshino said cheerfully.

Another hairdresser takes Hoshino to sit on a chair next to Kai. What are the hairdresser doing is dye Kai hair into black and dye Hoshino’s hair into blonde. Hours later, Kai and Hoshino is ready with their suite walking to the hotel and get in the meeting room. Hoshino is a smart boy though, he can act as Kai and talk about a lot of things with Uncle Sae’s colleague. Kai walks a step behind him, act like he is the assistant.

The meeting started with some talks about the agreement, then the man offers a sheet of agreement paper that Kai have to sign. Kai offers a pen to Hoshino so that Hoshino can sign it.

“Ehhm..” Hoshino clearing his throat. He signs the paper but the pen is not working. Actually, it’s intentionally to be damaged.

“I’m sorry, my pen is not working, can I borrow yours?” Hoshino said to the man.

The main nods and stands up, he turns around to get his bag and find the pen.

While the man’s back is facing the two, Kai quickly takes out another pen and sign the agreement.

“Ah!! It’s finally working!!” Hoshino said happily as Kai finished signing the agreement.

The man turns around. “Oh, that’s good. I just found my pen” the man shows them his pen.

The two just show their sweetest smiles.

“So, Mr.Takahashi, I heard that you just got back from Europe for business trip, right? Maybe you can tell me your point of view about Europe’s economic business…”  the man said when he sits down on the sofa.

“Ah, yes.. I bet my Uncle told you about that, right?” Hoshino said.

Kai clears his throat. Based on the plan they arranged before, it’s time for Kai to leave.

Hoshino looks at Kai. “Oh, I think I will have a long talk with this great man. You can leave first”

Kai show his smiles and nods at him. He stands up, nods at the man and leaves the room. Just when he gets out of the room, Kai quickly runs to the exit door. Outside, there are Jay and Louis standing by on the parking area, waiting for Kai to accompany him to the airport.

“Is everything alright?” Louis said when Kai enters the car.

“Yeah, perfect!” Kai smiles while loosing his tie.

They heading to the airport, Jay drives furiously so that Kai won’t miss his flight.


*********** end of flash back ********


So that's the end of CHAPTER 4. You've already got the answer right now.

Next is........... what do you want by the way?




Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: cisda83 on January 09, 2014, 10:52:34 PM
Yeah... Kai dyed his hair black... then Atsuko was with Kai...

Oh... I nearly thought she would be with Aoi

Luckily Atsuko has a good manager... but her sis was sick because of that.

Kai is so lucky to have a nice friend helping him like that but is it really safe?

Why did Sae seem to always try not to get Kai to return to Japan to see Atsuko?

Did he not happy with the relationship that Kai and Atsuko had?

I think Sae had a spy near Kai that always monitoring his every moves... who was it...? the Butler?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: Sydney W on January 10, 2014, 12:33:05 AM
I want to know what happened next between Atsuko and Kai. Are they going to confess to the public their relationship ?
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: Konoe on January 10, 2014, 01:10:06 AM
Thank goodness it's Kai. They are finally reunited after years. :mon XD:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: mgxx on January 10, 2014, 03:00:36 AM
OMG ... Thankyou for updating...
I think when kai wake up, they will have some love dovey moment.. Or making out momentnyahahha s*x in the morning . Cant wait  :inlove:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: Haruko on January 10, 2014, 03:14:22 AM
I love it! yeah!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: karenchan on January 10, 2014, 06:01:16 AM
Won won wonderful  :mon XD: :mon XD: :mon XD:
Gosh. I want kaiacchan moment.
Make the morning bed moment romantic, soft and tender, move my heart  :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on January 10, 2014, 06:14:05 AM
Yokkata!! It's kai  :cow: :cow:

Mmm, maybe adult moment?? *if you know what I mean*   :nervous

Update soon!  :bow: :thumbsup
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: chichay12 on January 10, 2014, 08:25:13 AM
Kaiacchan all the way ~~ *wink wink XD
Chem thank u for the update :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: KaoriChan on January 10, 2014, 01:00:35 PM
Great job Saki-San you made it on time   8)
and I thought the guy was Aoi  :sweatdrop: . .



Can't wait for the next chapter.. Great job too Author-San  :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: KaeKain on January 11, 2014, 04:41:14 AM
Kyaaaah~ It's Kai *---*
I hope some love dovey moment KaiAcchan now   :fap
Can't wait to see the next chapter :bow:
Arigatou~ :thumbsup
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: miayaka on January 13, 2014, 08:29:24 PM
Yey Chem thank you for letting me know about this I was kind of ... (you know why)  :nervous

bro-fist!!
:heart: kaixacchan
I will be looking forward for the *cough* romance scene XD
And good thing it wasn't Aoi!

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: mgxx on January 14, 2014, 03:31:36 AM
Yey Chem thank you for letting me know about this I was kind of ... (you know why)  :nervous

bro-fist!!
:heart: kaixacchan
I will be looking forward for the *cough* romance scene XD
And good thing it wasn't Aoi!

And dont forget to Update your story too miayaka san >,<
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << 140109 completed chapter!
Post by: KaoriChan on January 19, 2014, 10:03:30 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter . . .  :pen_whirl:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << ATTENTION!!
Post by: chemicalstar on January 30, 2014, 08:07:58 PM
ATTENTION!!

Sorry if it annoys you, but I just found out someone asked me through PM that she wants my Taking Care Of You (Season 1) banner.

stupid me. I didn't save any of the original banner in my computer or else. And I've changed my banner too.

So please to anyone who ever saved that banner please tell me so that the person who asked me on PM can get it.

thankyou.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << ATTENTION!!
Post by: mgxx on February 04, 2014, 01:22:28 PM
do you still bussy cem-san ??
can't wait for the smut scene next update..
dont forget with this unfinised story  :bow: :bow: :bow: :heart: :heart:
update soon!!!  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
*how rude iam*
 XD XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 4 << ATTENTION!!
Post by: imintoyou128 on February 09, 2014, 06:28:21 AM
wow, Kai-san is no longer blonde?
I got scared there for a second  :panic:
Thanks to her manager for arriving on time,  :twothumbs
What do guys get on kissing drunk girls??
I think they're just proving that guys are jerk  :angry: :angry:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on February 23, 2014, 07:13:17 PM
I read some fics are updated. i makes me want to update mine too. but i have limited leisure time so I think I will giv you the part 1 first because it's quite short.

and, so.. I'm sorry it's not the perv scene yet. it's too fast for kai and acchan to get into that scene. but I promise, I will make it one later :)

enjoy this chapter

(http://i47.tinypic.com/25q8wpg.jpg)

SEASON 2 CHAPTER 5 Part 1

“Ohayou Atsuko..” he greets me and weakly smiles at me the time he opens his eyes fully.
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“KAI??!!” I wide my eyes, can’t believe that he is HIM!! He’s KAI!!

I quickly jump on him and hug him tight. I almost couldn’t recognize him. Since when he changed his hair color? The last time we had a video chat he still with his blonde hair. But he looks better now, more handsome… to be honest.  Am I dreaming? I don’t have any idea how could he suddenly laid beside me this morning. But I don’t really care. If it’s only a dream, let me just enjoy this happiness, because I do miss him.

Oh My GOD after these almost four years that I haven’t met him. I don’t know how to express my feeling. I’m just blooming happy that he’s here. I still hug him tight while my face is nuzzling on his neck. I really miss this guy. The guy who was an annoying stubborn little boy, who is my master, who is also my boyfriend. I miss his appearance. I miss his hug. I miss his everything…

The moment I hug him, I can feel that his body is more tough. Sure, almost 4 years. He must have been doing a lot of work out and swimming. He’s a man now.

“Atsuko… I can’t breathe” he said, I know that I hug him too tight. I release the hug and notice that I’m laying on his top. I look at him still with my wide smile but I can’t hide my tears, the tears of happiness.

“Hey…” he said, half whispering after finally breathes normally. He smiles at me, he raises his hands and he wipes my tears with his thumbs then he cups my face. That’s the time I realize that it’s not a dream. His touch makes me realize that this is reality. He’s really with me now.

“Kai, you’re here…” I said. Our face is really close, as I take this chance to capture his lips with mine. I really miss the taste of his lips. Though it’s been so long, I still remember the feeling when he kissed me. The warmth, the sweetness, the love… We enjoy our moment tasting each other lips for a while. I can feel the love, the longing, and the lust turn into one.

We feel the same breath, our nose nuzzling each other. His hands are caressing my back while mine are around his neck. These years, we used to kiss by text, by voice, by mail, by video chat, but now… we can feel the real warmth of the real kiss we wanted all this time. I don’t care how long this kiss is going to. But we part our lips when we lack of air and I’m still on his top.

“Why did you sleep in my room?”

“Eh?” I suddenly noticed that we’re laying on his bed, in his room. To be honest, it’s embarrassing that Kai found out I slept on his bed. I never did it when he was here. I never told him that I often to sleep here. I never get his permission. “Ano… Sorry. I often sleep here whenever I miss you.” I pout. We’re still on the same position. “And last night I…”

“You missed me?” he grins.

“…”

“And you’re drunk?” he said again just before I could talk anything. I know he could smell alcohol in my mouth when we’re kissing just now. And the fact that he realized I was drunk is reminding me about last night. I don’t remember how I ended up in Kai’s room, but the last thing I remember about last night was the karaoke party. Yes, that’s the last thing I remember about that. Oh, and I remember that I’m talking with Aoi. But how did I end up in Kai’s room? And with Kai by my side? How did everything happen?

“Hey, I’m sorry if it makes you worried about me” Kai talks again. He noticed that I was spacing out just now. I know he thinks I was drunk because of missing him so bad. But yes, I did. I missed him so bad, that’s why I accepted the offer to drink some wine.

“I’m here now…” Kai looks deep into my eyes, the way he looks at me makes my day. I just want to forget about how everything happened. As long as he is with me now, I don’t care about anything. I just want him right now. We stare at each other’s eyes and I can’t hold it. I love him. My mouth whispers “I love you” right in front of his mouth and he captures my lips again.

I don’t care if he can taste of smell alcohol in my mouth, but we suck each other’s lips like hungers. This kiss is very different from the last one he gave me years ago when he was about to leave Japan. I think both of us are growing up. He can play his lips and tongue playfully. I don’t know if he learned it in New York of what, but I just enjoy it. And thinking about New York, I notice something then I bite his upper lip.

“Ummhh…” he parted our lips and he groans as his hand touching his lips. He frowns at me, just like questioning why did I bite his lip.

“How did you get here?” I directly ask him.

“…” he doesn’t answer me. But I can see he’s thinking something that maybe.. he doesn’t know the answer. Did he come to Japan for no reason? Because he’s missing me like I do?

“Why didn’t you tell me first?” I pout.

“Umm… it’s a long story, honestly. A sudden plan, that’s’ why I haven’t told you” he said.

Even if the point is Kai is here now. I just want to know how did he get here. But what relieves me, he asked me why did I sleep on his bed just now. That means he got back home when I was on his bed already. I bet he knows nothing. The only thing I don’t know about is how did I end up on his bed since the last thing I remember is in the karaoke party.

“Atsuko…” he suspiciously smiles. I love his dimples.

“Hm?”

“Nothing.”

I chuckles to see him smiles with nothing to say. “What if you tell me your long story while breakfast?”

He suddenly pouts. “I’m still have a jet lag. Seriously, I’m sleepy…”

“Sigh. Fine, continue your sleep, young master… I’m going to prepare your breakfast.”

He tied my body with his hands tighter. “Stay here for a while, I also miss you”

I smile and kiss his forehead. “Sure…”

I roll and lay right beside him while he still hugs me tight and tries to sleep again. I caress his cheek, touch his nose, stroke his hair. He’s cute. I can’t help but smile looking at his cute sleeping face right in front of me.


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see you in the next part


Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: imjovanka on February 24, 2014, 12:30:56 AM
wow Kai comeback  :inlove:
update soon  :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on February 24, 2014, 01:47:01 AM
Welcome Back Kai...

Yeah... how did Atsuko come home?

Did her manager rescue her in time?

What happened with Atsuko and Kai?

How about the manager's sister condition?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on February 25, 2014, 04:49:21 AM
Omg ,,, this fanfiction so damn good... Can not wait until the next part >,<
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: Haruko on February 25, 2014, 05:34:11 AM
:3
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: takeshi77 on February 26, 2014, 05:38:39 PM
finally kai and atsuko met at last after 4 year  :lol:
and to think they able to met again after all of this year since a long distance relationship is very hard and challenging but they still make its and loyal to each other...its was a great things  :twothumbs
i hope with this meeting their relationship will grow further or better if they get married soon to avoid any obstacles  :lol:  :lol:
i concern about kai uncle reason by making kai didnt able to meet atsuko all this time....eventhought kai got escape this time but wonder wht will happen next...cz i cant really get wht his uncle thinking ..just hopefully he bless kai and atsuko relationship :)
and thanks for update  :)...look forward for 2nd part  XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on March 10, 2014, 02:17:57 PM
okaeri kai-kun!!!  :welcome
wow!!! atsuko must be so happy that guy is kai  :hip angel:
u really expert to make big suprise kai  :ptam-shy:
i love this fanfic,waiting for ur update -waiting passionly-
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: takashu on March 11, 2014, 09:38:03 AM
I'm a new reader here :kneelbow: :hee:

very enjoyable reading your fanfic  :k-great:, I did not even stop reading from the first season to the last update. :mon fyeah:

hope you soon update * sorry for my bad english
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: Akira ryusen sora on March 12, 2014, 04:00:55 PM
Finally they meet :3
Can't wait next chapter...
Please update soon :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: Kakeru15 on March 12, 2014, 04:26:27 PM
Please continue^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on April 23, 2014, 07:31:56 AM
Looking forward for the next chapter .. Please update this author-san.. Where are you??? Are you busy??? :(
Title: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 Part 1 (02/23/2014) <<
Post by: Isaa_san on May 04, 2014, 09:00:17 AM
Great story!
I've been a silent reader o;
Please continue c:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on June 22, 2014, 12:02:32 PM
Hello!! It’s me again!! LOL

I know lots of people started to desperate and thought that this fic is going to be hiatus. But guys, I’m still here.
Okay, I’ve been so busy and also lazy. I’m sorry and I hope all of you still patient for this fic. I promise to write this fic until the end. So, this is a bit of the story. Enjoy :D




Taking Care Of You: Season 2
Chapter 5 Part 2.




*Flashback*

Kai’s POV.


The taxi finally arrived in front of my house. I miss this place so bad. Every moment from the past suddenly comes into my mind, about my childhood, my parents, and also… my Atsuko. By the way, I don’t know where is she now. I didn’t call or text her since I took my flight to Japan. She could be in her apartment or inside this house. I want to meet her as soon as possible. But I think I want to rest my self for a while. The flight and everything happened recently really makes me tired. I need to sleep.

Two maids greets me when I get in the house. Seems so quiet. I don’t talk too much to them, I only bring a suitcase and a backpack. I can bring them to my room by myself. So I just ask them to go back to sleep and I go upstairs to my room by myself.

It’s unlocked, when I reach my bedroom door. I get in the dark room. Hmm… I can feel the scent. I really miss my bedroom. I turn on the light and put my suitcase near the table. Just when I turn around, I feel shocked. For real??!! Someone’s sleeping on my bed.

Is that… Atsuko??

I walk slowly approaching my bed. It’s really Atsuko who sleeps on my bed. Yeah, I can see her angelic face.
I knelt down on my knee and staring at her. I smile as I can’t even blink my eyes for seeing this sleeping beauty in front of me. I lift my hand and my fingers touch her soft cheek.

It’s really her.

I stand up again and take off my shoes. I get on my bed, lying behind her. I put my hand on her waist, sticking my body to hers. I can smell the scent of her hair. I kiss her head and slowly I can’t help my eyes to sleep.

*end of flashback*

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Acchan's POV



Kai is sounds asleep. I’m still staring at him while my fingers stroke his hair. I just can’t still believe in what just happened. My lover is in front of me, we’re on his bed and he’s hugging me. I can feel his breath…  his warmth… gosh, how could he get in here?  I slowly put away his hand off of my body, slowly get up, but I keep trying not to wake him up. Once I get my feet on the floor, I quickly get out of Kai’s room. I walk downstairs and go to my room.

There I see my bag then I get it to grab my phone. I quickly dial Saki-chan’s number.

Beep… 

Beep …

h“Moshi moshi” I greet her.

“Ah, you’re up?”

“Saki-chan… I-”

“You had me a rough time last night” she cuts my words.
“You were drunk!   HEAVILY…  “ she sighs. I just listen to her and she continues.
“I drove you home, but then you were angry and forced me to take you home. Lucky I got your house’s number on your phone. The maid told me the address and you we’re finally there.”

“And then?”

“And then WHAT? I leave just when the maid got you inside the house. Wait, are you still at home? I’m afraid if you’re not home now!” she sounds so worried.

“No, it’s okay, I’m home. I’m just… ” I take a deep breath and close my eyes. I throw my body on my bed. “I don’t remember anything about how did I get here.”

“BAKA!”

I chuckle. “Saki-chan… who did you meet last night in my house?”

“Your maid only. Why?”

GREAT! She didn’t meet Kai.

“Umm, nothing, it’s just… embarrassing if my uncle found me in heavy drunk” I lied.

“Acchan, you’re so messy lately. I think you need a bit rest. I just thought about giving you a long holiday, maybe for a week.”

“What? A week? But why?”

“Hey hey hey, I never heard any actress complaining about holiday. Why? You want to go to do your job? NO! I won’t allow you doing your job with that mess situation. I think you need to fresh up your brain and mind, Acchan. Really..” she explains. “Just go somewhere and make sure you’re back with a new you, okay”

“Really?! Oh.. I love you Saki-chan!! Yeay a week!!!”

I end the conversation. It’s really my best day. Kai is here and I get a week day off. Too much excited, I go to the bathroom, take my body under the shower. It’s coming up again. That thought about how did Kai get home. I quickly finish my shower and put a nice dress on my body. Kai is home, by the way. It’s fine if I’m look pretty in front of him. The time when I get out of my room, I meet a maid.
 
“Acchan, how are you now? Feels better?” she touch my forehead with her hand. “You look so terrible last night. Heavy drunk, huh?”

I give her a warm smile. “I’m all okay. Thanks for caring me…”

“Oh, I almost forget to tell you. Young master is here” she tells me. “After I’ve taken you to your bedroom, I went back to sleep. And then about 2 hours later, young master came. It was surprising, though. He looked so tired, so he just went to his room to sleep.”

I don’t get it. Doesn’t this woman know that I slept in his room last night? Did I unconciously move to his room and sleep there? Damn. Saki-chan is right. I’m totally messy. I need holiday.

“REALLY??” I act like I’m very surprised and super happy.  “Oh my god, he didn’t tell me that he would come home!”

She smiles. “I think he want to give you a surprise, Acchan. You’re lucky girl..”
“Well, let’s make breakfast while waiting for him to wake up”

“Okay, let’s go!” I excitedly drag her to the kitchen.

When we arrived in the kitchen, the maid takes some ingredients from the fridge and we start to cook.

“Don’t you have any schedule today?” she asks me.

“No, my manager gives me day off for a week” I answer her and smiles.

“Ah that’s great! You can spend more time with young master ” she continues. “Even we don’t know yet how long he will stay.”

She’s right. Kai is here but I don’t even know what’s his purpose to come to Japan. Business? I don’t know…

“Nee… can you not to tell Kai about last night?”

“Huh? You mean about the ‘heavy drunk’ thing?” she smirks.

I blushed awkwardly. “Yes… It’s embarrassing”

“Sure, honey…” she smiles. “I won’t let him know about this.”

“Thanks..”

“By the way, what made you so messy last night huh? You drunk, there must be something made you worry.”

“It’s him, though…” I answer simply. “I don’t know that longing can make me suffering that bad.”

“La la la… young love…” she pokes my shoulder and laugh.

So it’s clear now. I can arrange every pieces of what happened last night and everything is safe. Saki-chan doesn’t know about Kai. Kai doesn’t know how lame I was last night. Although it still leaves me with the question about what is Kai’s purpose in Japan. An hour later, the foods are done. I serve them on the table when suddenly someone’s hands get around my waist.

I realize that it’s Kai when he hugs me from behind. “How rude you left me alone” Kai whispers in my ear. It somehow makes me shivered that his lips are just next to my ear. I can feel the heat. He hugs me tight and he kissed my shoulder.

I turn around and face him, but he still doesn’t want to keep our bodies apart.
“If I went to sleep again, who will cook your favorite food for breakfast?”
I said as I put my hands around his neck.

He sighs and rolls his eyes. “Okay… okay…“

“Come on, let’s get your breakfast!” I lead him to the dining room. We have our breakfast, or maybe it’s a brunch, because too late for a breakfast. I can see him keep staring at  me while eating his meal.

“Hey! Why are you keep staring at me??” I suddenly ask him, though I can feel that I’m blushed because of it.

He smiles. Oh, damn!! His dimples. I miss them.

“You looks more beautiful than in the magazine” he said.  My heart beats fast.

I chuckled. “Magazine? Which magazine?”

He suddenly gets choked. I give him a glass of water. I don’t know what he’s thinking of when I asked him about magazine. Ah, this boy. Don’t tell me that he bought every magazine that contains my pictures.

“Anyway, you haven’t told me how did you get here, AND YOU DIDN’T TELL ME??”

“Ano…” he starts to think.

“Kai??”

“I miss you” he said with his innocent face.

“EH??”

“Yes, Atsuko. I miss you. That’s all” he puts his chopsticks and holds my hand.

I smile at him. So maybe the maid was right. I think he gave me a surprise.

“Well, honestly, it’s a long story. But I really tell the truth, I miss you, Atsuko.”

I love this boy very much. I love you, Kai.

“I miss you too. Thanks for coming because of me.”
“So how long will you stay here?”

“Umm, I don’t know. But I can’t stay more than a week”

“So it’s a week?” I start to smirk at him.

“Yeah, maybe… why?”

I kiss his cheek. He seems very surprised of my sudden act as he closes his eyes when I kiss his cheek. I laugh at him. Kai is so cute!! Kami-sama. Thank you for this happiness. We can have a week together.

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End of Chapter 5.

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: IamNot_Glad on June 22, 2014, 12:46:09 PM
KaiAcchan moment is finally come  :lol: :lol: XD XD
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: taenylove on June 22, 2014, 01:56:04 PM
Yaaaay~ finally an update
So cute :)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: ubulubulbilu on June 22, 2014, 03:32:40 PM
It's too short, I want a drama! Lol
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on June 22, 2014, 03:34:22 PM
Yeah an update at last ..............

ah.. so nothing happened between Atsuko and Kai

What happened with saki's sister, was she okay?

Would Sae know that Kai left for Japan?

Would Sae ask Kai to go back and leave Atsuko again?

What would Atsuko and Kai do for a week?

Would they be able to depth their relationship?

Would there be scandal about Kai and Atsuko?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Thank you

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs



Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: Sydney W on June 22, 2014, 05:05:30 PM
It been a long since your last update. Love them (Kai x Atsuko) being lovey dovey.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: Kakeru15 on June 22, 2014, 05:08:29 PM
More kaiacchan.... Moreeeeee please  :lol: :love:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on June 23, 2014, 05:18:28 AM
FINALLY!!!!!!
welcome back chemicalstar-san  :welcome
im so happy u back and continue this awesome fanfic,arigatou author-san  :kneelbow:
kaixacchan sweet like always  :ptam-aww:
they are miss each other and lovey dovey like that just make me.......melt!  :luvluv1:
please keep update it and give me more kaixacchan author-san :inlove:
and dont u dare to hiatus  :mon evil: :mon wtfmm:
i willing to wait until this fanfic even it takes long time but please dont hiatus ok?
im wait u author-san,matta ne~  :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: Haruko on June 23, 2014, 06:12:41 AM
FINALLY!!! thanx for this episode
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: Justqle on June 23, 2014, 09:36:48 PM
Thank you so much for updated this story  :farofflook:
so romantic story between kai and acchan  :inlove:
yeah spending a week just both of them  :mon inluv:
what will they do in the time??  XD XD LOL
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Ch. 5 : completed chapter (06/22/2014) <<
Post by: karenchan on June 24, 2014, 11:46:42 AM
You give me hope  :heart:
I don't know how to spend this summer other than reading akb fanfic orz
A WEEK  :lol: :lol: :lol: And TAKAMINA DANSO BLACK HAIR  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

(https://38.media.tumblr.com/f19b1d76921eb0c05af49ca3ff778741/tumblr_n77hb2IalW1sl4cwjo1_500.gif)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 03, 2014, 06:39:50 PM
 Hello all. Thank you for all the compliments, and I’m glad that a lot of you are still read this long last fic. LOL.
Also, welcome to the new reader :D
So this is the next chapter. Enjoy 


TAKING CARE OF YOU
Season 2 Chapter 6



I love this boy very much. I love you, Kai.

“I miss you too. Thanks for coming because of me.”
“So how long will you stay here?”

“Umm, I don’t know. But I can’t stay more than a week”

“So it’s a week?” I start to smirk at him.

“Yeah, maybe… why?”

I kiss his cheek. He seems very surprised of my sudden act. Kami-sama. Thank you for this happiness. We can have a week together.


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Kai looks at Acchan with confused look. “Naande?”

“You know, my manager gave me day off” Acchan said with small grin on her face.  “…for a week!”

“REALLY??!!” Kai widened his eyes. “Haa… I come home at the right time, then!”
Kai starts to wonder what he will do for a week with Acchan. He thinks that they should go somewhere to spend their quality time.

After finishing their breakfast, suddenly Acchan get up from her seat and grab Kai’s wrist.

“What is it?” Kai asked as she drags him to the house backyard.

“Come on, I want to show you something” she smiles as she keeps dragging Kai to a small house where Acchan and her parents live when the first time they lived in Takahashi’s residence.

“Since Uncle Kine started being busy with his job in your office he doesn’t live here anymore. Now a maid lives here.”

“Oh” that’s just what Kai said to Acchan. “And?”

“She’s not alone here. She’s accompanied with 5 armies!!” Acchan grins at him as she knocks on the door.

“ARMIES??” Kai said out loud. “She lives here with 5 men?? And they are armies??” Kai has no idea about what Acchan just said. How dare a maid lives in his house bringing five men inside without his permission. And the shocking thing, Acchan knows about it. Now Kai is very confused.

“Excuse me” Acchan said while knocking the door.

“Just come in, Acchan!! It’s unlocked!!” a woman voice heard from inside the house.

Acchan opend the door and takes Kai in.

“Ahh, Young Master!!” a woman walks in from the kitchen with a dog.  She bows at Kai and he replies.

WOOF WOOF!!

The dog barks at Kai with vicious look, just like it is ready to attack him.

Looking at this situation, Kai starts to panic. He takes a step back. But then Acchan, with his excited expression, walks approach the dog and hugs it. “HONEY!!!”

The dog seems likes Acchan, but then it looks at Kai and starts to bark again.

“Ne… don’t worry! He’s not a stranger”  Acchan said as she caress the dog’s forehead. “Don’t you remember him??”

“H-h-honey??” Kai said trembling.

“Yes, Kai..” Acchan laughs. “Come here! Greets him!”

Kai tries to gather all himself and walks approach the dog and Acchan.

WOOF!!

Kai stops when the dog barks.

Acchan chuckles, “It’s okay, Honey… He is Kai!! He’s the one who took you here when you’re a little puppy”

“Are you sure he won’t attack me?” Kai asked, still hesitant with his movement. “Hello!!” he forces himself to greet the dog with a smile.

Acchan takes Kai’s hand and places it on the dog’s head. Looks like the dog starts to like Kai, even it still don’t remember who Kai is.

“He grows up” Kai smiles at Acchan. He turns to the dog again. Now Kai can control the dog. “Thanks for taking care of him.”

“It’s the best birthday gift, though…” Acchan replies his smile. “Thank you Kai” she kisses Kai’s cheek again, making him blush. Funny thing is, the dog imitates what Acchan did. It nuzzles on Kai’s face and they laugh together.

“So this is the armies?” Kai said. “A big dog as 5 armies?”

“Hmm, no. Actually, there are more than Honey.” Acchan replies. “Come on!” She drags him to a room inside the house. There is a cute huge pillow on the floor. “Look, Honey has a family…”

Kai looks so stunned with the view that he is seeing now. A female dog lays on the pillow with three puppies lay beside it, suckling on its breast. “This is awesome!!”

Honey, the male dog, walks to the female one and licks its head.

“This is just… WOW!! A family!!” Kai still stunned of the view.

“Sweet, isn’t it?”

“Yeah…” Kai smiles. He caresses the dogs. “I hope we have one” still with his eyes on the dogs.

“Family?” Acchan looks at him.

“Yeah, we can have three children” Kai said unconciously.

“Three?” Acchan chuckles. That time Kai realizes what stupid thing he just said. His face got red.

“…Or more, hehehe” he laughs awkwardly.

Acchan just looks away, changing her direction to the dogs.

“Hey, let’s go out somewhere!” Kai holds Acchan’s hand. “I miss hanging around Japan”

“Ah! Good idea!” Acchan replies excitedly. “I think I know where we have to go..”

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“For God sake, darling… She’s no one. Maybe just my junior in college”

“She’s no one? She sent you basketball shoes and you said she’s no one?”

“I don’t know anything about this. Maybe she’s just admiring me”

The black long haired girl takes the shoes and walks fast towards the main door.
“You’ll never wear this shoes!!”

“Okay! Okay! Whatever you want to do, but please don’t be angry..”

“I’m not only angry, I’m mad!!” Rena open the door and throw away the shoes.

BUMM..

“SHIT!!!” a guy who’s just about to walk in the café stuck by a pair of basketball shoes, right on his head. (* you can imagine the size of basketball shoes. It’s HUGE. LOL)
“AAARRGGHH…” Kai holds his head in pain.

“KAI!! Oh my… are you okay??” Acchan who just get out from the car, runs towards him.

Rena widened her eyes. “OOPS!!” she close her mouth by her hand. She can’t believe it. First, she can’t believe that the shoes crashed someone’s head. Second, she can’t believe it’s Kai and Acchan.

“What happened?” Jun comes near to see.

Acchan caress his head. “Is it hurts?”

“Arggh… Damn it!” Kai take the shoes on the ground and throw it back to the direction where the shoes just attacked him.

BUMMM

Now the shoes land right on Jun’s nose just before he saw who is the guy outside the café.

“Geez, Kai! What did you do!!” now Acchan who is close her mouth by her hand as she realizes the shoes struck on Jun’s face.

“AAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!” Jun shouts loudly. Blood starts to flow from his nose.

Still holding the scar on his forehead, Kai can see who is the guy in front of the door.

“MATSUI?!”

Both of the guys approach and hug each others, while the girls still can’t believe of what just happened.

“I didn’t expect this kind of situation we had after separated for years” Jun said. Now they sit inside the café where Rena serve them coffee and waffles .

 “It’s dramatic!” Acchan said while taking care of Kai’s wound.

“Ahh ittai-” Kai groans.

“Hold on a bit, Kai” Acchan blows his wound. Instead of feel the pain, Kai is blushing as takes a glance at Acchan’s face close to him.

“I don’t know Rena can throw something that powerful. What is she? Hulk?” Kai said whispering to Jun. Hearing that words, Acchan slaps his shoulder and chuckles. Rena is currently in the kitchen that she can’t hear what they’re talking about.

“She’s mad” Jun said, lowering his voice. “Someone sent a gift to me. Rena opened the box. I didn’t even know who gave it. Then she found basketball shoes and a love letter inside the box. That’s why…”

“Ahh, so you’re a basketball star now?”

Jun grins at him. “Yeah, when there no Oshima and Takahashi, who else can take the place? ME. For the win!” Jun smiles with evilish look.

“How’s your nose now?” Rena walks approach, bringing some cookies.

Hearing that Rena is coming, Jun acts like it’a a bad off. He groans and holds the cotton on his nose. “Aaarrh, it’s really painful! I can’t hold it” he acts like that so that Rena stops angry with him.

“I’m sorry, Jun… it’s all my fault” Rena said, taking care at Jun’s bleeding nose. “I’m sorry… I shouldn’t did it…”

Kai and Acchan sighs looking at this drama.

Realizing that there are Kai and Acchan in front of them, Rena quickly said “Oh, and I’m sorry too, Kai. I never mean to do it to you. Hehe”

“It’s okay… Seems like he’s got a worse wound” Kai replies.

“ARRGGHH.. Kai, you threw the shoes too hard, it almost killed me.” Jun said.

“Yeah, yeah, whatever!” Kai said. “As long as you two don’t fight each other again”

“Aww, cute” Acchan looks at her sweet boyfriend. She kisses his cheek. “Love you, Kai” she whispers.

They spend the day by chatting in the café for hours. There are so many things to tell to each other since Kai and Jun haven’t met in more than three years.

“Don’t you have any plan for a trip?” Rena asked Kai and Acchan.

“Yeah, you can ask Mario where to go.” Jun added. “He’s a traveler, should’ve known where is the right place for a famous actress to spend her holiday with her boyfriend.”

“Ah yeah, Mario!” Kai shouts. “How could I forget that he’s a traveler now.”

“That’s right, Acchan, maybe he knows where’s the safe place without paparazzi.” Rena said.

“I’ll call him then..”

After visits Rena and Jun and spent the day in their café, Acchan and Kai go to the city where they can find a lot of street foods. Somehow it reminds them about the first time they went out together long time ago. But the difference now, Acchan has to wear mask and glasses for disguise while Kai doesn’t worry with his appearance because he’s not a superstar like Acchan. But it doesn’t matter to him, he does understand about Acchan’s position. Feeling tired enough, they go back to their house.

They meet Kine when they arrived at home. That’s when Kai finally tell the truth about how he went back to Japan. Kine promises Kai that he won’t tell Uncle Sae about it. Kai also ask for Kine’s permission to take Acchan for a trip to Hawaii. He got a mail from Mario that it would be nice to spend several days trip in Hawaii.

Atsuko go to Kai’s room so the two can see the mail from Mario about some places to visit in Hawaii. They choose the beach, party, and cool places and book the flight.

“I think we can start to pack our bags tomorrow” Acchan said as Kai turn off his computer.

“Un, it’s late of night after all..”

“Well, I’ll go back to my room. Good night Kai…” Acchan said and walk to the door.

Kai suddenly calls her when she’s about to leave the room. “Hey Atsuko”

“Yes?”

There’s a silence for a while, Acchan stares at him with questioning look.

“C-can we sleep together?” he said trembling.

It feels like something heavy drops on Acchan’s chest hearing Kai said that, with his typical innocent face. He always says something shocking with that stupid face.

Kai turns his head down, knowing that he just did a stupid thing that he knows Acchan will think bad about him by hearing it. He blames himself. He regrets of everything just came out from his mouth. “Stupid!” he thoughts. There’s silence between the two, until..

“My door’s unlocked” suddenly Acchan says.
It’s automatically makes Kai look at her, he saw her smiled and then she went away leaving him in the room.


~ Kai’s POV ~

“Is it real? Or she’s just kidding me? Teasing me? Or... maybe she’s serious?” I thought.

My heart starts to beat so fast that I can’t think properly what I have to do now. Gosh, are we really going to do it tonight? I can feel my hands are shivering. I’m totally nervous.

“Wait.. wait.. Kai, please calm down” I try to make myself calm but I can’t. Now I’m just walking around in my room with no idea what I have to do first.

What I have to do now? I think again while keep walking around with super nervous feeling.

“Condom? Yes, that’s right. I need a condom!”

Geez how could I forget about that important thing! Ah, I will ask Kine to buy it. I quickly get my wallet to get some money. I get out of my room to look for Kine. But when I’m about to leave my room, I suddenly remember something.

“WAIT. Kine is Atsuko’s uncle. How can I ask him to buy a condom for... SHIT!! I can’t do that. I have to buy it by myself.”

I get back to my room, change my clothes and get my car key. I drive by myself to the nearest place to buy that protector. I’m so glad that there are a lot of vending machines that sell condom in Japan. I buy the most expensive one. It has to be special for me and Atsuko/ I quickly drive back home. When I get home, the house seems so quiet. I wonder where’s everyone. I walk towards my room and..

“DING..DING.. DING..”

“Whoaaaahh!!!” I’m so surprised just when I walked pass the wall clock, its chime is dinging. That time I look at the clock and it shows that it’s 12PM in the midnight. No wonder the house seems so quiet. I guess everyone’s sleeping.

I go to my room and prepare myself, wearing an armless shirt and a trousers. I check out the mirror to see how do I look. Great! I take a deep breath. Inhale.. exhale.. My heart starts to beat fast again.

I close my eyes and try to ensure myself that everything’s gonna be fine. I take a look at the mirror again, just to ensure that I’m look fine. I grab the condom I bought then leave my room, I walk to Atsuko’s room downstairs. I meet nobody on my way there. Good. Because it’s gonna be embarrassing if someone finds out that I’m going to enter Atsuko’s room this late of night.

Just when I arrived in front of her room, my heart beats fast again. The door is closed but as I remember that Atsuko said she didn’t lock the door. I don’t know if I have to knock it first or just go inside. I try to take a deep breath before I slowly knock the door.

KNOCK..KNOCK..

“Atsuko, it’s me..” I said, half whispering. I don’t want anyone hear me knocking on her door. I wait for two or three seconds but there’s no answer.

KNOCK.. KNOCK..

“I’m getting in, okay” I said while opening the door knob and slowly enter her room.

The main lamp is turned off, she just keep the table lamp turned on so that the room filled by the dim light. I look around and find her is laying on a side of the bed with her back is facing me.

“Atsuko..” I call her. She doesn’t answer or gives any movement. I walk around the bed and see her pretty face. She’s sleeping.

I sigh to myself seeing her sleeping peacefully. I look at the condom I hold. I think I was late. She’s sleeping already, it’s impossible to do it tonight. I put the condom in my pocket then I sit on the other side of the bed. Now I’m confused of what I have to do next. Should I continue to sleep here or just get back to sleep in my own room.

Then I hear she moves around and facing me, still with her eyes closed. I look at her. It’s so magical that she can make my heart beats fast only with her sleeping appearance, with her eyes closed, with no smile on her face. Looking at her innocent sleeping face makes me stares at her unconciously.  I decide to get on the bed and lay my body beside her.

I think my movement makes her notices that someone just get on the bed. She slowly half opens her eyes.  “Kai…?”

I smiles at her. “Yeah? It’s me…”

She moves closer still with her eyes closed and moves her hand around my torso. I think my heart is ready to explode as she hugs me just like a teddy bear. She is very close to me. NO. It’s not only close, but her body is sticking on me. Literally, sticking. I can even feel her breath on my neck. I doubt if I can sleep properly with her hugging me, on her bed, along the night.
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Two hours later…
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Damn I can’t sleep!!!!! Seriously. We stay here with the same position for two hours. She’s sound asleep but I can’t even close my eyes for a second. I took a glance at a big photo on the wall. It’s the little Atsuko’s photograph with MG and Mrs.Maeda.  Somehow I can’t believe that the little girl on the photo who is smiling cutely with my driver and maid, now grows as a beautiful, yet hot girl, who is now on my embrace with her night gown. I think it’s embarassing, though, to make out with Atsuko in this room, with MG and Mrs.Maeda’s picture on the wall. Seems like MG keep watching me not to touch her daughter.

“Ah, horrible” I shook my head then look below my chin. A princess is peacefully sleeping there. I kiss her forehead then close my eyes. Wishing that I can sleep properly.

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End of Season 2 Chapter 6
See ya later ;)
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: Sydney W on July 05, 2014, 06:56:12 PM
Waiting for chapter 7 or omake of Kai x Acchan.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: chichay12 on July 05, 2014, 06:59:03 PM
i can't wait to read the next chapter!! :farofflook:
update soon chem :on gay:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: karenchan on July 05, 2014, 09:08:36 PM
KYAAAAAAAAA
even my heart beat so fast while reading. i cant imagine how kai feels  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: Haruko on July 05, 2014, 10:17:58 PM
cute atsumina is cute..
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: ubulubulbilu on July 06, 2014, 01:32:09 AM
Nah nah Kai, dont touch her! Stay to be a good boy. U need to marry her first!  :lol:

Btw, welcome back JPHIP.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: acchan0048 on July 06, 2014, 05:49:36 AM
kai ,, don't dare to touch your beautiful angel before you two married
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on July 06, 2014, 02:45:32 PM
Hahahahaha!
This chapter sure make me laugh a lot! :lol:
Kai,how can u have that perv mind?! U even buy an condom  :on lol:
Marry her and u can get what u want :kekeke:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on July 06, 2014, 03:18:33 PM
omg!!! i cant stop grinning while reading this fic...
seriously kai !!!!! be a man !!!!
wwww go marry her!
 :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: Justqle on July 06, 2014, 08:26:47 PM
ah honey has family already? i've forgot about honey a bit, that's really a best birthday present for acchan. it reminds me about they first moments to know each other, make me wanna re-read this from the beginning XD
hwaaaaaa too bad kai couldn't do anything lol
ah maybe at hawaii? kyaaaaaa i can't wait to see they will spend their holiday in hawaii yeay  :mon inluv:

Marry her and u can get what u want :kekeke:
yeah if they married, kai can have acchan completely  :mon mischief:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 6 (07/03/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 07, 2014, 03:39:21 PM
Oh... Poor poor Kai...

Very bad temptation

Well a date in Hawaii...great

What are they going to do?

Would there be paparazzi?

Would sae know about them?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait...

Thank you for update

  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 12, 2014, 06:43:09 PM
Yo everyone!! Thank you for reading my fic. I'm glad  :wub:
 :welcome to the new readers, I hope you like it.



TAKING CARE OF YOU
Season 2 Chapter 7
Part 1


It is totally different when you wake up in the morning and noticing there’s someone on your side hugging you. Acchan smiles genuinely to see her beloved one is in a deep sleep. He doesn’t move at all when Acchan pinch his nose. She wonders what time did he come to her bedroom last night, since he’s now is still in a deep sleep. Without removing the blanket that covers the two, Acchan slowly leaves the bed and goes to her bathroom. Kai is still sleeping when she finished, so she decides to prepare the breakfast. It always excites her to cook when Kai’s is home. However, it feels like her mother is still here when she cooks something for Kai, reminds her of their lifetime back then.

“It’s almost done, young master hasn’t wake up yet?” a maid asks her while they preparing the breakfast.

Acchan takes a glance at the clock, it’s almost 9 and Kai hasn’t wake up yet. “Would you mind to take it for a while” Acchan asks the maid to finish her cooking. “I’ll wake him up.”
She goes to her bedroom and sees Kai is still sleeping there. Slowly she sits on the bed facing him.

“Kai…” her hand cups his cheek, caressing his cheek with her thumb. “Wake up, dear…”

“Mmm” he mumbles without opening his eyes.

“Kai, how long you will sleep? We’re about to take the flight tonight, you should wake up. We haven’t pack our bags” Acchan said and pouted. “And… you’re still in my bedroom, by the way”

Hearing the last sentence, Kai a little bit opens his eyes, but closes them again, continue his sleep. It makes Acchan takes a deep sigh. Then, she move closer to him…

She kisses him deeply that she doesn’t let him move or even reply the kiss. Too deep to kiss her back, after while, he can’t breathe by it.

“MMppphh... hosh… hosh… ”  Kai open his eyes and pull her back. “Atsuko… You almost killed me, I couldn’t breathe”

“Nani? That’s your morning kiss” she grins at him. “Come on, wake up wake up wake up!”

“Okay.. okay..” Kai removes the blanket and sits on the bed. He looks at Acchan. “Hey, we’re going for holiday tonight, right?”

“No” she replies shortly.

Kai frowns at her reaction.

Acchan is actually just teasing him. She moves closer to him, their faces are only parted an inch. “We’re going for honeymoon” the she gives him a light kiss. It somehow makes him blushed to see Acchan teasing him like that. “Come on, back to your room and take a bath.”

There's a feeling that makes his heart beats fast when Acchan teasing him like that and he kind of likes it. He thought that Acchan is a multitalented actress that she's very good in teasing him.

Kai leaves the room and it’s time for Acchan to make up her bed. She pulls the blanket from the bed and about to fold it up. Something on the catches her eyes when she pulls the blanket. She takes that red wrapped thing and examine it.

“Condom?” she thought.

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“Ohayou,young master!” a maid greets Kai when he walks upstairs. She’s a little bit confused to see Kai with messy appearance walk from Acchan’s room in the morning. When she enters the kitchen, she finds Acchan there.

“Nee, my girl is adult now…” she gives a wink to Acchan.

“Eh?”

“He slept with you last night?”

“A-ahh.. yes..” Acchan answered her awkwardly. “But we did nothing!” she quickly added.

“It’s alright, honey… we understand” she winks at her, and other maids are giving her a teasing smile.

“Yosh!! We finally have a little kid to take care of” one of the pinch Acchan’s cheek.

“Haa, what are you saying...” Acchan chuckles, while her cheeks are red and blushed. “We’re just sleeping, that’s all…”

That day, Kai and Acchan are busy preparing their goods to bring to Hawaii for holiday. All maids are helping them, so is Kine. Fortunately, they all support them to be together that they promised not to tell anyone about it, especially to Uncle Sae. Kine take them to the airport and just like usual, Acchan has to wear mask and glasses for disguise. Kai walks behind her and acts like they don’t know each other.

However, they have to keep their disguise when Japanese all around, and now, there are more that 50% Japanese on the plane. Acchan takes off her mask but still wears her glasses, and tonight she doesn’t use any make up so that people can’t notice her. After being an actress, it’s her first flight without her manager.

“This is gonna be a boring flight” Kai mumbled when they get on their seat on the first class.

“What do you mean?” Acchan asks him with low voice.

“It’s an 8 hours night flight and I have to act like we’re strangers. It’s killing me” said Kai without looking at Acchan. He takes a bottle and drink.

“We can use the toilet” Acchan said quietly.

BURRRRSSSSTT

“Sir, are you akay?” a stewardess comes approaching him. Kai burst the water in his mouth after hearing what Acchan said.

“I’m.. *cough I’m okay… Sorry, I’m just.. in a bad health” Kai said awkwardly.

The woman helps Kai to clean the seat and dry it by a towel. “Okay, Sir. Call me if you need anything. I hope you can take a rest.” The she leaves.

Kai glances at Acchan who is now leaning in a pillow with eyes closed, keeping a straight face but she can’t hide winning smile.
"This girl.."

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*It’s Part 1, let me finish the second part later :D*
 8)2
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 12, 2014, 08:28:41 PM
ah... atsuko is such a teaser...

Would  they take the next step in their relationship?

So what's going to happen to Kai and Atsuko next?

Can' wait to find out later

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: prof.j on July 13, 2014, 01:16:29 AM
Quote
“We can use the toilet” Acchan said quietly.

BURRRRSSSSTT
LOL thanks god i wasn't drinking when reading this, if i drink i will be same like Kai :lol: *BURRRRSSSST*

Hahaha


now, waiting for part2 :grin:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: Siren on July 13, 2014, 01:22:44 AM
Hahah loved how Acchan tease Kai  :inlove:

The last part I was like  :shocked :shocked  :drool:

Can;t wait for part 2  :w00t:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: Sydney W on July 13, 2014, 06:37:35 AM
I want part 2 too.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on July 13, 2014, 05:34:01 PM
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
This chapter just too..... :hiakhiakhiak: :on lol:
Congrats kai,U just have evil girlfriend  :wahaha:

Keep going author-san,i wait ur next update ^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 1 (07/12/2014) <<
Post by: acchan0048 on July 14, 2014, 03:28:09 PM
gagagaga LOL acchan teasing KAI  ,, and the "BURRRRSSSSTT" LOL
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on July 23, 2014, 07:06:36 PM
Sorry for waiting... so here's the second part. Enjoy!  :D

TAKING CARE OF YOU
Season 2 Chapter 7
Part 2



Kai and Acchan spend the first day in Hawaii just for rest and enjoying the hotel services due to the jet lag. Mario suggested Kai to stay in a hotel which is rare for Japanese to stay there in Hawaii. And it’s clear, almost all the people they meet in the hotel are European. Some of them seem amazed that there are two Japanese walking on the hallway. Fortunately Kai is very fluent in English so he used to greet and talk to the people easily. But looking at their typical Japanese faces, people greet them with Japanese instead of English. So it’s kinda funny that Acchan always giggling when Kai greets people with “Good morning” and they answer it with “Ohayou gozaimasu”.

They stay in the same room with a king sized bed and exclusive interiors. Though, none of them planned to do “something” special even they will spend several nights on the same bed. Furthermore, the last two days, they sleep together. Once in Kai’s bedroom when Kai arrived in Japan, and the second one was in Acchan’s room. The two just act normally, it’s just that they have to use the restroom to change clothes and using the bathroom alternately.

“So, what are we going to do today, princess?” Kai asked after he finished showering. He saw Acchan sits in front of the mirror spraying her perfume.

“Let’s explore Honolulu first”

“Why not beach?”

“Ano… I don’t want to make my skin goes darker for the whole holiday. We can go to the beach tomorrow, okay?”

“Ah, I almost forget that I’m in a holiday with an actress” Kai laughs.

Acchan walks approaching him. She put her arms around his neck. “But I’m still the same Acchan you know”

“Sure, my Acchan, my Atsuko, my love…” he smiles at her.

“So… we’re going?”

“Yeah, let’s go!”

The two go to explore the city by a car which Kai rent for private. Acchan asked him to go to Iolani Palace and some historical places in Honolulu. They took some pictures there. So many places they visit that day, and time flies as the sun goes down, they go back to the hotel room. In the evening, they wear very neat outfit. Kai wears a suit, and Acchan wears a navy blue gown. Very cool boy and beautiful girl right there. The two enter the car and go to a romantic restaurant for dinner.

“How’s your college, Kai?” Acchan asks when they’re eating their dish.

“Good. But I often skipped classes for business things” Kai said. “It’s somehow killing me. And to be honest, I’m skipping classes again for a week.”

“EH??!! So it’s not your holiday in college?” Acchan widened her eyes, she can’t believe that Kai skipped college just to see her. “What a rebel!!” she pinch his hand.

“Hehe” he laughs. “Don’t worry, my friends can handle everything in NY.”
“Oh, I was very hopeless when I told them that I am really your boyfriend.”

“Why?”

“They didn’t believe me. You know…” he stops for a while. “… me – dating an actress. Sounds like a fairytale.”

Acchan blushed for what just Kai said.
“Nee… how many times I’ve told you. Don’t ever look at who I am now, Kai. For you, I am still me…” she smiles while holding his hand.
“Or you want me to call you Young Master again?” Acchan grins at him.

“NO! Don’t try to do that!” he pouts.
“So what about you? How’s your college? Your job?”

“College is fine. Everything I learned in college really helps me in doing my job.”
“Next month we’re about to start filming a new drama.”

“New drama? Wow cool!!”

“Yeah, I will role as an annoying high-school teacher.”

“Hahaha, an annoying high-school teacher. I can’t wait to see your acting in that drama.”

“I don’t really like her character, but it’s like a new challenge for me in acting. I think I have to do my job professionally.”

“So you’re not the main character in this drama?”

“No, the main character is a ghost who stay in an apartment of a high school teacher, they will  be the main character.”

Kai sighs in relieve.

“Naande?”

“No, I’m just glad that you’re not the main character in this drama,” he said in low voice. “otherwise… there must be a kissing scene. I don’t really like it”

She chuckles to look at Kai’s expression. “You’re jealous?”

“Kinda… ”

“To Satou-san?”

“Yes.”

Acchan pats his head. “Hmm.. my prince is jealous. Nee... what if I have to do a more challenging scene?”

“Huh? What do you mean?”

“Hmm.. you know, if the script told me to do more than just kissing with a guy…”

“No no no!! Atsuko please don’t  continue it!” Kai shake his head and that’s just makes Acchan laughs. “I won’t let anyone touch you!”

“Even in a movie?” Acchan takes it more.

“Of course!!” Kai replies it quickly. “You’re mine, Atsuko… in or not in the movie! Only mine!”

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After having their dinner, they go to walk around the city and when it’s late enough, they go back to the hotel room. Kai feels so sleepy that night and he want to get on the bed immediately but Acchan is still in the bathroom. Afterall, he still keeping a hope that –maybe, Acchan is in the mood to do some adult things with him. Well, just expecting.

Acchan gets out from the bathroom while singing. She saw Kai is sitting on the couch while staring at his iPad.

“I thought you’re already sleeping” she said while getting on the bed.

“I’m looking for a cool place to hang out tomorrow night. Could be a bar…”

“… with live music and a dance floor” Acchan continued and smiles.

“Ha! Good idea!” Kai looks at his screen. Then after he finds a right place to go, he turns off the iPad screen. He puts it on the small table near the bed. Crawling on the bed hesitantly, he takes a pillow and puts it beside Acchan’s. With his still wondering thought of doing something special with Acchan tonight, he takes a glance to the girl with a night gown beside him on that bed.

“I’m not sleepy yet…” he said. Hoping Acchan will agree with him.

But instead of saying  that she’s agree with him, Acchan get off from the bed. It makes Kai wondering why, but he sees Acchan walks towards the door. He thought that Acchan will go somewhere leaving him, but then the light is turned off by her. Yeah, she turned off the lights. Now the room is completely dark, but he can still sees her form because she wears white night gown. She walks back to the bed.

“It will help you to sleep” she whisphers and lay her head on the pillow right on his ear.

“Yeah… maybe darks can help me to ask for it” he said in his dirty mind.

Suddenly Kai feels Acchan hand is moving around his torso. Her face snuggling on his neck. One of her legs move on his. This situation kinda makes him nervouse. He hold his breath when Acchan takes her moves. Then, he release his breath deeply when there’s no movement from Acchan anymore.

“Kai…” Acchan said.
It sends a heat electric shock on his neck.

“Humm?” he tries to answer her calmly.

She moves her hand from his torso to his chest. Slowly caressing it.
“I hate to say it to you, but…” she stops for a while  “… I miss my parents.”

Hearing what she just said with low voice, making Kai think about MG and his wife, and of course it takes him to remember about his parents too.

“I’m sorry to say it to you…” Acchan said, half whispering. “I know it reminds you of your parents too.”

Now Kai is completely forgetting that Acchan is hugging him and caressing his chest. What’s on his head right now are memories from the past of how her parents could work with his parents, and now he and Acchan ended up as two orphans. This last three years, Acchan never told him that she missed her parents. Kai starts to think that Acchan might often missing her parents but she couldn’t tell him because it might reminds him to his parents too. He knows that Acchan wouldn’t try to make him sad thinking about his parents.

Believe or not, even this little conversation didn’t make him sad, but somehow it makes him forgetting about his intention to do something special with Acchan tonight. Hearing what he just say just makes him want to be on her side forever. He unconciously hugs her tight.

“Thanks for being on my side, Kai…” Acchan said. Even the room is dark, he can still see her staring at him with those beautiful sparkling eyes and that’s killing smile.

“Thanks for taking care of me all this time, Atsuko…” he replies, “…I’m glad you decided to stay that day”.

He caress her forehead but she suddenly chuckles.

“Why?” he frowns hearing her chuckled.

“I wonder how could you have the handcuffs and tied it on my hand that day” Acchan said, half laughing.

Now he remembers about that handcuff incident. Glad the room is dark that Acchan can’t see him blushing right now.

“I hope you will not use it on bed” she chuckles.

Kai widened his eyes of what just Acchan said, but then she captures his lips with a light kiss.

“Good night” she cups and caress his cheek with her thumb, the she slowly closes her eyes.

Deep inside his heart…
“I still cannot process of what just happened after hearing the last sentence. Looking at her sleeping face in the dark, somehow makes me think… what kind of girl is in front of me right now. Sometimes she is cruel, sometimes is scary, sometimes she is clumsy, sometimes she is expert in teasing me… Oh yeah, she successfully teased me just now. But the thing that I know about her all this time is… I love her. “


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END of SEASON 2 Chapter 7

Good news! I still have some drama for the next few chapters...
Please write comments below. Thank you.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on July 23, 2014, 07:56:32 PM
another sweet day and night for them...

But no more intimate than usual...

Poor Kai... not getting what he wanted....

What's going to happen next?

Would Sae know about whereabouts Kai is?

What about scandal... is there any later?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: prof.j on July 24, 2014, 01:14:04 AM
sweet holiday :D

aah.. I forgot about the handcuff incident. I think, I need to re-read the old chapters   :huhuh


so, drama in the next chapters ah? looking forward for it  :D


by the way, I wonder how about Yuu and Haruna now.. would they have reunion?  :P2 hehehe

Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on July 24, 2014, 07:17:16 AM
Hahahaha!
This chapter are really funny!  :on lol:
How can kai have dirty mind without yuu around him?
Hahha! And acchan really are teasing queen!
Keep updating author-san ^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: ubulubulbilu on July 25, 2014, 03:11:49 AM
They're both really sweet to be together. I'll wait for a drama chapt. Wehehe
Thx Author san
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on July 26, 2014, 04:09:03 PM
OMG atsuko such a teaser >,<
Thankyou for update  :deco:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on August 23, 2014, 09:27:08 AM
Oi oi oi author san,, do you still busy ?
Its already 1 month and you didn't update this story yet...
Im sorry if iam cruel, just too exited to know what they are doing on their honeymoon holiday in hawaii... Hoooo maybe you will give us some smut loveydovey part ^^
Yoroshiku ^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on August 25, 2014, 09:26:11 AM
Oi oi oi author san,, do you still busy ?
Its already 1 month and you didn't update this story yet...
Im sorry if iam cruel, just too exited to know what they are doing on their honeymoon holiday in hawaii... Hoooo maybe you will give us some smut loveydovey part ^^
Yoroshiku ^^

Agree agree!!! :mon star: :mon star:
Please update soon author-san,im also want to know.
We waitng you here!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 7 Part 2 (07/23/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on September 27, 2014, 04:39:03 PM
Where is the author ? :(
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 8 (10/02/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on October 02, 2014, 05:28:50 PM
Hello!! Been so long :D
Honesly I have to say that I've been quite busy these days. My brain has been too busy thinking about a lot of things like college, some trips, and everything. But here I make a sign to make sure that my fic is still  going.

So maybe it's just a short chapter but this is all I could do for now. Thanks for waiting :D

TAKING CARE OF YOU
SEASON 2 CHAPTER 8



It’s quite dark at the room, but there are a lot of spotlights in colours. The DJ plays a loud music. Everyone in the room seems cheerful, enjoying their time with friends and relatives. Suddenly the DJ starts to play the next song. Kai who holds Acchan’s hand, feels her grip is more tight as she suddenly squealed. “It’s my favorite song!!”

Then she drag him to the dance floor, closer to the crowd and DJ. Looking at Acchan dancing cheerfully makes Kai smile unconciously. But something is wrong with him. It feels like he doesn’t really enjoy the party. Kai let his face closer to Acchan’s as he speak right beside her ear “I’m going to get some drinks, okay!” He saw Acchan smiles happily and nodded. So he quickly goes to the bar and orders some drinks.

Meanwhile, the shining smile from the cheerfull Acchan makes a man get attracted to her. A half latin European man walk slowly to the dance floor as he approach Acchan.

“Kai..” Acchan said as she feels someone put his hands on her waist from behind. She slowly turns around and grins. But then, the smiles fade away as she finds out that the man is not Kai.

“Hello, pretty..” the man smiles at her. “Can I dance with you?”

“Uh, umm sorry.. I’m with someone else” Acchan answers him awkwardly.

“Aww, come on. Let’s just enjoy the party..” said the man as he takes Acchan’s hand, lead her to dance.

“No, I’m…”

Haven’t finished her words, someone pats the man’s shoulder and when he turns around, a hard fist landed right on his nose.

“Don’t touch my girl!” Kai shouted. The crowd suddenly stop dancing as they look at the two.

“Kai, wait.. Kai!!” Acchan prevents him from hitting that man again.

In minutes, some security guard comes. As what Kai have done, Acchan and him forced to leave the club. Somehow it makes Acchan a bit upset. Kai is a jealous man. Acchan walks faster than Kai when they leave the club.

Kai feels guilty, especially when Acchan acts unusual like this.

“Atsuko…” he calls her as he feels that Acchan walks faster. “Atsuko, why are you walking so fast? Where are you going?”

“We’re going back to the hotel” Acchan said without turn around to look at him.
This time Kai knows that she is really really upset. On their way back to hotel, Acchan doesn’t say a word in the car. Kai can only take a glance at her sometimes. He knows it would be worse if he say something. So he can only say sorry once they get in the car.

When they arrive at the hotel room, Kai take the card key, “I’m going to the hotel’s restaurant first. Will be back soon” he said, but Atsuko doesn’t answer him.

*Kai’s POV*

“It’s really frustrating. I should be the one who upset, now I’m the one to be blamed.

Well, Atsuko is an attractive girl. It’s no wonder if other man feels attracted by her. Sigh… Is it the bad thing of being a beautiful girl’s boyfriend?! Okay, now she’s upset. WHAT I SHOULD DO!!?? I shouldn’t hit that guy. Did I act too jealous?! But, I think she has to know that it means I love her so much.”

“Wine, Sir?” a waiter offers him some drink when he arrives in the restaurant and sits on an empty table. Looking at the drink that the waiter brings, Kai nods and take the small glass.

In the hotel room, there Atsuko starts to remove her make up. She can see her reflection shows her upset face in the mirror. Yes, she still upset of what just Kai done in the club.

“He’s very short tempered. How can he hit a stranger like that?!” Acchan sighs. “I know you loves me that much, Kai… but you can kill all guy in this world if you always act like this” she thoughts.

After removing her make up, Acchan changes her clothes into a night gown and she walks towards the bed. That time she someone open the hotel room door. It must be Kai. Acchan looks at him. He’s got florid complexion and his hair is a little bit messy.

“Where have you been?” Acchan asks him but she sees something different with his expression.

“Won’t you forgive me?” he suddenly said as he walks towards her.

Acchan doesn’t answer. Something’s different in the way he looks at her.

Kai lift his hands and hold her shoulders. “Please forgive me..” he murmured.

“Kai, I’m..”

“I was just jealous at that guy, Atsuko. I don’t want something bad happen to you. I’m just… I.. I love you so much, Atsuko..” he speaks furiously the sighs. “I love you..”

Looking at his hopeless face, now Acchan the one who feels guilty. Did she too rude for keep silent all the way they went back to the hotel?

“Okay, I forgive you… Don’t be such a short tempered guy, Kai..”

He shows a slightly smile. Kai moves closer, one of his hand move from her shoulder to caress her cheek.
Slowly, he kisses her. And that time Acchan realized that her boyfriend is drunk. His lips and mouth is full of the smell of alcohol. When Acchan is about to break the kiss, Kai let her go but he pull her again, closer than before. He keeps searching for her lips. Now his hand move to her back, pull her closer to him and caress her back.

That sensation of his touch on her back and cheek makes her feet turn into jelly. Although she doesn’t really like the smell of alcohol, but his kiss right now is the best kiss they ever had. Slowly Kai starts to takes a step forward, pushing Acchan on the bed, lock her below him.

He murmured “I love you” between the kiss. Sometimes he moves the kiss to her cheek, her nose, her eyes, back to her lips again. It’s quite surprising when Acchan feels one of Kai’s hand starts to touch and caress her breast. She’s about to stall off, but then his lips move to her neck, giving some electric sensation through her body, turns the squeal into a soft moan.


* * * end of chapter 8 * * *
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 8 (10/02/2014) <<
Post by: mgxx on October 02, 2014, 06:03:24 PM
OMG CANT HOLD MY NOSEBLEED!!!!!


Are he going to take atsuko's virginity?? Omg kai!! Please be gentle..
Hooo btw author san, care to give us the smut scene of this chapter?? Lol

Thankyou for update author san, and goodluck for your study^^
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 8 (10/02/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on October 02, 2014, 07:00:00 PM
Ah... please don't make Atsuko 1st time become just a drunk sex...

I want to see a nice romantic evening that finish with a beautiful love making...

Oh... what's going to happen there?

Would they really have sex right then?

Would Atsuko stop Kai?

Would Kai fall a sleep in the middle of it?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 8 (10/02/2014) <<
Post by: Haruko on October 03, 2014, 04:41:50 AM
and... he fall sleep?
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 8 (10/02/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on October 03, 2014, 06:39:57 PM
*nose bleeding*
U gone for long and back with this scene?  :imdead: :on bleed:
I hope to see some smut scene!!! *pervert mode on*
But im agree with cisda-san,i want romantic smut scene  :hiakhiakhiak:
Please keep updating,i always wait u author-san  :on GJ:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: chemicalstar on October 19, 2014, 05:37:50 PM
Enjoy!





TAKING CARE OF YOU
SEASON 2 CHAPTER 9



“Kai, stop” she whispered while her eyes keep closed as she feels his touch. Acchan takes a deep breath and gathers all her effort to push him away.

In the other hand, the drunk guy drowns his face on her neck, sucking it hard. Seems like it hurts Acchan when Kai a little bit her, she finally can push him away that he falls from the bed.

“AWWW” Kai groans when his head strikes the table’s leg.

“Oh my god, KAI!! Are you okay?” Acchan quickly moves from the bed and look over Kai. He hold his forehead, still whimpering.

“I’m sorry” Acchan said and she blows some air by her mouth to his forehead. “Wait, I’m gonna look for some ointment, okay! Stay here!” she gets her coat and go to meet some hotel staff quickly. Lucky that the hotel has a full equipped medical things.

“Tsk..” Kai chuckles when Acchan dabs some ointment on his wound.

“Why are you grinning like that? It’s creepy” she simply said, keep focusing on his wound. She knows he is drunks that he doesn’t act normally.

“I don’t know that you’re that strong, Atsuko…” he said and laughed. “I’m happy for that.”

“Tsk. You’re so messy when you’re drunk, Kai” she pouts, ignoring what he said. “Just go to sleep, will you? I don’t think I will sleep peacefully if you keep talking nonsense.”That night, she ends up with taking care of Kai and his wound. Slowly Kai falls asleep, leaving Acchan in silence. She takes off his jacket and his shoes so that he can get a comfortable sleep. She also unbuckles his belt and trying so hard to pull down his jeans, left him with a shorts and t-shirt. But what attracts her is she finds a bulge grows bigger behind his shorts.

“Ahh, no wonder you were so lustful just now, Kai...” she sighed. Acchan took the air cooler remote and set its temperature down, hoping the cold temperature will help to calm his manhood down. Then she took a pillow and the blanket from the bed, move it to the couch. She crawls on the couch and sleeps there. “Sorry, Kai. Too dangerous to sleep on the bed with you tonight” she thought.

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Thousand miles from there.

“Magnitude Corps. Are about to make a big project next year, they need a communication company to make a business deal with them. You know it’s a big deal, Sir! And the good news is: we are one of the candidates company” a man with a neat tux said and grinned to Sae. Few weeks ago, Sae applied for a business deal with Magnitude Corps. The agreement to be the candidate of the business deal was the one which Kai had to sign last week.

“Magnitude…” Sae murmured. He grins to hear that big company name. “Who’s another candidate?”

“Ah, our opponent is Shimada Group. I believe we will win the deal, because we ever beat Shimada once long time ago. They’re not our equal opponent, don’t worry!” said the man who is Sae’s private assistant.

“Hmm… Shimada. I remember about them” Sae said and he starts to spacing out, remembering a moment long time ago, when even Kai hasn’t been born yet.

That day when his older brother ask him if he has some friends who are celebrities in entertainment industry.

-- flashback –

“An actress or a singer? I have a lot of friends in entertainment industry” Sae answers his brother’s question.

“Anything, but she has to be the famous one. Because we have a mission for her..” his brother said, he locked the door and made sure that no one could listen to what they were talking about.
“Look, Sae. Our company is in a bad situation, but if we win this project, sure it will help us survive. I’d like to pay a celebrity to tease our opponent’s boss and bring him into a scandal.”

“What? Scandal?” Sae looks so surprised with his brother’s plan.

“Yes, we have no choice. I have to make sure that we will win the deal.” He said firmly.

Just like what his brother said, then Sae asked his friend who is a famous singer to approach the boss of Shimada Group. She teased him and brought him into a scandal. Every single business and entertainment magazines started to make big news about them. The bad reputation of Shimada Group’s boss make Takahashi Cops was chosen as the company who won the deal and took them into a big project. Until now this dirty plan was a very secret story between Sae, his brother, and the singer. This is the first time that Takahashi brother cheated on their business, but they had no choice to keep their company in a balance condition.

--end of flashback--

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Acchan wakes up and slowly open her eyes when the morning comes. Sleeping on the couch makes her sleep a bit rough. She feels someone’s presence in front of her. And yes, there, Kai is sitting on the couch facing her, looking at her in a cute way.

“Ohaiyo” she simply said.

“I woke up with this wound and found you slept on the couch, leaving me alone on the bed with no blanket when the air is very cold. That’s rude. What happened last night?”

Acchan just sighed and smiled. “Come here…” she pull his chin closer to her instead of answering his question. She takes a look at Kai’s wound. “How is it now?”

“I don’t know, a bit hurt. How did I get this?” still, Kai has no idea about the wound on his forehead.

“Nee.. I want to ask you first, what’s the last thing you remember about last night?” Acchan still on her position, laying on the couch with her head on a pillow.

Then Kai remember about the fighting scene at the club, then Acchan got mad, and… “I was drunk.”

“Then?”

He tries hard to remember anything else but he failed. “I don’t know…” Then he smiles awkwardly.
“Did I hurt you?”

“Yes...”

His eyes widened as he heard a “yes” from her.

“...here” Acchan moves her head a bit and shows him a little red wound on her neck. It suddenly makes Kai blushed and have no idea what to say. Somehow it’s embarrassing for him to imagine what did really happened last night as he saw that wound on her neck.

“Umm, I’m.. I’m s-sorry” he said awkwardly.

She smiles to see how cute her young master is. “It’s okay…” and, there goes silence for a while and the two are just being in a battle of a staring contest.

“What if we go to the beach today?” finally Acchan breaks the silence.

“Uh? Oh, yeah, b-beach... sounds nice! Okay, let’s get ready…” Kai said, he finally got something to do. He gets up and takes his clothes while Acchan remove her blanket and start to change her clothes too.

Arrived at the beach with her bikini, Acchan holds Kai’s hand and walks along the beach. Kai only wears a shorts, revealing his muscular body. The two have a happy time walking and running on the sand, drawing some cartoon characters on the sand, playing water and sometimes they hugs and kiss.

Meawhile, a 14 years old Japanese girl walking around the beach with her camera, trying to capture every beautiful spot of the beach. This girl is on her own vacation. Last month she got a highest rank at school, and as what her brother had promised, she get her vacation to Hawaii for days. The girl sees a bird flies in the sky. She takes aim her camera on the bird and moves to where the bird flies. Then her camera caught a couple who play around the beach, they laughing and cheering, full of happiness. It caught her attention that she zooms her camera more.

Somehow it’s like a starstruck when she realizes the girl is quite familiar for her.
“Maeda Atsuko..” the girl whispering.

It’s quite surprising her to see Maeda Atsuko, her favorite actress in Japan, is having a good time with a guy at the beach in Hawaii. All this time she’s been a big fan of Maeda Atsuko the actress. She watched all of Atsuko’s movies. She owns all of her DVDs. She also has a big poster of Atsuko in her room.  Even she plans to take an acting course next year just to follow Maeda Atsuko’s path as an actress.

She smiles as she looks at the happiness in her idol’s face. There is a question about who is the guy beside her. Could it be her boyfriend or what… But all this time, she never know any rumour or news that Maeda Atsuko has a boyfriend. Then, when the guy kisses the actress, she got the answer.

“Gosh, he’s really her boyfriend!!” the girl takes her camera again and zooms it on the guy’s face.

“Aww, cute!! The guy is cute!” she shouts in her mind. It’s just like a happiness for her to see her idol has a cute boyfriend. The little girl takes some pictures of them, including when they’re kissing and hugging each other. Deep inside her heart, she really wants to walk approach and greet them. But then she thinks again

“It must be her private time. Yeah, Maeda Atsuko is a very busy actress, this kind of vacation is very rare for her. I shouldn’t ruin her holiday. Moreover, maybe her relationship with that guy could be a secret, that’s why I never knew about that guy. I have to give them some privacy. I have to be a good fan of her” she thought in her mind. The little girl decide to leave the place as she doesn’t want her idol notice that there is a Japanese little girl walk around them.



*end of CHAPTER 9*
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: giotuyet on October 19, 2014, 07:33:18 PM
she is a good fan but someway i just feel that photos is dangerous ! Will it be a scandal ? I think the girl is shimada haruka -w- please come back asap and thanks you so much for updating !!!
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: ryu201 on October 19, 2014, 09:36:12 PM
HAhaha!
Poor kai,hit the leg of table like that  :on lol:
But im happy this chapter not smut chapter cause like i said before
I want romance smut scene. Haha!  :hiakhiakhiak:

she is a good fan but someway i just feel that photos is dangerous ! Will it be a scandal ? I think the girl is shimada haruka -w- please come back asap and thanks you so much for updating !!!
Im agree!
I think this girl is one of shimada family member and her parent or i dont know who in her family will use that photos to ruins kai company :mon geek:
However update soon author-san, im waiting  :mon zoom: :mon yeah: :mon love:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: Haruko on October 20, 2014, 04:16:42 AM
I smell troubles...
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- &gt;&gt; SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) &lt;&lt;
Post by: yuuyu on October 23, 2014, 12:38:30 AM
I really hope Takahashi corps doesn't go through with the scandal method again; it's too risky... for that matter I don't think it's necessary, Kai becoming a fantastic businessman and all...

The little girl has a good heart but whoever ends up with those pictures definitely doesn't... The question is whether she's a Shimada or the little sister of that male actor or related to someone we don't and/or won't come to know...?
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: cisda83 on November 05, 2014, 10:12:24 PM
ah... Did Shimada know about the scandal that was being set up by Takahashi?

Would they get revenge on Takahashi?

Who was the little girl? Shimada Haruka?

Would the picture of Kai and Atsuko circulating in tabloid and become a scandal?

Would Kai be in trouble from the media and his business?

Would he need to break up with Atsuko?

How about Atsuko?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: phoenix0i on December 17, 2014, 03:12:38 PM
Finished the latest chapter. Hoping for an update please.  :thumbsup
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: charmingstar on December 31, 2014, 05:12:42 AM
can not wait for the next chapter....

whether the relationship kai and atsuko uncovered and be fucked ... I hope there are more sweet moments *dokidoki ... XD

pls update soon, am really really likes ur fanfic  :wub:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: Bakamina_Oshi on June 24, 2015, 10:08:24 PM
Just finished the chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: kazuko on July 04, 2015, 08:06:48 PM
Mouu... where is the author??
it's so rude to leave this long, yet awesome fic like this.
I hope you'll back author-san.

I want to know what happen later to Atsuko & Kai.
I want lovey dovey.
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: Saint0angel on July 28, 2015, 03:29:19 PM
 :wub: aw Atsumina is so cute together :heart: :cow:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: genkingblack on November 23, 2015, 02:30:00 PM
pleeeeaseeee update author-saan

dont leave us hanging  :cry: :cry: :cry:

 :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: Saint0angel on December 03, 2015, 01:04:24 PM
Author updates please, I want more Atsumina please
Title: Re: TAKING CARE OF YOU -kaiAcchan- >> SEASON 2 Chapter 9 (10/19/2014) <<
Post by: iminlovewithakb on June 10, 2016, 06:28:51 AM
ah it's been a while since your last update. I'm looking forward for more of takacchan!